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5,978 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The features of the setting that affect the cyclist is the lact of information on were to go and the lack of water. This was a problem because he needed water for his trip and directions on were to go. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 1 | 1 |
5,979 | 3 | The features of the setting affected the cyclist in a negative way. He was in the desert, which is dry and hot. I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June."(Kurmaskie @NUM1). Also, the temperature was hot and made every thing around him hot, brackish water faling somewhere in the neighborhood of ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
5,980 | 3 | Everyone travels to unfamiliar places. Sometimes we get lost and ask locals for directions which @MONTH1 not be a good idea. The setting affected the cyclist. He had a perfectly good map but asked older men who look like they havent been out in ages. The old men apparently havent been out because they gave the cyclis... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 |
5,981 | 3 | I believe the features of the cyclist affected him because he was impatient and trustworthy he tock the old mens advice to take an hr of his time bay taking a short cat, if he would of stayed true to the mep he wouldnt of almost ared of heat but his impatientress got the best of him so he took the shortcut. After his ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
5,982 | 3 | The setting effects the cyclist because of the setting were diffrent the story would not of made sense. The setting of the story is not and dry with scaterd ghost towns. When he reaches the first town he sees One ramshackle sheds several rusty pumps and a coral that couldnt hold the lamesh mule. If the setting had ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
5,983 | 3 | There were many features of the setting that affected the cyclist. For instance, it was extremely hot and dry. Also it was nearly deserted, almost all of the places he crossed were deserted .A lost her features of the setting were a ram shackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that caldnt hald in the lamest mo... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
5,984 | 3 | The cyclist was riding through a tower when he stopped for directions. These old men told him to take a short cut and he did and got lost. He was in a ghost town in the desert. In conclusion the desert is hot. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 1 | 1 |
5,985 | 3 | The affects of the cyclist is if it does not change. it cut hurt a lot of people feeling because they @CAPS1 dont care about the cyclist. Im one of them people who does not care about it cause it does not affect me or anyone I know. It is a big deal to write people, some of them @CAPS1 blow stuff up. They talking on ... | 0 | 0 | 0 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
5,986 | 3 | The essay Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit describes a mans bicycle ride through California. Now, California is very hot during the summer, which is when the cyclist is riding. This setting greatly affects the mans journey. It made it very difficult for him to finish his ride. He drank most of his... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
5,987 | 3 | In the story, Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit written by Joe Kurmaskie, represents how certain conditions can affect a cyclist. The cyclist was biking through the desert to reach Yosemite National Park, but on his journey he accoutered many tough conditions to make it difficult to get there. First ... | 2 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
5,988 | 3 | The setting of the authors shortcut effected his performance and strength tremendously . whether it was the hills, heat or barren landscape all three took their toll on Joe Kurmaskie. Not only that, but his lack of water depleted his energy as well. Flat road was repalced by short rolling hills. The hills were a t... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
5,989 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist very much so! The cyclist is riding through the hot desert. Meaning he needs lots of cold water to keep him hydrated. The longer he rides in the hot sun, the more he sweats, the more likely he will get dehydrated. If he was riding in the rain or snow it could possibly slow... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 |
5,990 | 3 | There was many features that affected the cyclist such as heat and lack of water. The cyclist was drinking a lot of water throughout the story and ends up only having little water left. I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. That shows he wasnt prepared with enough water for his trip to Yose... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
5,991 | 3 | The features in the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. Initially, when the cyclist went through the road with the big snake in the middle of it made him keep cations and very unease. Furthermore, the desert and nothing around gave the cyclist of abandoness and no help for when he is I trouble. Finally, the cycl... | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
5,992 | 3 | The features of the setting in Rough Road Ahead:Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, by Joe kurmaksie,greatly affect the cyclist and put him through many hardships that he probably could have avoided.The old cotagers told him about a path they thought was right,but was hard and did not get him to the right place.The fea... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 |
5,993 | 3 | In the essay Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit the author Joe Kurmaskie uses the features of the setting to affect the cyclist. The cyclist is affected by these features because of he sees the same setting (the dessert) for several miles, he has no water and, the road has a lot of hills. The cyclist could been affected ... | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
5,994 | 3 | Many different characteristics in a setting and determine the outcome of an event there. Im the story, Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, the cyclists journey was affected my a few weather relouded things. The heat was an extreme thing that showed him down and in most cases detened him from reading his ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
5,995 | 3 | The setting of the story affects the cyclist in many ways. Since he is riding in the California desert, he always feels very hot and is always in constant thirst. In addition to this the area he is riding in appears to be quite desolate. He finds nothing but old abondored buildings. He doesn't find anyone. No people or... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 |
5,996 | 3 | In the story Rough Road Ahead by @PERSON1, the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. One way the setting affects the cyclist is, in the desert, the cyclist drank more water than before. For example, the text states I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly, and I was traveling through t... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
5,997 | 3 | Some features of the setting affect the cyclist. First the cyclist followed the old codgers advice of how to get to Yosemite National Park. Their advice was no use and didnt help her in the end. Next, a tarlike substance oozed out of what she thoot was going to be water. Then the terrain changed to short, rolling hi... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
5,998 | 3 | The features of the setting that affect the cyclist are the lack of water, out of date information, and rolling hills. If he had up to date information then he would probably have got water from a town thats not empty or almost empty like a ghost town as the cyclist said. | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
5,999 | 3 | The cyclist has a couple things if he racing and the wind is blowing then theres a problem and he has to follow traffic law and ride on the right side or the road. | 0 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,000 | 3 | Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit had a rough setting between harzardous things and the death defying heat. The cyclist had to endure the pain of dehydration and determination. He had been given bad directions that almost caused him his life. He was travelling through a desert and claimed the temperature was @NUM1.Al... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
6,001 | 3 | An example of the setting affecting the cyclist is when he has the lock of water in a ghost town in just eliterat. He frind the water but e tar like substance come out and it tasted like battery. When he left he had to go through rough road which he couldnt travel that fast leanes of the condition of the road. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
6,002 | 3 | The cyclist had a very hard time geting to Yosemite National Park. This is because the sun was out, and it was in the middle of June. I was so hot out the cyclist became dehydrated faster than he would have on a cooler day. When the pumped the handle of the old rusted water pump, he said the water felt, somewhere in t... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,003 | 3 | The cyclist in the story is at first confident in accepting the old mens help, and doesnt seem to suspect anything is wrong when he first starts out. The way the men directed him seem all going for his water supply is all in store, and the first land mark, a ghost town now, is exactly where it is supposed to be. The ... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6,004 | 3 | Well I would put it like this is that the weather had everything to do with it because the not weather make you tired and upset and easy to angre so now it make you upset and and then stress. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,005 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist in two way. This ways are pysical and mental. The pysical ways that features affect cyclist is the terrain. If the roads are long and wiredy, this could wear the cyclist out. They could also become physically tired if the incline of the hill is to steep. When its you agai... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,006 | 3 | The settings of the story were grveling. While the cyclist was riding along, the sun was beginning to beat down on him. The cyclist began to sweat due to the heat and thus he drank just about all of his water. Now the cyclist was experiencing major heat, sweat, and dehydration. The California desert is a grveling place... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,007 | 3 | As the cyclist is travelling to Yosemite National Park, he comes across many features in the area that affects him. First, he takes directions from some old guys who dont know anything about the changes in maps because they never leave their porch. At first, it affects him in a positive way, because he thought he had ... | 2 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
6,008 | 3 | The features of this setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The setting is a dessert so by common knowledge you know that it is going to be hot and dry. Because it is hot the cyclist needs more water because he is getting dehydrated. And when he is on his low of water because it is dry into mouth gets drys. @CAPS2 be... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,010 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many different ways. One example is the hot sun that was beating down on him made him very thirsty. Another feature is the rough road that wore the cyclist out and made him tired. My last example is the old juice factory with the picture of a refreshing cup of juice on ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,011 | 3 | In the essay the mshan writes of rough rodes timit the cyclists had to overcome to reach @CAPS1 gole. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,012 | 3 | Understanding, realitic, mode-all are reasons how setting affects the setting. If a book has a good setting then the book might be pretty good. When you have a setting its more understable of what they are trying today. And if you have a good setting it makes it more realitic So when you read it you wont be thrown of... | 0 | 0 | 0 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,013 | 3 | The setting of the story affected the cyclist by making him dehydrated which could lead to a heatstroke. I could drop from a heatstroke this shows that it was hot out and he was feeling bad if he could have dropped from a heatstroke. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,014 | 3 | The terrain during the cyclists journey greatly affects him. For example, the first terrain that he experienced was not very hilly, but rather flat and soothing. The author stated, I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face. This shows that he was energized and happy. However, the reader can pre... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6,015 | 3 | The features in the story great effect the cyclist. One feature of the setting that effects the cyclist is the heat. At first, the story says that the pine trees cooled the cyclist, but eventually the forest turned into a desert, and the heat poured down on him, make it hard to cycle. Another feature that effected the ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
6,016 | 3 | The narrator in this story goes through a tough journey insisting of hope, challenge physical pain, despair, and relief. All of these are further developed by the settings where they take place, For example after taking advice from old men at a campsite, he is on his way through the deserts of California. If he had bee... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,017 | 3 | The setting in the story changes many times. It starts in an area with rivers and pine trees. Then the cyclist arrives ant a town. After that he is pounded by the hot sun and along hilly road. With not much water left the cyclist uses all the energy he had to get to a town where he could get something to drink. The set... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 |
6,018 | 3 | The features of the settings affect in the story Do Not Exceed posted speed Limit it is the morning and everyone is still sleep and he wakes in the morning for something to do when he pull up to the first plase he thinks that they are all old and crazy and he thinking that the places needs fixing because the houses a... | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,019 | 3 | The setting effects the cyclist because he is in the desert with no water and doesnt know where he is going. The old men on the porch gave him wrong directions now he is lost in the desert. The cyclist find the will power to keep on moving and he finds help along the way. He finds another old man there that offer him d... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 |
6,020 | 3 | The setting in the story discouraged the biker very much. As he follows the advice of the elderly men and starts off his journey he notices that there is, no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind. He uses tone words to describe how had things are when he says, The water bottle contained only a ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 |
6,021 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist alot. The hot sun beating down on him makes him sweat and makes him thirsty. The bumpy roods and hills make him work harder. The abandoned places make him lose hope. If faced with these obstacles I would have been affected in the same way. As I believe any human would be. | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,022 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist.The features of the setting, or nature, affect the cyclist because they are wearing her out. The cyclist is going to the city of of yosemite but some guys gave her a short cut. Through this shortcut are hills and heat and lack of water. @CAPS1 describes this by saying, I ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 |
6,023 | 3 | The three most important features of the setting that effect the cyclist are the ground he is traveling, the towns he passes, and the availability of water. The ground the cyclist is riding over is important because the rougher the terrain, and the more hills there are, the more energy he must use, and the less distanc... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
6,024 | 3 | In the story of rough road ahead :do not exceed posted limit the setting affected the cyclist. In the middle of the desert during the summer the cyclist was low on water. The old men gave him the wrong directions, so mainly it is the old guys thought he dies. The cyclist survives but the heat and the season he was ri... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 |
6,025 | 3 | Some of the features of the setting affect the cyclist like the road was bad it had bumps all over that made it much harder and it also took up a lot of strength. Also the neighborhood of two hundre degrees after that become to a road with arore bunch of hills | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,026 | 3 | In the story many different settings affected the author in many different ways. In the very beginning of his journey he came across a ghost town. He reacted to the features of this setting with humor and hope. I chuckled, checked my water supply, and moved on." He still has hope that he would end up safe and in the r... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6,027 | 3 | Ghost towns are not exactly the most inviting place for a cyclis trunning low on water supply. In Rough road ahead: do not exceed speed limit the cyclist is affected in many ways by his surrounding settings. Starting off on a warm day with the sun bright start off as a good thing, while his mood is still fresh and ha... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
6,028 | 3 | The features of setting affect the cyclist. It was hard arrived at the first town for author. For example Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit. The road that author was ridding, it was rough. @CAPS1 example is Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills. All the road was hills and rough. Than The ... | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,029 | 3 | The features of the selling effect the cyclist a lot. One factor that would effect the cyclist would be the heat. Also, because of this factor, hes pobably suffering from lack of water. Hes probably really hot seeing hes the only one cut in the middle of nowhere for what looks like miles. Another feature of the sett... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,030 | 3 | The setting puts a great deal of stress on the cyclist. The biggest issue he faces is the weather. He is a cyclist traveling through the high deserts of @LOCATION1 in June. He had been riding his bike all day and he was soon going to run out of water. Just when he thought he could drink more water, he drank water fe... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6,031 | 3 | The narration of Rough Road ahead a solo cyclist encounters several challenges throughout the story. The changes in his environment directly affect the completion of his journey and his health. As the narrator makes his way to Yosemite national park from the none of the old men his first encounter with his environmen... | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 |
6,032 | 3 | The setting affected the cyclist a lot. One way was the heat. It got so hot that he was becoming dehydrated. He kept drinking his water, until he didnt have any left. Another reason is because the road turned into hills which made him use more energy. Finally, it didn't help that he hadnt seen any sign of living creatu... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,033 | 3 | The features of the setting in Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit affect the main character the cyclist. The cyclist is biking through the high desert of california in June. So naturally it can be infereal that it is not and dry, making water a delicacy. As the cyclist is passing through a ghost town and a pump that ... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,034 | 3 | The settings that affected the cyclist were in fact ones you dont want to be near when you are out of water and tired from pedaling. The time and place affected him greatly because there wasnt a cool breeze in the air in June at California. He was in the middle of flat deserts and had no sense of where the part as an... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,035 | 3 | In the story Do not exceed posted speed limit" the author Joe Kurmaskie tells you that there many things you have to go through before you get there. The example is when "he stops and asks for directions to Yosemite state park". Because he did what to get lost. When he had to and other towns. The next example is when... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,036 | 3 | I think the features of the setting that affected the cyclist were the terrain Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills this shows that he is a warm and trobled by the change of the terrain. He also fells alone I toiled on at some point tumbleweed crossed my path he also. Though he was in a ghost town. Summer... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 |
6,037 | 3 | Heat, dry, flat - all are features of the setting that effected the cyclist. As the cyclist was driving through the desert, he noticed how hot it was, and how he would become dehydrated quickley. I was also very dry and and he started to get nervous about how thirsty he was. The flat ground models how there is nothing ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 |
6,038 | 3 | The features of the setting effects the cyclist by the way that the auther started talking and how he sound at the beginning of the story. When they both at the picture he looks like hes cecilla ssing and then ceoos. To the story and goo continue ties reads. It doesnt sound like he is enjoying his ride, because of the... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,039 | 3 | In the story Do not exceed posted speed limit by Joe Kurmaskie there were many things that effected the cyclist. Such as the water. He had no really good water to drink because of where he was''. When I tryed a drop or two, it had the flavor of battery acid''. He wasnt able to drink the water because the battery acid... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,040 | 3 | In the essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not exede posted speed him if many of the featutres of the setting affect the cyclist. At first the cyclist goes by river wich he wount find later in the journey.As he goes along in the journey the heat and lack of water starts to affect him. Also he finds a water fountain that pours ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 0 | 0 |
6,041 | 3 | The feature of setting affects the cyclist because the roads are too rough. If he gos too pot he could spin out of commission and the water was trouble. He sad when I tried a deep or two it had the flavor of a battery acid. | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,042 | 3 | The cyclist is mostly affected by his lack of water. In the beginning of his ride the cyclist is confident and is striving to reach the joys of @LOCATION1. He longs for, the cool pines and rushing rivers
(@NUM1). Later on when the cyclist reaches the rough terrain, he starts feeling exhaustion as he depletes his wat... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
6,043 | 3 | The setting effected the cyclist in a great way. The snakes blocked his pathways, and hi short water supply made it hard to continue. He felt as if he could drop of a heatstroke. His environment, and the information from the old man made his ride very hard to continue. All in all, his settings had a big effect on him. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 |
6,044 | 3 | The setting affected the cyclist because of the rode conditions. The rode was all messed up. | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,045 | 3 | The cyclist was well prepaired for his adventure however hot enuff for a change in senary. When the old men told him to take a difficult path and did his in tire setting changed for the worst. After this he was nearly over powered by devastating hills and dehydration was slowly creeping up on him as well. He had not ne... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 |
6,046 | 3 | Setting can affect anyone and everyone, in this case it happened to be a cyclist. Since it was June, it happened to be pretty not outside causing the cyclist to lose more body fluid due to his constant movement producing sweat. This makes water a must have. Also, as he passes through, he comes across a sign that read: ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,047 | 3 | The features of setting really effects the cyclist because of the condition. For example, the weather, it is hot, it will slow the person down. And if its perfect that will let the person go at regular speed. And the roads, if the road is bumpy that will slow them down. And if its smooth that will speed them up. See,... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 |
6,048 | 3 | The setting affects the author alot. First he is in a California desert in the middle of June. It is very hot out. This makes the cyclist very tired. There are some cool pines, but they do help much. There is also no where to get water for a very long time. The narration states, I eased past, trying to keep my balanc... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,049 | 3 | In the story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit the features of the setting affected the cyclist. For example, the cyclist traveled miles on a bike dealing with the weather in the deserts, little bit of water, and being tired. The cyclist faced many hard times trying to travel on a bicycle from one point to another. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 |
6,050 | 3 | The setting of this story greatly affects the cyclists attitude and adversities. The path of the cyclist is through California deserts, which are dry and hot. This first presents the major conflict of the story, the danger of the cyclist getting heatstake. In the reading, the author says, I had been hitting my water ... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
6,051 | 3 | The features in the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. When the cyclist was going through the desert, it had be dry old, dirty
. I came to a fork of sorts, One ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldnt hold in the largest mule greeted me. This side was troubling. when she wanted to us th... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 |
6,052 | 3 | How the setting of the place effects the cyclist is for one its to dry a cyclist would be ridy for haurst shouldnt be in a place thats dry.Like in the story it says I was travelling through the high parts of California in June meaning it was really hot and dry.Second would be the animals there dangerous.A cyclist s... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,053 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cylceist by the ground would change terrian a lot makeing it difficult to ride at the same speed the entire way. Also, the lack of water made it hard to focus. I think the features of the setting affect the cycleist by people think they are worse than the actually are. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,054 | 3 | The setting affects the cyclist in many ways. The setting affects the cyclist because the weather is very hot and humid which makes him sweat which is using up energy because his body is trying to stay cool. Also the setting affects the cyclist because there is no water so on top of sweating being out of energy he has ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 |
6,055 | 3 | In this story the cyclist is going through a desert of California. This is a reason why he is very limited on water supply. It is really hot which would cause him to drink a lot more water. He had started his journey in the morning so that the sun wasnt as hot as it would be in the middle of the day. Then it started t... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,056 | 3 | The wonderful features and settings had a dramatic affect on the author. The affect was bad rather that good. First, there was the almost unbearable heat. The author had limited amount of water and used a lot of it because of the smoltering temperatures. Another feature that had a great impeidence on the authors well ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 |
6,057 | 3 | The cyclist is traveling through a rough part of California during the hot month of June. The author describes part of part of his journey; "I was traveling through the high deserts of california in june." The heat of the sun and not much water around is causing the cyclist to worry about his health. A little further i... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,058 | 3 | The features of the setting affect to cyclist because of where he is. The biker is in a campground in California. By saying that one could sense it is a dusty place. Also, when the story says that the town had been abandoned. This also tells us that the place the cyclist is in is a diserted place without many people ... | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,059 | 3 | The setting greatly affects the cyclist because he is the one riding over, short rolling hills, and arround a,ridiculously large snake, and because its hot he could suffer from heatstroke at any minut. So yes the author is affected by the setting | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,060 | 3 | The affects of the features around them affect them by the hot bikes so the bikers need water and also it affects them by the roads are so hill so they cant just road. Stight so they need to go over the hilles and that affects them because cycles are very hard to land form a jump. | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6,061 | 3 | The features of the setting in Yosemite give the cyclist something in look forward to, but the feature of the sorting that he is in enduse in get there causes him despaire. As soon as the cyclist passes a ghost town and notices swettering hed of the sun during early endeavers of the trip he checks himself up as he says... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,062 | 3 | The bike rider in the short story Do not exceed posted speed limit by @PERSON1, is greatly affected by the condition of land around him. He is riding through the extremely dry desert and is running, low on water. However since it is such a dry place he cant find any. Also since it is out in the middle of no where, ... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 |
6,063 | 3 | In "rough road ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit the features of the setting affect the cyclist. Many visual features create a very deserted area thats hott in your head. For example in paragraph five they use alot of adjectives to describe how abandon the place was. Words like ramshackle and rusty. Also how ofte... | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,064 | 3 | In the passage,the cyclist had about @NUM1 different settings. One of these settings were the rough terrains he had to pass through where he lacked on the amount of water.Another setting the cyclist had to go through was the hill like terrains.Where he was laughing at himself for taking the old men advice in the first ... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,065 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. For example, the weather in California in June was hot and the water the cyclist found in the pipes was hot, as well. The text says, Somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees. This affected him because he had no water to drink from. Another examp... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
6,066 | 3 | The setting in the features of the cyclist is that if it is too hot or too cold, it could affect how the cyclist is riding . If its to hot the cyclist would get exhausted a lot faster . And if its to cold then the cyclist would @MONTH1 be get sick . Also if its too windy then he would go a lot slower if he is going... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
6,067 | 3 | The features that affected the cyclist was plenty of things. One thing would be lack of water. In the text he said the pump gave water that taste like battery acid. Another one would be all the surroundings changed from what the old men sald and he got lost. When he was lost he had to have determination to find someone... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,068 | 3 | The setting and it`s features affect the cyclist greatly. He is in the desert and all the town's are abandoned. Also he now hits a sign that says Rough Road Ahead
(kurmaskie, pg @NUM1). This makes his trip even worse because now he has to make it over not only big hills but torn up, old, beaten roads. And he has the s... | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 |
6,069 | 3 | The features of the setting affect the the cyclist by giving him obstacles to overcome when he had to go down the winding hills, he would have to slow down so he could manuver the hills and not lose control of the bike. The heat he was facing would cause tiredness and dehydration. If exposed to the sun and heat long en... | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,070 | 3 | The setting and features affect the cyclist because with each building he hopes for water, but since he is traveling through a desert water is in limited supply and many empty buildings are left out in the wastland. These buildings create a feeling of releve in the cyclist anty to be followed by despair to find them ab... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 |
6,071 | 3 | In 'Rough @CAPS1 Ahead' the features of the setting and the cyclists surroundings greatly influence him. Because he is in the high deserts of California in June, the climate is hot, dry, and miserable. Another feature of the setting that affects the cyclist, is that he is out in the middle of nowhere. There are no o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
6,072 | 3 | In the short story the cyclist was affected by the setting in many ways. The author was running out of water throughout the whole story. The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. There was a limited amount of water in the bottles. He had to travel a long distance. Not two miles into the next section.... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
6,073 | 3 | The cyclist was so set on seeing cool, piney trees and lakes, that when he saw dirt, snake, and no source of civilization worried him. More affectively, what he didnt see scared him most. He did see windy rivers or trails hidden beneath all kinds of trees. He didnt see any people or friendly little forest critters. I... | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 |
6,074 | 3 | The features in the setting are not very good for the cyclist. Hes in California in June, and its very hot. Its pretty much a desert. When he stops for water, the pump he finds does not have any more water in it except for a few drops. Also, the few drops that he does get taste like battery acid. So this is not very... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 |
6,075 | 3 | In the essay Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, the author changes the mood by not only telling us how the cyclist feels, but also by describing his environment. As he's leaving the resevoir compground hes feeling pretty good because hes just leaving the serenity of an early-summer evening and h... | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 |
6,076 | 3 | There are @NUM1 features of the setting that affects the cyclist on his journey. There is a lack of water, in the middle of nowhere, and nobodys there. Due to lack of water, this feature really affects the cyclist. He will need water in all to move and get through his journey. Water is the main thing he should have. H... | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
6,077 | 3 | The settings affect the cyclists for many reasons. One, if the setting is nice, the rider can concentrate on the scenery not on only pain they are having. also, if the setting isnt very nice, the rider would probably concentrate more on the pain than they would the scenery. another thing is if the setting is very hill... | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
6,078 | 3 | The setting in the story affected the cyclist by him going through obstacles to get to town. The setting was in a desert in California in June. The cyclist also had a lack of water and when he found a pump he said it was black and tasted like battery acid. And then he stopped for directions and the men gave him the old... | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence Fluency, Conventions | ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit
by Joe Kurmaskie
FORGET THAT OLD SAYING ABOUT NEVER taking candy from strangers. No, a better piece of advice for the solo cyclist would be, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in o... | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 |
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