essay_id,essay_set,essay,rater1_domain1,rater2_domain1,rater3_domain1,domain1_score,rater1_domain2,rater2_domain2,domain2_score,rater1_trait1,rater1_trait2,rater1_trait3,rater1_trait4,rater1_trait5,rater1_trait6,rater2_trait1,rater2_trait2,rater2_trait3,rater2_trait4,rater2_trait5,rater2_trait6,rater3_trait1,rater3_trait2,rater3_trait3,rater3_trait4,rater3_trait5,rater3_trait6,prompt_rubric_source_text_source,essay_set_descritions_source,general_guidelines_source 18490,7,A time I was patient was when I was going on the raptor at cedar point. There was a two hour line and me and my friend were getting bored. There was some music but that didn’t really amuse us. But I had never been on the raptor before and I was really thrilled to go on it. One hour dragged by. Then finally ten more minutes wait till I got to go on the raptor it was the best ride ever.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10090,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the hibiscus provides comfort. @CAPS2 Saeng failed her driving test and was new to @LOCATION1, she was frustrated and was missing her real home in Vietnam. The hibiscus reminded her of her grandmother. She writes “she closed her eyes and breathed in deeply as the fragrance filled her lungs” after Saeng smelled the flower it reminded her of “combing her grandmother’s long grey hair, freshly washed” it brought her comfort in a time of disappointment. @CAPS2 she didn’t have her grandmother, the flower comforted her. Although she was disappointed the hibiscus was “exquisite” and as she said the @CAPS1 word “dokor malik” meaning hibiscus she “savored the feel of the word on her tongue.” @CAPS2 the joy and comfort is what the flower brings to Saeng, she will take the test again in the spring when “the snow melts and the hibiscus is budding, thus bringing joy, love, and comfort to the reader as they feel what Saeng feels.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16369,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building had to face in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The dirigible's weight was held by a single cable tether that ""have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation,"" which was far below. If the cable tether were to ever break, passengers in the dirigible and civilians of New York would be in grave danger. This cable tether would be too risky to use. The builders could not possibly overcome nature and its ""violent air currents"" for the winds they the top of the building. These currents would cause docking to potentially be too time-consuming and dangerous. The builders and architects try to reverse this obstacle by weighing down ""the back with lead weights."" This was ""neither practical or safe,"" because of the potential danger of the weights falling and hitting New York pedestrians. The builders and architects of this grand project had to quarrel with many gargantuan obstacles in order to dock at the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18759,7,"One night, when me, @CAPS1 and @CAPS9 sister, @PERSON1, were asleep. Our parents were on the computer. @CAPS4 usually don't stay up that late. So I just thought @CAPS2 was doing something for work. In the @TIME1, when we wake up, @CAPS9 mom and @CAPS2 were standing in the kitchen with smiles on their faces. @CAPS2 was holding something behind his back. ""I wonder @CAPS3 it could be…."" I thought. I asked @CAPS9 mom ""@CAPS3's going on!?!"" @CAPS4 said nothing, but @CAPS9 @CAPS2 slowely brought up a document from behind his back presenting it to us. The heading on the document said ""@CAPS5 @CAPS6 @CAPS7 @CAPS8."" @CAPS9 parents were smirking @CAPS11 @CAPS9 sister and I stared at each other in amazement. @CAPS11 if we were reading each other's mind, we both well knew that we were going on a cruise! I grinned excitedly and looked at the @CAPS15 on the paper. ""@DATE2 @NUM1 - @DATE2.'' it said. Today was @DATE1. I said to @CAPS9 @CAPS2 ""That's like, two months away!!!."" ""@CAPS10,"" @CAPS9 @CAPS2 said, ""you must be patient."" @CAPS11 normal kids did. I said ""@CAPS12…"" @CAPS9 @CAPS2 knew @CAPS9 disappointment and said ""@CAPS14 things come to those who wait. I nodded contently. I knew that I was going to have to rough the two months out and be patient. The first couple weeks felt like mont's to us. We were oh so anxious @CAPS11 you would guess. But, @CAPS11 time progressed the patient got easier. I was able to focus on other things beside the cruise. On <@NUM2 @NUM1, @DATE3, the time come for us to head on a plane for the cruise."" That quick! It went by that quick! I m so excited, @CAPS2! I said when we were boarding the plane. ""I'm proud of you, son. You we're patient!"" That's the time of how I learned to be patient! @CAPS11 @CAPS9 @CAPS2 says, ""@CAPS14 things will come to those who wait.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3020,2,"Do you want your nine year old @CAPS2 talking and reading about inappropreite subjects such as sexual relationships or language? No! I know I wouldn't for my @CAPS2. I think books that are offensive and inappropreite shouldn't be in @LOCATION1 school or elementray schools with little ones or even @NUM1 years olds. And parents should be in conrol of what thier kids watch and listen too. Honstley we can't control how people make movies or what singers are saying in songs but we can control who listens to them and watches them. Its the parents that are the only ones who can control thier children, no one else. In libraries I feel like its the librarians who are the cause for letting children read offensive books. And I don't mean any disrespect but wouldn't you agree? I mean think about it, librarians are the ones in control of the books that are in the library, and I think that they should make sure that the book young teens are checking out are appropraite enough for them to read. Ones that don't involve sex or violence that @NUM1 year olds shouldn't be reading. Here's an idea, maybe libraries should have @DATE1 year olds sign a paper or have a certain card with them that allows them to check out that certain book or @CAPS4. And it should have parents permisson on it showing that the parents approve of this. But I think high schoolers should only be aloud to do this because they are more mature than younger ones. They know better than to start fights or cuss in school. All I'm saying is that I DO agree with this problem, parents are the reason thier kids are immature and rude because they @CAPS1 thier children get away with the attitude and rudeness. So yes parents and other people do have the right to sensor movies and book, etc. But what about @CAPS4 theaters you ask? DONT @CAPS1 YOUR @CAPS2 @CAPS3 TO THE @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6 YOU!!! It's that simple. Students in high school @CAPS3 to the @CAPS5 after school with friends and get in to see rated @CAPS7 movies @CAPS6 parents. And I do believe that some of them use fake @CAPS8 so they don't need a parent with them. Teens will @CAPS3 home that night and want to re-enact what they saw in the @CAPS4. Even if it's sex, or fights or even language. It's really sad that parents allow this to happen and I think the parents should grow up and disapline thier students. I've seen to many parents letting thier children get away with thier mouth and attitude. Most of my friends parents @CAPS1 thier children get away with everything. One of my friends is really bad at getting what she wants. She told me that all she has to do is cry and she gets what she wants. I don't always get what I want and I don't want every new thing out there because I don't deserve it. I have to earn to get a new phone or a laptop. I ask my parents and they eaither say we don't have enough money or you don't need it and I just move on with my life. But I don't @CAPS1 books or movies control my life and change who I am. Those things aren't that important. I mean the ones that talk about school or some random story that some stranger wrote and it just happened to show up in the school libraries. The stories or movies, etc., that teens should really pay attention to are the edicational ones. The ones that teach us about life and society. About the future and teach us how life is as an adult and ready us for the real world. Because once those seniors open those high school doors and graduate it's no more staying up late and sleeping in and parting on the weekends. Its the real world, the adult world. So please read this carefully and I hope what I have said has helped you realize why people sensor these things. Why kids are acting the way they are. Libraries should sensor certain things and not allow students below high school to read them. Please think about what I have said and thank you for taking your time out of your day to read this",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18247,7,"This is a story about patience, one day my friende tells me hey did you ever be patient. I told him no I have never in my life been pacients, well you should he told me. One day my frend is telling my new game is coming out and I just talk why he was talking I can tell that he did not like it at all, so in class I am telling every one that I won him in race. But I had no patients on me so I stoted complaining to him I said I won and he said you have no patienc and it kepted going on and on. Then my other friend said stop it right now! I am sick and tired of this you have no patients and you lost @NUM1 game! Ok some time we all have complained in are life! Just stop fighting please. So the next day I said do you have eny thing to tell me I will listen better now. I learnd that I should listen to what people have to say then talk that will get are friend ship to the next leveal.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 643,1,"Today more than @PERCENT1 of our population spends expensive amounts of time each day on the computer. I agree that having a computer in your home is benficial at time, but to me the disadvantages outway the advantages of spending to much time on a computer. Disadvantages such as cyber bullying, illegal websites, the criminals that use the internet to target days, and the interference that spending to much time on the computer has with your grades and other school work. I think that largest number of people affected by spending to much time on the computer are kids. Mostly kids right name from school, drop there backpack, and instead of sitting at the kitchen table or study area to do homework, they sit right down in front of the computer. Then what happens to that homework? It usually doesnt get done. That absence of homework could make an enourmous decline on a students average. However, homework is not the only school work effected by the computer. Even in school kids use internet on their cell phones. This provides a huge distraction for kids and usually ends up with the result of kids not completing the task asigned to them. Not getting work done is not the problem. Computer presents to kids through. It also helps with bullying; cyber bullying. Alot of kids are bullied and picked on the school but then that bullying carries itself to the childs home threw the computer. Once at home a kid can get hurtful emails or instant messages. These hurtful messages @MONTH1 do a lot more than just hurt someone feelings, it can hurt their self asteem and how they feel about themselves. Then as if cyber bullying and not doing homework werent bad enough. there are also criminals on the computer. These criminals prey on kids. They can find passwords to accounts. They can find out personal information about yoo because of how much time on the computer each day. Once they find out enough about you they use to it gain your trust and the problem only escalades from there. Although many kids are affected by the amount of time they spend on the computer each day, there not the only ones. Adults are affected just as much and just as easily. One thing that lvers adults in to spending all their time on the computer is all the ""great deals"" they can find on the computer. But many of these great deals come from fake or illegal websites. Websites that are selling stolen merchandise. Then show you all the benefits from buying from them and then once you believe them and buy what they are selling, they have all of your personal information. From their you can end up with an empty bank account or even identity theft. Does that realy sound a ""great deal?"" @CAPS1 to me the disadvantages of having a computer definetly out way the advantages of having a computer. I think that people need to step away from the computer desk, get good grades, avoid bullying and criminals. Keep there bank acounts full and there identity safe. Instead they should spend time outdoors, with family: or enjoying life!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4377,2,"I believe that not all books should be banned, but some books should. For example their are many good books that are banned because it @MONTH1 have a little bit of cussing in them but I believe that is ok, I mean it isn't like the child wouldn't hear the same words maybe even worse if he turned on his @CAPS1. But if a book talks about certain things it should be banned, such as hate against other races, or it talks negatively about someones religion. For example I read a very famous book called The @CAPS2 of @PERSON3 by @PERSON4. This was a very good book but for some reason it was banned in my @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS4 so I couldn't check it out. I had to go to the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 to get it. I don't understand what is so wrong with The @CAPS2 of @PERSON3 that it is banned by @ORGANIZATION2. This book @MONTH1 talk of a mischevious youngster who runs away, does alot of differnt crazy activites, and even smokes but this is no worst then what we are exposed too on @CAPS1. If I was a administrator in a @ORGANIZATION1 I would look at what is the meaning behind the book and what it is trying to express. For example if a book is offensive to some one for instance a book written by the @PERSON1, this piece shouldn't be aloud on the shelve. But if it is a book about the @CAPS7 @CAPS8 and the @ORGANIZATION3's view on slavery this would be ok. Because the @PERSON2 book is more hate than anything it is for instance promoting the @PERSON2 and that isnt right. But the book on the @CAPS7 @CAPS8 and the @ORGANIZATION3's view on slavery is a part of our history it shows differnt ways of thinking of the time that we don't really know if they were right or wrong it is just what they believed. So my point I am trying to express in this piece is that don't hate a book because maybe the language in it or the events in it @MONTH1 not be what you agree with but judge the book because of the message that it is trying to express.Hopefully you will agree with me in this. But if a book talks about certain things it should be banned, such as hate against other races, or it talks negatively about someones religion. I have expressed my opinion on this matter I hope you agree with me and can maybe convince the @ORGANIZATION1 that they need to take a second look at what kind of books we keep on our shelves and what kind of books we take off our shelves.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7232,3,"The feature of a setting can affect a cyclist energy. In the setting turns irds hills, it can every this Cyclist out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1513,1,"Dear local newspaper, I am writing to tell you I think that computers are a good thing because they let people communicate, tons of people haves jobs because of computers and People have help with homework because of computers. People communicate by email and aim and facebook and everything else. People have jobs on computers like cortreporters and tax-retelers and sales people. Lastley kids do homework on the computer and look up stuff ""@CAPS1 related"" on the computer and the other stuff like that. lastley I think computers are good for people, they help with education, work and comunication with friends and family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 466,1,"Computers have a good effect on people because they can teach people hand eye coordinating events in history and about other cultures and they are a great way to relax and just have fun. Computers teach hand eye coordinator by training your hand to go where your brain tells it to and where your eyes show it. Hand eye coordination is very important. It can help people drives it decreases reaction time and it can help people write more neatly. If it can help a driver turn his wheel faster or hit his break I think that hand eye coordination could help that driver stay out of an accident. Think of a climber trying to grab a on a mountain. He would be able to see it, grab it, and himself up quicker than before. Most people don't know things like how many soldiers were on @CAPS1 @CAPS2 or how many countries there are in the world. The internet is a great place to find out about history world other things you wan't to know A lot of americans don't know @LOCATION2 history alone world history. You can google anything you want from when the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 ended to when the @LOCATION1 collapsed in @DATE1. You can also learn either interesting and useful things like food recipes the contents in paints. Or you could just be keeping up with the need on yahoo.com. Computers are a lot of fun. You can talk with friends, listen to music, play games or do all three at the same time. That's just scratching the you miss your favorite show @TIME1? There are hundreds of websites that will let you watch it for free. Did you want to hear your favorite bands new album? You can listen to it legally and free on youtube.com playlist.com and many more websites. Between learning about other cultures and just having fun, the computer can be a great for interactive with friends and family improve hand eye coordination or learn something new.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13337,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is [Love] … I feel this is true because in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I have been grateful to my parents for there love and sacrifice. Another reason is in paragraph @NUM2, it says ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and the love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally gratefull). And the final reason is in paragraph @NUM3 It says ""It was here where I learned the true definition of ""family"" And for this, I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15244,6,"Besides The facts That docking dirigibles on a mooring mast on The empire State building would cost over @MONEY1 and add a lot of Stress to the buildings frame, Smith wanted to pursue his dream.Unfortunatly, he couldn't do that. There are @NUM1 big reasons. in paragraph @NUM2 it says most dirigibles are too flammable. That's because they use hydrogen rather than helium. Just like the German dirigible Hindenburg, which was destroyed in fire in New Jersey. paragraph @NUM2 says docking The dirigibles is plain dangerous because The Wind would cause them to @CAPS1 all over, Rather than being docked on The ground and being weighed down. Lastly, It wasn't legal. Paragraph @NUM4 states ""... an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. was another practical reason."" The dirigibles would not be high enough in The air to be legal, and it was highly dangerous because pedestrians below.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15961,6,"There were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow derigibles to dock there. In the excerpt the author states nature is one of the biggest problems for the mast. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" The author explains that the wind on top of the buildings are dangerous for the dirigible. ""The winds on top of the buildings were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". The author also describes what the dirigible would do as an affect of the wind. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Those were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow derigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 2986,2,"The idea of the removal of 'offensive' material from libraries is understandable. Some believe that this material is not appropriate for anyone to view. However, because we all have different opinions on what is offensive, I believe that books found to be offensive should not be removed from the shelves of the library. First, I believe that if this policy were to be in effect in libraries, there would not be many books left on the shelf. Offensive is a relative word. What @MONTH1 be offensive to one person @MONTH1 not be to another. Every has a different opinion on different matters based on their beliefs and life experiences. Many books have things people disagree with, but expressing this is a part of freedom of speech. Therefore, if everyone complained that they found a certain book or movie to be offensive, there would hardly be anything left, as Katherine Paterson said. The purpose of a library is to provide the people who go to the library a resource. If the sources were censored in such a way, it would be hard to get information. Sometimes, it is beneficial, even, to read an opposing view or side to have more knowledge on a certain topic and see things from a different perspective. However, some books @MONTH1 not be entirely appropriate to certain people. For example, some material in the library @MONTH1 not be best for small children to read or view. In this case, I do not necessarily feel that they should be removed from the shelves rather than placed in an area these children do not have access to. Having books, music, movies, or magazines removed from the shelves if they are found to be offensive is in my opinion, a ridiculous notion. It hinders expression. People have different opinions about what is offensive to them and it would be very boring if everyone thought the same. If someone finds something particularly offensive, I believe they just should not view it",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18500,7,I was patient when it was my birthday and I didn’t get anything. I thought I would get at least one thing but I got nothing. I didn’t do anything wrong but still I got nothing. The next day I got nothing I didn’t ask for anything but I still got nothing. The next day I got nothing. But that night while it was skating at skate port @NUM1 got nothing. Like at @TIME1 I saw my cousin and she gave me @MONEY1 for my birthday. I thought that everyone forgot but I was wrong. I was so happy too. I had to be patient in order to get something and don’t have to ask for something.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7029,3,"At the beginning of the ride, the cyclist is feeling good and strong and the day as well as the journey, is just beginning. The sun begins to beat down on the cyclist but he remains upbeat, still feeling good and barely noticing the heat. When he arrives at an old rusty water pump, he feels disappointed and tastes a liquid that resembles “battery acid.” The terrain begins to feel like more of a hill, which makes the struggle even worse. The cyclist is drinking water more now, and is becoming tired. He comesto a rough road and says, “sometimes life can feel so cruel,” which lets the reader know he is feeling the negative affects of what he presumed to be a nice bike ride, a snake blocks his path and he becomes dehydrated. The cyclist feels refreshment and relief at a sign for a fish camp, and his thirst is replenished when he takes a satisfying gulp of water in the restroom. The water is a feature @NUM1 the setting that refreshes the cyclist, while the hot sun, rough terrain, and unknown area are features that make the cyclist feel lost and tired.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15103,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Obstacles they faced were the strength of the framework, Safety of the dirigibles, @CAPS1 nature, and a law. The first obstacle, framework, wasn't too hard overcome, it cost @MONEY1 to strengthen it in order to support the mast and a blimp. The second obstacle was safety, on May 6, 1937 the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire due to the highly flammable gas hydrogen which is used in dirigibles. This accedent could have been much worse if it occured above a highly populated area like New York. The third obstacle was @CAPS1 nature, the violent air currents on top of the Empire State Building made it close to impossible to dock a dirigible to the mast. By using led weights to weigh down the back of the blimp would be neither practical nor safe hanging high above pedestrians. The final and forth obstacle builders faced was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal to even attempt docking to the mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17973,7,"Last @DATE1 I went to @CAPS1 @CAPS2. And we drove for hours! O my go she butt hort! We got there and there were no packing spots, so we went to the back back lot! but then I was excited we were walking towards the park I was the wicked twister and surprised my @CAPS3 asked me to pick the first ride I said the wicked twister so we got in and I looked at the line for the wicked twister and guess what it took @NUM1 minutes to get on the ride I was so patient that day and then we cut the corner and there was like @NUM2 more people! So that day I rode almost all the rides in the park and ate a whole @NUM3 pound burgers fries and a shake! So theres my story about my patience!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3447,2,"Throughout the world, there are thousands of people with various opinions. If one person thinks an art piece looks unique, another @MONTH1 not see any true beauty. But when people hardly underdstand the concept of other people, they should not be exposed to books or movies that could be defined as offensive. Some people don't know @CAPS2 it is like to be truely offended. When I was in middle school, I was a shy, fragile, young girl. I had just moved to a new school and was petrified of my new surroundings. For the first couple of weeks, I felt like an outcast; like an outsider looking in. I didn't fit in with anyones' group. Everyone seemed to of already have friends for years and here I was, a new student with no friends to communicate with. I was isolated and was desperately trying to find someone to be my friend. I wondered if something was wrong with me; if I has a bad odor or was dressed in an out of style fashion. I tried buying new clothes and changing my hair color. It seemed as if I wasn't even noticed. Before I new it, school was half way over. I was still a nobody. Then @PERSON1 came along and made me a somebody. @PERSON1, who had just moved to my school, looked bold and confident. At first, people waved a friendly hello but nothing more. As I sat at my empty lunch table, @PERSON1 approached me and asked to sit down. I couldn't refuse the offer so I nodded a sincere yes. The entire lunch period, we sat talking. We had a lot in common and I was glad to have made a friendship with @PERSON1. Months went by before I realized @PERSON1 and I were great friends. I knew I could trust him with all of my secrets. Even though @PERSON1 and I were close, I felt as though @CAPS3 was always hiding something. Occasionally I would have enough courage to ask if there was anything @CAPS3 needed to tell me, but as the same as every answer before, it was a no. @PERSON1 and I had always walked to my house after school. But on one afternoon, something felt wrong. The air seemed to lingere for miles. We didn't talk until we got inside my house. Suddenly @PERSON1 spoke and said, '@CAPS1 are people so cruel?' I was shocked by this question for I didn't know how to respond. @PERSON1 sensed that I had no clue @CAPS2 @CAPS3 was talking about so @CAPS3 continued. 'I'm gay.' I was appalled. Not because @CAPS3 was gay, but because @CAPS3 had never told me. I asked, '@CAPS2 happened?' @CAPS3 sat on the couch then and told me about how @CAPS3 was in the library overhearing some of our classmates reading a book about people making fun of gays'. I felt awful for @PERSON1. It wasn't his fault @CAPS3 was gay. I believe that certain books, movies, or music that are offensive to people should not be aloud on shelves. Some have never been offended. Some, always offend people for many reasons. Everyone has feelings and it hurts when they are offended. We, as a community, should love one another and respect them. Not read or listen to things that can hurt someones' inner feelings",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9162,4,The author concludes this story with this paragraph because the symbolism of this paragraph tells that when every thing returns to normol and the “geese return and this hibiscus is budding that I will take that test again.” meaning she will be willing to move again and try to adapt.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12606,5,The mood of the author of the story is happy and sad. Happy because he is so grateful to have had parents like he did/does and sad because all of his childhood wasn't great but having a family made it happy and it made it seem more like a home and where his family should be,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19563,7,"A few weeks ago, we had a garage sale and a mom to mom sale. I had to be patient because of the customers that were driving by or the mom to mom sale when we had to wait for people to come to our table. At the garage sale I had a lemonade sale. Out of both sales we made a lot of money but, still we had to take some stuff home and donate it. The sales were fun but, we had to go through it all and, price it. So we just sat there but, sometimes I was happy because the people had bought the stuff we had a lot of fun doing a mom to mom sale and a garage sale! I think that we did pretty god! We did sell some stuff but, some of it we still had left to pack up and take home to donate. We hadto do a whole lot of work but I liked it a lot!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 264,1,"Dear editor, @CAPS1 do you do all day? The answer to that would probably be sit down in front @ORGANIZATION1 a computer all day. My friends say that this is very unhealthy, research as proven it and my mom has had experience with the computers. This just isn't healthy for our envierment and people. @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION1 my friends say that computers are a waste @ORGANIZATION1 time. Most people who interact on the computer all day don't have a stable diet or even a good excersice ruinte. They say that all the junk kids and grown-ups acumulate in their daily life is unhealthy and will never go away unless they get up. They also say that without excersice our country will be filled with over weight people. Dr. @ORGANIZATION1 has done extensive research and has proven that computers are bad for you. @PERSON1 has gone all over the country to talk to people, and he specifically stresses that more people should get out and enjoy the nature but, no their sitting in front @ORGANIZATION1 a computer which is not good for them. He's taught people that @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION1 the time if you get out and have fresh air your life will be so much better. My mom has had experience with computers and asures me that when she was younger you couldn't just sit there and not get out. She says that it's important to interact with your family and friends so you keep a stable relationship. Talking to your family will keep them intact with @CAPS1's going on in your life and hanging out with your friends will help with having more @ORGANIZATION1 a life without your household. She says any kid who does sit in front @ORGANIZATION1 a computer all day should be disappointed @ORGANIZATION1 themsleves. Editor you've done a wonderful job since you've taken the job! So, I feel that if you stress the point in your next newspaper about not having computers all the time you should always excersice like my friends say, the research as taught to enjoy your nature and my mother says to interact with your family and friends. I'm sure your next article will be a wonderful dream to people stating facts.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7017,3,"The feature of the cyclist was very good “it erodding to who he say in paragraph @NUM1 @CAPS1”. I would describe it as a fun. It also looks this time was one of his bes time. Here are some examples he is happy, competive, and thin is full. I’m going to explain my examples. First, he looks hoppy becaus in the story he said “the morning with strong legs and smile on my face. the phase can to you how hoppy he felt. My second example was competive, he seems like a competive person, bcouse he is very heathy and lead to to take a ride from the bike. My third example is the way he is becasse he soid ""As easily as sounding bond, my trouble, thirst and fears were all behind me the part made me feel. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18243,7,"During the @DATE1, my mom broke her wrist while we were riding our bikes down a trail. At the end of the trail mom turned a corner too fast and flipped over her handle bars. I didn’t know her had broken her wrist until she stood up and told me. When she told me I froze, no one has ever had a broken bone in my family before so I didn’t know what to do. Mom calmly told me we had to walk our bikes to the car, since we got to the trail by car. As we walked our bikes toward the car mom didn’t say anything like how much pain she was in or anything. When we got to the car I had to put the bikes in the backseat. Now to those who don’t know, bikes are a bit heavy and putting them in a backseat of a car is a bit hard. Also when your mom has a broken bone and is in alot of pain, and the bikes won’t go in the backseat the situation can get rather stressful. My mom saw that I was getting upset and told me to calm down and directed me on how to put the bikes in. After that mom told me to get her glasses that we accidentally left on the trail. I ran as fast as I could to get her glasses, but they were broken by the fall. So I ran all the way back to the car and since we had the same eyesight I gave her my glasses. My mom needed glasses because since I’m not to yet she had to drive herself to the emergency room, and she did so without complaint. When we got to the emergency room we had to wait a while before anyone would see us. I was freaking out, but mom was actually telling jokes on how she got hurt doing something healthy like exercise. I admire my mom for her patience and calmness in a situation like that. She didn’t once complain or whine about the pain she was in. she didn’t yell at me when I was taking a while putting the bikes in the car. While I was pretty much about to hyper ventalate right there and then. She was calmly telling me it was okay and helping me move along. It was as if I was the one who got hurt and she was being the mother as always and taking me to the emergency room. I know for a fact that I wouldn’t have handled the situation that well if I broke my wrist. I know that I would’ve been crying and wanting someone to just hurry up and help me. I’m amazed at my mom’s understanding and tolerance. I hope I can achieve that too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19024,7,A time when I was patient was when I went to a skate compition in @CAPS1 the registration line was almost by @CAPS2 I stood there for almost an hour but when I got up there & paid my fee it was all worth it because I got to compete against my best friends.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9812,4,"The author concluded the story like that because she was being positive. Like the geese are coming back she is positive that she can take the test again. She knows that she will pass the test. In the story she said “Many things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet reptition of season upon season, almost familiar to hernow” This means that when she had just moved here she thought that everything was strange because, she have not seen anything like this before. Now as she is living here to would get use to it because, she knows what will happen nothing will become strange to her anymore since this is her home now",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21273,8,"Most people think that laughter helps you live longer, love longer, and show who you really are. I believe all of that is true, laughter is one of the most important things a person can do. In my life laughter has helped me threw the hardest situations and made them a lot better. You can laugh a lot with friends, family, or people you barely even know. Laughing can mend relationships and help you get threw anything, in my life i have found that out many times.My mother and myself haven't always had the best relationship, we don't always get along, and since i have a severe separation anxiety from her we spend a lot of time together which can cause friction from being together too much. There was a certain time when we had just gotten into a fight about me wanting to go somewhere and her not letting me, i was expecting her to be mad at me for awhile for how rude i was being. We didn't talk for a couple hours and tried to stay away from each other, we would only talk to each other if it was really important. After a couple days of this going on i went into her room to talk to her about it all, when we talked i understood why she was so mad at me and i apologized and left her room, but i could still feel that there was some tension between us. I wanted to make things better more then i have ever wanted anything, i wasn't really sure if she was ready to get over this fight, so i thought it would be better to give her some space and let her come to me when she was ready to talk. We both tried to stay away from each other for the rest of the day trying to cool off and really think about what we were truly mad about. The next day we went to go do somethings around town, some grocery shopping and to see some family. In the beginning we didn't really talk much or anything. Within an hour of us leaving the house and having our alone time together we were joking around and laughing at everything each other said. After our errands we went out to lunch, it was the funnest time i had ever had with my mom, we talked about everything and laughed and had an amazing time. The days after that were wonderful also, we spent a lot of time together and felt like we didn't want to leave each other, i know that laughing together and talking really helped with that, we opened up to each other like we never had before. I love my mother and care for her more then anyone in the world, when we got into that fight i was scared out relationship would never be the same again, we were able to work it out by laughing. I honestly think that laughter can cure anything, from a broken heart to a broken family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15685,6,"People involved in the design and construction of the Empire State Building were faced with a few major obstacles in attempting to transform the idea of docking dirigibles to reality. One of the biggest complications was that if a massive dirigible was tied to the building by a ""cable tether"" then stress would be put on the building's frame. The builders and architects had to find a way to allow the stress to travel down the foundation of the building. They spent over @MONEY1 modifying the framework (From paragraph @NUM1). In paragraph @NUM2 we read that the architects and builders worked through the obstacle of storage by putting the winches and control machinery in the base of the shaft of the ""conical roof"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14983,6,"The Empire state building faced several major problems in making a station for diridgibles to dock. One is, that at that time there was a law prohibiting airships of any kind landing/docking in a residential area, never mind a densely populated city. There will were also many issues with practicalities with the mast, if it was even constructed. It would have been a huge hassle to get the huge airships docked, and keeping them there, never mind the extremely flammible hydrogen gas zeppelins were often filled with.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9851,4,Well I think the author concludes the story like that because he is showing her her attitude better known now she is changing so she is going to put her mind to whatever she has to do and she is going to take the test again with some pride and try in the spring when the snow goes away.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21438,8," Many people love to laugh and others just don't like it as much. I'm one of those people who love laughing and will laugh when my @CAPS1 tell a very good joke. I believe that it's important to laugh because it just feels good, it makes you feel that everything is going okay. With the people that you can laugh the most with are obviously your @CAPS1. When you are feeling down who is there to support you, your @CAPS1 are, and what they try to do is to make you laugh. My best friend @PERSON3 and I have the tendency to always laugh, especially if we have a class together it's all about laughter. We have fun in class, we do pay attention but we just make it interesting and we just laugh so much that it can distract others. Our teacher from sophomore year @PERSON1 always told us that we're very giggly and that it was a good thing. She also told us that she had never seen anyone laugh so much in her class. For example that year we were studying vocabulary and when @PERSON3 and I saw the word countenance we started laughing so much because it means the face and it reminded us about the tv show @CAPS1. Every time that word came up during that week we would laugh so hard that our stomachs started to hurt. Her face would turn as red as a tomato and I just couldn't even say a word. Even now that we're juniors we still remember that and we just start laughing so hard that it gets to the point that if I'm standing up I will let myself drop to the floor and move my feet as if i was kicking something. Now that's when my @CAPS1 start laughing more because they say I'm hilarious. @PERSON3 and I are the kind of people that if something is very boring to us there has to be a way to make it fun. Some teachers appreciate that we actually have fun in their class but others just don't like it at all. Like last year in @CAPS2 @CAPS3 our teacher @PERSON2 completely freaked out because @PERSON3 and I were laughing. We were paying attention but we only laughed when we were doing our work but he didn't like it. To us that class was extremely boring and we just made it fun but @PERSON2 decided to make a sitting chart. Well you would think that by having a sitting chart @PERSON3 and I wouldn't talk or laugh at all but that didn't happen. That didn't stop her or me from talking to the people around us. We would talk to them and we made class fun. When he thought that we weren't paying attention he would ask us questions and we answered them correctly. Even though @PERSON3 and I were sitting far away from each other we would move our hands around until we got each others attention and then we just started laughing because we looked funny doing all of that without saying a word. Every day when my @CAPS1 and I eat lunch at school at our usual spot we're always laughing. People that don't really know me think I'm crazy or weird but I say that I'm just myself and that I'm very optimistic. @PERSON3 and I say ""@CAPS4 sad panda's today"" we say that when we see that one of our @CAPS1 is quiet or looks sad. The most weirdest thing is that when @PERSON3 and I laugh at the same time it sounds like one laugh. The first time we realized that we had the same laugh we just started laughing even more that we couldn't even breathe. It's important to laugh because it feels so good and you feel relieved even if you're having a really bad day, like health teachers say it takes more muscles to frown then to smile.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3423,2,"'Should libraries censor reading material's to students at school.'That is a yes an no quistion because reading is good for people of all age's its just is the topic suitable for certain age group. Yes, I do think they should censor reading material, But to an exstent they need to have books for kids at certain age groups. like have sections for young kids then teens and then adults. if the child wants t read more graphic material then they must have pramission from their parent. the reason i say that is there are things that get published by authord that are ment to be read by certain people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 995,1,"I think computers are good, because some people dont have phones so @CAPS1 a good way to conect with people you know, also meet new people. Second some people are going to collage when there done with high school so you could just look on the computers and find one you like and pricess, also find ways there. Third reason is ahopping if a holiday is coming up you could check online and find stuff for cheap and nice to you. You could also order it to your house online if you dont got alot of time to go shopping. @CAPS1 some reasons why I think online is good you could chat, find places and pricess, collages and also shop online @CAPS1 why online is good.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21329,8,"My story about laughter is going to be a true story about me. This story is about my trip to the doctors. I love to play sports always have, always will. Iv been playing football for about @NUM1 years now and iv never been hurt, except one pracitce. It was in @NUM2 grade. My football team always does one hitting drill once a week. The drill is called truck and trailer. Its where you have @NUM3 people. Two people on offence and two peole on defense. The two people on offence are trying to score and the two people on defence are trying to stop them. Of course I get stuck with running the ball and not to mention the worst person on the whole team blocking for me. This kid couldn't do anything on the football field other then keep the bench warm. The two biggest and best hitters were on defence trying to kill me. I knew that this was going to be bad. All I could do was run fast, so i do. My coach (my dad) hikes the ball and I take off. Soon enough they catch up with me and take me off my feet. One went high and the other went low. I hit the ground and stayed down. I hear my teammates start screaming. I thought it was because i got ''cracked"". I thought wrong. I sit up and my knee kinda hurts. I look at it and it looks like rubber. My leg was pointing the opposite way that it's supposed to go. Iv only seen a brake like that on tv and youtube. My dad doesnt hesitate too call @NUM4. The ambulance came to the field @NUM5 minutes later. They came down to the field and put my on a strecher. My team wasnt the only team that used that field. About @NUM5 other teams practiced at the same time. All eyes were on me. And on my leg. The other teams didnt know what happened except that they had a big ice back on my private area. All my friends thought I hurt my man parts. It was embarrasing and funny at the same time. When they all found out it was my leg they still woud make fun of me. I had horrible nicknames for a long time. It wasnt fun for me and especially not funny. But all my friends thought it was hilasious.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10574,4,"The author includes this in the paragraph to simply be sarcastic for you to know that it is almost impossible for Saeng to take the test afresh. I say this because she was being very sarcastic meaning she’s not going to take the test. For example, if someone were to tell me take a test and I said whenever @LOCATION1 is president again, then I’ll take the test. That would be very sarcastic meaning that it wont happen and I’m not taking the test, instead of just saying No. The author included that just to let you know that the chances of her taking the test is very low. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6435,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist. For example, on page @NUM1, Kurmaskie said “ I got down on my hands working the hande of the rusted water pump with all my strength” that shows desperation due to the lack of water.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3035,2,"Many pepole think that offensive material should be removed from the libary because children could pick then up and look in them. I do not belive this should be done. They already have a childrens section if a child looks in a inappropiate book outside of the childrens section then its thier fault. I do not think it should inconvience someone to have to go elsewhere to get that cd,game,book, or movie they were looking for. It is very hard to come across a inapropiate book without looking for it on purpose. It could be a book used for teaching health or nursing class and is not meant to be inapropiate at all. These are a few things you should consider when choosing a side on this debate. Who knows we might have to vote on it someday",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14927,6,"The builders of the empire state building could not dock dirigibles because of the building's structure, the winds pushing the dirigibles, and public safety. The structure could not handle the swaying dirigible becacse of the winds pushing the back side. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used Hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. this quote shows how dangerous it would be to put a large flammable dirigible over new york and the people in new york.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21032,8,"The @CAPS1 is @CAPS2 @CAPS3 great grandmother once told me that laughing adds and extra five years onto your life, she's currently @NUM1 years old. Laughing can bring a new element to relationships; they embark on a journey, whether it be between two friends, family members, or something more. More or less, laughter is an essential piece. Sometimes you feel closer to people because it breaks down that barrier between what defines acquaintance and friends, but that's actually how I met one of @CAPS3 good friends. The incoming @CAPS11 were participating a traditional ritual (name game) that the high school puts the incoming @CAPS11 through at orientation. They were placing us in long lines that faced each other. For this particular game you had to shake hands and share your first and last name with your partner along with one interesting fact about yourself. Unsurprisingly, everyone found this task ridiculous and embarrassing, but we were able to laugh if off. A whole new feeling overcame the room. That overwhelming and uneasy feeling simply floated away and all because of laughter. It broke that barrier and allowed us to open up. I guess it really is true that ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" @CAPS4 back some of @CAPS3 best friendships were brought up through laughter. When I joined the cross country team for instance, the whole team unlike most other sports teams was like one big family. We share socks, @CAPS5-@CAPS6, tee shirts, shorts, water, sometimes even our watches, but we've also shared a great amount of laughs. Even while we run we talk to our friends and joke around, but trust that laughing while running is not easy! I think @CAPS3 best memory of it all was when we had our ""@CAPS7 @CAPS8 @CAPS9"". The entire team of eighteen @CAPS7 or so met up at @LOCATION1's house about a week before districts. The @CAPS10 had to bring snack foods, @CAPS11 had to bring drinks, and @CAPS12 brought the candy, and the @CAPS13 all chipped in for the ""main ingredient"". That first bit of the @CAPS8 was alright, but all were in anticipation for that hour hand to strike twelve. When it did, we were @CAPS9. The ""main ingredient"" to that @CAPS8 was the toilet paper. We were going @CAPS9 on a tee-pee raid! The first event was forking the coaches lawn; but not with just any old forks, these forks were special. For some reason the coach had this odd obsession with @CAPS14, so in spite of that a few of the @CAPS7 photo shopped his head onto the bodies of lawn @CAPS14. I was in pure amazement and not laughing was impossible. I don't think I ever could have @CAPS16 up with something so clever. After that little stop we were onto the main event, the tee-peeing. We tried to tee-pee one of the brother's from the team, but there dad had already been waiting up. The other pair of brother's were next. All the cars slowly approached the culdesac, we lowered the the radios and shut off all the headlights. Just to be safe, everybody made sure to park at least four houses away and left all the doors open for a quick escape. Almost synchronized, everybody threw there first roll towards the the big tree on the side of the house. We kept missing and the rolls were would fall back down and unravel into the street, one could have called us the worst tee-peers ever. Then all of a sudden three figures came bolting @CAPS9 on skateboards with their own rolls of toilet paper yelling, ""@CAPS15! Get back here you forgot something!"". We were being ambushed! Sprinting back, we just barely made it to the cars. Still, something just didn't feel right. There was just this eerie feeling, like being in a horror movie. Then; suddenly, as we began to drive away, something big hit the car. In panic, @ORGANIZATION1 stopped the car and had to get @CAPS9 to make sure nobody had been hit. ""@CAPS16 get your toilet paper!"", a deep voice yelled. All the @CAPS7 started screaming in terror. What was going to happen now? What was even going on? Were we going to be killed? No,and fortunately we weren't killed that @CAPS8! In relief we discovered that it was only @PERSON1, @PERSON2, and @LOCATION2, but I might as well have had a heart attack. Instantaneously, the whole group burst @CAPS9 in laughter and I had been laughing so hard that I began to cry. I've ever laughed so much or so hard in @CAPS3 life and I'll ever forget it. Laughter @MONTH1 not have brought just two people together, but nearly twenty. When districts came and passed, I know everyone was sad to see the season @CAPS16 to a close. It was the @CAPS13 last season and nobody wanted to see them leave; but all the great times we had will never be lost, and bonds are @CAPS2. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7170,3,I believe the first photograph closely relates to the story ”As worry” because the authors son suffs a lot. And it shows what he and his friends @MONTH1 look like. Also it shows the surf boards emphasizing there surfers. That is what I believe about the first picture. The second are only relate a little cause it has a surfer surfing. So in conclusion the first photograph is moreaccurate to the story than the second photo.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10182,4,What Saeng means at the end of the paragraph is that where it is a seasson for those plants she will take the test again. The test to begin to like like the plot. Like features and characters about. Also the history about these plants. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 475,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 technology continues to become more and more enhanced so has the percentage of americans who use computers. @PERCENT1 of those americans, are children from the ages of @NUM1 to @NUM2. Most teens use the computer to interact with friends on social sites or spend a good chunck of their home playing online games. But what about the other teens; the ones who are constantly facing cyber bullying or are put in dangers way by talking to people they don't even know? To prevent these issues, I say we put a limit on our use of technology. Social sites, such @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and facebook, have been growing at an alarming rate. More teens would rather be on the computer than outside playing tag or on a swingset. I, myself, have an @CAPS2, facebook, and @CAPS3 and it's prevented me from getting exercise becaose it's almost like i'd rather be talking to my friends than going for a jog. It bothers me, it really does, but there is one question I always risk myself; how do I stop? I've been going on runs, studying more, and spending time with my family. There's ways and reasons to stop being so attached to technology, we just don't know how to get the message spread. Other than the affects social sites and exercise has had because of computers, online gaming is also a big issue too. Many kids, not mostly boys, to what I see at school are absolutely loving online gaming. But the only people that actually benefits in life are the website owners. These games are not educational, it's not a good why to spend a couple of hours of your time. So generally it's a waste. More important things should be done during this time like studying or doing homework. Just think, you could even hangout with friends doring that time rather than sharing on a monitor. Although computer gaming is a big reason why kids go on the computer, bullying is a huge factor along with stranger danger on chats. If, you're someone who's bullied constantly at school, you think being able to go home and spend time on the computer is amazing; until bulling came along. Cyber bullying can lead to a child working themselves, getting fights at school or even worse, someone's like taken because they didn't think it was worth living. Limited computer use or parental control would really help prevent this. Computer usage has its ups and downs,but my point is safety, health, and education, one the main issues we face because of modern technology. I'd like to hear that my letter to your newspaper was read. Please get back to me with your thoughts on this issue within the next three days by email.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14966,6,"In the excerpt ""The @CAPS1 Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle that the builders faced was safety. In paragraph @NUM1, it was said that ""most dirigibles from outside of the @CAPS2 used hydrogen rather than helium"", now hydrogen is highly flammable. In paragraph @NUM2, it states that ""if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around"", now thats niether practical nor safe. If the ship is tied, the back should be stable. The last obstacle that the builders faced was a law against airships flying too low. In paragraph @NUM3, it applies that ""this law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"". Though some ships did attempt to reach the building, there was no success in that.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12152,5,"The mood that the author, Narciso Rodriguez, created in the memoir was a feeling of unity and happiness. He explained his life, home, family, and parents. He said that, ""family"", was a great thing in that he learned the real definition. He said that he is most grateful for his caring and selfnassless parents. Narisco wrote about how you don't have to be a blood relative, to be family. He said that he is also grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. He said they showed him their lives and those teachings have been the basis of his life. He talked about his culture and how the heart of his home is his kitchen. He loves cooking and his parents taught him how to cook. He also said that in his neighborhood, cultures came together and there was unity and friendship. That was the mood created by the author in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10603,4,"The author concluded this story for a internal adjust. Saeng's memories are expressed through the one at the hibiscus. The spring is a season where everything is fresh and new. As by spring, Saeng's hope would be restored and thriving, when the budding hibiscus, and the will have the ability to try at the test again with more strength and inspiration. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4610,2,"The problem in this situation is that, some people feel like some things shouldn't be in the library. I don't believe that some things that are on the library shelfs should be taken off. I think that because everyone has a different kinda of 'offensive' for their families. One family might be okay with their child watching certain movie, listening to different kinds of usic, and reading differnt genre's of books. If you took them off then people wouldn't be able to express things the way they want to. PLus the library would lose service because people would being to realize that some particular library(s) have restrictions on stuff that they have on their shelfs, so they wouldn't want to go there if they're going to be let down on something that their looking for",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9105,4,"Why I think she added this is because she needs time to grow like the plant before she takes the test again. Sometimes you need more time to pass your test. going through school teaches more than stuff we need to know it helps us grow up, and how to understand life. I know myself as a tenth grader that I understand life more than I did in first. She still has a lot of growing mentaly about her past and preasnt.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8892,4,"The author concluded the story with that specific paragraph because Saeng feels most comfortable taking the test again when what she explained happens. Saeng misses where she came from alot. She promised herself that she would take the test again when that happens. With Saeng saying that it makes you wonder why she wont take the test again the snow melts, the geese return and the hibiscus is budding. It makes her feel really comfortable when that does happen.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10213,4,"The author concluded the last paragraph in the story ""winter Hibiscus"" to say that the narrator ""Saeng"" isn’t given up on her driving test",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 317,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 do people benefit from the use of computers. Some say that using computers rather than exercising and being outside is a bad thing. I personally believe that the use of computer technology is a good thing. Computers teach hand-eye cordination, help people learn, and allow people to communicate with others. The use of computers teach hand-eye cordination and reaction time. Some say that being outside and exercising is better than using a computer but many computer games help hand-eye cordination. Alter playing computer games more and more the time it takes for you to react to the game you are playing and hit the mouse button is very important. These skills could help you in the activities you take part in and every - day life, personally, I play a lot of @CAPS3 @NUM1, a computer gaming system. @CAPS3 has helped ny hand-eye cordination greatly and it has shown in the four sports that I play. Clearly, Computers can be very helpful and can help your hand - eye cordination. Computers can also help people learn in many ways. There is a lot of content on the internet that simply can't be in school. The ability to learn about foreign countries is a big part in learning as a student. I use the internet nearily every night to type my papers and find the information that I need. It has helped one as a student. Also, typing papers on computers is becoming the new @CAPS4 of hand writting. Teachers are beginning to require that school work is typed on a computer and printed. Documents can be saved do that they cannot be lost inlike a hard copy written by hand. Although many believe that using a computer is a waste of time, it can also help you stay organized. Many people have calenders in their computers that send you reminders on your schedule. Your computer is also where your data like music and pictures can be saved. Computers are also very useful for learning and organizational purposes. We can communicate with others using computers. People use computer technology to communicate everyday through @CAPS5, @CAPS6, and I-chat. If I need to know what our homework is or when practic is I use my computer to ask someone for the answer. Before I began communicating with my computer talking to others was much harder to do. Although many disagree with using computer technology, computers are often the way we communicate with foreign countries. When something happens overseas the first way we found out about it is a computer. It is essential for us to use computers to communicate with other nations. Clearly computers are importan for communication purposes, we must continue to use computers for multiple reasons. Although many disagree with the use of computers, there hand - eye, communications, and learning purposes are very important. Without computer technology we would function much differently. It is up to you to continue using computers. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6670,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by the people around the area of @LOCATION1. Taking advice from older people in open landed place can affect the cyclist.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15186,6,"Whenever architectural work is put in act, thoughts of the potential consequences should be thought out beforehand. In ""The Mooring Mast,"" the builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The blimps consist of dangerous chemicals and, ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium,"" and hydrogen is extremely flammable. A possibility of flames could result in a ruined building, and even worse, a destroyed city. Although fires were a problem to consider, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" This building is extremely high in the sky, therefore the winds get quite brutal. If a blimp was tied to the mast, the back of the ship continuously swivel and ruin the fabric of the aircraft. A mooring mast was just not a bright idea for a large city like New York. The population was too large, and the area was too crowded. The obstacles the architects faced were serious, and they helped the team to kill the idea of allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3077,2,"It seems you cannot always make everyone happy. No matter what, someone is offended or upset over something. This holds true with everything- including media. Whether it be a book, movie, or a song, someone somewhere will be unhappy with it for some reason. Though this is true, it certainly does not mean you can take that media away from those who enjoy it. The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 of the @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1 @CAPS3 @LOCATION1 that all people are granted freedom of speech and freedom of press. Would taking 'offensive' material off of shelves not take away from this right so clearly and intently given to us? Not only that, but does sheltering the public and making us all believe the world is a place without bias, prejudice, or slander really help us in the grand scheme of things? Pretending that the world is perfect ensures that future generations of the world will be devestated by reality once they get out in the real world and realize everything is not perfect and nice and unbiased all the time. My ninth grade year in high school, I read 'To @CAPS4 A @CAPS5' by @PERSON1. This book demonstrates the harsh prejudice that used to be normal in the @LOCATION4 during the earlier years of the @LOCATION1. This book could certainly be considered offensive by a person living in the southern @LOCATION1; one could say this book steriotypes people in the @LOCATION4. One could also say this book is offensive because of the language it uses. African-@CAPS6 could be offended by the explicit rascist comments and names within the pages. Despite this, 'To @CAPS4 A @CAPS5' is considered a classic and is praised and tought throughout the @LOCATION1 and the rest of the world. I grew from reading @PERSON1's masterpiece- it tought me a lot about where the @LOCATION1 has been and how far it has come with acceptance of other races. You learn from your mistakes, they say. Therefore, we can learn from the media's mistakes. We can grow as people from being offended or having offensive material brought to our attention. We can stop history from repeating itsself by being well-informed. Theology is a huge matter of dispute among all cultures; @CAPS9 or @CAPS10'ite, @LOCATION2, @CAPS11, @LOCATION3, @LOCATION5, @CAPS12. Any book store you walk into, you can find a bible or a book on atheism or even '@ORGANIZATION1,' which focuses on @CAPS13. Any music store you walk into, you can find bands that bash the ideas of religion, but you can also find theistic worship bands or meditating music. Just the same, any movie theater or movie store you visit could supply movies with anti-theistic or pro-theistic themes.Taking such things off of the shelves because one work could be offensive to a group of people could limit another's options to explore theology and find out what suits them. It could limit one's exploration of interests. It could very well take away from one's personal growth. In any case, it is unfair to take something that could be considered offensive to one person away from another just for the sake of being nice and having discretion. Putting a ban on certain works could harm the flow of society. Putting a ban on certain works could limit one's awareness of the world around them or the history they could potentially be inspired by, it could limit the expansion of one's intellect, it could take away from one's exploration of interests or the search of who they really are or want to be. It is best to just keep things the way they are- free.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19292,7,"One sunny after noon I was so waited because. I was going to see my faveret band. When I’m in school! My mom picked me up from thired gread I was so excited it was time to go. My dad droped my broter of at my grandma’s house (he was only at doy so he could not go.) I was bounsing of my seut “mom are we there yet?” I ask “@CAPS1 we have two more hou’re to we are there, then a nother hour, so we are going to see the place here.”mom said “@CAPS2, can I have my d.v.d please.” I side. So now it has been two hours I’v been in the car. Then we went every were my mom and dad wanted to go not were I wanted to. Then it was time to go see. The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5! When we aroved I was a little sleepy but that would not stop my. When they only plaed two song I want to sleep on the seet. I wated all day to see them and I went to see. That was a time I was patient to see my faveret band.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15288,6,"In the excerpt ""The mooring mast"" by marcia Amidon Lüsted. The @CAPS1 faced many obstacles. one of the obstacles was that the Back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Another obstacles was that the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. These were some of the obstacels the @CAPS1 faced.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13302,5,"The mood created by the author is a warm and meaningfull adviroment. They made there house have a Cuban feel to it. They have passionate Cuban music playing, and aromas from the kitchen. Anyone who needs to stay at a place, stays there. His parents moved here and left everything behind them, friends, family, and jobs. His mom and dad taught him that family and friends are the most important thing in your life. He said he learned the real meaning of family in his house and he says I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7462,3,"The features of his journey are cruel. “Rolling hills,” make him work harder to get over them. The more he works, the more he sweats and therefore he needs fluids to do so. The lack of water he has does not help. Poisonous don’t really bother him if he leaves alone. The condition of the roads adds on to the hills. Rough roads make him work hard to get through and then over the hills. So this guy is getting it pretty rough.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18426,7,One time when another person I know was patient was when my stood in line for over an hour to get the tickets for the show were going to see. This shows patintence because my did not complain while standing in line.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9954,4,"The author most likely concludes the story that way because that is the time that Saeng feels most comfortable. Saeng and her mom moved from Vietnam, were the winter Hibiscus are popular and familiar to Saeng. She ends the text in this maner because it remins Saeng about Vietnam, and how she feels better during that time of year. When she says “And beside it was yet another old friend.” She feels as if this plant is a friend to her and it makes her feel more comfortable. This is why the author ended the story in the manner that she did.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7609,3,"In ‘Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” a cyclist follows some bad advice, which leads him on a tough ride through the desert with little water. The setting has a large effect on the cyclist because it causes him to be dehydrated, which presents the main conflict of the story. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips,” the author states when his fresh water supply begins to run out. Another factor the setting presents to the cyclist is the extreme heat of the California desert. This adds to the cyclist thirst and dehydration. The reader can tell it is unpleasantly hot when reading, “wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt…, that I could drop from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June…” The rough roads and challenging terrain also present a challenge to the cyclist that slows his advance to Yosemite.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16447,6,"The Empire State Building faced various obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Most importantly was the danger involved in this ambitious plan. Blimps from outside the @LOCATION3 commonly used hydrogen, a highly flammable gas, instead of helium. After a German dirigible destroyed in a fire, owners of the Empire State Building saw the true danagers of an accident like this in downtown New York. Successful use of the mooring mast was another obstacle. The winds at such a high altitude made it difficult to dock. Once docked the dirigibles would have to dangle above pedestrians, which was ""neither pratical or safe"". The existing law against airships flying to low in urban areas create further probles. After the Los Angeles failed to reach the mooring mast because of the high winds the owners started to see the unsolved problems. By the late 1930's the idea had ""quietly disappeared"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1069,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 of people use computers @CAPS2 for many different types of things. Computers are very beneficial to society. Even though people @MONTH1 use their computers too much, the tasks they complete help our world run smoothly. Also, computers allow us to keep in touch with friends and family that we don't see anymore, and they teach us valuable information very quickly. Without computers, society would not run as smoothly as it does now. One way that computers benefits our society, is that they complete tasks such as writing a paper, researching information,..etc, much quicker. For example, if you, the @ORGANIZATION1, needed to quickly print an article in the paper on the devastating earthquake in @LOCATION1, computers would greatly benefit you because they would allow you to type the article much quicker than having to handwrite it. Computers are very beneficial to society because they allow us to complete things very quickly and efficiently. Another reason why computers are very beneficial to society is because they allow us to maintain relationships with people from long distance and allow us to always keep in touch with old friends and family. Moving to from about @DATE1, computers have greatly helped and I stay halfway country. In a recent survey by @PERCENT1 of college graduate a computer stay in town friends from stay in but allow you to actually see the are our society is beneficial by computers because they world. reason society is because they alloe people very quickly. Search engines such as @ORGANIZATION3, @ORGANIZATION4, @CAPS3, and more allows us to research anything we want to know at just the click of the button. This ability to know anything very quickly has agreat effect on people, without of this knowledge people becomemore intellectual and intelligent and with that intelligence, they make great things happen. According to @PERSON1, a computer scientist at @ORGANIZATION2, The knowledge people get from computer search engines allows them to better do @CAPS2 things and achive more in thier lives"". Computers benefit society and have great effect on people when they are balanced our with other important things such as exercise and socializing. They teach us new information quickly, perform tasks, quickly and effeciently and allow us to keep in touch with people across the world. If it weren't for computers things would take longer to get done and society would become worse. We need computers to do @CAPS2 things and do tasks needed to live life.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7151,3,The setting in the story was the “high deserts of California in June.” At first the cyclist had seemed really confident and excited about his journey. It was during it that had changed his mind. The cyclist was running low on his water supply's so he stops and pumps water from this water pump but all he gets is this acid taste. So he is on his way to the nearest town which is @NUM1 miles away and he thinks he can make it. So he is heading towards the nearest town when the terrain starts changing. It changes from flat road to short rolling hills. During this time the cyclist starts loosing hope. He thinks that he is going to die of dehydration and the birds are going to pick him apart. Then when he thought he couldn’t make it he saw a sign that said “Gary and @CAPS1 fish camp” He ran into the shop and took long drinks from the sink in the bathroom and when he went out of the store an older gentle men asked him if he needed help and he said no I have a really good map. The thot temperature and rolling hills have a negative effect on the cyclist. I mean he goes from being confident to thinking he is seeing mirages and dieing. It states in the story “I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasn’t a mirage” and “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean” So this brought self doubting behavior. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4125,2,"Keep it on the Shelf! What types of things do you go to the library for? Some go for books and others go just to relax in a quiet environment. Yes, the library is mostly used for books and studying, but there are many other things that libraries contain. Movies, magazines, music, etc., are all found in a library. Now, say you had to listen to a specific song, read a certain book, or review an article in a certain magazine, and you can't find it at the library because they have been removed because they are found to be offensive. All people have different views on what is and isn't offensive. Everything like books, music, magazines, and movies should all have their place in a library, regaurdless of the material. Books can be used for many things. Some read just for the enjoyment and others read because it is assigned to them or they need to research some things. Books give information and knowledge that some people need desperately. What if you can't find that book because someone said that its material is inappropiate? What are you supposed to do about your research paper now? If a book is needed it should be able to be found on the shelf in a library and not be taken out because of the content of its pages. Music is a great way to clear your mind and relax. Some music found in libraries can be somewhat offensive to some people. What if the only place you can find your favorite music is at your public library? You walk in and they no longer have it because it is considered to be offensive. Now you can no longer listen to the sounds that calm you down or modivate you to get your day started. Music should remain in libraries because of the cultural and educational sounds that most cannot find at their local music store. Magazines are another great form of reading material found in a library. Magazines are a great way to stay up to date with the latest fashions and great dessert receipes. Without magazines our world wouldn't be able to keep up with the things that advance in our world everyday. Magazines show us the hottest trends, the gossip in the celebrity world, and some great facts from educational magazines. Without the magizines in the library we probably wouldn't know anything about our advancing world. You can find movies anywhere, but some believe that you can only find the really good and old movies at the library. The library has educational movies for children that @MONTH1 not be available anywhere else. They also have old classic movies that aren't even around anymore. The library has many movies that you wouldn't be able to find in our advanced world today. Libraries hold a lot of important books, movies, music, and magazines. Without out most of that, regaurdless of the material, we probably wouldn't know as much as we know today. The library has always been a place where you go to find exactly what you want and you know that they will have it. Removing these things from the shelves can be taking some history right out of our lives. All of theses resources should stay on the shelves regaurdless of their material.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13277,5,"The mood of the memoir is greatful. In paragraph @NUM1 It says in parentheses ""and for which I am eternally greatful."" Also in the same paragraph in parentheses it says ""which I adore to this day"" about Cuban music. Lastely In the last sentence of the memoir it says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18830,7,When I was getting ready to leave my uncles ranch. I was waiting patiently for my dad to get back so he could help my brother put the @NUM1 on to the tryler. It has been @NUM2 hours and my dad has not come back yet. I was having a difficult time taking my @NUM3 off the tryler because it was to heavy and my dad was still riding his @NUM3. When my dad got back my brother went to go ride his @NUM3. I was having a very difficult time trying to get everything and leave but finally my mom and sister wanted to leave to so they finally helped me.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3361,2,"Some people @MONTH1 think that certain book, movies, magazines, or music should be removed from libraries because they @MONTH1 be found offensive. I believe that libraries should not rid their shelves of 'offensive' material. What really makes something offensive? If someone were to tell me that it looked as if I've lost weight, I would find that offensive. The person wouldn't have meant it that way, though. Although I would have found it slighly rude, another person @MONTH1 have found it to be a nice compliment. With this logic, can one really conclude that anything is truely offensive? By saying something is offensive, you're stating your own opinion. Even if they aren't the same as everyone else's, everyone is intitled to their own opinions; equality is something most people find very important. Because of this, one person's definiton of offensive shouldn't be held higher than another's. If we rid libraries of 'offensive' material, that is exactly what you would be doing; you'd be making one person's definition of offensive superior to another person's. I also believe libraries should not get rid of 'offensive' material because by doing so, they would probably be getting rid of a lot of interesting material. Let's use my religious beliefs for an example. I am @CAPS1 @CAPS2. Basically, I do not believe in '@CAPS3'. If someone were to write a book about my religion, I would find it interesting. Some @CAPS4 @MONTH1 find it to be offensive, though. So if a library got rid of that book because someone found it offensive, I wouldn't want to go there as often. When I go to a library, I want to find a book that I'd enjoy reading. If all the material that is found offensive was taken out of the library, would there really be anything left? If so, I doubt many people would find it interesting. I also believe this because by taking a book off the shelf because you find it offensive, wouldn't you be offending the author? As I said before, everyone is intitled to their own opinions. Because of this, libraries should allow authors to speak their minds. By taking their books off the shelves, you'd be offending them. They took their time and effort to think about and write that book, and for you to offend them by taking it off the shelf, you'd be controdicting the entire purpose of removing it from the shelf. In conclusion, I believe that nothing can truely be defined as offensive. Also, people should be able to speak their minds. Therefore, libraries should not attempt to rid there shelves of 'offensive' material",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16366,6,"Al Smith and his workers, went through quite a bit while working on this building. As an example, while building it they had to transmitt the stress of the dirigibles load all the way to the buildings foundation, which was around eleven hundred feet below. After that they would have to modify and strengthen the frame of the building to accommodate the new situation. The greatest obstacle throughout the whole process though was the nature itself. Due to violent air currents the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting. Safety was a major obstacle Smith had to face while building this building. Smith thought a dirigible would be okay to use on the building but little did he know how dangerous using one could be. Due to the fact most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION1 used hydrogen rather than helium, using hydrogen, meant HIGHLY flammable.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1487,1,"Studies show that @PERCENT1 of people that are addicted to computers are not fit and don't play sports. I have a computer at home and I know how much fun it is talking to your friends on @CAPS1 or whatever you talk to your friends are. If you're not fit and don't enjoy the beauty of nature you will not know how to live a good life. I'm not saying that you won't get anywhere in life, but it won't be much interesting. I play lots of sports and I love them all. I am fit and yes I do like going on @CAPS1 and chatting with my friends, but thats not as important as is breathing fresh air and playing sports with your friends. Yes, the computer has all different kinds of bad stuff and good stuff. I mean you could learn about faraway places with out going there, but then what would be the fun of that. For an example, if you go to @LOCATION1 for snowboarding, dont you feel great when your going down that @CAPS3? I know I do instead of being home on the computer. Nature is beautiful I am thankful to god of giving us that beauty and all animals. It makes life better, georgus. I love taking hikes with my family up a @CAPS3. That fresh air you can't get anywhere else or even riding your @CAPS5 up a trail, the beauty of that is unbelievable, you can't find it any other place. Doctors show that @PERCENT2 of people that spend time more than @NUM1 hours a day on a computer have glasses or have a very poor vision. All those people didn't want poor vision but beacuse of the computer they got that wich really stinks. Now as you can you see computers really can change your life. So that's your discision. Pick wrong from right, all up to YOU. Now make it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16500,6,"When building the dock for dirigibles. Al Smith was only able to think of a few obstacles that would come up. As it turns out, there were more obstecles than expected. One that was expected was the building could be pulled over by the dirigibles as stated in paragraph @NUM1, third sentence. An obstacle that was unknown until after the mast was built was the violen shift in wind would cause the dirigibles to wrap itself around the mast and to dang weights off the back of it to prevent the wrapping was considered unsafe as stated in paragraph fourteen, second sentence to the fourth. Another untold issue was the ""existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (paragraph @NUM2, first sentence) along with the fact that ""most dirigibles outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. (paragraph @NUM3, second sentence). The whole idea of a docking mast was not well thought out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7670,3,A response that explains how the feature of the setting affected the cyclist. Would be that in the setting in the setting affected cyclist because for one the features of setting was based on something else. So that would be a reason how it would be affected. Because they're is differences in the stories.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12240,5,"The author creates moods in the memoir that seem to be possitive. The first mood that is shown is a loving mood. In paragraph three is states, ""All of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This shows when all the immigrants came to @LOCATION1 they would descriminated they all came together and became a family.Another mood that is created is careness. Narciso Rodriguez's parents showed so much love and support towards him. Paragraph five says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" This quote shows that even before Narciso was born his parents were thinking about them. Narciso's parents wanted their child to have a good life. A final mood would be happiness. Narciso is very happy and has alot of gratitude for his parents. Narciso quotes, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. By Narciso saying that it shows how much he loves his parents and how happy he is living in @LOCATION1. The author creates different moods throughout the entire excerpt.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7557,3,The cyclist in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” had to go through a hard time in the California desert. It was hard for him because it was very hot in the desert in June. That he was almost out of water; at first his ride was easy on flat ground. But when he came to rolling he had to use more energy and ???.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20926,8," We were heading to our first ski race. On either side of me, my friends @CAPS1 and @PERSON1 sat, crammed together in our team van. Our packed bags and ski gear filled the vehicle to the top, along with six other kids, occupying all of the other empty spaces. Our uncomfortable seating arrangements didn't seem to ruin our fun, within five minutes of our road trip, the van exploded with laughter, as @PERSON1, most likely a future comedian started off cracking jokes, just being himself as usual. Within those first five minutes of our drive, I could already tell that this was going to be a ski trip I would always remember. The van rolled up to the hotel parking lot. My ski team would be lodging here for the long weekend. The sky had turned black with the @TIME1, and me along with everyone else trudged along with weary eyes, exhausted from the long drive. We quickly unloaded our bags, all eager to hop into our beds, needing to be well rested for our first ski race of the season. Shortly after, everyone was soon in bed, knowing that five a.m. would be coming quickly. The sun began rising over the mountains, signaling time to wake up. This was not the case for me. I had been up for nearly an hour, and sat in our van while we sped around each corner up to the mountain. It was race day, and me, along with all of my teammates were all excited for the day coming. The morning flew by, collecting our bibs at registration, getting our lift tickets, and inspection of the course. I now stood at the top of the hill peering down at the course ahead of me. I had to focus. While I have had a lot of fun, it was time to concentrate, to preform my absolute best. The pressure was on. I now stood in the start gate, my coach stood by my side, and my friends were watching as well, cheering me on. I was hoping not to disappoint. ""@CAPS2 ready,"" the official began in a tense voice, ""@CAPS3!"" I threw my self our of the start gate. I flew by each gate, staying in control and most important, going fast. The wind slid past my aerodynamic body, my ankles and knees rolled with each turn. Everything was going well until I broke over the knoll. My body compressed bringing my knees to my chest, as I skied over the roller, throwing me off balance. I fought to get back up, to regain myself, but I couldn't do it. My skis spun out from under me, causing me to be spit out from the course, landing on my back, sliding down the mountain, hopeless and done for. It was over. I sat in the snow frustrated with my performance. I wanted a second chance that I wasn't going to get. @PERSON1, one of my teammates, came up to me and sat in the snow by my side. My first thought was he was going to say something of a cliche ""nice job,"" or a ""you'll do better next time"". To my surprise he tells me one of his ridiculous jokes. My mouth turns up, trying to contain a laugh, unsuccessful, I burst into laughter. @PERSON1 sits there and smiles at me. Almost immediately I found myself in a better mood. I give him a quick ""thanks,"" with a smile before we both @CAPS3 to watch and cheer on our teammates. Although I didn't do my best, I didn't let my results ruin my weekend. The next day, I skied two solid runs with top finishes, if I had stayed upset with myself, I would have never been able to achieve those results. I came to realize that some days, just a small laugh can be all you need to turn any day around. Laughter, I have found is essential in any situation. It's a connection that can bring anyone closer. For me, laughter changed my personality that day on the mountain. Laughter can mean many different things for many different people, laughter could be a special bond between to people. Laughter can remove the seriousness or competitively in a situation, but also it unites us. Languages are different among people, but everyone understands a what a laugh can do, a laugh is universal.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9759,4,The author concluded this paragraph in this story because I think that he is tring to tell the reader a message. The author is tring to say that if a plant can mak it through the cold winter then she can pass her driver’s test. That is why I think the author included that paragraph. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4345,2,"Should books, magazines ect... really be censored, taken off a shelf in a library, just because you might find them offensive? Some of you who are reading this would say yes, but why? What would be the reason behind it? So to answer the first question I asked, my answer would have to be no, because a library is a public place for all ages, and each area is labeled or should be labeled the genre of book, magazine, ect.. it is. I myself read almost just about everything I can get my hands on, and for some people its the same way. Yes, I understand that if it is offensive to you that you probably would feel they should censor it, but what about those that it isn't offensive to? What would you say to them? How would you explain why it was offensive? Most of all how would you react if they held it against you? If it was because of one person or a small group of people that one of my favorite books or series was censored, in all honesty I would be pretty ticked. Books are for everyone to read, they shouldn't not be able to read the books they love because they have been taken off the shelf. I think that if a person really doesn't like the book and finds it offensive should then just ignore it, and move on to find another book, they shouldn't have looked at it in the first place. Books will be offensive to some one some how, usually a book is written to target a certain group of people, for instance what if someone found the romance novels a lot of people love, offensive? What if that was all the person read? Well, the people who only read romance novels wouldn't have a book to read because, someone had them censored and taken off the shelves. Books have been written, to help teach, get away from the real world, create a place to go for a person with an imagination, give someone hope, mystery, excitement. Books aren't something that should be taken off a library shelf, they are a bit of something for some one who just loves to read. Yes, there would be books you don't want your kids, grandkids, nieces and nephews to read, but that can't be helped, you can't censor every book that you don't want them to read or find offensive for them. If you did there wouldn't be a single book on a library shelf. So for those of you who have read this, think about it, when you pick up a book and find it offensive do you want to make someone else upset because you had it taken off the shelf? You never know when that might happen to you, think about it before you go and tried to do that to a book.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7570,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead” the cyclist is affected by the features of the setting in many ways. One way the cyclist is affected by the features of the setting in many ways. One way the cyclist is affected is when they have to cross the hills and plains. The hills make it very hard to pedal when going up hill. Another way the cyclist is challenged is when he is almost out of water. They need water to survive especially during their long bike ride. Lastly, the heat the cyclist must endure also affects them. The heat makes it hard to stay focused on making the long journey.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7687,3,"The setting effected the performence of the cyclist and the mood of the cyclist. The rolling hills the cyclist had to get over most likely made him more fined and thirsty because he had to put more effort in to get over them. “over one long, crippiling hill, a building came into view.” The long, big hills that he had to go up and made him more thirsty, but probably more satisfied when it was all over. Ironically, the building was a grape juice factory; abandoned and rusty, but the sigh featuring a boy drinking a refreshing glass of juice was still noticeable. This brought his hopes down. But continued to move on. In my life, I have never had such an experience to where I had to keep pushing and urging myself to my goal, but the closes I got, the more distractions got in the way to and stop me.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4603,2,"READING OUR BOOKS Our book and movies can be very scary and unessasary, to much violence and disterbence,for young kids scary books and movies will give them @ORGANIZATION1 mares.Books like @ORGANIZATION1 and @CAPS1 are good books for teenage kids, @ORGANIZATION1 teaches them the past and what it used to be like being a parent you need to make shore your kids watch the right shows and movies and they also need to watch the important movies to. Hitler treated people so bad he killed so many people I think its a good lesson for kids to watch movies about him and read the books.Also I think @CAPS1 is a good book because girl and guys should both no forceing something on someone is wrong, its not right at all. Young kids should never have to go through that she called for help but noone could here her. she was physically and mentally abused,noone would listin to her it was wrong .She never spoke up but you could see she was in pain just by the way she looked and her quietness.Movies like these should teach kids to never mistreat another person. Parents stay on your kids watch what they read and you should always be cautious about what your kids are doing give them book that are going to teach them something",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13060,5,"The mood of the @CAPS1 of the text ""Narciso Rodriguez"" is very thankful and happy. I can tell this because in @CAPS2 @NUM1 it shows how greatful @CAPS3 was to live in that house with his parents. And in @NUM2 it says how much love Narciso had for his parents and how thankful @CAPS3 was. And finally in @NUM3 the @CAPS1 tells the reader how @CAPS3 was thankful for immegrants for giving their children a new begginning @CAPS4 are ways you can tell the mood of the @CAPS1 in the text",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18368,7,Once apani time there were to kids one was name @CAPS1 he wasn’t patience at all. The other kid was name @PERSON1 he be was patience. They went for a walk in the woods and get lost @CAPS1 would not stop complaining. @PERSON1 told him stop complaining @CAPS3 @CAPS1 didn’t until he say a hunted house @CAPS1 told @PERSON2 want to go inside with him. @CAPS3 @PERSON1 didn’t want to go in so @CAPS1 went in and act like he got hurt so @PERSON1 ran in there the dorslamd shut and the door nob feel off. They were scared it was dark. Then the light came on. @CAPS1 said lets get at of here! @PERSON1 said how the door nob fell off. @CAPS1 said I don’t know they ran though the house there wore no other door or windows the were terrify then a ghost was coming at them and he said happy @CAPS7 it was there dad he built the house for them and said all you had to do is push the door open. and they all went home. the end,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7395,3,The features of the setting affects the cyclist because he knows he’s in the wrong area. The cyclist understand's that he should have never took that advice from them old men. So he was upset and new he should have taken his advise. The cyclist had a feeling that he wasn’t supposed to take it that way he said he shouldn’t have let them take a peek at his map. So the features really affect him.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9818,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” to conclude that she will wait a little bit of time, until plants can be be planty so if she fails again, she will have something to hold on to. For example, when Saeng “failed the @NUM1) she try to overcome the feeling of failing, by buying something that reminds her of her country and bring back the memories to past thro this time. Another example is when Saeng “felt a shock of recognition so intense, it was almost visceral (@NUM2),she forgot about everything that was happening in her life, from moving to @LOCATION1 to failing her test this feeling concentratted her on feeling like home again. In conclusion, the author conclusion, creates the belief that that the was Saeng gets over her problems is by remembering memories like the plant, that reminded her of her home country.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16309,6,"There were many obstacles for the builders of the mast attempting to allow dirigibles to dock, such as laws, nature, and overlooked detail. Laws were an obstacle because of safety risks of having a dirigible over a densely populated area, such as the Hindenburg accident. Nature was a problem because of the violent winds at the top of the mast, which would make the ship unsteady. The last obstacle was that the builders of the mast overlooked all the other obstacles, and safety risks.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15751,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles when trying to make it safe for dirigibles to dock there. Three main issues they faced were adding stress to the building, safety, and urban laws. The Empire state building was already huge & fragile so adding a lot of way to it, would not have helped, ""a @DATE1 foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether would add stress to the building's frame."" The architects could not want this, they had to make changes. Before they made the changes, they also realized that it was extremely windy up there, ""winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" @CAPS1, it would be safe to be up there, never knowing how bad the winds would be. So they decided to make the building shorter. After all the work they put in, it still wasn't good enough because there was a law that was ""against airships flying to low over urban areas"". After all the time and hard work they put in, there was, in the end, no way to have this idea be successful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17987,7,"One day when I was home alone I felt nobody was with me. I was home alone because my uncle was very sick and my and parents went to go visit him. I was very scared and I felt @CAPS1 had left me. So I prayed and prayed but I fell or heard nothing back. So I fell asleep and I heard @CAPS2 voice, he was talking to me! I was running in a field will grass. I saw a man dressed in where dating walking through and, and when he came out of the mud there was no sitting or did anymore on him. I ran up to him and asked “man who are you?” he replied and said” little child of @CAPS1 why do you look so lonely? I am your angel one I have come to tell you what your father has said,” he talked to me for a long time, and I did not feel scared or lonely anymore, there was one cloud in the sky, he said he had to go but that he was my gurdian angle. After that he rose into the deol. I will never forget him, he is my angle. And that was the time I needed to have patience to hear @CAPS4 voice.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10569,4,The reason the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because if the author trys it again it might work out a lot better now they know what they are doing. Also if they try it again then if it makes enough they can sell it and make money so they will keep doing it for years to come.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9471,4,"The author concludes this paragraph because he wants to make it more clearer so the readers would understand It more. And so he could, make it better to stand out. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9390,4,The last paragraph at the end of the story was the authors way of showing how Saeng wanted spring to come early because she wants to see her hibiscus. If spring doesn’t come fast she will not get to see her hibiscus and the snow won’t melt. When Saeng comes up she hopes she can take the test.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 649,1,"Dear Newspaper, In my opinion, I think computers do benefit society. One reason is because people can learn about new things, it makes life a little easier then it is, and lastly, people can meet new people while they're on the computer. First off, we can benefit from computers because we can learn new things. People can find places that they've never heard of, or they can see whats going on in the world. Computers can help kids that are in school who want to learn new things. Computers help you find out important information that you might need to know in the future. Secondly, having computers in our society can make life a little easier for some people. On computers, you can order things from online websites instead of trying to go out and buy them. For people with no transportation, this'll help make their lives a little easier than it is. Or, for example, if a person wants to buy something that isn't in stores yet, they can go online, and they might have it up there. Lastly, having computers can help you meet new people. If someone just moved from another town or state, this will help them meet new people. Or if a student doesn't know anybody from their new school, they might find them online and then they'll be able to get to know each other. In conclusion, computers help our society in a lot of ways. They can help us learn new things, we all can meet new people. and computers can make our live s a little easier. Thats whay I think we should keep computers in our society.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10534,4,"When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding; then I will take that test again. The author concludes this story Winter Hibiscus with this paragraph because in the story it's about Saeng and she fails her drivers test, and notice a familiar plant which causes her to go to a florist shop. As Saeng learns about this familian plant it encourages her to retake that drivers test, to where as though the snow is gone and the sun is shining. 1 1 1 10535 4 I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because she is basically trying to say in the spring when the snow goes away and the hibiscus start growing she will test the plant again 0 0 0 10536 4 The author concludes the story this way to show that Saeng still has hope to succeed and adapt in this new country. She previously had a lot of home sickness, missing her grandmother and keepsakes from her child hood. The height of her homesickness is seen when Saeng comes back to her house and is explaining to her mother the nature of the hibiscus. “She found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again.” Saeng is uncomfortable living in @LOCATION1 and wishes to go back to Vietnam. Butt by the end, Saeng’s attitude changes from despair to hope. Even though she has failed her driver’s test. Saeng is determined and hopeful to do at least something in this new country by saying """"...then I will take the test again.” Saeng has changed a good deal within this story and that change in attitude is seen with the exerpt on geese in the last paragraph.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12203,5,"Narciso Rodriguez could not describe his home any better, it was as if I was there with him. I can see he really remembers the sound, shites, and smells of his home. ""...situated in a two-family, blond-brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey. Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culture. Passionate Cuban music... filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" That whole paragraph really gave me a good feeling, and I could tell the mood was always a happy one considering all the festivities. Therefore the mood is happy and warm, I would love to be there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18374,7,A time when I was patient was when I was waiting for my dad to come home. From work so I could oven my package that I got before he left on a three day trip out of state so when he came back I goat to open it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12533,5,"The mood in the memoir is happyness, and friendship, and glory, an example is ""My parents always always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us. A feeling of friendship and honesty is ""it was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, where clearly in need."" and that is the mood of the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3282,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3: @CAPS4 I am @PERSON1 and I have heard there has been a discussion about different things in libraries. And I would like to let you know what I think about the whole situation. There are many things like books, music, movies, magazines, etc. that people believe aren't appropriate. Many people have differnt opinions then other people. Everyone had a differnt point of view and sees things differently. Ecspecially when it comes to what is appropriate for kids. I believe if a child comes home with a book, movies, etc. and their parent does not approve the parent should go and tell the librarian about why she thinks it isn't appropriate. The librarian should listen to the parent and then take a look at it for herself and see what she thinks about it. And if she finds it not approprite then she has the right to take it off the shelf. If the parent comes in and talks to the librarian about why something is not apropriate and the librarian believes it is alright then maybe she needs to just put the book, movie, etc. in a different area of the library. Like if a little kid finds a book and the parent says its inappropriate the librarian could take that book out of the little kid section, and maybe put it in a older kid area. I have actaully had an experience with this. At my old school adults were always complaining about books they didn't think were appropriate. When the librarian told us, we were upset because us girls loved to read those books. The librarian at the time thought they were appropriate and really didn't want to take them out of the library. So she had a great idea. She took those books, the ones people were complaining about, and put them on their own special shelf behind her desk. If you wanted one of those books you had to talk to your parent or bring a note in saying that you were allowed to read the book. It was a really good idea, because if your parent wouldn't allow you to read them you weren't tempted to get one, and wouldnt even see them. And the people who were allowed and wanted to read them still could with no problem at all. Another idea I have is if you see a younger kid by older people books, movies, etc. go talk to them about why they are over there and, tell them that, that's not their age level material. Try to direct them over to their age level area, and try to find them a book, movie, etc they @MONTH1 be interested in. I believe that everyone has different opinions but just because one person complains it doesn't mean it has to ruin it for everyone. Just because one person doesn't like it doesn't mean everyone else does too. I think censorship should somewhat be in libraries, but not to the extreme. There should be many different topics in libraries so everyone enjoyes the stuff there. There should be action,adventure, humor, love, etc. Talk to people and see what they like. And just because one person complains, dont take it out right away because to another person they might love it. Thank you for taking your time to read my opinion, and I hope I helped",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1140,1,"Computers are the future. Computers are the best technology we've created. They allow us to improve our hand-eye coordination, learn about faraway people and places and what with our friends. Computers improve our hand-eye coordinations typing is a good way to improve this vital skill by not looking and knowing which buttons are where. Using a mouse is also a good to improve by moving the digital mouse with the one in your hand. This can improve foster writing, because you are moving the friend in your hand the same way you would move a mouse or type. This can also help driving, because you can't look at the wheel, you have to keep your eyes on the word, and in order to do that you most know how you're moving the wheel. Computers can help hand-eye coordination which can help with writing and driving, with typing and and moving a mouse. Computers can increase our knowledge about faraway places, and people. Cultures come in a variety we can learn about all of them from the comfort of our own home. We can also learn about nature from our home. Learning about different cultures can teach us many things. Like what kind of clothes they wore, food they ate, place the, lived in. This allows us to change our own culture by getting inspired from others. Learning about new places can help broaden the mind about other spots in the world that can lead to a vacation. Lastly, computers allow us to internet with friends from our chairs. Chatting, and e-mailing and video chatting are all great ways to interact. With a webcam you can even see the other person as if you here face-to-face with them. You can also e-mail important files, such as pictures, docucuments, and even videos. This can help with someone's job. In conclusion, computers can teach us hand-eye coordination, can teach us about faraway places and people, and lets us interact and share with friends. Computers are a very important part of my life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12254,5,The memoir created a happy mood. Living in @LOCATION1 is great. They had a better chance in life then being cuba. @LOCATION1 has alot of oportinitys and staying together. Having friends come over relatives and non- relatives is great. You have a better mood in the day to come.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15660,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was a huge challenge for them to face. For example, mother nature itself was one of they're huge challenges they would mostly face. At the top of the Empire State Building, winds were constantly shifting and shifting due to violent air currents. As soon as an dirigible would hook up to the building, workers would have to find a way to keep they're airship from crashing into the building from the rusty winds at the top of the building. Therefore, if a dirigible- crashed anywhere on the ground it would burst into an inferno because the inside of a dirigible is filled with hydrogen and helium, so if it did crashed it will involve heat and fire that would be coming from the sparks it prevents as it crashes on the ground.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20885,8," Humor is a huge part of who i am,and i love making people laugh, but this story is about an event that made my whole family fall down laughing on the floor. It all started one @DATE1 when my cousin received a trampoline for his birthday. It was a great day not only for him but for the rest of us kids too because we all could go and play on it whenever we wanted. We were always over at my cousins house after that. We would have competitions to see who could jump the highest or who could do the coolest trick. Sometimes we would fall off or one of us would get hurt and then my aunt and uncle wouldn't let us play on it for a while but they would always cave and let us back on it. It wasn't until a few months later that we all witnessed the funniest accident that any of us had ever seen in our life time. It all started out at my aunts birthday party. Usually she had it at some fancy restaurant but not this year, this year she decided just to have it at home to save some money. So we all show up for my aunts party my mom, my brothers, and me. First off we do all the regular birthday things, the meeting of family members, eating some food, and singing happy birthday. Basically in my eyes it was all the boring stuff. I mean come on there was a trampoline out in the back yard just waiting to be jumped on but the adults wouldn't let us get anywhere near it until we had ate. Finally everyone was done eating and they were going to let us kids go have our fun. It started off as normal as any other day we went to play on the trampoline but little did we know that all of our stomachs would be hurting from laughing in a few hours from an even that was about to transpire",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 160,1,"Dear local newspaper, I agree that people are spending more time on the computers and less time doing other important stuff. For example, they don't spend time exercising, enjoying nature, and they don't spend time with their family. Those are very important things that people don't undeRstand that they are missing of. First, people that spend a lot of time on the computer don't do exercise. Doing exercise is good for your health. If you don't do exercise when you get older your bones are going to work. Also, you could get fat and that is bad for your heart. Just for being on the computer people don't pay attention to their health. Next, people don't enjoy the beautiful nature that is outside. Is beautiful when you hear the birds singing or seeing the plants outside. People are forgeting about nature. They don't recycle so the planet could be clean. The air that we smell is not clean because they don't care about nature. Instead of being on the computer they chould help so the world could be better. Finally, people don't spend time with the people that love them. Is very important to spend time with your family. People don't realize thats the first thing in life is your family. Instead of being on the computer, is fun going to the beach with your kids, wife, father, and etc. In conclusion, i believe that computers affect on people. People just for being on the computer they don't do exercise, enjoy nature, and they don't spend time with their family. Now that you heard my , i ask you to think about yours.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6611,3,"The features of the cyclist is rough because of the hills, snakes, heat, amount of water. The hills give you a breeze going down but going up give you a hard time. The snakes can hurt you by bitting. The heat could make you sick. The amount of water can really hurt you by being dehydrated.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 88,1,"Dear Newspaper, ""@CAPS1 no!' I forgot the deffinition to this homework problem and I don’t have my notes. Now, in this situation a computer would be very helpful to just type in the word and get a whole bunch of results. This is why I believe having access to a computer at all times is very helpfull because you can find information that you've been needing. You can get in touch with a friend if you need to or just to talk to lostly if you are just sitting around and having nothing to do you can just go on the computer and discover things you @MONTH1 not have known. Having access to a computer is a real and very helpfull because if your just having a conversation with someone and you forget a name of an important fact you want to tell them, you can always just look it up. For me, a lot of the times I just need information about maybe a sports player of facts about a famous event. Since our technology is so up to date the computer is right there sitting with many of the helpfull facts we would like to know. Friends are a big part of my life and I love just to talk to them and see how they are doing. Again, our technology is so advanced now that there is a bunch of websites where we can talk and see how we are doing. A big reason why being able to talk to friends and family is helpful is for taking to people that are very far away and the ones you dont normally see. On a computer you can talk to people from not only all over the @CAPS2.S.A but even in other countrys! Finally, the times I find having a computer around me most helpfull is when I am just bored with nothing to do! I can just visit a whole bunch of educational websites on things I @MONTH1 have learned in school or wanted to learn. On the internet there are many things to keep you occupied like games or ou can even watch movies from your home onto the computer! If you have a computer around your house you should not be bored because there is many things you can be doing or even learning! Having a computer around your house is so helpfull, you can have fun but your even learning how to be good with technology at the same time. Computers are the future and its a good one. So I suggest you pick one up and just have a blast, you wont be sorry.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19467,7,"I think that patience is about waiting instead of rushing things .If you be patient things will actually come faster than you think for example if you want something and you have to wait in line instead of running off and finding something else at and wait it will always help. Be patient with what even your doing just be patience even if its waiting run school to be even. If your waiting for a same at stem to come sat have patience a wait because it might keep you out of trouble. Be patient what even your doing even if your waiting for a turn just wait it is not a big deal stop rushing things, just be very patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15095,6,"In the expert the builders of the Empire State Building faced a lot of obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.The fabiric that they use for dirigibles is very lighter. ""Cotton frabric filled with hydrogen and helium to make them ligther than hair.They also imply that the architects did not try hard enough to solve the problems.""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill it purpose...""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18904,7,"Patience, @CAPS6 essential part of our world. Patience @CAPS5 deffeniatly some thing everybody needs. but not everybody has. I believe that everybody needs patience because everything takes time. And if you “don’t have the time” to do something then you don’t have the time to live. And if nobody had the time to live then I wouldn’t be here right now. I believe that patience @CAPS5 more than just its deffinition. I believe that it means to be able to a low time to pass so you can do something. If all you did was work then good have a pretty boring life. For example if you had a @CAPS1 teacher for @CAPS6 elective class. She would have to be patient to be able to teach you the language of @CAPS1. Otherwise she probably wouldn’t be a teacher. Another example would be that lets say your on @NUM1 and your going to go to @LOCATION1. But traffic @CAPS5 holding you down because of a @NUM2 car pile up. and you honk your horn. Thats not going to speed things up any more than they already are. Maybe your timing @CAPS5 perfect when your honk but it doesnt make anything go any faster. When people hear someone honk their horn it most likely comes up as “@CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6 @CAPS7 PERSON @CAPS8 @CAPS9.” @CAPS10 @CAPS5 pretty much correct. When you honk your horn in traffic it doesnt make anything go faster, it makes things seem longer and people instantly label you as @CAPS11. In conclusion I would like to state that patience @CAPS5 important to mankind because if nobody had patience nobody would be on earth right now",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12723,5,"The mood created in this memoir is love and unity. (@CAPS1 @NUM1) ""... all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This means that they were close, loving, and unified. This memoir gave me the feeling that just a house is not a home until there is love. ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen"". This also gives me the feeling of warmth and love.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13028,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir was joyful and optimistic. In the memoir, the author describes his home and how even though the house wasn't much, his parents made it feel inviting and comfortable. In his neighborhood, all the people were friends and took care of each other when they needed help. The author's home reflected the Cuban culture because of his parents. The author describes the hardships his parents had to go through like adjusting to a colder climate in not getting good jobs. Even though they had their own troubles, they were selfless and didn't let their problems get to them. The author is very grateful for how his parents gave him a home and taught him what a family really was.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3322,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @PERSON1, Should certain books be removed because some people @MONTH1 think they are inappropriate for their children to see or read? No, I do not think they should be removed. I honestly think all they all should be put in different sections of the library by age. Like all the children books and magizenes should be in one section. The younge adult and or teen books and magizenes should be in a section by its self. Then the adult books and magizenes should be in their own section. Even the autobiographys and documentories should be in their own section too. It would make things easier to find the book you are wanting to read. For example, if your a teenage girl looking for a book about a high school girl with a crush on a boy, it'd most likely be in the section for the younge adults. So yes, the parents that are concerned about their children's viewing of certain books should be able to say something about it. But what if one teenager is looking for a book about a famous person's autobiography for a school project. Even though it includes how they used to be into drugs as a teenager. That person shouldn't have to fail if they can't find it in a library because some concerned parent didn't think it was appropriate. Like I said the best thing to do is put all the books in subcatagories by age. It would make things was easier and faster to find the book of your selection",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1582,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I @CAPS3't you agree that computers benefit society? I sure do. I find my computer benefits the society because you can interact with others online. Its easy to find entertainment and @CAPS4 is extremely helpful and profitable. Now you @MONTH1 not beleive computers are "" Society friendly"" but I am here to argue that statement. Now, one thing I love about computers is now easily you can interact with people whether they're miles away or right in your neighborhood, you could chat with them in the push of a button. For instance, my friends all have the infamous? Facebook account. All I have to do is go online, click my chat box and click their name and then @CAPS5! were talking. And the better part is you @CAPS3't have to share any personal details ( @CAPS6 @CAPS7, phone number etc..) to chat on facebook. Wow wasn''t that easy? Did you ever turned on your @CAPS8. scanned through channels and say ""@CAPS9 goods on @CAPS8?"" @CAPS11, with a computer. theres always something to watch. Whethe @CAPS4 old a new, fake a real, live or not, the computer has many things tool/ watch. You could pull up your @CAPS12 browser and go on @CAPS13 (A video site) and watch their wonderful variety of filling. There are atleast @NUM1 million videos on @CAPS13 and @NUM2 being watched/uploded per day. Infact the ""@CAPS14"" views @NUM3+ video a day without noticing @CAPS4. If your looking for stand up, you could type in ""@CAPS15 @CAPS16! If you're looking to action, you type in chan . Basically, the computer and the bad wide web things to do. Now, @CAPS17 stating those two things, @CAPS4 has come to my attention that the computer is also extremely helpful. Say if you have an extremely big test/report due tomorrow, you can study for @CAPS4 online. You can go on google and type in your projects subject and get over @NUM4 results in a fraction of a second depending on your bandwidth. Now, the computer is also profitable. Did you know the two people who made google are dirt rich? They made more than the @ORGANIZATION1 and the company @ORGANIZATION1 makes the mostly used computer system. So once again, the computer is extremely helpful and profitable. This is exactly why I beleive the computer benefits the society. The computer lets you interact with other, keeps you entertained and is very helpful and profitable. So quite frankly, you should beleive that the computer is society benefitcial. Thank you for your time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9385,4,"The author concludes this story with “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, whe the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is building, then I will take the test again"". She does this because in the story this plant has given her a lot of beilef in herself to @MONTH1 be do better in the future.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12671,5,"The mood created by the author is the mood of appreciation for his house and parents. First, he author talks about how her parents give up what ever they had for them. It says ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, and careers in the country they loved. They struggled both personally and financially..."" This means that their parents gave up their family and friends and jobs in their beloved country, Cuba, just for him and his sister so he appreciate them a lot for doing all of these for them. Secondly his parents showed him the two lessons abot life. The story states ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice... I've often told them the admiration for their strength and perseverance... and the demonstration of how important family and friends are. These are two lessons that my parents did not just tell me. They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life. This shows that his parents taught his something important without telling him by showing him. Third, he learned the real definition of family. It says ""It was where I learned the real definition of ""family."" It shows he learned the most important lesson it this house. These is the mood and how it is shown.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7092,3,The setting effects the cyclist in away that most people can’t tell cycling forty miles on maybe a gallon of water is hard expecialy in California “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly and I was traveling through the high desserts of California in June” The effect on his body would be rather devastating.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 776,1,"Yes, I do think that we should continue useing computers because it helps us stay in contact with other countries around the world, it forms a balance, and it also makes life simpler. First of all, computers help us stay in contact with the other countries around the world. Without computers we would not be able to @CAPS1 or evan video message other countries about important events. Sencond, we have to balance computers and excersing and interacting with just sitting on the computer but computers can help us interact with family and friends by emailing or video chating can also help you stay in contact. Last useing computers makes life simpler like how its so much easier to write an @CAPS1 and not a letter and its easier to instant message someone then to call them also for school projects you can make your project look so much better by adding pictures and diffrent fonts just hand writing it. That why arents arent a waste at time because they help us stay in contact with the other countres, they form a balance and it also makes life simplier.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18150,7,"One @DATE1 @TIME1 I was very patient when I was waiting for my sister in law to tell my brother to tell us we could come in the hospital room and see their brand new baby @CAPS1. My father and mother were waiting with my sister, bother and I, in the waiting room / lobby. At the time it was probably for an hour and a half waiting. I guess that I could say that I was being patient. Also very ten to fifteen minutes I would have to get up and walk around. I was so shaky nervous and jumpy. But it probably didn't help that I drank three cans of pepsi and right before rushed to the time I was being patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 246,1,"Dear editor, Have you ever would to know something so badly that you can't focus on anything else? Have you ever tried to find that information and had an""ah-hah!"" moment? What did you use to search for this knowledge? You probably used a computer. All you need to do is type in your request, hit "" enter"" and viola! Your screen fills with choices of information sites. Computers help so many people with everyday questions. Our country has gotten smarter because of computers. You can converse with friends that have moved across the state, country, or even world. At every click of your mouse there are new things to learn. You can even use the computer for your personal enjoyment. Computers have opened up so many opportunities the world needs to lake. When I was four years old, my best friends at the time moved to florida. I was devastaded. At first, we tried writing letters to each ohter. Then, as we grew older and became busier and busier, or connection with each other halted. As technology and computers have advanced, my friend and I text, e-mail, and instant message each other all the time. It has made our long distance friendship easier and closer. Because of computers, you can communicate with friends you thought were long-lost. You can also meet new people with one of the many sites available. How would you like to talk with someone all the way down in @LOCATION2? World communication has also opened up many business opportunities. Since the economy is failing, computers will open job spaces, help college students study for their futur career, and hopefully help to improve the lives of many people. Communication is needed for many things to make our world better for generations to came. Instead of going to a noisy arcade, why not play exciting games right in the privacy of your. Any game you can think can probably be found on the @CAPS1. From a simple game of solitare to an advanced level of shift, games for any age and difficulty level can be found. New, some people @MONTH1 think that all kids are going to do is sit in front of the computer and play games. There are going to be some peole that will refuse to go outside, spend time with their friends or just read outside. There will definitely be some people like that. I can't help it. What we can do is all those that refuse to go outside to do so. I know many people who spend and budget their time wisely and still have a great time. We can also encourage kids to use exercise programs on their computers and video games to improve their health. There are many fun and games that help you to be a better and healthier person while still having fun. The computers we have in our homes right now are equipped with so much information that if you tried to take it all in are you would be overwhelmed. @ORGANIZATION1, a popular search engine, gives you the power to look up anything you could ever wait to know from the vice president's birthday to the price of eggs in @LOCATION4 to how wide the @LOCATION1 is can all be found with the click of a button. this knowledge helps with homework assignments incredibly. Most reference books are out of date and information is inaccurate, but computers are updated so frequently, you have all the facts all the time. I think our country has gotten much smarter because of computers. So whether you want to talk to your long-lost friend in @LOCATION2 or talk to an expert on osprey in @LOCATION3, you can find your answer on the computer. While you're at it, play a couple exciting games and learn about the best movies ever released in @DATE1. Have fun and learn lots!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15698,6,"When Al Smith wanted to make a dock on the Empire State Building he wasnt really thinking straight. That was a horrible idea. Passengers would risk their lifes going on and off the dirigibles. He probably wasnt thinking about safety things and just was going for looks. The obstacles he would encounter words death from idiots that would go up there, weather, and @CAPS1. The weather was a huge factor because if it were to be windy it could through the dirigibles to go off course and crash. The @CAPS1 to make this landing pad would be crazy too because they would have to buy all the floats and make a landing station. @ORGANIZATION2 wasnt in a smart guy for letting dirigibles for landing.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7437,3,"There are many things that can affect a cyclist's journey. This cyclist seemed to have bad wick. He starts off mentioning that he is planning a trip to Yosemite and the men that hear this give him a tip. The cyclist is pretty confident in what they tell him, so he follows their suggestions. He ends up getting lost. The cyclist is also travelling in the “high deserts of California in June.” That means that he is travelling in summer with dry air. When he gets to the first “town” he sees, he can it get the water he needs to rehydrate his body. He also runs into a snake while travelling through the desert, which slows him down. Because it’s hot, and he’s tired, he begins to see mirages that affect him. All of these features cause the cyclists to take one long, tiring journey through the desert. These features also taught him the lesson to not take advise from old men who have not left their porch because their information @MONTH1 be out of date.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21629,8,"When you laugh, is @CAPS5 out of habit, or is @CAPS1 cause? What are the causes for laughing? Is @CAPS1 even such a thing as a ""cause"" for laughter? I'm sure that if you were to get a scientist's opinion, you would be given an in-depth, technical explanation for the cause of laughter; but does that mean that laughing is simply a message sent from the brain to the required muscles? Certainly not! The true cause is what was said or done to cause the brain to send the message to the required muscles to physically make a person laugh. So what makes people laugh? A funny joke, a senseless action, a misunderstanding? @CAPS5 can be anything! Without a doubt, one thing that makes people laugh is having a delightful time with a friend or two. @DATE1, @CAPS3 older sister @PERSON4 and I unknowingly went out on an adventure. We were headed to @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1 to visit our very best friends, @PERSON2 and @PERSON3, who happened to be almost completely identical to @CAPS3 sister and I in personality; @PERSON2 being like @PERSON4 and @PERSON3 being like me. Now, whenever the four of us got together, @CAPS1 was no telling what kind of humorous and insane memories we would all go home with; all we knew was that hanging out together @CAPS8 failed to brighten up our days and put a smile on our faces. This particular day, both @PERSON3 and I were in desperate need of each other's full attention and up-lifting spirits. She and I had both been going through a rough patch with some friends at our schools (oddly enough, we were both having friendship issues with someone named @PERSON1, and we didn't even go to the same school), so after some discussion between both of our sets of parents, they agreed to have @PERSON2 pick up @LOCATION3, @PERSON4 pick me up, and well all meet somewhere to take our minds off the antagonizing situations were were both suffering through. We decided to meet in @LOCATION2, at @PERSON2 and @PERSON3's house. When we pulled into their drive way, I could feel @CAPS3 body being filled with excitement, as if the emotion was trapped inside some kind of storage container inside of me that was too small to hold all the contents that were being held inside. Before the car engine was completely turned off, @CAPS3 seat belt was off and I was half-way out of the car door. I slammed @CAPS5 shut once @CAPS3 body had slithered its way free and ran for the door. To @CAPS3 surprise, @CAPS5 was unlocked! I pushed @CAPS5 open obnoxiously yelling, ""I'm heeeeeeeereeeeeeee!"" @CAPS1 was a cry of laughter that filled the room. I hugged both of them in one tight squeeze, and almost as if @PERSON3 and I had our very next move planned out, we immediately began chattering about the incidents that had occured that day as we took a seat on the couch. All that could be heard was, ""@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4! I have to tell you what happened today!"" and "" I can't believe she said that!"" or ""...and she said...and then I was like...so then she says...""@CAPS5 was just as if we had taken up the life of a drama-ridden teen straight out of the movies. Things were going as they normally would have; @PERSON2 and @PERSON4 dwelling close to @PERSON3 and I in the dining room locatated at the far end of the couch where she and I sat, still completely involved in our similar freshman-year-of-high school worlds. They were completely immersed in their own conversations of old memories we'd had together. All of a sudden @PERSON2 shouts, ""@CAPS2! @PERSON3 and I baked you brownies!"" @CAPS7 off guard by his intejection, we all once again fell into laughter, although this time, making our way toward the kitchen in search of said brownies. When we arrived, @CAPS1 sat a pan of brownies on the middle counter. @PERSON3 uncovered @CAPS5 and gave us each a napkin with which a brownie sat on top. We stood together, leaning against the tile counters, enjoying our brownies and the company of one another. Suddenly, @CAPS1 was a dull moment; no one was saying anything. As if to fill the silence before a timer ran out, @PERSON2 blurted out, ""@PERSON4, do you wear a wig?"" @CAPS8 in our lives have any of us laughed as hard as we did at that moment. @PERSON3 fell to the ground, @PERSON2 and @PERSON4 were leaning upon each other for support to keep from falling, and I was completely doubled over, trying desperately to keep the sip of milk I had just taken inside of @CAPS3 mouth. Minutes creeped by, and we were still laughing at the off-key remark. To this day, @PERSON4 and I remenise upon that afternoon and the laughter that was shared upon us and our very, very best friends. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19528,7,A time when someone was patient was when a guy named @PERSON2 was driving and a little girl named @PERSON1 was walking on the side walk and it was a red light. She yelled out loud “go old man” the old man went and she flowed him to the store and she asked what was that and @PERSON2 sales that was nothing .No you tried to hit me no you were rushing me so I went. @PERSON1 saies to @PERSON2 I was looseing or patience .@PERSON2 tell her well learn how to control the in.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3509,2,"From the point of view of a student, books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from shelves just because of the material it contains. I read, watch, and listen to things everyday that my parents my not be too thrilled about, but it hasn't changed the person I am today. You can't escape things like drugs, sex, and other explicit things that we might not want our children reading about. It's in society. These things are everywhere, and just taking these materials off the shelves are not going to solve the problem. I think that we have a freedom to read about, listen, or watch whatever we would like, and removing these things takes away our freedom. I think that inappropriate books, music, movies, magazines, and etc., should not be taken off the shelves. '@CAPS1' items are all over society. It's everywhere you look. Billboards, signs, books, magazine, music, television, movies, etc., but taking things like books, movies, music, and magazines off the shelves are not going to stop the inappropriate behavoir. Everyone in society is still going to act this way, whether you can stop your children from hearing about it or not. You still have commercials, billboards, etc. What are you going to do? Ban your children from life in general? No, I don't think so. Reading, listening, learning, about this stuff isn't going to make your child a horrible person. I personally think, at a certain age, they need to know about this stuff. For example, I'm a good student, I behave well outside of school, I have good friends, and I get along with my family. I also read every single one of @PERSON1 books. All of them are about people who do drugs, are suicidal, and do sexual related things. These books are extremely good. Definitely the best books I've ever read, but reading these books hasn't changed who I am. I don't do drugs, I'm not into sexual things, so why would it hurt if I read books about it? From my experience, reading these things are honestly kind of helpful. It takes you deeper into things. Everyone knows the basic learning you get in school, which is extremely @CAPS2. Reading these books, and listening to this kind of music, and watching these kinds of movies, takes a whole different point of view. Back to my experience with the @PERSON1 books, you read stories that are based off of her life and relationship with her daughter. Crank, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4 is a trilogy of books that show the life of @LOCATION1. You see the struggle, the hurt, and the pain the family goes through as @PERSON2 starts to walk with the monster, also known as @CAPS5. Reading these books makes me realize that I don't want to ever put myself through the things @PERSON2 does to herself, and her family. It gives a whole new look on things. After reading these, I believe I won't ever do 'offensive' things. From my experiences as a student, I don't believe taking offensive material off the shelves is necessary. It gives a deeper look into information about these things. Also, you can't escape explicit material. These things are a part of life, something you can't run and hide from. You just have to accept the fact that it's there, and it's not going away. If you think your children are going to start doing those kinds of things after reading them, talk to them about it. You can't protect your children from offensive material. At least not forever",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3455,2,"Librarys have the right to diside how censored they want their material on their shelves to be. Much of this material @MONTH1 be considered offensive to certain people. However some materials @MONTH1 be as offensive to one perwson, it @MONTH1 not be offensive to another. Americans have freedom of speech, and writing, and many ohter rights. A library should have the right to put whatever materials it would like on to their shelves. There will always be offensive songs, books, movies, and magazines. Howver, some materials @MONTH1 be found offensive to someone, it @MONTH1 not be found offensive to others. A library @MONTH1 not be able to please everyone. 'But if they have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work i abhor- then they also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And we have no books on the shelf for any of us' (Paterson). Paterson is simply explaining that if somone finds somthing offensive and wants it removed from a shelf then soon all books will be removed, and there will be nothing left at all on the shelves. A library is a place for everyone to come and find what they are looking for without any disterbances. A person probably isnt looking for somthing offensive. Therefore coming accross somthing that is offensive @MONTH1 be disterbing; however they should be able to try to ignore it. It is that persons choice to choose that library to attend to. So they will choose to maybe find offensive materials. If somone does not wish to come across offensive material they should choose not to go to the library. Americans have the right to be free, so does a library. If a person comes across a offinsive piece of material it should be ignored. A library can not please everyone by taking out all of it merchandice that @MONTH1 be considerd offensive. There simply would be nothin left. People should be aware that they @MONTH1 come across some offensive materials when going in to a library, so it will allways be the peoples choice of attending that library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6094,3,"The setting affects the cyclist in a large way. He has a hard time going on his journey. He began to lose hope, get tired, and began to think he was going to die. The settings played the biggest role. It was very hot with no people or buildings around him. He had very little water and no place to get anymore. He then encountered a large snake which made it worse because he was in fear with no one around to help him. If he would have followed his own directions instead of the old men he would not have had this problem. The setting around him really made his trip a hard one with no water, people, towns, or buildings around him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4762,2,"What if some one found your favorite book offensive? Inapporate materials do need to be kept from young minds of children.On the other hand, you can not sheild people from things they should know or already know. Everyone has different things that they think are offensive, so one person might think a book is so bad it should be recalled from the shelves but an another person @MONTH1 see no problem with it. Children need to be protected from materials that @MONTH1 hurt them in some way. Children do what they see and hear, so they are liable to try and cop harmful things they read . Bad influences can be even magazines with famous celeberties being caught breaking the law or doing bad things and young minds see that as 'cool' and @MONTH1 try to follow tha example. Children and young people see and hear a lot worse things at home, television and even at school than in some books. Children need to be protect but, you can't baby proof life. They willl be introduced to plenty of bad influnces in there life time but, it should be the parent's job to teach their kids to say no and stay away from bad things. Kids can learn so much worse things from something at the library by just setting at home. Libraries are places for use public and the public covers a wide amount of different kinds of people and someone will always find something bothersome with somting or another. People have different views, believes and religions, and, books on these might be offensive to some but, the life style of another. Like The quote by Katherine Paterson, said if we take off the shelves every book or material that somone finds offensive there will be no books in the libraries at all. Yes, there are books that are not always very presentable to a certain group of people but, they should have a right to be read if their is someone who wants to read them. It is not the librarys job to be prejudice against certain books for because someone does't agree with it. Books should be a wide varitey like the people who are reading them. Also children are protect from books if they have learned morals that allow them to make mature choices",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7126,3,Some features of the setting that affect the cyclist is he is riding a bike through the dessert. He says “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” So he was scortching hot peddling a bike. The road became bumpy and curry. A sign had said “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted Speed limit. The speed limit was @NUM1 and he was going @NUM2 so it must have been hard to get over all the bumps. The lastly he comes across and poisioness snake blocked the majority of the pavement infront of me.” So him dehydrated trying to get ground a snake would be terrifying. So on his @CAPS1 the setting doesn’t help him much. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18630,7,"This is a time I was patient. It was a @DATE1 @TIME1 on my birth day, we had @NUM1 boys at my house. We all wanted to play xbox. (@ORGANIZATION1.core @NUM2). Only have @NUM3 controllers. So you now the rule let your geus’s no post! They all played ??. @NUM4 minutes! I had to ?? minutes to play my own game! @MONTH1 all my ?? lucky I was patient. I hated sitting there it got me mad plus after a while they didn’t ?? play.so I asked my friends @CAPS1 and @PERSON1 if they would play ?? with me. They said yes so after waiting @NUM5 minutes and then nobody wanted to play anymore. It made me feel pretty doing bad! It was my birthday you cant play a little ??. I felt good I stayed patient and didn’t go bisunck. This is a time I stayed patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8993,4,The author concludes this paragraph because Saeng is going to wait untill winter is over so she can have a fresh beginning. She wants to try again because the last time she messed up and tilled the plants. Saeng wants to become a gardener like her mother.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 553,1,"I think computers are bad because people use them all the time to go on facebook and other wedsites that are sometimes wast of time. People should not go on the computer as much and explore outside and go for walks, explore the woods, exersise most people do not get alot of exersise that they need because there an the computers. People showed stop making computers so less people go on them and so people can exersise more and loss weight. If people stop making computers some people would stop going on bad wedsites. People should only go on the computer for reasurch for projects or for homework liketyping papers. Parentent and kids need to exersise to stay healthy because people do not wnat diebedes when they are young so it really important to exersise so bad things do not happen to your body people need to stay healthy and exersise. All the computer deos is mess up your brain so you do not exersise. So get off the computer exersise, explore outside, go on walks, and explore the wood you never know what you will find in the woods. Go see what you can find. There will be some interesting things you will find like different kinds of bugs and of insects. You might even find a lady bug. There is all diffrent kinds of bees and you might find one that looks like something. So go outside and explore you will never know what you will find. Go for walkts you will never know what you will find and different kinds of houses and the colors of the house the diffrent kinds of front doors, diffrent kinds of houses like small, meddiem, and large. Some house will have diffrent color. The diffrent kinds of animals like dogs and cats that are in the window or outside. You should go hangout outside. You should go hangout outside with family, friends or both and look at the diffrent stuff in nature. Made you can talk pictures and make a scrap book out of the pictures. Make go in the woods and wake around. Just get out and exersise and you would think to yoruself I should get out and exersise more afften instead of being on the computer because I am having more fun hanging out with friends and family and I am doing exersise at the same time instead of being on the computer. In plus the computer was getting boring.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4366,2,"I do agree with this topic at hand, some of the material that is being displayed on the shelves at our local library is inappropite or sometimes valgar. Way too @MONTH1 people get away with way too many things in this day and age. Our society we live in is just a total wreck and complete, utter disaster. Something has to be done to put an end to this madness. Someone would think that if a librarian put an inappropite book up on the self, that @CAPS1 is inevitable that a child or someone irresponsible would find the book. Yet we still witness children reading or looking at a book, type of media, or entainment that is not suitable for their age group. Sometimes adults find books that are not pleasing, why would we put them on a self to be publicly displayed? That is a question that I have yet to find the solution to. I got home from school a couple of days ago and I heard this hip-hop music comming from my nine year old sister's room. I started to listen to the lyrics and they were absolutley awful, @CAPS1 was singing about drugs, sex, and alcohol. I went in her room and turned @CAPS1 off and questioned her where she got the @ORGANIZATION1 from. She replied 'the library.' That's just another example of what I'm speaking about. If someone at the age of nine can check out a @CAPS2.D. like that, then imagine what is avalible to me at the age of sixteen. Adolessence do not need those kinds of thoughts and words in their vocabulary. I'm just afraid for the next generation; what are they going to be listening to? What are they going to be reading? And @CAPS1's not just the library, @CAPS1's everywhere! We can't even live a day of our lives in this society with out hearing something bad on the radio, on tv, or even in public. Everywhere we turn is something bad or valgar. So we need to think about ourselves and our children and try to clean up our acts a little bit. We need to stand up for what's appropite and what's right",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9962,4,"He ended the paragraph like that because he @MONTH1 want you to read on, or it could be that he is showing you the comparison between the flower and Saeng. ""When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when. the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again, ""The quote is showing the flower can fight through the winter and come back. Saeng failed the test once and is now going back to retake the test. Which shows that they both have modivation and the integrity to come back.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15799,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many obstacles to allow dirigible's to dock there. What these builders were facing was a thousand foot derigible moored at the top of the building, the height of the Empire State Building is 1,250 ft. Adding the single cable tether would add to much stress to the buildings frame, the workers would need to modify and strengthen the buildings frame. Another problem they didn't realize at first was the wind, from violent air currents. With all these problems that were not easily fixed, eventually the idea of a dirigible at the top of the Empire State Building dissapeared.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18710,7,Patient are people who been injured in same kind of way and are in the hospital trying or are getting better. I was a patient once because I was sick for a very long time so my mom took to the hospital and I got shot. On our way out of the hospital I blacked out and hit my chin on the door so we had to stay their for about an hour. That was the only time that I was in the hospital being a patient.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17842,7,"A time when I was patient was when I preordered a videogame called @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I preordered it a month before it came out and I couldn’t wait for it to come out. I mostly wanted it because @ORGANIZATION1 is the company that makes it and this is the last game @ORGANIZATION1 was making because some other company bought the @CAPS1 series from @ORGANIZATION1. When the game finally came out on @DATE1 fourteenth two thousand ten, I bought with my friends and the game is amazing. I would give it four of five stars. I’m not absessed with it through. I play it only about two hours a day which is all my parensts let me play any way. Hala @CAPS2 is my very favorite game.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12551,5,The mood of this story is very happy because the author is describing his childhood memories and all the great times he had in his home. He says over and over that he loved his home when he was a kid and enjoyed hanging with his family. Also the mood of this story is very loving. The author talks about how he realized the true meaning of family in his house. Plus he talks about how much his parents sacrificed for him to be happy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1643,1,"To the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, This day in age, computer technology rules the world. It's where we get our news, music, shopping and even enterteinment. Sounds great right? But there are some big downsides to this box of information. Such as, this gadget is taking over peoples lives and keeping them from excersizing. Now a days, people are even loosing human interaction from these marvelous toys. And finally, computers are very expensive electronics, they have much up keep which costs you money ultimately making you depressed. As you can see, although there are some great pros to computers, there are also pretty big downfalls that you havn't thought of yet. As I previously stated, computers are taking away from people excersicing. We're all becoming quite lazy. People rather stay at their computer screens playing grand theft auto or facebook stalking than going outside to play a game of soccer with your friends at the empty field down the street. @PERCENT1 of the @LOCATION1 goes without physical domain for at least a @DATE1 and a half. @PERCENT2 of those people rather just tay at home on their computers. This is a disgrace! We cannot let this continue. We must change the way we live and get rid of this unhealthy appliance we call a computer. Of all my reason that computers are bed, this is by far the most disturbing. People are having less, and less human interactions as computers become more popular. Now you, can d everything from your computer. Soon people will be marrying them. Oh wait, that's already happened. Just yesterday, I read in the newest issue of @CAPS4 @CAPS5 that a man married a character in his computer game. There was a priest present and everything. They just recently got back from their honeymoon. This is sad! Look at what our world has become. People rather marry a computer character than actually communicate with real people. We must act quick, I don't know what will happen next. Finally, computer cost a lot of money. You pay @MONEY1 for the computer outright, but then you have all the up keep and there is lots of up keep. Computers are very troublesome. You just keep pouring money into it, which is just depressing. It will just break again soon or freeze and cause you to loose a report you've worked on all night. For example, @DATE1 my dad had to pay @MONEY2 in order to get my @DATE1 computer unbugged. He was so reluctant to even pay it and afterwards he was annoyed all week for even-paying it. It got even worse when it froze up a week later. He was freaking out. Thats all you get from computers, more and more frustration. I just don't think it's worth it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15516,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia amidon @CAPS1 there was a few obstacles while trying to build a dock for the Empire State Building.The first obstacle was the little room they had for a landing spot. New York has alot of people in it and alot of buildings. ""The one obstacle to there expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" They were very big so they needed enough room not to hit anything else.Secondly was safety. They had to think about all the people and how close it would be to the building. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" If the wind blew to hard it could swing it back into the building.Lastly the danger of the weights being over a whole bunch of peoples heads is pretty serious. ""... using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street..."" If one was ever to fail it would probly kill someone. No one would ever get over what happened.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11984,5,"The mood Narciso Rodriguez is trying to portray in this memoir is very relaxing and greatful. He wants to be able to show his readers that he is greatful for how his parents raised him and what type of enviornment it was. By reading this memoir one almost feels like they are at his house, surrounded by his friends and family. Narciso Rodriguez is also trying to show happyness, how he was happy with his life and always having friends around him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 771,1,"Computers are very important, I don’t know anyone who does not need one. But some people say that it distracts you from exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friend. Do I agree? No I disagree with this situation because computers are a modern day tech that people use. They say it distracts you from interacting with family and friends but a computer is the number one way to talk to long distance friends and family, @CAPS1 without a computer how will those people who work for a business work, and last we always need a computer for research. A computer grabs attention to a lot of teenager. Most of the sites we use due to interacting with family and friends. The two main sites people use is myspace and facebook everyone must know these two sites nine out of ten people use it to interact just think if we did not have a computer we would not be able to interact with our long distance friends and family. My aunt has a facebook and her friends live in @CAPS2 she interacts with them all the time they @CAPS1 have phones but comp. have webcames so you can see the person too. Business people need computer a lot of course mobile computers thats why they have laptops. But as I was saying what will people do with out a computer for work they have your schedules, your notification your boss sent out and much more on the weeks most people work and the weekends we can go visit our family membere there are mosly days in a week and a job pay of course you need a computer. Google is the number one searching website we have. If you want to know what time a movie starts most likely you will go to search on the computer, if you have a research paper due of course you will use the computer. We need the computer for everything if I were to ask my dad what the square root of pie is he would tell me google it. This is one of the main thin people do when they us a computer to research. So if you! Yeah I said you think a comp. is a waist of breath think again because it helps you to communicate with your friends. A lot of business people need it to work and last it is a good research engine. But here is a little advice dont spend all!! Day on the computer pick up your walking shoes to get some fresh air you have all day on the computer just go out and enjoy your self in any way possible.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1501,1,"Do you think that computer's are good? Well, I do. There are many reasons why I and you should think, this. For example, it has possitive effect on people, it teaches hand-eye coordination, and it allows people to talk to online with other people. One reason why you should think that computers are good is it has a positive effect on people!! Don't you want to be happy. well then, computers is your online fun source!! And your an learn a lot from computer!! Another reason is that the computers teaches hand-eye coordinbation. Hand-eye coordination is excellent skill that you need in life. For example, lets say that you want to play baseball, and you have no hand-eye coordination and you trip and @DATE1 and you brake something. that isn't good for you, is it. No, it is not good. But, if you had better hand-eye coordination then you probably wouldn't have fallen! The @NUM1 reason is that, you can interact with others online. You can @CAPS1, you can go on chat rooms. Or you can go on gaming sources, and interact with other people!! And, you can go online dating! The computer is a greet way to meet new people that share the same characteristics as you!! If you already have a computer then your fine. But, if you don't then you need to get one. And I am right!! People that don't have a computer have no jb. because people with jobs most of the time have use or have computer. In conclusion, you need to get a computer!! Why? well, that because you can alot of stuff on a computer. For example, you can teach hand eye coordition, and you can chat with online friends. Also, it gives you a possitive effect.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19076,7,"Everyone should have patience. Living patience will help you because your going to have to be patient sometimes. Sometimes some people can be patience and some people can't be patient and which l am one of these people. Quite sometime l can be patient and can't be patient. Being patient was a hard thing for me to overcome. Well, l didn't! for once l was patience in my life. That time was when a lot of elderly people were coming through the door and finally hold the door for all of them. It wasn't easy because l had to be at a @CAPS1 appointment in about @NUM1 min and it was a lot of them. It took about almost @NUM2 min to wait for all at them to get through the door. But l still continued holding the door after holding the door I was late for my @CAPS2 dppointment all it was still so if a commin ?? holding the door",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21291,8," My friend @ORGANIZATION2 received a random phone call in the @TIME1. It was his friends from high school there were three of them. The weird thing about that is they haven't talked much since high school. Surprised @ORGANIZATION2 asked what was going on and how they were doing: assuming they were in jail or something in that matter. Instead the friends replied and told him how they was doing and then told @ORGANIZATION2 they wanted to go on a road trip. @ORGANIZATION2 thought to himself ""why the heck are you telling me about this"", and then said cool. what do you need from me? The friend replied saying he needed @ORGANIZATION2 to plan the trip because they did not have computers and they couldn't read maps. at the end of the phone call @ORGANIZATION2 finally said he would help and plan the trip out. Then asked the friend were he would want to go for this trip, The friend replied I don't know i wanna see a professional baseball game and were ever @ORGANIZATION1 land is i would love to go there. A week and a half went by later @ORGANIZATION2 called his friends back to tell them the plans. Proudly he said after his hard work of planning for them. its a ten day trip for you guys starting in @LOCATION1 then driving down to @LOCATION2's @ORGANIZATION1 and on the way down and back hit up (watch) a game from all five of the professional baseball teams down in @LOCATION2, then go to six flags another amusement park like @ORGANIZATION1. The friends replied what do you mean you guys? You are coming with us. @ORGANIZATION2 was super surprised and told them :you guys haven't talked to me in about five years and then you randomly want to go on a road trip with me he said sounding kind of confused. The friends replied well we need your car and we don't know how to drive and again we don't know how to read maps. Thinking hard about the situation @ORGANIZATION2 finally caved in and told them yes but then gave conditions. He split up tasks for his friends so he wouldn't be stuck with all of the work.For example he gave one of the guys the task of finding hotels and places to stay, another was finding gas stations, and the other friend had to find all the restaurants they were going to eat at. The trip had started and for @ORGANIZATION2 the vacation was much needed and unexpectedly fun and relaxing. At lest for now. Everything was going through and working according to plan they hit up and joyfully watched four of the five baseball games and had a great time, then @ORGANIZATION1 land went above and beyond expectation, and even six flags was exiting and brought @ORGANIZATION2 and his friends back to feeling like they were in the good old high school days.The only slight bit of worry for trouble was one of the friends became behind on his task of finding hotels and places to stay for everyone. the friend had the nights were they stayed at a relatives or friends lived mostly setup. but for the hotels they were kind of last minuet. Last few days before heading back plans were still going accordingly.They just had one more event. the giants baseball game, then stay with there old high school buddy who moved down to @LOCATION2. making sure they would have a place to stay for sure @ORGANIZATION2 asked the friend in charge of finding places to stay. The friend replayed with a""no i haven't talked to him yet. i will call him later.""this made @ORGANIZATION2 a little uneasy, so he told his friend no call him now.the friend did.There other friend picked up to bring bad news he was back in @LOCATION1. @ORGANIZATION2 thought to him self I knew this trip was to good to be true. On the @TIME1 of the baseball game things felt rushed. @ORGANIZATION2 and his friends had to leave really early because the traffic in @LOCATION2 is so random and bad. Mean while @ORGANIZATION2 for got to use the restroom and two hours into the trip to the giants game things started to take a bad turn. @ORGANIZATION2 had to go bad. But his friends kept him going saying the traffic is good we need to keep going. which @ORGANIZATION2 listened and kept going. Then traffic came to a stand still. @ORGANIZATION2 was going to go in his pants!so he pulled off and drove down the side of the high way surprised he didn't get pulled over he miraculously ended up at giants stadium then he saw a portable potty he pulled over and raced to it,it was locked. @ORGANIZATION2 looked around and saw another one. he takes off as fast as he could for it. And yes it was open finally @ORGANIZATION2 thought to him self ecstatically! he stepped inside but then looking at the urinal he realizes he didn't get there fast enough and embarrassingly he went in his pants.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9712,4,In this story the reason that the author concludes things this way is to pick a tone that feel comfortable to test again. The person who will take the test again my have picked the tone with relation to her past which she takes the time to prepare herself and maybe that is something her parents or grandparents taught her.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8998,4,I think that the author concludes the story with this paragraph because he’s trying to prove his point. I think that Saeng was comparing herself to the flower. For example the flower was originally a wild flower and then and then it was planted in a pot. Saeng was free happy girl but then she had to move to @LOCATION1. Both the flower and Saeng feel like they are out of place. Since in the story Saeng is similar to the flower then at the end then at the end of the story I think that Saeng thinks that if the flower can survive the winter then she can survive @LOCATION1 and she can pass the test. This is why I think that the author finished with that paragraph to get his message across.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12414,5,The mood about the memoir was more of an up set memoir because of the way he was talking about his life.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15052,6,"In ""The Mooring Mask"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building faced were nature, safety and the law. Al Smith, @CAPS1 of New York and headed construction of the Empire State Building, was determined to make it the tallest building ever. This would be impossible without a mooring mast, which would serve as a docking station for Dirigibles.In building the mooring mast, came obstacles. One obstacle was nature. There were violent wind speeds at the top of the building, which would cause the dirigible to sway back and forth. Lead weights were typically used to keep from swaying, but if used here, lead weights would be dangling @NUM1 ft above pedestrians heads. Which leads to safety being another obstacle. Many dirigibles were filled with hydrogen, a gas that is highly flammable, if ignited, the possibly largest accident would occur to New York City. The Final obstacle is the law. There is a law that states ""airships may not fly too low over urban areas."" Which would make the mooring mast's purpose illegal. Today, it is nothing more but decoration.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12815,5,"In the excerpt from the memoir ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives,"" by Narciso Rodriguez he has a specific mood or feeling throughout the whole excerpt. He mood seemed to be kind of like a happy mood that shows everything even the hard times like ""a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed the United States,"" in a happy tone or mood. He even explained how his parents left their country and friends to live here and have warre jobs in a lighter happier mood. I believe that Narciso Rodriguez likes to look at everything in a happy, light mood no matter what it is.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18102,7,A time when I was patient was when I was at school. I was waiting for my sience teacher to call on me to get ready to go. I was siting down in my seat. She was calling people to stand by the door to get ready to go to their next class.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15631,6,"The workers on the Empire @CAPS1 Building ran into many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The workers ran into large problems with the safety of docking over a large city. Also, the reality of the construction and location was a future problem for the workers. The process was a troubling challenge overall.It was not very safe to have a large aircraft with passengers hanging over a large city. One percaution that was of great concern was that other dirigibles used hydrogen, ""and hydrogen is highly flammable."" The potential of having a fire over a city was a risk that they could not face. The dirigibles were not even allowed by law to get close enough to the Empire State Building to dock. The workers had to face reality when it came to the construction and location. The mast was so high up that dirigibles would not be able to dock because of ""violent air currents."" Some blimps did not even have the proper ""mooring equipment installed."" The project al ltogether was unrealistic so therefor it was a great challenge for workers docking dirigibles.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7518,3,When your doing any sport or any thing were you sweat your setting is everything. If your sweating in a setting you can easily get sick. The setting from the story Rough road ahead the cyclist had no water and the setting was very hot. Thats why the cyclist was tired and sick because he was sweating and had no water. Thats how the setting affect the cyclist.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4346,2,"I don't believe that any certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc; Should be removed from the libraries shelves, because any thing can be offensive. What if someone needed to resourch about the @NUM1? Well they really won't be able to, if all the books about @NUM1 were taken off the shelves, only bacause someone found it offensive. Now days, everything is offensive to somebody. For this, people need to understand that it is what it is, and if you were not appart of that problem, then what do you need to worry about. This day and age is evil all around the world. There are going to be things happening that are going to make people feel a little offensive. Just like all the earthquakes around the world, I know that there is some people offensive about that, but what if somebody was in college, and they wanted to learn more about what happened, so maybe they can get a group of people, and make there lives better. People are hurting and I understand that, but us people are not here to judge, we are here to help the poor, and the sick, get by with what they have, and just help them see that there is a way out. With all this said I don't believe that we should remove the books, music, movies, and magazines off the shelves in libraries.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18467,7,"Ahh! I screamed in my mind. Baby sitting my cousin took a lot more patience. ( more her than me) @CAPS1 all at started on a @DATE1 @TIME1 my family went to go do some drink (I stayed behind to work on my homework) A little after my mom left I heard a knock on the door. My aunt come in and whispered ""you most??? @CAPS1 was okay is if I left @CAPS2"" @CAPS3 I replied ""okay"" @CAPS4 was asleep for about half- an hour. When I woke up @CAPS4 was @CAPS5 started crying. First thing I did was pick her up and carry her around. Still @CAPS4 was crying! @CAPS3 I thought her cloth need changing. I changed her cloth and??? Keeps crying. Now I had to keep my patience though because who would yell at a baby. Then I thought @CAPS4 was hungry. I didn't know how to make a bottle though @CAPS3 I had to read??? (@CAPS4 had no patience all @CAPS4 want was her bottle) @CAPS5 when I was about to lose my patience I made a bottle bat sure if @CAPS1 was good) but @CAPS4 drank @CAPS1. Finally I put her back to sleep (if @CAPS4 cried one more time. I would do finally lose my patience) @CAPS6 @CAPS4 was sleeping @CAPS4 looked in peaceful until @CAPS4 woke up. @CAPS4 started crying again (this time I knew why because @CAPS4 likes to be carried).By the time my aunt came back my hands hare sore. Although at the end of the day I figured out, that you need a lot of patience to take care of a baby you need way more patience for a younger brother though trust me).",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 162,1,"Since computers were invented, a colossal change in the way society functions has taken place. People how can go on to their computers to communicate with peers, get information on any topic for a school paper, or just because the internet to watch videos and stories. Magazine and newspaper articles, books and even movies and shows sre available on today's computer! This advancement in technology has made the @NUM1 century the most modern era this world has ever seen, and is beneficial to society. The ""computer age"" has given people in today's society the incredible opportunity to broaden their imaginations through technology. You can, in less than one minute go on the internet type in to @ORGANIZATION1 whatever movie or book you want and start watching instantly. People have always said that books can take you anywhere you want. Well, the computers can do the same thing, expect with greater efficiency and with more places to choosen from. You can, instead of buying a book, go online and read of the faraway city of @LOCATION1, or of the eruption of the @CAPS1 @CAPS2, and you can do it with mind-blowing speed. Some think that by wasting time on computers, people are using up time that could be spent studying or with family. Howeer, any information needed to your knowledge on a topic can be found on the internet. And if you want to spent time with your family, you can even look your computer up to a tv and watch a free movie with the family! The computer age is here and it is exactly. What society needs. Picture this: you're doing a school project on the you know nothing about it. Would you rather drive minutes going and thirty minutes looking withb everything you need, or do you think it's more to spend five minutes looking for the website you need on the internet? Obviously, the later of the is much more reasonable. The computer makes getting research for school or work substantially easier. In addition,you can create entire presentations on a computers with surprising ease! Being an eighth grade student, I dont know I would ever do woithout the internet. I rely on my computer to get all of my research for almost every project, and I even make some of my best project on it! The computer is the likes of all the hard working students and adults much, much easier. People's lives have not only been made easier in the field of research; computer make communicating with friends and familyeasier as well! Through e-mail, video chat and instant messaging., we can communicate with whoever we would, whenever we wort. With some computers, you can even see and talk to any person you wish. Without these computers, we will one again have to resort to snail mail, whcih makes instant communication @CAPS3 telephones, we would have no other way to talk. Computers have enhanced communication chill likes so graetly that it's foolish to say their not beneficial to society. How can a machine with so many abilities be for see the computer as a brooden research for school and we want! Bottom line the computer age is here and its amazing.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11895,5,"In the memoir ""@PERSON1"" by himself he creates a tone of love. It is tone of love because he explains that his parents taught him many great things. Also that he is grateful and thankful to everything his parent's gave him, as it says in paragraph @NUM1. For example he explains that family doesn't have to be blood related. His parents taught him that anybody you can trust his family, anybody that you help because you know they will do the same for you. Also in the last sentence it says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"". So the author's tone for his memoir is love and that he is grateful for everything with his parents.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21361,8," @DATE2 I woke up on a very beautiful day. The sky was clear and the sun was shining, which was unusual for a day in @DATE1. I got out of bed, as I usually do. I ate my breakfast, went to the bathroom, and brushed my teeth. I left the house feeling a bit tired but great. As I walked to my bus stop, I watched people go by, saying @CAPS4 every now and then. When I got to my bus stop, @CAPS5 one was there. I thought that maybe the bus had already come and picked the kids up. I waited and waited. Almost fifteen minutes went by. I was starting to get worried. If I had missed the bus, I couldn't go to @ORGANIZATION1. My parents worked until the @TIME1 and there was @CAPS5 one to drive me there. I then decided to walk to the next stop. @CAPS5 one was there either. By that time, I was sure that the bus had come earlier and left me behind. I started to walk back to my house. When I got there, I opened the door and went to check the @ORGANIZATION1 calender hanging on the wall. There was nothing written on @DATE3. @CAPS7 was a normal @ORGANIZATION1 day. @CAPS2 could I have missed the bus? I never miss the bus! I started to ask myself of other possibilities. Maybe there were weather problems and the schools got closed. That wasn't possible because the weather was great. Maybe something happened to the bus, like an accident and @CAPS7 couldn't come, but that wasn't @CAPS7 either because then the kids would have been at their bus stops. The more I thought about @CAPS7, the less @CAPS7 made sense to me. What was going on that day? I got frustrated. I set my backpack down so that I could look for my daily planner. I opened @CAPS7 up and searched for the @ORGANIZATION1's phone number. Then, I took the phone and called the @ORGANIZATION1. ""@CAPS1've reached @ORGANIZATION1,"" a woman on the phone said. "" @CAPS2 @MONTH1 I help @CAPS1?"" ""@CAPS3, I'm a student there and I was wondering if something was wrong because I didn't see the bus today?"" I said. There was a moment of silence. The woman didn't answer me. This was making me angry. ""@CAPS4, are @CAPS1 still there?"" I asked, with anger showing through my voice. Nothing. Then, the woman started laughing. @CAPS8 laughed for almost a minute. This had made me mad. What had I said that would make her laugh like that? ""Was @CAPS7 something that I said?"" I asked. ""@CAPS5, @CAPS5, I'm so sorry,"" @CAPS8 said, trying to keep herself from laughing. "" @CAPS5, @CAPS7's just that, do @CAPS1 know what day is today?"" ""@CAPS7's @DATE3, isn't @CAPS7?"" @CAPS8 laughed again. ""@CAPS5, today isn't @DATE3, @CAPS7's @DATE2."" I was shocked to hear that. I had spent all of my time trying to figure out what had happened. The only possibility that I hadn't thought of was that @CAPS7 was @DATE2. I felt like an idiot. I set down the phone and started to laugh. I laughed and laughed like I hadn't in years.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18029,7,"On @DATE1 it was my birthday I was just turning @NUM1. I was so happy!!! Well while I was being happy and my big sisters were getting thing together for my party my mom was at work. We had everything at the party thing such as juice, pop, food, candy, chips, icecream, but no cake. My mom was suppose to pick it up when she got of work. Then it was time to open the gifts. After we opened all my gifts, it was time for cake and icecream. We had the icecream but no cake, but I didn’t cry and scream like a baby, my sister did but she was still @NUM2 and I was @NUM1 and I had to act as a @NUM1 year old. My mom called and told us she was running a little late and she would be here after she get my cake. When my mom got home we cut the cake and when I took the first bite I said to myself it was worth the wait! I was happy I waited like a big kid, but I was even more happier I was @NUM1!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13259,5,"The mood created by the author, Narciso Rodriguez is a grateful and loving mood. The author creates this mood because he is saying how grateful he is for is parents to sacrifice what they had in Cuba to come here and help create a better like for him. In paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The author is truly grateful for all his parents havedone. Also the author creates a loving mood because in paragraph @NUM2 he is saying how his parents always cared for friends and family an he said that they always kept the door open for anybody who needs time to get on their feet Also the author was talking about how his neighbor hood is a family and they all love eachother. the author, Narciso Rodriguez creates a loving and grateful mood",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6953,3,"The setting in the story “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” really goes against the cycilist and his journey. This is because in the places he goes there is no water and if there is it is really hot or bad water. For example, on page @NUM1 it says, “a tarlike substance oozed out, but the water wouldn’t cool down,” This explains how bad the water was when the cycilist was there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7104,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist because when all the cyclist is worried about is finding a place with water all he’s doing is getting scared and panicing. In other words, when he’s looking around, the setting he sees is like desert and no buildings. The story says, “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” when he sees that he panics and thinks he’s not gonna make it which affects him mentally.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15987,6,"At sporting events, people have gotten used to seeing the @CAPS1 blimp or the Goodyear blimp. Now they are used for advertising but not many people know that they were once thought of as transportation. The excerpt ""The Mooring Mast,"" by @ORGANIZATION2, shows not only the original purpose for the mast of the Empire State building was for mooring blimps, but also shows the many problems faced with blimp travel. Safty was a big issue because the blimps, or dirigibles, were filled with Hydrogen, which is highly flamable. It would be a huge disaster if one of them exploaded over New York City. Another problem was that the winds were always changing and there was no way to keep the dirigibles from moving in the wind and it could be dangerous. There was, also, a law about how low you can fly over urban areas and in order to land correctly, you would be breaking that law, and flying that low would risk wind pusing the dirigible into the top of the building and puncturing it. Al Smith had a good idea for the Empire State Building's mast, however their were to many problems to make it a reality.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8910,4,The author ends the story with this paragraph because the plant is noticed when she is coming home after felling the driving test. So she says when everything is right. She will take the test again. The driving test not important to her she won’t pas it though so she wants to go take it again when the plant she bought is budding and at its best point.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6842,3,"Many features of the setting affect the cyclist. The speed limit sign makes him feel like life is cruel. His first glimpse of the welch's Juice factory makes him feel excited. Meeting the deserted fork in the road makes him feel troubled. When he finally gets there, he feels relieved. These are all examples showing that features of the setting affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7458,3,"In the setting they are in lodi, California. That is a part of the desert. The desert effects the cyclist real bad. For one it is really hot. Two the heat is making him thirsty and is running out of his water. Then last he is near no towns so he can’t get anymore water, so the setting does effect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19401,7,"When I was patient I remember writing an article at sea world when I was very little. I didn’t complain because I knew I would get those sometimes my sister was complaining being she was in a bad mood. We stood in line for @NUM1 minutes for a role called @CAPS1 drop, or something like that I can’t remember. Then there was a line at the ??? for ???. We waited @NUM2 minutes plus the time for every to get out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4054,2,"The @CAPS1, I read an intresting @CAPS2 the other day by Katherine Paterson an author. The @CAPS2 said 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- the work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' I believe that people should not have the right to take matieral such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc. of the shelf of a library, or anywhere else those items are displayed. So I agree %@NUM1 with Paterson because people have their own opions. Some stuff @MONTH1 be more offensive than others to different people. I have observed people, and were all different so why should our thoughts be to? The answer is yes they should be different. But it is pretty simple if you find a book, song, movie, or magazine that you find offensive or distasteful then put it back another person might find it intresting. I want to know the thoughts of my fellow citizens about what Paterson has said. I am asking for your help to do so. I would like you to put the @CAPS2 in The @CAPS1 and hear what people have to say about it. Thank You for accepting my @CAPS4. @PERSON2",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6815,3,"The settings of your environment always seem to affect your mood. Take for instance the cycler. In the beginning he had a positive attitude but once he arrived at the first town his attitude started to go down from there. He explains describes the town as maybe at one point being a thriving spot, “but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” Ghost towns come across very old, run down and dull. That affected the cyclist because by it not being like the old men said he was becoming doubtful, which in turn doesn’t give you the same motivation as when he started. Then when he get to what is suppose to be water and a, “tar like substance oozed out.” That makes him nevers and mad because he isn’t sure he will make it. But his attitude changes as soon as he sees the store. The setting becomes positive and so does he. So, the setting does effect the cyclists mood and attitude.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18937,7,"My mom and I were were on are way to are house from sonco. We got stop by a trane, and it was going varey slow and my mom and I were waiting vary patiently but my mom, after afew minutes wanted to ternanon but we stod than and it was done.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12320,5,"In this memoir, the mood is very pleasant and makes you think of childhood memories. The reason is because he talks about how his parents guided him to be a strong-willed man, and he couldn't have done it unless he had the conditions he did then. He seems to think that if he didnt have the parents and oppurtunities he did then, his life would have been much different. So, the mood in this poem makes you feel like home is where the heart is.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6644,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist greatly. It made him become dehydrated. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 sentence @NUM2 he stated “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state.” This shows how the heat and climate of the setting affected him by how he was getting thrown off balance and wears to him getting dehydrated. The setting of the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit,” by Joe Kurmaskie, effects the cyclist in the story.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1756,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 your computer daily can be a waste of your life. Your computer time can take away from your time spent exercsing and enjoying nature, distract you from human nature things such as communicating, and can also waste tons of energy. Picture yourself, sitting at your desk, talking to some friends online. Take away your computer and all youre doing is sitting thhere, not burning one calorie, or exercising one muscle, [expect your fingers of ] @CAPS2't you think you should be doing something more usefull in your life? Such as taking a walk and enjoying nature? That's what I thought. Nature is beautiful. So @CAPS4 enjoy it throug h a window next to your desk? obesity is a problem in @LOCATION1. @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 are considered ""fat"" @CAPS4 would you even think about spending your day simply sitting in a chair? Go to the gym and loose some of that extra body weight! Communicating through @CAPS5's is so over-rated, people can't express their emotions! all they can do is send a smily face or happy face. Communication wih only your friends can cause you to miss out on things. For example, lets say there is a cancelation at your work place on the news, but you @CAPS2't see it cause you were @CAPS6-ing with your friend. @CAPS6? @PERCENT2 of people @CAPS2't even ""laugh out loud"" @CAPS7 they send that to their friends. Plus you @MONTH1 even go to your friends, house and instead of laughing, you'l say @CAPS6. Are instead of gasping, you say, ""@CAPS9!"" I mean come on people, get out and really ""communicate"" @CAPS10, so you bought one of those new lights? Too bad youre not even saving any energy by @CAPS1 that computer of yours daily. @CAPS1 that @CAPS11, uses about the same amount of energy in as @NUM1 regular light bulbs in @NUM2 hours, @CAPS12 that light really saving you that much money. Haven't you heard? the economy is bad, which means we @CAPS2't have alot of money which means YOU playing online games is wasting energy, which is wasting money. Someones going to have to work overtime this week, and it's not me. I @CAPS2't think hair spray is the cause of the layer being destroyed... Computers are bad, and dont have a good enough reason to be used. They take enjoying nature, reduse your communication levels, and not to mention, waste a lot of energy. Therefore, my point is made.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16027,6,"In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the builders faced a few problems. First, they had to figure out a practical way this could be done. When they decided to construct a ""rocket-shaped mast"" that the dirigible could attach to, they realized that the roof had to be built first. After the building of the mast was completed, saftey became an issue. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (paragraph @NUM1) If there were ever an accident with a foreign dirigible, the safety of New York City would be at risk. Also, the dirigibles could not be tied down with weights like they can in an open field. This would also be unsafe for the people of New York. The main obstacle the builders faced with saftey, which is a big issue. Therefore, the dirigibles could not dock on the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12523,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the author sets a certain mood. I think the mood created in this story is love. My reason for thinking this is that the story talks about how the parents sacrificed everything to move to the @LOCATION1 so they would have a better life and so would their children. Another reason why love is the mood is because he talks about how even though the people he spent his time with weren't his blood relatives, he still consider them all family. Lastly, I think love is the theme because he shows an undying gratitude towards his parents for his wonderful childhood and making the place he lived in feel like home. That is why I think the mood the memoir creates is love",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10030,4,He concludes the story because he was another chance to etact the test.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13031,5,"The mood this memoir created was a warm greatful feeling, with his praising for his parents and saying how much he loves his tiny home in his hometown and how greatful he is for his parent's selflessness.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10184,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because is symbolizes the hope that things will get better. The author ends with hope because the flower symbolizes the girl and the girl saying that if the flower can survive the year. So can she. This symbolizes hope because the girl is realizing that it is going to take time before she can adapt to her new country but eventually she will. This is meaningful because the girl considers the day that she had to be horrible and that this statement ends the day on a good note. The girl spends the entire day wishing that she were back in her own country and missing her grandmother and friends. But this paragraph is the girl vowing a promise to her self that she will withstand the winter until spring and it will get better when she can take the test again. The entire story builds up to this turning point when Saeng realizes that she will make it through this struggle just like this flower will make it through the winter. Saeng realizes that it is going to take time for her to adapt to this new and strange country and the new lifestyle that she must adopt,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16201,6,"In order to dock these dirigibles, the builders would face many serious problem. These problems in which builders would be forced to deal with is when, a city, and framework. First off, the building frame was too weak to tied to a dirigible. This is because it ""would add stress"" to the frame which could ""be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" Due to this they would be forced to spend ""over sixty thousand dollars"" to strengthen the frame. A second issue the were faced with is that it is in a city. Laws had prohibited ""flying too low over urban areas"", let alone ""tie up to the building"". Due to this fact, they would be forced to design a way for it to dock. Finally, ""violent air currents"" would cause more issues. The builders would have to deal with building a piece mooring equipment that could with stan the wrath of ""nature itself"". All in all, this plan would force many issues on the builders, in order to function",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6428,3,"The settings in the story affected the cyclist throughout the story with winding roads and hills peddling can already be tough, tiring, and challenging, with the rider having little to know way or the roads were ten times harder to deal with. And with no landmarks or places insight its hard to have confidence because theire is nothing to keep going for.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3492,2,"In this life time we will all have our own oppinions about topics and problems in the world. There is a question that ponders in my mind. Is censorship in libraries a problem or a right? If i was a parent, I think I would be able to understand why I mite want to have a book removed from a shelf, but the thing is though, it is unconstitutional to do that. That is why in my oppinion censorship in libraries should not be aloud. When I was twelve, one time at the library I was reading the back of a book, and my mom approached me and told me that book was a little too graphic for me to be reading. It was about the @CAPS1. Now that I am older, I realize why my mom wouldn't want me to be reading a book like that at that age. That is one reason I can understand why some one would want to have a book removed from a shelf, but they can not do that because, that book is there to remind us why we should never have another world war again. I also think that everyone has there right of an oppinion on why somthing should be, or not should be done. One thing that I have obserbed, is that when kids read bad things, and look at bad things, it can really have a big impact on there life as what they do in the future, and there present. That reason it's self is a very good explanation on why I think that instead of censoring books, there should be some type of boundaries posted on what types of books should be read beyond a certain age, or if the child wants to read a certain type of book, the child must have a legal gurdian with them at that time. With that being said, I have come up with, what I believe to be a very good idea on what should be done in libraries. I think that any book that mite have somthing that is a little bit appropriate should be put into a section that is rated just like movies. If somthing has a little bit of inappropriate language such as cursing, these books should be put in a section for people over the age of thirteen just like a movie. Basically, the books will be put into sections depending on what they are rated just like a movie. If the book is rated @CAPS2, you must be over the age of seventeen to read it. This idea could be a really good solution, that way no books would be removed, but also these books will be kept out of harms way of children. Honestly, if I was a parent I would not want my children to indulge in reading of books that talk about sex, violence, and vulger, but also it is my belief that we all have our own oppinion, and have the right to be able to read and see what we want. On thing I think we all need to think about is things that have been done in the past that have had huge benifits on our country. Our four fathers, more than one hundred years ago wrote a document called the @CAPS3 of the @ORGANIZATION1. This document has amendments. These amendments state that we have the right to speak, have oppinions, and read what we want because, we should have the right to live a free life. To remove books from the shelves is unconstitutional, and I don't know about you, but I know that all the people that have gone against the constituotion have not found a great place in this world. My basic belief is that, why remove a book from a shelf, when we can impervise so everyone is happy? If the world would just get over the harsh things of the books we can all come up with a solution. There is an answer for this, books should not be burned they are master pieces. Cencorship can not continue in libraries or there won't be any books left.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17865,7,"Patience? I am not a patient type of person. I am a @PERSON1 @CAPS1. He played in a @CAPS11 called @CAPS2 which l really wanted to @CAPS10. Which came out @DATE1. That l havent even seen yet until One day l was sitting in my porch where l asked my mom to @CAPS19 to @CAPS9 and @CAPS10 @CAPS2 that @DATE2 when she said ""wlc"" l was really upset because l wanted to @CAPS10 it really really bad. I was being very patient at the time. I had called my @CAPS4's, @CAPS5's, sister's and brother's to fave me. @CAPS14 they said they were busy so l cried myself to sleep. The next @NUM1 days my mom and dad was talking about going to the movies and out to dinner. I walked in screaming and yelling ""@CAPS6 ARE @CAPS7 @CAPS8 @CAPS9 AND @CAPS10 A @CAPS11 AND @CAPS12 @CAPS13 @CAPS14 @CAPS7 @CAPS16'@CAPS17 @CAPS9 @CAPS19 @CAPS7 OWN @CAPS21"" @CAPS22 I left out the room. The very next day my brother and his girlfriend went to @CAPS9 @CAPS10 it knowing l wanted to @CAPS9. They came home reasing me saying @CAPS6 good the @CAPS11 was. So that night l went down stairs to demand to @CAPS9 @CAPS10 ""@CAPS2"" saying "" I am being very patient with you all about taking me to @CAPS10 @CAPS2 @CAPS14 you all are pushing my buttons so l demand to @CAPS9 tomarrow"" @CAPS22 I waited @NUM2 second @CAPS22 she said that l could @CAPS9 this @DATE2. That was the very @NUM3 time that l was patient, and I'm proud of myself, I @CAPS16'@CAPS17 wait to @CAPS10 my @CAPS25 @PERSON1 @CAPS26""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20883,8,"Being able to laugh, is one of the greatest feelings in the world. Having family to share it with is priceless. Family moments like that, are times no one can take away. They will be there for you to look back on and just smile on those days. Not being able to laugh would make this world dull and a very depressing place. Laughter is the main connection between family and friends. My family and I decided that for our @DATE1 break we would drive to the great land of @LOCATION1. Not one of us @CAPS1 how to get there, but my mom told us she would figure it out and for us not to worry about it. So the day we were released from school my mom packed us up and off we went.After two long hours of driving we finally arrived at the @CAPS2 @CAPS3. The crowd to get across was huge. On the boat to get across, I thought about going up stairs to see where we were at. There it was @LOCATION2. Once we got off the boat and through the crowed highways of @LOCATION2, and started to make our way across the @LOCATION2/@CAPS4 border. I noticed that my mother had a weird look on her face, the look of worry. My sister asked her if she @CAPS1 what she was doing, she replied ""kinda"". After hours and hours of driving my mother thought it would be a good idea to just buy a map. When we looked at the map we noticed a little town that was very close. When we arrived my mom said we will stay here for the night. When we all woke up my mother told us that she remembered that the town we were staying in is the town we were suppose to be in. After driving around the town looking for our hotel, we were all in the room resting from driving around. My sister made a comment to my mom, about how funny it was to watch her drive around and act like she @CAPS1 what she was doing. This made all of us laugh. We all started to make random comments on her great navigation skills. The rest of the trip we drove around laughing and telling my mom, don't get lost this time, and ask for directions if you need them. laughing about us getting lost made the trip a truly unforgettable moment. Being able to laugh, is the greatest feeling in the world. To do it with family is a great way to remember fun times. Not laughing could make this life horrible and dull. Being with family and taking a negative situation, and turning it into the best vacation ever with laughter is truly priceless.Everybody needs to laugh in their life,because you only live once so make it worth while.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16044,6,"In the passage, The Mooring Mast, Marcia Amidon Lüsted discusses several adversities and obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of their many obstacles they faced, was ""the lack of a suitable landing area. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighed down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was niether practical nor safe."" However before thinking of landing dirigibles, architects had to figure out a way to get the mooring mast on top of the building. They ""could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the building's flat roof."" @CAPS1 ""the steel frame of the building would have to be modified and strengthened."" Most of the problems were avoidable, except for that ""the winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15808,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. When a dirigible was docked, it was held by a single cable tether, adding stress to the biuldings frame. The steel frame of the bilding from top to bottom would have to be modified and strengthened to adress this new situation more than @MONEY1 was spent for modifications on the buildings framework.When the owners of the Empire State building found out about the Hindenburg was destroyed by fire, they realized how much worse it could of bin if it happened right over down town New York. If there was a docking accident and the dirigible was filled with hydrogen then that would be bad for the workers and anyone ealse around the building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3562,2,"'hey', I believe that certain materials, such as book, music, magazines, etc., shouldn't be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. First, I know that people have different views appon things such as magazines, books, and music. And I also know that there are somethings that @MONTH1 be offensive to you, but they aren't offensive to other perople. Such as music there are all kinds of music out there. And I know that some people find rap music offensive and some doesnt. Because A lot of people that doesn't find it offensive relates to it. Second, I feel that if the people that find it offensive would just ignore it then it wouldn't be a problem. Because I know that maybe there is a type of magazine, book, or even a type a music that they listen to is offensive to someone else they might not find it offensive but I bet someone else finds it offensive. So for them to judge these things wouldn't be right. Third, I'm pretty sure that if something in the library was too offensive the library wouldn't have it. But maybe if we would take the time out and worry about our self instead of worrying about what's offensive and what's not then the world might be a better place. And yes i understand that people have different views but we shouldn't let that get to us. So you can see, I believe that certain materials, such as books, music, magazines, etc., shouldn't be removed from shelves if they are found offensive. Because there are billions of people on this earth and I doubt they would all give you the same answer. Because So many people have different opinions, and beliefs appon things.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12508,5,"In the story Narciso Rodriguez by The blueprints of our lives, the author's mood in this story is very happy, generous, and humble. The author is so happy that she is moving to a new, and bigger house. This one she can actually call home. And very generous because her parents moved for her education. and to get good money to make us happy. The girl's parents welcome anyone into their home as family, and thats why she loves them too. But I have to say she's mostly grateful. Because her parent's are doing every thing to make her happy, and they even have to accept getting a job they dont even like. And for their love and sacrifice. And that's what mood the author feel's in the story.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14893,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders faced obstacles such as how the dirigibles would stay tied to the mast. They weren't sure as to how they would keep the dirigible from swiveling from air currents. As said in paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's framework."" Another problem faced was the use of hydrogen in the dirigibles made them highly flammable.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 854,1,"My opinion is that the more that we stay on the computer. The more we get lazy. One reason that I say this is because, a computer is a big handy person in reality. Second reason is, people stay in the house sitting down on the computer other than exercising. The third reason is, people just sit in the house, and an't enjoy fresh air with their loved ones. First, the reason why I say a computer is a big handy person because it does most of the things a human can do. That can lead a person to being very lazy. Just too sit in the house and go to websites. It has a big effect on a humans life. The computer technology have contecll over a huge population of recae. It really make miss out on half of their day. Second, people stay in the house on the computer other than exercising. It's very unhealthy for a person to sit down at a computer all day. The person has to eat so, basicly they eat and sit back down at the computer. It can get out hand because the computer allows people to grace food online. So that right there is an example of people not getting ecersise, and being lazy. You need to get your ecersise dayly. So people that doesnt get their ecersise need to start. Instead of sitting down on the computer all day. Third, many people over whole world have a lot of love one's that they care about and love. ""But"" they dnt get time to be with them, because they are always on the computer. The computer shouldn't take you away from you outdoor life. Okay, so what you can talk fo your friend and family over the computer. It's never like seeing them in person. Go outside and have fun and happy memories with your family. Because the computer is just words being texted. It's nothing like being said. I garrented you that. If you spend time with youre family then you will want to do it again. While your going out excersise and be interacting. In conclusion, if you are allways on the compute that's not good. Just take a few hours out of the day and ecersise. Go out and have a marvelous day. Because the computer doesn't do nothing but make you lazirer (@CAPS1 YOU). If your allways on the computer just be sure that you get your ecersise and your time with your family. It will make your a better person!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1302,1,"Dear Newspaper, I believe that computers have both possitive and @CAPS12 effects on people. However, I believe that there are more positive effects than @CAPS12. Some of these positive effects would be that they are essential for education, a very usful place to communicate, and they can be fun. My first reason for supporting computers would be that they are very eduactional. For example, you can research almost anything. If you are doing your homework and you forgot an answer. An other reason why @CAPS1 is educational is because you can type your paper on @CAPS1 so your teacher can actually read your handwriting. If @CAPS1 is messy. On the subject, you can work from home if you are sick or on vacation. But how do you get @CAPS1 to your boss? Email of course! wich brings me to my next subject; @CAPS2. Another resoursful thing about computers is @CAPS2. There are so many different ways to communicate; @CAPS1's unbeleivable. Take I @CAPS4 for an example. You can @CAPS5 to peoples cellphones. You can @CAPS5 to other people that are @CAPS7 or you can just @CAPS5 on some websites such as @CAPS9, @CAPS10, and tons more. You can also vidio chat with people on things like and @ORGANIZATION1. Those are just a few ways of communicating on the computer. Finally, I would like to tell you about the fun things you can do on computers. First, you can buy games from a store and download them onto your computer. Personally, The sim are my favorite. I understand that computer games can be a negitive thing because they are addictiing, but if you don't go on for hours and hours, then I don't see what the problem is. Also, they have educational games so learning can be both fun and educational. Another thing you could do is play free games or download the game from the internet do your computer so they are both fast and easy. To @CAPS11, Computers can be both @CAPS12 and positive but I chose to look at things through a positive eye and I think you should too. After all, computers can be educational, a social networks and fun. Son @CAPS13 my positive eye... You wont be sorry.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8914,4,"“Winter Hibiscus “is about a girl saeng, who moved from Vietnam to the @ORGANIZATION1. After she fails her driver’s test. She walks home and finds a hibiscus. “She closed her eyes and breathed in, deeply. The familiar fragrance filled her lungs, and saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother’s long gray hair…” She goes to a flower shop to see if it can be purchased. She pays a lot of money for the plant because it is rare and valuable. It is special to her because she used to have hibiscus plants in Vietnam. She brings the plant home & tells her mom that it reminds her of Vietnam. The mom says that it reminds her of Vietnam too. The mom is not happy with how much saeng paid for it. She plants it in her garden.” When the hibiscus was lowered in the ground, a flock of geese flew by.”When the hibiscus returns in the spring, saeng will take her driver’s test again. In the spring, all the flowers start to bud and bloom. Everything is new again. saeng will have a new chance to pass her test.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7089,3,"People who travel will almost always encounter difficulties. For the main character in this story, thus a very true. His first mistake was when he took directions from the “old-timers” by doing that, he travelled extremely far out of his way. In the story he talked to the old men on the porch. He said, “what I shouldn’t have done was to let them see my map"". Another problem he faced was when he began to run out of water. This caused a problem to him because of dehydration. In the story he said, “The water bottle contained any a few tantalizing sips.” @CAPS1, another problem he encountered was the desert area that he was riding through. This caused problem for him because there wasn’t anybody around to help him if he needed it. In the story he says, “There was no one in sight, not a building, cars, or structure of any kind.” By reading this story, we’ve realized that people encounter problems everywhere, however any problem, no matter what size, can be overcomed",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9556,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it is a meaningful summary of the events in the story. Everything that happed to Saeng while she was at the florizd is summed upinto something resembling vengeance. The whole reason that Saeng was sad in the first place was that she failed her driving test. In the final paragraph, she vows to take the test again when the hibiscus buds. The hibiscus that Saeng bought will begin budding in the spring, when the snows melt. The last paragraph of the story gives roem for Saeng to dealhtith her nostalgiaover the winter season. Finally, the geese that fly south make Saeng feel sad, but they light a spark within her she tells herself that she will take the driving test again when the geese return, when the hibiscus buds, and when the snows melt. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4157,2,"I believe that libraries should not censor their literature, all of our media is a fountain of knowledge waiting to be discovered. No one should be able to decide what is appropriate for the public to know. The right to decide what is and is not appropriate for us should not be decided by libraries. That right should remain with every single person, so they can decide whats right for them. Over the last thousands and thousands of years media has grown at an incredible rate through books, music, movies, and magazines. With all of this media we have learned many things that we use today from past trials and failures. Media is something that always is around and reminds us of our past mistakes, to ensure that they don't happen again. The great thing about all of the media we have today is that we haven't even learned everything that we can and will from it. Some of our media @MONTH1 not be the most appropriate things ever, but we can still learn so much from it. It @MONTH1 make some people upset and if it does then they should stay away from it. It is not right to get rid of certain parts of media because what one person @MONTH1 find immoral and wrong someone else @MONTH1 be able to learn from it some how. If you are offended by some of the material thing you should avoid it, not get rid of it for everyone. Our media is very powerful and should not be censored. Media has an unbelieveable impact on the world, so we should not try to hide some of it. We have not even seen half of what media can do",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10406,4,"I believe the author concluded the story with that paragraph because the geese that flew down south in a beautiful @CAPS1 formation, fly down every season. So she tells herself, @CAPS2, she will take the test again when the geese return and the hibiscus plant is budding. For example, she thinks to herself, “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet repitition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now.” @CAPS2, looking up at the geese she is almost reminded of an experience she went through somewhat similar.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 394,1,"I think that computers are a good thing to have because most are portable, there fun to have, and you could research a lot of thing on them. Laptops are cary round computurs. They are very convient to have. You could bring them anywhere you would like. Many people have laptops in their home or with them. There fun to have because you could play many games on your free time with them too. Another thing you could do is make videos. Last but not least you could just enjoy it. You could research a lot of things on them. Internet is a very succesful product. That means you could use it for your home work if you need help. Anthor thing is that you could type up essays that you have to do for work and or school. I think computers are good to have because most are portable, there fun to have, and you could research a lot of things on them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13160,5,"In the excerpt, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Narciso Rodriguez's Home: The @CAPS1 print of our Lives, the author creates a very warm, kind of theme by painting a picture in the reader's mind of a family long ago, that lived in unity and supported each other, pulling through in the very end. The author mentions several things from which one can infer the sensation of a strong supportive family that has everything it needs. As the author tells us, ""In 1961… @NUM1 – family, blond – brick building… created our traditional Cuban home… very heart… kitchen… rich culinary skills and a love of cooking… Passionate cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen… innocence of childhood, congregation of family and friends… endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"" (¶ @NUM1). This quote comes across with not just @CAPS2 meaning, but with a feeling that's hard to obtain – like when you're sitting around a campfire with friends and/or family. This feeling is created by the author's language, displaying a masterpiece to the reader. Language like ""very heart"" and ""warm house"" is what really conveys it. In conclusion, the author uses language appealing to a readers sense of safety, warmth, and unity to create a warm theme in his memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19222,7,"I am writing about a time when someone I knew was extremely patient. He was having to be patient with one thing: @CAPS1. When I was very young, once at a hotel pool, I had almost drowned. Since then I was afraid to swim. So, my patient friend taught @CAPS1 how to swim at a pool in his trailer park. What he had to be patient about though was getting @CAPS1 into the deep water of the pool. He wanted @CAPS1 to go to the deep end of the pool but I was to afraid I would drown. So then he decided he needed to get @CAPS1 into the deep end somehow. We got out of the pool and walked to the deep end. He just told @CAPS1 to jump in, but he should’ve realized I wouldn’t just jump in. He did eventually get @CAPS1 into the water of the deep end, but all I would do was hang onto the edge and not let go to swim or anything. So after that, I just got out and he began to get a little frustrated. He was patient though, and kept working with @CAPS1. After what seemed like hours, he pretended he was going to give up on @CAPS1. I told him if he stayed, I’d go in the deep end. So he did, and I jumped in and realized it wasn’t so bad after all. So now I love swimming, especially in the deep ends. That’s how my friends hard work and patience payed off for both @CAPS1, and him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18332,7,"I remember a time when @CAPS3 sister used to go on and on about @CAPS4 cream sundaes and all that. @CAPS3 mom had to drive me around all day because @CAPS3 dad was sick so that meant the “@CAPS4 cream girl” had to come along too! @CAPS3 mom knew @CAPS6 was in for a long day. @CAPS5 were in the car and @CAPS5 drove past a @ORGANIZATION1 and that’s when @CAPS3 little sister decided out loud “I’m hungry I want @CAPS1!!!.” That is what @CAPS6 said yelling for five minutes straight. That’s when @CAPS3 mom yelled “you speak another about @CAPS4 cream you are @CAPS2 getting it!.” @CAPS3 sister then had this face that meant @CAPS6 was about to cry, which was even worse!!! @CAPS3 mom gave her a cookie so @CAPS6 would stay content for a while; @CAPS5 started driving home when @CAPS5 heard a song on the radio, @CAPS3 sister loves to put the word “@CAPS4 cream” in every song so @CAPS6 started squirming while holding her tounge. @CAPS6 stayed that way all afternoon. @CAPS6 didn’t speak a word that entire day! So @CAPS5 drove past @ORGANIZATION1 and then @CAPS6 started to cry. @CAPS6 had enough. “I want @CAPS4 cream!!.” @CAPS5 were messing with her, so @CAPS5 went back to @ORGANIZATION1 and got her the thing @CAPS6 wanted most her “@CAPS4 cream.” @CAPS6 was patient the entire day, @CAPS6 knew it was hard work. @CAPS3 little sister learned an important lesson that day, that “Being patient means good things will come to you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9435,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because Saeng failed the test and in the spring she will take the test over.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3133,2,"To begin with I feel everyone should admire the libraries. I feel this way because at one point of time we didnt even have books let alone libraries to get books from. A library is a place that has a peacful and calm environment. People come to hang out at the library to collect good books, surf the internet, check out new music and aslo to relax. So to answer the question 'Do I believe that certain materials should be removed from the selves at the library if found offensive?' @CAPS1, I believe if things are on the shelf that @MONTH1 come off offensive to people they should absolutely be removed. You shouldn't have to be in an environment were things are offending you. If things seem to come off offending, it will make indivuals stop coming to the library. This will make the library loose alot of business due to lack of service. The library should be a place that consist of love, peace and harmony. It should be a place were people should feel free and relieved from any stress. By seeing or hearing something that comes off very offensive will tend to bring confusion to the library. This also will make the librarians job much harder than what it should be. They will have to work harder to satisfy the difficulties that you seem to be having with the library. Something that would offend me in a library is some of the music they carry. Certain types of music shouldnt be found in a library. An example of some offensive music is the '@CAPS2 @CAPS3' music, meaning the music with all types of different profanity. The music that is degrading women in a very disrespectful manner. Also the music that's making it seem cool to be violent. This will come off offensive to many men and women. Think about it who wants to listen to music thats makes women feel like their not worth anything and who wants to listen to music that's always talking about killing, fighting and gangs etc. People whould like to hear more soothing and relaxing music. The music that makes you happy no matter the mood your in. The library should just pick their music wisely so everyone can be well satisfied. In conclusion as stated the library is a great place to hang out and just to relax. It should never come off as a place with things that is offensive of so it should get removed. This would keep down less confusion and more people would continue to attend the library because they know what a nice place it really is",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1342,1,"Do you think people spend to much time on the computer do. I think that kids and adults spend to much time @CAPS1, twitering, doing facebook and myspace. My resons include, people should go outside more, and play with real people, and spend time with family. Most kids should go out side more for example my friend @PERSON3 spent @NUM1 hours a day! on his computer and haven went outside. Another example is my neghbor @PERSON2 spent all day! in his basement playing on his computer and haven went outside and since he hevet went outside he is terreibely the sun and he is now @NUM2 years old an dhe still dont go outside it was because he spent to much time on the computer. Secondly, people should play with real people. For example there was a kid name @CAPS2 and he allways played with vertual people an dfrends and never realy pleople and now he is so shy around real people that he wont even say one word. Another example is @CAPS3 he only had vertual frend and never a real one and he is so depress becose he never had a best frend. Thirdly you should spend time with your family. there was a named @CAPS4 and he never spent time with his family becse he was to busy writing emails and @PERSON1 says that kids who dont interact with them wont have the same benifits as kids who do. Another example there was a family who were to bisy with the computer that the kids never met the grandparents and when the grand parents passed away the kids never met them becse they would rather play on there computers. In conclution people should go outside more, play with real people, and visit there family then if you want to play on your computer then after reading all of these examples then go ahead.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12776,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir was, gratitude towards his parents.In the memoin the @CAPS1 thanks his parents for raising him the way they did. In the article he thanks them by saying things like ""my admiration"", ""my gratitude"", and ""generosity"". all these statements are true and they reflect his mood towards his family.In conclusion, the mood was alot of thing but, i choose gratitude because it reflects how he feels about his family the most.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6865,3,"The cyclist had a couple of affects in his journy. One of them was he hills the it was a problem because it used most of his energy and slowed him down. The other one was water, the lack of water. If the had enerf water he would have gotten a boost that would have kept him going.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18655,7,"One day when I was in third grade @DATE1. My mom was driving me to school and she said “When I pick you up today I have surprise for you at how.” @CAPS1 that whole day I had to be patient but I couldn’t I just had to get home to see what is was .I could have pretended I was sick and went home but I decided to just calm down and be patient . I told myself the school day. Will be over soon. At @NUM1 left school and my mom pick me up. I told her I was @CAPS1 excited to see what she had for me but I told her I was patient the whole school day! Finally we got and she told me to “ go to my room “,I said “okay” when I got inside I sawa little cute ,black pup pled I was soon happy I got a dog ! I said thank mom thank you sos much dad I end naming her chioe.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15539,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that United States dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. If the dirigible was ever destroyed by fire above a densely populated area like downtown New York the accident could be very dangerous. One of the grestest obstacle of using the mooring mast was nature itself. The author says ""The winds on top of building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Dangling lead weights to weigh it down over pedestrians on the streets was niether practical nor safe. The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2 tells a few obstacles the builders had to face to allow dirigibles to dock the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12183,5,"The author created a mood in The memoir. The auThor use a mood of @CAPS1 @CAPS2 The memoir. The auThor showed This by ""alegrai graced our kitchen table more often Than noT."" This shows That The auThor used a mood oF @CAPS1 @CAPS2 The memoir",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7268,3,"In the passage “Do not exceed posted speed limit,” there are many features from the setting that affected the cyclist. One feature that affected the cyclist was the snake he encountered on his way, for example in the text it says “At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake”, “I cased post, tyring to keep my balance in my dehydrated state” This proves that the snake was a feature that affected the cyclist by giving him a point to stay calm even in the state he was in being dehydrated and all the affects he encountered from that.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15965,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles when trying to obstruct dirigibles to dock on the top of there building. They faced obstacles like laws, saftay problems, and also natural problems when trying to successed this gutsey idea. They firsted faced the problems of law, ""An existing law aginst airships flying too low over urban areas. This law posed an obstacle for the builders because they would have to dock the blimp without flying in this restricted fly zone. The Second problem was dealing with saftey, ""when dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed... Owners of the Empire State building relized how much worse that accident could have been over downtown New York."" After blimps were proven to be highly flamable the builders saw that an accident over highly populated New York City would be worse than a rural area. Finally the builders face problems with nature, ""dirigible Los Angeles approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds."" The builders relized that the drastic change in @LOCATION2 at the top of the building where not apperate for a blimp. These designers had more than a mundane idea but it was shot down with the multiple obstacles that a-rose.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15705,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first initial issue that they faced was the stress the blimp would put on the building As the article states here, ""the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation...the building would have to be modified and strengthened to accomodate the situation."", the stress prompted the need for further improvements on the building itself; which obviously costs time and money. Another problem they faced was the impracticality of the dirigibles themselves. The dirigibles require hydrogen, which is highly flammable. As a result of the Hindenburg disaster, ""the owners of the empire state building realized how much worse that accident would have been over a densely populated area such as downtown @LOCATION1"" Another great issue that presented itself was the inconsistent violent air currents, which made safe docking for the blimps difficult. This problem could be combated with lead weights, but they ""were neither practical nor safe."" And lastly, there was already ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law prevented the blimps from being able to fly as low as the building, let alone land there. In conclusion, the builders of the mooring mast at the @CAPS1.S.B. faced many obstacles in its construction which questioned its safety and prevented it from being practical.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10176,4,The author concludes with this sentence because he is showing the girls cofidence in herself. It also gives her enough time to get ready for the next test. Also she knows she will be ready when her flower starts to bud.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 123,1,"Every where you look people are using computers. Just about everyone has one. Some say that computers are bad for you but they can really benefit society. Computers are used for research, socializing and almost all of our @CAPS1 work is done on computers. One of the main things that computers provide is research information. If you want to find out anything, you can find it on the internet. It is an efficient way to study or find information for school. Before the internet and computers, it would take weeks to find enough information for a paper or business work. This was because all information was found in books. Books did not always give you the information you needed whatever was written was all you got. Because of saearch engines and websites, you can type in whatever you want to look up. It is much easier to log onto a computer and type in a question than search an entire book to find an answer. Computers are the best way to research a topic. Computers are also used to socialize. You can chat with almost anyone on the internet. Being social is one of the most important parts of life. It has been proven by science that social people live longer than people who never talk to anyone. The person you're talking to phnes only give you audio and that doesn't give you the some thing. video chat can allow you to show someone a picture or an expression. Computers allow you to see people that you can't see otherwise. For example, if you have a relative that lives far way and you cant him or her, you can see them through video that socializing through computers is pne of the best ways to talk to people. Our @CAPS1 is mainly run on computers, without them, it would be very difficult to be aware of an on coming attack or threat. The @CAPS1 uses computers to store thir legal files of court cases laws, etc. It is much easier to transfer files digitally than actually sending a paper copy. The store market is also run on computers. You need them to see how you are doing financially computers are essential to our @CAPS1 and economy. Although some experts say that computers do us no good, computers benefit our society very much. They help us research, socialize and they help our @CAPS1 and economy. Computers are essential to our way of life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3693,2,"I understand how some people @MONTH1 get offended by some things they @MONTH1 watch or they might read but that doesn't mean that other people shouldn't be able to know about it because one person doesn't like it. It's kind of a matter of opinion of whether it is offensive or not. I myself have never really read or watched anything that was completely uncalled for. On just about every movie or music album that is produced they rate it so that you can know who should be watching this movie and who shouldn't. If the movie was made with somekind of offensive parts to it then they put with the rating that yes, their is some rude language and things like that. So just because somebody didn't read close enough to see that their might be something they don't like in the movie shouldn't cause everyone else to not be able to see that particular movie. Personally I don't find books to be the greatest things but I am sure of that some books or magazines do tend to have something rude or crude in them but it's not always horrible. If someone thinks that the book @MONTH1 be inapproiate for some readers then they could tell a person in charge in the library that maybe they should only be letting certain people be reading that book because of the content. You shouldn't have to throw a book off a shelf because one or two people thought bad about it. If it was me choosing whether or not to take movies, books, magazines, etc off of the shelfs I wouldn't. I say this because @PERCENT1 of the time things have been rated or in someway approved to be put on general store shelfs. People can simply read details on the back and see that it's not going to bother them in a way or that it could be offensive and they shouldn't be purchasing. If someone complained about a new cd or movie that I personally wanted to see or listen to and it was taken off shelfs I would be upset about it because it probley wouldn't even offened me at all. So no, i completely disagree with the idea of movies or books and music having to stop sales because two or three people were offended by it's content",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6660,3,"In the essay, “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed Limit,” is about a man that follows some bad directions and in the middle of a desert is stuck without water. He starts to lack confidence in the directions when the setting changes. He said, “After fourty miles into the pedal, I arrived at the first town it fit the traditional definition of ghost town.” He had been told this was a thriving town but was left with nothing. This was a big let down and the cyclist wasn’t so positive this had been the right choice. He keeps on riding and finds another dissetling sight.” One ramshacle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that wouldn’t hold in the lamest of mule greeted me.“ @CAPS1 was another place said to be good but all he got was battery flavored water. On the last strech of his bike met with rough rolling hills, a diamondback looking snake, and an abandoned juice factory. All of this brang his spirits lower and lower until he thought he would die. The cyclist ended up finding a store but he was discauraged by the environment he was in a hot and could have died.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3650,2,"There I was, shuffling my way through the library, finding the perfect books to check out. It was then that I had stumbled upon a book that looked incredibly interesting. The cover page featured a depressed girl with the look of hope plastered on her face and the back included the summary of a book I wanted to get my hands on. The book, titled @CAPS1, was about a girl who went through some troubled times but found her way out of it. Stories, novels, magazines, or books on tape of any type find their way onto our library shelves, it is then our job to discover them. Whether literature includes stories of love and breakbreak, sorrow and depression, or the success of a sports team, it should all be allowed on our library shelves. Opinion, everyone has one that conflicts with someone elses. Our world revolves around these different viewpoints and ideas, should our literature and music not reflect these opposing sides? Literature is an escape for many people, it is their way of experiencing the world and to live through the main character of whatever they are reading. If we remove books that @MONTH1 be offensive to one, we are taking away that opportunity for others. In my opinion, the removal of the potentially offensive material in our libraries, is sheltering our world. Regardless of how hard we try, children and teenagers will one day be exposed to the offensive material we are attempting to remove from their lives. We should not attempt to hide what our actual world is like, rather allow them to experience it in a safe way, like reading or listening to music. If someone views material as offensive, it should be the parent's responsibility to regulate whether their child reads or listen to it or not. The removal of the potentially offensive material would not be any help. In conclusion, offensive material should not be removed from our libraries, rather regulated through our parents or elders. The idea of regulating what is on our shelves is not the most effective. If any material has the potential of being offensive, it is not the library's role to regulate whether or not it is displayed to the public",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3327,2,"BOOKSDear @PERSON1,@CAPS1 @CAPS2 staring to tell you about the books in the libraries that some adults find offensive so for the kids. These books should be taken away so kids won't read them, second part is adults should protest so the libraries could get does maganzines away or etc, and my last thing is @CAPS4 do libraries get these books and let kids take them so they could read them.The first example @CAPS2 giving is I founded some books and other things that I search being offensive for kids. And the libraries letting kids read them without an I.D because they are for adults reading sections. These books need to be away so kids won't read offensive things or trying to them. They should pbs books so under age children could read and so parents don't have to be worry about there kids what they are reading in there free time.The second example is parents should protest so books or other etc things could be rid of. Parents need to protest so any thing they find offensive should get off of the shelve. Or another thing is they will have to make a list of what books are offensive and let only adults read them by having an I.D and could sound a little better so books or etc don't get rid of the books.The last example is @CAPS4 do libraries let kids take them home and read them.They should what kids need to read like educational books for school or for other things. Adults need to see what there kids read this days. Kids need to understand what books are good for them from there age and otherwise their brain will start confusing them at their age.The conclusion is that libraries need to make something up so children don't read these kind of books that the only thing will do is mess up with there brain and then there parents will need to pay so their children could take therapy and others kids so their brain could be better. So please libraries do something so parents don't need to worry about what there kids read these days. Like for me I won't like my kid read offensive things because they will start doin the same things so libraries do something about these on offensive things.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11927,5,In the author's memoir the author creats a mood and that mood in the story as happyness anjoy. It is happyness and @CAPS1 becuse he was happy for his home and how his parents were cooks. He also joyed the music and things he does with his family and relitize. I think this is the mood the author used in the memoir.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15563,6,"To allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building was difficult. For example, the mast was really hard to build it. The engineers and architects needed to think about how to do it. And made sure passengers' safety. First of all, dirigibles is heavy. Hydrogen might be make it broken. Nobody know what will be happen when dirigibles fly on the sky. The body of the dirigible could swing in the wind. Perhaps out off controll.Which floor can we put the mast is also really important. I think no one like to work under the huge heavy dirigibles.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21447,8," A time laughter has been in one of my relationships, was when I was down in the dumps and my cousin made me smile. It was a rainy @DATE1 @TIME1 and I just woke up, my dad had asked me to make him some of breakfast; while I was making the hash browns, eggs, and toast I thought of how little me and my dad spend together, and how unsteady and rocky our father-daughter relationship was and I thought of things we could do together. When I brought his breakfast up to him I proposed the idea of going to the movies, he said he would think about it and told me to go get started on my chores. When I was finally done I got on facebook and talked to my cousin @CAPS1; I told him how excited I was to go with my dad to the movies and how we were finally spending more time together.By the time it reached five o'clock in the afternoon, I went back upstairs to talk to my dad. I asked him what time we would be leaving, he said around eight and that is when I got the feeling we were not going to go after all. I walked out of his room and strolled down the stairs only to find myself swelling up with tears; I curled up in my @CAPS2-boy chair in the living room and waited for eight to be come. The time it came I was full of disappointment, and my father said we would go the next day but he was going to bring a friend. Because his friend was going to see his daughter (and also my friend since the age of three) at her gymnastics's meet, I didn't have a problem with seeing the meet or her. I did have a problem though with someone else coming with my dad and I to the movies. Though I wanted to spend quality time with him; it made me upset that my dad didn't want to spend quality time with me, we hardly even talked and that is hard to do when you live under the same roof.I went back down stairs and climbed back in my chair and cried, and decided that it must have been my fault,and that I did something wrong. So i got up and talked to someone I know could help me out of the dumps. He is one of the only people who I absolutely love talking to, and someone who knows me very well. It is my cousin, we have a very strong relationship that has almost nothing but laughter in it. At first he tried reassuring me but it didn't work, so he did something he knows best he made me laugh by doing or saying silly random things; he even said he would eat my poor little kitty if I didn't smile for him. That is when I started giggling and he kept going to keep me laughing, until the only tears I was crying from trying to breathe. He always has been the one who can always turn my frown upside down. And I can do the same for him, he @MONTH1 be my cousin but he's also my best friend and that makes me feel the love I need from my family that only he can give me, and I hope I will never ever forget or lose that with him.Before I became friends with @CAPS1 I never thought I could have someone I could really talk to about my home life. He understands me and what I've been through and knows me as well as I know him and I enjoy that. I could have never have asked for anything better. He's my favorite cousin and the best out of my best friends, who loves talking to me and making me laugh until I'm trying to breathe for air. I will never forget what he's done for me, but this stands out more then every other time and I thank him for that. That is how and why laughter has and is a important part in all and in every relationship to and for everyone.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 2984,2,"How @CAPS4 you feel if your favorite book was taken off the shelves of your school or public library? I, along with many other students, @CAPS4 find this discouraging and distastrous, so I do not believe that censorship should affect books that are on the shelves. Otherwise, a demolished love of reading, crushed individuality, and separated population @MONTH1 be born. Like the beloved @PERSON2 @PERSON2 series by @PERSON1, many books and series are being taken out of libraries' collections due to people in society finding them offensive. In this case, the world of witchcraft in which this story blooms is against some religious beliefs; therefore, some individuals within a religion campaign to have these books banned. Fortunately, none of the libraries I visit, with their eclectic collections, had banned this series, or I @CAPS4 not have the strong thirst for literature as I do now. All books have the potential to pull a student into the wonderful world of reading, like @PERSON2 did for me, so taking away books that are most likely to spark an interest or start a firework of creativity @CAPS4 not only affect this generation, but the futures of all. If this censorhip was to be allowed, who is to say what all could be censored? Who @CAPS4 be the final judge as to what books @CAPS4 be banned? It @CAPS4 all come down to power and who was willing enough to take it. This struggle to be on top has the possibility of seperating people apart like political parties. Disagreements could turn into debates, and those could turn into fights. It can be concluded that people are stubborn for their beliefs, and to have someone choose what everyone is allowed to believe @CAPS4 be wrong. For instance, it @CAPS4 be like an @CAPS1 forcing a @CAPS2 to not believe in @CAPS3; a vegetarian commanding that meat can no longer be eaten; a woman taking away men's voting rights. Censorship @CAPS4 lead to the disrespect of other's opinions, and disrespect is never a beneficial thing. Each and every person has a different opinion on what is offensive or not, so to censor books @CAPS4 be to censor all individual mentality. Without each person's unique thoughts and beliefs, the world @CAPS4 become similiarly vapid and dull. Differences in beliefs is what adds variety to the population and what makes a person special; additionally, free thought is a right all people should have. If someone was to limit the mental, literary stimulants that are out in the world, the amount of creativity and individuality @CAPS4 decrease. To conclude, censorship @CAPS4 be a disrespect to individuality, personal beliefs, and the overall joy of reading a good book. Just because one might not believe in what a story says, it does not mean that the piece of literature should be forbidden. No one is being forced to read the books that grace the hundreds of shelves in a library, so if someone is offended, simply do not read it. So how @CAPS4 you feel if your favorite book was gone from all libraries? Disrespected? That is how I @CAPS4 feel",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1073,1,"To my opinion computers have a negative effect on people I think it has a negative because it causes people to get less exercise you spend less time with your family and friends and it distracts you from things get done. First of all computers have a negative effect on people because it causes them to get exercise. For example, there are many football, soccer and baseball games practicingg these they will just computer on the webcam all night. Another way is that you can get work done. WIthout even leaving your house. You can shop online, stay home and work online, and even go to college those things include getting out around, but now you can just day and do those things and be lazy. Second, the computer causes you to interact with people less. Now, when family or friends. i went over my I sat right and she didn't even look at me playing computer games. i know that a lot more kids too because I was reading in a magazine that @PERCENT1 of interacting with their kids as much as they got a computer. Lastly, i think the computer has a negative effect because it them. It distracts kids conversations first of all when people to talk with someone on the computer it is very hard because, they are absorbent in they're doing. Secondly, the computer distracts kids from homework. I know this first hand, because wherever I have in type up assignments I get and end up going on different websites, and not getting my work done. lastly, it distracts kids from household chores. Some kids just put them to the side and forget to do them because they're budy playing game or surfing the web. i know that if I did I'd get in big trouble. Those are the reasons why I think the computer has a negative effect on people. Because, it causes them to get less exercise, they don't interact with people, as much, and it distract them. So unless you want all those things happening to you, I suggest you spend less those on the computer!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15905,6,"Al Smith, a former governor of New York, led the way in constructing the Empire state building. This building was being constructed to be the tallest building, taller than the Chrysler building which stood at @NUM1 feet tall. In order to make the Empire State building taller than the Chrysler building, Al Smith wanted to add a mooring mast to the top for docking dirigibles. This idea faced many obstacles. First, the passage states that ""The steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthen to accommodate this new situation."" This would cost a large amount of money to construct. Also, ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1, the passage states the issue that ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The builders realized many problems after the mooring mast was constructed. The builders should have thought of each situation before building the mast which cost a lot of money. Although the mast was no longer used, the Empire State building still stood at the height of @NUM2 feet, the tallest building built.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18366,7,"One day me and my friend @PERSON1 were at @ORGANIZATION2 and we were in the line for the @ORGANIZATION1. We ran up to the line, and we had to wait about a half hour till we got on. But the good thing is that me and @PERSON1 were patient. After the ride we got in line for the @CAPS1! WOW! What a line, I think we were in that line for at least a hour and a half before we got on. But you know, me and @PERSON1 are really patient. The @CAPS2!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12795,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir was warm and inviting. The auther made it feel as. if I was really there in his neighbrhood. the auther took the things most people take for grantit and elaberated on them. he made the mood feel real he made the reader that they were a part of the story.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7306,3,In this story the setting has a affect to the cyclist trip and to him self. It being hot and over @NUM1 degrees and going down hill with a lot of turns. The cyclist is getting so hot that hes water is no longer cold. Being in this desert is killing and about to make him have a heartstoke. All the things in the desert is doing a lot affect to the cyclist.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1457,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1, I think that computers do not effect people bacause I believe that they actually benefit people and the way people live computers do more than have games, In some cases help you gain knowledge computers can be used for entertainment, jobs, research, projects and more. Not just for games. Computers help peopel do their job. For example, if you work as a lawyer, you @MONTH1 need a computer to type your documents up. If you have bad pemanship and have a joblike a lawyer. You @MONTH1 need to refer to something in your document and can't read it, that's a problem. So in that case, that;s where the role of the comuter steps in. I also think that computers do not have effect on people because through garde schoo, sometimes kids need the internet. Some people don't have the option of a library of ther isn't one near them. By using the computer for inofrmation on a project or homework, I think it benefits, not effects. I have one more reason why I think computers benefit, not effect. I believe that if you have a @CAPS2, or @CAPS3, you have a chance to meet people from all over the world. Just by that, you could learn something you could learn their lifestyle and things about thier culture.Thank you for reading my letter, hopefully you will rethink your decision.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4777,2,"Different Then Everyone Else @CAPS1 do people find small things offensive?My opinion is the everyone as their own idea of what can be offensive to them.There are so many small things the can be offensive like books, movies, and music.Its not horrible or bad to have a book on the shelf the you might think its offensive. I find it a little rude to discriminate someone for thier one belonging. Books can be a way to learned new things about someone. I think sometimes books can tell you more then what can a person with there own words can.There are so many books the can be a little offensive to people and even kids.I know the a parent wouldn't like to have a book on the shelf about '@CAPS2', when they are getting @CAPS2.Sure is not a nice thing to read about but, really parents think about it.Don't you think us like kids need to know what really means @CAPS2?A book can tell us the and a good way or and a bad way but we can learned from it,and you dont even have to talk about it. Movies are similar like books,in one way the you can see it in action what there trying to teach everyone.I know the some movies are horrible just like @CAPS3 @CAPS4.Its a horrible movie to watch but really we need to know what really happened to does people. And even it a teacher is tell you have to see it with your own eyes to belive it. A good way it to watch the movie and learned from it. Music has a lot of ways of being offensive to people but singer's thats their way of express their own feeling about stuff.We can't really discriminate anyone for their own belives. There are so many singer like @CAPS5 @CAPS6, the use a lot of bad words in his song but thats how he get's his own feeling out to others. Even if the song is offensive to you its more of their own opinion just like we all have different opinon then others. My opinion about feeling offensive is we all are different and have a opinion about it and we need to respect the. Especially if i wanted to learned new things and someone doesn't want to tell me or show me I would want a book or a movie to learned. And parents just becuase I'm reading a book, or watching a movie or listening to music about bad stuff don't assume I'm going to do those things I would just want to learned about it. I wouldn't like for someone to take a book off the shelf especially if i want to read it. Remember its your own opinion about the book not everyone is different then you",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21235,8," A great day for an adventure @CAPS5 my sister invited me to her christion school called @PERSON1 , @CAPS1 was a nice sunny day and then @CAPS1 turned in to a not so sunny day. Woke up first day of visiting my sister in her new school ,went to all her classes with her ,the teachers were kinda wired and so were her friends ,after second period in @PERSON1 we went to her @CAPS2.E class the teacher said to put on running shose besause we are going to run up a mountian, my sister had forgoten to put on her running shose so the teacher sent me and her to go get them after we got the shose the class was already a quarter of a mile away from the school so me and my sister desided to take a short cut so we took the off road ""the seanic root"". We had ran down a hill and @CAPS1 was really a steep , my sister got half way down the hill and slid on her butt all the way down after she went I went so I ran down the hill faster then I had ever ran in my life and I hit the pavement at the bottom I was like a tumble-weed in a huricane my sister helped me up and we started running tword the class and they were in ""shock"" of what me and my sister looked like my sister looked like she had just got done playing in the mud me on the other hand looked like I got hit by a truck and my face was covered in dirt, @CAPS3 after me and my sister got back we decided to get cleaned up, so we went to the showers the showers at @PERSON1 are similer to the ones in @CAPS4.H.S but with shower curtins the shower that I had used the curtin had came off this medel hook and I wasnt being smart and used a plastic stepping stool the ground was still wet from @CAPS5 I had took a shower and the stool sliped and my pinkey got cought on the hook and I sliced @CAPS1 open on a main vain in my pinky I started getting light-headed and I passed out my sister and her friends took me to my sisters room and put a band-ade on @CAPS1 @CAPS5 i was still passed out. After i woke up i found my self between a blanket and a really uncomferterbul bet my sister was waiting for me to wakr up and told me to never scare her like that agien , @CAPS5 she said that I told her how I thought @CAPS1 was funny @CAPS5 we ran down the hill I didnt do much damage except for give me some scrapes and how my pinky made me pass out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13469,5,"The mood created in the memoir @ORGANIZATION1 is happy & warm. The memoir is happy & warm because it describes how a small home & be very happy like in paragraph @NUM1, it says ""always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love."" This shows that love fills the air which is happy. That is how the author creates a mood.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15009,6,"The excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted explains the construction of the Empire State Building in New York. The excerpt explains the steps of building the building as well is the obstacles and challenges that the builder faced. The architects of building the Empire State Building attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there, did not take into account the problems that may come with taking on such a large project.The creator of this plan to build a docking mast on the Empire State Building was Al Smith. Al Smith was so excited to build the mast, that he did not think about the complications associated with his ""master"" plan. Because of the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure, it was necessary for the building's frame to be strengthened which costed over sixty thousand dollars. The greatest obstacle for the builders was a matter of safety. Most dirigibles use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen was known to be very flammable. If something like that happened over a densely populated area such as downtown New York. Another obstacle was nature. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Also there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This excerpt shows that before you leap on a large challenge, you should look and take into account obstacles that may come with that.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13531,5,"The mood created by the author, Narciso Rodriguez is very happy and uplifting. The whole story is an optimistic view of Narciso's child hood. None of the bad parts of his childhood are written about. He writes about his perent's coming from Cuba and how some of his family would come and eat with them. Narciso's memoir is a happy look back at his child hood.Narciso is very grateful for his family, specifically his parents. They came from Cuba to @LOCATION1 to start a good life for their son. This causes the beginning this memoir to start off with a happy, uplifting mood. As the memoir progresses, it still maintains the same happy mood. Paragraph @NUM1 is a great example of how the mood created by the author is so happy. Paragraph @NUM1 talks about how Narciso's family would go to their house and share meals with them. Narciso was happy to be around his family. The best example of the mood created by Narciso is the final @NUM3 paragraph. Paragraph @NUM4 talks about Narciso's gratitude towards his parents. He loves them so much for coming to @LOCATION1 and leaving their promising jobs in Cuba to give Narciso a better life. The final paragraph talks about how Narciso's whole family a house into a home. This is a very happy paragraph to complete the happy mood of the story.The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez is extremely happy. There are no mad, or sad parts of his child hood mentioned in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18302,7,"One day when the @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 came out I wanted it so bad so I asked my mom and she said maby for @CAPS2 and guess what @CAPS2 was coming up. It was @DATE1 and I couldn’t wait so I went to school and I got it over with every day and I kept coming there and saying” I’m for sure that I will get a @ORGANIZATION1 just like mom” and that’s about the handreth time I said that to her and she said “ you have to be patient or I will probley never even get it for you because you have a little brother around and if he hears you say saying I want this and that he’s going to think @LOCATION1 is not real so be patient. Well for the past few days I started being patient and I had to be patient for a while because it was only @DATE2 to and I went to school and of course it was stupid and a waste of time but I didn’t care because I was about to get a @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS3 so I just had to deal with it and be patient at the same time. well I know one thing I am lucky for not asking for a @CAPS3 for the past few days I’m being patient I really can’t believe it I really never been patient anytime except for now when I’m getting something awesome. So now I have only @NUM1 more days antil @CAPS5 so I’m really exited. So I was on a @CAPS5 break on the last @NUM1 days antil @CAPS5 so I played video games to save up my time of being patient then the last @NUM3 days I’ve been playing outside so that was not a waste of time. Then there whose only @NUM3 more days antil @CAPS5 and I just played outside intel the day was over on those last two days I even played outside with my friends on @CAPS5 eve. Then the day came @CAPS5 finaly I saw my presents and my mom said ya open them sort starred to seen them and once I opened all my present I did not see the @CAPS3, antil my mom gave me one present that she was holding and it was the @CAPS3 and finally I got it so now I don’t have to be patient no more, the end",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7143,3,The setting affects the cyclist because one he should have stack to his own map. He should have packed an extra bottle of water. @NUM1 not take any advice from people that haven’t left the porch in years.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10093,4,"The author ends the story this way because Saeng feels a sence of comfort with the hibiscus flower. The flower reminds her of her homeland with her grandmother. According to the story “the familiar frogrence filled her lungs, and Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmothers long gray hair.” you can also tell she misses her homeland but always keeps it close to her heart whereever she goes. The text states that, “it was yet another old friend, a small shrub with waxy leaves and dainty flowers with purplish petals and white centers.” She seems to be very close with nature and all of its desirable traits. When she failed the test she bought her “@CAPS1 Malik” flower, as a sence of comfort. They both decided to plant it in their garden and while doing so, Saeng received a huge boost of confidence to retake the test. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7383,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist because he saw “short, rolling hills,” tumbleweeds” and “a ridiculously large shake,” and he thought that he was not getting anywhere.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1228,1,"Hi! I am writing in which computers are a bad thing to the society or good thing. I think that computers are good thing to have around. They help us in a lot of way and they also help us find new friends and new updates. This is going to be my first opinion. I think that computers have effects on the society in a good way because people can find @CAPS1 of the latest updates on the weather, society and country's. It helps the society in a good way because people don't have to look though an old Newspaper. All they have to do is click and there there reading it all and probally seeing pics and stuff of it. This is my second reason why computers are a good effect on the society they help us in a lot of ways on which meeting new people and staying in close good with them and talking with them and sending pics of stuff and you. My last opinion for computers are a good effect on society is that @CAPS2 you have a buissness or anything you can sell any of your merchandise, keep buiness plans, And also you can make a website for your business after a while @CAPS1 of people will know about it and it would make a really big inpack on your buiness. That was my three opinion on which why computers are good effect on the society and I think that computers are really good effect on the society.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3281,2,"At a local library you can find hundreds of books, all of different matter, a different style and of different stories. Not every person enjoys the same type of topic to read about, not every person enjoys the same music style, nor does every person enjoy the same fashion in a magazine or the same articles written in the magazine. No one is the same, we all have different likes and interest. Some people @MONTH1 find certain books distrubing and inapporiate, that the book shouldnt be allowed to be on the shelves of libraries. That is only some people, what one person finds distrubing and gross another person can find interesting. Not one person is the same so not all books are going to be eye ctaching and interesting to every person. If one person finds a book to be inapporaite, yet another finds it interesting and suggest that book to their friends, is that one whom disagress upon the reading material as unexceptable to thier community allowed to take the book from the shelf, not allowing anyone else to read it. Everyone should be given the same oppertunity to read the book that another made find inapporaite. People should be allowed to read the material and topics they enjoy to read. But when it comes to a nude magazine, all about sex and being naked, that should be in adult stores only. A child in the library can wonder over to the adult side and pick up the magazine and see all those women, that mother doesnt want her child to be able to pick up and porn magazine or video when she takes the child to the library. You must be eighteen or older to view or buy those magazines, so only keep those magazine in adult stores where childern wont be able to view them. Now some books @MONTH1 have a naked picture in the text but it could be to show how to give a breast examination, to educate women about breast cancer and to help prevent seriousness over that matter, to well educate the people in our society about the matter. Books of diseases that @MONTH1 have nude photos should be allowed, they educate the communitry and save lives. Although not one persons voice or opinion should be heard over others, we were all created equal, we all should be heard. Books are as of the same way, they were all created equal for men, women, boys, and girls to be allowed to read and find adventure, excitment, sorrow and anger. We all have different hungrys for different reading, music and fashin. In this world today, in our society, and in our community there are different views upon what the children should be reading or should be allowed to pick off the shelf at their local library. Books were created by different people, who dont share the same views,who look upon life in a different way, whose voices arent all the same. The book has a curse word in the text, that doesnt mean the book is an abomination and will poison the community. That book could be one of the best books the child or adult has every read in their life. Everyone has different views, likes, interest, wants and needs. Not one person shares the same hunger of reading material. We should all be given the oppertunity to read or not read what another person finds inapporaite. The author as well deserves to be heard and not shunned out because some people view his or her material unexecptable for the shelves of their local library. Freedom of speech, freedom of happiness should be implyed with the pursuite to find a book that feeds the hunger of one person. Let every voice be heard, let every word be read, no matter how big, small, or how many imapporaite context is included.Let everyone read as they please and let everyone be marry in what they read",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 869,1,"In my opinion computer ars benefit with the socient here are my s reasons, I can talk wit my friends, I can do my homework, or I can do olner things in the computer to. First reasons, I can talk with my friends or I can talk with my family on facebook or myspace o his on msn or I can se my family in the camera msn the camera is allot of help with me because lik my family is in @LOCATION1 I chat with them every @DATE1 instead of sending pictures and videos or going visiting to @LOCATION1. Next reasons, I can do my homework on I can write a big letter on I can do a lot of work in the computer is and easy. Final reason I can do a lot of things like find a question or do project on.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9482,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus” concludes the story with the excerpt ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” because it emphasizes Saeng pain to come to an unknown place and fail her first test but also emphasizes Saeng’s resolve to work hard after seeing a flower that resembled one from home. The flower itself is very important to Saeng, for example, the text reads “And besides it was yet another old friend. a small shrub with waxy leaves and dainty flowers with purplish petals and white centers.” This excerpt demonstrates Saeng’s love for her hometown through a flower that she knows grows back home. Another example is when Saeng told her mother the bad news “I-I failed the test” @CAPS1 attention instantly was drawn to the flower and her mother could only be good. In conclusion, the hibiscus flower is Saeng’s source of stength as it’s the only thing she knows in the united states. Saeng wants to show the same resolve on her test that the flower shows in the harsh winter.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19004,7,The word patience means a lot of things. It can mean waiting and something and much more. It also talks a lot ??? It takes time and effort. I’@CAPS1 the type who complain a lot and I don’t have patience. Other people they don’t complain they an it. A lot of teenagers have no patience. As you get older you develop patience some adults don’t have patience it depends on if you work at it. It also depends on whether the person has gone through in life.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7160,3,"The features of the setting was affect the cyclist by disturb them to ride in road, limite their speed, and make their distance longer than the original travel plan. For example, the features at the setting was disturb the cyclist to ride in road because it tells them where they can go and where they can’t and they shouldn’t do this or that such as the sign of “no entering” or “one way”. Second, it’s limite their speed because if the features of the setting it said the limited speed is @NUM1, the cyclist only can ride about @NUM1 and go no more further which can make the cyclist longer time to reach the place that they want to go and couldn’t travel faster. Third, it make their distance longer than the original travel plan or exit or how fast they can rode. Such as the sign of “Rough road ahead, do not exceed posted speed limit”. Therefore, the features of the setting was affect the cyclist during the journal. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9881,4,"After reading the quote ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test. From the story ""winter' Hibiscus"" by Minfong Ho, I think the author is trying to say that after the winter and fall pass she will be upto the challenge to plant again and feel good about herself. She lifted her head and watched as their distinctive ""V"" was etched against the evening sky, slowly fading into the distance. Reflecting back I feel Saeng felt that the geese was secretly letting her know what she was doing was right.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16005,6,"In the @CAPS1 The @CAPS2 Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles. The largest obstacle they faced was safety, most dirigibles who were comming from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is very flammable. Another obstacle was just nature itself. Winds were constantly shiffting caused by violent air currents. Another obstacle was there was a law against airships flying to low over urban areas. The builders should have relized all the hazards. They were facing, and just dropped the idea of using the moorning mast for dirigibles and their passengers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9815,4,"The author of the story “Winter Hibiscus” concludes her story this way to demonstrate the girls determination and to leave the reader anticipating more. I say this because obviously Saeng is determined to do well, but leaving the story hanging builds excitement for more action.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3272,2,"libraries have tons...of books, cd's, movies, and magazines for people to read. they have all kinds for people who have intrest in certain things.and some might be offensive to some people...let me tell you what i think! Most people like stuff that is interesting to them and some like other things. There are certaint things for people for certaint ages to look at, there kids sections there is a teen section and there is an adult section. there could be some stuff that people will think is offensive. but that doesnt mean they would have to take @CAPS4 off the shelf they @CAPS1 @CAPS2 have to grab @CAPS4. simple as that. and thats all there is to @CAPS4..and thats what i think about library products like that. and what people should do to not getting stuff that is offensive to them...'@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4'!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 794,1,"Do you love technology? More and more people in this world are using so much technology and especialy computers. But not everyone agrees that this benefit society. But I do. Because it can glue people the ability to learn about anything they want to learn. Then it can give a better communication to others that lives farther away from you. My last reason is this technology can be a good way of protecting this country. Now I agree that computers can be useful man made sorce. When I was about @NUM1 years old I loved to play on the computer I thought that this was just a game. But my dad told me that do not abuce the computer, use it for education. I found out that theres so many things to teech about just a click of a botton. Now you can use this technology as a tool not a game. You might not want to go to the library to find a book you can just look it up in the computer. People love to talk to others, to meat new people or just comunicate to others who live in a other country. One of the best ways are on the computer. I am @NUM2 years old and I have alot of friends that chat on the computer, and I am one of them. My family members live in @LOCATION1, and I just can't catch, a plane every day to go visit them. So I just go on the computer and talk to them it's one of the fastest ways and fun ways to. The @ORGANIZATION1 has one of the strongest @ORGANIZATION2 and @ORGANIZATION3 in the world. You would not believe the technology they have and how they use them. One of the best things they have is the ""@PERSON1."" @CAPS1 a plane drivin by a remote control. It's just like a fighter plane but without a pilot! The person controling it can relax in bace wile the @PERSON1 does all the work now come and join me to say that computers are useful in this world! From the reasons above, I state that computers are useful because they give people the ability to learn about anything they want. It gives' a way to comunicate. Last @CAPS1 a good way to protect this country. Technology is growing faster by the minute and strogger. So take my word ""don't abuse it, use it.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6119,3,"The setting in this short story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” is a hot, sunny desert, in which all towns have been abandoned, “The sun was beginning to beat down” (@NUM1) “ i arrived at the first town it fit the defination of a ghost town (@NUM1) trational. The cyclist at this point is not, tired and worried about the lack of water. The setting and cyclist’s state run side by side.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7359,3,I think that if we where to inforce the punishments on those who speed that there wuold be less car crashes really those that have bad road rage shuold be in anger management,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15069,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with multiple obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Although some of these obstacles were fixed early on, others were not brought to the builders' attentions until later on. The first obstacle that the builders encountered were the modifications that were needed to be done to the building's framework. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" (@CAPS1 nine). The Empire State Building would not have been able to support the mooring mast without having the essential modifications done. This process costed an extra sixty thousand dollars. The second obstacle that the builders faced had not even been brought up until after the building had been completed. The wind factor had made it nearly impossible to be able to dock any dirigibles. ""Even if the dirigibles were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). With all the pedestrians located on the ground, this factor made it extremely unsafe. The final obstacle that was faced was with the law. Under already existing law, airships were prohibited from flying too low over urban areas. Blimps docking at the mooring mast would be violating this law. The architectures and engineers of the Empire State Building clearly did not look into what was necessary to building the mooring mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4635,2,"Censorship in libraries is good in some ways. People who like to read books should have a wide variety of books. Things that offend people: for instance, a book about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 or natives and how they were treated so poorly. But almost anything now days offends peoaple and its rediculous. either way there is always going to be something that someone finds offensive. My expirience with this situation it really didn't bother me. But I was in a library glancing through a book and I read a paragragh and it had the word, 'nigger,' in it and I found it a little offinsive. That word just really isn't nice. People like different books movies magazines ect., and some of the greatest movies of all time, well im pretty sure some people find them offinsive in some way. What some might find offinsive, others might think different. Like in magazines my aunt finds them offinsive because of the bathing suit modles in it for addvertising a new swim suit. or for addvertising liquir. All together, just about everything is offinsive to somone out there. If all the things that people found offinsive was to be removed, then there would hardly be any books movies ect., and not only that it would suck all together",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21163,8," ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" Many people say that laughter is the key to life. If you can't laugh, then you are not a fun person to be around. Many other people believe that laughter is a very important part of relationships that they are having. In my opinion, I think that laughter is very important also. It lightens the mood in awkward situations, and laughter also just makes you and other people happy. And I personally, would rather be around a happy person, than one that isn't. A few days ago, my mom, sister and I decided to go to the bowling alley in @LOCATION1. We were all three invited to go, along with about @NUM1 other women from the @ORGANIZATION1 we attend. We attend the @ORGANIZATION1. We had all made reservations at @CAPS1 @CAPS2 at @NUM2 @CAPS3. We arrived first and sat there and waited for about @NUM3 minutes. Then finally we seen some of our friends walking in. We ran over there to greet them and to show them where we were sitting. Our friends started getting their bowling shoes from the counter and then they ventured over towards us. Once all our friends got there, we began to bowl. We had a total of three @CAPS2 for everyone. My mom, sister and I were all three at one lane, and with us was two other friends. The first game we bowled a normal game. As usual, everyone was getting strikes except for me. I was getting pretty discouraged. So our second game around and we all decided to change the rules up a little bit. This round we could not bowl like we normally do. Each time it is our turn we have come up with a new way and new position of sending the ball down the lane. After awhile everyone was running out of things to try so people started laying and sitting on bowling balls and then sending a different ball down the lane. That was really hard. Towards the end of the second game, everyone was tired. Their arms hurt and so did their fingers. My last frame I got up and picked the ball I wanted to use. I waited for the people in the @CAPS2 next to me to get done with their turn and then I went up to bowl. I got ready, and brought my arm back before I flung the ball down the lane. Just as I did that, my fingers let go of the ball and I dropped it. The whole side of the bowling alley I was on just busted up laughing. I was so embarrassed. My face was beet red. It was horrible. Then on my next turn I brought ball back, and then brought it forward and I literally threw it into the other lane. I fell to the floor laughing my head off. It was so funny. That night by far, was the best night I have had in quite a long while. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3286,2,"There are people out there that think somethings should be taken off the shelves or not even made. But thats their decision and not everyone should listen to it or just try to do it. I think things that are offensive should and shouldn't be taken off. They should because it might offend someone and it shouldn't beacuse then people can read or see it or even listen to it if its music and then know more about it and then they might not do the same things. So people do have a choice on what should be banned or not but they also have a choice on if they want to read it or not too. They might not want their kids to read it but their kids will still hear the same things somewhere else also. I think they shouldn't be taken off because no matter what they do or what they say, stuff will still be out there in the world that people think are offensive and you just cant stop all of it. I listen to a lot of music when I drive to school and most of it is rap music. Yes, most of it is ofensive to girls and stuff but thats just music, it doesn't mean its true or anything. People have the choice to not listen to it or not read about it. If they think it is offensive to them or to anyone else or just not like it, they have thr right to just avoid it and not look at it. People want to just change everything and make sure things are perfect and nothing bad is in the world. But no matter what you try to do, something bad will be out there waiting for you. You just got to know how to avoid it. Avoiding things that you don't like would be a lot easier then just taking all the time you have to to try to get something banned off of a shelf. You should keep it on the shelf for the people who want to actually read it or just want to read it to see what its all about. When I read or listen to something thats offensive and I don't like it. I will just turn it off or not read it anymore. Not try to get it banned because that takes to much time. People should just not worry about what is being said or written and try to get it banned becuase another book will be out again and it will be the same. So as you can see I think the material that is written should just stay as it is and people can have their choice on if they want to read it or not. If they do and they think its offensive then thats their fault for reading it when they know its gonna offend them. And for the people who don't read it, they are doing it because they know it will offend them. So not reading something that you don't like will be better in the end because then nothing will be banned and maybe nothing else will be made in the process of it being banned. So nothing should be banned and just keep it and everything will still be the same. We might not want our kids to read something bad but they will one day so why not just get it done and over with in the benginging.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 722,1,"Dear @CAPS1 in @CAPS2, Computers are one of the world's best discoveries today. For one, they help in our educational processes. They also help connect people from all over the world in little time and are a neccesity in science research. Overall, computers are the best thing that has ever happened to mankind. First and foremost our children today are already struggling in their educational systems. But with new computers they strive to meet every goal. Teachers cannot tell them everything but computers can, underneath that hard drive is a wealth of knowledge awaiting to be saked up by eager minds. Also, in todays world, waiting is almost non-existant. Learning to type gives these children better opportunities for success in later life. Family, say your child is out @NUM1 school day. Normally, they would miss their homework. But now, they can check it online and get back to their crucial studies when they are feeling better unless you want to risk tommorow's future workforce, computers are in essential tool for us, and our children. One of the best things a lot this world is that we're all different, connecting with each other helps us learn how to tell with each other and move forward as a society. Conneticing through the internet through programs like @ORGANIZATION1 is important for buissnesses as it helps them make decisions faster will ultimatly effect us. But don't be fooled. It can also befor pleasure, say @CAPS3'son & buissness trip in @LOCATION1. No problem. Just go on webcam with him and you don't have to miss him anymore. In the government, problems evolve quickly, and steathily. To solve this, a president can quickly connect to his/her advisors while still being in his/her office. Connecting people through computers is maraculous, and important to life as we know it. In addition, we wouldn't be were we are in science if it wasn't for computers. First of all, we are making great strides with cancer research to day, than estatic common computer. If it wasn't for that, we might not even have kemotherapy. Lets face it, computers are faster then us; way faster. But this is a god thing, because faster proccesing means faster research. While a simple machine @MONTH1 not tell us the cure through its proccesing speed. It certainly brings us a lot closer to unraveling the mysteries certain diseases shold beneath. Two minds are better than one. Even a scientist can not know everything. But while connecting through a computer to scientists all over the world, they can analize research, and make very informed, responsible decisions. Certainly that will extend our life exsentency, and who doesn't want you've larger's some people say that people are too glued to their computer screens. But bear in mind, these are the people helping you stay alive, and helping lower your heathcare bill yoour talking about. So when you get ill and they find a cure, why don't you still compain that they only found it because they were attached to their keyboards and monitors! Trust them, they know what they are doing. So can we come to an agreement life? Computers only do good things, like enhance our youth's advention, connect our and help us find cures for the most malignant diseases and illnesses in the world. So help the world help you, and go promote the use of computers across your community. It will only further advance us as a society in the end.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13379,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 indacates how family and happiness is the best thing, and how A home is were you feel safe and happy, not just for space, but safeness, Narciso made his home a good place for him and his family. He hade a place to call home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21304,8," My best friend and I have been friends since third grade. We've shared many laughs, memories, and tears, yet to this day we're still closer than ever. One of the key reasons we've been able to stay friends for so long is because we make each other laugh. We joke around and we make any boring time into a good one. This is the story of how our relationship came to be and some of the reasons why we are still best friends. It started in third grade. I was walking alone on the playground when she asked me to play with her, having nothing else to do, I agreed. We played for the whole recess, and it eventually became a regular thing for us to spend recess together. The first time she invited me to her house, I was kind of nervous. I was afraid it was going to be awkward, or that we wouldn't have a good time. When we got to her house after school, we went to her room, played video games for a little bit, and then we had a snack. We brought our crackers to her room, sat on the ground, and started to eat. Out of no where we just looked at each other, and we started laughing like crazy. They weren't little giggles either, we laughed so hard it brought tears to our eyes. From that day forward we hung out as often as we could. A couple of years went by, we hung out more often, and declared ourselves best friends. When fifth grade came around, we were glued to the hip. Her dad was our teacher, so he already knew how close we both were. We never really got to sit next to each other, but we still managed to talk a lot. One day at recess we were joking around and she said your butt is so big, you're going to break a chair. These days it doesn't seem that funny, but in fifth grade it was hilarious. When we got inside we played this math game, I got the question wrong so I plopped down in my chair, sure enough, it broke. Other kids that heard what she said laughed, but no one really quite laughed as much as we both did. Fifth grade was also when boys started coming into the picture. During @DATE1 break she really liked this one guy, and when he said he didn't like her, she was completely broken. That night she came over to talk with me about it, but we never ended up talking about it at all. Instead, we watched funny movies and I would do things on purpose to make her laugh. Even though we were already really close, that night made us grow even closer. At the end of fifth grade we had a little graduation ceremony. Towards the end they put on a slide show of everyone in the fifth grade class. One of the pictures was of @PERSON1 and I with mud masks on, we were both embarrassed, but we also laughed because we had a lot of fun that night, and we wondered how the picture got on the slide show. After the ceremony @PERSON1 and I threw a party. We shared many laughs and still that made us grow even closer, even though we had made new friends that night, our bond was unbreakable. Middle school was a whole new experience. New friends, different classes, and more drama. I hate to say it, but we grew apart those three years. We had none of the same classes and we both met new people, but every time I went over to her house, or every time we hung out, we laughed till we were crying, and gasping for air. A lot of things happened, our different friends fought, some of them moved, but our ability to make each other laugh kept us together through thick and thin. Towards the end of our middle school lives, we grew closer again, and things were pretty much back to normal. Today @PERSON1 and I are as close as we were in fifth grade if not closer. When we are together not only do we make ourselves laugh, but we make other people laugh as well. We are together almost every weekend, and we @MONTH1 not do much, but we always end up laughing like crazy. Doing cheer, we also spend even more time together. Other things in our relationship are important too, like trust, loyalty, and kindness, but laughter is what has kept us together through everything we have been through. Laughter is also the reason we have become friends in the first place and I am happy to call her my best friend. Without her, my life would be very boring, and I hope we stay friends for the rest of our lives. Laughing keeps people together and makes relationships grow stronger. This was an example of how it helped me and my best friend become friends and stay friends through everything life has thrown at us.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16275,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building encountered many obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. These issues included safety, nature and an existing law. Safety was the greatest obstacle. These dirigibles ""used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1 the buildings in downtown New York stand so close together, one building such as the Empire State Building catching on fire could have devastating effects. The hardest problem to overcome would have been nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" It would have been impossible to keep the back of a dirigible from swiveling around. Also, the dirigibles would be hanging high above cars and people on the streets below. The last reason the dirigibles should not be moored at the Empire State building was because of a law that prohibited ""airships flying flying too low over urban areas."" This made the entire plan illegal, and although it was a good plan, it was not well thought out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18562,7,"?? It was a normal old boring day in the @DATE1 but I had just got a call from my sister in law. She literally just called me and asked if I wanted to go to cedar point the next day. I was astonished! I didn’t know what to say! At first I thought she was hiding around but when she asked to talk to my mom, I knew she was legit. ??? When she was done talking to my mom, my mom too was in shock. I was so greatful I could not fall asleep. I ended waking up at @NUM1 am and I was not to fond of that but it was totaly worth it. It was a long two hour drive but when we got there we bought our tickets and ??? the mavric. The line was humumus but we waited. Half way into the line, the ride broke down. I could not believe my eyes. I’ve wanted to ride that one for ever. I was ??. We waited patiently for around @NUM2 @NUM3 hours maybe @NUM4. I was hungry, trerd, and cooking in the sun. once it opened up again we only had to wail like ½ hour but all in all, it was worth it. My sister in law @PERSON1 was very impressed on how patiently I waited. And we went to the car to get some food. It was the best food I had ever aten. The rest of the day was tremendous but that was defidintly the most patient I was in my entire life. Due to the fact that it was just me and @PERSON1, I think that’s why I was so calm. Even though that part of the day hind of sucked it was still our all a great time!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15218,6,The architects and builders of the Empire State Building ran into a few problems when searching for a way to allow dirigibles to dock there. The architects knew they couldn't simply drop a mooring mast on the @ORGANIZATION1 roof because it would be able to support it. The architects also knew that if they attached the dirigible to the mooring mast with a single cable tether would only add stress to the frame. To fix this problem the @ORGANIZATION1 steel frame would need to be modified and strengthened to support the mooring mast and dirigible.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 693,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In ones opinion about computers and what they can do to benefit society these days. Ones opinion about what the effects that computers have or people are that they can benefit us in many ways for example they can communicate with people around the world for example many people @MONTH1 have friends or family that live in another state or country computers can help us communicate with them. Commputers alow us to help us learn what we couldn't learn from books. Computers can help us with learning such as learning about or the population. One might think that is good but its slow with computers you can send emails and have the person on the other end reply instantly because of computers. Computers have benefited society in many ways. Computers in ones opinion about them is that they can benefit us in many ways we wouldn't think of being possible. Before computers and printers we had in use type writers and if you messed up you would have start again and it could take hours or work to get the paper perfect but with the worlds modern we would don't have to type whole paragraph over again if we make a mistake we can just hit the back space button on the keyboard so it won't take us hours to type one page or when it take half an how at most so computers have benefited us in more way than we know it. So in ones opinion about computers and what they can do to benefit us is that they allow us to do things we couldn't have done before the computer was invented. The computer was a great invention and it is benefited mankind as we speak and that it is that hard to set up. So in ones opinion about computers and what they do that can benefit the society that we live in and also benefit mankind as well.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6052,3,"How the setting of the place effects the cyclist is for one its to dry a cyclist would be ridy for haurst shouldn’t be in a place that’s dry.Like in the story it says “I was travelling through the high parts of California in June” meaning it was really hot and dry.Second would be the animals there dangerous.A cyclist should be riding in a place with diamond back snakes it says in the text “I toiled on.At some point,tumbleweeds crossed my path t a ridiculously larger skilt it really did look like adiamond back” which if it really has one would be really dangerous & cyclist should not be riding in that type of dangerous places no matter what type there are.That is how the settings of the surrandings effect the cyclist & how can it’s a bad place for them to ride.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18171,7,"Waiting in the line to @LOCATION1 @CAPS1 I complained,"" @CAPS2! When are we going into the park?"". ""@CAPS3 patient,"" @CAPS9 mother hissed back. ""Being patient is boring!""I complained again ""yeah,"" shouted @CAPS9 sister. ""@CAPS4 so bored! Its not and @CAPS9 feel hurt and- ""@CAPS5!'', shouted @CAPS9 @CAPS2. ""Were almost there!"" @CAPS6 @CAPS8 seemed like hours, we @CAPS7 got to the ticket booth.""@CAPS7!"" I meaned. We went inside the park."" @CAPS8 first?"" I asked @CAPS9 sister pointed to a ride. ""That one!"" @CAPS9 sister yelled night before she ran to a ride. We followed @CAPS9 sister to the ride."" @CAPS10, lets ride @CAPS12. It looks fun."" said @CAPS9 dad as we walked to the line."" @CAPS11! More waiting!"" I shouted"" @CAPS12 is gonna take forever!"" I complained.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7016,3,"The setting in the story “Do not exceed posted speed limit"" affects the cyclist because it’s a dry area in California in June. The cyclist really needs water which is the main thing affecting him besides the fact that he’s lost in a ghost town. Therefore, the lack of water and misleading directions are the main features displayed.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10382,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it symbolizes the change in Saeng as well as other things. The snow always melts when the seasons change. The geese always come back when the seasons change. The hibiscus will bud when the seasons change. Saeng will try again when the seasons change. But she’ll be a different person also. Knowing that everything will change but stay the same on the inside, Saeng decides she will too. She has more of an appreciation for @CAPS1 now after seeing the hibiscus and remembering her past.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6992,3,"In Joe Kurmaskie’s, “Rough Road Ahead Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” there are several features that effect the cyclist. “..and I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June” (Kurmaskie) Deserts in June are extremely hot and dry and caused the cylist to become dehydrated quickly. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” The change from flat lands to hills made the ride more strenuous on the cyclist. These conditions directly affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12818,5,"The @CAPS1 of this memoir creates a mood that is very touching and meaningful. It shows the hardships his family had to overcome as well as the good that came frome it all. The @CAPS1 states in his memoir, that, although his family was going through tough times, they left their door wide open to family that needed help and always had the thought of others in their mind. He explains how hard it was for his parents to leave their home and jobs in cuba, but that they did it for him, so he would get to live a better life. one more thing the @CAPS1 said in the memoir that was very touching was when he said, ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me..."" These words show us how much of an impact his parents action had on him and how they helped him in life. These are some examples of how the @CAPS1 describes the mood.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4285,2,"Do people take offensive books serious. There are lots of stuff in book that people @MONTH1 think is offensive. Some other people @MONTH1 think differently. I pretty sure libraries have censored shelves, but if not people shouldn't get so worried about it and here are ways. I feel that certain materials that young people see in books, music, and movies are at the library. They see stuff that's around them. they also see what there mentor and parents are doing/watching too. The author of the quote (Katherine Paterson) can't just blame it all on the library. In the paragraph I wrote before this I said that children see things that there metor and parents are doing. Now today in the @NUM1 century parents really don't keep a good eye things and what they leave out for what they child can get. Kids like to play with stuff they first see. If parents don't want there child seeing offensive material and other stuff on the shelves in a library then they should watch what they kids are doing more carefully and watch over their backs. I really don't care that the shelves in libraries are offensive. I just don't pay any attention to it anyway. We are living in a better world that it was years ago. If people still are getting mad over petty stuff like that, then what are they still here for. When young children get older they are going to end up seeing things that they coudn't see that's still going to be on the shelves in a library. We shoudn't take books offensive. After all they are just words on a piece of paper. I believe that offensive materials and other stuff should stay on the shelves of library. Besides some people need to know the truth sometimes in order to understand stuff more clearly.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4649,2,"Censorship in libraries today, I believe, are not a big problem. But many would disagree with that. Books and movies can be a very important resource for anyone of any age. They can gives us facts about a certain topic that we @MONTH1 not find any where else. Everyone has thier own definition of offensive. I belive that it is not only up to the library to rate the books, movies, and magazines offensive but it is also up to the participants using these resources. For many kids, no matter what age, they only rent books from a library for two main reasons: pleasure and projects. To sensor a book from a teenager or child is just like more of an invitation to see whats inside of it. For the people who do pleasure reading they most of the time stick to only one type of genre. If someone wanted to rent a book, and it was not appropriate for them to read, then the librarian or teacher would restrict that book from them. For projects, such as for school, it would depend upon the librarian to censor the book to a child. But books are not rated such as movies are. So it really all depends upon the use of the book and the maturity of the person who is renting it. If they feel that it will not be appropriate for some, then they could give a suggestion to censor it. Movies and books are different in many ways. Books allow you to create a mental description and picture in your mind for what you are reading. Movies, on the other hand, create a visual image right in front of your eyes. No matter how gruesome or vile of a description a book can give, it still does not compare with the visual picture of a video. Movies are rated today as to the age of a person, and they say why they are rated as such. Movies rated above the @NUM1 level are most of the time not held in libraries. They @MONTH1 still be censored if they create too vile of an image, but that is up to the one who watches it. Music is a major part of each one of our lives, and without it the world would be a much different place. Everyone finds themselves quite fond of a certain genre of music, and most of the time sticks to it. Music, like movies, is also rated by the content of the song. If it has a word or two that should be sensored, then it is most likely already labeled 'explicit'. I think that music, just like movies, should not be able to be censored, because they are already rated accordingly. Some books, magazines, and movies contain cold hard facts about the past years of our world and are too vile for anyone. And even though those events are in our past they are still very important to our present. Books can be a magical place for children, as well as adults, to go and create their own world. To censor a book, movie, or magazine would be taking away that chance for someone to enjoy life just a little bit more for that small moment in time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4009,2,The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I @CAPS3 The @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6 short is about my @CAPS1 @CAPS2 watching the movie antolgy horror of @CAPS7 with @PERSON1. I admit i was scared out of my mind then i got over it.Then after a few times you get use to it I did.That's it for @CAPS6 assighnment,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18223,7,"Waiting for my child was the longest @NUM1 hours of my life. I had been in the waiting room for nearly the whole time. The nurses kept giving me updates, to calm me, to no avail. So I @CAPS1 out a smoke to ease my nerves. I didn’t know if my wife, or our baby would live. Would it live happy? I just @CAPS1 a puff of smoke, and waited for hours I sat, shutting out the rest of the world to shield my own thoughts. Would it be picked on? I sat, ignoring the nurses pleading, trying to reassure me. Would it shut life out? I sat, waiting for my newborn child. My silence was broken, by a baby crying. I rushed over to my wife’s room, to find her holding a beutiful baby girl. “@CAPS1 you long enough”",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9292,4,"In the story, Saeng is being forced to adapt to an abrupt change when her family moves from vietnam to the United States. The story tells of how different things in the @LOCATION3 spark a memory of her life back in Vietnam. The second to last paragraph talks about the hibiscus, and the geese and the change of seasons. The last paragraph sums all that up, and how when everything farmiliar to her in Vietnam is being symbolized in the @LOCATION3, she will continue to try driving, and, ultimately, adapt to the changes the @LOCATION3 has brought her. This shows that Saeng can overcome her obstacles of the country, and is determined to do so. This paragraph is placed at the conclusion of the story because it reflects the theme of change and adaption throughout the story, but mostly reflection. The author takes time to explain how each individual item in the story reminds saeng of her old home, and in an effort to raise the tone of the story from regret and sadness to hope and optimism, the author recollects each each item in the final paragraph, showing that there is hope for Saeng and her family. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15387,6,"Al Smith and the engineers faced many obsticles attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. One obsticle that they faced was that most of the dirigibles used hydrogen, hydrogen is a very flammable chemical, this could have led to the Empire State Building burning down and killing millions. Another obsticle they faced was mother nature, In a height like 1,250 ft, theire are incredible winds blowing, and someone even unexpected, they can blow the dirigible into the building, causing it to be fatal. Findly, the law prohibites the dirigible to be ""flying too low over urban areas."" therefore doing this would be illegal. the building faced many obstacle, it got through most of them, but in the end it would be extremly unsafe to go on with mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7032,3,"The setting can affect a cyclist in many ways, if it were hot out, he would be thirsty and sweaty. If there were hills the cyclist would be tired as well as thirsty. The cyclist although thirsty and tired is determined to get through and find a town. The cyclist said” I began breaking the ride down into distances I could see on the horizon, telling myself that if I could make it that far, I’d be fine,” By saying this, he knows that he can make it that far as well as determined to do so. With the terrain causing even more trouble for him, would make it more difficult, but he knows that he must overcome his challenging activity but he still keeps a strong spirit with that, he can do just about anything because he has the encouragement he needs.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10494,4,"The author concludes with that because she kind of relates herself to the flowers. She has grown to her environment like a flower. Also she had failed her test, so just like when a flower dies and then comes back, she is going to come back and try the test again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7705,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist like if you have to goup hill or along long bumpy type roads. Then in the essay it says “Rough road ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit: @CAPS1 does make things more difficult than average. Especially with a lack of water to make things worse.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1589,1,"Dear editors of the @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 morning, my sister wakes me up to go to school. She uses her cell phone to set an alarm. A few years ago, my mom would come in and tell us it was time to get up. Now, we have one small device that we carry around with us to do our work. Most everyone has cellphone now, and it does much more than allow people to talk to one another from two different places. Now we can play games, go on the. These advances in the technology are making us very selfish. I, for one, do not approve. For starters, all of these new and improved gadgets are time consuming. With all the things to do in the world, we could all be doing something helpful, fun, or productive. Don't you agree? I mean, if you consider the idea that we all could be hitting the gym or studying for school tests and quizzes, then most teenagers would be in much better shape, physicly, and mentaly, @CAPS2. @PERSON1, my aunt an former physisist, said. The rate at which most students and kids grow increasingly more obese, @CAPS3 because of these new ideas involving phones and i-pods are completely sickening. The more time we spend using these items, the more we oppose the idea of being active? You can clearly see how we are growing less energetic, and much more careless of our time. Furthermore, the advances in today's society are pushing on the boundries at internet safety. Sure, people might claim that they can block out other people, but sometimes when someone posts something on the web, they don't always hide it well enough. They could have blackmailed one of your friend into commiting a crime, right? That happened to one of my cousins, @CAPS3 last year. The police took a long time to find her after she had been kidnapped, because the person who kidnapped her hid the evidence by a chain of blackmails. Do you see how important it is to spend less time on these silly computers? It sucks us into a virtual world that is sometimes 'bloody' or 'war-like? My brother learned swearing from the new & advanced game of @CAPS5. It's a fighting game (@CAPS6!) I implore your company to make the righty decision and write to help pull us off of our butts and get us up and going strong again. I hope you take my advice, and i thank you for your extremely valuable time and effort.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12630,5,"In the memoir ""@PERSON1 from Home: The blueprints of our lives."" I belive the author Narciso Rodriguez, demostraigted the mood of being laidback very acticulatly.This memoir dose not soud very formal due to the fact Narciso does little things like adding parenthenthese with aditoal statments for exsample in paragraph @NUM1. And taking about his friends and family so openly.Thats why I @PERSON1's memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The blue prints of our lives."" @CAPS1 the mood of being laid back.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13443,5,"Based on the auther in the @CAPS1, the mood created by the author was happy and sad, I sead that the mood created by the auther was happy because he lived in a comfortable with made by thier neighborhood was mostly, Spanish, Cuban, and italian immigrants at a time, it was no rasism, no segregation he lived his home peaceful, and the sad thing was that NARCISO RODRIGUEZ learned how to love and the the definition of family and about how to love but he saed that he would never how parents turn house into a simple home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11875,5,"The mood created in the memoir is grateful. ""My Parents both shared cooking duties and unwrittingly Passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today"". What I mean by that is that he is grateful for what he learned from is parents. ""I would always be grateful to my Parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the besis of my life. What I mean about that is that he loves and cherish his mom and dad for what they did for him. The mood in this memoir is grateful because he love and cherrishes and cares about his mom and dad.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13620,5,"The mood set in this memoir by the author, was greatfullness, and it seemed to be thanking his Family for such a loving childhood. It also seems @CAPS1 misses it. ""I was born into this simple house"" @CAPS1 says ""within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional cuban home."" @CAPS1 was very comfortable in his home and @CAPS1 loved it. It seems as thogh the excerpt was made to thank those who @CAPS1 lived with. As it says in paragraph @NUM1 ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS2 the excerpt @CAPS1 explains how caring, and generous his family and neighbors were."" My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us."" The author tells about his neighbor making delicious meals all the time, and their dinner table consisted of many neighbors, and blood relatives. The author had a very close relationship with his neighbors.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1616,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1, Computers have advanced our world so far into the future that practically everything is just a click away. Experts are awed that over the years, computers have helped billions of people get jobs done foster and smoother than ever before. Technology has helped doctors find new cures for patients, and diagnose their sicknesses in a more advanced way. Thousands of professions require the limitless knowledge of the internet, and computers continue to advance and redefine our way of living. Furthermore, kids of all ages benefit from modern computers. As technology becomes more user-friendly, children have adapted to computers giving them answers to all of their questions. As a student at @ORGANIZATION1, I have found that computers are vital in everyday assignments. Essays are now typed and not handwritten and projects are displayed on flash drives, not posterboard. Those advances have shaped our lives, and made everything much easier. Also, foreign places become closer to home, when computers allow you to virtually visit hundreds of different countries. With modern technology, the world is better connected and united. In addition to students, doctors also greatly benefit from computers. Technology has re-shaped the medical world dramatically with x-rays, @CAPS2's, surgeries and medicines. Amazingly, computers allow doctors and nurses to look at patients in a whole new way. Hospitals organize all records digitally to help give the right treatments patients. @PERSON1, the head surgean at @ORGANIZATION2 says, ""@CAPS3 technology, our @ORGANIZATION2 would be useless. We wouldn't be able to do anything."" @CAPS4 @PERSON1 is well-spoken, he makes a very important point. Computers are the building blocks of our medical world. Scientific studies have shown that the internet has brought people closer than ever before. Families separated by thousands of miles now have the ability to email, chat or even video chat with far away relatives and friends. Email has especially played a huge roll in our society, so as to help millions of people communicate when needed. Infact, over @NUM1 million jobs rely on email to communicate important business information. @CAPS3 the aid of technology, our economy would rapidly as communication countries failed to exist. Computers are essential to our culture. I strongly urge you to consider my opinion on the benefits of modern technology and think of all the people computers have helped. Our culture is now bigger, better, faster and stronger, thanks to the help of technology today. Knowing this, I vehimently suggest you educate others in the benefit of technology and play your part in advancing our way of living.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3558,2,"Do you think books, music, movies or anything else that could have something offensive be removed from the shelves from our libraries? Well this is what im going to talk about in my essay. I do not think that certain materials should be removed from the shelves. The reason is, is because just because you don't like something that one book might have in it dosen't mean that another person won't. Also, some book that have offensive things in them can help you realize the consequenses that could happen of it could reinform you about those kind of things. Also if you think the reading material is going to be something you wouldn't read or you think is not appropriate then just don't read it, it saves it so when someone else that actually wants to read something like that then let them. Sometimes i will go to the library to find a book that i saw somewhere in a different store and they wouldn't have it, so i would ask about it and they said that if they didn't have it there then it must something in it that could be offensive to others. But i know that alot of people like those nasty gross books and some don't. People have different opinons about things, so just because the person that is aloud to take the books of the shelve or put them on don't like the book or thinks its not appropriate dosn't mean that someone else will not like it either. Well, here is what i think of certain books or anything else that contains reading that are being taking off the shelves. I hope it makes people realize that they do like other things than you so leave the offensive readings out so people can learn that if they don't like it then don't read it",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12247,5,"As I read the article, also called memoir, I didn't so much find a certain mood that the author had created. This memoir is indeed heart warming and touching, though it is very inspirational. It teaches, at least it taught me, that if you can dream something then you can do it. Narciso's parents most likely did dream of coming to america to raise a family and they accomplished with a little hope and hard work. If I had to say what mood this author created I would say happiness. The reason for that is because Narciso was not rich in the sense of money but rich in the sense of love, happiness, and family cultures. For example, as this article said, his parents had a talent for cooking which was passed down to Narciso and he was grateful. Another example is that he was filled with joy and happiness just because of who is family and neighbors were and how he spent his life living around them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10208,4,"The author concludes the story with the main character vowing to take the drivers test again to symbolize moving forward. “ Saeng felt a shock of recognition so inffuse, it was almost visceral.” A pone stumbling to a florist shop the main character sees a flower that reminded her of her home land, Vietnam. “Here, let me help, mother.” In relieving her mother in the task of planting the seed that she had bought she began to mature. After reflecting on the memories of her past and coming to peace with there there was nothing left stoping her from moving forward. “when they come back I will take that test again.” As she sees geese migrating south for the winter in a v formation she sets a goal for herself and uses that goal as a tool to help herself grow and move foward in the new country she’s in. The main character vowing in “Winter Hibiscus” symbolizes moving foward.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16127,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were that the most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and the hydrogen is highly flammable. The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area, for example downtown New York. The greatest obstacle was nature itself, the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship with swivel around and around the mooring mast. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4634,2,"I do not believe that books, music, movies, or magazines should be removed from library shelves if they are found offensive. First, you have to consider what is offensive to most people, and who should be the people to determine if it should be sensored or not. People should be able to decide for themselves if they can or cannot get an item off of a shelf, because they might not even consider it offensive. If you are a parent, you have the right to not let your children watch or read certain materials, but you can't get it taken off the shelf because then it prohibits other people from being able to get that same material that they think is acceptable. Things that are offensive range from cussing all the way to extreme violence. Some people @MONTH1 not mind that there are a couple of bad words or a little violence, but others will find it very offensive. In my personal experience, I tend not to think that a little cussing is offensive, but I do know some people who balk even hearing one minor cuss word. Many movies nowadays are made up of content that is mildly offensive, but only if you take it seriously. The movies make fun of things that people might find offensive, which probably offends those people even more, but they do not have to watch it if they don't want that movie! It just depends on the person and what they have grown up around, or what they think is right or wrong. It is either your own responsiblity or a parents responsibility to determine whether the content of a book or movie is appropriate. Many times parents use the argument that children are too young to make the judgement on a book or movie, and that is very true. So most children movies and books are appropriate, and do not include content that children are not quite ready to handle. If you are older, then you can probably make the decision to read or watch something because it is more appropriate for your age. Many times you have already been exposed to the ideas prevalent in books in movies because those things are already in your life. It comes down to who the movie is for and what content you think is appropriate for their age. The idea about taking these books off the shelves would be disastarous. The reading lists in schools would have to be cut down because parents didn't approve, and the children would lose valuable knowledge that is in most literature. One person could want to rent out their favorite horror movie and suddenly it would not be there because a couple of people thought it was offensive. There would be nothing left in libraries if one person did not approve of something because then every item would have at least one person disapprove.I once read To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2, and our teacher told us that in another state this book had been banned because a couple of parents didn't like one or two things from the book. This book has many valuable ideas and lessons, and is considered a great piece of literature. These parents wanted the book to be banned from all schools, and all libraries all over the country, and that would be infringing on other people's rights of freedom of speech. The parents can say what they want about the book and not let their own child read it, but they cannot stop that opportunity for everyone else who wants to read the book. Taking it off the shelves would be taking off those ideas as well. Literature and every other movie and type of literature is what shapes a culture. There have been so many movements over time, many started with literature and it affected the culture and the people. Censorship would just take away a part of our culture, which would be devestating. You should look at your own life, and think about what you find offensive. Then step into someone else's shoes that does not think it is offensive, and see if it is worth it to take it all away from everyone. Almost everything could be considered offensive to at least one person, but it is your own resposiblity to decide whether it is appropriate for you or your child. The shelves should stay full of books, movies, music and magazines. It is our way of expressing freedom of speech, and that is an integral part of our country and our culture",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 92,1,"Dear local Newspaper; @CAPS1 you know that computers teach you to do many things? You probably do! I understand you would like to know my opinion on whether or not computers have a positive or negative effect on people. Well, I think that it has a positive effect. Computers teach you how to type and learn the moun keys. It also helps you to look things up like people, states, and etc. Lastly, it helps you to interact with other students when not in school. i encourage you to continue reading to hear my wonderful and strategic ideas. First of all, I think that computers have a positive effect on people because it gives you the learning skills to learn how to type I remember last year in @NUM1 grade, the tech ed teacher, ma @LOCATION4, told to go on a website that was all about learning how to type. It told us that the main keys were. A,@CAPS2,@CAPS3,@CAPS4 and @CAPS5,@CAPS6,@CAPS7, and colon(;). It was very helpful. From then on I typed like that. I think that learning how to type is an excellent thing. Typing helps you if you want to become a secretary or even a newspaper editor. My mother is a secretary down town at the low form called: @ORGANIZATION1. She works for three houses so she learned to type really fast. Typing is a big part of your life. You can use it for a project that you have to do for class, or an essay lthat you have to type to apply for a scholarship ro colege. Typing is used everywhere, even in math class my teacher types up things and pits them on the @CAPS8 @CAPS9. In addition, computers have a positive affect on people because they help look up famous people, states, countries, and etc. I remember on @NUM2 grade I @CAPS1 a project on @CAPS10, and in @NUM3 grade I @CAPS1 a powerpoint on I've also done a project on @LOCATION1 in @NUM1 grade, I @CAPS1 one on @PERSON1 this year for music, and I'm beginning one on @LOCATION2 and @LOCATION3. As you can tell, I've been using a computer, basically my whole life, except when I was a baby, but now that I think about it, when @CAPS11 a baby I got a little fake computer. i know computers are @LOCATION1 but they do have a positive effect on people. When was the last time you need a computer to help you look up something or someone? Priority not too long ago. Computers are the real dael. They can help you do anything. They've helped me my whole life. To be continued, computers have a positive effect on people. They help interact with other people students, and fa mily members, when not in contact. I remember when my cousin moved away. i was so sad. I didn't went her to leave. So then she gave me her email to contact her on the computer so I could talk to her. The computer has many websites where people can interact like: @CAPS12, @CAPS14, @CAPS13, aol, msn, yahoo, g-mail, twitter, and many more. i like talking to people from all over the country. I talk to my friend when I'm at home. i talk to family members. My favorite website is @CAPS14. I am a fanatic of it. It'@CAPS2 spo much fun. Do you have a favorite interaction website? @CAPS1 you have any interaction websites? If you don't you should get one. This is why computers have a positive effect on people. In conclusion, i think that computers have a positive effect on people. One because they can interact with others. Two: they can look up things to help them. Three, they can develop a sense of typing. Thank you for reading my letter which I 'm sure has persuaded you to agree with me on how computers have a positive effect on people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8965,4," The author, Minfong Ho, concludes the story ’’Winter Hibiscus’’ with that paragraph to show Saeng starting over…’’ In the spring , When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding… connects to her life, is that she is starting fresh in away. Although she @MONTH1 miss her old life, her grandmother, the well, and the fine toothed comb, she is making on effort, and ’’take that test again…’’ By retailing the test she shows that she is not ready to give in to ’’@CAPS1 of loss.’’ and to her grief. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9977,4,The author concludes the story with that paragrap for one main reason.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3941,2,"Most people do not think that kids should see certain things if they are found offensive. Like some books, music, movies, and magazines. I do not believe books or any other thing should be removed from libraries shelf. It should be the parent choice to what their child can look at or listen to. But now days when a child parent or any other authority don't let them do, watch, or listen to something it make kids want it more. Since they want it more they will find away to do, watch, or listen to what ever it @MONTH1 be. They will even go behind there parents back and probably won't care if they get in trouble. With this new generation authority can only limit so much of what children see today. Children see a lot of things that they are interested in and can find it all different types of ways. Computers, televsion, and the radio are three differnt major ways of finding things that maybe offensive but kids are interested in all the time. Young parents i do believe is one of the reasons kids know about these movies, books, music, and magazines. They say things and do things that young people should not know at a young age. That what make kids think its alright when their parents do what ever it maybe. So let it be the parent choice of what there child can see. Cause either way they going to be able to find away to get it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10290,4,In the story Saeng is trying to be ok with her new home. I think the author put that in the story to show that she has not given up. She is going to keep trying to adjust to her new home. Saeng wants to adjust but she misses her old home too much. That is why she is waiting till spring to try again.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3471,2,"Censorship in public libraries, allowed? I believe it should be, with a few different veiw points. For one, why should the books come off of shelves because some people do not like the plot of the series? Two, @CAPS1 is over a million of us people out @CAPS1 and we all are not a like in many ways. Also @CAPS2, reading is one of those things that we differ with each other. One person might read peaceful warm-hearted stories, than you have people out @CAPS1 like want something more intense to be able to read. With all of us being different all over the world. Humans have different taste in food, music, movies, and books. All people have different ways to satisfy their pleasures in book readings, to me books are like religons not all of us are the same in that, and at the same time we are all freely living with our reglion without any punichment, so why would you take away books that people love to read freely? To me, in my eyes is just not right. It's like taking candy away from a innocent baby because it will rot it's teeth out. What I mean by that is, that sure some books to people @MONTH1 offend them yet their might be some people out @CAPS1 being offensive to that persons books and so on, but as all as your baby's teeth aren't rotting out, than why take the candy away? Meaning if the books have each individal shelf with labels on what it was all about, which they do. People wouldn't feel so offensive finding them in the wrong spot. Looking at the point of veiws do you understand where I come from with this? We are all the same, yet in books we find each other inside of them, finding ourselves into books, I know many book readers with different types of tastes. No matter who they were and who their friends were, we all are different. To many people other than myself, would agree with that. So tell me again why should censorship not be in public libraries",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18945,7,"“Patience is a virtue.” I hear that saying over and over again from my mind. “patience is virtue, patience is a virtue.” I never really gave it much thought until I went to babysist my cousins for the first time. My cousin @PERSON2, who is only around @NUM1, does anything you say. She’s an easy one to babysit. But my other cousin, @PERSON3 he has to go by his own agenda. Not that I don’t love him, just that I think he has to be one of the hardest little kid to ba bysit. We started off pretty good that morning. we had a snack, played in the room for a while, did some arts & crafts, and watched a movie. A few hours before my aunt was supposed to come home, @PERSON1 went poopie in her diaper. Now, I’ve dealt with a lot of poopie diapers before, @CAPS4 I wasn’t too worried. I set @PERSON1 on the changing table, and took her diaper off before I realized that I didn’t have any wipes. I asked @PERSON4 where they were, but he was playing with those milk pumping bottle things. “@PERSON4, I need you to go get wipes please. Now.” @PERSON1 was now squirming, and I had to hold on to her if I didn’t want poop all over the house. “I know, but I can’t” “well why can’t you?” “@CAPS1 I don’t want to.” I was started to lose my temper when I realized the saying “patcience is a virtue.” I took a deep breath and I realized I was feeling what patient must feel like. “@PERSON4 I’ll bet you can’t go get them as fast as a cheetah!” “@CAPS2 I can!” “@CAPS3, prove it.” @CAPS4 he did. And I realized, you will get things done faster if your patcient, and crafty might just come to you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10031,4,"The author concluded ""Winter Hibiscus"" with this paragraph to emphasize a new life and new chances for the main character. The future setting of the paragraph, spring, symbolizes rebirth & another start from the cold, hard winter. The author takes this to heart including, more events which enhance this symbolized meaning. the author has uses structured choice to carry her toughts. Recreate, when to convey the theme of rebirth, the author uses words like ""the gesse return"" and ""take the test again"" which add to the importance at the home. Also, the literal action of the ""hibiscus is budding"" @CAPS1 rebirth. In winter the plant is dormant & less colorful, but in the spring the plant shows rebirth through about color in its buds. The author finally conveys the theme of rebirth by ending with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3799,2,I believe that books should not be taken off the shelves of libraries because without books we would not know anything about life to survive. The books and media help the human race sympathize with eachother and know about things that already happend so that we don't repeat history and do it all over again. Some books are made up for entertainment and others are for education and help children learn about what happend in the past.Taking books off the shelfs of schools and libraries would be uncalled for because you are taking away from children who have nothing else to turn to besides school and knowing what the teachers are talking about in the classrooms. Books that are offensive should be taken off the shelves but not the books that make sense to people and help you suceed in life. some schools don't have books to read because they are in a poor country and don't have much to do besides go to school and learn. books are important in so many ways that it would be a lot of drama if they took books off of shelves because people all around the world need to know about everything that has been done and the people who done it. some books don't make sense but that doesent matter if it does or don't.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15533,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock were very difficult. The builders had to modify and strengthen the building. The modifications were very expensive. ""Over sixty thousand dollars"". Another obstacle the builders faced were the winds on the top of the building. The winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast the back of the ship would swivel around. Also, They faced the safety. Builders were affraid that a @CAPS1 would happen because the dirigibles refill of hydrogen is very flammable. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS2, Another reason was that the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it clear that the dock would never happen. Even though they were pretty high of the ground it was still effective. They couldnt even tied it up and secure it so it won't fall because it was still against the law This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4217,2,"Censorship is the most foul and terrifying part of society. Our lives have been taken over by politcal correctness, so much so that our voices are no longer our own. Until recently we had the freedom to convey our thoughts, no matter what those thoughts were, in any form of media. But now if something is found to be offensive in any way it is essentially burned. Censorship limits our freedoms, takes away our @CAPS2 as citizens and people, shields us from the truths of the world, and limits the knowledge we can take from, as well as ensuring that one day there will be nothing left of media. The @CAPS1 of @CAPS2, the document that our country lives by, says that we as people have the right of free speech. Censorship actively and violently violates that right. Our country was built on free speech, and now it is being taken away. Our own words forced down our throats, never allowed to come out. Censorship ensures that no opinions will be heard, that no one's beliefs will be questioned, that no one can assume or think for themselves. Is this not what we are supposedly guaranteed by freedom of speech? We are supposed to be able to say anything we want to say. We know there are consequences for saying certain things, but we are supposed to be allowed to say them. Letting our own ideas into the world allows for new ideas to form. Arguements come, but these arguements allow people to see other ideas that they hadn't thought of and look at issues from new perspectives. We are able to see our world through different eyes when we hear or read someone else's opinions. And from there we can form our own opinions, allowing our world to be rich with iddeas and knowledge, and allowing our society to advance. But censorship wants to take this all away from us in order to please everyone. But there will always be someone who is unhappy. It's the inevitable truth. Censorship is trying to shield us from the ugliness of this world. In a way this makes sense. We don't want our children to understand the atrocities that happen in everyday life. We don't want them knowing what's happening behind closed doors. However, if we don't allow people to open these doors, they can never understand the world or be prepared for the experiences that are to come. Learning the harsh realities of our society educates people, allowing them to stop these realities as well as be prepared for when they happen to them. For example, let's look at the issue of rape. Rape is a horrible thing, but it happens. It is a nasty part of reality. Rape can be censored from books, televsion, and other forms of media. We can walk around pretending rape doesn't exist. But that doesn't accomplish anything. That doesn't get rid of rape. It still exists. And if the people are uneducated on the issue of rape, how will it ever stop? How will a rape ever be able to be prevented? How will someone know what to expect or what to do? By censoring rape from media, we are ensuring that the people in future generations never learn about rape. Knowledge of rape is important if it is ever going to be stopped. Pretending something doesn't exist doesn't get rid of it. Censorship is supposed to protect the people, but it doesn't. It hurts the people, cutting off their access to knowledge. We as people need knowledge. We live off of knowledge. And the way we obtain this knowledge is through media. Censorship takes away pieces of knowledge gradually. It @MONTH1 not seem like a lot is missing now, but as time goes on the gap will increase, and more knowledge will be taken from our grasp. Is this fair? Is this right? Is this helping us? How does cutting out knowledge ever help? It brings us backwards in time, makes us fear. It is human nature to fear the unknown. The more that becomes unknown, the more we have to fear. Censorship is taking away crucial pieces of knowledge that we must understand to get along in society. This is wrong and immoral. It is unfair, if nothing else. We should be allowed to take from any knowledge that exists. No good comes from hiding it. Lastly, this gradual burning of knowledge is affecting society in horrid ways. And as time goes on it can only get worse. Censorship is based off of offensiveness. If something could be offensive, it is disposed of. However, everything that exists in society could be offensive to someone. Therefore everything and everyone should be censored in order to fulfill the goal of censorship. This means all media of any kind should be destroyed. No one should say anything. The world would be forced to be silent. All knowledge would be taken away. Chaos would ensue. The people's freedom would be completely taken away. The freedom to know would vaporize right in front of their eyes. This is our future if we allow the censorship to continue. We cannot allow our lives to be taken over by censorship. Yes, people's feelings will be hurt, but we cannot rid our world of ideas and knowledge purely to spare feelings. These ideas and knowledge are too important to let censorship take away. Censorship is taking away our freedoms and @CAPS2, slowly stealing them away from us. It also tries to shield us from reality, but instead hurts us, ensuring that we will never understand our world and never be able to stop the very things that are being censored. Censorship is affecting society, ensuring that our freedoms are to be taken away. All knowledge will be trashed and no one will be able to voice their opinions. A very dark future waits for us if censorship continues. Only by helping people to understand censorship and the wrong it does to society can we gain back our freedom of speech; the freedom we are supposedly guaranteed, but censorship is desperately trying to take away.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 825,1,"Dear local @CAPS1, I think that computers are good for people to have. My first reason is kids might have to write an eassy for school. My second reason is kid might have to look important things up. My third reason is kids might have e-mails. My first reason is kids might have to write an eassy for school. Teachers mostly perfor to have the kids typ their eassys. When kids write eassy's they have to get information on what they are looking. My seocnd reason is kids might have to look important things on. They @MONTH1 have to fill out an alpaction out online when kids get older they want to look up schools they @MONTH1 want to go to. Kids in high school look up collages to get into when they are in like @NUM1 or @NUM2 grade. My third reason is kids migth have e-mails. When kids check their e-mails they are probably trying to see if their parents wrote them. Also some kids don't live near family so they e-mail each other on-line. My first reason is kids might have to write an eassy for school. My second reason is kids might have to look important things up. My third reason is kids might have an e-mail. Now I hope you like the reasons I wrote on why computers are good to have.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19351,7,"I didn’t know where we were at. Then my dad told me, we were at this place called buddies. I’ve never been there until that day. Then the waitress put us at a circular table. Then, she asked us if we would like anything to drink. I told our waitress I would like a diet pepsie. My sister got a fruit punch. As always. My mom and dad got a mountain dew. My brother got cherry pepsie. I don’t know why we all got different drinks. It took @NUM1 minutes to get our drinks though. My dad wasn’t so patient. He knew that the food will take forever. Finally our waitress came out with our drinks. She apologized for the wait. Then she took our order. The wait for that was @NUM2 minutes. My dad was very impatient. I was the only patient one at our table. The resturaunt wasn’t even that busy. I told my dad to just be patient the food will be right out any minutes. So we waited and waited. Finally, the food came out. We ate all the food, got the bill, then left. That was the time I was patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16505,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there included issues in safety, nature problems, and a dilemma with a law. Safety was a major concern as many dirigibles used hydrogen, which was highly flammable. An example of such a dirigible was the German Hindenburg, which went up in flames in Lakehurst, New Jersey. As the article ""The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, states, ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it taken place above a densely populated areas such as downtown New York City."" @CAPS1, nature was a big obstacle the owners faced, as the winds on top of the building constantly shifted. According to Lüsted, this would have caused the back of the dirigibles to ""swivel around the mooring mast,"" which would not have been ""practical nor safe."" @CAPS2, there were legal issues the builders faced. There was a law at the time restricting airships from flying too low over populated areas. As the article notes, ""This law would make it illegal for shipped ever tie up to the building or even approach the area."" The builders of the Empire State Building faced issues with safety, nature, and the law.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15036,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced a few obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The biggest obstacle was finding a safe way to do it. New York City is a very densely populated area so any type of accident would be horrific, as the owners realized in @CAPS2 @NUM1, ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the empire state building realized how much worse that accident couldve been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as @CAPS1."" Another obstacle was nature itself. The wind at the top of the building was too strong as it says in @CAPS2 @NUM2, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currants. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast."" Safety was clearly the biggest concern",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6871,3,"The terrain that a cyclist is riding on has a big affect on them. The first example of this is in they are riding on hills, it makes it much harder for them. For example when the rider in the story saw that he was going to have to ride on hills he was, olcasly disappointed. Another thing that affects cyclist is the smothness of the road they are riding on. In the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the main character came to rough spot in the road and was disappointed and didn’t want to ride it. Another aspect that can affect cyclists is the heat. Several times in the story, the cyclists says that he is tired and dehydrated, at one point he thinks he is going to die of heatstroke. Those are the effects of the rider’s setting have on him/her.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 565,1,"Dear Newspaper, The world that we live in today is full of technology. Everything from check out isles at the grocery store to coffee makers at home are being upgraded all the time. The technology has many great things about it, but theres also a huge down fall. The most common technolgy device is the computer, its a great thing to have but its also very bad. The computer can be used to bully, it can take time from exercising and it even takes from your social and grammer skills. We all know the websites such as facebook, myspace and @CAPS1. They sseem harmless but its really just a place for harassment. Their said to keep friends in touch, butkids use them to say hurtful things about each other. Half the kids in my eighth grede class have admitted to either getting bullied or bulling over the computer. If so many kids are getting hurt by the then why do we all keep using computers? Many kids @MONTH1 say they don't spend to much time on their computers but @NUM1 out of @NUM2 kids in my school admit that they do. Checking the computer is the first thing they do when they get home from school and the last thing hey do before going to sleep at night. All the time these kids spend on the computer is taking away from exercising and enjoying life as a child. I've seen many kids gain exessive amount of weight because they don't eat proper food they don't exercise and they shut down from reality all because they are obsessed with their computers. kids are even getting portable computers, thats how addicted they are. Do you want your kids like that? However, all these programs and websites that are on computers have a way to inneract with friends, and socialize. But all of this is taking away from your social skills, even grammer. Most kids and teenagers would rather talk over the internet thant face to face, and half the time they don't even spell word correct or use proper grammer. In the long run all this talking over computers is going to hurt them when it comes to school and getting a job. I know that computers are good for school because you can research stuff for projects and e-mail your job. But the time spent, kids getting bullied, and the now lack of social skills is not worth it. We need to cutback on our societys use of computers because it will help us all when it really counts. Just ask yourself do you want your kids getting bullied? Do you want to gain weight? Do you want to loose your social and grammer skill? Just ask yourself these questions and you just might change your mind.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 113,1,"Dear @CAPS1 paper, @CAPS2 name is @PERSON1 and I am writing this letter on the count of the computer issue. @CAPS2 look on this subject is the oppisite. People @MONTH1 spend more time on the computer then exercising, but theycould still be social in chat rooms. People can use laptops out doors. You can spread your imagination with the games you can play. Lets get onto @CAPS2 first point, being social. The experts say that people are spending less time with there friends and family then on the computer. They @MONTH1 be spending less time with there friend and family physicly, but who said there not being social. Theres facebook, @CAPS3, and chat rooms. You can talk to your friend on there so they on being social. Not being physicly social but verbily social. On to @CAPS2 next subject the expert say were not enjoying out doors, but the over looked something here it is. If were not enjoying outdoors then half of amarica would be as plae as can be. Then theres laptops. You can use thoughs out doors. People that have laptops can go outside on a sunny day grab some fruit and relax. You could stay out there till the batterie deis. Then just grab the pluge and keep relaxing its easy. Computers also help your imagination. Some computer games help expand your imagination because when your playing games you think of things that could make the game better. Simulaters help you design or even controll things. Some games allow you design and play as a character you created. They help you jobs that you might be intrested in. For me computer games expanded @CAPS2 drawing. All these thing can be reversed. No one is a robot that repeats what they do over and over again. Humanity has the power to get off the computer, and go outside or be social. As I just proved everything you can physicly you can do on the computer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9195,4,I believe that why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because she is telling the reader and herself In my point of view that once again she do work in the garden to see if it catches her interest. I believe that the author is trying to express this because in the beggining of the story the author shows no interest in the garden or any interest of the world around her. For example when she was supposed to buy just seeds for the garden she went and used some of her mother’s money to buy herself a big mac. So In conclusion I believe that what I wrote clearly states how the author feels and why she ended they story the way she did.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 635,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 of late there has been controversy of how Computers affect people's lives. I believe that the effects on people negative. My main reasons of this argument are. The persons health their the users well being. Did you know that over @PERCENT1 of kids and teens are obese @NUM1 computers can contribute to this statistic. If a person is eating unhealthy but sizing. They can still be fit but if they go on the computer instead of working off all the. They become fat. This can be a serious problem. Becoming overweight has many health risks liked heart other. It also could prevent a person from excersicing. If they are overweight their legs could ache and a simple set of stairs could become a huge challenge. Do you want in obesity rates? I would think not. If you watch tv you could picture perfect families. We all know that no family is like that. Introducing computers could mess up that fact even more. For example, my cousin used to be an outgoing friend person. Now because of computers he is a @LOCATION1 who does nothing else but play on the computer. He gets up eats breakfast. (The of about ), then plays on the computer untill lunch. He eats a small lunch and right back to playing. After along @NUM2 to @NUM3 more hows of playing. He off the computer, hopps into goes on his laptop all night. This greatly affects his family. They try to get him off but all he does is online. He cant interact with his family and this has a huge infact on it. Even though he could get off and talk one of the only ways of talking to him are through facebook. Now because of this family is. We can easily avoid this by telling every body these known facts. My final argument for you is the users well being teen many of us have a facebook of @CAPS3 I have homework I to use the internet for facts and stories. @CAPS3 I do so to go on facebook. If anyone dows the effect our grades. If we chat on facebook we doing our. If arent doing our homework we wont get a good grade. If we could less to other serious problems. Another thing is that you could actually need your computer to stay. It could be addicting and you might rely on it ""once a to kill himself because he dident have his computer"". So @CAPS2 you can see there many negative effects on a user of a computer. It could many problems inthe future like health. the family happiness. So spread the word for the sake of thousands of people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19472,7,"I was patience the whole entire .I was happy on the outside, but on the inside, I wish I got a better score",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9664,4,The author concludes the story like this because she is going to come back and do the samething next year.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6885,3,That the cyclist is steyetling down up totally end steep within when to get to his destination of the town settle out are taken mean yesterday. The condition in hand and hurry some when and have one his body. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4294,2,"Freedom of speech and the freedom of press is a privelige we as @CAPS1 are lucky to have. I don't believe in censorship in libraries. Authors, publishers, editors, and directors all have a right to express their opinions in their work. If they would like to express some adult subjects in their work that is their choice. They have a right as people to protray their books, magazeines, and movies anyway they want. We all have the choice to what books and movies we want to check out at libraries. Movies are required to have ratings so the audience knows the extent of the maturity you must have to watch the film. For example if you are a @NUM1 year old who wants to checkout a movie but, it's rated @CAPS2 that is not the best choice of movie. It @MONTH1 not be the best choice because movies rated @CAPS2 let the audience know its for a mature audience over the age of @NUM2. As for books, I often use a book review website that allows me to see the content the book has. If I see that the book contains material I don't wish to read about or think the material is too mature, I don't read it. I hold the power to choose the books I read and the responsibility to choose the books best suited for my age and maturity level. There are many ways we can track the content of the things we can checkout. Just because a movie or book is released doesn't mean we have to watch or read it. We all make choices in our everyday lives.Some are big and some are small. Picking a book or film to checkout from a library is a small choice, but it is our choice to choose what we can handle. Author's, directors, and editors should not have their work punished if some people don't agree with the content they are putting in their material. Everyone's opinion varies on what's right and wrong. Therefore if you believe something is inappropriate you have the chocie of not reading or watching it. I do believe we are lucky to have this freedom of opinion and speech. Although we shouldn't abuse it we must not forget we have no right to tell others how to use this freedom. As we have the choice to read what we want to, authors have a choice on what they want to write about. Libraries shouldn't take away this freedom that allows us to make our own decisions on what we view or read",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19381,7,"Patient help you got through life. If You aren't patient then you won't know where to go next in the future. @CAPS4 uncle had to be patient face month. He was running a muck just @CAPS5 for a phone call. Finally someone yelled just be patient they will call. He bid us being patient is the hardest thing he was to do. He was dined why they couldn't call the next day. He said ended up forgetting about here and there. He said he was trying to be as patient as he could be. @CAPS4 under was waiting for a patient ??? America's next @CAPS1 @CAPS2. They add him they would call if he got in. They soon did because the phone mug. A woman nicely said ""@MONTH1 I speak with @CAPS3 sanders please"" @CAPS4 uncle replied ""yes this is him! I @CAPS5 for a month! @CAPS4 family kept telling me to be patient! So now I don't have up anymore!"" "" You are in! so keep on practicing! Someone else will call you with the details!"" "" @CAPS6 you so much!""then he hung upon the phone "" I'm in!"" @CAPS7 was the happiest days of our lives. @CAPS4 uncle with through a lot. Really all that kept him on the ground was him being patient. He told us @CAPS7 was hard but @CAPS7 worked out great and the ending. Here's future advice. Always and I mean always be patient. Your not going to get anywhere in your life if you aren't . Patient is an important @CAPS8 of your life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15204,6,"The obstacles of getting the dirigibles to be able to dock at the empire state building was, they couldn't put the fuell on top of the building. Putting mooring mast on top of the roof would make it very unstable and putt a lot of Pressure on it. For this to happen they had to modify the structure of the roof, which ended up costing over @MONEY1. After succefully building that they had another obstacle. It was trying to figure out how the dirigibles wouldn't move around with so much wind currents. They never figured out how and the idea just disappeared.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 807,1,"Computers. An achievement @MONEY1 technology and science that improve all @MONEY1 our lives. They let you explore the world in one click and chat with your friends. What could be wrong with that? I'll tell you. I belive that computers are ruining our society. Now don't get me wrong, I like them, but they can be bad. People get on and never get off, you never no who it is your chating with online, and they can cause tons @MONEY1 stress. Let me explain why computers can ruin lives. When the computer was invented I'm sure this wasn't the purpose. To stay on playing mindless games, or randomly searching the web. Some scientists have even studied the @PERCENT1 @MONEY1 the time, the more you are online, the more likely chance you will become obiece. That is not what @LOCATION1 needs. You say you'll be on for a minute, but you will stay playing ""@CAPS1"" or ""@CAPS2"" for days on end. People with @CAPS3 work to do might never get on. Also it is just flat out a waste @MONEY1 time when you could be outside playing a @CAPS3 game. My second reason is that when you are ""chatting"" or ""@CAPS4'ing"" someone, who is it really? A study conducting proved that when you think your talking to a friends it is really some perverted @NUM1 year-old looking for ""fun."" @CAPS5 huh? Also when you talk, someone could be inbedding a virus in your system that could take @MONEY1 to fix. How mad would your parents be? It could be happening with every letter you press. Finally stranger or not, some @MONEY1 these people leave links to get to disgusting websites that you pray your parents don't see. My final point is that computers are proven to cause more stress. When your on @CAPS6 or @CAPS7, nasty fueds between friends can occur that affect you and your school work, inflicting damge to your grades. For every @NUM2 people when join a social page, @NUM1 get worse grades do to this issue. Also when your parents are online for a long time, the next morning they must rush to get ready for work and are tired, afffecting their quality @MONEY1 work. In this economy I don't think we need more layoffs. Even simple things like a virus or a slow upload could and will cause stress, in fact @PERCENT2 @MONEY1 @LOCATION1 have a stress issue due to computers. I've told you today why computers are bad. They get sucked in stressed out and stalked. Now computers aren't all bad, just use them right. These are the reasons I think computers can be bad.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 472,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 technology majors support that the use of computers have a positive effect on people and I agree with them. I believe the use of computers are a necesity for social interaction, homework, research, and are a great source of entertainment on a rainy day. After a long day at school @CAPS1 teens go from the bus, to the front door, to their computer chair. In fact, @PERCENT1 of must teens do so. Odds are they're logging into facebook, myspace, formspring, @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS2, and other socially interactive websites. With good time management I actually find these websites important. I think facebook and e-mail and @CAPS3 @CAPS4 ( @CAPS5) are a great way to be socially interactive. It's also a great way to keep in touch with long distance family or friends. I go to @DATE1 camp and have made friends I call my family. Some of them being across the ocean in @LOCATION2. Seeing as how I can't make long distance calls which would cost way too much money, facebook is a geat alternative to keep in touch. @CAPS1 of my family also live far away. For example, my aunt, uncle and cousin in @LOCATION1. My aunt just had a baby, meaning I have a new cousin which I'm not able to see in person yet so seeing pictures on facebook instead of spending money on envolopes, stamps and picture prints is really awesome @CAPS1 homework given out in school requires a computer. Three out of five homework assignments are on the computer. Whether it be taking a twenty question test to defining a word the computer is a schoolwork necesity. In school now many projects are assigned meaning we need the computer and internet. We use powerpoint and other microsoft documents whether it be typing an essay or creating a powerpoint slideshow. We need the internet for research to get the information we need, to suceed. Aside from interacting with other humans and researching and typing the computer holds many more wonders. Many people believe people are spending way too much time on the computer. While this @MONTH1 be true for some people it is not true for @CAPS1. Many people are concerned children are becoming lazy but in a recent vote @NUM1 out of @NUM2 mothers said they'd radther see their children playing and interacting on the computer then being a couch patato and watching @CAPS6. On a rainy day the computer can be a great alternative. You can slide in a @CAPS7 and watch a movie or play a game or even research something new and learn about it. @NUM3 out of @NUM2 @CAPS8 have at least two computers in the house for a reason. They're important to @CAPS1 people everyday lives. The computer is a great way to keep in touch with family and friends. You also need to computer for school almost all the time and on a rainy day its a great alternative then being lazy a watching @CAPS6 while your eyes fall asleep. I do believe computers have a positive effect on people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1031,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I beleave that computers have a good and a bad effect on people. Even though I think it has both effects on peope, I think that it has a better effect I think this because the internet gives people the chance to learn more about other places. Allows people to talk to family that lives far away, and it also helps to make new friends. I support the advances of technology. I support it because people can talk to their family that they can't get to see. I have three cousins that live in @LOCATION1 that I never get to see, but with computers I can talk to them all the time. We can email and @CAPS2 to chat to eachother to find out what they've been doing, hows school, and so much more. My aunty loves to send and get pictures from them to see how much they've changed since the last time we saw them. Without the new technology we wouldn't be able to do that. Computers also help learn about other countries and the people that live there. With the internet you can find what the country looks like, what types of food they eat, what type of language they speek, and so much more. Recently I had to do a project in @CAPS3 @CAPS4 about a place in @LOCATION2. I got @LOCATION4, @LOCATION3 with the help of computers I found out so much more about the country that I never even know about. There were so many great places to visit and learn about the history of @LOCATION4. Learning so much about the place makes me want to visit there someday. Without computers I never would have learned so much about that place. Another great thing about the new technology is that we can make new friends and talk to different types of people from all over the world. I read recently in the @CAPS5 @CAPS6 that atleast @PERCENT1 of kids have a myspace or facebook that helps them interact with people from all over the world. There can also be dangers to talking to people you've never met before. To be safe don't tell people your phone number or where you live. But meeting new people can also be good. For example, my cousin doesn't get along very well with the people she goes to school with. But after school she goes on her computer and talks to people that are just like her. Either way she should be careful. In conclusion, I must say once again that I support the advances of technology to an extent. Computers help you talk to family that you don't see, helps you learn about new countries, and meet new people. Thank you for your time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6566,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many was. First, the “town” The cyclist first comes upon is described as a ghost town. Although the cyclist chuckles about it, this setting sets up the long journey the cyclist has a head of him. There were other features that would negatively affect the cyclist. For example, “…I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” (pg @NUM1). Flat land is much easier for a cyclist to pedal on. The change from flat land to hills affected his stamena and will to keep going. He really had to push himself to trudge up and down each hill. His determination finally led him to, “Gary and Wilber’s Fish camp…” (pg @NUM2). He finally found hope. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3142,2,"Comics, romance, adventure books, and mystery books are just the few different types of books out there as well as the magazines and music we listen to. With a little bit of everything, and whatever your passion is, we have that right in our local libraries to go look at or hear whatever pleases us but, some of the people that go there are not adults. Some of them are young children who are either checking out a book themselves or are simply with there parent/guardian. I believe that even though there are some books magazines, and music not attended for children, they still shouldn't be removed just because they are found offensive. Everyone once in their life had to atleast experience something unpleasant. But knowing our world today, we simply can not hide from those things but yet face them, we adults are old enough to just walk away from something we find offensive unlike what our children or other children can do. Sometimes, even children have to go through it as well. It's part of growing up and also a learning experience for all of us. If you already know what parts of the library have stuff children shouldn't see, don't bring your child to that area. And if it's possible, bring them to an area where they @MONTH1 sit and read there favorite books as well with you by there side where you can watch there every move. And at the same time, you don't have to take a chance at explaining something that you are not quite ready or sure that your child is ready to hear or see. Since it's impossible to hide things from your children that you are not wanting them to see and hear at the same time, that's a part of life. Even if they are still really young and ask what a certain thing is, we can simply turn there heads and make them get distracted by something else and pretend that we didn't hear what they said. But as your children get older, they should know right from wrong and know what things they @MONTH1 read and things they can't. Some of us are oblivious to the world around us and @MONTH1 not know that certain things can cause more harm than good, even like taking your children to the library. If you don't like a certain thing there or know that there is going to be something you simply do not want your child to see or hear, then don't bother taking them with you on your next visit and go another time when your child is with a babysitter or take a chance into bringing them with you an expect the unexpected when it comes to offensive items at the library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15314,6,"There are many problems with trying to dock dirigibles to the Empire State Building. First, there was a German dirigible called the Hindenburg that caught fire due to the hydrogen. Having a dirigible go up in flames over dense New York would result in many lives lost. Second, the wind 1,250 feet in the air is very strong and unpredictable. There was no way to be sure that the dirigibles could even dock or be controlled once docked. Lastly, there is a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. It would almost certainly be against the law for a dirigible to be so close to a building with so many people in it. Since these problems all could result in deaths, the idea was thrown out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12003,5,"The mood in this memoir was soft, with an exception. I say that the mood is soft because it has a nice thankful mood that's really telling everyone how grateful he is of his parents and their care. It's also saying that there was racism and segragation, so in that paragraph (which is the exception) the mood is more of a rougher mood, I say rougher as in ""a rough life,"" having to deal with racism and segragation. Back to the soft mood, @PERSON1 also mentions his friend and her putting meals on the table and having his family there regularly, this reminded me of when someone is going through a tough time and the camunity helps out by sometines cooking neals. This was nice of Alegria (@ORGANIZATION1's friend). And also, how they would house family until they were back on their feet and having the feeling that their familly would do the same. for them. And lastly, the last sentence of the last paragraph gave the sense of them took a house and turned it into a home would be comforting. These all gives off the soft sense, meaning nice and thankful",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15995,6,"In the exerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders faced obstacles in an attempt as to allowing dirigibles to dock. One example of an obstacle that the builders had to face was how to attach the mooring mast on top of the building. In paragraph nine it says, ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" They had to come up with a safe way to attach it. Another example of an obstacle was that they had to strength and modified the building because in paragraph nine it stated that ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" The last example was in paragraph nine when they explained that ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundren feet below."" The Stress might be so much for the building that it could cause the building to collapse. In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @ORGANIZATION2 the builders faced many obstacles as to allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building in New York City.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 797,1,"Dear @CAPS1 post, Computers are an advance in technology, in a good way. They do benifit are society grately. Its a way that family members can keep in touch, it makes your life easier booking a flight and keeping a flight and tastly they help kids with school work. They can bring people together. Firstly, they are a great way to keep in touch. In my own expierence I have a brother at college and when I miss him or need to talk to him I can always send him an email or vidoe chat with him. Do you have someone, you don't get to see everyday? It can really make your family closer, because you talk more, with your realitives, and with friends. Friends more and go away but you can always chat it you need them. In a time of pain all you want is a friend. When the friends away, a computer probably helped our, too, just getting there. Booking plans without a computer would be a hasal, waitting on the phone for hours, at end, with computers you can do it all in all about five minutes. I have had a expierence when my plane was canceless but didn't know until, she went on the computer and checked. So she just switche are flight and we were off but could you imagine going the next day to find out that your flight was canceled and try all day to get on a flight and might not. With computers you can check every hour on the hour if you like. It well even say if there delayed so you don't wait in the airport for five hours. When it comes to traveling computers are a hesasity. Has that ever happened to you? Most likly. Yes once you were happy you had a computer. On the other hand, it also helps with your education. When class is over and your teacher is trying to scramble to get the homework out, mostly no ones listioning all they want to do is scat. About nine out or ten kids won't know the assignment when they get home that night. I know thats happened to me. As a eighth grader you probably did the of just forgeting all about and just taking the concerned. You could use your computer. Most schools use some or device, here at @CAPS2 he have were all are teachers post, grades, test/quizs coming up and homework. It's just one click away from every thing we need. It all right there, together. Most @CAPS3 kuchers will be a let happier if their kids come, in with there homework then without. Wouldn't you be? From school fund raisers to the lunch menu its all there. In conclusion, computers do help us from everyday use. to special uses. It helps use make are family stronger, help us keep are flight out and help us get homework, for school the next day. Computers are a help to the society, in a great and convienent way.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3330,2,"Eventually, everyone sees or hears offensive things. However, the government has taken it upon themselves to try and keep youth from seeing it. They believe the parents should tell their children about everything while they try to make it one big secret for kids. But, if kids are introduced early, we would not have to keep it a secret anymore. Libraries and all types of media should not be censored. Kids always ask questions like 'where do babies come from?' and adults, wanting to avoid an awkward conversation, make up stories or do not tell them the whole truth. Imagine a world where the government let the media say whatever they want. Yes, at first it would be vulgar but the government would then have the right to teach about sex and drugs in school. More kids would be educated, so less of them would be curious enough to do any of that stuff. That is not to say that newscasters should curse everytime they are on television. It is merely suggesting that instead of having a metaphorical black curtain over half the news, they report the whole truth. They have freedom of speech, and we have a right to know. At first, people would think it was a terrible world. But, eventually, with right leadership, it would help make a more truthful environment. Kids would learn about sex and drugs in school, and have a safe environment to answer their questions if they have any. Drug use and rape would go down. Then, talking about 'offensive' topics would be non-existent so kids would not be embarassed if they had questions. This would change the world for the better.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6896,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist, by putting him in unwanted places starting off with this man took advice from many older men, which don’t even know the area anymore. So riding through this man seems lost, he is trying to follow their advice, but comes across many unknown, unwanted areas. He starts out good, then comes to a “Rough Road” and he even says “sometimes life can feel so cruel”. Then he come to this large snake in the middle of the road scary enogth he has to slow ride past this thing taking up most of the road. Coming over these thing was very strong and hard of this young man.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9538,4,"Saeng and her mother have to be determined to try their best in order to survive. Saeng and her mother has been thourgh a lot and when she failed the @CAPS1 test, she was more depressed than before, The author concludes this story with this paragraph to give readers the thought oF how it is to be determined to adapt and survive in a different place and though Saeng and her mother are away from their homeland they still enjoy the things they did in Vietnam, like the flowers, and the hot peppers and bitter melons, her friends disagree with the taste but it doesnt stop her from enjoying what she loves most.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9502,4,The author could have finished the story with that paragraph for many reasons. He/she probably finished with the paragraph to show that Saeng cared about adapting to her new place and was not a failure or quiter. The author also probably finished the story this way to show that Saeng was determined for success and to make her mother happy. This is why the author finished the story with the paragraph.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15229,6,The builders of the Empire State building faced many challenges in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was that putting the mast on the empire state building then having a giant dirigible moor on to it would cause stress on the building and could pull the mast right off causing it to weigh the dirigible down to the people and buildings it could cause death and destruction. Another obstacle was timing the construction right. They dont want the mast to be done when the whole building is only on floor @NUM1 out of 102.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6827,3,"Do not Exceed posted speed limit, never accept travel advice from a collection of old timers who haven’t left the confinses of their porches sin Carter was in the office twenty miles up the road, I came to a fork as sorrs. I got down on my hands and kness, working the handle of the rasted water pump with all my strength. The water bottles contained only a few totalt and sips. He could or been sad person. And he could just be a bum.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3472,2,"Books are a form of history, each telling a story from the past. in history we dont block any offensive events that take place so why should we removed any books that have offensive material in them. it would be wrong to strip the kids of any learning tools. books are a very important learning tool in todays schools and there is somthing new in every book that a kid can learn from. so even taking away one book could make a kid learn one less thing. and doing this on purpose would be aginst everything that schools stand for. there are many diffrent janras of books, but not everybody loves every jonra if a person only likes to read young adult books because it relates to there culture, wich most likely will have offensive language and events play out. if you were to take this away from a youngadult in school; once more this person would be missing out on books because nows they are not intersted at any of the books in the libary. if you can even think of just one instance that could strip a student away from a learning opertunity you shouldnt do it. but the fact is there any many reasons why you shouldnt remove any literture from libary shelves",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4636,2,"People should have a right to listen, read, and watch whatever they want. It is people's own choice to what they read, watch, or listen to. They will not be able to change that person by taking out offensive movies or books. They will only go somewhere else and do it. People have a right to read, listen to, and watch what they feel is good for them. If others find that offensive then that is their problem. People make their own decisions and that is their right. I feel that if you tell someone that they can not do a certain thing that will only make them want to do it more. Taking offensive books, music, movies, and magazines will not solve a problem that our society has with being offensive to others, it will only mask it. Taking them out will not all of a sudden make people stop being offensive to others, they just won't do it in libraries. Every book, music or movie will be offensive to some other person and if we take all the offensive stuff out there will be nothing left to read. It is just something that we will have to deal with. So I do not agree with censorship in libraries. It will only take away our right to read and view what we want but also it will take away all the offensive movies and books we have; which is almost every book. Everyone feels that one book or another if offensive to them and if we take away those books we will have nothing left in our libraries",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13566,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez From Home: The blueprints of our lives the author sets a sad mood in this memoir. An example of the sad mood set the author describes his neighborhood. The author describes his neighbor hood by saying ""our neighborhood was made up of mostly Spanish, cuban and Italian immigrants."" (@NUM1) This show they live in a run down neighborhood because most immigrants are poor when they arrived at the @LOCATION1 @CAPS1 example is when he describes his family. The author say's ""There was often someone staying with us temporarly until they were able to get back on their feet"". (@NUM2) This shows the poverty that they lived around because they had to put shelter around those who couldn't aford it. The last way the author describes the sacrifice of his parents, The author say's ""The Faith that this would lead them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times"". (@NUM3) This is a sad mood because it shows how their @CAPS2 back fired and they didn't have a very happy time. That is why I think the tone of this memoir is a sad one.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3836,2,"'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 many people believe that certain books should be banned from schools, just the opposite is true as students can learn valuable life lessons from these books, get a deeper understanding of the past, and comprehend the true meaning of an author's unique style. Over the years many well-written books have been on a 'censored list', meaning that they are at a risk of being removed from the library. 'The @CAPS2 of @ORGANIZATION1', '@ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2', and '@CAPS3 to @ORGANIZATION3' are all examples of books that have been marked down as being offensive. These books are all written in a style of their own and can bring a different lesson to every reader. While one reader @MONTH1 love the story and wear out the pages, another @MONTH1 get halfway through and never finish it. However, the belief that there is freedom of choice in reading is correct. 'The @CAPS2 of @ORGANIZATION1' by @PERSON1 is a classic example of a censored book. Throughout the book there is foul language used that is considered offensive to some. However, at the period of time the book was written, these words were not considered to be wrong. Books like this should be saved for older generations to read; however, we also have to realize that if a parent allows their children to read that book at a young age, there is nothing that can be done about it. None-the-less, removing the book from the library is not the correct response. Ever heard the saying 'learn from past mistakes'? Books are a fantastic way to learn about the past in a fun and enjoyable way. They are a tool of knowledge. Removing a book from a library is like removing hundreds of pages of knowledge. Every story has a unique style, which @MONTH1 appeal to some and not to others. Many books give readers a deeper understanding of what the time period was like when the book was written. '@ORGANIZATION2' has been a known censored book from the beginning due to its somewhat dark and gloomy aspects at certain points throughout the story. How many kids do we see at school carrying around one of the '@ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2' books? They often state that it is their favorite book of all time. If the book were to be removed from the library, it would cause many students to never have the opportunity to read a fantastically written book, which has a unique style about it. Throughout our twelve years of school, students are taught to think for themselves and make their own decisions. How are we encouraging this if we are removing materials from their grasp? If we cannot let students make such a simple decision as to whether or not to read a book, we are teaching poor life lessons.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9788,4,"The last paragraph of “Winter Hibiscus” describes determination and the growth of a person. Saeng says that when “this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” Just as the hibiscus blooms Saeng will bloom forth and strive through the winter to try and succeed in passing her test. Saeng concludes by saying this as a realization that she can’t be sad forever. She must be determined in order to pass the test. The next season will be a sort of renewal, starting fresh and coming out beautiful as does a hibiscus in bloom.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9558,4,"I think the author of “Winter Hibiscus” finished with ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt, and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again, “because it is showing us the importance of the plant and how it will help her pass. It also symbolizes that when the plant buds and fights all the obstacles to survive, then she will beat the obstacles to past her driving test. For example, in the story it says ""When the snows melt and then geese return” the author is relating thats to Saeng and her struggle to pass her test with these struggle in surive the winter. It also says “Like the geese. She lifted her head and watched as their distinctive I was etches against the evening sky, slowly seeing into the distance”. This quote is saying she will rise to her challenge, and overcome it. All in all, this quote ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is holding then I will take that test again”, because it is showing the similar struggles between the flower, Saeng and the geese to overcome their challenges and finish what thing started.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3050,2,"NO, I dont think music.movies.magazines, and etc., should be moved from libraries because whats a libaray with only books? In even though you have to read and be quity and be seated. You can have music while on the computer and you can watch and check out movies you @MONTH1 like. And the magazines to keep you updated with the newest fashion on new looks or something thats going on and our community.Music is what you wont to listen when you come to the libary. It smoothing up the vibe and if you @MONTH1 be and a bad mood that music you @MONTH1 like @MONTH1 claim you down in put you and a better one. It relax you. You can be on the computer and still listen to music. While reading a good book you can be listing to music.Movies is a good source when and the libary. You can watch movies while and the libary and check some out. In take home and watch. You can watch all types of movies. Movies you @MONTH1 like and it also can be movies you @MONTH1 need for a project or even educatoinal movies. If you wont to leran about nature, animals,or even a @CAPS1 person from the @DATE1. Its always good for a movie and the libary.Magazines and a libary is very helpful. Because while you @MONTH1 be waiten on something or it could be on the computer you can seat and grab a magazine. In the libary its a varity of magazines you can read like sports,fashion,nature,cartoon,animals and etc. So magazines is very helpful and a libary.Thats why i say no, because it shoudnt be removed from libraries becouse you can do lots of great things and the labary besides just reading a book and getten on a computer. Movies magazines and music is helpful and a libary to. Who just wont to get on a computer and read a book. '@CAPS2 @CAPS3'.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15226,6,"Builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles when trying to dock dirigibles. One obstacle in docking dirigibles was the framework of the building. ""Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" This shows the amount of work that needed to be done just on the structure of the building. Another hardship was that most dirigibles outside of the United States were filled with highly flamable hydrogen rather than helium. ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst on May 6, 1937, the owners of the empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area."" @CAPS1 how dangerous the hydrogen could be. Lastly, dirigibles could be weighed down by led weights. ""using these at the Empire State Building, would be dangling over pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe."" @CAPS2 if the lead weights dropped they could kill someone. Many hardships were brought about trying to dock dirigibles at the empire state building",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17921,7,"Tic tak times tiking I was patient one time it was in the doctors office my oppment was at two and I had to wait and wait and wait and wait I sat there until it was @NUM1 and they finnly called me in. Once again I had to wait and wait again. So I was trying so hard to be patient and trust me it is not easy for me at least because I can’t even sit there for @NUM2 minitues and stay still I have to move aroud so it was hard to sit there lisening to the sound tik tok for a while. And that was the time I was pacient it was hard to belive but I did it. The hardest part was when you here one off those tiker clocks go tik tok and I was stinn there for a while now you absolutely now that for some people incuding me. It is sometime hard for you to be pacient some times its ok to be pocient and sometimes its so hard to be pacit and sit there and oh absolutely noting, so that is my story arbout the time I was pacient and was not inpocit sitting there doning noting not conplaning wating to and @CAPS1 mazines.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15998,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Originally, the greatest problem builders faced was strengthening the building's foundational base in order to support the stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure. To combat this, @MONEY1 of modifications had to made to the building's framework. Unfortunately, most of the complications of the mooring mast were not considered until after it was built. A most important one was safety, in that that many foreign dirigibles to use helium to float which is highly flammable. A disaster like the Hindenburg disaster over New York City is too dangerous to risk. Another preventer of the mast were the winds at the top of the building that were constantly changing due to the violent air currents. The swaying dirigible could not be secured with hanging weights due to the danger of dropping one over a very populated New York City. A huge complication of making the dream a reality was a law preventing airships from flying too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal for a docking to ever take place. The many obstacles that face the builders of the Empire State building attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, eventually led to the dropping of the idea all together.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15497,6,"Durining the @DATE1 and the 1930s, there was a fierce competition arising over constructing the largest building. To set the Empire State Building apart from the @ORGANIZATION1 decided to put a mooring mask for dirigibles. This would have both meaning and make the Empire State Building the worlds largest building. The mooring mask was certin to fail for a few reasons. For one, forign dirigibles used hydrogen instead of helium. Hydrogen is very flamable and would cause a huge fire @CAPS1. Another reason is above the Empire State Building there are strong winds and currents that are constantely shifting. This would make it very difficult to control the dirigible. Pilots unable to control the dirigible would have great difficulty @CAPS2 their dirigible. Lastly the mooring dock failed because of the law. This law stated that it is illegal to fly air ships to low over urban areas. On 1931 @CAPS3 Clavan @CAPS4 the @CAPS5 of the mooring mask. By the late 1930's the Idea was dead.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7360,3,"There were many features that affected the cyclist. One feature included the first ghost town that he come by. “but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” This had to affect him a little because he knows now that the people who told him the shortcut haven’t peen out for awhile. Another feature that affected the cyclist was the lack of water in a ""desert in California in June."" The cyclist now knows that it might be awhile before he gets any more water. The hills also had an affect on the cyclist because he knew now he was going to have to work really hard to get into the next town, without drinking much water. The Welch’s building also had an affect on him since it was abandoned and no drinks were left. In conclusion, the cyclist had to battle many features on his way to the National Park.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6997,3,"Setting plays a crucial part in the cyclist’s mood and energy. For example, in a cool @DATE1 day riding gently downhill, the rider is happy and energetic. However, “traveling through the high deserts of California in June is not the best environment for laughs and ease. The cyclist in the story was hot exhausted, and hydrated. He thought, “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean.” Where the cyclist rides can have a huge effect on the cyclist himself.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18451,7,"One day I was at my @CAPS1 @CAPS2 house to celebrate my cousins @CAPS3. He was turning @NUM1 years old. So we played games played on the trampolenc. They we came inside to relax and watch some television. We played with there dog after a while. Then a lot of people came over. We went outside for a third time played. We had to come inside and @CAPS4 up for dinner. We all ate turkey, baked potatoes, cheese potatoes, squeen, beans. That was pretty good. Then they wanted us ??? project. It was a jon with a candle in it. We had to cover it in tisue paper and it uses lots of glue. I had to wait patiently I was the last one to domine. So I walled waited ??? then finally I got to do my project but I was ?? Only one there sitting at the table doing my project. It actually turned out pretty good after all. Being patient con get you very far in life. You have to be patient in a job, restraunt, and lots more. So remember just be patient and you'll be okay. Being patien will guide you through your hole life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7409,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because someone travelling a good distance in California during June will be hot. If the cyclist doesn’t have enough water to supply himself for if he gets lost then the features of the setting are very crucial. Not having enough water can cause someone to dehydrate, which does happen to the cyclist in the essay. “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. “This statement proves that the cyclist wasn’t a good state to be lost when the sun is blazing down on him. Also, when you are dehydrated and tired you @MONTH1 start to see things that aren’t there, but you want to see those things. “ I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasn’t a mirage, and tried not to get too excited. “It was a good decision that the cyclist didn’t get his hopes up about a building that might not be there overall, features of a setting for a cyclist can cause anything to happen, so be careful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12880,5,There in family cubana to father come to 1956 for good future for you family @CAPS1 have one apatarme of two room who @CAPS1 have two son in @CAPS3 A bay or boy @CAPS1 twinty one And @CAPS3 twinty seven,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20742,8," Why is it that laughter can bring people so close together? Is it because laughing shows trust for one another, or is it simply because you understand each other. There many different kinds of laughter, like cracking a joke, or someone does something very embarrassing. The story that I will be telling is about how such a bad day for hunting turned into the funniest moments ever. It all started in the @TIME1 when I woke up, and I had forgotten to put my wet clothes that were in the washer machine to the dryer. Now I had to dig through all my clothes up in my room and find camouflage clothes that weren't dirty, or were something that I could wear. By this time anybody would be in a bad mood, and trying rush to get out the door. When my buddy @PERSON1 showed up and was ready to go and I wasn't. I was rushing, and when you rush you are bound to forget something, and I had left my gun at the house. Five miles down the road I noticed that I had forgotten my gun, so we turned around and went back to go get it. Not only now we were late, we were speeding to the cabin for breakfast, @PERSON1 had the eggs so that we could make omelets. As we are racing down, we hit a bump in the road and everything, I mean everything hit the ceiling in the truck and then slammed to the floor. In doing this all the eggs broke in the egg carton, so now we had no eggs, and no eggs meant no breakfast. Its about thirty minutes till shooting hours, and we are late showing up to the blind so that @PERSON1 and I can meet up with our other friends, @PERSON3 and @PERSON2. Finally we get to the blind right before sunrise and while we are getting all set up, a group of twenty mallards drop in unexpected and took off before we could get a shot off. Now were all thinking great their goes our opportunity to redeem ourselves from a terrible @TIME1. Only to find out that those ducks were the only ducks we saw all day. At around twelve o'clock we gave up, and went back up to the cabin, but on the way up we got stuck in two inches of water in a truck. I remember thinking to myself, ""@CAPS1 this is not really happening to us right now"". So @PERSON3, @PERSON2, and I got out of the truck to push, and @PERSON1 stayed in the truck to drive. Their were many attempts to push the truck out, and finally on the sixth try we pushed the truck hard enough to get it out of the muddy water. Now the funny part, when we had broke the truck free @PERSON1 laid on the gas causing the truck tires to spin, and spray mud everywhere. When I saw the amount of mud being hurled everywhere I jumped behind @PERSON2 and used him as a shield from the mud. By this point @PERSON3, and @PERSON2 are @CAPS2 in a inch thick layer of mud from head to toe. You couldn't help but laugh, it was the funniest thing ever. @PERSON1 had watched it all through his rear view mirror and as soon as he was safe from getting the truck stuck again, he fell out of the truck because he was laughing so hard. Even @PERSON3, and @PERSON2 were laughing a bit too. So when its a day when nothing goes your way or having bad luck, you never know what the day has planned for, in this case its one of the most memorable things I remember that happened that duck season.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18538,7,"Patience in my words is to be able to wait along time for something and not angry and not raise your blood pressure. Patience is a good thing to have because if you didn’t have patience you would probably never be able to accomplish anything that takes time to do. I think that being patiente would help you succeed in many things. For an example, me and my mom were in the @ORGANIZATION1 drive thruogh and the lady in front of us was yelling at the people in the line to go faster, when you do something like that it’s most likely not gonna speed up. My mom has outstanding patience because she can wait for things for hours and not get frustrated. I rarely have patience I cant wait more than around ten minutes for something. Patience is a great thing because you must likely wan’t get things done. Most of my family and I don’t have the best patience but we sometimes do. I think that patience is very good to have.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3536,2,"Do I think offensive materials should be removed from libraries? No, I think that if a person is offended by it then they should not get it. They should ignore it and find something else of interest to them. If the person complains about a book, music,movies or anything then they should not go to the library. I think if people get offended over a book or something like that and complain, they shouldn't be aloud in the library. When I was in seventh grade we took a field trip to the city library. I thought it was fun because it looked awsome inside. I was walking around searching for a book about animals because all the seventh graders had to research an animal. When I was looking, I saw a guy yelling at one of the librarians. He was a guy of color and he was complaining because he read a book about slaves. He was offended by it cause his grandfather was a slave. I read the book and I thought there was nothing offeensive about it because it told about the slaves having to do hard work, then eventually they got free. My opinion is that offensive materials should not be removed from libraries. People that do not think they are offensive will read them. If a person thinks that a book is offensive then they should just walk away and find a different book. That's why I think offensive materials should not be removed from libraries.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4415,2,"Should certain materials in libraries be removed from shelves if they are found offensive? I do not think books or any other materials should be taken off the shelves for some people? There are many reasons that the books should stay on the shelves. I am going to tell you all of the reasons I think the books should stay on the shelves. One reason I think the books should stay on the shelves is because some people might need the books for a school project. For example, a student could have a project over @CAPS1. A book on @CAPS1 could offend many people. Just because it offends some people does not mean it should be taken off the shelf because other people might need that book. Someone might need a certain book for a project. If the one book they need is taken off a shelf because it offended someone they could fail a class. That is one reason I think the books should stay on the shelves. Another reason I think they should stay on the shelves it's their opinion if the book offends them. Just because they don't like the book and it offends them doesn't mean other people do not want to read it. Why would you take a book off of a shelf because it offends one or a couple people? There could be many more people who want to check out that book and read it. If a book offends you just dont look at it. Why would you look at something that offends you? I don't understand why libraries would have to removed a book from the shelf just because it offends someone. Especially, when that person could just ignore the book and pay no attention to it. That is my last reason my opinion is what it is. So after reading this I hope you understand why my opinion is what it is. There is no point in taking books off the shelves. People need them for research and projects. It is someones opinion if they do not like what the book is about and if it offends them. For example, if i didn't like something on a menu at a resteraunt they are not going to take it off the menu for me. My last reason the books should stay on the shelves is the people can just ignore the books and not look at them that would be easier than taking books off the shelves. THE @CAPS3",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12311,5,The mood the other Created was how happy narciso was because her parents gave up so much for her to have a better life and education in america.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18060,7,One thime i was in the doctors office and there was alot of people there and I was just getting there and my dad was telling me we should go because there are so many people and I said lets be puctiont and wait and he did so person after person and my dad was pactiont so it was @NUM1: hours till they caled are name and we went in and I got my five and vaxsene shots and we left and we went home and ate diner we not taco saled for dinner.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12636,5,"When reading this memoir it makes you feel something. The feeling you feel is a sort of sorrow. When you feel this it makes you think why did they have to live that way. It also shows that you care for the people Who deal with that lifestyle, @CAPS1 for goodness sake be nice to people dont be nasty because what you do could affect you too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 843,1,"Alot of people would disagree that computers are benefiting people. But I think that computers are exremely helpful because they are a good way to learn, they are fun to use, and it's also a goodway to talk to old friends. I know there are some people who are on computers alot more than they should but still computers are very helpful. Computers are a very good way to learn because on a computer you could easily find out whi the @CAPS1 of @LOCATION1 is. But if you didn't use a computer and you went to a library it could take hours to find the right and find were in the book it is. You could also learn about news faster without writing for it to come on the news channel. Computers are a lot beter than having to drive to a library because with just a couple as clicks you could find what you want and be done. Computers are also fun because you can play little games on the internet that could easily take up on extra @NUM1 minutes that yu might have on a work break or before school. And even some games exercise your mind like solitare its fun but hard. But there are some games that people tend to over do because they go addicted. But most people haven't ever prayed a game like that or only play once in a while. Lastly computers are a good way to stay in touch with old friends because there are a lot of ways to talk to people online like say if when you were in high school your best friends moved away you sould still talk to people on a chat room were you can text. or a video chat were you actualy see them face to face. In conclusion I think computers are helpful because you can learn, play and talk to people. Computers are best all around helpful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17868,7,"Patience is when you are waiting for something to happen and you experience difficulties but you do not complain. My friend @PERSON2 is a patient person. Her and her brother are both very patient. Their dad has been gone for most of their lives fighting for our country. This is the story of the time @PERSON2 and her brother @PERSON1 were patient. When @PERSON1 was born his dad was @NUM1 years old. @PERSON1 dad had already applied fro the army. His dad has been their most of his life. Two years later @CAPS1 sister, my best friend was born. Their dad was with them til @CAPS2 exie was about @NUM2 I believe, but he left that year. @PERSON1 new why his dad was gone, but @PERSON2 is about a year behind because she has really bad A.D.H.D. so doesn’t know why she didn’t see or talk to her dad for about three years. When she turned about six years old she knew her dad was gone and that was the time @PERSON1 became to be in the in the army and also it was the time their dad was in the leg by a machete. When their came back for about a year, they spent a lot of time with him, and @PERSON2 is very fragile and he would try play with her and tickle her and it hurt @PERSON2 and she would scream “@CAPS3! @CAPS3!” but it didn’t work he would just keep going and acting like he didn’t hear her. @PERSON1 isn’t fragile at all, he loves his dad and so does she but she doesn’t like him as a person. She likes my dad more than hers because she sees him more and she thinks hes nicer. In conclusion I think @PERSON2 and @PERSON1 are very patient because they don’t know if they’ll ever see him again after he gets on that plane, and I’ve asked their mom and she says they never complain about missing their dad.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1158,1,"Dear newspaper I think that there are many reason why computers are good for people. Compters are good for people because they help keep friends conected. Reason two is that they can be great knowledg for people. @CAPS1 third reason that computers are good for people is that there are many programs that are team based and help people with teamworks and team building skills. Those are three of the many reasons why I think that computers are good for people and have had a positive effect. First of all, I think that computers are good for people because they help keep friends connected. If you move to another town, go to a colledge far away, or move because of a job you will most likely, if @CAPS5 is further away, loose connection with you friends. But, using a computer can solve that problem. In social networking sites like @CAPS3, twitter and myspace you can simpily look up your distant friends from you previoulsy lived and have contact with them. Youi can catch up with each other, recall good times you've had, end maybe make plans to meet each other sometime. @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 have been reconnected using social networking site on a computer. Experts also say that @CAPS5 is important to stay connected with your past to sustain a well being and to be happier. I have had an experience when a scoial networking site has reconnected me with a @CAPS2. When i was younger I had a @CAPS2 whos grandmother lived to @CAPS1 dad. After a little over a year of him being good friends be moves to @LOCATION1, I thought I would never hear from him again. Later that year I also moved to a different town, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 searched me on @CAPS3 and we got connected again, I have found out he moved back to where I use to live. That is the first reason I think that computers are @CAPS4 good for people. The second reason, @CAPS5 is that computers can be great knowledge scources for people. If you ever need to set information that not have to through the of book,then, a computer is the thing for you. As long as you than to find an accurate and reliable scourse than a computer. Is an amazing tool. You can look up almost anything and you will be able to find locks of information on @CAPS5. Statistics show that you can find @PERCENT2 more information on a computer than a book. Experts have stated that soon books will be obsolite and computer will rain as knowledge scources. That is the second reason why I think computers are good for people. Last of all, I think that computers are good for people because there are many programs that help with teamwork and team buildings skills. What I by programs is yes of course videogames. Almost all of the computer games out have multiplayer features. Withins the multiplayer universe there are match types that involve a great amount of teamwork. In the age games you must communicate and talk to your team if you want to win. And that is the only way you will win is by using teamwork. That is @CAPS1 third reason why I think computers are good for people. In conclusion, I think that computers are good for people, they help to reconnect friends, , knowledge, and build teambuilding skills with programs that are out for @CAPS5.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12854,5,"In this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez, she uses key terms and phrases to discuss the mood in paragraph @NUM1 she says, ""Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This line puts a clear picture in your head of what it would be like to have lived in that home. Another time Narciso Rodriguez puts a clear picture of the setting in your head is in paragraph @NUM2. She is stating where her parents must live and says, ""braving the harsh northern winters while yearning for their native tropics."" This line puts the setting in my mind which makes it more clear to picture the home and setting. Narciso does a great job describing the mood of each location.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11837,5,"The mood that the author creates in this story is a @CAPS1 sad mood But it is also @CAPS2, @CAPS3 the guy in it is getting a new Home and a new Life @CAPS3 His parents @CAPS5 @CAPS6.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15633,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced were nature and safety. Safety played a large role in the building of the Empire State Building. Two main safety conserns were getting passengers safely on and off dirigibles and the substances they were filled with. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable,"" (paragraph @NUM1). The next obstacle the builders faced was nature. The wind speeds would shift due to violent air currents, causing the dirigibles to swivel around. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast,"" (paragraph @NUM2). Due to nature and safety issues, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles allowing dirigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6414,3,"Setting can affect a cyclsit in many ways. Just as I read in the story, being in a desert dehidrated him. It was hot, the road was bumpy and the dangers of poisnous snakes. The cycclist could have died in many ways such as: heatstroke, falling of his bike, dehidration, and a bite form snake. Say ??? in the mountains of ???.There are many problems that face you there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18212,7,"Patience is very difficult for me. Having patience is very difficult for me, because I am not patient at all: t cannot wait for things. During school, I am always looking at the clock. I just can’t wait for class to be over most of the time. Some times I think I rush things a little bit too much. I wish I was patient, but I’m not. I’m not patient because I think about what comes after the waiting, I get too curious. For example: in class I get excited for when the day ends. Some day, I want to improve on my waiting style. I don’t think that will happen anytime soon.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9356,4,The author concludes the story the way he or she dose because it shows that the time she found the plant that she will get her lisens So it is a reminder for her. I also think she did it that way because when the plant blooms it starts over and so when she sets on gose to take a chance at the test she is starting new,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16348,6,"In the artical ""The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the obstacles the builders of the empire Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, One set of engineers here in New York is trying to dope out a practical workable arrangement and the government people in washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast. The architects couldnot simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State buildings flat roof. A thousand- foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frames. The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over Sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1280,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, I think, in my opinion, that computers benefit to society greatly. The reasons I believe this is because of @NUM1 main reasons: Computers are a limitless source of knowledge, there are websites with online communities and it's just plain fun to use. Computers, as we all know, are a limitless source of knowledge. Now then, as you know adults need to work A @CAPS2 so most of the time if someone has to research something for work they could use a computer. Even kids who go to school need to use the internet of the computer for something like a project or homework. Now I know everyone, kids and teens especially, love to talk to their friends so most people sign up for an online community website. Now I'm very aware of online pedophiles but that can be taken care of by the fact of having friends you know of in real life to sign up as well. Lastly, I have to say computers are just fun to use. Kids like me that normally have a long rough day at school like to come home and rest with some nice game on the computer. Now this sounds like it just lazy but it is something nice to do for a distraction to other things. And thats where I stand on terms of the endless knowledge, online communities, and just plain fun of the computer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6255,3,The features of the setting greatly effect he cyclist one way it effects him is because it is so hot and he doesn’t here any water left. Also because their are so many almost buildingc and ghost towns this gives him cables haze that he will be able get the water.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10114,4,What the author concludes that in the spring time when the snows melts and the flower comes back it makes be risk of spring time at home. Which makes her relax. Also spring time is a more pretty time because all the flowers are out and the flower that reminds her at home blessings.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8973,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it adds the uplifting message that Saeng will be able to overcome the obstacles of living in an unfamiliar country. First; the @CAPS1 geese represent a piece of her new home because she reasons “reluctantly” that they are familiar to her now, This depicts her ability to adapt to her new environment. In addition, she also equates spring to when the habiscus is budding and the habiscus is a symbol of herself because both are trying to live in a country that is not their own. Therefore, the habiscus budding represents her being able to live comfortably in @LOCATION1. Finally, she vows that she will take her drivers test again. Her intial failure to pass the test showed her inability to become a part of @LOCATION1, but if she passes it. Then she will have successfully adapted. Overall, the author of this stoy concludes with this paragraph because it contains the theme of the passage through an uplifting message. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10350,4,"The author concludes the story with optimism and hope for the future. She finishes her story with “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. By concluding the story in that way it helps demonstrate the hope the hibiscus plant brought to her after she failed her drivers test. The hibiscus the helped give Saeng one step closer to adapting to her new home. It says in the story Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of strange before, through the quit repition of season upon season, almost femiliar to her now.” In the way the author ends the story it helps give inspiration for a new beginning and new season.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1019,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2, I would like to thank you in advance for taking the time to read this letter, it means a lot to me, I am writing today because it has come to my attention that some people are saying that computers do not benefit society. Those people are very wrong! Computers are amazing! They allow easier research, I can learn about other countries, and can talk to people online. I do all of this stuff alsmost every day! We're just finishing up a pretty big research assignment for english and social studies. It involved taking a note cards from different sources. Luckily, I was able to go on the card catalog on the computer and find many books on my topic, just by typing the keyword! We can narrow down our options so easily because you can search for something so specific. After you find your topic, you can check and see if there's reliable information by reading a summary. All of this can be done in about @NUM1 minutes or less.This would be nearly imposible without a computer. I have a few relative in @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2. A while back my family and I were trying to plan a trip to @LOCATION2 to visit. We were able to go on a search engine and find directions to their house from the airport. it gave us the directions and the estimated amount of time it would take to get there. i've also been able to do plenty of research on other foreign countries at the push of a button. it's so simple and convenient, too! My two uncles live in @LOCATION1. On thanksgiving my mother was upset because she missed them I was then able to set them up in a video chatroom so my mom could talk to them. this is great, its so convenient to be to go an instant message. i can talk to people all over the world and it doesn't even any money! In conclusion, computers are very helpul because you can learn about foreign countries, have easy access to research, and can talk online. there's a long list of other things that make computers great, but it would take too long to write. Thank you again for listening.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13570,5,"The mood created by narciso Rodriguez was appreciation, or that's what I got out of it. Throughout the whole memoir, narciso's affectionate language and explanation to his life and his parents was constant and grasping. In paragraph two, he uses perenthesis as if his gratitude is so strong, that he can't bear to leave out how thankful he is. He set the scene with new experience and inspiration, Which he always thanked his parents for introducing him to. ""I will always be grataful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them What they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done...""p. @NUM1. He closed it off with how he could never forget how his parents turned a house into a home, appreciation flowing strongly",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20802,8,"My relationship with laughter. Well the first time I came face to face with laughter was when I met my boyfriend for the first time. Before I met him I was depressed all the time and my friends couldn't stand it anymore. But when my friends introduced me to him I fell in love for the first time I was happy for once not depressed and all alone in a corner crying all the time. When that happened for the first time in almost a year I smiled I didn't smile until the day I met him. That's when my friends knew that i found someone to take care of me and love me for who I am. Later in the relationship is where laughter came into play I was laughing all the time when I was around him and not upset all the time. That's when we started hanging out but, it took all of our friends to us to hang out. After we stated to hang out we got to know each other better then we did for the beginning when we first met. It took until freshmen year for us to start dating. That is when I found out I suppose ably dating someone else and not him I didn't believe it at first until that guy came up to me and started yelling. He came up to me and comforted me in front of my friends and said ""@CAPS1 are @CAPS3 cheating on me and it's over?"" with a guy @CAPS3 just met. Then he tried telling me it was over and I told him ""We were never dating in the first place!"". My friends walked up to me and saw me in tears and asked me whats wrong and tried to find me someone new. By the time @CAPS4 did I was with another guy and I'm happy with him and nothing can change that he will always be there for me and no matter what happens between us. He is the best thing that has ever happened to me and he makes me laugh when I'm upset or mad he says ""don't worry everything will be okay I promise so just believe in me."" Laughter has been in this relationship for almost a year now so we don't plan to change that unless one of us messes up again we have messed up so many time that we don't know what to do anymore. If it leaves now I don't know what I'm going to do it's apart of my life and the relationship now lets see if we can keep it together with out messing up this time around. This part of my relationship is the best and it wont change at least I hope that it wont because it would make me go back to living in fear of my step dad I'm glade that I found someone. I hope that it doesn't change because laughter is what comes with him and when I'm around him he makes me laugh and no one has ever been able to make me laugh when I was crying not even my friends and family. Now that laughter is here almost all the time I can't wait until the day that sorrow goes out the window. So now that me and him are together and happy and hopefully nothing goes bad between us because of how much we love each other and I'm not my bubbly self when he's not around. Six to @CAPS2 of my friends say "" @CAPS3 are losing your bubbly self don't let her disappear on @CAPS3 she is there to guide @CAPS3 down the road."" @CAPS4 also told my dad that I don't really hang out with them anymore and the reason @CAPS1 I don't is because @CAPS4 can be bossy and @CAPS4 tell me what I can and can't do. @CAPS1 can't people just understand that this relationship isn't going to work if @CAPS4 keep getting in the middle of it @CAPS4 all think that my life revolves around them and it doesn't. My relationship with laughter has nothing to do with my friends and family it has to do with my boyfriend and me and that's @CAPS1 I told @CAPS3 about my relationship with laughter. Lets just say my relationship with laughter will always be here and nothing will change it not even my parents or his parents we can promise @CAPS3 that much. @CAPS1 can't this relationship just have a happy ending to it with out anyone or anything trying to get in the middle of it? I just wish that there was a world @CAPS3 could just run away to with out anyone knowing where it's at in the world. Well just to say nothing can make this relationship ever go bad unless we start to fight again with each other I hope that nothing will tear us apart and if it does who knows what will happen.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3288,2,"There are thousands of libraries throughout the world. All of which are filled with numberous books, magazines, music, movies, ect. for people of all ages to obtain. Some people think that materials in a library should be censored while others think everything should be allowed to be there. I do not think materials at a library should be removed, or censored, because the materials would decrease, people would choose what to look at, and the material would help with research. Materials at libraries should not be censored because the materials allowed at the libraries would decrease. Everyone has different opinions on what they think is appropiate or not. If one person were to decide a book was unappropiate and take it off the shelf, another person would have the right to take another book that they thought was unappropiate off the shelf as well. However, since everyone has different beliefs on what is appropiate and what is not, the books would rapidly decrease.The same would apply to the other items at the libraries such as magazines, movies, ect. Another reason is because everyone has their own choice about what they want to look at in a library. A fifty year old man would not have the same intrests as a thirteen year old girl, so if some materials were removed, there would not be as much of a variety to chose from. If there is a little variety to chose from due to materials being censored, the amount of people using the library would decrease causing the library to eventually get shut down from the lack of people using it. Lastly, materials at a library should not be censored because each and every item there could help with some kind of research. A child from high school could go to the library to look for a book to help research things for a report in one of their classes, or an elder women could go to the library in search of a cookbook to research something new to make for her next home cooked meal. Both people would need a material from the library to help them with their reasearch, but if some materials at the library were removed, they might not be able to find something to help them. Materials at a library should not be censored because the materials would decrease, people would choose what to look at, and the material would help with research. Some people believe removing items at a library should be allowed, but I strongly disagree. There are many different materials in the libraries around the world today for people of all ages to come in contact with, and that is the way it should stay",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18857,7,"Patience means being understanding and tolerant. I find patience difficult to come by, along with many other people. Some people are graced with the gift of patience. Those people find it easy to wait even when it’s the night the fanaly of your favorite book series comes out. “@CAPS1 @CAPS2” the clock taunted me by moving slower than ever. Why @CAPS10 wasn’t back yet I didn’t know. All I knew was going to happen that night that was a very bad thing. It must have been the unbearabl heat getting to me because when the door slamed shut @CAPS10 orgued that @CAPS4’d only been gone for five fast muinets. I didn’t belive her, but we climed into the car and drove down the twisty, turning road. We had timed our car ride perfectly to see red lights at every, stoplight. It was like the light were mad at us. We also got stuck behind every slow person with @CAPS3 way to get around them. Just as I had a scream budding inside me we saw a green light and cruised into @LOCATION1. Coming up on @CAPS8 right came the book store and @CAPS8 jitters became more uncontrollable. I bounced up and down like I was on a trampoline and stoped the split second I saw the line in front of us. “@CAPS3!” I shouted, “I don’t have any patience left to wait in this monstrosity of a line. It was like the whole town was in on making me annoyed as possible. I lugged the lawn chairs from our van to wait in line. Flop” I fell into the black chair and waited. This was going to be a long night. “@NUM1 minets till midnight” @CAPS8 @CAPS10 explaind to me “That’s impossible” I told her. “You can make it.” @CAPS4 was right, @NUM1 minuets wasn’t that long of a wait. I breathed in the smell of coffe coming from inside and listend to the num of chatter among the people. The @NUM1 minuets would be over soon, and for the first time that night I was patient. “@CAPS5 the seatbelt went into place and I cracked open the final book of the @CAPS6 @CAPS7 trilogy. What will happen” how is it going to end” @CAPS8 mind was full of questions. “@CAPS9 was that wait really that bad” @CAPS10 asked. “I guess not” I answerd sheepishly. “Being patient payed off’ @CAPS10 lectured. I didn’t reply I was already reading a mile minuet. I learnd being patient really does pay off and not complaining makes life a lot easier. Patient is undersanding and @CAPS9 that I’m a little better at being patient things will be a lot better.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7531,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by dehydrating him. The cyclist said, “I toiled on. At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake."" The cyclist was in the desert and each mile he rode he became more and more dehydrated. The desert sun drying out his body. He said with each passing landmark, “I eased past trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state.” @CAPS1 that the more he went on the more the desert affected him and dehydrated him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3355,2,"I don't believe any of those materials are offensive if found in a library. But if the childrens look somewhere else to find those things then they will find them anytime. The offensive materials are out there to be pick up by some people including children. The books aren't offensive only if found in the adult area. If so found there the children would'nt read it because it's too long for them and the book doesn't have any pictures in the book. Music is offensive but like I said only found in the adult area. Kids aren' interesting in music at that ageso they would'nt bother to see them. Movies and Magazines have offensive things in it and can be found any where, but found in a library is gonna be rare. The only thing you will find in a library that is offensive is gonna be a magazine.they make a bunch of different type of them, and can be found anywhere. To explain the offensive, and the none offensive books that are out there. I'm gonna talk about '@CAPS1 @CAPS2.' @CAPS3 book has a lot of bad words, sexual scenes, drugs, gang violence, racism. @CAPS3 book is so offensive that the childrens parents would'nt let them read it, but @CAPS3 book is based on a true story. Everything that happened in that book was real, and people need to know what happened and why were the people in that story doing those things. Some books @MONTH1 be offensive but you can learn from others mistake by reading that book. Everything @MONTH1 be offensive to you in one way, but looking from the other point of view it's a learning experience. People that made those mistake could tell the childrens that those stuff aren't wroth it. Everything has it's purpose. The books can tell you the story of peoples life, and the movies are based from the story and instead you can watch it. Music can tell you the life of people by poetry. Magazines really dont have a point their just there to gossip",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20747,8," These days you don't really need a reason to laugh. Laughter just radiates out of some people as frequent as a breath of air. I believe that everyone has someone they can laugh with because everyone has someone they enjoy being around. One of the people I enjoy being around most is my best friend @PERSON1. No matter what the situation, whenever we are around each other we end up having fun. Laughter can turn a bad day completely around. One of my most recent examples of the power of laughter happened just a few weeks ago. One of my, ""friends"", tried to play a cruel joke on me that ended up being a bigger mistake than she could have imagined. Once I had figured out that this person whom I once trusted was trying to spite me I became overwhelmed with my emotions. At one point I actually considered attacking this girl right in the middle of every one in school. Thankfully I used my better judgment to run away from her, and hide instead of hurt her. Half of the class period progressed and I was still very upset and unprepared to confront her. So there I stayed safe in hiding until my best friend found me. @PERSON1 had come to comfort me after she got wind of what happened. She talked to me until I calmed down and my tears stopped. She made me feel much better. Her just being there for me, and being able to remonis in the fun times we had together and the laughs we shared, seemed to make all my problems disappear. Eventually she convinced me to go talk to my,""friend"", who as it turns out was ashamed of herself for her actions. We were able to make up and return to a somewhat normal life. To this day and more than likely for the rest of my life I will believe that laughter is the best medicine. I guess I'm lucky in that I have found the best person in life for me to share all of my laughter with. Every body has to have a somebody.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21156,8," It was a cloudy @DATE1, but nothing to be sad about when among friends. This circle of friends had just spent the whole weekend together, and they were heading home. I was among this group as a young @CAPS6 who had known this group for three years. Three years before, I was shy, but something changed that. The group was called @ORGANIZATION2. This @ORGANIZATION2 was for teenagers and even some collage students. There were very few of us though. It was our last year as @ORGANIZATION2, then we would be kicked out of the church we were meeting at. Together, we made that weekend be are best and last @ORGANIZATION1. The boys were very comfortable around the girls, so much in fact, that they were going to make a deal with us. The deal was that during the car ride, if we rubbed their backs, then they would rub our feet. At @CAPS2 the girls thought this to be a crazy idea, but as time went on, that foot rub seemed really good. Three pairs were made, with a boy and a @CAPS6 in each. The boys sat in the second to last row in the car, and the girls sat in the back. I rubbed @PERSON3's back, but it's okay. Out of all the girls there besides his sister, I know @PERSON3 the best, so I was perfect for the job. This moment was a very giggly time for the girls, and a very relaxed time for the boys. While the boys were falling asleep, the girls were laughing hysterically. Since we had our feet right beside the boys for them to rub, then the easiest way to wake them up was to kick them. This just caused more laughter, and more alert boys. After we had enough with the foot and back rubs, then we needed to find something new to laugh about to make the time pass faster. It was the @DATE1 before @DATE1, so our @ORGANIZATION2 leader gave us each a bag of candy hearts. The little messages on those candy hearts could entertain us for about an hour and a half. We would pick one randomly out of the bag and hand it to someone. I ended up giving both @PERSON3 and @PERSON1 candy hearts that said, ""@CAPS1"". They were very confused, but again it caused more laughter. @PERSON3 accidentally gave one to @PERSON1 that said, ""@CAPS2 @CAPS3"". Andrew got hearts multiple times that said, ""@CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6"". Once that was beginning to become boring, then we found a new way to make the candy hearts entertaining. We would read the heart @CAPS2, then give it to someone saying it was from someone else. Kyrene gave one to @PERSON4 saying it was from @PERSON2 that said, ""@CAPS7 @NUM1 @CAPS4"". Whenever we had one that said, ""@CAPS9"", then we would give it to @PERSON1 saying it was from @LOCATION1. Earlier she had said to him, ""I thought you were @CAPS10 for a moment there"", but numerous people thought she said, ""I thought you were @CAPS9 for a moment there."" @CAPS11, we try to make it up to @PERSON1 for @PERSON2 by giving him ""@CAPS9"" candy hearts. We ended that @DATE1 with hugs, goodbyes, and laughter of retold inside jokes. A few phone numbers were exchanged, and a few that should have been weren't. The trip ended well, and everyone felt just a little bit closer. We could hug this person @CAPS11, or we could get this person's phone number. Something in us changed that we could be a little closer. In my experience, I would say that laughter is only one element, because to get laughter you need to love who your laughing with. If I didn't love the people I was in the car with then I would have not laughed with them. They say, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" I don't believe this is true. I think it's love that is the shortest distance and laughter is just love being shown. The statement that laughter is the shortest distance is assuming that laughter is the cause, but in truth, it is the effect. Love is the cause of laughter. If laughter was the cause of love, then this world would be doomed to never know either. Without love, there can be no laughter. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10135,4,The reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph because when she come back from taking driver's test on the way home she saw winter hibiscus that was so beautiful. Then she went to the store and buy that flowers and it cost a lot of money when she got home and her mom planting vejetable and her mom ark her what is that so she tell th truth and her know that the flower costs a lot of money she get mad with the dheredulously of her how can she do that - Saeng take a big decision that she going to that eventhough her mom mad she she love that flowers I guess because it remaind of in Vietnam. The author put this paragraph I think because that the geese return and the flowers is growth she will take the test again bease that when she buy is no flowers came out yet so when it came out she will go again just to let her know that you see the first time and waite when it growth than you can take the test again In my onpion that is a good ending and also it a good question too.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13109,5,The author was in a respectful mood. In the memoir it tells a lot about how his parents took care of him and about his life and how his parents heped him through it. So when the author wrote this he was in a somewhat happy mood because he looked back on all the good times but that can also make you sad too.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16260,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"", the author, Marcia Amidon Lüsted, is informant on the structural and natural obstacles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building. One obstacle faced by the builders was involved with the structure of the building. The issue was that a moored dirigible, or blimp, would add a significant amount of stress to the building's frame. To fix this problem, the ""frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened."" Another obstacle faced by the builders involved nature. The winds on top of the building were violent and often shifted directions. This hindered the ability of a dirigible to moor on top of the building and remained a problem. The final obstacle faced was a restriction on the flight of airships over urban areas. This restriction made it impossible for dirigibles to moor on top of the Empire State Building. The excerpt explains the structural and natural obstacles faced by the builders.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3934,2,"'@CAPS1 Books, Movies, Music, and Magazines?' @CAPS2 do people take @CAPS1 books? Some people believe books, movies, music, and magazines should be sensored or 'band'. Why do people believe this should happen? Well there will be three topics that will be talked about in this eassy. The three topics are children, @CAPS4, and religion. First, '@CAPS3'. Many parents themselves don't want there child to be exposed to viloence, volgure language, or even possible drugs. Viloence is one of the main problems to do with all four of these types of entertainment. Influencing there child could cause a loss by doing things as far known as stupidty. Another is volgure language, to adults for a generation above us, they take it as being disrespectful. News wide to this very day deals with drugs and teens getting more into them, causing an overdose that could lead to death. Second, '@CAPS4'. Many people going from black to whites to eveyone around the world with different colored skin or more different type of features as one another. Here starts racsism, meaning against ones color or there ethics. Now to this day it has been calmed down but there was a time that certain words labeled certian people showing that they were less than others. Leading this to riots and gang viloents to earning respect. They want to be treated as an equal not less than others that which our ancentors did them in the past. Third, '@CAPS5'. Religion is pretty big in the world and shows alot about the past and what certain people believe in. Religion is shown in these four types of form in these objects. Everyone believes theres is the right way and someone elses is the wrong. They cause conflicts in between one an another. So trying to keep them from bein banned isn't going to help for religion matters, because people do talk and some people out there want to change certain people to believe what they think is right. So back to @CAPS2 would everyone or some take to @CAPS1 books, movies, music, magazines? Well it's going to be exposed sooner or later. Options are let it happen now or let it happen later. The sooner could be better or for the worst. Either matters just let happen what happens, someone will learn from there experience so why banned now?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13212,5,"In the memoir by Narciso Rodriguez, he undoubtedly creates a mood of happyness and love, love for his family and friends. His definition of family is different from other people's definitions, but many people would agree with his definition. He calls family not only blood relatives, but the love and friendship that people have for eachother. By creating a mood of love and happyness draws the reader into a cultural story and how his life was affected by that of his parents, and his family. When he describes the food, the laughter, the neighbors, the kitchen, and the house, it all feels very warm and feels like a place someone would love to be at. Because he talks about things people want to hear, he accomplishes a great feeling of warmth and being happy throughout the reading.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14912,6,"There were plenty of problems engineers at the empire state building faced when they wanted to dock dirigibles. Well for starters, the winds up that high were over-powering, as it says in paragraph @NUM1 ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Also there was the dirigibles themselfs that caused a problem For they were filled with hydrogen, which is very flamable, One other problem was air laws they state that dirigibles, in urban areas, were not to fly too low. It is because of these problems that destroyed Al Smith's Idea that building could dock airships.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7508,3,The cyclist is affected by many features in the setting. the long hill is one example the snake and the dirt road are two more. The heat of the desert is another and his depleting water supply are all examples of features that affected him.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7549,3,"In the setting of the essay; ""Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit."" had a great affect on the cyclist. It made him even more determined to finish because the terrain was so hard to ride through. For example, ""At some point, tumber weeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake-it really did look like a diamond back-back the majority of the pavement in front of me, I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. ""The author fully explains how no matter how bad the obstacles are he comes across he keeps trying to easy on by. The terrain affect the character by keeping him determined. This happens to many people in their sports. For example in football they take any problems and use them as reasons to push themselves harder to finish the game. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9049,4,"The author concluded the story with his paragraph because these are all things that she isnt going to give up on.She is trying to say that when everything she believes in successed thats when she is going to take her driving test.Her mother says that the flower is never going ti give up and it’s strong enough to live through the winter.The geese are going to always come back.That is exactly what she is going to do with her test.She is not going to give up on the test,she is going to keep trying untill she passes.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3270,2,"I think that censorship should not matter in a library due to the fact that some of those books, magazines, music, and movies, are liked by different people everywhere. If you do not like something said or seen in some of the materials, then do not read or watch or listen to any of them. People have different tastes in what they like to listen to or watch or read about. Some people might like rap music but other might like rock music. People that like rock music might not like rap because of some of the languauge used in songs. This is why some people listen to other types of music and do not listen to the type of music that they find offensive. I like rock and metal music just because rap is a little offensive. I have had a lot of family members say that i shouldnt be listening to such music because of the language. Some people say that reading certain things is a prefferance, but what if you are sitting in a doctors' office and you would like to read a magazine that is just sitting around. If you start going through the magazine and find something you do not like or take offense to, either keep flipping the pages or put the magazine down. You have to think to yourself that there are other people that enjoy or are interested in something you might find offensive. The best thing you can do is put it down and think to yourself that it is not directed towards you. Magazines can have all sorts of stuff hidden beyond the pages, but sometimes you have to look at the cover to see what some of the things that are written in the magazine. Sometimes this can help you decide on rather or not to read it. Movies are always fun to watch no matter what occation. Some people like certain movies such as action, comedy, romance, or drama. Some people might not like action due to the fact that there is violence in almost all of those movies. Some might not like comedy because of some of the rude humor. There are just alot of types of movies out there and its not the producers fault that we do not like it. People make different movies because everyone is not alike. Some people might get offended by some of the contents of a movie and what you could do to help that is just by reading into the movies before seeing them. I think that cencorship should not matter in a library due to the fact that some of those books, magazines, music, and movies, are liked by different people everywhere.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3507,2,"How can writing be offensive? Many @CAPS1 find swear words in writing or violence to be very offensive. Yet others find that those things make their writing more interesting. Writing can cover all aspects of life and give us ideas like racism and other inappropriate thoughts. It seems like in today's writing you can pick up just about anything and somone will find it offensive. That means if we censored our libraries to the extreme there would be no books left. It is just like Katherine Paterson says in the quote, '...then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 can't deny that books and any other writing place ideas in our head. That idea is a seed and we can either choose to water that seed and let it grow or cause it to die out. I believe we have a choice to either except or deny those offensive ideas in our head. If we find something offensive, simply set the book down and use that better judgemnt. We know what is right therefore we decide what is ok to read. Everyone sees things differently. What about children, can we trust their better judgement? I fear that children don't have as great of judgement as more mature adults. The resposibility of judgement lies more on the parents of that child than the libraries. The libraries place books for kids in a certain section to make sure they find appropriate books for their age. Both the adults and children get to find books that fit them and don't offend them. If libraries did do censorchip it would deny us our rights and freedom to speek our minds clearly without a haze being placed to confuse it. We as a country were built off the radical and offensive things written about the @CAPS2. Those words are what fired us up to become an independent country. Just think if they would have censored those ideas. Would we still be @LOCATION1 today? What it all comes down to is not that we should censore our reading but that we should use our better judgement.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1538,1,"A lot of people use computers today. But not everybody thinks they benifit society. But computers can do anything! You can do reaserch, you can play games, and most of all, be free. Were you ever given a school project to do, but no book has the information you want? Well the internet does. A lot of computers are connected to the interact where you can find anything! Are you trying to find facts for your science project? Just go on your favorite search engine and search your topic. You'll find endless pages on anything. Even if your not doing school work, you can find anything on the internet. Did you forget the number of your favorite football player? Search his name and it'll tell you right on your screen. Are you wondering why the @CAPS1 won the @CAPS2 @CAPS3? Your choices are endless! Even if your computer doesn't have internet, you can play games. Playing games on your computer is a great hobbie! And if you are connected to the internet, you can play games with other people around the world. Playing games on your computer is a great hobbie, but you cant play all the time, you need to find other things to do to. There are a variety of computer games. Adventure games, shooting games multiple player games, and more! You can even play poker on your computer. I think the best part of any computer is your freeness while on one. You can do almost anything. You can go on the internet, play games and even talk with people. You can also customize your computer to your liking. Do you have a picture of your cat? You can put it as your background on the desktop. Want a different curser, you can change that to! You can change anything you want with just a click on your mouse. There you go, there are endless possibilities with computers. You can learn, play, and be free. But the most important part of using a computer is to enjoy it, and have fun!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 505,1,"Do you have a computer? I'll bet @PERCENT2 of you do! You @MONTH1 spend @NUM1 hours on the computer or even @NUM2 hours! Computers in fact have many down-sides to them. You could be so invoilved that you never go outside or get excirsize. Also, sitting @NUM2 inchs from the computer screen does not help your eyes. Lastly, the internet has very inapropriot websites that kids should not be seeing. Are you a kid who spends @NUM4 to @NUM2 hours at a time on the computer? Well, if you are, it's time to get off the spinning computer chair and out for soem fresh air. Most kids spend most of their time on the computer @CAPS1 or on @CAPS2 or @CAPS3. It @MONTH1 be good for kids to interact with kids out of school but sooem kids take it way to far. They never go oitside and get any excirsize. this is not good for a growing teen. They need to be up and active. So, limit yourself time you spend on the computer. Without a doubt, computers are very bad fro youe eyesight. Unlike @CAPS4 or video games you could play a long distance away, a computer is played @NUM2-7 inches from the over time, your eyes will be so use to sitting @NUM2 inches from what your recating, that when you back up you erad at all. I knew this who played video games from about @NUM8 foot away for long period of time a day. Today, unfortunately, the kid is blind if that kid just knew the consequences of being that close to a @CAPS4 screen, he would have thought twice about it. Think twice about how close you sit from the computer. if I were to ask anyone of you what you could find on the internet @PERCENT1 of you would say, ""anything."" could there really be too much information? As a matter of fact, tehre is. You could be looking up a topic and something inapropriot, that has nothing to do with the topic comes up kids doin't need to, and shouldn't be watching or seeing these inapropriot sites. Its bad for kids, so stop it! After reading this essay, I hope you realized that computers are bad for you in various ways. As a matter of fact it's physically, mentally and socially. So, next time your on a computer, don't look at the little things, but the big picture!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19378,7,"Patience. ""@CAPS1"" @CAPS4 stomach rumbled."" @CAPS2 I'm hungry"" I cried so @CAPS12 stopped at @ORGANIZATION2, because @CAPS8 were on our way home. Moments later @CAPS8 finally pulled up to @ORGANIZATION2's drive through. The cashier said ""hi @MONTH1 I take your @CAPS3."" @CAPS4 @CAPS2 yelled ""@CAPS5 I get a famous bowl and a @NUM1 piece honey @CAPS6 wings."" The ladie @CAPS7 ""@MONEY2 @NUM2 first window."" @CAPS8 drove around to the first window @CAPS4 @CAPS2 save the ladie a @MONEY1 bill, @CAPS12 gave her @MONEY3 and said ""@MONEY3 is your change, go to the second window."" @CAPS9 @CAPS8 could drive to the second window @CAPS8 had to wait on the car ahead of us. @CAPS8 sat there for @MONEY1 minutes and they finally left. Then, @CAPS8 drove to the second window and waited. @CAPS13 minutes later @CAPS8 still was waiting. So after @MONEY1 minutes. I said"" @CAPS2 @CAPS5 @CAPS8 go get some @ORGANIZATION1"" @CAPS12 calmly @CAPS7 ""@CAPS10, @CAPS8 are going to sit here patiencely."" I mumerred ""but I m starving."" @CAPS8 sat there and waited patientley for over a hour. I ask one more time ""@CAPS5 @CAPS8 leave please."" @CAPS12 said ""@CAPS10, I payed for the food and I'm going to get it."" @CAPS13 minutes later @CAPS8 finally got the food after two hours. After sitting there @CAPS8 got some free food. Even though @CAPS8 got some free food I well still mad that @CAPS8 sat there all that time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6315,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in a couple different ways. When the cyclist found the gohst town since no one was there he could not ask someone for better directions or get some food or water. The short rolling hills make it harder to pedal because it is hard to pedal uphill. At the end of the story he found a bait shop where he got water and better direction's.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6542,3,"In Joe Kurmaskie’s “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed the Speed Limit” the features of the setting affects the cyclist a great deal. Each feature causing the cyclist to act. For example, in reaching the ‘ramshackle shed’ the cyclist finds the water inusuable; which causes to conserve water and try to head for the next town. That action leads him deeper into the high deserts of California during June. Also as the terrain changes from flat road to short, rolling hills the cyclist must change his speed to better survive and continue in his dehydrated state. The scarcity of buildings in this dry desert terrain causes the cyclist to try every ‘shack or building he comes across for water. In this story the features of the setting dictates the actions of the cyclist in his quest to survive in the desert a lot.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 886,1,"Debates have come up on whether or not computers are benefiting or destroying society. Computers are only helping in aid in the growth of society. Computers allow people to interact with other people, see and discover other places and people, and teach hand-eye coordination. Computers are helping people more than they are hurting them. First of all, computers allow people to meet and interact with other people. There are many popular websites that allow people to chat and communicate at anytime. Before computers were invented in order to talk to someone you would have to meet with them face-to-face, or send them a letter and wait on awfuly time get a responce. Now people can simply type up an email and hit send. Just like that, their message is sent to another computer for others to read and enjoy. Another advancement computer technology has developed is picture sharing. All one has to do to display and show their pictures to everyone is done by simply hooking up a camera, uploading your pictures onto your computer, and posting them on a site like @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 bucket. Any in- the- @CAPS3 person would @CAPS3 that computers are very useful. Secondly, computers are important because they give people the ability to learn about and discover people & places that are new to them. In the old days if you did not @CAPS3 about something or someone, like a movie, you @MONTH1 never find any info about them. Computers have internet websites and search like @ORGANIZATION1, that allow you to type anything and instantly find all the @CAPS4 information and pictures or that subject. These technological advances have given many people the general knowledge that they very well @MONTH1 need in any given situation. If you missed the best part of a you could easily go on a computer, look it up and importance of computers in every day society. Last of all, computer hand - eye coordination that is vital to every day life. Typing on a computer in leisure time is a skill that will be looked for everywhere. In fact, many employers @MONTH1 hire you based on your keyboarding skills, ones one is skilled enough they @MONTH1 even teach themselves to type without looking at the keyboard. Although computers are not meant to replace your friends, family, and @CAPS5 air, they are very important tools that give you skills you will use for the rest of your life. Any individual that is highly educated would see the pluses in computer usage. in conclusion, computers are vital in order to properly function in many situations. They allow you to chat and send pictures to loved ones, teach you about faraway people and places that you @MONTH1 not @CAPS3 about other wise, and help one improve on their hand - eye coordination. Computers are very useful peices of equipment.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4739,2,"I believe that censorship in libraries can be a good thing, but can go too far. Removing movies and magazines that contain pointless offensive material from the shelves could be a good thing. If those are removed I do not think that people would care that much. Removing those small things, however, could grow into a bigger problem. It has to be decided how far is too far when removing objects from the shelves. It all starts with a bad magazine that has a bad picture of a movie star doing something offensive with text surrounding it being pointlessly judgemental. A parent sees his or her kid reading this at the library and they do not believe it is appropriate so they complain and the magazine is taken off the shelf. Then a movie arises that is offensive and it is taken off the shelf. Pretty soon everyone is comming in with minor complaints about many different things and almost everything has someone who wants it banned. Even if there was a set limit on what qualifies as able to be banned people would still complain until what they want happens. If the government has all these complaints they might just shut down the libraries to avoid looking over every 'offensive' piece of literature, film, or artwork. The original purpose being to block out offensive meterial ends with the realization that everything is offensive to somebody. Even what might be considered a great piece of work by most could be considered an abomination by some. In the end a library should not be given the right to censor anything. The things that should be censored are a very small percentage and it is not worth the risk. Books that are offensive to some serve as inspiration to others. Libraries were made to give people the chance to be inspired. The library should not have the right to take inspiration away from the reader's hand.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18695,7,"A time I was patient was when I had to baby sit little cousin. He was just a little baby, so I knew that if he started crying, or got upset that I coudn't get frustrated with him because he's a baby. There were times when he would start crying for no apparent reason and I just wanted to scream, @CAPS1, I knew I couldn't and that I just had to be patient with him. I also knew that I couldn't get upset, or angry because it might make it even worse for him, so I had to be patient and wait for him to stop crying and for me to calm down before I could go anywhere near him. I was understanding and tolerant and I didn't lose my patience. Practicing that skill is very important. I am proud of myself and being able to keep my composure in crazy or chaotic situations like that, and not loosine my cool, or patience, with him or anyone else.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16142,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the empire State building @CAPS1 in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there work, there wasn't enough room, they weren't supposed to have aircraft near the city.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3703,2,"I do not think that libraries or any one should have censorship to books, movies, music, magazines ect. People who put there time to writing all of there thought and ideas in that should not be just thrown off the shelf. People who wrote that stuff have freedom of seach and the wright to write that stuff or say that stuff. Yes I have read books that I have found offensive or that I don't like, but I dont think they should not be in libraries. They are there because some other people @MONTH1 like that kind of stuff no reason why we should exclude what they like to read out of the libraries that everyone shares and goes to. There would be nothing left in libraries because almost everything out there someone could find offensive. For example people such as @ORGANIZATION1. People say his lyrics and music say alot of bad stuff but most of his music is about him and his life. He has the freedom of speach to wright and publish that for the world to see and hear. His music is just i @CAPS1 of his life. In history @CAPS2 because he killed people. Should take him off the shelf because jews @MONTH1 think it was offensive, yeah it might be but it lets people know about our history and what has happened. If we keep that cencored who know history my repeat its self. which is a saying I have heard many of times. So censorship or not I just think they had the freedom of speach to write that stuff down and be put in a library for people to see learn, edgucate, and entertain themselves by. Doesn't mean if it offeneds you that its offensive to other people",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7440,3,"Hot, @CAPS1, @CAPS2-all are the features of the setting that affect the cyclist. First, the hot days with not a lot of water to drink. He will get dehydrated. Also, there is no one around to help him if he gets lost. Joe Kurmaskie explains “there was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structur of any kind. Finally the creature was a large snake that came along on road. So he had to move around it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12255,5,"The mood that the author created in this memoir is kinda sad because these imegrents that came to know america slefliss just to give thier children a better life. These imagrents do not have a lot to work with. They live in small homes that are durty but in a suprizing way the manage. All these imagrents from different cultures that live in the same neiborhood came together in great soldarity and frendship. There are other imigrents that are unlucky and don't find jobs or houses, they have to eather leave or stay tempory with other people until they get back on their feet. In conclusion in this memoir the author created a very sad mood as you can see from the some of the spesific deatils from the story I have included.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15031,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there The higher calling for which the mooring mast was built was to put New York on the forefront of modern travel; the builders then, needed to solve some obstacles that were on their way. First was that the building itself needed to get stronger in order to support ""a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building"" As a result, the frame of the Empire State Building needed to be modified and strengthened to accommodate the problem. According to the excerpt, @MONEY1 worth of changes had to be made to the building's framework. Another problem was that of the stress of the wind pressure The wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation. This was also solved, at least they thought, by making a few changes to the skeleton of the building. Lastly, was that the building needed a space to provide for passengers that were to come from the ""blimps"". To solve the problem, they built a shaft to bring passengers down to the @NUM1 floor, where baggage and ticket areas would be located. The builders had to face many problems even before attempting to build a mast for dirigibles to dock at.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6149,3,"The features of the settings in “Do not exceed the posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie were rough and challenging. A biker rides through todi, California which is a rough area to ride. The ride was hot and long that he was so dehidrated that sweat was dried around his neck. The solo cyclist says “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” He had no where to get water or food. It was deserted. He thought if he died no one would find him faster the birds would pick him clean. The essay “rough road ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit by @PERSON1 shows a solo cycilist are very independent.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19161,7,"The time I had to be patient was when my brother was going to get me a preasent when it wasnt even my birthday yet. This is how this whole story began. It was a hot @DATE1 day and I had been doing my chores witch include racking, mowing, and alot more yard work. Mom and dad and my brother travis had been talking alot. When I was just sitting down stairs they would tell me to to go do my chores then I could see them talking. It bothered me alot that I couldn’t hear what they were saying. I finally just carrien on doing my chores and I just got done mowing witch took two hours and I went inside and I started to watch tv when all the sudden I hear “click click tap bam,” then I heard a sudden yell of my brother travis saying “hey get back here,” I went to our fourteen curly stairs and all the sudden I was greeted by the licking as bbering of a six month old puppy I grabbed his collar laughing and seen his name was max and he is now a three year old happy mutt and that was my brothers preasent to me for getting all. As and doing alot of work around the house. I love my dog but that was the time I had to be patient",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6682,3,"The lone biker in “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit” by @PERSON1 is strongly affected by the features of the landscape. The sun is the most important factor; it drives him to first consume his water quickly, and then drives him search for a water source.”The sun was beginning to beat down, but I barely noticed it...I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly,” in this quote, it reveals that even though the biker had not acknowledged the sun, his body had required water, depleting his supply in his water bottles. A lack of water feeling two hundred degrees...it had the flavor of battery acid."" The only water that the bike is able to find is not consumable. The most important of the factors, in the matter of survival, is the fish camp that the biker finally reaches. ”I stumbled into a rather modern bathroom and drank deeply from the sink.” The biker had been on the brink of dehydration and the fish camp is where he finally reganed the strength to continue on his journey.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6289,3,"The conditions and features affect everything about the cyclist. The conditions were that, he had to save as much water as possible and keep himself hydrated at the same time so that he wouldn’t dehydrate himself.The features of the desert like land were fierce. It was dry and bumpy, not to mention that there were creatures such as snakes on the prowl out there. You can never predict what they’ll do.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12170,5,"Fashion designer Narciso Rodriguez is a firm beiliever in friendship and family values. In a selection from Home: the Blueprints of Our Lives, he describes the mood, or the feeling created by an author, in his childhood one of family and people with helping hands. Narciso says that everybody in his neighbor hood were ""immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This shows helpfulness espically in a time when racism and segregation were big in the States. Secondly, their was a sense of family in all of the people at Narciso's house. There was often people staying in his house because they temporarily needed a place to stay until they got back on their feet. The Rodriguez's beilieved these people would do the same thing for them in return. Finally, Narciso can not express how grateful he is to have the importance of friends and family put on him so early in his life. Without his parents stressing the fact that family is not only your blood relatives, he would never have beilived that family and helping hands were so important. A mood of family qualities and helpfulness pre vails in Narciso Rodriguez's memoir. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18336,7,"Being patient is good because then you respect that your problem will take time but when your impatient, you want to overcome the problem now or soon. I remember when my brother was @CAPS1 impatient. My brother @PERSON1 and I were waiting for a new video game to come out but it comes out in @NUM1 days. So he waited a day, checked the date, @NUM2. Then waited another day @NUM3. He wasted @NUM4 days waiting while I focused on school. His grade drope to a @CAPS2+ and now he’s blaming @CAPS3! So I told him hard @NUM5sucsess. He tried harder @CAPS4- he was using his time on grades while his game he wants is @NUM6, he’s a lot happier now that hes patient using time wisely while keeping himself occupied.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3387,2,"Any one has the right to anything. Right to speak freely; to watch what they please; and so on. The censorship on the media depends. People who like that sort of thing can go to a place where they can buy censorship and un censoredship items. Every place these days has censored books, cd's, video games, ect. But then they also have uncensored items. For those parents or people who disagree with what is shown on the shelf. Also on @CAPS1 parents complain about whats on @CAPS1, well there is a channel button and you can change the channel. Or even in todays technology you can block that channel from ever being watched. No body ever said that they had to buy what the person in front of you is buying. People have the right to chose what they want to buy, wheather its censored or not. Say or do as they please as long as it's with in the rights of laws. Its all about your style and what you let your child see. @CAPS3, @CAPS3. Its not as easy to keep children from the volgure things in the new technology. They go to a friends house and that childs parents don't care and let there child watch anything from @CAPS4-@CAPS5 rated. The most you let your child watch is @NUM1. Its hard to keep a child sheltered from what you'd perfer them not to see. But what people have to realise is that there going to find out one way or another. Also a child who is sheltered will go to the extremes to find out whats on the other side of the railroad tracks to get a taste of the water, to see what they have been missing out on. Childeren will be childeren and they will sneak behind your back and do what they want to because they never knew what it was like in the first place. Any one has the right to anything, you as a person chose not to allow your child you have a @NUM2 year old rated game, but his @NUM3 year old friend does have it. Remeber hes going to play it at his friends house. Everybody has a different taste on censoreship. Some think everything should be a little cleaner others think different. So thanks to both sides, stores sell to you what you perfer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18086,7,"Time when I was patient was at the doctor appointment I was standing there, calm quiet. When the doctor called, me I wasn’t nervous. So when the doctor gave me @NUM1 which, @CAPS1 didn’t have at. Then, me and my mom went home happy. Got some hwigese and watch @CAPS2. Then , we had some spaghetti and went to had early for school. Then, I had a good day in school in the @NUM2 grade when I was in land. Then, I went home, do my homework, clean up the house, watch. @CAPS2, eat dinner, then went to led has a early start",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3430,2,"What do you consider an offensive book? Everyone has their own personal opinion on what they think is offensive. So how can you justify that a book, magizine, movie, music, etc. should be removed from a shelf due to content. Of course there are the ones that most people would aggree that are offensive to young kids and even some adults but then again other people don't find the same things offensive. The items that do contain graphic content, cursing, etc. and does offend most people should be set aside and putting in a different shelving area away from the others. So honestly no one can say that a certain book(s), music, movie(s), magazine(s), etc. do not have a right to have a place on a shelf and should or shouldn't be removed. If parents dont want there children or teenagers looking or seeing certain material that is something that the parents need to take into their own hands not a library or anywhere else. Now if this is an item at the home of a parent and they dont want their kids to see it they have every write to remove it from the shelf. Then again if their child or teen finds this item and looks at it and the parents didn't want them to they shouldn't have bought it in the first place of they should have removed the item. So can you as a stranger justify wheather or not somthing is offensive and a parent shouldn't let their kid look at it, or that a library or store shouldn't have that item on the shelf? No you can't. If you don't want you children to see it or if you don't set standards and rules",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21485,8,"Freshmen year, @CAPS1 season. I have been @CAPS1 for about eight years now, I made varsity in a @NUM1 school in @LOCATION1 my first year in high school. Being the only freshmen on the varsity squad, everybody knew who I was, ""The short kid on the varsity @CAPS1 squad."" @CAPS2 a eighth grader I won junior state and wrestled all the way through the brackets without @CAPS1 a full match. Meaning that I pinned everyone in the first round. I couldn't be touched. Going into high school I knew that I wouldn't have @CAPS2 easy of a time like in grade school. I was completely right. My coach had to be the funniest person that I have ever met in my life. @PERSON1 was my @CAPS3 teacher since the @NUM2 grade and has been my role model all the way through life. He made the funniest jokes about wrestlers on the team. A lot of people disliked @PERSON1 @CAPS12 @CAPS4 and him got along great. I ended the season freshmen year with @NUM3 wins, @NUM4 pins, and @NUM4 losses. I still to @CAPS13 day haven't been pinned. Which got @CAPS4 the wrestler of the year awarded by my @CAPS1 coach @PERSON4. When the season rolled around to regionals I knew that I had a shot to go to state. There were six guys in my weight class and four of the six I have previously beaten in early season. I had to just worry about my match ahead of @CAPS4 and wrestle mistake free. At the @NUM6 pound weight class there is a bunch of little kids. I was definitely the most experienced in my weight class. I got seated first seed. The second seed was @PERSON2 from @ORGANIZATION1. He dropped weight so he could try and take my seating for state. My first match I wrestled @CAPS5 from @CAPS6-@CAPS7-@CAPS8. The match was very short-lived. I pinned him in about @NUM4 seconds. After my match with @CAPS5 I walked to my coach and he told @CAPS4 a quote that I will never forget, ""@CAPS10, @CAPS11's lonely at the top, @CAPS12 the view is excellent."" @CAPS13 quote stuck in my head throughout all of my next matches. I won my second and third matches and was in the semi-finals. I was one round away from going to state automatically. I wrestled @CAPS5 from @PERSON3 and he weighed @NUM8 lbs. I knew that he was a good wrestler even though I had about @NUM9 pounds on him. I was getting ready to wrestle and I seen @CAPS5 warming up across the gym from @CAPS4. @CAPS2 he was jumping around getting warmed up I see him trip and fall on his face. My coach had seen the same thing and started making fun of him. @CAPS11 was the funniest thing that I have ever witnessed. I wrestled through the match and pinned him in double overtime to go to state. My coach walks up to @CAPS4 and says ""@CAPS11 took you that long to pin someone who can't even warm up without falling on his face."" @PERSON1 had about three teeth total in his mouth. He lost them from a lot of different ways. He was a adventure man. He loved white water rafting and loved the sport of @CAPS1. When I moved, I was far away from my idolized @CAPS1 coach, @CAPS12 we still hit @CAPS11 up on the facebook and chitchat. To @CAPS13 day, he is still the funniest man I know and still my idol.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9806,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph @CAPS1 reason why he does is because he wants to conclude by writing about geese. Second he like plants and the season’s that they bud. He vowed that he would take that test in the spring. He cant wait until the snow melts so that way he can take the test.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19264,7,"When I was @NUM1 years old my mom use to be unpatient all the time and got so annoyed at! But then one day she was going to take a shower but then people kept on going and she got patient for a while and I got up there. I saw her and hide. As I peeked from end to end she was still standing there, almost falling asleep and she was still patience. Another stepped in the bathroom and I quickly went there and said “@CAPS1, excuse me but my mom is coming, she’s been waiting. So I woke up my mom “mom, mom wake up go take a shower!” and she woke up and took a shower, after she came out “ahh” it kind of feel good” that was better.” The end.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21601,8," As I remember back, it was @DATE1. It was a hot, humid day. I can remember that day like it was yesterday. I woke up that morning and decided I was going to go swimming. But the only problem was I had no one to go with me, and @CAPS2 attitude was turning for the worst. The day @CAPS1 off fairly well for the most part. I called around to all @CAPS2 friends to see what they were doing for that particular day, but as I went down @CAPS2 friend line everyone seemed to be to busy to go anywhere with me. I was most certainly bummed. @CAPS2 happy go lucky attitude turned into the dumps really fast. The only thing that was left for me to do was use @CAPS2 back up plan, @CAPS2 aunt. We gathered our swimming gear, blankets, tanning lotion, and ourselves and packed it in the back of the van and headed towards @ORGANIZATION1. I was really not in the best of moods, and it seemed that everyone that was around me was turning into a grump as well. Totally bummed that all of @CAPS2 friends had ditched me and left me to hang with @CAPS2 aunt all day wasn't @CAPS2 explanation of fun, sorry enough to say, but it wasn't. As the day went on the more I thought about @CAPS2 friends the more I got frustrated. Then finally it came to me, why let their stupidity of ditching (the best thing that had happened to them) me, ruin @CAPS2 day. I @CAPS1 laughing and having a grand time, and pretty soon, in all reality forgot why was having a bad day. When we got to our swimming hole, I looked around and noticed that everything was well. Everyone there was having fun. So I @CAPS1 to loosen up and have a good time. Jumping off rocks, making a fool of myself, laughing, and having a good time. We spent the whole day enjoying with what we had. When I got home and I had realized what an awesome day @CAPS2 day had turned out to be, I realized that I shouldn't let @CAPS2 friends get me down. Laughing and having a good time can make any day turn around for the best. The most important lesson that I have learned from @CAPS2 experience that day, is to make the best out of each situation. Don't let crushed plans crush your self confidence. Put a smile on your face and turn your frown upside down and laugh. laughter makes life better.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9736,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus,” the author includes this paragraph, when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again, to emphasize that Saeng is willing try plant again in spring. Saeng wants to try planting again in the spring time to prove that she is trying to adapt to the new settings and to prove that she cares about the planting.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16537,6,"Although adding a mooring mast to the top of the Empire State building is a very clever idea, there are multiple problems and concerns that accommodate this new feature. For example, even if the cable were fastened strong enough to the one thousand-foot dirigible, it would add stress to the buildings frame, causing the building to grow weaker much quicker than without it. In addition, to alter the dirigibles large effect on the building, it would be neccssary to have the dirigible's weight and the wind pressure ""to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation,"" which was nearly impossible considering this distance was over @NUM1 feet @CAPS1, @CAPS2 was a large factor in building this futuristic structure; over Sixty thousand dollars had to be collected to see better support the building's structure",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21366,8," I slowly got up and watched as paint dripped off my face, my hair and clothes. A trail of paint followed me as I tried to hop from one clear spot on the floor to the next, but there weren't many clear spots. All that I could think of, was if I was going to make @CAPS5 to high school, or not. Trying my hardest not to get anymore paint on the ground, I opened the door carefully, and called out. ""@CAPS1...Hey mom?"" I yelled half-halfheartedly, as I glanced back at the ""painted"" room. ""@CAPS2?"" she hollered back up the stairs.My mouth wouldn't open, I was afraid to answer. I've messed up millions of times, but none have been this bad. ""@CAPS3, you see... I've had a paint withdraw from the paint pan."" I replied softly, hoping she would not hear me. ""A paint withdraw?"" she asked in a confused tone, as she walked up the stairs to see what has happened. I closed my eyes in fear as she turned the corner.My mind raced as I tried to prepare myself for a rant about how I have to be more careful, and punishment. Neither came. She started to crack up. I was @CAPS8 confused at the sight of my mom sitting on the floor, almost peeing her pants. I then realized that I was probably a sight to see. I was covered in paint from head to toe. I started to giggle as I took in the situation, only something like this would happen to me. Minutes later we finial got a hold of ourselves and mom went to go get some paper towels to clean up my mess. She came back upstairs carrying a role of paper towels and a plastic garbage bags.""@CAPS4 thing I put the plastic covering over everything, before I let you paint."" she stated, smiling at me. ""@CAPS5 would have been way worse, if I spilled the paint all over the carpet."" I replied, returning her smile. I started to gather up the plastic covering, revealing the unsoiled carpet. The garbage-can was as full as a stuffed @LOCATION1 on @CAPS6. After we gathered up the last of the plastic covering, I slammed the garbage-cans lid as I put the last bit of plastic covering in. My mom came in carrying @CAPS7, and a handful of paper-towels. ""@CAPS8 what made the paint pan have sudden withdraw of paint, @CAPS9?, @CAPS10 you trip on the plastic covering, or drop the paintbrush in the pan?"" she questioned me, as she gave me a confused facial expression. I didn't know what to say. "" I...@CAPS1, @CAPS3, I was on my way to paint the edges against the ceiling, when I took my first step on the ladder and slipped. Landing in the paint pan and receiving the paintbrush in my face"" I didn't mention the fact that I tripped on my shoelace. My mom always got on me, for leaving my shoes untied. My mom started to laugh uncontrollably again. She started to turn beat-red. I could not believe her reaction. The situation was @CAPS8 funny, I started to laugh again as-@CAPS3. Never in my wildest dreams would I have imagined anyone forgiving me in such a big way. Once we finally stopped laughing, my mom and I finished cleaning the mess. My mom and I remember this day as a time we got to bond. I now realize that my mom will understand, and forgive me for my mistakes, no matter how big they are. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13046,5,"The mood of this memoir is almost remorseful, remembering his childhood home, his family life that includes his neighbors and extended family Narciso Rodriguez creates a feeling of being home and being surrounded by people you love. He explains how his first friend was his babysitter and the person who lived above him. And his real grandparents were still in Cuba so his downstairs neighbors became his surrogate grandparents. He also creates a mood of having no where to turn when it came to his parents getting jobs in the United States. They had to settle with getting jobs underequiped for their abilitie. His parents, he said ""came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give the children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends and careers in the country they loved"". He feels that this is one of the reasons his childhood house was turned into a home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7477,3,"In the story “Rough road ahead do not exceed posted speed limits,” The setting is a long road with “no one in sight not a building, car or structure of any kind he cyclist could be affected by the rough road that he have to ride down.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15067,6,There seemed to be many problems erupting during the making of the dirigibles dock. For one the Empire State building natural structure can't handle its weight. Therefor architects had to make a stainless steel tower. Even after this was made they realized how flamable helium and hydrogen are. Not only that the airwaves at the top of that building are extremely violent. The idea was eventually forgotten about due to the possible accidents that could happen.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 487,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I think some people are overreacting, its not really going to kill you. I'm not suggesting that people should stay on the computer all day. My last reason would be that nowadays everyone nos computers. Keep reading to find out about my three topics: @CAPS2 off way too many people are overreacting, I think so because people say ""you are going to miss out or you are missing out on life. Also you are still interacting with your family and friends, just not verbally (only typing). I don't know why people are so against computers, its like global warming, so many warnings and noone listens, so why will they listen to people saying that staying on a computer too long can make you fat. That was just my opinion/thoughts on that topic. Next off I am going to tell you about how a computer can't really kill you. It can't kill you because it is only a computer for one and another reason is that you can get obeast and bored because I can't stay on the computer for more than an hour because it just gives me a headache. Well that was another opinion of mine so read on to see what else I got. Now I am going to tell you how everyone has computers. The thing is computers are not the only things that cause obeisity. Every one has a computer now because I guess everyone goes on facebook, even my mom has a facebook! But theres also other websites like sexual, games and friend sites. The most used website I think is facebook. I think so because sooo many peole have it. Well this concludes my essay and now you know my opinions on how some people overreact, how its not really going to kill you and last how everyone has a computer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12765,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the author creates a family mood. Rodriguez talks about how family always visits. The memoir states ""countless extended family members came and went..."" (paragraph @NUM1). He also explains that family isn't always the people related to you. Rodriguez says that his neighborhood ""came together in great solidarity..."" (paragraph @NUM1). Rodriguez says that he is most grateful for his parents ""for their love and sacrifice"" (paragraph @NUM3). Narciso Rodriguez really creates a mood filled with love, caring, and family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 642,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I am writing a letter to you today because I have herd a complaint that and more people are using computers and getting less exsercise. These experts that are concerned also say people need to enjoy nature, and interact with family and friends more. These experts @MONTH1 be smart but they are wrong. I am going to tell you how they are wrong. My first example is that people that go on the computer alot still exercise. Take twitter as a example. The football player ocho-cinco ""tweets"" all the time but that doesn't mean he doesn't get exercise. There are plenty of sports players that are on twitter and they are fit. Most of the kids in my grade including me have a facebook. Most of the kids are fit. Just because they are on the computer alot doesn't mean they can't exercise. My second example is the effect of the computer. Students use the computer for a lot of things. We use wikipedia for are projects and research a person. Some schools know a day almost depend on computers. I rember when I lived in country we never had to reely type anything unless it was a project. When I moved to @CAPS3 I am always typing something. Even a rough draft they want me to type. In couentry I would write out my final draft. I have to use the computer. Schools also are teaching us about the computer @CAPS4 as we learn more and more things on the computer we are on the computer more and more. When someone. Finds out a new website there going to tell there friends and there going to pass it on and @CAPS4 on. My third example is how the experts say that people are spending to much time on the computer and less time interacting with family and friends. My grandpa, aunt, other family members have a facebook account. That means I can still interact with family and friends. The people that are the computer alot that are adults probably don't have family over every night and probably go out with friends evey once in a while. Computers also benefit Society for buisness people they might have to a powerpoint and they have a computer. When experts say we need to enjoy nature, interact with family and friends, and do more excising they might be right but we can do all these things but we can also still go on the computers. If you take a survey in @CAPS3 to see how many people are on the computer almost everyday and then you ask them how many of them exercise you would see that you can do both.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18126,7,I saw someone @CAPS1 patient the got to a rest runt before I did and den I orderd my food and it came. They done sill had no food so I left and finally they got the food now that’s what I call patiants.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20732,8,"When i meet new people its like alright cause everyone needs friends like people say friends come and go true friends wouldnt go. I remember i met this beautiful girl name @PERSON1 to me she was not just a friend i knew i wanted to have a life with her and be with her people say love cant come true but turn that upside down cause its the other way around love doesnt go love comes from up above. I remember when i first talk to her it was like god was there telling me that she is the one for me and i knew i can save her from getting hurt from love. when i first looked into her eyes it was like i felt the way her heart was feeling it was falling apart so i told her your heart wouldnt be broken in half cause ill replace it with mine i told her your the one that i want the one that i need the one that i gotta have to succed i wanna know you like no one else can know you your name is forever like a tattoo in my heart your the apple to my tree that will never be cut down i wanna stand with you on a mountain and show you that im different than other guys im faithfull like no one else can be. Your amazing just the way you are i woundnt change nothing about you cause i love everything about you i love your eyes i love your smile i love your personality so i told her take a chance on me i know you been threw so much but dont let that come between so she said yes she was so happy it was like her dream came true for her a guy that can show her that there not like the others a guy thats always faithfull and honest and truly and that will never lie or cheat. So i told her shes my superhuman she was so happy that i came into her life she said i changed her whole life and she changed mine too. my heart belongs to you no one else cause if your not the one that has my heart than my heart will just be a toy and brake it. i told her she will never be so cold i will always warm up her day and night with my arms and my body temperture i told her all my wishes came true your the one for me im finally not lonely now i got you so i told her its like shes finally my wifey. I told her every girl i dated played with my heart they were not being true to me i was not living my life the way i wanted it to be so one day i told myself is that girl even in this planet the one thats always honest, faithfull, truly, trust and that will never lie or cheat so i told myself ill keep looking for that special girl and now i can say i found her cause that girl name is @PERSON1. i told her she will never be sad no more or have a million tears running down her precious little face. i told her i will always be one phone call away not two but one. she was so happy when i said that she is my paradise my whole wide world she finally made my dreams come true i just want it to be me and you no one else trust me ill trust you our love will never die it will never fall our love will always be alive our love will stand high tell it hits sky high tell the sun doesnt shine anymore. I'm crazy for her shes crazy for me she has the key to my heart and only she can open it i finally know what love feels like. she made all my bad days into good days i will never brake her heart she wouldnt brake mine either i told her the sun doesnt shine forever but when it doesnt shine just look at the stars cus they are still shining and our star is the biggfest one in the sky. To me you will never be gone you will always be in my heart my love is strong for you sitting by the phone waiting for you to call me and you always do. To me your not just a friend your more than a friend your my angel, my girl, my shawty, my wifey, my everything till the world ends i realize my love for you is strong this is how it is ment to be. You're more than a friend to me your all i need and im glad i found you true story for ever",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6431,3,The setting in the story affect the cyclist alot. It is June in the California desert. The sun is heating down on him. Another problem that he faces is that there is a very rough terrain. All of this together makes him drink up his water even faster. The setting is making him feel very disprate when is even worse.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4162,2,"Throughout the years, many events have taken place in our history. Throughout these times the events have been recorded, journaled, and filmed. These thoughts, opinions, and facts @MONTH1 be offensive to a select few in our @CAPS2. The question is, 'Should our libraries take these 'offensive' pieces off the shelves?' The simple answer to this highly disputed question is no. Censoring our libraries would be a harmful and wrong thing to do to the general public. Censoring our libraries creates an illusion of a perfect @CAPS2. If libraries were filled with tasteless articles and perfect fairyland books the library would become a place where reality is not present. Libraries hold information that is raw and true without leaving the facts behind. People need to get a taste of reality in order to survive in the 'real @CAPS2' and one of the greatest ways to abtain this knowledge is through books. Being exposed to offensive material and different viewpoints helps shape ourselves into who we are or will become. To take this away would be harming our development and growth, thus creating an 'imperfect' @CAPS2. Certain points in history are not something that everyone can be proud of. The @CAPS1, @LOCATION1's genocide, and @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 are all devastating points in time that can be a touchy subject to one and few people. However, history is an important factor in everyones lives; we know history in order to not repeat it. Losing this information is way for people to not be clearly informed, harming the future outcome of our society. Without public records of these happenings, it can cause confusion and misconcepted views of important topics. If we censor all the media from libraries across the nation, ordinary people, such as yourself, would be 'living in the dark.' As people develop their own opinions and views overtime they begin to distinguish the difference between right and wrong. Your rights @MONTH1 be someone else's wrongs. What @MONTH1 be offensive to you, @MONTH1 not be offensive to the person sitting next to you. Quoted by the author Katherine Paterson, '...if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf...you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' In truth, by removing offensive material from our bookshelves there would be no media left. Not everyone will have the same opinion on matters that hold importance, but that is why the @CAPS2 goes around. We as a society have the right to guard our ability to share opinions, censorship destroys our ability to do so. Everyone is different. The @CAPS2 is full of diversity and viewpoints that are bursting with interesting concepts. By censoring records of history, opinion, observations, our @CAPS2 becomes an illusion. We need to have these facts available to the general public. By ridding ourselves of 'offensive' media we cannot share our opinions with one another for a more successful @CAPS2. Censorship should not be allowed in libraries because it is harmul to our growth as a society and is overall the wrong thing to do",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3814,2,I think that that if there is a book in the libraries that is hurmful. Then you should have to be at least @NUM1 years of age to check it out. The reason why i say @NUM1 is because at that age you should know whats right or wrong AND you can handle it if is wrong. I mean if you know its wrong then dont read it no one is maken you read it. It would be differnt if some one waz but no one is.Some people like to read differnt kinds of books just because its not right and hurts you dont mean it hurts ever one it @MONTH1 make it helpfull to some one esle and if its tgaken out then there wont be any books in the libraries for anyone to check out and read. BECAUSE ever book in there is going to hurt some if u made them read it. If you have have a problem with that you can contact me at @NUM3 ask for @PERSON1 and we can talk bout it and mabe you @MONTH1 be about to change my mind or after you read this you make think the same way as i do. The reason i feel thinks way is because like i said before there is a part in ever book that will hurt some one so you should have to be @NUM1 to check out surten books.If ur getting hurt by a bunch of books then i would sugest you to stop readen because a book is a book not somthing to hurt you.There is so many people in the world that is into books and resourcen bout stuff. What i do not agree with is that kids getting out of class going to the library playing games and putting puzzels togther that is the problem i got.I mean yeah people do go in there and do work witch is find BUT some say that they have work and they dont.They just want to get out of class and not do work. People go in there and play games and when people need on the cumputer there is no were to go because of kids playing games. But as the book part in the library i dont have a problem with that thats what i got to say bout books hurting people is dont read them other people like them being there for them.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20,1,"Well computers can be a good or a bad thing. I don'@CAPS1 realy see @CAPS2 computers can be a bad thing for me. I also know @CAPS2 computers can or will help people all around the world. I think computers has positive effects on people like me. Computers teaches hand-eye coordination. It can help if you need to find out reasearch for a school project. You can create lots of things on computers like music, desiner @CAPS1-shirts, logos, banners and lots of other creative things. With computer you can look up available homes and apartments. You can even go online and fill out a job application and save trips to stores @CAPS2 cool is that!! Well im a regular person not rich not famous but computers provide lot of information people use today. Thats why I think that computers has a positive effects on people and you don'@CAPS1 have to be super smart to use one.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13314,5,"In the memoir. from ""Home The Blueprints of Our Lives"" by Narciso Rodriguez there is a certain mood created. I believe Rodriguez creates a ""thankful"" mood in his memoir. In the memoir Narciso talks about how his parents had successful lives in Cuba but came to @LOCATION1 so Narciso can have a better life. Narciso even said, ""they came selflessly, as many imigrants do, to give there children a better life..."" @CAPS1 was thankful that his parents sacrificed everything for him. Rodriguez said, ""... even though it meant leaving behind their families, frineds and careers in the country they loved""Rodriguez was also thankful for his parents turning ""this simple house into a home."" His parents made his house feel warm and cozy. @CAPS1 leared the real definition of family living in this simple house.At the end, @CAPS1 said @CAPS1 could never be able to thank his parents for what they sacrificed for him",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10273,4,"I think it was a good enough by Minfong Ho.Through out the story you feel somewhat happy,and somewhat sad,but always calm.You feel happy when they are talking about all the plants and when her mother accepts the plants when she bought. At first, when you think the mom is going to yell at her for buying that,after she failed her test.You feel bad for her but still calm mood and show the girl want give up,but just take her time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6018,3,The features of the settings affect in the story “Do Not Exceed posted speed Limit” it is the morning and everyone is still sleep and he wakes in the morning for something to do when he pull up to the first plase he thinks that they are all old and crazy and he thinking that the places needs fixing because the houses are falling apart. Then..leaves and see these wide bunch of hills. inconclusion I would never do all the riding he did. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4695,2,"Have you ever went to the library and while looking for a book you come across a book about slavery with strong language or teenage years which included alcohol, drugs, and sexual content? In the library, you can find books for leisure, study, training, and books found offensive to a variety of people. People from children whose parents would be appalled by what their kids are reading about to adults find books offensive. Although there is things in the library that are found offensive, I believe that books, movies, magazines, and music with offensive things in them should stay on the shelves because the internet is no different then the offensive things in a library, most people don't mind the vulgar and violence within the pages, and there are some fantastic books that some might find offensive. People for centuries have been writing and coming up with songs, movies, and magazines. What was accepted 'back then' is now considered inappropriate for viewers and readers. There are many things in a library that, if not careful, could corrupt your children. Children reading about violence, drugs, and other no no's are what teaches them wrong. Parents and other people have been concerned about the censorship of libraries. Hard enough as it is, parenting doesn't need the help of books, movies, and music to influence the bad onto children. Children are the future and they need to be taught the right way. An old librarian once told me that books need to be cherished throughout the years because they will eventually be replaced with technology and all the books, good or bad, will be gone. It's hard to even imagine how technology is replacing various things in our lives and how it has changed from when it first started to be popular. How does this pertain to offensive books? Like almost everything out there, the internet could be used for good, or for harm. Parents are concerned about their children reading books that are bad but let their child surf the internet which is hard telling how many inappropriate sites he/she might go to accidentally, or on purpose. Books, music, and other offensive stuff in libraries are minor compared to the internet. Protecting children from adult content filled libraries should be the least of a parents concerns. Even if they are concerned about the minds of their children when they go inside a library, they can filter what a child looks at and reads about. The internet is the real bad guy if anything is going to be blamed for corruption of minds. Many people throughout the world have different tastes of what they like in a book. A good plotline, good dialogue, interesting theme, drama, language, violence, drugs, alcohol, and sex are all ways people find reading books enjoyable. Their own opinion on what is interesting is what helps them decide on books to read. Reading books is a passion to some and enjoyable books is a must for them. Without offensive books, people would find reading boring, and wouldn't be as popular as it has been. I don't know about you, but I enjoy books that aren't boring. Most offensive books are not boring and the action is what gets my attention and keeps me reading. There are great books that for years people have enjoyed reading and continue to read today. Even thought they are offensive, they provide good details that are required for a good book. Tom @PERSON2 and @PERSON1 are famous for writing ghory, violent, grusome books that would be qualified as offensive to others. You have the choice not to read them or to read them. Books that deal with slavery @MONTH1 also be found offensive like the book @CAPS1. It does a supurb job at describing how things were during slave times. Books, music, magazines and music should not be removed from the book shelves because they are essensial to everyday people and reading. They are required by some to enjoy a good book.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1054,1,"I think computers are very benefical. There are so many uses! From learning, to games, to videos, and to a tool that is very useful. Without computers we would be like the @CAPS1 (@CAPS2 offense any @CAPS1 people). We would have to wait for a news paper or the news to come on @CAPS4.V. to see becalling news. Let me explain my reasoning in the next few paragraphs. First and foremost, there are lots of things to do. You can play online games, off-line games, surf the web, chat, match videos, and so on and so forth. Without the internet I probably would have lost my interest in @ORGANIZATION1. I now am a member of the online community called www.MOCpages.com I post my creations, look at others creations, and comment, and chat. I use the internet to reasearch for school projects. Right now, I am reasearching @CAPS5 @CAPS6 during the @CAPS7 @CAPS8. Normally I would have to slave over books to find something. Now it is much easier, because keywords are matched. Finally, it is a good fool. Did you know the millitary needs computers to store info, attack, keep record, and to pilot certain planes? I need to use a computer to type up home work, because as you can see, my hand writing isn'@CAPS4 the neatest. Also, I stay in touch with my dad, who works in @ORGANIZATION2. I hope I persuaded you on my position. Remember computers, do lots of things, help us learn, and they are a fantastic tool. Thanks for reading, bye!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9003,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus”chose to end the story with that paragraph to reenforce the theme of the story and conclude with a hopeful tone. The theme of the story is adjusting to new circumstances and making the best out of each change. ""Saeng vowed silently to herself"" tells the audience that Saeng is making an effort to fit in and find the good in her new life. The hopeful tone that is created is a way to show that Saeng is willing to accept changes in life and wants to do her best to overcome obstacles. She says, “I will take that test again”. The test represents the obstacles she will overcome when efforts applied. The hibiscus in the sentence ""…when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding...” @CAPS1 starting over. The budding hibiscus is compared to Saeng with a fresh start and determination to achieve her goals of adjusting to a new lifestyle. The author chose this paragraph to conclude the selection to highlight the theme and symbolize a new start",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19364,7,"I have exprienced patients when I went to @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1. It was a @NUM1 hour strip, we were in a small car and we were a little caradable because we didn’t sleep very well last night even though I brought a book & my @ORGANIZATION1 game we were still pretty bored. All I did watch trees after my battery end on my @ORGANIZATION1. Dad was considtrated on the road, mom finally and license plates to see travelers. Once he got into @LOCATION2 I started to drift asleep but @CAPS1 kept me up because she just finish her and was explaining the whole thing. So I started reading my book. Even though you could hear, mom, @CAPS1 and my stomagh growling, we didn’t stop. We had to get to @LOCATION1 before @NUM2 pm because that was when the hotels front desk shut down. At @NUM3 we were crushing through the state of @LOCATION1 to then arive at @TIME1 at the hotel we were so excited that we had fallen asleep within @NUM4 minutes in the bed.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15671,6,"The builders faced many obstacles while trying to add a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building. As stated in paragraph fourteen, nature was the biggest obstacle the builders faced. The ""violent air currents"" would cause dirigibles to move around the mooring mast, even if it was tethered. Another obstacle faced, was that the architects couldn't just add a mooring mast to the top of the building; over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications were made to the building's framework. Lastly, as stated in paragraph thirteen, most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION1 used hydrogen rather than helium, even though it was flammable. When the German dirigible, Hindenburg, went up in flames, the owners of the building realized the dangers of this.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1203,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people at my school sit on there computers after school. They don't go outside and enjoy nature. Visit with family and friends or even exercise. @CAPS2 people are affected by this. Going outside can enchance your knowledge, you can go on a walk in the woods. When you are on your walk you @CAPS2 find interesting new species. Also when you are outside you can play with your friends or siblings. @CAPS2 times in neighborhoods there are a lot of kids, you can start a pick of game of baseball. You can also build new things. You could find a big tree and build a treehouse or tireswing with your family. Going outside leaves you with a lot of fun activites. When kids sit on the computer they don't interact with there family or friends. During the @DATE1 you can go to the beach with your friends. It will cool you down without having to pay money for an air conditioner. You @MONTH1 also find the oportunety to go to a different state for the day. Or you could go acros the country to see your sick grandma or your newly named cousin. Going on a picnic will give you time to get to know new people. You could invite friends and have them bring a new friend for the whole group to met. You will also have a lot of tasty food and who wouldn't want that? Going places with your family and friends can pad to a worth wild experinse. @PERCENT1 of kids chose to go on the computer than to exercise. Kids will become overweight. When on the computer @CAPS2 kids will eat. Eating for hours each day to not a good idea. You can go out for your schools basketball team or run distances in cross country. Once you are on the team you will make new friends, and get your exercise for the day. When you are on a team and exercising you will learn @CAPS2 life skills. You will learn the benifits of working as a team and by yourself. So getting your exersise is a very important role in your life. Why would you choose the computer? You wouldn't be able to enjoy the outdoors. Or spend time with family and friends. You would become over weight and unhappy. So, don't choose the computer, choose another activity!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15576,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem they encountered was that when moored at the top of the building the dirigible would add stress to the buildings frame. The builders would then have to ""modify and strengthen the empire state building to this new situation."" Another obstacle the builders would have to face is that since a dirigible used hydrogen it would be highly flammable. The builders didnt want an ""accident to take place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York. Lastly builders would have to face the obstacle of Nature. With winds so strong up top the building the dirigibles would need to be weighted down in back with lead weights which would be neither safe nor practical dangling high above pedestrians in New York City. In conclusion ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2 the builders go through many obstacles in building the empire state building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13452,5,I think it was proud mood cause she is saing what her parents did for her.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1490,1,"Dear local newspaper, The effects Computers have on people is that people realie on them and thats not good because they have less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. First of all, having less time exercising is not good because @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people ent up fighting obesscicley. ""You don't want to be one of those people trust me"" said @PERSON1. Second, enjoying nature is a good thing to do instead of playing with a computer because you get your daily dose of air by enjoying nature. ""You also have a lot of fun"" said @LOCATION1. Lastly, interacting with family and friends is fun and who doesn't love that. ""Spending time with the family is fun cause you get to go places,"" said @PERSON3. ""Who doesn't love going out and spending time with friends on the weekends,"" said @PERSON2. Those are my reasons why the effects computers have on people are not good.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16171,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle that they faced concerned safety. Many dirigibles from outside the United States were filled with hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is very flammable and if it were to catch fire of New York City the results could be horrific. Another obstacle the builders faced concerned nature. Due to the height of the Empire State Building the wind became a major factor. Wind currents were constantly shifting and if a dirigible was attached to it, it would be unsafe. The stress of the wind pressure and the load of the dirigible would have to be transmitted to the foundation of the building. This meant that the frame of the building would have to be strengthened. Another obstacle concerned law. There is a law that states that airships can not fly too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal to tie a ship up to the Empire State Building. The builders of the Empire State Building had to face many obstacles in an attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21620,8," Everyone knows how important a laugh can be. Everyone has a different laugh, it can be powerful and moving or devastating and hurtful. Someone said, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" I agree with this statement, everyone has a different laugh and and laughs for many different reasons, laughing is so powerful, someone can make you laugh when your upset or unhappy and they could change everything and how you are feeling. Laughing is a way of connecting with others, you laugh when you are having a good time, are hurt and need someone. Laughs are surprising you never know when your going to laugh and for what, it could be from a little joke or a funny elaborate story being told to you. Over the @DATE1 I was moving back to @PERSON1 from @LOCATION1, and I was very nervous and scared to be the new kid again. Even though I knew some people from when I used to live here, nothing was going to change the fact that I was the new kid. Not too long after I moved I got reconnected with some old friends of mine that I have known since the second grade when I lived here before. My friends and I are always having a good time, laughing, and just being crazy. All of us girls have been through a lot the past few years and that @DATE1, and it was nice to see them and talk to them again after all that has happened to us, we have all gone of and done our own thing and became friends with different people, but we are still close friends after all this time. It was good to spend time with them and see how much they have changed. We have all changed a lot in the past few years. And we @MONTH1 have fought caused some drama and some of us moved away, but we have been through almost everything together since we were little kids and probably will still be friends through out high school and collage. @DATE1 was almost over and school would be starting again me and three other friends of mine wanted to something all together one last time before school started. So we planed to have one big sleepover. one of the friends lives in @LOCATION2, and she was able to come out to @PERSON1 and have this sleepover with us. It was just like second grade again, I don't think I have ever laughed as hard in my life. Not long after we all got there, we were laughing, talking, and having a great time. That night we were all sleeping over, we were thinking of something fun to do, and of my friends decided it would be fun to go @CAPS1'ing, so we asked her mom if it was @CAPS2 and she said as long as we don't go to far way from home and we have our phones on us in case we need to call her and have her pick us up. It was still a little too early for @CAPS1'ing, so until we waited for it to get dark, we walked to the store down the street from her house and bought bags and bags of toilet paper. It still wasn't dark or late enough to go, so we watched some movies, went to the mall, and stuck our feet in her hot tub. I was nice being back and being with all my old friends again. We stayed up and finally it was dark and late, so we put on all of the black clothes we owned and disguised our selves so no would could recognize us, we looked pretty convincing. We put on big jackets so we could hide the toilet paper in our jackets and if someone saw us walking they wouldn't see any of the toilet paper. We tried to be quit and sneak up on houses, but it dint work, we were so loud, we could not stop talking or laughing. We were being so loud we couldn't hear some other kids out late on their bikes also. They got closer and close and we realized it was some other guy friends we know from school, they got board and went for a bike ride. They helped us @CAPS1 some houses and it was getting really late, so we decided to head back. This @DATE1 was one I will never forget, we had so much fun and we agreed we have never laughed so much for anything. It was a hard year for all of us and it was great to see some familiar faces and spend time with some true friends like we used to.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 958,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you know that computers can prevent you from doing a lot of things? Instead of going on the computer you can exercise more, play outside, and spend more time with family and friends. This is why you need to spend less time on the computer. Exercise is important to your body and computers are not. you can get some weights and exercise in your room. A run out the beach doesn't sound bad either. Just by doing that you lose a lot of weight and not gaining weight on the computer. So go exercise and lose weight because it's good for you! Computers also prevent you from getting freash air and playing outside. When your are outside you see that playing is much better than just pressing buttons and clicking everywhere. On the computer. You don't even have to play outside, you can just walk with someone or just sit on the grass and talk. The computer prevents you from doing all of this fun activities outside. Spending time with your family is a huge activity that your computer is prevting you to do. You are on the computer for an hour and your family is having a barbeque. You finally get off that computer and you realize that spending time with them is so much fun than sitting down and looking at the screen. this is why computer are a distraction to everyone because you don't want to exercise, play outside, or spend time with the family. you can use the computer but just don't stay on to long because you are missing the fun.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4713,2,"Do I believe certain material, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are found offensive? No, just because a book or song or magazine article or movie is offensive does not mean that we should have the right to take it off the shelves. Sure we have a right to remove that book but there are a lot things that are going to offend people. Just because someone comes across an offensive book at the library doesn't mean that they should have to go through so much work to get it removed off the shelf. Its not worth the trouble for just a book that you could just simply look past and look at other books. If it was possible for anyone to just take a book off a shelf because they thought it was offensive we would have a lot of empy book stores. Because face it people can and will be offended easily if something they believe, like religion, is being made fun of in a book that they had read about. We all get offended but just move on from it and find something different. We are not forced to read that book or listen to that song or look at the magazine. We have a choice and the choice can be to move on and read or look at something different, more positive, or go through the process to get it removed and taken off the shelf. You never know someone else might think that maybe that article in that magazine was benefitial or relating. So it should not be up to one person, but if a whole community has a problem with a book then I can see removing it can be an option",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12743,5,"The author does an excellent job for creating many moods in this memoir. One of the moods, is love. Love is a mood in this memoir because @PERSON1's parents took ten people who needed somewhere to stay, because they know that those people would do the same thing for them. Another example of love is when @PERSON1 says in paragraph @NUM1, ""they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" The memoir also makes one feel very grateful for what they have, which, is another mood. It does this by having the author point out how little his house was, and how his parents did everything they could to give them a better life. It really makes one look back, and see how much their parents have done for them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6970,3,"The cyclist was trying to make it to Yosemite National Park. The cyclist was in Lodi, California when he decided to ask for directions from old codgers so that he could take a short cut. He followed their directions and little did he know that he should have stuck to his original directions. The cyclist was traveling through the high deserts of California in June. The cyclist became very hot and thirsty from traveling in the desert. It says in the text “when I tried a drop or two, it had the flavor of battery acid” This shows that he had no water left to kept him dehydrated throughout his travel. Also in the text it says “with what I believed was my last burst of energy, I maneuvered down the hill” this shows that he had no energy left.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17951,7,"One time I was patient is when I was going skating. And I was waiting for my mother to come pick me up from @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I told my friends ""yu ll need a ride"" and I made a mistake and told my mother the wrong time period it was @NUM1 and I told my mom @NUM2 and had to wait a whole @NUM3 hour.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 403,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1, I think that computers have a posotive effect on people. There is many ways computers can have posotive effects on humans, first computers bring people together and let people interact with each other, They let people talk to each other. Computers also let people learn about new things. The internet has so much information. Computers also let people do things that they can't do with out computers. So computers have a positive effect on people. Computers let people interact with each other. The computers bring people together. People can use the internet to send emails to each other. When you need to write a letter to some one it might take days for them to got it. But with email they would get it the second you send it. There is also website like face book that let you talk to your friends websites like that connect people. When you and you freind cant talk together you just have to get on you computer. Computers also have web camera, those let people talk to echother. and you can see them. It lets people see the other persons facial expressions and hear the there voice which is better than on a phone and writing a letter to someone thats why computers are a positive effect on people Computers also let you learn about new things when ever you want to find somthing out or if you have a question you go to the internet. If you someone else they might not know the answer. Computer let people see pictures and videos. If you wanted to see a picture of @CAPS2 are that you are going into a computer and type it in computers let people see pictures that they couldn't see in real life. Vidios let you watch things like something funny to cheer up you day. If you love a show on to, and you missed it you can find it on computer. That is why computer benifit people positively. Computers also let you do things that you couldn't do without. When a teacher asks me to type a paper I always do it on the computer. If there were no computers I would have to use a typewriter and if I made a mistake I would have to type the whole thing again. Computers also alow you to play music. On the computer you can put a cd in and it will play the music. Computers alow you to do things that couldnt do without Computers benifit society an have a positive effect on people, They let people interact with each other and they bring people together. They let people talk to each other. Computers also let you learn about newthings. They also let you do things that you couldnt do without. Computers have many positive effects on people so I hope you agree that computers benifit soctity",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19541,7,"A time when I was patient was when @DATE1 we drove to @LOCATION1. It was a long ride. It was long because he had a nagshion that went the long way to six flag and to our hotel. I try not to complan and be patient because the ride was a daylong so that means sitting for almost a day! We were lost in @LOCATION1 for almost a hour going up and down looking for our cusion that were coming too. I had to search but there was no space to. I wanted to go outside and run, jump but I hade to be patient. It was @NUM1 in the morning and I was tird. We still had to look for our hotel which was taking for ever! At the hotel I was unpacking my stuff and notice I was patient for almost a day which I though I would never be able to do in a car. That was the time I was being patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18721,7,In this narrative essay I will write about @NUM1 different times when I was out had to be patient. Such on the waiting to get out of school on a holiday. And when I had to wait until my mom woke up to go to the mall so I could get my game. Another thing I had to wait for was to get my final so as in the ??? all these times I had to be understanding. One day I was very anxious to get out of school on a firday. And to make it I bad the clack was drare and I had a planned schedule of my think day. When one thought passed by there like another set in thinking for way I can stare at the abat and it would change. I was about to get a call home but the @CAPS1.A saved me. And I had to be understanding about that moment. Another time I had to be understanding about was when I had to wait until my mom woke up so I could go to the mall. See what had happened was I got a @NUM1 @NUM3 last year on my report and a new game was coming out so I wanted it. My mom was asleep it was almost impossible to wake her up because she went to the club the night before. And that was the time I had to be patient.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20859,8," ""@CAPS1 ma, do you know where my purse is."" I wonder where it is, I need to put my license in my wallet. I kept looking around and found it in my room under all my dirty clothes. A sigh of relief came over me, I was glad I found it before something happened. I woke up @DATE1 @TIME1 and figured it would be just another day. I had plans to go to a basketball game after school. It was the biggest game of the season, we were playing our rivals, the @CAPS2 @CAPS3. The day was going by slow though, I couldn't wait until it was over. Finally the bell rang, school was over, I drove home a little disappointed. I wasn't sure if my friends were going to the game with me, if they didn't go I probably wouldn't either. I was determined though, I texted them at five and convinced them it would be fun. I picked up my friend @PERSON1 first, then @PERSON2. This is when my normal day turned into one of the most eventful days ever. The @ORGANIZATION1 (where the game was being held) was about twenty minutes away, I had to stop and get gas before we left. We went to the cheapest spot in town and filled up my car. When it was time to leave, my car decided not to start. I have an old car and it doesn't start all the time, it just sits there for a while until it wants to start. There were some guys in the other lane that we new staring at us. We just started laughing it was really embarrassing. The attendant asked us if we needed something else and I said no, my car just wasn't starting. I tried turning it on again, but it just kept dieing. Out of all the other days my car decided not to start, today. Then some men came out and told me that they had to move my car I got so embarrassed and starting laughing again. I always laugh when I get nervous. I told them to let me try turning on my car once more, I prayed my car would turn on this time. It did, I was so relieved and embarrassed, I left as soon as I could. Twenty minutes later we were in @ORGANIZATION1 in front of the school, and just my luck again, no parking spots. We drove around for about five minutes until we found one that was walking distance. Then we gathered our things and walked to the game. It hadn't started yet but it was about to, I had a feeling it would be a really close game. Soon the game began and just how I figured, the game kept going back and forth, we got a point, they got a point. It was really exciting but there where two parents behind us that were really into the game. They kept shouting at players, shouting at the referee, and just being annoying. The game was good, but in the end The @CAPS2 @CAPS3 won by @CAPS6 points. It was a little disappointing, but The @ORGANIZATION1 did have a good team. After the game we were going to eat at @ORGANIZATION2. We left the game quickly after it was over so we wouldn't get stuck in traffic. I was driving down this road I thought I new but then I realized I didn't recognize it at all. @PERSON2 told me to keep going she new where we were. I stayed on the road and luckily it took us straight to down town by @CAPS7. I got onto one of the main roads and headed to @ORGANIZATION2. The road I was on had a million stop lights though, and I was stopping every @NUM1 minutes. Then a pedestrian decided to cross the street in front of me, I waited for him to cross even though he wasn't even on a crosswalk. I kept going no worries on my mind, music blasting, when suddenly rainbow lights behind me. This day couldn't get any worse, I pulled over and waited for the @CAPS8 to come up to my window. He asked for my license and registration. I got my purse and looked in my wallet. My heart pounded where was my license i had just put it in my purse a few days ago. I started to panic and laughter filled the air. My nerves got to me I couldn't help it. I looked everywhere finally he asked if I had my school I.D, I went to pull it out and there was my license right underneath. He went back to his car, leaving me bursting with laughter. He came back and told me my insurance was expired, another thing that added to my day. I was still laughing when he gave me my ticket for speeding and expired insurance. I think I got it because I was laughing and he thought I was taking it as a joke. You cant control nerves though, or at least I can't.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15934,6,The obstacles that the architects of the Empire State Building faced was harsh. They had to figure out how they were going to get the dirigibles to land on the mooring mast. A another problem was that the government was getting unpaticent. What made thing worse was Al smith was being sneaky and unturful. He lied about how high the actulty hieght is. He lied about how he will fix the problems the was with the mooring mast. They were also afraid that a dirigible will blowup on the mooring mast like the @CAPS1. So they just put it aside and made over time the world's highest soda fountain and tea garden for the use by the sightseers.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9844,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph I think because since the girl failed her test the bud reminds her of her grandmothers long grey hair and I guess that gives her good luck so when the winter passes by and the spring time hits thats buds start to come back out and thats when she will take her test again. Thats why the author made this statement the last sentence of the story.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 490,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you know someone who lives faraway from you? Or have you ever used @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS3? These are only a few of the techniches a computer has. Computers benefitted society greatly. It helps people @CAPS2 things such as allow people to talk to each other, goin skills from playing games, and it has images and it is easier. As I ,mentioned, computers allow us to communicate with other people. This way, we don't have to talk to people in person. it would get annoying if every time we wanted to talk to someone of three things would happen without computers. those would be either getting trouble at school, memorizing a phone number and the dialing it, or talking to than in person. Clearly, computers make it easier to talk to people. Next, computers allow us to talk to faraway friends or family. You could write an e-mail or talk to them in a chat. This helped me because I talk to one of my friends in @LOCATION1 and just recently sent an e-mail to my aunt. Without a doubt, computers make it easier for us to communicate with other people, no matter how far. Secondly, every computer that I have seen is able to play some sort of game, whether it be by a disk or on a website. These games can teach us many skills. The first skill we could learn is typing. just a few days ago, I was playing a game where you had @NUM1 seconds to type as many words as you can, as fast as you can. If you make a mistake one second decreases off of your time. It also gets harder as you go, getting from just three letter words to five letter words to even seven letter words and so on. Also, a class that at @CAPS4. information processing, is about computer. Once we were finished with our assignments, we could play type to learn @NUM2. That is also a typing game. As you can see, some games can teach us how to type. Another type of games where you need guide-thinking to be able to win. This teaches nto be ready for almost anything. Also, it teaches us to process what is around you and decide in a decision. In real-life situations you @MONTH1 only have a few seconds to react. Games such as these help in real-life situations. The last type of game is the tower defense. This shows us teenager to think like our lives depended on it. If we were to evr join the army and become some sort of captain, we would be able to organize our trops in the best mannor we could think of these tower defense games also teach us think and plan ahead. In these types of games, it costs money to bag upgrades buy @LOCATION1 towers. One decision is to either buy a weaker upgrade now or save for a stronger one in a little bit. Tower defense games make us make better decisions. Games @MONTH1 be fun, but they teach us skills too. Lastly, computer make things easier and have images on @ORGANIZATION2. One thing that a computer makes easier.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19029,7,"Once upon a time there was a girl named @PERSON2. She had always dreamed to be a princess. Every present she got was either a dress or jewelry. She loved to try on dresses. She had two sisters both @NUM1(one year older than @PERSON2) there name were @CAPS1 and @PERSON1. @CAPS3 house is an old house located in the woods. One day @PERSON2 went out to get the mail, and a man with a tuxedo on gave her a letter that looked very fancy. @PERSON2 opened the letter and read it aloud, it said “@CAPS2 @PERSON2, your invited to ball at the castle on @DATE1 at @NUM2 pm.” @PERSON2 screamed in exitment. @PERSON2 decided to go to the mall to look for a ball gown. She found a beatifulgown but it was to much money. She asked the lady at the front desk if there was any way they could lower the price was I she helped around the store for a couple of days. She accepted the offer. She worked and worked for hours for two days. And fonaly her patients paid off. She could take the dress home. She drove home and put the dress on. She only had an hour so she had to hurry. She put her makeup and jewelry on and looked at her self in the mirror and said I did it. She got in the car and drove to the castle, it was so beautiful the way the moon hit the gold paint. @PERSON2 got out of the car and walked inside the castle. She walked down the stairs and every one stared. It was @CAPS3 best day of her life to have everyone think she was beautiful. She went to the dance floor and danced with some guys. The prince came up to introduce him self and when she turned around he fell in love. @PERSON2 couldn’t believe the prince talked to her. He asked her to dance. They danced all night. When the prince went on stage he called her name and she went on stage. He asked her will you marry me, she said yes. She had become a princess! Sometimes dreams really do come true.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17986,7,"Patience is very important in life. I have been patient many times in days. I'm going to tell you about a time that I was patient and it paid of. It was @DATE1, exactly two mounts before my birthday. I went to my mom and asked her if I could get a phone. She said I was to young, and that she didn't get a phone till she was in college. I told her that everyone else had a cell phone but me, this was partly true. She told me she would about it, and that if I bugged her about it again she wouldn't get me a phone. It was @DATE3 now, just @NUM1 more days till my birthday. I thought about what kind of phone I wanted, I thought about what color case I would get for it. I thought about that phone for weeks. Then the day came, it was @DATE2, my birthday. I woke up in the morning to the smell of pancakes. After we ate we went to my grandma's house, because it was also thanksgiving. After dinner we went back to my house for my birthday supprise. I opened my pressants from aunts, uncles, grandparents, and then the last box. I opend it, it was my phone. I was so excited, I called all my friends on my new phone. That was the best birthday ever. It is a good thing to be patient, because I was patient I got the phone I wanted. Thats why you should always be patient, and wait. By; @PERSON1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7658,3,"The older men gave him directions that were acctully really bad. Nature wasn’t on is side that’s for sure. First of all he ran out of water because of the heat. Secondly a snake blocked his path and he didn’t want to tempt it. Thirdly he became so overheated that it was possible for him to suffer a heat stroke in the middle of nowhere. Also he kept going to abandoned buildings. It was so bad that the stone relied on for his thirst got stuck in his throat, he was then lead to a bait shop that was absolutely in the middle of nowhere and he had no way of getting home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12109,5,"The mood created in this memoir is happy and warm. It starts by talking of things Narciso learned in the home. The Cuban music ""which I [Narciso] a door to this day."" As well as the culinary skills, ""I am eternally grateful."" Narciso is happy, therefore the mood is happy.Also, Narciso talks about the grat community. ""It was a close -knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand..."" Narciso goes into great detail describing the good things, like the community. The author also describes the selflessness of many immigrants including her parents. ""They came selflessly... to give thir children a better life."" Narciso Rodriguez describes many positive effects of her parents as immigrants. As a result of the positivity, a happy mood is created.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16512,6,"Some of the obstacles facing the builders was if they were to add on the mooring mast they would have to strengthen the building integrity. This is necessary because once the mast goes the wind, pressure would have been transmitted all the way down to its foundation. More floors would have to be added to house elevators and stairs to a ticket and laggage area. They had to find a way to attach the mooring mast to the foundation, which is nearly @NUM1 feet below.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19125,7,"A time when I was patient is last year when my dad took me hunting. It all began when we woke up at @NUM1 in the morning got dressed and left to go get in are deer blind. As soon as we got there we heard a lot of gun shots. From shot guns, rifles and even black powder. We waited all day until it was dark again then we packed up and we left. Me and my dad didn’t see anything that whole day. That is a story about how I am patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11888,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is caring because his mother gave people a home to help them get back on their feet and kept her arms open and door open. Also the mood created by the author in the memoir is thankfulness because the author thank his parents all the time for his life.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19405,7,The story I’m about to tell you is shout patients where a boy and his fauther went fishing and the boy is not patient. One day a boy and his dad went fishing when they got there the put the but in the water and stated their trip the boy was unpatient and cerped cunokining. Onforehenitlly he cout nothing when he got home he side his dad came over and said “sun if you cout something evietime you fished it would be killing not fishing.” @CAPS1 they went out the next day and sence the boy was patient he cout a left music ie @CAPS2 because he was patient. Well see what happened with the boy he cout a fish @CAPS2 because of patients remember “all good things come to these now are patient!”,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18740,7,"The key for a long road trip is to be patient. This important because it actuly makes the trip go faster. Here is a story about how I had really great patient. @CAPS5 were loading up for a three-hour drive to the @CAPS1 water park in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2. Everyone is in and ready to go, except of course my parents. Who went inside to check on everything, got directions, call my unlce to see if @CAPS3 was ready, and all this time us kids are sitting in the car waiting. Of course my brother @CAPS2 was getting antey and couldn't stop moving around until @CAPS3 finaly couldn't take it anymore. ""That's it!"" @CAPS3 exclaimed, ""I'm going in to get them!"" @CAPS3 was the least patient of us all. Even my two little sisters had a longer patience than @CAPS3 had. Which tells you a lot?Tyler comes out @NUM1 minutes later and tells us their coming. WRONG! They didn't come out for another @NUM2 minutes which my brother mad. ""@CAPS4 took you so long?"" @CAPS3 asked. ""@CAPS5 had to make sure uncle @PERSON1 was ready to leave."" my dad awnsered. As soon as @CAPS5 got going everyone fell asleep accept for my dad who was driving. So no one really did much. At least @CAPS5 were all patient, except for my brother @CAPS3's still like that now.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1259,1,"To whomever this @MONTH1 concern, @CAPS1 your life without a laptop or a desktop computer. It would be hectic right? How will you keep up with your email or type of the articles for this very newspaper? Even though some people @MONTH1 believe that computers are taking away from exercise, enjoying nature, and spending time with family and friends, computers do have a positive effect on us. The list of reasons why is endless but three that stand out are you can communicate with people in other states or countries, it's more interesting to learn from a website than a textbook, and eventually @CAPS2 will be computerized anyway. Am I right? Have your old teachers ever assigned you a pen pal in another state or country? If yes, didn't you have to, write letters? Then, you had to wait at least @NUM1 weeks before your pen pal wrote back. If you had used computers, you would've gotten a response back within days. I know many parents and other adults @MONTH1 think that e-mails are a waste of energy but actually they're faster than letters will ever be. Has your daughter or son ever told you that reading from a textbook is boring? Yes? No? That's where computers come in. It's much more interesting to use the internet than reading from a book. I understand that some students can read from a book and retain all of the facts that they've learned from that one book but various students learn differently than that. If a student learns from the internet, they're more likely to remember it because they won't be put to sleep by the boredom of a textbook. Many people have mentioned and some statistics show that by at least @DATE1, @CAPS2 will be computerized. Do you seriously want to be the last one left behind? I wouldn't I understand that you are a person who likes to keep up with the current events so why not use your computer more often? When they say @CAPS2, they mean @CAPS2. They even have @CAPS3 tools on computer. So I want you to take a survey of how many people find computers effective and you'll be surprised. Many people will say the same that I've said. The choice is yours, which side are you on? Thank you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16070,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many problems when attempting to make a mooring mast for Dirigibles. The frist major problem they came across was the biulding its self. It said ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the biuldings foundation."" The biulding being the tallest in the world could not take the pressure. They could possible made it strong but at high cost to something so @CAPS1 already. The architects next obstienle was saftey expessally in a highly populated area such as down town New York. They found the Dirigibles to be to dangerous and uncontroble in a city of towers. The normal processes of docking a Dirigible would have to complete change to acumulate. the mooring mast, soon laws were given to have airships stay away from areas of popurtion after the Hindenburg insodent. Yet some still dared to try and dock at the mast such as the Los Angeles and Columbia but the mast was never put to good use and shows the Problems with inovating things already @CAPS1 as the Empire State building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3228,2,"Censorship in libraries is a very contraversial. Many people believe that it is the right thing to do while many others strongly disagree with it. Censorship should not occur in libraries for several reasons. All people have freedom of speech in the @LOCATION1 and when books are taken off the shelf because they are thought to be offensive you are taking away that right. Authors have the right to express themselves and the right to have their works equally acknowledged by the public. Censorship is acceptable in some circumstances but what is censored should not be decided by the government. First of all, freedom of speech is very important to the people of the @LOCATION1. If this freedom were to be taken away, it would definitely not go unnoticed. When books, music, movies, and magazines are censored, the freedom of speech that the author had is being diminished. For example, what if an athiest wrote a book saying that @CAPS1 wasn't real? Many @CAPS2 would want to take this book off the shelves of all libraries. Just because one group of people do not like the topic, message, or theme of a book does not mean that it should be taken out of a library. A library is a place where all books have a chance to be read not a place where people get to pick and choose what they want there because of their beliefs. Secondly, authors have the right to express their thoughts and to have their works equally acknowleged by the public. Of course there will be books that are more popular than others, but at the same time there will also be books that are neglected not because the quality of the writing but because of the topic the author chose to right about. There is no reason to have a whole community ignore an authors work just because a large group of people do not agree with what it says. In that small group of people that were not trying to get rid of that book you will find a number of people that would read the book. Just because a majority does not like the topic of the work does not mean that the minority should have the book taken away from them. The author has the right to what they wrote and should have the opportunity to have their work acknowledged. Last of all, censorship can also be a good thing in some circumstances. It just depends in what ways censoring is used. For example, many parents do not want their children reading, listening or watching certain things. The parents of the child should be able to decide what a kid can read, listen, or watch, not a large group of people. Many parents have different standards and what some parents find acceptable for their children @MONTH1 appall others. So, there could never be a set standard for what is acceptable and not acceptable without creating a large amount of contraversy. Once that child becomes and adult they have all the rights to decide what they want to get from a library. There should be certain limits though. For example, a person must be the age of seventeen or older to rent a '@CAPS3' rated movie. This is the same age a person must be to get into a '@CAPS3' rated movie without parental supervision. Some of the age limits throughout society should be put in libraries, but other than that, the decisions should be left up to the person. Censorship in libraries will always be changing. Sometimes it will be in effect while at other times it will not. People of the @LOCATION1 have the freedom of speech and taking away books from libraries is partially taking away that right. The author should have the right to have their book equally acknowledged by the public and kept on the shelves. Censorship should be decided by the person themselves and should not have it decided for them. Parents should have the say over what their children read and should not have that decision made by others",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 280,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I believe computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination. Computers give people the ability to learn about far away places and people. They even allow people to talk online. Computers are a very usefull piece of machinery. Computers teach hand-eye coordination. When your in school, you need to type lots of @CAPS1 prompts, @CAPS2 labs, and @CAPS3 @CAPS4 vocab. Computers help us do that. Typing fast and correctly takes practice. Typing without looking at the keyboard is hand-eye coordination. This will help us later on in life also. Whether it's typing term papers in high school or your application essay for college, you will need the help of computers. Computers give people the ability to learn about far away places. @NUM1 years ago I look a trip to @LOCATION3 for the first time. I didn't know a lot about the history of @LOCATION3 so I sat down at my desk and turned on my computer. Suddenly, it was like I was in @LOCATION3! I read about the delicious food and rich culture. I took a virtual tour of the @CAPS5 @CAPS6 and the great @CAPS7. I heard @CAPS8 music and learned some @CAPS8. In just @NUM2 hour I visited @LOCATION3 right from my very own house! Computers can take you on a magical journey to a far away country. Computers allow people to talk to online with other people. This is a very good thing. I have cousins who live in @LOCATION2 and because of the @NUM3 hour time difference, its not always easy to talk on the phone so we use the computer. My family will send e-mails back and forth with them. Sometimes we will even video chat! @CAPS3 networking sights accesible by computer such as @CAPS10 or @CAPS11 allow us to talk to people who we don't regularly see. On @CAPS11 you can even talk to your favorite stars or musicians. Computers let us keep in touch with others. Computers have a positive effect on people. Some experts @MONTH1 say that people spend too much time on the computer and while that @MONTH1 be true to some people, its not true to everyone. We still exersise, and spend time outside. We still interact with family and friends but know we are also able to do so on the computer. More and more people using computer is a good thing.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 5987,3,"In the story, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” written by Joe Kurmaskie, represents how certain conditions can affect a cyclist. The cyclist was biking through the desert to reach Yosemite National Park, but on his journey he accoutered many tough conditions to make it difficult to get there. First of all, the desert was very hot which makes travel very difficult. For example the text states, “the sun was beginning to beat down.” @CAPS1 makes any task difficult because the sun drain’s a person’s energy. Secondly, the trip was very long so the cyclist had a hard time conserving water. For instance, the man drank so much water, he almost ran out; “The water bottle contained only dehydration which can cause death. Joe Kurmaskie’s story, “Rough Road Ahead. Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” represents how certain conditions of an environment can affect a cyclist. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12140,5,"The mood in the memoir is very happy. Narciso Rodriguez, the main character and young cuban boy, describes some hardships such as his ""parents not able to get the right jobs"" or ""facing cultural hardships."" @CAPS1 Narciso talks about all the good things that happened. Such as his friend and babysitter, Alegria, made him feel great, or how his parents gave him the love of cooking. One thing Narciso will never forget his parents love and sacrifice. His parents always allowed family members to come and stay. Sometimes just to help them get back on their feet. The mood in which the author includes in the memoir is described her Narciso Rodriguez.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7490,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in a major way. The setting affected the cyclist performance. For example, the harsh temperature started to make his pedaling sluggish. The settings also made the cyclist a little frightened for instance, the cyclist came across a snake that he was terrified of. Again the settings affected the cyclist by tempting him. For example, the river tempted the cyclist to stop riding and go get a drink of water. In conclusion, the setting had a major affect on the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3462,2,"How often do you find a book or a magazine that you don't want children or someone to read? I mean I find them everyday for example, how people use there language like swearing or even the tv show they watch. I also hear when im with my friends or in a crowd of people. You hear them everyday even if you don't want to, but you do. I do believe libraries shouldn't even have that in where children can reach them or even in the library period. Its a public places and no one wants to see anyone with those books in the librarey. What would happen if a child got ahold of one and they were looking it and if gave them nightmares or if it deals with crimes, rap, or miss happens with something wrong. Sometimes what children read, they will say it or they will do it. so if a child see it they @MONTH1 think its alright to do it or they might think its amazing or cool to do and they might do it. Also again, you hear it on a daily basic like swearing. Lets say your child hears or reads horable language and they might say it to you or some of your friends, and you wont know where they heared or who told them. The movies even have something to do with it to, because it all the movies are together kids to adults movies. they should separet the movies or even get rid of the movies because the children could look at the case and see something scary or drug related, something that you dont want your children to or even hear to. Even though you hear them daily, you should never get them from the public library or even any public place where children are around. They need to take those book that discribe anything about crime, drugs, or even movies. Thats why i think they should get rid of those books and movies off the shevles and get them away from children",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14862,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, there was many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced with allowing diriibles to land there. One of the obstacles were the safety problems. The drigibles had to come close enough to the Empire State building so they could be able to tie the dirible down. This put the diribles too close to the people. There was a law that that stated that airships can't fly to low to urban areas. There was a disaster that happened in Lakehurst, New Jersey that they were trying to prevent from happening in New York (paragraph @NUM1). Another problem with that builders faced was that the strong winds of nature did not allow diribles to get close enough to tie down to the mast. There were many obstacles builders had to face that at the end it was not worth making the Empire state building a dirible dock.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4572,2,Alot of people are offeneded by things that are uncenored. Some peopole think they should be censored and others think it should not. Its all a matter of opinion. I dont think anything should be censored because it takes away from the freedom of speech. With censorship one can not fully express there self or opinion. that is way nothing should be censored,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15267,6,"The plan to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building encountered problems from its introduction until its conclusion. The first problem was the original design of the building. The original design did not include a dirigible docking station. When plans for the station were introduced, the building was not strong enough to carry the heavy load of a spire and a dirigible. To adjust, an additional @MONEY1 were spent in order to ensure the building would be structurally sound during a dirigible docking. The next problem became imminent after the Hindenburg's fire: any hydrogen-filled dirigible that caught fire at the Empire State Building which cause significant damage. Moreover, because many dirigibles used hydrogen, the safety risk was significant. Wind proved to be another obstacle. The force of a dirigible being blown around by heavy winds could prove to be too much for the structure of the building. Moreover, because any dirigible docking at the building would be one thousand feet off the ground, there was no way to anchor the dirigibles. The fact that many tall spires lined the @LOCATION1 skyline presented an imminent danger to any dirigible trying to dock. Finally, one of the most significant problems of building a dirigible docking station was the fact that law prohibited low flying aircraft in urban areas.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12843,5,"The author of this memoir creates a very calm mood. This article isn't anywhat exciting at all. All it is doing is explaining this child's life. This memoir, to me, was like taking a list of things and putting them into a full paper. The author did not create any kind of mood that interested me to keep reading of this topic. This memoir did however express a lot of feelings though. It expressed how grateful this kid was for his parents and his Cuban descent. Although this memoir had a calm (and slightly boring) mood, the author's ability to reveal information was very deep and insightful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1566,1,"Hello my name is @PERSON1 @CAPS1 and I am going to enforce you that computers can benefit our society. First, @CAPS3 allows students to easily get good grades on projects and reports. Second, You can make online job applications. Lastly, computers allow people to chat with other people. Firstly, the computer allows your children who are also students to do better on their projects and reports. They help children's reports because for example they are doing a report on ""@CAPS2 lincon"" they have access to look up the peron to get information they need right at home. Doing reports with their computer there is no need to use up your projects you can also look up information and print out pichers to make your project more vibrant and eye-catching to younger people. Also @CAPS3 allows you to type your information to make @CAPS3 look orginzed and neet. Accordly, if you are trying to find some job applications without wasting your time, just look on the internets. This way you want go to place not knowing if jobs are available and seeing none. Also @CAPS3 save your to save the trip out there. You are able to look up the paying of the job and regulations, and you can find out if you get the job fastered. Lastly, @CAPS3 allows socializing. For example like facebook or/and myspace lets you talk to friends from school or friends you met online. For adult who don't have a myspace or facebook account they can use email, msn, aol, aim/aol instant messager, or via chat. This way adults can catch up on work and children can kee in touch with friends or/and family. This is why @CAPS3 think computer with internet benifit our society projects, reports, job appicatrone and spcializing with family and friends.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21224,8," Laughter is one of the most amazing things that the human body is able to do. The sound of laughter is as unique as the sound of crying. There are many things that can cause people to laugh. And once you start laughing, you can't stop. Laughter is caused by something that is humorous, so it's mostly the cause of laughter that makes it so much more fun. And it usually depends on who you are with, where you are, and in what kind of situation you're in before you can actually start laughing. Kind of like the time when I was in @LOCATION2 baking a pie with my @CAPS1 @CAPS2..... It was a nice warm evening in @LOCATION2, and I was making a pie with my @CAPS1 @CAPS2. We had out all the ingredients necessary to make the pie until my @CAPS1 points out there's no more sugar. She tells me to go to the covers and grab a jar of sugar. So I went, and there were two jars when I opened the covers I asked her which of the two jars is the sugar because they had no lables on them. ""I think its the the jar on the left"", she said. I grab the jar on the left side without another word. Later on while everyone was sitting down talking with one another, my @CAPS1 and I go and get the pie to serve to the family. They all looked at the pie in awe as we took it out and started slicing it. After everyone was served they all took a bite out of it. Imidiately in just seconds everybody starts spitting it out like it was the worst thing that they have ever put in there mouths'. Suddenly my @LOCATION1 makes a comment saying that the pie is too salty..... not exactly the kind of comment I was expecting. Then my @CAPS1 @CAPS2 goes and checks to see the jar that I had grabbed from the covers. She sticks her finger in the jar and tastes it. Luckily enough, it was the salt jar. Then out of no where everyone starts to laugh into tears at the thought of what just happened. It was the most fun I had that evening, nobody could stop laughing. Clearly, the situation with the pie was something that I will surely never forget, and it'll probably never happen again. And after all that happend with the pie ended up being the kind of situation that makes you laugh. This shows that the three causes of laughter is real. First, I was with my @CAPS1. Secondly, I was in my @LOCATION1's house where there has to be at least one funny thing that can happen there. And also what happened with the salt and the sugar was a completely unexpected situation that turned out to be unmistakeably hilarious. And to think that this event happened all because of the three main causes of laughter. Laughter is one of the most amazing things that the human body is able to do. Laughter will always be one of those things in life that cannot ever be destroyed. If you are a person who says that they've never laughed, then you are a liar and a hypocrite. Being able to laugh is good for you and your health. It gives you extra oxygen in your lungs to help you breathe easier and it's a lot of fun. So if you ever notice that you haven't laughed, stop imidiately and take the time to have a laugh. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12242,5,"The mood created by the author's tone in this memoir is appreciation which is displayed in three important places. First, Narciso Rodriguez, the author, creates the mood of appreciation when talking about how his parents lef cuba. He explains ""they came selflessly, as many imigrants do, to give their children a better life"" (@NUM1). This description shows the mood of appreciation because it shows the author's parents left ""selflessly"", ""to give their children a better life,"" which implies that his parents @MONTH1 not have wanted to come to @LOCATION1, but they knew it would be the best place for him, so they came anyway, which clearly creates a mood of appreciation through Narciso's tone. Additionally, the mood of appreciation created when Rodriguez declares ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" (@NUM2). This informs the reader outright that rodriguez is"" ""greatful to his parents"", which creates the mood of appreciation should through his tone. Finally, the mood of appreciation is created when Narciso states ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" (@NUM3). This statement insinuates appreciation because Rodriguez is informing the reader that ""he will never forget"", what his parents have done for him, which carries the message that it changed his life, creating the mood of appreciation through his tone. In conclusion, Narciso Rodriguez creates the mood of appreciation through his tone in this memoir to his parents.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 615,1,"Computers should be for everyone! Dont you think?, I do. And here's how @CAPS1 gonna convince you. Computers can basically be called a gateway to learning. Positive effects that computers have on peole is that, it teaches hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places, and even allow people to talk online with other people. These great qualities computers have for people are fantastic. Also the fact that computers just keep upgrading as time goes by. So, by you reading this introduction, I hope you are satisfied with what I am going to in order to show you that computers are positive devices and can be helpful to everyone. Firstly, as I started in my introduction paragraph, computers help teach people hand-eye coordinates. This i believe is a good thing to know because without it, there arent many things you could do. For example fly a plane. You wouldn't be able to do that without both hand and eye coordinates because you would have to manually move the plane, and check to see if everythings in order by multi-tasking. Furthermore, this is just one given reason on why computers are positive towards everyone's benefit. Secondly, computers give people the ability tolearn about faraway places and people. This is also good for people's benefits because, theres knowledge in every bit of it. Your learning about others cultures, heritage, family history, and so forth and so on. This could also help you in the long run with any job you want to do because knowledge can get you anywere. It can get you very far in life so learn as much as you can, and I beleive computers can do so. This is another reason why computers can be positive. As for the last reason, I say that peolple can also talk to other people online on the computer.This is also beneficial because again, like I stated in my @NUM1 paragraph, you can learn many things that way and meet new people. Now dont you think computers can benefit anyone! I do and will always have the same opinion that is positive towards computers. For my conclusion, I would like to say that I hoped you enjoyed every bit of what I had to say, and you can also agree with the positive affects computers have on people. I truly beleive that computers are beneficial to all people and should continue to be around. it benefits society, and I enjoy every bit of using it. Thank you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10637,4,I think the author concludes this story like this because they was beautiful `@CAPS1 gave her good luck because the @NUM1 time around she didnt kno they was their,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15709,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempt to allow dirigibles to dock at the Building. One of the greatest reasons was saftey, most dirigibles outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is also highly flammable. Another obstacle that arose was nature, the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. If the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would sway violently with the wind. Other dirigibles moored in open fields added lead wights on the back of them so they could not move. But there is no where for those weights to be attached to at the top of the Empire State Building. A practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building. Builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempt to moor a dirigible",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 5985,3,"The affects of the cyclist is if it does not change. it cut hurt a lot of people feeling because they @CAPS1 don’t care about the cyclist. I’m one of them people who does not care about it cause it does not affect me or anyone I know. It is a big deal to write people, some of them @CAPS1 blow stuff up. They talking on tiv and on the radio making all this stuff they say is made up. I don’t believe to I see it. That @CAPS1 not for black people because it has not did anything to us. We really don’t care about the affects of the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3892,2,"Here in @LOCATION1, it is in our constitution that says anyone can have freedom of speech. Freedom to say anything they wish to get off their mind and express individuality and opinions. This should also include books, music, movies, magazines, and any other form of entertainment. However, there will always be people that could take offense to others' ideas and opinions that comes with freedom of speech. In a case where someone was to find a certain type of material to be offensive at a public library, then it should be known that he or she should not observe the type of material given. He or she should not throw a tantrum over something that they find offensive while other people find very enjoyable. It is in that person's standpoint that they should realize and come to grips with freedom of speech. What they @MONTH1 not like could very be what others do like. So, why should other peoples' form of enjoyment be censored and taken away from them just because of one bad lemon? It shouldn't. Everyone expresses themselves in their own way. It's a form of getting positive and/or negative energy out in a healthy way. Whether it's writing books, posting articles, or writing music, it's a way to vent and some people @MONTH1 like that venting person's style. It is completely up to that person who takes offense to materials on whether or not to observe such style. Censorship should not be allowed in libraries. If there was a type of censorship, it would be taking away what some person would like to enjoy. It would also be taking away the artists' or authors' freedom of speech and expression. There are books that were banned from schools throughout the country. Just because they think is right doesn't always mean it is right. Sure, they just want the people protected from certain offensive stuff. but why keep them from the real world? Let people out to see what this world is like and it's various types of art.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 94,1,"Dear Newspaper people, I'm here to tell you that computers have a bad effect on people. The computer @MONTH1 hold lots of information but does it always hold the right information? You could do lots of other stuff than lay on the computer. Also, the computer is very distracting. The computer @MONTH1 give you the wrong info. Instead of going through the process of turning on your computer, search for the info and turn it off takes more time than find a book, open it, find the info close it and put it back. Books more often are correct. Computers take time to find into than a book. Computers give you too much information than a book. There's plenty of other stuff to do than play on the computer. You could read a book or draw. You could also play outside and shoot hoops or ride your bike. You can call up your friends and play with them. If you're really bored and you don't know what to do, make up a game. At times, computers could distract you. If you want to get homework done and you have a computer, it gets you off topic. If you're at work with a computer, it's tempting. Even other people on computers is distracting. if you're working on the computer, it does not take much to to take the thing you need to search like @ORGANIZATION1 and change it to something you want to search like @ORGANIZATION1 company. See what I mean by a negative effect? It doesn't give you the right info always, you could do better things in life and is very distracting. It is what makes the workers to the procrastinators and the fit to the lazy. Computers have entered our world and have altered all of our lives! Computers have made a big change to everyday life. Please agree with me.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18021,7,"I was patient when I was on my way to @LOCATION1 to see my @CAPS1. I was patient because I didn’t want to get really excited about @CAPS2 .When I get excited about things we have a change in plans, and we would have to ‘cancel. So I stayed call” and we was in the car in a little over an hear then my brother forgot something and we had to go back and got @CAPS2 and I was patience about @CAPS2, ??? we was quiet the whole way there I had is the story when I was very patient about going to @LOCATION1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9494,4,"I think the author ends the story with this paragraph for many reasons. One reason is because It leaves you knowing that Saeng will never give up tring. Another reason is that something as simple as a flower can encourage someone to keep going even if they have nothing to go for. Saeng says that flower is something so important, that working harder will encourage her to keep doing the best she can. The author leaves you with this sentence because it is very powerful and brings Saeng courage. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12162,5,"The memoir reflects the memories and traditions created in a Cuban family home. The author creates a feel of happiness and gratefulness throughout the story. @CAPS1 uses words like ""passionate"", ""rich"", and ""thanked"" to describe his family and house. @CAPS1 also creates a sense of pride in his parents and family. @CAPS1 discusses how his family was always growing. His parents doors were always open to everyone. @CAPS1 is thankful for that and feels that @CAPS1 is lucky to have such a close knit community of friends and family. The author also mentions what his parents risked and sacraficed by going to the States. @CAPS1 is both proud and thankful of his parents. @CAPS1 says his parents, ""Had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture."" @CAPS1 is so proud that his parents were so selfless and put everything on the line so that their future would be better. @CAPS1 is thankful and grateful for everything his parents and family have done.As the author mentions all of this, the readers themselves @MONTH1 remember a bit of their childhood. Some @MONTH1 relate to the story completely while others laugh at certain parts that they too remember about their parents. In the end, the author's right, its the parents that turn this simple house into a loving home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16442,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was ""the fact that the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) That would make it hard for the dirigibles to be tethered to the mast. Annother problem they faced was the ""existing laws against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (@CAPS1 @NUM2) Also the equipment used to to dock the airships haden't even been installed.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6303,3,"I believe the cyclist is a alone, and I think the old man should have shot him. I believe a bike ride that long is a little retarded. I feel that no matter how great or horrible the shape your in you should even go on a realling long rider on a bicycle.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12259,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is happy. It symbolizes togetherness and coming together as a family. In this passage evry one is caring and open to anyone living with them. The child in this story talks abou how greatful they are for there parints. Their happy because their all a family living together as one. Evry one is exsepting of one and another. Over all I think the mood is happy.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14937,6,"Obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were some of the following. They needed an exact way of getting everything perfect for the job. The whole building process for this job was very complicating and needed the best expertese.In paragraph @NUM1, Al Smith's quote greatly backs up to my point. He says ""one set of engineers here in New York is trying to dope out a practical, workable arrangement and the Government people in Washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to the mast"". It tells just how much people are working on this job.In conclusion, this was a complicated job. They weren't positive if the mast even be able to stay. They also werent positive if the fluids inside would be but a problem factor.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 761,1,"Dear local newspaper, Computers are a usefull tool when doing a school report or something to that effect but, @CAPS2 we really need thoes computers. When using a computer for a school project @CAPS3 can be a hassel. One of many problems people are fased with while using a computer are freazing, when doing a project and your computer frezz's @CAPS3 can be verry time consumming. Another problem is pop up's, pop up's can couse virouses, and when you computer gets a virous, @CAPS3 leads to becoming very slow. Witch leads us to are next problem slowness, when a computer becomes slow @CAPS3 is verry a digital. There are several problems and risks that come with a computer. One health problem is that you can become a hermet and stay inside all day because your too attached to the computer. Another problem is that you can become verry obease because your not getting any physical exersise. One risks of using a computer is that you could end up getting an fassebook, @CAPS1, or myspase, and meating some one who is protending to be some one there not and get abducted by a molester! There are other alternations you could make instead of using an computer. One alternation is that you could go to the local library and cheak out books on your topick that your wanting information on. Another alternation is to ask teachor if she/he could leand you a class text book. But the main aternation is computer to old fashon books! So now @CAPS3's your choice,""@CAPS2 we realy need computers or can we live with out them?"" @CAPS3's your choice!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3895,2,"The things we find in libararies shouldn't be offensive to anybody. It's the choice you make rather you won't to read it or not. Nobody is making look at those things if you don't want to. Don't look at it, if you think it's offensive. The best thing to do is to keep it on the shelves. Some people like looking or reading things like that. People don't go to the library and pick up a book or a movie that they know they wouldn't like. If that was to happen, then there wouldn't be any library around because anything you get from the library, I bet you can find something offensive about it. People find stuff like that entertaning when watch or read stuff like that. That hurt the people that make the books and movies that are offensive because they feel like thats what people wan't to see. True enough thats what people won't see as long as it's not effecting them in no kind of way. That what we see on a daily basic on tv is offensive things, so if we can sit there and watch it on tv then we shouldn't have on problem reading or watching a book about it. I see stuff offensive on tv about everyday, but it doesn't bother me so reading a book or anything else like that, I woudn't care because i'm use to seeing it on tv. Nobody can make read or stop reading things like that, only you can. You don't have to look at it if you think its offensive. It shouldn't be a problem with anyone because thats what we hear and see everyday. No matter what some people find that entertaning.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9371,4,"Saeng wanted to show that she was strong and determined. She wanted to make the best of things with what she had. She had lost a lot of hope with the big move to another country. The winter made her sad longing even more for home. She bought the flower to, in a sence, bring her back home. When the spring comes, she will bud with the flower and take the test again. This is her new home with new hibiscus. After all, winter is no time for a flower.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18174,7,"Middleton middle school, I’m one of their students. My name is @CAPS1, I’m new here, but you @MONTH1 think that I’m a boy. Well if you do you better listen and listen hard @CAPS16 I’m not going to say this twice; patience is a vurture. On my first day, I walked into @PERSON1’s class I sat next to a girl with wavy blond hair, sparkling blue eyes, and a genuine smile. “@CAPS2.” @CAPS3 said. “my name’s @CAPS4.” @CAPS3 said in a perky voice. “@CAPS2.” I said back. “I’m @CAPS6, but you can call me @CAPS1.” “@CAPS8, uh @CAPS1.” @CAPS4 replied. “@CAPS11 let me show you around.” “@CAPS12!” I answered back. @CAPS4 and I became fast friends,but when @CAPS3 introduced me to her friends they all made fun of me for having a boy’s name. @CAPS4 yelled at them, but I said @CAPS13 was @CAPS17. @CAPS4 just woulden’t let @CAPS13 go. Finally I said to her, “@CAPS13’s @CAPS17 @CAPS4! Just let me handle this.” “@CAPS15?” @CAPS3 asked crossing her arms and tapping her foot the way @CAPS3 did when @CAPS3 coulden’t do same thing. “@CAPS16 you just don’t have any patience!” I said, getting a little angry @CAPS3 coulden’t understand. “@CAPS17 be that way @CAPS1!” @CAPS3 said storming out of the room. “@CAPS4 wait!” I cried but I hat to run after her. “@CAPS20, please you don’t get @CAPS13. You can’t keep getting mad at them for making fun of me. I know your trying to protect me, but its @CAPS17. Have you ever had of patience before?” I asked ready to run if @CAPS3 ran from me. “@CAPS21.” @CAPS3 said, looking down at the scuffed floor. Then, I told her everything I knew about @CAPS13 and we never had a problem again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10532,4,"The author concludes the paragraph when Saeng realizes she can miss her old home, but she needs to adapt to the new place that she is in. Saeng misses the old memories of her homeland “A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eyes now swept over her.” But, she begins to realize that not everything has changed, same things are still familiar. “overhead, a flock of canada geese flew by, the faint honrs clears and –yes- familiar to Saeng now.” When Saeng realizes that not everything has changed she gained the strength to continue her new life in her new country.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7128,3,"The setting affect the cyclist because in the hot heat of California in June which nobody wants to be outside. But first, was the heat which took a lot out of his body while trying to keep it cool. Then came the factor of which he had very little water when he reached the first town and in the story it said, “A tar like substance oozed out, followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” So now he has no cool water to drink when he says, “Not two miles into the next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” So the cyclist has very little water is not having to endoor the hardest part of the ride. Then later on he makes a mention to change a paragraph if he loss consciousness. Also he talked about him might getting a heatstroke. Hinting to the fact that the setting he was in was affecting him in many different ways.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3751,2,"Let your mind wander to a place of peace and tranquility. You are in a world of endless possiblities. To each side of you lies a vast collection of diverse adventures and anecdotes. You are in a library where each book holds the key to a door of knowledge and adventure. Looking for an adventure of your own, you drift down each section searching for the one suitable to your liking. Turning the corner, your eyes suddenly glance over to some books and magazines with provocative and inappropriate pictures on them that are blatantly out in the open for anyone to gaze upon. Quickly turning your eyes from the unfortunate meeting of offensive pictures, you race down the hallway to a different section. You think to yourself how unecessary those images were, now scarred into your mind. In most libraries, you will find anything you are looking for that can be contained within the confines of a book. I believe that because libraries are used by everyone of all different ages, races, and genders, that some censorship should be put into effect. Some of the content found in libraries should be censored due to a diverse group of people in the world with different views, opinions, and morals. This censorship is @CAPS1 narrowed down to just inappropriate images, but religious, political, and cultural innuendo as well. Censorship should be evident in all sections of the library. I do @CAPS1 think that certain books should necessarily be removed from the shelf because of violation of rights to speech which includes written speech as well. I do, however, think that they should be sectioned off and clearly marked to warn unwanting eyes and ears of the material found there. Libraries are one of the number one resources when researching, reading, or gaining information and knowledge. Most everyone has used, uses, or will use a library in their life. This includes children and families. Children do @CAPS1 need to be experiencing, learning about, or exposed to some of the content and material found in libraries. I do @CAPS1 think the books should be removed from the shelves, but put somewhere else where a child could @CAPS1 find it. Children have rapidly developing minds and are sometimes defined by the images that they are exposed to. Something a child sees is more commonly and easily remembered for a longer time than if an adult would see that. This shows that it is @CAPS1 good for a child to see such offensive things. Censorship, in regard to moving the books to a new location where a child can @CAPS1 stumble upon it, is the best choice. Another reason that I believe that the books should @CAPS1 be removed completely, but rather taken somewhere else in the library, is because that everyone has the right to express their opinions and feelings toward a subject. Also, others have the right to express their opinions toward another's thoughts. Just because you find something offensive doesn't give you the right to take that away from someone. I think that if a person so desires such things and feels the need to read about them, then they have the right and the choice to do that. Although, people who do @CAPS1 want to see that should also have the choice to have that somewhere where they will @CAPS1 come across it. This is why the books should @CAPS1 be out in the open for all to see, but taken to a secluded section. In conclusion, the best solution when dealing with offensive material found in libraries is to @CAPS1 remove it completely, but section it off from everything else and allow exclusive access to only those who so desire such material. Everyone should have a choice and a right to see or @CAPS1 to see certain material they might find offensive. In doing so, the library, I believe, will become a better environment to all those who wish to access and use it. More people will use it and the library will then appeal to everyone.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 792,1,"Computers are good for school uses, skills, and just for fun. Computers are a good source to have, now that is just my opinion. But, I think computers are mostly for pre-teens and teenagers. Adults mostly use them for business. The fun uses that the computer provides are @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, etc. @CAPS1 is one of the most popular chat groups on the internet, @CAPS2 is another popular chat group. They both have some of the same characteristics like chatting to your friends, updating your status every now and then uploading pictures, songs, etc. There are websites that could be used for free time like music websites where you are allowed to watch music videos or downlosd music onto your ipod. @CAPS3 is a website teenagers of kids go on to watch some of their favorite music videos. Itunes is the program where you can download any song, music video, tv show, or movie onto and ipod. Computers also provide microsoft @CAPS5, publicher, powerpoint, etc. All these can be used for school purposs. @CAPS5 allows you to type up anything you want for school. You can type up a @NUM1 page essay if you wish. You can cut and paste pictures for a project you might have due. You can change the colors, font size, and font style on @CAPS5. That use could be for a design on the front of a cover page for an essay or project. Publisher can be used for projects as well. In school of you need to make a newspaper, flyers, business cards, etc. publisher alloews you to make them. Powerpoint is a program where you can make different slides in anything. Computers can be put to good use for many different things. If people don't agree with that then they don't understand that computers help children and adults with everyday things. Some kids who have special needs @MONTH1 need the computer to comunicate with others. Computer, I think, are a big help in the world.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 337,1,"Dear Local newspaper, @CAPS1 well @CAPS1 many others, i believe computers are not only good, but beneficial. Computers are advanced our world little by little every day. We all use them for communication, entertainment, and knowledge. Computers are like people with fun to do and things to learn. Computers are beneficial to everyone worldwide. Computers gradually advance communication more and more everyday. It used to be old letters by mail, then it became e-mails, twitter, and facebook. These websites upgrage communication today. Long distance friends can view photos, information, videos, and chat from far away. Some site like @ORGANIZATION2 allow you to instant message your friends. Lastly, video chatting is a new improved way to see a live video of the other person. According to @ORGANIZATION1 @NUM1 more user signed up for web-cams since the beggining of @DATE1. Communication is positively affected by computers. I know you @MONTH1 have fun with sports or nature, but sometimes it is great to get great entertainment for yourself instantly. Computer games only cost about @MONEY1 and are instant access. Also, surfing the web for news or funny videos is fun sometimes. Almost everyone who has a @CAPS2 gets a blast surfing the internet. Do you ever wonder how to hear the song you like when it's not on the radio? Itunes stores, organize, and plays music in a virtual library for permanent access. What also happens is youtube allows you to watch music videos or hear songs for free. Now thats why computers are straight entertainment. Finally, computers provide you with so much knowledge and is great for education. Certain websites let you access tons of knowledge. Wikipedia and diccionary.com are great for learning.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6760,3,"“At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path..” being out in the desert with limited or no water can make one feel like life is very cruel. The sun was beating down and no water or shade is seen when he reaches a point. The sign that said “Rough @CAPS1 ahead; Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” had to be intimidating. Considering he was on a bike he could only move so fast. Those old men probably were never off their front porch since carter was in office. yes like the writer said “the world is a fluid place. Things change.” The old men probably had close to no due what they were talking about considering things have changed since @NUM1 (when carter was in office). The snake that he came upon, must have been rather intimidating. Knowing there is a creature like that, there is bound to be more. In eseance I think the setting was a major part why the cyclist felt that way",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12205,5,"In the memoir @ORGANIZATION1 gives a loving and caring mood to the readers. I think this because whe he describes certain things, like his parents, he would add a loving and caring feeling. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will never foreget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That sentence indicates how much he Loved his parents for doing that. Also in paragraph @NUM2 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" that indicates how apriciative he was. Also this memoir gives a grateful and thankful mood because it makes you think about the people and family members that had loved and sacrificed for you. That is why I think the memoir @ORGANIZATION1 gives off loving and caring mood to the readers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1585,1,"Do the members of this well-known and captivating newspaper think that the effects of people owning a computer are good or bad? Well, if you think negatively about computers and how they effect people, I would like to politely disagree. I'm certain I could sway you to agree with me too. Computers are positive for many reasons. The internet and other resources can be used for school, work, and other questions, the computer gives people something to do when otherwise they have nothing, and it allows people to talk to others online. There are many great effects computers have on and for people. Everybody has questions, wouldn't you agree? And more often than not, people don't know the answer right off the top of their head. Research is the key to answering questions. But who has time to go to the library and spend hours searching for an answer that would take a matter of seconds to find on the computer? Not every student, employee, or other person can spend that time looking for an answer. There are far too many other things to do! The internet on the computer allows people to find an answer quickly. This can actually improve people's knowledge, and their performance at work or school. You can see here the positive effects of a computer. Have any of you ever been bored? I'm certain that you have. Everyone gets bored. Instead of sitting around doing nothing, people can go on the computer and to many activities. Contrary to some people's beliefs, this can be an excellent way to spend, not waste time. There are all sorts of educational games and mind-buggling puzzles to do on the computer. I'm certain you can see how much better these things are than sitting in front of the. The effects are positive, because your brain is challenged, and your boredom has vanished. Also, hand-eye coordination can be greatly improved by doing activities. These are so many positivities about the computers effect in people's boredom! People have friends, and it is only human to want to keep in close contact with them. But what if a close friend moves away? You don't want to lose that friendship right? People can write letters to each other, but that can be time consuming, and show to delivery and response. And the positive effect of a computer is it allows you to keep in contact online with friends and family instant messaging and email. both great resources for talking with others. Computers can keep friends together and save families from drifting apart. It is also good for couples or parents to keep in touch with their partner or children if they are away. These are all positive effects don't you agree? As you can see, I feel strongly that the computer has positive effects on people. It's good for research, it's something to do when someone is truly bored, and it enables friends and family to stay close via online communication. I strongly urge you to change your opinion from negative to positive about the effects of computers. Everyone can choose their own opinions. but I know you'll prove wise and agree with me!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9213,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus,” written by Minfong Ho, the author concludes the story with that paragraph to sum it at all up. The author used this to keep the reader wondering too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 284,1,"Dear @STATE1 news, Computers are a great machine to use. People can research, learn about any topic or subject and let people talk to friends online I think that computers have a good effect on people. Computers are one of the great inventions we have. They are very helpul in our everyday life. When people need to write a paper for school or do a project you can research what you need if you need to know some thing about, a topic that you don't know about, you can look up questions you have about it on the internet. If your writing a paper and need an answer its all on the internet. Suppose you want to go on a family vacation to california you can plan your whole trip right on your computer, you can book a flight, get a hotel room and even see what there is to do you can see the whole world right from your computer. If you want to learn another language you can learn an entire language on your computer. Also if your to busy to go to collage or want to take another class there are even schools online. The computer is a great way to learn about new things. Finally you can talk to friends online websites like facebook and myspace are great ways to keep in touch with your friends. naother positive way is @CAPS1 you can instant message friends and family without having to wait so long for a response back. If you want your friends you can just message them. I think that computers have a positive effect on people. They are helpul in many ways such as people can do research, learn about new things and talk to friends I hope, you see my point at view they are samething everyone should have.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11900,5,"In ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the author Narciso Rodriguez, write a memoir about his childhood. In the story he thanks his parent for thier courage in coming to @LOCATION1. As well as his cuban upbringing. He describes how thier house was always full with family and friend and how there was always a big cuban feast and cultural music playing. Finally, Narciso depicts how his community that he lived in was unity and strong even though they did not have the same heritage or background.The mood in which Narciso creates his memoir is very upbeat. He never says anything negative about his family, friend, or community. Narciso is constantly thanking his parents for his heritage and thier will to give him a better life. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1, Narciso uses parentheses to give more background information.Narciso's memoir was a very heart felt story. It made me feel like even through hard times people can find the good in things. This story makes me think of my dad because when things go wrong he can always make a joke or find the bright side of the story.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10549,4,In guessing that it means that when winter or spring or whatever its harder to grow that garden. Also mabe its a challenge of some sort to make the garden grow by that time of year. So I would assume thats what its talking about with it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12567,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is that every time he talks about his new home his mood changes. For example paragraph @NUM1 rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day). Every time there is parentheses means that the mood of the story changes when he talks about his life in cuba and the new life here in america. He is grateful that he is in america and that his parents left cuba where they had a better life.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6918,3,"In the story “Rough Road ahead; Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” a cyclist is faced with many problems. It’s really hot out, practically a desert and its in June. Just knowing that makes me want some water. Also this cyclist is running short of water and still hasn’t got to the place he needs to be. The roads are hills and bumpy which make it harder for him. Those are the problems this cyclist is faced with.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12988,5,"In this paragraph I'm going to tell you the mood created by the author in the memoir I just read. One mood that the author had was happy. The reason why I said that is because everytime he spoke about being Cuban or about his family, he spoke with this joy or pride in his voice. Also when he was talking about Spanish, Italian and Cuban all like being a family. Another mood he had was kind of sad. The reason why I say that is because when he was talking about how he couldn't his a real grandparents until 1970. He sounded a little deppressed about that. I also feel that he is a very happy man for the rest of the memoir. Those are the moods that I think the author created during the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9618,4,"The author chooses to end the story with such a paragraph as this in order to show that Saeng has received a new burst of hope from her memories and the newly familiar things in her new home. The combination of the failed driver’s test and being away from her original home caused Saeng to feel much loss. While Saeng is in the flower shop, “aware of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eyes now swept over her. “Through the rest of the story Saeng is shown to still be down, and the reader is left unsure if she will be alright. Then her recovery begins with the presence of familiar things. “The pungent small of bitter melon wafted out, and Saeng’s mouth watered,”, “The winter hibiscus’ was in the ground now”, and, “overhead a flock of Canada geese flew by, their faints honks clear and – yes – Familiar to Saeng now.” This realization that the geese are familiar to her gives way to new realization and a new wave of hope. She recognizes the fact that she is now coming to be familiar with many of the things about her new hone that she had initially thought to be strange. This is what the final paragraph explains to the reader. It summarizes Saeng’s newfound hope that she will learn to not just live in her new home, but to thrive in it. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10207,4,"The author concludes the story with the quote, “when they come back in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, the I will take that test again,” to show that she is encouraged by the memories of her homeland. For example, in the story it stated that she realized that many things were similar to things in her homeland. As the seasons went by she discovered the similarities. The spring time reminded saeng of her home, so when at comes she will be motivated to take the test again. In conclusion, the author included the quote to show how she is encouraged by memories of her homeland.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21308,8,"During the @DATE1 I decided to join @ORGANIZATION2, I raised a market pig and was determined to sell it at the @LOCATION1. Raising a pig was time consuming and hard work. Without patience, great teachers, and having fun I wouldn't have been able to do it. That @DATE1 I had some great experiences and some of them, not so great. This was my first time being involved with @ORGANIZATION2, also my first time raising a pig. I never thought that I would have so many awkward moments. One of my awkward, yet funny moments happened when I was shoveling pig poop with my friend @ORGANIZATION1. This was also @ORGANIZATION1's first time being involved with @ORGANIZATION2 and raising a pig. @ORGANIZATION1 and I were just trying to hurry and get our work finished so that we could go back to our homes and shower. Turns out I was in to much of a hurry. My boots sank into the mud and poop which made me lose my balance, I tried using the shovel to catch my self but it was too late. I was covered in pig poop and mud from head to toe, I had fallen in it. @ORGANIZATION1 and I looked at each other for what seemed to be two minutes, but was only about six seconds, then we busted out in laughter. After our laughing was under control she helped me get up and we went to go find our agriculture teacher @PERSON1. When @PERSON1 saw my once blue pants now brown, he couldn't help but laugh at me. He got his camera out and took some picture of me that are very embarrassing but make myself and others smile. After all the joking, laughing, and pictures were finished @PERSON1 gave some old clothes to wear for my ride home. I had to roll the window down because the car got pretty smelly. When I arrived home, I headed straight for the shower. This is an experience I will never forget. If I didn't have friends around me I don't think I would have thought of the experience as something positive and funny. Because @PERSON1 and @ORGANIZATION1 were there to help me and laugh with me, I got some pretty fun memories out of that @DATE1 raising a pig. Without the laughter it might of been a little negative, I might have been mad, or embarrassed, or sad. Laughter is an important element to have in a positive healthy lifestyle.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 167,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 are beinging questioned if the are good for our society or not. I would have to say that they are good and bad you really can't pick a side. These good because children and teens can get the information they need to teach in school, it allows people to chat with others in different places, and it helps hand-eye cordanation. Those were the good here are some bad things about compters. People spend to much time on the computer instead of exercising, they dont' get to enjoy nature, and people stop interacting with friends and family. Anyone can pick a side. I just can't, because i can relate to both sides. For example. one of the good reasons about computers was that you can chat's with other people around the world. I can relate to that because when i live here in @CAPS2 @CAPS3 my mom and stepdad live in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2 so i don't see them much but thanks to computer i can chat. With them when ever i want to. Honestly i wouldn't know how my life would be like if i didn't have a computer and i wasn't able I @CAPS4 now. Although, can also to one or the bad things about computers, which is that people spent to much time on the them. I can relate to that and so could of the other well, because when i around @NUM1 because go to a after school, go straight on my laptop and around @NUM2. When my grandma @NUM3 pm. She always comes in and ""Your on that thing to much you your hands!"" in her. So in my opinion I believe that coumpters can be good for our socity and bad; for me there is no side to take. Others might feel the same way, and others @MONTH1 not. It's up to them to make a choice, so ask your self,"" @CAPS4 you believe that computers are good or bad for our society?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 2991,2,"Yes and no, some materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc, should be voted upon the citizens to be removed from shelves. I do think that some materials in those catagories should be removed if they are offensive to me as well as others, but it will take a long while to get them removed from stores and other places if other people like them. I do not like how they make some music to be very violent and cause minds of most teenagers to turn bad and start selling drugs on the street of their hometown, but i can't do anything about that because that kind of music is admired by those teenagers as well as some adults too. If some people can buckle down and see that stuff like that will mess up lives of teenagers and some adults who fall victim to it, then there is a chance that it can be stopped. Stopping things like this will save a community from disaster and cause other good chances in life for people in need for those chances. Here's another example, like this music artist named @CAPS1 @CAPS2. She has made some great songs for the past year and a half now. People have told me that she is part of a group called @CAPS3 and its a group where they try to I think 're-birth' thereselves. My friends wanted me to stop listening to her music. I told my friends that I do not like the fact that she joined this group, but that doesnt mean im gonna stop listen to her music. Now if she makes a song that is offensive to me and as well as my friends, then that where I draw the line. What im saying is that if people don't have others to back them up if something is highly offensive to them and oblivious to others, it will be very hard trying to prove yourself in the best way possible.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4119,2,"I feel that books, music, movies, and magazines should not be removed from shelves. Just because some one @MONTH1 finds them offensive. They only become offensive when people think they are. I feel this way because no one is forcing any ony to watch or read any thing they dont want to. No one is telling sudents what they can and can't watch or read. Every one has the choice. To choose what they want to read or watch. what one person @MONTH1 find offensive and wrang. Another person. @MONTH1 find interesting and exiting. I have felt the same way before, but that still gives me no resone to take it off the shelf. The next person after me. Has as much the same right as I did. The person has the right to watch or read what I have. To like or hate what ever is on the shelves. There are lots of things in a @CAPS5. Other than things that people @MONTH1 find offensive. There are scary books like '@CAPS1 @CAPS2.' @CAPS3 @ORGANIZATION2 best selling auther, @PERSON2. There are mistury books like 'The @ORGANIZATION1.' @CAPS3 another @ORGANIZATION2 best selling auther, @PERSON1. So to some up my esay. Nothing sould be taken off @CAPS5 shelves. Just because i or any one else finds them offensive",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9914,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus,” the author concludes the story with, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. The author’s reasoning for saying this is because the presence of memories from Saeng’s homeland comforts her. So much that they she will pass her test with ease because she will not be nervous. “it was like walking into another world,” said Saeng, when she entered the florist shop, after failing her drivers test. It was almost as if she completely forgot about failing and was only thinking about the plants, flowers. The flowers take her to a happy peace and make her feel at home. Like everything is going to be alright. This is why the author concludes with such a sentence because us as readers should show memories of her farmland will help her pass her drivers test. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13396,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez is very grateful for his parents. The overall mood is happy and very grateful. It is happy and grateful because his parents came from Cuba and started a new life in @LOCATION1, but they made their house to look like a regular Cuban home. He is also very proud. Hw is proud of his Cuban background and culture. He is also happy his parents kept their homes open to everybody. He is grateful for his parents sacrifice and love. Those are the overall moods of the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4244,2,"I believe that everyone's opinion deserves to be publicized fairly. Just because one person's view is considered to be right, doesn't mean another is wrong. What is offensive to one person @MONTH1 be informative to another. I've read a lot of books that parents @MONTH1 not pick out for their children. In reading these books I see that there is no glamour in doing drugs or getting in trouble with the law. For some teens, books like these can show them the side of life they haven't experienced and find that they never want to. If a book is too explicit for children, simply place the book in another section. I realize that there are books with graphic sexual details, and those should only be premitted to be checked out by adults. Parents should have concerns about their children's innocence. But I also believe that they should watch over what type of books they're reading too monitor the vulgarity of them. Some @CAPS1 contain profanity or sexual induendoes, some contain praise and worship, others even have screaming. Any of thses type of musics can be found offensive by someone. That doesn't mean to run off and hide all of them. There'd be no @CAPS1 left. Not everyone shares the same opnions in this world, therefore there should be equal opportunity for people to read,watch, or listen to whatever suits them. I'm not saying that there should be a stock of porn in the library, but if there are movies or books about shunned religions or beliefs then they should be just as welcomed as the ones about common religions and beliefs. Everyone finds different things offensive. If there was a bible in the library and someone found it offensive, should it be removed? It's one of the most popular books in the world, yet some people still find offense by it. Someone who is mormon, muslim, or athiest might find offensive if there is nothing in the library about them because some people find it offensive. The library is a place of knowledge, not judgement. I dont't believe that certain books should be removed from the library if they offend someone. If you don't like something that is at the library, don't rent it. If you don't want your children to, don't let them. Simple as that. Everyone is entiled to freedom of speech. Authors express themselves through books and articles, directors through movies, and musicians through their music.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12444,5,"The mood of the memoir is one of greatfulness and of @CAPS1. This is because the auothor, Narciso Rodriguez says, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" In this quote is saying straigh up how he feels, which is grateful. You can also tell that he is implying that he loves his parents. Another quote that supports my main idea is The author says, ""... There is no way to express my gratitude..."" In this quote, just like the last one the author is saying directly how he feels, which is again greatful. In conlcusion the author uses effective techniques to trap the reader in his mood, which is greatful and @CAPS1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15461,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One issue was the violent air currents that were at the top of the building. Even if the dirigibles successfully docked at the top of the building the back end of it would be thrashing around from the wind. If this happened and the blimp became uncontrollable it could crash into another building and fall to the ground where all the downtown New @CAPS1 walk. Putting weights on the end of the blimp would help that situation but as @CAPS2 says, ""dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using these at the Empire State building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe."" Another issue the builders faced was the fact that dirigibles were highly flammable. They learned their lesson and got it into their heads that their idea might not be so good after when the German blimp, the Hindenburg, was destroyed. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6305,3,"The setting it the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” in three ways. One way is that it is very baren so there is no shade to stop the sun that is beating down the the cyclist body which adds to his dehydration and lack of to focus. Another way the setting affects the cyclist is the terrain the rolling hills, and desert he bikes through the hills make him work harder using up more energy and exsusaing his ater supply the desert also with it enemies heat make his not trust himself thinks there mirages he sees. The last way it affects him is the ghost towns when he sees them he get a hope of relief that he might get water and out the heat but when he passes in he finds nothing and leaves him chrested and think of death.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13543,5,"I think the mood created by the author was very warm, greatful and happy. I think this because he often expresses how his parents sacrificed a lot of things and made his childhood ful of joyous memories. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" In many paragraphs he explains how he admires them for their strength and perseverance in moving from Cuba to @LOCATION1. I also said happy because he is happy that his childhood was so memorable. ""Innocence of childhood... endless celebrations."" This shows me that he enjoyed the parties and being a kid. (growing up in that household.) This is why I think the mood is so grateful and happy.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20942,8,"A @ORGANIZATION1 is a wondrous gift. It allows your mind and your body to conjoin with others. It is the root of happiness, and brings a sense of sanity to those who have lost hope. When you feel alone in the world with no one at your side, laughter will be there to accompany you. At one point in my life I felt confused and by myself. I was empty. Solitude was the only thing I could have, and the only feeling my mind would register. Just when I had thought that I @MONTH1 be the only person in the whole world, something had come to save me. I was six years old when they got divorced. I couldn't stand to hear my parents fight. One day we were the perfect family. We would play board games and go to the movies together. Something had changed very quickly. My @CAPS1 grabbed his jacket, told me he loved me and then he was gone. Was I ever going to see him again? Why isn't @CAPS1 living with us? These are questions I kept asking myself. I think i was too young to truly know what was going on. The days were long and I found myself becoming sluggish and glum. About two weeks after my @CAPS1 had left, some neighbors moved into the house adjacent to me and my mom. One of the neighbors looked young, about my age. I didn't think much of the new people in town. I told myself that people come and go. Nothing lasts forever, and I should expect the worst. One day I was riding my bike and thought that I should stop pedaling and crash into my fence. I hit the metal fence and simply fell over. I heard a laugh and turned around. It was the new neighbor kid. There he was rolling on the ground, grabbing at his sides. He must have thought of my crash as entertainment. I picked up my bike, began to move, then crashed once more. Another series of laughs sprang from this boy. That was the first time I had smiled in a long time. I grew fond of whatever feeling or humor I was giving off to this new kid. I asked the boy his name and he didn't respond; though he did start to laugh again. It was my voice that he was laughing at. Everything I did caused him to become hysterical. I found out later that he was from @LOCATION1 and didn't speak a word of @CAPS2. Over the course of a month or so, I felt the hole in my heart begin to fill. My new companion and his laugh was the start to my new beginning. My mom and I eventually moved out of our house and lost contact with the neighbors. I am always reminded of him when I hear a laugh. Though he's not near me in a physical sense, I am guided by his laughter every day.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13572,5,"The author creates a very warm mood and inviting mood that makes you want to feel relaxed and comfortable. Here are the ways he creates it. He describes the kitchen and how his family loves to cook and entertain. He says that his parents have welcomed refugees to stay at the house that sets a welcomeing mood and that the parents care for their friends and family. To his family the word ""family"" means anyone it's important to remember that because a family could be anyone. That's how the author sets the mood.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14998,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building's mast were confronted with many obstacles to overcome. Firstly, the builders had to compensate for the stress a docked airship would place on the building. According to @CAPS1, ""the stress... would be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" As a result, the building's steel frame would need to be modified to accommodate the load. Another obstacle faced by the builders were the weather conditions at that height: ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Any airship attempting to dock there would be violently buffeted around by the wind. Finally, there was the obstacle of safety. As @CAPS1 states, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is extremely flammable."" @CAPS3 of a Hindenburg-type accident over a densely populated area gave pause to the builders. In conclusion, the builders had to face several huge obstacles, which combined eventually doomed the project.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19256,7,"One time when I was patient was when I was fishing. We where fishing on a cold night and no fish where bighting,. I was just @CAPS1 ther being patient caling sun flower seeds. My dad was getting mad and I was still @CAPS1 listning to the backeasard celtcs games. We where only catching little fish that night nuthing to eat or keep. We left at like one in the morning and went to get the boat on the tralor and I was pitch black and cold. I eventually had to get in the water and put the boat on and strap it down. On the way home one bentt traler tire popod ahead five miles away from home. I was still patient but my dad wasent. We stopped and whent out to look at the tire. We didn’t have a spare so we drove home on our rim. that is the most patient I have ever been. To @CAPS2 this writing sample she could have explaned what a millennium is. That would make things more clear. Also she could stop useing I to start most of her sentences. That would make it more instening. In the third sentence she put were instead of was. That would make her sound smarter and get a better grade. In the second paragraph I dont know I she ment @TIME1. or @TIME1. If she said if it was a.m. or p.m. It would make the story more clear. If she corrected all those this would be a good sample.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9894,4,The reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is becaus now she has something to work for. The author could have also put this concludes the story with this paragraph becaus she must wait that long till she can take it again also Saeng could wait to wait to see the plant grow and get bigger and stronger. They are reasons why i think the author put that conclude with the paragraph.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12220,5,"The mood in the memoir is basicly showing love, happiness, and friendship. The way that the mood shows love is in @CAPS1 @NUM1 and @NUM2. In @CAPS1 @NUM1 is says Alegria graced our kitchen table for meals more often than not. In @CAPS1 @NUM2 it talks about how his parent welcome refugees to celebrate their arrival to @LOCATION1. Happiness was shown throughout the story. And friendship was shown as well The way that friendship was shown by his parents keeping their door open to whom who did not have a home. But let them stay in their home until their back on he or she is back on there feet, and considerd part of the family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 117,1,"Dear Local Newspaper: @CAPS1 you think computers are great for everyone? I think computers are one of the greatest inventions ever. What's really great about them is how much you can learn from computers. You can learn hand-eye coordination, learn about faraway places, and talk online to people. Surely, read on to see why computers are very important to us all. Many people think that computers are bad for our mind, but actually they're not. When on computers you can learn hand-eye coordination. You can be able to type well and very fast after a while and improve your eye sight by reading your writing or notes for a paper. Lastly, you can even have fun, relax, and type out your papers for reports. Definitely, read on to see what computers can @CAPS1 too. They're a lot of faraway places that have their own specil way of showing you a great time. On the internet, that have a list of vacation spots or places that grab your attention to visit. They give you details on why to visit it and a fair price. Think about it, would it be cool to visit a great place, like @LOCATION1. Without a doubt, continue reading. Have you ever wanted to play outside but it was raining or your friends were not around. Well, on the computer you can talk online to your friends. You can see how their doing or what their doing and still have a good time. Not to mention, you can even make new friends. Lots of kids and teens go online to make new friends. Surely, you should agree that computers are great. I think computers are very unique and important. That's why so many kids to adults use it the computers so much. They use it to learn hand-eye coordination, learn about faraway places, and talk online to other. Thank you for reading my paper local newspaper.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19020,7,"When me and my dad were inline for the kencer hauck at @LOCATION1 adventures! I had to wait patiently to get on. The line was massive so many people ??? of us and it was shocking that so many ??? ??? in line for this roller coaster we waited for what seemed like hours was only minutes, and as we got closer it was getting hard to be patient. Finally we got on the ride and it was on the ride and it was insane so waiting for those minutes that seemed like hours ??? rewarded with a ??? ???",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13606,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, Narciso mood in the memoir seemed happy and grate. Narciso's mood sound happy because when he was telling us (readers) about his life growing up in Newark, New Jersey and explaining how his house was he was saying how his landlord and daughter nice and how the landlord's daughter was his first friend, and he was also saying how his family and friends were very close. In the neighborhood it was despite customs elsewhere, all of the cultures came together in great solidarity (happiness) and friendship. His mother and father made the house cozy and at the end of the memoir the author said ""I will never forget how his parents turned their simple house into a home meaning that he never had a home like the one he lived in now.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12978,5,"This passag has a very calm and happy mood. He is looking back on his childhood and the memories. He talked about the cheerful house, people and neighborhood. You could picture the house and smell the aromas. Narciso set a very nice setting and tone that the entire passage was lifted in energy. You could tell he was passionate about what she was writing. He showed a real admiration for his childhood and the people he shared it with. The way he felt about her childhood was potrayed beautifully in this piece and that really helped the reader get into the happiness and community like feel. Her gratefullness potrayed into the mood and made the entire piece fun to read.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16216,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building was not easy. They had to draw out the plan for the mooring mast. The builders had to think about the thousand-foot dirigible that would be mooring at the top of the Empire State Building. They had to think about the wind pressure and of the load of the dirigible. The builders had to come up with brilliant ideas. The ideas were ""a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower"" (@CAPS1 paragraph @NUM1) on top of the building. Builders had to build and think of the elevators and stairs to bring the passengers of the dirigible to the eighty-sixth floor. The eighty-sixth floor had baggage and tickets. They would come from the one hundred second floor. The builders had a hard job because they had to think of ideas on how to build the mooring mast of the building They also had to think about, how to bring the passengers in and out of the dirigible. The builders faced obstacles as the construction of the building was in process.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7661,3,"The setting of the desert is a hard setting to be in with no water or help. If the author would have been on a population trait with water fountain and shade, he would have been fine. But, he was in the desert no one around, hot, dry, no water, and no shade. ”tumbleweeds crossed my path“ (@CAPS1 @NUM1). This dicride his loneleness because no one was in the desert to help him. The setting could have killed him if it was not for the fish camp. The setting had a huge affected on the author.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3990,2,"Censorship is a tough topic to discuss. Everyone has different views on what is and isn't acceptable in libraries, because of the content in some books, music, movies, and magazines. When you start to censor what information is available to certain people, they get angry, and it can cause an uproar of protest. There should be an age limit on some materials however. So how can you tell what is okay for younger children and teens to view? For movies, music, and magazines, there are already limitations on how old you have to be to buy or rent them. With movies, the rule in libraries should be the same as anywhere else. It should be that you must be seventeen to get anything rated @CAPS1. I'm not sure what the age is to view unrated movies is, but for libraries it shoulld be the same as anything else. Anything else, should be open to all ages. Music is also a controversial material to censor. If a @CAPS2 has an explicit label on it, you should have to be eighteen to check it out. The reason being, is that some music can contain violent lyrics, and unless you are eighteen you shouldn't listen to it. When you hear music that is offensive to you, you must be smart enough to not listen to it. Anything any artist wants to say on a @CAPS2 can be recorded, and children should not be exposed to that until they are responsible enough to know what they should, and sometimes shouldn't be listening to. Printed materials are the hardest to censor. Personally, i don't believe any book should be kept from anyone. The only type of book that should be kept from some people is magazines. Once again, magazines can contain some graphic content, and should only be kept from anyone under eighteen. There are just some things kids shouldn't see, but if you are a legal adult, and want to read any kind of book, it should be available to you. With any of these materials, it should all be available to you in a library. It is a place to learn about how a writer, a movie director, a music artist, or magazine editor feels about the world. If we censor the material in a library, it is denying the public of the real world. Also, we would be revoking the right given to us of free speech. I do not make fun of books because I know whatever someone writes down, in their eyes, is the truth. It is an expression of self, and to stop someone's work from being available to the world, you are taking away the right of free speech.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13579,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is made up of happeness, love, and lastly respect for his parents, whitch shows how the mood is actually peaceful. In the memoir the author stated memeries of his neighborhood that was good. The authors stated about how the cultures formed together, helped each other and worked hard to make a living as well is a future for their kids, which shows his respect for his friends and family. The author states his gratitude toward the hard ships his parents went through for him and for the dream of a better tomorrow.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16513,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, written by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders faced obsticles in attempting to allow dirigible to dock at the Empire State Building. One obsticle the builders faced was that they had to modify the buildings framework in order to install the mooring mast. The builders had to modify the building because ""a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame. ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure wood have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation, which was eleven hundred feet below."" That was another obsticle the builders faced. Also, the mooring mast never fulfilled its purpose because of safety. Hydrogen is highly flammable. The biggest obsticle was nature. The winds were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The idea was neither practicle nor safe.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19247,7,In my opinion being patient is when your waiting your turn for some thing. And being impatient means not writing your turn. In your whole life you have patientence because sometimes you might just have to wait. I have patience and I know a lot of people who have patience to. I was raised to have patience when your doing something don’t rush because you can mess up. Don’t go way to slow because then people will think you don’t know how to do it. You can just go at your paste so you can get it done right and the way you want to. People who don’t have patience aren’t always happy all the time.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8907,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the author wrote the same thing that it had in the paragraph and he wrote it in his story but added a little more details to it and problems and things.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19435,7,"“@CAPS1 another @NUM1 days ill be on my way to cedar point. I wonder what we’ll do when we first get there? What will end up being my favorite ride? Maybe I can talk my mom into going on the trip @NUM1 days early?” “@CAPS2 mom” said @PERSON1. “@CAPS3” said her mother.” “@CAPS4 we @CAPS1 go to ???? point now?” “@CAPS5 sweetie our tickets are for on @DATE1 your @CAPS1 going to have to be patient.” “ok i’ll do my best.” “ata girl”! As @PERSON1 was on her way up to her room she was thinking that maybe if she tried getting her mind off of it she would forget. So to do this she called her friend @CAPS6 to see if she wanted to come over. @CAPS6 said @CAPS3! “@CAPS7” went the doorbell. “@CAPS2 @CAPS6 wanna go play in my room?” “or”. @CAPS10 that night @CAPS6 went home and @PERSON1 wentt to bed. @NUM3 days @CAPS10. Only one more day to ???go!” @CAPS10 that night @PERSON1 went to bed around @NUM4 to get a good sleep ??? the trip. But to @ORGANIZATION1 suprice she wake up @CAPS1 a couple hours @CAPS10. She was so excited she couldn’t sleep! She finally fell asleep, and they left early the next morning.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18686,7,"There was a new restaurant opening in town! He really wanted to go so his family went. It had opened @NUM1 minutes ago. They didn’t think there was going to be a line. They got there and they didn’t see any cars in the drive thru. They went through the drive through which started at the back of the restaurant. Then they say about @NUM2 cars. He was really mad. They were about to leave and then there were @NUM3 cars behind them, so they stayed in line. Since it was a new restraunt everyone was picking their food very slowely. They where also making the food very slowely. Then people started yelling, “@CAPS1 up,” they where also honking their horns but he was the only who wasn’t honking his horn. They where waiting for @NUM2 minutes and @NUM1 had gone @CAPS3. He was starving and he still was being very patient. He usually is not patient. He was very excited to eat at the new restraunt. When it was his turn the cashier said, “@CAPS2 you for being very patient.” @CAPS3 the time they got their food it took @NUM6 hour. The food wasn’t even good! He showed a lot of patience that day. He didn’t honk his car horn and he wasn’t yelling. He had stayed in the car @NUM6 hour and he was starving. It is a great thing to have patience.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16522,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was the stress on the building from the dirigible. The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have had to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation which was @NUM1 feet below. So the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened Another obstacle was that most dirigibles from outside the U.S use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The third obstacle was the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would move around uncontrollably. Lastly, the last obstacle with the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. These are the many obstacles that builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16514,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems while trying to allow dirigibles to dock on the mask. One obstacle involved dropping ""A mooring mask on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof"" (paragraph @NUM1). If they had done this, the mask would have added a great amount of stress to the building's foundation. As a result, the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened but this was too costly. Another obstacle the use of hydrogen rather than helium in foreign dirigibles. Hydrogen is a highly flammable gas and if a dirigible had accidently caught on fire, a great amount of damage could be caused. However, the greatest obstacle involved the harsh wind current on top of the Empire State Building. Even if the dirigible was ""Tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around"" (paragraph @NUM2). The use of lead weights to anchor the dirigible down while ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe"" (paragraph @NUM2). In conclusion, while building the mast on the Empire State Building, the architects and builders faced many obstacles.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1265,1,"Dear editors, I was planning on taking a trip to @LOCATION1. I found directions within a second using a computer. Computers are great, people friendly pieces of equipment, but as technology evolves, people are beginning to rely on their computers for entertainment. Some people @MONTH1 disagree, but there are many outdoor activities that are more healthy then sitting around on the computer all day such as socializing, the great-outdoors, and other on sports. Familiar with @CAPS1 is a great program for socializing but there are many stronger dangers. Did you know that anybody can view your profile which contains personal info? You don't always have to chat online. Call up a friend and hang out at maybe a local movie theatre. Many people, and I agree, think seeing a movie with their pals is alot more entertaining then playing online chess or any other virtual game with a friend a fan of movies? No problem! go on a walk or a bike ride or walk your dog while riding a bike! There are so many. @ORGANIZATION1 park. What an amazing place to spend your vacation camp outs at @TIME1, bikes during the day, its a wonderful part of nature and the best part of you a park anywhere in the world! Camp out on the weekend place to become closer with your family and friends. Hiking is a popular part of a parks and can be performed by all ages, so go out and spend a weekend in the great outdoors! Not looking at a computer screen. Soccer, baseball, basketball and lacrosse. These are just come of the many fun sports. Out there, and yes, they are certainly fun and healthy. Every town I know about has sport fields where many kids and adults of all ages use. it also a great way to make friends! Get to know them in person and not over the internet. Daily exercise while having fun beats just having fun on a computer. What are you waiting for? Stop reading this article and go out and meet new friends. Visit a local park or play a sport for fun. If I were to name everything to do other than use a computer, it wouldn't fit in this entire newspaper. So go explore!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12892,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir. First, the mood created by the author is that he love to cook, his parents taugh him how and her is eternally gratefull for his parents. Second, his mother and father ""had come to @LOCATION1 with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. they came to give a better life to Narciso @PERSON1, leaving behind their country they loved.""third, he parents had a simple house. They always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love.In summary, this are the mood created by the author.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13001,5,I think in some parts @CAPS1 was happy. And then is other parts @CAPS1 was sad because @CAPS1 is talking about her first house in america. @CAPS1 is happy because @CAPS1 can look back on the memories and be happy.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14849,6,"The @CAPS1 The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, shows the thoughtful, intelligent, yet obstacled ideas of attaching a landing dock to the Empire State building. The obstacles that builders of the Empire State building had to overcome were that wind speeds where the dirigibles would land were too strong and would whip the balloon around like a rag doll. They would ""have to use lead weights"" which would pose another problem, questioning the foundation of the building. The weight of the building also the weight of the lead weights might collapse the structure. The gases they use ""hydrogen and hellium"" make the balloon fly, but hydrogen ""is highly flamable and can't be used in populated areas."" There was ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" @CAPS2 are the obstacles and the reason ""the mooring mast of The Empire State building was destined never to fullfill its purpose"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1545,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I am aware that many people are stateing that people spend too much time on computers and not getting enuff exercise well I have that their are a lot of people useing computers and they are gettiing enuff use. Im going to explane why within the most few paragraphs. First I would like to start off by saying its good that people are into computers and working with them because that books their learning activities and they learn new thinngs and it will help them be sucessfull in life, people play games, cross word puzzles, riddles, and many more. Same use the internet for ingredence, car parts, ect. Next, useing computers is very helpful to the human race because it will effect students school, parents/guardians/teens. It will effect and lots of schools are useing computers now and exspecialy students to do their. It effects parents, beca use it will sucess them in life and help them find jobs, with their jobs. Finally their getting enuff exercise because their going to bed, their eating, they go to school, work, or do something for the day that involves walking. Nobody just sits home and does nothing those days. Theirs always something to do or a place to go. Well I hope you think about what I told you and take it into consideration. Thank you for your time, and just remember your job is done on computer too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21460,8," I am going to tell you a story about when I was a young boy and, how I used to go on long trip with my father because he was a long-haul truck driver. Me and mi dad went many places around the @LOCATION2 all of them being very fun and amazing. And we all had a lot of laughs The one that i liked the most though was when we went to @LOCATION1 that place was so amazing there are so many things to do, as well as so many things to visit. Things that you could just see like the @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 that was pretty cool i thought and all of the monuments. My dad told me to go and see if i could get past security at the @ORGANIZATION1 and i was like nah i am good you can though and i laughed at him; @CAPS1 place that i liked a lot that we went to would have to be @LOCATION3, even though it was very hot and muggy it was still fun. I remember my dad telling us that we had a lot of extra time and that he was going to be taking us to the zoo man was that cool we got to see all of the awesome animals such as the lions, the crocodiles, monkeys, gorillas , and the penguins. It was one of the best trips that my father ever took me on i liked it a lot. One of the funniest memories that i do remember is when we were driving throught the desert and there was this paper in the air and i did not know what it was so i was like, ""dad what is that""? and he says ""that is a falling star"" i was like ""in the middle of the day""? and it took me till about a couple years to figure out what it really was but now i know what it was and i just look back to that day and laugh.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9115,4,"The author shows a willingness to try harder in this story. She states that, “In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” I think the author realizes that she is going to have to adapt. Also, saying that she will wait till the spring, means she is going to try again, and not give up. The author has a sentimental value to. Insince she is waiting for the hibiscus to bud, I believe she is referring that hibiscus to her country. Insince she has left her country, the hibiscus is the closet thing she has to it, and therefore, she will wait with the flower",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 549,1,"Typing and surfing the web @MONTH1 be exciting; however, is it worth the @CAPS1 risks that there are now? Before computers were discovered, human's healthyness is triple than what it is now. Computers can be useful and @MONTH1 have some benefits; on the other hand, they are harmful and they should not be used as often. They have unprofessional websites, they are not helpful when it comes to excercise, and they disturb @CAPS1 individuals privacy. @CAPS1 kids are let onto computers every day and they wonder @ORGANIZATION1 to the websites that the internet has to offer. Consequently, kids end up in inappropriate websites that they are not meant to be on. In fact, @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION1 kids enter unproffesional websites and @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION1 them have no parental vision in the @LOCATION1 alone. Therefore, @CAPS1 kids act up in homes and at school. However kids are not the only ones who are affeted by this. Computers have a disadvantage @ORGANIZATION1 being hacked or virused from uncensored websites. MOreover, computers crash or don't allow use @ORGANIZATION1 computer documents because @ORGANIZATION1 these viruses. Ever since the @ORGANIZATION2 was invented obesity and lack @ORGANIZATION1 exercise in a person's schedule has skyrocketed. A scientist, named @PERSON1 from the @ORGANIZATION1, said,""@CAPS1 computers users have lost their use if muscles, but they have gained to over @MONEY1 @ORGANIZATION1 fat causing a lot @ORGANIZATION1 hem to not be able to do activities they did before."" I believe that this is definitely true because I remember that the same happened to my sister. She ate more and her excercise time was spent more on the computer that on her body. I know that @CAPS1 say that computers help in hand-eye coordination, however, is it really worth more than someones healthy body? @CAPS1 things are sold on the internet that are not in stores, but you don't trust the internet when buying these products. You don't trust the internet because you have heard so much about someone'es identify or money taken away from them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17928,7,One day I went to a concert at @ORGANIZATION1 and there was a very long line. While I was in the line there was this girl who had no patient cause we had to wait in line for @NUM1 1/@NUM1 hours when that time past we all went to get our spots and before we had did that there was this long line again but even longer but it was ok cause I had patients. With all this patients it reminded me of my mom when she went to the doctors office for @NUM3 hours and I had to wait in his waiting room. And also I went to my living room with my mom and she just started talking on the phone and she told me to hold on but my sister kept on interrupting her and I told her you need to hold on and let mom finish talking on the phone so she ran up the stair and she said your stupid punk so I said I don’t care.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12598,5,The mood was happy beacuse most of his family immigrated to @LOCATION1. That him and his parents loved to cook. He loved the smell of the kitchen There family sometimes cooks and to visit them and eat. The auther past was unhappy because they needed to put up with racism.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9316,4,"The author concluded the story with the paragraph ”When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” To show that the character has become a part of her new environment. Just like the environment, she is constantly going through changes, and in the spring when all things that couldn’t be their best during winter begun to thrive, she will too. And when she begins thriving and feels like herself again, then she’ll be ready to take the driving test, and pass. She’ll have returned to her old self like the geese return home when she's done crying like the snow’ s done melting, and when she’s done crying like the snow’s done melting, and when she’s ready to open up, just like the hibiscus begin budding, she’ll be ready to take the test.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1435,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, A recent survey said that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 doctors think the advances we have made with technology and computers is helping us rather than hurting us. I agree that computers are having a positive impact on us. Advances in technology are helping us become more efficiant. Computers also give us the ability to research places and things we @MONTH1 never get the opportunity to see in person. We are also able to talk online with other people who we might have not met otherwise. The most important, though, is our advances in technology. Recently on the news I saw a segment of how at @ORGANIZATION2 they are using robots to make surgery more efficient. This also means that there are smaller incisions being made, so that means a faster recovery. Another part of society that has been advancing is crime solving. Before there were computers, there was no blood testing, no fingerprinting, and most likely no x-rays. Computers made these things much easier for people to accomplish. Computers are also useful for lending us the ability to research far away places or other topics that they @MONTH1 just have. Some people @MONTH1 never have the opportunity to go to places like @LOCATION4 or @LOCATION3, but with the computers it's almost like they have been there. Or maybe is in @CAPS1, but @CAPS1 isn't a very popular sport in @LOCATION2. And then they go on there computer and see that there is a ragby @LOCATION1. Then their problem is solved. When you go to a new country, you also get the opportunity to meet new people. But with computers and online sights like @CAPS2, @CAPS3 or you can talk to virtually anyone in the world. I could be sitting in a chair at my home in @LOCATION2, and be having a conversation with someone across the country, or maybe even across the ocean! Or possibly you could be talking to some of your really close friends who live just across town. Either way, the computer is a convinient place to go and talk to someone. I believe that computers are doing us more good than their harm. Our advances in technology have helped us emensly with things like games and robotic surgery. They also give us the ability to search topics we want to know more about or a faraway place we've never been to. Finally, we are able to talk online with people that @MONTH1 just be across town or across the ocean. I hope that my reasoning helps you understand my point of view.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3704,2,"Do you think that books, music, movies, magazines and other media material in libraries should be censored? Why should information and knowledge be with held from people? Learning is exceptional for not just only the person reading, but also the human race. There are two arguments to cenorship in libraries. I believe in not allowing censorship in libraries. In the @ORGANIZATION1, everyone is given the right of free speech. Taking someones work and blocking it because it is 'unorthodox' or 'offensive' takes away that persons' rights. Also, people go to libraries to find something out. They look for knowledge and taking away a persons' learning capacity can be harmful to everyone. When one article gets censored another artical after that gets censored and soon most material will be 'offensive' and 'unorthodox.' We will take away man kind's capacity to learn. Many reasons support censoring for minor offenses such as: inappropriate language in songs, books, movies, and magazines. Also, obscene graphic material in movies and in magazines. These are small issues that can be blocked and censorships can make a clean version. All minor adjustments and easy to make. Taking media off the shelves is not needed. The material is not serious enough. Minor adjustments can be made so that people can be allowed to read, listen, or watch. A library is made forwhat the people want to learn. Taking that away is very serious.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18813,7,"Be patient a day whn I had to be patient was on my birth day and I was waiting for my dady to give me some money so I can go to the ?? I waited all day until @NUM1, oclock and when he finly agree I got @NUM2, dollars and it was worth being ?? case if I would have he wishing him he would probly had lowerd the price and it would have been my falt so in far ?? last stone wish my mother to ?? me up from football practice and the ?? we wait for a awil and I was wast I was the last are ?? those my envelopes that ?? and I was up under a tree when it was raining and lightnig so I cldnt put in my helmet as it wouldhav ?? me cage held etrest lighting is eanelusoin being ?? is infected was your dad show how that ?? feel or act beides she wouldn’t want have one rushing me unti ther lack around and let them wish cuse if its my cuos its my chance two turn around so if you that type by situation just don’t rush for future ??",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15963,6,"This project towards ""transportation of the future"" for the Empire State Building was no easy task. One of the major obstacles was the ""stress to the building's frame"". The workers had to make over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications to accommodate the dirigibles. This would strengthen the frame of the building so that the wind pressure would be ""transmitted all the way to the building's foundation"". Another issue with this mooring mast was the ""violent air currents"" that were ""constantly shifting"" the winds on the roof. This would cause the dirigible to swing around the building while it was docked. Allowing these giant aircrafts to ""dangle high above pedestrians on the street"" was ""neither practical nor safe. These obstacles caused the workers and architects to postpone the build.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9268,4,The reason why he concludes this with this paragraph is because he is telling how the story ends. The reason behind that is so people know's what happens.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18260,7,"Patience @CAPS3 a sense of tolerance. Having ‘’the patience’’ means that you can wait, it will come to you if you just wait. like when you gobble your food down thinking its going to he stolen, when really, you could have left it there and yet it would still there. Patience @CAPS3 knowing that everything @CAPS3 going to be ok and you have time. Having patience to do somthing, @CAPS3 to take your time, or go at your own pace believing you will finish. Patience @CAPS3 qenrally how long you can wait to do somthing, or even put up with something. Patience could also mean now long you can put up with somthing, like a bully for instance. He or she makes fun you again and again. But how long, how much patience do you have before your just pushed off the edge and you cant take it any more! THAT’@CAPS1 @CAPS2 PATIENCE @CAPS3.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9768,4,In the story winter Hibiscus Saeng is fond of Beautiful flowers that once grew in her home land. Her favirte flower was the winter Hibiscus that had beautiful red pedals on it as of velvet. She also failed a test that she had taken so what the story is trying to say is that nothing can be as good as whats at home but sometimes you just need another chance at something.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9877,4,I belive the author concludes the story with this paragraph because. She wanted the reader to know that just because she failed that it doesn’t mean her lifes over. She will requperate and to the same thing next year.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1042,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I took a poll of @NUM1 people and @PERCENT1 of them agree computers have a positive effect on people. Computers can help people talk to someone in a far away place, teach people hand-eye coordination, and give the ability to learn about people or places. Using computers is a great way to keep in touch with someone. For example, my grandparents live in @LOCATION2. Some of the ways I keep in touch with them are e-mailing, video chating, and instant messaging. Some other good things about talking to people online is if you're talking to many people at once or if your parents are on the phone. Another good thing about computers is they are good at teaching people hand-eye coordination. The ways of teaching this are typing, and clicking on something, @CAPS1 people, when they type, look at the keyboard. But, with pratice, they will advance to looking at the computer screen while typing. To click on something, you need to move the mouse while still looking at the screen. That, believe it or not, is hand-eye coordination. One last reason computers are good at helping people is it a student needs to look up a place or person for a school report, they can very easily go to google.com and type in who or what they are looking for. Another option is , say someone is going on a vacition to @LOCATION1 and they know nothing about it. They can go on the internet and get information on @LOCATION1 with just a couple clicks of the mouse. Finally, say someone wants to learn about @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2 for fun: They type @ORGANIZATION2 in look at all the websites, choose the best one, and start reading. In conclusion, I deffinately think computers have a positive effect on people for the reasons I have stated. People can talk to someone online, computers can teach hand-eye coordination, and finially, people can look a person or place up using the internet. This is my opinion on computers, I hope you agree.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6304,3,The setting affected the cyclist in a big way during his journey. The temperature being so hot tired the cyclist and made him thirsty. Also the hills being so high to ride up made it hard to continue. Since he was in the desert there were not many towns to go to. All these factors affected the cyclist on his journey.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13319,5,"In the memory ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the mood created by the author in the memory is very kind. Firsty, he grew up with loving parents. For example it said in the memory that his parents would be excellent cooks that passed it down to him. @CAPS2 that they would have the time to teach him and learn. Next, he loved his parent so much. For instance, it says ""I will always be geateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 he didn't love them he woldn't be saying thoughs things. Lastly, he loved his home and was happy with it. For example in the memory it say that ""I would never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS2 that everyone he lived with and all of his familys he loved so much and his home was great with it all. That is why in this memory, the auther shows love and kindness as a mood to this peice.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9747,4,She does this to show her strugle with her gardeding struggle. It is like this because ech year she has to work on her garden because the winter blowes it away meaning it kills it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15919,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced not so many but difficult obstacles. one of the obstacles were the crowded @CAPS1 they had for the dirigible. crowded @CAPS1 can cause the dirigible to hit or bump into another building if not pop the thing. The wind could also make the dirigible sway and hit another building. Another obstacle was the stress the building was having because the dirigible was tied to it. If the wind blew hard, the dirigible would put alot of tension on the building and something could go wrong.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7457,3,The story that I am doing the most was going to talk about what happen in the story I was not shore but the name of the story sound prety good if I was in the story I not be good becaus the story is really crazy I would be realy good two start and right,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3987,2,"In this essay I am going to write about the books about the librabries. Also if they are books that can be offensive and that it can or not be removed by the libraries.I think that the libraries have the right to have any materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, and more on the shelves. Well in my opinion I think that they should not remove any books because people @MONTH1 think that it can be offensive but other people @MONTH1 be into those books. So no I don't think they should remove any because some people have different opinions on different books.When I go to libraries they are books that I can enjoy reading or not like but that is just my opinion. Some people might like the book that I did not liked or hate but I think that the books should not be removed from the shelves because some people might enjoy it and some won't.I think they should not remove books because the books are for people that are interseted on the books that they want to read or learn about the stuff about the past or just fiction books.I just talked about the essay I just wrote I talked about the books about the libraries, and how some books can be offensive to other people that are trying to pick books, and also if they should or not remove books from the shelves",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3939,2,"There are many inapropriate types of intertainment in the world but does that mean we should take them all away? I believe that censoring things such as books, movies and music in a library is not a good idea. We would not have any diversity in the world or any type of intertainment because everyone has a different view on what they think is offensive or inapropriate. With censoring materials in a library it will extremly limit on what we can learn. For example if someone thought that a book about how an animal catches it pray was offensive then if a person was interested in learnig about that topic they would not able to. Many peoples only way of reserch is at a library, so if they had on assignment for work and they could only get informatoin on it there they would not be able to finish their job if only one person thought a book about that topic was offincive. Also people in the medical feild have to watch many movies deminstrating sertain proseedures. What would they do if one person thought that a movie on what they were doing was offensive? They might not be able to save a persons life. With censoring there would be no diverstiy. Censoring would cause us to have a very small choise in what we could read for intertainment. It might even cause us to not have any books to read for intertainment because it one person does not like a sertain book it can be gotten rid of. So if not all the books are gone there is still going to be a few books to chose from. It would cause all to read the same books therefor making the diverstiy very small. I see only a few good points in censoring. Yes, it would prevent children from learning or hearing about inapropriate or offensive things but, that is what is in our world and i believe that we just have to accept it. Our society today is filled with crime, haterid, sexually things, and profanity but there is no changing that. Censoring @MONTH1 hide that for a small amount of time but its not going to keep it away forever. Censoring is not going to change our society. I do not think that we should censor thing in our libaries. It can only lead to a downfall in our communitys. It is a great idea but i do not believe that it can help us more than it would hurt us. Censoring will cuz a lack in diversity education and a realization of our society",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 833,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Are you spending all your precious time on a computer? On the computer your probably wasting every second searching or playing games. You shoudn't spend alot of time on the computer it will just wash away your brain. You shoudn't go on computers for a long time because instead you should be exercising, enjoying nature and interacting with people. First of all, spending too much time on the computer is not good for you because you should be out exercising. On computers you can't jog the fat you gain by eating food. By jogging instead of going on the computer you can lose weight and see the real world than the world behind the computer screen. Nevertheless computers are fun to go on like playing addicting games. but isn't it better to play a real sport like soccer. In soccer you have to use your mind and alot so it is much better than sitting or laying around dazed at a computer screen for a long period of time. Don't you love playing outdoor games! Like playing tag or hiding go seek isn't that more fun than playing an addicting game on the computer screen? For me I think it is. That is my reasons I think you should exercise then stare at the computer screen. Secondly, you shouldn't be on the computer for a long amount of time because you should instead be enjoying nature. Nature is beautiful and refreshing unlike a computer. Yeah I know computers offer alot but do they offer the fresh air outside, the warm breeze land living animals the earth. I don't think so and neither should you. Instead of going on your computer when it is raining not you should play with your pets and if you don't have any put a raincoat umbrella and go outside. Especially in the @DATE1 you should be outside enjoying nature go for a swim or bring your annoying little siblings to the park. There is more to often in use than going on the computer. More importantly, you shouldn't go on the computer because you are better off. Interacting with living people in person. On the computer talking to people you are going no where on the computer chatting with people it is impossible to read someones expression. So get off the computer and hang with your family and friends. Get into a fun conversation or debate. Make new friends when your at the mall or discovering a new trail in a park. Do anything but interact on the computer when all you see is typed words writing back to you. Get your self out in the world don't just interact with people but the world not the computer screen. In conclusion you shouldn't spend most of your precious time on the computer. It isn't nessasary for you to spend all your time on the computer when you could be exrcising, enjoying nature and interacting with people. I strongly beleive people should be outside than on a computer. So what are you waiting for get off that computer and take a hike!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7657,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist. First, the river and the pine trees “The cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite had my name written all over them"". Thinking about that helped the cyclist keep going. Second, the road was getting harder to travel. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills"" and a sign on another road said “rough road ahead” The roads made the cyclist work harder to get to Yosemite National Park. Finally, the cyclist's water supply was running low. “the water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” Not having a lot of water is really bad when your outside in the heat and the cyclist had no idea where to find more. The towns the cyclist ran into were abandon or “ghost town”. The cyclist had nowhere to go to get help. This cyclist faced many problems during his bike ride to Yosemite national park.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13247,5,The @CAPS1 created a warm and welcoming feeling. They explained they're Parents troubles in the past and how they over came them. This shows courage. They describe their heritage and culture which shows confidence and honor. The @CAPS1 did a great @CAPS2 creating a comforting feeling.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20766,8," Laughter and exuberance are key elements in any good relationship. Being able to be giddy and joyful with someone close to @CAPS11 is a sign of comfort. It often can bring people closer and help to solidify their friendships. Your true self is shown in your humor. Two years ago when I was in @PERSON1's seventh grade math class at @ORGANIZATION1, I was chosen to be in the @ORGANIZATION2 along with just three other classmates. Being in the @ORGANIZATION2 simply meant that we would be teaching ourselves @CAPS1-@CAPS2 using only textbooks, while @PERSON1 would teach the rest of the class an easier, more simple math. The @ORGANIZATION2 was almost like an elite club. Our other classmates looked upon us with jealousy because we got to sit in the back of the classroom together, never had to do any homework, and were never called upon out of the blue to answer questions in front of the whole class. Being the immature seventh graders that we were, we abused @TIME1 incredible opportunity that we had. I became fast friends with the three other people in the @ORGANIZATION2. Their names were @PERSON4, @PERSON3, and @CAPS3. @PERSON4 and I were already friends, but it was working together in the @ORGANIZATION2 that really brought us closer together. I also became close with @ORGANIZATION3 and @CAPS3. To @TIME1 day, @PERSON4 is one of my very best friends and I still keep in touch with the other two. We were all very different from each other. @PERSON3 was caught up in the popular crowd, @CAPS3 usually hung out with the really smart kids who were into chess and reading books, and @PERSON4 and I were just normal. However, we all had two important things in common; our sick sense of humor and our intelligence. We each felt that the work we were teaching ourselves was much too easy. We breezed right through the book and never really had any questions. In doing @CAPS8, we always finished our assigned work quickly and had more than half of the class left to just sit there, eat, and goof off. That doesn't necessarily mean that that's the order things played out in. ""@PERSON4, I don't feel like doing math @DATE2. I'm beat,"" I complained as we walked into @PERSON1's room for math right after lunch. ""@CAPS6 neither,"" she replied. ""I say we just sit there and make it look like we're doing work."" We made our way to the table in the back where @CAPS3 and @PERSON3 were already sitting. They had their books, pencils, and spirals out, but sat there with vacant expressions. @PERSON4 and I joined them in sitting and we all exchanged disgruntled looks. ""@CAPS8 uh, I was talking to @LOCATION1 @TIME1 and he said that we don't have to do any work @DATE2. We can just sit here and hang out,"" I lied, not even bothering to hide my smirk. Catching on, @CAPS3 and @PERSON3 grinned. @PERSON3 turned around and pulled a brown paper bag out of her backpack. She began to pull food out of the bag and offered it all up to us. I immediately grabbed the miniature chocolate pie. Midway through eating it, I dipped my finger in the gooey chocolate and wiped a big blob of it on the window behind @CAPS6. @PERSON4 noticed and immediately started to chuckle. ""@CAPS10, what's that?!"" she exclaimed, loud enough for everyone in the class to hear. @PERSON1 and a few classmates glanced over briefly, but got back to the lesson instantly. It really wasn't funny at all, but the four of us dissolved into giggles. ""@CAPS11 guys, I had @TIME1 crazy dream @TIME2,"" @PERSON3 said as the laughter died down. ""I went to @TIME1 @DATE1 camp thing, and @PERSON2 was one of the camp counselors. He was wearing khaki pants and a white shirt with blue pinstripes. Oh, and he also had a clipboard!"" We stared at her blankly and then burst out laughing once more. The funny thing about @TIME1, was that @PERSON2 often substituted for our teachers, and he wore that exact outfit each time. But the even funnier thing was that it really wasn't funny at all. We were @CAPS8 desperate for a good time, we found chocolate blobs on windows and khaki pants to be hilarious. Our laughter died down and we sat there in silence. Suddenly, @CAPS3 leaned back in his squeaky swivel chair and it immediately broke, dropping him right to the ground. To anyone else, @TIME1 would have been funny. However, we each sat in silence, staring at one another. It wasn't that we were embarrassed for him or felt sympathy, but simply ironic that obsolete things sent us into fits of giggles, while a substantial, laughable event made us simply sit there. I don't think I'll ever forget the @ORGANIZATION2. Though it was a waste of time, we had many good laughs. We @MONTH1 not have learned a lot about math, but we learned a lot about each other.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10622,4,I think the author concludes the story with that saying because it shows that she is adappting to the new place. It @CAPS1 shows that she isent going to give up. Just like the geese don’t give up flying back and forth ever winter and spring. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12322,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir. First, the mood of history is that the author wanted represent the history of a family that came to @LOCATION1. Second, the history is nice because the son of the family was born in the @LOCATION1, and the author tried to represent the nationality of a @CAPS1 that the parents are other nationality, they Know how to live with son.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6371,3,"In this narritive of a cyclist, riding in california, and handed for Yosemite national park, he encounters a lack of water and bad directions from a group of old men on a pourch. The setting plays a big part in his ""challenge"", from the pine trees to the barren hills. In the begining of his trie he passes a ""gbost town"" that has clearly seen better days. This presents him with his first doubt and he continues with caution. Then the pines that, ""had my name written all over them."" This gives him hope and reassurance. Then the rusty pump and ""ramshackle shed."" They took the hope and reasurance away, making him cautrous. The hills that made him work hard to get over, the snake that slowed him down and the whelches juice company that was abundanded all didn't help and made matters worse. Then he got some water at a bathroom and it was all better. It the setting has less the same the whole way he wouldn't have had any hope or he would have hope but it wouldn't fall and rise, making the story interenting. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7007,3,"The setting of this story plays a huge part in the final outcome. The author makes a mention that he is travelling through the high deserts of California in June. This sentence alone tells the reader that it is hot. And not hot by @LOCATION2 standards, where it gets to @NUM1 degrees, maybe, by noon. That means that the day starts at @NUM2. By noon, it's past @NUM3. Also, the author comes to a sign marked ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” @CAPS1 he makes note that he’s only going 12 mph. Before he reaches any sort of civilization, he has already drunken most of his water, his last ""tentalizing sips,"" This is his main problem, his lack of water. He drank most of it in the beginning of his ride, thinking he’d be okay, but he regretted it later on",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12995,5,"the mood of the @CAPS1 in the article is like kind of happiness and @CAPS2, relax, and grateful. Because their grandparents are coming from Cuba. Narciso Rodriguez feels like being an immigrant from Cuba and making a family in the United States is hard. Because you have to start your whole life over so you can get a job and provide for your family. This is what I think the mood of the article is about in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15900,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced three main challenges while attempting to make the mooring mast accessible to derigibles. Most foreign derigibles still used hydrogen; a highly flammable gas. A fire on the streets of New York would be disastrous. There were also fierce, ever changing wind currents above the building. These winds would make the back of the dirigible ""swivel around and around the mooring mast."" @CAPS1, there was a law in place preventing dirigibles from flying too low when over urban areas. This law made it illegal for dirigibles to tether to the building or even approach it. Those three factors made the mooring mast ""neither practical nor safe.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14924,6,"The architects of the Empire State building believed that dirigibles were able to dock on the building if there was a mooring mast. However there were many obstacles to over-come to allow this to happen. If a dirigible landed on the mast, it would force a lot of pressure on the building as it swayed in the wind. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored... would add stress to the buildings frame."" And as nature played a role, the wind could swing the body of the dirigible possibly causing the frame of the building to break and the building to collapse.Another obstacle that the architects faced was danger. American dirigibles used helium, while dirigibles from other countries used hydrogen, which is highly flammable. ""... the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey..."" The architects realized that they Hindenburg explosion would have been worst if it occurred on the Empire State building ""... above a densely populated area..."".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1483,1,"To: @CAPS1 this letter concerns, Computers are apart of our daily life. You can do many things on them such as play games, watch videos, search the web, and even communicate with people from all over the world. They are very useful for people who go to school bacause you can complete and save work for your classes. Sure maybe some people are addicted to the computer but others use it only when they need to. Computers have a massive affect on some peoples life. Sitting around on the computer all day can be harmful but informative in many ways. One of the informative ways is that you learn new information every time you log on. That is why I think the computer has a great effect on people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9522,4,"The author included this sentence in the paragraph because Saeng was a very determined girl. She would keep trying till she got it right. No matter how long or hard it would be she would get it done. Just like from the picture of the Hibiscus flower next to the highway. It certainly woked out of place, but it would do anything to survive. Being strong at times when you can only depend on yourself is hard to do, but Saeng is determined from her loss and the perfection of the Hibiscus flower.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12958,5,"The mood Narciso Rodriguez creates in his memoir is a very good and bright. He and his parents survived hard times in their New Jersey home, such as segregation of @CAPS1-@CAPS2 like himself and not always having enough money. Yet he and his family survived because of the unity of his closely-knit community, Immigrants from @ORGANIZATION2, the @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3, @LOCATION4, and elsewhere all came together and ignored their differences. They shared food, shared their homes, and shared happiness between them. There was a certain trust among the community, every family holding their door open for anybody,"" knowing that they would do the same for [them]."" (paragraph @NUM1) To make the mood of this excerpt very light and cheerful, Rodriguez uses words like, ""rich culinary skills and love of cooking,"" (¶ @NUM2) ""innocence of childhood,"" (¶ @NUM2), ""hard working"", (¶ @NUM4), ""courage,"" and ""selflessly,"" (¶ @NUM5) ""grateful... love and sacrifice,"" ""admiration for their strength and perseverance,"" ""spirit of generosity."" (¶ @NUM6). All of these words show that through solidarity, hope, and courage, people can make a good life for each other, no matter how hard their situation is at first.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10423,4,"The author concludes as the story with the paragraph ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself., in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"" mean that she will take the test and hoped she pass so she could make her mother happy and support her. She chosee spring because spling is the rebirth of nature and Saeng would like to retake the test with a clear and clean mind. I think that the reason why the author choose to put the paragraph in the end of the story. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3120,2,"What is offensive to you? See your answer might be different from the person sitting right next to you. There are so many materials in the world that are found to be offensive. The world wouldnt be any different if we were to pull all of these offensive materials off the shelves. There wouldnt be anything left because everyone has their own opinion about something and everyone has different inferences about what's offesive to them. I believe that offensive material shouldn't be removed from the shelve. Everything would be off the shelf if we were to pull offensive materials off the shelf. There is always something wrong with something. @CAPS1 might be the way someone has said something or the way they mean't @CAPS1 by. There is always that one person out of the bunch who has something negative to say. Either they take @CAPS1 the wrong way or they just think @CAPS1's wrong. Everyone has their own opinon about everything. Same for when some one asks you whats offensive to you. Someone else @MONTH1 say that what you find offensive, is no where near offensive to them. For instance, my grandpa loves all type of music and his life revolves aroud music. My grandma doesnt like some of his music because she says ' @CAPS1 doesn't sit right with me,' meaning that she doesn't believe in some things that the music is trying to persuade people to do. My grandpa really doesn't pay attention to the lyrics as much as my grandma does, because he doesn't see music in that kind of way. My grandpa likes a lot of music because of their rhythm and beat. They always kind of get into disagreements about music they want to listen to because my grandma finds something in the music thats offensive to her beliefs, but my grandpa doesn't. @CAPS1 doesnt effect him as much as her. If you were to go around and ask people whats offensive to them, their would be some many different answers and you could never sum @CAPS1 all down to one answer. With only a couple of people feeling offensive to some things, but the majority find @CAPS1 different, that would ruin @CAPS1 for everyone almost. Then that would almost be everything gone cause @CAPS1's always that one person that takes @CAPS1 the wrong way and has to feel offended. So I still believe that offensive materials shouldn't be pulled off shelves.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12680,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoroir is gentla and proudness. The author explains of how he felt of his parent that risk everything in order to give him a better future according to paragraph @NUM1. The author feels proud of being from Cuba through the whole memoroir. He feel proud of being Cuban by explaining the things he does and things that they share by his culture. Last but least he feels thankfulness according to paragraph @NUM2 becouse, through his parents and things from his country he learned what family really means, he says ""... I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home"". Through the whole memoroir the auther show proudness of wher re he came from, from his parents, country, and his neighborhood.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14943,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"", by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1, the builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in attempting to allow dirigible to dock there. The builders of the Empire State Building failed to realized that building the mast would create too many problems and safety risks. Without thinking about the obstacles, the mooring mast also had problem on its own anyways. According to the excerpt, one of its greatest obstacle was ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This resulted to being a problem because the dirigible could go anywhere, not landing in the mast properly and cause damage. With this problem also came risks for pedestrians who are on the streets. The dirigibles ""...could be weighted down in the back with lead weights"" because it used open landing fields. This was not a good idea to be using these at the Empire State Building. Another thing builders should have considered was that there was a law in place already that is ""...against airships flying too low over urban areas."" All in all, there were alot of things that builders should have considered before attempting to allow dirigible to dock there",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 469,1,"Computers are progressing into our lives more and more. These machines help our world become an easier place to do. work, pay bills and even entertain ourselfs. @CAPS3, these things are weighed down by the negative effects like the online dangers, increasing to reality, and the obesity problems we face. With our new advances people are spending more time sitting around than being outside, which udds more and more to obesity problem we face. Kids and teens today would much rather be on their @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 account, than go for a run or shoot some hopps. Also, more and more ads are on the web for unhealthy foods making these kids more likely to eat more junkfood. Finally, the internet fools people into believing they can go on easy diet eat. and become skinny with no worries. Along with more computers and users comes increasing dangers and threats. Viruses can hack you computer, steal you personal info and destroy you computer. You can have huge bills for things you didn't even buy! Cyber bullies are also a new and dangerous threat!. These people threaten and taught inosent people. I remember a story of a girl who took her own life because she was bullied by someone who turned out to be another girl and her mother. Finally, online predators are a great threat to teens. These people brain wash people, convince them to meet, and rape and kill them. Last but not least todays computers interaction with young minds increases ignorance with ads, and negleck of education and reading. Many kids even myself would rather be online than read a book or do homework. @CAPS3, computer can take over some people's likes, they will neglect school and other important things like homework or studing credting weaker minds for out future. Also, ads and website with false information can fall down our youth even more with ignorance and ignorant belifs. Finally, kids computer interaction can cause belites like ""you shout vote for @PERSON1 because he is black"" or other racist and ignorant statements. Computers help our advance in bettering the world and our understanding of our world, @CAPS3, certain aspects can create ignorance and danger for people yound and old, and their minds.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9294,4,"I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph because it helps to explain the significance of the hibiscus. The hibiscus are very important to her and her culture. When there hibiscus around, Saeng feels that she can do anything. That is why she failed the test in the first place. So she is saying that the next time she takes the test, she will have the strength from the hibiscus to help her pass the test.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15274,6,"By attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the builders faced many obstacles. One of the obstacles that they faced was the re-desgning of the building. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"" that meant that they had to make modifications (over @MONEY1 worth). Another obstacle that they faced was that most of the dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable. And the greatest obstacle that the builders had was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Even if the Dirigible got parked, the winds would shake its tail too much and that wasnt safe.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7534,3,"The features of the setting cause the cyclist two main problems: doubt and dehydration. From the essay, you can infer that the cyclist doubts he will ever make it to Yosemite because of the constant features in the essay that cause him to lose his hope and confidence. For example, near the end of the essay the cyclist is already exhausted and hopeless but then sees a building over a hill. He hurries to the building only to find out that it is an abandoned, run–down @ORGANIZATION1 factory. After getting his hopes up, he is forced to get back on his bike and carry on. This features of the setting causes further disappointment to the cyclist and installs more doubt into his mind. Despite losing his confidence and hopes to make it to Yosemite, the features of the setting also cause him a serious, literal problem: dehydration. The weather is not and he has to carry on over hills and on rough roads. He is running low on water and at the one town he finds the water from the pump is undrinkable. The features of the setting are causing him these problems and are the reason hid health is at risk. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10590,4,"I believe that the Author ended the story with this paragraph, because I think it is showing that Saeng isn’t a quiter. Saeng can’t wait until the Hibiscus comes back. When the Hibiscus comes back she’ll retake the test and show her mother that she can do it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6362,3,"I think that the features of the setting really do affect the way someone rides a bike because certain places have certain terrain. Some types are not always good for a bike rider because if it’s bumpy then someone could fall off the bike. Also, if it is dark you @MONTH1 not even be able to see where you are going then you could hurt your-self very seriously. That’s why riding a bike is dangerous. Also, if your in the type of enviroment where every thing is smooth then you @MONTH1 be able to have a nice bike ride. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16178,6,"It is clear that there were problems in trying to dock dirigibles on the Empire state Building. The first reason's that, the law against flying airships to low over the Empire State Building made it hard to do so. Next is that the thoughtes in being unsafe because some dirigibles use hydrogen instead of helium and hydrogen is flammable A big reason is when the german dirigible got destryed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, the owners of the Empire State Building then realized how much more worse the accident could have been if it had happened on such a densely populated area suched as downtown New York City. The last reason was the thought that they would use lead weights to hold the dirigibles down, but they realized that it wasn't practical nor was it safe. It was clear that there were problems in the docking of dirigibles on the Empire State building; but it is probably a much safer choice for both the residents/citizens of New York and all of the people who ever work(ed) on it such as architects, engineers and the aviation pioners.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 477,1,"Dear, @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 opinion is getting out of mind. They're people who are getting addicted to to @CAPS2, such as games, websites, communication and email websites and etc. Therefore, they're people who are just plain addicted to the computer, such as @CAPS3. I know people who are addicted on @CAPS3 because, they get addicted to talking to people, and looking at other people. So they dont cooperate correctly with there school work (so they get bad grades) or they loose connection with family members and friends (so they become lonely and depressed). Then thier only friend is the computer. Also other effects on the computer is if your addicted to a website (in generaal) you can get out of shape, because your not spending enough time excersing, there is already enough people in @LOCATION1 that is obesed and it is already a add on to the problem. I read online than in @LOCATION1 is obesed. So computers are a addiction waiting to happen. Therefore people need to start spending time friends and start excersing and stay away from the computer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3713,2,"'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf..' said by Katherine Paterson. Books are used to entertain and even teach readers in certain aspects of life. Not exactly all books are offensive but some are. Those who are, should be taken off the shelfs, especially if it is in a school library. Children could take that offensive or violent book into action. Other children could show the book to other peers. And also, children can get very offended. Now should offensive books be taken off the shelfs? Children nowadays are being motivated alot. Whether it's through television shows, video games, or even music. On the news, there has been reports about children being influenced to have a gun and hang themselves, etc. Books are meant to entertain readers in a good way and not teach them to become a violent person. Some readers who read such things can turn those words into action. Then the student could be in trouble. And people really wouldn't want that. Children have a tendency of showing off to friends. If a student sees something offensive or violent on a book, there is a big chance that they will show it to their peers. Just because children think it's cool. Having one person read this could be a problem, now imagine having more than just one, a whole clique seeing this. It could end up in a huge problem, not only for the children and their parents, but also for the school. The children learning these new things from the book can cause the children to use everyday and make it popular. The school can have a bad image from the students. Passing on the information can become a conflict, and people certainly do no want that. School is not only a teaching building, but also a social place. There are cliques in every school. Within the each person there is a different color, religion, style, and personalities. Children can be easily hurt. If books are being offensive, it can just easily hurt anyone reading that book. Once again, books are meant to entertain readers and not to hurt them. So why even have authors write something offensive in their books? Maybe authors feel the need to add interest in the book and suspense, but not all readers would take it easily. Hurting people isn't a fun thing to do, and people certainly do not want to do that. So why have offensive books in shelfs? These books can cause children to use it in action, to show it off to other peers, and to hurt them as well. Children nowadays have it hard on themselves, why make it harder. Books are meant to entertain readers, why not just do that. So yes, take the offensive books off and there will be no problems.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21053,8,"I live in a life full of laughter, I can not think of a day that I have not laughed. Even when I went threw the hardest days of my life a little @DATE1, there was still someone to make me or a reason to laugh. I think laughing is the best medicine for a person. If you are someone that can go a day without laughing, I'd love to meet you and make that change! There are a few particular times I can remember that we're just full of laughter, most involving family and friends. The first one that I can remember was when my parents showed me a picture of when I was a little girl, there are many laughing episodes when it come to me as a little kid. The picture they showed me was when it was @DATE2 time and I had no shirt, just shorts on. I was sitting on a sled, facing uphill, with the sun just shining. I can not explain how hard my family and I laughed together just from looking at one picture. Another laughing moment I can remember was not when it happened but when I look back now all I can think to myself is, wow. I was about six @DATE1 old at my best friends house who owned eight lamas, who got to get tied up in the yard everyday. The one I always got to walk was named, @CAPS1. @CAPS1 was sweet, @CAPS2 I though, until one @DATE2 day she decided to drag me across a highway. While I was getting drug across a highway that was usually busy, all I could here was people yelling ""let go of her lead!"" @CAPS2 me being six I thought if I let go that the lama would get hit by a car or never come back. I regretted not letting go once an adult got to me because I was all scraped up and blistered from being drug across the pavement. That is a time in my life I will always look back and laugh, but never forget. The last one, my favorite times in life. This would be pretty much anytime I am with my boyfriend. Favorite time was our trip to the beach for the first time. We had never been there together but, it was amazing! We attempted to ride bikes on the sand, failed, and just laughed about it. Then we decided to just walk around all the beach stores and see if we could find something we might have wanted to buy. Later that day we just went to the beach, walked and felt amazing. The funny part of this trip was when we we're trying to take pictures of each other jumping in the air with the ocean behind us. People were looking at us like we were crazy but, we didn't care because we were having fun and laughing almost the whole time! I think that laughing is a very important part of everyday life, to everyone. If you don't laugh at least once in day then something is wrong. I love looking back at pictures from when I was little, having memories with best friends and their animals, as @CAPS2 as taking trips and just being with my boyfriend. Laughing has helped me a lot in life because it brings me up when I am feeling down.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12399,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happy, delightful, unique. I believe the author is happy because he/she is very grateful for the love of cooking his/her parents passed down to him/her. ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" I believe he's/she is delightful just the way he/she wrote the memoir. The words she/he used, the way he/she wrote them just sounds delightful to be who he/she is. The author sounds unique to me because he/she is just happy that he/she is Cuban and is happy with what he/she has. This is what I think the authors mood is in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18616,7,"Buzz, buzz! @CAPS8 I hear “@CAPS1 your phone is @CAPS2.” so I got up and checked it @NUM1 missed calls. I look who they are from at @NUM2 all from @CAPS6 dad. I felt something was wrong. I called him back and I hear” @CAPS1 get ready grandm @CAPS4 I coming to get you. “I said it`s @NUM3 @CAPS5 are you nuts?” at this time I was at a family members house @CAPS8 @CAPS6 dad said “@PERSON2 was in a bad crush.” @CAPS6 heart drop and I started crying.” get your stuff together and I will call you back with more info.” I got off phone @CAPS6 aunt was up she came into the room I told her what I knew. I was getting @CAPS6 stuff together try not ta wake anyone else up. When I was waiting for the call everything went through @CAPS6 mind. I was with him, what happened, is be ok is he going to die? @CAPS8 I heard beep beep I said good bye and ran out. Running made me think of more like: how bad is he hurt, what was he driving, what was he doing out? I got in the car I questioned @CAPS6 grandma asking her where is mom, where is @LOCATION1, where is @CAPS7 are they ok: when will I see him? All I knew in had to be patience. @CAPS8 I got the call I asked @CAPS6 dad “what happen what did he hit, who called @NUM4, where do we go?” the first thing that came out of @CAPS6 dads mouth was” calm down I can`t come home but @PERSON1 will be there I want you to stay with him ok” yes dad I will and dad” I said” you” he said back. I said ‘I love you.” “I love you too” he said. The worst time for @CAPS6 life was waiting for @PERSON1. @PERSON1 and @PERSON2 were @CAPS6 dads when @CAPS6 dad wasn`t home. I know I would be fine with @PERSON1. How will be act seeing his bestfriend like that? @PERSON2 and @PERSON1 are fire men I wonder if they knew who helped @PERSON2. I knew he was always there for me. Waiting was hand to do but I had to be patience. I remember closing @CAPS6 eyes and wish it was a dream. Now I get to go in @PERSON1 right behind me walking I seem all the glass on him @CAPS8 dayna said look who is here he opened his eyes they got really big when seen me.” @CAPS8 @PERSON2 said @PERSON1 come here “@PERSON1 went. @PERSON2 said ‘thank you for taking care of @CAPS6 little sister I love you man.” That is the time in @CAPS6 life I had to be patience to see @CAPS6 brother. I didn’t care how he looked as long as he is ok.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3929,2,"What do you think about Books? Do you think it matters how appropriate they are? Well im going to tell you my oppinion on the books that should and shouldn't be in libraries. I think that there are many different few from many different people on books. Someone just cant say that they think a book shouldn't be in a library period. I think that if maybe it is a inappropriate book from someone in grade school to read then it should be in the high school or a public library. I can see that some parents @MONTH1 not want to have their kid reading it but i think that they are going to hear a lot worse and see worse than a book is going to have. I can also see where parents are coming from when they say that they dont want there child reading that kind of book. I belive that if a kid wants to read it than they are going to read it, parents shouldn't be so up tight on what there kids read. I know that they want to protect their kid from seeing that stuff but its going to happen one day so they might as well get used to it. Also a grade school shouldn't even have a book that would be considered inappropriate to a student in there library, or should have a parent sign somethign saying that they are ok with it. So inconclusion thats what I say if parents have a problem with it than they should discuss it with the school. They should just go in and talk to the librarian and tell them that they dont want their child to check out such books. All a parent would have to do is go in to the school or where ever their child is getting the book and tell them that and it would solve all problems",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 2998,2,"Dear news people, I am qriting to you because I have my own answer on what people should do with books. I think it is ok for people to write whatever thay want because it's a free contruy to where you can do anything that you tink you can do. What I am trying to say is that people can write books how ever thay want with anything in it such as drugs, sex, abuse, bad language, and so on you get what I'm saying. I think it's ok to write whatever they want and put whatever it was they wrote about on the shelf. It's they person who is picking a book choose to read a book just because they don't like what the book was about they don't have to make a big deal about it and cause a problem. People can just not pick the book up and look for another book. I don't think it's fear that people should make a big deal out of a book that they don't have to read at all it makes no since to me and I bet a lot of people would agree. If I was someone who was a aganised stuff like sex, and drugs and I saw it in a book I would just set it down and look for a book that I would agree with than causing a problem like others would. It just is not fare and it's a waist of time to me if someone has to complane about something so dumb. So to rap this thing up I think people who don't like the way books are writen should just put it down and not worry about it and buy a book that they feel better off with reading. There is no point to waist time and cause a problem that's my oppion about this problem hope it is yours to.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15345,6,"Builders faced many obstacles such as safety, nature, flammability and law in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the mast. The first problem is ""the mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill it's purpose."" The dirigibles also, use hydrogen not helium, which is very flammable. The Hindenburg, a German dirigible was destroyed by fire in New Jersey and, ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse [it] could have been if it [happened] over densely populated area such as New York. The violent air currents also played a role, the back of the ship would swivel around and around. When dirigibles moored in landing fields they would be weighted down with lead weights, which would be dangerous for pedestrians on the street. Also, there was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. There was no way dirigibles would be able to dock at the mast",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4104,2,"There are thousands of books in libraries now a days, some are from @NUM1 years ago. Books are books, and anyone at any age should be able to remove any type of book off of a shelf. Books, music, movies and magazines are all mad to interest people and what they enjoy reading. Authors and publishers should not be pentalized for their hard work they achieved. There are many people in the world, who like all different types of books. But just because a book has censorship inside the story doesn't mean any human being will enjoy the story. I enjoy reading stories about romance, and I'm sure there is censorship inside a romance story. I only prefer romance stories, and if every single romance story had censorship and libraries removed the books from the shelves, I wouldn't read any type of book. Because I only enjoy reading about the romance. I only find adults and young adults reading romance stories, and these people have the matureness not to act out about censorship. It's not best to ruin the stories for adults and young adults who like to read about the censorship inside of stories. There many be people who find it so interesting, that if it's based on a true story then they would want to be willing to help the person out based on the situation. Don't take away the chance for these authors to succeed more in life. Let these young adults read about everything they are interested in. I'm sure there are many different people who would be upset if the censored stories were eliminted from the shelves in libraries",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7097,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making him dehydrated and hot. He was in deserts on a bicycle with his water support running low and rough road with plenty of hills to make it hard for a bike to out come. he kept going though the heat was outrageous and dehydration beginning to overcome him.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16446,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there. One problem was that they had to strengthen the rest of the building in order to put the mast at the top. This process would be very costly, the author says ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" Another problem in the attempt of allowing dirigibles to dock there was the winds at the top of the building. The air currents were very violent that high up. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast,"" therefore it would not be safe for people on the streets of the city. Finally, the laws of the city interfered with the plan for the mooring mast. The law said that it was illegal for an airship to fly too low over urban areas. If the dirigible was able to dock on the mooring mast, it would be breaking this law. The builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems, and their plan never actually followed through.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15428,6,"When building a great task, many obstacles need to be faced. For the builders of the Empire State Building it was ones concerning the docking of dirigibles, or blimps. One was safety. The builders had to make sure it was safe to dock on and off the blimp, and it was safe to fly. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" People wouldn't be safe on a blimp that could expload at any moment. Another obsticle the builders had to face was building the mooring mast itself for docking. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The blimp wouldn't be able to hold correctaly to the mast and it would move around too much. It wasn't safe or practical for anyone. These are some obsticales many builders have to face, but the ones of the Empire State Building overcame them well.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12489,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" From Home: The Blueprints of Our lives the author created many moods. One mood was @CAPS1 and Friendship. @PERSON1's parents kept their arms open for anyone who needed help. so did every neighbor he hade. They all came together and had fun even when they had different backrounds. You hade to make as many Friends as you could to help you live a healthy life. Another mood that was created was calm. In the house there was ""Passionate Cuban music"" and the air smelled of traditionally Cuban @CAPS2. This was because their family was Cuban so they wanted to keep traditions and make a better environment. The last mood that their was was harsh and sacrifice. @PERSON1's Parents had to give up a lot like family, friends, job, and have just to move to @LOCATION1. And when they got here they had to start fresh and take any jobs they could Find. His parents life was hard they tried to make it as good as they could For, their son. It was hard for them but they got by and did a great job.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14870,6,"In the excerpt, the Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the construction of the Empire State Building faces many problems. One of these problems is that the governer of New York, Al Smith wanted the building to be the tallest in the world. In order to do this you would need a mask to break the record. The mask made to made nature a danger to the whole building because of violent air current. Another reason how the Empire State Building failed is because their was a law banning airships flying too low over urban areas. This law went in effect because of a German dirigible caught on fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey. Those were just some of the many problems the dirigibles faced while passing the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18764,7,"A time when I was patint is when I was at the fastifal. I whanted to get something to eat and the line was big. Another time is when I wanted to get on a ride the line was giantle large. It was for the @CAPS1, @LOCATION1, @CAPS2 pirate ship, the swing. There was a line to play this baskeball game it was big.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19442,7,"In my thirteen years of expirience I have road many roller coasters, and when there is a rollercoaster these is normally a two hour wait. In the @DATE1 @NUM1 I took my best friend @PERSON1 to ""@CAPS1 @CAPS2,"" and we had just gotten in line for a ride called ""The @CAPS3."" When we got to the entrance @CAPS4 said a forty-five minute wait so we got in line and the ride broke down for over three hours. Finally the ride was up and running but @CAPS4 took another half hour for testing and when that ended @CAPS4 was a two hour wait in the back. We were at the front so @CAPS4 didn't realy affect us. We finaly road that ride and was totaly worth @CAPS4. Most of the lines later that day were small but thats still one hour. I just hope next time that ride doesn't break down.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14872,6,"Although Al Smith had expected the mooring mast of the Empire State Building to be unique and practical, builders faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First, in order for the building to accommodate the stress that the dirigibles would add to the building's frame, the framework of the building had to be modified. This cost over sixty thousand dollars. In addition, dirigibles used hydrogen-a highly flammable gas. An accident could be fatal in a densely-populated area like New York City. Also, there were violent winds at the top of the building that would making docking difficult and could possibly blow a dirigible into the side of the building, causing it to be punctured. Finally, an existing law prohibited airships from flying to low over urban areas; it would be illegal for a ship even to approach the building's area.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17853,7,I recall once a famous madican named @PERSON1 was prefering a stunt that took enourmous amounts of pateints and courage it was named “@CAPS1 In Time”. The madichian had to stay in a block of ice for @NUM1 day’s or @NUM2 hours! The great madichian had only a sweater. He had the consiled ice open to public as the magnificent madichian said “I could bearly hear anything”. He waited hours on and like falling down on abyiss or bottomless pit. Until the final seconds ended. The madichian as finally free. And alive,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12834,5,"In this memoir written by fashion designer Narciso Rodriguez, there is a certain tone conveyed by his writing about his childhood home. Here is what is.Many people who immigrate from a poorer country like Cuba are quite poor when living here because like Narciso says in the bottom of paragraph @NUM1, ""In the United States, [my parents] had to start their lifes over entirely, taking what ever work they could find."" @CAPS1 of talking about the hardships, Narciso focused on the fact that he was raised into a wonderfly cultural enviorment. An enviorment filled with his ""family"". When he says family he doesn't meen just her biological family. He means all the people that he spends time with and has a deep connection with. Therefore, the mood that Narciso Rodriguez is conveying in this memoir is a warm, greatful, and happy tone. A tone that shows that he will never forget all the things his parents gave up so that he could have a good childhood. The tone also shows that now, even though he is a famous fashion designer and most likely is quite wealthy, he will never forget how his parents ""turned the simple house into a home."" This is what the tone of this memoir is.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4305,2,"Going to the library is always a struggle when someone is faced with so many different genres of books. That isnt the only choice they are faced with either. There is music and magazines too. Just within the books, there are so many different subjects and catagories between kids books, biographies, autobiographies, etc. On top of that there are alot of different types of music to fit everyones different styles. Some people might say that some of the books and/or music could be found offensive or not appropriate. But out of all the meterial in the library, I don't think there should be a problem with staying away from a the things that you might find offensive. Therefore I do not think that certain books or music should be kept away from the shelves due to a few self opinions. There are multiple different books in a library and just because one might find one book offensive doesnt mean that the book should be pulled off the shelves. The reason being is that someone else could find that book as a good resource and @MONTH1 need it for something they are doing. People should know what they are looking for at the library and if they think that a book @MONTH1 be offensive then they could keep their self from checking out that book. This problem is similar to others around the world. For example, when you go to the mall there are shops that you know you like and go to, and you stay away from the ones that you dont like or @MONTH1 find offensive due to the items they sell. That doesnt mean that store should be banned from the mall. Thats because some people might find that store interesting and want to purchase some of thier items. I think the same reasoning goes for different books and meterial at the library. A way that a library could adress this problem with out pulling theses books from the shelves is maybe taking a survey from thier local visitors in thier town by asking them what they think on some of the different genres of books and different styles of music. After taking this survey the library then could seperate these items into different catagories or sections within the library. This could help this problem tremendously due to the fact people could stay away from those sections that they might find offensive and find what they are looking for alot easier. I know when I sit down and read im not always caught reading the most popular subjects. I like to read subjects such as murder files, drug bust, biographies, and autobiographies. And then when it comes to music I listen to a wide variety of music such as hip-hop, country, alternative, rock, etc. Some people @MONTH1 find that wierd and unusual but it just goes to show that not everyone wants to read and listen to the same thing. Therefore the library should keep the wide selection of different meterial and keep everyone happy",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15746,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The obstacles included safety issues, nature and the law. Safety issues was a problem because in the excerpt it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This explains why they couldn't do it because of one of the dirigibles would explode in downtown New York it would cause severe damage and losses of life because it's a populated area. Another obstacle was nature. Nature played it's role because ""the winds on top of the building were constantly changing due to violent air currents."" This would have made the back of the dirigibles swivel around which was either practical or safe. The last obstacle was that there was a law about airships flying to low over urban areas. This would have made it illegal to tie a ship to the Empire State Building. These obstacles had made the builders face problems to allow dirigibles to land on the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3275,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 Newspaper, or to whom this article @MONTH1 concern. It has become quite aware to me the problem we face in our media today. Information and how individuals seek it has evolved and is still changing at a rapid pace. Technology and new information is so vast its extremely difficult to censor. Two weeks ago i took my @NUM1 year old niece @CAPS3 to our local public library to find her a book. Once the automatic doors to the library opened she darted straight to the movie section. I couldnt help but laugh, because I knew thats why she truly wanted to go to the library. When i asked @CAPS3 what movie she was looking at, she turned the cover over with no reservation and, said' @CAPS5 @CAPS6'. 'I can't let my young niece watch @CAPS5 @CAPS6', I thought silently to myself. Then i realized how easy it is for a child to access adult information. I agree with the statement of @PERSON1 in some degree. I believe if we started taking certian information away completly we would find ourselves ignorant. But when we let our children ,the future of the world, vonerable to adult information they are greatly effected, @CAPS9 teens and violent video games, or explicit magazines. For example my niece is able to check out any book in the library, books like @CAPS10 @CAPS11 famous book intitled '@CAPS12 @CAPS13 ', which means my struggle in german. My @NUM1 year old niece can read quite well and is very impressionable as are many young children. Public media outlets need to be more heavily monitored, this includes public libraries, retail stores, the internet, and @CAPS14. I believe books should be censored by content much like movies. This makes the distibutor left responsible and the consumer more aware of the content and its effect",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6082,3,"Sun, amount of miles, people all are reasons why the setting affects the cyclist. For example, the sun was beating down on him every time and the cyclist seemed to complain that it was so hot. Also, he said that he really didn’t seem to notice it through in his mind it affected the cyclist. Next, the amount of miles that the cyclist was biking affected him mentally because people kept,",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 518,1,"Dear local newspaper, More and more people are using computers there days. Some people think computers are an improvements to society. Others are concerned that people spent too much time on computers and not enough time exercising and spending time with friends and family. I believe that computers can be a bad thing. I think this because some people spend to much time on them,, it's one of the leading causes of obesity, and it interfers with people social lifes. According to recent studys, about @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people spend most of their time on their computers. Many ot these people spend their time on online games and socializing websites such as facebook and myspace. Others spend it shopping or learning. Some of the online games include world of warcraft, rune scope, and many @CAPS1's @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 games. Many people who spend most of their time on the computer are or @MONTH1 became obese. According to @PERSON1, spending alot of time on computer is one of the main reasons for obesity. Many experts agree that computers are the learning cause of obesity. between @DATE1 and @DATE2 more people have been using their computers more often. The obesity rate has increased between then too. Most of the people who spend alot of time on the computer don't interact with their friend and family much. This can lead to ruined relationships, loss of friends and the chance of losing your love with family. Many experts, such as @PERSON2, say that a person can become depressed from not interacting with friends and family. He also says some of the people who became depressed start thinking of suicide. Spending too much time on the computer is a bad thing would you want to spend too much time on the computer even ater hearing the cons of it? I believe spending too much time on the computer is bad for everyone.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 446,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, I strongly believe that people should cut down on using the computer. Just imagine, more people outside and healthy. Less “cyberspace” bullying, and less burning of electricity. My first reason why people should spend less time on the computer and more outside is because @PERCENT1 of people that use the computer more than two hours a day are either at risk of being overweight or are overweight. Also, @PERSON1, from @ORGANIZATION1 says “@CAPS2 people believe that using the computer gives you benefits, but they don’t. They increase your chances of either being overweight or getting diseases such as diebeties. It’s imperative that the community takes action to stop this from happening. “In addition, my neighbor, @PERSON2 had to do a study to interview overweight adults and teenagers. @CAPS3 told me that @PERCENT2 of the @NUM1 people @CAPS3 interviewed said they don’t go outside and use the computer for about @NUM2 hours a day! I implore the citizens of the @LOCATION1 area to cut down on internet time and go outside to enjoy nature. My second reason is the less people on the computer means less cyberspace bullying. @NUM3 out of @NUM4 people that use the socializing websites have experienced more than @NUM2 encounters of cyberbullying also my sisters friend, @PERSON3, overdosed on advil so @CAPS3 ran comitt suicside because of cyber bullying. Someone had said @CAPS3 was ugly, smelled and should ""go die in a hole."" @CAPS3 didn't tell anyone about this. Luckily her mother brought her to @CITY1 @ORGANIZATION1 fast enough to be put on life support for @NUM6 hours. furthermore, if people cut down on internet socializing website than less people will be in danger of cyberbullying affecting their lives. It's excruciating imperative for people to use the computer for only @NUM7 or @NUM8 hours a day. My final reason is, the less time you use your computer the less money you would be wasting on electricity bills and spending more time on family vacations. Dr. @DR1, from the peabody museum in @LOCATION2 begs people to use less electricity and power on the internet so the environment can slowly rebuild itself to be what it was before technology and electricity was invented. In addition, @PERCENT3 of power used in todays homes is used on computers. Also my grandmother is astounded by what todays technology is doing to the environment and the people behind this madness or electricity. @CAPS3 believes that the less time on the computer means more time on family vacations and with friends. Lastly, it's extremly imperative that people stop using computers as much to help their health their self estem and environment. A case take action to stop using computer @NUM9. Thank you for reading my paper.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9615,4,"The author concludes with this paragraph to show her determination. When she says. “…when the snows melt and the geese return and his hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” Saeng is explaining how the geese have the determination to fly back and that the hibiscus has the determination to bud again so why shouldn’t she have the determination and confidence to take the test again. Saeng said, “I-I failed the test.” It seems as if failing the driving test made her feel like she was going to fail in the new country. But after she saw the geese’s and hibiscus’s determination through harsh conditions, she was determined to try the test again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20772,8," On @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 is a true story about a time that i had with two of my friends/squad member named @PERSON3 and @PERSON1. When we were walking @CAPS3 cheer-leading practice on a @DATE1 @TIME1. We had a good laugh going @CAPS3 @NUM1 and I were getting cold, because we were in shorts and sweatshirts, @CAPS8 we put on @CAPS1 hoods. @CAPS6 @PERSON3 wanted @CAPS3 put her hood up also @CAPS8 she didn't feel lonely, but her hood was @CAPS3 small and with thick hair it just made it worse for her. @CAPS8 she tired @CAPS3 put her hood on anyways and her hair went on the top of her head and her curls are at the bottom of her hair. @CAPS8 when when she put her hood on it made her look like a poodle.When we got @CAPS3 the end of the block that I live on @PERSON1 said her foot was hurting, @CAPS8 i told her i would give her a piggy back ride. @CAPS8 she got onto my back, and i told her @CAPS13 we get @CAPS3 the end of this block set me down and we can cross the street @CAPS6 give me a piggy back ride, @CAPS8 @PERSON1 gave me a piggy back ride. @CAPS8 when we crossed and @CAPS6 we told @PERSON3 that it was her turn @CAPS3 give one of us a piggy back ride, i was about @CAPS3 get on @PERSON3's back the @PERSON1 said ""@CAPS5 just got a turn! Now it's my turn!""@CAPS6 i was like ""@CAPS7 @PERSON1. Okay @PERSON3 give me your backpack and water bottle."" @CAPS8 @PERSON3 gave her stuff @CAPS3 me and gave @PERSON1 a piggy back ride. @CAPS6 @CAPS13 that we got @CAPS3 the end of the block, I told @PERSON3 that she now had @CAPS3 give me a piggy back ride. @CAPS6 @PERSON3 was like ""@CAPS9! I'm @CAPS3 tired"" In the end of that conversation she gave me what i wanted.At the end of that last block @PERSON3 set me down and @CAPS6 we crossed the street. @CAPS6 @CAPS1 @ORGANIZATION1 drove by us yelling ""@CAPS10!"" @CAPS6 we turned around @CAPS3 see who yelled that at us, and we found out it was @CAPS1 @ORGANIZATION1. @CAPS6 I said ""@CAPS12 look it's @PERSON2! She is actually here on time!"" @CAPS13 @ORGANIZATION1 @PERSON2 us, we three girls started @CAPS3 just bust out laughing. We started @CAPS3 laugh because of what @PERSON2 yelled out at us.When @PERSON2 went @CAPS3 go park her car, we just started walking up @CAPS3 her @CAPS3 talk @CAPS3 her, as she was getting out of her car.@CAPS8 when @PERSON2 got out of her car we were just getting @CAPS3 her car. She walked up @CAPS3 us and we started @CAPS3 talk and walk into the school where we practice. As we were walking i said @CAPS3 @PERSON2 ""@CAPS5 are actually here on time!"" @CAPS6 @ORGANIZATION1 responded by saying ""I know right?!"" We finally got @CAPS3 the doors @PERSON2 said ""@CAPS12 everyone is here today!"" @CAPS8 that is a time that i had a good laugh with more @CAPS6 just one person. Going @CAPS3 that practice was a blast that night. That night was fantastic going @CAPS3 cheer leading practice. Hope @CAPS3 have that much fun going @CAPS3 practice again. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9846,4,"THE AUTHOR MUST LIKELY INTENDED TO SHOW THE HOPEFUL ENLIGHTENMENT OF SAENG'S COMPLEX DILEMMA. IN THE PHRASE, ""WHEN THEY COME BACK"" THE AUTHOR MUST LIKELY REFERS TO THE HIBISCUS FLOWERS THAT REPRESENT THE FOND MEMORIES OF HER HOMELAND. THE AUTHOR ILLUSTRATES SAENG'S STRUGGLE ADAPTING TO HER NEW LIFE THROUGH A “TEST” OF PLANTING THE BUDS JUST AS SHE HAD DONE BACK HOME WITH HER GRANDMOTHER. THIS TEST REPRESENTS THE ACHIEVEMENT OF ADAPTATION TO HER NEW LIFE. FOR THAT REASON, THE AUTHOR CONCLUDED HER STORY WITH THE PARAGRAPH INDICATING SAENG WILL INDEED TAKE THAT TEST AGAIN.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16360,6,"Based on the excerpt, there were many obsticles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obsticle is that ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This could be a big threat to The nearby pedestrians. Furthermore, an additional obsticle is ""nature itself"". The winds are constantly changing which is dangerous for the dirigibles. One last example of an obsticle is ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This would be dangerous if the dirigible lost control and harmed a pedestrian. These are @CAPS1 some examples In the article of how there were many obsticles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6971,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead ;Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie he goes through all kinds of settings where the going could get better or worse. “I noticed the terrain changing, flat roads was replaced with short rolling @NUM1 Kurmaskie). This shows or explains that the going could get a little tougher now because he will have to be riding up hills and he is almost out of water. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind” (@NUM2 Kurmaskie). This explains that the man could not get water or a ride from anywhere around, because there was nothing out there to at. This is how the setting features affected the cyclists.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 787,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, In my opinion, spending too much time online has negative effect on society. People aren't getting a full social experience when they talk on email, facebook and twitter. Being on such sites has taken up time that could be spent in other areas, such as family, friends and school. They aren't being able to enjoy the outdoors and being able to exercise. Though online activity can be helpful spending too much time can be harmful. Interacting online can be a great experience for those who have friends and family who live far away. But spending too much time online can damage you social activity levels. In person interaction is better than online, because you see how the person you're talking to is reacting to everything you say. Having a good, positive social environment is benificial to you and your friend. Spending too much time on the computer can also damage you social relationship with your family. For family who live far away, and online is the only way to socialize, online interaction is a great thing to have. But for you close family, you could be missing out on their lives and how they are doing. Your relationship with you family could be in jeoporady because you insist on using your computer. When you use the computer, you're probably eating some food too. And spending time online is taking away your time from exercising those calories off. The obesity level in @LOCATION1 is increasing, probable cause being over-usage of computers. being outside is another thing missing from our lives because of computers we aren't experiencing the beautiful nature life our @ORGANIZATION1 has to offer, online activity is hurting our health, and making us not enjoy our outdoor life. In conclusion, being online too often is abusing our social, health, and taking up too much of our lives. Using the internet is good for adults so they can pay taxes, work at home, and do many other beneficial things for them and their families. But for other, less useful sites are being used to interact. Why not just call or meet up with person, instead of using the computers?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6177,3,"In the story the cyclist faced many problems, one of the biggest problems was the terrian that he had to maneuver them. The terrain was hilly, having to go up a hill on a bike is tireing and wears you out faster than flat land would, and making him use more energy. The heat was also unbearable making it harder for him to focus, the cyclist did everything he could to keep consiese while manuvering threu the terrain and deserted landscape being a huge desert of rolling mountains he pushed forwad, finding no civilization anywhere to get a refill of water. For example, if the terrain wasn’t as hilled then it would of made it easier for him using less energy and less strain on his legs, the heat of the desert beating down on him probably slowed his progress also. Heat will make you move slower and a cyclist moving down a barnest road with no shade will make the journey seem longer, and imposible. In the end his will and determination got with threw the landscape, so he could get the water he needed to finish his trip",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1195,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, @CAPS4 having everything known to man at your fingertips. @CAPS4 having an endless source of information in your own home. Wouldn’t you want all of this all the time? The question then is, do computers have positive effects on people? I strongly believe computers do benefit society. Firstly, computers teach you hand-eye coordination. The main way is by typing. When you type, you start of looking at the keys but eventually you memorize all the locations of the keys. Also, computer games teach hand-eye coordination. If you weren't looking at the screen, would it be possible to win the game? When computers teach you hand-eye coordination, you can use it for other things too. For example, you definitely need it in sports or more. Specifically, baseball. If you didn't have good hand-eye coordination, you wouldn't be able to catch the ball or be able to hit the ball when you swing. Hand-eye coordination very important. Secondly, computers give people the ability to form about places and people. When people are deciding when to get vacation, they go in the internet. What there is in do. Why would you travel in a place is you back. Many use the internet in research other countries. When the eight grade did reports their information. Eighty seven percent the internet. Finally; some people say computers take away from interaction with family and friends, but computers actually allow you to tell with other family and friends around the world. Wouldn't it be wonderful to with your loved ones in a different state of country? The main way of online communication is @CAPS5-mail or @CAPS6 @CAPS7. These allow you to send someone a message faster and easier. It is much easier in remember someone @CAPS5-mail address than it is a phone settle for just talking, when you can actually see the person? It would be like them being in the room with you. Computers are a great way to talk to someone. Why wait any longer? Computers are a great way to refine your hand-eye coordination skills. You can research Faraway people and places to see what life is like around the globe. Most importantly, you can communicate with family and friends online through @CAPS8, @CAPS5-mail, or @CAPS10. Definitely, computers benefit society. So go and share this information with other people to convince them that computers are positive.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15755,6,The Empire State Building faced alot promblems before it came out as an @ORGANIZATION1. They scared that other people will destroy this Building. So the reduced the dirigibles to dock there. They wanted their city to become a famous city and get more money. And other problem the some people didn't care and postpone to later.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13493,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a @CAPS3 that is a @CAPS1 of @CAPS2, love, and unity. The author shows @CAPS2 For his home country of Cuba. He says how much he loves the culinary creations of the culture, the music, and the celebrations with his extened family. As a result of his @CAPS2, it shows that you can have a sense of home even if you are in another country. The author also sets a love – filled @CAPS3 because of how open his family was to other people. His family would let many people into their home and build a great friendship with them, regardless of race or cultural beliefs. The author sets a @CAPS3 of unity as well. This @CAPS3 is a result of how all the different people in his neighbor hood, even though they come from all different countries, always worked well together and showed the outmost respect for one another. This is how the author set a @CAPS3 of @CAPS2, love, and unity in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16585,6,"There were many reasons that the mooring mast couldn't be used. The first reason is wind speeds. In fact ""in 1930, the @ORGANIZATION1 dirigible, Los Angeles, approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie because of forceful winds."" @CAPS1 the dirigibles could not even get close enough to dock. Another reason was safety. In 1937 the German dirigible, Hindenburg, went down because of a fire. That situation could've been a lot worse if they dirigible went down on heavily populated areas, in which thousands of people might die. The last reason is that there is a law prohibiting airships flying too low over urban are urban areas. Therefore it would be illegal for a dirigible to get close enough to dock.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20792,8," Laughter is the esscense of life. Without laughter my life would be meaningless, and without that sense of happiness or compassion, life wouldnt be worth living. My sister is the only person i trust with my secrets. She is the only one who makes me happy when i feel down. My sister and I, laugh with eachother at our own jokes. My sister is my other half and we share everything. She makes me laugh and is always there when i need her. I'll always be there for her also. Laughter is an important part of life. @CAPS2, my sister and I laugh and play. One day I came off the bus from school, all i could do was cry. As I waited for my sister's bus to arrive, the tears fell down like a river flowing. The bus appeared and a sense of joy appeared with it. @CAPS1, it wasnt the bus that brought my joy. It was my sister, right away she could feel my pain and noticed my tears. I could see in her face, the love and care. She asked me whats wrong. I could hear the worry in her voice. My river of tears stopped and I began to speak. I could tell her everything, without trying or holding anything back. The words flowed through my mouth. @CAPS1 need to think of what to say. I told her what happened without a pause. Afterwards, she told me something I'll never forget. She said,""@CAPS1 matter whatever happens, I'll always love you."" @CAPS2 we laughed. It was the sweetest laugh. A chorus of laughter filled the air. Nothing that people say about me is true, so I learned to laugh at it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7319,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making him dehydrated, troubled, and relieved. The cyclist is dehydrated because of the horrible heat. He says “the growing realie at von that l would drop from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June.” This means that the heat is a treat to him and would cause him to become dehydrated and have heatstroke. The cyclist is troubled by the scarce sourroundings. ""a corral that couldn’t hold the lamest mule.” He is getting worried because there is no one around and his directions are starting to sound wrong. The cyclist is relieved by the water from the sink. He had the “overwhelming urge to seek out Gary and Wilber, kiss them.” This means that that he is so relieved that he has finally found water and he wants to thanks the owners of the bait shop for providing it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12461,5,"The mood of the memoir was happy because, Narciso is happy that their moving, but is still going to miss his old house, but surprised on how his parrents could turn his new home into his new home agian.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9999,4,"In the “passage winter Hibiscus” by monfong Ho, the quote “ when they come back, Saeng vowed silently, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, I will take the test again, it symbolizes @CAPS1 new journey in the new country she lives in. In the test Saeng is having a personal discrepancy, missing her homeland @CAPS2 she states “I – failed the test.” This test meant more to then she just failing. She was a test to her ability to function in her new country and she failed. The “ when they came back…” quote started above can be analyzed deeply as the snow being her obstacles and the hibiscus being herself. When the obstacles melt away and she buds into a new stronger person she will take the test again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3481,2,"Many books in libraries have profanity, it just depends on how you read and anazlyze the profanity. To some people the strong words help the reader get the point across their head. To others the words are just offensive. I disagree that most books are offensive to readers I believe that they just help the writers get their points across. Many children come across books with offensive language, but if they only read books that are within their age level then they shouldn't have these problems. In adult books there is more offensive language, but to adults eyes and ears its a different story because they hear, and possibly say a lot of the words that they are seeing in these books anyhow. I believe that any offensive reading material should be found and then sent to a certain area of the library where if you are an adult then you can check these books out. This is a way to keep the children away from these books, words, and to keep them 'innocent' still. Children don't need to be reading books with offensive language anyhow, but of course this is up to their guardian. It's not necassarily a bad thing to have strong language in books, as long as the reader that has the book is taking it in the way the writer is intending, which is most likely to help the theme. Children should be kept away from these books but they should not be completely removed from the shelves. They should just be put in their own area for adults to read only",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3437,2,"If you get offended because of a book, magazine, music, or movies than don't read, watch, or listen to it. America shouldn't be censored. Censorship should be fo young childen. If your grown and get offended by something having the '@CAPS1-word' on it then don't read it. If a movie drops the '@CAPS1-bomb' then don't watch it. i completly disagree with someone wanting to remove vulgar words. I don't get offeneded by swearing because its usually used in a funny way, like telleing jokes, or it makes a crappy song good. Censoship is helpful, but vulgar things shouldn't be removed from society, and it never will. More often than not, kids learn cuss words fom paents or friends. If you don't want your kid to cuss or be surrounded by cussing then remove them from that situation. It's the parents responsibility to protect or 'censor' a childs environment.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13014,5,The mood created by the author was a very unique one. The author was remembering and charising the memorys he had of his old home. He described his home by saying how brave and courageous his parents were to give him a better life also how his family was so rich in culture and how his family and neighbors would always visit because times were tough but the authors parents never turned them down. The author made it sound that it was the perfect childhood and described it with such detail and passian and that is why the mood is so unique and special.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1151,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 is my belief that people are spending too much time on computers. Now a days you can do anything on a computer. Such as, talk to friends, play games, even turn off your lights! But, what are they taking away from us? There taking away communication skills and is same uses creating cyber bullying. They also don't let us enjoy the beauty of nature and exercising. One out of every @NUM1 teens spends more time telling people on the computer then face to face. This way of communication prevents children from learning valuable social skills which come with conversing face to face. This makes @CAPS1 more difficult for children to make friends, or even to do well is work intencies. Studies say by each upcoming generation the communication skills are decreasing by @PERCENT2. Eventually, if @CAPS1 continues to drop at this the will have a world that went. This style of communication has ever a new type of bullying. What have we do to people? You waste over @NUM2 days a year sitting in front of your computer. in this wasted time you could be out going for a jog or walking the day. in fact, the percentage of people that have computer is much greeter than the percentage of people that do not only you exercising for yourself. The computer cant do @CAPS1 for you. Sitting in front of a computer does nothing for your body. You physicaly have to get up and move. Its good for your health, got fresh air. Coming to a point about fresh air @PERCENT1 of people who use computers at home are more likely telecom sick than people who doesnt leave you set seem for sometimes. Seeing nature like never before, I dont think. Yes you can look us the green spotted tree from on the internet, but its nothing like in nature and @CAPS1 is real life. Discoveries cannot be made about new species on the computer, a computer cant find @CAPS1 for your find @CAPS1. People are and less about the environment does to computer. They are seeing a picture not the healthy. After writing this I can te the that I was about myself and personal, which scared me the most I realizes I am becoming more and more dependent on computer each day. I dont seeing friends as. I dont go outside as much, and I don't as much. This true for must people whether you realize @CAPS1 or not I personaly ongoing today and out on time computing you will te. Computer are to much lets for from there hold and deo something more with there lives. This well improve our. So this brings to my final that computers are a bad influence on human and we should use less of them and for ourselves by doing not seeing. Thank you for your time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14,1,My three detaileds for this news paper article is one state you opinion about the effects of computers. Seconde give detailed resons that will persuade of the local newspaper to agree with yor postition. This are my three ideas to the news paper article. To bigin my opinion about the computer effects are wast time. Many people wast time computers like fat people insted by insted by in the computer go and run or exercising. Insted be computer go out ur girlfriend or family or family or friends to have fun. So be incomputer to long is bad many kids wach bad stuff like for adults. Is good to be in computer but not to long. To start you shod agree with me becasue my detailed and my reason. My resons are many airs the bas stuff like porn. Many kids wach that it ruins ther mainly and the futur. They get addicted to that watching. So people that use computer for good stuff its old for mids for good ganes of good. This are my detailed and resons for yor with me. To bigin and going to organize my ideas and well and present them clearly. It good to be at the computer but not the long insted go out plat and exersus. abd yor can enjoy life insted be in computer. The bad things many kids wach bad stuff and cmputer has relly bad staff. The computer is use for evrye thing this days. This how organize my ideas. In conclusion this are my ideas for the news papaer. Ols I state my opinion on computer effects. I give detailed and resons that will persuade local news paper and to agree with me. Think I organize my ideas as much present them clearly. This are my ideas so could new papaer to se computers effects. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4319,2,"I do not think that books, movies, music, magazines, etc., should be removed just because some people do not like them. Maybe some others do like them and like to read them. There should be no reason that one person or persons should try taking something off of a shelf at a library just because they find it offensive. Many people like many different things and somethings that you read @MONTH1 affect others, but you dont care about that, you just care about what you want and like and what is offensive to you. What if something you were watching or reading or listening to was offending someone else, would you care? Would it bother you if someone told you it was affending them? Everyone likes different things, and some others @MONTH1 not always agree with what they are going to be interested in",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9525,4,"The author concludes the story with this specific paragraph to sum up the realization and determination Saeng obtains. First of all, Saeng starts out upset after failing her test. When she sees the flower and goes to find it at a shop she is overwhelmed by this small reminder of her old home. That small flower made her realize how much she missed her old home and buying it becomes a nessesity for her. She probably felt that with that flower she would always have a little piece of home in this newer world. After realizing that memories are whats important and seeing that flower’s determination to survive a cold winter, she develops the determination to take the test again. She vows to do so because she has gained faith from the flower’s survival and her realization of important memories. All in all ,that ending paragraph reveals these specific messages",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18444,7,One day my mom said I could get this new toy at the store but my mom had to do other things before we went to the store so I had to be patient. My mom had to go to where she works because she forgot something. Then she had to go to the gas station. Then we finally went to the store and I got the toy that I wanted.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19210,7,"I remember a time when I was patient. It was at my cusins house. It was very boring though. I was also sad and lonly, at thetime . so I am going to tell you. It was not long ago ,I was at my cusins house .Everyone except me .There were not enough four whielers ,so I was the only one left out .I felt so lonly .I couldn’t believe how I was bored I was .All I could do was woch with envy .Everyone was having fun except for me .Everyone was screaming with joy and lafing intill they would cry because they were having so much fun .Then my dad ???a corner of cunies for me .I smile to try to look like I am having fun then he asks me if I want to go I say yes ! So I I hop on the four where there was like no tomorrow .I knew it can just a little and main thank you to my dad , and take off .I could not imagen how much fun this was .I felt the breeze hit my face ,my shirt flappin on my back it was amazing .” I wish this day would neve end “ I said screaming with joy .I had a lot of fun that day .I never had that much fun in my life .A lot can happen when you are patient .Even though I was bord at the beginning it was worth it in the end that was a time I was patient .",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18442,7,I remember one day I was waiting in the waiting room in the doctors office with my mom because I wasn’t feeling well. We sat there talking for about ten minutes when my mom said “@CAPS1 it’s already been ten minutes” “I wonder when I will get to go and talk to my doctor.” I said. “I don’.t know but lets wait a bit longer. Mom said. So as we waited and sat patiently more kids started coming in. I noticed some were young and some were older. I signed. What is taking so long? I wandered. Was my doctor even here today? I starred at the wall and looked at the color of it. Orange. Before I knew it half an hour passed. My mom was looking at her watch. “@CAPS1 it’s almost @NUM1!” “@CAPS2!” I said flustered and annoyed. “Are we just gonna sit here all day?” I asked. Finally my question was answered as a nurse said I could finally come back to a room and speak with my doctor about my sickness. “@CAPS3 for being patient! the nurse said smilling. I smiled back. I @CAPS4 been patient.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19244,7,"It was my first game. I was pumped ready to go in, coach yelled big guy and I was by his side. Then he said next play you re going in. Ther the assistant said no I wasn’t aloud to. The whole time I didn’t complain. I never said one word to anyone. I helped other people. It was still fun. The whole time at least I didn’t complain and make it worth for everyone else. The whole time I was on the side lines. Never went in not ounce. I was very patient. Not to say I wasn’t mad. At least I got some exercise standing there. The whole time I suported my team mates. I encouraged. I help in any way shape or form. I listend to them complain. But I did give suport. There I was so mad I could have killed. I was ready but my coach said no. It has my time to shine. That one stupid word stood in my way no. But at least I learned something.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9659,4,In the story “ Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho the author ends the story in a well mannered carhoined. The author ended with that paragraph to show that Saeng was not going to persuade even though for away from home. She is in a down was spiral at the beginning of the story she had failed a test and the hibiscus test her feeling nostalgic. When she got home her mother greeted her with kinds words kind of acting as an anti-depressent by making her food will not peppers and bitter melons. This kind of made Saeng see the good in life causing her not to give up and be confident that she will pass the test.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16528,6,"The obstacles the builders of the empire State building faced was that the wind, the climate was always a risk and the height of the building was also a chalange for the builders of the empire State building. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19089,7,"Being patient is one of the many important things in life that we have to deal with if you are impatient, and then people will say that you are impatient, and needs to calm down. Being patient also means that you are polite person and that you will not complain about anything, also that whatever happens, you will be understanding and you will wait. Let`s say somebody was in a line to get food. You would have to wait your turn in order to get your food while the other person is getting his/her food. That is being an understanding and polite person and sometimes even a role model for litter children/ kids. You are setting an example and being considerate. These are many reasons on why being patient takes understanding, and being considerate.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15820,6,"One of the big problems facing docking dirigibles is the government and the law. It is illegal to have such a low-flying aircraft. It says, ""... an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area..."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). Another obstacle would be safety. Dirigibles are FLAMMABLE and could easily injure and kill people if an accident happened. Is to dangerous, ""Most dirigibles... used hydrogen... hydrogen is highly flammable"" (@CAPS2. @NUM2) Another problem is nature and weather. The winds up there are extremely high and powerful. A big danger to dirigibles, ""... violent air currents... back of the ship would swivel around... high above pedestrians,"" (@CAPS2. @NUM3).",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4247,2,"I think censorship of certain materials, books, music, magazines, etc., that are offensive should be removed from people who have yet to mature, unless a parent or gardian approves of it. I think censorship can be a positive things for little children and younger folk because kids that are young of age should not view or listen to things such as bad things. These things can be a negitive influence on the child's character and personallity. No one should hear other kids cursing in public becuase this can influence other kid to do the same. I know my parents don't want to hear me say or do bad things around my younger siblings becuase this can influence them more to do it too than if some kid was saying or doing bad things. Some censorship shouldn't be aloud to those who are matuered, such as in high school where you have to get a signature from a parent to see some things that should not be shown to little kids becuase older people have matured and they understand why not to be a bad influence on people. Censorship of certain materials, books , musicm magazines, ect., that are offensive should be removed from people that have yet to mature, unless with parrent concent. People who have not matured should not view or listen to any thing that is a negitive influence on themselves.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4525,2,"Libraries have books that are short, long, and everything in between. Their are good and bad books, but that all depends on the opinion of the reader. There is no reason that if someone is offended by a book in a library that it should be removed from the shelf. The books on a shelf in the library are there for everyone to read so if one is removed then someone else is missing the chance to have the experience of reading that very book. Would you have some food destroyed if it didn't taste any good to you? No, you wouldn't get it again. So why'd someone have the right to remove a book because they were offended it isn't right your views on something are only an opinion nothing more. Your views are not the same as @PERSON1's who lives down the street so by removing a book it is pushing your views on somone else. In conclusion, the books in question could be good or bad in the eyes of the next person to read it. Pushy people aren't normally liked by others. Books are meant to be read and interpreted by the reader. That is why no one person has the right to take it off the shelf.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9218,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she wants to tell people that shes going to take the test again and try. Shes going to be like the flowers but she needs time so when they budd she will.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15153,6,"In the excerpt, it talks about making the empire state building the tallest in new york. It was the tallest building until archetectures built the chrysler building. The chrysler building stood 1,046 feet, 46 feet taller than the empire state building. So Al Smith realized he was gonna loose his tittle for having the tallest building. Then he came up with the idea of adding a top or a hat to the building.The idea Al Smith came up with was adding a landing spot for blimps or dirigibles. Al Smith knew it wasnt gonna be easy so he thought of possible reasons why it wouldnt work. He had to design another figure that would be able to hold the mass of the blimps. He also had to think about how passangers would get on and off the blimp. He also remembered most blimps use hydrogen instead of hellium which hydrogen is highly flammable. For example the German blimp hindenburg was destroyed by fire in lake hurst.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3240,2,"what i think about all of this? Is that to me i really don't care because that is like who i am. And its up the parents if they want the to remove the books off the shelf if they believe that a certain material as book, music, movies, and magazing should be remove off the shelves. Also i dont think a book will ever really hurt anyone. I mean its just a book it dose not really matter. Next, i am saying this becuse i dont really would get offensive to stuff like this argument. And also if there some stuff that kids shouldnt know about then they should put those stuff in the adult section and not a place where they can find it easy. They shouldn't put stuff that you think children should never know about in the kids section. Matter of fats i don't know why they should remove stuff like movie. Becuse if they are trying to block them form kids to see they are really dumb to do that. Beause there are moive that children can watch. And some parents is not going to let their children watch a @CAPS1 @NUM1 movies, and other movie they were not to see at there ages. Unless if their parents allowe it.And that goes with the same with the music. I don't know if they have bad music in the library.I don't see rap stuff in the library.like raps @CAPS2 and other stuff like it.So this is my thought about this arguments",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12420,5,"In the memoir the author obviously seems to be grateful and thankful because he states it multiple times in the passage. When he is recalling all the memories he had it proves to be a warm and happy mood. The cookings skills that his parents passed on to him he says that he's grateful for and passionate Cuban music he says that he still adores to this day. The author also states that there's not only a sense of family in being a blood relative but in the neighborhood as well. All the different cultures of his neighborhood; Spanish, Cuban and Italian came together in a great solidarity and friendship. The author is so thankful in fact that he's actually told his parents that he could have never done something as courageous as they did. The mood of the memoir is so strong in a positive way because he also writes that there is no way for him to express his gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon him at such an early age. To wrap up his memoir he mentions that he will never forget how his parents turned a simple house into a home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17922,7,"One time when I was patient was when there was a twenty two hour corride to florida. It was me, my cousin, my two sisters, and my parents. It was very boring. I was sitting in the back with my sister, and we kept fighting for foot space. Around five hours in, I was feeling cramped. We stopped off for dinner, then were on the road again. When it started to become night, the road froze and we stopped off and slept in the car. We woke up during sunrise and went to cracker barrel for breakfest. It was delicious. Then we got back into the car and drove the rest of the way to florida. It @MONTH1 have been a long drive, but it was worth it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3985,2,"Dear Newspaper staff, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 is @PERSON1 I @CAPS3 to @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6 I am in the @NUM1 grade. The reson for this letter is that I belive that certain material, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc. Should be removed from the shelves if they are offensive. The reson why I think it should be done because kids know days minds be every where from pron to games to bad music etc. In @CAPS7 books, magazines, movies, have things in it that shouldnt be in there. When kids get a hole of it they act like they anit never seen nothing like it. When they get on the computer they get on web sites that they know they are not suppossed to be on. If we didnt have these things we wouldnt have to worry about the loud music, the virus on the computer and the books being riped up. But know a days there are so much stuff people can do to get all of things. If someone just removed all the things that are found offensive from the shelves. That would be so wonderful for everyone. If they leave all the materials out there its going to be more and more problmes. When they just take it off everything will be in grate shape",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6589,3,"The setting in the story was hot. The biker was sweating a lot. The whole town was empty. He pasted empty buildings. Their were rivers and big hills that he had to ride through. As it says about the buildings, “somehow, I climbed away from the abandoned factory of juices and dreams, slowly gaining elevation while losing hope.” The setting would affect the cyclist because their was no one in the town. Also, their was high hills.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13012,5,"In the memoir a @NUM1 year old man Narciso Rodriguez, Sr. good affored to move to the modest, three-room apartment soon called home. (@CAPS1 @NUM2) In 1961 he was born in a simple house in Newark, New Jersey. @PERSON1, Sr. was a mood like man he was greatful, kind, traditional, and happy. Narciso was greatful because his parents passed a rich culinary skills and a love of cooking to him. He was happy because he could move to an affordable three-room apartment. @PERSON1 is traditional because he would listen to Cuban Music that would fill the air with mixing the aromas of the kitchen (@CAPS1 @NUM3), he would also have a Cuban feast which brought life and the love (@CAPS1 @NUM4). His babysitter was his first friend that lived above him and graced his kitchen with meals. This man's life was very successful because his traits would show about his community.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1312,1,"Imagine how people felt back then when there weren't any great technology. What if you didn't see your best friend in years and you lived long distance? Well now its this advance machine called a computer. Its very great and its a well hands on activity, that helps you with eye cornation. However, @CAPS1 going to tell you somethings about this device and now it affects humuns daily life. Moreover, the catogories are have a great relationship, online cources, and be on the best local websites. Did you know about @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 have a successful life with online-dating. There's tons of people who struggle with relationships. For example, one day my mom and dad got into a series of arguments. She felt that the relationship wasn't good enough and she needed to meet a better man. On the other hand, she decided to live a better life and find dates (over the computer) and live a new life. These are the fantastic things you can do on the computer to have a better relationship. Your a highschool dropout because you cant keep up with the class. You dont turn in your homework and fail every test. Also, you feel that there is nothing you can do to fix it. Well not so fast my son! Now you can take online cources to boost up your grade and make you feel comfortable. Imagine sitting at the computer, completing every assignment and doing every homework there is. Watching your teacher teach, to you through a webcam. There's nothing like it, in fact you get the homework faxed to you. Someone in this world is living this life, it could be you. There's new websites all around the world today. However, there is no better website with all your friends on it. For example, myspace, facebook, and twitter. All websites that can stay in contact with your best friends. Another, that can be even more intrested is webcam. It's live from home fotage face to face on the computer. How cool is seeing your friend when your not together? Third of all, communication makes the world go around that why more and more people meet new friends. In sum, as you can see there's a lot of fun things you can do on a computer. It affects humans lives because more and more people are intrested in this device",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12401,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez by The @CAPS1 prints of our Lives the mood in many thing. The mood is the feel of happiness in his house of his family shows him love and his culture and heritage. I think this becausein the story it say ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighbor hood or the many thing I learned there. about how to love """,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13115,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir would be grateful and happy. It really makes you wanna think about life and how good it is, thanks to parents and grandparent, even anchestors. It makes you want to love your parents even more seeing how they went through alot and probably gave up alot for you. Like leaving their homeland or giving up great things like @ORGANIZATION1 and Narciso Rodriguez Sr did for their family or son. They wanted a better life and education for their kids. They had to leave their homeland, where they were born and raised and give up some things to get better things. They had to give up their job and skill's they already knew how to do for better things. The good thing that happened or that they get is more freedom and better life and education, it's not easy leaving everything you love and where you are born but has to be done for better things and opportunities. Reading this memoir gives you or leaves you with a satisfying, grateful, happy and kinda sad mood.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8898,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the author wanted to show just cause saeng failed that test don’t mean she giving up. she said when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then she will take it again. what the author means that right now she has failed but over time she can study and learn more to get ready to re take it. And by the time she ready to take the test the snow with have went away every should be hot out the birds come back and the flower is growing fine. she will take it. And how author ended it lets us know she going to take it but how he use the words let us know that she will not only take it but pass it too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18786,7,"Today was the final day of tryouts. The deciding day .Tryouts we over I patiently waited for the @CAPS2 to hand out the envelopes to all @NUM1 girls. I didn’t know if could handle this. “@CAPS1 until you’ve left the building to open your envelope,” @CAPS2 @PERSON1 said. “@CAPS3’s only fair .If everyone opens them in here then people who don’t make the team will be sad and bummed while the girls who did would be jumping for joy, which would make the girls who didn’t make @CAPS3 feel even more bummed and left out .Be patient and @CAPS1 until you leave the building.” she called my name .I came up and grabbed my envelope .She dismissed us .some girls opened their envelopes right away .But, they didn’t make @CAPS3 .karma .I waited until I got outside. I could barely @CAPS1 .I needed to know but I had to @CAPS1 .Patience isn’t such a lovely thing always. l opened my envelope. I made the team! I was so excited and I was glad I had the patience to @CAPS1 and be surprised.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13472,5," In this memoir, Narciso Rodriguez speaks with nothing but warm fondness and gratitude as she describes her childhood home. The loving way she talks about her parents' appartment and their kitchen and the Cuban culture they combined into their everyday lives suggest that Narciso has wonderful memories of her parents. Obviously, she is very grateful for everything her parents did for her and the chance for her to grow up in such a tender community - where ""'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" (@NUM1) The entire memoir is written with such care and attention to sweet detail. The author clearly feels blessed that her parents sacrificed their safety in their homeland to bring her to @LOCATION1 in order for her to live a better life, to experience the importance of friends and family, and to learn about the true meaning of love through Cuban culture.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21176,8," Laughter is how me and my friends connect most of the time, and that's how i became friends with a lot of them. You know when your in a new class and you don't know anybody in there so its kinda awkward because you feel like your a loner. I try to make the best of a situation and try to make new friends but I'm not always the best at it, so when i get a chance i make them laugh. First we take baby steps and the more we laugh together it seems like the closer we are to each other. By the end of the semester you don't really like the class but you don't want it to be over because you made such a good friend. The next semester you find out you have a class with that person but they don't like the class so they move out. Then you realize you guys kinda grow apart because you never see each other and if you never talk then it gets kinda awkward. The way we started off our friendship was really by accident but i didn't know many people in the class and the people that i did know weren't really my friends. We sat by each other, and after so long of awkward silence between us two she made a joke and i started to laugh. The next thing we know is within a week and would talk to each other and soon enough we hung out some. About half way through the semester we would get in trouble in class for talking to much and we started to realize we were starting to be best friends. The semester went on and we were hanging out more and more and she was the only one i would hang out with sometimes. By the time the semester was almost over we didn't know what our classes were so we thought we would be split up. The day we got our schedules we talked to each other and seen what our classes were. We seen we had one class together and we were excited. The first day of the second semester we went into the art class that we had together and we were laughing the whole time. At the end of the period she told me she didn't want to be in that class because shes not an artsy type of person. I went to my sixth period and was wondering if she was actually going to switch out like she said or not. At the end of sixth period I seen her and she told me that she got switched out and went to a class that she wanted. I know people in that class still but its not the same because I knew we were going to lose our friendship because we would never see each other. Its a couple weeks into the last semester and we hardly ever talk sometimes it gets awkward just to be around her because its not like how it used to be. Laughter is how me and her became friends and classes is what tore us apart.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18898,7,"Bang! I had just shot myself in the foot with a @CAPS1 gun. It all hapened when my sister got a gun for his birth day. I went up to a target and got ready to shout that was when I got shot I went to shout, that was when I got shot. I went to my more and told her what happened. The next day we went to the doctor's office to have a look at my foot. The doctor had about @NUM1 or @NUM2 patients there not in in cluding me. My mom said"" @CAPS2 could take a while. I am a person with barely any patience at all. We waited, and waited, and waited for an hour. Today wasnt my kiday day. She called out a persons name it was hot mine. We waited for a total of @NUM3 hours and then the doctor finally called my name. After the @CAPS1 got removed I went home to sleep. That was a time when I had to be patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3123,2,"I believe censorship should be used in libraries to a certain extent. There are too many children that have access to inappropriate materials at the library, but some of it could be useful. There was a time when I borrowed a movie from the public library. When I went home to watch it with my mother, it turned out to be highly inappropriate and offensive, not to mention awkward and embarassing. My mom and I couldn't believe that a person of any age could have access to a movie as inappropriate as the movie '@CAPS1'. Although there are some materials that should not be in the library, there are some materials that could be thought of by some people to be offensive that are in the library for educational purposes. Some people think gay rights, abortion, and teenage sexual activity are offensive. There @MONTH1 be some people that would like to know more about one of those things for a project at school or a problem in their personal lives. Somebody @MONTH1 have a family member who believes they are homosexual, a daughter who has become sexually active, or a woman @MONTH1 be thinking about recieving an abortion. What is offensive to some, @MONTH1 not be offensive to others. I believe censorship should be used for some offensive materials. If it is educational, it @MONTH1 be useful to some people. There will never be a perfect answer for a problem like this in the world. As the world evolves, so does the human race's morals and there is nothing that is offensive to all the people in the world.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4333,2,"Do I believe that certain materials should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? I do not think it should matter weather we have music, movies or magazines in the library. Some people like to come in the library to relax and look at a magazine or listen to some music. I do not think it bothers anybody by what other people are doing there, if it is not bothering them it should not bother anybody else. I see people sometimes reading a book and listening to music. it does not bother me when they do this. It is a way for them to drown out the world and enjoy a good book. There is only one reason why we should keep certain materials out of the library. It is that some people get very loud when there looking at magazines, or when there music is turned up way to loud. Other than that I do not think we should keep those types of materials in the librarys. I am a reader my self and I like to read in peace. So I like to listen to my music while I am reading. I also like to read magazines every once and awhile. It is real relaxing to me. Those are my reasons on why it should not matter weather we have those types of materials in the library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3526,2,"Do you think that certain books, music, magazines are sometimes found very offensive? If I had kids I wouldnt want my kids to be around any of these bad things. I think that we should remove all of these bad things from the world to help the kids and childern become better people in the world. There are a lot of bad people in the world but it is mostly because of all the things that people read and see. When people like great singers sing about drugs and other stuff kids think that it is cool to do drugs so they start to do them and then they cant stop! You want everyone to go to college and be doctors but they cant if they follow things that everyone else does. We need to encourage our children to be great people but we cant with drugs and volience that goes on around them, but we can try to banned the bad books, movies, and music. We need more good things to influence our children. We dont want our chilren to look at magazines and see women that are really tiny and they think that they have to look like that to be popular. If your children what to read and listen to these things then you cant let it influence them. I listen to rap music all the time but i never let it influence me because i want to be successful in my life. These are all the reasons why be should banned these things from our children. If you want your children to be successful then you will keep your kids away from the volience and drugs. I know what kind of things happen when you dont keep them away. You dont want these things to happen to your kid so keep them away from it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 35,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think computers have a positive effect on people. Where would we be without them? Computers teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about any subject they want, and allow people to communicate with each other, no matter how far away. Obviously, computers are beneficial. I think computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, as I said earlier. I know people say that where you are on be computer, you spend less time exercising, but the computers help you with you throwing skills. Hand ey coordination also applies for if you want to be a surgeon/doctor. You need to have steady hands. What we ready to do whatever is needed. See, they do have a positive effect. I think computers have a positive effect on people. They give people the ability to learn about anything they want on the internet. Say you want to be an engineer when you grow up, you might want to learn anything and everything you can to be successful later on in that carer. What about a doctor, you would want to know how many years of college and med school are required to get your medical degree. A computer helps you learn about those things. It can also teach you about tons of other things. Again, how could they not be positive. I think computers have a positive effect on people. Another thing they can do out of a hundred others is let you communicate with other people no matter how far away. Mail can so my where with enough, yes, but @CAPS3-mail is free and gets there in less than a minutes where mail can lake weeks to go far. For example, what if you came from another country. You wouldn't want to lose touch with people you grew-up with. With a computer, you could use skype to see now new the person. Talking on the phone or mailing doesn't even compare to that. You could never lose touch! Computers help people do all kinds of things. I conclusion, computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about any subject they want, and allow people to communicate with each other, no matter how far away. There are no bad reason that could top any of these. They make sense. So, what do you think? Do you think they are good for us, or do we need less computers?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10341,4,He concludes that when it is spring he will take the test again. That will give her another chance to pass it. This will give her another chance to do what is right.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6211,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist. One reason the features of the setting affect him is because it is hot outside which makes him need more water. An example of this is “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly, and I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” @CAPS1 example of being hot outside is “A tarlike substance oozed out, followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15612,6,"New technology, especially in aviation,requires work to be done, thus causing many obstacles to overcome. In order to make this mooring mast on the Empire State building a success, the builders would need to know how to keep the dirigible hooked to the building and able to set passengers on and off. A quote from the text supporting this would be ""A mooring mast added to the top of the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers off and on"". (6). But the passengers were not the only obstacle the builders had to surpass. The stress a dirigible would put on the building would be too great, meaning they also had to remodel the actual building. The text supports this with, ""the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" (@NUM1). Even with all these modifications, however, the mooring mast was doomed to failure for reasons the builders could not fix.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1047,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION2, Computers are destroying modern youth. The rapid advancement in technology is not a positive thing. The popular social networks such as facebook and twitter are putting youth at danger of @CAPS1-@CAPS2 and child predators. Children are also becoming addicted to computers and are paying the price physically. Although we are becoming a smarter species, we are destroying the ones who will soon lead the world. This crazy computing must end! Although children are able to socialize using the computer, they are at danger of being hurt physically and emotionally. ""I really tried to ignore all of the cruel comments people were posting about me. I tried as hard as I could, but everytime I logged unto facebook and looked at what people said about me, I died inside. I almost had no desire to live."" That quote was said by @PERSON1, a former student of @ORGANIZATION1. He is as victim of @CAPS1-@CAPS2. Thousands of students just like @PERSON1 are being pestered just as bad, and if not worse. The social networks that modern technology promotes harvest cases like @PERSON1's. If this rapid increase in technology continues then we will see many more cases such as that one. In the past year, @NUM1 @CAPS1-bully victim have committed suicide. Those are @NUM1 lives that could have been saved; @NUM1 families that could still be together. This computer madness is losing lives, we cannot allow this to continue. Not only are computers causing emotional danger, but also physical. The average teenager spends between one to four hours on the computer - making the one hour of exercise seem miniscule. The large number of obese children is in large part caused by computers. The many features of computers, such as instant messaging, music playing, and games, draw kids in - making them spen time they could use exercising, in front of a computer. Statistics show that the average obese child spends @PERCENT1 their free time on a computer. The time they spend exercising and playing makes up only five percent of their day. In @DATE1, children spent @PERCENT2 of their day in front of a computer and @PERCENT3 outside. Over the past @NUM4 years these numbers have headed south due to tha advance in technology. These numbers prove that computers have dictated obese children's day, making their physical condition even worse. Computers are to blame for our worlds weight issues. As I conclude this letter, I can only hope that I persuated you to make a stand and hault this technological advancement. In conclusion, computers are harvesting @CAPS1-@CAPS2 which leads to emotional discomfort. They also dictate time, and as a result, children become obese. We must take a stand and alter statistics for the better. Computers are ruining lives.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3965,2,"Dear @CAPS1, To @CAPS2 Or @CAPS3 To @CAPS2 @CAPS5 it wrong to ban a book? It has come to my notice that this @CAPS5 exactly what our library has just thought about doing to any books, music, movies, magazines, etc. that any person finds offensive. To this I disagree. The world @CAPS5 a better place to live, when everyone has a level playing field. Some information @CAPS5 sensitive, but that same information should never be blocked completely for nothing more than just the @CAPS6 itself. Our country @CAPS5 based on a freedom of press and speech, to deny that @CAPS5 to deny our livelihood as a country. To solve a situation as this, we must all create a type of checks and balances system to keep the information out there, but also protecting it from younger ones until the time @CAPS5 right from a guardian's viewpoint. Our country has many problems, but a few of them are @CAPS3 the core values that are upheld in the @CAPS6. In the @CAPS6 it @CAPS5 stated that we have the freedom of press and speech. This means that we can publish anything, no matter the inappropriateness of the matter. This also protects any reader from being denied the right to have information at their fingertips. There was just an example of this, inside the @LOCATION1,when a local library had to allow any person wanting to look up porn on library computers because of the laws stated in the @CAPS6. However much some @MONTH1 dislike the thought of this much freedom, we cannot ban works purely based on the discretion of some. The world @CAPS5 a contantly changing place, with almost nothing a given constant. This @CAPS5 the exact same for information of all types. No one can say what will or won't be accepted in our society in the future. At this moment many sexual subjects are quite offensive to many and are viewed unacceptable to the younger generation. The only problem with this @CAPS5 the ease at which this type of information can be gotten. The internet @CAPS5 the very place where so much information passes through, be it good or bad. To block all of this information just can't be done, but to restrict it @CAPS5 our only hope. To to create such a restriction, our library can needs to have a type of checks and balances sytem that could allow those with orderly consent or those of age to get a hold of these types of works. Those of age @NUM1 or older could easily be allowed into sections containing these works, but those under @NUM1 would have to have a guardian's consent before allowed in these sections. A perfect example of this would be off of '@CAPS10 @CAPS11 and The @CAPS12 of @CAPS13' when @CAPS10 @CAPS5 @CAPS3 allowed in the restricted section of the library unless he has a signed pass from a teacher. That type of protection would still allow the works to be released to the public, but still keeping the younger generation from having any freedom to look at inappropriate items for their age. As humans we crave information, whether it be via watching, listening, or reading. To block any part of this experience @CAPS5 to block our full potential. Many things are offensive, but then again much of life @CAPS5 offensive. Our founding fathers knew this and took it with them while writing the @CAPS6, and now we have a @CAPS6 that protects all our information. This @CAPS5 a very good thing, but some things need to be upheld from those too young to understand the meaning of them. We need to protect our freedoms, but also protect our children. To do this we must create a program that allows those that want view what they want, and those that are too young view what they are allowed by their guardians.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3238,2,"I honestly don't think anything offensive should be removed from libraries, children don't really know what those offensive things mean.The library is the only good place to find information or to find a book that they enjoy. If you take things that @MONTH1 seem offensive to people; people are going to have a hard time finding any facts or anything they neeed. People use offensive things all the time but not everyone means to insult anyone in any way. The library doesn't intentionally insult people. The library just gives us facts about what we need to know about a person or anything like that. Some people don't know how to be mature when it comes to things like that and if they cant be mature about stuff like that then they don't need to be in the library. I would understand if the intentions were to insult someone but their not so why should the magazines, movies, books, an music be taken out of the library. Thats just not fair to others when they are trying to get some information. Slavery is an offensive thing to colored people cause the colored people get called names that i will not say in this essay. Most people have matured over the years about what happened in the past. Honestly I think people will be ok they dont need to get all bent out of shape because they see something offensive they just need to know that it wasnt intentionaly done",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3851,2,"A lot of people believe that books are useless and should not even be on a shelf. Well I believe that no book is useless nor should it be removed from shelves from any library. All books are worth something toward anything like careers, and being able to learn new things. Magazines @MONTH1 not be any help towards alot of things like books are, but they are something to entertain you. Music is not just something you listen to, but its something to help keep you nice and relaxed while you are reading a book. Movies can have a certain impact on someone; alot of people think movies are just entertainment for them to watch, but it could have some encouragement, or it can really show how a person acts if you really pay attention and look into what the movie is saying. No book, magazine, music, or movies should be taken off shelves because they are not there for you to read or listen to or watch, but those things are all there to tell people something about things people do not even know. People should take a second look at how all of these things can really affect a persons life. More books, magazines, music, and movies should be put in the libraries of school, or even the public libraries.The more people read, watch, or listen to these things the better they @MONTH1 understand life. I have noticed from experience that people just go to the library and read a book just to relax, but yet at the same time those people really do not understand what they are reading. Its really a shame that people do not look into what they are reading, thats why it would be important for more books to be put on the shelves. Just like Katherine Paterson said: 'If I have the right to remove that book from the shelf , the work I abhor, then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' If people really understood what that quote really means then they would have a better understanding of what books actually mean in life. We should be thankful to have authors like Katherine Paterson in our life because these authors are there to help us understand the meaning of these amazing books in this world.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 863,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 are very dangerous to the modern day socity and how we are connected to them. So I belive that these atroshish things should bery well be disposed of. There are good reasons of thinking such a thought that is in this time with such an eviormetal breakdwon we need to get close to nature while it's still here. Next today our interaction is very low when if your talking about actuall talking to the person and because of computers it makes @CAPS3 all the more lazy while sitting around doing nothing. Lastly the @CAPS2 is harmful and expensive not to menshon the fact that the enviorment is already falling apart. The way natures heading we will all end up dieing no thanks to computers. First how hamful it today is @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 own computers. In america theres only @PERCENT2 is nature with nice forest but as people reporduce more will be gone forever due to expantion. So be one of the @NUM1 out of @NUM2 that instead of staing iside views the great things the earth has to offer. Next these computers our little robots that are really taking over the world and its getting very dangerous with how much it's destroying the ability for humans to breath this happens because theres a hipno disk in all computers making us stay close sufficating us like a deadly drug it's a horrible addiction. Lastly @PERCENT3 of deaths are due to @CAPS2 overloads imagene all the lives that could be saved if they just went to breath every @NUM3 minets I mean on average @NUM4 hours a day your looking at a @CAPS2 take time off make a goal for say @NUM5 hours. This addiction will kill us and knone knows how to talk about it. Secondly, millions on top of millions live in the @LOCATION1 @NUM6 keep on their computers for ours on a time you would think that their alone in every @NUM7 people are done the rest are being killed by chatting on the @CAPS2 and letting their life flow right out of the window. Now interaction is harmful as you already know but you forgot @NUM8 a day do elligal things on the internet like download music wich they shouldn't be they could be put away for up to @NUM9 years for this talk about an iteraction, with the police. Lastly web inter action like myspace they haves satified sexual effenders who could come to your house at only time and take you away would you like that to happen you could never see your family in every @NUM10 people @PERCENT4 are kidnapped due to myspace alone stand up out of danger. Thats a harmful work it is. Finally the dangers of a world like this with how the government whats to mess you up. These people are considered are mad and dangerous with laywars who want to get you. One in every @NUM11 people can't keep up with payments. Next did you forget about those other @PERCENT3 who dont have computers they are living the life walking with @CAPS4 on the edge of myth. Lastly and unfortunatly those @PERCENT1 perstent witho computers are likly to die within the next @NUM12 years due to a dealy poisin that the compute diliveres to your brain. In conclution this world can be one of the more angerest. So come to gether get a friend go for a run now and then. No friends go talk see your family instead of one of those vertual meaings. Just keep in mind the dangers of the @CAPS2 world and how it wants your money. Now what we need to do is attak the robots back. People should go for a run cut of some of the obisity from sitting down all day lose @NUM9 pounds or more. Remember the world would survive if you trash that zombie @CAPS2 room. Get outside go for a road trip save life humanity your fellow niebor your family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16556,6,It show that in the Future the @CAPS1 Building was never fufill it Purpose to use.and that it is the @CAPS2 Building in new york.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18810,7,??? One time when I was being very patient was when I was with my grandparents. We were suppose to be going to @CAPS1 adventures and my grandma said she wanted me and my cousins to be ready by a certain time so we wouldn’t get there that late. So the next day we get to her house right there at @NUM1 like she said and we had found out that she had over slept and we all looked at one another because we new that it was going to take a long time. So I said that’s ok we can wait and we all went into her house and waited until every one was ready. So as we were walking out I noticed that my grandparent were caring suitcases and I said why do you guys carring suitcases my grandma and that we were going to spend the night in a hotel I so we would be even closer to @CAPS1 adventures. So she drove all of us back to our houses to get our??? ??? and @NUM2 extra pair of clothes after that we were as our way to the hotel and ready to go to @CAPS1 adventure that next morning. Even though we were suppose to go,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9417,4,"I think the author ended this story like that because it means that she hasent gave up yet and even though she failed the first time she is come try again,” In the spring , when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding .” mean that when all is @CAPS1 .” She will try to do it again because if she passes it will be @CAPS1. The story was preety bad because I don’t even know what she failed so I didn’t like it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21043,8," @LOCATION2 @LOCATION2 @CAPS1 wants to travel, and while traveling is fun, it is more exciting to go with people you love, but sometimes you go somewhere with people you @MONTH1 not know very well. Every two years or so, the choir at my @ORGANIZATION1 has an opportunity to go on a trip together. During these trips, the students are able to work with college professors, eat tons of junk food, get away from their parents, and just have a great time together. It's a experience that every @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2 dreams of. At the beginning of my @CAPS3 year of @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1, my choir director announced that we would have the opportunity to go to @LOCATION2. I was ecstatic to be going, but I'm an extremely introverted person and I knew that I didn't really have any friends in the choir. I also can't walk, and was scared I would be left behind in a store because I couldn't open the doors or they would go across a street corner that didn't have a @CAPS5 dip down into the street, and thousands of other things that were racing through my mind. I was so terrified that that I would be separated from @PERSON3, my one friend who was in choir, that I almost didn't go. I'm not really sure how, but my mother convinced me that everything would be alright, and I had nothing to fear. Once we arrived in @LOCATION2, we split up into groups to see who wanted to go to explore the @PERSON7 and who wanted to go up @ORGANIZATION2 street, one of the windiest roads in the world. My worst nightmare came true, I was separated from @LOCATION3. I tried to tell myself that nothing would go wrong and that the chaperons wouldn't leave me behind, but in the back of my mind I just kept coming to the same conclusion: I would be alone with a bunch of strangers in a city I knew nothing about. Somehow, I got on the bus that was slowly taking me away from @LOCATION3. One of the other girls, @PERSON4, came to sit by me, and attempted to start a conversation. That was one of the longest bus rides of my life. When we arrived at the bottom of @ORGANIZATION2 street we split yet again, one group was going to walk to the top of the steep hill and the other was going to ride in one of the old trolleys up to the top then walk down where the hill wasn't as steep. I was forced to go on the trolley because the hill was so steep part of the sidewalk contained steps, and since I can't walk, the only alternative was the trolly. Several of the other kids went with us and once again @PERSON4 was in my group. A couple hours later, after getting lost and turning on several wrong streets, we found the trolley station and bought our tickets. Luckily, I managed to avoid conversing with @PERSON4 this whole time, so the ride up the hill was enjoyable. Some of the local people smiled at us because we were so excited to be riding on the trolley. We saw houses, stores, and @LOCATION1 on our ride. There were six people in our group at the time, two chaperons and four kids. Once we reached the top of the hill, two of the kids, @PERSON6 and @PERSON5, decided they really had to go to the bathroom, so one of the chaperons, @PERSON6, and @PERSON5 raced back down the hill to find a public restroom. This left me, alone, with @PERSON4 and @PERSON1, who was the remaining chaperon. We walked leasiurly down the hill, @PERSON2 and @PERSON4 doing most of the talking. Every so often they would ask me a question and I would answer in as few words as possible, and that's what was going on when we walked past a group of men, arguing, in front of a store and one of them yelled, ""@CAPS4, @CAPS5 @CAPS6! Whatcha doing? You goin' to your @CAPS7's house?"" We didn't really know who he was talking to, or what he was talking about, so we just kept walking, but as we reached the end of the block @PERSON4 and I simultaneously broke into laughter. The man was talking about me. The rest of the way down the hill we started coming up with different weird responses that I should have said to the man, each one being more hilarious than the last one, and as conversations go, we eventually got on different topics, which made me realize that @PERSON4 and I really did have many similar traits. We both loved musicals, we both enjoy reading, and we both have annoying, younger brothers. Ever since that day, @PERSON4 and I have been fairly good friends, all because we took a moment to laughed together.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9263,4,"In the story ‘’Winter Hibiscus,‘’ the author ends the story with Saeng ‘s thoughts. The thought of trying the test when the hibiscus starts budding ties the story together. The story is mainly about how she looks for a flower and the memories it brings. But she wouldn’t have gone to the shop if she passed the test. This creates a full understanding of the test and hibiscus. It also shows the importance of the hibiscus. Both Saeng and the flower must adapt to survive and are out of place. Saeng was from Vietnam and the flower was from a shop, both were moved from where they belong to a new place.In some ways Saeng is the flower. She must adapt to her home to survive. The flower, outside in the cold, must adapt to its surroundings in order to survive. When she knows the flower survived the harsh winter, she will realize that she can survive living in @LOCATION2. This would make her feel strong and focused. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9783,4,"The author concludes the story with this last paragraph because it shows by spring she will be ready to retake her test. It shows that like the geese who care and come back, she will have time to study and pass her test. In the story the author includes this last paragraph to truly show her dedication to eventually grow to be comfortable in her new home and to pass her drivers test all in good time. Saeng wants to be comfortable with her new life but isn’t yet because of what one misses. But she knows that after this she can go back and try again just like the geese do often our winter. This was a very effective way to end the story because it really communicated Saeng’s message of dedication and longing to overcome her obstacles, her new home and driving. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1656,1,Dear @CAPS1 In my opinion the computer is the better thing because you can do alot of stuff like play games. My three reason why you should have a computer is you can talk online with your friend or do homework or project and fine out @LOCATION1 things out. Therefore I think if you like doing that then the computer is what you need. My first reason is talking online. People talk online so they can talk to there friend @PERSON1. If you talk oline you can figure out what was homework or whens the meeting or the time the party starts. You can also talk online with your friends or family the moved or lives far away around @LOCATION2. My second reason is doing homework. Sometimes you need the computer to do your homework. You need the computer so you can print picture for your report. You wil also need to type yout report on your vaction. The computer also help you fine the history or @CAPS2 book online so you can do your homework or project. My third reason is finding out @LOCATION1 things. You fine out how old is @CAPS3 @CAPS4 or how tall is @ORGANIZATION1. You can also figure out how to spell a big word. You can fine out many hallway can take you to @LOCATION1 or @CAPS5 beach or other places. Fine out where the wall of @LOCATION3 is. In coulsion if you like to learn @LOCATION1 thing or talk online and do other stuff then you should get a computer.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10263,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons. One is because she saying when everything gets back to normal that’s when she is going to take the test again. Second, because there would be nothing else to say if it is not back to the way she wanted it to be. For instance, if you were building an house and a blizzared came, you would stop, you said that you would not continue until there was nice weather again. In conclusion, the author concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18448,7,"In the writing prompt, I chose to write a story about a time when I was patient. I am going to talk about the time I skipped school to go fishing with my dad and my uncle @PERSON1. I didn’t get to sleep in very much, I still got up at about the same time I do to go to school. I had to get out of the house before my brother saw me because he wasn’t going with us. We got in the car, and drove to my uncle @PERSON1’s house. When we arrived at his house, my dad started packing everything onto the boat. Once we did that, we hopped in my uncle @PERSON1’s old, rusty, red truck. The red paint was chipping all over the truck. We started to drive, and my uncle @PERSON1 had to keep watching the boat. The boat was very small. It just barely fit all of us. It was only about a foot and a half wide and about @NUM1 foot long. It scared me when we put the boat in the water and started driving. We went through a gorgeous river all the way to the back of the @ORGANIZATION1. The @ORGANIZATION1 were on is called @ORGANIZATION1. It is in @LOCATION1. I was patient right when we got in there. I thought we were going to stand, so I was having second thoughts on fishing. It turns out, we just sat in there while we fished. We fished for a good @NUM2 hours that day. I was so very patient waiting for my bobber to go down so I could set the hook. “@CAPS1” my uncle @PERSON1 said. It means that the bobber is going under the water like a submarine does. We had @NUM2 rods out at once! @NUM4 pike rods, and @NUM1 bluegill rods! I caught the biggest blue gill of the day that day! This day was one of the best days of my life!! That is about the time I had to be patient on the @ORGANIZATION1 for @NUM2 hours straight.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6501,3,The setting of the place was “ghost town” as the author said. It was a hot summer day in June so of course the cyclist would be dehydrating. There was no one around so he couldn’t ask for help. It was like an old town because he ran into old men who knew nothing of new world because they told him the wrong directions.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13294,5,"Throughout the memoir, a very thankful and happy mood is shown. Narciso was raised in @LOCATION1, and knew why his parents had moved from Cuba, despite their love for the culture and weather. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life."" This quote shows Narciso's understanding of how much his parents gave up for him. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice."" This shows how happy and thankful he has been throughout his life because he was given the chance to grow up in @LOCATION1. ""I've often told them of my admireation for their strength and perseverance."" Narciso's parents gave up alot to give him a better life, and he shows he will always be greatful for what they have done.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15486,6,"When the builders were almost ready to place the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, big problems became apparent to them that caused complications in docking dirigibles. One factor was that by law, dirigibles couldn't be that low above the city, as they could accidently crash into a building and fall onto the crowds below. Another factor was the air currents around the tall buildings, especially the Empire State Building at a height of 1,250 feet. Even if the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast, the winds would violently rock it, and could crash against the building and fall to the streets below. A recent factor arose when the Hindenburg dirigible burst into flames from the hydrogen in it when it flew over New Jersey on May 6, 1937. Nobody wanted to risk that happening over New York City, either. So because of flammable hydrogen, violent air currents, and by law, the builders had complications when building the mooring mast to allow dirigibles to land there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14967,6,"When the idea of making a mooring mast atop the Empire State Building was thought of, builders did not realize the obstacles that would have to be passed. One obstacle was ""nature itself. The winds, on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This means that if a dirigible were to be tied up for loading and unloading, it could be moved around freely in the sky, making it dangerous for passengers to be on or around it. An example of the dangerous winds would be in 1930, the ""U.S. Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds. A concern for safety was that ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" If something wrong were to happen, there could be great consequences for the heavily populated downtown of @LOCATION2. A third and final obstacle that occurred was ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area."" Because of these obstacles, the idea to have dirigibles dock at the top of the Empire State Building seemed impossible, and was never accomplished.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10422,4,"“when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author has left her home and moved to another country. She is now in an unfamilar place. Everything that now surrounds her is new and mostly un-known. By ending the story with this quote, it suggest that the author still has hope of adapting to her new home. When she left her home, she did not just leave a building behind. She left her home, people she loved, and an endless list of memories. At times she @MONTH1 have felt out of place because she was no longer in her comfort zone. She is now “out of the box,” and in a whole new world. When she saw the hibiscus, the exotic plant took her back to her memories and to the love of her old home. Then she came back to reality and broke apart with sadness and “failed her test.” The ending sentence shows that the author is willing to try to survive in this new place and that she is still determined to pass her own test of adapting. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19219,7,"One day my dad and I decided we would go fishing. He kept saying five more minutes, so I just sat there in the car. Finally I got out to find him a sleep with a note saying @NUM1 more min.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 2999,2,"I think that books, magazines, papers etc shouldn't be removed from the librarys because some @CAPS1 like to @CAPS2 them. Some @CAPS1 feel that reading a book about there problem will help them get through what ever problem they are having. @CAPS1 often say that they are stressed and depressed. Those @CAPS1 can get the books and @CAPS2 them to help them solve there problems. If the books etc are offensive then, the @CAPS1 who think they are shouldn't get them. The can't control what books are in the library. Some @CAPS1 have problems and some of the books can help them. Alot of @CAPS1 I know dont think that alot of books are offensive. Its eather they want to @CAPS2 them or they dont. If @CAPS1 think that books etc are offensive they will just have to deal with it. @CAPS1 like to @CAPS2 all kinds of books and some dont even like to @CAPS2. For the @CAPS1 who like to @CAPS2 they can pick whatever book they want that they feel confortable with. If they think that a book is offensive they go past it and find a different book to @CAPS2. I suppose if you find a offensive book you could go to the teacher or someone and talk about it. Im sure that they wont do anything about it. The books and other things are there for a reason, 'For @CAPS1 To @CAPS2', and to understand what there life is and how to fix it. You have to control under the books. You can't tell them what books should be one the shelf and what cant be on the shelf. In conclusion I think that @CAPS1 should deal with it because they cant control it",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3106,2,"The library is a place of learning, discovery, and knowledge, available to anyone willing to take the time to engross themselves in the rows and rows of information. Including children's books, novels for young adults, @ORGANIZATION1, @PERSON2, music, and movies, the library gives us a magnitude of opportunities to discover something we didn't know before. Although, there are other things that can be found in the library as well. Books including racial slurs, sexual content, and offensive religious comments can accidentally be stumbled upon while searching for something else. A parent should not have to worry about their child coming across a book or magazine containing inappropriate things such as this. I believe that offensive books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from the shelves of our libraries. I would like to being by saying that I have an extreme issue with books that include comments, remarks, or names referring to people of a certain race. Imagine if an @CAPS1 @CAPS2 woman brought her daughter of @NUM1 years into the library to find information about a school project. Instead of finding the birth date of @PERSON1, she found a book making fun of @CAPS1 @CAPS4 and calling them inappropriate names. Children should not have to come across a discovery like that in a public facility, where fun and interesting facts should be found; not racial slurs. This type of event could cause serious damage on a child emotionally and mentally. That is why these types of things should be taken off the shelves immediately! Another issue I have is with sexual content being found in libraries. I do understand that several books contain some sort of sexual content, but I am speaking of a novel describing a sex scene in extreme detail, or images of almost naked women on the cover. If someone is searching for a book of that kind, they can travel to a sex store somewhere nearby and get their fix of sexual reading pleasure. That type of book, however, should not be found in the library. It makes our society look bad and taints our places of knowledge. Lastly, I would like to express how I feel about offensive religious comments being found in libraries. Every human in the @LOCATION1 is entitled to their own choice of religion. They @MONTH1 practice it freely, which is sadly not the case for others in different countries. If we have an uncommom right such as freedom of religion, then why would we put books in our libraries that include rude comments towards different religions. A @CAPS5 woman should not have to go to a library and come across a book stating her religion is an waste and stupid. This is not the truth, and it should not be in our libraries! Even though I feel this way about inappropriate books, I understand there has to be some sort of limit when it comes to censorship. Many people fear once we start removing certain books from libraries, more and more books will be taken from the public until almost all our libraries are empty. Yes, if we do not censor within certain limits, this could happen. This is not what I want to happen though. I simply want the people of this community to stop and consider what is easily available for our children to obtain. The least we can do, as parents, is to take books, movies, magazines, and music containing racial slurs, sexual content, and offensive religious comments out of the libraries",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3259,2,"I dont see any reason why to take books off the shelves. If someone doesnt like a book, then they dont have to read it. Books are ment to entertain or inform people. There are books that talk about black people in a bad manner, but they still need to be out there so that people will know. Libraries are out to make money thats all. Let them make money, they can sell whatever they want. If I had a library I would sell just about anything i could. people will: watch, listen, read anything. So why not sell it or rent it out. It's a honest way of making money.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12085,5,"The mood of this memoir created by the author is a grateful and/or thankfull mood. The mood is grateful because in the first several paragraphs it mentions how their home is not a high quality and they do not live a average middle class life but a severely lower-class life. However throughout the excerpt it is mentioned how whatever they lacked in quality they made up for with the coming together of their ""family"". By family it means how the other immigrants came together as one and helped one and another. Narciso mentions how even though his family had very little to share, they would always share all that they had to offer with anyone who needed it. By following this example mainly set by his parents he learned about life's lessons that he will never forget and is forever thankful and grateful to his parents for showing him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7057,3,"The setting of the story affected the cyclist because it kept him going because he was all alone and had no help. First, just the fact that he was by himself kept his determination high. If he would have had a partner they could have stopped and took a break or shared the water. Next, the fact that there were no buildings, houses or anything in sight affected him. He got a bolt of strength just from seeing a building ahead. If there had been building he could have stopped and asked for more water and rested. The fact that he was in a desert in California in the middle of June really affected him. He had no determination there because there was nothing he could do to better the situation in his cause. He even at one point felt that he might die. In conclusion the setting really affected the cyclist because it determined his endurance and will power.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10222,4,"The author concluded the story with this paragraph to show us that her days with nature is not yet over, for when it comes back around, she will continue to do what she been was doing, whicvh was growing her plants, taking care of them, tuning them out to being a goodnight dinner, and to continue that until she’s no longer to do anymore.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12330,5,"The mood created by the author is gratefulness. The author created this mood by telling the reader how grateful she was to her parents for their love and sacrifice. The author was grateful to her parents because when they moved to the United States, they had to start their lives over entirerly. Meaning that had to find all new jobs.The author explained her greatfulness by telling her parents that what they did was much more courageous than she could ever do. The author also said that there was no way to express her gratitude for the generosity impressed upon her at such an early age.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4186,2,"I am writing you today to propose an explanation on my views of censorship in libraries. I recently had visited a library and some of the things I read in my time being there was really overwhelming.I think it should be censored and taking off the shelf. If you are a place of business you should not want things like that on your shelf. You should not want costumers reading it and feeling disgusted. I hope something I write will propose my reasons. I have plenty of reasons to censor things and have them taking off the shelves that are offensive to me and others who visit the library, but only speaking on my behalf there were certain materials such as books, music, magazines, etc., that was offensive. I believe things in the nature should be handled in great authority. If anything I am trying to help me and my fellow citizens. Just think if a visitor come in and pick up a magazine and it has insulting visual details of something that the reader can relate to or have experienced, and it is getting talked down about instead of beeing looked at, then they would be very offened. For them to come there it had to be a reson that they came, I know it wasn't so they would feel insulted. It is very inappropiate to have things that are offensive in the library. It is plenty of different reason people come to libraries. Some come to get away, and to others its a daily routine. Whatever the case maybe they should feel comfortable in the place they are at. Why would you want people in the community or people period to not be comfortable where they are at. Just think if they are uncomfortable, then they are going to tell others and you will loose alot of fellow friends and alot of business. Think strongly on the things you do and the way you approach things to get peoples attention. To answer the question @CAPS1, I agree strongly on getting the offensive materials moved from the shelves. I believe in making people happy and one thing that is wrong with society today is too much judging and talking down and talking bad about people. If people would not judge or insult people then the world would be alot safer. It has to start somewhere, every little start causes for a great ending. I think this would be a good start on making the world happier and bringing all of us closer together. I hope something I wrote will help you on your descision",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3850,2,"There is alot of different thing that can offensive to all sorts of people . so if we started taking thing off tv or out of book ,and magazines we would be always takeing stuff out. if it to graphic for kids put it in the adults area. would censorship be the awnser to take out stuff no. we need to be more aware of where ur children are an there would be less probblem. If we made the change the age limited on movie we might be even better off . If parent were to watch the movie then the parent would be able to tell them what ok an what not. we need to put more true history stuff in them an make them where you want to watch them we could be teaching kids more stuff so they know.the music should be censorship some what like with rap. there is alot of rap music that should be cleaned up so little kid dont hear it. There might even be a better way to controll this stuff so little kids cant get a hold of it. We can have teacher help tell the kids an let them no that it not right for them to watch that. we also need to look at some of the new cartoons that are on tv. There are some that need to be clean up. There are also lot of different in what people want. Then there some that dont care about it to. Maybe someday we will figure it out and be able to do it",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18089,7,"Patience is not a natural thing, it's something you have to learn. Taking a three hour carride is a perfect example of patience. Exactly like what I experienced. As we packed our suitcases for @CAPS1 city, I @CAPS2't contain myself. I was already packed up but mom and dad were standing. ""@CAPS3 you please finish packing see I really want to go! "", I exclaimed ""You'll just have to wait a minute, ""Do ?? But I @CAPS2't wait, so I grabed??, threw them in the trunk of our car, and walked to our kitchen to finish reading a book while they packed. After they finished cooking dad was carrying the last of the bags @CAPS4 their bedroom to the complain he notice me, setting patiently at the look. He thanked me, saying ""@CAPS5 for being so patient, and just for that, mom and have surprise. For you. He set down the sultans, and briskly walked over to a white plastic had the suddenly pulled at a rectangular favor it was the some in the @CAPS6 @CAPS7?????? it wash ? you????????. Kind you so much man ? Replied. This just goes to show that prince really says off. Only if you don't complain of course. !",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13545,5,"IN THE MEMOIR HOME: THE BLUEPRINTS OF OUR LIVES. HER MOOD IS LOVE, BECAUSE SHE LOVES HER PARENTS FOR ALL THE SACRIFICES THEY MADE, JUST SO NARCISCO CAN HAVE A BETTER LIFE FOR EXAMPLE, ""I WILL ALWAYS BE GRATEFUL TO MY PARENTS FOR THEIR LOVE AND SACRIFICE."" SHE MEANS SHE WILL ALWAYS BE GRATEFUL FOR WHAT HER PARENTS DONE FOR HER IN HER CHILDHOOD TO MAKE HER BECOME WHAT SHE IS NOW. ANOTHER EXAMPLE, ""I WILL NEVER FORGET HOW MY PARENTS TURNED THIS SIMPLE HOUSE INTO A HOME."" SHE MEANS THAT HER PARENTS SACRIFICED TO TURN A @NUM1 ROOM APARTMENT INTO HER HOME.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1403,1,"Have you ever gone on the computer? Have you ever sat there on the computer for a long time? I am writing you because I am concerned with the health of the town. @CAPS5 people have computers and go on them daily. It @MONTH1 be fun, but it could also but your health. Computers can be addicting and cause us to play for hours. @CAPS5 people @CAPS4 not exercise at all anymore. Most are too busy on thier computer. You should have at least @NUM1 minutes of exercise each @CAPS4. ""@CAPS1 kids sholud have anywhere from @NUM2 min of exercise on average per day. A lot of kids are now playing video games on the computers for that time instead of exercising,"" says @CAPS2. sereno. @CAPS5 kids don't go outside enough either. Did you know you should have a minimum of @NUM3 min in sunlight each day? You get most of your vitamins. the sun. When was the last time you took a bike, went camping, or went to the beach? All are very fun things to @CAPS4 that you could be missing out on learning of the computer. I know I absolutly love going to the beach. Hearing the waves, & laughing @CAPS3 ocean waters, and feeling it cool as the is just heaven. If I was on the computers all the I would be able to enjoy. My most thing @CAPS4 you like having fun or going out to your family? I @CAPS5 computer dont to are the same as being with the person. Can you imagine never actually seeing or hearing the person you're talking to? Thats now it is with @CAPS6. @PERCENT1 of communication on the billions of people who have @CAPS7't you rather talk to the person on the phone or talk face to face? I feel people should spend time exercising, going outdoors, and spending time with friends and family. Remember @NUM1 minutes of exercise, @NUM3 minutes in the sun each day to stay really healthy. Please consider this and write an article to improve the town's social & overall health. Its up to you!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8875,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because when every thing starts coming back she will take the test. That is why the author concludes the story with this parigraph,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18018,7,I was patient when I had to witch @NUM1 little bad girls at my sisters house. My sister asked if I wanted to spend the @TIME1. I did then her god kids came over. That @TIME1 sister rembend she had to go some were. So that morning she left me with the kids for @NUM2 hours. So I had to wait patiently for her to come back. Finaly she did.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 729,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think that computers are a great thing to have. For instance they are entertaining, they have communication, and they help make designs. My first reason is that computer are entertaning. I hate to go look at nature. But I love to play videogames on my computer. I still get my exercise though, because I go out and play basketball then play on my computer. The computers are still a good thing though because after @CAPS1 done with basketball, hanging out with friends, or if its raining I like to play some good old gun blasting computer games. My second reason is that you can comunicate with computers. I love to talk to my friends on facebook. You can just login and talk to anyone in the world. There is also video chat you can actually see someone who is talking to you from anywere. Plus email is great for work. You can send information from one computers to the other. My last reason is for designs every modern car that you drive, is originally from a computer. People get on these computers and make blue print designs to make cars. These are my reasons that computers are good.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16059,6,The firsts obstacles was to make the Empire State building the worlds tallest building by adding a top or a hat to make the building a little more taller. And second obstacle was to drop people from the mooring mast to the Empire State building's flat roof.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3331,2,"The library is known to be a place full of dreams and imagination. For some, the library is a sanction where you can escape reality and dive into a book where anything is possible. the library is full of many books for all ages. Therefore, books that are classified for one age group, @MONTH1 not be appropriate for another age group. This is where a problem occurs. If the library chooses to keep books in it that are only appropriate for certain ages groups, various problems can occur. The three main issues with this situation are young children can access magazines they have no buissness looking at, some articles or books can be found offensive to some races creating an uproar, and also events and instances played out in books @MONTH1 not be appropriate for all age groups.We have to think about books we have read, and contemplate if we would want others to read it as well. Young children are often daily visitors of the library. Most run aroud the library getting into any and all books or magazines the happent to come across. This is not always good. Int he library there are many magazines that are meant for adult eyes only. My family has had an experiance with this sort of situation before. My mother , brother, and myself visited the library one evening. While my mother and I searched the library chaotically, my younger brother found hisself, searching the magazine rack for something to keep his mind occupied. Well his mission was accomplished. On his search my younger brother had found himself a sports illustrated magazine. Inside there were pictures revealed that my mother was not to happy about my brother seeing. Instances like this happy everyday int he local library. staff members should think to put revealing works up to where the younger generation can not find them. Throughout the library, there are many books dealing with past historic events. Although many find these books helpful and interesting, some find these books to be quite offensive.ome races have undergone painful events in history. Many of those people do not want to relive the painful past experiances. It is in my opinion that the library should oblige by the people, and take in reference how different people feel about certain books. When i was a young girl in elementary school, I remember doing a whole unit on slavery and the underground railroad. While studing the unit, we were assigned a research assignment over the lesson. I choose to visit the library in search for books I could use to gather more information. While searching the library, I came across a book that my mother and I felt should not of been where younger people could see. the book enclosed many horrible acts against black people. This is a book that at my age, I should of never came across. For me reading books helps me escape the real world and catch a break. When I relax and enjoy a good book, I can't help but feel like nothing inthe world can touch me. Although I love reading books, I don't like when I come begin reading a book then have to hault because the book reveals events that I shouldn't be reading. One book I read, was definitley not appropriate for me. Although I found the book , in the young adult section, the book I read revealed a young girl encoutering many rapes and beatings. Now that I look back , that is a book that i might enjoy now, @NUM1 years later, but I don't feel i should have encountered that book then. What books should and shouldn't be encountered in the library is surely a never ending feud. Many believe that books should be taken out if they are not appropriate for all audiences. I think that if the inappropriate books that should not be viewed by all ages, were put away to where the younger audience couldn't get them, then the never ending feud might be able to be put to rest",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3298,2,"Many people base their actions on their own views. What @MONTH1 appear to be justified in their minds, due to their beliefs, might cause an uproar from others. One instance of this: media censorship. It happens every day, every place. Someone can take it upon them selves to ,in their mind, 'make the piece better for @CAPS8 viewing'. In reality, though, they are really ruining the experience of the media for everyone else and even impeading on the rights granted to us by the constitiution: @CAPS1 of the @CAPS2. First up, books in the library. Everytime I go to the library and pick up some books, there is always one book with the 'bad parts' marked out. Someone had found these words offensive and decided that no one should have to see or read them. To me, it was irritating. I don't always like those words either, but having them marked out is distracting from the page and , for me, ruins the author's voice and style of writing, hence impairing what I draw from the book. Some marked-out words aren't always offensive to others, either. Simply put, if you find the book offensive, don't read it. Others @MONTH1 enjoy it, whether they share your views or @CAPS7. People also take the liberty of simply removing whole pieces of media from shelves just because they find it offensive. If everyone removed anything they didn't like, or found offensive, there would be nothing left in the world for anyone to enjoy. We, as @LOCATION1 citizens, have the right to make our own choices, and our choices should @CAPS7 be limited by the views of certain individuals. That means that if I want to read or view something, it should be available to me, so I @MONTH1 learn and expand my views, even if it makes someone else uncomfortable. With nearly every disputable form of media that comes out, people harangue the producers and say the piece should have never been made. Wrong. Producers and authors can publish whatever they would like. It's called @CAPS1 of the @CAPS2, and it is a right garunteed to us, as @CAPS5 citizens, under the @CAPS6. And learly, if pieces like that are being produced, people read it. Plain and simple. You might @CAPS7, but maybe a neighbor, or even a relative, @MONTH1 @CAPS7 be offended by it and might read it. Supply and demand. If everyone found it offensive, no one would buy or read it, and because of that, it would no longer be produced. You would get your way. But, no. Some people do read it and it is produced. Again, if you don't like it, don't read it. People should @CAPS7 take it upon themselves to censor what others can and can't do, see, or read. If someone wants to read a story that has 'bad words' in it, so be it. Others should @CAPS7 ruin the experience by marking the words out. @CAPS7 only is it rude and ruining the experience for the reader, but it is also destroying someone else's property. If someone wants to view something that is against a certain religion, so be it. They have the right and no one can take that right away from them. In my opinion, censorship in libraries, whether by government, or other civilians, should @CAPS7 be allowed. We citizens are allowed the right to make our own choices and in @CAPS8 libraries, the @CAPS8 should be allowed to read or watch whatever they want. Choice is one of the prinicples of the constitution, and it should be protected, @CAPS7 limited",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16300,6,"Many obstacles faced the builders of Empire State Building. The biggest problem is The fact that it was illegal for a dirigible to fly that low in Urban areas, stated in paragraph @NUM1. Another problem was that most of the @ORGANIZATION2's dirigibles used hydrogen, which is very flamable. So if what happened to the Hindenburg happened at the empire state building then the accident would of been much worse. Especially with people walking the streets below, stated in paragraph @NUM2. Another problem was nature. The winds were ferocious at the top of he building and were always shifting. So if a dirigible was docked to the mask and the lead weights that keep the dirigible from floating away, like anchors, would be dangling over pedestrians ready to fall in an instant, stated in paragraph @NUM3. Also fears of the sharp edges and forceful winds would cause the dirigible to get punctured and pop.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13054,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir shows a kind community, careful, and courage. My first quote is ""...hard working immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" The quote means the mood of the community is kind and helping. My second quote is ""My parents always kept their arms and their doors open to the many people we considered family."" This quote means that his parents mood was careful and do anything for people if they needed help. My third and last quote is ""My mother and father had came to this country with such courage."" This quote means like before they came to the United States they had courage and now they were going to make it and be successful. Those are my three quotes and examples of the mood created by the auother in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15132,6,"In order to let dirigibles dock at the Empire State Building, many changes had to made. The builders and planners both faced many obstacles. First of all, to even consider the idea, they had to ""consult with experts"" which meant taking tours and doing research. They had to find a ""safe way of mooring airships to this mast."" The next obstacle is in paragraph @NUM1. Docking a dirigible to the building would put ""stress"" on the building's frame. The builders had to ""modify and strengthen"" the frame. One of the last obstacles they had to face was designing the tower. The builders eventually decided on a rocket shaped mast with four wings at the corners to house the mooring arm. They had to house the machinery to winch the derigible, too. Overall, the builders had to make drastic changes, spend a lot of money, all for something that wasn't even safe in the end.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1190,1,"Dear local newspaper, Computers are a waste of time! People that say they are helpful are just using that as excuse. Some people say they are good for research and talking to people. Both of these things you can do without a computer. Computers are just a money wasting thing that get in your way of life. People spend hours on computers talking to people. You don't need to do that. You can use a phone instead and call them. After a study they proved that talking on a phone is cheaper then using the computer. In this economy why wouldn't you want to save money while getting the same thing also on a computer you don't really talk to the person you are really just typing word to them. This can be very dangerous. Who know if the person talking to you is really the person you think. Why take the risk when you can just use a phone! Using the computer is like smoking. It is very addicting! People stay on computers for hours every day and don't get exercize. If you just sit there moving your hand you are not really burning calories. This is a huge problem! Obecety is already rising with the number of fast food places and computers are making it worce. And the worst part is parents don't care some children go on the computer for @NUM1 hours a day and there parents don't encorige them to go outside. Children need encorigment to get moviing or they will never start, and they will get bigger. We need to form a group to help stop this or before you no it @PERCENT1 of the @LOCATION1 will be obeise. Another excuse that computer lovers do is they say they are doing research on a country. Even though this @MONTH1 be true there are other way you can do this. Why not ride your bike to the library and get a book on the country. By doing this you will burn calories and get to learn the same stuff you would have on the computer. Also not everything on the internet is true so you might have false information. By getting a book you know it's true. People that love computers will never get away from them over night it @MONTH1 take a month or two but if we act new we can make a change and put a stop to it. Computers are a waste of money. You can live without then very easily, and without them the world would be a better place. People are being lazy and use excuses on why they need a computer. If you are stuck on a computer for @NUM1 hours a day you will never have any family memories. All you will remembor is when you were on the computer, and who wants that.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7668,3,"Different features of the settings affect the cyclist. The setting of the story, which is based in the desert has a negative affect on the character. “The desert land is baron, leaving him only with his small supply of water. During his journey he runs out of water causing him to lose contact with reality. The extreme heat in the desert causes him to begin to hallucinate. The cyclist begins to see a grape juice factory, which interrupts his trip. To his dismay, it turns out to be a no more than a mirage. The lengthy road also affected the trip. The length and roughness of the road had worn the cyclist down.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 630,1,"Dear Newspaper, i am writing you this letter, about computers, in the hope that you will publish it. Over @NUM1 the people in @LOCATION1 has a computer, but are they really healthy? I don't believe computers are a good thing. People spend to much time on them & less time excirsing, enjoying nature & most of all, it's highly dangerous. I don't believe computers are a good thing because people don't excersise like they did. Some people spend @NUM2 out of @NUM3 hours in a daw on computers for others it's there whole life. People spend so much time on computers they lose touch with the outside world. Ever since computers came out, obestity has gone up. all people do is chat to other people & think ""they don't have to know what I look like.""They sit at the computer eating & eating. That's not healthy. I dont think computers are good also because they spend less time enjoying nature. It used to be when I had somoe free time, I could call up a friend & ask them to take a walk with me somewhere & they'd say ""sure! Now they say ""@CAPS1 get on the computers & we can take a virtual walk."" That's not the same as an actual walk with the wind in your face the fresh smell, & all the animals, at least not to be. Nature is a thing of beauty & if you don't enjoy appreciate it, it'll turn into something hideous. Nature used to be the most peaceful think now it the internet. I dont think computers are good because most importantly they're dangerous. Little kids, like myself, think they're grown up & go on computers & meet rapist, murderer, thiefs, all kids of criminals. Also people send hurtful & violent things to each otehr & it yo're on the computer alot of bad people can track you down. Also, the military & @ORGANIZATION1 keeps secrets on computers but if your smart enough you can hack it. Computers aren't safe for anyone or anything. Well, I've told you my main @NUM4 reasons why I think computers aren't such great things, they're not healthy, emotionally or physically. People don't excirse they don't enjoy nature & computers are highly dangerous. All I can do is hope you publish my letter so everyone can see my point of view & make their own decisions. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1062,1,"Do you have computer at home that you go on? Everyone goes on the computer for many different reasons with friends or for projects and @CAPS5 like that. Computers can be good in many ways but they can not be. Computers are made it do all @CAPS5 to help us learn. I personally think that computers are good. We can learn @CAPS5 that are going on from far away. An example is if we have a big project in @CAPS1 @CAPS2 about @LOCATION2, and we dont know the computer can look all different focus and see pictures. Computers can the history of place not us. I can sister talking how they had that has to be taken using a computer. The answer in the question world war @CAPS3. She got a @PERCENT1 we @MONTH1 also be able to see whats going on with the @LOCATION1 and different place. All you have to do for that is go on the compute and look it up. ""okay class today we will be going down in the computer to do some research."" said my teacher. ""what are we going ""@CAPS4."" @CAPS5 that are going on the @LOCATION1. All of these @CAPS5 can us research projects many other @CAPS5. We can also use computers. Computers also have different @CAPS5. An example at the program can help us that they let us look information, play game, help with our homework. I have just realized that you can pretty much do anything you want on a computer. @CAPS2 shows that @PERCENT2 of people in the @LOCATION1 go on the computer for help with their. I can remember my friend telling me that she always types her essays because its for her teacher and from typing. So the program is helpful to us. people always go on the computer and love @CAPS5 that are an save, at their. I usually do that so I know when a good is to an in the to buy what I want. Well you should really consider thinking about this those cant even reasons the people in the @LOCATION1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19042,7,Write about a time when I was patient. At my old school before this school I was patient all the @NUM1 in some @NUM2 jump people in I told them to gone than they want to fight so am holding my patients in the teachers was talking to them about in I saw tham outside of the in they did not do anything to me so how I no they was fighting to make the school happy.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21102,8," We were all ging out in to the woods to go ride quads and trikes, @PERSON1 and @ORGANIZATION1 and @PERSON1 had quads I was the only on with the trike. We loaded the trike and quads in the back of the truck and trailer and was off to the woods. We get out their and uloaded our rides, we get all of them warmed up but the one with a clutch. the only way to get that one started is to pull it with the automatic quadWilber says to @PERSON1 that he will get it started so u pull me. I get up their and hook the rope on to aech quad @PERSON1 says hes ready,so @PERSON1 is taking off fast and some how the hook just comes off and hits him prfectly on his back he gets up and it looks like hes dancing. He lifted up his shirt and asked s if there was any mark, oh man was there the hook hit him perfectly, it looked judt like a hook wa printd on his back. @PERSON1 starts to taer up a liitle bit while holding his back. i didnt blame him i would of to, u could hear it snap when it hit him. I look over at @PERSON1 and hes trying not to laugh, @PERSON1 looks over at @PERSON1 and gets off the quad and started to chase him. I finally got there attention and said,""we came out here to ride not to kick some ass."" we finally get the bike going but @PERSON1 was to scared to pull the quad so i had to do it, as soon as we get the quad with the clutch to warm up, a cop car comes down by us then turns his lights on. We new what we were going to have to do so as soon as i see @PERSON1 take off i took off. @PERSON1 and I look back to see if @PERSON1 was behind us and no he was not. @PERSON1 told me we should just leave him ,but i told him that would be way to mest up we come back and the cop told us he was suprized that we came back. we asked @PERSON1 what happend and he didnt know after dealing with the cops for the day, we tried to figure out what was rong with the bike and we found out some one was messing with the carbrator and they were totally off. it sucked we dont get our licences tikll we eighteen ,but for @PERSON1 its twenty one, that really sucks for him. After that one day @PERSON1 promised that he would never go with @PERSON1 and I again. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1771,1,"Computers, a @LOCATION1 topic if you ask me. Sure they arnt very good for you dosn't mean if you use it correctly then it can be a souce of life. Computers are helpful in many ways, they can be an information post. The social networks can help your kids get more interactive with the world. During school kids have projects and without computers. Read on as I will explain in details. Computers, as you know, are one of the worlds greatest information posts. @NUM1 out of ten people survayed said that the computers are a value of everyday life, The earthquake in haiti is recovalng now, but half the world wouldnt know that with out computers so have a heart, and dont take away the most valued info in the world. Secondly, what would you say if I told, you that kids are more socialy retarded than ever! Well its true. Over @NUM2 of the worlds people rely on intractive websites to comunicate with each other. Fact, children have more friends over the internet then ever. You dont want to be the @LOCATION1 in all this do yours ar know as the person who kept kids from living? I dont think so. Lastly, all people in school use computers to do projects, for instance @PERSON2 had horrible hand writing and this was the bigest project of the year. So he turned his computer to type it, he gets on at. But what if there was (@CAPS1) computer! @PERSON2 would have gotten a @CAPS2 - for the project. In fact teachers @CAPS3 wear tell kids to type hw/projects. @PERSON1 says ""@CAPS3 year kids pass my class by typing and if they then they would all flunk!"" @CAPS4 got the point but more importantly do you?! To sumit all up for those of you lazy enough to not read there story essay. Computers are used for everyday needs such as finding out information. Makeing friends, or doing projects. So are you gonna be the person who sits back and lets that happen or are you going to get up and stop the maddness once and for all. Its you choice but think of the socity retarded, dumb kids that fail the grade @CAPS3 year.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15156,6,"In the excerpt, there where many obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The problems where that the dirigible being ""held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"", and the wind pressure wouldn't help either, as stated in @CAPS1 @NUM1. Another issue was that, as said in @CAPS1 @NUM2, ""most dirigibles from outside of the united states used hydrogen rather than helium"",... ""hydrogen is highly flammable"", Also in the @CAPS1 @NUM2, ""The owners of the empire state building realized how much worse,"" a accident could be ""if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as down town New York. These are the problems the builders faced.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10187,4,"The author chose to end the story in this way because it effectively ties in different aspects and principles of the story. For example, this sentence includes both the geese and the hibiscus, representing her new home, and the old, together in harmony. It also states that ""... Saeng vowed silently to herself... I will take that test again,"" which relates to the determination of the hibiscus flower, which struggles persistently through the winter. A lot of wisdom can be gathered from the symbolic messages hidden within that final sentence It implies that, though the past @MONTH1 be behind you, it is with you in your heart as you face new challenges, and if you are determined, those challenges can be conquered.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12994,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the author creates a mood in the memior in many ways. For example, the author is in a loving mood of the begging of the memior. In paragraph two, he says ""...a love of cooking that is still with me today."" In addition, the author is in a caring mood at the middle of the memior. In paragraph four, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family"". Lastly, the author is in sed mood neer the end. In paragraph @NUM1, he says ""They struggled both personally and financially..."" In conclusion, the auther creates a mood in the memior in many ways.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3268,2,"Books are books, and as well as magazines, music, movies, etc., therefore one purpose only right? To read them well thats what I thought. Even though books, magazines and even some movies might offend some people, that doesn't mean they should be tooken off the shelf. I think they shouldn't be tooken off the shelves. Beacuse if someone just like you wrote it, someone like you will probably be even more willing to read it. Though sometimes the books and magazines are inappropriate and @MONTH1 offend some people, doesn't mean they should remove them entirely because sometimes people need to read things there not completely comfortable with. Because reading about things that you don't know about entirely sometimes helps you learn not to do those bad things. It also helps prevent some kids to not smoke and do drugs if they hear or look at those things from experience. Books and magazines that offend people are only telling them what they don't want to hear. Even though you @MONTH1 not want to hear about it, drugs and sexual content are always going to be in the surroundings of our children to see or experience. Putting a book or a magazine about drugs in libraries are not going to make kids or people try drugs. Its the people that can't control themselves when they get around it or see it or even hear about it. It's called self control and some people have it some people don't. Reading a book about drugs will only prevent things like that from happening. So I think libraries should just leave the books on the shelves. If some people don't want to see it in their local libraries then they don't need to pick up the book, magazine or watch the movie. These books and magazines and movies only help us become stronger people. They also help us as a community to try and stay clean. These books are very important to the community to read so they don't ever get the tendency of doing those bad things. This is why I think books that offend some people should't be removed from the libraries. The libraries itself just need to move the books and magazines to another section of the library if they don't want to see or accidentally read about something that could possibly offend them. This could help the people avoid such things. Libraries just need to keep the books and magazines and movies on the shelf. Just as they are today in our local library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12586,5,"From the memoir Home: Blueprints of Our Lives by Narciso Rodriguez, the author creates a mood of gratitude and love. The author's gratitude is to his parents for their cultural and selflessness for leaving their family and friends so their kids could have a better life. one line that really showed this was ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on a love of cooking that is still with me today"" (@NUM1). That line shows how much he loves his culture and heritage. He loves his Cuban family with all their traditions. I'm aware of this because of a line ""Passionate Cuban Music (which I adored to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" (@NUM1). Narciso Rodriguez is constantly creating a mood of gratitude and love in his memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13361,5,"In this memoir, the author created a proud and glad mood.The author, Narciso Rodriguez, showed how proud he was of his family and home through his memoir. His parents left their home in order to make a better life for him and for that he is extremely proud and grateful. His parents also allowed other immigrants to stay with them temporarily. In paragraph @NUM1 he says, ""what They did was a much more courageous thing then I could have ever done.""Narciso shows how glad he was that he got to grow up where he did. He had his parents, as well as all of his neighbors, which he considered his family. Though his apartment wasn't the nicest place to live, it was his home. He was happy there and always had people around him who loved and cared for him. In paragraph @NUM2 he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.Narciso shows his proud and glad feelings through his memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6555,3,A response that explains how the features of setting affect the cyclist by getting wrong dirachion The old man. One features when tough an ghost town. The old people in the didn’t know they were tell him. It made it haede for nam because that more harder roads and lesort water. He almost died.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13186,5,"There are many ways to describe the mood of the author in this memoir. I think the overall feeling and mood in the memoir is happiness and greatfulness. Narciso Rodriguez's parent were from Cuba and they werent very wealthy. Narciso grew up in a three room apart ment in a niehgborhood filled with immigrants from Cuba, @LOCATION1, and @LOCATION2. Narciso had great parents according to the memoir it says in paragraph seven, last sentence ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 means that @CAPS1 didn't care about the amount of space they had in the apartment @CAPS1 just cared and love the amount of love and the relationship they all had eachother.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6390,3,"The cyclist in, “Do not exceed posted speed limit”, was affected greatly by the features of the setting. First of all the weather was extremely hot and hot weather just makes you feel exhausted and like you can’t do anything. Also no one is in sight. She is all alone making her feel small and helpless. I know that when there is no one around I get scared. Finally there is no water around. The author is obviously dieing of thirst and with nothing around her she acts even thirstier.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7601,3,"The cyclist chose to ride through the worst terrain one can ride through. The cyclist rode through deserts and deserted towns. Thats when he started to get thirsty. At first he wasn’t tired or thirsty because he was riding by cool trees and rushing water in the morning. Once he got to the desert part with no water source then he got thirsty and started to drink his water which depleted fast. The lack of a dry place can make you thirsty by itself but after riding a while it became bad. The setting had everything, to do on how the cyclist had no water and thought he was going to die from heatstroke. That’s how the setting affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11845,5,"The mood created by this author is clearly greatfull. The author shows how he (narciso) could never stop saying thank you. He honestly loved the feeling his mom and dad made him have, and all thengs they did for him. By what the parents did by moving into a place to call home for Narciso made his mood forever endlessly greatful. By Narciso's mood being greatful I mean endlessly thankful for all that he has thanks to his parents. In this short autobiography, Narciso creats the reader to feel, and know he is happy with the life he has. As this short story creats the mood of being greatful. You understand how he feels as you read many times through out this article, ""I will always be greatfull to my parents...""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 444,1,"Dear Newspaper, ""@CAPS1 a computer @CAPS15?"" @CAPS2’s a continous subject and @CAPS10 controveries and ideas have been made, like senior scientis @PERSON2, I believe that computer can be used to help people connect with friends, long distant relatives"" says @PERSON2. @PERSON2 @CAPS1 right, computers bring people together whether its friends families or relatives from far countries. @CAPS2 also helps with everyday needs like and homework. First off people can do @CAPS10 things on a computer, including homework finding a store and checking out traffic and weather. You can play games, connect with friends learn recipies and react if the wreckers the football game. @CAPS4 creating a link all around the world people can find out information about one another and learn what they are all about. @PERCENT1 of large corporations find the @CAPS3 and computer very useful. ""@CAPS4 using the @CAPS3 I can find a willing participant in charities"" says @PERSON4, charity fund raiser in @LOCATION1. Second, @CAPS4 using the @CAPS3 people can share their wares on @CAPS10 sites including @CAPS6 and @CAPS7. People also create websites to share their wares, @PERSON1 the co-owner of The @CAPS8 @CAPS9, a duct @CAPS8 wallet company that also raises money for @LOCATION2, has started to create a website, and hopes to raise awareness of the terrible event that happened."" @CAPS10 like @PERSON1 use the @CAPS3 to expand their buisness. ""@CAPS12 stay in the past, when the door to the future @CAPS1 open?"" @CAPS13 @PERSON3, the succesful owner of @ORGANIZATION1. @CAPS4 using computers, people can gather data from others and create new inventions to help the world. People can create @NUM1-@CAPS14 diagrams on a computer and send the data to a company, and hopefully create @CAPS2. Computers arent just same plaything, they are serious pieces of equipment that can help the world. Although @CAPS10 people might find the down sides to computers, they will always be able to think of a good side. I hope that you will use this article to prove that computers arent all @CAPS15.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12341,5,"The author has many moods in the memoir. One of his moods is that he is happy. ""A cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and Love"". This quote shows that he is happy. Another mood is that he is grateful. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This proves that he is grateful. These are the authors mood in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9932,4,"There are many reasons why the author concludes the story with that paragraph. First that ending gives a lot of emotion which doesn't cause people to think the story wasn't interesting. Another reason is that it shows strength. Not physical strength, but mental strength. Saeng is stating that even though she failed the test the first time she will take it again. Another reason the author @MONTH1 have used this paragraph to conclude the story is to show people to never quit. It shows how she failed and her mom was disappointed but she is not going to quit and take the drivers test again. Overall the author concludes the story with the paragraph because it gives off a great image to keep trying and never give up.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12308,5,In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives the aurthor displays a mood. The mood is very calm and grateful as he explains how he feels to have his cuban culture and lifestyle. Explaining how his family loves cooking and playing music. The author just explains how he lived when he was with his parents. Then the author gets more detailed talking about who lived with him like his landlord and his daughter; his two granparents and others. The author just creates a calm and grateful mood to this memoir.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3844,2,"Libraries are stocked filled of all kind of reading materials. Such as books, magazines, and catalogs, but are all of these appropriate for the crowd that dwindle around a library? My answer is no, but should they be taken away from the librabires, no. Although many kids go through libraries so do many adults trying to find good pieces of litature, that is why they should keep these books available to most. When i was in the seventh grade i recall reading a book, by the title of @PERSON2, about a child who had gotten sexually abused, i wish i had never picked up that book. Although it made me very frightened, it taught me a very good lesson. I learned at a young age to never associate with strangers, and if it wasn't for this novel it could have been very different. Therefore i believe it is good to get children at a young age small dosages of the real life, not every thing in the world is sugar coated like @PERSON3 would argue. From @CAPS1 to the bible, there is a vast variety of litature. This variety provides stories for many audiences. The libraries try to do there best by catagorizing these books so that smaller children do not get there hands on the wrong books. Instead of taking the books totally out of the repitoure, another suggestion that could be made is to have a system like they do for mature rated video games and only allow people over the age of @NUM1 to check certain books out. This making it near impossible for children to get there hands on the wrong books. Lastly, a suggestion that could be made is to label inappropriate books such as @CAPS2.Ds and movies. This could make a small difference and make children think twice before opening up a book labelled for mature audiences only. This providing stories for all, and protecting small children from magazines such as @CAPS3. Like Katherine Paterson said 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf... then you also have the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' I percieve what she is trying to say is similar to what i am. She wants all the books to be provided and kids just to be shyed away from these, and hope that children can make the right decision when choosing a piece of litature from a library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18052,7,"A time when I was patient was when my mom broke her hip. When my mom broke her hip ,she moved slower than my grandpa you are probally asking yourself hour does this make her patient ,@CAPS1 @CAPS2 had to follow her every where she went if @CAPS2 wasn’t patient I think my mother would be in worse condition than what she was in @CAPS2 mean @CAPS2 took here almost fifteen minutes to walk to her bedroom . Normally I’m not a patient person at all ,but when this happened I had to be patient .I’m glad @DATE1 that I was patient because now I am more patient then I was before .My mom is proud of my behavior ,because I actually grew up for a few days to help her out when she needed @CAPS2 .Being patient is a good thing, you look at life different .now I can imagine me being patient.i mean I’m not glad my mum get hurt but I’m glad of my consequence of the problem .After the big accident hapend I have learned that everyone needs a little bit of patience like me that is one example about how I thought of I small were here away ever been patience ,without my mom.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6804,3,"Author Joe Kurmaskie learns the dangers of a lifeless wilderness during his experience described in “do not exceed posted speed limit.” As a cyclist riding in one of the most undeveloped areas in California, the lack of water found in this setting proves crippling to his survival. The trails he was directed to had no towns or sources of fresh, drinkable water for days. The combination of constant exercise riding through the terrain, lack of water and recources, California summer weather and lack of civilization trained the author’s energy and caused him to suffer from dehydration. Too much exposer to these conditions could have killed him. The modern time period and year also caused the directions the author were given to be in accurate, and, thus, causing the cyclist to find him self in such a dangerous area of the country. The setting of “do not exceed posted speed limit” places the cyclist in a life threatening situation.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15691,6,"A dirigible is not like a plane or a hot air balloon, it is filled with flamable gases, and to try to dock something that big on top of the worlds tallest building would be extremely dangerous too the urban town below and extremely dangerous for the workers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 628,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, @CAPS1 you imagine where the world would be without computers? Our daily lives would be dull and boring without new technology. Computers help society do various activities that would be impossible if we didn't have computers. They give us the ability to learn at home, connect with other people, and give a source of entertainment. From these reasons our lives because easy and convenient, which is what @CAPS2 people strive to accomplish. The ability for an average person to learn has greatly increased. It has gone from just being able to go to school to the @CAPS2 various ways to increase your intelligence on the computer. Programs such as @ORGANIZATION1, which teaches people how to speak a language, are available on the computer. These programs are like going to school, but more accesible to the public. To further help the public, there are ways to gain college degrees online. that how . Even if you go to school a computer @CAPS1 still help you excel in you work @CAPS2 sources of research are available on the computer and you like to the web a computer is a great place for fun. However, people still think computers are good. They claim to gaining on the other hand, the computer gives people website to help lose weight.They also say people aren't enjoying nature, even though there are @CAPS2 ways to appreciate on the computer. Lastly, it is stated that you dont . To conclude, computers greatly benefit us and are good. New technology is good thing and should keep expanding because of gaining the ability to , conncet with people and having fun, a computer helps the general public. Please, think of what i have said and buy a computer!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19197,7,"@PERSON1. I was in love with the guy! I swear middle school @CAPS1 when you have to be the most patient out of all the time in your life! Seconds pass by like hours your classes feel like they go on and on for centuries, which sometimes can be good, like in social studies. Social studies are the only class I have with @PERSON1 and I sit behind him staring at his perfect head. @DATE2 @CAPS1 the girl’s choice dance and I was determined to go with @PERSON1. So in social studies I wrote him a note. “@PERSON1, I really like you and was wondering if you wanted to go to the girls choice dance with me? From @ORGANIZATION1.” I chickened out, no way could I give it to him myself so, I devised a plan. I told @LOCATION1 who told @PERSON2 to @CAPS3 @PERSON3 (who @CAPS1 @PERSON1’s friend) to @CAPS3 @CAPS2, (@PERSON1’s better friend) to @CAPS3 @PERSON1 I liked him. Rumors spread fast in middle school so @PERSON1 found out before @PERSON2 but, now he knows, and now it’s @DATE1 and time for social studies. Patience @CAPS1 my essence I remind myself don’t be too quick to strike. Well I certainly wasn’t because the bell rang before I could give him the note. I waited and waited patiently until the right moment finally I leaned over and handed @PERSON1 my note. He opened it and I waited for a reply, and waited, and waited. I think I might be a little to patient seeing today @CAPS1 @DATE2 and the dance @CAPS1 tonight. At my locker, which @CAPS1 four and a doorway down from @PERSON1’s I have a note taped to it. It reads “@CAPS3 me your phone number and I’ll call you for the @NUM1.”. Gosh! Boys are so confusing I @CAPS3 him my number and wait by the phone. I think he’s testing my patience I wait for what feels like hours by my phone willing to ring. I felt like breaking down, giving up, and then a rush of will power would come back and @CAPS3 me it would be worth it in the end. The phone didn’t ring for what seemed like an eternity, so when it finally did I thought I was imagining it.’ When I answered all my patience paid off! He said one word. Yes!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 701,1,"@ORGANIZATION2, Technology has developed majorly these past decades. It has helped mankind so much from buildings to new inventions. These is how ever a growing concern about whether it's beneficital or not? People become more lazier because of the many things you could do with it. I think that it benefits us all. We have learned many things from it. The computer shows what man kind is capable of doing. We can learn about many cultures with it. Students use it for studying and making projects look better. I asked @CAPS1 @PERSON3 of @ORGANIZATION1 about the concren. He says that is can expand our knowledge. There is concern about how much paper we lose every year. With computers it makes going green more possible. You can make powerpoints on the computers instead of using so much paper for long essay. We could do tests on computers. I think the future will be based everything on computers. You can email instead of using letters. For example my friend @PERSON2 said her school didn't use paper and uses computers. They saved money and paper because of powerpoints etc. I miss my family over at @LOCATION1. I want to see them. Not just by talking on the phone. I use the computer to talk to them basically have. I asked @NUM1 people if they perfer using computer to talk to there family or use a phone. @NUM2 out of @NUM1 said they perfer computer. I know I'm trying to they are great but they do have there down side. The games are horrible for the computer. People will just play and play all day long. Online for the games make it even more fun thus it make them lazier. There are so many games for the computer it's horrible says @PERSON1 of @ORGANIZATION3. In conclusion, computers will be something that will help us for a long time and it benefits us. Except the fact about the games I agree with that bad side. I hope I have shown you as an independent person my statement was true.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9474,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, iN the spring, wheN the @CAPS1 melt and the geese RetuRN and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” means to the author kinda like the meaning to life. That if you mess up its okay just try again and do better.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6467,3,The features of the cyclist affect him in many ways. One way that the features affected him was that when he ran out of water all the buildings were like a ghost town. He said that there was no one in sight. In the story it says “the bulding abandoned years earlier.” If I was him I would of turned around and went back so I would take the chance of not dieing out in the middle of an abandoned area.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21617,8," Morose and somnolent, I woke up. I woke up to go to @LOCATION1. Going to @LOCATION1 to watch a few basketball games, I was. Although I was unable to partake in the activity because I was @CAPS1 injured in the previous week of practice. Unfortunately though, I still had to go and support my friends and teammates. It was about @NUM1 o'clock when we all got onto the bus and set off to @LOCATION1. All of my friends were mirthful and talkative; but me on the other hand, I was in a lackadaisical stare. The bus ride seemed to last a whole lifetime; but in two hours we arrived at our destination. @LOCATION1 had a nice school; but we were all about to find that it sometimes resembled a ghost town. The high school seemed lifeless in comparison with other schools we had played at in the past. There was nobody around and not a soul to be heard. We all sat there patiently waiting; then, after maybe five minutes or so a man showed up and led us to the locker rooms. The boys had to wait till the girls were done playing their game; so, we all went and started shooting on one of the auxiliary courts. Although, sadly due to my injury I could not participate in the activity. They were all having so much fun screwing around down there. Just the thought of not being down there with them made me ill. After the girls game we all went to change. After that we all sat there, joking around and waiting for our coach to come in and give us our pre-game pep talk. It seemed like ages before our coach finally came into the locker room. He talked about what we should and shouldn't do in order to get the win. When the game started I was really getting depressed, but I sucked it up and cheered on my team. The first half of the game was great and we were on top. Although the second half wasn't so great. We only scored six points and ended up losing the game by a large margin. My friends tried to be stoical; but I could tell that they were ashamed. Ashamed of their performance in the second half. This once again made me feel sad and depressed. Next, I had no choice but to go and watch two more games in the old, vulgar, and uncomfortable bleachers of @LOCATION1. The first of the two games was a great one; we won by two points. The next game on the other hand, was a very boring one. It seemed to take forever; but the worst of it was the fact that we lost. After that final game I had to wait for my cousin to come out from the locker room. When he did, we went to check out with our coaches; we had to check out in order to ride home with our parents. So off we went; but first we had to get something to eat. Once again, like all the times before we chose to eat at @ORGANIZATION1. We went through the drive through, got our food, then pulled over so we could eat. At first everything seemed right; but then my cousin noticed he didn't receive the @CAPS2 he ordered. So we went in to get the problem solved. Afterwords, we were all kind of joking about the restaurant not getting the order right; then I took a bite of my burger. It was then that I realized I had received a burger without a patty. I was really upset that @ORGANIZATION1's made such a silly mistake. So once more me and my cousin went in to the restaurant. When told what the problem was they were all just in shock. They couldn't believe what they had done. So after they all settled down they made me another burger. Me and and the family were all having a ball about the events at the @ORGANIZATION1. It was a great trip home fillled with lots of fun and laughter; which was not what me, my cousin, or anybody else expected.So in the end of my once gloomy day, I found myself stricken with laughter.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3709,2,"When you go to a library you think its going to be a place that is a good influence. Your not thinking when you send your kids their that there's going to be bad things. Most people go the the library to study or use the computers... But what about the other people? I went to the library and saw racest books most adults would find that offensive especially if its an afracan american. The thing is that people would also go there and check the books out to sutdy about the old times it's not there to offend people. Some books are very infromational and people need to study and learn about the past so that it doesnt happen again. Another peroblem most people have is with the adult books parents defantly dont want their children looking or checking thoughs books out. But when noone stops them from checking the books out there really is not anything you can do about it. I believe that libraries should have an age limit for checking out certen books. The last thing is the music it has bad language in it and kid can just check them out with out even trying hard. Most parants the to sheild their kids so they will be good and not use dirty language but when the and go to a comunity plase and just listen to anything that causes a peopblem. Personially I think that it gives the library a bad name and therefore that get little business. You know that if you were a parent you really wouldn't want your kids grabbing racest, adult books, and music and you would like for the government to take some the books and music out of the library. I believe that their should be a vote to see if we could have thoughs books amd music removed or atleast put in an adult section in the back. My main point of this essay is that they either need to have voting for what goes into the library or they need to start censioring the books and @CAPS1's they put in the library and make accessalble to the comunity. The up side to doing that is the library would get mor customers and that means the government would make more money",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15477,6,"The builders of the mooring mast plan the construction well, but did not consider the potential risks of the mast. One reason that the mast's fate was sealed was because of safety issues. Most dirigibles, or blimps, used hydrogen rather than helium. If one of these blimps were to fall from the sky, many people below would be killed. New York has many people that walk everywhere. The builders also needed to considered the violent winds at such a high altitude. These winds could blow the dirigibles around, making it difficult to keep them in one spot for passengers to board, and to refuel. The winds are constantly shifting. They could blow the blimps onto the spires on the Empire State Building, causing them to burst and fall to the ground below. Unfortunately, there is a law that prevents airships from flying too low over urban areas. ""This would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"". I think that Al Smith was more focused on keeping his height record, more than the potential dangers of the mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19150,7,"A time when I was patience. I was going school shoping. There were maybe over a hundred people in the store @PERSON1. It was like a duster of pebles in the sand. You could barly go down. The illes. It was like a whole mall in one little store. Some people would leave because how many people where in there. Then even more would come. It was me, @CAPS1 mom, and @CAPS1 dad. We started stuff out. We got in line behind maybe @NUM1 people or more. @CAPS1 mom was ready to explode. So @TIME1 only @TIME1 people had gone. @CAPS1 mom almost fell asleep I was just standing there waiting. But @CAPS1 armys hurted and @CAPS1 back herted. She was so ready to get out of that store. @CAPS1 dad was reading a magizene while he was waiting. Espn news to be exact. These were only a few people infront of use. I was happy that we could finally get @CAPS1 clothes. We get up to by @CAPS1 clothes and a cash register braekes. The lady said it will take a hour or two so @CAPS1 mom starts to complain. We sat in line a hour and half for this to happen. “@CAPS1 dad was fine with it because he was so into that magizene I could not belive that this happed I was so disapointed I was ready so was @CAPS1 mom so mom so we got @CAPS1 dad and left. @CAPS1 dad said”“I am at the good part.”I didn’t get the clothes that day but we went new week to get them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11978,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a specific mood to help the reader better relate to his life's story. The mood of this memoir is cozy in the beginning as he describes what his house was like and his own definition of family. As the memoir continues, the mood shifts to how grateful the author feels toward his parents. He describes how their selfless acts of leaving Cuba and creating a new life in @LOCATION1, helped create a strong foundation for him to grow up on. He says how his parents left behind their friends, family and jobs in the hope that their children would have a better life. His parents came to @LOCATION1, with no knowledge of the language and having to endure many hardships in finding and keeping jobs. The author says how he can't put his grateful feelings into words but is completely in their debt for taking such a big risk in coming to @LOCATION1. In the memoir, the author creates a specific mood to entice and interest the reader as they read more about his life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3608,2,"Well do you think that every book you read, every movie you watch, and all music you listen to is offensive. Who can say what is offensive to everyone? Who can tell you what you think is offensive or not? How can you be your own person if people are making desisions for you about the books you read, the movies you watch, and the music you listen to? I'm going to tell you about why I think that no certain materials such as books, movie, music, magazines, ect., should be taken off library selves because someone finds them offensive. Who can be the ultimate decision maker in deciding if something is offensive to everyone? Everyone has their own meaning of offensive. Everyone thinks that different things are offensive to them. How can you say that one thing is offensive to one person and is also offensive to another person?. I think if one person thinks that something is offensive to them that is ok, that is their own opioion, but maybe the next person that walks by and see's the so call offensive material will love it. You should not be able to make someone elses decisions for them if they want to read an offensive book, watch an offensive movie, and or listen to offensive music that is their chose not someone elses to make for them. If every peson took a book off the selves that they thought to be offensive then we would not longer have any books on the selves. Some people think that certain music, books, and movies are offensive and other people think that the books, music, and movies are cool and interesting so what do you do then? I have learned over the years that not every person will agree with your opinions on everything and you won't agree with them but yet you both still have your own opinions. You both are allowed to decide what you do and dont like. You both get to choose what books you read, what movies you watch, and what music you listen to. So why should we let anyone stop us from being ourselves? You can never say that anyone thing is offensive to everyone because no one person can be everyone. You can't talk for someone else because everyone has a voice for themselves. So do you think that every book you read, every movie you watch, and all the music you listen to is offensive? well you @MONTH1 not but someone else somewhere is trying to take that out of the libraries because they have a negative opinion about it but is that fair?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6537,3,The features of the setting affect the setting affect the cyclist by. Dehydrating him due to the heat and lack of water and to see mirages. And he loses strength going over the many hills. And there is a very large snake he has to ride by that could have bitten him.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7062,3,"The settings effect the cyclist by the roughness of the ride. First, they go over a bunch of rocks, and the tire could poys. Next it could be smooth and easy. Also, it could be far away from towns and difficult to get back. There could be a lack of water making you dehydrate. That is how the setting around the cyclist could effect him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 520,1,"Dear newspaper, I think computers are good for you because talk online, teach hand eye coordination, and other stuff too. One reason @CAPS9 he helps you with your hand eye coordination for example teach you how you look while typing. @CAPS3 we don’t learn hand eye coordination we won't know how to do other stuff that @CAPS9 hand eye coordination. The second reason @CAPS9 @CAPS1 you have a webcam you can use @CAPS1 for example when a family member @CAPS9 living in a different state you can see their face and talk to them like you do in person. The last reason @CAPS9 searching the web because @CAPS3 you want to get @CAPS4 ticits for a trip look online. @CAPS1's the best way to get them. researcher say @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people say getting online @CAPS9 the best way because you can see when the @CAPS4 take off, when the next @CAPS4 also when to come back home. All in all I say that compuetrs are a good thing because they help with you hand eye coordination also. @CAPS3 you have a web cam you can see family members from different states and see the face and talk to them like you are talking In person. The last thing @CAPS9 searching the web for @CAPS4 tickets @CAPS3 you want to go somewhere far a way go online and see when the @CAPS4 and comes back because researchers says that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 People say that getting online for @CAPS4 ticket @CAPS9 the best way to get them. Ask your self woild you like to have the web to seach or not?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18632,7,"It was @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I was up watching tv waiting an waiting for @CAPS1 and I was being patient and not pouty because I wanted @LOCATION1 to come to my house and, they were playing @CAPS1 tv shows and it was making me so excited and it felt like my heal was about to burst but I being patient. Then my mom said it was time to go to bed so I because I wanted @LOCATION1 to come to my house. But the only problem is I couldnt sleep so I went to get a glass of water and I turned on the tv queitly and on acident I feel asleep on the couch and next thing I new it was @CAPS1 and the had went by so fast that it felt like it was @CAPS1 in @NUM1 minutes. Because I was patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3313,2,"I believe that there should be a little censorship in libraries. There are some books out there that could be a little offensive and cause some problems, but I also believe that even if a book is insulting you shouldn't be able to hide it from others. There are some books that have some pretty nasty stuff in them that you could find in a library. Since a library is public lots of people go in to get books. What is to stop a kid to getting to one of these books, or movies you can find in libraries? Do you really want a child to check something out that has violence, horrible language, and sexual innuedo? What can you do about this problem? You could censorship the books and hide them from the public, but that would cause another problem. The idea of censorship might sound ok, but really it's not the right thing to do. Hiding things from the public just because it might have some bad things in it is a little over the top. If you are an adult and your in the mood to read something with a little violence in it you'd have to go somewhere else because someone just took that book away because it had some swear words that they don't find appropriate in books. Censorship would just make it harder for adults to find some books that they would want to read. So what do you do if there is an offensive book on the shelf? Do you just leave it there, or take it away so no one can read it? You could just put age restrictions on the books. If someone underage wanted to check out the book, they would have to get permission from their parent. That way the book can stay on the shelf and be read by anyone",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6335,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”many features of the setting challenge the cyclists.The cyclist accepts information from foreign old people which made his first mistake.After realizing this he,“I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly,and i was traveling through the high deserts of California,in June”the lack of water plus the heat in California,in june would have turned to heatstroke for most people.Even further into the journey,even with all those things against him it states,“flat rode was replaced by short,rolling hills,""@CAPS1 not only did he have excessive heat,and no water,but @CAPS1 he was handed troublesome rodes too.Although the cyclist must have been near to complete exhaustion,he continued through.Fighting all adds,and elements,many features in the setting of this story affected the cyclist,but he overcame them honorably.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15727,6,"The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. By allowing the dirigibles to dock there, They had to build @CAPS2 planfronts on the side of the building, which means that they would be putting there life's in danger. They also had to deal with the electrical problems within and without the building. The @CAPS1 on the outsides of the building would have to deal with the strong wind currents. They also have to make sure that the electrical system was working properly. If there were to be a stark of any sort of Fire, the hydrogen and helium were extremely flameable, and if a wire were too short, it could like the whole dirigible aflame and it would blow up.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13520,5,"The author created a heartfelt mood in the memoir. The mood the author created was greatful mood. In the memoir it states ""skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)"" This quote make me feel grateful for my culture and heritage. This story also make me feel proud. In the story it states ""My Mother and father had come to this country with such courage"". I feel so proud that they wanted to leave to come have a better life. Lastly the mood is happy. This story is happy because he learns a good lesson and he pround of his parents and culture.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4450,2,"I do not belive that they should be takein off the shelfs beacuse @CAPS1 people still come to get that sort of stuff. @CAPS1 people say is not plite for little kids 'well keek your kids away from it then.' @CAPS1 people dont like it and @CAPS1 people do. I am one of the people that like that kind of stuff, beacuse no one can tell us what we can and cant watch or say. It is our life if we wanna watch that kind of stuff or read about it we can. Noone is telling people that they half to read it or even look at it. If you dont like it dont look at it. @CAPS2 kind of stuff should be off to the side where you know what your goin to look at and away from kids @CAPS2 shouldnt even be a problem. @CAPS2 is just people that think they are high class and think if you look at that or watch that or read that you are a dirt bag. That is there opinon. In conclusion I think if you dont read @CAPS2 stuff or watch @CAPS2 stuff you are trying to be something you are not. Trying to act better than every cause your to high class to read something like that. We all get a laugh out of @CAPS2 kind of stuff.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10483,4,The author of Winter Hibiscus concludes the story with that paragraph because it gives a sense of starting over and a new beginning for Saeng. The hibiscus is a reminder of her home country and it keeps her going and strong and she compares herself to the geese saying that things she thought were strange became familiar through a quiet repetition from season to season. In the winter the hibiscus doesn’t bloom and Saeng fails her driver’s test. That paragraph tells that in the spring when the Hibiscus thrives and the geese return it will be a fresh start for them and Saeng as well. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9702,4,The author concluded the story with that paragraph because the author is trying to say that Saeng is going to start all over again just like the hibiscus would. Even though you go through bad times in your life just step and do it over again until it becomes better. The author also concluded the story with that paragraph because the paragraph pretty much starts the story all over again that like Saeng was going do. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6931,3,"The journey of a solo cyclist is a lonely one. The cyclist in “Do not exceed posted speed limit” had a particulaly hard journey, as made even worse by the setting. His main opponent in the battle of staying alive was the heat. In the California deserts as a day in June. It was no surprise that the sun would be heating down particularlly harder than it would at another place anytime. Also, as the terrain became hillier, his journey became even harder. There is nothing hard about biking in a flat straight line. But constantly peadling yourself up steep hills and around winding roads is no picnic. Just like the buildings around him, the cyclist’s water deteriorated as did his state of mind as his trip which started out very joyful became increasingly more mardid. “It didn’t really matter, I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean. This cyclist was fighting against strong forces of nature.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19315,7,"I am going to write a story about patience. Patience is when you wait for somebody to do something. One example of this might be if someone else is fixing something for you and you really waited them to be finished so you can move on with your life, but it is the type of thing that takes time, maybe a lot of time, but if you want it done right, you will have to wait. Sometimes it will not be a person you wait for, but an inamate object, like a television show, which can not be rushed, even though sometimes you want to ruch it. With a human however, if you rush them to do something, (which can happen it @MONTH1 end up being not as good and even breaking in about ten seconds after them doing it, it @MONTH1 end up happening faster though. You might also waight for nature too, such as a sunny day. When it @MONTH1 have been raining for over a week. You also might be waiting for the power to come back on during storm. It, for me, have really wanted the power to come back on during a storm because there is nothing to do!!! Patience is also about waiting for your ??? like when you are bored.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13474,5,I think that the mood that the author created was a unpleasnt. One beccause he lived in a one room apartment so that must mean that they are poor. and that they live in a poor town without any food.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7464,3,"Throughout “Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the features of the setting affect the cyclist. The cyclist was traveling through a very dry area, where it was very hot, dry and dangerous. There was no water to be found and the terrain is were rough and bumpy. The speaker stated, “At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously lareg snake...” (Kurmaskie @NUM1).The cyclist fared land blockings and dangerous animals. This cause him to slow down a little bit. It was extremely not out in the setting he was in. The cyclist was in the deserts of California in June.The speaker stated, “@CAPS1 rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, the growing realization that I could drop from heat stroke on gorgeous day in June...” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist was expirencing the high temperatures of the setting. The cyclist witnessed the intense features of the setting.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15928,6,The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there ware extrem to over come.one obstacles for the builders was trying to make it so the building its self could handle the stress of the dirigibles tied to the to the building with wind pulling at it and swaying back and forth as wind direction changes.Also it is to low for a dirigibles to be flying because of the other buildings. The most important is the gases inside the dirigible is flamible and would be devistation to the people below in New York City.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12077,5,"There was a mood created by the author in @CAPS1 memoir. Here are some points to help support this parenthesis identify a new mood, his gratefulness, and his view on things. First, parenthesis identify a new mood. When it goes from sentence to parenthesis the new mood appears then it goes back. Here is my reason why the story, ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with aromas of the kitchen."" @CAPS2, his gratefulness. @CAPS1 is very grateful for how things turned out. Here another reason why from the story. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS3, his view on things. @CAPS1 had very fortunate times in his eyes. Ultamately these were my reasons for the mood that was created by the author parenthesis, gratefulness, and his perspective.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3721,2,"The belief of certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are offensive, depends on the situation the material is relating to. If one wants to see these type of resources, then he/she must be mature enough to withstand it. It all depends on where the material is at in the library and what situation it's in. If it is in the children's area, I highly suggest that it should be removed from there, since it's clear that a child should not process this type of information. If it's in the teen section, then the person must be mature enough to take this sort of inappropriate matter or just leave it be. In the adult section however, there should be no argument of any sort because it is obvious that the person must be fully mature to take in this sort of material. One example on why this sort of aspect on whether or not inappropriate material should be removed are the comic books called '@CAPS1 tales' or '@CAPS2 the @ORGANIZATION1'. These type of materials have some from inappropriate to disturbing events in the books, but have been distributed to the teen section. Now from ages @NUM1 years of age usually spend their time there and would likely read this type of information. Some teens would be horrified of looking through these books and others would be fascinated by it. It varies through the people and what type of material they would like to read. It all depends on the situation where this material is distributed in. Another example on whether or not inappropraite material should be taken out of the shelves is how movies are put in situations. There was once a time, a young lady around her early teens who wanted to check out a type of movie in which she have never saw before. So once she checked it out, she watched it with her parents and saw some uneasy sections during this movie. The person should have thought this through before jumping into the situation. If the person was mature enough to go through this matter, it would have been fine; but she was young still and so it made the matter worse. Whether or not inappropriate material should be removed from shelves depends on how and where the material is distributed and so it shows that one person can change the difference in the situation.Therefore whether this type of material should be taken off the shelves depends, once again, on the situation it is at",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9278,4,The author concludes this paragraph with the story because of the potintal of the hibiscus. So Saeng will go take the test again no matter she already took it and failed. She is like the hibiscuc. The hibiscus seems out of place and is determined to survive when the snow melts. So she will go take the test again and us the hibiscus as her modifation.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21544,8," I choose to have a positive out look on life and I'm generally a happy person. Who wants to go through life mad all the time? Even at my lowest I know that I have a lot to be thankful for. Because of this, laughter is an every day factor of my life. When I'm with friends and family I am always laughing. Laughter is my medicine and I wouldn't be the same girl with out it. When I was in the fourth grade my family and I began going to a new @CAPS3 I didn't know any one there and I was really nervous about going to @DATE1 @TIME1. Mom walked me down the stairs to the classroom and the teacher introduced herself to me. Her name was @PERSON1. She was pretty and very tall with a funny australian accent. She was wearing alligator skin boots with black jeans and a pink top. Ms. @PERSON1 introduced me to the class stating my name and grade. after taking my seat we recited @CAPS1 versus and read short clips of @CAPS2 stories. When @CAPS3 had ended mom came downstairs to gt me. Reculctant as I was to see her I took hold of her hand, said bye to @PERSON1,and went back upstairs without one word from any of the other kids, but on our way upstairs a girl about my age, from which i recognized from the class said goodbye to me. I returned her nice gesture with a smile and a wave. One week later mom took me downstairs to @ORGANIZATION1. This time I was relentless and determined to make a new friend. I went and sat down next to the girl who said goodbye to me last week. I introduced myself to her and she told me her name was @PERSON2. We soon became very close. Every week I was so excited for @CAPS3 so I could spend time with @ORGANIZATION2. We became best friends! We played on the same soccer team together and we pretty much live at one anothers houses. In fact @PERSON2 has her own toothbrush at my house and I have one at her house as well. One time @PERSON2 and I were in @CAPS3, and now that we are older we go to the main service, we laughed so hard we almost peed our pants! @PERSON2 and I have so many great memories together and though we are becoming older the memories will last forever.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4688,2,"Yes, there are a lot of books out there that have graphic and sexual phrases, and there are alot of concernd parents out there that are worried about what the libraries are possibly letting their kids read. One good idea would be to put age limit signs in certain areas on the libraries, that dosent neccisarrly mean that the kid is goin to listen to that sign. We all know for a fact that pornagraphy will stay away from libraries and stay were they are at right now so thats not an issue the parents should worry about. I think the libraries should be broken onto sections. Theres a kid section, a teen section, and a adult section, but i don't think that the adult section should be to far off the teen section because when we say adult books or magazines everybody expects it to be one thing, porn. It should still be some type of book with some kind of censorship to it. There should be doors blocking each entrance to each section of books, and to get to them you to show the librarian some proof of age to be able to get into those sections, except the kid section. The kid section is a section that all kids can use, because we know that that section of books would be harmless to kids. I think that with that kind of security it would let parents to be able to be less stressed and worried for their childs safety and insecurity of the mind. There are tons of other ideas to explore to be able to try and keep books with some kind of censorship but most of them are off the wall and rediculus. I think that musoc and movies shouldn't even be in libraries just leave those to other stores it's better to let stores deal with that than libraries. The librarian probably dosen't even know half the cds that probably get checked out anyways. So it's best if you don't have those in there at all. Give some thought to these ideas that I just sprong at you. I personally think that having doors blocking to get to certain books would be a great plan to use, because it would block access to these areas from certain kids. Some other parents or people might have ideas of there own and it would be great to hear them or have some kind of bullitun about them around the city ofr town",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1509,1,"Hi my name is @CAPS1 and I'm writing to the local news paper to say that computers are good for people and helps alot like how to get one place two another, how to learn about black history or famous people that did something to the world, and how to find out the news and weather from home or at work, how to keep your besnness going without computers their jobs would be hopless, and like of your family or you tyring to make it in life and the only way to get in contact would be the computers there are computers every where even doctors use them at a hospital to keep people alive to see what wrong with them and where they came from, and one more jobs need computers to, to see if the person is capable for the job so they might look for background information with out it even you would not have a good job so hee are some resons why computers are important. One of them is we need computers for so that we can get around, if your planing to ge some where for the @DATE1 you would look on the computer for that perfect place. Second if you don't know how to get there of corse you can use a @CAPS2 but the computer is the best because it shows the miles and how long would it take to get there so thats one of them. And second to help learn about black history month and famous people, we all know that black history month is in books but not lot of boosks have alot of info in them thats why the computer comes in handy because like on google it gives you more info and shows the image of that person so that you know who they aare, like a famous singer or raper you @MONTH1 like but knows nothing about them you would use the computer, @CAPS3 because thats the best thing to do. Third would be how to find out the news and weather, I if you did not watch the news because you missed it what could you do is go on a news site and watch the news that have been aired on tv, or a favirote show to if you want. Foruth would be besnness, with out computers there busnness would be hopless it would not last that long. @NUM1. They would not knwo there profits @NUM2. how would they monege anything, that would happen if they did not have any type of computers. There lots of more stuff that coulf have said that prove computers are good and why we need them but i just had to cut it short and schools need computers the most to take test on the computers of they have to, so thats all the resons why we need computer and why they are good bye.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 47,1,"Dear newspaper, I feel as though internet or computers act as an advantage in sosiety rather than a problem. They help with school work, like projects or email. You can even take college online now! People also use the internet for media or to simply catch up with friends. One of the most important reasons to have a computer is for school orenented reasons. Like having a project that you need to get notes for or making a power poin presentation. One other great reson is for the teachers. There computers can help them teach a class in a way that is both fun and easy to undersand. The new uprizing in computer use has brought about new ways of getting a college degree. Now you even just simply get in bed turn on your lap top and take college classes right on your computer! I dont know about you guy's but I'd much rather take college in the own comfort of my home then drive to a campus all the time. Another great use for the internet is e-mail to e-mail makes our lives a lot easier now that more people use it. It can send us school starts like a early dismiste or a way to catch up with old highschool frends. Another great reson for the internet is for mention or just to have fun and relax. @PERCENT1 of people that have computers use them for media or fun reasons, like gamelry, or to go on to youtube. Please add this article into your news paper so that the computer can be put out there as a helping add, and not something that is going to make the whole world obise because thats not just from computers. Its the people who use computers, felt that they dont get exercise not the computers. So why put them out in a bad way.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10571,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because It show what Saeng will be doing and If she will go to school. Saeng didn't want to go school because she will wait For the snow to melt ond the geese return and this hibiscus is bucking, and prefers gardening to school. and garden remind For about her homeland. For @CAPS1 Saeng dug out hole and carefully lowered the winter hibiscus into it. The thing that made her thing about her homeland was the beating of eggs against a bowl, the sizzle of hot oil in the pan, The pungent smell of better melon wafled out. Another @CAPS1 she went over to the corner of the vegetable patch and started to dig a hole in the ground, that show she care about the garden.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15388,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, by the author @ORGANIZATION1, the obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building @CAPS1 in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State buildings flat roof. They were going to attach a single cable tether, but it would add stress to the buildings frame. They had to make the frame of the building stronger, which the desinged a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless stell tower that would illuminated from inside. When they tried it the wind was to strong, constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. They also couldnt due it because there was a law that airships flying to low over urban areas.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3949,2,"The views on censorship in libraries definitely varies from person to person. There are those who are offended by the material that is out there for anyone to access, and then there are those who want the right to read, listen, and watch whatever they choose. I believe there are pros and cons to each choice, either way you look at it, but there does need to be some sort of censorship in libraries; the line must be drawn somewhere. The lyrics in music can come off extremely offensive to some people. The inappropriate scenes in movies, whether it be involving two people of opposite sex or intense action moments, are not something people of a young age should be exposed to. The easy access to the library is part of the problem. Someone of any age can get their hands on just about anything they want. In my own experience, I have had the opportunity to get whatever I wanted at the library. The advertising pictures on the cover of books, movies, magazines, etc., gave me a false sense of what the material really contained when I was younger. I came home from a day at the library with materials that my parents did not approve of. If you look at it from the other point of view, you would probably be thinking, if we got rid of all material that someone would find offensive, our libraries would be left with close to nothing. In reality, I believe that once people realized that exposure to this kind of material is offensive, authors would change the way they would write; directors would change the way they produced movies; artists would change the lyrics to their songs. So yes, library's shelves would have been rid of many materials, but they would be replaced with what the people want. Others might argue that they have the right to read, listen, and watch what they would like. This @MONTH1 be true, but shouldn't others have the right to let their children go to libraries without worrying about the gruesome material they might be exposed to? Although to some people this argument @MONTH1 go either way, if the line is never drawn on what is available, who knows what the world @MONTH1 come to. From here, the material can only get more offensive, more disturbing, and leave a bigger effect on the minds of people. Children will be exposed to the 'evils' of this world at even a younger age, and if that is all they ever know, they won't realize what else this world has to offer them. Authors, directors, producers, and artists will all change their material if we show them that it is not what we want.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19415,7,"A time when I am patient is at gymnastics. There is multiple ways you have to be patient at gymnastics. Your mind, and body have to be patient, and sometimes you have to be patient with the coach your mind has to be patient when you wish you do things but you really can`t. your body has to be patient when it feels like your ready to do a skill but your mind is telling you to stop and be patient. You have to be patient with the coaches because they are always helping. So sometimes you have to wait @NUM1 minutes until they can finally help you. Patience is a very important life skill that everybody needs to have.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16189,6,"As a result of the idea to build a mooring mast, the builder faced a few obstacles in construction the mast. The first problem was structural, the weight of the dirigible tied it with a single tie would put great stress on the building. It was said between the dirigible's load and wind pressure the stress would be distributed all the way to foundation of the building. Another obstacle was the safety. Many dirigibles outside the United States used Hydrogen instead of Helium which is highly flamable. The owners realized the ""Hindenburg"" incident and realized the effects it could of had on downtown New York. The final obstacle was nature because the winds shifted at the top of the building. The problem discussed on this was despite the dirigibles being tied, it could swivel around the mast. The many obstacles faced led to the mooring mast not being constructed to its full purpose and blimps were less commodly used.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4269,2,"Censorship in libraries differ in certain areas. I personally love reading, and like all kinds of books. And I know that there are some books that I have read that my parents would not aprove of. But has that ever stopped me? Not exactly. I think that after a certain age, people should be aloud to read whatever they want. I mean, if I ever thought I could not be mature enough to read a certain book. Then I will not get or read the book, it is that simple. As far as music, movies, and magazines go that could be a different story. Music is for the most part like a book, just using a different one of your senses. And it is listened to, not read. Movies should be judged a little more carefully in my eyes, because movies are like show and tell. That could easily go wrong if children, teens, etc take it more than just a movie. I think all things should not be judged by assumption. Everyone has different opinions and likes. So, therefore material should not be removed from shelves, if there are people that like/support what the book, movie, or music has to offer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 595,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 @MONTH1 be true that computers @MONTH1 make people exercise less, enjoy nature less, and spend time with family and friends less but computers do benefit the society in many ways. Computers help students with homework and projects and they help communicate with other people. Besides the telephone, computers do have some bad things about them, too. Students need computers to help them complete homework and class projects. They help students create good presentations and students can use the internet for research. Having computers will help raise a students grades and help them have a more successful life in the future. Parents and kids can communicate long-distance friends and/or relatives and they can talk to co-workers, bosses, teachers of their kids, and with their own children/parents, too. Having computers would create more communication with some people and help keep in touch with family members. Besides all of the good things, computers do have bad qualities, too. They can lead to children seeing inapropriate sites, and maybe even a virus that crashes your computer! Most of the programs to get rid of viruses block children and adults from seeing inapropriate sites (like gambling, pornography, etc). We need a computer that is pre-installed with the best up-to-date virus protection system, that helps protect children, teens, and adults from viruses, inapropriate sites, and cyber-bullies. Having these will make a computer almost perfect! The computers everyone needs should help students learn, keep raising communication between people and be pre-uploaded with programs to protect people from viruses, bad websites, and cyber-bullies. Computers are needed, and without them, our lives would be extremely miserable.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18127,7,"When I was seven I played on a basketball team named the @CAPS1. We where playing against the @CAPS2 for the championship and I wasn’t in the game. My coach told me to stay on the bench this game because I was the hard seen @CAPS3 player on my team. Without me playing my team was down by @NUM1 and my coach didn’t put me in yard. I knew if I stayed calm and be patient me ??? would have let me play. So when it was the @DATE1 with a minute left in the game and we where down by @NUM2 my coach told me to get in the game and win it for us. So I got in and it was @NUM3 seconds left, I got the ball and started making all my shots. But when it was @NUM1 seconds left and we where down by @NUM5 point I got fouled. I had to take a technical shot which is when you are at the foul line and its just you, the ball and the rim. I made my first shot without a problem but my second shot I didn’t know what to do so I thought about what I did to play in the game patients, so as I got ready to shoot I got patient with the shot to think it out and when I shot it I made it so once the other team got the ball to inbound it we stole the ball and won the game. If I wasn’t patient in this game we wouldn’t have won and I wouldn’t have gotten the trophy to take home with me.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7450,3,"The setting had a bad affect on the author in many ways. One reason is that the heat of the setting caused the author become dehydrated. Dehydration is when your body begins to shut down due to lack of water. The setting also affected him by draining his confidence and making him seek out water. “I hung my head,” means that he was depressed. This proves that no matter who or what you follow there is always a possibility of death from any circumstances. Therefore this is how the author was affected by the setting he was biking @CAPS1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7336,3,"In ''Do Not Exceed Speed Limit,'' by Joe Kurmaskie, the author depicts the vivid details of the setting and how they contribute to the cyclist’s condition. For example, the author wrote “Over one long, crippling hill, a building come into view. I wiped the sweat from my eye” The way the author described the hill as “crippling” should how much energy it was taking away from the cyclist. Another quote that contributed to the cyclist’s journey was, “that smoky blues tune ''Summer time” rattled around in the dry honeycombs of my deteriorating brain.” This expressed how dehydrated the summer heat way making him. I believe the author used modifying details to support the description of the cyclist’s condition. I think the description of the setting enhanced the reader’s perception of the cyclist’s journey. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12689,5,"In the memoir ""@CAPS1 Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created by @CAPS2 is shocking. First, on page @NUM1 paragraph @NUM2 Rodriguez wrote, ""I would not know my 'real' grandparents... leave Cuba."" Here, Rodriguez is talking about how she never meat @CAPS2 real grandparents until they left Cuba in 1970. This is important because early in the memoir she said @CAPS2 surrogate grandparents (Sergio, Edelmira) came to eat dinner. In conclusion, in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created by @CAPS2 is shocking, @CAPS2 real grandparents come to @ORGANIZATION1 in 1970. She wanted to write this because she wanted to teach the reader to know the real deftion of family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13017,5,His mood was like happy and unsatisfying at the same time. They also say like how his/her life is so I think this book is good to. Or we can say article. It's like all about how his/her life story is.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16289,6,The obstacals he had was that the problems where never really solved and that had caused problems with the wind.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16425,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example, as mentioned in paragraph @NUM1, ""a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" The difficulty in having stress from the dirigible's load and the wind pressure is that it would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. Wind was another obstacle that the builders had to overcome. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. And even if the dirigible were to be tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Dirigibles moored in open fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using the led weights at the Empire State Building would not be safe, as they would dangle high above pedestrians on the street.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21221,8," My Laughter Story @CAPS1 you know that laughing really adds time to your life? Well you do now. Laughter is a great thing to have, because without laughter our world would be dull and pointless. On a day to day basis you should laugh everyday. Laughing can really help you get through a tough time.Me, @PERSON3, @PERSON1, and @PERSON4 were just hanging out up at @ORGANIZATION4's house one day and @PERSON4 was being really funny, all of us were laughing hysterically at what @PERSON4 was saying, then suddenly @PERSON2 calls us and wants to hangout and for us to come to @LOCATION1, but she said only @NUM1 of us can go. So we all debated on who was going to go. We came to a decision and @PERSON4 was the one having to stay back, but @PERSON1 gave him something to keep him occupied. So @PERSON1, @PERSON3, and I were mobbing the bus to @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1. There was a tweaker on the bus and he was making us laugh so hard, but he wasn't even trying. So we arrived at @ORGANIZATION1. We were all hungry so we decided to get some @ORGANIZATION2. When we got to @ORGANIZATION2 we all just got a dollar burger which were rip offs so we all saved our pickles that were on the burger so when we left we could stick them on the windows. We @CAPS1 and it made us laugh so hard we could barley run away. When we arrived at @ORGANIZATION3's apartment we knocked on her door, no one answered, so we knocked again, no answer again. We were just about to call her when she walks out of a different apartment and we all just started laughing because we pounded on someone elses door. When we walked in there was a party going on so we were like nice. When we got there we all had a couple of beers. We were having such a good time we were all just laughing and have the greatest time. That next morning we woke up at @NUM2 a.m because we had to ride the bus back to @LOCATION2 early because it was @DATE1 and the buses run only for a little bit. When we got on the bus the bus driver was making weird faces like he was constipated or something but he made me laugh really hard.When we arrived back in @LOCATION2 we called up @PERSON4 to see what he was doing, he was just hanging out in town so we just went and kicked it with him for the rest of the day and later we all went home. It was a good weekend.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6351,3,"Many of the features of the setting effect the cyclist. The most obvious and direct feature would be that this adventure took place in the “high deserts of California in June.” @CAPS1 about that passage says blistering heat; high meaning its going to be closer to sun, deserts, where the world is hot, California, which is known to be smoggy, and June, which is the middle of summer. Also, the closet water supply was “somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees,” there was a “long crippling hill” all while the sun was heating down. All of that would most obviously effect the cyclists by making him tired, which he vividly explains by expressing his fears of losing conscionous.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18235,7,"Im not a very patient person so im going to be wrighting about what patience @CAPS6. Patience @CAPS6 when you don’t complain when your board or waiting for somthing. For example (for your convenance I @CAPS1 be wrighting a story about patience, please take to note that this story @CAPS6 completely untrue) @CAPS1 was walking home and saw an elderly woman, she was having trouble with her grocerys. @CAPS1 wanted to help her but all he was thinking about was his cousin @CAPS2 that @CAPS4 be arriving at his house any moment now. @CAPS1 walked up to the woman and asked if she needed help and she replied “if you could I live over @CAPS3” she pointed to a large tan house. @CAPS1 carried her things to the door. “@CAPS3 you go,” he said. “@CAPS4 you mind helping me put them away” the woman asked. @CAPS1 thought about how his mother never wanted him to go into a strangers house, but @CAPS1 sort of knew her, so he said that he @CAPS4 help the woman smile. @CAPS1 then picked up the bags and said, “@CAPS6 your home unlocked” “@CAPS7 its not” she replied, where are your keys” @CAPS1 asked, “I beleve there lost somwere in the lawn. @CAPS1 searched for about a half hour, then he found them under a bush. He brought the keys to her and said “@CAPS3 you go,” she opened the door and he helped her with her grocres. When they were all put away @CAPS1 said “@CAPS11 I ought to be going.” “@CAPS11 not without somway I can repay you” said the woman “@CAPS13 go find my purse.” @CAPS1 waited and waited, it had to have been a hour. The woman came out of the kitchin with some change. “@CAPS15 its only change, I couldn’t find my wallet” she said and gave him the change. @CAPS1 left feeling like a good person because he was patient with the woman. @CAPS1 told his mom about his good deed and his cousin @CAPS2 got to stay longer. This was my example of patience, if this ever happens to you make sure your patient and know the person.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19470,7,"There are two reasons why I think patience is important. The first is because if you are not patient, than you can end up distracting other people around you. For example, if you finished your @CAPS1 test early and you kept telling everyone else to burry up it’s distracting. Now that you’ve interrupted everyone, they have lost their train of thought and now they @MONTH1 have to start over. A few weeks ago, my sister and I were out walking my dog and pulled so hard my little sister fell over and my dog ran away. We had to be patient and wait for him to return. My sister kept wanting to go call my mom to tell her the dog ran away again but I told her it would be rude to call because it would distract her from her work. Another reason why patience is important is because if you are not patient can get hurt. Let’s say you were going down the stairs and your sibling was in front of you and you needed to get downstairs quickly but they were walking down the stairs very slow, so you pushed them, they could get very hurt. In conclusion, patience is needed always and cannot be forgotten",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13276,5,"Narciso Rodriguez creates many moods in his memoir. In him memoir Narciso states ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us."" From this statement I feel the mood is loving and kindness. He also states ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and demonstration of how important family and friends are."" This changes the mood to greatfulness and selflessness of the parents. The last statement I thought really changed the mood was ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" The mood when the author says that is I think thankfulness. Those are so examples of how @PERSON1 changed the mood thought out him memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 712,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 you think computer have good or bad effects on people? It has been bought to @CAPS10 mind that people fight about @CAPS3 computers to @CAPS2 a doubt I think that computers have a positive on people. @CAPS10 think arguments are people find ability in talk online with other people and help with school work. First of all computers gieve in ability to learn about faraway places. This is really helpful @CAPS3 you @CAPS3 you want to learn about @CAPS4 you can go at the computer end google ""@CAPS4 @CAPS6"". By doing this you'll find a lot of info on @CAPS4. I should I tried it before. So that computers giving you this ability to learn about faraway places is really helpful to the human society. Second of all computers people to talk to other people around the world. This is really helpful @CAPS3 you want to learn about people from around the world. This is different than googling fatcs about other people. This is free because @CAPS3 you google @CAPS3 your online chat with someone you have a In @CAPS10 thoughts thats the best way to is helpful friends and family @CAPS3 they dont have of all computer can help with school work. This is helpful students could and the world or about a different This remind me of the time I had to @CAPS1 a project about the nine planets. I had to find a lot of info so that also means a lot of books and a lot of reading. So these I the easiest and fastest way to @CAPS1 @CAPS10 project. I went on the internet in @CAPS10 and get all the info that I needed. So then I completed @CAPS10 project and headed it in to @CAPS10 teacher. She gave me a @PERCENT1 for a project grade. I got a @PERCENT1 because I misspelled @CAPS10 name, but that doesnt matter. What I am to tell you is that computers help students with school work like projects. @CAPS2 thinking I know that computer have a positive effect on @CAPS10 three arguments is that computers give you ability to learn about faraway places, allow you to talk online with other people, and help you with school work. Please take @CAPS10 side and think that computers have a positive effects on human society.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7542,3,"The features of the setting of “Do not exceed posted speed limit” greatly impact the cyclist, in a negative way. For example, when the road changes from smooth and easy to rolling and full of hills. It makes it difficult for him to bike. He needs to use more energy to get over the hills. Another example is when it says “tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake blocked the majority of the pavement in front of me.” The connection with seeing a tumbleweed is that of being deserted and alone so this increased his feelings of despair. Lastly, he sees the Welch’s Grape Juice Factory, which is deserted and serves to only make him thirstier. All of these things affect the cyclist. The fact that he sees the grape juice factory is also ironic, because he is extremely dehydrated and the factory is abandoned.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19521,7,"Once there was a lonely puppy. One day he sent letter to a random address and waited and waited and waited. A few weeks later he got a reply to his letter, it was from another puppy! They soon became best friends and the puppy learned that patients pays off (ussaly). The @CAPS1",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12208,5,"There are many moods in this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez. One of the moods are loving ""I learned here how to love."" @CAPS1 mood is caring ""my parents always kept their arms and their door opened to the many people who were considered family. And @CAPS1 mood was happiness ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations"" That is the mood of this memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16226,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many @CAPS2 in trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. The builders had a real hard time with this construction of the morning mast. They had to deal with the frame work of the building. A big obstacle they had was that they didn't have a suitable landing area for the dirigibles. They didn't just have to deal with man made @CAPS2, but nature's @CAPS2 as well. The wind on the top of the building made it nearly impassible to land safely. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). The constructors of the building realized that to make this plan possible they would have to redo the frame of the building. The building wasn't even designed to be able to allow dirigibles to land on the top of the building. The workers were blind to see all the possible problems with the design of the moorning mast. The @CAPS2 the workers had to go through were to much and the landing of the dirigibles never worked.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21336,8," When I had turned fifteen I was so anxious to get my permit. I didn't study for it, but I thought to myself how hard could this really be? The first time I went to take the test I went with my best friend @PERSON1. @PERSON1 had already taken the test once and failed so she was trying again. We got to the @ORGANIZATION1 at @NUM1 a.m sharp. I was anxiously sitting there waiting to take my test and that's when they called my number. The women at the @ORGANIZATION1 was very nice to me she said ""all I need is your birth certificate, your social security, and proof of enrollment"" I handed the envelope to her that I had containing all of these. She okay'd me to go and take my test I sat at computer number six. I was not nervous at all I thought how could I not pass this.When the test began there was so many questions of things I didn't know like motorcycles,left turns, and things about animals that were on the road. I finished the test with @PERCENT1 I only needed to get @PERCENT2 to pass, I was bummed out that I had failed. @PERSON1 however had passed her test I was happy for her and I congratulated her but I was still in a way jealous of her. My @CAPS2 and @PERSON1 told me ""it's okay you will get it for sure next time!"" @CAPS1 they were wrong. I was supposed to be one of the first people out of my group of friends who was going to get there permit. I had no idea that all of my other friends would get it before I did. It seemed like every week one of my friends would get their permit and just pass me up. I was extremely discouraged and sad about this because in a way I felt like a failure but I was determined to get my permit no matter how many times it took me. I went back @DATE1 after taking my permit test for the first time to take my test again I failed, I had failed for the second time. I went back again five more times I failed my permit test five times. My @CAPS2 and I were driving back one morning after I had failed I was very sad because I was going to have to wait a whole month again before I could take it. That is when my @CAPS2 just started cracking up laughing hysterically at me. I was very confused at why she would act this way. She told me ""sometimes you just have to relax in situations and learn it is okay to not always get things right the first time life is about sticking to things and having fun if you can't laugh at mistakes that are made then what is the fun in that?"" I realized she was completely right and that's when I stopped beating myself up over not getting my permit. I laughed hysterically the rest of the car ride home. I didn't mind that I didn't pass because I knew I was going to get it if I just relaxed and studied. The next month I went back to take the test again. I went through all the steps in the @ORGANIZATION1 again I waited for them to call my number, I gave the women my information, and I sat down at the computer. I got @PERCENT3 this time! I was so stoked and so happy that I had passed I was mostly just surprised my @CAPS2's advice had worked. @DATE1 that day I was driving home from the store with my @CAPS2. I was not the best driver I think because it was only my first day, and she was yelling at me to slow down and hit the brakes as I pulled into the driveway. I had mistaken the gas for the break and I ran into the garage door. Surprisingly she had started laughing and this made me laugh. Instead of yelling at me and reaming me for this mistake we were able to laugh about it and I think that is what made a world of difference, because if she would have yelled at me I would have been discouraged to try driving again. Now I have had my permit for four months not only am I a better driver but I have learned to relax a little bit more I have learned to laugh a lot more and not take so many great simple things in the world for granite. I also think that it made me closer to my @CAPS2 in a way so I guess it is true what they say ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7100,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because it is in the desert it is in the summer. It affect the cyclist because he is riding a bike. For exsempl in the story he is running out of water. He is starting to git dehyjradid.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9648,4,"The author ended the story with the paragraph in order to show that Saeng is looking forward into her life and with a positive outlook. It shows that she is not going to be depressed by the change in her life anymore. The hibiscus is used as a device for this story’s plot. When changes happen with the hibiscus, changes happen in the story. At first, Saeng is without the hibiscus and feels hopeless. When she sees it, she remembers her past and is sad. Once she plans it, things start to look up. She begins to accept the change when the last paragraph says, “when they come back... and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” it shows that Saeng is looking at her future positively, and with this positive change, the hibiscus is now beginning to bloom. The author concludes the story in a symbolic way that helps express the story’s themes.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9867,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph they did, because Saeng is a nature freak. So she really likes nature and she would never ever hurt nature in her life and I guess that they wanted to end off with a nice paragraph. So she needs to take that test again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18681,7,"This is a writing piece on how I had to be pacient to get a fanominall bowl of @CAPS1 @CAPS2. My grandparents had just picked my brother and I up from our house to go get @CAPS1 @CAPS2 at cold stone. I never gone to cold stone, but my friends said it was good. So I had asked my grandparents if we could go. I was amped. When we arrived at our destination the line was huge. It was shaped like a snake. The sign said “@NUM1 minutes wait.”I was disiported. I was about to leave when I saw it. The peanut butter @CAPS1 @CAPS2. It was staring me right in my face so I I talked to my grandparents and said we could stay. When we finally got to the front of the line I orderd peanut butter @CAPS1 @CAPS2. It was time to send my taste buds on vacation. It was fantastic @CAPS1 @CAPS2. It was so smooth. I was thinking to my self how I was glad that I was pacient to envoy that amazing @CAPS1 @CAPS2. That was the time I had to be pacient to go get a fanominall @CAPS1 @CAPS2 bowl.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9575,4,"The author concludes the paragraph like this because it shows that she @MONTH1 not going to give up. I @MONTH1 this because she vowed silently to herself that she was going to take the test again during the spring, also, it was the aiudieres not the gains in old years seeds an ezing. In conclusion they one the reason why the author concludes the paragraph like this.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6848,3,"this story is set in the hot in the hot desert in June and the character is a cyclist trying to get to a National Park. the setting affects the cyclist because the hotter it is the more water you need to keep you hydrated, but the man is alone in the desert. This quote “about forty miles in the pedal I arrived as my first “town”. The place might have been a thriving little syos as one time”. This quote shows how deserted the desert is and how as he rides there is nobody around no where to re-hydrate no where to get drecionsn he was alone.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4379,2,"There is many different topics that could be offensive, @CAPS5 just depends on the person's own personal judgement. In my opinion I do not believe that materials should be removed because not everyone has the same view or opinons. If someone comes from a different country or evern a different religion, topics like abortion and racism are going to be viewed very differently. I think having a variety of topics will help expand different thoughts and make the readers of the material see things in a different way. When I am older and if one of my elementary children was to bring home a book over abortion, I would be concerned. Honestly though, I do not believe schools would let inapropriate topics for younger childeren read books like that. @CAPS5 is a little bit different with a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 student though. Their maturity level is going to be mature enough to handle the material and I do not think @CAPS5 is right for schools to remove something that could actually help someone. In the book, 'A @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5', there is a lot of detailed events that happen. Some might say @CAPS5 is too graphic for children but the reality of @CAPS5 is, events like those happen in today's society. @CAPS5 really opened up my eyes and I am extremely happy I read @CAPS5. The realization actually made me want to help those children who grow up in homes like the one described in the book. I believe @CAPS5 had the same effect on other people too and some children might even grow up to help others in that horrible situation. Libraries should be able to have a variety of different books. I am not saying however that they should have books on murder and saying @CAPS5 is alright but books that will help expand the children's minds. @CAPS5 could even change their lives. Some books are a sensitvie topic but who has the right to tell someone something they should believe? @CAPS5 would mean more to someone if they found their own way and beliefs then having people tell them what they should and should not do or believe in. I have also read a book recently titled, '@CAPS6', @CAPS5 is about the government granting the ability to @CAPS6 your children and then the body parts will go to those in need. @CAPS5 is sort of cruel in one way but the topic the author is trying to get across is not. A quote from the book is, 'On one side you have people killing abortion doctors for the right of life and on the other you have people getting pregnant just to sell their fetal tissue'. @CAPS5 states that everywhere you go people are going to disagree and agree on things but not everyone will believe in the same thing. @CAPS5 shows that just because one person thinks one way is right does not mean another will. The book changed my perspective on many different topics and helped me open my eyes on different views. Racism, abortion, @CAPS3 abuse, unwinding your children, what ever the case @MONTH1 be, some people will support @CAPS5 and some will not. I think @CAPS5 is time for children around the world to discover for themselves what they truely believe in and taking 'offensive' material from @CAPS2 libraries is not going to help any. My opinion on this topic is strongly advising to leave the material alone because for there to be a book about @CAPS5, the author had to have had a reason to write @CAPS5 and honestly, what is better for the future then a generation of children grounded to their own true beliefs",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 938,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I am a child of the tech generation, or the generation in which technology has taken on a new meaning. That meaning is life. Our life revolves around technology in general as the @LOCATION3 revolves around the sun. The chief technological preference, computers, is greatly beneficial, aren’t as bad as many people speculate, and help us live and prosper in this struggling world. Look, if you want to roast computers then by all means, roast away. But if you do so without first regarding all the angles of them, then you, my friend, have absolutely no standing on the situation. You could say that they are a neucence but could never have used aho. You could argue that they can be used to detonate bombs, but, lets be practical, how many normal people actually wake upwake up and point out the drearyness of life and then type in a command to detonate a bomb? A serious benefit you have obviously choes t o overlook is the invaluable information it aptly places in front of you on a @NUM1 inch screen. You can read book reviews, read books, bag things, and get the cutting-edge news you want, to name just a meager amount of possible strengths. Further more, not everything that you speculate as bad has to be bad just because you say it so. When you think of @CAPS3. Do you always think about vulgar, inappropriate pictures, and illegal images? That’s funny, because @CAPS3 keeps family in touch, gives people things to do, and keeps friends in different states on the same server. Youtube is not all swearing and bad videos. My family casts actors for shows, and one way they know what an actor is capable of is by going to their channel and looking at the videos that they have created. My mother actually contacts actors in videos to see if they want to become professionals. That is the business, finding talent where it is seldom found. Lastly, did you even think about the fact that computers are used to start companys and saves lives? You probably didn’t even know that, from a computer, astrologists monitor images of the universe captured by the hubble space carrier meteorologists track cloud formations from satellites using a computer. Maybe you didn’t choose to say that surgeons can dictate operations from their office in @LOCATION1 on a patient in @LOCATION2? You didn’t even say that seismologist use computers to traet the shifting of the tectonic plates to see where the epicenter of a major earthquake is? You just didn’t know. So, let’s face it, computers are important. You probably used to do what little research you did them. In fact, pardon me. You probably didn’t do the research in the first place, instead pointing fingers at the innocent. Smooth move, buddy.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7452,3,"The setting affects the cyclist because it is in a warm dry climate, causing him to sweat profusely, and requiring like to drink more water. When no one else was around, it is more difficult for him to continue, if there’s a chance that he is on the wrong path, and no body available to tell him otherwise. With only abandoned buildings, if any, water was unavailable, which made the journey more tiring and physically straining. If the setting were different, this story would not have been as traumatic.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16404,6,"The idea of making the top of the Empire State Building into a dirigible @CAPS1 had been a good idea, and would have helped with the problem of there was no area large enough for the dirigible to land. However there were flaws in the idea that were not discovered till the construction of the building was completed. One flaw was the violent air currents that would keep the winds around the building constantly moving and would the move back of the dirigible around and around till eventuly the back of the dirigible would hit the building. The other flaw Was that most of the dirigibles was filled with a highly flamable gas known as hydrogen. If the dirigible had exploded and burst into flames like the Hindenburg in Lakehurst, New Jersey on May 6, 1937 then the flaming shell would fall down on the people around the building. Even if the flaws had been fixed, there was already a law that went against the airships flying too low over urban areas and if the airships managed to land on the Empire States Building it would be considered illegal.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18017,7,"Being patient is sometimes hard but sometimes you don’t care. There are many times I was patient. Sometimes I have to wait an hour or @NUM1 minutes. There is a time when I had to wait an hour. The one time when I was patient was at dance. My mom danced me off at @NUM2. I waited five minutes because I was a little yearly. After I waited five minutes I had worried that maybe they were in a different class but no they weren’t. After waiting thirdy minutes I was really bored and remembered that dance started at @TIME1. I could of called home but I didn’t have my phone. Then when five more minutes went by I went in the playset. Me and myself swinging alone. When I was @TIME1 my mom came to pick me up from dance but I told her, “it starts at @TIME1. So I have to leave”. She kept asking me why I didn’t call and I kept telling her I didn’t have my phone. Then she left and I went to dance for two hours. Being patient that long is humble to me. I can go fifteen minutes but I can’t go an hour. Thats one of the horrible times I was patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 656,1,"I believe that computers are a great help to society I believe this @CAPS3 when you don'@CAPS1 know something you could go on-line to look it up. Also if you are to sick or don'@CAPS1 have time to go out and buy things that you need from stores you can buy it on-line and have it @CAPS7 right to your door. My final reason is that computers can save paper buy having a lot of document on your computer. My first reason was that if you don'@CAPS1 know something you could look it up. A lot of times you could be watching @CAPS1.V. or talking with someone and you @CAPS4 wonder what something is or means. @CAPS6 instead of just letting whatever you didn'@CAPS1 know just pass on you could look it up on a computer and educate yourself and possibly others to. My next reason was that if you are to sick or don'@CAPS1 have the time to go out and buy things that you need from stores you can buy it on-line and have it @CAPS7 right to you door. This is a great help to the people who are to sick @CAPS3 sometimes they are @CAPS6 said they can'@CAPS1 leace there home @CAPS6 instead of starving to death they can have food or anything @CAPS7 to them if they just click a couple of buttons on the computer. Now, also this could help the people who are to busy to go to stores @CAPS3 right before they leave they could press some buttons and when they get home there stuff on sitting there for you. Back when my dad was a @CAPS2 and my mom was a vice-president of a drug producing company which sold oxy-cofin they had to have a grocery @CAPS5 ship foods to our house. They had to have this happen @CAPS3 they @CAPS4 worked long hours and they didn'@CAPS1 have the time to go to a grocery @CAPS5 @CAPS6 they had the food @CAPS7 to our house which was a huge help. My last and final reason is that computers can help save a lot of trees and paper. A big thing now is that we have to go green right, @CAPS6 instead of cutting down more trees we can just have all that on our computer which doesn'@CAPS1 we any paper. These are just some of the reasons why computers are a help to society. I could come up with many more ideas but can'@CAPS1 fit them just in this story, @CAPS6 finally rember people whole lives are on their computers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12621,5,"in This @CAPS1, narciso Rodriguez, The @CAPS2 in the @CAPS1 would be a @CAPS5 bit sad, sad because @CAPS3 is taking about her life and how @CAPS3 grows up in a one @CAPS5 Simple house in 1961. her mother didns want her to live anywhere else. @CAPS3 was a only child. and this @CAPS1 tells you mostly about her life. That is the @CAPS2 in the @CAPS1 @PERSON2.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21354,8," i woke up at @NUM1 from a cal from my cousin saying he wanted to hang out and introduce me to my cousin i have never met before. after we got off the phone i hung up and scurried into the shower and got ready as fast as i could. once they got to my house i frantically ran to the door and opened it really fast expecting some kind of reaction from my new cousin, but the one i got wasn't what i expected. right when i opened the door he began cracking up laughing at my for a couple of minutes. i got kinda mad at him because i didn't know what he was laughing at , until i looked down and realized i had no pants on, i rushed back into my room and put some shorts on and came back into the living room while they were still on the coach laughing at my stupid mistake. i sat down on the couch across from them and asked them what they were laughing about and that i did it on purpose for a joke, they didn't believe me at all, i don't blame them because that was the stupidest thing to say in that circumstance. after they stopped laughing my cousin asked me if that was the only thing iv done like that,i replied no, and he started on about some stories about him doing dumb stuff like i did, that ended up being the only topic we talked about for half the day, just reciting dumb stories about ourselves that were embarrassing. it turns out that just because i made that dumb mistake it made it easy for us to get along and start talking as soon as he walked in and just for that reason we have had a good relationship since we met .in the end i was glad i did that because it made us really close because we can now just laugh at each other when either of us do stupid stuff. and that's my story in which laughter was an element in a relationship between my cousin and i.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1504,1,"When people think about computers the first thing they think of is games. Thats not all they are good for. For most people they are very usefull. Computers are great for @ORGANIZATION1. At @ORGANIZATION1 they help with homework and projects. When we are assigned a project we need to do research on a topic and the fastest and easier way is by computer. The students at @ORGANIZATION2, especially @NUM1 graded, are able to type up easys because it's faster and alot easier. If we are at home and we forgot our homework we could look it up online. This can be really helpful and convient to students and teachers. Sometimes it's not @ORGANIZATION1 but its finding things. Technology and computers have came a long way. Now we can look up directions to places we dont or cant find. People can also finding names, numbers, or address useing websites like yellow pages can be a relieable resource for that. Say your going for vaction and your try to find somewhere to stay it could be tough but there are websites you can go on were if you want something fast or mabye a nice hotel for a low price you can find it. The computer can be very fan and intersting when you go places like the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and you want to show picture of the great time you had so you can post them online. Say you havent talked to and old friend in a while, you can look for them on @CAPS3 or another website and start talking agian you can also play games and connect with friends or play games with friends while online. Weather its @ORGANIZATION1, finding things, or connecting with frends the computer has what ever you need. Maybe it will at one point get damged but they have people who can fix it. Plus if you think about it computers have very reliable resourses that are more updated then books.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4155,2,"I think that censorship in libraries is and is not a good idea because some people wouldnt get to read what they want to. I read world war @CAPS1 books, and a wide selectionof others and if they take those away just for being offensive id have nothing to read. If i find a book i think is offinsive I just put it back and dont get it. I think they should age books like this book is for ages @NUM1, and especialy movies and magizines because kids dont need to read or see certain things, because books and movies sometimes refer to drugs or alcohole and murder. I dont think music is a big deal because music isnt very influincial but music videos are soometimes bad. Movies sometimes go to far though and i wouldnt want my kids watching them, so i wouldnt mind if they take thos off the shelves if they are offinsive.I dont think books should be taken off the shelf because parents should know what there kids are reading anyway. I would at least check the book or magazine before geting it for my kids and so should other parents.theres always going to be offinsive books and movies so its the parents job to make sure there kids dont get thos kinds of books or magazines.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15772,6,"In the story ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builder's of the Empire State Building had many obstacles in the attempt of allowing dirigibles to dock. The huge balloon caused tension and stress due to its ginormous size. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of abuilding, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"". The stress of the dirigible, can cause crucial damage on the buildings frame. Also, it was not only the size the contents of some of the planes caused a crisis aswell. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"". The worrys of the balloon catching on fire was too much to risk. Along with all, is the power of nature itself. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" The winds on top of the building were very violent compared to the ones in the ground causing a scare. It looked all good until everything was looked at carefully, obstacles came from all different ways.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18603,7,"I remeber, just a few days ago, my mother had to get her tooth checked out and guess what I did, I read a book! Even though it took forever, I was done with my @NUM1 minute homework. When my mom came back we got up to leave and my feet were name. So far my patience we got ice cream. So you could get rewarded if your just patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10258,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph because this paragraph represent saeng’s determination and the situation she has now. She just come to the new country and she haven’t adjusted herself to this new country yet. She was disappointed like “mashaft of the war afternoon starlight.” “war” showed saeng was ery upset. After she met the flower, she thought of her old country, her homeland she missed it. She felt that life was full of hope again. She knew she should adjust herself in the new situation she was still too shaky to say the words at home. Last she burst into tears again. She missed her homelad very much “snows"" symbolized the difficult situation she had now. But she believed she could overcome the situation and life was full of hope. “spring” symbolized the hope to the new life saeng thought things would get better in the spring. She would succeed in the spring. She had the determination to succeed, so the author uses that paragraph at conclusion. It symbolizes hope.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7465,3,The features of the setting effect the cyclist in many ways. He becomes delusional when he said that if he were lucky one of the stones would be lodged in his throat. Also he is dehydrated because he uses all of his water tend is having to push hard to make it to the next town.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21142,8," Laughter between two people is one of the ways you know if you are really good friends. Laughter between each other is what cheers you up if your having a really bad day. It is the reason you know you have a great bond in your relationship. Laughter is the bond between my two best friends and I. It is why we have been friends for so long. One of my best friends is named @PERSON1 and the other is @PERSON3. I have been friends with them for @NUM1 years now. We are all very close and we do every thing together. We hang out together, we play soccer together, we live close together, and we laugh together. @PERSON1 loves to go camping with her family in the @DATE1. The past @NUM2 years she has taken @PERSON3 and I along. @CAPS2 last trip I had been texting a lot on the trip @CAPS3 i was the only one who had service at the camp site. @PERSON1's mom had yelled at me for texting so much, which had mad me kinda angry. @PERSON1 and @PERSON3 had agreed with @PERSON1's mom and yelled at me to. I yelled back @CAPS3 I didn't like how @CAPS1 were all ganging up on me. I said ""I know, I'm getting off the phone. Just shut up!"" @CAPS1 were both really surprised that I said that and became intimidated. We all stopped talking and things were really awkward for a little while. Then our friend @PERSON2 who was also on the trip with us had fallen flat on his face while he was trying to do a cartwheel. @PERSON3, @PERSON1 and I all tried not to laugh @CAPS3 we were mad at each other, but we couldn't help it, it was just too funny. So we burst out laughing together and realized that we shouldn't be mad at each other. We knew there was no way that a little fight like that was going to stop us from being friends. We all hugged each other and said ""I'm sorry."" @CAPS2 is why laughter is such a great thing, @CAPS3 there's nothing better than knowing you have friends that are there for you and can always make you laugh even when your mad at them. It can make your bond between each other stronger and can really repair any damage that has broken a relationship. In my case laughter has fixed many problems like @CAPS2 and always will.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13237,5,"The mood is created by the auther in the authe in the memoir by. ""Narciso Rodriguez and internally reconized @CAPS1 desiner, offers the following definition of ""family""."" @CAPS2 @CAPS3 what and all the diffienetions of family and what a family is. ""Our landlord and his daughter, Alegria (my badysitter and my first friend) lived above us and Alegria graced our kitchen table more often than not"". Alegra was @CAPS4 as a part of the family not by blood not by chose but by @CAPS5 because @CAPS6 understand the Rodriguez's family @CAPS6 liked them so @CAPS6 becacme part of there family and they became part of her family. ""Here, the innocence of childhood the Congregation of family and friends and endless celebrations that encompassed both formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"". When your away from Home every thing you do is different the way you sleep, eat, talk, react, is all different except when your home every thing is normal again. family isn't by blood but by heart of @CAPS5 and Home isn't where you live it's where familiy is it's where memoris are that's How the mood is set by the auther",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1739,1,"Dear State legistator, @CAPS1 you live back a long time ago when there were no computers. The only diffrence now is the technology is there but you are not allowed to use it. Do you think your job would be harder. I deffidently think that computers are making your job and everyone elses lifes easier. With the computer it teaches hand-eye cordination, gives people the ability to learn about far away places, and it gives people the ability to talk to each other. I belive the @CAPS4 technology of the computer is defidently helping out society. To start, computers are helping many people with their hand eye coordination. As you know hand eye coordination is necsicarry for a good driver. The @CAPS4 statistics that came out from “@CAPS2 drivers.com” the rate of accidents has decreased over the past ten years. In fact it decraced over @PERCENT1. With all the computer games that they have for young kids it is improving kids hand eye coordination. Starting at a young age. With the games like “@CAPS3” a majority of kids are ridding bikes skiing or snow boarding by five years old. All of these activities require very good hand eye coordination. Lastly , the resources that help with hand eye coordination are being used to help special-ed students get better at simple tasks at a faster pase. Secondly the world wide web is teaching people of all ages about places that are located thousands of miles away from their homes. Something that I personaly use my computer for is to research a location and find history on it before I go on vacation to that place. The computers in our school has helped our classes in social studies. My teacher @PERSON1 said that he has been grading more strictly often and the grades are still up by @PERCENT2 on computer and internet research projects. I should also add in that using the computers our school is in communication with a school in @LOCATION1. Once a week we email our pen-pa. the computers have deffidently helped my schools curriculum. Finally, computers are letting people of all ages talk to buisness partners, friends etc. The social networking sites have kept @PERCENT3 of friends in touch found in “@CAPS4-tech” magazine. I should also add in it has reconected @PERCENT4 of friends from high school all due to the computer. Another form of online talking is vidio chatting which many people are now using for buissness meetings instead of spending the money to fly to the location of their meeting. Now, for one day you should track how many hours you are on the computer for your job. I can bet the number is going to be about @PERCENT5 of the time you are in you office. The computers have with hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about places far away from home, and lets people talk to each other online. So do me a favor state legislator relize and come to terms how much society needs the computer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7390,3,I think that the features of the setting affected the cyclist because of the sharp turns and the lonelyness it say in the text “About forty miles into the pedal. I arrived at the first town.”,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 626,1,"Does computers have an effect on people? Do they have a good effect or bad effect. Dear Local Newspaper, I agree they have a good effect on people because you can learn from them, you can can look at maps if your leaving out the state there good to talk to people online, you can shop online. I don'@CAPS1 think adults spend too much time on computers than exercising I think kids mostly on the computer playing games and other activities, some people use computers for homework, writing papers, or searching for people. Computers are good ways to learn about people and words, there not just for playing games and listening to music, there for good use, you can look up restaurants and look at there prices, @LOCATION1 shows site you can look at episodes of @CAPS1.V. shows online. I think computers are better than books and dictionary because you can do all that stuff on a computer. Some people think computers are good things to have cause its fast and easy. Some people thnk computers are a waste of time on them. Computers are good because if you need to write a paper you can type it and print it instead of having messy hand writing, computers are good for if your in a rush to search something its fast. Computers are useful for anything like books, writing paper, websites, chatting with friends web maps, music, games and etc, they do have a good effect on people and kids. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6924,3,"The features of the setting in the story affect the cyclist both physically and mentally. It affects him physically because of the rolling hills he has to trudge over and the lack of water he has. The rolling hills make him tired and weak along with the rough terrain. The lack of water doesn’t help any when he’s thirsty because of the hills. The features affect him mentally because the farther he goes the more dalerious he gets. Each more mile he keeps telling himself, if I can just get there I’ll be fine. He also blames himself for listening to the old men. And with this also came doubt. He was doubting that he could make it alive. In the story it says, “it didn’t really matter: I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean"". mentally he couldn’t make it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8983,4,"In the story ""Winter Hibiscus"", the author concluded the story with the quote ""when they come back, Saeng's vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again."" the auther put this paragraph as the concluding thought to stress that Saeng is determined to make a change. She failed the test but wants to take it again. Her grandmother's resemblance is in the flower so if the flower budds, then her grandmother will be back in a sense. When he grandmother ""comes back"" then @PERSON1 will feel as if her grandmother is giving her strength and encouragement to try the test again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13081,5,"The mood of the memoir is very appreciative and grateful. The mood of the memoir is very appreciate and grateful because the author is looking back on how his parents turned a three room appartment into a home. I know this because in paragraph @NUM1 the author writes ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This supports the mood of the memoir because the author is grateful to his parents for teaching him what a home really is. Also the mood of the memoir is very appreciative and grateful because the author tells of how his community was a family. I know this because in paragraph @NUM2 the author writes ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" This supports the mood of the memoir because the authors appreciative of the atmosphere of the place that he grew up in. Another reason the mood of the memoir is very appreciative and grateful is that the author understands his parents hardships. I know this because in paragraph @NUM3 the author writes ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This supports the mood of the memoir because the author appreciates the fact that his parents gave up so much to make a better life for him. The mood of the memoir is shown in many ways.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4290,2,"Almost every city in the @LOCATION1 has a public library. A place where the citizens can check out books, music, movies, magazines and more. Inside a library, there are different sections. There are kids sections, adult, fiction, and many more. Just like any ordinary store, there are items in a library that are not subject for children. A common question has been coming up everday life, 'Should we remove these offensive items from our shelves?' Libraries have been around for years and so have uncensored things that are being put in front of children. As a child, you want to explore and know everything. Bad things will always be put in front of you as an obstacle to make the right choice. Just like these degrading items found in everyday stores, libraries, or in general everywhere you go. A library, however, is not just intended for adults, teenagers, or young children. A library is made for everyone's access and not everyone is alike. Therefore there is plenty of variety in these libraries. It should never be a libraries fault for containing things not appropriete for children in my belief. Almost every library is very organized into categories. If children are separated and exclusive to adult material, I see no problem in having these items on the shelves. When I visit a library, these items are very out of reach for children. Society knows what should and should not be brought upon a child, so they know not to put it in any reach of children. 'All of us can think of a book that we hope non of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.' said Author, Katherine Paterson. Katherine makes a very valid statement. If I have a child one day, I could think of plenty of materials I would hope my child never came acrossed. However, as a parent it is their job to protect their children from these things. Coming from a teenage perspective, at a young age, I was very clueless about all the terrible things sitting around me. A majority of children would not be able to get their hands on such uncensored items, nor would they understand them if they did. There are things in this world that are much worse for children to see then taking a quick glance at something not for their age at a library. If anything, concerned parents should be paying more attention to what their children come in contact with at stores, the people they are around, or what they are listening/watching. The internet is probably the most uncensored place a child can come acrossed. Reaching out to libraries about what they put on their shelves should be of their least concern compared to what is really out there in life. I do believe that no children should be handed or put in front of uncensored adult conduct because one-hundred percent unacceptable. If these items were placed in spots where only adults can get ahold of, then I see no problem in the situation. The children of our generation and more to come will always encounter something they should not be put in fron of. However, that is life and there will always be something come up in your life that you should not witness or be apart of. If libraries continue to keep these items out of reach of children, then there should be no censorship in libraries.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10292,4,"The author used the concludes with “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” She wrights that because when her flower starts budding she will be able to take the test cause she is like a flower. The author uses the concludes because when the flower is going to budd and the geese come back she will think that she is back home. Thats why I think the author used the conclusion “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10027,4,"I think that the author concludes the story with this paragraph because, it shows that if that type of flower could bloom in different places and go through natural changes than so can she. To me the flower is a symbol to the author that encourages her to keep trying. No matter if you have to start all over and doing it again. It’s just this time you will know and would have learned from the past mistakes. Just as a flower blooms one spring it dies in the winter and then comes again in the spring. That’s the same as Saeng failing that test that year she can go back next time and take it again. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16033,6,"The obstacles the builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were the lack of land area, the currents of the wind, and the gas used to make dirigibles float.The lack of land area was a problem because ""...some [dirigibles] were as long as @NUM1 ft., The same length as four blocks in @ORGANIZATION2."" This could be a problem because in a densely populated area like New York, people could be in danger of having large objects flying to and fro, so close to the ground. It would also obscure light. The wind currents were a factor because 102 floors above the ground, the wind would buffet large dirigibles around, which would be a danger to the buildings frame. ""...the wind pressure would have to be transmitted to the buildings foundation."" The final obstacle would be the gas used in many foreign dirigibles of the time, which was hydrogen, a highly flammable and dangerous gas to have in densely populated areas like @ORGANIZATION2. ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in New Jersey, [they] realized how much worse the accident could have been in New York.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 305,1,"Computers, a very much talked about subject. Did you know that @PERCENT1 of homes in @LOCATION1 own at least one computer. And that goes for about @PERCENT2 in @LOCATION2. Some people don't like that this is true, but on the other hand some people do. I have a computer, it can do so much, for example it can help me with writing, I can play games on it and socialize with social networking sites and ""I.M.'s"", it can even help me order a product form a website like @ORGANIZATION1, @LOCATION3, or @LOCATION4. Like I said, I have a computer and I can use it to help me write. At school in english, I would use my computer to help me with a writing prompt. I also use it to write conclusions for science labs. There are a lot of other kids that do this as well, it really is very helpful. That is only one of the reasons I think computers are beneficial to society. Another reason I think computers are beneficial to society is because you can play games on them, like ""world of warcraft"", ""@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @NUM1"", or classics like ""@CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5"". There are millions of people that play games on the computer. Also you can socialize with social networking sites, like @CAPS6 and twitter, and also because you can ""I.M."" your friends. I.M. stands for @CAPS7 messaging, and it is kind of like email except it is just about instantaneous, and so you and friend can have a conversation over the computer. Also there is video chatting, where it is kind of like a phone except you can see the person you're talking to and it is over the computer, so it is almost like you and the person you are videochatting with are meeting face to face, but your not. A third reason I feel that computers are beneficial to society is because you can order a product over the internet form shop websites. For example, I got my @CAPS8 from @LOCATION3, and also the bulb for a @CAPS9 in my house is wearing out, so my dad is going to buy a @LOCATION1 bulb on @ORGANIZATION1. It is things like this that make life that much easier for the @CAPS10 @PERSON1, because this way these people don't have to drive to the store to buy something, that is, if they can wait a week or two for the product to arrive. These are the kinds of things that make me feel that computers are beneficial to society. I know they might not be the best reasons, but they are quite important to me. Being able to type essays, play games and socialize, and order products form websites is just amazing. These are some of the reasons that I and others love computers. But I have a question for you, why do you like or dislike computers?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13311,5,The author was gratefull. His parents moved to america for him. so he could have a good education. He can't thank his parents enough for moving. He tells them how much courage they have and thanks so much for leaving their jobs. He also talks about home. How home is a place you learn to love and admire your relatives. It doesn't even matter if your blood related. He will love you either way.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 218,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 you @CAPS2 want your kids & citizens to get fat and lazy? Or be active, learn everyday skills and become more friendly to life people around you? @PERCENT1 of parents would agree with me on the second idea over the first one. Well I think after reading this those extra @PERCENT2 will be persuaded. Now a days @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people are over weight or obese. This can be causes by lack of exercise and inactivity. Our children need to learn @CAPS1 go out and exercise an hour a day. This could got their eyes off the computer screen. A great way to help encourage to join a sports team or a club. This can work to people away from screens and the @ORGANIZATION2 course. If we can get people out of the office this could even push them towards nature. Their are great things to @CAPS1 at the local park every day. For example you could ride a bike play games or just fool around with friends. Learning could also be a big faster in getting people out of their computer chairs. If they want to look up tell them to use dictionary, theasaurus or a book. If people on the computer but it can be teach kids and drugs. Bt @CAPS1 help find carrer options and life. sitting on front of a screen can your health and also. Their are better things to @CAPS1. Instead via internet. You can still have fun if you not good at just for instance and friends. If your a boy you could just go @CAPS1 like a park and pay carrer base bill or even wrestle. In conclusion I'd say this would want to get up and get outside. Since geting p and side could help you socialize and learn and even loose weight. So now I leave it in the hands of you whether or not to take the challenge. But just to fill you if you stay your computer it can promote the need for glasses obesity.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9675,4,The reason why the author wrote the conclusion paragraph was to show that Saeng is looking forward to a brighter future. Saeng is hoping to see the geese once more that remind her of her homeland and that see wants to pass the driving. In this story I feel as though Saeng is a very sentimental person and so that is why I think that is reason the author wrote the conclusion paragraph.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15282,6,"In some cases builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles such as safety. As stated in the reading. ""The greatest reason was one of safety: dirigibles outside @LOCATION1 used hydrogen, which is highly flammable."" If a dirigible was to catch fire on top of that building it could do a lot of damage. The next reason is there are ""laws against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The Empire State building was built in the middle of downtown, if something was to go wrong the dirigibles could harm a lot of people. Another reason is because of nature. The author stated, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This put the dirigibles at risk of hitting that building or another. The last reason is because ""the complete dirigible mooring equipment had never been installed."" If the law and safety hadn't been a problem there would be no way to land a dirigible because they didn't have the things needed to land it. The obstacles made happened because they failed to fully look over their plan.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15899,6,"There were some great obstacles for the dirigibles to be able to land and dock on the Empire State Building. At first the idea was great and staggering people's mind, but when the mast was being built the people realized it would not work. The first problem for the dirigble the law for airships to be so low over urban areas which makes it illegal for the ship to even be that close The second problem was ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents (paragraph @NUM1)"" which means it would be very dangerous for the passengers to be comming on and off board of the dirigible. The last problem is that foreign dirigibles use hydrogen which is flammable and to put it over a dencely populated area could cause horrific damage. These precautions would have to be taken which were obstacles for The Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1567,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @DATE1, everywhere you look technology is being exercised and it is beneficial to many aspects in our lives @DATE1. Many engineers strive to improve on technologic devices popularity, while others use it in communicate or relax. study conducted by @ORGANIZATION2 university, the computer is the most largely operated machine. The computer positively contributes to our education, economy, and entertainment. As i mentioned before the computer is beneficial to our education. An example of this is the school i attend, middle school. Here at we have over @NUM1 computers in use throughout the school day. These computers help the students complete research papers, typed assignments and other teacher requirement papers. By using the computer to complete research papers students save hours of scanning through books in the library and money on reading books. In addition, computers teachers in organizing files and entering grades online so students can check their. This is beneficial considering the amount of and assignments graded each week. Moreover, a computer called the ""parent portal"" allows the students to stay connected with school events that would not be mentioned otherwise in all, computer are way of. Besides education computers touch upon our economy as well. Now, due to the wide variety of computer selection, a computer is affordable, starting at prices as low as sixty dollars! This is a positive aspect of the computer because currently the has been enduring the economy since the depression in the. Consequently, the reason has made families start to cut many useful technologe devices out of the. However, since the price of computers decreased purchase have stimulating. Also, the computer has mainly improved methods of. Instead of listening to a cd player you can download listen to while chatting online with friends. This is very helpful for last-minute plan changes, because for those who do not own a telephone, communication @MONTH1 be, negatively affecting your time of entertainment. In addition, children can use internet in order to play games to take that mind off of a hard day at school, or an adult's rough work computersin producing the you watch at home on the couch and the videogame you ordered off of ebay. From facebook and myspace, to and ""gone with the wind."" Computers create a relaxing entertainment opportunity.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6699,3,"The setting affect is used to a great extent in the short story “Do Not @CAPS1 Posted Speed Limit” The cycleist had beed going for a very long time when he came to the first town and there was no water At this point you can tell that he has lost confidence the “old timers"" directions. From this quote; “a ton-like substance oozed out.” This quote shows how after @NUM1 miles of pedaling when he was supposed to have come to two towns by that point his one chance of water had been depleated. The next time the setting affect is used is when he comes for a building that was rusted out. He said, “I hung my head” this shows how he almost completely lost all hope and that he was sure that he is going to die.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12762,5,"In the memoir the mood that was created by the @CAPS1 was saying Family is the most important thing in life. In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifise. That means he is saying that he will always love his parents and his family. The @CAPS1 is trying to say that it is better to have family than money because in this memoir it talks about his parents leaving Cuba with no money no job but for them being together it gave them hope and now they live in a @NUM1 room house with their family. With out family life would be much harder to deal with.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4725,2,"Censorship in libraries is a big argument today. Many people wonder what is considered 'appropriate' for our children. With several @CAPS3 and @CAPS2 factors these days it is hard to find something that is not offensive to ones culture. Three main reasons we are not able to find a book reasonable, yet non-offensive for our children in libraries includes @CAPS1, @CAPS2 beliefs, and @CAPS3 beliefs. @CAPS1 was a big deal in the late @NUM1's to early @DATE1's. Thanks to @LOCATION2, slavery became illegal in the @LOCATION1. Although, there are still many racist comments, articles, and films published today. If someone does not stop the harsh comments, then it @MONTH1 never stop. Even though it is not such a big deal today, that doesn't mean it won't continue to happen. Children do not need to see or hear racist comments made toward their race like many of their ancestors did. Harsh put-downs and comments toward @CAPS2 beliefs are also inappropriate for the society, let alone for children to read. Books containing this are not considered appropriate for children and need to be placed in a different section of the library. As a teenage reader, my biggest belief and interest is learning about other cultures to see what it would be like to live in another country. There are countless religions in the world today, many of which are accustomed by their own god(s). I belief it is of a great cause for children of the modern day world to celebrate their own religion how they would like. However, I believe it is not right to make hateful opinions toward other religions. This is also a thing that yet children have the ability to read about. Children should not be reading about fictious facts of religions and making the thought process in their head when they assume something is true about that religion when it is not. It is definitely a great idea to stick those materials in the @NUM2 section. For now, children should be receiving material that they can easily comprehend and find interesting. It would be a great idea to make a fiction section appropriate for kids and then a @NUM2 section for kids and/or adults. An idea to take into consideration is that every local public library could have a meeting to decide whether to keep the library in easy-access form or not. That is for you to decide!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1431,1,"Dear Local newspaper, Technology is a ever evolving thing and more and more people are using it. With more people making use of computers, will be the more technology benefits our society. Through the use of computer people will be taught hand-eye coordination, be presented with the ability to become educated on distant places, and also allow people to talk online with other people. Through the use of computers people will be taught hand-eye coordination. A effective skill to learn would be hand-eye coordination, the benefits of this would be outstanding. Having great coordination would mean that person would exceed past anybody who do not use computers. Advanced coordination would mean that person would able to accomplish more things like fast typing. Finally better hand-eye coordination means that person will be more likely to obtain a job in a field that needs good coordination.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3901,2,"Human beings, like snowflakes, are very much alike in a unique way. Just as there are no two identical snowflakes, no two humans are exactly the same. As everyone has their differences, there are always those who have a greater sense of curiousity, and prefer to think outside the box. However, it is difficult for these curious people to extend their strive for knowledge, if they have restrictions as to what they can read or study. Therefore, if a person is mature enough, and desires to study or read upon a certain topic at a library, they should be allowed to extend their knowledge on any topic of their choosing, with permission of a gaurdian of course. Unfortunately, it is often times a group of minorities that ruin something for the greater minority. Libraries often times take in account a child's age as a factor towards what a they can, and can not read, but age seems completely unfair to a child who is mature enough to read, and handle the more adult rated intell in a fashionable manner. If one is legally eligable, and they have permission from their gaurdian, then he or she should have no restrictions to the materials provided at any library what-so-ever. Who is one to say a ten-year-old is too young to learn about @PERSON1 and his horrible plans for the @CAPS1? A person is never too young, or too old to learn something new, if the curiousity and the proper level of maturity is present! It is curiousity that has led mankind to discover something new each and every day. As well, it is curiousity that has brought mankind to the extraordinary level of technology, and inventions that it is at today. The youth of the present will one day be the engineers, doctors, scientists, and moving leaders of the future. If these young people are curious, and desire to achieve greater knowledge on a certain topic for positive reasons, then let them be!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7637,3,"In the story “rough road ahead” the setting and the features affect the cyclist. For example in the story he says “I’d read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst by allowing what spit you had left to circulate”. This shows that the features are rough because he would most likely not be that desperatly thirsty unless it was very hot out. The setting and features of this story is it takes place in California, on a hot day. Another quote that could support the question is when the author says, “I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasn’t a mirage.” This shows that it is hot because he is sweating. This also could show that it is hot because he thinks it’s a mirage, and people usually see them in the desert, where it is hot.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 322,1,"Dear local news paper I believe the computer has a positive effect on people. It helps students with projects, helps people learn about other places, @CAPS1 it helps you find information on something you didn't know. @NUM1 precent of all teachers give out computer projects. Most reading teacher will have you read a book and then type a essay or a review about your book. Most teacher prefer the essay typed and not written. By the teacher giving that assignment he/she is giving the student the ability to explore out side of always writing. And I believe other students would agree with me, @CAPS2 better to type the essay than to write it! Is there a place out there that you really want to know more about, that you hope to someday visit? Well you can always use the computer to find out more about the place. You can use the computer to learn when is the best times to visit that place. @CAPS1 if you just heard on the news about a tradjic accident like the eartquake over in @LOCATION1, and you want to keep in touch on what is happening in that place you can use the computer. The computer will keep you updated on what is happening there everyday. Im sure almost every person has read a book and came accross a word they did not know or a student had spelling words that they didn't know what the words meant. Well you can use the computer to look up the words.The computer will give you the full deffinition and how to pronance the word. Computers @CAPS1 will help you find any information you @MONTH1 need, ""AND @CAPS3!"" In conclusion computers aren't just a thing that kids play on all day it helps you with many things like getting your work done, finding out about places, and finding out information about things you need to know, ""And @CAPS3!""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3285,2,"I think that if certain materials are offensive that they should be taken off the shelf, depending on how they are offensive. If they are offensive by rachism or being prejudice i think they shouldnt be on the shelfs. Also if it is offensive to women or men then it should be taken off of the shelfs. People should be able to read and listen to stuff without being offended by it. I think that if it is offensive to different races then yes it should be taken off the shelfs. I think this because, children can read this and then, they would beleieve that it is right to be races against other races. I think that children and other people should be able to read and listen to stuff without it offending others. Also they should be able to do this and not learn how to be offensive to others. People reading these things that are offensive could cause problems with others. It could cause problems for the libraies also, doing this by people not wanting to come back due to the fact of they have offensive material. Then with people not wanting to be there then the libraies wont have enough service and they will have to close. I also believe that if the masterial is offensive to women/men then it should be taken off the shelf. The magazines that have women and men in them can be offensive, because alot of people look at them like they are trash. It makes a bad impression on some people. Its rude for it to be there. It puts not very good thoughts in some peoples heads. I believe that if material being read of listened to is offensive then it should be taken off the shelf. It can cause many problems with others. It could cause us to lose libraies if others choose not to go anymore. Things should not be left around if they are offensivce in any way.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4674,2,"Today, we all have a very large variety of books to choose from when we enter a library. Some are childrens books, while others are intended for a more mature reader. Many parents are scared that their child will read a book that @MONTH1 be inappropiate for their child. The thing is, if everyone removes the books that they don't find acceptable, there won't be any books left in the library for us to enjoy. What makes a book unacceptable to read? Could it be language, graphic scenes, or parts that are just extremely scary? Many people think that books like these should not be available for anyone to read. Removing a book from a library would be done through one's opinion. This is not fair because we all have the right to free press, which means that anyone can publish anything they wish to and everyone has the right to read it. By removing books from a library, you are violating not only the author's right, but the reader's as well. Unfourtunately, there are some books that @MONTH1 cause a child to become scared. When a child reads a book, it's harder for them to realize that they are just reading a book. Many children take in every word of a story and turn it into a reality. Not only can this scare a child, but it makes it extremely difficult to explain that what they read in the story is not true. As more and more of these books are released, the more likely it becomes that children will be reading these offensive stories. I believe that removing books from a library based on opinion is wrong. I understand that leaving these types of books out for children to read could cause a problem, but libraries are usually set up in sections. For instance, there is a childrens section, a teen section, and an adult section. This helps kids remain in an area appropiate for their age. I think that if a parent is worried enough that their child will read an offensive book, then they should go with their child to the library when checking out books to read. A public library is designed to accompany a vast variety of readers. There will always be certain books that some of us find offensive. Removing books from a library only decreases the number of books to choose from; and if that were to happen, there would eventually be no books left for anyone to enjoy.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4718,2,"If I found a book that I thought was innapropiate for others to read, I would ask the librarian to check into to see what she thinks about the book(s). If she believed they were offensive, then she could remove the book(s) without any questions being asked. If she was in the middle on a book and didn't know whether she should remove, she could take a vote or tally on that book and then go from there to see if it did needed removed. The only way I would find a book to be offensive is if it had pictures that were not appropiate for people to look at and it also depends on how old you are. Another offensive object would be too many words that involved foul language and or racism. If i found a movie that was offensive, I would just ask that it would be moved to a place that only mature adults should watch or some teenagers. My opinion can't remove an object from its place unless there were multiple complaints about the book or movie and ect. Some movies and books should be removed from shelves because younger kids get a hold of these movies ans watch them and then go out into the real world and do these bad actions that was on the film. For example, if the movie/book was about drugs, then some kids would think it was alright for them to do because they saw it on tv. Some kids even get killed because they go out and try these dumb ideas they got from the book and or movie. But the parents also play a role by letting their kid watch these, I think if they would watch what their children do, then some of this won't happen. Music is another big thing that is becoming more and more out of control with offensive subjects. There is more foul language in music as it progresses. @NUM1 years ago, it wasn't that bad, but it's getting worse. I think some music should be banned because of the violence and sexual content it describes on the music. Some of the music I listen to, I just want to run it over with my vehicle because the whole song was about drugs, sexual content and or violence. I don't even know why an artist would want to write a song about bad content because they know younger people will hear it. I think offensive music has an effect on the violence that actually occurs in today's society because there might be some racism. I'm not trying to blame the artists or say it their fault, but I think they should think twice about their songs before they release it so everyone can listen to it. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but some things should not be on the shelves for our kids and children to listen to and or watch. I think there will be something done, but it will take time",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16001,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles such as structural support issues, shifting winds, and administrative interference. One major problem arose when they realized the force of holding the blimp in place ""would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation"" (par. @NUM1). This meant builders had to make changes to the support system of the building itself before being able to begin construction on the mooring device. Once the mast and reconstruction work completed, builders realize that ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (par. @NUM2), which would make docking almost impossible. Attempts to moor became even moor difficult as ""complete dirigible mooring equipment had never been installed"" (par. @NUM3). This shows how builders struggled with bureaucracy in their attempts to build the mooring mast. In conclusion, the shortsightedness of the project caused builders to struggle with the building's structure, weather, and the owners' vision, before ultimately abandoning the mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4766,2,"In todays world, children are exposed to a lot of inappropriate things than in recent times. They hear things from older siblings, see uncensored programs on television, hear words in music, and even learn things from books. An issue at hand is whether or not libraries should or should not dispose of inappropriate books, movies, music, and magazines. Children can read whatever they like if their parents give permission, but in today's society some parents do not take the time to care, consumed in their work. One way society can take care of this problem is setting age limits on books. There have been times when my mother will not allow me to read a book because it dealt with issues that I was not ready to learn about. Although I am lucky that my mother cares about what I read, some parents are not. This is why an age limit would be helpful in keeping our youth modest. The librarians, or a national book association, could decide if the content of a book is appropriate for a certain age. This would take care of children reading about bawdy issues that they should not know about. Also, @CAPS1 books should be more readily available. These types of books teach good morals and how to live a good and full life. In schools across the country, many @CAPS1 authors are not in the public school libraries. By putting these types of books into the libraries, students would be more aware of them and would most likely have an interest in them, learning from them. Another issue libraries have is music and movies. It is nice to be able to go to the library and check out a cd or even a movie. But, some of these have terrible language and scenes not appropriate for children. What can the general public do about this? Well, demand that all music and videos with content not generalized for children be removed from the libraries. This would keep children from seeing and hearing actions they should not copy. There are ratings on movies for a reason, so why not use them. Anything above @NUM1 should be a definent no in libraries. If the movie has content that any child under thirteen should not see, then the movie should be out. Magazines also offer a source of learning. Some are very educational, and give the students ideas to go and come up with a new invention or a way to help others. But, some have content that are not suited for children. Thus, like the books, the magazines should also have ratings. The magazine @CAPS3, for example, has articles that are to bawdy for students to read. Magazines like this should be put in an adult section where students cannot look at them. Magazines also offer pictures that, in recent times, would have been illegal to put out. But, in today's standards, they are fine to put in magazines. These magazines should not even be allowed in the libraries across our nation. America's standards on what is okay to read, look at, watch, and listen to have changed drastically. Children are learning things they should not know about, until an older age, at a very young age. Society need to put strict restrictions on what is right and what is not for children. I personally believe that there should be very strict restrictions on what children are allowed to watch, read, and listen to. My parents were very strict about this and, in the end, I feel this has benefitted my learning process. Also, I feel the libraries should rid of books that, in olden times, would have been a shame to read. Parents today are not as in sync with what their children do as they were in recent years. So, society needs to put a strict rule on what libraries carry and what they do not.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6628,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist a great deal. The landscape was hard to ride on, there was intense heat & little water. As a result, it was a long trip and he had a difficult time reaching his destination.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12514,5,"Narciso Rodriguez creates a mood of happiness and greatfulness in his memoir. He talks about how his family is always celebrating @CAPS1 From their native Cuba. The memoir states, ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban Feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with not just scent and music by life and love,"" about the house Narciso grew up in. Narciso's parents came to america ""to give their children a better life"" which makes Narciso greatful to them. Narciso was also greatful to his parents for their love and sacrifice they gave to him. Narciso says, ""there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are"" Which makes his greatfullness come out into the mood. He shows his hapiness and greatfulness for his parents @CAPS2 the mood of his memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17910,7,"One night when I got home from cheer I was starving, and the dinner wasn’t even on the grill. We were having steak, brown rice, and mack and chees. To past time I went upstairs to take a shower I took ten minutes to take a shower and it still wasn’t ready. So I did some homework. I did math, reading, and I study for a test. The mack and chees was ready the steak was almost ready and the brown rice wasn’t even close to being ready. I was so hungry and tried, but I keeped my patient. Oh my gosh the food smelt so yummy. I wanted to eat right then. I was so hungry that I had to put gum into my mouth to keep my mouth busy. Two minutes later the steak was ready mack and chees was ready but we are still waiting for the brown rice. My sister and I set the table and pourd our drinks I still had my patient. Five minutes later the food was ready. All four of us sat down at the dinner table and ate. Oh my gosh it was so yummy. I had two little pieces of steak, three scoups of rice, I love rice, and a tiny piece of mack and chees. The dinner was awesome. After that dinner I went strait up to bed.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3567,2,"There are many types of reading materials for people to read in a library. You can find things on cars, trucks, sports, and made up stories for fun. There are some materials in a library though that could be offensive. But should those materials be removed from the library? Some think that they should and others think that they shouldn't be. In my opinion I don't think that things should be removed from a library. Certain people @MONTH1 find things offensive and others @MONTH1 think it is perfectly fine to have in a library. I think there should be certain areas and age limits for certain materials a person could find in library. I think that there should be age limits for certain types of reading material. People don't want a little child to read something that is meant to be for an adult. That would teach kids bad things that they don't need to be reading about. I think that there should be an area set for kids that are in elementary to high school and there should be a section that is for adults. That way kids aren't reading things that are meant for adults. I also think that are there should be more signs that show more about what some books are about. Like if there are books on slavery they should have an area for books that are about that that way people who are offended be it know to stay away from it. The same with magazines. i don't think they should be removed from a library if they are found offensive to some people because other people @MONTH1 enjoy reading them. Some reading material @MONTH1 be found offensive to certain people but to othersit @MONTH1 not be. I think things shouldn't be removed from libraries. There are some things that people @MONTH1 need have in a library if they are doing a project that way they have the resources to do it. I do think that certain movies and music should be removed from shelves if little kids are aloud in the store. kids don't nedd to be watching adult movies while they are in elementary school. That just isn't right. Espaecially if the movie is promoting sex, violence, and other things that young kids should not be doing. So in my opinion there are some things that should and should not be removed from a library. Music and movies that promote things that young children should not be doing. Magazines and other things should be kept away to where only adults could get to them",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11840,5,"Describe the mood by the author in the memoir. the mood by the athor in the memoir. Is that she had a hard time grow up because her parent's keep on movieing. bay the age of twent-seven year old. Narciso Rodriguez liveing with her family she live in a one apratment room, When she was growing up there were racism were she was growing up. When she was growing up her mother and father taught her how to cook, and the number one thing she learned is how to love some one",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1741,1,"Dear, local newspaper, @CAPS1 you like computers? I @CAPS1, computers help you learn about all kinds of things. Plus computers let you chat to people on there computer even if you can't call them. Another reason why I love computer are because when I have to write a project I can just type it!!! Computers make eveything easier. So, @CAPS2 consider liking computers. Initially, imagine you have a project due in two days. Your mom can't drive you to the library and you have no information on the subject. But hey, don't you have a computer. You can use the computer to lock up your subject and a @CAPS3 different websites will come speed quick to your screen. Most of then will help you learn about the subject and then you have time to finish it and hang out with your friends. Secondly, @CAPS4 @CAPS5!!! you frogot what page of the book your suspose to read. Also you lost all your friends contacts. Not to fear super duper computer is here. You can email or chat to your friends online and see what pages to read and get there phone numbers back. Did you know @PERCENT1 out of @NUM1 People said that the chat & email programs are @CAPS6 because they can contact friends, family, and co-workers. Finally, you can type your essay on the computer. Writing a @NUM2 paragraph essay takes to long, so use your computer to help you out. Go to microsoft office and type your essay. Computers make writing an essay really easy. @PERCENT2 out of @NUM3 people said they like typing on the computer more then writing it on @CAPS7. in conclusion, Computers are @CAPS6 tecnollogy when you have to chat to someone. Also when you learn about something. Another reason why computers are @CAPS6 is because you can type essays & papers, @CAPS8, @CAPS2 change you @CAPS10 of computers are bad to computers make us @CAPS11!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19282,7,"Being patience is what you need to get anything done in the world. One example is school how do you use patience. A way is being understanding to your teacher because they’re there to help you to teach you for life. If you don’t be patient and understand your teacher you will get nowhere in life. Another example is with your parents. You need to be tolerant with them they were tolerant with you. If you don’t have patience with you parents and don’t listen to them then you won’t learn all the life lessons they give you, without their skills you will get nowhere in life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6592,3,"Many of the features of the setting affect the cyclist. The cyclist is biking through deserts. “A rediculously large snake” this quote shows that only is weather and climate agasint him but also nature.” I could drop from heat stroke” another great quote showing how hot it really is where the cyclist is.” There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” A great detailed desciption of where the cyclist is and how deserted the area is.” The bottle only contained a few tantilising sips.” This cyclist is low on water in the desert and in the desert with no water that could be a very bad thing. The above quotes really draw you in and you get to see the many features of the setting and what its like for the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3070,2,"Libraries are very educational. They provide books, movies, magazines, music, and computers for you to locate something you are looking for. I dont think that libraries include anything offensive. If anyone finds anything that a library has that is offensive to them, then they should talk to someone who works there and see if they can come to a solution. It shouldnt be removed because not everyone @MONTH1 find it offensive. I've been to many libraries in my life and personally, it's amazing all the books, and things for you do there. I've actually gained alot of knowledge at the libraries i've been to because i found so many books that were just amazing. Never, have i ran into something that was offensive to me or anyone else. Everyone is different though, we have all have a different view on things and we all are unique. If a library does have something that's offensive to everyone then maybe it should be removed but like i said earlier if it's not offensive to everyone then it shouldnt be removed. I personally, think libraries hold so many unique things that if somethings were offensive to people then i'd understand why everyone would want it to be removed. If someone came up to me and said 'hey, i find this music to be very inappropriate for young children to listen to' i would say, 'well, that @MONTH1 be true, but some children do listen to that music, it wouldnt be fair to remove it, just because one person doesn't like it. Now, from my experience theres alot of things that people find offensive but personally, i think it would be outside of a library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12726,5,The mood is a family that tried to move from their home country to start a new life in a new country,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3665,2,"Removal of Books If there is a book that someone takes offensive, should every book similar to that book be taken of shelves?No, even though people @MONTH1 find things in books offensive, they should not remove the books off shelves. When i was in the sixth grade my teacher asked me to read and write a summary on 'A @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3'. I searched the whole library for the book then finally decided to ask for help, the privilage to read the book has been taking away. The book was no longer allowed in elementry schools, due to the fact parents were seeing what their children were reading and found the book very offensive. After many reports about the book, the book was taken out of the library. For me to do as my teacher asked i had to go to a public library and get the book. If you find a book offensive keep @CAPS3 to yourself and dont read the book, they shouldnt be able to remove books just because of what people think of them. Many people love different types of books, no matter if they are offensive or not others @MONTH1 like them. I believe that everyone has a right to read anything they want, books are made to be read and looked at. If books are being taking away then very less books will be read. But the more books read and understood, more books will be wrote and published. The same has to do with music, movies, magazines, ect, they all are made for a reason and should be checked out. @CAPS3 is great to learn about different things by reading, listening, reveiwing, ect, even the things people @MONTH1 find offensive, they @MONTH1 teach lessons.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4306,2,"I think that they libraries should not remove any of the books they have now. If parents or people dont want to read those type of books they dont have to. But they should'nt be removed. I agree that some books are inappropriate and have bad language in them but thats part of the book and how the story was made. When a book is made they way it is and is already published there should'nt be any changes made to it. If a story contains a certain scene that a person believes should'nt be in the book, that person needs to put that book back and choose another book they think is appropriate. Some people like to read stories with details so they can picture it in there mind. I know I do. In libraries they have books with inappropriate language and scenes discribed but to a certain age. I think you have to be thirteen or older to read them, and thats a good thing because by that age you know things better and your parents should'nt be too worried. So in my opinon I dont think they should be removed from libraries. On the other hand movies that have scenerios that are disturbing should be removed. Movies are a whole different thing then books. They show the material that is being described and I dont think teens should be watching that. They can be very unappropriate and disturbing to some people like me. I would'nt want to watch that in front of my mom or dad and especially a younger sibbling. Then again its just my opinion. If parents are okay with there child or children watching that then it should'nt be a problem. Music is'nt that bad. There are a lot of parents who dont want there child or children listening to a sertain type of music because of their religion and what they believe in. I totally agree. My parents at the beggining would'nt let me listen to music where all they would do is sing about sex and curse over and over. As I got older they did'nt care much because I would'nt listen to it as much. Im a teen and I also believe that some of the music now in days in not very appropriate for anyone at any age. Some of what they sing does'nt even make much sense. In libraries I think they should only have music that realates in some how to the books. Magazines are not really a problem. Most of the magazines talk about beauty and fashion tips. They have horoscopes and give advise. A lot of the magazines keep people updated on celeberties and there life style. It has some what gossip. There mostly for older teens and grown ups. For younger teens and kids there's more appropriate magazines where they talk about younger celeberties. This is my point of view on things. I know that a lot of people dont entirely agree with me but this is what I think. I also know that there @MONTH1 be a lot of people who agree with me and they'll most likely give the same reasons as I did to support their choice",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10174,4,"I actually like the way the author concludes the story with this paragraph. It basically sumarizises the story and sums it up into few words that would want you to wonder what happened next, and if there is a sequel. This is a very good story that I personally can relate to in many ways.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8978,4,"The author concludes the story with This paragraph because it’s related to she thinks, when her semile of welcome warmed Saeng “cheep skip over live to you’re back she saw cheerfully” @CAPS1 it’s past time what took you so long? now did it go? Did you? She feels very skip over its related to",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3889,2,"Imagine @CAPS1, you are in the library looking for a book to read, to when your son or daughter runs up to you holding a magazine of questionable nature. What do you do? A library should not have inapporiate items on the shelves. Censoring libraries is something to protect you and your family. Libraries should be censored so that way everyone can enjoy themselves. The first reason I thing that libraries should be censored is because of the children that go there. Children are curious and they are always attracted to things that are colorful and different. An example I have of @CAPS1 is my baby sister. She wanted to go to the zoo instead of the museum because as she said 'I want to see the animals, not a boring statue. I can see those anytime around town.' @CAPS1 is showing that children want to see different things and if they were to go to the library and see the same items then there is not anything to worry about. The first time they see something of questionable nature they would want it because it is new. The second reason that libraries should be censored is that sometimes not all of the items in the library are put in the right place. Say that you wanted to watch a movie that sounded really good and you checked it out at the library, went home, put it in, and find out it is not the movie you thought it was. What if you rented that movie for a party and had guests over? Would that not embarrass you? Well something like that happened to my cousin but she got a @LOCATION1. She was embarrassed for weeks after it happened. All of that embarrassment could have been prevented if the libraries had to be censored. The third reason that libraries should be censored is that sometimes seeing certain material in a library can be rather offensive. Would you be offended by seeing something like that? I know that I would. I would not want anyone to be offended like that. When I was little I went to the mall with my grandmother. We were trying to buy a new pair of jeans for me. I got offended when the salesperson said that I 'looked fat' in the jeans I had picked. I know what it is like to be offended and people should take other peoples' feeling into account before they offend. While some people thing that inapporite material is fine to have in a library I believe that they should find other places for it. Think of your family and how much you love them. Think of what not having a censor on the libraries can cause. Do you want to be responsible for not doing anything to help? Try to find ways to get stricter laws on censoring libraries",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10465,4,"I believe the author concludes the story like this to show an example of perserverance. Saeng states, “through the quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now."" This statement represents adjusting to change. Soon she will adjust fully to her new home, it just takes time. If she keeps perservering. she will make it. In the last paragraph Saeng says, “when the snows melt, and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" Just as the season's bring things back, she will come back. I believe this last paragraph was put in to show everyone should perservere because things just take time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15026,6,"When the builders of the Empire State Building were attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, they had great intentions but faced some obstacles along the way. This job was not an easy thing to accomplish, it's not as simple as it might sound. If the builders added a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, it would add stress to the buildings frame. All of the stress would be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, so they would have to modify and strengthen the steel. This would cost over @MONEY1, and thats a lot. The greatest obstacle was nature itself, the wind up at the top was constantly shifting. This wouldn't be safe either. There was also a law against airships driving too low and this would enable them from being able to dock. Also since other dirigibles from other countries used hydrogen instead of helium, it could easily cause a fire. The main obsticle for the builders was saftey when they were building this, there were many unsafe outcomes so it was too risky to construct.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7299,3,"The features of the setting does affect the cyclist. For example, if it is hot outside then he would need more water than normal. Also if it was raining he would have to drive more careful. That is why the setting would affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3200,2,"I believe that censorship should be allowed when it comes to certain things but I don't believe censorship belongs in public libraries. Books are wrote to stimulate the imagination of a persons mind and if they cannot read books that are the slightest offensive, then they will never know what it is like to open some of the greatest books ever wrote until that person has grown up. And there are several studies that show that books stimulate the human mind and taking away these books would be a crushing blow to those statistics. For example, a student has been assigned a report on a piece of classical literature. So he/she goes to the public library to find a good book, but when that student gets the he/she finds out that all pieces of classical literature have been removed from the library due to being overly offensive. What would that person do? Should he/she just give up because every single piece of classical literature has been taken out of every library in the country, I say no! This is a problem because almost every great book ever wrote has at least a few parts where it is slightly offensive to that certain reader. From personal experience I can back this statement up with books I have read going through my school career. For example, when I was in the @NUM1 grade was assigned a book report over @PERSON1, so I went to our library in the school to look for this book and it was nowhere to be found. I asked the librarian where this book was and she said that it had been removed due to being offensive to the black population for having the word negro inprinted on its pages. So I asked her if I could go tot the public library to get the book and she said that it had been removed from its shelves as well. I did not know what to do, I was completely clueless and I had no book to write my report over. So eventually the teacher had to change the report topic because not on student was able to find @PERSON1. But if the state had not allowed these books to be taken off of the shelves then we would not have had this problem. Another example was when my friend @PERSON2 wanted to learn about his culture and where his ancestors came from. But when he got to the library he could not find any books over the arabic world. So he asked the librarian 'where are all the books covering @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2, and @LOCATION1?' And the librarian said that they were all removed because after @NUM2 @CAPS1 saw arabs as very offensive people and that no books were left unchecked. I'm sure that he found this comment to be very offensive but there was nothing that he could do about it because the white people found arabs to be offensive and unequal to the white race. These are only a few things that have already happened becaue of people finding certain books to be offensive, which is why I believe that the government should leave all the books on the shelves and let the people decide to pick up that book or pass it by. Sure people have a freedom of speech but it should not effect what books belong on the shelf. Which is why I believe that censorship should not be allowed to effect libraries of the public.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3088,2,"I believe libraries should have all types of books, music, movies, and magazines. I believe if libraries had limited things that alot of people would not come to the library. For example, if I wanted to get a certain book for school and the library does not have it i don't no were else I would go. The library should have a variety of books if not what if the point of a library. Some books might be to explicit for a child to read. For music I think a library should be limited.I think music should be limited because alot of music has cursing in it. I don't think everyone wants to hear that type of music in a library. I dont think a person should be able to listen to music in the library anyways because a library is suppose to be quiet. But also people who listen to that type of music might be disappointed. Some music might be to bad for some chlidrens ears. For movies I think they should have an age limited for children. Thats simple kids should be able to only watch kid movies. Teenagers should be aloud to watch kid movies and teen movies. Adults should be able to watch all movies. That is how it should go. For magazines they should have all types of magazines. They should have them from child to adult but in different sections. For example, All the children magazines should go with the children books. All the adult magazines should be with the adult reading books. Some magzines are to explicit but the library should make sure the magazines stay in the adult section. Some books are offensive but there books and a library is there to provide books. All kind of books should be in the library no matter what in my opinion. I've never experience a nasty, or explicit book. So if anything is explicit keep it in the adults only section. Every book should be in the library",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14949,6,Based on the excerpt I just read these are some of the obstacles that the @ORGANIZATION1 one of the obstacles was the balloon becuz it had hellem and it was also flame abou. The secton obstacles is that you cantroll the balloon and the threed obstacles The Empire State Building had was a flat roof. and these are the obstacles that the @ORGANIZATION1.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12230,5,"In this memoir, I think the mood created is very peaceful, happy, and homely. Narciso Rodriguez describes in detail how selfless his parent were, As the left their entire lifes behind in Cuba togive their Children a better life in @LOCATION1. Their home was almost a sanctuary. Warm, full of Cuban heritage, cooking and music. Family members always around, visiting frequently for dinner. A safe and secure place to grow up in, in my opinion. After reading this memoir I had a warm feeling inside of me, and I began to think of places like my home which make me feel in this way. Narciso was a very lucky boy to be brought up this way.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18582,7,"One day I went to the hospitle the nurses gave me a ivy, akatt scan and pulled tare of my arm. It hurt so bad but I was patient through all of it. First when I was getting a cat scan I did not want to do it but we had to so I did it and was very patient. Also when they gave me my ivy they missed my vain so the riped it out put it in my other arm so I was very patient for the pain to go down. Lastly when I was done at @NUM1 oclock pm and started at @NUM1 oclock am there was a big pice of tape on my arc for @NUM3 hours the nurse came and said ""we can go home now"" and said ""you can take the tape off now swettie."" I said ""ok"" I pulled it pice by pice then the nurse said 'herer lett me do it!' she said ""@NUM4, @NUM5, @NUM6"" and pulled it off it hurt so bad but I was patient and didn't cry or??? Now you know that I was patient and was hurt all day.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15525,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The obstacles were safety, nature, and laws.Most foreign dirigibles used hydrogen which is highly flammable instead of helium. If a dirigible were to catch on fire above a very populated the city the outcome would be bad.The winds that high were very violent. There was no way to keep a dirigible still, even though the front is hooked to the building the back would swing. It was not safe.There was a law prohibiting airships from flying too low over urban areas. It was illegal to fly close to the building or to dock at it.The builders of the Empire state Building faced many obstacles in trying to allow dirigibles to dock there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1402,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I think that computers are both a good and a bad thing. Computers allow use to play games, and learn about almost anything. But computers cannot simulate fresh air and exercise. Computers allow people to play a wide variety of games. People can play chess, solatire, and a great deal other games like that. Computers also allow us to play a very wide variaty of online games. I can think of at least three different sites that have online games. Each site having at least @NUM1 different games! Hundreds of thousands of people play online games everyday! What would they do if we didn't have the computer to play those games? We can also search any topic from a computer anywhere. This is a amazing thing to be able to do. Imagine if nobody had a computer how would we research so much of our knowledge? Yes there are but using a computer is so much more faster. Plus you can print thing out on a computer with a book you have to copy important down. But you can highlight the important. How much could ? No matter how much computer do they @MONTH1 be but it is kids getting bigger and bigger all because they long. Computers are amazing and society benefits from them by a lot. But just like everything computers have their downside. So please inform adults and kids about the goodness of computers, but also warn them about the bad things that could happen if you spend to much time on the computer and outside.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6803,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making it more difficult to ride. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” “I could drop from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June.” “a large highway sign jumped out atm.” “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed limit.” “sometimes life can feel so cruel.” The fact the it was such a hot day made the ride seem longer. When out of water you feel exostied. You will do just about anything to try to with stand the heat.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13131,5,"The mood created in the memoir is thoughtful and caring. ""I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing that I could have ever done. Narciso is very thankful and feels very much beloved in his family. In the mood in this memoir is not just thoughtful or kind or caring, it's the feeling loved and loving that feeling. ""It was here where I learned the real definition of family.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9484,4,"By this quote, the author is explaining that Saeng will eventually be ready for her test. When the geese return, they're ready to return From their migration and when the hibiscus is budding, it is ready to turn into a beautiful flower. Saeng believes that in the spring, since the flower and the geese are ready, she too will be ready.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12746,5,"The @CAPS1 created by the author in the memoir is Very necessary. I say this because I don't like any writing that doesn't have @CAPS1 swings. this author does a good job of showing the emotions of Narciso Rodriguez in their story. A place in the story where I really like the @CAPS1 swing is between @CAPS2 @NUM1 and @NUM2. I like this change because, it goes from talking about a landlord and his daughter to talking about @ORGANIZATION2's parents. I like that because, it creates a mode of @NUM3 different backgrounds on the two different @CAPS3 of People. It talks about how @PERSON1's Parents were imigrants and weren't raised well buts they wanted their son to have a better childhood life than them. On the other hand, the landlord and his daughter @LOCATION1 , were rich and Could do anything they wanted. I am just blown away by how this author changes his moods.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15210,6,"In the excerpt the @CAPS1 were faced with multiple issues on their theory. It took lots of time for people to begin realizing reality. For example, Airships had a law preventing them from getting to low to urban areas. Also they realized major would play a negative role. Wind would cause the @CAPS2 to swing around all Docked. They thought to way down the rear of the ship, but soon realized that is unsafe over many people below. They had heard of a @CAPS2 in New Jersey was Destroyed by fire, Due to its hydrogen, Also unsafe in New York with such a @ORGANIZATION1 population. Overall they began to realize saftey issues and how unpractical it was to do all of this.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3352,2,"Yes because children should not be reading anything thats is like that. Children snhould be reading a book that haves good information in there and information the children should be learning while they are in class. Well if the books, music and other stuff to read and look have bad stuff in it should be removed from the shelf because children should not be looking at it. Some music has bad language in it and children should not be listening to music like that. Also movies that have inapproriate scenes in it should be watched by children becaus eits not good for the children to see all that and parents should do something about if their children is watching movies with inapprroiate scenes in it and magazines that have inapproiate pictures because children are too young to see that.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13377,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, he gives a mood throughout it. I think that if is that home is really where the heart lies and blooms. Paragraph two states, ""the congregation of family and friends... formed the backdrop to life in our warm home.' In paragraph seven, 'It was in this simple house my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country.' Rodriguez wrapped it all up with what really showed what the mood was, 'I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home,' in paragraph seven.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19065,7,"There was a time that I didn’t want to be patient but had to be. We as a family were going to go to @PERSON2 common for a holiday. On the way while we were on the highway, about @NUM1 yards ahead of us, two was nurchaged and bath pulled over. They were beside the? With anger. Soon after that the cops came. Keep in mind that we were waiting behind all this. The cops investigated everything and called in something. @NUM2 minutes later a truck came around the traffic jam and started fixing the road. I don’t know why there was nothing to be fixed. Finally around and how later we were let past, and continued over ride to @PERSON1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16393,6,"The Empire State Building wanted to allow dirigibles to dock on top. To do this the would need to build a mast on top so that the dirigibles could hook on to and refuel. They ran into a lot of problem right off the bat and kept running into them. The first problem, of many, was that they could not just plop a mast on the top because it would be to unstable and cause to much stress to the structure. To prevent that what they ended up doing was modifying and strengthening the structure as a whole costing over sixty thousand dollars. Once they figured out how to equal out all of the wind pressure, they had to think of how to bring the dirigibles in, the answer was simple electrical winches. The next problem was safty, dirigibles outside of the @LOCATION1 used highly flammable hydrogen and if that blew up it would not be good for the densely populated city below. Another safety issue was nature's violently shifting winds and to solve the problem on the ground they would waive the back down with lead weights to keep it from sweying, but doing that in the air over a lot of people could be unsafe. The final nail in the coffin to this plan was that there is a law for bidding airships to fly too low over urban areas.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18554,7,"It was a light breezey morning. It was @NUM1 @CAPS1, my parents were just finishing the packing for @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1. We're going to A @LOCATION1 because my sister has a laccrose ternament in @LOCATION2. It is a terrifying thirteen hour. We started loding to a van with are soutcases. My grandparents are coming with us because they usually stay for the @DATE1. That even more stress. We were just about ready to go, then I remembered that we have a tv in are van. I ran back in the house and unpluged my @ORGANIZATION1 gamecabe. I took all the wires and three game controllers and then went off. We started on are trip. As we're just leaving I start pluging in all the wire and game controlles. The we start off. For the first coaple hours we just liscened to the radio. Then came the affect of my brother and sister owe never get going well in a crowded place, so we started hunting. Now where @NUM2 hours this out and we were in @LOCATION1. We started seing mountains. They were wonderful. @NUM3 hours through. We decided to watch the???movie for the last hour. The hour went be like a flash. Finally done that is a time I was sort of patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21630,8," Trippin' on fences I am @NUM1 years young, and in those short @NUM1 years, all I can ever remember, is laughing hysterically. Whether it was about something stupid I did, or my best friend doing something stupid, or most of the time when we got together and did something outrageous. Someone once said ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people"". With my best friend @ORGANIZATION2 and I, that's exactly the case. I always get a good ab workout whenever I'm with her, because I'm always bursting with laughter. It was my @NUM3 grade year at @ORGANIZATION1 here in @LOCATION1, @ORGANIZATION3. I was hanging out with my best friend @ORGANIZATION2 during our lunch break outside. I was showing her my new jeans I'd just gotten the day before, at @LOCATION2. I was also telling her about a note that had been passed to me, by a boy who had apparently had a crush on me for sometime, this boy had also asked me out on the note. @ORGANIZATION2 had asked me if she could see it, when I handed it over to her, all of a sudden, she chucked the note over the fence. Clearly, the guy didn't have @ORGANIZATION2's approval. I couldn't just leave the guy hanging without an answer, especially when at the time, I liked him back. I begged @ORGANIZATION2 to give me my note back, but she refused. What was I supposed to do, just let an unanswered note lay on the other side of the fence? No. The only solution was to hop over the fence and grab it. So I, in my new jeans might I add, practically straddled the fence, and ripped a big hole on the inner side of my thigh, in my brand new jeans. I was so mad. I grabbed the note, and climbed back over the fence in my new and improved hobo jeans. On my way back over, I lost my balance, and fell of the fence. I ended up losing the note again and planting head first into a pile of mud and pine cones. What an idiot I was, I'd climbed over that stupid fence, ripped my jeans, biffed it and lost my balance, and lost it again. I was so frustrated with myself, I started laughing. I'm not sure if it was because I was embarrassed or what, but I randomly started cracking up. Then @ORGANIZATION2 started laughing, and when she laughs I laugh, because her laughter is so contagious. Pretty soon, we were both hysterically laughing like a couple of dorks. ""Laughter really was the shortest distance between two people"" that day. Even though I probably should have been mad.... But why do that when @CAPS1 can just laugh about it? That's what life is all about, living. With this silly but funny memory, it'll stay with me forever. Especially now that @ORGANIZATION2 has moved away. It @MONTH1 seem stupid, but it was funny to us. I guess it really was one of those ""@CAPS1 had to be there"" kind of moments. But it reminds me of the good old days with @ORGANIZATION2. It's good to have memories filled with laughter. If @CAPS1 don't, your life can almost feel dull without it. Even if @CAPS1 laugh at just the smallest things in life. That's why to me anyways, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10272,4,"to show how absent she feels without them by her. You see this when the @ORGANIZATION1 says “when they come back”. also when she says “the geese return & this hibiscus is budding”. Shows how she feel without them and how she will feel when they return and how she will carry on where they left off last time as shown when she says “, Then I will take that test again”.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12842,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happy. It is happy because she said growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative. This is saying that she is happy for what she has in her life. She is saying that she has a nice family, friends, and a good home",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 473,1,Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 i think it it good and bad. The good is it teaches people about @CAPS1 places and how other people live in there soicty what they do to get food or how they raise there kids. It also help people like cops. Because the have a person there looking for they have the computer to look on. It also help cops as in a speeder they can see it her or she have done it befor. It helps teaches to get a lesson or line to teach or they will put you on line to help you with your typeing. Yes it dose have a positive effect on some people. So people think they do a lot better around the computer or they do there best work online. Like say a high school paper. Yes you can talk to other people online get @CAPS1 friends. On the other hand computers can be bad as in you meet people online you don't know who that person is or where they come from. They might have a long crimal. They might be some on want to get you in troble because of his or her family problems. Some people spend to much time on the computer because they meet some one they rally like and don't worry about what the family want to do. So people use to work out every day but now they can talk to they friend all night and all day they stop and forget about it and never start agine. Some people just stay in the and stay on the computer got playing baceball or football or going to family reunions.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15385,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring @CAPS1 by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building had a hard task on their hands. They were building the tallest building in the world and when Al Smith, the head in the construction of the building, said to make it taller things got even more difficult. Mainly because they wanted this newfound height to be used as a dock for dirigibles. What they didn't know is that it is a little more difficult than just tying up a blimp to a building. They had many obstacles at hand. The architects would have to modify the building because a thousand-foot dirigible moored on the building would add stress to the building. Dirigibles used hydrogen which is extremely flamable, if it were to catch on fire in downtown New York it would be desasterous. Nature poses a threat as well, the winds on top of the building would cause the dirigible to swivle around. The final obstacle is there is a law that prohibits airships to fly to low in urban areas. In the end the plan failed.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19153,7,I am always patient. But do you know when and were I am really patient? It is when I am getting my hair cut. Every time I go to get my hair cut it is a lot of people in the @CAPS1 shop. So day people say they have to go some were for a party or for church and need there hair cut pronto. So I let them cut and I have to wait and be patient. It makes me kind of happy to be patient because I am helping others and if I need someone to be very patient with me then I will want them to be patient.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18522,7,"The time I waited for party to happen. It was @DATE2 until I’ve been invited to a party at zapzone. He told me the party was on @DATE1. @NUM1 weeks he told me that, and still didn’t have the party the he told that I had pay for myself accepted. But it was a party so I didn’t have @NUM2 weeks later I went school shopping for ten minutes. I came back he said he already had a party. He wasn’t there because a party takes an hour or two so I just let it go.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17901,7,"Patience. I was patience when I had to baby sit. I rock him and play with him. I fed him, and walk him. He fell to sleep. My mom still is not home from work. I am going to be late to the movise with my cuzins. I play the game for @CAPS1. I look out the window walk out side and sat on the steps.mom still not there. My cuzins were out side. Ask that to stay a little on gen. now hear came mom .I can go now.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7603,3,"The settings effected the cyclist, because where ever he went it seem to never end. Like when he was riding along where the old men told him to go. He went through a ghost town like they said he would go through a town. Then he kept on going but it never end and the summer heat started to get to him. Like when he started to dehidade he this old juice factor and started imagening that he was drinking juice. So he started seeing things.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18505,7,"I asked my mom if I can get a phone but she said no, not yet. She said I cant have one till @NUM1 grade unless I get a @CAPS1 phone write now and cant till ninth grade to get a real phone. I told her okey. But when are you going to get it for me. She said you have to be patient. I told her I will but when she said as soon as possible like on @DATE1 . I said I’ll be patient till then and will not bug you about it. That’s one time I had to be patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20865,8," It was some day in @DATE1, I was on my way to school. My friend @PERSON1 was walking with me because we both lived on the same street. He lived a few houses away from me but we always walked to and from school together. Well on this particular day i decided to wear a pair of sneakers that had absolutely no traction on the bottom of the shoe and there was snow out. I slipped a few times but never fell. We were laughing because I would be right in the middle of saying something and id almost fall over. We got to school and he started telling everyone about it, I joined in. It was pretty funny because even at school I would almost fall over because the floors were wet from the dried snow. I thought about just walking home and changing my shoes but I would have to wait until lunch because I couldn't leave school until then or i would get in trouble. After first period I found a puddle of water and started sliding across it for fun. My friends tried doing it too but their shoes had too much traction on it. The bell rang for second period to start and I headed to my class. It was fun trying to get to class because I slid around everywhere. Once I got into class the teacher told me we where going on a field trip to the ponds. I was about to skip out on it but the teacher was walking right behind me. We boarded the bus and started heading out to the ponds. My teacher called our names out to make sure we were all there. He must have done it about every @NUM1 minutes. It was pretty annoying. The bus driver was playing country music too, I don't really mind country music but that day I didn't really want to listen to it. I went to get my ipod from my pocket and found out it wasn't there. I had left it at my house when I was rushing to get to school. We finally arrived at the ponds and we unloaded the bus to begin our field trip. Our teacher told us not to go to close to the ponds because if we fell in we would be soaked and the bus driver wouldn't let us back on the bus. I thought he was just talking smack and I asked the bus driver if he was serious. The bus driver told me if we got wet he would have to wait for us to dry off so we didn't get the seats wet. Again I thought it was a bunch of bull. We met up with our tour guide dude and started listening to him tell us about the history of the ponds and what they are used for. While walking around the ponds I started to slide on the ground. I grabbed onto my friend so I wouldn't fall over but he had pretty bad balance and we both fell over. Everyone started laughing as well as myself. My friend didn't think it was too funny at first. But once he got up he started laughing and joked about how I couldn't stand up right. On our way back to the school we talked about what we learned and if we would want to go back and learn more or even volunteer to work at the ponds. I thought it would be pretty fun if I didn't slip around the whole time. We unloaded the bus again and headed into the school. I found out the little puddle i had found earlier hadn't dried up, I got a running start and slid across it. I didn't fall over this time. The bus had brought us back just in time for the last class of the day, which unfortunately for me was @CAPS1. I got to the gym and asked my teacher what we were going to be playing. He told me we were going upstairs on the wrestling mats to play a dodge ball game. Upstairs on the wrestling mats was a small area and we only went up there if we had a small class. I lucked out big time because we have to take our shoes off when we play on the mats. I got done with @CAPS1 and the bell rang to tell us school was over. I got dressed into my normal clothes and headed home. My friend @PERSON1 was waiting outside for me. We started heading home and I slide around with every step I took. The sun had melted the top layer of snow and turned it into ice. I looked over at @LOCATION1 and laughed. He laughed too. The whole way home I was skating on ice. It was a really fun day. Except right when I got home I fell on the deck because the step was icy.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 666,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @ORGANIZATION2, I believe that computers have a positive affect on people who use them. Because they teach hand eye coordination, give us the ability to learn about far away people and places and allow us to chat online with people. @CAPS3 first reason of why I think computers have a positive affect on people is that they teach hand eye coordination. For example, we need to use our hand-eye coordination skills when we type to @CAPS2 the letters. This helps us increase our Hand eye coordination because it helps us think about what letters we are typing, @CAPS2 the letters on the keyboard, and push them. Also when we type long passages it increase our hand eye coordination becaue we get used to wrighting the long paragraphs and we become more familiar with where the letters are on the keyboard and our speed increases,which means we can get more work done in a shorter time. Believe it or not @PERSON1 free of the @ORGANIZATION1 hospital took a survey that showed @NUM1 people who type essays instead of wrighting them by hand, have a greater hand eye coordination skill. Computers also allow us to learn about far away people and places. For example computers make it easier to reaserch far away people and places. Useing a computer can help us understand and learn about people and places withought a trip to the library. Also computers allow us to @CAPS2 us to @CAPS2 more info about recent events that have just around the world. Also computers make it faster to reserch topics because looking for a book in those big libraries can be stressfull, not to mention dificult. Also informat on a computer can never be checked out or not availible like library books. Lastly you have information right at our fingerries so you will never have to leave youre house, @CAPS3 last reason is that computers allwo us to chat online with other people. This can help us because it allows us to talk to friends and family from around the world. Also it helps us talk to our parents if theyre away or if you're on a camping trip. Chating on a computer is a great way to make friends with people you dont know and block people you dont want talking to you. So in a sence you can be in controll of your friendships and who youre friends with. Computers are the greatist advance in technology sence the wheel and they have helped so many people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7018,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed posted speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affect the cyclist. We can tell because the author writes “that road was replaced by short, rolling hills” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). This tells us that cyclist is hard to ride on the road. The speed limit is also affect the cyclist. When the the speed limit sign is appear, the character feels “life can feel so cruel” (kurmaskie @NUM1). It tells us that character can not do what he is trying to do. The bad road and speed limit sigh effect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9027,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus” by “Minfong Ho” she ends the story by saying, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. “I-I failed the test”. As many kids do, Saeng failed her driving test and she is crucially upset about it. nobody wants to fail at something and it is almost a humiliating experience to have failed at a test. knowing that others have already successfully passed. With the quote in the introduction paragraph, or the one in the question, it was written as a sign of symbolism. When the geese return back north, it is to show that they are ready to “start over” again or to “try again”. When the hibiscus is budding it is trying to “start life” again. Saeng seeing objects doing things over and over again empowers her to want to succeed and try again. She realizes it is just a part of life and that in order to succeed you have to fail. Minfong concludes with that quote because she understands that no matter what the obstacle, you must press forward and keep trying in order to succeed. She realizes success can only come from hard work and commitment, and that that is what makes a great, strong individual.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16022,6,"The obstacles builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock they are making sure they dont bump into other buildings, and they use rope to drop down the papers. They are trying to make sure that the dirigibles do not pop if it touches the buildings. It is also trying to keep the dirigibles away so they don't get to close and thats why they are droping the papers down with ropes @CAPS1 if they built a little tunnel so the dirigibles can go in they won't have to worry about them getting popped if they touch a building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4693,2,"I somewhat agree with taking out books,music,movie,magazines, or any other material that could be offensive to someone, because it could be racial or it could be about something that isn't appropriote for children to read. I think it just depends on the topic, maybe one thing could be offensive to one person and not the other, so people should choose wisely what they read. It wouldn't be fair to take certain books from the shelves of libaries because people take different interset in different topics, so say one book has something in it that someone doesn't think is appropriote but another person think that book is fine, it wouldn't be fair to the other person to take that book from the shelves. But something that I do disagree with in books or magizines that is inappropriote is pictures and comics, because children shouldn't be allowed to have access to a book,movie, or a magazine that has that type of content in it. But also I think that parents or an adult should look at the criteria first before they allow a child to read or see it. So it depends on what type of things are in the book,movie, or magazine. Basically it's up to the person, if they don't like the criteria in any of those things then they shouldnt look into it",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 690,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, I believe that computers do benefit society. People are able to read, shop, and play online. This makes life easier for many people. Buying books that you would like to read can get expensive. With the internet, people are able to read almost any book right on their computer. In a recent survey, it was found that people who read books online save an additional @MONEY1 a year more than people who buy books. People can also read things like newspaper online. If there is snow on the ground, and people are unable to get their newspaper, they can read it online. This way they will know if a newspaper is still good, and continue buying it, including the @LOCATION1 @CAPS1. Additionally, people are able to shop online. Sometime, someone @MONTH1 have been an accident injuring them, and they are stuck at home. If it is a child, their parents will be unable to go to the store because they will be caring for the child. They can simply go on the computer and have food and other necessities delivered to them. People can also do this if they have a busy lifestyle with work or school. @PERSON1, a physician, told me that people who shop online have @PERCENT1 less stress than people who go to the store for the same items. He said that is is because they do not need to worry about taking much time out of their schedule to shop. Moreover, the computer is a good way to quictly play games. Young children can be very loud and energetic. Parents can just let them play games and read on the computer. Little kids love just the fact of being on the computer, and letting them go on can keep quiet and occupied for a while. Even just typing is interesting for younger kids. For older kids, there are many games that can play. Action, strategy, puzzles, and many more. They can also play against people around the world. The computer is fun for everyone. So in conclusion the computer is a very good place to go shopping, read books, and play games. Computers greatly help families of today.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14856,6,"In the reading The Mooring Mast written by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced an obstacle. Which was attempting to allow Dirigibles to dock there. Not to mention Dirigibles were thought of being the transportation of the future. First, ""The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area"" (@NUM1). This quote shows that for one this Dirigible would need to find a proper landing area. As well as not being able to fit. Thus, there was some need of more area space. Also, ""some were as long as one thousand feet, the same length as four blocks in New York City"" (@NUM2). It seems as though there was not enough space due to the Dirigible being so long. It also shows how would these architects come up with a plan in making this work, so that way it would fit properly. Therefore, there was an obstacle the builders of the Empire State Building faced. Which was the lack of a suitable area.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19097,7,My story in own way about being patience is when there is like @NUM1 people in front of a line a ceter point. You have to be patient in the lines because other were before you so you have to wait your turn in line before you go because thats called cutting and you will get kicked out of places if u do that you don’t want that to happen because like say that you want something to eat you have wait your turn in line so you don’t get kick out of the rides you have to wait your turn so you don’t get the secrety on you.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3793,2,"A colossal number of significant and life-changing books can be found in the millions of libraries throughout the world. The big question is whether or not individuals should get rid of the books of lesser importance, and the books that are found offensive to a number of people. In my opinion, there are a certain number of books wasting away on the shelves of the library that need to be disposed of. That is why libraries need to discover which books are creating issues, such as books on race or religion. Although Katherine Paterson boldly argues against taking books off of the shelves, I strongly disagree and believe that libraries should remove materials that are creating tension or books wasting away on the shelves. Race is an extremely important topic in the world today, and I believe books that discrimate against certain ethnicity's need to be removed immediately from libraries. @CAPS2, there are exceptions to this proposal. For instance, books talking about the civil war and underground railroad need to be kept in libraries because they are significant historical events. Unlike fantastic books about our nation's history, there are also books about race that are of lesser importance, and they @MONTH1 offend people. In that case, libraries need to crack down on this issue and remove offensive books from the shelves! Secondly, libraries need to be extremely cautious about what music is made available to the public. It is important that we teach our children the difference between right and wrong at a young age, and if the kids hear some of the derogatory music on the shelves, they will lose all sense of what is right and wrong. As Katherine Paterson mentions in her quote,' All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.' @CAPS1, that same quote can easily apply to the music on display in the libraries. By libraries exposing children to derogatory music, they are creating enormous liabilities for the children and their families. Overall, our society would benefit greatly if libraries removed derogatory and offensive music. Lastly, Katherine Paterson says that if we keep removing offensive books from the shelves, there will be 'no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS2, that is a nieve comment as @CAPS1 as an exaggeration. There are millions of libraries throughout the world and thousands of items in each of those libraries. Therefore, it would benefit our society if we would dispose of the items creating the greatest amount of tension, and there is one simple but effective way of doing that. When people are at the check out desk at the library, the library could have a sheet of paper asking if the customer found a certain book offensive. If the same item appears regularly on the list, remove the item. That would benefit everybody greatly because the offensive items would no longer be on the shelves, and it takes little effort from all parties involved. In conclusion, I oppose Katherine Paterson's decision and believe libraries should remove offensive materials immediately. One highly controversial topic is race, and if the book is not informing us about a historical event, it should be removed. Certain derogatory and offensive music is available in libraries, and it should be removed from the shelves as @CAPS1. A quick and efficient way of figuring out which books are offensive is to have a list available to the public where they can write down which book they find offensive. Ultimately, libraries need to take action and dispose of the offensive materials that pose a threat to our society",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14916,6,"Al Smith and his team of builders faced several obstacles when trying to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building. The first problem with docking dirigibles is that the steel frame and foundation could not support The stress put on it by a dirigible attached to it. Also, when the builders looked back on past dirigible accidents like the Hindenburg, they realized that if an accident were to occur, many lives would be at stake. Furthermore, there were laws that limited how low a dirigible could fly over urban areas, so it would be illegal for a dirigible to dock at the Empire State Building because it would be too low. Finally, and according to the builders, most importantly, the largest problem with docking dirigibles to the Empire State Building was mother nature. Winds at the top of the building were very high and changed unpredictably, effectively turning the dirigible docked into a disaster waiting to happen.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 894,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I have been asked to write a letter stating @CAPS5 opinion on the effects, computers have on people. Some experts have been worried people are not spending enough time outside, but most people are not spending enough time outside, but most people support advances in technology. During this time, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are very helpful in many ways. They allow you to learn new things, are very helpful for school and work, and they can keep family an friends connected. Computers have a positive and helpful effect on people. To begin, computers help you learn new things. If ever there is a question no one knows the answer to ""@CAPS1 it!"" @CAPS1 along with many other search engines are an easy way to find what you are looking for. For example, one day a few of @CAPS5 family friends come over we were eating dinner. the discution lead to the question of ""who is the @CAPS6 that plaies @CAPS3 in the @CAPS4?"" @CAPS5 little sister typed ""@CAPS6 of @CAPS3 in the movie the @CAPS4"" and @CAPS9! There it is @PERSON1. Just like that, computers help to get questions answered fast. Computers also help you learn new things like typing skills. just learning how to work them is a new skill. A recent poll shows that @PERCENT2 of people in nursing homes who learn how to use the computer have much better brain function. Although, there are much stronger reasons as to why computers have a positive effect on people. Furthermore, computers help people with work and school. Computers help you send e-mails for work, make slide shows for presentations, and keep calendars so you can be organised and on time. @PERCENT1 of people use computers in some way to benifit in work.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16147,6,"The builders of the empire state building ran into a lot of problems involving the dirigibles. One problem is that there was no easy way to make such a suitable docking station at such a great height, while making it look good. The other, most main reason/problem with the mast for mooring the dirigibles was just a safety issue. But a big one. Most dirigibles used hydrogen instead of helium and hydrogen is extremely flammable. So, if something were to go wrong with docking the dirigible could catch fire and explode & go down in a densely populated area. There were a lot of safety and structure issues but they were eventually resolved, (like the fact that large lead weights needed to dangle over the streets to weigh down the back of the dirigible",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13205,5,"The mood of the story is comfort. When the author describe his home and how everyone was welcome it made me feel as if those people were in a comfortable, safe, and loving enviornment. When you turn a house into a home you feel comfortable in it because you have many comforting and loving memories in it. The author said that many people came to his house to eat Cuban food.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20836,8," The @CAPS1 Of Laughter In @CAPS2 @CAPS3 me laughter is important, we all laugh in our lives. It's a symbol of happiness, and it shows people around us that we care enough @CAPS3 listen and pay attention. With laughter we can create memories that last a lifetime. For my friends and I, laughter comes naturally and we all enjoy every moment of it. My friend @PERSON1 and I have known each other since the second grade and have been friends ever since. what has kept our @CAPS2 strong and still alive today, is the memories we have created through laughter. One memory I always seem @CAPS3 remember though, is the first time we had gone inner-tubing together. There have been many memories made between @PERSON1 and I that we remember because of the laughter we shared. Yet the memory that always remains dominate, is when we had gone inner-tubing for the first time. It was our seventh grade @DATE1 and we had planned on spending as much time as possible together. Now this did not really work out because I had @CAPS3 babysit a lot, but she was a good friend and understood. So when we did hang out it was always so much fun. Now yes, we have had our up's and down's, and that comes with any @CAPS2. We got through it and ended up having one of the best summers together. That @DATE1 we would hang out at each others house's and go places together. Then one day @ORGANIZATION1's parent's had decided that they wanted @CAPS3 take a trip @CAPS3 the lake and go boating. @PERSON1's family invited me @CAPS3 come along, and so I asked and I was able @CAPS3 go with their family @CAPS3 the lake. I had been boating before, and @CAPS3 the lake that we were going too. What I was not expecting, was for @PERSON1 and I @CAPS3 go inner-tubing. It was exciting, and nerve-racking all at the same time; I had never laughed so much with @LOCATION1 in my life.Going inner-tubing turned out @CAPS3 be one of the best memories we had ever made together. During the entire @DATE1 whenever possible,we had gone inner-tubing, for me, the adrenaline was almost addicting. Laughing was almost always constant when boating because we just had the best time. It was our new story @CAPS3 tell everyone and we were both proud of it. When inner-tubing we had learned @CAPS3 work together and it helped our @CAPS2 a lot in a way. Also when inner-tubing we got @CAPS3 the point where we went as fast as possible and went as crazy as possible and we loved it. That @DATE1 we made some of my most treasured memories, and we really owe it all @CAPS3 laughter. With laughter we can create memories that last a lifetime, and I am very grateful for that. If not for laughter I do not know where my @CAPS2 with @PERSON1 would stand. And because of that, I believe that laughter is important in any relationship or @CAPS2. It's a symbol of happiness and that is what makes life great.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4408,2,"Should books, music, movies, magazines, etc. be removed from libraries if they are found offensive? My opinion on this is no. In this essay I will explain my opinion and hopefully change other peoples opinions. I will also explain how the past has an effect on present day. In some cases books, music, movies, magazines, etc. @MONTH1 offend any race or a sertain sex, but that is what happened in the history of the @LOCATION1. Some @MONTH1 be very offensive but it only shows a past, others @MONTH1 just be plain out racist or sexist. Those that show the @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1 history are an education sorce so we can learn from mistakes. Here is exactly why I state this opinion, taking this material off shelves is like taking someones freedom of speach away. I hate when I here music that disrespects women but im not going to try and get it taken away because it might just be expressing how the artist of the song loved someone or how history for their family @MONTH1 have been. In conclusion, I believe this material should not be taken off the shelves. After explaining my opinion think about what is offensive or just someone expressing a past memory. If a past was offensive something tody might be offensive, as I was told earlier in my life treat others as you want to be treated. I hope i caught attention and changed some opinions because alot of offence today has resulted from the past",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19009,7,"Patient is when you are listening and tolerant of how someone feels. My mom and dad are very patient @CAPS1 me and my sister .my siter just came and moved it @CAPS1 us she ia @NUM1 years old. She came @CAPS2 live @CAPS1 us .It’s hard @CAPS1 a new person in the the family you always have @CAPS2 get one extra thing like a extra plate, spoon fork pizza, supplies and thing she need for school. Since we have @CAPS2 grt stuff we have @CAPS2 work harder my sister dosen’t do all the things that I m used @CAPS2 my parents are more patient and forgving @CAPS2 her but I know why.sometime my mom and dad all cvantg and mean but the she would I would get in trouble for she’s older thas me but is not used @CAPS2 the way we can do things around are home. I look up @CAPS2 my parents they are so nice @CAPS2 everyone and even ??? it’s different know they are still patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3062,2,"Many @CAPS1 have different opinions about what's appropriate and what's not. It's depends on one's beliefs and morals. I personally don't think that there should be any censorship in libraries. I think that @CAPS1 should have the freedom to choose what to read, watch, or listen to. Each person should be able to make a decision depending on what they believe. It also depends on a person's age and maturity level. Some parents let their kids watch certain movies that maybe other parents wouldn't. The situation is different for each person. It's hard to judge certain materials because some @CAPS1 might find it acceptable while others might not. There would be contraversy over virtually everything because everybody has different standards of what's acceptable what's not, and these standards would clash with each other. It would be impossible to make sure that nothing in libraries would be offensive to @CAPS1. If someone finds something offensive, then they don't have to check it out. I also think that there are some things that can be done to help appease the argument. For example materials can be catorgorized by maturity level. That's what movie ratings are for. Materials should be organized that @CAPS1 can easily see if they would be offensive or not. For example all the kids movies and books can be put together so that way parents don't have to worry about their kids seeing or reading something that would be inappropriate. It should be obvious to @CAPS1 who would find it offensive and who wouldn't @CAPS1 should have the individual freedom to make decisions for themselves. A library is a public place for anybody to go check out anything they want. Just because somebody finds a book offensive, that doesn't mean that nobody should be allowed to read it. That being said, certain things can be done so that @CAPS1 would know if something would be offensive or not.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1377,1,"Wouldn't you like to find a @NUM1-star hotel or resteraunt with a click of a button? I know I would like to. So should we keep using computers for the good of our society, or not use computers to exercise more? Computers are helpful to us by doing work that has to be done neatly. It also helps by accessing and surfing the internet to more useful stuff. A computer is very intelligent and not only can came in a boring, heavy, boxed shape. Computers are also in some electronics. If you go on vacation and forget to turn off the lights, you can use your hand held computer to turn it off. Communication is pretty easy on a computer. All you need is computer (of course), a microphone or headset, some speakers, and a special software. After you have all of these, you can connect with the rest of the world! Talk to loved ones or family members through your computer. If you want, you can also get a web cam. A video camera used on your computer. Then you can see others face to face! If you do not have anything what I just said, there is also texting. Just use your computer keyboard to type and send a message. Your computer can also a lot more things. You can play mindless video games! Your computer must have the right specifications to play it. Sure it might be pricey to",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15338,6,"The wind was a huge issue when building the empire state building. The building was so high off the ground that the top was not as stable. If they used dirigibles on the Empire State building it would be dangerous because the weights would be dangling high in the air over all of the pedestrians heads. That plan was not smart or safe. The purpose to build it higher was just so it could be the tallest building, there was really no good reasons for it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 834,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4, The average teenager spends @NUM1 hours on a computer daily! People spend too much time on their computers. They don't exercise as much nowadays. Also, they don't enjoy all the wonderful nature the has to offer. Most importantly, people who spend too much time on the computer don't see their family and friends. These are the reasons why people shouldn't spend so much of their time on a computer. Since people spend too much time on the computer, the exercise less and less. A recent poll shwos that @NUM2 in every @NUM3 @CAPS5 is overweight. If our modern society didn't have so many distractions like computers than maybe people would be bore & maybe fo outside. Back in @DATE5 only @PERCENT2 of the @CAPS6 population was obese. So, why in @DATE6 has this number skyrocketted to @PERCENT1? Back then electronics weren't popular so for fun, kids played games with eachother outside on a regular basis. Now it's rare for a kids to be motivated to put down the mouse, and go play kickball with neighborhood) friends. The kids would rather sit inside a airconditioned hoose thatn go outside & have some good healthy fun & work up a sweat. Computers keep people from exercising so their affect on people is negative. With computers being so popular, people are less involved with nature. Our society doesn't take the time to notice the cool breeze on an @DATE4 @TIME1, or the waves crashing on a hot @DATE3 @TIME1. They don't take time to appreciate has beautiful the follage is in @DATE2, or now it feels to be showered with snow on a chilly @DATE1 @TIME1. People would rather sit at a computer for @NUM4 hours doing wonders of our world. People don't respect the natural beauties that nature has to offer. Computers take away from people enjoying nature's joy. Computers run people's relationships with family and friend. @NUM5 year old @CAPS7 would rather talk to his girlfriend on the computer than spen time with this @CAPS8. Kids don't organize their priorities we enough. as it is, adding a computer into the mix just makes it worse. Peple have accounts on social networking sites like facebook and sometimes they are very drame filled and cause problems. Friendships are easily ruined and usually the cause of this is some kind of misunderstanding. It is very sad but true that kids would rather watch goofy vidoes than visit a grandparent. Computers are negative to people since they ruin their relationships with friends and family. People should spend less time on the computer. Computers are a main factor in the vast increase in obesity rates. Kids need to regain healthyness before it's too late! Also, people of all ages should realize the natural beauty of naturel, but computers get in the way of that. Most importantly, computers ruin many relationships with friends and family. The cause stress and unnecessary drama. As you can see, computer have a negative affect on people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12081,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez the author creates a variety of different moods @CAPS2 the memoir. In paragraph two the author tells how much culture was put into his home ""my young parents created our traditional cuban home."" @CAPS1 also tells how thankful @CAPS1 is that his parents instilled him a love of cooking and Cuban music. This gives you a feeling of the home being warm comfortable and most of all alive. In paragraph three the athor tells how a family has nothing to do with blood relatives. ""Growing up in this enviroment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS2 out the memoir you really start to see the authors opinion of the definition of home and family. In paragraph six you see how grateful the author is towards his parents, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" It gives a mood of greatfulnes. In paragraph three and four the author talks about the sense of unity and how his parents would always have their door open to people in need and how the whole community was like a family ""cultures came together a great solidarity and friendship."" ""My parents always kept their arms and door open to many people we considered family..."" The general mood of this is all the moods coming together to creat a generas senseof home and community.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6340,3,"The story Rough Road ahead: Do not exceed Posted Speed limit"" by Joe Kurmaskie was about a man traveling through some pretty difficult settings. The cyclist’s mood was detirmined by the setting as well as his needs and his detirmination to make it. The setting of the story early summer in California. The weather is described as hot as, ""The sun [began] to beat down."" He, ""was traveling through the high deserts of @CAPS1 can June."" Because of the excessive heat, he needed more water, which shortly became the conflict of this story. As things got more difficult his attitude towards the old men’s advice changed from gracious for their help to wishing he had never listened to them. Also as the difficulty increased his detirmination to move on also increased by, ""telling [himself] if [he] could make it that far, [he’d] be fine."" @CAPS2 for the cyclist, the settings affect was negitive. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16483,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. While designing the mast, the architects faced problems including wind pressure, safety, and practicality. The frame was not strong enough to undergo the stress and wind pressure from the load of the dirigible. The foundation of the building, which was approximately @NUM1 feet below, would have had to be strengthened and modified if it was going to be able to handle the movement of the dirigible attached by a single cable tether. Safety was the greatest obstacle that the builders faced most dirigibles used hydrogen to make them lighter than the air. However, this hydrogen was highly flammable causing many dangers. Since New York City is such a thickly settled area, the risk of a fire was too dangerous to take. Finally, instead of dirigibles landing in open fields they would have to dock eleven hundred feet above the ground in the words of Marcia Amidon Lüsted, ""using these (dirigibles) at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3284,2,"Are you offended when you read a book and your eyes cross over a swear word? Does it bother you to hear them with your own ears? No matter how hard you try, you can not avoid the harsh language of today's society. Have you ever walked into your library and started reading a book but decided to put it back on the shelf because of the language in the book? Many books in today's libraries have offensive language. Sometimes it gives the book character and makes the story more real to the reader, but in other cases the reader @MONTH1 be offended. In my personal view, if you do not like the language of the book, put it back on the shelf. The author wrote the book the way he or she wanted it to be written, not the way you would like to see it. Some material @MONTH1 be inappropriate for younger readers. The maturaty level of the reader definitely makes a difference when discussing censorship. For example, I am sure many parents have a problem with the movie 'The @CAPS1' for its use of alcohol and drugs. Many people find this movie funny and entertaining. Should this movie be taken of the shelves because it does use alcohol and drugs? These words and actions we try to censor are not going away. We see and hear them in everyday life, no matter where you @MONTH1 be. So if you don't like the language in the book, choose a different one",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21056,8,"Laughter, @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 on an @CAPS3 @DATE1 @CAPS4 One of my favorite @DATE1 traditions is the visit to the house of our @CAPS2, the @CAPS5. They live on eighty forested and meadowed acres outside of a quaint, old town. Their small green house overlooks brown fields and a blue pond, with tall trees forming a backdrop. We arrive midmorning. We either find our @CAPS2 in the house or encounter them tromping out of the woods to meet us, shovels, chainsaws and other trailbuilding implements in their hands. After the customary hello, how have you been, we often wander around the yard, exclaiming at the new fruit trees or hearing stories about the latest tenants of the birdhouses. During the hottest part of the @CAPS4, we head for the shade of the lush @ORGANIZATION1 woods. A short walk will bring us to a trail. I love walking among the sun-streaked ferns and fallen logs, treading carefully the rickety bridges over burbling streams, bouncing confidently on the sturdy new bridges, and trying to avoid the dogs as they galumph in and out of the water. @PERSON2 knows all about the flora and fauna of the region, so we get a constant stream of knowledge as we hike. He also, of course, has to tell us about the trees he's planted -- a redwood here (look how well it's doing! A foot since last fall!) and a douglas fir over there (not as well. That big redwood is shading it too much). One of the best parts of the hike is when we see the dead-end section of trail that my family helped construct three years ago. We always walk to the end of it and discuss where it could go from there -- over the stream or beside it, or up the hill and if so, where would the switchbacks be? could you really bike up a trail like that? After our walk, we arrive back at the house, sweaty and talkative. Then it's time to put on swimsuits and jump in the pond! They recently built a dock that we can jump off of -- a great improvement over wading in from the edge. We swim for the majority of the @TIME1, racing from one end of the pond to the other, splashing on innertubes, having pondweed-throwing battles. Finally we get tired and sit by the side of the pond, drying off in the warm sun. By @TIME1, dinner is ready. Laura usually makes salmon, accompanied by a plethora of delicious side dishes. We drag chairs out to the hill above the pond and enjoy a leisurely supper. From the hill, we can see turtles and birds on the pond, bugs over the fields, and more birds swooping through the air feasting on the aforementioned bugs. After the meal, we haul chairs and dishes back to the house and sit on the porch into the @TIME2. @PERSON2's favorite part of the @CAPS4 is at dusk, when the sun is at just the right angle to show all the bugs swirling through the air. At one point, all the bugs gather together and create a tornado, twisting upwards into the darkening sky, and then -- they're gone, until the next @CAPS4. It's an incredible spectacle; thousands of tiny insects disappering at one swoop. The best thing about these days is the friendship and comradery we have with this wonderful family. The parents knew each other long before us kids were born, so we have a lot to talk about; @PERSON2 is very interested in science topics, and he always finds a way to bring up the latest article he read. And, as with all great @CAPS2, we laugh constantly. I consistently get hiccups at least three times just when we're lounging on the porch after our busy @CAPS4. Even on the most serious topics, my dad or the @PERSON1 boys can find a joke to make, usually ""politically incorrect"" but always very funny. Now don't even get me started on the @DATE1 camping trips, winter ski trips or autumn cider pressing we do with the @CAPS5. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1462,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 a world where the uneployment rate rises sinificgently, people can't communicate or learn as fast, and everyone is stressed out. That's what the world would be like if computers just discapeared. I think computers are more benefical to society then some people relize. They teach us new things and help us with hand-eye coordination. Many jobs are involved with computers, such as an acountend. Computer games and @CAPS2 help take the edge off after a hard day. Schools are the backbone of society. They teach kids and teen how to become sucessful adults. Computers have helped greatly in speeding up the teaching process. Teachers can now acess grades in a heartbeat. My computer helps me.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7636,3,"In the story the fact that no one was around, there were no buildings, he had no water, and was lost. Had a negative affect on the cyclist, he was doubting himself the whole time. Although he did perserver and made it through the tough situation he was in.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1575,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I am writing to you to talk about the effect computers have on people. Since I have two computers and one laptop I have to agree that every person who likes to look up stuff should have a computer. Everyone should have computers, because you can look up different things, you can play games like checkers with the computer or against somebody else, and the last reason @CAPS1 that you can chat with people from different states and even countries, because I know everybody likes to talk to one another. Everyone should have computers, because you can search different things. You can search places and people. Basically, you can search anything on the internet @CAPS3 you are on the right website. One time I wanted to go on the web and look to see @CAPS3 there was a in @LOCATION1. I went to ask.com and typed in ""@CAPS1 there a in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION1? It said yes, and then it showed me a @CAPS2 of information about. It told me the address the phone number and the name of the manager. Looking up places in sometimes. Everyone should have a because you can play any types of game. You could play internet game checkers, solitaire and even freecall. @CAPS3 you don't any types of games you can always go on gaming just games up there. Since I use the computer everyday onto all. When I was six years old we a driving game. Since I did not the website all I got to play was checkers on the computers but one day logged onto it and played my first driving computer game. Everyone should have a computer, because you can chat with people. Instead of always using your phone calling and texting people raising your phone bill, why not use your computer and chat all you want without wasting minutes on your cell phone. I know everybody likes to talk and text on your cell phone. Instead of doing that just go on the internet find a chatcom and start chatting or bloging with your friends. One time I ran out of minutes on my phone and I didn't have internet. I asked my dad @CAPS3 I could use the computer. He said yeah, so I went to a local chatroom on the internet. My friend had an acount there so it would be easy for us to talk all we wanted. I joined in and we chatted until @TIME1. In conclusion I think everyone that likes to look up places, play games, and chat should have a computer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3727,2,"Do I believe that ceertain materials, such as books, music, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? NO, the reason I say that is because if it was offensive to me,they might not be offensive to other people. Im not saying things like that are offensive to me because there not. I personaly love reading books like comic books with super heros in them. That excites me. Back to the point if people thinks a book is offensive to them then they don'@CAPS1 need to pick it up! If I knew a book would be offensive to me I would never pick it up. I know what your going to say 'but what if they didn'@CAPS1 know it was going to be offensive to them'. Well thats a gud question. Just put it up and dont complain because the writer didn'@CAPS1 know you were gonig to take it offensive or the wrong way. They were just writing a book. It's not the writers fault. He or she was just probable writing a book that they though was a good book. When it got published and you read it and you took it offensive. DON'@CAPS1 because they exspecing there self's. So dont take no book's off the shelf's in the libraries because stupid people wont to get mad beacause they took it offensive. Your going to ruin it for the other people that though the book was either a good book or an azsome book. So now that we got that out of the way lets move on and get on with our life's. Thanks for the conversation. See you next",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16190,6,"The obstacles that the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were the strength of the buildings frame, Nature, and certain laws against it. A big problem with building a landing for the dirigibles on the empire state building was the strength of the base. ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame.""(paragraph @NUM1). Another obstacle that the builders of the landing needed to get past was the element of nature. The winds at the top of the Empire state building were always changing due to violent air currents. A dirigible tethered to a mooring mast had the potential of wrapping around the mooring mast in the unpredictable winds. The workers could not trust the dirigibles to not fall off the mooring mast and risk the dirigible going right down where thousands of pedestrians were walking. The last obstacle that the workers had to get past was an existing law that prevented airships from flying to low over urban areas. ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building..."" (paragraph @NUM2). All of these obstacles proved to be too much for the workers to handle as the mooring mast on top of the empire State building was never created.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9643,4,"The author ends the story with “When they come back, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again” For many good reasons. Some reasons are, that she will keep moving on and adapting to her new life in Canada. She is going to change her way of life and try to fit in with her new culture. She is also going to have to relive the memory of her grandmother again and wants to handle it better. “ A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eye now swept over her.” She wants to be able to handle the loss better. The author wants to emphasize that the story is not yet over. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18588,7,"Patience is a quality or characteristic of a person. It is not easy to be patient, but some people are very patient. Especially when you know you want to be mad at someone, but you don’t. My older brother was always patient with me, especially the time I look back at and wish I could erase. It was that night I was going to stay at @PERSON2 and @PERSON4, my aunt and uncles. I had always had trouble staying places because I got home sick and cried. That is exactly @CAPS2 happened that night I regret. @PERSON3, @PERSON6, and I were playing games in their room. I couldn’t stop thinking of my mom. I told myself over and over “stiff upper lip.” I had forgotten about her for a while then the feeling came agian, so I thought of how much fun I would have tomorrow if I just stayed the night. It didn’t work tears rolled faster than @CAPS1 falls. “I want to go home” I managed to sniffle. I ran downstairs to tell my older cousin @PERSON1, who was babysitting. @CAPS3 finally opened her door and brought me upstairs to get the phone. My mom answered and relized it was my voice and said “@CAPS2” all grouchy. I had sniffled and said “I want to come home, I miss you.” and sniffled more. “Someone will pick you up soon. Be packed and ready.” @CAPS3 said and hung up. I sadly told @PERSON3 and @PERSON6 as I packed and waited on the wooden bench by the door. Soon enough a car came up the driveway and honked. It was @PERSON5, I said bye once more and went out into the cold, wind and hopped in @LOCATION1’s car. “@CAPS4 didn’t you want to stay?” @PERSON5 asked calmly. “I don’t know.” And it wasn’t brought up until I walked through our front door. I already knew my punishment, no more staying the night somewhere for a couple weeks.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12037,5,"The mood in this memoir seems to be a grateful tone. The reason I say that is because Narciso says how grateful he was to have parents that left everything behind so that he could have a better life. He also sounded grateful when he talked about the Spanish, Cuban, and Italian people in his neighborhood would work together instead of being racist to each other. He also mentioned that he learned the meaning of ""family"" while living in that house. By ""family"" he didn't mean blood relative Family. What he means by family is everyone that would come into his apartment and everyone in the building was family too. The mood he has while writing the memoir is grateful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13228,5,"the author in the memoir's mood is like saying it's good and bad because he talks like he and his family take in people that need help geting back on thare feet, there hopeing that the people will do the same for them if thay need it.the boy is happy he lives in the @LOCATION1 but his parents gave up so much for him. this is the mood of the author.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18180,7,"@CAPS2 story is about the time @CAPS2 mom ran out of gas. @CAPS2 mom was driving down @LOCATION1 @NUM1 driving home. Soon we started running out of gas. The bad thing is, it was raining. Then we ran out of gas. First she had to get someone to pullover and ask if they had a cell phone. Someone finally did. She asked if they could get gas. Every one said “@CAPS1!” @CAPS2 mom then decided to call @CAPS2 dad and ask him to get gas. He then shows up an hour later with a couple gallons of gas. That was just enough to get @LOCATION1 home. If @CAPS2 mom had @CAPS1 patience she whould of gone crazy.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6462,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The cyclist should had looked at his map instead of taking the old man advise because all the information was on the map. He almost died because he listened to the old men and didn’t look at his map. If the cyclist was in a car mabey he would have better luck because he would be going faster than the @NUM1 bike.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15723,6,The builders of the Empire State Building faced two obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle was the forceful winds. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even tethering the dirigible to the mooring mast would cause the back of the ship to swivel dangerously around the mooring mast. The second obstacle was due to an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to tie up to the building or even approach the area.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16465,6,"While constructing the Empire State Building the builders were faced with many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. To begin, the dangers of allowing dirigibles that were made outside of the United States. May non-American dirigibles were made up of hydrogen which is much more flammable compared to the United States helium balloons. To avoid a repeat of the explosion of a dirigible Lüsted states, ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above.. Downtown New York."" @CAPS1, the winds at the top of the building were to wild to attach a dirigible safely to the top. The author clarifies, ""Even if the dirigibles were thethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around... the back could be weighted down with lead weights, but using these was neither practical nor safe."" This shows that in order to have the ship still enough to be able to moor it was dangerous. Lastly, a law was passed making it impossible to fly close enough to the building to be able to moor. Marcia Amidon Lüsted says, ""An existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This makes the possibility of landing a dirigibles on the Empire State Building illegal.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3493,2,"I think books that have nudity, curse words, or gang related violence should be put in either a adult shelf or taken off for good. They show kids stuff they shouldnt see or do when they get older. They just arent appropriate. No childeren should know about drugs, sex, or epspecially gang violence. Its stuff they should never even find out about. So i think we should take them books off the shelf, if people want to read them they can go buy themselves a copy.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 957,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1, I am deligted to write this letter to you. It has come to my attention that the people who support advances in tecnology believe that computers have a positive efffect on people. I agree with those people. I agree with them because one: you can communicate with your family and friends via email, via @CAPS2, via @CAPS3 ets. Number two: you can use a computer for research, and number three: it can tell you directions or give you info. on a resteraunt or place you want to go. I will now get into more detail on these three topics. You can communicate with your family or friends via computer. For example my friend amor, when we were best freinds and we were in third grade, he had to move to @LOCATION1. I cried the first day he moved. then the next week or so I got an email from him and so now we can keep in touch with each other. He comes & to @LOCATION2 every @DATE2 and we hangout with each other. Maybe one day, I will like to go visit him now In @LOCATION3 becasue he moved again, but I will have to do some research on @LOCATION3 first. With a computer you can research alot of things like this year our language @CAPS4 class read a book called ""my brother @CAPS5 is dead"" and it was a true story. Se we had to some research on the book and I found out that without computers how would I be able to research anything on the website it shared where everything , a description of the thing, and how to get there (diretions). Directions are very important. The show you how to get to a certain destination. You can get directions off a computer. I remember one year I had to go to my friends birthday party and we didn't know how to get there. So I went online on @DATE1 and we got the directions from there and we printed them out and we found the place in @NUM1 minutes. Without a computer we would have been able to find the house easily. You @MONTH1 disagree with me on this because a computer can have bad websites and can also became very addicting to some people, but I think I am right. Thank you for reading this letter, once again computers are good for the study!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12809,5,"The moode the author has in this memoir is happines. He states that growing up around in the envirnorment gave him a sence of family, he says that here in my house felt lik cuba. He and his whole family have respected each other and others. Thats the authors mood",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10462,4,I think when she take the test over it is going to be in the spring and She is going to try and pass it . But she did not want to cry in front of her mother . I think she is going to make it up to her and pass the test.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13011,5,The mood created by The @CAPS1 in The memoir is soothing and @CAPS2. I explains how @CAPS2 Narciso is at his parents house. The passage also explains how many friends he has. Narciso is grateful of his heritage which help set a good mood.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13159,5,The mood of this story is Narciso @CAPS1 his family and his house. He Love his home becase even tho they live in @LOCATION1 it still feel like Cuban. with is family being there they will always be there for him and help him.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3869,2,"I believe that it is unnecessary to remove items off shelves for offensive reasons. I feel this way for several reasons, but three in particular. First, it @MONTH1 be a book, movie, or magazine that someone plans on reading, and removing an item will let down the customer. Second, @CAPS1 are many solutions to try out before taking an item away. Last, customers have to accept some decisions a business decides to make. First, it @MONTH1 be a book, movie, or magazine that someone plans on reading, and removing an item will let down the customer. People come to libraries to look at what they're interested in to entertain themselves. @CAPS1 should be all types of literation in the library for all types of people, because everyone doesn't think alike. Everytime an item is removed off of a shelf, @CAPS1 will be an unsatisfied customer. Second, @CAPS1 are many solutions to try out before taking an item away. Libraries always have some type of organization. In order to not offend anyone, items should be divided into their own categories inside their own sections. This solution will prevent anyone from seeing something that offends them. If that doesn't help, librarians should post a sign stating what type of objects are inside on the front door, so everyone knows before they enter. Last, customers have to accept some decisions a business decides to make. A customers' needs and wants should be met at all times, unless a customer is trying to run the business as if it was their own. If a particular library chooses to have certain types of items, because they know what what readers' like, then no one else should involve theirself. If I owned a library, I would be upset if a customer removed a book off a shelf, because they would be interfering with my business. In conclusion, I beleve it is unnecessary to remove items off shelves for three reasons. First, it @MONTH1 be a book, movie, or magazine that someone plans on reading. Second, @CAPS1 are many solutions to try out before taking an item away. Last, customers have to accept some decisions a business decides to make. I believe I expressed my opinion to the fullest. Although some people @MONTH1 disagree with the way I feel, I'm sticking with it. @CAPS1 defintly wouldn't be any books left for any of us if items were removed for offensive reasons.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12416,5,"@ORGANIZATION1 creates a warm, comforting mood in a piece of Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives. He does this by explaining what goes on in a positive light. Here, the innocence of childhood, the congression of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm homes."" This quote uses words like celebrations and warm to show that this place was a comforting place that always had a great time. This shows how Narciso Rodriguez created this warm, comforting mood.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3498,2,"In a library it's censorship should be conrtolled by the people that go to that library. If it is a public library then the visitors should have the right to choose what books go on the shelf. The libraries should not take books off the shelf due to the beliefs of one person, no the libraries should take all the books and give them a rateing once they have that only the reader should decide if the book, music, movies, magazines, etc, are offensive to them. Of course there are some books that adults @MONTH1 not wish their child to read and then they should talk to the librarian and set a boundry of what rateing of book their child can check out. Organizing the books this way anbody can read anything they want to though there are the books they don't want to read or even see on the shelf, they need to stop a minute and realize that one of the books they like someone else might not want on the shelf. In the end the books that are on the shelf are the choice of the library because they are the people that purchase the books. so to prevent a power struggle this way a comittee should be set up to decide what books to purchase. you will still have to deal with people not wanting a certain kind of book, but those people will just have to deal with it. The books on the libraries banned book list should be in the libray also, the books are just books weather you read them or not is your choice. The one exception to this should be at school libraries because it is the schools money purchasing the books the administration or the school board should choose which books go in the library. In short my veiw of book censorship is that, the library will choose the books that go into the library. To make things easier the books should have a rateing system that would be the national standard for all public libraries. Like I stated previously the books are just books its your choice to read them",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9446,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she wants to take the driving test in spring time. Spring time is a symbol of positive feelingsshe gets positive feelings from the blooming of the winter hibiscus.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18557,7,"Back when I was in about third grade I had to be really patient. I was at a @ORGANIZATION1 game. It almost the seventh inning and I was ready to go onto the field. I had to wait a really long time. I had missed about an inning of the game already. When I was down there, there were about @NUM1 people. It was so crowded. My mom probably could’ve filled three two gigabite memory cards in that time. It was so boreing. After it had been about twenty minutes they finally let us on to the field. We all walked through the outfield and onto the infield. Most of us were on live t.v. I was one of them. When the game was done most people walked away sad but I walked away happy and sad. People were sad because the @ORGANIZATION1 lost the game. The reason I was happy though is because I got to go onto the field.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 217,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I agree that computers have a positive effect on people. You learn hand - eye coordination, you don't have to step out to go to the library and it can improve social skills. Continue reading to find out why. Computers, we use them everyday. They are teaching us something. We @MONTH1 not even realize it, but they are teaching us hand-eye coordination. We type something and we use our eyes to look at the screen and then our hands to type, one mistake and automatically our hand fix it. Or maybe when we are playing games online, the same thing applies. Our eyes are looking, while our hands are fast at work over the keyboard. Hand-eye Coordination is a skill you need on sports, and I believe that computers, since we spend time on them are the quick way to learn that skill. Next, how many student's parents work? My parents do. Something it becomes difficult to walk to the library, not everyone lives in walking distance to one. That's when a computer helps. If you have a project to do, but your parents work, you can just @ORGANIZATION1 it up, you might even get more information, then what you can get in the library. Hows that? you ask. Well, for an example, @CAPS1 you had to do a project on @CAPS2. Let's just say, you managed to go to a library, but apparently there were only @NUM1 books on @CAPS2, out of which @NUM2 were checked out. You can always check it out from another library, but that might not come soon enough, on a survey @PERCENT1 of students said this has happened to them, but the computer saved them. So what else did they say? HELLO @ORGANIZATION1! Last but not least, a computer improves your social skils. When I first moved here I was a very shy person. When I made a @CAPS3, I @CAPS4 talking to people who go to my school. I even became friends with them. I'm not saying that you should just stop talking to people in person, and use @CAPS3, @CAPS6, @CAPS7, or @CAPS8 and communicate. @CAPS9 I am saying is that if you start talking to them online, you know them a little, then when you talk in person you will see you have alot in common, with that person, and soon you can become friends. Another thing, that is somewhat related to this. I have many friends living in @LOCATION1, and many cousins in @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2, @CAPS9 over. We @CAPS9 know, you can't travel @CAPS9 the time, sometimes you can't even get to see them. Thats @CAPS10 social networks help. You can keep in touch, plus @CAPS11.S. not even waste minutes on you phone. Can it get better? In conclusion, Computers have a very positive effect on people. From improving hand-eye coordination, to not stepping out to go to the library, and getting that project done in time with a A+ as a grade, to improving your socia skills. Even see the data collected. Thank you for taking your time and effort to read this, I hope it has persuaded many people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12662,5,"In this article the author kind of gave a both happy and proud mood. He loved where he came from. Where he was raised, and mainly the life his parents provided for him. He adores his parents and couldn't be more gratefull. They turned a house into a home. They didn't thousands to be happy all they needed was each other...and they did. He is what he is and that's extremly proud of his Cuban life and family.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9472,4,"The author finished off the story with that paragraph because the paragraph is saying that overtime when she is adapted well to every thing she will be able to take the test, so that’s why she says “…and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding,…” “@CAPS1 that all it needs is time. Time to get warm and time to grow. Also the paragraph is well thought out and relates to the entire story. So she concluded with a great paragraph that made a lot of sense in relationship with the story.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12614,5,"Inthe memoir the author the mood the author sets is a thankful soft one The author is thanking his parents in a good way, in a nice, soft, and appreciative way. ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house with a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always fills the air with not just scent and music but life and love (pg. @NUM1). All you need in life is a little imagination and a lot a help and love. This guy in the memoir got a lot of help in love by describing it in a nice calm way, of thanking his parents for all they have done for him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9357,4,"The author ends the story with that paragraph because she wants to show that the peace that the peace that the flower gave will build her confidence and she will not give up. I know this because in the story the main character fails her driving test and when she sees the flower it helps remind her of the home she had in Vietnam. Another reason is because the flower blooms in spring and it never stops blooming. She knows it will never give up and she relaizes that she shouldn’t either. Plus the plant gives her stength to try again. So the reason the author ends her story with that paragraph is to show the power the flower that was know to her, give her and how she will no give up.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 611,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I have @NUM1 reasons why computers effects have on people. First, computers are not good for your eyes. Second, the reason why people get on computers a lot. Third, there are so much games and places to go like myspace, facebook and even twitter and much more. Keep on reading so I could tell you all about my three reasons. First of all, computers are not good for your eyes because computers are like @CAPS3's is the something but not really because computer as more information and @CAPS3 dont really got so much information you could browse for. My second reason is that the more people be on computers the more blind they could get just for being on the computers for a hour or more. Third, some people dont even dare if they be on ocmputer they wont they might think that just becaus ethey wear gasses they wont get blinder but they are wrong they will get more blinder. As you reading you will find out my second reason fro being to much in the computer. My second reason, is that why people get in computers alot well peopel get on computers just to their or do their taxes but that is not good because just because your doing your bills or your taxes you to alot of information that people in other countries or state could get without you knowing , second is that people or get on computers to pay their bills or do their taxes they also get on the computer to maybe order something or buy a ticket to fly to a place they want to go like a vacation place or a business trip. my third reason is that they not only buy or order things but thet get in websites that will make their lives better like meeting soembody special or something else. As you keep reading you will find out my third reason for being to much and so long in the computers. My third reason, is that their are alot of activities to do in the computer for a example myspace, facebook and twitter are the most popular website that people get in just to meet new people and talk to old friends. In conclusion, people should not be on computer too much because of their health and their privacy and also to be sure not to meet strange people. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9852,4,"The author decides to end the story with the paragraph to show many things. First of all, the author uses the ending paragraph to show optimism. The whole story had been sad but the ending shows some hope. In the beginning it says, “ @CAPS1 of loss so deep… “(@NUM1) and at the end it says, “ I will take that test again.” (@NUM2) shows how her attitude changes from cynical to hopeful. Another reason why the story is ended with that paragraph is to show how Saeng was accepting. When the story says that the geese were , “ almost familiar to her now.”(@NUM2) demonstrates that even though Saeng is sad to leave her home, she is adapting quite well. Therefore, the author ends the story with an inspiring paragraph to show change for the better.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15960,6,"Based on the excerpt, I dont think they should have attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there. According to the excerpt, I think this because something really bad could of happened and something probably has happend, But back then they really had no choice except for balloons.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14946,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many challenges in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the mooring at the top of the building. The main challenge was caused by nature itself. The winds above the building were constantly blowing and shifting direction. This would cause any dirigible attempting to dock swing around and below in the wind, which poses many safty risks for passengers going on and off the zepplen. The dirigible could also puncture its frame on nearby buildings while attempting to dock, which also causes safty risks for people on the building and on the ground. Have a zepplen attatched to the building also made it structurally unstable and modifications had to be made the frame of the building to give it more support. In the end, the idea was dropped because it would never work and was unrealistic.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12982,5,"The mood in this memoir is caring and loving. Even though everyone in the neighborhood isnt blood related they are all still family. Everyone in the neighborhood is so welcoming, he tells us how his mother always leaves the door open for those who welcome her in. When they all have partys everyone is so happy to have what they have. Narciso is over greatfull for what a life his parents give him and he can never thank them enough. He says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house to a home."" His parents are also very greatfull for how thankfull Narciso is. Everyone in this ""family"" will forever love eachother",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12218,5,The mood created by the author is welcoming and warm. The author makes it so that you want to be @CAPS1 and being able to smell the good food. Also just being able to appreciate the cuban culture.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7406,3,The setting of this short story affects the cyclist by making him dehydrated and dies. Also in the setting he found the abandon factory which makes him feel hopeless. If the setting was elsewhere then this setting he would have felt different as he didn’t meet the people of the reserve he could have been in the better roads than the old roads he was in,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1602,1,"Dear editor, Computers have a good effect on humans. The reason is because you can interact with friends and family that they know, the computer @MONTH1 be portable so you can still get outside, and lastely people can research places where they want to go on vacation. These reasons are how computers have a good effect on humans. To begin with, seeing people in person is not the only way to communicate, on the computer there is many ways. There are chat rooms, that have typing to eachother. Take my friend @PERSON5 for example, he used to live in @LOCATION2 with all his friends and family until buisiness came along. His buisiness transfered @PERSON5 all the way to @LOCATION1. Thank god he had a computer, because other wise he would not have able to communicate with his friends. @PERSON5 is not the only person in which he is transfered far away from home. In fact, @PERSON4 showed @PERCENT1 of people with a computer tend to talk to friends and family more often because they can do it whenever they need. Gene a phsychyatrist states that when someone in a family has to leave to go on buisiness, then that family will start relying on a computer to communicate. Do you want to lose a friend or family member? Moreover, computers @MONTH1 be portable. If a computer is portable then you can see nature and still use the computer to get the job done. Take my cousin @PERSON2 is a teacher and always has to do his students grades during the weekend. He was bummed out because he could never get outside. So for his birthday, he got a portable computer, this allowed him to go outside and do his job while getting fresh air and seeing nature. @PERSON2 is one of many lucky people that has had this happen to them. @PERSON6 has shown that @PERCENT2 of teachers buy portable computers so they can see nature and get fresh-air while doing their job. @PERSON1, proved that if a teacher doesn't get any fresh air while doing their job then they can make a valuable mistake or even get sick. Would you, a teacher, want to get sick with no fresh air or be healthy working out doors? Lastly, there is more to do on computers than doing work and communicating with friends and family. You can research places for vaction. My aunt @PERSON3 had always dreamed of going on vacation but couldn't find any information on fun, outdoor places. Until, she got her hands on a computer. This way she found a fun place and left the country for week. @PERSON3 is not the only person this has happened to. In fact, @ORGANIZATION1 shows that @PERCENT3 of people hesitate to go on vaction because they don't know about the country or place.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19403,7,"A while ago when I went on a trip to cedar point in @LOCATION1, it was an hour and thirty @DATE1 drive to go there, the reason why we went was because of my dad work @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I kept out of the car with??? @NUM1, wait for my suaisn family, waiting was all I did until @DATE1 were burst out running into the parky my dad points out the height limits (I was only @NUM2 and “4.@NUM2”ft tall @CAPS2 I wasn’t tall enough for most of the, @CAPS4 rides ,my dad saw that I was tall enough for the @CAPS5 @CAPS6. We walk around looking for the ride and more importantly he line. So we finally??? the ride my attention was drawn from the ride to the line ,my mouth practicely hit the ground with the expression “@CAPS7 luck getting to the that ride”, my father looked at me than my sister “ where is mom and will?” I pointed over by the faress whell being covard of course. So we just get in the line and sign, it was at least @NUM4 something degrees. we waited for almost two hours and finally got to the front, we got into the chair and a bar came over us, I remember one thing set a quarter on your leg and gravity takes a hold of it . A minute @CAPS8 we are going down like a neteour the quarter doesn’t float @CAPS9! At that split second were on solid ground now the ride was not really worth the wait, but hey I’m not a covard.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6400,3,The terrain described in this essay add affect to the strugles of the cyclist. For example when the author says “their were no cars nor buildings in sight” that adds to the affect that he is really out in the middle of nowhere. Also it adds a lot of affect when he comes upon an abandond juice factory and he is so thirsty he puts stones in his mouth to gather saliva. Also when he finally finds water an “oldtimer” asks if he knows the best way to go.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15157,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast, written by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems with their ideas. The builders thought they would be able to make a successful landing dock for dirigibles. Everything they did was all planned right but when it came time to test it, it didn't work. There were quit a few problems with there idea of using the Empire State Building is a landing dock for dirigibles.One reason that this one not successful was because the dirigibles wern't able to get close enough to attach the building In order for the dirigible to be ankered would be for a rope to be tied to some thing. But the balloons wern't able to get to close to the building because the point at the top of the building was making it too hard. If it got to close to the point, it could puncture the balloon which would not be could because the gas that holds it up would come out and the balloon would fall. There is one more major reason they're plan did not work.The other major reason would be because of the wind. the wind would get so wild the back of the blimp would sway back and forth, making it dangerous for passengers. They wouldn't be able to weigh it down with weights would be dangerous for the pedestrians down in the city @CAPS1 of the major reasons why the plan to dock dirigibles at the empire state building would not work.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19239,7,"Being patient! Patience is a good learning skill. The three step to being patient, being quiet, not complaining, and waiting a while if you have to. My mom and I went hunting with @PERSON1, my step dad. We had to be quiet so a deer could come. We sat there being quiet. I think it was the quietest I've been ever! All of us were getting sick of being quiet but we had to be in order for a buck could come. It was very cold and l was dressed warm but I was still could. There was a little heater in the shead thing we were in. we couldn't complain being cold or tired. Or just waiting, so we all sat there not complaining that was good. When l was about to ask if we could go in a ten pointer came out of the woods to find something to eat. We were waiting patiently for the doer to come closer. @PERSON1 loaded the gun and pulled the trigger. The buck jumped and ran of. Purted shot! We got out of the shead and searched for a blood trial. We had to wait a while to find the deer but it was wroth it. The right way to be patient, shuting your mouth, not wining and waiting. A good skill to learn is being patient. Being patient",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 491,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 Who would'nt agree that more and more people are using computers. The isusse is @CAPS2 bad or good for you. My opinion on this matter is that agree that computer are bad and people are spending. Too much time on computer. Also I agree with that because people are spending more time on computer and less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friend, And thats my opinion on why people spending to much time on computers. Cearly you can that people spending too much time on computer and less time exercising. I say because i rember a time when my you to spend most of his time on computers and not for school eitner he would story on for all most the whole day he would bring food up stairys and throw the plates on floor just keep eating and eating and go to sleep without doing any thing. He would do this day after day. when I go over his house it would be dirty after all those times my my to hold him to clean up he didnt after he ate I ash edition want to got for a you can @PERSON1 the of and caliores he would say no I can walk on the computer, @CAPS3 one day he became really part and the doctor said you obeased but do you think he cared no but we would try to push him ever day to exercision know he has dibietes. We told and him told him spending to much time on computers is bad for you. Another reason why spending too much time on computer is bad because you need to learn how to enjoy nature and get out scid. I rember a time when my friend would story in his house for day on a computer when I would ash him to come out sid he would say no all time, @CAPS3 one he to come out sid to get a new computer sofeware and when he opend door he got scared of the lite and run in side reason why spending to much time computers is bad for you this prove that get and play get active ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9383,4,"The author included that paragraph because the hibiscus plant makes her think of where she is from and helps her to succeed a certain things. I know that the hibiscus is from her homeland because in the story she says “I mean, not like the kind we had at–at-”, she found that she was still to shaky to say the words at home.” She misses being home and this plant helps her bring back memorys of being there. Therefore the author included that paragraph to show the reader that she misses her homeland.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15590,6,"Throughout the story workers of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacles they faced was trying to ge a thousend foot drigible mooring at the top of the building. This was held together by a single cable tether and that would add stress to the buildings frame. All the dirigible's load and wind pressure had to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation, but that was eleven hundred feet below. Another obstacle is that hydrogen in the dirigible was highly flammable. If a dirigible was ever destroyed it would kill a lot of people because the Empire State Building is in downtown New York. The greatest obstacle was that the winds at the top of the building were constantly changing so would be very difficult to land. The last obstacle was it was against the law for airships to fly too low in urban areas.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1411,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 do you feel about computers? I know that I think they are a great to we are lucky to have them. They have to be used in moderation though, because exercise and staying healthy is good. I hope you will share my opinions in your next article to help pursude readers on my view of computers. What I believe is the best thing about computers, is that it is a great source to learn. The internet can connect all over the world, and you can learn about other cultures. You can know everything about that country without ever visiting! Or you can use it to find out about you family's history. Many record keeping systems are switching to computers now. When we took a field trip to @LOCATION1 they had data bases there that had every name of the people that went through there. Studies show that @NUM1 people find the internet easy to use, and quicker than any method. Another thing about computers is they help you in the work place. Lets say you had a job designing houses to be built. In old times you would have to draw it out by hand using numerous instruments and tools, but now you could make the design using just one tool, the computer. It is a much away way to to you job and if assists the customers because before if the wanted the house to be a different you would have help to draw it all over again. Now you just have to make an ajustment on the computer and in seconds its done with the new design. These day if not @PERCENT2 then @PERCENT1 of house designers use computers. Computers also play in a social role. On the internet you can connect and chat with friends. Also you could share pictures of both of you at a baseball game @DATE1 to keep memories. Or you can send them a website with a really funny video of someone getting with a soccerball. Experts did a study and it showed that @NUM2 times the reason a teen goes on the internet is to connect with friends. ""@CAPS2 @PERSON1 (computer expert and developer) what do you think the number one reaso teen use computers teen use computers is?"" @CAPS3, I would have to say to chat with friends. I dont see why they wouldn't, it's simple and almost in ."" Computers are, a great advancement in our technology. They assist us in everyday life, life and make difficult tasks simple. They should not be over used though and you need to keep a healthy mind and body. All of the thing we could learn from them though help in the argument of that. To me the computer is the same step forward as the light bulb was. Computer source found @PERCENT3 of in @LOCATION2, and. I believe they will be in all of our homes. Some families find them @CAPS2 useful the have more than one in the household. They can come in all shapes and sized to fit your wants and needs, and can connect you to anything in the world.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12769,5,"And throughout the memoir there is a constant mood, which is happiness. In the beginning of the memoir, @PERSON1 describes his home, about how it started to how it became a wonderful ""home"". He said it had ""a passionate Cuban music"" and ""amazing aromas of cooking"". Then in paragraph @NUM1, @PERSON1 says that ""he loves his parents for their love and sacrifice""; and he continues saying how grateful he is toward them. Lastly in paragraph @NUM2, he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"". This is the mood expressed in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18835,7,"One day, last year I had to be really patient my mom had told the family that we would be going to six flags soon. I was filled with excitement and I couldn’t wait so I asked her when and she said she didn’t know yet. This made me upset because last time she said that about going somewhere, we ended up not going. The only thing that I knew for sure was that it had to be on a @DATE1 because she works during the week I was just happy that school was finally out so I didn’t have to worry about home-work. So I waited until @DATE2 and then asked my mom if we could go that @DATE1. She said no because we would have to plan it more and that we couldn’t randomly go one @DATE1. That @DATE1 I bugged her every day until she finally started planning it. The first thing she did was look at her work schedule to make sure. She didn’t have any meetings or projects for the coming @DATE1. My stomach dropped when she told me that she had stuff to do so she kept looking at her schedule. The next free @DATE1 she had was two weeks away. I was okay with it though because that’s better than nothing .Throughout the next two weeks I saved money up for six flags. When the two weeks were finally over I had about @MONEY1 saved up and I was practically bouncing off the walls because I was so excited. I think that was the most patient I have ever been.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15923,6,"There were many obstacles the builder's of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Some obstacles were the lack of a suitable landing area. Another obstacle was they could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the buildings flat roof, a thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. Also if they wanted to do this, it would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constatly shifting due to violent air currents. To reduce this dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down with lead weights, but the obstacle to this is having weights dangling high above pedestrians was neither practical nor safe. All these obstacles, yet these people were still able to build the Empire State building with a mooring mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12073,5,The mood the auther has is good. He's very proud of how he lives. The most thing that matters in his life are family. His family cares alot and watch over him no matter what and he is very thankful for all.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7344,3,"The features of the setting in, “Rough Road Ahead” negatively affect the cyclist. In the California desert, water is everything. If you run out of water then you might as well have run out of life. Without water, dehydration kicks in and it affects not only your body, but your mind too. The cyclist only had a limited amount of water with him when he started. ”I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly, and I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.“ Through the deserted towns he came across, he searched for a source of water but found none that were useable.” When I tried a drop or two ,it had the flower of battery acid.” @CAPS1 feature was the heat. It began to mess with his mind and take toll on his body quickly.” I wiped the sweat from my eyes to make sure it wasn’t a mirage” He worned about heatstroke and his bodys need for water throughout the entire trip. Finally, in the deserts of California, wildlife can affect you. The cyclist was using a path that nature had claimed and was not traveled often by people “ crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake blocked the majority of the pavement.” As you can see, the cyclist was negatively afftected by the features of the setting in, “Rough Road Ahead.”",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21068,8," Sence I was a little girl I' ve lived without my bio mom, @CAPS1 gave me up for adaption when @CAPS1 was only @NUM1, @CAPS1 wasn't ready @CAPS8 be a mom. @CAPS1 has always been a risk taker an never thought about her concequences. My adoptive parents have always been truthful @CAPS4 me about her an why @CAPS1 gave me up. I accept how my life has turned out an im very grateful, @CAPS2 i wasn't adopted i wouldnt have gotton @CAPS8 know my @PERSON1, The most loving, adventurous, funny, wise women you would ever meet. As soon as i could walk @PERSON1 would have me out camping and hiking @CAPS4 her. @CAPS2 @CAPS6 was a nice sunny day no one would have any doubt were we would be. @CAPS2 we were at @PERSON1's house in the @DATE1 or @DATE2 we would always be out in her garden boy how @PERSON1 @CAPS3 her gardens and flowers. No wait thats a lie @PERSON1 @CAPS3 nature period. @CAPS1 has taught me how @CAPS8 appreciate everything around me exspecially nature, @CAPS4 me an her we are closer then anything you could think of, @CAPS2 shes the sky im her stars, @CAPS2 i' m a bird @CAPS1's my wings. @CAPS6's that simply. @CAPS6 hasn't always been easy for her an me, but the way we know how @CAPS8 cope is @CAPS8 laugh at everything an everyone, not in a bully or make fun of kind a way, but a good way. Laughin for me an my @PERSON1 comes like a second nature @CAPS8 us, @CAPS6's what keeps us going an know that everything will be okay. A few months ago my favorite cousin @CAPS7 had passed away, @PERSON1 and I had barley seen each other in a while or had talked, but then everything happend so fast @CAPS4 @PERSON2. That when we saw each other @CAPS6 was at his funeral. My sizemore family was all there, even tho @PERSON2 was gone he had a presence that was still there. That night after the funeral everyone went @CAPS8 my aunties house an just spent time together. Finally @PERSON1 and I got the chance @CAPS8 talk yes we were both teary eyed but we were laughing @CAPS8.We were laughin at all the funny times we had @CAPS4 @PERSON2 an all the crazy things he did. One time he had went @CAPS8 go get my uncle from the airport an he was waiting there in his elvis costum holding a sizemore sign..Boy was @PERSON2 a goof. @PERSON1 was just telling me all these things, and @CAPS6 was then that i relized @PERSON1 had tought me something else @CAPS8 appreciate. @PERSON1 had taught me how @CAPS8 appreciate laughter at a time @CAPS4 sorrow. @CAPS8 rejoice in a time of dealth, @CAPS8 have hope when you felt like you had none left. I learned that even tho people might not think so, laughter is the key medicine @CAPS8 everyones pain. People don't think of laughter as a cure they think of @CAPS6 as something you do after you hear a joke. Laughter is so much more then people give @CAPS6 credit for. My @PERSON1 taught me all those things, plus the real meaning of laughter, and that will always be @CAPS4 me.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13147,5,"Memoirs have a certain mood that the author usually works around with. In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez, the author explains his family in a very @CAPS1 way. The author talks about his love of cooking, how his parents want to give their children a better life by moving to @LOCATION1 leaving loved ones behind, and the author @CAPS1 his house.The kitchen was the very heart of the home to the author. His parents was very skilled in cooking, which passed onto their children. The author says on paragraph @NUM1, ""… A love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" This shows the author's love for culinary skills. Next, is how the author's parents love their children. They didn't know anything about @LOCATION1, but moved there just to give a better life for their children. The parents had to leave their loved families, friends, and country. For example, on paragraph @NUM2, it explains what the parents had to. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" This quote shows the parents realy loved their children wanted them to be happy. Finnaly, the last sentence of the memoir, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" states how the narator feels love for his parents and his home. This all shows that the narrator is happy with his family in pleased of where he lives. In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez, the mood is @CAPS1 . The author shows this by @CAPS1 the culinary art his parents, and his home. He is grateful for what he has, and has love for his family and home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 568,1,"Computers they give you @CAPS1 and reasearch from a for distance from you. But is it good for you? Those who support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. I believe they @MONTH1 be correct. I believe that a computer can be used by finding things out from far distances, it can also give hand - eye coordination, I also believe that it is ok to use a computer if you are just using it for reasearch or other needed actions. When useing a computer it gives you the advantages of researching and studying far away places. This is good because some people have intrest in places around the world. Also, @CAPS2 need computers now adays, thier teachers give the write up typed assignments, or power point presentations. Also, parents you computers for work or maybe to get away from work to take a vacation they need took book it some how. Also, some say using a computer can give you Hand eye coordination. Well, it does in fact when you type. Some @MONTH1 not know this hut typing is a skill, some people type fast some type slow and some are average typers. Also, to teach little kids maybe even some adults, people have created a typing game on the computer it will teach kids how to type. Also, some people who type super fast go to get test to see how fast they type the test gives numbers like seventy words a minute. People naturally type about thirty words a minute. I believe that people should be able to go on computers for needed actions such as research. Many kids have learned about these other websites such as facebook, I tunes, youtube, and twitter. Some become addictted so they never got off. Also, being on all of these websites and more try to give you things. that my give you a virus. Viruses can come in many strengths some can crash your computer some just send boat loads of pop-ups to your monitor. I feel that it is ok to go on the computer to do research or bok vacations. If you are addicted to other websites stop because you will crash you computer with one click of your mouse. Over all I believe computers are a great source to get information off of but should not be addicted so called toy. Computer have a positive effect on people. Just dont be addicted and got outside... and have exercise with friends and family too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19406,7,My mom’s in the hospital! My mom was in the hospital! She was getting a life-threting surgery. This is a story of a time I was of a time I was patient. My mom didn’t feel good for two years. And when she whent to the doctors for a “cheak-up” it turned out she had heart disease @NUM1 main artary block ages. So I had to wait while she was getting “preped”. It took two hours which felt like forever! Then I got to see her for five minutes then she had to be taken to the surgery room. The surgery took five hours. I sat in the waiting room after school. I did my homework and read magizens. I was very worried about my mom. But then the doctor comes in and says no one can see her for a whole day! I had to be patient and wait till the next day. That was the time I had patients and it payed off.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4316,2,"I do not think people should take books off the shelves because the town libraries have those types of books. People should enjoy reading all types of books. Some people only read different books. Little kids like fantasy and picture books, teenagers like romance, and others like nonfiction. It should not matter what other people think. If people brought books off the shelves then what will the other people read. Before you bring books off the shelves, you should ask and write down what other people like instead of doing what you think is right. Think about what would happen if u brought down books off the shelves. What would happen? I will tell you, you would lose customers. If you don't want children to read inappropriate books, then you should make a card saying that your parents give them permition to read those books. If that won't work, then make an age limit. Have the parents show you their berth certificate. Have a resticted section in the library. In order to get a book from the resticted section, then have a parent sign a note saying that their allowed. Children the age of thirteen and under should not be given magazines. If their the age of fourteen and up, then they can get a magazine. Music should not matter to parents, so there should be no problem there. If the movies are bought by the parents, then there should be no problem there either. The other things you can figure it out on your own. This is what I think should happen to books in a library. I told you how a library should work. I told you what I thought should go on in the library. I will give you some advise. Think before you do. That is all I am going to tell you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18358,7,When I got my bow I was very very very excited. Well I was excited because my older sister @PERSON1 got a bow befor me and I thought that it was unfair. I had to wait @NUM1 whole year till I got my bow at @CAPS1 time. Well my mom and dad hide it in my bedroom in my closet I never noticed it befor. That is the time when I had to be patince when I had to wait to get my bow. Now almost ever day I’m outside shoting it. Thanks for listening and reading.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9854,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he wants to end it on a good note and send a good message there not going to quit because they failed the first time.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1332,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I am writing to you to let you know my opinion on computers and technologies. Computers have now become part of our society and culture and is very important by following reasons. One computers let you surf online anytime you want. Two, computers allow people talk online. First reason why computers are so critical in our culture is that computers let you surf online anywhere and anytime you want. This is very convenient. What if you live far away from the nearest library? When you have to write a research paper? Jane lives @NUM1 miles away from her town library. Her mother could drive her ther, but what if she wasn't at home or driving someone else to a doctor's appointment? This is when computers come in handy. Jane can just simply go online and do the research! Not only that but also, ""www.internetsocool.gov"" states that information you can find in a regular library is about @NUM2 of information you can find online. Secondly, computers let you talk with people both faraway and nearby online and videochat. This is very useful for me. Since I live by myself in @LOCATION1, I miss my family a lot. Although with internet, I can talk to my family whenever I want! Also, you can video chat with your lab partner to discuss how you can make the lab report better! @PERSON1, the author of ""@CAPS2 @CAPS3"" also states in his book that over @NUM3 million people use internet to videochat for educational purposes. In conclusion, ivideochat @MONTH1 sound like something to do for lark, but it is actually used for many good purposes. On the other hand, some people say that computers are bad. Some say that people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising and spending time their family. Although, ""The @DATE1 survey of what people do,"" states that @PERCENT1 of people who use computers are healthy both physically and emotionally. Just because we use computers to make our life easier, it does not mean that we don't value spending time with family. In conclusion in our culture because are very crucial in our culture because it can let you surf online and help you interact with people who live faraway.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21441,8," An argument is defined as ""A discussion in which disagreement is expressed."" In many cases, a proverbial ""@CAPS1"" is created between the two conflicting parties. Without a way to bridge this gap, the two groups, or individuals, will not come to a settlement, and continue arguing until one or the other backs down and accepts the others point of view. Laughter, can serve as this bridge. The door slammed shut and I went straight to my room. I had returned home from what had started out as a good time with one of my oldest friends. Looking back I do not remember what it was about, all I knew was that I was not going to speak to him ever again; but being as young as I was, these such thoughts rarely last. I would see him every day during the school week, but it would not matter whether he was there or not. He was absent to me as long as we fought. This seemed like a good plan, to completely ignore each other until we had calmed down, but as with any plan, things never go quite as well as you want them to, especially when you are in the same elementary school, and in the same class. In elementary school, or at least in my case, there were many group activities, and when you are paired with the person whom you are not on the best terms with, things become difficult. Whether it was to build something, write together, or solve a math problem as a group, communication and teamwork are both important, and us fighting did not effect the group well. We would each discuss the best way to go about performing the task at hand with another member of the group with whom we were not fighting with, and then they would discuss and consult each of us separately. In short, it was a mess, and much more difficult than it should have been. Outside the classroom, the fighting persisted. At recess we would not agree to be on the same team, or even be on the same side of the field as one another. After about a week of this, I realized this needed to stop. At recess, I tried to get him to talk out our problem instead of shouting at, or ignoring each other. The calm resolution to the problem started out well, but being children, ended in a shouting match, to which I lost. I began to wonder if we would ever resolve this. When I got home that day, my mother, being a mother and always knowing when something is wrong, asked me what was bothering me. I was resistant at first to explain things, but, being a mother, she talked me into telling her. She started to go on about how I needed to be the mature one and that we needed to calmly talk out our differences, which I had already tried. I began to tune her out and imagined my friends mother giving him the exact same speech. By the time she was done, all I had received from the lecture was that I needed to try again. The next day at recess, I searched for him with the intent of resolving things today, no matter the circumstances. When I found him and attempted to talk things out, it once again turned into a shouting match. Nearby friends started to crowd and we kept at it. Suddenly, in the midst of the yelling, my friend, with whom I had been fighting with for the last few weeks began laughing. I was taken aback and thought about what could possibly have happened for angry shouting to turn into laughter. Looking around I saw nothing out of the ordinary, only a few snickering bystanders. I ran what had just occurred back through my mind. Just as I reached the point where he started laughing I had realized I had inadvertently made a joke while we were yelling at each other. This realization caused me to laugh, and everyone else nearby to laugh. After we stopped laughing, we sat down and talked things out like we should have done from the start. We questioned why we were still fighting over something as unimportant and trivial as this. After about five minutes of talking, we agreed to still be friends and that we would try to talk things out in the future before shouting at each other. When a teacher blew a whistle and recess had ended, I walked back to class feeling happy, and relieved that we had finally worked things out and could continue being friends. If I had not made that joke in the middle of our fight, I am not sure if we would have made up, even in the event we realized how pointless it was. Laughing during an argument will not solve your problems for you. However, laughter can create a bridge across the @CAPS1, and provide a common ground in which problems @MONTH1 be solved.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12305,5,"The mood in the @ORGANIZATION1 is displayed as happieness and appreciation. Narciso understands how much his parents had given up for him by moving from Cuba to @LOCATION1. They also have always stood by his side and made sure there was only positive attitudes around him. He appreciates this so much he ends the @ORGANIZATION1 saying ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"". by this he is saying it was a house that could shelter you, but a home is somewhere you want to be with family where you feel safe and comfortable. The happieness comes from the appreciation because you cant appreciat something and it doesn't make you make a little bit happier. his happieness is also portrayed in paragraph @NUM1 where he starts by saying ""I will always be greatfull to my parents for their love and sacrifice"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7283,3,"Throughout the riders long journey the setting greatly affected him. For example, the hot weather caused him to drink the majority of water suply making him dehydrated and tired. If the weather was cool he would have lasted much longer.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6003,3,"The cyclist in the story is at first confident in accepting the old men’s help, and doesn’t seem to suspect anything is wrong when he first starts out. The way the men directed him seem all going for his water supply is all in store, and the first land mark, a ghost town now, is exactly where it is supposed to be. The next “town” he hits doesn’t have anything that could replenish his diminishing water supply and he starts to feel troubled. However he was told the next town wasn’t further, so he pressed on. Then the scenery makes a drastic change, the flat roads becoming hills, the sun beating hotter- it really look like a desert after tumbleweeds even go past! The cyclist continues on, despite being very dehydrated. The next thing to come along is an old juice building that almost seems to mark him on how he has no water. He keeps on, however, and at last sees a shop where he can get water. The canging scenery sends the cyclist from confidence to worry, to hopelessness and lastly, relief.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4644,2,"Libraries are normally a safe quiet place for people to go set down drink a cup of coffee and read a book/magazine, search the internet, or listen to some of there favorite music. But, some people don't use it as that. They think it is a time to goof around and disrespect other people that are trying to have some time just to them selves while there children are away or had a bad day and to regroup and get ready for the next day. But then we ask our selves why do people want to set at a library and read. Why can't they just check out a book, cd, or magazine and take it home? Why do people think it is such a big deal to be able to check out books, magazines, music, and movies from the library? I don't see what the big deal is to this! Most counties have a public libarary. That is meaning they will accept anyone that is interested in looking at there stuff. Yes, I can see libraries making the person checking out a book sign a letter or document, giving personal information as in a telephone number, address, or credit card number. The letter would be saying that they have this much time with this book and they needed it back on a certain date or else they need to bring it back in a get it renewed so they can't accuse of anyone stealing a book if they just want it for a little bit longer. Most places have what they call late fees. Normally, if someone has a late fee then you aren't going to get that book back because they don't want to pay it so I feel as if giving them a credit card number they can just keep charging there account and get the money that way for the late fees. Because they can just not answer your phone call or they can just throw away a letter that they recieve in the mail from the libabry in the trash. I know our school library here at @ORGANIZATION1 has always had problems with getting books back and not paying late fees. This problem is sometimes a never ending process with certain people because some of them just don't care. Yes, the internet would be a little diffrent because not everyone has money to get the internet at there house. I am not writing this letter to gripe or be annoying I am trying to tell you some of my ideas that I have to keep a library up and running and not all junkey. My ideas to me are good ideas and I feel like we can put Libraries into good use around this county and @LOCATION1",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 382,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @ORGANIZATION1's benefit society imensely. They help us learn about far away places, they help us with our school work and the let us communicate with other people online. We need computers. Computers allow us to learn about other countries, people, @CAPS1 etc... How would we learn about places we might want to go on vacation? Or how would we learn about the places we want to see, and the places we want to stay away from? We need computers to do this. We would never even know of some countries if it werent for computers. Next computers help us with our school work. Sometimes we get project spend most of them involve research! Computers make this a whole lot easier on us. Also instead of lugging your text books from school to home and back, we can use online textbooks. Why give us extra work, it's a waste of everyones time. Instead of wasting your minutes talking on a phone, you can chat online. Wasting minutes is wasting money. Who wants to do that? Besides using the keyboard to chat with friends will help you in the future. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 studens, say they prefer to talk online then to call someone. Computers benefit us by easy aces to info. Computers are a lot easier to help us with school work, than textbooks are. Lastly computers let us talk to other people online. Without computers everything would be so much harder.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11863,5,"The authors mood in the memoir @PERSON1 is thankful. I know this, because in paragraph @NUM1 @CAPS1 talks about his culinary skills and how grateful he is to have it passed down to him. This shows us that he is very much thankful for this skill, because some people don't know how to cook and to be able to cook is a blessing. This also shows us that he is proud of his culture and who he is as a person. @PERSON2 quotes ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice."" In @CAPS2, this shows us that @PERSON2 was very much appreciative of all that his parents had done for him. Also that he loved his parents dearly and every chance he gets, he thanks them. Therefore in the memoir Narciso gives off the mood of being thankful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18031,7,"Patience is a very long task @CAPS2 the rewards out weigh the time you waited for the thing you were waiting for. From waiting for a computer to start up to a line to a rollar coaster, your patience will be rewarded. However many people are not very patient. (@CAPS1 me) @CAPS2 they can learn over time to be as patient as monks. In short, be @CAPS1 a trile and lots of patience.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6077,3,"The settings affect the cyclists for many reasons. One, if the setting is nice, the rider can concentrate on the scenery not on only pain they are having. also, if the setting isn’t very nice, the rider would probably concentrate more on the pain than they would the scenery. another thing is if the setting is very hilly & the rider has to drive over it, it @MONTH1 not feel the greatest. The cyclist would get even more pain than before plus the cyclist could could get dehydrated faster, the setting really does affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21436,8," We all know the benefits of laughter. Many people believe that laughter is an important part of any relationship. Is there anything more to laughter? Can one person be happy without laughing? I have never gone a day without laughing. I know the benefits of laughter. Do you? I know the benefits of laughter. Its truly amazing how something so simple can bring people together, make friends and fix relationships, or make someones day a little better if they are having a rough time. There was a time in ninth grade when my best friend and I got into an argument because I didn't ask him to be on our basketball team for a tournament that happened once a year. After talking it out, and my best friend cracking a few jokes, it had fixed everything. My point is that laughing can release tension, not make everything so serious. Laughing can help you make friends too. Around the world, simple laughter can bring two or more people together. What about enemies? Laughter could possibly show you something you like in that person your not too fond of. Laughter happens to be great for health too, and its a proven fact. What happens when you are really stressed about a test you had recently taken or something different? There are a lot of ways to handle stress, but a really good technique is simply laughter. Try going onto the internet to find something funny that will make you laugh, go hangout with a friend or group of friends, or go and find something else that might have you laugh a little. A famous @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 always gets nervous before one of his shows, and it just so happens that laughter is something he uses to shake off his butterflies. Its quite amazing how laughter can help you in many situations. Do you ever find yourself feeling down or stressed? Have you had a good laugh recently? Laughing will probably help. If you are having trouble bonding with a friend or simply having a bad day laughter will be a great cure. Laughter is great for your health, and laughter has helped me in my life so far. and whether you realize it or not laughter helps you to. Your laughter can help others too! Next time you feel down or need something to lift your spirits have some fun with friends or do something you enjoy that might give you a good laugh.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 859,1,"The innovation of computers was a great leap into discovery. Unfortunately, the negative aspects of this magnificent invention detract from the novelty. With the computer came a plague of not exercising and a disinterest in, perhaps even an inabilty to enjoy nature. On top of this destruction of the mind, this monster is the cruel cause of many declining relationships for who has time for friends and family while in the middle of an internet game? As unique and intriguing as the computer might be, it is slowly destroying the mind. Increasing interest in a monitor tends to result in decreasing care for exercise as well as a decline in the amount of exercise gotten each day. While playing on the computer, the mind @MONTH1 be racing but the body sits unmoving, @CAPS1 activity is being done. Indeed, for some the addiction is awful enough that the person only moves to get food, use a restroom, go to bed or when a parent demands it. All of the day's food settles into the stomach and little to none of it is burned off. Meanwhile, in some of the more severe cases the person is so entranced that bedtimes are pushed later. Sleep is essential to the body and mind and going without can be damaging. Nowadays the computer detracts from the sleep and exercise that the body requires. Even nature suffered from the advent of computers. Fewer people went out to admire its beauty. Nature is a wonderful teacher about the circle of life and the natural way of the world. Oftentimes parallels can be drawn between the wild and the tamed. Attached as people are to computers, they cannot experience the world to the fullest. Some argue that flora and fauna can be found online, but seeing a picture is different, almost cheating, compared to being beside the plant, able to study it from all angles rather than in an unmoving form. The experience is not the same. Also, computers are indoors, so the true world is chielded from view. Even nowadays with laptops if one was to be brought outside, the user would be focusing on the screen, not what is around them. Computers have severely cut down on the admiration of nature. Even family and friends suffer when computers are around. Many people barely pay attention to conversation while focusing on the screen. They tend to onlypretend to listen half the time. Even when chatting with friends online, the conversation is disjointed because attention is probably focused on another part of the internet. Frequently, during conversations without a computer nearby, the mind is focused on something from earlier that day. Relationships are suffering, and computers are at fault. Computers are sucking in society, more of it each day. Much of what is done on computers, like the study of faraway places, can easily be found in books. Computers have resulted in a lack of exercise, less time with nature, strained relationships, and a generally unhealthy lifestyle. Through all of this, they have returned little to society. Why does the world continue to put up with computers and their negative effect on humanity?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7182,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The text first mentions that, “there was no one in sight, not a building, car, or a structure of any kind.” This shows that the cyclist felt in saccure and was starting to upset him. Another example from the text that describes the cyclist is, “One ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest mule greeted me.” You can see through the cyclists that he was frustrated that the water from the pumps were lame. This also could have sparked fear in the cyclist because he was running out of water. He was terrified that since the water tasted like, “battery acid,” that he wouldn’t last much longer. In- conclusion, the features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1647,1,"Dear newspaper, Technology is a very useful thing But is also a bad thing, it makes people lazy on . A computer is a multi-use tool. Along with this people cango on any website . Anything, as in research or personal reasons. First off, let me point out that computers are useful multi-purpose tools. Computers can also, @CAPS1 people slugish bor lazy. i feel this way because, to many people sit infront of computer instead of getting up & being active. Being acive gad and important for people. A lot of people are not active because they on the computer harms on end. Students sometimes go home and strayht oor tug computer instead of doing homework. Moreover, computers can help you pay bills. Do research, or maybe just for fun play games. There is an ulimeted number of websites & to cp on through to hep you with many of needs. Uploading family pictures from your last vacation? its simple with most computer soft . Finally, computers is kind of like one . They can even become a blank just waiting for a pinest of insparation.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9328,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he basically saying hes never taking that test again. The author is showing that the character doesn’t like this test. And would rather not take it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16024,6,"Many problems faced the construction workers of the Empire State building, @CAPS1 in allowing dirigibles to dock. To begin, construction for dirigibles on the Empire State building was dangerouse. Dirigibles couldn't do many basic things to dock at the building. For example ""dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building."" (@CAPS2 @NUM1) Mooring was impossible because it was against ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@CAPS2 @NUM1) This made it illegal for a ship to tie to the Empire State Building. Also, the greatest threat to dirigibles was nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@CAPS2 @NUM3) Because of this and be fact that construction on such a high building at the time was unpractable, dirigibles never touched the Empire State building. So to close, the difficulty of building dirigible landing gear and of landing dirigibles ultimately ened the Empire State Building docks.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11852,5,"The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez was happy and thankful. His parents taught him many things about their cuban back ground, like cooking and music. His parents gave up many things to comfort Narciso and make him at home. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" His parents turned their house into a home for other People as well. ""My parents always kept their Arms and door open to the many people we considered family."" Narciso's parents would take in anybody that needed a place to stay until they got back on their feet. Narciso's parents were very loving to the community and help out as much as the could in making that place at home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6103,3,"During the passage “Do not exceed speed limit”, the cyclist endures many hardships. One of those countless hardships was the setting that he was in. while he was lost, thirsty, and exhausted, he remained all the while in “The high deserts of California in June”. This shows that the temperature most of been unbearable. This would cause the cyclist to tire out and dehydrate faster than usual. Also, the surface he was riding on had many steep hills, as it is said when he says “over one long, crippling hill,” This shows that the hills took a lot of energy to get up. And finally, the author says that “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind."" This shows that if he needed help, there was no one around to lend him a hand. That is how the setting affected the cyclist in a negative way.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19352,7,"I am going to be writing about a time when I was patient. Me and my family were setting up decorations one day for my @NUM1 @CAPS2. I was so excited and jumpy. I was turning ten soit was a big deal for me. We all ready had the cake which was decorated in beautiful yellow and white frosting. It also had a picture of horses running @CAPS4 it and “@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3.” @CAPS4 it. The party started at @NUM2 am. I was in my pretty pink flowered dress and putting streamers up. I keeped @CAPS4 asking what the time was, and my mom would just say to be patient. I had to wait. I was a very impatient girl. I was just so excited I couldn’t wait. I then remembered that I was supposed to be patient so I was. I played games and read books while I was waiting for the guests. Then before I knew it the door bell rang and all my family came running in with presents and curds. I guess all that waiting really payed off. I also got some really cool presents.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3598,2,"Reading it is a joy to some and a pain to others. Do I think objects in the library with offensive details should be cleaned up or taken off the shelves? There are some things that could be censored, and others that wouldn't be worth using if it was censored. However, yes I do believe that there are items in the library that could be censored. I am going to tell you why they should be censored, and what should be censored. The types of items in the library that shouldn't be cleaned up. A perfect example of those items are historical documentaries or historical books they have no other way to get the information needed across to the reader or viewer. There are other types of library items in the library that could be censored. Like there are some magazines and movies that show uncensored scenes or pages that are not need to make a view across if there even is a view to get across. I think a movie, book, or a magazine should only be uncensored if it is trying to get a point across. If there are uncensored items not getting a point across then they have no business being in the library. As people can see library there are circumstances where a book, movie, or magazine uncensored is very useful in getting information. There are more circumstances where a library item does not need uncensored details because it is just offensive. If you ask me if I think censorship is important in libraries than I would have to say yes and no. I just gave you some reasons why I would say that. The next time you are in the library looking for a book ask your self one question is it to offensive to be important.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15427,6,"The builder's of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the mast. For example, when the builder's decided to construct the mast they knew that it could not just be placed on the roof. It had to be somehow attatched to the foundation of the building because the dirigible, ""would add stress to the building's frame."" Also, after the Hindenburg disaster the builders realized that the hydrogen inside the dirigible ""is highly flammable."" If a dirigible were to explode over New York City it would not only kill the people in the dirigible, but on the ground as well. Finally, the biggest obstacle of the mooring mast ""was nature itself."" The wind at the top of the building are very strong and would have swiveled around the mast. The many obstacles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building never allowed any dirigibles to land there.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12635,5,"In the story ""Narciso Rodriguez From Home: ""The Blueprints of Our Lives. In the story the little girl lives in a one bedroom apartment and she doesn't call at home untill she move's into a three bedroom apartment they maybe she will call it home. She doesn't really know adout love & to be kinda Also, to care about people. But at the end of the story she knows adout love she say's ""I will nevere forget how my parents turned this simple house into a hom"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20901,8," One @DATE1 @TIME1 back in @DATE2 a couple of friends and I were beyond bored. Nothing seemed fun to do. @CAPS1 to a movie, @CAPS1 to get some food, not even call of @CAPS2 sounded entertaining. @LOCATION1 parents told us to go do something outside. Before leaving his house he slips into his pantry and grabs two hefty rolls of @CAPS11 wrap. ""I think I have an idea"" @CAPS3 @PERSON1 as we walk away from his house. I have no clue where we're walking to. @PERSON1 just keeps saying ""follow me."" We all follow in a pack down the street until we show up at @ORGANIZATION1. Cold and confused, we sit in the parking lot of the @ORGANIZATION1 waiting for all cars to be gone. Once all the cars are gone @PERSON1 informs us on what we are doing here. He tells us of something he did with his cousins awhile back. You have three people on the roof of @ORGANIZATION1's @ORGANIZATION1 scoping out the road and you have four @CAPS4. ""@CAPS4?"" I question @PERSON1 with a dumb-found look on my face. ""@CAPS5, @CAPS4"" @CAPS6 @CAPS4 are the people who will be putting the @CAPS11 wrap across the street. The plan is when no cars are coming in the distance, we hop the fence and put @CAPS11 wrap across the street so cars drive through it and stop. ""@CAPS7 sounds fun, but uh what happens when the @CAPS15 stops before the @CAPS11 wrap and takes it down?"" @CAPS8 @CAPS9, looking down on the whole operation. @PERSON1 laughs a little bit and @CAPS8 ""@CAPS10 then it will be an inconvenience for the driver."" @CAPS11 wrapping roadways sounded a lot for fun then black ops so we were all down. Everyone gets in position. Mark, @PERSON4, @PERSON2 and myself are down by the roadway in a secluded area by some bushes. While @PERSON1, @CAPS9 and @PERSON3 are posted up on the roof giving us updates about the oncoming traffic. We get a call from @CAPS9 saying that it is clear for awhile. I hang up the phone, tell the guys and @DATE3 up from the ground. We all get over the fence in quick time and start a first layer of @CAPS11 wrap. I get another call. It's @CAPS14 saying that there are three cars are almost to our location. We drop the @CAPS11 wrap in the bush and get back over the fence. The @CAPS15 comes up close and it's a cop. Of course. We all just stay hidden down in the bushes while the cop takes our huge roll of wrap. We are only left with one more roll , which should before enough. @CAPS9 calls again and @CAPS8 it's clear. We go out again and start to set up the prank. We wrap it around @NUM1 times and make it as tight as it possibly could be. Perfect. ""@CAPS15 incoming! Go! Go! Go!"" yells mark while trying to get over the fence. We all make it over in time and go prone in the field. Laying there anxiously someone whispers ""here it comes."" The @CAPS15 slams on it's breaks, and the driver gets out. He looks at @CAPS11 wrap in disgust and looks around for the kids responsible. @CAPS9 lets out a big ""hahaha"" from the roof that even we can hear perfectly. The guy walks up the fence looks around a bit more and mutters for foul words under his breath. He didn't even bother continuing through, he just got in his @CAPS15 and backed up.""@CAPS16 my god dude that was hilarious!"" I say with a wide grin on my @NUM2 @CAPS9 and @PERSON3 come dashing through the field with a scared expression on all of their faces.""@CAPS18!"" yells @CAPS19 scurried into different directions. Mark, @PERSON2 and I jolt over the fence and hide in the play structure for awhile. While the rest of the boys are booking it to a safe haven. We eventually all meet back up at @LOCATION1 house without getting ""caught"" by the authorities. It's nights like @CAPS6 were laughter really plays a key role between a big group of friends like I have. The laughing and running makes us closer as a group. it brings us together.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1665,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Advances in computer technology have positively affected the society we live in today. Computers teach hand-eye coordination, help kids learn inside and outside of school, and connect the world socially. These amazing devices have done nothing to harm the new generation. In fact, they have done quite the opposite. Computers are an excellent way of teaching hand-eye coordination. People who are opposed to using computers believe that all they do is make kids lazy and ignorant. This is not the case. The coordination gained from using the mouse games over to sports like baseball and lacross. Players have to look at an incoming ball, and guide their stick or mitt to catch the ball. As you can see, coordination is essential to sports. It is also needed for simple every day tasks around the house. These could be as plain as just taking out the trash or cooking meals. We overlook the fact they easy jobs like these still require coordination. A misplaced pot could pour boiling water on the floor and cause a huge mess. W are lucky that we live in a world with such a good teacher of hand-ey coordination. Computers are the worlds most knowledgeable teachers. No matter how hard you try if you are using a computer, you will learn something. The internet is a best cache of information. In the current day and age, the environment is a growing concern. Paper no made from trees, so must be cut down. It takes forty years for a tree to grow, and seconds to cut one down. Schools everywhere should use computer and keyboards for work instead of paper and pencil. Since most students are familiar with computers, they enjoy working with them more than writing. The average kid could learn more in an hour with a computer than they would whole day at school. The transiton needs to be made. Computers are also a massive social network. Instant messaging and @CAPS2 are now primary sources of communication. If it hasn't for computers, I wouldn't be able to talk to my friend that moved to @LOCATION2 two years ago. This is just one example of how social networks are helpful. They help people stay connected with old friends, and work. All major corporations use computers to invest, sell products, and store information. Computers are the ultimate way communicate. Obviously, computers are growing exponentially in popularity. The @LOCATION1 should put this to use. Imagine a more eco-friendly country where we don't have to cut down a million acres of @CAPS3 @CAPS4 rainforest every year. The benifits of computers are endless. Three of these are hand-eye coordination, knowledge and communication.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15438,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were the docking itself, nature and the overall construction of these dirigibles. There was all so an existing law against these air ships.Docking the dirigibles to the top off the Empire State Building would add a great amount of stress to the building. The builders would have to spend sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications to the building overall. The greatest safety issue was the construction of these balloons from outside the United States. They used hydrogen which was highly flammable, there was one incident on May 6, 1937 where the German dirigibles caught on fire. This was known as the Hindenburg's accident. Builders knew this can risk to the densely populated area of New York. But the greatest obstacle was nature itself. When the dirigibles would dock violent air currents would cause the back of the airship to swivel round and round the Mooring Mast. The law against airships were they were not allowed to fly low around urban areas.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9050,4,Saeng feels more comfirtable in the spring because it reminds her of home. She probably never experienced snow or winter before. So nothing in this time of year reminds her of home. In the spring it does because the geese return and the hibiscus grow again making everything feel like its her home again. Conferdence is what she receives when spring comes again. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16378,6,"The obstacles the buildes of the empire state building faced were that they had to make it strong. Also they had to be sure that the dirigibles wouldn't destroy the building when it landed. they also had to care ful that the dirigbles would crash in to the building when it was droping off the papers. An other obstacle for the workes was that the driagbles would not be able to land easily. Finally, they would have to make sure that nothing is out of place and working.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9597,4,The author concluds the story with this paragraph to show that next spring she will have anoter chane. The author shows that Saeng will relate to the blooms or the hybiscus plant and take the test again. The author does this to leave a clif haber and it shows there is more to Saeng’s life but it is still to come. In the story Saeng is trys to get used to change and that she is have a hard time. Her moter holes cheer her up but just like the winter comes. Saeng will Have next spring to take the divers test again.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4481,2,"Libraries have no right in my mind to decide what is offensive and what isn't. Libraries shouldn't have the view on censorship the people who rent or buy the items should. The @CAPS1 has an idea of what is offensive but they shouldn't be able to make that decision. If the @CAPS1 wants buisness they should try to make sure the customers are happy. Libraries should take surveys of what everyone wants. Not all the people in the world have the same idea of what is a offensive book, magazine, movies, music, etc. The different views of people can vary from a lot to none at all. If the people feel that they are that offensive then they should bring it up with the @CAPS1 and find a solution instead of getting rid of these items. A safe but easy solution would be to create a section just for offensive items the @CAPS1 or people claim them to be. Another possible solution would be to jus rearrange the area's of the books into to main category's such as offensive and none offensive, and then break it down into their specific categorys. So the libraries need to have a survey showing what items the people think are bad and the librarys opinions and then go on from there. The surveys could be made up of a paper one you fill out in the @CAPS1 to it's online website. The survey would have a list of books, movies, magazines, and music that people could check off. Now the @CAPS1 needs money to keep books and other items in stock and so they can repair them if necessary. So if the @CAPS1 feels that a book is offensive they shouldn't have the right to censorship. All these books have been in libraries for this amount of time why change it now. Think about it if it was offensive why did they put it into the @CAPS1 in the first place. So in conclusion the @CAPS1 should have know right to censorship books, movies, magazines, music, or any other item they have. This would cost time and money which they don't have. Customers could possibly stop comming in because of the change which would be a loss of money. Now everyone knows a big loss of money could hurt any buisness and possibley bankrupt them, or could take weeks, months, or even years to recover and no buisness wants that. So the easy way to make sure that doesn't happen jus leave everything the way it is",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15529,6,"In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building, the builders faced many obstacles. One obstacle being to much stress on the buildings frame. The dirigible would somehow have to be connected to the frame, which was @NUM1 feet below. Another problem the builders faced was safty. The workers wanted to use hydrogen to keep the dirigibles afloat, but realized hydrogen is flamable. Other problems where nature and law. Nature's winds would complicate the dirigibles from staying still. Law stated that the dirigibles would be flying to low for urban areas. The builders of the Empire State Building faced many problems that led to a plan failed.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16019,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there include: hydrogen gas being highly flammable, high winds and wind shifts at the top of the building, laws that airships could not fly too low over cities such as New York City.The problem of hydrogen gas came to them when a blimp blew up in New Jersey, then the owners realized how bad it could've been in the city. When it comes to high winds the excerpt says, ""... if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around..."" Also, the law mentioned would have made it illegal for blimps to come close to the Empire State Building",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1184,1,"In todays day in age, computers are a key part to business, education, and recreation and they benefit our society. First of all, you can get a better education learning from them, also, it is a great way to communicate with people. Finally, it even teacher hand-eye coordination that you could use in your everyday life. My first point is that you can get a better education using them. For example, the textbooks that we use in social studies at our school still refers to @LOCATION3 as the @LOCATION1. Computers are a great way to get up-to-date information about the world. ""With our outdated textbooks in school, the @CAPS1 is our number one recourse to get information."" @CAPS2 @PERSON2 eighth grade teacher. With computers, you can learn about far away places without learing the comfort of your own home. In addition to getting a great education from them, computers are an eyelent form of communication. I remember when I was in @NUM1 grade and my father was across the world on a business trip. Our phones couldn't call long distance so we relied on computers to communicate with each other. This helped me get over my father's absence. When you use a computer to communicate you are also saving money."" You can save over @MONEY1 a year. When you use the @CAPS1 to communicate over a cell phone."" @CAPS2 @PERSON1, electronics expert. Finally, the use of a computer increas hand-eye coordination. With all the typing you do on a key board, your hand dexterity increases by the second. In fact, ""@PERCENT1 of computer users are more coordinated throught their day, opposed to people who don't own a computer."" @CAPS3 a recent pole in the @LOCATION2 times. And in this day in age hand-eye coordiantion is a neccesity. Besides wouldn't you like to have the ability to have your hands work without having to look at them? So as you can see, computers would benifit society and everyone who uses them. They are a great benifit that @CAPS4's need for their education and buisness. Thank you for listenging.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1368,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 percentage of people all over the world do you think have a computer and think that it has a positive effect on them? Well about @PERCENT1 of the world says that computers are a great way to communicate with friends, family, and different people around the world. They also mentioned now its a good hands on-eye coordination on adults and students. A wonderful educational source to use in schools, jobs, etc. First off the reason why I say that its a great way to communicate is because of the programs that computers have memoried into them that are little numbers all around universe to connect with your friends, family, and people around earth. For example like yahoo, facebook, twitter,, myspace, etc these are all types of ways to communicate with people and bring more social which is a healthy way in life. More than half the world have these communication source because one it easier and you get more of your mind. Another reason why they @MONTH1 have these connections its probably because its a better way to see one another if you live in different parts of earth. The reason why I said that its another way of seeing people around the world is because right now I'm living in @LOCATION1 and in order to see the ones I love and care about is by my myspace and facebook to be able to see my family and friends that lice that live in different locations from me like @LOCATION2, @LOCATION4, @LOCATION3, etc. Another reason is because its a good hands on eye coordination on adults and students.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6453,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because in paragraph @NUM1 it say that the temperture was was getting high and that when he drank the water that it test like battery acid. This would affect him because it it was so hot and the water was starting to get hot how would he be able to get through the day with out pasing out also in paragraph @NUM2 it say the roads changed to hill when you ride up and down the hills you become tired from pumping you legs then you would feel hot and tiredd and would not want to ride the bike. That how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11914,5,"The mood set by the author is a very happy one. This is shown by explaining how happy he is to be a Cuban-@CAPS1 and be free of dark times. He also shows his happiness by explaining his qualities and family. Overall, Narciso Rodriguez wants people to be happy with their lives and family and heritage. That is the mood set by Narciso Rodriguez.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 161,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Computers have a very positive effect on people. I agree that computers have a positive effect. They teach hand-eye coordination. It gives people the ability to learn about people and places, and you can talk online @CAPS3 first reason is that computers teach hand-eye coordination. for example, when you learn how to type, you can memerize the keys. Therefore, you don't have to look down at the keyboard. Computers also teach hand-eye when using a mouse. When you want to click on something you have to look at the screen and move the mouse to click on the icon. @CAPS3 final reason that computers teach hand eye is once you what to do, you don't have to serch the screen for an icon. You could just move the mouse to a spot on the screen and no what to do. Computers teach hand-eye coordination when you type, when you move the mouse to click on an icon, and when you memorize all of the icons. @CAPS3 second reason is computers make you smarter. For example, if you have a history project, and you need to know about china, you can use the computer. How many times would china be in the newspaper? Using the computer can access quick information. Another example is computers can find information on famous people no one knew about. You could be able to find what college a famous actor went to in a matter of seconds. @CAPS3 last example is that a serch engine can look up famous pictures. If you are working on a project that requires pictures, @ORGANIZATION1 can have the photos you need. Computers make you smarter because you can look up different countries, you could look up people, and famous countries. @CAPS3 last reason is computers give you the ability to talk online with friends, for example, you could catch up with friends you don't see that much during school. Talking online is just as fast as texting. Also, you could continue a conversation you had with a friend. Did the bell ring in the middle of a conversation? Well, you can continue it on @CAPS4, or @CAPS5. Lastly, you can just plain talk. You could make plans, or you can talk about upcoming events. Computers give you access to talking with your friends. In conclusion, computers do have a positive effect on other people. You can get hand-eye coordination, you can look up foreign countries and people, and you can talk with your friends.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19170,7,"Patience someone was patient with me when I did not understand something. Someone was a teacher. The teacher did not complain about helping me. Along with the students in the room. When the teacher was helping me they sat and quietly did there work. The teacher understand that I did not understand @CAPS1 to do the work. It was during math. We were tarning about positive and negitive intergers. My question was, ''@CAPS1 do you order them from last to greatess''. She replied , ''I asy would you like me to show you?'' I said , ''@CAPS2 please''. So for about @NUM1 minutes she helped me. In that time my whole class sat and did there work. That is one time when people were patient with me.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4722,2,"In our socioty, a lot of people and places take offense to certain things. In my opinion, librarys and book stores should not remove things from their shelves becuase they could be offensive. People have the right to pick something up, over look it, and decide wheither it's offensive or not. If a book or movie that someone wrote or directed could get to them bad enough for them to freak out and complain to places that are selling it, then that book or movie probably shouldnt have been made. I agree, somethings are offensive, but if someone you dont know wrote it or directed it, then dont let it bother you. I believe that music is a way that people express themselves. I honestly don't think that music should be censored when it's sold in any store. If the material is to graphic for children or some people, then don't listen to it. If you need things to be censored because of words or topics just so you can read, listen, or watch them, then maybe you just should do it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13438,5,"In the memoir ""@PERSON1"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives the author creates a positive, greatful mood. The author ""will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" I know because a writes a few paragraphs just to show how thankful @CAPS1 is to his parents. @CAPS1 describes how great their jobs were in Cuba and then how poor they became in the @LOCATION1, but yet they still worked hard to give their children a better life. ""In a simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country where I celebrated my first birthdays."" @CAPS1 describes everything, as a positive learning experience, but shows that throughout the memoir, the theme is positive and greatful.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8920,4,I think the author wanted to express Saeng when she took a vowed and to express the way he felt. When the statement was made that also I think it was to make readers feel interest in it but mainly to help understand.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21584,8," Laughter... what is laughter? Do you expect me to tell you what laughter is? I wish I could but I can't, describing laughter is like describing what water taste like or feels like (besides using the word wet) it's just one of those things that you think its easy to describe to someone because it's a part of your every day life but in reality it's one of the most complex things there could be out there.Even though I can't describe it I do have general concept of it. Now there's many reasons to laugh or the type of laughter or the feeling behind it. In my case I believe I'm a person that @CAPS1 @CAPS2 laughs once a day. I laugh all the time from my friend falling , hearing a joke , remembering something in the past , from just pure exhaustion (yes I laugh @CAPS1 times when I'm just so worn out and stressed) the list go's on and on. In short I live my life laughing every day. I don't think I'm such a happy go lucky person that makes others laugh alongside her, but I have gotten comments from my friends saying that's the case. This is one of the wonders of laughter if you see someone laughing enjoying their time you just somehow end up laughing along side them. It makes me happy when I hear one of my friends say "" oh @PERSON1 you just made my day..."" why? It makes me happy because I know that, that friend just now I was able to make even if just a little a nice day. One time in my life though I met someone, someone that now I hold very dear, someone who I just can't picture my life without that someone would be right to say he lost his laughter. It was @DATE1, and my friend @CAPS3 had invited me to The @CAPS4 @CAPS5 in @CAPS6 to meet up with some of her @CAPS4 friends. The reunion with her friends was @CAPS1 this coffee shop. I knew no one but her so i felt out of place. So after just sitting back like a wall flower I decided to go to the ice cream shop just next to the coffee shop and when I realized one of the boys in our group decided to come as well. We hanged out he told me about himself I told him about myself as well. After that day we stayed connected we had long hour conversations through this video calling site called @ORGANIZATION1. We chatted in @CAPS7 @CAPS8 every singled day, and pulled all nighters on the phone just talking to each other. After around a month of talking and staying connected we became more close, close enough for him to talk about more serious matters with me. Well now this boy I hold very dear to me has had such a hard life. Where could I possibly begin to tell you the hardships his been through. Oh what about the fact that his adoptive ...hhmmm nah many people out there are adopted that's not that harsh for most. Okay what about the fact that his adoptive father abused of him every chance he got and his adoptive mom literally sat back and watched him do it, not good enough? Okay what about the fact that the one thing that kept him going his friend, the one that was all ways next to him. His to say child hood friends, the child hood friend you can do @CAPS9 in the world yet would not judge, would not think the worst of you if you did something to be ashamed of, the one that was willing to stay up with you for days in a row just for you not to cry your self to sleep. That friend of him passed away in a car rec in his second year of middle school. His life consisted of waking up in the mornings walking to school and being ignore by everyone around him. Coming back from school and putting up with your adoptive family screaming @CAPS1 him, called him names ending up to being beaten just because they can. Do you think he laughed? Well actually he did but, his laugh was not a laugh of joy. Even though he laughed it was as if nothing no feeling what so ever was behind that laugh a robotic laugh. This for me is such a hard thing to stand. It tears me up because this person is someone very dear to me his such a wonderful individual his just now part of my life and I cant see him out of it now. Yet he is suffering he cant even laugh and feel joy. Up to this day I still see him and I have decide that one day for sure I will make him laugh. We laugh when we talk but I want him to experience the laugh he has yet to have experience and I know one day for sure he will.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18769,7,"Patience is a feeling that you get when you experience are difficult task and do your best to overcome it without complaining about the task, like when your getting paint out and then you squeeze it and it won’t come out, but you still keep trying until you figure out that it is gone. Then you go get a new bottle to start using. I wish that more people were patient, then we wouldn’t gave to listens to constant complaining.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21057,8," Misunderstood ""@CAPS1 the heck is her problem,"" is @CAPS1 I thought as I glanced over and @CAPS7 gave me @CAPS15 nasty look. @CAPS27 obviously thought the new girl was weird. @CAPS7 @CAPS24 had @CAPS15 killer look in her eyes. I observed the way @CAPS7 glared at @CAPS27 in the room, and how her facial expression never changed. ""@CAPS2 huh,"" my cousin, @PERSON1, asked while staring at @CAPS3, who was, of course, the new girl. I glanced over at @CAPS3 and then back at @LOCATION1. ""@CAPS5 on! @CAPS11 can say @CAPS26! @CAPS7 can't hear us,"" @CAPS7 whispered. @PERSON1's whispers weren't exactly as quiet as @CAPS7 thought. @CAPS3 could probably hear everything we were saying. I glanced over at her again, and I noticed behind those cold eyes, @CAPS7 seemed kinda lonely and sad. I guess @CAPS26's possible, @CAPS7 has been the talk of the whole @NUM1 grade class since @CAPS7 arrived about @NUM2 days ago. ""@CAPS6 hello! Taylor? Are @CAPS11 there?"" @CAPS7 was now in my face and view of @CAPS3. ""@CAPS7 does look @CAPS2 on the outside, but maybe @CAPS7 is actually a nice person,"" is @CAPS1 I said, but I knew @CAPS15 would not satisfy @PERSON1 at all. ""@CAPS1? Definitely not. Her parents probably belong to some mafia or something. @CAPS7 gives off that type of aura."" ""@CAPS11 shouldn't judge someone @CAPS31 their looks,"" I responded. @PERSON1 gave me @CAPS15 sort of confusing look. ""I mean, @CAPS11 never know unless @CAPS11 ask."" ""@CAPS12 if your such the expert on @CAPS26 why don't @CAPS11 go sit with her at lunch, and ask her."" @CAPS13 man. There was @CAPS29 way I could possibly do that. I know I @CAPS24 said not to judge someone @CAPS31 their appearance, but @CAPS7 looks like if I even open my mouth to speak to her @CAPS7 will kick me in the shins. @CAPS1 a predicament @CAPS15 is. ""@CAPS14't @CAPS11 the one who wants to get to know her? @CAPS11 ask."" @CAPS15 one won't @CAPS31 past @PERSON1 either. ""@CAPS16? @CAPS29 way. We already decided @CAPS11 were going to ask. @CAPS11 can't @CAPS5 back with the same thing,"" @CAPS7 argued. @PERSON1 is a very stubborn girl, and though @CAPS7 likes to pick on me, @CAPS7 really is a nice person. Also, despite her obnoxious exterior @CAPS7 has a lot of friends, unlike myself who is shy. ""@CAPS17,"" I muttered. I had to give in. @CAPS29 matter @CAPS1 I say, I am going to have to face @CAPS3. ""That's @CAPS1 I thought. @CAPS26's a good opportunity to make a new friend. I am @CAPS24 helping @CAPS11 out."" @CAPS7 had @CAPS15 mischievous grin on her face. I glanced over at @CAPS3 one last time, and then at the clock. @CAPS26 was @NUM3 in the morning, give or take a minute or two since I am nearsighted, but lunch is at @NUM4. I couldn't pay attention at all during class. I was too busy playing out possible scenes that might occur at lunch. Maybe @CAPS7 isn't mean, maybe @CAPS7 is actually nice, and people are @CAPS24 misunderstanding, including me. That aside, I don't even know @CAPS1 to say; I can't @CAPS24 casually walk up, sit down in front her, look her in the eye, smile and say ""@CAPS21. How are @CAPS11?"" The impossible is @CAPS24 impossible and people should @CAPS24 except @CAPS26, in fact @CAPS26 should actually be a fundamental law. I looked over at the clock again, @CAPS26 was now @NUM5 and still ticking. ""@NUM6 minutes,"" @PERSON1 said in some type of singing tone. I sighed. ""@CAPS22? I kept watching @CAPS11 during class. Looked like @CAPS11 were going to jump through that window and run away at any second."" @CAPS7 laughed. My seat was @CAPS31 the window, and that option had not slipped my mind. ""I have @CAPS29 clue @CAPS1 I am going to say,"" I finally said. ""@CAPS24 say anything that won't offend her. Ask about her hobbies or @CAPS1 @CAPS7 likes. Talk about school even,"" @CAPS7 replied. ""@CAPS26's time. Go."" @CAPS27 piled out of the class room and in to the cafeteria. After I got my lunch, I started walking toward the table @CAPS3 was at; @CAPS29 one was around her, @CAPS29 surprise there. ""@CAPS6, @MONTH1 I sit here,"" I asked. My voice was kinda shaky and I thought I was about to have a heart attack from nervousness and from surprise at @CAPS1 @CAPS7 said. ""@CAPS31 all means, go ahead,"" @CAPS7 smiled. Wow, @CAPS7 is really cute when @CAPS7 smiles. I smiled back and sat down. I created a conversation @CAPS31 introducing myself and asking how @CAPS7 was and how @CAPS7 liked @CAPS15 school. To my surprise we actually shared a common interest, and bonded. @CAPS7 was laughing. I was laughing. We were laughing together. After that day, and even still today we are the best of friends. That slight feeling of laughter is @CAPS24 so nostalgic, @CAPS26's almost indescribable. @CAPS24 something so minor such as laughter, or even a little giggle, can bring anybody together to form a simple bond, friendship. Laughter is truly an essential part of life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21181,8," It was a regular day in @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1. That special day we were supposed to start our state writing tests. I wasn't necessarily worried about it due to the fact that I have always done good on state testing, and never failed at test for state testing. @CAPS22 it was pretty much a regular day for @PERSON1. But I didn't know @CAPS18 awaited me in the computer lab..... Thanks to new @ORGANIZATION1 state testing laws, we have to take the writing test on the computer. The only place in the school that has enough computers for the whole class to take was the either the @ORGANIZATION1 computer lab, or the old computer lab (I don't know why we used the @ORGANIZATION1 computer lab, but we did). @CAPS22, I was already in a hyper mood because @CAPS1's sense of humor normally cheers me up and puts me in a hyper mood. @CAPS22, as we were walking to the computer lab, me and @CAPS1 started cracking jokes about @PERSON3 mainly because everyone else does, @CAPS22 we just add to the effect. @CAPS19 we reached the computer lab, but the door was locked. @CAPS22 while we waited for @PERSON2 to lock her door and come down to the computer lab, me and @CAPS1 made a few more jokes about @PERSON3, but little did I know the real humor was awaiting for me in the computer lab. When @PERSON2 got to the door and unlocked it, I was the @ORGANIZATION1 to come in and sit down in the seat I desired. @PERSON4 followed next to me, and @CAPS4 next to him. I remember a trick with the computer when you push @CAPS5 @CAPS19 @CAPS6 @CAPS19 @CAPS7 and when it goes to a different screen, you push @CAPS8 and it will put the computer to sleep. I tried it a couple times while he was looking and he would always swat my hand away. After a while, I decided the best way to pull this trick was to make him forget about it, @CAPS19 do it when he was least expecting it. @CAPS22 about @NUM1 minutes later after I planned my trick, I tried it again. I caught him looking away at @CAPS4. @CAPS22 I pushed @CAPS5 @CAPS19 @CAPS6 @CAPS19 @CAPS7. @CAPS19 it went to a different screen and I pushed @CAPS8. My plan had worked. @CAPS19 @PERSON4 turned around right as soon as the computer was going to sleep and freaked out. He started cussing and hitting me. I thought this was mildly funny @CAPS22 I got a couple laughs out of it, but nothing could have prepared me for @CAPS18 was about to happen. After @PERSON4 woke his computer up and got started with his test, @CAPS4 asked @CAPS18 I was laughing about. I told him, ""@CAPS15, you should have seen it. I put @PERSON4's computer to sleep and he flipped out on me."" @CAPS4 laughed and went back to his test. Two minutes went by and @CAPS4 tapped on my shoulder. I looked at him and asked, ""@CAPS18 up kid?"" @CAPS19 @CAPS4 said, ""@CAPS21 this."" @CAPS22 I sat up straight and looked at him. @CAPS19 he asked @PERSON4, ""@CAPS18 did @PERSON1 do to your computer? This?"" and he held the power button down and shut the computer off right in the middle of @PERSON4's test. I thought I was going to cry. It was @CAPS22 funny me and @CAPS4 started laughing as loud as possible. @PERSON2, of course, wasn't happy about it. @CAPS22 she told me and @CAPS4 to quiet down. But it didn't matter. A little scolding didn't compare to how funny it was. @CAPS22 we ended up going back to our own tests. I hope I do good on this. I really need the grade to pass.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16491,6,"The Empire State Building was to be the tallest building ever made. At the top, was to be an accesable docking station for dirigibles called mooring masts. The idea of haveing a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building caused the whole building to be modified. It costed over sixty thousand dollars in modifications to accommodate the mooring mast. This project was the first of its kind and had many obsticles like the modifications. Some of those obsticles included the violent air currents and constant change in wind direction on top of the building. With the wind changes, the dirigible could swing around and hit the building or other buildings and fall on the densely populated New York City below. The solution to this was to tie lead bricks to the tail of the dirigible like what is used in the feilds when they land. Although the bricks keep the tail from moveing around, having them hang over a thousand feet above pedestrians was not save. In the end the idea of docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building was disbanded due to many problems that could arise.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13077,5,"The @CAPS1 of the @CAPS2 was happiness and out going, nice @CAPS3 told it good @CAPS3 felt happiness Solidarity.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18502,7,"I v'e been waiting for like two hours. When am I going to get my food. I was hungry so I told my mom she asked me if I wanted to go out my cat I said sure and went and got my jacket on. Mom said I got to go get dad, wait in the car so I went and waited for them for like a minutes. When they finally got out dad asked ?????????Shouted @CAPS1 @CAPS2. He said ok and we went. when we got there, there were no other stores that were open. When we went inside there were like a billion people in there. I was so hungry I could eat a pig. Metarorickly speaking. We went to the chicken area and we asked how long we would have to wait. And the guy at the counter said about two hours. After about @NUM1. I started to read a magazine and some people left but the people in front of us went in those seats. We were next to go sit down but it took about an hour. Before some people left. I didn't complain at all and I didn't ever talk at all, and I talk a lot. And that was the time I was very patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12403,5,"Based on the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the author created a mood. First of all in paragraph @NUM1 Narciso says ""here the innocent of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, endless celebrations... That formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This means that the author was trying to convey a happy sort of mood the setting that they were surrounded with me that the foundation to their warm spirited home as it said ""the backdrop life of our warm home."" @CAPS1 it also has a homey feeling. Second of all it also says ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" This means that he felt he was close enough to everybody in his community it was like family. They were all each other had anything not matter where they came from. Finally, in paragraph @NUM2 Narciso says ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength, and perseverance, and thank them repeatedly for that."" This means that the author is trying to convey is thanks and gratitude on who his parents made him. In conclusion the author created in mood through this memoir that family has many different meanings.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9295,4,"This shows that she has not givven up and is going to try hard to adopte and do well in this new land. It leavs a sad story off with a happy ending. The hibiscus is a sigh of hope and so is spring, this makes the en time thing be fkor, without this part the story would be a sad one, but with it is one of hope. The way that the rest of the story is told is as if this is a turning point or an end to the en time boot. It is on resa lution without a resolution.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10225,4,The author concludes the stoRy with this paragraph because this spRing she had made a mistake like buying the plants that were oveR @MONEY1 (dollaRs) and her motheR who disappointed with heR. So she figuRes That when The spRing comes again she could get another oppoRtuniy to do her best and to get it right This time. Also so she will not be a disappointment to heR motheR.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6623,3,"The cyclist pedaled through all types of different terrain. Through hills, high desert, flat roads and the woods. This cyclist took the advice of bunch old men who thought they knew a short cut to the Yosemite national park. This short cut turned out to be a nightmare. The cyclist had only brought so many water bottles and was quickly drinking them all. The setting of this story changed a lot making the cyclist at times have to pedal faster and slowes. The cyclist was quickly worn out and started to loose hope in himself. The terrain kept changing making it hard for him not to be thirsty. Eventually he drank all of his water and knew he would die of dehydration or a heat stroke. As he came up over a long hill he saw a bait store and stopped inside to have a drink vowed not to listen to a bunch of old guys again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3864,2,"KEEP @CAPS1 ON THE SHELF! I think we should not get rid of any books that are in the library. If we did that then there wouldn't be any books left. The only thing we should be worried about is the rated @CAPS2 movies. Yeah those can be taken out of the library. If one book is offensive to someone, then dont get it, but someone else might like that book. For example, an older woman is looking through this magazine, and she sees this teenage woman taking drugs, or being half naked. Although the teen sitting right next to her likes that gossip. We shouldn't get rid of any books because then we would only be down to one genre. There wouldn't be any categories left in the library. A good idea is to separate the books, put the ones that seem offensive in the back. keep the childrens books away from the big mystery horror books. Another example is this. A student goes to the library to work on a history report over slavory, but there isn't any books on slavory because somebody thought it was offensive against african americans. I understand that there is reasons why some books are taken out of the library because of some sexual content. Children do not need to be around those kinds of books. Or some books being taken out because of religious belifs. like one book being taken out because it was about worshiping the devil, or something. The movie situation i understand. I wouldn't want my little daughter walking up and grabbing something that has a sex scene, or drug content in it. You can take those off the shelf, but wait, right there is another example of why it shouldn't get taken off the shelf. Just because i want it off the shelf doesn't mean everybody wants it off the shelf. Then the libraries movie business would be over. To sum everything up, nobody should choose what should be in the library and what shouldn't. Personally i think that there should be a variety in the library. If not everybody would get bored of the same books. Over and over. KEEP @CAPS1 ON THE SHELF",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7014,3,"The setting of “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” was very hot deserts. On a bike ride there are not many places to stop for food or water. On a bike ride you cant bring a lot of louage with you. Only important materials and a big enough jug of water. An example from the text to show how bad it was out there. “I got down on my hands, and knees, working,the handle of the rusted pump with all my strength. He was so thirst and tired he didn’t know how else to get some water",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1188,1,"If you ask me, computers are going to soon be a big problem in our lifestyles. Computers are just another material thing everyone has and seems to be benifiting from, but they aren'@CAPS1. This technology is taking away peoples freedom and will and they don'@CAPS1 even notice it. It is pretty clear to me things need to change. To begin, the computer is yet another distraction to our daily lives. I think that it is safe to admit that we don'@CAPS1 need this. Distractions like these keep us from doing the things we need to do, such as excersise. Every wants to get their extra weight off, but they can'@CAPS1 because the want to check website or talk to their friends. So its pretty much a lazy distraction. Would you really want to give up your health beacause of something so materialistic? If we keep clicking, more then @PERCENT1 of the population that are fit and healthy will become obease. I think we need to reform this problem soon. Like not promoting websites on so many @CAPS1.V networks, or have a computer shutdown week, anything that will get people to be outside enjoying life as they should. To continue, have you ever found yourself asking your kids on how to work the computer? Dont you see how sad that is? Our future leaders are already glued to the games, email and instant messaging of the net. Its plain to see they are already spending too much of their time online. This is concerning fact because more and more kids each year turn in less and less in school work because they have better things to do such as chat with their friends or watch funny video online. Its a scary though because these children are our future leaders. This is a critical point in their lifes. They need to learn about things now so their futures arent hanging by a thread. Instead of making a habit of going online everyday why not make a habit like try to get all your homework done each night? Things in childrens lifes need to change before they pay for it later in life. To sum it up, many things about our lifestyles need to change. Wether it be in schoool work or losing weight. So I think it would be best if we took out, or lessend our computer usage to lower the distraction and more on in life without revolving our world aroud a click.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6849,3,"In the essay, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting greatly affected the cyclist. In this story, the cyclist is heading for Yosemite National Park, thinking it wise, he accepts directions from a group of eccentric old men. He begins his journey confidently on flat terrain and with a large supply of water. The first of three promised towns had been resigned to that of a ghost town. The second offered only water that slightly resembled battery acid. The cyclist soon becomes exhausted from lack of water and having to cross the now hilly terrain. He barely makes it to the third town to realize that the juice factory was out of business. The cyclist becomes sure that he is going to die of lack of water when he stumbles across a bait store. If it hadn’t been so hot, if the “towns” along the way had offered better resources and if the terrain hadn’t been so hilly, the cyclist would have had a very enjoyable ride. All of the affore mentioned factors of the setting greatly affected the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 881,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 being able to find the information of anything with only one hand. Computers benefit people because the can talk online with others. Also people have the advantage of learning about faraway places. Lastly you are able to find lots of information quickly and easily. Computers do benefit society. Furthermore, with computures people can talk online with others easily. All @ORGANIZATION1 students use the computer daily to video chat with friends or instant message parents! @ORGANIZATION2 discovered that computers keep families closer because they are able to see each other virtualy when someone is away. @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 use their computers to talk with others online. One could see why computers are bad, but @CAPS5 they benefit a lot of people everyday. @CAPS1 walking into a room where people of all are learning about computers are helpful to @CAPS6 individual because the can learn about places. Computer says ""Computers are information in a compact "" @CAPS3 out of @CAPS4 people use the computer learn about far away places. The @LOCATION1 lives had found that using the computer to learn about far away places than using multiple , Some can use why books are to use, @CAPS5 omputers are. Lastly, computers are great because they teach @CAPS6 to have better, @PERCENT2 of people found their after using the computer for one haour. @PERSON2, @PERSON1, says ""The computer can help to develope stronger reflexes."" @CAPS6 could see why computer slow reflexes, but @CAPS5 they mae them better. Computers benefit society greatly. Computers help people talk online with others. Also people can learn about faraway places. Lastly the computer strengthens hand eye coordination",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1219,1,"Dear editor, I have read your past article about how computers can take too much time out of some ones life! time they could be cseing to exercise or on @CAPS1 @CAPS2. This is completly untrue and in many ways actually benerfits society. The internet is d fast d simple way to shorten the time spent doing activites we would already do. Instead of sending d letter to someone to invite them to the @CAPS3 you could just email them. Letters can take weeks and can even get lost while email sends it to them instantly. Also what if the movie sells out or is canceld, don't worry with the internet you can reschedele and buy tickets online. So that doesn't happen again. Suddenly your phone rings, its d call from your best friend saying to turn on the news, but you have to leave to pick up your kids in three minutes. Instead of waiting for the reports to stop talking and , you can check instantly on one of the many news websites and still be early. Have you been dieing to talk to someone haven't seenin a long time. Well with one of the many free websites like @CAPS4 and facebook go can do htat in d heart beat. You can talk to that person and find many race. Also if you've been feeling lonely, like you can't find the right person. With dating sites you can find the perfect person and maybe go to the @CAPS3 with them. Not only does it save time and connect you to other people but it can help you physically. Acording to drishnig at @ORGANIZATION1 people who use computers for at least @NUM1 mintes a day have d @PERCENT1 increase in hand ey corodination relaction time and accuracy. Although home say it's bad for your eyes that is a lie, it was proven by @PERSON1 the @CAPS5, bestead of health who has @NUM2 degres in science and health.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9432,4,"The author concludes this story the way she does to say that the girl not going to give up on trying to fit in this new country. The author concludes this way because it refers that its not over, and even though the test was a failure, it wont be next time. The author leads is know that the little girl cares about the test, and wants to prove to show people that she can pass it. She is reminded of her home by these flowers, and she has with this she can retake it and do it rite.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15136,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, their were many obstacles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One reason was the safety. Paragraph @NUM1 from the excerpts explains that, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" It shows us that if an accident was to happen on the mast above a densely populated area like downtown New York, then the accident could get ugly. Another reason why was nature itself. Paragraph @NUM2 explains that the, ""winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This was another safety issue because the dirigibles would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street. A third obstacle was that there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. As you can see those were some obstacles builders faced.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13380,5,"The mood that the author creates is that his culture is very enthusiastic, and that his home is where he made it. And that his parents were very generous and selfless and that he is eternally grateful for that.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15730,6,"Mooring mast was added to the top of the building where it would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers on and off. Dirigibles were docked by an electric winch. The body of the dirigibles swang in the breeze. One set of engineers in New York tried to dope out a practical. They worked really hard. The Government people in Washington were figuring on some @ORGANIZATION1 of mooring airships to the mast. They eventually were successful on what they were trying to accomplish by building a mooring mast so that the dirigibles would have a place to land for fuel and service.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15817,6,"Although the plans for the mooring mast were optimistic, there were many obstacles that kept that plan from becoming a reality. The first reason why builders difficulty allowing dirigibles to dock was because of safety. The helium that filled the balloons was highly flammable. If one were to catch fire, it would be a danger to all of New York City. Secondly, the high winds made it unsafe for the dirigibles. Paragraph @NUM1 states, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around..."". Lastly, the builders faced the obstacle of pre- existing laws when trying to allow dirigibles to dock on the mooring mast. An existing law stated that aircraft couldn't fly too low over urban areas. These three main obstacles were face by the builders of the Empire State Building. The mooring mast never became a reality because of these obstacles.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21468,8,"All the great memories that @LOCATION2 and I, spent and shared together when we were really good bestfriends. We were around @NUM1 years old and in @NUM2 through @NUM3 grade. Ofcourse we got older as the years went by, but we had soo many great times together. When ever we hung out, we would always laugh about almost everything, and most of the time we would just never let alot of stupid things get to us. Whenever I needed someone to talk to she would be the one. She went through a life that was almost the same as what I went through in life, and so she knows what I or even she needs to do or say. Even though we would always have lots of fun, we would have our moments and fight, but alwways work things out. We'd always have each others back for everything. I guess what im trying to say is that, two people who are close always have their great needs and feelings, and especially their laughter in the relationship. Here are some times that @LOCATION2 and I shared and spent together that pretty much led up to laughter.I remember in @NUM2 grade, both of us would always try to hang out whenever we could. We were still young so it was hard to do be able to do anything becuase our parents wouldnt let us most the time. Whenever we did though, we would think about random games, and go to different places just to have fun. As we got older though we were trusted more and could do lots more of things, which was a good thing. Then I moved to @LOCATION1, not the greatest thing, but it was for love. What made it better was that she still came over all the time. We would go and pick her up on @DATE1 and then on @DATE2 my mom would drive to school because my mom still went to work there in florence. Every night that she was there we would always stay up. I remember that I would always keep these little hot chocalate packages in my room and after my parents went to bed we'd sneak out to go get hot water for it so that we would have hot chocalate to drink. Some other times we would make coffee so that we could stay up longer. It was hard sometimes because my room was right across from my parents room and at the time I had beads hanging from my door. Fun times trying to keep quiet and not get caught. Sometimes when she came over she would bring all her make up and things so that we could dress each other up. One night we had blind folds on and do each others makeup.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7165,3,"A cyclist is affected by many things when riding, most being features of the setting. One feature of the setting that can have an affect is the terrain. If the terrain is rough then the cyclist could have a more difficult time maintaining control of the bike, especially if he is not a professional rider. For example, the author of the essay on page @NUM1 titled: Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Speed Limit, had a hard times on the rougher roads partly due to his level of experience. Another aspect of the environment that can have an affect on a cyclist is the climate. Most people who go cycling ??? know anything about the sport know how to dress for it to keep their body at a comfortable temperature but sometimes the weather plays tricks on us. The cyclist could get caught in a sudden heat wave to drop in temperature.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19303,7,I was patient when I had a doctors ipointment. Me and my mom had ben waiting almost an hr for them to call me. Twenty minitues later the nures calls me. She says sorry for your wait. Thank you for being patient. Then after that my mom took me to get something to eat so we were waiting @NUM1 minitus later the gives us are food from the drive through. Sorry thanks for being patient.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1759,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I believe that computers have a negative affect on peoples lives. Computers occupy a lot of people's time which could be used for other matters. The internet also contains alot of unappropriate content that children should not be viewing. But above all, there are too many petafiles online preying on young children. These are all ways that computers have a negative affect on peoples lives. Computers occupy so much valuable time that could be used for other, more important matters. The childhood obesity rate in america is climbing. There is no doubt that electronics, play a huge role in this event. For example my brother plays on the computer everyday, so barely goes outside. He has allowed the computer and the internet to occupy his life, leaving no room for anything else. Also there is alot of content. Ranging from a song to websites containing pornagraphy. most sites don't even alert you that by how you need to be @NUM1 or older to view the content, and very little acctually ask for proof. There are millions of sites containing such content. It really is a pressing matter and needs to be deal with. Above all else, there are millions of creeps on the internet, preying on children as a young teens. Its truly disgusting. There are millions of chat sites in which people can meet and. Petafiles go on these websites under an alias, pretending to be teens and children. Their motive, to lure young teens unto meeting them in a secure location, and to commit rape. Some victims are enough speak up but sadly, most are too afraid or ashamed to do so this is all made possible through the internet. For these reasons I say that computers have a negative effect computers lives because some positive but sadly cons outweight pros such as before mention occupation of time, content on the internet. I truly believe that the planet would be better with out computers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9882,4,He ends the story this way to show that she wants to and is willing to overcome leaving her homeland. In the story she goes to a green house. She is in the green house to test herself. She finds a plant from her homeland and and it reminds her of her grandmother. She finds other plants and they remind her of her homeland and she cries. I think she had a real connection with her grandmother. When they left their home country she probably cried for days its like she lost a part of her sole.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21389,8,"Its said that laughing is a good part of life, its also said that its healthy to get your chucks here and there. its ture its good to laugh makes everyone a better person",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6252,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because the road could be damaged or there could be a lot of hills. One example is on pg @NUM1 “with any luck I’d hit a bump and lodge one in my throat”. This explains the conditions of the road could be dangerous. That is how the condition of the road can be affective.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3067,2,"How would you feel if you were at your local library and you found something with something offensive in it? Many people would not approve of having offensive materials in their library. The library is open to anyone and anyone could see the material. Library's should make sure there isn't anything offinsive in their materials before they put them on the shelf. Everyone has access to the library in your district and can look at anything that is there. A lot of stuff that can be found in your library could be offensive; but how would people know what is offensive and what isn't? Library's shouldn't have that accessable. If they still have it in your library, then it should have a warning on it or be on a high shelf. Library's should be aware of what they are putting on the shelves and know if it is appropriate or not. Furthermore, children also have access to the public library. Most of the time the child will have an adult with them but sometimes they can pick up something before you can stop them. If there is something offensive in a child's reach, they might grab it and see whats in it. Most librarys have a childrens section where you can trust that there isn't anything offensive in it. Not all children will just go to the childrens section so there shouldn't be offensive material in library's or at least in childrens reach. Lastly, librarys choose what they put on the shelves and they never know who will look at it. If there is offensive material in their stuff then anyone can see it and it could put a negative thought in some peoples heads. There are some people who are mature enough to see the offensive material but there are others who can't. Thoes that can't, it @MONTH1 reflect something negative on them and it @MONTH1 cause problems. Therefore, there should not be offinsive material in librarys. In @CAPS1, librarys should not supply offinsive material. If there are people that want to see that kind of stuff there are other ways of getting that material. There shouldn't be access to that in your library because everyone can see it and you don't know how it will effect them. If there is going to be offinsive material in your library there should be an adult area where only people over the age of @NUM1 can enter. If there is something offinsive that is open to anyone, hopefully one day librarys will elimanate them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18310,7,In some point you have to be patient. If you are in a line need to be patient. you have to be patient to waiting for a share to part. You have to be patient if something is coming in the mid and you can as wait to what is or you no what it is and you just can’t ran to get it. When you go to the store and you see some thing you want and have mom or dad say they will git you for your brithbay then you can no wait for you bathbay then you can no wait for you birthday.Well I have been there . I love crismase because you got almose everything you want; When something you to do something you have been wanting forever you are going there for the first time. All of these thing you have to be patient.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9491,4,The author in this story explaynes how hard some changes can be. The author also explayns how family and object frome home such as the flower can be comforting. The meaning of the story is to show one of the author expierances in life.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18926,7,"Once upon a time there was a young girl named @CAPS1 she lived with her dad and mom in a small town of @PERSON2. It was mom in a small town of @PERSON2. It was almost her birth and she was so exited for this birthday because she was turning twelve. Twelve was here luckey number ever sience she was little. Her mom said they could go into town and go to chef @PERSON1 and eat out she agreed so that morning she woke up and dad made her some pancakes with fresh strawberrys on them she went out to go milk there cows for her parents. @CAPS1 hated milking there cows because they are very stuburn so she went out there and miked the cows in only @NUM1 minetts. @CAPS1 went back inside and put the milk on the table. @CAPS1 was starting to wonder if she was going to get a birthday present, @CAPS1 decided it would be best if she was patient when her mom came home from work (she works at a dress making store) she said, “Are you ready to go eat,” @CAPS1 jumped “And yeld yes, yes. So they rode in to town and parked at the restaurant, they walked in and the lights are off her dad got the light switch and all of her cloose family and friends where there and they yelled “sprise” @CAPS1 was is such a shock she yelled “@CAPS3 you, @CAPS3 you, @CAPS3 you, and on a table was twelve presents, and under the table was a dog. Her mom & dad got her a dog. She name the dog wonder because every time she saw him she began to wonder about her wonderful life. And she learned that great thing come when you are patient.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15742,6,"In this excerpt, The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, there were many obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced, in attempting dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle they faced, was that they lacked a suitable landing area. Because of this, they came up with the idea of having the passengers get on and off the dirigible by walking down a gangplank to an open observation platform. Another obstacle they faced, was that ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" Another main obstacle that the builders faced was that ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" In the end, the idea of the mooring mast, was a failure. The builders didnt think about potential problems that could occur. For example, nature itself, the law against airships flying too low over urban areas, and even fires, due to the gas (hydrogen) used in some dirigibles.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9166,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho I think the author ends with that paragraph because it shows that she is determined to pass. “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts, and the geese return and the hibiscus budding, then I will take the test again.” This shows she is determined because geese migrate every year and flowers always bud every year. She will keep coming back just like the geese and the hibiscus do. She will be determined to pass the test and fit in sooner or later. If she was not determined she might never pass and fit into her new society.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12101,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is very soft and compassionate. The reason I would describe the mood as soft and compassionate is. When Narciso Rodriguez describes growing up with his parents and in cuba he never mentioned anything about what he hated about his family and about living in cuba. yet he describes all of what he loved about growing up as a child for example he says ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. This shows that just because your not related by blood does'nt mean your not family. Another reason why I would describe the mood of the authour as soft in compassionate is at the end of the memoir Narciso Rodriguez says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""In conclusion those are the ways why I would describe the mood created by the author as soft and compassionate. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1145,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you know that over @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 own computers? Computers are one of technology's greatest and are sweeping the nation, as well as the world. As you can probrably tell, I believe that computers have positive effects on people. Computers teach hand-eye coordination and create the ability to learn and research quickly and efficiently. And don't forget get that they offer ways to chat online. Have you ever played a game of baseball where you just can't seem to just hit the ball? Well, sounds like you need to work on your hand eye coordinator. Studies have shown that @PERCENT2 of people that use computers have an increased hand eye when doing activities like sports or games. So if you use a computer, you'll be hitting homeruns, not striking out. After you've won your baseball game, it's time for homework, and guess what? Your teacher assigned a project that's due tomorrow! Don't panic, get online! Computers help you learn and research, which is faster than going to the library and getting a book. Say you need the date olympic gold medalist @PERSON1 was born, google it! Finally, once you have your information all you have to @CAPS2 is your source. Ok, now your homework is done and you want to talk to your friend about your plans on @DATE1. Computers offer numerous ways to chat online. There's @CAPS4, @CAPS5, @CAPS6, woVoo, @CAPS7, and many more. So you sign into @CAPS7, and talk with your best friend. Now your not bored anymore. Computers are a great way to decrease boredom, just by talking with friends online, but you better go to bad soon because you have @ORGANIZATION1's in the morning! As you can see, computers are incorporated into our daily lives. They're everywhere! I believe that they're changing society, mostly for the better. They teach hand eye coordination, help you research and learn, and let you chat with friends. Additionally, if you don't already have a computer, then get one!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 406,1,"Dear local newspaper I disagree because people should just enjoying spending time with famimely and not on the computer doing nothing do you agree with me so far? Frist of being if you wast all you're time being of the computer there is nothing there is nothing you can get done as I have notice many shildren are on computer every right after school playing on the computer. For example my cosiun is on the computer evryday doing but wasting his time are you still with me. Secondly children should be studying on the computer not playing video games and going in website that are not allowed more then @NUM1 do students and children are on the internet palying video games and doing something the is done everyday also I have seen many kids playing games on the computer. Thirdly student will never learn nothing if they wast there time because computer is for studing and many students don't have there time wisely as they should also many student should be useing comput only sometimes not everyday I have notice that so many students don't learn from compu for because they are not studing tests mre then @PERCENT1 stundent fail classes because of computer. First of people should be spending time with and friends because they are teh most important people aroun ud not computers. Are still with me? Secondly friends are the most important people I ever had because they care about and love you like you're ther families but what if you just wast youre on computer how are you know all your friends. For example m allways on comput never goes to see her friemds amd her friends to to here because she never cares about their only computer do god get what im saying here. Thirdly family is also important then just being on the computer because they care about you have to at lease spend sometime with family for example many families stop spending time with each othe because computer is important to them. Lastly help you're community is goal because you make you\re city look you don't want it he be massy also many people quit help with commicity servic around the neighbor for example I have see trash on grounds and because they dont care. Finally going out doing sports and starting fit is very important. First of playing sports is far and youve health but people never play sports anymore just because computer for example @NUM2 people stop playing sports, secondly going to is very import because is good.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15984,6,"In the excerpt written by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, she describes the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In the excerpt the author told the readers that after building the Empire State Building the builders had to reconstruct the entire building having to make is stronger to support the top. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accomodate this new situation"" (paragraph @NUM1). The workers of the building also had to be working at a height of 1,250 feet. They not only had to rebuild the foundation and strength of the building, but also the top. ""Two months after the workers celebrated framing the entire building, they were back to raise an American flag again - this time at the top of the frame for the mooring mast."" These are just some of the many hardships the workers had to face.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19542,7,"Not long ago I went to the pumpkin patch with my mom, sister, grandma, aunt, uncle my @NUM1 year old niece and baby cusin. When we where done, we went to a restaurant to eat. After @NUM2 minutes of waiting for the waitress, she comes over just to tell us she will be with us “@CAPS1”. So we wait for half an hour just to put our drink orders in. When we finally got to order our food it took them an hour to bring it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18169,7,A time I was patient was when me and my mom and dad and my big brother were going @CAPS1 @CAPS2. We had to pack up and leave in an hour ? wanted to leave it for a room and tints and ??? packed up and ??? the ??? so then ? during its long ways any ? ? ? I decided to hv my haed down and wait for a hot ? heading my way so dis I dreaming about the lines having no lines so I can get on every ? in a hungry so as im about to get on a ride I felt someone ? ? saving were born as I gained light it was my brother ? ? shaking one I got up ? ? ….I knew her as a big old sign says welcome to @CAPS1 @CAPS2 .After all that sleeping it had petied off after all. so as i think there are no lines I was heart broken. The lines was as long as having to @LOCATION1 itself something told me it was going to be a long wait. As I grew in patient I started to draw that somebody grabbed me it was my mom. She said why are you mood I said because these lines are the san just be patient it will be worth the wait that’s what I did. Finally our turn so I got on and she was right being patient in line was worth the wait and it was so much funnier to get on. So as I think theer are no lines I was heart broken. The line was as long as having to @LOCATION1 itself something told me it was going to be a long wait. As I grew in patient I started to drawn somebody grabbed me it was my mom. She said why are you I said because these lines are the sant just be patient it will be worth the wait that’s what I did. Finally our turn so I got on and she was right being patient in line was worth he wait and it was so much funnier to get on,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10179,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this paraghragh because when she told her mom she failed her test she was crying, But I think it was deeper than that. I think she missed home so much that she couldn't concentrate. She had to cry about something because she didn't want to let her mom know that she misses home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4391,2,"I believe that the certain materials such as books,music,movies, magazines, ect. they are here for a reason. People like them. Maybe there are some books and things that people @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not find offensive. Thats ok I'm not try to say it isn't, but you don't have to look at that book. There are so many others to pick from it doesn't have to be the first one you pick up. The objects we are talking about are our entertainment it brings us joy and many smiles. People need to understand that children are going to have to get their education not only from their teachers,but through these tools. Tools is a better word for these things. It makes them have a meaning. Children now day love books, music,movies, magazines,ect. As a teenager I can say that most of us who like music we love it. It builds our charater. People don't make books and magazines just for them to sit on a shelf and gather dust. They were ment to be picked up and look at. I also have to say that some people make a big deal about a subject like this. Don't get me wrong I can understand were their opinon stands,but that doesn't mean I have to agree. Children,@CAPS1,and @CAPS2 all have to learn in one way or another. Some of these ways are what some people are trying to get removed from our libraries and other places as well. If people want this is going to be a big war. Only because they are not the only people on the planet. People want these tools of ours to be removed this will only be the begin. Next couple of years from now people will want to get rid of something else then, something else. Its just one right after another it won't stop. This just shows how our communities agree and disagree with each other. Everyone is intitled to their own opinion some are good and some are bad. In this case, my opinion I totally and completely disagree with getting rid of the tools that can inprove our world as we know it to be.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16106,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles to allowing dirgibles to dock there. One obstacle was the wind at the top of the building. The winds there were ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". This made it dangerous for a dirigible to stop there. Another obstacle was a law against flying dirigibles over cities. The law made it ""illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"". Since they were banned from doing this, no pilot would ever more there. A third obstacle was the decreasing use of dirigibles. With the Hindenburg incident on May 6, 1937 and the increasing use of airplanes, not many people few on airships anymore. In conclusion, several obstacles prevented the docking of dirgibles to the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18271,7,"When my brother, my dad and my two cousins got out of the car from the @NUM1 hour drive from @LOCATION1, we knew would have a blast. I looked up and saw a spectacular view, roller @CAPS1 galore. I saw at cedar point, the amusement park. In the car we talked about the @CAPS1. The maverick, milleniur force, @NUM2, @CAPS2, and the mentis. When I walked in, I knew this way going to be fun. Right as we walked in we saw the @CAPS2, but the line was huge and we decided to go a back later. As the day goes on we go almost of the @CAPS1. As we approach the @CAPS4 we see at least @NUM3 people in line, so there goes our chance to go on the tallest ride. When we arrive at the @CAPS2 the line was bigger then the start of the day. We discussed and decide it's not getting any smaller and go on the ride. About a later a @NUM4 years guy is with his mom. On the back of his shirt is a cool fish, so my cousin asked him what it is. He said it was a tropical fish from @LOCATION3. We ended up talking to them for half an hour until we got on the ride. The ride was amazing and deserved the wait. This is how I was patient and leard waiting leads up to good things.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6196,3,The ways that can effects the cyclist by the setting of the place are how the road is shaped or the riding up the hills and the roughness of the rode. There were an sign where it said “rough road ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit.” That sign if he didn’t see it he would have over the speed or didn’t know what the speed he was to go as a cyclist and gotten hurt. The road was made for the cars so the speed limit is hard to,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3732,2,"I believe that some materials should not be on the selfs, but not removed.They should have a room with everything that someone could offened anyone.Some books; music, movies, magazines,and etc. should not be totally removed from a public library. I have seen a little kid pull a adult book of the self.The mother got very mad at the library for having it so low, on the self.I can understand some books being in the library.They should have all the adult book and etc. on the higher selfs so the little kids can not reach them.The library should have a room for only kids, and teenagers books; magazines, music, movies and etc. The kids should not be aloud in parts of the library that are to vilont , or sexual.The library should also have a room for all the adult movies and books with a locked door,along with the kid room.If the library does not have enough money for the rooms, they can atleast put all of the adult stuff on a top self or higher self. I believe that some materials should not be on the shelfs,but not removed from the library.Because, someone might need that book to research something for school or a job.It could also take someones history out of the library if it is removed.I mean there is a reason the book; movie, magazine, music,or etc. was made.There is a reason that the material is there.Also the parents can help the library, by keeping a closer eye on their kids.Watch what the grab off the self.The parent can even have a friend or neighbor watch the children while the parent goes to the library so the kids wont see anything the shouldn't. I believe everything i have wrote here is the truth about the way things should be in a public library.The adult stuff should be higher up.If a parent doesnt like it they can leave their kid at home,or not go to that library anymore.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20825,8," In this essay I will be telling you about why laughter, conflict and trust is very important in an relationship. I have a very good relationship with my cousin. We will laugh, fight but always trust each other with anything. We have known and been with each other for the past @NUM1 year's of our lives. Her name is @CAPS1. I love her more then anyone else in the world. One thing that does make us closer is that we laugh at each others mistakes. When one of us messes up the other will laugh at them and then try to help with the problem. When one of us does mess up with something we are always the first to now about what it was with or who it was with even if we do not like the other person that they are having the problems with. Conflict, I think is something else that i think is very important in a good relationship. Me and her fight all the time with each other. Even if its for the littlest and stupidest thing's. We always find one way to fight over something. If it's for the other messing up where it could or would completely mess with mine or her life. We protect each other from messing up are lives to much. We stop each other from doing really stupid things. We have strange feeling when the other is hurt or might be hurt by someone or something. Trust is something that is very important for a relationship. Trust, you can be there or tell the someone anything no matter what it is. Me and her now everything there is to now about each other. If you want to now something about me you could go to her and she could tell you. If you wanted to now something about her you could go to me and i could tell you. I could tell her anything even if she is going to be mad at me for a while if I ever really needed her to be there for me I now she would be as soon as possible. We will almost never judge the other for something they did or are going to do. We now what the other person has done and what they have not done as well. I would trust her with my life if I had to. She is my best friend, favorite cousin, @NUM2 mom, sister, and everything else to me. Me and her will always laugh at each other s mistakes. We will always have some type of conflict with each other but we will always be there to help the other one out for what ever reason it @MONTH1 be. those are the @NUM3 thing i think you need to have a good relationship with someone like i do with my cousin @CAPS1. and i still have this relationship with her and i will never be able to lose it no matter how hard i try to i now she will always be by my side.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8870,4,I believe that the author concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph helps bring to story to a closing. In the paragraph she is basically saying when the geese return and my flower is budding I'll be prepared enough to take the test. She'll be prepared because she'll be adapted enough and she'll have experienced enough just like the plant and the geese. She Is comparing her life to the lives of the geese and the life of her flower.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8896,4,"The auther concludes with that paragraph because. it shows that despite her sorrow and discomfort, Saeng is able to remain hopeful. In the story, Saeng sees a hibiscus which makes her very homesick for her native country of Vietnam. The reader also leans that she failed a test and feels at of place. However, the hibiscus symbolizes hope and comfort. The auther chooses to conclude with that paragraph because despite Saeng’s hardships, the hibiscus helps her realize that she can overcome he obstacles and be hopeful of the future.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4538,2,"Do you believe in hiding books and movies that are over @CAPS1? Do you think that children can control themselves with offensive behavor? Have you ever seen a child watch a scary movie that was @CAPS2 @CAPS3? Why do you think that most parents block that kind of viewings from their young children? I believe that materials such as books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from the shelves from children, if they are found offensive. I fully agree with adults not letting children watch that new scary movie or that action book their brother is reading. I think they should consider the effects that come with watching or reading certain things. Children at young ages still have their innocence. You don't want your child having nightmares because you let them watch a over @CAPS1 rating movie. You would feel guilty if the child has problems for the rest of their life. You have to make a choice on whether the it's comfortable for them to view what their watching or reading! It's important to hid them so the child can not get ahold to them. Be wise of the kind of movies and books you leave around the library. You should have a section for children in libraries. You should have all the materials that a child should be interested in. It should be colorful and playful as possible. I used to watch this girl named @CAPS5. I was babysitting her one night, while her parents were at the movies. I brung a movie to watch, when @CAPS5 fell asleep. So once the clock turned to @NUM1, I put her to sleep. But little did I know she woke up and @ORGANIZATION1 me watching this horror film called @ORGANIZATION1. It gushed blood everywhere and she started to sceam! I thought I had secured her in her bedroom, to go to sleep but to my surprise she was still woke! I rushed over to her and put her back to sleep. hoping she didn't have any nightmares. Please be curtious to the things youlet children read or see. You have to think of the effects of what's going to happen to the child later in life. I know you think that it's not that harmful to children, but it can really mess up their minds and actions forever. So I hope I have persuaded you to follow my advice and pull them over @CAPS1 movies and books off the shelves for the safety of the children",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1157,1,"In myopinion computers are a good sorce @CAPS2 imformation, camuni-cation and business computers make things easier. @CAPS2 example, instead of going to the libarary to get information on something, you can you use a computer. Computers are one of the most advance technology, you can search anything in the world. computers are also a huge help on a project @CAPS2 school or @CAPS2 work some peoples jobs, they are required to use computers. Computers are even good @CAPS2 learning about things you've never even heard of. Some people even take classes online. Computers could also be helpful to plan a vacation. computers are often used to comunicate with others, family, and friends. if you own a computer, you mostly likely have an e-mail, homepage, or @CAPS1 to keep in touch with people. There are even sites to meet newpeople. In my opinion, I think computers have a positive effect on people computers can be used @CAPS2 many things, they are a good sorce of technology. Computers could take much time off your hands, @CAPS2 example, you have a @NUM1 page essay due tomorrow, I'm sure it'd be way easier and faster to type it out than to write it and mess up, @CAPS3 typing a letter or paper, computers have ""@CAPS4 @CAPS5"" so if you mess up on a word, it will shaw you where you made your mistake to save more time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6406,3,"Some of the things that affect the cyclist was the lack of water. “The water, bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips, water is a big importance. To stort men. Your body need water to work right. The @CAPS1 humid, dry weather of California was a affect To. “The high deserts of California in June.” “l could drop from a heatstroke.” The sun is unbearable, expessary without shade and water, @CAPS2 affect on the cyclist up. The have of animals “ There was No- one in sight.” It would have been a lot easier for the cyclist if store or people would have been around, @CAPS2 exact is the animals. “A @CAPS3 large snake crossed my path.” “diamondback- blocked the majoritly of the pavement. It would have been to worry about those things these are all things that affect the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9273,4,"This saying is saying that the snow has already fallen down onto their garden and when the snow melts, they will have to recrop everything again. This is a perfect conclusion to end this story. The story is talking about how the flowers grow in the spring and how saeng’s mom grows fruits and veggies in her garden. So since it snowed and their would be a while before the spring come back. Saeng has alot of planning to do in the next spring. The hibiscus will be budding and the geese will return.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9784,4,I think the author concludes like this because its almost like a new beginning. The ending of the story makes you think that Saeng is going to get on with her life. It makes me think that @CAPS1 plans to start her life over in comparison with the hibiscus. Once the plant “starts over” (rebuds) she will start over once again. It also shows that she is determined to continue on with her life in @LOCATION1. She will not let her life be distraught by her move Vietnam. She hopes that she will be able to start her life over again. The ending is a “cliff hanger” to show that her story has not yet completely ended. It shows that there is still possibility that she can get on with her life. It also shows she doesn’t let her failures control her. She is a strong young woman and is determined to overcome this. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 515,1,"Dear, local newpaper @CAPS1 it's true technology is blinding everyone. More and more people are being sucked into electronics and less people are caring about our planet. Their are so many great things out there that could be put at risk. People @MONTH1 say that if you spend allot of time on the computer they would be able to find cure's for the deseases out there. Those are just lies to stay lasy and waste their life on the computer. What is going to happen to all of the sports in the world. The players are going to get old and they will retire and if no one is going to take their place then the games would be cancled. I am a big fan of football and I don't want to see it ge cancled. Some of my friends are saying they are addicted to the computer and I always hope they get out of that habit because what's going to happen when they get older they are going to need a @CAPS2. If they stay addicted they won't want a @CAPS2 and they what they won't have money, they can't pay bills, and they would lose their house. Why do people say they could find cures for things by looking on the computer we all know that's not true. They need to learn about them first not by just looking on the computer. They @MONTH1 not want to but they would have to look in books and do some heavey thinking before they can find the cures. I hope the ways of life change really fast because things can get really bad. If we do stop this way of life then things could get better and then our planet @CAPS3 will stay around longer and we could make the a better place.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20936,8," A few years ago, when I was @NUM1, I decided to do an experiment on laughing and the color of the clothes people wear. I realized that I laughed a lot and I was almost always happy because of @CAPS11, I did really @CAPS1 in school, and I also had a very 'up' attitude. @CAPS6 clothes were all very bright and 'happy' colors. I had a theory that the less someone laughed, and the darker colored clothes they wore, would make their mood and attitude would dip. The experiment would last one week, and in that time I would try @CAPS7 to laugh and gradually start wearing darker and darker clothes until I got to black, to see how I would be affected, if affected at all. To get started, I had to first tell everyone what I was doing and ask them to try @CAPS7 to make me laugh on purpose. Then I had to go to the store and get new clothes that had no bright colors on them. That was the hardest part because I saw a lot of cute clothes, but they were too colorful. After that i only had to wait for the @DATE2 to end and @DATE3 to begin. @DATE3 @TIME1 I woke up and did @CAPS6 usual daily routine, then tried on @CAPS6 new clothes. When I got to school, I noticed the surprised looks from @CAPS6 classmates @CAPS2 they took in @CAPS6 outfit. @CAPS11 was pretty tough @CAPS7 to laugh at some of their expressions but I couldn't, because that would ruin what I was trying to accomplish. Throughout the day, I got comments on @CAPS6 clothing, and some of @CAPS6 teachers were worried because I wasn't laughing @CAPS2 usual but when I told them of @CAPS6 experiment, they understood and said, ""@CAPS1 luck."" @CAPS2 the day came to an end, I was satisfied with @CAPS6 success and quickly fell asleep. The next two days went pretty much the same, and I was wondering if @CAPS6 theory would be proven wrong. But on @DATE1 @TIME1 @CAPS6 mom pointed out that I seemed different. ""@CAPS3 @CAPS4 okay?"" she asked. ""@CAPS4 don't seem @CAPS2 energetic @TIME1, and your @CAPS7 smiling at all. Your @CAPS7 sick @CAPS3 @CAPS4?"" I told her that I was fine. At school, I was asked the same thing, and after a while @CAPS11 got really annoying. I got mad and yelled at them, which I never do, and they apologized. But I felt bad and told them I was sorry and they forgave me, telling me @CAPS11 was probably just the experiment. I got a little happier at the thought that @CAPS6 theory might just be correct. That day went by slowly, and I was glad when @CAPS11 ended. @DATE4 was the last day of @CAPS6 experiment and for that I was happy. I didn't mind the dark clothes and I liked the way they looked on me, but @CAPS11 was hard @CAPS7 laughing, and @CAPS11 was starting to make me feel depressed. That day I decided to wear some of @CAPS6 bright clothes to see if @CAPS11 would change anything, and when I got to school some of @CAPS6 friends didn't recognize me because they got used to seeing me in @CAPS6 other clothes. I didn't feel any different from when I wore @CAPS6 dark clothes. In @CAPS5 I had to stand in front of the class to give @CAPS6 conclusion. ""@CAPS6 theory has been proven semi-correct,"" I stated. ""@CAPS7 laughing did have an effect on @CAPS6 mood and attitude. I was yelling at @CAPS6 friends and feeling sad when I shouldn't have. But I found that wearing dark clothing didn't change anything."" @CAPS6 teacher then said something so funny that I couldn't help but laugh, and everyone applauded and said, ""@CAPS9 back @CAPS10!"" @CAPS11 feels really @CAPS1 to laugh again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6483,3,"There were a few features in the setting that affected the cyclist. One very important feature is that the cyclist was in the desert. This is demonstrated by the statement “I was travelling through the high deserts of California.” not only was the cyclist in the desert, he was there in June, one of the hottest months of the year. It is demonstrated that he was there in June reading to the statement “I was travelling in June.” @CAPS1 there at that time made dehydration a bigger risk. It was also very hot there. We know this because when he was at the water pump, he stated, “blackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” From this, we can affirm that not only was at hot, the water was dirty. The water also “had the flavor of battery acid.” This was bad for the cyclist who was running low on water because he “had been hitting (his) water bottles pretty regularly.” The fact that he had little water left is demonstrated in the statement, “The water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips.” The cyclist was in a bad situation. These had ganged-up against him in his trip. These features are the desert, the high temperatures, and the blackish water which tasted like battery acid. The fact that he was low on water made it harder to fight these features with water, he would battle the desert, high temperatures, and have no need to pump bad water. Again, the features of the setting that affected the cyclist are the desert, the high temperatures, and the bad water which he could not drink.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10318,4,"The author concludes the last paragraph to show that after a time period you can come back and try something again. Or maybe when weather change this can be different for Saeng. Maybe she is relating herself to the plant as to when it come to spring the flower will be stronger, and she feel that she will pass the test second time around when the geese come back and the hibiscus is budding. And it also shows how she appriate the nature because if not, why would she wait until spring and when the snow is melting. The conclusion of the story is that she do like nature, because she talk about the hibiscus.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21000,8," A funny Story Many summers ago, @CAPS1 best friend @PERSON1 and I had a sleepover at @CAPS1 house. We were both excited because @CAPS1 dad would be the only one there. @CAPS1 mom and brother were out late. After eating popcorn and getting stuffed up on candy, we decided to try something new and fun. @CAPS1 house has a counter bar where four to five people can sit at and so @CAPS1 daddy decided to turn on some hip hop music. As though @PERSON1 and I could read each others minds we jumped on the counter and started doing the run way model walk. We worked it like no other. It was funny to see @CAPS1 dad pretending to be the fake photographer and say that's ""gorgeous"" as though he was a real photographer. @PERSON1 and I strutted up and down and did stops and poses and turns, until we got too dizzy. We all knew we could never do this with @CAPS1 mom @ORGANIZATION1 which made everything so funny! We all bursted out laughing until we couldn't breath! Later on after that fun model runway we decided to pillow surf down the stairs. I was a little afraid to at first but after I saw the look on @PERSON1's face, I knew I had to do it. I grabbed a big body pillow and surfed down those stairs like a champ! It was such a blast! @PERSON1 and I kept pillow @CAPS2 for what seems forever! @CAPS1 dad put on @ORGANIZATION1 and we laughed the rest of the night away. That night was one of the best and @ORGANIZATION1 memories of @CAPS1 childhood. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13338,5,"I believe that the mood in this memoir is happy because the athor is talking about his first friend (land loards daghter) the great cooking and music that his home had. how greatful he is to his parents for moving to america for him, all the celibrations they had for people, how everybody in the naborhood were friends, and much he loved his family. What about that is unhappy",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9025,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph @CAPS1 she is detarmand to pass that test and is not going to give up until she passes it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21295,8," It has been said that ""Laughter is the spark of the soul."" I agree with this statement wholeheartedly. Laughter can do wonders for the soul; it truly does ignite a spark. And once that spark has been ignited watch out, it will burn like a wild fire. As the fire burns it will go on a rampage throughout the the body. First its that uncontrollably smile that brings an ache to your cheeks, then the butterflies that marvelously flutters through your stomach, next comes the tingling sensation deep within your toes, and last but not least the tears of joy come streaming from your eyes. Had these feelings before? That'@CAPS5 the rampage I'm talking about; let the fire burn. Laughter is an extraordinary thing--it can turn an awkward or embarrassing situation into a much more relaxed one. Unfortunately, in my story about laughter I wasn't the one laughing...About three weeks ago while my sister was at gymnastics, my mom, my best friend @CAPS1, and I went to visit my grandparents and to see how the work on our new barn was progressing. After spending sometime at their house it was time to pick up my sister, @CAPS2. My grandpa ever so kindly offered to go pick her up but then I mentioned that @CAPS1 and I could go do it. As we were driving to town in my grandpas @LOCATION1, everything seemed fine; just another ordinary day. After we had arrived at the gymnastics center we headed inside and waited for @PERSON1 to finish. However, as we were walking out my sister said she was hungry and asked me to stop at @ORGANIZATION1. I pulled up to the order board and ordered her food. The lady then asked me to drive around to the first window to pay. After doing as she asked, I received my change, put the truck in drive, and began pulling forward--when all of the sudden I heard a loud crunch! My heart dropped as I looked in my side mirror. I hadn't pulled out far enough and had hit the side of the building. Now before I go on I just want you to know that I have been driving since I was about seven and am usually a very good driver. But hey, that first crash happens to all of us, right? Well back to my story, as I was driving back to my grandparents house it took everything I had not to cry. After we arrived back at their house @CAPS1 and I ran into the house and got a cup of hot water, soap, toothbrushes, and a @CAPS5.O.@CAPS5. pad. We scrubbed and scrubbed until all the red paint from the side of the the building was gone. The dent didn't look so bad once the paint was gone and the truck was back to white. I was absolutely terrified to tell my grandparents about the truck! After waiting about an hour I finally got up the courage to tell them what had happened. My grandpa put on his shoes and we went out to look at the damage. As I started crying because I felt so bad, my grandpa just started laughing and reminding me that it was just a truck and it can be fixed.The fact that he just laughed really made the situation a lot less stressful. Laughter brings people together and creates bonds that will last a lifetime. So no matter if you're laughing about something that makes you happy or a situation that maybe isn't so good, let the fire burn.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3538,2,"Censorship Censorship is it needed in todays societey? Where things that were considerd bad @NUM1 even @NUM2 years ago are ok today to be veiwed read listened to and so on. Is it a needed process or should libraries have free will to stock there shelves with what ever they seem fit to be there.Is it still a good process to use or is it a outdated uneeded resource that is now no longer needed. Everybody in todays soicitey says to read, but libraries @MONTH1 not have the type of litature that your are in to, so why would you want to read somthing that you do not like because the library dos not have the book that you wanted to to see i. I believe that censorshop in libraries should be their to remove any book the find offenseive or immoral from there libary. I do not belive they should remove books becasue of bad language, or somthing about god. I think that books or magazines or movies with '@CAPS1' content should be removed from libraries if they see it fit. Libraries should only feature books tht they want to have not ones that are popular but considerd 'bad' by the library. They should only have books they want to have. I do believe that their should be censorship in libarys. I just do not belive that it should be a harsh system. I think that they should set standards on what they want to have and following those standards on books they buy. I do think however that some libraries will set their standards to low or high that they wille ether have many books that are considerd 'bad', or no books at all. It is a very fine line when it comes to materials that the library has to be considerd good or bad. I think libraies should havea set of standards nation wide to set what type of material is good for libraries. I believe that censorship is still a needed, and helpful process. I just think that it is to much of a opionated process. not enough facts or opions of the poeple. I think that is should remain in use for society i just belived it should be more under control then it is today.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9967,4,"The author ends the story with the given paragraph to get across. It highlights the things important and familiar to saeng that gave her comfort, and uses them to essentially say that she’ll take the test over again once she feels better. The winter hibiscus was a plant that saeng remembered of life back home up to the story, so when she sow the plant , “a wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung saeng ‘s eyes now swept over her.” Saeng was unable to comfort her emotions when she first saw the plant because she realized how much she missed her old life. The plant is mentioned in the final paragraph because when it blooms in the spring, the winter hibiscus will help fill the emotional void, and help saeng to try to take the test again. She also mentions the geese for the same reason, but in a different way. Unlike the winter hibiscus, it took a while for the geese to become, “through the quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now.” Saeng mentions this so that she can get used to the strange and unfamiliar parts of her life, and to come to grips with her failed test. Therefore by mentioning the things she does in the last paragraph, saeng uses familiar objects, foreign and domestic, to illustrate her coming to grips with her failure.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10505,4,"Saeng is trying to say that when the time comes again that she will take the test. The author concludes the story with this because it leaves you wondering about what will happen the next time she takes the test. The auther also does this to show that you should never quit like if the flower can survive winter then she will be able to survive that test. Also the author is saying that when the seasons change, things change. She was going to give up because she failed the test but she seen that plant surviving through the harsh weathers and that gave her more confidence. Also she cherished the plant because she wants to see it budding because her and her mother spent quality time dve to this plant she had.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10530,4,"The author concluded the story with that specific paragraph about geese to show that Saeng is going to try to overcome her obstacles. She was @CAPS1 disappointed in failing the test so she took comfort in memories of her homeland. She bought a hibiscus that she saw in her homeland a lot, and that flower @CAPS2 comfort and affection. But it also @CAPS2 her ability to come over obstacles, and while she was planting her hibiscus, and saw the geese flying above, she knew she had to try again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10378,4,"I believe that the author concludes the story with this paragraph for alot of different reasons. One reason why the author could have concluded the story with this paragraph is because she might try it again. A second reason why the author could have concluded the story with this paragraph is because she probably wanted to try to make her mother proud. A third reason why the author could have concluded the story with this paragraph is because she probably really felt that she really disappointed herself. In conclusion, if you mess up on something, try again maybe you will do alot better. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16469,6,"During the construction of the Empire State Building the builders experience many obstacles when trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that the builders cannot just drop a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State building. ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable teather, would add stress to the buildings frame."" Another problem the workers faced is they would have to change the entire design of the building to meet the accommodations of the mooring dock. The largest reason why the dock didn't work out was safety. The author writes ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium..."" This means that the dirigibles are highly flameable and if one exploded over the densely packed New York it would have serious reprocusions. All of these reasons are why the mooring dock never came to life on top of the Empire State building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13256,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"", the author describes how his first home as a child was a warm and inviting place to live. As described in paragraph ""... my prents always kept their arms and door open"", meaning his home was a loving place where anyone in need was welcome to stay. The overall mood of this memoir is that the community the author grew up in was a unified and happy one, where all the other immigrants were ""family"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 808,1,"Hello @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 you think computers are having a great effect on people? Well, I sure @CAPS3 think using a computer has a great effect on people. I say this because, people are probably waisting a full day on those facebook, myspace gol websites, looking up diffenitions for words, directions to places etc. If you think about it, this effect on people can ruin their eye-site, and social skills. These people are spending like @NUM1 hours tops on the computer. Staring at that @NUM2 inch little screen can damage your eye-site. This can lead you to getting glasses or possibly going blind. How would your life be without not talking to a girl/guy or even your own family? If you waist your time on those websites for example: facebook all you @CAPS3 is instant message the person. Maybe you should go out and @CAPS3 something fun with that person. What's this I hear about map it.com? Don't be lazy and waist @NUM3 minutes at your day just getting directions. Use a a real map! Also, free @LOCATION1? Come on! Use a real dictionary. So, I come to my conclusion by saying that these computers @CAPS3 have a ""great effect""on people. It gives them short cuts through life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15479,6,In the story construction workers faced a problem. The idea of having a dirigible's dock ontop of the empire State Building was comming to an end. When thinking about the idea the architecture Never put thought in legal persasures as in air crafts cant fly low on urban areas. Also the heavy wind that picks up from the building making the air craft hard to controll. Another was the dangers they could inflict to civilians. If not @CAPS1 right the air craft can get loose and dingle down to urban areas or like the german dirigible catch on fire and Blow up. Even though they had a prototype that work they discontinued the project giving air planes the better way to travel in the air.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7426,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by the changes the occur while riding his bike. The cyclist began well with smily face, but then he changed because the condition of the road and the weather that was hot, also there was not any signal to show him where he was going and it was the correct way he was taking. Also, his bike flat needed to be replaced.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6877,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed” by @PERSON1 the settings of the story effects the rider in manyways. The first and most obvious is the temperature, it is hot, therefore the rider is hot and becoming dehydrated making him thirsty. A second way the setting affects the rider is the fact that nothing is around him. Since nothing is around him there is no where for him to get water adding to the affect of dehydration making him more thiristy. The rider says “One ran shacle shed, sevral rusty pumps, and the corral that couldn’t hold the lamestmal egreeted me. ''This statement from the author support the factt that nothing is around. Onemore feature of the setting that affected the rider was the hills. The hills made the rider tired requiring more pedalind and wearing him out, the setting features had agreat afect on the rider from heat and dehydration to hills and energy. onething that the setting didnt have was a positive affected on the rider.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21214,8,"The Benefits of Laughter Laughter has always been a major part of my life. Most of the relationships that I have with my friends are great , because i can make them laugh and cheer them up when they feel down. When a person laughs it makes them completely forget about anything that brought them down, and now they just focus on what made them laugh and feel that joy and happiness. When you laugh , the only thing on your mind is the thing that made you laugh, nothing else. laughter in many cases has brought people from an absolute low self-esteem to a high self-esteem in a very short amount of time. An example in where laughter was very beneficial to a person happened with one of my friends. One of my good friends seemed to be really down and didn't want to talk about what was going on with anyone. With him not telling anyone what was wrong it kind of leaves you guessing, what could have happened? After about a week of pretty much isolating himself from others, he was ready to talk and hang out with some of his close friends, which included me. Me, and two other people that were friends with me and him, decided to go golfing which was a new hobby of ours. It was that day that he told us how his mom was cheating on his dad for over a year, and how she was also hiding alcohol in all different kinds of places. and was over-drinking. By him just being around his friends, laughing and having a good time, he found himself focusing on other things other than what was going wrong in his life. Even laughing at yourself can be a good way of coping with your problems. even when there seems that nothing will go right in your life, something always will, you just have to give it time. The moral of the story that i have just told is that no matter how sad you feel, laughter can always help ease the pain. Even laughing about a bad situation could help you to feel better. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1696,1,"Wouldn't you agree that computers are needed in our life. I would, we need computer for many things, for example we need computer for communications, we also need them to educate yourself and others. Next this is good for buyers and sellers. My first reason why I agree that computers benifits society is because of the communications. Now in our present day with all of our new technology many people use computers to communicate with friends or family. For example if you had a loved one in the military you could use the computer to communicate with him with a webcam. Computer could be a good way to talk and ask friends about homework assignments you @MONTH1 have missed as if you was absent. Also you could use computers to communicate with somebody selling something you @MONTH1 be or, you could get more detail about that product by talking to the owner of it through maybe email. My second reason would be education. Now a days many college students with work going on @MONTH1 not have time to attend schools so with the help of a computer they can take online classes. For some students instead of study in classroom all day they could be learning from computers and it could be more to the students so maybe they would understand topics better. like science for example when doing a lab you could research and do it on a computer. With computers students could learn more because they would have textbooks or maybe nothing and if they were interested in a topic they could research it and educate themselves. My third reason would be buying and selling products. Many people all over the world go on the internet to buy or sell products. Like ebay that is a website many people items on to make money and other people can buy them. So computers could be a good solution to making money and to also saving gas because people can order products online and have them shipped to there house instead of driving @CAPS1 from the I have told you like communications, education, and buying and selling products I hope you agree with me that computers do benifit society",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16582,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many challenges by attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.The first problem, presented in paragraph nine, was that they hadn't originally designed the building to hold a one thousand foot dirigible with a single rope."" A thousand - foot dirigible moored at the top of the building.... Would add stress to the buildings frame."" @CAPS1 had to reinforce the building to handle this new stress.The second problem, introduced in paragraph thirteen, was that the dirigibles are made out of a dangerous element, ""Hydrogen is very flammable."" The Empire State building builders did not want to take their chances over such a populated area.In paragraph fourteen, the reader learns that wind speed at the top of the building far surpassed wind speed in other places that dirigibles could be docked. This was a problem because when they normally tied down the back end of the dirigible with a rope & led, they could no longer do because of the location that they desire to dock it. The builders of the empire state building atempted to fight architectural flaws, dirigibles safety flaws, and the flaws of nature allow dirigibles to dock there which ultimately didn't work out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3919,2,"Libraries are a source of information. They provide us with valuable research, entertainment, and cold hard facts. Therefore, I do not believe that libraries should have to censor the books that are supplied for the citizens to check out. Everyone is faced with choices in life. Some are more difficult than others and will have a greater impact on your life. We decide if we want to wear the black shirt or the grey shirt, the blue shorts or the brown shorts. Everyday we have choices. We also have choices at a library. If we see a book with a title that sounds like @CAPS2 might be offensive, then we should just walk past @CAPS2. Most libraries are organized and the book sections are clearly stated. Common sense would tell us that this section might contain offensive material. We have the choice on whether or not we check out a book that might offend us or not. If @CAPS2 does offend us, then @CAPS2's our own fault. The second reason libraries should not censor what books they provide goes right along with the choices we make in life. No one forces us to check out this book or that book. @CAPS2's a choice. No one puts a gun to our head and says, '@CAPS1 this book or you will die.' @CAPS2 just doesn't happen like that. No one forces us to @CAPS1 something we don't want to. @CAPS2's all up to you and how you feel about the book. Different subjects offend different people. I'm not offended by a curse word here or there, however; I am offended by sex related instances that often occur in movies or books. I make my own choice to not watch or @CAPS1 those kinds of materials. Since everyone is different, the sex related instances might not offend another group of people and they might see @CAPS2 as perfectly fine to watch or @CAPS1. Different subjects offend different people and taking away a book or movie because @CAPS2 offends one person should not happen. If libraries were to start censoring what materials they put on the shelf, I believe many people would be upset. Who would decide what is offensive and not offensive? @CAPS2 would upset too many customers and the use of libraries would probably dwindle. When you are in charge of censoring what goes on the shelf many problems come into play. Do you count different religions offensive because they blaspheme another religion's god? Do you count a certain work of fiction offensive because @CAPS2 contains one curse word in the whole book? There is no way to properly censor all your books without upsetting customers. I'm not saying that libraries should be allowed to show every magazine known to man. Some are obviously worse than others; but, when @CAPS2 comes to books and movies, the people know what they are checking out and know what they will find offensive. There are too many people in this world to try and censor the materials libraries display. Libraries should not censor the materials they display",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19316,7,"One time when I was patient was when I broke my thumb I was patient cause I wasnt complaining about it wasnt crying about. Really wasnt doing enthing cause I didn’t think it was even broken. I wasnt really bothered me. Then I wait to the doctor and got it checked the docter didnt think it was broken cause I almost beat him in a thurb wreste but he x-rayed it just in case. When he came back with the x-rays he said it was broken, he was very suprised I was suprised every one was.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6293,3,"In Joe Kurmaskie’s, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the features of the setting affect the cyclist in a bad way. First of all, the cyclist is dehydrated from the heat and lack of water. “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. ""This sentence from the text stores he is dehydrated, because of this it creates an obstacle he must face. Also, another bad affect from the features of the setting the cyclist is facing is, the rough road ahead he had to face. “ROUGH ROAD AHEAD: DO NOT EXcEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT.” If I were the cyclist gazing at the sign I would die just knowing there was trouble up ahead. Luckily the cyclist made his way through and managed his obstacles well.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13167,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happy because he was always gratefull for everything his parents had done for him (Narciso Rodriguez). My opinion-I think that Narciso Rodriguez had told us students and adults a little bit of his life because he might want people to understand what he had went through in his life, and see how he got this way and how he got to Where he is today or now.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6926,3,"”Do not Exceed the posted speed limit” tells a story of learning and determination, as one cyclist bikes through the deserts of California, encountering obstacles such as snakes and a lack of water along the way. The descriptive features of the setting greatly affect the protagonist along his journey. The essay takes place in the early summer. As the cyclist prepares to retire for the day, he takes particular note of “the serenity of an early summer evening,” and ends the day feeling calm. The next morning he is excited and rejuvenated, ready to bike again. The heat rises as the day goes on, and by mid-day the cyclist begins to worry about his water supply. He boldly continues forth reaching new terrain, rolling hills. Here he begins to lose hope, and is disappointed when he seem the “town” he hoped to find is an abandoned juice factory. The cyclist thinks he is going to die due to the heat and lack of hydration, but gathers his strength to turn the final bend, and reaches a bait shop where he can stop and get water, he is finally relieved. In conclusion, as the cyclist continues his journey through the California desert, the change in both weather one terrain coincide and affect the cyclist’s change in physical and mental strength to continue traveling.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1143,1,"To the @CAPS1, I have recently heard that some people think that computers don't benefit society. However, I disagree with that. First, it allows children and adults to learn about distant places and other things. Also, it allows family and friends to connect with other family and friends. And lastly, it is a form of entertainment on a day that you can't go outside. Some people might not agree with me. However, I believe the computer wasn't a waste of thought. I think the computer is a benefits to society and the whole world. First, the computer allows children and adults to learn about distant places and, other things. People, professors, historians, and either highly educated people past discoveries and information about things everyday. That means everyday someone can learn something everyday of their life. When I do research on a important person in history, I learned things I never learned in school. The computer is the best way to allow people to put info they've learned for other people to see and gain knowledge of each other these are endless possibilities for everyone who owns a computer to learn. You wouldn't believe the things you can learn on a computer. Also, the computer allows family and friends stay in touch with other family and friends in far away places. If there was computers and someof your family moved to a diffrent. There wouldn't be an efficient way to stay in touch with them. The computer allows you to send e-mail to a families computer or celluar phones. The computer is the best way to stay close to your family even though they are far away. My brother is in @LOCATION1 and every day I get on the computer when I get home and video chat with him. If there was no computer, I wouldn't be able to chat with my brother. Lastly, the computer allows a form of entertainment on a rainy day. Certain software gives people the chance to create games and post online to the public. When I can't go outside because of the weather I get on my computer and play video games. The games keep me company. I can never play with other people with online multiplayer. Some of the games are educational also. The games teach you different things about history. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13068,5,"Throughout this @CAPS1 there is a very happy and loving vibe. This is shown in paragraph @NUM1, ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Here the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, form the backdrop to life in a warm home. This paints a glorious picture of what @CAPS2 life in the house was like. Another example in the text is at the end, in paragraph @NUM2, ""I will never forget how my parents turned a simple house into a home."" This shows with happiness and love, It does not matter how rich you are, or what you own. Anything can be a home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13481,5,"Throughout the passage, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the author displays many moods in his writing. One of the moods of the story is love. That his family filled thier home with things they loved. like the food they ate and the music the played. And they also loved the people in their family. Not their real family but the people in thier neiabor hood that they considered family. And they would always have they would always have people eat over and stay over if the needed to. And the other mood of the story is being grateful. That Narciso Rodriguez was grateful that his parents gave up everything to come to @LOCATION1 so he could have a good life. That they gave up all their friends, family, jobs, and the country they loved so he could have a good life. And he was grateful for all the things that they taught him. And that is the mood of the story.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9752,4,"I think the author concluded the Story with these lines because Saeng feels more confident. First, when saeng first saw the hibiscus, she was sad, but after seeing the flower, she got happy. Next, her mother helps her plant it and saeng is sure it'll be there in spring. Finally, Saeng feels better since she has reflected on her past",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6847,3,"To be able to have a good bike ride, you must have a good setting. To me, a good setting would about @NUM1° outside and sunny. You can’t go bike riding in snow because there is no way that the tires will move in the snow. You can’t go in rain or hail because the roads get slippery and you could getin a accident that could injure or kill you. If it is sunny outside you be able to ride freely on dry roads with a little breeze to go through your hair and you could be refreshed. That is why I believe it is important for the setting to be just right for a bike ride.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18384,7,One time I was told by my big brother that we were going to go to micigman adventure so I was waiting till he would come home is and then my dad told me that I should get ready to go so like to back up my shorts and ??? ??? that so I did that then I just sat there for about ??? was then I called him and he said ??? ??? I,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7555,3,The settings effects the cyclist because in California it could be really hot sometimes. The cyclist could dehydrate on a long trip and pass out really get hurt. Also there are a lot of hills which could be really hard on the cyclist.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16595,6,"One of the obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building was to strengthen the frame of the building. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below (paragraph @NUM1)."" If the building was not strengthen, all that stress and force would collapse the building. Another obstacle faced to the perfection of docking dirigibles was modifying it's safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable (paragraph @NUM2)."" If a dirigible were to be destroyed by fire in downtown New York, I guarantee a really serious hazardous accident. Downtown New York is densely populated, a destroyed dirigible in downtown New York puts in danger the passengers of the dirigible and the pedestrians of downtown. Other than the two obstacles explained above, nature is another obstacle to the Empire State Building. Strong winds can affect the Building or even the dirigible. ""The winds on Top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents (paragraph @NUM3)."" Violent winds could force the back of the dirigible to swivel around the mooring mast. A swiveling ship above pedestrians is no where close to safe. The law enforces that airships could not fly too low over urban areas. Flying too low over urban areas, once again, puts both pedestrians and passengers in state of danger. The dirigible could be blown by the wind and blow onto a sharp spire of other buildings in the area. These are the obstacles faced in docking a dirigible successfully.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1456,1,"How would you like to got a ""@CAPS1"" on your social studies report? What if you couldn't see your school friends at all after-school? What if you were bored to death, and you couldn't watch t.v. or play games? Some experts are about people because they think they are spending too much time using their computers and not enough time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. On your computer: you can watch videos and play games, you can chat and talk to people, and you can even boost up your grade. I honestly think that the thought of people being on their computers too much is a silly thought @CAPS2, let's look at how a computer can change your life. Lets say you have a history report the tomorrow, you forgot your history book at school, and you know nothing about the report. You are going to fail if you don't hand it in, so why not turn on your computer and open up the internet browser. I remember @TIME1 year I was doing a report about the @CAPS4 @CAPS3. I literally knew nothing about them and I failed to bring home my book. I opened up the internet and typed in @CAPS4 @CAPS3 in @ORGANIZATION1 and @DATE1 I found out that I got a @NUM1 on the report. You can also use the computer just to look up information for for about something that you might learn in school. ""@TIME1 @DATE1, I was reading about the @CAPS6 @CAPS7 and a few days @DATE1 we talked about how that @CAPS7 posibly could have been made. I was the only student in our grade that knew that answer. You can use the computer for playing games that are related to school. For example, how fast can you complete all of these multiplication problems or division problems. Look at what computers can do. If you got bad grades (without computer), you will go to a bad college and have a bad job, however, if you got good grades(with computer), you will go to a good college and get a good job. Next, let's look at how you can chat or talk to people. You can have a mesaging connection with someone by using @CAPS8 or a free to free conversation using @ORGANIZATION2 on your computer. Studies show that @PERCENT1 of people with computers have either @CAPS8 or @ORGANIZATION2 installed in their computers. You can also communicate with people who has an email address. I remember having a problem with my laptop and my crush knows everything about them. So I emailed him and how I get a response and I fixed my laptop. You are able to interact with people by meeting them online and then them on public. Everyone know about those dating websites that matches two people and them together. A computer can really the of your life. Lastly, let's look at what you can do in the computer when you are bored. Why you go youtube and watch videos that look appropriate and interesting? ""@CAPS10, I was done with homework and I didnt know what to do, so i online and spend only watching youtube videos, sometimes people like playing games. Just @TIME1, I was playing tetris, but only for @NUM2 minutes because I needed a goodnight's before the @CAPS11. You can also listen to the radio on a website. Statistics show that @PERCENT2 of people that listened to the radio @CAPS10 were in cars. But @PERCENT3 is also @PERCENT4 more listening to the radio online. Not only can a computer increase your grades and improve your life, can entertain you as well. As you can see, saving the of computers is is a silly idea and is absolutely non-sense. Computers can and make you. I honestly never seen someone on the computer for.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8984,4,"The auther ends with that paragraph to show how Saeng, like the budding Hibiscus, will get a new start in the spring and overcome obstacles.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10082,4,"In the text, when the mother said “It’s flowers aren’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. That’s what matter” This sentences shows that Saeng is just like the flowers. They’re strong to live through the winter, that shows they are very pretty and strong in the spring. This amphasis that Saeng will be strong and more confident in the spring. That’s why the author put it in at the end. It’s also reflected to the flower, how they’re pretty and strong in spring",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18858,7,"One time I was patient because, the teacher had to tell me something. So I wated by the door but then she had to go to the office so I had to wate. When the teacher came back she told me thanks for being patient. Patients really means you can wait. Some kids don’t be patient they get so made for example, there was @NUM1 kids in one group we were playing a game and they would get so made because they didn’t get called on a lol. But the game was radom you pick stick and who ever sticks it was went. So being patients mean you have to able to wait.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16218,6,"Al Smith saw an opportunity for his Empire State Building. He wanted to add a mooring mast to the top of the building so that dirigibles could anchor there for refueling or service and let people on and off. In order to do this, the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be ""modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" They would have to spend over sixty thousand dollars in modifications of the framework. Builders had to make it 102 floors and also create a glassed-in observation area along with an open observation platform, furthermore, they had to complete the roof and then move on to building the steel mast with glass windows. After all that time and money spent in re-creating the building, the dirigibles couldn't dock there. The wind was so strong that the back of the ship would always be moving. Also, there is a law that airships cant fly too low over urban areas. It wasn't worth it in the end.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10013,4,"I think the author concludes the story winter hibiscus with this paragraph for these reasons. The first reason is to show that the girl won't give up. She was crying in the store and just very depressed. But, she knows that she has to keep going. It shows a sense of determination. Another reason why I think the author made this the last paragraph is this. It showed her getting used to her environment. I think the author used what she remembers about her country and what she now knows of the new country and puts them together. That way she gets hope from both. For example, in the article it says “many of the things she had thought of as strange before, had become….. almost familiar to her now. This shows that she is realizing that she is used to the arrangement right now. So she then gets hope from it. Also, I, think the author did that so that it would add a positive effect on the story. That is why I think the author wrote that as the last paragraph.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6033,3,"The features of the setting in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” affect the main character the cyclist. The cyclist is biking “through the high desert of california in June.” So naturally it can be infereal that it is not and dry, making water a delicacy. As the cyclist is passing through a ghost town and a pump that releases “a tarlike substance followed by brackish water” he is runningout of his precious water. The surrounding landscape of lonely hills tumbleweeds and snakes does not inspire confidence. In fact, the cyclist feels that “l cald drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June.” He finds an old Grape Juice Factory no longer in service causing more anxiousness and dispare l have had an experience similar to this where l wat out walking in a state park in the @DATE1. I was freezing, and a desolate landscape of snow covered trees made me feel at if I’d never be warm again similar to He cyclist who’s environment made him feel hes wald die of dehydration. So, as can be seen. He setting of this short story affects the cyclist. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15635,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. However, this task was not so easy. The builders of the Empire State Building could not just drop a mooring mast on its flat roof because they had to consider how the size of the dirigibles were affected. ""The architects could not simile drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"" (paragraph @NUM1). Also, it would be difficult to transmit the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure."" The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation"" (paragraph @NUM1). The cost to improve the building's framework was also an obstacle. ""Over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework"" (paragraph @NUM1).",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12943,5,"The mood the author creates in this memoir is gratitude. The author is very grateful to his parents for all that they have sacrificed for him. For example, they came to the United States from Cuba, without a clue of its customs or language. The authors parent's left behind their careers, their families and friends, just that they can have a better life for their baby. The author's parents let people stay in their home so that they could get back on their feet. The authors gratitude is clearly shown in paragraph six when he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" The author clearly states that he is grateful for all that his parents have given him. The author also says that he thinks that what his parents did for him was the ""most courageous thing [that he] could have ever done.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1785,1,My opinion is that people should have computers in their homes. Computers should be for important things like searching for jobs and other things. People can do their work in the computer. To teach your childrens how to use a computer or let their children go on the internet to they can search kids stuff. People shouldn't all their time on the computers and spend less time with their families and friends. I think people should spend more time with their families and their friends then spending it on the computer. But a lot of people use computers almost everyday. But a lot of people use computers almost everyday. Probably your family are worried about people spending their time everyday in the computer. They their friends how to type in the computer and teach them some stuff about the history. Do you think that people should alot more time with their families and be happy about it the they are spending time with their families. I think people shouldn't use the computer when they have a vistor over their house they don't their vistor think you are attracted to the computer. They should give people the ability to learn about faraway places and to learn things about the internet. But not everyone agree that people shouldn't use computers because people can get attracted to it and people don't want that. To happen. And families are concerned about that a lot of people use this can of stuff. Other people think that this is a great idea to use a lot of computer and spend more on it then their families. So do you think that people should spend more time on their families and friends then picking atention to the computers.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10191,4,"The author closes the story with this paragraph to show that Saeng is willing to try again. Even though it @MONTH1 not be right away, Saeng wants to try to see all of the flowers that remind her of home again without breaking down. She can tell that although her mother is understanding, Saeng has let her down a little bit. “But how could you? You know how much we–what happened?” when her mother says this, she feels that she has let her mother down. But then, Mrs. Panouvong expresses that she is glad Saeng got it, after hearing that she had failed. Sensing her mother’s inkling of disappointment, Saeng wants to try again.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8991,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it makes the story longer and it gives it a good ending but I have no idea on what that means so the author should explain what it means not me.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19430,7,One time I had to be patient was on my birthday. One year my grampa and gramhna was late for my birthday. I had to wait a few hours. I sat down intill they got here. When they got here we get to eat cake. After that I open my presents. It took them about @NUM1 hour for them to get here.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9444,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this because shes proving she has the strength to do something that she failed the first time again. She took this plant and looked at it as a memory and a passage of time. Saeng planted it as a reminder of home and her promise. Saeng said, ”Its not a real one” ""Not like the kind we had before.” Saeng loved home and wish she was back there but her new promise was what had mattered.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1630,1,"Has a computer helped you ever answerd hard question or type up an essay for school for work? I know a computer has helped me far years so why would I teminate it or want it gone. Heres the controversy, many experts believe computers don't benefit society but people, such as myself, believe the exact oppositte. Their are many benefits to oconing a computer such as they're always a source of information, allow you to talk online with others, and they can help people with their school and job loans. No matter what the problem, don't you believe a computer is always a source of information that could help? A computer has endless information on any topic unlike books. This is because everyone, from the most to the least intelligent people, have their opinions, ideas, and hard facts in a computer on the web. I once watched a movie of a man who despised computers and new technology. Thus, for most of his life he wondered the world with no hint or clue as where to @CAPS4 in search of a rare artifact called the @CAPS1 diamon. He never found the diamond but his son who searched it on the internet found out the root geo from @CAPS1 meant underground in ancient @CAPS2 culture. due to a computer he found the diamond underground, beneath the ancient @CAPS2 temples. Therefore, I believe if people would embrace technology such as computers they would find many things that they never thought of. also, computers give you the ability to chat online with family and friends. Many people use computers to stay in touch when they have no available phones, with a computer you could chat with your friend down the street or your family member on vacation in another country. No matter where you are a compute can always be on available form of communication. for example, the only way many of our soldiers fighting wars stay in touch with their loved ones back home is by talking to them online with a computer. One thing I know is no matter how old to probably about @NUM1, if you have a job or go to school you have used a computer to help you with @CAPS4. Whether it was getting an answer to a homework question or researching a person for a project, we all use computers. Computers even have the ability to help you make brochures or pamphlets. This can greatly help you advertise if that is something you do at work. Also, many people don't have the neatest handwriting so they type their essay or letter to their boss, you can even choose what type of handwriting it types. No matter the case, with work a computer always helps. Yes, I do believe computers benefit the society. Althourgh, some experts do disagree with me and believe they can become an addition. Still take my suggestions seriously and continue to use your computer. Remember, it is always a source of info., you can chat online, and it helps with work.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15420,6,"The obstacles of the builders of the Empire State Building faced were hard because they couldn't just drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building do to the frame work Also the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation. Which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. The steel frame of the Empire State Building would also have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. And over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications have to be made to the building's framework The architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from sides, with a steps-back design that imitated over all shape of the building itself capital rocket-shape mast would have four wings at its corners, of shiny-aluminum, and would rise to a conical roof that would house the mooring arm.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21209,8,"Fishing trip gone wrong @CAPS1 me introduce you to what I will be talking about today, fishing. Fishing has been a big part of @CAPS7 life ever since I was born. When I was little I used to go out with @CAPS7 dad and brother to go fishing. @CAPS7 dad loved to take us to go lake fishing. Ive fished every lake around these parts. When I was five years old I got a brand new @CAPS2 @CAPS3 fishing pole it was so shiny and had a great ball bearing spinning reel. It even had some chrome going up the handle so when the sun hit it just right it would shoot a beams of bright light @CAPS18 the ground. Well as I grew older so did @CAPS7 fishing pole. The reel didn't turn as well and the chrome didn't shine like it used to. When I turned @MONEY1 @CAPS7 pole was a broken down and just wouldn't work for @CAPS7 fishing needs anymore. So @CAPS18 the day of @CAPS7 tenth birthday @CAPS7 family and friends gave me a some money. I told them that I wanted to buy a new @CAPS2 @CAPS3 fishing pole. So after @CAPS7 birthday I had acquired one hundred and @MONEY1. I thought I was the richest man in the whole wide world. Latter that night @CAPS7 dad came up to me and told me that @CAPS7 cousins wedding was this @DATE1 and that we might have time after to @CAPS15 a little bit of fishing. I went into the garage and packed @CAPS7 tackle box with pliers, hooks, spinners and all the fishing gear I would need. After the @CAPS7 cousins wedding @CAPS7 dad said ""@CAPS6 go fishing."" @CAPS7 dad and I changed into our fishing clothes and were off but I had remembered that I needed a fishing pole so I asked ""@CAPS8 dad we need to stop at @ORGANIZATION1 quickly"". It turned out that there was a @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS18 the way. We pulled into the @ORGANIZATION1 parking lot and I went in. I ran over to there sporting goods and found the last @CAPS2 @CAPS3 fishing pole siting @CAPS18 the shelf so I got it down and looked it over. This was the pole for me, the only downside was the price that happened to be seventy @MONEY1. I bought it anyways. I walked out of the store with @CAPS7 new @CAPS2 @CAPS3 fishing pole feeling like I was a million bucks. As we arrived at our fishing spot I noticed that we were not at a lake but a large river. @CAPS7 dad explained that I needed to be safe around the river cause you can get swept away if you fall in. I got out of our car and the wind was harsh. It was chilling to the bone. I took out @CAPS7 new pole and tackle box and started to setup @CAPS7 pole for river fishing. I put @CAPS18 one large weight and big hook. I was ready for anything or at least I thought. I then reached down into @CAPS7 big red tackle box and pulled out a large worm. ""I think the fish will love this."" I say aloud to @CAPS7 dad. Staring out at the fast flowing water and toss @CAPS7 baited fishing line off shore. A big splash of water then ripples, @CAPS7 dad and I smile with satisfaction. Right next to me was a branch buried within the embankment. Setting @CAPS7 pole down rather softly I look upon @CAPS7 dad as he pulls in a fish. Well @CAPS18 our walk down to river there was this @CAPS13 @CAPS14 outhouse. Me needing to use the restroom, I turned to @CAPS7 right and said to @CAPS7 dad ""@CAPS15 not lose @CAPS7 fishing pole, I don't want it to going flying into the river if I get a big fish @CAPS18."" @CAPS7 dad reply's ""@CAPS17, @CAPS17 just go to the bathroom already."" @CAPS18 @CAPS7 walk to the bathroom I didn't see the big @CAPS19 that had landed near @CAPS7 fishing line. @CAPS7 dad saw them getting closer and closer to @CAPS7 line so he thought it would be a good idea to scare them away. As soon as I walk out of the bathroom @CAPS7 dad goes running and waving his arms at the @CAPS19. They all take off into the air, but something was trailing behind one of them weighing it down. What was it you @MONTH1 ask? It was @CAPS7 brand new fishing pole! It was at least @NUM1 maybe @NUM2 feet in the air. As soon as @CAPS7 pole took off flying it started falling. It didn't land @CAPS18 shore but it landed in the middle of this big wide river. @CAPS7 dad looks at me and says with a smile ""That's the first fishing pole that I've ever seen fly."" I start laughing uncontrollably then @CAPS7 dad starts cracking up. After the laughter was done @CAPS7 dad looked @CAPS18 shore for something to pull @CAPS7 pole in with but to @CAPS7 surprise he found it @CAPS18 shore down river.Will @CAPS20",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9549,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph because that paragraph says when she is going to try to take the test and make changes in her changing life. For example she is sad in the story because she failed the test and want to go home. If she passes in the spring she might try to make changes and live here. This is why the author concludes the story with that paragraph.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18427,7,"One time was the often best friend I had went to a ride it was so hot outside but the first ride we on was called the @CAPS1. The line was super long, it was like going through a maze because how the rope were tied up we stood in the line for about forty five minutes but it felt like two hours . But I didn’t really complain about except for my friend she kept complaining about how hot it was and how her large feet were tired, but when we finally got there we stared rolling to know how . When we sat down in the rollar coaster it was so much fun. I think it was worth waiting for.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1072,1,"Dear editor, @CAPS1 you think that people spending a lot of time on the computer is good, I don't. People should get more exercize. Also they don't get enough fresh air. Finnaly they don't spend enough time with family and friends. Now we have to determin weather people should spend a lot of time on the computers. Those people who spend alot of time on the computer could be going outside everyday to get exersize. Some parents got their kids hooked on playing on the computer all day instead of going out side to get exersize. They could ride bikes, scooters, play basket ball, wiffle ball. They can also go swimming play, sports, and go to a play ground. Finnally they could go for a long walk on the beach. People need to get fresh air instead of being on the computer all day. They can go sit on the beach for awile, go outside to watch their kids play or watch their games like baseball or basket ball, or they can go outside just to be outsides. They can go sit on their porch to wait for their kids to get off the bus from school. Those people who love to play on the computor don't spend enough time with their family or friends. They could go visit their family more often, go out for lunch with their frinds. Also they can spend more time doing things with their kids. Even though there is a chat on the computer it is nice to talk to your friends in person. The time has come to decide weather people spending a lot of time on the computer is a bad thing or not. They don't ge enough exersize every day. They also don't get enough freshair. Finally they spend time with their friends and family. So now you need to write a letter to your local newspaper telling them which you are choosing.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6097,3,The cyclist went on a rough journey and he was explaning how tiering it was and difficult it was for him going from town to town having to diel with lack of water poisonous snakes and the condition of the road.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12272,5,"In this memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez it shows the story of how a young boys home and parents have changed his life forever. Originally from @LOCATION2's parents immigrated to the United States in 1956. They started off in a small apartment then later getting the money to move into a ""simple house."" ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that family had nothing to do with being a blood relation."" @CAPS1 some of the most loving families are not related. The mood in this memoir is inspiring to the narrator. This allows the reader to feel such love and happiness which is being expressed. ""They came selflessly as many immigrants do to give their children a better life."" The narrator is explaining what courage it took for his parents to make such an adjustment for the sake of his own happiness. Overall the memoir ""@PERSON1"" is a story full of love and should be told for generations to come. The main lesson here is don't take your family for granted, the narrator is forever grateful that his parents ""turned this simple house into a home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4761,2,Offensive things should be taken off for many reason that will be explained later on. Things in magazines shoud be appropriate for people to see. The first reason why they should be removed from the shelves is it might be offending to someone important like the president of the @ORGANIZATION1 or the @CAPS1 of your state. If the subjects in the reading material are offensive to someone they should say something to defend themselves. If they don't speak up no one will think to change anything. What I don't understand is why people would let that ridiculous stuff be put in the magazines and music and movies anyway.Even though movies are kind of different. Movies are mostly just made up ideas that people come up with. So if people are offended it is just pretend to begin with. Offending things in books well the author probably has a reason for it. It might be something that is offending yet people need to know this in case it has to do with someone you know.For example in the Newspaper I read an article about our current president. @PERSON1 was being question about his birth certificate. People did not believe that he was born in @LOCATION1. I personally think he was in fact born in the @CAPS2.S . But of course they did see his certificate that proved he was a member so that mess should be dropped and forgotton. It was uncalled for to begin with. I wonder what was going through his head when someone asked him that question. I'm sure someone would have seen it before he even became president.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18503,7,"One time I was patient was I went to the doctors office. Yesterday I went to the doctors office and the waiting room was so full that we had to stand. Because there were so many people waiting we had to wait along with them. We were number @NUM1, and it took us @NUM2 hours just to get to sit down! It took a lot of patience because the waiting room time + the time waiting for a doctor about @NUM3 hours. When I finally got in I felt @NUM4 releived! It felt like I had an elephant lifted off my shoulders. Even though it took a long time, it was worth it now I am feeling better and back in school!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3819,2,"The author Katherine Paterson makes a very good point when she states that there are books on the shelf that poeple wish that there kids or even there on self did not read or that people wish they did not read. But if your were to take away ever book someone found offensive there would be hardly any books left in this world. There will always be one person that finds a book that they do not like because of tone the author uses or if they do not like what they call eachother. People all have there own mind sit to away that they want to live or how they want there kids to live. Having books taken off the shelf because people do not like them would result in having no more books on our shelves. I feel like if there books on the shelves about kids drinking then have bad effects on there life cause they did drink then maybe the kid reading it would stop drinking or not even try drinking. The books about getting raped and them not telling becasue they are afriad of what would happening. Then in the long run telling after they get pregant or injured from it. Them saying that they wish they would have told might help the kids that this happened to or this might happen to might help them feel so relief and tell someone and save themself. Books like these should not get taken off the shelf because one person does not like it, in the long run if they did take it off some could get hurt or not know what to do and it couls be all that one person that did not like it fault. How would you feel if you did that to someone. Maryrin @CAPS1 is a good Author that shows how something that you @MONTH1 think is good but truns out to be really bad. Her books focus a lot on how girls need to watch what they are doing to keep themselves safe. I have a friend that have parents that do not like the music on her ipod. So she had to take it off. Well with taking it off she made @CAPS2 of the songs that they did not like. She drives so they music is always playing on the radio while she drives so she can listen to the songs that she does not have on her ipod. That is just one example of how you will always get around listening to what you want to hear. Music will always be out there. There will always be songs that poeple do not like. Either due to there religion or even if they do not like the words used. But even if they stop putting songs on the radio there is still internet out there and people can just get there songs from there. There are songs out there that should not be out there but the more someone tries to push the songs out of the world and out of people listening to them the more some kids or even adults are going to try to listen to them. In the world today there are always a good and a bad song that is the same. Artics now always have a bad song that they would have to make into a good song. That is just how the songs go. That is just how they use there brains. No one can stop them. Not even the people that publish the songs and put then on the radio. In the long run of things the more people try to stop things from not being in this world the more people are going to try to get them. It is a very bad idea to take the books off of shelves and take music off of the radio. People need to hear what bad things can happen when you do not listen to someone. A kid @MONTH1 grow up knowing not to talk to people they do not know but never really understand what bad could come out of it. But when they read a book about a kid there age getting kidnapped they @MONTH1 understand more clearly on the whys in life. So if I can say so myself I think that it is a very bad idea for books to be taken off the shelf because one mother or two dads think that book is not good for thier little girl or there teenage son. They need to read it for themself and find out what really could happen if they did something like that. Keep the books on the self. Keep playing the some music. Let your kids or grandchildren find out the danger on there own rather then you just keep telling them. I am a teenage girl and I would rather read about it then having my parents tell me over and over agian. So keep the books on the shelves. That the radio play. Just be safe in doing it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3933,2,"Having libraries is a good thing because it teaches children to learn how to read and get examples from the book or magazine that they are reading or just looking at it. How can they help with children and family memebers that hardly ever knew how to read and write about them. Some libraries have shelves some of them dont that is crazy but silly to.Libraries have books and magazines that is for children and also for adults and even grandparents. How can they tell if there is a position that you have to put your books on bookshelfs and on a cart. They would have to have alot of respect and also alot of body work to put the things that need to be in the library. Librarians can have more than just books they can have cds, computers, and also a table that has coloring pages for children.I think they need to be removed because i wouldnt want my children going in the library and finding a whole bunch of stuff that they dont even know what it is about. This would be a wonderful thing to do they should not have stuff like that in a library in the first place. The librarians should convince the person that brought those in there and tell them to take them back where they got it from.I would think that they should just put stuff that would usually go into a nice and quite place to sit down and read and also there is other options computers to do your homework on. Librarians can have stuff like that that is wrong that children see that all the time this is ridiculas and un called for that can teach them bad stuff they shouldnt be doing.How can they tell if they shouuld convince them to not have unappropriate things that should not be in a library that children should not see. They could take a book home that they dont even know what it is about or what might be in it that should not be in it. I think they should just take everything that is approprate and just send it somewhere else where it belongs instead of where little children can reach and learn whats going on.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13553,5,"In the memor from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives by Narciso Rodriguez his mood is very meaning full. You can tell that what he's saying he really means it, he's senser. He say's ""my parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen"" in paragraph @NUM1 line @NUM2. In paragraph @NUM2 line @NUM4 he say's ""it was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immgrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need. Or when he tells us that his first friend was his babysitter @PERSON2 who was his land lords daughter. Narciso Rodriguez tells us how his parents ""always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family. in paragraph @NUM5 line @NUM6. He tells us in paragraph @NUM7 second line how his mother and father ""came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life"" even if it did mean leaving behind their loved ones, and things they loved. In the last sentence of his memor he says ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home.""With those last words you from Narciso Rodriguez you know that he is senser, about what he's saying and that he could never thank his parents for what they did for him.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12964,5,"The aurther talks about home and family which would be a calm, caring, and happy mood. The author created these moods by talking about memories and how her parents moved from cuba to give there child a better life and how they take in family mebers in need until they get back on there feet. She said her parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love for cooking that is still me today. Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Which is kinda like a happy mood and "" Here, the innocence of childhood the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home. Which is definatly a calm and happy mood.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13036,5,"Througout the story, Narciso Rodriguez shows examples of how grateful, loved, and unified his family felt with their struggles they had overcame and heritage they were proud of. Paragraph @NUM1 illustrates the fond memories Narciso has of his house and childhood. Paragraph @NUM2 displays Narciso's strong sense of family within his local @CAPS1 community. Paragraph @NUM3 explains Narciso's parents' rough journey from Cuba to @LOCATION1, and paragraph @NUM4, Narciso explains how grateful he is for his parents' hard work and determination for their children to have a good life. ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"" wraps up the whole article and shows how grateful and cared for Narciso feels for his warm, welcoming home celebrating life, love, and their Cuban culture.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15913,6,In the 1930's this would have been a difficult obstacle to face. the idea altogether was doubted by many People. the first @CAPS1 was comparing in height with the chrysler building. and the mooring mast wold have worked in theory but in reality had to many Problems. It was a potentially dangerous attempt.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10594,4,"The author concludes the story with, ‘when they com back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding. Then I will take that test again.” @CAPS1 then she will become more familiar. For example, the author says, “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many things that she had thought of as strange before had become , through the quiet repetition of season upon season almost familiar to her now.” That tells me that she feels that over same time , she will become more familiar with driving and then she will take the test again. Then she @MONTH1 pass it",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19337,7,"I’m writing about a time when I was patient. Because I was about to go to a party in I had to be patient but I didn’t I had got angry in I just couldn’t patients. In I also no someone who patient. They just couldn’t wait they really couldn’t wait but I waited, waited, waited in I got mad I couldn’t even wait no longer. I was actually was waiting on my aunt to come pick me up in she didn’t @CAPS1 I called my mom in she said she was going to take me to the party In I was patient in she didn’t come @CAPS1 I didn’t go to the party in I was mad. Because my mama didnt come pick me up, @CAPS1 I calling my grandma and she came in pick up. That was the only time I was patient of learning.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16065,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle that was faced was the buildings foundation. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure will have to be transmitted, nearly eleven hundred feet below."" This became an obstacle because the building had already been built, so they'd have to work around the existing foundation. Another obstacle that was faced was a law. The law stated ""no airships are allowed to fly low over urban areas."" This became an obstacle because they had to convince government people it was safe. Finally the greatest obstacle was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This was an obstacle because winds could get so bad that the dirigible tied up could rip the roof off and hurt the people below. In conclusion, that is how the builders in the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7599,3,"The features of the environmental setting is affecting the cyclist. A setting is a certain time and place an event is taking place along with the setting their are features, which is the background description basically giving away additional information about the subject or idea. The features along with the setting are intefering with the cyclist by the hot temperature in Lodi, California making the cyclist or biker hotter than usualier as he heads in the wrong direction closer and nearer to the hot blazen scroaching desert. In addition to this he is running out of water and is beginning to get more and more exhausted from the heat plus he is starting to lose consciousness along with getting dehydrated. This is a major problem for the character because he is losing his sense of direction and because of this he is getting more panickly as his supply of water is running extremely low. A instance of the environmental setting affecting the cyclist is “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. The water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of dried sweet circled my skirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from heartstroke on a gorgeous in June ""(Joe Kurmaskie, @NUM1)."" @CAPS1 example is “This sight was troubling. I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly and I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June “(Joe Kurmaskie, @NUM2)”. The hotness and heat had also increased the character’s confidence in himself as he was getting more and more panickly. A instance of this is “I began breaking the ride down into distances. I could see on the horizon, telling myself that if I could make it this far, I’d be fine “(Joe Kurmaskie, @NUM1). In conclusion, the hot setting in California had affected the cyclist in a number of ways it had exhasted his water supply and this caused him to become exhausted, dehydrated, and making him lose his logically sense to make decisions however his loss of sense of direction also gave him more self confidence as he stirved to the roads and serves town that was about twenty miles away in order to get water so that he @MONTH1 survive.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6188,3,"The features of the setting do affect the cyclist. one example is, the condition of his jar",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4280,2,"Books? Movies? Music? Magazines? We all like to read them, watch them, and listen to them. @CAPS2's hard to stop all that. Plus, @CAPS2's impossible to stop. Everywhere you go you can find these items. Such as the movie store, the mall, a gas station, a yard sale, and even your public library. People of all ages can go anywhere and get a book, movie, a @CAPS1, or a magazine and @CAPS2's perfectly fine. But, there is one problem. Censorship. Yes that's what i said, 'censorship.' @CAPS2 means alot to some parents when @CAPS2 comes to their children. Espescially when @CAPS2 comes to the public library where they live. If a parent wants to take their kids to the library and get some books or movies or ect. that's okay but if a parent has to worry about a movie or magazine has 'bad things' in @CAPS2 that children shouldn't see is a problem. They want to be able to enjoy the movie or @CAPS1 or magazine with their children but bad things like nudity, violence, racial pictures, or profanity can be really offensive to parents AND people alone, just not parents. A lot of these examples can be offensive to anyone or everyone and censorship is a pretty good idea. There is no way if I was a parent that I would want my kids to look at or watch or read any 'bad things' because we all know that is not right. Kids are young and don't need to be learning about that stuff at a young age. I think censoring is a really great idea and I think Libraries and other places that have books, movies, music, magazines, ect. should censorize there things. But if they wont censorize anything they should at least put them in catagories such as 'adults' or 'young adults' or 'kids'. If they catagorize the ratings then the parents and you know where to look for and don't have to worry about censorship. Censorship should be practiced everywhere.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 5,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I know having computers has a positive effect on people. The computers connect families, contain information which is great for peoples education, and are very conveint. Computors are a step into the future and we should take advantage of it. First off the internet or e-mail will help family members connect. My family, which lives @NUM1 hours away by car, love to talk with me by e-mail. This helps me connect with my family and is just another reason why we should have computors. Another reason that includes family is when the family is just sitting around and are calling everywhere just to find a board game, it would just be easier to go online to find it. This way it would be quick and easy to find that one board game. The last reason why a computer would help a family is if a family wants to get in to any kinds of activities and they need the number they could just go online. On the internet the family could find the numbers, the and some information about it. This way more and more families can do activities together. As one can see the computer is bringing more and more families together. An other reason why the computers are good for society is educations. With information at the tip of your fingers more and more people will want to learn. Now a days people try to find the out, but will all the tools on the computers mae people get the education. Secondly computers are another way to go to collage. If you arn't up to going to school/collage because your sick. You wouldn't have to miss anything because with a click of a button you will have the materials needed for what was missed. Lastly everyone knows that in @LOCATION2 most classrooms can't afford one computer. The children want computors so hard. If they were to get one it would change so much. They would be able to learn so much more than before. The children could lean about different countries far away. As a result computers would improve the way we learn. The last reason why computers are so helpful is convience. Now a say the world is crazy, so if we don't have to go out or talk to someone we won't. The computer will offer the ability to confrence will other people so that there would be communication between work parttners. With the ability to talk with another for work would make us a lighter nation. This is only one of the many reasons computers are very conviente, subssiquently computers are conviente because you could book flights, vacations, rentals, and much more. With a click of a button you should be going to @CAPS1 or a nice vacation.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6812,3,"The raugher the road gets for him the more determination he has at the beginning towards the end he had the mind set that, “it didn’t matter it was going to die, “this took a toll on him and it was hard to go on. He realyed he didn’t want to die that way and so he kept on, eventually leading to civilisation. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1505,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 of the students and staff members of @CAPS3 @CAPS4 school find computers verry important. Computers not only help people in school but at home too. I know that the readers of this artical will agree that computers are verry helpful, they teach us about people and things far away, and they are great for chating online! Most people use compoters every day! Computers are verry helpful tools in every day life. They always have a program that if you spell something wrong it corrects you. Computers even have websites of a dictionary were people can look up words. I know this is verry helpful because my brother is writing his collige essays and their are no colliges that will be impressed by a gramaticly incorrect essay. Computers also help you find things you need really fast, like food restrants and the closest malls, or even jobs! Not only do computers help people with spelling and jobs but they also can teach us about far away places. Computers can show and tell us of wonderful places beond what we have scean. A lot of normal societys familys have been on vacation before. To find an intriging place to go they can look it up on the world wide web. Even if a family cant go on a vacation they can still find from their computer cheeper closer things to do. When computers are beig used to find places and thing across the world and near you is they can also give teens the oppritunity to chat with their friends online. A lot of students in @CAPS3 hallow school have a facebook account. Most use this account to talk to their friends online. I also have a facebook and I use it almost everyday to talk to my cousin from @LOCATION1 that I havent scean sence I was @NUM3. But, computers arent just used for fun chating they can also be used for school blogs. In my language arts class we have a reading blog that every student has to participate in. This blog allows the class to not wast class time to talk about recently read books. In conclusion computers should be taken seriosly because they do help society. Computers help us every day, they teach us and they can be verry fun and eductional. Remember what @PERSON1 from the department of tecnolgey at @ORGANIZATION1 said, ""@CAPS5 can only get better if socitey accepts it.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10048,4,"I belive that the author concludes the story with “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”, was a great way to end it becase I think that she sees how much the hibiscus can take then she can take just about anything mainly the test. Also when her mother said “You what?” “Her mother stared at her incredulously”. Sh might have also understood that if her mum could get over being mad then she would over come being upset about the test.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9346,4,"The author ends the story with this paragraph to show that Saeng will follow nature and try to fit into her new land. Saeng has failed her driver’s test and feels out of place in her new home. The text states, “As Saebba nedae tall and lush. And surrounded there garden” (No 1).When she sees the @CAPS1 it reminds her of old home where she fit in.Now she wants to wait to see that flower grown so when she takes the driver’s test again.Also,she sees geese fly over her head when she plants he r flower. The author writes. ”…She realized that many of the things that she had thought strange before had become…almost familiar to her how”(No @NUM1).The geese coming back in the spring will now also remind her of her new name and how must try to live there happily now. In the last paragraph the author writes,” I will take that test again”(No @NUM1).This gives the feeling of Saeng trying to start a new beginning in this new home. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7138,3,"The setting affected the cyclist because the condition of his surrounding it was hot so he got dehydrated more and needed more water. There were a lot of hills so he had to pedal harder and use more energy to get up the hills. There were no cars, building, smog, just nature. It was peaceful and relaxful ride on the bike thats the setting affects the cyclist.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 51,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever wondered how to get somewhere and you didn't have a map or @CAPS1 near you and the only thing that was the near you was a @CAPS3. Well I am saying you should go on it and search were you want to go. Computers are very helpful in every one's daily life they have so many facts and interesting things on them, @CAPS2 about again trying to figure out were someone lives it's very easy, go on google and type in someones's adress and there you go. The @CAPS3 is also very good because have you ever thought about one of your friends or a special someone and you havent seen them in like a really long time and you miss them well no problem mostley all computers have some sort of camera in them were you could video chat or just chat regular on the enternet. That is very helpful because even though you could just go on the phone and call them it's better to do it online because how about if you havent seen them you want to see a picture of them they could just send it to you on some sort of chat page or just your email. It is so much better then mailing one picture in the mail and it takes days for the mail to come if you could do it the faster way on line and on video chat it will be better.. The @CAPS3 is also very helpful because how about one day you want to go some were and you dont know what the weather is going to be well you could go to put on the tv and see but there is so many communications and you cant really see because they move the weather days fast. On the @CAPS3 you could type the weather in for one week and it will tell you and you could look at it for as long as you want and it will stay there so you could see the whole week without the screen having fast as the image is not in the light light or if it's to dark. The @CAPS3 is so helpful. People do say that it is good to get off the @CAPS3 and go for a walk outside in nature I do agree with that but people and children do get their exercising by walking around the house and going outside going shopping. Computers are helpful and nice and another thing is say one day you are online and you are looking at clothes or shoes and you want to buy them but you dont want to go to the mall a half hour away from were you live you could just buy them online and they will be shipped to your house and you dont even have to lift a fingure. They are also good because they have like a dictionary on it were if you dont know how to spell a word you type it in the best way you can and it corrects your spelling and tells you what the word is, also the computers have pictures of everything, if you want to see how something looks like you can type it in and shows you. with all the facts I have given you I hope you agree with me that computers are very helpful nice and safe.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6062,3," The bike rider in the short story “Do not exceed posted speed limit” by @PERSON1, is greatly affected by the condition of land around him. He is riding through the extremely dry desert and is running, low on water. However since it is such a dry place he can’t find any. Also since it is out in the middle of no where, there is no one he can ask for some. If this story was set somewhere else he wouldn’t have has either problems.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15075,6,"The obstacles the builders had to face where rational, but there are some things you sould think of first, such as peoples safty, aircraft hight limets, and wind. They they thought about how to dock it, How to get the passengers safly to the landing area. What they did work on was smart though, they had the the thing that connects the dirigibles to the dock, the electric winch. They had a baggage, and ticket area. What they thought of was smart, but the other stuff first.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4667,2,"Censorship in librarys can be a positive and negative thing. I think this because there can be somethings that you @MONTH1 not want your children to read. But there also can be things that you do want them to read. Age groups can play a big role in censorship because there are things that you dont want to see a kid reading when he or she is young. But if it is censored then they will not even be able to read it when they get older. It all depends on what kind of things are in the books, music, movies, and magazines. If you find something offensive that you read in a book or saw in a magazine to some people that @MONTH1 not be offensive at all. This is why I think that the censorship can be good and bad. I am sure that there @MONTH1 be somethings that you have read that wasn't offensive to you but it @MONTH1 still be offensive to others. Censorship in my opinion can be a good thing when the things that are in the book, movie, magazine, and music are not true and that @MONTH1 be offensive to more than a small group. Lets say that there are two books written about the same true topic. The first books material is very well written and @MONTH1 have offensive material in it here and there. The second book is also well written but @MONTH1 not all be there the whole story @MONTH1 not be the same as what happened because they censored it because it can't be in the library. Which would you rather read? Personally I would rather read the book that @MONTH1 have some offensive material but has the complete story of what happend. Say you were the writer of a book and it took you a long time of hard work and dedication to finish the book and get it published. Would you want your book to be on the shelf at the library? I know I would but if your writing about something that happend in your life that could have been offensive to others they @MONTH1 not allow that book on the shelf of a library. If the things that are in the book are true or are in real life. Than why show your children a book that isn't true? Im not saying go get your child a war book and have them read it when they are very young. When reading a book that someone spent a long time and lots of hard work on you are looking into their perspective. Maybe there perspective of what happend is alot different than yours, but that can be a good thing. Even with the offensive material books, movies, magazines, and music can still be good to some people and bad to others. I have went to librarys and found books that I was interested in and I think that some of them could be found offensive to others. If the contents of the book, movie, magazine, and the music are not true and can be found offensive then sure that should be censored. But if it is censored it should only be for a certain age group. I have also went and got books at the library that have true stories that can be found offensive by some people, but that doesn't mean it should be censored. A book that @MONTH1 have material in them that could be 'bad' for some people. That does not mean that after they read it they are going to go start using the same offensive language that could be in the book. It all depends on the persons perspective if they find a book offensive or that has some 'bad' material in it then don't read it, and find something that you wouldnt find offensive. Overall the things that we read, watch, and listen to @MONTH1 not all be bad even if it has some offensive material in it. To some it can be bad to others it can be part of their life. If I had a story to tell and I spent a long time working on it. I would want it to be read, seen, and heard. Censorship @MONTH1 be good for some and bad for others. If you are a person that allways likes a happy ending then maybe censorship is good. But if you want the whole story that can be non-fiction or fiction then censorship is not for you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9180,4,"The author chose to conclude the last paragraph with the story to show that she has not given up. It shows that she has not given up because it says “overhead...geese...honk...familiar to Saeng now (second to last paragraph).” @CAPS1 when she buys the hibiscus, because, it holds many memories from home, to keep her going. Her mother still making an “omelet with slices of bitter melon” made her math water, @CAPS1 reminding her of home, gave her hope to not give up.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20922,8," Emotions are an essential part of life. Some emotions bring tears and laughter, which alone are two powerful and essential things to life. There was a time not too long ago that I was able to turn a girl's tears to laughter and made her day a little better.It all starts with the craze of today's teenage world, ""@CAPS1"". Which to those who don't know, it is a website where teens spend quite a lot of time on, and people can comunicate through this website. I log in and see that this girl I like is also signed in, so I start talking to her. The normal teenage conversation of, ""@CAPS2, whats up?"" that sort of thing happens, and then she asks if I am able to hang out. Now, tell me if I'm wrong, but most guys would go hang out if its a girl they like. I went to meet up with her at the library and as always, she was beautiful, even though I doubt she was trying. As I got closer to her, she seemed upset, yet when I asked what was bothering her, she did not wish to tell me. I didn't want to make things worse, so I left it alone. All I could thing about was what could I do to make her happy, so I started talking about the craziest things, not knowing if it would help or not. To my luck, it actually helped, and she started smiling. After a little while, I had her laughing and having a good time. Since that day, we have been dating, and are really happy, and everyday when I see her I say something random to make her smile.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16103,6,the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building was that they develop they hope to get greater and espectaculer.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15332,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One such obstacle was the amount of modifications that needed to be made to the building's framework, as stated in paragraph @NUM1. The other obstacle they faced was the fact that most countries outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable, this made it impossible for dirigibles to stop in a densely populated area such as downtown New York, as stated in paragraph @NUM2. A last obstacle they faced was existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas, making it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. These are the obstacles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1063,1,"Computers can be very useful to people. They can help contact friends and family from all over the world. You might need it for typing a paper for school or work, and you can use the internet. If you had a friend or family member move away, computers are an easy way to contact them. Phones dont always give you that option to call from around the world. Say your bestfriend moved out of the country you could email them or instant message them through computers. What if you want to chat with someone right next door even if theres a blizzard and the snow is four feet, computers are a simple way to contact them. When my friend went to @LOCATION1 for the @DATE1 I used instant messaging to talk to her. Imagine your at work or school and you were asked to write a five page essay. Do you really want to write it all? Imagine you, writing out hundreds of those newspaper everyday. Typing is an easy solution that doesnt require as much work and it takes less time. Typing also makes work a lot neater and easier to read. Not even a library has all the information you need. What if you need to write an article for your newspaper about a newly discovered animal? A library wont immediately buy new books about it. The internet is an ideal way to get information the moment it happens. What if a celebrity got hit by a bus or a rocket in space just landed sucesfully? You cant expect to go to the other side of the country to watch and take notes. The internet gives information on anything possible. The internet also allowes students to take online schools or classes. When my oldest brother couldnt take @CAPS1 in high school when it was needed for college, he took an online @CAPS1 class at home. The internet also helps you find vacation spots when your going away from home what if you need a plane, train, boat ticket? What if you need to rent a car but you cant go over to the store or airport. You can go online to purchase tickets. Have you ever heard someone say ""@CAPS3 it upon google"" when they dont know the answer to something? I remember my friend telling me about her new dog, I never even heard of. When I got home I went on the internet and researched it. The internet is a very useful tool to everyone. Going on a computer allows you to talk to anyone, anywhere, type anything needed, or to use the internet. The computer makes life a little easier and its fun too, and would be a handy tool for writing a newspaper.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9007,4,"The author concludes the story the way that she does because it shows Saeng’s willingness to adapt to her surroundings, just like the hibiscus. Saeng needs to adapt to her new home in @LOCATION1, and the hibiscus needs to adapt for the upcoming winter. Saeng vows to herself, ”When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding…” @CAPS1 from this, you can tell that Saeng has hope for both herself and the hibiscus. Initially, Saeng was very reluctant to accept her home. She says of the hibiscus, “it’s not like the kind we had before.” But she realized that the hibiscus could be a reminder of home as well as reminder to change for her new home. She knew that if the hibiscus could survive the winter, she could survive living somewhere new. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4577,2,"There are many things out in the 'material' world that people take offense to. No matter what, there are always those people who have to be against whatever it is, whether it be a book or a song or a movie. But they do not have any idea what they are doing when they bring up their 'rights'. If they get to say that they are offended by the certain media product, not only do they announce that they have the right to try to have it banned, but they are giving the people who do not find offense in the material to dish out the same. If they can pull something off the shelves that they 'find offense to', then everyone @CAPS4 a right to. Another thing is that they claim to find offense to the song or book or movie, but if it bothers them that bad, they should just not listen/read/watch what @CAPS5 it is that they are feeling offends them. It would be that simple, just switch radio stations, or pick up another book, or watch a different movie. Another thing that the 'offended' people can try is having an open mind. It would make everything far less dramatic. People that say that they have offense to whatever the material @MONTH1 be usually use the phrase '@CAPS1 it's offensive and i don't want my kid to stumble across it.' They say that they have a right to take whatever the 'offensive material' is off the shelf and keep it from the public. They couldn't be more right and stupid at the same time! If they have a right to take a certain thing off the shelf, then @ORGANIZATION1 (the writer of the song/book/movie) can claim that he @CAPS4 been offended by some song/book/movie that the first person likes. Then it's just a free-for-all for everyone one to start taking everything off the shelves, one by one. Everyone @CAPS4 the same rights, and if the first offended person uses them to bring @ORGANIZATION1 down, then @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS4 the right to do the exact same thing. So the government shouldn't let things be taken off of shelves, because if they take one down, they might as @CAPS1 take everything else down with it. So, if some one finds offense to a song they hear on the radio, and they feel that strongly as to they want it removed from radios and anywhere that plays music, then they need help. When they find that song THAT offensive, then there is only one simple solution: turn the freaking radio to something else! Seriously, if someone finds the song offensive, then why are they going to sit there and listen to the entire song? Or if they find a book offensive. Would I sit and read an entire book if I don't like the content? Umm, no. If some one is that offended by whatever the material is, then they need to just do something else, because it's pretty rediculous to waste more time attempting to ban the song or the book that to just change the radio or find a different book. So if you're going to complain about the song or book being out there, just take your attention to something else, because every song, book, or movie out there @CAPS4 a right to be sold. On a light note, they could just have an open mind so that the song, or the book, or the movie can still be sold. They can try and read through the book to see if there is a reason that the author @CAPS4 written it this way. If they are conflicted by a movie, they should just watch it and test it to see if they really need to have it pulled off the shelf. Or if they are listening to the song, listen to it all the way through, or maybe even twice. The artist who sang the song might have been expressing themselves in a very deep way, and if someone pulls their song off the radio or where @CAPS5 it is played, then someone could be offending them in return. Having an open mind will let the so called 'offended person' see a whole other light being shown on why the 'offensive material' was even created. Then everything can stay ON the shelves! People have opinions, and that is one hundred percent okay. But sometimes people think that their opinions are the only opinions that matter. If some people get offended (or think they get offended) by something, they would try to removed whatever it was from the nations stores. But if they just sit back and think about it, then it would be okay. If they have a right to remove anything from the shelves, so does everyone. If that @CAPS2 @CAPS3 song really, really offends they, they should just change the radio station and forget about it. And if they have open minds as to why the things are still 'out there', then all the songs, and all the books, and all the movies will still be on the shelves for people to buy. I do not approve of removing anything from stores just because one person feels like if they don't like it, then it absolutly @CAPS4 to go. No, they world doesn't just revolve around one person, and it never, @CAPS5 will.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19179,7,"I remember I had to use @CAPS10 sisters old phone. The @CAPS1 pearl. @CAPS2 was really slow @CAPS2 dropped calls,and I was @CAPS3 horrible. @CAPS10 birthday was coming up, and I reall needed a haw one. and I asked @CAPS10 mom @CAPS4 I was going to get one for @CAPS10 birthday. She said “@CAPS5. Be paitent,” And I really wanted to know so I kept asking her, and she said probably not. But I didn’t give up. I was really patient until @CAPS10 birthday. When I woke up, I saw presents on the kitchen table! @CAPS10 family watched me open them. When I had one left, I opend @CAPS2. Iwas a huge box! and I opend @CAPS2 to find another box. and another and another, and another. Finally @CAPS2 was at the smallest one. I pened @CAPS2 and the side, of the box said, iphone on @CAPS2 !! I got an iphone @NUM1! I was so happy! “@CAPS9 what you get for being patient.” @CAPS10 mom said with a smile.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12350,5,"The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives is immense gratitude, happiness, and admiration. Rodriguez describes his home @CAPS1 writes, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"" (@NUM1). Rodriguez expresses happiness reminiscing about his home that was ""warm."" @CAPS2, the mood shows admiration towards his parents. @CAPS1 writes, ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, withot any knowledge of the language or the culture"" (@NUM2). Rodriguez admires his parents for coming to @LOCATION1, ready to work hard, despite the problem of knowing nothing about the country. Lastly, the mood can be described as thankfulness, or gratitude. Rodriguez writes, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" (@NUM3). The house was more than just the physical part; his parents filled it with love and compassion, and Narciso Rodriguez is extremely greatful The overall mood of the passage is greatfulness and happiness",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9741,4,"The author concluded with the paragraph about when winter turns to spring, she will take her driving test again for one main reason. The girl says this because just like the plant coming back to life and starting over, she will start over too. In the essay Saeng, the young girl says, “When they come back in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” @CAPS1 Saeng failed the test the first time, She is going to wait until spring so that she can have a fresh start. In the essay, the “winter hibiscus” reminds Saeng of her grandmother and her home in @LOCATION1. This at first makes her sad but then realizes how wonderful her memories are and helps her to get through this tough time. Her memories are going to give her strength to carry on with her life and try her driver’s test again in the spring. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21403,8," Laughter @CAPS1 us @CAPS2 @CAPS3 was the @DATE1 of middle school and the entire music department was going on our @DATE1 field trip. Everyone was going to @LOCATION2 for the biggest concert any one has ever been to. Only the students in eighth grade in either band, choir, jazz band, or jazz choir were able to go; if @CAPS16 didn't pay all your funds, then @CAPS16 were left behind. We were going to a hotel, attending a concert, and going to a @CAPS4 @CAPS5. My friends, @PERSON3, @PERSON2, and @PERSON4 were without a doubt excited. We have never been on the longest road trip till then. @CAPS3 seemed to have taken days to get to @LOCATION2. We left at five in the morning with over one hundred kids packed into two buses. One bus was for the boys and one for the girls, yet there were more girls then boys so we split the boys bus. I was stuck sitting with @CAPS6. @CAPS6 is a nice girl, but @CAPS3 was difficult to start conversations with her. @CAPS17 wanted to be back home in @LOCATION1. I never found out why @CAPS17 was so upset; which made my ride there unbelievably boring. Until @PERSON3's accident. @CAPS17 snorted a pretzel up her nose. Overall @CAPS17 was okay and everyone besides @CAPS6 laughed along with her. By the third hour of sitting in a cramped bus, us girls had to go to the bathroom. Complaining to the bus driver @CAPS17 replied, ""We're almost to the pit stop. Just another hour or so."" The choir girls began singing about going to the bathroom. Soon the bus was filled with our melodious song and laughter. Finally @CAPS8, the bus driver, pulled over. A line of dancing girls bulged out of the bathroom laughing at each other. Once we were done we said our farewells to the boys as they piled onto the bus and took off. ""@CAPS9 down. Lets get to @LOCATION2."" @CAPS8 said. We cheered as we drove off. Four hours later, we were stopped yet again, at another gas station eating our lunch. The boys were fine with how much progress we made; starting calling everyone of us girls the boys were getting annoying. Us girls ignored all calls from boys for the rest of our trip. Finally we got to our hotel. At the hotel the boys got the top story while the girls got the lower story near the swimming pool. When dinner came along @PERSON1, our music director, aloud everyone to roam around the stores near by and buy our dinners. Luckily we were near @ORGANIZATION3, @ORGANIZATION1, @ORGANIZATION2, and a numerous amount of fast food places. @PERSON4 and I went to @ORGANIZATION1 while @PERSON3 and @PERSON2 got our drinks; since we didn't want @ORGANIZATION1 drinks they went to @ORGANIZATION3 to buy @CAPS11. We met back at our room with our goods. We gorged ourselves till our abdomens seemed to explode. Dancing her way into the bathroom, @PERSON3 apeard with a broom as her dancing partner. Our laughter filled the room. We partied on till we realized we had a concert to attend. We had two hours till the concert and thirty dollars was missing. @PERSON3, @PERSON2, @PERSON4 and I searched our room almost missing breakfast and ending up empty handed. When we found the girls across the hall all except one of them were there. The remaining girls looked at each other. "" @CAPS6 was out of money yesterday and now all of the sudden @CAPS17 has money to buy food. We're missing fifty dollars."" @CAPS13 replied. @PERSON1 then came in, ""@CAPS14 up. We got a concert to attend."" @CAPS15 at each other with disapointment we all left. Running to the back stage door I dropped my music. @PERSON2 laughed picking @CAPS3 up. ""@CAPS16'll do great."" @CAPS17 said smiling. I smiled back, ""@CAPS18 @CAPS16."" I turned and stepped out onto the empty stage and took my seat in the front of the band. Picking up my flute I began my solo. The soft chords filled my ears as I imagined myself alone. Although I was nervous my stage fright gracefully vanished. I ran out the auditorium doors. Girls and boys laughing with me as we raced to the buses. The bus drivers hurried their way to the @CAPS4 @CAPS5. Once we were there, @PERSON1 payed for everyone and we were off. Laughing at ourselves @PERSON3, @PERSON2, @PERSON4 and I screamed at the top of our lungs when the @CAPS19 shock dropped. When the ride was over, we all laughed seeming to have come @CAPS2. I didn't want to leave, but I knew I had to. Everyone piled back on the bus and called our parents to let them know we were coming home. Laughing at every mistake we made, @PERSON3, @PERSON2, @PERSON4 and I took a group picture to remember the trip. Some how amongst the trip we laughed together at everything. Nothing stood in our way when we laughed. In the end laughing @CAPS1 us @CAPS2. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8992,4,the Author concluded the story with this paragraph because @CAPS1 was try intoto let us know what happen after the story was done. and tryed to make it clear and that’s why I think that @CAPS1 came up with that idea to conclude with that paragraph.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6920,3,"When the cyclist is going on his trip, he is riding through as desert. All he sees the entire journey is a flat rode and dirt. He is riding on the road; hopelssly hoping for some form of lif. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind. “The author is trying to be positive but it’s hard, because all this scenery is doing is bringing his hopes down. How would you like it if you were riding a bike and had no water in the middle of a desert. Now, if the setting had been a nice, green forest, he wouldn’t be that worried, there’s water and shade. He has none of that in the desert. This whole journey was all mental. He always kept in his mind that everything would be ok. That is what helped him survive. This is an ispiring story, to anyone who needs a push to stey optionistic.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7026,3,"The setting in the essay “Rough Road Ahead” makes the bikers travel a very difficult challenge that he has to overcome. When the “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,” the biker must use more energy to peddl up the hills. This made it hard on him to overcome his exauhtion of physical endurance. Also, he states that he was “traveling through the high desert of California in June” this weather is very hot and dry, therefor causing him to quickly run low on water. And, because he was in the desert, there was no sign of towns or people or salvation of any type. These conditions made it hard on the biker because he knew if he dropped from dehydration, no one would be around to save him. In conclution, these hard conditions challenged the bike a great deal.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16197,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building face obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to land there. One major obstacle was safety, mainly because when foreign dirigibles flew in, they most likely contained hydrogen (highly flammable). After the Hindenburg crash they were more wary if something like that happened in a densely populated area. An unstoppable obstacle to the builders was nature; with the vicious winds getting tied up in releasing passengers would be hard enough. According to the article lead weights were used to land dirigibles in open land on crappy weather, but the builders didn't use them, so there was no chance of it falling and hitting someone. Through all this trouble the builders still had the most practical problem; ""law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" With this issue it was illegal to have a dirigible tied up on the Empire State Building so close to the ground. In conclusion, even though the mooring mast never worked out as planned, the builders went through looking at obstacles just for the thought.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6257,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by how much confidence in where he’s going and how he’s gona get there. Having no water,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12867,5,"The mood that was crea ted by the author was love, and inspiration The mood was love because throughout the whole story he told his parents that he loved them and was proud of them. he feels proud of them because of all they do for him and the family. So he is proud of them. he is also greatful to have parents like this because they do so much for him they cook, clean, and keep a roof over his head and keep him protected. The other mood that is created for me is inspiration this mood is created because of what he says ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perservirence. this means that he is proud of his parents and he is thankful for what they do for him, he says tha he is thankful for all they have sacrificed. These are some examples of the mood that was created.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 769,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 newspaper, I firmly believe that computers do have a positive benefits on society. These advancements in technology can only enrich peoples lives. One way computer help is that students can do their school work online and see their teachers pages. Another great thing about computers is that whenever people need information or details on any place or things have can count on the internet to help them out. Most importantly they are a vital source of communication. People depend on computers for their scheduling and keeping in touch with everyone that they know. Without computers students would have it a lot worse. When a student forgets the homework, they can just go on their teachers online page and check what he assignment was for that night. Another thing that students benefit from are online textbooks. If a student can't manage to carry home @NUM1 pounds of books they can just use their textbook online. Nowadays, the internet is filled with lots of great information and educational site. Teacher also can allow students to research for projects online and participate in online educational activities. Not only do computer help out educationally' they are probably the must well known information centers. If people want to see about a restaurant, store or product, they can do that online. Also, many people want to go to destinations but do not know how to get there. The internet provides them with directions for them on how to reach their destination in a quick and efficient manner. An extremely important and helpful aspect of the internet is the ability of purchasing and ordering items online. Before someone decides to but something, they can find out all sorts of information about the product and shop around for the lowest price. People can even order groceries to new house if they are busy! I strongly think that the internet is the number one way of communication between people. For example, the team manager of my soccer team always emails me times and locations of the next game or practice. I would be lost and confused without these emails what I depend on. Buisnesses also heavily rely on the internet to keep in touch with their clients that keep them in buisness. The use of web confrences saves a lot of travel and it allows the company to be in buisness with all over the world. Above all, people depend heavily on social networking sites to keep intouch with friends, keep up to date on the news, and have fun talking to people. Without the internet, probably half of the world communications would be down and that would not be good. Computers, without do have positive effect on society. When it can be an educational resource it is very helpful. Also, it is the best information database known to and is probably the most used. Most importantly, wihout computer the world would be a mess without their main source of communications People know not to spend too much time inside and he always know when to go outside have some fun and get some fresh air. Therefore, computers have no negative effect on people and they remain an essential asset in everyday life.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6890,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist mood and behavior. First the cyclist sees from believing the shortcut will help him arrive to Yosemite faster then he relies it wont. Next, the harsh sun and rafh terrain and lack of water causes the cyclist to give up hope that he will make it to yosemite and causes him to rethink his judgement and taking advice from others.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19202,7,"I am patient. Even though I hate being patient, I can usually tolerate it. Like when I was @NUM1 and there was no school because of so much snow, my mom had to go to a meeting out of town so she took me to my dad’s house. She forgot that he had to work @DATE1 from @NUM2 am to @NUM3 pm. It was too late. I had to go to work with my dad. He was and still is the manager of autozone. So I stayed back in this little office (which I @MONTH1 add has never changed, even @NUM4 years later.) and I was going to have to be patient. REALLY patient. My mom had brought this doodle thing so I could draw, which only kept me occupied for an hour. Then I had to just walk around doing nothing. that is until I found @NUM5 employees doing inventory. Hehe, they had these carts that had a top surface and a bottom surface. I shuck onto the bottom surface and held on. They pushed me around the store without even knowing it! I did that for about @NUM5 hours and still had almost @NUM1 hours to kill. I found this old coloring book lying in the girls bathroom. If it were me now I would @CAPS1 have touched it. But I did. I was only @NUM1! I don’t really remember all I did after that but I know that it was so boring because it’s implanted to my brain. Is there ever a time when patience is fun??",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3946,2,"When going to a library you expect to see various books, movies, music, magazines, and maybe other items. If a person is looking for a book that maybe could be offensive to a race, culture, religion, or etc., they should still be able to check out that book. Libraries shouldnt be able to control those situtations, because it's a persons choice or adults choice to read those kinds of stories. In our country we are allowed to express our opinion by the @CAPS1. The @CAPS1 includes free speech which insures that anyone can express their personal feelings or their opinion on certain matters. If a person would want to check out a book that could offended another individual technically by the law they have the right to do so. I'm not condoning that someone should read books, listen to music, or even watch movies that could be hateful or cruel, but by the law its ok for people to want to read, listen, or watch those works. Libraries are government funded organizations. Therefore meaning they dont have the right to disregard these works. The government pays for the books that are purchased into the library. This means they need books that people would want to read, and be interested in even though some gruops of people might not agree its there job. I'm not encouraging reading these novels or listening to offensive music, but as citizens of the @LOCATION1 we are allowed to listen to what we want, and read anything we want, because thats what our country is meant to stand for freedom. When I think of @LOCATION2 i think freedom, and i have to say I'm proud our country stands for that, and we should stand for that freedom even when it comes to the small things in life",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6424,3,"The features of the setting in this story, “Do not exceed Posted Speed limit,” affect the cyclist in a huge way. The cyclist was biking through California in a desert-like area. It can get very hot there,like the writer describes, “wide rings of sweat circled my shirt.” The fact that the area he was biking through, and that he out of water put himself into serious danger. Also, since the cyclist had no water he was becoming dehydrated. The area he was biking through had barely any people. This means there was no water available for him. Therefore, if the setting had taken place in a cooler setting with lots of people, the cyclist would have found water. Without this type of setting, the story would have completely changed. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9627,4,I think the author includes this because she doesn’t want to leave her audience guessing about what would happen next. Then “I will take the test again.” This quote is saying she @MONTH1 have failed the test with the plant but she is never going to give up and that when spring comes she is going to try again. I feel as though the author added this to give a better understanding of how it feels to leave your homeland to come to a place you don’t no or understand such as the flower situation in the story. When she thought about the plants and how they smelt it gave her the old feelings that she had about her homeland and how close she was with her grandmother. She was so use to plants being free and growing rather than seeing them in pots and not having the room to grow. By seeing all this got Saeng to break down and cry. In conclusion I feel as though the author added the paragraph in the end for understanding and to all so let you no that Saeng @MONTH1 be in a new place with a new culture but she will never give up on that test until she feels that she has passed it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 838,1,"Dear Newspaper writers, I belev that difrent web sites have difrent effeks on people. For exam pull @ORGANIZATION1 has news about what is going on in the world. Other websites all difrent types of games on it could be bad for some people because some of the games are not vary apropreit. Most edicatinal web sites are ment fo help people learn. One person can learn so much with a computer. You can buy and sell a iturn that you own an get many all on one web site. A computer can be used for many difrent perpests.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3612,2,"What is a library? A library is a place you go to that has books, movies, music, magazines, etc. With these things a person can do research or use for entertainment. Should there be censorship in libraries? In my opinion there should be very @CAPS2 censorship in a library. If there was a complaint about being offended by something in the library and it was removed from the shelf, there would be nothing left to use in the library. Many people like to go to the library to relax and have some good peace and quiet time and while there at the library they let their minds flow, imaginate, and dream. They don't worry about being offended by a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 book. However censorship in a library can be a good thing if used delicately. For example, moving grown up books to a section where children will not read them and have nightmares about a picture they saw in it. What I'm trying to say is have censorship in the library, but at a very low standard. If a library had high censorship and everything was taken off the shelf what is the point of going to the library, it would be an empty room. If someone is offended by something in the library, depending on how severe they where offended take the appropiate measures. For instance if something just offended someone unintentionaly leave it where it is, but if something offends someone intentionaly by their race, ethnicity or something like that, it would then be appropriate to take it off the shelf. Having low censorship in libraries would be good because there would be a good quantity of stuff for you to do your research on and there would be more topics to choose from to let your imagination soar. While at the same time you would not have to worry about being severely offended",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 914,1,"Dear Local Newspaper @CAPS1, I am against that computers benefit society in anyway. Yes computers are a great way to learn about things all over the world, but people have to worry about what is right in front of them. Being on the computer all the time gives less time of exercising, no sight of enjoying nature, and gives less time of interacting with family and friends. Computers don't benefit everyone because it gives less time of exercising. When people don't exercise because they are busy always doing something else less important, then you would always be tired. You won't want to do anything but just sit around & do nothing which calls for laziness you would go weak without exercise. You wouldnt have the strength to eat or lift anything which calls for your bone to go weak and you wouldn't get the calories & calcium & vitamins that your body needs to be strong. You would gain weight which calls for you being out of shape. Since your body has no exercise the weight & fat just stays. Being on the computer doesn't help you enjoy nature the way that you are supposed to. You will never see the world for what it is. You will always miss out on fun activities, then when people start talking about how much fun they had you're going to wish you were there. And you will always be stuck in the house which is going to get boring & there's nothing fun to do. If you're always on the computer cell the time you will never interact with family & friends. That is mostly & always more important than computers because they are always always going to be there for you. You will miss out on fun important occasions with your family because you're so addicted to the computer. And your friends will stop being with you because you're not hanging out with them. Computers really don't benefit everyday people because you miss out on the greater things of life. You will miss out on exercising, nature and especially family and friends. Then you are going to wish that you had spent time with them instead of the computer because you are going to see they had a great time & you would want a great time too!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13290,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a very happy, calm, and kind mood. It is a happy mood because the author only talks about the good things that happened to him and his family. It is a very calm mood because nothing very exciting or nothing very sad happens, everything in the memoir is very calm. The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez is also a very kind mood because his parents are very kind. In paragraph @NUM1, ""my parents always kept their arms and their doors open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us. This shows that Narciso Rodriguez's parents are very kind people. Narciso Rodriguez creates a very happy, calm, and kind mood in his memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12946,5,"In the short story ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by The Blueprints of Our Lives, the mood of the short story is grateful and reasonable. In the story a man named Narciso Rodriguez twenty-seven years old migrated from Cuba in 1956 with his parents to come to the United States. When they came they had to live in a one bedroom apt. they could afford nothing else. But Narciso was being very greatful. Even though they had nowhere to to work in places with bigger pay. So they only had little pay to feed there family. Narciso is greatful in paragraph @NUM1. @CAPS1 says ""They struggle both personally and finanacially braving the harsh northern winters."" @CAPS1 had to settle for what was given to him at the time.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11935,5,H loved His parents @CAPS1 loved his home @CAPS2 of this birthday are thair/always @CAPS3 music/always the smell of @CAPS3 food.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7328,3,"The features of the setting do indeed affect the cyclist. First in the story when describing the setting it says “there was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” @CAPS1 basically giving a hint or foreshadow that something bad is going to happen because hes alone. Another description of the setting when it affects the cyclist when it says “Rough Road Ahead; Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” @CAPS1 pretty much saying danger ahead, something bad will happen.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15433,6,"During the times of the Empire State Building and it's claim to fame with height, it's @CAPS1 Al Smith, faced more than one obstacle with accomplishing the mooring mast's completion. From the very beginning of it's construction, the mooring mast was not properly thought out and did not have the proper design. Al Smith realized this even before he finalized the process of building. Once he finally did complete the mooring mast, he faced obstacles. The dirigibles had problems with docking, due to the wind and the elements, the dirigibles had a hard time staying stationary once docked. Another obstacle was fuel, due to the recent Hindenburg crash, dirigibles needed to be fueled with helium rather than the more flammable hydrogen. Finally, the laws that were in place about airships not being allowed to fly low over urban areas caused the mooring mast to fail. Eventually airplanes took the dirigibles position and the mooring mast was retired. Due to these obstacles, Al Smith gave up with the mooring mast but still helped the record for the highest building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10000,4,She will go back to where she started. Its a circle and she will be back the next year where she began.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20894,8," As we all know, water is what we most need to stay alive cause without it we'd pretty much die. Well, it's also quit similar with laughter. I once heard my night school teacher say, ""@CAPS1 is @PERCENT1 attitude"". I thought about it for r a moment and realized it's quit true. No one can really go throughout the hole day, without having any type of beverage and as much as someone is upset for any apparel reason, will soon end up smiling. Who knows perhaps for the silliest thing whatsoever. I've been going out with my boyfriend @LOCATION1, for about seven months already. We don't get to see each other as much as I'd like to. We try to spend the weekends together as much as we can, but there's been times when it's every other weekend. Since him and I have quit a few things in common like, our relatives, knowing each other before dating, places we go for entertainment, food, likes and dislikes. We rarely dislike of where we'll be spending our time togethe or what we're doing. Even though its been about seven months since we've been dating, it feels like we've known each other way before we became friends. Once when I was over at @LOCATION1's house celebrating @PERSON2's birthday, @ORGANIZATION1's youngest sister. We, all who where there, were celebrating her birthday with pinatas, cake, and all she wanted, witch where toys too. We where all having a good time but the kids weren't so much, it seemed as if they were running out of energy since they were playing in the trampoline for quit a couple of hours. Before the kids could even mention anything about the pinatas, we had already gotten most of what was need to set up the pinatas. As they heard the candy being pored into the pinatas they all rush to get there first before the others, could get to hit the pinata. @PERSON2 go to hit the pinata before all the others, since it was her birthday, then the little kids followed her to hit the pinata. As they went up to hit the pinata we sang songs, it wasn't the best but we all tried. We even made jokes, of pretending to imagine who the pinata was representing. As time passed, it was turn for the older kids to go up and hit the pinata. Most of us were kind of shy, but before I notice a @NUM1 year-old went up to hit the pinata. Right after she hit the pinata quit hard the others said her time was up, they were anctious to get the candy out. After her turm was over she was supose to call out on someone. I thought she would end up calling me since she keept looking towards me. I was already blushing, good thing she didnt. she ended up calling out on my boyfriend. He of course got up and grabed the stick to hit the pinata. Once he got there, the others where said to not hit it so hard or else the little ones whouldn't like him anymore. Since he is one of thoes persons who's love @CAPS3 everyone. He cheard me up to go with him. Without him saying that ii don't think I would of done it. Right there were we where, teaching me how to swing the stick to hit the pinata, I swung it to hard that I ended up hitting him. Before @CAPS2 even say anything, one of his aunts said. That's the way I'd be getting when ever I'd get bothered at him. @CAPS3 starting out slow then hitting him right where it hurt the most. I was even reder then when I was blising, all I thought of saying was that it might be true when ever it happend @CAPS3 then @PERSON1' mom was already getting the cake out, I just left fron where I was at to go help her out. Once we all got settled to sing happy birth-day to @LOCATION2, we where stil laughing of what had happen. Thing is they where stil talking about it. How it might be the same when we get merried. Again I didnt know what to say so I just simle. Everyone was leaving and right before I could call my dad he was already outside the door. All I said was thank you daddy,with a silly smile.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15336,6,"Based on the excerpt The mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were fire, wind, and the laws against airships flying to low over urban areas.If they let the dirigibles dock there they would risk the dirigibles @CAPS2 on fire because dirigibles from outside the U.S. used hydrogen instead of helium. and the Hydrogen is highly flammable. Another Obstacle would be the Wind, the winds were Shifting because of violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around, and if they put weights on the back it would not be safe for pedestrians on the street. And the last obstacle would be the law against airships flying to low over urban area, I would make it illegal for a Ship to tie to the building. Those were the @CAPS1 they faced.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7567,3,"Hot, bumpy roads, no shade-all are things that affect the cyclist on his journey. He was riding in??? the and then the sun started beating down on him and he said it felt like the desert,” considering it was so hot. The road was fine at first and than he get a while down the had and it really started getting rough and hard to ride on. The part where he has no shade has to suck because he has the sun beating down on him all the time. All are reasons why the cyclist shouldn’t have taken directions in the first place.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4745,2,"'Do you believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc. should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive?' @CAPS1 these items should be taken off the shelves if found offensive. First off, they should be removed because some people @MONTH1 be offended by them. Some @MONTH1 talk about race, religion or gender. Nobody wants to be criticized in a book or such. For example: rap music, all that is, is just people taking about what color they are or how big or small they are. Some people @MONTH1 be offended, and im sure no parent wants their child to be listening to that nonsense. So take them off the radio. Second off, if a child gets ahold of a criticizing book or movie or such that item can have a bad affect in the later future. They could start criticizing people for being different. Some books talk about religion, some people just cannot help their religion, they were born that way so they are familiar with it and do not want to change. No one should be judged for their religion, so take them off the shelves. Thirdly, my friend was watching a movie and it was about a female that liked the same sex, and in that movie they were making fun of her. No one should be judged by which sex they like. She was very offended. So take them off the shelves. Second to last, magazine authors take pictures of celebrities and down size them about three sizes smaller than what they really are and put them on the cover of fashion magazines or such. Why not just put that celebrity on there as the size they really are? Some @MONTH1 take offense to that. So just take pictures of celebrity and put them on the magazine as their real size or take them off the shelves. In conclusion, in some of my observations and reading some people get offended quite often for being a different race, gender, or religion. So I believe that certain materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc should be taken off the shelves if they are found offensive",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3872,2,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 is it safe to draw the line on what kids should or should not see as far as the world is concerned. What makes kids behave better, being sheltered from life or being life smart and knowing what is going on in this world. I think its safe to say what we do or do not want our kids to do, say ect. But in other terms do we have full conrol of our kids @NUM1. I knw that this might sound wierd but I strongly believe in the simple fact hat kids are being over sheltered to day! Our kids are groing up with the new technology. Its the centry for computers and laptops and gaming systems. Our kids dont know what its like to go out side anymore. The world has so much to offer us yet, we turn it down beacuse we see what all the new advances have to offer as well. I think it is very important to be books smart as well as street smart, if you spend all your @CAPS3 doing one thing at at @CAPS3 you are gonna end up lacking on one thing. I blelieve grades will come. I think that our kids are over sheletered for the simple fact that when our kids see something that we dont want them to see, or there not ready for then there not allowed to see it it, but whos to say on the days your not watching them that there not going to go in the real world and just see exactly what you didnt want them too! This is why its important for you to teachyour child what is going on in the world and noth leave them in the dark. Also we are living in the new age of life, were computers and laptops are the number one thing in the world right now for people to be usign and on throught the day. It is hard for kids to understand the realness of life since ever thing is done over the internet now. It is a privilage to be so far advanced in the world yet we still dont know what to do! As we get older we are not gonna know nearly as much stuff as need to be known and taught beacuse as we get older were gettomg, more logic and more information over the materials on the web. Kids will not know how to fix cars or know to start up a lawm mower. I think that books should not be taken off te shelf beacuse as the day goes by kids reality is getting taken and taken more and more! I think that it is a big deal what kids learn about the everyday life becuse that is our future and if they have no idea what is going on and it scares me beacuse the are going to be alot more battles for our kids to fight we just have to teach them all that we can and hope that they become the best people they can be in life ! Thank You for Your @CAPS3! Deven",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 954,1,"Dear The @ORGANIZATION1, Computers are out! The effects of over-use on a computer can severely change a persons life! People who are spending too much time on their computer will most likely spend less time exercisizing enjoying nature, and interaction with their family member and friends. I believe that the act of computers overwhelming a person's life should be with in a serious manner. Exersizing, an essential part of anyone's life, since the development of the internet forty years ago, the average @CAPS1 or body mass inter of an average person has increased fifteen percent! This is no coinfidence, computers are causing more and more people to challenge themselves to nex that extra mile, or swim that extra lap, and instead so home and play on their computers. This not only is hurting peoples' weights, but excersize equipment store owners are having to close their shops, because less and less people are coming into work out, or excersize like they should everyday! Our children are also being affected by this addicting sensation, childhood obesity is one of the main effects on children, because when they get heard playing on these they as well stop excersizing, and play videogames . The average amount of people who went to @LOCATION2 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 every year was around @NUM1, but since the invention of the computer that the attendance dropped to a more @NUM2 people every year. Less and less people are to enjoy a fresh @DATE1 and instead spend it indoors on their country. This is hurting people as well as the wildlife around them. The rates of squirrels to people in @LOCATION2 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 was @NUM3 in @DATE2, the year the computer has invented. But a mere ten years later, the changed so now their are squirrels! This is because now that they less people feeling less squirrels live in the @CAPS3 @CAPS3, went live in the to find food by themselves. Tour guides who worked in @LOCATION2 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, we being fired, due to less people wanting a tour, so less tour guides are needed. Families are seeing that the more a person plays on a computer, the less time that person is going to spend talking to @LOCATION1, or @CAPS4 @CAPS5. Scientists held to have three different people spend an hour reading a book, another spend an hour on a computer, and three hours on a computer to see who could stay in a conversation with their mother the longest. The first person spent twenty minutes on the phone with their mother, the second only ten minutes, and the last, a mere five minutes. This shows that the mere time spent on a computer, the less interactions are held between son and mom, an important relationship in any one's life. Mother's worry that the next time they have a barbeque, @PERSON1 won't be in his room, playing on his computer like last time. @PERSON2 was chosen to conduct an experiment on @PERSON2 had three freinds @CAPS6, @PERSON3, and",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4455,2,"Libraries, they are everywhere and all together they contain millions of books that influence everyone who reads them. Whether a book is being read about @PERSON1 or the @CAPS1 there is always something influential to be read. Some books have more adult themes or references to certain subjects which most adults find inappropriate for readers of certain ages. The question is, is it a good idea for those books that are now being censored to be taken off the shelves? In personal opinion; yes those types of books are influential, yes it is possible that it could negatively effect the youth of @DATE1, but everyone has the right to read what interests them. Being influential is one of the main priorities of most reading materials. There is a point to be proven or a side story to be shared within most books. Is this a bad thing? Is it 'bad' to explain a point of view or to explain a life experience? No, having experiences is only half the point of living; sharing it is the rest. The @ORGANIZATION1 explains one of the more major downfalls in @LOCATION1 and how it brutally effected the people struggling for life and money. Twilight shows the softer side of love and that anyone can be happy if they set their hearts on someone. These are not only experiences but things to ponder upon, and losing these factors in life would be a horrible mistake. The youth of @DATE1 is portrayed in mostly a negative light. Whether they are considered monsters or maybe even the devils offspring; our youth need influences. Reading is one of the major sources of inspiration for students to grow and prosper. Most students find reading to be boring. In school you are not offered what you want to read. Lists are made, and guidelines are created so that only certain things are read and taught. Young adults need creativity and books are there to shine a light on their eager minds. Taking away the books students and young adults are interested in is one of the many growing problems contributing to people not wanting to read. Teachers, principals, business men, and even children deserve the right to reading what they like. If you were a sports major and suddenly the population decided sports journals and sports themselves were too harmful and badly influential to people; what would you do when suddenly everything sports related was taken away? You would lose your career. Romance novelists use sensual or even sexual experiences to convey something everyone has trembling inside their minds. Taking away something that is related to something so natural in every day life would have severe reprocussions; especially for those who greatly enjoy those books. Revoking the rights to the literary works of thousands of authors would also take away an intellectual culture that is conveyed. Influencing people to think about things that are viewed by everyone is not a bad thing when it can be used to inspire people in their lives. Just because someone is a student or a child doesn't mean that a literary work could rot their mind. Taking away something that can contribute to the every day art of life would slowly create a less creative, inventive, and inspired world. Not everyone believes that certain books are bad, and i, am one of those thousands of people.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1536,1,"Some people don’t like computers because of instant reason, and other people like computers little too much. I like computers but @CAPS1 not obsess with computers give good efforts on people, even me you can learn things off the computer and you start to get good hand eye coordination one of the things I like about the is that you can 'talk"" to other people. Lots of people uses the computer a little too much that they dont exercise, or watch nature as much some normal (other) people should, and they dont spend them with their familys. I rather spend time on the computer for only (#@NUM1) three hours so then I can do other things with my time and you or anybody should do the same.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20899,8,"We're happy together @PERSON1 told me @CAPS2 we lay on his bed. I just smiled and I knew this was going to be a really good relationship. @CAPS5 always made me feel so great. @CAPS5 made me feel beautiful. Now don't say your too young to know what love is ,@CAPS1 I've heard it from my mom every time I talked about him. But I know that no one has ever made me feel this wonderful about myself, made me feel perfect. When we are together it's fun. Most guys I have been with have not been @CAPS2 fun, @CAPS2 in our dates together, walking to the park too sit and talk, eating out to kiss in public. Before we were ever dating, We were best friends. We still are best friends. Everyone asked us @CAPS6 we were dating, The answer was always no we're best friend's, but I always wanted more. @CAPS5 has always made me laugh. I don't think we would have made such a strong couple @CAPS6 we didn't make each other laugh. Just thinking about @CAPS4 I first knew I loved him makes me laugh. I was walking to my @DATE1 class, and out of no where @PERSON1 grabs my arm and pulls me into a huge bear hug, and buried his head in my neck and laughed and said ""@CAPS3, you have some toilet paper sticking out of your pants"" I felt my face turn twenty different shades of red. I smiled and quietly asked him to hide me so I could grab it. When I got to my @DATE1 class I was thinking to myself @CAPS4 could @CAPS5 just say that to me, @CAPS5 must of wanted to embarrass me. But the more I thought about what @CAPS5 did and @CAPS4 @CAPS5 did it made me feel, well it made me feel like @CAPS5 really and truly cared about me. Wanting to help me out rather then embarrass me. I bet every other guy was laughing. Not @PERSON1... well after that happened we had a good laugh. After we laughed and joked about what happened to me, @CAPS5 looked up and kissed me. I didn't know @CAPS6 that was a best friend kiss, or a real love kiss. So I simply laughed. then @CAPS5 kissed me again. This time I knew it was a real love kiss. We weren't like most couples either. Which made us stand out, and the more we stood out the more people started to hate the fact that we were together. They would say some horrible things to me in the hallway about @PERSON1. Who knows what they were telling him. @CAPS7 some of my closest friends started to make rude comments toward me and @PERSON1. I know @CAPS5 didn't believe anything they were saying @CAPS1 @CAPS5 would laugh at everything people would toss our way. When @CAPS5 laughed I would always ask him whats so funny, @CAPS5 would say ""@CAPS6 they rumors aren't true then laugh about them, that way people will know your not bother by them"" I would have never thought about that. I'm the kind of girl who wears her emotions on her sleeve, so of course I would get a little peeved with all the stuff they were saying about us. After I started laughing at all the rude and nasty things people were saying,. They stopped talking about us, it was like magic. I never thought about being in @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 let alone @ORGANIZATION1, and finding a guy that would understand what I'm going through. Let alone someone who is going through something almost @CAPS2 difficult. My brother went to prison @DATE1, and I don't think I could have be able to make it through @CAPS2 much @CAPS2 I did with @PERSON1. I cried almost everyday at @ORGANIZATION1 with him. It's been about a year now. Every time I go see my brother I remember what @PERSON1 said, ""@CAPS6 your happy the people around will be happy"" so I always put on a smile to see @LOCATION1, @CAPS7 though I know this will be the hardest years of my life. Laughing does really help. @CAPS7 @CAPS6 nothing is funny just laugh. God put you on this @LOCATION2 for a reason, and @CAPS6 you haven't found that reason laugh until you do. @CAPS1 the people in your life mean the world to you, and @CAPS6 they're down bring them up. I love @PERSON1 for helping me understand that life's to short to go unhappy then to have had a life without laughter.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9622,4,The last paragraph of the story.” Winter Hibiscus by Minfong Ho is important to the story. The last paragraph leaves a definite ending so the reader knows exactly what is going to happen in the future. This paragraph is a very significant ending to the story because it represent s symbols in the story. The author concludes the hibiscus is important to her. Along with the hibiscus it also shows that the geese and the melting of the snow represent a fresh start and a new beginning . These symbols are important to her in that they give her a chance to start over and she sees that in the winter hibiscus.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14908,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1, the excerpt tells the reader of a huge issue. It states, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of a building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building frame."" Due to this over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. Another set back is in paragraph @NUM2. It states, ""The greatest obstacle... was nature itself."" Due to violent air current, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Tethering the mooring mast would do little help. Lead weights could not be used. In paragraph @NUM2, it states, ""dangling weights high above pedestrians..., was neighter practical nor safe."" All of these obstacles showed architects, the project at that time was impossible.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 782,1,"Dear I think computers greatly benefit society, and advance technology. They provide knowledge in a click, and entertainment after a long day out work or school. Not only that, but people have found long-lasting careers because of the invention of the computer. So obviously, computers are a great influence on society. Do you want to find out when major legue baseball first came to be? Or maybe you have a history report due the next day, and your parents can'@CAPS3 drive you to the library? This isn'@CAPS3 a problem anymore. Computers have evolved a long way since they were invented in the @NUM1's. You can check up on your local news, by having @NUM2's of electronic newspapers right at your fingertips. Or maybe you want to venture outside your neighborhood, and check out what's happening in @LOCATION2 or @LOCATION1. News isn'@CAPS3 the only thing the internet is useful for though. You can also go onto one of the @DATE1's of websites for school help, or check how the stock market is doing. Or, you can just use the handy calculator found right on your desktop. What could be better? Of course not all users have a computer for information. Many have it for entertainment purposes. In fact @PERCENT1 of people use the computer for entertainment everyday. What, with all the fun stuff you can do, who can blame them? Social networking is placed at the top of the list. A whopping @PERCENT2 of internet users use sites like @CAPS1 or @CAPS2. These sites are useful for catching up with friends you might not have seen in years or continue a conversation from @NUM3 minutes ago. You can also use computers to watch live-streaming @CAPS3.V, or that new @CAPS4 you got yesterday. That's right, @CAPS3.V's might not be needed soon! And what would a compter be without games? There are @NUM2's of @DATE1's of them scattered all across the web. How great is that? And finally, many people have found their careers through the internet. Did you know that @PERSON1, @NUM5, was found through you tube when his mom posted videos for the family to see when they couldn'@CAPS3 attend proformances? Of couse, you tube isn'@CAPS3 the only way to make money. Tons of jobs are listed by employers only for the curious person to find. No more wondering city streets, now you can just submit on aplication or have an interview without ever leaving your. Artists have also discovered talents, by playing around with @CAPS6 or @CAPS7. Not to mention the career paths involving computers directly, such as repairing or movie special effects. So no matter what you use a computer for have it be job hunting, entertainment, or information, they are a good idea to have them in your home. There's a erason that @PERCENT3 of @CAPS8 use them, and it's not just an excuse to sit around all stay.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20917,8," The comfort of a laugh. Many different kinds of comfort can come from a laugh. My story is the comfort of love. @CAPS6 i was a young and foolish teen. (@CAPS1 wait that's what i would still be today.) A few days ago my friend @CAPS2 had me laughing so hard, and all because @CAPS5 slipped up while meeting my mother. (@CAPS2 was nerves to meet my mother.) For some reason @CAPS6 i started to laugh @CAPS5 suddenly began to act as if every thing was fine, and that there was nothing to be nerves about. @CAPS7 latter @CAPS6 we went for our walk i asked him about it. I simply said ""@CAPS4 did your mood change @CAPS6 i began to laugh?"" @CAPS5 smiled and replied ""@CAPS6 you laugh i feel calm and know that i am going to be alright."" @CAPS7 myself being a typical teen girl i blushed, @CAPS7 quickly changed topics, while trying not to make eye contact. Suddenly i could not help my self. The feeling of his eyes on my cheek was over powering my will to not look. Turning my head slowly, sure enough there @CAPS5 was starring straight back in to my eyes, his eyes were wonderful they reminded me of sunflowers with a blue sky behind them. As @CAPS5 stared back i got a feeling as if @CAPS5 were trying to unlock all that i am, and all that i know with his eyes. As if @CAPS5 could see straight to my soul. Quickly I turned away. With a soft and almost beautiful voice @CAPS5 let a little laugh out. This laugh was as sweet to my ears, as nectar is to a hummingbird. The next few days where hard. All i could think about was that walk. People must have thought i was crazy, every time i would remember the walk, each time i would remember his laugh. @CAPS7 let a laugh of my own out. @CAPS7 i realized that laughter plays a big role in every ones life. For me i laugh @CAPS6 I'm with the people i love. For some its watching t.v. that they find amusing, or maybe there kids did some thing rather silly. So silly you had to tell your book club. The point is that laughter is every where. Laughter is never a bad thing in fact it has been proven that laughter has a lot of health benefits. Some people don't get it. Laughter is not some thing to be ashamed of ether, if some one laughs at you just laugh with them. Its not laughter that starts wars. its not laughter that kills people. its people who chose not to fill there lives with the joy of laughter. So here is the goal. laughter can also be very contagious. So try and @CAPS8 a laugh on. Do some thing that @CAPS6 people remember it they will start there own laughs. Laughter-@CAPS8 it on!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19311,7,"“@CAPS1, how much longer.” I complained at the airport, “@CAPS2 have been waiting for about two hours now.” “@CAPS3 will only be a couple more minutes sweety.” replied my @CAPS1 in a stern voice. “@CAPS3 better take only a few minutes because I really want to go to @CAPS5 world.” I complained again. As you might know now, @CAPS2 are in an airport full of people. @CAPS2 had to wait for six hours before our flight took off for @LOCATION1. @CAPS3 took a lot of patience that I thought I never had. In the first hour of waiting, I was really really bored. I had nothing to play with besides my gameboy @CAPS6. The gameboy @CAPS6 is a boxy looking object that folds open. There is a screen on the top and controls on the bottom half. That was my only fun that I could use to keep me busy and not fall asleep. I was very bored. But thankfully I found a @CAPS8.V. that they had at the airport. @CAPS2 went over to the @LOCATION2 to watch, but the only channel @CAPS2 could watch was the news. I did not like watching the news at all so I played my gameboy. I played that for about an hour. I haven’@CAPS8 said anything to my @CAPS1 the past two hours or three hours. I didn’@CAPS8 want to bug her so I left her alone. When the next hour passed,@CAPS2 boarded our plane finally. @CAPS2 waited a total of @NUM1 hours and @NUM2 minutes. @CAPS3 was a painful but memoriable experience. When @CAPS2 boarded the plane and found our seats my @CAPS1 said to my brother and me that she was very proud of our patience. To this day I realize why my @CAPS1 and dad don’@CAPS8 like to fly to places any more.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6571,3,"In the essay, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” there are many features of the setting that greatly affect the cyclist. Many of these features affect him in a negative way. One such feature is the hills that are present in the essay. These probably exasperated the cyclist even more than he already was with the sun beating down on him. Another feature was the road sign that said “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” “The speed limit was @NUM1. I was doing a water-depleting @NUM2. Sometimes life can feel so cruel.” The author/cyclist probably felt like he would never make it. Also, the sign advertising grape juice probably made him feel life was even crueler with its sadistic irony. Finally, the bait shop offered much relief to the cyclist. “I had an overwhelming urge to seek out Gary and Wilber, kiss them, and buy some bait.” All in all, the setting affected the cyclist in some pretty bad ways until the end.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 11906,5,"The mood of the author in this memoir was happy, grateful, and gratitude. I say happy because in the story the author said ""in our neighborhood despite customs else where, all of the cultures came together in a great solidarity and friendship. I say happy because the author was happy to enjoy having so many friends and family to come over everyday and have fun. another mood is grate full the author as it says in the story ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. The author says this because the authors parents loved him a lot they went out every day trying to get money to make sure the author had a good life and the author was greatful for that. Now the author had gratitude for all the things the author's parents did ""parents created our traditional Cuban home"" also ""passed on to me the rich culonary skills and love for cooking"" and ""where I celebrated my first birthdays"". The author had gratitude for all these things and more because without the things his parents did he wouldn't be who he is today.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12435,5,The author wanted people to understand the story's and to make it easy to read whats it is about.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3924,2,"Are some materials, such as books, movies, magazines should be removed from the shelves if those things are found offenisve? There are some things in books are movies that are offensive, and that other younger adults shouldnt watch or read. Reading a book also says alot about certain topics that are offensive. But at the same time can you learn from these things such as finding it in a book or seeing it on tv. So I dont think that certain things that are found offenisive should be taken off the shelves, because people should learn off of these things. Some people have a hard time understanding what's right and wrong in life, because their not getting the full effect in life and what it is meant. The problem I think is people @MONTH1 not think certain things are offensive because they might not know what it mean. Movies on the other hand has a different side of the fence. Movies can affect someone, especially someone who is very young. Those children can look what's on tv and copy exactly what they are doing. They also @MONTH1 be a role model which is not always good for some people. Another thing is that music plays a big role in someone's life because there is sad music, loving music and also violent music. Music can define a person. For example if you are listening to a sad song, you @MONTH1 feel sad or depressed. Or a person listening to hard and violent music @MONTH1 feel upset or angry. Certain music that peole listen to can define who they are. Especially when i had said it determines what kind of a mood you are in. I think when people listen to the music he or she likes, it defines who they are, it shows what kind of mood there are in. Secondly, magazines are an advertisement. It shows everything, it tells you stories. Just like in the movies if you see it, youre going to do it. But magazines are different, they show like the styles, and life stories of others. When you see things you @MONTH1 want to do things just as the what the magazine. Usually when you look in a magazine you usually see pictures so its not as big of effect as the others such as the music and movies. They more likely describe things. Books on the other hand are similar. You can learn what's in a book just by reading it. So if a person @MONTH1 read something about voilence he or she @MONTH1 think it is right to do so. Even if that particular book is telling you what's right about the topic. So no I dont think that some books that are found offensive beacause only that person or indvidual can learn what being offensive is. So keeping these types of books @MONTH1 help other people who are readers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4553,2,"Have you ever had a book, movie, or magazine offend you? Have you ever wished that no one else will ever have to read it? Should those offensive materials be removed from libraries? I don't think they should. The books, movies, and other materials should be marked saying that they @MONTH1 be found offensive. From my own experience I know how easily one can be offended by a book or movie. Many times I have read a book that has completely contradicted my religion. Most times I will ignore it and move on to a better book or movie. Sometimes it is harder to ignore. I always try to forget and move forward with my life, as others should do. Have you ever read the book The @CAPS1? If you have you are aware that there are some ideas in this book that bring up many controversies. One example from the book would be when they kill some of the children. Most people, like myself, do not agree with this idea. They think that it is wrong. Again some people @MONTH1 try to get this book banned, but it is still a wonderful literature. As you @MONTH1 have seen in the media lately, many people are trying to get the book @CAPS2 @CAPS3 removed from schools. Some people have found the book as offensive because it repeatedly refers to native americans by a more profound word. The law has not passed yet and has remained in schools. The law hasnt passed because it does not affect everyone. Some people @MONTH1 not find this offensive. Therefore it was not removed. Removing offensive books from libraries is the exact same thing. Some people @MONTH1 find the books offensive while others @MONTH1 not. Removing the books from everyone's reach would be appauling. The book @MONTH1 only be offensive to one race or religion. Why not simply put a warning label for that race or religion? That would take care of the problem by putting the decision of reading it and being offended in their hands. Possibly it isnt that the books are offensive to a race or religion, maybe it is to an age group. If that is the problem then the librarians can put those books in the appropriate age section. I have given reasons from my own experiences, other readings, and my obersavations in the media. I only hope that you consider my ideas. Do not remove the books from the shelf only because it is offensive to one person. Simply put a warning label on the book after a few complaints. This would put the responsibility of being offended in thier hands. Once again I do not think that offensive materials should be removed from our libraries only censored to the people of whom it is offensive",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18861,7,"@PERSON2 and I went to the slove. @CAPS1 was picking up some marsh mellows and chocolate to make someone. @CAPS1 was walking??? Ial six when @CAPS1 came upon a huge bunch of people looking to bye stuff for smiles. So @PERSON2 and I went in the line. @CAPS1 sat there for at least fifty minutes waiting for marsh mellows and chocolate; but @CAPS1 came out with two –mash mellows and two chocolate packs. I asked her “@PERSON2 why do you have two!” @CAPS1 said that when I waited they were getting rid of them so they gave me two to the same of one. I smiled and we??? Thank you! When we went back to the car we told @CAPS2 other sister “@PERSON1” that we get two @NUM1 said???” @CAPS2 sister snicked we went back into @PERSON2’s car and but the bag in the trunk were one other???cry’s were and then toke off. We got home and @PERSON1 ate three, I ate, two and @PERSON2 ate five @CAPS1??? us. Thank you.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1005,1,"Dear The @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Experts say that computers are ""taking over people"", I strongly disagree. People spend the amount of time they need and want then become active or spend time with family and friends. Computers allow people to learn, they allow people communicate to family and friends, too. Also, @CAPS5 people use computers for work and jobs. I believe computers allow people, like myself, to learn. You can learn also @CAPS5 things on the computer. You can learn about other countries, you can read articles on news, also. You can learn different languges and about the world. Online people can communicate with others. There is skype, which allows you to communicate with others while on the internet, you use a webcam. there is also instant messanger, or @CAPS3. @CAPS3 is like having a conversation with a person who's right next to you! Then there is email which can send letters, photos and comments. @CAPS5 people use computers for work. Microsoft @CAPS4 allows you to type stories and type letters. @CAPS5 people do job reports on @CAPS4. Also, the internet is helpful for work. Websites and search engines help you a lot. Websites can contain information that working people need. To finish this letter, I want to say that @NUM1) Computers allow people to learn. @NUM2) They allow people to communicate with friends and family. Lastly, @NUM3) @CAPS5 working people use the computer for work and reports. I hope I influenced you to see why computers aren't bad.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3983,2,"You Are @CAPS1 You @CAPS2? Censorship is a touchy subject in our society today. People ask, '@CAPS3 much should be censored?' or even 'Should @CAPS9 be censored at all?' @CAPS4 opinion is that censorship should be left up to the parents of the children that are reading, listening to, or watching materials. Television networks and reading companies, including publishers and libraries, can't possibly take the place of a parent. I believe that if a parent is not responsible enough to care @CAPS1 the child is reading, the distrubuters of the materials can't be punished. In @CAPS4 experience, @CAPS4 mother has taken part in censoring me from offensive materials from a very young age. She is always interested in @CAPS1 I am reading. Occasionally, she will glance over a book or reading material herself in order to deem it appropriate for me to @CAPS2. @CAPS4 mother has also censored @CAPS4 music by glancing through @CAPS4 music player and every so often, playing a song or two. @CAPS9 discourages me from listening to anything that @CAPS4 mother wouldn't approve of. I have also experienced censorship in @CAPS4 local library. The library is divided into sections, begining with the children's books. These books are appropriate for young minds and have no offensive material. @CAPS9 section leads to young adult, then eventually the adult books. The music is also similarly divided into these catagories. I believe @CAPS9 is acceptable because there are certain materials and music that a young child should not be exposed to. Through reading the book '@CAPS5 @CAPS6' by @PERSON1, I have observed that parents need to have some involvement in @CAPS1 their children are reading, listening to, and watching. In @CAPS9 book, @PERSON2's parents simply left him alone while he was in his room. They let him listen to his own music, and watch @CAPS1 he wanted. @CAPS9 led him to listening to a @CAPS7 metal band called '@CAPS7 @CAPS8.' @CAPS9 band influenced him to commit a homocide in his school, killing ten students. @CAPS9 is a worst case scenario in which censorship was not practiced at all. Violence can have a large impact in young kids; therefore, they shouldn't be exposed to it until they are mature. Through @CAPS4 reading, I have taken the position that the government does not have the right to impose censorship on the whole population. The novel '@CAPS10 @NUM1' is an example of censorship being taken to the extreme. Reading is banned in their society, except for comic books and sex magazines. @CAPS9 shows that without a right to @CAPS2, society is reduced to very simple, uneducated creatures. Censoring an entire people's reading is impractical. @CAPS4 opinion is that once a person is an adult, they have the common sense and maturity to @CAPS2 whatever they choose. Censorship is difficult to take a stand on because ther are so many posatives and negatives to consider. @CAPS4 position on @CAPS9 vital subject is that parents should be the ones censoring their children's reading, not the government or the reading companies. Once a person is an adult, their right is to choose whatever they like to @CAPS2. Reading is a magical thing that should not be held back from adults who are prepared to experience it to its fullest. As long as society keeps a balance between the outcome of '@CAPS5 @CAPS6' in which censorship was not practiced, and '@CAPS10 @NUM1' in which it was enforced to the fullest, I believe that we have reached an appropriate balance. Censorship is healthy for children, but restricting in adults.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1573,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 are you? As for me I am fine. I am writing this letter to explain to you why you should believe that computers have a positive effect on people. The reasons why I am writing this letter is that people could contack with friends and families from far-away places, computers helps you leran more about different parts of the world and also computers helps people understand and learn more about life. That's why I believe you should believe that computers have a positive effect on people. First of all why I believe that computers have a positive effect on people is that people could contack with friends and families from far-away places. An example to support my reason is that people from all parts of the world have families different places. And they cannot have a good contack with them. But if they go on the internet they could their friends and families and chat with them. This shows that if you live in the @LOCATION2 and you have a friends that live in @LOCATION1 you could have a with I have families that lives and @LOCATION1 and it is hard to them. But when I am on the computer I can chat with them and have a fun time. This shows that you need a computer to catch up with friends and family. That's why I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Second of all why you should believe that computers have a positive effect on people is that computers helps you learn more about different parts of the world. An example is that if you don't know anything about a country or a place you could go on the internet a research and learn more about that place. This shows that computers is important to have. Another example is that when I have a project or a essay and I don't know about it. I could go on the computer and look it up. And by doing this it will help me on my project or essay. That's why I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Finally why I believe so is that computers helps you understand and learn more about life. An example is that if you don't know if something is right or wrong you could look it up and it @MONTH1 help you. This shows that computers can give advices. Another example is that computers could give you an idea on what to do. If you are trying a new resipie and you are not sure on @CAPS3 to make it. And it will give you the inderigant and direction to make that food or snack you want. That's why I believe that you and all others should believe that computers have a positive effects. In conclusion why you should believe that computers have a positive effect is that people could contack with friends and families, computers helps you learn about different parts of the world, and also computers helps you learn and understand more about life. I would hope you read and reread this letter and consider about believing that computers have a positive effect on people. That's why you should believe that computers have positive effect on people. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 152,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 opinion on the effects computers have on people is a positive effect. Three main reasons are that people learn more about cultures, places, and some people work online. @CAPS1 first reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because they help you learn about cultures around the world. Learning about cultures is very important because if people travel they need to know how they can respect each other. @CAPS1 second reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because they help you learn about places around the world the world. Learning about places is very important because you could get lost. It also helps you by telling you which places are famous to visit. @CAPS1 third reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because some people find jobs online. Other people work online. This benefits people in a positive way. In conclusion computers have a positive effect on people because its helps people learn about cultures, places, and jobs around them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21570,8,"Laughter A true story that involves @CAPS4 and laughter was when i was hanging out with my @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @PERSON1, and her fiance @PERSON4 (who is a profesional quad racer) at a @ORGANIZATION1 concert in @LOCATION2. The concert was the best concert i have ever been to and probably the best one i will ever go to because @ORGANIZATION1 is my favorite band. They even played the song that made them, its called @CAPS3 @CAPS4. When we were there the music was really loud and a bunch of people were drinking and getting drunk and doing stupid stuff. Like this one guy who was standing behind his girlfriend who was sitting down in the grass, this guy had a few too many to drink. He was standing behind his girlfriend laughing at a joke that oneof his drunk buddies told him and then he leans on his girlfriend but just falls on her and folds her right in half like a lawn chair. My @CAPS1 and @CAPS4 started laughing, it was pretty funny. But then the guys girlfriend got up and walked out of the stadium so he got pretty sad. The rest of the concert was pretty funny. The front rows seats were only for people over @NUM1 because during the concert the band would bring out some beer guns and shower the front rows with beer. The front rows were the craziest rows. The back rows were pretty crazy too, people were smoking marijuiana in the back rows, but we werent. When we left we all smelled like weed and didnt want to get pulled over for any reason and have the cop think that we were drugies. It was a long ride home, we live in @LOCATION3, @ORGANIZATION2 and we drove to @LOCATION4, @LOCATION2 and back in one day. I was so tired, we didnt even take any chairs to the concert so we had to stand up in the same spot for about @NUM2 hours. But it was all worth it to see my favorite band in concert. They had a few other bands before them that were also great. Bands like; @PERSON2, @CAPS5/@CAPS6, and @CAPS7. So it was deffinetly the best concert I have ever been to. The second best concert ive ever been to was a @CAPS8 concert in @LOCATION1 with my @CAPS9 @PERSON3 and @PERSON1 @PERSON1 during the @CAPS10 @CAPS11. There were a lot of things we did before the concert like; look at animals, eat, go on rides, buy things, eat more, get drinks, and walk around the @CAPS11. A lot of things made @CAPS4 laughlike when my @PERSON1 stepped in horse and goat poop and when my mom dropped her food on her lap. The concert was really cool, they played some songs to there new album @CAPS12 and @CAPS13. It wasnt as long as the drive to the @ORGANIZATION1 concert and it wasnt as good. But it was still awesome.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 191,1,"Dear The @CAPS1, I understand that you have some concerns about computers. I don't think you should be concerned though. You should not be concerned because computers are very posotive. They teach us hand-eye coordination, help teach you about faraway places and people, and finally you can talk online with familly and friends. First, computers teach you hand-eye coordination. There are thousands of fun games online that can help improve your reflexes and eyesight. This can help heal or improve some people reflexes by making their eyes more keen. Another thing amazing about computers is that you can learn about far away places and people. This is very helpful because if you want to travel somewhere far away but you can't, you just go to your computer and look it up. Then you feal like you are really there. It can also help you study about people that live far away and that you won't get to meat in person. Finally when you go on your computer you can go online and talk with your family and friends. There are all types of websites you can go on to talk and hang out with with all of your friends and family. The computer is very helpful because it keeps your family and friends together and happy. In conclusion I think computers are a great, fun, and helpful invention. Remember these good characteristics that computers have and please don't take computers away; we need them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20844,8," I'm a tell you about moments sometimes even adventures with a boy named @CAPS1.C. @CAPS4 has brown hair that is up to his neck, that @CAPS4 loves to swoosh around like in the movies. @CAPS4 most definitely doesn't like his bangs cut to short other wise the swoosh will not turn out the same way. @CAPS4 has brown eyes that just seem to sparkle and a smile that seems to fool everyone. ""@CAPS2, @CAPS4's so adorable"", they say.""@CAPS2, @CAPS4 so cute"", they say.@CAPS1.C is cute, but does things that will amaze you! Things you wouldn't think a kid his age could make possible. Like i always say, ""@CAPS4'll make you work for your money!""The thing is @CAPS4's only @NUM1 years of age, well right now @CAPS17. @CAPS4 loves the attention, @CAPS4'll do almost anything for it. Yet @CAPS4's very lovable and sometimes sweet.@CAPS4 loves comedy, cartoons, candy, video games, the works. @CAPS1.C is lots of fun believe me when i say you'll never get bored! I think when @CAPS4 was @NUM2 1/@NUM2 when the adventures began. @CAPS4 would always go in the refrigerator and just @CAPS8 at the egg cartons and double check if anyone was around. Then @CAPS4'd grab one and toss it and say, ""@CAPS5, chicken?"" with a baby type accent, so adorable! but @CAPS4'd try another and another and another until all the eggs were splattered all over the place. @CAPS4'd run off knowing we're coming to close to him and hide. I must admit i didn't know who was doing all this at first. I kind of thought it was @CAPS1.C, but wasn't too sure. That was only one mischief.@CAPS4 also loved this aquarium that was there, very bright because of the light it just seem to attract him. @CAPS4'd get closer and closer and just @CAPS8 at the fishes. Watching them swim, all the different pretty colors. The rocks and the little toys seemed to attract him more. When @CAPS5 one was around @CAPS4'd @CAPS8 above the tank and stick his hand in very carefully and say,""@CAPS7!""trying to attempt to grab it, but @CAPS5 success. When @CAPS4 heard that someone was coming or getting closer to him @CAPS4'd run so fast like the bird cartoon from loony toons always out smarting the coyote. There would be a mess, of course. Though everyone knew @CAPS4'd be trouble once @CAPS4'd start walking! @CAPS4 was so cute though.Now when @CAPS4 was between the ages @NUM4 and @NUM5, @CAPS4 just loved picking at people just for the fun of it, or so we thought. @CAPS4 do it for the attention so we'd go drop what were doing and go run after him. What @CAPS4'd do was grab something that was valuable to a certain person and go up to them and say, ""@CAPS8! me have, me have.""Of course, we had to go run after him, but sometimes you'd have to be careful because if not @CAPS4'd toss if and wham! It would brake. there's only a few things I'm pointing out here, but in reality there was much more and it was ore exciting then might be explaining it! age @NUM5 was a workout! One day we decide to lend @CAPS1.C our @CAPS10 touch to entertain him because we were busy doing our own things and @CAPS1.C discovers you tube! @CAPS4 loves this show called @CAPS12 and @CAPS13! In other words @CAPS4 calls it, ""@CAPS14 @CAPS15 @CAPS16.""@CAPS17 @CAPS4'd go on it and watch most of the t.v shows on the @CAPS10 touch and use the apps on it! @CAPS4 is very smart when it comes to using electronics if i @MONTH1 add. The day after that @CAPS4'd ask for the @CAPS10 touch almost frequently then every time @CAPS4 was denied of using it, @CAPS4'd go to his methods in getting it! Of course what @CAPS4 did was, when lights were out and everyone was asleep @CAPS4'd @CAPS8 all over, when finally @CAPS4'd @CAPS8 under the pillows and grab them and take it with him. The very next morning we were after him! @CAPS4 told us, but yet again @CAPS4 would do it! Then we went to drastic measures we hid the @CAPS10 touches else where. now at @NUM1 years of age! whoa, well @CAPS5 in my opinion I think @CAPS4 calmed down a little more. Others @MONTH1 not think so, but i know so! Anyways @CAPS4 is now @NUM1 which means @CAPS4 is now starting school! which i hear is quite entertaining for those who are not involved! They love @CAPS1.C but sometimes @CAPS4 can be a little too much, ha. @CAPS4 loves roaming around doing what @CAPS4 loves most and just having a great time, which i admire. well if i were to say one little short story about him as a @NUM1 year old I'd pick, how @CAPS5 matter what @CAPS4'd always defend his brothers! @CAPS4 wont let @CAPS5 one bully his brothers, @CAPS5 matter what the odds! i admire most about him is that!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4357,2,"I don't think that certain materials in books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from shelves because I think that everyone has the right to say what they want to say, but I do think some things in books, movies, and music that might be appropriate for a high school student aren't appropriate for an elementary school student. Some things can be really offensive to elementary school students but not so much to high school students, it would just depend on what they are reading, watching, and hearing. I've never experienced anything offensive in what i've read in any book before but I have experienced some in music i've heard. I didn't say really anything about it I just thought someone shouldn't have written this certain song that I was listening to and I didn't think it would really be that bad. It's mostly in rap music that i've heard that's really offensive and I think shouldn't have been even written. But I still think everyone has a right to say what it is that they are wanting to say",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7049,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist horribly! For example, he ran into the worse problems and couldnt really do anything about them. also, he started out fine, then he started to become dehydrated. He didnt have much water left and he was only @NUM1 miles up the road. a loss of water was very affective in June traveling through a desert. also, the damage of the road was very affective too because hes on a bike and not too good of balance. These features could affect the cyclist in many ways because of the weather, temperature, loss of water, road damages and snakes. the cyclist was on a bike and couldnt really protect himself, and he was dehydrated, and tired. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1534,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 oppinon about computers are that people should use them. Think about your children, when they grow up they will need to know how to use a computer for school, or even a job. It also teaches hand eye cordanation for multi tasking. The computer is also fun and easy to use. I am almost positve that you love to use a computer, who dosn't? @CAPS2 first reason is that you will need to use a computer in everyday life. For example if you are going to a job interview most @CAPS3 will ask how meny words a minuet can you type you need to be proficant. Also at school if you have a writing asinment due then it would take more time writing it than typeing it. All @CAPS3 you will have to type one time or another. Aspesaily your job as an @CAPS1 you need to use a computer everyday. The computer also teaches hand eye cordanation. Hand eye cordanation is kinda like multi tasking you could type and talk on the phone or even excircising and txting. Hand eye cordanation is a very important skill in life. All @CAPS3 you will need to multi task like at a library you need to find a book and talk to people. Even driving a car you need to multi task to stay on the hand, you need to use one fast from brake and gas and you need to be looking at the road. You must to multi task along with hand eye cordination. Your in luck a computer teaches you. @CAPS2 last and final reason is its fun and easy to use. I was @NUM1 when I started uing a computer I loved to play fun games. I never could type but I caught on because if you are having fun while you it will be easy to turn. Just like math its not fun but you have to larn how to do it. So if you like having fun while lurning some thing the computer is for you. It's now or never for people to larn, get @CAPS3 and get good grades. Its fun and easy to lurn how to use. It teaches you hand eye cordanation plus multi tasking. You will absolutly need to know how to use a computer for @CAPS3 and school. We need computers for life we always will need to use computers for every single day of our lives. Don't tell people it will note your brain or you will become unhelthy from being on the computer look past it. Don't you see all the good uses for computers?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14961,6,"In the novel, The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, obsticals of the Empire State Building faced to attempemt to allow dirigibles to dock there were enginering challenges. A problem with the docking was that the building was complete before the idea came to mind. A second problem was that the whole skeletal structure had to be changed in order for dirigibles to be able to dock. Then the question on how the airships, dirigibles, would stay next to the building. These were harder problem after it was illigale to have dirigibles to be close to buildings as well. Plus the fact that if they crash they are flamable and could kill people. Those are some facts that made it difficult for the Empire State building to build a dirigibles docks in the novel, The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15209,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" (@NUM1) the winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents causing the dirigible's back to swivel around the mooring mast. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen... hydrogen is highly flammable."" (@NUM2) @CAPS1 the Hindenburg which blew up, if a Blimp blew up over downtown New York, tons of lives would be lost, a huge risk to the mooring mast. ""Was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@NUM3) This law would prevent dirigibles from docking at the mooring mast legally. All of those obstacles contributed to the mooring mast being used only for show and contributing to the world's tallest building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4618,2,"To @CAPS1 @ORGANIZATION1, my name is @CAPS2 I am from @ORGANIZATION2. I do agree that books, music, movies, and magazines should be removed from the shelves. If they are not something that the kids should learn about then why put them on the shelves. Many of the books that children, teens, and adults read is a cause of a lot of violance and threating.That's a major cause these days and we want a clam a peaceful world. Many of times we see teens to childern get into fights or have bad mouth to others. It's not a good thing to see and its mostly because they are either watching a @CAPS3 show about negtive things or reading a book or just trying to act cool. If we could put more important learning books, movies, and ect.. there would be less aggression in the world. Having a more positive day and going out and saying I read @ORGANIZATION1 wonderful book that taught me something new in life would be the best thing to hear. Teaching something that a kid could remember or is helpful in the long run is the greatest thing. Knowing that they are doing anything educational is just a great feeling. Now when do you see kids actually doing what they are supposed to. You really dont cause they are too busy wanting to find trouble to get into. That's really not good for them they should always learn about the good things to help them in life. It's a tough world out there for these kids and they should be taught the best way that they can",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7572,3,"The features of a setting, such as terrain and weather greatly affect the cyclist who is biking in it. The features of a setting can make the cyclists trip either easier or harder. Weather can make them use up their water faster or slower, rain as bad road conditions could force a cyclist go slower. In the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the cyclist is slowed down and more fatigued because of the features of the setting he was in. The lack of water and settlements slowed him down. Rough roads did as well. Hills and animals on the road slowed down the cyclist even more. The features of a setting can help or hinder a cyclist, and in the case of the one in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the features seriously impared his bike ride.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12155,5,"The mood created by the author was one of happiness, love, and caring. Not only does it show in his style, but the author also gives details that really create the vibe. In paragraph @NUM1, the author describes the food as ""rich culinary skills and love of cooking,"" and the music as ""passionate Cuban music...mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This creates a homely affect to the scene, along with the paragraph about the many ""family members"" that came over for meals. The author describes this and explains that this was all possible, despite the nation's racism, because his parents worked hard to get where they were for the faith that their children would have a better life than they had. With all of the details, the author creates a loving, cultural affect can only be found with great family and friends.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3843,2,"When you are taking your little kid to the library because they want a book you think 'hmmm, there isn't anything bad at the library its all education books.' @CAPS1 would you feel if your child wanted to check out a movie there? You would be ok with it because no one thinks there are bad images or movies at the library. A little girl could be with her mom at the library in the adualt section and they could see some things you would not want them to see. The romance books usually have girls on there half clothed and the guys in basically nothing. A child could easily see that and not know what it ment but they would have theat image in there head for a very long time.Some of the kids could go up to the movies section and pull out a scary movie that shows blood and guns. Its not just the kids seeing the stuff its everyone. A teen could easily get a book and not be paying attention and see stuff about the other gender. A couple could go in the library trying to find a good healthy funny movie, but could find a movie that would make them uncomfortable. An older person could try to find some music from back in their time but when they get it, all of it is about drugs, sex, or even acohole. The magazines always have girls half clothed, even in seventeen magazine. The car magazines of girls modeling infront of the cars to make them look better or irristable. You can get a baby magazine and it shows a mom breast feeding. You could have jsut wanted to look at if because of the babies you or your child do not want to see a mom breast feeding. The library is a very resourcful place and you can get very good information about things there. They have some bad parts about them too. I think they music that talks about personal things and bad things should be in its own little place. Same with the magazines, movies and books they should all be in a room together away from all the rest of the items in the library. They should have an age limit you have to be to be able to go in that room. They should tell you what type of stuff is in there before you go in. I'm not saying the library is a bad place for kids or teens or anyone. I just think that certain books, music, and magazines should be kept in a different place instead of out in the open where everyone can see them.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 400,1,"Dear Newspaper Readers, @CAPS1 computers have really change the way people use technology. It has made our society different in many ways. People can look at information faster than ever with this device. People can also talk to friends, especially on popular websites, computers are even used in school, mostly in college. @CAPS1 an advantage of using it in school, means so much to the people and there education, computers have changed the human race forever. When my grandparents went to school, they had no idea what a computer was. their guide was priar knowledge, knowledge from a teacher, or a dictionary. We are so fortunate today to have even computers in our school because my grandparents would have loved to have something as quick and as simple as a computer. @CAPS1 access to a computer can really help people inso many different ways, mainly about the world. What is the first place you would go to talk to people online: @CAPS2. Do you man @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people have @CAPS2. The reason why it is so popular paper want to talk to friends that they enjoy talking too. From my experience out from canada have @CAPS2 too, which is surprising. Talking to in country is unbelievable. As you're opportunity for people to make new friend. This can also affect the way people lively. When teenagers attend high school, they have a choice of talking a specific, almost like a helping one classes is because when you are in college, so many in a short amount. I have people who stay up for our their paper. @CAPS1 these are an advantage for everyday life, especially college because it is an oppurtunity for someone to get better at typing computer classes can really help someone trying to learn how to type at a fast pace, and get a caple more hours of sleep! In conclusion, I believe @CAPS1 computers effect our society in a positive way. Thank your for reading this letter, and I hope you can take this into consideration. @CAPS1 computers have dramatically changed lives forever. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10246,4,"The author of this story story created the last paragraph so that it finishes the story with a great ending. The fact of never giving up and try again again and again. The author said, ”I will take the test again.” In the story Saeng said, ”I failed the test” but now that she isn't giving up. This last paragraph makes a lot of senses and is needed to make this story complete. So just as others don't give up in @LOCATION1, Saeng is doing the same and is retaking the test.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12932,5,The mood in the memoir was in a way sad. The reason why it was kind ave sad is how they came into this country with nothing. They had to live in a @NUM1 bedroom apartment. Even though that they still made it up to being able to make money. They got a better living style too.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10438,4,Saeng is @CAPS1 that it Will be a longtime before she will worn about school work again. thats Why the author concluds the story with their paragraph.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4497,2,"There are many reasons why censorship can be thought of as a good thing, or a bad thing. I am against censorship. My reasons are that just because someting is there that you don't like, doesn't mean that you have to look at it or use it. There are plenty of people that would like to have access to that information or entertainment. Another reason is, that if there's something that someone doesn't want their child looking at, then they should either trust that their child won't look at it, or prevent them from seeing it. Finally, what would be left if everyone were to remove somthing that they took offense to? Nothing would be left to read, listen to or watch. First, why I think censorship is wrong, is that the people that take offense to what they want removed, don't have to look at whats offensive. No one is forcing them to look at it or use it. They're better off just ignoring it. Because other people, that don't take offense to it, have the right to look at or use it. The library might be the only place that someone could have access to that sort of material. So if someone were to remove that material, the person that needs or wants it, would not have the access to use it. And they are given the right to use it. Their child might even have the right to it. Second is that some people wouldn't want their child seeing those things. But removing it shouldn't be that persons first instinct. I believe that the parent should be able to trust their own child not to look at it. And if they can't, then they need to somehow prevent their child from viewing it; not by removing it. The parent should be able to come up with a reasonable way of preventing their child from viewing things that they don't want the child viewing, rather than taking that thing away from the child, and the whole community. Lastly, let's say that in a library, theres at least one book to each person in a community that offends that person. If they were each given the right to remove the book that offended them, what would be left to read? Absolutely nothing. And each of those people that removed a book, most likely would enjoy another book that someone thought was offensive. So now there isn't a single book for that person to read, just because everyone else disliked the books they didn't think were offensive. Once someone starts removing, other people will join in, and you'd be left with an empty library. Thats what I think about cencorship. It's really just wrong. Personally, I would like to be able to go to my library and pick out a good book. And I know other people like to do that too. So why should anyone else be able to take that away from them",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12027,5,@PERSON1 is a short story about a boy who is very grateful & shows a lot of appriciation torwards his parents. He feels that he is at home even though he moved to @LOCATION1. In paragraph @NUM1 it said his parents created his new home to look like a cuban home he had back in cuba by putting cuban thing on the wall. I feel that in this short story he is very grateful because he said in paragraph @NUM2 he will never forget how his parents turned this simple house to a home. @PERSON1 is a very calm and happy short story.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19495,7,One time when I was patient I got a @ORGANIZATION1 last @CAPS1 I asked for a @ORGANIZATION1 and my @CAPS2 said maybe. So I waited all year I knew I would get one but I kept waiting and you know what I got a blue @ORGANIZATION1 and on top of that @NUM1 new goues with it. But over the time I wated I was going nuts knowing I was gonna get the @ORGANIZATION1. But when I finally got it I was glad I was patient the wait was wen worth it especially because I relly waited my @ORGANIZATION1.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12931,5,"The mood created by the author in the @CAPS1 was both loving and @CAPS2. This was the mood of the story because the author mentioned how his home was filled with a lot of love & how he is grateful for the sacrifice that his parents made for him. (@CAPS3. @NUM1) In his community that was filled with hardworking immigrants came together in great solidarity & friendship. (@CAPS3. @NUM2) The author's parents had come to the country with courage, without any knowledge of the language or culture which he will always be grateful for. (@CAPS3. @NUM3) His home was always filled with life & love. The author said that he would never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things he learned there about how to love. He would never forget how his parents turned that simple house into a home...",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6096,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead, Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, “affect the cyclist in major ways. First, when the cyclist sees the grape juice factory, he is reminded that he is out of water and is doubtful about even living. The text states, “…A young pouring a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth could still be seen. I hung my head “ (Kurmaskie @NUM1 ). The text later states, "" At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path..."" (kurmaskie). This tells that the cyclist feels de pressed and is majorly affected by these sights. This could and would later ruin his self esteem and think about diying.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19480,7,I was patient when my dog had to go the @CAPS1 he was really sick becaus he had heart worms my mom and I just whated for about two hour's I was not as patint as my mom because I keep asking my mom what was going on. After the operation was down we had to whate even longer intill we got my dog bare back almost @NUM1 hours. After the @CAPS1 called us we went and got my dog and the doctor sed that he had to water in till he could be up and moving and it was finly ok and we played in the snow all @CAPS3 long.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3582,2,Why censore something that someone worked hard on? People put up money and countless amounts of time to write this and yet you want to censore it.See there is honestly no need to censore any thing in the library because there certain sections for certain people therefore this whole conversation shouldnt be going on in the first place.People just like to knit pick about what they can not handle for instense like the word nigger i dont like it at all but i can handle it and therfore i just shut my mouth and suck it up.So I just feel like all the critique and all the imature people just need not to read or dont go to the library but thats only me though.So stop acting like little children the authors want their stuff on shelves and not being banned and raved and ranted about alsoIn conclusion stop being imature and if you dont like it dont read it. Always think to yourself about what your doing before you decside,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16489,6,"Throughout the short story The Mooring Mast, the builders faced many obstacles to complete their vision. For example the workers had to design a mast that would take ""the stress of the dirigible's load"" (@NUM1). The cable at the top was stated to not be able to maintain the stress the dirigible would produce, so the engineers had to develope a new solution to distribute the weight of the dirigible evenly. This cost them time and money due to the massive hight of the empire state building. the architects also had to do extra research to develope the mast. The workers took tours of the U.S. Naval Air Station and met with the president of the airship transport company just so they could be sure the dirigibles would land in a safe secure way. These obsticles had to be faced in order to produce their unrealistic dream.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10138,4,The author concluded his storie with that paragraph is because thats how it should end and that’s why he ended it like that. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13391,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir shows him that he is grateful to have a home to live in When he was born by his parents. He was happy to live in a family that is unity and have friendship with others. He has learned the definition of ""family"" and know what a ""family"" is like and he respects his family for having a great home in @LOCATION1. The @CAPS1 has learned about how to love, and not forgeting his family for bring this simple house into a home as said in the last paragraph. He is happy to have a home to stay in and finding his new life ahead of him. Greatful for the love and sacarfice of his parents. Having a home is sweet.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20846,8," Laughter is a symbol of joy and happiness. It is to become amused or derisive. Many people today make jokes or funny remarks just to hear somebody laugh. It is never something we should take for granted. Through many relationships no matter what kind, I believe laughter takes up at least @PERCENT1 of your relationship. It's to show the best out of someone and to let them know you are listening. There are plenty of other reasons in this world needed for laughter. ""I'm sure you can even think of one"". In my views of this world and our society today, I believe laughter is what makes up our ""human"" spirit. It's to show ourselves and other people the spark we have inside us. Have you ever sat and pondered why we make each other laugh? I have asked myself this same question over and over. For me making people laugh is letting them know I care and to also think I'm funny as well. We even do it just the fact of wanting people to like us better and to be known as funny, hilarious, or just a good person to talk to. Sometimes we can go to the extremes of being to funny, and feeling guilty for picking on someone in a laughable way. I remember in the eighth grade, I was thirteen years old. I was really shy and didn't have much friends. One day in class some of the popular kids actually came over and started talking to me. I was @CAPS1 excited and nervous that other kids wanted to talk to me. Of course they were laughing and making jokes, not caring what anyone else was saying. Then this one girl started talking about other people like she knew everything. When she started talking about my best friend it made me angry but happy at the same time, because some of the things she was saying were true. That's were I messed up, I started talking about all the other dumb things she did, just to make everybody else laugh. As I was sitting there all I felt was guilt and disappointment in myself. I couldn't believe I was sitting there talking about my best friend, just to try and make myself popular. Later that day she came up to me really upset and couldn't understand why I would do that to her. I told her I was sorry and that I only did it to make myself popular and seem funny to other kids. We didn't talk for almost two weeks. @CAPS1 I tried to do everything in my own possible way to get my best friend back. It did take me awhile, but she finally came around and forgave me. It was a good life lesson for me, knowing laughter @MONTH1 not always be a good thing. Now me and my friend are juniors in high school and when we think back on that day. We both together can share a laugh. In conclusion, you can see how laughter can bring somebody up and tear them down. I have experienced these things as well in my life time. Laughter has made me stronger and to be a better person, even if it means turning down popular kids @CAPS1 you don't hurt those closest to you.""@CAPS1 go out and make somebody laugh today"".",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17854,7,"One day, a few years ago, I woke up and my mom said we were going to my grandma’s house. So started to get ready. After I was done getting dressed I looked on. My dresser and grabbed my @MONEY2 @MONEY3 that I was saving up to buy something just incase we went to the store When we got there I saw my cousin’s dad @CAPS1 walking a puppy. I walked up to him and asked about the dog, he said it was his brothers dog and he was selling it. My mom said I could get a dog so I asked him how much did he coast. @CAPS1 said @MONEY1. I got really excited because I had @MONEY2 and could get @MONEY3 from my granding. So I called my mom but she was busy somewhere else but she told me that she wanted to see the dog before I buy him. So @CAPS1 waited their for hours but my mom took forever. Then finally I got impatience and bought him. But my wow wasn’t mad because she ended up liking him",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 543,1,"@CITY1 @CAPS1: I believe that computers (for now) are a good thing for our society. They allow you to see places. If you have a long distance relationship you can talk to them and they have many good excessories. What if you were looking for a new home? You could use google to search of selling homes in a certain location. Then finding some one to move your stuff for a fair price. Computers have many websites that you can go to when looking for that special place. The computer is also handy when you are going on vacation. You can look up the weather for that time. If you are going somewhere for, you can use the computer to find a plane. Computers are helpful when it comes to places! The excessories on the computer are endless. One big excessory that people like to do is games. Games are great to get your mind going. Practically all of the grades require hand-eye coordination. For example, @ORGANIZATION1. You need to remove all the tiles before the time runs out! If you are bored, games are very fun. I think that games are a great excessory. Some people have long distance relationships right? Well, if you have a computer you can have an online. This relieves many people when they know your not there. If you have an email, you can talk"" to your friends that you dont see at school. This gives you a chance to connect with them. Myspace and facebook are very similar. These are what you can use to talk to your friends at school. Computers are very useful. As you can see, I have stated many good reasons. Excessories, ""talking"" to people. Also, places. Many people use computers in their every day life. Computers are awsome!""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6708,3,Cycling is a very good sport people who do cycling are in shape. Also they have strong calve muscles. I think its also dangerous as well.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6187,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. He was riding his bike across a place with no cars, no people, no water, or no food. It was a dangerous journey for him but he made it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13009,5,"In the memoir the mood is very loving, @CAPS1, and thankfull. The mood is loving in many different ways. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Also, ""it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" Also @CAPS1 is expressed throughout this memoir. ""It was in this simple house that my parents welcomed other refuges to celebrate their arrival to this country, and where I celebrated my first birthdays."" @CAPS1 is expressed by the family gathering a the dinner table more times that not. The greatest mood in the memoir is how thankfull he is to his parents. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Also ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly.""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15472,6,The obstacles faced by the Empire State building builders were. one was the existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas. Stated in @CAPS1 @NUM1. Another obstacle was nature. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. With the dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a cable tether would have put stress on the building therefore they would have had to make the structure of the building stronger,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9226,4,I think the athor includes that becaus. she mite have faeled and need more time to study to get thing @NUM1 so other than that damn new,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19429,7,"One time when I was patient was a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 and @CAPS4 adventured! We were by the water park most of the @CAPS3 and, it was fun. I seem more of my time in @CAPS5 have pool and on the @CAPS6 @CAPS7- my favoritende.We were getting soon tired of the water park and decided @CAPS17 go the rides! We were trying decide weather or not we wanted go on??? ??? Or the “@CAPS8! & @CAPS9: - I decided @CAPS5 go on??? and when we got there @CAPS5 ??? was like an hour long. So i.e. rival the long, made up mil and after @CAPS11 @CAPS5 were netted in line. concouontly @CAPS5 rides was having ??? that??? ??? ??? @NUM1 getting that announced @CAPS13 we bent @CAPS17 go and??? ??? For @CAPS5 thunder @CAPS15 @CAPS16 the park was closing “@CAPS17 bad we stayed in The water park @DATE1 long!”I waited then @CAPS5 will come back next year and got in live and asking my mother soul, @CAPS18 you can see I have experenced parked",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10126,4,The author concludes the Story with this paragraph because I guess her grandma died while the geese were flying. Or thats when the flowers start to bloom.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4066,2,"Libraries have books, magizines, movies, ect.The library is a wonderful place to read in a quite place.It can also be an offensive place to some people.They think they can complane and bikker about it, But should all those activities be removed from the library shelves? But whose oppenion is it anyways. If I found an offensive book, movie, or magizine on a shelf at a library I would just leave it. Apparently its not a bad thing because if it was they wouldnt have it on a shelf. So if I got offensive by it I wouldnt look at it or pick it up. I mean its that simple.A library is full of well, about everything you would enjoy. Many diffrent people like diffrent books and movies to read and watch, that means the library has a right to put what ever they @MONTH1 want. Even if it is offensive to some people. With my experences in a library nothing has came across to be offensive to me. Im a kind of person that dosen't care. However I have seeen so books ware the author is making fun of the @CAPS1 people. Also @CAPS2 seen a book ware the author is writting about the black people and how they used to be treated and some of the book has the @PERSON1 in it witch is a major racism to black people. It could be a unfair situation to some people that have kids with them and a inapropreate book is on the shelf and they see it. That could be offensive to the children and the parents .Or it could even be in a magizine. But why should the books magizines and ect.. be tooken off the shelfs when its not effensive to all people? If the libraians took all the offensive books off the shelves then there wouldn't be any left. Everyone has diffrent things that can offend them. If you dont like how the book is you can take it to your friend and they can read it or you can just turn it back into the library. You can also talk to the library manager and tell them the issue with the offensive it has given you. Books, movies, magizines and ect are all in a library. They could be offensive or not. If you think they are then dont look at it or read it. Its that simple get it or dont",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3264,2,"I believe that everyone has the right to choose what book should be banned form their children,but not from the public. Everyonehas their owen belief in what he or she reads or rights even watches so the library is perfect the way it is . We can not through out books we find offensive because of our beliefs because somebody else might want to come along and read about a certain relgion or a certain topic. If we through out all the books and made a library with only the books we wanted we'd be in a lot of debt because then we'd have to build libraries for everyone instead of one that allows us all to enjoy our favorite books all at the same place. So if we have a problem with a book or movie form the library weshould just keep our children awayfrom that item and inform them on why they should not be subjected to that item",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 14882,6,"Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by @PERSON1, the builders of the Empire State Building were faced with a number of obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the top. The greatest obstacle the builders faced was nature itself. @PERSON1 stated, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents,"" therefore it wasn't safe for dirigibles to be docked there. The wind would cause them to swivel around the mast, and it would be unsafe for the builders to hang lead weights on the dirigibles because they would be dangling above the pedestrians on the street. The other obstacle which prevented dirigibles from mooring at the Empire State Building was due to the law against airships flying too low over urban areas or cities. This existing law made it illegal for dirigibles to ever tie up to the building or just approach it because the area was too low over the city. @PERSON1 said, ""although two dirigibles did attempt to reach the building before the entire idea was dropped."" @CAPS1 two dirigibles failed at getting close enough to tie up or to deliver there cargo safetly, because of the forceful winds and the non-existence of certain mooring equipment, which should've been installed. Due to the obstacles, dirigibles were never able to moor at the building.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12057,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the mood created by the author in the memoir is together the family is organized. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today"" the parents really are together thing how to organized the family. That is the mood that is created by the author in the memoir.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 8938,4,I think that the author concludes which paragraph as his ending because thats what that is what the girl is going to be doing for the following year that is going to pass and still be with her mother helping her out in the garden. Without no friends just let in her mom,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3917,2,"You go to a library to read books, music, and magazines, but soon you find out that there are very offensive books. I strongly say yes, I agree that we should remove the books, magazines, and music from shelfs if they are offensive to people. We are suppost to feel safe reading books, listening to music, and reading magazines. When I was younger I went to the library all the time. I would get books to read and look at, and for a while I was excited to go to the library, but all the excitment went away after a few bad exsperiecnes. Remembering the names of the books are not going to come to me, but I know I was so upset by how the book was. It had words that I never heard before, and I got confused. This could happen to many little kids that come across a bad book, but really librarys should only have good books not bad.After that bad experience happened to me I ignored it like it will go away or something. Bad books, offensive books, should be taken off shelfs for good and never to return. I feel very strongly about this subject, because I am a book warm, I love to read books and being able to go to a library and find a good book thats not offinsive is all that I ask for in a library. Offensive books, music, and magazines should not be aloud to be in librarys at all. When kids read books or listen to music they want to be able to disappear in them, but if there are offensive stuff out there, how will they be able to do that. There are things that should be left out of libraries and that is offensive books, music, and magazines.In closing to my essay I still have full curage in my answer, I still say yes, they should remove the offensive books, music, and magazines. If it was your sister, your daughter, or your neciece that went into a library and found an offensive book, what would you say? I ask you this, how would you feel?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18727,7,"Patience @CAPS1 is being polite by waiting for someone or something. It is polite to be patient, if your not patient that means you are just about practicly mean because you are judging someone or makeing them do something really fast. For example if you are waiting inline for a ride at a comiville or something then if you are patient your being nice to other people by not trying to hurry or something like that. If you. are impatient and you are standing in line you would be mean to other people by like saying “hurry up I want to be on that ride or hurry up and start the ride allready. There is the example. If you are a patient person people will probly like you. If you are impatient then you will probly have a hard time getting along with somebody.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18144,7,"A time when I was pacient was when I was babysitting and the kids I was babysitting were acting up. It hard for me to get them to calm down. But , I noticed that if I was pacient then they will too. So, I just sat down and told them to calm down and they wouldn't. So I told them that again and this time they were a bit quieter I noticed that if I ignore them or be pacient then they will settle down and stop because they were trying to get my attention. If I was being pacient then I knew they would be too. It worked they settle down and were being a lot when I was babysitting them the next time too.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16248,6,"After planning and building the mooring mast on top of the empire state building, the developers found many problems that were not thought of earlier. They hadn't thought about the flammability of the gases inside of the dirigibles. Nor had they remembered the ""law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to a building"" (lines @NUM1). Also, the heavy winds that would be found that high above the ground would certainly prove to be a danger to all the airships. If they had hit a neiboring building the results could be disastrous.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21505,8," Laughter to me is the best medicine there is, and indeed a big role in any good relationship. It's especially good for a couple who's serious and has forgotten how to laugh. Also for those who could use their mood lifted. I know that laughter made my relationship so much better. In the begginging my relationship with my boyfriend wasn't so great. We barely laughed with eachother, let alone spoke very much. Only with friends would we laugh and have a good time. Though we weren't much of jokers anyway. All we could do was get upset or just not say anything. Even if the joke was funny. Well that all changed one night when we decided to go to the @LOCATION1 and play a few rounds of @CAPS1. When we got there we were kind of moody, and I was very short tempered. After we sat down the mood lightened a little. Then we finally got to talking and then one little outburst sent us practically rolling on the ground. We were cracking up. Faces red and gasping for air. We laughed so hard we almost cried, and the jokes didn't stop. Our moods totally changed once that happened. We couldn't even remember why we were upset. Almost like the anger just vanished. Soon after we realized how rediculous we were and that it's alright to joke around, just so long as it's not mean. Later on we went to a friend's house and had an awsome time. We told a few good jokes, laughed an awful lot, and really had fun. Then when it got dark we decided to go home and were still cracking jokes. I don't know what it was about that night that but for the first time in a long time we were smiling and happy. Sharing that experience allowed us to really connect with eachother. Not only that, but it strenthened our bond, and brought us closer. Our relationship has been great ever since then. We can laugh and have a good time, without being so serious all the time. I know now why laughter is very important in a relationship. Despite our little run in with moodiness, all that joking around reminded me that laughter is by far the best medicine there is. It did some things that others never could. Some @MONTH1 not think that laughing is best, but i believe it is. Those little giggles every now and then @MONTH1 not seem like much, but believe me there is so much more than you think. Laughter is everything to me. After what it did for me and my boyfriend, i don't know how i would live without it. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7063,3,"The setting desented in the story, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Speed Limit,” would be a nightmare for any biker. This biker is riding in the middle of a desert on a summer’s day. The sweat dropping down him is just speeding up his dehydration. This is shown when the narration states, “wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that i could drop from heatstroke” (Kurmaskie). This show how hot the desert was, and how he could drop dead. The desert is also deserted with rolling tumbleweeds and giant snakes, as he passed abandoned towns and factories. The dangerousness for a biker in this area is very high. The biker was lucky to have made it out of those sorroundings alive.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3012,2,"Libraries have alot of material to read about. They have childrens books to adult books. All of the books vary on different age groups. So many people go to the libary a day. But the question is, should certin materials be taken off the shelfts because they are found offensive? The answer is no. When people go to the libary, that means they want to learn something, or find something to intertain them. When you go to the libary to reserch something, and they do not have the book you need, or the movie you need, what are you going to do? What happends when you are doing a project over something, and they do not have the book you need? Do you want your children failing in school because they libaries take materials off the shelfs? People should not take materials off the shelfs beucase 'they do not like it.' If they think it is offensive, then they should put it back on the shelf and go find something else. They do not have to take it off the shelf because they are agenst it. Everyone has different beleafs on things. Libaries have different sections to go find materials at. It varies from kids, fiction, and nonfiction. It also sometimes goes by what you are looking for. No one should take something off the shelf if it is offensive because it was their choose to look at it in the first place. No one can tell you what you can and cant look at when you go to a libary. If they do not like what they see, then put it down. It is that easy. If you can not find what you are looking for, then libaries also have computers to look up things",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6580,3,"In “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the terrain has a negative effect on the author. He claims that “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly, and I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” (Kurmaskie). This shows that he has been drinking his water too fast due to the heat from being in the desert at summertime. After travelling from a long time with no water he lets out a chuckles thinking of how he shouldn’t have taken the old mens advise. He explains that “It was a sad, hopeless laugh, mind you, but atleast I still had the energy to feel sorry for myself.” This is an example of how badly the terrain had effected him. Its gotten to him so much that he applauds himself for having the energy to feel sorry for himself.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 856,1,"When you are using technology usually it is work related. A computer is used for work to write essays, make power points, and research, when people use them for facebook, myspace, @CAPS1, and other chat live oovoo and websites it is more for their pleasure. I only go on facebook when I am checking my schedule for hockey, most kids use it for talk. Then there is oovoo & online video chat used for talking with friends but why not just callem'up. When I think of facebook or oovoo, or even myspace it makes me think of inapropriate pictures kids, and adults post. I think that is very unhumane and that is very dangerous to post ot because once it's out there you'll never get it back. For instance I am always outsided hanginaround when it's warm out, during winter I can understand going on facebook, but during the @DATE1 there is no need just go outside and have fun. Kids wonder why they gain weight we'll if you'de get off your computer, and quit eating twinkies then you'll notice you just have to be active. some kids parents don't really give a flying faldoodle what their kids do all day. They don't care if their kid is @NUM1 lbs. at the age of @NUM2. They don't care if their kids are sitting on the computer eating all-day. If i could tell you what it must feel like to be a couch potato I would but I never go on the computer unless it is for homework. I used the computer just @TIME1 I typed up all of my homework except for my math. I didn't play one game, I didn't check email go on the internet or anything I just worked my hardest and got it done. I conclude this with the fact that using a computer is not a bad thing, using it repeatedly and not exercising is. A computer shouldn't need to be used for pleasure it's not created to do so it's created to keep your life simpler. People pay money to buy a expensive computer and motem and all that expensive technological accesories, to make their lives much simpler not anywhere in thes essay did I say to play games because it's not. Playing games can be done outside, it doesn't have to be inside, and definately doesn't have to be on a computer. To make everyones life easier kids, get off your lazy butts, get off the twinkies, and stop playing on the computer. ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9422,4,"Determined, new beginning, symbolism – each are reasons why I believe the author concluded the story with this paragraph. She finds new hope after buying the plant, and is newly determined to pass the test that she writes about. As she sees the geese flying overhead, she realizes what determination they must have and vows to do better on the test next year. With the new flower, she feels like shes starting over so that she’s able to pass this test that seems important to her. When the author write, “and the geese will return and this hibiscus in budding, then I will take that test again,” it shows symbolism. By telling about the flower blooming new buds, it symbolizes that Saeng wanted to turn over a new leaf of some sort. Determined, new beginning, symbolism – each are reasons why I think the author concluded the story with this paragraph.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15322,6,"The excerpt of The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted reveals that the architects of the Empire State faced a number of obstacles. Not only was the construction of the building now competive, but its expectations were unrealistic. The idea for such a masterpiece of a building held a number of potential problems that its architects not very competitive. As the work-in-progress of the Chrysler building grew, the Empire State Building strived to be taller. In order to achieve greater heights, its architects suggested and addition of a mooring mast, to not only make the building the tallest, but to add to its purpose. The addition of a mooring mast would require a lot of planning, though. If a giant steel framed balloon were to dock at the top of the building as is, it could dangerously shake the foundation of the building, so the frame of the building had to be rebuilt much stronger. Also, the architects didn't realized the danger of docking dirigibles. Dirigibles, or blimps, were fueled by hydrogen, which is very flammable, and proved a threat to the thousands of people living below.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12045,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is deffinitty being proud. The reason I think the author is proud is because he explains how he grew up throughout his whole life. Also, growing up made him proud because he came up not having a lot, to being a famous fashion designer. Lastly, this memior's mood also seems proud because he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" @CAPS1, the author makes him seem proud of himself.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6203,3,"In the piece, ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,"" the features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. The cyclist felt black humor, despair and then relief due to the features of the setting. The cyclist felt black humor, due to the features. This was because it was very ironic were he was. It was a hot desert and he needed something to drink. He passes a closed juice factory. This spasked his black humor The cyclist felt despair due to the features. This was because as far as he could see, ""There was no one in sight, not a building, car, structure of any kind. ""This gave him the feeling there was no chance he could survive. This made him despair. The cyclist felt relief later on due to the features. He eventually got to a bait shop. When he was this live and so he felt relief Of this is, ""Then as easily as ? ? ? hobbles, thirst and fear were all behind me. In this piece the features were determined how the cyclist felt.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19477,7,"I’m not a very patient person. I always whine and complain. If patient means you stay somewhere for a whole without complaining, then I guess there are some times when I’ve been patient, but only if there is a friend there to keep me busy. One time, my mom was at the hospital for a long time, about @NUM1 hours. My friend @PERSON1 was there, and we hung out together. It was actually a lot of fun. We ate in the cafeteria place. We stole some milk for no reason, and totally forgot that my mom was there. I didn’t complaine once. Then we got yelled at and had to go back to the waiting room, but it still wasn’t too bad. that was one of the few times I’ve been patient, and don’t know if it counts since I was with somebody.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 19410,7,"One time I was patient was at the doctor, cause when I was little and I was at the doctor I was running around and did not give a care. I guess this time my mom did not trust me so she sat with me where ever I went. Mind you there were girls around so I got embarrased and asked mom why are you following me and she replyed cause I don’t want you running everywhere. That when I told her mom I older now, I’m not sorle years old, I’m muture now. She said @CAPS1 go ahead so I went over sat next to some girls and talked to them. Thats when we got up and start walking around talking. I felt a little tingle in my head saying “your mom is still following you so I turned around and she was not there. So we went to the snack room and sat down we ate and everything, and I so happen to look over and my mom was sitting at the third table away from us. Thats when went back on the elevator on the to our original place and sat down and to my surprise she was all ready there. That when I told the girl that I would be back and I sat next to my mom and said “was you following me and she replied yes I mean no. so I had a talk with her and we came to an understanding. Soon enough it was my turn to go see the doctor. That is the end of my story.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12624,5,"Based on the excerpt of the ""@PERSON1"" by the blueprints of our Lives, That mood created by the author is happness and @CAPS1.When the author restate when the girl says I will allways be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. That shows How much @CAPS2 cares about her mother and father and How respectful @CAPS2 is towards them. Anothe example that her mother and father is @CAPS3 and cares a lot is when her mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. That line proves how much the mom and dad care about there daughter.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4050,2,"Somethings on the shelfs in books stores and other places can be very offensive. I think having cuss words in music and sexualy things can be offensive to women. I do listen to some music but noting like that becasue I think it should not be in music and books. One day I Think the @CAPS1.S.A will be ran by a woman. @CAPS3 is noting wrong with that. Woman have the same rights as @CAPS2 do. @CAPS3 is some people that think woman are just @CAPS3 slaves, that is dead wrong. Woman and @CAPS2 are the same no matter what people say. Katherine Paterson as the right idea though. It would be great if the law would state that if you think something is offensive you should be able to take it off the shelf and throw it away, but some people would say other because @CAPS3 is some people out @CAPS3 who just care about them selfs and acted what ever way they want to so they can act or make them selfs feel better than they are. @CAPS3 are some kids who like to look and go though magazines and see all that bad thing they think that those people are cool so they teaches them how to acted and do bad things, That it why i think we should be able to take it off the shelfs @CAPS3 was this one day I was in @CAPS4-mart just looking around and I saw a magazines with some movie star holding her three kids. The title of the magazine was superstar. It really hurt to see those three kids on the cover becasue one day they @MONTH1 not be like @CAPS3 parents and have all the money in the world. It @MONTH1 seem really stupid these days that some people would care this much, I really think deep down that its life and we all need to get over our selfs becasue we can not all be right and have all the same feelings for life. All my life I have thought about this subject cause it seems like now days its all about the money, what @CAPS3 wear and what type of car or truck they drive. It seems really stupid but when i see someone who drives a new car worth @MONEY1 it really makes me think about how someone as the money for this car and everything else.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21608,8,"One thing that people in the world love to do the most is laugh. Why is it that we like to laugh? Laughter is every important in our lives because it brings us joy, happiness, and most of all it just fills our stomachs with butterflies. One major thing that about laughter is the whole point of view. Of course everyone makes jokes, dorky things, or simply a funny comment. All those things cause laughter, sometimes laughter helps people grow a good relationship and it builds up to be strong. In relationships like boyfriend/girlfriend, parents with their children, family, or even friends have to have some laughter in their relationship because if not then that would be a boring relationship. At times it's hard to bring laughter in the picture but we at least need to try to laugh it is healthy for us to laugh once in a while. In families its important to grow a relationship with the child or parents and they need some funny feelings in their stomachs that make them giggly inside and its all could laughter. Friends always will have funny moments to laugh about, it's sometimes the pranks that they do to each other, the funny comments, the jokes and it's easy as that to start laughing and creating the good relationship with just laughing with each other. Sometimes laughter could cause bad things if we use for bad things and that could cause a bad relationship. We also don't want to hurt someone's feelings by laughing at them because something that happen or if someone made a comment, because that could leave us not laughing to much after we loose a relationship with someone. The smiles that people have on their faces is a wonderful thing to see. In all relationships laughter is a big thing because it can always come in handle. People have bad days sometimes and we always try to make them happy and how do we do that, well it's called laughing. I know if I was having a bad day and I felt all depressed and mushy I would like someone to make me laugh by simply saying a hilarious joke. In my personal opinion I love laughing and especially making people around me laugh. At times I have my bad times and need some laughter in my system to make me feel at least better. I know that sadness can sometimes take over but we all need to think positive and not let the negative things take over. Life is so much better if we all have laughter in them. Imagine the world with just laughter, how life would be. i wish that could happen because that would make everyone full of happiness and smiles on the faces. In my personal life my family and friends are full of laughter. I have to make jokes at times when things are getting diffcult and everyone is freaking out. Laughter is a part of us either we like it or not it's always going to be with us no matter what. Eventually I would say that laughter is a element in my life that I will always carry and I hope that everyone in the world has the element of laughter in them because seriously it's important in this this world.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1401,1,"Dear local newspaper, I'm sure you love kicking back and surfing the web. Afterall, the internet is an amazing invention. However, the truth of the matter is that some people spend way to much time on the computer. We miss out on all the other important things in life, just because of to much time on our laptops. Excessive use of the internet can lead to not enough exercise. It can cause us to be anti-social, And lastly, not allow us to enjoy the beautiful nature that surrounds us. Do you know that a very high cause of obesity is? Electronics, kids sit on the computer all day long, while they should be out exercising and keeping fit. Sure, it is still okay to surf the web. You just have to keep the time minimum we could ensure this rule by having a time limit set at home. I myself love to use the computer, but i make sure to get off after about an hour. The whole idea of the ""internet"" is such a broad topic. That leaves us with so much to explore, we just have to keep on eye on the clock. There are so many forms of chat on the internet; @CAPS1, @ORGANIZATION1, etc. Many people are always on one of those, instead of talking in person. We can eventually become anti-social due to so much time spent on the computer. Although yes, you can be talking over the internet, it is necessary to be talking to people face to face, it is as if we become grued to the computer. Websites such as @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 are also causes of this. People get addicted and are on them constantly, @CAPS4 ""@CAPS5"" websites actually take away time that could be spent with friends. So instead of having a chat over the computer screen, plan a meeting in person. Don't allow the computer to let you loose the social skills that you have built up. I love going outside each season to see the beautiful nature that surrounds us if you spend to much time on the computer, you wont have time to enjoy it. There are so many thing that you would be missing out on. Take time out of you day that you would normally spend on the computer to take a walk outside. Things outher are so much prettier than you computer screen, trust me. once you cut down you computer time littyle-by-little, you will realize all the other things that are more worth you time. So the next time you think about going to surf the web or play that new computer game, i hope you think about my opinions i presented to you. Too much time on the computer causes us to not get enough exercise, and we can become anti-social. we won't be able to enjoy the nature around us. Computer time is fine in moderation, you just have to be aware of how much time you spend on it. Hopefully, my supported reasons have given you another view on surfing the web.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9582,4,The author concludes this story with this paragraph because the flower is told about all through the story and the author puts when the hubiscius is budding then I will take that test again.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15582,6,"The invention of the mass on top of the Empire State Building was an undeveloped idea that created created a new means of transportation but arrive with numerous flaws. One obstacle the engineers faced was resting a one thousand foot dirigible over a twelve hundred fifty foot building because with combined wind pressure this would put stress on the building's structure and allow it to collapse. This transportation was also extremely dangerous to the public because many foreign dirigibles ""used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable (paragraph @NUM1)."" Not only this, if builders ever allowed dirigible's to dock on the building, the back of the airship would spin around the mooring mast due to shifting violent air currents as stated in paragraph @NUM2. In paragraph @NUM3, it says that an existing law would prohibit airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made docking dirigibles atop of the Empire State Building illegal because dirigibles would be above the people which was against the laws. All of these obstacles made the transportations a failure and as a result the use of the mast had disappeared.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12215,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a grateful one. Because it is telling you what his experience in life was, and what his parents were like. It is also my opinion that they liked where they were. One reason is because they liked to cook all the time. Another reason is that they liked to have fun with their son One last reason is because they had a son. Their @CAPS1 name was @PERSON1.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12356,5,The authors @CAPS1 was good because the story is kind of happyness.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 21433,8," A @CAPS1 @CAPS2 The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 was a warm @DATE1 @CAPS1, some of my friends and I had planned to spend a @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the @CAPS3. We had decided on walking around and looking @CAPS2 all the cool stores. Eventually we would all get lunch and go out to the park near the river right next to the @CAPS3. We all agreed that @CAPS4 was a great plan and we would all have a wonderful @CAPS1. To start off, we all met @CAPS2 the bus stop by the movies. @PERSON3, @PERSON4, @PERSON2, @CAPS5 and I were all there. We decided to go look inside @CAPS6 @CAPS7 first because they have all the crazy things we love. Inside the store, I found a dress that was to die for. @CAPS4 was small and grey with skulls all over @CAPS4. Unfortunately, @CAPS4 costed @MONEY1 that i did not have, so we left @CAPS6 @CAPS7. Next, we went to @NUM1 @CAPS10 to see what they had in store for us. @PERSON3 and I created a black teddy @PERSON1 with a studded leather jacket. We gave @CAPS4 an awsome top hat and named @CAPS4 @CAPS11 @PERSON1. We all thought @CAPS4 was pretty funny because teddy bears are supposed to be cute and this one was kind of scary. We paid @MONEY2 for @CAPS4 and continued on our little adventure. We all decided @CAPS4 was about lunch time so we went and got chineese food from @ORGANIZATION1, left the @CAPS3, and headed down to the park next to the river. Before we got to the park, we stopped to go see what @CAPS4 was like under the bridge. There were towers of rocks all over the place, so we decided to build one of our own. We stacked @CAPS4 up almost as tall as me before @CAPS4 toppled over, almost crushing @PERSON4 on the way down. We followed the little path away from the rock towers down to the river. @CAPS4 lead us to a little beach next to the water. There was a huge pillar separating the trees and bushes from the water. We decided to eat lunch here instead of going to the park. After eating lunch, we were all full of energy again. @CAPS5 started a pine cone war by tagging me in the back of the head with one. After a few minutes, all of us were involved. We used the giant pillar from the bridge as a shield but @CAPS4 didn't quite work. @PERSON4, who had a better aim than all of us, was hitting everyone left and right, so the rest of us teamed up on him. We all threw pine cones one after the other untill @PERSON4 had to start backing away. As he reached the edge of the shore, he tripped over a big rock and fell backwards into the shallow water. Instantly, we all busted out in a roar of laughter that continued on for a good couple of minutes before @CAPS5 finally decided on helping @PERSON4 out of the water. He was very unhappy about the situation while we were all quite pleased. Jesica had managed to get a vidio of the whole thing and when we played @CAPS4 back to @PERSON4 he couldn't help but laugh with us. After that, we went to the park. Immediately, we all ran for the slide. ""I wanna go first!"" screamed @PERSON3 as we all made @CAPS4 up the jungle jim to the slide. All of us pushed and shoved to get to the slide before I finally suggested going down the big, swirly slide all together. Everyone els thought @CAPS4 was a great idea so we attempted @CAPS4. @PERSON3 was first, as she wanted, I was second, followed by @PERSON2, @PERSON4, and then @CAPS5. We started off realy slow and progressed in speed as more of us piled onto the slide. We ended in a pile @CAPS2 the bottom, all laughing histarically. When we all came back to reality we realized @CAPS4 was time to head home so we all grabbed our things and headed for the bus stop. In the end, @CAPS4 had turned out to be an even better @CAPS1 than we had expected. The whole @CAPS1 was full of joy and laughter, whitch are a few of the key aspects of life. Without laughter, there would be no way to @ORGANIZATION1 when you are extremely happy or when you think something is funny. Happiness is one thing you need to live a fun, fulfilling life. I feel like the ability to laugh is one thing that makes a person fun to have around. Do you think you laugh often enough?",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4238,2,"I have read a few books that I dont approve of. And I feel that yes i do have a right to remove these books from the shelves. But whose to say what i think should have an affect. Honestly i do not think that books should be taking off the shelves or music should be banned ect... I think that there should be a little more athority on the age limit of books in libraries, and a seperate place for music and other things of that nature. I would not want my kid to walk out of the library with a book about sex, gangs, or stuff that should not be known by a kid. Instead of banning or removing these kinds of books off shelves why not put a strict age limit on books, and actually stand by it. Yes there is an adult section a kids section ect.., but i've seen so many young kids walking out with books magazines and other adult items. I know how it feels to try and concentrate on a book newspaper or magazine you are interested in when people are blareing there head phones. And i still feel the same way about the music as i do with books. Dont bann it from the library just bann it from certain areas of the library. Its all out of respect to people who are wanting to be in a quiet area. Im not the type of person who wants to take things away from people because everyone has there own interests and beliefs in life, but i am one who believes in setting rules that should be followed. I see good comming out of everything a library has to offer if only they could exclude things in certain areas. And also set and stand by the age limits of the books being checked out.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15147,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was getting the mooring mast on top of the building. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building's flat roof. A thousand foot dirigible mounted at the top of the building... would add stress to the building's frame."" The architects solve this problem by modifying the building's framework. Another problem was wind. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" @CAPS1 there was one wire connected to the front, the dirigible would go round and round due to the back being exposed to the winds. This problem was never fixed. The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles and while some were overcome, the rest weren't, resulting in the ultimate failure of the mooring mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16379,6,"The builders of the Empire States Building encoutered many obstacles in the attempt to allow blimps to dock on the building. The engineers realized from the start that even if they could get a blimp docked, it would put additional stress on the buildings structure. to fix this, they had to reinforce the entire building. In addition to this, the docking of a blimp was dangerous in itself. It could easily be destroyed like the Hindenburg",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10204,4,"Authors sometimes conclude a story with a certain paragraph describing an action that will take place in the future. In the story “Winter Hibiscus” the author concludes the paragraph by saying “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” One reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is to help show that things will change come spring. For example in the story the girl saids “I-I failed the test.” By her saying this and talking about how she failed her driving test come spring she can change. She can get better, so that this time she will pass. Also, “The ""winter hibiscus” was in the ground now, and @CAPS1 tamped down the soil around it.” This quote helps show that the hibiscus is being planted now, but come spring it will have changed color and have bloomed. In conclusion authors end stories with a paragraph like this to help show the changes that could happen in the future.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10385,4,The author concude the story with that paragraph because its what she solemely promoted herself.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6688,3,From the setting that affected the cyclist are possible conditions such as the weather and surrounding enviorment like hills and streams or even tyes of animals and if they are poisenous or not. The setting has and can change the desision a cyclist makes.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 4583,2,"Nobody should believe that we have the choice to take books off the shelves of a library. America is a free country and we can write whatever we want. Everyone has freedom of speach, your just taking that admendment and putting it into music, books, or a movie. When you are looking for a book and you find one that seems offensive just put it back on the shelf and move on. Everyone have seen a lot of things that are offensive to races and beliefs. You hear jokes that are offensive but that is all that it is a joke and it is not to be taken seriously. I have read a book recently called '@CAPS1's your @CAPS2' it was not what I thought it would be, so I just put it down and picked up a different book and kept on reading. If everybody were able to take books out of a library just because it was offensive would we have any books at all? Movies have a protection against this called ratings. The ratings are from '@CAPS3 to @CAPS4.' If the movie you watch is more towards the @CAPS4 section then it will have more offensive language and violent scenes. That is why there is always a blocked off section at a dvd rental store. That section is only for mature people of the ages @NUM1 or older. If by any chance your kid strays in there and finds somthing not suited for him and you really get fired up just think @CAPS1 let him wonder into that section. @CAPS1 should be watching him at all times, @CAPS1 is responsible for him? I do not agree that reading material or anything in that matter should be taken off of a shelf. Thats like saying if someone did not like how the @CAPS5 of @CAPS6 was worded they could just take it down and throw it away. We would have nothing to read. So the next time you see something that is offensive just put it back and move on",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 13234,5,"The mood created by Narciso Rodriguez is happines. @CAPS1 shows happiness by showing @CAPS1 wanted nothing more that to be with his family doing the things @CAPS1 loved, which @CAPS1 did. @CAPS1 also shows that @CAPS1 is greatful. ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 feels @CAPS1 could never be as ""courageous"" as his parents and @CAPS1 thanks them for that, ""I've thanked them repeatedly."" I think the overall mood of this memoir is joy and happines.There is a flowchart on the bottom of the page, @NUM1 columns: one is mood, the other support. Under mood is happy and grateful. Under support for happy is ""like @CAPS1 wanted nothing more"". For grateful is written (@NUM2).",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 10439,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph, because he wants the emphasize that the girl is not completly dissatisified with leaving her home. He ended with that because he wanted to she that their is hope for her to learn to love her new home.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 3991,2,"Magazines and Books I am writing an essay on should we take books, magazines, or movies off the shelves if they have bad language or have violant roles in it. First thing we should discover is how many people like books, movies, or music like that. @CAPS3 me personally like books that have violance and graphic language in them @CAPS3 that just makes the book so much more interesting. And when it comes to music their parents need to be very careful what they let their kids listen to. And @CAPS1 boadcasters need to watch what they put on the air @CAPS3 some of it can be pretty bad for a kid to watch. The second thing is, is it ok for kids to be reading these kind of books. I dont think it would be ok for a kid under fourteen to be reading about violance or hearing words that are graphic. But its not up to me they need to take a survey on the moms and dads of these children and see what they think about it. @CAPS3 it is up to them if they want there kid listening to or reading material like that. And its also up to the childrens parents what kind of music they listen to. @CAPS3 there is more cerse words in the @DATE1 than there has ever been in the history of music and the same goes for books and magazies. Magazines sometimes can be pretty graphic when it comes to picures.me myself dont really look at magazines @CAPS3 they dont really intrest me I would rather sit down and watch what ever it is on @CAPS1. Then the third and final argument is how could we make our libraries in american more censored for kids. I think the libraries shoul have different rooms that have different types of book in them. @CAPS3 if you just have a library that anybody can go and pick up any book that they wanted then kids are going to go straight to the funny books or the books that are not suitable for kids to be reading. They should make it so you have to be a certain age to check out a book that has bad language or that has graphis pictures or that just are not suitable for children. That is why I think that books need to get into the right hands and not into kids hands. Kids dont need to know bad language at their age @CAPS3 that is a bad habit for a kid to learn then they will go to school saying them. And reading books that talk about beating somebody up or murder mikght get it in a little kids head that that is ok. And that is not ok with me",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15589,6,"The mooring mast on the Empire State Building was intentionally built for dirigible docking. Although the problem with allowing that to happen was not questioned at the time of the mast's construction, safety issues were a major concern. Most dirigibles from outside the U.S. used hydrogen gas, which is extremely flamable. The news of the German dirigible Hindenburg being destroyed in flames greatly concerned the owners of the Empire State Building. They imagined how much more worse that would be if a dirigible combusted on the building and in a dense population of Downtown New York. This caused the builders of the Empire State Building to reconsider allowing dirigibles dock at it's mooring mast.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18134,7,Patience can mean a lot of things. It can mean to be understanding or it can mean to be tolerant. Being patient can also mean you don’t complain. Like if you ask someone to get you something and they say that they will get it in a certain amount of days. If they don’t get it the day they said they would and you were expecting it then you should’nt get mad. You can also be paitient if you have to wait for something. If you are getting a new pair of shoes but the only way you can get them is they have to be ordered. You should not start to complain if it takes a long time. You should be able to wait without getting angry that you don’t have them yet. Being patient can mean all of these things. If you do these things you can tell that you are patient. That is what being patient means.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 12688,5,"The mood that they author creates is kind of happy for what he has. ""In our neighborhood, despite costums elsewhere, all of their cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" The quote @CAPS1 how the author thinks of the different cultures uniting together.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 17893,7,@NUM1 years ago on my birthday the only thing I wanted was an I-pad touch. Well everybody got to the party we ate cake and ice cream then I opend presants. I got @NUM2 but none was the @CAPS1 toach. I was sad then I opend birthday cards and I got @MONEY1 I told mom since I didn’t get the @CAPS1 I can go buy it. But I had too wait till everybody was gone to go get it. and @NUM3 hours of being patient I finally went and got it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9710,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show that the hibiscus is a symbol for Saeng. In the sping time the hibiscus grows just like Saeng. When Saeng got to the new place she was small and peuney just like the plant. “Its leaves quavering in the wind"" (@NUM1). This quote tells us the the plant was weak a peuney. If the plant was strong it would not be quivering. The fact that Saeng brokedown and bought the plant tells us she was not strong. And at the end the author uses that paragraph to tell the reader that the hibiscus is strong and so is Saeng and the can over come anything.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 15914,6,"When the empire state building was constructed it ran into many problems attempting to dock dirigibles there. One problem they ran into is that most overseas blimps were still filled with hydrogen, which is a very flammable gas. The constructors did not want to re-create the Hindenburg accident over a densely populated area such as New York City. The greatest obstacle to the mooring mast was nature itself. The wind currents atop the building were violent and always shifting. Docking a Dirigible there in those conditions would cause it to swivel around the building and become unsafe for passengers. That is why the mooring mast never fulfilled it's purpose.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 16152,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had a few obstacles to face when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, as written by Marcia Amidon Lüsted in the,The Mooring Mast. Al Smith, the architect of the Empire State Building, didn't want his masterpiece to be only for show, so he gave it purpose; a dock for dirigibles. By adding a comma ""thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether,"" the buildings frame would be under much stress; ultimately making the structure unsafe. To alter the frame and wind pressure, over @MONEY1 would need to be accumulated. If an accident were to take place, like in Lakehurst, New Jersey, the densely populated city would be in grave danger. Although these obstacles can be overcome, the obstacle of mother nature herself, cannot.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 18664,7,"Patient is when you are tolerant and understanding. Many people @CAPS4’t have patience, while others do. I am sort of in the middle, but here’s a time I had to be very patient. It was a bright and sunny @DATE2 @TIME1. The sun was shining like there’s no tomorrow. To bad I couldn’t play outside. I was to busy kicking back, eating popcorn, and watching a big event. It could give me bragging rights I figure I need some hope and patience..” @CAPS1” ,my brother yelled all happy and in my face. “ @CAPS2 @CAPS2 loser , lions are winning and steelers are loosing “he added. “@CAPS4’t get to happy , there’s still plenty of time left.” I replied, with a worried look on my face. I was afraid that I ‘d loose, but taking deep brother in and out, I was very patient. The clock winding down. It was the being of the @DATE1. The score was @NUM1 to @NUM2, lions lead. I was still a bit worried, but I never lost hope. As the game was coming to an end, the @DATE1 back I for the steepless made an awsorde pass and @CAPS1 I screamed dancing and jumping around. I told my brother, “who is the loser now, huh?” wow all it took was patient, and hope” I told myself. Patient can mean a lot. Not only did I learn that me and my brother can get a little competive but if you just wait and tolerate what’s happening around you, you’ll end up getting rewarded!.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6155,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in a lot of ways. in the essay, the author describe how the setting is hot, it is bumpy, it makes him sweat, it makes him tired, he is also, running out of water from his thirst. The road gets, very rocky at one point. The narrator states “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills (Kurmaskie @NUM1). There is also a photograph that shows how rough the terrain is. It is barrain with nothing around it.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 20822,8," Laughing is one of the key components in all my relationships with others. It lightens the mood of any situation and can really lift my sprits when I'm having a bad day. It is often the ice breaker when I meet someone new and can help me get closer to the friends I already have. On the first day of school, freshman year, I met a girl named @LOCATION1. We were in writing class and there was a boy named @CAPS1 sitting between us. @CAPS1 and I were talking about our schedules, and he said something that made our conversation slightly uncomforatable. I looked up and saw that @LOCATION1 had heard what he had said and had a look on her face that was somewhere between being embarrassed for me and close to laughing. I smiled at her and mouthed the word ""awkward"" when @CAPS1 turned away. This was her cue that it was okay to laugh, and she did so subtly. I didn't know that this first laugh would lead to many more in a friendship that would develop almost instantly. After the first week of schedules being changed and students being shuffled around, we found out that we had every single one of our classes together, except @CAPS3. We probably spent more time laughing in those classes than getting work done, and I'm not exactly sure how we managed to pass all our classes. Spending so much time together, it was only a matter of time before we had enough inside jokes to fill up a dictionary. Nearly any word or just the sight of something related to one of our jokes can send us into a fit of laughter. Sometimes, we don't have to say anything at all. I'll just look at her, and we'll burst out laughing. Because of this, our friends often question our sanity. When we start laughing, they'll look at eachother, and then at us for a clue as to why, or ask if we are okay. They don't understand us the way we understand eachother. People always get our names mixed up even though we look nothing alike. Our names dont even rhyme, or start with the same letter. But I can't really blame them. We're so much alike! From the activities we participate in to the way we think, we could almost be the same person. She makes me laugh every single day, and she's one of my best friends. @CAPS4 is another one of my friends who is constantly making me crack up. Whenever I'm with her, I'm always terrified of peeing in my pants. She's not as close to me as @LOCATION1 is, but we've gotten to be such better friends this year. We have a lot of classes together this year, and that's probably why we've gotten closer. We're always doing stupid stuff together, and laughing about it the whole time. For example, she and I like to laugh obnoxiously loud and exaggerate our ""ha's"" when someone tells a really lame or cheesy joke. Our biotech teacher loves to tell cheesy jokes, so when we're in his class, we sit together anticipating one of his jokes so that we can laugh. We also like to chew our gum with our mouths open, in order to make the chewing noise louder. I often laugh so hard that I can't even chew. I know I'll have a good day if I'm with @CAPS4. She can make me laugh in a way a lot of my other friends can't. It comes deep from within, to the point where you can't even breathe, and tears and running down your face. It makes your entire face is sore, even your eyes, from being scrunched up for so long. She's such a fun person to be around, and I'm glad to have her as one of my friends. Laughing is a very important part in the relationships I have with other people. If my friends couldn't make me laugh, our friendship would be so much more boring. Nothing would be fun. If I never laughed, I'd never be happy, and that's not a life I'm willing to try. Life is hard. It's not easy, and it's not always going to be smiles and smooth sailing. There's going to be sadness and rough waters. But no matter how tough this life @MONTH1 get, I know I'll have friends like @LOCATION1 and @CAPS4 there to share a laugh.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 6598,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclist because they made the simplist challenges for him. The back of water and the snake in his path are examples.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 1147,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 staff, Are computers helpful to us regularly? Computers are very helpful machines that increase productivity daily. Computers not only help people discover @ORGANIZATION1 places and learn more about other parts of the world, but also computer allow people to communicate with others around the world. In addition, computers have word processor and other applications that help workers do their jobs daily. So, now do computers help people learn more about our earth? Many teachers and students use computers daily to help them teach. There are many online websites that help students discover and process different areas around the world. For example, there is a @LOCATION1 website (www.canadamaps.org) and this website has a map and students have to match the place/area onto the map. There are also website such as mapquest & yellowpages to help people navigate cross country and around town. As you can see, computers also help students education and just our everyday life. A large amount of teenagers of all ages like to use a programs on computers called @CAPS1. @CAPS1 stands for @ORGANIZATION2 @CAPS2 @CAPS3. This program allows people of all ages to talk with their friends or colleages instantly. What one does, is type in a chat box to someone and the message is instantly sent to the person. Emailing is used for many things. To catch up with friends, or to talk something with another. One can also attach documents that @MONTH1 consist. Emailing helps things go faster as well as your computers. But, if your newspaper were written out by hand, then that would take a lot of time, people, paper, & money. As you can even see, @ORGANIZATION1, computers are a necessity! So, as you can see computers really are needed. Computers affect us in many ways that aren't noticed clearly or easily. Like I said, computers teach and help people learn about different places among the world today, helps us communicate with others around us or in @LOCATION2! And as well, allow us to bring our work, family, friends, and cases everywhere we, in addition to computers allowing us to word process papers so our lives are ease for our everyday life. So, don't spent your life on the computer but use it for our needs. Please use computers to help our everyday routine. Stop writing on that pad, get up and type it on your computer!",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 9898,4,"I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because new beginnings.What I mean by this is,the hibiscus represents new beginnings.She says “When the hibiscus is budding ,then I will take the test again “.This will be a new start for her .The plant blooming makes her happy and reminds her of her grandmother.She’s saying by the time the spring comes around she would be ready for a new obstacle as so for the hibiscus plant.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 7573,3,"The feature of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. It it was a straight road, it would be smooth sailing. If the road was bumpy, he’d jump up and down a little. If he was riding in the woods, it would be cool and a little dark. If he was riding in the desert, it would be very hot and bright.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 421,1,"More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. I, for one do not. I think a decent amount of time on the computer, you can benefit from. But I do belive that computers are a huge part of peoples lives now. I think that people should get off the computer, and get some exercise more and more people would be so much healthier, if they took the time they were on the computer and exercised instead. On the computer you can look up places and see beautiful pictures of places, nature, and even people. But if people got off the computers and traveled and enjoyed nature, they would be able to live it, not just see a picture. Everything would be so much more fun if you were there and got to experience it, not just read about it. Another reason why I feel so strongly about people spending less time on computers is because they don't spent much time interacting with family and friends when you are the computer to much it seems like you drift away from you friends and family. Almost as if you are to ""busy"" to see them. So as you can see I highly disagree with the overuse of computers.",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html 2987,2,"All authors write for a purpose, whether it be to teach, entertain, or persuade an audience. No author writes something and says, 'I hope no one picks this off of the shelf!' So, if every author wants to express something through their writing, then why should we not let them be heard. We all have the freedom of speech, right? So, why not the freedom of writing? Libraries should not remove a book, music, movie, or magazine from the shelf just because they found it offensive. Everyone will read a book that they don't like, its natural, but that doesn't mean that no one will like it. Authors write for an audience, but maybe you are not in that audience; so, it doesn't appeal to you and might even seem offensive. Not everyone believes in the same ideas. You could think about an issue one way and your neighbor think about it a totally different way. Like for instance, you're reading a book about a young girl that is going through many problems in her life. She has gotten into some really horrible situations. Some of these situations you read about are so awful that you wouldn't want anyone else to read it. But, did you ever think that maybe there's another girl that is or has gone through some of these same situations. Maybe this girl comes to a library and finds this book; suddenly she finds guidence in it. She finds something she can depend on in her life that she's never had before. She feels like she has a friend in this book that can handle the situations with her. So, would you really want to take that book off of the shelf and not let that girl ever find her guidence? Situations happen like this all of the time. People find something special in what they read that other people might not find. When a librarian takes a book off of that shelf, an opportunity is forever gone. No one will ever be able to learn of what was to become of that writing and of those ideas. We all have a right to learn, to explore new ideas, and to expand our minds. No one should have the right to take that away",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html