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66abd675d091c90011b44e19 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | In some nations, individuals tend to use Western-style attire instead of traditional dress. In my opinion, this a result of globalization and this change ends in reducing the importance of cultural heritage which is a huge demerit.
Nowadays, men and women are fond of fashionable items especially when it comes to cloth... | [
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66a955e8d091c90011b44672 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Over the last few decades has seen ideas about the Western style of clothes, namely, the myriad of people now prioritise wearing up-to-date clothes rather than traditional clothing.
First and foremost, the trigger associated with this trend is that most foreign companies' prior aim is to advertise fabricated modern... | [
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667a72331031f400117e1596 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Over the last few decades has seen ideas about the western style of clothes, namely, myriad of people now prioritise to wear up-to-dated clothes rather than traditional clothing.
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667721081031f400117e0c84 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | In this westernization, many nations’ citizens are interested in choosing modern dress codes like jeans and suits also their curiosity is declining in their cultural costumes. The main reason behind on this is technology development and people are becoming more literate. In my point of view, this development will give ... | [
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6676e7021031f400117e0bf8 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays many people are influenced by Western outfits like jeans and suits. They enjoy wearing them instead of traditional attires. This trend can be caused by several reasons and I believe that its impact is positive.
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6661ad65a8fb9b0011ffdfe3 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | In the contemporary era, residents would select Western clothes rather than traditional customs. This essay maintains that this phenomenon occurs due to the convenience of current fashion and benefits the citizens' economy.
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656d7009e6f89f00112e8e94 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | There are disputes amongst society that some offspring have a tendency to spend time too much on smartphones. This issue emerged from adults' concern that habits can affect children negatively in their behaviour and daily lives. I do believe that this could also have beneficial effects on the children.
Some adults, ... | [
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654c8c056fe6820012cb8dcd | Art | In many countries, people now wear Western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | The prevalence of Western-style clothes in the wardrobes of people is an increasingly noticeable trend in contemporary society in a lot of countries. This essay aims to explore the reasons behind this phenomenon and discuss its potential impacts.
There are two reasons for this tendency. One major reason is the globali... | [
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64a1ab36d38ec40018b4e6b2 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | It is true that over the last few decades, people all over the globe started wearing Western clothing. In this essay, I'll discuss the reasons why this is happening and provide evidence as to why this is a negative trend.
One of the many reasons is the globalisation that the world has been going through for years now ... | [] | [] | 7 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 8 |
64691c2b7e89e60018c7f7f0 | Art | In many countries people now wear western clothes such as jeans and suits rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development | In today's fast-paced world, wearing Western clothes such as jeans and coats has persistently been prevalent among all ages people in many countries. Many people prefer to wear numerous types of dresses from other cultures rather than their own traditional clothes. However, I believe that there is a negative impact of... | [] | [] | 7 | 9 | 4 | 6 | 9 |
643ccf4108a70b0019a4a503 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Traditional clothes have long been a part of a lifestyle for many societies. But with the development of globalisation and international communications, communities today are gradually shifting to Western clothes. Although this means that some cultures will lose a part of their traditional inheritance, I believe it wil... | [] | [] | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 9 |
6437983308a70b0019a49ae0 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | It is suggested that people tend to wear western clothes instead of traditional ones. I believe that there are several reasons that can explain why this the case and this trend can be advantageous and disadvantageous in equal measure.
On the one hand, people choose suits and jeans as proper dresses to wear for a varie... | [] | [] | 5 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 4 |
63d0febeeb394700194f0925 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | It is observed in many countries that people are adopting western-style clothes instead of traditional attire. There are certain reasons behind this movement and I BELIEVE it is detrimental to host nations.
Admittedly, the influence of western aesthetic preferences was very limited outside the western world in the pas... | [] | [] | 8.5 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 |
639b5443543dbe00185217a3 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | No one can deny that all over the world new youths are use too wearing western jeans and suits instead of their traditional clothing style. The main reason are behind that people like jeans and suits because they feel comfortable and relax and this types of clothes are cheap and affordable for everyone rather than trad... | [] | [] | 1 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
638373e0d1146c0019607eb6 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | It is common to see many people across the world adopting the dressing style of the west and neglecting traditional outfits. There are multiple reasons behind this, and it has both merits and demerits.
One of the significant reasons behind this trend is the advancement of information technology. To be precise, the med... | [] | [] | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
6374b3ecd1146c0019605fe8 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | public in many countries prefer to wear western regalia such as suits and jeans more than traditional clothing.
In my opinon, this is actually useful, trends has a positive impact on association.
There are at least two reasons why public wear a westren regalia. First In the age of globalization, social media plays... | [] | [] | 7 | 6 | 4 | 9 | 9 |
6348ca5a0869d1001829ca4f | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | In the present day, the way people dress has changed a lot compared to before. However, not so that the traditional costumes are forgotten, some are still used in the traditional holidays. On the other hand, it is really difficult to maintain the same way of dressing as before. This essay will discuss why this problem ... | [] | [] | 6 | 6.5 | 7 | 5 | 5 |
6348c70b0869d1001829ca4b | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | In this day and age, it is a common occurrence for residents of a country to negelct their traditional outfits in favor of the fashion style of the west. here are multiple reasons behind this, and it has both merits and demerits.
One of the leading reasons that worth considering is how advanced information technology ... | [] | [] | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
6348c6510869d1001829ca49 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Today, everything is evolving, so the fashion trends of people are constantly being updated and changed. Traditional clothes are increasingly being overshadowed by Western clothes. In my opinion, this is quite a negative development.
There are many reasons for this trend. One of the most obvious reasons for the develo... | [] | [] | 5.5 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 6 |
6343504bf8ef340019619378 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case. Is it a positive or negative development | Nowadays, attires worn in the western world have replaced our indigenous dresses. This is caused by the lack of education on cultural values and the low prices of these clothes. I also believe that this is a negative development as valuable traditions are lost.
There are some reasons for the increase in wearing wester... | [] | [] | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
6330d959132d380018e3974e | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Western attire are popular all over the world these days. This is because community can get these garb anywhere in shops around them, and these sportswear are less expensive than their traditional ones. I opine that this is a negative development which is leading to one culture all over the world.
On the negative side... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 9 | 6 | 5 | 5 |
63307fd9132d380018e396f8 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | The trend of wearing English and European attire has been increasing exponentially for several years. This essay will discuss some major factors behind this mental inclination toward western fashion and I believe that these changes in attitudes have far more significant drawbacks than benefits because of the reasons t... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 9 |
63240ffdaac8660018fa5819 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | These days, wearing western outfits like jeans, suits and shirts outweighs that of conventional costume. Generally speaking, this phenomenon stems from the rooted way Westerners look, fashionable and elegant indeed, and also the social media. Although, adapting new style is a positive trend, it would be tactless to neg... | [] | [] | 5 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 4 |
63240f55aac8660018fa5815 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | There is a growing tendency that many people prefer to wear western-style dress such as suits rather than traditional outfit. This is due to a variety of factors, all of which have advantages and disadvantages.
The development of information technology is one of the main causes of this tendency. To be more specific, w... | [] | [] | 3.5 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 |
631cc7abaac8660018fa4cc0 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Globalisation opened doors for countries to exchange goods and traditions. A variety of possibilities are available to the public buying costumes from the international market. As a result, in many countries, people now prefer western outfits instead of their traditional ones. While sharing cultural values among each o... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 6 |
631b708caac8660018fa4aec | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, people worldwide prefer wearing clothes that are brought from western countries, including suits and jeans, instead of wearing their traditional clothing. In this essay, I will highlight how media plays a huge role in this trend and why I consider it to be a negative development.
Perhaps the most important c... | [] | [] | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 9 |
6313685aaee9de0018760a68 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | In most of the countries, people have an interest in western cultures. Because of globalization, people tend to try new styles of clothing instead of their own orthodox ones. This essay discusses why I strongly consider this as a negative development.
First of all, when people try to copy the other's culture and way ... | [] | [] | 4 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 |
6311a5f1aee9de0018760761 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, with the widespread of television and the internet, western styles are spread all over the world. Somehow in many parts of the globe, people are preferring suits and jeans over their traditional dresses like sarees, kurtas, pyjamas. These adaptations is reflecting a positive expansion towards the development ... | [] | [] | 7 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 8 |
6303aad40751a40019b4cac5 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development | The whole world is under the effects of globalisation in terms of styling and wearing. In many regions across the globe, individuals now prefer western attire like formal suiting and casual jeans to domestic clothing styles. In my opinion, I believe the influence of the western nature and the less cost of dressing are... | [] | [] | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
62ff228c0751a40019b4c2c2 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, it is often seen that more and more people begin to wear clothes from another country, thereby forgetting about their national dress. From my point of view, thus, tendency of wearing western garb has only negative effects on the development of a certain state.
First of all, the modern term, called globalizat... | [] | [] | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 |
62ff0d5a0751a40019b4c2a3 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | As the fashion industry has become increasingly closer, it is now more common for individuals to wear western-style attire instead of their own traditional clothing. In my opinion, this is a natural result of globalization and is a negative on the whole given its lack of diversity.
Many countries now adopt western fas... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 |
62fe02130751a40019b4c0ce | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | There is a dramatic change to what people wear this day, many would love to wear jeans and a t-shirt
and wear tradition only for festival days, there are many reasons for this, In my opinion, it is a positive development.
Most of the dresses which are available in the market are western clothes, people find this ma... | [] | [] | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 8 |
62fbd21da70b55001806da7b | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | Today there is a controversial problem that whether people should wear modern clothes or keep their traditional costumes. From my point of view, there are some positive and negative impacts on this problem.
On the one hand, following modern trends such as wearing western clothes brings a variety of different cultures... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 9 | 5 | 6 | 6 |
62ede22d0562ec00182a0fa0 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing? Why is this the case ? Is this a positive or negative development ? | Nowadays, there has been an increase in the number of people who follow western culture in many countries.One of the most noticeable trends is the clothes which are chosen to wear more than the local clothing.In my opinion, this phenomenon brings about a negative effect on the local culture and the outfit industry.
... | [] | [] | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 |
62ecdbe90562ec00182a0d83 | Art | In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development? | There has been a tendency for every individual to wear clothes originally created by Western nations like t-shirts, jeans, and suits. I will give my reasons for this phenomenon and explain why this is a positive trend.
On the one hand, there are several factors associated with the increase of western clothes worldwide... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 |
654f44af0ce616001392b443 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music | There are various genres of music. In contemporary societies a minute fraction of younger generation pays attention to classical music. There are numerous reasons for this, which I will explain in this reason, and there are substantial elements that illustrate the importance of encouraging youngsters to play or perform... | [
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6473ee4e7e89e60018c80cf5 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | There is no doubt that young generations have not been interested in listening to or playing classical music in recent times. In this essay, I will discuss the reason behind this common trend among teenagers, and explain why I believe more encouragement for classical music consumption should be given to them.
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641ec1fd9c66fa0019b1df95 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Nowadays, the number of youngsters who listen to or play classical music is fewer in many. This essay will explain why this phenomenon is happening and discuss whether should teenagers be spurred to play or perform classical music.
To begin with, the classical melody is more complicated/intricate and longer than other... | [
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63f9fe2296e92a00181aff5d | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Classical music has fallen out of favor among youngsters in some parts of the world. While the causes of this trend vary, I believe efforts should be made to encourage this age group to pursue this genre of music.
One of the chief reasons why the number of young people interested in classical music is in the minority... | [] | [] | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 |
627175bcc8e0bb0019a3f913 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In recent decades, we may have discovered that there are rarer juvenile people who pay attention to classical music and fewer youngsters who want to be music performers. It seems to me that the reason could be advancement of modern professions and I will depict it with relevant convictions in the following paragraphs. | [] | [] | 0.5 | 4 | 4 | 8 | 6 |
626821b9257ecf0018541670 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In few number of the nations, childrens choice of music has changed and there is decrease in the numbers who listen to classical music. There are many facters which change their taste in music, alternatively, new genration have their own hip hop music which they are particularly fond off. This essay elaborates why ther... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 8 | 9 | 4 | 4 |
620e2682b22a2e0019a87d10 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In the past, the traditional melody was a household name, but nowadays very few youngsters express their interest in learning the traditional melody. In this essay, I will highlight the reason behind this phenomenon and advocate that the younger generation should learn more about traditional melody as there is a myriad... | [] | [] | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 |
61aa0ec6284cd4001841a89b | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | It is observed that a minority of youngsters choose to listen to or play classical piece and songs in the world of today. Even though most younger people are into listening to music, they tend to not opt for classical ones, for ,example opera. I will discuss why they aren’t curious about classical performing and should... | [] | [] | 7 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 8 |
6177f1ec37154d00196ed3d7 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In some regions, it is reported that the number of your age group playing or listening to classical music has declined. The main rationale for this problem is the development of newer types of music and theirs popularity is rapidly increasing in today world. I believe that the encouragement to learn playing classical t... | [] | [] | 5 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 4 |
6125f670fa83ba0018b4493e | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Several countries around the world have an issue that classical melody is not become common to teenagers again today, instead of playing or listening to the classical tune, they tend to choose a common music type for enjoying the tones. This issue has become a debate for pushing the adolescence to interest in classica... | [] | [] | 7 | 9 | 5 | 5 | 9 |
60e31cb200657e00180f57e3 | Art | in some countries there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. why is this? should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | These days modern equipment and the internet totally change people mindsets. They turned to a western style of music rather than traditional ones. Some junevile solely prefer to listen or play cultural music in few nations. In this essay, I will explain why this cause and young people should be encouraged to learn or p... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 5 | 9 | 6 | 6 |
60c040e8fa75470018286ddd | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Nowadays, a small number of youngsters show interest in playing and listening to classical music. It creates less enthusiasm in the young generation due to its slowness and complexity. This essay will argue why young guns should not be forced to perform the classical melody. Instead, they might be given the freedom to ... | [] | [] | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 9 |
60616fd80c0f300018fbe5d0 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Nowadays musical preferences are going through changes among young people and this issue has become quite controversial. In this essay, I would like to identify the causes of this situation and propose some corresponding solutions.
The central reason behind the decreasing interest of the younger population in classica... | [] | [] | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
6048d04b61559d0018623ed2 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Few countries give less significance to classical music as the modern tradition is more in that area.
This is due to several factors like social media influence and popularity of the musicians.This can be prevented by taking a few steps to improve its importance in society.
First and foremost, the popularity of wes... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 9 |
60136f534ad417001937142d | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In certain nation’s, nowadays, young adults listening to or playing traditional music are less. This is mainly due to the lack of knowledge on classical music. However, we should encourage our young generation to learn it as it represents our ancestors music.
The most evident reason why adolescents, who listens to or ... | [] | [] | 5 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 |
60100ccfea4f820018620a92 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In the current generation, compassion towards classical music has become very less, in most of the countries. There are several reasons depending on the demographics of the country, in this essay we will discuss the issue behind this context and also look into the importance of retaining the art of our ancestors.
Firs... | [] | [] | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 9 |
60030d1c0785ed0018e8f4c3 | Art | 8. In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | There are numerous types of music that are played worldwide. However, an array of masses nowadays, less prioritize the classical one than other sorts of music like Pop, Rock, etcetera. There are enormous reasons behind this trend and this music should not be demolished.
To commence with, the adolescents prefer to list... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 9 |
5ff419ec3b9d160018cdb461 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | It is becoming less and less common for students to both listen to and play classical music. In my opinion, this is the result of changing tastes and it should be countered by concerned parents when possible.
The reason fewer young people today opt to listen to or take up playing classical music is that there are othe... | [] | [] | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 9 |
5fe88cc2b943a000182e1fc0 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In the temporary world, a taste of classical music genre is less popular amongst millennials. The reasons are a change of music lover’s perception and demand for being financially and professional to perform this genre. Personally, it is pointless to encourage children to play or perform classical music.
Firstly, the... | [] | [] | 7 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 8 |
5fe88b3ab943a000182e1fbc | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | It is apparent that fewer and fewer millennials enjoy a taste of classical music across countries. The reasons that are a change of music lover’s perception and demand for being financially and professional to perform this genre. In my perspective, it is meaningless to encourage the young generation to pursue chamber m... | [] | [] | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 |
5fe84e32b943a000182e1f92 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | In the temporary world, a taste of classical music is less popular than before amongst millennials. For this matter, its characteristic is picky for both listeners and players. Personally speaking, it is pointless to encourage children to play or perform classical music.
Firstly, there is an evolution of musical favo... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
5fc37c26a3de4a0018766384 | Art | In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music? | Around the world, there are some states that witnessing reduction of people playing and listening to classical music. This happens because in the modern world new types of music are more appealing for a younger generation. It seems that the young ought to be encouraged if they listen to or play classical music.
To beg... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 |
67c793950fb4180011e05d94 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | I agree with that, I think it is waste of time for high school studnts to study literaure.
Because in my opinon its waste of time that putliteraure in high school thay can focus on other subjcts like math and study literaure in the unvirsty for students that want to study whatever thay want
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672913219a9b4200113e3ecf | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | While nobody can deny the importance of education, especially in high school, some argue that studying literature, such as novels and poems, is a waste of time for our children. I strongly agree with this statement because of the importance of other science subjects.
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67270d264f38620011398c76 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | There is no doubt that literature has been an important part of human life since the beginning of civilizations. However, there is an argument that doubts the benefit of starting to study readings such as novels and poems in high school. I have a balanced view of this statement.
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66f2ffb1518ab60011f67941 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Schools are the Mecca for education various subjects and equipping diverse skills. Recently, it has been a topic of discussion whether teaching literature at school is vital for students or not. Opponent believe that there are other important lessons to educate and literature should not be included in school syllabus, ... | [] | [
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65cc7e893666f600110bb36d | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is clear that our high school education system not only focuses on science but also arts. While some groups believe that studying literature is not as important as other subjects, I totally disagree with this statement since there are several benefits from studying literature.
One justification for this is that by... | [
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64d36846adc225001876c233 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In recent years, there has been a common belief among some individuals claiming that for graduate students, being educated in subjective majors like novels or poems is no more than wasting their time. While I personally support this notion, there are some points to consider, which I'm going to examine in the forthcomin... | [
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647afe2591cbdc0018c4e004 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Whether the literature subjects should be removed from high schools or not is a debatable question. In fact, people have contrasting views on this. While proponents argue that it is a waste of time, others think the opposite. Although I agree that we should not force people into studying literature, it should be includ... | [
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64352ee408a70b0019a49594 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some people hold the belief that there is no sense to learn literature like novels and poems for students of high school. I can not agree with this idea. In my point of view, the importance of learning literature should be held in high regard in every stages of education.
There are several reasons why I believe th... | [] | [] | 4.5 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
642fb2a208a70b0019a48a96 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | The advancement and prosperity have always been tied with science and math throughout the passing centuries. It is often believed that teaching poems and novels at schools are useless and unbeneficial for pupils. This essay will discuss why I thoroughly agree with this statement.
Some would claim that literature is im... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 9 | 9 | 4 | 4 |
6375f3e3d1146c001960623e | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Most high schools force students to lern novels and poetry for fluncy. These textbooks not only improve students' speaking and writing skills, but also help any student to develop proper personal valed. I think that textbooks like literature should be taught to school students.
Firstly, reading literature has never b... | [] | [] | 6 | 9 | 6 | 4 | 4 |
630c75230751a40019b4d934 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | I totally disagree with this statement. Coining knowledge always updates you regarding the new world. Peoples need to be abreast of the latest developments.
To begin with, nothing goes in vain if we work hard for our development. High School students are more attached to technology and gadgets. It depends also on the ... | [
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62a5b395bddc3900181458b7 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is undeniable that education prosperity plays a crucial role in children’s future professional lives. It is argued by some that it is not worth studying literature, like novels and poems, during secondary school. Although such subjects are of profound effect on pupils' speaking skills and boost their imagination an... | [] | [] | 6.5 | 4.5 | 6 | 7 | 9 |
625a8527bf0f3600197c8a01 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some people believe the important knowledge is only science , they think the literature is nonsenese. its really a hoible idea and unfair . Next paragraph I will try to discuss how bad is this idea and tell some detailes about the improtance of literature.
First , literature is identitiy of any civilization. If we wan... | [] | [] | 2 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
621fcbac63df6c001905561b | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In recent years it's been a topic of discussion whether teaching literature is helpful for students or not, Some argue that it is a waste of time while others believe that studying it is important. In this,essay I will be discussing why i totally agree with the second opinion.
To begin with, Individuals who opine th... | [] | [] | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 |
62025d014011360018004510 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some people have faith in that studying novels and songs are wasting of their time for secondary school learners. To a major extent i bolster with the viewpoint. My preference is explained further.
The principal argument i shall put forth is that senior school students have other subjects to learning such as science a... | [] | [] | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
617a98f885f0b50018c6e762 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | There is some objection against studying literature who thinks that it is such a time-consuming subject in high school. I totally disagree with this opinion, which I believe that not only reading or writing novels and poems could improve skills, it also helps the students to identify what their turn-ons are and what ar... | [] | [] | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 |
6155a943529b0100197cc746 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is argued that literature is useless for high school students as a studying subject. I totally disagree with this opinion, because books and poems increase teenagers’ emotional intellect and broaden their mind.
Literature writings always include life experience and describe emotional aspects of their characters; ... | [] | [] | 5.5 | 6.5 | 7 | 4 | 4 |
60d80b1908eca6001800abef | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is an inevitable fact that education plays a pivotal role in moulding one's life. While some people believe that subjects like poetry should be part of the secondary education curriculum for the overall development of students, others argue that it is a sheer waste of money, time and efforts. This essay agrees that ... | [] | [] | 7 | 4 | 5 | 9 | 9 |
60d7693708eca6001800ab8e | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is an inevitable fact that education plays a pivotal role in moulding one's life. While some people believe that subjects like literature should be part of the secondary school curriculum for the overall development of students, others argue that it is a sheer waste of money, time and efforts. This essay asserts and... | [] | [] | 7 | 4 | 6 | 9 | 9 |
608a56f20bf7480018ae2c4e | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Undeniable, in school curriculums, literature is an essential subject. But some people think that other units such as science, math, etcetera are more important than novels and poems. In my opinion, every study field has its value and significance, and it depends only on the student's interest in which area he or she w... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 7 | 4 | 9 | 9 |
60632bdfec8b400019e3e2e4 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | These days, the opinion that study of literature, namely novels and poems, is not necessarily for teenagers. People claim that learning this subject should no longer be a key for high school. In this essay, I disagree with this statement and support my opinion with the examples.
First of all, some students want conne... | [] | [] | 5.5 | 9 | 5 | 4 | 4 |
6049de2161559d0018623f8a | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | During primary education,there are few institutions that insist on studying science subjects rather than literature topics.There are several factors that resist parents and teacher to teach more language.However, the students have to be assisted at attaining knowledge on such topics as well due to the fact that every ... | [] | [] | 7 | 6 | 4 | 9 | 9 |
6009837cb643ed0018a67bc6 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Taking literature subjects in schools has been considered useless by certain group of people. This essay completely disagrees with this statement because it enhances their linguistic skill and strenghten their national identity.
Learning peoms and novels at school would help students to develop their linguistic abili... | [] | [] | 5 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 4 |
5fe2f5607f31110019e6585b | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is believed by some that studying literature at high school doesn’t have any benefits. However, I strongly disagree, moreover, I believe that studying novels and poems contributes to both mind development and also helps to know about the past.
To begin, when we learn by heart some poem lines there is an improvement... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 |
5fc3f484a3de4a0018766437 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | The advancement and prosperity have been always tied with science and math throughout the passing centuries. It is often believed that teaching poems and novels at schools are useless and unbeneficial for pupils. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this statement.
Some would claim that literature is ... | [] | [] | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 |
5fbd2d7fa3de4a0018765ea1 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Many today claim that learning literature in high school is a waste of time. In my opinion, even though there is some practicality in the argument but literature still serves a purpose.
On one hand, the proponents of this argument state that other subjects should be prioritized. In other words, schools shou... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 9 | 5 | 6 | 9 |
5fb8d92d8d21d500183af145 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | The choice in favour of studying literature in high school is widely debated. While some pupils include literature in their curriculum and find it a useful activity, others consider these lectures as a waste of time. In my opinion, studying literature in high school is essential as it helps to broaden horizons and allo... | [] | [] | 6 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 |
5fb7bdce8d21d500183af0b0 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is argued that literature shouldn’t be teached at high school because students spend enormous time on reading of works of poetry, drama, fiction and non-fiction. Personally, I strongly disagree that literature should be removed from the list of subjects, particularly given that students not only receive the knowledg... | [] | [] | 5 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 5 |
5fb1242db2a32100182c7d76 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some people hold the belief that there is no sense for high school students to be learned literature for instance poems or novels. In my point of view, it mainly depends on the sphere about which a student is going to study in the future, however, I personally think that it is important to learn the basics of the liter... | [] | [] | 7.5 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 9 |
5fa83f66d42c03001818c8fb | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is always a good idea to teach school students about Literature because learning literature helps students understand the history and origin of the information. By studying literature, students can be curious to know and learn about new things. Literature plays a vital role in the investigation and understanding of ... | [] | [] | 4 | 4 | 4 | 8 | 6 |
5fa7e54cd42c03001818c88b | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some Schools teach literature, especially to secondary level students. Many believe that this is unnecessary and more time should be utilised in studying academic subjects. I agree with this statement; however, I am not in favour to ignore the importance of literature at all.
Firstly, studying novels and poems in h... | [] | [] | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 |
5fa718e2d42c03001818c813 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | There is currently a contentious argument over whether students should learn from classic reading in high school or not. I agree that nowadays this subject is not important anymore and in this essay, I will give some reasons to support this idea.
Firstly, classical literature has become old fashioned. As the young stu... | [] | [] | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 |
5fa6f308d42c03001818c7fe | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Many today claim that learning about literature should no longer be a key component of the high school curriculum. In my opinion, there are practical reasons for this sentiment but literature still serves a purpose.
Proponents of this reform argue other subjects deserve prioritisation. There is little doubt that in th... | [] | [] | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 |
5fa62e7f4f209900185cf674 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Undeniably, curricula for high school students includes literary study such as reading novels and poems because studying textbooks and reading literature not only booster students' basic skills like reading, speaking and writing and also assist any student in becoming a person with right personal values. In my opinion,... | [] | [] | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 |
5fa25fc84f209900185cf3e4 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | I contradict with the idea of comparing literature teaching as a time-wasting action. From my perspective, learning about poems and stories can bring more merits than demerits to young generations. The explanation for this is that literature can accompany young people in their search for the truth, the good and the bea... | [] | [] | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 9 |
5fa24a154f209900185cf3d4 | Art | Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | I contradict with the thought of studying literature as a time-wasting action. Learning about poems and stories can bring more merits than demerits to young generations. Literature can accompany young people in their search for the truth, the good and the beautiful by telling them stories.
To begin with, literature ha... | [] | [] | 5.5 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 8 |
6806d91016490700118a0829 | Art | SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THE GOVERNEMNT SHOULD SPEND MORE MONEY PUTTING IN MORE WORKS OF ART LIKE PAINTINGS AND STATUES IN CITIES TO MAKE THEM BETTER PLACES TO LIVE IN. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? | It is really important to maintain the beauty and infrastructure of a country. There are some people who thing government should spend money on paintings and statues to make them superior places to live in the cities. I agree with the notion as it can enhance the tourism and job opportunities for artists who are keen i... | [
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67cfaccdaa7e8900111d00b0 | Art | Some people believe that the government should spend more money in putting in more works of art like painting and statutes in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Art plays a crucial role in shaping the identity and atmosphere of a city, and some people argue that governments should invest more in public artworks such as paintings and statues to enhance urban life. While I agree that integrating art into cities can have numerous benefits, I believe that public funds should be al... | [
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671f26ef4f38620011397b56 | Art | Some people believe that the government should spend more money in putting in more works of art like painting and statutes in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | How likely people love arts? It is thought for some people that placing art works like painting and statues in cities will make it a better places to live in. Personally, I believe that art works undoubtedly add attractions to the cities, but compromises huge amount of money to spend for putting more art works, howeve... | [
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67164fd1771d91001120b2ae | Art | Some people believe that the government should spend more money in putting in more works of art like painting and statutes in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Few individuals think that the authorities should invest in works of art, like paintings and statues, in towns to make the area more attractive to live in. I completely agree because investing additional resources in artwork and statues can increase the population of tourist activities, and bringing about more employme... | [
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66e16467395eea0013a141c5 | Art | Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In recent years, several places have been developed into art cities. Personally, I completely agree with government should spend budgets for supporting arts; there are two major reasons, and they will be illustrates in the following paragraphs:
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661cd09d2d32af0012482a15 | Art | Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In contemporary urban landscapes, street art has emerged as a ubiquitous form of expression, enriching cities with its creative vitality. Advocates argue that governments should allocate funds to support artists, enhancing the cultural fabric of urban spaces. This essay concurs with this perspective, asserting that inv... | [
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658506e36a2762001144b0d3 | Art | Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | It is argued that the state budget should invest in several art activities with the aim of improving the quality of urban life. In my opinion, although this idea could play a vital role in making citizens’ daily lives better, this policy is not appropriate to all cases because of the orientation development in the citi... | [
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