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Dear Principal, After school or during school activities like basketball, soccer, volleyball, track, wrestling and others, are basically what kids want. Taking that privilege away can hurt them not only emotionally, but physically as well. Kids are very active, hyper and full of energy. Running it off will cool them d...	Fix any mistakes	Dear Principal, After school or during school activities like basketball, soccer, volleyball, track, wrestling, and others are basically what kids want. Taking that privilege away can hurt them not only emotionally but physically as well. Kids are very active, hyper, and full of energy. Running it off will cool them d...
Reflection – Visualization and Storytelling by Jose Santos Challenge I was dealing with a big problem in my organization about the ERP (enterprise resource planning) system, all people complained that the system does not work and does not give enough information and I was in the middle of everything because I was i...	Fix any mistakes	Reflection – Visualization and Storytelling by Jose Santos Challenge I was dealing with a big problem in my organization about the ERP (enterprise resource planning) system; all people complained that the system does not work and does not give enough information. I was in the middle of everything because I was in the...
Driving While Using Cell Phones Many people take chances and put other people's lives in danger by using their cellphones while driving. Numerous deaths and injuries occur from those driving and using cell phones simultaneously. Using cellphones while driving causes needless accidents. It is almost impossible to effic...	Fix any mistakes	Driving While Using Cell Phones Many people take chances and put other people's lives in danger by using their cellphones while driving. Numerous deaths and injuries occur from those driving and using cell phones simultaneously. Using cell phones while driving causes needless accidents. It is almost impossible to ...
Imagine never teaching your kid how to drive. Well thats what would happen if driverless cars happen. That memory stays with a person till they die. Ask anybody about how they learned how to drive they can tell you like it was yesterday. There shouldnt be driverless cars because its too dangerous and elimates many thin...	Fix any mistakes	Imagine never teaching your kid how to drive. Well, that's what would happen if driverless cars happen. That memory stays with a person till they die. Ask anybody about how they learned how to drive; they can tell you like it was yesterday. There shouldn't be driverless cars because it's too dangerous and eliminates ma...
In the real world being an athlete when you were in middle school could help, so could being a part of the yearbook club, or even being a part of the student council. But a student's choice is special, because if they choose something that they really like they'll work twice as hard at that subject. For example if a s...	Fix any mistakes	In the real world, being an athlete when you were in middle school could help, so could being a part of the yearbook club, or even being a part of the student council. But a student's choice is special because if they choose something that they really like, they'll work twice as hard at that subject. For example, if a...
Have you ever wondered about the Seagoing Cowboys? I would love to join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to take care of animals such as horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped overseas. The Seagoing Cowboys is alot of fun because on the way back you get to play fun games like Table-tennis tournaments, fenci...	Fix any mistakes	Have you ever wondered about the Seagoing Cowboys? I would love to join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to take care of animals such as horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped overseas. The Seagoing Cowboys is a lot of fun because on the way back you get to play fun games like table tennis tournaments, fenc...
Dear principles name: I would like for you to let students play in sports or be included in an activity if there were B, or C students. The reason i say this is because there are a lot of students that would like to be in any kind of sports or would like to be included in any activity, but their grades may not be as g...	Fix any mistakes	Dear Principal's Name: I would like for you to let students play in sports or be included in an activity if there were B or C students. The reason I say this is because there are a lot of students that would like to be in any kind of sports or would like to be included in any activity, but their grades may not be as g...
I think all students should perform community service. It is good to give back to the community. It gives us so much. For example, a house to sleep in, a schools to go to learn in, and grocery stores to buy food in. If each student can give back a little bit of time out of their day or weekend, our society would be a ...	Fix any mistakes	I believe all students should participate in community service. Giving back to the community is important because it provides us with so much. For instance, we have homes to live in, schools to learn in, and grocery stores to buy food from. If each student could dedicate a little time each day or on weekends to commun...
Cars in our society has been a benefical invention that we've had. Now that we are living in the 21st century people are worried about the negative effects that cars are contributting to. If we limit the use of cars it takes away stress from drivers, it reduces air pollution, and avoids many traffic jams we have on dai...	Fix any mistakes	Cars in our society have been a beneficial invention that we've had. Now that we are living in the 21st century, people are worried about the negative effects that cars are contributing to. If we limit the use of cars, it takes away stress from drivers, reduces air pollution, and avoids many traffic jams we have on a d...
Why are driverless cars a good idea and why are they a bad idea? I think driverless cars are both good and bad ideas. I think they are a good idea because they can be very helpful to people that have a certain type of disabilty. They help with the camera when you are backing out and have a sensor if you are getting clo...	Fix any mistakes	Why are driverless cars a good idea and why are they a bad idea? I think driverless cars are both good and bad ideas. I think they are a good idea because they can be very helpful to people that have a certain type of disability. They help with the camera when you are backing out and have a sensor if you are getting cl...
Dear Senator, I along with many other citizens have came to the conclusion that the Electoral College worth keeping. Though, the process itself has loose ends, overall it benefits the state and national election. The system uses general influence and a representative style of voting that makes the ballot more stable a...	Fix any mistakes	Dear Senator, I, along with many other citizens, have come to the conclusion that the Electoral College is worth keeping. Though the process itself has loose ends, overall it benefits the state and national election. The system uses general influence and a representative style of voting that makes the ballot more stab...
The social class of ancient Egyptian society was in the shape of a pyramid with the highest at the top and the lowest at the bottom. In the text it states "heir leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects"(Paragraph 2) This shows that at the top of Egypt...	Fix any mistakes	The social class of ancient Egyptian society was in the shape of a pyramid, with the highest at the top and the lowest at the bottom. In the text, it states, "their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects" (Paragraph 2). This shows that at the top of...
the policy that i think is better is allowing students to bring cell phones to school and using them while their at lunch. this policy will be helpful to other students because it will help them stay in touch with there family members. if a student is absent the person could text the student during lunch time and tell ...	Fix any mistakes	The policy that I think is better is allowing students to bring cell phones to school and use them while they're at lunch. This policy will be helpful to other students because it will help them stay in touch with their family members. If a student is absent, the person could text the student during lunchtime and tell ...
The Electoral College shows many reasons why we should change it to popular vote. Like for instance The Electoral college is not fair, but by voting with popular vote not only will more people vote but more people will vote for who they want to vote and not get confused and vote for the wrong candidate. Theres many re...	Fix any mistakes	The Electoral College shows many reasons why we should change it to popular vote. Like, for instance, the Electoral College is not fair, but by voting with popular vote, not only will more people vote, but more people will vote for who they want to vote for and not get confused and vote for the wrong candidate. There ...
Life can get tricky. That's why students could benefit from finishing class work online. Life is often complicated and filled with unexpected problems. When students find themsleves away from school due to personal issues, then it becomes essential to find other ways to aquire knowledge. Often times, people assume the ...	Fix any mistakes	Life can get tricky. That's why students could benefit from finishing class work online. Life is often complicated and filled with unexpected problems. When students find themselves away from school due to personal issues, then it becomes essential to find other ways to acquire knowledge. Oftentimes, people assume the ...
Have you ever been bored in a class room such as your highschool english classes? Well do to a brand new algorithum made by Dr. Paull Eckman, creator of the FACS(Facial Action Coding System), you can finaly be exited about learning about greek and latin roots. This program can detect how you are felling and in what pre...	Fix any mistakes	Have you ever been bored in a classroom such as your high school English classes? Well, due to a brand new algorithm made by Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of the FACS (Facial Action Coding System), you can finally be excited about learning about Greek and Latin roots. This program can detect how you are feeling and in what ...
Hey,how are you today. Well I am here today to tell you why it would be a great idea for you to participate in the Seagoing program. The reason i think it would be a great idea for you to participate in the Seagong program is because I just got done reading a artical called,'' A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves,''.And in thi...	Fix any mistakes	Hey, how are you today? Well, I am here today to tell you why it would be a great idea for you to participate in the Seagoing program. The reason I think it would be a great idea for you to participate in the Seagoing program is because I just got done reading an article called "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves." In this s...
Story Telling Challenge & Selection It is a handy tool used in collections of matters in routine life. Being a portion of the marketing team associated to a daily needs company, I made a resolution so as to prepare our product more alluring so that maximum amount of consumers purchase our product and be faithful to...	Fix any mistakes	Storytelling Challenge & Selection It is a handy tool used in collections of matters in routine life. Being a portion of the marketing team associated with a daily needs company, I made a resolution to prepare our product to be more alluring so that the maximum number of consumers will purchase our product an...
Reflection – Visualization Challenge I’m a member of my department’s software engineer group. My challenge is to provide a graphical user interface for our new test system which is designed by a group of system engineers and electrical engineers. This user interface shall reflect all possible parameters that were ...	Fix any mistakes	Reflection – Visualization Challenge I’m a member of my department’s software engineering group. My challenge is to provide a graphical user interface for our new test system, which is designed by a group of system engineers and electrical engineers. This user interface shall reflect all possible parameters that were...
The auther's support on the studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers are too dangerus. Venus is too harmful to humans and/or anything that touches the planet. Many people sent numerous spacecrafts to Venus but, were unsecessful and they didn't last for a few hours. The issue helps understand why nothing ...	Fix any mistakes	The author's support on studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers being too dangerous. Venus is too harmful to humans and/or anything that touches the planet. Many people sent numerous spacecraft to Venus but were unsuccessful, and they didn't last for a few hours. The issue helps understand why nothing h...
Dear state senator, I urge you to vote in favor of changing to election by popular vote to select the president of the United States. I urge this to pass for three particular reasons. First is because of the factor that electors could defy the will of the people or the peoples word, Second is because of the event of a...	Fix any mistakes	Dear state senator, I urge you to vote in favor of changing to election by popular vote to select the president of the United States. I urge this to pass for three particular reasons. First is because of the factor that electors could defy the will of the people or the people's word. Second is because in the event of ...
Challenge I work with a lot of young entrepreneurs in the start-up ecosystem, partnering them on their journey from the Inception stage to the Growth stage. A lot of times, these extremely talented entrepreneurs find it difficult to break out of the technological biases of their minds and connect with investors and ...	Fix any mistakes	Challenge I work with a lot of young entrepreneurs in the start-up ecosystem, partnering with them on their journey from the inception stage to the growth stage. A lot of times, these extremely talented entrepreneurs find it difficult to break out of the technological biases of their minds and connect with investors a...
When seeking for advice, consulting multiple people for their opinion is important. That way you can get different perspectives followed by what they think. Getting advice from one person isn't bad, but getting multiple people's opinions is better. By doing this you have a more wide variety of opinions from different t...	Fix any mistakes	When seeking advice, consulting multiple people for their opinions is important. That way, you can get different perspectives followed by what they think. Getting advice from one person isn't bad, but getting multiple people's opinions is better. By doing this, you have a wider variety of opinions from different types ...
Opponents say that cell phones are good because they give an opportunity to make a call in case of emergency. However, it is illusion of safety because when people need it the most either they can't find it or reach it because they are stuck in car. People shouldn't fully depend on cell phones because they are not reli...	Fix any mistakes	Opponents say that cell phones are good because they give an opportunity to make a call in case of emergency. However, it is an illusion of safety because when people need it the most, either they can't find it or reach it because they are stuck in a car. People shouldn't fully depend on cell phones because they are no...
Ron the teacher made up an experiment called the "Third Wave" to prove the democratic states are not usually protected by the influence of fascism, and all people are ruled by a single dictator. In paragraph 2, it states "Ron started to emphasize things like proper seating and drilled the students extensively ...	Fix any mistakes	Ron the teacher made up an experiment called the "Third Wave" to prove that democratic states are not usually protected by the influence of fascism, and all people are ruled by a single dictator. In paragraph 2, it states, "Ron started to emphasize things like proper seating and drilled the students extensively until t...
Visualization Challenge and Selection The main challenge which arises in solving a problem is defining the exact problem. If the problem is defined and stated correctly, half the process of solving problem is done. Most the time the problem is faced after the business has spend some time in market and its rate of ...	Fix any mistakes	Visualization Challenge and Selection The main challenge which arises in solving a problem is defining the exact problem. If the problem is defined and stated correctly, half the process of solving the problem is done. Most of the time, the problem is faced after the business has spent some time in the marke...
Introduction On the 26 th August, Bank holiday Monday, Mr. Lars Hanson has arranged to host a party to celebrate his 25 th wedding anniversary. The location is at his riverside house with the marquee erected on the lawn next to the river. He requires a three course luncheon with wine starting at 1pm. The guests will a...	Fix any mistakes	Introduction On the 26th of August, Bank Holiday Monday, Mr. Lars Hanson has arranged to host a party to celebrate his 25th wedding anniversary. The location is at his riverside house, with the marquee erected on the lawn next to the river. He requires a three-course luncheon with wine starting at 1 pm. The guest...
Although some sciencetists belive the face was an alien artifacet photograpging cydonia. NASA when marz global surveyor became a priority. The nasa people though it was a good idea beacuse of the tax payers. Nasa photograph the face as we could get shot at. Mosly the land form was owned by allies. The capition noted a...	Fix any mistakes	Although some scientists believe the face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia, NASA, when Mars Global Surveyor became a priority, thought it was a good idea because of the taxpayers. NASA photographed the face as we could get shot at. Mostly, the landform was owned by allies. The caption noted a huge rock. NAS...
Reflection – Visualization Challenge and Selection As a coach and consultant, I use visualization often to help my clients connect to possibilities and option that may not feel accessible in the current moment, or to internalize concepts in a deeper way. In working with teams, I have found that people are often ab...	Fix any mistakes	Reflection – Visualization Challenge and Selection As a coach and consultant, I use visualization often to help my clients connect to possibilities and options that may not feel accessible in the current moment, or to internalize concepts in a deeper way. In working with teams, I have found that people are often able...
A classroom with the use of this technology would be a classroom of supieriority. This new techonology could greatly improve students´ abilities to learn. Often students are protrayed as being happy or content during a lesson, but really, they are confused. The FACS, Facial Action Cosing System, is an advanced piece te...	Fix any mistakes	A classroom with the use of this technology would be a classroom of superiority. This new technology could greatly improve students' abilities to learn. Often, students are portrayed as being happy or content during a lesson, but really, they are confused. The FACS, Facial Action Coding System, is an advanced piece of ...
Should drivers be allowed to use their phones while operating a vehicle? Do you use your phone while driving? If you said yes, then you need to stop. If you don't then you may end up dead and if you don't believe me then let me tell you some facts. Here is why I don't think people should be able to use their phones wh...	Fix any mistakes	Should drivers be allowed to use their phones while operating a vehicle? Do you use your phone while driving? If you said yes, then you need to stop. If you don't, then you may end up dead, and if you don't believe me, then let me tell you some facts. Here is why I don't think people should be able to use their phones...
A relationship between the market, the civil society and the state exists and each one of those sectors has its role and should act in collaboration with one another and not individually in order to address any failures. For example there is a specific circumstance where the state should intervene in order to address a...	Fix any mistakes	A relationship between the market, civil society, and the state exists, and each one of those sectors has its role and should act in collaboration with one another and not individually in order to address any failures. For example, there is a specific circumstance where the state should intervene in order to address a ...
Extracurricular activities are an excellent way for students to expand their knowledge and skills beyond the classes they are taking in school. Many of these are beneficial in teaching you skills that will be valuable for the rest of your life, such as time management, balancing work, and working with others. I think t...	Fix any mistakes	Extracurricular activities are an excellent way for students to expand their knowledge and skills beyond the classes they are taking in school. Many of these are beneficial in teaching you skills that will be valuable for the rest of your life, such as time management, balancing work, and working with others. I think t...
A lot of students do extracurricular activities if they are interested in them. Such as doing a sport or working on a year book. They are there for students to enjoy. So shouldn't we have a choice to join or not? We shouldn't have to do extracurricular activities if we don't want to. What if your life is busy and you ...	Fix any mistakes	A lot of students do extracurricular activities if they are interested in them, such as doing a sport or working on a yearbook. They are there for students to enjoy. So shouldn't we have a choice to join or not? We shouldn't have to do extracurricular activities if we don't want to. What if your life is busy and you d...
I don't think it would be worth the money to put in technology in a classroom to see what a student is feeling, because not everyone wants everyone knowing what they are feeling. What if that student just wants to be left alone? When I'm mad I don't want everyone knowing what's going on, I'd rather not talk to anyone u...	Fix any mistakes	I don't think it would be worth the money to put technology in a classroom to see what a student is feeling because not everyone wants everyone knowing what they are feeling. What if that student just wants to be left alone? When I'm mad, I don't want everyone knowing what's going on; I'd rather not talk to anyone unle...
Dear TEACHER_NAME: Over the past few days you have been trying to decide whether or not to require all students to perform community service. Many students have already chosen to do community service such as tutoring elementary school children and cleaning up litter. To set this as a standard is a remarkable idea. In...	Fix any mistakes	Dear TEACHER_NAME: Over the past few days, you have been trying to decide whether or not to require all students to perform community service. Many students have already chosen to do community service, such as tutoring elementary school children and cleaning up litter. To set this as a standard is a remarkable idea. ...
Many student's do not have opportunity to be part of one school. The school, or the study, are the most important thing for the future, because everyone depend of money, everybody need study to get a good job and make money. Each one know what want be in the future, so that is exactly whatever some need to study. Each ...	Fix any mistakes	Many students do not have the opportunity to be part of one school. The school, or the study, is the most important thing for the future because everyone depends on money; everybody needs to study to get a good job and make money. Each one knows what they want to be in the future, so that is exactly whatever some need ...
C1 - Internal use Mind Mapping By: Blanca Villa Challenge & Selection: As part of a marketing team that is involve in the innovation process of new products for a makeup brand we have the challenge to recognize our consumer but also to have the ability to segment them by specific target groups to effectively resp...	Fix any mistakes	C1 - Internal use Mind Mapping By: Blanca Villa Challenge & Selection: As part of a marketing team that is involved in the innovation process of new products for a makeup brand, we have the challenge to recognize our consumer but also to have the ability to segment them by specific target groups to effectively resp...
The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" definitely uses a lot of big words to describe the difficulties and other details of venus in general, but do they know what they are talking about? By carefully examining the text and pondering their ideas of the planets surface and difficuties of gaining access to venu...	Fix any mistakes	The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" definitely uses a lot of big words to describe the difficulties and other details of Venus in general, but do they know what they are talking about? By carefully examining the text and pondering their ideas of the planet's surface and difficulties of gaining access to Ve...
Dear Principal: I think it's a really good idea of letting us use our phones during lunch periods and other free time. I think it's a good idea because where stuck in class waiting and sitting and staring at boring text books doing work. I also believe we students should deserve some kind of free time for our selves t...	Fix any mistakes	Dear Principal: I think it's a really good idea to let us use our phones during lunch periods and other free time. I think it's a good idea because we're stuck in class waiting and sitting and staring at boring textbooks doing work. I also believe we students deserve some kind of free time for ourselves to enjoy on ou...