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772,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 computers hold exclusive inofrmation, I do not believe the have a good effect on people. The majority of students today crowd around a computer while they can be taking care of their body. Such as excersising or just going outside. People need to enjoy the wonders of nature instead of sitting on a computer. Not only will computers impact people, but it @MONTH1 also impact family in friends. There will be less interacting time a risk by going on a computer. Different websites can expose the wrong thing and get you into trouble. I firmly believe that computers have hamble affects on people. In @LOCATION1 today, we are already loaded with obese poeple. @NUM1 outof @NUM2 people are not physically healthy and a majority of obese people today state that they do own a computer. Computers attract people and same @MONTH1 sit at the computer for hours at a time what about excersising or enjoying the outdoors? Computers damage our bodies in a way by luering ourselves in while we can go out and enjoy nature. I definatly will argue this fact that computers have a bad effect on humans. Computer change not only the body, but mind. My sister has a computer in her bedroom and I barely see her at all. She stays up there all the time, and when my mom calls for dinner, it takes more than five @CAPS2 to get her away from her computer. Computers affect people because they keep humans away from civilization. Friends and family are impacted by the lack of interaction from one person. It's disrespectful to take time away from your friends to play on computers. This ruins many peoples social health, because the more they ignore their family or friends, these people will stop trying to interact with them. When these computer finatics came around, there want be anyone there for them. Computers definatly have an unhealthy affect on people who use them. How would you feel if tons of your personal info got out into the public. Nowadays, computers have a major chance to do that to you. Websites like @CAPS4, mysapce, or twitter have your information, and with a click of a button, it can be exposed to the world. Computers have a background of doing this kind of effect on people. Some dont understand what they are doing and if bad info or a picture sends out, it can fully negatively impact your career or edecation. Computers help people to make wrong choices and there is no doubt people should let up on the time they spend on the internet. Many agree, computers disadvantage many people in their own way. Whether it is by taking their health away because it keeps many indoors, or if it costs you your friends and family, computers are not good for your physical and social health. Computers can send out information and they are risky. They will majority impact your future and impact all people in a bad way.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
932,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 and kids of any age at this society, are way to focused on the latest technology. One piece of equptment that is affecting peoples lives, is the computer. We need to get rid of this habbit and learn to do different activites! People are spending way to much time on computers and less time enjoying nature excersing, and need to interact with friends and family more take the time to agree with me as I confront you on how the computer is taking over our lives! Is time flying you by? Are you overwhelmed, at how life passes you so quickley? Well, if you answered yes, stop the computer madness and head on outside! Your no enjoying nature! Nature is as beautiful as a gorgeous scene of @CAPS3 @CAPS4 love oceans with pink sand. Who would want to miss this? @PERCENT1 of @CAPS2 complain that they rarely enjoy what life has to take on the outside of your house. Just think you won't be able to see the stupendous, the seasons changing, withought going outdoors. ""I want my @CAPS6, to experience the wide variety of nature as she grows old."" @CAPS5 of her daughter. Well, @MONTH1 I add, little @CAPS6 is not going to get much nature out of her, if she does not get her eyes unglued to the comuter screen! Yes, comuters, are very brilliant, and have lots to do, but if you want to be missing out on the new trees being discovered every day, be my guest! @PERCENT2 of all the population in the @LOCATION2 is overweight due to technology brought into our world. The greatest impart is the computer! high-paid physicians try and teach their parents at a young age, to go out and play sports - while excersing at the same time and nor to stay home and play videogames. Now you tell me, would you rather get a good healthy excersise, and have all the energy you need or would you like to slowy add on to your and gain issues as you the internet? I remember @DATE1, I grabred my nike hightops, and my pink ipod I started jogging at a slow while listening to my favorite song. Naturally by I felt amazing when my was complete going each day is as healthy as eating a bannana, @NUM1 apples, and cheese eery morning their healthy! ""@CAPS7 since technology has been a part of my life, my two daughters have not visited their grand parents in over @NUM1 years! This needs to step!"" @CAPS8 @PERSON1 to the press. Yes, comuters have ""online-talking"" devices such as @CAPS9, but if you are never going to spend quality time with family, this is a bad habbit. On @DATE3, @DATE2, my brother and I, were too busy on the computer, we missed a birthday party the family we are addicted to this device, and need to spend time with our loved ones. @PERCENT3 of all therapy computers have @CAPS2 into depresion and have been with their plains, due to the high amount of to do on this device and less time bonding with members of your Who would rather play on a old, gray, computer when you can have fun talking about you day and the game life with your family? @CAPS10's now a never! What will you choose? Do you agree that computers take over lives? If you try and prove me wrong just remember, nature is a big and many people are missing out on the advantage technology is taking over peoples excersing habbits, and many families are less bonding @CAPS10's up to you keep the population of @LOCATION1 in good hands!",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12695,5,"This memoir gives me a sort of cozy and comfortable feeling. When it talks about a family being not only people that are blood-related to you I think of my friends and the people I can count on. They are my family too. He also talks about how a house is not necessarily a home, not without memories, your family, and something or someone that you trust. Lastly, he tells us about how greatful he is that his parents brought him to a neighborhood that he would soon learn to love. This piece makes me think about and appreciate my family, and my home.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4103,2,"Libraries contain many helpful and entertaining materials for people of all ages. Some @MONTH1 argue that a library holds documents that are offensive and should not be put on the shelf, but I beg to differ. A library holds many books, magazines, movies, etc. that can advance the knowledge of citizens.      Libraries can, and probably do, contain materials that are guilty of being offensive, but they shouldn't be taken off the shelf because of this. Instead, libraries should be divided into sections based on topics. If a parent doesn't want their child to read a book based on racism, then the parent simply keeps the child out of that section.     How will children learn about what goes on in @LOCATION1 if they are not shown? Children won't know how to cope with the harsh realities of the world unless they are exposed to them early. This doesn't mean that a child should be shown a magazine highlighting @PERSON2's next drug scandal, but showing them that stuff like this does go on and you should not live that way.      Libraries don't contain material that is offensive without a reason. What if a high school student is doing a report on the rise of teen-pregnancy? This student should have no better source for information than a library. The library would be the most trustworthy documentation of facts about this topic.      These books that a library holds are not only there to educate us, but to entertain us as well. If a library removes a biography on the rapper, @ORGANIZATION1, because he has a 'rocky past', they @MONTH1 lose one client who came to the library to be amazed by the struggles that many successful people have overcome to get where they are today.      As Katherine Paterson said, 'And then we have no books on the shelf for any of us.' If a library censors all of the material that goes throught the system, there @MONTH1 not be any books left to entertain ourselves. Therefore, libraries should not monitor what material is put on the shelf.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15192,6,"The dirigibles were not able to dock on the mast of the Empire State Building for obvious reasons. When the construction workers were building the mast, they didn't realize how dangerous it was having a dirigible landing on the top of the building. There were a few cautions that the workers realized. First off, if the dirigible catches on fire like the one in Lakehurst, New Jersey, then a lot of people would be at risk because it is such a big city with massive amounts of people. Another reason they realized after was that it was too dangerous for the dirigible to land there due to the high swirling winds. If they tried landing there, but the violent winds wouldn't let them, then it would not be the least bit safe. This is how the workers of the Empire State building faced obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6153,3,The affect of the setting are two old timers sitting on their front porch out in the desert since carter was in office. It was starting to become daylight and he  had to walk @NUM1 miles to get to the next town. So he gets on a bike and rides to the next town. The speed limit is 55 miles per hour and he  was going 12 miles per hour just like the waterflow. He was riding up and down rolling hills. He finally got to the next town to live.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
2989,2,"Personally I don't think libraries, movie stores, etc., should be selling any of the items just mentioned. If they are found offensive to the public. I think it offends lots of people. Citizens such as senior citizens and children shouldn't have to be exposed to inaproppriate material. I think in order to buy or rent certain books, music, movies, or magazines you should have to be at least eight-teen years of age. The economy is bad enough the way it is. There is a new generation of people who are being raised at the moment, and they should't have to look back at their childhood and have memories of seeing offensive movies, or reading offensive books and magazines.      I think music is what influences a person the most. If they are constantly listening to foul language and what not, that is going to just stay into a persons mind. I know this from experience. I also believe that movies influence a peron lot too. For example, a kid goes to see a movie that has a lot of violence in it. Well after he is done watching the movie he thinks to himself, 'well it must be okay to kill someone because i saw someone kill another person because they got away with it and never got into trouble.' That is just one example of how the humans mind can change.     In conclusion I do believe that humans have the right to read, watch, or listen to what they want. I just think that people should have to be a certain age for some of the things though. Also, I think that anything citizens find offending should be hidden in some sort of area in a store or library. So that  just people who want a certain item or whatever can get it with out other people having to see or listen to anything offending",3,4,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7583,3,"As the setting changes in the story, so does the cyclist’s narrator’s mood. His mood changes from happy and confident to indifferent and scared. At first the cyclist is so happy about Yosemite that he is just care free and no worries at all. He says that, “I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face.” Even at his first “ghost town” he just “chuckled, checked my water supply, and moved on”. After this point he could not be so care free. After this town he came to, “One ramshackle shed, several thirsty pumps, and men”. He said, “this was troubling”, it was very hot and he had been drinking his water pretty often. He said that, “He failed on."" He started to get sort of scared he realized that he could, ""drop from a heatstroke."" He was scared that because of his idea to believe the old men he might possibly die. He finally get happy when he reaches the bait shop and he got his drink. From then on the stock to his map. His attitude changed greatly throughout the story.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17862,7,Patients is verey important. But I m not verey good with my patients. And when I am and I wait my turn I end up forgetting what I going to say. I guess I m not verey patient because my family is not verey patient. My family is not verey patient because we just want to say what were gona say before we forget it. Are family it also verey forgetful. That is probably another reason why we arnt patient. Patients is im portant because it helps you be more calm and it helps you wait turn. Thats all I know about patients.,5,4,,9,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1768,1,"I think the effects of the computer are bad, these are my three reasons why I think its bad; @CAPS1, the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time or hours on their computers, @CAPS2, people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computers, @CAPS3, people need to use computers out a less time. These are the three reasons why I think the effects of the computer are bad. The @CAPS1 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that computer could cause couse blindness to people when they spend too much time on their computers because the screen of the computer has too much light, people can't just stop staring at the monitor and even worse they could probably lost their sight and they will end up with blindness. That's why you have to be away from the screen but, being too long on your computer is bad. This is my @CAPS1 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad because the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time on their computers. The @CAPS2 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computers because when people are on their computers too much time they just couldn't come down stairs talk with their family of friends, they could'nt go outside and enjoy the glory of nature and the enjoyment at the outside world, and also if they had nothing they can just read a book, draw, watch the @CAPS4, etc. They could do those things rather than wasting their time on their computers. This is my @CAPS2 reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computers. The last reason why I think the effects of the computer is bad is that people need to use their computer for a less time because when people use their computer for a less time it is good because now they finally could be with their family and friends and spend so much time with them. It also good to saving energy, and prevent you from paying alot of electrical bill, and also it is good to finally let your vision of the eyes to relax. In conclusion, the three reasons; @CAPS1, the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time on their computer. @CAPS2, people need to relax their vision and do something rather than on their computer, and @CAPS3, people need to use their computers for a less time will prove that the effects of the computer I think its very bad.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14938,6,"In the piece ""The Mooring MAst,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, it describes what the mast on the Empire State Building was really for. There were many obstacles that the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to @CAPS1 on the mast. One problem they faced was that the dirigible landed on the roof would add stress to the building's frame. The stress and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the foundation of the building. This means the building would have to be modified and strengthened. Safety was also a big issue for the mast. Because the dirigibles used hydrogen, it could catch on fire and be destroyed over a densely populated area. Another obstacle was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting. This made the back of the ship swivel around. Lastley, it was not successful is because of the law against airships flying too low. Before the constructors built all this extra to the building they should have thought of all the defects it could have.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18930,7,One day I went to the store with my mother and there was @CAPS1 old lady in front of us she couldn’t do anything she was moving very slow And  I know she’s @CAPS1  old lady. But she was moving really slow And I reAlly don’t hAve pAtient’s  @CAPS2 some people do.,6,5,,11,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8985,4,"The auther concludes the story with, “when they cam back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and tis hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. I think the auther used that conclusion to make the reader want to finish the story on their own. Or he could write another story to finish it. Most authors conclude their storys like this so the reader is in control about the ending.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
994,1,"Dear local newspaper, Have you even been on a computer too long & haven't spent time excersising, or haven't spent any time with your family? Well, that's a big problem here in the @LOCATION1. In my opinion, to make this problem better, people should only be allowed on the computer for a certain amount @ORGANIZATION1 time & after they enjoy themselves with a nice workout, time outside & most importantly with their families. I think this will make the problem better, because you can enjoy yourself a little bit more rather than getting home from school & shooting right to wherever your computer is & being on it for the rest @ORGANIZATION1 the night. I also think this will help the problem because it will also allow you to get better grades. If your on computer all the time & don't have any time to excersise, go outside, and bond with your family then that most likely means you have no time to do homework. By not doing homework, your grades could go lower & you most likely won't understand what you are learning in that class. This one problem ran also affect you so many other ways. The problem with computers & why people, mostly kids are so attached with them is because @ORGANIZATION1 websites such as twitter, facebook, youtube, etc. & kids are @CAPS1 to them. This is part @ORGANIZATION1 the problem because kids can't get off @ORGANIZATION1 them, they like it so much. This problem leads to the main problem because if parents say ""Time to get off... go get some fresh air."" the kid always goes ""one minute"" & the parents let them get away with that, but then that ""one minute"" turns into an hour at most. This is bad because by the time the kid gets off the computer, its dark out and they can't go run around outside. I think this is important because think that facebook & twitter should be limited amount @ORGANIZATION1 time and should log you off after @NUM1 minutes. In conclusion, this problem is a national issue & in my opinion should be a new law, that kids have to play outside, and spend time with their families before going onto any computer. As you can see having all these great websites leads into a problem with kids. Thanks for your time on reading why I think computers are a big problem here in the @ORGANIZATION1.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10274,4,"I @CAPS1 I @CAPS1 the author concludes the story with the paragraph saying that she’s going to take the test again, to show us that this time she’s goin to pass the test and she’s not going to feel the same way she felt when she didn’t pass. it tell us in “spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding"" because thats when she is going to take the test. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16357,6,"The dream of the aviation pioneers of docking their dirigibles on the Empire State Building, created obstacles for the builders to face. The mooring mast of the building ""was destined to never fulfill its purpose,"" the author implying that the building should not have been built, because of all these obscured obstacles. One obstacle they faced was the violent winds on top of the building, due to air currents. It was difficult for the dirigibles to dock. The ""four-blocks"" length blimp, filled with helium and hydrogen, would be dangling high above, which was not safe for the millions of people on the streets. In December 1930, the dirigible Los Angeles could not get close enough to the mooring mast because of forceful winds. Another obstacle the builders faced was the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The Columbia blimp tried to deliver bundles of newspapers to the building, ending up with papers dangling on the rope from the blimp, because the dirigible mooring equipment was never installed. Therefore it was ""desirable to postpone to a later date that the final installation of the landing gear"" that gave airplanes the title of ""transportation of the future.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4071,2,"Censorship in libraries? In my opinion I don't really care if books, movies, or magazines are censored. I'm not a person that does much reading but I do know of some books, magazines, and movies that are filled with perfanity. In my opinion that is just the authors way of how he or she wanted to do it.      I believe that libraries should keep these type of materials on the shelves but have them in sections maybe. Taking them off the shelves would be disrespectful to the authors/producers. That is their work and they took the time to do it for our entertainment! Maybe you really dislike all the cursing in books and magazines and want them gone...Well listen, there are heeps and heeps of books out there you can find that are not bad!      If you are more of the movie type of person but also do not like the cursing or nudity, there are plenty of movies out there that are very innocent! I hate when I sit down to watch a movie with the family and then all of sudden the actors start throwing around the @CAPS1 word and half naked women appear. But if we would simply read about the movie on the back of the case or ask about it then we would know to choose a different movie. One that is more family oriented and safe for children eyes.     So just because there are some materials that are out there with all sorts of fowl language and indecent human behaviors doesn't mean you should ban them from the libraries. If some people want to fill their mind with filth, let them. But for you who do not, get other stuff. Simply try telling other people about better books they can read and nicer movies to watch. Be a role modle and teach them about healthier viewings",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21038,8," A long time ago, my family @CAPS6 I went to @LOCATION1 to see my great aunt @CAPS6 uncle. They had a log cabin right on the lake, with an @CAPS1 tepee in the back yard. They had a dock with a very big @CAPS6 nice boat. I had went with my @CAPS2, my other aunt @CAPS6 my two half sisters. I forgot why we went, but I think it was just because it was the @DATE2 @CAPS6 my great aunt @CAPS6 uncle were getting older. I was very young, @CAPS7 I only remember bits @CAPS6 pieces of the trip. I remember watching cartoons with my sister on the couch, watching ""@CAPS3 @CAPS4"" in our bedroom, having my sisters make me watch my first scary movie(I hate scary movies), going to a go cart track @CAPS6 driving for the first time, taking one of the extra little boats @CAPS6 going on the lake with one of my older half sisters, also taking the big boat @CAPS6 riding around the lake with my great uncle, he would turn in circles @CAPS7 that we would jump on the wave to make the ride more fun!  We get around to the @DATE1, @CAPS6 they where selling illegal fireworks all around the state for the event of course, but I remember sitting in the car with my two half sisters,@CAPS6 my @CAPS2 had gotten out of the car to go @CAPS6 get fireworks from a stand on the side of the road. We were all @CAPS7 tired from something, @CAPS7 we all stayed in the car. Outside the little stand where they sold the fireworks was this blow up balloon guy; you know one of those blow up looking things where it has a face on it @CAPS6 it doesn't stop moving @CAPS6 dancing? Anyways my oldest half sister starts saying ""@CAPS5 look there he goes doing the macarana!' I had no idea @CAPS13 she was talking about until she pointed to the blow up guy who was just wiggling @CAPS6 springing to life every second.Then my other half sister joins in @CAPS6 starts saying ""@CAPS6 now he's doing the mash potato!"" @CAPS7 now I'm laughing because it's just @CAPS7 silly @CAPS6 funny, I actually thought he was dancing @CAPS6 doing all these dance moves! Now everyone in the car is laughing @CAPS6 giggling about something @CAPS7 silly @CAPS6 funny, I mean we were throwing out silly dance moves, some not even dances moves, just random objects! ""THE @CAPS8!"" ""THE @CAPS9 @CAPS10!"" ""THE @CAPS11!"" ""THE @CAPS12!"" we could not stop laughing! when my @CAPS2 got in the car she was like ""@CAPS13!? @CAPS13 happened?!"". I tried to explain to her @CAPS13 was @CAPS7 funny but she didn't get it. I guess you just had to be there to be a part of the ridiculous car stop at the side of the road where they sold fireworks to see why it was @CAPS7 funny!",20,22,,42,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21185,8,"It's true @CAPS8 they say, time flies when you're having fun. On a particularly warm @DATE1 @TIME1, a rehearsal was in session for the wonderful production of ""The @CAPS1 @CAPS2"" and I was bringing my best friend, @PERSON2 some cheap but delicious food. We talked and ate for a while but eventually it was time for me to go. @CAPS3 we were walking down the stairs to get to the back doors of the building I asked if they needed any help with the play. ""@CAPS3 a matter of fact we do!"" @CAPS7 said enthusiastically. ""We need a ladies costume @CAPS4.""I had absolutely no idea @CAPS8 that meant, but I felt that the position had potential. ""@CAPS5, I can do that. Just one question..."" I said a little confused.""@CAPS6?"" @CAPS7 replied, slightly amused.""@CAPS8 exactly am I going to @CAPS12 doing?"" I asked her.We changed course and headed for the costume room so that @CAPS7 could introduce me to, @PERSON1 who would @CAPS12 my boss for the next two weeks. We arrived to find that @CAPS7 had already gone home for the night. A little exasperated, @PERSON2 told me the basic idea of the job.""@CAPS9 basically @CAPS8's going to happen is that you are going to @CAPS12 in charge of the changing rooms and the costume changes on stage."" @CAPS7 said quickly.""@CAPS11 okay, I can do that."" I replied with confidence.@CAPS3 I began to talk to her more about @CAPS8 I would @CAPS12 doing @CAPS7 said that @CAPS7 had to go because break was over. ""@CAPS12 here at @NUM1 tomorrow morning and you'll learn everything you need!"" @CAPS7 said hurriedly.@CAPS3 @CAPS7 ran off into the theatre I could hear the lead of the play beginning his lines. ""In my younger and more vulnerable years, my father gave me some advice....""I left feeling more happy and excited than I have felt in months.  The next morning I made my way to the theatre which is located at the school which I previously attended. It felt odd going back there but at the same time so completely normal. I was even more comforted by knowing that I could see my friends everyday. I could hug them and laugh with them, I could have social interaction! Something that because of online school I have been lacking. I walked into the theatre and @CAPS3 soon @CAPS3 I did I was bombarded with excited people asking why I was there while hugging me tight. ""I'm helping out with the costuming!"" I said just @CAPS3 excited @CAPS3 they were. I broke away from the group of people and found, @PERSON2 who was on stage directing the lighting people. We talked for a while and then @CAPS7 took me to the costume room where, @PERSON1 was waiting for me. @PERSON1, was a classy looking lady. @CAPS7 wore a light grey cardigan and a colored top with some corduroy pants and sensible shoes. Immediately @CAPS7 started to tell me @CAPS8 my duties were and @CAPS8 I was going to @CAPS12 doing that day.""I'm just going to have you watch the rehearsal today, just to get a feel of @CAPS8's going on."" @CAPS7 handed me a pen and a pad of paper""@CAPS15 notes about where the lighting ques are and that kind of thing."" @CAPS7 said.I walked out and wondered to the auditorium and took my seat in the second row of seats. The lights were lowered and rehearsal began. ""In my younger and more vulnerable years, my father gave me some advice...""@CAPS16 I knew it, the end of the day had come and I wasn't in any hurry to leave. The actors and crew were doing such an amazing job with the play but I knew I had my work cut out for me. In the end it all worked out beautifully, we had some good shows and some @CAPS1 shows but the most important part of this experience was the time I got to spend with the people I love. I am going to miss them so much when I'm sitting in my room all alone doing the school work that consumes my happiness and laughter into the internet. on the other hand, I am all lined up to help with the next two productions going on at that old school of mine.",20,22,,42,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11843,5,"In this memoir, the author creates a mood. The mood is love. The author loves his parents for all the things they sacraficed to come to @LOCATION1. He really appreciates everything they've done for him and he is really grateful.The author describes the ""warmth"" of his kitchen. How it's filled with love and culture. The great aroma of their parents cooking and the music from his culture, he loves it.The author also describes how his family is @CAPS1 close, and their friends to. The love that they got for each other. The memoir says ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" @CAPS1 they considered people who weren't really family... Family. They helped each other out, family and friends, that's what creates the mood to be love.@CAPS1, in this memoir, the author creates a mood and its LOVE.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19261,7,"The one time when I was paitent was on the @CAPS1 of last year. Some of the reasons how I was paicent was by keeping to myself or as you know it being quiet. The @CAPS1 is not that hard but when you have to have paitence thats when it gets hard to you, and me. Pacents is key because you will have to use it for a long time! But lets get back on track shall we. On the @CAPS1 when you are done you have to wait for your class mates to be done. So in that spare time you can read a book or check over your work. Pacents is also important because when you taking the @CAPS1 you cant rush on it. You have to take your time and know that you are timed. Thats where pacents comes in! Sometimes when you are done with the @CAPS1 you can just sit there and think about what you did today the reason I say this is because of other people! If everyone in the classroom don’t have pacents you are most likly to fail the @CAPS1. You have to have a silent and quiet room! Now if every body in the room and is being silent than you can and will do good. When I have the @CAPS1 @CAPS8 pacent when I am done because I care about other peoples work habbits with the @CAPS1. I understand that you don’t have the @CAPS1 no more but it is being pacient! When I get my test results back this year in seventh grade I hope I did good because my classmates and I all had pacients! And rember pacents is the key thing to sucsses!",10,7,,17,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19557,7,"Awhile back my friends and I made a @CAPS2 game called ""@CAPS1 n go @CAPS2"". I had just taken a great sniping position. I had a great angle in all but one direction. The great thing about this spot was that everyone walked past it to get around in the woods, @CAPS3 usually it didn't require any patience. That's the part I was wrong about. I ended up waiting over twenty minutes until I saw one of the people that were playing. I aim my weapon and fired, @CAPS4 to the rules he was now on my team and under my command. We waited for a while before another player was seen walking close to us. Then my partner got up to fire his weapon at the other player and got shot. He didn't notice me when I crawled away from him, @CAPS3 I was safe. The only problem now was that I needed a new place to @CAPS1 @CAPS6 I found one quick. Again I was waiting for over twenty minutes. Finally I saw another player and got ready to shoot. When I finally got my weapon from the ground the person was gone. This made me pretty made seens how I waited @CAPS3 long and didn't have a single person on my team. I got up and went looking for someone for my team. I was looking my patience and getting frustrated. ""@CAPS7 anyone even out here?"" I whispered ""@CAPS8! I got you @CAPS9!"" someone shouted from above. Then @PERSON1 jumped down from a tree. He told me that the whole time he was watching me. He   was waiting for me to get close enough to shoot. This whole time he was waiting with just enough patience to shoot every single person one by one.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6238,3,"The features can affect the cyclist very well or not. I depends on what condition happening. For example, he could fall. Does he have a traveling first aid kit.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6853,3,"When the man began cycling he thought that this was going to be an easy for ride. For example in paragraph @NUM1 he says “Things began well enough. I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face.” As he got further he realized that he was in the middle of nowhere. The scenery was getting more and more empty. There was eventually nothing. The scenery was putting down his hope of ever getting out of the desert. For example: In paragraph @NUM2 it states, “a large highway sign jumped out of me. It read: Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” He realized this was going to be hard. He had to travel in bumpy roads and pass snakes without getting bit. The scenery created a sense of hopeless because it was abandoned. When he saw the bait shop, his spirits lifted and he was now hopeful and relieved.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10510,4,"The author concludes the story with this @CAPS1 because she really cared the hibiscus. She said this because she was comparing her test to the hibiscus. When the hibiscus will budding she will take the test again. Hibiscus is everything far her. it is her good luck. And with hibiscus budding she can make her new life. withaut the hibiscus plant she was laser “I-I failed the test” and “I baught it,” saeng answered reading her mother’s next questian.” She was so depressed with her test failing that why she baught hibiscus to influence her life. she decided when it will spring with hibiscus budding she will start her new life by giving the test again and providing her self how important hibiscus",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12700,5,"The author created a tone in the memoir that was truthful and grateful and pride inducing.  ""pasionate Cuban music... Filled the air mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations... that formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"" (@NUM1). The former quote was found in paragraph @NUM1 described the pride and gratefulness of the home in which the author lived. The memoir created a Family love which every person longs for in life. "" They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life"" (@NUM3). Anyone who can sacrifice like that for the better life of their family is a good person. That is the family love I am describing being selfless and loving to other members of your family. Another mood created in the memoir was pride in the family's sacrifice. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice I've often told them that what they did was a more courageous thing than I could have ever done"" (@NUM4). That was a quote from paragraph @NUM4. It shows that you have to be thankful for the sacrifices people make for you. All of which make the qualities of a good family life.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6383,3,"There are features such as blazing heat coming off the sun, “short, rolling hills”, and no water. There was also the fact that the rider thought he was in the middle of nowhere. This has a great effect on the cyclist, both physical and emotional. The heat, lack of water and constant up hill riding can take a lot of energy out of someone and make it extremely hard to ride. Not to mention there isn’t much hope left so that eliminates the whole mind over matter thing. All the features of the setting put together can lead to major trouble.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16198,6,"The competitive spirit of Al Smith, governor of New York, drove him and his architects to build a docking site for dirigibles atop the Empire State Building. Instead of seeing the daunting task which lay ahead, they saw the opportunity to become the epitome of modern travel. When deciding to build a mooring on top of the Empire State Building, the architects knew they'd face multiple obstacles. The first obstacle they faced with how to adjust the frame of the building to support the docking site. The architects knew that the building ""would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation"" (par. @NUM1). They were able to overcome this obstacle but many more loomed up ahead. The wind and weather needed to be taken into consideration as well. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting"" (par. @NUM2). Reluctantly the builders admitted to the inevitable obstacle posed by nature. The builders seems to realize how unrealistic this dream was. Two more obstacles lay ahead, and these would lay the mooring dock to rest forever. A floating dirigible above a densley populated city was an all around dangerous idea. It was noticed that hydrogen was highly flammable (par. @NUM3) and a fire would be detrimental to both the building and the city. The last obstacle they faced was the law, and they were unable to conquer this. They realized that there ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (par @NUM4). The impossibility of the plan was realized for there were too many obstacles to face. The builders gave up hope but the moorings still looms atop the Empire State Building as a reminder of what could have been.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
289,1,"Dear @CAPS1, The effect that computers have on people is not a positive one. I think people spend way too much time on computers, some information on computers is inaccurate, there are still telephones and cellphones that people can use fir communication. A majority of peoples' time is spent on the computer. Whether its playing games, checking @CAPS2-mail, or even working, peoples' valuable time is getting used up. This time could be used by doing more important things such as being with friends and family, being outside with nature or exercising. Being on the computer insteads of exercising has had a huge effect on people. Some people are overweight because they eat and then do not exercise after. My sister works on the all day and she says @NUM1 or @NUM2 ladies at her work are un healthy because all they do is go on the the computer and eat granola bars, wich are usually healthy. If others spent at least a half an hour being outside to @CAPS3 some fresh air instead of using a computer most of them would feel a lot better. My doctor always used to tell me and my brother, ""@CAPS3 out and play an hour a day!"" This is true, and I strongly encourage people to go outside and do an activity as opposed to playing on the computer. The computer is used a lot for researching. Some of the information on the computer is very helpful, but you can never really know what information is inaccurate. At least when you research using a book or encyclopedia, you can trust those sources. What if you had to do a report and you could only use the internet, how would you be able to tell if the information is trustworthy? Sure, computers also teach hand-eye coordination by playing video games, but when in real life, will you need to know how to shoot a dragon or dodge candy that's falling from the sky? This is just an example of unneeded information and skills that keeps people wanting to go back on the computer. Another thing you can do on the computer is communicte with others. When computers weren't invented or even that advanced, people were more than happy to give one another a call. Now with computers, people @CAPS2-mail, instant message, or even skype; a webcam website. What even happened to cellphones, you can take.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13064,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was a happy mood. It is a happy mood because Narciso finally knew what family actually meant.For example when Narciso says ""It was in this simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country and where I celebrated my first birthdays, It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love."" This quote shows the mood that Narciso had wich was happy.In conclusion Narciso had a happy mood because he finally knew the real definition of family.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16502,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were, the one obstacle to thier expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area, also saw a opportunity for his Empire State Building to have a mooring mast added to the top of the building that would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, or to let passengers off and on. Also dirigibles were docked by means of an electric winch, which hauled in a line from the front of the ship and then tied it to a mast. In conclusion, these are the obstacles which the builders of the Empire State Building faced, to allow dirigibles to be docked.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10524,4,"In the story, “winter Hibiscus saeng made a promise to herself that she would never fail the test again Saeng wanted to remember her past and homeland. That is why she bought the flowers. At the end of the story she vows,” In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. She says this because she wants to move on now and try to get used to her new home.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19077,7,"One time I was patient was last year when I was at a amusment park in @LOCATION2 callnt cedarpaint. I was slunting in line to get to get on a amazing lollermaster called the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 force. It was a very tuff ride and delitedly ?? in the ?? but it was ten hours long. Standing in the hot unbearableline hurts ,horid, ussually when in @LOCATION1",10,8,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3436,2,"I think that books, music, movies, and magazines should not have to be removed from shelves of libraries. People find entertainment to movies with sexual or violent activity in them. I believe that if we do take all of the stuff that involve offensive things off shelves then some people will be upset.     In our generation today, people look forward to see things that they can't see at home with their parents. Music these days have a lot of bad language in them, but that's what makes people interested in them. The same with movies. Books, music, and movies today talk a lot about sexual intercourse, illegal drugs, and criminal involvement. This kind of stuff gets our attention, and makes us interested.     If you have a child or someone in the family that you don't want them to watch, listen, or read about offensive stuff then don't let them see it. Most stores with offensive stuff have a back room where they keep all of it, so they don't have to worry about others seeing it. People do take it offensive sometimes but that doesn't mean that libraries should have to take them off their shelves.     People can make there own decision of what they want to listen, watch, or read. Everybody can choose what they prefeir. Everybody has their own opion on things. I think that libraries will have more business with the offensive things then without. Younger people find more interest in the things that seeem like a dream, or things that seem so unreal.      I think that they should keep offensive music, books, movies, and magazines out on shelves, because we have our own freedom to do what we want. Lots of people find many pleasures to watching offensive things. If you don't want to see or listen to stuff you don't prefer then don't look for them at the libraries",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15160,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there would be that the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof because a thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. Over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications on the framewor The greatest obstace of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air current. The back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18432,7,The time I was patient was when I went @CAPS1 fishin with my step dad. I could not wait for long so I decided to talk to myself or sing songs. My step dad said you set ur pole down on a sling shot holder and do whatever. So I went walk around explore the world and I was think about how I can do patience. I was to go check on my pole and I got nothing so I feel in the coast out for way so I sat wait and wait but until that moment my pole start to jak around so I reel in caught a large @CAPS1 I was so happy. My step dad said see you do got patience.,9,6,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3107,2,"Two of the many privaleges that we have as @CAPS1 are freedom of speech and freedom of expression. Although some bodies of work @MONTH1 be percieved as offensive or inappropriate, I believe that they should still be available to the public. Some might agree with the topic being expressed, even if it is offensive or inappropriate, and others @MONTH1 not; but they should not be removed from libraries because of their negativity.     These offensive or harsh pieces of literature could even be used to show the public what is considered rude, offensive, or inappropriate, and should be thought of as learning tools instead of being banned. Every person has a right to an opinion, and others @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not agree with what that person has to say, but it does not change the fact that they have the right to their beliefs.     Katherine Paterson says, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the self'. I myself have read literature that is considered offensive, but as disturbing as the literature was, I am glad that I was educated on what people thought was acceptable behavior so that I know, and can teach others that despite what the book said, we now know that it was describing how people should not be living.     I believe that it would be a grave mistake to remove these materials from the public eye, because many are ingorant to the historical beliefs of others that have affected our nation and other countries across the globe. All of these books are educational, though some are harsh, and they should be used to show what is right and wrong. If they are taken off of shelves in the libraries then people, especially children could start to think that a certain idea, that @MONTH1 be incorrect or offensive, is completely appropriate and acceptable. As someone once said, '@CAPS2 who do not know their history are bound to repeat it'.     By removing the problem, we would be creating another issue. For example, many books have been written over history that convey hatred and discrimination towards other cultures, ethnicities, religions, and lifestyles. If @CAPS2 works of literature were banned and not available to the public, many people would not know that it is wrong to show hatred towards others just because they are different than you. This type of literature provides usefull information: it allows people to see how a large amount of people thought life should have been years ago, and they taught the people of @DATE1 that it actually was how people should not be living.",3,4,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1518,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, Computers are a helpful advantage in the @CAPS4's life. It offers and contributes many ideas and actions. Computers help people find a nice spot to travel. Also it helps people meet or make @CAPS1 friends. A computer is another way for people to get thier hand-eye cordination better. Computers are very helpfull in a humans life. Computers are usefull when trying to explore @CAPS1 places. One can book a flight anywhere in a matter of minits on a computer. How else would it be possible to travel somplace far away without booking a flight on a computer. Next, computers help learn about different coltures. Once one has booked reservations to a certain travel spot on thier computer, they will learn much about the unfamiliar land they have went to. My family has gone to many different areas around the world. The trips would not have been possible without help researching and making flights with the computers. The computer makes it possible to experience to territorys. It is a key item when someone is looking to travel. A computer is emensly important when trying to communicate with friends. People can meet and make friends very simply using websites such as facebook on the computer. Facebook creats friendship very easily. I recently waited to get to know a students better. I looked him up on facebook and now we are aqetances. Next, programs on the computers such as A.I.M. help people communicate about anything such as homework to other personal topics. Lastly, if one wants to get to know another better he or she can look at thier blog. They @MONTH1 start to talk and become good friends. Computers are usfull when trying to comunicate or find friends. Computers not only help with travel and friends but it also helps with ones hand eye cordination. Typing letters while looking at a screen is using the hand eye coordination. This action can help with sports. For example in baseball one must have a good hand eye cordination to help catch and hit the ball. Secondly, with hand eye cordination getting better with the computer. it helps kids fit in. If one has good hand eye cordination they can play sports are make friends. If one becomes good with hand eye cordination and typeing they will be able to get a job writing for a newspaper or a book. Hand eye cordination and typing with computers can lead to a succesfull life. Computers in an @CAPS5 life can help in the long run. It will help with travel plans, friends, and hand eye cordination.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18868,7,"Being patient @CAPS4 a great trait to have. When you are patient you are respected. That @CAPS4 why I have alot of respect for @CAPS7 teacher. @PERSON1. @PERSON1 @CAPS4 a very patient person. If you didn’t understand something she will work through it with you until you understand. Even it takes a couple of weeks. One time she was teaching us how to add negative numbers and I didn’t understand and she worked with me until I understood. She was very patient. Let me tell you what happened. “@CAPS1 class today we are going to add negative numberC” @CAPS2 @CAPS4 going to be a breeze I thought silently to myself. Little did I know I would not know what to do at all and @CAPS7 teacher was going to have to be very patient with me. When @CAPS7 teacher was done explaining the rules to adding negative numbers I was already lost “ @CAPS3 are some sample problems that everyone needs to try,” said @CAPS7 teacher. A few minutes later she went to every student and checked there answers. When she got to me she had a worried expression on her face. “@CAPS4 everything all  right you didn’t do your sample problems” she asked me. “I dont understand @CAPS2” I replied. @CAPS7 teacher fell silent for a moment and then she said “come see me after class” @CAPS5 I waited until the end of the day and then went to see her. “I noticed you were having trouble with math today” said @CAPS7 teacher. “@CAPS6 were gonna fix that.” @CAPS7 teacher sat down with me and explained what to do in steps. After about twenty minutes of her explaining to me how to do it I finnaly began to pick it up. @NUM1 minutes later I was doing it. “You can go now” said @CAPS7 teacher. “You now understand it better than the other students.” “thanks for being @CAPS5 patient with me” I said before I left . @CAPS7 teacher just smiled. That was a time when @CAPS7 teacher was very patient with me. And I am glad that she was",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9307,4,"“then I will take that test again” [@NUM1] Saeng’s whole intention in the story was to take the test and pass it. Houever, ""I-@CAPS1] failed the test, [Ho, @NUM2] which brought the whole story together. She yearned for comfort as she seeked the “@CAPS2 Malik” [Ho, @NUM3] for comfort. Seeing this brought back all the memories of her life “back home” [@NUM1] that kept her going. As a result, bonding with her mother erupted, and it brought another day of hope for her future in her new home. Enough hope for her to say, “when they come back in the spring when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.”",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12520,5,"In this memoir about Narciso Rodriguez the ton is happy and loving. In this memoir there are many examples about how the tone is loving, and happy, but heres a few. First in paragraph @NUM1 there + two phrases in parenthesees that show how @CAPS1 loved the things like the music and the cooking of his home, and family. ""(and for which I am eternally greatful)."" And, ""(which I adore to this day)."" @CAPS1 wouldn't have added the use things in unless @CAPS1 truly meant it, and if @CAPS1 really loved his home. Also what sets the tone is how @CAPS1 talks about loving his parents, and how @CAPS1 is grateful for them. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice,"" @CAPS1 states in the first sentence of paragraph @NUM2. Lastly, the last sentence of the memoir is happy and puts a smile on your face after you read it, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" In Rodriguez's memoir, it has a happy and loving tone throughout it.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3952,2,"First of all i believe if its on the shelf you should be able to get it, no matter what your age is. Yeah theirs thing's that shouldn't be on the shelf, but how are kids and people supposed to know to get that or not. If kids arnt alowed to get certant material on the shelfs, Then it shouldn't be their, @CAPS1 my oppinion.     Parents @MONTH1 think differnt, parents might think only certant things should b alowed at a libray. @CAPS1 not their choice though. Anything is alowed to be at a libray. If you dont want your kid reading or getting certant thing's, then when your kid goes to the libray go with them. Help them pick out a book.     In conclusion i believe you should be able to check anything that is on the shelf. Kid or if your an adult. If your not alowed to get, then why is it their? I dont know i couldnt anwser that question, other than why is it their? @CAPS1 my oppinion though",2,3,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9782,4,"The author concludes the story by the paragph that says, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, the I will take that test again"", because the author wants to convey that. Saeng isn’t going to quit. She is determined to take and pass the test. It also meas that saeng will wait for the right moment to take the test. She will wait till things get better. The situation that she is in improves because it say’s, ""The snow melt, the geese return, and hibiscus is budding.”",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
135,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I am writing to tell you about the effects computers have on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, lets people search @CAPS1 places, talk online with people like family and friends. First, the computers teach hand eye coordination it helps you become a better speller and type fast or type without looking at the keys I know it helped me and im sure it will help you too. Secondly, computers lets you interact with family and friends and lets you make friends like myspace you talk to your friends and make @CAPS1 ones facebook is more mature if you ask me twitter also its just away for you too talk to your friends yahoo, gmail, aol. Even teacher es lets the teachers communicate with parents so it helps you communicate without everyone being in your conversation on the phone. Next, it helps you search @CAPS1 and old places like landmarks or bussnesses like salons, nail palors. Gyms and @CAPS1 resturant you can even search when a movie is goin to come out. A computer can help you very much in this type of case. In conculsion computers are good they help you inform you and they can teach you I love my computer it helps me with homework and helps me study. Say you cant talk with someone over the phone, you can email or chat with them and it's so cool/fun and it interesting how you can learn @CAPS1 things it lets you upload pictures, music videos and you can type essays. The computer is very educational.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13437,5,"In the memoir Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives @PERSON1 he makes the mood seem the loving, cheerful, and grateful.The mood is grateful to Rodriguez's parents for making his house more of a home among other things. In paragraph @NUM1 he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 his parents did a ton for Rodriguez and he is constantly grateful. Their is also a lot of love in the mood of the book because there are lots of mentions of family. In paragraph @NUM2 it says ""My parents always kept their arms and doors open to the many people we considered family."" @CAPS2 arms opened and a big ""family"" are surely signs of lots of love. The mood of the excerpt is also cheerful because as Rodriguez says ""Passionate salsa music filled the air."" And ""a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air."" Music and feasting are two of the most cheerful things there are.By recalling experiences from his childhood @PERSON2 manages to make the mood of his memoir loving, grateful, and cheerful all at the same time.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3597,2,"Some people think that offensive books should be off the selves, but some other people think that this should not be allowed.     I do not believe that certain materials (books, movies, and magazines.  If we take evey book off the self then we would not have any book to read.  If we start taking offensive books off the self then every body coming in would be taking @NUM1 books off the self.  Then with in two days there would be not books left.     If we do not have any books then are eyes would be bad. We should not take books off the selves because of some people like to read.  If people do not like the books in the library then they should not go to the library to get books.     This is why people should not take offensice books off the selves. This will make peoples eyes so bad that they would not see good at all.",2,3,,2,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18980,7,A time when I am patient. Is when I want something really bad. Like a phone or to get on the computer or something. But that is not  the only way to @CAPS1 patient you have too @CAPS1 patient in church and in the doctors office so there are many way to @CAPS1 patient,4,3,,7,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19459,7,"Patience is a quality that some people have and some people don’t. it shows your character to people if your patient or not. It can be hard at times, but we all get through it. For example, when I was at a resturaunt that took forever to get our food to us, I had to be patient. I was sitting at the table after we ordered, and I got really bored so, I decide to color with crayons I got. After I was finished with that I decided that I needed to find something else to do while I was waiting. My mom was talking, so I chose to do that. I talked for a long time. Then our bread came. So, I ate that for a while and then got bored again. The waiter came and told us our food would be out soon. So, I continued to talk, went to the bathroom. When I came back our food was there! So I sat down and enjoyed the delicious meal. When I was patient I got a good reward out of it. Good things always come to people that are patient. If your not a patient person then you can always try to become one. It’s not very hard just keep yourself occupied!",9,12,,21,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15805,6,"The builders' expectations were set too high and they faced many obstacles they had not foreseen. Safety was a big issue in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The dirigibles ""used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable."" With a highly populated city like New York, it would have been easy for a fire to begin. Another obstacle of allowing dirigibles to dock was nature. The wind at times could be too powerful. As said the reading, ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" These threatening winds would have made it impossible for the dirigibles to land and serve as safe transportation.The last obstacle was that it was illegal. The had @CAPS1 been a law against it. The reading states, ""this law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building."" With this law, there was not even a glimpse of hope that this plan could be successful.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3805,2,"Censorship in libraries!Do you believe that certianmaterials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive?NO!, I do not think they should be removed. I believe everyone is intitled to there own opinion, @CAPS1 if something is offensiv eto one person @CAPS2 @MONTH1 not be to another. No one thinks the same or has the same opinion about somethings thats why there is a variety of books, music, movies etc. If you take out the 'offensive' things, @CAPS2 @MONTH1 cause offense to another.People just need to stop being sefish and understand everyone is different and we all have different interests",3,2,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10069,4,"I think that she was that way to say, hey I didn’t over come something and I’ll be back next year to take the test again like the hibiscus budding when she snow melts and the geese return @CAPS1 year.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12373,5,"What is a memoir? A memoir is of writing someone's own feelings and experiences during their life. This memoir by Narciso Rodriguez tells of her life in her simple home in Newark, New Jersey. Throughout the memoir Rodriguez sits a distinct mood of love and care, which she learned from her parents back in her childhood. The mood is mainly set by the memories of her environment, friends, and culture. All of these things are described by Rodriguez to make you feel the mood she expresses. The mood of love and care is incorporated into the memories of her childhood, beginning from the time she was born. Rodriguez begins to draw the mood in paragraph two by describing her home that was made into a traditional Cuban home by her parents. She describes the ""rich culinary skills... Passionate Cuban music... And the congregation of family and friends."" @CAPS1, she begins to describe the love of her friends and neighbors, who she felt, were family. Last, Rodriguez describes the influence her Cuban culture has had on her. She talks about how her parents helped others of their kind which made her what she is today.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12890,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is love and appreciation. Narciso appreciated all that his parents did for him. They gave up a home in Cuba for him, their job and even happiness. Love because they all loved each other alot family meant alot to the family. they said family is people who care for one another even if they are not blood related. it doesnt matter. It's about Love and careness.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12133,5,"The mood of the memoir is love. @PERSON1 and his family ""... always kept their arms and their door open to the many people (they) consider family, knowing that they would do the ""same for (them)"" (@NUM1). Even though""(thier) nieghorhood was made up of mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants at a time when racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the United States"" (@NUM2) they all cared for each other as if they were one family. Prior to moving to the United States, ""Narciso, Sr., had worked in the laboratory and Rawedia Maria had studed chemical engineering. In the United States, they had to start thier lives over entirely, taking whatever work they could find"" (@NUM3). They moved to the United States, leaving their good jobs, so that thier son could live a better life Narciso doesnt take this for granted. He engulfs the in a profusion of thanks. Throughout the memoir the author costantly writes about all the caring and love in the lives of @PERSON1 and his family.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9320,4,I think that this sentence was choosen to be the last sentence because it shows that Saeng can pass the test. Although she is not at her homeland she still has the ability to do things. As the plant that reminds of home returns and begins to grow Saeng will do the same. I think that it is a good sentence to be at the end and it leaves you wondering if she will pass the test.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11929,5,"Home and family is the @CAPS1 one thing all of us love. The mood the author created was heartwarming and appreciation, because he explains how comftable his home is with everyone, together having a good time. Not only Just being together but being together: ""Growing up in this enviroment instilled in him a great sense that ""familly"" nothing to do with being a Blood relative.""Narciso Rodriguez show his appreciation for his parents he loved so much because they had to make an important change to give him a better life wiched he deseverd. They had made this change ""even though it meant leaving behind their families."" Such bravery they had.The author left us knowing his appreciation for his ""home"" with being grateful for his parents and his hispanic heritage.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
96,1,"The use of computers is definetly correct. It is helpful, you can discover new things and much more. Computers makes peoples lives just so much simpler. Computers can help people in magnificent ways by looking for things you despretly need. Like if you were a student and you had to write a paper on @PERSON1. The computer has internet and that like billions of facts @PERSON1 and much more information about every thing. It can be helpful also by looking up the wheather, the new, even things that are happening around the world and even answering questions you have. Discovering things on the computer is something that happens every day. For example I read an article about the @CAPS1 and the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 the next day my teachers gave us a pop quiz on that and I got @NUM1. If a computer can get somebad a @NUM1 on their test think of what else it could do for the world. It might even help sae lives. Of course a computer can be helpful. In way like cheeking the score from yesterdays game, see whats going on in your community, watch videoes, hear music, talk to your friends, relatives get information on places, medical stuff. A computer can basicly do every thing from looking up the games scores to saving a life. The use of computers is, obviously the best dicision.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12362,5,The author i think wants to go back to cuba to see his family and friends. Also i think the author wants to move back down to cuba. To stay with the rest of his family and friends and take and maybe take care of @CAPS1 older relative,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4227,2,"Why would you ever censor anything in a library? Apparently because things such as books, music, movies, magazines, ect. can be found offensive.  If something is considered offensive, why put it in a library anyway if its going to be open to anyone in the public, including children?       First off, censorship is important but we don't need it in libraries of all places.  Libraries is a place where all sorts of literature comes together in one place where it can be seen and read by those who admire literature.  Censorship is stopping this by pulling books off shelfs because they are considered offensive.  If a book is offensive, first decide what kind of audience it would be offensive to.  Then decide whether or not it is offensive to even an adult audience.  If it is found to be offensive to an adult audience, then it should be pulled off the shelves of a library.  Otherwise it should be placed in the adult section of the library.     Libraries should have certain sections for certain books and other pieces of literature.  As mentioned before, if a book is too offensive for anyone not of adult audience, it should be placed in an adult section.  Books that are suitable for children should be put in the children's section.  You can even have a such section for young adults for books that are suitable for teenagers.  Sections in a library almost completely defeats the need of censorship.  Sections help correctly place books and other pieces of literature in a library so that onlt readers of certain suitable ages @MONTH1 read them.     In conclusion, sections in a library can be used instead of censorship.  If we were to censor what books were on the shelves in a library the eventually there will hardly any books for anybody.  Sections help keep books in a library, but keeps them in a place where the right audience can view them",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6719,3,"The features of a setting can affect the cyclist in many ways. For example, while he was riding in the hot sun he became very thirsty because whe only had a few drops of water left. That is how the setting can affect the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1354,1,"Dear Newspaper, I believe that computers have a positive affect on society. I believe computers have a positive affect because they help us learn of faraway places, they help us communicate with friends and family all over the world, and computers help entertain people. The computer has a positive affect on society because on it you can learn of faraway places, their history, and you can learn of their landscape. By learning these things you can do a lot of things such as plan a vacation, this information can help you on a school report, also this information can help you learn of your heiratage & your culture. Also computers have a positive effect and are beneficial to society because they help you communicate with friends and family all over the world! You can communicate with anyone you know. Nowadays everyone uses the computer as their main form of communication. In a study it showed that @PERCENT1 of people in the world has a computer as a communication tool. Lastly computers are beneficial to society because they entertain us. On a computer you can do many things to never get bored. You can play games, surf the web, or you can watch videos on networks such as youtube. So on a computer you'll never be bored. The computer is beneficial and has a positive affect on society. The computer helps us learn of faraway places, it lets us communicate with friends and family all over the globe, and lastly the computer entertain us. Thats why the computer is beneficial to society.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
527,1,"@DATE1 @CAPS1 The @CAPS2, I believe that computers in today's society have a possitve affect on people. I believe this because if people use it for education purposes to chat, email, or to reasearch it does make a difference in peoples lives. If you use the computer for educational purposes like games, you could really learn a lot. For example, I help my sister with her multiplication on a math game we have. Also, I learned to type with type to learn @CAPS3. on my desktop computer at home. Many other people use it for these reasons too. They also might use it for typing a project or making a presentation. Others might only use it for chat and e-mail. These things can still benefit our society though. Using the computer for chat, such as, facebook, myspace, and twitter can also benefit our society today. These websites benefit us because we can meet new people, catch up with old friends, or even talk with carrent friends. also on @ORGANIZATION2, @ORGANIZATION1, or @ORGANIZATION3 we can e-mail people instead of instant messaging them. For example, if you have something really big to say to someone you might want to write on email. If you just want to say hello you could use facebook, myspace, or twitter if you have an account. Computers do benefit our society today. All of the reasons in my letter support my position on wether or not computers benefit our society.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12955,5,"The mood created by the author is fairly formal, with a few informal parts. For example a formal paragraph, like paragraph number one, sets the stage of the whole memoir and uses formal transitions like ""After [living]"". Also, the paragraph is very informative, telling about his parents imigrating to the @ORGANIZATION1 from Cuba and how they were financially poor + could not afford a fancy home like they could in Cuba.An informal paragraph in the memoir is a paragraph like number six where he is describing how thankful he is for his parents being as selfless and giving as they are. He also uses informal transitions such as ""But, [in reality]."" And ""these...,"". It also just has an informal tone to that paragraph.As a conclusion these parts of the memoir have a good balance of formal + informal settings to keep the reader engaged.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12206,5,"The mood created by the author is welcoming. ""In 1961, I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family, blond brick building in the iron bound section of Newark, New Jersey."" This gives the feeling of being welcomed because it makes me feel like we just saw Narciso Rodriguez's house and we are about to walk in. ""In our neighborhood, despite custums elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solitary and friendship."" This makes me feel welcome because it doesn't matter if you are different you are still family. ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" This gives me the feeling of being welcomed because it was imagery that makes me imagine and I'm able to picture this house, with brilliant smells and lovely cuban music playing. In conclusion, the mood of being welcomed is portrayed strongly throughout the memoir, especially when he is describing his home",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15082,6,"The original plan for the Empire State Building was to be tallest building in the world, at @NUM1 feet. Everything was going well until the competition. The Chrysler Building, threatened to steal the title. When Al Smith announced that he was going to but a mooring mast at the top of the Empire State Building, this obviously changed the architects designs. ""The architects desighned a shiny glass & chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from the inside, with a stepped-back desighn that imitated the overall shape of the building. The rocket-shaped mast would have four wings at its corners... and would rise to a conical roof that would house the mooring arm."" (Lüsted). Two months after the workers started with the new plan, the celebrated because the finished framing the entire building ""The Empire State building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed. The greatest reason was safety."" (Lüsted)",4,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6664,3,"The features of the setting effect the cyclist .The setting makes him feel thirsty, dry, hot, and lost. In the story the setting plays a big party in the cyclist's will to ride to the next town. First the cyclist asks directions from a guy that never left his house in decades this creates, doubt. Also in the story it says “Tumbleweeds cross my path” this makes the cyclists feel lost. Finally it say the “water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” This makes the cyclist thirsty and tired. The features definatly have an effect on the cyclists.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18428,7,"A time when I was patient was when I wanted a Do I. for my birthday. But I couldn’t get it because my moma had to pay the rent. So I waited and then finally it was my birthday. I didn’t have it but then @NUM1 months went by and it was @CAPS1 and I got it and I was so happy. @CAPS2 time when I was patient was when I had to babysit my cousin for @NUM2. And I waited a few weeks for my uncle to give me my money but he did not. So I waited and ?? to gave me my money. But not only did he give me @NUM2 he gave me a late fee @NUM4 and I was hapy. And that added up to my money, that my mama gave me and it was @NUM5 and I went skating and to the store with my friends. And I spent some of it at @DATE1 ??? and on @DATE1 added held ???. they were then @CAPS2 time when I was patient was when it was @NUM6 days before my birthday and I was leaving a sleepover I ??? went to go buy everything and it was like the next day was my @NUM7 birthday. I did everything I had so much fun it was like heaven at my house.",6,8,,14,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13550,5,"The mood created by the author is a grateful mood. It's grateful because the boy kept on talking about how thankfull he is for all the stuff he has. Another reason why the mood is grateful is because all of the people in the neighborhood will all come together and eat with eachother, visit with eachother, and help eachother. I know the mood is grateful because it says in paragraph @NUM1 ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice.""",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10089,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph. She does because she is ready to do the same thing next year. She like spending time with her mom, she likes plants, she likes having fun with her mom. This are some reasons why she concludes with that paragraph.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6411,3,Some features can affect the cyclist. The weather can slow them down like if it was cold or hot outside it can slow the person down. If the person does not,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10316,4,I think that the author concludes with this paragraph bacuse she is determin to conpleat and pass the test. First reson way is that she faild this year and whants to pass next year. Next she is comparing the hibiscus to her passing and sulding on the test. That is way the author concludes the story with this paragraph.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6862,3,"The cyclist was in California in June, the sun was beating down on him this made the ride difficult with short water supply The man came upon several towns that were abandond which made his water supply less. The terrain was long and straight then turned into tall hills which had to be difficult to ride.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3475,2,"I as a student, a child and a citizen of of the united states believes that every book, should be allowed in any library.  Books, express feelings, emotions ect., the same thing with movies, music.  I we don't have them how will we be able to learn anything in this world. Each book out there has an explanation, a title and a reason to be read.  Today millions of poeple read more ad more because of all the books out there.            I do believe however the reason why every book should be in a library is because all of them are different.  It doesn't matter what the books about, some might seem offensive but everyone has something that they dislike.  There are many poeple out there that get deffensive over things, for example certain people, animals, countries, different skin colors, cursing and even sports.  We all have our own opinions, if you do not like a certain book because it has a content that you don't like then it's simple don't read it, others might like it.  Movies, books, music, magazines, etc., should be allowed anywhere",2,3,,2,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7177,3,"The features in the story tell me that it was in a very dry, not populated area. It says that there were rolling hills, in a desert of California, and that it was dry. I think those things affected the cyclist by dehydrating him. Going up and down hills can be very tiring, especially when you don’t have a lot of water left, and need to save some. The quote “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty regularly, and I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June,” tells me a lot about the story. In a desert in California in June during the summer is a very brave and stupid thing to do. It s twice as hot during the summer.",3,0,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9841,4,"The author ends the story with that paragraph to give you a sense of hope and determination for the future that dwells within saeng at that time .Throught  the story is seemed as though saeng was giving into despair at the remembrance of her home land ,she wasnt doing so well in her new country and and she had realized it the  most when she had “failed her driving test “.but when she  walked past the flower shop and saw all the plants that used to bloom so freely and beautifly  in her home  land comfind  in those ting pots and fighting to survive it reminded her of  herself here in @LOCATION1. As she began to plant her hibiscus she again compared herself to it and that is why when her plant blooms on the spring so well she will pass that test   ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21351,8,"Have you ever seen the phrase @CAPS1,@CAPS2,Laughter? Have you ever asked yourself what it means? I believe it can mean many different things for many different people. There are some people that can take it negativly andthen there's some that take it positivley i believe that those @NUM1 words in that phrase are everything you need to have a perfect life. A perfect life isn't about having the best car the most expensive clothes or the nicest physical appearence. Im going to tell you why laughter is very important in any kind of relationship. Im @NUM2 years old now but i was @NUM3 when i met the person who makes me laugh no matter the situation. He is a male tall, brown skin. He is @NUM4 years old now. but he was @NUM2 when i met him.It all started at school thats where we met. He always made me laugh i remember once i was very upset because i was having some issues at home and being with him was something i needed to actually forget what was going on he is a very honest person and thats what was good about him he would make any situation into a joke. even emberassing things that either happend to me or him he would turn them around to the piont where i wouldn't feel emberassed anymore. I @CAPS1 it how i can be myself with him. He was the uphill on a rocky roll-a-coaster. @NUM1 years have gone by and i am now married with that best friend that i had and we have two beautiful twin daughets together and i @CAPS2 my life to the fullest because he makes me happy. Instead of arguing its laughter and life is just better that way not only it makes me laugh but thats what makes him a good person and other people feel good around him. Laughter not only is good in a male and female relationship but it is also good in a female and female relationship. I have a best friend. not only is she my best friend because she's honest, and kind but because she's funny she makes me laugh we can laugh at the simplist things ever most people @MONTH1 think we are crazy, we aren't that just the sound of a happy life. I believe a life without laughter is like a straight road boring and long. life with laughter is like a curvey road you just dont know what to expect. My mother and I have a pretty solid relationship we do alot of things together but what i enjoy most is the laughs we have sometimes when something occurs at that momment it might be downhill but a year from that day you look back and its funny its always better to enojy laughing with somebody that you can consider dear to you. Laughing at the memmories is what i enjoy most with anyone because that memory you will always carry with you and sooner or later you are going to laugh at the fact that it happend, when and where. So when ever something happens to you that you @MONTH1 consider emberassing look back at it a year from that day im sure you will get a laugh or atleast a smile out of it. ",15,16,,31,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18324,7,"It was a nice sunny day outside, in the middle of the @DATE1. It was so hot outside, it was like the sahara desert. “honey get your bathing suit on, and some shorts, and get into the car,” my mom shouted out the window. “@CAPS1 mom,” I questioned.”it’s a suprice”she answered. So I did what she told me while wondering where @CAPS9 were going. When @CAPS9 got there, I knew exactly where @CAPS9 were. @STATE1 @CAPS2. I got out of the car with a huge grin on my face. “@CAPS3 going to go on @CAPS4 @CAPS5, want to come,” I asked my mom. “@CAPS6, sounds like fun she replied.” When @CAPS9 got to this heart-throbbing roller coaster I looked, and the line was all the way to the end of the sidewalk. “@CAPS7, I don’t want to wait mom, its too long of a line,” I complained. “@CAPS8 patient, sweety @CAPS9’ll @CAPS8 on the coaster in no time,” she replied. One hour later……… “mom its taking forever.” I whimpered. “@CAPS9 are the next ones in line,” she replied still smiling. So when the gates opend i was so excited and nervous, I couldn’t believe that I waited an hour to get on one ride. “You were very patient,” my mom said with her hair sticking straight up. “@CAPS6 I was, and @CAPS3 proud of that,” I said to myself.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1395,1,"@CAPS1 dinners ready okay mom, one second' click, click, click. Are you hearing this from your children than usual? Well if you are than you need to listen to this upcoming message. We the @ORGANIZATION1 believe are children and adults are spending too much time in their laptops or computers. They're not out exercising, enjoying nature and interacting with their family, these problems could lead to begger problems that @MONTH1 have already taken affect like: @CAPS2, financial problem and then to depression. So keep reading and think what you hear that could or has happened to you. @CAPS2 is a huge thing to worry about kids all over @LOCATION1 are on their computer than outside. Ever day I see my nephew on his computers I see him getting fatler and fatts every day. Studies have shown that children and adults that own as facebook or myspace account, they gaim about @NUM1 pounds every @NUM2 moths. If they're even on @NUM3 to @NUM2 hours a day they'll gain @NUM5 pounds every month. Sooner or later the state is going to have the @CAPS2 level from @PERCENT1 to @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION1 people who are obesy. This could lead to loss @ORGANIZATION1 jobs laziness. When people spend most @ORGANIZATION1 their time on facebook and myspace than they could lose their job's. More than @PERCENT3 @ORGANIZATION1 the state citizens own a facebook or myspace. So when people are addicted to them they're spend more time on that thatn the steff the have to do for their jobs. So then they'll get firm one can't pay bills, loans, and mortage. This then will all tead to depression. Depression is all over the state even the country. People are losing jobs left and right cause their computers and internets. People are even comiting climer like murded and even attemps @ORGANIZATION1 suicide cause @ORGANIZATION1 loss @ORGANIZATION1 jobs or family members. Some people are even so addicted to the internets and girths @ORGANIZATION1 new born family member. This depression needs to stop. So fight for the right to stop the addiction @ORGANIZATION1 internet use and live a great life. Drop the computer sead as book, meet up with friends and family, keep your jobs. Don't let these reson come between you and your life.""",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6608,3,"The features of this setting effect the author while he is cycling. They changed his hope to doubt. There were no buildings or cars, which led him to believe he would never get to Yosemite. Also, it had a rough terrain that made him doubt that he would ever get water. Im sure if the setting had buildings, people, even just civilization, then the cyclist would of been fine.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
830,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Computers have a positive impact on people. Although people aren't outside being active, computers still benefit in a good way. Computers teach hand-eye coordination they're convient and you can interact online with diffrent types of people. Surely, computers teach hand-eye coordination. There are many website on the internet that teach kids to type. Typing helps kids learn the alphabet, learn what the letters look like and shows them where the keys are. Also, there are other sites where the computer interacts with you. Last, there are many kids even adults who have disiexing and get their letters jumbled, but there are softwares where when you type it will say what letter you have typed. Therefore computer teach hand-eye coordination. Have you ever been one of those students who write their papers, but get bad grades because their handwriting was messy? Using a computer is more convient and will make your due assignment as neat as ever. First, computer are convient because you have the answer to any question just at the click of button. Next, theres no need to spend money and go buy a book to look up research just research online for free. Finally, it is convinient for teachers and your employees, because if you need to send in a paper do it via-email. Getting a paper by email is much easier than getting it in pen with samples. Computer are convient in many ways. Computers allow people @NUM1 video chat and talk online. First, there are many families who have at least one member who lives in a different place. Computer allow families to see each other online. Without ever leaving their state. Next, there are other families who have a mom, dad, husband or wife in the army and haven't seen each other in person in years, but see each other on line. Lastly, there are many students and teachers who teach and learn online. This is easy for most people who have busy lives. Therefore you can interact online. As you can see computers have a positive effect. They teach hand eye coordination. They supply online chat, and are very convient. So next time you go to the library to research a book, stay at home do the same online.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1216,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @ORGANIZATION1, Computers are an extremely usefull tool in this modern age. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to easily learn about faraway places and people, and allow people to talk online with other people. Therefore, I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Hand-eye coordination is a very important skill for young children to master. Without it they will have sloppy handwriting, absolutely no chance at sports, and much more. Computers help teach them because they need their finger to hit the same key that their eye sees. And because they tend to want to type faster, it will help even more because the finger and eye will have to work in mission to type faster. Computers also give people the ability to easily learn about far away places, people, etc. People used to have to spend hours searching for a half decent book on a topic, and then find the specific information they need in the hundreds of pages. Now that information is only a few clicks away. Say you have had problems with your faucet, it keeps drippy but you dont want to pay for a plumber. You could easily step by step instructions on what to do using the computer, the possibilities are endless. Finnaly, Computers can allow people to stay in contact with friends who @MONTH1 live far away. It is more convinient than using a plane because you dont have to have something in your hands the whole time. You can walk away and then came back when you hear that you got a message. It is also very usefull for people such as buisnesmen because they can talk to multiple people at once while still being able to get other work done, @PERSON1, author of buisnes magazine tells us in an iterview that it is nearly imposible to run a succesfull buisnes without a computer. How people could possibly say that computers have a negative influence on society, I dont know. But I hope that you will publish this in the paper and show them that computers are necesary.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7281,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the features of the setting affects the cyclist by draining him of energy, he is sweating so much, he keeps on drinking his water and slowly finishes it and still has a long ride ahead of him. “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.”(Kurmaskie’s) since is was so hot the cyclist was thirsty and drank all of his water. It was a warm day and he needed to stay hydrated.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3163,2,"What is this world coming to?  We have stooped to the level of installing offensive materials in libraries where anyone can check them out. Being a daughter and teenager myself, I personally have had the experience of reading some of these offensive books and magazines.  The sex, drugs, and violence used to create a story, have destroyed the minds of our youth.  I strongly feel this disturing and destructive material should be removed from the shelves of libraries.          I do not question whether children and teens should read, but rather what they read.  I agree reading helps our youth learn and excel in schooling, but offensive books and magazines put nasty ideas into their minds and distort their way of thinking.  The more our younger generation reads about these ugly things, the more curious they become.  I feel they will eventually let curiousity get the better of them.      Many would say that experiencing activities such as sex and drugs is all apart of growing up, but I disagree.  Trying any one of these harmful activites portrayed in certain library materials could put you and your health in severe danger.  It only takes one time to become pregnant or become addicted to drugs.         To better prove my point, think of your favorite book.  Did you look up to any of the main characters? Did you want to be just like him/her?  Well it seems to me that this malicious material makes the main character and hero of the story a bad role model.  They @MONTH1 save the world and be a hero by day, but authors and producers make sure they include their night life in the story as well.  This tells our children that it is okay to do these things, when it is the exact opposite.     I stand by my opinion and believe offensive books, magazines, and movies should be removed from the shelves of libraries.  This material plants a bad seed in the mind of our youth.  It leads them to believe everyone, including their heros in books and movies, does these things.  Sex, violence, and drugs are not what this world was made for",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12985,5,"The mood of this memoir is one of love and kindness. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. It was a close-knit community of honest, hard-working immigrants who extended a hand to people who, not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This shows how close and kind the neighborhood around the house was. The end of paragraph @NUM2 it states ""Countless extended family members came and went-and there was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet. My parents always kept their arms and their doors open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us. The way that her parents helped the community out shows their general love and kindness for all. Finally, in paragraph @NUM2 it says, ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house were a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love. It was here that I learned the definition of ""family"". And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" It says right out that the ""scent"", or mood, is of love and that this is where he learned how to love. The mood of this article is very loving and kind.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21263,8,"I could just laugh to death. someone said. I sacned the area. ""@CAPS37?"" I said. ""@CAPS1 here son."" I looked @CAPS1 the stairs leading to @CAPS2 avenue. There was the sorce of the voice i had herd. @CAPS35 was only an old man probualy homeless by the looks of him. He had worn shoes, dirty blue jeans, a riped shirt under a worn jacket. ""@CAPS3, @CAPS31 @CAPS33 a little lost""The old man said. ""@CAPS4, I'm @CAPS73 lost"" said @PERSON1. His pocket started to vibrate. @PERSON1 reached into his pocket an pulled out his cell. He fliped @CAPS35 open and read: @CAPS31 going to be here soon? Tommey typed: ya bro just going onto @CAPS2 ave now. Message sent. @PERSON1 started to climb the steps. ""@CAPS5 @CAPS31 later old man"" said @PERSON1 as he dashed of to meet his friends. @PERSON1 saw his friends in site @CAPS62 were all standing outside of the @CAPS6 @CAPS7 bakery. ""@CAPS3,guys @CAPS33 @CAPS35's @PERSON1!"" @CAPS34 @PERSON2. @PERSON2 ran at @LOCATION1. @PERSON1 scuped her @CAPS1 and spun her around one before puting her @CAPS66 @CAPS19. @CAPS62 proceeded to walk over to the group. ""@CAPS37 took @CAPS31 so long dude"" said @CAPS9 @CAPS10. ""@CAPS11, @CAPS63 the short cut i took turned out to be, @CAPS73 to short"" @PERSON1 repiled. ""@CAPS12 don't mind him he's just in a bad mood"" said @CAPS13. ""@CAPS14"" replied @CAPS9 @CAPS10. ""@CAPS3, guys can we go into the @CAPS18 @CAPS19's toy store!!"" inqured @PERSON2. ""@CAPS20 that's fine"" replied @CAPS13 @CAPS22. The group proceeded @CAPS19 @CAPS2 avenue @CAPS24 turned right onto @ORGANIZATION1 street, @CAPS24 another right onto @CAPS25 avenue. The store was located halfway @CAPS19 in the middle of other boutiques. ""@CAPS26 were here"" said @PERSON2 as she spun around around from excitement. ""@CAPS24 let's go in"" said @CAPS9 @CAPS10. ""@CAPS30 old greblin!"" said @PERSON2. ""shh mu ha ha ha"" @CAPS31 got told said @CAPS13. ""@CAPS32"" he grumbled. Once inside the store @CAPS35 was like somone turned @CAPS9 the lights @CAPS9 bright. @CAPS73 only that but the store was filled from top to bottom with @CAPS38 but toys. The toys ranged from small to large to huge. There were all sorts of diffrent types. ""@CAPS33"" @CAPS34 @PERSON2. ""@CAPS35's a @CAPS43 bunny!""""@CAPS35'll smother @CAPS31 in your sleep twerp"" ""@CAPS37's eating @CAPS31?"" said @PERSON1. ""@CAPS38"" grumbbled @CAPS9 @CAPS10. WACK! The bunney conected with @CAPS9 @CAPS10's face. ""@CAPS43 meenie""""@CAPS44, that does @CAPS35"" he took a lion off the shelf and tossed @CAPS35 at @LOCATION2. ""@CAPS3, don't be mean to her!"" said @CAPS13 as she picted @CAPS1 a monester an flung @CAPS35 at @CAPS9 @CAPS10. @CAPS35 missed and hit @PERSON1. @PERSON1 flung @CAPS35 @CAPS66 at @CAPS9 @CAPS10. ""That's @CAPS35"" I @CAPS9 @CAPS10 challege @CAPS31. SMAK. ""@CAPS52"" @CAPS53 this. @CAPS53 that. @CAPS54 @CAPS54 @CAPS31 scum. @CAPS31 can't get me. WAM! Ha ha i'm ausome. TWACK! ""@CAPS55"" @CAPS34 some one. @CAPS62 @CAPS56.""@CAPS31 kids are in @CAPS43 trouble!"" the owner was yelling. ""@CAPS31 better put all these toys @CAPS66 where @CAPS62 were"" he warned.""@CAPS59! I think we got a little caried away"" said @CAPS13. ""A little!! My toy store is a mess!now get cleaning"" ""@CAPS61"" @CAPS62 all sighed. ""@CAPS63 that was cool"" siad @CAPS9 @CAPS10. ""@CAPS66 from planet meanie are we?"" teased @PERSON1. ""@CAPS67 i @CAPS20 am"" replied @CAPS9 @CAPS10. ""ya, that was fun"" said @CAPS13. ""@CAPS71 @CAPS35 was!!"" replied @PERSON2. ""We all looked pretty stupid hu"" said @CAPS13 blushing. "" @CAPS67, but how many people can say @CAPS62 had a toy fight in a toy store"" replied @PERSON1. ""@CAPS73 many i guess!""""@CAPS74 talking more cleaning, clean, clean!"" @CAPS34 the store owner.""yes, sir"" @PERSON2 soluted the owner.""@CAPS76 @CAPS31...""""@CAPS77"" The group of kids laughed.",16,16,,32,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6659,3,"The feature of the setting greatly affect the cyclist in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” The features in the story changed the speaker’s mood throughout his journey. For example, in the beginning he came across a deserted town so he was cautious. Next, he came across a fork in the road which was troubling to him. Then he passed a snake and had the obstacles of the hills which made him become determined. Finally, his determination changed to relief where he reached Gary and Wilber’s fish camp. In conclusion, the setting in the story greatly affects the cyclist by changing his moods and attitude towards his journey.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9389,4,"Minfong Ho included the last paragraph in the story because it alluded to the fact that saeng felt better and more confident when reminded of home. when saeng saw the hibiscus she got a feeling ""so intense, it was almost visceral.” The flower was creatively used by Ho. She said that the winter hibiscus is strong enough to make it through the cold months, which made the reader think after reading the last paragraph, that this flower must give saeng hope and confidence. Also, the geese make a V which I infured would mean Vietnam to saeng which is what the author is trying to get her reader to think. That is why “and the geese return.” is mentioned in the last paragraph. Minfong Ho wants her readers to realize that objects that make us more comfortable and happy are what make us strong and confident in the end. The author did a great job placing that last thought into the last paragraph because it perfectly sums up the lesson, and that is that you should do things when you feel confident and it feels like home to you. You @MONTH1 be small and fragile, but if you “plant” yourself you can thrive with confidence. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16310,6,"the mooring mast of the empire state Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have apparent before it was ever constructed the greatest reason was one of safety must dirigibles From outside of the united states used hydrogen. hydrogen rather Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken Place above densely populated area such as downtown New York",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1528,1,Dear @PERSON1 I think myself that the computers could help u. With a lot of thing like my teacher gave my class some homework and we had to find facts about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the @NUM1. And if it wasn't for the computer I wouldn't know nothing about @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the @NUM1. Plus the computer could help u find long lost family remembers because when my grandfather die my mother finded her sister on the computer. Plus on the computer I could find out about others states that I dont know about and the computer could teach u about a lot of thing my mother and teacher can't teach @CAPS5. Nah @CAPS6 just saying computers could teach u abt of things that people don't know about.,3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10633,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it makes the story a happy ending how she doesn’t give up and is taking the test again. Also she doesn’t want to disappoint her mom she wants to make her happy and give the test a second chance.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15891,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, there were numerous obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle being that the architects could not have a mooring mast on top of the building because the dirigible would be, ""... held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). This would cause the building to have to weak of a frame from the dirigible's load, as well as the wind pressure. Then the stress would be transmitted down to the foundation of the building. As a result, the building's frame was modified, costing ""Over sixty thousand dollars'"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). Another obstacle was designing the mooring mast, so passengers could be brought, ""... down to the eighty-sixth floor, where baggage and ticket areas would be located"" (@CAPS1 @NUM3). In order for this to be completed, builders had to complete the roof. Lastly, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the moor mast was nature itself"" (@CAPS1 @NUM4). When the winds came into action at the top of the building, the dirigible would swivel around the mast. This would cause a safety hazard for pedestrians on the street. The Mooring Mast, supported many reasons as to the obstacles builders had to face in attempting to allow dirigible to dock at the Empire State Building.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17882,7,"d time I was patient was when we where going to disocy w orkerd for the first time and l was very excited ! We only bad one week left to wait to go .But I couldn’t wait that long l thought l waited long enough to, and I wanted to go at moment.  Even thought I had to wait still bad a fon time a disrey word I juss had to be patient!",6,6,,12,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4737,2,"I think that everyone has the right to hate or abhor cetian works but only the author of the work has the right to take it off of the shelf. The reason that just anyone can not take a work off the shelf is if the one person hates the work but everyone else likes it then imanenge how the people who like the work must feel when they hear it was distroyed.     Can you think of how the author of any work would feel if thousands of their works were being distroyed without any thought to others? I can and I feel horible just thinking about it so I belive that is the reason that only the creator of anything should make the disicion if their work should be saved or distroyed.     With these reasons that I have shaired with you please consider how everyone feels before you destroy anything if it is a book, movie, song, or even a childs dreams think about how thet would feel if anything of theirs was distroyed.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10045,4,With the hibiscus around Saeng she will have more courage and also have had more time to adapt in their new home. For Saeng the hibiscus is like motivation and it also reminds her. Of her old homeland. The reason I think the author choose to end the story with the paticular comment is to show that Saeng had in the end found courage and is ready to accept her tasks in this foreign land.  ,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13125,5,"There are many ways the mood was created by the author in the memoir. One way the mood was created by the author in the memoir was by the author's past memories. An example of this was ""passionate Cuban music (which I adored to this day) filled the air."" This supports the idea that the mood was created by the author in the memoir because culture music came from the author's memories, which is the mood. Another way the mood was created by the author in the memoir was by the author's opinions of the memories. An example of this was in paragraph @NUM1 ""(and for which I am eternally grateful)."" This supports the idea that the mood was created by the author in the memoir because the author expressed their opinions in there own way which set the mood.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18354,7,"One time when I was patient I was playing a football game with my friends and the other team was creaning us. But even though we were losing I still managed to stay calm and we ended up beating them, @NUM1",5,6,,11,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6469,3,In the story the cyclist is afected by setting because in the @NUM1 paragraph it talks about him seeing the old water pump and how he was trying to get water out. At the end of the story he gets angry when he sees the old welches juice factory because he relizes that the old men didn’t know what they were talking about. Also at the end he is realived when he finds Gary and @ORGANIZATION1 because there is water there. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15029,6,"There were several obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One major problem was the stress added to the building's frame when the dirigible wore it at the top of the building. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" This meant that they would have to rearrange the frame to make it work. Consequently, the workers were never able to accomplish the goal. Safety was a major factor in the failure to dock dirigibles at the @ORGANIZATION1 dirigibles were highly flammable which could have caused a serious accident to occur. However, the ""greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" @CAPS1 there were heavy air currents above the building, it would cause the dirigible to ""swivel around"" when attached to the mooring mast. There was also an existing law that prohibited planes to fly low over city areas, which of making impossible for dirigibles to reach the building. As a result of all these obstacles, the main goal to dock dirigibles was not achieved.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10239,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows her determination. Saeng is having problems with both adjusting and adapting to the changes in her new life. we see an example of this when Saeng comes home with her flower, “she found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again.” we see that Saeng bought the flower because it made her feel securit. It was something from home that felt familiar to her and I believe thats why she included the story with this paragraph because next year she will have a sense of security and familiarity when taking the test because the experience she had will be making again.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12483,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" there is a certain mood created by the author which makes the story interesting. It has a playful tone with a warm and loving mood. ""@PERSON2"" is about how his mother and father immigrated from cuba in 1956. They moved into a simple house when Narciso was born. Throughout the years, ""this simple house"" turned into a home"" (paragraph @NUM1). The house was filled with the loving family and special friends turning it into something special in Narciso's life, a home. How close his family and friends were added to the relevence of the home. ""It was the warmth in the kitchen in this humble house where a cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"" (paragraph @NUM1). This shows how special the house was to him. This feeling also adds to the mood because of the appreciation shown. It was where I learned the real definition of 'family'."" (paragraph @NUM1) The memories from the home make the mood loving and warm.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1199,1,"Computers are helpful in everyone's life. New things can be learned from them. They can provide a way to contact others. And they make writing a lot easier. Overall, they have a good effect on the world. Technology lets everyone explore new topics. If something is typed into @ORGANIZATION1, results will pop up within seconds. Click on these, and information that is needed is displayed. The computer is also helpful for research papers. The internet allows a more elaborate final draft. Learning benefits a grade in school or in work. It is always good to be able to contact anyone who is wanted. With the computer, people are abel to @CAPS1, talk on @CAPS2, or even talk to a loved one on a webcam. On @CAPS2, pictures be added so anyone who wasn't able to be at an event can now see what is was like. Webcams hooked up to the computer let people talk face to face with someone else they might not have seen in months. These are all good examples of why computers have a positive impact on the human race. Writing out papers can be a hard, tedious task. On the computer, it is possible to type out words and not have to get out on eraser for an spelling mistakes. These are picked up by spell check. This way, no points are deducted for wrong spellings. Sometimes people @MONTH1 have sloppy handwriting. These dificulties can all be solved by a typing program on the computer. Therefore computers must have a positive effect on people. They teach new things. They allow people to contact others who are far away. They can also make grading a paper easy. This concludes that computers benefit the society we live in today.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
984,1,"Dear local newspaper, I agree that computers benefit us totaly. This lets people explore the world and do anything. Also, computers are used for many things. Last but not least @NUM1 out of every @NUM2 households have at least one computer. So computers lets us do anything and everything. It helps most people with their jobs, college/school, and you can even buy a house or car online. It doesn't cost that much and its very usefull. You can look up facts you need or even play games when your bored. It keeps us in touch with the world. Also, many thing require a computer. For example, In order to play xbox live you need a computer with @CAPS1. Xbox live lets you play video games with other people or even your friends. Some homework requires computers and some colleges are only on the computer so you can stay at home. Anything you need you can find it on the computer. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 house hold have computers, or @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 does. I agree that some people waste their time, but without computers everything would be much harder. For example, say you need to having to wait @NUM5 days for the mail. Just @CAPS2-mail it. Most people wouldn't have a job if it weren't for computers. It saves peoples time and lets them do other things except have to drive somewhere to give a letter to them. So I think computers are a huge benefit. Like I said you can do anything. Like @CAPS3. It keeps you in touch with friends if your on vacation from school. They are also used for several different things like downloading music on your @CAPS4. Also, @CAPS5 everyone has a computer. If scientists are going to complain about computers than why do they use them? I think computers are great! But whats you opinion?",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9996,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19106,7,"When I think about patience, I usually think of my mom, and how tolerant and understanding she is. Even when she has explained something to me about @NUM1 times and I still don’t understand, she helps me without complaining. A good example of this is when she and my dad taught me how to ride a bike. @CAPS1 was the @DATE1 time and I was about five years old. My dad was at work and my mom and I were bored, so she went into the garage and pulled out my new bike. My dad had told me that you needed turn the handlebars before you crashed, but I kept forgetting and falling down. Devestated that @CAPS1 wasn’t easy, I gave up a little bit after. Now, though, my mom gently persuaded me to try again. Holding on to the bike, she told me to pedal. She let go, and yelled, “turn! Turn!” but @CAPS1 was no use. I turned the wrong way and toppled over on the grass. “@CAPS1’s okay. You almost had @CAPS1!” mom said rushing over to me. Putting on a brave face, I tried again. Over and over, I tried to ride my bike. Not once getting mad at me, mom helped me up. On my one last try before @CAPS1 was time to go back in the house, my mom let go and I rode all by myself, around the corner and back! When I got back, we both did little dances, my mom congratulated me, and we called my dad to brag about my new accomplishment. To me, my mom showed patience that day. She didn’t let me give up and she never complained. Overall, my mom is a perfect example of patience, and because of that, she taught me how to ride a bike!",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18680,7,"Patience. What is patience? Patience is waiting for something calmly. Its waiting for the right time to propose, or ask her on a date. Life is going to be hard unless your patient. You need to be patient when getting a job.",3,5,,8,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19092,7,My story of when I was patient was when me and my family were going to the monster jam. It was one of the most exciting things of my life. But the trip there was almost @NUM1! then it took half an hour to find a place to park. Then eleast @NUM2 minutes for my moms friends to show up. And finally an hour in line. Last but not leas @NUM3 minutes to find our seat! thank you for listening to  my report about patience and sitting through it!,7,8,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18294,7,"Patience is the key to tolerating trouble, problems, and helps you to not make tragic mistakes. You need to be patient when you even ??? a challenge in your life. Without patience, nothing would stop you from rushing into a situation with an unfocused mindset. If you try to deal with something without the necessary amount of patience, you’re quite likely to make a crucial mistake and/or degrade your chances of succeeding and reaching goal(s). In situations such as sports games arguments, disaster, and many other occurrances, patience will indeed come in handy. When playing sports, being patient will be helpful when you’re waiting to get playing time, when your team is behind, and when your teammates aren’t doing their correct jobs and responsibilities on the team. Having patience, overall, will most likely help your team execute smooth, and by respecting sharing your opinion as well. Ultimately, this will help you sort out the situation a little more smoothly. During a disaster such as a house-fire or when dealing with tornado damage, being patient allows you to sort out all the things that you’ve lost, and you’ve enable to think clearly a bait what has just happened I’ve experienced a house fire so I know that being patient is a great way to handle and live through such a situation. Overall, I guess what I’m trying to say is that when you’re patient you experience difficulties without complaining. Right now, you @MONTH1 not think that this applies to you, but honestly, I can guarantee you that life isn’t a “bundle of roses” all the time, so soon or later, you’re going to need to use patience. Waiting carefully for things to happen usually isn’t human nature but its indeed a necessity in everyday life. So we all need to recognize the fast importance of patience, so we all can live better lives, I’m certainly not implying that we need to hurry up and learn this trait, no, we simply need to learn it patiently.",9,7,,16,,,,0.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
540,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @PERCENT1 of the world say that computers are a good way to interact with people, learn about forgien people and places and also learn about where your family came from. So here I am going to inform you about the good reasons why computers should stay in our society. How do you meet people from different countries? One way is interacting with different people all over the world. I am saying this because the internet has a lot of benifits in meeting people. One way is to make a certain account where you can meet people who aim or a different account. Another way is go on a website where you can pen-pal someone from a different place in the world. The final way is to download something where they can send instant messages to people all over the world. Do you have a project where you to learn about another country or another explorer? Well you can use the computer to learn about the place or the person. I am saying this because that will helps us with all the work we do for school. Computers also help you with your school work by helping you with homework. I am saying this because with nobody home when nobody there when you come home from school who is going to help you with your homework you can use a website that helps you understand the material better. Do you know where your family comes from? A way you can find out with your family come from is use a website to find where your family comes from. For example, @LOCATION1 is a helpful website to learn who they really were in life, were they fight in a war. You can find this all out on the computer. Another way is you can ask your parents the name of someone and type there name in google.com. There are many reasons why we should could keep computers but here are some, interact with people, learn about other places and learn about family. I hope you understand this better.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15743,6,"If the Empire State Building were to dock dirigibles, there would be many problems in the way. They had a lack of landing area for an almost one-thousand foot blimp. This dirigible being held by a single tether to the Empire State Building would put a large amount of stress on the building's structure risking a possible collapse if continued. If they were to use the Empire State Building, They would have to modifiy it and use thousands of dollars in the process. Even then if the dirigible held onto the Building, the back of the blimp would sway with the high winds and that might risk the safety of the passengers. All in all the idea of landing a dirigible on a gigantic building is just a bad idea",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13275,5,In the memoir the author made a certain mood. The mood he made was loving and very alive. He constructed the mood of love in paragraph @NUM1 where he talks about the memories of his house always filled with comforting aroma of food and the passionate cuban music playing.  It also where he talks about how the memory of his home having the congregation of family and friends as the back drop of their warm home. Another example of the mood of love is in paragraph @NUM2 where he talks about how he was always surrounded by love ones during meals. He constructed mood of life in paragraph @NUM2 as well because he talks of how his house always became a sanctuary to his extended family member who lived with them until they got back on their feet. This gives the mood a sense of life because of all the people who have lived there. In conclusion this is the mood created by the author Narciso Rodriguez in his memoir.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18661,7,"About @NUM1 weeks ago I order a look series at border online, I had to be very patient so it would feel like @NUM2 year of waiting. This book series was not like any book series @CAPS1 books are my favorite book they’re call the @LOCATION1 series. I have read the series @NUM1 times and I am still reading them. But, I had to wate to get them. I trying to patient, but it was hard. The mailing date said in less than @NUM4 hour. I had to wate for @NUM5 day before it a came, When I forget about them they come! Being patient is a good qulatie people can have. So if your  patient you will probably get what you want.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14995,6,"In the short story, ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles when building the mask. The entire steel frame of the Building would have had to be strengthened to hold the weight of the mast. The mast, which towered at over @NUM1 feet tall, would have stressed the steel frame of the Building, making its foundation weaker. To hold the mast, ""Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" This meant that the builders had to really think through the process of how they were going to get the mast to not bend the steel frame. Another obstacle the builders faced was a new law that forbid airships from flying too low over urban areas, such as New York. Therefore, ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the Building or even approach the area. ""Because of this law, the mast was very rarely used. Regardless of what they tried, the builders would have to make big changes to the Empire State Building's framework in order to have the mast. However, the new law prevented airships from docking there, so the mast was not used as often as originally projected. The mast did help make the Empire State Building the largest building in the world at 1,250 feet, but it forced strengthening and fixing of the building's framework, and the mask was not used as much as the builders thought.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9843,4,"The author concludes the story using that paragraph for a few reasons. One reason why is because the change in Saeng‘s attitude. In the beginning of the story Saeng is upset and has no hope of adjusting to her new home, but by adding that paragraph at end of the story it shows that she has hope, and she’s not going to give up. Another reason why this paragraph concludes the story is to show that life does go on in toughest situation. The fact that a new season will begin figuratively shows Saeng will not always feel this way that she too will change. In conclude the story with that paragraph for a few good reasons.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6421,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist because it just looks like he is on the highway as in the desert riding his motorcycle or bike and it does look like hes coming or going on a vacation and because of the way hes riding it it seems hes going real fast as about to fall.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10343,4,"In “Winter Hibiscus” the author @CAPS1 sentence is “When they come back Saeng vowed silently to herself, in spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"".. I think the rememberence of home will help her take the test. She use to the geese and plant to remind her of home and by having these surroundings makes her comfortable",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1321,1,"Dear newspaper readers, @CAPS1 this! Sitting at home on the couch eating a bag of potato chips. The @CAPS2 shows a beautiful picture of the @LOCATION1 you can almost feel the rain falling on you, you really want to learn more about it. All of a sudden you watch the remote fall to the ground you hand eye coordination is so bad you totally miss it when you try to grab it. On top of that, you remember you were supposed to meet your sister today who you seen for years but you can’t! if you had a computer you would be to learn about more places and people, it would improve your hand eye coordination, and you could interact with people without having time to meet them! Computers definitely have good effects on people! First, computers help to improve hand-eye coordination. It is a fact that people who own one or more computers in a household have better hand-eye coordination than people without computers! Don’t you want good hand-eye coordination too? As a matter of fact, my friend @PERSON4 had the worst hand-eye coordination in our school, now that her parents have bought her a computer, she is a lot quicker and definitely has better hand-eye coordination. She said that just looking at the screen and she wanted to go helped a lot. Also, computer time can states that computers have been proven to improve hand-eye coordination in the course of a year. that sounds pretty simple to me! Next, computers also  allow people to learn about other faraway places and people. Local middle school teacher, @PERSON2, uses computers to teach her students about the @CAPS3 culture and geography. That sounds a lot more interesting than just talking! My cousins saw an article about @LOCATION3 once and they thought it was amazing they learned a lot about the culture there and actually took a trip there! Furthermore, vacations.com says that computers are the #@NUM1 cause of people traveling, because they see pictures and articles about places. You can learn about any place you want on a computer, doesn’t that sound nice? I’m sure there is one place you’ve always wanted to learn about! Finally, computer allow people to interact with other people around the world You can talk with your long lost friend who lives in @LOCATION2 just by the click to the mouse,(send). In a recent study, over @PERCENT1 of people just talk online to their friends rather than going out to meet them. How convenient! Also, expert computer teacher, @PERSON1, says, “Computers are geat inf you can't meet someone, you just talk online”. Have you ever needed to cancel a meeting? Computer are really beneficial to busy people. Now readers, @CAPS1, your sitting on that same couch you look at the @CAPS2 to see @LOCATION1, you quickly type it into your laptop and an article right in front of you read more about it learning something new in every paragraph. All of a sudden you lose your grip, but you catch your laptop just in time, what hand-eye coordination! Then you remember you were supposed to meet you sister @PERSON3, but you have a hair appointment. You quickly tell her via computer you cant meet her. She says it’s alright and you guys keep chatting it all worked out! It’s so simple! Computers teach hand-eye coordination, let you learn about more places, and interact with more people. So what are you doing readers? Get out there and get a computer.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17879,7,"I am patient every year @CAPS1 one specil day to come. My birthday ??? ??? @NUM1 was a specil day @CAPS1 my mom and dad, @NUM2 boy my mom ever had @NUM3 boy my dad had. I am still wating @CAPS1 my brithday to come again.",4,3,,7,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6167,3,"To begin with a feature that affect the cyclist was a lack of water this is shown when the speaker says when I tried a drop or two, it had the flavor of battery acid-thats was one of the biggest factors he had risked. ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6518,3,The features of the setting affected the cycalist in many bad ways. For example in the text it says how “I eased past trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state”. Meaning that he had trouble being in a place he didn’t know well of and he was dehydrated. In conclusion the setting did affect the cyclist.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4669,2,"Do you believe that certain materials, such as books, movies, or music should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive? I do believe so. The reason why is because there can be a lot of books, movies, or magazines in certain places like the library or stores that can involve offensive stuff, such as violence or other bad things. A lot of things can influence to the reader if they read a book that is offensive or if a kid see's a movie that involves violence.     One reason I think that books should be removed from the shelves is if they are found offensive  because what if the reader is reading the book and they find a word that offends them? Or what if they read a book and it talks about bad stuff? Or maybe a kid can read a book and can learn bad stuff. A lot of things can just occurr while reading a book. And many people sometimes take it real offensive if the book talks about there religion, race, or anything that involves to there personal life. That's why I think books should be removed off the shelf, so people will not get offended.     Another reason will have to be that if a kid or someone under age rents a movie or there parents rent the movie. Then the kid would probably want to see the movie and they would not know what the movie is about. The kid might see something that is bad or might see a lot of violence. Sometimes parents don't really realize what there kid's are watching. So it's important for them to learn and watch for there kids. In movie's anyone can  see a lot of bad thing that can effect anyone or can offend anyone. So I think that they should not have certain  movies on the  shelves that can harm or offend certain family or parents, espicially there kids.     Magazines can also be found offensive to a lot of people. Whenever you go to the store you always see magazines on the shelves or somewhere else. It's either talking about singers, people divorcing, violence that ocurr around the world, arrests, or it could even have bad images that anyone could see. Which would be something bad, especially if a little kid picks up a magazine that has soemthing bad inside. That's why they shouldnt have magazines that have bad stuff in public. Or adults shouldn't buy certain type of magazines because they never know what there child can expect to see.          So there is a lot of reasons why I think that people should remove certain book, movies, magazines, or anything that involves offensive stuff. All around the world you will see stuff that can offend you or anyone else just by seeing something on a movie, by listening to a song, or even my reading a book. It's just not a good idea of having stuff out there like that in certain places, like the library, stores, or anywhere else. Especially if there is people that take it really offensive when they see a title of a book that is bad or when they hear a song that has a lot of bad words. It's just wrong having stuff like that that can offend a lot of people. What if I read a book and it talks about my race or religion, would I take it offensive? People should ask themself that, before they read a book or see a movie. So they will decide whether or not they should have books, magazines, or music removed from the shelves.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1450,1,"Click click, another information page opens up on your handy @LOCATION4 these trusty, smart, and easy to use divices are always a object to have. Although, people are now starting that these handy desktops are bad for your well-being oposing that people strongly think that we dont get enough exercise or outdoor activitys in. Well computers are such a great entertainment system also, have a vast information supplie, and even allow socialization with friends/ family. I don't understand why they say this. So let me express my love for computers to you. Televisions, radios, and @NUM1 payers are no match for the internet and it's great wide spread entertainment system. The computer has all of the faimly fun movies, itunes tracks, and even websites where you could make your own movies. Posting pictures on the @CAPS1 and sending them via email only by a click of your mouse. The internet is the obvious best reason for a faimly movie night. One of the greatest pro about the internet is the vividsorce of information. Google, wikipedia, or even dictionary.com are the greatest information sites of the @DATE1. As much as nature watching and exercise is healthy and fun I would rather learn about a sunny beach of @CAPS2 or the great landscape of @LOCATION1. If your looking up how to tie a tie or even info about your history report the @CAPS3 is a sure easy thing. How could you talk to your friend who is across the world in @LOCATION2 or germany. The answer is simple, skype, fiacebook, myspace and more are all available on your handy @CAPS3. Many sites have a no fee polocy so they cant charge them money for social living with friends. As a personal experience I could now talk to my cousins wqho live in @LOCATION3 and @LOCATION1 due to the great interaction site of facebook. And why would you take the time to run across town to be unsure that thier even there. Obviously internet is a great socializing activity. Now that I have stated my opinion about the wonderful effect of the internet such as the entertainment system, information about the history of the world, and even the socializing with friends. I'm people will open thier eyes see the great uses of the computer.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18542,7,"@CAPS5 @CAPS1 @CAPS2 loved playing various games with her younger brother @PERSON1 @CAPS2! One day when she was playing sorry with @PERSON1, sadly @PERSON1 was taking an unpleasable amount of time on his turn. @CAPS5 was getting extremely angry at @LOCATION1 for taking so long. So @CAPS5 started scream. As you can imagine when @CAPS5 and @PERSON1’s @CAPS8 @PERSON2 heard this she ran to @CAPS5 and @PERSON1. She questioned @CAPS5 with a worried look on her face. She said to @CAPS5 “@CAPS5 dear, what are screaming about? I sure hope your not screaming at @PERSON1!” “@CAPS4 I was, but that’s only because @PERSON1 won’t hurry up!” @CAPS5 exclaimed. “@CAPS4 @CAPS5 says sorry to @PERSON1 then for being so sour and not letting him take his time. He’s younger then you, which means he doesn’t know any better.” @CAPS8, @PERSON2, exclaimed forcefully.”  I’m so sorry @PERSON1!” @PERSON3 said with a tear trickling down her cheak. So they gave each others hugs, and went on patiently with their game of sorry.",11,12,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21272,8," I have heard people say that a smile makes a big difference in a first meeting, a relationship, or just walking past people on the street. If someone has had a bad @CAPS2, not only should a smile make it better, but also some laughter along to accompany that sincere smile. I enjoy walking down the street on a nice, beautiful @CAPS2 and walking by locals I know that smile, laugh, and give a little wave to show that they are enjoying the @CAPS2 as much as I am. Walking past someone I @MONTH1 not know also has its positives. One look to see their face can tell me if they are having a good @CAPS2 or a bad @CAPS2. Either way, I give a smile. A smile to show that it is a good @CAPS2 or a smile of encouragement to let them know it will get better. I enjoy the feeling I get @CAPS12 I meet someone and I know that we connected great. A good first impression is very important for me because it can determine how the friendship will go and how long it can last. I now know that I enjoy being around someone like me who enjoys to smile and laugh. I can't really seem to see myself around a serious person and I know if I was, we would clash and have problems because I am loud and if they are serious, there would be problems and not be able to collaborate on decisions.  @CAPS12 I first met my friend @CAPS1, I was nervous and scared because we were set up as a blind date by a mutual friend. It was a @ORGANIZATION1's @CAPS2 double date with our friend and my cousin. @CAPS12 the guys first picked us, I got into the car and the first thing that I remember was seeing a big smile on this guy's face. I ended up getting more nervous and began to stutter as we started to talk. As the date went on, he seemed like a down to earth guy and always seemed to have a smile on his face and laughter seemed to flow right out of him. As time went on, we became closer than what I would have ever thought of. I was not sure where our friendship would lead us, but soon after, it became noticeable that he liked me and I liked him. We took it slow, not rushing into things. We had long conversations that would last us hours at a time and we always seemed to laugh about everything. He made everything seem better and better each and every time we talked. Pretty much having the same personality and both always smiling and laughing helped us connect right away.  Just the other night , @CAPS1 and @CAPS4, our mutual friend, came over to visit my cousin @PERSON1 and me at her house. We were all laughing and enjoying each others company @CAPS12 @CAPS4 and @PERSON1 decided to go to the store and buy some things using @CAPS1's car. Since they weren't going to be gone for long, @CAPS1 and I decided to wait inside. Minutes after that, as we sat, talking to each other, @CAPS4 and @PERSON1 run into the house looking flushed, out of breath, scared and nervous about something. @CAPS4 wouldn't look at us, so @PERSON1 told us to go outside, something had happened to the car. As we stood there, I realized that the car was no where in sight in the driveway, so I became suspicious. We asked them where the car was and they pointed to the road and in the dark all we could see was the faint outline of a car in the ditch. I was expecting @CAPS1 to get mad and say something to @CAPS4, who seemed to not know what to say, but instead he smiled, walked towards the car and said, ""@CAPS11't worry, the car is fine."" @CAPS12 he said that, he started laughing, his amazing laugh. I was still in the state of shock and so @CAPS12 I heard that laugh of his, I turned and looked at him, and realizing that he was happy and didn't seem to mind the accident, I began laughing as well and in less than @NUM1 seconds of him beginning to laugh, not only was it us four laughing, but also two of my other cousins that had joined us outside. Laughter made the situation better and I enjoyed the fact that we could all laugh about the smallest, the unexpected and the worst as well as the best. What also made me happy, was the fact that that very same night after the incident, @CAPS1 asked me the question I was hoping to hear and the way he said it made me laugh which then caused him to laugh. I answered his question with a hug and a yes and he brought out a banquet of roses. As we walked inside, my cousins and my aunt started to applaud and we all started to laugh with smiles on our faces.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10504,4,"The author concludes the story that way because one theme is to overcome obstacles. The hibiscus represents Saeng’s perseverence, and the last paragraph offers closure to the conflict that was introduced. The hibiscus is “strong enough to make ith through the cold months here… that is what matters,” this makes a connection between the plant and the author’s perseverence because of the symbolism. The last paragraph adds that symbolism with closure because she says she’ll wait until spring to take the test again.   ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
65,1,"Dear Newspaper, People are spending way too much time on the computer and it is not right. They should be excercising, and interacting with friends and family. Having a computer also distracts them from schoolwork. Computers normally have effects like this on the people that use them. Instead of sitting at the computer all @DATE1 people should be out getting exercise. The @LOCATION1 is one of the coubtries with the most overweight people. Many teenagers are inside all @DATE1 at the computer waiting for their friends screename to pop up so they can talk to them. They don't need to be completely gone, but while they're waiting for their friend they could be exercising. All they need to do is put on some fun music and start dancing around, that will get them the excercise they need for the @DATE1. They also could do ten pushups and twenty curlups, or even more if they wanted to. Instead of sitting at the computer all @DATE1 exercise. Having a computer effects the owner because they don't have a lot of face-to-face converstions with friends and family. You can call your friend up and have them come over your house instead. If they can be at home on the computer for hours then they probably can hang out in real life. Instead of videochatting with your cousins in another state, lan for them to come visit you guys one @DATE1. That way you can actually talk to them and see what they're doing to. You could also play board games, hide and seek, etc. It is much more fun to be with someone in real life, then to talk with them online. The last but deffidently not least effect that computers have on peoples lives is it distracts them from school. Once you start talking with one of your friends, it's pretty hard to stop. Many people don't know how to stop so they don't do the homework they were supposed to do, or they didn't study for the big test the @DATE1, therefore they end up failing it. Some kids will do homework and a on the computer at the same time, the homework is probably wrong because they weren't concentrating on it hard enough. Having a computer effects your life in many different ways, some positive and some negative. Some ways are it ""stops"" you from exercising, it doesn't let you have face-to-face interaction with friends and family and it distracts many kids from school.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3013,2,"A book represents a person's beliefs and feelngs about a topic. Therefore censoring books is wrong because it goes against freedom of speech. I do not believe books, or other media should be removed because while it @MONTH1 be offensive, if it is the truth about something then we need to read about it to prevent tragedies from happening again. A person who finds a topic offensive isn't forced to read about it. If we do not accept other people beliefs, we are just as prejudice as the books we are trying to censor.      Many books that are threatened by censorship are books about historical facts, such as the holocaust. I think we have the right to know about important events. For one reason, if we forget about such things, than they are more likely to be repeated. Do we really want the murder of millions of people to be repeated? Just becaused we are ashamed of something dosen't mean we should sweep it under the carpet where it can lay hidden waiting to stike again like a hungry alligator. Instead books about prejudice events should be kept out to show an example of how we shouldn't act.     While some books are censored because of shame, some are censored because a certain group of people @MONTH1 find it offensive. There is a much easier solution that censoring those books. The offended groups should just ignore the book. If it is offensive in the first place then no one should be forced to read it. The book shouldn't be forced in any other way like posters, and television broadcast. It should be kept in a certain section of a library so parties wishing to avoid it can.     The main reason for a book to be censored in the first place is because someone finds in offensive. However, isn't keeping someone from saying something just as offensive? To @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 is a big target for censorship, but it is about treating everyone fairly. If that book like that was censored, it would be like saying some people are better than others. Another big target for censorship in some countries is the @CAPS3. Censoring that book would basically tell the @CAPS4 population that they are wrong.     Censoring something is wrong. Not only could it cause sad events to repeat themselves, offended parties can just simply avoid the book. While some books offend people, censoring a book can be just as offensive to other parties. The simplest thing to do is to leave it up to the reader to decid if they should read it, or not.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
269,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, yes, I do believe that for too many people are 'addicted' to the computer, and spread more than enough time on the computer everyday! Not only teenagers but the children and youth have fall into trap of the computer. As I grew up in my younger years I hated the computer all I wanted to do was go outside and play. As I became older I used the computer way more often than I did before I now believe the computer takes time away from family time to get the sitting down to read a good book and hanging out with friends. Insteed of all those fun interacting activities people decide to go on facebook, myspace, twitter, youtube, addicting games, and whatever else they could find. I do not agree with that being sluck to the computer like is to chese. No! If there was our thing in the world that would keep parents and children together, it isn't the computer. Computers distracts kids and teenagers from doing other things in life, also it doesn't follow families to be a family. Before computers were made all people bad was their family. Coming home from school saying ""@CAPS3 dad, home from school. What t go play see catch""? Instead of that kids come home from school to see if @CAPS4 replied to your facebook message. Computers also cutt off interacting time that families always and to have. @DATE1 @TIME1 instead of talking to @CAPS5 myspace, why don't you grab and plays family board game! Or go out to on restaurant, talk about your next vacation and what you'd be interseted doing go to the same field have a game, or to your local base ball field and play kickball, instead of sitting there mesmerized by the computer screen! Okay, I @MONTH1 understand that some people just @MONTH1 not like to go out and play or engage in physical exercise and that is totally understandable that is still no excuse for sitting at the computer and a book. Reading is yet fun but it is also , with out being in school! As you read your brain to inner works, you or your so you can show off to you friends out family on words that you . It is shown that @PERCENT1 of strints who read . Not the @PERCENT2 who sit at the computer all day writing reply .",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6522,3,"Features of the setting would affect me if I was the cyclist because, I would be thinking I was going to die just like he did because, there is nothing to look at, no breeze, wind, he seen a snake, he had no water. He went through three towns that had nothing. The sun was setting down on him, it was hot, he had no hope. Who knows, maybe if he would have just went with what the map had said, he would have been fine.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20768,8,"                          Laughter @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 ""@CAPS5, we've got something to tell @CAPS3."" I knew @CAPS9 they were about to tell me. I saw the signs. I knew that @CAPS8 they went into the other room, @CAPS6 wasn't for some quality time together. They were getting a divorce @CAPS11 the time to tell me had come. As each of my parents gathered around me, I knew that they were about to say something I wasn't ready to hear. The words ""We are getting a divorce,"" rang in my head like church bells @CAPS8 a couple is getting married. The happiest sound @CAPS3 could ever hear. But that was the exact opposite of @CAPS9 was going on right now. As I looked up into the face of my mother, I could tell she had been crying. Where the blue, gray mixture used to meet @CAPS11 become one, @CAPS6 had turned red @CAPS11 irritated. @CAPS6 killed me inside to see her crying, @CAPS11 while this was happening my dad just sat on the couch near me with his head buried in his hands. I could tell that he was thinking that he was so in love @CAPS11 that @CAPS6 all just went downhill, leaving him with an intense feeling of resentment @CAPS11 anger towards my mother. The love of his life, was now his enemy.  At seven I couldn't fully wrap my mind around @CAPS9 was happening to our family. I got that one parent would move away, that I wouldn't always get tucked into bed at night by a duo of love, I just didn't understand @CAPS7 this had to happen. My poor little brother. Only four, how could they possibly explain this to him. If I was confused, he had to of been off on another planet. At the thought of my family crumbling before my eyes, I wanted to cry. I wanted to go far, far away from the troubles occurring at home. If a genie had been there to grant my three wishes, I would of used all three of them if I thought there would be a possibility to save my parents relationship.  Crying just seemed so much easier than sitting in the living room listening to my parents say ,""@CAPS6's not your fault, don't blame yourself, this is between your father @CAPS11 I."" @CAPS7 did they think those statements made @CAPS6 better? Because @CAPS6 really didn't help. My parents had fallen out of love with each other, @CAPS11 the hope I had that they would get back together was diminishing faster than the amount of rain forest left in @LOCATION1. Plus, there was still the underlying factor that my home was broken. @CAPS11 more importantly than my home, my heart. @CAPS6 was broken @CAPS11 I didn't think there was enough super glue in the whole world to pull the pieces back together.  Just @CAPS8 @CAPS6 felt like the whole world was going to crash down upon me, my mother said something to me that I @CAPS1 never forget. ""@CAPS8 @CAPS3 feel like crying, laugh. Remember all the good times that we spent together as afamily."" One by one, each memory began to flood back into my mind. @CAPS8 dad jumped into the pile of leaves we had collectively raked. The time @CAPS8 mom @CAPS11 I made sugar cookies in the winter that ended up burnt, but still made the whole house feel warm @CAPS11 familiar. @CAPS11 especially the wedding that brought the two of them together in matrimony. That sacred bond that only ministers can ensue on people. The one that forever changed their lives @CAPS11 mine.  I began to laugh, @CAPS11 then to cry. My parents weren't sure @CAPS9 to think about my sudden change of emotion. They asked ,""@CAPS9's wrong, @CAPS10?"" @CAPS11 I, still thinking that none of these memories would be had again, I then realized something. I realized that even though my family wouldn't be together all the time, that we would still laugh. That @CAPS8 someone slipped on a piece of paper, @CAPS6 would be funny. My tears had stopped spewing out of my eyes like a dam in desperate need of repair, @CAPS11 the realization had finally set in that we would be okay. That with laughter in our lives, @CAPS11 memories in our hearts, we would survive this.  From then on, i solely believed in that one statement spoken to me by my mother. ""@CAPS8 @CAPS3 feel like crying, laugh."" The statement that said to me, @CAPS6's okay to be sad, but that as long as @CAPS3 have laughter in your life, everything @CAPS1 be alright. In my heart, I applauded my mom for handling that situation so well. If @CAPS6 had not been for her, I would of kept on with the water works @CAPS11 never stopped for just a second to think about all the hilarious times we had had together. So, as far as laughter goes, don't forget to just take a moment out of every day to remember each punch line to every corny joke, @CAPS6 @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4.",20,25,,45,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4683,2,"Public libraries should be able to keep all sorts of content for all sorts of people.     I feel very strongly about my statement, because everyone in this world is different. Many people have different interests, religons, and customs. If we took out certain books, and music from the library, it would defeat the purpose of calling it the public library. But if we had different sections of books, music, etc., people would be able to find what they want/need more easily, and no one would have to worry about getting offended.      It would not be fair to anyone in this world if we took out certain books and materials because one person had got offended.",2,2,,2,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1595,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 opinion on the effects computers have on people is they help make every day life easyier. First off, you can chat with people from long distances. Also, it makes home work, and finding information a lot easyier as well. Last but not least when you have nothing else to do, you can play games, and watch videos from online. One of the best things about computers is going online and chatting with @CAPS1 friends. Even if the are across the country, you can still chat with them, for free! Also, if you can't get in touch with them, you can send them a @CAPS2-mail, and as soon as they log on, they will get your message. Best of all, when you forget to write your home work down, you can go online, and ask one of your friend what it was. Besides talking to people, you can do your homework on a computer as well. All you have to do is make a word document, and type with the keys. Let me just say this is a lot better than having to write with a pencil. Not to mention, typing a paper is a lot neater. Also, if you are doing a report on something, all you have to do is look it up on the internet, and you'll get endless information about it, all on your computer! Last but not least, you can play games on your computer. Whenever someone is bored doing nothing they can just turn on a computer, and play their favorite game. Not only is it fun, but it teaches hand-eye coordination as well. Some people say they don't have the money for games, but little do they know, there are millions of free online games, that any age can play. This is great on a boring day when you have nothing else to do. In summary, the effects computers have on people is they help make everyday life easyier. You can chat with people from long distances, and it even makes home work much easyier to complete. Not to mention it has fun games for people to play when there bored, or have nothing to do. I strongly belive that computers have a positive effect on people, because of all the things they offer, and help us on. Thank you.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1243,1,"Dear all computer lovers, i do think you are all spending too much time on the computer. yes, it is good to go on the computer and learn new fact, watch funny videos, and also basicly everything is on the computer these days. But most people spend to much time on the computer. you need to be doing three things, enjoy nature spending time with family and friends and most importantly, exercise. In this letter I will be explaing why you need these things, wich you cant get on the computer. First, i will be explainig why it is important to enjoy nature. Sometimes, enjoying nature can be difficult but if we all look closer it can be really fun. Some examples of nature are trees, grass, the fresh air. But I am sure all of my fellow teenagers would agree that, that is very boring we would all rather sit and watch tv. Some examples of making of making nature fun is instead of looking at a boring tree, you can climb the tree and maybe you can go outside and play with your dog and lay in the grass. One example of my favorite things to do in nature, is when I say up all night I run outside very early and lay in the grass, breathe in the fresh air and watch the sun came up. Secondly, and every importanrt that you get off the computer and spend time with family and friends. Fa mily, can do @MONTH1 things with you and I know that I am very happy when I am with family because they always make me laugh and most importantly my family loves to party. Partys are always fun ecspecially when your are with family. Freinds are also great to be with because they make you laugh have adventures and are always there for you.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12260,5,"The mood created by the auther in the memoir is happyness because in the memoir it describes how many memories are in his house, and it is also happyness because he mentioned his family and friends, and how peacful it is Also because he describes that there was a @CAPS1 cuban music that filled the air. He also described were his house is and he loves cooking, and he describes it as a rich culenary cooking that he loves so much.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19327,7,"Patience, can you be patient? Some people are and some are and some  are not. Some time  I can not. Well hear is a story about patience. One time at school in the lunch line, it was long. It would bearl  move. I wanted lunch so bad I was not being patient. But for some resson my friend was being patient. I said to her why are you so patient? She said because everyone is going to be able to  get something to eat. I said yeah that is true. So I tryed to be patient and before I know it I was siting by my friends  talking and eating my food.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20833,8," Laughter is a great thing, except for some instances. We all have been there. Having a good time with friends, laughing and making new memories. Then you take a drink of something and start laughing again. Next thing you know you're choking and can't breathe. You're coughing as much as you can, trying to stop. It's not only a little embarrassing, but it can get a little awkward too. You can't stop it, you just have to let nature take its course. Everyone stares, asking if you're alright. The moment feels like forever, and that was exactly how I felt. I have two best friends, @CAPS1 and @PERSON1. It was during the @DATE1 and we decided to have ourselves a little movie night at @ORGANIZATION3's house. We were fully prepared with candy, soda pops, and the best of all, pizza. It all added up for a great night. We decided to watch the movie @ORGANIZATION1. It's all of our favorites, I don't think we could ever grow tired of it. @CAPS1, @PERSON1 and I found comfortable seating arrangements and started to watch the movie. We were eating, laughing hard-core and making comments along with it. We were having a great time. Then I decided to take a drink of my @ORGANIZATION2. I was about to swallow it, but just my luck, one of the funniest parts in the movie was on. I started to laugh and knew I had an issue. I put my cup on the table, quickly got off the couch, and took two steps when most of the @LOCATION1 in my mouth came flying out onto the floor. I couldn't breathe and was now coughing, so I kept running to my destination, the kitchen sink. I was about two feet away from the sink, I was so close! Then I felt something come up my mouth that I couldn't control. I wasn't going to open my mouth, it'd be all over the floor! I was so grossed out I basically threw myself at the sink. My mouth opened and there went the puke, into the sink. I continued to cough, wondering when it would it would all end. ""@CAPS2 you okay?!"" @CAPS1 ran into the kitchen and started hitting my upper back, trying to help me out. @CAPS5 hit me three times, then I could finally breathe again. ""@CAPS4 you, I was having a hard time."" @CAPS5 started laughing, while I was still disgusted with the nasty taste left in my mouth. I put my head under the faucet trying to clear it out a little. I grabbed a towel, and we made our way to the living room. We entered the room to find @PERSON1 sitting on the couch, laughing hysterically. @CAPS1 sat by her, and started to giggle a little along with her. I got on my knees and started wiping up the @ORGANIZATION2 spill on the floor. There wasn't too much, but still a good amount. I started to chuckle a little to myself while cleaning it up. I thought to myself, ""@CAPS6 must I always be the one to choke?"" ""@CAPS6 didn't you just go to the bathroom sink? I mean it's right there!"" @PERSON1 was pointing to the door and still laughing. ""I didn't think of that! I just ran for the kitchen!"" I've been to her house plenty of times before, but the bathroom slipped my mind. I laughed at how much of a blond moment I had just had. ""@CAPS8 my gosh,"" @CAPS5 laughed a little then continued, ""@CAPS9 me of @CAPS10! When I saved you!"" ""@CAPS11 up and watch the movie!"" I told her jokingly. @CAPS5 finished laughing and we were enjoying the movie in peace again. They both still tease me about that, but I don't mind. It just goes to show you the things laughter can unexpectedly bring.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6190,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist, because there are no cars, building, water, or people in sight. It goes from flat road to rolling hills. Even though he had no water he was determined to keep pedeling. “Rough road Ahead, do not exceed posted speed limit” At this point he had no water left and he was pretty much in the middle of nowhere. If I was in his situation I would feel hopeless. There was no sign of hope. He just saw endless rolling hills and that was all. Then when he saw the building over the hills he thought he was home free. So he pedeled up to the building, and that with all the others was abandoned. The cyclist thought he was going to die. In conclusion the features of the setting greatly affected the cyclist because seeing nothing gives him no hope. If he had cars and buildings on both sides of him that probably would have give him some confidence but that was not the case. He is in the middle of nowhere. He finally came to bend and say “Then, as easily as randing a bend my troubles, thirst, and fear were all behind me.”",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12061,5,"The mood created in this memoir is very homebound. How the parents turned the ""simple house"" into the ""traditional Cuban home"" was shocking. The parents played the ""Passionate Cuban music."" and ""a love of cooking"" helped create a family mood, and it showed how much they love their heritage. ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relitave. This family loved spending time w/ eachother, and celebrating. Over all, the mood is loving, happy, and caring.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18622,7,"This is my story about patience. I go to the doctors every @NUM1 months. Me, my brothers and my sister and it takes about @NUM2 to @NUM3 hours. When the doctor ask my brothers questions when he says then I am already coming up with my answer and then its my turn, but before my turn @NUM4 sce the doctor I was ireally patient. Then it took the doctor @NUM5 minutes for my turn to be done and over with. Then he has to talk to my mom that comes my time with lls. When we do to the doctor or dentist we and really patient but it takes time for the doctor or dentist to do what they need to do.",4,7,,11,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17996,7,"The time  I was patience was when I snowbling with my family .Because my dad and I h ave to get them wormed and get them  off the trailar and start them  and he has to ride one around and get us a track and  I ride be hind him on the other sled and I muc to get the snow geon on and that is not ,we go to my aunt and house in @LOCATION1 ,I’ve been to a lot of places on the sleds .",7,4,,11,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10064,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows he determination. In the spring it will be hard for the hibiscus to survive because its a winter hibiscus and it also has determination.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3976,2,"Censorship?     Have you ever been looking for a book and not being able to find it? Have you ever gone to a library and the magazine you were looking for was behind everything else on the top shelf? Well if you have, you have experienced censorship. Censorship is where things are sheltered from the the light of day. A specific place of censorship is with books and magazines at libraries.     Most people today are worried about offensive things on and in books or magazines. A big question I ask is why? Well I can tell you why. Most people of today are too afraid of what other people think. Everything and everyone has to be perfect. I strongly disagree with this because if someone writes a book, they should not be afraid to put something in it because of what other people have to think about it. If they do not like it, then do not read it.     I do not think that things should be sheltered from libraries because sometimes it can get a point across to some people. If there is a article up on a shelf and it has an appealing image on it, you are going to stop and read it . If it has a good message to send to you will think about it. Then once you have thought about it, you will make your own opinion on what that article said. If you have a positive opinion you might go pick that magazine up and read it. If you have a negative opinion on what it said then you will not even look at the next time you go by there.     If you think that something is too bad for eyes of other people then so be it. That is your opinion and you have all of the right to it. I will not dislike you for your opinion and I will not look at you any differently. The only thing I hope is that I got my point across to you.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4145,2,"Freedom to chose is something every person can have, such as what type of clothes you wear.  Censorship in libraries should not be allowed because everyone should have that right to chose.  Plus, there are other ways to avoid children getting inappropriate books besides taking the books completely out of the library.  Censorship in libraries should not happen because if someone is eighteen, they should have the right to chose what they want to watch anyways, the parents can censor what books and movies they want there kids to read and see, and there are offensive things and inappropriate things on television that everyone has access to as well.     First of all, if a person is eighteen they should have a right to read whatever books they chose because they are grown adults.  Eighteen year olds can go into rated @CAPS1 movies which would be about as bad as a book most likely.  In our society, people that are eighteen can do almost whatever they chose because they have freedom.  For example, adults can look up whatever they chose on the internet, and so can everyone else of all ages.  So, if they wanted to read a book like that, they could probably get it off the internet, even if they can not in libraries.  Therefore with today's technologies, censorship would not make a difference.     Next, there are ways to avoid children reading inappropriate books besides taking the books off the shelves completely.  For instance, if parents are so worried about their children reading inappropriate books, then they should take their kids to the library themselves and tell their kid what they can and can not read.  If parents do not censor what their child reads, then those parents @MONTH1 want the child to read whatever he/she choses to.  If their parents chose to let their kid read the book, then that is their choice, not anybody elses.  The choice for what book the child reads should be between the parent and the child.     Lastly, there are so many things in the world that could be offensive to other people besides a book.  For example, people offend other people all the time by words they say.  People hear about all of the fighting because the person probably was offended by something someone else said.  Also there is the television.  The television has inappropriate shows on it all the time, yet everyone can have access to it if they chose to.  Plus there are shows on television that could have to do with racism, or someone being overweight.  These things offend people every day.  Therefore, we should not take books off the shelves just because there is a possiblity of offending someone, when a person could be offended by so many other things in the world rather than a book.     In conclusion, the books, magazines, and movies of the library should not be taken off the shelves away from the public just because they are not appropriate for some children.  Eighteen year olds are adults who should be able to chose whatever they want.  Plus if parents are worried about their child reading inappropriate books, then they can monitor that themselves.  Also, people are offended every day by other people, so books, magazines, and movies are not the only things in the world that could be offensive.  If the person thinks a movie or book is offensive to them, then do not check it out!  Not everything in our lives has to be controlled by someone, so people should lighten up and give some freedom of choice.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6138,3,In “Rough Road ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the cyclists was effected by the features of the setting. She was first effected by the old men which told her a “shortcut” to her ride to Yosemite National Park. Then she was effected by a ghost towns which had no water to give her. Then she was almost dehydrated when she came to a rickety road which had a few tumbleweed and a huge snake which was quite difficult to get by. Then at the end she came upon “Gary and Wilber’s fish camp” where she decided to make decisions herself. All of these things in the setting affected the cyclist in a negative way except “Gary and Wilber’s fish camp” which saved her from dehydration.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15901,6,"There were many obstacles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the empire State building. One obstacle they faced is the safety of the passengers when the dirigibles would dock and the frame work of the building wouldn't collapse. I know this because in between paragraph @NUM1 and @NUM2 the excerpt says, ""'One set of egineers are here in New York is trying to dope out a practical, workable arrangement and the government people in Washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast.'"" The mast weighs alot so they're afraid it will put too much pressure on the empire state building. The egineers were also afraid of the dirigibles blowing up because the dirigibles use hydrogen. Hydrogen is way more flammable than helium. I know this because in between paragraph @NUM3 and @NUM4 it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. These were a few of many obstacles the workers faced",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7251,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways, they ware heat, lack of water, and hills. While on his journey he almost gets dehydrated because he does not have a good supply of water and he said they taste “like battery acid.” And he had to convince up the road for anothe @NUM1 miles so that he could finally replenish himself",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18602,7,"My story is about a time I was patient. One day I was so excited because it was @CAPS1 and my friends and I were going trick or treating. I was so impatient for the clock to turn @NUM1 pm because my best friend @DATE1 was going to pick me up in her pink convertibable and we would go trick or treating. I was very impatient because it was only @NUM2 so I did my chores thinking time will fly by so I did my chores. Instead of putting dish soap in the dish washer. I put grapes in the dish washer @CAPS2 the dish was hoe was done I empted it and all the dishes smelled like grapes. So I  looked at the clock and it was only @NUM3 the I remembered that my favour  movie was on so I ran to my room but instead I ran into the wall and got knocked out. After @NUM4 hours I  was fine so I told my mom that I will be patient because I don’@CAPS3 want to get knocked ???on the bright side I told myself I only have @NUM5 hours and @NUM6 minutes to go so I went to my room + wasted some @CAPS3.V. until eleven twenty so I had an hour to get ready to go trick or treating but first before I did my make up I whent into the kitchen I put all the grape smelling dishes in the dishwasher and washed them them the I right way. Then I put my costum on I was a bumblebee, then I put my make up on I looked so cool. Finally the clock turned to @NUM1 suddenley I heard a horn @DATE1 was here. So I got in the car + we went to pick cate. I almost forgot to tell you that @DATE1 was a ladybug, cate was a which so then we whent trick or treating. So thats a time when I was patient.",9,8,,17,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9652,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because to tell us that she will try and find that flower to bring back memories of her old home. To show us that they will be caming   back again it will survive even though its not from where she wanted it to be from. In the story it says,” I I failed the test,” meaning saeng had bought the hibiscus that wasn it real or what she thought was not what she wanted to be. In the last paragraph she says she will take that test again. Saying she will find winter hibiscus that is how it use to be in the homeland. She’s hoping they survive and hoping she finds a flower like it because in that last paragraph it says ,”saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding ,then I will take that test again,” meaning she hopes and prays she will find one like her old homeland.      ",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13087,5,"In the memoir of ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez. The mood of the reading could be described as grateful. I can sense this mood by some of the things Narciso Rodriguez mentions. The author would constantly say ""thank you"" to his parents for all the sacarfies they had to mak for a suitable living enviroment for Narciso. It also states that ""there was no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and demonstration of how important family and friends are."" Over all, in the memoir of @PERSON1 the mood can be mainly described as Grateful towards his parents, heritage and home.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10039,4,"I believe the author adds this passage to the Story to represent determination and @LOCATION1. While Saeng is not originally from @LOCATION2 she is determined and willing to try and. adapt to our @CAPS1. While the winter was cold and harsh in many ways for her, the Spring will Bring foregiveness and relief from her @CAPS2. She will try to pass the driving test again to further herself into american @CAPS1, while the blooming of the Hibiscus will bring her @CAPS4 to home.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9517,4,The reason  why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because they wanted the reader to know there will be another story that will be made up. Also to show that Saeng was not happy that the snow melted and the geese return and the hibiscus was budding.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
836,1,"Dear local newspaper @CAPS1 I think that kid's should be alowed to go on here computers. So they can talk to there relitives across. The @CAPS5 @CAPS2 they want to. I have family members in @LOCATION1. I talk to them evry day because I have a laptop and they say that. I have relitives in @LOCATION3 I belive them because I have there email. They told me about my mother living in @LOCATION2. So I asked her she seaid yes that is true and I looked up were my mom lived. Thanks to computer also I learned that @LOCATION3 has one of the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 in The @CAPS5. So I asked my mom @CAPS2 I can go to @LOCATION3 she said yes. So I went with my sister and we even visited are family members and the @CAPS6 point I can tell you it looked exacly how. I pichered very tall coverd with trees. Birds @CAPS7, scwerwels climing trees the thing, that surprised me the most was there was a house on top of the mountine. For sale I wished that my mom was thier because she will love it. So ever time we go down there we rent that house thanks to the computers. Lastly you can even look up people on the internet. I herd that criss rock almost died. So when I got home I went on my laptop and looked it up so I did and it said nothing about. That but it did say one thing that surprised me. The most it seaid that he was geting a divorce. From his wife I think the peorson how said. That he almost died most of missed read it. So now I look up all my fraverit people. Thanks to computers the time is now to accet @CAPS2 people should have computers to use to lern about the @CAPS5 or just think what everyone sayes. So I hope you make a good chouse. But befor you choose think about it.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20938,8,"     Laughing, laughter.It's every where. Lots of people are laughing right now.Why not laugh though? It's good for you right? It feels good to laugh here an their. Well laughter can make your day great. It can help you get through hard times. It can help you cheer up your best friend to be happy. Well it really don't matter what the reason is, but its good to laugh. Laughing is great for you an it brings fun, joy, an helps you enjoy little more. My mom and I have a great relationship. Every time we are together, or we start talking we will laugh an crack each other up. Laughing has helped us get to having a great relationship were we can tell each other anything. I can go to her any time an ask her for help. I can go an talk to her any time I need to now. Be for we had a great relationship she wasn't doing to good she was involved in not to good of things. She was very depressed too. Ill tell you a little about it.   My day started off as a normal school day, I got up got ready, got on thus to school then be for I new it I was on the bus on my way home. I get off a block or two away from my house and then I walk home. I walk and walk, an about ten minutes later I get up to my house. I go to my room an put my bags down on my bed and go say hi to my mom. I walk into her room an shes sitting their in a chair. I had asked her if she wanted to go on a walk. Well of course she said yes.She gets her shoes on an I do the same.We walk down are drive way an that's where the walk starts.        We started walking down the road after we got to the end of are drive way. We walked straight for about five minutes, then take a right.We walk that way for about ten minutes an turn left. Their is a little store on that coroner. We stopped their to buy some water an some snacks on the walk. After we get done we start walking east on the road. When I looked back at my mom she look like she was having a really bad day. Like anyone i asked her what was wrong. She talked to me about everything and she seemed really sad, and depressed. From that I knew i need to talk to her an make her laugh. We never had the best relationship because she was always gone hanging out with friends. I knew if i could make her laugh, an help her get better, it would help us get along better an help each other out in the long run. I love my mom an I hate seeing people down. I though all this in my head. Being around me makes everyone laugh.  The walk was about three to four miles long. for the rest of the time I got her to laugh an laugh the whole way back. It made her feel a lot better i know that. Later that day she came in my room and we played some bored games and watch a movie or two. We really just talked and hung out for the rest of the day. We went on a couple more walks for the next month or two and we got a good mother an son relationship. We were both happy this had happened. About two months from the first walk w had she came up to me and hugged me and told me thank you for helping her out with what she was going though. I think laughter is a great thing in life. For me it helped me out a lot in life an it helped me save a relationship with my mom. I love laughing, and I love making people laugh it is fun to laugh an fun to make people laugh. Laughter makes great friendships. It can have a lot to do with your life. I hope this helps you laugh more and makes you try to be funny an have people laugh with you.    ",15,19,,34,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10567,4,"I think  the author concluded the story like that is because it was cold outside. I also think that the author is trying to say is that when she wrote this letter it was cold outside and she wouldn’t take the test until it was warm again because of the cold. ”In the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this is when the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test over again.” ",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21028,8," In the @DATE1, a primary group of friends would search for different adventures to part take in. This group of people consisted of kids of all ages, @PERSON5@NUM1, @PERSON1@NUM2, @PERSON2@NUM3, and @PERSON4@NUM4. Around late @DATE2, on a hot day, @PERSON5 got an idea to head over to @LOCATION2, @ORGANIZATION2 and go cliff diving. He called it the ""cliffs"". So the whole group got together and took off on an hour car ride to @LOCATION2. Once they got there, it only got hotter outside, and the need for cooling off was getting to be a priority. They parked, then walked the train tracks. The closer they got to they're destination, the louder the voices that they @CAPS1 hearing became. The spot was a secluded area with a rocky floor, people getting a running start to jump off the highest peak and go crashing on to the waters surface below. Right away @PERSON5 and @PERSON1 wanted to get settled so that they could join the others. As for @PERSON4 and @PERSON2, it could wait. Once @PERSON1 and @PERSON5 got they're first couple jumps in, @PERSON4 and @PERSON2 thought that maybe it was time to try it. But not from the highest peak. Maybe something a bit lower. Something like the very bottom of the cliff, just for starters. Before they jumped off they noticed a little beach on the other side of the creek, so the girls conversed with the boys and they all decided to jump off at the same time, and swim to the little beach. Although they all jumped from different heights, they all seemed to arrive around the same time. For @PERSON5 it was a bit more of a struggle to swim that far. But @PERSON4 was right by his side helping him along the way. As the group relaxed in the @DATE1 air for a while, they became to realize that they @CAPS1 hungry, but much to lazy to swim back, climb up the rocks, and walk the train tracks back to the car. But hunger was taking over. As they swam back, climbed the rocks, gathered they're belongings and headed back, they started brainstorming for a place to eat. ""@CAPS1 going to be going through @CAPS2."" @PERSON1 said. ""@ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1!"" @PERSON4 shouted. At that moment the decision was made. On the ride back, they switched drivers and sitting arrangements. Once they got to @CAPS2 they all stopped at @ORGANIZATION1 and filled they're stomach's up. They all chose to stop at @PERSON5 work @ORGANIZATION3, to say hi to some of his friends. @PERSON4 was @PERSON5 girlfriend so they had some showing off to do. They all finished up saying they're hello's, and went back to @LOCATION1 house where all the cars @CAPS1 parked. @PERSON4 and @PERSON5 decided to shower, while @PERSON1 wanted to play some video games, as for @PERSON2, she headed to home to shower and get ready to meet back up with her friends.  @NUM5 hours later, they all headed to they're hang-out spot, which they referred to as ""the spot"". They invited a couple of they're friends @PERSON6@NUM3, and @PERSON3@NUM7. They made a camp fire while the sun was setting because it grew to get colder, and colder. While @PERSON1, @PERSON3, @PERSON6 and @PERSON2 @CAPS1 sitting around the fire in chairs, @PERSON4 and @PERSON5 @CAPS1 riding around the camp site (which was really a huge hunk of @PERSON5 mom's land) on a quad. The group would take turns riding the quad but one ride in particular, made some memories. Once @PERSON5 and @PERSON4 came back, @PERSON2 wanted to give @PERSON4 a ride around. So @PERSON5 hopped off, and @PERSON2 hopped on, as @PERSON4 wrapped her arms around her waist, and they took off.  There was a certain trail where there was a long in the way of riding, so the driver would always have to find a way to maneuver around it. Usually it worked, this time it didn't. @PERSON2 hesitated to just ride right over it. She was afraid of all the power. @PERSON4 really didn't seem to care, and she took over and slammed on the gas. They high tailed it on the log and rolled the quad right over. @PERSON4 didn't weigh that much so she flew off, @PERSON2 on the other had got her foot caught under the handle. @PERSON4 got the strength to lift the quad off her foot, and @PERSON2 got right out. @PERSON4 decided to call the boys, and they hopped right into @PERSON1 to come save them. @PERSON5 flipped the quad right over and got on it and drove back behind the @PERSON1.  This memory will never be forgotten with in the group, even if the group will never be the same.",17,15,,32,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16367,6,"In the novel the @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, Because in the novel it said ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This quote said that the dirigible would add stress to the building and @CAPS2 risk of colapsing.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9632,4,"I the narrator this paragraph in the story because hibiscus is a valueable plant and garden is you own decision if you like to grow things like her mother grow hot pepper. Garden is a way to @CAPS1 different like the different types of foods you can plant and the different plants in the world there eg @CAPS2, lilis, and other other plants like that.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15304,6,"The Empire State Building was and is the tallest building to ever be built. To make it the tallest building Architects had to design the Mooring Mast. In building this mast there were many obstacles to overcome, but even with those obstacles it was still finished.The Mooring Mast was needed because without it the Empire State Building would not be the tallest in the world. To make the Mooring Mast work the builders had to overcome some obstacles. One of the main obstacles was to add on the Mast they would have to attach steal from the Mast all the way down to the foundation. Another was After designing the Mast they had to change the original plans for the building.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19208,7,"The time I was patient as when I was getting my dog. I had gone to a jazz festival with my mom, my sister, and her friend. We were walking past a last chance rescue and we went to see the puppies. My mom didn’t want another dog but when she saw our future dog boxter she gave in. he has grey fur with some black spots and and a black line running down his fore. At the center of the ???. He was a grown short hair blue healer mix. We asked the lady if we could get him but she said they are going in sport and we could buy him there. We got in the car and ??? to ???. we signed the forms and played with him in the store. But ??? down town with him on the sosh and we got some ice cream and went home.",9,10,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19423,7,"My dad is in the @ORGANIZATION1. He goes away for long periods of time. The only time he comes to ritit us is in @DATE1, near my birthday. But one year my dad wasn't able to come home when he was supposed to. He sent us a letter saying that they were keeping all the trooper for an extra six months. I felt depressed for the longest time. But then I thought about it. Even it was delayed, he was still coming back hopefully. So I decided to be patient rather than disappointed. Our family sent him care packager over. Eventually he did came back. That was a hard time, but it was patient and got thought it.",11,11,,22,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
745,1,"Dear @STATE1's newspaper editors I have recently read an atical that was talking about how experts are concerned that people are spending way too much time on their computers. Well I agree with them. I strongly belive that computers are tacking time away from you exercising enjoying nature and even interacting with family and friends. Well if you look at teen's this day and how more and more are becauming over weight like back in the days when their wasn't computer or internet not as much people were over weight or even obiste because they had time to go out and exercis or play sports with othes. Exercising is importent because espeshaly when as a teen you are over weight or even obiste well theis problems just don't go away this will cost you in the futer because not only do you have to chance of getting deobetice but you also have to pay for all the medications and treatments that comes with it. Experts also belives that by spending time on the computer will tack time away from enjoing the things that nature has to offer. When other might argue to it is a good thing for people to learn about the different types of place's in the world. Well I delive why do you have to just read about the places online and look of the picture why can't you be the one tacking the pictures for other to see. And why can't you be the one experincing it insted of just reading about it. Experts also believe that by spending time on the computer it is tacking away time from you being able to interacting with family members and friends. Well as a teen myself I have learned that by intercating with family and friends are vary important to our health. I am not the only person that agrees with that because study shows that kid that can talk to their perents and have good convercations with their parent have the ability to do well in school and have more respect towed others verces the the kid or teen that can't really have conversation or talk to their parents. For example if you are the type of person that talk to your family You will have good grades such as A's and @CAPS1's and will learn to have respect for other and the person that can't talk to their parents have troble concentrating or even macking troble fro themselfs and getting @CAPS2's and @CAPS3's. Well I know that as a @STATE1 newpapper editer you are a vary busy person and have lot of diffent things to do but I hope you take this in to concideration and remmember the importants of exercisin, enjoying rotune and interacting with familys and friends.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9087,4,Saeng did not give up on herself. She said she would take it over again then she might pass it. You will not always pass on your first try it takes a while sometime. Saeng encourage you to never to give up just cause you did not get it on your first time. She also builds confidence in herself. That’s why the author concluded the story that way.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15521,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the very important obstacles they had to face was the thousand-foot dirigible adding stress to the buildings frame. Therefore, ""... have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation."" (@NUM1) @CAPS1, the builders face the obstacle of safety. Dirigibles used hydrogen, ""... rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (@NUM2. line @NUM3) The greatest obstacle faced by the builders was nature. As the winds were shifting at the top of the building, the back of the dirigibles swiveled around the mast. Previous solutions; ""dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighed down in the back with lead weights..."" (@NUM4. line @NUM3-5) were not safe with the mooring mast on the Empire State Building. Lastly, an obstacle they faced was that there was a ""law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@NUM6. line @NUM7) this made it so the dirigibles could not even approach this area. There were several obstacles faced when the builders were trying to make the Empire State building a docking station.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1387,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 we all know more and more people are using computers. Some believe that this would be a concern because it affects peoples health. I believe that with the advances in technology it would give us positive effects on people. Here are three reasons why, first would be that with advances in tech. It would teach us to be more intelligent. Second would be it it would give us the ability to have access to intresting things we can't get at the library like biographics and finally access to communicate online. My first reason @CAPS2 I mentioned before was it would give us intelligence. If we have questions to something we dont know we could search on the computer and find our answer. We would learn this and would be able to teach others. The computer can give us alot of useful information that can benefit us in the future. My second reason is that advance in tech. would help us because it give us access to helpful website that teaches us. Not all information is found in the library the computer has access to biographics educational website and most important the access to educational advances for example online tutoring for students with difficulties in school. My third and final reason why advance in tech. would and could benefit us is that it gives us access to online communication. Some people will have e-mail for good reason for example teachers have e-mail for educational cause if a student is having problem in work, the student simply send the teacher a e-mail of the what the students difficulty is and what the student can do. That is all I have to say for now. I hope you think about this",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6954,3,During this essay the author is talking about his journey,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4765,2,"Books are very important to our society. They hold a special place in our hearts, and contain much of our world's knowledge. Everyone has their own opinion about what should or should not be placed in books. I definetly agree that little children should not purchase a book that has explicit content in it that they should not read. However, some people, myself included, have checked out or bought books and then realized what exactly was portrayed in those books. I do not believe that anything that contains certain contents should be removed from the shelves.     I can think of many books that could be taken offensively that are still on many school library and public library shelves. Any books about the @CAPS1 and even the @CAPS2 @CAPS3, such as '@CAPS4 @CAPS5's @CAPS6' can be taken in the wrong context. These books do contain language that is not appropriate for children. But we do still see them on our shelves. Why? Because those books, and many others, are very important to us.     Books should stay on their shelves because, as Katherine Paterson cleverly put it, '... And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS7 means that if everyone took out books that they felt were personally offensive then there would be no books. Books are vital to learning things. We put all of our knowledge into them, even hundreds, if not thousands, of years ago. When the libraries in @LOCATION2 were burned and/or destroyed, we thought our knowledge was gone forever. Thank goodness for the back-up system that no one had known about out in the @LOCATION1.     I myself have read the @ORGANIZATION1. I believe it whole-heartedly, but I do know of people who do not believe in the @CAPS8 and have taken some things that are said in the @ORGANIZATION1 to be taken personally. I believe that the @ORGANIZATION1 is the most important book in the world. Without the @ORGANIZATION1 no one would know of the wonderful things that our @CAPS8 above has done for us, and what he is doing for us now. However, some people can take what the @ORGANIZATION1 says to be offensive in regards to homosexuals and divorces. But would we allow the gays or divorced men and women to take the @ORGANIZATION1 off of the shelves? Of course not!If we would not allow them to take off that ever so important book, then why should we allow to have other books to be removed?     Books are so very important to us and our world. They hold our world's knowledge, and they also hold our hearts. Just think about what our world, our knowledge, our society would be like if we did not have these precious things. Can you imagine it? I cannot. Books are one of the most important things that we have in @CAPS7 world. Just because someone finds something offensive in a written work does not mean that everyone else will, too. Books, if they are offensive to anyone, should be kept on our shelves for our future generations to come so they @MONTH1 learn and grow on our knowledge of our past",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9593,4," I believe that author ended the story with that sentence because it give a lifting feeling after the story was so sad. Saeng missed her homeland, was sad, used the flowers as relief, sad about her driving test and realy liked the plant. So the last sentence seemed to fit in as a confort zone to make the reader a bit more relieved. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10224,4,"The author includes this paragraph because Saeng is starting anew in a new country. In this country she misses her homeland and the hibiscus reminds her of so. Saeng took a test and failed and in the winter, flowers fail but they bloom again in the spring. When the hibiscus blooms Saeng will ""bloom"" and try the test again. Moving can be a hardship especially when it is to place very unfimiliar. People find ways to make themselves promises & to remind them of their old home.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
120,1,"Dear @CAPS1: The effects that computers have on me is that it teaches me hand-eye coordination. I learn stuff from the computer, and it is a fun thing to go on. But, I mean those are only my opinions. Well im gonna just go ahead and explain them to you. The good thing about computers is that it teaches you hand-eye coordination which helps you see better with your eyes. Also it helps you with your hands by making you learn how to catch stuff and how to react quickly with your hands. For example I was playing baseball and I couldn't catch very good and I was also learning how to use the computer and because I was able to type fast my hands reacted when I got grounders and pop fly's hit to me. So I was so happy that I lerned how to use the computer and type. But for sure the computer is the best because you can research stuff and you find out more important facts. Also you are learnen more when ever you research anything. I'll tell you one thing though, I like the computer so much because it helps me find out important details and facts about the person that I am doing my project on. Yes I know the computer is so fun because you can go on different websites such as myspace.com, youtube.com, and funnyjunk.com. I go on mspace to talk to my friends and to meet new people that's what I like about myspace I meet new people and make new friends. I go on youtube because I like to listen to music and I watch music videos on their also I watch skate board videos too cause I love to skate! But one thing for sure is that I go on funnyjunk.com to play games cause they have so much fun games that you can play. But my favorite game is @CAPS2 the hedgehog. In conclusion those are @NUM1 opinions and @NUM1 reasons to support the effects about computers. So I want you to think about some effects about computers and your opinions about computers and compare them to my opinions? But hey! That's up to you only if you want to.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9006,4,"I think the author concluded the story with that phrase because it shows she will mature. She is saying that she was not ready for all the challenges she was going to face, For example she did not pass her test but instead of crying about it she just said I will take it again next year. In the story she also longed for her homeland, which she truley missed. She coped with this by buying a winter hibiscus to remind her not only of her homeland but also of her grandmother overall the main character showed depth and maturity throughout the piece.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9660,4,"Well in the story, Saeng  fails her driving test. When she is walking home she sees a familar plant, she then goes to a flourist and finds out the plant is called a hibiscus. She then buys the plant with the little money she has because it reminds her of her homeland and childhood. It also reminds her of her grandmother who she left behind so now she is connected to the plant. Also she sees geese fly over head heading south for the winter, so she says “When they come back,” so she means when the geese fly north for @DATE1. And when “the snow melts"" so when it becomes warmer and starts spring. When “this hibiscus is budding,” so when spring comes and the plant starts to bloom she will “take that test again"" so she says she will take the driving test that she failed when spring comes. She gives herself the winter to practice and get ready for the test . She vows to herself that come spring she will be ready to take the test and this time she will pass.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1492,1,"Dear local news paper, I think computers can have a bad effect on people from a really early age. Starting at thirteen and up through adulthood. People spend hours at a time on the computer when they canbe exercising or doing some type of activity out doors. Computers can make some people feel like life is being taken away form them. Spending so much time on a computer can really damage a person posture. It is said that when some get on a computer a state of comfortbility comes over them and they lean over with their backs bent and they there for periods of time. Imagin a person being cramped in a tight space for eight hours and when that person gets out they all their joints and muscles being stretched from that point of tensions. This is what we do to our bodys when we get on computers.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6176,3,"How the features of the setting affect the cyclist because when the old guy had told him do you know where to go? An the other guy was like “ yes sir! I own a very good map” so how did it change for the man that was riding this bike he saw all of those towns an a sign that said Rough Road ahead. That the man would always stick to the future. What had change was he saw all of those buildings, town, an he was going an going. I think he might stick with the future.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18015,7,"One day when I was going to @LOCATION1  we drove for @NUM1 whole day because we went in the wrong direaction and my mom got made at night we were trying to find a hotel about @NUM1:30am I was the only one aware because my three brothers @PERSON1, @LOCATION2, caman were sleping in the back of the van my sister @CAPS1 and me were in the front and I got really angry because a guy. Look the last room they had but I was really angry patient and really we a room the next day we went to the @ORGANIZATION1 to stay we were going to the water park/musment park there was a new ride"" the scoping tail butt we had to wait for @NUM1 hour to go on that ride and I was really patient but my mom was getting tired and mad because  it took so long then the next day it rained and rained so we went to the indoor fool at our hotel but we couldnt go in because there were in many people so we had to wait but I wasnt patient because I wanted to go swimming  the almost a halve hour we got to go swimming then the next day we had to leave and this time it took almost two days to get us back home the time & we got there was at @TIME1 I was patient enough to help my parents get all the stuff in our house then we finally got to go to bed I was so happy.",7,7,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6415,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist by causing him to be hit with his water bottle regularly, the high deserts of California affected him. Also, “Not the miles into the next section of the ride, he noticed a terrain change.” For example flat roads was replaced by short, rolling hills. Then after over coming that, “A large highway sign jumped out at him saying or reading,” “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not exceed Posted Speed Limit. And that was 55. Last the author says, “Sometimes life can feelso cruel. In conclusion there were many things that affected the cyclist.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4322,2,"Do you believe that books or any different materials should be removed from the libraies shelf. No, because them books or materials is not for everybody to look at. Like if you have kid's you should keep them and a kid's area. We cannot just start takeing down every book off the shelf because it was not a good book.The reason why kid's should stay and the kid's area is so they want pick up that book thats not for them. We will need the read to be reading childrens book.If a kid's pick up a bad book you should explaine to them that this book is not for them. Some books are @CAPS1 for kid's to read. so thats why they have there on area to be in. Kid's should not leave there area for a @CAPS1 book. I think that kids should list to appropiate music and a libriary.  The @CAPS1 book or materials are not for the kid's to read so they should not be and that area to pick up a bad book. i feel like there are no bad book out there if you dont like the book maybe someones elese will. but like movies, music, and magazines should not be off the shelf because if it was @CAPS1 it would not be and the libriary and the first place. Everybody is not going to like everything but thats just life",3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18660,7,"The time I was….One after school I was walking home with my friends from school. @CAPS3 knowing me I wanted something to eat @CAPS3 I told my friends to come in @LOCATION1’s rest (it’s a fast food restaurant.) @CAPS1 we walk in @LOCATION1’s ,the place is crowded @CAPS3 I waited in line after about @NUM1 minutes my friends said “@CAPS2  man let’s go”  @CAPS3 I say “I’ll  meet you guys outside “ “alright” they said. A bout @NUM2 minites later it was my turn to order and I order a double stack and some fries and I got free milkshake for my patience  she asked what kind did @CAPS4 I said strawberry and I didn’t had to pay for ??? was totally free and I went outside and a told my friends I got this for free and then they said “oooooooh”, that’s when we went home.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15702,6,"@ORGANIZATION1 on the excerpt from The Mooring mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted there were many obsticles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obsticle the builders faced was safety. Paragraph @NUM1 states, most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable ""The owners of the Empire State Building realized how horrible an accident could be if it takes place in a highly populated area.         The greatest obsticle the builders faced was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent wind currents"" paragraph @NUM2 states. They could have weighted it down with lead weights, but using these where they would be hanging above pedestrians was not safe.     The last obsticle the builder faced was the law was against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for any ship to dock at the @ORGANIZATION1 on the excerpt from The Mooring Mast, there were many obsticles builders faced to allow dirigibles to dock there""",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17976,7,"Have you ever waited for something or someone without complaining? If so, you are being patient. Patience isn’t just waiting a long time, its being respectfull and not complaining about waiting. In order to be patient, you have to be respectfull and quiet unless they ask you something. It takes hard work to be patient. If your at school and need to go to the bathroom wait till the teachers are done talking to someone, or if he/she is on powerschool. Do not interrupt teachers during a meeting or when their talking. People will like you a little more if your patient. So remember, when your waiting for someone or something, remember the word patience.",5,4,,9,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15738,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in allowing dirigibles to dock there are many, mainly it is a safety concern. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"", stated the article. ""They would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street [which] was neither practical nor safe."" This shows the dirigibles are inpractable and a danger to both the people in it and the people on the street below.",1,2,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12497,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is happy and grateful. @PERSON1 starts by explaining his love for his home and cuban traditions. ""... my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen... Passionate Cuban music... formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). The author shows his love also for his neighbors and neighborhood, even though the @CAPS2 was very racist they still came together like a family (@CAPS1 @NUM2). Lastly, the author shows the mood by explaining how grateful he is to his parents:, how they have done so much for him ""The faith that this struggle would leave them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times. I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" (@CAPS1 @NUM3 and @NUM4). By writing about his love for his family, friends, and home, @PERSON1 makes the mood loving/ happy and grateful for all that he has.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12015,5,"The memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" creates a very warm peaceful and interesting mood. The way the author described the way she used to live looks like she lived a very loving and peaceful enviroment. She also creates a spanish theme to it which I could relate to. For example in paragraph @NUM1 she says she is very passionate for Cuban music and she's grateful she know how to cook. She also said in paragraph @NUM2 she will never forget how her parents turned a simple house into a home. That quote makes the mood of the memoir loving.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7302,3,"The cyclist in the essay Rough Road Ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit feels discouraged and dehydration because of the setting. Near the beginning, after viewing the first stop which consisted of a few broke buildings and some rusted pumps he states “This sight was troubleing,” He also feels dehydration when he reaches the pumps and finds the produce “A tar like substance oozed out, followed by blackish water”. Also as he is pedaling he sees a sign that says do not exceed 55 miles per hour. He",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9939,4,The importance as to why the author ended this story like this was to show readers the importance of the plant. It seems that because the author is not in her native country that she doesn’t have a lot around in this new place that can comfort her. The author being able to find a hibiscus in a place she thought she wouldn’t be able to gives her strength to do anything that she can. It is possible that whatever the challenge @MONTH1 be that the author is trying to get by the fact that she has some support from the plant gives her the achievement and confidence to complete her task,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10322,4,"There are many reason why the author concludes the story with that paragraph . One reason is she likes hibiscus flower you can tell by when she again “ When she got to the hibiscus , She  reached out and touch a petal gently .” Another reason is that they are pretty . You can tell by when she says  “ It was like walking into another world  .”  Last reason is that she likes the present of them . You can tell by when she say “ Huge flat leaves , delicate  wisps do tenant’s  , ferns , and fronds and virus of all shades and shapes grew in seemingly random profusion.  As you can see these are reasons why the author ended with that paragraph .",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6386,3,"The features of the setting effect the cyclist because he was in the middle of no-where with no water or direction. The man was also very thirsty and had no water left in his water bottle, he began to get very thirsty. I found an example to show that he was thirsty. “The speed limit was @NUM1. I was doing a water-depleting @NUM2. Sometimes life can feel so cruel”. By saying he was doing @NUM2 when it should have been @NUM1. was saying he was getting very exhausted and he needed water to get him feeling refreshed once again. Also, the fact that there was no one in sight to give him direction effected him too because he didnt know where the next refudge was. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind. “ From the mans point of view, he probably thought civilization was many more miles away and he probably could not make it that for. The setting effected him by making him probably begin to stress or panic a lot for the most part.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3770,2,"Censorship is a very sensitive topic. Everyone has to deal with censroship whether it is directly or indirectly. There have been many complaints and arguments involving the government regarding acts of censorship throughout the past. If censorship were to be equal for everyone, there would be nothing left in the world to be censored.     Censorship is a major subject when dealing with books, newspaper articles, movies, and other literary subjects. The writer or director must be able to create an interesting topic or story line while at the same time keeping it appropriate for most audiences. If everyone were to censor one piece of literature or film that offended them in a certain way, then everything in life would be censored in one way or another. No matter what, there will always be a certain situation in which one person in the world will be offended by. Censorship is wrong, especially in the @LOCATION1; the @LOCATION1 citizens are granted the freedom of speech and the freedom of press. With an understanding of these basic freedoms, one would think that censorship is against the law considering it is one of the five basic freedoms granted to @LOCATION1 citizens. Censorship is wrong because it violates at least two of the five basic freedoms granted to all @LOCATION1 citizens. There should be absolutely no censorship when dealing with books, movies, and newspaper articles, because they all deal with the freedom of speech, or the freedom of press. If the act of censorship begins to expand, everything we know today will become censored in some manner just because one person would find it offensive.      Some citizens @MONTH1 argue that censorship is a positive thing because it filters out all of the inappropriate, offensive, and derrogatory language and situations from our nation's youth, but from a teenager's standpoint, the children will find out about such situations and language use regardless. There is no point in hiding the truth from anyone, because no matter what they will find out eventually. We need to push for less censorship in the @LOCATION1, because if we want to keep our five basic freedoms of life granted to us by the first amendmant, then we need to fight back censorship and remove it completely from our society",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15707,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle was that it was very dangerous to have a hydrogen (highly flammable) filled dirigible dock over one of the most densely populated areas at the time. They could not let the accident that had happened in Lakehurst, New Jersey happen in New York: ""..., The owners of the Empire State building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" The greatest obstacle was due to natural causes: ""The winds on top of the building were consular shifting due to violent air currents."" The dirigible would not be able to stay steady for docking or unloading. Other ideas to solve this problem like weights were, ""neither practical or safe."" The final obtacle was the law. ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"". As shown, It was simply impossible for dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building because of natural causes, danger, and the law itself.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15418,6,"There were many obstacles which the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to construct a mast for docking dirigibles. One of the main reasons that the mast was never built was due to safety. Most of the foreign dirigibles ran on hydrogen and the builders did not want to risk another Hindenburg accident in the highly populated New York City. Nature also restricted the building of a dock. The winds on top of the Empire State Building were constantly changing because of violent air currents, another threat that the builders did not want to risk. Finally, there was a law that prohibited airships from flying too low over urban areas. There were many reasons why the mast was never constructed including safety issues, nature, and an existing law that prohibited low air travel over the city. In the end however, the building of a dirigible mast was neither practical nor safe, and the project was eventually dropped.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6593,3,"The features of the setting in Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” Affect the cyclist in many ways. First in the essay when the @CAPS1 says he is in the deserts of California, that can affect because it gives them an idea of how hot it most likely was out there and how lack of water can really harm someone. Also when the @CAPS1 describes the water pumps and what comes out o them, it can give the cyclist a feeling of disgust and remind them to always keep a good water supply.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11945,5,"The author created a sense of love and care in Narciso Rodriguez. The author talked about the sense of family and how people don't have to all be the same to become one community. In @CAPS2 @NUM1 it explains ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. It was a close-knit community of honest, hard working immagrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" @CAPS1 shared the feeling of acceptance because although they were all from different cultures and ethnicities, they all learned how to become one ""family"" in a rascist enviroment. @CAPS1 shared how his parents made the difficult decision to move to the new place leaving loved ones behind for their children's better future (@CAPS2 @NUM2). @CAPS1 showed a lot of admiration for his parents based on what they do for him and how they always have other family members or neighbors around the kitchen table for meals. In @CAPS2 @NUM3 @CAPS1 says ""There is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity and impressed upon me and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" The author shares his feelings of love toward his parents in this memoir.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9282,4,"I feel the author concludes the story with the paragraph to show that Saeng found some sense of relief with the flower. It also show that Saeng wasnt going to give up and she was going to keep trying. At first she was sad and upset but when she saw the flower that reminded her of home, she became happy and didn’t feel so bad about failing the test. The flower had a deep impact on her cause it reminded of home and when she started thinking about her grandmother she became a little sad, but then she thought about the flower and how much it meant to her, she felt comfort from the flower. I feel the concludes the story in good positive way.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3723,2,"Newspaper staff and/or whom it @MONTH1 concern,      Reading material found in a library is very useful and informative to the world, there is no limit to what could be found on paper. Whether it be offensive or not, having limits to books will only create tension, effect the economy, and will lead to illegal activity, ironically enough, in which offensive books will be written and sold, completely undercover.      In today's world, it would be nearly impossible to pick up a book and factually state that it is not offensive. Almost everyone has some little issue with something in the world today, and because of that, original and unoffensive material are hard to come by. With the stripping of offensive material from libraries, authors will be devastated, not just emotionally, but will be out of a job and will have less income. Because of how virtually impossible it is to write a book that is not offensive, authors will become very frustrated, and most are very passionate about what they do. Also, because almost all reading material is offensive in some way, there will be little to no reading material on the selves of the world or nation's libraries. @CAPS1 could potentially lead to violent protests that quickly tear down even the most successful of nations. However, physical devastation would not be the only toll paid for the stripping of offensive reading material from libraries      Books cost money; to make books costs money, to buy books costs money. Paper companies would take a major nose-dive in the market, having almost no clientel. When a major divistion such as the paper industry falls, it will bring others down as @CAPS2, and due to the nation's market complexity, almost all major companies rely on paper. @CAPS1 would ruin the economy. Some might say, '@CAPS1 means that the people of @LOCATION1 will be much more green!' @CAPS2, the past few centuries when economics and the environment are put on a scale, economics takes the cake by a mile. Obviously, @CAPS1 will do much more harm than good. The people of the world always have a priority. Also, the majority of the people don't enjoy having something taken that they have grown so fond to.      People, in general, want what they can't have. An obvious example would be illegal drugs; the drug market is extremely successful, but it's illegal. If people were to have these currently illegal drugs for their use, being completely legal, chances are that the success of drug marketing will plummet. The opposite situation for books: We have them now, but when they are taken, we will want them even more. People who read tend to be very passionate about literature and very intellegent. All it takes is one group to gain numbers, and have a very talented speaker persuede others to follow in a potentially violent revolt to be given back permission to write and publish alleged 'offensive' books. All other material found in libraries, such as music and movies, being taken away will have the same effects, give or take a few similarities or differences.      Avoiding such problems is easy, keep the books and all other material in a library on the shelves. It will only be problematic to take it all away, especially for being offensive, when there are very few books that the general population will find not offensive. If keeping the material in libraries means individuals will become offended for very different reasons, let it be organized chaos. @CAPS1 is how people work, and keeping the material on the selves is how the people are pleased or motivated",5,5,,5,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4654,2,BooksI think that every book in the world should be on the shelf. because if it is afencive then dont read it. it is alot beter if u can go read eny book u wat to. and if thy dont have that book then i gess u gota go get it somwere else and some people wouldnt go thrue all that trouble for a book. Wich means they wont know as much as they wanted to or could known.          we need smat people to know as much as there potential and as they wat and can posibly know. But books are books not every body reads alot of books. lets say u wanted to know somthin about a truck wat do u do u go find a book about it or get online or ask sombody that knows. How would enybody know enything about it if the person that bilt the truck didnt write a book telling u about the truck. You would haft to take it apart and find out your self wich isn't verry easy at all. and if u mest up thats not good. but if u had a book to go bye it makes thing alot simpler most of the time.           This is one of the reasons every book should be on the shelf. so that if u need to know somthing and u want to learn u can read about it. And find out wat u want to know. Reading is one of the best ways to find out wat u are looking for so that way nobody is telling u wrong. Plus books are just good to read                                             Movies      all movies should be there to because every bodie has the right to wach eny movie they want. Inles they arnt of age. and if no parent haft to say its ok for them to wach it. If it afends u dont wach it.                                       Magizines          @CAPS1 are good to i read alot of magizins u can find alot about enything in a magizine. so ya the are good,3,3,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19082,7,"A time I have to have patience some times is in class I have to have patience. I don’t have a lot of patiences. I have to have patiences in @NUM1 block @NUM1 block is moth. We as the students have @PERSON1. @PERSON2 talks all the time. He talks till luch wich is about for a half an hour. So I have to wait for a while till he gives us work. That how I have patiences. To conclude that when I have to have patience in class. Though I don’t have a lot of patience at all, but in class I do.",7,5,,12,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10362,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because he basicly trying to say that everything happens for a reason, and that reason might mean through seasons. She @MONTH1 think that she would have better on her test in the spring only for the simply fact that everything blooms in the spring.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10053,4,"I think the author ends the story like this becuose of Saeng's respect for the plant. Not only does she see the plant as a simple of her home but also as a symble of good luck. In the text she holds the plant in a very high value, having payed @NUM1 coins for it, So I think it ends like this to symbolize that Saeng believes that the best time to take the test is when the hibiscus is growing.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12035,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is happy. I think there is hapiness because of what it says on paragraph @NUM1. ""In our neighborhood, despite the customs elsewhere, all of these culture came together in a great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS2 that mean that there were a happy and friendly family. In conclusion, that's the mood I think the @CAPS1 created and some reasons why.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4040,2,"Books have been around for hundreds and hundreds of years. They have significent value in culture, lives, and everything else. We all see kids laughing and enjoying books about pretty ponies and little puppies. What we don't see is how books and magazines are really effecting people of different race, religion, or age. We should take a stand and get rid of these bad books. Negitive books, movies, and magazines should be taken off the shelf to prevent hurt feelings and ideas.      We have learned to accept everybody no matter what color they are. I remember in @NUM1 grade when a girl named @PERSON1 got very upset because she thought a book was making fun of her skin color. Everyone in the book was white and excluded a african american girl from playing with them because she wasn't pretty enough. She went to tell the teacher and the teacher threw the book away and said that we should all learn to treat everyone with respect no matter what they look like. We need to have more books like what the teacher was trying to teach us. To boost everyones spirits and make them feel better about themselves. The world has changed and books should too.      Many things influence people of different ages, race, or religion. Books that talk bad about other religions or make you second guess your faith are considered negitive and should be taken off the shelf. How would you like it if someone was putting down your religion? That is how many people feel when reading that kind of material. These books, magazines, and movies are not good for anybody and should not be anywhere near libraries.      Have you been watching what your kids are reading about or what movies they are watching? Most of childrens books and movies have pretty princesses and little mermaids but not all of them. Behind some movies or books there is are violence and bad scenes. When fight scenes occur and zombies attack, children believe that everything is real and that it is ok to kill someone if they are a bad. Boys believe that it is ok to hurt people because that is what happens in the movies. Girls believe that everything about a princess is perfect and flawless and to be a princess they also have to be flawless. Do we really want childrent to think it is ok to fight and be upset because they are not perfect? Libraries need to get rid of these book and movies because it is badly influencing the children in the world.      Not all books are bad and not all of them are good, so we need to divide and conquer. We need to take a closer look and really examine what needs to be taken off the shelves. The books, magazines, and movies that influence people to think differently about themselves need to go away for good. To get rid of these books that cause conflict within a person is like getting rid of a big burden. It can make a really big improvment in adults and children. Please take negitive books and movies off the shelves to prevent any unnecessary problems!",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13215,5,"The mood in the memoir is mostly gratefulness and happiness. The author describes his house as ""... our traditional Cuban home,..."", ""... unwittingly passed on to me they're rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today."" This explaines that even though the author is an adult he still has the pasion that his parents had together when he was a kid. The author realizes that ""family doesn't mean blood realated"" it's about being around people that he loves and making things out of the little moments in life. The article states ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows that the author admires his parents for everything they have given up to get to where they are now. The end of the memoir explaines that the author is grateful for living in that house, and having all the people around him. He learned the real definition of what ""family"" means and what love truely is.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6672,3,"Varias faetures of the setting affect the journey and mooble if the cyclist in the text. The first feature of the setting that affect the cyclist is the desert. He is “traveling through the high deserts of California in June” , and this is making him really thirsty. “[He] had been hitting [his] water bottles pretty regularly “because of this. He later runs out of water, and becomes hopeless. He becomes hopelee because there is no building or establishments anywere in sight. Therefore no water and there isn’t a place to get any water. Another feature of the setting that affects him is the people that gave him directions. They told him abait a shoutcut, and he listened. This through everything off, and he was left with despair. Another feature is the Gary and Wilber’s fish camp.This lead him to sicocss of finding water. This affected his mood because he had hope again. In conlusio, many of the features of the setting affected his mood in many ways.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
702,1,"My opinion about the effects of computers is that computers do help you but people should not us the computer to lot because people should exercise, interacting with family and enjoy nature. Exercising is more important than a computers because it will make you health, you will not be sick so much. Interacting with family is more important than a computers because the @MONTH1 help you have friend but not a family's help you when you help and maybe that friend in the computer is maybe not real that is why it is important to interacting with family. And the last thing that is more important than a computers is enjoying nature. It is fun because you are not bored. You be outside, you will not think about the computer because you will be enjoying so much. My opinion is that computers should only be us to see your mail or to learn something you want to find out in the computer.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12248,5,"The author of the memoir set a mood in the writting. The mood of thankfullness and humbleness was set in the writting piece. The word greatful was repeated over and over again. Since the author emphasized the word it gives a reader an idea that he truley is thankful for his parents and childhood. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" this is an example of the author showing his graditude towards his parents. While reading this peice it gave me a warm feeling. Even though the author's parents had a hard time when they moved to @LOCATION1 they gave the author a good childhood with happy memories. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This is how the author looks at his memories. They are always cheerful and warm. In the last sentence of the memoir he says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This shows that he is grateful for having so many good relationships with lots of people and that it didn't matter how small their house was the author's parents help brought it to life, and for that he is grateful.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
699,1,"Dear @CAPS1 Society: Computers are perhaps one of the greatest improvements to our societies advancement in knowledge in the past few decades. These gems of future, are like a human being; they have their own mind and can figure out answers to all problems. People all around the world use them, from @LOCATION5 to @LOCATION4, to @LOCATION2 to @LOCATION1, they are being used. People from ages of school kids, to adults who have a job so highly appreciated as a chemist, use computers! Do you wish to be that one standing on the side lines, stuck in the past, not advancing with technology? From the creations of rockets, engines and planes; computers have never let us down. Still, the question is this: will computerized technology benefit our society or crash it down? Ever since the @DATE1, computers have been used as an ad for new information. The speed that they are able to recieve new information in is just astonishing! @CAPS2 @PERSON2, computer engenieer, says ""With the technology that we recieve from computers, we are able to be in the game."" @CAPS2 just comes to show one of the best benefits of computers: their ability to display the most current information. Now, I can see how books are an excellent resource in society, and how they provide for amazing information, however it takes years to publish books! With the use of a computer, information that occured sometimes as close to @NUM1 hours ago can appear on the internet! Not only will this allow you to get information faster, but it will allow our society to ""be in the game."" You catch a football as it soars through the air, you track a baseball or it flys high in the sky, you grasp the face of a basketball all because you have ""hand-eye"" coordination. Hand-eye coordination is perhaps one of the most neccessarry aspects of life that a person can have. Face it, everybody needs it! So why not help your body to get that talent: buy a computer. Imagine, our society would advance in it's sports and even just with life if they learn how to coordinate themselves. Did you know that @NUM2 out of @NUM3 people who owned a computer and typed daily were able to catch all three tennis-balls that were thrown at them! You could do that too! When typing on a computer, human development observers states, your eyes a free tracked on the screen and you train your hands to manuvor about the keys all by themselves. Just as in basketball, when you train your hand to track the bounce of the ball without you needing the need to catch it. I can remember when I started typing, my hands began to naturally find the keys without me having to look at them. And the next day at basketball practice I felt like @CAPS3 amazing point-guard @PERSON1, the ball just came straight to my hand! Get this need of life, invest in a computer! Money @MONTH1 be the most vital thing in our society right now. With profits as low as medium wage, our local area is not that ""rich."" I can see how it could be hard, having to purchase these computers at prices as high as @MONEY1 each. But then just think, each book that we won't have to purchase would save us @NUM4 each. Not only do computer's stand to last @NUM5 longer than any paperback, their information is always new, changing, and up-to-date. In order for us to be purchasing new books because of recent information would end up coasting as more in the long-run. Our neighboring society of @LOCATION3 just invested in over @NUM6 comptuers for their society. The stated that it took onlyt @NUM7 months to get the money back that they had purchased on the computer's with the amount that had not purchasing book! Now just imagine how much money our society would gain after @NUM8 year! It is necessary for our society to have computers. With them we not only learn hand-eye coordination but we invest in more money for the. And now with so many things happening in the world it is important to recieve information instantely from these computers. I can't stress enough that without them we just @MONTH1 be less in the rest. Dreams of incrediable rockets and medicines and cures far diseases just won't happen. Computers rise perhaps the only thing that actually benefits our society. You must understand how important this technology is to our society! But, int the long-run, the decision is yours is make. Choose quickly, the fate of our society is in your hands.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10193,4,The author concludes the story with this Paragraph because so you can get a view of what she is saying and also so you can understand it from her situration she was growing up like for example she said that,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
900,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I am aware that some people think computers have a negative affect on others, but I think it's the opposite. Computers have completely changed the world. People can save work on them, visually experience things they've never seen before, or even catch up with old buddies. In my opinion computers have a positive affect on people. With computers you can create documents, pictures, and even movies that will stay on your computer forever. How about your newspaper company? Does somebody hand write every paper that comes out? Without computers hundreds of copies of your newspaper wouldn't be able to b made every day. Not to mention, what would happen if you didn't use computers and a fire occured? All of your hard work will be turned into ash, but if it was on the computer you be able to retrieve it. You can save anything on a computer. Another reason why computers have a positive affect on people is because throught the internet you can visually experience places or things you couldn't before. If I was going to book a vacation I wouldn't just trust a book, I would wont to go on the computer so I could see pictures, videos, or hundreds of other articles I couldn't see anywhere else. This goes for anything else like furniture, instruments or even cloths. Computers offer alternative views that books don't. Not only can computers save data and give you visuals, but they give you an oportunity to catch up with old friends, relatives, or even meet new people! Instead of endlessly searching through phone books you can just type in their name and you bound to find somewhere on the internet. Popular websites like @CAPS1 make this extremely easy. When my dad was in search of his childhood friend he typed his name on @CAPS1 and ended up calling him @NUM1 minutes later! That wouldn't have been possible without computers. Computers truley do have a positive affect on people everywhere without them many things today wouldn't be possible. Hopefully others will agree with me too.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3397,2,"One person's strong negative opinion effects everyone else.  That doesn't seem logical or fair.  A library is a sanctuary for people to go read their favorite books for free, containing books from all types of genres.  There is a book for everyone in the library; it's a matter of finding it.  Therefore, finding a book offensive or unsuitable does not give one the right to take that privaledge away from everyone else.     Books have a way of putting our mind at ease, whether that's because it's an escape or measured on how enjoyable it is to read.  Books found offensive to one person could have a completely different impact on the next reader; some @MONTH1 even find the books relatable.  For example, if there was a scene that one reader thought was too graphic or horrific for other readers, there @MONTH1 be someone out there who would find this scene enjoyable because they can relate to it.  People who aren't capable of relating to such a scene would only find it as inappropriate and try to remove it from another's reach.  One person's opinion is not of any more importance than the next person's.     The book '@CAPS1' is a professionally written, fictional novel that has been praised for it's quality, hence the numerous awards won.  Although, this book contains a rape scene and numerous other inappropriate events that this woman was succumbed to throughout her life.  Even so, it is still on the list of suggested college level reads for @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 classes.  It is disappointing to think that people nowadays focus on the graphic scenes in a novel, versus the exceptional writing style.  If all readers were able to look past the surface amoung these scenes, less books would be contemplated on shelf removal.  One person's negative interpretation of a novel effects everyone else's right concerning the censorship in libraries.     Readers are fully warned beforhand of the maturity of the contents.  The books are ranked, critiqued, summarized (back cover summary), and even sorted in a library.  If one finds a book offensive, look in a different section.  Books are sorted by genre for that reason as well; different genres apeal to different people.  This applies to the maturity of the reader as well.  Books are sorted according to what appeals to what age.  If you find a book offensive, instead of having it removed from the shelf altogether, look in a section for younger peoples, or a different genre completely.  If someone finds the book offensive, the fault is not of the book being there, but of the person being in the wrong section.     The main problem concerning book censorship in libraries is not the content, but how the interpretations differenciate towards such content.  On this issue, the other readers' opinions on specific books being removed are being significantly overlooked.  For one to complain about a book's contents automatically give someone else the right to protect the book's contents.  For libraries to remove books in order of censorship is viewed as favoritism and is completely against the rights @LOCATION1 has stood for",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6712,3,"In this essay by Joe Kurmaskie, a young man is baited into accepting outdated information by a group of old men. He pays for it later when on his bicycle, he is almost killed by heatstroke or dehydration. The setting is an excellent way to portray his feelings of hopelessness, despair, and fatigue. While he is just starting out, the road is flat and easy. It is cool and breezy. When he begins to run out of water, the terrain becomes bumpier and harder. He sees empty plains, cracked, dry ground, and the hot sun. He begins to despair even more. After a while when he thinks he can go no more he sees a store that once held gallons of grape juice. He laughs at the irony. The setting does do a wonderful job of describing his sense of helplessness.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10106,4,I think the author wrote that because maybe that how she fells like in the winter she could really show people who she is but when spring come out she like a flower that has been dead all winter  ,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18468,7,"I am going @NUM1 write about a time when I was patient. My advocate @PERSON1 was soppese @NUM1 buy me some pens fo many of @DATE1 year as part of my @DATE1 money. I have been asking him everyday since then. “@PERSON2, @CAPS1 @MONEY1 do ur daily shopping yet”?  “no.” “@CAPS2.” @CAPS3 said “because I want my pens @CAPS4 @DATE1 present remember the @NUM3 owe me”. “@CAPS5 I do but be patient” “@CAPS6 ok my patients is about @NUM1 fall apart.”  I have been waiting ever since.",4,6,,10,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14844,6,"The Empire State Building's docking zone was a magnificent and novel idea when it was first concieved but it was too difficult to implement. Al Smith, who spearheaded the operation, was too over anxious to complete it. Since not enough time was devoted to researching the risk's and structure of the dock, the plan to mount it on top the Empire State Building was already a failure.       Before the construction even began, trouble started to brew. The building couldn't withstand the stress of the @DATE1 foot long dirigible. The shock to the building would have transmitted tremendous pressure to the foundation. So the roof would have to be re-done in order for it to be structurally sound. After many months and @NUM1 dollars, the creation of the landing dock could begin.       Life is precious, and the landing dock was too volatile and dangerous to be used. The architects overlooked the fact that most foreign ones were made of hydrogen not helium. Hydrogen is extremely Flammable. In @LOCATION1, the Hindenburg, which was constructed using hydrogen caught aflame and killed hundreds. There was even a law stating that aircraft could not be suspended so close to an urban area. The idea was ostentatious and showy but because it was rushed, precautions were not taken into account. The obstacles that faced the docking station were too much, so finally the plan to erect it was abandoned.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4221,2,I think censorship could be a good thing where there could be a   room just for grown ups. In the dunkirk library there is a room that has just adult books and the kids cannot go in there with out a parent. So whenever you go in there your parent are with you. But i dont think you can check them out. But if i had a kid i would not want them to see that kind of stuff until they got older so i think there should be seperate rooms. So whenever they got older and maturd they could go in there and see the books and maybe one day check them out and read one of them.      But on the other hand why not leave them on the shelf for kids to see because if not there gonna see iot other places or from other people then they go home asking there mom what this means and stuff why not let them learn on ther own from a book. There are some people that woulf agree with that but then there are people that would disagree with that. So maybe there should be rooms for different books and you can go in them whenever you want or maybe there should be rules that you cant go in there with out a parent.          I don't no what to do maybe there should be a vote between people if they like it or not. But some people would be mad over that so if you chose one someone would not like it or aomething like that.My upion is to just keep the books there and let the kids find out on there own.Some people would think im a bad parent but would you want you child to find out somwhere else.,2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9310,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus”, ends by, “when they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author concludes that story with that quote because the author sees spring as a new beginning. The author knows to work hard and needs to starts over. For example, some students fail the second semester and look at winter as a new start.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12159,5,I feel like there is one main mood which is thankfulness made up of many different moods. The other moods are reminisceance and hapiness. Thankfulness is focused on in paragraphs @NUM1 and @NUM2. Narciso Rodriguez talks about thankful he is his parents gave up so much to come to @LOCATION1 to give him a better life. He also talks about how his parents taught him how important family and friends were. He showed reminiscence by talking about what his house was like and what the people who made up the house were like. Lastly happiness which is mostly his mood when he remineses his past and family. Those are the moods of his meimor.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18831,7,"It was @DATE1 in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2. My cousin, @LOCATION3, and I where going up the street to the carnival they were having. When we got there it was ranning and one of the rides were open. So we sat around till all of they were open. We went on all of them, but I wouldn’t go on it. It was called the freax out. There were lights flikering and loud music. We were in the line for it but I got out. @CAPS4 said “why did you get of line?” “I am scaryed.” “ I want to go on it though.” “@CAPS1 you wait till later?” I said. We waited for a hour. I sat on the bench and @CAPS4 said” @CAPS1 we go on the ride?” “@CAPS2 we @CAPS1” my heart was pounding so hard I could hear it. That’s when @CAPS4 said “I @CAPS1 wait.” “@CAPS3 lets get it over with.” @CAPS4 was nice to wait till I was ready to go on. In conclusion my cousin is the nicest for waiting. On the up side I love that ride now.",8,10,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15777,6,"Many obstacles occured for the builers of the Empire State building and allowing dirigibles to dock there. One of these obstacles was the mooring mast itself. The winds on top of the Empire State Building were constantly shifting and if the dirigible was tied to the mooring mass it would swivel around the mooring mast. Another obstacle the builders experienced during this process was the already existing law not allowing airships to fly too low over urban areas. Due to the fact that the Empire State building was in New York, an urban area, the dirigable idea would have most likely never worked. The dirigable was unable to fulfill its destiny and the obstacles the builders faced were the main reasons.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9595,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus” ends the story with this paragraph because it reveals the importance of the Winter Hibiscus. In the story Saeng moves from Vietnam and feels very homesick. She fails her drivers test and is very upset. When she sees the familiar plant she is reminded of her home in Vietnam. The Winter Hibiscus reminds Saeng of fond memories with her grandmother and simple things such as her fine. Toothed buffalo-horn comb and the hibiscus hedge that would leave soft red petals in her well water. When seeing the familiar plant. “Saeng felt a shock recognition so intense, it was almost visceral. ”This shows how important the hibiscus was to her. The author ended the story with that paragraph to show how the winter hibiscus is a comfort to Saeng and will encourage her to do better on her next driver’s test.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18409,7,One time I was patient was when I was in science class taking a test. I was patient because I went up to the teacher because I needed help and so did the kid in front of me. It took him a while but I just stood there and waited. It took him around @NUM1 minutes because he needed help with a lot of thing. That is the time I was patient.,8,6,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13138,5,"In the memoir, the mood that is created by author is a loving and grateful mood towards the author's parents. A example from the memoir is when the author talks about his gratefulness toward his parents. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" (paragraph @NUM1). This quote shows that the author's mood is loving and grateful toward his parents because he mentions his gratefulness towards them. Another example is when the author tells the reader that his parents showed him two important lessons that he chose for the basis of his life. ""They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life"" (paragraph @NUM1). This quote shows that the author's mood is loving and grateful towards his parent's because the author tells the reader that what they did helped him become a great/better person. Lastly, when the author tells the reader that he is grateful for the fact that his parents gave up their life in cuba to make his life better. ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life"" (paragraph @NUM3). This quote shows that the author's mood is loving and greatful because he expresses what his parents did for him and it shows that he feels greatful that they did that. The author creates a loving and greatful mood toward his parents in this memoir.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9909,4,"It shows not to give up, it ends almost  the same way it began, it shows that people should not stay too attached to the past each are reasons why I believe the author concludes the story with that paragraph. It shows that people should not give up because even though she failed her test then she will try again later to pass it. Also the story ends the same way it begins by her taking the test or getting ready to which is a good way of writing. One last thing is that it shows that people shouldn’t become too attached to the past because if they look at one thing that reminds them of it they @MONTH1 fall apart, that is why she takes the test, to see if she can look at the familiar flowers without falling apart.   ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18319,7,"“it’s where?”  The woman asked for the third time. “@CAPS1 the hall, to the left of the bathrooms,” I said for what had to be the fiftieth time. I grimaced as she walked out of the showroom, she didn’t say anything. My dad worked for a small company that produced gift-shop-like knickknacks, like snow globes and the like. @CAPS4 offered me a @DATE1 job after my sixth grade year helping him out at work. Little did I know that what @CAPS4 was saying meant traveling to @LOCATION1, standing in the middle of the hallway at a huge building, and telling people where his showroom was. When working in the manufacturing and trade industry, you often don’t meet the smartest, well-educated people. You really need patience if you want to get anywhere.  “@CAPS2 dollars an hour, @CAPS2 dollars an hour.”  I muttered to myself as a middle-aged man walked up to me. @CAPS4 read my name tag that had the blue- and- white company logo of young’s incorporated.  “@CAPS3, you’re with young’s?”  @CAPS4 asked. “  Do you know where the show room is?”  I could tell what @CAPS4 was thinking. Why was an adolescent working for a cooporation?  “@CAPS1 the hall, to the left of the bathrooms.”  I said in a robotic voice.  “@CAPS6’t  you a little young to be doing this kind of work?”  @CAPS4 asked.  You were expecting maybe an intern?  I thought hastily, but I instead replied with a complacent  “@CAPS8, sir.”  “@CAPS9 old are you?”  @CAPS4 asked quizzically.  “@CAPS11, sir.” I lied.  I knew I could pass for a high –schooler,  so I knew @CAPS4’d  believe me.  I was really wishing that @CAPS4 would move along, because I getting pretty edgy. I was already beginning to imagine what would happen if I grabbed his tie and yanked on it as hard as I could. Doing this all day was @CAPS12 healthy. “Are you getting paid?”  @CAPS12 enough to put up with the likes of you.  I thought.  I took a deep breath,  and answered,  “yes,  sir.  But it’s @CAPS12 a lot.  It’s more like volunteer work,  really.”  @CAPS13 don’t ask any more questions, I thought.  @CAPS4 smiled and walked on,  “thanks son.” “You’re welcome.”  I said through partially clenched teeth.  I think we’ll both agree that I was patient that day.  And I hope that that man bought a boatload of stuff from my dad’s shop, because if @CAPS4 didn’t, I will be very put out.  That is the time when I was the most patient.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
883,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In @DATE1, more and more of the newest technology is being brought out to the public. Computers, @CAPS1-bars, telephones, and more are getting the most hi-tech softwares and machinery to @CAPS8 some of the most meraculous things happen. There is a cell-phone that allows you to turn of you lights in your house from thousands of miles today. This technology can be the best thing that has ever happend to the world. Some might argue that though. But I am here to argue The @CAPS2-sayers. With the new computers, people are able to talk with people all over the world. Also dreams can some true for people that never have the chance to follow @CAPS3. Also, questions that have been asked can now be answered. I have a number of cousins in @LOCATION3 who I only talk to if I go to visit @CAPS3 which is very rare. Because of some of The programs like @CAPS4, or @CAPS5 @CAPS6, I am able to converse with @CAPS7 cousins. Some people say That The @ORGANIZATION2 can @CAPS8 kids like me want to miss out on some quality-time with @CAPS7 family. Well, @CAPS7 brother is going to @CAPS10 in six months and I am going to want to talk with him. With phone companies haunting their costumers with scary prices, @CAPS7 family is not going to want to sit on The phone with him for @NUM1 hours and have to cut into their savings. On @CAPS7 @ORGANIZATION2, there is an application called i-chat which allows me to talk with @CAPS7 brother and see him as if he were home with me. @CAPS7 dad found out about @CAPS4 and he decided to try it out. As of now, he has reconnected with tons of his high-school Friends @CAPS13 get back in the game. Maybe you can find a special friend that you almost forgot about. Or you can find out what is happening with your sister who lives in @LOCATION1. The @ORGANIZATION2 also allows those less fortunate who can never afford a plane ride to discover a place they've always wanted to go. The internet offers virtual tours of places like the @LOCATION2 of even @LOCATION4- @CAPS14 places can be explored without stepping foot out of your house. Also @CAPS15, a website that offers millions of videos, incudes tourtorials for dances, sports, tricks, and more @CAPS13 you don't have to break into the bank for charged lessons. Another good thing about the @ORGANIZATION2 is it offers mostly reliable information. Sorry didn't get to finish @NUM2 paragraph & conlusion.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15549,6,"In the nonfiction excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @PERSON1, the architects faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle the architects faced was the lack of a suitable landing area. There was nowhere to land the blimps. ""A mooring mast added to the top of the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refuling or service, and to let passengers on and off."" This quote is saying that they needed to build a mooring mass to overcome the obstacle. The second obstacle they faced was the architects couldnt just drop a mooring mass on top of the building. ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by single cable wether, would add stress to the buildings frame."" This quote is saying the stress of the load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted and the still frame of the building would have to modified and strengthened to accommodate the new situation. The third obstacle which was the greatest obstacle was the successful use of the mooring mast. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This quote is saying the nature of the mooring mass itself was dangerous because the back of the ship would swevel around the mooring mass. This made the mass unsafe. Those three obstacles were what the architects faced in order to build the mooring mass, in which to compete having the highest building in the world.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
793,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I believe that computers have a very positive effect on people. Now as technology keeps advancing there are many educational options online, you can now interact with people without physically being with them and you can play games that will enrich your lives. Firstly, I believe that computers offer a wide variety of educational options. On the internet alone you can view your school textbook. You can also have extra practice with the many resources that come with the online textbook. Without physically bringing your textbook home you can view the book online. There are tons of extra practice, and practice quizes in the online textbook that are perfect for studying. Also, when you see on the internet you can get real time updates of major events in the world. For example, the other day I logged onto the internet and saw an article about the earthquake in @LOCATION1. I saw nothing of this in the newspaper, but the internet was so up to date that you can stay informed about something that happened only a few minutes ago. But if you choose not to utilize the internet, there are many programs that are very helpful for learning. That are direclly cetered to developing your children's math and reading skills. These programs can give anyone a jumpstart in education. Another opportunity that could be helpful on a computer is the ability to interact with other people. Video chatting, @CAPS2, and using social @CAPS3 sites are very good ways to interact with people. When you video chat you can have a conversation with some on class on video! Even most they are not physically with you talk to. Instan messaging is a less direct, but still useful who talk to someone far away. You can share the news or just have a conversation with anyone you know. Lastly, social @CAPS3 sites such as facebook, and twitter are a valuable way to communicate with people. You can past messages, play games or simply talk to someone on these websites. They certainly take the best parts of online interaction and put them together. Finally, there are many online games that are very useful. If you ever wanted to go bowling but you never had the time you could play a game online. Or if you have ever wanted to drive a stock car you could play a game online. These online games are good ways to sire you the opportunity to do something you wont normally do. Also many games help sharpen your reflexes and your quick thinking skills. These could possibly cary over into the situations where you need good reflexes and quick thinking. Games could possibly be very useful when you need to prepare yourself something. Also online games are for and enjoying also. Overall I believe the computer is a valuable resource in advertion, interacting with other people and playing useful games. After all who could pass up the opportunity to better prepare yourself for life?",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15415,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the author described the obstacles the builders of the empire state Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. An architect named Al Smith was a four-term governor of New York who headed efforts to construct the Empire State Building after his years in office. He imagined the top of the Building to be a ""higher Calling"". He pictured it to be equipped for an age of transportation that was then the only dream of avation pioneers. It seemed possible in his eyes, till the obstacles turned up. The first obstacle that struck, was the lack of suitable area in New York City. They would have to clear about four blocks in the bussy city! The architects and engineers of the Empire State Building consulted with experts, but it didn't plan out too well. Over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. The building would now be 102 floors, with a glassed-in observation area on the 101st floor. In the end, The greatest Obstacle was just nature itself.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4701,2,"@CAPS1 are many prespectives on censorship in our country. Thats just how our country is we have different oppinions on everything we do. But we have to live with it, @CAPS1 are many different prespectives that come from old, young, parents, and children. In libraries @CAPS1 are some books,music, etc that @MONTH1 be offensive to people.     But we all have different oppinions therefore we can never listen to one pupil. Or it would start a fight between people that disagree with him/her. I think people that go into the library should be mature about what goes on in @CAPS1 otherwise they shouldn't be in @CAPS1 looking at whatever they are wanting to read about.          The library is opened for the public and has lots of knowledge it shares with us. But if we get rid of all the censorship then it denies people knowledge. The books that they would get rid of would be because of the children. Because parents don't want children to look @NUM1+ material that is not appropriate for them so they try to keep it hidden.     I think we should keep censorship around because it would deny knowledge to people if we did not keep it. And we should remind parents that some things in the library is not suitable for childrens eyes and let them be responsable for what thier children look at.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12158,5,"The author creates a mood that he is very greatful to his parents. His parents taught him how to cook in a Cuban-style, (wich he loves to cook). ""(and for wich I am eternally greatful)."" His main greatfullness, is of their love and sacrifise. They would take in someone who needed time to get back on their feet, wich he found amazing. ""I will allways be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" And he is not affraid to let them know, ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance and I've thanked them repetedly."" @CAPS1 the memoir, the auther creates a mood that he is greatful to all his parents love and sacrifices, not only to himself, but to everyone they've helped.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
804,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, The effects computers have an people are not good. They can cause many problems in your life. When your on a computer, are you running? No, your just sitting there; using the computer involves very little movement. You need to be jumping around, dancing, walking with your friends, something! You can gain a lot of weight by sitting down and using the computer all day. Another problem that computers give you is being non social. You can get addicted to a game or something like facebook/@CAPS1 and be on there all the time. You wont talk to your friends as much at school or hang out with them because all you want to do is go on the computer. You are always thinking about just that and no other things in life. Computers can also be very dangerous. If you are on something where you are talking to people you don't know, they can find out things about you and can do to you. It's not at all to talk to people you don't know online. These are or the many problems computers cause. Trust me, I got addicted to a game before.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
208,1,"Dear newspaper editor, I have recently heard that some people think that computers have a negative effect on people. Well i think that computers have a positive effect on people. I think that computers have a positive effect on people because it helps make learning about other countries easier. Also, it helps people talk to people from different countries. Another reason is that it helps people learn about different cultures, religions, or traditions. The reason why some peope think that computers have a negative effect on people is because people are spending more time on the computer than spending time with their family. Also, people use the computer more than they use exercise machines, bicycles, or scooters. Now that you know about the positive and negative effects of computers, Which side will you choose? the one against computers or the one for computers. I would choose the one for computers.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
743,1,"To use computors, or not to. That is the question. Hundreds of millions of people use computors in their daily life today, but some believe that using computors does not benefit society. It is my firm beleif that they do. Computors provide entertainment, a way to interact with people, and a nearly endless expand of knowledge. Without them, we would quickly find life to be much harder and less fun to navigate. Have you ever been in your house on a rainy day just sitting around bored because there is nothing on @CAPS1? Well I have on many ocations. When that happens, all you have to do is turn on the computer and you have endless choices at your fingertips. You can go on game sites and play thousands of different games. (this can also help improve your hand-eye coordination). You can also watch movies or @CAPS1 shows that you missed or want to watch again. You can even go on sites such as fanfiction.net, and read or write your own stories! Another reason why computers benifit society is that they help you interact with people. You can keep in touch with far away family members and friends using webcams email, and chat sites without the bill that would come with talking on the phone. You can also meet new people from different countries and become their. That way you learn about different ways of life and cultures. You can also quickly contact people in an emergency get updates on events, and comunicate with your teacher if you have a question about your homework. Lastly, and maybe even most importantly, computers are on enormous source of knowledge. Say you wanted to learn how to start a campfire, you could just search, ""how make fire"" a google and @NUM1 matches would be found seconds. Also, if you were asigned a project for school, you could do all of your research easily from your computor, then type the whole thing up on a word document. You can even get a college degree online if you wished. And if you want to find a resturant that specializesin @CAPS2 cooking, you can find one close to you, get directions to it, look at the menu, see the prices get the restaurant's history, cud find reveiws for it all on one magnificent little choice: your computer. So you see, computors benifit society greatly. In fact I don't think we could live without them. They provide us with entertainment, an easy way to interact with people, and a huge source of information. Now, to all of you people who still think computors are bad; I'd like to see you lost a week without using one.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9199,4,"It is clear that Saeng is in the midst of struggle during a time of homesickness after recently moving from Vietnam. But as time goes on she will learn to balance the affection she feels for both her new country and homeland. As Saeng moves through the story it is apparent that she longs for memories of her homeland, but is beginning to find new things to enjoy about her new home. For example, while she is touched by the memories aroused by the hibiscus flower, she is intrigued by the new experiences, such as eating Big @CAPS1 and new friends. While homesickness has caused her to struggle she knows that with time she will be able to overcome the obstacle of leaving the old ways, for the new without completely obliterating either. She is convinced that by spring she will be able to overcome this obstacle and have the confidence to pursue any that will arise in her future.    ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15822,6,"The empire state building was high in the air, (@NUM1 ft) the problems were is that the building moves while it's in the air, and if you have something that is weighting around the heavy fifty-thousand pounds maybe more than the building might rip off if there is a big windstorm. The dock sounded like a good idea but you would need a winch and you would have to put some big clamps on the building to secure the balloon or dirigible to dock and refuel. In paragraph @NUM2, @PERSON1 of the building's architectural office said ""The as yet unsolved problems of mooring airships to a fixed mast at such a height made it desirable to postpone to a later date the final installation of the landing gear."" If Irving ever decides to put a blimp up and make an air station then make new technology. Who know's in the future we could have cars that fly through air, why not have balloons attached to buildings.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1231,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I think computers have good effects on people such as letting people talkto family or friends that live faraway. Computers also let you learn about different places and people around the world. My first reason is that computers let you learn about different places and people around the world. This helps you if you are going on vacation to foreign country you can learn where the test historical sights are and you can also learn where the best hotels are. If you have a project due on a foreign country you can search it up and it will give you all the data you need about it. My second reason is that computers let you talk to family or friends that live faraway. This helps you keep in touch so it doesn't seem like you don't know them any more. Computers can also let you talk to your friends that live faraway and if you want to hangout it would let you talk about which days are good for you and them.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6381,3,"In the beginning of the story the author is happy, but towards the end grows upset. ""I rode into the morning with strong legs and a smile on my face” (@NUM1). This shows how the author is in a good mood and happy to be there. She is on a journey, and no one can touch her. Then the story takes an unexpected turn. “With what I believed was my last burst of energy, I maneuvered down the hill,” (@NUM2). After getting lost in a town that seems distant from any living things the author hears people! She is extremely reliefed to have found anyone of help to her. She gets water and is forever greatful. The setting is horrifying to her because you will feel like you cant even if you live there! She felt alone and that she would die. If the setting was in a city surrounded by buildings the author would still feel some security even without water",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
879,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 do you think is the best technology made so far? Computer! They are the best technology because you can do anything on the computer. My friends say computers are one @ORGANIZATION1 the best technology because the internet can help a lot @ORGANIZATION1 things like if you have research paper. Research has proven that computers are a positive effect on people. My mom says computers are one @ORGANIZATION1 the most hardiest tools in the world. @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION1 my friends say that computers are one @ORGANIZATION1 the best because you can get help from the internet on homework assignments. They say that for people to talk online with other people. They said that they can interact with family members who live far away. They also said that on being on the computer has taking more teens @ORGANIZATION1 the streets and in their homes. Dr. @ORGANIZATION1 has done extensive research and has proven that being on the computer teaches you hand-eye cordination. Another thing he has proven is since computers has been invented the violence rate has gone down because more people spend time at home on their computers rather than out on the streets. He also proven that since people have started schools the success in school grades has gone way up. He thinks they have gone up because, instead @ORGANIZATION1 students reading long boring article on someone or something they can just search it on the internet. He said using the internet also saves more time. My mother syas when she was younger the computer gave her the ability to learn about far away places. My mother said that the internet would also let you learn about people customs rather than reading books because some books have not yet been upgraded and you would want to learn about their newest customs also. My mom thinks that using computer is a posotive effect on the world. @CAPS1 you are doing a fine job at writing at your job. My friends say computers are helpful, research has proven that computers have dropped the percentage at violence down, my also thinks that the computers is a posotive effect on us. I know you will agree with me when I say that having computers has put a powerful effect on people it gives people an easier time in life.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9167,4,"I believe the author ends the story with this sentence to show how she overcome obstacles emotionally and how the hibiscus plant is a sigh of hope for future. In the beginning of the story, saeng is upset about failing her drivers test and then on top of that she gets upsets about seeing the native plants of her homeland. “In the story it says, ”When she got to the hibiscus, she reached out and touched a petal gently. And besides it was yet another friend, a small shrub” This quote shows how these plants remind her of her homeland, which she misses dearly and is very important to her. By bringing this plant back to her house, it's like she's bringing a little piece of her homeland. This quote:– “when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" shows that Saeng has hope in her life again in the form of this is a big turn of events in her life that will make her much happier in @LOCATION1 which is why she ended the story with this sentence.  ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10621,4,the author concludes the story with that paragraph because it sounds like a interesiting ending paragraph that have something to do with the story,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10477,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph inorder to help the reader visualize a new beginning for the girl. A time to re-take the test and have the fresh new flowers to look upon. To watch the geese return. The geese are symbolic to her and the quest she had taken.. to her new home. The combination of the melting snow and the budding flowers lets the reader know of the bright fresh unclaimed future that is to come for the girl. The author uses the paragraph at the end inorder to explain more of what is to come, to enhance illustrations and capture the attentive audience. It is used to show a spirit in the girl. that allows us to see that she is like the flower, she is having trouble rooting/grasping on to the new lifestyle but there is always going to be a fresh/new time to continue on.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12580,5,"In the memoir there were actually two main moods. The first mood and most prominant mood was joy and happyness. Because throught the memoir the reader learns about the writers family and how greatfull the writer was for her family. An example of this is when the writer wrote: ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" But joy is not the only mood in the memoir, because though the memoir is mostly about positive things, the reader still has to remember that this is a memoir. Meaning this was only written because Narciso Rodriguez passed away. Therefor sadness is also a mood in this memoir. In the end, the joyfull mood sort of covers the depressing one, but to really get a sense of where the writer is coming from the reader most consider both these moods.",3,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13108,5,"The author showed his mood very clearly in the memoir. The way he worded things such as ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house in to a home"" Showed how happy he was toward his parents. He told us how greatful he was for his parents being so selfless and thinking about him first. He also makes it clear how he is proud and how he greatly respects his parents for the great things they did to improve his life. Also he shows how he admires his parents hard work and bravery for the things they have done. In conclusinon, His overal mood I think is his gratatude toward his parents.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13129,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 Narciso Rodriguez's mood was a loving, caring, thoughtful feeling which came from his childhood home. In the passage ""Narciso Rodriguez"" it states ""A cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"". This quote shows how much love and caring the mood is and makes the mood a more loveing and thoughtful feeling In the passage ""Narciso Rodriguez"" it states ""it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about to love."" In This quote I felt the mood which was love and the @CAPS1 inquires it with his word choice. Also in this passage ""Narciso Rodriguez"" it states ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"". This quote signify's all three moods loving, caring, and the thoughtfulness of the memoir. It describes how the mood was brought on, how it was and the meanings. The mood to the story is touching with all the warmth of love brought into the house, instead of caring about the possessions with greed.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3992,2,"Cursing, violence, gang activity, murder, ect. All of these  are factors found in our books and music we have today. Do you believe these items should be cencered? If books or music have these types of messages in them it is going to influence children and adult's choices on what they do in life. I feel that, yes books and music should be cencored.          My first supporting reason of why books and music should be cencored is the fact that children and adults get a huge influence from the information. Look in today's world; murders are happening, gang violence, and even abuse. If a book or song is advertising about murdering some one, or selling drugs nine times out of ten people think that is the 'cool' thing to do so why not do it. With people following uncencored books and songs it leaves dead people, inmates, and poor choices. Most people want to follow what an artist or author is doing because they are famous, which is causing peer preasure.     The second reason books and music should be censored is the simple fact of respect. Some books or music affends people by their race, religion, or their apperance. You find most of the critizisium from music more than books, but it does occur. Young children and teens shouldn't listen to or read about racism, sex, how to drugs, ect. Books and music that have advertisment about these types of things is disrespectful to parents and what they teach their children. The message brought from the book or song is basically saying go against your parents and do this. A person should be able to sit and listen to a nice song, or book without getting disrespected and offended.     My final reasoning for books and music being cencored is the reputation it will have or has. Books and music are just like people, they can send off the wrong message leaving a bad reputation upon others. For instance, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 tend to have a lot of bad messaged songs, so therefore most people think that all @CAPS3 and @CAPS1 @CAPS2 are bad. If songs and books were cencored there wouldn't be a sterio type against a certain type of music, or books have the best message. A normal person bases the first song, or book they hear/read by if or not they or their child can listen to or read that type of material.      Love, positive messages, influencing good, these are the types of things most people want to hear or read. If books and music are cencored there will not be any more cursing on the radio, bad ideas given to those influenced, and could stop less violence. Again I state, yes I feel books and music should be cencored.",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12415,5,"The author sets many moods for the reader in his memoir from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives. The first and most dominant mood is a sense of family or friendship. The author constantly describes how his family's generosity made his apartment into a friendly place with the constant coming and going of relatives, distant and close. Next the author installed a sense of warmth. The very idea of this family moving from cuba into this three room apartment for their son really gives any reader some sense of warmth. Finally the author gives us a Sense of culture. As early as paragraph @NUM1 the author writes...""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful. Passionate Cuban music (which I still adore today) filled the air..."" In these ways, the author reaches out to his readers with the mood of friendship, warmth, and culture to give us a taste of his life with his adoring parents in this small three room house he called home.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4337,2,"Censoring @CAPS1     We all know that language is the foundation of human legacy.  Language is spoken to mean anything the speaker is trying to communicate.  To take books from the shelves is to steal the words from the mouths of many great speakers.  We have the obligation to keep the @CAPS1 that we have created alive.  If something is forgotten, it is as if nothing happened. If nothing happened, it will reoccur- good or bad.     To hide away words from our children is wrong.  If not by word of print, word of mouth will lead them to the same discoveries as they would have come to if reading it from a book.  But even more importantly, what good is hiding the truth?  When many speak of tragic incidences, they speak, '@CAPS2 forget.'  If we should not forget, why should the youth @CAPS2 learn?  There is nothing in print that can not be conveyed in a different communication form.     Our @CAPS1 is written on the pages of literature.  The books we read are the property of all humanity and should be read by all to educate us of our mistakes as well as our triumphs.  A commonly debated topic in the world of censorship is 'The @CAPS3 of @CAPS4 @CAPS5.'  @CAPS6 is a novel that displays what life was truly like in one of @LOCATION1's most racially barbaric times.  One might argue the fact that it uses an offensive 'n' word more than a few times.  To @CAPS6 one might argue that @PERSON3, the @CAPS7 @CAPS8 that stood by @PERSON2 was loved by @PERSON2.  A book in @CAPS6 time displaying a friendship between a black and a white man is truly a ground breaking feat.  The 'n' word was common place in @CAPS6 time period- a friendship between a black man and a white man was not.  Is it really important that a child knows of just another offensive word that they are bound to discover eventually anyway, or is it more important that they learn that color of skin does not change a person?  Do not take the opportunity for a child to learn what really matters away.     To take one book away is to take all of them away.  Censoring one piece of literature opens the doors of debate for every other piece ever created.  The world has seen what can happen when things get censored.  During @PERSON1's dictatorship, nearly everything from the internet, to books, to newspwpers, to television programming, to movies, to music, to magazines were censored so only what the dictatorship wanted got through.  The people were brainwashed, and those who were not rose up, and when they did they were shot down.  Do not let the world come to that.  We are better than that and our literature shows it.     In other words, to censor media and the literature that surrounds us, we deprive ourselves of education and freedoms that are critical to the well being of future generations.  Do not hide the free speech of authors, do not hide our @CAPS1 from our children, do not let us make the same mistake that has been made before.  Let us educate our children for the future of humanity.  Let our @CAPS1 not repeat itself. Let us innovate and create a new, better world.  Let us allow our words to flow freely.  Let us allow our legacy to live on.",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19236,7,"This a story about a time when I was patient. It was the @NUM1 @DATE1  we were on the plane about to go on a cruise, when we got to the ship I was so excited I was  thinking how much fun I was gonna have, think what my room would look like, and going to all these cool new places. So we got on the dock and there wa a line and I was patient an waited to get on, @CAPS1 there was another line to check your passport, so I was patient and waited. @CAPS1 there was another sticken line. It was to get our room keys, but I was patient and waited again and just stood there for a little bit and it was done, but wait you would never guess, there was another line. So like all the other lines I stood there on my iPod listening to music. They my dad said “ready”, I said ready for what another line he said “no” to look at your “room and relax .“ I was so excited. Finally we where done with the lines no more for a white. So I open my door with my very special key that we had to wait in line for and looked at my room it was amazing. But the bath room was a little small but it was great. I was so happy to final done with the lines no more! That is a time when I was patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16077,6,"In this excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced. The safety of the people were at stake, nature was also a great obstacle, the other reason was that dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State building because it was against the law.First of all, the builders obstacle that they completely forgot about was the safety of the people. Most of the blimps from outside of the @LOCATION2 used hydrogen other than helium, and hydrogen is very flammable. And they did not want to risk anyone getting hurt in a densely populated area. Also, another big obstacle was @CAPS1 nature itself. At times the winds would be violent and it would go back and forth. And if a blimp was attached, it would be dangling violently over citizens had not nearly safe. Lastly, it was illegal to have airships flying close to urban areas and New York was highly dense. And the reason for this law is for nothing bad to happen to the citizens. In conclusion, there were many obstacles the builders had gone through, and they were blinded by the project and they wanted to get it done they forgot about safety.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19194,7,"When I was patient, we were onone way to @CAPS1 point: with @LOCATION1 her mom and dad and her brother and I. We were driving to go there. It took us @NUM1 hours to get there. @LOCATION1 and I were very patient we wated and waited to get there we were soo exited. When we got there, we all waited in line to ride a hole bunch of rollercoaster. We all waited in line about @NUM2 hours for every ride it was extra buisy that day. @LOCATION1 and I wanted to ride the tallest rollercoaster. It was called the @CAPS2 the @CAPS2 was @NUM1 @NUM4 it was the tallest rollercoster. I had ever been on and all the other people that came too. To get on that ride it was a @NUM5 hour wait it was exosting and we had to be very patient. But when we got to the front it was worth the wait!",9,7,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9838,4,"The author probably conclude the story with that paragraph b/c she is basically relating the plants to herself meaning as the plant bloom she will too by taking the test. and her reason could be b/c or is b/c reluctantly she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quite repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now. Basically she did as the geese by lifting her head watching as their distinctive V was etched against the evening sky, slowly facing into the distance. This is why I believe the author but this to conclde the story...because she was comparing herself ib the geese and does as they did ",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19246,7,"One day, two years ago I was going to visit the @ORGANIZATION1 train @CAPS1 was a @NUM1 hour wait once we got to the froun of the line we haD to go pack to the end because my mom forgot the tickets so how we had to wait 21/@NUM1 hours to get to the begining once we got there the gay told us that we could of told him our name and he coulD of founD our tickes on line my mom got really maD but we got to go on the @ORGANIZATION1 train wich was really fun. thats the time I haD to @CAPS2 pachiant for over @NUM3 house hanDing in extreme heat.",7,8,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4568,2,"Works of literature are works of literature no matter what they contain.All liteature should be placed on the shelves of a library. If for some reason the material is offensive or deemed as crude then it should go into a restricted section where permission is required to enter. Literature is a strong item when it comes to persuasion. So we must take care of what we allow to be released or seen and to which eyes.     Literature is written by the author for many reasons. Perhaps the reason is to make money or to share a point of view but either way the author generally wants his or her literature to be read. How would the author ever achieve his or her goal if we decided to remove their hard work from the library shelves. It simply could not be read if it is not available. This is one reason why certain books should not be altogether removed from the library.     No matter how crude a topic @MONTH1 be it @MONTH1 still be needed by certain individuals. If there were images of a nude person in a scientific book that librarians did not want children to get their hands on then how would students study a topic such as sexual education or anatomy for a class? Of course there are people who simply want to see nudity for foolish pleasure and that is why permission should berequired to obtain these books. A small closed off room in a library should be sufficient to contain all the books deemed crude. This way the only access to the books would be to get a key from a librarian.     A book not read @MONTH1 as well never have been written. There is absolutely no point in destroying certain types of literature because some @MONTH1 feel offended. The simplest solution would be to simply make it so the only people to view these books would want or need to go view them. We simply can not lose certain pieces of writing because some parents do not trust their childs eye or because a person @MONTH1 be offended at the material. After all, when everybody has a chance to say what is offensive there will be no books left.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11897,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was ""solidority."" because in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their non culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me to today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate cuban music (which I adore to this day filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" also in paragraph @NUM2 it says. ""growing up in this enviroment instilled in me a great sense that ""family had nothing to do with being blood related."" This is now the mood created by the author was ""solidarity"".",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15503,6,"Based on the information given in the excerpt, the obsticals that the builders of the Empire State Building had to face were critical to the usage of the dock. Not only is it a challenge to build 102 story building but when factoring in wind and other weather conditions it is not an easy task: In order for the builders of the Empire State Building to create and hoist the dock the top they needed to first reinforce the skeleton of the building itself. ""The Architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" (paragraph @NUM1) @CAPS1 constructing the mooring mast the builders had to think about the violent wind speeds and the structure of the building to support itself. There were many obsticals that the builders of the Empire State Building had to work through to complete their project.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16424,6,"The Empire State Building was designed to become the world tallest buiding, with a few tricks up its sleave. The building was originally planned to also function as a Mooring mast for dirigibles. Unfortunately many problems lay in the way interning this theory into reality. One obstacle the constructors of the Empire State Building faced was the use of dangerous gases in the balloons. ""Most Dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION2 used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable. ""The use of hydrogen posed a dangerous threat to the safty of civilians in New York City. Another problem which was encountered with the building was the wind."" the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast... (the dirigibles) dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe. A third problem the builders had was the leaglity of the issue of mooring ships the buildings. There was an existing law against air ships flying to low over urban areas. ""With this law in place it would have been impossible for ships to moor. Although the builders had good intentions, they failed to realize the reality of the situation.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4131,2,"Would you censor the @CAPS1? i @CAPS2 i sure would not. The @CAPS1 is a very percious and religoius part of our nation and history, but this is just a mere example. There are thousand of books, newpapers, articles, and media that play and important role in the history and the future of human beings.     Common sense or also referered as common knowledge is something that we dont pick up outa no where. We absoub it thought this that do, see, and read. An example is the 'The @CAPS4 @CAPS5' this is a book of a @CAPS5 that meets a young boy and the @CAPS5 is just thrilled to be of purpose for the boy. Throught out the story the @CAPS5 gives the boy its apple, its branches, and even its trunk. but the @CAPS5 is happy. at the very end of the story they former young boy is now a old man that just wants a place to rest so the @CAPS5 straightens up his stumb and is just happy with @CAPS4 the old man his happiness. Now would you censor that?! That story reflects that helping someone is a key to life. That @CAPS4 someone else happiness is the true gift of life.      Now relegion is something that is censored alot these day... Why?! The @CAPS1 for example is just a book full of short stories that ties together. Indivigle tha stories are just little reminders of right and wrong,  kindness and jelousy. Its doesnt say if you have to follow every word and every sentence by day and night. its just helpfull advise, And really who has not asked someone else for advice? @CAPS8 relgion on tv, in schools, and everywhere else is telling us we dont need relegion for us to be productive and honest. Me coming from a roman catholic and christian background have never really went to church or read the @CAPS1 am swelled up about relegion. Thanks to a close friend.     @CAPS8 could also be good at its points though. For an example @CAPS8 adult type content from minors is helpfull sence little kids dont @CAPS2 much of anything. They just go with the flow. Another example is @CAPS8 mail sent to different countries. This helps keep our country safe from invasion and war.      so i will say that @CAPS8 can be a good thing but too much of it can be bad. Such as @CAPS8 relegious content, or @CAPS8 classical book that teach you common knowledge that will help aid you in the future. This stuff is something that should be @CAPS10 by ages and ages to come!",3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19448,7,"I remember when me, my brother, my dad and my mom were at ceder point. I wanted to go on so many rides but they all had big lines. So we waited for the rapter that took one hour just to get on the ride but when we got on it felt like it was even longer then the wait in line it felt like @NUM1 hours because of how ??? it was. We walked and saw the ??? force it had a ??? ??? on it so we waited in line was much longer than the rapter it was like 3-@NUM1 hours. But when we got to the hop of the stairs we were up it was so much fun because we waited so long and my brother stopped complen because he was so ??? in me. the ride was fun but when we were done we had to leave ??? was like mom. We only wait on the rides but it was fun and ??? That was a time when I was patient.",8,7,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21250,8," I met my best friend, @PERSON1, in the third grade. Best friends are the people who come into your lives and stay with you for the rest of it, through the easy moments and the hard times. We learn from our best friends and share experiences with each other. No matter the distance, their friendship is always there for you, even if you are thousands of miles apart or just a few houses away. The laughter between two best friends is an element that bonds them for life, because when two friends truly laugh together, they will always have a small moment in their lives intertwined for as long as they live.  @PERSON1 and I have grown up together. We were there for each other from learning how to jump rope at school through broken bones, school-girl drama, crushes, boyfriends, heartbreaks, weddings and funerals. We helped each other get through everything from hard classes to family pets dying. We offered advice and brought hot chocolate, but this is only the beginning of our friendship. After the problems were solved, we learned how to laugh at our mistakes and move on. Together, we have gotten past slip-ups in what we say, to slipping on the floor. After we have giggled over what the other did or said, we helped them up and moved on. @PERSON1 and I know that, no matter what situation arises, we will always be there for each other, because we have the each others backs. @PERSON1 can make a joke out of any occasion. She is one of those friends that can make you smile just by seeing her face or hearing her voice. Most of the best moments in my life have usually involved @PERSON1 in some way. We have memories from lying in the driveway and watching the stars at night, to cracking up while working backstage for the local drama club. @PERSON1 can always crack me up with her perfect imitations of anyone, no matter how bad of a mood I am in. I crack @PERSON1 up all the time, usually unintentionally, by saying or doing something ridiculous, which shows my true blond side. We laugh over lines from our favorite movies and write down the funniest moments. We have shared so many memories together that we laugh over everything from driving around town and listening to music to being followed by the kiosk workers at the mall. One of the funniest times we ever spent around each other was while we worked backstage during a production by our local theater club. We laughed about everything from building sets to mistakes on stage. We had to open and close curtains in the dark, while wearing full black. I stubbed every single one of my toes that week while rolling the sets on and off stage. My hair was impossible to miss from the audience's point of view, even though I kept cramming it under a black ski hat. @PERSON1 would always have a problem opening one of the curtains that would get stuck when it was halfway open. She had to frantically tug on the rope even thought it kept getting caught in the pulley. I would laugh at her mistakes and she would laugh at mine. We both had a lot of fun watching the audience, director, and actors all at the same time. @PERSON1 and I got to stand in the back and watch all of the actors mistakes, giggling silently with each other. Every time one of the actors would make a mistake, we could watch the audience laugh and the director's face, which was usually horrified for a moment. Now whenever we mention any word or line from that play, we both start cracking up and remembering the entire weekend. There were more jokes then could ever be written down, and every time it is brought up, we remember even more funny moments.  When we are near each other, one quick look or a single word muttered under our breath can crack us both up. We can make each other laugh without even explaining what we meant, because we have shared so many experiences that we can read each others minds. Just one key expression or a twinkle in our eyes can crack the other up. Most other people around us probably would not even notice the small crinkle in the corner of our eyes or a slight smile. Those are the best codes ever imagined, because only the person that it is meant for could figure it out. The messages shared through the eyes a best friend can silently bring up subjects never spoken about and make us laugh. This is why true best friends are bonded by laughter, because it keeps them close no matter what comes, and for every moment of sadness, there are two moments of laughter and happiness.",26,22,44.0,44,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16482,6,"One obstacle the builders of the Empire state Building in attempt to allow dirigibles was, the stress from the mass & the dirigible and wind pressure would all be transmitted to the buildings foundation. The frame of the building would have to be strengthened to accommodate the new situation. There were also safety reasons. Since most states used hydrogen in stead of helium and hydrogen is flammable. If something were to happen and the dirigible was to catch fire. The fire could destroy New York City since it's so densely populated. The biggest obstacle was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. It the dirigible was tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Plus it",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4563,2,"There has been a problem with censorship in libraries recently. Many books, movies, and music are being removed from libraries because they are found offensive. There are, however, libraries that do not remove items due to being offensive. There are many reasons as to why items are censored or not censored, but libraries should not have to censor certain items.     One reason why offensive material should not be removed is because material that is considered offensive could be given a label that warns people of the material in the book or movie. If a child tries to check out a book or movie that has a warning label, they would have to have a parent with them to approve the item the child is getting. Whether or not children read or see the offensive material is the decision of the parents.     Another reason offensive material should not be removed is because parents would have to approve the item that their child is getting. If they believe the material is too mature for their child, they could restrict them. If the item doesn't seem too harmful, they could allow it. That decision, however, is up to the parents.     Books or movies that are considered offensive could also be given their own section of a library. Children would not be allowed in that section without parental supervision. And that, again, is the decision of the child's parents.     There are many reasons why offensive material should not be banned. That sort of material, however, should have restrictions on who should and should not check them out.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12816,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a happy and a loving one. A reason why I think this is by talking about how he and his neighbors (of different descent) All got along very well in solidarity with one another which creates a sense of love. Also when he talks about happy times like when he and his family are cooking in the kitchen they are having a good time, laughing, and listening to Cuban Music. Lastly when he and his family take in family or even just really close friends who they consider family conveys a true sense of happiness, peace, and love.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10154,4,"In the story ""Winter Hibiscus"" by @CAPS1 Ho a girl named Saeng failed her drivers test that day then vowed that she would retake from the spring. She ends with this statement to say that it is a new season and a new beginning for her into her new life. This archetype being the changing from harsh cold winter to nice warm spring time shows that the trouble her mother and Saeng would get better. As hard trouble winter left than their is calmwarm new beginning spring. Saeng knows this and knows that she is going to pass.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12642,5,"The mood created by the auther was happy, thoughtful, and very polite. Narciso talked about his family and his life! He also was talking about how he loved his family and what he does best like cooking and playing his Cuban music.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9488,4,The author concludes this story with the paragraph is that the author is showing  that when it becomes spring and the geese are budding she said silently to her self that she is going  to take the permit again. ,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13367,5,"The mood created by the author is a good @CAPS1 mood it describes His and His familys struggles but very @CAPS1 @CAPS3 even thow they @CAPS4 behind jobs, Friends and Family there all very @CAPS5 and @CAPS1 to enjoy there Lives in New Jersey withe there Cuban setting",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15830,6,In building the mast and docking to the empire state building the constructers faced major problems. The Idea of a dock for dirigibles was a good idea at the time but faced both structrial and social problems. Architects and stated that over time the dock for the dirigible and climatic change would cause strain on the framework of the building. This led to more reconstruction and economic spendings. Another problem the builders faced was the location of the building itself. Newly built dirigibles had hydrogen rather than helium which led to flamibility. The Hindenburg was destroyed in a fire which led the builders to consider what would happened if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York. Docking of dirigibles led to many obstacles which ultimately led to the project shutting down. What was thought as the future is now the past.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16358,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building came upon some problems when putting in the dock for dirigibles. First, the sheer height of the building makes catching the dirigibles dangerous because of the tower's structure @CAPS1, If the dirigible was to crash, it would be falling onto a big citie's streets. Finally, most dirigibles were filled with hydrogen and that is highly flammable. That is why the mooring mast was dangerous.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9024,4,"I think the authour chose to end the story this way to show that the girl is remembering her past and being at, ease. with the flower she at a since of peace. The writer wants to convey that no matter what your used to you can find something that can bring you happiness and a since of focus.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16492,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there and those obstacles include: the lack of a suitable landing area in @LOCATION1, a mooring mast was needed to the top of the building so dirigibles or blimps could anchor there for several hours for fuel, services, and to let passengers on and off, The steel frame of the Empire State Building had to be modified and strengthened because a thousand-foot blimp mooring at the top of the building held by a cable tether would cause stress to the building frame. The blimps load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all through the buildings foundation which was somewhere about eleven hundred feet below. The last obstacle in the allowing blimps to dock at the Empire State Building was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas which would make it illegal for a dirigible to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
220,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 being at home with nothing to do. You cant play basketball with @PERSON1 you friends because you have did hand eye cordenation. You want to learn about @LOCATION1, but there arnt any books. And you want to talk to your friends. That’s what would have happend if we dident have advances in technology. No handeye cordenation, we wouldent be able to learn about far way places and we coudent online. Ccomputers benifit our lives in so many ways. To begin with, hand eye cordenation is very important. Without @CAPS5 we woudent be able to ware or even hold a pensil. @PERCENT1 of peoples hand eye cordenation has emproved when using a computer. That was proven in a @DATE1 say a @CAPS2 by @PERSON2, head of human reactions. “@CAPS3 knows that your hands are the most oversized part of you body, the computer help down the movements to hone hand eye cordenation.” – @PERSON1 said that in a @DATE2 interview with sience magaziene. When you are clumsy you break things. Importan things sumtimes, like @PERSON3 in @LOCATION2 broke her mothers glass vase. @CAPS5 could have been helped if she had used a computer. In addition, computers give us the power to learn about faraway places. No books! @PERCENT2 of people prefer looking up information on a computer than in a book. @CAPS5’s a fact. Some people wouldent have heard about the earthquake in @LOCATION3 if @CAPS5 wasent for the websights that brodcasted updates on @CAPS5. Campers weudent have heard. In @ORGANIZATION2 had a front page spread to promote the use of computers instead of books. Books could be outdated but the computer will always have uptodate answers. Also, people need to be able to talk online. Bisness meetings, governments plans, to just chatting with a friend. People need to be able to stay in tuch. If the presedent couldent vidio conference he would be flying everyware. Emale is the only way @PERSON5 from @CAPS4 talks to her coworkers. “ I just am located so far away, its so much easier.” @CAPS5 makes bissnesses and major incoperations flow.”@CAPS6 is now the only way kids talk @CAPS5 seems.” @PERSON4 says. @CAPS5 lets them feel like there a part of somthing biger then they are. Now, @CAPS1 happy, healthy, and educated young and old amaricans. They can do and research whatever they want. Its amazing what technology does. @CAPS5 alows you to talk online research faraway places, and practice your handeye cordenation. That sounds like a good thing to me! So @ORGANIZATION1, computeristic fist are only good. So agree with me @ORGANIZATION1!",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6191,3,"Theres many features of the setting that affect the cyclest. His dehidration started with the sun beeting down on him and the thirst for water. He was mainly affected when he was out of water and road by an abbanond welchs grape juice factory. “A sand blasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth could still be seen. I hung my head.” Then when he had almost nothing left he spoted a bait shop.” Somehow I climed away from the abandoned factory of juices and dreams, slowly gaining elevation while losing hope.” Then, as easily as rounding a bend my troubles, thirst, and fear were all behind me.” @CAPS1 is when he saw “Gary and @CAPS2 Fish camp – If you want bait far the big ones were your best bet thus realcaving his troubles.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15234,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced when they were attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle was the safety of the people. The author states, ""Most dirigibles outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" This would have been a major problem. Another obstacle was the violent air currents that made it hard to land. In this essay it says, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" This quote shows why landing would be dangerous. Finally, it was illegal to fly airships too low over urban areas. The text explains, ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building, or even approach the area."" this shows how even if everything worked, they wouldn't be able to do it These are just three of the obstacles that prevented the builders of the Empire State Building from docking dirigibles.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13180,5,"The mood the author creates inthe memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso @CAPS1 from Home: The BluePrints Of Our Lives, is @CAPS2 but happy and loving at the same time. Narciso creates a @CAPS2 mood because he explains about his familys troubles and his friends and local neighbors. Narcisco explains what they went through, Which makes a person feel @CAPS4. Narciso also creates a happy and loving mood because he would say, People came from all over ""Made up of mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants"" would come to this one city, they would unite and help one another. They would also consider each other one big family, which consists of happy and loving. Those are the moods the author, Narciso Rodriguez, creates in the memoir.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1677,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, The use of advanced computers have increased. You don't see kids outside as often. On the news, you hear about obesity. And you hear the crime rates go up. This does not benefit the socierty. Computers has a negative effect on people. Does your neighborhood seem to be locking children? It's not because their dead! They are now always inside on their computer. I know a thirteen year old named @ORGANIZATION1. She even admits that being on a computer is better than being outside with friends. Meeting people over technology, especially for miners, is a huge risk. You don't know the person. Soon, you would have no friends when it comes to being in the social life. You'd be the outsider. For @PERSON3, her family doesn't even know who she is anymore. Do you want your child to be the outsider? Being on a computer all the time is like being at a fastfood restaurant. You don't exercise, all you do is eat andt talk, but now all you do is eat and on the computer. I have met a obese child. @PERSON2. He weighs three-hundred pounds at the age fourteen. An eight grader, can you believe that? He tells me he has his laptop on his lap, surrounder by junk food. He never exercises or take a break. His report card is unbelievable. He used to be A @CAPS3 student. Now he's in a dump. @PERSON2 does not listen to his mom at all. @PERSON1, @ORGANIZATION2's, mom says ""he locks himself in his room, goes straight to his laptop, and starts eating. You can even hear him munching the junkfood."" And we wonder why our kids are getting obese there days. It used to be about jobs, but now it's about who you meet on a computer. Myspace, facebook, twitter, you name it, is how the crime rates are increasing now. The people behind these pictures and profiles @MONTH1 not be who you think they are. Especially, miners who lie about their age. They're the ones who fall for those perverted old men. That is one way our sex offenders get a way around. They can use someone's name and be underover. They tell these young girls to meet them places and that's how our young girls, and boys, gets kidnapped, rapped, and end-up killed. A computer holds millions of ways criminals can commit a crime. Do you want your child to be next? Computers these days, are used in the wrong ways, by the wrong people. Kids are never outside again. They are getting obese. And it's a way they get kidnapped. Don't allow this. Get your child(ren) away from their laptops now! Go on a family vacation, somewhere fun. And don't let these sick-minded people get to you or your kids. Take action now!",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18509,7,"Have you ever heard your mom or dad say patience is a virtue. Well I’ve heard it many times in my house actually too many times. Patience is a something that means you have to wait like when you wanna go see a new movie on opening night, you might have to wait in a big line cause it’s a new movie. So your gonna have wait with patience!",5,6,,11,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16050,6,"There were many obstacles that the architects never realized while building the docking station for the dirigibles.  One of these obstacles they faced was height, and the lack of safety that arose from it.  In @DATE1, the German dirigible ""Hindenburg"", which use a highly flammable hydrogen, caught fire in New Jersey as described in paragraph thirteen.  Should this have happened to a dirigible docked high over New York City, the airship would plummet to to the ground where many New @CAPS1 would be going about about their day.  The largest obstacle they faced though was nature.  Air currents and storms would cause the dirigible, only teathered to the mooring mast by a rope, to ""swivel around and around the mooring mast... dangling high above pedestrians on the street.""  As pointed out in paragraph fourteen, this was neither practical, nor say if.  The third obstacle they faced with a pre-existing law against airships flying too low over urbanized areas.  Even as tall as the Empire State Building is, it was still impossible to legally dock at the new mooring mast.  Al Smith's idea finally had to be abandoned due to safety, nature, and state law.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21364,8,"                                           ""Laughter"" Laughter is a very big part of my life. I love to laugh, whether it is about something, at something, about someone, at someone, a funny event, a funny face, or just a funny joke. I heard once that the more you laugh the longer you live; if that is true I'm gonna live forever. I'm going to tell you a story about laughter because it is a big part of my life.  I laugh the most when I am with my family and friends. They are all very funny people that are cracking jokes any chance they get. There hasn't been one family gathering or friend hangout where I didn't laugh. A very funny moment in my life that I will never forget is the time my sister and I were starting to get to know our new step-mom, @CAPS1.We were all playing this game where one person throws a football into a group of people, and whoever catches it gets the amount of points the thrower calls out. We were all getting points left and right; however, @CAPS1 wasn't doing so hot. She came up with a plan that she said would make her win. Actually, it just ended with all of us on the floor crying from laughing so hard. I had thrown the ball and called out ""@NUM1 points!"" @CAPS1 turned around. My eyes opened wide. Shayna screamed in laughter as @CAPS1 had pulled down her pants to moon us. The foot ball hits the grass, as do all of us.We laughed until our stomachs ached and our eyes watered. I really think that moment brought all of us closer together. I believe laughter brings everyone closer together.  My boyfriend and I are very close because we laugh all the time; it is a very big part of our relationship. Just think for a minute. All the emotions that we humans have and deal with on a regular basis, which one is truly universal? We can love, cry, feel hate and disrespect. Most of us have sympathy and empathy, but the one true feeling we humans share with and between another person is a smile along with laughter. If you can give a person a reason to laugh, then you have connected and made a mile into an inch. It's even bigger than that. The internet has provided us in ways to reachout through laughter. Not just in miles, but in counties. You-tube is a social network of laughter. I have put many funny videos on you-tube and watched many that made me laugh. One day I made this video of my friends and I playing @CAPS5. It was so funny I thought I would put it on you-tube. I shared it with my mom who laughed very hard. She shared it with family who shared it with co workers who shared it with there family and friends.They all laughed.Laughter is all around. Laughter can start in one place like @PERSON1 and reach out all the way to @LOCATION1.  Laughter also isn't always a good thing. People can go from laughing at a funny joke to laughing and making fun of a kid on the play ground. Laughter doesn't always feel good, if you're the one being laughed at. I don't like to think of laughed that way. I like to remember all the times I laughed and shared that special moment with a loved one.  Laughter is in my everyday schedule. I would have to write a book in order to tell you all the times that laughter was one element in my life because it happens every day. I enjoy laughter. I hope you do,too.",20,25,,45,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7611,3,"There are many affects of the setting in this eassy that, that can be good and or bad. The setting is alone on a empty mountain road, with no house, no cars, no people. In now going to give you some good and bad effects. One good effect is that you by yourself so while you exercise you can relax and enjoy the energy. One bad thing is that what if you pop a tire or need help. You stock because theirs no one around. Another good thing is that you being by yourself, @CAPS1 any cars. You don’t have to worry about getting hit so you’ll be able to just relax and enjoy the ride . Another bad thing is there is no water so you might want to bring plenty with you. So whatever you decide to do just be careful and think you idea thought  ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10084,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to illustrate the true meaning of the hibiscus. The hibiscus is symbolic to Saeng in several ways, but the most important is that it represents change and growth and the ability to overcome obstacles. Upon seeing it, she is overcome with childhood memories and sentimentality. However, she must adjust to her new home if she wants to grow as a person. She will survive here, just as the hibiscus will survive through the winter. Also, Saeng vows that “in the spring” when “this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” She is determined to succeed, and the hibiscus itself represents triumph over obstacles.  It stands for survival and endurance through life’s disappointments and challenges, from failing a driver’s test to starting a new life in a strange and foreign country. The author’s choice to end the story with this paragraph exhibits Saeng’s ultimate understanding of her strength through the symbol of the hibiscus.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15049,6,"The obstacles; the builders of the Empire state Building faced in attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there were highly challenging. They delt with the frames and shapes, but theres other reasons that are not so physical.One of the greatest obstacles they faced to allow dirigibles to dock on the building was nature itself. At the top of the building winds were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Using the Empire state Building, where the blimps would be dangling high about pedestrians on the lower level of the street, was not safe.Another particular obstacle they faced was; an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas. This law made it illigal to ever tie up the blimp to the Empire State building itself. The blimps couldnt lad on the flat roof of the Empire state building. The builders of the Empire State Building had alot of obstacles in front of them. Not just physical objects to make it easier for the dirigibles to land, but the @CAPS1 of politics and nature aswell.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12584,5,"In Narciso Rodriguez from Home the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 of our lives The mood that was created by the author in the memoir is @CAPS3 but sad because it says in @CAPS4 one that the bays father and mother where liveing in a One room appartment. But it is @CAPS3 and @CAPS5 because they his parents had him and they had A house feel like a home to him. they tought him how to cook and they showed him diffrent music from his cultere and he adores the music today that information was in @CAPS4 @NUM1 The last thing that made this @CAPS7 @CAPS3 and @CAPS5 was. the naigboors lived together and where there for each other when they need each other. Plus they had all diffrent religons italian, Spanish, and cubain. I got this statment from @CAPS4 @NUM2 that is why this @CAPS7 is @CAPS3 but also at the same time sad.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10119,4,The would grow some flowers and water the geese come back to her pond.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6776,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. For example, in “ghost towns”, there is no-one to ask directions from or to just talk to. Also, some pumped water from water pumps tastes like “battery acid” and could most likely make some one sick. Also, there are poisonous snakes and other dangerous animals.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3320,2,"There is a certain amount of responsibility when it comes to censoring all the different types of media and literature. Deciding whose responsibility that is can be a difficult task. Children can be strongly influenced by all media out there and making that material has been made easily accessible. When someone comes of age to make decisions that affect their life then they should be able to. Shop owners should be able to sell whatever they want in order to make a living.     When children go to a library usually they will not do so alone. Parents can decide what their child is allowed to take home or not. When a child comes to their parent with a book, movie, or magazine that is offensive or inappropriate it comes to the parent to decide whether or not they want their child to be exposed to that material. If the parent allowed for their child to have access to offensive media then that can give the child the idea that what they are looking at or reading is alright.      If someone has come of age and has all the other freedoms that everyone else has they should be allowed to buy, read, and watch what they want. To prove to someone that you are of age to have access to offensive material you should have to show some sort of identification proving it.      A shop owner or businessman/woman should be able to sell whatever he or she wants to in order to make a living as long as it stays within the boundaries of the law. Having someone who does not work in the law or a person who is not a legal guardian or parent of someone who is not of age should not tell someone not to buy, read, or watch something just because it might be offensive or offend that one person.     I conclude that in order for a someone to tell another person not to buy or rent material that person would either have to be law enforcement or their legal guardian as long as they are not of age. There is no reason why people should not be able to access material that is not against the law. If someone is offended by some literature then they should try to make it against the law.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3955,2,"Some people often go to the library to check out books,movies,magazines,etc..But what some people might not realize is that some of the things that they have at the library might be offensive towards certain people. I think that everything thats in the libraries should stay there. Obviously the library allowed it there for some reason. So honestly it cant be that bad.          I do not think certain things should be removed from the library. People have to realize that that's life. There's going to be certain things that you dont like but you have to deal with it. If you watch tv you'll notice that there's some offensive things towards certain people. But no one really makes a huge thing out of it.               The books might be offensive to you but to someone else it could just be another book that they want to read.With no intentive purpose of offending anyone. The library is all about learning. Everything is for educational purposes. I've read books that I stopped and thought about for a second while I was reading it and noticed that theres some pretty harsh things in it. But i didn't complain about it, I just kept reading.            Alot of books are based off of true events so no matter how offensive they are to people, you just have to think what the purpose was for the author to create this book and same thing with movies. So people can see what the author has to say. Everyone has the right to have their own opinion. And thats what most magazine articles are about. Expressing what you think about a certain topic.          Even in the @CAPS1 class that im in now we had to read 'To @CAPS2 A @CAPS3'. Some @CAPS4 @CAPS5 people might think its racist but it reallu isn't. The author is trying to get his point out. Of how things use to be before white and colored people were treated the same. Now if you still think that is being offensive towards you or other people then thats alright. That's why this is a free country. Everyone has the right to say how they feel and not get in trouble for it.          So I hope i got the point across that it's alright for some things to be offensive towards people. As long as thats not the whole point of what you watching or reading. Which i doubt it is. So next time your reading or watching something that is offending you. Think about the point that the person who wrote or made the movie were trying to get across. Mybe by it offending you it is getting the point across.",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6705,3,"The features of the setting in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” affect the cyclist. For example, the tough terrain made it very difficult for the cyclist to reach his destination, Yosemite. He was already very fatigued but had to overcome hills. In the essay, he states, “I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills. The setting features also affected the cyclist when he encountered the snake. He was dehydrated and could barely navigate around the dangerous snake. The cyclist explains, “At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a riduculously large snake, it really did look like a diamondback-blocked the majority of the pavement in front of me. I eased fast, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. The setting also affected the cyclist because there was no one around him to help. The cyclist describes, “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” The cyclist was all alone and had to rely on himself to make it to Yosemite. In conclusion, the features of the setting in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” affect the cyclist. He had to overcome ruggid terrain without energy, avoid a diamondback snake, and make it all the way to Yosemite because there was no one around. As you can see, the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1439,1,"Dear local newspaper, I am sure you will agree with me about keeping the computers in this world. I am sure you will agree with me about keeping the computers in this world because computers help everyone in their education. For example when i don't understand some words i go to the computer type www.dictionary.com. Then i words that i don't understand. After that the definition comes up and in a faster time because when i look in the dictonary i take about @NUM1 to @NUM2 minutes to just find a word but on the computer it takes me @NUM3 seconds. Also computers let us chat and send massages when we can't see or take to a person so we send massages and the receive the message them they send back a message. Lastly computers help on english class like on spelling, writing, typing, editing & revising. That's why i think we should keep computers in this world. I know everyone doesn't know everything. Computers could help us in math, by using formilas and a calculator on calculator.com. Also computers help in science, by going to @LOCATION1 and asking questions like, ""what is matter or what are . Finally i am gonna talk about not understanding some words. I always go to dictonary.com so that website could give and help understand the word and get the real definition. I always use these @NUM2 websites when i am stuck in math or science or in english. Those websites could help a lot in our education. That's my way of thinking about the computers helping us in our education. My parents are always staked about me talking to my friends and hanging out with them. So, when i can see or talk to my friends i go myspace or facebook or msn to talk and send messages to my friends. We just keep chating and sending can messages because our parents don't let us hang out. Mostly everyone does the same. I do we could also send much other pictures, music and lot more. That's my opinion of why we should have comuters because we need to chat or send messages. At the end you know we all need to type our essays, lesson and more. The computers help use make power points they check our spelling, the could also change why we wright like cursive and more, they also help in editing & revising. I always keep sending words wrong. So the computer help me on spelling it also makes your project look better. That's why i think",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
2,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I believe that using computers will benefit us in many ways like talking and becoming friends will others through websites like facebook and mysace. Using computers can help us find coordibates, locations, and able ourselfs to millions of information. Also computers will benefit us by helping with jobs as in planning a house plan and typing a @NUM1 page report for one of our jobs in less than writing it. Now lets go into the wonder world of technology. Using a computer will help us in life by talking or making friends on line. Many people have myspace, facebooks, aim, these all benefit us by having conversations with one another. Many people believe computers are bad but how can you make friends if you can never talk to them? I am very fortunate for having a computer that can help with not only school work but my social life and how I make friends. Computers help us with finding our locations, coordibates and millions of information online. If we didn't go on the internet a lot we wouldn't know how to go onto websites that @MONTH1 help us with locations and coordinates like @LOCATION1. Would you rather use a computer or be in @LOCATION3. When your supposed to be vacationing in @LOCATION2. Million of information is found on the internet. You can as almost every question and a computer will have it. Would you rather easily draw up a house plan on the computers or take @NUM1 hours doing one by hand with ugly erazer marks all over it, you are garrenteed that to find a job with a drawing like that. Also when appling for a job many workers must write very long papers like a @NUM3 word essay on why this job fits you the most, and many people I know don't like writing @NUM3 words non-stopp for hours when it could take them I hav an a computer. That is why computers we needed a lot now adays. I hope this essay has impacted your descion on computers because they are great machines to work with. The other day I showed my mom how to use a computer and she said it was the greatest invention sense sliced bread! Now go out and buy a computer to help you chat online with friends, find locations and millions of information on one click of the button and help your self with getting a job with neat, prepared, printed work that your boss will love.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
824,1,"Dear editor, I hear you are looking for your citizens opinion in if computers are bad or good. @CAPS1 opinion is computers are bad. I think computers are bad in three ways and I want to express them to your and hopefully persuade you into going towards @CAPS1 side. Smell nice out to day. I can smell flowers, the grass, and many more, @CAPS1 first reason why computers are bad is if you use the computer to much you don't see enough of enjoying nature. Nature is beautiful, it has @CAPS2, green grass, rainbows (sometimes). You can make a walk of in the moons and just be yourself and be by yourself. In other words nature is very nice and you should set out and enjoy it. If you don't enjoy nature it might be no late, because soon it become and rainy and then, yes fem has flabberlasting colors, but what comes after fall, winter. Winter is not nice, it is cold. You work, because you need to shovel the drive way and your car off and that can get very tire some. The goof of is you can get those chorse. Oh not that make me to. @CAPS1 next reason why computers are bad. When was a good smile run. @CAPS1 next reason why I think computers are bad is spend all working and no time exersing. Excersing is a very fun thing to do, you fel to go outside. Hang with friends, any many shore. Exercise is a main way of staying healthy. don't you can really get unhealthy, and sick and his dies, die i have a friend whom nothing use. The computer his body rest weaker and weaker so exercise ias am main piece of staing healthy. there are many ways to health you can bike, run, walk, rog canate, climb a mountain, etc. The posibilitys are endless while exercesing in the park you never knew you can meet. car's fast say your friend, ""yo sup man,"" ""not, you"" ""not much, just fiding around for some exercise"" ""same here, same here"" see you never know who you can meet in the park now that was @CAPS1 friend. he is alwasys here, out how as you think, yep in the same park. I wouldn't have met him if i was insine on the computer. Like i said be what was @CAPS1 friend. But since I come here every day i can meet a new friend every day maybe. So @CAPS1 last reason why I think the computer is bad is because you don't get enough interacting time with friends and family. I love @CAPS1 family but I interact with them. If they are exercising who if i am here on the computer. no one can. In conclusion I think the computer are bad because you can not get enought time exercising, enjoying nature, and spending @CAPS3 time with family and friends.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4516,2,What impact does books that are for mature people have on kids? Recently people are trying to censorship libraries for what they seen what their kids are reading or have been acting lately. I disagree in censorshiping in libraries. Instead of censorshiping libraries maybe have a section for explict books or things for preventing little kids from reading them.     First of all instead of removing all the books maybe you should consider making a section for only for people of certain age. Make a section in at the back of the library and ask for @CAPS1 to confirm that there old enough.This would let the libarary keep all their books and would keep all their construmers happy and the most important keep the parents happy.     Another reason for not censorship libraries would be that the number of construmers would slowing drop. This would make the construmers unhappy and the library drop on its popularity for not having the books that people want to read.     I can also see why they are trying to censorship libraries because of the kids behaviors. With censorship in libraries this would keep the little kids from acting the way they do in a book. But @CAPS2 would be better just to not censorship libraries and keep the people who does read them happy.     At the end I disagree in censorshiping libraries because @CAPS2 would upset the people who read them and probably the library poplurity would drop which means people would stop visiting the library. So people that disagree should act now so libraries can stay how they are now,3,4,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6630,3,"The essay on ""Rough Road Ahead"" is about the dangers of speed and assault. It’s just letting you know to follow instructions and read signs. You should always keep close @NUM1/= out for signs and things.  ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1606,1,"Do you want your child to suceed in life? This is why computers are valuable to everyday life. Computers help children get more education, they can be independent and not hows anyane tell them new to use a computer, and @CAPS1 they get to college they can take notes quickly and not fall behind. This is whycomputers are important to everyday life. Computers are important because your child will get the proper education that they need. @PERCENT1 of children who uses the thev internet for students for studies are the ones that will be a grade ahead of the best of this or her classmates. Dr. @PERSON1 a computer cope it, says, ""@CAPS1 I was using the computer to do research on a topic, I went on on leperdy the @DATE1 and from there I was a @NUM1 @DATE1 because I was on the computers. As you can see computers are valuable items used in everyday life. Computers are important to everyday life because it helps your children be more independent and learn how to use different parts of the internet. @PERCENT1 to @PERCENT2 of children who use the internet are most likely so succeed in college because they know what websites to go to and how to get there. There is an @PERCENT1 chance that the children who succeed in college will get the higher paying jobs because they've @PERSON1, the computer expect, says, ""@CAPS2 son was at @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS3 was smart because @CAPS3 was always on the computer looking up new facts and ideas that popped into his head."" @CAPS3 is a student which is very hard to get. This is why computers are valuable to everyday life. Computers are impotant because you can look up sites that will help you eat health foods. @PERCENT3 of adults who health foods are most likely to live an even @NUM2 years of their life because they are their bodies in health conditions because they've eating more fruits, and drinking more to keep their bones strong @CAPS1 they fall @CAPS1 they older. As you can see, using then internet can be very helpful if you used to the right way. This is why using the internet will help you be the successful person that you want to be in life.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12030,5,"In this memoir, there is more than one mood. There is love, friendship, and happiness Narciso expresses love for her parents and friends in paragraph @NUM1. ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" The author is saying that everyone comes toge-ther and that they all care for eachother. She expresses friendship in parag-raph @NUM2. When she says that her babysitter was her first friend. Finally, she expresses happiness. In paragraph @NUM3, when she is saying ""she will never forget how her parents turned this simple house into a home. You could tell that she is happy, and grateful for her parents. Those are a @CAPS1 moods in the memoir.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
153,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 are many people in this world that think always being on the computer is good because they can talk with people online and learn more about the world. But, then @CAPS1 are people who disagree with them. I am one of those people. Spending too much time on the computer can really affect your life. People stop exercising, don't enjoy the beauty of nature or life, and they aren't spending enough time with their family and friends. So, I hope that while you read through this letter, you take some of this information into consideration. First of all, when people spend a lot of time on the computer they aren't getting all of the exercise that their body needs. They become lazy and don't want to do anything. This is very bad because it will affect your health and the rest of your life. People @MONTH1 become overweight and since they got lazy from always being on the computer, they won't go out and get the exercise that their body needs. People need to enjoy their life! By always being on the computer, they won't be able to. @CAPS1 are so many fun and healthy things you can do for your body. You can go play sports and have fun while getting exercise. Many people do this and try to encourage their family and friends to do it with them. But, some of their family and friends are to lazy to do anything because they are always on the computer. Instead, they stay inside the house all cooped up and don't get enough fresh air. This is a horrible thing to do to yourself. Your body needs fresh air, so start enjoying your life a little more people! Finally, people @MONTH1 lose contact with family members of their friends because they are to busy on the computer playing games. I know I wouldn't want to lose a friend to the internet ever again and I don't think anyone else would want to either. I once lost a friend or two because I didn't talk to them as much as I used to because I had been too busy on the computer on @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and games. I felt horrible because I didn't realize that I had been doing that. I really wouldn't want anyone else to lose contact with a family member or lose a friend because of the internet. Its horrible and you don't feel like yourself anymore. Once again I would like to tell you that always being on the internet is not good. You can become lazy, not want to do anything etc., people aren't enjoying their life to the fullest and you can and @MONTH1 lose contact with a family member or lose a friend because you spend to much time on the computer. I hope that after reading this, you realize that being on the computer is not always good for you.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4004,2,"I feel that u have the right to chouse to remove setian books, movies, music, magazines but only if they are not apropreat for some people and children. Some people like thim others do not it all depends on who you are.      If I go to a library and the books I want are on the restricted list, the library should have a small fee some were arould @MONEY1 to @MONEY2 depending on the typ of book. For instance if i wanted the movie @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @NUM1 and it was restrected i wouls pay something like a redbox rental fee.     That is what I think about restrecting sertion items from the library.                                                                            -@PERSON1",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12758,5,"The mood is grateful, because it shows how grateful he is for his house and all the people that come over and be his family.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1421,1,"How does the computer effect people? @CAPS1 there are way's that computer's can be really bad and really good"", they're good. Because people who dont like writing usually just have a computer to type on. But people rarely do that, parent's and kid's stay on the computer not caring about nothing else but the screen the kid's stay up all night knowing they have school they dont even do their homework. I have proof my freind's, research show's, my mother also agree's. I suggest that you will agree on my opinion'. @PERCENT1 of my freind's agree with me because they have been through this, and they would'nt wake up to go to school. Dr @PERSON1's of @ORGANIZATION1 researched how parent's hardly spend time with their family. For example father's they basically always on the computer either working or looking up stuff. My mom say's that when she was younger she loved the internent. She never wanted to get off: @CAPS1 i hope youv enjoyed my opinion', thank's for even taking this time to read it. Thank's again.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16617,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles such as safety, nature, and law in their attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The issue of safety became apparent because most dirigibles made outside of the @LOCATION1 were made with highly flammable hydrogen rather than helium. To risk the destruction of one atop such a bustling city would be devastating. Nature too became a problem in the futile attempt of the builders. With such ""Violent air currents"" (¶ @NUM1), the dirigible would swivel around even if it were tied up to the mooring mast. Finally, law was an obstacle to the builders. Existing legislation banned airships from ""flying too low over urban areas"" (¶ @NUM2), meaning the dirigibles would have no way of landing atop the urban building. obstacles such as safety, nature, and law hindered be attempt of allowing dirigibles to land on the Empire State Building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19130,7,One day I had a doctors appointment and I had to check- in at the desk and after I did that I had to sit and be patient till the doctors called me back to get my check up done  and I to wait till the real doctor came to see how I was feeling and to see if I was eating good to and then I had to go to the check out desk to see what was my next check up was and then I had to get my pills refilled and then I went home.,6,7,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6544,3,"Heat, hills and ghost towns – all are features of setting that affect the cyclist. First, the heat dehydrates and exhausts him, almost causing him a heat stroke. He starts dinking more often, and nearly runs out of water. Next is the hills. They can take massive amounts of energy to climb. Which adds to his dehydration. Finally the ghost towns. They make his journey seem hopeless. Which could cause him to lose the will to carry on.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9270,4,She concludes the story with this paragraph because she want to let the readers of the story that she is not willing to give up and and that she is willing to take the test again and pass it.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18403,7,I am going to write about a time I was patient. The time I was patient was when I went to fuzzys and it took a long time. It took @NUM1 minutes. It seemed like took forever. It was a @ORGANIZATION1. I think the reason why it seemed forever was probably because I did’t eat nothing. There was me my mom and dad. You can also buy ice cream. My stomach was hurting and I was hungry. I had tries to. Some people have patient and other don’t. I kind of have patients. But this time I had no patients. Now when I get a @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 it seems not that long. That is a time I needed patients.,6,6,,12,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21334,8," My father is a stone cold mean man. About the only time he smiles is when hes has a beer or when hes with friends. Last @DATE1 we where at my grandparent's house for a family barbecue when we got a call from mt @CAPS3 cousin @PERSON1 she told us that my @CAPS1 was in my great aunts will, a few days earlier we had gotten a call saying that great aunt @PERSON2 had died. My grandpa thought he was going to be in the will but he wasn't. Two weeks latter my @CAPS1, @CAPS2, and me went to @LOCATION2 for my great aunts funeral. When we got to @LOCATION2 we drove to the upper peninsula. It turns out that we where going to a island on lake @LOCATION3 called @LOCATION1 island. Then when we got to my @CAPS3 cousin @PERSON1's house she toke us through the will. My @CAPS1 got @NUM1 acres, @NUM2 acres of forest, @NUM3 acres meadow, and @NUM3 acres with a two bedroom house, barn, and smoke shed.       ",15,16,30.0,30,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15467,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example, one of the obstacles they faced were that ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This is significant because it would be dangerous for foreign dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, especially in a densely populated area such as downtown New York. Another obstacle they faced was nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due violent air currents."" This suggests that a dirigible would swivel around and around and they could be weighted down with lead weights, using these at the Empire State Building, high above pedestrians on the street, would be impractical and unsafe. Next, there was also ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This is important because it is another obstacle that would ultimately make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. Also, ""in December 1930, the U.S Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds."" This shows that another obstacle they may have faced was losing confidence and directly observing that their plan would not work. The various obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there show that it would have been a difficult task to complete.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
659,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Computers are a great way to learn about the world and its people. Computers can teach people about things that are forien to them. Computers keep people intouch, all over the world. Computers also come in handy when something needs to be looked up right away. Computers are very helpful when it comes to learning. They can teach you things that most books cant, such as hand eye coordination also about the current populations of countrys and cities. Also, computers gives you the opportunity to see pictures of places and people that you couldn't find in books or photo albums or newspapers. They also help in schools when projects are asigned. Kids can use computers to find information they need quickly. Kids can also use computer to wright essays or print pictures for projects. Computers are definately a staple for learning & education. Computers are also great for comunication. People can chat with one another on networking sites such as @CAPS1, facebook, myspace, and twitter. On these sites people can send messages to their friends a leaking them of something or chat with their friends to see whats to keep in touch with family and friends, on the computer. Family members can e-mail each other to inform them of an event or news. I have actually had an experience with e-mail that was very helpful my family members and I had been speaking of traveling to block island and two days before we were going to leave we recived on email from the owner of the house we were going to stay at stating that all phone lines were down and part of the house was ruined due to a storm. If it werent for computers we would have been in a sick situation. Computers also come in handy in times of need or confusion. People can check their local weather forecasts to see of the weather will effect their plans. Also if someone doesn't know where a house or store is located they cab quickly look it up on the computer. Finaly if something is unavailable on a store people can shop for it online and can buy what they need, and have it shaped to their door step. Computers have helped this country grow and prosper. Why bother to go aginst them when they benafit society so much? Computers are helping the world become a better educated, connected, and informed world.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15986,6,"It was once said ""were there is a will there is a way"". How ever they didn't include the part about the obstacles you will have to go through. For instance how the was a will & way for the docking of dirigibles on the Empire state building, the architects just didn't work out all the possible problems of their idea. Like the fact that only American dirigibles used helium instead of hydrogen. Also that the wind currents have a stronger force that high up in the air than to regular life level. Also the un-ideal place they were trying to use. They should've taken heed to the businessman's slogan ""@CAPS1, @CAPS1, @CAPS1.""",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20743,8," ""@CAPS1 figure something out to do! I am really freaking bored!"" @CAPS2 explained as all of us relaxed next too his dark blue @CAPS3 which was gracefully parked right out side of my house. The @ORGANIZATION1 was young and as young boys we needed something to do. Gears started to turn in my head! As i thought of a bullet proof plan that would be very funny.  ""@CAPS4 I've got it!"" I yelped. ""@CAPS1 here it, I'm really down for anything right @CAPS21,"" @CAPS6 quickly replied. ""@CAPS7 since @CAPS2 has car he can drive into town and buy some cheap saran rap then @CAPS15 back to the four way intersection right out side of my neighborhood and tie the rap around two of the trees on opposite sides of the street so cars will speed through it!"" I quick explained as i ran out of breath. Bursts of loud laughter came from all directions were my friends were standing as I came to realization that this idea was golden. ""I will drive and go get it, but does anyone got some money too pitch in!"" @CAPS2 pounced as @LOCATION2, @CAPS6 and I, handed single bills to him.  "" that's plenty! give me a few minutes then we can meet at the intersection right out side of @CAPS10's neighborhood."" @CAPS2 said as he brushed everyone off his car and begin to dip out of my neighborhood. ""@CAPS12 text me when you're about to get back!"" I screamed to @CAPS2 as sound of his poorly maintained engine bellowed in the @TIME1 sky. Minutes flew by and the rest of us just sat down on the curb, talked, and waited for @CAPS2. Ring ting my custom ring tone for incoming texts sounded. My eyes quickly scanned the phone's contents and concluded that @CAPS2 was ready with the saran rap at the four way intersection.  ""@CAPS15 on @CAPS1 @CAPS4 go! @CAPS2 is ready and so @CAPS1 do this thing"" I muttered as i grabbed my jacket and headed for the exit of my neighborhood. @CAPS6 trailed, as @PERSON1 and @PERSON2 brought up the back. i yelled once again to enhance the passe. @CAPS2's car lights lit up the @ORGANIZATION1 air as he made a blinking signal to express where he was to us. All four of us quickly jogged over to the drive way of a house that was for sale right near the exit of my neighborhood to where @CAPS2 was parked. ""@CAPS17 you @CAPS4 long enough,"" @CAPS2 explained. ""well we are all here! so @CAPS1 go to the intersection and set this up!"" @PERSON1 explained as the started too lead toward the intersection which was about fifty yards away. As we reached the intersection there were no cars! We all @CAPS17 to this opportunity and @NUM1 and @PERSON1 look out for cars!"" i yelled as @CAPS2 and i began the process. Quickly i opened the saran rap and ran crossed the road, uncoiling the rap as i went. Soon as @CAPS2 and I were both on opposite sides of the street we both started to firmly rap the saran around trees we have already pick out. Once i pulled and inspected it finding that it was prefect i sprinted to a short fence that was a boarder for the neighborhood on one side of the intersection. i was guessing this was where all my friends were hiding. ""haha this is prefect! i am made sure everything feels right!"" I explained as we all gazed upon delicately hung rap than ran from both sides of the two way street. ""@CAPS21 we must wait,"" @PERSON2 said as anticipation fell into place. Four heads bobbed up and down as we checked to see if cars were driving down the road. Since it was about @NUM2 pm most of the good folk of @LOCATION1 were sleeping or inside. But suddenly a car came out of @CAPS21 were, speeding and only @NUM3 yards from the great prank. ""@CAPS22,"" i yelled as the car continued driving closer and closer. Boom! The car speed through the saran rap, then came to a screeching stop. Laughter burst out as the inspected target was completely in disarray. But the anger male driver hearing our laughing decided too leave his car and chase us! ""@CAPS23 up,"" I screamed! We all @CAPS23 right as the man reached the fence where we were hiding. Although it was too late for @CAPS6! The anger man caught him as the rest of us all high tailed it for my house. As soon as we reached my house we all began too ask our self's what happened too @CAPS6! Suddenly out of @CAPS21 where @CAPS6 came running, as he @CAPS22 reached us we started too burst into laughter once again! The whole left side of @CAPS6 was dripping with soda! @CAPS6 would never tell us what happened that @ORGANIZATION1 although we could have guessed! As the @CAPS25 and long @ORGANIZATION1 rapped up we all called quits and hit the sack at my house. But laughter wasn't in short supply that @ORGANIZATION1 as we all fell asleep!",22,20,,42,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21618,8," A while back my mom had decided to send me to @DATE3 camp. When I heard this I was pretty upset, @CAPS1 I wouldn't know anyone there. Before camp started I did all I could to let my mom not let me go. After a while of that I knew I wouldn't get my way, and before I knew it I was off to camp. When I got to the place that was taking us to camp, there wasn't a lot of people there.  When I got to the camp I was wrong, there was a lot of people that I didn't know. It was extremely scary, but it was to late to go home now. Walking to my cabin was nerve racking, @CAPS1 I didn't know who would be in my cabin. Meeting the girls in my cabin was awkward, mainly @CAPS1 we didn't know each other and secondly our counselor was so weird. Right after meeting each other our counselor made all of us play a game of @CAPS2. Playing @CAPS2 at first with strangers was strange, but after a while we started laughing. We played and laughed for hours and hours, until it was time for lunch. Lunch with the girls was not so scary since we had so muh fun playing @CAPS2, but we still didn't really know each other.  When lunch was over the first thing we did was play @CAPS2, the more we laughed and had fun the more and more we started to get to know each other. All @DATE1 we played the silly little game of @CAPS2, and just giggled and laughed. @DATE2 came along the second @DATE1 of camp and all of us had almost become friend by just laughing and playing @CAPS2. We played it so much the first @DATE1 that we just called it ""@CAPS6 @CAPS2"" instead of @CAPS2. Like other things we got tired of @CAPS2 and went our separate ways for free time. Everyone agreed that free time that @DATE1 was so boring so we played @CAPS2 again. Laughing and laughing till our stomachs hurt from laughing so hard, that I think was the @DATE1 all of us really became friends.  We had become thick as thieves in just a couple of days, we did everything together. We talked,we swam, we played tennis, and most importantly we laughed together. Camp was not what I expected it to be, it was way better. All the girls in my cabin had become friends so fast that it was strange to other people,not realy but it was kind of weird to become best friends in just a couple of days. Camp was flying by for us and before we all knew it it was almost the @DATE1. Things were so good, until one of us got sick. I was the one who ended up sick, it was horrible I stayed in bed all @DATE1 missing everything that was going on. Even worse I had almost lost my voice, laying in bed without laughing with my friends and having fun was just torture. @DATE4 the @DATE1 of camp was fastly approaching, and all I could do was stay in bed. @DATE4 was there, but it was a relief when I could talk again. The rest of the @DATE1 @DATE1 of camp I could be out of bed and enjoying camp.  When @DATE1 time was ending and evening was arriving, we had our cabin party. Our party was so much fun, even though we had to stay inside our cabin. We ate all of our treats we saved from the concession stand, and all of the treats our counselor brought. It was almost @TIME1 so we had to go to bed soon, @CAPS1 we where leaving in the @TIME2. There was one @DATE1 thing we had to do, and it was one @DATE1 game of @CAPS2. We played for about in hour, @CAPS1 another counselor had to come tell us to be quiet.  Looking back at my first year of camp, I always remember how all of us became friends. We still talk about it every year at camp, and we do still play @CAPS2. That year at camp I think is one at my favorite memories, @CAPS1 we all became friends by just playing @CAPS2 and laughing together.",20,19,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4724,2,"I belive that every one has thier right to thier own opinion.  If a parrent does not think that thier kid should do some thing dont let them. It kind of reminds me of how people are aginst hunting if you dont like it dont do it.     If every one would express thier own opinion the world would be alot better place.  If I dont like @PERSON1 and I tell @PERSON1 i dont like him @PERSON1 knows I dont like him so he wont talk to me any more.  So in a bigger picture if @LOCATION1 tells @LOCATION2 that we dont like thim they will not try to make friends with us any more.  so if everyone would speak thier mind the world would be alot better.     If a parent does not like some thing like a type of music, movie, or even book and they express that to thier kid they will learn that that thing is bad.  My dad tought me that it was fine to kill animals only if I am willing to eat them so that seams fine with me but other people might not think its right.  So I belive that if your not a hipocrite and live as you teach your kids to that your kids will listen to you.     As I have said before my dad tought me that its fine to kill animals if I am willing or going to eat them.  I find one exception to this rule cyotes (we have alot of cyotes where i live at and they can be a pest).  I belive that that is about the only exception to the rule because cyotes are problem animals in this area.     So if you dont want your kids watching rated @CAPS1 movies then block them on tv. Its the same thing with the other things like the magazines, books and music.",3,3,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1211,1,"Dear editor: @CAPS1 you know that @PERCENT1 of people in the @LOCATION2 have comuters? These computers are definatley benefitting society. People need computers to get updated on important issues, contact others and learn new information. Computers are neccisary for everyday life. It's very important that news gets around, and one way for it to do that is by computers. Average people like me and you need to know the weather, global issues and many other important topics. If you use the computer to get updated on important issues you will be able to acess the information right away. For example there is no need to wait for the weather to come on the television when you can find out the weather for your local area withen seconds. Just recently there was an earthquake in @LOCATION1 and million of civilians died. if a natural disaster was to happen somewhere in @CAPS2 people would need to know and computers are a great way to make sure everyone is updated. Not only does the computer help us get important updates on global issues but it is also a great way to contact people. My relatives live very far away and we can't afford the long distance phone call charge and so we e-mail them. @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people contact far away friends and family by e-mail! The computer is also a great place for friends to contact each other through social networking sites, such as @CAPS3, @CAPS4 and @CAPS5. People need to interact with other people and the internet is a fantastic place to do that. Finally computers can also be used to learn new information. If children need to find inforamtion for a project or essay the can easily search the internet and find an answer. Kids need to acess the information that is neccisary for school on the internet. Computers are useful for adults as well. If adults want to learn something new all they have to to is search it on the computer. It's so much easier than going out to the library and finding that information in a book. @CAPS1 you know that most adults use an online dictionary to find the definition to a word? Computers can find every answer to your questions. In conclusion, computer are really benefitting society. Computers can update you on important issues, help you contact people, and find out new informatiuon. These avandces in technology are good for human society.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10005,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph shown for several reasons. First, the author needs to conclude the story without leaving any questions in the readers mind as to what happens. This is achieved by incorperating the geese, hibiscus and her drivers test into the last paragraph. Next, this last paragraph adds a theme of perseverance to the story. The main character is driven to take the drivers test again through memories of Vietnam lastly, it adds to the character by saying that she will ""take that test again"", she is shown as being realistic and not overconsistent. These are some of the ways that the last paragraph enhances the story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19129,7,"@CAPS1 brother was patient ones, @CAPS1 brother was patient by understanding a tolerant. He understand a toleran by sinting down waiting. He was waiting in the doctor to get steches. I was being patient by wainging with him. We always be patient when we have to wait for something, another time I was being patient is when I always get @CAPS1 hair cut or hair line. I had to wait in a long ling to get @CAPS1 hair cut. That is some of the times I had to be patient.",3,5,,8,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1701,1,"The computer is able to do so many things. It think computers have posotive effects on people. But some experts believe they don’t which is why I'm writing this paper so that I can explain the positions from both sides. Did you know most everyone who his a house their chances of having a computer is just as lucky as having a telephone. Computers believe it they help us in life wether @CAPS1 to keep information, talk online, find a good recipe or what ever it is @CAPS1 there. That is why computers are so positive. It we did not have computers there would not be any technological advances that we have @DATE1, @CAPS1 one of the most important devices. Let me share my expierence okay. I had a job interview right well I could not find that street so I went on my computer and it gave me the directions I made it to my interview. Thats why I think computers have posotive effects. Now the opposite side says people are spending too much time on their computer and less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with fiends and family. Well I have some people spend to much time on their computer @CAPS1 completely choice. And those are people who usually don't have alot of self control. And exercising who said that everyone need exercise in the persons already skinny what does need to exercise. For the interacting with friends and family you can do that I mean how long can a person look at a computer screen. So in conclusion you can see that computers are good but with self control they can be enjoyed with no bad side effects. So next time on the computer enjoy it but remember your friends, family and your health is more important.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10146,4,She wrote that response to tell everyone   that  she  will  be ready  but the time when spring  comes.    Then   she  take it and pass.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12685,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a mood of love and community. In paragraph two the author describes his childhood home with words like traditional, passionate, and congregation. These words set the tone for the rest of the memoir in which love in helping the community are key themes. It gives me the feeling that I could walk into their home and be welcomed with open arms even as a complete stranger. These themes are reinforced in the last few sentences when the author ends speaking about his gracious neighborhood and how he learned to love.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4417,2,"In our society today there is an enormous amount of exposure to materials that many adults didn't have when they were a child. Young children today see drugs, alcohol, sex, and teen pregnancy portrayed as things a normal child's everyday life consists of. Certain television shows, books, and even some popular songs condone these behaviors that many @CAPS1 are opposed to. While libraries @MONTH1 seem to be the most unusual place to have access to these materials, many young children can checkout books that are simply not appropriate for their age. Censorship of materials, such as books, movies, and music, that are found offensive or inappropriate are a way to teach young children that life isn't all about what the media portrayes it to be.     One very important reason to allow censorship of materials in libraries is that you might not know what type of book you're looking at. Many children, and adults too, walk into the library and look among the books until they see a cover or a title that grabs their attention. While most of the books in a library are age appropriate a child can still grab a book that isn't something they should be reading. There are mass amounts of influential materials from the media and also from peers that a child is subject to. Censorship in a library will make it a safer place for children to go and pick up any book in the proper section for them and will also allow the @CAPS1 to not have to worry about what their child has selected. As author Katherine Paterson so rightly said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children have taken off the shelf.' @CAPS1 should never have to worry about what their child can get ahold of in a public library.     A second reason to allow censorship in libraries is that video stores already have censorship in their shops, along with ratings on all their movies and video games. Most video stores have a seperate section of movies that are deemed to have 'adult content' in them. A minor cannot walk into a movie store and go to the section of movies deemed for adults, or someone over the age of eighteen. A minor can't rent an @CAPS2-rated movie without proving that they are seventeen, or they have an adult to rent it for them. The same thing occurs with video games, for example a video game with a rating of @CAPS3, or mature, cannot be rented or bought by anyone under the age of eighteen. @CAPS5 censorship should be applied to libraries. Having seperate sections based on adult content allow movies and books to be set in a seperate location so that no child can possibly rent something that they have no intention of watching or reading. @CAPS5 type of censorship also allows for a parent to choose if their child can see it. An example of @CAPS5 would be for a sixteen year old boy. While he cannot go and rent the @CAPS2-rated movie, if his @CAPS1 deem it acceptable for him to see, then they can rent it for him. @CAPS5 gives the parent control of what their child sees, instead of the child having full control. @CAPS5 same type of censorship that video stores have is a perfect way to place censorship in a library.     Perhaps the most important reason for censorship in libraries is the early exposure the materials give to the children. Many young children have been watching television shows or hearing things on the news that make it seem acceptable in our society to drink at parties when you're not of age, do illegal drugs for the feeling, and have sex at an extremely young age because it's what 'everyone's doing.' @CAPS5 is a very risky path to let the young children in our society take. Allowing our culture to become @CAPS5 way can lead to various sorts of problems, as we have seen all to well. Many young kids, some as young as fourteen or fifteen years old, go to parties and drink. When it comes to getting a ride home they go with their seventeen-year-old friend who has a license, and who has also been drinking at the party. Now hopefully the story ends that all of the children make it home safely, but that is not how it works in many cases. There have been so many drunk driving crashes recently in our nation with children who should not have even been drinking. @CAPS5 ties back to censorship because of the way these kids were pressured into drinking. Many adults in the society blame it on peer pressure; but where do the peers get the idea that @CAPS5 is acceptable? These ideas come from the influences that the society's children are susceptable to. Censorship in libraries is one way of restricting the ideas children are exposed to, and hopefully allowing them lead safer and healtheir lives. While there are so many other factors in the exposure to children of these materials, stopping the exposure in libraries is one way of eradicating early exposure. Young children in today's society and culture are exposed to excessive amounts of inappropriate materials.     These three factors, the inability to know what you might be checking out at the library, the fact that video stores already have censorship, and the unecessary exposure to young children, all lead to the need for censorship in libraries. Today's society is all about the freedom to allow anything to happen than is acceptable. While some @MONTH1 see these books or movies as their own freedom to speech the truth is that it is harming the society, hence the need for censorship in libraries and other places where children have access to movies, books, magazines, music, and video games. Removing the offensive books, magazines, and movies from shelves in libraries around the country will lead to a safer culture for children to grow up in, and a society where things such as drugs, alcohol, and sex aren't condoned near as often",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7237,3,"The features of the setting do affect the cyclist. If the road is rough you have to have the right bike. Then if you get a flat tire you have to know to look out for dangerous and posionous things. If you were in a real bad accident you’d have to be prepared just in case they don’t find you in time. You would have to know what nights were like. For example, if it got real cold at night you need to keep youself warm.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9259,4,The author ends the story with this paragraph to show how Saeng changed. Saeng didn’t want to take the test and she had no confidence. In the story saengs mother supports her no matter what. She even understood when Saeng bought a plant for @MONEY1 because it reminded her of home. Now that Saeng has been comforted she feels more relaxed and she is ready and more confident to take the test again. therefore Saeng has changed.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11921,5,"The mood created in this memoir was very greatful. Narciso was very very greatful for the ""house that his parents turned into a home."" And he was very greatful to his overall parents, for giving up there own life, to try to give their son a better one, with many more oppertunities than they had. He is also greatful to his parents, not only for giving him things they never had, but things they did have, too. Things like teaching them how to cook, how to treat others, and the real meaning of family. They also showed him the value of being selfless for someone you love.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10602,4,"The author concludes the last paragraph of the story because she already knew that she should not be afraid of trying a new life or new environment. For example, in the story, the mother says, “It’s flowers aren’t pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months. here, this winter hibiscus. “It shows that the mother want Saeng to learn that Saeng should be strong even in times of difficult. Another example is, when the narrator says, “she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before become, through the quiet repition of season upon season…” It shows that Saeng realized that the new place that she’s leaving right now is almost the same as their old home- In conclusion, the last paragraph tells that Saeng should face the new reality of the world. She should be strong and follow the flow of life.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15535,6,"According to the excerpt from @ORGANIZATION2's ""The Mooring Mast"", the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. When Al Smith was first planning the structure and use of the mass, he seems to be overambitious. In paragraph @NUM1, the reader gets the sense of how competitive Smith was, which is a quality that can get in the way of practicality. Smith's determination to have the Empire State Building be the tallest was an obstacle because it was what first initiated the idea of the mooring mast. Although it is made clear to the section ""Designing the Mast"" that a lot of planning went into the building of the mast, the extra effort needed for this was an obstacle as well. The mast delayed completing the whole building and as @PERSON1 says in paragraph @NUM2, the mast caused unsolved problems and postponements. A significant reason to the failure of the mast was the issue of safety because the dirigibles were highly flammable. As it also says in paragraph @NUM3, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" These both show the impracticality of the installment of a dirigible dock, revealing the largest obstacles the builders faced. Because ambition was more important than practicality in the building of the mooring mast, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles and failed.",3,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17861,7,One when I was patient was when we were going of north. We had to pack but I was already done because I had packed the work before my family was packing still & I went to sit in the car because I was already ready I had nothing else to do when I went back inside the house they were almost done packing so I went to the bathroom when I got out they were finished packing. When we got going I had to wait for over @NUM1 hours to get where we were going but when we got there we had fun. The reason I used this as my example is because it took a lot of patience to get to mackinoc city from nbly. That day I learned a lot on how it is important to be patient.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3128,2,"Books can be good things, but are they always good? They teach us things, entertain us, and are sometimes good pillows, but they can also be bad things. When a book is inappropriate for the reader, then it should not be on the shelves of the library. Music is the same way.     The library should absolutely take the book off the shelf if it is found offensive by someone. Some books @MONTH1 be offensive in religious ways. A person @MONTH1 believe in something very strongly, and then a book goes and makes fun of it or trashes it in some way. Some @MONTH1 say that the person just shouldn't read the book, but if it were me, I would want the book gone so it didn't remind me of what it had said everytime I walked by it.      Books @MONTH1 even be inappropriate for little kids. It @MONTH1 have language in it that the parents don't like. People have said that they should just make a section for those books to where little kids can't get to them, but you don't know what the childs parents are like. they could think a word is bad when you think it's fine. Everyone is different. Furthermore, a book @MONTH1 contain images not suitable for children. It comes back to what I was saying before, you can't just make a section for these books and say the heck with it. Libraries could even consider censoring some of their books.     Some religions believe that some types of music is the devils music. I know from experience that my mother thinks that scream-o is the devils music. She says that it is not right for them to sing like that and that @CAPS1 wouldn't like it. Other peoples parents @MONTH1 feel the same way.     Magazines @MONTH1 also have words or images in them that someone could take the wrong way. Although I don't believe libraries should remove them, but they should still watch who reads them. They could even put a little label on the front cover of the magazine that says it @MONTH1 not be suitable for everyone.     Books are usually good things, although they can be very bad. In the end, libraries should consider censoring their books, or if the book is bad enough and gets enough complaints, take it off the shelves completely",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12786,5,"In @PERSON1 from: Home: The Blueprints of our Lives the author creates a warm and loving mood. When @PERSON1 talks about his parents and how they ""always kept their arms and their door open"" that sets a loving mood because if one is so generous and caring to do that, it means they love you and they care about you. Also at the end of the memoir Narciso says that he ""learned there about how to love"". @PERSON1 now says this about his house because his parents were always so up beat and caring that they showed him what love is. Being loved makes all people feel good inside.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7145,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclists because he was thirsty and it was hot and he was almost out of water and he almost died because when he was drinking the water and he hit a bump and spit got lodged in his throat and tiring hills it seemed to never end.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15301,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle they faced was that if a dirigible was moored by a single tether, ""the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below"" Another obstacle was that most foreign dirigibles used hydrogen, which was highly flammable, and when the Hindenburg was destroyed, builders realized that accident would have been much worse if it had happened ove a densely populated area like New York City. A third obstacle was violent wind currents that would cause the back of the ship to swivel around, and the back of the dirigible couldn't be weighted down like in open landing fields because that would cause the weights to dangle dangerously above that pedestrians on the street. These were major obstacles, and they are the reasons that the mast on top of the Empire State Building was never used dock blimps.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16262,6,"The builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 many obstacals when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. A thousand-foot dirigible at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether would put stress on the buildings fam. The steel frame of the building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework. Theese are the obstacals they had to @ORGANIZATION1.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7240,3,"How the features of the setting affected the cyclist in the story, “Do Not Exceed Posted Limit”, were very dangerous to his life. The cyclist was traveling to the Yosemite National Park on a hot @DATE1. The cyclist traveled miles after miles on his bike only to past by deserted towns, “This place might have been thriving little spot...a ghost town.” The terrain was threatening because after twenty two miles or so, the cyclist had to overcome, “short rolling hills”, which would use more energy and make his thirst for water even stronger. The cyclist was out of water and the hot day was not helping. After a grueling journey, the cyclist used all the strength he had to go to a local bait shop and drank from the sink after the trechorous environment he was exposed to. The features of the setting in the story, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” were life threatening and almost killed the cyclist, due to lack of water and the terrain he overcome.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I belive that computers have a negative effect on peoples lives. I belive this because who spend to much time on the computer don't get out as much as they should, don't spend enough time with their family, and the computer can't do everything. My first reason is I belive that people need to get out more. When they don't get out, they don't exersise and that is very unhealthy. Instead of watching the games or the scores they should get out and play the game. I also belive that they should enjoy nature because I feel like they are wasting the beauty of nature all around them. We wouldn't want to waste our abilities and privalges would we? Another reason is that they do not spend enough time with family. If you have family near you, then you should take advantage of that and interact with one another. You can have fun with your family by playing games. You can also have fun by just hanging out, which boost your social skills and the computer can't always do that, which brings me to my next point. The computer can't do everything, so take advantage of what you have now. Some computer time is fine, but it can be very dangerous by getting addictted to it. The computer @MONTH1 have lots of information, but there is nothing that you can't find in a book. Your computer can't love your dog, so there is a reason why we should get off the computer. There are pleanty of other things that you can do that you can't do on the computer, including sports, taking care of family, and any of your hobbys. Remember that the computer @MONTH1 be great from time to time, but it can not live your life for you. That is why I belive that we should spend less time on the computer, and more time getting out, and having fun with family, and that the the computer can't do everything.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7605,3,The features of the setting like the dessert the sun and abondered towns affect the cyclist alot. The dry dessert makes him feel as if he were riding forever. And probably makes him wonder if he is ever going to make it to a town. The sun makes hime even  hoter not  he already is makes him sweat more and makes him even more thirsty.The abandoned towns make him lose hope in finding water or even if he is ever doing to make to yosomite. The mood of this story goes from content to sad to happy. He is content after riding to the first town but then the rest of time towns are abandoned too and start to ran out of water an he thinks he is going to die which makes it sad. Then he becomes happy when he finds the bait shop an finds water.,2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15390,6,There were many obstacles the builders had to take. One obstacle was the steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be modified because the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have been transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation. they had to pay ove sixty thousand dollars worth of modificautions in to the buildings framework.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15196,6,"The main obstacle in allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building's Mooring Mast was safety. ""Most dirigibles... used hydrogen... and hydrogen is highly flammable."" ""The owners... realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above downtown New York."" If an accident were to happen with a dirigible it would be putting hundreds of people's lives at risk. That is why this idea was unpractical and unsafe.Another obstacle in allowing dirigibles to moor at the Empire State Building's mast was nature itself. ""The winds on top were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would cause the back of the ship to swivel around the mast. Lead weights could be used, but that was neither practical nor safe where they would be dangling high above pedestrians.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10451,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she wanted to show that Saeng doesn’t give up and that nature gives @CAPS1 strength. The conclusion shows that Saeng doesn’t give up by saying that she is going to take the test again, even though she failed it earlier that day. Also, it shows that nature gives Saeng strength by saying that Saeng will take the test again when the geese return, when hibiscus buds and when the snow melts in spring nature gives her strength because it reminds her of where they used to live and her grandmother. In conclusion, the author concluded the story with that paragraph to show that Saeng is not a quitter, and that nature gives her strength and confidence.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12674,5,"The mood in the memoir created by Narciso Rodriguez is hopeful, heart lifting, caring, grateful, lively, loving, and courageous. It's hopeful because Narciso's parents had to start their lives all over with any jobs they could find and they wouldn't have made it without hope. They had hope in their children when they came to @LOCATION1 to have great and prosperous lives. It's also heart lifting because it was about how their parents came to @LOCATION1 for their kids and they ended up successful in life and became someone. Having people for dinner, housing others in need, and always ready for more to come who fell down in their lives and need some comfort shows as much care as a parent is to their newborn. Narciso's parents showed him what family, and friends are and to have courage and persevere. He is very grateful of his parents for these important lessons of life: They didn't just tell him, they showed him through their lives which makes it much more effective. They always had life in their home because of the music and aromas in the air and all of the people that came for dinner or to stay for a short time. His parents must have had courage to throw away their life's work, come to @LOCATION1 for better lives for their children, and to start a new career. The mood was very important to really feel the message of the memoir.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4666,2,"When you walk into your local library there are thousands of books, magazines, movies, etc. You have different types and styles of books. There are fiction and nonfiction, comedy, horror, children books, and many more. Also what you might not know is some libraries have books that are either sexual, violent, disruptive, and aren't appropriate for young children. They could also have movies and magazines like that and that is not a good influence.     When a young child walks into a library, they would expect to find a book with color, action, pictures, etc. But while they're browsing around they could run into a certain book thats not meant for them and they could end up becoming influenced. A book that is inappropriate for a child could possibly affect a childs life because they could go out into reality and try to immitate a book they have read and it could end up being the wrong decision.     Inappropriate movie and magazines, such as pornagraphic magazines or pictures, rated @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 movies, shouldn't be allowed in a library. Items like that should be sold in a separate store. Items like these are meant for adults only. We should try to inspire our young children to do whats right and not try to convince them to do anything in a negative way. If you are going to have any of these items kept in your home, then keep them in a place where children can not find them.     The generation that we live in now, most young people only focus on gang violonce, sex, rap music, and drugs and you can find all of this material in movies, books, and songs. If we keep all of these negative minded items out of public places such as libraries and even homes, then there could possibly be some change. Most rap songs you hear these days are either talking about violence, sex, or drugs. Most music should have a positive message to it.      I feel if I see a book, movie, magazine, etc., sitting on a shelf where a young person can see it, I feel I should have the right to remove it because society is not like what it use to be and if we make a change like this, then I feel a few things can change. Eventhough I'm still young I feel my teenage generation should stop all the violence and stop becoming influenced by everything they see or hear, and if we focus on the more important things in life, then this world can be a whole different place.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13460,5,The mood was great.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4255,2,"Have you ever been reading something that made you mad? Well, to be honest I can't remember the last time I walk into a librarie and found something there that could had offended somebody. But thats just me, I'm sure that there is stuff out there that could really get to a person.      No, I don't that materials should be removed from shelves if they are found offensive. People go to libraries to find out information on stuff that they don't know. If you are checking something out then you already know that there is a possibility of something that you don't agree with. I think it should be anybody business than the person checking it out.     Now, I'm not the type to get all frustrated or upset from something that I have seen on a shelve, but I could image that there are people out that are like that. If I had found something that I disagreed with I would not read it or just think nothing of it. I also think that you should be prepared before walking into a public place where they have all kinds of reading material. To you it @MONTH1 be offensive, but to others its hilarious.     All I'm trying to say just do'n get all upset over something that you have read.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13381,5,The mood that was created by the author in the memoir is thankful and @CAPS1. I think that the moods are @CAPS1 and thankful because there are surten parts in the story where it makes him seem like he is @CAPS1 and throughout the story he is just saying thank you to his mother and father. So those are the two moods that I think there are in the memoir. Also these are my thoughts on the memoir.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3896,2,"What is censorship? Censorship is editing or just plain getting rid of.  Censorship can be a good thing it could also be a bad thing.  Does censorship really help in our society?  Actually think about it, there is still murders, rapes, and whatever else with censory.  How I would argue with this, is by listing my own experiences, observations, and readings.     Firstly, my experiences would have to be about movies and/or television shows.  In some movies you get to choose on what you want to watch. The unrated version or the censored version.  Well, most people want to watch the unrated version, beacuse it's more than likely more funny and shows more.  Other people might choose the censored version, because of the fact that they have children and dont want them watching stuff that would be in the unrated version.  I would perferably pick the unrated version, because i like all the funny parts that wouldn't show in the censored version.  Then there are those television shows that 'bleep' out alot of words, because of course you are not allowed to say them on television.  Parents dont want their six year old going around and saying all of them nasty words.  That's why most of the time you hardly ever see them kind of shows on in the afternoons, they are usually on at @TIME1 or later.     Secondly, my observations about movies and/or television shows.  I cant say that I dont watch shows that have some language in them nor can I say that I dont watch shows that are all bloody and gory.  I do watch them, but i would never watch them around my younger sister!  She is eleven years old, I dont want my littel sister going to school and saying a bad word and have a teacher hear her.  Then she would say well @PERSON1 was the one who watched the movie.  I would also never ever watch a bloody, gory, and really graphic movie in front of her either.  Some movies could do without so much violence, but they have to make money some how. Right?     Last but not least, my readings about, lets say books and/or music lyrics.  So many books have been banned across the @LOCATION1, because people were offended by them or just didnt want that book on the shelves just in case their child reads it.  Some songs cant be played on the radio, because of some of the stories behind the music and/or the words in and through out the song.  That's why the artist of the song has to make two different copies of their song, so they can be played and so they will get popular.  I have read books that do have some words in them, but they are also my grade level and I'm pretty sure most people are more mature than they were.  When I see a word that isn't the nicest word ever, I keep reading and dont let it bother me.  Same with songs, the artist probably has a reason why he/she uses the words they use.     Censorship can be good or bad, it really depends on how you look at things.  Honestly, I have no objections to censorship and other times I do.  My experiences, observations, and/or reading has made me think about how censorship could be bad or good.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12582,5,"There are many moods that the author creates in the story, ""Narciso Rodriguez"", from Home: The Blueprints of our lives. Some moods it creats are sad, brave, and thankfull. The author creats a sad mood in many ways. One way he creats a sad mood in the article is in paragraph @NUM1, he talks about how imigrants leave their families, friends and carrer, just to come to @LOCATION1 to do good and to lead your children in a good place. In paragraph @NUM2, he also says he will always be greatful to his @CAPS1. Leaving your freinds and families behind is a brave action.He also creates a sad mood when he says that all imigrants come selflessly to this country to give their children a better life. The author is showing that he knows how immigrants come to @LOCATION1. He also creates a sad mood by never talking about the good things.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4437,2,"Libraries should censor some of the materials that they have available to the public. This is important because a child could easily gain access to the offensive material. Censorship is very important for libraries because we do not want our children getting influenced by offensive materials found in their libraries.           The libraries would not even have to get rid of the offensive materials that they took from the shelves. A good idea for them to do is to move all of them to an section for adults so the children will not be able to see them. The libraries would not be losing any money and they would be keeping the youth away from things that are not appropriate for them. Their is no reason to give people access to material that could be offensive to other people.           There are only a few reasons why I think that people should have access to offensive materials. Someone could need to use a book that has something offensive in it, but they would all be taken away to somewhere else. I think that it depends how offensive the materials are, as to whether or not they should be removed from the shelves.      Although I am sort of split on this issue, there are some very good reasons why to move the offensive materials away from the shelves. Those materials are not appropriate for the youth of our country, and they should not have access to them. We should censor the libraries so that nobody gets hurt",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12648,5,"The author creates a simple but peacful and happy mood with the way he describes things. in paragraph @NUM1 he describes his home growing up in great @CAPS1 that makes it feel almost like you are there. also words he used to describe the neiborhood like hardworking, and close knit, help set the mood for the story. It makes you think of your own family.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6376,3,"The cyclist goes through many natural settings that affect him. First of all he rides into barren land. The cyclist portrayed this barrenness by saying “it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” This was in response to the first “town” he came across. Next he speaks of a large snake that came close to him which is dangerous, but luckily he manuvers out of its way. But the worse setting the cyclist had to deal with was the lack of water. This is a threat to any living creature. But in the end he found some water and the story ended fine.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1326,1,"Dear trained readers, @CAPS1't you agree that more and more people use computers. Well I @CAPS2 because it gives us the information we want to see. Recently it has been brought to my attention that some people agree that some people @CAPS3 themselves don't really use computers. Without a dout I firmly believe that people that dont use computers should start to use them. but I can understand why same people don't use computers. Maybe they dont know how to use one have better things to @CAPS2, or can't afford one. First of @CAPS5, they dont know how to use one. I remember when my friend was over and I was on a computer. and he @CAPS4 ""@CAPS2 you know that some people don't know how to use an computer?"" And I @CAPS4 ""@CAPS3 who?"" the @CAPS4 ""@CAPS3 me, I dont know to use one."" I @CAPS4 well I'll teach you. Since then @CAPS5 my friend does is go on the computer. One day he says to me because of I want to work with computers. this is one of my reasons why people don't use computers. Second of @CAPS5, have better things to @CAPS2. @MONTH1 be someone has a game. for example, I mostly have how time to go on the computer. Usually I have a basketball game or practice I get home from practice and feel exhausled, @CAPS5 I want to @CAPS2 is go to @CAPS6. why parents come have not wanting to @CAPS2 anything. I'll tell you why. Because @CAPS5 that haved They @CAPS2 @CAPS5 day. This is another one of my reasons why people dont use computers. Third of @CAPS5 can't afford one. Some people dont have a lot of money to buy a computer. They have to say it. so they can live in a house. When parent's children asle for something parents shoudn't buy it. They buy it so you dont feel hurt. When I'm a @CAPS7 im going to make sure I have enough money to buy it. If not then I guess that child is out of luck. So dont be going where bragging your computer because some can't afford one. This is my last reason why people don't use computers. this is why some people don't use computers now in days. Because they dont know how to use one, have something better to @CAPS2 and can't afford one. By the way; @PERCENT1 of the pupils of @ORGANIZATION1 dont have computers.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
567,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, I think that computers can be a good thing and a bed thing for many resons. First i think it's good because it can help school work like to do a research and for other things that you might have to do for school. A secound reson on why computers are helpful is because it teaches hand-eye coordination. It also can have people talk to their family member from a other country through a web-cam. All their computers can be realy helpful they can also be bad for your health and family. I agree that it can give less time exercising, instead of being on the computer you can go to the park or walk your and many other things then just bring on the comuter all day. It can also distroy your interacting with family and and friend if you stay in the house all the time useing the computers and your family and friends want to spend some time with you and your just on the camper. @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 newspaper wher the reasons why i think computers can be a good thing and a bed thing. I mostly think that computers are a good thing because if we didn't have computers we wouldnt have most of the things we now have in the world if it wasn't for computers. That's why i think computers can be more helpful just depending on the way you use it and how much you use it. Those were the opinions i had on computers.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16448,6,"Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, building a mooring mast on the Empire State Building was hindered by many obstacles the builders had to face. Firstly, the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would hurt the building's frame. Builders fix this problem by making ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications... to the building's framework"" (page @NUM1 paragraph @NUM2). After the mast's construction, two more obstacles arose. Firstly, most dirigibles used hydrogen, which is very flammable. After the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire, the builders realize the danger in letting that same accident happen in densely populated New York City. The mast's greatest obstacle was ""nature itself"". Since the winds on top of the building were away shifting due to air currents, the back of the dirigible would swivel around the mast. Builders thought of using lead weights to fix this problem, but dangling weights high above pedestrians on the street ""was neither practical nor safe"". The last and most obvious obstacle was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. Though the builders and owners were able to overcome the first obstacle given from the construction of the mooring mast on the Empire state Building, future obstacles prevented the mooring mast from fulfilling its purpose.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15148,6,"Al Smith had a great idea. When he thought he was going to have a dirigible station dock on top of the world's tallest building. He had great creativity and wanted to use his building to full potential. Although there were many problems to this idea. One was the urban area below, many people lived in downtown New York City and it would be against the law to have zeppelins flying above the populated area. Another important problem was the intense winds that were harsh and made it very hard to dock on the building. There were many obstacles in the way of fulfilling Al Smith's dream for the Empire State Building to dock dirigibles on the top of the building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19096,7,"One time I was patient was when my brother broke his arm. I was a fine day and was playing outside on the play ground, during lunch resses. He said that he was on the monkey bars. His hands got all sweaty and he slipped. Eric fell on his arm. He screamed. The resses ladies brought him to the office and called my parents. Then my parents called my school to tell them they were picking me up. They picked me up and then got my bother. We drove to the hospital and they did x-rays. It took forever. I sat there quietly for @NUM1 hours! My parents told me that they appretiated now I was very patient. That the time I was patient.",11,9,,20,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6268,3,"As the cyclist begins his journey, he is confident & exited to have been offered new directions from some “old wise men” which promise a shortcut. This water supply is mediocre & attitude willed against the flat and hilly terrain, untill he realizes the directions are way off  target. The cyclist was making his way to Yosemite when he came to the first “town” but it wasn't a town but more of a ghost dwelling. As he continued hoping the shortcut offered by the old “codgens” would actually materialize, he realized he was utterly alone in the hot desert wt a depleting water supply & dwindling spirit. He was disturbed that he had chosen to follow the advice from the older men and through his his pain & dispair, encouraged himself by deciding he would never listen to their type again. The cyclist felt skrewed over, yet through his will & determination, by rationing water & mentally choosing to cycle for each hill one at a time, he endured his physicall, emotional & mental trials and lived to learn the valuable lesson of never consulting old “ codgers” on mapping issues, because their information would most likely be out datted.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15010,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were accidents over densely populated areas, violent air currents constantly shifting, etc.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6850,3,"Hot, terrain, middle of nowhere- all are features of the setting that affected the cyclist. First, the hot weather in California made the cyclist thirsty and almost dehydrated. There was no place to stop for water and if there was, the water was bad and warm. Second, the different types of terrain made the cyclist really thirsty also and tired. Lastly, the cyclist was in the middle of nowhere. He couldn’t get water to hydrate himself or to sit down and rest.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9101,4,In the short story “Winter hibiscus” The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the author felt as thought Saeng would be ready to take thee test at that particular time.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4721,2,"All materials in a library are for the public. This is why we have public libraries. Children are most likely with an adult when they go to a library and are normaly looking for books or activities that they would enjoy at their age. If a costomer in a library finds a book or item that they find offensive then it most likely was not an accident. Materials in libraries are for the public and should not be taken away just because a few find it offensive.     Children are very suspicious in libraries because they know that adult material is also in the library. This is where an adult comes in and supervises the child. Some parents don't mind that children see these images or read innapropriate information, but on the other hand some parents do. If someone comes across information that would be offensive they were most likely looking for it and are aware of where it is. Everyone in a library has the right to take or read what they want. There is no sign outside the door that says only certain ages of people can visit certain areas of the store.      It is the parent or gardians decision to allow or not alow their child to visit the more innapropriate areas of the store. Everyone has different rules and those rules are to be followed, but it is not the libraries job to keep track and watch those children to make sure they stay in their designated area.     There is a place for everything in a library and most of the locations are pretty obvious as to what kind of information is held there. For instance, more adult and innapropriate material is located in the back of the store. Adult matter is held back there to make it more private and harder for little children to discover and to be alittle more private to people who are reading it. Childrens' books and movies are usually loctaed in the front of the store so it draws their attention more. Children @MONTH1 never know what else is in the store if they dont go looking for it. Children should be acompanied by an adult if the adult believes their child would wander off looking for innapropriate materal.     Other material that could be offensive could not only be to children, it could be offensive to different races or cultures as well. Also if a person finds that information, they were most likely looking for it. Everything is labeled in a library and something doesn't just pop up out of nowhere if you where not looking for it.      Overall material in a store is public and for anyone who comes into the store. Children should be watched if they are suspicous and wander in the library. If someone does not want to find this informatin or think it would be offensive, then they should not go near the area which it is located",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4161,2,"Offensive material shouldn't be taken off the shelves at all. Books are written on various of topics from love to sci-fi. Everyone is offended by something; if all of us could remove a book that we precieve as offensive then the human race wouldn't read anymore.     @PERSON1 had to demonstrate this in a similar aspect to congress concerning his music lyrics. @PERSON1 is the reason why there is an '@CAPS1' sticker on @CAPS2's that contain offensive lyrics. Books SHOULD @CAPS3 be censored at all. It hides the authors thoughts, idea, and meanings behind their writing.     I've read hundreds of books from @LOCATION2 to @LOCATION1. The aspect that a parent is worried about what their children might read implies parents need to step in. Having an one-on-one talk about the books context with their child could solve this uneasiness parents have about books.     Pre-@CAPS4 to @CAPS5 to @CAPS6 requires many stages of growing physically and menatally. Through those phases kids learn from various sources including negative ones. It's up to the parents to ensure that tomorrow's generation can depict what is truthful and what is false.     My grandmother shared a memory about when I was @LOCATION1 learning to read. I was reading out of a @CAPS7 magazine; yes the magazine is intended for adults but I obtained the skill to read from it. A skill that will propell me into job oppertunities and assist me in everyday life.",3,4,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12250,5,"The @CAPS1 created by the @CAPS2 is happy, @CAPS3 was happy that @CAPS3 got to live in @LOCATION2 and be raised in @LOCATION2.@CAPS3 happy because shes lived In the Same house in New Jersey all her life then finally got to meet her grandparents In 1970 When @CAPS3 turned @NUM1 years old.@CAPS3 Is also happy because @CAPS3 Is older and has alot of memorys In the house and Is happy @CAPS3 lives In a free country.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3986,2,"What is the extent of reading that should be read by the public world? There are so many different types of reading and music that many people enjoy as a hobby. Books have been around for centuries and can create a whole new world for readers. The latest gossip can be found in many magazines. Music is sometimes said to help people cope with life problems. Movies can open up peoples' imaginations and make them feel emotions for a theme of no importance. All these things make up peoples lives. Without any of these enjoyments what would people do with their free time? Books, magazines, music, and movies should not be taken off shelves. They're huge factors that make up the society and make life what it is.          Books and magazines are two fun things people love to read. Fiction or nonfiction? No matter if books are real or fake they create stories that interest people. Reading is a hobby that's been around since the beginning of times. There are many different selections in reading, for example, adventure, mystery, comedy, or love stories. People will always read no matter what. Most books read are the ones that are sad and sometimes gruesome, but those are the stories that draw people in. Magazines are often picked up when going into the check out line in a grocery store. People love to read gossip, and learn about the latest trends. Magazines provide a type of self enjoyment for people. When reading a juicy title, most people can't help themselves but to pick up the magazine and learn what's going on in someone else's life.          Music is used for so many different things. It's often listened to when driving down the road. Many people fall asleep to soothing instruments that make a beautiful melody. Lyrics in songs relate to common people and at times it can help a person through a rough challenge. There is something about the different beats songs make that can change peoples' moods. On most @DATE1 nights, it is always seen that movie theatre's are very crowded. Movies bring out imagination and stories where people can watch and follow along. When watching a movie with a sad ending, most people cry. Although not always real, it touches people on an emotional level. Movies can bring things to life.          Life is what it is from contributing factors. All people think differently and like unsimilar things. Books, magazines, music, and movies all relate to peoples' likes and dislikes. Taking things off the shelves because they are offensivc or don't alway make people feel good, won't make our world any better of a place. If anything it will take away happiness in the world. These things make people feel different in ways that can't be described. Most often things that are offensive is the truth. Why hide things that are real? What would writers, musicians, and actors do if they couldn't do something just because it could offend a couple people out of millions? All these things are comfort for some people.          Books, magazines, music, and movies make the world and everyday life what it is. They are simple things in life, but once gone they are a huge gap missing. Things are fun and creative because of books, magazines, music, and movies. In my own experience books make me interested in subjects, magazines fufill my want for reading about celebrities, music makes me feel happy when I am sad, and movies make me feel like I can feel the same emotions as the characters do.They should not be taken off shelves just because they are offensive, they are part of life.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18371,7,"This is a story about a time when I was patient. A time when I was patient is when I was at food store waiting for my food. I ordered my food and they took olday to give it to me . I waited so patient. Other people was ??? in ???  there ??? they still did not give me mine, so I went outside and told my granddad that they were about to give me my food . I told him that because he kept asking me why they are taking so long. So I went back in the food store and asked them why are you taking so long, they said it’s coming in a second. Then I set down in the food store and I looked and so my friends coming into the food store. So we started talking and waiting patient for are food. Their names are @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @PERSON1. My name is @CAPS3, I was born in @DATE1 , I was raised in the city of @LOCATION1 oit. I was patient because I did not get angry and I waited. So then they called my name and said my food was ready. Then I got my food and told my friends I’m about to go home, after that I left. Thats a story about a time when I was patient.",10,8,,18,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7230,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist. One reason I say this is because he ran out of water and he could dehidrate. Also looking for water slowed him dsown more. Another reason I say this is because the man gave him the wrong directions, which got him lost and confused. That is how the setting affected the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19177,7,"People with patients are great teachers my mom is one of those great leader she has a great level of patients she has a family and many responsibilities. When we  ask for things over and over again she doesn`t get angry and out bust she just says no or yes you @MONTH1 with a smile or when she comes home from a long day at work. She never complains she just keeps a smile on her face and finishes the rest of the adventures day. When she wakes up in the morning to take us to school she has a bright smile on her face and she never complains. My mom is very patient women and a great teacher and leader. I apreciates everything she does for me, my brother, and dad.",5,6,,11,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7665,3,The setting of the road affected the cyclist in many different ways. Because there were no towns on the road it made it very difficult for him to find water which led him into a dehydrated state. “The old guys had sworn the next town was only eighteen miles down the road I would conserve my water and go inward for an hour or so. The rolling hills of the road were making him use more energy. Because there was no buildings for miles be broke the ride into short distances,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16538,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building, the builders ran into a few obstacles. One obstacle was a previously existing law about airships flying too low over urban areas like downtown New York. Another problem the builders ran into was high winds causing the back end of the dirigible to swing in the wind, making it unsafe for passengers unloading. Unlike dirigibles moored in open fields, lead weights could not be used to weigh the back of the dirigible down because they would be dangerous for pedestrians on the street. Another safety issue was most balloons outside the United States filled dirigibles with hydrogen which is much more flammable than helium. Dirigibles filled with hydrogen could cause a disaster if it ever caught on fire. Although the idea seemed great at first, the builders at the Empire State Building realized it was not practical or safe.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10441,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph to show that the girl is going to be like the hibiscus. The next time it blooms the girl will be ready for the test and will take it again and will pass. The authour  wants to show that the girl will not give up and will try again to make sure she passes. The author involves the hibiscus to show that the girl and the will bloom the same time the hibiscus will and will pass the test.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9952,4,"The author ends with this because of what the hibiscus means to saeng. To her it is a symbol of strength and comfort. And she knows that if the hibiscus can survive the snow and the cold weather of the winter, she knows that she will not fail either. To her, the hibiscus is a symbol of herself and if it survives, she knows that she too can survive. She is also going to take the test again when the hibiscud are budding since it reminds her of her homeland and comforts her. Then even if she fails she will still be happy since her favorite plant is budding. I also think the author concludes the story this way, because both the plant and Saeng are going to have to overcome obstacles. The plant must survive the winter and come back in the spring. While Saeng must pass her driver’s test. Finally I think the author ended this way because of what the plant means to Saeng. If it survives she knows that she too will survive, and life goes on.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12877,5,"The mood of this story was a happy and a reflective one. Many times during the story, especially in paragraph @NUM1, he told us what his parents did, but also after almost every sentence in parentheses he would say how much it meain to him. For example, he says how his parents cooked, and after that: (and for which I am eternally grateful). This shows how much he loved his parents for passing on their culinary skillsIn one paragraph, he starts off the sentence with: ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This again shows the mood of greatfullness, happiness, and reflectiveness from the story.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20964,8," It was @DATE1 seventh and I had invited my two best friends, @PERSON1 and @PERSON2, to go to my boyfriend's football game with me. It would be the first time for them to meet him since he went to a different high school than we did. Our plan was to get off the bus at my house and then my @CAPS3 would take us to his game later. When we arrived at the end of the lane we started walking up to my house. Then all of the sudden ""ahhhhhh, @CAPS1 my god!"" @PERSON2 and I were both screaming at the top of our lungs, ""@CAPS2 a... ahhhh!"". @PERSON2 and I had almost stepped on a dead snake that was laying in the lane. While this was going on @PERSON1 had no idea what the problem was or why we were screaming. We looked back at her and saw a completely puzzled look on her face which we found absolutely hilarious so we burst out laughing. She soon figured out that we had been startled by the snake and also started in ""you guys are so funny @CAPS2 just a dead snake"". We talked and laughed our way up to my house. @CAPS4 we had caught up a little and I had changed into my boyfriends #@NUM1 jersey, we went downstairs to eat. We sat down at the table with our bowls of chili and started eating. My @CAPS3 came over and put her bowl down then went back into the kitchen to get something. When she came back she had napkins and another bowl, I playfully ask her ""are you really hungry @CAPS3?"" she said ""no..uh why?"" That's when the girls and I started laughing hysterically again, ""@CAPS3 you have two bowls you are obviously very hungry"" I giggled. She turned a little red and then said back ""well I do love chili, I can't ever seem to get enough of it"" then she laughed a little ""your probably right I should just start with one bowl.""  @CAPS4 we gathered the blankets for the stands we left. On our way up we made a pit stop at the famous @ORGANIZATION1. I was so exited to see my boyfriend and to have my friends come along that coffee was probably not the best idea, but we stopped anyway. While we were in there waiting for our coffee we passed the time by making faces through the nearby window at people who happened to drive by. We were cracking up over the looks people gave us, some looked like @CAPS5 thought it was funny while others looked like @CAPS5 thought we had escaped from a nut house. Soon enough our drinks were ready and we headed out the door. Then as we were walking to the car some guy whistled at us. We hopped in the car and then lost it when we saw that it was some guy who was dressed up in one of those statue of liberty costumes.  We were almost at the school and I was bouncy from the caffeine and excitement mix. My @CAPS3 had never driven to @PERSON3's school before, while my dad had only was busy that night. I was trying to keep calm while giving her directions in a very giggly manner. I started off by saying ""you go straight up here @CAPS3"" the my @CAPS3 and the girls said ""honey you can't go straight up here"". ""yes you can"" I argued then @CAPS4 a while @PERSON1 said ""girl look you could go straight but you ain't gonna see @PERSON3 if you do"". I realized @CAPS5 were right and told my @CAPS3 ""don't turn, just turn right"" she got confused cause I had said the directions wrong so she turned left. I started to freak, screaming ""no no no! we have to turn around I meant right"" @CAPS5 all burst out laughing at me ""man calm down woman, we just have to turn around"" said @PERSON2. We finally got back on track and I tried to give clear directions. I wasn't completely positive where the turn off was for his school so I told my @CAPS3 to go slow, when we passed it and I freaked out again. ""@CAPS1 @CAPS3 we have to turn around"" @CAPS5 all laughed at this and then my @CAPS3 said that she was testing me to see if I could be patient. We all laughed again. When we got there and hopped out to pay and get in. We got there in in time to see the guys come out of the locker room. I got another dose of excitement, @PERSON2 and @PERSON1 started to walk away so I could wave at @PERSON3. I pulled on their shirts and begged them to stay because I didn't want to be the only person waiting. Then I saw him run past and before I knew it I leaped off the ground and waved frantically. I saw him smiling as he ran onto the field, my friends laughed at how I jumped and we enjoyed the game.",16,20,,36,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18036,7,A time I was pacent was I was wating in line for lunch. I was pacent becou’s thair where lot’s of other people in line and people where letting other people cut tham so the line was getting longer. That is the story of one of the times I was pacent.,4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4382,2,"I am not in agreement because young children should not be exposed to certain offensive books.  However, I believe that books should not be removed or censored in the libraries. because they will separate be washig some bad things and they will be a bad idea",2,2,,2,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1006,1,"I strolled into my bedroom, I noticed the computer sitting on a wonder desk. I thought that computers are very helpful. There are many controversies on whether computes benefit or do not benefit society. My opinion on this topic is that computers are useful and I support this technology. Computers are excellent tools that could help students with work in school. For instance, this year I had a sciences project about how my hobbies interests are related to science. One of my interests in reading, @CAPS1 I had to research about how reading a simple back can be related to science. I went on the internet, typed in my question about reading, and two seconds later thousands of results up. I had even gotten some pictures too. A couple of days later after I had handed in my project, I recieved it back. I had gotten a @NUM1 on this project! @CAPS1 being able to use a computer really boosted my grade in science. Without the internet, I probably wouldn't have been able to get on A on this. As you can see, computers can help students with projects, etc. in school. Using this technology can help you reconnect with friends and family members. In elementary school, my friend @PERSON1 had moved away to @LOCATION1 @CAPS2. I had no way of communicating with her until I found a program on the internet that lets you chat with people. Both of us had been using this and we've been able to talk for on end. I don't see @PERSON1 as often as I had used to, but with my computer wide open in my bedroom I can chat online with her almost everyday. Computers can help re-establish old relationships with friends and family. @CAPS1 communicating on these are also another benefit. Using computers can help enrich peoples minds. For example, in school we use a program called, ""@CAPS3 @CAPS4."" @CAPS3 @CAPS4 involves you playing games that help you @CAPS3, and tests when you are ready to take them. @CAPS3 @CAPS4 has been helping us practice for the @ORGANIZATION1's. After taking multiple tests in subjects such as science, math, and language arts, I now feel confident about taking the @ORGANIZATION1's and I believe I am going to do well on these tests. As you can tell, the tool of @CAPS3 @CAPS4 on the computer can benefit your school grades. The effect computers have an people are that they help and benefit the society. I think that more citizens should own computers because they can expand your knowledge. I am clearly in favor of owning and using computers.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15847,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"", the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. For one just letting a thousand foot drigibles land on the top of a building was a huge obstacle.. By having the dirigible on the building held on by one cable tether was bad. So the builder had to work on the steel frame of the building so that the dirigible wouldn't add so much stress to the building. That was a huge obstacles the builders of the Empire State building had to face.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15657,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many promblems when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Most of there problem they encountered when designing the mast. They found that they could not just drop a mooring mast on top of the building at a thousand feet. The building was not strong enough, so they had to strengthen the building with a new steel frame. Then the builders also faced safety issues. At a thousand feet the air currents were extremely violant. By the end of the construction it was quickly noticed that dirigibles could not land on the Empire State Building.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15058,6,"There were many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. One problem that was addressed was the fact that dirigibles all over the world were mostly filled with hydrogen, which was flammable. This was a problem because on May 6, 1937 a dirigible was destroyed by fire and the owners of the Empire State building relized ""how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place of a densely populated area."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) Another potential problem were the strong wind currents on top of the building, as described in @CAPS1 @NUM2. The concern was that these strong currents would prevent a dirigible from docking, and could possibly blow it into another building. This could puncture the dirigible's material and cause a horrifying accident. The final obstacle that prevented dirigibles from docking on the Empire State Building was the fact that it was against the law. The law stated that ""airships flying to low over urban areas"" was prohibited. There were many obstacles that prevented dirigibles from docking on the Empire State Building.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15061,6,The builders of the Empire state building faced obstacles in order to attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. One issue was that the winds at the top of the building were very dramicaclly shifting because of the air currents. Because of this the Dirigible end would swivlle around the top of the building. An other issue was the people walking the @CAPS1 of New York below the building. To stop a Dirigible heavy lead weights had to be used. This was problamatic because one of the weights could very easily come lose and @DATE1. The law that was about a flying airship lingering too low over a city would be broken if a Dirigible had been stationd at the Empire State building.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15863,6,"Intended uses for buildings often are met with challenges. In the article ""The Mooring @CAPS1"" by @PERSON1, the obstacles faced in allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building are discussed. The first obstacle faced is stated in paragraph @NUM1, when to build a dock on top of the building the entire building would have to be inforced. This was an obstacle because it would be at a cost of @MONEY1. Another obstacle faced was the weather. Above the building violent air currents rage. These currents would cause the ship to swivel around and around the mooring. The final obstacle in allowing dirigibles to dock was the law. According to the article, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas... Would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building."" The cost of reinforcing the building, the weather, and the laws were three obstacles faced in docking blimps to the Empire State building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
686,1,"Dear local newspaper, I would like to speak upon the topic of the effects that computers have on people. My opion on this topic is that computers do have an effect on people. Most people while surfing the internet don't keep track of time. What I mean when I say most people lose track of time is that, they try to keep track of the time but while on the web something @MONTH1 pop that catches their intrest and at that same time there focus is on something else. Some of the other effects computers can have on people is keeping them in the house. When many people are on the web they tend not to excersise as much. When in the house on the web most people that excersise stop excersising. The reason why this occurs is because while people are on the computer chair you feel so relaxed and calm that you don't want to get up. This leads into eating unhealthy foods. Some such as chips, donuts, twinkies and etc. Some @CAPS1 do not believe that is an opinion. The reason I say this is because while watching television the other day I saw a commercial that said quote ""@CAPS2 that are more active are healthier than @CAPS2 that stay on the computer all day. Most @CAPS1 do gain weight on the computer because they are not physically active. Not being physically active can lead to A) obesity @CAPS4) cloged arteries or @CAPS5) lazyness. It can lead to all three because those are the effects of being on a computer every of the day. Most @CAPS1 should be enjoying nature instead of staying on the computer. There is a lot more to life than being on the web. Some such as playing sports. Not only is playing sports fun but at the same tim it is also healthy. Would you rather live to @NUM1 or live to @NUM2. And so local newspaper that is why I am writing you this letter today. I mean would you rather have friends @CAPS2 or be lonely. There are weight surgerys but those can rack up to thousands of dollars. And yes weight loss surgery does have effects such as death. So come on @LOCATION1 its your decison and remember the most important part of this letter which is between liveing healthy and young or dieing unhealthy and suffer. Its your choice @LOCATION1 decide.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7398,3,"In the towns that the cyclist arrived at were all ghost towns. In the text, the author said, “it fit the traditional definition of a ghost town.” It affected the cyclist because, with the towns being deserted, the cyclist couldn’t refill hi water.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3005,2,I think if people find books offensive they should not even read that book to begin with. If books are found offensive and taken from shelves then book shelves would be emtpy. Then their would nothing left for people to read.     Some of the greatest authors use offensive words in their books take them off th shelves and you will be getting rid of the greatest material. @PERSON1 @CAPS1 for example in the book '@CAPS2' its offensive to gays and one gets killed.,2,2,,2,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9151,4,"Why did the author conclude the story with this paragraph? I believe that the author concluded that paragraph because it tells what she is going to do in the future. For example in the story she told her mom “I failed…” When she was putting the flower in the hole by the garden a flock of geese were flying, heading south.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16249,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in their attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem the builders faced was that a dirigible being moored to the top of the building would add stress to its frame. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly @NUM2 feet below."" The builders had to make sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications to strengthen the frame of the building. Another major problem they faced was safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium."" Hydrogen is extremely flammable and after an incident with a German dirigible being destroyed, they realized how dangerous it would be over a densely populated area. Another reason was nature. In paragraph @NUM3 it says ""The winds on top of the building were constantly moving."" This made it hard to tie up and keep the aircraft steady for passengers to get off safely. Even a navy pilot ""could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds."" There was even a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The mooring on top of the Empire State building was destined to fail because of all the obstacles that the builders faced.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10353,4,The reason why this author includes this story with this paragraph is because it is still talking about saeng and that is more like her and that she has a mind like a butterflye that was trapped a burst out with this open the Saeng and her mom had but a tennage girl me and saeng we kind relate to the same thing.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12750,5,"The author of Narciso Rodriguez, Narciso Rodriguez made the @CAPS1 feel happy and welcome. When he talked about the different cultures and races coming together and becoming a solidarity made the @CAPS1 feel welcome to everyone no matter what race you are. When he talked about his Culture and house and having people over for dinner everynight just felt happy and welcome. When he showed his love for his home and culture his parents had shown him made the @CAPS1 feel uplifting. that is how Narciso Rodriguez created @CAPS1 in the memoir, by talking about happy uplifting topics.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9486,4,Saeng would return to her homeland.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7389,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead Do not exceed posted speeed limit,” the cyclist is affected by features of the setting. In the story it says “The sun was beginning to beat down. “This quote means that it was getting hotter and this was going to make it harder for the cyclist to ride. Another quote that states that the features of the setting affects the cyclist is “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” This means that the cyclist is cold not only going to have to deal with the heat, but he is also going to have to side-over hill after hill. Eventhough they @MONTH1 be small, rolling hills, it still takes alot of energy out of you to ride up and down hills repeatedly. A third quote that shows the setting affecting the cyclist is “I got down on my hands and knes, walking the handle of the rusted water pump with all my strength. A tar like substance oozed out, followed  by brackish water feling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees “this quote means the cyclist is so desperate to get water, that he uses his small amount of strength left to try and get some water. When he finally does get some water, it first come out as an ooey substance then the water come out really hot. In conclusion, these have been examples of how the cyclist was affected by features of the setting. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
658,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, The delema over computers needs to be noticed. People need to relize computers are one of the greatest inventions we have in our time, but in my opinion people take that as an advantage and misuse them for purposes that they should not be used. Computers are not meant to be for playing games, or constently instent messaging. They are meant for learning purposes and for work or school. Why do people use computars for things that they dont need? People use computers for fun! They instant message, listen to music, go on @CAPS1, @CAPS2, or @CAPS3. People also use @CAPS4 and play games on unknown websites. Computers are not ment to be for that, they are for school and work. @ORGANIZATION2, word, @ORGANIZATION2, and powerpoint, if computers were used for those purposes people wouldnt be the way they are today. In the @LOCATION1 the computer is very popular people aboulutly love it! But these people are the people who are unfriendly, mean and sad. They also are incredibly out of shape. I know so many people who use computers instead of doing homework and getting fresh air. They are so independent they do when they go home from school is eat and play on the computer. I have a hard time understanding why they do that but I guess they feel they have nothing else better to do. I also know people who use the computer the right way and they are very happy people. They also have so much knowledge and there is never a dull conversationthem. Those people use the computer everyday but they use it correctly only for and they are just well are very smart and get good grades in school! Basically, what I am trying to say is that people who use the computer suceed in anything they do because they know how to use and understand the computer, but people who use it in the wrong ways will just be miserable because they dont know to much, they had average grades and they are unhealthey.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12823,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is grateful. Narciso Rodriguez is eternally grateful to have the rich culinary skills and a love for cooking just like his Parents. His very happy he came from such friendly family. The community and @ORGANIZATION1 comes together to help out those who needs a hand. Rodriguez is grateful to his Parents for their love and sacrifice, and he thanks them repeatedly. His Parents have there arms and doors open to those who will do the same for them.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6437,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because he is in the high deserts of California where it is very hot so, you need alot of water. Then he needs more water and finds a water pump but cant use the water because it was “some where in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees."" Then the terrain in changes when he says “Flat road was replaced ",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18164,7,Patience for me is when im helping others with their problems so in this story im going describe to you what is patience. Patience is when you are willing to sit down and help someone with their own problems. I have a lot of patience cause I sit down all the time and help people with their problem. One day at my old school @PERSON1 this girl she was having very difficult problems at home. When she came to school she was crying. I went to go ask her what was wrong. She was saying the way she doesn’t want to be at home because he mom don’t let her go nowhere she always had to stay home and watch her two brothers. So I sat down all day with her and let her feel like she had some one to talk to for once in her life. As we sit in talked she seemed to feel much better and she felt like she had a true friend. In conclusion I really felt like I had patience and since that day forward I have sat down and let people tell me about their problems.,11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7031,3,"The feature effect the cyclist because he wants to go somewhere spectaculiar and amazing like. Like for example, he said he was thriving on this one spot forever and he finally got their and it was a ghost town and he chuckeled and roud away because it wasn’t what he was looking for. I belive that this guy in judging every place he goes by the way it looks and not by what it haves to offer like he doesn't believe in getting direction from an old mat, but yet he still took it. I believe that he wants to get were he wants to go and not let anybody get in his way no matter what it's like he is looking for a perfect spot and he think want he finds it he will be filled with story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7652,3,The features of the setting effect the cyclist because it is to hot. It is hot enough that his water tasts like battery acid.  Then he has to deal with difficult trails breakway he said “old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in office.” This is sayin that the old-timers gave him old directions. Plus what made the setting even hotter was he has been cycling nonstop. Then when he was riding he said “The cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite had my name written all over it.” With him thinking about this it made him forget about the heat. This was why the setting was affecting the cyclist.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16146,6,the builder of the empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there because they had to plan out how it would what they would need to use for it to dock there. What kinds of material would be needed in this project and how it would work. Before actually putting it all together.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15643,6,"Turning the mast on the Empire State Building into a dock for dirigibles had many obstacles. There were obstacles like flamable gas in the dirigibles, dangerous to be near a densely populated area, the wind were constantly shifting due to air currents, and it would be dangling high above pedestrians. These obstacles were very difficult to solve.      In the dirigibles, there are filled with hydrogen, and hydrogen is highly flamable if the dirigibles caught on fire. It is also dangerous to be above a very densely populated area because if the dirigible ever failed, it would fall on inocent bystanders. It also is dangerous because the winds shift a lot, and it can get popped by other objects or buildings around the dirigible. Thus, why it is difficult to turn the mast into a loading dock for dirigibles.         Turning the mast on the Empire State Building into a loading dock for dirigibles is very difficult to do because it is not safe.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9397,4,"I think that the author concludes the story like that because @MONTH1 be she’s saying that by that time she’ll be ready to take the test again. Another way of thinking is that @MONTH1 be by that time when that happens in spring she would be preprared and more confident of herself. @MONTH1 be the author was trying to say that just like the begining of a new springs, it would be a new beginning for her.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1271,1,"The computer is a great achivement of man. It is very useful for finding information fast, and has many other capabilities. Even though computers are every useful tool in the modern world. It has negatively afect to people. People aren't getting enough exercise because they are always on the computer. Along with that they are being socialy active. The lost and probably most negative effect is the exesive amount of freedom people get on the internet. Exercise is probably are one of the most important thing to live along and healthy life. People should be atleast taking along walk everyday. If people are sitting infront of a all day there will be much moreover people. People shold be for healthy life style, not with computers around every corner. People are also losing the ability to interact. Life is becoming dull. Every one is either texting someone. The biggest surprise is that there is online dating. This is horrible because you might be dating some crazy person. If someone think there inlove and when the cople meets the dont know how to interact, then there is a real problems. Even when you are just on the computer. You could use that time to socialize with friends and family. Last is the emerce amount of freedom that any are has with computers. There are lots of bullies people who want to sell you stuff, and people who want your personal info. Many kids sign up for something like facebook, but they're not cairful. They put staff like there adress and don't pay attention who how is sending them friend request. Computers have way to much negative effectson people. It would be great if some how the system could be improved, and people need to be more responsible. People should wont to get out and interact. Take a walk. Just dont let computers control your life.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12144,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir is grateful. In paragraph @NUM1 the author says ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" The author proves and says how we as grateful. Also in paragraph @NUM2 the author says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" That also shows how grateful the author is. Also in paragraph @NUM2 it says ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I thanked them repeatedly."" That shows how grateful the author is because he thanked his parents more than once. Finally in paragraph @NUM4 the author explains how he learned the true definition of family. Then it says ""And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" That also shows how grateful the author is because it says how he is gracious for his neighborhood and the many things he learned. The mood the author created is very grateful.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10572,4,"The author concludes her story with the quote, “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” because the author  is showing that nature and the plant are valuable to her. Saeng (who says the quote) believes that the hibiscus will help her pass the test. Earlier on in the story it shows that when she gets in trouble, she rubs the plant leaves in her hands to help her overcome the problem. The author is making the idea clear and portraying the idea that the plant helps Saeng with obstacles.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21150,8,"A few years ago me, my mom and my sister @PERSON1 were at a sub shop for dinner. Whal we were in line waighting for our sandwiches, @PERSON1 who was severl inches shoter than me at the time, said that she was taller than me, so I stratend up and said that I was still taller. Then she stoud up on her tip-toes (making her taller than me) and said that she was too taller than me and she stuck her toung out at me, so I stoud up on my tip-toes (makimg me taller) and stuck out my toung at her. The funny part is that there was this cute guy standing behind @LOCATION1 so it looked like I was sticking my toung out at him! He had this amused look on his face like he was looking at some cute little kid. I quickly stuck my toung back in my mouth and returned to my normal hight. I then tolled my mom that @PERSON1 were going to find a place to sit. Once we found a place to sit I toled her abought the guy standing behind her and we both laughed it was really funny and we still joke about it! : )",14,14,,28,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15386,6,They @CAPS1 A alot problem with people @CAPS2 about Airship on @CAPS3 @CAPS4 with the @ORGANIZATION1,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7597,3,"Some of the features like the change in landscape affected the cyclist. Differing from flat land to miniture hills to highways is kind of hard to cope with, especially considering he was dehydrated and had no water.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10279,4,"The author concludes the story with that because she is determined to succeed in @LOCATION1. She misses her homeland and everything there: gardens, grandparents etc. For example , she walked into the flowershop she smells the flowers like she used to back home. She then smelled a flower that reminded her of her grandmothers “long gray hair, freshly washed …” But by saying that last sentence she said that when the hibiscus budded next winter she will take the test that she failed again.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
434,1,"I think we need our computers. If we dont have competer's we wont be able to connect to our family that could live in anther state or country. I no how there is texting now but some people dont even have phones or nothing how can you connect to them you cant call it might not be free with the phone palan you have. If a family member coms and visits you they would probuly email you about it but if there is no computers they can't tell when there coming. Are they gong do show unispectly they might not even be home and if they show up without them knowing there out of luck. And we exersize on our overtime we pick what time and we do it and if we play a sport were enjoying nature some people might have job's that take place outside of if. There are nerd's that are on computers all day long but in sure they enjoy nature I dont know about exersizing but they have a car and every thing they drive and things. Also, about the exersizing every on has to exersize to stay in shape im pretty sure people dont want to be fat there whole life they want to look good and feel good about there self. If it is a holiday or something and people want to send them something to wish then of whetever holiday it is. There not gonna be able to see them in person if they live so far away inless they plan to meet each other but even if they do that there gonna want to email then not call were it costs money and texting only comes with sertain plan's of phones so all there is left is emailing. Sometimes, people will more fron of you that your ollways on the computer if your not dont worry at least you get to email your family that you dont ever seen. These reasons are my opinion that dont get rid of computers and other things.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3936,2,"I think that they shounldn't remove the censorship books in the libraries because so bigger kids can read the books not the little kids because they don't need to here the kind of words in the books.  Also the little  kids has to small of ear to hear and also to small of eyes to even see the words in the book like that.  The bigger kids like in grades @NUM1  should be able to look at the books because it will be word that have heard before.          The books shouldn't be in the lower grade libraries becaues the little kids will ckeack the books out of the libraries, like the books thatis called @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 @CAPS3 because it says the n word a lot of times, a other one is @CAPS4 and @CAPS5 becaues says a lot of dirt words like the f, s, and ect.words that they don't need to hear that young of age.       Another reason why it wounld not be fair to the bigger kids if they take away from the libraries becaues they tring to get the out of the libraries so the littler kids don't get the books to take home read at home.  If you are going to take away the books tale them away from the grades @NUM2 becaues the that the book called @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 @CAPS3, and @CAPS4 And @CAPS5 will be bad for those kids to read.     Some more reasons why bigger kids should read the books and why not the little kids shouldn't read the books.  Why should the bigger kids in grade @NUM1 should read them becaues they are bigger then the littler kids are. The littler kids shouldn't becaues we don't want the littler kids to go home and say the words to there mom, dad, grandme, grandpa, and ect.       Now I have come to the end of my persuasive essay for the newpaper about my reflecting on why or why not we should get reid of the consorship in the libraraies.  Also until the next time I right again about this topic and I hopest you like this persuasive essay for the newpaper.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9830,4,"The author concluded the story with the paragraph to set the sonip theme. In the story, the @CAPS1 represents very important thing to saeng – confidence, beauty, adaptation… some things she can apply to herself, & her memories of her old homeland. She had failed the driving test. Afterwards, she bought the @CAPS1 to comfort her homesickness. I saw the @CAPS1 as a sort of metaphor to Saeng the same @CAPS1, but growing differently in a different area just as she is still the same but in a new home. The significance of the last paragraph is mainly about the @CAPS1 budding. It represents to Saeng her homeland by the @CAPS1 blossoming ,it can represent her love for the homeland. When the author wrote “then I will take that test again” it is referring to the new confidence she @MONTH1 have later when the @CAPS1 blooms (another @CAPS1 /person metaphor)",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1414,1,"Dear @CAPS1, More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. I support advantages in technology and believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Computers give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, they allow you to talk to people online, and you can play games games that can help you with your school-work. Do you believe that computers give people the ability to learn about faraway people and places? You can use google.com and look up different cultures and find out how the stuff they do is different from us and what kind of food they eat. For example, in @LOCATION1, they sit on the floor @CAPS2 they eat. We get to sit at a table on our dining rooms or kitchens. @PERCENT1 of people in would floor. Surely, computers allow you @CAPS2 my cousin on the computer and @CAPS3 important to note that, on computers you can play games that can help you with your school-work. You can go on sites that you on your @CAPS4. Show you how your body works for @CAPS5, and tell you about the revolutionary war for @CAPS6 @CAPS7. These sites are not boring. This a whole lot of fun! Whoever thought that learning would be fun? I sure didnt. The time is now! Just think that people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends because no matter what, people will always have time for that.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7408,3,"The features of the setting have affected the cyclist in “Do not exceed posted speed limit"" greatly, first he statrs off happy because he’s going to Yosemite national park and he’d gotten short cut advice that would make his trip shorter. ""He rode into the morning with strong legs,” Then he got to the first stop. It looked like a buzzing town at one time, but now a ghost town. So he kept on with plenty of water and thought he could make it to the next stop. The next stop was an old abandoned gas station where the only water was @NUM1. He was hitting the water pretty regular and the hot sun was beating down on him. The next terrain changed he thought he would die & have the vultures pick his bones because he took advice from old timers, then became to his next stop which seemed to be an old welch’s grape juice factory. He thought he would die of thirst but he kept on with little water a hot sun. next the hills came & he paced himself a little time, then he finally came to a modern looking place with cool running water with an old man who gave him directions that he gladly took. After that he been through asuring himself he would die he was relieved to see the old man’s there he would forever on listen to their advice because he made it.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12426,5,"in the Narciso Rodriguez the author in the memoir for @ORGANIZATION1 is ""Growing up in this environment instilled"" this prove that how he grow up.Another @CAPS1 is to give their children a better life.this show that the children well get what they want. all this show that where was he born how he got her and him getting a better life",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
2979,2,"Write a persuasive essay to a newspaper reflecting your views on censorship in libraries. Do you believe that certain should be removed i think so be no that yes i think should no person that in chager the book, music, movies, magazines, ect., that be no agure      why do i think if you need that please  think i no thank you please if  i need why do we if know that if i failure the this test i who need to graduate please the children allow to home please yes.          Why do we need to be a prafece person please why do we need to do this why write this assgiment because you mean to be the best teaches ever and ever facebook is my password is @PERSON1  @NUM1 that why i need my myspace is the same thingh but different at same time please know that i need to know i really  i need to my e-mail address is  @EMAIL1 that is my e-mail please work m",1,2,,1,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15101,6,"In the excerpt of ""The Mooring Mast,"" many obstacles created problems for the builders of the Empire State building and their goal of allowing dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle that came across the builder's minds was that they ""could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building's flat roof,"" (paragraph @NUM1) because it would damage the building with the ammount of pressure pulling on the structure. The second problem that the architects faced was safety. Events from the past such as Hindenburg was caused by the use of ""hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable...the owners of the empire state building realized how much worse the accident could've been."" The next problem that came up was nature itself, such as dangerous winds. An event when ""the U.S. Navy dirigible, Los Angeles approached the mooring mast but could not close enough to tie up because of forceful winds."" @CAPS1 there were legal issues, and existing law was against airships flying too low over urban areas, making it illegal.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15100,6,"Although thousands of dollars and countless hours were spent on the Mooring Mast, certain obstacles prevented dirigibles from docking atop the Empire State Building for safety reasons. First, these dirigibles were not safe to fly over populated areas. Some contained the highly flammable gas hydrogen. Also, a German dirigible called the ""Hindenburg"" burst into flames in New Jersey. As stated in paragraph @NUM1, ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" The winds at the peak of the Empire State Building were violent. It is stated in paragraph four teen, ""The winds on top the building were constantly shifting."" It would not be safe to dock a dirigible on the Empire State Building.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9910,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph to end on a happy yet motivating note. In the story Saeng says that she failed the test and was very dissapointed with herself. The test must have of been very important to her for her to be so dissapointed. The author also probably ended with this paragraph to show that Saeng is devoted in passing this test. Saeng seems like a sentemental yet reliable person. I believe that the test is to spend a minimal amount of money and she wants to earn respect from her mom. That is why taking and passing the test seems so important to Saeng. That is why the author ended with that paragraph.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18281,7,"There goes another @NUM1 minutes wasted! I knew I should of got here earlier! Ulg! So many people and so little time! Have you ever had to wait @CAPS1 for food? Three days ago, l though that l should stop at my locker before going to lunch - @CAPS2 @CAPS3! I slammed my grey coated locker and ran for the cafeteria. I sped past a sea of seventh graders urging to get to lunch. I grabbed a tan plate and waited for my @CAPS8 patty, ""what's the hold up?"" I thought. I @CAPS7 reached my destination, @CAPS6 the food was at! I reached out and - wait @CAPS6's the food? The food trays were @CAPS4 @CAPS5! The aroma of pizza enticed my sense and made my poor little stomach growl with anger! I angerly paced, ""@CAPS6 is the food?"" @CAPS7, a lunch lady announced that she would have to make @CAPS8 @CAPS9 on a sub bun. I bailed to the other line. I gripped tongs with disappointment and put chips and cheese on my plate. At least l had some food! I plopped down at my table and another lunch lady came up to me and gave a soft, squishy, warm @CAPS10 @CAPS11 for @CAPS12! She thanked me for my patience ."" l got a cookie! A warm, delicious, @CAPS11"" I thought. Sometimes waiting can get irritating but sometime you @MONTH1 get rewarded!",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8868,4,The reason the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because the author wanted to tell about about when saeng will take the test again. The author told the time with the season of the spring. In spring all the snows were melted and the geese and hibiscus has budding. And this paragraped make the reader to understand easyer. This is why the author include this paragraph in the story. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4748,2,"No, materials should not be removed from the libraries.First most of books,movies and,music are the best way to support difffernt things.They all have there type of way of convinicing you.There are many different ways to understand but those are certainly the best ways.                          Like a movie some people like to see things to understand them.Because it take times for some people to see instead of reading or listening.It take people to just seat and watch is a great way.Some people that look at a movie an a wrong way get the wrong type of thought about something which make it offensive to them.                                                                    Like music is a great way to understand what someone is trying to say or get across.You have to take time out to really listen and here what they are taking about.If you here a song once and then you just take it a wrong way u never let your mind here what they said.Some people let one word or two make u think differnt about the song.So before u judge listen to the whole song.     A book one of the worlds best way to understand were someone is comeing from.A book is like a short life.If judge a book bye its first couple paragraphs you would never get a meaning out of it.With a book you have to give it a chance to seek in your mind so that you do get an understanding.A book can tell u alot of things.So some people take it offensive.     These types of materials should never be removed from labraries.This things are great ways to understand things.So if you take one thing offensive try another way maybe its a better way for people to understand it.Without this materials we would never understond,discovery anythong in are worl",2,3,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16593,6,The obsticals that the @CAPS1 had with docking the Dirigibles were that even though they would be tied up in the front. The back end would still swivel in the wind. They couldn't put little waits on the back because if they ever fell they would @CAPS2 podestriens. And there was a law past ships couldnt dock on Building or even come close to rural areas. That is some of the obsticals the workers faced.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21292,8," Laughter can change any situation. It can be used to break the awkward silence after a bad joke is told, to reminisce about a fond memory, or to clear ones head and create the feeling of calmness. In @DATE1 opinion laughter is a form of communication. I discovered this through the coarse of the @DATE1 through many different situations. Many of the experiences were with people who spoke different languages or young children who I was able to connect with through laughter.  One of @DATE1 experiences with laughter has been with the many different exchange students that @DATE1 family has hosted. We have gotten exchange students from @LOCATION1, @LOCATION3, and @LOCATION4. Most of them have rather good broken @CAPS1, but there were some words that proved difficult to describe and translate.  @DATE1 favorite exchange students was @PERSON1, a student from @LOCATION3. She lives in the northern part of the @LOCATION3, in the @LOCATION2 country. In the @LOCATION2 country they speak @CAPS2 and @LOCATION2 and culture is slightly different form the rest of @LOCATION3. What made @PERSON1 so enjoyable was her cheerful personality, her empathy, and her ability to make anyone in the room genuinely burst in to fits of laughter. I believe that this incredible ability of her's was one of the reasons that the summers I spend with her are some of @DATE1 happiest memories.  @PERSON1 could turn any activity into a lighthearted experience. I would do tasks with her like washing the dishes, a chore I didn't usually enjoy, and the entire time we would guffaw at the most outrageous things. Together we would laugh until tears were streaming from our eyes and we felt the need to go to the bathroom.  Once @PERSON1, @DATE1 best friend @PERSON2, and I spent an entire day laying in the grass at a park putting on ridiculous skits for each other, and telling comical stories, laughing until our bellies hurt. Between out bursts of laughter @PERSON1 would exclaim ""@CAPS3 you have got to stop this or I will surely explode, I have to use the restroom every ten minutes!"" @CAPS4 she would say this we would look at each other and be back to rolling on the ground laughing.  When I went to visit @PERSON1 in @LOCATION3 we had many similar situations of outrageous, uncontrollable laughter. One day we went to the @LOCATION2 parliament building with our families, @PERSON1, her sister @CAPS5, @DATE1 sister @PERSON3, and I couldn't stop acting goofy and cracking up. We toured through the serious quiet building unable to be silent or stoic, laughing at each other uncontrollably, making funny faces and dancing around, unable to contain our joy.  I don't know @PERSON1 @CAPS4 well @CAPS4 @DATE1 friends back home, but I think I will always feel a deeper connection to her then most people because with her I feel the free ability to laugh at every and anything. I have heard many different facts about laughter; if you laugh before an exam you will do better on it, moments of laughter are more prominent in your memories, and a person that laughs daily is more likely to feel less stressed and have a happier @DATE1, but the reason that I love to laugh is that it makes me feel really fantastic.",25,25,,50,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
750,1,"Yes, I agree with the concern that expert have. I say this because its true people get on the computer for a long time and forget about their family, there is also all kinds of danger online, and lastly your brain is not getting enough work out. Don't you think all of this is true? Well, then if you still don't believe me I'll prove it to you. First, people get addicted to the computer they forget about there family. Insted of beign on the computer just looking for stuff like myspace or facebook, but they should spend time with their families playing games like @CAPS1, @CAPS2, or @CAPS3. I say this from a personal expirience, it wasn't me it was my cousin @PERSON1 he got addicted to the computer so much that everytime his family tried to do something fun together they would always end up fighting because he didn't want to go. Secondly, people can be facing major danger online, for example when you got to those chat sessions where you meet people supposley your age, but it might not always be that way everytime on the news you see stories where old people try act like @NUM1 year olds, but they aren't they just want to do bad stuff. So you can be facing a lot of dangerd online. Lastly, by beign on the computer your not letting your brain get the good workout or exersice it needs. Your just letting it be there, but instead you can be reading a book or do a word seach puzzle; these are all good idea for making your brain exersice. On a recent research experts say that people spend time reading and exersicing their brains do very good on test, but people who spend most of the time in the computer fail test. So don't you think I'm right? Don't you think that if you spend to much time on a computer you have less time with your family. You can be facing serious danger, and your brain is not getting the exercise it needs. Did I convinced you yet?",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13577,5,The mood in the memoir is peaceful and loving The reason why it is peaceful is because there is no fighting in this story at all. This story is loving because throughout the whole thing the only thing that I learned about was how to respect and love each other. There are many examples of this in paragraph @NUM1 and paragraph @NUM2. This is the tone of the story.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16068,6,"The builders of the Empire state Building faced numerous technical and safety problems in creating the building's dirigible mooring mast. First off, a dirigible moored to the mast by just one cable would put enormous stress to the frame of the building The building's frame had to be strengthened first to allow such a project. When the mast was finished, several other problems prevented its use. The mast was designed to make the building a center of travel, but most dirigibles from other countries used hydrogen to fly, instead of helium. Earlier, the German blimp Hindenburg had been destroyed because hydrogen was so flammable. It was realized that such a disaster would be much more catastrophic should it happen over a densely populated city like New York. Also, blimps moored to the mast would be blown around by violent winds, possibly pushing them into nearby buildings. The lead weights normally used to prevent this would have had to be left dangling over pedestrians, a major safety issue- @CAPS1, there was a law prohibiting dirigibles from flying too low over urban settlements, making use of the mast illegal. These problems doomed the mooring mast project from the start.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
405,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people surveyed in @LOCATION1, @CAPS1 agree that the use of computers benefits society. I personally concern with these @NUM1 people, computers have a positive effect on people. There are multiple reasons why I think the use of computers really benefits society, including it can teach good hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn abour faraway places and people, and even allow people to talk online with other people. Once again I do believe computers can have a positive effect on people. First of all, its's a proven fact that most sports on physical exercise to involve hand-eye coordination to some extent. The computer can help reach people from a very young age good hand-eye coordination. When a person uses a computer they have to keep an eye on the screen but still be able to use the mouse or keyboard. This takes alot of coordination if you think about why don't even love to look at the mouse on keyboard when they are typing, they just know where everything is. People disagree with what I'm saying often use the excuse that when people spend to much time on the computers they aren't getting enough exercise. However, I believe that is not true. The hand-eye coordiantion people learn on the computer help to improve their skill and coordiantion in sports, for example in baseball a person has to be looking at the ball to catch it, but at the samee time they have to move their arm to catch it. That is were the hand-eye coordiantion helps. This proves that computers can benefit society through teaching people hand-eye coordiantion. In addition to this @PERCENT1 of teachers at @ORGANIZATION2 believe that computers can be used as a great tool to help students learn. Computers give people the ability to learn about far away places and people. They give people acess to information about a foreign place or people be available in or other resources areas. On the computer one can go to a search sight and type in my place in the whole world. Then all they have to do is search and they have dozens of with information of that place and pictures, @CAPS2 are a society that is advencing in technology people are learnings learn and they can wtih great the of a button. In addition is think it's also a tool in schools. Teachers can have students do projects about different countries on people and the student can easily that the information on the computer. Computer benefit society in the way that they can teach about different loaction and people. Computers can help people become interested in these different topics and @MONTH1 be even inspire some people to go to these faraway places or hack different people. Finally, @NUM4 out of @NUM5 people asked had some kind of way to contact with people online, whether it was through email or facebook. Computers allow people to take online with other people. In our modern society it is very important that a person has friends, are great why to keep in with friends, if live very far away from you on it haven't to them in a while connecting them on the computer is a great way to keep i touch. Those who disagree with my opinion believe that spending time on the computer means less time with family and friends. I believe taht is just the opposite. Since @CAPS2 are living in modern ages families understand that kid leaves to college they might be going far away or even across the country. Having computer allows that family to chat an easy way to keep in contact talk with each other. People talking each other on line is just another way how computers benefit society. Its now or never! Computers can have benefit society. They reach people hand-eye coordiantion can be use all through our life. Most importantly they give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. Lastly they allow people to talk online with others. @CAPS2 are living a modern time, society is advancing everyday and computers are a huge part of it! They are having a positive effect on people.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1641,1,"People the computer is something good and cool. Why is cool? is cool because the computer help you in everything. I have reasons. The first reasons is when in your school you have homework, work, project or something like that the computer help you a lot. Because in the computer you can sign in internet and you go to google or other web side. The second reason is the computer help you in your house for example: You have the big problem with your car or something like that. You can go in the computer in @LOCATION1 and the you see the pieces of your car. The thrid reason for the computer is so cool is because in this time you can make the everything thing. We can go the web and facilitate our life. Now you can realize the work, homework, project, ideas, writting book, chat, information, print picture, and ect... And that you are architect you can make your proper work or house you see the computer is so cool. But some people use the computer for bad thing for example: for pornography or something bad this is not cool and is not appropiate for people. The computer is something fabolous and super genius. My opinion is that the computer help a lot is something like need in our life. No for live but for our life or something @CAPS1. Something you can see your family for webcam. This is fabolous but don't used the webcam for something bad you can learn thing that you don't know. I think that for this reason you used the computer for good thing. Appraise the computer. Please.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13000,5,"In this memoir, the auther creats a mood. The mood that this author creates is the gratefulness. The reason that I say gratefulness is because Narciso Rodriguez is so greatful, and so happy to have two loving, caring, selfless parents. He's grateful to have not only a house, but a warm, cozy home, where he's grown up in and had so many memories. He is grateful to have all the perks of a traditional cuban home, with the food, the music, and all of the people Narciso is grateful that his Parents basically just gave up their own lives and dropped everything, so that he could have a better life. Nariso cannot imagine @CAPS1 to @LOCATION1 not knowing the language, not knowing anything, and leaving everything he knows behind. However that's what his parents did. they sacrificed so much for him. and he appreciates that more than anything. I think that the mood that the author chose for this story was perfect.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3530,2,"Have you ever wondered why a movie you rented from a library when you were younger, isn't there today? This is due to censorship. Libraries censor certain books if they believe them to be inappropriate for young children. Should censorship be allowed in libraries? Everyone has their own opinion, as do I, and I believe it should be allowed.     Censoring books allows libraries to withhold books, movies, magazines, music, and more from children who are not quite mature enough to handle the contents within the material, rather it be curse words in a movie, book, or music, nudity shown in magazines, or fighting shown in a video game. Young children look for role models, someone to follow, therefore, more than likely they are going to repeat what they hear or see. Some children are not quite mature enough to understand that it's not alway 'okay' to repeat what you hear, some words are inapporopriate for young children. Maybe they saw that on a movie, a man or woman solved a problem he or she had by fighting, the young child @MONTH1 take the message the wrong way, and try and solve one of his or her problem by fighting.      I believe that an age limit should be set for certain types of materials. Children that are under the age of @NUM1 should not be watching movies that are rated @CAPS1-@NUM1. There is a reason the rating is what it is. Just because your child is not allowed to rent/check out whatever the material @MONTH1 be, doesn't mean that you couldn't check it out, maybe go home and watch/listen/read/play it. If it doesn't seem to violent/graphic for your child then allow them to watch the movie, read the book, or play the game. That is your choice, but a library doesn't want to be blamed for your @NUM3 year old coming home cursing and fighting. My sister took my neice to the library once to rent a movie, it was a childrens movie, and my sister thought nothing harmful would come about it, but in one of the scenes, there was some arguing and fighting, and my neice began arguing with my sister, and hitting her, and my sister wasn't very pleased that they allowed that movie to be on the childrens floor of the library.          Censorship is a wonderful thing to have in libraries. Maturity level for some children is just not quite high enough for them to see/watch/listen/play certain materials. Not only should censorship be allowed, it should be enforced. I believe all libraries should have to have censorship in their library",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9772,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng is by herself, and letting herself know that she is going to try the test she failed again because she is starting to get used to her new home now that shes found something that reminds her of her life before she left.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15866,6,"Based on the excerpt from The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Paragraph @NUM1 states that ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame."" The architect on the building had to redesign the whole building so that it could accomodate these dirigibles. ""The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed"" (¶ @NUM2). This is a monumental obstacle because safety and other issues would prohibit the mast from fulfilling its duties. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself"" (¶ @NUM3). Heavy winds, pouring rains, and beating heat could all end in disaster for the urban area. These are the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building @ORGANIZATION1 in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21563,8," The sound of laughter could be one that breaks all barriers. Just a single giggle or quiet chuckle can expand someone's world. Laughter is a sign. It's something that tells someone new ideas, desires, or dreams are going to be created. Once one laughs, he or she getting along with someone -- they're forming a relationship. The first time @PERSON1 and I laughed together, there was no doubt in my mind it was the start of something new. Once I heard his cautious, unsure, delighted, and just @CAPS2-so-very-cute giggle, I was set and ready to be swept off my feet.  I was privileged to hear that laugh for three days of my summer in the year @DATE2. It was a @DATE1, and for the past four days I was bounding and skipping throughout mountains and hills in the never ending desert of @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1. That day, my cousin @CAPS1 and I were about to wander in to a familiar territory of ours: the mall. As a bonus, that cautious, unsure, delighted, and just @CAPS2-so-very-cute giggle was bounding and skipping along with us. When @PERSON1 walked over to us in the food court, he definitely succeeded in playing it cool. You could tell he actually made time to comb his hair and decide what he was going to wear just to look as spiffy as he was. ""@CAPS2, hey guys!"" he called out smoothly. Our eyes met immediately, and already my cheeks hurt. The next few minutes that we spent together were crucial. I needed to make a good impression on this guy. We stood in the line of @ORGANIZATION1, where he would retrieve his usual order of two @CAPS3 @CAPS4' @CAPS5 without lettuce, a large order of fries, and a large @CAPS6. Pepper. As for me, all I wanted was a small vanilla ice cream cone. Glancing over at the other register, I saw @PERSON1 turn his head my way in the corner of my eye. ""@CAPS7, do you have @MONEY1?"" he hesitantly asked me. He fiddled with his pockets a little, while also brushing his luscious blond locks from his face. I chuckled silently to myself, and his reaction was one that is to this day one of my favorite things about him -- his smile. Still chuckling, I said ""@CAPS8,"" and carefully handed him the @MONEY1. To this day, @PERSON1 is my very best friend. Eventually, I did get back the @MONEY1 he owed me. Ever since that one moment when we were standing in the waiting line at @ORGANIZATION1, the next several hours were jam-packed with laughter. I don't really remember a single thing he said that didn't at the very least make me grin as hard as I could. Literally, with several leaps and flips, on that day I made a new friend. And even then, I was completely unaware of the amazing journey there was to come with this boy. It was all because of that very first natural instinct @PERSON1 and I both had towards each other; to laugh. If I had never laughed so hard my stomach was aching, or never laughed so hard tears were running down my cheeks, there is just no way we would have had the connection that we did. His unsure, delighted, and just @CAPS2-so-very-cute giggle never gets old. Laughter is one of the main keys in our friendship. One of us has to let out a little cackle every once in a while. Also, @PERSON1 is still in @LOCATION2. I'm not. As badly as we both wish we could be, we're not in the same place. We need to be able to thrive and grow in separate places. So, with that, if someone once said, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" then they were absolutely correct. When @PERSON1 and I laugh together, it doesn't feel like we're fifteen hundred miles apart. So this laughter, this just @CAPS2-so-very-cute giggle, is an element and part of my life that I am indescribably grateful for. This laughter formed one of the greatest relationships in my short fifteen years of life, and I sincerely hope it will form many more wonderful memories in the years to come.",21,25,,46,,,,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18399,7,"“@CAPS1 hour and thirty minutes, are you kidding!” I said as my dad and I got into the line for the ride the “maverick” at @CAPS2 point. “That’s what the sign say’s, but it could take longer,” my dad replied. I said in a disappointed tone “I gusse we can wait,” but in my head I reminded myself you have zero, zipo, none no patience! Why did I say yeah. Right when my thoughts were done the line moved up a little. That was quick I thought. During that time to the time the line moved again I had occupied myself by watching people on the @CAPS3 and other rides go by. The line moved up again. Watching people didn’t work this time, so I was thinking of how much fun the maverick would be to ride, and other rides I wanted to go on next. Those thoughts lasted half way in the line. My patience was running out. I started thinking about how close school was, how much I wanted to go back, how I didn’t want to go back, what I would miss, and was looking forward to. We were almost there, but I was losing patience every seconde. I started to tap my fingers on the side of my leg. I thought nothing and just tapped my fingers and move up. We were finally at the front, and I didn’t complain once! I got into a seat, and the ride started. At the end I was really worth it I thought. Now it was time to go on more rides and not complain. That was a time I was patient",10,12,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10252,4,She said that because she was more intrested in flowers tha a test.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7257,3,The features of the setting effect the cyclist because the roads are bumpy. The other things that is effecting the cyclist is the water on the roads. There are a lot of curved roads which always slows down his speed.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4680,2,"Censorship in Libraries     Have you ever came across something in the library that makes you say, ' @CAPS1! That's inappropriate!' If so, I am sure your not alone. Just the other day I was in the library. There were posters up all around featuring a new movie now avalible for rental. I remembered seeing ads for this particular movie on television that looked rather repulsive. How could they allow this kind of thing on display like this? How does this affect the minds of our country's youth?     My thought on this topic is clear, although I am sure I'd recieve some opposition from others, considering everyone has their own opinions on this matter. I do realize the library has age limits on rentals, but what about all these posters everywhere? You don't necessarily have to rent the material to be corrupted by it. I believe there should be a separate section for this kind of material.     Another example of library rentals that can be harmful to developing minds are @CAPS2. New music sometimes contains lewd or inappropriate lyrics that have no place in the library. Even the covers of some @CAPS2 should be removed for the good of the public. It's interesting how these things just slide by the library. I once saw a young by renting a @CAPS4 that had the words 'parental advisory' right on the cover! No one stopped him.     Books are the same way. Disturbing covers and titles are littered throughout the library. No one even cares to screen these books before they hit the shelves.     So, when do you think someone's going to do something about censorship in libraries? It is hard to say, but I strongly believe it's up to protesters like us to stop this. I hope you'll join me in this epic battle for censorship, to keep our youth safe",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
342,1,"Dear editor: More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that that benefits society. As editor of the newspaper, you have the power to inform people about situations. In my opinion computers are desperately in need because of the following: the computers give people the ability to learn about faraway places, people, and weather, they allow people to talk online with others, and many jobs use computers. Do you want a more economically advanced state? First of all the computer gives people the ability to learn about far away places, people, and the weather. I have an uncle named @PERSON1, that has @NUM1 little girls. Every day in the morning before school @PERSON1 checks on the weather, on his computer to make sure it is safe to go school. However, one day forgot to check the weather on his computer and took his kids to school. Little did he know the roads were extremely icey. Sadly @PERSON1 and his daughters got in a car accident and two of girls broke a few bones. As you can see, the weather the computer world have saved him a trip to the emergency room. Next, the computer allows you to talk online with other people. Dr. @DR1 from @CAPS1 states says that, ""chating online with others (@CAPS2) is the best way to stay in touch with others from your old school, camp and many other places."" I highly agree because adults can stay in touch with freinds from middle school. Also @PERCENT1 of students say that they usually go online to study or get the pages for homework. I believe that chating online to study for tests is a fantastic idea because it will help the students to get better grades. Some parents say that that is a way to study and a waste of time. However teachers say that ever since @CAPS2 was invented the students grades were skyrocketing. Finally most jobs today use computers. For example my dad works for @ORGANIZATION1 and the computer helps him communicate with clients all over the world. Also the chat can translate the language, thus it makes it much easier than talking on the phone. Also the teachers use computers to put grades from students in. This makes the teachers job much easier because it averages all of the grades. The computer revolutionise the jobs of people. In conclusion the computer has a positive effect on people because it gives people the ability to learn about faraway places, people, and weather, allows people to talk online with other people, and many jobs use computers. I urge you to support me by writing a positive article on computer and how the help the society. Please take my idea into consideration.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1532,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, In many ways computers have been very useful to the human rare. They can been used to look up information, talk to family and friends music etc. Don't you think people are wasting more time on the computer instead of getting exercise. It's clear that computers can do just about anything want than to do. But why spend your time on the computer when you can spend time with your family. Playing sports, or getting some fresh air. I think computers have a positive effect on people and negative effect one of the positive effects is being able to talk to your friends. i know sometimes we are not able to see them as much in school. In my opinion I think it is a great way so you can catch up on funny times that you can and friends shared. Now here comes the negative effect. Mang kids get bulled and picked by other kids over the internet. This can cause other kids to have a low self esteem, and cause dangerous events in the future. When it comes to computer they have saved many people life. Some of these ways are finding cures to harmful deases. Computers have information when serious weather storms are coming and prepare us for the weather. Wouldn't you agree that computers have played a huge role in our lifes. Sometimes we she take a break from them and enjoy nature. So have fun with technology and don't forget to stay active too.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6607,3,In the essay “Rough Road Ahead” the author goes through many seneries. All of the places that the author goes to make him even more determined because he wants to find water and he just wants to get to Yosemite. The determination pushes him to keep going further and further. And then the determination finally pays off after he goes around a turn because he then see’s a place where he can get something to drink and a place to cool down.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16415,6,"Al Smith and his group of architects encountered many problems when they attempted to build a mooring mast atop the Empire State Building in order to dock dirigibles. Before they began building, the architects realized that they could not land a dirigible on the buildings flat roof. They had to make over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications to the framework before they could think of docking dirigibles there. After they finished building the conical top of the Empire State Building, the team working on the project realized that dirigibles could never be docked at the Empire State Building for several reasons. First, landing dirigibles was dangerous to the people of the city. Dirigibles contained hydrogen, which is highly flammable, and if there was an accident like the Hindenburg in New York City, the damage would be devastating. Nature also prevented dirigibles from docking at the Empire State Building; air currents were too powerful, and if the ship did land, it would swivel around the spire of the building. It was possible to prevent this by putting lead weights into the back of the dirigible, but this was also unsafe for the people that lived underneath. The last obstacle the architects faced was an existing law that prevented airships from flying too low over urban areas. Although the architects had a great idea, they never realized why it would not work until after building.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9251,4,"Winter Hibiscus by @CAPS1 Ho explores one's quest for acceptance and adaptation to changes in life. Saeng is  the young in the story who is dealing with her recent move to america from her homeland in asia. after failing a test, Saeng spends an dosene amount of money on a flower. When she consoltes with her mother, Saeng silently vows something to herself. Saeng vows ""when they come back in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"". @CAPS1 Ho chose to end the story this way because the story represents the guest for adaptation. Single-handedly, Saeng was able to say a vow to herself that showed she had accepted her new foreign home of america, even though she will always remember her homeland.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1510,1,"I personally believe that computersdo benefit society in a lot of ways. It can give you all the information you need with just a click of a button, entertainment is easy to find by searching the internet, and most importantly, it improves communication between people. One way computers benefit society is, by making it easier for everyone to get information about something. This is needed, especially in school. It can help kids get their information about the person they are writing about in their report.Getting information easily on the internet can also help people in other ways. What if someone needed to get the hospital's phone number in case of an emergency? He can use the computer to help him find that phone number. Another way computers benefit society is by allowing us to get any form of entertainment easily. This is what majority of the people in our society rely on. Alot of people use the computer to play games, listen to music, and watch online videos. If someone was bored right now, he or she could use the computer to play fun games. What if that person thought it was a little quiet in his or her room? He or she could then use the computer to listen to music. Without computers we would probably be really bored for the rest of our lives. Finally, and most importantly, computers help improve communication between people. This is probably what everyone uses the computer for. Now you can send electronic mail to your friends in just seconds, post and view pictures of your family or relatives and you can even use an instant messanger to write to your friend and get messages from your friend in the fastest speed possible! Without computers, communication between others would be very hard. As you can see, computers can give you information easily, entertainment is not hard to find, and it can even improve communication between people around our society and the world.! Computers are very helpful to us and improves everything about the way we live.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15765,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to let the dirigibles dock there. One obstacle the builders faced was the ""lack of a suitable landing area."" (paragraph six) A second obstacle is the amount of stress a dirigible would put onto the building. As the author states in paragraph nine, ""the stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation."" The author also states that in order for the invention to work out, the Empire State building's steel frame would have to have more strength to it and it would have to be modified to accommodate the new idea. The greatest obsticle faced was due to the nature of where the building was located. Because of the location, the winds were so strong and the wind shifted constantly. The last obsticle the builders faced was ""a law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" By the late nineteen thirtie's, the idea landing dirigibles on the Empire State Building disappeared. Instead, the idea of air transportation was given to airplanes.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3319,2,"Censorships in the libraris  would be liked cutting the worlds air supply. It would be taking away from a readers imagintion. stoping readers from being able to express their mind.      My veiw on censorship in the libraries would not be needed. Libraries around the world do good jobs keeping certain books in the apperpate ages levels. By removing certain materials out of libraries would cause reader attention to why their being removed. Then readers would demanded that we leave their books alone. Then fight for more books like those and then they would need censorships in libraries.      Books were made to keeping people wondering, learning, and excited. By cutting away different materials would be stopping people from enjoying the world of minds. More you take books away the more the population on watching television gets higher. Then there would be no more author and more actors and actress. People minds would not be wondering, learning or being kept excited.      I remember when i was a little girl i went to the library. I was in the library looking for a book. I wet to the big kids side as i called it and tried to check the book out. The library lady told me i was to young and showed me to my age level books and took the book back. Then i was able to check a book out.      So all i am sating is that censorships are not needed in libraries. That would be tking away from a librarains job. So dont take away readrs imagintion",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7626,3,"The cyclist is faced with many challenges on his journey to Yosemite, one of which is travelling through the California deserts. This was quite a challenge because a desert is very hot and dry, plus the author was riding his bike, making  himself more thirsty and hot. He also encountered a big snake that appeared to be a diamondback which he avoided even though it almost covered the road. The author also had to deal with rough terrain when he rode his bike through the hills. The biker met the challenges and progressed through them with bravery.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4208,2,"One @MONTH1 subject the censorship of library content in certain places and times, whether fictional or not, to his or her own opinion.  I personally disagree with the concept.  The facts point out that society fears the dystopia predicted by publications exploring the outcome of similar campaigns and has instated systems designed to prevent such occurrences.  Certain examples stand in play to explicate my opinion.       Society, at least in my native @LOCATION1 and surely abroad in other democratic countries, dislikes enforced censorship for a few reasons.  First, many countries have a @CAPS1 of @CAPS2 and priviledges upheld in the face of the law.  Our founding fathers wrote out one of the documents establishing this trend on the prompting of the general public.  The first ten ammendments to our fine constitution, bundled as the @CAPS1 of @CAPS2, resulted.       Some of the included statements ensure the freedom to speak as it publicly pleases us as citizens and the freedom to write, individually and collectively without boundaries.  The removal of these principles so ingrained in our nation's conscience would cause a general uproar.  We as a people instituted our government to preserve our freedoms, and we could prepare ourselves to replace it as implied in the @CAPS3 of @CAPS4 if so required of us to continue doing just that.       Secondly, publications such as the ones mentioned for banning rebuke the enforcement of opinion for its effects on society.  I can mention three books portraying this dystopic outlook on censorship.  '@CAPS5 @NUM1,' required by state standards for one possible choice of reading assigned to us by my teacher, describes book burning and utmost uniformity between citizens.  '@DATE1,' by @PERSON2, I know describes a dystopia in which all citizens completely submit their will to and omnipotent '@CAPS6 @CAPS7,' who utilizes omnicient surveillanceeven though I have not read the composition myself.  '@CAPS8 @CAPS7,' a recent novel by @PERSON1 whose title employs a pun on the name of @DATE1's prime antagonist, weaves the exciting tale of an older teenager who tries to beat the system of surveillance from under the radar.  All, however, betray a sense of fear in their content, and that fear has transferred directly into local civilization.       In reviewing the aspects of censorship portrayed in its effects, the system itself reveals that the even the intended creation of a utopia and compliance through censorship @MONTH1 result in decline and misery throughout the area within which government or civil officials practice the method.  In any case, a more effective solution must exist today.  To prove the point, let me introduce some content advisory systems currently in place.       Libraries divide themselves into sections for the various age groups, and therefore create an inherent barrier between differing groups of content deemed appropriate only in the face of maturity.  The film and television industries rely on ratings displayed at various times during video to provide the same sort of psychological fence dividing content into pieces.  Even the video game industry, into which I plan to inject myself upon exiting college, has a system in place to separate existing media into tiered subcategories designed in a similar way to film ratings.  Different regions utilize different systems, but that of  the @ORGANIZATION3, or the @ORGANIZATION1 for the @ORGANIZATION2, compares relatively well in ranking video games to the rest of the globe.       As explained, censorship already exists in a form accptable to all.  Nobody forces anybody to comply to the recommendations, but hopefully everyone does so on their honor.  Capable parents most definely follow the guidelines which have cropped up over the years.  Only if these methods of moderation were enforced would everyone be upset.  It's up to everyone to prevent a situation like unto the worst-case scenario and useresponsibly the systems available for this purpose",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1717,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 name is @PERSON1 and I want to argue about the issue of computer use in @LOCATION1, @CAPS3, I'll tell you about the benefits of owning a computer. Then, I'll talk about the whole computer network. Finally, I'll talk about the advances in technology due to the computer. I think the use of computers in our town are very good for society. There are the major benefits of using a computer. @CAPS3 is the fact you can use microsoft to write up a paper. Sixth grader @PERSON6 says, ""I would rather type than write a paper. Another reason to use a computer is a for research."" @CAPS4 many articles and facts are online about anything you need,"" says @PERSON4. The final benefit of a computer is the fact you can know about world news in a flash. ""I would've never known about the earthquake in @LOCATION3 without seeing the article on @CAPS2 homepage,"" says @PERSON5. Those are just some of the major benefits that the kids do on their computer. Now lets talk about something. That is said to be bad but really isnt; social networking. Stuff like @CAPS5 use a texting form on a computer which helps us connect without making a huge phone bill: with instant messanger I can talk to @CAPS2 girlfriends,"" says @PERSON2. Also, there is facebook which can help us connect on a global stage. ""I can talk with @CAPS2 cousin in @LOCATION2,"" says @CAPS6. Those are the major social networking tools we use to talk to people around the world. One thing that is important about the computer is the advances in technology caused by it. @CAPS3, we have the laptop which is a portable computer we can take anywhere. ""I can use @CAPS2 computer anywhere I like,"" says @PERSON7. Also, the memory card which allows us to save data on a computer and take it to school or work. Eigth grader @CAPS7 says, ""I can take work I didn't finish in school home with the stick."" The final major advance is the use of the printer,"" I use @CAPS2 printer to print of papers to bring to school,"" @PERSON3 said. Those are some of the major advances caused by the computer. That's why I think using the computer is good for us. There is many benefits to owning a computer. We talk to people world-wide when ever we want to. The computer has even been the sole purpose for many other ground breaking improvements in technology. @CAPS4 please help defend us kids in this case about computer use.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6473,3,"There are many features in the setting that affect the cycleist, one of which is that he is in the middle of California riding his bike in the sun with a limited ammount of water. It affects the cyclist because he almost collapses from heatstroke and lack of water. That is how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16410,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders had to face many obstacles while constructing the Empire State building to be able to allow drigibles to dock there. The builders had to face many obstacles such as laws @CAPS1 Changes and the building @CAPS2, that was not thought about while the idea was accumulating. After creating the plan to add a mast on the top of the empire State building a docking for Dirigibles, the new airships they finally decided to look at the defaults of the already developed plan. While the mask was being designed architects realized that you ""could not simply drop a moorning mast on top of the Empire States building's flat roof."" ""A thousand-foot drigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame"". When the builders were constructing their plan they didnt consider the fact that the load of the dirigibles would add stress to the entire building. ""The greatest obstacle to a successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" The builders realize that the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents and since the law was against airships flying too low over urban areas the dirigibles idea wouldnt be as easy to fulfill with all of the obstacles to over come. The obstacles the builders had to face When attempting to dock dirigibles on the empire state building were safety laws, weather and the building @CAPS2.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18107,7,"One thing I am not very at ient with is the meap. The reason I am not patient with the meap because it is very boring you can not talk and it is dull. I hate the meap it is very difficult, you don’t see tenn see or @CAPS1 doing the meap. The meap expect you to do to much work the meap is one of the reason I dislike michgan. The meap asking you questions and words you never saw or herd before. In my opinion @CAPS2 we are going to do meap I wou ld prefer them to ask question and words that we know. Another thing I dont like about it is that they grade our writing on opinion they grade of what they think of it. To mi the meap is stupid @CAPS2 I had a choice I would chose not to do it. Since the meap is important I do it for my grade. These are the reason why I am very inpatient with the meap.",8,5,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3137,2,"Some books in libraries offend others. So should they be removed? That is the point im going to get across today. Keeping people under self-control is top priorities for the public. So why do they keep releasing and publishing books if it offends certain groups?     Graphic and gorey books are books usually that disgust people but should all contain a warning symbol on it for people with weak stomachs and those who just can't handle it. So by that means, I'm fine with it. People need to accept that the world is not all sunshine and rainbows and that gruesome stuff is out there. This is my take on the whole situation. So people, if you can't take the heat, stay out of the kitchen.     However offense material to races, religions, and other personal aquisitions, is something of different concerns. This can certainly inflame groups, and even start protest or boycotting it. Authors in some cases need to review their materialand make sure it won't cause any disruption. Inflaming the public is not what you want young authors. This can not only make the public upset, but can possibly lead to the author getting fired.      False statement or inaccurate statements in books can lead to public curiosity and even conspiracy. Not only will it cause a stir up in the press, but just like the race/religion thing, it can cause the author to be fired.  This is not what the author wants. So making sure the work is true and not hipotheticle is a good step. These are great steps to achieving a positive step to public influence.     So inconclusion, authors have lots on their hands. All the way from race issues, religion, fale statements, and so on. These are some of the things authors want to avoid. Making the public recommend the book, and it having positive outcome on the press is the best an author can ask for",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15471,6,"Although the builders tried hard to make their dream become a reality, there were a few obstacles that prevented that. The main obstacles builders faced were weather, the law, and safety concerns.The weather at the top of the building was very windy, and strong winds would cause major issues for the dirigibles landing. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Another problem they faced was that there was a law effect preventing aircraft from flying too low over urban areas. Since New York is an urban area, no dirigibles would even be allowed to fly anywhere near the Empire State Building. The other main obstacle was a concern for safety. Hydrogen, which is extremely flammable, was used in many foreign dirigibles. It could cause a catastrophe if one ever exploded over New York, and there had already been an accident where ""the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937...""These obstacles were not just ones that the builders could ignore, and they ultimately prevented the intended use altogether.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18246,7,"I @DATE1, my family took a trip to @ORGANIZATION1. After @CAPS3 got to the airport @CAPS3 had to wait a long time. So  there @CAPS3 are on the airport, about to leave to go to @LOCATION1 when are flight is delayed because a early morning thunderstorm rolled in. @CAPS6 took forever, every minute seemed like an hour, @CAPS1 after  half an hour I asked for some money to get some breakfast but of course my mom said, “@CAPS2.” I was about to lose @CAPS6 when this guy came over the speaker, “@CAPS3 will have to delay the flight to @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3 a little longer.” @CAPS4 when I rember that I have a @CAPS5 in my bag and I go to turn @CAPS6 on and @CAPS6’s dead. Then after an hour the storm stopped and @CAPS3 were able to board the plane. From that day I found out I’m not a pacient person.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4546,2,"Censorship is a matter of great contention today. Many authority figures have seemingly become obsessed with the notion that literature, video games, movies, and music are responsible for the perceived corruption of today's generation. Many believe in the idea of censorship because it will protect their children and allow them to remain innocent and morally upright. However, I believe censorship is a grand mistake on our part. Denying children access to certain literary works only keeps them ignorant, not innocent; so many books today are censored, and yet the information contained in them could have been vital to children who are seeking an understanding of the world they live in.     One of the most difficult questions about censorship is the matter of what should be censored and what should not. Books that are viewed as offensive or controversial are the usual targets, but viewing something as being offensive is just thata view. It changes from person to person because of varying cultures, religions, and moral codes. No one can agree on what will have a negative impact on children, making it impossible to establish a standard of what is best left off the shelf. The problem this creates is that many valuable books that should be permitted reading material are instead unavailable.     Censorship can protect a child from information they are better off not knowing, but it also robs them of a chance to gain vital knowledge. Children should be encouraged to read and to learn, not blocked from doing so. Yet if this is truly the case, why does the censorship debate still rage?     The argument continues because, in truth, there really are things that ought to be censored. Movies, music, and even books today can be very violent or sexual in nature, and these inappropriate subjects can have a negative impact on youths. Bloody video games and hateful song lyrics can encourage animosity towards others in children. But that cannot be the sole cause of such behavior; children will act right if they are taught how, not if they are hidden away from every instance of wrong. Censorship is greatly inferior to proper life lessons about morality, equality, peace, and respect.     Inevitably, censorship will remain a common practice. But try this: think of a book that changed your life for the better, and then imagine if you had been denied access to reading it. Do you want to let your children miss out on an experience that could very well mean the world to them?",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13411,5,"The mood that is @CAPS1 and that it is created by the author in the memoir is the feeling of being thankful. This is the mood @CAPS1 because it says ""Their rich culinary Skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" This @CAPS3 the mood is thankful because author is thankful for the culinary skills that is still with him. Another that @CAPS3 the mood thankful is when it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This @CAPS3 the mood thankful because @CAPS5 is thankful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. Another that @CAPS3 the mood as thankful is when it says: ""I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing that I could have ever done."" This @CAPS3 the mood as thankful because @CAPS5 is thankful for all they have done and @CAPS5 could never be more courageous than them. This is the mood of the memoir created by the author.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18090,7,The time I was patience was when I was @NUM1 years old when I was @NUM1 years old my mom said I had to go to the dentist @DATE2 it was @DATE1 so @DATE2 it was @DATE1 so @DATE2 my mom waked me up then I said yes I’m going to sleep she said wake up its time for you to go to the dentist I popped up in and started screaming she was like be quiet because other people in this house is tring to go to sleep I said ok mom she was like go grab you some clothes I like ok so when we had both put on some clothes I was just saying stuff I was like I’m going to the dentist to get some stickers I just keep saying that so when she pulled up in she parking bf I stopped in and said we here then she parked the car I opened the door in then she parked the car. I opened the door in then my mom signed us in then we sat down it was a lot of people there so when we sat down @NUM3 mins later they called us I was about to yell but then they came so the dentist lady took me to the room in told me to lift my head up for she can put the thing on the so the move doctor came in he was like we are about to clean your teeth. I was crying cause I thought it was gonna hurt so I was crying talking about its gonna hurt so they put the thing on my teeth they said set it don’t hurt then they was done @NUM4 mins later so the female lady dentist was like you pick @NUM5 tickers I was so happy because I finally got some stickers so when we left we got in the car on then I went to sleep. that was the day I was patience.,10,6,,16,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13217,5,"The author of the memoir created the mood very well. The mood in the memoir was very warm and happy. There were many ways the author created the mood. One way he created it was by saying that at that time, overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the United States. And then he said his neighborhood was made up of Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants and despite the different customs all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship.Another way the author created the mood was by telling us how caring his parents were. He does this when he tells us about how when ever someone was in need, they would let them stay at their house.'""The next way the author creates the mood is when he says my parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, knowing that they would do the same for us.Those are some ways the author created the mood in the story.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14925,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring @CAPS1"" by Marcia Amidon lusted theres alot of problems when trying to add a dock for dirigibles at the top. One problem or obstacle was the safety of the dirigible itself, ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly inflammable."" (@NUM1). Another obstacle was nature itself, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@NUM2). The last problem was the existing law aganist airships flying too low over cities or urban areas. ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area."" (@NUM3). These are three reasons why in the excerpt ""The mooring @CAPS1"" by marcia Amidon lusted that there were alot of problems when trying to add a dock for drigibles.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1130,1,"Dear Newspaper I disagree with the hole computer thing I think it's just a wast of money and it's a wast of time for kids. That will be the kids will get fat and kids will never want to go out side they will want to play video games, eat junk food. If you stay on the computer for to long, it can make your eyes week and it sometimes can give you canser and you can die from canser or you can get really sick and not die and you will hike @NUM1 sick year of pain. Mostly kids stay on the computer for mores playing stupid games and they will never go out side and they will stay in side for days and never go out side and play with there friends. When they get sick of there games they will want to try and hang out with there friends but they wont be able to they will be to fat and slow. My aunt died from useing a computer to much she had brain cancer and she died she lived for @NUM2 year with the cacer. I felt so bad for my cousin he had to watch his mother die all because she used a computer everyday cause that has her job. Therefor I state that computers should not be used for more than @NUM2 houre a day",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16279,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. one of the obstacles that had to be faced was dealing with the hydrogen from dirigibles outside of the united states. The hydrogen was very flamable and the would not be able to stand a fire in such a high populated area. Another obstacle was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were teathered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. The winds from nature would make it hard to control the dirigible so people were afraid of the dirigible crashing into the building. Those were some of the obstacles that were faced.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9683,4,"Minfong tto ended the story with aphrase dialogue because it was about the main topic of the story. Saeng was to buy a plant and bring it home, but when she did so, her mother did not approve. The narrative states ""You what?"" Her mother stared at her incredulously""(Ho ). When her mothesaid this, it showed that she was displeased. The narrative states, ""I-I failed the test""(Ho). Saeng was not proud to displease her parents in any way. By saying, ""When hey come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return  and this hibiscus is budding, then i will take that test again""(Ho), the author is just showing Saeng's love and want to grow foe her parents; it shows maturity. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12004,5,"The mood in this memoir is happy and joyful. This child that is telling the story is telling about the happy things in their life. They tell about how they were born into a simple house. The heart of their home is the kitchen because they all love to cook. The family invites many people over to their home to have dinner. This child also talks about how greatful they are for their parents, and how the thanked them repeatedly. They will never forget how their parents turened their simple house into a home. So by these examples you can see that the mood of the memoir is happy and joyful.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9453,4,"The author concludes with this sentence for emphasis. It takes Saeng’s mind off of the flower and she focuses on her test. By waiting until next spring to take the test it gives her something to look forward to. This statement also shows that you should never give up on anything that you do. The author ends on a good note explaining this, The last paragraph is also a break from the rest of the story and from what Saeng‘s was just doing. It is Saeng’s last and final thoughts.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12481,5,"@PERSON1 remembers his child hood fondly in his memoir about his home in New Jersey. He creates a setting that many people can relate to because of the general feel of family and heritage. The tone in the memoir is nostalgic as he recalls the hard work of his parents, the people who he considers family, the food and the music. Rodriguez recounts his childhood as many people would, telling the readers how grateful he is to his parents and how warm and welcoming his home seemed. Even in the time during segregation in the US, numerous people from different cultures formed the community of Rodriguez's home. This place that Rodriguez describes his welcoming, and that is exactly the mood of the memoir, welcoming. The author recreates his welcoming, warm, musical home for the reader to visit and enjoy. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9676,4,He author concludes this paragraph in this story because It sounds good and to show the people he is writing it to that no matter what happend s to you in life you should Just keep on doing what you think is best for you. Just like the flower she keeps coming back for more after going through all that’s tuff. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
147,1,"Hour after hour of gaming online and posting blogs on social networking sights is all one sees. Unaware at there surroundings, many people zone to their computer screens and only break @CAPS4 absolutely necessary. That is not what the world should become but that is what is society is creating. Computers do not create positive benefits to society. Because of all the time spent on the computer, people's bodies are taking the negative effects. There is also less and less face-to-face interactions with family and friends. Another huge issue is cyber bulling. These are all problems that should be addressed. With all the time spend on a computer in a stuffy, dark room, how will our bodies be maintained properly? Exercise is a key ingriedient to healthy living. It is like trying to make bread without flour, without that necessity the bread will not rise its full potential. It is the same with the health and functions at our bodies. Exercise must be took part in to burn fat and calories, but it is also needed to build and maintain muscles. In fact, muscles start it is recommended to get in at least one hour of exercise of outside play a days. Not many succeed with this goal, which brings up another negative effect to the body. @CAPS2 @CAPS1 helps to maintain strong bones. To get the recommended dose of @CAPS2 @CAPS1 a day you only need to absorb @NUM1 minutes of sunlight a day. It doesn't seem like a lot but @PERCENT1 of our population is not outside to recieve it. Instead, they are inside on their computers. Parties, lunch breaks, or even a family dinner are great times to socialize. But, what if one day you decided you were going to skip your lunch break with friends and instead spend time posting a daily blog. This is social time lost. If this habit continues you might soon see yourself drifting away from your friends because you don't make the time to spend lunch break with them. Even @CAPS4 a child interactions @CAPS4 chatting with friends on @CAPS5 or @CAPS6, anything could be said. Children wont learn at a young age how to think on there fact language. This will effect their later years @CAPS4 interviewing for things such as colleges or even jobs. Social skills are the difference between success and failure. Spending life on a computer is equivalent to being a caterpillar in their while at least attempting to be an extreme will turn you @CAPS7 and @CAPS7 are all created with the ominous cyberbulling. One simple way to prevent this is spending less time in the computer. The effects of cyber bulling can be brutal. A recent study showed that @PERCENT2 of kids would rather be bullied in face then over the internet. The reason being a of cruelty is displayed through cyberbulling over the internet because it takes much less courage to type something up then it for a bully to say something to them victims face. Such cyberbulling has even led to suicides. In fact, a girl in committed suicide due to cyber bulling just @NUM2 weeks ago. If you don't have In conclusion, computers produce more negative effect on society than good. A lack of exercise and proper body maintenance results. Reduced social interacting and skills also result. And maybe most importantly cyberbulling which takes lives occurs. In prevent society from turning into a social waste and felled with the glow of computer screens, lets all turn the monitor and get outside with nature and all its benefits.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21290,8," Laughter is a Element of @CAPS1  Laughter is a huge element of @CAPS1, without laughter @CAPS1 wouldn't be what it is today. Laughing is actually a element of why I am in my relationship with my boyfriend as of right now. I also believe ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people"" Someone once said. Laughter also breaks the ice with people either when their mad, sad, or just meeting the person. Also laughter can bring two people very close together. Here is a true story about how laughter is a element of @CAPS1. One day while I was with my best friend @PERSON1, we met up with her cousin @CAPS2 friend's @PERSON2 and @PERSON3. @PERSON2 and I started talking and hanging out a lot that night. I'm a very shy person but he kept making me laugh. This is no love story but he making me laugh broke the wall I had put up because I was shy and very uncomfortable. The more we laughed together the more closer i felt to him and comfortable I was around him. Eventually we started dating. Too this day we are still together and we have a very strong relationship because of laughter, if it wasn't for the laughter @PERSON2 and I would not be as close as we are now. ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" I believe that because laughter gives you that feeling of security, like the sense that it is okay to be your self around strangers. Laughing makes you feel warm and invited to have fun. Makes you feel like at this moment your bonding with this person. It doesn't make you feel uncomfortable when using laughter for the right reason, for example breaking the ice with someone or just meeting someone that can bring them closer. Breaking the ice with laughter. Meeting someone for the first time can be very uncomfortable for some people making conversation and laughing could do that trick to make them feel not so shy and set back to talking. When I first meet people I am very shy until someone makes me laugh then I am very comfortable. Sometimes making people laugh when they are sad or mad could also bring you very close with someone. But laughter could always push you away from someone. When I was upset about me and my ex fiance breaking up for the first time after year and a half no one for a day or two could make me happy. My best friend @PERSON1 brought me out to the state fair, being on the rides and laughing with her, brought her and I closer also I was not mad anymore. She broke that anger and hurt inside of me just by laughing. A huge element of @CAPS1 is laughter, there is no doubt about that. Depending on the persons perspective laughing @MONTH1 not be a element of @CAPS1 to them but to me it is. With out the feeling of security when laughing with @PERSON2 we wouldn't be as close as we are now. With out laughter @PERSON1 and I wouldn't feel as warm and comfortable as we are together. ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" Someone once said. @CAPS1 would be a whole lot different without this element of laughter. ",17,20,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11973,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, the author creates a mood, that is overall cheerful, warm, and happy. He does this through his word choice. ""passed on to me their rich culinary skills, and a love of cookig that is still with me today."" (par @NUM1). He decribes his parents cooking skills as ""rich"" and he describes his feelings toward cooking as positive. Another example of the mood he creates is how he describes his relationship with other people. ""all of these culture came together in great solidarity and friendship."" (par @NUM2). From this quote, you can tell that he has a very close relationship with all the people. Another example is when he says, ""always filled the air with not just scent and music, but life and love."" (par. @NUM3). You can feel the warmth of the room with the adjectives he uses. This is how the author creates the mood in the story.",2,4,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1311,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3: @CAPS4 people are skeptic on whether or not computers benefit people. I strongly believe that computers do indeed benefit humanity for it allows people to talk online with loved ones and friends across the globe, and learn about those foreign places. Computers don't take away from lifes, but shows it through fascinating synthetics. Computers allow people of all ages to interact with others over the world-wide web. Sometimes it's better to meet with people in person, but that isn't always the case. What @CAPS5 you have relatives or friends in a different country? The internet is the best way to contact those people. Also, what @CAPS5 you are in a band or a group, and need to contact them while you are out of town? Social sites like facebook or myspace allow the group members to talk and discuss matters at the hotel or wherever he @MONTH1 be. In addition to both of these reasons, students can obtain missing work and email the teacher from his household. This allows the pupil to obtain his lesson and catch up on anything he or she has missed. The technological breakthrough of the @DATE1 known as computers allow interaction with other people as well as learn of distant lands. @CAPS4 people including myself, want some culture in their lives, and wander about this lively planet we call earth and find out whats out there, but can not acheive said goal. The computer saves us time and money to do these things. All we have to do is open a search bar, type in a word, and boom, we are looking at @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3, or even the fields of @LOCATION1. Any place you want is at your. In addition to this, @CAPS5 a new tourist attraction comes to be, whether it is an amusant park, a monument, or a historical find, the internet can show us this. We can see things we would be seeing @CAPS5 we were present at the place, but instead on a monitor in your home. The computer allows you to do @CAPS4 things without actually encountering their happenings. In conclusion, computers are helpful for they allow us to preform things we could not do under certain circumstances, like talking to people over the internet, or learning of foreign countries. Not everyone can do these things, but everyone who has a computer can.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3350,2,I don't think that they should be removed from the shelfs. Everyone has a right to read it at some point in time. To were no little kids can rent the book. If they are complaining about how it's volgar or sexual. Then you shouldn't take it away. Try something else such as an adult section. One person @MONTH1 love a book that has some violence in it and on the other hand you @MONTH1 have a person who is real religous and can't stand to see it.      There are very many view points of this topic. The parents who don't want their kids to be exposed to this type of life style. Some people don't really think about it being as bad as the next person. If it's a book you dislike on a book shelf and you don't like it put out in plain sight. Should you really be the one to make the decision on who takes it down?     Some people don't know what their kids like to read. If they have the final thought on what gets taken down it @MONTH1 affect the kids reading habbits. What if your kid wants to read a horror book and you choose not to let those kinds of books on the shelf any more. Then they don't want to read the books that are left up on the shelf. I'd rather read a book that interests me than a book that I dislike.     My point of view on this topic is simple. I don't think the parents should be in controle of what we read as long as it's appropriate. I think the decision should be left for the government to say which book should and shouldn't be taken away.,3,4,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6823,3,The setting affects the cyclist because the heat and no humanity makes him so crazy. If he was in a place like @LOCATION2. It would be just the heat because there are people every were in @LOCATION2 @LOCATION2. If he was in @LOCATION1 it would be the severe temperature drop and no humanity and he would probably die.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9103,4,"In the last paragraph of ""Winter Hibiscus"" by minfong Ho The author concludes by saying  ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"". I think the author concludes with this quote because it shows her determination to overcome this obstacle, For Saeng the hibiscus represents comfort and the ability to over come. Saeng is very strong and she believes off of that determination which comes from her past. The author concluded with that because it shows Saeng’s determination.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9099,4,When she is ready and good she is saying she will take the test again. When she is ready and good and it is nice and beautiful out then she will have the confidence to take the test again. The author was trying to tell us how she felt about letting her mom down.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1485,1,"Dear local newspaper, did you know that just about @PERCENT1 of the people in the @LOCATION1 have computers and use them daily. I am one of those people and I don't get how people ar saying that computers are destroying our country, yeah I know that we spend a little less time with family and friends but computers help as help monitor weather and natrual disasters like torndos and hurricans, they give us a chance to see far away places and learn more about the world and we can talk with other people. Computers are way important in our world because we can monitor natrual @CAPS1 such as tornados, hurricancs, and earthquakes without this technology over @PERCENT2 more people will die from these @CAPS1 without computers because the will less or no warning about the situation. Over @PERCENT3 of kids in the @CAPS2.S go to school and with computers the kids get a better chance to learn absent the world and society. Kids should know what is going on in the world, or you could be a adult just browsing the web loking for information. My point is tons of people all around the world computers to learn. My last reason is to teach kids to type and to have hand eye cordination when kids get older and when we get @CAPS3 they are gonna need to learn how to type. So odds are if you don't know how to type you won't get very far but there in the real world. To conclude my statement im gonna go over my three reasons why we need computers first to track natrual disasters. Second to leern about far away places, and our society. Third to teach childeren hand eye cordination and to to type so they can get @CAPS3. This is why the @CAPS2.S realy needs computers.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9107,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show that while this particular tale is over Saeng’s life will continue. The paragraph provides closure for the reader as well as explains that in time Saeng will take the test again, once she has further adapted to @LOCATION1 culture.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1467,1,"Almost everyone in the @LOCATION1 uses a computers at one point in their life. Computers are a way to teach hand eye coordination through programs, games and typing. The internet can be used for researching different far away cultures, as well as someone's own lifestyle. This compact well made piece of technology has been belaming more and more intricate. Realizing how much help computers have in everyday life, people will be the down fall or support for computer technology moving forward. One very basic but evident result from using a computer is hand-eye coordination. Since the time children are in grade school, they learn typing on a keyboard. Special programs help kids learn the necesary skill while enjoying the practice. When I was small, a mere fight years old, I remember typing. I was always excited when my mom and I went to barnes and noble to pick up a new typing program. I especially enjoyed ""type to learn"" and @CAPS1 typing lessons as well as teaching children to type is general, teaches hand-eye coordination in high school, college, and the job world. Young adults and adults are expected to type papers, resemes, and applications. In this day in age the technology era has begin and typing is a necessity. Another way to teach hand-eye coordination is through computer games. A simple challenge like solitaire, bejewled or car racing teach the skill and much more advanced games for example, world of war craft need perfect coordination can be through typing and games, both on the computer. Though some experts are conserned ""people are spending too much time on the computer and less time..enjoying nature,"" you are able to learn about geography, travel, and nature. One amazing on a computer is the world wide web. This consists of millions of websites, pages, search engines, and information arte you in an upcoming geography uses? Are you planning a trip the for you do you need to find a definition for the word ""cognitive""? of @CAPS1 pertain to you, a legitamite website house your and all you need to do is search. Instead of having to travel to learn about special wonders, for travel prices are expensive and you can simply, click and type to and amazing at your searching on a computer, you can learn about long ago cultures and rituals. Information you would find at museum @NUM1 years ago. @CAPS1 complex simple to use technological a world of pictures simple, art and history right at your fingertips.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16566,6,"Architects based in New York tried very hard to build a successful mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, to dock dirigibles for several hours for refueling or service purposes and to allow passengers on and off the blimp. While building, Architects faced some challenging obstacles that destroyed the chances of the mooring mast to open and become usable. A dirigible moored at the top of the Empire State Building only held by one cable tether would cause tension on the building's frame. The weight and wind pressure would need to be transferred to the buildings foundation. About over @MONEY1 of modifications would need to be made to the buildings framework. Another obstacle was the roof. ""When the building had been framed to the 85th floor, the roof had to be completed before the framing for the mooring mast could take place,"" wrote @PERSON1 in her article 'The Mooring Mast.' The greatest obstacle however was nature itself. Violent air currents caused the winds to change nonstop causeing the blimp to swivel around the mooring mast. The only solution would be to weigh down the back of the craft with lead weights, but the risk was to much. Last but not least there was a line New York against airships flying to low over urban areas. The law made it illegal for a blimp to even approach the Empire State building. As a result of not being able to use the mooring mast for dirigibles to station, the rooms set aside were turned into the world's highest soda fountain and a tea garden for tourist and sightseers. By the late 1930s dirigibles had become transportation of the past, and airplanes had made their way to the front of the crowd.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15854,6,"The excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2 describes the creation of The Mooring Mast, and its purpose to extending the height of the Empire State Building. Although during the 1930's the concern of the Mooring Mast serving as a docking area for drigibles, also known as today as blimps. After the 85th floor frame was built and the skeleton of the mast of steel and stainless steel glass windows, issues concerning the landing drigibles arose within the public.There were @NUM1 major reasons why the Mooring Mast of the Empire State Building was never really completed. One reason was because of safety. The excerpt explains how dirigibles from outside of U.S used hydrogen instead of helium. And, using hydrogen is extremely flammable. They used the example of the German diriglie Hindenburg being destroyed b/c it was on fire in @LOCATION1.Second reason was the problem of wind currents. Winds were extremely violent. Dirigibles would move and sway alot b/c of the strong winds. And the moving dirigibles being that they were at least @DATE2 ft long dangled high above urban areas which wasn't safe at all for people walking under it.Thirdly was the issue of it being against the law for airships to fly too low over urban areas was also a safety hazard for people. It would be illegal for dirigibles to be tied up on mooring mast above cities filled w/people risking that it might fall onto people.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4179,2,"In my opinion, I do believe we should not have overly offensive materials on the shelves. These materials @MONTH1 not be offensive to some people, but it can be to others. They can be against some peoples religion and way of life.     I have read some books outside of my school library that I think should not be found on a library shelf. Now they are putting those same books in libraries. These books have violence and inappropriate behavior in them. Are these books you want your children to be reading?      There are even movies that are like those books. Many shows are based of a book series, and that series @MONTH1 not be a good one. The series can contain violence that can influence kids and teenagers. The kids could see something they think is really neat on the @CAPS1 and then go out and try that. They do not understand that what they do @MONTH1 not be a good thing. They could get into a lot more trouble then they want to get in.     I know there are some materials on the shelves that many people say are offensive and really are not offensive at all. In my opinion, the worst ones should be put away and only adults should be able to get them. After that, the adults can choose whether or not their children should watch them.     There are some that would agree with my opinion and some that would not. What do you think? Do you want your children watching or reading something bad that could influence the rest of their lives in a bad way? Would you want them to grow up believing that what they see in movies and read in books is all good? Or do you want them to know what they should and should not do?",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19163,7,The doctor appointment. Oct @NUM1 @DATE1 me and my mom were getting ready to go to the doctors. Once we got their it was so crowded. I felt like we had been their for weeks days even @CAPS1 their were a lot of kids crying and playing. I was so exhausted I was still waiting for my turn to see the doctor @NUM2 mins later still not my turn I was trying my hard to be patient but it didn’t help at all with all the noise of the kids running around tell ???. I walked up to the regiester and that’s where I found out my appointment I want till @NUM3 oclock and it was only @NUM4.,7,7,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7269,3,"There is many things that could have made his bycicle ride much more enjoyable, one thing is if he wasn’t in the middle of no where and if he actually knew where he was. For example, “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” There, he had almost no water to get him through the day. For instance, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” @CAPS1, he did not know where he was going so it was harder for him. In conclusion these are some things that made his trip hard.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16342,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building were faced with some big obstacles. One obstacle was they had to make sure that the Dirigibles could dock safely. They had to be sure that the passengers could get off and on safely. Lastly they had to be sure the building would not collapse when they made the mooring mast. These examples shows that the builders were faced with many obstacles when building the Empire State Building.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12682,5,"In the storie ""Narciso Rodriguez"" I think the author was very greatful & happy at the moment. I think he was happy, because he was lathing about how Narciso was always in a good mood and how she always loved how to cook in the kitchen with everyone. Also how she still loved her ritual song she sings with her family.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15506,6,"The were many obstacle's the builder's of the Empire State Building had to face in attempt to allow the docking of dirigible's. There was no way architects could drop a mooring mast on top of the building's smooth roof. If a thousand foot dirigible overshadowed the top of the building with only one cable tether, stress the building's frame would be added instantly. Stress of the dirigible's load and wind pressure would need to be transmitted all the way down to the building's foundation. Another obstacle for the builder's was that the building's steel frame would have to be strengthened to accommodate with this new design. The greatest obstacle in launching this new design was nature. Architects would needed to consider the constant shifting of winds due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible was tied to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would be unsturdy. The fact that this design would be dangling above the pedestrians on the street, would worry the architects concern of the population. Architects also had to deal with the law against airships traveling too low above urban areas. This law would state the forbidden right of one to tether a large ship to a bulding, or even approach the area. Although there were attempts of dirigible's to reach a bulding, the entire idea was dropped, much to the architects despite.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21065,8," When we look back on the past, everything seems to have had a deeper meaning. When we grow older, however, we see the world with new eyes. We see the truth, harsh, stripped of the glossy film that hid it. Laughter helps us see the joy once again, to remember it is there. When is the last time you got lost in laughter? Studies have shown that laughter releases feel-good chemicals in the body. It can add years to a life because, believe it or not, our bodies like to be happy. Laughter is a highly addictive and contagious drug and the best part is that it is free, legal and healthy! Laughter makes us feel better in times of need and brings us closer together. Through whatever is happening in our lives, laughter is one of the only things that can distract us from the pain and stress. As life gets more and more complicated as we grow older, we find that laughter is harder to come by, but no less needed. I remember a time when I was excited every day to go to school. I loved to arrive at the familiar classroom and see everyone who made my days brighter. We would tell jokes and reminisce of fond memories and in the process would make brand new ones for the future. Life was simpler, the worst of our worries surrounded the desperation to be older, to shed our youth and step out of the powerless shells we were imprisoned in. Of only we knew what that really meant. Smiles were not hard to come by and we all enjoyed the simplicity that our lives had to offer. Through all the memories and laughter, I began to realize that love existed aside from movies and family, the love that you find for a friend that you treasure. Laughter was the key variable, revealed in understanding my relationships. When you learn how to fall deeply in love as a kid, that patience and trust can get you through ever day of the rest of your life. All we need to do is to is remember not to forget. The simplicity of childhood is what makes it so precious. Unfortunately as we all grown older, the future looms over our heads, casting a shadow over the things we cherish. There is a predetermined way we are supposed to live our lives that for some reason, erases the plausibility of our true aspirations. Laughter gives way to sighs and tears while dimples are forgotten and replaced with furrowed brows. Everything in adulthood orbits around the office and is held to a nine to five obligation. Businessmen walk past looking like identical mindless penguins. Where did all the fun go? It seems that the pleasure is evaporated with every passing day. We no longer get to know our colleagues around a circle of carpet squares. Instead we are confined to our felt paddock and swivel chair. All the stress makes us forget to laugh, but we simply can't forget. Laughter is the amnesia that makes the cubicle into a fort and the chair into a rocket ship that will take us from our fort to follow our dreams.  So when is the last time you got lost in laughter? Make it now. Take the pen and turn it into a quill. Step out of your cubicle and find the world that you enjoy. Laugh every day because life is too short to forget.",25,22,,47,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21081,8,"@CAPS1 up kids my mother said as she was scrambling to get her stuff packed and ready.I knew exactly what i did wrong, I didn't set my alarm on my phone for six am. I set it for six pm and now we are late. Thinking to my self I hurried to get my clothes packed for the week. six pairs of pants, six pairs of shirts, six pairs of underwear, and six pairs of socks. I put my bag next to the front door realizing now that it was next to my other bag I had already packed the day before. My sisters were worse, as girls they take for ever putting on there makeup and and straightening their hair.Finally everyone is packed, but it was now seven am and we were supposed to be to @LOCATION2 by now and were still sitting here at our house. As my sisters are now done and we are in the car we can finally get off to @LOCATION3. We as a family have been planning @CAPS2 for a month and now it's @DATE2! I was really exited to go. By @CAPS2 point I had butterfly's in my stomach.We lived in @LOCATION1, we were only half way through @LOCATION2 with eight out of ten hours left to get to my mom's cousins house. I feel asleep for the first two hours of the ride and I can no longer sleep. I was stuck in the back seat with nothing to do. so I started to sing the never ending song. @CAPS2 is the song that never ends, and it goes on and on my friends."" @CAPS3 my sister in the front seat yelled at me very harshly to shut up. I didn't stop and she yet again yelled at me to stop singing. For a third time I annoyed my sister and she responded with a punch on my arm. For some reason I started to laugh. It didn't hurt and I thought it was funny that she hit me for just singing a silly song.I had a really strange laugh so my little sister started to laugh because I was laughing, then my older sister quite harshly screamed at me and my younger sister to be quite. My older sister yet again punched me trying to get me to stop laughing. By now I was laughing so hard I could hardly breath and my face was turning into a shade of purple. It really was funny when my mom couldn't hold it back any longer and started cracking up and laughing with me and my younger sister. My mom wears dentures, and she was laughing so hard they almost fell out of her mouth while she was driving, we started laughing harder. My stomach felt like it was going to explode from all the laughter.My older sister now turning a dark shade of blue from yelling at us so hard to get us to shut up. She was throwing her arms into the air and screaming one last time to shut up and threw herself back into her seat with a very nasty look of disgust on her face.over the next minute we all stopped laughing and was quiet for the next hour @CAPS3 we stopped and ate. We enjoyed our lunch and got on the road because we still had a long trip on our hands.I very soon felt tired and fell asleep in the most awkward of positions you could ever find in a car. I had my head against the door, my arm over the front passenger seat, one of my legs was on the seat and the other in between the driver and passenger seats.I thought I was pretty lucky sleeping most of the way for we only now had about a half hour till we got to my mom's cousins house. We were in the middle west of @LOCATION3 and the mountains were so beautiful. They were full of color and life with gigantic trees swinging in the wind, squirrels moving about from tree to tree, planting nuts in the ground. It was the farthest I have ever been away from where I lived in @LOCATION1. I was glad it was with my family.My stay in @LOCATION3 was a blur. I can hardly remember most of what happened there. I played with a neighbor kid around the same age as me playing video games and eating unhealthy junk food. My mom was the happiest of us all to get out of @LOCATION1 for a weekend. She had not seen her cousin in about three years and was very happy to see her.It was now @DATE1 was time to get back to our normal lives, so we packed up our stuff and were headed back to our home. I was doing amazing at not talking and making my sister mad for the first minute or so. @CAPS3 I started to sing the never ending song again. I have never laughed so hard in my life. """,20,16,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19520,7,"A time when I had to be patient was when I needed help with my schoolwork. My dad is very smart so whenever I needed help, I usually ask him for help. Well I get out of school at @TIME1 my dad gets at @TIME2So,if  I wanted his  help , I would have to wait myself  but I didn’t understand it. Even with homework that needed help on back in my backpack until my dad got home I wished the homework that didn’t need help on. After my homework   that which I did all my @CAPS1, then it was time to eat, as I ate my dinner. By that time I was done waiting my dad me, more and really to help we as my dinner. It was last to go to wait over my dad to help understand it so much more.",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6115,3,How the features of the setting affect the cyclist by taking and not had the right setting. The features are just not right and and they could be changed around a little bit and still have about the same meaning of the essay. So I think they should change it around.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1738,1,"Dear readers, People around the world are starting to use computers now more, often, but theirs also people that dont agree that it benefits society, @CAPS1 not one of those people. I agree that this benefits society. One reason why I agree is because sometimes theirs teens and even adults that can chat online with their friends if they cant contact them in any other way. Another reason is because in all school teacher give their students project to do over vacation or weekends, for the projects they can look for information in the computer. The last reason is because computers can give ability to learn more about things they didnt know before. In my opinion I agree with computers benefiting society. Teens, kids and even adults would like to talk with their friends so they can get on the computer and chat with them if theirs no other way to contact them, @CAPS2 easy. You only have to @NUM1) get in the computer, @NUM2) get into a site were you know your friend might be @NUM3) log in or register in if you never been into that site @NUM4) last but not least look @NUM4 your friend to chat will teachers always give their students work for example like projects. Kids also do projects on weekends or vacation and so you dont have to go to a library to check out a book you could always get on the computer and look for the information you need their. Computers give you abilitys to learn information you didnt know before for example if your bored and you dont got nothing to do get in the computer and look up information about things like nature, books your looking for etc. I agree with computers benefiting society but not everyone, @NUM3 reason why I agree is kids can chat online with their friends, look up information for projects and find information they never knew about, what do you think @CAPS1 I right or wrong.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13623,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness and grateful because the author is grateful of his parents for having a roof over his head, cooking food for him, and for having such courageous parents. That's the mood of the author in the memoir.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1636,1,"It has come to my attention that there is an argument about whetehe or not computers have a positive effect on people. I think that computers do have a positive effect on people because with computers people can get needed information that could be used to help them, it lets poeple talk to friends and family around the world and also computers tecah people new things. Therefore, computers have a positive efefct on people. students whether it be at college oer elementary schoools almost always go to a computer when they have to fo projects for thier classe without computers students wouldn't be able to get the information that they need and could cayse them to get a bad grade on the project which could result in grades geting worse and worse. Adults use computers often for work and planning, so if there weren't any computers then it would mean thousands of people would lose their jobs and could forget sceduled plans that could be important and could result in causing families to lose money, not enough money to pay bills and could result in losing their homes causing them to live on the streets. Evry person has at least two or more friends or relatives that live in a different place in the wrold that is not easy to stay in contact with so it could result in having to use long distance calling which could waste alot of money. However, with computers people can talk to freinds and realtives from around the world without having to psend any extra money on phone calls to their friends and fmaily members from around the world. Also if something happens to a family member of somewhere around where a realtive lives we could use the internet to check in with them to see if everything is ok. Many parents are using computers to help teach their kids at a nearly age so they are ready for when they go to school for the first time. Also computers are used at schools mainly to teach the students about things that they need to know for the future, as a result computers become very usefull to people when they are trying to learn how to do something wheather its for school. college or a job computers are of tun used daily for important things that we need to learn for our lives in the future sow e won't need any extra help tyring to learn how to do something. Also we would be bale to help people when they neede help if we already knew what to do. As you cna see computers do have a positive effecton peopel because people can use computers to help them gain the information they need for school or work, it lets you check in with friends and family from aorund the world and finally computers help teach us very important life lessons. In conclusion, computers have a positive effect on people and it could save a person from losing things that are.important to themselves or others. ",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3670,2,Libraries are plase that you can get a book you shute be          oergat to be lick soem ales you are won porsn you have eve           rhit to got in book you wat. I bleva that ther shou not be a         what to sop pelpar of reede. So i belev that the suet stop bloe       us bie tack the book of the shaf,1,1,,1,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
975,1,"Computers are a common household item these days. Due to how much computers are able to do, most people spend a lot more time on the computer than they should, and it is affecting our society. Computers can be very helpful, when trying to find information on a topic, but some people take it too far. Some people, their jobs are on computers. Others like teenager will do gaming or have instant messengers, which sometimes takes away from outside activities. Another situation with computers is that adults can get really into online gambling which is terrible for a person to do even at a casino, but now they can do it from their living room couch. Computers can also keep you in from outside, to get fresh air and sunlight. Computers are bad in someways but good in others. Sometimes computers are a pefect resource. When your history teacher assigns you a @NUM1 page essay on the civil war and you have no idea what happend in the civil war. In this case computers are good. Or your boss could tell you to find the amount of teen deaths in car accidents due to cellphones. Computers seem like a perfect resource. So far you've learned computers have their highs and lows but if computer time was limited then people would be able to do more stuff outside, or read a book. Some people might abuse computers others might not but if computer time was just limited I belive, that a lot of things would be different in our society today.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13339,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is over all warm. @CAPS1 explains the positive things about his home and where @CAPS1 grew up. @CAPS1 also explains the positive things about his family and culture, which @CAPS1 is very proud of. @CAPS1 says ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1's basically saying that @CAPS1 realized that all the people that lived around him came together and all connected somehow with their cultures, which made them all feel like family. @CAPS1 also explains how gratefull @CAPS1 is to have his parents who did so much for their children to have a better life. They did struggle at times, but the author is still happy for what went right in his childhood, and having all these wonderful people there. All of the people that came and left his house for all those years made him realize that ""family"" is just being around everyone you love and connect with which makes a house a home.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20758,8," I never thought that laughing can help you start a conversation with someone you don't even know. But @CAPS4 can. Just by laughing with someone can get you to meet a new person. One of the things I do first @CAPS6 someone is trying to be funny is laugh. Once you know @CAPS2 the other person is talking about, you forget that you are just getting to know that person. This happened to me once. @CAPS4 happened in @LOCATION1, where my family and I usually go every year in @DATE1. I made a great friend and the first thing we did was laugh. As you know, @LOCATION1 is a hot place and the sun is usually out every day. I spend the days we stay over there going out to walk with my sister and cousins or going to the beach with all my family. I remember @CAPS4 was a day that my cousins, sister and I went to a small store that's right down the street from where we stay at. We wanted to buy candy and other stuff to bring with us @CAPS6 we returned to our home. I didn't expect to see one of my cousins there with his friends. @CAPS6 I saw them, the only thing they were doing was laughing about something. I couldn't hear them but once we got closer, I heard a hilarious thing they said. I couldn't help overhearing so I started to laugh. One of his friends saw me laughing and he thought I was laughing at him. He asked me if I was laughing at him and of course I said no. I told him I had accidentally overheard his conversation so then he started to laugh. ""That was funny wasn't @CAPS4"" he told me laughing. ""@CAPS1 @CAPS4 was. I didn't know you made jokes like that"" I replied.  He kept on talking to me and then he said, ""I always talk like that so don't be afraid. I don't say @CAPS4 to hurt anyone.""  I thought @CAPS4 was nice for him to clear that out but I already knew people in @LOCATION1 talk like that. We kept on talking @CAPS6 I started to laugh again. ""@CAPS2 did I say now?"" he asked. ""@CAPS3. I was just remembering @CAPS2 you said in the beginning. That was really funny"" I replied. For some reason I couldn't forget of @CAPS2 he said and I don't think I will ever forget. I think @CAPS4 was probably because the way we met was really surprising to me. I had never met a person, especially a guy, by laughing first. I guess I thought @CAPS4 was a great way to start a conversation. Laughing with the person will let them know that we are interested in their subject and we understand them. That's at least @CAPS2 I thought. I had a good conversation with my new friend. We talked about how I was taking my vacations. I told him that every year I go and I always enjoy them. My family and I have a great time spending time with my grandparent and cousins from @LOCATION1. I told him I sometimes say I would rather live in @LOCATION1 than where I live know because @CAPS4's so much calmer there. He agreed with me on one part of @CAPS2 I had told him because he knows @CAPS2 @CAPS4's like to live in @LOCATION1, but he doesn't know how I's like to live in any other place. After he told me that, he stayed quiet for a couple of seconds. I noticed something instantly. I had noticed that our conversation wasn't like in the beginning. In the beginning, we wouldn't stop laughing and we had interesting stuff to say. Then, @CAPS4 got calmer and a little unusual. I didn't want to just stop our conversation there so I asked him where was he going to go because @CAPS6 I started talking to him, he was with one of my cousins and I was with my other cousins. Now we started laughing again. This time @CAPS4 was because we just had noticed that the people we were with had left us. ""@CAPS6 did they leave?"" he asked me. ""I don't know, but they can't be that far because we haven't been talking for a long time,"" I told him. We walked together to go and look for them and I was right. They weren't that far. They were still looking for things to buy and I don't think they noticed we were missing. We just got together with them and acted as if @CAPS3 had happened. @CAPS4 was strange for me because whenever I looked at him, I would remember our conversation. The first thing that would come to my mind was that we started our conversation by laughing at a funny thing he said. I actually liked making a new friend this way. Now, whenever I go to @LOCATION1, I know I have a new friend over there and if I decide to, I can make other friends by simply laughing with them in their conversations.",23,18,40.0,40,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18739,7,When you have patience you are colmer peace full and happy. It is like when you  birth day is next week and you don’t want to wait for it and have to get mad be cases you want your presents today not next week. But you can’t so you get mad start to hit things and than you don’t get a good behaver. Then you make your parents made then they bring some of you gifts back to they store that is not patience. That is non patience when you get mad becomes   you can’t get what you want.,4,4,,8,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,0.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1707,1,"Dear whom it @CAPS1, Have you ever wondered what it be like to spend all your time in front of computers? Well, if you are, I believe that should not be in front of that computer all day. As my mom says only an hour aa day is good. One reason why it is important is because you need to enjoy what life has to offer. You could do stuff like play catch with the dogs walk the dog, and (or) play over a friends house. Yes, playing on computer is fun, but you have to execise to. (you know) @CAPS2 reason why is because you can end up somewhere where you did not even need to go to. You could also make lots of new friends by going out doors. Like that's how I met trees, animals, beautiful senery. You could feel like you were having the time or your. The last and final reason why this is you can get a lot out that you could use. you could make snowmen in the winter or if it's raining you could watch a movie. you could build a lot. In conclusion building, playing and jumping (the list could go on) You can enjoy the outdoors. Just rember the three good reason why are you could use the wonderful and lovly outdoors. Go walk you dog, have friends ober or even just having out with your family and friends.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3688,2,"Censorship in libraries? That could be a good and a bad thing. Is it really that big of a deal for kids to see some bad things in books? Will authors remove their books from libraries?     Censorship in Libraries is not as needed as most people think. Children now a days know a lot of things and are intelligent about certain subjects. I understand parents dont want their children to read books containing drugs, @CAPS1, sex, etc. Their going to have to learn about it sometime in their life though. They might as well get ahead start on it now. Young children most of the time are not even interested in going to those kinds of books anyway. If you censor all the books in the libraries then some students would be in trouble on projects they @MONTH1 need those kinds of books for. Say I needed a book on '@CAPS1' for a project im doing in @CAPS2 class. If the books are censored then I would have no sources to get information from.     On the other hand, I can see why adults would want the books censored. No parent wants their child coming home from school talking about sex, and drugs they saw in a book at school. If I was a parent I would be concerned myself. If it's that big of a deal to some adults then what are they going to do when their children see the same stuff only worse on t.v. Commercials about condoms, and advertisements telling them to use drugs/@CAPS1. Atleast with books, the book is teaching you about the drug and how dangerous it is for you.      If one author takes their book off the shelf because they don't want children reading it, then that gives all authors to do the same. Which could mean that we would have no books on the shelves for anybody. Books are a key to learning! We need to keep ALL books in the libraries no matter how explicit they are. Parents should sit down and talk with their children about not picking up those kinds of books if they don't want their child reading them. Yes, I have seen people pick those books up and start making jokes about them, but thats what children do when their immature. You have to expect that from kids now a days. No matter how bad they are their informational books and we need them to learn",4,3,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12675,5,"The mood in this memoir is a very relaxed and happy mood. Narciso is always happy in the house, there was always the smell of food, and his parents cooking. There was always a strong sense of family and the house too. In pharagraph @NUM1, Narciso said that ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that family had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" What he is saying is that you don't have to be related to be family. Anyone close enough can be considered family. He also felt that you should always help people in need. That is what his parents, they always help people when they need it. and were always willing to share everything they have. That is the mood instilled in this memoir about family and love.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9063,4,The auther cncludes the story with this paragraph because it wraps it all up and sums it into one. It is explaining that she is looking forward to the spring when the hibiscuss is,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6132,3,This is how the setting effects the cyclist. One is the hot dry California desert heat. It was making him hot and thirsty which was making him low on water. The hot desert heat had made water a for like a substance which he could not drink from the well. The water bottle only containe a few tentalizing sips which was not enough to quench his thirst. The hot heat that would make birds pick him drys all of those examples make it hard for the reader to take the old timers advice. It made him realice that in time comes wisely and youth can make silly mistakes. The heat had made it only a trip for his inner soul to survive. That is ho the setting effects the cyclest.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10614,4,"The story of “Winter Hibiscus” is a prolonged metaphor for both connections to a comforting past as well as expectance and the future. Saeng misses her homeland but she must learn to adapt to her circumstances, and pass her drivers test. The story is nicely concluded with Saeng's promise to herself that come spring, she will take the test again. The hibiscus flower itself generates this promise as it gives her some closure and alleinates some home-sickness. Saeng’s promise indicates that she is comng to terms with her situation. When she sees the Canada geese flying, she has somewhat of an epiphany about the seasons. “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things she had thought of as strange before had become.. - Almost familiar to her now.” I feel that was a landmark for Saeng and the conclusion illustrates that by allows to change.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3001,2,"Books Removed From Shelves?      'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the chelf.  But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that I work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.  And then we have no nooks left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 statement was from @PERSON1.  Do you think it is right for young children to look at immages that are not appropiate or read something that is talking baout sexual content?  I do not think any of these materials should be removed from the shelves, but they should be put in a privite area where only adults can get to them.       I think they should be put in a certain area, away from children, because children will get ideas from the material that they see and think it is okay to act like that.  There are some books and movies out there that teenagers and young children see that are about cereal killers and children think it is okay to bring guns to school and it is not okay.  Children are reading these books and thinking it is okay to act like their favorite character or acting like their favorite movie star in a movie.  Some of the movies that are out there are about doing stupid stuff, and children and teenagers think it is 'cool' because the person that they look up to is doing that, so they want to try it out also.  Children get hurt from doing @CAPS1.  Whenever a child sees people having sex, they think it is okay to do it too, becasue those kids in the movies are the same age as they are.   I think that movie producers shoudl be aware of what they put out there for children to watch.       When you talk about the book @CAPS2 @CAPS3, you think what a great book.  But would you ever think that it would be taken off of shelves because of one word that was used in it?  I think that it should stay on the shelves, but if a parent does not want their child to read it, then they do not have to read it.  If parents do not want their child to read something then just tell the teacher or child that they cannot read the book.  I think the books should stay on the shelves and any material that has any 'bad' sontent on it should be put in a private section where only adults can get to it.       Do you want your children looking at bad pictures or seeing or reading about something with sexual content?  Children are getting bad ideas from books, movies, magazines, and music.  They think it is appropiate to act like @CAPS1, because their favotire movie star is preforming @CAPS1 way.  These books, movies, and magazines need to be put up out of children's reach, so they cannot get anymore bad ideas to do stupid stuff",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12298,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is one that is used in lots of memoirs because they are like thing's: someone will never forget like the author said ""my parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally gratefull). Passionate cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. That's all stuff that he will never forget.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21002,8,"                            From Laughter to @CAPS1 @CAPS2 the first day of school last year, I walked through the doors of the school hoping I would make a friend or two. I was not sure of how this would happen but I hoped for the best. I entered my first class and sat at a table with all unknown faces. I wanted to say something but was afraid of their reactions. The teacher made us play a couple games where we had to introduce ourselves. Those didn't really help. Everybody was tense and it was all awkward. I @CAPS3 wanted to be myself already and make friends. For the rest of the day, all my classes were like that. Everybody was tense and awkward, like something was keeping us quiet. Not knowing anybody didn't help the situation a bit. That was the first day for me. The second day I walk through the school doors determined to make some friends. I thought about what jokes I could say, what interesting thing about myself I could share, but to me all those sounded like stupid ideas. I walk into humanities and sat at a table with a friendly looking girl. The teacher told us to introduce ourselves to the other students at the table we were sitting at. For a minute or so it was very silent, but i wanted to introduce myself so bad. I couldn't stand this silence any longer. I looked in by back pack to grab a pencil and I see a note from my mom saying "" @CAPS4 be yourself and make some friends honey, have a great day at school. :) "". I started laughing because I thought it was funny that my mom actually wrote me a note and stuck it in my back pack. It was so unexpected and I felt like a child. I started laughing and when I looked up, I saw that the girl next to me was laughing too. I knew I had to say something, so I did. I said, "" @CAPS5 my names @PERSON1, but you can call me @CAPS4 for short. Whats your name? "". The girl looked at me, smiled, and said, "" @CAPS5, my names @CAPS8"". Then I asked her what middle school she came from and other questions. We stared talking, we exchanged numbers, and we became good friends. From laughter to @CAPS1, who would have known? A year has gone by and we are still friends. We always laugh about how we started talking. A few days ago I told her how I felt @CAPS2 that second day of school. I told her I was scared to introduce myself. She said she felt the same way and she didn't know what to do either. Since then I thank my mom for writing that note because without it I wouldn't have laughed and made @CAPS8 laugh and I wouldn't have made such a great friend.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9455,4,The author concludes the story with a paragraph so the people reading the story would actually read it and not guess how the story is goin to go.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6010,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many different ways. One example is the hot sun that was beating down on him made him very thirsty. Another feature is the rough road that wore the cyclist out and made him tired. My last example is the old juice factory with the picture of a refreshing cup of juice on it made the cyclist feel like giving up because he thought he would die of dehydration. These are my reasons as to why the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many different ways.   ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15632,6,"The builders had a tough obstacle Because They in @CAPS1 were tryn to @CAPS2 A overall @CAPS3 Building. And were tryn to compete. The Dirigibles were A @CAPS3 part in Building The empire State Building Because They were faced with obstacles That were hard like @CAPS5, @CAPS6, Height and ext. These were the @CAPS7. On Dirigibles to @CAPS8 There were The Dirigibles were not heavy @CAPS9 They @CAPS10't @CAPS8 as well And It was made with light mater ials. These are The reasons why This happens.",0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16388,6,"The main obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building had to face were mainly safety and nature itself. safety was most important, and because they were aiming at having dirigibles land on top of the building, they needed to make sure it was completely safe In the reading it states that ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is flameable."" @CAPS1 it is flameable, the builders realized how much danger it could cause especially in a high populated area like New York City. Now besides safety, one of the biggest obstacles was nature. With having the mooring mask at a steep height on top of the Empire State Building came with many difficulties that revolved around the weather and atmosphere The winds on the top of the building were always shifting, which would make it hard to land dirigibles. Because of the unsustainable air currents, nothing could be done about the dirigibles. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Due to the roughness of the wind and the unidealistic design of the dirigible, safety and nature were main obstacles in the creation of the Empire State Building.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
572,1,"Dear leader of the local newspaper, I have heard the strange misconception that computers are ruining our society. I for one, think that this is a terribly made thought. To begin, the internet (provided with most home desktop computers) can teach us a lot about the world around us. Additionally, the whole fact of contacting others around the globe, as well as having a whole fun world to explore, makes computers more enjoyable. Finally, thousands of jobs around the world are either based on or work with computers. Due to this, computers are , without a doubt, beneficial to society. The first reason I need to clearly point out is that the computer holds tons of information that can't be found anywhere else. While books have to be republished as updates occur in the world, anything on the internet can be updated almost instantly, beneficial to students with school projects for subjects like @CAPS1, subsequently, people could actually go to school via online schools and colleges. Whilst regular colleges could cost around thousands of dollars in order to get in, online colleges are much rather cheap, affordable to anyone. Also, due to the high amounts of information online, schools seem to be growing obsolete as computers typically hold all information obtained in a regular school year. Because of this, computers are definately beneficial to society. To build up, the internet provided with computers can bring loads of pleasure to those who use it wisely. Because of the growing population of those who use computers, companies tend to make computer shoes, which usually attracts viewers by the thousands each day. This makes television seem obsolete as well. Another major thing is that software comes out for the computer almost everyday, allowing many things to be done by users. Software typically includes games, movies, and music. Finally, since staying in touch with others is a good thing, chatting with others across the globe is very easy and durable, allowing distant relatives to come in contact with you via various chat programs. Due to this, computers can bring loads of fun to users, and are thus beneficial to society. Lastly, due to the rising demand of computers, companies typically rely on computers for jobs. Since the internet population is growing, companies allow people to fill out applications and send in resumes in order to apply for a job in said company. Also, some jobs can only be done while online or using a computer. Many jobs these days, typically banks, rely on using the internet most of the time, and some actually are based in the internet. Because of this, workers can finish the job easily in one place, instead of having to around and going to a boring looking building to do a boring job. With this reason, why doesn't anyone else see why computers are beneficial to society? With all of these reasons, I hope you see why computers are beneficial to society. Education just become a whole lot easier thanks to the internet. If education is not what you seek, you can then use the internet to have fun when you are bored. Finally, jobs can be completed even easier, and makes workers more responsible. So, leader of the paper, do you really, along with everyone else, think that computers are a waste of time in life?",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4368,2,I believe that the book that none of us read. It should not be on the shelf of any book store i think if the grow up does read it no child should have the right to. Also some of the music that is on shelf should be remove from all store. Children under the age of @NUM1 shouldnt have any way to get some of this rated r music centrain music shouldnt be on shelfs for little kids to get a hold to.           So now lets get to the movies that are playing in some of these shows. No child under @NUM1 should be able to see half of the things that are showing  and movies because no child should be expose to such things that grow up are most likely expose to. That is another way that young children are doing half of the things that they doing the peoples that make certain movies need to think about the children how they would act toward the ones they make.               Most magazines that are being sold today is giving children the wrong idea. When magazine are fill with alot of he say she say things the kids in the world do nothing but think its foreal or ok to do that is spent off the wrong message to the young children. And i know you are thinking to yourself like how is that true well kids these days listen to what ever they think is right and half of these magazines make things sound so real.,3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10202,4,"MY detail on Saeng vowed silentlY to herself because she had difficuiltY makeing new friends. She like to plant stuff around her because she feels like Plants are her friends, Saeng took the shovel and finished the planting for her mom that make Saeng feel so good. about herself.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1489,1,"Dear local newspaper, In my opinion I feel like to many people spend to much time on the @ORGANIZATION1. People are getting obeast because there not getting enoff exersoce. Children are going on the @ORGANIZATION1 instead of doing there homework. Maybe perhaps a fmaily member is dieing and you rather spend time on the @ORGANIZATION1 instead of with that family member. all of this things are happening because of the computers everyone is getting. This can not be true! That over @PERCENT1 of the people inNew @CAPS1 say that they are putting on a lot of waight and turning obeast. I asked them what do they think is this to happen. Someone named @PERSON1 said the reason is the computers there taking over people lifes. The computers is the enomy of the people that it is a affecting most in life. Me as a child a @ORGANIZATION1 is throwing me off of my homework. I use to have A's and b's on my report card only. Right now it turned in to @CAPS2 and @ORGANIZATION1's are changing my life drastikly but not in a good way. As you know it your child could be going threw, the same terible things as me. You should start to check there homework instead of them just going on there @ORGANIZATION1 and forgetting all about there work life I did. Try and provent this. running down your face and feeling disaponted in your self. The one you love good past u way and you did not even spend time with he or she. Wanse again the thing that is called @ORGANIZATION1 did this. The disigen that you made because of the @ORGANIZATION1 would and is going to scare you for life. We the people that have computers would find out that they were never made for a good purpose just to distray what we do and how we spend times with are familys and friends. Turn your head and say no to the one thing that would reck you into little peases. How do you feel? I feel bad because I let something so little mess up my life. You still have time to change your life and say no to the computers. They could make you turn obeast because you are not getting enoff exersice. The one you love could be messing up because of the @ORGANIZATION1 that you have in your house. The worst thing of all you were not able to spend time with the family member that you love the most. The computers that we have are missing your life us you no it up. Just say no to the computers and live your life the best way that you could. Don't you feel bad that you let something so little ruen your live!?!",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7428,3,"The setting of the cyclist clearly influences his mood. From the beginning to end, the outside world reflects the tormils in his head. This is evident in the beginning reservoir, empty desert, hills the Welch factory, & finally the fish camp. The reservoir is a heven, @NUM1 safe ground that contains everything the men needs. He is feeling optimistic, ready & eager to follow advice of old men. He first hits a ghost town, which is foreshadowing a dangerous future. He passes through still with a level head. He comes to a water pump that gives him battery acid. This is wher the mood shifts. He suddenly describes his setting as “the high deserts of California.” The sun is boiling down & water is running low. His hopes start to drop. When the “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,” it reflects the turmoil in his head. The terrain is harder the chances of his survival lessons. When he crosses a snake, it suggest even more despair. It finally climaxes at the Welch factory. How ironic, it is an abandoned juice factory. This is lost hope. When he finally arrives at the fish camp, he is relieved to be alive & is uplifted. The cyclist has made it. It is clear the setting has affected the cyclist.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12817,5,"The mood in ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of our lives"" is compassion. Throughout the memoir it talks about how Narciso was grateful to his parents for their ""love and sacrifice"". He was grateful that they wanted to move to the United States from Cuba just to ensure that he would have a better life. He learned generosity and how important family and friends are from his parents and they have been ""the basis"" of his life. His house welcomed everyone and the air was always filled with ""not just scent and music but life and love. He learned what family really ment and learned how to love. He loved his parents a lot and talked highly of them in his memoir ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they love... The faith that this struggle would lead them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times."" That is why I think that the mood in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of our lives"" is compassion.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1162,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1 Newspaper, @CAPS2 I see why some people think that computers and technology are bad for society, I on the other hand strongly disagree with them. In my eyes technology, especially computers can bring people together and computers are very benificial to @CAPS5. Also computers can save you time and money now. First off computers can bring people together. I had one of my best friends move across the country, all the way to @LOCATION1! and I don't get to see her so I now video chat with her on my laptop. and if I didn't have that opportunity then we probably wouldn't have stayed in touch with each other. That experience was not only with a friend but it happened with a family member as well, my grandmother. Every year for passover the whole family comes to house to celebrate but because she is getting older we video chat so she can see the whole family together. It is wonderful experience. As I said before computers can be benifical to @CAPS5. You might be thinking ""@CAPS3 it can only understand that but I am a student at @ORGANIZATION1 and sometimes I forget to write an assignment down so I get my laptop and go to @ORGANIZATION1 notes. com, if that was have gotten a zero on the homework. See! Computers are very benifical! Have you ever been in a situation where you need something but you just don't have time? Well now many things can be ordered offline. You can get things from food to cloths and toys. Surveys have proven that over @PERCENT1 of average @CAPS4 order off of the computer and save money from gas because they don't have to drive. Overall, I think computers can be handy and helpful to all ages, @CAPS5 with homeworks, family and friends and adults who don't have a lot of time. And I think as years go by more and more people will start to realize that.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16422,6,"The obstacles which the builders of the empire state building faced to allow dirigibles to dock there were numerous for this project. The first problem was that, other dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen. Hydrogen is a much more flammable substance than helium, which is what dirigibles in the United States used. The owners didn't want anything to occur similar to the German dirigible the Hindenburg, which would be worse in downtown New York instead of Lakehurst, New Jersey. Another practical reason why dirigibles faced problems docking at the Empire State building was that an existing law prevented dirigibles from flying too low over urban areas. For example a @ORGANIZATION1 dirigible named the Los Angeles, could not get close enough to tie up due to forceful winds. These problems go to show that owners of the Empire State building faced numerous obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17860,7,Being patient? Being patient is very hard for me because I am bipolar and I have savere anger issues. My experience with being patient is when I lived with my foster family!!! They had grandkids that really annoyed me!!! My foster family had a different religion than me I am atheist. They are @CAPS1 and they would constantly tell me I am wrong!!! It made me very upset but I didn’t say nothing because I was being patient. And I hate it. With my anger problems im very surprised I didn’t go off on them? But yes patience does take practice lots and lots of practice. Because not everyone in this world is patient!!! Tolerance twords children… I don’t like kids to much but where I wed to live there were tons of little kids that were the grand kids of my foster family and I sued those kids are annoying but I had to tolerate them. Kids are very hard to tolerate and so are “guardian parents” they are the worst they tell you what to do and they aint even youre parents but I tolerated it.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
650,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 a world where no information could be saved for the whole world to observe a place with no communication with loved ones or friends; or a life with no possible way of learning of catastrophe's on the other end of the earth. Clearly, a life without computers is utter chaos. Computers provide education, and stay in contact with friends and family I'm sure our world greatly benifits from this mericle. Medicine, @CAPS4, @CAPS5 constructing and revolutionizing our life has been made possible by computers. @PERSON1 is an old family friend of mine. He was one of the few people who was working on going to the moon for the very first time. They were astonished with what thier astronauts saw. But computers made the expirience a reality. @PERSON1 remembered recieving some of the first footage of he moon on to his computer, before the photographs and video are released to the public. However, @PERSON1 is not the only person who agrees. Johnson, a principal from a private school in @LOCATION1, after winning an award for best school in @LOCATION1 states @PERCENT1 of our education comes from the computers. We make our students come involved in technology. These are the people who progress to make the best medicine cars and computers. Our students all are benificial to our world today."" @CAPS6 settle for anything less for our childrens' education? In the middle of trajedy; faced with a difficult decision; or even just lonely, longing for someone to count on; who do you turn go first? Your loved ones they are always there for you when you need them. Now because of our access to computers whether accross the world or just the other end of the block. We will always be in contact with the ones we love. @PERSON2, my friend, found out her aunt diagnosed last year with cancer. However, she was in a boarding school in @LOCATION2 while her aunt needed her support. Instead, she was with her every step on webcam, emailing and @CAPS7. She could even contact her doctors to see her condition after. Her aunt conquered cancer with her neice and is living happily. With only a @NUM1 chance of living, @PERSON2 gave her the support she needed through most difficult @CAPS2. Not only did see the positive effects of staying in contact. Marcos a family therapist says @NUM2 of happy families stay in contact after seperating through internet."" @CAPS8 could anyone, ever leave those who you care most about behind? @CAPS3 a world with a full education, for our children to take advantage of and a place where we can stay with each other all the time. Thats the world we we live in.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4581,2,"@CAPS2, I do believe that book, music, mvies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves if they are taken offensive. Poeple should not be putting stuff out there if they are making others feel not happy about what they do. Althought, we might think that putting stuff in papers and on movies, don't hurt people. Well guess what they do     @CAPS1 of all, movies that have stuff to deal with sexual relationships. For example, gender marrage, they say that people should not marry the same sex. They make fun of them because they are not like others and they can take that very offensive. Very little people like being with the same sex. By us putting them in book, on movies, or making song to make them feel offensive is not the best way to go.      Another one is about special needs, movie or book that have to deal with people putting down others that have special problems. Although, they don't show that thier sad it don't mean that we didn't offened them in a way. Families that have a special needs child, sister, brother, mom or dad don't like it very much when someone outs something out there about their problem that they @MONTH1 have. Also, they will feel really upset and sometimes can get mad for that.     Most importantly, books or movies making fun of people that don't have a lot of stuff. It's not their fault that they don't have the money to buy stuff like others. For example, a nice house or nice clothes, most families have problems trying to pay rent and do other bills if only one parent is working. A lot of parents that work are gettin laid off are not even gettin paid for it. Worst of all, a famliy member (like someone who lives in the house) @MONTH1 have to go to the hospital and whe you go to the hopstial you have to pay for the bills. Some families are in and out of the hospital year after year and they don't have the money to pay for new stuff for the house or the people who live in it.     In conclusion, @CAPS2. i do believe that they shoukd take certain books, movies, mafazines, ect., off the shelves because they can be taken offensive. We don't know how rude it is to have something out there that makes fun of someone in a way until it's to late. Many people really don't like it when they see something out there thats offensive to them. They don't know how to react about it and they get frustrated",4,3,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
689,1,"Suppose you have a family member that you have not seen in a long time and you dont have enough money to visit them because they live to far? Or you are injured or sick and you have nothing to do, so you decide to just browse the internet and you actually learn some interesting things like what new organism has scientist found out or something in history you've never known before? Amazingly, the computer is filled with knowledge like this. You could talk to family members you haven't seen before or just havent got the chance to see them in a long time. You could even know a lot of new interesting stuff about nature and history you would have never known about by just stepping outside. And just so you know more, I'll even tell you about these things. I have a half sister who I only get see like once a year or once two years. But the only way I get to interact with her is on facebook. There is also websites people use to talk to loved ones like twitter, myspace, yearbook, aim, skype ect. Not only do you just talk to them you could do a webcam chat, so you could also see them. Alot of people use webchat to talk with old friends. While on the computer you could also learn new things. Yesterday, when I was on the computer I got bored and did some random searching, and in that @NUM1 min. I learned things I never heard about, like the ""@CAPS1 massacre"" and that time when a teacher went into a spaceship for the first time and it blew up with the teacher in it. Man was that a tragedy! If you were interested in nature you could learn about all kinds of nature around the world. Also, if you are interested in ancient time with a few typing you got all kinds of fascinating things of ancient time like @PERSON1, the city that was forgetten, then found. I'm pretty sure you couldn't learn that kind of stuff stepping outside. The amazing things a computer could do! Talking with family and friends you haven't seen in which to be decades and learning fascinating things. Usually it's cool because you could learn things your teacher never new. Would you want the teacher teaching you or you teaching the teacher!",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1584,1,"Alot of people have different ideas on if they believe computers benefit society. I for one believe that computer are useful for many things. The first reason why I believe this, is because one a lot of schools will need them for students, to do projects. Second they have computer gamed to help kids learn. Third I believe its a good way to just relax. The first reason why believe computers are good is because many kids in school will need them. In school we have a lot of projects that we might need type or get a picture. If we didn't have computers there would be no way we could do that. Also if we do persuassive waiting pieces. We would need a computer to type it to make it looks better. Many people might say we could all just write it out. But I believe that typing it might be faster and neater for some people. The second reason why I believe computers are good is because they have many good games to help people I know that have many different games text not readable Computers are good is because it's a a good way to relax. Aint of people get home from work or and are very tired. But instead of just going and sitting on the couch for the whole night you could go to the computer and do a fun game for a little while. Many people say that watching tv and going on the computer is the same things. But if you play an educational game once in a while it might be ok. But then you can do something fun on the computer every so often. In conclusion I believe computers are good because one many kids need them for school second they have a lot of educational games. its a good way to relax.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15378,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the problems was that a thousand-foot dirigible held by a single cable tether would add stress to the frame. The obstacle they went through was to make the frame stronger. In paragraph @NUM1 it states the obstacle they went through to make the building stronger. ""the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower."" and ""The rocket-shaped mast would have four wings at its corners.""Other obstacles they went through was making sure the mooring mast was tall enough, and in paragraph @NUM2 Smith says, ""people in Washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast.""",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1521,1,"I believe computers have a positive effect on people because computers can help people in many ways. You can e-mail friends from across the world, get important information you might need, and also you can do business online. Computers have fasinating things to show and inform. Most people that have computers can use them for e-mailing friends. Sometimes your closest friends are across the country & you want to talk to them. Why not e-mailing them on your computer? It would mean a lot to your friends it you just take time to say hello through e-mail. My second opinion on why using computers are a positive effect on people because. Some middle school through college & the rest of you life need to use computers. Maybe because of some important information they might need for an assignment from a teacher. Not all the time you can find certain things in books. Now a days computers are taking over books. My third opinion for computers is that some people are to ill to go to work so they work online. Even though you are ill you will still be getting paid because you are still working. So women just had a baby & she is using her computer to work online. So she can make money so she can support her femily. In conclusion, my opinion is that computers have a positive effect on people because they are used for e-mailing friends, finding out important information for school purposes or job purposes. My last opinion is that computers are used for working online. To me, I think computers are a positive effect on people.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11948,5,"The mood that the author sets is thankfullness. He is thankful for all the things, scarifices his parents had to for him. For example ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give thier children a better life, even thought it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" This is why the author wrote this memoir to thank his parents for what they did for him.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7689,3,"The young cycolist began his day confident in looking forward to his day of riding across california, slowly, however as he recognizes his been directed wrongly, his mood changes,& he begins to feel more hopless. AS he begins, he feels carefree & mody for anything. He writes ""I checked, checked my water supply & moved on. The sun was beginning to heat down, not I barely noticed it. The surroundings have little effect on him. Later, on he realizes his water was going down, & he is getting tired, his mood changed to exhaustion & defect. Here he writes “i got back on the bike, but not before I gathered up a few pebbles & stuch them in my mouth with any luck I’d hit a bump of lodge one in my throat.” He has become sarcastic of saddened by the hoplessness of his journey. Eventually, he had relief of the cold water helps to bring up his spirits & sense of humor",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3957,2,"As an individual and what books I have read, I believe some books needs to be taken off the shelf. My concern is for the children who get a hold of these books. Kids should be kids and wait till they're older and more mature to know about certain things. This also includes music, movies, and magazines. Some people believe these things influence bad behavior like stealing, cussing, and even murder. The less obsene matterial we have the better we can control our kids or at least some of them anyway.         We see bad behavior every day like stealing, cussing, murder, and assault. Ever wonder what causes people to do it? Just look around you they show it in movies, they talk about it in books. theres even songs about it, no wonder kids think its okay to do these kind of things! If we limit these items we @MONTH1 see positive results.     Like I said before kids should be kids and be free of these obsene materials. They will be exposed to it sometime but hopefully when they're older. In the mean time censors should be put on these items or taken off the shelf.",2,2,,2,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7147,3,"Alot of factors effected the cyclist. Temperature, terrain, directions all gave the cyclist doubt. The temperature through the high deserts of california left the cyclist feeling hot, parched and irratable. Through the story, he had all but a few slips of his water left. Knowing your running low of water “to feel sorry for himself” The cyclist had biked so far the terrain started to change from flat to “rolling hills”. This could impact someone greatly who has never biked on different levals before. Lastly, the feeling of hoped could have effected him the most. Not believing in yourself is the hardest thing to overcome. Having just liesurly taken instructions by an old man cost the cyclist hours of torture. The author did a great job using hyperbole to exagerate the cyclists feeling of lost hope . He also used very detailed text to paint the reader a picture. These literay elements made it easier for me to understand the effect of the temp, terrain and hope had on the biclist.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6256,3,Almost all of the cyclist’s surroundings are old and barren. Hot @CAPS1 like weather. The road is hard to ride on. “Flat Road was replaced by short rolling hills.” So his ride was a very rough and tiresome one.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3777,2,"Materials that are offensive for some people in my point of view should not be removed from the shelves. If some people are offended by materials they shouldn't pay any mind to those certain materials. If everybody paid attention too offensive entertainment regardless to what kind, people would be upset all the time. There are many things people see, hear, and read about that @MONTH1 be offensive. Don't take everything seriously most of those offensive things @MONTH1 just be a joke or just someone trying to get attention.               When you just sit and think about it, most television shows you would watch everyday @MONTH1 have at least one moment that's says something offensive. In example I watch a television show some nights that says something racial about @CAPS1-@CAPS2. I don't pay the show any kind of attention because I know it's a show their just trying to get more rating. So when it really comes down too it I am goin to be watching the same show again the next night.      What if some of our most historical people had listened to everything that everyone esle said about them. Then, our black culture and history wouldn't be so '@CAPS3' today. I probably wouldn't be able too take this test that im doing right now. So don't take everything so serious everyone has some type of  humor.     If we removed everything that was offensive today. Some of your favorite actors and singers wouldn't be the famous actors or singers you love and respect today. All of the grammy's and award shows that we watch on television would not be themselves. There are all kinds of different genre of music. Some of the words that different artists use would be offensive but they still release those same songs because they're only words.     My conclusion, is that anything and anyone can be offended or offensive. People don't take everything serious because it might just be a joke or some ignorant person that needs attention. When I was younger my mother always said 'sticks and stones @MONTH1 break your bones but words only make you'. So don't take everything serious I mean it's only the media, tell me who does take them seriously",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9439,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because at the beginning of the story Saeng went to take a driving test but didn’t pass and so she goes and buys a hibiscus that reminds her of home and gives her strength and comfort. So her mother says this at the end because she knows Saeng is going through a hard time adapting to her new country and she doesn’t want to put more pressure on her just because she knows Saeng is very upset and is trying to make it up to her by buy a flower for her so she says by next spring she should be adapted and ready for the test because the flower should give her hope. She wants her to know she is three for her.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12150,5,"The mood created by the author was to me appreshiation, and some sympathy. Heres @NUM1 people that gave up their home, job, family, friends in the hope that they can live a better life with their son in @LOCATION1. I have lots of appreshiation because its just another example to show how much our parents love and want the best fer us. I feel some-what bad fer the parents because they came from Cuba, and moved to @LOCATION1. They didn't know the language, they had to learn everything over, and look for a job that would take imagrants. Most jobs dont take imagrents, so the parents had to work hard to support their son. The love and detication that our parents put in to give us the best is unbelievable. The mood set was appreshiation and simpathy for the people in this story.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13034,5,"The author creates a grateful mood. The author writes about how his parents had good jobs in Cuba but left everything to give their children better lives. He also writes about how he grew up, which is parents teaching him about music, cooking, and family. His parents never got the jobs they deserved because of the barriers to work for their children. The author is grateful for the things parents did for him so he could get a better life.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3384,2,"Should offensive material be removed from the library? I think no, and there are many reasons as to why I disagree with this idea. Many books, movies, and magazines are not ment to offend people, but just to let the reader know how the author feels. I think that the books, movies, magazines, etc. should stay on the shelf because if they are removed what are we left with? Seems like all that would remain would be the dictonary. I think that when Katherine Paterson said, 'Children or any other children have taken off the shelf' that she was making a big mistake.      So what seems to be offensive to people? Topics such as gosip and politics are a gold mine for authors in the @DATE1. Yet people find these topics to be offense probably due to that persons backround. If aomeone find a read to be offensive, then they should stop reading and that be it. Instead, people deside to go on a rampage against that magazine or whatever they read and what it banned for life from others to read. Readers have the choice to read whatever they want and if they disagree with that subject, just move on with their lifes.      At the library I attend many poeple different shapes and sizes walk through the door everyday. Many of them like a different subject then the others, so its commen to find everybody reading about a different topic. Sure someone here and there does not gree with an author, but never decide to go crazy about it. Instead they just go pick a different read to enjoy for themselves. People read what they want to so they can enjoy it, not to bash the wuthor for his writing.          In my own read's, I have found at times stuff i disagree with. Instead of going off the deep end and getting all excited about it, I choose to think about where the author is coming from and try to understand his side. On the other hand, some movies are ment to be for one type of audience when instead another audience see's the material. This still should not get movies or whatever the material is banned from the library. When on the box it says rated for teenagers and up, that means it is not for a four year old to watch and their parents get mad at them for it. If people followed what the box says and listen to the guidlines, then there would be no problem.     I disagree with @PERSON2 when she said that some books, magazines, movies, etc. should be removed from the library. People have the right to read anything and to see anything they want, and if they disagree well they should just deal with it. In my own exprience, I have not found there to be a problem in my community library with people wanting content removed. Once people start following guidlines and reading the boxes and still disagree, then maybe will have something then. But until then, we should keep our nations libraries the way they are today",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21075,8," Side by side with my best friend @PERSON1 we begin to walk to the park. The rained on @DATE1 @TIME1 wasn't very pretty or warm but the pleasures of watching lost and the hopeless at this particular park in @LOCATION1 was enough for us. Approaching the grass to the benches, mud was dominating my shoes when I was starting to think other wise of such fun. Sitting on the damp leaf filled benches we notice a man and his child walking toward us. Although this man was quite odd looking we quickly grew excited for what he had to say to us was more than likely going to match his appearance.  The fellow looked to be in his late thirty's with tight pants covered in what appeared as sharpie written all over him. A knitted scarf and with a small hat to match he had this flaming homely look about him. Beside him, a stroller with two small children, one at hand while the other lounging in a storage pocket below. The father we later find out, pretends his @NUM1 year old daughter is whispering in his ear, shouting things like ""@CAPS1 WAS THAT""?! suggesting he hadn't heard her although we knew she hadn't said anything at all. ""@CAPS2 want me to ask the girls if they want any raisins, is that what @CAPS2 want""? odd enough we look the raisins bushing them between the cracks of the benches on the few times he looked away. @PERSON1 an I then look at each other when he starts ranting how beautiful and striking her eyes were. The laughter was watering out of our eyes and being under such pressure to redeem, it was wanting to burst out of us both. The man then take out his phone with a video of a country singer compare their faces toward one another.  Minutes into the video I look away since the phone was now in @LOCATION2's hands. I feel her nudging me from leaving her even just with my eyes and hadn't continued suffering with the ridiculous video. Looking up I see the father staring at her as if waiting for some kind of reaction. Back to @PERSON1 I notice how uncomfortable we all were including his kids and he hadn't even a clue. throughout this whole interaction I hadn't said more than @NUM1 words in between the silent laughter and looking always that I couldn't control. My persistent friend who also hates being impolite then hands over the phone with a smile on her face and cheeks of red. ""@CAPS2 really look just like her @CAPS2 know""? All these questions he had for us and no answers but laughter prancing inside us. The boiling silence was rising between us and very little we could handle next. Pulling out a script the man then asks to see our acting skills and would like to direct us sometime. Once he spilled those beans on us we jolted directly toward her house while pouring out our enormous amount of laughs being held in and effecting our ability to talk. breathe by breath running I could finally speak causing me to blurt how i could hardly fathom the reality of his request. Just another day in @LOCATION1 we thought, but for us everyday was just something to laugh about.",20,15,,35,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10175,4,The reason why the author concludes this type of senerario is simply because the author has a pain to cross and or a situation in this particular author you know son but if you get it straight you’ll open your eyes and see that its your time to shine you might as well grab it before you loose your chance you only get one day to prove you are worthy to the people.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6332,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. It made him tired thirsty and he was near exaustion.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3863,2,"I believe everyone has the right to voice there own oppinion on life. If we censor ones books, music, or movies because they are inapropriate, it would be like silencing an oppinion that stands out among the others. If we silence the author and there story or song how will we be able to view life in another persons view?     In the @ORGANIZATION1 we have the freedom of speech and press. these amendments make it so that otheres can voice an oppinion with out being shot down. Although we have the amendments there are still restrictions on what we are aloud to publish. Say we found a diary writen by @PERSON1? Are we aloud to view his deepest darkest thoughts? or Are we going to say that it is too dark and depressing for the average person's eyes. His ideas are different, does that mean we shouldn't show them? no we should show them, we need to educate people that there are indeed different ways of viewing life.     I believe that no matter whos ideas it is, if aloud by the author, should be aloud to be read and comprehend in our own way.     If one wishes to learn about how to murder in a @CAPS1 then i think they should be aloud to do so. The reason why; The @CAPS1 is becoming absolete, the technology era is officially here. There is not a thing we can't find in @CAPS1 that can't be found online.      Although the @CAPS1 is a government run facility, many people will go elsewhere to find the materials wanted to view the censored media. It is true that if we allowed 'censored' material into a @CAPS1 a child could find it. But like the internet you can block things from those kids.     All voices need to be heard, even if it is racist, sexist, biest, or just insane. these are ways to view the persepective or the reason behind hate and war. if we can learn from other mind sets through books, music, movies and movies, then i think we should be aloud to.     Nothing should be blocked from the public. Every one has the right to voice there own oppinion through there own way.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10601,4,The author concludes this story with the few words “then I will take that test again.” because she wanted us to know that she is not going to give up on something she failed once. She is going to keep going until she succeeds with passing “the test.”,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16229,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the building. The first obstacle was that the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified. The excerpt says, ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" Another obstacle was safety. After the German dirigible Hindenburg caught on fire, builders realized how bad the devastation would be if that happened over densely populated New York City. Nature was also a large obstacle. Shifting air currents at the top of the building would make the dirigible very unstable. It would be dangerous to have an unstable dirigible hanging above crowded city streets. Finally, at the time there was an ""existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" These obstacles are were the architects of the Empire State Building from attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20857,8," Seeing one of @CAPS15 best friends trip and hit his face on a screen door, was enough to make myself laugh. Its was the @DATE1 after @CAPS15 @NUM1 grade year of school. I was having @CAPS15 friends @PERSON2, @PERSON3 and @CAPS15 neighbor @PERSON1 stay the night at @CAPS15 house. @CAPS25 ever we got bored we usually went around @CAPS15 neighborhood ""@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3"" some houses to have some fun. ""@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3"" is @CAPS25 @CAPS21 quietly sneak up to someones front door, ring the door bell a couple times and then @CAPS23 run away. All four of us were hanging out that day. It was a great @DATE1 day, gorgeous sun, warm temperature and a nice gentle breeze to cool off your face.@CAPS25 it came to night fall we were all in @CAPS15 room playing @CAPS7 @NUM2.  ""I'm bored bro,"" @PERSON2 said to the other three of us.  ""@CAPS8 then, think of something to @CAPS19,""@CAPS9 replied  ""I can't think of anything,"" @PERSON1 stated with a bored look on his face. We sat for a while thinking of something to @CAPS19 to entertain the four of us. ""I got it!"" I said with a confident smirk ,""lets go @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3!"" "" I down for that ,""@PERSON2 said ""@CAPS13 me too ,""@CAPS9 and @PERSON1 replied shortly after @PERSON2. As we were walking out @CAPS15 front door @CAPS15 mom shouted ,""where are @CAPS21 boys going?"" @CAPS15 mom caught me off guard. I didn't know what to say ,""uh, we are going on a walk ,""I replied hesitantly.  ""@CAPS16 be safe,"" @CAPS15 mom said as I walked out of the door. We @CAPS1 @CAPS2 ditched a couple house, but that was starting to get boring and then it hit me like a typhoon. I came up with the best idea I have thought of yet.  ""@CAPS18 this is what needs to happen, I'm going to @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS28 the first house, @PERSON2 @CAPS21 get the next one, @PERSON1 @CAPS21 get the house at the corner and @PERSON3 will run around the corner to get the last house.   ""@CAPS19 @CAPS21 think that will work?"" @PERSON1 asked.  ""@CAPS20 yes it will work!"" I said,""@CAPS21 @CAPS18 ready?""   ""I guess so ,"" @PERSON1 replied shortly after @PERSON2 and @PERSON3 yes. We all lined up in place. I rang the first door bell and started running, then I saw @PERSON2 slam his clinched fist on the second door, next i didn't see @PERSON1 ring the door bell because he was already running ahead of me.  ""@CAPS9 get the last house!"" I shouted at him. The house @CAPS9 was running to did not have their porch light on. @CAPS9 was running fast to the house and failed the see the step up in front of the door. I didn't expect what happened next. SMACK! @CAPS9 tripped over the step up and hit his face on the screen door. I could hear the slam from the middle of the dark street.  He got up quickly and turn to us in confusion ,""should I ring the door bell? Should I ring it?""  ""@CAPS23 run @CAPS9 I'm sure they would hear @CAPS21 smack their screen door with your face!"" @CAPS25 we got back to @CAPS15 house everyone was laughing. @CAPS9 @CAPS23 made our night. That happened @NUM3 years ago and I still remember it like it happened yesterday. So next time one of your friends ask @CAPS21 to ""@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS28"" a house think about if the porch lights are on. ",18,20,36.0,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21045,8,"Benefits of laughter Laughter has always been a big part of my life. when you laugh you are having fun. Having fun puts you in a good mood. When my friends and I get into arguments, or disagreements laughter can be our mediator. Laughter can make a bad situation slightly bearable. Laughter even has great health benefits like working out your core, and lungs. One of my best friend's mom recently passed away right before @CAPS1. Her name was @CAPS2. She was like a second mother to me for several reasons. I had known her for @NUM1 years, and for a small amount of time i even lived at her house. She was basically a mother figure to me, because i don't live with my birth mother. I use to see her almost everyday, because of my friend @PERSON1. He is @NUM2 and we hang out just about every day. I remember the morning he called me and told me his mom was dead on the floor in her bedroom. I ran over there as fast as i could when i saw the ambulance lights. My other friend @PERSON2 spent the @TIME1 at @PERSON1 house the @TIME1 his mom died. When i made it to @PERSON1's house he instantly started to cry on my shoulder. It was wise not to try and make @PERSON1 happy with laughter, because nothing is really funny when a loved one passes away. As time went on @PERSON2 and I started to think of ways to cheer up @LOCATION1. We wanted to get his mind off of his mother. Wouldn't you know it the best way to do so was laughter. I'm the jokester in my group of friends. So some how i have the ability to make people laugh without thinking. I'm more of a doer not a thinker. Id rather see my friends in a good mood than in a bad mood. If people are in a bad mood there is this bad aura or vibe you can just feel it. Its a very undesirable feeling. Laughter cheers up my friends when they are feeling down. Laughter helped make a bad situation like my friends mom dying into a slightly more comfortable situation. Laughter along with trust, and respect are @CAPS3 bring my friends and I together.",18,19,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18989,7,"There was this day not to long ago that I had to wait. Nothing but wait. It was at basketball tryouts when we were finding out if we made the team. I had to wait, and wonder if I made it. I thought to myself… I wonder I wonder if I pushed enough I wonder if I messed up to much.” @CAPS1 I could think about were the mistakes I made so that day @TIME1 that I had been sitting down waiting to here my name… I had my name! “ @PERSON1 number @NUM1 tryouts please come get your paper.” I got it, took it outside, opened it, and read. “@CAPS2 @CAPS3 you had made the goled team.” I jumped up and down. That day I had my patients, and there  for. I made the team.",8,11,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18914,7,A time when I was patient. A time when I was patient was when I was in @NUM1 grade. When I was in @NUM1 grade my teachers said that we had to write a story about us being patient. So once apon a time their was a girl named @PERSON1 who was not patient so the hole world new her as the un patient. @PERSON1 hated that name so she though to let self and she said @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I make them @CAPS3 calling me that. So @PERSON1 went around her street and asked everyone @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I @CAPS3 being called the unpatient. NO body would tell her the answer so @PERSON1 sceawed out loud @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I @CAPS3 being called The unpatient.  Then @PERSON1 heard a vocie it was an old man his name was @CAPS4 and he's said I no @CAPS1 you @CAPS2 @CAPS3 being called that way @PERSON1 said @CAPS1 please tell me. All you need to do is be patient. Then @PERSON1 though to herself I got to be patient. So what @PERSON1 did was she went to the store and you no what she did she got in line and she was patient so when everybody went they said good job @PERSON1 and everybody stopped calling her unpatient.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
566,1,"Computers are not having a negative affect on society. In fac when you talk with someone online @CAPS1 helps build relationship within that person. A use for computer that is also use full is hand eye coordination. Education is also a useful thing you can use with computers. You can learn about faraway places and monuments. The myth is that computers ruin relationship between friends and family however, In some ways @CAPS1 improves them, when you go on skype you talk with some one online. By doing this you actually improve the bone between you and that person. This information proves that computers can actually suport replationships. Hand eye coordination is also something useful that a computer an teach when you type on keyboard your fingers inprove on reflectsel. If you continue to type your hand eye coordination will improve. Some people might say that a computer won't help you much @CAPS1 really is possitive to use @CAPS1. A computer is more educational than what most people would think. On certain websites you can see something that can teach you. If you go on a historian websites that someone could learn about different typs of people. Lots of critics say that a computer is not educational. However when you look at the facts a computer can teach a lot. @CAPS1 is easy to belive a computer is not a good thing. But when someone looks at the facts A computer is a great thing to own. If critics acna take these facts into consideration a computer is a better object than what most people say.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6770,3,The features of setting affect the cyclist in that a desert-like temperature and the terrain on which he must bike make him more prone to thirst and exhausting. The heat @MONTH1 cause the cyclist to dehydrate faster than normal. This is especially true in this case because of his lack of water. The cyclist might pass out or suffer a heat stroke. The terrain of rolling hills will tire out the cyclist quicker than if he were still on the flat road. His muscle will start to ocha and his body will need water and rest. The story would totaly change if the setting were different. If the cyclist were biking in the @DATE1 on a cold day in the mid @NUM1 he would not have a chance of suffering a heatstroke. There would be a significantly less chance of him becoming dehydrated. The setting is very important in every story and can change everything.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6868,3,"The setting affected the cyclist in several ways. The first place he arrived at was a “ghost town” Then he reach a water pump about twenty miles up the road. The water was very hot and tasted very nasty. The text states, “…water feeting somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees…when I tried a drop or two, it had the flavor of battery acid. Then he had to travel without water and became dehydrated. Travelling up and down hills he thought he began to imaginate a building that could possibly provide he with water. The building was there but it was abandoned. He decide he was going to such on a couple of pebbles. The text says, “I’d read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thrist…”",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15135,6,"In the the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The architects had to acomidate a lot of thing to allow dirigibles to dock at The mooring mast. For example In @CAPS1 @NUM1 it says ""The steelframe of the Empire State Building would have to modify and strengthen to accommodate this new situation"". Also in @CAPS1 @NUM2 it says ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was natur itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". These factores and many more where the reason the mooring mast was never poot to use do to the feer of safty and law.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3945,2,"We all find things offensive, wether it be in a book, magazine, movie, cd, tv show, or a newspaper article. Libraries hold all of those items and somepeople @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not want to remove the items that they think are offensive, but would that be right? If everyone went to the library and took everything that they thought was offensive off the shelves, we would have nothing left.      Maybe writers should just cut down on things that are innapropriate, racist, or things that include foul language. Then not as many people would be offended and they would not have any problems with letting their children pick out books on their own. Although, it @MONTH1 not be the writers at fault here. It @MONTH1 be the readers. Some people should just stop taking everything so seriously, then they would not have to worry about things like what their children are reading.     Yes most adult things now are innapropriate for children, but that's why it is for adults. Children have their own selection of books and movies. And parents need to realize that maybe they should take their kids to the childrens section. All types of entertainment are categorized by age and people should start paying more attention to that. If parents started watching what their kids do, then they would not be worrying about the reading or watching something they should not be. That is what parents are for, taking care of their children and some people do not do a very good job of that.     If there is a book you read and it is something you do not want your child to read, it is probably something you read when you were older, so do not worry about it until they get to that age. And maybe then it would be ok of they read it, because they are old enough to realize right from wrong. Parents can not always control what their children do. And if they do by chance pick up the book their parents never wanted them to read, they @MONTH1 see it in a different way than their mother of father did and they @MONTH1 learn a very valuable lesson from it.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4353,2,the scary book that you dont want your children to pick up off the shelf i think if your kids read it they would be scared having night mares and you probaly dont want that and if u have the right to move it your kids will have the right to move it because they see what you do they gonna wunt to do so u can do it when they are not around  and yea i believe that cetrtain materials.,2,2,,2,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6307,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in more ways than one. For example in the short story ""Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,"" the cyclist had to endure going over big dirk hills while being dehydrated and tired from biking miles and miles to get to a destination. The setting can sometimes even cause you to lose hope and give up. The cyclist in the short story; started to lose hope until he found a store that sold fishing bait. The setting controls how long it takes you to getts your destination and how you get there. For example, if you come across a dirt road and theres a big boulder in the way, you have to find another way to get there. In conclusion, the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3431,2,"Every book has a meaning or message that all should know about. Taking a book away from a library shelf can decrease of knowledge from someone that might need that information. Just because a book @MONTH1 have certain views that can be offensive does not mean it should not be allowed on a shelf. A book should not be discriminated by what the contets @MONTH1 have source of a reader. Positive and negative books should all be allowed on shelve for any whom that have an intrested.          As for music and movies that could be place in the same catogoery can be reasonable. Its really not that neccasary to be place in a library because its a place known for peace and quite and relaxation. If music or movies become a hazard then it should not be welcome in the library. Positive side music and movie has a way for some that comfort while having a good book at hand. It is understandable to have a little tone in the with some knowledge within the eyes in a book.      Magazine is another non neccasary object that is place in the library. A magazine can have a mixture of good and negative thing obtain in it. Not all magazine have something that can be use to educate. Most magazine are known for entertainment and update on well known people around the globe. Magazines should be removed from the library.                      The library should be an experience of a learning envirnment and only materials that will be a good help instead entertainment for pleasure. Remove a book from a shelf is like decrease from knowledge that could have been known. As to remove books should not be allowed no matter how or what the content of the book @MONTH1 be. As for music, movies, and magazines should be a limited for usuage in the library.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4231,2,"The book called @CAPS1. the book is about a young @CAPS2-@CAPS3 man that starts school at @ORGANIZATION1. While the first few weeks in school he is picked on and made fun of. So one day he has join a boxing class, and the wreslting team at his school. But at the end of the book he ends up fighting everybody the was bullin him.      I personaly the book should be kept on the self because its a life changing expersance for a young man. For some people this book they will or have even read this book several times, I know I have. I only hope that othere people will like or even love this book as much as I have.          So I guess what I am trying to say is you really never know what you are going to like in till us sit there and read it from beganing to the end",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3175,2,"Libraries contain many different selections of books, music, and magazines. However, are all of these materials appropriate for all @CAPS1 visitors? In this essay I will explain to you why I think offensive, distracting and inappropraite material should be removed off of the shelves, and put into their own section of public @CAPS2.     If a small child were to walk into a public @CAPS1 and pick up a book about abortions, they would not know what the book is talking about, because most small children cannot read. What if a fifth grader was to pick that same book up? They would be able to read  the whole thing with no problems. However, should a fifth grader be allowed to pick up a book about abortions at such a young age? I dont think so, fifth graders should be reading age appropriate books. This is just one reason why I think offensive, distracting and inappropriate material should be moved to its own section of the @CAPS1.     When I think of a @CAPS1 I think of a quiet place that I can go to and read, or study. Although, some Libraries allow their visitors to listen to music. Rather it be on a computer, on a ipod, or even on a cell phone, there should be a sound limit right? Most people would think that Libraries set sound limits, and they probably do, but people do not follow directions and they are not attentive to what other people are doing. It is @CAPS6 distracting to go into a @CAPS1, to study, and the person next to you has their ipod blasted to a heavy metal rock song. Once again, this is another reason I think offensive, distracting, and inappropriate material should be moved to its own area of the @CAPS1.     I also think that a @CAPS1 is a community place, that you can go to and be safe, and your parents would not have to go with you because they think that it is safe and appropriate too. Most Libraries have magazines, because its for your entertainment, and they want to keep you happy so you will keep coming back. Well not all magazines are rated @CAPS10, some have @CAPS6 inappropriate material in them. A child should be looking at magazines that are appropriate for children, a teenager should be looking at magazines that are for teenagers, and an adult should be looking at magazines for adults. However the adult magazines should not be showing people with barely any clothes on, or any sexual scenes, and neither should teenage magazines. With innapropriate magazines, I do not think they should have their own section of the @CAPS1, I think they should be removed all together. They have pictures in them and anyone can look at a picture.     I really hope you can understand my point of view. It is nothing against public Libraries, it is just the material inside of them. If I owned a public @CAPS1, I would have rooms devoted to books that are for different age groups. For example, I would have a room for @NUM1+, and a room for @NUM2+. Those rooms would be for the books that are easily questionable for younger children. I would also have my own room devoted for music only. That way anyone could go in the room and listen to whatever kind of music they want, no questions asked. The rest of the @CAPS1 would be for people to study, and read. I think every @CAPS1 should be like this, it would help make the world a better place",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6272,3,"The features of the setting effected the cyclist in many ways. One way was because of the @CAPS1 @CAPS2. With the cyclist having limited amount of water effected him to. The cyclist listened to the old men so therefour he traveled a good distance. So that made matters bad. With having lack of water with such distance to go the cyclist stuck pebbles in his mouth hoping to forget about his thirst. The cyclist thought of him dying and the birds picking him clean, because he thought he would die because dehydration. The conditions of the road made it harder, First he started with nothing but straight roads then ended up going up and down hill. In conclusion, the cyclist hit many obstacles that made his trip harder then what he thought.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18438,7,"Once apon a time, in a land for army, there was a girl named @PERSON1. One day @PERSON1 and her mom where going to watch a movie called @CAPS1 from @LOCATION1. @CAPS2 when they got to the theater, the tickets were sold and so they had to watch another movie. It must’ve been a bad day because once they got up to the ticket sold and remember to go to! @PERSON1 and her mom left and went to go eat. They went to a place called @ORGANIZATION1 and got in to order! They ordered their food, sat back down and ate. Once they were done, the left and went to try again with the movie @CAPS2 when they did the line was as long as a mile! @PERSON1’s mum just told her to be patient and wait I told about and listening to go???. When they were there, they finally got the last ticket available. After that her mom @CAPS5 “so honey @CAPS3 were patient???When they got home???  the couch, got a snack, and waited for @PERSON1’s sister and dad to get home. finally, they ???  withe a big surprise  and @PERSON1’s dad was holding tickets to go see the movie @PERSON1 and her mom had just seen! “@CAPS3 were trying to find you all day” @CAPS5 her father. “@CAPS4 @CAPS3 couldn’t find you.” @CAPS5 her sister. @PERSON1 and her mom looked at each other and explained that they can go see the movie @CAPS3 were patient and waited in line an got the last ticket available!” “And @CAPS3 won feifty dollars too!” exclaimed @PERSON1. The @CAPS6!",10,12,,22,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9578,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, the author concludes the story with an interesting paragraph. The paragraph says” When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding  then I will take that test again. ""The author ended the story with that paragraph because she was not in her comfort zone, she had move to a new country and missed everything like the flower and the Hibiscus. So she would wait until she felt at home and comfortable again to retake the test. In the text it states “through the quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familiar to her now.” She was realizing that it wasn’t so bad & she was getting used to it.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3692,2,"Have you ever seen a crazy person walking around saying odd or unique theories? Everybody is different and have their own opinion about what they think is right. It is alright to have different beleifs but that shouldnt mean people shouldnt seek to understand others. I beleive that the censorship in libraries is very important but that people need to seek to understand each other more, not be so stubborn, and look at different perspectives so that people can get along easier.     Many different materials are found in libraries and some of them are more censored than others. Many times the reason that the books or magazines are censored is because they portray strong ideas and theories. People have the right to speech so they should be able to show others what they beleive, but they need to make sure that showing what they know is not hurting anyone else. Explicit movies and music are very bad with seeking to understand. They are good because of the rating systems but still are very ignorant to others.     Many people just simply take the ideas of others the wrong way. People have trouble looking at things in different perspectives and because of it they can cause trouble. If people would seek to understand more, then the conflicts of different beleifs would not be as common. When people have different perspectives, they can be more knowledgable of various opionions.     Some people are just stubborn. They choose to only beleive their ideas and refuse to listen to anyone else's. Being stubborn is the opposite of seeking to understand. If people were less stubborn, they could see more perspectives and become more aware of how others felt. When people are stubborn, it can be very hard for others to deal with or for them to get along well with others.     In conlusion I do think censorship is important but I think that the reasons why we censor things are equally important as well. If people were more understanding of others, then we could have more censorship for the things that agrivate other people. We would also have less censorship for people who only try to spread there ideas. If people sought to understand, ;ooked for different perspectives, and were not so stubborn, then they would get along much better",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12289,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is a mood of happiness and thankfulness. In the memoir the author talks about how greatful he is to his parents and how happy he was when he lived with them.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
959,1,"Dear local Newspaper, @CAPS1 opinion on the affects of computers is that while there are good benefits that come out or them, I believe more strongly that negative issues and situation arise from computers and that they affect people with greater impact in a not so good way. @CAPS1 three main reason as to why I think there are more negative impacts than positive and constructive impacts from computers are @CAPS2-bullying is a very big issue. Also there are many 'scams' and 'cons' out there on the @CAPS9. Lastly there is a lot of mis-leading or wrong information online. Going back to @CAPS1 first reason, ""@CAPS2-bullying."" @CAPS2-bullying can be derined as rude or nasty teasing over the @CAPS9. On social networking websites such as @CAPS4 @CAPS5, @CAPS6, and so on. '@CAPS2-bullying' can include teasing, hurtful comments horrible name-calling and fowl language. It is much more effective than regular bullying, such as ""Give me your lunch money"", because once you put words out on the @CAPS9, you can never take them back, no matter how hard you try. '@CAPS2-bullying' is the new generation of mean. Secondly, scamming and cons come out of the @CAPS9/computers. When purchasing items online, you never really know what your going to get. @CAPS1 father was scammed, or connect on the @CAPS9. He was looking on what seemed like a very official site to purchase a big boat. He drove all the way to @LOCATION1 to get it. He took it out on the water in @LOCATION2, at our @DATE1 home, and the engine and motor were broken. That is what can happen when buying something off of the @CAPS9. Lastly, mis-information can be another negative impact from computers. When researching a topic, you should stick to the library, it @MONTH1 sound old-fashioned and slow, but when you research on the @CAPS9, you need to remember anybody can put or post anything, even mis-leading or untrue statements and 'information' online. Researching topics is not the only way to get false information. People can pretend to be who they are not in real-life, which is why ananymous chat-rooms and instant messaging are dangerous and un-reliable. As a conclusion, the @CAPS9 basically has stronger negative impacts and consequences than positive ones. Because @CAPS2 bullying, scamming or conning and mis-information are all negative factors of the @CAPS9, and out-wiegh the positives.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1757,1,"I belive the reason why people use the computer so much is because most people might have to work on the comptuer or mabey even finish a project. But I understant the part when the artical said ""Some experts are concerned that people are spending to o much time on their computes and less exercising"". Mostly young teens use the computer at a earley age and become hooked, because there are so many things to do on the computer like download games for free and play with other. People around the world but you would think that anybody would play video game on the computer and have free time? NO! Most adults don't play games on the computer, they do work or reasearch an artical. But after that they'll continue doing their daily routine, but alot of teens are on the computer everyday and rarley get exercise. The internet has open alot of new enchanced technology, over the past few years you could search up old friends from mabey old schoold on the web or even chat with people who you don't know from all over the world. You could have an @NUM1 @CAPS1 and buy new song or new albums insted of going to a local store, or even shop online have have the cloths been brought to you. Over the years they would of never done that, and rent movies or buy them to have on your @CAPS2.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13483,5,"In the story ""Narciso Rodriguez"" written by The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 of our lives, the mood in the memior is emotional & loving. In this story the @CAPS3 talks about how his Parents are immagrents. How his Parents we're nice enough to let people stay in thier home & how the let people w/ them",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12179,5,"The @CAPS1 created by the author of the memoir is warm and inviting. In this quote the authors childhood is revealed and how he feels about it, ""The innocence of childhood, the congregation of the family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, forms the backdrop to life in our warm home. Also when the author says this it creats a happy @CAPS1 and shows how greatful he is to his parent's, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. The last qout wraps up his feeling about his life and how he feels ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love./I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This quote show the love and warmth of everyone in the family and how a house can bring people together. This showed the warmth, love and selflessness of the family.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6974,3,"The features of the setting effect the cyclist in many ways. The scenery makes the cyclist turn worried, unconfident, and in the end an ironic hopeful. The cyclist came upon the first “town”, and described it as only having “one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corrall” I believe this is when the cyclist realized the men were a little off, and began to worry: he also couldn’t refill water supply, so fear of dehydration also kicked in already tired, the cyclist became unconfident when he came upon the sign reading, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”. Knowing that this was going to be a long and slow journey, the cycles becomes unconfident that he can make it, finally, when passing the sign saying, ""Gary and Wilber's fish camp – If you want bait for the big ones, we’ve your best bet,"" the cyclist reached a hopeful stage, because he knew he had found civilization once again. I believe your atmosphere and surroundings can effect your general mood, and that stands true today with the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21539,8,"@CAPS1 as long as you breathe, love as long as you live. @CAPS2 was impossible, there was absolutely no way @CAPS2 could be real. Breathing seemed virtually unachievable, as if I was choking on air. Everything around me blurred, spinning viciously as I clung to the fresh cut grass. Tears diluted the burn in my eyes, but not the sting in my nose, though neither caused my body to tremble as @CAPS2 did. Attempted screams came out as muffled moans. Alone @CAPS8 helpless, I could feel her staring at me, unsure of what to @CAPS7. My best friend stood @CAPS8 watched as I grew more violent, pounding the dew soaked lawn with my fists, whimpers transforming into shrieks. A door slammed behind me @CAPS8 I felt the arms of my father, trying to guide me towards the house. Once inside, my dad buried my face in his chest in more of an attempt to silence my obnoxious wailing rather than comfort me. He apologized repeatedly, I imagine he didn't know what else to @CAPS7. @CAPS2 was too early for the In a better place"" speech, but too late for everything to be okay. I continued to cry as stumbled up the stairs to my bedroom, @PERSON2 trailing close behind. Sitting on my bed @CAPS2 seemed like nothing was worse in the world. Suddenly, I was over-whelmed by the feeling I was missing something, like he was closer than I knew. I sat up to see his plastic sunglasses sat staring at me from my dresser. A black frame with neon blue sides. He @CAPS8 his ""stunna-shades"" danced through my head. Him standing out the car sunroof flexing shirtless, to propping himself up pretending to be awake in class. Seeing the glasses was like looking into his eyes. In my mind, his face held grief @CAPS8 frustration, he didn't want me crying. The few times tears fell down my face he'd say, ""@CAPS3 on, suck @CAPS2 up @CAPS8 take @CAPS2 like a man!"" I knew in my heart he wanted me to be with the people he loved @CAPS8 he wanted us to be smiling. With the morning sun beating on my back, I pedaled my bike as fast as my legs would allow. Reaching her front porch, I realized immediately the time I was about to spend in that house, would be like none before. When I let myself in as I always did @CAPS6 peered around the corner, eyes swollen @CAPS8 discolored. I took four steps forward @CAPS8 met her with a tearful embrace, in which I apprehended @CAPS6 wished I was him. @CAPS6 loved him in a way I'd never fathomed, but the desperate longing to be held by a loved one, I knew all too well. We cried @CAPS8 held each other because there was nothing more we could @CAPS7. When there was a pause in the sobs @CAPS8 @PERSON3 actually looked at me for the first time, noticing I looked just as terrible as @CAPS6 did. I reached into my pocket @CAPS8 pulled out his sunglasses. @CAPS2 was hard not be selfish at a time where all I wanted was to be comforted, but I knew what I had to @CAPS7. Forcing a smile seemed infeasible, but I knew @CAPS2 was my next step. Her gaze drifted down to the palms of my hands. ""@CAPS4 @CAPS5."" @CAPS6 started weeping once more, I held her @CAPS8 tried to be strong. More of my friends crept out of the kitchen, tear stained @CAPS8 reddened as well. I smiled at them gently. They all took notice to the sunglasses in my hand, but didn't understand, they hadn't know him the way @CAPS6 @CAPS8 I did. We spent the day gathered around with a loss of words @CAPS8 hunger, our pizza sat untouched, the television on just to break the silence. No one said much, about anything. ""@CAPS7 you remember the time he hid our biology project in the freezer?"" I felt the question @CAPS3 up like vomit, too large to swallow. They just looked at me, not sure what to think. I feared I spoke too soon, I began to assume all of the melancholy @CAPS8 crying was supposed to continue uninterrupted for longer than @CAPS2 had. @PERSON3 smiled @CAPS8 nodded to my relief. ""@CAPS8 you got mad because he kept putting the nuts in your noodles."" I laughed aloud, I couldn't help @CAPS2. I was flooded by the memory of him trying to act confused as to why the boiling water had cashews floating on top. ""@CAPS7 you remember how he'd always braid your hair?"" @PERSON3 smiled even greater.  The rest of that month was filled to the brim with tears, but @CAPS2 overflowed with laughter. When @PERSON1 died, laughing was the last thing I wanted to @CAPS7. @PERSON1 always generated the larger portion of my laughter, @CAPS8 with him gone I never imagined I would @CAPS1 again. But in reality, just because he left too soon doesn't mean the laughter did. My beatitude in his memory will never die.""",20,25,,45,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21553,8," One rainy, @DATE1 day in a far away place their was a soccer game.that i was in. I remember that day like it was yesterday.It was the last game of the season,so it was important to me but some things went wrong in the process. I was going to the same like I said. I was just wearing my uniform my aunt said bye as I did. but out of the deep blue shy a big black rain cloud comes out. Oh @CAPS1. so I'm in on the beach thinking to my self the game going to get called off. On it my turn to go in. now in font ready for the for the ball,@CAPS2 I fall on my face. then i fall again coach take me out. so he did, i go back on the beach hopeful the team can do it with out me. game over we lose by two points, its time to leave now but where is my aunt? i called her on my coach's phone , @CAPS1 answer. I think to my self ok shes a little late, but as i look at the time ten go the @NUM1 then a hour. finally shes here. cold, wet and mad from the game. all my aunt said is @PERSON1 don't get mud on the seat. well that's a little hard to do that when it's all over me. my aunt says @PERSON1 you are not going the party looking like that, i said but i have to there is not time to waste. after a little argument my aunt says ok, so i get there and see all that food and all my team mates muddy as me. it's seems like a could move to show the heavens, what a day.",15,10,,25,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1542,1,"Do you remember school projects sitting down bored and watching your @CAPS1 stations or sitting in the doctors office waiting bored out of your mind? Well no more! Since the computer was invented there have been many many advancements and all of those things are gone. There was once a time when the only way to do a project on a country was to look in the paper untill you found something now with computer advancements you can enter a country's came into google, a search site, and up comes @NUM1 things on that country. In fact @PERSON1 a expert on computers and inventor of one of the most advanced computers on earth says that searching for information is now @PERCENT1 to @PERCENT2 eisier depending on the topic. Also you no longer have to work a redundunt type write that always makes mistakes that you have to retype. You can just use @ORGANIZATION1 and you type your essay. Anything speelled wrong is underlined in red so you only rarely have a spelling mistake. As a result of this increase in knolage, from a learning stand point computers are extremly good for mankind. My second reason that computers are extremely good for us is that they are entertaining. On your new laptop you can go on miniclip or addicting games, both gaming websites and play games. These game while not only are fun improve handeye coordination which helps with sports, driving, writirs and many other things. More advanced gaming computers called consoles such as the @CAPS2-box @NUM2, by @ORGANIZATION1, the @NUM3, the @CAPS3 by the @CAPS4 provide exteme gaming experience. One of the more recent games for these consoles is called @CAPS5 of @CAPS6! Modern @CAPS7 @NUM4. This game has an online system where you can talk to and play against people all around the world. Not only that but advanced games such as @CAPS5 of @CAPS6 improve eyesight. Studies show that playing a high action game @NUM4 hrs a day will improve eyesight more than eating @NUM6 serving carrots a day. My final reason that computers are good for you is that they take boring waits. If you've everyone to @CAPS10 you know that the lime can be @NUM4 hrs long. People used to wait that just standing there. Now people can pull out their @CAPS11 or @NUM8 player and listen to music. The @CAPS11 can take videos and pictures as well as play music, videos and games. If you are lucky enough to have an I touch you can check email, stocks, weather and news right on your @CAPS13 as well as buy songs which can be @NUM9 cheaper than @CAPS14. In conclusion all of this advantage in technology benifits us greatly. We can now learn about new exiting things have fun while improving eyesight and we don't have to wait.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14847,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in their attempts to allow dirigibles to dock at the mooring mast. Al Smith was the architect, and man behind the idea of the Empire State building. He and the maker of the Chrysler building were competing against eachother to construct the world's tallest building. To make the Empire State building bigger than the Chrysler building, Smith was going to construct somthing that John Tauranac stated, ""Would be equipped for an age of transportation that was only the dream of aviation pioneers"". That dream was to travel by blimp. The Empire State Building was going to have a mooring mast at its top for the dock of air ships. It was not going to be as easy as the concept. The architects couldn't drop a mooring mass on the roof because it would stress the buildings frame. The greatest reason the mast would never fufill its destiny was for safety. The excerpt states, ""Most derigibles used hydrogen"". Hydrogen is flammable. There was also a law that was, ""against air ships flying too low over urban areas"". After numberous attempts and modifications, the idea was shelved.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12572,5,In the memoir the boy talks about how his parents gave up every thing for him and how they were self less bye inviting refuges even thouw There was not that motch Room.,1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1015,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I disagree with those who support advances in technology, the people who think that computers have a positive effect on people. Would you rather spend your time on the computer rotting like a vegetable or would you rather hang out with your firned, travel to other places that you never thought possive or even go to a gym and probably loose some pounds? I vote hanging out with my friends! You know people that like to travel to far away places and have fun would rather that than waste their time on a computer. As much as people like to look at all the cool places that they check out on the internet; what's the point in just sitting their and watching the screen when you could get a plane ticket and fly to the magical place that you saw on the computer. Ok. I know that traveling to faraway places can be scary because you never been to area in your life, but @CAPS3's worth the try. Ok fine if flying is not your thing then why not thy exercising. @MONTH1 be you have been trying to lose some extra pounds. You could always try that. Think about @CAPS3, my mother was using her so that she could fit into a size @NUM1 and now look she is in a size @NUM1. Why bore yourself to death with computers that will probably give you the wrong advise when you could always ask a friend for advise. Yes a friend a live and breathing human being, losing some weight will help you gain confidence if you just try. @CAPS3's just like @PERSON1, from @CAPS2 lower said, you got to want @CAPS3 if you want to accomplish that goal of yours. Everyone can go for that goal! Maybe you dont want to exercise, maybe you want to hang out with your friends and family. If you waste your time online chatting, how are you oing to chat with the people that are eight in front of you. If you can talk online then you can probably talk to people in real life? Right? Wrong! Some people can and some people cant. I am a very talk person, but I know how to talk on line if. I wanted to so why cant you? That's @CAPS3 the time has come t decide. Do you want to spend your time on or computer or do you want to spend your time in the real world. Get out your chair, turn off the computer get up. Put your wat on and walk outside and do something with yourself. Use you mouth not your hand. Talk to people comunicate with them @CAPS3 is not that hard. Trust me. If I can do @CAPS3 you can do @CAPS3 too! @CAPS3's now or never I choose now and so should you. Dont waste anymore time, go on a trip take a hangout. Just do @CAPS3. Dont run back to that computer. Throw @CAPS3 out you can live without @CAPS3.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10606,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng will return to the flowers again in the spring.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15621,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" written by @ORGANIZATION2, the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1 under ""The Fate of the Mast"", the first line says ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. Strong winds due to violent air currents would make it impossible to dock a dirigible on the Empire State Building. The wind would blow the dirigible off the mast into New York City. In paragraph @NUM2 under ""The Fate of the Mast"", a line states ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law made it illegal for dirigibles and other aircraft to even fly in such and urban area like New York. One final obstacle is safety precautions. In paragraph @NUM3 a line states, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium."" If a dirigible were to crash and it had this highly flammable gas it would create a massive disaster. Violent winds, laws, and safety precautions are all against the docking of dirigibles at the mooring mast.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6173,3,Some features of the setting setting that affected the cyclist were signs that had speed limits. The sign affected the speed of the cyclist. Another feature was a hill on the route. This affected the cyclist by making him tired because he said “I wipe the sweat from my eyes.”,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3604,2,I think that the books sould not be removed because people know what they are reading and if they dont like the book they sould leave it. There is no reson that the people would whant to remove any book for any reson because alot of people like different kinds of books     If they would remove any books they would be alot of people mad because those people mighit of really liked that book and wanted someone else to read it. That book might of also been in there family for a really long time and they want everyone in there family to enjoy that book.     It would also not be good to remove a book because if they remove a book they have to get more books and that would cost more money to get more books it will also waste more papper.     Another reson that it would not be a good idea is that if you get another book replace the old one the people might not like the new book and the place where they have the book at will lose money and will not be good for them.     So thays what I think would be my opinion about removeing a book it would not turn out very good and the book store will lose alot of money because they got rid of a good book and broght back a reallty bad book,3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4011,2,"Dear @CAPS1,     @CAPS2 the world there are people who censor what their people read and write, these works are oftenly produced by communist and socialist governments. Here in @LOCATION1 we have the right to say,read, and write what we want,about anybody or anything. Censoship does exist in the @LOCATION1, and it is in the form of opoion that it exists.     I have read artricles in the paper about how text books have covered up the truth,due to what is politicaly correct. I have heard of libaries taking down books that have a very strong political opoion, often these are books written by conservitives.I have read about books coming out with the only intention of slamming,proabable presidential nomanees. Being a conservitive myself,I do not believe that these books should not be in book stores,libaries, or other public venues.     I believe this because in @LOCATION1 we have freedom of press and,for these books not to reach the public is against that right and,the free-flow of ideas.You @MONTH1 ask way I believe this? I believe this because I too want others to hear and read about my ideas, on how to obtain life,liberty, and the pursuit of happiness.      Now that @PERSON1, is why all books should be in our libaries.I agree with a restricted section where certain books should be stored,so little children will not get a hold of @NUM1 I would like this paper to put an article out about these thoughts. We the @ORGANIZATION1 are a republic,and we for over @NUM2 years have encouraged the free-flow of ideas.Why stop now?thank you @PERSON2",3,3,,3,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1217,1,I think having computers are good because you can use it to find places. Another reasons why its good is that you can talk to your friends from the computer. You can play all types of different games and get pictures and its is good to do your homework. That is why computers are good and we need them. First reason that we need computers is that it can be a map for us. Also we could look at places we never saw before and if you want to get some where you can go the computer to do that.,2,2,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1493,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I believe that computers do benefit society in a positive way. Without computers we would not be able to be as social. We also would not have the ability to do reseach for school online and running a business would be even more difficult. Without computers our society would not be so far advanced. Being social is an important quality in life. the main way of being social these days, other than texting, is to chat online with friends. Facebook, @CAPS3, @CAPS4, and skype all give their users the ability to make new friends, find long lost friends, and chat with friends. I personally have a skype and facabook, and I am able to access them everyday. Without them, I wouldn't be able to chat with friends out of school except for sports and texting. Everyday I workout and lift weights and go on facebook, that is why that whole statement, ""spending less time exercising, and more time on the computer"" is false. Facebook and skype are a past of my everyday life and without them I know I would not be as social. Computers are also a part of my everyday life, because I have to use it to do research for school or typing up an @CAPS5 paper. As you have now seen, my handwriting is not so great, so I end up typing a lot of my homework because of it. Without computers my teachers would not be able to read my work. Computers also help with making graphs and data tables for science lab reports. Without a computer the graphs would have to be handmade, which is not as presentable. Overall computers are used everyday in school to either do research or to type up some homework. Education plays a key role in society and if we did not use computers out education that we would receive would not be the same as it is now. My last reason why i believe that computers play a positive role in society is that computers are what keeps businesses running. Without computers some businesses would be unable to function, and those could function, would be awful slow. Since our society is so far advanced our businesses need computers in order to complete the jobs. Expenses and income are saved to businesses computers, if that was all done an paper they could be lost or ruined. Computers also simplify work for businesses, they speed up the tasks that would takes a long time to be hand done and they complete the tasks that could not be acheived without a computer. Computers play a large part in the @CAPS6 of the world.",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13019,5,"In this memoir, Narciso Rodriguez creates a heart-warming, and comforting mood for the readers. First, we see this comforting mood being established through the setting. ""Here the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home,"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). This creatively loving setting gives the reader a sense of comfort when reading the piece. Next, we see this sense of heart-warming coming from Rodriguez's word choice. ""... there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age..."" (@CAPS1 @NUM2). This rich, vivid word choice sets a caring mood through out the piece. Lastly, the family's background started out somewhat bitter, and depressing when Rodriguez explains their financial instability in @CAPS1 @NUM3, but then later on, we see the family moving to @LOCATION1, and finding comfort in their new home. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us,"" (@CAPS1 @NUM4). This sense of family contributes to the heart- warming mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in this memoir.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16110,6,"The obstacles of The @CAPS1 of Them Empire state building were some big ones which led to some Problems. for @CAPS2, There was a lack of a, Landing area for the Dirigible. But the @CAPS3 reason was the lack of saftey there for This dream could Not be accomplished.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4332,2,"The library is a public place. Everyone is allowed acces to the library. It supplies everyday people with information that they are seeking to learn about. There are so many different forms of information and entertainment offered inside libraries. Books, music, movies, etc, they all can be found there. Since they all can be found, censorship in libraries should not be allowed.     Genres were created for a reason. Certain items have different forms to them. There are many forms of music. Classical, rock, and blues are some examples. Since music is categorized in such a way, there should  be no need for them not to be on the shelves at a library. If a certain type of music or book is known to be offensive, then that certain genre can be avoided. There is no need to even visit a section of the library if one knows that he or she finds it offensive.     In the @CAPS1 the @CAPS2 people are given many rights that are often taken for granted. The freedom of speech is one. It is a privilege that if taken away would tear @CAPS3 a part. The freedom to say what you please also includes singing. Certain music that is on the shelves at a library does have the right to be there. Just because a certain group of individuals finds the type of music offensive, does not mean everyone also thinks that way. For this reason any genre of music can sit on the shelves at a library.     Another freedom given to the @CAPS2 people is the freedom of press. Anything put onto paper is legal. Criticizing the government or fantasising about school, it is all legal. Books can be offensive to many people. They can persuade one in ways that is unbelievable. Like music, books have many categories. Whatever is put inside those books is allowed to be there no matter what.     Movies are located at libraries as well. They are categorized just as much as books and music. The term ' @CAPS5 judge a book by it's cover' is true sometimes. This can also be used with movies. The title of a moive or book will tell what it is about. Certain movies that are not meant to be seen by children are rated @CAPS6 or @NUM1. These ratings help censor things to a certain extent. It is not illegal for a library to have a rated @CAPS6 movie. It is illegal however to check one out to a child of a young age.     Censorship should not be allowed in libraries. All types of genres of all types of entertainment can be found in libraries. From books to videogames there are ratings and generes. If someone is offended by these types of entertainment they should not visit that section of the library. It is not illegal to have certain types of music, books, movies, etc inside a library. As long as no laws are being broken, there should be no problem.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10078,4,"The author of”Winter Hibiscus “uses this paragraph to conclude her story because it is a symbol of saeng‘s future .Winter Hibiscus is a symbol of saeng for many reasons.  For one, both saeng and the plant are from Vietnam and both struggle to survive and thrive in the new world of the @ORGANIZATION1.  Saeng promises herself that when the plant thrives in the spring, so shall she by retaking her driver’s test.  This symbol of future is extremely important to the story live and this is why ming fon Ho, the author of Winter Hibiscus, chose to end with this vital symbol.   ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19555,7,"To say really I’m not a very patient person, but once I was, I don’t really know how. I was waiting in line to pay for some earphones. I loved those earphones they were blue my favorite color. So I was waiting @NUM1 minutes passed then @NUM2 then I lost track of time but I knew it was a long time. Then the cashiers were having trouble with the registers. So I waited longer and longer until some people were trying to fix it. Then I had to wait even longer. I guess I stayed in that line for more than an hour. I really loved those earphones but as much as I wanted them I just couldn’t wait any longer. I “@CAPS1” and put the earphones aside and left the store. I was really mad that day. Two weeks later we came back luckily the earphones were just where I put them. Yesss!!",10,8,,18,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4510,2,"I think that censorship should be allowed in high school. For one, students who read books or watch the movies that are censorship can learn a lot from it.Also, I believe that if books are bad and not appropiate at school then why are they here? Movies that are not allowed becasue of its rating I think is lame because it might have pictures of naked people and bad language but we are high school students and we should be able to watch them because they are educational and we are mature enough to watch.Nevertheless, I believe that censorship is a good and bad thing but overally I think it should be allowed.     Therefore, books or movies that are censored, shouldn't be because I personally think that students learn better from recent rated r movies then some @DATE1 movied thats in black and white. Kids pay more attention to good interesting movies and the old movies most student fall asleep or just doesn't pay attention at all. So after that, I think that censorship should be allowed at high schools.     If books and movies are so bad then why would they even have some here already. I think its foolish for teachers or administraters to think that we are to immature to watch rated r movies like every kid at school watches them at home,I believe. Yeah I know some movies show some scenes that arn't school related but who cares we will get over it. Overall I think that censorship should be allowed at high schools.     Well then last point is that all these helps us in a way if you really think about it. Get a classroom with computers and for a week let them listen to music while they work and for another week dont let them listen to anything than see which comes out better. Personally listening to music makes me concentrate better and keeps me on coarse to get my work done.SO therefore, I think that censorship should be allowed at high schools.     So you got my opinion on censorship and I hope it helped you out to look at this situation better or clearer. I think rated r movies should be allowed at high schools and any music should to i mean its not like we are in prison,right? So there you got my opinion that censorship should be allowed at high schools",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1300,1,"I do not beileve that computers benefit society. Kids can learn more but they spend too much time on line. When kids talk to people on line they don't know if it is really someone you know. There are techneral problems with them that deileate files. For these reasons is why computers do not benefit society. Kids spend too much time on computers. Computers do teach you more things, but they also have games. Children spend most of their time on games than studying. Chidren can get agressive when loss of exersise. Thats what is happening today. Kids are loosing exersise an are getting hevier. They can evan loose intrest. All they want to do is go on the computer. Kids talk to people, how do they know who they really are? People can make a fake e-mail adress and make a false account on @CAPS1 or @CAPS2-space. These people want children's personal information. Also if you are talking to someone that has a name of someone you know. The person just might be a freand. Like me. I was talking to @CAPS2 cousin on @CAPS1 (the account said his name) but it was his wife. That is why you need to be carful about what you say and who it is you are really talking to. Computers have virouses. When computers get virouses, they can deilete the files you want to save. If you had a video on the news you want to keep it. Youu put it under favorates, they you get a virouse that deleites the file. The video is how off the wedsite. Sometimes your computer doesn't bring you to the wed anymore. You how have to click alot of places to get there. For these resons is why computers are not benefical to society. Kids spend to much time on computers. Kids can talk to people they don't know on them. Computers have technical problems that delete files. Just remember there are many many more resons why computers are not benefical to society.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10598,4,Ii think the author concludes the story with this paragraph cause the author is saying Its gonna be a @CAPS1 year or some change is gonna happen and he feels That could of did better than what they did and is gonna take that test again.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4619,2,"Materials, such as books, music, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive! It's a public library. Not many people would like to find something that seems to hurt or harm them in any way.      Libraries are for people to come in and should be expected to enjoy something, whether it be a book, movie or magazine. When people come in looking for some good information about something, they look forward to finding good tips, and not being let down. Example, with something possibly about someone being racist. That's dissapointment to some. Noone should have to walk in and find something that offenses them. It's not fair.     Now, to parents with children. Would you like for your child going into a library that is allowed to look wherever their little heart desires, and they come upon porn or just anything that would be a bad influence on them? I highly doubt it. Unless, you just don't care about what your kid reads these days, but to the ones who want their child having a good education, well, you understand my statement.     It's just not fair to the ones who go to a library expected to be satisfied, but instead are let down. It does them no good, and it could make your community look bad. Libraries are to help people with information, fun facts, and all around good resources. So, please put the bad books, music, magazines, etc. away!",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15384,6,"Docking a dirigible on top of the Empire State Building is a feat that will most likely never be accomplished. The main overall concern with allowing this is safety. In @CAPS1 @NUM1 the author discusses the infamous destruction of the Hindenburg, and the architects realized the accident would have been even more catastrophic, had it taken place over a city like New York. Nature also played a role in this struggle over making this mast work. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (@CAPS1 @NUM2). The author then discusses how the dirigible would swing around the mast. And trying to weigh it down ""was neither practical nor safe"" (@CAPS1 @NUM2). The final and most obvious reason this mast could not work, was that a law was passed; a law that prohibited dirigibles from flying too low to an urban area. This meant that a dirigible could not legally approach the mast. These architects had very little working for them and almost everything working against them.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21414,8," Can you imagine life without laughter? Life would be so serious, and relationships would be so boring. That favorite comedy? Not funny. America's @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3's, how can you not laugh! Laughter is a way to express emotions in a positive manor. What is it that relationships are built off of? Honesty, trust, understanding, and humor. Do you really want to be around someone @CAPS4 is boring? Because I don't. I believe strong friendships and relationships need laughter in them to keep them interesting. Many of my relationships have begun from a joke, laughter, or me being clumsy. I remember being in a class where I knew no one, and this is a very awkward situation to be in. I sat in the back of the class, with one other person, her name was @PERSON1. It started off quite and no on saying anything, so I decided to tell an extremely cheesy joke. As soon as I told it, there was a silence afterward, where we just stared at each other. Seconds later we busted out in laughter, you know the kind of uncontrollable laugh, where you cannot breath, and your tear ducts are overwhelmed to the point where tears slide down your cheeks? When this happened there is a sudden bond, a spark of friendship between the two of us. From that point we were inseparable. For the rest of the school year, we were partners on every project, multitasking our way through them. Half the time we would be making up funny scenarios, and laughing until we cried. The other half we would have make a fantastic project using the inspiration of each other to get the work done. I am an all around ""laughter enthusiast!"" I can make the smallest things funny, its a quality I enjoy very much @CAPS4 knew a silly joke could go so far? Laughter cannot be the only element to a developed relationship, you need trust, honesty and various qualities to keep a healthy relationship. My point is, how can you maintain a friendship with someone @CAPS4 you can laugh with, or be yourself with? It is human nature to laugh, you can't always be serious. I don't think that I could go a day without laughing. Laughing can be the antidote for a frown. Moral of the story, laugh!",21,20,,41,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3460,2,"As many would agree, censorship is a growing topic of concern throughout the world. I personally feel that censorship is necessary to a certain extent. If one feels the content of music, a movie, or a book is questionable, he or she has the option of reading, listening, or watching.      Among many deabted materials, movies have ratings, just as music has 'bleeps'. Movies are rated '@CAPS1' for all audiences, '@CAPS2' standing for parental guidence, '@NUM1' for parental guidence for ages @NUM2 and older, and lastly '@CAPS3' meaning that anyone under the age of @NUM3 is either suggested or required to have an adult present during the viewing of the film. At home, the ratings are all based on the parent's preference. At the movie theatre, the restrictions become a sort of law. Anyone below the age of thirteen is not permitted to see a movie that is '@NUM1' or '@CAPS3' unless accompanied by an adult (anyone @NUM5 or older). Anyone who isn't @NUM3 or older @MONTH1 not enter a movie rated '@CAPS3' unless accompanied by someone @NUM7 or older. Depending on where you are, the restrictions @MONTH1 be more or less harsh. Ultimately, the rating system is intended to force parents to choose what is and isn't appropriate for their child.      As for music on the radio, all 'curse words' are 'bleeped' out. If a person wants to buy their own music, artists are required to make two of the same album, one with censors and one without. Thus creating a decision usually for the parents, usually assuming they are the ones to but the album or the music for their child.       When it comes to books, there are no ratings, just genres letting the reader know who the author's intended audience is. Types of genres include 'adult', 'young adult' and 'children' sections in libraries and book stores. Just like music and television, the final choice in the purchase is all dependent on the parents.    Even though many restrictions put in place, there are still some faults to the system. Obviously if you are @NUM2 or younger, you most likely won't have identification. This leaves the person working at the movie theatre the option to let in who they believe to be of age. Looks @MONTH1 be decieving. Buying music from the internet doesn't require any type of identification either. How can they prove your age? When purchasing a book, not many cashieers would stop a child and say, 'that's innappropriate for you'. Maybe kids of all ages should have identification. Although these are all underlying problems in the censorship system, it seems to all lead back to the parents.     Censorship is a huge topic of discussion for the parents of today's young and growing society, but in reality, if they have an issue with the content, they themselves will either rid of the material or prohibit the use and or puchase of it. All in all, it's about the parents and their personal preference",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18994,7,"When I was patient I ask my mom to buy me a bike and I had to wait and wait for like two weeks for a bike on my birthday I wanted a fish, and I ask my mom to buy me a fish she didn’t say anything so I keep asking and asking and asking so I stoped asking for three days then she got me a fish then it died. Four weeks later then I ask for a turtle and she said yea she will then I waited and waited tell she got me one then I was happy that’s when I was patient.",5,4,,9,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15351,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example, one was safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (@NUM1) This shows that docking dirigibles can be harmful as some buildings and many people can be negatively affected. The large business district is too densely populated to allow such a thing. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@NUM2) This obstacle builders faced brought up that lives are yet again in danger, not to mention very expensive damage that allowing dirigibles can cause. Another obstacle builders faced was ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@NUM3) All of these obstacles that the builders faced were very important and paved the way for the idea of dirigibles to be docked attop of the Empire State Building to be disarmed. The dangers involved were too significance and the top of the building now much safer purposes.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13347,5,"The mood of this memoir is grateful. Narciso Rodriguez's parent both move to @LOCATION2 from Cuba to give their children a better life than what they had. Narciso's parents lived in a one room house untill they moved to New Jersey, were Narciso grew up. Inside that home the family created a beautiful Cuban communitie. The heart of the house was the kitchen. Where they played Cuban music all the time. The part of New Jersey were the Rodriguez family lived was filled with Spanish, Cuban, and Italian imigrants. The community was like a big family, ""the cultures cam together in great solidarity and friendship."" All of these cultures that came together really showed Narciso what a ""family"" really means. She never would have know what that ment or have had these oppertunities if her parents hadn't been selfless. They came here and had to start their lives over. As Narciso says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9649,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph “Saeng vowed silently to herself” because she Saeng wants to do in proper time and season. “winter season”, the land or soil was so cold that plants was not able to grow properly. ”Hibiscus costs nineteen dollars”, and she Saeng failed the test. ”There was frail, wiry beauty to her Saeng mother that touched Saeng deeply”, she Saeng mother is shining when she worked to plants. These all are the description that concludes in the past which want to make correction and shine like her mother and also to pass the test.  ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20763,8,"                                   @ORGANIZATION1 blew my mind the first time I seen her. She was my other half. Everything we did together was perfect. She made me laugh with everything she said. She was my better half would sum it all up. I still remember when I first seen her in @CAPS1. The nickname of the town was @CAPS1 @CAPS4 hell because of where it was located, in the middle of nowhere. We met when I was on vacation at @CAPS1. My parents had just retired a few months before and were looking for a cozy retirement home away from the big city's and more closer @CAPS4 the good eastern @LOCATION2 mountains that seem @CAPS4 always have snowy tops and beautiful landscapes. We ended up staying there for a week or so in this little trailer that we took with us. That thing was hell on earth, every time we stopped I would have @CAPS4 set everything up even if we weren't going @CAPS4 use it. It was a two hour process and after the hundredth time you can see how I would get bored. looking for a great house @CAPS4 stay in that town was not hard @CAPS4 come by. They were all amazing homemade houses. Never was a contractor paid @CAPS4 build these houses because the men of the town made them by hand. They were incredible two story oak made houses that look like they could take a tornado coming out with only scratches. We ended up finding this one house that was so amazing that I wanted @CAPS4 live there right off the bat, surprisingly my parents wanted it @CAPS4. But the sad thing is is that we had @CAPS4 sell our house first or we wouldn't be able @CAPS4 afford it, so we put that house on the ""@CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6"" and headed back @CAPS4 the trailer.  We had another @NUM1 days or so there and I was officially bored out of my mind. I needed something @CAPS4 do besides stock the fire and make sure the hot dogs did not burn. I jumped on my dads bike and rode into town ( the trailer park was located about half a mile out of town). I arrived in town @CAPS4 be very disappointing. It was just as boring riding a bike around town and stopping inside the shop @CAPS4 make small talk just as sitting by the fire in @NUM2 degree weather. In my mind it was just another boring vacation but little did I know it was about @CAPS4 get a lot more fun. I woke up the next day and took my shower and got ready for the day. It seemed like another boring day in hell from what I could tell. @CAPS4 me fun was doing stuff I normally would not do. But back then @CAPS1 and places like that just did not cut it because all I did that @DATE1 was go @CAPS4 places like this and do nothing so it was expected of me @CAPS4 be bored. I rode my bike around a corner and I saw a bunch of guys and girls that looked like they just came from fishing or tubing or something fun, so I rode over @CAPS4 see what was going on. I started talking @CAPS4 a guy named @CAPS8. He told me they just got back from a youth group get together on the snake were they went tubing and cliff jumping. I was in aw. That seemed crazy @CAPS4 me. Cliff jumping? Tubing? It seemed way @CAPS4 crazy for a youth group. But I guess that's just how they do things in @CAPS1. They just don't go have a picnic they go do crazy stuff that I personally have not done any of the things they were talking about because for one i not crazy and for two I have never had the chance. We kept talking and before they all left they invited me @CAPS4 go on there nature hike up on top of this mountain. I was more than happy @CAPS4 oblige seeing as I love hiking.  I woke up in the @TIME1 feeling all hipped up and ready @CAPS4 rock. I had my permission slip signed and I was ready for a good ole hike. I jumped on my dads bike and rode into town at five in the @TIME1 and arrived at the youth administrators house just in time for a protein shake for breakfast ( he offered it @CAPS4 me I did not ask). We drove @CAPS4 the mountain and at the base there were around @NUM3 @CAPS4 @NUM4 people all in hiking gear. It surprised me because I was not expecting so many people. That's when I met @LOCATION1. She was gorgeous so I was attracted @CAPS4 her immediately. We began the climb and I began @CAPS4 talk @CAPS4 her. We were like two pees in a pod. I couldn't get enough of her and her of me. Her laugh made me extremely happy. She was my other half. All I can remember is her amazing laugh.",19,20,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18783,7,I  am patient  every  even  this  year  for  @CAPS1 so  I can get  some  @CAPS2. I was buying  @CAPS2  but  I can’t buy  any more  because   @CAPS1 is  coming up  that  why I half to be  patient because it will seen longer  if  I keen getting excited.    Every day  is  patient sometimes I can’t wait to  get  out  of  school so  I can  play. I’m always trying to be patient because it’s one holiday after another each one gets more exiting.  Every kid tries but being patient is one of the most hard thing to do.  How I’m patient is I act like nopthing  exciting  is even comimg up.,4,5,,9,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3569,2,"Censorship. Sometimes it's needed, sometimes it's not. Children of today are exposed to many adult things, whether it is watching tv or a movie, or just witnessing things at home. I believe censorship is neccesary for young children, they shouldn't be exposed to bad launguage, or graphic scenes, or something that is strictly for adults. They will experience these things one day, and they need to be mature enough to understand them. Teenagers on the other hand is a whole different story. They want to hear the bad language and see graphic, gory scenes. It's all about action to the boys, drama for the girls, and everyone wants to hear those juicy details. Censorship won't stop them from moving on to the next movie or book on the shelf that has all these things in them. Even though all teens act like it's not important and that their old enough to see all this, somethimes their probably not. If you think that telling your teenage daughter or son that their not allowed to watch a movie or read a book because of something it says, they'll probably just go log onto the internet and see it anyway. Nothing is censored on the internet, so if your all about censorship, don't go onto to the internet.Adults do not need censorship. There adults, they can make their own decisions and they know what they want to watch or read.Removing things from the shelves of libraries is sometimes needed. There should be sections, children, teens, and adults. There are ratings on movies, and books are written for a certain age limit so everything should be placed accordingly. Censorship is needed, but your parents or guardian are the ones who will most likely tell you whether or not your going to be able to read a book or a watch a movie. Some people find things more offensive than others. So censorship is really in the eye of the beholder. Personally I believe in censorship, but to others, its a waste of time. I wouldn't want my child watching a movie where someone gets brudally murdered and where there cussing every other word. Music can come uncensored and censored, it just depends what you want to hear. Censorship is either loved or hated, its all one big opinion.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16205,6,some of the obstacles that the builders faced while allowing dirigibles to dock there would be that they had a lack of suitable landing area. one of the main obstacles that occurred would be nature. the shifting of the Air Currents were constanily shifting. the back of the ship was constanily shifting.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7270,3,"The feature of the setting do affect cyclist in such ways making him illusionalistic and dehydrated. He saw all idea that a juice factory was working, when it was abounded. He saw rusty pipes, this made him dehydrated because he knew those pipes could never produce water.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9835,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because she wants us to know that she’s not giving up on her test. The author wants to inform the readers that she’s not giving up “…then I will take that teat again” which clearly states she still has hope. Author wants to continue on her test to find the right flower. This is why the author concluded the story with that paragraph.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
962,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, I think computers are a good thing. It is good because you get to learn about forein places. Keep in touch with family and friends and it is good entertainment. First, computers are great to learn about forein places. On the computers you could research a place and look at pictures before you go. If I wanted to go to a far away place like @LOCATION3. I would go on the computer and find the best part to go to and I would look at different hotels to stay at the reviews it has gotten. Aslo, if someone were to do a paper on a different country or even state that they've never been to they would go on the computer. Sure, you can get the same info from books but you can filter out what you don't need on the computer. In my history calss, I had to do a report on the state of @LOCATION2. I have never been there so I want on the computer. Books could have given me the same info but computers are always up to date and accurate. Seecond, computers help you keep in touch with family and friends. There are numerous websites that allow you to share photos and talk to friends or family. I recently signed up for facebook and I am able to talk to friends instead of using mytexts and running over the phone bill every mont. My dad has a facebook too, he talks to people he hesn't seen since he moved heve from the @LOCATION1 white mountains. Some other sites are aim, aol, and myspace. Lastly computers are good entertainment. Computers allow you to see that concert you didn't go to or that movie that's never on tv. When I went to a skate board demo at skate lair I had tons of fun. The other day though, I started thinking about it. I went on youtube and type in""nike sb skate lair demo"" and clicked on it. i watched it and about halfway through it I saw my face! i was so exited. Computer also allow you to check the news and weather. This is good because if you are on the road and you want to see what's going on you can take out a laptop and checked the weather or news. That is why I think computers are necessary. Yes people do stay on four hours at a time but most people only go on for a small amount.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21383,8,"Many things are said to bring people together. These things can vary from favorite foods to fashion taste or even disliking the same people, but nothing can bring two people as close as a good laugh can. Laughing will always lighten the mood, bring out a winning smile and from time to time, a tear to the eye. Laughing makes the bad days manageable and the great days fantastic. In my perspective, the world wouldn't go around without a good laugh every now and then. By 'good laugh', I @CAPS5't mean the kind that makes you happy for a moment, I mean the kind that brings tears to your eyes and creates a shaking feeling in your stomach. The kind of laugh that you remember. I've had many of those moments, but one that I cherish most just happened to occur during a school day. A couple weeks ago I was having a pretty nice day, sure its @CAPS1 so the weather dampened my spirits a little, but I was doing alright. I had my normal classes, got my average homework load, and then it came time for @CAPS2. @CAPS2 is basically study hall at my school. I sit at a round table in there with a few of my friends and we talk about nearly everything. Everyday, I sit by @PERSON1. @PERSON1 and I occasionally sit and talk with everyone else, but we tend to disingage ourselfs from the others and lock ourselves in our own private world of inside jokes, smart ass laughs and people watching. So that day during @CAPS2, I can't quite recall what we were talking about at our table, we all just couldn't keep ourselfs from laughing. Most of the laughing was just giggles, and some of it was straight up, hardcore red faced laughing. After we all settled down from the most recent up roar of chuckling, @PERSON1 started talking. She somehow spit out the words, ""@CAPS4 it you guys! You're making my eyes hurt!"" amoungst the giggles still blossoming out of her mouth. After she said that, I became puzzled.I just stared at her and stuttered, ""...what?"". I was sure she made a mistake and said eyes instead of stomach, but after she replied with ""@CAPS5't your eyes hurt when you laugh really hard?!"" I lost control. I was laughing so hard I couldn't breathe and I felt like I was going to pee! See, the funny part is, @PERSON1 is @CAPS6. So the idea of her eyes hurting from laughing really hard is just uncontrollably funny. After @PERSON1 and I caught our breath, we asked other @CAPS7 around the room if their eyes hurt when they laugh and guess what? They @CAPS8! This only made us laugh harder. This occasion instantly became another inside joke we treasure.That inside joke is by far one of the funniest ones, and it being funny, just makes it funnier! Everytime she laughs I ask, ""@CAPS8 your eyes hurt?"" and we just burst into more laughter. The idea of the joke alone brings a smile to my face, that being the reason why laughing is such a big part in our world. It brings happiness, joy and love. Well, actually it brings just about every possitive emotion. I @MONTH1 not be a doctor yet, but I know I'm right when I say; everyone should get their daily dose of laughter. Laughter can cure just about anything. ",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21192,8,      Have you ever laughed so hard that you peed?That @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not have happened to me. In my story I'm going to talk about the funniest time I have ever had with my best friend @CAPS1.       How it all started was that it was my best friends birthday and she was going to spend the night at her grandmas house. She invite only me to come with her so I couldn't say no. @CAPS1's grandma owned a @CAPS2 @CAPS3. She was old and was in a @CAPS2 @CAPS3 club. I don't know about you but it always seems to me that old people have to be in some kinda of club. So anyways in her her club what the did was go on trips. @CAPS1 and I thought that would be fun to go on a trip. So we meant everyone at @ORGANIZATION1.         @CAPS1's grandma let us go intro the store to buy drinks for that trip. I wanted @CAPS4. The bottle was really cool. It had a top like a water bottle would have. I got the red kind cause it the best. We got are drinks and @CAPS1's grandma said to go to the car while she talked to the adults about the trip.      So here is the funny part of the story. I got into the car first. I was pretty thirsty so I decided to unscrew the cap it pulled open to paper back on the sell. I twisted the cap back on and took a drink. Mean while @CAPS1 got into the car and closed the door behind her cause her grandma was talking to the adults. While she was closing it she got her hair caught in the door. She was laughing and yelling at me to come help her. I was laughing too hard to come help her. I had my drink between my legs and the cap was open and remember its like a water bottle cap. I laughed so hard that I squeezed my legs together and my juice went straight into the front seat. It didn't get and were else just into her grandma seat. It was like a rocket it was so funny. @CAPS1 with her head still stuck in the door asked what that notice was on the seat. I told her it was my juice. Then was both started laughing.         I don't know why but @CAPS1 just pulled on her head and her head was no longer stuck. The was like ten pieces of her hair stuck in the car door. She looked at the seat and said we have to tell her grandma about it. I didn't want her to be mad at me cause her seats were white. I thought it would stain. But we ended up telling her. She told us to go get napkins from the bathroom. The whole time we were going to the bath room me and @CAPS1 were just laughing so hard. We cleaned up the mess and I didn't get in trouble.         I guess that I have never peed my pants laughing but I almost did that day. After that day me and my best friend @CAPS1 always laugh at that story. I am so glad we went on an old people @CAPS2 @CAPS3 club trip.                       ,15,20,,35,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1599,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I believe that computers are not necessary. Some believe that they help us learn, but I just say so do books. Some people believe @CAPS2 can help to be more hand eye coordinated, so does playing catch. Most believe that internet teaches about people in faraway places, I say why not visit those places then you'll know more than what was typed in a computer. @CAPS2 it was computers against books I definetly would conqure with whomever roots for books. A good book is healthy. To me, reading a book on the computer is one of two things, unhealthy and unethnical! You can't read a book on the computer and even @CAPS2 you could it is not as fun as turning the pages of a beautiful paperback or hard-covered book. I Believe that you can learn so much from what you read in a book, (A real book)! When you type on a computer, do all that, ""clickety, clickety""!, you say that it's learning because you learn to type without looking, hand-eye coordination. I say no! that is not natural. Why not go out side and throw a ball to one another? That's a real way to show hand-eye coordination. It's a fun game and it's easy, plus it teaches hand-eye coordination. When you want to surf the web to find a nice vacation spot, you should really just visit that place. Flip a coin heads @LOCATION3 tails @LOCATION1, @CAPS2 you pick heads, stop surfing the web to get info on that place!. go fly there and surf the totaly radical waves. Surf the real waves next the artificial ones dudes! So as I restate, computers might seem okay and i guess they aren't all bad, but they are not my cup of coffee. So take time away from that computer and go read a book or play a game of catch. You know what hows about a trip to @LOCATION4 or @LOCATION2 or @LOCATION3. Who knows, it will definetly be an experience, for sure.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
254,1,"I walked into my living room. I saw my brother on the computer talking to his friends on facebook. I thought to my self he's always on the computer never for any school reason. People always says we don't need computers I personaly agree with the statement. In the town @ORGANIZATION1 everybody mostly has computers. Without a computer to look up for content things, you have to go to the library and check out a bank. Just the other @DATE1 my friend @PERSON1 went to the library and checked out a book about the @CAPS1 culter. He loved that book he read it @DATE1 in and @DATE1 out, he read it for a book report on different culters. When he handed it into the teacher the @DATE1, when he reached the classroom the teacher looked @CAPS2 happy when she gave him back his test he had an @NUM1. He didn't use the internet your computers not mobile like a book if you wanted to learn about something while your traveling in you car you can't plug your computer in and use it unlike a book. Also books are usually funnier to read. Not haveing a computer can conclude to a lot more things like exercising. While my brother is inside all @DATE1 me and my friends are outside playing football, basketball, baseball, soccer, kirkball, and dogeball. We are very thin because @CAPS3 what we do almost every @DATE1. Unlike my brother were he is obeast because @CAPS3 all he done were before he had the computer he was as thin as us. It is also unhealth to be on the computer all @DATE1 because that can lead to staying update at night, don lead to missing the bus, and also lead to bad grades. Where when we are done with are gaine we whatch a little t.v.. then go to sleep to regain our energy we usually have atleast @NUM2 hrs. of sleep ever @DATE1 which lets us make it through school. We also make the right choses in food to eat to have more energy such as fruit and vegitibales. Were my brother eats all the junk food which helped lead to obesity. Not having a computer can help you spend more time with your family. When we go out to eat my brother is always in a push to get back on to the computer dosen't let us enjoy our food. He usually is @CAPS2 much in a rush he picks off of other people's @CAPS2 they would be finished faster, when every one wants to enjoy then food. When we want to go out to the movies my brother stays home on the computer. Even if we buy a movie and whatch it at home he won't whatch it with us he's on the computer. It really makes my mom, dad, brothers, and sisters mad that he won't do any thing but play on the computer. Even when are whole family gose out side to play a sport he won't come out and play. It's like he's not part of the familiy anymore. Its like he forgot we were even @CAPS3 the reason why I think computes should be in the state of @LOCATION1. If can lead to and relly bad grades. @CAPS2 if you want your kids healthier, better grades, and spend more time with your family then ethier sell your computer or This is happening all over the world.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6851,3,"The setting for the cyclist is a hard and dangerous one. He had little water, and his area had tough terrains. “I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June” (@NUM1). He is dehydrated and he still has a long way to go. I went on a bike ride that was many miles long  in @LOCATION2, and we did not have water because we could not take a break. The terrain was tough, just like the author’s terrain. The camel he was in was affecting his brain, and he just wanted to get it over with. I am just glad I don’t have to bike in that terrain.  ",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18193,7,"I don’t have much patience, but I’ll tell you a story about a time that I did. It was a sunny day outside and it was @DATE1 after school and I had no homework. So I invited my friends over and we were going to landslide skate park. We were all at my home but @CAPS1 wasn’t. My mom said “@CAPS2 hes not here in two minutes we have to go with out him”. So I was mad I was writing a note to put on the door that reads “@CAPS1, we had to go with out you because you were late! Sorry be on time next time.-@CAPS4”. But when I was signing the note he pulled up. That was the story when I had patients.",6,9,,15,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1464,1,"Dear Readers @ORGANIZATION1 the @LOCATION3, In this time almost everything @CAPS33 @CAPS39 revolves around tecknology, @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, with the @CAPS10. Changeing around @CAPS4 so quickly and without @CAPS5 @CAPS39 @CAPS33 still have time to stop and smell the roases? People are no longer at treadwell looking at the distinguished @CAPS6 in the fall or at @ORGANIZATION2 or playing @CAPS7 or baseball, but insted sitting on a chair @ORGANIZATION2 a video on @CAPS8 or playing games like @CAPS9 or @CAPS10 @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS11, In @LOCATION5 helth problems have become an epidemic! Why? Because @CAPS12 than enjoying the fresh air and open fields @CAPS13 has to offer @CAPS33 are enjoying @CAPS14 @NUM1 or our @ORGANIZATION4 @CAPS15 @CAPS16! As a @CAPS40 @LOCATION5 @CAPS21 @DATE1 has gone from @NUM2 @CAPS19 (@LOCATION1, @LOCATION2) @LOCATION6, @LOCATION4, @ORGANIZATION4-@CAPS17 and @CAPS18) having a @PERCENT2 @CAPS35 for obesity to @CAPS29 @NUM3 @CAPS19 with a @PERCENT1 @CAPS35! Thats more @PERCENT3 @ORGANIZATION1 @LOCATION5! What other rate is going @CAPS20 incresingly @CAPS21 they @DATE1's? The number @ORGANIZATION1 homes that own Computers and they @CAPS35 rate each home owns! Dr. @DR1 @CAPS22 @CAPS23 a @CAPS24 in they @ORGANIZATION4 Your @CAPS25 @CAPS26, he found that in they last @NUM4 @CAPS27 they number @ORGANIZATION1 type @NUM5 diabetics has almost doubled! @PERSON1 ahead reacher at @ORGANIZATION6 (@ORGANIZATION1) @CAPS28 an article for @ORGANIZATION3. In his article he exclaimed that, ""@CAPS29 @PERCENT4 @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS30 @ORGANIZATION4 own more than one computer per house - hold! @CAPS14, @CAPS15 and @ORGANIZATION5 are all doing verry well in this economic slumps, while sporting goods, books and exersise equipment are doing the right. @CAPS33 at @ORGANIZATION6 see this as a main cause for @CAPS32 growing lack @ORGANIZATION1 exercise and increase in time on home computers. Also just as important is how all this time spent on computers if effecting children, ""@CAPS33 @CAPS34 on @CAPS35 @NUM5 1/@NUM5 having on computer a day."" @CAPS36 as @PERSON2, a writer for the @ORGANIZATION4. It has become a parent that children are @CAPS34 in less time playing sports and more time on there ""amazing @ORGANIZATION4 @CAPS15 laptop"" playing video games! I am @NUM8, I have been playing @CAPS7 in @LOCATION3 for @NUM9 @CAPS27! @CAPS21 I was @NUM10. The @LOCATION3 travel team use to have so manny people try out it was difficult to get on, @CAPS38 so few people play that for barly need to try out! When I grow @CAPS20 I am most likely going to end put a job somowhere working for some big busniss like google teachings things need to be on so I will probohaly be working on computer, so for @CAPS38 I want to enjoy being a kid! he shouldent let kids waste these on video games, they will waste enoufgh @ORGANIZATION1 there lives behrind a computer later in life. @CAPS33 are talking about the health @ORGANIZATION1 this @CAPS40! Americus futer, the children @ORGANIZATION1 tommorow, @CAPS39 @CAPS33 want a @CAPS40 wher everyone has diabeties and diveron there computers? Through the @CAPS10 around @CAPS4 @MONTH1 change @CAPS33 need keep one thing the same no matter how difficult it is . That is @CAPS33 need to @CAPS41 @CAPS20 and help keep the @CAPS10 in good shape and @CAPS33 can't @CAPS39 that from behind a computer screen. Thank you for your time.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12287,5,"In the memoir by Narciso Rodriguez he created a mood of happiness and joyfulness. Narciso Rodriguez creates this mood by showing the generosity his parents have towards their son, family and friends. I also feel another mood that Narciso expresses is love.iI say this because his parents sacrifice everything they had because they wanted a better Life for their son. ""The faith that this struggle with lead them and their children to better times dove them to endure these hard times"". In this quote is love. Narciso's parent's new that for him to have a better life they would need to sacrifice thirs. That is why i feel love is a mood protrayed in the memoir.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10161,4,She ended it with that paragraph because she wanted to prove even though she misses the “old centry” she will adapt and survive.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1084,1,"Computers is a good benefit for people. First, computer is a helpful machine in diffrent ways, like I personally go on computer and check for my homework with it. Computer is also good because whenever you don’t know something, you can just go on the internet and search it. Computers won't effect out health if we don’t use it for a long time, computers could help students making project. By using word, exell and other microsoft ware. So I think computers are a great machine for people to have. Secondly, using computer could also socialize with people, many students inculding me uses face book, so even if we are not right next to each other, we can still talk. Computers could be used to make new friends too, “but their is people you don’t know and we are not surpose to give out our information.” said @PERSON1 our health teacher. Computers could be useful to friends that live far away, if your friend moved to another state, you could use computer to chat with him, their is many ways to social with computers. Lastly, exercising is important to everyone, but using computers doesn’t mean we can not go outside and exersice anymore, maybe computers are addictive, but if you keep track of time and maybe use the computer for - half an hour at a time, you can still get the exercise you need. Exercising is an easy thing to do, children likes to exercise so their sould not be a problem, like my nabor alway come over to my house and ask if I want to play football while I was talking with someone on the computers but I still went outside and play, so computer is a great machine thats not very addictive so parents doesn’t have to worry about children exercising. I think computers have great effects on people, like going online to do a research or talk to friends. Grown ups need them to work. So that proves computer is a great machine.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12908,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez had created a very warm and loved mood. He explained a little about his parents when the first came here to @LOCATION1. Narciso also tells us that in 1961 his home was a traditional cuban home. He explains his parents culinary skills, and how he was grateful to have gotten them. Also how there was always music that was like an endless celebration. His parents ""always kept their arms and their doors open"" (@NUM1) to many of whom they considered family. They had know that if they needed help they would do the same. Later in the memoir Narciso gets to a personal feelings of grateitude, and love. He explains how his parents wanted a better life for their family, even though it meant leaveing so much behind. Their families, friends, and jobs in the country they loved. It takes great bravery. Narciso understands this and expresses it freely.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4249,2,"I believe that people should not be able to remove books, movies, magazines, etc. from shelfs of the libraires. If someone takes a movie, book or magazine offensive they should contact the auother of the pieace and can complain or give their thoughts. Even if someone does find someones work in a wrong way, people have their own opionons and thoughts about everthing in life and are allowed to voice their bellifs and disbeilfs. Also, people can read on the front or back of other peoples work which summarize what the work is going to be about or what the work is talking about. People can decide then if the would like to read or watch further into it. Everyone in this country is allowed to say what they think and if someone takes the time to get their voice published then others might want to hear what others think. People can disagree, no one has to agree with anything anyone says. It is alright to not agree with another person says but everyone does have the right to stand up and say what they think about the situation. For example if my coaches were to tell me that they think im doing something wrong in gymnastics or they think something doesn't look good when I do, I let them speak. I let them tell me what they think would look better or would give more points. Then after they're done talking I give my thoughts and say '@CAPS1 I think this because this' I try to reason with them. For one its more respectful and for two everyone can have their own thought about something. And who knows they actually might be right if you give them a chance to speak. But, if you really don't like what another pieace of work might say you can always not read what they wrote, or watch what they produced. There is no need to be rude. If you strongly diagree you can always write your own book or publish an article voicing your own thoughts, that way someone can diagree or agree with how you feel about a certain subject. That is why I feel that they should keep all books, magaiznes, movies on shelfs. Everyone is allowed to express themselves and explain their actions toward a certain matter.                                                                      Sincerly,                                                                         @PERSON1",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
253,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you think computer's are good to use? More and more people use computer, but not everyone agrees that this benefits soceiety I srong disagree. My first reason is because computer's are not safe. My second reason is computer's could get you in a lot of troble. My @CAPS3 reason is you never know what could happen on the computer. Read on and see why I disagree. First @CAPS4 gonna tell you why I disagree. The reason why I disagree is because computer's are not safe because you could have someone trace where you live at then what? Second - computer's could get you into a lot of trobe such as posting things online or saying mean thing's to people. Next computer's are bad because if someone like's you and you say I dont like you they could post mean and hurt full thing's and then if you friend's see it you will probably get mad. Finally - in concusion thease are all my reason's why I think computer's are not good. You never know what coud happen on a computer there's website's there and some could start a virus on your computer. Also I think computer's are not good because computer's lead to no good so keep your child away from computers. Also be careful what chu @CAPS2.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4288,2,"Hi, my name is @CAPS1 and I am writing this article today to talk about things that shouldn't be in the library. There are many, many things that shouldn't be exposed to children such as, sexcism,racism,rarted @CAPS3, pornography. So i am here today to tell you all about them things.      First off books that have racist comments in them should not be exposed to our young children.Why? Because that is setting a bad example for them so they might think they can say and do the things thats the book does. Another thing is sex in books. I know you have read stories that talks about sex and how to do it and all sorts of things. So to sum this up they shouldn't be allowed in public libraries.     The second thing that shouldn't be allowed in public libraries is @CAPS2-@CAPS3 movies. Things such as horror movies, porn, and many more. So young children should not be exposed to these such things because it damages there mind at a young age. It teaches them things that they shouldn't know about until they get a little bit older.      The last reason why I feel that many things shouldn't be in the libraries are for the @CAPS4 magazines. Those magazines just show everything they have all type of naked photos in them. These really do not need to be exposed to our young children because. Our little girls will think it is ok for them to take naked photos of themselves and post it in books and on the internet.      So all in all, all of these things should be banded from the libraries for many different reasons. So the @LOCATION1 should think about what I am saying. Just think if it were your children being exposed to innappropiate things",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4428,2,"A library card is one thing a kid always looked forward to. It's the first piece of identification that many kids have that they are allowed to carry around themselves.The card opens up a whole new world of entertainment and storys that can take you anywhere you want to go. Once a kid owned a library card, they were allowed to check out any book they wanted out of the huge selection of items in a library. But how do you keep a young child from checking out a book, movie, or magazine about inappropriate adult material? A solution to this problem should be formed so that people can be protected from material they don't want to see in a book, movie, or any other source of entertainment.     Libraries today normally have a specified children's section, where picture books and short stories litter the shelves. The rest of the building is a scattering of books and other materials sorted only by author name and genre. The only way to understand what the item is about is to flip through the pages or read the back cover and try to find a hint of how the plot goes. This could be dangerous at times because not all materials give a specific summary of what happens.      I once rented a movie expecting it to be a scary thriller about a killer in a trailer park. It ended up being scary for another reason, as multiple uncensored sex scenes were displayed throughout the first couple minutes of the feature. I had no idea the movie was going to involve scenes like that and I was disgusted that there was no warning. I believe items like that should be placed in a seperate area or at least be required to give a summary of the kind of offensive material in them. Libraries could collect viewer comments, allowing people who had checked out an item to write what they thought about it. People could then read these comments before checking out that item. Viewer comments would be a good way to get someones else's opinion on what the item contained before another decided to rent it.     Another effective way to help this problem would be to give materials a certain rating, like the ratings of movies when they come out in theaters. A specific rating would warn viewers or readers from checking out an item that is offensive or inappropriate. Libraries could also give specific age ranges according to the ratings on an item, not allowing anyone under a certain age limit to check out a book from the building. Ratings would help keep offensive books out of a child's hands, or that of anyone else who didn't want to be exposed.     Libraries hold all different kinds of materials about any subject you could think of. They can open a whole new world to learn and be entertained but also a world of inappropriate items. I believe items with offensive material should be either put in a seperate area, or given a certain rating in order to warn people before checking it out. Allowing viewers to make comments about the material could also be very helpful. Libraries are a wonderful place full of great stories and adventures, so they should not be polluted with offensive and inappropriate material",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16069,6,"The fact that these dirigibles are so big and filled with hydrogen and helium the point at the top would have poped it. Also the Winds were always too high so they would never be able to connect the blimp to the building. Lastly the fact that the German dirigible, Hindenburg burned like that they were afraid for that to happen. Especially in a crowded area such as New York.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21079,8," Have you ever been in an an awkward situation and lightened the mood with laughter? I have, as have many. I find that laughter makes people more comfortable, which allows them to be their own person. Laughter @MONTH1 even help some to attract a positive, friendly crowd, who enjoy funny, happy people. Laughter @MONTH1 not work in this way for everyone, but here are some ways it has helped me. I was at a homeschoolers' group in @LOCATION1 years ago and didn't know anyone there. After walking around a while this girl talked to me. She was funny, and being able to laugh made me more comfortable and I had a fun time. I just had to fin d the right person. Another time where laughter might've helped was when I was invited to a birthday party of a friend I hadn't seen in over two years. Several others were there I hadn't seen in a long while. The whole visit was awkward and all I wanted to do was blend in. I acted like everyone else, but if I'd had laughed and been more comfortable I would've been my own person. When I first came to public school I was nervous to meet new people, and what kind of people there would be. After a week or so people got to see my personality, the funny, happy, laughable person inside, and that clicked with a lot of people. That's why I'm friends with the people I'm friends with now, because our alike personalities matched. Laughter brought me to a good place in life. Laughter can make a lot of people happy and comfortable in awkward situations. It can encourage people to show their own personality and attract people like themselves. I think the world would be a happier place if everyone could laugh.",19,15,,34,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7539,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in this story alot. Having unreliable directions, barely enough water for the journey, poor road conditions and other hazards like the heat and animals made this a very difficult journey for the cyclist. Starting the journey the cyclist recieved bad information on how to get to his destonation which lead him on a long hard journey with not much water. He says in the story “The speed limit was @NUM1. I was doing a water-depleting @NUM2”. This means he was running out of water too fast for the amount of land he was covering. Another feature of the netting that affected him was that the road conditions got worse and worse untill he reached a high way late in his journey. He said “flat road was replaced by short rolling hills."" This means the faster, easy, to ride terrain was replaced by slower harder to ride on terrain. These features of the setting could have been very dangerous and maybe factal and affected the cyclist alot living this story. ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21425,8," Many people say that the people who laugh more live longer. I remember when I was ten years old, I was going to learn how to ride a bike. Little did I know it was going to be a hard task. My brother said I didn't need training wheels. Although I was scared, looking at other kids ride their bikes made me gather up courage to learn how to ride a bike.  It was the big day, it was a perfect day to learn how to ride a bike. As I walked down the stairs all geared up and ready I began to feel @LOCATION1. I went outside, my big brother was waiting for me. He had a helmet and the bike, he began to go over the basic rules. Slowly I started to get on the bike, I was confident I could do it.  Next it was time to gear up and put my helmet on. My heart was pounding, I could feel my blood going through my veins. Giving the first peddle I fell and hit the ground extremely hard. All I wanted to do was run home and cry on my moms lap. I looked up at my brother, he asked me if I was okay. Up until this day I can remember laughing instead of crying, after all crying wasn't going to make the pain go away nor teach me how to ride a bike.  Finally, I got back on that bike and peddled and peddled. I can remember my brother telling me that laughter is the best medicine around. I was laughing as a peddled, sometimes I think that maybe laughter is what made me accomplish my goal to learn how to ride a bike. in my life laughing and smiling and having fun is a big deal. You can't always take laugh too seriously.",16,18,,34,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9895,4,"The author concludes the story here to show that Saeng would not give up. She simpley set a time for her to try again. Saeng wants to make it in this world and wants to have a good life, so she tries new things",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9745,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph (when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again) because it explains what she is going to do when winter is over. Also to keep the readers guessing on what’s going to happen, to Saeng and her mother. Another reason is to have a new story when winter is over.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1645,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION2, @DATE1, computers are a big part of our society. They are an advance in technology, and they have some positive effects. However, computers have more negative effects on people. They take away and diminish @CAPS3 time, interacting with family, and seeing the world. First, computers have a negative effect on people because they diminish @CAPS3 time. People are so caught up with computers, their desire for @CAPS3 starts to fall. According to a @ORGANIZATION3 survey in @DATE2, for @CAPS1 person spending @NUM1 hours on the computer a week (roughly @NUM2 hours each day) had an increase in cholesterol and slowly deterioating muscles. ""Computers distract people from their needs"" says @PERSON1 of @ORGANIZATION1. ""@CAPS1 person needs about one to two hours of physical activity each day, and only @NUM2 out of @NUM4 people get this amount."" The leading cause for this low number? ""technology,"" she says, ""@CAPS2 computers, which take away all of the motivation and time people need to @CAPS3."" @CAPS3 is vital, and computers are taking this away from society. People shouldn't have bad @ORGANIZATION1 because of this negative effect: computers. Second, computers have a negative effect on people because they deteriorate interaction with family. @NUM5 out of @NUM4 people say that computers take away from their family time, reports Family @CAPS4 @ORGANIZATION3. This is not of all good, especially since @CAPS1 person needs at least @NUM7 hours of interacting with family for an assured healthy mental state and being. Children are directly affected by computer use in family settings. When computer time starts to eat up time, it also cuts of communication, something extremeley important in graving children. with this, family bonds and relationship are ruined as wal. It affects interacting with family, and puts hates in family bonds: computers haved negative effect on people. Lastly, computers have a negative effect on people because it takes away from people using their world. When you're on the computer, it seems like the entire world is in your computer screen. But its not. This is effecting people negatively. @PERCENT1 of people who use computers on the stocking average of about @NUM2 hours a day have notedly become withdrawn and unaware of their world says my physcology.net. The cure? Traveling, or even talking walks to enjoy nature can help. People should be aware of their world in which they live. They have to make important descions for themselves, their children, even their country, and staring at a computer screen wont help at all. It especially will effect children, the next generation, who will have no knowledge or a clear view on the world if people keep up their negative habits: computer usage. In conclusion, computers have negative effects on people. They diminish @CAPS3, so bad @ORGANIZATION1 increases and the need for @CAPS3 increases. It cuts family interaction by destroying family relationships and bonds, not to mention communication. Finally, it takes away from people seeing the world, something actually very important because it affects people's desicion making as well as future generations. People need to realize these bad effects, and majorly decrease their computer usage.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3970,2,"Almost everyone has a movie they would like to see, or a book they would like to read. What happens if they take a trip to the library, and check the catalog, only to find out it had been removed from the system because of bad language or mild themes? I believe that people should be able to choose what content they decide to read and let their children read. Some parents don't allow much offencive material at all while others don't mind it. Also the books and movies for adults are different than children books and movies. It would not be fair to remove offencive books, music, or magazines, from the shelf because different people like different content.     Today, we live in a world of violence and it is going to be hard to avoice violence and offencive material. For some people, they want to avoid it at all costs, while others don't care or they like it. First of all, different people consider the same content differently, and the titles being removed @MONTH1 not be judged fairly. The people who want to see the latest movies that just came out, are usually going to see some type of violence. With more advanced computers and technology, there can be more special effects and move violence added to movies easier. In books, they @MONTH1 have old language that isn't up to the standards of today. For example, in the @NUM1 and @NUM2, when the word 'gay' used to mean happy. It is a whole different word now and it is a lot of old books and songs. Some people @MONTH1 find that offensive and some @MONTH1 not.     Adult content is very differnt than children content. Adults have movies and music based on real life situations and stories while most children content is based on the alphabet and sing alongs. There are also the more grown up kid movies like @ORGANIZATION1's '@CAPS1.' @CAPS2 one is based in @LOCATION1 with @CAPS1 training to be a hero. During his fights, he kills the creatures that he fights. So if the libraries started censoring mateirals, then a classic @ORGANIZATION1 movie would be considered violent. The adult movies are worse in every way. They involve cursing, killing, gun battles, and sexual content. I'm not going into any further detail about adult movies. Being an adult, one should have the choice of what they are going to watch and the judge of what they are going to let their children watch.     Different people like differnt content and it is only fair for them to be the one to decide what they watch and consider violent. An example one person might grow up around a farm and be used to seeing animals killed, while one who grew up in a neighborhood has never seen an animal killed. When they both see the movie or read a book with an animal killed, it will have hardly an effect on the one from the farm compared to the likely painful effect on the one from a neighborhood. Think about a gun battle scene of a movie or a death in a book. A soldier who is in the army will take killings and seeing deaths much easier than a @CAPS4 of a company. As stated before, different people prefer differnt types of content.     All in all, I don't think there should be any censorship on library content. It should be up to the parents to make the choice of what they are going to let their childern watch or read. Adults can also be the judge of what they let themsleves watch. Lastly, again, different people like different content and it's not fair for one to choose what another can or can't watch",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15911,6,It @CAPS1 like a veryhard test for them because there trying to make an age of transportation with the thoughts of the pioneers. But once the architects designed the mooring mast and made changes for the building skeleton. They have framed the 85th floor the roof had to be completed before the framing.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19479,7,Once upon a time there was a boy name @PERSON1. Hawell he was right and he was at the secretary of state and he ?? patient so he walked in and took a number and got his paper from the woman. At the front desk to ??? and ??? ??? and started ??? it out in got out and this only on @NUM1 she counting slow so he’s getting angry!! And time ?? by and ???  it’s on ?? and there’s ?? in  front of him and leave to go get there ??? secretary card and the person in front of him is up the lady behind the desk opened up and call @PERSON1 and he greeted her with a ??? she took this picture and he got his licence then ends,6,8,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13222,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir felt happy, and very greatful. In the memoir it tells how the author, Narciso Rodriguez feels ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"". which gives that he is so, so, so grateful and happy of his life, which makes the reason happy to hear that his parents sacrificed themselves for their children to have a better life, even though it ment leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in their country they loved.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18956,7,I was a patient in the doctors  office so I do belive. I was a patient becouse I sprins my knc once and freshed my my coluler @CAPS1 that what make me a patient. I amost forget about the lumpnote in my neck so I am up utent to my doctor.,4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12484,5,"Your home @CAPS4 were you find happyness, joy and peace. Not only is home a @CAPS1 to be @CAPS2 but a @CAPS1 for family to be unified. In this @CAPS3, The author explains what it is to have a family and what it is and means. Joy and peace is the over all mode and thats what family @CAPS4 feel likeMany farmles in @LOCATION1 are immagrants and thats what makes up @LOCATION1. Many people stuggle to give education and happiness to there familys. They care about there familys future and would leave there hole life back in there home countries to give that to there Children and that is what familes @CAPS4 do.The author is great ful for what his parents have suffered so that he could get the good education here and not suffer as they did The mood is very calming and it describes what home and family @CAPS4 feel like.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4699,2,"Have it ever occured to you that some of the things we read about and take home from libraries are not for young children?   Certain materials that are found in libraries are sometimes not age appropriate or even offensive to other people. Not all books, music, movies, and magazines offend people or condone in things but they also give children the right to learn about things or know things that are to rated and shouldnt be learned at a library. Most music in todays society is not appropiate because of the content that is used such as sex,drugs, and violence. last fall when I visited my shools library I came across a movie that I thought was not school appropiate and should'nt be seen without a parents verification. Anything about sex and drugs give young teens and children the right away to do it even if they read it, heard it, or saw it in school.  when im walking through the town and I see teens doing things that should'nt be done the first thing the first thing he/or she says is 'I heard it on a movie'. Most public lbraries have movies, book, music, and etc on shelves that aren't appropiate but it should'nt be welcomed to young children. most librians are busy and cant watch the entire library, but can make sure it is secured and put away from juveniles.   Most of the time a child will read what looks interesting and fun. Todays books that condone violence have guns drugs and sexual content on the front cover making it hard for a child not to want to read it. In a school library @PERCENT1 of the time all books are age appropiate, but in a public library it's not because the public library is not just for children but for adults too. some books shouldnt be of shelves but the rated things should be.  In conclusion libraries need to watch what's being checked out no matter who its from and I.d should be asked for.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6399,3,"In the essay the setting affects the cyclist is different ways. For example, the couse must have been tough because he was dehydrated and it says that there are rolling hills and rough roads. Another example is there were dangerous animals like snakes that he came across. In conclusion, these are some reasons how the setting affects the cyclist.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3129,2,"Just because I agree with something, do you have to agree too ? Your cousin believing in one thing,means you have to believe in it also? No,not in my opinion, and I hope not in yours either. If you were to see something you find offensive does that have to mean it offends another around you? The world contains things that children agree with and parents do not and this world consists of things that you like and others will not, but that does not make that item or that object invaluable or offending, and not the least bit inappropriate.      Objects containing so called offensive material are always going to exist in the world we live in and they have for a while. They are going to be everywhere;in stores , in schools, inside, outside , they are all around, and there is no reason for them to be a problem. They will not disappear and that is nothing we want to have to worry about,that could become a criminal offence of any sorts. So why fight it,well I say we don't.      Do you think that seeing an offensive item makes an area all the less attractive and good intended? What if something you liked ,was of an offence to another , does that make it all the more wrong for you to like it? Almost all the things and materials in this world are liked and disliked all based upon opinions. Nothing in this world exists without opinions. Life in itself can be an opinion.      I believe that if there is something in a library that is deemed offensive by one,it is not deemed offensive by all. Nothing should be removed from a shelf or a rack because another doesn't agree with it. Substitute other objects or ideas with this, if one person in the world was offended by another person would you just remove them from the human race? No, I sure hope you would not, but to some they @MONTH1 see that as their one resolution. Well me, I do not, and I'm a strong willed, strong opinionated person and to me that is all wrong.      Anything published or released to the world, to the public by someone means that is their way of expressing something, it is their way of living, and they have that right. That is who they are, and that is what they like,that is another person , anything we see or hear in this world is someone else because that has come from an individual who is equal to us,so why lessen there equivalence because its not the same way I feel? We @MONTH1 not all agree with their way of life, we @MONTH1 not agree with their choice of clothes, but how are we to know if we agree with their way of heart? No characteristic dictates the other characteristics of another,so why should an item?      A good thing to you could be a bad thing to another, and what if that disappeared? Taking a cd off a shelf will not vanish it from the world, it could be found somewhere else, but still that is like eliminating your hand because your fingers don't look like mine. Nothing can justify removing things from the stores and the world because one group of people don't understand it enough to feel the same and agree with it. Anything could be deemed inappropriate,but what if your vision of appropriate is anothers eye to inappropriate. Maybe there just is no line of the definition inappropriate,especially in the world we live in today.     If we start eliminating and removing everything we don't like, we would have nothing left, any and everything could be gone within a week or a month. People would take an inch to a mile , and erase everything, then we would start eliminating people we do not like , and it would all become a repeat. We learn about our history for a reason, does any of this resemble a situation or two the world has already been through? Erasing things from lives,have done no good before. If we start listening to the facts of people not agreeing with one thing, we will listen to the next, what happens when all the sudden the people come in again and say they do not like the women with blonde hair or the men with green eyes? The world will crash and burn before our eyes, and if I can identify these things at the age of fifteen, then some need to identify things at the age of fifty, accept that the world has its flaws too.      So just because I agree with everything I said , are you going to agree with it also? No I know you will not,but think about that when you expect others to agree with what you say or think. When I think of people reducing the things that they do not like, I can already see the world losing it's pathetic value it has earned, and we @MONTH1 not all be fond of this world but we cannot lose it. Eliminating the things you do not have a fatuation with will do no good, so maybe we should take into acceptance the different people we've been blessed with and love what we have. Accept the world as it is,because it is what you live in and it is what you have,because with out it nothing would be anything.Attempt to fix the broken things not eliminate the jagged things",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
190,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you imagine a world where technology controls human interaction? Its not such a far fetched idea. Some people @MONTH1 see this as a great advancement. Not me. I think that computers detach people from reality, create false personas, and has no physical benefit. This is what i think the computers effects have on people. First of all, Computers detach people from reality. Its a lot easier for someone to sit on the computer, browsing aimlessly on some social networking website, than go out and actually meet new people. Sure you @CAPS2 send all the friend requests you want, but theres nothing that compares to a first impression that you get from meeting someone in person. The computer can also have an affect on family members and the time spent with them. Secondly, the computer creates false personas. If i had a facebook or @CAPS3 account, it would be very easy to say something false about myself, or someone else. The computer dosn't know better. This allows people to gain, ""friendships"" with others that dont know the real you. I find this as a real problem because eventually lead to shaky or unsteady relationshops. Lastly, I think that the computer offers no physical gain, This nation is in a severe heath crisis. With things easier to get now a days like fast food, and drugs, I don't think that computers help. People need discipline and theres a time and place for everything, including computers. However those that aren't disciplined might use them more than they need to and that isn't good. So @CAPS2 you imagine a world controlled by computers? I think that little by little, thats whats happening, slowly taking away the human element. I think the effects will be severe, detaching reality, creating false personas, and offering no physical gain. I don't think its right, but I hope I've persuaded you to think my way.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21626,8," In most stories mothers and daughters are either enemies or friends, in @CAPS13 story however, we are both enemies and friends well; at one point we were that way. Not @CAPS4 much anymore. I'm sixteen now and she's forty and were just friends, I mean she's still @CAPS13 mom and she still can punish me as her daughter as she pleases but we work it all out and laugh it off. Approximately seven months ago @CAPS13 mom moved from @LOCATION4 to @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2 I chose to stay behind to finish high school with @CAPS13 current friends. When she moved, the way we acted with eachother would be different, and it is, we act completely different with each other we now cherish the little time we have and I'll explain how. At the beginning since as early as I can remember, @CAPS13 mother and I would always fight over the dumbest things, we never got along. And here is what I think the reason is. I'm her daughter I was born just like her, her face, hair, eyes, everything, even @CAPS13 attitude and the sound of @CAPS13 laugh. She's stubborn I'm stubborn and we both like to argue, not really with other people just with us two, but if we were to go into business together things would get done, say if we became lawyers we'd work great together because I inherited her work ethic and we both like to argue valid points. But as I grew up a bit more and we experienced traumatic times together we began to see the brighter side of life, and that just having each other around is enough to keep us from falling apart. Events in our life that we went through brought us together @CAPS1 it was all finished and done. What I mean by that, is we stopped arguing, we comforted each other when we needed comfort, we became friends, and I believe laughter had a lot to do with it.  @CAPS13 mom, her name by the way is @LOCATION5, once said ""Laughter brings two people together as a whole, the one thing that human beings all know how to do is laugh and its something we can all share."" @CAPS1 our life had settled down and we were able to live normal, like with a house and lights and a dog with a yard, things were good between us we still fought often but never as it used to be. Which would consist of throwing objects across the room at each other, like I said things are better now. We one night discovered, that laughter is something we both use to block out the things we no longer wanted to haunt us. I love to sing, @CAPS13 mother and @CAPS11 had me grow up around music like; The @CAPS2, @LOCATION3, @PERSON2, @PERSON4, and many others but we would sing a song together something that only the two of us shared and it was ""@CAPS3're @CAPS4 @CAPS5"" by @PERSON3. But we would sing that specific song in the car, we would sing it in front of our family and @CAPS1 the moment was over we would laugh about it, because for once was something that only @CAPS13 mom and I shared and it was special. Laughter played a big part of who we are as people today. There are always things people do together, @CAPS13 mom grew up in a strict @CAPS6 @CAPS7 home, she also had four sister's and @CAPS8 was a very serious matter. @CAPS13 mom and I went to @CAPS8 together and we always tried not to take life @CAPS4 seriously all the time, @CAPS4 while in @CAPS8 we would start @CAPS15 about some kind of ugly bug on the wall, or she would laugh at me because I would drop the prayer book on @CAPS13 foot, but we would always laugh."" @CAPS10 it or I'll bring @CAPS11 @CAPS12 over here and @CAPS3'll have to take an extra religion class.""@CAPS13 mom would say as I'm poking her or making fun of her and i would say "" @CAPS14 wont make me take an extra class I'll tell him @CAPS3 started it."" That's who @CAPS13 mom and I were and were still like that. Even though she moved to @LOCATION2 for a new job, and @CAPS4 she could see the man she loves more often than every six months, we still talk, and like I said we laugh when we cry and boy do we cry a lot, especially on the phone when I tell her I miss her.  That is the story of @CAPS13 mother and the laughter that we have shared for the last sixteen years, and to quote @PERSON1 ""@CAPS15 is the best calorie burner."" I do believe that and @CAPS13 mom and I see it as that, @CAPS15 is the one thing we can do when we don't feel @CAPS4 hot or don't feel like ourselves, @CAPS4 yes she is correct when she states that laughter brings two people together, and it's positively true, we have a better relationship than ever.",17,18,,35,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20874,8,"Laughter play's an important role in relationships, @CAPS1 also supports enjoyment and can be a persuit of happinees. Whenever i am laughing its either because i am really enjoying myself or im just having a great time.Many people don't have a very good sense of humor and dont laugh at thing's that are funny, whenever i watch a funny movie's that i like i sit down and wait for the very funny parts, but dont get me wrong, remember not to laugh to hard because you might wet youre pants by accident or who knows if you laugh hard enought you might even pull a ""whotammy ""and trust me that does not look pritty and then you will be embarresed infront of everybody. My favorite comedian is adam sandler because he is very funny and has a good sense of humor, he knows how to keep a person laughting and interested in his comedy shows and movies.when he made the big daddy movie @CAPS1 was pritty good not to funny but @CAPS1 was good.My secound favorite comedian is @PERSON1 because he is funnyer that adam sandler by a lil bit but not quit as good though he also stars on a tv show called wild'n out that show really makes me almost cough out my lungs, especially when they bust out with youre mama jokes @CAPS1 keeps you laughting and keeps the blood pumping thru youre body.so we all pritty much under stand what laughing is but most people dont really seem to laugh at things that are funny i cant quit undersatnd @CAPS1 but my guess is tha t they dont have a good sene of humor but some people seem to lautgh at thing that dont even make sense i quit dont undestand that either but i guess its better to laugh than to not laugh at all. Some really good comedy movies that i can mention out right off the the bat that will keep you tuned and laughing thru more than half off the movies are grandmas boy, happy gillmore, dont be a menace to south central while siping my juice. Also zombie land @CAPS1 is a heck of a good movie, i dont know its not just about making a funny movie just to make the oudience laugh @CAPS1 is the way they make @CAPS1 and how thery act and how good the backround story to the comedy movies is gonna be thats what i pay atencion to when ever i sit down and inspect what makes the movie funny also if i cant understaand a funny movie i see @CAPS1 again and again till i understand what is so hallariouse about @CAPS1.That pritty much covers the basics on laughter there are is youre basic information and what you need to knowabout @CAPS1 and how to enjoy @CAPS1 and use @CAPS1 wisely cause remamber dont laught to hard because you dont want to end up pulling a ""whotammy"" in front off every one that around thank you for reading my test.",15,18,32.0,32,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18595,7,At time when I was patient was when I went to @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I was patiently waiting when to get on the rollercoaster. For an hour and a half. I was patiently waiting when I had to get something to eat. I was patient when I wanted to get on any of the rides. That is a time when I was paitient.,5,6,,11,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3646,2,"In @DATE1's world there are so many things around our children that if we tried to take materials away, we would be take most of what is made for entertainment. Many adults say that our world has changed so much from the time when they were younger. Well, why don't we do something about it? People need to stop complaining about everything and just do something. Adults can eliminate the amount of materials the children take home with them.      If you were to walk into any store these days you would find something that you would not want your children to watch, see, or listen to. I believe people are doing the best they can to seperate these materials from the family oriented materials. Sometimes it is just not enough, children are still getting addicted to some materials at a very early age. These children share what they have with their friends, and these other children start doing the same things.        Many materials such as movies and music have negative ideas that teach children things they do not need to know or learn. The material that talks about drugs, parties, and drinking does not even need to be on a radio station or a television channel that a young child would listen to. Our adults need to also learn that it is not good for the children to learn and listen to these things, and to keep their children away from it as much as possible.     Like the author said if everyone was able to take something off of the shelves there would not be anything left. We are always going to have these things that we do not want children to see, but we can start to eliminate some of them. The others we can not eliminate we can continue to keep on the shelves and other places, but just kept where children don't go.     I believe that our towns and cities can do a better job of keeping our children away from @CAPS1 rated movies, negative songs, and different books that talk about 'adult things.' The children are the future of the world. If that's all they are watching and thinking about then it does not look good for the future. There are many things we can do to stop our children from watching, listening, and learning about these negative things in life. Keep the children away from these materials, it will be a better world if we do.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20777,8,"                 A @CAPS1 @CAPS2  I once heard ""laughter is the best medicine."" I believe that is true. I could laugh all day long, finding anything @CAPS9 everything funny in @CAPS3 world. Laughter is important to me, without it, life would be boring. Sometimes Laughter is good @CAPS9 comes from the heart. Other times it can be cruel @CAPS9 mean. I like to avoid the cruel @CAPS9 mean laughter, @CAPS9 just stick to the good laughter. When one of my friends is laughing @CAPS9 smiling, it makes me want to know @CAPS10 they're laughing about, so I can laugh too.  Birthdays are fun, laughing usually comes with fun. I remember my twelfth @CAPS2, I decided to have a party at my house. I wanted it to be very special so I invited my closest friends, @CAPS9 my cousins. Family always makes everything special. My cousin @CAPS9 I are pretty close, she was born nine months after me, so we are both the same age for a little while. We always have a good time, both of us acting crazy @CAPS9 always laughing. For my party my mom made rainbow sherbert punch, it was delicious. Everyone had fun, @CAPS9 soon the party was over, but, my cousins were not leaving until the next day so we continued the party. I was in the kitchen getting more punch, my cousin came in @CAPS9 wanted some more too. I poured both of us a glass. ""@CAPS3 is so good!"" my cousin @PERSON1 said. ""I know that's why I had my mom make it"" "" @CAPS4 you wanna hear a joke?"" ""@CAPS5."" @PERSON1 said. ""@CAPS6, @CAPS7 once was a kid named butt itches, he was really sick @CAPS9 one day died, his mom cried to the doctor,""@CAPS8 my poor butt itches!"" ""@CAPS9 @CAPS12, @CAPS4 you wanna know @CAPS10 the doctor said?"" ""@CAPS10?"" @CAPS11 @PERSON1. ""@CAPS12 itch it!"" @PERSON1 had just took a drink of punch when I said @CAPS3. She spit the punch out of her mouth while laughing, it got all over me. Usually when someone spits, or spills something on you, you get mad. I started cracking up laughing, @CAPS9 so did she. ""@CAPS8 my gosh! That's so gross."" ""@NUM1 @CAPS9 I could not stop laughing. The joke was not that funny, it was the punch all over me @CAPS9 the kitchen. We laughed for at least fifteen minutes before even realizing that both our moms were standing in the kitchen. They were just staring at us wondering @CAPS10 in the world had happened.  You would think that getting punch spitted at your face, on your @CAPS2, would make you mad. @CAPS3 is why laughter makes ordinary days special. In my case laughter was the shortest distance between @PERSON1 @CAPS9 I. It would have to be short for her to get that much punch on me. Laughter made @CAPS3 @CAPS2 extra special, because I will never forget my twelfth @CAPS2.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16419,6,"In The Mooring @CAPS1 by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State building faced obstacles in attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. one of the main problems was nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents,"" which made it dangerous for dirigible to be turning around the building above pedestrians.Another obstacle that the builders raced was that the dirigibles used hydrogen, rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable, and the owners of the Empire State building did not want a dirigible to catch fire above a ""densely populated area such as downtown New York.""The last obstacle faced in attempt to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building was the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made ""it illegal for ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.""",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1495,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I agree with the experts that people spend to much time on the computer, people should be exercising, reading, or spending time with friends and family. But people are so lazy and would rather be sitting and doing something on the computer and if they dont start doing other things instead of being online they could become overweight. My first reason why people should spend less time online is because people need to exercize. Seriously people should be taking walks around the block or going to the gym or even playing a sport instead of playing on the computer all day and doing nothing and without exercising you will become overweight and lazy. My second reason why I think people should spend less time online is because you should be spending time with your friends and family not ignoring them because your doing something on the computer. Thats just rude, so why dont you go and have a family game night or go out to eat with your family and you could also watch a movie, go skating, or even go to the park with your friends because thats a lot more fun than being online all day. My last reason why people should spend less time online is because everyone should have time to just read a good book honestly just walk down to your local library and check out a book because reading is way better for your brain than doing stupid stuff on the computer. So in conclusion, in my opinion I think people should spend less time online is because if you dont get enough exercize you can become over weight and lazy, and not spending a lot of time with your friends and family is just rude and reading is very good for you unlike staying on the computer, well that is all I have to say for now.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12554,5,The mood in this article was just stunning because explaining how your parents were very good and explaining how they raised you well gives people the thought this is very good especially when you are having fun with friends and family.The author just set off a good mood towards the readers in this article: because people like to read something that would make him or her happy and this story made me feel good about my self and family just like the family he/or she has in this article,2,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12888,5,"The mood in the memoir is very uplifting. The story is mostly about how much the author appreciates his family and what his parents have done for him. It also shows how happy the family was and how everyone around them were family iregardless of where they immigrated from. In paragraph @NUM1 he says ""Family had nothing to do with being a blood relative"".",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21490,8,"  Laughter saved my life. Growing up, my life was pretty normal. Me, my little brother, mom, and dad, all living happily together in a nice suburban area. But two years ago, everything changed; and it seemed as though it wasn't for the better. My parents got a divorce. It was all very strange because at that time in my life I thought that that couldn't happen to me; it was impossible. As I talked to my friends and family about it, I learned to live with the fact that my family would never be the same again. But thought I came to grips with my new life, I still was unhappy a lot of the time. But the times when I was with my best friends and caring family, were the times that I forgot about all of the things going on at home.  George and I have been really close friends since the @NUM1 grade. We are inseparable. Though I have many other friends, he is the one I would always turn to if there's a problem. He knows me better than anybody else. We talk every day at school, we text message each other every night, and hang out almost every weekend. The night that my parents told me they were getting a divorce I called him crying. He told me that in the end it would all be okay, and he told me that he was always there for me if I needed anything. At that point in time it was clear to me that I had something that not a lot of people can say they had in their lifetime: A true friend who would be there through anything with me. He and I would joke about all my problems. To some, that @MONTH1 seem a little strange; but it was almost therapeutic to me. Making fun of my life, made it easier to live it in a sense. It helped me to realize that I need to let go of the past, and that just because there's a rough patch, doesn't mean that the rest of my life is destined to be this way. George knew how to cheer me up, and he could always tell when I needed a good talk, or a good laugh to make my day better.  A girl always needs another girl in her life to tell secrets, to do crazy things, and to lay on the couch all day watching sappy love movies with. For me, its @CAPS1. When we're together there is no stopping us. She was always right by my side through my parents divorce. She was there with me, my last night in my house before we moved out. We sat on my bed in my empty room, recalling all the memories the house had given us. Some would think this would be a sad time, but all we did was laugh. Because all of the memories were good ones.We weren't crying because we were upset; we were crying from laughing about all of our insane adventures for hours. To me, that's a pretty good reason to cry.We re-lived our best moments that night, and we weren't going to let the situation make us upset. We wanted to make our last memory in my house a good one; that we would always remember.  My family is quite strange; but we do know how to have a good time. I don't have many family members, but I think that because we are so tightly knit, we get along really well. Whether we're out in the backyard playing a game of wiffle ball, or in the house playing pranks with whoopie cushions, it's always a fun time at my @CAPS2 @PERSON1's house. During the rough times of the divorce, I would spend a lot of time at my @CAPS2's house because I didn't have to worry about being questioned all the time about how I was feeling; I just had to worry about if I should bring sneakers to go on a hike, or if I should bring my pajamas in case we decided to have a movie night sleepover. That house is a place I still go to just relax, and forget about whatever @MONTH1 be worrying me. @CAPS2 @PERSON1's is a safe haven for me to just let go, and have a good time with some of my favorite people in the world; my family.  If I didn't have all these important people in my life, I don't know what would have become of me. As I grow up, I'm realizing that these people have molded the person I am today. They helped me through the roughest time in my life, and that proves how much they really care about me. Some say laughter is the best medicine; I say it's love. Laughing helps to get you through terrible times, but the people who make you laugh are really what matter most. I can honestly say that every one of these people have made me a better person, and I love them with all my heart.",25,25,,50,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9339,4,"In the story ""Winter Hibiscus,"" the author, Minfong Ho, concludes the story that paragraph because, she wants to show the determination the girl in the story possess. At first, the girl could not help herself and bought the expensive flower. She did not want her mother to be disappointed though, so she was determined to ""pass the test."" In the spring when it is time to buy more seeds, the girl wants to be able to buy the seeds. So the author is showing the trait of determination that the girl controls.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4363,2,"have you ever think about why teenagers are changing each day? sometimes parents don't pay attention why is that happening, because they think their kids are wroging up or because they need more freedom or even because they need more time.  when the time pass they stop and think what happend to my kids why are they changing to much? but they don't know why we bahave like that. you have ti stop that, because we are changing because of what we see on magazines, movies, and books, and also music; sometimes music have offensive words that we learn.                but also music, books,magazines, and movies are good, but when they don't have offensive words or bad things in it. sometimes they affect us in a good way but the majory of the time they affect us in a bad way because we learn bad things. sometimes little kids read books whit bad and offensive words.          i remember when my friend and I were @NUM1 years old she started reading books with offensive words, and her mom got mad at her. after that she started insulting her mom and calling her names and her mom was feeling bad, but she didn't know why her doughter was acting bad. the next day i went to their house and i told her mom that she was reading bad books and watching movies with offensive words, and i told her mom where she was hiding all thoes books and movies.        when she got home i was there and her mom had all the books and movies on her hand and she give me a bad look and she told me that i was a bad friend because i told her mom, i started crying becuase she make me feel bad but she didn't know that i was doing it for her on good.           before i move to the @LOCATION1 she went to my home and she said 'I am sorry because i treated you like that', and i told her that i did it because i loved her and because she was like my sister since we were little. we started crying; now we still best friends. this days, little kids now everything and it is because of what they watch and see.            you can help us by taking all of the bad words and offensive words of the books, movies, and magazines. help us to became someone important in life.",3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1415,1,"Dear computer experts, @CAPS1 this: A family of four is sitting in a small dark room, not talking, not laughing, just sitting lazily in their chairs, hunched over & bored. They aren’t communicating with any of their friends, and aren’t really doing anything at all. They sit there like lumps. This would happen @CAPS5 we banned computers! Computers defenetly have positive effect on people because they feed you a constant stream of knowlage, they develop good hand eye coordination, and they enable the people who use them to communicate with others. Clearly, they are a positive addition to our world. To begin, computers bring you constant a stream of knowlage. My close friend @PERSON1 told me recently that she is sometimes sitting at home, and doing her homework, and she needs to look up something. She simply grab her computer, and the information is delivered to her with the click of a button. @CAPS5 she didn’t have a computer sheld never obtain such knowlage. Second, in a survey of @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @ORGANIZATION1, @PERCENT1 of total computer usage is looking up information, and gaining knowlage. This statistic shows that computers defenetly help them when looking for information. Also a recent @ORGANIZATION3 article on computer usage states that @CAPS5 people didnt have computers, half of the world’s discoveries would not be around today. You can tell that the amount of knowlage that computers give us is very important! Next, using computers builds hand eye coordination as well. Children’s specialist @PERSON3 says, “@CAPS4 need to be able to play video games, even though they are usually discouraged on the computer. They build fantastic hand eye coordination, and help with many things including @ORGANIZATION1 & sports.” @CAPS5 there were no computers, this hand eye coordination could never developed! Also, at @ORGANIZATION2 in @LOCATION1, they limited computer use, and as a result of it, the sports teams there all got losing records. Could this be because of the lack of hand eye coordination of those students? Additionally, at @ORGANIZATION1, after a recent survey, it was discovered that @NUM1 students who play video games on their computers do better in gym class because of the added hand eye coordination. Clearly computers greatly build hand eye coordination. Lastly, using computer allows people to communicate with each other through email & other social networks. After a poll from www.@CAPS6.com, we have discovered that millions of users use the computer & @CAPS6 to communicate everyday. We wouldn’t want to deny them of this, would we? Secondly, a friend of mine, @PERSON2, who goes to @ORGANIZATION4, says that the main way that she communicates with her friends & makes plans with them is by computer. @CAPS5 she didn’t have one, none of this could be done. Furthermore, a recent article by @PERSON4 a teen specialist at @ORGANIZATION5 says that when people don’t have computers & can’t communicate or talk to the outside world, they are more prone to diseases & sickness like depression or anorexia. When they don’t talk as much with their friends, these sicknesses are more prone to occur. This defenetly shows that communicating with computers is very important. Now, @CAPS1 this. The same family as before is sitting in bright, sunny room their computer screens flashing merrily. One of the boys calls out, “hey, look at his “ and the rest of his family rushes to his side. Their faces aglow with this @ORGANIZATION3 information. You can see that computers have a positive effect on people because they bring @ORGANIZATION3 information, they build hand eye coordination, and they allow you to communicate with others. So, computer specialists, what are you waiting for? Go to your computers right now & learn some @ORGANIZATION3 things!",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18277,7,A time I had to be patient was when I went to a @ORGANIZATION1. You have to be very patient excepcially when it is all sold out. For example when I was waiting in line for a shirt the line was really long so I had to be patient. This took a lot of patient because the @ORGANIZATION1 was all sold out and their were only three booths with @CAPS1- shirts so I had to wait. At the @ORGANIZATION1 there were many ways we had to be patient like parking getting to our seats. When @ORGANIZATION1 took a @NUM1 min break I went to get a pop and all the lines where long. I was waiting in line for about @NUM2 min waiting to get my pop and my cousin fries and a pop for my sister. I finally got everything and forgot my pop but luckily she gave me a new one just in case that wasn’@CAPS1 mine. I went back drank my pop and watched the show. Everything takes patients and when you wait you get everything you need. This is a time I had to be patient.,9,9,,18,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6498,3,"In the story “Do not Exceed Posted Speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. It being hott affected him because it mad him more thirsty. Than him being out in the middle of the desert made it so he couldn’t get any water. The hills made him tired and weak. All of the features in the setting had an affect on him, which made him powerless and thirsty.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16049,6,"When building the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building, the architects experienced many obstacles. These obstacles lead the designers to never effectively use the mooring mast like they had hoped to. The first problem they had, was that a thousand ton dirigible would add stress to the buildings frame. The designers had to spend @MONEY1 to reinforce the building's frameworks. This first obstacle already put doubt into the builders minds, that this was not going to happen easily. The next thing they realized, was that with hydrogen dirigibles is that they were extremely flamable. If a huge dirigible were to catch fire and fall onto New York City it would be cataustrophic. This also leasoned their enthusiasm about the work, knowing about how great a risk this would be. The wind above the building were constantly Shifting due to air currents, and this would toss and turn the dirigible tethered to the mast. The designers relized this would be neither practical or safe being over pedestrians on the ground. The last obstacle of all, that really killed their mooring idea, was airship laws. The law states that the dirigibles cannot fly that low over urban areas, so that puts an illegal mark on their plans. The designers of the mooring mast had to face many obstacles in their design, and it was these obstacles that led to the never useing of their mast.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
38,1,"Dear local Newspaper, @CAPS1 in the society we live in, more and more people are using computer including me. The computor in my opinion has to be one of the best inventions ever. The bad part is that these ""exports"" think spending time on the computer is a bad idea when they fail to see the good in computers. Student can use computers to get information on almost about anything, you could use computer to talk to friend and family members, and you confuse it as a navigator to find directions to a certain location if you cant find your way or if your lost. One of the best things about computers is that you can find various amounts of information. That opition is useful for children that attend school , looking to find information for a certain project they need to finish. You can also use the information on the computer to study if your textbook isnt doing you only good. Also if a student is looking for a job in their local area they look on the internet for jobs needing employees. Computers also can be used for communication. You could have a long lost realtive you havent spoken to in a while, you can easily find him on the internet. Online communicating is also good for chatting with schoolmates if you forgot the homework or need help with homework. Im not a big fan of this but online chatting can be use for online dating if your to lazy to go out. One of my favorite options on the computer is that you can use it to navigate a certain location you want to go to. Lets just say you forgot where a relatives house is you can easily type in your address and his address and easily get directions. You can use this method for almost anywhere you want to go. If this did not convince you that that a computer is a great piece of technology, then your crazy. The computers is like a magical box that can be used for anything so I advice you get one.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6131,3,"In the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” written by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affected the author in many ways. One feature was the hills. The speed limit affected the author because he felt that he was moving to slow. In the story when it says “I was doing a water-depleting @NUM1,” is evidence of this",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21471,8," Laughter, one of the greatest gifts in life. It's what helps you get through the day, the year and in the long term, your life. For me, many things can go wrong in a day. For example, I could forget about an assignment that ends up being a big part of my grade or just have a difficult day. All i need to make those bad things seem like old memories is to have a long and pleasant laugh. It is ten times better if that laugh is shared with someone else. That's why when i moved to @LOCATION1,@CAPS1 I tried to keep a look out for kids like me, who loved to laugh and make other people laugh. The first days were rough. I met a lot of new people that were all the same. Some just wanted to know my name and others to get to know me better, and that was fine. There was one person that I noticed was in multiple of my classes. So one day when our @CAPS2 teacher asked us to partner up and write a myth of creation or how something got to be the way it is. Quickly, I looked around to choose someone before every one would have a partner and I would be sitting there awkwardly without a partner. I asked a boy who was in few other of my classes. I had not really noticed or even heard him talk. He agreed to be my partner. We introduced ourselves and he told me his name was @PERSON1. He had a very quite voice. I had barely understood his name, so i had to read it from his paper. We had to work on the paper together but it felt more like if we were doing it individually. I began by throwing some ideas around. @PERSON1 would then say something and laugh but I could never hear what he would say. We worked on the paper for a couple of days, continuing to only interchange some words.  Meanwhile I was still trying to make at least one good friend. I thought maybe threw that friend i could meet some of his friends and in time I would have my own set of friends. In the meantime I ate lunch with my sister @PERSON2. You would think it would be slightly awkward or uncomfortable. It wasn't though, it was actually pretty nice because our bond had become stronger. That would work well for both of us until we made some friends. After some time she had made a couple of friends and was ready to move on. So one day while we were both eating lunch one of her new friends passed by and asked her to go sit with her. I hoped so bad that she would just say no or even say, maybe tomorrow, but no.  There I was sitting by myself in a lunch room full of eyes that were just judging who you were sitting with, if anyone. I began to eat my lunch faster than you could say sternocleidomastoid, and I was out of there. Panicking in the inside but completely calm on the outside, I paced the hallways looking for someone to hang out with. Then I saw ""That @CAPS3"" from three of my classes. I casually walked up to him and tried to start a conversation. For some reason i felt relaxed not as if I was trying to make a new friend but as if I was already talking to one.  In the beginning, we were just two guys that talked about classes and how this school was different from my previous. Then all of a sudden we began to talk about movies especially the resent more funny ones. We could not stop laughing in all of our classes, especially auto mechanics. We would use up all of our shop time just trying to remember all of the funny lines from the movies and trying to say them or act them out the best we could. Soon we also found out that we watched many of the same t.v. shows. We could make each other laugh with pretty much anything one of us said. I had noticed this special quality in @PERSON1 that made him extremely funny. I wasn't sure what it was,but with anything he said I would just laugh uncontrollably. We were laughing buddies, but soon we actually became great friends. We had really bonded in between the laughter. During that time we would find out new things about each other. That made us realize that we were a lot alike. Its been a few months and we have only become greater friends. I had made friends before by making them laugh or laughing at there jokes. I knew this was different tho. I had made the greatest friend I had ever had. Now I'm moving and that's the worst part. I know that with the bond of sharing some of the greatest laughs of my life we will continue to stay friends for a long time.",20,18,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12830,5,"In this memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez, there is certain mood. I believe that the mood is supposed to be seen as joyful and uplifting. The whole memoir is describing what a rich child hood the author had, from his home itself to all his family, he had nothing but great things to say. When talking about his home, he says ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am externally grateful)."" I would say that is pretty enlightening. He also says how grateful he is for his parents. The mood of this memoir is nothing but good.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4219,2,"To @CAPS1 it @DATE2 concern,     @CAPS2 in life has to deal with something offensive towards them at least once. It @DATE2 be swear words in a popular song, or even people's behavior and actions on a regular basis. Be that as it @DATE2, nobody was made perfectly, and we all have to learn to cope with people's flaws. The library is for everyone; not just you specifically. Just like people's personalities we have to deal with different things that fit those specific personalities. @PERSON1's quote said, 'But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf...then you also have exactly the same right...' @CAPS3 is a strong and truthful accusation, and I believe that things in a library should should have some censorship, but up to a specific point.     We all realize that the biggest population of people in a library-- and perhaps the most innocent-- are children. Each parent has different values and standards for their child. What @DATE2 be offensive to one parent @DATE2 not be to another. If one mother thinks a book that talks about something she believes to be inappropriate to her children should be removed, another mother @DATE2 not. The first mother's opinion is different than everyone else; she could say she wanted @CAPS3 book removed from the library, but then so could the second mother about a different book. If everyone voiced their opinion on what books they didn't think were appropriate for their children, then we would 'have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' according to Katherine Paterson. I believe she is right. Besides, who is to say what is right for everyone?     Not one person has the same morals or values as another. For one person to declare what is right could highly offend another individual. I have dealt with situations like @CAPS3 before; everyone has. People tell me what they believe to be right, and I do not agree with them. It is simply a matter of everyday life; people's opinions and morals are going to clash. Eveyone is different, and if one person doesn't like a certain magazine in the library, another person @DATE2 not like a different one. If we were to all voice our own opinion on what we want censored and what we don't, nothing would be left. The library shelves would be completely empty. Even though everyone has different opinions on what should stay and what should go, I do believe that there should be some censoring up to a certain point.     Taking into account everyone's diversification in @CAPS3 world, I do believe that there should be censorship up to a certain point. If something is in a book that a good majority of the population are against, I believe that the book, or books should be removed. I am not saying that because a couple of people weren't for a certain artist from the @DATE1 that it should be taken away at once. If it is a major issue that highly offends many people, it should not be in a public library. Libraries are for obtaining information, and for reading; not for brewing up offensive opinions on certain topics. There should be a certain limit on what is in a library, because there are things out there people really shouldn't be seeing or hearing. But it shouldn't get to the point where people can just remove books from the shelf at their own free will. Without some limit on censorship in a library, absolutely anything could be found there.     When we think of a library we don't think of things that are offensive. People view the library as a positive place, created for people's own personal enjoyment. That doesn't mean that we will never find something that @DATE2 offend us in some way there, but people should not be able to just remove books from the shelf because they don't agree with their morals. @CAPS2 is different, and nobody has the right to tell them what exactly is right or wrong, up to a certain point. I know from experience that it can be a tough thing to ignore sometimes, but we all seem to do it everday with the people around us; we can't just choose to get rid of them. @CAPS2 wants to be comfortable, but sometimes we just have to deal with things in life like a book we don't deem appropriate. So I believe that in a way, an excessive amount censorship on things in a library can be a bad thing. If we all could get rid of what we wanted in a library, there would be nothing left. Afterall, I wouldn't mind walking into a library with shelves full of magazines and books, instead of one completely empty.     Thank you.",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9331,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show the motivation and confidence Saeng has after her experience with the plant. there are many reasons and examples that support this. One reason is, he want to show the change in Saeng after he first test and when she boaght the flower to releive her. For example, after she failed the driving test, Saeng goes to the Florist. When she see this plant, he childhood comes back and she forgets her test. This flower motivates her to get her lisence. Another reason is, it shows how confident this experience has made her. For example, after failing, she comes back saying,” ... I will take the test again.” In conclusion, the author includes this paragraph to show how confident Saeng has become over her experience.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1018,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 back a couple decades ago, before computers existed. What do you see? There were children outside exercising, playing with friends, and living somewhat danger-free lives then came the computer. Computers are driving the next generation to a dangerous life of staring at an assortment of pixers all day longels well as ruining any civilized relationships you had. I strangly believe that computers have a negative affect on society. Did you know that as tha number of computers sold increases the obesity rate has gone up @PERCENT1 since computers came into our lives why? Because people spend way too much time on and not enough time exercising! Computers another affect of the long hours spent in front of screen is a decrease in eyesight ability. My family friend, @PERSON2 had to get glasses because his eyes were damaged by the computer. ""I'm worried about my daughter's eyes...she stares at that screen for hours on end!"" @CAPS2 @PERSON3, a concerned parent at @ORGANIZATION1. How could something so harmful possibly be good for our society? Speaking of hurtful, the internet is very unsafe. Predators surf the web, looking for young, innocent people to meet and most likely abuse @PERCENT2 of parents much been monitoring their children's computer usage parents are unaware that the internet makes it easy to talk to anybody in the world, from @LOCATION1 to @LOCATION2! Monitoring would also come in handy when it comes to innapropriate videos, pictures, and discussions on the internet. It is so easy to be surfing the web and fall upon things you should not be seeing! Lastly, people easily get caught up in being hidden behind a computer, and say mean, hurtful things that would never be said to one's face! these unfortunate factors cause many of the issues between people today. Speaking of which, computers have a very negative affect on relationships nowadays. As I mentioned earlier, so many fights happen through computer communications. Even if online conversations are friendly, they get people accustomed to making people ""@CAPS3"" through a computer, not face to face. After being in a computer-oriented friendship, people tend to forget how to act face to face and find personal meetings awkward. @PERSON1, an eighth grader at @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS4, ""I can't @CAPS5 only talking through computers, never being civilized with other human beings! Unfortunately, that is where computers are leading us to..."" @CAPS5 never seeing your best friend in person , only through technology! It @MONTH1 not even be your friend. It could be a dangerous poser! This is yet another problem...through the internet, you @MONTH1 not even know who such relationships are with! It could be fake, and you'd have no idea. Spending all day rolling away in front of a computer, putting yourself and relationships in danger is, unfortunately, the effect of computers. Computers are not worth the terrible consequences civilization must face. I @CAPS6 urge you to stop the advances in technology now, before it is too late! Make the change today.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1175,1,"Dear people, Computers have been here for not a very long time and everyday more people buy computers and everyday people use them. As they are used for entertainment, education, and talking with people faraway, they have had a negative effect on people. Let me explain. First of all, as people use computers in the beginning they enjoy it. They go on the @CAPS1, play games, and use it for work. But as they keep using it, they start to get addicted. People are addicted to computers because of the games and being able to go on the @CAPS1. In fact, @PERCENT1 of all the people in this @CAPS3 who owns a @CAPS8, is addicted to computers. That percentage is expected to grow to @PERCENT2 in the next @NUM1 years. Addiction to computers lead to serious issues. People have died because they spent too much time on the @CAPS8 without eating and sleeping. In another newspaper not long ago, it stated that a student attending @ORGANIZATION1, was dropped out for doing so poorly during school. His parent found out that he was addicted to this game ""@CAPS3 of @CAPS4."" This game is right now the most played game on the @CAPS8 in this @CAPS3. Studies state that @CAPS8 addiction is almost as bad as smoking addiction. My second reason why @CAPS8 has a negative effect on people is because of online bullying. People chat on @CAPS5, @CAPS6, @CAPS7, and email and people are bullied. A friend of mine recently was emailed with words that hurt his feeling. Online bullying is worse that inteacting bullying. That's because @CAPS9 you say something on the @CAPS8, people don't know who you are. @PERSON1, a proffesor who recently did studies of online bullying says, ""Online bullying has become more severe than contact to contact bullying. People are threatened more and hear more bad words than interacting."" The online bullying and harassment is going to get worse @CAPS9 people don't stop. Also people can get arrested for what they write online. My final reason why computers have a negative effect on people is that people spend too much time on computers and don't exercise @CAPS8 contribute about @PERCENT3 to overweight people. On the @CAPS8, everything is much easier. Instead of mailing, you could e-mail. You can listen to music instead of walking up to the radio and turning it on. You could buy tickets, shop, talk with friends, and have fun just by sitting on a @CAPS8. But this is why people become overweight and obese. @PERCENT4 of the people who use computers are obese or overweight. Peole spend less time interacting with friends and family and enjoying nature. In conclusion, computers have a negative effect on people and parents should control their child's time on the computers. Just because of a @CAPS8, many issues rise. So @CAPS9 you think you are addicted, try to make a time schedule for your whole day. Use the @CAPS8 for an hour a time and take rests before using it again. Addiction, online bullying, and becoming overweight is not the only problems of a @CAPS8, there are many more.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12354,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir Come in different ways. The first mood giving is greatful, in the ""Skills and the love of cooking that is still with me today"" @CAPS1 mood of greatful is ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" The mood of Admiration, ""I often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance. In this memoir there was a lot of moods, the ones the stood out from the author was his greatfulness and admiration.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10570,4,"The author of “Winter Hibiscus” concludes the story with a resolution of Saeng in order to show how Saeng will not give up and how she is determined. The reference to the spring blossoms shows how Saeng will fight to survive through the hardships, which are represented by winter. Just like the hibiscus that struggles to adapt to a new home, Saeng is struggling to adapt to a new country the final paragraph provides a resolution to the internal conflict of Saeng throughout the story by suggesting that Saeng will succeed in taking the test. In conclusion, the final paragraph in the story “Winter Hibiscus” provides a resolution to the conflict in the story, and shows the reader Saeng’s determination.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4077,2,"To remove or not to remove     Should people be able to remove books that are offensive? I think so;it would help our kids and young adults, to read more educational books, rather than magazines and comics.     To start off with everyone has their own opinion of what is offensive ,and whats not. personally I don't think that we should remove books, because their offensive; I think we should just not let that perticular person not put out anymore books. But it's like I said everyone has their own opinion.     Secondly it's entirely up to the library where to place certien books with blood and gore,and if to have them or not. personally I like books with blood and gore; because it shows how the world auccualy is. It'snot like a book where you save the princess or damsel in destress.      Lastly if parents are conerned about offensive books don't let your kids get those kind of books give them a boring book. I mean we know the books that kids are not supposed to read but parents let kids read them.      In conclusion if you feel that a book is offensive do't pick it up, and don't have it taken off the shelf because there is always someone to disagree with yo",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11885,5,"The @CAPS1 in this @CAPS2 is @CAPS3 very happy and always like they are doin something as a family. it shows this in @CAPS4 @NUM1 throughout the whole thing. it shows that @CAPS5 it shows how he is @CAPS6 much as close to his family as he is to the others around him. and that should mean a lot of things @CAPS5 he really doesnt know much english and all those people are goin to be an important influence on his life As an @CAPS8 and non-Cuban, that is how and where it shows @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20913,8," Laughter  @CAPS1 brings enthusiasm and joyfulness to any means or matter. Have you ever thought of laughter being a part or key element in a relationship? A time when laughter has really helped or made a relationship is when I met one of my still today best friends. I had just started fifth grade at a new school; I transferred from private to public. There was only a couple of people I knew there because of family, and these people were my cousins. As you can imagine I sat by the people whom I known for most of my life, and being in this position was very awkward. So, eventually at the end of the day I was ready to leave school and it was my first time I ever got to walk home since this school was much closer than my last. I had to walk home with a kid who lived right by me; this I had never known because of my sheltered young life. Luckily he was easy to talk to and we both had something in common which was skateboarding. This is when we started @CAPS1 because we talked about certain falls we had which were not so pleasant and he asked if we could hang out after school, and with me as a shy guy I said okay. After awhile, he came over with his skateboard and he told me to go down this ramp I had. So, I did and fell right on my back which we both thought was hilarious and we started @CAPS1 together. This @CAPS1 we did since walking home really made me feel comfortable with him and kind of bonded us. I feel that fall was a key part of our friendship because it made the awkwardness go right out the window and helped us start talking about more funny thing which we had seen. Ever since, every time we hang out something happens and we laugh as hard as you can imagine which goes down in our memories as good times. @CAPS1 has always ""sweetened the mood"" so to say and always makes a good time a great time to remember or to a truly boring time to a ""lets go do something"" time. Also, in any situation when I have been @CAPS1, or start to laugh, I feel good because every one laughs when I laugh. Most of my friends are also my friends because of my laughs and times I make them laugh. All in all, most of the relationships I have are because of @CAPS1 and how they comfort two or even more people by bonding them, and making every one feel like their having a good time with each other. This is key because than most encounters with people, even friends can be very awkward or not enjoyable. So, really in any case @CAPS1 is necessity because than every thing would be dull, plus you would really have no one to be able to have an appreciative time with. Therefore, every time I meet someone new or even someone I know laughter needs to exist in order to have a relationship with anyone.",15,19,34.0,34,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12913,5,"In ""Narciso Rodriguez from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"" there is a proud, happy mood. This memoir is all about heritage and the home. When he talks about his heritage he speaks about his food, home, and music that gives the reader a sense of pride. This is also a happy sort of memoir because it talks about the unity of the neighborhood despite the fact that they are all from different parts of the world,",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19041,7,One time that I was patient was whe I was @NUM1 years old when I coght my @NUM2 fish. Me and my dad went fishing on my uncles bout my dad stoped the bout where we wher going to fish my dad help me put on my life jacet and then he bated my pocil. And then castede it out for me my dad was catching them like crazy in like the @NUM2 @NUM4 he got about @NUM5 fish he tould  me to be “patient” that it was my @NUM2 time so as my dad was reailing them in I was siting there waiting and then all of a sudden my bobes went down I yelled out to my dad he said realit in  I tride and tride and almost feel of the bout my dad came over and helped me when we got it on the bout I asked my dad what kind of fish it was he said it was a blue gill he said it was a good catch for a firsttimmer so me and my dad relised it and went back to fishing. That was a time where I had to be patient.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12387,5,"The mood created for me in this memoin is a grateful, happy, and mostly thankful mood. I believe the mood is grateful because it is mentioned by the narrator many times like during the third paragraph where he mention how grateful he is to have parents who made good meals and taught him how to cook. Also he said he was grateful for being introduced to cuban music. I think this memoir also has a happy mood because although the hardships are mentioned it wasn't about how they struggled but how the concoured the hardships they faced when immigrating to @LOCATION1. Another way this memoir is happy is because he talks about how happy everyone is and how family makes a house turn into a home it just touches your heart and gives you a sence of happiness. I think this memoir is mostly thankful because this whole memoir to me feels like a thank you letter to the narator's parents. That is how the mood created in the memoir to me was grateful, happy, and mostly thankful.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1620,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, The question everyone is asking if computers benfit society? I believe that computers don’t because you can’t get exercise if youre always on the computers and @CAPS2's really hard to enjoy nature too. Another reason comuters don't benefit society is that you aren't interacting with friends and family. hopfully I have encouraged you to not use computers as much and go have fun with your family. If you are always on the computer how are you going to get exercise? @CAPS2's proven that more than half of united states of @CAPS1 is over weight. Exercising is more important than using the computer and knowing that you could be doing something use that you know is better wouldn't you do @CAPS2? Interacting with poeple is important to do because you can meet new people and if you don;t then you might learn to be shy and not make as much friends as you like @CAPS2's true taht oyu can make new friends over the computer but @CAPS2's not the some meeting them in person. Also if you do make a ""friends"" over the internet, you don't know if they are a stalker or a murderer. I urge you to go out and meet new people and not on the internet. knowing that you are better off not using the computer and being with the poeple you like, wouldn't you do @CAPS2? Yes you can play games on the computer but @CAPS2 would be ebtter if you play @CAPS2 with your fmaily. To answer the question everyone is asking I believe that computers don't benefit society at all and hopfully I have encouraged you to believe this too. ",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18778,7,"Being patient can sometimes be very hard, especially, when whatever you are being patient about is really distracting and painful. This is the story of how I had to be patient when I fell outside and???  meself. One day, my brother and I were playing outside. We were having for throwing water   balloons mchother.I was already soaked from head to toe but we still kept playing .Suddenly, I heard a buzzing sound by my ear. I turned around and saw a huge be next to me.I was only @NUM1 yers old and very `afraid of bees. I turned  and  rah down the driveway and kept going around the house , thinking that the bee was still following  me .I was starting to get tired so I tripped and fell scraping  off a good amount of skin  in the process. I immediately began to org when I saw blood passing from the??? Inside to tell my mom. “@CAPS1! I fell!” I managed to scream between sobs. “@CAPS2 my gosh! Let me go find some band aids my mother replied. The pain was intolerable for my little body. I kept silently crying but I knew I had to be patient while my mom went to look for bandages. Just @DATE1 I had wasted bunk of band aids by plastering them a cross my don’ts face. I had to be patient and???For a long time, till my mother usually found the bandages. I found them!” my mom said, while running down the???In there / WAS setting.  “@CAPS3 you for being so patient?” @CAPS4 stock the   band aids a cross the cut on my leg and then gave me a lollipop. T know I had been a good girl by being patient.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
202,1,"I completely agree with those people who think computers have a negative effect on us today. Even though computers are great they do have many negative effects on people who use them. Since. new technology, and post pictures on websites where everyone can see. Also they have games for computers that people get hooked on. Lastly, there are predator online. The new technology is amazing, like webcams where you can video chat or cellphones where you could take pictures, @CAPS1 they do have negative effects. There have been many suicides over cyber bullying. This is where people bully kids over the internet. Also some people send naked pictures online or even while webcamming. this is illegal and absurd that young or even older people would be doing these actions. Also there are websites where people can post these pictures of you that are very personal and make a huge difference in you life. There are many people who have games for their computer or download games off of websites. Most people actually get addicted to the game, They would play it all day if they could and if they arent playing they are wishing they could. This makes them miss out on alot of things. They might not get enough excersise or not do any homework which will make you grades drop. They could also not be spending time with family. It also might change who you are as a person. The most important thing about the use of computers is your safety. There are predator all over the internet and can pretend they are someone from school and ask where you live. You should never tell anyone where you live or your full name online. They can and most likely will come to your house for you. It could most likely cost you or even family members your lives. Computers can be fun and you can learn an abundant amount of information but as long as you smart about using it. Remember not to tell anyone where you live or dont take pictures and send them that are personal. They could be all over the internet the next day. Lastly, worry about your family, grades, and health than some useless game. Be smart and safe!",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8905,4,"I belive the author concludes with that quote for an assortment of reasons. One is to show that the charecter isn’t just going to give up, that her failing wasn’t the end for her. This shows sorting like morale of never giving up. It feels as the character is referring to the hibiscus as sensely. “The hibiscus will be budding”   which means that she herself will branch out and learn more. By the spring time she would have learned enough and experienced enough to try to pass the test again. The hibiscus also reminds her of her home. When she will look at it she will find the courage to pull through and to face her challenges like her test.The ending quotealso wraps up the story.It also shows the charecters will of not giving up and to always try.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16315,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building face in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are: @CAPS1 they choose dirigible instead of balloon, because the fabric used in dirigibles is lighter. Second, their extended use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area and think about the safety of passengers get in or get off",0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18120,7,One time when I had to be patient was when I went to my first nascar race. I had to be patient because there wer a lot of people there on I didn`t want to get last. An I had to wait till the people who were in front got in their seats. Second- we finally got our seats an I had to sit by this scary person he was weird so the race was beginning an you could tell because the racers were getting into there cars. The jets went over us and the @ORGANIZATION1 was going. Then the racers were off to race. Finally the race a starts on my favorite racer is in the lead (@PERSON1). The cars were going so fast around like you could feel the bleachers shake. It was a fun exsperense but you had stay close is listen and be patient.,10,8,,18,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10580,4,"At the end of ""Winter Hibiscus,"" the author, Minfong Ho, concludes the story through stating, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again. The author ends the story in such a way in order to reveal the hope that lies in Saeng's future. After failing her drivers's test, Saeng returns home with disappointment and sadness. This last paragraph, however, shows that soon enough Saeng's luck will change. The reader is left with a hint that Saeng will retake her test and pass. Also, this ending paragraph reflects upon Saeng's determined personality to overcome many obstacles she is @CAPS1. This paragraph proves she will not give up even after she was forced to live in the United states instead of her home. Her success in fitting in with her new life is shown when through the quote, ""Almost reluctantly she realized that many of the things that she thought of as strange before. had become... almost familiar"". Truly Saeng is a determined character.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4763,2,"I blieve that any book or movie that is in the the library is in the library for a good reason. The world is full with things that will hurt and make a perosn feel bad about their self, and there is things in the world that will make you feel like you on top of the world.     Yes, there is things that children can see and what they are not suppost to see, and those things are mostly likely  not expost to the student until they are at a muture and a responiable age.      Life is full of things and as children grown up they are going to be teach, show things that parent thinks that is uncomfortable.       Such as: Books that show people with disoders, a books about romance, movies with cussing and sex scenes in the movies, violence, some parnet don'@CAPS1 even want their children to see a simple kiss on the cheek. Which I find really weird because things like that are going to happen in life.      On the other hand, if your child is doing things that they shouldn'@CAPS1 be doing then okay. Take acting. I also agree that a children @NUM1 shouldn'@CAPS1 be thought sex and show either what female have and what boys have on their body. Their mind shouldn'@CAPS1 even be set on that. Books, movies, @CAPS1.v shows shouldn'@CAPS1 be remove because they show what life is about and what is going to happen when you get older.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18558,7,"For some people it is as hard as a rock, but to some it just comes naturally. Patience is a big part of hunting. You must be tolerant and understanding. Even if things seem to take a turn for the worst. Take this for example. I had woke up at six and jumped out of bed. I was finally going to shoot my first deer! I pulled on my camofage and hunter’s orange as my grandpa drove down my long drive way to get me. The moon light shone bright and I was giggling with exitment, but I knew I had to calm down. As we drove to the place I was going to hunt I was amazed by how quite evreything was. We walked back to the blind on a leaf covered trail and set evrething in it’s place. After, dosing of a little the morning light seemed to peek through the trees and light up the fresh green field. The water vapor looked like sparkles floting in mid air. We heard a grouse drum and had a red squarle jump out at us, but no deer. After a long morning of sitting we disided to pack up. We always had tomarrow. So that was the end of our hunt. We had an exiting time, and it was all because of patience. Patience @MONTH1 not always help in ways you wish, but it can help you see many diffrent and beautiful things.",12,11,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13264,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is a very welcoming and happy one. Right off the bat Rodriguez talks about the advantages in his life. The advantage of where he lived, his heritage and his ""family"". When Rodriguez first moved into his house, he thought of it as ""a modest three- room apartment. After all the good memories shared in the apartment Rodriguez attitude about the appartment changed. ""Turned this simple house into a home. His heritage, or culture, filled the air. Some of these cultures included Cuban cooking and music. ""Which I adored to this day"" another mood setting advantage is his ""family"". Rodriguez talks about how his family was always over filling the house with laughter ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative."" A welcoming and happy mood is created by the author.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3279,2,"Some people ask, '@CAPS1 books should be censored from libraries?' @CAPS2 are always parents who think that the libraries have books that are inappropriate for their kids, so they speak out against the library and tell them to censor or remove the books. I believe that in order for a library to censor or remove books, magazines, movies, music, etc., it depends on @CAPS1 the subject matter of those things are about.      It's also the parent's job to monitor @CAPS1 their kids read, listen to, or watch. @CAPS2's no reason for a library to censor and take away books because one or two parents complain that it's inappropriate, when the parent can just pull their kids away from the book or movie and move on to something else. It's not the libraries job to watch kids and make sure they don't read, listen to, or watch anything bad. It's the parent's job.      Katherine Paterson, an author, had a good point, also. She said that if she has the right to take books off the shelf, then so does everyone else. If everyone else starts taking books off the shelf, we have no books left. Everyone has a different view of books. @CAPS1 one person thinks is bad, another @MONTH1 not. It goes the other way, too: @CAPS1 one person thinks is good, another @MONTH1 think is bad. On the subject of movies, @CAPS2 are some that should be censored, like the movies containing extreme violence or gore. I remember going to the library when I was a kid, and I wanted to check out a @CAPS3 movie. I couldn't check it out because I wasn't at least @NUM1. I though it was ridiculous because it was only a @CAPS3 movie, and it was harmless.      With magazines and music, it depends on the subject matter of those as well. Some magazines contain inappropriate pictures and articles for young kids, and it's those things that should be kept away from the kids. They don't neccessarily need to be censored or taken away, just kept in another section for teens and adults. The music poses a problem, though. A lot of the music these days can be very inappropriate, especially rap music. Music that sends negative messages and contains a lot of cursing in the lyrics should be censored, in my opinion. It doesn't belong in a library environment where young kids are roaming around and where they're influenced by it.      In conclusion, books, music, movies, and magazines should or should not be censored or removed based on the subject. It just depends on @CAPS1 the subject is about and how inappropriate it is. @CAPS1 one parent thinks is bad, another @MONTH1 not. Overall, I think that books, music, movies, and magzines shouldn't be censored. Parents can just decide @CAPS1 they want their kid(s) to read, watch, or listen to",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12023,5,"The mood of the memoir is happy. I know this because the Rodriguez family crossed the border from Cuba to the United States to have a better life. They came in 1956, but had to wait until 1970 to be reunited with their Aunts and @CAPS1. They now have a bigger house. They are grateful they live in the United States.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15281,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building the workers faced many obstacles. One of the obstacles was safety. While the dirigible, or zeppelin, was docked its body would sway in the breeze. This lead to a question of safety for the passengers getting on and off. Also there was no safe way to weigh the dirigible down, like when the dirigible lands in a field. Any weights used would be hanging over pedestrians.  Another obstacle was the law prohibiting airships flying low over urban areas This law made it illegal for dirigibles to dock or approach the area The main obstacle was nature itself. There are very violent winds at the top of the Empire State Building which would cause the dirigible to sway. Docking at the Empire State Building was too complicated for the idea to be completed.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19466,7,"When it was @DATE1 @CAPS1 and I could not wait for @DATE1 so I open my gifts. My mom and dad give my sister and my second sister and me us. give us money so we can go buy thing that we like. My dad mom and dad and my mom and my mom dad and mom give us money. like my mom and dad dose, and I rember I buy a cute cuformin boots and I could wait to open the boots on @DATE1 and I was @CAPS2 up and down and asking can we open one gife it is @DATE1 @CAPS1 and my mom and dad said no and I got mad. So the next day I wake up on @DATE1 and it was above @NUM1 in the moning and I look in the living room and no one was up so I have to wait until when my patent wake up and I could wait and the time takes forever and that was a tim that I could not wait.",7,8,,15,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9334,4,The author concludes the story like that to make the reader more intrested and to understand it will all happen again and again year after year. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1154,1,"Dear Readers, I understand that some @MONTH1 think computers can effect peoples' lives. This is because it causes them to not go outside excersising and enjoying nature. My point of view is that people have the choice to go out side, exercise, and enjoy nature. Computers give so much information that it could give people ideas of fifferent activities people can do outdoors. Computers also have abilities to download videos and other soft ware that people can look at and perform excersing with them, and learn techniques. In my life my mom and dad, and many other people im my family, look online at different websites to see what activities we can do on the weekends and seasonal activities. Computers are very important and are life changing. If it wasn't for computers some people wouldn't be able to get an education. Doctors, police officers, and banks use computers for thier job and it helps us go through are everyday lives with ease. From what i see and understand i that computers have a positive effect on our lives. Computers can be negative but it all has to do with self control and how you use it.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3467,2,"Censorship    'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other chldren have taken off the shef. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf -that work I abhor -then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 was quoted from an author named Katherine Paterson. I don't believe certain materials such as books should be removed from shelves under any circumstances. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion about certain materials. If books are removed from the shelves due to censorship, than what is the point of writing or even reading books? If people continue to remove books because they're found to be offensive, then there won't be any books left to read.     I have seen many offensive books. Whether it had something to do with religious beliefs or even revealing too much sexual content, I'm sure it's offensive to someone somewhere. Books are written by authors who believe they have the right to express themselves through writing. If you are to take away or ban a certain book from the shelf, than what would the author who wrote the book think? @CAPS1 world is full of offensive and rather disturbing books. It can't be right to just get rid of those things because they bother us. Everyone has the right to read any book they want to. Just because it offends one person, doesn't mean it offends everyone.     I believe censorship is unnessesary. What gives anyone the right to remove or change something because it's inappropriate? I have personally read a few books that I wouldn't want little kids to read but that doesn't mean I should remove it from the shelves. Perhaps, somebody else has been waiting to find that book. If I did remove it than I'm restricting others from experiencing the joys of reading that book.      Censorship in general is wrong. Everyone is entitled to their own beliefs and different ways of expressing themselves. I don't believe anyone has the right to take something, that someone has worked on for so long to make, and remove it because they find it offensive. There will always be something out there that you won't approve of. Just because you don't approve of it doesn't mean everybody doesn't approve. Authors write books for a reason, musicians write music for a reason, people make movies and magazines for a reason. What gives anyone the right to take something that somebody made and ban it from the rest of the world because it's offensive?     Books are there to help us become more educated and more open minded towards different thoughts and ideas. We shouldn't just ban them because they offend certain people. If you don't like a book because it offends you, than don't read it. It's just that simple. If people continue to remove books because they're offensive, then there won't be any books left to read.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7105,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in different ways The woman who had listen to the older men to get where she was going had made her run out water and almost died of thirst. As she was going to this place she had seen a snake “At some point, tumble weeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake it really did look like a diamondback” (@NUM1). She started to see things that wasn’t there.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15800,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"" By Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the empire state building faced several obstacles in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles they faced was the fact that there was a lack of suitable landing area. The dirigibles were thought to be able to anchor on the mooring mast for refueling or service, however, another obstacle was in the way; nature. That was the greatest obstacle. The wind at the top of the building were always shifting because of violent air currents. The builders were afraid that the back of the ship would ""swivel around and around the mooring mast"" With that said, they came to a conclusion that they would be ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street [which] was neither practical or safe. In order for it to be safe, they came to another obstacle. The entire building would have to be modified and strengthened with over @NUM1 dollars worth of investment. Lastly, there already stood a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. With all obstacles faced, it was never opened to the public.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3566,2,"Should offensive or graphic books be removed from the libary? Well,in my point of view I think books, music, movies, magazines, etc.. are amazing, exciting and fun to read or watch they should not be removed from the shelves in the local libary. For a fact people in general have many types of tastes in books thier's drama, romance, action and many other that also apply to movies, magazines and etc. The public should not be punished for one's intreast in themes, and how they take the book. Thier should be an age limit in witch kids can't read certain books and those of age should read whatever they please.          I, myself  like to read scary books, they give me chills and all types of questions runing through my brain. Someone else from my community could have the same trait of thought I have when reading a scary book. Without books that don't fit are personality thier would be less people in libaries reading and more people trying to keep themseleves occupied and half of them might even get bored and start commiting crimes, to keep there self  occupied. People in the community have rights to read, hear or watch witch ever type of material they like.      If people really do have a hard time with some of the material that is on display, they should not even pick it up to begin with. They should look for stuff they would enjoy, not just because the book is about 'violence' or just simply don't like the theme they, should not hold it against other people that might enjoy it. Books and other material were meant for us to enjoy them and from the authors or directores choice to share with us thier stories. Without books like those many people can't get ideas to help them creat thier own book or novel.      So that is my view on the situation, people should enjoy whatever material they like. But, if you are one of those people that think books, movies, magazienes should be removed, take a day and read a book or see a movie from your local libary and see how it will change your mind",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12781,5,"In the memoir, the author creates a sort of grateful, appreciative mood. Throughout the memoir, Narciso repeats how grateful he is to have such courageous parents. For example in the first few sentences of paragraph @NUM1, ""My mother and father come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind thier families, friends, and careers in the country they loved.""  this shows how grateful he is for his parents, to do all this, just to give him a better life. I would feel just as grateful For my parents if they had done this for myself, just as how Narciso felt.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15422,6,"The problems the builders had in attempting to build the Empire State Building were first of all, the dirigible would have to be tied to the mast and the single cable tether would ""stress the buildings frame."" In paragraph @NUM1, the author says that the wind pressure and the weight of the dirigible could not be supported by the current foundation and so the frame would have to be made stronger and changed. The final problem was when ""Columbia"" delivered newspaper to the Empire State building. The mooring equipment was not installed because of previous problems with the design, laws and common sense used when making this building. The rest of the problems had to do with the obliviousness of reality due to the actual effectivness of the building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6440,3,"In the beginning the cyclist was ready to go and happy. By the time he got half way there he was “losing hope”. It was very hot and he was simple alone. By the end, he was relieved because not only did he find water, he found an easier way to get to Yosemite. The first old group of men didn’t help, but the second man did.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12120,5,"In the excerpt ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: the Blueprints of Our Lives. Narciso Rodriguez create a feeling of mood about their home life. Narciso talk about life at home and about his parents cooking. He is greatful for his parents cooking and how he learned from them. In paragraph three it states ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" This shows that he considered people around him family and not just his blood relatives. He shows this by talking about how his surrogate grandparents lived in the basement and he didn't know his real grandparents until 1970 when they were allowed to leave cuba. He is always grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. The whole memoir is about love, family which sets a positive mood for the reader.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7677,3,"The features of the setting in, ""Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” affect the cyclist in many ways. After following the old mens' advice he sets off on his journey. After the first town appears the sun realy starts to beat down which realy affects the cyclist. In the essay it says “The sun was beginning to heat beat down, but I barely noticed it.” He @MONTH1 have not noticed it yet but then later on the long winding road on the new flat terrain he runs out of water and that is real dangerous in weather that hot. The text says, “The speed limit was @NUM1. I was doing a water- depleting @NUM2.” In this part of the story it proves that the cyclist is out of water. In this kind of setting you can run into dangerous creatures. In the story it says, “I toiled on. At some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake. It really did look like a diamondback-blocked the majority of the pavement in front of me.” This entry proves to the reader that there are snakes in this sort of setting. The features of the setting in “Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” affects the cyclist greatly.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3607,2,"In libraries and bookstores worldwide books are written and published with subject matter ranging from odd or inappropriate, to serious or violent. These books are written to target emotions in the reader that spark excitement and humor, horror and empathy among many others. However, though these books are made for a specific purpose, it is sometimes unclear as to how the book is appropriate for the eyes of a young reader, or even a mature reader. These books appear unappealing and offensive. However, though they don't appeal to you as a reader, how could this book be censored without the unanimous disapproval of everyone? Censorship of these books is unjust because of the right of free speech and press, because all subjects are deserving of being written, and most importantly because target audiences deserve books written in their interest regardless of their approval.     The first reason that their should be no censorship of novels and works of literature is because writers deserve the freedoms of speech and press. They are aloud to voice their own opinions and write about the subject matter that they are most interested in. Though many times they have used subject matter that is highly provocative or inappropriate, they still have the capacity and the legal ability to write about what they wish. To stop them from writing their own opinionated stories is similar to the censorship of books in nazi @LOCATION1. Millions of books were burned and hundreds, if not thousands of writers were executed for conveying opinions in their work that conflicted with the ideas of their government. Even though there are books not written for all ages they are still deserving of a reader.     The next reason that books should not have censorship is because new ideas cover topics that have never been discussed. Books and stories are meant to push the mark of what has been written and what can be written. The variety of literature is the reason why it is so popular. For thousands of years, written text has been a way to understand and connect with cultures and people through written language. And though stories @MONTH1 not be written in a manner that would be appropriate for a child, it doesn't mean that the story shouldn't be written or read. Its use should simply be monitored so that only those capable of accepting or understanding its message are capable of reading it.     Lastly, censorship is simply unjust because without it there is a better chance to discuss and attempt to describe stories that target a vast crowd of people. Though the materials found in a story @MONTH1 be horrific to a parent, it @MONTH1 be a preferred form of literature for a different group of people. And to limit the literary subjects that people prefer could be parallelled with limiting a person's voice of opinion. It simply isn't reasonable to allow only a single category of work, with only a few varieties of messages, for only a select group of people. Variety is what seperates a person's opinions, and makes their being different than another's.     Therefore, censorship of literature should not be enforced. Writing topics should be open to all people, because whether they are offensive or not they convey a purpose. And because writers have the right to illustrate their points through a literal medium, there should never be a limit on these rights. That is why censorship should never be able to remove a piece of literature from any shelf.",4,5,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3171,2,"Our founding fathers creating amendments for the people.  One of the greatest is the freedom of speech.  Censorship of offessive materials is unnecessary.  Books, music, movies, and magazines @MONTH1 have bad messages or nudity, but that does not give anyone the right to get rid of them.  Book burning happened because of the dislike of people's writing.  People have the right to say how they feel by any medium.  Censorship of anything makes a child more immature.     Book burning is a horrible action by any person.  People used to burn them because of all the sex, drugs, and violence, but doing this destroys people's dreams, theories, and ideas.  In the book @CAPS1 @NUM1, firemen would burn any book seen within a home.  Almost ever single book in the world is not factual, unless it is nonfiction.  The firemen in the novel destroyed any bits of type because it was false and went against the government.  That basically means every kind of book out there.  The causation of such a tragedy was that every citizen befriended their television or video games.  Without books there would be no real sort of entertainment.  Also, the things we read everyday are what make us who we are so there, in fact, should not be less books but more.     Libraries have no right to censor books.  Freedom of speech has been around almost since the beginning of this nation.  Why should it change now?  Stopping obscene literature from being in the reach of the people is stopping writers from speaking out.  They @MONTH1 have already written their ideas, but if nobody reads their work then there is no way that they'll be heard.  Libraries are not there to stop things from reaching little kids' ears but to provide any knowledge a man needs.     Parents have always stopped their precious babies from watching certain shows and movies.  I once knew a woman who would never allow her son to watch the @PERSON1 series because of the use of sorcery.  She believed that he would try to learn witchcraft.  I found that quite ridiculous when I heard about it.  When a kid watches murder mysteries, fantasy shows, or dramas with bits of nudity, it is different to them and they are curious.  After watching these kind of scenes, a parent needs to sit down with their child and talk about what they jus saw.  The child needs to know that killing is wrong and justice is good and magic and dragons don't exist.  Nudity has always been considered a bad thing but penises and boobs are part of the human body.  Kids will be more mature about it the more they see it, but that doesn't the child should watch porn.     Censory has always been taken the wrong way.  People believe if that the offensive material is shown then the watcher or reader will have bad thoughts about what they learned about.  We should not get rid of the obscenity at all.  We should have an understanding of the bad things in life.  Burning books is a bad way to destroy the foundations of the human mind.  Freedom of speech is a law and should be followed.  Censorship is not always a good thing for children or anyone for that matter",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
242,1,"Dear Newspaper, In our town, more people are on the computer each day. Some people state that you can do a lot on the computer and talk to people. But, I believe that our town should not support advances in technology. You will have more time to exercise, talk to family and friends in person and to take part in different activities around the town. Do you want to be overweight and not be in shape? Well, if you sit at the computer all day every day, you will become like that. ""I think exercise shoud be a part of everybody's day,"" @CAPS1 teacher @PERSON1 from @LOCATION1 stated. You would be so attatched to your computer, that you wouldn't work out. In the state of @LOCATION1, it is proven that @PERCENT1 of residents are overweight from not exercising and @PERCENT2 are overweight by not eating properly. This shows more people in @LOCATION1 don't exercise than not eating properly. @CAPS4 wants to be overweight and you can change that! More people each year make facebook and @CAPS2 @CAPS3. Some kids in school are on the internet all day talking to friends who live down the street. Students refuse to talk to their friend on the phone. Instead, they do it online. ""@CAPS4 can understand their tone of the message sent,"" @PERSON3 stated. You could interpret it in different ways. When you are on the phone, it is a quick and easy way to communicate not waiting for somebody to type back. If you are a person who is always on the computer, plan a get together with your friend to talk in real life. Sidewalk sales, clubs, sports teams, holiday stroll, these are events that every town offers! Instead of sitting dreaming of being on the team, go out and do it! Each town cares about its residents and want them to have fun. That is why towns offer these activities. ""@CAPS5 want to make the town interasting and everybody to know each other,"" says @CAPS6 @CAPS7 @PERSON2. If you participate in these activities, you will meet other kids your age around the town. If your town offers all of these activities, they are helping you out. Being out helping the town is way better than sitting in your house on the computer! In many ways both advancing technology or not, why be inside doing nothing but talking to people? Go and talk to them in real life. Being in shape, talking to people in real life and activities your town offers is the way to go. Thank you for your concern",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15548,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The greatest one being violent winds so high up. The back of the zeppelin would swivel around the mooring mast. There was also the fear of it blowing into the sharp spires of nearby buildings, causing it to burst. They couldn't use lead weights to hold it in place, because it wouldn't be safe to have them dangling above the streets. There was, at the time, a law against airships flying too low over urban areas, for simelar reasons. This would have made it illegal for a zeppelin to dock there anyway. These are some obvious problems, overlooked in the design of the mooring mast.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15711,6,"In the excerpt 'The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First of all, if a thousand-foot dirigible held by a single cable tether was moored at the top of the building, it would add stress to the frame. The workers had to transmit the stress ""All the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" They had to modify & strengthen the frame, which would cost over sixty thousand dollars. They also had to design an ornamental mast with four wings to house the mooring arm. What the builders did not realize was that their mooring mast not only had problems the frame work, but the dirigible would swivel around without being able to use lead weights to hold it down. There was nothing they could do to prevent this, flammability, or existing laws.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1359,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers have a huge effect on society, can you even imagine where we would be without them? They are great for communication, learning, and shopping. Computers have a large effect on people. Without computers, communication with co-workers, family, and friends would be nearly impossible. Social networking sites, such as @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @CAPS4-In play a huge wrolein everyday life. These are the sites you use to access information from others to making plans for the weekend. Do you think that your children use the intrenet too much? Nowadays, that is their way to communicate with their peer. It makes them more social, which is a great quality to have in life. Also, I don'd know about you, but I have talked to many people around the world using the internet. It gives you the chance to experince other cultures. Communication was absolutely not as easy before having computers. It @MONTH1 seem hard to believe, but you can learn tremendous amounts @MONEY1 things from the internet. This @MONTH1 include learning about people. How would you video chat with someone without @CAPS5 or @ORGANIZATION2? You can learn a lot about a person from talking to the face to face, a thing that can't be done on a phone. Also, research for school could not be done without the internet. In a recent survey, @NUM1 out @MONEY1 @NUM2 teenagers said that they use a search engine site, such as @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS6, or @ORGANIZATION3 at least once a day, @CAPS7 out @MONEY1 those @NUM1 said that it is for school. If it weren't for these search engines, children wouldn't be doing too great in school. Clearly, the computer provides ample ways to research and learn on a daily basis. It @MONTH1 sound rediculous, but in @DATE2, @PERCENT1 @MONEY1 shopping was done on the internet. If someone wants to start a business, their first stop is usually the internet. People are making @MONEY1 every year with the help @MONEY1 computers. People find it easiest to buy something with the click @MONEY1 a mouse. It is easier than the hassle @MONEY1 crowded malls and long lines. Also, do you remember when @CAPS8 @DATE1 was the time to put the alarm clock on for @NUM4 @CAPS9? Well, how people do @CAPS10 shopping online, there are hundreds, even thousands @MONEY1 sites that offer great sales. Now think about how purchasing items would be if it weren't for the internet. It's not agreat image, is it? As you can tell, computers have affected our lives in a great way. Communication, learning, and even shopping have become much simpler. Many @MONTH1 think that computers are not bad to have, but the good over shadows those aspects.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6647,3,because he was telling to make it wirte he nite to go and he much it because he was drieing to soil and because he was drieing 55 mph pert hour and 12 mph and sometime life can feel so cruel in life ya dig and that ia all I can said right now.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1603,1,"To the local Newspaper, I think using computers does not have a negative effect on people. I believe it's an advantage to use it. You are given technology, advantage so why not use it? They give people chance to chat with people allow them to make friends. These days people even watch to shows on the computer-websites such as: @CAPS1, @ORGANIZATION1 allows them to search anything and watch it on @CAPS1. People make emails, download music and several other things. Children at the age of @NUM1, @NUM2 even @NUM3 move use computers-play games on them. i have a cousin who is @NUM3 and he plays games on it all the time he even knows how to search something on the computer. Some people @MONTH1 think it gives you a negative effect, but really it doesn't. Those people think that should comee to the reality. We have to step up as the life goes. Let's say a girl doesn't have a computer, her parents think that computers spoil children, their technology spoil children. The girl goes to school, her friends asks her to give them her e-mail. Every time her friends asks her about email she makes up some excuse and tries to avoid the subject. this time she made an excuse, but how many times is she going to make up an excuse. Then suppose one day her friends finds out she doesn't have a computer and embarasses her in front of everyone. So, what I'm trying to say is that you have to see around you and go on with it computer also saves your time. You can just type instead of writing whole out. You can make your writing cursive or any other that you would like. After reeding my letter, I hope you understand my point. Next time you see a person who thinks computers give negative effects to people, tell the advantages of the computers and how it benefits society around you.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15556,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles durring construction. While designing the mast the architects realized they couldn't just drop the mooring mast on to the Empire State building as this would add stress to the buildings fram. So the building would have to be modified and strengthened to withhold these conditions. Then the builders ran into a problem with safety, the winds on top of the building were violent and constantly shifting. This would cause the dirigible to swivel around the mast. They the decided to add lead weights to weigh the dirigible down but, having those dangling high above pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe. Lastley, existing laws against airships flying low over urban areas made it illegal to complete their goal. Overall the planning of the empire state building had many difficulties.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10563,4,"The author of the story “Winter Hibiscus” concludes the story with a sentence stating that when Saeng’s Hibiscus’ first bud appears in the spring she will be back to take drivers test. The author might have decided to conclude the story like that because what if the plant died, would she go back and take the test? The author was probably just wanting the reader to think hard about it. In conclusion, the author of the story “Winter Hibiscus” might have concluded his story to make it somewhat suspenseful.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3488,2,"With new things coming out these days, I, @PERSON1, believe that all things out in libraries should have a certain organization for certian subjects. I am not asking for any removal or destorying of books, magazines, or anything that is in the libraries but I am asking for a fair hearing of my opinion.     I would like more organization for certian things, I do know people have their own ideas about things that should be in a book. These books found in a library could bring enjoyment to people, but sometimes can offence other people.  So, with this way I would really like if there was a scale, or organization of books.      So with that, people who dont like certain subjects could easily stay away from the books that they do not like. If there is a scale factor of these books, music, magazines, or movies, you can just have a number or a letter symbolizing the certain catagories. Even though, I, personally think it is alittle worse than a different organization, it would atleast worn people of these things.     If you were to deside that either way would be better so then less complaining people would be wanting all books destroyed. I think that organizing the books in a different way would be better. This would be a lot of work but, thinking of a mother of a child could easily keep them away from books the mother would not even touch herself.     I would not like any books removed from libraries. This is because if you start taking one out of the library, that my offence someone, I believe you will start taking out more than one. With this thought I think it will come down to either everyone complaining about a certain book in the library to no library at all. So please, please think about organizing the books, magazes, movies, music, and more so then this will not happen in the future. Thank you for your time to read this, I hope you can find a way of going in to this subject more. Also, maybe publish some too, into the newspaper.",3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10277,4,"In the story Winter Hibiscus by Minfong Ho, the author concludes the story with Saeng saying “when they come back in the spring. When the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" The author chose to end the story this way to give it a positive ending. The rest of the story is and sad because saeng misses her home in Vietnam. ""Its – it’s not a real one. I mean, it’s not like the kind we had at – at – she found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again. Not like the ones we had before."" The end sends the message that even though things are different than before, she won’t give up trying to make a good life in the United States and not let this change affect her ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9584,4,"I think the author concludes the story the way she did to show determination. I also believe that it symbolizes adaption, when the season changes, as will Saeng, she will take the test again. Everything will soon go back to normal and will adjust just like she will. Everything is “almost familiar to her now” (@NUM1).",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15879,6,"Though the idea to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building was seriously considered, safety and reality made in an unrealistic feat. In order for the mooring mast to successfully hold a dirigible, over @MONEY1 worth of modifications had to be made to the framework of the building. Still @CAPS1 got in the way, the greatest being safety. Most dirigibles from outside the @LOCATION2 used hydrogen gas rather than helium, which is highly flammable. The owners of the Empire State building realized how bad a dirigible fire would be, and more so if it took place over the densely populated city of New York. Wind also was a serious factor that disassembled the idea. If the dirigible were to be tied to the mast, the back of the ship which swing around, and lead weights were out of the question. Blocks of lead hanging above pedestrians in the streets of New York was neither a practical nor safe idea. An additional obstacle was the existing law that would not allowed airships to fly low, or too close to urban areas. Even if it was attempted, ships would have a hard time docking because of forceful winds. These @CAPS1 were all stumbled across in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the building, an idea that is no longer considered.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19046,7,"The first time I ever was patient before is when I had to wait @DATE1 years to get @DATE1 film out of my camera my mom always promises me to get the film but sense her money was use on ??? She told me to wait @DATE1 @DATE1. So I waited @DATE1 @DATE1 have crine up and this is what happened I ask my mom again can I get my film out of my camera. She said no because she used her money??? school supples. I was happened to wait another @DATE1 @DATE1 so @DATE1 @DATE1 came again. I ask her and she said no because once again she spend her money no paying people back from them helping her out like any dad. So I had to wait until next @NUM1 @DATE1 so I waited, and waited, and finally @NUM1 @DATE1 has pass and she forgets so she had to get groceries. So @DATE1 I ask her one more time and she said. Yes but she had to pay my dad back on helping her and after that she said after school I??? bringing my film out to buy. So how now told you how??? I have waited to do that also had to get a new diginal camera because it has been droped to many time.",7,8,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6148,3,The features of the setting affect the cycleist in many diferent ways. For example it was June and he was in the @CAPS1 of California. It was very hot and the dehydrated him. Also he did no know where he was going so he had to rely on other people directions. Also he had to keep dehydrate. That what affected the cycleist. ,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12857,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from home: the blueprints of our lives. The mood created by the memoir are described in many ways. To start of with, ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that FAMILY had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" Quite the contrary, his neighborhood was made up mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants at a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, @CAPS2 will always be grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. @CAPS2've often told them that they did was a much more courageous thing than @CAPS2 could have ever done. Finally, It was here where @CAPS2 learned the real definition of ""family"". @CAPS2 will never forget his house and his gracious neighborhood and @CAPS2 will never forget how his parent turned this simple house to a home. In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", from home: the blueprints of our lives. The mood created by the memoir where discribe in these ways.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4318,2,"Books, magazines, movies, and music are created with a huge diversity. Fiction, @ORGANIZATION1, horror, fashion, sciencefiction, and many more categories of literature are made. There is something out there everyone will enjoy. What would you do if you did not have the choice to read, listen to, or watch the materials you like because someone else had an ill opinion of it?     Everyone has an opinion. It @MONTH1 be in favor of something or it @MONTH1 not be. I believe every book, movie, magazine, and other piece of literature should have a rightful place on the shelf. To some people it @MONTH1 be offensive, but that does not mean they have to read it. Someone @MONTH1 enjoy a piece of work  another finds offensive. It is all a matter of opinion. The opinion of one person should not effect materials being able to be on a shelf or not.      If you walked into a libraray and the shelves were filled with books, but only books everyone had a good opinion about the shelves wouldn't seem very full. It is hard to get two people to agree on the same thing. Imagine trying to get everyone to agree on the literature in a public libraray. Censorship is understandble to an extent, but I believe the libraries should organize all their literature into categories and sections. In these categoires and section people @MONTH1 look for the materials they wish to see and avoid the offensive materials they do not.      Libraries have rated @CAPS1 movies. Many people could consider rated @CAPS1 movies to be offensive, but many people could enjoy watching rated @CAPS1 movies. Who wins, the people who find then offensive or the people who enjoy them? It is a hard choice to make. I believe the libraries should carry the movies and if someone finds them offensive they should simply not watch them. The same goes for books, magazines, and music. If you find it offensive simply do not read it or listen to it.     There are hundreds of different sytles of writing, plots of movies, lyrics of songs, and covers of magazines. They have such a diversity because everyone has a different opinion of the lyrics, covers, styles, and plots. They can not censor things just because some people find them offensive. Others @MONTH1 enjoy them. What would you do if your favorite book was not allowed in your public lirbaray",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18391,7,"When I was in fifth grade I wasn't doing so well in math so my @CAPS1 agreed on helping study for my upcoming test. So on @DATE1 I got up really early but my mom was running really late getting home from work, and she was the one driving me there. So my @CAPS1 was being really understanding and patient. So my mom got home drove me and we ended up a hour and a half late but my @CAPS1 was still very patient. So we started to help me and I was completely lost I didn't understand anything she was talking about but she still tried and was very understanding. I got almost every question wrong that she asked me and she still try to her best ability to help me understand it. She had to helping me for about @NUM1 hours but she followed through and really helped me and I actually got a A on that quiz all because of her help and patience with me. I know it must have been hard to work with me for that long without losing her patience with me and I really respect that and I am very grateful to know someone like that.",10,9,,19,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21398,8,"                                         ""@CAPS1 to @CAPS2"" @CAPS3 you ever seen the little signs that say, ""@CAPS4, @CAPS5, @CAPS2""? People often @CAPS3 them in their homes as a reminder on how one should @CAPS4 their life. Well, I believe that laughing is one of the most important elements you need, in order to @CAPS4 your life to the fullest. Laughter keeps the soul young, the heart happy, and the spirit joyful. Without laughter, one @MONTH1 feel that they @CAPS3 an emptiness inside that they are unable to fill. Laughter has played a huge role in my life and has created some of the best memories. If luaghter was not a part of me, my life would be like a house without furniture; empty, boring, and over all, pointless. Some memories will never leave my mind, and looking back, I still @CAPS2 my brains out. My favorite, and most hilarious memory that I can think of, occurred about two years ago at my grandparents house. My family and I were staying with my grandparents for the weekend up at their house in @CAPS7, which I absolutely loved because there was so much to do there! They had go-carts, golf carts, acreage, and a gigantic swimming pool! What more could someone want? The weather was always nice and warm as well, so I had no complaints. It was a beautiful evening, my brother, his best friend, and I decided to take the golf carts out for a spin. My brother was in his own golf cart zooming by, and I was in one with his friend @PERSON1. Now, @ORGANIZATION1 must @CAPS3 seen something in the road because he told me to stop, then he hopped out. As he curiously made his way to the front of the golf cart, I pressed gently on the gas inching forward in a sort of fast manner just to scare him a little. As I did that, he frantically jumped on the hood like a cat that had just been frightened. I then decided to slam on the brakes, and when that happened, @PERSON1 launched off like a rocket, but then tried to hop back on the hood. I guess you could say we developed a game. I would go a few inches or so, then slam on the brakes! At that point I was practically crying from laughing so hard. That is until something very unexpected happened...I drove fast, and then stopped very quickly, but as i did so, this time @PERSON1 tripped! I didn't notice because I was carelessly driving like a maniac, but soon enough the golf cart was on top of him! All I remember hearing was a @CAPS8 @CAPS9! and then a loud shrilll. He was laying face first, cart on his back, and I had no idea what to do! My heart quickly sped up, and a gust of fear came over me. I looked to my right to find my brother rolling around on his back laughing like a hyena! I was still sitting in the golf cart, still unable to move in my state of shock. My brother finally got up and @PERSON1 was yelling, ""@CAPS10't move @CAPS11!"" @CAPS12 I had to do something! My brother was trying to tell me that we should lift the heavy cart from his back but in my head, I knew that both of us together wouldn't @CAPS3 been able to do that. Taking matters into my own hands, I shifted into reverse very carefully and slowly. Biting down on my lower lip, closing my eyes tightly, I pounded the gas to the ground, flying backwards off of his helpless body. Luckily no damage was done, and @ORGANIZATION1 was perfectly fine. A gigantic weight was lifted from my back and I was able to breathe again. Looking back, I am able to @CAPS2 and joke about that wonderful day that went so wonderfully wrong, though I am very thankful that nothing extremely harmful happened to the poor guy I dreadfully ran over that day. I can tell you one thing, as the day carried on, we had a blast. Carelessly being the great teenagers we are, and without a worry in the world; we laughed, swam, drove the golf carts, and enjoyed the wind swooping our hair up, then down, then all around. I take back two things from this crazy day. One, make smart decisions, and be prepared for the consequences that you @MONTH1 be faced with, and two, enjoy your life. @CAPS2 like there's no tomorrow. Be careless yet careful, and enjoy every second of it! I've learned that when faced with a tough decision; for example...do I roll off of my brothersfriend? or do I continue to sit here and listen to him yell? In that case I took a big leap of faith, and went with my gut instinct. Which I believe was most definitley the right decision. Go with your gut instinct in life, and @CAPS1 to @CAPS2.",25,25,,50,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7083,3,"The setting affects the cyclist by showing that he is a little angry. He states that “don’t remember the saying don’t take candy from strangers.” So we know he is upset about something. He is mad about the fact that this one older man tells him directions on how to get somewhere, and it’s wrong. The man figure that out halfway through the story. He also said that “the old man hasn’t been off his porch since Carter was in office,” so he needs to get his directions up to date. So the beginning is a negative attitude.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12041,5,"In the memoir the auther created the mood that Narciso Rodriguez was proud of his cuban culture and heritage and that family was very important to him because in paragraph @NUM1 ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that family had nothing to do with being a blood relative"" so acsepted people as family.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12337,5,"The mood the author gave in the @CAPS1. was a very happy, thoughful, respectful, thankful, moved when he explained his reason and his thoughts, him expressing his family life was very nice he said the best things his parents did for him was to leave there family in cuba and start a new life in @LOCATION1 for new life and, future, also he expressed that he always thanked his parents for what they have done for him. but he knew that wasn't the best way it was just that he had to prove he was thankful.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19274,7,"I’m going to write about a time when my sister was being patient to go to the dentist. One day my mama said she was going to take my little sister to the dentist. My sister was so happy. Also my mama had to go to other places to. First, we went to costland mall to get me a homecoming dress. After that, we had to go to shoe depot get me some shoe. Third, I went to go get my hair done. Last, we were on our way home but I told my mama my little sister had to go to the dentist. When we got to the dentist, we had to wait @NUM1 min. I told my little sister @CAPS1.M.G this whole day you have been patient. I couldn’t do that.",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16237,6,"@CAPS2 on the excerpt, there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" This would cause stress on the building, so the ""steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened."" Another obstacle the architects faced was a concern of safety. In the excerpt it says, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1 the greatest obstacle was ""nature itself."" On the top of the building, the winds were constantly shifting because of the violent air currents. In the excerpt it states, ""the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" @CAPS2 on the excerpt, these are the many obstacles faced by the architects.""",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10476,4,They ended it because the girl is not going to give up. She is going to keep trying at this test and wont stop at it eaither. And she will be alittle brighter. She will also pass this test. And this way she wont disappoint her mother. And she will be able to get this test of of her sholders.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6213,3,The setting affect the cyclist features because if the cyclist was riding in @LOCATION1 around june the affect @MONTH1 not had been that harsh. But overall the setting out begin in a hot place with limited water was not a good thing. That’s how the cyclist is affected by the setting.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4586,2,"Should we censor the materials in libraries?  Some people believe that some of the books, magazines, and music in libraries are too vulgar and obscene.  This could be a major problem if people are allowed to say what is too obscene to be put in a library.  Katherine Paterson makes a great point by saying that if everyone was allowed to take books, magazines, and music that they find inappropriate off the shelves, there would be nothing left for us.     Books have been around for centuries.  They are passed on, shared, and enjoyed by people all over the world.  Books contain important information, stories, and tales of people's past times.  Therefore, I do not believe that certain books should be banned from libraries.  By taking away books in libraries, you are taking away the author's freedom of speech.  Also, technology is rapidly advancing, and sometime in the future, I think libraries will become extinct.  With all of the new devices we have @DATE1, people can just get their books online.     Magazines are a great tool to advertise and talk about some major topics happening around the world.  Magazines are a great thing to read when you want to catch up on news, sports, or just other miscellanious topics.  With that said, magazines can also be bad for public libraries due to some of the explicit content.  This is a reason on why some people would want to get rid of magazines from libraries, but I don't think they should be banned.  By getting rid of magazines, you take away company's freedom of press, which is a major issue.  Refering to the previous paragraph, technology is growing, and it is very easy to just go and look at news, sports, and other topics on the @CAPS1.  That is why I do not think magazines should be taken out of libraries.     My final discussion is music.  Music has also been around for many centuries and it has done many things.  Music is something everyone can relate to.  No matter who you are, you probably have some favorite band, music artist, or genre of music that you prefer.  By saying this, I do not think music should be taken out of libraries either.  Taking away music is like taking away humans natural culture.  We all enjoy it, but have different versions that we enjoy.  Therefore, I do not think it would be wise to take away music from libraries.     In conclusion, libraries are nothing without all the history, stories, news, and music that is inside of it.  Censoring the libraries would not be a good idea and it would most likely upset many people.  It is true that with technology that libraries @MONTH1 eventually become extinct.  Until that happens, I hope they do not censor their materials.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15936,6,"There were three main obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced when they attempted to allow dirigibles to dock at the mooring mast. The first obstacle was ""nature itself"", meaning that the air currents at the top of the Empire State building were so powerful that the wind was constantly changing directions. This meant that if a dirigible could somehow fly through the winds and could be tied to the mast it would ""swivel around and around"" and would end up ""dangling over pedestrians"" which ""was neither practical nor safe."" @CAPS1, A dirigible is not leagally allowed to dock at the mooring mast because it would be ""flying too low over urban areas"" Which there is an ""existing law"" against. This is a problem for the builders because no matter how hard they attempted to allow dirigibles to dock, they would not be leagally allowed to dock dirigibles at the Mooring Mast. Lastly, many dirigibles used hydrogen gas as a feul. Hydrogen gas is ""highly flammable"" and a dirigible using hydrogen gas is therefore also highly flammable and could potentially pose a disaster to the ""densely populated area such as downtown New York."" Because of potential fires, city laws, and air currents, the builders of the Empire State Building were faced with obstacles when they tried to allow dirigibles to dock at the mooring mast",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
688,1,"Dear newspaper editor, With all due respect to anyone that thinks the computer doesn't benefit society, I strongly disagree. Yes, there are many people that neglect other activities to be on the comuter, and yes, the computer is an invention that a lot of people depend on, but the computer is also an invention that we can benefit from in many positive ways. For example, @CAPS1' @PERSON1, a hip-hop artist with millions of fans, wasn't able to finish high school or go to colledge because of his career. He decided to get a colledge degree, so he started to attend a colledge. He had difficulty being in colledge, however, because he was constantly being harrassed by his fans, so he started going to colledge online. That way, he was able to focus on his studies and get his degree without the harrassment. The computer also has websites on the internet that are used in schools. They help teach students in a way that they will have fun and enjoy what they're doing, giving them a better learning experience. Aside from the positive uses of the internet, the computer also contains progams that can benefit us just as well. Microsoft @CAPS2, for example is a program on the computer that is used to create @CAPS2 documents such as peoms, essays, song lyric, and even letters. You can print out these @CAPS2 documents to have a copy of your ownn to keep and show people wherever you go, but if your not finished, it can be saved on your computer. People use the computer for many things, books, movies and so one. Over the years that its been existance, its benefited us al lot. What do you think?",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6288,3,"The setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit,” affected the cyclist greatly. For starters it says he was “traveling through the high desserts” which is never a safe thing. He had been drinking he water regularly but the temperature was rising. He was, “trying to keep balance in my dehydrated state.” From lack of water because the terrain had altered his water into “A far like substance” The setting of the story was cruel to the cyclist.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10426,4,"The author concluded this story with the paragraph because, Saeng is explaing to the reader’s that she will take the test again when the time is right. When things seem to be getting better she will retake the test. That is why the authour used that paragraph to conclude her story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16396,6,"The builders faced so many obstacles to dirigibles on the Empire State Building. One of the greatest obstacle's was nature itself, like winds on top of the building was shifting due to dangerious air currents. The back of the dirigible would swivel around and around the mooring mast. The dirigibles would be dangling high above pedetrians on the streets, was neither practical nor safe. There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. There were so many obstacles to moor dirigibles on the Empire State Building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8878,4,He states this as the conclusion because it shows the faith that she has in the flower and how it will bring her luck for her up coming test. She feels like the familiar flower is out of place as she is and they can relate to somethings.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12934,5,The mood in the passage is @CAPS1. It is @CAPS2 because they can give there child a better life. Next is because Cuba is not a good place to be in. They are @CAPS2 because they get start a new life over. Another reason is they can get Better jobs over hear. They get to live in a @CAPS3 house then @CAPS4. They are @CAPS2 so they can also help other refugees. Finally they are @CAPS2 for other refugees the celebrate there arrival to the country.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18815,7,"Sometimes being patient is hard @CAPS5 I’ve had to do it a lot of times. One time in particular was very life changing for me. It was my favorite day of the year, my birthday. I’ve always waited for this day long and hard every year until it comes. I got up really early to see @CAPS3 my presents @CAPS5 their were none. My mom was just watching @CAPS1.V. like nothing was important and I said to her, “@CAPS2.” @CAPS3 she said back was “@CAPS2, why are you up this early?” I just went back to sleep. When I woke up again, nothing happened. So I just waited patiently in my room until something happened, @CAPS5 nothing. Eventually I went downstairs and played video games until @NUM1, just waiting for someone to say “happy birthday” @CAPS5 yet, nothing. So I just acted like it was a normal day until @NUM2: pm when I went in the basement. There was a surprise birthday party for me with presents and friends and everything. I was glad I was patient I got a good party and now I’m patient every day.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10342,4,She going to take the test agan @CAPS1 she feels like She needs to and She @CAPS2  when the snow melts and geese came back that means She wants to take the in the Spring. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19047,7,"Every day at launch I have to be patient while waiting to get called up to get my lunch. Especialy when your waiting in line, then you really have to be patient. But sometimes your lucky and you can go to the other line to pay for lunch. And then when you finish lunch you can go out ride and play. But @CAPS1 you must finish your food and throw it away and wait patienty. And thats a time when I was patient.",8,5,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10408,4,She can’t wait till the flowers start to come back when the snow melts so it isn’t very cold out so they grow and she is going to take her test that she has failed when the geese and flowers come back.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16562,6,"In the article "" The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted it is apparent that the builders of the Empire State Building faced many challenges, during the attempt of trying to dock dirigibles. The dirigibles themselves could be a hazard. ""... Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. ""In likes of what had happened to the German airship Hindenburg, officials didn't want a similar disaster to occur in downtown New York. Also, the dirigibles light mass would make it a target to high, forceful winds."" The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currets."" This reality caused fear that a zeppelin could potentially be blown into a spire of some sort on another building, causing it to suffer a hole in its fragile lining. The law also caused obstacles for docking dirigibles on the Empire State Building ""... dirigibles could not more at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law thwarted many of the would-be attempts of mooring these. Mooring dirigibles was a dream talked about in, ""The Mooring Mast,"" however that soon never had the chance to come true.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I must admit that the experts are centainly right cause I know people that stay on the computer all day and that’s really not good if you ask me. Instead of being on computers learning about faraway places, and talking to other people, you should go exercising, you should relax, and you should interact with family and friends. Exercising is much more better than being on a computer, and I say that to say this. When your on a computer just sitting there playing online games and checking other things out, or whatever the case @MONTH1 be, you get board, and hungry, and I know theres some snacks around you while your doing whatever your doing. Instead of being on a computer for @NUM1 or @NUM2 hours or maybe even all day getting fat. There are many ways you can exercise. You can take walks, you can go joggin, you could play a sport, I mean there are a lot of things you can do when your not on a computer. I know some people that could be workin all day and still come home to there computer. Rest is good also. You don't always have to jump on your computer, you could just relax watch a movie, eat some pop corn and just enjoy yourself, you could even take a nap for a little while or something but you don't always have to get straight on your computer if you really don't have to use it. The way I see it is family, and computers are always going to be there but at the same time which one is more important. Friends aren't always dependable so you really don't need them around only a selected few, but thats not the point. Both family, and your true friends have feelings, and if your not spending time with them over a computer that your gonna have when you leave, and come back home too something isn't right. Tomorrow isn't promised, we live for today. So enjoy life while you got the chance, and spend time doing something active, with family and friends, and if your really into computers, try to balance your time out.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13585,5,"In the story, ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" the narrator had shown happiness throughout the memoir.One example of when the author showed happiness was when they were thinking about cooking. They admired when their parents helped and teached them how to cook. They would hear the music in the back that they adored as their heritage or backround. In the story it says, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking.""When the authors still live with their parents their relatives would come over to eat and have fun. To reflect back on those memories made the author happy. In the story it says, ""Countless extended family members came and went-- and there was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back upon their feet.""@CAPS1 example is when the author thought of the time when their parents moved to @LOCATION1. They thought of how lucky their parents were to come to such a nice place. In the story it says, ""they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind families, friends, and careers in the country they loved.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13348,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the @CAPS1 create a mood in this memoir. ""Growing up in this environment instilled im me sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood related."" That mean people that weren't blood related, he still constiders them an family. He also says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That mean that evan though it wasn't a nice house it was still his home and he loved it. The mood of this memoir is love and he will never forget it. Thats the kind of mood in this memoir.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7704,3,"In the story, the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. For example, the condition of the road was bad. It changed from flat road to short, rolling roads. Tumble weeds crossed his path. He had lack of water, and the water he did have tasted like battery acid. In the story it says, “I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state.”  ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9284,4,Honestly I'm not quite sure. Maybe because she fees assured now. Maybe its a mental trial we all must face. Maybe the geese returning and the plant budding is a metaphoric test too.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15072,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced a number of obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was one of safety, most blimps outside the U.S. used hydrogen instead of helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. Another obstacle the builders faced, was nature itself. The wins on top of the building are always changing because of dangerous air currents. These winds would cause the rear end of the blimp to move around and around the mooring mast.A third obstacle they faced was a law that aircrafts couldn't fly too low over pedestrian filled areas. This law makes it illegal to tie up to the Empire State Building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9695,4,The Author ends the story off with that paragraph because when dealing with flowers and nature. Then are seasons  when the flowers don’t  come up like winter for example. The paragraph is saying in the spring when the winter is over she tells her self that she will look forward to seeing all the plant that nature has to give.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13399,5,"There are a few ways to describe the mood the @CAPS2 created in this memoir. They description im going to give is the @CAPS2 created a very happy & loving mood. For example, in paragraph @NUM1. it say's ""Quite the contrary, our neighborhood was made up of mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants at a time when overt racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the United States. In our neighborhood despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" That means that family doesnt have to be blood related for you and that person to unite and became very good friends. Also another example is in paragraph @NUM2, where it says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing then I could have ever done."" That shows she's a very loving and caring person to actually be @CAPS1 for something your parents have done. Those are a few way's to describe how the @CAPS2 created this happy and loving mood.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18331,7,PATIENT. One time I had to be very patient over at @CAPS1 barrymores because we went into a line to go on go-karts that yexi had to be at least @NUM1 years old or older to go. I also had to be patient my birthday this year because I knew I was getting cool stuff but I never imagined it would this cool.,6,4,,10,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3126,2,"Real life is rated @CAPS1 so why pretend it's not? If a library feels that if a book is too graphic, a movie too violent or that music to agressive then its their own choice to remove it or not. It is true that that it's pointless to try and censor the lives of kids and teenagers.Explicit content is all around not only in the media and literature. The never ending game of shielding this generations teenagers and children is already finished.     In this point in time, the main focus of alot of movies and music and books is something violent, agressive, inapproiate, or explicit. The idea of removing these things from library shelves is pointless. The will always be violence and crime in todays world along with excessive swares and cuss words all around. It's exceptable that some parents don't want their children reading,watching or listening to something they don't or wouldn't approve of but even if the kids are protected and home out in the world sometimes the parents wont be there.     Libraries are public places, and a percent of the audience would be upset, frusterated or angr if the books, music or movies they liked were no longer avalable due to the cencorship. It @MONTH1 seem as if viewing, reading or listening to something violent or explicit, would have an effect on the listener. On the streets, at school, at the park and more places children and teens will be exposed to this type or explicit language so attempting to cencor it in their reading and viewing matterial is just pointless.        In my experence I have grown up and been around people who have grown up listening to violent music, watching graphic movies and more explicit material and not been effected. I saw my first rated @CAPS1 movie when i was nine, so parents can give thier kids somewhat of an age but at one point trying to cencor anything is a waste of time. With schools now teaching their students the positives of being abstinent and the sexual deseases, students are more likely to refrain despite what they see in movies, read about, or listen to. Any child exposed to the internet could be subject to all kinds of inapproite material, explicit canotent, bad language, cuss words, and disturbing images.     Real life is rated @CAPS1 so why pretend it's not? Trying to block the explicity and violence in the world is an endless battle. Certain things @MONTH1 go over the line, but others are just renactments and previews of whats really going on in this world.Why would you hinder the real world away from children and teenagers? Movies have a rating and music @CAPS4 have an explicit content label so people should know whats approiate for themselves. The first sware word a child hears probably wasnt in a song or movie and was probably somewhere in the real world.",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1734,1,"Dear conneticut @CAPS1, you like to catch up on your favorite television showscar shop for the latest trends? Or maybe even planning out a get together with some of your old friends? Well with todays great technology you can do that on the computer! I can see that the experts are trying to decide whether or not computers are the healthiest thing that benefits our society but in my opinion I think they are great! As you @MONTH1 not know I am @NUM1 years old and have a @NUM2 year old brother; we spend alot of time on the computer not just for homework. I like to shop online for discounts and sales where I know thing are cheaper than in stores. I know my brother likes to go to concerts and buy himself the latest video games. My grandparents are older and don't watch alot of tv and read the Newspaper so the computer is great for catching up on your favorite tv shows and or the news. With these great pieces of machinery you can chat up a storm with old friends on facebook, @CAPS2, and @ORGANIZATION3. @PERCENT1 of teens @CAPS5 are shopping by brand names, like: @CAPS3, @ORGANIZATION1, @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS4. All of these clothes and designer stuff is everything we want, but half of us don't have the money. If you go on the computer you can get all of these names and items for less than @MONEY1 compared to %@NUM3. Computers lower the price of things we want and need. I, @CAPS5 a days grandparents try to have a decents conversation with their kids or grandchildren but they go right vack to when they were little. As a grandchild to my @PERSON1 all she used to talk about was her days going through the great deppresion, but with computers she got to catch up on the news and @CAPS5 I can sit down with her and have a great conversation. You can also catch up on the shows you are missing when everyone is talking about them in school. The kids won't be missing out! When I was in @NUM4 grade I got my first facebook, I thought I was so could! That @DATE1 I went to camp and met all these new kids and found out that they all have facebooks. @CAPS5 I keep in touch with them, with out lossing my friendships. You see, I know the scientists or experts are probably smarter than a @NUM1 year old girl but I know that most teenaters and parents have facebook and say its great because we connect with people around the world. So I know these experts are going to make the best dicision on whether or not computers benefit our society but please take my ideas into consideration.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6284,3,"After the cyclist spoke to the “old timers who hadn’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in office,” his confidence in them began to ware. He entered the desert happy, hopeful and determined. As his water reservoir began to disappear, and he approached the sight of the old shed, canal and a couple water pump, he began to feel touched. He made an attempt to get the water from the pumps and it was hot and “tested like battery acid”. As he rode on, his confidence only faded more. He travelled through the desert and “ridiculously large snake” and was running low on water. Finally he saw a building in the distance, which ironically enlights was an abandoned juice factory a sign featuring a left sipping on some succulent icy liquid teased ruin, and he began to lose hope. He didn’t think he would make it to his destination or anywhere else for that matter. Although after approaching the old factory, he came across a bait shop where his hope and energy was founded.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14997,6,When the Empire State building was built the workers were trying to find new ways to @CAPS1 the structure. They had sudently had found some problems with one being the top of the empire state building.      Workers had tryed to figure out hwo they were going to but a Dirigibles on top of the building so that they could be able to pick up people and to drop them off up there but there were different problems.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18847,7,"One some day, it was about @NUM1. My mom woke me, my brother, and dad to get ready I don’t know what we was getting ready far, but we get on the road as soon as we cloud. I fell back to sleep in the car when we were on the height. I woke up from a big @CAPS1 on the breaks and when I looked up, we were in a long line of cars,” where are we?”I ask “six flags.” @CAPS2 my brother. I could hear impatience people all around me. They were thinking screaming and yelling while people tried to pay their way into the park. It seem like we were moving faster than @CAPS3 of the fast people, and we was one of the first people to get in first. That was the @CAPS3 impatience group of people I’d ever seen.",10,8,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19353,7,"Everyday at school I have to be patience to get my food like pizza,saled,sand with milk what is bad all the time but i check my milk. I had to be patientce to get my gun to.",4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10036,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it still shows how determined saeng is to take the test again and pass it this time. By ending this story with the paragraph the author is creating suspense is probably for a sequel of another story.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15499,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were mainly due to structeral and safty issues. According to paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This problem required over sixty thousand dollares' worth of modifications to the buildings framework. Although structural issues were a problem, the safety of the pidestrians created a even bigger obstacle for the builders.Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen instead of helium which created huge fire hazzards ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by a fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area, such as downtown New York"" (paragraph @NUM2). Even though the exsisting law against airships flying too low over urban areas prevented dirigibles from mooring at the Empire State Building, the biggest obstacle of them all was nature itself. The dirigibles shells could be punctured by the winds constantly shifting due to violent air currents.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13613,5,In the story memoir the author created a couple of different mood to decribe the story.      The first mood was greatfullness. The author described greatfullness tword the parents when the author was discribing selflessness caring of the parants when they made the disision to move to @LOCATION1 to give them a better life. The last mood discribed by the author was happyness. The author discribed happiness in the story when it was discribing the parents making everyone feel at home These are the differend moods discribed in the story by the author.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7646,3,The setting in the passage is working against the cycler. Hes running low on water hes almost dehydrated and the weather were hes at is very very hot and he cant see a town for miles.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1742,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern; I am writing this to let you know how I feel about the effects computers have on people. My opinion on this topic is; I think that both statements are true, yes they give people the ability to learn about faraway places & people & also allow people to talk on line with others. If we did not have computers I would not have finfished many of my school process and homeworks. But the experts who are spending too much time on thier computers & less time exercising enjoying nature & interacting with family and friends. I know this is true because I know some peopel who have gotten addicted to online video games & wouldn't leave the computer for hours & I know I myself have found new website & want to learn all about it so I'll be on the computer instead of exercising. But even with both statement being true; I do not think computers efefcet on people. Because without computers alot more students would be failing classes & getting zeros// @CAPS1's on projects; class asignments & homework. Becayse they dont have a quick way to look up all their information. Also most families or friends will lose contact because they lost a fun way to communicate. i think computers have a positive effect. Don't you?",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15666,6,"During construction of the mooring mast atop the Empire State Building, the builders @CAPS1 many challenges. If they had just put a spire on top of the building. the weight of a dirigible could destroy it. The construction team needed to go back and reinforce the entire framework of the building. other obstacles in their way included low-flying aircraft laws, difficult weather conditions, and safety (if the derigible crashed over New York). For all these reasons the mooring mast was doomed from the start.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18642,7,"A time I had to be patient was when we went to @LOCATION2. It was a @NUM1 hour flight with a two hour layover in @LOCATION1. It was really hard for me to be patient because I really wanted to go to @LOCATION2. In the layover to pass time I listend to my ipod and used my macbook pro to get on face book. It really helped me be patient because it took my mind of @LOCATION2 and we were in @LOCATION2 in know time, and when we arrived my patient’s paid of because I got to swim on beaches and party I @LOCATION2 for @DATE1 break @DATE2 that is my story about a time I was patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8866,4,The author ended the story with this paragraph because it shows change. The snow is melting represents change from cold to warm. The geese returning represents a new life as in coming back to something semi–new. Just like the author is going back to drivers ed. The hibiscus is budding represents growth. The author will be older and more knolageble and more skilled than before.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12812,5,"In this memoir Narciso Rodriguez from Home: the @CAPS1 of Our Lives created a mood that was calming and the author was passionate in what he said and made a happy mood. ""my parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich  culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day)..."" This quote shows that the mood was cheerful and calm. The mood the author created was the friendliness of family and friendship between the family and how other people would join them into his family house. The author made the mood like an instilled enviroement as like he was growing up in ""this environment instilled in me a great sense of ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18811,7,"One time I had to be patient was when I went to @LOCATION1 with my mom, dad, @CAPS1 my sister and my grandma. My cousins live in @LOCATION1 so we were going to visit them. We had to drive @NUM1 hours in a small col bolt with five people. We had to be patient on the car ride there because we were all really exited. When I first found out that we were going I was really happy and I knew I would have to be very patient. We had to drive the hole day then get a motel to stay in. Then we had to drive till about @TIME1 and we were fanaly @TIME1 my great aunts lake house, my my grandmas sister. It was so fun geting to see them again! But then came more patients on the trip home. We were all sad to leave but we had a great time. The trip home felt shorter than the trip there but still long. When we got home everyone of us was tired and tired of being in the car but we were glad we didn’t have to drive anothe hour home like my grandma. That was a time when I had to be patient.",10,9,,19,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15909,6,"There were many problems to over come in the construction of the mooring mast on the Empire State Building. The first problem to over come was the stress a thousand foot long dirigible would add to the buildings frame. This was solved by spending over @MONEY1 in modifying the building's frame work. Another problem was a law against airships flying too low around urban environments, brought up in paragraph @NUM1. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" @CAPS1 is writing about the wind. At 1,250 feet high the wind is violent, and would swing a dirigible around to much to be safe, and ends could not be weighed down for fear of injuring a pedestrian. Those were three signifigant reasons the mooring mast failed.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
583,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I agree with the experts in people staying on the computer to much. The reason why is family and friends are distant, mood swings can occur and also being overweight, finally computers can do a lot of things @CAPS1 far. To be on the computer too much, your family will start to worry about you. If you were to stay on a computer for a whole day, taht causes people to think otherwise of how you are. Also if you were to stay inside on a @DATE1 and your friends come over but you say, ""I don't wanna go out"", there just drifting away slowly. Since I am a teen I stay up texting and talking and going outside and I hate to see on of my friend's on the computer when I wanna hang out. When I was @NUM1 or @NUM2, I used to always be on the computer for like days to weeks, until my friend's and family said don't let this get to you. I had a friend who was a good athlete and very funny and nice, but when his mom got him a computer, I didn't want to be his friend. When I was @NUM2 I use to get mad at everything if I couldn't use the computer, it was like I was a brat. Also I used to be big, (as in overweight) because I never went outside to exercise or in my own room. The reason being on why I stopped being his friend was he to get mad if I come over there to ask if he can come outside. Also when he did come outside he used to never do nothing or run because he was always @CAPS1 tired, @CAPS1 what I am trying to say is the computer can really change people in a lot of bad way's. The last thing which makes everyone change is what computer's can do now. For example, a game called @CAPS2 of @CAPS3 can get you addicted @CAPS1 fast, you barely do anything elese. Another bad thing is @CAPS4, sure you keep in touch with friends but if you stay on too long, it's basically hooked you into it. Lastly online chatting room's or games when you can create a person to look like you makes you think that's gonna be your life from now on. Also people think that computer's can do anything it really can't, everything a computer can do is like a drug it's addicting. Well I just gave you a little thing of a lot of thing's a computer can do but to refresh your memory I'll say it again. A reason why I agree is family and friends seem distant to you at times you get mood swing's and less exercising, lastly what a computer could do now. Since you know now of the danger's that can happen I suggest you rethink about computers.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20754,8,"Making someone laugh is the best feeling to their soul, and it is one step closer to internal happiness. People might say that when feeling something good inside the body its when they know that they have done something right. I agree with this because it has happen to me; I was feeling down about something that I cant even remember but, when I felt the need to help someone do something I knew inside of me that I did something very special at that moment. It's amazing how you make someone laugh, and it doesn't matter where you are, you also feel happy. The one person in my life that has a great sense of humor is my mother. She is always in need of something funny.People enjoy laughing so much that it is if they were to take some sort of energy drink to make them not want to stop laughing. I hear people say that laughter is very healthy for a human soul, and it will also make the soul and body last longer. Laughter is a way of expressing yourself without having to say much. It could be a great way to start a conversation with a person. Positive thinking leads to making good choices especially if happiness leads you on in life. By making someone laugh it makes the awkwardness go away. It is better to laugh then to be sad.Everyone has their addiction to something in which they need to depend on. My mom's addiction is laughing. She laughs at work and she especially laughs at the house whenever I'm around. Although, sometimes she feels down whenever something goes wrong. I hate seeing her like this, because it then makes me feel down. When she is feeling sad it is if there is nothing in the world that would make her cheer up. If one person is feeling depress, that feeling passes on to the next person closest to them. Eventually I get tiered of seeing my mom like this and in this situation I cant help it but to get up and start doing some ridiculous stuff to cheer her up. Some things that pop into my mind is that I can start dancing funny or tell a little lie that might of happen at school that I think will cheer her up. When there is an opportunity to make someone laugh I enjoy to put a smile on their face.My mom means the world to me just as I mean the world to her. We try to help each other in any way as possible. This one day she came home from work and my dad was sitting in the table reading the newspaper and my mom walks in, and notices that my dad hasn't made food yet she started to flip out on him. She thought that it was stupid of him to not make dinner for us. She was pretty angry at him for a period of time, so she started to make us dinner but she was doing it all wrong. She was mixing the spices in the wrong pan, I was going to let her know that she was doing it all wrong, but my dad was holding me back so that I wouldn't get her more angry. She finally finish cooking and served us our plates but we didn't wanted to eat it because she made the food out of anger and made it smell funky. My dad forced us to eat it because he thought that by eating the food it would make her happy, but he was wrong it only made her feel worse because my youngest brother didn't like it. I felt bad so I had to do something funny that was going to put her in the mood to not be mad at my dad anymore. I turn on the @CAPS1 and changed the @CAPS2 to the music @CAPS2 and started to dance as if I were to have ants in my pants. Her lungs were about to burst because she was laughing so hard, and eventually she was in a good mood for the rest of the day.Everywhere I go I see people smiling and laughing about something and it only makes me wonder about the funny things that are being said. I think that it is a good thing for someone to feel good about themselves because it brings a positive feeling in the room. I enjoy to see people be happy because it always makes me feel happy. What better way to be happy when smiling is one step closer to laughing. My mom and I like to take walks just so that we wouldn't feel apart and stay closer to each other, we see different people each time we go walking and we always get a smile from them. That is the best feeling in the world, to feel joy is to be free from all your problems.",16,15,,31,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12752,5,The mood in the memoir is alot of things here are some. First it makes a warth feeling. It also makes a happy mood because he says that he cannot thank enough. For what they did for him. And lastly it makes you kind of sad because it talks about people that need help. And it says that they love cuba and wants to remember there heratige. There some moods that this story brings out.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8961,4,"The author concluded the story with the paragraph because it shows that Saeng can overcome obsticles, & the next time she has these reminders she will succeed. When she says “almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of strange before had become... almost farmllular to her now” & this is saying she is getting used to the chages in her new life. So the end paragraph reflects these ideas.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18261,7,"“@CAPS1  @PERSON1, it’s @PERSON3 how are u”? “ I’m @CAPS5, @CAPS24’s upp? @CAPS27, im calling you to ask, if u wanna go to @CAPS2 @CAPS3 with men? “ @CAPS4 yah”! “ I haven’t went in a long time”!  hold on lemme ask”. “@CAPS5”. As I explained to her @CAPS24 is happening . “@CAPS5, my grandma’s gonna come pick you up”? “@CAPS7 @CAPS24 time”? “@CAPS8 @NUM1 o’clock”! “@CAPS5 see yah @CAPS29!bye!!( @CAPS10 come) help us pack the cooler” “@CAPS5” ( knock & doorbell rings)  I fling it open “ @CAPS12” @CAPS13, I missed you so mutch” “@CAPS14!” @CAPS15 two @NUM2 hours striaght we played guitar .Hepo until we both passed out, “@CAPS16 girls time to get ready .” “ @CAPS17 mom were  up”! We all got ready we got on the free way ‘@PERSON1 & I took goofy pictures, and @CAPS29 fell asleep .With @CAPS12 sleeping on me” @CAPS19 my eyes , “@CAPS20 it was? I lost stopped so we all can tell @PERSON3 were going to @CAPS2 @CAPS3”! I look at my mum,” “Are you kidding men? “ @CAPS23”, “the family’s going”.  “The whole family? “@CAPS26” just @PERSON2, @PERSON4,you  & me are going!” @CAPS24 about @CAPS25? “@CAPS26, she can go she has to work”  “that really does suck mom” “Do I know.”  “@CAPS27 when we are going”? “Were leaving @DATE1 &coming back that day” “Were not staying the night”?  “@CAPS23, we can’t afford it”! “@CAPS29 how did you get @CAPS2 @CAPS3 ticket?” “ I won them on a radio station” “@CAPS32, @CAPS5”  “@CAPS27 am i aloud to bring someone? “like who”? “I @CAPS35 maybe @CAPS12, can I call? ask her if she can come ?” “@CAPS37 here!! As  I scroll through my mom’s phone, trying to find “@CAPS38 @CAPS39’s” phone number, I hit the send buttons & it dials. “@CAPS40”? “@CAPS41, this is @PERSON3 is @CAPS12 there”? “@CAPS43 one second (@CAPS44! ) (telephone!) “@CAPS40”?",10,10,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3064,2,"I actually do believe that they should be able to be removed from the shelf. On the other hand i do not believe that anything rascist should be on library shelfs. Teens these days want to be able to pick up a book that they can actually relate to and the same thing goes for a movie, nusic, and a magazine.      You can't help what people want to listen to or like to read or watch. I don't really like robot movie's or any of that crap so that wouldn't be something i'd pick out to watch. On the other hand i don't think that it should have to be removed out of the library just because i dont like it. Also something like @CAPS1 in the @LOCATION1, i don't think that it should be removed from shelve's just because of the title. Family @CAPS2 is a really funny show but also has a lot of bad language in it but i don't think it should be removed because thats what people like to watch. Teens want to be able to read about they can relate to, but some of the things in the book can be offensive maybe. If they didn't have anything to read that they could relate to hardly anyone would read. Not everyone listens to the same music but a @NUM1 yr old doesn't want to go around listening to barney, they want to listen to the music that they like and think is cool, but on the other hand others @MONTH1 not like it. Not letting you get something off of the library shelf because it's bad is like saying you can't eat a certain kind of food because its bad for you.     If people didn't get to listen to, read, or watch the things that they like they would be screwed and very upset. I think people are entitled to their own opinion, although some people's opinions could be rather stupid. Not everyone likes the same things and we shouldn't have to.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4359,2,"Killings, murders, and homosexual books can all be offensive to one person or another, but that doesn't mean they should be taken away. That is like saying I get offened by homework, take it out of @ORGANIZATION2. Some of the most interesting books to read are about murders, I think. I belive they shouldn't be taken out or else no teenage kids would read in @ORGANIZATION1. Teenages like to have mystery and romance. I know that one of my favorite books, The @CAPS1 @CAPS2, would offend some people because it has murder in it. That certainly doesn't mean it was not a good and interesting book for me. They can just over look these books and pick another.     If you want to keep your @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2 students interested you shouldn't take out book that might offend someone. By taking out some books not everyone would be happy. Some kids might not even read any more because you took the best books out of the library. Every book in one way or another would offend someone. They just need to overlook those books and read a diffrent one. I have seen some books at my @ORGANIZATION2 that offended me, but i did not tell the libraian to take it out of the @ORGANIZATION2. Another student might have loved to read that book.      Everyone has diffrent oppions so there would not be any books left if they took out all the offensive ones. The only books that would be left would be @PERSON1 the @CAPS3 and children books. I do not know of any @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2 student that would want to read @PERSON1 the @CAPS3 and give a speech about it in class. I'm not sure how the teachers could do book reports any more; all the books we read in class could offend someone. If everything that offened someone was taken out of the schoolt there would be nothing left of the @ORGANIZATION2. See everyone has a diffrent oppion on everything. That just isn't right.      In conclusion, books that offend someone shouldn't be taken out of schools and librarys. They keep the @ORGANIZATION2 students reading and growing. With out some of these books I myself wouln't like reading. So lets be mature aldults and keep all the books on the shelves and ignore the books that offend us",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6715,3,The setting effects the cyclist very much. By the very dry climates,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13335,5,"According to the memoir, the author created a mood to use in the memoir.The author created the mood of happiness. According to the memoir the author was very happy with his life. He was very joyful that he gained all the Cuban culture. He also is happy about all the ""family"" he has. So you can tell by the mood he has in the memoir that the arther is very happy and saticfied with the way he was raised.Thats how the authors mood would be described in the memoir.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19255,7,"When I was @NUM1 yrs old my mom started making my @DATE1 present. She was going to make a blanket. Sadly she didn’t find the blanket.I have to be patient. I had  and it wasn’t done, then ???. My @DATE1 was almost @NUM2 months ago ???. She ??? found a time to ??? that she ??? find ??? in @NUM3. I have been patient and every year on my @DATE1 and on @CAPS1 I ask if it is fiished but I’m not. I s ??? I can be patient for alittle while???",9,6,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18864,7,"Aplause  filled the building after the first dance ended. I was back stage with my dance team going over routine for the third time. Backstage was cold and crouded and I was already sweaty after one practice! This was my first dance recital and I thought the whole thing would take an hour, I was wrong. I soon found out that we were the last to perform and it was at least five hours long. “@CAPS1 many more dances?” and “what dance are we on?” @CAPS2 what everyone had on there mind or was saying. Every hour felt like a day! I had so many emotions going on excited bored and nervous. Then finally it was our turn to get on stage. I was so relieved after all that waiting  that it was finally our turn! I did twirls and jumps and leaps and had a great time! I had an amazing time dancing. Great things take patience!",12,9,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16519,6,"The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION1, the builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in the attempts of allowing dirigibles, the transportation of the future in the @DATE1's, also known as blimps to dock at the building. The biggest problem was figuring out how to make the mast work.The main obstacle to the use of the mooring mast was nature, since the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting because of strong, violent air currents, the back of the dirigible would turn around and around the mast even when it'll be tied to the mast. It is said in the excerpt that dirigibles moored in open landing fields can be weighted down with the use of lead weights. Because these would be dangling high above people below it would be dangerous, just in case it falls. Also, builders cannot control nature making this the most difficult.Another obstacle was the stress the body frame at the building will receive if the dirigible was held by a single cable tether. The wind pressure and stress would have been too much for the building's foundation. This was solved by modifying the steel frame of the Building to be stronger to keep the building from collapsing.The attempts at allowing dirigibles to more at the building had many obstacles but in the end it was all for nothing because there is a law that is against airships flying too low over urban areas.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12078,5,"The mood of the author in the memoir is very happy. I think it sounds like the child of the greatful family is talking and she is one of the most greatful people I ever read about because she says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house to a home"".",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3093,2,"If I owned or worked at a librarie, I would have books, music, movies and magazines that to many people are offensive. But I would not have the offensive books, music, movies, and magazines in the childrens area of the librarie.But I would have them in the adult area.         @CAPS5 I would keep that type of books, music or movies might you ask? Well because the adult and older tenageers should be able to handle and act like adult when reading the book, watching the movie, listening to music. If the type of book, movie, or music is causing violent behavior around the town then i will completly remove the item from the shelf. Its that simple.           If parents get mad and angree because of these books, movie, and music don't let your children watch, read, or listen to them. Pick out a childs book like @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1, don't pick out a book from @PERSON1. Let your children read a book with lots of pictures and color. Watch @CAPS1 or @ORGANIZATION1 not @CAPS3 on a @CAPS4.         My questions is, '@CAPS5 not let people read and watch something that they want even if it is offensive?' @CAPS6 people love watching the scary and offensive movie or listening to the rap music. People live in defferent worlds even though we all live in one.      In my oppenion offensive books, music and movies should stay in libraries. Just little and younger kids shouls not read, watch or listen to them",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3898,2,"Older authors love to write grusome stories about their pasts, whether it's fiction or nonfiction. Sometimes those books can get into the wrong hands and end up in the trash or burned. Other times parents get angry at what they're children are doing and saying, and they normally blame television or other kids at school. Parents don't always look at the big picture.      Any child at anytime can walk right into their school or public library and pick up an inappropriate magazine,book, or movie, but parents don't usually catch on until it's too late. There are all kinds of books out there and no two books are the same. Nobody can tell a book is going to be inappropriate just by looking at the front cover. Even though books are meant to be read, it doesn't mean they should be read by all age groups.      No book at any point in time should be completely removed from a library, that's just not right. No matter how graphic, perverted, or inapproriate a book can get, it should never be thrown away. Those certain books are written for people with those kinds of interests. Even books about drugs should be allowed to be read, some children or adults could be interested in what they really do do to your body and mind, and they'd rather read a book about it rather than trying it themselves. Books about murder should also be allowed to be read, but not by children under twelve. If people in libraries would just start putting books in organized age groups then there probably wouldn't be any problems.      The author should never be blamed for something they wrote. It's their own personal thoughts and feelings and most of all it's their story. It's how they wanted it to be written and nobody should get mad over that. The rule should apply for magazines, music, and movies. Those people wrote the books, movies, magazines, and music so it should be expressed the way they wanted it to be. Even if the authors themselves thought their own writing was too bad for a child to read, or hear they would make it clear by putting something like, 'not for children under the age of twelve or whatever age they recommend.'     If adults are really getting mad about this then they need to look back at the kinds of things they were doing, saying, or reading and maybe it would change their outlook a little on movies, magazines, music, and books.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4268,2,"I think that some books should be banned from libraries that are offensive or use certain words against people, I think that should apply to highschool libraries because it really would matter in elementeries because they wouldn't know what some things mean. If a class were to read an offensive book and someyone in the class from the opposite race that reads the book others could get affended and it could start a fight.     Some high schoolers could get affended quicker than others and which could cause a lot of problems so by avoiding that there should be votes on books that should be banned or not be aloud to be read in class or in school period. Im pretty sure people would think its dumb to ban books but trust it me it would solve a lot of problems, but it all comes down to whats acceptable and whats not without hurting other peoples feeling and putting them down.     I bet all the time in classes theres been a story that has been read that has talked about races which makes others not feel comfortable, and theres always that person that always trys to make fun of something, but if I were in this situation I would try my best to not let others get to me and interfer with my grades and performance. I would just ignore them as much as possible and if it did start getting annoying I would talk to my counselor about trying to talk to that person individually or just removing me from class. I'm pretty sure most schools wouldnt tolerate this type of behavior but you will always have those kind of kids you just have to ignore.               You should never not go to school thinking you don't fit in just because someyone is making fun of your race or how you look. They just try to make the day harder on you and all you have to do is ignore them or report it and hopefully it is taken care of",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18081,7,"I was patiEnt wen I saw a huge bass jump out from at my cottage. I waited and ate break fast and then went fishing. My little brother wanted to go fishing too. So I was patient enough to wait for him to get a new bait tie it and come out. So we get out front and he catchs a small bass so I unhooked it and brought him over to show mum and dad wat he had caught but little did I realize that a huge @NUM1 pound bass was rooming around out there. So as soon as I got out there first cast @CAPS1! A huge bass take my bate. At first I thought I caught a carp. but wen I saw that @NUM1 pound bass jumip with my bait in its mouth I shaking with exeitment! When I showed that fish to my dad he about fainted and the same with me, my mom and my little brother cody. And right now that fish is at the tax adermy.",11,12,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17834,7,"Patience is when your waiting .I was patience when in line waiting for lunch .I didn’t c ut any one to eat .I was standing and waiting for my turn .Patience ,some people don’t have it .Lots of people just cut or yell at you because they don’t have  any patience. Sometimes people will push you out of their way .They only do that because they don’t have patience at all. Patience is what people need .People need patience because lots o f feelings get hurt .Everyone should have patience.",8,7,,15,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3791,2,"I think that everyone has different views on different things so I dont think that they should be because if they would be that would be against the first amendment where it says everyone have the freedom of religion and speech.  If you disagree with the book or whatever it @MONTH1 be you can just ignore it and keep walking and never have to pay any attention to it.  People these days are taking things way to far with their opinions.     People need to mind their own business and stop thinking the world revolves around them.  There several billion people in the @LOCATION1 and every person looks at thing slightly different and this should be taken into consideration when the get mad just because there is a book or movie on the shelf of the library.  For example I like movies with comedy and sometimes a scary movie but girls @MONTH1 not like scary movies and @MONTH1 like movies with droma or somthing in that line.  Just because we like different things doesn't mean we should have to put just a so certain kind of books or movies on the shelf.       Yes, there are movies that I dont like because they stand for things that are against my religion but I dont stand around and say no one should watch these movies because just because I dont beleive in them doesn't mean I should judge other people for it.  I know some people feel that everyone one should look at things the same way as they do and everyone should should agree and get along but that is not how it is and no matter how much you want people to agree and get along it will never happen.  I think people need to mind their own business and let people read, listen to, and watch whatever they want to and it should not affend anyone.     I know people like to think that they know everything there is to know just because they have their own ways and thoughts.  People like this you can argue with and you will never win the arguement and you can never get them to understand how you look at it. They just think think my way is the right way and the only way.       This is the way I feel about people getting mad when there is a book or movie on the shelf that they dont not agree with.  I just think that evryone should try to undersatnd what you are saying and listen to you instead of ignoring you.  I feel this way but I am not a person that is tuck in their ways where you cant change their mind.",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1014,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Have you ever thought about people's veiws on certain technolgy? While some people say that others spend too much time on their computers, and are waisting their time, I think computers can help us with many different things. They can help with homework, interacting with people, and even help us with exercising. You'll find that in the end, computers end up as benefits for everyone. For many students, they need computers to help them understand their subjects. There are certain websights that give online lessons. Along with that, they have online books, so if they forget their real ones, they can still do their homework. My math teacher, @PERSON2, is always saying,""@CAPS1 into the online sight."" I've found that it really helps me when I'm struggling with my work. We can also ask our friends with help if we still @CAPS4't understand. That's not all we can do. There are certain sights like @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 where we can interact with other people. You can talk to them when they're out of town and have no cell-phone. You can also tak when the phone is being used and you have something importain to tell them, such as helping them with their homework. When there's no telephone reception between each other, they can still talk over one million people in the @LOCATION1 use these sights. People are wrong when they say it takes their time away from exercising. Many websights give good tips on how to lose weight. The show many dieting plans such as @PERSON3 or @PERSON1. Not only that, but they also have exercise plans. It's not the computer's fault, it's the people who @CAPS4't ""stick"" with exercising. Also, the computer reccomends many great gyms you can join, like @LOCATION2 fitness. @CAPS4't you think that's a good ""deal?"" @CAPS4't listen to those other people stick with my opinion that computers are benefits for everyone. They can help us with many things, above and beyond. I can't imagine life without them. Most everyone uses computers! Thank you for reading.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13363,5,"I think the mood of the memoir is comforting and happy because it talks about how a simple house became a home. The memoir shows how a family can turn a random house into a home would love and by selflessly letting people stay with them until they can get back on their feet. The memoir also shows how family has nothing to do with being blood relaited, it's about being their for one another in a time of need. I think that shows a great amount of comfort and happiness, knowing that a simple apartment could become a loveing home, filled with family and love.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11982,5,"The mood created by the author. Is that @CAPS1 was talking about is that theres some families that come from every were and so Narciso Rodriguez is prowed of coming from Cuba.""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us. ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowlege of the language or the culture. I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. So thats what the mood of Narciso's story was like.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19131,7,One time I was pacient was when my mum said that she would buy me a @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 I waited and waited and waited and wated for her but I knew I had to be pacient because she was going through hard times.,4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15333,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. Wind caused a great problem in the docking of the dirigibles ""The body of the dirigible could swing in the breeze"" (para 6). The swinging of the dirigibles body would cause pulling on the building that the building's current frame wouldn't be able to support. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below"" (para @NUM1). The builders of the Empire State Building now had to strengthen and modify the building's frame to suit the stress of the dirigibles' loads Another obstacle that the builders of the building faced was the framing of the mast. The roof had to be completed before the mast's framing could take place. The workers had to work for another two monts after the building was already complete due to Al Smith's idea of allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. The builders worked hard to suit the new building for the docking of dirigibles. Unfortunately their work was for nothing.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3627,2,"I belive that the view on censorship in libraries are fine as they are for many reasons. The main reasons that i belive censorship in libraries are fine are that almost everything in the library are for people to learn about weather they read it or watch a movie about it. Another reason is that if they took everything that was offecsive or unliked then there would be a lot less information for people to learn about in libraries.     I agree with Katherine Paterson in her quote because it means that if we took away every book that someone found offensive then there would be no books left. Every person has different things that offend them and it would not be possible to remove everything from the library that offended someone. For example, if someone wanted to learn about a historic war from the past, but if someone was offended by the war because they lost a family member or friend to it, should the piece of writing be taken away? Libraries are a place that someone can go to, to learn about something. They hold a lot of information about many different subjects that people go to learn about even if it @MONTH1 be offensive to some people. If someone doesn't like something or finds it offensive then they should just leave it on the shelf and move on because someone else might learn something important from it. There are things in life that people need to be opened to or informed about even though they @MONTH1 not always be plesent. Libraries are the place that people get introduced to these things and if these things are removed then where will people go to be informed about this information.     To sum it all up, yes there are things in libraries that some people @MONTH1 find offensive but other people @MONTH1 learn from it and it would be unfair to take this information away from everyone else. A library is a place to go to learn about different things and should alway have information on different subjects and topics. Many people have learned things from a library that have affected their lives and will keep learning more things as long as they are still opened to a wide source of information.",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9991,4,"This sentence concludes the passage, to show how when the hibiscus is budding and a new season starts, Saeng will be a new person and will be able to take the test. In this sentence the cold snow, fleeing geese and planted hibiscus can all represent Saeng and what she is going through. They are either cold, ready to leave or restricted just like Saeng feels. But, when a new season starts, the geese come back, and the hibiscus is no longer restricted in a pot, Saeng will also grow up and be able to take the test. This sentence is put at the end to show how much Saeng can now grow because she has the hibiscus, which is growing with her.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4627,2,"I do believe that certain books, music, movies, and other media should be removed from the shelves of libraries, if they are found to be offensive. We do not need anymore reasons for people to judge someone based on something that they read.     If the media is offensive, than someone's feelings will get hurt. I remember a time when I read a book, and it had some really offensive things about homeless people. I felt bad just for reading this, because it just made them sound like horrible people. Which in a lot of cases isn't true, but I remember people that read it and they believed of every word of it. Those people now rudely look down on them. So why would we allow this book to be in the library? This book changes the way many people think, and so do many more books.     There is a lot of offensive music too. Today most of the songs people listen to are, but we just don't realize it. These should not be available in a library, cause anybody could rent them. Which isn't good, cause they could really hurt someone's feelings by just singing a song they think is okay.     Another thing libraries need to watch are magazines. Most magazines are okay, but some like to throw in little inapproiate stories. So to really protect everyone and anyone they need to really go through the magizine and make sure its not offensive at all.     The media I think libraries really need to sit down and think over if they are okay, or not are definately movies. They need to realize that kids could rent these, and think are they apporiate. I think libraries should only have family oriented movies. This way nobody is harmed by anything they will veiw.      In conclusion, libraries should be extra careful in their media choices. They need to try and limit everything that is offensive, to try stop anybody from getting harmed",3,3,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19099,7,"“@CAPS1 on!”I said.we were in the waiting room of my dad’s doctor’s office. My   dad goes to a special doctor.It was very boring.There also was a maninge sale going on so my sister and.I went and hoked @CAPS3 that while my dad read a book.We were @CAPS3 the doctor’s for all most all morning.we were there for @CAPS2! That was the meals bringed day of my life.The doctor were very slow and they were dumbn” I told my dad was he patient.These also was a ???  sale @CAPS3 then doctors ??? that  we  want in,@CAPS3 the rummye  sale they had dishes,food,jewrey  and diaring.my sideroad I got a ??? Krispey treat.my sider also got a hol.Her hat was cool.I also got a ??? and I gl ??? blue, purple, pink and sarkly. fimlly they called my dad. My dad went into a  patient room-when my dad @CAPS1 out he said and he was healthy .He had to wait until they got his prompitiously ready  to lake and get filled . They gave him his prescription and we left.In conclusion we should be patient with people .Patient is kindness .I am always patient with people .I hope you are also patient with people .",9,11,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9662,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph. I think the author did this so that people who read the story will know what she is gonna do next spring and they might make out another storie in so that you will know that she will take the test in the spring.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7260,3,"The fatures of the setting affected the cyclist by it hard for him to control hill bike down on rough road, hotter making him thisty and running out of water. Also there wasnt an building in sight so he could get anything to drink. Also he did know where he was go. These are the features that affected the cyclist",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
662,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 you @MONTH1 know a lot of people now a days are constintly on the computer, and many people think it’s a problem. Well you should know the computer is helpful in many ways, such @CAPS1 learning, entertainment, and even weight. That is just a few out of the hundreds of different things there is to do. The computer can help you get in contact with realitives you haven't seen in a long time. Or maybe if you have been having some health problems you can go online to see what is wrong, I remember my mom has been getting really dizzy and sick, and her doctor told her everything was fine, but in wasen't. So my mom checked up what was wrong on the computer and found out she had a disease, and when she went back to the doctors they figured out she really did and her on a medicine. In my opinion the computer was on of the best inventions made. It can be used for so many things, you can also purchase items over the computer. So now I hope you agree with my opinion and support the use of computer's.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21573,8," Hello my name is @CAPS1 @CAPS11 i am going to walk you through one of the most hilarious experiences i have ever had. It is a story about me @CAPS11 my friends @CAPS11 a little adventure we had @DATE1, a day we would never forget. It starts off on one of the nicest days i had ever seen, i mean amazing, blue sky's, warm @DATE1 air, @CAPS11 the sound of the laughter coming from the children playing in the street. Me @CAPS11 my three friends @PERSON3, @PERSON1, @CAPS11 @CAPS2 were sitting on my back porch in a circle playing our guitars, as usual @CAPS11 we decided that we needed to go do something, something new. As we sat @CAPS11 thought about what we could do nothing came to mind. Until @PERSON1 suggested that we go to the beach @CAPS11 meet up with his cousin ""@CAPS3 has a nice house right on the beach @CAPS11 probably wouldn't care if we stopped by."" @CAPS3 said. The three of us looked at each other @CAPS11 looked an @PERSON1 @CAPS11 said ""lets go!"" We packed our boards, guitars, @CAPS11 food @CAPS11 we headed out. On the way we decided to go to the @CAPS4 city skate park, none of us had ever been @CAPS5. We drove around for at least an hour looking for it. Aggravated @CAPS11 about to give up on finding the park we decided to take one @DATE1 loop @CAPS11 @CAPS10 what happened. ""@CAPS5 it is"" yelled @CAPS2 ""@CAPS5's the park i found it."" We looked off in the distance @CAPS11 @CAPS5 it was. The cradle, the snake run, everything. we pulled in @CAPS11 parked. We got out of the car ready to skate, but then out of nowhere it started pouring @CAPS11 the park was soaked. we headed back to the car seeking shelter only to find that @PERSON3 had locked his keys in the car. Luckily @CAPS3 had @CAPS7 so @CAPS3 called them @CAPS11 had them come @CAPS11 unlock the car. it took them an hour @CAPS11 a half to find us @CAPS11 unlock the car. Now we were all mad @CAPS11 wondering if it was a good choice to go on this trip. @CAPS8 leaving the park we decided it would just be best if we went to @PERSON1's cousins house @CAPS11 stayed @CAPS5 for the @TIME1. When we got @CAPS5 we were greeted with open arms @CAPS11 warm clothes, ""looks like you guys have had a rough one"" @CAPS3 said, ""I'm @PERSON2, I'm sure @PERSON1 has told you all about me by now."" @CAPS8 we changed in to the clothes @PERSON2 had given us we went @CAPS11 sat by his fireplace to warm up. The five of us sat @CAPS5 @CAPS11 talk for what felt like forever. Then I said ""i wish we could have a big fire on the beach."" ""we can"" @PERSON2 said, ""i know the perfect place."" @CAPS3 took us to a small bay on the beach about @NUM1 yards away from his house, @CAPS3 called it driftwood bay. ""@CAPS10, told you i had the perfect spot."" @CAPS11 it was perfect, secluded, sandy, @CAPS11 all the firewood you could ever need. We built a fire @CAPS11 kept throwing wood on it until it was over @NUM2 feet tall. For the rest of the day @CAPS11 on through the @TIME1 we sat around the fire, playing our guitars in a circle, @CAPS11 telling the story of our day. Laughing @CAPS11 noticing that even tho the beginning of our day wasn't very fun we closed it the only way we could have wanted, sitting around a fire, music playing in the @TIME1, @CAPS11 sharing a good laugh with your friends.",17,18,,35,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20728,8," Starting a story out with two @NUM1 @DATE1 old boys named @ORGANIZATION1 can already be considered a comedy. Those are the names of my identical twin cousins @ORGANIZATION1 I can honestly admit that they are @NUM2 of the funniest kids I know. My uncle isn't exactly the most intelligent human on earth, @ORGANIZATION1 by the way he named his children it's apparent that his sense of humor is a little bit off, but he's a really hard working man. Occasionally my mom does him favors by taking the twins off his hands for a little while because they can be a handful. Weekends are specifically better to have them over because of my hateful step siblings whom hate me, my brother, my sister, @ORGANIZATION1 even my mom. The amount of tension in the house isn't a healthy amount, so a couple of @NUM1 @DATE1 old running around livens it up a little @ORGANIZATION1 makes us all laugh together as a family. It must have been @DATE1 in @DATE2 when @CAPS7 was home @ORGANIZATION1 we were building onto our house when the twins came over. My mom was getting quite furious at their insanely high energy levels, she appeared to be on the verge of ripping out all her hair. My step dad @PERSON1 needed to go to @PERSON2's for nails @ORGANIZATION1 child locks @ORGANIZATION1 I decided to tag along with him. I thought it would have been a great idea to take the twins with us, just to relieve my mom of the loud mouths for a few minutes. We loaded up the car @ORGANIZATION1 I drove down the highway, amused with the twins in the back seat playing with the ponies @ORGANIZATION1 laughing at the people stopped at red lights. We all sang songs like twinkle twinkle little star, @ORGANIZATION1 the @ORGANIZATION2's until we arrived in the @PERSON2's parking lot. @ORGANIZATION1 finds it pretty hilarious to run down the isles @ORGANIZATION1 hide behind items on the lower shelves, while @ORGANIZATION1 enjoys pretending he's @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 getting @CAPS7 confused. Eventually the twins were being too obnoxious, resulting in @LOCATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 me catching them @ORGANIZATION1 holding them as captives in the seat-belts of the @PERSON2's cart. It was helpful but didn't do as much justice as we had hoped. We continued along on our adventure in search of the child locks, @ORGANIZATION1 found them down isle @NUM4. There was a large man standing in front of our destination @ORGANIZATION1 when i say large I don't mean muscular, or tall... I mean he probably has a few too many @CAPS1 shows he watches daily, @ORGANIZATION1 maybe a few too many favorite snacks. His hair was long @ORGANIZATION1 sandy blond, he wore a dark purple @CAPS2 die shirt @ORGANIZATION1 slip on sandals. @ORGANIZATION1 apparently hadn't realized how inappropriate it is to talk about a person in a rude fashion, especially when they can hear you. He said, ""@CAPS3 cow @ORGANIZATION1 look at that lady! She's so huge!"" @ORGANIZATION1 laughed outrageously @ORGANIZATION1 agreed. ""@CAPS4! She's as big as our whole car!"" I panicked a bit @ORGANIZATION1 tried to get them to be quiet, however the twins paid @CAPS5 attention to me, they were much more excited to see the man on the tall ladder next to me giggling @ORGANIZATION1 laughing along with them. They were quiet for a moment then @ORGANIZATION1 gasped @ORGANIZATION1 exclaimed, "" @CAPS5 she's as big as a fire truck!"" The man turned around @ORGANIZATION1 glared at me; i apologized at least @NUM5 times @ORGANIZATION1 started to take the boys out of the isle when the man on the ladder hit a button to make the ladder move. I was walking behind the larger man when the ladder made a ridiculously loud beeping sound, like that of a construction vehicle. The boys screamed in fear @ORGANIZATION1 shouted frantically, ""@CAPS6 run as fast as you can hurry! She's backing up @ORGANIZATION1 she's going to squish you on the floor!"" @CAPS7 laughed, even the man they were making fun of, but i was so embarrassed that i just took them to the car @ORGANIZATION1 waited for @PERSON1. I tried to explain to the boys in the car that only big trucks beep when they are backing up, but unsurprisingly, they didn't listen to a word i said. @PERSON1 only took approximately @NUM6 more minutes before he came jogging out the door with the nails, the child locks, @ORGANIZATION1 a gigantic smile plastered on his face. I thought about what had happened in the store @ORGANIZATION1 i chuckled quietly until @PERSON1 hopped into the truck, then i started laughing profusely. When I returned home I told my mom what had happened, she laughed for a while @ORGANIZATION1 i laughed even harder @ORGANIZATION1 quite a bit longer than i had before. I went to sleep with a fairly massive headache that night, but i think it was worth laughing all day for.",23,16,44.0,44,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
150,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 computers does have some cons but they also have a lot of pros. Some pros are they show magnificant pictures of nature and it would pictures until you want to send them by email. You can even order tickets for planes, trains and movies. Let's not forget shopping and internet. If you go on the internet you can find many pictures of any thing you want. Such as pictures of nature, celebrities. About @PERCENT1 of all picture on the internet are true. A computer can also hold pictures that you take on a digital camera. It can even take a project on a flash drive and then download it. The computer can even email the pictures to any email that exsist. If you want to go to the movies or on vacation you can get the movie tickets online. You can get them at any ticket sales website. If you want to go on vacation you can get your hotel tickets even your plane train, or boat ticket online. Buying tickets isn't the only thing you can do on the internet you can buy stuff to. You can order @CAPS2, @CAPS2 @NUM1, @CAPS2 @NUM2, game cube, x-box, x-box @NUM3, wii, you even computer games. You can even buy the game systems. You can buy house hold appliances. Also you can put clothes and other store products an hold. The internet you can watch videos an almost any website you go on. Some @MONTH1 be grass, some @MONTH1 be funny others @MONTH1 even be wierd. @PERCENT2 of all teenagers like watching music videos. Some are just the artist sing and dancing in a background other times people make fun of other artists. Even though computers do have pros and cons they have more pros. Like the examples in the passage above.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9545,4,The author decided to finish the story with that phrase to show that she will wait for her next year and do all this over again. She will be waiting for it and do all this over again. She will be waiting for it and prove that she can do it one more time and that she is used to live there now.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15948,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @PERSON1, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles they faced was figuring a practical and safe way to dock the dirigibles. Practicity and safety were an obstacle because the builders of the Empire State building were the first to attempt a docking dirigibles on air, @CAPS1 they had no past trials to refer to. In this project practicity and safety worked together. For example ""..engineers [had] to dope out a practical, workable arrangement..."" @CAPS1 that the airships could be moored to the mast easily and secure. This would assure the passengers safety as well as stability to the building.The second obstacle the builders faced was distributing the stress added to the building as the dirigible docked. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" @CAPS2 all of this stress to the foundation was a challenge because the foundation ""... was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" Another challenge that arose was that, to accommodate this situation ""the steelframe [of the building had] to be modified and strengthened..."" The modification to the buildings framework was worth ""over sixty thousand dollars..."" In conclucion, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles and attempting to dock dirigibles in their building.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3032,2,"In my opinion, books, movies, magazines, ect., should not be taken off the shelves if they are offensive to some people. this is because everyone has different views on everything. Another reson is because for learning purposes in schools and etc. As well as authors would not want to be writting books because the books shelves are empty and their books, movies, magazines are getting rejected.     Since most people have different veiws on everything then,   every book or magazine would be taken off the shelf if they were offensive because, therefore, there would not be any book or magazine left on the shelf. This is because people think different things are offensive so what somebody thinks is offensive it @MONTH1 not be to another person. Therefore people would be angered or upset if their favorite book was taken off the shelf because someone said it was offensive.      Another problem with taking 'offensive' books of the shelf is that it would be a result in people not learning in schools and ect. This is because we all have to go through some point in school where we find something offensive for example wars, slavery, and politics. If all these books were to be taken off the shelves then nobody would be learning about any of this. In conclusion noboby would be being taught why these events happened and  why these events are wrong, so people would not have changed, they would keep doing these things because they were not taught not to. This in my opinion would cause alot of conflict between people and nobody would be educated on these events of history.      On the other hand rather than books being taken off the shelf books would not be being put on the shelfs. In this I mean that authors, producers, would not be making movies or writting books because their work just keeps getting rejected. Not only rejected but nobdy is going to go through the time and effort to make one of these for it to be rejected because it was offensive. In my opinion it would almost be impossible for these authors/ directors to make a unoffensive book or movie for everyone that is going to read or watch it.      In conclusion I have read many books in class every year that offends at least one person, but this person can choose not to finish the movie, book, or magazine if they find it offensive, or they never have to read it again. In conclusion there are many reasons why books should stay on the shelf even if they are offensive to someone. This is because it would not help with people being educated on events that happened, and people would not be reading any books in school. As well as authors would not be writting since their books are getting removed and the shelves are empty",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9358,4,"The author concludes the story with this ending paragraph because. It combine the two inpefect situations. When she said when they come back Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snow melt and the gese return and this hibiscus is budding then I will take test again. She will prove her point and abbreviated the situation.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18649,7,It was late @DATE1  when my @CAPS1 is and I was going to @CAPS2 point for my @CAPS1. So we take forever  to drive  there just sitting in the back sent all alone back there no one to talk to but my phone. So we finally get there wasting all my patients on being in the car after we get in we go on the @CAPS4 @NUM1 @CAPS5 wait to ride a @NUM1 minute ride it is worth it but still @NUM1 hours is a lot of time. So I m waiting then we get off the ride they we go on the @CAPS6 @NUM4 @CAPS5 line for @NUM5 second ride. All the rides there  were at least 1-@NUM1 hours long. Except one ride the @CAPS7 we got there before the crowd  came in. So it was on leg @NUM7 minutes and @CAPS8 the time we got on the ride and at the top of the  hill it was probably a @CAPS5 line. So we really lucked out on that one. But @CAPS8 the time the park closed and we got to our car there was a huge traffic jam and that was all the patients left so we were in line to leave the park  for another @CAPS5 and a half so we waited and waited and finaly it moved and once we got through the park and out of it the road we had to take was  closed because of a car accident so we had to talk this huge detoer  that added a @CAPS5 to our time  because of traffic taking that way and @CAPS8 the time we got to our hotel I didn’t have one drop of  patients left I felt like I was going to blow up but I didn’t I acted very patient but it was a good thing I have a lot of patients.,8,10,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9343,4,The author concludes this story with this paragraph to show the aduiance that Saeng @CAPS1 gave up so you should'nt either. I think that this paragraph is describin a law of life witch is “@CAPS1 give up.” @CAPS2 even though she had failed at first she is still willing to try again.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3341,2,"Libraries should have whatever they want in the library. Everyone has their on thoughts on things. If you don't like what they have on there shelfs then don't go there any more or pick up something you like. Everyone is different so you can't just take offensive stuff off the shelves, it might be offensive to one person, but not to someone else.      Materials, such as book, music, movies, magazines you can't just start taking stuff of the shelves just because there offensived you. The only way I would say take books or magazines off the shelves is if the facts are not right.       Libraries hold almost anything anybody needs materials, books, music, movies, magazines and everythings for facts. So don't start taking stuff off your shelves. Teenagers might have to write a paper about something that people think is affensive, if you don't have everything in the library then we won't have good facts. No one in this world agrees on anything, all you would be doing would be picking a fight if you taking of offensive.Libraries are open to any one that wants to read about almost anything they want to read about.       Music everybody has there on type of music you can't just start taking music of because you think it's offensive. Most people have there own type of everything.     Children is there own person you can keep them from whatever you want to, the thing is you can't hold them back in life. They get older you won't be able to tell them want to do or want not to do. If you keep them from a book or etc they might end up reading it in the long run. Keep you kids safe is inpormant I understand your kids are going to expirects things you don't want them to. Just by taking offensive stuff of the shelves doesn't mean your kids won't fine them some where else.      I could understand if the books or magazines were offensive to you because it was about your family, But of time your going to have offensive come up in your life. That means your going to have to not let it get under you skin or get over it.      Things get under people skin to easy. This is why the world don't get along. If you don't like something don't me around it. Fine something unless to read about. Thats what I do if I don't like something.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12517,5,"The author's mood was happy, thankful, greatful, caring, thoughtful. The mood was happy because he was sharing his life story and what his parents did for him and his siblings made him very happy and greatful. He is very thankful because his parents could have stayed in Cuba and let them grow up there. But instead they came to @LOCATION1 and struggled at first, but the end result was more they could have imagined. He described his parents to be very caring and always put their children before their needs. The author sounds like he is very thankful to grow up here than Cuba because he now sees that he had a much better life. Having a family liked he did he really cheriste the word family. At the end of the excerpt he said ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. This means it was just a random house when they moved in, but when they were done became a home.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12043,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" the author is happy. The author describes his home is a place for family. He is grateful to his parents for everything they did. The author enjoyed his childhood. He was surrounded by loving people and lots of friends. That is how in the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez,"" the author is happy.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10414,4,This paragraph is a good way to end the story because it relates to the test. The narrator says she will try again in the spring. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6327,3,"In the story, the cyclist starts out with a lot of confidence that he can complete the whole ride. But after he left first town he had been riding and needed water, so he stoped at a fork in the road he had just to;to get water from a pump which tastes like battery acid. Then as he progressed further in his trip he came to a sign that said “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed speed limit”(Joe Kurmaskie pg @NUM1) This part of his trip made it very challenging by making him face rough roads and mountains that he had to cross which sucked the water out of him. Then as  he came over the last mountain, he saw a sign for a gart store. So when he arrived he got some water and got directions for a man who had the best map. So you can see that going over an the mountains, sucks all the water out of the cyclist, so he was so relieved when he got the water at the end.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1587,1,"Dear editor, I think that people are spending too much time on the computer. Because of this, people are getting less exersice, they are not spending enough time outdoors and the dont spend as much time with their family and friends. Exersicing is an important part of one's daily schedued. I have a friend who exersices everyday. She is the healthiest person I know and rarely spends anytime on the computer. But, she knows someone who is almost her compleate oposite. He hardly ever exersices and spends @NUM1 hours on the computer each day. He has also been diagnosed with diabeties and is obese. These are the type of health problems that are faced because of lack of exersice and too much computer time. Experts say that people should get at least @NUM2 minutes of exersice every day. But, because more and more people are spending time on computers, this is almost impossible. Studies done at @ORGANIZATION1 show that @PERCENT1 of kids under the age of @NUM3 are obese or at the risk of becaming obese because they are not getting enough exersice. You don't want that number to increase do you? There are other problems that people face because of too much time on the computer. People are spending less time outdoors and more time inside at a desk. My friend @PERSON1 spends way too much time on her computer and not enough outside. She failed a science poject because she was on her computer, rathern than outside comparing the leaves from different trees. Doctor @PERSON2 is a child phycologist and when he asked kids if they would rather play outside or be on a computer, @PERCENT2 of them said computer. This shows that people on computers are not only young, but they want to be on the computer more than be outside. This is a number that, in my opinion, is too high. Lastly, there is the problem of people not spending enough time with their family and friends. By this I mean face to face time, not just video chatting with your friends on facebook. This has caused tension in relationships. My friend @PERSON3 didn't go to her family reunion but stayed at home on the computer and at the next family get together, she was ostrisized because she didn't go to the reunion. High @ORGANIZATION1 guidance counselor @PERSON4 says that @NUM4 out of @NUM5 friendships are ruined because kids dont spend enough face to face time with their friends but are on the computer. These are all god reasons why less time on the computer and more time exersicing, outside, and with family and friends will make your life happier and healthier.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4070,2,"Many books, movies, and magazines are made for the different age groups of adults and children.  I do agree that certain books are not approperiate for some children.  Is it right for some parents to ban books from schools and libraries?  Authors create books and stories because they like the idea, and students can wright what we want on paper because it's what we want it's called freedom.  Schools can try to be creative and have a way to only allow books to the approperate age groups.     Books are a great part of a students learning.  Parents need to learn, and understand no matter how much they don'@CAPS1 like it that they can'@CAPS1 protect their children from the world some day they will be moved out of the house supporting themselves.  How would childern and teens even know how to live or what and how to react to hearing a bad word or watching sexual on @CAPS1.V.  If students never know how will they live.       Books can be learning in many ways.  Some things a teenager might be experiencing a parent might not want to talk about with their child.  Maybe the family can'@CAPS1 afford to buy a pass to the public library. So the only other option is the school library books.  If students can'@CAPS1 have access to then whats the option for them?  Everyone knows how today's society is changing, if a student wants to learn about sex or @ORGANIZATION1's they should be able to if the age is approprite.     All libraries check out books so the book is under a name.  I know at our school students just come in and take the books instead of checking them out, but some students do still use the card and check the book out.  If schools had books that our for only a certain age group a soultion to getting the older students to check them out and only the right age could be the books are in a case that is locked up.  So for the student to have the book unlocked and checked they have an electronic key to unlock books for the age group they are in. When the student unlocks the book and goes to check it out the computer knows what books that specific student can get.  Books are very important to learning and all books need to stay and not get blocked by  parents.",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1590,1,"Dear Local @CAPS1: I'm sitting at the couch thinking about what I should do for vacation. I know I definitely want to take a trip somewhere to do same creative writing, but my notebooks are all scattered, I don't know how to quickly contact someone who could help and I have no idea about the country that I plan to visit. I take a last look at my notebooks strewn about the closet looking very much like a tornado swept through and I find solution on the highest shelf my laptop. First, I highly agree with the people who think computers are useful. Three effects they have on people who use them usely are fantastic. Compare a person with a laptop to one without. The person with a laptop @MONTH1 be a busy business person and have to converse with many people from long distances a part, so they use e'mail and @ORGANIZATION1. They travel places with people at their fingertips. However a person without a laptop could be busy moving from place to place just to meet these people. Their schedule could be chaotic. Conversations over a chat system are fast and effective. Take my story for example. My mom hates wasting, so instead of me driving to a friend we @CAPS2. Saves money and time! In addition, I happen to be a writer who write often everyday in many notebooks. I've written so much over the years that my notebooks are piling all over my room. What organizational tool could help me in this situation? Why a laptop of course! One laptop or computer store a bunch of and editing a breeze. Anyone who with data and writing would be crazy not to have a computer! What you a room notebooks that you buy of, or a single, computer with tons of space and back up? You tell me. Computers encourage users to be more organized! Respectively, computers are resource for a millions of pages information. They're similar to libraries. But think about a library and then imagine a computer. One you have to walk around to seek your information and with the other, knowledge is merely a click away. Some @MONTH1 argue that computer websites are not entirely reliable I beg to differ. There are specific websites on computers with suffixes like '.org' and'.gov' and even'.edu'. These websites contain proven factual information and more great resources for research. By using computers I have acquired greater knowledge and have found computers beneficial. They have effectively made me more intellgent as a person. In conclusion, it's my strong opinion that those who use computers gain nothing but the positive effects, and these include money/gas-saving conversations through @CAPS2 and email organization and increased intelligence from reading. I've decide to take my creative writing on my laptop and in doing so learned the storm.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4074,2,"Books, music, and movies are being taken off of shelves around the globe, because they are found offensive.  Books, movies, and music were created for a reason.  It's a form of entertainment as well as to build knowledge.  Artists, authors and publishers release their work to get information out and to let others hear their voice, it is their freedom of speech.     Books, magazines, music, and movies should not be taken off of shelves if they are found offensive.  Censorship in libraries just hides certain things from society.  If all books on the @CAPS1 were banned and nobody could read them, nobody would be informed on the horrible event and it could easily be reincated.  The majority of movies and books have relevant information, portray events that could take, or have taken, place, and teach valuable lessons.     Artists and authors use their works to get points across to their audiences, whether it is a lesson or learning valubale or interesting information.  People shouldn't be allowed to just take things off of shelves like they are doing.  The material we read, music we listen to, and the movies we watch should be our decision to make.  It shouldn't be decided upon by others wanting to take it off of shelves.  If someone finds material offensive then they should take their own actions to benifit themselves such as, choosing not to expose themselves or their family to the material.  Banning things from the public takes away opprotunity for people to engage in things that interest them.     Some material could be banned for something as simple as one provocative word, sentence or even a thought.  The book '@CAPS2 @CAPS3's @CAPS4' had multiple occurances of cursing, but the book told a true story of an event that can happen to anyone.  It also indirectly included that families can be torn apart if you let them be, but the choice is yours and you can prevent it from happening.  Small things like such as language should not cause the material to be taken off of shelves where people who appreciate it cannot obtain it.     Katherine Paterson's quote is correct, if we can just take things off of shelves then there wouldn't be anything left for us.  Most materials contain something that someone isn't going to agree with, but if we just keep getting rid of things then what is the point in making new material.  There is always going to be the issue of finding offensive material, but nobody should have the right to ban it from everyone.     Materials around the globe are being taken off of shelves due to offensive material, but they were created for a reason.  Not only is it for entertainment,  but it is also for knowledge too.  Artists, authors, and publishers release their work to get information out to let others hear their voice, it is their freedom of speech.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4768,2,"Books, movies, magazines, music, etc., make up a huge part of our entertainment system in our lives today. Whether it be informational or just purely for entertainment, many forms of entertainment are found in your local library today, whereas in the past most libraries only contained books. Although, our entertainment today is much different then it was back then and will be much different than it will be in the future.      In today's society books, magazines, music, movies, and so on can be found in your local library, and contain many different types of material. Some material could be informational about our solar system or about the human body. Other material could be a fiction story filled with action, horror, or love. Some material could also be filled with true, life changing, and inspritaional storries. Which ever it @MONTH1 be, these types of things @MONTH1 come off as offensive to some people more than others and @MONTH1 not be apporpriate for younger ages.     Certain books, movies, magaizines, music, ect., containing offensive, inappropriate, or rude material shouldn't be banned from libraries, just because those younger than adults should not read them, or becuase those who dislike the material believe that that material does not belong in the library. Generally most libraries are quite large and organized into various sections throughout the building. One area might be for fiction books and another for non-fiction books, another area could be for childrens books, and another for magazines, movies, music, ect., all based on different types and genres. Simply do this for those materials that should only be read by adults and not for children or teens. Take the books that @MONTH1 contain offensive material, or @MONTH1 be inappropriate for those younger than adults and place them in their own divided section in the library. When a book from that section is being checked out merely ask for an @CAPS1 from the person checking that book out to make sure that they are of age. This can also apply to movies, magazines, music, and so on that are placed in that section.     Some materials found in libraries that @MONTH1 be offensive to one person @MONTH1 not be offensive to others. Taking those offensive materials out of the library won't benefit everyone and @MONTH1 disappoint some of the people who don't find that material offensive. Placing these certain materials in their own section is the best way to go to benefit everyone.      As you can see just because one person @MONTH1 find certain material in magazines, books, music, movies, ect., offensive, rude, or inappropriate, doesn't mean that everyone else does. It also doesn't mean you should completely take out and get rid of all the materials that are found to contain offensive or innapropraite material. Dividing those specific materials into their own section, and regulating who @MONTH1 check them out is really the best way to go. It benefits everyone at best so that those who want to read that material can still go to their library and check out that book, magazine, and so on, and those who wish to not have anything to do with that certain material don't have to worry about finding material that is offensive or inappropriate, because they will be in their own divided section",3,4,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19463,7,"A time when I was being very patient was when I went to “@CAPS1” at ceider point.. I went to ceider point with my @NUM1 aunties and my @NUM1 cousins. It was just the older girls going, because we new if we took the little people we couldn’t go into the haunted houses, although we went inside one. It was so fun until we got to the lines. They were rediculasly long. I mean it literaly took us about an hour in a half to get on the rollercoaster. My cousins and I were talking for a long time. We were in the back of the whole part, called “The dead zone”, it was very terrifying but fun all at the same time. What a weird feeling. We finally got inside of the place and we still had a long way to go, stairs to climb, bars to pass, it was terrible. But did we complain, not me. I was patient unlike my cousins. We finally got to the top floor and can you belive it, we still had to wait. Then my cousins turned on some music to keep us occupied, but not for long. Then we looked over and realized how far up we were, and started to talk about how scary it would be to fell. Then we went on and on talking. But soon after that we had the people say “were going to hold of for a minute to check and make sure that the @CAPS2 coaster doesn’t have any mechanical problems.” That’s when my cousins went off. We tried to get her to calm down. So we all just sat down a waited. Finally the line was moving forward once more. Then we reached the top of the rollercoaster @CAPS3. We finally could see the @CAPS2 coaster, I guess at that point it looked like time flew by, mabey because we were excited. We finally were on the ride, one of the funest rides in the whole park called “The mauerie”. I guess the wait was worth it. The ride went about @NUM3 per hr, it was jerky, there were drops, it was fun. We were a little patient, but did we enough patients to get back on, I don’t think so.",10,11,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6773,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist. The winding road could affect his turns because he could turn to far one way and fall off his bike and get hurt real bad. Another feature that could affect the cyclist is grass on both sides of the road. If he tireds to take a short-cut and goes into the grass he could he could hit a rock and flip off his bike and get hurt. That is what the feature of the setting could affect the cyclist.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6533,3,"The features of the setting take their toll on the unfortunate cyclist. For example.” I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June.” The deserts of California especially in June are hot and dry and caused the cyclist to use much of his water supply, very quickly. As he “toiled” on, the terrain features became even more trying,” over one long, crippling hill…”By this time the cyclist barely had enough energy to make it over a hill from all the wear and tear his body was put through by the features of his setting.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19516,7,"@CAPS2 father has recently lost his job. It has been hard. It has exactly @NUM1 since @CAPS2 father has had job. @CAPS2 father has been constantly applying for jobs. But he didn't give up. He kept on trying and trying. Fortunately @CAPS2 father has a job interview in san @CAPS1 in a couple of weeks he is going. Hopefully he will get the job.  Thankfully @CAPS2 father has been very patient. Even though he is being rejected constantly, he still trys very hard to get a job. @CAPS2 father is @CAPS2 I role model because of his amazing level of patientence. Thank god, I have someone to care for me who his as patient as @CAPS2 father. Without the patience of @CAPS2 father @CAPS2 family could live. Well job or no job I will always love @CAPS2 father. This would be true because of @CAPS2 fathers great level of patience. For that main reason that is why @CAPS2 dad will always be @CAPS2 heroe and number one beloved role model",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6299,3,"Whether the lack of water, the hills, the tumble weeds – all are things that affect the cyclist. The lack of water affects the cyclist because it is hot outside and he needs water. The hills also affect him because it is hard to peddle up hills. Finally is the tumbleweeds. The tumble weeds show a distinct desert look. When he sees tumble weeds he try’s to keep balance because he is partially dehydrated and doesn’t want to crash. The dehydration / lack of water affect the author because he is very thirsty and everyone needs water to survive. When you are lack of water and energy it makes your goal more hard to complete.  ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21449,8,"One day my friend and I were waking up late in the day and his brother came in screaming and yelling at the top of his lungs ""bro bro""! This was the nickname he called him because he was only two years old, so my friend spencer calmed him down and we started watching t.v. We were talking about what we were going to do for the day so, we started throwing out ideas till we made one where we were going to swim later and play some games now. Spencers mom asked us when we were going to swim and that we had to take his little borther. So we went early so his little bro could swim and we could sit around and listen to music. Unlike everyone who uses an ipod I use my phone because then I can text and listen to music plus when someone calls it shuts off music so I'll know. It was a brand new phone too and i was loving every moment of having it. So when we dropped his little brother off we went back too the pool and sat in the hot tub for a while. I put my phone on my shirt and my towl over both so when spencer got out too use the towl he jerked the towl out and my phone flew up hit the ground slid on the floor all the way too the hot tub. That moment I look down and see it and freak I took it out ripped the back off and dried the battery with the towl hoping it would still work and it wouldn't stop dialing zero and nine so I took the battery out again. When we got back to his moms i plugged in the charger with no battery and spencer kept saying sorry and I kept answering ""its ok"". The next morning his mom asked why we didn't use a pot of rice and we started laughing because we freaked out so bad over a phone. I forgot all about the phone after that just kept laughing and the phone worked it is one of the funniest stories. ",16,16,,32,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18508,7,"There was a person named @PERSON1. He wanted a video game for his @CAPS1- box @NUM1. But, his dad just got laid-off and his mom had a low-paying job. Since they had very little money, he couldn’t buy the game. A few months later, his dad finally found a job at @CAPS2. But, @PERSON1 still didn’t have enough money for the game. A few more months passed, @PERSON1 finally had enough for the game. His mom took him to the store to buy it. He was very excited. He ended up loving the game very much.",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
5992,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead:Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” by Joe kurmaksie,greatly affect the cyclist and put him through many hardships that he probably could have avoided.The old cotagers told him about a path they thought was right,but was hard and did not get him to the right place.The features of the setting are described as “flat road was replaced by short rolling hills.”",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12938,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives, by Narciso Rodriguez the author creates a calm and loving mood. The author first shows a loving mood when he says ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture... to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved. This shows a loving mood because the parents wanted to give their children a better life by moving to american, even though they were leaving alot behind. The author shows a calm mood when he says ""always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love. It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"""". This quote puts a calm mood because when you think of filling the air with scents and playing nice music it puts you in a clam relaxed mood. This quote also shows a loving mood as well. This is because it explains her love for her family and that @CAPS1 is proud to call her family a family. All in all the above evidents set the memoirs mood as loving and careing.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9387,4,"In order to get over her failure, Saeng bought a flower that reminded her of home. Saeng’s started to cry when she bought the flower. She wanted to be back home. The author concluded the story with this paragraph to show how she will take the test when she feels like she is at home. “when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” Saeng said to herself. Those things make her feel welcome and feeling that way will help her with her test. The paragraph concludes the story with all the things she is comfertable with. This conclusion helps the reader understand what reminds her of home. Also explains how much the hibiscus flower ment to her. Buying the flower helps her with her troubles. Seeing the geese fly reminds her of her home. The author concludes the story with the memories that will help Saeng in the future.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18635,7,A time when I was patient was on the city bus. So me and my mom could go to walmart. We waited for @NUM1 hours till we got there. Before we got on we had to pay a @MONEY1 each. Then ask for transfer very nicely. T hen hop on another bus then get off and go shopping. Then wait till bus comes back and go home after @NUM1 hours. Then get of bus at the corner and walk back to the house.,6,8,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9995,4,The author concludes the story with a paragraph taking the test again to show that the narrator @MONTH1 be upset about being in a new place but she will keep trying. The narrator gets upset when she knows the hibiscus is not like the one's from her old home. This upsets her because she probably misses things that she was used to before. The author uses that paragraph to show the narrator is strong and won’t give up on making things the way they were but also showing that she'll try to adapt to her new home. The author does this to show that you should keep trying at something that you love. The narrator will keep trying when the geese fly back and the hibiscus is budding. So the author is saying try if you fail and set goals to never give up.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9824,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph because it shows the main character, Saeng, adapting and trying her best with her new life style. For example, when she vowed to herself in the last paragraph saying, “in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. This implies that she is putting more effort in to what she do in her new environment and settings. In conclusion, the author concludes the story with that paragraph to show how someone is adapting to change.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6998,3,The cyclist was riding his bike and was trying to get to rosemite and he had lack of water but he went on any way and he had to go past a snake and got scared.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6223,3,"Some features of the setting affect the cyclist on his journey to Yosemite. Starting off, ad men who haven’t seen the changes this world made for about a decade, gave the cyclist a bad start. If the cyclist wouldn’t have gotten the shortcut information, he wouldn’t have been without water in abandoned towns. When the cyclist arrives at some rusty pumps, he decided to check it out and see if there is any water. The water was really not and it tasted like battery acid. The cyclist decided to keep going, even though he was running out of water. When he came to a snake in the rode, he had to get by his “dehydrated state.” I would imagine this would be dangerous if you couldn’t focus well in the road. He then came upon @ORGANIZATION1 that has do and abandoned. He obviously couldn’t get any water there seeing as how bad of condition the building was. When the cyclist had no water, he became dehydrated and unfortunately there were no stops for water on his journey that day to Yosemite.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
754,1,"You need to gather information for a project you're presenting in school, but how are you going to find aout about your topic quickly and easily? Most people will turn to one of the most commonly used piece of technology in the @LOCATION1, the computer. The computer is used for quick and easy research, interacting and communicating with friends and for personal entertainment. Some peol argue that the computer will take away from enjoying nature, spending time with family and friends and exercising. But what if we didn't have the computer? The possability of research, etc. Would be much more difficult. For example: computers help us learn about almost anything quickly and easily. this could help make work for school or jobs less stressful. Also, a computer can be accessed right in your name, so no travel is required. The computer has programs that are used to prepare articles, essays, slide shows and brochures for presentation, as well. If we didn't have a computer, research would be much more of a struggle and could require travel. Computers are one of the most common ways to communicate with friends and family. Websits and e-mail helps you keep intouch with anyone around the world. You can write e-mails, access live chat or even webcam. E-mailing is just like mailing a letter except it is dilivered instantly and doesn't cost anything. There is also no risk of anyone reading your mail. Live chat iswhen you chat over text on the computer. Webcam is face to face interacting which givs off the effect of talking in person: @CAPS1 benefit is that communicates over the computer doesnt cost a thing. Lastly, computers provide games for your personal entertainment, which helps kill boredom. The computer also helps improve hand-eye coordination, along with staying orginized @CAPS2, pictures, videos and more can be placed in files and saved on the computer making it easy for you to open them at @CAPS1 time. Computers @MONTH1 take away from some activities but think of how much harder and more stressful things will be without it. I think that the computer has a good effect on people as well as it being a helpful piece of technology.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7308,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making him ???  are ??? like when he rood through that ghost town. The setting is a big part of this story thats all that talk about. And when hes getting water or how the tumbleweeds are crossing the road. He was all ways thirsty and rode his bike along ways and is no paint in ??? ??? ???.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7192,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclist a great deal. I say that because when there is peace and calmness then it motivates you more. Than when there is a lot en stuff around you.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6772,3,"Desert, Hills and road condition and lack of water –all are how the setting affected the cyclist. First, the cyclist reveals he is in the desert when he exclaims, “I was trave ling throug the high deserts of california in June.” This means it was hot. Second the hills and road condition’s were horrible. The cyclist reveals this when he describes, “flat road was replaced by short rolling hills,” aid againg  It read: Rough road ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit. Lastly, He had thought that he would have stops on the way to get water from. So he drank all the rate he wanted. He then figured out the needed to conserve it but by then it was too late. The examples shows that the cyclists condition was harder than he expected them to be.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7209,3,"There are many ways the cyclist is affected throughout the essay by the setting. As he first enters the “short cut” that the old men give him he is confidenc. When he arrives at the first town and sees that it is like a ghost town he does not fret but continues on his journey in confidence. As he got to the second stop his lack of water began to set in, “I got down on my hands and knees working the handle of the rusted water with all my strength. This shows he will work hard and is in need of water. As the cyclist past another place with no hope of water he placed stones in his mouth because he once heard it helped get your mind off thirst when he had just about lost hope from travelling through the hot @CAPS1 desert with no water he found one lost drive in him when he saw a store with water. Though this was a hot harsh setting it created inspiration for him to keep going and push through the hard times and survive.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10171,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph of ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"" because this paragraph can show that the hibiscus is the reason why Saeng wants to try the test again. If the hibiscus is budding after the snow melt and the geese return, then she can do as the hibiscus be strong and won’t give up on her test.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10134,4,"This paragraph represents an action that Saeng is going to do over a time period of a year. She is going to build up and change in time for the retake of the test its like a rebirth in a way. The girl wants to be a whole new person for when the test comes up again. Her mom seems to be bothered by every action or choice of her daughters. The daughter suddenly relizes the action for the hibiscus and why it dies. ""... thought the quiet repetition of season upon season."" She relates the flower and geese to herself. Over the year the flower goes through phases dying then rebirth. Saeng wants to get better once she goes through a phase like the flower. Its opens up to be beautiful again.  ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7245,3,The features of the setting affects the cyclist. Because the man didn’t have a lot of water and he was go into the California deserts in June. Another reason is because the flat road was changed into rolling hills and up ahead there was a sign that said “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” the speed limit was @NUM1. One more thing is make sure you don’t listen to a gentleman that is old and hadn’t be off ther porch in decades. That is some of the things that can affect the cyclist.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9635,4,She ends the story with that paragraph because she wants to let everyone know she feels most comfortable in the spring. It also states that she can not wait for the geese and the hibiscus to start budding because it is her favorite time of the year.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13295,5,"The author created a reflective, happy, and grateful mood in the memoir. First, the author states in his memoir, ""I was born into this simple house... which I adore to this day... childhood... first friend."" All these phrases show Narciso reflecting to his childhood, his first friend, and first house. Narciso reflects to his past, like how all memoirs should be. Secondly, the author uses words like ""great sense... adore... grateful,"" to show his appreciation and happiness of his childhood. To my knowledge, there aren't any grave, dark, sad parts of his life in the memoir. Finally, the author says that he is grateful for his rich culinary skills, passed down by his family, and his parents' love and sacrifice. This gives the mood of the memoir appreciation throughout the memoir, especially near the end, where he is grateful for his parents' selflessness. To conclude, the mood of this memoir is appreciation, happiness, and reflective.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21014,8," One day i was with my friend @PERSON1. We had been friends for a really long time. I was in a bad mood that day because my dog, taco ran away and i had gotten into an arguement with my parents. @CAPS4 asked me if i wanted to go out on a walk, and i said i did. We were really good friends at this piont, and @CAPS4 always knew when something was wrong, even though i think i hide @CAPS1 pretty well. As we wakled, we walked past children playing at the park with thier parents, and a man playing fetch with his dog, @CAPS1 was sunny and warm. @CAPS1 was durring the summer-time. We stood on the bridge for a minute, then @CAPS4 asked me ""whats wrong, @CAPS2?"" @CAPS3 @CAPS1 odl him everything that happend, i told him that my dog had ran away and that my parents were mad at me. I told him that i was sad. I dont know why i opend up to him like that we hardly ever talk about our life drama. we're always laughing and making jokes. I thought @CAPS4 liked me, actually i was hoping @CAPS4 did. I liked him, i had for a while.  We started talking about everything that was going on in our lifes, school, friends, parents, and alot more. @CAPS4 put me in a better mood. We decided to go to the park and sit at the pic-nic tables. We sat across from eachother, and sat there talking for a while. Then @CAPS1 started getting late and i had to get home. I said ""thanks for cheerig me up, i really needed to laugh and smile today."" @CAPS4 looked at me, and took my hand in his and said ""@CAPS5 should always laugh, because @CAPS5 never know who is falling in love with your smile."" and then @CAPS4 kissed me. That is the a day i'll remember for a long time. I'm still with @PERSON1, we've been together for almost @NUM1 months now.",17,16,,33,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3921,2,"There are many different styles of  literature and media in this world.  With this variety, it has to please at least one person. If not, why was it made? There come a point when things just become too much. Some media and literature has passed this point and it should not be allowed on shelves.       Media is a huge influence in todays society.  What would you do without it?  Everyday, everyone is using media related, whether it is turning on the televison in the moring and watching the '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' to opening up a magazine and reading about what famous person is in jail this time.  You cannot get away from it. Teens @CAPS1 are truely addicted for the most part. We have video games, online chats (facebook and myspace), and moives.  Many things we learn from these are not good for our minds and health.   Some video games are good to play but when you become wrapped up in them, playing non stop, killing people and laughing at this, here you know there is something wrong.  Our minds are exposed to so much immorality and violence, so we think it is okay to do. Many people see it as, the movie stars do it, so why can't we?  @CAPS1's society is killing our minds and many young people who think their life is miserable just go out and commit suicide.       Music can get too extensive as well.  Yes, you have you oldies, country, and the jazz but when you add in the rap and heavy metal music, there is no understanding. Rap is all about who am I going to sleep with next and how many times I can have sex. Really, is this what our lives should be focused on? I didnt know people like the thought of a @CAPS3.  Heavy metal music, you cannot understand it, but when you research the words you see that life is useless and why are we living?  People say that this music helps them calm their anger down. Feeling realived after they have listen to it. You @MONTH1 be clam now but after hearing these words and banging your head around, what is going to happen when you do get extrememly mad?        Too many lives are effect by @CAPS1's media and literature. Lives of friends have been lost and friendships have been ruined.  Someone is always going to say a certain amount is too much, but I think we need to set a goal of how much is too much and try to save ourselves.  We are not like a video game that has seconds lives",3,4,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8926,4,The reason why the author ended with Saeng vowed iS because she is very commited. She failed the first time but know she really want to pass it so she is waiting until the snow melt and @CAPS1 geese return and this hibiscus is buddin @CAPS2 she will come back,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7585,3,The setting affected the cyclist by making him very hot. He said he started sucking on stones because he heard that if you suck on stones it makes you not thirsty. He also said he might hit a bump and swallow one of the rocks. He said he wanted to swallow the rocks. The reason for that was that he was so hot. He didn’t even no where he was goin.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14982,6,"In the excerpt from ""The @CAPS1 Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS2, many obstacles are described from the construction of the Empire State Building in New York City. Thousands of dollars were spent on hopeless modifications to the building, in efforts to add a mooring mast to the top for the docking of dirigibles, or blimps. These efforts however were unsuccessful. Two main obstacles builders faced during construction were safety in nature. After a 1937 dirigible fire in New Jersey, owners of the Empire State Building ""...realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" (@NUM1, @CAPS2) and an existing law forbade low airships in urban areas. Also, the unpredictable winds provided workers with a very risky, dangerous situation in the end, although builders faced many obstacles during construction, diribles were never docked on the building.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6724,3,"In the story, “Do not exceed posted speed limit,” the features of the setting affect the cyclist by showing the rough conditions he went through, and somehow perservered through. The author states numerous times the lack of water, and the rolling hills. Followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” This shows the struggle he went through and supports the setting story and how it affected his trip. This also shows how he perserverd through his struggles and made an effort to finish.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16567,6,"Building just a building alone is a tremendous job for builders, then adding on a docking mast for dirigibles makes it significantly more difficult. The architects and builders had to consult with experts as to how this construction should take place and whether it was safe or not. The architects and builders had to tour equipment and mooring operations at the U.S. Naval Air Station in Lakehurst, @CAPS1 and also had to meet with the president of an airship transport company. Perfusive planning and many meetings later they would begin building this mooring mast.As for the building the construction workers could not just drop a mooring mast onto the flat roof of the Empire State Building they had to find another way, they did not want to put stress on the buildings frame. They came to the conclusion that the frame of the building must be modified requiring over sixty thousand dollars. Workers got to add the mast and then construction was haulted due to danger of pedestrians, all that work for nothing.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4085,2,"I believe that certain materials should be removed from libraries if they are offensive. Children shouldn't be allowed to read books that have inappropriate pictures on them. Censored material can have bad influences on children. Scary movies can make children have nightmares. There should be restrictions against offensive materials.     Libraries contain plenty of books, music, movies, and magazines for everyone. Libraries also have some offensive items in them. Offensive material should be removed from libraries. Children don't need to see inappropriate material in libraries. Inappropriate material can have bad influences on kids.     Censored material such as offensive language, smoking, and alchol are extremely bad influences on children. Children don't need to say cuss words. Smoking can lead to cancer or death. Alchol is also addicting and can cause a person to become violent. Children shouldn't be able to see these inappropriate items in libraries.     Scary movies can give children nightmares. When I was a child, I saw a scary movie and I couldn't even sleep that night. Inappropriate movies need to have ratings so that kids don't watch them. Kids believe most of what they watch in movies. Movies should be restricted from children to watch them.     There is a lot of material in libraries that should be censored from children. Bad influences can have a bad effect on children. I believe libraries need to restrict items that will have a bad influence on children.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9870,4,Reserved need to check keenly,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9475,4,"She concludes that paragraph with the story because she realy wants the people to realize that she is and and is always having fun. Also that she love where she at. Shes making in the world and she loves wathing flower, “geese return and this hibiscus is budding” that show that her favorite thing to do  that she loves is flowers.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3103,2,"I feel as we are letting kids these days do as they feel, and do what ever they want. We are making them think that we don't care what they are involved in, but thats not true. We need to set boundries for what kids should and shouldn't be able to do. We need to show them that we know what they doing.     I think that there should be an age policy for libraries. If there are any books that have any types of adult content, they should be in the adult section. If you ever wanted to check out books, movies, or magazines from that section you would have to be eighteen or older. If that was to much to ask for then you should at least have the parents sign a concent form.      Book, movies, and magiznes with any type of adult content can be harzardess to child, whether its through their actions or behaviors. It @MONTH1 effect their lives depending on what age they were introduced to such things. We need to show them that we care.     I know from personal experiences that being exposed to this, drasticly changes people, not over time but quickly. Now a days the media is portarying that money, alcohal, fame, and drugs are good things. This is what we are putting into our movies and books and magazines, and putting into the children of @CAPS1 heads. We are telling them that its ok, but its most certanly not.      These are all the reasons why we should put cencorships and restrictions on libraries. We are letting the children of @CAPS2 grow up to fast and introducing them to things way to early. In a way we are brain washing them on how to live a destructive live, through adult oriented things",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
348,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 people think that computers are a waste of time and that they are dangerous. Yes computers can be dangerous but they can also help you in @CAPS1 diffrent ways. Such as paying bills on line or planin vacation and even attending collage classes. For @CAPS1 people bills are a strugle. They are an incovenienc and there are way to @CAPS1 of them. If you think about it @CAPS1 people work all day on some time all night, wouldn't it be nice to come home and have all your bills payed? Well one way you can do that is from a computers, computers have @CAPS1 programs that can help you pay your bills faster so that when you come home you can relax and enjy you free time. Computers are also good for planing vactions. @CAPS1 people each year use on line programs to plan there vacations and trips, for example my family and I planed a trip to @LOCATION1 in the @DATE1 of @NUM1. When we get to the airport we had first class tikets and a ride wateing when we got of the plain that @DATE1 was the best so far. Going into a new generation @CAPS1 people are starting to take on line colleg classes do to the fact that they work or have a kid at home these @CAPS2 are good for people with jobs because they are short and you learn alot. A computer is very helpful for taking these classes because if you did not have one it would incible you from taking the class. A computer is a great thing to have for all these things. So if your a mother of a worker and you would like to go back to school you should consider taking on line colleg classes. And if your family wants a vacation you should try out one of the @CAPS1 programs the enternet has for travling.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14979,6,Some of the Problems they faced building the emPire State building was the hight. building a buildig that high up and also epecting it to do things such as bording dirigibles. The @CAPS1 of the dirigible against the building could couse it to collapes. thats why The contractor to to re shape the Skeleton of the building.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6412,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by the road that he was on. He was on a road that had snakes and that the trees where all on the road. The road was like a snake cause it was waved and it had a hug hill that made you go fast and it was hard to star dark because the hill was stipped and know one would ride that hill by if it was a rash than it would have been easier to ride the hill cause than there will be more people these would be some people that are these that can help you if you get hurt. There is also no lights there or if you ride at night then you can’t see where you are going un less you put a light on you bike or himilet then you can ride easier the hill at night. That light there is the features of the setting that affects the cyclist that is going down a hill that know one is there that can help you if you need the help you can get it.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7008,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. The cyclist was in the middle of almost nowhere dehydrating. There were no signs for resting areas where you can find water fountans around. The cyclist put pebbles in there mouth to try  forget about being thirsty. Her surroundings were bumpy so she swallowed one. She just kept going and her words were “I was going to die.” First the cyclist was in danger of dehydrating, and end her satisfaction. The cyclist made it alive as she saw Gary and Wilber’s Fish camp. Her setting was very clear until then. The cyclist was then relieved and made it alive.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12097,5,I think the mood is a very happy great full mood. the speaker seams very happy of her live and how it was growing up. Narciso seems very greatful of her parent and every body  around her and her whole life growing up. Also about how her neighbor hood was. How every body was happy and were all firends and how there were a lot of imagrants in her neighborhood.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17903,7,The time I was patient was when I was wait on my mom to have her @CAPS2. The reason why is becaus she was being a pain to me. She was mean and every thing. So I was lik oh my @CAPS1 she need to have this @CAPS2 so all this can be over and done with. This was when she was oly @NUM1 months so I know that I had to be so patient with her antill the @NUM2 months was over.,5,7,,12,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4109,2,"There are many different perspetives on censorship in our country.  This is the human race, opinionative that is.  Different perspectives come from different people: young, old, parents, and children.  In libraries there are some reading materials, that some @MONTH1 find offensive.     Offensive material in libraries is @CAPS1 directed to be read by young children.  They are also @CAPS1 inteded to be able to get there hands on such material.  Even though this is @CAPS1 the purpose of that material, it happens that this material ends up in the hands of someone who shouldn't have it.  No the material is @CAPS1 held under lock and key, but it is also @CAPS1 left to lay at a child high shelf that would seem appealing to them.     The problem with removing all of this material from libraries would result in empty shelfs, except for the children's books.  The material that would have to be removed are books meant for people of the appropriate age group to inform and tell good stories.  If we protected children from censhorship this would deny knowledge, and also a get away for some, from the general public that anually go to the library.\     @CAPS1 all movies, books, music, and other materials are labeled as they should be.  Some material @MONTH1 @CAPS1 be appropriate for children, but they also are @CAPS1 all inappropriate.  A rated '@NUM1' movie @MONTH1 be just like a rated '@CAPS2' movie only with one extra reference, that @MONTH1 be taken in the wrong way.  Even protective parents @MONTH1 allow their children to view movies like this as long as they find it appropriate.     Libraries should @CAPS1 remove this material from their shelves.  If it is that much of an issue, then they could have the children books in a seperate room of the library.  There are many possibilities of keeping this kind of reading material away from children.  All of which do @CAPS1 have the need of removing these books and other materials from the libraries' shelves.     Censorship in libraries is a contraversial subject.  There is a very good arguement on either side of whether or @CAPS1 to take offensive material off of shelves in the libraries.  I believe it should @CAPS1 be taken off and there are alternatives to this.  This essay proposed solutions to this problem without taking the public reading right away from everyone",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21107,8," Laughter is an essential component to any relationship, as it can erase any previous uneasy feelings and has a tendency to bring two people together. This phenomenon stays true whether the individuals involved are in the same room, talking over the telephone, or even communicating over the internet. My best friend and I share a special bond in which laughing has played a large role in keeping us together.  Laughter can keep people together even in times of hardship. My best friend, @LOCATION1, is @CAPS1, and we have shared many laughs over the @DATE1 years we have been friends. We first met while playing an online computer game and immediately enjoyed each others comments and comical statements. We would immediately burst into laughter when one of us would say something that could be considered even the slightest bit funny. He and I shared many laughs over the next two and a half years. Recently his family had financial troubles and was not able to pay the internet and phone bills for several months. Work during this time seemed to be more of a burden than usual, as I had few people I could truly relax and have a laugh. Only the occasional laugh with my friends who live locally could cause me to forget the disappointment I had from missing one of my greatest friends. @DATE1 weeks ago there seemed to be some hope that my best friend and I would be again able to communicate as before. While staying up @TIME1 one @TIME1 doing homework, I noticed that I had received a message from the long-lost @LOCATION1. I immediately chuckled inside, thinking of the good times we had shared just a month earlier. To my disappointment, the message which I received was not to tell me that he had internet at his house once again, but to thank me for the @CAPS2 gift and to tell me he was at another friends house for the @TIME1. He also mentioned that he would enjoy playing a game or two with me during this time. While this provided some comfort, it did not fully satisfy my hunger for laughter because his computer which he had taken with him was missing the drivers which allowed the use of a microphone. That afternoon, though somewhat disappointing, reminded me of the many great times we had shared together. One @DATE1 ago, my hopes were finally confirmed when @LOCATION1 messaged me to tell me that he had internet again. Though we had missed being together during the @DATE1 break, we were thrilled to once again be able to communicate. I am glad the @TIME1 he chose to get internet was a @DATE2, because we played and laughed till @TIME1. The laughter which we shared that @TIME1 washed the disappointment far from both our minds. My days are once again complete, as they are now an almost perfect balance of work and laughter. Laughter truly does bring people together, far more than I had previously realized. Though my best friend and I are thousands of miles apart, when we talk and laugh together, it seems as though he is in the same room with me. I hope that some day soon we @MONTH1 be able to actually be in the same room, sharing laughs and enjoying life. This example is just one of the many where laughter has greatly improved the outcome of a particular situation, making the individuals involved even closer together than they had been before.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1720,1,"Dear @PERSON1, @CAPS1 in your newspaper, I read an article that sparked my interest. The article was about the negative effects computers have on the community. I couldn't help but disagree with the article, @PERSON1 because, in my opinion, computers are a step in the right direction for modern technology. I believe computers are a benefit to society because they premote hand-eye coordination, you can learn about almost anything, and you can talk online to other people. How do computers help with hand-eye coordination, you ask? When you are typing on the computer your eyes are on the screen while your hands are typing and strengthening at an incredible rate! A study made by students at @ORGANIZATION1 shows that the chances of developing arthritis by the time you are @NUM1 dropped almost @PERCENT1 in people that use computers often. Also, the hand-eye coordination you get from typing, goes a long way in sports such as tennis and baseball. So if someone needs to build up their hand eye coordination I suggest that they take a computer class, like the ones that are offered in many schools all over the country. Secondly, using the internet on computers makes finding information on a variety of subjects much easier. Say you wanted to go on vacation with your family. Instead of calling a number, why not go online and plan your entire trip from your computer. There are so many websites that make it fast and easy. In addition, sites can teaching people how to clothings are always nearby. If you wanted to learn how to knit, just type in ""how to knit"" in your favorite search engine and there are over @NUM2 sites to help you, making it easy to learn to make a great or fix a bike. In addition to learning about new things the internet allows you to friends. After camp, I would always say ""oh we will keep in touch,"" but I never would be able to keep any promise. Once I found an instant messager or webcam application on the internet, it was very easy to talk to my friends. Every once in a while I talk to my friend who now lives in @LOCATION1! Also, my dad is always stressed about meetings with other countries, but now that he can use webcams to talk to his other international bosses, he is so excited about his meetings. He always says that the computers nowadays are very easy to use for talking to people. In conclusion, I believe that computers are a benefit to the world because they help with hand-eye coordination, make it easy to get information, and talk to people.",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
390,1,"I think that computers do benefit us. They allow us to interact with people, talk to family far away, help us with school, gives us easy access to information, and much more people usually have family and friends who live away from each other and the computer allows us to interact with them. The computer lets us email and instant message them, play games against them, be their friend on websites like facebook so you can see recent pictures of them. It's not easy to interact with family and friends who live so far away and the internet allows us to do that. The computer doesn't just let you talk to family and friends but it lets you meet new people and interact with new people from all over the world. It let's you make new friends and play games with them or chat. The computer really helps you to just stay in touch with other people and it's a very easy and convinent way to do so. The next thing the computer helps us with is it entertains us. Children are very hiper and after homework is done, we don't have anything to do so the computer let's us play games on it, chat with friends, watch movies and videos, up load picture, etc. It does alot for us. Kids could hang out after school but if they can go on the computer it allows them want to go home where their parents know that their safe and away from drugs, alcohol, and other bad things they can get into. Just because kids like the computer, that doesn't mean that that's the only thing they do. Kids are very athletic, always playing sports and always hiper but the computer helps that go away. They go to school for hours, then go to basketball or football practice, sometimes we just need a break. The computer isn't always fun but it's very useful. The computer helps us with school. It allows us to type essays and projects. It also allows us easy information to help write the essays. Websites like google and bing are easy websites to help us get good and accurate information about whatever the topic is that we are doing. The computer is very useful when it comes to school. As you can see, the computer is very important in our lives and makes life alot easy and it's your choice how much you want to spend on it. But no matter what, the computer definatly benefits us.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10548,4,"The concluding paragraph to the story “Winter Hibiscus” gives a sense of hope for the future. The girl, Saeng, has just failed her test and is feeling depressed. Through a series of event’s, her depression leaves her and she feels hope.“Then I will take that test again.” This final sentence shows Saeng’s determination. She was upset about leaving her home and she was upset about failing her test, but thanks to a flower, she got her confidence back. Whenever someone is upset it is easy to give up. Until the final paragraph, the tone in the story is depressing. When the author put in the conclusion, it was like a light at the end of a dark tunnel. The author is saying that even when things are hard and seem impossible, something will be the to lift your spirits. There is always a posative in negatave situation, you just have to look for it. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13214,5,"The mood that was created by the author in the memoir is that. It means that she is a citizen in the united States of @LOCATION1 and she is a good kid in school. She is kind to others. She respect the reigion she is, she haves lots of hope for the furtiure. She has lots of family members in the story, that wha I think of the memoir. that what I think it means.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18077,7,"Time my friend was patient! one day it was @DATE1@NUM1.and that day was when report cards came out. My grades were good I had @NUM2. But my friend @PERSON1, was failing. maths, she had an @CAPS1, and she knew if her mom see,s it she would get in trouble. @PERSON1 tryed to cross it out and put an good grade but she knew her mom will find out. so she told her mom “report cards didn’t come out yet”. And her mom believed her. So then she tried re printing it. She called me and tried to get my opinion and “I told her my honest thought and I said @CAPS2”. but “if you dant wanna get in trouble then yeah” And she said. When her mom asked her “did the report cards come out”. She said “yeah” then her mom found out its not a real report card. So her mom called the teachers and  it was a fake grade. Then she got introuble and she was patient about it and she said the truth. Her mom went to the  office and got the real grades and my friend @PERSON1 was patient while she said the truth. That’s a time were my friend @PERSON1 was patient about her grades. Even though she lied and tried to change her grade.She still was honest, and patient about it. I know that it was wrong for me two tell her yeah, but she begged me so she wont get in trouble.",10,8,,18,,,,1.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15795,6,"The @CAPS1 of the @ORGANIZATION1 many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was the law. There was a law in place preventing airships flying too low over urban cities. This made it illegal for airships to tie up to the building or even come close to the area. Another isue they had was that dirigibles were filled with hydrogen, not helium Hydrogen is extremely flammable and it would be catastrophic if a dirigible blew up over New York City. The last problem they @ORGANIZATION1 was the wind. At the top of the building the winds shifted due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigibles were tied up the back end would move around. They got the idea to use lead weights on the back but it would not be safe over all those people.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9184,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the hibiscus makes her comfort, she says “when they come back in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again”. Since the author failed the test as it is told in the story, she will feel comfort taking the test again when the hibiscus come again after the snow season.   ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1118,1,"@CAPS1, @CAPS1 boom, bom! Those are the noises of pinball on my computer. @CAPS2! Yea we won"". Those are noises you don't want to be hearing all day. Always being on your computer is bad for your health. @CAPS5 you are a computer freak you will become overweight, it's bad for your eyes, and you can't enjoy beautiful nature. ""@CAPS3 you want to be so heavy that you can't even lift yourself out of bed? I don't think so. @CAPS5 you are always sitting at the computer desk then you might be like that. @PERCENT1 of doctors say that @CAPS5 you don't get up from the computer desk you will become obese! Being obese is terrible for your health. It can take years off your life. @CAPS5 you want to live a long healthy life you need to get up from the computer and exercise. ""@CAPS4 I think I need a stronger, my eye are getting worse! @CAPS5 something like this has ever happened tp you it's because your your eyes to at the computers screen all day. @PERSON1 says, ""@CAPS5 you are at the computer all the time you will need glasses or a stronger."" @CAPS6 and children need to get away from their computers. studies show that more adults are on computers, playing games than children. Have fresh, healthy eyes and get away the computer. The acroos your chill. in your right ear. The sun giving you the most beatiful tan. @CAPS3 you like the sound of this? Take away from your computer and go outside. This is the amazing experience you can get from going outside. @CAPS5 you sit at the computer screen maybe you can watch someone else enjoying the great, relaxing experience you shoud have. Get up, get active and go outside. Now is the time to get up from your computer. @CAPS5 you haven't learned, the computer is an unhealthy thing for humans to use. Be like me and get rid of your computer. You need to be healthy and most of all active. Have good eyes and enjoy nature. Don't use the computer.""",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1405,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I have herd that some people do not agree that computer benefit our society. Well in this letter I am going to give you three reasons how computers do benefit our society. Those reasons are @NUM1) People have friends and family in other states @NUM2) some people use them to stay organized And @NUM3) Computers help you learn more. I hope that by the end of this letter you will see that computers do benefit our society. First of all, I think that computers benefit our society because @CAPS7 lets people @CAPS3 in contract with family and friends in other states. This is true that you could use the phone and call them out you have to pay for long distance. You don't have to pay anything to email somebody. I know from experience because, I have friends and family in a lot of states in the @LOCATION1 ""@CAPS1 computers help me stay in contact with my family all over"" @PERSON3 ( @ORGANIZATION1 ) @CAPS2 many people use the computer the contact with loved ones everyday. Some people even on them to stay in touch with family or at war. Next I believe that computers benefit society because @CAPS7 keeps people organized. I know this many not seem like a big deal but a lot of people or computers to @CAPS3 things organized @CAPS2 they know how everything is would happen if didn't have computers to @CAPS3 all of the appointment in? Well I will tell you what would happen to @CAPS3 all would end appointment would @CAPS3 giving you things you already got. ""I @CAPS3 @CAPS4 on my computers - @PERSON1 And @CAPS5, I strongly belive that computers benefit our society because they help people learn more. Yes @CAPS7 is right that not everybody goes on the computers to learn but that doesn't mean they don't learn. Here's a cuple examples is @NUM1) @CAPS6 - @CAPS7 lets you learn song lyrics, dance moves and more (@NUM2) @CAPS8 - @CAPS7 lets you learn what other people like, don't like and @CAPS2 on. Then there is face book, @CAPS7 lets you see what people are doing that day. ""People learn everything to the computer"" @CAPS9 @PERSON2. Now I hope you see that computers don't benefit our society than that is your opinion. I hope you see what I see now.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
873,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think that having a computer is a very positive. I know that teenagers are on the computer a lot, but if it really bother the parents, why do they have computers in their houses? @CAPS3, I can tell you @NUM1 reason why. They are good sources of information, its a good way to talk with your friends and it gives you information about places that you might not know about. Primarily, I would like to say that computer are a fantastic source of information. They can tell you anything! This is also helpful because if you are working on a project, and your mom cant you to get books at library, then there you go! A computer is just a simpler way to look up information. Did you know, that @PERCENT1 of parents who got their family a computer do not regret their desicion? Thats almost all the parents in @LOCATION2! @CAPS6 as you can see, it would help kids with whatever they are studying. Secondly, we teenagers today use computers to talk with our friends @ORGANIZATION1 email @CAPS3, I think this is alot better than sending @CAPS4! Why would you wait letter from your cousin @LOCATION1. When you can talk to them in seconds! And it do paper if you just @CAPS5 to buy I would like to say that having like this one time, I was work my we were looking for a hotel to stay in when we went to we ended up finding a great hotel, for a cheap You can also go on map guest if you @CAPS5 to someone. @CAPS6 for all the people out there who dont computers are important have would you to In conclusion, I think that having a computeer is a very important thing for @NUM1 reson they are very good book source they help us communicate with friends and for every information on for @CAPS6 imleaving the opinion with you hopefully you will learn something than better and pick the right ",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9157,4, I think the author concludes the story the way hedid is becuse it will make people wownt to read the next story to see if the test is past it add suspenes to the story,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
999,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 your life without computers. Writing articles on a typewriter or by hand would surely be a hassle. The question of whether or not computers are beneficial to society has risen in the media, where they argue that people spend less time exercising interacting with nature, and less time with their family. However, computers are a great step forward in modern science and are beneficial to communities. Computers have drastically helped out educationally at school, not to mention the easier way of connecting with friends and family. Also computers have so many different forms of entertainment. Computers are great step forward and are completely beneficial to our society. Firstly, computers have helped academically in our schools and at home. I can't even @CAPS1 the hassle of coming home with thee assignment or writing two essays, only to have to write it by hand! Wanting to get it over with would only cause me to rush, resulting in a bad grade. Also, think of the handwriting factor. Most kids in my school don't have good handwriting, and I am assuming that teachers have a hard time grading something they can't read. With programs such as @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2, you are given the option of different fonts, colors, bolding, pictures, symbols, and so on. Another way computers have helped academically is in schools. More and more teachers are using computers to help us learn. Tests are taken on computers, websites to help us research are visited, and other @ORGANIZATION1 program such as powerpoint can be used for a project. Computers help a lot in school, while helping us learn so much more. Computers also help with keeping in touch with friends and family. The days of short letters are replaced with long emails with pictures attached, sent in a matter of seconds whizzing through the internet only to arrive on your friend's screen. People can save money by not having pictures developed but instead having them stored on their computer, ready to print onto boand paper. There adveances in communication through computers that have been made. Things such as cideo chat (vchat) where you can literally see and talk to the other person, or just audio chat where you can talk to the person, have been made. Such easy ways of communication motivate people to speak to family and friends and stay in touch. Computers have made a positive impact on community by havinf simple ways to talk to your loved ones. Computers can alos provide a fun source of entertainment on the web. Websites have been created where you can play games, find people from your past, or maybe just look out funny videos. Anything you type into your toolbar instantly transforms into a page of links websites where you con find details on your topic, or relative things one fun website is that of 'youtube'. This website lets people upload videos. The possibility are endless on the web. Another fun website is '@CAPS3'. This website is where you can 'friend' people you know from the past and interact with them. You can post viedos, write messages and such. As you can see, entertainment is everywhere on the web. The time is now to understand the full benefits of computers. Computers are a benefit to modern day society because they help academically, encourage you to stay in touch with family and friend, and provide entertainment. We should all understand that computers are a huge advance in science, and they are a great help, and also fun! ",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14929,6,"Most of the obsticles the builders of the Empire State Building had were due to weather. If New York ever had a windy day the dirigible would pull at the mast. The mast is attached to the ""@CAPS1"" of the building, and it might affect the frames or ""@CAPS1"" of the building. Another reason is the danger it would bring to all of New York. If a dirigible ever hit something or something went wrong the dirigible would @CAPS3 on top of New York. With all the trafic of New York you would most likly not want a burning dirigible falling overhead.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
899,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1't you love to go in your computer? @CAPS1't you get a lot done on them? Well I think they have a positive effect on people. I strongly agree that computers have a positive effect on our society. These are my three reasons; you can chat online with friends and family, help people do research on projects, and help people get there jobs done in everyday life. So please, local newspaper keep reading and I will change your mind about computers effects on people. Do you have family or friends who @CAPS1't live around here that you want to keep in touch with? Using the computer for email or a chat site like facebook will do that. I have cousins who live in @LOCATION2. The only way my family can keep in touch with them not spending money is email. My mom and her sister are sending emails to each other all the time. If you ask me I think that is a positive effect computers have. Have you ever researched anything using a computer? I knew I have! For a school project in @CAPS2 I had to research about @LOCATION1. I did all my research on the computer. I got an A+! I would not have gotten that grade if I did not use the computer to do research. Do you use a computer in your job? Well even if you @CAPS1't I know a lot of people who do. For example, my dad uses a computer for almost the whole day he is at work. He is a @CAPS3 @CAPS4 which means he managed portfolios. He has to use @ORGANIZATION1 to check on the stock chart. Another example is my mom, teacher, she has using the computer to email parents if the student need help or up. So as you can see computers have good effect on our society. These are my reasons : you can chat online with friends and family, helps people do research on projects, and helps people do research on projects, and helps people get there jobs done in everyday life. I hope you agree that computers have a positive effect on our society. Say yes to computers good effect!",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13208,5,"The moods created by the author in the memoir are loving, care, family, sacrafice, and warmth. All of these moods are demonstrated when the author describes all of what her interpretation of family is, and when she described everything her parents have done for her. The passage that states: ""they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."", @CAPS1 that the parents sacrificed so much, and cared and loved their children so much that they were willing to give up their lives in their country and leave behind everything in order to make Narciso's life better. Their family provided warmth and care for everyone who needed it. They truly learned the real meaning of family. The author created a very loving mood in this memoir.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6595,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist because. It was a lack of the water and he was in the high deserts or California .For example in the text stated “when I tried a drop or two, it  had the flovor of battery acid. That showed clearly when he tried to get water from a pump what it clearly came out as the settling was extremely hot and made the cyclist misreable in such ways.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15235,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The Empire State Building is located in the densely populated New York City. Therefore, if the dirigible dangled high in the air above those people, it would surely be unsafe In addition to the safety aspect, one of the greatest obstacles was nature. The violent winds on top of the building are always shifting due to the air currents, therefore, it would cause the dirigibles to swivel around the mast. Lastly, there was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas, thus making it illegal for dirigibles to ever fly up to the building.",3,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13076,5,"I think the mood that is created by the author in this memoir is cheerful and welcoming. In paragraph @NUM1 he says, ""My parents always kept their arms and the door opened to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" The author is explaining how their house was always open to anyone that ever needed, all wanted to come, which is a very welcoming feeling. In paragraph @NUM2 he says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The movie is creating when he is saying this is very cheerful because he is very happy and grateful for what his parents did for him, and by him showing that it makes the mood cheerful. In paragraph @NUM3 he says, ""they came selflessly, as any immigrants do, to give their children a better life even though it meant leaving behind the families, friends, and careers in the country they love."" When he says this, you just get this nice, warm feeling because they gave up everything they loved just so that their kids could have a better life. This gives off a very happy and cheerful mood. In conclusion when the author talks about his family, and his life he gives off a very cheerful, and welcoming mood.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12824,5,"The mood created by the author is very greatfull and thankful. The author shows how greatful and thankful they are in this memoir When they said, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them what they did was a much more courageous thing that I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their Strength and perseverance and I've thanked them repeatedly. But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are. These are two lessons that my parents did not just tell me. They showed me With their lives, and those teachings have been the base of my life.""- In my conclusion this is why I think the authors mood in the story is very thankful and greatful.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15672,6,The buiders faced many obstacles. They could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building's flat surface it took alot of stress and hard work. The dirigible was held by a single cable tether and the dirigible was about a thousand feet. That made the builders very stressed and made them think clearly and carefully about the wind pressure and also the dirigibles load.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12008,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was very thankful. The author proved that it doesn't take the amount of money, or how big your house is to be happy. Sometimes its just the simple things. In paragraph @NUM1 it states, ""my parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" The author is showing the reader that even though they might not be family by blood, they still treat each other as if they were. In the last sentence of the memoir it reads, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This shows the reader that no house is a home without happy memories and great lessons learned.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15575,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with a multitude of problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First, the building frame had to be strengthened. The weight of ""the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" This meant that the building's frame had to be modified, which costed @NUM1 dollars. Next, it proved to dangerous to dock dirigibles to the sumputous sky-scraper. After the Hindenburg caught fire, ""the owners of the @ORGANIZATION2 realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area."" In accordance with this danger, there was a lot existing at the time which prohibited dirigibles from flying low over urban areas. Lastly, the largest obstacle engineers try to overcome was simply nature itself. Winds at the top of the building made dirigibles almost impossible to land. Both the Columbia and the Los Angeles tried to dock to the mast but could not battle the wind. In conclusion, the builders of the Empire State Building could not get a dirigible to dock at their tower.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13495,5,"The mood in this memoir is caring, happy, and loving. First, it is caring. For example @PERSON1 would do anything for his family. If @PERSON1 did not do anything for his loved ones he would not care for them. Second, it is happy. For example @PERSON1 has a baby sitter and his first friend. Lastly, it is loveing. An example is when he talks about his parents. He is very greatful when he talks about his parents and the mood describes that by makeing the home feel loved.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6071,3,"In 'Rough @CAPS1 Ahead' the features of the setting and the cyclist’s surroundings greatly influence him. Because he is in “the high deserts of California in June,” the climate is hot, dry, and miserable. Another feature of the setting that affects the cyclist, is that he is out in the middle of nowhere. There are no other human beings, cars or buildings for miles. Also, the terrain affects the biker. When the road starts to get bumpy and uneven, it causes him to exhaust his water supply even faster. Overall, the cyclist in this story is greatly affected by his surroundings.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9520,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons. The first reason is to show that Saeng is determined young girl. By vowing to take the “test” again, she shows she is determined and not giving up. Another reason is because the author wanted to ampasize the importance of the idea of Saeng personality.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16381,6,"When faced with the prospect of building the tallest building in the world, Al Smith refused to give up. In order to achieve his goal, he decided to build a Dirigible docking mast atop his new creation. But with this genius idea came obstacle after obstacle, preventing the idea from ever taking flight. One obstacle faced by Al Smith, and by far the greatest, was safety. Most non-American Dirigibles used hydrogen within their Dirigibles, which is highly flammable. The owners of the empire state building realized how bad it would have been if a fiery explosion happened ""above a densely populated area such as downtown New York"". Another great obstacle was nature itself. ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". This made it impossible for the Dirigible to be tethered without the back of ship swireling around the mooring mast.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8934,4,The author is saying that she’s not doing nothing intell it is a nice day outside. Also she want it to be not that cold but not that not for she can come out and play with her children. Then she said she will take her test again for a nice day outside for her.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18136,7,"Anna sat there waiting patiently, come on come on come on! She thought to herself, meets, and was very excited to perform her now improved beam routine. Anna was one of the last gymnasts to go,only making her situation more difficult she took a deep breathe,and sat down patiently, waiting for her chance to shine to the judges",7,7,,14,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3982,2,"Should materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., be removed from shelves if found offensive? Censorship can be a huge deal depending on who you ask or where you go some find it necessary so kids do not get into these things found in librarys or some @MONTH1 not think it's so important.      Books are important parts of peoples lives, learning, etc, they are also read for many different reasons but some of the topics books are written about @MONTH1 not be right or could be innapropriate or possibly against all of someones beliefs or religion. I personally do not think that censorship is necessary to keep some things out of librarys just some thngs shouldnt be available for anyone to just walk in and pick up off of a shelf in a library maybe materials that are innapropriate for children or people @MONTH1 find offensive should be kept away in a different secluded section of a library and be clearly labeled of what the purpose of this room is so people will clearly know and won't really risk the chance of just stumbling upon those materials.     Another reason why censorship @MONTH1 not be necessary is that things that anyone could find in the library that @MONTH1 be offensive or innapropriate can be found just as easy if not easier on @CAPS1 or on the internet by anyone anytime of the day. @CAPS1 has some censorship but not enough to remove the effect that @CAPS1 show or movie or internet site could have on the minds of todays young people and children such as violence, drugs, language, and racism that is found in almost everything today. Todays children and young people should be taught of whats wrong even if they do think it's dumb or unecassary at the time when they mature they hopefuloly will see whay they were taught those things and why they should always try to stay away from things that are seen in movies, magazines, books, and mostly on @CAPS1 and not get involved with these activities.      Censorship I still believe is not necessary even though I know of all the innapropriate and harmful things in todays culture. Even though I know how harmful it can be if they see the effect it could have on their future and what it has done to other people that saw things in movies, books or even heard it in music if they could see and hear from people who have been affected by these things they would know to stay away from bad things and go along with whats right.     In conclusion censorship is not necessary, it could be in the future but if everyone is lead to what is right they will hopefully make the right decision and stay away from harmful books, movies, music, magazines, and other things alike.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16365,6,"The builders, faced",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15726,6,"Upon taking up the task of building a mast for dirigibles to dock at, the architects encountered many obstacles which made the idea of a mooring mast unplausable. One obstacle they ran into was the violent nature of the wind currents above the city. If the dirigibles were to dock at the building with a tether, then the back would be free to swing and sway. Another factor they had to consider is that dirigibles are full of the flamable gas hydrogen which imposed the risk of a serious fire hazzard about New York City. Even if the engineers and architects managed to work out all of the kinks of building the mast, they still would face another obstacle. It was illegal to fly dirigibles to low over urban areas. These are the reasons why the idea of a dock for dirigibles could never work out.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21202,8,"Warm @CAPS1 Laughter @MONTH1 be the best medicine, but it @MONTH1 also be the best glue. When one laughs, especially with another, it brings a sense of relaxation and happiness. Laughter is a release of amusement, and that literally means ""not thinking"". In this moment, people open themselves up and it brings a warm feeling of the heart that is shared between each other. Without this connection or ability to jest, people begin to think too much and become overly critical about relationships. To flirt is to make fun or light of a situation, the point of this is to put people at ease so they @MONTH1 open up. Flirting can consist of many things, such as joking, impressing, or complementing; usually this leads to laughing or excessive giggling. When this warming connection begins, so does the bond between the people, such as it was with my own girlfriend. I just came off the back end of a hurtful experience with another girl, so I had become tough at heart. I was a bit of a nervous kid, so when she started to be pleasant and kind to me, I started to grow out of my shell and laugh with her. Our first date was to see some silly yo-yo man who had come to their church. It was a great way to start off what we have been building now for two years, as well as comfortable setting to meet the parents.   Sometimes the key to opening up, or bonding, is to make a fool of oneself. It's hard to laugh with someone who is being prideful or too analytical; laughter is a crucial mental break from routine thinking. Being a dork @MONTH1 just be the best way to be in a healthy relationship. My relationship is very well balanced between supporting each other, being critical, and being idiots. I take sacrifices to make her laugh, and she does the same for me, but mostly this results in both of us being profusely happy and laughing together. Being a man is not the same as being stubborn or powerful, I feel it's more about being open and compassionate. To be open enough to have someone to laugh with, one has to be able to laugh at themselves. Laughter is an @CAPS2, a socially transforming device, and it spreads rapidly.  The same goes for a simple social gathering. Does anyone become the ""life of the party"" without laughing at themselves? They are typically the ones going out of their way to be ridiculous for everyone else to see, because once it starts, it spreads exponentially. Being comfortable is the foundation of having a good time, otherwise people are acting paranoid, refuse to participate, and downright seem cold. Laughter's bright tone is a good way to get people comfortable and relaxed. Think of people as @CAPS1. @CAPS1 is difficult to pour and spread around when it's cold, it's thick and condensed. You can't do much with cold @CAPS1, so you have to warm it up. One can't heat @CAPS1 up in a flash or else it could become tasteless, but once it is gradually heated it becomes easy to spread and very useful. This warm @CAPS1 is quick to mix with about anything and sticks to things all the same. My relationship has been sticky, sweet, and warming beyond compare, but nothing without a little work, or a little laughter.  ",25,20,,45,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18565,7,"What is patience? Patience means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experiences difficulties without complaining most people are impatient these days. Patience is like waiting. For example, if you are in a traffic jam in a long line, or maybe you have to wait your turn for something. Patience is one of the best qualities someone could have. Every year more people become impatient. @CAPS1 want people to “hurry” or “move faster.” @CAPS1 need to gain patience by taking deep breaths or calming down. I think the world would be more peaceful if everybody had patience there would be no more conflict and if that happened some day, everybodies lives would be perfect.",7,6,,13,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13171,5,"The author creates an optimistic, caring mood in his memoir. He described the strong sence of love and kenship in hs home. These emotions came out in the writing. The passage-being about his home-sent out a very homey vibe. One can feel the warmth, love, and roots in this memoir. The loving mood of this excerpt has many subdivisions of emotions.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6733,3,"As the cyclist makes his journey towards Yosemite, the setting causes him much worry and concern. In the beginning, the narrator is content and excited. He is doing something that be lovers, is heading for a beautiful destination, and has found a short cut to save him hours of time. He is confidentin the directions given to him by the old men. However, as he continues down the winding road, his environment makes him doubt theirjudgement. The first town he comes to is entirely deserted.Though at first he laughs it off, he laster realizes just how much trouble he in if he didn't come to a civilization soon. The cyclist runs across ""ramshackle shed[s]"" and shut down factories, and as his water supply sinks lower, the road seems to tantalize him. He passes a water pump (just what he needs), yet the water is something close to toxic. A road sign reminds him not go too fast, though he @MONTH1 die if he doesn't pick up the pace. He is forced to look at a picture ofa happy boy guzzling grape juice as he dehydrates. All there features of the setting, in addition to the overpowering heat and sun, drive the narrator to the breaking point.      ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18175,7,"I was on my way to tennisee with my @CAPS1, @CAPS2, my younger brother, @PERSON1 and my granpa, and granma, who I call @LOCATION1 and @ORGANIZATION1. @CAPS6 where driving in to different cars I was with @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 in @CAPS1 white mersadies. @PERSON1 was with @ORGANIZATION1 and @LOCATION1 in @LOCATION1’s gold minny van. The windows were down in our car, and @CAPS1 and I were smelling burning rubber. @CAPS6 were in front of @LOCATION1, as @CAPS6 slowed down @LOCATION1 pulled to the side of us and told us to pull over. @CAPS6 pulled over @CAPS2 got out took one bok, and said “@CAPS6’re leaking trannie fluid.” @CAPS6 drove into town with @LOCATION1 following us. @CAPS6 stopped at an autin shop @CAPS6 were the only people there, the mucanic told us to get everything @CAPS6 needed out of the car. After @CAPS6 cleaned the car out, he pulled the car up onto thue lift and that when I saw the gradge for the first time. It smelled like gas everything was greasy and dirty (including the mucanics). “@CAPS7 is going to ruein our trip” I said to @CAPS2, “@CAPS6 don’t know that for sure” he replied. It was so hard to sit and be patient. I walked back and forth between the minny van and the gradge for about two hours. Some of the other mocanics came, too, but no one could find out what was wronge with our car. @CAPS2 got on the computer they had there and looked up car parts, it didn’t help. The day before @CAPS6 left @CAPS1 had taken her car to @CAPS10 gardge for a tune up. @CAPS6 weren’t sure. After sitting at the shop for about three hours I got hungry, so did every one else so @CAPS6 went to a restorunt across the street for loneh. @CAPS2 stay at the shop for a little while longer than the rest of us. At lunch @CAPS2 said “were going to have to call triple A to come pick up our car. @CAPS6 are going to have to go back home!! I was so upset, after all @CAPS7 waiting @CAPS6 have to go back home. On the way out of the restorant tripped and landed on my rist. I sprained my rist, so @CAPS6 went back across the street and behind the audio shop was a wallmart so @CAPS6 stopped there got a bandage for my wrist, and pick out a book to buy. I got the vampire diaries, @PERSON1 got a starwars book. @CAPS6 read them on the wag home in @CAPS12 car.",10,12,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6963,3,"Heat, abandoned roads, snakes all are reasons that affected the cyclist. The heat made him get dehydrated faster while he was using energy. The long abandoned roads further increased his doubt of living the whole bike ride. He used up allof his water. So when he got to the old pump hot dirty water came out. The snake in the story made the journey for this guy perilous and deadly. This all happened because he listened to the old guys. When the other old guy was about to tell him whereto go he said no.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4624,2,"Censorship in libraries is a very controversial topic that has conflicting views. One side, in favor of censorship, believes that some literary material contained within a library could be offensive to some, and that it should be removed or censored. The other side, in favor of free speech, believes that all literary material in a library should be kept, whether it is seen as offensive or not. Of these two sides of such a controversial issue, it is evident that censorship should not be instilled within libraries, because of the right to free speech, the true meanings and expressions must be upheld, and it would take the oppurtunity to read such a work truly from an interested reader.     The first reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor is because of the right to free speech. This right belongs to all citizens of @LOCATION1, and shouldn't be taken away because one person @MONTH1 think something is offensive. I have observed that many people will often attempt to steal this right from people, and this instillation of censorship will do just that to the authors. This is the first reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor.     The next reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor is because this censorship @MONTH1 dull down the true meanings and expressive themes that literary works are meant to express. An example of a story that would suffer from censorship is the famous 'The @CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION1.' Such a novel, though containing offensive language at times, would not read the same if such language was omitted and removed. Instead, @PERSON1's expressions within the story would be dulled down immensely and be nearly silenced. This is the next reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor.     The last reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor is because it removes the availability of the book from an interested reader. Many times I have seen people blatantly have a tantrum over an offensive literary work. I have been offended by things that I have read before, and instead of demanding its removal and crying for a less offensive substitute, I simply either stopped reading the work or read through it anyways. A person must know that the use of offensive language within literary works rarely is intended to attack the reader, but rather to strongly get a point across.  If a person finds the material too offensive to read, then they should simply stop and find a more suitable work. By remaining calm and passive about these things, it keeps the literary work on the shelves in its true form for other people who wish to read it.This is the last reason why the censorship of literary materials within a library is an unjust endeavor.     It is clearly evident that the removal or censorship of literary works in a library is a bad idea as a whole. The decision to censor literary works would be bad because it would strip the author's right to free speech, it would dull down the author's true meanings and expressions, and it would remove the oppurtunity to read such a work from an interested person. The removal or censorship of literary works would be a terrible decision that all would regret in the years to come. This is why the removal or censorship of literary works in a library is an unjust endeavor.",4,5,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16589,6,Builders of the empire state building faced many different things while trying to build a dock for the dirigibles. The builders had to make sure it was safe to walk on the platform to get off the blimps. Also the dock had to be high so the owner could still keep the world's highest building record. But with a little hat added wasn't going to do much so building a dock was a better idea.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15623,6,"In the construction of the Empire State Building, the builders faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles they faced was having to make changes to the steel frame of the building in order to have the strength to ""accommodate the new situation. In paragraph @NUM1 it @CAPS2 that ""Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework"", @CAPS1 this was a costly project as well. The excerpt also @CAPS2 that there were problems with getting the dirigible to stay in place without moving. The dirigible would be in a very windy area, and there was only one chord attached to the building which would leave the back moving around all over the place.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6031,3,"The narration of “Rough Road ahead” a solo cyclist encounters several challenges throughout the story. The changes in his environment directly affect the completion of his journey and his health. As the narrator makes his way to Yosemite national park from the none of the old men his first encounter with his environment acknowledges his deserve and need for water. The text states “I had been huting my water pretty regularly... the high deserts of California in June”. To disappointed the truck stop’s water supply from the pumps was not adequate for his concumption, only forcing him to link elsewhere to quench his thirst next, he explenced rolling hills by exsercising more energy he made his way now everyone still in need of water. His spend lost his quickness as thoughts of his crippling dyhydration distracted him. He wer came his challenges making his was to a bate shop as the heat beat him unmercifully. The change in his environment challenged his heath and created a obstraction that nearly deterred him from his goal.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9672,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she means she will go back after winter to take care of it. The author puts this at the ending paragraph because he is telling how much she cares about this plant cause she takes care of it because it reminds her of her hometown. So that is the reason she takes such good care of it so she will have something with her to remind her of her home.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4061,2,"What if someone told you that you couldn't wear a yellow shirt because it was offensive? What if they said you couldn't look a certain way because you might offend somebody? Not just one person or group of people have the right to decide what is suitable and what is not. There are so many different religions and traditions throughout the @LOCATION2 it would be completely rediculous to set one standard for all people. If @CAPS1 aren't restricted when it comes to apperal, groceries, or automobiles, why should there be limits in the libraries? Libraries should not be censored because not only would censorship limit the resoursfulness of the libraries and smother the knowledge intake across the @LOCATION2, but it would also pose a threat to our future.      When one takes a trip to the library, one would expect to find a book, magazine, and/or movie on just about anything. It would be extremely frustrating to find that a library, which is supposed to contain content on nearly every subject, does not have what your looking for. Say a book on the asassination of @PERSON1 is what you fancy, so you ask the librarian where you could find it. You would be dissapointed if she says they don't carry assassination books because they are too vulgar for young children. This could become very troubling and would limit the library's resources.           Not only would censorship in libraries limit the content but it would also limit learning in the @LOCATION2 @CAPS2 are people supposed to stay informed if they are being sheilded from knowledge? Many people that do not have computers depend on the library. If they cannot get what they need at the library where would they go? The libraries would lose business and funding if they did not supply library-goers with the content which they desire. People would take their business elsewhere. Protests @MONTH1 break out and rebelious citizens @MONTH1 protest the censorship, causing an uproar in society.           The people would not be the only thing out of hand. The censorship would surely get out of hand, aswell. @CAPS1 are already being censored through news stations, radio, and tv shows. Libraries are a place where infinant knowledge is realistic and that is comforting for many @CAPS1. In libraries people choose what they learn: they aren't forced teachers or parents. The censorship @MONTH1 start out as a small intervention, but it could turn our nation upside down. Next thing we know, our desisions could be influenced by the books that only 'they' decide are suitable. What kind of society would we have then? Individuality would be lost and opinions would be forgotten.      Clearly, censorship in libraries is dangerous and unpredictable. If libraries were cencored, not only would  knowledge in the @LOCATION2 desinegrate, but libraries would lose their respect and threaten the future of @LOCATION1. No one tells me what to wear or say, so why should anyone tell me what to read? We are all entitled to our own opinions and beliefs. Our @CAPS4 @CAPS5 earned us our freedoms, we can not let censorship take them away",6,5,,6,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4738,2,"Dear reader,     Do you believe that certain book, magazines, movie, and music should be removed from the shelves of libaries if they are found offensive?  A lot of people in the world today are having this same question.  Some parents think they should be removed, but others argue they should stay.  I'm going to tell you what i think.      As a citzen,  I know some parents are arguing that certain magazines and books should be removed from the libary if they are found offensive.  Well if they do that then there wouldn't be anything on the shelves in the libary would be shut down.  I mean i see where some of the parents are coming from some of these things are offensive and not apporaite for children, but if you dont want your children to see it them keep them away from that section of the libary or don't bring them, you go get the book or magazine they want and then bring it back home for them.       In the world today everything is offensive to someone in the world i mean everyone has there own thoughts on what they think is offensive and what they don't think is offensive. So eventually if you were to take everything offensive out of the libary it would be emptied out.  I want you all to read this quote and really think about what the author is saying ' All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children have taken off the shelf.  But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf -that work i abhor- then you have the exact same right and so does everyone else.  And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' (@PERSON1).  I don't know about you, but this really sums it all up for me.     The truth is you cant always do what you want, you just have to live with the way it is and try to make it better for yourself and your family.  If you read this article and really listen and take into considertion what im saying i think you 'll find that it would be a lot easier for you to just act like the offensive books and magzines aren't there because if you try to get them taken out you wont even be able to go to the libary anymore.                                             sincerly the one and only,                                                                     @PERSON2",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18200,7,"Last year I went to the doctors to get a normal check up wen she tested my vision and hearing and felt the cold too. She put on my chest to see if my heart was @CAPS1.K. After that she checked my neck. I could feel her icy cold fingers on my neck about a minute had passed and she says she will be right back. Another doctor came in and felt it until finally my mom asks ""what's going on here"". They said the glands in my neck were full and they said I needed to have my blood checked to see if I had a theiroid which is glands in your neck that are full which leads to having to take pills for the rest of your life. So a few days later we went to get my blood checked. As we waited I started to get really nervous I had butterflys  really bad and then @NUM1 minutes passed which seemed like an hour they called me in and I sat down the nurse said everything will be fine. So i trusted her she took a rubber tube and tied it around my arm it sorta hurt like a pinch then @NUM2… @NUM3… @NUM4… and the needle went in and I seen the blood going into the tube really cool then we went home. It took a week with sleepless nights because I was so anxious and they called my mom which  took about a year not really could not tell by her expression then she said no and that was so happy and I was being patient which was what kept me from not wanting to run down there and seeing myself!",11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21213,8," Its my sophomore year and some of my friends were going to try out softball. After thinking about it I joined and I fell in love with this sport. I am not that good but like they say practice makes perfect. We all laugh and have a good time and everyone likes everyone and its fun to be apart of a team that is always laughing and having a great time together. This is about a time when my friends and I started laughing so hard we almost started cried and now its one of our little joke between all of us girls. Once my friends and I were out catching pop fly's and it was my turn to go catch the ball. I went out there skipping and just being my normal weird self. They hit the ball and it started to come toward me and I went running for it and slipped and fell right on my butt. Everyone including me started laugh because I fell in the mud and got all dirty. About ten minutes later we all were standing there and talking about how funny it was when I fell and how it made everyone's day. Then I saw some mud on the ground and I wanted to roll in it but didn't want to just lay down and start rolling in mud. So I asked my friend @PERSON1 to push me into the mud so I could fall in and roll in it. After she pushed me into the mud I got up and started laughing my head off. My knees were covered in mud and so was my butt and legs. They all started to say who shied on you because we are not aloud to curse, so we made something else to replace it. Now when I walk in the hall ways and see someone from the softball team we both just start laughing and say who shied on you in the middle of what ever we are doing right then.  This is the first year I have ever played a sport in high school and I am glad I did it because I am having so much fun. When it ends in a few months I am going to be really upset. All these girls and I have became so close in the last @NUM1 weeks that they are like family to me now. Most of us use to just know each other and not really were friends and never talked at all but now we all do. We love to do silly things like sing in the locker room randomly or make the most dumbest jokes ever. But we all have fun and we don't care. We have had lots of laughs and many more to come this season. Like when we have games on the buses or just even at practice. We have an amazing couch that makes us laugh and makes jokes everyday. This season should be interesting with all of us because we all like to laugh and make joke and sing and just have a great time with each other and that's all that matters to make a good softball team and a great season.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18970,7,My mom is very patient. The reason why my mom is patient is because when she goes to the beauty shop she calls @NUM1 hours of waiting not a long time. Another reason she is patient is because if I don't do my chores she dozent get very upset she just ask me to do it again. My mom is also very patient when it comes to work because she does not get frustrated when  she has a lot of work to do like writing  a @NUM2 word paper,5,6,,11,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6677,3,"In the essay, “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the setting had a major impact on the character. The cyclist was trying to get to Yosemite National Park, but on the way, he had some troubles, the fact that there was not much civilization affected the cyclist because he was not able to refill his water bottles, so he grew very thirsty. Also, the many hills and the fact that it is summer impacted him greatly because he became tired out more easily and could not pedal as fast. When it says, “A tar like substance oozed out Wouldn’t cool down,” it showed how he wasn’t able to drink. Also, when he passed the grape juice factory, it must have been torture to him since he was so thirsty. If he hadn’t taken the advice of the men in the first place he would have had a much shorter ride and would not have been so exhausted. The setting affected the cyclist a lot in this essay.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11918,5,"I think that the author created a very warming, and the loving tone. Narciso created this mood by including all of the greatest aspects of his home in @LOCATION1. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 he explains the endless celebrations he had with family and friends that ""... formed the backdrop to life in our warm home.""",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10349,4,"The author  concludes the story with this paragraph because the winter hibiscus gave her some hope. Also , because her mother was understanding  about  her  failing the test. That is why the author concludes the story with the paragraph .",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14890,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced some obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles dock there. Some of these obstacles had easy solutions, but some of them were really hard to solve.One obstacle they had was the dirigible on top of the building being hold by a cable tether only would cause stress to the building's frame. In order to solve this problem they needed to make modifications that would cost around six thousand dollars. This wasn't the only problem, there was a law that prohibited airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal to get close to this area or even try to get tie up to the building. Adding to this, the most difficult obstacle the architects faced was nature, and this problem was hard to solve and also hard to control.All this obstacles they faced lead them to give up for now & wait to see if later with more technology the could finally make this dream come true.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1786,1,"Dear readers, I think that its good and bad to use the computer to much",1,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1067,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people have computers, and @CAPS2 people use them. It's been brought to my attension that the government is worried about people using them to much. Well I think you can't use a computer too much. They offer so @CAPS2 things such as information, communication, and life skills. That doesn't too bad. Informaiton is something we as humans live for. Also in @CAPS2 schools and jobs you need to know a variaty of unusual facts. Where can you learn these? Computers of course! When @PERSON1 (my teacher) gives us a research paper on walt disney, we use computers to find our information. With out the computer, I wouldn't know walt disney died before disney world opened. That clearly shows one of the @CAPS2 things we need computers for. Communication is another aspect of our lives. With a computer you can have @MONEY1 ways to comunicate. Yes some of these way can be dangerous but, @CAPS2 are safe. When I was in @NUM1 grade my teacher ms.casserelle set up a classwide email for us. This allowed us to email another school. This farm of online communication was perfectly safe. As long as the person using these forms of communication is sem-responsible nothing can go wrong. Where can you go wrong with that? Did you know that @PERCENT1 of your life skills can and are learned on computers? As a matter-a-fact your job involves a computer! One life skill you can learn is how to type. As I stated earlier research papers need computers, well it's not just for the information. You have to type them too. Most jobs in our world need the computer for something or other. Can you think of a job that doesn't require one at all? Ididnt think so. Information, communication, and life skills are all important to our human nature. Ithink computers are important to humans. Wether you admit it or not everything we do involves a computer to some degree. Can you spend @CAPS2 countless hours on a computer? Yes, but you need to. you need to.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4210,2,"What I think about that is that you have your own thoughts about a book, just because you don't like it doesn't mean that others won't. There @MONTH1 be something that you like in a book that you don't like in a movie, and there mmay be something that you like in a movie that others @MONTH1 not like in a book that doesn't mean that it should be taken off the shelf.     About magazines if there are things in a magazine that you don't want to look at or have your children look at then yes they should be taken off the shelf I mean come on now it's a libary there should be certain things that are up there that's al I'm saying",2,3,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14857,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced difficult circumstances and many obstacles during the task of designing a brand new Empire State Building to accompany this new means of travel. The builder's mission was to design the top of the Empire State Building to accommodate the mooring of blimps over one thousand feet in the air. The first obstacle was designing a landing area. This was difficult because the architecture needed had never before been created or even attempted in the past. A second obstacle was having to make sure the Empire State Building could withstand the stress created by the blimp. Paragraph @NUM1 says ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation."" The difficulty with this obstacle was having to refurbish the steel frame at the Empire State Building which took lots of time, work, and over sixty thousand dollars. ""The greatest obstacles to successful mooring was nature itself."" There were violent wind currents at the top of the building and the blimps were never very stable. There were many pedestrians under a moored dirigible so this was a very dangerous obstacle. Lastly, the pre existing laws of airships flying the low over urban areas posed a new problem. even with successful architecture, laws disallowed the blimps in the first place! Planes were also becoming more popular.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6008,3,"The features of this setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The setting is a dessert so by common knowledge you know that it is going to be hot and dry. Because it is hot the cyclist needs more water because he is getting dehydrated. And when he is on his low of water because it is dry into mouth gets drys. @CAPS2 because he is in the dessert he sees wild sometime dangerous animals, in the story he sees a ridiculously @CAPS1 diamondbrock snake, which I believe are venomous, @CAPS2 ‘because ‘ of the extreme heat of the dessert he realizes that he had ??? chance of dropping from heatstroke. @CAPS2 the writer said that the dessert had short rolling hills and rough road ahead ??? would leave worn the cyclist out. Because of this terrain the cyclist way affects.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16010,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One clear obstacle was the law that had existed at the time making it against the law for airships to fly too low over urban areas. (paragraph @NUM1). Also, another obstacle in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building was that most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable. For example on May 6, 1937 the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey. The owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been it had taken place in downtown New York. (paragraph @NUM2). The greatest obstacle was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. If the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast (paragraph @NUM3). The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced were too much to allow dirigibles to dock on the mooring mast.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19388,7,"One time when I was patient my friend @PERSON1 went to the mall around @NUM1 am. @CAPS2 were supposed to be shopping for new school clothes. When @CAPS2 got there the sun was really bright up in the sky, the birds were chirpping, and it was as hot as a @DATE1 day. When @CAPS2 both walked hardly anybody was there but @CAPS2 went to a store called???, it was so full of people  I thought I was at a concert. @CAPS2 had to wait in the longest line, it was so long people were almost at the doors. So @CAPS2 both waited and waited.  Finally @CAPS2 were at the front of the line and the casher said “@CAPS1, you have waited in the long line probably for about @NUM2 hour. I will give you guys a @PERCENT1 discount.” @CAPS2 went shopping and @CAPS2 got rewarded for being patient.",10,8,,18,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3778,2,"Dear @CAPS1, The things we learn at such a young age really need to be changed. It would really help soicity.Here are some ways how.      All books are diffrent. Some @MONTH1 have offencive language. If books have offenceive language you dont have to read it outloud. You can always substitute other words in there for those or just skip over them like nothing happened.     Some books say sexual things in them that @MONTH1 offend a race of some type or a gender. If books are sexual for your age group then I would recomend choosing a new book. But no matter how you look at it. It could always be much worse than what it is.     Music music needs to be some cencorship on that. When your listening to the radio or a cd or ipod. You cant always censor that. the radio compianies need to do a better job at censoring them out of songs. Many young teens think its cool to use vulgor language.      Movies have diffrent ratings for diffrent age group. I'm sure no one would let a two year old watch a rated @CAPS2 movie. That kid would have nightmares for a week. so censorship woukd really help the parents out on choosing the right movie for family night instead of picking one that they have no clue about.           Magazines are nothing but gossip. Most magazines do nothing but talk about the bad in people or the good in them.There should be some censorship in there because it is a persons life who there talking garbage.      Some say kids are like sponges. Whatever the kid hears he will repeat. Whatever a kid sees he will try to repeat it. So whatever a kid reads or watches will probably be the same.      Things do need a little censorship. If we didnt have that its hard telling what the world would be like. The world would be full of a lot of people with no motivation what so ever and if we take things away then the world would have nothing to do.I know that when I was a little kid I would hear somthing on the radio and think it was cool to say. My parents would'nt know what to do to me. I kjnow as an adult i would'nt want my kids learning the stuff I did at such a young age.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7645,3,"The location of a cyclist’s ride affects the person’s attitude and strength. If the road is full of hills, it takes a little more strength to maintain speed. When put in this situation, Kurmaskie writes “It was a sad, hopeless laugh, mind you, but at least I still had the energy to feel sorry for myself.” This shows how one gets drained by hills. Also, being in a desert situation can weaken a cyclist due to thirst.The cyclist in the reading was desperate enough to try pump water that looked “brackish.” So, setting can break a cyclist.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6957,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in several ways. The first was the terrain, which started out flat, then turned to hills. The cyclist was growing tired from all the pedaling. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” This tired him out faster, since going uphill is harder than riding flat terrain. The heat definitely affected him, because it made him thirsty. He was “travelling through the high deserts of California in June.” This is a very hot time of year, and when a person get lost without conserving water, which he had not done, a person get extremely thirsty. Not to mention the “sandblasted picture of a young boy pourng a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth,” which would remind the body of its thirst. So the setting most definitely affected the cyclist",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8999,4,The reason why the author concludes the story like that is because he or she wants to show Saeng is determined to not fail that drivers test. The author wants to leave Saeng on a good note so she wont be sad. When she takes the test again shell be better prepared and know what shes expecting. Shell have a better winter.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3634,2,"Yes  I do think that if material in a library is offensive that it should be taken out  the library because the libary is a place where people go and get a better understanding of something they dont know.Here is why I say this.     If you go to a library and you see something that you dont like and you dont think it is apppraite for people to see then it should be taken  off the shelf. I wouldnt want anybody in a libary unsatistfied with the books, movies, music or anything else especially if childern are involed.People should be able to go to a public place where they are satistfied with the way they carry their place, also it should be suitable place for childern to come and learn.The libary is a learning enviorment where education, growth and devolopement should be inspired.     My reason for saying all this is that a library should be a place where learning should be its number one goal and that if things in the libary are offensive to a person that it should be taken off the shelf. I know that childeren should be able to go to a liabrary and be satistfied on the way the libary is.",3,3,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15703,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on top of the Empire State Building, the architects faced many obstacles. Usually, when given an obstacle, you either succeed it or fail it. In this case, these men didn't overcome the obstacle.In the reading, it mentioned that dirigibles from outside the U. S. contained hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable and it could cause a lot of damage. Not only to the building itself, but the area of downtown New York as well. Winds at the top of the building were shifting due to air currents. This could cause the dirigibles to circle the mast when even tied down. The architects also had to think about the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. The builders didn't realize how complicated the process of even tying down a dirigible would be because of the high winds. Even the process of dropping off newspapers was difficult, and took up too much time. Who would want in enormous steel framed balloons dangling over them anyways?",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9429,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she overcame and she wants to re take the quiz for herself and to prove it to herself no one else. she states “when they come back, saeng vowed to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. So she says that she wants to retake the test. So she is not being pressured into taking it. She is taking it to prove to herself no one else.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19071,7,"A time when patient was when I went to the glasses place, And I had to get approved to get glass. So the next day my grandma call and ask did @PERSON1 get approved and they said “@CAPS1”, my grandma asks how long do I have to wait and they said four weeks so a week went by and they called and said my glasses are done. So the next day we went and got them and that was a time I was patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20787,8," I know you guys listen to the same things over and over again, but I also know that alot of people don't really answer the prompt that you give them. Well I'm sorry because I was not able to answer the prompt either. I cannot remember when the last time I had a really good @CAPS3 within a couple of years, so I will tell you why laughter is special to me instead. What's so special about laughter? For me laughter helps us in many ways. I will talk about how laughter is good for my health, how everyone's laughs are different and even make us @CAPS3 at them. Also why laughter is so special to me.  I have always felt this weird feeling in my head after I laughed. I think it's because endorphins are being produced into my brain. If I @CAPS3 too hard my stomach hurts because laughing also burns calories and works out my abs. I also think it helps all three sides of the health triangle. My social life makes me @CAPS3 with people. Emotionally laughing makes me happy. Also physical is always funny when you work out with a friend.  I think that everybody's @CAPS3 is unique in it's own way. I also know that sometimes it's funny to listen to other people chuckle, snort, or sound like a mouse. Our laughs are another thing that just makes us, us!  Laughing to me is special because of all the people who make me @CAPS3. My friends are family I have chosen for myself. My family makes me @CAPS3 and be happy everyday. It's special to me because those people are special to me. Laughing with my father is nothing compared to me laughing with my mother. Laughing with my friends will never compare to me laughing with my significant other.  My life is all about laughter and it's special to me. It's not like chewing a piece of gum. It's a whole other thing. Nothing is more fun then having a girls night and laughing all night, or even going out dancing and having the most romantic night of your life. Laughter is a matter of life.                         So @CAPS1, @CAPS2, @CAPS3.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12040,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 is happy because he talking about starting a new life and how grateful family he has. The way he is also happy is that he has his 'family such as cousin, aunts, uncles, and grandparents by his side. Where he live is also happy he loves it he has his friends and babysitter living above him knowing that they are their for him. That why I think the mood is happy by telling by the story and @CAPS2 words.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4419,2,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern,     Censorship is an issue that has plagued our society for centuries. It is not only unnecessary, but unconstitutional. As @CAPS1, we have certain @ORGANIZATION1 that we are guarenteed by the documents that keep our society out of anarchy. If the right to pick what liturature to read, watch, or listen to is taken away, where will that put our country? Censorship should by no means be allowed in our country today.     In the @CAPS2, the @CAPS3, and the @ORGANIZATION1, we are given certain @ORGANIZATION1. Some of these @ORGANIZATION1, including freedom of speech and freedom of the press, have already been contricted, which is 'wrong' in the eyes of the government, but nevertheless, it is taking place. We @MONTH1 not have 'lost' these @ORGANIZATION1, but they have definitely been constricted. Why should the government be able to tell us what to read? If censorship is allowed, what is to come is frightening. If our government, which is supposed to be 'for the people' tells us what we can read and not read, what is going to stop them from telling us what to wear, drink, or even eat?     Censorship in libraries is one of our biggest issues. There are countless examples on why censorship of written liturature should not be allowed. For instance, if a college student is writting a research paper about the effects of rape on a child, but the government sees rape as 'too graphic', what is this student to do? He or she should be given the right to use what materials are necessary to write a fully-informed paper. But by censoring our libraries, and taking books out, the government is hindering the education of it's countries youth.     Some @CAPS4 classics are also being speculated against. The @CAPS5 of @PERSON2 has been known as a classic since it was written. It is used in classrooms everywhere around the country for education. But recently, the availability of the book has been questioned. Throughout the novel, the 'n-word' is used, but never as an insult. During the time-period of its writing, this word was more common, and had a much less severe meaning than it does in modern day societies. But because time has changed it's meaning, it is being removed from libraries and curriculums across the country. This is unlawful censorship. One of the greatest books of our time, an @CAPS4 classic, is being removed from the lives of our youth because of 'racy language'.     Censorship is not only taking place in written liturature. Movies and music are also under the magnifying glass of censorship. Movies are rated for a reason, to give the viewers an age group for which the movie is appropriate. This is helpful to parents to be able to self-censor their children. But it is not up the the government to be able to choose what a specific child is able to view. It is a parents right to be able to expose or not expose their child to whatever they see fit, not that of our country's lawmakers.     Music is one of the biggest part of our society today. With the invention of iPods and @NUM1 devices, music has become much more common, and portable. Censorship is becoming more severe with the change of music style. The music styles of modern teenagers greatly differs from that of their grandparents. Almost nothing is seen as unacceptable by many of today's rappers, as displayed in their choice of lyrics. The music business is taking quite a beating for what has become the most popular. With the most common themes of sex, drugs, and money, it @MONTH1 seem offensive to some citizens, but others @MONTH1 just shrug it off as a normalcy. So how can someone say 'No, you @MONTH1 not listen to that,'? This should not be allowed, yet it is.     How can one person, or a group of people decide what is acceptable and what is not? They cannot. Censorship is morally wrong, as well as lawfully wrong. Taking the media from its citizens, such as books, movies, and music, is unconstitutional. What would our forefathers think of what censorship has become? Before you pull that 'unacceptable' book off the shelf, remember the @ORGANIZATION1 of our great countries citizens, and the @ORGANIZATION1 of individuals like yourself.                                                                 Sincerely,                                             @PERSON1",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3381,2,"I do not think that books should be taken off shelves just because it's offensive or because others don't like it. If everyone took the books, music, and movies off the shelves that they didn't like, then all that would be left would be empty bookshelves.     I believe that the library was a right to keep whatever they want on the shelves. Some @MONTH1 say that the library has inapproprite books to check out, or they don't want their kids to pick up a book they don't like and read it. I think that's why the library has the shelves marked in sections for example, adult, young adult, children, and referance.      I've never seen a book that was offensive to me in a libray, which brings me to another point. Everyone has a opinion, if a book is offensive to you it might not be offensive to someone else. For example say that you saw a book on animal mating and you thought it was a bad book for the libary to have because, little kids might pick it up. Well that is your opinion because, if a biology teacher seen a book like that then they might want to check it out.      Another thing is that the library has certain book for a reason. Say that there is a book in the library that is about slaves, this book might be offensive to @CAPS1 @CAPS2 but, this book is there to inform people about slavery. What is offensive to some isn't offensive to others.     In conclusion, I believe that books should not be taken off library shelves just because it is offensive to you. Everyone just has to remember that people have their own opinions about things and you just have to deal with it. That's why I think that books should not be tooken off shelves",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
857,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 Newspaper, Have you ever wanted to see your @CAPS3 that lives across the country? Well computers can do that. Ther re positive in effecting people in more ways, such as letteing people communicate with family or friends from across the world or letting everything be easy to find what they @CAPS4 many people are people isolate and keeping them from talking to family / friends I is helping them by being to chat or type to them. People can now talk to reltives in the comfort of thre home without having to about how they look. Computer also phone bills because of call your mom in @LOCATION1 just go on I chat and chat with her, it's just @CAPS5 you can see the computers Some people also think computers give people to much access to but ther it give people the of know what they This is good for school to for look for In my fall @NUM1. or people @CAPS6 you can see computers let you find the information you the time has that @CAPS7 computers without or keeping people away from family",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9876,4,The author concludes in the story that Saeng failed a winter test and because of her love of the hibiscus plant spring will help her take test.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12126,5,"Throught the memoir Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, Narciso Rodriguez portrays a mood of happiness and thankfulness towards his parents. Rodriguez writes ""…and for which I am eternally grateful"" (@NUM1). Narciso Rodriguez is expressing his thankfulness to his parents for the wonderful things they have taught him such as cooking. Another way this mood of happiness is portrayed is through his writing about people coming together. He writes ""all of these cultures came together showing great solidarity and friendship."" (@NUM2). He is happy and thankful for the connections he made with people of different cultures, and ethnicities. Despite the racism going on in the places around them, his parents were able to bring people together by being welcoming, helpful, and friendly. Lastly, he is greatful for all the things the parents sacrificed for him. He writes, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice,"" (@NUM3). They taught him that money isn't everything and that family and friends are greatly important. They had the ability to impress apon him many qualities that benefited his life. He writes ""these teachings have been the basis of my life"" (@NUM3). The mood is portrayed as happy and thankful about the lessons his parents taught.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
144,1,"Dear local Newspaper, In my opinion computers are a help to our plant. The new technology makes life easier to handle. The computer are a help because it teaches hand-eye coordination. You can talk to people, and it is a new way to be entertained. Computers can teache hand-eye coordination because of typing. Whether someone knows it or not when you are typing fast it is help you hands. Also the fact you that if your typing without making is also helping because it makes your hand easier to move. The typing is giving your hand lots of exersise because your hands are moving all over the place. The more you move them the more excersise you can get. Computers can really help hand-eye coordination alot. Computers can also help by talking to people. To talk to people far away is better to talk to on the computer because if you have a webcam you can see each other. You are able to talk to people from different countries. Also computers are able to be used in business meetings when a business has to talk with another from different locations. Like if part of the business is doing a project in hong kong, then the boss can set up a meeting to see how it is going. Another way to use computers to talk to people is to speak with a person you are not able to see in person. Like if a oerson is in the hospital but you're not able to go, then you can talk while seeing each other throw the computer. Computers are a great way to use in communication. Computer are also a new way to get entertained. They can entertain you because there is games that you can play. There are games that come with the computers and a lot of games on the internet. Other they being bored all the time you can play thousands of game with just a click on a mouse. Also to not be bored you can watch videos like youtube. You can listen te musicor watch comedy videos. Video also show a way do express what you feel and sat it in comedy, horror, or sad videos. Also for teenagers there is ways to talk to their friends like facebook. On the website you can talk with anyone on your friends list. In the end computer can help kids, adults, or teenagers. With just a clicking your mouse you can find a new powerful way of technology. And be able to got better hand-eye coordination talk to people and get entertained. So go get yourself a computer and amazed!",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19386,7,I remember the time when I went to the @ORGANIZATION1 and I saw a little girl that was patient. When I got to the @ORGANIZATION1 I was so excited because it was my first time going to the @ORGANIZATION1. It was so colorful and loud. I went on a few rides and then got hungry so me and my family went to go get some cotton-candy. I was eating my food when I saw a cute little girl. She stood in line like a little angle. All of a sudden I saw a bunch of teenagers just cut in front of the little girl. She was so patient she just stood their standing behind the teenagers that cut in front of her. The line got longer in just a few minutes. I left to go on some rides and when I came back the poor little girl was still there. More and more people had cut in front of her but she didn't say anything. All she did was mumble to herself. I couldnt stand it! I wondered how she could just let them cut like that. If I was that little girl I would of lost my patience a @CAPS1 @CAPS1 time ago. I was so amazed with how much patience she had. She finally got up to the front of the line and @CAPS3! Out came the closed sign. I couldnt believe my eyes she didnt even get mad. I kept watching until the end. She finally walked over to the @ORGANIZATION2 and @CAPS4 stand and did the same exact thing! I couldnt watch this anymore. I left with my family and thought about that girl. In the end I hoped to have great patience like her just thinking of her makes me amazed!,10,12,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16266,6,"When the architects behind the mooring Mast of the Empire State Building first began there work in designing it, they did not take into account the @CAPS1 that they would have to overcome to dock a dirigible. In the excerpt it States that the mooring mast was not originally part of the design structure for the Empire State Building: however the stresses it would cause in docking a dirigible ""would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation."" This means that the builders would need to design Some way of doing this when the building was already begun. Other @CAPS1 included those of safety. The exerpt tells that ""most dirigibles from outside the U.S. used hydrogen"" which is more flammable than helium. This combined with the fact that there really was no way of securing the tale of a dirigible moored at the mast could cause an accident @CAPS2 to that of the Hindenburg over a ""densely populated area Such as downtown New York""",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9144,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng has vowed to retake the test in the spring and will have more confidence when the snow melts, the geese return, and the hibiscus starts budding. “A wave of loss so deep and strong that it stung Saeng’s eye now swept over her. ” Saeng feels lonely because she is from a different country and misses everything she knew and loved. Now she has the hibiscus to remind her of home.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19537,7,"Once my friend @PERSON1 was very patient,he waited @NUM1  months for the xbox @NUM2 game @CAPS1 v.s @CAPS2. He quietly waited day after day for the game.But one day after school it arrived.",8,5,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12539,5,Narciso Rodriguez created a very positive mood throughout the memoir. The mood that was created by the other was happy. I chose this mood because in the memoir he describes how nice it was to live in a town where people cared for him. He also mentions how grateful he was to have a caring and loving family to be brought up in. In this memoir about Narciso Rodriguez the author created a very positive mood throughout the memoir.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18067,7,"One day we went @CAPS8 the mall me. Sharae. Reynal. Me and @PERSON1 wanted @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @CAPS1 @CAPS2 but sharae wanted @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 pac sun so we were patient and let her @CAPS9 @CAPS8 that store. Then me & reynal wanted @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @CAPS3 but sharae wanted @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @CAPS4 so we were patient & let her @CAPS9. Then me & reynal wanted @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @CAPS11 but sharae wanted @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @ORGANIZATION1 until @CAPS5 we said…..ENOUGH @CAPS6. WE @CAPS7 @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @CAPS11!!! She said ok, ok, ok but can I just, no. Please, no, please. NO! Alright @CAPS12 we’ll @CAPS9 @CAPS8 @CAPS11, I was just gonna ask @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @CAPS8 the bathroom.",10,7,,17,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
404,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, The effects computers have on people as posotive I say that it is posotive because what if your in a rush, and you don't know if you need your rain boots or not? Check the computer! I say that it is posotive because without the computer how would most offices run their buisness? It's too much of a pain to keep everything on files. Especially in schools because the teachers don't keep their grades for students in a filing cabinet! They keep them on the computer, @CAPS1 they'd need a huge filing cabinet. I could understand why some peole think computers have a bad effect on people. They might think that it takes away time from nature, friends and family. But so many people take their laptops to the local park to sit under a tree on warm days and go on the computer there. Especially students do this, they do their homework under the leaves to help them relax. Also, people whose family or friends live in other states, they @MONTH1 not have the house number, or they don't have time for a long conversation, they can e-mail them, or use social networking like facebook, or myspace to look on their profile pages and say a quck, ""@CAPS2, how are you doing?"" Local shop owner @PERSON1 says, ""I barely have time for myself! So when I want to say @CAPS2 to my sister in @LOCATION1, I usually say hello on facebook because I know how she loves to talk my ear off!"" I remember one morning, when I was rushing before school, I had no idea what type of outfit to wear. I checked the local news casting website for the weather forecast and thank god I did! I would have gotten stock in downpour without an umbrella! Computers are also good for if you want to catch up on any news, or just relax and play some games you can. So, if your wondering about the weather to see if today will be a good day to sit under the trees in the park & catch up on typing that report with your partner, then go ahead. But don't forget to e-mail her and ask her first, since you lost her phone number.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17940,7,I am all way patient wen I hunt and fish. I always go hunting I find a spot and setor clmeit in a tree. I waet for along time for deer and trukey and @CAPS1. Some times you don’t see anything at all. The key is get out early and be patient. The most of the time I usely see @NUM1 deer wen its deer sesson wen I go out . How I see them alot is being patient a lot.,4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15922,6,"In the excert The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION1, The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example One big problem they faced was the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the empire state building's flat roof."" This operation would not be possible because ""A thousand  foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings foundation, wich is nearly 11 hundred feet below."" the steel frame of the empire state building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new sittoation. One big obstacle they faced was a big Safety problem. ""Most dirigibles from outside the @CAPS1 used @CAPS2 drogen rather than @CAPS3 lium, and @CAPS2 drogen is very flammable. the biggest obstacle to face was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to the violent air currents. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights but using them at the empire state building, were they would be hanging on top of padestrans on the street was neither practical nor safe. These are the obstacles the empire stat building faced.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6910,3,"Due to the features in the setting, including the hot summer weather, the cyclist not knowing the area, and the California desert the cyclist is affected. In the short story “Do not exceed posted speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the cyclist is travelling through the hot desert in June when he realizes hes running out of water, “I had been hitting my water bottles pretty reguarly and I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June”(Kurmaskie). This is affecting the cyclist because hes becoming hot and has a low supply of water. Also the cyclist realizes he should have never taken the direction from the old men and thinks to himself, “…The growing realization that I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June”(Kurmaskie). This quote proves that the heat of the desert is taking a toll on him.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11868,5,"The mood in this story was security and happiness. Security was prevailed when all different people with different culture and heritage could live together without fights or arguments at a time when there was a lot of racial tension in @LOCATION1. Happiness was showed in many different ways. One way was when he was describing the warmth, music and cooking in his house. Also, when he was talking about how thankful he was for what his parents sacrificed for him. Overall, @PERSON1 was happy about how his whole childhood when and it seemed like he loved every last minute of it.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1500,1,"Dear local Newspaper editor, More and more people are using computers, but not everyone thinks that is such a good idea. Those who support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Other experts disagree. I think that computers do have a positive effect on people because they let you learn about anything all over the world, they let you talk online with other people, and teach hand eye coordination. I think that computers are very helpful. Dont you love having the oppritunity to research anything from any part of the world that you want to learn about? I'm sure that everyone who has a computer does. With computers, you can use search engines like, google, yahoo, ask, and so many more. I know that computers help me with research all the time when I do projects or write papers for school. The internet is a great, reliable that you cango to when researching a topic for shcool or even just looking for an answer to a simple question. My next reason is that computers let you talk to other people online. Things like facebook, email, myspace, and web-caming all let you communicate with people anywhere in the world. For example, I have an aunt that lives in @LOCATION1, and on christmas me and my family used my cousins webcam to see her and talk to her when we couldnt be with her on a special holiday. Also, things like facebook and myspace let you put up pictures and chat with friends and family all over the world. My last reason why I think computers have a positve effect on people is that playing on the computer is a good leisure time activity. There are all kinds of fun games you can play, and some even let you compete with other people around the world. For example, internet checkers is a game that lets you compete against someone else. There are so many websites that let you pick games you want to play out of a huge selection. Its obvious that computers have a positive effect on people for research, talking to friends & family and leisure activities. I hope you agree with me!",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21093,8," Many people think that @ORGANIZATION1 is just like any other. These people are very wrong. @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 is very different than most. For you see, it is filled with humorous people. These people make up a lot of the bright side of @ORGANIZATION1. Where these people are you might ask? Why, they are every where. The best place to look is in the hallways, especially @DATE1 @ORGANIZATION1, during lunch, @CAPS2 after @ORGANIZATION1. Most of the people I will tell you about are friends of mine. There are also a lot of people I don't even know the names of. There is even a teacher I'll mention something about. Well enough chit chat, lets get to it shall we? I will first start with the teacher. I forget her name but she likes to talk with a @CAPS1 accent. She is also very enthusiastic, @CAPS2 I do mean enthusiastic. She often says, ""@CAPS3 we go!"". It's very funny. I have never seen her without enthusiasm. Many of the students are really disturbed by it. It can be annoying at times but at least she's not all gloomy or other. In fact we might even need more like her at this @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2 many others. There is also a student who is also very enthusiastic, not all the time but quite often is he. His name is @CAPS4. @CAPS4 is quite a jolly kid. He loves to sing. I do mean he loves to sing. Even if he doesn't know the words to the song he is singing, he will sing. People always joke about him around him. The jokes are usually mean jokes, but he puts up with them @CAPS2 laughs along. I really do have to give him that much credit. It would be hard for just about anyone to put up with such rude words, let alone laugh with them. But enough of that. He is very jolly @CAPS2 really makes you laugh, which is really great. Don't stop being funny @CAPS4. There is a funny pair of boys who can knock your shoes @CAPS3, perhaps even literally with what they do. These two boys, named @PERSON3 @CAPS2 @PERSON1, are very humorous, as well as dangerously humorous. Ever heard of a @CAPS6? It is a brand of a toy that is very fun for little kids, as well as big kids. This toy is shaped like a bowl. You turn it inside out, aim the rim at the ground, @CAPS2 drop it. When it hits the ground, it pops up into the air. Well, @PERSON3 @CAPS2 @PERSON1 love playing with the @CAPS6, so much to the point that they found a new way to play with it. Instead of hitting the ground with it, they hit each other with it! They love to hurt each other. Eventually, though, the @CAPS6 got very worn out @CAPS2 tore. It needed to retire from its rough job, but @PERSON3 @CAPS2 @PERSON1 wouldn't let it. They just couldn't stop playing with it. @PERSON2, @CAPS9, @CAPS2 I haven't seen them playing with it lately. We think it might have broke. Ha ha! Never go wondering throught the hallways with @PERSON2, even if you have a destination. Trust me on this, you don't want to! @PERSON2 gets destracted very easily in the hallways. If she sees someone that she's wants to talk to, she doesn't tell you. She just twirls around @CAPS2 rushes over to them. For this, always have her take the lead if you do go with her; at least you'd know when she wonders @CAPS3 the trail. Never the less, @PERSON2 is still very humorous. She makes lots of random sounds. You get completely @CAPS3 guard @CAPS2 just can't help to laugh at how weird sounding those sounds are. @CAPS9 on the other hand, not only does sounds but also does hilarious facial expressions. She always tries to mimic the funny things her goats @CAPS2 pets do when she tells us about them. Together, @CAPS9 @CAPS2 I are very funny. In the @DATE1 finals started, we were drawing such goofy pictures of each other @CAPS2 random things. I drew her as a stick figure going to the moon, but the moon was very far away. We cracked up! She once redrew a little comic her brother thought of more than a year or two again. In the comic, it was a very ugly man who was telling his friends that they were going to a night club, but the ugly man turned out to be a woman. During finals, there was also a guy pulling is friend through the hallways by the arm. The friend said that it was very comfy. Then, they told a teacher about it! Ha ha ha! So you see, @LOCATION1 is much more than an ordinary @ORGANIZATION1. You could probably call it a clown @ORGANIZATION1 if you wanted to. Ha ha ha ha! You would never truly know just how many ha ha's I say a day until you visit, so come on over. We will let you join the fun!",20,20,42.0,42,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,4.0,3.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13445,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, Narciso Rodriguez is an internationally recognized clothing designer. He talks about his hometown in Newark, New Jersey. In the memoir, he offers the true definition of ""family"". I felt like the mood was comforting, and loving, and heart-warming. Just by the way he talks about how much he loves his Cuban heritage, and how his mother and father immagrated from Cuba, to @LOCATION2, and how, even at a young age, they still managed to raise him, and do alot for him, and give him the best childhood they could give him, that he'll always remember. He also talks about how ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative"", meant that you could even consider someone not blood related to you, as your own flesh and blood, family.",2,3,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
440,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think that being on the computer too long is bad for people because, you could get obsessed with the computer. You could get in trouble, and it could effect your education. One reason I think that being on the computer too long is bad for people is because you could get obsessed with it. For example, if you were playing outside on a nice day and you called a friend and asked them to come over and they said no I can't @CAPS3 on the computer. You said why todays a nice day. Then your friend said @CAPS3 playing games. Thats an example of being obsessed with a computer. Another reason that being on the computer too long is bad for you is because you could get in trouble. Getting in trouble online is bad because you could get sued or the owner of the website could delete it from your computer. Also if your parents found out you would be in even more trouble because then you would get grounded. That means you wouldnt be able to use the computer for a long time. My last reason that being on the computer too long is bad for you is because it could effect your education. If someone was on the computer too long instead of doing their homework that could effect their grades a lot. If you are in @CAPS5 @CAPS6 and this happens you wouldnt be alowd to graduate and go to college. That is not a good thing if you are trying to get into a good college. Even though the computers is important in @CAPS5 @CAPS6 you still shouldn't be on it to long. In conclusion everything I have said about why being on the computer too long is bad for you proves that too much computer is bad for people.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
524,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @DATE1, people are using computers more often. Some people do not agree that computers are good. I think computers are good though. They help you learn more, they are like @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and when you bored you can go on the internet. People nowadays are becoming smarter and smarter. One of the causes is the internet. The internet is like a big book. It holds tons of great information. There's probly information on the internet that probly no one knows, until they read it. Plus the fact that the internet is quick & easy. Also, the internet keeps you up to date on things going on in the world. Without the internet. We would be nowhere. Surveys show that @NUM1 out of @NUM2 students use the internet for information or projects for school. Also, on the internet you can buy things you can't but in stores. Going to the library is a pain. You have to pay for the gas plus you have to drag yourself out of the house to get in the car to go to the library. What if you don't have a library near you? then what will you do? you could go on the internet. Plus, with @CAPS2, people could look for a book all day, not find it and find out that someone else has it. What a pain. There are some people like collage people, Who don't have cars. So how the sapposed to get to the library? Studies show that @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 don't have cars. When you get bored, what do you do? eat? sleep? Lay on the floor staring at the celing? No. You go on the computer. The internet has all sorts of fun games and websites. It also helps you make new friends. The internet is also a good way to stay in contact with close friend or relative. Also, if you are a photographer, then you can sell & share you photographs online you can also advertise you company or buisness. @NUM3 out @NUM4 @CAPS3 either have no backyard or have nothing better to do. I think that the internet is great. You can learn all sorts of information you don't have to go to a library and you can play games when you get bored. Isn't the internet great?",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1133,1,"Dear @CAPS1 news editors, @CAPS2, my name is @PERSON1, and I would like you to write an article on the effects computers have on people. Computers have been the technological item to have over the past @NUM1 or so years. They allow people to learn many new skills, get important work done, and even socialize! However some experts believe that people spend to much time on computers, and that people are not as active or healthy because of it, and. Everyone wants to be healthy. While computers are fun and useful, could they have a negative effect on society? @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 are employed as of @DATE1, and with that number dropping people need to get more work done to keep their jobs, or even keep their businesses open. With computers available at work (or school) much more work can be done, with programs like @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS4 people can type reports, and with programs like @CAPS5, @ORGANIZATION2, and iCalculator, workers can calculate taxes faster, so they have more time to work. Some people are working with stocks, and these days, the stocks could be good or bad, so you need to keep up! You can go to the stock websites and control what you buy and sell, without raising you phone bill from calling the brokers. Laptops make work possible on the go to! Computers teach many skills you need to know for jobs, and other skills you @MONTH1 need times in life. You can learn typing, work programs, and programing which are all needed in some lines of work. Computers increase math skills and hand eye coordination to! And you can read your favorite books via online scans!, now you @MONTH1 be wondering why not pick up a real book? Well, you can’t online scans, and some are free! Not only do computers teach skills and work, they are very fun too! Between @CAPS6, twitter, email, googleBUZZ, mySpace, ooVoo, skype and gamesradar, there are lots of ways to talk to friends and meet new people. On @CAPS6 I can have up to @NUM2 people talk to whenever I want! Why not talk to real people? you ask, well the answer is simple, maybe it is a lazy @DATE2 and nobody wants to go out anywhere, or maybe your friends want to talk right before bed time. Talking to real people is important, but can’t be done all the time! Online gaming has become an sensation!, and not only an @NUM3, @NUM4 and @CAPS8, @CAPS9 and @CAPS10 can “game” too! So many people are gaming now, that if your not, you are missing out on an amazing experience. Some people think gaming is a waste of time, but the same can be said for any indoor leisure activity, everybody needs a fun activity they can do anytime! Besides everybody likes having fun! Some people believe the ludicrous notion that technology is making @LOCATION1 into fat, lifeless losers, but, it is opposite, you can socialize online and meet new people. People (like myself) can balance computers and games, with exercize and sports. With computers you can efficently complete work and learn new skills! Computers are posotive if used correctly. I hope you like this artice, thanks for reading.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19318,7,"Sometimes its hard to be patient, especilly when you have to be tolerant to little kids. Well I have to do that sometimes, when I go to visit my little cousin, @ORGANIZATION1. @ORGANIZATION1 is eight years old and get on my nervers. She asks dumb questions and does stupid things and I don't like her at all. My mom says, ""When you grow up, you two will be best friends,"" @CAPS1, right, I don't think so. When ever I visit her I just have to tolerant her and be patient. For now I have to deal with her, but when we grow up we might become  friends, but maybe not.",6,8,,14,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21131,8," Laughter is huge part of life. Or so that is what I believe and grew up with. ""A day without laughing is a waste of a day."" @CAPS1 quote has greatly influenced my life. As well as the people in my life.  My mother is quite the entertainer. People have told her that she should become a comedian. Apparently our family stories are very amusing. Mostly because they involve my brother in some way or another. He's adventurous, spontaneous, and is not afraid of anything. Sometimes his decisions are not the smartest. A majority of the stories my mom talks about are from when my brother was little. She loves to talk about one in particular.   When my brother was younger he liked to take part in adrenaline based activities. Like extreme rollerblading, biking, and skateboarding. He would try to do every trick in the book and then some. @CAPS1 story, however, does not include him getting hurt or someone else getting hurt. Which is surprising because it seemed like every day he would injure himself or his best friend @CAPS2.  When I was about eight or nine, putting my brother at age eleven or twelve, we were at one of my soccer games. My brother had to use the bathroom and when he came back, my mom was not pleased. He went to use the port-o-potty and he had just gotten two new shirts; a white t-shirt to go under a new button-up. It was a hot afternoon, so he took off his new white t-shirt but kept on the button-up. Unfortunately, he dropped the white shirt. He dropped it into the rancid, disgusting excrement. If @CAPS4 ask him, it was all an accident and my mom was not happy about it.  My mom is the person in the family who thoroughly enjoys laughter. I think about her words of wisdom all the time, ""@CAPS3 when it seems like nothing can get better, think of the positives in your life and laugh. Because really, that's all @CAPS4 can do. If @CAPS4 embarrass yourself in front of a lot of people @CAPS4 need to laugh it off. If @CAPS4 can laugh about it, it won't matter if anyone else does."" @CAPS4 need to get through life somehow. Might as well make it the best, and laughter is truly the best. It makes my mood better, and makes me feel welcome and at home.    There are many stories about what my brother did, or how blond I am. But ultimately, all that matters is that we can laugh about something every day. It brings us closer. ""A day without laughing is a waste of a day.""  ",20,15,,35,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6474,3,"The features of the setting in this essay affected the cyclist in many ways. “One ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest mule greeted me.” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). The cyclist was expecting a small town with people in it and some type of good water supply. However he instead found a deserted ghost town with only a rusty pump that didn’t even supply water. It made the cyclist feel depressed because he was running low on water and could easily dehydrate without it. “The speed limit was @NUM2. I was doing a water-depleting @NUM3. sometimes life can feel so cruel.” (Kurmaskie @NUM4). The cyclist is possibly being passed by cars on the highway going @NUM2 while he is only going @NUM3.This probably makes him feel as if he is getting no where at all. It would be all the more reason for him to give up. But he keeps trying to reach his destination. The feeling of being passed by the cars makes him determined to continue and finish his journey.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3418,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2,     I strongly agree that certain materials should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. There are young chirlderen that will pick up a book, movie and/or @CAPS3 case, or even a magazine and read off whatever the front says. We @CAPS5't need younger childeren reading off whatever they know what to say. @CAPS7's already bad enough that they hear @CAPS7 from family members or @CAPS2 near them. The seller could also make an edited verison of the book, movie, @CAPS3, or magazine.      The sayings,'You @CAPS5't like @CAPS7, than @CAPS5't look.','@CAPS5't got anything nice to say, than @CAPS5't say anything at all.',and 'If you wouldn't want to hear @CAPS7, than @CAPS5't say @CAPS7.',strongly apply to this. The way this world is coming to, @CAPS7 seems like they @CAPS5't really mind who sees their product, as long as @CAPS2 are buying their product.     Now a days, @CAPS7 seems like the younger the child is, the smarter @CAPS7'll be. If a four-year-old picked up a @PERSON1 @CAPS3 case, saw a pretty much naked grown adult on the case doesn't put a good thought in their head. That child's gonna grow thinking, '@CAPS7's okay to be naked. @PERSON1 did @CAPS7. Why can't I?'. Childeren learn more things from family and freiends, before they start learning the truth in school.        @CAPS7's just like you wouldn't want to take your child to the @CAPS8 @CAPS9, half naked to naked woman just walking around freely. Not something a little five-year-old needs to see. Just like a little five-year-old doesn't need to hear cussing or using the @CAPS10 name in vien.     Having young childeren see, hear, say, think, or read things like that puts thoughts in their heads, making them think @CAPS7's okay to say whatever you want or to dress however they want, while they think @CAPS7's perfectly natural. Although, this @MONTH1 seem like a huge wake up call to some parents, but @CAPS7's not normal. @CAPS7's not more normal than telling your kids that they were a mistake. Things like that shouldn't be said to/ near childeren.      Every parent wants the best for their child, they @CAPS5't want their childeren growing up in world that is full of bad nor do they want their childeren doing wrong. By letting companies sell their prodcut with half naked @CAPS2 on the front cover of a magazine or @CAPS3 case, or by selling books that talk about murding someone, hiding the body, and prays to @CAPS12 that they @CAPS5't get caught, or by playing music that is offensive in stores with younger kids, let's them think that they can sell whatever they want, promote their music where ever they want, makes the companies win.      I'm not a mother, nor am I soon-to-be-a-mother, but I find @CAPS7 highly offensive that companies and stores would do that. i wouldn't want my child looking at a magazine than asking me questions about the @CAPS2 nearly naked, or have them ask me what a word means when @CAPS7's a cuss word. I certainly wouldn't buy a book that just looks strange or offensive to my child.      As well, I strongly do believe in '@CAPS13 of @CAPS14', so the companies, in a way, do have a right to sell their product how @CAPS7 is. Just, if they really wanted to selll their product that much, that bad, than they should sell @CAPS7 online. @CAPS7 @MONTH1 cost more, but at least everyone would know that their childeren wouldn't see @CAPS7. Although, once you owned @CAPS7, than @CAPS7's the buyers fault if their child saw @CAPS7. That would be on the parents plate to deal with.      Another thing with childeren, is that their brain is still developmenting at that young age, their imagintion is beyond fairy tale world, @CAPS7's kinda like their second home, only @CAPS7's inside their brain. Their brain is still developmenting and learning new things each and everyday. Once they go to the store with their parent (s), they're already jumping up and down off the walls for a new toy or a new pair of shoses, or just because they wanna run up and down the alies, @CAPS7's bad enough having them see something inopporty.      I know I wouldn't let my childeren see things like those and I'm about @PERCENT1 certain you wouldn't want your childeren seeing those things. So, for the childeren's sake, think of them, their minds, and their developmenting brains and their off the wall imagaintion. Treat the childeren how you were treated growing up.                                   Thank You,                                   @PERSON2",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15431,6,"Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION1, there were many challenges the builders of the Empire State building faced while they had high hopes in creating the world's tallest building. They added on hundreds of feet allowing dirigibles to dock there. Competing with the Chrysler building, Al Smith announced that the Empire State building would reach 1,250 feet beating the Chrysler Building by @NUM1 feet. Al Smith was desprite to do whatever he could to construct the world's tallest building, even to create a landing spot for dirigibles. @ORGANIZATION2's idea didn't work out as planned. Instead, the @CAPS1 assigned to dirigible passengers was made into the world's highest soda fountain and tea garden.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1337,1,"Are people today spending to much time on computers. If so had done it affect thous. In our modern day people spend to time on computers. Both me and think that this is affecting people in many different ways. Some ways it by. Health your social life, and also your education. Spending to much time on a pc can effect your in many ways. For example exercise. The people spend all there time siting in a chair they could have a chance of gaining wait. Then you might be getting all the you need because your on the computer you might not go to to get the and veggies. Your want to just so you the computer. Social life @CAPS1, you could have with all the people you are also will them. Another big problem is education. Is you are all day on the computer anything @CAPS2 you it's not on the computer you Those are some of the resons why I think people shouldn't spend to much time on the computer.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12351,5,"In the memoir from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"" the creates a good mood of accomplishment. The mood first develops in the first paragraph, when Narciso writes of his parents immigrating from Cuba and being able to move up from a one room to a three room apartment. The second appearance of this mood is when the author writes of how their community came together and helped eachother through the segregation and racism of the time period. The third and last demonstration of the mood is how the parents took what they could get and made their house, into a home. Accomplishment, is the mood created by Narciso Rodriguez in his memoir from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"".",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15958,6,"In paragraph 6 it said ""New York City was the lack of a suitable Landing space"" Another obstanke in paragraph @NUM1 was the Nature it self the winds was push the dirigible around in the back of it. The other obstakle was in paragraph @NUM2 the existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. These are the problem that the Empire builders faced",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21429,8,"The @CAPS1-inspirational, @CAPS2 @CAPS3 of @CAPS4 I @CAPS5 the @CAPS6 of @CAPS7 -- @PERSON1. What is @CAPS13, exactly? Some might say, ""@CAPS8, that's obvious. @CAPS13's a sound, emitted from a person when they think something is funny!"" That's as good a response as any other, and certainly quite believable. But I believe laughter has a much deeper definition; a definition that can only be explained through a marginally-humorous, less-than-inspirational story about my experiences as a @CAPS9-@CAPS10-@CAPS11 basketball player.  This year, as a high school sophomore, I decided to do something I'd never done before: go out for the basketball team. I was inspired by a longing to become more involved in the school district, and to be able to exercise throughout the rain-drenched winter months in which @CAPS13 took place. Having only picked up a basketball in order to steer clear of the ""sit-outs"" zone in middle school @LOCATION1, my performance at early practices was comparable to that of a high school dropout determining the orbit of the planets around the sun; and at least they get a calculator. Naturally the year I decided to give basketball a shot, the coaches informed us that seven unlucky individuals would be plucked from the team with joyous abandon. Through sheer force of determination, I improved enough in our first few weeks to be deemed ""better than dirt"" by the coaches; narrowly avoiding losing my spot on the team. In the months ahead, I would learn that my job wouldn't be making baskets and stealing balls... As astonishing as @CAPS13 was, my ability to imagine myself playing basketball far surpassed my actual skills on the court. I soon found that my place on the team wouldn't be aggressively running up and down the court fighting for control of an orange ball; I would be on the sidelines, cheeks firmly planted on the bench upon which my teammates would take breathers before going back into the action.  Our team could play basketball, but not often on the same level as the teams we faced. As each game came and went, I could see the fighting spirit fizzling out of my peers' eyes; their morale was simply dropping, and no amount of my ball-playing abilities could change that.  @CAPS13 was one game in particular twhen I discovered I didn't have to play in order to help my team. @CAPS13 was a home game, in our lower gym; we were down by about @NUM1 points against a team we had fared @CAPS8 against previously. Needless to say, players were becoming very frustrated. One of our star players, @PERSON2, was becoming so frustrated that our coaches decided to pull him out for a breather. He was raging, spitting profanities. He dropped himself on the bench with the elegance of an enraged walrus. His mom came down from the stands to give him water, which only made him embarrassed him more. Sitting beside @PERSON2, I could feel the anger radiating off of him. He was ranting under his breath over number @NUM2, the opposing team's point guard. I noticed that while @NUM2's fast legs and swift hands made him a great ball-player, his voice -- a good octave above his teammates' -- was much more @CAPS8 suited for covering @ORGANIZATION1 songs than calling out plays. I turned towards @PERSON2, tapping him on the shoulder, and informed him of my insight. He looked at me for a moment, a mixture of anguish and ""don't-talk-to-me-or-I-will-murder-@CAPS12"" on his face before bursting out laughing. Clapping me on the back, he said with a smile: ""@CAPS12 always know @CAPS4 to make us laugh, @PERSON1"". Suddenly @CAPS13 dawned on me that my banter and dripping sarcasm was quite often the one thing keeping smiles on my teammates' faces. I was able to use @CAPS7 to diffuse tense situations, and allow emotions to flow freely in a more positive manner. We lost the game. In fact, we lost all but one game the entire season; and so I made @CAPS13 my personal duty to keep the entire team in good spirits even in the worst of times. As the weeks went by, I started to feel more and more an integral part of the team; making teammates laugh kept their minds clear of anger and frustration, and allowed them to play to the best of their abilities.  And so @CAPS13 was. Some players had quick hands, others had a flawless shot. Me? I made people laugh. I gave my peers, my friends, the ability to see light in even the most dire of situations. I didn't receive an award, a recognition of athletic ability. Instead I found the satisfaction of making people smile, of watching the enraged despair on their faces disappear -- replaced with optimism and hope. Laughter is what pushed my teammates past anger, to be the best they could be. So, @CAPS12 tell me: Is laughter simply noise that a person makes when something is funny, or is @CAPS13 something more?  Spoiler alert: @CAPS13's much, much more.",30,25,,55,,,,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9570,4,"The author concludes the story with this endding because it shows that if the plant comes back and blooms then she will go back and take the test and try to pass this time. She knows that it is going to be tough for her to come back and pass this test but she knows she can do it just like she knows that the plant will fight through the winter and come back and bloom in the spring. This gives her confidence that she can pass this test if the plant can come through the tough winter that they are going through. As a result, this is why the author ended the story with that.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20905,8," Someone once said laughter was the best medicine. To me it was like someone was saying ""@CAPS1! Life isn't gonna get any better so just enjoy it while you @CAPS6!"" @CAPS2 that's what I did for a while, but laughing at everything got old very quickly. Sad to say I still laugh at most things, even sad things. I laugh because I think that if I do then everything will just get better. That's not even close to what really happens. In fact it @CAPS6 only cause more pain and suffering in most cases. Like the time where I met this guy named @PERSON1. He was amazing. Most people who met him thought he was a god and when he heard people talking about him like that he would always get very upset. He was a human. Nothing more and nothing less. That's how I saw it and that's how he saw it too. When we first started talking to each other it was between notes I would give my friend @CAPS3 and @CAPS8 would give them to him. He was a very shy guy so he never wrote back on a piece of paper. Instead he had @CAPS3 tell me what he said. Then he finally got the idea to wright messages in her phone and then I would read them and answer back. it was fun for a while but I wanted to actually meet the guy. I had seen one of his rare pictures and it was true he was very handsome but nothing like a god. He didn't have a wreath over his head with one of those @CAPS5 god skirts. Nope, he was just an ordinary kid who dressed like a skater and was just a real inamorata. He had jet black hair (he dyed it), bright green eyes, and a smile that could shock the whole world.  Signs were going off in my head telling me to be careful but I never listened to them, they only made my life worse. So one day a few of my friends and I were in @LOCATION2, @LOCATION3 with our teacher for a calligraphy convention when @PERSON2 (my friend) starts text messaging someone. I was a little curious so I asked in a friendly way who it was. @CAPS8 said it was @PERSON1 and my heart seemed to jump. ""@CAPS6 you tell him I say hello?"" ""@CAPS7."" @CAPS8 told him I said hello and he asked if I was really there and @PERSON2 said yes. That's when we actually got to talk to each other more than once a day. We talked all the way back to @LOCATION1. A few months went by and we were back to our old way of talking to each other. He was very kind and never did he have a bromidic moment. He told me about his family (which is a little strange, but I don't judge), his life, his future, what he felt and how he wished he could see me so he could give me a big hug (another of @CAPS3's friends said the same thing but @CAPS8 said he wasn't aloud to). I talked to him about all of it and it was like we understood each other a little bit. I told him about my life but there really wasn't much to tell since my life has always been bromidic. I thought we could actually make things work between us, that is until he moved to @LOCATION2. I was a little upset but it really didn't bother me except the fact that talking to each other became almost as rare as seeing a different picture of him.  While at school one morning @PERSON2 came over to me and had a careful gaze. I asked what was wrong and then @CAPS8 asked if anything could ruin my day. I told her that only going home would and we laughed a little about it. I knew something was wrong and that it had to do with @PERSON1 but I just acted oblivious to it hoping it would lessen the blow I knew was about to come. @CAPS8 said he had told her it wasn't going to work out between him and I. I sat there and like the idiot I was I said I knew it wasn't going to anyways, he was him and I was me. @CAPS8 said he was sorry and all these other excuses but I wouldn't listen. Instead I ignored it and went on with my life like I think everyone should. Of course a few months later he asked @PERSON2 out but I let it go just as @CAPS8 did when @CAPS8 said no to him and they stopped talking to each other. So who ever said laughter was the best medicine obviously hadn't experienced the after effects of it all. ",15,19,,34,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
978,1,"Dear Readers, @CAPS1 you imagine not talking to distant friends, only knowing about your town, or even failing @CAPS5 you didn’t ha a @CAPS3? I know I couldn’t. Some of the great benefits of having a @CAPS3 are talking online with friends, learning about new places and things everywhere, and being able study for and tests from the internet. First, being able to talk to distant friends and relatives is now passive with the @CAPS3. Facts show show that @PERCENT1 of families in the @LOCATION1 have distant friends with @CAPS2, now all of these people can tlk to each other! Ill never forget the time that my close freinds moved, but i was still able to talk to him @CAPS5 of the @CAPS3. Second, the @CAPS3 allows you to learn about new places and things all around the world. I never would have I know about some of the places I've been to if it was for comoputer, @ORGANIZATION1 stated that the @CAPS3 expert @PERSON1 says ""@CAPS3 are the reason we have in much without @CAPS3 wouldn't know about the places."" @CAPS4, it is now possible study without @CAPS5 of the @CAPS3, @CAPS6 can be done on the internet online. I'll never forget the that I forget my book, but I @CAPS1 still study @CAPS5 of the online book. In conclusion the @CAPS3 has benifits to you, like interacting with friends online, learning about new places, and being able to study. Computers are just end all-around benifits.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
752,1,"In my opinion I think that computers have nothing to do with people having lack of exercise or sleep. I think it is all the persons decision to be on the computer as long as they want. The person on the computer obviously does not care if they sleep or not. When people are on the computer I think they dont play as much and start to get fat but that its their decision. Also when the time comes they going to realize that they need to spend less time on the computer and exercise. However, they need a time limit to be on the computer and limited time for eating right and exercising. Being on the computer @NUM1 people dont get the chance to interact with their family and friends because they want to be lazy and stay on the computer. The family and friends get angry and dont want to hang out anymore and within a couple of months they have no friends. Nature is good smells good, looks good, and computers make people stay inside all day! I think we should have more time outside. Also computers sometimes make kids want to not clean their room, not do chores because they are addictid to the computer.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15598,6,"In this excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"", by @ORGANIZATION1, workers and builders try to make a docking area for Dirigibles (blimps). In the process in doing so they @CAPS1 many obstacles. First, obstacle was the lack of a suitable landing area. They really should've thought to make it bigger in the first place. Workers did work but was not enuff. The greatest obstacle was nature itself. If they were good builders and knew what they were doing and then they would know that wind up higher gets ruffer. Bacicaly should have thought things through a little more; lastly, was the law against airships flying to low over urban areas. Should have checked if there were ney laws which there was; Also, all that work for nothing. All these obstacles that the workers and builders @CAPS2 were things that could have been prevented, so money and time did not have went to waste.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7108,3,"The cyclist is affected by the heat, the hills, and the lack of people. For example, the cyclist was growing short on water and had “wide rings of dried sweat on his on shirt,” and he could “drop from heatstroke.” The hills must have forced him to use more energy, and lasely  the land of people. If the towns still had people the cyclist wouldn’t have been as affected by the setting.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3978,2,"In the words of the author, Katherine Paterson, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have a right to remove that book from the sheld---that work I abhor---then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 are countless books in the world which will offend someone in one way or another. If everyone were to expect their feelings to be accounted by everyone, they are mistaken. Everyone has a right to discover the thoughts of others as long as they keep in mind they @MONTH1 not always be pleased with the outcome. Certain books carrying harsh opinions or uncencored material can be found on every shelf. As my many years as a student, I have come to find books containing vulgar images and language.     @PERSON1's play '@CAPS2' describes him in very crude ways. Our class was very surprised at the language and sexual innuendos involved. @CAPS2 was described as a 'black ram' by his nemesis. Comments such as these in books can mold a young mind into thinking name calling is appropriate. Unfortunately, this is how children are to learn the nature of select authors and the world outside the classroom. @PERSON1 also discusses a 'strumpet' in '@CAPS2'. Once a mind is aware of such adult matters they will look at the world completely different. Life must be hard for children as their books and magazines show racy pictures of girls and advertisements for products.     Magazines are a threshold of adult matters. Once a teenager or child view all the vibrant advertisements and beautiful models selling products, they begin to lose a sense of reality and childhood. The photoshopped images of tall, tan, and thin models make a girl's head ponder that way of life. They begin wearing shorter skirts, dieting, and tanning all because of an ad they saw in their magazine. Who wouldn't want to be like a model? When every actress, singer, and model begin looking like godesses, the men picture the perfect girl as the ones they see on billboards. After the men picture the ultimate female as the images they see, the women will never be able to add up to their qualifications. A whole cycle of being underappreciated and the obsession to be perfect makes the media more powerful.     In conclusion, the world has become absorbed in the unrealistic fantasies racy books and magazines provide. Crude comments are found in classics and are a powerful influence on the mind. Advertisements in magazines cause a sense of worthlessness in women and the feeling of unfulfillment for men. Are you going to control you're life or let the media?",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9801,4,"There are many reasons this paragraph is included. It shows the flower will emotionally encourage her when it is budding, because it will remind her of home. This is shown when she says “a blossom of two would have blown into the well” It reminds her of her homeland. It also is to show she is adapting to her new home. when the geese flew by she said”she realized that many things that she thought of as strange before had become, almost familiar to her now.” This shows how she is adapting and is now enjoying her new life. This final paragraph is important because it shows how her life is changing.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9915,4,The author @MONTH1 have conclude the story like that because of the titel and the begening of the story. Or he @MONTH1 have conclude the story like that because he wants to. He @MONTH1 have concluded the story like that to show what @MONTH1 happen. But is good conclusion is a good conclusion. ,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4362,2,"Do you think that something should be taken off the book shelf just it affended someone or you disliked it? I dont just cause you dont like something or you dont approve of the reading material dosent mean it should be taken away. If it was like that @DATE1 than there wouldnt be any reading material or books or magazines.          In my opinion if affends you in some way or another than dont read it. Plane and simple. Because im sure that theres thosands of books, magazines, news papers. ect, thats affends alot of people everyday.     I dont mean to be harsh in any way, thats just the way I feel. This is only my opinion.that how I feel about this situation.",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9353,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus”, I think that the author concludes the story in “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is dudding, then I will take that test again” because she has made Saeng feel that if that hibiscus can restart and make new flowers the Saeng should do the same. Therefore thats why the author added that quet to the end of the story",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18745,7,"Patience, if you are a patient person you are tolerant and understanding. There was a time I was very patient. ""@CAPS1 can @CAPS3 go yet!? ""@CAPS2,"" she replied, ""@CAPS3 need to buy all of your school supplies."" I always didn't like back to school shopping. That would mean going with @CAPS1 to a store for @NUM1 hours trying to find clothes, notebooks, pencils binders and pens. ""@CAPS4 I really have to go too?"" ""@CAPS5 patient ok?"" ""@CAPS6, I replied. Every time I had to get clothes or pencils, I began to get more patient. Whenever I had to wait for @CAPS1. I just sat there, I just sat down and waited. And the day seemed to go by a lot faster @CAPS7 had been @NUM1 hours but @CAPS7 only felt like twenty minutes, when @CAPS3 left. I wouldn't wait till next year, I wanted to go shopping all over again!",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21114,8," Have you ever been laughing at something that someone said, and then began laughing harder at, not the joke, but at a person whose laugh was almost more humorous than the joke itself? Then were you put into a good mood after the funny laughing occurred, when just before that you could have been in the world's worst mood? Laughter is the cure for almost anything from being in a bad mood to crying because you're sad. It can also help make the mood in the room brighter or simply it makes any awkward moment disappear. One bright @DATE1 day, @PERSON1 called me and asked if I wanted to long board down to @PERSON2's and get some lunch with her. Of course I wanted to because I'm always up for my typical @PERSON2's order of a chocolate malt milkshake and some croutons and ranch. I jogged to her house down the block and we long boarded down to @PERSON2's in downtown @CAPS1. On the way to @PERSON2's I shared with @PERSON1 how I had not had a good day so far and how I needed to be cheered up. She was feeling the same way. When we arrived at @ORGANIZATION1's we were both excited to get seated so we could catch up with each others lives and eat. When we walked inside we noticed how crowded it seemed to be that day as we waited for a table. After getting seated we noticed an older couple sitting in the booth behind us, some kids from our school in the booth front of us, and a man and women across the aisle. @PERSON1 ordered a strawberry milkshake and a burger with fries, and I ordered my usual. After the lady took our order and left, @PERSON1 and I started telling each other the reasons for our bad moods. She was in a bad mood because her friend @PERSON3 was not treating her right. I was in a bad mood because my friend @CAPS2 was mad at me for something that never happened.  We were both quite upset and frankly we were in no laughing mood. When all of a sudden we heard what sounded like a mixture of a goose's honking and a donkey's braying. We turned around to find it was a lady's laughter. I looked at @LOCATION1 and she looked at me and we started busting up laughing. This went on for about @NUM1 minutes straight. We both could not believe a sound like that could come out of any human being's mouth and it was probably the loudest laugh I've ever heard. We also loved the fact that all of this is happening at a public place with all these people around, and the lady was just setting herself up for being made fun of. @PERSON1 and I continued to laugh at the lady for how she was laughing and it somehow started to relieve our bad moods. @PERSON1 started smiling a little more and as for me, I couldn't stop smiling and laughing.   Laughter has an unusual way of putting people in a good mood or relieving them of their bad moods. Regardless if the laugh is a normal little chuckle or an unnatural sound coming out of someone's mouth, laughter brings people together and it's great way to turn a awkward moment into a memorable moment. Someone once said, ""laughter is the shortest distance between two people,"" and that person knew what they were talking about.",20,19,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9966,4,The author concludes with this paragraph because she/he wanted to close the story with a conclusion that portrays the story. The author talked about the hibiscus in the story as a “comfort in time of distress” a hobby or thing she likes doing with her spear time. In conclusion the author concludes with that paragraph for the reasons stated in the @ORGANIZATION1,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10470,4,"The reason why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because the author feels that saeng will pass the test if she has the hibiscus with her, she thinks that because the hibiscus has something unique about it. And as also gives her memory of where she used to live before she had moved to the @ORGANIZATION1. Saeng had seemed out of place she did not know what to do.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7447,3,"The features of the land affect the cyclist in the many ways. For example, the first two buildings that he came to were abandond so he could not get any food or water. Also, he noticed that the terrain was changing from flat to rolling hills and this will put more strain on his legs. Finally, the land was hot and dry wich was making him dehidrated. This is how the features of the land affected the cyclist. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11993,5,"I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly. They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21288,8,"Sometimes, @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 to @CAPS4 I glanced around nervously as much mother drove up to the strange and unfamiliar building that was to be @CAPS6 new @ORGANIZATION2. ""@CAPS5 around! We can come back another time...or @CAPS2 not come back at all."" @CAPS6 mother laughed and continued to search for a parking spot. I slumped down in @CAPS6 seat, discouraged and lonely. @DATE1 was the first day of @CAPS6 sophomore year in @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2, and I had to spend it at a new @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2; @ORGANIZATION1. Transferring to a new @ORGANIZATION2 would not @CAPS3 been so bad if I hadn't been forced to leave the @ORGANIZATION2 I loved, the @ORGANIZATION2 I had friends in, the @ORGANIZATION2 which met @CAPS6 selective needs and wants. I was dreading this day and only wished I could go home and sleep this vivid nightmare away.  @CAPS6 mom had to practically drag me from our minivan to the @ORGANIZATION2 doors, for both @CAPS6 body and mind were aching to run in the opposite direction. There was a massive crowd of students swarming around the room, which would later be known to me as ""the commons."" @CAPS6 mom introduced me to the woman in charge, @PERSON3, then waved goodbye and headed back to the car. I felt nauseous, and @CAPS6 heart was pounding as I glanced around at @CAPS6 new peers. I did not see even one familiar or friendly face. Not being an outgoing person was a struggle for me, especially when I was faced with new surroundings, such as this @ORGANIZATION2. The truth was, I didn't even want to make any friends. I @CAPS2 wanted to go back to @ORGANIZATION2;@CAPS6 @ORGANIZATION2.  As the day progressed, @CAPS6 mood only got worse. No one had even tried to be nice to me, and I wasn't really trying either. As the students were taking a field trip down to the @CAPS9 campus down the street, I ran into a girl who looked @CAPS2 as uncomfortable as I did. @CAPS14 had long, blond, straight hair, brown eyes, and a pierced nose. We started walking together, our steps in sync with each other, although no words were exchanged. We both @CAPS2 felt more comfortable standing next to each other, rather than standing alone. At the @CAPS9 campus, I decided to abandon @CAPS6 timid, protective shell, and I asked her where @CAPS14 was from. ""@LOCATION1,"" @CAPS14 replied. ""@CAPS6 family moved here last @DATE2, so I was home schooled until the end of the year,"" @CAPS14 informed me, her voice laced with nervousness. We continued to make small talk as our group took a tour through the building. I still had not learned her name though because I couldn't read the handwriting on her name tag, and I was too embarrassed to ask what it was. Fortunately @CAPS14 started talking about her name. ""@CAPS6 parents named me @PERSON1 because @CAPS6 mom is @CAPS13, and I guess @CAPS14 really liked that name."" @CAPS14 shrugged and rolled her eyes. @CAPS14 told me I could call her by her nickname, @PERSON2, because @CAPS14 didn't like people talking to her using her full name.  After our tour, all the groups of students headed back to the @ORGANIZATION2, for we were going to @CAPS3 a pizza party for lunch. As @PERSON2 and I sat in the corner munching on our food, we studied the kids around us. ""@CAPS15...This is going to be the worst year ever,"" I said gloomily. We stared pitifully at each other for a moment, sizing up the difficult times ahead of us. Then, simultaneously, we both cracked a smile. Next thing I knew, we were laughing hysterically, our bodies rocking back and forth with every breathe that managed to escape our lips.  Sometimes, when life throws me lemons, instead of making lemonade, I pucker up @CAPS6 lips at the thought of how sour they are, and I @CAPS2 @CAPS3 to @CAPS4. Although laughing did not automatically make @CAPS6 new @ORGANIZATION2 a fun and welcoming place, it made it @CAPS2 a little more bearable. Laughter truly is the best medicine, no matter what the illness or problem is, and it can make two strangers into friends almost immediately.",23,23,,46,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6011,3,In the essay the mshan writes of rough rodes timit the cyclist’s had to overcome to reach @CAPS1 gole.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21494,8,"Laughter. Some might think of it as just a simple reaction to something funny, but in reality laughter can be many things such as a way to cope with situations, a way to express yourself, or just a simple way to enjoy yourself when you are around friends. For me the meaning of laughing has changed a lot during my lifetime, when I was younger I used to laugh to enjoy myself or just to have fun with peers, but as I have grown older I have used laughter to cope with situations. On @DATE1 the morning of my @NUM1 birthday I found out some disturbing and disappointing news, that day I found out that my mom had passed away. When I first found out I didn't know what to do the only thing that I felt I could do was cry and grief about it and shut down into a depressed stage, many of my friends tried to help me and tried to tell me that ""things were going to be okay"". I knew they were right, but the only thing I could think was even if things turn out okay things will never be the same. At this time I thought to myself what will @CAPS1 be like? what am I going to do on mothers day?, and my biggest question of all how was I supposed to celebrate my own birthday?. It's hard knowing that someone that I love and had been with for @NUM2 years of my life is gone, but since my mom has passed away I have tried to stay focused on the positives and what she would have wanted for me like graduating high school, becoming successful, and not letting my life spiral down hill. Even though everyday for me is hard I still try to push through it and just remember that my mom wouldn't want me to give up on my life over her passing. You might ask yourself how I am coping with this loss, and the answer to that is that I have learned to cope with my situation with laughter. Growing up my mom always told me that ""laughter is the best medicine"". And after losing her I realized that that statement was true.Now whenever I get upset or sad I remind myself to think about the memories that I have had with my mom and laugh about the good experiences and times we had , and I sometimes even find myself laughing at some of the arguments we had. Laughing has been helping me cope fairly well in the past four months since my mom has passed away, and I hope it continues to help in the future, but I continuously think that ""sure I can laugh about things now, but what about in ten years?"" I guess the future is just going to remain a mystery for that, but one thing I do know about my future is that I will become successful, and even if laughter doesn't always work for me I will stay strong and be sure to live my life the way I would if I still had my mom, it will be hard doing it without the guidance and authority of having my mother there, but fortunately I am not dealing with any of this alone.One person that has been there through the whole situation has been my aunt, she has been in my life since day one, my mom and I even lived with her. I am grateful that my aunt has been there for me during my life, if she wasn't I don't know where I would be right now, she has taught me that I can't isolate myself or stop being a teenager just because I don't have my mom, but to live life to the fullest and live the life my mom would have wanted to see me live, she also tells me that laughing at bad situations is okay and to not keep things bottled up and I am very happy I have someone to go through this with.Having someone there for me in such a tough situation is very reassuring to me. Knowing that I have someone to go to and just talk about the past and be able to have someone to laugh with about it. Laughing is hard when you do it by yourself but one thing that I have noticed is that when you have friends and family that are going through the same situation as you it is easier to share your feelings and I think it also makes it easier to laugh when you have people that you are close to and people that care about you around. In some situations laughter might not be the best thing to do, but the best advice I can give to someone who might happen to be going through a similar situation is to not stop living your life and be something great and try to release some of the stress of a situation by laughing with friends.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16534,6,"The builders of the Empire State building went through many obstacles. I feel bad for them because of how dangerous it was, and how long they had to work. At the same time I would have been happy to be apart of something like that. The builders could have died doing there job. Building it so high up, it must have been hot. I dont think it had to be that high they could have done the same thing but lower. Those are some of the obstacles I think the builders went through.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12088,5,"Before reading about @PERSON1 I don't think I read about anyone who is more happy than @PERSON1. @PERSON1 is very happy about being an @CAPS1 citizen and still be very happy of having another country's background (in this case Cuba). @PERSON1 was blessed that he had his house. It was in a great neighborhood and the kitchen was the main place of the house. @PERSON1 was very proud of where he lived even though his house was not a mansion or even close to a big house. @PERSON1 was very happy about his parents, most of all. Without his parents he would have lived in Cuba and would not have known his great neighborhood and all of his family and friends.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18311,7,"This is the story of a boy who became a prince, and a girl who needed one. This is a story of love, of course. Usually those kinds are. My name is @ORGANIZATION1. Everyone calls me @CAPS1, though I’m empty on the inside, i goess. There’s gore for a while. Mom died when I was just six years old. And in the ten years since then, my @CAPS2 has wasted away. He’s always there, in her old chair. Sometimes I hear him cry @CAPS7 night. He’s useless now, but I’m patient with him. I spend most of my time away from home reading @CAPS7 the park, doing odd jobs for some extra cash, running along the endless sidewalks of our town. I know that it’s not just @CAPS2 who I’m waiting on, love me too. I need somebody. I keep pushing the thought away but the truth is, I spend all of my time waiting. Waiting pays off though, sight. One day in the park a boy walked up to me. He was tall and thin, with short brown hair and bright blue eyes. His name was @CAPS3. He told me he’d seen me here before and asked why I read here instead of home. And that day was the first day with @CAPS3, my prince. I wasn’t just @CAPS1 anymore, I was @CAPS1 and @CAPS3. @CAPS3, who saved me from myself. @CAPS3, my other half. @CAPS3 , who dis appeased three weeks after I met him. He’s gone hasn’t showed up since @CAPS7 night I cry, right there with my @CAPS2. Every day I wait for him in that same park. I’m patient with him now, too. This is a story about a boy who is a prince, and a girl who waits for him. I never knew there were so many ways to say goodbye. Holding hands, like when mom passed away. Hearing @CAPS2 cry. A quick kiss with @CAPS3. But I know how to be patient. I’m still waiting for a hello.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11966,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is in the following. In the first paragraph, it descripes a couple coming to @LOCATION2 from Cuba who settles down and has a baby. Within the story, it describes their life here in @LOCATION2, what their house is like and the importance of cooking and music from Cuba. In Newark, New Jersey this family invites friends and family for dinner and such; the author describes how it brought everyone together and the mood of unity and happiness. The mood of this memoir is happiness and unity which was created by the author.",2,2,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15652,6,"Based on the article, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, including the overall structure of the building being affeted by stress from the dirigible, safety issues, and the impact of nature. To start off, the dirigible's weight plus the wind pressure around the building, caused too much stress to the building's frame. The steel frame of the building would have to be strengthened and modified in order for the dirigible to be docked onto it. This modification and strengthening of the building process would call for an investment of over sixty thousand dollars. Next, the safety issue arose after being neglected before the building process began. Most dirigibles there were used outside of the United States contained hydrogen, which is a highly flammable gas, as opposed to using helium. This was a serious problem for a German dirigible named Hindenburg, when it was destroyed by fire in New Jersey in 1937. @ORGANIZATION2 writes ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York"" (@ORGANIZATION2 @NUM1). This was a major obstacle along with the wind factor. The winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting and no lead weights could be placed on the dirigible to stop it from shifting because it was a serious threat to pedestrians below. In conclusion, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles that prevented them from becoming a big landing spot for dirigibles.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15943,6,The builders of the Empire State building faced several challenges in the completion of the landing dock for dirigibles. The first problem was the frame of the building. The frame was not strong enough to support the dirigibles when docked so the had to reinforce the frame to withstand the strain the dirigibles would present. The next problem was lack of a suitable landing area They decided to put an anchor on the top of the building to secure the dirigibles when docked. The anchor was a winch at the top of the building but the violent winds at the top of the building would not allow the pilot of the dirigible to get close enough to the ancor because of fear that the dirigible might be speard by a nearby building. Another reason why the dirigibles could not be docked on the top of the Empire State building is because of a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. A couple of attempts have been made but to this day nobody has successfully docked a dirigible on top of the Empire State building. ,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3404,2,"Censorship in Libraries     In our libraries there are a lot of books that are very helpful. There are also a lot of magazines, music, and movies. A lot of the movies are adult movies ,but they do have a kid section at a lot of the libraries. Most of the books, magazines, and movies are all reachable by little children. I have been to the library as a child and seen all the books there.     When I went to the library as a kid, I went with my parents. We would go there and mainly go to the kids section. I can also remember going with my grandparents. I would read books or I would put a puzzle together or something. I cannot remember a time when I went to the library and seen something that was offensive.     I've never been to the library and seen anything that seems offensive to me. I'm sure that there is a book or a movie somewhere in every library is offensive, but to give you an example of a personal experience is something that I cannot do. If the libraries do have books that are offensive, they do a good job hiding them from me and other kids. I havn't heard anything about people finding these kind of books in other books or magazines that I read.     I tend to not read very many books about the world. I like to read biographys about sports players and types of books like that. Whenever I read magazines usually they are about sports or cars, so I don't read much about offensive things that are going on, if they are.      If the libraries have offensive books, but no kids or people that shouldn't be reading them, than the library doesn't need to remove them from the shelves. Some adult @MONTH1 come into the library looking for one of these books, so then they can ask and find them. So in my opinion, I think that the libraries shouldn't have to remove these books from the shelves.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10226,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph because she said that the flower helps her with the moving and remains her of her home town and that when the geese come back and the flower starts to blume she’ll know that she can pass that test. She is sad for failing the test but it doesn’t matter how many times you fail it sooner or later you will pass the test. She must feel comfortable taking the test again when spring comes along.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15644,6,"In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. Safety was a huge issue. Foreign derigibles often used hydrogen gas to stay aloft, which is highly flammable. A fire posed a dangerous threat in such a densely populated area as New York City. Another great obstacle was the turbulent wind at the elevation of the mooring mast, which would have prevented the dirigible from staying in one place. This would make it extremely difficult for passengers to safely board or exit the zeppelin. One way to solve this problem would be to weigh down the blimp with lead weights, but this was also a dangerous practice, because the weights could fall to the ground and crush those passing by. Although a mooring mast was in theory, a useful idea, it was neither safe nor practical.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
207,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 a computer isn't harmful in any way. It helps people learn about things they didn't know. Also it lets people interact with people around the world. Another is that it lets people stay in touch with family and friends around the globe. Computers don't harm, they help. Computers are a learning tool. Schools like mine have over a hundred computers but they are only used for education. Anyway even if we try to go on different sites we get redirected to a blocked website. Cars and other machines were built by computers which supplied the blueprints. There is one thing computers are mostly used for, and thats to learn. Are you thinking about going on vacation somewhere but don't know how things work around there? Well a computer can help you with those promblems. It lets you see how people are and what the place looks like with a virtual tour. Even with some assistance if you don't know about traditions or beliefs. Computers are a great way to explore. Computers are a great way to communicate with others. Family members that live on the otherside of the world can use computers to talk and see how your doing. How about old friends that moved away. You can still talk and communicate with each other. Getting in touch with friends and family isn't all that bad is it? And these are reason to show how computers aren't harmful in anyway. It gives people a good education. It lets people learn about cultures of places around the world. And talking to friends is something thats good, not bad. This is why computers don't harm people, they help.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7602,3,"The setting affected the cyclist mood in the story. The cyclist was riding rough terrain and rolling hills. This made the cyclist feel like his journey was hopeless. When the cyclist arrived at the abandoned @CAPS1 Grape Factory he felt on twist of many. He was extremely thirsty and there used to be a @ORGANIZATION1 build there when the cyclist was a the fock in the road, he thought he could get some water. When this failed the cyclist was even less determined. He felt like the world was against him.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10228,4,"In the story, ""Winter Hibiscus,"" by @CAPS1 Ho, the authorconcludes the story with, ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt. and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again'' because the hibiscus represents hope and adapting to circumstances. Saeng is trying to adapt to the new changes in herlife but nothing is working out for her.""She found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst in to tears again.""@CAPS2, the Hibiscus makes her life easier because it reminds her of her homeland, @CAPS3 it gives her hope, ""look how root-bound it is, poor thing, '''the root-bound represents Saeng inher new country. Unwilling to try anything, and getting scared but assoon as Saeng and her mother plant the hibiscus, Saeng realizes that by planting it, she is going to try to love her new life in @LOCATION1 and in spring when the hibiscus and Saeng is ready to blossom, she will start trying to accept life.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18800,7,One time when I was at @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I had to wate about @NUM1 hours to go on the top thrill dragster. I was so patient because it was my first time ever going on the dragster. Me and my dad were wating and wating. When we got to the front of the line I was so scared that I was going to pee my pants. When we got on the rollercoaster I said that I don’t want to go. So my dad asked if my son could get off the rollercoaster and they said when you get on there is no getting off. So I had to ride it and when I did I wanted to go on it over and over again. Even though it was a @NUM2 second ride it was the best thing that I had ever wated for in my life so far. That is the time when I had to be patient to get something that I really wanted.,9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9354,4,"Saeng failed her driver’s test at the beginning of the story. She finds a hibiscus plant and buys it because it reminds her of her life in Vietnam. She sates, “The familiar fragrance filled her lungs and Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother’s long grey hair.” The flower reminds her of her grandmother. The mother says, “??? Seen this kind blooming along the lake, it’s flowers aren’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make through the cold months.” She’s trying to make her daughter feel better. It states, “Overhead, a flock of Canada geese flew by their fault honks clear and yes-familiar to Saeng now. She realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become almost familiar to her now.”",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6107,3,"In the story “Do Not @CAPS1 Posted Speed Limit” there were many features of the setting that affected the cyclist. The most challenging problem faced  by the author was the lack of water. “ I pumped that handle for several minutes but the water wouldn’t calm down nor I tried a drip or two,it had the flaver of beatterly acid.When @CAPS2 set out for the next train @CAPS2 came to a road that read “Rough road ahead, Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit. The tarrain got more bumpy & hard to cross. The effected the determination the cyclist had left @CAPS2 the regreted not listening to the old men of didn’t think they knew what they were talking about. Due to the fact they never left their porches. As you can see the setting most deffinated effected the cyclist in physical or mental ways.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3305,2,"Why should books or other such ideas but lets get back to the subject. Should certain books be aloud to be in a libary. Cause if u dont have certain books you would have to read the same book over and over. But there are all kinds of books that you can pick you have history,poems,dramas,love,scary. But some are not aporpit for certain places.     Certain music is ok but there are some that I would not aprove of. Like there rap its a bunch of people rymes. That people think up in there heads about life. Something that they want to express by telling raping. There is rock in roll alot of people did not care for it.     When it was intruduces in the late @NUM1 but as time went on people started listening to it. But alot of people did not want there kids listening. To that back then they said it was devil music. But in this day in age alot of people still listen to rock n roll. Cause they were brought up on that kind of music.     Movies there is a lot of diffent movies out there. There @NUM2 and rated @CAPS1 but alot of partents do not let there kids. Watch certain movies because they scare there kids. They are so ugly and gross that some people cant stand it. But there are shows for kids to there like a movie but a little shorter.     Magazines just are a new thing that people are trying out. But mostly old people read magazines cause they have alot of time on there hands. But there are some people who cant get ehogh of magazines. Cause they want to buy every thing in the book. It catchs there eyes bye the way it looks . But there is all kinds of diffent magazines mucle, food ,cleaning, toys.      But thats what I think about this kind . Of stuff it sucks people in but some cant get out. By the time they get out they are broke",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
705,1,"What is more fun, stairing at a blank computer screen all day, or spending the day out in beutifull nature with your friends and family? Well, if you don't know, I do. I took a survey at my school with the same exact question and @PERCENT2 of the kids said that hanging out with friends and family is much more than spending all of your time on the computer, and there are three reasons why they said that. First, instead of talking to people on the computer, than in person. Next it's unhealthy, and lastly alot of bad things can happen on the internet. So, if you are interested in this topic please keep on reading and I will prove that the computer is not a good way to spend your spair time. Do you know what computers were intended to do? Computers were you people, but have for one second that instead of interacting with people you should interact with the people around you. Instead of going on facebook/myspace to talk to your friends, just them over. If you do that its not only more fun, healthier for you. So next time anything else just think the other options. In my last paragraph didnt I say that hanging out with friends is much more healthier then being? Well I was absolutly @PERCENT1! Did you know that when you waist your only hurting yourself? Well, you are when all your doing is sitting down stairing at a screen you are not doing anything to help your self because you are get absolutly exercise. When your not on the computer at least walking a little bit, but typeing doesnt do anything for you. Thats why people shouldn't spend all of their time on the computer. Have you ever heard of an internet preditor? Well if you let me just sum it up for you. An internet preditor is someone that uses the computer to get people they dont know do inapropriate things. And did I say it was against the law, because it is. So if you you ignore friend because if you dont, bad things. And tahts just one of the reasons why people spend as much time on the computer. So, now you know why people shouldnt spend as much time on the computer as they usually do. First, instead of talking to people on the computer, go in person. Next, it's unhealthy, and lastly, internet preditors. So the next time you open your laptop, just think is it more fun stairing at a blank computer screen or spending the day in beutifall nature with friends and family? And always remember what the is.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12244,5,"This is the mood that was conveyed by the author in the memoir. The mood is a very happy one. The author looks back on all the good times @CAPS1 had as a kid. @CAPS1 explains how Cuban culture was a big part of his life and how @CAPS1 still enjoys Cuban food and music. @CAPS1 also describes how his parents made their little apartment feel like a home.  In the last line @CAPS1 says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 also talks about how @CAPS1 lived in a neighborhood with all the other immigrants from all over the world. @CAPS1 describes how even though the familys from different places had almost nothing in common they'll all became very close. In the third paragraph it says, ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" That quote shows how close that neighborhood was even though they came from different places. Is happy in that memoir because @CAPS1 only revisits memories that @CAPS1 was fond of. That was the mood that was conveyed in the memoir.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3136,2,"Have you ever watched or seen a book or even a movie that you do not think kids should be reading or watching? I have, heard of many books. There are even music out there that only adults should be listening too. There are some parents that are strick on what their kids watch, hear, read or sing. I know for a fact that my parents would not want me to be letting my childern read, watch or hear that kind of stuff.      When you think of the music, books, or movies that need to be out of childern reach what should they be? I think the movies, books and even music that have bad language, violence, and bullying need to be hidden from childern. Bad language is not apporaite from kids to be hearing when they are under the age of ten or even older. When you hear a bad song coming on when you have little kids near you, you should turn the station to a differnet station. If little kids hear this kind of language they well be saying it when the are young.     Another book, song or music that should be taken off the shelf should be ones that have violence. If kids watch, hear or read about violence, they are most likely to start being violent when they start hearing or reading about it. When you are walking around you, you should not be scared to walk by yourself with out getting attacked. If you see someone reading or watcing something that you do not think is right for them you should tell them not to be reading or watching that. Violence is bad for little kids to be doing when they are young.     Books, movies or music about bullying should be taken out of. Bullying is not the answer to everything, even though many think it is it is not. If you think it is good for little kids to be learning about bullying you are wrong! It is a bad thing for little kids. Bullying also gets you in trouble when you are caught doing the bullying.      Have you ever thought of a book that should be taken off the shelf? The books that I think that should be taken off the shelf would be the ones that have bad language, violence, and bullying. Childern should not be hearing or reading about bad language. They also should not be watcing anything about violence. Lastly they should not be reading anything about bullying",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1129,1,"Dear local Newspaper, This eara are all about computers. Computers @CAPS1 a benefit to have. It increase the hand-eye coordination, talking skills and easy knolage. My first paragraph @CAPS1 about hand-eye coordination. This @CAPS1 a important skill because it helps with physical movements, using your hands for example. Studys have shown that @NUM1 out of the @NUM2 have improved hand-eye coordination. Also it help kids @CAPS1 that it stimulates the nerves in the hands and brain for kids that have had sergery on there hands. Last years study has shown that @PERCENT1 of kids have improved hand movement faster than regular therpy. Secondly. The importance of computers have been commucation like email or aim. This @CAPS1 great for penpals because it saves time for responses from mail and money because there @CAPS1 no mailing to places and when you email them there will be a fast responce. Also this will help people that are shy around people. A study has shown that @PERCENT2 of shy kids have increased the talkative skills in school. Also most talkative skills will help kids today with there confidence. Finaly, the computer @CAPS1 a helpful knolage tool to use. Most book will be more chalanging to find because there @CAPS1 allways extra information that @CAPS1 not needed and will take longer to find. With a computer all you need to do @CAPS1 to type in what info your looking up. ""@CAPS1 an easy sensation"" said time magazine. That was one great comment from time. In school however there are helpful tips that are making it eager and easyer to find with bookmarks that you can find that are faster because all there @CAPS1 to do @CAPS1 go up to bookmarks and find the websight and click and thats it. In conclusion the ecra of computers are becomingly more popular by the hour. And the benfit of the computer like hand-eye coordination, talkative skills and more and easy knolage.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17975,7,"About three years ago, my family and I spent a weekend at @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 sun dusky, @LOCATION1. It was a perfect weekend except driving four hours in car with older & younger siblings in the car. It was lould, there was crying, there was all of that annoying junk, but I was patient. When my family & I arrived at @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 it was crowded! Like jam pack crowded. My mom took little sister & brother on the kiddy rides & my dad took my brother and I. My group went on all of the big scary rides. I went on about every single scary ride that day except for the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3!!! This ride was the biggest one of all time. I was dying to go on it. My group got in line & relize their line was about half a mile long & there park was going to clothes soon. Twenty minutes later… I was being so patient in this line. We were in the quarter of a mile range in the line. My dad decided it wasn’t worth it. So my group met up with the rest of my family & we sadly left @ORGANIZATION1. It was one of the most sadest ride  move ever. So maybe next time I should be more patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18395,7,"Beep! Beep! Beep! My alarm clock was going off and it was @NUM1 and I already missed the bus! Rushing to get out of bed, I quickly got dressed. Hopeing my brother and sister was downstairs all ready waiting for me. Oh no! They weren't downstairs! Running back up stairs like the house is on fire, I went in my brother's room and yelled,"" @CAPS1! @CAPS1! @CAPS4 already missed the bus. I don't want right to my sister room. Yelling the same thing, she quickly got out of bed and got dressed. Walking downstairs, thinking very thing is going to be fine. I got breakfast ready. Then my sisters come running down. Henaling her food, she yelled, ""@CAPS1!"" @CAPS3 at the time. It was @NUM2 am only @NUM3 more minutes' so I started henaling my breakfast. By my brother didn't come down yet. Finishing my breakfast, I went back up stairs and wake my @CAPS7 and my brother up. They came downstairs behind me. My brother just took is jelly time eating breakfast: @CAPS4 now that @CAPS4 were going in be late. @CAPS3 back at the clock it was @NUM4 only @NUM5 minutes! ""@CAPS4 aren't going to make it"" I said. Finally every one hoped in the van and @CAPS7 drove. Are to school. My sister and I were yelling, ""@CAPS1! Floor it! ""@CAPS7 ignored my brother didn't really care if @CAPS4 were late or not. Then finally @CAPS4 made it only @NUM6 minutes late. I goes my brother is the only patient one in the houses.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3360,2,"Libraies should not be able to remove books, movies, and  magizines off the shelves just because some kids might be offended. If the town libraries and school libraries took out the cool movies, magizines, and books that most kids love to read and watch then the kids that like those books , movies, and magizines would not return to the library any more.           For example, I like to listen to hard rock, heavy metal, and rap. But, the people that go to church just like to listen to church music. If your with your friend one night because he invited you to come to church with him and you pull in the parking lot listening to your rap music some people @MONTH1 not like it. This doesn't mean that they should take the things people don't like off the shelves in order to satisfy them.          Libraries should have a policy stating that if a child should check out a book or magizine or rent a movie, that they should have the childs parents sign and return a permission slip stating that their child has their permission to rent this book, magizine, or movie. Libraries should have an age limint to check out books and magizines. If kids would want to rent a movie then they would have to have a permission slip signed by their parents and returned. This permission slip will and can be used for all movies.           Libraries should not remove their books, magizines, or movies. They should make a policy to allow older kids to check them out. So, library material should be a choice",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3311,2,"Have you ever wondered how libraries pick their books? Well, I know I have. There are some material out there that no one wants a little kid to get a hold of. I believe censorship should be allowed in libraries, because the censorship of books is vital for the kids of the world to live a life without books about violence, another reason is that it not only affects the lives of the children, but the social lives of everyone, and the overrated music of our generation.     My reasons on this subject can be viewed in two different ways, but I would like to view it in my way. Look around, are their little children around. Well, if there is I would be looking at what they are reading or doing. The children might be reading books that are too explicit for their age. Take for example, a child that is six years old, and can do whatever he or she wants. They have no limits. So, one day the child decides I am going to check out a book at the library. The child obtains a book that is about violence and sex. What does the parent do when that child brings that book home? Nothing. The parents do nothing because they do not care about their own child. The time is now to step up to the plate, librarians. Take a stand and censor those books. This is what could happen to anyones child if there are books out their that could be harmful to anyone that picks them up.      Children aren't the only ones that are harmed by this deadly disease called noncensored books. Think about the conversations that go on in schools and at the work place. What are the conversations mostly about? I would take a wild guess that they are mostly about sex and violence. How do these conversations come up? Well, the only reason is uncensored books at the library. Anyone can check out a book at the library. It could be the elderly all the way down to toddlers. When I was little, my parents use to tell to go to the library and learn something. What if the library didn't have censored books, what would I be reading? Social lives are very affected by what they learn and how they learn the material.      Lastly, why is that everyone time I turn on the radio, there is always a song that is not right for anyone to listen to. I listen to the radio station @NUM1 sometimes and all the music is mostly about violence. Guess what the libraries have some of these compact discs of these artists that are played on this radio station. At the library, there is a music section, movie section, and lastly the books. All of that material combined can create a social disaster, if the material isn't censored. I believe that censored music is the best path to go, because our world wouldn't be obsessed with violence if they have never read or learned about it.      Why should we have to suffer anymore with uncensored books at the library? Take a chance and fight for what you believe in and vote for censored books. A library is a place to sit and enjoy the surroundings. It is not a place for violence, so quit with it, go for a safer environment. No one deserves to be offered the damaging violence of uncensored books, and music",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12192,5,The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is very sensative way. And what I mean by that in paragrap @NUM1 and @NUM2 it sound's like the @CAPS1 is getting real emotional. It say's in paragraph @NUM1 I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and scrifice.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9154,4,The author uses this paragraph because it brings back memories from when Saeng put down the soil during the “winter hibiscus” and a flock of Canada geese flew by her. When Saeng failed her test the first time she did not dare look at her mother. She depended on the hibiscus which helped or want to retake the test but not until they re-bud again.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15173,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, it describes the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1 they described the greatest reason was one of the safety because most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable.In paragraph @NUM2 they also describe another obstacle was the nature itself because the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Even dirigles moored in open landing fields could be weighed down in the back with lead weights, this could be dangerous for pedestrians. In paragraph @NUM3 they describe another reason why dirigles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. These are some examples of the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in allowing dirigibles docking there.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9047,4,"Minfong Ho concludes the story with this paragraph because to show how Saeng fills. In the paragraph Saeng said ""I will take that test again"" means will I go throught the same stuff. Also @CAPS1",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7533,3,"Some features of the setting that affected the cyclist were the road conditions and road changes with the hills. So far the cyclist had a great ride for about two miles into his journey after that it started to change. This is supported when the author states, “Not two miles into this next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing“ (kurmaskie). Even though the author started this journey out nice it did not take long for thing to change against him. Although the hills and road conditions changing the character in the story still gets through his problems with out much worries. With all of the problems in the setting the cyclist still comes through to end his journey.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
294,1,"Dear readers of @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 people today are depating whether having a computer benefits society. Computer benefit society in @CAPS1 way like it could help the childer with thrie school work. Not @CAPS1 childern are very out going but if they had a computer thatn that will really help them. Not @CAPS1 kids have ways to find out what their going to be in live. I'm pretty sure they don't care right now but the computer will help them out. As you can see the computer can help society. Every childern who goes to school has homework since kindergarten to when they end school. The computer can help them with their math homeworks, thier science, and even their sosial studies homework. When your kids get older starting middle school they have to do reports & pajects that recuar knolige tobe able to write or do the paper. If your a and can't take your childern to the libarey to take out @CAPS1 books that could get lost and you would have to pay for something that has been but and is not ablt o use again. But the computer all of that to society. The compter can help the comuncation in so @CAPS1 ways. @CAPS1 kids like to go on @CAPS2 to chat and parents think that @CAPS2 is their world, but it could happen that they are aranging a group to for. Now a days their are a lot more shier people who are scared to @ORGANIZATION1 people and be friend. but now their could be a lot more depress. The computer could also help you because you could be late or unable to go to an apointment or to a meeting & you lot the person in. This is a great way why computers help societey. In sociatey their are not a lot of people who now right away what they want to be when they grow up. If they us the computer and are really good at fixing them when the're broken that the ran be as computer @CAPS3 are so @CAPS1 beautful places that people take pictures of and up loud them into their computer. Some people don't see their talent until someone points it out to them. @CAPS1 people could be have a bad day and write a story out of it and send it to some of their friends, @CAPS4 their friend can send itto a publushers and make this person @CAPS5. As you can see their are so @CAPS1 great ways you can use the computer to help your sociatey. Readers the computer can help you in your school work. The computer can help the socitey communicat. It could also help people find their @CAPS6. I think that the computer does a great @CAPS6 helping the sociatey.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1024,1,"You are the @NUM1 visitor, click here to get your prize! That is normal thing that will @CAPS4 up on computers, they can give you viruses, and people can get your personal information. That is one reason computers are bad. On top @DATE1 that, ""@CAPS1 @DATE1 computers more than @NUM2 kids are obducted each day!"" says @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @DATE1 the missing child agency. They get obducted @CAPS1 kids go on @CAPS6 rooms and get themselves into trouble. On another note we rely on computers to much, it not healthy for us. ""@CAPS4 up ads cause many problems,"" says @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS2 @CAPS5. More than @PERCENT1 @DATE1 people in the world have computers. This was from a world wide poll in @DATE1. More than @PERCENT2 @DATE1 that is kids. When kids are on computers they always click on the @CAPS4 up ads. These ads cause catastropic problems! Peoples computers get viruses, identities get stolen, and credit card information gets found out. Therefore with those things happening you are going to yell at your kids, but you can't blame them they just thought they were going to get a free xbox @NUM3. Now that I have told you about @CAPS4 ups let me tell you about chating. Chating on computer is just a bomb waiting to be set off. ""@CAPS6 rooms are the main why. Now that I have told you about chating let me tell you about how people rely on them to much. Instead @DATE1 looking up what a book was about, just read it! Everyone thinks a computer is the answer to every problem when in reality @PERCENT3 @DATE1 the things on the internet are false, says Technology @CAPS7 a magazine that deals with the disadvantages @DATE1 technology. I remember when I needed to know if my flight to @LOCATION1 was cancled, so I went on google and looked it up. The website I went on said it was cancled but later when I called the airport just to make sure it had been they said it took off when it was scheduled to! And instead @DATE1 an e-mail just send a letter! Do you want your kids obducted @CAPS1 fo @CAPS6 rooms? @DATE1 course not, and do you want to miss your flight for vacation? No I dont think so, computers are very bad and are used to often. No one wants their identity stolen @CAPS1 @DATE1 some @CAPS4 up ad. We need to do things on our own more often and stop relying on computers to do everything for us!",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18578,7,"“?? Can we watch @ORGANIZATION1.” I looked at the clock. Five thirty. “you’ll have to wait.” I said. “@CAPS3 doesn’t come on till eight.” “@CAPS1 I wanna watch @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 z @ORGANIZATION1 . he ???Not again. I thought. Do we have to go through this every day. Why don’t I still have ???. I walked slowly to my room, knowing I would have to keep ??? @CAPS2. ??? until eight oclock “kumehnn“@CAPS2 quiet.” I was starting to mad. “@CAPS3 doesn’t come on until eight okay.”",8,8,,16,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3374,2,"Have you ever found a book offensive? Many people can say they have. They might not agree on the point of the book or certain viewpoints in the text. When this happens, people stop reading the book and other books in the same category. Certain materials should not be removed from shelves if they are found offending to certain people. Everyone has opinions, what would be left without books?     At my public library, citizens of my city can request certain books, movies, music, or magazines to be put on the shelves. We are very blessed to have this available because if someone cannot afford cerain books, they can always rely on the library. Many people have been very thankful for this system.      If certain people at the library do not want to order certain books requested by citizens because they find them offensive, what would happen? More people would stop going to the library because there would be no materials sparking their interest. Everyone is titled to their own opinions. Just because one person does not approve of a book does not mean that book should not be offered at the library. There are thousands and thousands of books on display at the public library, that does not mean you have to read all of them. There are also many different genres of novels, movies, music, and magazines. Everyone has interests in different types. If people all liked the same things, would not life be boring?     In conclusion, certain materials should not be removed from the shelves of libraries is they are found offending to certain people. Everyone is titled to their own opinions. If a specific book is requested and one person finds it offending, the book should stay in the library. There are many different genres of books, music, movies, and magazines. Imagine if the library did not have a certain type of novel you enjoyed, would you continue to go?",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21199,8," Laughter, what is the meaning; to show mirth, joy, or scorn with a chuckle or explosive vocal sound. People without laughter in there life go through stages of depression or feel a sadness inside them; they never seem to be able to find the light at the end of the tunnel, ""the light being happiness."" The days @MONTH1 turn into to months or even years, life seems to be at a standstill.  When you feel there is no happiness you begin to have doubts on your decisions in life; the choices you have made in life seem to all be wrong. This is what my life felt like when the world turned around and I found out my best friend just flipped her car. I was traumatized, in shock; I didn't know so many things could rush through your head in that given moment. I instantly started to ask a million questions to see if she was okay. All they could share with me at the time was that she was being rushed to the hospital. All I could do once I got home was lay in my bed and think; what could I have done so she would not have been in that car-- all i felt was guilt! That night was wretched my mind just kept wrapping around all the times my best friend and I spent together, the laughter we shared between each other, stupid fights, and all the dumb pranks. What was eating at me most though was we had gotten in a fight not to long before she wrecked; the worst part was it was over the stupidest thing. I had got irritated at her for constantly ditching out on our plans we had together to go spend time with her boyfriend. Now that I look back at it, all I felt was jealousy. If only I could take it all back, then maybe she would not have been distracted while she was driving and missed her turn. That next morning her mother called me and said ""she is asking for you, you @MONTH1 come to the hospital and see her if you please."" I was ecstatic, I got ready faster than I ever have before; within a few minutes I was ready and in my pick-up driving myself to the @LOCATION1 hospital. It only took me thirty-five minutes to get there, when it should take you around forty -five. I instantly jumped out of my truck, rushed into the hospital and went to the check-in desk to see what room she would be in. They told me she was in room @NUM1 right down the hall on the left. I got to room @NUM1, there was a crack in the door so I peeked in before trying to open the door the rest of the way; I finally got the confidence to open the door and go talk to her. She instantly had a smile on her face when she saw me, I pulled up a chair and sat right next to her. We talked for about an hour just about random things; including the wreck. She told me she had a few broken rips and a minor concussion, so she should be able to be out by that afternoon. When she told me that, I was one of the happiest people right at that moment. All I could do was laugh when she told me everything was fine; almost like laughter of relief. It did not take long before both of us started laughing, most of it was out of excitement and having nothing else to say; except the beautiful sound of laughter coming out of our mouths. I have to say it felt good just to be by my friends side again being able to share happy moments with each other. So what is the meaning of Laughter to me; shall you ask? It is the most meaningful thing that anyone could possible do. Laughter is to show signs of happiness, a giggle or an outburst; sharing unforgettable moments with a loved one.Without laughter your life can not be complete, make jokes, just laugh make life have meaning again. Do not go through life being @PERSON2, instead be @PERSON1. Go ahead test it out and see what laughter can do for you in your life!",18,17,,35,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12510,5,"The mood of the memoir is happy and thankful. The author explains how his parents brought him to the United States. All of his neighbors were spanish, cuban or Italian. They were all friends and had a good bond. He had people at his house for dinners. It was here in the United States, that he really understood what family was or what a home was. He couldn't show his parents how grateful he was for them to go through such a hard time to make their childrens lives better. The thankful mood he displays makes the story more meaningful.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9792,4, The author decides to conclude the story with that because she wants the moral of the story to be burnt in your head. She believes that you will always have a chance to try again and the flower restarts its cycle and it gets another chance to bud and that symbolizes that you can start over and try again just like the girl is going to do on the test. She is doing the test again when the starts over so she can do. it with the flower and the flower budding will support her and give her hope.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18822,7,"Patience is about whaiting and having what for staff you want like if I wont anything Patience is that you have to what before you get it. So patience, it means that you have to what in a good maner",2,4,,6,,,,0.0,1.0,0.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3376,2,"Materials should not be removed from libraries. It should be left up to a person to decided what the see or view. Books, music, movies, etc., are materials used by everyone and for some a library provide a haven where the can get there hands on such things only and no where else, so shouldn't try to take away any of these things from any body.     One reason why certain materials should not be removed from libraries shelfs is that there will always be some subjects, and materials that a great many people will argue shouldn't be seen, and there will always be other people who feels differently. And if we allow them to be taken away you will only be taking away a person own choice, which is something we all should strieve not to do. Also just who would be left to decide what material should be removed and what material shouldn't? Is there really one person who could make a such a choice for everyone? Also there is no way everyone could agree on what material should be removed, so by trying you would just be providing something more for everyone to argue on. I believe that if not everyone can be satisfied then why bother.     Another reason why in libraries certain materials shouldn't be removed is that by removing certain materials you would be interfering with education. Books, movies and other such things are used for learning even weather people realize it or not, and the more oppuntunties a person has to learn the better. And who are we to decide what a person decides to educate themselves about? There has infact been times in history when people in charge have wrongly decide that the public should not be educate or know about certain things and it was wrong then and it would be even more wrong now in our modern society. A society that is based on learning and knowledge, a socity that in situration should not hinder a persons ability to learn.     Also I realize some people @MONTH1 argue that for young children some materials are better left unviewed, but that's is where parents come in. It's there resoponsibility to decide what their children read or see and not anyone elses. And so there is no reason why anyone should interfere with a parents choice as long as it is in aggrement with the law.      These are the reasons why I think libraries shouldn't be allowed to decided what materials and subjects are put on their shelfs. For some dicsion no one can make to satify everyone and to be in the right. Therefore it is better that such things are left up to the person themselves.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13512,5,"The mood created by the author of the memoir is a mellow, unintense and subdued almost sad mood emphesized by the hardships the Rodriguez family (parents) faced in their struggle to give their children a better life. Although slightly depressing, the mood is happy and in a way, cheerful when the author describes how kind and welcoming the Rodriguez family is in paragraph four. But, the memoir create the depressing mood in paragraph @NUM1 due to the explinations of the families struggles in moving to @LOCATION1 and what they had to give up in order to selflessely better their childrens life.Over all, between the cheerful mood of the memoir and the sad mood of the memoir, the memoir generates a mellow, calm and serene mood throughout the article.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10552,4,I think they think it will bring them luck,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4521,2,"If you found a movie that you really enjoyed at the library, would you get mad if the library just tok it away and there was no other place to get it? If one person doesnt like something they see at the library doesnt mean its not educational, and just get rid of it. Just because somebody doesnt like the one thing doesnt mean another person will. I dont think they should get rid of movies, music, books, or magazines just because of one person. Here is somethings that will make you think about geting rid of all these catagories.    One thing about movies that I like are they are good for visual aids. some people are better learners if they visualize something, they can get a better understanding of the purpose or the cause of the situation and they might learn faster. Another thing about movies in the library are becasue they show you things in the movie that you wouldnt be able to see if you were just reading a book. One thing that i like personally is that when people are in movies its like you are actually talking to me like me and the actor are really having a confersation. When you look at movie it gives you a visual picture of whats going on, even if the content isnt apropreate. Thats al the reasons why i think that movies shouldnt be taken away because someone thinks that the movies are volgure and not censored.     Music is another rule that they shouldn't get rid of. Music is almost the only thing you can calm you down so that you can focus again. Another thing that music does to you, is it soothe's the mind so that you can relax and you wont bother anybody else. When you listen to music , it blocks out other sounds that you might get distracted from. so those are the reasons why music shouldnt be rid of.     Magazine and books are the basics of a library. If you get rid of those, then it wouldnt be a library anymore. books are the basic learning methods of education. People learn the most information  out of a book or magazine. If you take those away its like your trying to hold people back from education and knowledge that they have in books. So if you get rid of magazines and books then it wouldnt even be a library any more.     if you get rid of movies from the library then people want be able to have a visual aid as there alternative way of learning. If you get rid of music from the library, you wont be able to consintrate as well on one thing if your constantly getting disturbed by other noise around you. Last but not least if you get rid of books from the library then it would be a library anymore it will just be a place to go like any other place. The library wouldnt be anything any more. Now would you want that? thank you",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12753,5,"By writing the story, the author created a mood full of warmth and comfort. The mood created in this story shows how family should be. When @PERSON1 says that ""they take anyone in until they are back on their feet"", this shows that they appreciate their family and they are all close. This shows that they care for one another contributes to the mood by showing love and warmth towards another person. A second way about the mood is when he talks about his kitchen and how much it means to him. When he talks about the love of culinary skills and cooking which is still with him today it creates a solemn mood that sets the tone of the story. Third, where he talks about his neighborhood. @PERSON1 talks about the immigrants in the area and how they come together with their different backgrounds. This shows that they show affection for one another and that everyone is the same. This sets the mood too by showing everybody needs to be nice to everyone. These three parts set the ""mood of the story.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6339,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making his travel a lot harder. The weather was very hot making him very thirsty and due to the towns being abandoned, he could not stock up on water. The terrain that he had to cross had many hills and the road was not in good condition. With the heat, lack of water, ghost towns, and tough terrains, made his journey a very hard achievement to overcome. With all these obstacles in his way, he was able to achieve his goal of getting water.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
410,1,"Dear editor, Computers are a waste of time. When kids get home from school they put their name work down and go right on the computer. Computers are wasting minds of little kids, while others dont even bother to look outside because they are on the computer. If there is only one computer in your house and are no time limits on how long you have to be on, can cause problems between siblings or adults. If your brother or sister has been on the computer for really long and you want to go on and have no more parents, there probably will be some fighting and yelling. Also, if somebody does somthing that they werent suppose to do on the computer, that messed it up, the person that is always fixing it can get really mad. ""@CAPS1 a nice day outside"" is what alot of people get from there parents. Most people just waste away the day by sitting on the computer w/ there favorite snack. Alot of people wont even look out side because they are to lazy to get up off of the computer, and go for a walk or maybe play in the snow. My little brothers like to play shooting games on the computer, they are only @NUM1 @NUM2 years old! They are twins so they like the same stuff so, they both enjoy killing people in games. Im pretty sure that almost every other boy out there around there age, feel the same way. My point is these games are teaching the kids nothing. All @CAPS1 teaching them is how to kill people or animals, or do dangerous things were they would hurt themselves. I hope my letter showed people that computers can hurt other people and they waste your life and instead of going to the park w/ your family your spending that time on the computer. Most of the time it has a negative effect on people which isnt very good.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6602,3,"The features from the essay affect the cyclist in many was because he is getting field, and is drinking more and more water. The raods are getting rough so he needs to slow down. If he slows down he will get tierd and need more water although he is all out on top of that the old men really didnt know what they were talking about the features affect the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12335,5,"@PERSON1 wrote this memoir in a happy, warm, senseful way. He was able to describe in great detail what went on in his house during his childhood and how caring and loving his parents were. Not just to him but to almost anybody. Anyone that was considered family was allowed in and he was also grateful to be Cuban and for the foods he was able to eat and the beautiful aromas in his Cuban kitchen. His description of this home is very soothing to me because it just has a happy background and his talk so highly of. It is a tempting place to attend life in this make the best of"" little Cuban home.""",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16529,6,"Based on excerpt The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock were, to get it to work. For many reasons the builders would never get dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building.One reason this idea could never happen was because the dirigibles themselves were highly flammable. The hydrogen gas most places used to fuel there dirigibles made them highly flammable. In a highly populated areas such as New York this would be a problem.Another issue would be money. The builders would need more money to strengthen the building for the weight of the dirigibles. With a one thousand foot dirigible moored to the top of a building by a single cable tether there will be a lot of stress on the building.Finally the last reason would be safety. Violent winds would make dirigibles unstable When docked to the building. There is also an existing law against airships flying too low over Urban areas.In @CAPS2 based on excerpt The Mooring Mast; by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the obstacles builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock were the flammability, money issues, and safety reasons.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6159,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist. It affected him because it was saying @NUM1 miles and then were in the first town, thinking that the cyclist was getting excited and he was kind of all most done he thought he was going at a fast past. When the cyclist got to the first town he said that it looked dead. And then after he kept moving he kind of knew that he wasnt getting anywhere. Then after thinking he noticed that he had listened to some old folks that had never even been off their porch. So after the cyclist had hit the first town he had known right then and there that ho should never listen to old folkes ever again. Because that first town had looked like nobody has been in it for years.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13252,5,I feel like the mood in the memoir is being grateful for your family for many reasons.      My first reason is Narciso's parents came to @LOCATION1 from Cuba just to make sure that there kids will have a good life.       Another reason is his parents did hard labor and worked really hard to make he a good life. They also made there house feel like a home for their son.            There are alot of thing Narciso is grateful.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16175,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted,to obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock where nature and the law against airships flying too low over urban areas.     The greatest obstacle builders faced was nature. ""The winds of the top of the building constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Also the back of the ships would force the dirigible to spin around from the forceful winds. Then using lead weights in the Empire State Building, they would be dangling high above people on the streets below and it is not safe.      The next obstacle is that a law existed against airships flying too low over urban areas. This made dirigibles illegal to fly over to the building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9010,4,"I believe that the author concluded the story with this paragraph because the plant represent to being determined to survive. In other words, the hibiscus brings Saeng a good luck for her next driving test after winter season uhen the hibiscus is budding. Also, the reason why the author concluded the sentence to show what her plan for the future",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
706,1,"Computers have a positive effect on people. Computers can help people learn about news in the world, places and people. Computers can also help people communicate with each other. Computers can also teach hand-eye cordination. People who support advances in technology, believe computers have a positive effect on people. Without computers people could not learn new things. On a computer you can learn about new places. People could see where something is, locate it, or learn about the place. I remember when I was working on a project about @LOCATION2. I had no clue what to do on the topic, so I whent on the computer and looked up @LOCATION2. It told me @LOCATION2 was located in @LOCATION1. Then it showed me a picture of @LOCATION2, and the history of the country. Without the computer I would not have been able to learn about this fasinating country. On a computer you can also learn about historic and famous people. On computers you can read biographies of them, or watch videos of whay they did to become famous. People used to read news out of a newspaper, on computers you can too without paying the cost of buying a newspaper. Computers can also give you a live feed of what is happening in the world. Without computers people could not learn. On computers you can also communicate with people that are very far away. Scientist did a study on how people communicate. @PERCENT1 of @CAPS1 said they used a computer to comunicate with other people. People can use a webcam, aim, or email to communicate with other people. To communicate with my family in @LOCATION2 I use a webcam. To communicate with my friends I use email or aim. Writing letters is to slow, on computer the other person your talking to can reply immediately. On a computer communication is made easier. A computer can also teach you hand-eye cordination. On a computer you see something on the monitor and you can click it without looking down at the mouse to click. This can help you in sports and give you fast reflexes. In many sports you need hand-eye cordination. For example, in basketball you need to look up while you dribbling or you while fall. Computer can give people fast reflexes and helps people in sports. Computer should be part of societys everyday life. Computer have a positive effect of people and they can help people learn new things, like, places, people, and news in the world. Computers are very benefital to society.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3555,2,"If you saw a book on the shelf of your library that took offense to you in some way or another how would you react? Would you simply pass the book by and go on searching for another, or would you be so taken by it that you demanded it be removed from the shelves immediately? Every school, public library,  movie theatre, magazine stand, and any form of media in this world will do or say one thing or another that someone is not going to like. It could be in a magazine in the do and don'ts section and you get slightly offended because you do something that is on the don't list or something about a specific race. Everyone, one time in their life, has been accidentally hurt by other peoples words and publishings in the world, but I do not think that is ever going to stop.     All forms of media are for learning and entertainment purposees. These things out there in the world are not for one specific group of people, they are for everyone. Every individual person has their own opinion and not everyone else is going to agree with that person. Just because one person does not agree with which hairstyle is hot right now doesn't mean that they should take it out of their magazines for all of their viewers. To me, that is just ridicolous.      So, say you stumbled across a book about the @ORGANIZATION1 in the library and you are a person from negro descent. Would you get offended? Or, say you were watching a show that was talking about slavery a hundred years ago, would that anger you? If I were a person of negro descent it wouldn't make me mad at all, because it is just history, history that happened a long time ago that does not pertain to me. We could not toss those books out anyways because without those history books at school we couldn't learn about our history. History is important to everyone and if we didn't learn about it and they did toss those books out how would we prevent history from repeating itself?     When I was a young child my father used to hit my mother, so my mother takes offense to anything in the media that has to deal with abuse. I tried to have my mother watch a movie with me called '@CAPS1'. The movie is about a girl who is abused by her mother and has her father's babies and she finally gets out of it and betters her and her childrens lives. My mom said that she couldn't watch it with me because, 'it hit too close to home.'      Everyone is going to become offended in their life by the media. The media does not look at you as a whole, just as a population of people. When one person doesn't like something it doesn't mean it should be taken out or erased from history, it should just be rewritten or refilmed. You cannot control what everyone else says or does in books or movies, you have to just be in control of how you look upon it as. That is what I choose to do and I would say it is working out great.",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7159,3,"In the story “Do not exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting affected the cyclist a lot. At first, when the cyclist set off in the morning, the conditions were great. It was breezy with shade from trees and rivers. Then, after a few hours, the cyclist was in the desert with bumpy hills. In the story, the speaker states, “Not two miles into this next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” The condition of the roads and not having water really affected the cyclist. It took more energy to get up and down the hills without any shade which ment that he needed more water which he didn’t have any. The condition of the setting really affect the cyclist and if it was easier to bike, they might have not be so dehydrated.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4518,2,"libraries arcross the world contain all kinds of books, so good and some bad. theres always gonna be something in a book that @MONTH1 offend the reader or someone close to the reader. it just depends how sensitive people are. the main reason people want to ban books or have them removed from libraries is because of racial slurs, relgion, and sexual content.       i think it should be the libraries choice to either put the book on the shelf or to take it down. magazines are an issue along with movies and different kinds of music. according to some libraries are just trashed with vulgar, racial, or bad movies, books, ect. if the parents are scared of there children being able to rent these things, they need to put some sort of block on them. if you want to rent bad things you should have to have parental permition.      taking all of these things out of the library is not a soulution. all it does is create anger and leads to lawsuits and more. the library needs to make sections of different rated books so that kids wont be able to get the 'bad' books in there hands.alot of the nooks in libraries have meaning even if the book uses foul language or hate etc. it shows the mood of the story or how the charachter really feels inside. if stories like '@CAPS1 in The @CAPS2' didnt have anger, emotion, or the passion it has it would be a boring book. authors put language, sexual content, and violence in books, movies, and magazines to entertain certain crowds. if you take these things away certain people will not have the entertainment they have enjoyed with the things they have read or things could possibly read",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16377,6,"The builders of the Empire state building faced many obstacles in the course of bringing Al Smith's plans to life. One of them was ""air ships flying too low over Urban areas"" is illegal. If breaking the law wasn't a large enough obstacle, then the issue of New York citizen's safety also came into play. Most dirigibles were dangerous due to their flamability. So one wrong move could have killed many ""if it had [exploded] above a densley populated area""Another huge obstacle the came into play was the lightness of the dirigibles, that would allow it's rear to ""swivel around and around the mooring mast."" The only way to stop that would to again, put the citizens in danger.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16131,6,"In the @CAPS1 @CAPS2 ""The Mooring MASt"" by @ORGANIZATION2, The builders of the empire state building faced many obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle to their expanded use in new york city was the lack of a suitable landing area. Another obstacle was getin the passengers on and off the dirigbles safley. In conclusion I have showend the obstacles that the builders have faced on the @ORGANIZATION1.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15123,6,"There was many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that a lot of dirigibles outside the @LOCATION4 use hydrogen over helium. The problem was hydrogen is highly flammable, ""when the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densley populated area such as downtown New York City."" @CAPS1 can only imagine how tragic and chaotic that would have been. Another obstacle the builders faced was nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting do to violent air currents. That would've meant that these dirigibles could just have got swept back. In conclusion there was several obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16020,6,"The builders had many troubles with the building of the Empire State building. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. This is one trouble they had because if the dirigibles ever was an acident abuve New York City it would be bad because New York is so poluted.Another problem was"",they could not simply drop a moorning mast on top of the empire State building's Flat roof."" This was a big problem because now they had to fix their desing. lastly another problem was the compotition, ""Al Smith relized that he was close to loosing the title of the worlds talest building. Al Smith was so caught up in his desing he did not relize the compotition. So when he found out he knew had to make his taller.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1059,1,"I think that computers do have a positive effect on people because they teach hand-eye codination, also give people the ability to and lastly they allow people to talk online. First, they teach hand eye codination and I think thats good because when people get a job they can probably more focused and can probably work faster. So if people can do that when they get a job and their jobs involve working on a computer it can be easier for them and their job can be more enjoyable. Second they give people the ability to learn more because we have all these sites that involve information an everything so people can be more knowledge so if they're more knowledged they can probably get a really good job that pays alot. And they can look up whatever they like. So if they reasearch alot and go to school they can get the job they always wanted because they know so much knowledged people are better people. Lastly they can talk to online people when people can contact each other its better because if they have no phone to reach someone they need to reach they got a computer that they can either email or use a webcam were they can see the person. I think that having a computer is good for all these reasons having hand eye cordination give people the ability to learn more and allow people to talk online with other people.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10623,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus” Saeng decides to retake failed driver’s test in the spring. She does so because she is comforted on the moderate weather of the spring. It reminds her of home, and Saeng is very closely attached to home. It reminds me of all the places I’ve been and how I still remember my favorite one. Like Saeng, I buy objects that remind me of my old home Saeng’s commitment to her old home makes me feel less different when I miss my old home.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15624,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"" the builders faced the obstacles of safety, nature, and law in attempting to dock dirigibles atop the empire state building. First, it would not be safe. In the excerpt it stated, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen, rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" In a densely populated area such as New York, they couldn't risk having a dirigible burst into the flames and cause massive chaos. Second, nature would not agree. In the excerpt it stated, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Because of the winds in New York, the dirigible would not be secured well, and many dirigibles would be destroyed instead of held in place. Lastly, there was the reason of the law. It the excerpt it explained that, ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This was the most important reason of all. They could've taken risks on the other theories, but on this one they had no choice. They wouldn't be able to fight the law to allow dirigibles to fly that low. To conclude, the obstacles faced by the builders of safety, nature, and law could not be overcome to get the mast up and working.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3079,2,"I think that books, music, movies, magazines, and etc. should be aloud to stay on the shelves of stores and libraries. We have to ask our selves these questions. Why should we take them out of libraries? What would people have to read when those books tell us about what went on in the early days, such as slavery, automobiles, and etc.? Who wants to sit and read about other stuff that is just down right boring?     Why should we take down the books in the library? We shouldn't take the books down off the shelves. We @MONTH1 have the right to take down the books but why should we. It is taking away the knowledge for our children. We would be taking away a lot of stuff the our children should know about, such as the slavery, and famous people.     What would we have to read about if we took most of the books out of the library? We would have nothing to read about other then the stuff that doesn't matter to us anymore. You have to think about if we took all of the books that were inappropraite off the shelves of the library there wouldn't be anymore books. Every book out there has something bad in it, so we would have to take away all the books other than the little kids books.      Who would want to go to the library and want to sit there knowing that they are going to be reading something that is not interesting and just boring? I can tell u who wants to do that. Nobody,'' it's just dumb to do it and has no point, unless you are old, then you @MONTH1 like to, but not everybody is old. Reading is fun to some kids and they want to read about different stuff, but if we take the books they can't.      We don't need to take any books out of the libraries? There would be no reason to go to the library or even read books, cause there isn't any good ones. We are just taking away something that is really big to us @CAPS1, and without those books there is no history for us to study. Our kids need to see those books even if we don't want them to. That is the early days and they need to know about all of it and how it was back then when they didn't have everything we do now. You can't take away something that is fun to do so why take them",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12246,5,"The author, Narciso Rodriguez, created a ceartain mood in his memoir. That certain mood was love and family. The reason why love and family is the moood is because of the following reasons. Family is the mood because the author starts out by saying that family had nothing to do with blood realitives. It is also because everyone even if they weren't related was labeled as cousin, aunt, uncle, grandma, grandpa etc. Another reason that it is family is because that is what he felt every one was to him. A reason that it is love is because he loved everyone in his family. They always came over and had dinner babysat him and every thing that is why it is love.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
692,1,"I don't think that computers is the most positive effect. Because most computer's are not like that the computers are not the smartest but it does help you when you need to do something like a project when you have to look for pictures and when you need help with math you can use the calculator on the computer but the computer does not help you on all your subject's the computer only help's you on a couple of your subject's that is the main reason I use the computer. Sometimes when I'm doing homework I let the computer do it for me so it is eaiser for me to do and I look for website's on it they give you really good website's that is why mostly everyone use's the computer they mostly use the comptuer to look for job's, car's, or a house that is what they mainly use the computer for most people do not like useing the internet because they think it's cheating to use the computer.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17981,7,"Hi, im writing about the topic patience. I think patience is very important to the world. Because if no one had patience everyone would be running crazy like banshees and getting mad al the time. It is important to have patients  because In life it’s not always fair and you have to wait your turn. For example when I go to get my allergy shots I have to be patient. Because other people got @CAPS1 first and act to get served first. I also have to be patient at my football games because everyone has to play, and I can play in @CAPS1 spot the whole game. Lots of people that aren’t patient make other people not patient. Another term for not patient is inpatient. Everyone needs to have some sort of patience. That is what this world need, a little more patience. THE @CAPS2.",6,5,,11,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14991,6,"During the Building of the Mast, the builders faced many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The @CAPS1 obstacle was the building itself. By adding the mast lots of stress would be added to the buildings frame and therefore strengthening modifications had to take place before the mast was erected. Another problem was how to tether the Blimp properly since they are generally landed in wide open fields which allowed for wieghts to be place in the front and back of the blimp, they could be secured properly. But since the blimp was going to be attached to a mast, there was no way to secure the back of the blimp and therefore no safe way to tie the blimp down. And finally the last problem builders faced was the how to even get the blimp docked. Since there was such high winds on top of the building there was no feasible way to dock the blimp in less it was perfect weather. Ultimately all those problems made it so the mast could never be used.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15747,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced obstacles attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first big obstacle was designing the mast. Architects couldn't just drop a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State building; it had a flat roof. If a dirigible was moored it would add additional stress to the frame, and wind pressure would be a factor as well. The mooring mast was never destined to fulfill the purpose of landing dirigibles, because it isn't safe, nature (dirigible with swivel in back) it could possibly be weighed down by lead in back but that cant be hung above pedestrians on the street. A practical reason why they could not moor was a particular law already in place against air ships flying to low. Although, this had happened two dirigibles had attempted to moor there the first turned back due to bad weather conditions and the second one was as a publicity stunt had dropped off newspapers before the landing gear could be installed so they had to use a wire to recieve them. In result the idea was shelved.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18963,7,"For this passage I am going to tell a story most patient person in the world. In the old testament long ago there was a man named @PERSON1@NUM1 was very rich, very happy and was loyal to god. One day  the devil pointed  this out in and, the devil  said  that @PERSON1 would easily  I ???away from god. God denied this so the devil said let me??? his crops and livestock, let me dest for  his camel “god said ‘’ fine but so not hurt @PERSON1 himself ,” the devil agleed.When @PERSON1 was having a bad yet the next day one of his ??? in the said “A great fire has ??? and says , “@CAPS1 your livestock was at nicked by wolves wear the only one s left ,the another I didn’t ian ihand side @CAPS1 your livestock was at naked is wolves we arc the only one left the another I didn’t ran I hand said towel a have stolen @CAPS1 your cold then the???  servant??? in and self the roof had ??? in the hall @CAPS1 your  family has been killed’’! I ever though @PERSON1 was begin ??? to become a began dhowds living in the site eth ,would hot curse god soon the devil  came again but this time made @PERSON1 horribly sick even though this next on for year s he still would not  curse god. When and saw this he sent the devil away and  hedled  @PERSON1 he blesse I him wit A new family and faltune and then @PERSON1 was happy again",11,11,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9596,4,"After reading “Winter Hibiscus, I can tell that Saeng is a determined person, and likes nature. I can also tell that she is determined to pass the test. The author concludes the story with this paragraph because in the beginning of the story, Saeng fails her driving test. She walks home, and as she is walking, she comes across a familiar plant. This takes her to her childhood world. Have her not failed the test, she would have never walked home and come across the plant. The author didn’t want us to forget the reason she walked home. It would have never happened.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12348,5,"In today's aspects, @PERSON1 wouldn't be considered wealthy, but underneath material, he is more wealthy than most people will ever be. For example, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a relative."" Family is very valuable, and a great wealth to Narciso, and throughout the memoir he keeps bringing the feelings of family. It's seem like that emotion was give that held everything together and would make it all ok! He also experiences great gratitude towards his parents and his neighbors; ""But in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit and generosity impressed on me at a such an early age and be demonstration or how important family and friends are."" I think the overall mood of this memoir is very warm, and optemistic about life. They make the best of their situation, and that really made an impression on Narciso. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12919,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the author depicts a mood with distinct traits. One trait of the mood is selflessnes and courage. It is shown in paragraph @NUM1 when the author says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it ment leaving behind their families, freinds, and careers in the country they love."" Would you be able to throw away your life, into an alien world, just so that your children would have a better future? Doing this would take lots of selflessnes and courage. Also, the mood has gratefulness. The author shows this in paragraph @NUM2 when he says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows the author's gratefulness towards his parents for their selflessness and courage for coming over to @LOCATION2 to give him a better future. Finally, unity is found in the mood. It is found in paragraph @NUM3 when it says, ""in our neighborhood, despite customs else where, all of these cultures come together in great solidarity and freindship. It was a close- knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This shows great unity in their neighborhood because in other parts of the United States, these three races didn't get alond, but in this neighborhood they were unified. In conclusion, the author depicts a mood with distinct traits.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16501,6,"During the time of the @DATE1's many obstacles came into play to the architects building a dirigible dock for them to land on top of the Empire State building. The builders had to face situations with weather conditions of this dock. The Empire State building was so high ""The winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". The weather conditions that were occurring high above of this 1,250 ft building made it difficult for dirigibles to dock themselves making the outcome unsafe. Builders also had to face the reality of ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"". with this law taking its action it made it illegal for a dirigible to even attempt a landing on these docks. The main concern of obstacles these builders constructing this landing dock would be the strong winds that would occur. The winds were so powerfull and strong that the blimp would face ""the sharp spires of other buildings in the area, which would puncture the dirigible's shell."" This obstacle of weather was a huge struggle to these architects making the dock of these dirigibles unsuccessful. The obstacles that were faced in constructed this dock came to the outcome of dirigibles being ""given away to airplanes"".",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14972,6,"The builders ran into quite a few problems when they attempted to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire state Building. As stated in paragraph @NUM1 ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium; and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This would mean that if a docked dirigible filled with hydrogen were to catch on fire it would burn down the Empire State Building and much of the city, killing many people with its explosion. Another main obstacle As stated in paragraph @NUM2 was nature ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". These winds would make it almost impossible for a dirigible to reach the mast and actually dock. In addition the dirigible would be swinging around violently once it was tied to the mast The third major problem was the law against aircraft flying low over urban areas as stated in paragraph @NUM3 ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"". With the law in the way no one would even want to try. Those are the three major problems found when building the mast",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16301,6,"During the @DATE1's Dirigibles were being hailed as the transportation of the future. Dirigibles had a top speed of eighty miles per hour, and cruise at about seventy miles per hour for thousands of miles. The main obstacle that the Dirigibles would face in landing in New York City was the lack of suitable landing area. Another obstacle the architects and empire state builders faced was designing a mast that could allow the Dirigible to dock to the building, and also allowing people in and out of vehicle. Architects knew that they couldn't simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building's flat roof. ""An A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" so architects had to reconstruct the building's foundation to strengthen the structure of the building. The greatest obstacle that the Empire State builders faced was nature itself. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The violent air currents at the top of the empire state building would make it dangerous and unsafe for Dirigibles to dock with the building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16209,6,"There are many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. one issue was the stress the dirigible would add to the building. over sixty thousand dollars modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. Also, most dirigibles contained hydrogen which is highly flammable and dangerouss. Another dangerous aspect is that this huge piece of material would be dangling high above pedestrians, as opposed to there much safer usual landing of open fields. Lastly, there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas, which would also cause docking issues.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6369,3,"The setting is hot like desert, no one around, and very dry. Being hot outside affects the cyclist because he is sweaty and needs water. The heat wears him down. Having no one around causes him to not get water which he needs for his journey. These things make him week and makes it harder for him to find a place to get water.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
766,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Have you ever used a computer to do anything besides buisness? Well if not then when you are not busy you should try it. The effects computers have on people is that it's a lot of fun to go on and play, helpful with mostly anything, and you can find just about anything from websites on clothing to maps to the store location. There are three reasons why you should agree with me and these reasons are people have the right to choose what they want to, in this weather it's a little bit to cold to go out and enjoy nature, lastly they can interact with friends and familys online on a website. People have the right to choose what they do because the goverment can't choose for you since they're busy with other more important stuff. Also in the constitution it states that the goverment can't choose for us while we have the power to think. In this weather it's cold to go out, plus nature is so much better in the @DATE1 and the @DATE2 where it's not to hot to cold and thats when the sun is good thats when people should enjoy nature. With all the technology in todays world it's better to take advantage of the technology in this world, also the technology we have is helping people like generators because in old times people didn't have generators. So I hope this letter has changed your opinion and thank you for reading it.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18805,7,"“@CAPS1 are we there yet?” I keep asking over and over again. “@CAPS2 but almost,” he replied. Today we are going to @LOCATION1 adventures and I am so excited! After I asked my @CAPS1 when we would be there, about @NUM1 minutes later we finally arrived at @LOCATION1 adventures! The line  to get are tickets was long but not to long. Once we get them we went to go look for a lock to put all of are stuff in! The line far that wasn’t long so we did that fast! We were now all hungry, so we went to go eat! The time we got into the restaurant, the lines to order were very long! Ok, so now that we are all done eating, it was time to ride some awesome e rides! “@CAPS3, man!” is what I would get saying when the lines to the rides were super long! But so far I have been a very patient girl! But, ok say I had to go change my clothes to go into the water park and change back or go to the restroom man these lines were super long too! Now that the day is almost done, and the park will be closing, my family and I arent into the gift shop: we were in the for about @NUM1 minutes waking around. When we were done and we were ready to check out, the check out line wasn’t long at all! Finally, there was a line that wasn’t long! All that day I was a very patient girl! Between everything that went on throughout that day!",8,11,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15276,6,"There were many obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced. One of the obstacles faced was when trying to dock on top of the building. Since it was so tall, there were very harsh winds that the dirigibles could be controlled. When the Los Angeles tried to dock there, it couldn't, because ""[it] could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds."" Also, ""the @CAPS1. could not even take his hands off the control levers."" because the dirigible might bump into other buildings if he did. Another obstacle they faced was that New York was densely populated and the mooring mast was surrounded by other buildings. If it caught on fire like the Hindenburg it could be a huge problem. ""... how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area."" The third huge obstacle they faced was that there was an actual law against anything flying that low in cities. There was, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This meant that the dirigibles couldn't even get close enough to tie up since they were allowed to fly down to it. Since there were so many apparent obstacles and flaws in the plan, the builders should've caught it before and never built the mooring mast above the Empire State Building",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
559,1,"Dear Local newspaper, @CAPS1 a world filled with gargantuan people seated at a moniter, their eyes staring at it blankly. Outside the city streets are deserted, save for the squirils running along fence posts. This is what will happen if people spend to much time on the computers. People will spend less time exercising, less time outdoors enjoying nature, and less time interacting with family and friends. This is why computers have a drastic negative affect on people. First of all, people send huge amounts of time on their computers and small amounts of time exercising. In a recent poll done by @ORGANIZATION3 magazine, it stated that @PERCENT1 of people between the ages of @NUM1 and @NUM2 prefer to be online rather than outside exercising. That article also states that since @DATE3, child obesity has increased by @PERCENT2! @PERSON2 of @ORGANIZATION1 at @ORGANIZATION4 states that “ the reason child obesity has increased so much is because children spend so much time in front of the computer and less time outdoors. Do you want this rate to increase in the next ten years? Secondly, spending so much time inside decreases the time you spend outside enjoying nature. Bird watches monthly has had a decrease in subscriptions the @DATE1 because people are not interested in nature anymore. In a study done by @PERSON1 and his collegues at @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS2 of @CAPS3 spend almost @PERCENT3 more time indoors infront of electronic devices, most frequently computers, then they do out doors. @PERSON3 says, “@CAPS4 to the new advancements in technology, people are to spend more time indoors than outdoors and that percentage will most likely increase as the decade proceeds”. Finally, spending so much time in front of the computer leaves you less time to interact with family and friends. In @DATE4 more than @PERCENT4 of family ate dinner together now, only @PERCENT5 eat together usually because they are in separate rooms in front of a moniter. This also leads to higher crime rate, believe it or not. Because young children and adolescents don’t have the person to support and guide them because they don’t spend time together @CAPS4 to the frequent use of computers, there is a @PERCENT6 chance that child will commit a crime compared to the @PERCENT7 chance a child would in @DATE5. Do you want that for our youth? Now @CAPS1 a world where people jog together in the park, as they jog, they see a group of bird watchers huddled together under a tree. As the joggers proceed, they come to a pavilion and see a big family celebrating the @DATE2 of a family member. This happy thought won’t become a reality if people spend too much time on their computers and less time exercising ,enjoying nature, and less time interacting with family and friends. So, local newspaper I encourage you, to encourage others, to get outside and spend less time infront of the computer. You have the power to make a difference in your real lives. But the question is, will you?",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9723,4,"The author uses this paragraph as a symbol of realization, and new beginnig for Saeng. She spent so much time missing the past, that she didn’t know how to enjoy the present, which theme-wise the author is saying “live in the moment”. The hibiscus represents strength, as her mother said,""It's strong enough to make it through the winter months,... that’s what matters. the author is say ultimately that tough times are irevitable, so hold on to the moments that make you smile, for they will help you perservere through the times that are tough.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7484,3,At first the terrain was fine and he confident. But when he reached the first town it looked like one of those ghoust towns in the movies. The next town didnt come up when he was told it would. The terrain was that of a desert no water for miles. But he stayed determind. And he made it to some water though.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21367,8,"@CAPS1 @CAPS2   @CAPS3 in to the school's office was a usual thing for me. I was only in elementary school and had already developed the habit of making myself sick"" so I could go home. It had worked several @CAPS2 but the reality was that some how adults could outsmart ""my sickness"". As a kid I was a perfect actor but apparently my acting skills were fading. All the staff new me by then and by now it was harder for me to make my ways out. I remember being in forth grade when I made an appearance at the office but not really by choice and in my innocence I never knew what could happen next. My cousin @PERSON2 and I were in the same classes, we used to look alike when we were kids and teachers would often confuse who we were because we looked like twins. One day my cousin was struggling with a couple math problems and @PERSON1, our math teacher decided to stay a few minutes after school to help her. However we also use to ride the same bus and I decided to wait for her in order to catch the bus together. Those few minutes became more and once @PERSON2 was out we had already missed the bus. That's when we made our appearance in the office and there she was the chunky old lady that new me by heart. I would always remember her sitting in a chair in front of the computer and filling out some papers.This time she knew it wasn't one of those ""wanna go home"" days. ""We missed the bus"" we said, she then asked us why, we both gave our explanations. In the meantime she called @PERSON1 to make sure we were telling the truth. When @PERSON1 showed up, the office lady explained what we had said, but the problem was that she confused our explanations thinking we both missed the bus for the same reason making me look like a liar. When @PERSON1 heard this she said that I wasn't telling the truth and when I tried to explain to her that the lady had been mistaken there was no use even my cousin tried to defend me but the office lady said she was sure of what I had said. Being a kid and all I felt ashamed even though I knew I was telling the truth. Mrs. @PERSON1 decided to give me a demerit but deep inside I knew I said the truth and that's what matters.   As a kid it seems like the end of the world in these situations. Feeling anger because I wasn't able to do anything about it but now that I look back it brings a smile to my face because in my poor judgment I could just think of the teacher as being mean but now I see that it was just a big misunderstanding. Now around @NUM1 years have passed and this memory is still with me but I only get the best of it. When I hang out with my cousin @PERSON2 the base of our conversations are these funny moments of our childhood that only bring laughter, just remembering the foolish things we did when we were young. Sharing these moments bring us closer not only as a family but as friends and there is no better thing than enjoying moments of long lasting laughter with the people we love.""",19,20,,39,,,,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19171,7,Where do I begin there wasn’t ever. A time when I was patient. I was alway rushing people do something and getting mad cause they wouldn’t do it fast enough or go fast enough for me. I would just get attitude. That why I cant be patient and now you know why. The end. The teaching on the way people coming i.e ???.,3,3,,6,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
258,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Spending too much time on the computer is never a good thing. Whether you are doing work or things for pleasure. I strongly believe this because being on the computer too long will mean that you are spending less time excersising, interacting with real family and friends rather than on the internet, and being on computer too long can ruin your vision. Nowadays with all the great advances in technology, peoples are always glued to computer screens. Lets face it, once you go on the computer, it can get pretty addicting with all of the fabulous things you can do and when we get addicted, we don't feel like doing other things like excersising. Studies show that @PERCENT1 of the kids who use his or her computer for more than @NUM1 hours a day is obese. The cause of this problem is obvious and it is kids being addicted to computers. Since they are so addicted to computers, the do not want to go to the gym or anything. Another example is that in school kids have a choice of what electives the want to take. Many kids would rather choose the computer programming class rather than physical education. This also cuts down on their excersise time. Computers are wonderful things, but when it starts affecting your health and physical fitness, they are enemies. Interacting with others on the computer can be looked at as a positive but it is not since it affects the way you interact in real life. For instance, some people develop a habit from only interacting through the computer that makes them anti-social in real life. Furthermore, some kids can be the most pleasant people to interact with through the computer but then when you used them in real life, they are the quietest people in the world. This happens because they are more comfortable interacting through the computer. Also, they have lost their abilities to interact in real life. Interacting through the computer is great if you have family and friends in other countries but you shouldn't do it so much that you become uncomfortable to interact in real life. Your eyes are one of the most important parts of your body besides the vital parts. Most people do not know this but being on the computer too long puts strain on your eyes which is bad. This strain only lead to unpleasant things. For example, if you we addicted to computers, then there is a large chance you will get glasses someday in your life. A recent poll was taken and over @PERCENT2 of people who use their computers for more than @NUM2 hours a day have gotten glasses. Another example is that overtime the strain build up and up to the where even with glasses you can hardly see. Imagine a world where your vision is so bad that it is like your eyes are almost closed, that's what happens to people who use their computers too long. Local newspaper, you @MONTH1 think that computers are one of the greatest inventions ever, the you are right, however you shouldn't use it too much.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4698,2,"There are things in this world that are relative. Censorship is one of them. Relative means that one person has a different view than that of another. Censorship is when a person or organization in authority does not allow people to see things that they believe are inappropriate. One phrase that is very important to censorship is 'things that they believe.' @CAPS1 is inappropriate to one person could be deemed viewable to another. This should not be decided by one person or even one group that believes they know @CAPS1 is socially acceptable or politically correct. Censorship in libraries are not a good thing.     @PERSON3 and @CAPS2 walk into a library, and there is a magazine on the rack that depicts a person standing over a two hundred pound, twenty four point, state record, whitetail deer with with a gun in their hand. @PERSON3 is a firm believer in providing for his family and the rights given to an individual in the second ammendment of the @LOCATION1 constitution. Even if that means killing an animal for its resources. For some there is pride in harvesting an animal and knowing that they provided that meat. @PERSON3 will see the magazine as an opportunity. He might learn tips from the magazine, or find some new gear that he thinks could be useful.      @CAPS2 on the other hand is a conservative. She believes killing is wrong and inhumane. She goes to the store and buys her meat from the freezer section. @CAPS2 prefers not to know where her meat came from. She will view this magazine as inappropriate. Again, censorship is relative to the person looking over the material. Does that mean that just because @CAPS2 thinks the magazine is inappropriate, it should be taken off of the shelf so that someone like @PERSON3 can not read it, appreciate it, and gain knowledge from it? That choice is up to @CAPS2 not to read the magazine, not to the librarian. @CAPS2 is responsible for her own views and choices. She is entitled to them. @PERSON3 is entitled as well. Leave the choice to the reader.     Over in the book section there are @PERSON1 and @PERSON2. @PERSON1 is a fanatic for science and history. @PERSON2 has a preference for religious books that explain the theology behind some of the things the world says and things of his religion. At the end of the row, on top of the shelf sits a book on the topic of evolution. @PERSON1 belives this theory and sees the book as interesting. @PERSON2 looks at the book and thinks to himself, 'That stuff is not true. Why would anyone waste their time reading it.' Does that mean that the book should be taken off the shelf because @PERSON2 will not read it. @PERSON2 should just walk away from it. If he chooses not to, that is up to @PERSON2. Leave that choice to @PERSON2.     Up at the desk there are the librarians.They have their views and opinions and are entitled to them as well. But the books, music, movies, and magazines that are displayed  for checking out should not be chosen because he or she likes them or opposes them, but because someone might be looking for the information in that material. If the choice is left to them that material might not be available to the reader that needs it.     Censorship is a terrible thing for libraries. It takes material away from people that can be useful. Censorship, along with many other things is relative. @CAPS1 one person @MONTH1 deem inappropriate could be viewed as totally fine with another person. Based on moral values, character, and opinions developed with progression of life, people have made judgements on @CAPS1 is appropriate or unacceptable. That choice to look at that magazine, read that book, or listen to that song should be left up to them, not made for them.",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
247,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people are now using computers. However, everyone is entitled to their own opinion about them. Some people don't like them, and then there's people like me who do like them. Computers can let you communicate faster, you can play all sorts of games for @CAPS3, and it provides information. Nine out of ten people love what computers can do for them. Unlike sending and writing letters to people, instant messaging is a much faster and easier way to talk to another person. Sending and receiving letters can take days or weeks, on the other hand, instant messaging takes only a few seconds! Even better, it's @CAPS3! Instant messaging is not the only way you can communicate with friends or family, there is also video chat. Video chat is just like talking on the phone but you can also see the person you're talking to. You can be talking on video chat with someone from another country, and guess what? It's also @CAPS3! When you make long distant calls, it can be very costly, but video chat won't cost a penny out of your pockets! Not only is a computer good for communication, but you can also play fun and entertaining games! Everyone enjoys playing games, whether you're one or eighty-two. There are @CAPS2 websites on the internet and among them there are game sites. Most game sites have virtual games that you can play online for @CAPS3! There's one player, two player, and party . This means you could play alone, with a friend, or the whole family. Everyone on in and have a time. Also, computers could be for fun and your used for work. The @CAPS2 information. It's like your own personal library at home at a touch of a finger! Either you're doing research on a project, , or just want to be informed, the internet can help you with any subject. All you have to do is search the topic you need whether it's cooking a certain dish, learning about space, trying to spell a word, or anything you can think of, and it'll all be there for you, and once again, for @CAPS3! In conclusion, computers are useful for @CAPS2 things and these are just a few examples. I hope you think of computers the way I, and millions of other people, do. As you can see, computers impoved the lives of @CAPS2 human beings.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9997,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because he knows that he meased up on the test and he saying when spring comes back around he will de ready to take the test I know it is spring because he sad when the snow melts.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11883,5,"In the memoir the author created a mood by using details about the setting and the chareters, one of the mood that was in the story is friendship. In paragraph @NUM1, it says ""@CAPS1 graced our kitchen table for meals more often than not."" The author is explaining that he had family friends over to his house to eat almost every night. Another mood that is in the memoir is careing. In paragraph @NUM1, it says ""there was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet."" This shows that even though the authors family had a small home they let people stay with them untill they could leave. The last mood in the memoir is happiness. In paragraph @NUM3, it says ""I celebrated my first birthdays. Mood it was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast alwase filled the air."" The author explains how he had his birthday with his friends and family. These are only three of the main moods in the story.",2,4,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13279,5,"The mood created in the memoir is I think comfort and happiness. First in paragraph @NUM1 ""Here, the innocence of childhood the congregation of family and friends the endless celebrations."" These all make people happy childhood, family, friends and partys, so its no wonder that I think the memoir is happy. Also in paragraph @NUM2 ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family knowing that they would do the same for us."" This puts a smile to my face that people are so giving to others when they don't have to, I hope it brings a smile to you to. Last in paragraph @NUM3 ""filled the air with not just sent and music but life and love."" when I read this I think of nothing bad jut a family singing, laughing and all by a warm cozy fire place. It brings me comfort. Over all thats why I think the memoir is comforting and happy,",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6249,3,"Several features of the setting that affected the cyclist were time of year, the desert land, the lack of civilization, the lack of resources – especially water, and the rugged characteristics of the land. The cyclist was traveling during the summer time, which was the hottest time of the year. He was also traveling through the deserts which create an even hotter climate. “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June,” was a quote from the selection that tells us this. If he had been traveling in the @DATE2, for example, he @MONTH1 have been more comfortable. Throughout his trip, the author does not after come desert civilization. He runs into a deserted factory and miles of land without people. The fact that he is traveling through desert terrain also helps us realize that water is scarce. He has trouble finding a place to get water. This made the trip extra hard and discouraging. “I was going to die” he says. As he travels farther, the land also becomes harder to travel on. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills” this characteristic is a setting, like the others, negatively affects the cyclist by making his journey harder.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18942,7,"One time when I had a lot of paitenits is when I sprined my one ice skating. I was doing spins and trichs everywhere, and one I did not land. I fell on my back, but the bone I hurt was my arm, my mom was surprised that I could even stand up because of how hard I fell. My arm was hurting so bad from it. So my mom rushed over to help me, and then we had to go home. The next morning it was hurting @NUM1 times more. I had to go to the doctors to get x-rays for it, and they took two weeks to devnlop. So I was in two weeks of pain. So it turns out that I didn’t break my arm, however I was in a lot of pain waiting for the resualts. It took a lot of paients for me to just wait, and, wait, and wait for those x-rays,",10,10,,20,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1223,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In my opinion computers are good for people. I believe this because many people get to see things that on their daily basis wouldnt. I think that computers have a positive effect on people. I think that many people now a days work alot so they might not have time to remember little things such as going to buy newspaper or they might not even have time to watch the news on tv, but because of computers they can read or see the same things but in less time. Some people have a job that includes computers so they could also read the newspaper on their computer while also working. This benefits sociaty its own way. I believe computers are very useful to everyone. C omputers can help people get in touch. They can keep in touch by using webcam and etc. It could also let them communicate. Computers allow people to see each other from different places in the world. It gives people a chanve to see the people you couldnt see from afar. In my opinion people can also learn from computers. Computers have many positive effects that are very important. They give people a chance to learn things. This can benefit sociaty because the more knowledge people have the better it is. It gives people who didnt get a chance to learn what they wanted to actually do so and learn it. Computers do benefit sociaty lets take @PERSON1 for example he says that @PERCENT1 of kids believe that computers have helped them in their own way. Many people can be bored at times but because of computers and the fun things it has such as games, videos... etc.. People get to actually spend some time doing something like @PERSON1 stated kids believe computers are helpful because by playing those games it can give them hand eye coordination and help them in different ways at the sametime. (takes away boredom and lets them get good hand eye coordination) Computers also benefit sociaty by letting people has such technology. Many time technology is needed in everyones life. Technology has helped many people and still continues to. Computers is one of the technology that helps people. Technology can teach people things that they do not even know they could do. In conclusion I believe computers have many great positive effects on people, and it also doesnt only benifit people that use this technology it benifits others in a way too. It gives everyone a chance to learn about things, and do them so I believe computers are a great thing to have.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4622,2,"I think there should be censorship in libraries for those who dont like, or are not comfortable with what is on the shelf. Someone shouldn't have a problem with goin or taking their children to the library.          A public library is visited by children of all age's, size's, and races. If i took my child or children to a public library i dont want to worry about wether or not my child reads or views something they shouldn't or dont like",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13246,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the mood set by the author is thankful. We can tell the author is thankful because, she says that she is thankful that her parents left Cuba for her to have a life in @LOCATION1. In paragraph five he says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their childern a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" In paragraph six she says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This is another example showing that she is thankful. A third example is also in paragraph six when the author says, ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance and I've thanked them repeatedly."" This is saying that this person is thankful for the sacrifices and that they can not tell they're parents enough. In conclusion, from the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the mood that we can conclude is given off is that they are thankful for what they're parents have done for them. ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10395,4,"I thinks that the author concludes the story with the given paragraph to show that she is similar to the hibiscus and geese. First, the geese and hibiscus both have a goal, which is to survive the winters. Geese fly south for the winter to stay warm. This is similar to Saeng worse thing both moved to a different environment where they must adapt. Also, Saeng must experience winter along with the hibiscus. The hibiscus needs tobe strong, to overcome winter, from this, it shows Saeng is like her hibiscus because she needs to be strong to overcome the test. If her hibiscus can overcome it’s test, winter then she can survive to cangner her own.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13403,5,"In the memoir @PERSON1, the mood of the author is @CAPS2. The author is from Cuba who lives in a modest three-room apartment. That is big coming from a one-room apartment. The author says that they turn this little space into a cuban home. One reason @CAPS1 is @CAPS2 is because his house was always filled with love, friends, and family. @CAPS1 is also @CAPS2 of his parents. @CAPS1 says ""they came to this country with such courage."" @CAPS1 also says ""I will always be @CAPS2 to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The author loves his parents and is very @CAPS2 for all they have done including ""turning this simple house into a home."" @CAPS2 his mood created by the author in the memoir.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6856,3,"One main feature of the setting that affects the cyclist is the heat of the day. If you ride a bike in the heat of the day, you are going to use up a lot of water. Another factor is the limited supply of water. The final factor is the wrong directions from the aged men. Aged people aren’t always wrong but their info. Can be out of date.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10424,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph for several significant reasons. Throughout the story Saeng struggles with her past and overcoming it. The paragraph helps bring a sense of closure to the story. When Saeng returns home with the hibiscus she tells her mother she couldn’t help it and was unable to overcome her past. Saeng said, “I-I failed the test.” When she says “the test” she means the ability to cope with the loss of her grandmother and homeland, and overcome it. In the concluding paragraph Saeng says she will retake the test. She said, “When the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” In conclusion, the author uses the concluding paragraph to bring closure to the story and the emotional obstacles Saeng faces.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7625,3,"The features of the essay explain how the features of the setting affect the cyclist for many reasons. When the author writes tumbleweeds crossed my path” it shows that he is most likely in the middle of nowhere. This is true because tumbleweeds are usually signs in movies and t.v. shows that the place is deserted. Also, when the author writes” the growing realization that I could drop from heatstroke” and when he writes “a ridiculously large snake” show the growing danger that he is getting himself into. This is true because the snakes could get a tany time or he could just collapse from the lack of water and die. Lastly, the name of the store is revelant because it is a fish bait store and he is thirsty. This is revelant because fish live in water and he is thirsty and seeing the sign relieves him completely. Therefore, the features of this essay explain how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6587,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie there were many settings that affect the cyclist. One example would be when he came up to a water pump and he tried to get water out but water didn’t come out. “…working the handle of the rusted water pump with all my strength. A tar like substance oozed out….” (Kurmaskie). Another example is when he came across rolling hills, and the scaring heat, he also came across a snake that took up most of the pavement.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6280,3,"The features surrounding the cyclist effect him greatly. All he has around him are hills, rough terraine, sand + tumble weeds. These features leave him thinking he will die because there is no life around him. Everything is dry + vivid + thats how it makes him feel. The old, rusty water pump shows that it hasn’t been used in ages + the black tar pumped out is no help to his negative thought of life.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9143,4,The author wrote this paragraph at the end of the story to symbolize a fresh start. I think this because when it is spring and the hibiscus is budding it will remind her homeland and she will take a fresh start at the test.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4321,2,"It is known that anybody is able to rent books, movies, music, and magazines in libraries. It is also known that some of the material in libraries @MONTH1 be offensive or inapropriet. While some people beleive that such items should be removed from the shelves, I beleive that books, magazines, movies, and music should not be removed from the shelves. People should be able to read, listen, or watch watever they want to, if someone doesn't want something that they find offensive in their house then he or she doesn't have to get it, and it doesn't mean that something that seems offensive still isn't enjoyable.     The most important reason why I beleive that items that appear to be offensive should not be removed from library shelves is because people should be able to read, listen, or watch watever they want to. Anybody is entitled to his or her own preference. Some people prefer @CAPS1 rated movies or music with explicit content. If that's what people are interensted in then so be it. Anybody should not have to stop renting something that they want just because someone else doesn't want them to.     Furthermore, if someone doesn't want something that they find offensive in his or her house then just don't get it. Noone is forcing anyone to listen to or watch something that they don't want. It is actually a very simple matter. It's a choice whether someone wants to watch or listen to what they want, and they don't really have the right to be able to tell someone else that they can't watch or listen to what they want. If someone doesn't perfer something then they don't have to get it.     Finally, just because something seems offesnsive doesn't mean that it still isn't enjoyable. The @CAPS5 example that I can think of is a movie that is @CAPS1 rated. Just because a movie is rated @CAPS1 doesn't mean that it still doesn't have a good story or moral to it. Their are plenty of rated @CAPS1 movies that have won @CAPS5 @CAPS6 and plenty of other rewards. Another example is the singer @ORGANIZATION1. While his music @MONTH1 be offensive, their are still many people that enjoy it. Certain things that offend people can be enjoyed by other people.     In conclusion, noone has the right to be able to stop anyone from renting what they want from a library. People just really need to mind their own business and not worry about what other people find enjoyable. Certain books, movies, music, and magazines are only offensive if certain people beleive that they are. People can only choose what they want, and nothing more",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3289,2,"In my opinion i don't really think certain items should be romoved from the library. I think this because many people have different kinds of interests in many things they love doing. In my personal opinion I never remove anything from a library because I know their are alot of people with many interests. At the same time I do understand some of the items should be removed from the library, beacuse they could not appropriate for childrern. If we removed cerain items from the library people would get mad.      I think no item should be removed from the library because many people are interested in many things. There are many ways we can arrange the library by sections so that certain books or topics are in one area, and others are in another area. We can aslo make sure that no under age kid can go to an adult area. If we don't remove nothing from the library we would have alot of people coming. In the other hand if we removed a certain type of books, people would get mad and not come to the library. If that happens smaller amounts of people will come.      In my personal opinion no item should be removed from the library because many people  have many interesting in many topics in the library. If we remove a certain item from the library then we would loose a certain amount of people. Thats why we should not remove anything from the library to provent the decrease of people coming to the library. Like I said many people have many intersts in many things and they deservie to enjoy them in the library.",3,2,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19395,7,"Patience is the ability to be tolerant,understanding and face difficulties without complaining. Patience isn’t  something they teach you in my school. There isn’t a book your assigned to read called  patience @NUM1,there is no movie called patience is the key. Non of that exists, even if you live in a world where a necklace can be turned into a camera, or a cell phone is a gun. I have just been assigned my first undercover mission and it’s not at all wat  i had expected. So far, all I have done is sat on a cold bench next to  the strength meter at a county fair. What people really don’t understand is the patience that is put in to being a spy. Sure theres an ocasional car being blown up bet  not today, not for me. I here the clock in my hand so ‘tick,tock,tick,tock’. @CAPS3  @CAPS2, there’s come action. The subject (the person I’m assigned to watch is on the move and, oh, nevermind, all the subject has done is bay a three dollar bag of popcorn. I start to doodlle a design in the dirt, with my foot. I’m just about to abort the mission. Seeing that nothing is happening when all of a sudden I find a clue. There in the dirt that lay just before me. I see a tiny computer chip. I pick it up and spray it with finger print revealing mist. A purple fluffy cloud of vapor sorround the chip. Sure enough when the purple cloud vanishes. I see that the subjects fingerprints are on the chip, I pull out my laptop at insert the computer chip. @CAPS1 @CAPS1 are the words that stay on the computer screen as if refusing to leave. I sit there waiting bored. I remember patience. I think to myself that if I’m able to defeat twelve armed robers with nothing but a tablecloth, I’m sure I can sit here and just be patient.  At least twenty minutes have gone by now but i feels like twenty hours. The computer still has written on the screen, @CAPS1, @CAPS1, @CAPS1 wassucsessful. “@CAPS2!” I say aloud and people start to stare, but I dont mind. I click the square on the screen that says “open.” @CAPS3 a small message opens up that says “@CAPS4 me at the ice cream pallor.” I close my laptop and start to slowly walk over to the ice cream van, observing everyone , and everything around me. A man wearing a yellow shirt and a lady with a purple scarf diaped over her head are the only two people standing by the icecream stand. I walk a little bit closer and i realise that the man has a gun. I pull out mine and with a few loud roars they were both in handcaffs ofcoure, they were both working with the main suspect. I would have never been able to sucsesfully complete  my mission without being  patient.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12524,5,"The mood is set to a sad feeling. Filled with poverty the auther sets it up this way. There is a mood of love too. For example in paragraph @NUM1, it says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" It also says that they learned the real definition of family. this is why it is set too a sadly love mood. They were an immigrants. This memoir is inspirational.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9797,4,"The author concludes this story with “when they come back Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again because Saeng didnt past her test and knew her mom would be mad so that why she got the flower. If she wouldn’t have failed her test she probably wouldn’t have got the flower in the first place.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14994,6,"The obstacles that builders faced in making the Empire State Building a docking point reached the greatest problems. Obstacles come in all forms, depending on the size of the goal. The goal's size was immense so the range was in its greatest. The problems were law, nature, safety, and the point of docking.Firstly, the main problem was the location. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" This would have not only tore down the entire building but send it crashing down onto pedestrians within the range of eleven hundred feet it the direction it was hauled. Secondly, instead of helium, dirigibles used hydrogen instead, ""and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This put a safety issue, especially over a highly populated urban area, like New York. Thirdly, the building was so high, it intercepted higher forces of wind. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This could have made a dirigibles strain against the building or fresh against the mooring point. Lastly, law prevented all ""airships flying too low over urban areas."" As high as the Empire State Building was it was too close the public.Overall, the builders were impacient and that created obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building. They made the goal so large, it caused the obstacles to reach their range of difficulty. The purpose of the Empire State Building may be a failure, but it still is the tallest building constructed.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12921,5,The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is that at first was getting to short in who the character was. Like it went slow then fast than slow that person couldn't controle her writeing in the story out all so mood was like think fast  then think hard and good nex time the writer should stay at one speed why then readers give up on the story. Who know's that story could of been the best but Just didnt want to stay at one speed. See me @CAPS2 not the one to talk because I cant write has good but i do read and very welling so take it from a reader not a writer. Also the story was to plan like any other story bad before it gets good I think if the writer he a she would of went slower with describeing the story and would of been different but the frist @NUM1 minoter I was like oh this is like any other story @CAPS2 gona stop reading right now boreing and rush the answer be careful how you write or choice these stories you dont know whats best fo me I do. You dont know me from a hole in a wall get a batter program.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6693,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” affects the cyclist in many ways. First the setting does not look like what the cyclist has been told it lacks like. The cyclist had stopped to get directions from a group of older men who’s directions were out of date. Second the conditions of the road affects the cyclist. In the essay the cyclist explains that, ”Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” A final feature of the setting that affected the cyclist was the temperature. The hot sun beamed down on the cyclist. As you can see, the features of the setting in ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" affects the cyclist in many ways. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6769,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affect the cyclist. At first the cyclist thought that the journey he was about to go on was going to be a good one, but that soon changes. For example, “Never accept travel advice from a collection of old-timers who haven’t left the confines of their porched since Carter was in office.” This quote tells how at first the cyclist thought his journey was going to be a good one, but getting information from two old men soon changed that. The features of the setting affect the cyclist in the essay “Rough Road ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.”  ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21306,8,"Don't speak, laugh. I love @CAPS11 little brother. We're @NUM1 years apart in age @CAPS7 from the way we act, @CAPS3'd think we were twins. @CAPS7 @CAPS5 matter how close we are, we still are siblings, and we still fight. Usually they're just petty little fights that we get over in a matter of seconds, @CAPS7 this one was one @CAPS4 could not back down from. I beat him at @CAPS1 tennis. @CAPS14 was a warm afternoon, and me and @CAPS11 brother had just gotten back from school. We usually relax for a little before we do our homework by challenging each other at playing @CAPS1.  ""@CAPS3 cheated."" @CAPS4 said firmly. ""@CAPS5 I didn't!"" I snapped back. I could tell that @CAPS4 was getting really upset about this, @CAPS7 I didn't care. I wasn't going to let him win this one. ""@CAPS6 yes @CAPS3 did. @CAPS3 always do! @CAPS14's not fair."" ""@CAPS7 I didn't this time."" @CAPS4 was telling the truth. There are times when I cheat by distracting him during a game, @CAPS7 I won fair and square. ""@CAPS3're just mad because @CAPS3 lost. Get over yourself and take @CAPS14 like a man."" That's all I had to say to make him throw down his controller and make him run upstairs crying. ""@CAPS6! What did @CAPS3 do to your brother?"" @CAPS11 mom yelled. ""@CAPS4 beat him at a game and now @CAPS4's mad."" I knew @CAPS4 would do that. @CAPS17 and report me to @CAPS11 mom hoping that she would save him and get me in trouble. ""@CAPS13 @CAPS14's just a game. @CAPS3 can't win every time."" ""@CAPS14's just not fair!"" @CAPS4 said before slamming the door of his room. Sweet, sweet victory. I love when I win. @CAPS14 makes me feel superior. @CAPS7 of course that little feeling of guilt of making your little brother cry came over me, so I went to @CAPS17 and apologize. ""@CAPS13?"" I knocked on his door. ""I'm sorry for making @CAPS3 cry. @CAPS14's just a game though. @CAPS3 win some and @CAPS3 lose some. Don't be mad."" I gave the most heart-felt apology I could think of at the moment. ""@CAPS17 away. I don't want to talk to @CAPS3."" @CAPS17 away?! I walked all the way upstairs to tell him I was sorry for something that I didn't even need to say sorry for, and @CAPS4 tells me to @CAPS17 away? Oh @CAPS5. @CAPS5. @CAPS5. @CAPS5. After processing what had just happened all that could come out of @CAPS11 mouth was, ""@CAPS19."". And I walked off.  The rest of the day went on. We passed each other many times without even acknowledging one another. I couldn't believe that @CAPS4 was this upset about @CAPS14. @CAPS14 was probably one of the longest periods of times @CAPS4 didn't talk to me by choice. I started feeling really bad, even sad that @CAPS4 wasn't talking to me. I decided to try talking to him again. Only problem was, @CAPS4 was downstairs playing the @CAPS1 again and I was upstairs this time. I came out of @CAPS11 room and started to walking down the stairs. @CAPS4 could hear me coming, so @CAPS4 turned down the volume of the @CAPS21.  ""@CAPS13 listen. Are @CAPS3 really not going to talk to me over a game I-"" @CAPS23! All of a sudden, I was sliding down the stairs. ""@CAPS24!"" @CAPS4 was laughing at me! I landed at the bottom of the staircase and started to laugh too. We were both laughing! That's all we needed to start up conversation again. Just a little laugh.",20,26,46.0,46,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,6.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12151,5,"The mood in this memoir can be described as anything happy. The author sets a real nostalgic feel about happy memories in the memoir. One of the memories is the kitchen. Rodriguez describes the room as a very peaceful place with music and traditional Cuban food. He says he remembers them and still loves them to this day. He also recalls his freinds and naybors that he used to have over. Even during a time of @CAPS1.S.A racism, the freinds still found ways to make them all happy and all got a long. Another fond memory he re-calls is his parents teaching him life lessons. He says that his parents were scientists back in cuba but moved to @LOCATION1 in order to have a better home. This taught him a lesson that family can matter more then money. Through these fond memories, Rodriguez says that he finds the true deffinition of family.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
359,1,"Being active has no limit, but technology does.",1,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12355,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez is gratefulness. The mood created by the author in the memior of Narciso Rodriguez is gratefull. The author's memior is grateful especially according to paragraphs five, six, and seven. Paragraph five talks about how grateful he is for his mother and father to come to the United States with such courage, without having any knowledge of the language or of the culture. ""The faith that this struggle would them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times."" ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" is what starts off paragraph six. The author explains how he has been telling his parents of how much more courageous their plan was then his would have ever been. The author also says how he admired how much strength and perseverance his parents had and how he has thanked them repeatedly. His parent taught him two lessons with out telling him, but with their lives, ""and these teachings have been the basis of my life"", the author states. Finally in the last paragraph the very last sentence says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" which ultimately shows how grateful Narciso Rodriguez truly is.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4160,2,"Have you ever been to a library and found a book offensive?In my opinion I believe that books, music, movies, magazines, etc., are at the library for a reason. The reason being say if we wanted to check out a movie and everywhere else was to expensive to get it, why wouldn't you just get it at the library if they had it. Most libraries that I've gone to have certain sections for adults and children. That means there would be appropiate things for little children to read in the section that they have been given. If children under age were to wander off into the adult section that would be their fault if they saw something unapproiate not the libraries.     If the case was if every time a child or someone under age took a book offensive, I belive that the libraries wouldn't have as much of books in their buildinds that grown ups would like to read. Of course I'm not trying to say that there should be extermely unappropriate books wandering around in the library that the small children should see. I'm just saying that the adults do have the right to have books that they would be interested in.When I've gone to the libraries I have found books that I have enjoyed reading and I'm not the type of person that would just grab a book and be interested in right away. There are books, movies, magazines, and music that have strange titles that some people might take offensive to, but those are the ones that get read more or listend to more or watched more.     I believe that no material should be taken off of the shelf just because one person found it offensive. If the person doesn't like the idea of the people in the library not taking the material off; it's the person personal problem I think. For example there is this book called '@CAPS1' and it's about a teenager who got into drugs real bad and got pregnate at a young age. That book was one of the best selling books in the world. If somebody took that offensive and asked for the book to be removed then it's their loss.     I mean if there were a book about how to murder somebody then yeah I would ask for that material to be taken off the shelf immeditely. Except no library in this entire world would have that kind of stuff up so why worry about it.If there were ever to be that type of situation then that would be bizzare.But I highly doubt that it would come to a point like in time. So in conclusion that is my opinion on this",3,3,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
346,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, @CAPS1 a teanger growing up in this technologic era @MONEY1 society, I think computers are more harmful than helpful. I presume that books are better resources, people can find fun in other ways and that computers can be dangerous and cause health problems. @CAPS1 a well-read newspaper, your stand on this subject will influence the minds @MONEY1 many. I know computers can help find information, but personally, I believe that books are better resources. Anyone can write and post an article on the internet, even if what they are saying is not true at all. People can lie and say they are a doctor in their @NUM1's when they are really a @NUM2 year old working at @ORGANIZATION1. On the computer, you can never be sure who to believe, but with books you know what you're reading is accurate. The information on the computer, (that's true) you can find a book. Sure, the computer @MONTH1 be the quicker or ""easy way @CAPS6 "" in some cases, but maybe what people need is a challenge. It seems that because @MONEY1 the growing technology, every generation gets lazier and lazier, and less and less into books and it's time for that to stop. Also, people can find fun in many other ways not involving a computer. Many people use social networking sites to connect with their friends, such @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 and @CAPS4, but on those, you can't tell if that person is really who they say they are or not. If you want to talk to your friends, why not call them or more modernly, text them? That way you can be sure @MONEY1 who you are talking to. Too many teens nowadays hide @CAPS6 in their rooms and play games on their computers and spend less and less time with their families. What happend to playing cards and board games with your family? It's much more enjoyable, in my opinion if you play the game for real and not virtually. You can also go outside and get some fresh air, instead @MONEY1 that muggy smell in your room because you're so busy on the computer, you forgot to @CAPS5 the laundry. Plus, if kids have to start handwriting their papers that would improve their handwriting, because they wouldn't get the simplicity @MONEY1 typing. Besides, some kids don't have access to computers, anyways and you have to handwrite your @ORGANIZATION2's, so why not? Lastly computers can be dangerous and/or harmful to health. The use @MONEY1 social networks allows kids to put all their information @CAPS6 there, for anyone to see. This can lead to bad things, like being stalked or kidnapped. The internet also carries many innapropriate images and websites, that youngsters, or anybody, really, should be looking at also staring at a computer screen for hours on end is very bad for your eyes and can cause very serious vision problems in the long run. Plus, I'm sure you've heard how many typists are more prone to arthritis or any problems with pain or loss @MONEY1 the use @MONEY1 their fingers because @MONEY1 the movement @MONEY1 your fingers when you are typing. Getting rif @MONEY1 computers will help to impact peoples' well- being-in a positive manner. While many people enjoy the use @MONEY1 computers, there is really not that great @MONEY1 a need for them. Books are better resources, you can find fun in many other ways, and they can be dangerous/harmful to health. Why spend hundreds or @MONEY1 on a tool that is not even necessary? Don't let the media fool you or pull you in with their tricks, scams, or gimmicks to get you buy one, and next time you go to turn on your computers, thinks "" @CAPS5 I really need this or is there a better way to achieve what I need to get done or what I want to @CAPS5?"" because, more than likely there will be a better way. So, sometimes it's better to say ""@CAPS6 with the new ways @MONEY1 doing things technologically in with old ways @MONEY1 doing things manually.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8879,4,"I believe the author concludes the story with Saeng because it shows when she is reminded of home. I believe she thought she could pass the test when the flower was blooming and reminded her of home. For example, Saeng mumbled, “Not like the kind we had before.” This suggest to me that she was probably home sick. Then when spring comes and it blooms the flower could give her the strength to pass the test. This is why I believe the author ended with this paragraph.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4105,2,"Censorship, only for the light hearted.      We have had this issue for as long as man can remeber. Since we were only little kids to adults. Everything was censored. Bleeps on the television to hide harmless words to random letters in curse words as if we did not know for example what @NUM1k spelt. I agree, censorship is needed for a certain period of time, but when that time goes on for to long and even in books and newspapers to limit what we can handle, that's when it goes out of hand.      I am a highschool student and even I have to say limiting our reading because a book might have one or two bad words in it is just redicoulous. Its the most hipocritical thing to do because even science and anatomy books show certain parts of the body like genitalia but thats okay because its in a science book. However if its in a normal book, everythings a big deal and we can't handle it big woop. I say its a library, let us read what we want to read.     Like i said before highschool is where the maturity hits and the censorship should be lowered. Im not saying just completly take it away but come on now I think highschool student can handle a few bad words in an outstanding book.      As far a movies and music go, anything pornographic or just plain idiotic and demeaning should ofcourse be censored, but if theres just a few bad words why should that stop an entire school from enjoying some good music and possibly an amazing movie.      So the point is, let there be censorship, but only to the point where people wont just take away music and books from us highschoolers for a few bad words. Censorship is for the lighthearted, and nothing is stopping the lighthearted people from not picking up that book with a few words in it they don't like, just dont read it. Thats all I have to say about censorship.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4557,2,"Censorship in media has been around since the beginning of @ORGANIZATION1. Some of the first movies were seen as too offensive and never made it to the theatres, but books, music, movies, and magazines in libraries how do they even need to be censored?          Censorship of books should be if a book is not for children keep them away from it. Books that are extremely offensive should be taken off the shelf or not put in a library. A library is a place of learning or reading for entertainment and those very offensive books do not teach learning or are entertaining.          Music is another thing. Most songs out are highly offensive and should be in a different section. They should not be in the kid's area for music because do parents really want their children to learn cuss words at the age of five? Most parents do not want their children to learn cuss words and probably like if the libraries got rid of the music altogether that had to with sex, drugs, and cussing, all things that are censored in the media today. Maybe libraries can carry music that is censored instead of carrying music that is not censored.     Movies are almost the same as music because it potrays mostly what music has in it, but it is visual. Again parents do not want to see drug use or inappropriate gestures that make the child copy what they see and hear. Libraries should put the movies in the adult section of the library. They should be censored by putting a censor bar over the mouth of someone who is cussing or put the bar over the person's hand or wherever when they are making an inappropriate gesture.     Over the years it has become harder to censor magazines. Magazines are impossible to censor, unless you are the person receiving the magazine. If you are the libraries receiving the magazines grab a black marker and cross out words or pictures that seem to be offensive. The libraries should not carry the inappropriate magazines.     If you are at a library and you see something inappropriate tell the librarian and see if they will censor the material in question.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9919,4,"The author concludes  with this paragraph, to give a sense at hope and growth. The flower represents Saeng’s  homelard, and it makes her feel comforted. It connects her with her emotions and reminds her of the way are. The growth and flourishing of the hibiscus corresponds to the flourish of Saeng. When it blooms, she will have a true piece of home with her, and  will be able to take the test again. The story  is  about overcoming obstacles and adjusting to change. The visual, and nearly lyrical expression of the blooming hibiscus makes the reward and result of your struggles ‘seem so much more beautiful",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7027,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. The cyclist was on a very long bike ride to Yosemite National Park. However, on the way there, he had to cross through a desert like terrain. The blistering sun had been beating on his back for many miles. All the heat built up a desire for him to get water. He had been very tired. The terrain had made him drenched in sweat. If it wasn’t so hot, then he wouldn’t of had that much of a hard time. The desert contains a very high temperature, which makes it harder to endure physical activities. Even if you are to have a high endurance. The heat will make you very tired, and you will lose a lot of energy. Also, it didn’t help anything, that the elderly men, had gave him terrible directions. That is why I think the setting affected the cyclist.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15982,6,"The Empire State Building was built as the tallest building in the World and even today still remains one of the tallest. It had design plans with more of a purpose then just being the tallest building, however. It was supposed to serve as a passenger exchange and a refueling dock for dirigibles. Most people do not know this though because there were many complications involved with the architectural designs of this plan for the mast. Architects knew it would not be easy to build such a creation and that they ""could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building."" They knew, for example that the building needed to be modified to accommodate for the added stress from the mast and the height of the building would need to be increased. They made the necessary changes to the building but the realities of the progect soon set in, and the mast was never built, ""the greatest reason being for safety."" The hydrogen used to power the dirigibles was highly flamable and endangered the citizens of New York  Also, according to the aricle, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" There are powerful winds at that high of an altitude that would blow and make it difficult as for the dirigibles to be properly controlled and navigated.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6559,3,There are many ways the features of the setting affect the cyclist. For instance the desert is not a hummid making is lack of water a bigger deal than normal. Also these are many hill making him have to use full force to get up them also making water a big deal. In conclusion I temperatures where level and it was flat land he could go further with less water supply.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11977,5,The mood that the author has in the memoir is greatful because she keeps talking about her parents and how they gave up their lives in Cuba for her,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12458,5,"The auther creates a very comfortable and happy mood. In the text, it says, ""within it's walls, my young parents parents created our traditional cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" This suggests that many of the good memories Narciso had were in his kitchen. The text also says, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family..."" This suggests that Narciso's parents were very caring people, and gave their home a very friendly and welcoming feel. Overall, the author describes the home of Narciso and his family in a very joyful way.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1448,1,"Dear Newspaper, Have you ever stopped to think what modern day technology brought us? A great example is computers. Many people use this device to book vacation, talk and build relationship people and to discover new ideas the world have to make the disagree strongly. The hot sun glaring down at you just is killing you not to book a vacation to a tropical island! Many people go on vacation and what brought them here has when they sat and places. the computer looking at hotels and booking thou, This modern day technology has brought many humans to places they wanted to go. Over @PERCENT1 of @CAPS1's have a chat account to talk with family and friends. The country of europe to the @LOCATION1 is over @NUM1 miles and every time you make a call it can lead to alot of big kills. Modern technology has outsmost the phones and is now using the computer to talk to far away friends and family. In the progress the computer has put over @NUM2 of single people and expressing the relationship. Many arguments have been lead to because of the disagreement. Many critic and saying not many people interact with family and friends. On the other hand the computer has that many people are connecting and communicating @CAPS2 they can set a plan to @CAPS3 many critics have people and spends the computer. Although this is true there should desicions that will improve the health of the human by limiting usage of them. Setting standards on computers can improve this problems and help exercising. In this case I strongly disagree with the critics and for my side of good uses. If they took them away not only will people files fall but everyone will be disorganized in the bong run. Lastly discovering places and websites teaches even the smartes guy or girl something new. After reading this if have proven that my @CAPS4 should be admired by many people.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15214,6,The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced is that the architects made the Empire State Building more dirigibles. The architects put the thousand-foot dirigible at the top of the building that is held by the cable tether. The dirigible's have to go through the wind pressure which was about eleven hundred feet below. The frame of the Empire State Building have to be strong and it cost more than sixty thousand dollars of modification to made the building's framework. The architects changed the design and made something new. The architects have a difficult obstacles of building the Empire State Building is to make it dirigibles.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13018,5,"In this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez you can really see the moods of love, friendship, and perseverance that are created. In the second paragraph you can see the love that was in Narciso Rodriguez's life and home. ""Here, the innocence of childhood the congregation of family and friends and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to our lives in a warm home."" Love was definitely a big mood that ran throughout the Rodriguez home and it shows greatly in this memoir.Another mood that is shown very strongly in Rodriguez's memoir is friendship. In the last sentence of the fourth paragraph you can see this, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" This sentence shows what great friendship and love the Rodriguez family offered by always lending a helping hand.The final mood that is strongly shown throught this memoir is perseverance. The Rodriguez family moved from Cuba into a one-room apartment in New Jersey it states in paragraph one. The Rodriguez family took whatever jobs they could get and just wanted the best for their children. The Rodriguez family always rose when they fell and in this memoir that mood shines greatly. In this memoir by @PERSON1 family is immensely important to him and that mood shows greatly.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21495,8,"     Every one laughs, i love to laugh in fact that's one of my favorite things to do. If your in a bad mood or just cant get happy, laugh at things cause i am sure it will lighten up your mood and i will tell you what, its also very good for you in many ways. If people didn't laugh then this world world would be a very depressing, you smile at someone who isn't the happiest could totally change their mood. So as i have told you before i am a very happy and energetic person and laughing is what i do best,and i smile at everyone around me. well i have a story for you, i like to volunteer at homeless shelters and old folks home cause i believe i should share my happiness with everyone else around me it makes my soul feel good to help people out. This one after noon i was doing what i do best laughing and having a good time at the old folks home making people smile, they all love having me around cause they say i cheer them up. I run around room to room bringing in vases of flowers opening their curtains to let the beautiful sunshine in, i always told them vitamin @CAPS1 is good to warm up the soul. There was this one man there who had never have a smile on his face and i did the same to him as i did to the other residents and no matter what i did he would never smile. When ever i came in he was always gazing out the window with a dead look on his face, so i had ask the nurses why he was so grumpy and quiet and they had told me he was a veteran. He didn't have much family from what i understood, or well at least they didn't visit him much they just dropped him off cause they didn't want to deal with the grumpiness any more. but i have a heart of gold and i feel like i should share. I had decided one day that i was going to turn that frown on his cute little face upside down, and make him feel happy and smile and interact with the other residents. So as usual i went in and did my daily routine to all the other rooms, we talked did some laughing and all sorts of stuff. I had saved the little old man for last i wasn't sure what his name was or what the what his whole background was like but i was going to go for it! I went in and he was staring out the window as usual, i hesitated for a minute cause i didn't know how he would react. So i went up and started talking to him, i introduced m self but he didn't seem to pleased. I asked him his name and he told me it was none of my business and that totally shot me down made me feel like i was the bad guy. So i started talking to him and asked him about his life, he had slowly opened up to and told me about all the stuff he had seen in the @LOCATION1 war. He turned out to be a nice guy, all those nurses were wrong about him they didn't even try. We laughed for hours me and him, and it didn't get old. Ever since i talked to him he has been progressively started interacting with the others, they just didn't give him the time of day to explain his feelings or someone to talk to. So think about it next time your going to the store and you see someone who doesn't look like they're having the best day, and shot them a smile!!! :)",18,18,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15602,6,Building docks for dirigibles to land on the Empire State Building was a real challenge for Al Smith. The Steel frame of the Empire State Building had to be strengthened because the dirigible's load and wind pressure would put too much stress on the building's frame. The dirigibles were highly flammable and that put a huge risk in safety for the workers in the building and the people on the street. The dirigible's movements could not be monitored due to violent air currents at the top of the building. The main reason why the docks for dirigibles did not work was because of the law against airships. The law did not allow airships fly low over urban areas. The invention of docks for dirigibles on the Empire State Building was unrealistic and unsafe.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13321,5,"The author, @PERSON1 created a mood in the memoir. The mood he created was deffinitely loving and warm. For example, I would say this memoir's mood is loving and warm because the memoir kept mentioning how considerate, friendly, and passionate his family was. Also, he kept saying he learned what family was all about and he learned the true meaning of family. So, to me the mood in this memoir, is loving and warm. The author, @PERSON1 created a mood in the memoir.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21582,8," I am so good at making people laugh, @CAPS8 is just one of my very awesome qualities. I have lots of stories of when I have maid people laugh. One time i was on my way to camp with some of my friends and I looked out the window and saw a sign. ""@CAPS1 butts, unless, that ""@CAPS2"" is an ""@CAPS3"" @CAPS7 @CAPS8 must be @CAPS1 @CAPS4."" I said. @CAPS8 was so funny i maid everyone in the car laugh. @CAPS7 later on, on the drive to camp with my friends we stopped at @CAPS5 in some city. When we stopped there I got inside a shopping basket and my friends and I were racing down the isles and maid all the other costumers laugh. When we where going to leave I bought a whole bunch of food. When we were back inside the car I crabbed the box of doughnuts I had bought and let everyone else in the car have one. We all started eating them and we had established that the doughnuts where really gross. The doughnuts tasted so dry, @CAPS8 was like they didn't even have any frosting on them. I opened my chocolate milk and I had to drink my chocolate milk with my doughnut just to make @CAPS8 taste a little bit more sweet. None of us had anymore doughnuts. @CAPS8 was so funny, we threw the doughnuts out the window. On the way back from the camp that we had gone to, my friend @PERSON1 was driving home and I sat behind him and I messed with him so much. I had turned my phone up onto its highest volume and played a scary ring-tone and I scared him and maid him jump. @CAPS7 I had licked my finger and put @CAPS8 inside his ear @CAPS7 he freaked out, because he thought @CAPS8 was really gross. After that he had his window open and I opened my window and stuck my hand around and grabbed his arm and scared him. @CAPS7 we had stopped by the store in some small town and god some soda and I bought a soda to drink. When we got back in the car and left I Said: ""@CAPS6't get pulled over, I just opened a beer. Haha."" @CAPS7 I took a drink of my soda and as I took the drink I started laughing again and some of my soda went up into my nose @CAPS7 I said: ""@CAPS8 burns so bad. My nose is burning."" All of us where laughing. The ironic part was that like thirty minutes after i had said that we got pulled over. We where driving down the highway and my friend @PERSON1 who was driving thought that the speed limit was sixty-five miles-per-hour but the speed limit was fifty-five. The cop pulled him over and clocked him doing seventy-five. I was gonna try and make the cop laugh, to see if we could lighten him up a little, but my friend @PERSON1 said no because he was so mad. He ended up getting a ticket and the cop was a real idiot. He looked at the license plate and @CAPS7 turned and asked @PERSON1 if they where @LOCATION1 plates, when clearly they said right on them @LOCATION1. Everyone in the car laughed so hard @CAPS8 was hilarious. The cop was really dumb. I @CAPS6't think that anyone who went with me to camp that weekend stopped laughing. I am so good at making people laugh, @CAPS8 is just one of my very awesome qualities.",19,15,,34,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18955,7,"I had patience when my dad din because we had to wait for the doctor to tell us we could see him, but after a while the doctor came and said that he went into a seizer and then a stroke. They @CAPS1-@CAPS2 him (mydad) and we waited about a good @NUM1 minutes and we used about @NUM2 boxes of tissues. The doctor said that ""we will keep him over night to observe him"" @CAPS3 the next day went to the hospital and after a white they had to pull the plug. I had patience in that store because I waited in the labb of the hospital, and waited for the doctor to tell us what happened and when they took the @CAPS1-@CAPS5 and lastly when they said the need to pull the plug on him. @CAPS3 that's my story about when I had patience.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7153,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in more than one way. The first features were a ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest mule. These items gave the cyclist a feeling of doubts. They made him begin to think he had taken the wrong route when he saw these things were outdated. Then, he couldn’t get any cold,clean water out of the pumps to save his life. This was the first obstacle which affected him. The next features of the setting which caused a problem were the tumbleweeds and ""a ridiculously large snake.” They made the cyclist scared and caused him to go around these things. You can tell he wass scared because he quoted “I eased past.” When the flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills, the cyclist’s journey became exhausting,never ending, and difficult. Two more things affected the cyclist. These two things consist of the signs. One of which read “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" and the other “GARY AND WILBER'S FISH-IF you want bait for the big ones, we’re your BEST BET.""The first sign affected him in a negative way and caused him to become a little angry and frustrated because he was tired and dehydrated and the rough road ahead gave him no hope. The second sign led him to water which was the one thing that would make things better so it had a positive affect. These are features that had an affect on the cyclist.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1682,1,"Many people think computers are bad or that we spend less time outside because of them. But are they are bad for individuals to use as people say they are. In this instance, a moderation would be helpful. When you think of computers, what comes to mind. Games? Social @CAPS1? What if computers are doing more than that? Last year, a computer helped diagnose a concussion of mine and helped figure out I've had @NUM1 others. Not to mention the computer did quicker and more efficient than a regular human. An expert says ""Computers diagnose anything, not just concussions, @PERCENT1 better than doctors."" @CAPS2 the social netwowrking has a positive aspect. This has let people, who haven't seen each other for a long time, reconnect and become good friends again. With the positive aspects there is always a negative. Computer have started to make kids obese. This is problem in the country because if we become lazy then we could ruin our country. In addition, if we become has reliant of computers @NUM2 diagnos, what happens when they get faulty? These are problems that are very real and aren't being with. If we cant deal with these problems first then computers will turn out to be a bad thing. Lastly, a moderation could be extremely helpful for us today. For example, instead of using social @CAPS1 for friends next door, go outside and play wiffle ball with them. Social @CAPS1 was made to reconnect with friends far away, not across the street. @CAPS2, instead of totally reling on computers to diagnose problems, have them and the doctor find out. Doing this will get great results and keep doctors prepared if computers, dont work. These are just a examples how moderation could be very helpful to everyone. In conclusion, having no computers wouldn't be a great idea because of how much they help society. Although, being totally dependent on them is a bad idea to because they don't have that much benefit to them.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11991,5,"The @CAPS1 in this memoir is joy and happiness. There is also caring and selflessness. This memoir describes how @ORGANIZATION1 grew up and his meaning of family. His family was very genorous to the people in their @CAPS2. On paragraph @NUM1 it says ""countless extended family members came and went-and there was often someone Staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet"". His family was (seemed) very giving to their community. Because of Narciso's culture and family values, they have impacted his life today.Narciso parents were selfless. They would give up their living space to a friend who was having a hard time. They always had more then @NUM2 people at the dinner table and always more then @NUM2 people staying at their house. All these events have left Narciso Rodriguez with a sense of pride in his family and community.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6686,3,Different settings can effect how well your bycycle ride goes. If it is hot and you have lots of hills it makes it hard. If you have no hills and it is a sunny breezy day it makes it nice to ride. In the essay the biker had no water left but was going down a hill. The going down the hill part was probably easy but the fact that he had no water left was not a good thing.,2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
577,1,"You say that computers are bad and does not help any one in these physical life but some people go on the computer to find yoga poses and diest tips and how does that not help them physicaly and mentaly. Computers they @MONTH1 get kid in a lot of trouble they chat on (@CAPS1, facebook twitter, etc...) but they also don't know whos behind the computers they spend so much time on that @CAPS1 thing. That they don't attention to life itself. Now there are good parts about the computer you can find things you need and you can check travel sites etc... so you can not say that the computer is all that bad it helps a lot of people. So you should really be consider judging the skills of the computer they really do help in life. And they do help people that have physical needs.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15536,6,The @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was the lack of a suitable land area. Another Obstacle they faced was that the winds on the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. They also had to make shore that No sharp objects would punkener the dirigibles. These are the @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire state building faced.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19002,7,"I remember a time when someone I know was patient with me. It was near the beginning of the @NUM1 grade. I had enrolled in band that year, playing the trumpet. We played songs and had tests to everyone we were playing right. But on my tests, my band teacher <@NUM2</PERSON> noticed something funny on my tests. I was playing the wrong notes. He told me I needed a long  private lesson if I wanted to play my notes right. So one afternoon after school. I took the lesson. I started by playing my notes for him. He said they were wrong. Then <@NUM2</PERSON> broke down the notes for us one by one. He told me  the correct way to play the notes. He had me play the notes again and again and together. When I messed up, he showed me how to play them being ?? patient with me. Then  finally I was playing every note .The lesson was about @NUM4 minutes and he was patient the entire process. Now i play my notes right that’s to the lesson and @PERSON1’s patience. Now I know that if I need more lessons in the future, I can count on <@NUM2</PERSON>’s patience to come out or there is ?? required classes.",11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10001,4,NO IMAGE,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12968,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is warm, grateful, and very palpable to the reader. One mood the author conveys very deeply is that of his love of his family. However, his ""family"" not only consisted of blood relatives, but also of the immigrants living in the neighborhood. He says, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" It is obvious that the author feels very strongly about the good relationships his family had with the other immigrants around them. His mood is warm and compassionate as he talks about how much each one of his community was important to him. The next mood conveyed by the author is gratitude and admiration for his parents. In paragraph @NUM1, he talks about how he will be forever grateful for his parents' sacrifices and their hardwork and the numerous times he has told them of his admiration for their strength and courage. However, he does not feel it is enough and says, ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" The mood shown in this quote is that of thankfulness, and even a small bit of frustration that he cannot fully express his gratitude towards his parents.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6456,3,The setting affect the cyclist in alot of ways one way is that if you dont know where your going you could get hurt. Also is if the road condition are very bad. That is how the setting affected the cyclist.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4515,2,"I agree with Katherine's statement, but to a certain extent. If a book or magazine has cursing or anything offensive in it, then a student should take it to the librarian and let him/her know they are offended by it. Especially if it's in a middle school or elementary school.      Of course there's going to be a book or movie or magazine that has something inappropriate in it. One day my friend and I were in the library looking for a book to read, and that's when I first discovered the @CAPS1 series. But as I got into the books, the more mature they got. In the last book, @ORGANIZATION1, it has a lot of profanity in it. But that doesn't mean I'm not mature enough to not know what it means. Same with any other high school student. But you can't protect your children from everything. Not even curse words.     So if you see a book at a local library that is absolutely filled with offensive things, and you decide you want it removed, just take it to your librarian and comfront him/her. I'm sure they'll understand. Or maybe they won't, and they'll wait to see if anyone else will want it removed. My point is, you can't always protect your children from violent words or movies, or magazines. But you can always stand your ground and try",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7087,3,"One ramsackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest mule greeted me. This sight was troubled. There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind. With any luck, I’d hit a bump and lodge one in my throat. Rough road ahead if he didn’t take the old mans advice, he would have enjoyed his bike ride he needed a new map.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3194,2,"Katherine Paterson said ' If I have the right to remove that book from the shelf, then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. ' In this quote I think she was trying to get across that if someone picks up a book or a magazine and reads it and then puts it back and maybe its not the best book ever to them and they @MONTH1 find it offensive, but someone else comes along and wants to read it and they @MONTH1 not find it offensive, then you have two different view points on a book that @MONTH1 be offensive to one person, but to another it @MONTH1 not be. Different view points really effect how to censor books, because of how people are so different, there difference on how they feel about a book could effect what should happen to that book.     I dont believe that books, movies, music, magazines, and other materials such as those should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive to someone. If they are found offensive to a bunch of different people then yes they should be removed, but if its only bothering one or two people but there are other people that agree that its not offensive, then dont get rid of it just because of a couple people. Take a vote maybe to see how many people agree and dissagree on keeping or getting rid of it then decide whether or not you should keep or get rid of it off of that vote. I think it would be more fair and satisfactory to take a vote on whether or not it is fair to keep or remove it. If someone has a memory about something they read or remember an experience from it and then someone else reads it and feels offened by something its not fair to the other person to get rid of it. Its especially not fair to the person with the memories and experiences.     So dont  remove books just because a couple people might find it offensive, take a vote to decide. Let more than just a few people deciede on behalf of the book. More than just a few people can make an impact on just one book, and you never know what differnt views you @MONTH1 find from different people on just one book. People need to be able to discuss their veiws on the book and then bedate on whether or not to keep it, so dont choose to get rid of them without several view points on the book.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6226,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by making him in a near death situation. He said “sometimes life can be so cruel.” because he was running out of water, running out of strength, and running out of patience. Also a snake ""it really did look like a diamond back,” could have killed him. He was in the desert and anything could happen. The setting of old men who didnt know anything and the heat could have killed the cyclist. The situation would have been different if it were anywhere else.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7417,3,"The settings affect the cyclist in more than one way. These ways are that he is running out of water, he might become dehydrated and he is unsure of the path he is on. With him running out of water, he is in real trouble. Because of the lack of water, not only might be die but he begins to see mirages. His lack of water eventually leads to dehydration and he become uneasy about things. For example; in the text it says that he staggered into the store. Because he is unsure of the path he is on, he begins to panic a little. Panicing isn’t good especially considering that he is running low on water and is becoming dehydrated. Panic can’t help to solve anything. The setting is in a dessert so he needs lets of water, which he runs low on. Desserts are extremly hot which causes a person to become dehydrated or die. Desserts have little shade, if any; and they have rough weather as well as rough landscape. For example, they’re landscape is mostly all hot sand. Therefore, the setting does affect the cyclist.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1156,1,"To the editor of the daily newspaper, I strongly believe that computers have a negative affect on people of all ages. Computers these days are being used way too much for useage of priveleges that we already have. While people are using the computer for random activities, they are not having any physical activity. Also emailing and facebooks are great websites to communicate with but people are checking emails all the time instead paying attention to when their parents get home from a long day at work. With this people are so consumed into the computer that kids get side tracked and forget to do homeworks. Computers are great invention but with todays society there are to many issues that aren't always being appointed. In the first place, people aren't getting the exercise that they need because they are playing on the computer or video chatting with a friend. About @NUM1 of america is obess so excercising should definitely be a priority but with these new websites and activities on the computer people are getting held back. With this, kids and adults are communicating in high end ways that waste too much time. The computers have so many stupid activities that are not needed which make us not excercise because many people think that the options and webpages are important and needed. Indeed computers are a technology that is needed but people are taking advantage of it too much by having their whole life in the computer instead of having it toward other things such as excercising and being healthy. In addition to computers taking away from excerscising they are also taking time away from your family. For example, @TIME1 when my dad got home. From a long day at work no @CAPS1 truly a bear hug that he was longing for because everyone was so interested in their email or what my sisters friend just said on facebook. Family is the most important part of your life and if computers are getting in the way, computer use absolutely has to be changed. Which is more important to you, family or computers? I understand that you still talk to your family and give them hugs but when you rae talking to your sister through facebook eventhough there just in the next room. It is lobvious needs to be done. Computers affect you and everyone around you in more ways than @CAPS1. Finally, computers take away family but also schoolwork and works. Most kids spend so much time on the computer and they to do their homework. This is unexeptable and can be away, kids and teenagers are always playing games, facebooking friends and video chatting making them realize at that they need to start their home work! A girl from @PERSON1 said, ""@CAPS1 time I was on facebook for the whole afternoon and then I realized I never started my @CAPS2 essay!"" This has happened to so many people because computers are too distracting and drain your brain. Moreover, yesterday I remember that I was video chatting my friend for @NUM2 hours and didn't start my homework until @NUM3! The computer evryone that goes it which is uneceptable. Without computers a negative affect people. off people exercising out with time in the computer which is unbelievable and terrible. Also they cut communication with your family making it rare to truly bond with them. With this people become glued to the computer and forget to do their homework. Overall computers are that make life that much more stressful. Thank you for listening.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16473,6,"In the excerpt, ""The @CAPS1 Mast,"" by @PERSON1, the architects of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.One of the problems the builders encountered was that the dirigible didn't have a suitable landing area. The architechs concluded that they couldn't just drop a @CAPS1 mast on top of their building, because it would add stress to its frame, so they had to strengthen, and modify it to make it work.Another obstacle. was the fact that most dirigibles ran on hydrogen, which is highly flamable. The builders realized how dangerous that could be, especially above a densely populated area such as downtown New York. They also realized that nature itself was their biggest obstace. Winds were constatly shifting due to violent air currents and they knew that this idea was neither practical nor safe. Lastly, There was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas, which would make their idea illegal and unsuccessful.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9865,4,"The reason why the author ends the story with that statement is because when you fail at something you need time to dust yourself off and try again. When Saeng fails her driving test she is disappointed. After failing her test she went too greenery where she saw flowers of her homeland. Then where sh bought the hibiscus. It reminded her of how things were different. And how thing change when you go to different place. Sometimes they aren't so pleasant at first but you get use to them. Like when she first saw the geese flying in a ""V"". she though of how strange it was. But now it is farmiliar to her. After failing her driving test Saeng learns that even though things nav change she needs to be able to try again. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15054,6,"They ran into a few problems when it @CAPS1 to building this. They realized after that it wasnt that smart or that safe to have a dirigible hanging by a 102 floor building just by one cable tether. Another problem they ran into was the fact that they couldnt control mother nature. If it was a really windy day out it would be hard to keep it steady. And if there wasnt enough support on the building frames, then it could potentially collapse.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
923,1,"Dear @PERSON1, Experts are concerned about the use of computers. They say that they spend hours on the computer and less time exercising enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. I agree. While people use the computers, they don’t interact and meet new friends in person. They stay inside and don't get excersise, and kids might talk with strangers. When we use computers we chat with friends online and don't really interact with others. We meet new friends and chat online and never meet them and socialize, so that is one disadvantage of a computer. Another problem is lack of exercise. While we are on the computer we spend a lot of time and sometimes causes us to even forget to exercise. Then we slowly begin to get unhealthy. Another major problem of computers is talking or chatting with strangers. Some might meet some random people online and give them personal info. Kids might even meet with some of the strangers they talked to online and get hurt! well thank you for reading my opinions about computers. I hope you take them into consideration. Kids and even adults dont interact with freinds, lack exercise, and give personal information to strangers.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4712,2,"Although it is a new day and age where damand is high for elctronic books, hard back and paper back books are not obsolete quite yet. Many people still like the old tradition of traveling to libraries, and starting the quest for the perfect book.    Also, with the economy at a downfall, it is the cheaper way to go. But the big question is, can people find everything they desire at their local library? For some people that maynot be the case because of library censoring.     Yes it is true that many libraries now censore many things that they would think would be inapproite for childrens eyes. I agree that some things should not be displayed on shelves at libraries. Although some adults or teens desire more mature actricles, these things should not be avaible for children to view. One of the most loyal customers to the library are children and their parents. Parents do not want their children to be exposed to explicet materials at that young of an age. Also if libraries lose young families as customers, that would be almost half their clientel gone down the drain.     So next time when you want to buy something that maybe to mature for children, you might want to reconsider going to the library. Instead go to a book store and buy whatever you need there. Keep children in a safe, innocent environment",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15829,6,"The builders faced many challenging obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock at the top of the empire state building. The builders first talked about such as Al Smith to try to make the Empire State building the tallest building in the state, so it would be a great forefront for travelers, and they got it up high to @NUM1 feet. But now there obstacle was to have a dirigible reach the top point of the empire state building. Al Smith wanted for the top of the empire state building to be a landing area, where they could go refueling for hours, or service, and to let passengers on or off the dirigible. So that was one of the obstacles that the builders had to face, to make it work.",0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3028,2,"Censorship is found on television, in libraries, in schools, and even in homes. Do you think that censorship should be used? Censorship can be used to block one's personal thoughts and opinions to promote conformism. I disagree with the idea of Censorship. Not everyone thinks people should be able to have their own images and visions; however, that is what makes our world so individualized.     Censorship in libraries is growing more and more gradually. The government does not want the society, especially the youth, of @LOCATION1 to read things that are deemed inappropriate. Should that not be up to one's guardian, or if they are old enough, to oneself? When you read books, you see language being block out, they take parts out to make the book seem more classy, also they block out things such as drugs and alcohol. A lot of people believe that books are what hurt a lot of today's society. I believe that reading material could be a lot more educational if the editors woud leave some of the things that they censor, in the book. I believe this because, if parents decide to not let their child read a story that is up to them; however, their child could learn about certain situations and possibly learn how to handle those difficult things.     This opinion that censorship in books could be absolutely debatable. Censorship such as in the book, @ORGANIZATION1 is being used. The government is taking out certain words in this story because they are seen as offensive. This is understandable also. I do not believe this amazing novel should be seen in this way. The language was not meaning to be used offensively, but simply to state how people talked and how things were when @PERSON1 was alive. If it were not for books like this, how would out society learn about not only @LOCATION1's history, but other culture's history? In all fairness, @ORGANIZATION1 is an educational novel about how times were in the day of @ORGANIZATION1 and @CAPS1.     Censorship in movies is also growing. Television will block out things such as language, nudity, alcohol, drugs, and things of that nature. I would not like to turn on the television and see these things everywhere, but it could educate people on what and what not to do. I believe if censorship were not used, people's thoughts would be more apt to imagine. Imagination can scare people. Some think that imagination can turn someone crazy or into doing something that is not normal; but what is normal? It is to the community, doing what everyone else is doing and not being different, this scares people.     This whole essay brings me back to the thought that censorship is basically conformism. The word conformism means to all become one; to conform. If this is the case no one will ever come up with new books, music, movies, magazines, or ideas; we will all just be citizens of @LOCATION1 or any other culture trapped inside our very own minds",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1744,1,"Dear Local newspaper, @CAPS1 you have a computer at home you enjoy? Computers are a big thing now in life, they help with many things. Such as staying organized, studies, and even entertainment. These are the three topics I will focus on, because I @CAPS1 believe that computers are useful and people use them a help to make life a lot more easy. Let me start by saying: ""I am a man who enjoys computers, as a way to talk to friends, listen and search music, watch videos on youtube, get school work done, and much more! Although, on main point is it helps me stay orginized. I can make many folders to store my work in, rather then losing or spilling something on the paper if I wrote it out. I can have my music, homework, projects, does work, videos, pictures, and much more saved and orginized so I know where it is everytime I go to find it. There can be no more, ""my dog ate my homework"" excuse. Moving on to the next topic. As I mentioned you can save work onto your computer, you can add without earasing as well, the work becomes neat and perfect everytime. So when you teacher is grading on neatness no worry. You can also look up information on any topic you are working on in class witch alows you to get. More information, the better the grade. Spelling is not a factor now, because your computer tells you when a word is spelt wrong. It even gives you suggestions on how to spell the word by underlining it with a red squigle line. This really helps because a lot of people have hard times with spelling. You can even get @CAPS2 to play a book you are reading, witch helps you learn new words that you @MONTH1 not have knew how to sound out. Teachers can even post notes on school websites of homework, when projects are @CAPS1, ext. No more, ""I didn't know/remember what was homework/project due. Lastly, entertainment is the biggest thing with computers. People go on every day uploading videos, pictures, blogs, and just about what ever they want. Games are played on computers by younger kids, just learning, while older kids are enjoying playing maze, driving, shooting, adventure, and much more types of games. Just about everyone using a computer knows of some chat website in witch they use to communicate with any one. Myspace, facebook, twitter, and so much more are used by people to talk, express how they feel to everyone/to just let it out), show love to someone, send birthday wishes, to @CAPS1 what ever. Those are endless possibilities at entertainment on a computer. Without a dobt, no more, ""I'm bored"". @CAPS1 you use your computer to @CAPS1 anything like this? If so you must enjoy it. People use computer for every thing from work to expressing feelings. Now what side are you at?",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9204,4,"The girl, Saeng , seems to be attached to nature and enjoy it when the spring comes like she said, a new natural intenill start and she will be motivated to take the test that she failed again. The author most likely finished with this paragraph to show that there will be hope for Saeng and she will do what she has to do to have comfortably in her new home country. The whole story talks about how she is still unsatisfied with her new home but it would be cut to and the stay with new chances and a new life, which they did using springtime to show this.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4301,2,"I believe that if some people don't like a certain book or movie then they should be able to tell the library about that itme and it should be removed from the library. The library should allow people who use the library to take away things that are offensive to its customers.     Some parents who come into a library with their children let their children go off and look at books by themselves which is what my @CAPS1 used to let me do when I was a kid. If children are by themselves with no adult supervision and wander into an adult reading section they could look at something bad. They could also buy a magazine that looks perfectly fine on the outside but have offensive images on the inside.      When I was ten years old, my family and I went on vacation to @LOCATION1. We were watching a baseball game that was on commercial break one night. We were fliping through the channels wating for the game to come on. We were all watching the television when an offensive image came on the televison that children's eyes shoudn't see. That occurance happened when I nor my parents wanted me to see it. That image was an adult image and was meant for adults only, but childrens eyes can see it as well. Libraries should think of this when they are puting books and magazines on their shelves. They might be making a little bit of money but they are effecting a childs life in a negative way. Things like this could happen in a library also because children who are young won't always know what is a childs book and what is an adult magazine. Children also might ask their parents for music that the case of the music might look fine on the outside, but have cursing and bad things on the inside. This is the reason why all items in a library that are offensive to people should be removed from libraries.     If people who go to the library don't like something on the shelves they should be able to ask the library to take the item off the shelve. The libray might not do it everytime, but taking items off the shelves would make libraries more enjoyable and safe for children. If the library doesn't take the items off the shelve it could effect their business in a negative way. The library should only take off the items that regular visitors to the library ask for. The library shoudn't listen to someone who has visited the library only a few times. The library should listen to its customers that visit the library often.      I think that all offensive images to people that visit the library should be taken off the shelves and removed from the library. The library should listen to its customers not only because it could effect their business, but becasue it could effect the lives of children in a positive or negative way.",3,3,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7373,3,"The cyclist a had rough time. The elements were against him. It was dry and hot and he had no water. In the text it says,""The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. ""This shows that he had hardly any water, and what he did have would only make him thirster. ""@CAPS1 weeds crossed my path and a ridiculously large snake. ""It was obviously not and the quote maker you visualize a desert or colorado. The man was no one in sight not a building, car, or structure of any kind. He was saving up his energy and his water. He was starting to go a little crazy. The hills were killer for him, in the text it says ""over one long, crippling hill."" This show you now rough the conditions were because he told us in the begining that he is a cyclist. The biker hell a very rough time and the setting definity effects this. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16614,6,"To design a mast for the dirigibles to land was no easy matter architects could not just plop a mooring mast on top of the @ORGANIZATION1 flat roof The stress from a thousand foot dirigible would transmit weight and wind pressure all the way to the foundation. To be able to create this mast the Empire State building would have to be modified and strengthend. First, the architects ""designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from inside, with a steeped-back design that imitated the overall shapp of the building itself."" This rocket shapped mast would have four wings at its corners of aluminum and would rise to a conical roof that would house the mooring arm. For the winches and control machinery for the dirigible mooring, they would be placed in the back of the machinery. Finnally, when this was all completed the existing plans for the building were to be put in place.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16177,6,"There are many obstacles the builders had to face while attempting to allow the docking of dirigibles. One obstacle they had to overcome was paying over sixty thousand dollars' to the worth of modifications for the building's framework. In paragraph @NUM1, it stated that a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. The stress of the dirigible's load, and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation, which was nearly hundred feet below. As a result of this issue, the frame of the entire building had to change to accommodate the new situation. More obstacles flooded in after the new modifications. When the building had been framed to the 85th floor, the roof had to be completed before the framing for the mooring mast could take place. The mast also had to have a skeleton of steel, stated in paragraph @NUM2,",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13404,5,"The mood created by the author of this memoir was very warm and loving. He talks about his family and friends throughout the piece, and how much they have changed his life. He talks about Cuba and its culture flowing through the home, how his parents threw their careers away so that their children can have a good life, and how everyone in his neighborhood was very close knit as if they were a family. All these aspects of his life thrown together with words like ""faith"", ""struggle"", ""admiration"" and ""selflessly"", among many others, makes for a very compelling piece that has a strong heartfelt mood.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18352,7,"One important skill you need in the life is patience. With my new, hard cast on my arm, I couldn't do many things. I was a very active child doing soccer, basketball, cross country, and football. But, with my broken arm I had to be patient with my sports. Being patient payed off and my arm healed faster without becoming but even more. Then I played sports after a had my coat cut off. Patience can be rewarding, just if you wait long enough.",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3821,2,"Everybody is in tittle of making their own desicion. If that includes not letting their own children look at certain books then that's okay, but that doesn't mean they have to make that desicion for everyone. Everyone has their own opinion of certain books that might be less modest than others that just how it is, but to take the book out of the libraries is not taking in consideration of others.     If there are some books that are offense to a certain type of ethnicty or religion ect. then just ignore it and go on. There is no reason to take those kinds of books out, for what we all know that certain book might be used for research and that person that needs. Taking out certain books of the library are depriving the youth from contemporary literature that is going to be very imporant for the future. The @CAPS1 is a good example, in the time it got published many people wanted to get rid of the book because it was not traditional, that book is now being used in our class room and is teaching us many literary techniques. There are countless books just like The @CAPS1 that are being taked out of libraries now and that could be deeply appreciated by the future writers.     Katherine Paterson has the prospective of many authors, taking out books that are offensive to people is going to cause us to have no books. For hard working writers it is unfair to work so hard and have the book band from the libraries because a certain group of parents didn't find it approving. If they don't approve of the book then tell the child not to get it. A library is a place to enjoy the countless amount of literature of many different styles and should not be restricted. The library is a place of discovery not a place of restriction.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9714,4,"The Author concludes the story with this paragraph to show the hope and the meaning of the hibiscus to Saeng. The author also ends the story like that because spring is a time for new beginings and where everything comes back to life and starts to regrow so to say that when the snow melts and geese return. ""Its. saying its the right time for a secnd chance. I.t failed the test Saeng said.....She tore off a leaf shruddy it to pests”. that shows the dying of the hope she had or the hybisus symbolized it. So that’s why the author ended it like that b/c it shows new heqionqrys.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16066,6,"The task of allowing dirigibles to dock on The Empire State Building was met with many obstacles. The fist one to come into play was the support of the building. The dirigible's load and the wind pressure would greatly reduse the stability of the building. Over sixty thousand dollars' went into modifications of the building's framework.Another problem was the dirigibles themselfs. Most dirigibles coming from outside of the United States were filled with hydrogen. As seen in the tragic Hindenburg inncodent, hydrogen is highly flammable. The owners of the Empire State Building concluded that an accadent such as this would be even more devastaing over a densly populated area. After being faced with all these obstacles, the idea of dirigibles docking atop the Empire State Building was put to rest for the safety of the people.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18083,7,"The one time I was patient was when I was waiting for the new game kill zone @NUM1. I had to come up with @NUM2 bucks. @NUM3 lt for the game and @NUM4 to put it on hold for me I got it the minute the store hade it in the shelvs. The maneger was poking them out so I grabed one and bought it. I went home ploged in my pss and started playing online. I now have @NUM1,190. Merged all together, the game is realy hard a day one or there was store manegers there one in the back. I do not suggest the game for all are under @NUM6.",9,5,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3702,2,From what I seen in my life about censorship is that they should not take stuff off of the shelf just because of its content.  I think that libraries should keep the thing in the shelves but seperated from the rest if found offensive.  It's bad enough that everybody is offended by the smallest thing which makes it difficult for everybody else to enjoy it.  I think that we should not even censor the content because I feel like that is making people wanting to know why they censored it in the first place.          My personal opinion is that censorship is useless because it ruins it for everybody because one person got offended.  I like the saying sticks and stones @MONTH1 break my bones but words will never hurt because it says if your offended then get over it.  Why should your opinion speak for everyone else.  Another reason why I believe that we shouldn't censor things is if someone really wants to know they could always find a way to get it so the censorship thing is kind of pointless.  I also feel like censorship is making people soft because everything is censored and when people get into the real world they get hit hard.          My conclusion is that they should seperate the stuff that is offensive and put it in another section of the library.  They could also develop a rating system like they do in video games so you know what kind of content is in it.  Simple stuff like this can make everyone happy because the person who is offended doesn't have look at the stuff that he hates.,3,3,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6883,3,Setting very much affects the cyclist and now he feels. If he was in a bad setting then he would most likely be in a bad mood. Mood is highly affected by the general setting. In the essay “rough road ahead: do not exceed posted speed limit” the cyclist feels very confiedent of himself and the setting helps to boost that confiedence and andorence.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
402,1,"Dear local Newspaper, I think that computers have a exellent benefit for people. First family friends can communicate from a far distance. Secondly typing on the computer gives people good hand and eye cordnation. Thirdly they give people the ability to learn about faraway places. Lastly it gives student a chance to research a topic they are learning about. Well @CAPS1 do you think? Researcher @PERSON1 said that almost @PERCENT1 of family's live faraway from eachother. computers give the ability for familys to communicate wether its aim or a webcam chat. Also out of the @PERCENT1 of familys that live faraway from each other @PERCENT2 use the computer to comunicate. Hand and eye cordination, some people type without looking and some people are really slow. Typing on a computer give the great hand and eye cordination. Good hand and eye cordination could be used for many things. For example, playing sports or even a simple task like throwing something in the trash. Lastly, have you ever wanted to learn about a place faraway from you live or have you ever researched a topic for school? Well I have. Computer give people the ability to learn about places faraway. For example in the third grade I had to research hammer head sharks. Don't teacher always ask their student to look up a word or a topic on the computer? As I have said before I think computers have a benifit on people. I hope that my three reasons of contacting family and friend and hand and eye cordnation and lastly researching has made you think it a good thing too. Thank you for taking time to read @CAPS1 I had to say and I hope you take it into concideration.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6449,3,It think  it means  to be all you can be.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12894,5,"The mood in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" he demenstrates a mood of love. @ORGANIZATION1 shows his love by telling his parents. In the @NUM1 paragraph he says ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance."" Here he shows his compassion for his parents because his parents left cuba and went to @LOCATION1 to start a new life. Also, they wanted a better education for their children so they left family, friends, everything behind so they could restart their life. Another way how Narciso shows love to his parent is by using what his parents did to him into his life. Narciso used the better education, to have a better life. Now he is a fashion designer. Therefore, in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", he shows a mood of love in the memoir.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3868,2,"Whose to say what is appropriate for whom? whose to judge right and wrong for anyone? It depends on a point of view like most things. The sheltered must learn one day, and if kids learn now about the truth, such as, not to stick forks in outlets, then they won't be as curious when they are older. Being sheltered is not always a good thing and censor ship of what we read, watch, or listen to is ridculous, and disrespectful to authors.          In matters of censorship, I find it to be pointless. Censorship doesn't prevent your kids from learning about anything, except mother won't let me watch that. it just keeps your kids more curious and more obligated to hide things from you and like they cannot ask you questions or be open and honest with you. Causes children to go behind your back more and when they're in trouble they'll as if your they're last place where they can ask for help, where you should be they're first resort.         No, I do not believe that libraries should censor anything. Its altering a authors work. How would it feel if you had written something and it had been published and was in the library and didn't like something about it so they decided to just bleep it out or not allow certain people to read it? I believe censorship should be illegal not required.          Sheltering things from kids prevents them from maturing, and discovering the real world. The idea that the world has no evil, or hiding the evil from your children will in most cases cause them to rebel and in other cases leave them unprepared for the future and the real world. Wouldn't you rather be able to help your kids and teach them about things instead of tell them that everything is perfect and only bad people use that kind of language. Or make them feel like a bad person for do something your grandparents did when they were young?      I conclude that censorship is injust, unfair, and is the real wrong. Not the profanity or the violence that will one day be apart of their life in some way. You don't go through everyday in the 'real world' with a mindset of there's nothing wrong in this world. Or everything is censored and everything is controlled  I believe censorship is just another way of controlling the mind through nuture",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10060,4,"The author conclude the story with this paragraph to show that saeng is going to retake the test over when all these things happen. Saeng shows that she is not going to give up, and that she is going to keep trying. The hibiscus is a lucky charm to her to keep during the test to strive her to pass the test. In addition, the author also conclude the story with this paragraph to show saeng personal thoughts, and how she feels about this test. In the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, is a indication that it time to give the test another try. In conclusion, the paragraph is a indication that saeng is never going to forget.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12430,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, by Narciso Rodriguez, he sets a mood of thankfulness toward his parents. Narciso tells of how his parents immigrated from Cuba to the @LOCATION1. He tells of the hardship of the sacrifice they went through. In this memoir, Narciso says one line over and over. It is ""I have thank them (his parent) repeatedly (Rodriguez @NUM1)"". He is also grateful for his parents love and sacrifice. In the last sentence he says, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" (Rodriguez @NUM1). In conclusion, Narciso is grateful of his parents sacrifice for a better life of their child. ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10632,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph so the reader has something to think about.When the author concludes with something like that he/she wants the reader to make there own ending or pridicshon. And some times it means a sequel.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21478,8," I always wished that I could go back in time and relive @CAPS7 childhood. Knowing that that was the time when I was most happiest and the time I was just living life with no purpose, no plans. Looking down on @CAPS7 little cousins or brother, I see joy, and laughter, and silliness. I see innocent soft faces who have no idea nor understanding for what is going on around them. As I watch them slowly grow out of their unusual habits, I find myself back @CAPS4 the year @DATE1. A little girl, not in school yet, runs in her grandmother's yard on a @DATE4's mid day. She flops her pig tails back and forth while hiding her hands in her size @NUM1 trousers with one eye closed and the other slightly opened watching her older sister run around looking for a place @CAPS4 hide.  ""@CAPS1, nine, eight, seven..."" ""@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @CAPS6!"" @CAPS7 sister, @PERSON1, yells out @CAPS4 me from behind one of the giant oak trees.I giggle @CAPS4 myself a little and start at @CAPS8. ""@CAPS8, four.. three.. two.."" I slow down dramatically, ""ONE!"" and like a rocket, I blast off the front porch with @CAPS7 arms spread out on each side, making engine noises, and pretended I was a pilot ""@CAPS9 on lock! Mayday, mayday! CRASH!"". I tackle @CAPS7 sister @CAPS4 the ground. I remember the look on our mothers face as we lay there rolling around in the grass laughing. I closed @CAPS7 eyes and reopened them @CAPS4 find myself in @DATE2. It was a few days after the tragic happening of @NUM2. Everyone met at grandma's house as always, kids in one room and adults in the other. I was playing in our small ball pit with the two youngest cousins, @PERSON2 and @ORGANIZATION1, when we noticed that there was a small hole in the wall. ""@CAPS6, look through."" @PERSON2 demanded.I took a deep breath and did what he asked.  ""@CAPS11!"" I yelled The little hole gave us a vision of what was happening in the room next @CAPS4 us which held all the parents and old people with straight looks and serious tones. I let the little ones have a look, they didn't find it as interesting as I did but they wouldn't give me another chance @CAPS4 see. I pushed @CAPS7 way through. All three of us looking through something so small. We kept giggling, and talking. We did this for about @CAPS1 minutes, not knowing that our uncle was watching us for at least @CAPS8 minutes. He motioned the other adults @CAPS4 see what we were doing. One by one, noticing that the amount of people in the next room was decreasing. Soon, there wasn't any of them in sight. ""@CAPS12 did they all go?"" We panicked.Light, quite laughing was going on behind us. @PERSON2 looked toward @ORGANIZATION1, @ORGANIZATION1 looked at me, I looked down @CAPS4 @PERSON2, and at the same time we turned around and saw everyone smiling, laughing, and taking pictures of us. We stood still with red faces and soon started pointing fingers about who gave us the crazy idea of spying.  After that, it was like any day with family; everyone in the living room, food in the kitchen, warm hugs and kisses from grandma, people pinching @CAPS2 cheeks, big smiles and long loud laughs. I see friends shaking hands and kids yelling and screaming, people telling they're loved ones ""I love you"". I look down at @CAPS7 feet and with a blink of an eye, I'm back @CAPS4 @DATE3. I raise @CAPS7 head up over @CAPS7 shoulders, see that I'm in grandmas living room babysitting the kids. I'm sixteen this year, and I don't believe that there is one day when I don't laugh. Of course I can't laugh when it comes @CAPS4 all seriousness , but other than that, laughing is part of humor/youth. When someone tells a joke and you think it was funny you don't just stand there and say that was funny and not laugh. Everyone knows that, once in a while, they have @CAPS4 take a step back and laugh. I always wished that I could go back in time and relive @CAPS7 childhood. Knowing that that was the time when I was most happiest and the time I was just living life with no purpose, no plans. I had no desire @CAPS4 impress anybody. I lived @CAPS7 childhood well and when I think about it, I just sit back, look at everything that I have done, and laugh.  ",20,27,42.0,42,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18995,7,"One time my sister and my mom were pacint was when l went to dicks sporting goods and l wanted a new bag and adidas sandles and crazy scocks well it took me hours to pickout socks there were zebra, strips, blank, blaid, and dots so my sister did not get to get anything cause she did not have money. So finaly I just pick the zebra ones then l had to find the adidas but then l could not find them so like an hour later the only had one left witen were my size but this girl took them right off my feet and took them so l looked at my mom and she was nappy as can be so then l went to get a bag they had one pink left so l grabbed it and went home.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15571,6,They had problems with the dirigibles trying to land it thyre. The dirigible could have caught fire and it would have been worse. It was dangerous to attach piece to the part.The high wind was a problem.The dirigible could burn up fall down and people would die below.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6000,3,"“Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” had a  rough setting between harzardous things and the death defying heat. The cyclist had to endure the pain of dehydration and determination. He had been given bad directions that almost caused him his life. He was travelling through a desert and claimed the temperature was @NUM1.Also, the cyclist had to ration his water because it was ghost towns in which our character passed through. He used nature skills he’d once learned and began to suck on pebbles which take the mind off thirst and uses saliva to help refresh your throat. Throughout his adventure everything kept this young man from getting water and to whenever there was water any faster. He had survived and wouldn’t ever take shortcuts again",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13296,5,"The mood of the auther is suttle but at the same time kinda depresed. The way the narator sounds to me is that he or she is in a bad mood. But sometimes its not in a bad mood, its in a suttle mood.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19310,7,A time I was patient was when I had to be patient for having a difficult task without any hep. Not one comeint from me. It was so hard. I had one hour to finish it. I needed three hours to finish. It was so hard not even collage student could finish I t. @ORGANIZATION1 was the hardest match test I ever done.,5,5,,10,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3280,2,"Today I am going to talk about certain materials, such as books, music, movies, and magazines. Should they be removed from the shelf if they are found offensive? In todays world it is hard to please every living soul. Every one is going to disagree about something in there life time.      Life as we know it, everybody lives it a different way, and in a different place, but everybody has read a book, listened to music, and even read a magazine a time or to. People @MONTH1 interpride it different than others. Therefore I personally dont think they should take articules out of the library that you can learn something from, unless it's something like pornograh then they should deffently take it out.     My conclusion is that you cant please everybody. I think that you shouln't take things out of the library that can help a student learn.",3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6382,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist. The reasons were the water and the hills. One reason was water because his water were cooled down offer he refilled it all the way up. My last reason is because of the rolling hills.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4747,2,"When you walk into the heavenly sanctuary that is our library, you have opened yourself up to a vast wealth of knowledge that is available to you at the click of a mouse, the push of a button, or the turn of a page. There are those of a select few, however, who are under the paradigm that not all of this information is for all eyes. They feel it should be locked away, as if it were some eyesore. Allow me to address this view with retaliation and distaste on a number of levels in the following document.     I am a musician. Music is my passion. My creative gears are forever turning. Often I look to other artists' works for inspiration, and the one place to get that music is, you guessed it, the library. How disappointed am I when I find that the music I want has been removed for being explicit. It was not the lyrics or foul message I sought, but the beautiful melodies and harmonies therein! It does not do well to isolate media without first seeing the good that lies in it and the strong feelings it has to convey.     We @MONTH1 discard the world's greatest novel because of racial discrepancies or wizardry. We @MONTH1 throw away a moving song because of its lyrics. We @MONTH1 trash a movie after only reading the title, never even giving it a chance. How fair is this? Even now there @MONTH1 be those who refuse to read your newspaper because of their disagreements with one, individual editor. That is no fair crop in my right mind.     I implore you, as a public, as people of sound mind and stout hearts to reconsider the censorship of those works which have a clear and true message and were forged for the benefit of our humankind. All things have a story to tell. A friend of mine once said to me, that there were three ways we could absorb things that we find undesirable. We can reject, we can ignore, or we can absorb and interpret. To reject leaves you no smarter. To ignore leaves you in fear. However, to absorb, you gain new knowledge, be it of a new culture or new person. Everything must be taken with a grain of salt. Let us watch something we find immoral and then take the time to understand why it is immoral, for it is these things that define us. If you do not see what is or is not right, who is to say what is truly ethical? We need material of substance in our libraries, for our exposure and for our fathoming of new knowledge in our modern world",5,6,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1017,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 I believe that people shouldn't spend so much time on the computer because they do less exercising, they don't interact with friends and family, and its bad for their health. People shouldn't spend so much time. They wont enjoy their life outside of their houses. My first reason why people shouldn't spend so much time on the computer is that its bad for their health. Spending to much time on their computers can strain your eyes. Some people with seizures including myself would trigier an attack and cause us to space out. Spending to much time on the computer can mess up your vision or damage your body. To me thats very unhealthy. Another reason why spending so much time on the computer is bad is that you don't interact with your family and friends. On the computer all the time can make you forget to spend time with your friends and family. You would get addicted to being on the computer all the time. You would forget to say hi and how are you to your family. You won't spend time with your friends and they will start to ingnore you and think that you don't care about them. Being on the computer all the time will mess up your soical activitys with other people. My final reason why spending to much time on the computer is bad is that your not enjoying nature. You don't realize how much you are missing because you are on the computer. Yes you can learn thinks by the computer but you can also learn by doing it yourself. Being on the computer to much will make you not want to exerise and that won't be good for your body. You would forget to at least go for a jog, discover new thing. You realize that exploring nature is better than just watching it. Those are my reasons why spending to much time on the computer is bad. Its not health. You don't interact will your friends or family. Also you won't enjoy nature for yourself. So just get off the computer and enjoy what life gave you.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4751,2,"I do not believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from shelves at a library if they could be found offensive. It is good to be unique, and no matter how innapropriate a subject might be, it is still factual and helpful in learning. If anything they should just put a label on the cover of the book that says somthing along the lines of 'adult content.' @CAPS1 repeats it's self, and this quote reminds me of periods in @CAPS1 where we need to learn from our mistakes, no matter how bad the subjects are, such as the @CAPS2, and the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5 in the deep south.      What about the @CAPS2, when @NUM1 million @CAPS7 were killed because they were @CAPS7. @CAPS7 @MONTH1 find these books offensive but that doesn't mean the @CAPS2 never happened. There are many offensive and contraversial pictures and stories about events that happened during the @CAPS2. Even though this is a very depressing and horrific subject, it is still good for our @CAPS20 to learn about what happened. And other catagories need to be read because it can help @CAPS20 to understand right from wrong, and help prevent them from making big mistakes in the future.     The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 started from the @DATE1's all the way until @CAPS13 @CAPS14 @NUM2. The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 took a toll on everyone in the @LOCATION1A, but some people couldn't handle it as well as others. In the south, most @CAPS19 treated @CAPS17 @CAPS18 as dirt. They didn't let them in their schools, in their clubs or churches, they were rude towards them, and most horrific of all, they lynched them. There were a set of @PERSON1 called the '@PERSON1,' which pretty much was a list of @PERSON1 to treat @CAPS25 as unfairly as possible. If a kid were to pick up a book or magazine with pictures of lynchings in them, they would remember it their whole life, and if that one picture truly bothered them, they their whole life growing up, they would realize that what @CAPS19 did to @CAPS25 was unethical.          Some books and magazines in libraries are really explicit, but we can't shelter our @CAPS20 their whole lives. Parents need to sit down with their @CAPS20 when they have questions and discuss the truth with them. What are parents going to do when their @CAPS20 go to school and hear other @CAPS20 talk about subjects such as sex? @CAPS20 could get the wrong idea about sex or not know exactly what it is because their parents never actually sat down and explained to them what sex is. I am not saying to go let your @NUM3 year old look at pictures of people having sex by any means, but when @CAPS20 get to a certain age, their parents need to step up and talk to them about uncomfortable subjects such as puberty, sex, and babies.     It is time parents stop hiding the truth from their @CAPS20, or hovering over their shoulders like helecoptors. If @CAPS20 don't learn the truth about the real @CAPS13 and about how many evil and manipulative people there are in the @CAPS13, when they go to college they won't be able to stand for themselves. If @CAPS20 don't learn about @CAPS1 and what all has been done, it is kind of like we are treating the books like the @CAPS7 and the @CAPS17 @CAPS18 were treated. Just because these books are different than others we will just get rid of them, just like how we tried to kill off all the @CAPS7 and @CAPS25 because they were different. And it is wrong and inhuman",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15753,6,The obstacles the builders of the @ORGANIZATION1 people faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there is they would have to have different make new Routes that was yet to get made and existing transatlantic Routes.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12442,5,"The mood created by @PERSON1 in the memoir from ""Home:The Blueprints of Our Lives"" is that of a grateful sense. In this memoir Narciso reflected and thanked his parents for their love and sacrifice for him, Narciso also said that he was grateful for the teachings of his parents such as in the line ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family."" And ""I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love.""",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
648,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I think computers make a big role in monern cicity. For this reason I think that @CAPS4 should take the advantige that @CAPS4 have. @CAPS4 could do lots of things. @CAPS4 could use it for @CAPS7 related @CAPS6 @CAPS4 could use it for @CAPS5 @CAPS6. @CAPS4 could also chat online. @CAPS4 could use it for @CAPS7 related @CAPS6. Like homewrok and projects. @CAPS4 could use it for info on a project or homework. @CAPS4 could use it for the @CAPS8, @CAPS9, and @CAPS10. and many other reasons why @CAPS4 should have @CAPS12 for @CAPS7. @CAPS4 could use the computers for @CAPS5 @CAPS6. Like making holiday and birthday cards. Pay bills for morgiges online. @CAPS4 could book a hotel online. @CAPS4 could play on or agentst with online games. @CAPS4 use for bidding on ebay or amazon. Pay bills for long distance calling. @ORGANIZATION1 the @CAPS13 if you missed it. Or just @ORGANIZATION1 shows in general. @CAPS4 could use it for chatting online. Like sendding emails or talking on ooVoo. So thats why @CAPS4 sould take the advantige.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7094,3,"The biker has many features in his story. For example he has discriptive words that put pictures into my head. For example “One long, crippling hill” I can picture it in my head. “There was no one in sight.” All of these parts of the story put pictures in my head. Thats a good thing, for example you want the reader to understand it, and by having discribing words help.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15059,6,"In this @CAPS1 ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1 the builder of the empire State building faced many @CAPS2 during the building of the Empire State building.The @CAPS3 obstacle would be the wind. Because The building was so high And the more up the more Air and wind they had to stop landing or Drop off the dirigible. A dirigible is also a ballon or blump but there different because the dirigibles can be controlled by pappellers. Another reason was the @CAPS4 equpment. They didnt have the right equipment to dock the dirigible. So they @CAPS5 from letting them dock there ever again. They also @CAPS6 to stop it because it's over hundreds of civilians and if something goes @CAPS4 the balloon could fall on the civilizians.Those Are the reasons Why in the @CAPS1-""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1 had to face problems with docking ballons.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3490,2,"The material that someone people believe shouln't be viewed by childern, I don't believe should be removed from the library shelves just for that reason.     The library is not just for the children but also for the adults. Children are exposed to many things everyday that are not suited for them, whether it be in their home, at school, or even while their out in public. So why alter the library just for the children, when we don't even alter the public for them? I think if having certain material that isn't suitable for certain ages, then the children should be monitored closely on what they are pulling from shelves. By pulling something from a shelf just because a parent doesn't want their child to see, hear, or watch it, isn't right to the older people that come to the library.     Another reason i don't agree with removing things is because, by removing items that are not suited for a child is like saying we should move the childrens things off of shelves, because the adults have no use for them. Their are always many ways to suit both the needs of a child and the needs of an adult in a library, and still keep the children from what they shouldn't read. Most children are so amused by their own materials in the library they are not worried about the adult things. If everything a parent didn't want their child to see ws pulled from the selves, then there would be no use for the older people to come to the library. Their only custmors left would be the children, and that wouldn't be much business, because the parent's wouldn't want to stay because they wouldn't have anything to entertain them for the toe being.     There are always ways to make both side of the situatation fair. I just don't believe removing material not suited for children is the right thing to do.",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18594,7,"When I was patient. Their was a time when I was patient. Their are more and more way’s I get @CAPS1 patient when I’m not in no hurry to do something. I’m going to tell you a true story when I was patient. And I was not in a hurry in get it done. My first day at school and we was having fun with a bunch of people and on that first day we had work. When we attended to do it some people was not patient. I looked around the bright room and I was thinging about how should I be patient, “@CAPS1 I said” to myself I have to take the time @CAPS1 I could reach a good grade and @CAPS1 I was patient. The next day I was ready to see my grade on that work. I had a fun that’s the day when I was patient and taking my time.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15664,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in their attempts to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem they faced was the issue of safety. Most dirigibles were fueled by hydrogen, which was highly flammable. This danger was shown by the Hindenburg disaster in New Jersey, and the owners of the building did not want to face a similar accident in a place as densely populated as New York. Another obstacle that arose was the fact that the violent wind at such an altitude would toss the back of the ship back and forth. This would not only be a technical hassle as it would also make it nearly impossible to get passengers in and out of the dirigible, and make it a frightening experience for anyone inside the ship as well. In addition, the ships could not be weighed down with lead weights as it would be too risky to have them dangling high above pedestrians. A final implication was that if dirigibles moored at the Empire State building, it would violate an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. Because of this, docking a ship there would be illegal which obviously way not helpful to the project. In the end, these obstacles were the key reasons that the endeavor failed. ",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12082,5,"People make sacrafices for the ones they love. That is called being selfless. In the story, Narciso's parents are selfless. They left their family and friends to give their son a better life. The author makes an enjoyable and heartwarming mood.Narciso is very greatful. He said he has ""learned the definition of 'family' "". His parents wanted a better life for him. They gave up a lot and he recognize that. Rodriguez realized his parents were very hardworking. He respected his parents and loved them for everything they have done for him. ""I often tell them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done."" It's a great feeling knowing someone will do anything for you.Family is very important. @PERSON1 mentioned how his neighbors were all immagrants. They had left their family, too; and only had eachother. Knowing you have people who are like family is incredible. Although they can never replace blood relatives, friends are the next best thing. I think growing up, @PERSON1 learned to very important lessons. Put others before yourself, and work hard.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4458,2,"Do I believe that certain materials, such as books, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive?  I understand that some parents wouldn't want their kids reading a book about drugs or watching a movie about gangs, but libraries shouldn't have to remove them from their shelves.  There is not one movie, book, or magazine where everyone will approve of it.  Just because a couple of people find it offensive doesn't mean they should have the power to determine what materials libraries have or don't have on their shelves.       One reason why I believe certain items shouldn't be removed from a library just because a couple of people find it offensive is because what Katherine Paterson said in her quote.  She is saying if there was a book a couple of parents didn't want their kids to see and they were to complain and have the right to remove it from the libraries shelf.  Then sooner or later, more and more parents will be coming in complaining about a different book, movie, or magazine every other day.  Soon, there wouldn't be any books, movies, magazines in the library.       Another reason why I believe we should have no say in what items libraries hold is this.  As you know, there is many different cultural familes living in the @LOCATION1.  Some people say bibles should be allowed in libraries.  Half the population agrees on that statement, the other half thinks that is ridiculous and they're thinking how they would even suggest doing such a thing.  How would a library handle this situation.  If we gave people the right to decide what was held in libraries.  There would be a group of people walking in there and saying they don't believe in @CAPS1 so they must take those bibles off the shelf before their children read it.  Then, as soon as the believers in @CAPS1 hear about it.  They would come to that library and complain about them actually taking that off the shelves.  There would be no way in pleasing everyone, so the libraries should be able to put whatever they want on their shelves.       My third and final reason why I think the public should have no say in this matter is if libraries were forced to take items off their shelves just because a couple people complain about certain books or movies.  Then why couldn't people do that at restaurants, or movie rental business, or outlet stores with clothes they don't approve.  If it was to happen to one business, then it should happen to every business and in my perspective.  The only person who should have the say in what they have in their store/library is the person who is paying for it and that is the owner.  It's their responsibility to know what's too far concerning movies or books, etc.  The public has to accept those choices.  You have to look at it from their view.  Would you want them to come into your business and start complaining and then you are forced to get rid of that item because of them.  It's just not the right way to handle things.     After reading all those opinions of mine, I would hope that you see where I'm coming from and you see that it just wouldn't be humane to do that.  It's never been that way and it should never be that way.  Obviously parents don't want their kids to see things inappropiate.  But it's not our say and we just have to face the fact that's the way it should be",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4281,2,"Corrupt Censorship     @CAPS1 @MONTH1 occur when censorship decides to remove or block; showing certain media or readable content all pertains to the creator. In some cases, the distributor and less the author, director, or publisher, has no opinion on whether to display the product they have made, but from their own habit of making what they enjoy; it is the will from the store, person or etc. to display these materials. Libraries have an exponential option to publicly put up on their shelves or stock, but restricting too graphic material is all depended on the eduacational rules the library is equipted with.          Any type of content is art, art that should never be even considered to be changed or enhanced because it pertains to one artist. You can never remake, rewrite or recreate that visual material provided from the creator. And you are not aloud to, unless given permission to from the creator. Censoring or removing on the other hand, is permitted to the distributor. Their choice to publicly demonstrate something made by someone is all their choice.     Libraries for example, show that any given media or readable content is publicly displayed for anyone to see, so long as the audience fits their rules or criterias. In some instances, partial side of the audience will run across unexpected media and will have the inexecptional pursuasion to accept what is demonstrated. Though it is not the creators fault to ensure where their content is diplayed, but the audience's fault in whether to see that material. It is choice to read or see whatever you'd like, you aren't forced upon to follow through to what the distributor-let alone the creator- is offering. Enjoying the topic or material is optional.   When you have options in front of you, any given topics or subject to read or follow, it it your will to chose to read or see them. Enjoying is even more harder, but when a library's limit is basically the sky, you should not force it on them to throw out the book just because the censorship isnt up to your level. It is not the library to blame, but your own. Everyone has different views on certain content and it isnt your obligation to view it.      When you take down materials @CAPS2 intended for those who chose to view and enjoy, you destroy not @CAPS2 art a creator has made, but the joy that filled a viewers taste. Libraries shouldnt exceptionalize for certain people's expectations because not everyone finds censorship a solution. Katherine Paterson once said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work i abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so deos everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.'",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16058,6,"It is within our obligations as human beings to have dreams and want to convert them into reality. Al Smith's dream of having dirigibles land on the empire state building is one I'd consider to be rather erratic. There were many obstacles that proved from early on, the fate of this project was failure.       It is apparent from very early into the constructions that this was surreal because ""the one obstacle to their expanded life in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area"" (paragraph 6). Having dirigibles cruising through a large city should have been perceivably impossible to Al Smith, even before the construction of the building occurred.     Safety was also something to be seriously taken into consideration since ""most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" which also intertwined with the laws of objects flying too low over an urban area (paragraph @NUM1).",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3610,2,"Offensive books do belong in the library, just in a completely different area, away from the children. If we all chose a book that we didn't want in the library, there would be none left. So, since everyone has a different opinion about what is offensvie and what isn't, who's to say what can and can't be in the library?     When I was little, my grandma would take me to the library almost every @DATE1. I noticed that she tried to keep me from getting certain books and was fine with others. My @CAPS1 did the same thing, but they had different opinions on what was okay for me to read and what wasn't. Grandma wanted me to get religious books and @CAPS1 was okay with that and things like '@CAPS2 the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5', and '@PERSON1'.      Even at home, everyone's opinion is very different. For instance, when it comes to music at my house; @CAPS1 likes country, @CAPS7 likes metal, my brother likes alternative, my unlcle likes rock, and I like a combonation of all of it.      That just does to show how different people have different opinions; some more strict than others. If we relied on peoples' opinions to keep our librarys free of offense, there would be nothing in it",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21411,8,"We all need laughter once in our life!, but why do we need it? or why is it important to us?. We need laughter to have a great time with our friends and family because with out laughter our life's would be black and white we would be empty from inside with no spark of happiness and we would be grumpy all the time. Laughter is also important to us because that also gets us as people be in a relationship with someone we really like it maybe a female or a male it's also important that in the relationship you also have a great time when you are with that special person and not be bored and talk about things that really don't matter when you are with that person. Its fun when you make someone laugh because that shows that @CAPS6 are having a great time with you and might want to hang out some other day again and that's why we need laughter in a relationship or in friendships. Once I use to live in @LOCATION3 till my parents decided to move to @PERSON2.@CAPS5 my parents told me I was going to go to @LOCATION1 I knew a few people from this @LOCATION1.The people I knew were @NUM1,and @PERSON1 but I didnt really talk with @LOCATION2 or @CAPS1 before I only talked with @PERSON1. On my first day of @LOCATION1 he presented @CAPS2 friends to me because I didn't really know anybody else besides them three he would make up any kind of jokes and would involve me in it so I would be able to meet this friends better and maybe be friends with them but laughter always make friends and boy friends because I started dating when I was in middle @LOCATION1 I dated three guys my third boyfriend was the best he was sweet and nice he would do @CAPS3 ever just to make me laugh we only dated for @NUM2 years but @CAPS5 there was too much drama that I broke up with him it was really hard because I really liked him but we would still talk and make fun of each other he would still be nice to me even if we were not together like he wanted and me to but just because of the drama we had we broke up.always laugh dont get down just because of a relationship smile and laugh.After a year with out dating he decided to ask me if I wanted to be @CAPS2 girlfriend again and I thought about it a lot because I didn't want to go through the same drama as before.While we were not dating he would always find away to make me laugh or smile. when he sees me down @CAPS2 always there for me to support me and make me laugh that's @CAPS3 I like about him that @CAPS2 sweet and nice but if he only didn't believe @CAPS3 @CAPS2 friends tell him we would still be together and we would be laughing at everything together. We would make fun of each other we would never stop laughing it was some great times when I was with him but he still try's to keep a smile on my face even if I'm mad sad or not in the mood of doing something that's why we need laughter in our life's because it brings joy to does people that love us and care for us and by us having a smile in our face @CAPS6 are happy. Always make a relationship good by having a good time and making each other laugh one way or another it doesn't matter of @CAPS3 you laugh the thing is that you have fun.  Another way to have fun and enjoy your relationship and friends at the same time is to have a time and maybe go to the movies with all your friends and boyfriend and go watch a movie or go to the fair were ever you think you want to go but also think about your friends and boyfriend if @CAPS6 are going to have fun there or if @CAPS6 will get bored. When you go with them make sure you make them laugh at least so @CAPS6 know that you are having fun make up a joke but don't say a joke that will make them fall asleep like my little sister @CAPS4 told us a joke it goes like this (guy on the @NUM3 I speak to your dad?"" the little boy whisper and said ""@CAPS2 busy!"",""@CAPS3 about your mom?"" said the man on the phone, @CAPS5 the kid said ""@CAPS4 is busy too!"" @CAPS5 the man asked him ""@CAPS5 @CAPS3 are @CAPS6 doing?"" and the boy says""@CAPS6 are looking for me!"" we didn't get it at first @CAPS5 my sister told us that the boy was hiding from @CAPS2 parents because he took the phone with him as in the boy don't tell jokes like does make it more funner. and thats why we need laughter in our life's.  ",15,16,,31,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3508,2,"In today's society it is easy to find small things that offend people wether it is politics or religion. The truth is no one is able to keep everyone happy. A major debate of today would be that of the media. Should people have the right to remove books, music, movies, or magazines from our shelves because they are found offensive to one person? The answer is no. Three important reasons support this answer: freedom of speech, freedom of the press, and knowing everyone can find something that is offensive.     When @LOCATION1 was finally free from @CAPS1 a main goal was to have our freedom of speech. This was a huge achievement for the @ORGANIZATION1. Allowing people to remove matieral from our shelves would be breaking the one rule we worked so hard to gain. People today rely on being able to speak their minds to be apart of their government.     Another law that @CAPS2's appriecate is, freedom of the press. Being allowed to write how they feel is what @LOCATION1 is practically based on. With out this wouldn't we be back into the old ways that @CAPS3 fought to change? This is a question you must think about when making this important decision.     Finally a huge impact on this decision is knowing that everyone has an opinion on something. It is easy to find someone that is offened by the smallest of things. What happens when someone decideds to find the @CAPS4 offensive to their religion? Do we take it off the shelve and tell the @CAPS5 sorry? If we decided to allow this would there even be books, movies, music, or even magazines for us?      It is easy to assume just to take a book off the shelve because it's offensive to you, but what happens when we allow this to everyone? That is why when coming to a decision on how we should handle this, it is going to take much more thinking than a couple of days. We must remember though the rights we are given as @CAPS3; the freedom of speech and the freedom of the press, and we must always think about how this is going to effect our later generations.",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15550,6,"There were several obstacles to the success of the construction. Perhaps the main obstacle, the obstacle that nothing could be done about, was the wind itself. On paragraph @NUM1 it mentions how the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. These giant- balloon like machines would constantly swivel around the mooring mast even if they were tied down. The Hindenburg disaster in May 6, 1937 also proved how dangerous it would be to have blimps filled with highly flammable hydrogen gas over a densely populated area, like downtown New York. The project was also held back by existing laws about flight in an urban area. ""It was illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"" -says the author on paragraph @NUM2. Incoming blimps would simply be flying too low against law for this to work.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18627,7,One time when I was patient is when I was a little kid and my mom said we were going on a top to visit my cousins in @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I was just a little kid so I was very excited to take my first plane ride. When we finally got to @LOCATION1 I was so excited. I asked my mom when we got to the hotel can I go swimming. She told me to just be patient. So when we got to the hotel I was patient as long as I could be then I could’t wait anymore. So I put on my trunks and went swimming with my cousin. And that was a time when I was patient for something.,9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16600,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" there were some obsticales that the builders faced. Some of the obsticales that were faced had to do with the strength of the frame. The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast to top the the buildings flat roof because it would stress the frame to much. So over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had been made to the buildings frame work. Anothe obsticae the mooring mast was never destined to fulfill its purpose.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13336,5,In every paragraph in the memoir he explains how life was and how he loved it so much. In paragraph @NUM1 he uses parenthesis to show or talk about how much he loved different kinds of things. He shows in his writing all the warm kind of feelings he had as a child. In paragraphs three and four he also talks about how much he loved being with other cultures and how his parents were really good people.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13189,5,"The mood created by @PERSON1 in the memoir from Home The Blueprints of Our Lives is one of generosity and friendship. From an early age, @PERSON1 recounts how more often than not there would be a guest at his table. It could be Alegria his ""babysitter and first friend,"" his surrogate grandparents, or any number of friend and relatives. There was a constant ""congregation of Friends and family"" they generously hosted, because his Family knew that because of their generosity, they would always be welcome at other people's houses. ""My parents always kept their arms and doors open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" This constant congregation of Friends and family in @PERSON1's home, creates a mood of generosity and friendship throughout the memoir.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3891,2,"Should materials that are offensive be taken off shelves?Should movies you loved and use to watch when you were a kid be gone in a instant?     Magazines are offensive, they always have been, they get the truth out of celebrities and people and they twist their words into something totally different from what they said. There are tons of movies in this world that will show harm to people, replay a bad part of somebodys life, say things about people.Music is just words and sound, they make songs about people that have done stuff in the past , that people would find offensive. I have seen a music video about @PERSON1 and making fun of her being in jail, but do i think that should be taken off the computer, no its entertaining.This world needs something to keep us intertained. Imagine what it would be like if we had no news reporters, no paparazzi. We wouldnt know anything going on around the world, and seeing the things about celebrities that they would find offensive, i can understand where they are coming from, getting talked about all the time, especialy about mistakes you have made in your lives, but thats how the world functions, thats always going to be apart of everyones lives,talk.     So as i have been saying, getting rid of movies,music,magazines,books that are offensive would not be a good choice in my opinion, cause what would entertain us if they were gone?",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1443,1,"Computers have been one of technoligy's greatest advances, and yet one of society's downfall. Originally thought to spread ideas and faraway places, computers have been proven to do quick the contrary. Computers are dangerous devices, and are targeting young, wholesome kids. It is the main reason why society is today, predicting that this future generation is wobbling on an unsteady and weak foundation. These devices, the source of this mayhem, must immediately be removes from society because they take away the true benefits of life, have harmful effects on our health, and support some of the country's deadliest predators. Firstly, computers are linked with the crime of stealing the pleasures of childhood. Since @DATE1, the amount of adolescent users has shot up @PERCENT1. Amazing ly enough, @PERCENT2 of parents polled admitted that their children spend at least @NUM1 hours on the computer everyday. This takes away the pleasures or reading, exercising, spending time outside and hnging with friends and fmaily. These negative effects have an unhealthy toll on society, especially teenagers, the most frequent users. As a result diet and exercise are curtailed, raising the obesity number by @PERCENT3, and lock of ourdoor or family activities have promoted anti-social @CAPS1 this alarming rate out fufture generation @MONTH1 indeed be balancing on a cracked foundation. In addition to limiting diet and exercise, computers are also the source of yet another act. As long as the computers are plugged, they emit invisible wares of electromagnetic radiation. These waves are linked to diseases and cancers. Use of computers have to cause brain-tumors and leukemia, asw ell as brain disorder and cancers. Leukemia, when caused at a young age, is difficult to cuse and stants the child's development. Children exposed to at least @NUM2 hours a day to @ORGANIZATION1 compared to the few who spend their time outdoors are @NUM3 times as likely to develop such possibilities. The ultimate prevention to such risjs is to to the rest of such causes, computers and it completely. Lastly, computers are harmful because they also a deadly we open. As an adolescent unthinkingly says the web and chtrooms, they are at risk of atteck by thousands of children predators prowling the web. Computers contain extremely valuable and secret information, such as names, birthdates, genders and even social security numbers. With one click, acfepting a strongers inivte, the online predators hack into the child's computer and obation such valuable information. Or the predators @MONTH1 be less postive and attack directly-asking questions to the child themselves. In fact, a familiar story tells the unfortunate fare of one local @CAPS2 girl, who unknowingly chatted with an online stranger. This online predator smoothly invited her to the mall, where they moved. A couple devastating, weeks later, the girl's reamin in were found, burned, as the last deadly act the predator performed on the teen. Three for, computers are simply too dangerous, a predator's thumbbook as they search for their next victim. by removing the computer, you eliminate the threats online predators pose for your child and you as well. It is amazing to learn that technology's greates advanvcement, the computer, can unleash such harmful effects. Lack of engaging activities such as exercising and reading are stunded by the ever distracting computer its electromagnetic radiation attacks our health and lastly, it supports the acts of the thousands of cruel, sneaky online predators awaiting your child on the web. By removing the source of all these troubles, those acts can be prevented and society @MONTH1 begin to the pain for reform.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19305,7,A person I know that is patient was my old teacher named @PERSON1. He was a very patient man although we got on his nerves. It we didn’t understand a question that he explained a million times he was still patient. Even when we got attitudes with @PERSON1 he was still a patient man. I think @PERSON1 was determined to be patient with us as he must of prayed because he was always patient with us through thick and thin. @PERSON1 was the most patient teacher and person I’ve ever ???,9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21113,8,"@CAPS1 do @CAPS2 know were my wax for my skin board is? I yelled to my @CAPS1 as i walked out of my room.I think it is on @CAPS8 book shelve but why do @CAPS2 need it?"" my father replied.It's for @PERSON1's birthday present, I don't @CAPS4 any money for him and i promised him something amazing this year so i am going to take him to @PERSON2 @PERSON2 and we are going to ride are canoe down the giant sand dune.why cant @CAPS2 just get money from us or something and then buy him a card at the dollar tree? my @CAPS1 responded to me with a look on his face as if he were saying @CAPS8 the stupidest kid i know.@CAPS2 know i don't take handouts @CAPS1 i would @CAPS4 to work for that money and i don't @CAPS4 enough time to work for it and hangout with @PERSON1 all day, I mean it is his birthday after all and besides this is more fun I said with a mischievous grin on my face.Well alright the canoe is already hooked up to the truck, my @CAPS1 replied.That's fine with me pops, but can @CAPS2 give us a ride out there and back? I asked him trying that puppy dog face my sister always makes to get what she wants.Only if @CAPS2 stop making that weird face at me, do @CAPS2 want to drive? He asked me as we walked out the door to go pick up @PERSON1.Yes please, I said as he flipped me the keys.Pulling into @PERSON1's drive way i shut off the truck and stuffing the keys into my left front pocket i walked into @PERSON1's house. Walking into it i knocked on the wall and two heads turned to look up at me. One my best friend @PERSON3 a sandy short hair boy with a white face and the other was the birthday boy @PERSON1 who much like @PERSON3 had the same hair color but had pink rose cheeks. I thought i would fine @CAPS2 here i said . What's this adventure @CAPS8 taking me on today he asked? @CAPS2 will see soon enough i replied now throw on some shorts and get a crappy pair of shows I will be out in @CAPS8 living room watching the @ORGANIZATION1 win there game when @CAPS8 done. So leaving @PERSON3 and @PERSON1 to change I waited outside @PERSON1's room. Alright, said @PERSON3 we're ready now tell us. Not yet I replied with a mischievous grin on my face. @PERSON1 yelled goodbye to his mom as he closed the door behind us and we headed for the truck were my @CAPS1 was still waiting. So @PERSON1 said to my @CAPS1 as he got into the back seat do @CAPS2 know what @CAPS8 son is going to make us do today? Yes but @CAPS2 will probably want this one to be a surprise. Well why is there a canoe on top of the truck, are @CAPS2 going fishing @PERSON1? @PERSON3 asked as he climbed in next to @PERSON1. HA I wished laughed my pa as I started up his truck. Pulling out of @PERSON1's driveway I headed off towards the bridge and out of town, going straight towards @PERSON2. Turning into @PERSON2 I found a parking spot on the other side of an old car and shut off the truck, I tossed the keys to my @CAPS1 saying I don't think @CAPS2 will want me to @CAPS4 these in my pockets I said to my pa. There was only one other person there a drunk man waving a beer bottle around and sitting on a log. Putting the canoe into the water i tossed each person a paddle and said row to the other bank. As we reached the other bank we all jumped out and i pulled the canoe up onto the sand at the bottom of a massive sand duneWe are going to push this up the dune then wax the bottom and ride down the hill in it i said smiling madly at them bothYour stupid the commented together but were down they sad starting to push the canoe up the hill. As we reached the top we flipped the canoe over and started hurriedly waxed the bottom, then pushed it to a likely spot to slide down and all jumped in we slide forward a little but stoped. Without another word me and @PERSON3 jumped out and pushed with while running then jumping in we flew on down the sand dune and hit the water with a thud snapping the canoe in two as it flipped me out to a log ten yards away as i saw @PERSON3 fly out and hit the water with a cannon ball as @PERSON1 just fell out the side into the shallows. When i emerged i heard the drunk man yell from the other side of the bank.""@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 THE @CAPS5 @CAPS6 IN THE @CAPS7 OF @CAPS8 @CAPS9' """,20,16,36.0,36,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12618,5,"The overall mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness. First, Narciso's parents went through the struggle of coming to @LOCATION2 and starting over. Narciso narrates, ""My parents, originally from Cuba, arrived in the United States in 1956."" His parents came from Cuba to the United States to have a happier future. Narcisos family is nice to everyone and everyone in their neighborhood is nice to them. He explains his parents doings. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" Narciso's parents are happy to let anyone into their home. Finally, Narciso is very grateful towards his parents. Narciso explains, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Narciso is very happy about what his parents did for him. The mood of this memoir is happiness.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11931,5,"The mood created in this memoir is excilent. For example in paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This gives me the feeling of thankfulness and to really admire what my parents have done for me. Another example is in paragraph @NUM2 it says ""It was here I learned the real definition of family."" This quote makes me feel so happy that I have a family that supports me and is always there for me. This memoir really changed how I look at things and made me relize how thankful I am to have my family.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3786,2,"'Book or no Book?' Certain studies have shown that there are many people in this world that have many diffrent intrest. Wheather that be cars, boats, toys, or animals it shouldn't matter what the intrest is. I firmly beleive that a library should have books over tons of things. Just because one person might not agree with it doesn't mean that another should not be able to read or possible learn about it.      This is a on going debate nation wide and there is going to have to be a decision made fast!! There are to many people making enimies all over the world. I was asked to submit my opinion and i beleive that they should be allowed to check out any book that they want too. If the opposite person does not agree with the fact that those books are being checked outh then they don't have to watch it.      There are multiple solutions to the problem. The librarys could have diffrent sections for diffrent types of books or such as sorting them by class or hobbies. There could also be age limits so that kids don't get ahold of anyting that they shouldn't be watching or reading.That way the other people would never even have to see the books that he or she does not agree with.      Well i cant wait to see how the results turn out!! I also hope they people make the right vote. Im not saying that my vote is the only way, its just my opinion. Either way there will be angry people and people that will be bursting with joy. So @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 for letting me voice my opinion!",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16060,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the building were quite aparent. One obstacle was that of nature, winds atop the building were at high speeds and always changing, this would make the dirigible unstable and difficult to dock. Another obstacle they faced was that of the passangers and bystanders safety. The dirigible could become uncontrollable putting many lives in danger. The last obstacle the builders faced was that of a law against flying airships too low over urban areas, it would make it illegal for a dirigible to dock on the Empire State building. The many obstacles that the builders faced blocked the completion of having a dirigible dock atop the Empire State building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4463,2,"Censorship is just another way to take knowledge from another person or a society. Wanting to take and hide even the smallest of discreet history, politic corruption, and inappropriate sights to a generation can turn them all ignorant and unaware of their past, present, and possibly future.                 Censorship is extremely dangerous to a soceity because it leaves them vulnerable to the future. For example, if people tried to censor @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and many other environmentalist around the globe of the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 possibility, then the world would not be able to have the chance to stop or at least slow the upcoming disaster by going green. Instead, we would most likely die a few hundred years before that deadline. Also, maybe if more people knew about @PERSON2's censorship of his oil distribution among the @LOCATION2 (during his presidency) people might have at least discussed of impeachment.                                                                            Try to think how the future would have been if racism, terrorism, wars, or even an event like the holocaust were censored. That could be taken as brainwashing! Even though that @MONTH1 cause peace and happiness around the world, we still would know nothing of our history leaving us historically, unintellilectual. Then think of all the sudden problem it would cause if that information was suddenly found. In the book series of 'The @CAPS5' by @PERSON1, a city has been isolated from their past, who they call 'the @CAPS6', and they are basically brainwashed to think that they almost destroyed the world by war and destruction by the new government and their new technology.     Luckily, in our own era I do not believe we are censored from most things except of course politics going on between other countries. For example, the @LOCATION1 bin @CAPS7 killing was nothing of anyones awareness except the @CAPS8 of @ORGANIZATION1, military, and @CAPS9. That was a thoughtful choice from @CAPS10 as well instead of announcing it on @NUM1 news. I'd rather of coursebe notified about my history, because it's interesting and it shows why things are now. Books like 'To @CAPS11 a @CAPS12' or '@PERSON3' should never be taken off shelves for young pupils or old matures. Although it would seem a bit more offensive to hearing a historical racist cocasian singing about negroes than a racist book, I would always be interested in hearing about it.     Censorship should definitely be illegal itself in libraries, @CAPS13 stores, and any other selling stores of books, music, movies, and/or magazines. Although, I have not heard of any recent censorships, but then again should I not be able to? It is censorship..",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10218,4,"Why the author concludes the story with this paragraph is pretty much to say in the spring when the plant starts over Saeng will start over to. The story shows that this is the meaning because Saeng was having a really hard winter and was having a hard time adjusting to all of the new things, but in the spring she can start over just like the hibiscus will.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4631,2,"Many people have different views on censorship. Some people believe there are movies, books, newspapers, etc that contain subject matter that is not appropriate for some viewers and that they should keep their writing on certain things to a certain extent or not at all. Other people believe people have the right to say what they want when they want, on a topic they believe the be true or not true, or very improtant to them, also called freedom of speech. Also people believe that yes, there are some things written out there that should not have been written but they have no control over and to some people it @MONTH1 be appropriate.      I do believe there are stories written that are not appropriate. But I know that even though I find the subject to not be appropriate or of any use to me, another person will. I know that every person out there is different and has their own beliefs on different things. If people had the power to control what books, magazines, newspapers and movies were in libraries then @PERSON1 was right, 'We would have no books left on the shelf for any of us'.           Certain books, newspapers, movies, and magazines could help certain people and be of interest to certain people no matter what the subject is or how inappropraite it @MONTH1 be as long as they are along the right age. If the story is plainly about drugs, sex, alcohol, and voilence with really no use to it, then yes I do believe it should be taken off the shelf. You do not know who could get their hands on that movie, book, or article. It could be a little kid and we do not want to open the door for that. People have many different beliefs and I do believe we should not take anything off the shelf that could be of use to anyone, but I also do believe there is a certain extent.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9436,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it provides closure to both Saeng and the story. Saeng was upset about the fact that she failed her test, but towards the end of the story she realizes that things happen, and sometimes we have no control over what happens, but you’ve also got to pick yourself up again if what happens, knocks you down. When seeing the geese and the hibiscus, she realizes that everyone and everything has to adapt to something new all the time. Saeng might have failed her driving test because they drive differently in Vietnam, so she will have to adopt to the way we drive here, along with all our rule and laws. This is why the author concludes the paragraph in that way.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15790,6,"When builders were building the Empire State Building they came across many obstacles. One problem was lack of suitable landing area in @CAPS1 (paragraph 6). Al Smith came up with the idea to put a mooring mast to the top of the building to allow dirigibles to land there, but there was many problems with this mooring mast. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame."" (paragraph @NUM1) architects had to strengthen the building's foundation. Over sixty thousand dollars was spent to try and modify the buildings framework. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" (paragraph @NUM2) The winds were shifting and the back of the ship would swivel around, which was not safe. Another reason is that airships flew too low over urban areas. Having a mooring mast for dirigibles to land was dangerous, going against some laws, and a lot of work.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12406,5,"In the memoir, the mood the author creates is peaceful. @PERSON1 says his family has a warm home, which means it's nice and quiet. Where @PERSON1's family lived, the different cultures that lived in the neighborhood were friendly with each other. In @PERSON1's family, they had countless extended family members who usually joined the family at the table for a nice meal and family get together. @PERSON1's family welcomed many people to their family. @PERSON1 was very grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. His family had many rich culinary skills. Their best skill was cooking, which was fun and relaxing to them. Finally, growing up in the environment in New Jersey gave @PERSON1 a great sense that ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" Clearly, @PERSON1 and his family were very friendly and did many things that were peaceful.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7448,3,In this story the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. He tries to get directions but the people he asked really didnt know what they were talking about. Thats why you have to be careful on who you ask. Then he needs a drink but that dosent work out to well because the water ends up tasting like battery acid. Then the cyclist begins to be on his way again and finds same difficulty in the road. The same difficulty in the road. The road is in bad condition and must do slower then the speed limit. At this point it felt like he was gonna die. Lucky he found a bathroom and drank from the sink.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17880,7,"Swimming is a lot of fun. I enjoy feeling the cool water all around me. Patience is an important part of the swimming you have to be patient when waiting to start practice, stretching, waiting for instruction when learning a new stroke learning a new way to turn at the wall, ect. On the first day of swim team this year the coaches went through safety rules, regulations, and what we were going to do this year. For all the people who knew this stuff already, like me it wasn't very easy to be patient. But I personally think the entire team did a good job listening. Patience is important.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12378,5,"In the memoir, the author tells us all about his family and friends and his backround. He tells us that the way he grew up effected him all his life. He loved his parents and relatives and friends and his home. He even loved his Cuban heritage. In this entire memoir there is nothing but happiness and good attitude from the author. He lets us know that home is where the heart is and that he would'nt trade his childhood life for anything.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15869,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigible to dock there are lack of a suitable landing area. In the excerpt they said ""The one obstacle was their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area"". Another obstacle was the climate like wind pressure. For example they said ""The stress of the dirigibles load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below"". The next obstacle is dirigibles from outside of the United States. The dirigibles German's use hydrogen which is flammable. They said ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. Thats obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigible to dock.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
513,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, I am writing this letter on behalf of all the busy people in our country. We have come to the conclusion that we need, not want, but need computers in our life. First, we need them to communicate to other people. Second, we need computers to do research for school and work. Lastly, us kids need computers to type essays, prompts, or papers for each class. Communication is very important in everyday life. For instance, I have a grandma that lives in @LOCATION1. I only get to see her once or twice a year in person. Throughout the entire year, I video chat with her through @CAPS3 computer because it is a whole lot easier than flying there. Without computers to video chat with @CAPS3 grandma, I have no communication with her they one or two times a year. Using a computer for communication is extremly helpful it allows you to do so many things without travelling for, like video chatting. Another reason why computers are a neccessity in our is because reseach for and easier. Many kids nowadays have so much homework and spend on the internet. For I myself, that I. The internet is a quick way to get the reseach. Plus, the research I have found is just as accurate as a book from a library. Computers are absolutly needed when kids have a load of homework and projects that need to be researched. Thinks when the time a to, kids have to type up essays and prompts that its unimaginable. Just in the @DATE1 I had to type on english, essay and a fluently paragraph. Final grade @CAPS2 I did not type it, on a computer. Typing things on the computer cames out of school also, whole @CAPS3 dad is frequently typing up and he is also typing up essays for his company. Many things nowadays in order to be perfect, have to be written up on the computer or you will not get the result you were hoping for. In conclusion, computers are modern devices and you are going to have to live with it. Computers provide great communication with everyone around or even across the country. Also, they make research for school become a lot more efficent. Finally, computers type papers and essays up faster. Computers are a neccessity for living.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
339,1,"Dear @PERSON2, @CAPS1 a “home on your town; all you hear is, “mom, mom , mom drive me to the library to get books”. You see many residents just dying to go to foreign countries but have no money. Is this what you want every home to start looking like? Computers have a great affect on people seeing as it allows people to talk and interact with one another. You can learn about places you’ve always wanted to go to and it is probably the device that makes your life easiest. For these reasons computers are what benefits society most. First of all, computers let friends and family talk without spending a nickel. I know I have relatives who are too poor to pay the high costs of phone bills that come their way when we need to talk this means that not everyone can afford talking on a phone, but a computer costs nothing to use. Also, in the @ORGANIZATION3 issue @NUM1, @DATE1 @NUM2 a recent poll showed that @PERCENT1 of people who own computer use it to talk instead of on a phone. I know some people say that computers are too time consuming, but if this many people use computers to talk, there’s no need to worry about paying phonebills. Also, @PERSON1 a @CAPS2 of @ORGANIZATION4 says that less people needed a loan when the computer came out with instant messaging and video chatting. This shows that friends and families stopped paying massive phonebills and just talked online. Furthermore, just from using a computer anyone can find facts about lands halfway across the @LOCATION1. What’s more is that they can be in the bedroom or room. A boy name @CAPS3 @PERSON4 who attends @ORGANIZATION1 said that he always wanted to go to when he was little and was as when he looked up @LOCATION2 and facts and pictures on the web. Also, @PERSON3 a teacher at @ORGANIZATION5 @ORGANIZATION1 task a poll asking how many students did projects having to do with foreign countries and @PERCENT2 of them they did. That means that so many people need to resourced foreign countries and need to use a computer to find out about it. It shows that many more use computers to visit faraway lands. Last but not least, computers are just about the convenient thing to have in a recent poll done by @ORGANIZATION2 showed that @PERCENT3 at people would rather have a computer than a car that just shows the important computers are. Also, I used to think computers were bad for you and everything, but when I received one for my @NUM3 birthday, I found out how useful they were. Many people say computers are time comsuming because they haven’t used one yet. Also did you know that million people use a computer that’s more than half their population and such a poor country? That shows her important computers are and how convenient. All and all, now @CAPS1 have if happy residents, laughing on the computer they do because computers allow them to talk with friends learn and visit foreign countries and are so convenient @PERSON2 and readers computers withour a doubt benefit society.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6199,3,"The features of the setting effected the cyclist very much. For example, the sun was beginning to beat down. Another example, I was hitting my water bottles pretty regularly. The setting were hot and dry. It effected the cyclist very much. It was to the point of dying.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12063,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, @CAPS1 created a certain mood. Narciso Rodriguez created a gentle mood that stayed constant. @CAPS1 tells how his parents ""always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family."" Which means @CAPS1 probably grew up in a life without very much violence. @CAPS1 also says that @CAPS1 ""will always be grateful for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 wants his parents to know that @CAPS1 loves them very much and lets them know by thinking them. Lastly @CAPS1 @CAPS1 says @CAPS1 ""will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" The sense of gentleness stays throughout the whole memoir because @CAPS1 is always saying the good things about his life, not the bad.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7246,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist since it is affecting her condition. She needs water to survive, and the next town is very far away. So she could possibly pass out without brake, and the hot temperatures. “When I tried a draper I was, it had the flavor of battery acid” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). If she doesn’t find water soon, it will affect herb condition. Also, the features of the setting affects her determination. When she knows that she needs to find a town. she works harder. ""i would conserve my water go inward for an hour or so atleast or my inner spirit""(@NUM1). She would try her hardest to make smart moves, and make it to a town, as fast as possible. She works harder since she knows without water, her life is in danger. Now, things could get even rougher.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3614,2,"I believe that it is unfair to ban ony sort of materials from the library.  It simply isnt right to withold information from your children.  Any information that they might read or hear is something that they are going to find out sooner or later anyway.  Wouldn't you much rather your children find out from reading it in a book or magazine or hearing it in a movie or cd?  Then they can ask parents any questions that they @MONTH1 have about things they have read and heard instead of hearing it from a teenager in the hall or talking to a friend about it and being misguided and given the wrong information.     If your child is to read about sex or an affair in a magazine wouldnt you like to know?  Would you want them to ask you questions about it so that they understand the difference between right and wrong.  Wouldn't it be much easier to know that your child is educated on certian things so that they know when things are false and they're not confused or worried about something small?     Any of the things that they @MONTH1 read in a magazine or see in a movie are things that they could easily look up on the internet.  On the internet there are more graphic photos, and some websites give false information on subjects.  Your childs curiosity could take them to inappropriate websites.      When i was a child and I was curiouse my parents sheltered me from certian things. I found out what kinds of things they were trying to hide from me while I was only in @NUM1 grade when high schoolers on my bus told me all about sex, showed me pictures and told me things that I would have much rather heard about in class or read.  I felt like I couldnt talk to my parents about these things.  I mean what would you do if your second grader came home form school and started talking to you about the kinds of things that they had heard on the bus.  What if the high schoolers had been lieing to me, I would feel stupid for saying anything about it because my parents wouldn't have understood what I was talking about.      What I'm saying is that understand that there are some things that a child should never be allowed to read, see, or hear.  It isn't fair to them that they don't get the opportunity themselves to learn about it and ask questions. Besides isn't it your fault in all reality if they get they're hands on somthing innapropriate for their age becuase they aren't getting the proper supervision?  If you feel that they are reading, listening, or watching something that you feel is in appropriate, ask questions.  Explain things to them when they ask you a question.  Don't beat around the bush.  Make sure that they know the difference between good and bad, right and wrong. It truely is not fair to take these things away from them when they don't even know why they are not allowed to look at it",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18929,7,"Do you have patience? Well if you she a your like we. But I now in guy that ???  patience his name is @CAPS1.M. @CAPS1.M holols the secret of patience what helps him a lot is he about talk much ??? ??? ?much like one time we were at cedes. But and, we were in a line for three hours! @CAPS2 dolo care though he was just giant ??? ??? One ? we were outside playing and we made a whole hee live mesl ho got sting five times but didn't complain about how bad @CAPS4 hurt I have some patience but not is much as @CAPS2. But @CAPS2 isn't prefect when heh hurgry he has no patience and I have in file a why. The one time @CAPS2 showed the must patience was ?? his moms car broke down in the suddle  of ?? And @CAPS4 was wintel out so the car was cold @CAPS4 took nine hours for a four kuck get struck and that threw his mom over the ?? but not him until ??? when he got finally but ??? had a nice mean @PERSON1 them out and they went to @ORGANIZATION1 lets to get food. @CAPS2 has the most patience I've ever seem someone have.",9,5,,14,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18617,7,"There is this little patience I use a lot go I called it hunting patience. On @DATE1 my dad and I were hunting in @LOCATION1, @CAPS1. we got into our stands baking over a @NUM1 yard bean feild, and not @NUM2 hours later two does walked in from our left they were coming close to @CAPS2. I was about to draw my bow when I look around and saw my dad waiting for @CAPS2 to shoot but when I look in the forest conner of our field I saw a big six point buck standing there not moving. I decied to be patient and see if the buck would come in. I saw I deer move into my blind spot where I couldn’t see it, I thought it might leave like that buck last year in my blind spot too. I waited for @NUM3 minutes, just when I thought he left I saw him again coming right for us. It was at @NUM4 then @NUM5 then @NUM6 and stopped. I looked at my dad and nodded to give him the sign to shoot. He under stood drew back his bow and let that arrow fly. The arrow, sailed into the deer and at that moment I know that because of patience we will have some good eating tonight with a party to honer the good days of hunting.",10,11,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12304,5,The mood the author created was a good mood. It is a good mood because it is telling you about his life he has. He has a good life because he has good and nice parents. He is wealthy. He has no trouble like getting punished. His parents are wealthy and they have a good job. The author did a good job make this story happy and not sad.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4277,2,"'The @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2', 'The @CAPS3 @CAPS4', 'The @CAPS5 of @PERSON2'.  Do these titles sound familiar? They should, beause these are only a tiny fraction of the @CAPS3 literary masterpeices that people have enjoyed since their publications.  These wonderful books also share another characteristic, they have all been banned from certain libraries across the country and around the world.       When a child goes off to school ecah day, his or her parents are left to think that he or she will be getting a quality education that meets the stadards of their own core values and morals.  But certain parents @MONTH1 become outraged when they see the books shelved on schools library shelves that they see as wrong, and don't want their precious children exposed to such immoral concepts that go against their idea of what is right.  In all reality though, how is this helping anyone?     By keeping a student away from a book or subject, the person causing the censorship is limiting what that student can learn.  By censoring things people are not only kept from ideas that might shock them, but also from ideas that might make them think.  If a person cannot think for themselves, they cannot draw their own conclusions on things.  When one cannot think for oneself or make decisios for oneself, how can this person be considered a free individual.       Infamous dictators, such as @PERSON1, burned books to keep his citizens from thinking what he did not want them to think.  By banning a book in a school library, a parent is also keeping their child from thinking what they do not want them to think.  And when you want a book out of a shool library you are ot only keepig your child from reading this book, but everyone who goes to the school from reading the book. How is that fair?      So instead of wanting certain books to be off the shelves of your childs school, I say this.  Teach your children to be careful in what they read.  If you don't wan them to read 'The @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2' tell them not to read that book.  Tell your children to follow the moral guidelines you want them to follow, and if certain books keep them from having their own thoughs instead of yours, just tell them not to look, and don't bother everyoe else about it",4,3,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1287,1,"To begin with, The learning ability people get from it has improved. The @CAPS1 source is very helpful to many people. The communication is much easier than talking on the phone. I believe that computers benefit the society in many different ways. First of all, children and people at home and at school use computers for learning purposes. In some grades at school there is a special typing program that helps improve typing skills. There are also hard drive discs that you can play with to help you enhance on your reading skills. It is just a way to make learning fun for young kids. Another great way to learn online is going to websites that have sample math problem and print the sheet out to practice. They are great ways to help learning. Secondly, the computer has many more ways to benifit someone. They are helpful for getting your local weather. In the winter you can see if your school has cancelled in seconds. Often I get projects where it calls for me to do research on a specific topic and it is very easy to look up simple information. The computer also has different links that are helpful for writing a paper, making a power point presentation, and excel spread sheet. All of those resources can either help graphing results for science class or even typing up a paper for @CAPS2. They are useful ways to make life easier. Lastly, computers tend to make communication a little easier. For me, when I'm out sick from school I like to tell my teachers by emailing them and even asking if I can make up any work using facebook, aim, myspace, and skype are all fun and fast ways to communicate with friends. All of the websites pretty much do the same thing but different people like diffrent sites that their friends are on you can email friends and family who live far away and even close. It's a way to get back and forth to eachother. In conclusion, you have heard the different ideas and I consider computers as a benifit. It helps learn, communicate, and most of all do the important things that we need.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1374,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I think we should have computers for great purposes. One reason is because there is a lot more information on the internet. Another reason is because there is some history on many different websites. My last reason is because you can send messages to a faraway place by using e-mail. My frist reason states that there is a lot more information on the internet. For example, if youn don't have the newspaper with you, but you have you laptop, you can get information that way. Did you know, over @NUM1, @NUM2 people use their laptops for information and not games. Another example is if we get the newspaper everyday but it doesn't have the article that we are looking for, we use the internet. When we look for information on the internet, you would use yahoo, google, and other informational websites that you need. My second reason states that there is some history on many different websites. For instance, you can go on a websites and learn about history everyday, insted of going to a museum about history everyday! One day, I had to make a project about the @CAPS4 and I had four days to do it, you know what I did, I went on a historical website about the @CAPS4. I got an A+ for my project. When people need history, it's always all around them on the internet. My very last reason states that insted of texting people from faraway places, why not just use an e-mail address. For example, you don't have to pay for an e-mail address. It's actually free and did you know, more than @NUM3 million people around the world use an e-mail address insted of texting other people. When you don't have an e-mail address, it's very quick to make one. You don't have to waste money to text someone halfway around the globe. In conclusion, I think that we should have computers. One reason is that we have a lot more information on the internet. Another reason is because there is some history on some websites. And my last reason is because you can send messages to a far away place by using e-mail. Thank you for reading this article.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18446,7,When I'm being a patient and I @CAPS1 nicely and I do not complain and I like to be pation and I @CAPS1 good I do not fell and sometimes people don't be them to calm down and sometimes when something is is taking forever I sometimes sat come on and I always be patent at school at restaurants and I always be patent ever I where bat sometimes I can't not be patent and I don't want people thanking  I m weird of ating  some thing I just @CAPS1 a neit it and I be patent in lines at the fail and at the fair sometimes have long lines and that is my goal is being patent of everything but sometimes I'm not patent because sometimes  something take to long and I just like to be patent.,3,4,,7,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13172,5,"Home is where the heart is, and nothing says that more than in the memoir Home: The Blueprints of My life. In the memoir, it talks about family and that where ever your heart is, is where your home is. The memior and gives a tingling and loving mood. It makes us feel happy and feel loving, especially in a few sections.First, when the author talked about what his familly did at home, it made theworld slow down and think about the family. Narcisoc (the author and narrator) said in paragraph two, ""endless celebrations and that encompassed both, formed the back drop to our life in our warm home"". This made a picture of a happy and laughing family like in the movies about the holidays.Second, Narciso said how united they all were. This painted a mood of unity and care. In paragraph four @PERSON1 recalled, ""My parents always kept thier arms and thier door open to the many people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us"". The makes the reader think of friendship and hope in trouble times.The mood that came was loving and that tingling feeling of hope. Most people can't find that feeling anymore, especially in these tough times. What most people do know is that and home is not a building, it's a santurary.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1246,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 Newspaper, @CAPS1 my name is @PERSON1. I'm go to @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1. I'm in @NUM1 grade. I'm writing this letter to you to tell you my opinion if technology believe that technology have positive effect on people. My opinial is that computer are good. Keep reading to change people lifes in <@NUM2 @LOCATION1</@CAPS2>. My first reason is computer teach you hand eye coordination. For example when I was in @NUM3 grade I would go to the libary in my @ORGANIZATION1. She had a website named @CAPS3 To learn. It to help you to learn how to learn without looking at the keyboard. My second reason compute give people ability to learn about faraway places and people. For example when I was in @NUM4 grade in @CAPS4 @CAPS5 I had to write about @CAPS6. And I want on @ORGANIZATION2. I found wonderful pictures of @CAPS7. And I saw how they live. I watched a @CAPS8 specail like @NUM5 weeks ago it said @PERCENT1 of people would use @ORGANIZATION2 to look up people number and mor personal things. My third reason give people the ability to learn about faraway place and people. For example when want to talk to my cousin that live in @LOCATION3. I would go on the internet and talk to them on webcam. I clould talk to them. I read in a artice like a month ago. That @PERCENT1 of people use the computer to chart with people. In conclustion, some people might say some experts are concerned people are spending to much time and less exercing enjoying friends and family. However, being on the computer is way sdfyer than go outside. More kids or people would be salfy. Next you should post this out on you news paper.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4503,2,"Should libraries be more careful about what they put out in their place of establishment? Of course they should. Libraries have all kinds of people walking in and out everyday. Certain rated material should be put in certain spots for certain people. The library should be more strict on the material that the people in the library look at on a day to day basis. Libraries need to become a little more organized.     Libraries have people that come in and out of the library everyday. People of all different ages and anyone is welcome to come in the library. With that being said, children of all ages come into the library all the time and pick all kinds of material. Children of course can't read everything in the library. They have to stay within their appropriate rated material selection. So if the library is more censored and strict about the material children can't get their hands on the material that they shouldn't be seeing at that time in their lives. You would want your seven year old child seeing inappropriate or offensive material, right.      Libraries should put the material that for adults eyes only in one completely different section of the library than what they would want the children that come to the library to see. With doing that it decreases the chances of the children getting a hold of material that they should see. Also, some books that the library think that some children should be able to see just might be offinsive to another set of people and wouldn't want their children to see. So books @MONTH1 show racism, or maybe another kind of discrimination and it @MONTH1 not be the goal of the book to make that suggestion but it still is in the book and in the wrong hands it can be a very bad thing especially in some childrens minds.      The libraries really need to just stop and think for a second is this book really appropriate for this age group or even for this establishment. Libraries have become where children are just checking out books by themselves and to me thats a problem. I think that children need a parents concent to check out a book from a library but do the libraries care, no. Library @MONTH1 check their inventory and notice a book @MONTH1 be missing but guess what, by that time its already to late. Children are able to just walk right out with books these days and know one will even think that they just took a book without checking it out. When children find a piece of material in a library and they know they aren't suppose to have it and they know they cant get out of the library with it they might decide to just take the book. The sercurity wont think twice to check the child and what is the result the childs mind is corrupted. Guess what you can blame it on the though the library. Isen't that something the child got the material from your friendly neighborhood library.     Oranization is the key. Libraries need to orginize their material better, plane and simple. It's really not that hard. They need to review the content that thier putting on the shelves in their establishment. I feel that the people at the library are lazy personally. If they just gave a little more effort maybe the children wouldn't get their hand on material that they have no buisness getting a hold of. Just pay attention to whats going on in the library. Their are books everywhere, right. Their are children, correct. The children @MONTH1 be in their appropriate rated section of the library but maybe a book from the adult section of the library stumbled over there by accident. Though it was an accident it still happened and it can be prevented and it should be prevented for the sake of the children. All we need is a little more organization.     As you can see from the following libraries just don't about our children as much as we do. It's okay that everyone is welcome in the library no questions asked but, they people need to stay in the designated place in the library. Children shouldn't be allowed in the adult section for saftey. Also a book from the adult side shouldn't be in the childrens section because anything can happen and corruption will rise. We need stricter libraries. Better sercurity to what they children are looking at and where the material is. Also the library really needs to look at the material and decide if it is appropriate for all the readers that @MONTH1 look at the material. Organization is the key to all our worries, if we use a bit more effort this won't be a problem anymore.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6996,3,The features of the setting is that it is hot and dry. The way that it affects the cyclist is that he gets very hot and he drinks almost all of his water and he only has about @NUM1 sips left when he gets to the other town. It also effects him because he had an advantage. The advantage that he had was he left before the sun came up. So then he had a time to get cool. Another part of the setting that affects the cyclist is when he gets even some of the hills he gets a little bit of the wind. Also when the cyclist was thirsty he put pebbles into his mouth.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11959,5,"The mood in the memoir is happy. It is happy because it is a talking about Narciso's memories. For example, in paragraph @NUM1, it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" The mood is also appreciative. For example, in paragraph @NUM1, it says ""I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly."" The mood is also sad. For example, in paragraph @NUM1, it says ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are. So there was several moods in this memoir.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12663,5,The mood created by the author is that @PERSON1 is greatful for his education and growing up in @LOCATION1. Also his parents and they're cooking skills. The mood is love and greatfulness.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8889,4,"I think that she ended the story like that because it means that she is getting used to all the seasons. “In the spring when the snow melts and the geese return and this hisbiiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” She will and take the test once its not cold anymore so she will wait until the geese come again which will be spring by then. I think that she is also trying to say that when the snow melts and the geese are there again she will have taken the test and pass it. This is I think she ended it like this because how they mean something to her.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20988,8,"  What's Laughter if not a smile, a small chunk of happiness like a chocolate chip cookie fresh out of the oven, chocolate oozing out of the sides like waterfalls. Laughter can come from a joke, a awkward situation or just about anything. Laughter can be the thing that bonds a friendship. I'm going to tell @CAPS5 a true story surrounding the matter of laughter and how it has been involved in a relationship of my own. It was my first day of high school, I walked in the school looking down at my shoes. I could feel the people around me staring at me but I wasn't sure if I should look back at them and smile or if I should just keep to myself, so I said nothing. I went to the office and I asked them how to find drama class, they give me a map that I had no idea how to read and sent me off. By this time I was scared. A tall @CAPS1 guy with brown shaggy hair and a flannel jacket bumps into me and instead of an ""I'm sorry"" or even a polite ""@CAPS2 me"" he looked at me disgusted and continued down the hallway. It took me some time but I finally found my drama class. The teacher wasn't nice to me, it seemed like she hated everyone. She was kind of rounder and she had short blond hair. Her name was @PERSON1 and she is not in a good mood today. There was a girl sitting next to me and she looked just as scared as I felt. During the first @NUM1 minutes of class we glanced at each other a few times but we said nothing. About half way through the class the girl next to me asked my name, I replied ""@CAPS3"" extremely quietly. As I went to turn away she grabbed my attention by whispering to me, she chuckled ""@CAPS4 @CAPS5 see what she's wearing? What are teachers thinking when they get dressed in the morning?"" I started laughing hysterically. The large teacher lurking in front of me said ""@CAPS5 two, hallway, now!"" I didn't know if laughing was an option but as soon as I stepped out of that door a grin crossed my face and I fell on the floor laughing. I couldn't control myself. Don't get me wrong I didn't think us getting into trouble was funny but this bitter teacher was such a disappointment. Drama teachers are supposed to be fun and nice, or so I thought. The next class period I walked through the auditorium doors and found myself a seat close to the back, next to @CAPS6. @PERSON1 was wearing a green top that looked like it had been spattered with baby throw up, a pair of light blue skinny jean that did not flatter her body, and a pair of hot pink @NUM2 inch high heels. Today she was in a great mood, @CAPS5 could tell by the big fat smile on her face. When anyone talked she would burn a whole in there foreheads with her eyes. It was like getting stung by a bee on a hot @DATE1 day. We would all laugh behind her back but that's the way we got through her class alive. After a few minutes of talking she sent us off to @CAPS4 our first scene. The people in my group were @CAPS6, my friend @CAPS8 who I had met in algebra the day before and a girl I didn't know named @ORGANIZATION1'montae. We all got to know each other quite quickly because we all loved the joys of laughing. @ORGANIZATION1'montae was @CAPS9 @CAPS10 as was @CAPS8. @ORGANIZATION1'montae was taller than me by about @NUM3 inches. She had blond in her hair that was only in her bangs. She was stunningly pretty. @CAPS8 was a quiet, @CAPS4 it alone type of person. She was about @NUM4 inches shorter then me and she had short black hair. It was straight, as I would quickly learn it always was. She was stylish, she had on the cutest brown belt and shoes that matched it with skinny jeans and a @CAPS12 jacket. Her whole outfit screamed adorable. We laughed the whole time, making fun of the teacher and telling jokes. We got barely any work done. That was a day I'll never forget. To this day, I'm still good friends with all three of them and often we talk about that day, and how glad we are that we met. So, as @CAPS5 can see laughing is a big part of my relationships. Its a great way to make friends and everyone loves to laugh. Even when @CAPS5 barely know someone @CAPS5 can quickly find out that laughing leads to friendships. It's like being in your favorite place on earth for just a moment. Laughter is a good way to become close to the people around @CAPS5. The next time your with your friends or grouped with strangers tell them a joke. Priceless! ",20,18,36.0,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18297,7,"Do you ever fell like your @CAPS1 is going to expload? Do you ever want to say something but don't because what you said will make things worse than they are? Well that's how l felt in this story! Little brothers and sisters make me so mad, that l want to expload. The story starts at @TIME1pm my brother @LOCATION2 just got off work and has been complaining how he is sick of walking home by hiself so l was going to surprize him by walking home with him l just passed the high school and l heard my name being called so I looked around and l heard my name being called again the voice keep being called so l stoped and my sister @PERSON2, and my friend @LOCATION1 came up from behind me and stopped @PERSON2 said ""I didnt want you to walk to get @LOCATION2 by urself"" so we keep walking and savanah and me keep switching and the scooter got slower, and slower and slower because two people were riding we stoped and pressed the power reset button and began to go again and then we called @LOCATION2 and said we didnt see him and it was already @NUM1 he said hes at his friend house and my mom was coming to get him. We turned around and two minutes later the scooter died we keep holding the power rest button nothing happened so l ran home to get the bike there was sweet running down my face and ?? none stop my legs were numb soon as l got to the house my legs colapest l got up and put shorts on, grabed the bike and ran out the door @PERSON2, and savanah were already at the party store @LOCATION1 questioned me and asked ""@CAPS2 did it take you so long"" I told her what happened as @PERSON2 pushed the @PERSON1 and savanah rode on the handle bars. In my @CAPS1 l was thinking about how long it took me to get there and now mad. l was they came and how l thought l was going to espload because the scooter died we put the bike and scooter away and walked in the door and droped. The lesson learned is dont do something unless your foresure its happening. I learned that the hard way and I'm never going to do it again.",12,9,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9366,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus,” by Minfong Ho, the author’s final paragraph shows how much the hibiscus means to her. The author uses symbolism when, he talks about the hibiscus because it is a strong plant just like the girl needs to be to pass the driving test. The author put the paragraph at the end to show that if the hibiscus can come back, after winter, so can the girl. In conclusion, the author used the last paragraph to emphasize the meaning of the hibiscus.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15434,6,One obstacle the builders had to face was the amount of wind that was blowing that high in the air. The dirigibles were so big that the wind had a lot of resistance on them and made them sway from the back.Another obstacle was that the dirigibles were filled with hydrogen which is highly flamable Being filled up with such a flamable gas it could easily turn into a disaster. Especially with all the people who were so close to it on the ground.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12467,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was, powerful, @CAPS1, and appreciative. The first mood created by the author in the memoir was powerful. ""My mother and father came to this country with such courage"" The second mood created by the auther in The memoir was @CAPS2 ful. ""The congregation of family and friends and end less celebration. The last mood created by the author was appreciative. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrefice"". In conclusion the moods created by the author in the memoir were powerful, @CAPS1 and apprective.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
409,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 name is @PERSON1. I am @NUM1 years old and I go to a @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1 called @ORGANIZATION1. I am a really smart kid. In @CAPS1 opinion I benefit people using computers. You should keep reading @CAPS1 essay because I am going to tell you @NUM2 good reasons why I benefit people using computers. @CAPS1 first reason is they teach hand eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about far away places and people. For example, when I am always using the computer and when I'm doing research it always gives me the ability to learn about new places and people. Another example is when ever I watch @CAPS2.V on @CAPS3 @NUM3 it says that people learn about learn about faraway places and people on the internet @PERCENT1 of the time. @CAPS1 second reason is it allows people to talk online with other people for example when I am on the computer everyday I visit @CAPS1 facebook it always gives me a chance to talk to @CAPS1 friends and other people online. Another example is when I go on a computer and I search computers.org it says that it lets people @PERCENT2 of the time talk to others online. @CAPS1 @NUM4 reason is it allows students to get information when they're doing a project. For example when I always use the @ORGANIZATION1 computers it allows me to get information for example, about @LOCATION2 and @PERSON2 govina that is why I benefit people using computers. Another example is when ever I check out a magazine on computers it tells me that kids get alot of information when they're doing projects @PERCENT2 of the time. In conclusion, I benefit people using computers because they teach hand eye coordination, gives people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, it allows people to talk online with other people and it allows students to get information when they're doing projects. Those are the @NUM2 reasons why I benefit people using computers. So please the local newspaper please try to make this believable.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9442,4,"In the short story “Winter Hibiscus”, the author ends with the main character Saeng saying that she will take the test “when the snow melts and the geese return.” I believe that the Hibiscus and the driver’s test are relevant like the blooming of a flower. If it wilts at the first, it can blossom later on, thus the author included this to show that Saeng wilted at first, but will blossom at spring. It also a symbol of her constant blossoming. The author’s intention of the lost line was demonstrated early when Saeng was disappointed of falling the test. She is upset that she failed her driver’s test, but when she sees a flower from her homeland, she starts to get boosted and start to weep a little. It shows her blossoming because she changes from a negative mood to a positive one, after seeing the flower from her childhood memory. It shows her wilt and blossom again when she tells her mother the news about the test. At first she gets nervous and scared, so scared she tears the leaf off and shreds it to pieces. Her mother then wipes the green matter of and asks her to plant it. Saeng then gets a morale boost and start to feel better. This once again shows her blossoming because she thought her mother would yell at her for failing the test, but instead accepts the plant, showing her rise again. Saeng falters throughout the story, but manages to rise above it all and give herself determination to meet her goal. She is determined to pass the test when spring arrives, and blossom again. The Hibiscus shows it with its budding stage. It will blossom like Saeng.  ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19248,7,"Have you ever had to be patient before? I have and this story will tell you all about it. Last year on my birthday my uncle @CAPS1 promised me a phone but I had to wait for him to get the money. I had to be patient. So I waited and then @DATE2 finally came, more months passed and i still hadn’t heard from my uncle. I began to become fustrated with him because he promised me that phone. I told my mom and she said he has always been like that and to keep my patience so what if he got it a little late. I was thinking in my haad A little it’s been almost a year! Then on @DATE1 my uncle came over for my family reunion.Then he told me he knows that I thought he forgot about the phone. I  knew he was right but just then a little light bulb went off in my head he couldn’t have forgotten about. Soon it was time to eat and that is when he presented the @CAPS2 touch to me. I was so excited I just had to jump up and give a hug. He told me that whenever he promised me something he would test my patience to see if the wait was worth waiting and in this case it was. So whenever your patience is being tested keep your cool it will all come to you soon. To conclude this story I want to say patience is important to have because without it you will never be able to wait for anything in life. The @CAPS3.",9,12,,21,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16558,6,"Many problems arised with the docking of dirigibles at the Empire State Building for that the engineers did not account. While the architects were designing the mast, they realized that the building was not built to withstand the stress of dirigibles and the wind. ""... modifications had to be made"" (paragraph @NUM1). Though this obstacles was able to be overcome, many others were not. Since most dirigibles outside of the @PERSON1 used hydrogen, a very flammable gas, a dirigibles could go down in flames similar to the German Hindenburg, and ""owners... realized how much worse that accident could have been... above... New York"" (paragraph @NUM2). Another obstacle was a problem with a ""law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (paragraph @NUM3). No dirigible would be allowed even close to the building; however, two still tried but neither could tether safely to the building. The thought of the transportation of the future moved on to airplanes and the Empire State Building's top floors are now a public tourist spot.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4427,2,"What do you go to the library for?  In earlier times libraries used to be the place where you went to study.  They were no computers, and so you had to go look up your work in a educational book at the library.  Is that truly what people are doing at the libraries now, or are people there to look at vulgar books, magazines, and movies?       A library is meant to be the place where you can go to work in peace and have a helpful resource of educational books.  But, now you can go to the library and be tempted to look at books you shouldn't be looking at.  Instead you could be on the computer the whole time playing games of some sort.  The possibilites are endless.  People now could go to the library and check out a magazine, movie, or book on: pornagrophy, drugs, achlocol, or worse.  Is that really what you want your kid to accidently pick up at the library?  Presonally I myself witnessed a little kid pick up a porn magazine at the library, and his mom had to grab it very fast before he had the chance to look at the magazine.     The library should not be used for this, and the treat of young kids accidently looking at these materials should not be happening in the library.  The music some one could listen is also very bad, and your child could listen to that.  Then what if they want to keep listening to it?  Yes, the world does have a huge impact on what is put into the library; because, drugs, sex, scandals, and achlocol seem to be what most teenagers are intereseted in at some point in their young life.  But a library is a community building and there is no stopping some one from coming in and easily getting these vuglar things.  The thoughts of the youth is completely swayed after they watch, read, or listen to this.  And, this needs to be controled.  Women and children can find all of these materials offensive.  These materials need to be censored more then what the are right now.     Libraries should be a safe place where people can go to study or get a book, and not to be tempted to look at something they should not be looking at.  Many people find this offensive.  Yes, in the end libraries are a great place, but the people who do not use libraries for the right reasons are why these materials need to be censored at the libraries",3,3,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
128,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, In my opinion computers can be entertaining and educational, but should not replace everyday living. Therefore I think that computers harm people and effect them in ways they do not realize. Three reasons that support my decision are the difference between reality and fantacy, family and friends, and your health. Many children and young adults are vulnerable to the assumtion that everything you see on the computer is true. Well, as some find out it is everything but that. The addictive games and electronic features lead you to believe that the people or @CAPS1 @CAPS2 you see are real life situations and activities. Computers are showing kids the wrong mind frame they need to be in. It affects school work and how they behave. They need to be in the right state of mind and get back to reality. Your family and friends have always been there for you. By your side even through your worst. Unfourtunetly, this addiction to the computer has brought you farther away from them. They are not happy with the way you treat them. They want a change so you can enjoy life again. Interact with a human being, not some graphic designed computer picture. That's all it is anyway, and that picture isn't going to be there for you. Your family and friends last longer than that. Your body is special and your health is important. A computer @MONTH1 suggest exercise but you are not going to really do it. You know that and the people who make computer sites know that. Your going to stay there and burn your eyes out from looking at a screen all day. It is not healthy for you or anyone else. Moving you fingers and pushing buttons is not exercise. Your already sitting anyway, so you are not doing anything helpful to yourself. You need to go outside and breathe in air and be in nature. Run around or play a bill game, but not on the computer. In conclusion, you can see how a computer can effect a person. Not only do they mistake fantacy and reality as the same thing, but you lose interaction with your friends and loved ones. Your health is also at risk when you spend hours staring and not moving anything but maybe two fingers. Please consider the risks and believe the facts because honestly, we are losing the chance to live and enjoy the world.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7219,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because the rougher the terrain got the more the cyclist had to strain to make it. For example, when the terrain turned to hills, the cyclist had to struggle to climb the hills which caused him to use more of his energy. Also, if the terrain was flat and smooth, the cyclist had less problems making the long journey. For instance, if the cyclist had less strain on him then he would not be as tired and would not drink as much water. In conclusion, that is how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7510,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in this story. First of all, in the story it says “…and the growing realization that I could drop from a heatstroke…” (@NUM1). This quote shows that it is extremely hot and it is affecting his riding. The narrarator also says, “I eased past trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state”(@CAPS1 @NUM2). This quote is saying that he is dehydrated in is having trouble keeping balance on the rough terrain. In conclusion, the setting affected the cyclist in this story.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6789,3,"At first when he gets the directions from the old men, he thinks he will be fine. When he gets to the first town he’s tired and almost out of water, but still thinks he will be in Yosemite soon. When he gets to the water pump in the middle of the desert, he’s tired and thirsty and he realizes that the directions the old men gave him were out of date. He’s really not happy about listening to them and not following his map. When he gets to the fishing place he is greatful for the water in the sink and for the rest and when the old man offers to give directions to Yosemite he thinks he will just use his map. Throughout the story the cyclists needs change from feeling confident to feeling depressed to feeling relived.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6232,3,"In the story, “Do not exceed posted speed limit,” the setting is an all- important factor. The author feels the need to describe the path that the cyclist is following and the details each place he stops, such as in “one ramshackle shed…and a corral that couldn’t hold the lamest mule…” and “The cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite…” In a story such as this setting is of great importance especially since it is so rapidly changing. The story itself would be of much different quality likely for a lower quality, if the author never put emphasis on the areas that the cyclist rode past, this story would not be worth reading if the author were not as skilled a writer as he is.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6531,3,I read “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” written by Joe Kurmaskie in the story the features of the setting affect the cyclist by accepting advice from “old timers who haven’t left the confines of their porches @CAPS1 was in office”,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14889,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the readers learn that there are obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. In paragraph @NUM1, the readers learn that the architects are worried about the load of the blimp and the wind pressure that is transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation. The architects would have to strengthen and modify the Empire State Building for it to be accustomed to this new situation. The architects also saw problems with foreign dirigibles which use hydrogen rather than helium as said in paragraph @NUM2, ""Most dirigibles from outside the U.S used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" One of the biggest obstacle was how the winds on top of the building were always shifting so even if the dirigible is tethered to the mast, the back would still swivel around. Later on, the architects idea for a mooring mast disapperead and it was then used for observation.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
5982,3,"The setting effects the cyclist because of the setting were diffrent the story would not of made sense. The setting of the story is not and dry with scaterd ghost towns. When he reaches the first “town” he sees “One ramshackle sheds several rusty pumps and a coral that couldnt hold the lamesh mule.” If the setting had the problem of no water so there would be no conflict in the story, “In the story the speeker says “I was travling through the high deserts of California” that are very hot and dry, and he says “This causes the problem of it being hot and dry if the seting was a forest in @DATE1 he wouldn’t have as much of a problem needing water which would of made the story much less exciting.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6720,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist greatly. They make it hard to concentrate, because its heat, they make it unbearable. The setting has the affect of drowsiness and thirst, “Dry bitter lnad, longing, longing.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15144,6,In the excerpt The Mooring Mast I have seen how the builders of the empire State building ran into obstacles trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. The empire State building was already standing in the architects decided to renovate and make a dock for dirigibles. The architects working on this project had to strengthen the buildings frame. They also had to have wenches and control machinery for the dirigible mooring. The architects also needed to install housed elevators and stairs bring passengers down to the base floor and back up. After the renovations were done to be empire state building it had 102 floors. After the building was done the owners found out that they could not let dirigibles on to the building. They would break the law of airships flying to low in urban areas. So the empire state building was finished but you could not use it for dirigible's.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9286,4,"The concludes the story way because that the way he want for the gril to end it. Cause she all about them flowers, plant, animals. She likes Madagascar periwinhle. The places went she use to live is gorse with plants, animals, flowers.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1095,1,"Dear Newspaper, I thought that I should express my concern. @CAPS4 are becoming to dependant on computers. @CAPS4 need to go outside more and be active. While some people @MONTH1 think were not wasting our time on the computer. I @CAPS3. I'll should only go on if it is nessesary. People are always coming up with @CAPS2 gaming ideas to draw people in, but what people dont realize is that is doesent only waste there time in waste our money too. Electricys bills are trough the roughtAlso instead og going out to meet @CAPS1 people are staying home and talking on social networking sites which make them less social. Children are not enrolling in sports which makes them losse any physical strength they would get. Also children could be getting over wait by just sitting there with no pysical activitys, @CAPS2 ideas like microsoft word is fine but going on every day for games is. Teachers, parent, and all need to show these that the computer is not the only thing, Computers can benifit us very well, by letting us have knoledge of somthing at the tip of our fingers. Computers can and will take away family and friend time. Now im not saying that computer but what am saying is that it effects everyone around you, @CAPS3 just the person thats using it. What @CAPS4 need to @CAPS3 is get together and unite. @CAPS4 need to go outside more, and exersise. @CAPS4 need to stop the computer with adults. Therfore, lets make this a better place. and get out and have a little time for going on to the computer.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6032,3,"The setting affected the cyclist a lot. One way was the heat. It got so hot that he was becoming dehydrated. He kept drinking his water, until he didnt have any left. Another reason is because the road turned into hills which made him use more energy. Finally, it didn't help that he hadnt seen any sign of living creatures except for a snake @CAPS1 how the setting affected the cyclist.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3782,2,"People all around the world think differently about music, books, and movies. Some think that books and music should have different kinds of ratings. Some people think that a song should be rated '@CAPS1' for mature when others could think that it shouldn't have any rating at all. Level rating stops young kids from buying something they are not mature enough for. Level ratings help the parents know what the kids are getting into.      If everyone could pull off a book or magazine, etc then there would be no books left. This is why we have levels of maturty on the material. Levels are letters, such as '@CAPS1' for mature. '@CAPS1' means that their will probably be some naked and sexual play into the video or song. With this on their it warns the parent so that if they do not want their child listening to it they can take it away. This leaves the parent with some control over what kids can watch and hear.     Stores won't let kids under the age of @NUM1 buy a rated @CAPS4 movie. Rated @CAPS4 stands for sexual act, language, and blood. It can stand for more things such as drugs. I am happy that my nine year old can't buy a rated @CAPS4 movie, but senice the law says a @NUM1 year old kid should be aloud to watch it, then its saying they should be mature enough to see or hear it.     We should be happy that we can have some control over what are children watch and listen too. We could try getting rid of all bad books, movies etc, but over time I'@CAPS1 sure more will be made. I am also sure that over time we will find a old copy of a book on a website. We cannot save our kids their whole life, so over time we have got to let them grow up. Our kids will decide if they are mature enough to watch something we would rather them not watch. We just have to raise them the best we can.",3,4,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10630,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph she did; to tell people never to give up. She tells people never to give up through this method because she realizes at the end, she will be prepared. In the story the line “.. Slowly fading into the distance.” Could mean she realizes what happens; happens and never stop doing or going to a goal you want. One more reason she @MONTH1 have used this is, that even tho your down you have friends and family to pick you up from it. The line “… Through the quiet repition of season upon season.”. This basically said that she just needed to get into routine and she will be able to do it.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12724,5,"In my opinion the mood is created by the auther in the memoir by the setting and describing her child hood, where she was born and why her parents came here. The reason I think this is because the mood can create this setting, because the mood is the feeling in the story, such as sad, happy, lonely, silent and that is what creates the setting which is where, when, and time of the story. Some examples from the excerpt are, ""In 1961, I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family building, in the Ironbound Section of Newark, New Jersey."" Also, ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative."" The author is very thankful for her cuban heritage and her home is about relationship then just space. In this memoir the mood created the setting.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6577,3,"The features of the setting have a large affect on the cyclist. If a cyclist would happen to be cycling in the snow, he or she could eat snow do keep from dehydration. If the cyclist in,”Do Not Exceed Posted  Speed Limit"", was cycling in winter time, he would of been so thirsty all of the time. Also if the whole ride was down hill, he would be so tired,",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
931,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I think computers have both good and bad effects on people. Some people just sit around all day playing games and being lazy. Other people actually use their computers for things that they need. Also some people need their computers for their jobs. I do agree that some people who spend all day in front of their computers are spending less time exercising! Would you rather play games all day instead of spending some quality time with your family and friends? Not me, I would much rather be with friends outside or having a family picnic at a park or lake. For other people though, the story is much different. Some people need computers and other advances in technology for their everyday life. A lot of jobs today require you to use a computer, for example working at a bank you use computers all day! I also think students rely on computers to do work too. A lot of students type up reports and other things for school on their computers. Students also use computers to look up information. The internet can be a very good source for students. I know for me, the internet has come in handy for school projects, or maybe something as simple as just looking up a word. I can also see why people dont really care about advaces in technology or computers! Some people dont need them for anything, and some are probably thinking people are on them way too much. To me, I honestly find computers useful because I can talk online to my family in @LOCATION1. I hope you liked my opinion about computers, remember, they are useful to some people, but not all.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3312,2,"'@CAPS1', the woman shreaked as she had just received a fierce, sharp,and quick stab in the back by her abusive husband. This is the kind of violence children read about all around the @CAPS2. To think all of the innapropriate stuff children see around the @CAPS2 in television, the internet, and even what classmates are talking about isn't enough, well you are wrong. Some of the things you read and hear about in books are totally unacceptable. This is why books, and magazines need to be censored in libraries all around the @CAPS2.     In our community library in @LOCATION1, @LOCATION2 we have magazines, in which case these magazines are very graphic. Kid's will read these over any learning or interesting book. Many kid's draw disrespectful things in them. As to think that wasn't ignorant enough they also rip them in half and do many other dismantling things to them. One of the reasons why I feel that the @CAPS2 has so much trouble with criminal people is kids feel these days that they are allowed to draw in books and rip them in half even though they aren't their property. Which allowes them to think they can do whatever they want. Kids read about crazy things that aren't necessaarily teaching you anything. Unless that is you want to learn about having a zombi apocalypse and zombies take over the @CAPS2. To have that in a school public library what is that teaching kid's? Absolutely nothing, but to teach them to take them home and show there little brother or sister a cuss word in the book is teaching them bad things. These are all some valid points as to censor or take out some of the leisurely reading books in the libraries, or to possibly censor some of the cussing.     The last point I will be touching on this discussion is the loss of money that some of the schools have due to damaged books and stolen property. Also to mention all of the dirty pictures kid's draw in the magazines and books. Schools lose a great deal of money just to touch that point. They would save a much needed amount of money if they didn't let those books leave the classroom or school library. Kid's wouldn't be able to draw in them or steal them or even damage them and all the money they could save and put it towards something learn fulfilling.     Well behaved children all around the @CAPS2 is what you can look forward to if you censor books and magazines all around the @CAPS2 in libraries. If you dont let them be taken out of the library how could kids possibly damage or steal or even draw in them. By not allowing kid's do do whatever they want and showing some authority lets kid's around the @CAPS2 know they need to show some respect. With all the money libraries and schools save they can put it towards something learn fulfilling. If you could please take the information i have given you and think about it, it would be greatly appreciated",4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1126,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, I strongly believe that we need computers. Computers are very helpful they are a very big part in are world, ability to learn about very interesting facts, and they allow people talk online too. After reading my letter I hope you agree with me. First of all compters are important because as our world gets more technilque inclined compters are need for almost every job and you will want people to know how to work a computer. Police officers use compters to find want criminals and put criminals into the computer to keep them on files. Schools use computers everyday for kids to do reports on, find information, and do homework on too. As a student I know that kids use computers all the time. For example @TIME1 I used computers to do my math homeworks that my teacher assigned me. After you read my letter I hope you will agree with me. Secondly you have the ability to research places all over the world. Another good thing with computers is that you can look up the news and be updated everything that is going on right now. Computers are just great to use because if you don't like write you have a computer and you might even get it done faster if you are a good and fast type. I use computers to do all my essays and book reports for @LOCATION1 I also use it for look at the news to see ehats going on in the world. Lastly computers are get because they allow you to talk to people online. You can either email them or talk to them from a web cam. Online chat is good to keep in touch with a friend from far away or even ask a friend ehat the homework was tonight. I like to ise a web cam for the reasons I just listed because on my birthday my sister could't come home from college so we hooked up some web cams so she could be there when we open presents and song happy birthday. After you read my letter I hope you will agree with me. I hope I have persuaded you to show you that computers are very important and that why we use them so much beccause computers are very helpful, they give you the ability to learn interesting facts and they allow you to talk to people online.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3994,2,"There are many opinions on censorship in libraries. Some people believe that if books are offensive in any way that they should be removed, while other believe that these books should stay since there are different opinions on what is classified as 'offensive'. I believe that books should remain on shelves due to the fact that all people view things differently and its free will that allows people to pick up these books. No one if forcing them to read them.      I believe when books, music, movies, and magazines publish offensive material that it is just a matter of opinion. I feel that people have different perspectives on what they find appropriate. For example, a magazine article containing information about the wrong doings of the political offices or a cartoon of a certain candidate. Some poliliticians might find this article offensive and take it as a jab towards them while others see it just as an opinion on the matter. Another example would be a book on religious purposes. For instance, a book on an @CAPS1 religion. Some @CAPS2 might take it as offensive if the informations paints them as being a certatin stereotype, but others @MONTH1 see it as educational learning.      I also feel like this somewhat goes along with the idea of free will. No one can force a person to not read a certain book or listen to a certain song. It's free will that allows us to read, listen, and watch whatever pleases us. I feel that if someone was to go and demand that we take a book off a shelf that takes away from a person's free will who @MONTH1 be coming to rent the book that day. Its up to an individual to decide on what they will read and what their take is on the matter.      I also feel that these types of media should remain on the shelves because of learning and educational purposes. I believe that even though some of these books or movies might have a couple of offensive lines or phrases that does not mean the whole thing is offensive. I think that the library is a place where people can go and research information. Some of the material found @MONTH1 be offensive to a certain person but that does not cancel out the rest of the book and mark it as being 'wrong'. I think that we must decide on what we believe is right in books and tune out what we feel is offensive or else many informational books would not be available today.      The library is a place where our free will comes into play. I feel that the offensiveness in books, music, movies, and magazines are all based on personal opinions and that they should never be removed from libraries. These books all contain information that could be veiwed in different ways and that it is up to the public to decifer for themselves what is offensive and what is acceptable. I believe that no one should decide for us",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
231,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people find the clicking and clacking of computers a nuscense. What they don't realize is thay are helping the youths lives and making them easier and they could be doing the same for them. This is why computers have a very good effect on people. First off computers arn't a bad thing if they are just helping people get to know each other better. You always see ad's for dating websites and other things like that. Did you know that @PERCENT1 of couples meet online. Thats a lot and to think they would have never if it wern't for computers. Second of all computers provide a tremendous amount of entertainment. There are over @NUM1 on computer games online. @CAPS2 of them are free too. I bet almost every kids has played a game on the internet before. Think about it your child could be out getting in trouble or be nice and safe at home playing on the computer. You are probably thinking, computers sound so childish and infantile. Well computers arn't just fun and games. They provide a lot of information. They are very useful for teens in school for projects, but they benefit adults in many ways too. It provides information on vacations, hotels, ext. Also computers now have videos all over on how to do things like how to and other useful information. So as you can see computers arn't just a pain. They help bring people together, provide entertainment and have very useful information. Think about it. A computer might save your life one day. Computers help peoples every day lives and they could be helping yours.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16143,6,"Despite the pricey investments of sixty thousand dollars that needed to be put into the building for this project to become a reality, there were many more obstacles the builders of the empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The greatest obstacle they faced was the safety of people; a dirigibles dangleing nearly @NUM1 feet above ground with the possibility of explosion and pedestrians below doesn't seem like the smartest idea. Another problem they faced was the stress that the dirigible-held on by only a single cable-would put on the buildings frame. With the wind blowing the dirigible around the load and pressure of it would have to be sent all the way to the base of the building about @NUM1 feet down. In order for this to work the builders would have to strengthen the steel frame of the building. Maybe the most difficult obstacle they faced was nature itself, strong wind streams above the building would have caused the dirigible to swing around once it was docked, as well as running the risk of being blown of course and into another building. And if they ever wanted this idea to work in the first place they should have checked the laws first; aircrafts were not allowed to fly that low over urban areas. Builders of this landing dock and the empire state building just faced too many obstacles.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12536,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, there is a clear mood created by the author. For instance the Cuban background set the mood of happiness. Narciso explains, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I'm eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" This shows her love and happiness from her Cuban background. Also another mood set by the author is greatfulness. Narciso explains, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" Narciso is clearly greatful for her parents for leading and guiding her life to happiness. In conclusion, Narciso Rodriguez creates the moods of happiness, and greatfulness throughout the memoir.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9161,4,"In “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho, the author ended the story with that particular paragraph to symbolize new beginnings. The story is all about the failure and shame felt by Saeng when she failed her driving test, and how finding a familiar hibiscus plant gave her a new lease on life. By buying the hibiscus, Saeng was reminded of her home, and by giving that single hibiscus a new, unfamiliar place to thrive in, as she was. She was able to make a connection with the plant. The spring symbolizes the beginning of a new year, and the budding hibiscus represents the start of its new life, and so Saeng wants to restart her life when the plant restarts its life and retaking her driving test.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6320,3,"@CAPS1   the  story  the  condition of  problem  often effected the mood of the cyclist . For  example when the sign said ,” Rough road ahead: Do not exceed  posted speed limit.” @CAPS1  this time he saw a snake he was scared so he eased  past trying to keep balance while he was  dehydrated . The dry and hot climate began to become problem for the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13283,5,The mood of the memoir thatthe author istrying to create is happiness. As it saysin the story a love of cooking. The other thing is that the passionate Cuban music playing. This is why the mood is happy. Happy is the mood of the story because of what his parents did to get shelter and food. Heis also happy how his parents turned a simple house into a wonderful howe for everyone. Narciso isalso happy for what love and sacrifice his parents endured throughout the time of making their houseinto a home,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11842,5," The mood created by the author in this memoir was very loving and caring for their friends, family and everyone around them, for example it says how his mom would always keep the door open for whoever was going through a rough time or untill they were back on their feet because she knew they would do the same for her and her family. Also the mood is very thankful since Narciso admires everything that he's done in life and who he's helped out and he's thankful for all the friends he has and the care they have for him and his family and he thanks every oppertunity he gets in life. The mood also shows how that somthing small can turn out to be big on the inside because Narciso has done so much just from the small place he lives in.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
840,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I agree that computers do have a positive effect on people. I agree, because being on the computer teaches you hand-eye coordination, helps people learn about faraway places and people, and allows people to talk to other people. By being on the computer it helps teach people hand-eye coordination. So the computer help with hand- eye coordination by using the mouse and keyboard. For example, when you use a computer you dont need to look at your hands while you use the mouse. That helps with hand-eye coordination, because you can see where your hand is without looking. Another example is the keyboard, because while learning where all the keys are you memorize them. Then soon you can type with without looking. The computer also helps you to learn. When you go on the computer the thing people go on is the internet. On the internet people can find information about faraway places or people. So, because the computer has different links and websites, it helps kids and adults everywhere to get information fast. Without the computer everyone would have to go to a library, but what if they didnt have the right information? Then you would need to trace around everywhere to find a book. Thats why a computer is handy. Also, the computer allows people to stay in touch with others farther away. One example of this is that there are chat rooms or groups people can join. So, if a relative or friend is farther away from a more or if they are down the street, with chat rooms it makes talking easier. Also, by these chat rooms and groups it makes a lot of people happy knowing that they can still talk with an old friend or relative instead of loosing them from never seeing or talking to them. That is just another example why the computer has a positive effect. So, with the examples of the computer helping teach hand-eye coordination, makes obtaining information easier and of the many reasons and examples of the computer having a positive effect.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21188,8," Allot of people say that laughter is a big part of any relationship, and i agree allot of people don't always laugh and in every relationship laughter is a big component to make someones day of the greatest day they have ever had. There is always someone who is having a bad time in school or at home or any other place and when you see someone like that you should always cheer them up like saying something nice or just even saying something like hope you have a good day @DATE3, give them a smile so that can put there bad thing that is avoiding them from laughing aside and you have just made there day by sharing your smile and laughter with them. Allot of people need someone they can go to when they are going through a very hard situation or problem they are going through that they cant go through it alone in there home or even at school and they need someone they can talk to and share there feelings with a shoulder they can cry on and that always makes someone feel good letting all that pain and inner self out to others we all need to make someone who is going through a hard time smile and laugh and that is always something very healthy in a relationship and it is a way to offer that person who is in pain or sad have e healing. This reminds me of a true story i know because i was there. One time there was a girl who i had in my elementary school she was a very happy girl she shared her laughter and happiness with others she was someone anyone could go to when they had a problem or they just needed someone to talk to she was one of the nicest girl in school everyone liked her and she tended to always show love and respect to others it always seemed as if her life was so perfect she had no worries she was just full of joy and she was only child in her family so of course her parents would always give her what she wanted or at least that's what we all thought. It had been a @DATE1 and we it came to be @DATE2 and we were all in school except this girl, she never missed a day of school so it was very strange for her not to be there, but just as every other person she must have been sick so that's what we thought except she missed another day and then another, and another, so i was starting to think she had moved away and she was probably never coming back, but the next week after that she showed up i was very happy to see her i had missed that girl except there was something very different about her she wasn't the same she wasn't laughing or smiling anymore she had lost that sparkle that made her so different. I thought to myself ""what is wrong with her?"" i finally found out that she had been gone because her mom had past away i was so sad i didn't know what to say she was just so happy and from one day to another she didn't have her mom anymore i thought i have both of my parents and she doesn't i should share the happiness she had share with me and others right back to her and be there for her now that she was gong through the hardest time of her life. That's why being happy and sharing your happiness with others always is the greatest thing you can do for someone because you never know what kind of things there going through and they need someone to make them smile and laugh.",17,20,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8922,4,"I believe that the author concludes the story like this to show a sense of continuation in life. In the story Saeng takes a “test” and fails. She goes out and buys a hibiscus plant for well over what she what she should have paid for it. Her test is to try to get over the memories of her real “home” that Saeng is now only cries about when she thinks of it. To Saeng the plant represents memories and a life that she once had, but no longer does, however does want it back. Her vowe to herself is that when the geese come flying back over her that she will go back to the greenhouse that reminds her so much of her home and try once again to say “home” without breaking down, and without having something extremely expensive.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9506,4,"In the story, I believe Saeng is sad because she misses her home and the hibiscus flower. She ends the story off well because she can now have a since of peace with herself by waiting to take the test again. I believe that’s why she ended the story like she did so she doesn’t leave herself worried or angry. She can turn a negative attitude into a positive one when she says she will retake the test when the geese return and hibiscus is budding.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18909,7,"When ll was going to @LOCATION1 with my family I had to be patient. Our flight left at @TIME1 am so we were there at @NUM1. We waited for two hours. Nobody complained because we each had something to do. Me and @PERSON1 were playing video games, and my mom was reading ,When we finnaly got on the plane it took three hours to get to @LOCATION1 and no one complained then either. So this is the story of the time when nobody complaind for five hours!",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12840,5,"The author created a warm, loving mood throughout the memoir. ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. Here, the innocense of childhood, the congregation of family and friends,... formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1). This quote represents a warm mood because he talks about what he loves, such as Cuban music, and how friendship and family really come together to form his life growing up. ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This quote clearly represents a loving mood throughout the memoir because, like the first quote, it represents friendship and family. but also represents love and caring between all members of his childhood community, showing the reader that the community cares for each other, and they are all loving of each other. The mood changed near the end as well. It turned into totally love and warmth, but also happiness. ""It was a simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival"" (@CAPS1 @NUM2) this shows happiness because even though they are poor when they arrive in @LOCATION1, they are still celebrating the possibilities that are facing them.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18682,7,"Patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining. There was a time when I was patient. Being patient is difficult to do @CAPS11 I did it before. “@CAPS1 @CAPS3 @CAPS2, this isn’t even moving.” @CAPS3 brother and @CAPS3 broter obvousilly wasn’t being patient. Hello, @CAPS13 me mame, I mean man, can you walk any shower? “@CAPS4, I can if you want me to.” A nice man said in a kind friendly voice to @CAPS5.” @CAPS6, are you that dumb, I wasn’t for real. I m cut you just because of your stupuidity .” @CAPS5 said, trying to act all tough. @CAPS5 was only a year older than me (@NUM1) and he thinks he’s all big and can di anything he wants. “@CAPS8, little man you can’t cut me, I was waiting in line forever.: that nice man said to @CAPS5. “ well , too bad .” while @CAPS3 brother was  making eniesnes, was waiting patiently in line even though the line wasn’t really moving, inside I wanted to out every one @CAPS11 not like some people I have patients and can wait. After @CAPS3 brother cut that man and didn’t get punished he decided to cut hundreds of people. All those people were mad, very very mad at @CAPS5 @CAPS11 not one did anything besides say,” @CAPS8 don’t cut me.” @CAPS11 that didn’t’ really help. Intill @CAPS5 cutted the @CAPS15 person. That person was a young pretty body with beautiful blue eyes and has such pretty blond hair, her name was @PERSON1  “@CAPS13 me police man, this  young , little boy just cutter we and every one else. “@PERSON1 said. While I was waiting there patiently, @CAPS5 got kicked out of the whole park’ @CAPS15 in line please, “  “ @CAPS1 that’s me …. Won.Were “was the best roller coaster I had ever been on. Being patient is hard @CAPS11 can be rewarding. I also learned to be patient takes a lot of understanding and tolerant. Now, @CAPS16 know you get the best when your patient. And the worst when your not.",11,11,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9304,4,"The author might conclude the story with this because it shows that the girl had confidence that when the flower blooms she will be able to pass. Back at her home land that flower mean't alot to her and it still does. But it seems like this flower gives her hope and pride. She used to pick it with her grandmother and put it in her hair. So when she sees the flower, she will think of her grandmother and that will motivate her to keep going. The flower is strong and can stand through winter weather, so the girl is determinded that when the flower blooms, she will be able to past the test.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6497,3,"Many features of the setting affected the cyclist in “Rough Road Ahead.” First, the scorching heat of the desert  in June was a major problem that had him to the brink of dehydration. In the text it states, “I could drop from heatstroke in a gorgeous day in June (@CAPS1).” This shows the effect the exposure  to heat had on @NUM1 cyclist. Also, the terrain posed a threat to his well being during the story. In the text it says “I toiled on( @CAPS2).” This shows the increase in effort in strain the  terrain caused on the cyclist during his adventure.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
798,1,"I walked into my living room one night and saw my mom on the computer. I thought to myself ""she is always on that computer, doesn't she work to do?"". I said to my mom ""I think we should have an hour two of the computer each night, or not have one at all."" I told her that I think computers are a bad choice because you don't know who is on the internet and is trying to talk to you. Also, it gets in the way of exercising and spending time with family and friends. The internet/computers are very dangerous now a days. You never know if someone is a friend or a predator trying to get you. Say if you were talking to someone and you thought it was your friend, well you don't know for sure if it is then or not. I could be an older man or women trying to get a hold of you so they can probably kidnap you. Steal from you and worse. Now I watch the news and see many kidnapping because kids are talking to people on the internet and don't know who they are or what they look like. Like, when a girl was talking to a man and she thought it was her friend, turns out it wasn't and she got in a whole lot trouble. Maybe if she met him she would have gotten very hurt and be scared of that memory for the rest of her life. Family is very important to most families now a days. I have heard that spending time with family would bring your grades up in school because as you talk to them, you learn new things. Sadly this is not happening because people are so isolated to their computers they don't spend one minute with family or friends. I have a friend who is always on the computer. She never spends time with her family or friends. She is so focused on the computer screen then what is going on around her. Recently she has been getting off the computer and making more time with family and friends. Even her grades started going up because she spending more time studying with her mom and dad, then being on.... for example @CAPS1 or myspace and not getting any work done for school. In other words, she is very happy in life now and has changed from this experience she has gone through. Most people think you can use your brain for knowledge and call it exercise. That is one way to put it but it is not exercise for your body. People have spent more time having their eyes glue to the computer screen that they don't go out and play or maybe go a gym. The rate of obecity in our country is increasing for many reasons and lack of exercise is one of them because people spend to much time watching tv and being on the computer. I have a little cousin who is over weight and should be out playing sports and exercising. But does she, ""no""... She spends her free time on the computer in a stuffy room, instead of getting fresh air from outside. She keeps asking me how did I get and what age, and I keep telling her, I exercise and play sports so I can't tell you when. I keep saying that to her but she never listens. To this day she is still the same because she didn't take my advice to get off the computer and go outside to play. I strongly agree that we should have only two hours of the computer each night or have no computers at all. For kids saftey from bad people out there in the world, spending time with family and friends and finally for exercise and to stay fit with our bodies. I hope people understand what I say and take action to persue them in they own life and convice others too.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17887,7,"It was my first camping trip! Well, we went camping when I was one but I don’t remenber a lot. I was super excited! So, I’m sorry if I could’nt help but wonder @CAPS1 the ? are we going! My patience was not very good. While I was waiting for my dad to hook the camper up to his truck I sat there very bored. I kept saying when are you going to be done? Or,when are we leaving? Everytime I got, just be patient hunny. So, I tried it wasn’t really working.We finally left, it was an hour drive and when your seven thats a very long time. I had nothing to do, I was bored out of my mind! So, I said “daddy when are we gonna be there?” I got later, just be patient. So I followed demands and went along with his idea. Once we got there the first thing I wanted to do was swim. So as my mom was getting her swimsut  on. I was so impatient I looked like I had ants in my pots. I was going to go knock of the bathroom door but, I didn’t I took what I had learnt earier and did it. I sat down and patiently waited for my mom. So throughout this I learned a big lesson on patience. If you are patient things will happen much faster. I still use this lesson today. But every one in a while everyone is a little impatient.",10,10,,20,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6797,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because they caused him to need water. He was worn out because the setting was so intense. “Not two miles into this next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills” This quote from the text shows that the cyclists terrain was changing and they affected him.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6730,3,"When the cyclist is in the “serenity of an early sunset evening”, the man enjoyed his cycling just hoping he could cut his time in half. Then, once he got the advice and headed down the road he saw a ghost town which is never good. Next he came to the fork and the town he came to had no water. On the way to the new town he came to the bumpy road and going @NUM1 he was out of water but finally after his determination he made it to a place that was very nice. So as you can tell the features of the scenery road affected him greatly.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12869,5,"In the memoir, ""Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives"" by Narciso Rodriguez, There are various different moods. The main mood is thankful.           In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez expresses a thankfull mood. In paragraph @NUM1, there is an example of this thankfullness: ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved."" (Rodriguez, paragraph @NUM1).    This proves how Narciso acknowledges the sacrifice of his parents, and thanks them for it. In paragraph @NUM3, Narciso states that, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing that I could have ever done."" (paragraph @NUM3). This proves how Narciso Rodriguez thanks his parents for what they did for him.      In conclusion, in the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez creates a thank ful mood.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16601,6,"The architects building the Empire State Building incountered a big problem when trying to put the mooring mast on the very top. The second sentence in paragraph @CAPS1 states, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame."" Although the architects faced many problems this was the biggest. This ment that they would have to change the buildings structure in order to make it work. It says in the bottom of paragraph @CAPS1 that over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15063,6,"While the construction of the Empire State Building was in progress, the builders faced many obstacles in trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. At first, people thought it was going to be wonderful and lead to the ""transportation of the future"". One obstacle the builders faced was the fact that a large dirigible moored to the roof would have negative effects on the building's frame. ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation"". The builders would have to pay @MONEY1 to fix this problem. Another problem that was present was also the lack of safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the united states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" Also, even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the violent winds would cause the back of the ship to swivel around and around the mooring mast."" Even if the back of the dirigibles were weighted down with lead, it would not be safe; as the lead would be ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street."" There was also a law stating that airships could not fly too low above urban areas. Nature itself presented many more problems, such as winds blowing the dirigible onto the ""sharp spires of other buildings."" As numerous problems became apparent after the building was finished, the idea of dirigibles being the ""future of transportation"" was dropped.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3422,2,I find it intresting that people think that its there problem to go to the book self and say this and that shouldnt be aloud here. I also feel thats if you dont like the book dont look at it. Or read it. I mean I kind of understand about the magazines becouse somethimes there can be pretty bad. I mean at the same time its noones job to say what is right and what is wrong.                   The music I am @PERCENT1 with it being taken out of the libraries. some of the music people lisson to today is just not right or kids or adults. People are wanting to know why there is so much killing and hate in the world today. The movies at the libraries are pretty good they dont let thim get to bad i cant compain to much about that.        All around the libraries are doing a good job with how they handle it. Just some stuff that I would change but really what I think doesnt matter. Im only a @NUM1 year old kid i mean I can give my thoghts about it but thats about it. I love the libraries nothing will ever stop me from going. If I dont like something thin i just dont read it or look at it and thats how everyone should be,2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13470,5,"Home The Blueprints of our Lives is a warm tribute to the parents of Narciso Rodriguez. The author of this memoir had said, ""Growing up in this environment istilled in me a great sense that 'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" Narciso Rodriguez would change the way a reader would perceive this memoir. It would be a story of a young child who has perceived the physical and mental qualities of adults. @CAPS1 acknowledges the troubles @CAPS1 and his parents are in. For his neighborhood including his family being immigrants, in a time of racism and segregation, @CAPS1 learned how to appreciate this ""close-knit community of honest, hard-working immigrants.""@CAPS1 understood how to Narciso Rodriguez Sr, and @ORGANIZATION2 struggled personally and financially. @CAPS1 became grateful for his opportunity to live in this Cuban home of Newark, New Jersey. Though his parents had worked in a laboratory and studied chemical engineering, they struggle to find work in financial times. @CAPS1 adores them. The author writes, ""They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life."" Without these relationships, and the lives of various people, this memoir would be a selfish story of a child. @CAPS1 appreciates everything the family has done. There was too much generosity impressed upon a boy of such an early age. @CAPS1 had learned how to respect his parents. In the end, Narciso Rodriguez would write a memoir devoted to the bonds @CAPS1 created with his parents and the refugees amongst them.",4,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18853,7,"Patience @MONTH1 seem easy but, however, it can be hard. Waiting in line, waiting for @CAPS1 etc. all requires patience. Everyone, no matter how young or old has patience just like I did when I was in @NUM1 grade. Each day I wonder if it’s a dream or a nightmare. Everyday when I was in @NUM1 grade I always wanted something that would change my life eternally. After @NUM3 year that wish would finally come true. I was very patient waiting for our letter to be granted or denied. Before I knew it my mom, dad, and I were on a plane headed straight for china. There we would see the great wall, forbidden city, and @LOCATION1 not to mention our main purpose to adopt a little sister. I had no idea what I was in for. I was patient for @NUM4 weeks then we went to the lobby and she was with her caregiver along with all the other families waiting for their child too. I couldn’t believe we were the @NUM5 ones to receive our gift from china. BIG @CAPS2! The moment my mom tried to take her she started warning, pinching, kicking, and who knows what else. After an hour or so she calmed down and she calmly played with her toys and such. That night we went out for dinner at @ORGANIZATION1. My dad odered a milk shake and he let her ??? some of it that was also a @CAPS2. He did not get it back until the glass was empty. We soon learned that she would be a rollarcoaster with her ups and downs. She loved cake and ice cream and wanted dad only. It was dad’s dream come true. In conclusion, you will use patience everyday no matter how big or small. Patience will work its way into your life no matter how hard it is. Everyone has patience, the question is, “will you use it?”",11,12,,23,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13100,5,"The mood in the memoir represents friendship, family, helpfulness, one example of helpfulness is in the @NUM1 paragraph it says ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hard working, immigrints who extend a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own Kind, were clearly in need."" @CAPS1 good example of the mood in this memoir is family but also ties back to helping is in paragraph @NUM2 it says, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we concider family. Knowing that they would do the same for us. This is what the memoir is about.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7069,3,"The features in the setting in the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” greatly affect the biker. For example, the heat is constantly drying the biker out. Also, at the first town the old water pump proved to be a hopeless cause with water tastd like “battery acid”. Even after that were more problems. There was a sign that posted a max speed limit. The biker was doing about one-fifth of that speed. This affects his mood and he realizes that it will be along ride. The pebbles that he found helps him out. He remembers reading that sticking pebbles in your mouth calms your thirst. Finally, the bait store gave him the relief that he needed at the end of his trip. In conclusion, the setting makes the riders journey an  one, but in the end the bait store had just what he needed.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13513,5,The @CAPS1 Created @CAPS2 The @CAPS3 in this story is A very strong And happy @CAPS4 @CAPS5 They @CAPS6 From Cuba to A @CAPS7 @CAPS8 the United States And They were hoping For A Better life For there kids then The life that they had And @CAPS9 why the @CAPS1 was happy.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9857,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because this is what the story was all about. Saeng saw what happens in the winter and when it comes back around she trys to memorize it so that she can no what will happen.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9742,4,"The author ends it with that paragraph because the girl is talking about when the @DATE1 or spring comes again she will try again. The author ends it with that because it explains how the girl feels about spring and the animals. The girl says allot about the geese in the story, so we know from that she likes animals.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18325,7,"One of the most patient time I have ever had was in downtown @LOCATION1 at one of the greatest @CAPS1 places around @CAPS1 poupules! As I my dad and friend waited at our  table, @CAPS2 were very hungry. It had been @NUM1 minutes scince @CAPS2 orderd, but I stayed patient as much as I was mad and hungry I stayed indefatigable for my food. Finaly  it came and I was satisfied.",8,5,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17944,7,"One day alex was bothering be. Ao I decided to be patient. But he kept on, on, on, on, on, on, on, on, on, on, on, on, on, so I decided to tell him to shut up. So again he didn’t listen to me so I told @PERSON2, alex did not stop yet so I said nothing and was going to try to be patient with the @CAPS1. Talks a lot and @PERSON1. And eventually it did work and alex finally stoped. So I was happy. But he (alex) started again so I told him to stop on I would tell the teacher again. So he just shrugged his shoulders and kept right on doing all of the stupid noises. So I told the teachers and said alex you better stop this instinse. So alex you better stoped and began resibling with his pencil all over his peace of paper.",8,10,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14988,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was the frame of the building. In @LOCATION1 @NUM1, it explains that attaching a durgible to the building would add stress to the building's frame. They had to modify the whole frame of the building to a stronger material for the mooring mast to work. One of the biggest obstacles was safety. Most durgibles use hydrogen to power them, and hydrogen is highly flammable. There is a great risk of the dirigibles to catch on fire when flying over such a densely populated area as New York. Another obstacle in the way of the mooring mast was the conditions at the top of the building. At the top of the Empire State Building, there are violent winds that would cause the dirigibles to swivel around the mooring mast. Lastly, An obstacle the builders faced was the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. As explained in @LOCATION1, because of this law, it is illegal to even fly up to the Empire State building. With all of these obstacles, it is clear why the mooring mast wasn't used.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15299,6,"In the building of @ORGANIZATION1 gets very competitive. He wants to construct the biggest building in New York City. When the construction was going on he wanted to add a top or hat so that the mast would be able to drop off people directly into the building. But then there was a problem they had to consult it to allow it. Irving then let Al know that the building wasn't going to be done on time, because of the mast. That's what the Empire State building faced during its contraction.",0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7042,3,"The setting affects the cyclist in a very negative way due to the lack of buildings, people, and cars on his “shortcut” he was in great doubt of his survival. “I was going to die, and the birds would pick me clean.” He thought he wouldn’t get any water because there was nothing around him and he thought he would die of dehydration or heatstroke. “And the growing realization that I would die of heatstroke.”",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19485,7,"Are you patient?well I am always patient.Iam going to tell you a time when I was patient at school.One day I had to register for school it was very busy.I had to wait to every line atleast to ten to fifteen minutes.When I finally got all my paper work done,I had to take my id picture.When I took the pictures I went to get my id.All of a sudden it comes out,but my eyes were closed.So I had to wait in the line again and take more pictures.Then I went to take my other id. I waited very long,like about twenty minutes.My second id came out and it was messed up.T he lady told me when I start school,I will get the correct one.That is a time when I was patient in my life.",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3647,2,"There are many books, music, movies, and magazines that people find offensive. Some people even believe these things should be taken off the shelves. I do not believe that the books, music, movies, or magazines should be taken off the shelves completely. Not everyone finds these things offensive and they should not be taken off the shelves because a few people do not agree with them.     First, people have different views on what they find offensive. Not everyone will find the same things offensive or want the same books or song to be removed. With people always having different views it is difficult to take books, music, movies, or magazines off the shelves for everyone. Just because one person does not agree with what is being said in the movie or book does not mean that every single person wants that movie or book to be removed. If one person found my favorite book offensive I would not want it taken off the shelves completely.      Equally important, if every book, song, movie, and magazine that someone finds offensive is taken off the shelve there would not be many books, movies, songs, or magazines left. Author Katherine Paterson once said, 'But if I have the right to remove a book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS1 is saying that if every single book that offends someone is taken off the shelves there would be no books for anyone to read. People find different things offensive and if everyone took these things off the shelves there would be none left for anyone.      Finally, if someone finds a book offensive they do not have to read it. When someone finds a book, movie, song, or magazine offensive they don't need to watch it or read it. Instead of taking it off the shelves the person could just not read it. Not everyone finds the same books offensive and taking them off the shelves could upset many people. When someone finds something offensive they could just avoid that instead of getting it removed and upsetting other people. If someone was offened by one of my favorite books, I would prefere if they just avoid reading it instead if taking it off the shelves so that I can not read it.      Some people find many books, songs, movies, and magazines offensive. They would like these things to be removed from the shelves permenatly. I, however, do not believe that these things should be removed. Taking these off the shelves could make some people happy, it could also upset even more. Not everyone finds the same things offensive and should not be taken off the shelves because a few people do not agree with them",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6960,3,"I think that the features of the setting affect the cyclist greatly. First, I think the weather conditions affect him. I think this because in the passage it says, “I could drop from heatstroke”. Meaning, its really hot! Also, l think the fact that he has no water left is affecting him because it says in the passage, “l eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state”. This has a big affect on him, because he’s very thirsty. Also, l think the fact that there is nothing around him is affecting him. I think this because in the passage it says there were no cars. I think all these things affect him.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3677,2,"There are thousands of books in libraries, which are inapproriate and some that are. But libraries are to learn about many things such as reading for fun, reading the newsletter, or just looking for  random information. Libraries are places that we refer to when we need to find historical moments, or about animals or anything else. We need all books because they teach us the past, they all have a purpose, and we become more intellegent.       I believe that all books in a library have a purpose. They @MONTH1 be offensive but they teach us many things. For example, there are books out there that talk about the @CAPS1. For some people this @MONTH1 be a touchy subject and some might take it offensively, but if we didn't have those books to learn from we would make the same mistakes as we did back then. Books can teach us so much about the past, we can learn so many things from books then anywhere else in the world.      I also think that all books have a purpose to them. whether they are fiction or nonfiction. You @MONTH1 ask 'how do fiction books have purpose?' @CAPS2, fiction books have a purpose because they teach us to really use our imagination, quite a bit of books make us relieze that the struggles of a character can be the same struggles of someone in real life. And the most important reason is because fiction books not only catch our attention, but they also catch our childrens attention. Fiction books are the first books children know how to read, this is where they start their reading skills.      My last reason for why I don't think 'offensive' books shouldn't be removed from shelves is because all books make us more intellegent. We learn so much information from all sorts of books. Another example would be, that @CAPS3 books could be 'offensive' as @CAPS2, but if we didn't have them we would not have intellegent doctors. My final reason why I disagree with books being removed if they aren't suited for everyone is that someone that wants to learn something wouldn't be able to because what they want to learn could be offensive to others. What I mean by this is that we would pretty much be telling that person that they are not able to learn something new because others think it's offensive.     Every human being has a different outlook on something that could be offensive or could not. But why should we remove books, magazines, movies, etc from shelves? Just because we don't like it doesn't mean we have to remove it. Everyone has different taste, we wont ever agree on anything. But removing books from shelves isn't fair to anyone. Yes, they @MONTH1 be unsuited for others but when we don't like some thing don't we just move along to something we do like? Yes we do, so we should do the same thing with books",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18291,7,"What is patience? Patience is the act of thing understanding, tolerate and experiencing difficulties without complaining. I am going to tell you a little story of what every parent has to go through that requires a lot of patience. My baby brother, @PERSON1 was born @DATE1. Since birth my mother has dreaded the day of potty training whom she knew would be coming soon. As you @DATE1 know the price of diapers and pull-ups has gotten pretty expensive so when @PERSON1 turned @NUM1 years started potty training. Potty training requires alot of patience because sometimes the child @DATE1 not go to the potty and @DATE1 go on or herself. My mom knows this but she still gets pretty mad when @PERSON1 decides to use the bathroom on himself. At other times, mom becomes very patient because she knows this is all knew to him and that he is still a small child. My mom is still working on being patient but she knows that soon @PERSON1 will be olde to use the bathroom or the toilet by himself without wearing a pull-up. Many good things can come out of just being patient.",11,11,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4168,2,"This is a very difficult topic to argue with. In my opinion I believe that there should be certian types of censorship in the libraries. Eventually everyone is going to be exposed to the type of material in some of these books and etc. This material should be allowed in public libraries and highschool libraries, but of course you wouldn' want to see a highschool level of maturity in an elementary library.      Highschool students are more than likely to be exposed to inapropriate music and magazines than younger children. If they would like to listen to music that has inapropriate language then they should be allowed to. If there are young kids doing this it is obviously a bad thing because it is teaching them wrong things early in there life. It is even best if they arn't exposed to this at all.       There are also certian books in this world that are inapropriate to even highschool students and they need to stay out of all libraries so that there is no exposure. Once they are old enough to make their own choices then that is their decision on wether or not they want to look at those books. There are some things that can and can't be put out into liraries. Even you should know what belongs or doesn't.     So as I come to my conclusion, there should be things like music, books, and magazines but leave out the graphic material, children don't need to see that kind of stuff. It is all your own choice of things you want to read. Just make it the right choice, and understand what your reading, watchin, listening to, or being around.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7079,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" the narrator is faced with the challenging and perilous desert he must cross. He wasnt traveling in a car, he was riding a bike and crossing a desert on foot is tiring enough let alone on a bike. ""The speed limit was @NUM1. I was doing a water depleting @NUM2. Sometimes life can be so cruel.” In the horrible @NUM3 degree heat the narrator gulps down his water bottles at such a rate that he’s at risk of running out. Not only that but he’s been pedaling for such a long time that he @MONTH1 pass out from exaustion or,.” I could drop from heatstroke on a gorgeous day in June simply because I listened to some gentlemen who hadnt been off their porch in decades.” So I would say the narrator was pretty hasseled by his surroundings. ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1098,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 are several reason how computers have effect on people. My position is to convice the local newspaper why certain people @CAPS2't and @CAPS3 use computers. People getting caught up on the @CAPS4, or people not having enough money to explore the world, so they just be on the @CAPS4. In effect, people @CAPS2't waste their time on the @CAPS4 because you will get caught up. For example, my friend @PERSON1 stay on the computer more than @NUM1 hours. He tells me that his on a @CAPS5 line, hooking up with other people. He for gets about everybody. He's so on the @CAPS4. He stop going school, he gaining. Now he just a nobody. He just sit in front of his computer and do nothing. I feel like he just threw his life away just for some stupid @CAPS5 line. @CAPS8's not hard to find another in our city. @CAPS8's alot of beautiful young lady's out here to explore. Similary, people @CAPS2't waste their time on the @CAPS4 because you start losing time. For instance, you spend less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. People stop losing their focus on important, and start paying attention on other things like the, was a great person. She was so successful. She make tons of money. Until she start losing her her job. She stop cause she was so stock on facebook. Facebook is like a place for a friend @CAPS6 you could meet other people from different @CAPS7 you could just find people to date on that website. Facebook turn her life around. I remember her telling my mom how her life is so mess up now. How she got fired, how she don't pay her bill, and how she moving into a. Sometimes websites make lose focus on important thing in life. Consequently, certain people @CAPS3 use computer because the @CAPS4 help you with certain things. In summation, @CAPS8 help you find hotel or trip to go on with your friends or families. I love being on the @CAPS4. One time I sign up for this website that was called myspace. For moment I did got caught up on @CAPS8. Continue line.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7472,3,"If it is hot Out you can dehydrate quickley. also, if is ff ong hand hilly you use a lot of energy. It can berough on equipment, body, and mind. Make sure you dress apropreit lyand carry lot so f water. Next, make sure your tiresa inflated and all equip is working properly. then, plan a good route that you can stopat places and catch a breath or some water. also, make sure you eat well, food provides a lot of energy.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7660,3,"The features of the setting that affected the cyclist was the heat because he was getting lost and he was slowly running out of water. The cyclist said, “That you should never accept travel advice from old timers that haven’t left their porches since Carter was in office”. This means that because the cyclist followed their advice he got lost in the desert and was running very low on water. He was thirsty that he put stones in his mouth to keep him from thinking about water. In the end the cyclist learned to trust the map and the signs instead of listening to really old people who haven’t left their homes in years.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1553,1,"Dear local newpaper: @CAPS1 you being the local newspaper, you have the power to say how you feel about the effects computers give to people. I believe that computers give great effects to people because it teaches hand-eye coordination, gives people the ability to learn about far away places, and it allows you to talk to people. In all, @PERCENT1 of people agree with my idea about computers. Firstly, using computers teaches people about hand-eye coordination. For example, my grandmother told me that she knows how to use her hands and eyes well because of using the computer. This is because she types and researches information all day long. In all, computers are designed to help your eyes and hands to focus more. Secondly, computers have a lot of interesting information on faraway places. @PERSON1 from @ORGANIZATION1 quotes, ""I always use computers for my work because it helps me learn about many new things. @CAPS2, it lets my wife and I search details about a trip we want to go on."" @CAPS2, the people agree with what @PERSON1 stated. However, people @MONTH1 say that computers give the wrong information many times, but if you find a wonderful website, it will never lie to you. Thirly, if you use computers it will let you talk online or video chat with friends or family all over the world. How this benefits you is because if you have not seen your relatives in ages and you cannot buy a ticket to visit them, then video chat. It has gotten people so much closer and you see the world in a whole different way. @CAPS2, instead of wasting all your cell phone minutes, go buy a laptop or computer with a camera on it so you can video chat. Lastly, taking to people and being active in other peoples life is important. In conclusion, you will have great eye coordination, you will be able to research faraway places, and you will always be allowed to video chat or talk to family online. @CAPS2, I want you to tell the whole world that computers are useful and people use them everyday without a problem. Lastly, you will have the best feeling ever if you make everyone smile by knowing you believe that spending time on the computer can teach you a lot!",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10116,4,The paragraph shows that Saeng has a lot of feelings for her plants. She enjoys plants and she loves taking the time to spend with the plants. She means in that last paragraph that she cant wait for winter to leave so her plants will be budding and that she can enjoy her plants.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19033,7,"Patience is probalbly  one of the most important things in your life. If you are patient, most people will probalbly like you more, for example, if you are in line for something at school, and you were patient, you will probalbly get a “@CAPS1 you” from one of your teachers for being so patient. You always have to be patient, weather or not if it is at school, an ammusinent park ride’s line in front, and behind a bunch of people, you will want to be patient, because if you are are not, you wouldn’t want to lose it in front of all of those people and cut in front of them, and possibly get thrown out of the ammusmend park in front of all those people, then, you would be emborresed. This is why I think patience is important.",6,4,,10,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18209,7,I was patient during the meap. I was patient because I was done early and a lot of people were not done yet. When I get done early I like to draw or do some of my work but I didnt have any work so I new then when every one got done we waited for @NUM1 min then we start the meap again when I got done with that noone else was done so I waited for @NUM2 or @NUM3 min then every one was done then we stretched walked around for @NUM4 min then we sit back down and start the part @NUM5 when we are done we get to do work I am usually the first one done. Then when I get done with the test I get up and walk around so I can get @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 on my tests like meap test because it is so important to get good grades and when you are patient you will find out to get good grades like @CAPS1 and @CAPS2.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12229,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is they had no problem finding a house. for example the author states ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me they're rich culinary skills and love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally greatful)."" This means that they are great cooks and have skills for cooking. ""Our landlord and his daughter, Alegria (my babysitter and first friend), lived above us."" Even though they first came to the @CAPS1. S they had no problem finding a home. ""It was in this simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country and where I celebrated my first birthdays."" This is saying his mom keeps the traditions with all the celebrations for new comers to the @LOCATION1",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9239,4,"The author concludes the story with this sentence because it shows the girl the is willing to overcome obstacles and although she @MONTH1 have failed once she will keep trying, It also shows a connection between the geese and the hibiscus and the girl wanting to overcome her obstacles. Also the girl wants to overcome her obstacle at a certain time.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9055,4,"Saeng said that when the tree she bought starts budding she will take the test over. She means that without that plant she just does not feel like taking the test. She does not because the plant was with her, her whole life. She also thinks that she can not do it, without that plant. Saeng means that since she’s had a plant like that her whole life then she thinks she needs it, but I don’t think she really needs it. I guess it just “comforts” her.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18540,7,"A time when I was patient is when it was winter time and my cousin and I really wanted to go outside. My kept saying “@CAPS1 you will be able to go out”. My cousin was very mad, she was having a fit. I was just sitting there on my couch telling her what my mom said. After an hour past I was able to go outside, but my cousin could not. She wasn’t being patient. That is a time when I was patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11831,5,"The mood created in the memoir is happiness and gratitude. Narciso is grateful of his parents for moving to @LOCATION1, and still give him warm happy feeling of a house in Cuba. His parents passed down their culture to him and he is happy that they did. Narciso is glad to have lived in the home that they did, and all the opertunities that he had as a child. He is grateful that his family always got together and had a feast with cuban music, activities, and food. His parents gave up their jobs and had to Start their lives over entirely. Narciso is also grateful that he learned the real definition of ""family"". He is also very grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16490,6,"The builders of the empire state building had many @CAPS1. One of these @CAPS1 was trying to get the frame of the building to support dirigible, ""The stress of dirigibles load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted to the frame."" Another problem faced by the builders was that there was a law against aircraft going that low, this was stated @CAPS2 @NUM1 ""The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the empire state building was an existing law against airships flying too low in urban areas."" The biggest obstacle was nature itself. The violent winds that high up would have caused the dirigibles to be unable to moor, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mast."" These were the @CAPS1 the builders faced.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1619,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 news paper I have over heard this debate on weather computers are good influinces on people or not. I am sending you this message to state my opinion on the matter and in my opinion I think the computer has very good efects on people. Not only dose it have a good effect on people it also effects companies places and governments. There are many reasons why it has a good effect on people but the first and maybe one of the most important is it is an amaizing learning tool. When people are on the internet they could learn just about anything they want to on the giant mass of information we call the internet. It not only dose this but people learn how to do things through simulators from flying a plane to driveing a car. There is even more learning ability on the internet because a lot of people get home schooled on it through the internet and this @MONTH1 be an important part of their education because they might not be able to go to school because they are alway on the road or they move a lot of whatever their reason is. The computer is an important part in the invancement of the people's education. Not only can people use the computer in education but it is used as a tool in many ways, lets say your making a movie and need special effects they will use of photo shop or you need to collect and store changing information like lets say you want to stack you can always or down on a computer. Even if you were a construction worker you could your blue prints with pinpoint accuracy. Another less important thing about the computer is it gives many people entertainment. Lets you come home your bored you have nothing to do play a video game look around on the internet, it is also an important way of getting their music and or videos. This also effects many buissness and if the buissness go under becaus people werent moving ther stuff a lot of jobs will be lost and that is the last thing we need. The government also relies highly on the internet. They need it to make plans, save soldiers, and comunicate with other countries. And last but not the least we have the fitness and wellfare of the people useing computers. All I can really say to that is it is their decision. If they get off they can and if they won to sit there and waste or ",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1079,1,"Dear newspapers, I think that computers have a possitive effect on people because you could chat online. There are electronics out for children that they can plug up to there computer and learn different stuff. And you can pay your bills on the computer. People that have no phone od don't want to leave the house at that moment and have a computer can go on chat rooms or a local website can chat to friends and family. Also many people that have websites like facebook, myspace etc... can find new people and have so many things in common. And some people do find that @CAPS1 person that they been looking for. I think that they jusy come out with a new electronic for little kids like leaf frog that they can plug up to a computer/laptop and they can learn there alaphabet, counting numbers, and even spelling, This is a good product for little kids so they cam use the extra work over, the @DATE1 or after school so they can stay smart and learn in school and out of school. One day I had my mother what she was doing and the light bill so i was like how can you and she said and a website bt I forgot what's it called and you could pay your bills right there. So instead of up going in your are go to a local show when thay pay bills and can like or if you get a computer you can do that in you home with no . So people who publish the newspaper I think and I hope you think to this is a good response that tells you good things about a computer. And I hope it sticks around for a long time.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12036,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is intresting. First of all, his parents ""originally from cuba but arrived in the united states in 1956. After living for a year in a furnished one room apartment, twenty one years old Rawedia Maria and twenty seven year old @ORGANIZATION1 could afford to move into a modest three room apartment I would soon call home. ""in 1961, I was born into this simple house situated in a two-family, blond-brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey. Thats how the mood is intresting from the author creation",1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9773,4,"The author ends the story likes this so readers can understant the theme. Which is, you can always start over, after a mistake is made. For example saeng failed herb driving test and then it took a toll on her she will try again in the spring. I guess she figures that once she once she has renewed  herself she'll do better.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
455,1,People are probly on the computers chating there e-mail or making a websit or they are on youtube. Maybe the person does not like to go outside and enjoy nature or spending time with there family there are probly checking out new websites and playing games or the problay on the comper to book there vactions of seeing what is on sell a welmart. They are probly looking at or buy a new truk or they are looking at the history on all the wars and how they were started.,2,2,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9573,4,The author concludes the story with this because she is say that she is going to grow with the season chang. She is in a new country and just failed her drivers test. She feels down but the hibiscus reminds her of being back home. In the story @CAPS1 mother says “I’ve seen this kind blooming along the lake its strong enough to make it through the winter. I think that Saeng can relate to that because if the flower can make it in the winter tha she can make it in a new country.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7574,3,"The features of the setting in “Rough Road Ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit” greatly affect the cyclist. I’m sure that the heat makes the cyclist more thirsty, and heat can also drain energy extremely fast. Being in “the california desert in the middle of June” does not sound like an enjoyable time to be riding a bike. When the cyclist got tired and exhausted from not having any water, I’m sure that riding past all of the empty land had an effect on his attitude. I think that seeing a building made him get excited, and then when he found out that it was nothing more than an abandoned building, his spirits greatly dropped. He probably felt that he couldn’t continue for very much longer simply because all of the buildings he came across were empty, or abandoned. When the cyclist reached the bait store, he probably felt much better, and very relieved to have gotten there before he had a heat stroke.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16485,6,"The architects had their hands full when building the addition to the Empire State Building. There were @CAPS1 obstacles that needed to be overcome when they started building such as making sure the dirigibles were safe enough also taking in consideration the winds that are constantly changing. These problems were part of why the plans were put to a hault.Certain weather conditions were a big part of the safety procedures that took place. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" The winds would make the ship sway back and forth which would be extremely dangerous. Another problem was that @CAPS1 foreign ships ran on hydrogen which is flamable and that would be a high risk. ""@CAPS1 dirigibles outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10137,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because when the “snow does melt and the Geese return” it will be time t plant and work in the garden even more, because with snow on the ground you can’t plant but the geese back if the time of year to plant the seed and have are bad flock/fasten grander. The test is to she if she can have a better grade than last years, and year befor that.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15482,6,"In the article The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the architects of the empire state building faced multiple obsticals in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. First there was the obvious concern, safety, a dirigible dangling over New York City does not seem very safe. And it @CAPS1 wasn't a reasonable thing to build, the empire state building was already tall enough, why build a mast that probably won't get much use anyway.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12717,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir can be describe in many ways. The mood that the author created was confusing. Is confusing because I see more than one too many times. Some of the are happyness, proudness, sadness, and other ones. It's because the memoir talks about Narciso Rodriguez life. The mood created by the author can't be describe since there's too many.",1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21480,8,"  Laughter in life is a good thing to have I believe. Once @CAPS3 I was @NUM1 year's old I had a and @CAPS1. We always loved to hang out and do things together like take walks, or go to the beach, or go to the parks. What was so funny was that that we also loved to eat together too, maybe not out his dog bowl, but off of plates or on a picnic table. He was a cute dog. He had four little puppies named @CAPS5-@CAPS6, popcorn,big tail, and mountain. I named them all weird animal names because that's either what they smelled like or that's what they looked or loved doing.  Why we named my dog @CAPS1 was because he always smelt like @CAPS1. I always took him on walks to make him a healthy dog. It made me very angry @CAPS3 he had puppies and a mate. I don't know why maybe just because head I really loved my dog and i wanted him to be mine only. My favorite friend. I thought in my head hey! that's my dog and you leave him alone and do not touch him. Well @CAPS3 he had puppies i finally realized in my head @CAPS1 just wanted a life of his own too, a family, and be a big boy dog. He didn't hate me, he loved me and giving him a family is what I allowed and it made him happy. What was funny about the little puppies was that they smelt like odd food, like @CAPS1, @CAPS5 chops, or popcorn. My favorite puppy was @CAPS5 @CAPS6 because that's what he smelt like, not @CAPS1 but @CAPS5. POPCORN was a good dog too so was the other dogs but @CAPS5 @CAPS6 was a biter. It's funny because those little puppies love to bite and chew on stuff. The second you leave my puppies alone they will so eat everything. One time @CAPS3 we went on a trip to another state he had to leave the puppies alone with a babysitter, and @CAPS3 we came back they ate up a lot of the clothes and destroyed everything. I also had @CAPS11 too but they weren't good animals or pets to have they also ate everything up, and they stink. No not like @CAPS1 or popcorn but something else gross. The puppies loved to nibble on your toes and your hair. They had small teeth but oh they hurt. Stinky breath those dogs had I don't know why but there stinky. One of my favorite story about @CAPS1 was that he never liked to swim. It was odd to me because you would have thought cats hate water more than dogs. Well @CAPS1 did not know how to swim so I had to teach him myself as a good owner and all. Well @CAPS3 ever he doggy-paddled, he stuck his head underwater and swam forward. I don't know why, but I always thought can he breath like that? or is it just a doggy thing. Well eventually I got him over that, I don't think it was good for him to swim underwater. Like cats he used to never like water, it was just a phobia my dog had I guess. But I tried my best to get him over it. @CAPS3 I moved around states I had to leave him it was the saddest thing in my life ever. But we all move on right. Laughter I think is so good to have in your life because it can help you become more anti-depressed and not have to focus on the bad things in life. Every now and then @CAPS3 I am sad i just go and think of @CAPS1. I had other animals like @CAPS10, @CAPS11, @CAPS12, and cats. Personally I love cats more than dogs but @CAPS1 will always be the first. My cats weren't really that social to me, there lazy.What was so funny about my cats was that I named one of them @CAPS14. Why I named that cat @CAPS14 was because he was all black but with white feet. It was funny because @CAPS3 ever he got mad he did a lot of turning and jumping around. He was a wild kitty. I named one of my cats @CAPS15 because he was so fast at everything. What was funny about him was @CAPS3 ever you play around with him he charged off like he ate a bowl of cat nip. Having animals in my life to be with gave me a story of laughter in my life, and happiness. Laughter I think is a good important part of relationships too. If you do not laugh in your relationship then I believe that the couple are not so happy. Laughter can be good many time's, but also can be a insult too. If it means becoming a insult to some people or even laughing at people is rude.  Having laughter in your life is something you should always keep because it can help you become happy in many situations and problems you encounter in life. To be happy you should have laughter.",15,17,,32,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10365,4,"The author concludes the story with this because that one paragraph basically sums the whole story up. ""When the snow melts and the geese return"" basically goes back to the beginning of the story when saeng started planting. This is why the author gave the story ends conclusion.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13487,5,"After reading the selection ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by @PERSON1 I have decided the as a child @PERSON1 seemed to have a very fun life. Also the memoir seemed to have a good mood to it. One thing that made the mood good with all the talking about parties. I like parties and thinking about parties during @CAPS1 makes it a little less @CAPS2 racking. Another thing that sets a good mood is a talk about how Narciso's parents are always upbeat and ready for any thing. The final thing that makes the selection have a very good mood is how Narciso talks about all his family and friends. When I think of good memories of my family and friends it always brings a smile to my face. Overall this memoir made me feel good and brightened my day.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10315,4,The author concluded the story the way they did because it left hope .Saeng hod been hurt anddissappointed but in the end she had shown hope in the story Saeng failedher driving test. She was very disappointed . In The endit  showed she was not going to quit in this new country . She was going to move on and make the best of what she has.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9021,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show the importance of new beginnings and to accentuate the theme in the story. The theme is that one must overcome hardships and seek new beginnings. The springtime is a representation of a new beginning. So, the new beginning of spring will allow her to start all over again on the drivers’ test. Also, the author uses the paragraph to show the symbolic qualities of everyday things. Just how the hibiscus reminded her of home life, the geese will remind her of springtime.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10433,4,The author used that sentence because the snow is melting and the geese are coming back. The flowers were budding up and that is why I think the author used that sentence. Scribed by @ORGANIZATION1,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15308,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. Dirigibles are enormous steel-framed ballons they can travel for long periods at time of seventy miles per hour. Thoogh dirigibles seemed great for attracting people by ways of travelin modernation, the builders faced a complex obstacle. There was no area of suitable landing for dirigibles. In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there many thoughout changes in the building needed to be considered. The load being transported off the dirigible would add stress to the building frame, as would the wind pressure. To suit the buildings with accommodating the dirigible, the price for modifications to the building would cost @MONEY1. Many obstacles were scientifically proven why the dirigible could not dock at the Empire State Building. The issue of safety involving the hydrogen gasses being highly flammable were to much of a risk in the high populated are of New York. Also nature was a large obstacle that was faced due to the wind at such a tall altitude. The law implying that airships couldn't fly too low was a practical reason why the dirigibles could not dock at the building. ""One set of engineers here in New York is trying to dope out a practical, workable arrangement and the Government people in Washington are figuring on some safe way of mooring airships to this mast."" A quote by Al Smith. The obstacles involving the moderate transportation idea were too impractical in using the mooring mast for dirigibles on the empire state Building",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15255,6,"From the story the Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders faced huge problems when they tried to make it accessable for dirigibles to land. One major factor was the winds at such high altitude, ""The winds on top of building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The builders not only had to think of a way for the ships to be secure and not low around, but also needed a way to support the weight of the dirigible because of the already heavy building. These are only some of the great problems the builders needed to deal with.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10122,4,"The author concludes with this story to show how Saeng is ready to accept her new life. Once the geese and the hibiscus are back she feel like she's at home. When she feels more at home is when she will be ready to take the test again. The text states “run and the geese return"" this hibiscus is budding , then I will take that test again”. Clearly the geese and hibiscus remind her of home.Once she feels at home, she will feel at ease. Thats why the author concluded with this pasage.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18683,7,"A kid in my school, @PERSON1, has had a crush on my best friend my coarse for who knows how long. He has asked her about fifty times. She likes him as a friend but nothing more. She has dated many guys since @PERSON1 first asked her out. Mycaela can be a little boy obsessed.In fact she is now dating a boy who I asked out two days ago, sorry of topic. Anyway, @PERSON1 is always very patient, hoping mycaela will come around someday. It’s been almost two years with him stalking her and she still hasn’t come around. I just think that @PERSON1 is very patience and be is a great kid.",8,7,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10589,4,"Saeng in not only just dissappointed from failing her drivers test, she is also upset and missing her home of Vietnam. Walking home she spots a little piece of Vietnam right there in the united states. She buy the beautiful winter hibiscus, or saebba, to remind her of her past. The end of this story combines the two different, countries, cultures and almost worlds her life is from. When she says, “when they come back”, she is referring to the geese. To her the geese symbolize her life  in life in @LOCATION2 and how she has became accustom to it. The hibiscus is also a symbol of her life. It is a symbol of her life and past in Vietnam.It brings back memories and buying that plant was like getting a little piece of home. When the “hibiscus is budding” then she will attempt the test again. When this little piece of home gets bigger then she will try again. When she is more stable in the @CAPS1 culture, get still has a firm grasp of her own, then she will be ready.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16256,6,"The Empire State Building was in construction the building passed for many obstacles. First, because they wanted to do the biggest build in the world and they had to work hard. The State building was destined to never fulfill its purpose for reason that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12784,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir is very significant. He expresses love, appriciation, and unity. Narciso shows a lot of love not only to his parents, but to his culture. He stated often about how thankful he was to grow up around cuban food and music. For example in paragraph @NUM1 he says, ""...Passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today,"" and, ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" @CAPS1 he showed appritation toard his parents. Narciso often states how much he admires them for their bravery by coming to @LOCATION1. He talks alot about how they turned their simple house into a home in paragraph @NUM2. Finally, unity was shown a great deal in his community because they were mostly all cuban, spanish, or Italian imagrents, and they tended to stick together. Overall, Narciso really learned what the word ""family"" means.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13309,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir. The mood of the story was happiness. The reason why I said that the story was happiness was because she was happy that she was growing up. In the text it says ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me great sense"". Narciso Rodriguez was happy she grew up in the neighborhood she lives in. Her neighbors/friends were from Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants. In conclusion that was the mood of the authors memoir of the article/story.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21458,8,"In any relationship, things like physical contact, verbal conversations, or any kind of outward expression at all is very important. More particularly, laughing is key as well, to any kind of iteracton with someone. Laughing says,""what you are saying is funny"" or, I'm enjoying this"". Laughing says a lot without saying a word. Think about someone you know very well. It might be your best friend, or it might be a family member. If you think about it, you can tell when they are mad, sad, angry, frustrated, just by looking at their facial expressions or looking into their eyes. When you see them laugh, you see happiness. Its so obvious, because their eyes sparkle, their face lights up, and you just know that they are cheery. Now think about when you are hanging out with your friends. Being with friends is always fun, and we love it. That's why we go do things with them right? And when we are with them, we laugh a lot. We tell funny stories, we share inside jokes, and fun memories that make us laugh, and we love that, we love the feeling we get when we are with them,and most of all, we love the moments that make us laugh. Maybe its a long car ride, a sleepover, or maybe its at a party or church perhaps. Have you ever noticed that when one person laughs, the rest of the group follows in unison? Laughter is contagious, making it hard to resist most of the time. Whether it be a joke that was told, or that someone made a fool of themselves, its always a favorite part of any gathering or party, or whatever it @MONTH1 be. Some people say that each time you laugh, a few seconds are added to your life. Im not so sure I believe that, but I do believe laughing is healthy. I know that when I laugh, i feel so much better. Whenever I get back from hanging out with my three closest friends, I feel great. It's like whatever else that was getting to me that week or day is just forgotten, and especially if we laugh a lot, it makes me feel good. When a friend or someone else we know is down in the dumps,what is the first thing most of us resort to? It's going to be making them laugh right? Because laughter is a big part of being happy. When someone laughs, they find it hard to resist being cheered up. For this reason, I believe that laughter is the best medicine of all. It's so hard not to feel better when laughing. Once again, I believe that laughter is important in any human relationship, because laughing shows that you are either enjoying their company, just like smiling at all the right moments, or making the right face when they are telling a story, and showing them that you are engaged in the conversation. If someone is telling a funny story, or a joke, laughing shows that you get the humor in what they are saying. If you are enjoying being with that person, laugh a lot. Show them that you love hanging out with them. People love making other people laugh. Whether you are laughing at a joke, a funny story, or a face they made, or all of the above, laughing is just as important in any situation. Just like the saying goes for smiling, everyone laughs in the same language. Laughter says the same thing all around the world. Laughter is is almost always a good sign, and means something is going right.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3043,2,"This is what's wrong with today's society. We are too soft.We're too worried about what other people might think if we say this or do that. I'm the kind of person that doesn't care about other peoples feelings. And I say that to an extent. If we're talking about my friends, family, my girlfriend, that's totally different. I show a lot of respect to those people on a daily basis. But as far as people I don't know, I could care less what their beliefs, opinions, and outlooks on life are. Maybe we should stop worrying about other people for once and just try to grow and prosper as a race.      Anybody ever think of that? If I had it my way, the @ORGANIZATION1 would not exist. @CAPS1, radio, books, movies, magazines would all be uncensored. Is life filtered and censored? Absolutely not! So why should those things be? I'm sick and tired of people constantly sheltering their children from lifes normalcies. They've gotta learn sometime. Life isn't lollipops and rainbows. It's hard, unforgiving, and it kicks you in the teeth. You've just got to learn to adapt to it. And censorship in libraries, on @CAPS1 etc, won't and aren't helping matters in the least bit. I guess I don't understand why we have to care so much. If everybody just relaxed a little and focused on themselves, we would be fine. Everytime I hear the word 'offensive' it makes me sick to my stomach, because in my eyes, that word doesn't exist. It's a made up word that really means we care about other peoples feelings more then we do our own",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16327,6,"Many obstacles were established for the workers, in allowing dirigibles dock on the Empire State Building. At first they thought they knew what they were doing, they were wrong. The workers first obstacle was to make docking at the Empire State building safe. However it was hard to make that happen because it was above civilians and if it ever dropped the resolt would be extremely serious. The second obstacle that got in their way was the wind pressure. It would of caused an un reliable support of the mast which would screw up the docking of the dirigible. Finally the dirigible is the last peice to the puzzle with disaster. In the section The Fate of The Mast it gives that the dirigible is run on hydrogen which is extremely flammable. Just that sentence alone establishes that it is not safe for the enviroment. By far many obstacles got in the way of the process of the mast. But docking was a whole different idea. Many obstacles had gotten in the way of the builders in attempting dirigibles to dock there.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18592,7,On @DATE1 on my berthday. We wint to go get a cake. I wonted a ice cream cake. It was over @NUM1 people their. I did not have cuy pashints. But my mom did. It was a play ground nite ??? it. So I wint to go play. Wih my mom got the she came and got my wert to go soldrat my povetg.,4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21465,8," Laugh @CAPS1 @CAPS2                         @CAPS3 @CAPS4 someone who laughs a lot or a little? If @CAPS4 @CAPS3 the kind of person that can laugh about any and everything, then I'm sure we would get along well. Laughter plays a key part in my life. @CAPS1 is a part in about three different ways, in that I joke around a lot about numerous things, I do funny things such as make funny faces, and last I also laugh about me being a klutz. When @CAPS4 see me or talk to me for either a short amount of time or an abundant amount of time I guarantee I can and will make @CAPS4 laugh. Laughter can be an amazing thing, when in any kind of situation as in an awkward one, an embarrassing time, or just any kind of situation when @CAPS4 don't know what @CAPS4 should do; just remember @CAPS4 can laugh in those times. Ever since I was just a young girl no matter where or what I was doing I always seemed to be a huge klutz. My mom would always say, "" @CAPS4 @CAPS3 worse then a bull in a @LOCATION1 shop."" @CAPS5 was so right. If @CAPS1 was just as simple as me dropping things, maybe even breaking glass, or falling; that statement was always true. All @CAPS5 could ever do when I did do something like that was just laugh, because @CAPS5 knew that @CAPS5 has a clumsy daughter.  Such as this one time when I was in elementary school, we had award assemblies every month, these were to recognize students who had been doing well that month and was following the rules of a certain characteristic. This was the day I had hoped for; my name to get called. When the teachers were up on the stage calling names, I was anticipating for @CAPS1 to be my turn. Then next up my name was called. I got up and was so excited and nervous to go in front of the crowd and get my award. When I had gotten up there I got my award then went back down the stairs. Not a great idea when I was so excited. When I was going down, I literally went down the stairs. My feet had missed a stair, and I went flying down on my behind. Now tell me what would @CAPS4 do in this situation? In front of over two-hundred kids and about thirty parents? Well I just had to laugh @CAPS1 @CAPS2, get up, and go back to my seat. Another thing about laughter @CAPS1 really makes me who I am to this day. I don't know where or what I would be doing if @CAPS1 weren't for me lacking dexterity when I was younger. Laughter has brought me closer to my family and friends. They know when I am looking gloomy; that if they want me to not look so gloomy that they will have to make me laugh. My closest friends and I joke around and laugh about numerous things. Sometimes @CAPS1 might be facetious, so we have to catch ourselves on those ones. From my experience of being clumsy no matter the situation, I learned that instead of being embarrassed and not wanting to bring up what happened ever again, that making @CAPS1 funny, and something @CAPS4 can laugh about is much better. Learning from a young age to laugh and have fun, @CAPS1 really has made me a better person; in that people know me me for many different things, but one of them is that I am a happy and funny girl and laugh a lot.That is something that I am proud of, just knowing that I can make my peers and other adults laugh and have good time. So therefore laughter is not just one element or part in my life, @CAPS1 plays a huge part.",18,18,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4723,2,"When it comes to my idea of having censorship in the libraries around the world I believe that there are cases when there are books, music, movies, magazines, etc., that should not be on the shelves. Not only are there things in the books, etc. that children might not understand and take the wrong way, but there are also things that adults of any age might take offensivley as well.     In my years of being in school I have encountered many books, music, movies, magazines, etc., that I have thought should never even end up on the shelves of libraries. For one example, I was looking through the library one day for a book that I would be able to do my book report on, and just from reading the back of the book I learned that this book involved drugs, sex, and many other things that I thought would be inappropriate for someone even my age to read. For the librarians and other school workers involved in the buying of books, I am sure that they never even think twice about a book being offered to young children and teenagers that it would be inapropriate or offensive, but in almost all cases every single book has something that would prove them wrong.     Also I have encountered offensive behavior while reading a book that was said to be a wonderful book even for someone under the age of twelve. In my own experience from reading the book I would have to say that these people are crazy and should reevaluate the the specific age they market to. Not only are there books that I have found in the library to be inappropriate and offensive but also many magazines, movies, and music. There is usually not alot of music that would involve offensive behavior in libraries but in some cases there are. For example, I new someone that was doing a report on pop culture and while researching the music and listening to the music that the library provided, they found it to be very offensive and inappropriate for himself to hear. Other than that I have found that movies and magazines are just as bad as books when it comes to being offensive.     I myself would think that teenagers above the age of @NUM1 would understand the meaning of being mature. I have observed that most teenagers and even children that read offensive books end up having a behavior that most parents and teachers do not approve of. When it comes time for my children to reach this age I would hope that they would never act like some of the kids I have seen or spoken with.     After understanding how much inappropriate/offensive behavior there is in books, music, movies, magazines, etc., I not only recommend that they evaluate the type of books, and other resources that are offered in libraries, but also I have realized that I sure hope they get this matter taken care of right away. I not only feel that parents around the world would feel the same as I do, but I know for a fact that I would never want my children to read books that I have read or been offered through my high school library. This is a very serious matter that all teachers and parents should realize when they recommend books to children and even teenagers. The world is becomming more and more violent every single day, and it is up to the future children to solve this problem. In a sitaution like this, we do not want the minds of the youth to be infested with offensive and inappropriate behavior. Let this be a step in the right direction",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6829,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist very much in this. The hot weather made him have a dry mouth leading to the lack of water. He used stones in his mouth and he said, “I’d read once that sucking of stones helps take your mind off thirst by allowing what spit you have left to circulate."" He used that to help him survive the ordeal.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4360,2,"Censoring any type of media such as books, magazines, movies, or music from a library is not right. A library is huge amount information put common places for people to seek out knowledge.When something is found offensive, you should not hide it a away as though it was never there. If any media is offensive, it should be the person who is looking up the information to choose if he/she wants to use it.When someone for example a child has something offensive, the first thought is to take it away from the library or television.Instead, just explain what it is there looking at and they will eventually understand the reason it is offensive, but how does someone know what is offensive or not?Just because something is found offensive by one or two people does not make it right to just take it away. It should be talked about or discused by groups of people on the subject then decided whether or not it should be taken off the shelves for being offensive.If there is a book or magazine on the shelve and it might be offensive it should a decision made by the people surrounding that type information to take it off the shelve and not to be hidden away.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16392,6,"The idea of a mooring mast atop the Empire State Building seemed like a grand idea at the time of construction, but it had many obstacles to overcome The builders first had to make ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications"" to the buildings steel frame. this would reinforce the building against the pressure a dock dirigible would create. Adding a mooring mast would not be as simple as placing one atop the building. So the builders constructed a huge stainless steel enclosure to house passengers. this enclosure also had an elevator and stairs to bring passengers to the eighty fifth floor. Lastly, the builders had to complete the roof before framing the mast in steel. The concept of a mooring mast was ingenious although the practicality was soon found to be extremely low. Not to mention the fact builders were a thousand feet high. this idea presented many challenges.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1629,1,"Dear Newspaper, I am writing this better to explain to you how more people in our society would benefit from using computer you can do work in less time it would take to do it manualy. You can interact and make more friends by talking or web chating. Not to forget that it is more entertaning. That is what computers were made for. To help us with tasks or for our personal use. How do computers though help us with work? Lets say that you are having a buisness meeting and you have to write a five page report with pictures and a graphs. It would take you twice the time to do that by hand then with a computer. With a computer, you can type you work which makes it much neater and looks more proffesional, You can copy and paste your images that you can @CAPS1 on the internet. With graph making software, you can easily plug in the data you have collected and the computer will do the rest. If you had to do this by hand, you would have to write extremly neat, @CAPS1 pictures in a newspaper or mabe, even draw them. Then you would have to make the graph by hand making sure not to mess up. It makes it twice as hard, to do a simple task with a computer. What if you want to talk to a friend? With a computer you can easily talk to a friend as to having to write a letter or talk on the phone with a computer you can either chat with a person with writing or even being able to see them on you computer screen. Instead of just hearing voice or waiting two or three days to talk to them. If you have a laptop you can talk to them were every they go or you go. Being able to see the person at your convinience to talk without having to leave you house is a very good thing to have. The benifit are major and it doesn't cost anything to chat. If you have a friend or relative that lives very far away, you can easily go at talk and have a video conference. What about entertainment? The computer is a very valuable too! but we can fun, we can play games or watch videos at as convinience. They don't cost a lot to download at all, they can be played with friends on a web chat or by yourself. Videos you can watch all the time with no ads to interupt you can pause the video too. This is more efficie, they care I very convinient for the average person. Playing games were ever you go is good and again don't art to play or. In conclusion I think that people would be more from using computers this is because it is easier to work with. We can interact with each other. Use it for entertainment. Technology was made to make things easier do we should take advantage of it.",6,4,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21112,8," Laughter plays a huge part in my life, my family loves to laugh. We are always making each other and people around us laugh. @CAPS8 you put two or more @CAPS1's together someone is going to start cracking up. Sometimes the kids in my family have games to make each other start @CAPS4.  There is this one @CAPS2 that a couple of us play; no one ever oficaly gave it a name so we just call it theLaughing @CAPS2. The @CAPS2 starts out with one person standing in froung of everone else thats playing. The goal of the @CAPS2 is to try to get one of the other people to start @CAPS4, and the first one to laugh has to trade places with them to do the same thing. We really dont play that often just @CAPS8 their'se nothing else to do. One night my two nefues and I were just siting around looking for something to do @CAPS8 my little nefue @PERSON2 said ""@CAPS3 play the @CAPS4 @CAPS2"". His older brother @PERSON1 and I didnt really want to play but there was nothing else to do so we bouth said that we would. It started out like it always did nobody really wanted to go first, but @CAPS7 sombody finly maned up and just went. @CAPS7 it got started. After that everbody was @CAPS4 and having a good time. It went on like this for a while, but after about a houre or so it started to get boaring. @PERSON1 and I were strating to get board out of our minds so we were going to ouit, but my little nefue didnt want us to. @PERSON2 went up to take a turn. @CAPS8 @PERSON2 went up for his turn, he started out like he usually did just making stupid faces and funny sounds to try to get people to laugh. We had seen all of his faces and herd all of his noises so it wasnt going to work. @CAPS7 after he realised that we wernt going to laugh he started telling us a story. He started the story out by saying ""@CAPS6 this guy right; he didnt have anything besides his chair and his box. He loved his chair and his box."" The story wasnt very funny yet but he went with it. ""@CAPS7 the guy went to bed because he was tired and all, and @CAPS8 he woke up his stuff was gone. His chair and his box the only two things that he had in this world were gone. So he went looking for his things. He was searching all day and night but he couldnt find anything not his chair, his box, or even a clue of where they could have gone. So he disides to go to bed and maybe they would be back in the morning like maybe it was all a dream; but @CAPS8 he woke up he had turned into a wild boar."" @CAPS8 he said that @PERSON2 started running around acting like a pig. That got us @CAPS4 but he didnt want to stop there he just kept telling his story. In the story it turnd out that everytime the ""guy"" went to bed something strange would change and it just got more and more funny. My family loves to laugh and have others laugh with us. Just like my nefue @PERSON2 he didnt want to stop telling his story because he had us cracking up. Weather were just hanging out and telling a couple of joaks or making up a @CAPS2 we love to laugh. Lauchter has a huge part in my life.",17,18,,35,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18685,7,"Im @PERSON1 and a year ago I was a foster kid. I had to have patience for a lot of things. First of all, my foster parents got divorced with kids. I had to have patience waiting till my foster mom found a home to move to. Secondly I wasn’t told when I could go home. I had to wait till everything was over. Finally, they told me after a year and a half that I could go home to my mom within a week. I packed and waited. I had to have patience with everyone. It was hard, extremely hard, mind crazy hard. It took two weeks and a day to get home and on top of all that I had to move all my stuff home and unpack to this day I am still unpacking. Being a foster takes a lot of patience. I learned that.",12,8,,20,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15108,6,"Based on the excerpt from The Mooring Mast, there are three main obstacles prevented the Mooring Mast on the Empire State Building from being used in the way it was intended. The first obstical was that it lacked safty. Dirigibles are highly flammable machiens when used with hydrogen, and a fire in New York City would be tragic..  Another obstical that the Mooring Mast faced was @CAPS1 Nature. The mooring was designed to attach to the dirigibles with a electric winch, allowing the dirigibles to move freely. When the winds of @ORGANIZATION3 were to blow on this situation, the diridles would ""swivel around & around the mask"" (@CAPS2 @NUM1) this would cause tension to build on the buildings frame and lead to a very unsafe inviorment. The last reason was that there was a law created that stated that it was illegal for a ship to fly too close to urban areas for safty reasons leaving the whole Mooring Mast to be unusable.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17933,7,"“@CAPS1 story of patient” One time I was patient was when I went to the @CAPS2 for a check-up. Me and @CAPS1 dad have wait in the lobby for ?? time, after every ?? went in for the appointments. I couldn’t take it no more, but he made me stay. So I kept quiet. Well, most of the time really I wanted to say something really bad but instead I held it in. So finally we went in I was so happy. It was like I was the happiest man on earth. That’s @CAPS1 story about patience.",7,8,,15,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9982,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph for many reasons. For example, it shows a sense of hope, when she says “this hibiscus is budding"". That indicates a new beginning or starting over. I think that is the idea the author is trying to get across. Obviously it was difficult for the author to adjust to her new country. For example, she was disappointed that the hibiscus wasn’t the same as the one in her homeland. Even though she's feeling hostalgic; this paragraph reassures the reader that the author is willing to give her new country another chance.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16186,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow diigibles to dock there. The builders were in a compition to become the tallest building in the world. This made them rush and really @CAPS1 for this. The archetes had to find a way to build this mast. ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modification had to be made to the building's framework"". They had to fix the framework of the building so the wind woldent affect the rest of the building. ""The stress of the dirigibles' load and the wind Pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's fundation."" The builder and archetes had to overcome the reality to. It was not safe and dirigibles are highly flammable. It wald be a terrible accident if one eliminated in the city. Also many laws @CAPS2 airships flying low in urban areas. The builders had to face many Problems while trying to build the tallest building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1700,1,"What is technology? Technology is defined as anything that helps enhance our way of living. Technology is all around us. Our beds, houses, televisions and even chairs are all forms of technology. There is one form of technology however, in my opinion, has revolutionized modern day living as we know it. This form of technology is called the computer. My outlook on the effect the computer has had on our society is quite positive. Just think of all of the things we rely on this device to do. There is one thing, however that really sticks out in my mind; @CAPS1. The computer is perhaps the greatest form of @CAPS1 the world has ever seen. E-mail is basically sending a letter to a friend without the hassle of mailing it out where it might get lost or stolen. E-mailing is two simple steps: @CAPS2 and @CAPS3. Not only does it lower the risk of the letter not getting there, but it is also much quicker. You hit the ""sen"" button and before you know it, a new letter is sitting in you friends inbox. Another method of computerized @CAPS1 is my personal favorite, instant messaging. Instant messaging allows you to have a conversation with someone that could be miles away. And it's okay if you decide to go get a soda while you are instant messaing because unlike a real conversation, that isn't rude. These are just two methods of @CAPS1 that the computer enables us to have. Tehre is a variety of other that, much like these two, enhance our way of life. I believe that the main reason the computer has enhanced our life so much is because of one giant thing: the internet. The internet makes everything we do on the computer possible. If i want to gon on the computer and do research on a topic, the internet takes me where i want to go. With millions of different websites, the internet has endless possibilities. If I'm interested in arcade games, I can go on the internet and play them. If i have to write a science report, then i can go on the internet and collect research. If i want to listen to music, tehn i can go on the computer, look up a song, and listen to it. And guess what? If i'm looking for a funny video just for a good laugh, then the internet can find me one! The internet is perhaps one of the greatest things ever invented. It's just another reason to love the computer.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15706,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many problems in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Starting with putting a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State building. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof"" (paragraph @NUM1). They had to modify the steel frame of the building. They had to do this all the way from the building's foundation, ""which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" (paragraph @NUM1). This would cost more than sixty thousand dollars. Once the mooring mast was built the builders still encountered more problems. Dirigibles coming in from outside the @LOCATION2 ""used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (paragraph @NUM3). So the flammable dirigibles were too dangerous to fly over such a populated place as New York City. Also the winds at the top of the Empire State Building were too strong. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast"" (paragraph @NUM4). In the end the problems the builders faced were too many, and unfixable, so the docking of dirigibles in the Empire State Building was no more.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11871,5,The mood created by the author showed me to be happy with what I have and to be grateful for what I am givin. I learned this from all the moods the author expressed in his memoir of his life. As I state this is the mood the author expressed.           abd,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15827,6,"Although there were great hopes for the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, many obstacles were faced while trying to reach this dream. One obstacle noticed while designing the mast to dock on, was that the height and weight of a dirigible would greatly add stress to the building's frame. This would then be transmitted to the building's foundation as well. This clearly possessed a problem bigger than the Empire State Building could withstand. Another reason that builders faced an obstruction in the hopes of allowing dirigibles to dock was safety reasons. One of the most apparent problems, was that most dirigibles outside of the @LOCATION2 were fueled by hydrogen gas, opposed to helium gas. This posed a threat, for hydrogen is highly flammable. Putting a densely populated area such as downtown New York at risk consequently came as an obstacle for builders. The nature itself came as one of the last problems for such a dream. Winds that were constantly shifting due to extreme air currents, at the top of the building could easily cause the back of the dirigible to spin around the mooring mast. Again putting thousands of people below the building, was neither practical nor safe."" As quoted by the passage, ""the mooring mast of the Empire State Building was never destined to fulfill its purpose..."", clearly posing many obstacles in allowing to dock dirigibles on such a building.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20727,8," Laugher Laughter is to express delight, fun, or a object of a joke. Laughter is something we all do, its a large benefit in our life and it happend on a everyday scedual. Without laughter we couldn't express our happy, out going side, we would have no particullar feeling in life except for frowning, which is a proven fact to cose more wrinkles beacuse of how many more muscles it uses.  For me laughter is a all day thing, @CAPS1 show, my friends, family and, horses are my number one reason for my frown to be tured up side down. You @MONTH1 think horses cant smile, or talk but @CAPS2 do have their own ways of showing a personality that will make you laugh. Shere @CAPS2 are all smart, but @CAPS2 can be clutsy or goofy at times. Mostly @CAPS2 all just make you laugh and giggle like your own little brothers or sisters.  There is this one time that I will always have locked away in the back of my mind. It took place on a @DATE1 mid-day at the beach on the @ORGANIZATION1. I was with my friend and we both had our two horses saddled, ready to go. Both us and our horses felt the energy rush when we saw the waves pouning at the shore with the salty smell in our noses.  Once we hit the sand we were running side by side with the wind wistling past our ears like a moving train. The horses heads were equaly pointed towards the ocean. When we got to the water, the horses pranced and danced arounds like yearlings again, @CAPS2 would walk tell into the water tell it was drenching us both then soon as the next wave would come rushing up, we'ed swerve around and try to beat the wave to the shore.   After about five hours of adventuring caves, sand dunes and starfish we were all worn out, then decided to call it a day. It was around dinner time, so we eat dinner while watching the sun go down to finsih the perfuct day at the beach. We put the horses back in the trailer, and before I shut the trailer door I gave my horse a good pat on his neck, as I was about to walk out my horse tured his head, then gave my a nudge like he was saying ""thanks for the good time"". Driving home I knew this was a perfuct day because of the laughter, and of all the times I just laughed for the injoyment, also my face did hurt a little from smiling so much.",16,15,,31,,,,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7161,3," The features of the setting affect the cyclist because they doubt or lessen his chances for survival, but the cyclist is determined so he survives.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13150,5,"The author of the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, talks a lot about home and how you can find family were your not expecting too.He sets the mood in the memoir, that portrays love, warmth, and happyness. The overall mood of the memoir is loveing. Like how Narciso says in paragraph @NUM1, ""And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about love.""When Narciso was growing up he learned that ""... Family had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" All the cultures in his neighborhood came together in unity and Friendship. So Narciso Rodriguez wants to create a warm, loving, @CAPS1 mood to his memoir, just like he experienced growing up!",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15939,6,work face many problems with building docks for dirigibles to land on docks attched to the Empire State building. In paragraph @NUM1 it states that dirigibles disappeared and did become the transportation of the future. The Empire State building Never got to forfill its purposes for dirigibles.,1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18045,7,"Here is a story, about patience, in my own way called @CAPS1’s @CAPS2 @CAPS3.  “@CAPS4, hurry up and find my shoes ??????  And I do not want to be late for school again”. I hollered at my @CAPS4 “@CAPS1”, @CAPS4 said in a hustled voice, you asked me a second ago, it doesn’t take a second to find some lost shoes, you just have to be patient.” “I know, I know, I sighed but I still don’t want to be late” “I know but remember, being patient will get you far.” “@CAPS6” I agreed. So that @CAPS3 at school @CAPS1 remembered her moms words and was very patient all @CAPS3. She didn’t whine with her friends about the bus being so slow to get to school, she didn’t cut her friends in the lunch line to get her food faster. At gym, she didn’t grab the volleyball when someone had it the their shoe so she wouldn’t be boared instead she stood there. During the end of the @CAPS3 @LOCATION1 friends started acting like her too. Their teacher noticed how very patient they were when they raised their hand instead of blabbing out the answer. At the end of that class period they all got some candy. The other students noticed and wondered how they could get candy. Then in @LOCATION1 next class she could feel everyones eyes on her but she knew it was for a good reason. Every one learned to raise their hands and not push when they  left the classroom. Prity soon every one started getting candy and the teachers were so happy! When I got home that @CAPS3 I huged my @CAPS4 so hard then I told her what happened at school. I then learned to be patient from then on.",11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18241,7,"Someone l know that is patient is my mom. My mom is one of the most patient people l know. Especially on this certain day. Every once and a while my brothers and sister and l are just kind of hard to handle. We where on our way to church when my brother and l started arguing and fighting, for no particular reason, we always bicker and bother each other. My littlest brothe and my sister where frequently screaming and shouting at one another for dumb reasons like he stuck his tongue out at me… she pinched me. Then we finally got to church l guess my mom figure it would stop once we got there, but no my three year old brother @PERSON1 repeatedly ran around and threw the church. My oldest brother kept on calling my sister names and l kept talking with my friends. I know l would not be nearly that patient with anyone. So that is why l think my mom is so patient. After church that afternoon all she told us to do was behave, and after we realized how patient she was we just figured on our own that we should listen to her and behave.",8,12,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15025,6,When building a structer as big as the Empire state building and even having it dock a Dirigible to the top of it means there will be challenges to face. In order for It dock. The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation. The building would have to be @CAPS1. All these problems must be taken into consideration. This would mean spending more money,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14859,6,"The idea of mooring dirigibles to the top of the building that stood 1,250 feet above the streets of downtown New York was a facinating and amazing idea. An idea that would bring New York into a whole ""age of transportation"" (@NUM1). Unfortunately this wonderful idea had a few holes in the plans. Later the architects that were building the mooring mast had discovered that their idea was not going to be fulfill. The idea had too many obstacles to overcome. The fact that ""most dirigibles outside the U. S used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (@NUM2). If anything was to go wrong, it would be catostrophic seeing as how below them were highly populated streets. Also, ""the greatest obstacle was nature itself"" (@NUM3). There was just too much wind to keep the aircraft steady and undercontrol. The reality of the fact was that the idea to moor derigibles sounded great but there are far too many risks to carry out the plan.",2,4,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6434,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead; Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the setting of the story majorly affected the cyclist. The story tells us “…I was travelling through the high deserts of California  in June.” The extreme heat of the summer definitely put a  strain on the cyclist causing him to have to drink lots of water . Unfortonatly the  “towns” were very far apart and many not having good water making dehydration  problem. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or a structure of any kind.” @CAPS1 of this would have happened had he been cycling at a marathon with people handing him water when requested, or if he had been smart enough to follow a good map.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9749,4,"ThE author concludEs the story with this paragraph bEcausE mEans that whEn thE shovEl grow again in the spring, whEn thE snow mElts and the gEEsE rEturn and this hibiscus is budding shE will takE thE tEst again. So shE will wait until thE nExt spring to takE thE tEst..",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6083,3,The setting is like a desert with no water or people civilizations anywhere around him. This make him more worried because if he dies know one will know for days or weeks probably.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19500,7,A time when my @CAPS1 was patient is to day last week an yesterday. My @CAPS1 was so patient to daycas I was late for school and it was qetider lay man about toture but he was stoping so @CAPS1 was pashent to wat and not going front of him or blow the lowt eratatent horn an him the next time my @CAPS1 was patient is when I was in a basket ballgame my @CAPS1 was sout side waiting on me and we wanting over time so she just wated tell I come out the bulding. The last time my @CAPS1 was patient is when we was in subway I ordert a could cut and it took about one ment tell I got my food I was so hungry I could not fell my tomey. So in cunlshon a time when my @CAPS1 was patient.,5,4,,9,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10502,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because the authore is trying to show the reader that she realized cares about the nature and loves It so because she is waiting for the spring and as soon as the spring comes she will take the test again. So in my opinion the author wants to show the readers that the character in story cares a lot about the natures baety.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4222,2,"Katherine Paterson once said, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' I disagree with Katherine Paterson's statement because there is a @CAPS1 to @CAPS2 and the @CAPS1 to Write. The author obviously had a purpose to write the novel, compose the music, or to deliver the movie. There will always be items that will be offensive to some people, but to others there is a meaning behind it.     The @CAPS1 of @CAPS5 gives everyone the right to speak what is on their mind. That @CAPS1 allows them to publish whatever they have to say in a novel, a piece of music, or in a movie. Sure there @MONTH1 be some parts that @MONTH1 be inappropriate somewhere in a novel, piece of music, or a movie, but that doesn't mean the whole item will be inappropriate. Some people might think some things can be offensive while others don't at all. There maybe somethings out there in this world that you @MONTH1 think are offensive, but have you stood up and told that company yourself?      Being able to put down anything on paper that you want everyone to know about is the @CAPS1 to write. With that you can't be told not to do so. For example, the '@CAPS6' magazine maybe offensive to an abundent number of parents who don't want their kids to look at it, but that magazine isn't intended for children to look at. That magazine's purpose is to show adults what is all out there to buy to make their appearance sexy. It's not to be offensive to anyone and that company has the @CAPS1 of write to publish such a thing. The @CAPS1 to write serves its own purpose to all of the writers, composers, directors, and anyone who wants to write in a journal or to write a note.      I bet there has been a novel, a piece of music, or a movie that you just love. Well within it there most likely was a piece of information that was inappropriate, but would you like to see that taken off of the shelf? For example, I once read a series when I was in middle school that had inappropriate content about sexual interaction, but that series is what every girl wanted to read. If they would have taken them off the shelf because they were not appropriate then I know plenty more novels that would be gone as well.         What would you say if there was nothing left on the shelves to read, listen to, or to watch? Without items such as books we could have a hard time learning new stuff all the time. These are the items that teach us new things everyday. Would you be able to enjoy your life without being able to read, watching movies or @CAPS7 shows, or listening to music? It would be a very hard thing to get used to in today's society. We rely on such things @NUM1 to get us through the day and teach us things we were never taught.     Disagreeing with the quote that Katherine Paterson stated is one way to use @CAPS1 of @CAPS5 by stating my view of removing inappropriate items off of shelves. Removing items of the shelves won't solve the proplem of having too much inappropriate usage in today's society. If everything that had some kind of inapporpriate content in it removed from shelves, we would have a hard time finding a novel to read, music to listen to, a magazine to enjoy, and a movie or @CAPS7 show to watch. Lots of schools rely of books to read and without a book childrens vocabulary could have a great downfall.  Think about it...what would you be able to do in your free time if we had no more books, movies, magazines, or music",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16187,6,"The main obstical was to be the tallest building in the world. That all changed to being able to have a mooring mast so blimps can land on it to drop-off/pick up passengers and refule. They had ""@NUM1 thousand dollars"" in renovations to sturdy the structure of the tower. they couldnt make the foundations sturdy enough to hold the weight of an @NUM2 foot ship + cargo.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16149,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles and attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first issue faced was that ""most of dirigibles outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This was an issue because if the dirigible would catch fire or explode over it highly populated city like New York, many people would be put at risk of being injured or killed. The second issue the builders had to face was that ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" These winds would cause the airship to swivel, even when tethered to the mooring mast, making it impossible to board. This would also be dangerous for anyone aboard the airship. The third issue was that there ""... was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" With New York City certainly being an urban area this law made it impossible for airships to even approach the Empire State Building to moor. Overall, there were many obstacles faced by builders in trying to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building. Due to these reasons, the Empire State Building was never an effective place for dirigibles to dock.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13587,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is to show gratefulness towards the author's parents. He wanted to portray the fact that his parents sacrifice their lives for the author's life.Narciso repeatedly conveys the message that ""family had nothing to do with being a blood relative"", but people who care for one another; people who ""come together in great solidarity and friendship"".The most important family to Narciso are his parents who sacrifice their lives, in order ""to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved"". He says that he will always be grateful to his parents. He admits ""that what they did was a much more courageous thing than ""he"" could have ever done"". Narciso infact, cannot thank his parents enough for showing them how important family and friends are.In the end, @PERSON1 realizes that a home is a place you live, and celebrate birthdays, and do work, but mainly a place where everyone is welcome and a home is a family in itself.",4,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4442,2,"A few months ago I was at the local library searching for the perfect book. After an hour of searching I decided on one. I was happy with my choice as I checked it out. As I anxiously started reading my book, I found language, drug abuse, and sexual content. As a teenager, I do not want or need to be exposed to any innapropriate material. No one should be exposed to that, and because of that experiance, I believe that censorship in libraries is a must.     Due to sexual content, drug abuse, and vulgar language, one must be seventeen to purchase a ticket for a rated-@CAPS1 movie. I believe that since that is true for movies, it should also be true for books, magazines, and music. @CAPS2 literature is not necessary and innapropriate for any age. The world exposes certain literature to children, and then is shocked when they see children in jails, gangs, and other horrible situations.     The world has set their standards too low, and the children of todays society are following after our footsteps. Author, Katherine Paterson once said,     '...if I have a right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right so does everyone else.' @CAPS2 quote shows the impact that people have on generations to come.     Everyone has their own opinion and @CAPS2 is mine. As a daily newspaper reader, I could not quiet my voice any longer. I had to step-up and say something. I am apart of a generation that is being affected greatly by the world in a negative way. The first step to changing that is to set the standards high. Protect the future generations and censor what children are allowed to be exposed to. Situations will become better when libraries choose to censor and remove offensive materials from shelves. If libraries censor materials, then next time I wnat to find the perfect book, I will.",4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4574,2,"Where it @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3     @CAPS4 up noone wanted to read, it's to hard or I don't want to. The best way to get out of reading was reading a magazine. Sure, it's educational but it also can demoralize some people's thoughts and feelings. One way to get rid of this problem is censorship, or taking a specific book out of the hands of the public.     We all have poked fun at people, whether it is to hurt them or just give them a hard time, it can hurt people. Same way with the media. Books, magazines, @LOCATION1, and the internet all are competing for the success and money of its viewers, and the best wat to do that is to appeal to the audience. Give them what they want. For some reason everyone wants to demoralize people, and that is where I think it @CAPS1 the @CAPS3. Stand up for your rights and censor out those things that will lead to worse lives of those to come.     Censorship @MONTH1 just be a big word to most people, but it carries a big problem. For me, it @CAPS1 the @CAPS3 whenever racism is a problem or else vulgarity is an obscene message. The music we listen to can get really intense. I'm a victim of the harsh music that we play more and more of today. Atleast the radio is trying to do better at this whenever they 'bleep' out the curse words or else persuade the artist to make clean lyrics that they play on air. That is where places are trying to clean things up. Make tomorrow be a better place than today.     With all of these new @CAPS5 (Music @CAPS6) shows and other reality sitcoms making air on @CAPS6, it has opened the door to crudeness all over. They try to do a better job of cleaning it up in the sense of picture, censoring out body parts and on the worldwide coverage stations their mouths. Other stations like @CAPS5 don't do anything about the voices and the vulgarity people are showing and feeling towards each other.     Books are another thing that could use some censorship. @CAPS2 teacher used to tell me, '@CAPS8, if you can't read it out loud to me, then you shouldn't probably be reading it.' and I agree. With the technology and all the other things, children are more vulnerable to these harsh words and actions. Thus, leading towards a society who can't trust anyone and easily turns to vulgarity when need be.     With the world today, it is quiet easy to listen to the uncensored version that is shed from the radio. One person tries to make tomorrow a better place but the next tries to demoralize it. It's one thing if your angry and upset and are standing up for your rights but it's not whenever you do it for the fun of it. That is where it @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3295,2,"Should certain materials such as books, magazines, movies, etc., be taken off the shelf in a library if those items @MONTH1 be offensive towards others? There are many possible answers to this question, but I believe that if someone does not like a certain book or finds it offensive they should not have the right to take it off the shelf.     I believe that him/her should not be able to take it off the shelf because if that person finds it offensive, there are others who would not find it offensive. For example, @PERSON1 might want to read a book about abortion, but @CAPS1 is against and offended by that book or subject. If that book is taken off the shelf, it is restricting other people, such as @PERSON1, who would like to learn or read about that specific subject.      Another reason why I think that certain books, magazines, music, or movies should not be taken off the shelf is because if one book is offensive to some people, then another book @MONTH1 be offensive to others as well. So, if there are people who find some books offensive, and are then taken away; there will be a little amount of books for the other students to read.     Even though certain books @MONTH1 offend people, I think the book or magazine should not be removed from the library or shelf. I believe that if someone does not like a certain book, magazine, movie, music, ect., that person should not have the right for that book or any other material to be taken away. They should not be taken away because other people might want to read that book, and secondly, that would leave a lot less books for other people to read and learn information about.",3,4,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10178,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she was saying that if it is possible for these things to happen then she should be able to take the test and pass it. She was comparing things together that she knew that do noot go together. For example she said that in spring when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding then she would take the test over. She meant that if the thing she likes the most overcomes its obstacle then she would do what hurted her the most over again. She doesn’t know if she takes the test over she would keep trying over and over until she passes it. In the story she doesn’t know to fit in. All she knows is what she learned in her country . All she have to do is try harder and she maybe will be able to pass his test .,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15001,6,"Ambitious for its time, the idea of allowing dirigibles to dock at the top of the Empire State Building was doomed from the start.  The engineers and builders of the mooring mast were faced with many obstacles that could potentially inhibit safe docking at the top of the building. The first major obstacle was finding a way to tether the dirigible to the dock. As described in paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held on by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame.""  Modifications would have to be made to the entire building.  Another obstacle the engineers were faced with was stabilizing the dirigible once it was tethered to the building.  As described in paragraph @NUM2, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" This would make it nearly impossible for passengers and crew to get on or off the dirigible.  These obstacles, baffled engineers and builders of the Empire State Building until the project was abandoned entirely.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1248,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think that computers have a positive effect on people. You can do lots of stuff with computers such as help people learn new things almost about everything. Also, there are some programs on the computer where they allow you to talk to other people. Also, for adults, they can take care of some finances and bills online and some taxes. I think computers definitely have a positive effect on people. A lot of people use their computers to learn new stuff about other things and people. Nine out of ten people go on the computer at least more than once a month to learn about something new. Also, kids in school use computers all the time for school work and to learn about new things. Kids in school use computers in school all the time for projects and experiments and they learn new stuff about people and things in the world. Computers definitely have a positive effect on people when they learn new things. Another great things about computers is that there are programs that allow you to talk to other people. Eight out of ten people talk to another person almost every day on the computer. This is a good thing because they’re able to talk to friends and family from a long distance and enjoy themselves. It is also a good thing because if family moves away you can still talk to them from a computer. Another positive effect computers have for you is that adults can pay bills and finances on the computer also. Seven out of ten adults pay bills online at their computer. This is a good thing because adults have to do it by hand, now they can just do it on the computer, which is definitely a positive effect on a person! I think computers definitely have a positive affect on people in many ways. They help people learn new stuff about things and. Also, they allow you to talk to friends and family over the internet. And finally, they allow you to do finances and pay the bills online instead of by hand. There are many ways still computers have a positive affect on people, I’ve only stated just a few of them. I hope you take my side about my opinion about computers and that they definitely have a positive affect on people.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13020,5,"The mood that the author created in this memoir was love and gratefullness. The author is trying to get their message across about how much a family is bonded together and how much there is to be thankful for. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows how much love the author has to be grateful for. He is also trying to say that there is no way to express his emotions and love to his parents. ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" The authors main point is to thank their parents for everything they have done. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12926,5,"In the memoir there is more the one mood, but this is the main one. First, the author is trying to create a ""no place like home mood,"" and the author succeeds at it. It seems he/she is using memory and telling his/her background. The mood was also very calm and very relaxing for the story. In conclusion this is the mood the author is giving.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16456,6,"In the process of building the empire state building the architects had many obstacles. One main obstacle was making the foundation strong enough. Another was the wind factor. They had many problems in the building of the Empire state building.In order for the dirigibles to dock on the Empire state Building they had to streghten, the whale foundation. If a dirigible docked before the whale building would twist and sway. Another problem was the wind. the wind coming off of other building would spin the dirigibles at high rates of speed.Even though they faced many obstacles they successfully completed the Empire State Building",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18475,7,"One time when I was patient was when we flew in the @LOCATION2 to visit my sister at the I asked school. We flew to @LOCATION4 well and the to @ORGANIZATION1 but after that it was down hill. When we got to @LOCATION3 we were stuck there for four hours! after an hour I got bored with my little brother with us didn’t help at all. Then over the intereem we hear that we have to go through security now and sit in a room with a gift shop ??? all for @NUM1 hurs. When there was an hour left there was another announcement and it was that we will be delayed three more hours, after that I was listening to my ipod and luckily fell asleep for three and a half hours. When we finally get to leave we walk up to six seater phase for us to fly to a small island near by. When we got to @LOCATION1 we hurry to the island school to see my sister. That was one time when I felt patient waiting in an airport for @NUM2 hours.",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4252,2,"Hiding @CAPS1?                                                  By: @PERSON1 to the harsh world we all live in, I do not believe it is morally correct for a program, of any kind, to hide the hard reality of our world from any person.      @CAPS1 will be @CAPS1 and one shouldn't ever hide what is true from the eyes of another person's mind. If one person makes the choice to close his eyes and go into a fantasy world then that is one person's right as a human being. However, one man has no right- whats so ever- to close the eyes of another person for them.     Personally, I myself am not afraid to look into the history of man's choices and take upon myself the burden of the harsh knowledge that I have inherited. I look at the human race of this planet to be whole and to be one with another. This planet doesn't belong to one race, nation or culture of people; it belongs to every single person equally. I made the decision to take on the resonsibility to know the past and use it's lessons to better the future. This world belongs to me as equally as it belongs to you; so my decisions will affect you as much as they affect me. That being stated, every person's decisions impact everyone, not just one's self.     People think that we should hide things that are 'offensive' to other people. Racism, world political issues, casualties of war and personal ethics- are some of these 'offensive' things. However, offensive or not, these subjects are very real and very much alive in our world; So why should anyone have the right to try to make these subjects dissappear for another person?      In @LOCATION1, everyone has the right to freedom of speech and expression, but how can these freedoms be carried through if people remove these expressed ideas and beliefs from the shelves of the readers? We all have a right to make the decisions that affect our world and if this world is equally owned by everyone, then everyone's decisions are equally burdened by everyone. That being said, we all have the right to know the decisions, actions, and the concequencies of these decisions and actions that our people all create every single day.     In conclusion, I believe that our world is harsh and also beautiful. Being that of which it is, I believe it is every man's right to live and decide the way he wants to. No man should ever make another person's decisions for them. Everyone is resonsible for their own life and how their life affects other people. However, no one has responsibility to hide or change the world around us from any person, for it is the knowledge of the people that make the world what it is and it is the knowledge of the world that influences a person's decisions",4,5,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9477,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he/she is trying to put across the message that the plant shows a symbol of new beginings which is a symbol of saeng’s vowe. Also in the story caring for the plant teaches saeng responsablity in obtaining her license by care for the plant it will teach her patients and that she needs to learn from mistakes made.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9692,4,The authoR concludes the stoRy with that sentence b/c she wanted to explain to you that she will do this again when the hibiscus is back in season.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18051,7,"You being patient is important. People should always be patient &not rush anything. All you have to do is take your time & wait. People need to understand that it you are not patient then particular things want happen to you. If you ever wanted something, then you have to be patient. One day at @ORGANIZATION1, my cousin, shayna was not being patient because she wanted on get on the dance box. But, she could`nt because a lil girl named @ORGANIZATION2, was on the dance box & shayna was not happy. And you know us girls when you we get our attitudes. Shayna got mad & started to cry & roll her eyes at @ORGANIZATION2. @CAPS1 she now up to me & said, “she want let me get on,” @CAPS1 I said, “@PERSON1`@CAPS2 , you have to be patient & wait your turn because she was on it first & that would be rude and unfair to make her get off.” @CAPS1 @PERSON1`@CAPS2 apologized & they both took turns on the dance box. But last, @PERSON1`@CAPS2 was happy & she learned her lesson.",10,8,,18,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11830,5,The mood created by the author is showing how cuban's lived and about Their cultra and how they lived and some people from other cultra's could be diffrent and don't @CAPS1 cared about their cultra's and some people do care about their cultra like narciso parents. that is what the author is trying to say. and that some people should respect their cultra and not @CAPS2 To be a different cultra.,1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15264,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"", by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock their. First, the expectations of the project were unrealistic because there ""was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" @CAPS1 even if they found a safe way to land dirigibles they would be breaking the law. Second, there were ""violent air currents."" When they tried to dock the dirigible on the building, it could not get close enough to it to land because of the wind. Lastly, it was a huge safety hazard. Most dirigibles ""used hydrogen rather than helium,"" and hydrogen is very Flammable. In a densely populated area. ""the owners of the Empire State Building realized how [bad an] accident could have been. As a result, dirigibles never fulfilled the expectations of the transportation of the future and they did not dock on the Empire State Building.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3486,2,I believe that in libraries certain materials should not be removed from the shelves even if it is offensive because if someone does not like that particular item they could always go and get another item. I have been to a library and nothing at all was offensive to me or anyone else. If you dont like that the library displays all the 'OFFENSIVE' items then you dont have to go it is an personal choice. Everyone has their own choice on what they listion to or read it doesnt matter as long as that particular person likes that sort of thing. That is what I believe in,1,1,,1,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13088,5,The mood of the author changed during the memoir because in the beginning of the story he had mood of just telling where the character was from and where he was born. On paragraph @NUM1 he has a ill do what it takes mood. For example he was grateful about his parents and his life he was okay on how things were and he loved it. On paragraph @NUM2 and seven the author feels relieved and happy because he writes about the character remembering the good old times.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21377,8," When I was young me and my friends would play at @CAPS1 @CAPS2. @CAPS1 @CAPS2 was a @CAPS2 in the middle of a orchard, there was a slide, diving bored, and two rope swings. All @DATE1 long we would sit, play, swim, and laugh down at the @CAPS2. We would have are @CAPS4 day party, and calibrate the @CAPS5 of @DATE2 down at the @CAPS2. There is one day I can remember so well that its like it was yesterday. The last day of school had just ended, my friends and I got on the bus as fast as we could. When the bus stopped at the @CAPS2 we all started running and striping down to are swim trunks. I was the first one in, as a result I was the first one to relies the water was as cold as the river, it felt like a thousand little nettles stabbing me over and over again. My friends described me as a bouncy ball because I got out as fast as I got in. As soon as my friends saw my blue lips the all started laughing so hard that some of them fell in to the freezing water themselves. After that we walked you to @CAPS1 house and asked him to turn on the generator, after about an hour the lake was warm enough to swim in. After a we all had swam around for a bit we decided to go of the rope swing. After a while we started doing back flips, when we stopped are backs and chests were as red as the apples in the orchard, and are throats hurt from laughter. As well as being sore from hitting the water over and over again, we were also hungry so we fired up the grill and started making burgers. When the first and second batches resembled a mound of coal, we decided to order pizza. We spent the time by air soft, when the pizza arrived the lake had thousands of air soft @CAPS7's floating in it. As we ate we sat on the small dock and stuck are legs in and collected what ever @CAPS7's came near. Soon after eating we started playing hide and seek in the orchard. After ten or so rounds we were all scraped up by running throw the trees, so of course we pored soda on are cuts, to this day I still wonder why we did that because it really hurt. Once we were done being stupid we laughed at are self's, then we laughed at each other. It wasn't long before we played swimming base ball, the bases were the corners of the docks and the pitcher was on the floating plat form. we used floating balls and swam from base to base. Eventually the sun started to set and we made a fire by the side of the @CAPS2 and roasted marshmallows over it. When are @CAPS9 came to get us we were in the middle of a belly-flop contest. Before we left we promised that we would never forget that day, and that we would be friends forever and laughter would always be the glue. That night I stayed up all night thinking of all the fun and all the laughs we had that day, it was definitely the start of one of the best and one of the most memorable summers of my life.",16,18,,34,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6927,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. For example, the story said,""I gathered up a few pebbles and stock them in my mouth"" This quote explains that the setting was very and had pebbles. The setting benefiting him by taking the thrist off his mind. If their wasn't any pebbles by the cyclist he @MONTH1 not have made it. In cocnlusion in the story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit the cyclist was benefited by the features of the setting.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9513,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph, “When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, When the snows melt ant the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again,” because it shows That Saeng isn’t going to stay down. It shows That The hibiscus will overcome winter, like Saeng’s mother says,“'…but its strong enough to make it Through the cold months here, This winter hibiscus That’s what matters.” This symbolizes Saeng overcoming not only failing The driver’s test, but also moving to @LOCATION1. She isn’t The same as she was back home, but she’s strong enough to get Through This change in her life. Also, taking The test in the spring symbolizes starting over, when everyThing is new, and she has overcome her winter. This ending paragraph is so important because it shows Saeng’s promise to herself That she will get past The challenges in front of her, and @CAPS1 to come. When Saeng says “...When the snows melt...” it symbolizes The time in her life when her failures will become good again. She will take The test with a new out look on her life. The author concludes The story with This paragraph because it shows That Saeng isn’t going to stay down.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7697,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist. It seems to be the more despirate the situation the more determand her becomes. Pg @NUM1 (I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean). Right after he thinks this he climbed away for the abandoned factory of Juices and dreams. He says pg @NUM1 come troubles, thirst and tean where all behind me, this shows that after a situation the bilaver tells realeoved of all earthley obligations. Not only does the settings affect the cyclist but the entire story around him.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6646,3,"Joe Kurmaskie had a rough time trying to get to Yosemite National park. First, he received directions from an old man, Joe followed these instructions; little did he know that he would be headed for many hardships. After he reached the first town he checked his supply. About @NUM1 more miles he reliced his bottle was getting low because he was travelling through the high deserts of California. It is hot cool out there,then the terrain changed. He no longer had that much water. He ran into a snake, which he swore was a alamond back. Finally, he came to another town, got some water and then left after going through ghost towns. Riding in conditions that are hot and unfamiliar are hard to do. Adding hills to heat is not a good combination, with nothing around val it can be very dangerais, even fatal. Before you bike thinkof what conditions are ahead of you",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12371,5,"The mood the author gives about the memoir is is at one point happy and exiting, another very tough and full of struggle, and last a mood of humbleness.One mood the author gives is a happy one. In paragraph @NUM1 it states ""Passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen. This is a happy mood because musics playing and smell of foods in the airAnother mood is a tough and struggle mood. In paragraph @NUM2 it states ""They struggled bothe personally and financially, buring the harsh winters while yearning for there native tropics facing cultural hardships. This relates to the quote because it states they struggled.The last mood is a humble one. Its humble because in paragraph @NUM3 it states ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just music but life and love. They relate because of the humbleness of the quoteIn conclusion the author gives several different moods about the memoir.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7113,3,"The cyclist in the story rough road ahead Do not exeed posted speed limit, by Joe kurmashie, is heavily affected by the features of the setting in the story. First is the ‘shorecay’ that is suggested to get    to @CAPS1, which naturally just ends up separating him from all other people and putting him in the middle of nowhere with a limited supply of water. His water shortage is the second thing that affects him because it makes him despair and feel that he is about to collapse and die. In the story, he says: ‘It really didn’t matter. I was going to die and the lards would pick me clean.’ This shows that the features at the setting made him feel hopeless.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15523,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2. The builders of the Empire State Building faced certain obstacles in attempting to prohibit dirigibles to dock. The three main obstacles the builders faced were their concern was safety, nature itself, and the existing laws of airships. Safety is a major factor when constructing. The builders had the chance of using hydrogen rather than helium. Risking the fact of how highly flammable hydrogen is. Later realizing how bad it could of been if what happened to the German dirigible ""Hindenburg"" on May 6, 1937. Could of happened to them taking place above a ""densely populated"" area like New York City. Nature itself was also an obstacle, because the winds on top were shifting constantly. This could potentially cause the back of the dirigible to ""swivel"" around, aswell around the mooring mast. The final obatoce was that of the ""existing laws against aircrafts flying too low over urban areas."" They feared that the winds would blow the dirigibles into sharp spires of other structures, and puncture the dirigible's shell. In two failed attemps they desided to cancel the construction of the ""Mooring Mast"" due to ""the unsolved problems of mooring airships to a fixed mast at such a height that made it desirable to postpone to a later date the final installation of the landing gear.""",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9711,4,"The author concludes the story this way to show Saeng does not give up and is determined to pass the test. The narration says “Not like the kind we had @NUM1]. Saeng feels very strongly about her old home and wants hibiscus just like her and her grandmother used to have. Because Saeng would not bring back the same kind of hibiscus, she is sad and determined to get another one. The text also states, “… and the hibiscus is budding then I will take the test @NUM2]. This also shows she is determined because even though she failed the test once she is going it to try again. She misses her home and wants hibiscus just like she had at her old home. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16291,6,The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. One problem was the @CAPS1 had to fix the frame of the building in order to transmit the stress of the dirigible to the bottom of the building. Another obstacle the @CAPS1 faced was the @CAPS1 had to complete the roof before the framing of the mooring mast could take place. The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building also had to make sure that the mast's skeleton was made out of steel so that the mast looked like the rest of the empire State building and not stick out.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21330,8," Being on a team doesn't always mean that everyone is the best of friends; most of the time the case is that you really don't get along with the people on your team. That was the case for the @ORGANIZATION2 (@CAPS1 @CAPS2 of @LOCATION4) @CAPS3 that I'm a member of. Everything changed after our trip to @LOCATION1, @LOCATION1 for @ORGANIZATION2. It was late, twelve members of the @ORGANIZATION3 @CAPS3 were shuffling into the @LOCATION2 to check-in. Everyone was in their group of friends talking and anxiously waiting to leave @ORGANIZATION4 for our eight day trip. Each group of people didn't always get along with the people in the other groups (even though we were a team) other people got along with everyone they just had their own close friends that they stuck with. Emotions were at a wide variety that night between the tension of conflict between people, nervousness, and excitement. When our plane had finally landed in @LOCATION1 everyone was completely drained of energy, but once again everyone split up into their own groups and we moved through the @LOCATION1. @CAPS5 we walked through the @LOCATION2 to the luggage claim I began to wonder, "" @CAPS4 is it that we are all together and a team, but we separate ourselves to different groups amongst our team and everyone notices, but it doesn't change?"" @CAPS5 I pondered the thought we headed out to the rental vehicles and loaded everything up and started the day. After the long day of flying and touring places around downtown @LOCATION1 we finally were at the hotel checking in. @CAPS5 we checked in everyone separated vastly with their groups of friends who they rooming with to check-in to their rooms. Later that evening a few us that were really close friends went outside to hang out by the campfires they had at the hotel we were staying at. @CAPS5 we sat there talking and laughing, having a great time there was a moment when we just sitting there quietly, and I proceeded to ask them about what I been thinking about back at the @LOCATION2. The response I got back from everyone was blank stares and a change of subject. The next morning came early, we went off to breakfast then left for the day to go do some touring. The first place we went to out of three place we were to be touring that day was the @ORGANIZATION1. At the @ORGANIZATION1 our @CAPS3 faced our first team building/bonding activity. The task we were to accomplish with one another was difficult at first for everyone, but we all slowly began having a fun time laughing and working to accomplish what we needed. After we had finished the activity everyone began to slowly mingle with people outside their normal group. Later that same day we had a second team building/bonding activity. After we finished that activity there was a sense of less tension between everyone, even less than from after the morning activity. The following day we had two more team building/bonding activities. Each time we had an activity everyone began to connect more and more and each time came more laughter. We also began to spend more @CAPS5 a whole @CAPS3 and got have an even better time of fun and laughter filled adventures. By the time we were all heading to the @LOCATION2 to fly back to @LOCATION3 everyone was hanging out and there was no conflict. @CAPS5 the plane took off the realization of everything had came to me of @CAPS4 before there was so much conflict and everyone being split up into separate groups. I realized that we had always been on a ""business like"" relationship with one another we never gave the chance to laugh, have a good time, and connect and allow us to get to know each other. Once we took the time to allow all of those things we learned who everyone was and made friendships.",17,20,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13219,5,In the memoir the author created the mood of being happy and joyfull. One reason I feel this way is by the way he talks about what goes on in his home. Like when he talks about the hart of the home being the kitchen and how his parents passed on the skills and a love for cooking to him in paragraph @NUM1. Another reason I feel this way is the way he describes the types of friendships he has with is neighborhood. Like in paragraph @NUM2 he talks about how all of the different cultures come together and have great friendships with each other. As I read this it makes me think of all the fun and joyfull things that happened at my house and wonder what else will happen at my house in the future.,2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12897,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir. The mood that the author was happiness. When example of happiness was that his parents passed on their culinary skills and a love of cooking.  Another example of happiness was that aromas from the kitchen mixed with Cuban music filled the air. The last example was that he grateful for his parents sacrifice and love.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18631,7,"The clock is ticking down, waiting , ready, ready to burst into a ???. A never before been @CAPS1, the @NUM1 is planted at the white @ORGANIZATION1, patience is key because with this @CAPS1, anybody that attempts to defuse this @CAPS1 except form the last minute of the count down to certain destruction will detonate this explosive. The alpha @NUM2 @CAPS1 say is waiting, waiting for the right time. @NUM3 minutes left, @NUM4 minutes left, @NUM5 minutes left, @NUM6 minute. “@CAPS2, @CAPS2!” yelled , @PERSON1, the leader of the saved. This our only chance to save the white @ORGANIZATION1. Time is running out, @NUM7 seconds of pole preggrare  riding on our shoulders, the fate of the white @ORGANIZATION1 is in our hards. The enemgs are calling in fantry , just as all hone is lost , “I got it! I exclaimed . All that was left was to ??? and let the army do the work. We rushed to the van with our shields out and pummled through the defenses. Suddenly, we heard a strong noise and we noticed and charge on the bottom of the van, we ran for our life white our night eaupped van exploded to pieces right behind us. We lives patiently waiting for the patrol to walk by. We just need to cross the field to the army hetiepter and were home free. We sprint across the field and victory is ours. A sense of accomplishment and greatness rushes through me.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20985,8," The @CAPS1 @CAPS2     I was sitting in the living room with @CAPS3 family talking about how every @ORGANIZATION1 we always end up laughing. One @ORGANIZATION1 we were out at @CAPS3 great grandpas house, and we just got done opening our presents, and in the middle of the floor was a @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 cousin @ORGANIZATION2 thought @CAPS3 dad was inside the @CAPS2.   At first we tried to convince @ORGANIZATION2 that @CAPS3 dad was out side talking to @CAPS3 uncle. @ORGANIZATION2 didn't believe us, even though @CAPS3 dad was outside talking. @ORGANIZATION2 circled the @CAPS2, and observed the @CAPS2 and was convinced @CAPS3 dad was in it.  Then @ORGANIZATION2 started poking the @CAPS2. We were laughing because it was so cute that @ORGANIZATION2 thought @CAPS3 dad was in the @CAPS2. He kept saying ""I know he is in there."" @ORGANIZATION2 opened the @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 dad was not in there. @CAPS3 dad walked in to the house and asked why we were laughing. We told him the story and he started laughing too. Later on in the @TIME1 @ORGANIZATION2 was playing in the other room and wanted to show @CAPS3 dad the toy he was playing with. So @CAPS3 dad climbed in the @CAPS2 and we told @ORGANIZATION2 that @CAPS3 dad was outside. @ORGANIZATION2 went outside to look for him but @CAPS3 dad wasn't there.   When @ORGANIZATION2 came inside he looked in every room and could not find @CAPS3 dad. After a while @ORGANIZATION2 was standing by the @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 dad jumped out and scared @ORGANIZATION2. @ORGANIZATION2 screamed like a little girl and we all laughed really hard.   @ORGANIZATION2 was mad at first then he started laughing too. At the time @ORGANIZATION2 was only five so when @CAPS3 dad jumped out at him he got really scared. @ORGANIZATION2 thought it would be funny to scare @CAPS3 dad so @ORGANIZATION2 hid in the @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 dad came inside and we told @CAPS3 dad to look for @ORGANIZATION2. @CAPS3 dad called his name looked in every room and pretended like he couldn't find @ORGANIZATION2. @ORGANIZATION2 started laughing because @CAPS3 dad acted like he was going to sit on @ORGANIZATION2 and it made him laugh super hard. When @ORGANIZATION2 got out of the @CAPS2 he was like ""how did you know I was in the @CAPS2?"" @CAPS3 dad said ""well you started laughing silly goose.""   out of all the @ORGANIZATION1's i have had that @ORGANIZATION1 was the best @ORGANIZATION1 ever. That was the time laughter brought two people together.        ",18,18,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1134,1,"Dear sir, I belive that computers are great for society. There are lots of benefits to having a computer to use. You can talk to people online with instant message, it is a lot more dependable than a telephone or cell phones. Lots of time people don't answer thhe phone when you need them. With a computer you can send a message from the computer to the persons cellular device. You can lern a lot from a computer, suc as things about the world, people around the world, yo can lern things from the internet youre teacher can't even teach you. Then you can study and expand youre knolage. It is a problem if your on the computer more than you exersize but with techology today you can get exersize wile useing a computer. You can play music from it while you workout, of what moivie while running on a tredmill. Even though people go on the computer to much ways to exersize and use the computer at the same time. So there is ups and downs but in the end, it dosen't matter how much you use the computer, you can get exersize at the same time thats why I think it is a benifits to have computers today.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9717,4,"In many stories the narrator uses a dramatic yet conclusive statement to end the story. An example of one such occurrence is in the short story “Winter Hibiscus”. In the story the young girl finishes of by telling us when she will be taking her test again, although not directly to us as it says “Saeng vowed silently to herself” but it still informs the reader. The reason the author includes this last “vowe” is to inform not only the reader of the future but to show the girls determination and spiritual connection with the plant. For example, when it says “and this hibiscus is budding” its showing the girls connection with the plant because of the comfort and canfidence it given her, ecpecially since she needs to take the test. In conclusion the narrator concluded the story with the paragraph to show future events and to illustrate the spiritual connection the girl was with her the flower and the homeland.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
651,1,"@ORGANIZATION1, @DATE1, people have been doing less exercise and not enjoying the great outdoors. They're some people that are having less family and friends times. I say its computers!"" This machine is a great resource, but people are starting to get adicted to it. We need to reach a messgae to those people. Yesterday, I went to my local library and found @NUM1 computers in the library. All of the computers were filled with people and, a line with @NUM2 people ready to go on next. I ask those @NUM2 people ""why were they there?"" ""for homework"" said a teenager. Another, ""just to come and paly"". I also ask, ""how do they stay fit?"" ""I don't like @CAPS1 fit"" said beautiful lady. ""@CAPS1 fit isn't esay if your always on the computer"" said the teenager. The response I got from those people, were unbelievable. If we don't stay fit how are we going to survivie from all these dieases and cancer. This reason has pently to do witj not @CAPS1 fit. I don't know about you but I care about my family, I would never spend the rest of my life infront of a computer instead of my love ones. In the of , I was surprise to find out that projects, homework and research can take up half of your time, with your family. Do the computer, you can find some resort for you and your friends and fanily, you can't be doing for more than minutes. The great out doors should be one of the best places to be. because it quit, its amazing and its a large area. If you looking up the out doors on a computer, now thats a of time, that you could have been with a family member in the or where ever. My father says its great to buit its to live it. The days are getting shorter lets live it like.""",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9234,4,"When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, the hibiscus is budding. she will take the test. I think that the author conclude the story with this paragraph because she wants to test them again.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9674,4,"The author concludes the story with the paragraph about the geese because it shows how Saeng, like the geese, will adopt to her new environment. It shows that she will do what needs to be done in order to survive just like the geese have to do. She will take the test again and will not give up. The paragraph shows how she wants to adapt to the new country. For example, the narration states, “… she noticed the tearstains on her daughter’s cheeks and her puffy eyes”[No]. This example shows how Saeng is not used to being in the new country and that she does not like it. However, she will get used to it and do her best to do so, as shown in the closing paragraph. Also, the narration states, “…she admitted to herself, she much preferred it to a Big Mac”[Ho]. This proves how even though she @MONTH1 not like things at times, Saeng is willing to try them to get used to the new country. The narration states, “…she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become familiar to her now “[@NUM1].Saeng is getting more and more used to her surrounding and is adopting to them, just like the geese adapt, which is the reason the author ended the story with the paragraph about geese.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21453,8,"            Just One @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 A @CAPS4 @CAPS5 the @DATE1 of us, @PERSON2, @LOCATION1 and I, walk under the cover of the trees, we decided to stop by the lake, in our usual meeting place where we have a perfect view, to have a chat. @LOCATION1, who is six foot @DATE1, has long raven-black hair that just barely tickles his chin, deep blue eyes, and is extremely attractive, plopped down in the wet green grass. But @PERSON2, who is six foot, has short brown hair, dark ocher colored eyes, chose to stand about @DATE1 paces in front of us.  To any person strolling by, he would have looked @CAPS5 if he was just enjoying the amazing view of the crystal water, but to us, who knew him all too well, knew he was thinking about his brother, @PERSON1, who was in the hospital. @PERSON1 had been in the wrong place at the wrong time, got in the middle of a homeless persons fight, not to mention the guy was drunk, and got stabbed with a rusty switch-blade. @PERSON2 felt like it was his fault that this had happened, and this made him so depressed that he would not @CAPS1 at any of our idiocy, or even eat for that matter. @PERSON2's feeling that way made @LOCATION1 and I feel completely horrible and there was nothing we could do to cheer him up. @PERSON2 was usually the most exuberant out of all of us, and we did every single thing we could possibly so to make him feel better, or, at the very least, get him to @CAPS1 again. But not once could we budge him, or even get one little giggle out of his tightened jaw. Not one of our pathetic attempts even touched his eyes, but we never gave up, in fact, we tried for days on end to get him to smile again. We got to the point of desperation that we even dressed ourselves up @CAPS5 teletubies, went to @PERSON2's house, dragged him off of his couch, and took him downtown. Yet not one second of it did his mouth even twitch upwards.  Although we did some of the most outrageous, unimaginably embarrassing things we could possibly think of, and trust me, we though about it for days. We got absolutely no response what so ever out of him, except, of course, his enormous yawns.  Finally, about @DATE1, we got him to giggle, which eventually turned into a full on, body shaking @CAPS1. You will never guess what finally got him to crack. @CAPS6-@CAPS6 joke. Of all the horrendously obnoxious deeds we had done, cheesy, idiotic @CAPS6-@CAPS6 jokes are what got to him. Although @LOCATION1 and I felt like complete idiots, we could not help but @CAPS1 with him. After that day it was no longer a difficult process for him. @PERSON2 was almost, but not quite, back to his normal self. So our lives went on, and @PERSON1 got out of the hospital perfectly fine.",18,20,36.0,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6334,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist by letting the author have hope . When he came across a sign which read ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, his hope was faint because he was doing a water-depleting @NUM1 per hour. Because of the rate of the water, he felt life was cruel sometimes and he thought that he was at the point of losing water. Also when he came across the tumbleweeds and the large snake he tried to avoid them. If he would have been bitten he would have died. Finally because of the heat he might have also did from the heatsroke ""wide signs  of   dried""       ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18170,7,"It was @DATE1 when   my family and I went to cedar point. It was really exciting and fun. The trip was about three or six hours long. I went to sleep but when I wake up we was at burger king.  I ordered we a kids meal and it was good. so  as  we  got  back  in the  car I stayed up the  rest  of  the way there.  Then I start seeing water parks and hotels it was really nice. Then I seen this really tall roller coaster   I got really excited that I ran to the line, bed they were all long. I had a wait for @NUM1 minutes. When it was my tom in like  I was so  happy and  excited   that  when I got  my   stamp  I ran  to the @CAPS1-@CAPS2  in  door  roller  coaster. So I had to  wait  an hour  in line , so I got  really tired, but I kept mouing  forward, when I reached the  stairs  finally I got  on the  ride. I was binda scared at the sometime because it was dark. then  we  took off then it  got  off I was  dissy, but I went  on another  ride  and  got  disser. I got on this ride that rocks side to side. His is the time I was patient.",6,8,,14,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6530,3,"The setting of this story is very rigurous. At the begining of the story the boy was fine. He had a bottle of water with him so that he didn’t get dehydrated. When he was riding he started to feel the sun get higher into the sky, though he could barely feel. It because of the pines that caused the road, and the cool feel of the river. The cyclist got to the second town on his journey and he had been drinking his water all day and was about out. He had found a water pump. He got down on his knees and palled with his night hot all that came but was blackish water. He just feared the water and stated that it tasted like battery acid. He began to ride again. Not two miles up the road the terrain changed. Not only was it rolling hills, it was also getting hotter. He was majorly dehydrated because he was out of water except nor a few “tantalizing sips. Dry sweat circled his shirt and he was afraid he could froz up heatstrokes. Where he was at was in the middle of no where, with no buildings, cars or structures in sight. Over were of the hills he saw a building came in no view. He wiped the sweat off his eyes so makee sure it was not a malinge,” By the lols of it had been a Welch’s @CAPS1 @CAPS2 Factory.” He is a dehydrated and tired that he could see a “Young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice in his mouth.” There is only the problems it is abandoned. This person was imagining things. He got back on his bike and stuck pebbles into mouth. This was to help tabe his mind off being thirst.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1737,1,"I agree with the computers helping people. To start with, computers have a possitive affect on us. They also give us the ability to learn. Also it allows people to talk online from far away places. So, yes, computers are good for people. First of all, computers do have a possitive affect. The computer @MONTH1 give some one motivation. Or it will help someone find their lost pet. Also it could help you get a job. Plus you can find a safe home with it. So, ya computers do have a possitive effect. You can also gain the ability to learn. This is by helping deth people with sites on sighn language. Also you can get information on places you will visit. This will help learn about diffrent contrays. Most importantly it will help kids an adults on school work or work. This concluds that you can learn things on the computers. The computer also allows you to talk with people far away. This will come in handy for familys. Also people who have hospitilized family. Plus fathers or moms in the military can talk with their kids. Most of all though is adopted kids could talk to their birth parents online. Here is another reason why computers are good. This is why I agree with computers. They have a possitive affect on people. They given us ability to learn! Lastly it allows you to talk to people you love that are far away. So, in conclution, it is a benifit for people to use the computers!",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4523,2,"Libraries are filled with books, magazines, music, movies, and many more materials. All of the materials cover a really wide range of topics. For example, movies can be a comedy, mystery, or adventure. However, some of this material is not suitable for some viewers and can be very offensive to them. For this reason, these offensive materials should be removed from libraries.     One reason offensive material should be removed from libraries is because it can lead to violence in teenagers. If a teenager is continually reading books or watching movies that have violence in them, then they might think violent behavior is all right. They might not know that violence is not the answer to many problems, and they will not realize that there are other solutions to a problem.      One case that proves seeing offensive material can lead to violence occurred in a high school. A straight-A student got a grade she thought she did not deserve from a teacher. This student then painted her face white, put on red lipstick, and took a knife to the teacher's classroom during school. She then proceded to threaten to kill the teacher. She got the idea from the movie '@CAPS1', and her costume resembled the @CAPS2. Some students in the classroom at the time called @NUM1, and the police officers convinced the girl to put down the knife. Maybe if she had not seen the movie she would not have threatened to kill her teacher.     Another reason offensive material should be removed from libraries is because the material is sometimes inappropriate for younger children. The children might just be looking at books and magazines in the library and not even check it out. This way no one will know that they read it. Some of the books in libraries have subjects like sex and drugs in them. When the child reads this, he might want to do everything that is in the book. I have  read a book that contains sex and drugs. The book might put awful ideas into the child's head if he read it.     After all is said and done, offensive material should be removed from libraries. The material can lead to violent acts in people, even if it does not seem like that kind of behavior could possibly come out of that person. The material can also be inappropriate for younger children. All in all, material in libraries can be offensive to some people.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18292,7,"Two years ago my dad had surgery on his because he broke it at work .I had to sit in a waiting  room  for almost ten hours in a very uncomfortable wooden chair with nothing to do .Every two hours my mom ,grandma ,grandpa and I would walk out to the car to stretch .After about four hours I got really  tired ,but didn’t fall asleep .That was the longest I’ve sat in one place my entire life .At first it was hard to believe it was nine hours and a half it only seemed like two .",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11827,5,"In this memoir of Narciso Rodriguez, @PERSON3's life, the mood containing it all, was greatful, and showed how his parents gave him love through his whole life. Both his parents were born and raised in Cuba, and in 1956, they both moved to the United States. Starting their lives over again, and taking any job they could find. Then in 1961, @PERSON2, @CAPS1. was born. Both Parents raised him with love, and care, and introducing his Cuban background into his life.        As @PERSON2, was telling his story, all readers could tell how greatful he was to have a family like he did. Also, as he shared his non-– blood related family, and the remembrence on how his parents' life changed by moving to @LOCATION2, he showed the respect he had towards them.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16193,6,"During any type of construction, the builders face some type of obstacles, as do the builders of the Empire State Building. One obstacle the builders faced in attempting to let dirigibles dock on the Empire State building is the high flammability they have. A German dirigible was destroyed by fire in New Jersey and if this would have happened in New York, with a more densely populated area, the accident would have been much worse. Another obstacle they faced, their greatest obstacle, was the power of nature. Air currents were violent, so the winds were constantly shifting and this would cause the dirigible to swivel around the mooring mast, even if it was tethered to it. One last obstacle they faced was an existing law that prevented airships to fly too low over urban areas, like New York. Seeing the obstacles they faced, the builders realized that being able to moor a dirigible to the mast on top of the Empire State Building just was not meant to be.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3625,2,"Censorship at  the library is not needed at all times. It is the parents who should take the books away from the kids. It isn't the libraries job to tell people what to do. There are certin cases when it's needed though.     It's the parent's job to tell the kids what to do. They are the ones in charge of the kids. they are the ones who should tell teach them right from wrong. They are the ones who are raising the kids, not the library. Other wise, they parents are having their job done for them.     The libraries have the right to get what ever books they want as long as there isn't anything really bad in them. I do get it if they pull off books, movies, and magizines for adults, but if there is one little word in there, people will just have to get over it.     Isn't that why people are wanting classic books, such as '@CAPS1 @CAPS2's @CAPS3' and 'The @CAPS4 of @ORGANIZATION1,' changed? Because black people find it offensive? It's not rignt. People are trying to rewrite history; to sugar-coat the truth. Well, the books are like the real world. People aren't always going to be nice to you. They can be down right mean some times. The whole world is just corupted.     There shouldn't be a problem with just one little bad word in great works of liturature. People will cuss you out if they feel like it while in books, the language limited to one or two bad words. They shouldn't be trying to change great books because the minority find it offensive. The library shouldn't be the ones who tell us what we can and can not read. The library shouldn't censor their books.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18047,7,"@CAPS1 was a beautifal morning, sky was blue, birds were singing, and my sister was going skydiving. Her and her boyfriend zone, were playing to go sky diving so me, my friend,, and my parents taged along to watch. We had a couple people in front of them so we had to wait for an hour or so. Then another hour passes. Still not even close to being there turn. We were starting to get hungrey so we went into town and order some breakfast, we got our drinks and were about to get our food when we got a call that they were going soon. We had to cancle our meal and hurry back to the place. We got there, still not there turn. I don't really know how but something happened to wide we had sit and wait in the middle of the field for almost four more hours! Finally there turn, they got in the plane and flew up. They circled the field for a while and then @CAPS1 looked like a little dot fell out of the plane, then another followed. They sailed down to a succes. @CAPS1 turns out that we sat there for eight hours befor they jumped. Not including the hour and a half drive there .I think that I was pretty patient that day.",12,10,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15682,6,"There are many obstacles that the builders faced in order to allow dirigibles to dock atop the Empire State Building. One obstacle was safety. Foreign countries used highly flammable gases to fill their dirigibles with. According to the passage ""when the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire state building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" Another obstacle was whether. The winds on top of the building were always shifting because of the violent air currents. For example, U.S. Navy dirigible, Los Angeles couldn't tie up to the mast because of the wind, which might have resulted in a puncture in the shell of the dirigible. One more obstacle was the law banning airships from flying too low over urban areas. According to the passage ""This law would make it illegal to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area""... Because of the many obstacles that the builders faced, the Empire State building was unable to fulfill its original purpose, but is still considered a worldwide landmark today.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12863,5,"In Narciso Rodriguez's memoir, Narciso Rodriguez from Home: the Blueprints of Our Lives, the mood created by the author is appreciative. Narciso Rodriguez is deeply thankful of his parents and other friends and family for helping him through his life.Narciso Rodriguez repeats several times throughout the memoir the appreciation he has for his parents, family, and friends. In paragraph @NUM1, it quotes, ""My mother and father had come to this country with such courage... They came selflessly..."" This describes how he respects his parents so much for their sacrifice. Paragraph @NUM2 states, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice... There is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age."" In this quote, Narciso Rodriguez thanks his parents for loving him and their sacrifice. Then, he gives appreciation to the caringness he had during his childhood, which includes his neighbors, friends, and family. Narciso Rodriguez is appreciative of his family, especially his parents, for the generosity for the betterness of his life.In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created by the author is gratitude and appreciation for his parents generosity, care, selflessness, and sacrifice.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7571,3,The features effect the setting of the story in a big way. At the beginning of his ride there are people around and he has no troubles. After he talks to the old men and starts on his ride to the @NUM1 town there is no one around. There are no buildings in site at all and no source of water. Since there was no one around his confidence of actualy completing the trip begar to go down. Once he arrived at the first town he noticed that it was an old town and no one was there anymore. This made him mad and his confidence dropped a lot. Once he reached the next building he noticed that there was no one there either and then thought hed never make it and that he die. Once he reached the final place it was a more occupied setting. There were people around. He then began to feel relieved that he could get water. The setting with no one around make him lose a lot of confidence.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6398,3,"In the story the cyclist is affect by many features of the desert. The main feature is the heat. “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June."" He’s also running low on water,“The water bottles only contained & few tantalizing sips.” He’s faced by extrem heat and lack of water. He’s tired and has a long way to go. So far, all of the towns have been deserted. Finally he reaches a bait shop and his water and refills his water and promised to stick to the map in the future.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7048,3,The features of the setting is very important for cyclist. If the setting is wrong they could be in many danger. It is really important to have a clear setting.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1444,1,"A large amount of people use computers daily, but not everyone agrees this technology benefits society. I think that computers benefit our way of life in many ways. This very useful technology has a positive effect on people because, it allows people to send, receive, and research a vast variety of information easily. @PERCENT1 of people use the computer to get information and get it more quickly than reading a book about that specific topic. They say that this powerful technology has been more effective and quicker. My cousin and I were both given the same research paper to do. He used several books to get information on the topic and I used the computer. The project took me @NUM1 days to do, while it took him a whole week to complete. @PERSON1, computer programming expert, said, ""Computers have made receiving information so much faster. I vehemently believe that everyone should own this device. Moreover, computers help with communication. There are many ways to keep in touch with people over the world, like email, chat rooms, and websites like @CAPS1 and @CAPS2. These websites are a great tool to keep in touch with family and friends or even fans. @PERSON2, lead singer of the band @CAPS3 @ORGANIZATION1, said ""@CAPS1 is a way to talk to the fans directly ad post updates about upcoming tours and albums. Not only isit great for bands but it is great for college students. My older brother is a college student and we communicate through these websites so it seems like he is never that far away. The computer can also help with business. Meeting can be done through @ORGANIZATION2 or a different webchat service. Emails are a great way to send information. @NUM2 of business meetings are held over the internet has benefited work ethics. Please heed my advice and use the internet and computer. It will benefit your way of communication and your way of getting information.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10474,4,The author concludes the story with the paragraph they did because it shows how much the main character has grown. She has learned that if a delicate flower like the hibiscus can make it through rough times she can too. nature’s fight for survival is like Saeng’s struggle in a new place. She discovers that you will adapt to your surroundings over time. Then after that time it will feel just like home. The adaption principle is shown throughout this story demonstrate by nature or a child’s life it’s there. Therefore the author would agree that the conclusion of the story illustrates the biological and physical growth of Saeng.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10356,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by @CAPS1 Ho. The author is stating that Saeng is happy when she is around the plant and she finds peace with the plant because it brings back childhood memories. For example “And that rich sweet scent, that was familiar ton.” She loved the way it made her feel. When one of the leaves fell off and she breathed in, it remined her of grandmother. @CAPS1 might of experienced something like this. @CAPS1 might of wrote this because the story could relate to other people who moved from another country and have something that brought back memories. Everytime that l touch or smell a sweater,it brings back memorises of my grandmother. I feel that he wrote this because of his personal experience and it could relate to others",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1112,1,"Dear local Newspaper, In my opinion I belive that computers have helped our society a lot over the past decade or so. This is because when you on the computer you get better hand-eye coordination. Also you learn how to type and do other things with a computer that you will need to no how to do if you want to get a decinte job that pays well. Also now on the computer you can go on facebook and other website were you can make friend and chat with other people. So its not only helping your social skills and hand-eye coordination but also you are most likly to get a good job if you no how to type and use a computer. First off, having a computer teaches you to have better hand-eye coordination. This is because when you get a computer having better hand-eye coordination will teach you how to type better and more quick. Secondly, having a computer will teach you better social skills. This is because now alot of people go on facebook and you can make friends and chat with your new ones. Also when its a cold and rainy day you can occupy youself by playing different games and also you can check the news and forecast for tommorrows weather. Lastly, when you learn how to type you have a good shot at getting a good job because you no hot to type and work a computer. This is because when you are looking for a job that pays good you will most likly have to me how to type and operate a computer. @CAPS1 in @CAPS1, in my opinion I think computers have helped our society over the years, but other people @MONTH1 think differently. So now lets see what you think.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9936,4,The reason I think author concludes this story with this last paragraph is because this is @CAPS1 passion. And that Saeng is very and will do this every year. She really love plants and she will wait to do it again. The last paragraph really showed a lot of dedication. And she really values the spring and the Hibiscus. ,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21096,8," Have you ever felt really good after you laughed a lot? Well studies have shown that after you laugh you not only feel better, but it's a great way to lose calories. One time when I felt bad my cousin came over and made me laugh. It was a very important part of our relationship, she to only made the day better but put more energy in it. When people don't laugh how can you have as much fun?  Studies have shown laughing does a lot for your health. It increases a certain blood flow in your brain which helps a person to be more energetic and happy. It has also shown that laughing leads to a longer life span. Also every time a person laughs it helps a person burn calories. If it's healthy for you why not laugh a lot? Just think, if nobody laughed how would this world be? It would be dull and full of unhappy people, just like this one time when my cousin came over to see me.  One day I was feeling down and depressed. Nothing was going my way and it was ending up a very bad day. Then all of a sudden my cousin came to @ORGANIZATION1 and surprised me. I was in @ORGANIZATION1 one day after school and looking at some things when she came in @ORGANIZATION1 and snuck up in back of me and scared me. We both started laughing so hard. She made a bad day turn into a fun one. We had a movie night and ate candy and pickles all night. We made songs up and sang them. We had the best time of our lives. All night long we had this party. I don't know what would happen to everybody if none of us ever laughed.  If we didn't laugh then our relationship certainly wouldn't be as strong. It would seem like we were sad or depressed all the time. If their was no laughing I wouldn't look forward to seeing her as much if we just sat around and didn't laugh. Laughing for me is a huge part of having fun in any relationship. It shows your comfortable with the person and are having fun also. If you have ever been down and wanted to give up, you know that's not fun at all. But whether you watch a funny movie or talk to your friend and it makes you laugh, you know what joy it puts in your life. So laughing must be an important part of you life or in any relationship you have.  Overall laughing for me is one of the most important things a person can do to make another person feel welcome and comfortable around you. Also a great way to have fun and lose calories at the same time. If you need some happiness in your life then watch a funny movie or hang out with people that make you laugh.",20,17,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6485,3,"In the essay, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affected the cyclist because it made it more difficult for the cyclist to survive and make it through his journey. In the essay, it says, “I arrived at the first “Town”…this place might have been a thriving little spot at one time…but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of a ghost @NUM1). In the essay, the cyclist takes directions from a few old men to get to Yosemite National Park. The cyclist has a limited amount of water, and it was a very humid day for traveling. Because of the humidity, the cyclist nearly ran out of water when he had to cycle up, “short, rolling hills” (@NUM2) in the hot weather. Had the town been thriving, he could have bought more water to make his trip easier to accomplish. Also, if the road in the story would have been flat, he cyclist wouldn’t have gotten as tired as he did and needed more water. It would have been less strainful on the cyclist to pedal on a flat road rather than a hilly road. The challenges facing the cyclist remined me of that of the main character of the movie @PERSON2. In this movie, the main character must make his way through the extreme conditions of the desert, just like the cyclist had to in order to reach his destination. In conclusion, the setting clearly affects the cyclist’s journey in a negative way.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16013,6,"To allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building, the @CAPS1 had many obstacles to face. Some of the obstacles were there a morning mast could not be simply dropped and a thousand foot dirigible moored at the top. would add stress to the buildings frame."" The architechs couldn not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" The greatest obstacle to the mooring mast was nature itself. The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building had obstacles to face.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18851,7,"Have you ever got annoid because someone kept saying be patient? I have and @CAPS1 gonna tell you about the time I was patient. One time I was on my way to @LOCATION1, the plane ride wasn’t as bad as what @CAPS1 gonna tell you. When @CAPS3 got to @PERSON1 @CAPS3 had to pass through @PERSON1@NUM1 border it was hot!!! I think tempeture hit @NUM2? @CAPS3 had to wait in this small room with about @NUM3 people, and they had no A. C. All of us were waiting for the bus to come, and after @NUM4 hours a bus arrived. @CAPS3 were getting on as about @NUM5 people came barging in front, @CAPS2 @CAPS3 miss that bus. Then @CAPS3 waited again for a bus the after @NUM6 hours a bus arrives agains @CAPS2 were trying get on then again @CAPS3 get pushed out of the way. @CAPS2 @CAPS3 missed that bus I was @CAPS2 fustrated @CAPS2 did my family. Another thing I got frustrated at was there were thousand’s of flys all over the place. @CAPS2 @CAPS3 waited after @NUM4 more hours a bus arrives but my little brother was in the bathroom @CAPS2 @CAPS3 missed that bus @CAPS2 my mom was telling me to calm down and be patient @CAPS2 I stayed patient until the @NUM8 th bus came, @CAPS3 got on but the bus didn’t go where @CAPS3 were suppose to @CAPS2 @CAPS3 had to go back to the same place @CAPS3 were in, but again my mom says stay patient. One of the officers over at the place saw how long @CAPS3 were waiting @CAPS2 once the next bus arrived after @NUM9 hours and @NUM10 minutes he held everybody else up let me and my family get on, and tolled the driver “take them by there self,” @CAPS2 @CAPS3 had the bus to our selfs, and you know what it was all worth it.",12,9,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4090,2,"I believe that if there are books, music, movies, or magazines that offends you. People shouldn't be able to disarm that material off of the shelf. If it's there children they're worried about just teach them from staying away from adult section. Also, some people don't like foul language but thats there opinion. Than we wouldn't have any material left in the library if everyone had the rights to disarm offensive material. 'And then we have no books left on the shelf for any us' (Paterson).     If it's your children your worried about seeing censorship in libraries but, you don't mind it just have them stay in the kids section reading books. You could just go a day where you want to go by yourself so you don't have to worry about your kids spotting any censorship. Before checking the material out skim through it make sure there is nothing offensive for your child.      Many people don't like foul language but, that's there opinion. It doesn't bother me because it gives the book a little taste and it's more interesting. Helps you understand what the reader is feeling upon someone or thing. Sometimes it helps show what mood the reader has in the story.     Finally, if everyone had the right to disarm all the offensive materials, we wouldn't have anything left. This could effect peoples education and reading skills. Some of that material is peoples hobbies they wouldn't be able to do what they like anymore.     'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off of the shelf '(Paterson). It's an easy fix just teach your children from right and wrong. Would you rather have your children have a good education or not know how to read? Many people dislike foul language but it could make the book better. I don't know what I would do if there was no more books. Well these are examples of why people shouldn't have the rights to disarm material off of the shelf if it offends them. What would you do if you had something you loved taken away from you?",3,4,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4730,2,"Need help with Censorship in @ORGANIZATION1     (I chaged the @ORGANIZATION2 of this story that I heard from my grandparents because I could not remember the real one. This is not really happening at the @ORGANIZATION1 I think.)     To the people at the @ORGANIZATION3 I would like to tell you and your readers that there is something wrong with the @ORGANIZATION2. Nothing really all  to serious I guess. . It seems the libaraiains there are censoring  tons of books and other materials. One of which I really need for a homework assignment on the movie @CAPS1.      They say that they are censoring what I need for the assignment because it is to bloody and scary for some of the other readers.  There have also been some complates from parents as well, saying that their kids had nightmares for weeks from the movie .     To that I said well can I still use the computers there to get information. They said that they have  already blocked all the inaproperate sites as well. I do not have internet at home so you can see how well that is going to go at school. So then I tryed to get the @CAPS2 to uncensor all of the stuff they have all ready have censored. So that way I could just make them censor all the werid adult rated things at the @ORGANIZATION2. That way no kid will have nightmares any more.I also threw in the idea of seperarting all the @CAPS3 and @CAPS4 by age group like child,teen, older teen. To this they said all right but they were going to keep the classic @CAPS4 and @CAPS3     The @CAPS2 said they @MONTH1 try my idea and see if it works But I would have to volunteer at the @ORGANIZATION2 and go through all the stuff that has been censored over the years. To this I said ok, but after I saw home big the censor list was it was like a nightmare over a hundered pages of book at least. I was to scared to see how long the other lists were. So seeing that it was to big for me to handle alone I got most of the other volunteers to help me. Then put up posters at the school I go to,to see if anyone else would be willing to help me.      So far there has not been much progress in the lists so I would like to ask that if there are any readers out there reading this article. I could sure use your help because these are some really long lists. I @CAPS8 you all for reading this article, if you are not able to help then see if there is anyone else you know that would be willing too,@CAPS8 You.",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12465,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, from Home: The Blueprints of our Lives writen by Narciso Rodriguez the mood of the excerpt is nice. I think it is nice because it says that he is prowd of his parents, being @CAPS1 and about home.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9470,4,"From the story of the girl just moved from Vietnam to United @ORGANIZATION1. It will be hard for the girl to understand anything and anything can bring her memory back about Vietnam. The author concludes the story with this paragraph because she did fail the test and see wants to see the hibiscus is budding. “I-I failed the test,” Saeng said it to her mother. Her mother actually understand why it happen and she will let Saeng keep the hibiscus because it will make Saeng feel better. Saeng miss Vietnam a lot and will like to try her best to overcome obstacles.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
22,1,Dear local Newspaper @CAPS1 a take all your computer and given to the people around the world for the can stay in their houses chating with their family and friend. Computers help people around the world to connect with other people computer help kids do their homework and look up staff that happen around the world.,2,1,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15126,6,Some obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced was. how to build the morring mast. how to atach the mooring mast to the frame of the Empire @CAPS1 Building.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
930,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I think computers have a positive effect on people because it will help you with interacting, learning and coordination. By interacting with people like far away friends or unknown frieds. If they are far its a nice way to send photos back and forth to see how the person/people are doing. Family is a very important factor in computers because if you havent seen the person you can tell how they are progressing in life. If thats not the case you can meet new people. By meeting new people you have more connections in your life and more people to trust. Learning! Learning is a good thing for adults an children. Computers can teach children by showing them new words, colors shapes and sizes. For an adult it can show them meanings of words or new words. Words, colors and sizes can all be round on a computer all by learning. A computer can not only do mental things to affect you also physical like coordination. You can improve your coordination by making you stronger when you type. Your hands are a big thing in like and they are helpful in a lot of ways. By sitting up straight in your computer chair all day can improve your posture. Your back can get straigher from all time you are sitting. Your mind can be foucused and in one pot fucusing on thing is good for you such as the computer screen. Now, people can think that computers are good for you too. But there could be negative ideas for people who think the opposite way.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1296,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I have some opinions on technology is going these days and about how many people shun the idea of further advancement for the understandable reasons that it brings people away from family and that it draws people's attention away from the rest of the world I do see their point but I'd like to make a point myself. While statistics show a @PERCENT1 decline in recreational activities people also find more things to do and now that the world is more concerneD for the environment you will probably see people coming outside again because they heard about some new environmental actavist group to join or they watch a movie that makes fun of live action role playing and decide to give it a whirl. My point being that you never know what your going to discover in the media and its better than sitting outside all day with no insperation, waiting for your parents to get home and give you information from outside you tiny world. The other item I will mention is the music industry and how it is revolutionized with more advanced, and different ways of listening to it in fact the only problem in music today are the artist and how they take advantage of recording studies and on occasion another just to gain fame! Without doing anything but sit back and lip sync. But the technology of the day give us the ability to listen to music the golden age of music now. So why not advance and invest in the music industry, it will provide entertainment and fun for years to come. Advanceing technology is the music industry actually is probably good for the economey as well I mean if we didn'@CAPS4 have new @CAPS3 to bell to people every year that would be a huge decline in stock market prices not that were not in a crash right now but it wouldn'@CAPS4 be any better. That goes for cell phones too and any other piece of hardware that gets frequently upgraded it's just good for buisness. You see I belive that the point of life is joy so whats better than settling down with mabey a date some candlelight and a romance or thriller on the @CAPS4.V most people will enjoy just sitting down and watching the telly it's easy to relate to. The television has evolved in many good ways it's a way to lay down and unwind learn about so many different things mabey watch a show on @LOCATION1 it makes you feel like being there without actually being there. I helps us get updated on current events shows things that we want to do and shows us how to do it. I for example have learned so much from.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4482,2,"Books, music, movies, magazines, ect. should be remove if they are offensive to a race or any other kinds of belifs unless they are biogical or historical time line.  If the reading material is so offensive towards you or your belifs, you @MONTH1 want to see a libarian and tell what you think about so that the reading material will be remove off the sevles and gone.     I think that if it goes against something in a bad way is should be removed and gone.  I've read a magazine before and it had some offensive stuff.  I went to the libarian, told her that i wanted this magazine off the shelves.  We argued for about five minutes and finally the magazine was off the shelves.       Nobody wants something to go against them in anyway.  Thats way we should have offensive material off our libaries shelves.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4696,2,"Hi, my name is mason and i'm writing about wether we should take books off the self and etc. People have differnt views on differnt things.     Books, books give a differnt form of lerning to differnt people.I personal don't learn from books as well as I do from the internet or tv but books are nice to have every once in a great while. Eeryone like to sit down and read a good book every once in a while.     Music doesn't really teach you anything, it relaxs you in differnt ways. Some people might learn from listening to music but i'm not one of those peole. It influnce you to get movited, say your getting ready for a football game and you want to get hyped up for it, well some music can get you hyped up for that game.     When i sit down and watch a movie I can learn from it cause i have the patien to sit down and watch it, to learn from it but that is just me other people have differnt ways of learning but the best way for me is to watch movies. They get stright to the point and don't waste time telling you stuff you alredy know.     Magazines are helpful to they have short artcicles that get stright to the point too, and that is what I like about magazines and movies. Even though there are very few magazines that give out helpful information, the ones that do help out alot.     So I think that music should be taken off shelves because they don't really teach you alot but books, movies, and magazine do help you to a certian point. It is up the other people to decide wether music should be taken off the shelves not just one person cause music might help other people in differnt ways not just one way but many ways too",3,3,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7516,3,"The cyclist was riding in some rough, dry and abandoned terrain that made his journey almost fatal. He described it as, “In the high deserts of California in June.” It was dry, lifeless and hot The sun was beating on him and he needed to frequently drink water, but he was running out. The empty towns were what he was wanting on for fresh water, but they’d been very abandoned. This made his journey very dangerous. He could’ve fallen off at any time because of heat stroke He would’ve died right then and there. His sweat was drying in the heat and there was no way for him to cool off in the lifeless desert: lifeless and dry. He had to enhance these extreme. Ironical conditions for miles on end, just to find some water. It was all that a desert is and all that a home shouldn’t go through.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16009,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the reader learns about many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The most important obstacle to overcome was safety. The United States used hydrogen rather than helium to power the dirigibles. As said in @CAPS2 @NUM1, after the Hindenburg was destroyed, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how catastrophic the accident would be if it was over a densely populated area such as New York. Another obstacle faced was the brutal winds which occur at such a high altitude. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (@CAPS2 @NUM2). The final obstacle the builders faced was that there was a law, ""against airships flying too low over urban areas."" (@CAPS2 @NUM3) which made it illegal to tie a dirigible to a building. In conclusion the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles yet in the end, ""Dirigibles, instead of becoming the transportation of the future, had given way to airplanes"" (@CAPS2 @NUM4)",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13584,5,"The mood created by the author, Narciso Rodriguez in the memoir from Home The Blueprints of Our Lives is a happy and thankful mood. This is because of the happy memories Rodriguez describes in his memoir, his gratitude he expresses for his family in the end, and describing the hardships his family had to endure for him.First, Rodriguez brings a happy mood into the story because of the many happy memories he describes during the memoir. One of them, in paragraph @NUM1, is when he says ""The passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen.""@CAPS1, the gratitude he expresses for his family in the last two paragraph conveys a thankful mood. For example, in paragraph @NUM2, Rodriguez says, ""I've thanked them repeatedly. But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are.""@CAPS2, by describing the hardships his family had to endure for him, Rodriguez furthers conveys a thankful mood. Rodriguez devotes the entire paragraph @NUM3 to describing how unselfish and kind his family was, thus thanking them.In the end, because of the happy memories described, his gratitude he expresses for his family, and by describing hardships his family had to face, @ORGANIZATION1 conveys a happy, thankful mood.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6755,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist greatly. There were hills and rocks, snakes and no buildings or people. The hills and rocks would make it much harder to to stay strong and be able to keep riding. The abandoned building and there being no people, could affect him emotionally. It would make him loose hope and the determination to keep going to find destination. He did not think he would get that after seeing a deserted town. After all, he did say, “It didn’t really matter. I was going to die … “(Kurmaskie).",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7286,3,"In the short story “ Rough Road Ahead Do not exceed pusted speed limit.” A lot of things affeced cyclist. Such as the rocky road , and the lack of water for example where the author says “when I tried a drop or two, It had the flavor of battery acid.” this shows how has loosing lope, and he seems a little scared. Also the abandond towns  didn’t help.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15867,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @PERSON1, the builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Nature itself was one of the greatest obstacles they faced. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" Also the ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields, could be weighted down in the back with lead weights, but using those at the Empire State Building, where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe. Another reason dirigibles could not dock there was because of the law against airships flying too low to urban areas. Overall, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15035,6,"In the short excerpt, The Mooring Mast By Marcia Amidon Lüsted there were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. An obstacle they faced was the space. An example ""The one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" @CAPS1 saying it was going to be hard finding a place to land. Although that may had been one of their problems that was not the only problem it was the safety. The excerpt says, ""the mooring mast added to the top of the building would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service and to let passengers off and on."" Which meant it would have taken along time just land and fueling. Another obstacle was for the dirigibles to be tested in the testing of the mast",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19276,7,So one day in fifth grade I was running around playing tag on the play ground when  “push”  I got push off the slide a bout a ???fell and back my arm so it went ??? or they in pain so ??? went to the doctor’s and waited for two hours and I just sat patient by not moving my arm at all watching other people walk in and out finily they called my name they told me my arm was broken out the could not put cast on there to we went to the other doctor across the rode waited @NUM1 minutes and got a blue cast about a month later I got it taken off went back to the x ray room but then said I have to cast it up again this time I got ??? and eventily to got it taken off and thats the time I was patient.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1388,1,"Computers have a positive effect on peoples lives. They are big helpers. They teach you skills you need in life. The technology abilities help us with tasks every day. Finally they help people to keep in touch and meet knew people. I think that computers have a very positive effect on our lives. Computers teach us many things. First of all just learning how to use the computer is a skill you need in life. At most jobs you have to know how to work a computer. Today computers are essential part of most work enviornment. Hand-eye coordination is another skill the computer teaches you. Computers actually help you with sports in a way. To catch a ball you need hand-eye coordination. The technology the computer gives us helps us alot in life. If you need directions you can look it up on the computer. If you couldn't you would have to call the resturant for directions. Without the computers help we would all have to write all of our papers out. For students it would be a nightmare to have to do reports without a computer. We would have to read so many books to get the information. The world would be a much different place without computers. Sometimes people who we love have to move far away from us. It's hard to keep in touch on the phone when that happens. The computer through keep you in touch. With programs like facebook, twitter, and @ORGANIZATION1, its possible. You can chat with them pictures of how there doing. You could even keep in touch with them from @LOCATION1. Computers almost anything possible. In conclusion computers are great machines. They teach us life long lessons. They help us when we need something or have to do a report. Computers even keep people in touch so their relationships don't fall apart. I don't know about you, but I think computers keep the world up and running.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15086,6,"There is a lot of obstacles in trying to come with an idea of a building. They had to make sure the structure of the building was capable of the high winds it was going to get. Plus, they also had to make sure the top was safe enough for the dirigibles to dock there without harming any people or the building.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
580,1,"What if you're family all and to talk to them percent of people commucate online, and thats not a bad thing. Heres the thing, are you for or against kids/parents online for too long. I am all for this. Reasons being are lots of kids have friends that they talk to online, secondly kids have homework/projects that they might have to look up online, and my last reason for this is, some family might have @CAPS1 ect, so they can communicate online. My first reason for this is, a lot of kids have friends online that can't text or even talk on the phone, so this is another easier way to talk to them. Did you know that most kids communicate online now. ""I think the internet is a great things, I mean I would rather have my kids online than outside roaring the and getting into troupe."" @CAPS2 @ORGANIZATION1. @NUM1 of @NUM2 kids are online communicating with others. Without a doubt, kids bring home projects and homework everyday right? Wouldn't you rather your kid looking up information online, then have them guessing and getting it wrong? I know that alot of children don't have computers, internet or essy, or maybe their got allowed online. That's why they. I remember the times when I had a project due at school, and I guessed on. that didn't do my grade any good. So then I decided the next time I have a project to do it on the internet. And it worked, I got a much better grade then I did on the one I guessed on. Lastly, mostly everybody has on the internet and would live to and with them while. So even stay online too often your not on it for a bad reason, your on to talk to your family."" @CAPS3 I got internet in my house, I barly ever got to talk to my family. But just then, my son me to get one, and I have the chance to talk to my family everyday. @CAPS2 a recent of a computer. Some people do say on the computer for too long at times, and don't get out on exercise the amount a humane should. or they don't get out of the house as much as they used to @CAPS3 they got the internet. Yes but, it's a good cause, it's not like because forever. Also it's being used for good. Not for anything bad. I think the internet is a great thing, and it puts a effect on many people. Reasons are, kids have friends online to talk too, ""lots of that needs internet, and last of people have family online to talk to so it's now or get out there and your best pick. The issue grapple with is if you for or against internet acess! So get out there, and change now.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12412,5,"The mood of this memoir is happy and grateful. The narrator is grateful for all the great times in life him and his parents had together. He is happy that said ""times"" were so great.He is grateful for the happy times they had together like cooking, music, and so on. But he is mostly grateful for his parents turning his house into a home.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13029,5,The mood the @CAPS1 created was a mood of happiness and gratitude. The @CAPS1 States how he will always be grateful for what his parents did for him. He also stated that he admired them and honestly could never repay them for everything they did This shows how the @CAPS1 @CAPS4 how his parents worked so hard to make his life better. He is forever greatful.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9691,4,Saeng is a very helpful young lady to her mom she makes things the author made that the ending sentence to make the story more intresting for the read ond to keep thom heoked to the end,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12386,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is gratefulness. Narciso often explains how thankful he is to his parents. Like When he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. Narciso starts off the memoir by talking about the hardships of his parents and than goes into how well of a home they made for him. He than talks about all of the good times that they have, and than, he thanks them one more time.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9419,4,"Emotion, camitmint, hope, all are reasons why the author ended the story with “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the gees return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again."" @CAPS1, that last paragraph shows that she has emotion. Next, It shows that she has comitmint, she says that when the hibiscus coms back she will take the test again. Lastly, it shows that there is hope and the she will try and redeam herself. These are all the reasons why she used the last paragraph.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10255,4,It shows the importance of the  Hibiscus to Saeng and her dedication to the flower. It is also stating that she will wait for next spring to admire the flower again.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18096,7,I have used patience a lot of times but I think the most patience I’ve had was hunting. You just have to sit there not talk and stay still. I was hunting out behind my house with my uncle @PERSON1 and we got out there at six-o-clock am and the waited there until nine o’clock at night. The dear finally started to come in and one dear got close enough for me to shoot. I drew my bow and shot at it but it was so dark I could hardly see and I missed it. My uncle didn’t even see it until the last second and when I pulled the trigger of the release I knew straight away that it was going to miss. All you could hear was the dear running away and the arrow crashing through all the leaves. So later that nigh we went home really hungry.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
122,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 @PERCENT1 in town use the computer for at least five hours each day. The people are spending way too much time and not benefiting. Computers have an effect on people but in a negative way. People get adicted and distracted and can't get work done. Many inappropriate things are written in computers that children and adults shouldn't read. Lastly people stare at a computer screen all day which can cause brain damage. Effects from computers can be very negative and not beneficial at all. With children at school and adults at jobs, there is most likely a lot of work to get done, but computers should make a person not get the work done. The other day in class the teacher was collecting homework, but @NUM1 out of the @NUM2 kids in our class didn't have the homework. When the teacher asked why the kids didn't do their homework, they said that they were on the computer and forgot about the homework. When the children and adults don't get their work done then grades could be dropped, or people could get fired. The effect is very harmful, and all this happened just because of the adiction and distraction of computers. Since some internet sources are very social, and not all people are kind, mean and inappropriate articles and language could be read. Many children don't know a lot of bad words and certainly no one wants them to be exposed to learning more, so why let them go on the computer and read about these bad things? Adults @MONTH1 know more about the harmful language, but why influence them to write the bad things or comment using mean tones. If adults and children aren't exposed to these bad uses of language then our world could easily be made up of better and kinder people. Studies show that if a person stares at a computer screen for at least three hours a day, then in about two weeks time the person brain could be damaged. The screen of the computer in some way with the human brain and if stared at for too long the screen could permenately damage the brain. A @ORGANIZATION1 student, who studies computer mechanics, quoted, ""@CAPS2 help prevent brain damage by limiting the use of computers to only what needs to be done. The mechanics to make the computer screen are not healthy for you!"" Who wants to have a damaged brain? Surely this effect could be very serious. So, in the end people should know that computers are not benefiticial. Computers effect people for sure, but not in a way that people would want to be effected. Adiction and distraction from the computer could cause important work to be ignored. Children and adults do not need to learn or be influenced by inappropriate language on the computer. Brain damage could be a serious problem that could be caused by something as simple as looking at a computer screen. @CAPS2 try to prevent all these negative effects by limiting the use of your computer. It is very easy to stay clear of any negative effects but it is your choice whether to do so or not.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
387,1,"Dear, editor @CAPS1 you know, @PERCENT1 of children who spend most of their time on the computer that do not exercize can develop weight problems and blood disorders? That is just one way that advances in computer technology have affected people so far. If advances continue that number will increase and other problems @MONTH1 arise from it. Some other problems that we have @DATE1 that could get worse are, developing a weak immune system, and emotionally seperating yourself from your family. First, lets talk about obesity. Obesity is a terrible sight to see someone go through because of something as silly as being, basically, addicted to the computer. Not only can obesity constrict vital organs but it can lead to blood disorders. Blood disorders, such as high blood pressure and diabetes, can cause you to have a heart attack. Which cuts off oxygen to vital areas of the body. Which leads to, eventually, promote death. Dealing with obesity is bad enough, but seeing them suffer because they have developed a weak immune system is horrable. In my experience I find that people who are on the computer often generally don't have very good immune systems. For example, a friend of mine is on the computer quite often, and has developed a weak immune system. Because of it he misses at least @NUM1 day of school a week. And because he misses so many days a school year he usually keep bad grades. Which is yet another reason why advances in computer technology are a bad idea. So isn't it relatively obvious that advances in technology are a bad idea? Especially being that, children are steadily becoming obese, and developing a weak immune system can affect your life in ways that are totally controllable? So I urge you to write an article about this to stop the growing sickness known as health problems due to technology.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7443,3,"THE FEATURES OF THE SETTING AFFECT THE CYCLIST BY IT BEING SO HOT OUTSIDE THAT HE COULD HAVE HAD PASSED OUT AND DIED. ALSO HE SAW A SNAKE THAT SCARED HIM TO DEATH BUT HE PASSED THE SNAKE. ALSO HE SAW A BUILDING THAT COULD PROBABLY HELP HIM BUT IT WAS ABANDONED,IT WAS A WELCH FACTORY THEN AS HE RUNS FURTHER DOWN HE SAW A FISH PLACE AND WENT TO THE BATHROOM TO GET SOME WATER then somebody asked him where he was going and they tined totzy him but he still had his map so he decided that he was going to use it instead of listening to other people.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6365,3,"The features of setting affect the author because it moves him dehydrated. The dessert sun look sweat out of him and he had no water to bring that would replace his electrolites . Also, once the author had got into the hills he had lost a lot of his energy so peddling up his was a lot of work. If I were the author I would also have gotten tired because you need water in your body to survive.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20736,8,"               ""Laughter"" A good relationship is built on trust, right? That's what I've heard my whole life, but as I've grow and really started thinking for myself I came up with my own kind of survival guide, if you will, to good relationships for anyone. Sure trust is important but @CAPS2 isn't the only key factor, I've learned laughter is just as important to not only starting a relationship but keeping @CAPS2 full of life. One person in my life helped me really understand that and be able to have that relationship with them. My mom and I have such a great bond and way of understanding with each other, other girls I know don't always have that with their mothers, I am very fortunate. Sure we have hard times just like any family, but we are able tolaugh @CAPS2 off with time and start new. @CAPS5 helped me realize, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people.""  @CAPS1 a great bond with my mom is so important to me, we have not always ran so smoothly though. From about age ten to thirteen I was a bit troubled in the sense of not wanting to show my emotions, I just wanted to stay quite.Then seeing my mom as someone who was strong and beautiful, I have to admit I was a bit worried @CAPS5 would think I was a disappointment. I guess I was afraid to show who I really was to her. Whenever @CAPS5 would joke around with me I would take @CAPS2 all to seriously and whenever we would fight about small things I thought @CAPS5 would hate me forever. I know now I was silly to think that, but I'm actually glad we went through that. I think that's part of what made us stronger, like how there would be no rainbow without the rain or how there would be no happy ending if all was well throughout your whole life. Little did I know the light at the end of the tunnel was just around the corner. One night after dinner my mom had informed me that @CAPS2 was my night to do dishes, unlike usual I completely forgot and went to my room to listen to music and eventually fall asleep. My mother came in my room upset and frustrated. @CAPS5 said, ""@PERSON1, why did you ignore me? The dishes need to be done now."" I jumped out of bed without a word and began walking to the kitchen. @CAPS5 followed me into the small bright room, ""@PERSON1? Are you alright, @CAPS2's okay that you forgot. I'm not mad."" @CAPS5 exclaimed. Again not a word escaped my lips. I was afraid to say anything, the only sound that came from me was a sigh of relief when I turned back around and noted her absence. When I was finished with the dishes @CAPS5 pulled me into my room. I tried reading her face, @CAPS5 looked worried. @CAPS5 explained to me the relationship between her and her mom that @CAPS5 so desperately wanted to have with me. @CAPS5 told me about how they would @CAPS3 together over silly things and how they promised each other that when they got into fights they would stop themselves, take a deep breath, then @CAPS3. ""@CAPS3? What? Why would you guys do that?"" I questioned.  @CAPS5 replied, "" @CAPS4 laughter is the best cure for any sad feeling or bad day, as grandma would always say."" @CAPS5 helped me experience that by tickling me and joking around. For the fist time in my life I wasn't nervous and I spoke my mind. As we sat there and chucked ourselves to sleep I knew things would be different from here on out, and they were. We now have made that promise to one other and we are able to have wonderful smiling memories together now. Now at fifteen years old I can honestly say without question my mom will always be my best and truest friend. Our bond, our way of getting over tough times, and the way we can @CAPS3 off all stressful things in life makes me feel as if I can get through anything. I've truly realized the meaning of the saying, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" ",20,25,,45,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10230,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because they feel that the plant will bring them luck or something. Saeng feels that the plant gives her some type of comforte. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12534,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the memoir gives a loving and thankful tone. The loving and thankful tone is snowing the definition of ""family"". In paragraph seven the author states, ""and for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This shows that the tone is thankful for what the parents had done and love them at the same time. As I aformentioned, the tone is love and thanked.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6515,3,"Setting affects the cyclist. The cyclist has to worry about the road condition. If the road condition is bad then the cyclist must reduce his/her speed. The cyclist also has to worry about if it is day or night. If it is night, they must be careful due to cars not being able to see them. In the text, the cyclist was in extremely hot weather. This is dangerous to cyclist if they are not prepared with things such as water.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3253,2,"If something offensive is found at the library, should it be taken off of the shelves? Some people might look at this question and instantly say yes. Others might not think anything of the item and move along. I disagree with those who believe the item should be remove. Instead, I believe the item should not be removed and stay on the shelves.      As a child, I have always gone to the child's section of the library to find a book. I steared clear of the 'grown-up' area. So if my mother found an offensive item on the shelves she would make sure I didn't see it. I believe if the parent watches what their child sees then they wouldn't worry about them seeing something offensive.      However, let's say that an adult sees this item and feels it should be removed. She/he has the right to remove that item but what if, to someone else, that item was exactly what they were looking for? The world we live in has many offensive things in it that we see everyday, such as newspapers, @CAPS1 programs, billboards, etc., and if someone were to come along and take it all away, we would have nothing left but that one persons interests.      This is why we have a little bit of everything in our libraries. If there is an offensive book or a bad @CAPS2 and someone doesn't like it and feels the need to remove it, that is @CAPS3 but then they aren't thinking of what other people might like. I have always heard the saying, 'If everybody liked the same thing, it would be a boring world.' I find this to be completely true.      If everybody liked the same thing, then let anybody that enters the library remove an offensive item. However, if this happens, authors won't want to keep writing books and singers won't want their @CAPS4 there if they find out someone keeps removing their work. On the same note, people won't want to go to the library if they know they won't find what they want because someone took it down.      I disagree with the ones who feel the item should be removed because to someone that book might be perfect. I believe that the book or magazine or @CAPS2 should stay on the shelf for someone who has the intent to read it. If a person walks by and feels the book is offensive, they need realize that to someone else it might not be and walk away. I am sure people would find my choice of books offensive or bad and would like to remove them from shelves. However, I would stop going to the library if that happened. This is why I feel books should stay where there are",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13458,5,"In this memmoir of Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, the author beautifully creates a positive, happy mood. Throughout most of the memmoir, the mood is very warm and hearty. The author's description of how his home came to be and how it's like warms up the atmosphere of the reader's mind and make them smile unknowingly. For example, the last sentence of paragraph @NUM1, it says, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" The author's diction, or choice of words, such as congregation, celebration and warm home creates imagery of happy, joyful house and gives off an positive effect. In addition, he boosts up the warm, soothing mood up a notch @CAPS1 saying in paragraph @NUM2 ""... All of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship. It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants."" @CAPS1 saying this, this sentence sets up a feeling of being supported @CAPS1 your loved ones and shows a real definition of true family. Also, it sends a warm, relaxing, cozy feeling as the author talks about a loving, caring family. For this memmoir, the author created a heartwarming, joyous, warm mood as he described his loving home and provided a real definition of family. A loving family really sets a warm, hearty mood.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
998,1,"Imagine your life without the benifits @ORGANIZATION2 the computer. Do you think it would make life a little harder? Computers have positive effects on people for educational reasons and for a new way to develope @CAPS3 skills. @ORGANIZATION2 is very important to our sociotey. Computers can help with our educational needs. When a school project is going on more than @PERCENT1 @ORGANIZATION2 students use a computer to acces the information they need. I agree that students depend too much on a computer and not on books, but the computer has more information to offer than the average book. The computer @CAPS1 lets us, as students, to broaden our horizon. The @ORGANIZATION2 stated that ""a near @PERCENT2 @ORGANIZATION2 students learn something new from a computer that they did not already know."" @CAPS1, in @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 @CAPS4 a student could find more information on a specific country than they could with a book. I predict that as a result @ORGANIZATION2 the informational acces the computer gives us, that soon grades will boost at least @NUM1 to @PERCENT3. In a servey that was done by the @ORGANIZATION1, found that @PERCENT4 @ORGANIZATION2 students found more information, that was relavent, on a selected topic than in the whole school library. Next, the computer can help with hand-eye coordination for young kids. In school students are observed to see how well or if there coordination is being developed. With @PERCENT3 @ORGANIZATION2 students having very little coordination, computer games lowered the @PERCENT3 to @PERCENT5. The computer does help with the educational needs @ORGANIZATION2 students in @LOCATION1. The computer is a great way to socialize with friends. It is a new and inventive way to communicate. I know that some @MONTH1 say that there is less time spent humanly interacting, but on the computer it is still interacting. With a phone you can only chat with each other, but a computer has a webcam. This device allows you to talk to people with some human interaction. Around @NUM2 to @NUM3 million @CAPS5 have this device to use. It @CAPS1 is preinstalled into many @ORGANIZATION3 and @ORGANIZATION4 laptops, giving us portable acces to talk. CEO at @ORGANIZATION3 said that ""@CAPS6 the laptops have come with c built in web cam, one out @ORGANIZATION2 every two that have it installed use it to chat socially and for buisness."" The computer can help with our communications for @CAPS3 or buisness needs. The computer is a good way to start and develope with @CAPS3 skills. More than @PERCENT6 @ORGANIZATION2 children use a computer to start with the begenings @ORGANIZATION2 their @CAPS3 skills. Computer allow many people to become @CAPS3 with each other in new and effective ways. In conclusion, the average computer can benafit our lives in positive ways. From our educational needs and to our @CAPS3 needs, the computer positivley effets us in these two very important ways.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1139,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, The average american uses the computer at least once, everyday @CAPS2 machines definetley beneffit society, with then people can easily learn about faraway places, learn whithout having to carry heavy books and papers and chat with people all over the country and sometimes even the world. First of all computers can teach you all about the world without you having to go to a library appart for a book free sites like wikapedia provide fast knowledge and most anything, you can use @CAPS2 sites for essay, trip planning and just to satisfy your curiousity some people believe that computers @CAPS13 people from excersizing and enjoying nature however computers promote exercise and going out to look at nature computers provide quick and easy access to travel agencies, as well as information on popular tourist areas, in any reason, They also bring advertising sites for gyms and ideas on excersizing at home, Computers don't hinder workouts and nature walks, they make @CAPS6 easier to do them. But computers make other things easier as well, @CAPS3 can be much easier with the use of computers, @CAPS4 of dragging around heavy books, @CAPS5 can carry a small laptop; @CAPS5 also can @CAPS13 worrying about keeping track of papers. Everything can be saved to a laptop. Computers organized files so even a messy student can keep organized, another advantage is that anything typed on a computer is neat and easy to understand @CAPS9 some handwriting, @ORGANIZATION2 in @ORGANIZATION1 is an example of how schools can be simplified with laptops. Each @CAPS5 is given one to use @CAPS4 of books, ""@CAPS6 is so much easier"" said one student. @CAPS3 is very difficult for some kinds. Computers can make @CAPS6 simplier. My last argument is that people can talk to anyone using chat sites. if someone has a cousin distance country they can still keep in touch @CAPS6's the sam for a friends who moved. @CAPS10-mail is a lot faster than @CAPS7 @CAPS8 mail carriers taking a @CAPS10-mail from one person to another is almost instantanious @CAPS6 is also more private, @CAPS9 mail that is just sealed with give, @CAPS10-mails are pass word protected, there are also other sites that are for socializing, @CAPS11 messages also for People talk with one another, This can help people learn about culture in other cities, @CAPS12 and sometimes even Different countries, @CAPS2 sites can help close the gap between cultures, They can help get video racism they can help make the world more ideal. Computers make our comunity better, They let us learn about faraway places, make @CAPS6 easier to enjoy @CAPS3, and enable us to talk to other people from almost anywhere, so, @CAPS13 anything about, You'll realize computers @CAPS14 are benificial to our society.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21502,8,"A @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 A @CAPS4 @CAPS5. I felt simply @CAPS5. I was very stoical; my life was nadir. Helplessly. I had written a @CAPS2 to my hero; no reply. I was determine to wait @CAPS3 see if my hero would ever reply.... My hero is amazing, lighting, astounding; his name is @PERSON6. I understand his music.  My best friend @PERSON4 @CAPS3 I, would always talk about how awesome his music is; in fact @CAPS6 @CAPS4 started because of @ORGANIZATION1. We were two different people; I didn'@CAPS8 even think we could be friends, or have anything in common. @CAPS20' music brought us together.  @CAPS17 @CAPS3 I wrote a @CAPS2 to @LOCATION1; I thought to myself ""@PERSON6 is not even going to look at it,"" but I watched @PERSON4 write the @CAPS2. Weeks @CAPS3 weeks past by @CAPS3 I really thought @ORGANIZATION1 wasn'@CAPS8 going to read or reply. After that @CAPS6 @CAPS4 started to dilapidated. I felt discourage; we only talked about @PERSON6 @CAPS3 @CAPS6 photography project. We were really procrastinating toward @CAPS6 project; I had been a little distracted with cheer-leading @CAPS3 homework form the high school; not college homework. I was ignoring @PERSON4 calls @CAPS3 texts. Until I realize I had made a wrong choice; @CAPS15 I called my friend @PERSON4--thank god I did. A week later @PERSON4 @CAPS3 I @CAPS3 two of my friends: @PERSON5, my best friend since seventh grade; @LOCATION2, my best friend since eighth grade, had went to watch this really vehement movie. After the movie we went to meet up with some friends at the dorms. On @CAPS6 way there, @PERSON2 @CAPS3 I were telling @PERSON5 @CAPS3 @PERSON4 about @CAPS6 amazing experience in health: @CAPS6 health teacher had given us an assignment about what a perfect body should look like. @PERSON2 @CAPS3 I, facetious made an alien-looking body. The toes of this alien were coming out of its shoes @CAPS3 @CAPS6 alien had warts all over. We laughed non-stop, obviously we didn'@CAPS8 turn it in. When we arrived to the dorms, @CAPS3 @PERSON4 presented me to his friend @CAPS8.J; @CAPS18 was a big fan of @ORGANIZATION1. ""@CAPS9."" @CAPS10 we played various games I notice @CAPS8.J, had some warts on his hands, @CAPS3 when @CAPS18 took off his shoes; to put on his saddles, I couldn'@CAPS8 help but notice @CAPS18 somewhat reminded me of @CAPS6 drawing. I hysterically started to laugh non-stop, my friend @CAPS12 kept asking me why I was laughing, I said ""@CAPS8.J looks like my alien,"" @CAPS18 said ""wow that's rude."" I said ""In my eyes that's the perfect body."" We all had a good laugh @CAPS3 kept playing games @CAPS3 listening to @ORGANIZATION1. The next day @PERSON4 @CAPS3 I had to meet, to work on @CAPS6 photography project. All we had to accomplish was to take pictures of each-other @CAPS3 the things that we like @CAPS3 dislike. It was called: getting to really know a person. I learned a lot about @PERSON4 threw this project. In my opinion, I sometimes live life to fast, @CAPS3 I can barely catch my breath. I want to do everything but school @CAPS3 sports sometimes held me back; not in a bad way. I just have less time to hangout with friends or simply rest. But I love my life @CAPS3 wouldn'@CAPS8 trade it; everything that I do gets me closer to my goal: @CAPS14.B.I agent. This project was vehement. To me it was a @CAPS1, a way of life telling me ""hang on, you'll make it;"" all due to a simple call. We were working hard, when @PERSON4 phone kept ringing. I was a little cantankerous. I said "" @PERSON4 answer the phone!"" @CAPS15 @CAPS18 did. @CAPS18 said "" oh my god, @CAPS16 is @PERSON6, I said ""stop messing around, now lets get back to work!"" @CAPS17 put his phone on speaker, @CAPS3 there it was; my hero on the phone! I was @CAPS15 happy that I started to cry, how could this be happening to us! I blacked-out, it was like I was stoical. How could this ever happen to ""quotidian teens."" I could hear @PERSON4 talking to @ORGANIZATION1 but I was making my my mind convoluted. I took a gasp of air, @CAPS3 said ""hello."" (I was still in shock.) @CAPS18 said "" hello @PERSON3, good luck in track."" @CAPS3 that's when I past-out. When I woke up @PERSON4 @CAPS3 I couldn'@CAPS8 believe it. We cried, then to ease the tension, @PERSON4 said ""@CAPS16, you talked to your husband."" We laughed for a long time. @CAPS17 @CAPS3 I have the best memory together. @CAPS6 @CAPS4 started because of @CAPS20 music, @CAPS3 it will never end. That day I realized: one: miracles happen; two: laugh heals the heart; @CAPS3 three: always have faith, never give up, someone will always hear you @CAPS3 give you advice when everything feels like is coming down on you @CAPS3 if it is as @PERSON1 said ""jump of a cliff, @CAPS3 built your wings on the way down,"" or someone will help you built them!  As @PERSON6 said ""come take my hand, we'll walk this road together.""   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7021,3,"In the short story “Rough road ahead .Do not exceed posted speed limit ,” The cyclist faced many difficulties .These difficulties were the result of the setting .The story takes place in “the high deserts of California in June “ .Because the month June is very warm , and the climate of California is usually hot and dry ,the cyclist ran into problems .Not only did this affect the cyclist , but he travelling through the desert .The setting also included several abandoned towns along the way , which contributed to the problem .The cyclistsoon ran out of water , and discovered the towns that lay before him were unoccupied .He had no choice but to continue with his the journey .",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7624,3,"In the essay “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed @CAPS1,” the setting is used to alter the cyclists mood and as a reflection of his situation. For example, the statement “the cool pines and rushing river of Yosemite had my name written all over them” helps describe the cyclist situation. The idea of lush, cool water vegetation gives the @CAPS4 hope during his increasinlgly hellish trip. The beauty of that setting also reflects on the comfort that would come from reaching Yosemite; the good setting equal a good out come. Later on, the cyclist comes across “one ramshackle shed, several rusts pump, and a corral that couldn’t hold in the lamest make.” This is a depressing setting symbolizing a complete loss of hope. And inteact at this point the cyclist becomes troubles to his situation. While pedaling through desert, the cyclist becomes even more factory when tumble seed, which is always a symbol of a deserted area, cones by. The nile of setting to affect and mirror mood is nothing new. There are many examples of this literary technique throughout history. For example, in his story “The @CAPS2 of @CAPS3 @PERSON1.” @CAPS4 @PERSON1 was a deslated land filled wild beast to symbolize and cause @PERSON2 to change his personalith surrounded by uncivilized people and creating @PERSON2 tears of his clothes and hunt like a dog. The setting of a desert in the uncultured. Part of colonial simultaneously cause and reflects on this change. The setting in the essay “Do Not Exceed posted Speed Limit” is used as an important for character development.  ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1020,1,"Dear local Newspaper, I think that computers have a good effect on people. My first reason is that some people at college are far away from home like my sister and my family talks to her through the computer. Also many people have an email! that tells them about sales at grocery stores or clothing stors and it saves people money using those cupons. Statistics state that grownups that use the computer at night feel more awake in the @TIME1. My second reason is that if someone is going on vacation or they are moving they can go on the internet and find out if where there going is safe or if they have a nice school there and they can learn about the place and see what it looks like. they can also find out about colleges and see how nice they are see if its a small school if there are alot of kids that go to that school and etc. My third and final reason is that when people use the computer there. hand eye coordination gets better because when your typing your moving your fingers and your geting the feeling when you use it and your geting faster at typing. Also your not just siting there your moving your fingers and your using your brain. Scholastic kids states that kids who use the the computer and use the keyboark brings there @CAPS1 up @NUM1 points. in conclusion I dont think that the computer has a bad effect after your done reading thise I hope you agree with me.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
319,1,"Computers definitely have a positive impact on society. They help organize your thoughts, which stress. So, they contain many inspirational articles which can convince kids to strive for surless. Lastly, when all else fails, the computer can be a great way to relax and clear your mind. Computers help organize your thoughts, which helps reduce stress. Imagine you working on a project in school. Everybody can add to it, and you can selectively choose which additions you want. In addition, you @MONTH1 also block the programs that you don't want. This device is called the computer, and it's changed @LOCATION1's society for the better. On average, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 @CAPS1 suffer from stress. Now if you organize your thoughts on the computer, and are able to look through them again at why a huge alleviated. Instead of worrying thoughts you @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not remember, you now have confidence that you can look back and find your thoughts right on your @CAPS2. Reduced stress trading to confidence effect on society. Also, the computer contains articles that @MONTH1 insure our children to strive for their goals. Once child read an article @PERSON1, @ORGANIZATION1 book. As an @NUM3 using @PERSON1 as well in school. By games, I observe how into @CAPS3 since I started seeing @PERSON1 as role model to me, high making a stride for a @CAPS4.O @CAPS5. Where did this inspiration come from? Researching @PERSON1 on the internet. The internet, in this instance, obviously had a positive impact on @CAPS6 society. Lastly, when all else fails, you can rely on the computer to make stressful situations seem less overwhelming. If you have the ability to solve a problem, then why can't you solve it? Often times, the answer to this question is that the situation is too overwhelming. If you take a break go on you @MONTH1 relax simple games put out a variety of websites. Now say you came back and attack the problem again. You continually chip away at it, and it seems overwhelming. Thank you computer gods! The computer, in this instance, has made - positive impact an @CAPS6 society. So as you can tell, computers make a strong, positive impact on @CAPS6 society.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6205,3,The story “Do not exceed posted speed limit is about a cyclist who got bad direction to Yosemite National Park and has a depleeding water supply is extreme heat. He is doubtful that he will make is journey because he is dehydrated and dizzy.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9590,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to show Saeng’s determination despite her sadness. She misses Vietnam, but she will take the test again next year. The author’s choice of words in the concluding paragraph convey a sense of hope and something to look forward to. In the story, Saeng is disapointed in herself for failing the test, but buying the plant helps her because it reminds her of home. The idea that Saeng is persistant and the hopeful tone of the story are expressed in this final paragraph.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3466,2,"What is censorship? Cenorship can be described as limitations or restrictions, and it can aslo be called common courtsy. The real question is what are we limiting?   Censorship is not something to support. Censorship to a book is like chocolate cake without the chocolate, its taking away the value and fun out of education. Though many @MONTH1 disapprove, libraries shouldn't censor their books, movies, or music because of that.      Some @MONTH1 find that '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' or 'The @CAPS3 of @PERSON1' are offensive books because of their repeated use of the '@CAPS4' word. There is also some arguement to that, there are several @CAPS5 @CAPS6 that I know that find the '@CAPS4' word offensive, but not in this case. They say that it brings more educational value to the book, because in the day of @PERSON1 the '@CAPS4' word was an excepted word. Thats just how it was back then.     Back then and now censorship is hiding reality. People who write, sing, and direct things that are considerd 'inapropriate' are the ones who are trying to set the truth free. The 'inapropriate' language, or experiences are the ones that really happen and are the words that are really said. By using censorship you are sheltering the world.      Cesorship is tool we use to block ourselves from reality. Is that the right choice? Is it right sending sheltered teens out in the world unable to fend for themselves? Or should we let them understand how it really works",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18559,7,One time @CAPS1 mom took a test to become a @CAPS2. That means certified nursing assistant. After she took the test she was very nervous. She waited and waited. A phone call would come very soon but she had to have patients. The first day she took the test it was very hard to have patients. I understoond because I get that feeling when I’m waiting for test results. It is nerve racking and exciting. The next day was not as hard. She just went on with her day. The third day of waiting she started wondering if the call would come. Later that day the phone rang. A smile spread across her face. She had passed the test. This is a time @CAPS1 mom showed patients for three whole days!,9,10,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7558,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclist because he was really thirsty and then the dry air with no town nearby made it even worse. There was also the bumpy roads and hills that were tiring and mad the cyclist even thirstier. Finnally there was the factory that made him think about juice and made him thirstier yet.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13628,5,The mood was created by the author in the memoir and specic imformationI @CAPS1 the mood is like something in the sky that's why I @CAPS1 about the mood.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3294,2,"I believe that if you hear or read something offensive they should stay for many reasons. I feel everyone should know the history of the world, whch means rascitism or being offended. I feel if you are reading a book or listening to music and you hear something offensive to you , just turn it off.  You aren't being force to listen or read it, its your choice.      Libraries should keep the materials cause the people of the world should know how it feels to be offended. I certainly don't like the feeling of being offended, but its something people go through life with. There @MONTH1 be people out there that probably disargree's with me, its just my oponion. You @MONTH1 go to the certain libraries in the world that doesn't allow certain people in because of their oponions on the selection of materials the library offers.     I once heard a woman at a library talking about how she went to the police about someone writing offensive things towards her religion on the internet @CAPS1 happen to the person but, its the fact that she went to the police. She could have handle the sitiutation herself, by just comforting the person about it. I feel that the mintue she started to read it, she should have turned away or got off the website. It was her decision to keep reading it. I don't see why she should go to the police, if it was just the person's oponion.      Libraries should keep the materials cause maybe someone wants to know the meaning of being offensive or being offend. Libraries shouldn't have to hide this topic from anybody. People are offensive because they were rasied or just born that way. Some people just have to deal with these people. They might not like it or @MONTH1 do somethings towards them in there lifetime but, they have to live with them.     In the end, either if they want to or not libraries should keep certain materials out even if they are offensive towards people. Libraries shouldn't just change there ways for certain people that don't like the materials. They are plenty people of the world that want to learn more on the topic. These people shouldn't be stopped by the ones who don't like the topic. Its just apart of life",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1272,1,"Have you ever had a computer? I'm sure if you was around my age you know how fun it is to explore the internet. It's a brain tht gives you information about everything. But, it’s not good for you to just drop everything and go to your computer. Things like exercise, socializing and homework matter. If you don't exercise you begin to gain weight, if you don't socialize you'll be an lonely person. Homework is the most important, because it'll help you really well through life. It's fine to go on the computer time to time, but not for hours. Exercising will keep you in shape and if you plan on playing sports, you should jog a couple times of day. Some people make you feel bad if your bigger than they are. For example, I knew someone who was a little big for his age, but people didn't like him and they always made fun of him. I would suggest that you should keep your mind on more important things than a computer. Do you have ant friends? Or did all of them leave you because you wouldn't stop surfinh the web on your computer. As a teenager you should be socializing with your friend at the movies, arcaded and parties. Not in the house on the computer. Especially with your family, because you never know if they're going shopping for you ask me that's selfishness. Every since you got your computer have you been receiving bad grades? Education is the most important thing you need in your life. Without it you can't be or do anthing, because you wouldn't have a degree to get a job. If you don't have a job how can you pay for electrity bill for your computer? Education can get anywhere, if you want it. If not you can be a homeless guy in the street holding a computer that doesn't work. Do you still think this has a positive effect on people? You should talk to parents about getting their child an computer. For example, tell the parent to put a password that only she/he knows, that way he has to ask you to sign onto it everytime we needs it. Blocks off things that you think is important for your child., especially if your child is into sex. That is why I don't think it gives people the right kind effect they might need.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6208,3,"The features of the setting in, “Rough Road Ahead” affect the cyclist. The cyclist started at a camp ground and conversing with some old dogers, and he asks them how to get to Yosemite, and the tell him a shortcut that turns out to be out of date. On the road to Yosemite he sees nothing except abandoned towns. He is really thirsty and there’s no water anywhere. He thought he was going to die. He said, “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean.” It was a hot summer day and there was tumbleweeds and snakes by the road and him feel hotter and more thirsty than he would be if it was cooler and if there was a big river flowing by the road. But it was hot and dry in California and desert-like and it made him feel like he was dying because he was in the middle of nowhere therefore the setting affected the cyclist",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21350,8,"  Laughter is the only expression in my opinion to always be positive. My dad claims laughter is the reason for his six pack, it works your muscles. @CAPS3 is very important in a relationship. If @CAPS5 don't have any kind of sense of humor, consider yours self inhumane. When it comes to my family, I am always @CAPS3. @CAPS3 is always positive and happiness follows is in life. If I have a problem I think of something that would make me laugh, a laugh is always nice..  Relationships can be created by having things in common, see my dad and I don't always get along. When we laugh everything else is silent, it sets the mood. If @CAPS5 didn't laugh around my dad he would ask ""@CAPS1 @CAPS5 got a sore sense of humor?"" @CAPS2 again if your not @CAPS3 with me at something funny, @CAPS5 must be an outsider. @CAPS3 is positive and positive energy is good. I laugh a lot, I laugh out loud. @CAPS5 would not have the relations @CAPS5 have @DATE1 if it wasn't for @CAPS3. Some people say laughter is the shortest distance between two people. I agree with that statement. If it wasn't for laughter I think that I would be very negative, I would be disciplined more and to think I would be more distant with my dad. As I grow older I see me maturing, I laugh a lot less... My dad also see's the change, we have grown further apart witch is normal with every teenager growing up. My dad is very funny, and even know I'm glad to be growing up I wouldn't trade the world for the humorous relations I have with my dad. Laughter is all around, I see people walking down the street @CAPS3 on their cell phone. I hear of the phrase ""@CAPS3 all the way to the bank,"" I would be @CAPS3 if I was rich too. Being rich is a positive thing, but if @CAPS5 are not @CAPS3 and happy in life then money doesn't mean a thing. I could be poor and @CAPS3, and still be happy. If @CAPS5 are not happy in life then everything @CAPS5 have or worked for means nothing. Laughter brings people togethe,r @CAPS2 is no doubt. I've met many people by just simply ""@CAPS3."" @CAPS5 will be surprised what @CAPS5 can get by just putting a smile on your face, or if @CAPS5 find something funny, ""@CAPS6."" I have a very humorous dad, I would not change it. I believe everything happens for a reason, and I believe that everyone deserves a good laugh and to be happy. I think they deserve it, it's unfortunate not everyone is happy in life, so why don't @CAPS5 personally go out of your way and make someone laugh? @CAPS5 don't know their situation, it is nearly possible a laugh can take @CAPS5 many places. @CAPS5 never know what a laugh will bring @CAPS5 until @CAPS5 find out? Laughter is a strong element in relations, and can base a personality profile of someone and who they are.",18,18,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7530,3,"From reading the story, l believe the setting of the desert he was cycling affected him immensly. I believe it affected him in the way his attitude of the cyclist changed for the worst. At first he was very motivated, determined, and hydrated. As time and miles went on the scenery mover changed.That can be really hard. in heated water or, you need to be as hydrated ad possible, especially it an enduring in physical activity. When time he went on, he was getting low on water and had nothing in think about a long other them, how much larger, how thirsty he was  and is this worth it? It is a lot eager to the motivated when there is thing to look at to keep your mind of the attitude of the cyclist changed for the worst. In my point of view strongly believe that it could have been form working at the some sandy desert for seeds a long period of time. I have ??? ??? ??? in exercising while making on  ???. It’s hard to see  ??????????? thing. My attitude will go farm.” I’m so determined to I’m bored “ to” what’s the point.” But I thought it was great how he never gave up ??? things got bad. It opened my eyes to see how great it is to reacts your own goals.        ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9960,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because they want people to know what happened in the story. Also because they want people to know what it might mean or say in relation to the story. The sentence means that when spring comes and when the snow might melt the plants will be out and budding but by next class or next school year he will come out and be brave and take the test all over again. That is what the sentence means of the story and how it might be compared to both things in different ways.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18638,7,To me patience means that you are ready to wait a long time to do something. I was somewhat patient when I was delayed at a airport then canceld it was not very fun because I didn’t eat all afternoon. But I was happy because I had my ds. The story was we went to @LOCATION1 on the @NUM1 for vacation to disney land. It was snowing when we reached the airport. We had to hurry through the check line and the security. When we got to the boarding gat we looked for where we had to board. I saw that our flight was delayed that ment we had to stay here in the airport. I aleast saw that we were going to new @LOCATION2 first then to @LOCATION1 but I stayed patient. Well that’s the day I stayed very very patient.,5,8,,13,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16550,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock over the Empire State Building. If the builder's would want to dock the dirigibles they couldnt because there was no right area to land them. ""... in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area"". Another obstacle was they would have to know the kind of weather because nature it's self can take control. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The dirigibles if landed on the Empire State Building would be weighed down because in the back would lead weights so, it would weight it down. Another reason that it was an obstacle was because dirigibles used a gas of hydrogen rather than helium and the gas hydrogen is a highly flammable gas that can do a lot of harm if there are passengers present in the dirigibles and could be very dangerous for the Empire State Building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4493,2,"'@CAPS1 day @CAPS4 @CAPS3, my dad was pulled over three times for @CAPS2: @CAPS3 @CAPS4 @CAPS5.' @CAPS6 is just @CAPS1 of several quotes from a book that I am reading that some people could take offense to. The book in general is a rather appeasing book, it's just some things, people might take offense to. That doesn't mean the book shouldn't belong on shelves.     I don't think that libraries should be forced to take books off shelves just because they offended someone. That's like saying you should shoot everyone who has made an offensive comment to somebody in their life, you would be left with nothing in the end. If someone finds the things that other people have to say, offensive, they generally stop hanging out with that person. Therefore, it would only make sense for someone to stop reading a book if they find it offensive.     Some magazines have really offensive things in them, that people in the real world say. It's not like your generic non-fiction books that come up with insulting things to say, at a high school level. You don't have to subscirbe to that particular magazine, or even pick it up to read. These days, so many things offend so many people, in so many different ways. What might offend @PERSON1 down the street, @PERSON2 across town might find funny.You cannot make everyone happy, and if you took books off the shlef because someone complained about the offensive things that they read, you would be trying to appease to everyones' wants and needs.     I think it would be fair to put a restriction on books, about age limits. Some of the more offensive ones could have the higher age limits. At the junior high I attended, they have books categorized as 'young adult' books, which means you either have to be in eighth grade or have a note from your guardian saying that it's alright for you to read those types of books. It'd be just like movies; movies have the ratings so that only certain people can watch them, why can't they do the same with books?     I guess what I am trying to say is that it would be very disappointing to me and numerous other people if you just started taking books, @CAPS7, movies, magazines, and so on, off the shelves, and out of market just because someone cried foul against it. If they don't like the material that they are looking at, reading, watching, listening to, or all the above, no @CAPS1 is forcing them to pay attention to it. They can go read the nursery rhymes, because those are not offenesive. Once again I say, taking a book off the shelf everytime someone complains about the material would be like shooting every person who has ever made an offensive comment to someone in their lifetime, you'd be left with nothing.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7692,3,"The story “Rough road ahead: do not exceed posted, speed limit “ tells of a biking trip gone wrong. But the story would  not be as terrifying if it had happend in a different place. The setting plays a large role in the story. The story begins on a present summer evening but as the man bikes he arrives at ghost town devold of evil life, later feeling of double sets In when he arrives at “one ramshockle shed, severall rusty pumps and a corrol that couldn’t hold these lamest mule. ” later we fear panic set in as these terrain becomes hilly and tumbleweeds and snakes cross the path. Like an cold wesstern. Finally all  hope is lost when he reaches these grapes Juice factory and fInd, “a sand blasted picture of a Young boy, ” The setting is a power full tool which greatly influences the cyclist.  ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6466,3,"The cyclist in ”Rough road Ahead” was riding his bike in the middle of June, and in California. Both are very bad if you are lost and on a bike. This is because in June it usually hot, and I know in @CAPS1 it’s usually always hot, The cyclist is on a bike this means he has to pedde everywhere he goes. This is not along going to use up all his energy but also make him hot, And when your this hot you need to keep hydrated. But your lost so if you use all your water before you find safty then your in major trouble. Also In California theres like Hills, and mountains and stoff and peddling up a mountain isn’t an easy trick.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3265,2,"A very wise man in @CAPS1 life once said, 'The only way to escape temptation, is to remove the temptation all together.' @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @PERSON2, while growing up had poor influences all around him. @CAPS4 went to a run-down school, lived in a crime torn neighborhood, had a drunk for a @CAPS2, had no mother around to help him and had an older brother that often beat him and hurt him, emotionally and physically. As @CAPS4 grew up there were temptations to do the wrong thing morally all around him. @CAPS4 had no example of how to behave, yet @CAPS4 stayed away from @CAPS3, tobacco, drugs, guns, prostitutes, violence and fighting, and even something as 'minor' as pornography.      As I have been growing up with @CAPS1 @CAPS2 as a hard working individual and having @CAPS1 mother around to help me with school work and preparing for college, the truth shows how times have changed. Just before I was born, @CAPS1 parents moved out of the old crime riden neighborhood and out of the city for that matter. We moved to the suburbs where crime is more rare and mostly just misdimeaners. @CAPS1 @CAPS2 told me one day, 'I'm scared by how the times have changed. When I was a kid, fowl language was un heard of in songs and music but now-a-days the songs seem to be about nothing but sex, drugs, killing people, and even about rape! At this rate I'm scared of the thought of what you're kids are going to see, son.' @CAPS4 had a valid point. In our curent days the youth can go to even the public library and get books on illegal drugs and movies with sex scenes and music that talkes about killing law enforcement officers.      What has the world come to when a child of age eight @MONTH1 walk into a public library and check-out a book on cocaine? The worst part is that they can just read these books while browsing, they don't actually have to check the book out. A quote from the author Katherine Paterson stated, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.' I believe that rather than hoping they don't pull the book off the shelf that we should just remove the book from the shelf and @CAPS5 have the book there at all.      Public libraries are marked as safe places for children and adults to go to if they feel thretened or endangered. Well what if @CAPS1 @CAPS2 as a parent feels thretened by the fact that there are evils out in the world and they have become so accepted by todays society that they are even found in the public library? Then what? Public libraries and other public resourcess should be controled and monitored about what they allow into their doors. A parent SHOULD @CAPS5 have to hope that his or her child doesn't pick up a book about an inapropriot topic while in public but should know that that is @CAPS5 the case. Parents should be able to relax and rest asured that their child is safe from the filth of inmoral things",4,5,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6194,3,"The setting affects the biker in many ways. For one, he is riding through the high deserts of California during the month of June. It is naturally hot in the summer, but in the desert, it is twice as hot. This means he will dehydrate quicker, and will need more water. The only water the biker can find is from an old pump, but he couldn’t drink it since it was so hot; nasty tasting. “When I tried a drop it had the flavor of battery acid” (Kurmaskie @NUM1). His route was deserted, so nobody could help him. Also, the terrain was bad. The hills caused him to use more of his energy, which he needed to stay alive. “the growing realization that I could drop from heatstroke caused me to laugh,” (@NUM1). He also encountered dangerous animals like the diamond black rattles back. The setting also affected him mentally because he was silently yelling at himself since he took directions from the old men. He knew he should have taken the right way, instead of trying a short cut that he now realizes is abandoned and dangerous. The biker is being affected in many ways, both mentally and physically.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10301,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph so he can tell the overall meaning of the story. Also, the author concludes this paragraph because it is probably a moral to the story and gives you pointes or some events in the story you din’t know about.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13444,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez by Narciso Rodriguez the author's mood is happy, @CAPS1 he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" And @CAPS1 he loves his family and friends. oh so dearly. He is also grateful to have a lot of his family members who are close to him. That could get together for dinner and a lot more. The author says ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with not just scent and music life and love.""As you can see in the memoir the author felt happy and grateful @CAPS1 of the love and sacrifice of his family.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19240,7,"Being patient is a very hand thing for me but one day I learned my lesson. It was a @DATE1 and my mom woked me up at @NUM1 she say we had a lot to do. When we got in the car I didn’t know that I was going to have to be paitent the whole day. First on our way to the @ORGANIZATION1 market we got stuck in a traffic jam for about @NUM2 mins to an hour. When we finally made it to the @ORGANIZATION1 market we had to stand in line for about @NUM3 mins. I told my mum I’m ready to leave but she said I have to be patient and that being inpatient is a bad thing. After we left there we had to take my grandma to the doctors it took them almost two hours just to call her name. then it take another @NUM4 to get checked out. After that we went shopping for some clothes and shoes and the mall was very crowded and busy. We were at the mall for like four hours and most of the time we were standing in lines. Finally, we went home because it was time for my mom to start cooking. I learned that I need to work on being patient because it is a part of life.",9,7,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7116,3,"In the essay “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the features of the setting affects the cyclist in many ways. One thing is the water. There is little water and it is boiling hot. He took some taste of it. He said “It tasted like battery acide.” To me if the water is hot don’t taste it. Another thing is the land. The land went from straight to hilly. That started slowing him down. Last, is the day time. It started turning dark and he was still biking. He wanted to get as far as he could.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7045,3,"In this paragraph I will explain how the features of the setting affect the cyclist. The setting affect the cyclist in ways such as weather, road structure, & animals. All things that the cyclist could not controll. Therefor affecting the cyclist while he rides through.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10240,4,The author concludes with this paragraph to show that Saeng is not going to give up. She also concludes with this to tell people that they should never give up and that the should keep on trying. Even if they have to take a break to study or rethinks the plan.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4258,2,"I think that no @CAPS1, Book, @CAPS2, or any sort of music should ever be takin off the shelf, if u dont like what they say in these @NUM1 catagories dnt wach listen read or anything.  Just because u dont like it doesnt meen somebody else doesnt.  I mean think about it is there a @CAPS1 or a song or a sintance thats so terrible that you need to take it off the shelf i say no.  Also beacuse somebody might have not got to read see or listen to that @CAPS1 song or book ya no what i mean.  Plus all that money and time and hard work it took to make the song, book or @CAPS1 it takes up to like almost @NUM2 years for a @CAPS1 to come out and when a song comes out u hardly even no its new because they never tell you like listen to bullet for my valentin's new song on @NUM3 or anything and when a new book comes out it's usually like harry potter or somthing like that but no, no @CAPS1 should ever be takin off the shelf's nor book nor music nor magizine.                                                                                                          @ORGANIZATION1",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16253,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, nature, unsafe docking conditions and pre-existing laws against dirigibles were just a few obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced. The main obstacle ""to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself"". On the top of a building so high the wind is always switching directions which would cause the dirigible to ""swivel around"". Blimps or dirigibles always landed in open fields and could be weighted down with lead weights, but using this technique ""where they would be dangling high above pedestrians... was neither practical nor safe"". The builders of the Empire State Building also came across ""an existing law against airships flying to low over urban areas"". Now this law made it illegal for any airship to dock or tie up to the building. Attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building was neither safe, practical or legal.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9869,4,She is saying here that she will start a new leaf when spring comes around she is going to start a new leaf and she is going to do better on her driving test. I think she concluded with this paragraph because this shows that Saeng is not a quiter and she going to try harder. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12659,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" is a clothing designer who grew up in @LOCATION1 with all different immagrets. The mood of it is that home isn't a physical space but relationships. ""Growing up in this enviornment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" (@NUM1). He had a: ""Close-Knit community of honest, hard working immigrants.."" (@NUM1). I think Narciso would be a clothing designer if he didnt grow up with these people.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6499,3,The features that effect the cyclist are that he is riding his bike in the desert and doesnt have any water. That effects his journey because he is dehydrated so he needs to find water fast so it is making him get to Yosemite slower because he needs to find water. That is a feature that affects the cyclist,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1441,1,"Dear local nepaper, I have reacently heard about the idea of computers are not very productive. Sure, people get informatin and talk online, but that can be a bad thing, I agree with computers being overcused and used for the wrong reason. To me, the main source of communication is chatting online. Even I talk online all the time. Chatting online is also a terrible thing if you abuse @CAPS1. Children aroung the world talk to people they hace never seen. People are being abroad because they believe the person they are taking to is the real deal, @CAPS1 is a great way to communicate just not in the wrong ways. Plagourism is happening all over the world, People just take whatever they want, when they did not create @CAPS1. We take if you are caught doing @CAPS1, you can go to prison. Although there is a way we van help the plagorism. the internet has all the information in the world, and people abuse @CAPS1. I have seen papers that have information that they copred and passed @CAPS1 to their paper. You can tell because @CAPS1 is a different for than the others, and bad things happen. Teachers immediately you have to talk to a supervisor about @CAPS1. I know I will try my best to not playorise, I can start by getting my own information. Everyone loves computer and technology, but if everyone can just lay off the computer for a while, things like plagorism and the abuse or online chatting can be limited. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
732,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I do not think people use the computer to much. I think this because some use them for work, some use them for school, and some use it to talk to family or friends that are not so close to them. Firstly, most buinesses need computers to keep the buisnesses up and running. Like were my mom works she needs the computer for pay roll, inventory, e-mailing the works about jobs, and to look up companies to supply concrete, stone, tricks, etc. Buisness people have excuses to have to use computers all the time. Most buisness people also use computers to plan buisness trips. Secondly, kids in school use computers to do homework, class work, research for projects, or to go and study island and education. Some kids can choose to use the computers improperly but at the same time interesting. Like how cells divide into smaller cells how body systems work or how a girl or boy is made from embrio to birth. In addition, most people use computers. Like @CAPS2 people use @CAPS2 to talk to on the other side of the world or you can use aim. I have both cell phone to call and text people that live far away. I use aim to talk to all my friends, I use to face with. So, don't say all people are on the computer to much and for the wrong reasons, because that is not true at all. Finally, altho all people are always on the computer it is must likely to talk to friends you haven't seen in a while or for work issues, and for school related work. In my opinion all people will always use the computer because it is the way of life now a days. So, I don't think there are any affects on anyone because we all use it to our benifits.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18770,7,A time when I had to be patient was when I had to ?? my little brothers and my two cousins. This was going to take a lot of patience. One day I got a phone call from my aunt. She said  she needed a ???  sitter for my two year old and seven year old  cousins. she said she would pay me if I would ?? them. So I said sure. I hut n I did ?? I was getting myself into. A couple days were my mom ???(@CAPS1) @CAPS2 turned out piclity good for me after all.,12,10,,22,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
609,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think Computers are a good effect in our lives. Some of the reasons why I say this is the good to use when researching has fun games and activities, and they keep you in touch with long distant reletives. First if you just been given a assignment for school or work you @MONTH1 have to type and research on what ever topic a computer is a great source of knowledge if researching something or even checking your bills, @CAPS1, Computers are fun they have lots of games and activities for you to play and do. Just think you sitting in the house on a rainy day bored out you mind and have no thing to do. Just go on your computer and play some game or just find some activities you whole family could do. Lastly, Computers are good to stay in contact with long distant family members these days all you have to do is get a web cam and hours it up to your computer and now its they our grandma, grandpa, cousin, and uncle, or who ever is right there you can talk to them like you were on the phone with no cost. In conclusion, as you can see after all I wrote computers, are good for researching, playing games or doing activities, and staying in touch with family I @CAPS2 in my house the computer is mostly used for the web cam to see my grandma in @LOCATION1. Well I hope this letter changed you oppinion on this great invention, the computer.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13556,5,The mood created by the author in this memoir is gratitude and great memories. Narcisco is obviously grateful towards his parents for teaching him how to love and that family or friends come first. Narcisco is talking a lot in this memoir about his great family memories of all his friends and family coming over for dinner and his mother cooking in the kitchen traditional Cuban food while listening to traditional Cuban music. He learned that friends and family members are there to love and spend time with.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12741,5,"In the story I just read, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" I think that the mood that the author gives would be passionate, greatful, and happy.The reason why I think the author is passionate because he talks about how a home isn't just a roof over your head, its where your heart is. ""My parents always kept their arms and doors open for the many people they concider family."" I think that is passionate because in order to do those things you have to be really caring and lovable.I think that the author shows greatfulness because he says that he always thanks his parents for the sacrifices to give him a better life in @LOCATION1. Even though he says it many times, it just isnt good enough to prove how gratful he is. His parents changed a three bedroom apartment into a place he now calls home and that is what he is greatful for.I think that Narciso is happy that he had gotten a chance to spend his child hood lif growing up in @LOCATION1, but still take on the cultural tredition of Cuba. He is now a fashion designer.All in all that are all the three moods that I think Narciso gives in the story.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15850,6,one of the obstacles that had to face was they had to make it taller because it was sapoosed to be the tallest building. They also had problems with it so they had to keep fixing it.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7197,3,"There are several features of the setting that greatly affect the cyclist. One feature is the desert he is biking through. The heat of a desert in June can easily dehydrate someone. When exposed for a long time, exercising, and running out of water, the effect is even greater. In addition, the change in terrain and road surface would have an effect on the cyclist. Traveling on a flat road requires much less effort then climbing hills. If the road is also rough, the biker has to work even harder to push the up the hill. There is also the mental effort of not tipping the bike on the uneven surface. Finally, there are not any buildings in sight. When someone is dehydrated but has no water, they are desperate to find some. However, if there is nothing they know of nearby, they will start to lose hope. Once they lose hope they won’t try as hard to keep going and they will lose some of their strength. Considering all of the things negatively affecting the cyclist, it is amazing that he managed to push through and reach a source of water. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20803,8,"                             ""Laughter"" I once heard a man say "" laughing is the key to happiness, and if you do not laugh you aren't healthy"" @CAPS1 do people love to laugh? Because it laughing creates great memories, it gets rid of sadness, it gives you energy, and it even gives you a good abdominal work depending on how hard you laugh and for how long. There is nothing better than a good funny movie that makes you laugh so hard you cry, your jaw hurts, and your stomach is even sore the next day. Some of my favorite movies are funny.  I bet laughing or making someone else laugh could get you hired at a job. Say you go in for an interview for a job that involves you working with people everyday. Are you going to go in there boring and moditone? No, your going to go in there make the person who is interviewing you laugh and act like you have known him or her since @CAPS2 @CAPS3.  Laughter can also be abused. It can be used in bad ways, such as making fun of people because it @MONTH1 be funny. Calling kids in your gym class names because they cant throw a baseball as far as you. Laughing @MONTH1 make people feel as bright as the stars at night, or it @MONTH1 make people feel as bad as a basketball player missing the buzzer beater to win the championship game. Be careful when you use it, treat it like a loaded gun, because if you use it wrong it could hurt someone.  A few hours after my @CAPS4 died. My family and I began to talk about all the good memories we spent with her when she was with us. I had noticed that tears were rolling down the sides of my @CAPS5 @PERSON1's cheeks. We then suddenly began to talk about all the times she would get mad mad and swear at my dad when he was a little boy, then get embarrassed because she knew she never should have said the lords name in vain. After thinking back on those moments we began to laugh, and not just a small unnoticeable giggle, i mean we were laughing out loud. It then got rid of that aching sadness that had been in the room all night. I will never forget how laughter that very night would become such an emotional memories later in life.",20,17,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21005,8,"     Laughter @CAPS1 is one the most important things in life. People shouldn't go a day without @CAPS1. It's healthy and good in any relationship. It can also help with healing. The best kind of laughter is when you're out of breath and crying. It makes people so happy and wanting more. Don't take life too seriously, just laugh and smile all the time.  Someone dying is a dreadful thing. When two high school boys die, it's even worse. On a @DATE1 @TIME1, a group of high school students were walking on the rocks by the ocean, when a sneaker wave snatched two of them. The other kids tried so hard to save them by making a rope of clothing to reach them, but it didn't work. Two beautiful lives were taken away that day, and will not be forgotten. The boys were well liked and had great lives. The families of the students, the school, friends and the community were in shock, and couldn't believe the terrible news. How could this happen to such amazing people.  Hundreds of students gathered at church the following @DATE2, most in tears. They talked about the two boys, and had a huge group prayer. Friends spoke well of them, missing them greatly, talking about the good, fun, memorable times. @CAPS1 can make it better. As someone once said, smile because they lived, don't cry because they're gone. At the school's basketball game, they honored the boys, and won the game for them. Parents and friends spoke about the beautiful kids in front of almost @NUM1 people, that came to support the school. The game was a time for having a good time and not to sob and mope. This game helped heal the community just a little more. @CAPS1 and cheering really can help the heart.  As days, weeks, and months go on, people will still be heartbroken. Although, as long as we laugh and smile about the good times of those who left, we can make it though anything. @CAPS1 makes you feel better. It just shows you that you have to make the best with what you have, and always have a fun time with no regrets. Always tell the people that mean something to you, that you love them. Never stop telling people you love them, and never leave in a fight. You don't know when it might be the last time you see them. @CAPS1 is so important, and without it life would not be as great as it is.",15,17,,32,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9391,4,"The author concludes the story with the sentence ""When they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. ""because that winter hibiscus symbolizes a new beginning for her. For example back in her home town she had hibiscus's and everything was fine and normal, she lived her life and so on, well then she moved to the u.s, and she didn’t have any hibiscus, she just failed her driving test, she feels miss placed, and doesnt fit in. So, when she saw that winter hibiscus she felt as if she found something to help her feel at home or at ease almost. She felt a sense of security In conclusion the author ended with that sentence because its a new beginning for her and that hibiscus means a new start.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12589,5,"The mood that author has created in this memoir was a happy feeling because this is proud of his culture. He loves his parents and loves that house that they turned into a home. The author exsplains how his life begain in new jersey and how proud of his parents he was and that he looks up to them and plans on carryinging out the culture and triditions that his family had so that's what makes me think that the mood of that the author sets was happiness and fullness of this familys life, and as I read this passage I was glad and happy for him that he admires his family that much and how happy his life was.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13389,5,"The mood of this memoir is the importance of family. @ORGANIZATION1 says in the beginning how much he loves his cuban culture and heritage. For example, ""my parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me there rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful). Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen."" Narciso Rodriguez enjoyed his ethnicity very much. Him and his family were always very open and welcoming to other people. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, Knowing that they would do the same for us.""  Narciso also became close to other immigrants that were not blood-related to him. ""Growing up in this envirement instilled me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. Quite the contrary, our neighberhood was made up of mostly Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants."" Narciso was close to many people who he considered family.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13371,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was strong. The mood, or the feeling received by the author was show in a grateful sense. The author admired his parents and was so touched by their teachings. ""Growing up in this environment instilled me in a great sense that ""family"", had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" The lovingness of his parents and open arms in stride left Narciso feeling appreciative. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family. Knowing that they would do the same for us."" @CAPS1 the author's parents overcomed many obstancles faced moving to @LOCATION1 it never stopped them from aiming for success. ""The barriers to work were strong and high and my parents both had to accept that they might not be able to find the work they deserved."" Narciso's parents created a house a home, and for that he was ever grateful. The mood is thankful and gratefulness in this memoir.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13089,5,"@CAPS4 on the article Narciso Rodriguez"" by from Home: the @CAPS1 of Our Lives, the mood created by the author in the memoir is loving, happiness, and greatful. There are many @CAPS2 showing the mood @CAPS4 on the article. For @CAPS2 one of the moods created is shown in para @NUM1 ""gratefull."" @CAPS2: ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS3 that he love them anyways even if it is good or bad. Another @CAPS2 of the mood grateful is in para six, is by him telling his parent he is grateful by @CAPS2 ""I've often told them of my admiration for their strenght and perseverance, and I thanked them repeatedly. @CAPS3 he does it with love, another mood in the article. Those are the moods created by the author in the memoir, @CAPS4 on the article ""Narciso Rodriguez by ""from Home: The @CAPS1 of Our Lives. """,2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
181,1,"Dear Readers of the @ORGANIZATION1, Computers are machines that have been around for @MONTH1 years. With internet, you can do things like play games, research information, and even talk to friends and family, all through a computer. Advances in computer technology are beneficial to @CAPS1 society for several reasons. These includes that computers improve hand-eye coordination, provide abundant information, and allow people to talk online. As said earlier, using a computer can improve hand-eye coordination. In fact, it is known that computers can immensely improve your reflexes. This reminds me of a time when my brother went to an eye doctor and was told that his eyes had trouble focusing. Patrick, my brother, was then literally assigned by the doctor to play computer games to help his hand-eye coordination. As a matter of fact, @PERCENT1 agree that computers can have a gargantuah, positive impact on reflexes and hand-eye coordination. If computers heldful in this way and, in some cases, necessary for your eyes, then why would the use of computers be classified as bad when they are clearly a beneficial factor in @CAPS1 society? Computers are also beneficial because of what huge resource they are. the internet offers so much information for people of all ages who want to learn and thrive. For example, most schools have their students use computers for research. When I say most schoold, I mean @PERCENT2 of schools assign students to research using a computer. Principal of new city @ORGANIZATION2, @PERSON2 says, ""@CAPS1 students use computers at leat every week if not more. They are fantastic resource with endless information."" Computers are getway to countless amounts of knowledge that everyone should have access to. It is well known that almost everyone knows someone who lives far away. I, myself, have friend who lives in @LOCATION1 that I miss very much. When long-distance phone calls are too expensive most of the world and I rely on computers to talk to out far-away friends. Computers are the bridge between @CAPS2; (my @CAPS3 friend) and I. However, computers are not only used long distance. I also use computers to e-mail, instant message, video chat, and just stay connected to family and friends. A local teenage boy, @PERSON1, says. ""I use my computer to stay connected with friends and my family that lives in another county. I don't know what I would do without it."" This means that @PERSON1 and thousands of others rely on computers for communication with friends and Family. Computers are necessary for @MONTH1 reasons. They help people, educate, and connect people. You must have access to a computer in my opinion, in order to thrive in life.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18160,7,"One time I was patient. It was dec @NUM1 @DATE1 @CAPS1 eve. I was so excited that @CAPS1. On @CAPS1 eve morning I slept till @NUM2 I wanted to?? To come. I was patient so I played video games not thinking about @CAPS1. When I went to the store I seen all the @CAPS1 things. I felt like I could’t wait no longer. That night after dinner I found that I wanted to stay instead of going to sleep early to make @CAPS1 come faster. A little part of me wanted to go to sleep but I also wanted to stay up. I made some more food and went to sleep. When morning came I was so happy I ran into the living room. Sure enough there was the presents. My mom and dad were still sleeping. I decided to watch some to @NUM3 came and I wanted to open them so??? I knew it would’t be right so I went to sleep??? At noon I woke up and ran to the living room. My mom and dad and my brother were there, I opened my presents like a lion feasting on a gazelle, I was so happy I waited.",12,11,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13589,5,"The mood story the author creates is a prideful memoir of his life/home and what others did for him, while living in a time of hate/racism. He feels foreverly grateful for the love and sacrifice his parents showed to him. He was happy that during these times people of of different culture/ethnicity were treating all in the community like family. The mood and emotion of this memoir is of pride/love for others and caring.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21375,8," Moving schools is never easy, especially for a fourth grader. I had been dreading going back to a new school all @DATE2 and the day had arrived. My @CAPS1 reassured me as I reluctantly walked onto the bus. As I scanned the seats it became apparent to me that I needed to try to make new friends or live out my fourth grade career a loner. The bus ride was a quiet one, I did not talk to anyone nor did they talk to me. The school day started like any other. First the teacher assigned everyone their seats in groups of two, I sat by a boy named @PERSON1. At first I thought my school life would remain a solo one, I wasn't sure what my seating partners problem was but no words were being exchanged. The rest of the day went by rather fast, before I knew it it was over. I had made it though my first day of school. The bus ride home was not much different than the ride to school, as I got off the bus at my house my mother was there to ask how my day went. After telling her all about it she said that I should try to just be myself and eventually I would make friends. It was @DATE1, I got up that morning with a sense of new found motivation. I got ready for the day and waited at my bus stop, I kept waiting for almost a half hour before I went to my mom. After phoning the school we discovered that my bus had been in a minor accident so I had to be driven to school that day. My mom was surprised but told me to get into the car and she would take me to school, just as we were pulling out of our driveway I notice @PERSON1, my seating partner, was waiting at his bus stop oblivious to what had happened. Screeching to a halt my mom rolled down her window to ask him if he wanted a ride. At first he seemed unsure but he took us up on the offer. The car ride was spent in silence, listening to the radio. We made it to school and me and @PERSON1 start walking to class. I don't know what got into me but I felt like running down the sidewalk to our classroom. Sprinting down the sidewalk while @PERSON1 is watching, I almost made it to class until one of the teachers decided to open their door. At full speed I ran head first into the door and fell backwards onto the sidewalk. After rubbing a major bump on my head I turn around to see @PERSON1 laughing hysterically. I got somewhat mad at first until I thought about it, and it was probably funny to the onlookers. Scraping my self off the cement I walk over to @PERSON1, We laugh about the incident and head to class. That day we spent the entire class talking, even getting into trouble a time of two. Ever since that day @PERSON1 has been a good friend of mine, its been eight years since we met and there is no end in sight. Overall in my opinion laughter is an important part of daily life, and a great way to make friends.",17,20,,37,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3063,2,"How would you feel if you wrote a story about your life, and someone found it offensive, so the took the book off of the shelves? I feel as if the censorship in libraries is becoming a controversial problem for the following reasons: it is wrong to take away freedoms, people have different opinions and views, and some books, magazines, or songs are trying to make people aware of dangers.     One important aspect in why censorship is becoming controversial is; it takes away our freedom of speech. In @LOCATION1, we have the right to speak our minds. If everything we read was censored, there would be nothing to read. The liberties and freedoms of @CAPS1 citizens should not be taken away because of something that is thought to be inappropriate.     Another reason why I believe censorship is wrong is; different people have completely different opinions on things. One person might feel that a book about a sexual assault victim is offensive, while another person might think the book is informational and helpful. No one can base censorship on one belief or idea, because it will never be the belief or idea that everyone approves of.      A third reason why censorship should not be inforced as much is; it takes away the awarness of the dangers in everyday life. Stories about people who were kidnapped, or were in a car crash because the person who was driving was under the influence of drugs, can be a good thing. Eventhough the story @MONTH1 have some accounts that are not appropriate, it could be very influencial, and convince someone to make the right choice. If we censor stories about abduction, drugs, alcohol, or people making the wrong choices, no one will be able to read a story about it and make the right choice instead of making the same mistake as the person.        Although stories or magazine articles that @MONTH1 be seen as vulgar are looked down upon, they help to make people aware, give people the freedom of speech, and allow them to have their own opinions. Censorship in libraries and media should be abolished",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12797,5,"The author of the memoir creates a very loving, peaceful, and happy mood in the story. It is always saying that his house was always filled with friends and family. This gives the story a very loving mood and shows how they are all there for each other. Also, in paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to lif in our warm home."" This sentence shows that the home is very loving and warm. Lastly, the mood that Narciso has throughout the memoir is very greatful. He is always saying how much he appreciates what his parents did by moving to @LOCATION1 to create a better life for him. That is the mood of the memoir throughout the whole passage.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3118,2,"All libraries are not good cause some people are going to library an getting on the computer getting on websit that the child find. The people need the computer for appicatetionfor job an the owner be wanting to get a card .That is uncause for in some term. Out of all kides canlearn from the library an do there work if need it's so much they can do that they can be there all week.      All people from littler children to adult can still learn now today in the @NUM1 centrey . You can learn about your ancienty or about car crash or about or thing that are going on it the world . As like japaness or chin ,you can do so much from the library or from the books thats there.It's up to the family to get to know more about themself by the library .",2,2,,2,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10635,4,"She realized that things come and go but also change. That content times of the year the world around her changed. She had no control over it. She also had to deal with living in a new country. Living in anew country was hard for Saeng. She had to eat new foods, hear new sonds, and see thing that she never had seen before. Failing her drives test was hard for her. Not knowing the launge and what going on around her was tough of on her. the world around her wasnt something she was us to. She knew she had to change herself and work harder to get what she wanted.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15159,6,"Based on the excerpt, builders faced many problems in allowing dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. First, safety would be a large problem. Back then, most dirigibles used hydrogen (which is highly flammable) instead of helium to power them. This means that if there was a malfunction such as a fire, not only with the dirigible burst into flames, but the Empire State Building could too. Another obstacle builders had to confront was mother nature. According to paragraph @NUM1 of the reading, the location of the Empire State building has ""violent air currents"" with shifting winds. This problem would cause the dirigible to not stay stable. Although solutions like lead weights being hung from the back of the dirigible were offered, this only lead to more problems. If the lead weight fell, where would it land? The answer would be in the streets of @ORGANIZATION2 where pedestrians could be harmed. The final obstacle builders would have had to get through if they continued their plans for the dirigibles would be a law. The law stated (according to the reading) that airships could not fly too low over urban areas. So in theory, all of the plans the builders of this concoction had to be put to rest due to the governments law. In conclusion, many problems arose as building, and plans to make the ""Dirigible dock"" were made.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8997,4,Because withe the blooming of the hibiscuse plant comes new hope. In the story she sees the hibiscuse as her old life and with the budding of the plant starts a new chapter in the young girls life.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1305,1,"Dear @CAPS1: A @CAPS2. Can you believe that this tiny piece of technology is influencing our everyday life? The question upon many people is, do computers give a possitive or negative effect on people? In my opinion, although computers help with certain everyday life, I think that it gives one negative effects. I have many reasons for this belief, but the three most important are going to be stated. First of all, people are to busy on their computers that they spend less time. People are also in busy with there computers that they spend less and less time enjoying nature. Last but most importantly, people are so caught up with technology, they barely spend time with freinds and family. So, in my opinion, I think people should get technology, and the real world. Have you ever walked down the street and saw someone the size of a boulder? well it isn't a good sight is it? My point is, that can happen to you let me change that to everyone in the world. Nowadays, people are spending less and less time exercising, but instead sitting at home on the computer, or slouched on the couch with a laptop. People are ignoring their health and instead staying on the computer. I for one, know how hard it is to resist playing the computer, but you shouldn't let a tiny @CAPS2 take over your mind and now your future. Nature. The most wonderful thing in the world I say the second most wonderful to technology. Have you ever turned on the t.v. and see nature its beauty? Well you can thank and global warming for that. When people use computers they burning fuel which harms our environment. People are technology they don't care about their and surroundings. If I was a I would say, ""@CAPS3 less computers and @CAPS3 more green!"" @CAPS4..... it's luxury of having a family. Family and friends , it's most important thing. Sue to computers, many people are family and friends. For example: @CAPS5: @CAPS6 want to go ride bikes? John: @CAPS7. I want to play my computer. Kids and adults was single-handed. In my opnion family most important, unlike a piece of metal that has a screen In conclusion, I think that computers of a regular effect on people, life you people by it. People are spending less time with their health and exercising advance in technology. They are all spending less time at the park big or simply just enjoying nature's beauty. Most importantly, there is less interacting with friends and family. But, this is just my opinion, it won't mean anything if you don't agree. I consideration.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9035,4,"The geese flying south for the winter and the hibiscus budding are normal things to Saeng. The author wanted to conclude the story with this to show that Saeng felt comfort in things that she was acustomed to. Saeng wanted to have the geese and hibiscus there to feel more comfortable while taking her driving test. Saeng still longs for home and does not quite feel like she fits in the u.s. The hibiscus gives her that comfort feeling like she is home again, in Vietnam, Saeng still feels homesick because she wants things to be how they were. The plants in the green house along with the disappointment of failing her driving test bring her to the emotional state that she was in. In the second to last paragraph the author talks about the feeling of repetition Saeng has when seeing the v formation. Saeng feels that in the winter she will not have the same comfort feeling as when she can see the hibiscus and the geese flying overhead. It says when Saeng arrived in the @LOCATION2 she had nothing that was familiar to her.  Now she gets that feeling from the geese and plants. The author concluding by saying Saeng will take her driving test when the winter ends is a good closing because it gives you some insight as to what Saeng is going to do.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1418,1,"Dear Newspaper, I am writing to you @DATE1 because think computers really effect people in a bad way. I say this becuause @CAPS1 you go on the internet you do not get that much excirse. You also don't get good grades at all! That's bad thing. Plus when on a computer there are some really wierd people. I really want you guys to hear out my story. Go outside! @CAPS3 mom I'm on the computer! @CAPS1 your on the computer to much you want want to get exersce. @CAPS1 you don't get excise you won't be healthy! you want get excise. Also you will obese you don't want that! For instance when your in gym class you want to be healthy. So you can and you will get a good grade. Do you want a bad grades? That sums it up on. You got an @CAPS2! On your report card? When you spend alot of your time on a computer then you will get addicted. @CAPS1 you get addicted then you will not do your homework then your grades will drop. You will get bad grades in school. Then you have a possibilty to stay back. Plus then the parents to flipout on. This is one of my reasons why computers effect people in a bad way! When you go on the computer you have @CAPS3 clue who you are talking to unless your thier friends. There has been very many cases that kids getting stolen because of facebook and myspace. @CAPS1 your kid goes on those websites than your kids' always at danger! There are cyber and they could find out where you live that information about you. For instance there was a case on myspace that a kid thought she was talking to a @NUM1 year old boy she was really talking to a @NUM2 something year old guy. Then the girl went missing for about weeks. That was. So you can never trust a computer. When you take a real good look at computers you will see they are just @CAPS3 good. All my reasons before. They are you will not get nearly the amount of you are supose to. Your grade will plummet down @CAPS1 you stay on the computer and they trick you. So even know you can communicate with your friends. Its just not worth it.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6584,3,"In “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by @PERSON1, the features of the setting greatly affect the cyclist. The first major example is when the cyclist finds that the flat road is turning into “short, rolling hills,” These hills are increasing the difficulty and are causing him doubt that he will make it. An additional part of the setting which caused major doubt was that he was in a deserted desert. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” The horizon was what kept cyclist going. “I began breaking the ride down into distarres: I could see on the horizon, telling myself that if I could make it that far, I’d be fine.’ The horizon kept him hopeful and determined. Without the setting he would not have been in such a serious but luckily in the end the setting helped him be determined enough to make it.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12878,5,"The mood that the author created throughout the course of the memoir was a sense of happiness but also family. This family moved from Cuba to @LOCATION1 with no clue what to expect, no prior knowledge of the culture or anything else. All they had was eachother which gives off a great sense of family. Then there is the happiness factor, throughout the story no matter what the sircumstances they seem to be happy because they had family. In the story it says that ""my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This lets me know that he does view his house as a home and that means he is happy.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10449,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows Saeng wants to take the test again, but she wants to take the test again when everything else good and happy returns like the plant and the geese. This is true because Saeng says ""When they (geese) come back… and this hibiscus is budding I will take the test."" This shows her maturity and happiness and happiness. She wants to do something hard and maybe even not fun when everything else returns and is happy. Just as when she came, she was sad, but when the geese and plant comes back she wants to help them through this and make them happy too. This way they all can be happy at the same time.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12047,5,"In ""@PERSON1"" the overall mood created by the author is of gratitude and passion. Throughout the passage the author uses very passionate words such as ""aromas,"" ""endless,"" ""encompassed,"" ""instilled,"" etc. This shows that the author obviously wants to convey a very rich and passionate the and mood to the memoir. He probably feels very moved and passionate on the subject and wants to convey that to the readers in a subtle way. As a result reader perceive a very rich and passionate mood while reading the memoir. Another element in the passage adds gratitude to the overall mood of the story. The author added bits and pieces of phrases in parentheses that make the reader perceive the author's feeling of gratitude towards his parents. Phrases like ""(and for which I am eternaly grateful)"" and ""(which I adore to this day)"" account for the feeling of gratitude the reader perceives. Another way the author created this mood is with a more direct approach by stating ""I will always be grateful to my parents for thir love and sacrifice."" The phrases and statement show that the author feels very grateful for what his parents have done for him, which create a mood of gratitude. As a result the mood of ""@PERSON1"" is one of passion and gratitude that is shown through the authors choice of words and statements. That is why I would describe the mood of ""@PERSON1"" as being very passionite and full of gratitude.",2,4,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12901,5,Narciso Rodriguez was very grateful for what he had. His parent were important to him they came to @LOCATION1 to give him and the other children in his family a better life. Narciso Rodriguez family was everything to him,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19200,7,"One day my grandfather and I went fishing my grandfather always says it is important to always wait. When we got to our fishing zone I said I wanted to catch a turtle and my grandfather said, “that will take far ever just catch some fish.” I told him that was going to catch a turtle and that was final. When something pulling at my fishing rod I taint to pull it in and what pulled my line was a small white bass. The next thing that pulled on my fishing rod was a big white bass. I was getting angry because there were no turtles bitting my line. The very next thing that tugged at my line was a @NUM1 inch white bass it was the biggest fish I ever caught before but it weren’t a turtle. After I caught that fish I said it’s time for a break time. I was eating a sandwich and my grandpa was jacking around and catching fish. At the time I was finshing my sandwich and my fishing rod was pulling.  I had to grab my fishing rod and ??? in my fish but it weren’t a fish it was a baby turtle.",8,11,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12153,5,In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez talks about the meaning of family. Narciso Rodriguez is grateful to have such wonderful parents and that they immagrated to @LOCATION1. He seems to speak in a happy and thankful tone.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9056,4,"The author didn’t think that Saeng was ready to take the test until she knew more about it. Saeng had a lot on her mind of gardening since she didn’t have any friends in school she didn’t want to go their the would have nobody to talk to its good that Saeng vowed because she will never know if she would do good or bad, So the author realized that Saeng will take the test and pass.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1028,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 you know that two out of three @CAPS2 own a computer? Computers are a very helpful tool that benefit everyone in society. They allow people to communicate with eachother, learn, and teach hand-eye coordination and other good things for school.. Computers are a very useful and beneficial part of society. The advance in technology has upgraded computers, and now allows people to communicate through them. For example, new webcams allow people to actually see and talk to each other from you computer screen. This allows people no matter how far to talk to each other and stay in touch. With my webcam I am able to keep in touch with my cousins in @LOCATION1. Another way of communication is through email. Through the internet, people can type messages back and forth. It is very fast and easy allowing people to talk to each other more and communicate. As well as webcams and email computers grants people access to communication websites such as @CAPS3 (instant messaging) or @CAPS4. These websites people message each other back and forth very quickly and easily. It is not difficult to do, like writing a letter would be, so people can communicate more efficiently and easily. Computers are very helpful for communication along with @CAPS6. Computers are an advancement that could help people learn more about anything. For instace, they could learn about foreigh plaus. All they would have to do is go to the internet, type what they were @CAPS5 for, and it would come up on the screen. It would allow people to learn about places all over the world. Also, people can see pictures on the computer. For example, if someone wanted to go on vacation faraway, they could type in the place and see what it looks like. However, the computer does not just show places. People could also see animals, other people, the environments, and anything else they want to learn about. Plus, with new websites being created, people could actually see what the earth looks like from space. They can look at houses, the wonders of the world, and much more computers give people the opportunity to learn about so much more. @CAPS6 more would help people, especially students to have a better education. If you ask anyone in school, they will tell you that computers are a very useful tool. Firstly it allows them to type. Students can type a project or paper on the computer faster and easier. It will also look neater and more orginized. Plus, computers teach students hand-eye coordination. By typing or even just clicking the mouse, students are bettering their coordination. This is due to the fast while they are @CAPS5 at the screen and typing or clicking, they have a sense of direction and know what to hit or where to put their hands without even @CAPS5. Lastly, computers help students because if they need help, they can just ask one of their friends through the computer. Students would better understand the content they are @CAPS6 and when they go to school, they would already know it. Therefore, computers would lead to students getting better grades. Computers play a big role in society today. They are a way of communication, @CAPS6, and allows students to do better in school. Overall, computers are a very beneficial tool in our society.",4,6,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
332,1,"Imagine a world without computers chaos in war, even the cluter on your desk. The chat you're having with you bestfriend on aim wouldn't happening. The report on @LOCATION1 might not get done because all the books were checked out, in fact we wouldn't have noble or any space program without computers. I know of this happened I wouldn't be happy. Compaines almost relys on technology you can't just send a letter and have @CAPS2 at the office in five minutes. Communication through the computer is very popular. @PERCENT1 of the world use aim or another chat service, in a studie done by a @CAPS1 professor @NUM1 out of every student doesn't talk to family on aim service a quote from the professor said ""@CAPS2 a good thing to stay in touch with their familys as wel as keeping up to date on curent events. @CAPS5 computers are taken away information is gone. Its all lost in some pile of papers. @DATE1 time my computers crashed and I had a report due but all the books were gone. That report was done @DATE1 when they were fixed. Now thanks to the new computer @CAPS3 @PERCENT2 more organized a nasa is running on mars. Nasa runs completely by computers. Look what they have given us today. @PERCENT3 of all household aplienses come from nasas work. A coment from nasa imply @PERSON1 ""@CAPS4 would be no cars or phones without use, their coumputes to."" @CAPS5 thats true are they going to take away cars and phones as well. We need you the people to dicide. The people who made this country what @CAPS2 is to dicide do think we shouldn't have coumpters. I don't and neather should you.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6959,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. Three features I found were the lack of the water, the heat and the conditions and limits of the road. The lack of water really affected the cyclist. When he was died tried he/she didn’t have anything to drink. The essay stated how would say she/he would save the water til the end. He /she was so tired so the lack of water really affect him/her. The conditions he/she was in really affected the cyclist also. From the beginning he/she was told the wrong directions. That was the reason why he/she was lost the entire time. Finally the limits of the road affected the cyclist. Hills and different grounds did not help the cyclist. In conclusion, the cyclist had many factors affecting him such as lack of water, limits of the road and his/her conditions.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4134,2,"As a place used to gain knowledge and wisdom, a library is a wonderful resource. Multiple variaties of books @MONTH1 be found at a local library from documantaries to science-fictoin or just fiction. The most amazing part of a library is the fact that one @MONTH1 choose what he or she reads. Yet if one man opposses the view in one book and believes a certain book should be removed from the library, then the freedom of choice is lost. The selection of reading should be open to every reader, and although some @MONTH1 disagree, heavy censorship of libraries is an unnecessary meassure that constricts the ability to gain knowlegde.     In today's society, many people differ in taste or genre. So much so, that at times it is hard to find a common ground in a large group setting. The library is a place where people @MONTH1 be able to enjoy their diferences, reading different types of books spread across many shelves. Yet if one person dilikes a book, their opinion should not influence the removal of the book due to their preference. Author Katherine Paterson made a wise remark on the idea of censorship saying, 'If I have the right to remove that book from the shelf-- that work I abhor-- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books'(no pag.). If one person finds a work to be vulgar and believes it shuld be removed from the library, then what stops another person from removing a book that they dislike? If heavy censorship is allowed in libraries, then libraries will become diminished resources, only containing a few documents.      Still, censoring age specific materials is necessary in libraries. Allowing a child to read or watch a movie or book that is inapropriate, is an inexscusable action. Censoring books for children does not mean removal of said book though. Removing a book from the shelf of a library is just as wrong as allowing a child to read a book that is too mature for his or her age. Katherine Paterson stated, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none osf our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But... then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.'(no pag.). The censoring of books in a library cannot lead to the removal of books that have shaped our society and ideas, even if it is to protect a child. A medium must be found between true censorship and opinionated removal of books, due to one's belifes. Doing so will not only help libraries but also society.     There are many different opinions in modern society and due to the differences in beliefs and ideas, at times people will disagree. Yet it is important that poeple agree on allowing each other to have a choice. A very important choice that each individual makes on a daily basis is what to read. Libraries allow for people to make their choices and help to expand one's knowledge in the process. Literature, whether it is found in a library or at one's home should never be cast out due to someone else's opinion. Censoring of libraris should be considered, but not at the exspence of knowledge. Libraries should not be censored.",4,3,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12789,5,"The mood in this story @PERSON1. Moving can be hard for some people others it is an @CAPS1. Most people hate to leave their @CAPS2, work, and friends behind. Other people it's a new oppertunitie to meet new people a better job, or go to a better @CAPS2 for your education. I understand it is hard to move from cuba to the united States. Thats across the world not a town over or a street down. But he made a friend and his mom and dad love him very much. They always have food on the table so at lest they dont starve. It was a step down moving to united States going from a good jobs to poopy. The mood in this story is very loving between the family and all there friends",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14845,6,"During the construction of the Empire State Building to allow dirigibles to dock, there were constant obstacles faced by the builders. Architects could not place a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building. @NUM1 ft dirigibles would add stress the buildings framework, therefore causing the architects to modify the framework. This would cost them an extra @MONEY1 for the modifications. The Architects don't know if these modifications will help. Safety is another concern. Foreign dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, which is highly flammable. For example ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, on May 6, 1937, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place over a densely populated area such as downtown New York."" The Architects also had to worry about @ORGANIZATION2 and the constant shifting of the winds due to violent air currents. ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship which swivel around and around the mooring mast."" @CAPS1 dirigibles land in open fields where they are weighed down so they won't drift away, except it is impossible to weigh down the dirigible in the air. They dangle high above pedestrians walking around on the streets, therefore making it not safe. There is also the law against airships flying too low over urban areas. ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to a building or even approach the area."" There were two attempts to dock on the building. @NUM2 was in December 1930, the @ORGANIZATION3 dirigible Los Angeles Attempted to dock except it couldn't get close enough to to high velocity winds. ""By the late 1930s, the idea of using the mooring mast for dirigibles and their passengers had quietly disappeared."" Airplanes became the future.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15,1,"Dear, In this world today we should have everyone useing computers. Computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and even allow people to talk online with other people. Today computers are like the worlds biggest book of knowledge. everything you need to know is in a computer. You can look up faraway places, and zap theres everything you need to know write in front of you. Computers are fast and easy, everyone can use them. Today kids are so addicted to computers everyday they are on them. There are so many websites that kids and teens go on, like @CAPS1, and facebook ect. on these websites kids as young as ten years old are chatting with friends and putting up pictures. Thers is also webchat websites that allow you to use a webcame and talk to people anywhere in the world. Computers are a great way to get in touch with people. Everyone should have a computer in there home today.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18718,7,Time I was patient was when my friend was coming over I was excited. But I waited and waited. But she finna @CAPS1. Thats about it.,4,3,,7,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,0.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9985,4,"The author concluded this sentence because he was letting everyone know that Saeng would return to the hibiscus and take care of it still, and that she has not forgotten about it.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16176,6,"The Empire State Building was built with great potential, but it would never reach it fully. The Empire State Building was supposed to reach @NUM1 feet, being just inches taller than the Chrysler Building, when the architect who designed the @CAPS1 Building snuck up and stuck a 46 foot pole on top. Of course the Empire State Building had to be taller, so they set a new goal and reached 1,250 feet on December 11, 1929. Al Smith, @CAPS2 of New York and Architect, decided that the Empire State Building needed a cherry on top, so he decided to put a mooring mast for zeppelins on top. This plan was destined for disaster: the foundation wasn't stable enough for zeppelins, they could easily be blown out of control and onto the sharp tip of the Building, and also, since  zeppelins had hydrogen in them, they could explode and fall onto the densely populated @LOCATION1. All in all, the mooring mast at the top of the Empire State Building was built for disaster",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6514,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. He is in the desert and has a low supply of water. Without water he tired very easily .On top of that he had to pedal a bicicle. So he was thirsty and tired prambeing in the desert. This is how the setting affected the cyclist.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15381,6,"Building a big piece of work is not easy. You have to fix the negatives and do everything correctly. You never know at times you have to tear things down for hard work to be completed right. When looking at you did right things to prevent bad things from occurring.You may face a whole bunch of things when building. The Empire faced attemps one allowed to dock when building the dirigibles to the dock was not performed or built right. Even though said, swinging to climb on as build pressure by.Although, Building things is hard. You get the beauty and hardship out of it. It helps you reminded of your wells done correctly.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6852,3,"The cyclist in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed @CAPS1” was riding through the California dessert in June. This dry, bare setting made it impossible to find any source of water. The only time that this cyclist found water was when it @NUM1 and tasting of battery acid. There was nowhere for him to find water for miles. This lack of water and scorching heat made him travel slow and wearily. He even says that he could only go 12 mph in a 55 mph zone. By taking the advise of the old men and taking a “short cut”, the cyclist past through ghost towns with no water. This “short cut” prolonged his trip, most likely by hours If he had gone through populated area despite the fact that it is a longer path, there would have been more water to drink, which would allow him to go faster. The dry, hot setting of the old men’s “short cut” made this cyclist’s trip last much longer than nessiarry.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18576,7,"Patient! I was patient when I was waiting for my football game. It was a @DATE1 @TIME1 and I went to go get my shoulder pads, my helmet, and my pants for football. We woke up @CAPS3 earlly though we were going  to be the first ones there i thought wrong. There was like @NUM1 people there. I was freaking out man freaking out! I said  to my mom “you said well be early you said well be the first ones hear”. Well wasent she totally worng. I was mad at her. We were the last people in line. All of thhe good helmets were  gone. Mom said “@CAPS1 you need to be patient like the other parents. @CAPS3 i tried to be patient. It wusent working out @CAPS3 well. I was @CAPS3 impatient,I was yelling, saying “comon we don’t have time for you to be sitting around all day,we dont’t have time to christmass.@CAPS2 when i got there i said out loud “@CAPS2! The football stuff got mad at me,“@CAPS3” I said “I hope they have my size for my football stuff. Just what they didn’t. I was @CAPS3 mad and just what she said “come back tomorrow and well have your size. Well thats my story i was kinda patient toward the end,but at the beging I was yelling, @CAPS3 that shows ya if your not patient you’ll probley wont get what you’re waiting all day for.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
206,1,"Dear local newspaper, I do agree that computers have impacted human society greatly. Therefore, my opinion is that is @MONTH1 be one of the greatest inventions. I would say this because there are different help programs or websites that @MONTH1 help people in everyday life. Especially students have the ability to study from education webpages. Also, people are able to communicate online. Lastly, you are able to type stories instead of hand-writing them. Having the advantage to study online is great. Different websites with tons of information and true facts @MONTH1 really affect grades of most students. Did you know about @PERCENT1 of the @LOCATION1 go on educational websites for information for writing, whether it's an essay or non-fiction story? Thanks to computers, there is a great chance students @MONTH1 receive a passing grade. Communication online has made huge impact worldwide. Whether you use facebook, @CAPS1, @ORGANIZATION1 etc., communicating with family or friends is fantastic. For example, I use facebook and I love talking to my family down in @LOCATION2, whom I see about once every couple years. Online communication has affected people because there is an easier way to talk to other instantly. Just a push of a button, and you have immediate communication with someone. Finally, people have the ability to type on a program if they wanted to type a letter or story. For instance, if you use microsoft word, you can type up whatever you want. This has effected people because it is a faster ans easier way to write. Therefore, if you finish earlier than you would have if you typed it, you would have extra leisure time, or more time to get the rest of your work done. Also, it is easy for me because I type like the wind; after practice, of course. In conclusion, the invention of computers helped and still do help society in many ways. But, the three ways that i have chosen to tell you about in this letter, I feel, have impacted us the most. I hope this helps you with you questions about how computers effected people. Thank you for taking time to read my letter. Have a good day.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3834,2,"Bad @CAPS1      @CAPS2 off yes, I do think think they should be removed if they are bad. If you wouldn't say it to your parents face when your at a younger age then you don't need to be listening to it or reading it.     I would not want my younger kids reading or watching anything that they know they couldnt say to my face. There are so many things that little kids can see. Like at any @LOCATION1 or any where there are magazines with ladies in there bra and underwear and its the same thing with the guys. I dont think its right they should they them put up where it isn't so easy for the little ones to see. Those kind of things are justy going to get kids asking question that make the parents have to lie.     Then theres kids watching tv and they have the stupid cartoons where the kids are on there cusing and talking aboout sex then your kid goes to that channel when your not around hear all these stupid stuff. Then their going to go tell there friends what they heard because they think its cool then all kinds of kids are hearing it. When you can just take channels like that off your tv and make everything easier.      I think the worst is liking people sign about killing people and raping kids and all this and that. I would never let my kids listen to music like that i don't care how old they are. I also think that is where most of the stuff kids pick up are  from the music they want to listen to its horrible. I would do anything to make it where kids coudnt listen to that stuff until their parents didnt care. I know my parents didnt like me listening to it when I was young and I see why now that im older and know what all of it means so i'm never going to let my kids listen to it when they are at a young age.     In all that I hope that I made a good point and hope you feel the same way. Why let are kids listen to the stuff that hurts them and us in the longt run it just not worth the trouble letting them do what they want.",3,4,,3,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13105,5,"The mood of the memoir is that he is growing up in the house with his Mother and father. His parents giving a hand to people who Need help. One explaination is when his parents moved here and left all of their friends & family in hopes to make a better life for him. Another is showing him about his culture threw music, cooking, celebrations and taking care of other people. His parents let people stay at their home when they Need to get on their feet. And by always having people over for dinner (Aunts, uncles, grandparents, cousins, @CAPS1 etc...).",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
315,1,"Newspaper and Readers, Computers are a very large part of our lives and society. However, there are still people who think that computers do harm. Actually there are many positive effects that computers have on people. Among those effects are ease of communication, ease of gathering information, and ease of find entertainment. Computers have far more positive than negative effects. Computers have made communication easy for people. There are so many different means of communication using the computer, which are all free. For example, instant messaging, @CAPS1-mail video chat, chat rooms, @CAPS2 (and other social networking sites), are all there and help you communicate with friends and family. The positive effect that this has on people is that it allows them to stay in touch with people whom they might not otherwise due to financial or convienency issues. Being social is heathy for people and therefore communication is a positive effect of computers. Information is far easier to aquire when a computer is used. For example, if a kid needed to know about the climate of the @CAPS3 @CAPS4.S for his social studies project, instead of having to get in his moms, drive all the way to the town library, spent time looking for the book, he could just log on to @ORGANIZATION1 and go from there. This is a positive effect on him because it saves him some time and effort. Furthermore much more useful information can be found on the internet as well, such as: flight times, prices, restaraunts, stocks, weather, news, and basically any fact that you need to know. All at these things make having a computer a very positive thing in somebodys life. Computers are a great source of entertainment. In this economy, I know we all could benefit from not having to pay rental fees for movies and big prices for your exams or playstation games. Internet gaming is very amusing and you can find many good games for free. In addition to that, there are websites who offer free movies and television shows to be streamed right to your computer. These things are a great solution to the rising lost of entertainment. Saving money and enjoying good entertainment are both positive effects on people, and both offered by computers. I hope now that readers of this newspaper will now understand how good computers are next time you are for king for a late fee on a libary book or movie, remember that the internet and your computer have offered an alternative.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13061,5,"I think the mood was happy and @CAPS1. Because They @CAPS2. The boy Loved his parents. They had to leave theirs friends. Some family there and They would miss them, but the parents wanted a better life for thier children. They were @CAPS1. to Move.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3774,2,"I disagree that certain material, books,movies, or magazines should be removed that are offensive to some from the shelves of libraries. There are three reasons why I argue this topic. One reason is that books, music, etc. that are inappropiate should not be in a section that a child would go and look for a book. A second reason is that for a child to check-out a book and the book is inappropiate, they should have identification to show that they are of age. The third reason I think that things like that should stay on shelves is because adults have books, movies, music,etc. for them for many reasons.     Ther should be nothing inappropiate in a library that a child can get a hold of. A child should only have things appropiate that they can grab so parents do not have to be worried about the things they child hear, see, or read. There are some libraries that will let a child get a magazine or book, and let the child check the book or magazine out. This is where th problem begin.     All libraries should identitify each child when they check-out a book, magazine, or music. that why movies are rated, so that a parent could what kind of movie their going to be watching. A parent should keep a close eye on what their child read or see.     I think that things inappropiate should stay on shelves, but I also think it shoud stay in the adult section of the library. Childeren should not be able to go in the section for the adults. The inappropiate things on the shelves could be useful for the adults in some cases. There are some material that a  adult @MONTH1 need to help in life.     In conclusion, childeren should not be able to get a hold of  inappropiate material in a library, all libraries should identify someone the inappropiate material,and adults should be able to have this type of material on shelves in libraries",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18927,7,Being patient is waiting and not getting frustrated. When my family and I went to @LOCATION1 and @LOCATION1 state game. My dad was Patient and that is unusual because he is normally in patient. So we where surprised. when we got in the stadium there was a line of people not thinking and @CAPS1 sat in our seats so we waited for security to tell them to move it took about a half in hour for them to find as and again my dad was patient but the @CAPS1 at us could not wait and we started to set very angry when security got there  we had to wait for them to ghoole our rist barn he was still patient and after that we got a seats I was slat but the rezzon my dad was patient was because he did not want to get kicked out of the stadium so he stayed  patient and stayed calm.,7,6,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15287,6,"The obstacles builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire were saefty, nature, and U.S law. Saefty was a major obstacle because, ""Most dirigibles from outside the United states used hydrogen rather than helium and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (@CAPS1 @NUM1 lin @NUM2). Nature itself was another obstacle faced in allowing dirigibles to dock at the empire state building. ""The Winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (@CAPS1 @NUM3 line @NUM4). One final obstacle that would hault the docking of dirigibles at the Empire State building was U.S law. The law was agaist airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illeagle for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approch the area"" (@CAPS1 @NUM5 line @NUM6).",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6302,3,"The feature of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. When in the essay it states, “The sun was beginning to beat down” This shows that this affects how he feels when he is cycling through the road and this can affect his ability to keep cycling while the sun ??? him hard. Also when he states “I was doing a water-depleting 12 mph,” this shows he was also dehydrated once goin, very slow because of the ammount of heat and lack of water that affected his ability to keep cycling in the area.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4396,2,"Do your rights end where mine begin? In such a diverse society, clashing opinions are unavoidable. Does that mean another human's rights should be abused because we don't agree with their practices, beliefs, or lifestyle?     Everyone in this world is entitaled to their own opinion. What is wrong to some people @MONTH1 be right to others. For example, one family @MONTH1 view their children using curse words as offensive while another @MONTH1 see no problem. Diversity in beliefs does not mean that it is acceptable to censor society from cursing, religion, or violence disscused in published works. These concepts exist in the world and censoring them will not make them disappear.     It is understood that there is both bad and good in the world, and pulling materials from the shelves of libraries will not change that. Censoring books, magazines, music, and other media is denying someone the ability so see ideas from all points of view. Whether or not you prevent a young child from seeing all perspecitves does not mean the bad and good do not exist. The saying 'one year older, one year wiser' can refer to the aknowledgement of different ideas and opinions. As a child grows, he will learn more about the materials that were censored.     In some cases, such as in the classroom, your rights do end where mine begin. When it comes to learning about the beauty of diversity, everyone is able to choose what they pick from the shelf. The definition of 'offensive material' is simply a matter of opinion.",4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7365,3,"The features affected the cyclist because of the rough roads. This affected him because it slowed him down, I know this because in the story it said “Rough Road Ahead Do not Exceed Posted speed Limit”. which this means slow down or you will have an accident. Another feature has it was hot which means he was losing water because it either evaporated or he was drinking it. I know this because it said “The water bottles contained  water a few tantalizing sips” which means it was few left.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6536,3,"Heat, water supply, energy-all are features of setting that can affect a cyclist. First, is heat. When it is too warm out it makes it more difficult, and more inconvenient to ride. Second, is your water supply. If you are riding, and begin to run low on water, your in trouble. The author describes, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips”. If you arn’t prepared enough for your cycling journey, it will be extremely inconvenient when you run out of supplies. Lastly, is energy. If you run out of energy while cycling, you have nothing. Your energy is what keeps you moving and motivated. “With what I believe, was my last burst of energy, I maneuvered down the hill,” the author describes. When you are out of energy, your ride is over. all of these aspects are important to have before deciding to go on a cycling journey.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7086,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist greatly. For example when he was riding on the road he would pick a destination and ride to it. Then he would take a break. If this destination was a building he would be strong willed and determined. If it looked like their was nothing ahead but hills, he would just ride and wait to fall over dead without a care in the world.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9238,4, The author ends the story with this paragraph to show Saeng’s resolution. Her family had left a lot behind in Vietnam. She had the memory of her grandmother and hibiscus. edge. In the @LOCATION2 they are struggling as implied by the mothers reaction at the cost. The hibiscus she bought was away to comfort her. She thinks that if the plant can put up with the harsh winter environment she can do despite the differences in the @LOCATION2 and passing the drivers exam is something that many do and is a way to get used to her surroundings / fit in.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18935,7,"One day me, my mom, my dad, my sister, my bother went to fire mouitan. So we had to wait for a long time then fially we got to the front of the line, we got our seat’s then we sat down then we had to wait for a long time for a waiter. So we were sing song’s until our waiter. Then she came I said faster. Then she came. Then we got our drinks and our food then we ate our food drunk our drinks the we went home and that is the time I was paciet.",8,7,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13392,5,The mood projected by the auter is that of a nice and cozy place where the stayed and were always nicee. They let anyone into their home and kept eachother safer from the racists.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17873,7,"A long time ago me and my family were going to a cottage we owned. It was about a four hour drive. It is the funniest place to go to. I was so happy I couldn’t wait until we got there. I new I had to be patient. But I wanted to get there so bad. But if I would complain a lot I knew I would get in trouble. I know that because I had to learn the way. About a couple weeks before that we had to visit my grandma, she lived about two hours away. I kept complaining that it was taking to long. Then when we got home later on that hight I got my phone taken away for a week, so after that I knew not to complain ever again about something taking to long. So on our way to my grandma’s cottage I didn’t complain. Not complaining is smart to do. If you are unpatient don’t go on long trips. Its good to be patient since I was patient the whole ride to my grandmas my mom was happy with me. If you are patient people will know that you are a very tolerant person.",9,7,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4389,2,"I think that no source of knowledge should taken off any shelf in any librairy because a few people think it's offensive. In my own personal opinion someone could find a book offensive and another person could think it is reasonable. People can't make the judgment to say this is offensive to me so therefore it's offensive to everyone who reads it. Some of the best books on our shevles are the ones that @MONTH1 be offensive.     Some books are racist; Of @CAPS1 and @CAPS2 for example has some racist and sexist comments and remarks. If everyone got mad about that then a very good book wouldn't be read by the people who are going to run the country when i'm older. I know that all the older books would be gone to and then no one would know about what happened in the @NUM1's. Also some of the @ORGANIZATION1 shows people watch are ten times worse then the books people read,if you find a book offensive don't read it!     When i hear about a book being offensive it makes me want to read it. It gives the book charactor and makes it humorouse. We can't just have the same old books talking about the same old things because that gets boring after a while. Sometimes from thoughs books you even learn something about your self that makes you wonder if i didn't read this book would i still have found this out. Sometimes it brings out the best in people and thats the best part about reading a book like that.     Libraries are a place to go and look at all the books you could ever think of reading and no one should be able to take that away from people. I want my kids to be able to have the same options that i had growing up plus all the new books coming out. If you ask me it's just not right to take away someone elses choice of knowledge. Thats my personal opinion on taking books off the shelves of public libraries.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3961,2,"Browsing for a book at your local library that you've read, wanting to reread @CAPS1 to enjoy the sounds of its words again? You look shelf after shelf, not locating @CAPS1 anywhere. You searched everywhere, by everything that the book would possibly be listed under. You've browsed paper backs, hard backs; eventually letting your frustration take over.Giving up on locating the novel, you walk over to the librarian and ask about @CAPS1. She replies with, 'I'm sorry, we had to remove that particular novel due to a person finding @CAPS1 offensive to them.' You're infuriated, you decide to write a article to your local newspaper about the outrage of the books, movies, music, etc. that has been taken out of your local library.     Personally, I don't think that the media taken away from the library should be considered offensive. How can you consider what is offensive and what is not? A book could be offensive to one person, but not another. Different people have different opinions, and @CAPS1's not reasonable to remove a book or other type of media from a library because @CAPS1 contains 'offensive material.' @CAPS1's ridiculous; @CAPS1 infuriates me that someone would do that. If you think @CAPS1 could get into the hands of a child, or someone that @CAPS1 would effect, do not rent the item. That's why at most libraries, there are seperate areas for adults and children so that children don't obtain these items.     How can you determine if something is offensive? I personally don't find a lot of things offensive, but just because something is offensive to me, doesn't mean I will request to have @CAPS1 banned so that other people can't enjoy @CAPS1. If you find something offensive, just leave @CAPS1 alone. Don't bother, annoy, or hassle someone else that had nothing to do with its creation with @CAPS1. @CAPS1's not only disrepectful to the individual you file a complaint to, but the artist who created @CAPS1. You do have the right to voice your opinion, but sometimes, @CAPS1 doesn't have to voiced.     We live in such a closed-minded world. We have people who don't even think @CAPS1's approprite to show one's arm. I can see why some people take offense to these things, but honestly, @CAPS1's mediocre to report something just becuase you do not agree with @CAPS1. We have a vast knowledge of what's right or wrong, what is or is not appropriate for an audience to hear. If @CAPS1 weren't appropriate, you honestly think @CAPS1 would have been published? Sure there are things in book, music, etc. that are inappropriate, but to be so closed-minded to have something banned for use of foul language, minor sexual content, or violence is unlogical. You can find worse, hear worse, just by walking down the street just about anywhere.     To answer the question bluntly, no, I do not think that media should be banned just because @CAPS1 is offensive. We as @CAPS2 have the right to speak our voice, from two different perspectives. You can argue if something is mediocre, is offensive; I will argue back, just because I have the right to voice my opinion as you do. These reasons that enjoyable media are banned, such as language and violence, add emphasis, meaning, emotion, and make the reader dig for so much more in a book, song, etc. These are how the authors see their work, they want to show the people what they see, even if @CAPS1 does offend someone else.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9656,4,The author concludes the story with the saying because it shows that she has confent in her self because she did not pass the test she could take it again and know she can pass the test she was up set about it her mother when she talk to her made her feel good and confent to do or retake the test and know she could pass the test so that why I think the author concludes it with that saying at the end of the story.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9012,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he is talking about when Saeng vowed silently because she is thinking about what had happen a long time ago with her mom, the plants in her garden. Saeng was thinking about when everything comes back how will it be with the return of Spring, when the snow melts how will things be, the geese retorning and she will take the test again, that is what She was vowed silently to herself about. That is how i thik the author will conclude the story with this paragraph included wit it.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21219,8,"                  Laughter I have many friends. My friends and I are always doing silly things to have a good time, and pass the time. We are laughing all the time. There is not one day where we are together and we do not laugh. My friends and I believe that laughter is an essential element of life. One, blazing, @DATE1 day my friends, @PERSON2, @LOCATION3, @PERSON1, @LOCATION1, and @PERSON3 , all came over to my house. We were all bored, and hot, so we wanted to decide on something exciting to do. @LOCATION3 said, ""@CAPS1 don't we go swimming you guy's?"" We all agreed. My friends and I could not agree on where to go swimming though. We couldn't go to the pool near my house, because it was to crowded. We also, could not go to the lake, because it was too far, and we had no way to get there. My mother was working, so she could not give us a ride. @CAPS6 then said, ""I know you guy's! @CAPS1 don't we just have a water balloon fight right here at @CAPS2's house?"" We all responded, ""@CAPS3 let's do it!"" A little after, the @CAPS4 went to the store nearest by, which was @ORGANIZATION1, to buy water balloons, and water guns. Once they got back, they started filling them up right away. While us ladies changed into our bathing suits. After, we all decided on who was going to be on what team. The first team was @PERSON2, @PERSON3, and @LOCATION1. The second team, and the best team, was @LOCATION3, @PERSON1, and I. Both teams were all ready to go. Each team had buckets full of water balloons, and water guns. The teams were on different sides of my mom's green suburban. We were going to start throwing water balloons at the count of three, but the opposite team cheated and threw a water balloon before. Oh, but they did not realize that we had the hose on our side. @PERSON4 chased @PERSON1 across the yard. She caught up to her and soaked her with her water gun, but @PERSON1 threw a huge water balloon at her. It exploded right on her face. We all started laughing. Then, @PERSON2 and I started throwing water balloons at each other. We ran out, so we started using our water guns. Those too eventually ran out. @PERSON2 was all out of resources. I grabbed the hose, and I turned it up to full power. @PERSON2 tried to run but he slipped and fell. I completely hosed him down. My team had won the first @CAPS5. It was time for @CAPS5 two now. We had filled up more water balloons, refilled our water guns, and gone to our sides. We all counted, ""One! Two! Three!"" @CAPS5 two had started. @LOCATION3 started chasing @PERSON3. They went around the suburban at least five times before he caught up to her. He caught up to her on the grass. The grass was really slippery from when I got @CAPS6 wet, so they slipped, and fell down. @PERSON3 slipped first, but she took @LOCATION3 down with her when she was trying to get back up. We all started throwing water balloons at them, which made it harder for them to get up. @PERSON3 managed to get up she went on the side where her team was. They started throwing everything they had at us. They soaked us up. We had lost the second @CAPS5. Now it was time for the final @CAPS5. The @CAPS5 that decided who won, and who lost. We filled up double the water balloons, and double the water guns. No one got the hose that time. We thought it was not fair. Both teams lined up on different sides of my front yard. My team was on the right side, and the opposite team was on the left side. We were against who ever was lined up in front of us. I threw the first water balloon at @LOCATION1. Then @LOCATION3 threw at @PERSON2, and after @PERSON3 at @LOCATION2. Who ever moved out of line lost. @PERSON1 was the first to lose. @PERSON3 had thrown a big water balloon at her that knocked her out of line. We moved a step closer. It was now three against two. @LOCATION3 then water gunned @CAPS6 down. We walked another step closer. @PERSON4 and I were going back and forth at each other, but @PERSON4 had no more water balloons after a while and her water gun was empty so I beat her. We moved another step closer. @LOCATION3, and I easily soaked @PERSON3 down. My team had had won! We all cheered, then went back inside to dry off, and have some ice cream to celebrate my teams success. That day we proved that anyone can have a great time with some good friends, imagination, and a lot of laughter. I believe that everyone should laugh on regular basis. There is no need for sadness of anger in life.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19231,7,"The time when I was patient I was about @NUM1 because I was in @NUM2 grade im @NUM3 now but back to what I was sayin, I was sayin that I was seven in the @NUM2 grade and I was standing in the lunch line and these kids just kept on cuttin me in line jus for some lunch and I just sat there, being patient and myself. but I just stood there so when we did something else I was patient when we got up there I was ok it was ok ‘cause I still got to eat.",7,4,,11,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15227,6,"And the builders of the Empire State building faced numerous challenges in order to add the mast to the building. They needed to consult with experts and learn all they could about how dirigibles themselves worked. It took engineers in New York and government workers all the way in Washington to piece together a plan on how to make it work. Just adding the mast would never work. Keeping it tethered by one cable would add a ton of stress to the framework, so all of the steel frame needed to be strengthened. Making the mast appealing to look at to took resources. Ultimately though, all the plans fell through. Nature had been the biggest problem. When currents are violent up in the air around the mast, which would cause the blimp the swing around dangerously. Had a ship crashed, hundreds of people in the urban New York would be crushed. The project had to be scrapped, with the mast becoming a purely decorative addition.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9090,4,"The author ends the story with this paragraph show is that Saeng is willing to try again to try to get a plant that will remind her of her grand mother and  remind her of her old home where she @MONTH1 go back one day . So, she can see the near flower she loves and not the take   one.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7309,3,"How the setting changes the mood of the cyclist is that what he sees pretty much discribes how he feels. Like he starts off with strong less and a smile on his face. Then he comes to the first town which was a ghost town, that didn't really dampen his spirits because when he sees it he laughs. Also when the setting changes so does his confidence in the old men's direction giving. Like at the first town he still has confidence in what they told him. Then he notices that it starting to get hotter but that doesn’t change his mood much. @NUM1 miles later comes top a fork in road with rusty water pumps and a ran down car all that makes him less confidence in water level. Then he realizes the next town is a long way away so he losse more confidence and gets more worried about water. Then the flat road is replaced with rough road so his mood goes down more. Then at last he goes to a fishing store and so he gets water and his spirits go way up. Here is how the setting affected his mood.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12312,5,"The @CAPS1 is trying to make the reader understand Narciso Rodriguez feelings by describing how little Narciso had grown up with and how hard it must have been for him to live in that type of enviroment and home. for example ""In 1961 i was born into this simple house, situated two-family, blond brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey."" This quote @CAPS4 how even from his early days being as a child Narciso was still living in poor enviroments and did not have much at all. The @CAPS1 @CAPS4 the unhappiness in the Rodriguez family and how they are struggling to make everything better @CAPS2 the end of the memior the @CAPS1 @CAPS4 the happiness and how proud the family is because they are now doing a lot better then they were before. for example ""I will never forget how my parents turned a house into a home"". Again this grate @CAPS4 how proud they are to be living in a much better place and enviroment, And had to struggle to get where they are now",4,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17927,7,"Tick and tock went the second of my watch and I went on, the fifet te oct far and it was wait people come in a out of the nir or with presnt and box give tree candy. Cote qinges don’t fill up lot and lot of people. On a bolt the airpant I weat to the wid no and list to the ride like a hout latebile celove. And the most faist think happiy let my bag. At deivent soa wauly. I went back to the air prot and I went home. In contemns I was patience. In conteing I was patience I the cathiner   and at air port and nevier and what is patience is all about.",3,3,,6,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,0.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,0.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9993,4,"The author has concluded the story with a paragraph about Saeng taking the test again another time. The author concluded the story with this paragraph because Saeng wanted to take the test again when the snow melts, the geese return and the hibiscus is budding. She feels ready when that time comes around. Saeng is trying to say to herself that she needs more time to be ready for this test. When she gets more time to be ready for the test, she will take the test again. I think that is why the author wrote the paragraph as a conclusion.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9231,4,"The author ended the story with the last paragraph because spring time comes and geese return, shell feel better about herself so she can go and take the test again and focus more on the test .",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4299,2,"If you take offense to certian things, you shouldn't read the peices of literature that make you feel like that. Ask some of your friends or research the book/magazine before you read it. Sometimes the front can be decieving so make sure you read the description first.     Many people that read certain things @MONTH1 take them the wrong way and think they say something they dont really mean. Which is why they take offense to it, but the more you understand a peice of literature the less you are offended. You should try to at least accept some of what the book/magazine says just incase you need it in the future.     You @MONTH1 get upset when you read something for the first time, and @MONTH1 not notice that it could help you when you think about it. Thinking about things is a great way to learn how to deal with being offended, just look from both points of view. They both could have good ideas and functions to them.     Try avoiding them if you are still offended by them, don't read a lot of book/magazines that have offensive things in them. Ignore the adds on the television or computers that have more than what you need to know in them or if they make you feel uncomfortable watching them. If you read them it could make you feel worse or make you mad. Sometimes they can even make you stess a little.     If you are really offended by something the best thing you could do is avoid it. Avoiding something helps you to not read them or think about them. This works for a lot of situations not just this one, so if you need to get away from the stress just ignore them.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1251,1,"There are all kinds of computers, but they all do the same thing. Computers help people with anything they need. Such as, you can go online and chat with people, you can buy and sell things, you can go to college, you can learn anything, and it helps you type up your homework neatly. I personally think that computers are very helpful and we are lucky to have them. Going online can give you so many opportunities for anything. From going to college online when you don't have the time to go in person to just talking to your friends. You can learn just about anything on the computer and it's just so much fun. The computer to most people I know is the greatest invention besides the obvious ones. Going to college online is so easy. There isn't alot to it. Alot of people in the country online for college. For instance, parents that want to go back but can't go in person or someone who has alot of work but cant fit in the time to actually go to college. But they can go online and take classes on their free time. Also, talking to friends online is fun too. When you arent at a friends house you can chat with them online. Maybe you can go on @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 or @CAPS3 or even your email. There are many ways to do it on tha fabulous computer. The computer is also jam-packed with loads of information that is helpful to anyone in the world. You can learn about different countries, people, or even the recipe of apple pic. Who knows what you can learn. The computer has things for every person in the world. Since we are all different. Some of us like to buy or sell things on the computer or do our homework. Maybe even just a fun computer game is nice. Every person in the world is different, but we have one thing in common. The world knows we need computers and computers are the smartest thing since the calculator. Buying and selling things on the computer is easier than it looks. All you have to do is put what you want to sell online or look online what you want to buy. Then you buy it or sell it. There is more to the process like the @ORGANIZATION1 people bring or take it to or away from you. But that just the basics. You can also do your homework neatly on the computer if you have a messy handwriting. Therefore, the computer has so many things that can benefit you and the world with everything it has to offer.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13156,5,"The author's mood in this memoir is gratefulness, happiness, and gratitude. In paragraph @NUM1, the author shows happiness, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations... formed the backdrop to life in our warm home."" As you can see the author was very happy to move to @LOCATION1 to start a new, fulfilled life. In paragraph @NUM2, the author shows gratitude towards his willing parents. ""They came selflessly as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life..."" here the author shows that he's extremely grateful for what his parents did to help him make  a new life. Lastly, in paragraph @NUM3, the author tells direct explanation to why he's grateful. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1, the author in this memoir shows an extreme amount of gratitude, happiness, and gratefulness, to his sacrificing parents",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7502,3,"In the story, there are many features of the setting that affect the cyclist. One setting feature is the rolling of steep hills. The hills make the cyclist exhausted and even more desperate for water. For example, in the story it says, “Over one long crippling hill, a building came into view”. This shows that the hill was very hard and strenuous to get over. By using the word crippling it informs us that the hill was brutal and very hard to get over. Another setting I feature that affects the cyclist is the absence of any civilization on his cycling path. While he was riding he notices that there is nobody around to help him if he gets in trouble or needs water. The absence of people makes him feel stressed and worried about his journey. It shows this in the story when he say, “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind”. Also it says in the story “I was going to die and the bird would pick me clean, leaving only some expensive out door gear and a diary with the last entry on the parse of old men"". This shows that there was nobody around to help him and he knew it. He thought he would die alone and that birds would eat him. He was obnonely worried about the absence of people.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3766,2,"Certain books, magazines or even music contains mature or graphic nature. The music will always have ratings, just like movies. They dont need to be deleted from a library unless it is an elementary school. Most language arts are sorted through out the library in an orderly fashion, so the younger children will only purchase there age level books, or art of choice.      Music always contains warnings for the rating of the book. a child should never murchase a mature level book. books, movies, and music are all the same. they are made for certain types of audiance. If a movie is rated @CAPS1, then it is made for eighteen or older audiance. They are situated throughout the library for children, adults, and teens. The children just need to stay in there own age levels.      If there is a mature or graphic book in a childrens library then that should cause conflict. any parent would agree with that statement. The only way these mature arts can be shared without conflict is through public libraries. public libraries that are divided to connect with all age groups",3,3,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19278,7,"Go! @CAPS5 coach yelled. @CAPS5 soccer team and I were running sprints to get warmed up for our game today. @CAPS5 day was planned, first soccer then @CAPS5 friends birthday party. I could hardly wait. That's when I felt a rain drop pound down on @CAPS5 head. Before I knew it I felt another, and another, and another! Suddenly it had started pouring. @CAPS5 team and I rushed under a nearby awning. @CAPS2! The thunder nearly shook the ground. Finally the refs come over and announced, ""the game has been delayed."" I signed and slouched down on a picnik table. I knew now I would @CAPS7 to be patient if I wanted to get through today. There we sat under the awning as rain slamed down on the root and thunder cracked."" @CAPS1 would I make it to @CAPS5 party now?"" I through. @CAPS2! @CAPS2! @CAPS2! More thunder came. It had to go @NUM1 minutes without thunder for the game to resume. Before I knew it we were already on minute @NUM2. Even the slightest bit of thunder and we would need to start back at @NUM3. We were now at minute @NUM4. We listened closely until we hear a @CAPS2! From far north frustrated I say ""@CAPS3 @CAPS4 mon!"" @CAPS5 team began to count the minutes again. Finally after the longest @NUM1 minutes of @CAPS5 life there was no sign of thunder or rain. The game was back on! @CAPS5 team and I sprinted on to the field. We played our hardest that game but, sadly we lost @NUM6. We walked off the field with our white socks and jersys splattered. With mud. Every one of us were sopping wet. @CAPS5 mom gave me the ""@CAPS6 up"" look and I quickly ran to the car."" I will still make it to @CAPS5 party but, I will be just a few minutes late and I @CAPS7 to change in the car."" I said to @CAPS5 self. As I sprinted through the wet grass I heard @CAPS5 coach yell from behind me, ""@CAPS7 fun at your party @PERSON1, and @CAPS8 for being so patient!"" I smiled and replied ""@CAPS8 coach!"" That day I realized being patient is a good quality to @CAPS7. Many people appricite it when you are understaning and don't complian during difficult times.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13038,5,"In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez the mood of this is full of love and happiness.When Narciso is talking about his mother and father he starts to talk about how they always loved and cared. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice... I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" This shows that the whole house was filled with love because of Narciso's parents. Also,the way Narciso talks about his parents shows that he lovef his parents. This also showed happiness because since he would never forget his home in must've been nice there. ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebration that encompassed both, form the backdrop to life in our warm home."" This shows that the house was full of happiness and warmth. This is because of all the friends, family, and celebration. In the memoir of Narciso Rodriguez the mood of this is full of love and happiness.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21071,8," One day, a day before the party for my brother's @DATE1 to be exact. We were setting up party stuff and cleaning the house and the apartment because that's were the boy's will be hanging out and sleeping. My cousin @PERSON4 and I were helping mom and the boy's that were already here and their names would be @PERSON5 , @CAPS1 and @CAPS2. @PERSON6 was already here of course because he's the @DATE1 boy. The boy's were suppose to be cleaning the apartment but their boy's and the only things on theirs minds are girls and video games. They played video games instead of cleaning and mom got mad. Lucky for them mom was in a very good mood or they would have got @CAPS7. The last to boy's showed up now.   The last two boy's showed up and their names are @PERSON2 and @PERSON3 and @PERSON1 is showing up tomorrow after noon. @PERSON6 was so exited that he was turning @NUM1 years old , he said "" I'm @NUM1 years old now no one can tell me what to do"" and I laughed and said ""@PERSON6 go make me a sandwich"" and he said ""@CAPS3"" and I said ""so much for no one can tell me what to do"" and everyone laughed at him. He gave me my sandwich and all the boy's went to the apartment to clean @CAPS7 but when I got in there they set up @PERSON5's x-box @NUM3 and was playing @CAPS7. I told them to get cleaning but they decided not to listen so I got mom and they sure listened to her. She took @CAPS7 and put @CAPS7 on the kitchen table. They were not happy. They finally cleaned the apartment and got the x-bow back. @TIME1 all of us were watching movies and playing broad games then mom told @PERSON4 and I to clean my room , maybe a hour after that she walked by and said "" bed time"" and boy's go to the apartment. The next mourning.  The next mourning @PERSON4 and I woke up to the sun hitting us in the eyes and I said ""what a great way to start off the day"" and @PERSON4 said ""I know"". The best part of today is that we get to hang out with the boy's. When @PERSON4 and I got into the living room everybody was in the kitchen and partly in the living room. @TIME1 that @TIME1 the boy's thought @CAPS7 would be fun if they played cops and rubbers. The apartment was the jail. @PERSON2 , @CAPS2 , @PERSON6 were the cops and @PERSON5 and @CAPS1 were the rubbers. @PERSON4 and I wanted to play so we went outside and ran into @PERSON5 on the otter side of the apartment , he was the only one who knew we were outside. When I was running to hide behind the trees I felling in the hole that turns off the water for the apartment and my leg looked like cottage cheese and @CAPS7 was gushing blood and you could see my bone. I had to stop playing for the @TIME1. Mom told @PERSON4 and I to go to bed.  The next mourning mom woke us up and asked if we want eggs and bacon and we said ""yes"". I crawled out of bed because I needed to go to the bathroom so @PERSON4 helped me up the stairs and when we were coming down the stairs @PERSON5 saw me hurting and being the amazing boyfriend he is he picked me up and carried me to the couch in the living room and sat me down on the couch and kissed the top of my head and said ""good mourning beautiful"" and I said ""good mourning to you to baby"". Now everybody is standing around for their food to be done. The boy's are making pizza if you wanted to know. Then my little sister @CAPS6 walked in to the kitchen and said ""ma'am I want a cookie"" and mom said "" okay , here you go baby"". @CAPS6 ran off with a very big smile on her face. The boy's got their pizza now and they just went back to the apartment. @PERSON4 and I looked at mom and said ""wow"" mom's like i know. We all laughed and started talking about boy's and friends , family , animals. @CAPS7 was a very fun weekend and even though I got hurt we still made the best of @CAPS7. Even though I got hurt and cant do anything for the next two months or so , we still had a blast with each other and @PERSON6 said "" @CAPS7 was his most favorite @DATE1 he's ever had so far . @CAPS6 wanted her friend to come over but she had fun with mom and @PERSON4 , the boy's when they came in the house and I. Sometimes you got to work with what you got and @CAPS7 might turn out more fun than your normal plan you made. Just make sure your happy with the people around you. ",15,15,,30,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4060,2,"Should someones work catagorized as 'inappropiate' or 'offensive' be taken off of a shelf and not able to be sold or seen in stores? If you believe so, then do you think it is okay for the campaigners that run for @CAPS1 be able to express their thoughts and opinions on different topics? This is exactly what is being done when someone writes an article or a book that they have published to be distributed into stores or libraries.     When someone writes a book on something, they usually have a lot of interest in whatever topic they are discussing. Just as when @CAPS2 campaigners present themselves to the public and announce what party they will be running for and what their beliefs and disbeliefs are. If it is okay for someone to take a book off of a shelf, or even a magazine because people think the book is 'inappropiate' then maybe we should reconsider what the campaigners say on live @CAPS3.      Even if you were to walk into a store and there be nude magazines on the shelf, or cd's with lyrics that contain cuss words do you feel those should be taken off of shelves as well? There is a time and a place for where things like this should not be displayed. For example, when you go to a little kids store and things like this are being sat out for the kids to see, they will not forget what they saw or heard if referring to music. Kids have a great memory on things that should not be remembered. Like when they read a story and it includes someone robbing a bank, or a song that refers to drinking or doing some form of drug. When kids see or even hear things like this, they are more likely to try things that we would hope little kids would not try.     When someone spends months or even years on writing a story, they hope that they can get it published and be rewarded for their long, hard work. By doing this they try and get it to be published, and put in stores so people can buy it. Whether or not if your talking about music, movies, or books, its all the same. Things should be put out on display and people should be able to see all the different types of music and stories that are available.      If things were going to be taken off of shelves or not put out onto display, people will stop recording music, acting out movies, or even writing ad's and books. When and if this were to happen, people will not become educated with new available data. If there is nobody to write science books, or biography's then nobody will learn about new things. Same with music and movies, if people spend a few months or even a year writing a new album, or coming up with an idea for a movie and they work hard to get it done, they expect to get it out to the public. If its finally out and people have the chance to buy it, they hope it will stay available. If it doesn't and people think the movie is 'inappropiate' then the song writers and actors will more then likely not have the urge to do it all over again.     In conclusion, I think that if someone writes something or records something that has taken them a good amount of work and time that they should be rewarded and allowed to have their item sold. If someone belives that an item is 'inappropiate' then they should keep their comments to themselves, and not have the item taken off display. There are some people out there that enjoy things that are not 'appropiate' and they think its funny. Surely if the write or producer got a book or movie produced they thought it was good, and they believe that people will buy their product. So, if the writer thinks this, surely there is someone out there that feels the same. How are we to know if there is someone out there that agrees, and enjoys the book or movie if it has been taken off of the shelf because someone thought the material was 'inappropiate.'",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10205,4,"The author, Minfong  Ho, concludes the story with this paragraph for many reasons. The  “budding hibiscus” symbolizes comfort for her. When moving to @LOCATION1 she couldn’t take all her friends a possessions with her, but she could bring memories. The flower reminds her of home, which is comforting after she failed her drivers test. In addition, the “geese returning” symbolizes a new beginning. After being away for so long, the geese returning ushers  in springs a time to start all over after a dreasy  winter. Finally “;,.then I will take that test again.” @CAPS1 that one should never give up. Even though ve was hard for her to adapt to a new  country, she made friends a tried @CAPS2 foods, like a Big @CAPS3. Therefore, Minfong Ho concludes the story with the paragraph to show comfort, new beginnings  a never give up.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3681,2,Books are books we all read them and summary's over them. To find what we need to know in the past or future or mainly whats going on todays life. So we shouldnt take books off the shelfs just like magizens. They might have information to tell people around the world. Thats why people make books and magizens so people like us can read them while were notbusy in life or just relaxin.      People read bad stuff all the time in books or magizens thats what life is about cause there's some good stuff and there are some bad stuff to read about in life. I mean hey if you dont want your children readin them than have them not read at all. Because more they age the more there going to know whats going on in life. There's stuff thats bad like you cant really stop them. When there at that age in there life so there going to find out some how or another. Cause there are schools that have alot of reading to talk about good stuff that might be important for there future's.Schools are mainly why kids know what they know now because you got all your history  clases. That talk about slavery and every thing els thats bad. When kids say it outta class rooms they get in trouble.      So if they get in trouble outta class then why do would you teach it or even say it. History classes are very helpfull because  they teach you about all the different wars. That has happend and who invaded other countrys or states. They help out on findin places on a maps. That shows all the wolds state and countrys and even where we live in our country.     So really why would u take stuff off the shelfs if other people read them. Mainly why would you do it since other people have worked very hard and there time makin books.  Then have them published for you to just take them off the shelf. What if they wanted to do that to you if you wrote maybe some bad stuff  in a little writing.  Whats the harm in it anyway,3,3,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16296,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted some obstacles the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there are the winds were too strong and most used hydrogen instead of helium which is very flammable. The way that the dirigibles would dock to the building was by a cord attached to the mast. The dirigibles would then be ""dangling high above pedestrians in the street."" (@NUM1). This was ""neither practical nor safe"" (@NUM1) This would not only endanger the pedestrians below but also the people on the dirigibles. The wind was so strong that it could throw it into a building. Most dirigibles fuel on hydrogen rather than helium, hydrogen is much more flammable. ""The German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey."" (@NUM3) The owners of the Empire State building saw this as another huge problem because of how much worse it would be if one caught fire in densely populated New York.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19156,7,"Patience is usually good or bad for me. Here are a few reasons why patience can be hard or stresful. If you are waiting to get a shot or life threat results. A way to avoid normal patience like being board is to get some notes or school work to do or an ipod. Patience is everywere. For example carrides, birthday parties, vacation commercial, school being over, restaurants, holidays or whenever you say “I cannot wait,” and etc. to sam up a few ways about patience in my way of description.",3,5,,8,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
589,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, I believe that going on the computer has a positive effect on people. It is also true that some people are not getting enough exercise. To prevent not getting enough exercise we should play sports or have family activities to atleast get out of our house. Everybody needs to stop being lazy and get active. I think that an excerise day should be mode and turned into a tradition. It could be twice a year or more a month or whatever is picked as long as there is one day @LOCATION2 or even more than @LOCATION2 can exercise on.",2,3,,5,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6028,3,"The features of setting affect the cyclist. It was hard arrived at the first town for author. For example “Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” The road that author was ridding, it was rough. @CAPS1 example is “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” All the road was hills and rough. Than “The water bottle contained only a few tontalizing sips.” @CAPS1 doesn’t have that much water. That was really hard.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18373,7,"One day I was looking at a catalog in a store, and saw a goalkeeper shirt that I really wanted. So I went to my mom and showed her what I wanted. She said it was a bit pricy, but that she would get it. The next week was very long, waiting for the shirt. On @DATE1 it came, pale yellow, red, blue, and purple. I finally had a goalkeeper jersey to wear to games and make great saves.",8,6,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17916,7,One day I had to wait in a line for @NUM1 hours just to get on a roler coaster @CAPS1 hot very  paicent so I just fell asleep while standing with my eyes open. My mom had to have paicents so i just fell asleep while standing with my eyes open. My mom had to have patient when we were in traffic  to get to the camping grounds. We had to wait @NUM2 hours just to get out of traffic but mom didnt freek out or anything.,5,4,,9,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21487,8,"Many people @MONTH1 think that laughter is not a big part of a relationship. i truly think that have a good laugh with your spouse is a good thing because it means that you are having a good time with each other. I will tell you a true story when i and my girlfriend were laughing and having a good time, and i will talk about another time when laughter was a big part in my life. In the next @NUM1 paragraphs i will decide how laughter help @CAPS1 out a lot in my life. laughter is all about having fun and it should be meant to hurt someone or make them upset or mad at you. I think some people really mean to hurt people because they don't care what they say to others and that's why laughter sometimes can hurt people. I have said some things to people that i thought were funny but the person i was saying it to didn't think it was funny. This first story I'm going to tell you is about @CAPS1 and @LOCATION1. I have been dating @PERSON2 for about a month now and laughter is a big part in our relationship. @PERSON2 and i like to tell jokes to each other and make each other laugh and smile. If we didn't laugh and have a good time with each other than were would this relationship go. It wouldn't go the way i would want it t go. So i try everyday to make her laugh and smile at some of the things that i say because its a important thing in life to @CAPS1 anyways. @PERSON2 makes @CAPS1 laugh all the time and i think thats a good thing to her because she can be a very funny person all the time. So as long relationships have some laughter in it most of them will go for a while. The one person i think that has made @CAPS1 laugh the most is probably my dad. My dad every day when he comes to pick @CAPS1 up he always has something funny to say. I don't think he has not said something funny one day for a long time. The times when my dad is having a bad day at work and then when he comes home and is still in a bad mood i try to say something funny to get him out of his bad mood, and if that doesn't work i just go to my room to get away from him. But most of the time my dad comes home in a good mood because his job is very easy and he likes the people that he works with. Now that would have been a different story if we still lived in I'm @ORGANIZATION1. When we lived in @ORGANIZATION1 my dad had to commute back and forth to work from @LOCATION2 to @ORGANIZATION1. That was about a hour drive one way, so it put him not in a very good mood.but i didn't get to really see him much when we lived over in the @LOCATION4. so anything that funny i think i always try to say just to keep the laughter going.I believe that laughter is a big part in having friends. most friends like to joke around and laugh at things that are funny to them. so when you have a friend that likes to smile or likes to tell jokes usually they become friends and that person gets more friends and they whole community starts to like him in-till he says something that makes a lot of people mad. At our baseball practices @CAPS1, @PERSON3, @PERSON4, and @CAPS2 we like to tell jokes jokes or say something that will make the whole team laugh. another person that is funny to @CAPS1 is @LOCATION3. @LOCATION3 tells a lot of jokes and has funny face exasperation, and the last person that is funny to @CAPS1 is @PERSON1 is one of those guys that thinks he inst funny but really is. I think i have a good friend relationship with all those people.I just told you why i think a good laugh is a good thing in a relationship. It is good around your parents so you can have a good relationship with them. I hope you liked my story. I enjoyed writing on this topic because it explains about @CAPS1 and it explains what i do with my spouse and my friends. I think that everybody has laughter in there life day in and day out to keep a good attitude wit people.",15,15,,30,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
226,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 out of ten people spend their time on the computers. I believe people should not spend @CAPS3 much time on their computers because it can hurt their eyes. They @MONTH1 watch inappropriate videos or pictures. Lastly, their bills will get higher. Did you know a lot of people spend their time on the computers? Well I think they should not be sitting on their damage their eyes. When you sit and watch computer your eyes starts to hurt. Then when you go to check your eyes, the doctor will probably give a glasses. My second reason is that people go to inappropriate sites and watch inappropriate videos. One time my friend was sitting in the computer and she started to watch inappropriate videos @CAPS3 when her father found out about this, he canceled their internet. Can you imagine the high bills you would get? Why pay too much money for spending @CAPS3 much time in the computer, when you can turn off the computer and spend some time with your friends. For example, instead of sitting on the computer @CAPS3 much, go outside and play soccer, kickball and more. In conclusion, people should stop spendinding @CAPS3 much time on the computers. Computers can hurt your eyes if you sit too much. People @MONTH1 watch inappropriate videos. Also your bills will get higher. It seems to me that people need different activities to get them off the computers. I hope you are agree with my ideas. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9623,4,Saeng was very distrout knowing that she didn’t passed the test the test and to her she felt as though it was a let down or disappointment. This sentence shows the ambition and determination that Saeng has so that she will be able to pass this test.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10284,4,"The purpose for the ending the Author @CAPS1 is to show how the hibiscus gives Saeng A good sense of comfort, compared to how:- she was At the beginning of the story. It Was like she had very little confidence. And now she is forced to call this strange place home, And that emptied her @CAPS2 to strive until she see’s A very familiar face that brings back her memories of when She was the happiest. Having something Around that was special to her Around All the time can make @CAPS3 feel At home or like it use to be, she found her confort in the Hibiscus. So now that it rests in her garden to constantly grow through All the seasons, She will to with that reminder of her old home and how good it felt, except now with new memories.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1075,1,"Dear readers, I right to you today about the effects of computer usage. I feel that there are some positive and some negative effects from using the computer. You can talk to people, and you can get work done, but if you are at this to much you'll be starting to gain bad health and miss other things in life. Throughout the computer, there is many ways to communicate with others, which is an amazing thing. Whether it be through a game, typing or real chatting, it's very important to talk to people and this makes things much easier than going out nad talking to people face to face. For, example penpals, over the years people have written letters to their penpals, but know you can send it over mail and email doesn't cost any money, just type up your letter click a button and done. Another positive point about computers is that you're able to get work done on it. From work for a business to school work, it doesn't matter. You bear of people using computers to do work all of the time. Why do you think there are computer labs at school or desks with computers in offices. Computers have become advanced and the easiest thing to get things done with. Presentations, essays, graphs, anything. A concern I have of the computer is that people are becoming to addicted to computers. Many younger people are overusing computers wich leads to bad health. When people sit in front of a computer screen all day only getting up to grab something to eat, people will because obese. To stall healthy people need to be outside and exercise. We need to make rules to keep people out in the open out to give the generation a healthy life. So, I have mixed feelings about computers. They can be amazing for a while but only for a while. And if you can't see this open your eyes",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17900,7,"There was one time I was patient when my little brothers play station wasn’t working so it took a while to get use to it. It was an @TIME1 and my little brother had jus finished eating and he wanted to play his @CAPS1 but he was having a hard time turning it on but the problem was that some of his games were scratched up. But the next day we bought him a lot of other games that were brand new. So as he tried the games he still couldn`t do it. So than he asked me if I can help him so I helped him but it still didn`t work until I cleared up the play station than we had to wait patiently and than finaly at??? but  my little brother and I say “ work, work, work, work” until it went on. Then this day we still say that for the @CAPS1 can work.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6379,3,"In Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, the features of the setting are devastating to the cyclists condition. ""@CAPS1 through the high desert of California"" is surely never an easy task to begin with. Without proper hydration, people often suffer heatstrokes or pass out, sometimes even perishing, it is entirely worse for this cyclist because of the effort he is exerting, pedaling over “short, rolling hills.” Even worse, the trail a few very old, eccentric men set run on doesn’t do much in the way of nuping with a depleted water supply. The first town the cyclist comes across easily splits “the traditional definition of a ghost town” and the only other water pump he comes to emits only sewage and incredibly hot brackish water. Therefore, the heat is only made worse by the look of water on the cyclist path. This combination of features in then setting causes a great deal of distress to the cycling, and almost pushing him to death.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9141,4,"I think that the author concludes the story with this paragraph @CAPS1 the carter Saeng want to finish or @CAPS2 Take the Test agin when they come back and and also the author is @CAPS3 people @CAPS4't give up what you are doing with your self then she say that ""when the snow melt and the geese return and this Hibiscus is budding Then I will take that test agin"" she means that she will not give up at all.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21517,8," My sister @PERSON3 and my niece @PERSON2 had just came down from @LOCATION2. It had been three years since I last seen them. When my brother @PERSON1, my sister @CAPS1, and I went over to my dads for the weekend we all decided we would go camping over by the beach. That morning we all woke up early and packed everything in the car. My dad and brother did most of the work while us girls got ready. After everything was packed we were off to @LOCATION1. @LOCATION1 is a small little town surrounded by mountains with absolutely nothing but a couple of houses, a park, a river, and forests all around you. My dad built a small one roomed cabin there a few summers back. It had a wood stove in one corner, bunk beds fulfilling almost half the cabin, and a counter that was always messy with all the food and supplies that we would bring. The whole ride over we were all messing with each other giving one another horse bits, the claw, and pulling on other peoples seat belts so that it would tighten across there chest. We were also telling @PERSON3 funny stories about one another trying to embarrass them. When we got on the gravel road my dad started making the car slide back and fourth scarring @CAPS1. While everyone else was laughing about it she was screaming. That @TIME1 we all decided to go to bed early so we could wake up and get ready to go to the beach before noon. @CAPS1 was the only one actually wanting to go to sleep. Everyone but @CAPS1 was trying to make fun out of the rest of the @TIME1. While everyone else was taking @CAPS1 was yelling at them to go to sleep and be quite. @PERSON3 and @PERSON1 started yelling random stuff just to make her mad. When everything was silent one of them would yell something like, its not to late to sleep like a baby @CAPS5 @CAPS6. @CAPS1 would start yelling while everyone else just busted up laughing. That @TIME1 was one of the funnest nights there. Everything was hilarious that @TIME1 but when look at it now it wasn't all that funny it was just stupid. I believe we made the most fun out of the @TIME1 as we possibly could. It has become one of my most vivid memories. We all look back at it and laugh.",16,16,,32,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15017,6,The building was big and beatful.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7461,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because sometimes, it made him lose some courage and optimism. “and the growing realization that I could drop from a heatstroke on a gorgeous day” This is an example of how he lost courage. I wanted to be brave and be strong. But the hot day and all the sweat made the author feel weak. “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean, leaving only some expensive outdoor gear” This is an example of how the author lost some optimism. He didn’t want to die, but he kept telling himself that he was going to , he should have thought to himself that he was going it make it, but the setting was just to rough. There were bumps along his ride, and the sun beating down his thirst, he became less courageous and less optimistic.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3358,2,"People see libraries as a good place for knowlodge and just an information place, many people like them and some dread of the fact of hearing the word, '@CAPS1'. To be honust I only know a handful of people who use libraries in my life as a source for information now days but; Can some information from libraries be offencive to others? The answer is based by your own opinion to be quite honust, but yes I think some iformation that can be picked up from your local @CAPS1 can be rather, disturbing 'per say'.  Theres books and information that you wish you would have never picked up in your whole life, then again thats everywhere.     Now music and movies etc. is sort of the same way, some @MONTH1 not agree with what he/she picks out and you know they might be interested in. Can it be offencive to people? The answer is of coarse it can, but because people will be people. You @MONTH1 not agree on something, but your friend might think entirely different from what you are thinking, everyone is titled to their opinion on anything, well normally. Now if they have graphic movies or explicit music on the shelf where your little son/daughter can just grab, I could see that as a major issue.     Some parents do not want their children listening to that music at such a young age, even though the way things are in america your child will hear or see those things, it's life. If that is the case where a five year old can pull a graphic movie or a cd that a parent doesn't want them to see or hear, then I do'nt nessasarily think it should be banned from the @CAPS1. I believe it should be handled well mannered and it should be moved, to a not so easy reach to a five year old. These are common arguements people have, about many places and about simular disagreements.      Yes, I agree some things found in a @CAPS1 can be found offencive to some but my answer stays as, 'No' it shouldn't be removed unless it really is that offencive. If there is something that offencive in the @CAPS1 and mutiple people find it offencive in the community, I would take it to the people in charge of the local @CAPS1",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7173,3,"The cyclist in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by @PERSON1 suffers from some hardship while riding through the desert. The features of the setting affected the cyclist by having no water to drink because it was a desert there was no vegetation that means there is no water so he was becoming dehydrated. Also the setting of the towns he went to had no living organisms or people so he also couldn’t quench his thirst there. In one town there was a spiket but the water was gross and hasn’t been pumped in a while. Then he comes to the Welch’s juice factory which was abandoned and from there he thought he was done for but then he finally come to a shop were there are bathrooms were he drinks water from the sink and he is relieved. Also the rocky roads affected him because he barely had any water left, and rocky tent to take more strength and endurance.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15310,6,"In ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, it focuses on the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Laws made it impossible for the original purpose of the mast, ""An existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law made it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area..."". Some dirigibles did try, but due to wind and safety reasons the idea was dropped. The safety of all human beings took part in the construction, ""When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire...the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area..."". When dealing with other countries you have to take into account that they may not use the safest things. Mother Nature can be a funny thing, ""The winds on top of the building were constely shifting..."". With the wind changing at a moment's notice it can be hard for a ship to land. When building something always be prepared for obstacles.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15843,6,"In Downtown New York, Al Smith and his builders faced many obstacles in building and docking his dirigible on top of the mooring mast which had come to a failure by the end. The reason he planned to dock in New York because that's where most passengers would be at the location, where Smith would see it would be a success. The dirigibles are made ""with enormous steel-framed balloon with envelopes of cotton fabric filled with hydrogen and helium"" (paragraph @NUM1), at the time that Smith wasn't thinking, ""hydrogen is highly flammable"" (paragraph @NUM2) as well as the cotton fabric would catch on fire also; it is a dangerous hazard if any incident would have been in a ""densely populated area."" Another obstacle they dealed with was the ""dirigibles could not more at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (paragraph @NUM3) since it was illegal to dock the dirigibles in low areas, it couldn't happen for Smith, and the size of the dirigible, it's too long to not able to crash into one of the other buildings. Not only that but ""the mooring mast could not get close enough to tie up because of forceful winds. Fearing that the wind would blow the dirigible onto sharp spires of the building in the area"" (paragraph @NUM3) and it would most likely to happen since there are many buildings closely to one another in New York. With all these problems that they had faced through; failed; the dirigibles wasn't the future transportation by Al Smith, all of his plan's failed by the end.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3758,2,"The question is, should we censor materials in libraries if it is offensive?  In my opinion I dont think they should censor the material.  Some things that we read, see, and hear are just going to be offensive, and we cant control everything that offends us.     I do agree that people have freedom of speech, but not over everything.  People need to stop over reacting to something that might have been said @DATE1.  Some things just need to be left in the past and kept there.  For example, some @CAPS1 @CAPS2 are still upset over slavery, and that happened over a @NUM1 @DATE1 @DATE1.   Censoring certain things means that people are not going to learn from the mistakes of our pass.      We need to stop all this over protection in our libraries of all places.  Children need to know what has happened in our past to see what they can change in our future.  Why? Why is my only question to why the people want to censor material in the libraries.  Are they trying to keep their children from seeing it or just for their own selfish reasons?       My conclusion is that they should not censor material because it offends someone.  I have been offended by lots of things that I have read but I dont try to get them censored or removed from the place I read it.  Sometimes you just have to deal with things that you dont like or dont agree with sometimes.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3185,2,"Book Censorship?          Should books be censored? This a national problem about the contents of books. It is a big deal. What one parent feels is very offensive another @MONTH1 feel it has a necessary life lesson that their children need to learn.     If you ask me thaqt question I would say, '@CAPS1 I believe the books should ,but to a national scale and not a community one.'@CAPS2 this I mean a book with things like references to nudity or other things of volgur nature ,not just because it has a bad word in it that a parent feels to be inappropiate for their child. I believe there should be a national rating system for books like there is in the movie industry.      Also i believe that it is the parents' job to regulate what their children read. If they believe the book is vulgar or inappropiate but the system don't then you need to prevent their children from reading it without taking it off the shelf. It is the parents' job to regulate the reading of their children not the contents of the bookshelf.     Like in Katherine Paterson's @CAPS3 ' All of us can think of a book we hope none of our children or any children have taken off the shelf. But if I had the right to remove that book from the shelf-that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS2 this I believe she means that if we all took a book of the shelves for our children there would be no books because what is not offensive to you @MONTH1 be very offensive to another parent. So the parents should leave it on the shelf and prevent their own kids from reading it and let the other parents worry about their own kids.     @CAPS1 I believe in a goverment censorship program but to an extent. It is the parents' job to regulate the readings of their children ,but they do not need to regulate the contents of the bookshelf",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16170,6,The emire state building faced alot of obstacles and challenges while it was being built. The builders built a rocket shaped mast so the dirigible could be housed in the shaft itself. Which also had elevators so people could go down to the lobby. The building would now be 102 floors. The glassed observation room would be on the 101st floor.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16181,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was one of safety. Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. When the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey, the owners of the Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above the densely populated areas such as downtown New York.    The greatest obstacle to the use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights.       The other practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6165,3,"In “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit"" by Joe Kurmaskie, he describes his trying biking trip through California. In the essay, he describes the weather with “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June.” While this @MONTH1 not directly characterice the weather, the reader can confin a clear image of the sweltering heat of a desert in the summer. When the author comes across the “ghost town” followed by the dilapidated shack, and finally the sign that read “Rough Road Ahead,” his hope of finding Yosemite Park was gone. The hopelessness of the situation made the author want to give up, thinking that he was going to die out in the desert from dehydration and exhaustion. This can be related to anyone that has been lost in unfavorable conditions, and the feeling of helplessness and fear that goes along with it. It feels like everything is against you, with nothing working in your favor, and this is what the author experiences in his description of his trip in “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.”",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6735,3,"When riding a bike it @MONTH1 not seem to hard. For a cyclist every thing becomes more serious. The determination to win and be the best even if it kills you. In this essay he under estimates the dder cyclist. When really they are the people with more knowledge. Some of the things that @MONTH1 be hard for cyclist are the rough roads. Not only having a chance to be killed of dehydration or being ran over. Riding bike is really hard work when having to ride in hundred degree weather. Drinking drink after drink never having any water. No water and it being so hot could cause a heat stroke. As road get worse chances get higher tumble weeds and snakes in the way, he was determined to win. After all was said and he faced the horror that nature brought him he knew he was wrong wrong for them and the intelligants.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
495,1,"Dear Local newspaper, @CAPS1 you know that every @NUM1 out of @NUM2 obese children spend @NUM3 or more hours a day on a computer? Computer @MONTH1 be fast and convient, but why of computer our country is one of the most obese countries in the world because of the ""technology"". Computers are bad for humans because they keep people from enjoying nature, keep people from spending quality time with their families, and they give people less time to excersice. First off, people can't enjoy nature. As you know, forest are being chopped down and pollution is destroying our world. People need to see how beautiful our world is if we really want to save it. Second, being on a computer makes you stay inside. People stay inside for at least 6-@NUM2 hours a day depending on your job or if you are in school. Lastly, @CAPS2, computers take away from time that should be spent with friends or family. First people will became anti-social. When being on computer for a long time, people will forget how to interact with others. With millions of people like that, our society will soon become choos. @CAPS2, some people do all of their they get obsessed and then their family @MONTH1 leave them. They will they fall into a depression. Last, computers are a waste of time, money and effort. This shows why computers are bad. Lastly, being on a computer gives you less time to exsecise and stay healthy. First of all, people will get fat. With less time to exersize, people can't burn the calories and will get obese. Then, without excersice, peoples' bobies will become more prone to diease and injury. Last but not least, people without healthcare won't be able to pay the medical bills and @MONTH1 become homeless. This is why computers are bad.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
5980,3,"Everyone travels to unfamiliar places. Sometimes we get lost and ask locals for directions which @MONTH1 not be a good idea. The setting affected the cyclist. He had a perfectly good map but asked older men who look like they haven’t been out in ages. The old men apparently haven’t been out because they gave the cyclist the wrong directions.  My advice would be to not listen to anyone no matter their age if you have a perfectly good map with you. Also try to know where you are going at all times. “Yes, sir!",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6245,3,"The features of the setting affect the cy clist in many ways. For example the lack of water was the biggest thing. Without cool water he had nothing to reboost his energy. He would get tired out faster. Even he does find water its hot, like when he says,” brakish water feeling some where in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” This shows how in “the high desert of June,"" the water is all very hot. Even after he pumped the well for several minutes the water still wouldn’t cool down the hot desert had baked everything above and below ground. So when you go to get something liquid which heats and cools faster than solids it will be hot. Also the rough road made it difficult for the cyclist to travel it. We know the roads rough when he says, “large highway signs dumped out at me. It read ROUGH ROAD AHEAD DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT. ""This also shows you couldn’t go fast.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4224,2,"People go to the library to find certain types of material. Some people get offended by some of the material and feel that it should be removed. Certain materials should not be removed if found offensive to others because it might not be offensive to someone else that might enjoy it. The offensive material can be history that the world need to know, such as racism. If they did not know the importance of slavery they wouldn't know of the past life and why we are treated the way we are being treated. History is a big part of life that everyone one should know. That's why we have history class to let us know of the history that we've been through.     All material don't have to be history that is offensive. Some material have sex and violence that is offensive. The libraries should have labels on every section to let people know what type of material it is. If people know what type of material it is and still choose to view it then they get what they ask for. It shouldn't be removed because they didn't like it. I learned in history class about wars that had violence in them that some of my classmates didn't like but that's what happened and we needed to know.     Materials are made for a reason. They should not be removed if found offensive to someone but not offensive to another. I read books in school with all kinds of violence and other things people @MONTH1 not like but it's history. History makes a difference in our lives and it's what we need. You can not removed that. If you find it offensive just don't view that material again.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9563,4,"The author concludes the sentence on the end to state when the plants start over growing and the geese come back, she will try again. For example, the plants have to grow their pedals back and the geese have to make their home and find food again. The author is saying she will take the test again when the geese come back and the plants grow again.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7185,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in several ways. First the rolling hills make it hard to pedal over the land. ""Flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills,"" shows that the terrain was changing into a more difficult course. One long crippling hill,"" also shows how the hills had an effect on the cyclist. Another feature of the setting was the desert and the high temperatures. This caused the cyclist to become dehydrated. ""Trying to keep balance in my dehydrated state"" and ""I could drop from heatstroke"" show me how hot the cyclist was. One final feature that has on effect on the cyclist was the old abandoned factory. The sight of the boy with a refreshing glass of juice makes the cyclist lose hope and he doubts he will survive. ""I hung my head"" and ""abandoned factory of juices and dreams"" tell how the cyclist lost all hope at the sight of the building. All of these features of the setting have negative affects on the cyclist.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12219,5,"In the memoir, @PERSON1, from: Home: the blue prints of our lives, the mood created by the author is happy, thankful and also familyorented. First @CAPS1 says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"", and which by that you can tell @CAPS1 loved that new home, and that @CAPS1 loved and appriciated everything her parents did for her.Second, ""... instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being blood relative"". Which @CAPS3 that @CAPS1 treats and acts like everyone is her ""family"", because @CAPS1 loves and cares for all of he ""family"" that isn't blood relative in her neighborhood as if the were blood relative.Last, the memoir says ""... endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm home"". @CAPS1 says ""warm home,"" that ment @CAPS1 loved being home with her family/etc. And that @CAPS1 loved being with her friends and neighbors, because thats what @CAPS1 loved/loves to do. therefore @CAPS1 is happy.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12329,5,"The mood created by the author of the memoir is thankfulness. The mood is thankfullness because through the whole memoir the author is looking back on his life and is explaining how thankfull @CAPS1 is. In the memoir the author says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done."" @CAPS1 also expressed the importance of family and friends. @CAPS1 states that by stateing ""it was here where I learned the real definition of family.""",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21568,8," It all began one morning when I heard my hulking mass of an alarm-clock spouting off again. So I reached over and pushed the button to turn the exceedingly loud contraption off. When I noticed that I have woken up ten minutes late, and so I jumped out of the bed and sprinted to the shower. When I was finished, I got dressed in my @CAPS1-shirt and jeans, which is what I normally wear, then unplugged my cell phone from the charger and placed it in my pocket. Having dealt with the situation at hand, I went down the stairs and into the kitchen to prepare the modest meal of oatmeal. After I was finished eating, I packed up my books and walked back up the stairs to brush my teeth. After doing so, I swiped my coat and hat in one fell swoop. I secured them to my person, grabbed my back-pack , and walked out the door. I stood there on that cold and rainy morning, pondering what the day would hold for me. Suddenly , their was a great noise, I turned to face the approaching threat only to find that the bus had arrived. My mind quickly recovered from @CAPS2 slightly startled state and I stepped onto the bus. The bus ride was no different from the others, kids squawking about what happened at school yesterday, what they are doing @CAPS2 @DATE1, and other seemingly useless conversation. There I sat my eyes fixed gazing out the window of the bus, watching , studying , and mapping the present course of the massive vehicle. We stopped at one of the bus stops, and on the bus came my good friend @PERSON1. As usual she came and sat down next to me and we started talking about the usual cars, music, and the occasional jokes. As I started to develop a creative and captivating joke, she just belted one out right off the top of her head. We both just started busting up laughing, I even felt a tear form in the pit of my eye. We didn'@CAPS1 stop laughing until we got to the school,and my joke was successfully forgotten.  The joke lingered in my head all day long, to @CAPS2 day I still think it is one of the best I've ever heard. Through all of the countless jokes, underhanded comments, and puns I've heard, that one brought about the most laughter of all. But then @PERSON1 moved away to another city, @CAPS2 was a sad day. The very next day I heard the age old saying, ""@CAPS2 one time at band camp....."", story and laughter was restored to my life. I learned something that day that friends my move away but the jokes that were said will still remain.",20,19,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15151,6,"Al Smith, four-term governor of New York and a leader of the Empire State Building's construction, had a vision. His vision was to create a two-hundred fifty foot mooring mast at the top of the Empire State Building, not only making it the world's tallest building, but also to dock passengers and deliver goods through the use of dirigibles or blimps. Unfortunately, there were many @CAPS1 facing the builders of the Empire State Building regarding the allowance of docking dirigibles on its mast. The main concerns the builders faced were the materials that dirigibles are made out of, mother nature, and airship laws. The first obstacle the builders of the Empire State Building faced concerning the docking of dirigibles on its mast was the materials dirigibles are made from. According to the article, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION2, ""Most dirigibles... used hydrogen... highly flammable..."" The builders realized this posed as a huge safety threat, especially over a densely populated city. The second obstacle the builders faced regarding the docking of dirigibles on its mast was mother nature herself. The article states, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents... neither practical nor @NUM1). The construction workers realized that having passengers moving on and off the mast, could be very dangerous in harsh weather conditions. The final obstacle the construction workers faced was an overlooked airship law. The story says, ""... an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas,"" (@ORGANIZATION2). The workers realized that it was against the law to even tie up an airship to a building. In conclusion, the three main @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced in regards to the allowance of docking dirigibles on its mast were the materials that dirigibles are made of, nature, and airship laws.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6826,3,"The features of the setting taunt the cyclist with cruel irony. As the cyclist continues down his path he pasts through a ghost town, then twenty mile up the road he sees a ramshackle shed & some rusty water pumps. He attempts to get water out because he was runing out but all he could get was muck, then what he described as “water feeling two-hundred degrees, it had the flavor of battery acid. Further down the road was a sign that said rough road ahead, adhere to the posted speed limit of 55, he was going 12 mph. Even worse he found an abandoned juice factory on the way, at that point he was out of water.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7168,3,In the story the cyclisst had ran out of water. He had mentioned it tasted like battery acid. The surroundings affected him by looking around and not seeing anybody around for miles. That brings despair. Also a desert with the hot sun beating down on him and just the sand and catus all around. Now if you saw that you would think of no water or shade of noting because the desert is put to image when you hear those descriptions.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7158,3,"The bicyclist was riding to Yosemite National Park and on the way ran out of water. ""The wate bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” Then, hills came into play which makes you more tired and thirsty. “Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills.” The rider didn’t think he would live “I was going to die and the birds would pick he clean” but he found a place to get water “drank deeply from the sink” and finished his ride.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
395,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I think that people I should they to excersize more than they go on the computer. Computer are one of the main reasons of our nations obessed rate being as big as it is now including junk foods like mcdoanld. I'm a big fan of computers myself don't get me wrong. I would on the computer all night if I could but I don't want my body out. I go to bed at @NUM1 I usally stay on the computer for an hour or two depends if I'm doing a project. Also goign on the computer less could make your life more fun instead of sitting inside go outside and play some sports like football, hang out with your friends have a @CAPS2 with your family. Do something else than be on . Conclesively, if people just puxh them selves to stay on the computer for an @NUM2 hour and a half the obessed! will go down. It could also help save our planet by saving the energy.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9086,4,So she did not forget to take the test again.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1420,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, @CAPS2 has come to my attention that there is a massive increase in people using computers in society. @CAPS2 can have its positive effect on people, but too much of @CAPS2 isn't a good thing. This is why I want to tell everyone about negative effects of the computer on people. We all know using computers helps people with all different kinds of things. They can help with business, interacting with family and friends, and you could even just use @CAPS2 for entertainment. Some negative effects that some people don't know, or maybe just ignore, are things like they can keep you from exercising, exploring nature, and you could spend so much time on your computer, that you could get addicted. There should be some way of telling the people that this is happening and is a concern. So I think that we should try to combine what people like to do on computers, with what they should be doing more often, like exercising. Maybe we could tell people that they can use their computers to contact people like friends and family to go out and make plans to exercise and have fun outside so theyre not stuck on the computer all day. We all know that computers can be a good and bad thing. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about places and people in the world, and so much more. They also have bad effects, but that doesn't mean we should take them away from people. And you shouldn't be outside all the time, for the whole day. So I think there should be a limit on how many hours people spend on the computers per day. This way, people get what they want, and they have some time off of @CAPS2, too. Obviously as a result there should be something done about this computer concern. I hope I have persuaded you with my well-thought out thoughts and ideas. And hopefully they will lead you to an idea that will end in a helpful change in society.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10546,4,"In the story Winter Hibiscus when Saeng says that she will take the test again in the spring, so she can walk home and see the flower that she found. Also in the story it mentions that in her past childhood she had seen the same flower in her country, but the next time she takes the driving test she would like to pass. It shows that she was disapointed because in the story it say that she paid over nineteen dollars for the test. Her mother was astionished, and yelled at her for a second. Saeng began crying and her mother calmed to show sympathy for her. Now she has the determination to take the test again. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10486,4,I think the author concludes the story with this paragraph because the whole story was leading to it and the story  would have been pointless if it wasnt conclusion.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3531,2,"One @MONTH1 walk into a library, look over at a magzine rack and think, '@CAPS1 is that in the young adult section, the content of that book is not age appropriate?' In many libraries, some books are not censored and catagorized the way they should. In some of the reading material, one might not even realize that some inappropriate things are in it. Supervision of children and young adults are not always looked upon, and some of these people might not even know what they are checking out. Censorship needs to be pushed more in libraries.      In most libraries, the catagories for books are children, young adult, adult books by genere, magazines, and music, but what needs looked upon is what is on the inside covers of those books. Some magazine articles are not appropriate for some teens, even if it does claim to be age appropriate. I remember when I was fourteen, I read a series that was related to colors off the color weel. Each one covered a different topic such as suicide, alcholism, drugs, sex, same sex dating, and jealousy. Looking back on it, I am surprised I was allowed to check them out at the library. A fourteen year old didn't need to read books on such heavy topics.Also, language in books and music maybe unappropriate for children, and @MONTH1 be distasteful and disrespectful for some adults. The catagories need to be catogorized even more, so people further know what they are getting into when checking out a book or magazine.      When a child goes up to check out a book they found, a librarian sometimes doesn't even pay attention to the book they are getting, they simply check it out. Libraries should have a rating system like movies do. Generally people would not let their ten-year-old go to a movie rated @NUM1, @CAPS2 or that is unrated, so @CAPS1 would they let their child get a book holding the same content? If books had a rating system, that ten-year- old would not get their hands on a book rated '@CAPS2' or '@CAPS4' for mature.     In libraries there is not as much supervision as their needs to be. I am aware that libraries are not day-care center and the librarians are not babysitters, but there also needs to be stricter guidelines, because some people are not fully aware of what their children or what they, themselves, are reading. For example, a thirteen-year-old girl wants to check out @CAPS5 magazine, because her best friend's older sister gets it. The girl's mother allows it because it probably won't be too bad and she assumes her daughter wants to look at the pictures of new clothes and trends. What the mother @MONTH1 not realize is in the middle of the magazine contains an article about sex and protection, and that @MONTH1 open a whole new world for the little girl. Even though the mother shouldn't have had let her daughter check out the magazine, if the guidelines were stricter at the library the girl might have never have read that article. Even if librarians had to check or scan a person's library card to make sure they can be in the section or be reading a certain book, it would be protecting many more people then it would be hurting.     If libraries censored books better, then children and teens @MONTH1 not be reading things not age appropriate to them. I'@CAPS4 not saying that books should be removed off the shelf, just maybe put up higher, and be watched over more carefully",4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12199,5,The author creates a special mood in this memoir. The mood the author gives is a very comfortable mood. He talks about his family and how they all ate together and always had relatives stoping by. It gives you a sense of togetherness. It gives you a sense of how the family interacted and became one with the neighborhood. So the author of this article really shows how just the whole town had a sense of togetherness with the family.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17998,7,"There have been times in my life where I had to be patient. My friends and I that day had decided to go to @LOCATION1 @CAPS1. I love roller coasters, but I hate the lines that come with. When we got there we had to wait a half an hour to get in. When we made the decision to go on the @CAPS2 ride first. Next, we had to wait another @NUM1 minutes to get on the ride. Other rides we want on too had a long wait. So throughout the day there was quite a bit of waiting. Even when we got food we had to wait with all this waiting it took a lot of patience. My friend and I had to be understanding and tolerant of the waiting and long lines. By the end of the day all of us had gotten used to using our patience. That trip to @LOCATION1 @CAPS3 taught me to be a more patient person.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15407,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. One of those obstacles was that there was a lack of suitable landing area in New York City. Another obstacle was that the architects couldn't drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame. However, the greatest obstacle was nature. Wind on top of the building shift constantly caused by violent air currents. The back of the ship with swivel around the mooring mast while it was tethered.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9083,4,"Minfong Ho ended her story ""Winter Hibiscus"" with an optomistic sentence. She concluded it this way because the main character of the story was beginning to lose hope. Saeng decided to retake the driving test when her hibiscus flower was blooming. This flower reminds her of her past life in Vietnam with her grandmother. ""Saeng could almost feel the light strands of her grandmother's long gray hair, freshly washed, as she combed it out with the fine-toothed buffalo-horn comb"". She preferred her life in Vietnam than hers in @LOCATION2. She was goint to wait until ""this hibiscus is budding,"" so she can feel more comfortable and happy. The author wanted to end it so Saeng would be happy. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9709,4,"I think that the author uses this quote, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is buding, then I will take the test  again.” @CAPS1 it symbolizes that spring brings new life and hope. “But where was the home thought come? The hibiscus hedge? The way her gentle grandmother?” “BOAT RIDE into the night and it was gone.” @CAPS2 from Vietnam to @LOCATION2. one night she had so much hope, like, abundance, then the next she is in foreign land that is nothing like her old home. The flowers bloom in the spring bringing new life. There is a chance to move on @CAPS1 there is hope. There is hope that spring will come, flowers will come birds will come. It is a chance to let go. The ending quote was said to bring hope and like to her and she sort of promises to herself that it will get better. Hope is what makes every obstacle to get over easier and everything to be bearable. ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12707,5,"The @CAPS1 in the @CAPS2 is different and uneek to other I have heard. I belive that the @CAPS1 the @CAPS3 is trying to make is happyness, and selflessness, and grateful. I think this because he describes his parents As selflessness and takes everyone in to theire small Apartment. I also think he is creating ""warth"" by saying that his first birthday with his parent Are comfortting That is the @CAPS1 I belive the @CAPS3 is trying to create. ",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18990,7,"Two summers ago I went to @LOCATION2 and @LOCATION1. We had to drive for @NUM1 hours straight. I mostly just sat in the back seat and listened to my @NUM2 player. @CAPS1 was a very boring car ride. On the way I looked for licence plates with different states on them. We were half way there so we stopped at a dunkin donuts, @CAPS1 was early in the @TIME1, my sister and I got donuts and hot chocolate. Then we got to a whole bunch of little booths were you have to show your passport to got in. And finally we were in @LOCATION2. We stayed there for @NUM3 or @NUM4 nights. Then we were on the rode again for @NUM5 hours. to go to @LOCATION1. When we got there, all the patience paid off. And that’s a time  when I was patient",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9642,4,"The author concludes the story with this because the girl in the story is almost like the flower itself. Just as the flower will blossom, Saeng will take the test again, both receive a fresh start on things. Finishing the story this way left the reader feeling positive, it was a short ending but one with a lot of meaning. “ ...and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” I think the last sentence is almost inspirational and it makes you want to start out fresh as well as Saeng.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15141,6,"The obsticles The empire state building were The baloons being made out of flammable material, The wind blowing The dirigible around",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21422,8," Laughter in someones life is very important for many different reasons. You can get to know someone by what they think is funny, show emotion and become closer to others by simply laughing together. The memories that are the clearest to anyone or are most personal might have laughter in them. These are also the memories that people would want to remember vividly. I think the quote ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" is extremely accurate for most. I have many memories of laughter with my friends, family and loved ones around me. I will never forget some stories I have had in life because of all the laughter in them. When I was about six and my brother was about nine we didn't always get along, being the typical brother and sister that we were. We both had very outgoing personalities and had to be doing something at all times. When we did get along we usually had so much fun, ended up rolling around laughing together, and forgetting that we were ever mad at each other. Some of the things we would do would be to play hide and seek inside and outside our house, tag, bored games, and our favorite thing of all was tickle monster. Sometimes our closest friends would play with us but it was usually just something my family did. Most of the time me and my brother would ask my dad to play with us because playing games with two people wasn't very fun at the time. He usually agreed because he enjoyed watching us laugh together and create new memories and stories. When the three of us got together and played games I felt like I was on top of the world and I was really happy at that point in my life. My favorite time that I can think of playing games with them was when we started off by playing hide and seek in our house. Me and my brother usually crammed into little spaces like under the sink, under beds and in closets. We couldn't fit in them for very long because they were very hard to get into even for a little kid. My dad being a lot bigger than us kids would always hide in the shower or behind doors. He was really easy to find but we still found it really fun and laughed every time we found him. One of the times when it was his turn to hide me and my brother went to my room to count to any number we felt like. We were inpatient little kids so we didn't usually count all the way to the number my dad told us to. Then we ran down our stairs, turned the corner, ran down the hall and found him hiding behind the bathroom door. You could always tell if he was there or not because if he was the door wouldn't open all the way. Instead of coming out of hiding when we found him and counting for us while we hid, he started to chase us around the house. We weren't expecting it at all so we were laughing and running and it was hard to breath. Eventually he caught up to us and our game of hide and seek turned into the best game of tickle monster ever! My brother thought we should hide under my parents blanket on their bed but that just made us an easier target for my dad the tickle monster.  By the time he was done tickling us, our faces were red, we were out of breath, tired and had the biggest smiles on our faces from laughing. Trying to breath, trying to get away and laugh all at the same time really tired us out. My dad eventually got us out to the table where we had our lunch and then we all fell asleep with our belly's full and as happy as could be.  That was a really fun memory I have with lots of laughter and good times. To me, laughing is a big part of getting to know someone and strengthening already existing relationships. It puts everyone in a good mood and keeps people happy.",21,20,,41,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19225,7,"One day, I had to be patient why cause I had ask my mother can I go skate but she told me to be patient so we wait and till she said yea. After wait we was mad cause my mother had to go get the money for my sister. So next awayz be patient but if you do not be patient you will not get your wayz. Like one day my sister haven and I want to go to the movie with our friends so we had to be patient for a whole hour why cause we had to wait and till mom got off of work for she can give haven @MONEY1 and me @CAPS1 @MONEY1. So that is how you be patient.",6,4,,10,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4185,2,"We live in a world @DATE1 inundated and persuaded by media.  Ever since we were little, our young minds have been filled with opinions of others from history and from the present.  Whether we are reading a book, watching a motion picture, or even listening to a new music artist, our lives are being affected by such media.     The art world is considered to be one of the most controversal businesses to work in.  Each piece of literature or movie is shared by a vast community of critics.  We all are given the right to our opinion on such  pieces.  Every piece of art is judged and then criticized.  However, many find certain pieces to be offending in some way, shape, or form.  It is quite impossible to produce such a piece that will fit everybody's satisfaction.  For an example, religious pieces are often scorned for their nonfactual information or for the director's or author's opinion over the matter.  Since we live in such a diverse community of religions, these pieces will never satisfy the audience.  Movies have been criticized for decades because they represent some sort of life lesson or truth that is not appealing to the audience.  Why not learn from them and reflect?     No piece of media can possibly be directed to satisfy the opinions of all the world.  As a personal example, I can see that novels and books over war are heavily criticized.  The men and women who fought for our country @MONTH1 enjoy to see such pieces written about them, but war protesters and peace keepers @MONTH1 see this as an insult to their cause.       @PERSON1 wrote a book by the name @CAPS1 @NUM1.  This book was heavily criticized over the topic of censorship.  The world in which they lived in had dramatically been affected by the impact of peoples opinions.  If a book or movie was offensive to a group of people, then they burned the books.  History books about slavery and war were burned because others found the topics offending.  Non-religious groups thought that religion was offensive, so they burned the @CAPS2 and other works of religion.  Their government wanted a world of peace and a community where every man was equal and diversity was no longer existent.      @PERSON1 denies the book was written over censorship but his book gives our generation a great lesson.  For generations, we have grown up in a world of diversity.  Every mind is special and different and will never share identical thoughts as his neighbor.  Therefore, we must recognize that we have to survive and live together.  We can not escape the diversity in which we live in.  The books we see on shelves, the movies we see on the big screen, and music we listen through our earphones all make up our generations history and the next.  We need to accept our neighbor and his opinions because we are all born equal.  If we throw away our history and our accomplishments, man is left nothing to improve on, nothing to leave his or her marking on history.  We have to accept others ideas and build on them to improve our life and other's.  As we stand @DATE1 in a world filled with diversity, we must move on and reflect.  It is not a time to offend and be offended but a time to learn and move on",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21343,8," He laughed, I hadn't heard his laugh all day. It was just after @DATE1 and @PERSON2 and I had just fixed our off and on relationship. He had picked @CAPS1 up from my house so we could hangout at his. He had seemed upset since he had picked @CAPS1 up which was completely out of the norm for him. He was always smiling or laughing and had some funny story to tell @CAPS1, but not today. Today he was quite, we had been together for about two hours already and he'd said all of about a sentence to @CAPS1 and I had only gotten one of those lame half smiles that really meant ""I'm not in the mood so just stop"".  We were watchingDespicable @CAPS1 for about the third time when the yelling started, he was standing against the wall next to his bed when his dad just started shouting, his voice was followed by a higher softer voice yelling back, it was @PERSON2's step mom. The were arguing about cheating or drinking or staying out to late, I really don't remember, I couldn't hear to well and I was paying attention to @PERSON2 to watch for his reaction. He stood where he was for a couple minutes just staring straight in front of him, he looked like he was going to cry. Then he slumped to the ground, pulled his knees up, crossed his arms over them and put his head on his arms, for a second I thought he was crying. My big tough guy who didn't ever deal with anyone's crap looked as hurt and helpless as he could get, he looked more helpless then I felt. I mean what could I do, I had no idea whether he would want to be left alone or if he'd want someone to hug him and make him feel better so I sat where I was, on his bed, leaning against the wall just looking at him hoping he do something to help @CAPS1 decide what would help him feel better. In the living room his parents were still screaming and yelling at one another when another voice joined in, it was his step mom's friend, @PERSON1. She was trying to stop them from fighting, trying to help but @PERSON2's dad, @PERSON3, wasn't one to interrupt, when he was mad you simply stayed out of his way. @PERSON1 had made a mistake. Suddenly there was a crash, @PERSON2 jumped, and the sound of cupboards being slammed and glass being broken, the only statement I could make out was ""that was your grandma's, your mom is gonna be pissed!"" from @PERSON2's step mom. @PERSON2 got up, walked over to his door, and locked it. He stood there for a second with his forehead against the door then he turned and walked over to @CAPS1, he laid @CAPS1 down and cuddled with @CAPS1.   There was more shouting now, something about food, cars, and getting all of someones crap out of the house. There was the sound of food being thrown, then a door slamming and tires screeching. Finally they were done. @PERSON3 was leaving too, you could tell by the sound of a big diesel truck driving off. Now we were alone, @PERSON2 finally looked at @CAPS1, I could tell he was sad, he still looked like he wanted to cry. I could tell he hated the fighting and that's when I realized that's what had been wrong with him all day, they had been fighting like this all week, they were getting divorced. It wasn't the first divorce he had been through either, that was his dads third wife that had just walked out the door.   ""@CAPS2, that's hell and really scary. Promise @CAPS1 WE will @CAPS3 fight like that?"" I said. I had @CAPS3 heard anyone fight like that and frankly it scared @CAPS1, I would @CAPS3 want that kind of thing going on in my house.  ""I promise.""he smiled.  I kissed him on the nose and went to get up but he pulled @CAPS1 back down and kissed my nosed, I looked at him and smiled "" @CAPS4, I really really gotta pee."" That was all it took, he laughed, I hadn't heard his laugh all day.",25,22,,47,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,6.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13593,5,"In the memoir by @PERSON1, he seems to be very happy. He has a big family and @CAPS1 of friends and many good memories. He comes from a very caring and sharing home. The whole mood of the story is very uplifting.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4542,2,"Many different people have views on what they want their children to be exposed to, whether it be in books, movies, music, or any other type of media. So should libraries be more strict and remove certain items that might come across as offensive or vulgar to parents or even students? I believe that it completely depends on how a library advertises or who they allow to check out what.     I know that a certain case, specific to me, is that my mother did not like me reading a specific series becasue she thought that it was not an appropriate reading material for me. Because of that, that does not mean she marched down to the library and demand that they get rid of all the books written by that author. She respected the fact that others enjoyed reading the books and just asked me to steer clear of them and to find something more appropriate for me to read.     In many libraries, I know that they have certain areas for specific age groups of people like children, teenagers, and adults. Within those specific designated areas, they have kind of 'sub-area' where they seperate educational from entertainment and so on. Let's say one parent gets offended by a specific section, such as a sex education section, should they ask the library to remove it completely? I do not think that will help anything because there are students who use that topic for areas they are studying and parents who use it as educational tools with their own children.     I do believe that libraries should put stamps or notices on their different types of media saying that only a certain age group is aloud to look at them and be able to check them out. An eight year old should not be able to go in and get a @NUM1 movie whenever they want to. There should be restrictions on areas like that, but for someone to come in and say to take out all the @NUM1 movies is a ridiculous thing to do because there are others who enjoy that type of entertainment.    Libraries to respect the fact that there are different types of people with different interests and they try to make their environment as comfortable for everyone as possible. They will have children's videos seperate from the adult videos and they even have a whole seperate section of books for them to discover and journey into. The only thing that I believe should not be in libraries is vulgar magazines or videos. A library is still a public, family area, after all, and no child should accidentily stumble upon any raunchy article.     So, should libraries completely remove areas of media? I do not think so. I think that they should distinguish from adult's and children's materials. Katherine Paterson says, 'But if I have the right to remove books from the shelf . . . then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' If we continue to take books off of the shelves then eventually there will be nothing to read.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4687,2,"Have you ever read something that you have found offensive, upsetting, or has made you mad? Do you think that there are certian books that shouldn't be allowed in a library because of its content? A lot of books, music, movies, and magazines these days contain things that are hurtful to society or protray bad images of certian social groups.      In @DATE1's society there are many different groups of people and a lot of them have thier own opinions on how they view different things. To me, when I think about a library, I think about how all different ages of people go to them, how there are many different groups of people there, and about the types of books that are in there. Taking this all into concideration, I believe that everything should be allowed in public libraries but I do think that there should be seperate places for books, magazines, and movies that should be only for adults. I think this because if you take away all the things that are 'bad' or 'offensive' to you, you could be displeasing those who find these things interesting or enjoy reading them. In this case, people would not come to the library anymore because they cannot read what they enjoy reading or find interesting.      By saying these things, seperating the books into age groups is a good thing because then the younger children who are running around the library will not pick up something that they should not be looking at. I also believe that is would benefit them because then if someone comes into the library looking for a book but does not really know what to do and they go to where their age group would be; then they can see everything that is recommended for them.      From my own experience, I know that I have read some books and looked at some magazines that I probably should not have looked at because I was too young. This does not mean that they need to take them off the shelves but maybe that they should be placed in an area where someone my age will not be able to find them. So the next time you go to the library and see something that is offensive to you, just remember that there are a lot of different people in this world who might find what you think is offensive, interesting",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18834,7,"Two week sago meandmy family went to siyflags, for fright fest. The lines were going to be long and I would nevero be patient, I hate being patient . We went on @LOCATION1 city @CAPS1 first the lines was only ten minutes. Then the super man, that one was a little longer. Me and my sister got permission to leave and go on the riper. Then perisa wooden rollercoaster that goes of the track a lot we waited @NUM1 minutes between each stop. We finally got to where we sun the coster people with these flash passes kept coming. The flash pass takes you to the front of the line. When we fin ally got to the front of the line my patients was @CAPS2. The roller coster went off the track. It was a @NUM2 mile coster but a tur one. That is the time I was  patient.",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16459,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in their attempt to allow dirigibles to dock on the mooring mast. The builders had to consult with experts and take tours of the equipment used in building mooring masts, land dirigibles service and a workable arrangement, and modify the building for support of the mast.In preparation to the construction of the mast the architects first took tours of the equipment at the @ORGANIZATION1. The builders also met with the president of an airship transport company that offered their services across the Pacific Ocean. A workable arrangement had to be created. It was difficult and tedious to figure, ""on some safe way of mooring ships to this mast."" The foundation of the building had to be considered as well because, ""the architects could not simply dropping mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" Over @MONEY1 in modifications to the frame and foundation of the building had to be performed. All of these were obstacles in the way of architects building a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6764,3,"Each new feature of the setting in the essay entilled, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” by Joe Kurmaskie, affects the cyclist in some way. For example, in the text , when the narrator stated that he had to avoid a “ ridiculously large snake “crossing the road, he became more aware of his surroundings and almost seemed to forget how thirsty he was until he finally abided the large reptile. Also in the text, when, “over one long, crippling hill, a building came into view,” hope was replenished into the cyclist. This hope allowed the narrator to because more tenacious about his journey in order to arrive at the old building. Eighther for better or worse, a few feature of the setting arrives and affects the cyclist every step of his journey.  ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4205,2,"Do you like what I like? Maybe and maybe not. What is or not offensive to you compared to other varies on both ends. Why? Everyone has their point of view. You @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not agree and we have others who do not care. There are many which includes: religious beliefs, having independence, and experimenting.     Religious beliefs are important would you not agree? Certain material in this world maybe offensive to their own kind. Such as gay rights. This @MONTH1 apply to everyone else that they are not accepting it. For the ones who do accept it, you can tell they are open minded. Unlike the rebels going against it that is their own state of mind. I believe it is important you go along with your religious beliefs.     Independence is what we are or what we assume to have or already have. Whether the music, movies, magazines, etc are offensive to others this has no effects to you. Why? It is because you know what is right and wrong. So what if all the non sense things @MONTH1 have caught your attention. Should you take control and get rid of it? No. It does not bother you. You take it as it is, being independent.     Experimenting is self contained. As simple as it is you do it or do not. It is more than likey that people are/were under the influence. I, myself, have been in that siutation before. I'm known to be the crazy child in the family. My dad would always lecture me about being careful with who I hang with when I'm out. As a teenager I let those words pass by me. I was always the youngest out of the people I hung out with. Was I ever under the influence? Yes. Did I ever get hurt? No. I can and will say I experimented with life.     Does it hurt to observe or experiment with the bad? It usually varies. Religious beliefs, it @MONTH1 or @MONTH1 not be disrespectful. To have independence, you are the one in control. Experimenting, that is a choice on your own. What is offensive to me @MONTH1 not be to you. I have my own state of mind and so do you.",3,3,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18533,7,One time when I was playing video games. I was wating around the corner for a guy to walk around. I wated for like @NUM1 minutes. Then there he is. I wated t kill he walk ed past boom assassinating that was the time. I had patients,5,4,,9,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18725,7,"A time I was patient was at my friend cousins birthday party. I was patient because the whole intire time that we were at the party I was waiting for an answer from my parents and my friends parents to see if me and my friend could have a sleepover. So during that time that my friends and I waited we colored a couple dinosaurs pictures, watched a movie, ate dinner, played in the basement, went in the garage and ate cake and icecream, decorated/painted our dance tool boxes, colored some more pictures, watch my friends cousin open his presents and much much more. Then it started getting dark outside so we tried to take a little map @CAPS1, it was hard with a whole bunch of kids screaming. Soon enough it was time for my friend to go and then my parents said that we could have a sleepover, @CAPS1 OF @CAPS2 my friends mom said not to night because my friend has a volley ball game in the @TIME1. It felt like I waited for nothing. Then I realized when your patient you get what you want more often.",9,11,,20,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21392,8," Gym clothes @CAPS1  People say laughter can bring together anyone. I do not know if that is true but, I do know that it can bring together two very unlikely @CAPS1 . Me and my best friend are complete opposite yet we became best @CAPS1 over a simple joke in the locker room. It happened on a @TIME1 that was not going to great for me, or her. It was @DATE1 @TIME1 I had to go to school. I had woken up late just the missed, walked all the way to school and had already dropped my lunch in the hallway about three times when, I walked straight into @PERSON1. (my soon to be best friend) ""@CAPS2 where your going."" she said to me in a catty voice and stuck me with a pointed glare. Me being shy, i just ducked my head and kept walking. @PERSON1 was one of the prettiest girls in school and hung out with the "" In "" clique I, well I didn't. Most of the time I hung out by my self.  Her @TIME1 had been going just about as well as mine was. Her @CAPS3 had broken up with her ,for her best friend, at the time,she also had stayed the night in the hospital with her brother who had been in a car accident. So she was in the same mood I was.What was even worse was our next class was @CAPS4.E.! I got into the locker room and as soon as I walked in I realized I had forgotten my gym clothes. @PERSON1 had just entered behind me and by the sigh she let out I knew she had forgotten hers to . We were going to have to use some from the bucket...  The bucket was where all lost or unwanted items ended up @CAPS5 there was cool stuff like sweat shirts and @CAPS5 neat tee shirts but you could never be sure if they were clean. Today though, it looked like there was only guy clothes. I walked over to the bucket and @PERSON1 came over next to me. We both began to dig through the bucket. Finding nothing but over sized sweat pants and extra large shirts we @CAPS6 out the ones we thought were the best. We changed and as soon as our eyes met we both started cracking up. We looked like two little kids playing in their dads clothes. She could not let go of her pants or else they would drop around her ankles and the shirt I was wearing hung down past my knees. Neither of us stopped laughing until our sides ached and there were tears running down our faces.  When the @ORGANIZATION1 teacher banged on the door we walked out of the locker room and the whole gym stared at us but we had found confidence and friendship in each other so, we didn't care. Sense that day @PERSON1 and I have been glued to each others sides as best @CAPS1. We have been through many fights but every time I think about that day in the locker room I can't help but to laugh. That is how laughter brought @PERSON1 and I to be best @CAPS1.",18,20,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7582,3,"The way the settings affect the cyclist is very crucel. First, the cyclist took directions from someone who has not left thier porch in decades. So once he accepted the directions and used them problems occurred. One main problem is the cyclist has a lack of water supply. Also the cyclist has incounters with snakes. Another the directions where way off so he had longer to go then he thought. Also when he arrived from his journey he found a deserted town. So in conclusion the cyclest uses his own directions from now on.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10101,4,"The author of the story “Winter Hibiscus” most likely concludes it with the paragraph of Saeng vowing to retake the test to show that even in difficult times and new situations a person can never give up and sink into despair and that there always things to comfort someone.In the story, glimpses of @CAPS1 home are given in her memories and from them, the reader can understand what a difficult day Saeng is having. The author is describing these warm, comforting memories to help clash with the cold, bitter day the girl is having. “She closed her eyes and breathed in, deeply. The familiar fragrance filled her lungs.” Here, saeng recalls a memory of her grandmother and it saddens her at the thought of her home and her loss. The author builds up Saeng’s despair and upset for the final paragraph. The author has this as the final paragraph because it shows hope. As Saeng says, “then I will take that test again.“you can feel her hope. Also, the author want`s to express how there is still structure and stability in a changing world and that you can look to the simple things. Saeng says,”the geese return and this hibiscus is budding,” and this shows how there are some reliable things that can give you security when you think you have none. The author uses this last paragraph to balance the feeling of despair in the story, to emphasize the need for hope and to show that there always things that can give you hope and security.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6892,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist for these reasons. It says “one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a coral that couldnt hold in the lamest mule greeted me. The sight was troubling.” That showshow how the features affected the cyclist because he says the sight was troubling. It  troubled him because he wanted water and he seen the rusty pumps that reminded him of water but he new their was no water or it was nasty",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7078,3,"The setting has a great impact on the condition of the cyclist. First, it is a very hot dry in June. The cyclist is maneuvering his way through “high deserts in @LOCATION1” where he comes across many hills that he must climb over and maneuver his way down. With all of these obstacles and the heat slowing him down he will need water but is already low.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12609,5,"The mood created in the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez From, Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives,"" by the auther is all about love and happiness. The memoir is mostly about family and childhood memories. It expresses the authors feelings or love, @CAPS1 the reader feels it to. The author didn't have many material things growing up, or a big house, but there was great memories of love and warmth.The many different memories in the this memoir gave a mood of love and happiness. First of all, it says in paragraph @NUM1, ""... All of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" The author lived in a neighborhood with many different cultures, but they put their backgrounds aside and were able to great friends. Also, the memoir says in paragraph @NUM2, ""My parents always their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family..."" This shows that their family was very inviting. They were always having guests, and loved a lot of people and considered them family. The author also says in paragraph @NUM3, ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" @CAPS1, the author didn't have a big home but the memories, and environment his parents created ***** what he really remembers.In conclusion, from reading this memoir, you can really feel the loving mood from all of the authors amazing childhood memories, to his great home environment. The author really did a great job of creating a mood of love, and helping the reader feel it.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14875,6,Obstacles the bulders faced was if they put a Mooring @CAPS1 At the top of the building it will Add stress to the building and they would have to modify the building to support the mooring @CAPS1. Another @CAPS2 they @CAPS3 is safty Most @CAPS4 Are Filled with Hydrogen which Are Highly Flammable. If there was A Fire it could @CAPS5 @CAPS6 of people Due to the fact its A Densely Populated Area. Nature Itself Also seems to @CAPS7 A @CAPS2 the winds Above the building were very Violent. then theirs the law where Airships can @CAPS9 Low Above urban areas.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7676,3,Many things in the setting affect the cyclist. The first thing that affects him is the heat. The heat is actually what causes the conflict in the story of the cyclist needing water. If the heat was not present in the story than the cyclist would not have such a need for water and he would be able to continue on his ride without fear of dehydration. Another aspect of the setting that affect the cyclist are the rolling hills. These hills also exhaust the cyclist and cause him to need more water. If these hills were gone than the cyclist would have tirerd less quickly making his journey easyer. The setting in this story greatly affects the cyclist.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7043,3,"The setting of the story had affected the bike rider in many way. It was hot when he was riding so he was thirsty. For example, “The sun was beginning to heat down” (pg @NUM1). So the sun is very exhusting and made him to start dehydrating. Another example is a traveling through the desert of California in June” (pg @NUM2). California is a relatively hot state and June is one of it’s warmer months. The terrain didn’t favor in the riders either “Flat road had turned into, short rolling hills “(pg @NUM2). Short rolling hills are harder on a bikers body than flat terrain. This is how the setting affected the rider.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19217,7,"Last year, @DATE1 it was my birthday, so I told my @CAPS1 what I wanted for my @DATE3 and out of everything I said “@CAPS1 I want a @CAPS2” (@CAPS3 station @CAPS4). So the @DATE2 we go out at three in the morning to get my @ORGANIZATION1 and we were at best buy. So we walked up to the store and we opened the door and there had to be over @DATE4 people in the store. So we walk over to the game. I she and their was two text and their was five people in the section so we grabed one of the two. But when we got in line half of the people in the store were already in line. Then we waited in that stupid line forever it literally to us like hours to get through to the front of the line. We got home at @TIME1. This story is not about what I wanted its about patience. So I was patient for two and a half hours waiting to buy my @CAPS2, werever you go use patience you will get thought about and treated nicer than you expect.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16451,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was cost, and saftey. The steel frame of the building would have to be modified, strengthened to fix this new situation and it would cost over @MONEY1. Another obstacle was that most of the countries outside the u.s. use hydrogen which is highly flammable. Another obsacle was ""The winds on top of the building where constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" this made it unsafe. These where some of the mayjor obstacles they had to go through",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12704,5,"The mood created by the author was love from his family The author describes ""a love of (cuban) cooking which is still with me (the author) today"" and how ""Passionate cuban music which I (the author) still adore today."" The author got this love from his parents. Another way the author created the mood of love was by talking about how his ""parents always kept there arms and door open."" I know that it takes a lot to be able to let anyone into your home. The authors speaking very lovingly at this point in the story. The author also says that he ""will always be grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice."" This also sets the mood of the story because they are talking about a loving relationship The mood that the author set during the story was love. I think that this was a really good mood to set in a story.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10327,4,"The author is expressing hope for the future in her concluding paragraph although just failing her drivers test and adjusting to a new atmoshere Saeng finds comfort in a Hibiscus. “it felt smooth an cool with a hint of velvet toward the center - just as she had known it would feel.” This expresses that the rememberence of “an old friend” was able to lift her spirits after a previous dissappoinment it was obvious Saeng was uncomfortable in her environment, which her mother noticed when she arrived at home. “she paused as she noticed the tear stains on her a daughter’s cheecks and her puffy eyes.” Her daughter was not adjusting to her new atmosphere and even though she had spent a lot of money on a single flower she understood. With all the negative attitude through out the story, once Saeng saw the geese and planted her “winter” hibiscus, she realized what was strange to her before had now become familiar. Saeng finally realizes with a memory of home, her goals can be accomplished and life can be stable somewhere other than home. She illustrates that from failurecomes success.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6439,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist by that he or she should behave act or talk according to the settings. It means that where ever they are existing and whatever it looks like, they need to fit them self in. They also need to fit the mood according to where they are located. The cyclist is feeling comfortable according to the story and he dosent need any change in setting or location. For conclusion the features of the setting affects the cyclist by that he needs to make improvment and changes according to where he or she is located. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21374,8,"                                 Love in @LOCATION1 was a small boy, who didn't have very much ambition in life, he was taunted and teased to the point where he would just hide away in his house and not talk to anyone. The other boys at school would laugh at @ORGANIZATION1 for being so much smaller than themselves. He was never the fastest, strongest, or coolest but he was the smartest. He knew how to twist and turn any phrase to make himself feel superior to others. @ORGANIZATION1 was in truth lonely, he had never laughed or felt the cool touch of a lover. He wished dearly that he could be more outgoing to the point where a girl would fall in love with him. There was in fact a girl he had his eye on for months, her name was @PERSON1. She was the most beautiful girl he had have laid eyes on. He had followed her all over town, and rode his bicycle past her almost everyday when she was with her friend @CAPS1. @ORGANIZATION1 hated @CAPS1 for he had gotten to be with @PERSON1 everyday, and got to hold her and talk to her. @ORGANIZATION1 had envied @CAPS1 for around four months before he had messaged her on a website called ""myyeabook"" a place to meet new people and make friends. @ORGANIZATION1 had sent her a friend request and asked for her digits. Hoping she would find him attractive and let him text her. @PERSON1 accepted his request and sent him a message saying ""@CAPS4 I see your from the town next to mine, we should hang out sometime it would be cool."" @ORGANIZATION1 had almost lost it when he had read this, he went and got a hair cut, and new clothes just so that she would think he was attractive and cool. @PERSON1 had went to the park with her friend @PERSON2 and waited for this fellow named @ORGANIZATION1. She and @PERSON2 had played on the swings, and spun each other on the spinning wheel. @ORGANIZATION1 had been riding his bike and set it down a hundred yards away from where they were. He walked over said ""@CAPS4."" to @PERSON2 and proceeded to walk over to @LOCATION2. He told her he thought she was beautiful and had an amazing smile. @PERSON1 blushed and asked him if he wanted to swing for a while. @PERSON2 took off home, seeing that @PERSON1 was going to be okay with this guy, and little did they know, they were made for each other. @ORGANIZATION1 let his guard down and told her some jokes, he laid out his life story almost with her, he was so comfortable around her and he didn't know why. @PERSON1 felt the same way, she laughed at his jokes, and told him her life story. In this one short meeting they had connected on a level that was far from their ages. @ORGANIZATION1 found out that @PERSON1 was smart, and loved to be outdoors, she was practically the female version of himself. After a month of conversation and hanging out off and on, @ORGANIZATION1 sent @PERSON1 a text message saying ""@CAPS6 you down to be my partner in life?"" @PERSON1 was stunned and excited that @ORGANIZATION1 wanted her to be his girlfriend. @PERSON1 simply replied ""@CAPS6 you down to be mine?"" @ORGANIZATION1 replied back to her ""I love you."" @PERSON1 was the happiest girl in the world that night of @DATE1, @NUM1 @DATE2. The two went everywhere together and did everything together, everyone knew that they were perfect for each other. @PERSON1 began to fall in love with @ORGANIZATION1 and after four months of being together told him finally. @ORGANIZATION1 was so elated that he went out and bought her a ring, and she graciously accepted it. @PERSON1 and @ORGANIZATION1 moved in together and started a family. A little laughter can go a long way, in anything you do, a job, a family, or even in the hopes of finding your perfect someone. @PERSON1 and @ORGANIZATION1 found that their love had come from that day many months ago in that park, laughing about even the smallest of things such as a corny joke, or an adventure of another can lead the way to a lifetime of true love. All it takes is a little bit of laughter.",19,20,38.0,38,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9746,4,I know the reason why the author concludes the story the way he dose and  it is a good reason . It says that since she failed this year next year when it is time to ready up the garden she will tell again . That is a good moral because you have to keep trying and trying to succeed   because even if you fail you are not losing any  progress. It is like what @PERSON1 had happen to him even though it took him @DATE1 tries to successfully  make the light bulb he simply said “ I just found out @NUM1 ways not to make a light bulb . So I do agree with this author and how he ended the story.  ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3728,2,"Society is always dealing with what is appropriate and what is not. We witness things of that nature every day even when we are not trying to. It is the classic argument between two parties trying to prove eachother wrong, what is admissable and what is not. We should try with all our efforts to keep inapporpriate books off of our shelves and out of the hands of the young population.     People can be influenced to do just about anything. There are too many of these tales to pick out even one. The interesting thing is people can be affected by someone indirectly. Whether it be through television, music, or books, man can be molded into something through what they are conditioned to believe.      The influences one encounters can be either positive or negative. As a lowly person who only wants what is best for society, I know that movies with criminal acts or explicit images do not help anyone become a better citizen. It is no different with books. Books that have politically incorrect messages are in no sense better than movies that achieve the same goal.     I am not in any way against reading books, rather I am quite on the contrary. Reading is overall good for mental and social health because it allows us to explore things deep inside of us that are often rendered useless in our fast-paced world. But if one is constantly overexposed to books that are against our very human nature, they should be removed for the good of the people around us. If one cannot find a book to read that is not deemed appropriate, then he or she needs to take a look at themselves. There are millions of books that are not only exciting and stimulating but also can have a positive influence on one as well.     We as members of the @ORGANIZATION1 are already in enough trouble as it is with all our financial troubles and what not. We do not need to add more to the table when we let the population gain access to obsene books that would typically make someone only rebellious to society. If something is making the people of our lands more riotous than it should immediately be censored or removed from society in general. Believe it or not, there are ways to have fun and get a good message across at the same time!",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19384,7,Being patient is hard to be. First of all its like your waiting in a??? a and line that could take forever. Being patient at this line could take long time but it could go by fast if you had something to do. You could bring a book to read and read at the way up to one from the line or be patient and???.,5,5,,10,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4646,2,"The librarys are made for everyone, from childern to adults. There @MONTH1 be somethings that should not be in certian areas or even in the place at all.      With the librarys having all age groups of books there,  their @MONTH1 or should not be some material in thoes areas for them to see. let alone @MONTH1 not even be there to begin with. Any age of childern can pick up a material that @MONTH1 contain eaither offensive/or just some things that they should not see. I think that librarys should only contain materials that are approiate for all age groups.      This is my oppion why i think librarys should only have materials with approiate images and words for all age groups. You dont know what your or someone eals child @MONTH1 pick up and read or hear. The beat thing to do is have all approiater materials and nothing eals",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11925,5,"In this memoir by Narciso Rodriguez the mood is very warm and inviting. It is of home and family. Some examples of this are, he mentioen that the kitchen was the heart of the home and the Cuban music was playing all the time. The memoir also conveys a sense of family because the author often mentions large amounts of family and friends would often be visiting. He also mentions there was rarely a time when was not staying with them in their home until they got back on their feet. The mood of this memoir is warming and of family.",3,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10079,4,"The author of ,”Winter Hibiscus ,” concludes the story with the paragraph,” When they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring , when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again .”The author most likely chose this as the last paragraph to help the reader  understand  the message. The message of this story is no matter what happens or what challenges you face, never give up and always keep trying. The author makes that the last paragraph to make the reader think and ponder upon what it means.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6798,3,"The features of the surrounding landscape affect the cyclist both physically and mentally. First, the sun constantly beating down on the cyclist causes his or her body to sweat more, which makes one’s body use more energy. The sun rays also add to the heat the cyclist feels. Also, the rough road forces the cyclist to pedal very hard, which drains him or her of even more energy. For example, when the cyclist in “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” reached the rough roads, he had to pedal harder, which made him sweat more, and caused his amount of energy to decrease. Finally, the lack of civilization can make a cyclist feel hopeless, which is how the cyclist in the essay felt when he had no water or could see no nearby town. This can affect the cyclist’s will to keep pedaling, and if they have no determination, the cyclist will not go anywhere. The features of the setting can physically exhaust and mentally strain the cyclist, which makes it harder for him or her to keep going",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
963,1,"Dear Newspaper, I firmly believe that people do spend a lot of time on computers, alot of teens spend alot of time on computers, I also think this from my own experience and I surveyed @PERSON1's @NUM1 grade @CAPS4 class. I would first like to expand my idea of teens spend alot of time on the computer, some teens go on the internet and do homework or might check their emails others go on @CAPS1 for hours and got addicted, so they're not outside or doing sports. In my own experience I used to have a @CAPS1 and I woud be at it for the whole day and I woud miss out on hanging with my family and friends. So I deleted the account. But, I still feel addicted to the computer I'm always listening to music or chating with my friends or checking my emails like most people The things* And lastly else to @PERSON1's @NUM1 grade @CAPS4 class, @PERCENT1 of people a day on it, @PERCENT2 said that they spend @PERCENT3 of people. That they now go on the computer. These that just one @NUM1 grade class most students are addicted to it.* no matter what age. This is why I believe that people do spend to much time or the. Many students go on @CAPS1 for hours at a time and in my own experience I have been addicted to the comp. and @PERSON1's @NUM1 grade @CAPS4 class when I surveyed them there ans a very high percentage of people that said they were addicted to the computer. So parents please tell your children if they need to spend less time on the computer.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
905,1,"Dear Newspaper @CAPS1, I, a member of the public is writing a letter to you to inform you what I think about on the subject of if people spend to much time on the computer. My first idea is sometimes people do spend to much time on the computer than usual. Its a problem because some people began to become over wieght & start to lose control over the eating habits. My second idea is computers do alot of things for us. But there are still alot of things a computer cant teach us how to do. So computers are helpful but they're not always find something to do outside but whats sometimes different with a computer. My last & final idea is people become to attached to their computers & lose sight of what really matter, such as exercising & fitnesss. Then people are angry when their computer chrashes & forget how to do things because their always on the computer. And those are my ideas on the subject about if people spend to much time on the computer but not as much time with friends and family.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7287,3,"All the features of the environment through which the cyclist is riding affect him greatly. First, since he is riding through the desert in June, that means that it is very hoy out and he will need plenty of water for his long bike ride. Also, the terrain of which he is riding is rough which causes him to lose energy. The sun was also beggining to heat down on him which means that he was going to have a hot ride to the town and which later caused his struggle for water. Overall, the hot, desert setting affects the cyclist. It causes him to dehydrate and have a need for water. In the story it says, “The water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips” and that he could drop from a heatstroke on a beautiful day in June, This is basically showing that the hot environment caused him to drink a lot of water, and now he has run low which could cause him to have a heat stroke.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18387,7,"One day my mom, my sister, and I was going to the hair salon to get our hair done. It was so many people there talking. It was kind of noisy too. The tv was on, the radio was on, and a bunch of people talking. When we got there my mother signed all three of us in on the sign in sheet then we had to sit and wait. We waited for a long time. I really wanted to leave and come back another day but my mom said we had to wait. I got hungry and I was sleepy. We waited for an hour. I didn’t let it bother me, so I turned on my @NUM1 player and listened to it until it was time for us to come next. Then we had to wait another hour, and I got even more hungry but I didn’t say anything. So we waited and waited and finally we were up next. And we all got our hair done. Then when we left we went to get some food because we were all hungry. And that was a time I was patient at hair salon.",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1695,1,"Dear local Newspaper, @CAPS1 you @MONTH1 know, @CAPS2 people are starting to buy and own computers. Some experts say this is a bad thing and that we should spend more time outdoors. I disagree with this statement. First, computers help us with every day life. We check news on computers, some people even use their computers @CAPS1 a @CAPS3 and watch important shows. Second, a computer is a great way to comunicate. @CAPS10 its friends, family or even buisness, a computer is a excelent way of communication. finally, a computer is help when it comes to school or work. You could write a paper on the computer for example read on to see how I support my reasons of why computers are helpful in peoples lives. Have you ever had a time when you see something on the news that you want to learn more about? Well, @CAPS10 you had a computer, you could go online to the news website and read more. This is only one way a computer comes in handy in every day life, there are plenty more. Another way is @CAPS10 you don't own a @CAPS3, you could watch your favorite show on the computer. My english teacher @PERSON1 says ""I never owned a @CAPS3, I only watch @CAPS3 on my computer and I like it better"" In fact @PERCENT1 of people who watch videos on the computer like it better than @CAPS3. This is how computers come in handy in every day life. I love how computers have @CAPS2 ways of comunicating. I like it because I have @CAPS2 relatives who live far away and I use my computer to comunicate with them from time to time. Skype is my favorite, I can see the person @CAPS8 talking to at the same time. Also computers can be good for business for large companies who need to comunicate out of the contry. I'm sure being a amazing newspaper company, you could use a way of easy comunication. finally, comunication with friends. These are @CAPS2 programs for this, @CAPS9 @CAPS1 facebook and myspace. This is why a computer is a good way of comunication. finally, computers can be useful for schools and work. You can type a paper or news article on the computer. It's much faster than writing. Also, @CAPS10 you need more info on something, you could look it up online. like @CAPS10 you are writing an article on dolphins, you could learn more about them. In conclusion I think computers are good things. They help with everyday life, They are good for comunication. And last they help at school or work.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10495,4,I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph because she failed the test so over the winter they don’t get hibiscus but over the spring when they get again the hibiscus she will try to take the taste again so she can pass it,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12783,5,The mood created by the memoir is exciting because he likes fashion design. He makes the story about clothing design. He also feels happy because he likes the home and has turned a simple house into home. He felt sad because he was born in a simple house. He wanted somewhere he could call home.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6027,3,"Ghost towns are not exactly the most inviting place for a cyclis trunning low on water supply. In “Rough road ahead: do not exceed speed limit” the cyclist is affected in many ways by his surrounding settings. Starting off on a warm day with the sun bright start off as a good thing, while his mood is still fresh and happy expressions play on his face. But as he moves on he speaks of how “The sun was beginning to beat down” expressing his remorse of listening to the old men that led him on their “shortcut.” Along the road he comes to his first let-down, a ghost town with “one ramshackle shop, several rusty pumps and a corral that couldn’t hold the lamest male.” @CAPS1 he tries to pump the water from the corral but gets a “battery-acid” flavor and is forced to continue onward with little left to drink. This affects his mood to pity for himself and anger at the men who put him into the predicament. By the end he is relieved though when he comes to GARY & @CAPS2 FISH CAMP, a place with a working sink full of cold water. He says he “had an overwhelming urge to seek out @ORGANIZATION1, kiss them and buy some bait.” His thankfulness is expressed to men he doesn’t even know but because they were the light at the end of his long, dark and very exhausting tunnel.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12020,5,"The mood the author creates in the memoir is gratefulness. The author creates gratefulness by repeatedly saying what his parents gave him and that he is grateful for it. First he talks about how he is grateful his parents got him interested in cooking. In paragraph @NUM1 it says, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their... love of cooking that is still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful)."" This shows the author is grateful for his parents showing him to love cooking. Another time the author is grateful is in paragraph @NUM2. It says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This shows the author is grateful for his parents' endurance to come to @LOCATION1. In conclusion, the mood the author creates in the memoir is gratefulness. He was grateful for his parents giving him all they could.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6140,3,"The settings of cyclist affects the way cyclist perform. If the weatheris too hot then the cyclist might slow down because of the sun beating down on them. If its too cold, the cyclist puts on more clothes which might weigh them down from achieving the speed they need to obtain. The bike has to be stable. Riding on rough roads, braking, speeding, chains in good conditions. The area were the cyclists rides sets the mood. If its a nice scenary the cyclist might be in a wonderful mood as to the scenary being dark and gloomy with nasty weather behind it the cyclist might not be as happy as they could be. These typess of things @MONTH1 help determine how settings can affect the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9975,4,"The reason that the author had ended the story the way she did was to leave the reader on the last thought. Also it symbolizes rebirth. When Saeng says, “... this hibiscus is budding ...” (Ho @NUM1). She is also describing that they will start over when spring comes. And that leaves the reader with the last thought about Saeng, and how she has overcome living in the new place. Lastly, it ties up @CAPS1 feelings and experiences the whole time she had moved, “... I will take the test again” (Ho @NUM1), which tells the reader she will continue to give her new home a shot. In conclusion, the reason for this quote being the last paragraph is to show that Saeng will continue to try to overcome ??? (WORDS NOT @CAPS2) ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18181,7,"One day when I was out camping with my friend @PERSON1 I asked him if we could climb the dunes and he said we would do it later. So I waited hours and hours and hours and hours then he said acler our lunch. Then I asked him after lunch and he said yes. But when is saw the dunes I knew it was a bad idea for me to climb it but I did. After I got to the top. I fell and @CAPS1 stayed there like, a dead animal. After five minute I was good and climbing to the top dune off because after I got up I ran down the dune and when my friend told me to stop I stop I stoped. But I got seed in my coat pocket. Then I hit a rock and did a front flip. Then I fell, when my friend carte down we both lauphed and @CAPS2 back to our campsite.",9,8,,17,,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3263,2,"Censorship of @CAPS1 of @CAPS2            'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf -- that work I abhor -- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us,' is a quote from Author, Katherine Paterson. She is saying that there are some books that most people would think to be a little graphic or shocking, but we can not take those books off the shelf because then eventually there would be no books left to read. I agree with her in the sense that we can not take certain books off the shelves in our library. We can not take them off the shelves because that would be taboo in many ways. It would be stepping into hot water because the people would be violating the authors freedom of the press, who would decide what material was right and wrong, and how far is too far when it comes to censorship. These are just a few of the many reasons this is wrong.     Taking certain books of shelves would be against our constitution. The @CAPS3 @CAPS4 gives all @CAPS5 citizens the freedom of the press. This means that they can write anything that they want without having to worry about the government's or the citizens' opinions. If we start taking certain books off shelves of libraries because they @MONTH1 include a few controversial things we are violating there natural right. Which leads me to my next argument in if we do allow censorship, who should be in charge?     So many people want to include their opinions on what is right and what is wrong. So, who are we supposed to believe? On person @MONTH1 think somthing is out of line, but the person standing next to them would think it is ordinary. That is what makes this country great. We are a mixture of many different ideas that work together for a common goal. If the government would assign someone to censoring books, magazines, or music, there would be a uproar. How can one person say if something is wrong? And if someone was allowed to censor things, what would be included? How far is to far?     This is a hard question to ask. If we were to allow one person to judge things what should be included? Would the judgement stop at just books, movies, and music? Or would it expand to judgement of clothes and lifestyles? If we implement this system of censorship, our who lives would become one big judgement. Self expression would go out the window because people would be scared of being deemed 'inapropriate.' Our world would become a puzzle of trying to fit in and to not be noticed, rather than standing out and pushing the human race forward.     There are always going to be those people who disagree with things. They find it out of place or offensive. What we have to realize is that everyone views things in different ways. We as people need to learn to accept something out of the ordinary, and try to understand where otheres are comming from. If we can do that our world would be a much better place",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3848,2,"Katherine Paterson wrote, ''If I had the right to remove that book from the shelf that work I abhor~~ then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else.'' quote.Having the right to do something is a part of freedom of speech almost. Its believing in your decesion or choice you have made. If I were to reflect my views on censorship in libraries, we all would have that same oppurtunity to state our opinion about what we feel should not be included. There could be unappropriate books in the library that we absolutly would not want our younger group of siblings reading. The best thing is to ask ourselves, Should we have the right to take our kids freedom an right to read, listen to, updated media and publications from them when we had it? Should we put a censorship on the libraries really?     I feel that censoring a library would not be nessarry considering a library is a manual guide of history. Our libraries or organized from A to @CAPS1  in authors names, seperated from non fiction an fiction, cd's seperated in one section, movies one section, magazines, and adult books from children book seperated in diffrent sections. Libraries all across the world has had a kid that might have choose a book that was not appropriate for them to read but what kid hasn't. What would a book hurt them if theres plenty of  bad influces, peer presure, violence, and sexually publicity everywhere and @PERCENT1 in the media. It would not be fair at all for us to rob our kids of the chance to read and learn from books.     I feel no we should not take our learning form our babies. Growing up as a kid I loved being able to go to the library it helped to enhance my vocabulary, spelling and which I learned plenty new words. Books I read growing up wasn't perfectly @NUM1 but I could relate to alot of books I choose as a kid so no I feel we should not censor libraies we need them to be a fun place to our children and us to go to for learning, fun, confort and etc. We can't take that from our generation it just would not be right.",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19241,7,"At one @CAPS2 in left you would have to be patient. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerate. Somebody that’s patient experiences difficulties without complaining. There was one @CAPS2 in life when I was patient. Yay! Yag! My mom is taking my friends and I to @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I called many friends, and told them if they wanted to go.  Meanwhile, we packed up some water bottles and hopped into the can. We were all looking out the window. OMG! Look at those big roller coasters. One of my friends shouted out. There we were at @CAPS1 @CAPS2; the first ride I saw was the @CAPS3. The highest and fastest roller coaster there well, it only lasted @NUM1 seconds. So we were all talking about it, then we decided to go on it. Wow! The line is huge. We all said. I shouted out its ok, I heard its an awesome ride lets just all be patient. Meanwhile, we waited and waited, until we were finally the next people to ride. We went on the ride, and then all of a sudden the ride start, we didn’t know and it only lasted @NUM1 seconds. We waited about two hours but it was worth it. In conclusion, I really do think that being patient is a good thing in life, even if it takes hours. I learned so much from just going on the @LOCATION1, we should all be patient because no matter where you are, you will always need to be patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15347,6,"While designing and building the mooring mast atop the Empire State building, the engineers seem to have ignored some seemingly useful information. As with any vehicle in the air or at sea, wind is either your enemy, or your friend. The engineers should have taken into greater consideration that changing wind speeds and direction 1,250 feet in the air are huge threats. Your dirigible will have a hard time getting close enough to the mast to moor, never mind to stay steady enough for passengers to exit, and board safely. Also if the law itsself prevented you from floating your blimp at such low altitudes, then its game over. Why even bother if its illegal? Although it seems like a futuristic sci-fi, and not to mention downright cool way to land a blimp, to many things prevented the idea from prevailing.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19498,7,"Patience, it’s something that my family doesn’t have. Here is the story. Wile am doing the dishes my little brother is crying cause my little sister @PERSON2 hit him. So sence @CAPS1 is crying (my little brother). @CAPS3 starts to cry (my little sister). So then my step dad is playing on his iphone. He is going to yell at @CAPS1 pretty soon. And what do you know he does. Okay you think it’s going to get better? Nope wrong. I get @CAPS3 to stop crying. But @CAPS1 just won’t so l call @PERSON2 in here and @CAPS1 got to hit her then my step dad starts to go crazy cause he is still crying now @PERSON2 is being a brat stomping of the stairs. When ??? got ??? calm down. Now just as l am about to go crazy @PERSON1 (my older brother) comes in and takes  @CAPS1 down stairs to calm him down. Thank @CAPS7, for @ORGANIZATION1. Then I calm @CAPS3 back down. What a day well l guess my family does have patience well not my step dad.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6089,3,"In the eassy “DO NOT Exceed posted speed limit,” It is a clear cut for survival as it seems that this man is fighting to stay alive. As l know cyclists pedal for hours at a time and sometimes for hundreds of miles of he was biking where green grass and cool mountains collide the tone and mood of the essay would of beam completely different.He uses sentences such as “… of two hundred degrees, deteriorating brain, birds would pick me up clean and drop from heatstroke.” @CAPS1 all make me want to read further in the essay to see lf he will be ok by thes end of his journey? I know what the feeling is when you are low of fluids because l have chronic dehydrated. I couldn’t imagine biking and only seeing desert hiss and passing tumble weed. It sounds like an awful experience. If he were somewhere cooler and colorful his experience wouldnt of been so horrific.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1692,1,"Dear The @CAPS1, People have been saying that computers are not beneficial, but they are wrong. In my opinion computers are very beneficial. Computers teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about other people and faraway places, also, you can use the internet to interact with friends and family. Computers can be very useful and efficient to anybody. Did you know that computers can teach hand-eye coordinaiton? Some computers have programs that teach you how to type. Without having to lock down at the keyboard. Even if people don't have the program they can learn how to type fact without having to look down. Many people that I know, have learned how to use the computer or type without anyone telling them hour to do so. Computers are very needed all around the world. Computers give people the ability to learn about other people and places. If you go on the internet you can go and searching person or place and the computer will find it for you. Children and adults need computers because if for example, a child get a project from schoool that need to be done about a famous person or smoking. she would most likely need to go to the internet . The game goes for adults that love jobs in offices, schools or anywhere else. Computers are essential to people all around the world. Computer can be used to comunicate with each other. People use computer to communicate with friends or family in far away places. They can communicate via e-mail, @CAPS2, video and maybe even in other web sites. Some web sites contain the ability to talk to each other through video or through messages, such as @CAPS3, or @CAPS4. People like using the computer because it is very useful when you need it most. If you ask anyone they will tell you that having a computer is very important and necessary. Why would people intend to take away something as important and useful as a computer? Computers can be used to learn hand-eye coordination, and help you move your fingers faster. They give poeple and places in the world. Finally, they can be used to communicate with one another through e-mail, message and many other ways. In my opinion, computers are one of the most important things to a person.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15490,6,"Many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was the architect could not simply drop a mooring on top of the building's Flat roof. Like it @CAPS2 in @CAPS1 @NUM1. Also ""rather than building a utilitarian mast without any ornamentation, the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless stell tower that would be eliminated from inside. With a step-back to imitate the overall shape of the building itself."" It @CAPS2 in @CAPS1 @NUM2.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12300,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is lifting. The mood created by the author is lifting because it shows that race doesn't matter when it comes to unity or friendship. It is also lifting because Narciso's parents gave up everything and everyone so that their family can live a better life. Another reason why it is lifting is because in the story it talks about how the family doesn't have to neccisarily blood related and can be someone you love and will help you. That is why I think the mood created by the author in the memoir is lifting.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15047,6,"The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted explains the plans for adding a mast to the top of the Empire State Building that would have been able to anchor blimps to the top of it. This idea was very complex; however, architects of time (@DATE1's) believed that it was quite possible. What they didn't seem to realize was just how many problems and obstacles there were to get in the way of the mast's success. One minor set back was that the mast (and the blimp attached to it) would add great amounts of stress to the frame of the building. This problem was taken care of with little stress by simply modifying in strengthening the building's foundation and frame. The largest obstacle standing in the way of the mast's success was the heavy winds at the top of the building, which were ""constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". However, the absolute greatest issue that was faced was safety of the public. Most foreign blimps at the time were filled with highly flammable gas, which was ultimately why the mooring mast was never a success.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6110,3,"'Do Not Exceed the Posted Speed Limit’ by Joe Kurmaskie demonstrated that the features of the setting affected the cyclist a great deal. First off, the cyclist was in the desert on a bicycle. This affected her because if they had been in a car, or on a bus alot less energy would have been used up. Secondly, the cyclist started running out of water. This setting didn’t help because they were on a bike so that kept them hydrated. Another setting that affected the plot was the deserted towns. If they hadn’t been deserted everything would have been better. These features affected the cyclist a great deal.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12734,5,"The mood created by the author is that he is realy happy that his parents moved to america to live close to friends and family because in paragraph @NUM1 it says"" countless extended family members came and went -- and there was alway someone temporarily staying with us.""",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1011,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 you have a computer at home? Right now, more than @PERCENT1 of the people have at least one or more computers at home. Computers are common by now, but people argue rather they are really needed on our society. Computers give negative effects on people, for example, lose eye sight, interacting with strangers online and lack of outdoor exercise. One out of five people wear glasses or contacts, these days. the rate of people wearing glasses are increasing rapidly as well. Children and adults are spending too much time on the computer, which causes to lose eye sight. When people use too much computers, their eyes start to hurt and lead to a headaches as well. These are sign of spending too much time, but people tend to ignore it because they want to get work done, or simply addicted to the online video games. this shows that computers give terrible effects on society. When a person is on the internet, there is no limitation to him or her. Once a person is online, there are endless amounts of site to access on that are not always trusted. Online, where anyone can go on, there are millions of people that are not connected or related. In other words, strangers, interacting with people they don't know is very dangerous. They can have devastating influence, no supremacy, what so ever unless they are a teacher of same sort. Unfortunatly, people can not trust anyone online because they don't know who it exactly is. For example facebook. People think they are private, but everything that is uploaded or posted is public. Also others will be able to view your profile even they are not friends with that person. this is not safe in any way. The rate of people getting addicted on the internet is increasing as well. These people tend to not go outside at all and stay home. These people get not enough exercises, which are very unhealthy they tend to get their meals done at fast foods which are unhealthy as well. For the reason, people on the computers get fat from the unbalanced meal and never interact with people outside and nature outside. In conclusion, computers have negative effects on society because, they increase the number of people wearing glasses and losing eye sight. Second, they are creating a unsafe environment. last it makes people have unbalanced meals and lose track of their diet. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19103,7,"One @DATE1 @TIME1 I was at the locked @CAPS1 creem store frasty’s The line was huge. There had to @CAPS2 over @NUM1 people there and I was in the @CAPS3 of the line siting there waiting.  Thinking what I am going to get. One by one @CAPS4 took the orders. Until one short old lady hadn’t decided what she was going to get yet I sat and waited as she blaberd on ashing the prices if it was suger free, what toppings it had on it, @CAPS5, @CAPS5, @CAPS5. Finaly she orderd. I am at the front of the line and all of a sudden a group of people come up. I guess @CAPS4 were “holding  there  place in  line”. There had to @CAPS2 @NUM2 of them yelling at the person @CAPS8 the glass dire a roches ship going off. Finaly the order was done and I was up @CAPS9 @CAPS10 I could talk this sweet old lady asked “can I cut in front of you deer?” I had to say yes it wouldn’t @CAPS2 nice if I did’t. that is my story about Being patient.",10,11,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3880,2,"Dear Newspaper:              @CAPS1, there should be censorship in libraries, but people should be a certain age just to check the book out. Some people go to the libraries just for censorship.          These days censorship basicly is how you get children or students just to pick up a book. Plus, if the parents aloud their child to read cebsorship books because they think it does no harm to the child which it don't. Put a @NUM1 and older section in the libraries so any and every body will not be able to enter unless they have @CAPS2 just to solve the age problem. However you do it the libraries will lose the little money they are getting from the people.          I no you think censorship should be taking off every shelf in the libraries, but they really shouldn't because I believe if you do that then the libraries will go out of business for good. That is the reason why the libraries should keep censorship on there selvies. I'm finish but I will leave you with this question: do you really want to take censorship out the libraries?",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20889,8," Laughing, smirking, giggling, @CAPS1 chuckling; these all have to do with one subject, @CAPS1 that is, laughing. Laughter is everywhere, you hear it in libraries, parks, at home, behind your back, @CAPS1 it can be a great thing or a horrible thing in @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 even with family @CAPS1 friends. Everyone has a past with laughing that has welcomed them, helped them out, cheered them up, or even, just so they can make a very special friend that will stay with them forever. It was the start of a brand new @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 I had just moved from @LOCATION2. I was a seventh grader about to start at @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1, @CAPS1 wasn't a real big fan of hanging out with people , so i stayed to myself most of the weeks, eating lunch in the guidance center, trying to figure out where books where without talking to anybody. My schedule was good, I had choir, art, drama, you know all the stuff I like. Art @CAPS1 drama were a blast, but when it came to choir @CAPS1 singing, my social level went down. I love to sing, but never did it in front of people. Then one day, I was walking to choir @CAPS1 I tripped @CAPS1 fell, my papers falling with me. My @ORGANIZATION1 work was all over the hall, math at one end, science at the other. But, out of all the kids in the hallway, only one laughed. She walked by @CAPS1 say I did a great job but something triggered her to come back. She helped me pick up all my math homework @CAPS1 picked up my schedule @CAPS1 saw that she too had choir this period. Her name was @PERSON1, she told me, @CAPS1 i told her my name, @CAPS1 we walked together. We sat next to each other @CAPS1 i sang with her ours voices in harmony. We talked in between periods, at lunch, on the bus ride home. We became great friends @CAPS1 the principal thought so too @CAPS1 he went ahead @CAPS1 gave us classes together. We were friends @CAPS1 we still are friends till this day. But the sad thing is is that she moved at the near end of eighth grade year. But she was the only friend I had for a little while @CAPS1 I always give her a call every now @CAPS1 then. Sometimes we can talk for hours, laughing @CAPS1 talking about how we are doing @CAPS1 when we are going to see each other again. She has been my best friend for at least two years now @CAPS1 it all happened by a slip of a foot, that falling of papers, @CAPS1 one little laugh from an amazing person. Laughing has got me so far in life @CAPS1 at @ORGANIZATION1. Every now @CAPS1 then, when i see someone, all alone, wanting a friend, I go @CAPS1 talk to them, @CAPS1 even laugh with them. One little laugh can trigger a huge friendship waiting to happen. Even if you don't think so, it does. Some say, ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" @CAPS1 I believe who ever said that because it happened to me.",20,19,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3815,2,"In many libraries there are books, movies, magazines and much much more. Some of these items though are seen as inappropiate for certain ages. I believe though that every customer in the library should have the ability to choose what they want to read. It is up to the parents or the child to decide what they want in their heads.     Let us start with books. There are many different types of books. From scientific data about human anatomy to dragons and vampires. How can you choose a book that is deemed appropiate for you though? The answer is simple. When you are younger, your parents help you choose the right books to read and as you mature, you begin to make thoses choices yourself. It is up to you whether or not you should read a certain book.      Movies guidelines are along the same pattern. Your parents helped you choose appropiate movies in your youth. When you grow up, you learn to read about the movie, and look at the rating. If it seems to intimadating, or innapropiate, or violent, you make the choice to see it or not.      Sometimes you see offensive material in movies or books. If you dissaprove of it strongly take the dilemma to the librarian. Discuss why you think the movie/book is unnappropiate and offer some ideas on how to deals with the situation. Some suggestions could be: to remove the item from the shelf, or to write and extra review on the book, or write to the author/movie director. The simplest solution though is to just leave the offensive item alone. If it offends you, just send it back to the library and warn your friends not to check it out. Others @MONTH1 still enjoy the item even though you don't.          There are many books, movies, magazines, etc. out in the world. Some @MONTH1 be deemed as innapropiate or offensive. There are many other choices that are 'okay'. So if you don't approve of a certain book, just send it back to the library and find one you do like.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16572,6,"The empire State building had to face dangerous condition every day like @CAPS1 winds, heavy lifting, High heights.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12799,5,Though out this story there is a certain @CAPS1 of @CAPS2. like how these people got there dream home and this was it. How there Parents Came to this country not knowing the language or have a good edication but Still becoming succesful and living in this house. Where these people learned to love. and the best part having family near by.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1772,1,"Dear Newspaper Readers, @CAPS1 many hours a day do you spend on the computer? In this modern world, @CAPS2 @MONTH1 seem hard for you to tear away from that trusty computer screen and face life. Nearly everyone in @LOCATION1 has a computer, about @PERCENT1, and @CAPS2 is ruining our country. With all these hours wasted in the virtual world, people are lacking in exercise, leading to many problems. They are also avoiding nature outside, and losing contact with family and friends. I think that computers are causing way too many problems and peerhaps, with some consideration @ORGANIZATION1 my evidence, you could come to think the same. Statistically, the @ORGANIZATION1 is the most overweight country. One @ORGANIZATION1 the reasons? Hours @ORGANIZATION1 sitting at the computer replaces healthy exercise @CAPS3 are all spending our lives on the computer, and sitting and clicking is not exercise. The great lack @ORGANIZATION1 exercise is causing health problems. Not exercising can lead to abesity, which damages joints terribly. Then, diabetes developes, taking away from the quality @ORGANIZATION1 your life. Finally, there is heart disease, a top killer in our country. All this from spending time on the computer? you @MONTH1 ask @CAPS4 the amount @ORGANIZATION1 time @CAPS3 spend on computers is much more damaging than this. Every day is beautiful in its own way, and sometimes @CAPS2 is beautiful to us, in saying that beautiful to us (when @CAPS2 comes to the outdoors) is clear skys and a warm-temperature. These days come quite often, but what does @ORGANIZATION1 do? Glance out the window and go back to texting on that @ORGANIZATION2 laptop. Our bodies need this @CAPS5, @CAPS5 @CAPS6. @CAPS3 get @CAPS2 from the sun, and without going outside, @CAPS3 don't get @CAPS2. not traveling outdoors deprives our body @ORGANIZATION1 an important @CAPS5. @CAPS2 affects more than just our health, as well @CAPS7 inside on the computer keeps us from having expenence real experience. @CAPS3 learn things on the computer, but only virtually. What happens when @CAPS3 are forced out into the real world and cant really do anything? Everyone loves having friends and family, so @CAPS2 doesn't make sense why @CAPS3 would rather email them with trivial things instead @ORGANIZATION1 talking. Instant messaging doesn't really bond people, as conversations are planned out you have time to think, so the person doesn't know what the real you would say. This frays the bonds between people, and once @CAPS3 can't work together, even with family, @ORGANIZATION1 can't work together at all, and nobody wants that. Computers take away too much to be spending so much time on. Blatantly, they are bad for people. Not only do they effectively cause abesity, they fool us into thinking @CAPS3 can do things that really, @CAPS3 can only do virtually, and make close people come apart. @CAPS2's ruining @LOCATION1. A country cannot be by the sick, useless, and isolated. @CAPS2's time to step away from the computer and into real life before @LOCATION1 gets demolished by these effects computers cause.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3685,2,"I think that a library should be just books because that what they are made for. If we started putting movies in the librarys why put books in the libraries. I think it should be one or the other. If movies were in libraries i think that people would get more movies than books, and just think how it would be if you put music in a library also. I do think that a magazine is a book.     Movies should stay in a movie store of at the movie theater. not in libraries. Music should stay on the radio or in stores not in libraries. People would lose intrest in books if people started putting movies and music in libraries. I think they are trying to put technology in libraries and im not for that.     If music and movies were at libraries their would be no need for books and people would stop buying books. We need books they are the oldest but most acreart way to express yourself or tell a story. but now they want movies or music.",2,2,,2,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16210,6,"The biggest obsticle was safely. The foriegn dirigibles use Hydrogen (@NUM1) gas as a means to fly but hydrogen gas is highly flamable. The owners of the Empire State Building were consernd because of what happened to the German dirigible, Hindenburg, over Lakehurst, @LOCATION2. The Hindenburg bursted into flames and in less than one minute there was no dirigible, just some charred scrap metal. If this incident were to happen in a highly populated area like downtown New York City it would create a high number of casualties and fatalities.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1393,1,"Dear @CAPS1 Newspaper, @CAPS2 when you were a kid? There weren't any computers or other electronics except the telephone. The computer is very advanced and helps people in many different ways, such as: hand-eye cordination, learning and being able to talk online. These things benefit society and prove the advancement in technology. The computer teaches hand-eye cordination when people don't even realize @CAPS5, through typing whether typing an email or an essay your hands are working and helping you. The hand-eye cordination that people learn on a computer can be used for sports. @PERSON3, a @NUM1 years old tennis player, said, ""I used to go on the computer everyday and play tennis later, and eventually the computer helped use with my favorite sport."" Hand-eye cordination is very useful, for many things our surveyed @NUM2 people and @NUM3 of these people say that hand-eye cordination is a very important still and that everyday activities, such as computers, help them improve. Typing is very comonly used while sending emails because they are fast, fun, and let you comunicate. When talking on a computer there are many new ways that are popular and fast, such as email welcoms aim, facebook and many more. @CAPS5 is nice to be able to talk to friends and family online because other options are more expensive. For example, many live on @LOCATION1 and her sister, @PERSON4, she is very close to, lives in @LOCATION3. They can't talk to each other a lot because neither of their calling plans allow them to call without charging hundreds of more money. They also can't fly to use each other because plane tickets are expensive these days. Also, the economy isn't doing that great, so they couldn't stay in-touch until webcams come out. Now, they see each other almost every week. Many said, ""I was considering flying to @LOCATION3, but now the webcams and email are useful and save us both a lot of money."" People @MONTH1 argue that you can just sent letters to each other, but, you can't send your baby boys first steps that you just video taped, or a youtube video that is really cute. Also, you can meet new people online that you @MONTH1 not've seen normally and when you can stay in touch, you can stay much closer to each other. Even though computers are great for fun, working and learning are much easier online. When online, everything that can be learned is amazing whether @CAPS5's what means or the earthquake in @LOCATION4. Being able to keep track of everything in one computer is amazing. @PERSON2, a @NUM4 @CAPS3 teacher at @LOCATION2, says, ""@CAPS4, we are trying to make more things electronic to protect the planet, so use don't waste paper and will trees."" @CAPS5 is true, about @PERCENT1 of the homework of @NUM5 graders is online, whether @CAPS5 is to look up the equation for photosynthesis on to find out what year @CAPS6 died in being online does help the environment @CAPS5 is important to be able to have computers in schools because @CAPS5 gives more chances for kids to learn more things faster, like @NUM6 graders have a math class online, off hey math. @CAPS5 gives people more information coming from more people. Online, you can read a scientists' expierement or a paparatzi's take on @PERSON1' new boyfriend. The computer has changed society a lot, for the better. Now, in the @DATE1, computers are part of the everyday lives of people in which they benefit. With better hand-eye cordination, being able to talk your friends, and being able to learn the computer benefits society.",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10103,4,The auther mad it seem like he did not like it but he loved flowers and he like working in the syr wit the people his mom is anierpaady he liked to see him togod wit his life that come back becus thay liked the place.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18787,7,"It was my family vacation, we was going to @CAPS1 point. We was staying in the magical hotel is was, was beautiful you can see a real waterfall and it like haven. We was in this huge room it have @NUM1 huge bathroom and bigs @CAPS2. Then as I look out of the window I can see rolercoster and all kind of ride. But they have come with these knew ride call the @CAPS3 breaker: it @NUM2 hundred feet tall and big as the statin of libaty and it pikes you up drop you @NUM2 hundred feet twist like a! Tarnado. It move from sides to side. Me and my mom and dad went there, we want to ride. But @NUM4 people wateing in line. My parent wont use to ride a different ride but I wanted to rid this. So I got in line and wait, I knew I have to be patient but @NUM1 hours pass I start to loss my patient. There was only @NUM6 people in front of me. Finaly it was my turn, I got on it, frist laft me up @NUM7 hundred. Feet and dropedme, spin the around, twist me until I got tired and finally I got off it. You can see me crying but it was not a bad cry, it was a good cry so that was the time I was patient",7,9,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9789,4,"The Author of “Winter Hibiscus”, Minfong Ho, concluded hes story with the paragraph about how when the geese are there, and the hibiscus is blooming, Saeng will take her drivers test again, because she wanted to end on a happy note. In the begining of the story, Saeng, who had just moved from Vietnam to the @LOCATION2, failed her drivers test. She had found a plant they had back in Vietnam, but it made her sad. “I mean it’s not like the kind we had at – at-"" she found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again.” (Ho, @NUM1) So by ending by describing positive things for the future, Saeng could think about that, and get her mind off of everything else.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3083,2,"Do you believe that certain things need to be taken off the shelf that's uncensored for my children to see.No, I honestly do not because the library shouldn't have no uncensored things put up on the shelves that our children might not see.Cause the staff shouldn't let the children in that area without a parent were the uncensored books, magazines, movies, music and etc.      But it's know ones fault because the media staff that works in the library shoudn't allow the younger kids to go in that area were those things are unless their guardian are with them. Unless they allow them in the area were the books, movies, magazines, etc.The kids should have a certain part of the library were they can take books from that's inappropiate for them.     There's alot of books that children shouldn't be able to read but they read anyways without adults permission.And yes their some books,that's not inappropiate for the little ones and the big kids.Thing's like that is offensive toward the parents how the staff just let them read in see things like that in the parents wonder why, an how there children learning things like that.     Certain things should be posted for things that kids shouldn't be able to see an read and do.And yes I have the right to say something to the staff for letting my child read, see things their not suppose to see.They know those things not appropiate for them so why would they let them watch or do or see stuff like that.     My conclusion yes I think certain things that don't suppose to be were they suppose to be for young children to see.That's not right to let them see things like that. So that's why I'm writing this essay to the newspaper arguing on whats right for allowing them to see uncensored things they are not to see",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16332,6,"In the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 faced @CAPS2 of problems. One problem they had was the ""dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted All the way to the Buildings foundation"" (@CAPS3. @NUM1). The @CAPS1 Had to modify and strengthen the building to Accommodate the new situation. The dirigible was @CAPS8 big that they could not even ancker the Back of it to the roof. The @CAPS1 Had A @CAPS6 time trying to figure out How the dirigibles would land Because the wind was @CAPS7 @CAPS8 @CAPS6 the pilot could not even controll the dirigible. The @CAPS1 Had to put another Sixty thousand Dollars into it because of the modifications. Al Smith was the one who thought of this Idea. then He realized it wouldn't work. @CAPS8 in the the @CAPS1 finish constructing it But the Dirigibles could not dock there.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15320,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building are faced with several obstacles on they attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle they encountered was designing a mooring mast that could with hold the stress of the dirigible's load. In stanza @NUM1 the author writes, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame."" @CAPS1, the steel frame of the Empire state building would have to be modified and strengthened to ameliorate this problem. Next, the greatest obstacle they faced was the strong winds on top of the building. In stanza @NUM2, it say, ""Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" This arrived as a huge problem as the architects could not weigh down the back of the ship because it could endanger pedestrians. Lastly, in stanza @NUM3 it states there is ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" @CAPS1, it would be illegal for the dirigibles to tie up to the empire state building or even come close to the area. Due to these three obstacles the plan of using a mooring mast became an idea of the past.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15885,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast,"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was in paragraph 6, the excerpt says, ""one obstacle to their expanded use in New York City was the lack of a suitable landing area."" This means that the architects needed to build enough area to land the dirigibles, precisely and carefully. Another obstacle was in paragraph @NUM1, which said, ""the greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" This is explaining that the outcome of nature can be predicted, but it cannot be controlled. The amount of ""violent air currents"" can disturb the landing of dirigibles and it is ""neither practical nor safe"" for the dirigibles to dangle high above the pedestrians that are on the street. Unfortunately, Al Smith's plan to able the dirigibles to moor at the Empire State Building was unsuccessful. There was a law stated in paragraph @NUM2, that made ""it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approached the area"". Instead of using the mooring mast, the dirigibles gave way to airplanes.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1690,1,"My opinion on the effects of computers is that most people in the world spend most of their time sitting on the computer day in and day out. If someone I knew spent all day long on the computer I would tell him or her head on that he or she sould go out side and get some fresh air and get some exrcise. Some times the only way to make contact with them is by talking to them on the computer. Although the computer can be quit helpful by looking up important artifacts or important information about medical plans, tutorials of how to fix, make, or biuld things, and to meet new people, But, the computer can be a dangerous place as well you can meet someone who is lieing about their age that person might rape or miurder/kill you. If you spend twenty-four seven on the computer you could be paralized from lack of exercise or get lumf ophemia thats when your body a pears and will not be a to exercise and would need special treatments. Like masogise. Computers can also be good because it can give you hand eye coordination by useing the still looking sometimes some people for useing the computer: videos, video, and websites. You can get your computer uloaded for for quality. Some systems howe computers in them or can be connected to the computer like the, and the @CAPS1 @NUM1 @CAPS2. There are games called p.c. games some p.c. games comeucicate with childern to teach them how to write, read, spell, and pronounce words. There are also spiecal computers and/or web-sites you can search for tutorial for speaking different langueges. There are also sites you can search for tutorials for playing instroments. Some people use the computer to fill their emptynis inside of them inistead of eating. Some people obeuse the compeuter as a dug like they're addictied to it. Imagine someone addictied to computers every where he/she goes they would take their laptop with them. Many people have died useing the computer but thats because they obeused it. Everyday people buy computers this invention is very helpful as time goes on sciantists are makeing new things to save llives.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9113,4,"The Author concludes the story with this When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is building then I will take that test again! because he or she are the ones who wrote the story. One information is her family moved to the united @ORGANIZATION1 from Vietnam. Second one is the Author could of made this story it was about her. Saeng fails her driving test.    ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7051,3,The features in the setting would affect the cyclist because they would want to have towns with water so they can restock they’re water. They would want water even more after going up hills. They would also want a palce to gey something to eat and maybe rest.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15437,6,"The builders had to face many obstacles in attempting to allow dirgibles to dock at the empire state building but there were a couple main ones. The first main obstacle was that a thousand - foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame. So with that they could not put the mooring mast on top of the building yet until they did some major adjustments. With that big problem the builders next obstacle was to design and build a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless stell tower that would be illuminated from inside, with a stepped back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself. The last little obstacle the builders had to face was that the mast also had a skeleton of steel and was clad in stainless steel with glass windows that had to be built and put up. Those were some of the obstacles the builders had to face while trying to put a mooring mast on to of the Empire State building.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
230,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 would you want to do in your spare time? Would you go outside and maybe @CAPS3 the soccer ball around with your kids, or grab a bag of chips and log onto facebook or your email? The question is, do computers have a negative or positive effect on people. I believe that computers have a negative effect. Talking to friends on the computer doesn't let you learn social skills. Going on the computer can also be very addicting. Finally, it take's away from all the exercise you need. I @CAPS4 that after careful consideration you will agree with me that computers have a negative effect on people. Facebook, ichat and email are all fun and easy ways to talk to your friends and family online. However, are you really gaining any social skills by doing this? Talking to friends and family online doesn't help you have good social skills. When you first meet someone in person, you most likely want to @CAPS4 @CAPS2 to say and how to act. Typing on a keyboard doesn't really let you interact with people. @CAPS6 not invite someone over, or go out to lunch with your family istead? Computers also are very addicting. I can say for myself that once I log onto the computer, I might not be off for the next hours. This is the case for many other people too. Going on the computer is addicting. Il @CAPS4 that not everyone is using a computer on a daily basis the vast majority of people are. When I'm on facebook and I see the number of people online is one hundred or even two hundred, as time goes by, the number increases. The computer being addicting leads to getting enough exercise. Doctors say that adults and kids should get atleast an hour of exercise a day. Going on the computer takes away from this time. Instead of sitting on the computer for an hour, you could be getting your hour of exercise. instead A lot of times when someone @CAPS5 down at the computer, a snack goes with them. This just adds onto the fact @CAPS6 getting the exercise is important to stay healthy. I @CAPS4 that I would feel a lot better if I went for a run instead of going on the computer. You are probably saying that you have time to manage both, but some people would rather exercise. When these people see you on the computer, @CAPS2 kind of example does it set? If everyone limited their time on the computer we would all feel a lot better and be more social. I trust that you will agree with me that computers have a negative effect on people.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7072,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist on how the nature of life he was hydrated or not. On the posts “Do not exceed posted speed limit “is after “wide rings of dried sweat clinched my thirst, and the growing realization that I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June”. This shows that he is dehydrated from the sun which is a feature of the setting. “a tarlike distance surged out, followed by cockish water feeling somelane in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” Cyclist know that there is no water in this place which is another feature of the setting which affects the cyclist.  ",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18668,7,"In sports you always have to be patient. Like if your not making any shots or someone is getting the best of you. If your patient and keep working hard sooner or later you will make these shots or get the best of that player. @PERSON1 was very patient in his basketball career. At @PERSON2 high where he went to high school he wasn’t the biggest, fastest, the strongest, or even the best, but he was patient. When he was a @CAPS1 in high school he frield out for the varsity, but didn’t make it. He was so upset with himself and the coaches because he felt like he should’ve made the team. His mom went fo him and told him not to give up. Unlike most kids @PERSON1 didn’t quit or tell himself that he wasn’t good enough. He stayed patient and kept working hard. All that worked paid off because the next year he made the team. He went on to go @LOCATION1. He won a championship there with a game winning shot. He went on to get drafted by the @CAPS2 in the @ORGANIZATION1 draft. The @CAPS3’s were one of the worst teams in the @ORGANIZATION1. It took a couple years for @PERSON1 to win his first @ORGANIZATION1 championship. During his first couple seasons @PERSON1 stayed calm and on to win five more championships. In his last one @PERSON1 was getting older and he knew he would be tested. They made it to the finals. The @CAPS2 were getting tired though. They went down in the series @NUM1. @PERSON1 and the @CAPS2 kept pushing and kept fighting. Finally the @CAPS2 won their sixth @ORGANIZATION1 championship. @PERSON1 was put in some tough situations, but he stayed patient and played like an all-star.",9,11,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13270,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is peaceful and loving. Narciso really believes that the definition of home is relationships & love rather than furniture and expenses. His home sounds really great because the way it is described in the memoir, you can see that his family are very caring and selfless people. The fact that his parents take in strangers and allow them to stay at their home really shows that they are very caring people.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
778,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I don't know if I am understanding correctly but are you honestly thinking about not advancing technology? Quickly rethink that because that @MONTH1 just be the worst mistake you could ever make computers can tech hand-ey coordination, they can also give you very useful knowledge. Lastly, computers help us stay close to our family and friends. Fisrt off, about @PERCENT1 of people say that they use the computer every day so that they can increase their knowledge. This could ba as simple as going on @ORGANIZATION1! and discovering the latest news. This is ten times easier that going on the @CAPS1 and waiting for the news stone you want details on. I took a survey and @NUM1 students say that they use thier computer every night so that they can read more into thier social studies or science unit, @CAPS2 computer advances away is like @CAPS2 learning advances away, now is that what you want? Second, @PERSON1, chrildrens doctor states, ""Computers give children that hand-eye coordination they need to enhance in sports"" I agree! Sports such as baseball, soccser, and basketball all need a great deal of hand-eye coordination. Without the hand-eye coordination, students will not do well and end up quiting. I know that if I was having trouble with sports for a long time, I would give up! If the teens gave up sports then they would't have anyining to keep them fit one! that would lead to hundred of kids with on obesity problem. Lastly, @CAPS2 away the advancing in computers maens that you are @CAPS2 away family and friends connectionds. Computers offer many sites such as facebook or myspace o connect with loved ones. You can also go on @CAPS3 or sype to chat or video chat with them. Yes, maybe computers are @CAPS2 away time with family but what about @CAPS4 or @CAPS5 in @LOCATION1 that you have at to in over a year? Don't you want some time them too? You can make time limts for yourself so that you don't spend your whole time on the computer. This way you can took to all of your loved ones would you want to be the one crushing the oceans of a child that wants to talk/ see his grandparents? In conclusion, I remember talking and laughing with my friends over the computer when @CAPS6 sick so that @CAPS7 could cheer me up. Dont take that away from me! Keep enhancing computers so that I can advance my knowledge, increase my hand-eye coordination and get to see my far friends and family.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3621,2,"Should books and such be removed off of the shelves if they are found offensive? Personally I don't think they should be. If @CAPS3 is something in the book that is remotelly offensive towards children then it should be put under a section for adults only.  Most libraries I have been to have different areas for each age group. If @CAPS3 is a book that is racially unexceptable then it should be put in the adult section not anywhere for children.      When a book is being questioned if it is offensive or not they should review all the possibilities of how someone @MONTH1 comprehend the story to see their reaction with it. @CAPS3 are many genres of books, music, magazines, etc., so @CAPS3 is always a place that the book can go to. Most of the questioning about a book is the language in it. For example, in @CAPS1 we just finished reading the book '@CAPS2 of @ORGANIZATION1.' @CAPS3 is a lot of question if the book should be read in schools or not because of the 'n-word'. It is a very harsh word, but it goes with the setting and the background of the story. When someone is not sure if a book is acceptable or not they should take in concideration what the story is about and whether or not the word is needed or not. In many cases the unexceptable thing @MONTH1 work along with the story.     If one book is being questioned about something wrong with it then shouldn't all books, music, movies, magazines, etc., be questioned? If something is not allowed for one item then it shouldn't be allowed for something else. It is all about the audience who reads that certain book if it is appropriate or not to the person reading it. I have read many books that have certain words that don't bother me, but someone else who isn't use to it @MONTH1 not like. Some parents don't want their kids hearing foul language or inappropriate stuff from the type of music they listen to. It all comes down to who reads the book or magazine, and who listens to the music. Katherine Paterson makes a very good point about how if we start taking the books off of the shelves then eventually @CAPS3 wouldn't be any books left on the shelves anymore. Just becasue something has a bad word or phrase in it doesn't mean it needs to be taken away from peoples enjoyment!",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15246,6,"In the Mooring Mast, by @ORGANIZATION2, the builders of the Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on it. To dock, a moor mast was necessary. One could not simply Place one on the empire state building because it would add stress to the buildings frame. Also, the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would add stress, which would force more modifications to the frame costing upwards of sixty thousand dollars. The mooring mast was not completed mainly because of safety. After the combustion of the Hindenburg, owners of the Empire State Building realized a disaster it would cause if it hapened in New York. Nature was also an obstacle, with constantly changing violent air currents threatening to move the dirigible, which could not be anchored down as it could be in a field. It was a risk not worth taking. Lastly, a law passed earlier prevented dirigibles from even approaching buildings on such elevation over urban areas. These were the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3659,2,"Censorship in the libraries. Do you think that we should be able to take movies, magizens, and books off the shelf. There are many different arguments about this subject.     I believe if they put the books, movies, and other stuff on the shelf than it should be able to be read by children and others. They need tho learn about everything thats out there in this world. because if they don't learn about this now than they will never know about all of this when they get older. I think that it is cridical for our youth to know about it.     Some people @MONTH1 say that we are two young to be looking at that stuff but the younger you find out about it the better of you will be when you get older.      So that is my input on the situation. the younger you are you can learn more about the stuff",3,2,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18194,7,"One time in @DATE1, I was taking a test called the @ORGANIZATION1 (@CAPS1). Me, and my friends get down with the @ORGANIZATION1 early. So we had to be patient too. We had alot that we could do, but the choices were limited. Being patient is hard, sometimes it feels like ages have gone by, but really @NUM1 minutes have gone by, sometimes patience requiers a lot of mental peace. One time me, and my dad were going to work in @LOCATION1. The bus was late @NUM2 minutes, but it felt like a few weeks. Sometimes patience is good and bad. Good patience is when a team scores a goal, the audience was patient enough so that the team could score a goal. A bad patience is when you’re late to work, and traffic, or the bus was late, or you could wait. Sometimes you can distract yourselves while being patient, texting, calling a friend, or talking or playing a game, with a kid or with yourselves. So you see that patience can be good or bad, also requiers a lot of mental peace. @ORGANIZATION1.",7,6,,13,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4606,2,"I believe that some materials we have in our shelf belongs to basically anybody in the world.  I also think that the materials on that shelf is allowed to be removed as long as those materials get put back in that spot no matter what.     My experiance with books are not really that great but i do like to read at times when i have the spare time to read. When i get a book i look at the book and i observe it so that way when i take it out of the library i know i wanted to read that book and observe the great thing about the book.when i read the book im not a very fast reader but when im reading i like to know how this book is gunna end and how it begans. If i was to pick a magazine from the library i wouldn't take it out of the library cause magazines are expensive to get at times and also hard to replace if it was ever needed to be replaced. But if i was to get one i would look at the important stuff on what it is and how to get it and all that kind of stuff. their are times when i think movies shouldn't able the library cause people could take ideas off of movies and/or steal them. movies in libraries would be expensive to pay if it was tooken from the library. if i was to watch a movie i would enjoy it as much as possible cause once that day comes to turn it in their is no chance of watching it after i turn it in. Music is passion to most people. most people would just go out and buy some cd's or something to listen to and their are music i would listen to so that i get an idea on what to play if i ever wanted to become an musician or something like that. their are times when i would write down the lyrics to a song so that way i can understand what the singer is singing about, either that or listen to the song over and over again.     My point is if something comes off the shelf is should return to its rightful spot or otherwise their will be consequences and people will not be trusted much longer",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18412,7,"I am not a very patient person. But when I have to be I am. For example at my house we only have one bathroom. I hate waiting to go. But I have to wait because I don’t want to jungle pee so I will wait. I also have to wait for my bust. I hate waiting its so boring. But patience is a good thing to have.  If we didn’t there would be a lot of deaths by car accidents, murders, nervous breakdowns. My sister is very patient she can wait in one spot for hours one time it was @CAPS1 I was all figtxy from waiting until the bell rang so we can go trick or treating. She waited well she did her hair I complained that is a reason why patience is important.",6,8,,14,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15524,6,"The builders faced many problems in their attempts to allow a dirigible to land at the Empire State Building. One of the main reasons was safety, ""most dirigibles outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" I would have been to large of a risk to allow such a dirigible over New York. Another problem was the air currents, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" A final problem was a law ""against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law would forever prohibit any airship to dock with the mast, or even approach the city to attempt to dock.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6903,3,"On the cyclists rideto Yosemite National Park he encouters a lot of hardships due to the setting hes around and the advice given by oldmen. The cyclist riding his bike in the middle of June in the deserts of california isnt good to begin with adding to cyclist dehydration state. He first come to encouters ''one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldn`t hold in the lament mule'' By that description oF his lecatracy it seems as if he might be in ghost town by himself almost could strand him. He described the terrain with “short, rolling hils.'' and ''over one long, crippling hill.'' This shows some of the obstacle that he had to go through in a bike, just to get to Yosemite National Park. He @CAPS1 realized once he encounterd these Features oF the terrain that he was oFF track and needed to find help. After his survival of his surroundings For as long as he could go, @CAPS1 gets help at a real camp. That is how the settings of the story play role in the cyclist epidemic.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15043,6,"Al Smith and the builders of the Empire State building faced several obstacles when trying to allow dirigibles to dock there. First obstacle was designing strengthening beams to the frame and foundation to support the extra stress caused by the dirigible's load and wind pressure. The second was that the gases used in some dirigibles were unsafe. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"" (Lüsted, @NUM1). The inefficient the gases, the violent air currents would either cause the dirigible to spend, or add lead weights which would ""... be dangling high above pedestrians"" (Lüsted, @NUM2). Among all of these problems ""... was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas"" (Lüsted, @NUM3). Therefore, not only was it unsafe or impractical, it was illegal.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3948,2,"Many people like different books, music, movies, and magazines. Some people take offense to them. Others do not. For me I dont.     I do not believe that certain materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc, should be removed from the shelves because there are different types for different types of people. If a person took offense from a book or magazine I believe that person should just put it back. If books that offended people couldn't be on the shelves there would be no books on the shelves because I'm sure there's atleast one person in the world that would take offense to each book. There are o lot of people in the world after all.      For music there's different types also. There's rap, country, rock, pop and many more. For example if someone likes rap but not country that person has a choice to listen to rap and not country. If that person doesn't like country though it shouldn't be removed because others @MONTH1 like country and want to listen to it.     For movies there are many different types. There's horror, comedy, romance and many more. That's why at the theater there's different rooms for different movies. People always have a choice.     Many people like different books, music, movies, and magazines. Some people take offense to them although some don't. Every person is different. People like different things. That is, in my opinion, the beauty of human nature",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6511,3,"There were many features in the setting that affected the cyclist. One was the extreme heat during the June heat in California. The speaker said that he could have died from heatstroke. The rough road was also a problem for the cyclist. The bumps, hills and wildlife affected the cyclist’s journey. The thing that most affected him was the lack of water. It was such a problem that he had to suck on stones to take his mind off thirst. As you can see, these problems in the story affected the speaker’s journey to Yosemite National Park.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15369,6,"In this excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"", @ORGANIZATION2 describes the architectural, chemical, and legal challenges that prevented the construction of a mooring dock for dirigibles on the top of the Empire State Building. Despite the readiness of then- @CAPS1 Al Smith, who publicly announced the plan, and of John Tauranac, who reported that the top of the Empire State Building ""would serve a higher calling [than] to add a desired few feet,"" @ORGANIZATION2 contends that the failure of the mast ""should have been apparent before it was ever constructed"".According to the article, the mast, and a moored dirigible, ""would add stress to the building's frame."" More than sixty thousand dollars was spent to accommodate the pressure. Foreign dirigibles also contained hydrogen, which was more flammable than American-used helium. An explosion above the Empire State Building would be devastating to the city. An existing law prevented dirigibles from ""even approach[ing]"" the building. @ORGANIZATION2 uses these reasons to detail the unrealistic nature of the mooring mast.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6135,3,"This is how the features of the setting affect the cyclist. One example is “flat road was replaced by short, rolling hills.” That changes the effect because by saying that it will show how tired he is going to be or the work trying to make it over the hills. Another example would be “high deserts of California in June.” That’s saying its hot outside and very tiring. I think it means that because in California its really hot and in June the “summer time” its very tiring. That is how the features of the setting affect the cyclist.  ",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1022,1,"Dear Local Newspaper: Are computers possitively affecting society? As technology advances, humans are relying on them more and more; most people use them daily. I believe computers effect people possitively because they help write papers, are a social tool, and are a big help with research. After reading this letter there will be no doubt that computers have a possitive effect on people in society. My first reason why computers have a possitive effect on people is they help with writing papers. Whether it is writing a resume, a science report, or a spreadsheet, none of these are ever seen nowadays done by hand. Everyone expects to see the flawlessly inked letters on the printer paper in whatever piece of writing it is. This helps the people writing the paper because writing takes many drafts to get the piece perfect; it is a pain to write each draft by hand. In additio, it is easier to read someone's writing @CAPS1 its typed, especially @CAPS1 the writer has hand writing. However, computers help in more than just writing papers. My second reason why computers passitively effect people is by being a social tool. Many websites online these days have social networks such as youtube, facebook, twitter, and myspace. In the listed websites above and many others as well, people can meet other people through other friends and games. The nice thing about meeting them online is that you don't have to plan a time to meet the person, @CAPS1 you are both online you guys can begin chatting. The chatting also helps @CAPS1 people have long-distance relationships, whether friends, mates, or family. Online chatting help people stay in-touch with someone they might not see everyday. That is a big help with everyone's social life, keeping then us ""the "" @CAPS2, online sites like eharmony or match.com take people with little time to worry about love and match them with their perfect mate. This also helps people who are shy get married and start a family. This helps people live happier lives, another possitive effect. Finally, computers possitively effect people by making research much easier. My dad always says ""You kids got it easy. @CAPS1 I was growing up, we'd to go to the library and spend hours researching before we could write our papers."" @CAPS3, its simple. Using the internet and a search engine, all you have to do is type a topic and you can get all the latest articles in just seconds. Libraries might not have the most recent books, or someone might've checked out your topic's book. Then what can you do? The internet is also an extremely useful help @CAPS1 the research topic is very specific, if its a certain becteria or species that a book @MONTH1 only briefly mention. The internet has a much broader range of articles, so it is much easier to find information for any topic. With research, taking less time to understand, people can spend more time enjoying the day, like playing outside, than in the library stressing because they cannot find a book on their topic. This is a strong reason why computers should not be seen as a negative effect on society. To conclude, computers have a possitive effect on society, because they help write papers, they are a social tool, and are a big help with research. Where would we be if we had to handwrite everything? Think about how many fewer friends or maybe even relationships we would have without social websites. What about how hours of research are @CAPS3 two clicks away? Computers have changed our lives for the better, and we should appreciate all the do for us.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15641,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced more problems than expected to. One of the first problems they faced was the building's frame could not support an enormous dirigible. ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation... over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework"" (@NUM1). The builders were forced to modify the framework which cost a large amount of money, and proved to be a primary obstacle. Another obstacle the builders faced was the wind caused by nature. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" (@NUM1). These winds could potentially make the back of the blimps swivel around the mooring mast, making it incredibly difficult or dangerous to get on or off of the dirigibles. Finally, the builders faced the problem of laws against airships flying too low over urban areas. ""This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area"" (@NUM3). If ships could not even legally approach the building, the builders realized, the obstacles were too great for the mooring mast to work. After realizing all the problems and dangers associated with this idea, they decided the mooring mast would never be successful.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12141,5,"The mood described in this memoir is mostly about love, unity, and culture. In love he shows that his parents immigrated mostly to give his children a better future. This is described in paragraph @NUM1.In unity it shows that in their neighborhood most of the immigrants were always having feasts and being really close to each other. This is explained in paragraph @NUM2 where it says, ""In our neighborhood, despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."". His parents taught him how to cook food from his country and also to dance to Cuban Music as it says in paragraph @NUM3. These are the types of mood described in the memoir.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1601,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 reading your paper weekly and @CAPS2 up with local events, I was able to retrieve the information of a contreversy dealing with the effects of computers. I for one think that the computer was come to be one of the greatest inventions ever created. It was @CAPS3 changed our Society, and if you ask me, in a very posotive way. My first reason has to do with the knowledge that the computer possesses. You can practically discover anything in the blink of an eye, as opossed to a book or going to the library; which is very time consuming Not only does a computer take for less time to get information, it also holds a much large amount of information than a library can store. Computers hold knowledge on almost everything imaginable, but best of all, its right your fingertips. Another great characteristic of the computer, is it's ability to let people @NUM1 miles apart converse freely. This might just be the greatest thing about the computer. Chatting online completeley erases the hassel of @CAPS4 phone bills and carrying around cell phones, You can speak with friends half way around the world with no cost to you, amazing!!! The one thing that is faulty about the computer is it's overusage by children although this is a significant problem, it is not the computer's fault. Kids should no the limit. There should be @ORGANIZATION1 for both being on the computer and for excersise and fun with friends this problem has most likely influenced many to com to dislike the computer, but you must understand that the time children spend on the computer is entirely up to him/her or the parents. In @CAPS5 I hope I have persuaded you enough to agree with my thoughts and to give the computer a chance, im sure you'll be satisfied.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15970,6,"The builders of the Empire state building encountered many obstacles that prevented dirigibles from docking there. A main concern was safety, after Hindenburg, a German dirigible, was destroyed by fire over New Jersey. This prompted the realization that had such a disaster occurred over New York, a highly populated urban area, it could have been far worse. Another obstacle that was encountered was bad weather conditions. The winds on the top of the Empire State Building were consistently shifting, making it impossible for a dirigible to stay unmoving. If the dirigible was so unsteady, it would be very unsafe for it to be floating above millions of people. Lastly, it was illegal for a dirigible to tie up to the mast or even approach the area due to a law that prevented all airships from flying too low over urban areas. Due to all the obstacles faced by the builders of the Empire State Building, it is apparent that dirigibles were simply not meant to dock there.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6640,3,"I think the features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. It being a long, hot, lonely ride there, had an effect on him. It scared him which made him go longer. He had nothing to drink and thought he was going to die it made him weak. The snake in the way caused him longer and every stop that had once there effected him to.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4002,2,"Libraries should or should not have books, music, magazines that are found offensive? Some people like things that are different than what you or anyone else like you @MONTH1 think some of the things are offensive, but yet again something you don't like someone else @MONTH1 like, and want to read. Would if be fare to you that you like something, and want to read it, but someone else dose not like, and thinks that it offens them, and they should take it off a shelf at a public library because of what that person said.      I don't think that thinks like that should be taken off a shelf for something like, becasue there could be a person in school that needs soemthing like that is not right for a child to be looking at,but what if there is a kid in high school or collage that needs a book to do a project over that type of things, but also yes I do think that things that little kids should not be looking at or listening or reading something like should not be able to get a hold of because parents should not have to worry about them going to a librariy, and there children see something that they do not want them to see. There are vary many ways that people that work in the libraries can keep things up from children that is to little to see or hear what there parents do not want them too. Some ways that you can do that is by putting all the books and music that is like that in a section of the library that you have to be a sertent age to be able to go look or listen to them.      Lubraries are for everyone no matter what you look like or dress. You as a person has the right to go in to a public library and look for something to read no matter if it has some curse words or some violence in the reading. If you are reading those kinds or books you should be machure for your age and not have to worry about it. You hear and see everything that you read about today so I don't see the difference in if a child hears or sees it beacuse you see it just about every where you go now days. You really can not get away with out dealing with it",3,4,,3,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14904,6,"In the article ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, many obstacles of building the Empire State building as a docking station for dirigibles are describle. John Tauranac, the man who came up with the plan to dock dirigibles on the top of the empire state building forgot some very important things to take into account. First the entire building would have to be modified because ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stres to the building's frame"" (paragraph @NUM1). The second problem that would need to be solved would be the safety of the city. Many ""dirigibles from outside United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (paragraph @NUM2.). If an accident like German dirigible Hindenburg happened, it would be ten times worse. Lastly, the ""violent air currents"" (paragraph @NUM3) would pose as one of the greatest obstacles. The U.S. Navy dirigible Los Angeles tried to tie up but could not get close enough because of ""forceful wind."" (paragraph @NUM4). The obstacles of making the empire state building into a mooring mast caused too many obstacles that could not be solved.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4705,2,"Certain material that are made to offend people should be removed from shelves everywhere. I am against any material that are offensive to someone or something else. The three main reasons I am against this is because it is wrong to offend others, offending others can lead to personal issues, and offending others or something else will eventually tire out.           To simply write a book or a magazine, or make a movie just to offend someone or something is wrong. People should always treat others the way that they would like to be treated. For someone to make negative lyrics about a person or something says something about the person who made that song. Maybe that person has personal issues. In order for that person to ignore their personal issues, they make fun of someone else.     Offending other people can lead to personal problems. How? If someone steadily talks about you or, on a daily basis, offends you, people can get depressed. They can start believing that they are nothing. I remember a girl in the eighth grade told everyone that I was a 'garden tool' and that I would do anything for a piece of change. She also made a song, taunting me everyday about how I looked. She actually recorded it and passed it out at school. People heard it, and like followers, they started taunting me, too. I soon became depressed. I got so bad to the point that I was suicidal. I thought the world would be a better place without me. I had to go see a shrink to get over those thoughts. What other people do to you or say about you can have a bad effect on them.       Last but not least, people will eventually get tired of hearing bad things about someone. The victim will get tired of being teased or talked about. People would stop listening to that negative garbage. If people stop supporting that degrading stuff, then the author wouldn't have anything to write about. The singer wouldn't have anything to sing about. Their career will have gone down the drain because there is no future in offending others.     There are many reasons why offensive materials should be removed from the shelves in libraries, stores, and everywhere else. These negative comments will get nowhere in life. As I brought out in my body, it's simply wrong to offend others, it can lead to personal issues, and it will eventually tire out or get old. Nothing good comes from making people feel bad. So once again, these negative materials should be abolished everywhere.",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3396,2,"First of all, Do you believe that certain materials, such as books, music, magazined, etc, should be remove from the shelves if they are found offensive, thats question should not be ask ever in life.      Why beacuse there are many people out there that read read stuff and listen to stuff that you might not like at all. when i first saw this question i answer to my self that, ''That if all people think the same way this world would be boring, and i answer the question by saying that there should not be any books remove or music remove, from any shelves' why beacause we all don tlike the same thing or do the same thing.     In first place, I know that there are many different kind of thing that people beacause they love doing it and some dont do those kind of things beacause they really dont like or dont care about it. This is answering the question about removing books, music, or magazines from shelves even if the article the book, music, etc, say's or if its offensive to other people, that is not a reason to remove stuff. There are thing that you enjoy doing and things that you emjoy reading, listening, and looking, etc that other people dont like or hate about it.     In second place, not only beacause you dont like something people should stop doing those things or stop buying those thing, NO!!, that is not the case here @CAPS1. or @CAPS2. you should not care just for you or do what ever is right for you. If you are a good person that wants to be someone in the future dont just care about you care about the other too, beacause you'll need those person or those book in the future when ever your falling down.     In my conclusion, about this article. I think that people should not remove any thing from any library even if its found offensive to other people, those thing help other in life to do what they really want to do, while other are getting hurt for those offensive this that are writting on a little peace of paper. Hope this latter help you all think about and change your decision about this case, hope you all make the right decision that would not affect anyone in general.     Thank you for taking your time to ready what I really think about removing articles from libraries",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3639,2,"I'm really sick and my head really hurts at this moment while having to write this paper, so please take @CAPS1 easy on me.      Any source of literature is someone's own creation of imaginiation, taken in whatever direction they so choose for @CAPS1 be to be taken. The creation of that art form as writing would be nothing less then lonesome trash floating the winding streets if @CAPS1 were censored.       @CAPS1 is almost like when watching television; your kids are up and want to stay up late to watch the new horror movie but no way, that movie is way to scary for them, plus @CAPS1 shows some nudity. If the movie is not appropriate for your children then do not let them watch @CAPS1. In a library though, your mother might not always be there to pre-read your books for you. So maybe you just have to assume responsibility and read the book if you choose to, or not read the book depending on how your mother would feel about @CAPS1 of course.      The thought of there being censorship in libraries is quite ridiculous. Of course I would not like to see @PERSON1: @CAPS1 in my childrens section but that is all up to just having books in their right sections. Have the explicit books on one side of the library and the non on the other side. The main point is that most people that make use of the library are old enough to choose a book of their liking and if they are not they have their mother accompanying them",3,3,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9730,4,"The author conconcludes the story with this paragraph because, the plant brings back memories to Saeng and she is sort of like the plant. Saeng can be compared to the plant by, she is starting out in a new area that she is unfamiliar with, as well as the plant. The plant is now being planted in the soil outside of her house and has to grow. Saeng has to learn to grow aswell and get better and prepare to take the test again. So when the plant is grown and adapted Saeng believes she will be grown and adapted too. In conclusion, this paragraph is a perfect ending for the story “Winter Hibiscus by Minfong Ho.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7206,3,"Features of the cyclist affected the cyclist in many ways. One was the heat. For example, in paragraph @NUM1 it says, “I was travelling through the high deserts of California in June.” @CAPS1 that California is called, “the sunshine state”, I can infer that it was very hot. Another feature that affected the cyclist was when he thought he could get some water but it was hot and tasted like battery acid. This is said in. This is said in paragraph @NUM2. This is how features of the setting affected the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7701,3,It give him a hard time so he learn a lot of thing from that he know that it not always easy. It not abig problem but sometime some small problem become bigger life is like riding bike you have any down some time have problem sometimes lost but that is life.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1458,1,"Due to an on going debattle about weither or not computers benefit society I am writing to you to inform you of my opinion on this mater. I believe that computers have more of a benefit than they do a draw back. I believe this because. First of all, computer bring about online communication. Also computers advance and enhance learning, had to mention that computers advance emloyment. As I mentioned, computers bring about online communications. Now after reading this there must be one side running thru your head define this well online communication, include social networkinjg sites litre facebook and twitter and not to forget my space. This also includes email and blogs and some chat sites. Okay enough of that But how do these things inventions iprove our lives. These inventions allow long distance communication bringing people ""closer together."" @CAPS1 example, my uncle lives in @LOCATION1. And thru facebook, my mother can speak with him any time she wishes and over from their relatives. So online communication @MONTH1 be very nessary @CAPS1 same. Also you could use email to communicate with others although it travels slower than other of electronic communication. Besides, I mentioned learinig. Computers can improve learning in a variety of ways. Computers improve learning because they speed the flow of information to the students can go to such places and a school websites to findout more on a particular occuring at the school. @CAPS1 example, I go on my school's website to retreve nightly homewrok assignments and read the next day's daily annocments. Teachers might post helpfel hints on homework and @MONTH1 a detailed explanation of the assignment. Also computers can improve learning by assiting with research projects @CAPS1 example a couple of weeks ago my health class was information car our illegal drug project. So with the information, made of wide variety of brouchers from it.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13220,5,The mood in the @CAPS1 is happy. Happy because Narciso is happy to have a home and family. He is happy about the courage his parents have. He is happy that he is loved. Narciso loves his family for caring about him. He also loves the courage they had to immagrate to the United States. The mood of this story is happy.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9279,4,"The author had concluded the story with the paragraph When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again because the author wanted the reader to notice how the mother and the child bond with gardening. Between the different things that author has said about Saeng and Saeng’s mother. He as in the author shows a way they have bonded they being Saeng and Saeng’s mother which I think it was fairly neat they way the author had bid out this story. It was a fairly interesting story to it kept you guessing, on the end of year seat, wondering. But I enjoyed reading that story. I had also liked how the daughter and mother were so great friends. But it was a nice thing to see with the daughter and the mother being so in touch with each other. Also, in doing this the author has shown some of his ways of thinking. The author shows us he a great mind and a good way thinking. This author is telling us a great story of a girl and her mother it sounded very good to me. This story is a gardening story of a daughter and her mom moving from Vietnam and moving to the @ORGANIZATION1 to live out the rest of their lives.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
751,1,"I would like to state on my behalf that I do not agree that computers are good for society. There are three reasons why I do not agree. Many people will not enjoy the outdoors, @CAPS1 people will spend @CAPS1 there time on the computer, and a lot of people will gain wheight to inactivity. When you sit on a computer you dont get off of for a while, why, because you are haveing fun. when you are haveing fun you will not stop wat you are doing, @CAPS2 dont pay attention. Eventually you will get hooked and play on the computer rather than go outside and have fun with your friends. @CAPS4 will just take up all of your time. @CAPS2 when you are bored you find anything that you can possibly do, rather than be bored. Many people are thinking this is a good time to go on the computer but @CAPS3 you bored you will stay on the computer until you have something to do. My mother always tells me when im bored not stay home because @CAPS4 will get worse. There is always something you can do that dosn't you just have to look harder. My last reason is that when you sit at a computer and you are fingers, you gain your wheight you I read @NUM1 children in every years will be obese, not because @CAPS4 runs in the family but because of inactivity. Inacitivity means not active activity. @CAPS3 you calories you will gain weight @CAPS6 wheight is unhealthy and you can stop the problem by just finding something spend your whole life on the computer. In conclusion you @MONTH1 have mixed thaught's @CAPS3 you ever want to go on the computer all the time. @CAPS4 doesnt matter @CAPS3 you go on just dont all the time. But remember my reasons why not to spend too much time. You will not enjoy the outdoors, find something else to do when you are and you will gain wheight @CAPS3 you spend all your time on the computer. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4128,2,"Have you ever came across offensive material inside a library? Well some people have and they think there should be  some type of censorship in libraires to protect the offended people . I do not agree with this idea because people should have the right to express their self through art, literature, and even music. After all the freedom of speech is written in our rights.       Many authors , artist and musicans have the freedom to express themselves through their work. If they saw their own work in a library being censored it would be very offensive to them. I understand that the artist's material could be offensive to certain people but it is their work ,a form of self expression. They do not publish their work to offend people , they do it for themselves and for other people to enjoy it. An artist's work is a part of who they are. A censor would just put a negative aspect to the art and literature of the library.     Over many years most libraries have devloped and arranged their media into a system called @CAPS1 @CAPS2. This system seperates all books, magazines, music, and movies into their own genres. For instince if you are looking for a mystery book , you would find it in the non fiction section. This system helps people find exactly what they are looking for. If people are offended by a certain genre they do not have to come in contact with it. This system is a better way to find exactly what you want instead of coming across a book or movie that you would find offensive. Almost every library uses this system so they do not have to use a censor.      Everywhere we go someone somewhere is going to find something offensive. It is basically part of our human nature. It is truly impossible to make every single person happy with everything in the world. In a library there will always be a book that someone disagrees with or someone will find it offensive. The author of that book and other people who enjoyed it  do not need to be punished by having the book taken off the shelves. Just because the book offends one person does not mean it has to be taken off the shelf or have a censor. If everytime that happend there would be no books left to read in our libraries. Most people would not even call that a library.      In the end a book is a book , music is music and we are not going to create censors or take books of the shelves because it is offensive to people. Authors write what they want to write , musicans play what they want to play, and actors act how they want to act. After everything  it does not matter what is offensive to people , they will just have to deal with it. There is no reason for a censor in a library",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18537,7,One day when I was patient was when we all had to go on the same ride at @LOCATION1 @CAPS1’s out we where going to go on this one ride and there where tons’ of people in line for it and I had to wait patient in line because I was in the back of the line and we where there for about an half hour waiting for to go on the ride and then we wait there patient and the ride was dumb and it is not even going up @NUM1 sets of stairs and then we went on a whole bunch of water park rides and then went home.,6,4,,10,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14884,6,"In the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" written by @PERSON1, there were obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building were faced with that should have been apparent before they built the mast. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" It says in the ""The Mooring Mast"" that at the top of the building winds were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Also if the dirigibles were tethered, the back of them would move around while the dirigibles would also be high above the city with people watching. Unsafe for many. ""An existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" It's illegal for a ship to tie up with the building or to even go to an area like that. These thing should have been brought to the builders attention with obstacles such as nature and lawbreaking are in play.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9261,4,The Author concludes this story with that paragraph because she is saying that she could not concentrate on the test because she wanted to go back to her home country.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18141,7,"When I was about @NUM1 I wanted one thing in the wold. You know how some girl would want a baby ball no not me I wan’t a rex this toy was the bigest and the meanest dinow on the plant well when I was a little it was. It was so cool to me ti could walk, talk it can run he can bit. Ever time I go to the story I would go to the toy part of the story, and find that rex and look at it in the eyes in say “you will be mine one day.” You know how relly wan’t somthing and mom says chismist is coming up. When it an’t comeing in till @NUM2 months. But I won’t it now not in @NUM2 months. So I thought what can I do to get the rex befor @NUM2 months? I got it!I will clen up more, walk the bog more, do better in school, and hopefully that will work. So I ask my mom “mom if I start doing all this good stof can I get so of my chismast thing in a week @NUM5” she said “no you just get more thing on chismis” I was so mad I was about to cry. But @NUM2 month was not that long.  I was opening my gifts in no time. but I thought that I open all my gifts, I look arond one good time I did! But I don’t see the rex I was said even thow I had like @NUM7 or more gifts. I still don’t have that rex. So I sidely walk to my room. My mom came in my room with a big box.  Could it be! I jumped out of my bed so fast my mono don’t see me. I looked in the box it was  a lot of babys doll. Then she said go down stars and ther he was rex looking so happy to see me.",7,8,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9452,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus"", by Minfong Ho, the author concludes the story with a paragraph with Saeng vowing she will take the test again in the spring. Minfong used this paragraph because it means never give up, even if you fail the first time. For example, Saeng just failed her drivers test but after buying the Hibiscus and taking deeper into things she realized she shouldn’t give up.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10518,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph to emphasize the willingness of Saeng to overcome the obstacles and adapt to her new life. The hibiscus discussed in the ending quote describes Saeng’s new hope and determination to succeed in the United States. For example in the text it states,""… its fine petals splayed back to reveal a long stamen tipped with yellow pollen. Saeng felt a shock of recognition so intense, it was almost visceral.” When Saeng had found a plant that seemed to the together her past in Vietnam and her future in @LOCATION3, she was overwhelmed. The hibiscus represents newhope in a seemingly impossible situation. When the hibiscus has blossomed, her world will be open and a new life will be waiting to begin. With this thought realized at the end of the story, the reader understands that Saeng has found new stability and will eventually succeed. In addition, in the text it says, “it felt smooth and cool, with a hint of velvet toward the center just as she had known it would feel.” Saeng’s past memones could be reached when this hibiscus was in new and that served as immense inspiration to her. The author ended the story with Saeng’s new recollection and hope to prove that she had indeed found something helpful and stable in a new world.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1680,1,I think that will are all spending to much time in computers because all of my frend are all day in @CAPS2 I think that people should get active and go to different places in the wold like the pool the forect the lackes ets. I think that they shood pot a program that people come go places and forget about computer for me computer are good but you cannot spend a lot of time in @CAPS2 like try to spend more time out doors and whith you family or frends. And the problem is not only with computers is with a lot of technology like video games like xbos - @NUM1 - @NUM2 - game boy - xbox @NUM3 and other more more you schood play them @NUM4 a week like @NUM5 hour because ther alot of activitis you and your family can do out doors I will thake a wake aroud the park or ride bickes with you freds aroud town and make a picknick on the park @CAPS1 is hot and good outside. Know that the @DATE1 is coming or you can go and do a lot of stuff like @CAPS1 you donot have money you can go to the park or beach and spend the how day in ther what my family do when is good outside is that will check the wether and se @CAPS1 @CAPS2 good out - side and @CAPS1 is good will get up at and go to the store and by hamberger soda plates and other stuff will are going to use ther will go to a lake of pool and spend the day playing and eating. My opinian is that people schood spend more time out-doors with the fred - and family I whant people to know that ther a wold out side and to not get to adictide the the techno wold that my opinion I do not know @CAPS1 you like @CAPS2 but I think you shood try @CAPS2 and @CAPS1 you do'not like @CAPS2 get in to a they will help you and a lot @CAPS3 writing this because I whant peole to now that ther a lot of places that are yet to be discoverd so go out ther and enjoy like because life only come one time so enjoy @CAPS2 whith happy time and good time do'not speed @CAPS2 crying and sad like @CAPS2 like this is your last day on this wold.,4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1760,1,"I think we can all agree that computer usage is a very controversal issue. In my opinion, I believe that computers have a negative effect on people. For instance, it's not safe and children can get into all sorts of things on the internet. Also, people spend too much time in front the computer now a days, @CAPS1, its a major distraction and also a negetive effect on kids. school work. It's now or never! Do we dicide that computers have a negetive effect? You decide! Isn't every parents biggest concern the safety of their children? When on the internet, kids are capable of accessing anything and everything. Sometimes kids don't even look for bad things, they just pop up. Would you want your child veiwing things that you have no control over? Also, websites like @CAPS2.com one one of the greatest concerns when it comes to internet safety. Although you are supposed to be at least @NUM1 to have a @CAPS2, most kids lie about their age. Did you know that @NUM2 out of @NUM3 @CAPS2 users lie about their age? And it's not always a @NUM4 year old saying they are @NUM1, it could be a @NUM6 year old saying they're @NUM7! Not only do people lie about their age, they lie about who they are. Is this the kind of internet exposer you want for your children? Put a stop to this right now! More than @PERCENT1 of @CAPS3 are overweight and unhealthy. This is another negetive effect computers have on people. It's a gorgeous @DATE1 day. Bright blue skies, cotton candy cloulds, the sun is shining, and there's a nice warm breece. Perfect day to go out and get active, right? Wrong! None people would @CAPS5 be inside on the computer. Instead of going for a walk, people would @CAPS5 spend hours on facebook. This is a serious concern to our health. People don't exercise enough as it is, and then when you add computers, people will never get active! Instead of playing video games onlin, people need to be reminded that turning off the computer and playing a fun beighborhood game of baseball is just as fun and much more beneficial. This is just one step @CAPS3 need to take to get a healthier lifestyle. Wouldn't you agree? Did you know that kids that spend more time on computer are more likely to do poorly in school? Surely, if nothing else will convince you of the negetive effects of a computer this will @CAPS5 than coming home and doing homework, more time is spent in front of the computer. As a student, I will admit that the computer is a very tempting distraction and can easily pull a student away from their studies. You can't expect a child to make the right decision and tell their they have to go because they need to study. So you do! Take action now, or your child will definately suffer. The time has come to decide. Do you believe Computers have a negative effect on people? It's clear that the computer is not safe. Not to mention, too much time is spent on the computer instead of being active. Most importantly, computers will negetively affect children's grades. Don't wait another minute! Let's agree and do something about this!",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19348,7,The time I was patient was the time I was @NUM1 years old on @DATE1 it was a snowy night and my mom and dad were buying a new car it took so long I was so hungry mom and dad were talking with the car dealer my brother and sister were playing @CAPS1 when my mom and dad were done talking with the car dealer they looked at the car they wanted and one of the worker's brought me and my brother and sister a box of cookies and milk while my mom and dad were looking at the cookies we got hungry again but I showed patient's. My mom and dad found the car they wanted they chose a van with a @CAPS2 inside they paid for it and we left when we did my father took us to @ORGANIZATION1.,5,4,,9,,,,2.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3099,2,"Twilight, @PERSON1, or even The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 series are books that many guardians do not allow their children to read due to their beliefs on what is real and what is not. Magic, spells, and vampires many of us know are not real but others do not believe in what it is that is being taught to the younger readers. My personal view on censorship would be a very low tolerable standard due to different people, more variety, and different reading or viewing materials. But there would be certain circumstances where I would have to put my foot down and censor things such as sex and drugs just because that is not suitable for young children to be reading at that young of age.     The reason why I would have a low tolerance of the censorship is because different people like different things. If someone was an athelte they might not find a book about cooking and cleaning very appealing. As if a person that was a cook might not find a book about athletics too appealing either. Just because one person has different beliefs or what their standard is for offensive would not change my stand point on the censorship of certain articles. Different beliefs of certain people is understandle but, just because you don't believe it doesn't mean that everyone else is going to right there not believing it with you. Dont't ruin it for the others who enjoy the interesting fact of a male @CAPS1 falling in love with a normal @CAPS3 girl just like you and me.      Another reason why my censorship in libraries is because it would give my library more variety. If there was twenty different @PERSON1 books on the shelves many people would be able to look at them and check them out as they please. Also, if you didn't know what kind of book you wanted to check out, you could look around and get a mystery, drama, comical, or even a horror book. Having a wide range to select from would keep the guests always coming back for more. I know that when my library had a series of books that I found interesting that I was back in there after I finished each one.       Also, having different reading or viewing materials on hand is important in a library do to the fact that some books these days are now turned into films which makes people more eager to finish that book in less then a week so that weekend they can watch the movie. Most people say that the movies are never better then the original book itself but an opinion is easier to be based off of reading the book and then watching the movie not just by stopping after reading the book.      Now that you know my personal views about the censorship in libraries understand that not everyone is the same. That is why when school's talk about getting school uniforms many children are against it due to the fact of wearing whatever style of clothing you do each day show individuality such as which type of book your reading also, shows your individuality. That is why my personal view on censorship would be a very low tolerable standard due to the fact that different people, more variety, and different reading or viewing materials. Just because you @MONTH1 not believe in the magic or wizardry doesn't mean you have to ruin it for someone else. So don't jusdge a book by it's cover and lets not set a high standard on censorship in libraries.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13161,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is happiness. According to the last sentence were @PERSON1 says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. This means that the mood is very happy and that this mood is great. @PERSON1 has many memories of the home that are positive and he also learned from what his parents taugh him. This mood in this memoir is a very positive and happy mood because the passage is about good memories and bonds between friends and family. Such as, when they first moved from cuba to the unided states to start their lifes new.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15708,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first problem was the structure of the building, after the mast was designed they needed a building that could withstand the stress of the mast. ""Rather than building a utilitarian mast without any ornametation, the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower. They were able to overcome that obstacle. Another obstacle was safety. ""Most dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium"" @CAPS1 obstacles did that bring? Well, hydrogen is highly flammable. When a German dirigible was destroyed by a fire in New Jersey, the owners of the ""Empire State Building realized how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area. The obstable brought upon another obstacle of practicality. Dirigibles customarily landed in open fields. ""The greatest obstacle to successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building made it unsafe the only solution would be tethering the dirigible and weighing down the back with lead weights but using these at the building ""dangling high over pedestrians on the street was neither practical nor safe"". Architects faced many obstacles.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12191,5,"The mood of the memoir is appreciation. I think it's this mood because in the final paragraph the author says, ""... I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" @CAPS1 fact is, in paragraph @NUM1, @PERSON1 talks about how he kept thanking his parents for everything he had. He states, ""I've often told them that what they did is a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done."" I guess he is just very grateful for his parents, his childhood, everything and everyone he has ever met, had or done in his life. If I were in his shoes, I'd be grateful, too. This opened my eyes and now, I, too, am grateful for everything and everyone I have in my life.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4304,2,"In every school or library many people see books that are inappropriate for their taste. Everyone has their own opinion, and what might seem offensive to you, @MONTH1 be something that someone might want to know about. So should we take the books that only the majority of the people think are offensive off the shelves, or should we keep them anyways? Here is what I believe we should do.     Books are meant for learning and for pleasure not to try to offend anyone. They each have their own purpose and there was a reason for why they were written. There are tons of books out there that many people dont like, but that doesn't mean someone else doesn't. We should keep the books in the schools and in libraries, because @MONTH1 be they might help someone in a way and if they weren't there, how would that person get help if nothing else was avalible?      One thing we can do is categorize the books by the genre, so that way people know what they are looking for. Many people find these books that are 'offensive' because they come across them randomly. If each book was put into a certain category then that incedent wouldn't happen. It also helps keep everything organized that way. So when you go into the library you know what you are looking for, you can just go right to that section and not look at anything else that @MONTH1 be offensive to you.     Keeping books on shelves is what all libraries and schools intend to do. That is the main reason for libraries. They help you learn and get information about things that maybe you can't get anywhere else. If every library took off the books each person complained about what the point in having the library? There would be nothing left.      In all, everyone is entitled to their opinion and has a right to think that a book is offensive, but the reality is that it was written for a reason. If the library or the person who published it thought it was going to be a big deal, they probably wouldnt have put it out there for the world to see. So keeep the books on the shelves",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1652,1,"Dear local news paper, @CAPS1 computers is a good idea because every developed country uses computers. Also they @CAPS2 learning, fertileze comunication, and are comercialy implortant. Computors also make life easier for many people. Computers @CAPS2 learning by let vast of information being available. I personaly find out about many world events just by bringing up yahoo.com. Computers alow me to learn about new @NUM1, learning about cultures all over the world can be done by computers. The last way computers @CAPS2 learning is by informing us about everyday thing like to get a stain out, how to pronounce a word, how to make a new dish, and much more. Computers are also crucial to communictaion. We use computers to talk to our freinds on facebook. You can also meet new people useing a pc. Everyone uses computer so you can basicly meet enyone. The last reason computers are important is for the commercial stand point computer help alot of small bussness out by letting than be known. Domestic seller and huge companies can compette for the same customer. Furthermore the internet generates alot money for people becausethey can use it as a cyber billboard. In conclusion the computer is usefull because of learning, communication, and comercial. Therefore the computer should be supported and not looked down upon.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9341,4,"In the last paragraph of the story, the author concludes the story like that because the author means to say that the hibiscus is the symbol of overcoming obstacles. For example, @CAPS1 mother says “Its flowers aren’t pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months.” This is a symbol to overcome obstacles as a flower is strong enough to make it through the cold months, in which the weather is rough. In Saeng’s case, she is a girl who will make it in a foreign country. Thus, in the last paragraph, when Saeng vows silently to herself that she will take the drivers test again when the snow melts (writers over) and the hibiscus is budding, she uses the hibiscus as a symbol of overcoming the obstacle of failing the test. That is why the author decided to end the story with that last paragraph. ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18314,7,"The four sisters waited in line the second most exciting ride of their days at cedar point. Right behind @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3. The roar of the roller coaster and the screams of its riders zoomed by @CAPS14 it started to get quit again. “I am soon super, doper excited!”  @CAPS4 the youngest sister ???. “ I know me to.” The rest said at almost the same time. Eight hard eyes moved at the same time watching the same thing. The @CAPS5! There were twists, torirs, diues, and hills involved with  this serious packages deal. “@CAPS6”. @CAPS10 long has it been?!” ??? @PERSON3. “@CAPS7 hour.” @CAPS8 the oldest, ???, putting her long, dark, curiy hair into a pony tail. “@CAPS9 young grasshopper” said @PERSON4 has the petteel the side of??? face, “@CAPS10 this son has really got to me “@CAPS11!” agreed @PERSON1 with a look of displeasure on her face. “@CAPS12 my ??? guys look! Were almost to the front!” exclaimed the second oldest @PERSON2. “@CAPS13 me!” said a voice coming from??? abuse. “@CAPS14 you for being patient, but we are experiencing some difficulty with the ride and it will be fixed as soon as we ran. Thank you.”  “ I really hope @CAPS15 finish it soon!” said @PERSON3. ‘@CAPS15 all agreed. @CAPS15 waited for about a half @CAPS7 hour @CAPS14 another anouncement came on. “@CAPS16 again thank you for being so patient but this problem will not be fixed for another @NUM1 hours. Thank you for choosing cedar point.” And the voice shut off and @PERSON1, @PERSON2, @LOCATION1, go ride the grant swings.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13032,5,"The mood of this memior is slightly diffucult, somewhat depresing, yet gratefulness and now I am going to explain to you how. The mood is slightly diffucult and depressing because there is a different culture and a brand new language. Also in the united states you have to have get a new job. This short story is also gratefull because you have a amazing oppertunity to start a very better life and get a great education.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19380,7,A time that I was patient was when I was awaiting to get into my basketball game I played for the destroyer’s. So in all the game’s I always had to wait to the @DATE2. So in the @DATE1 game of the season I got in four times. In the first @DATE2 I got in for about one minute. the I got in for @NUM1 minutes in the @DATE1’s. I was happy but I still wasn’t starting. then we got into the play off’s I only got in two minutes throughout the whole entire game. At one point I was gonna quit but my teamate’s came up to me and said don’t worry your gonna your time to start everyone will. Over the next few month’s I waited patiently. Then we got in tournament’s then we split up the team with older people on one and the younger people on the other. Then I finally got in the starting lineup. I was so excited that I was in the playoff’s then we lost at the championship game. That was a time I was patient.,8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9878,4,"The author uses this paragraph to conclude to show she’s going to give the test another try as well as her new surroundings. For example the story says “Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet repetition of season upon, almost fimiliar to her now”. Saying that she is getting used to where she is now and wants and is willing to give it a chance. Almost as if she doesn’t find it that bad as she thought at first it being different and not her home and where she was used to being.  ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
5994,3,"Many different characteristics in a setting and determine the outcome of an event there. Im the story, Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit, the cyclists journey was affected my a few weather relouded things. The heat was an extreme thing that showed him down and in most cases detened him from reading his maximum level of ability. Also the time of your in which this labes place, greatly affects the cyclist. Lastly, the type of road and amount of ground that he has to cover after affects his performance. Overall, setting can be a determining factor in a journey as they life",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12494,5,"The mood in the memoir by @PERSON1 his family, and how not all family members are blood relitives. Narciso grew up in a house filled with culture and love. His ""young parents created a traditional Cuban home…"" that Narciso would grow up in. Throughout his memoir, Rodriguez talks about ""the real definition of 'family.' "" @CAPS1 explains how it there were people of no relation who were considered family. His parents would keep ""their arms and the door open to the people we considered family, knowing that they would do the same for us."" Narciso Rodriguez tells of his home were @CAPS1 learned that a family is a group of people who care for one another, and that is the mood in his memoir.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12515,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from @CAPS1: The Blueprints of Our Lives The mood created by the author in the memoir is very cultural and family. The mood is very cultural because they created the home into a cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen. The Parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly Passed their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking. The mood is also family because when someone needed a place to stay from their family they would let them stay at their house.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12025,5,"In this memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives, there was only one @LOCATION1 mood I think. The mood I think the author was trying to make people feel is happiness. There are a lot of examples that make me think that. One example that I think is best is the last sentence ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" I think this is the best example of happiness because even though they didn't live in the biggest house, the were still happy with what they had. That is what I think the mood created by the author was.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3208,2,"If I could remove anything from shelves of libraries I wouldn't.  Would you rather your kids to learn things from the facts or learn from friends?  Censoring books, magazines, movies, etc and what goes onto the shelves are mostly for enjoyment or informational.  Granted you wouldn't want a five-year old reading a book made for adults, but with age kids would have to learn things.  You can't always control what children read unless you plan on going with them everywhere including college and on into their adult life.     Books provide facts and more reliable information than what  you can hear from people.  If all the books on the shelves relating to drugs or alcohol were pulled off, how would someone write a report on those things.  The books were created to provide people, kids especially, with facts that no one else could share and it could help with expanding their vocabulary and knowledge.  If someone were to find a book or a @CAPS1 offensive, they don't have to look at it or even pick it up.  Libraries can't always suit everyone's tastes and something you @MONTH1 find offensive isn't to others.  Takign a single book from the shelves would result in others taking books off the shelves and then no books would be left for anyone to read or wish to take off the shelves.     If you controlled what everyone read, no one would be happy and their brain wouldn't function correctly.  You'd be taking one of their rights, one of the only things entitled to them without someone else telling them they can't.  What kids read is shaping their minds for their future.  If you removed their favorite series or genre from the shelves, they wouldn't read or listen to music or anything anymore because it isn't enjoyable.  Kids get into reading when they can enjoy what they read or listen to.     So with that, I wouldn't take anything off the shelves because everything appeals to someone in one way or another.  Controlling what one person reads doesn't lead you nor the other person anywhere, someone could end up being offended if you take something you find offensive off the shelves, and you can't stop the knowledge that books can provide people if they read them.  In one way or another something provides information for people.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18095,7,"I remember a time when I was patient. I use to be able to wait for anything.one time I was so patient I asked my mom for a game and she said, tomorrow and she got the game the day I asked her. At one time I thought I was the most patient person In my whole family. I am so patient I can wait a month just before I go to cedar point. You have to be burn with patient. Some of my friends are patient but they can’t wait as long as I can. Some of them even ask me to teach them how to be patient. I say the same thing to them what I say to everybody who asked me about being patient. You have to be born with patient. Its not something you learn over the years. I could want three week without getting paid from my dad. As some people get older there grow lesser. That doesn’t work on everybody. But sometime soon I know my patient will be like everyone else when I get older. Who knows maybe somebody might be more patient than me I the world.",6,9,,15,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,0.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6679,3,"As he began his journey, he had full confidence in the directions given given to him by the old men. After he came to the first town and there was no water, he rode on. After he found an “ramshackle shed” he became troubled , as he “had been “hitting“ his “water bottles regularly“ and was traveling through the “desert of California in June” and was running low on water. Coming to a place where he saw a building over hills, he “manuevered” his way down, only to find it long  deserted and himself close to despair. He was desparate for water he needed it soon. Finally, he came upon “@CAPS1 and Wilber’s Fish Camp” and quenched his thirst, and was relieved. Then on  he wised up, and took no more directions from old men who knew little to nothing about cycling.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9303,4,I think the author includes this to show the determination to pass this test no matter what.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15370,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there where difficult. One of the obstecles they faced was fixing the Empire State Building and the cost was high. For example in the excerpt it said ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate the new situation over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" The plan never fully went thru because safety was an issue. Fire and people getting hurt on the streets was a big risk they could not make. It was also illegal for airships to fly too low over urban areas. The obstacles that the builders had to face made the idea impossible to happen.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3662,2,"Everyone has a favorite book. And some of us can't put it down once we read the first sentence. Then days later, the library takes it down and states that it's offensive to many people that have read it. Why should multiple people lose a good read just because someone doesn't like what they see? We're all trying to accomadate to everyone and their needs just to please them. Whatever they ask is done because we don't want a big scene. A majority of people think, 'That book is offensive! Take it down! Disgusting!'. But why?     Everyone has a right to read what they want to read. No library should uphold to the needs of a minority about an 'offensive' book just because they say it's inappropriate. Who are we to judge what's good for everyone and what's not? Books are written for a reason, and that's to share the ideas of the author, not to corrupt society with their 'evil' and 'offensive' ideas that could potentially cause a child to rebel. That excuse is ridiculous. A parent should've taught their child to differentiate between right and wrong, and if they use the '@CAPS1 child will become a rebel if they read this!' excuse, then they're not confident in their childs capability, or the fact that they taught their child well.     Also, it's not just the readers getting angry, it's the author. How bad would someone feel if they spent a year or two on a fantastic book, just to have it banned from library after library? Probably angry or upset. Authors have the right to write whatever they want. If they wish to talk about dragons and princesses, so be it. If they want to discuss why we see a full moon when we do? Go right ahead. No one can stop great books from being made and they certainly shouldn't be able to stop people from reading it. If someone is offended by a book, then don't read it, simple as that.     Parents like to protect their children from harms way and bring them up as fine citizens of @LOCATION1. By having this desire, the parents do every little thing to make sure their son or daughter doesn't see, hear, or read anything inappropriate or 'bad'. This is just ridiculous. Controlling a childs life will just cause them to rebel more and more as they get older. Let children have a choice in what book they read, or the movie they watch. Parents need to teach their children right from wrong, and in doing so, letting them see, hear, or read whatever they want should be no problem.     Without books, movies, and music, what would the world be like today? No one knows. Books are a great source of information, letting the author express themself as well. Movies are almost just as harmless, limits are needed, but overall? There should be no problem. Also, music allows the artist to bring out their side of creativity and emotion. Allowing that music, or movie, or book to be made, and then take it away is ridiculous. If it offends someone, then that person should just forget it, instead of taking it away from the people who love it and the person who made it.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21419,8,"The @CAPS1 of Laughter   The @CAPS1 of a single laugh is quite an astonishing thing. Laughter has a strange way to either bring two people together or when used wrongly tear those people apart. In all of my relationships I have realized that being able to joke around and laugh with one another is a big deal. I have come to notice lately that I have an amazing best friend. @PERSON1 is always here for me even after the mistake I made that ended tearing us apart. Now that we have gotten over The @CAPS2 and can laugh about it, I've realized it makes being embarrassed a lot easier and brings me and my friends together. Even when a best friend does something that wasn't right and neither one wants to fix it.   The @CAPS2 began last @DATE1 during my @CAPS4 soccer season, and should have never gone as far as it did or involved one of my friends. It was the hardest thing to admit that I had done wrong; both to her and him. The day we had gotten caught is now what I consider the scariest and worst day of my life. The @CAPS2 has also become a big learning point in my life, I've learned that all my actions do have consequences and how to balance what I want with what I should actually do.   When I first started soccer for @CAPS4, I had never played with any of the people and I realized that by being the youngest on a @NUM1 team I would have to stand out and prove myself. Which is exactly what I did; just not to the whole team. After playing for about two weeks I had started to notice one of the boys who was on my team. I hadn't really thought much about it but when both me and him started to pursue our relationship it became a whole other thing. The boy and I had been dating for about a month and a half when this began to involve @PERSON1. See we weren't exactly allowed to hang out or even date for that matter, but we knew that we would take the chance of getting into trouble for each other. And as time went on and we had began to get closer to each other, we also had began falling in love. That @MONTH1 have been the reason I had chosen what I had but at the time it all seemed to make perfect sense.    Then the @ORGANIZATION1 came around and we thought it would be the perfect time to see each other, little did we know this choice would result in us losing each other, me losing my freedom, both of us ruining my parent's trust and the worst of all me throwing away a great friend. We didn't think of these consequences so we went through with it. He would meet me at the @ORGANIZATION1 and I would tell my parents that I was just going to be with @PERSON1. At the beginning and throughout most of the time everything was going well me and him were having an amazing time because we could finally hang out with one another and nobody knew what was really going on. Little did I know that my mother had called @PERSON1's mom to make sure that I was going to be were I said and with who I said, and as soon as she found out I wasn't everything went down hill from there.    It had already been a couple hours and we were starting to get hungry but neither of us wanted to eat the greasy food at the @ORGANIZATION1 so we decided to take yet another chance and leave, with me leaving @PERSON1 at the @ORGANIZATION1 and her not knowing were I went. As my mom became more and more worried she starting calling @PERSON1 to see were I was and of course @PERSON1 had no idea. On her list to call next was me. When my mom first tried calling me I decided not to answer and have her think i was just on a ride or something, but when she kept calling I knew that something was wrong. As I answered the phone I knew that she knew what I had been doing, but I still didn't want to believe what was happening. I thought that the only way my mom could have found out was because @PERSON1 called and told her that she couldn't find me and who I was with.    So that is what I ended up accusing @PERSON1 of for at least a month after it happened. I couldn't look at her or even talk to her with out feeling resentment and embarrassment. When everything finally settled down, from being caught to being grounded the whole @DATE2, I knew that I needed to apologize for the position I put @PERSON1 in. It was the hardest thing I have ever done. But now knowing that @PERSON1 and I can laugh about it makes remembering that time so much easier and better.",20,23,,43,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7579,3,"In the essay “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” a cyclist was trying to get to Yosemite National Park. He followed the ‘short cut’ that some old men gave him, instead of taking the longer route. These old men had no clue what they were realy talking about, so the cyclist ended up taking a path through more obstacles. When the cyclist was in need of more water he ran into ""several rusty pumps."" No water would come out of these pumps so he had no choice but to keep going @CAPS1 water. As he moved forwad in his travels he said that the “Flat roads were replaced by short, rolling hills.” @CAPS1 any water, he did not have much strength left to face rolling hills, but he had no choice. The cyclist had to go on for miles @CAPS1 seeing anyone or anything. “There was noone in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind."" His troubles finally came to an end after getting directions from another man at a fish camp.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3642,2,"Dear @CAPS1 paper,     I for one do think that certain books should be removed from the book shelves at the libraries, but I also disagree with that same situation as well.  For example, I believe that certain books shoud be removed from the library shelves because, under age children also attend the library, and because, other people might find certain books offensive and should not be displaed in a library. My disagreement to the situation is that the its a library, and libraries have different types of books.          First, I think that certain books should be removed from the library because, it a public library and not only adults attend that library, but under age children as well. I know that certain books under age children are not allowed to check out, but they are not deprivcd of their privlliages of staying in the library reading such books.          Next, I do not agree that cerain books should be viewed on library shelves because, other people might find such a book offensive to be in a library. The reson I say this is because some books oppose humor to other people race, and if for say a black, mexican, maybe even a arbiana person was to come in the library looking for a book and happen to fall upon a book that talks about their race, most people would take that offensive.          However, I do not think that any book being deprived from a libray. My reason for thinking that is simply because its a library, and libraries are developed for many peole types of intrest in books. And I don't think it will be fair that certain books should be removed from the library because people think they are inappropraite in certain people interest in books. And people should be free to come in and look at books without having to search for books that interest them but are removed because other people find them offensive.          Therefore, I do and also don't agree that a library should be stripped of a book becuase it lacks intrest in someone or offend someone. And that such a person should 'put the shoe on the other foot' as the saying goes and try to see from other people point of view.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12103,5,"In this memoir by @PERSON1 he sets the overall mood for his ""definition of family"". Rodriguez's parents or Cuban immigrants and they live in a community full of all differen ethinic groups. ""Spanish, Cuban, and Italian immigrants"" form their community. The Rodriguez famly whas enormouse and their doors where open to any one who needed assistance. The table was allways full for dinner at their house. The mood set was one of very kind and helpfull personalities. Families are bigger than just ""blood relatives"" they are the people who you care about and help, or who help you. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1486,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, I understand that more and more people use computers, and that can have a good side and a bad one. Do you go on the computer for hours every day? That could be bad. I believe computers are good thing, but only if they are used properly. Hopefully when I'm done, you'll see where I'm coming from on this matters. Everyone is on the computer these days. The problem is, many people are on way too much. They say they are working on hand-eye coordination, but in reality they are wasting away their lives on a chair. They do not communicate as much with the rest of the household and that does not make a big, happy family. They say they are getting important information, but in truth, they might just be getting false information and viruses. Bad people are out there, and one might hack into your computer and ruin your day. Things like @CAPS4 @CAPS5 and @CAPS6 could have people that want to find out all about you so they can hurt you. Yes, being on the computer definitely has a bad side. But there is a good side as well. That is, as long as you are not on too much. It does improve hand-eye coordination, if you play the right games. And it can teach you things, too. Many websites have true information about place or things so you don't need to see it to know about it. You can be helpful. It is also an easy way to purchase items. You can just order them. Most importantly, you can have fun. So, what is your side on this argument? Do you think way too many people are on the computer. Or do you think computers can be great, as long as you're careful? I, for one, pick the latter one. What about you?",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
523,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I - like many other people my age - love to sit in front of a computer and explore it's wonders. But that does not mean that I spend my whole life on it like others. So I can see what too much computer time can do. It has made kids my age more aggressive, have health problems, and care even less about the environment. More and more kids are falling into those traps. Too much computer time can make even the nicest person extremely aggressive. I know from past experience that when you bother people when they are on their obsession, they will snap at you, yell, or even start swearing at you, or maybe get violent. If someone stays up to late on the computer, the next day could mean that they're cranky from the lack of sleep. This aggression @MONTH1 cause others to get aggressive in response, which @MONTH1 lead to a verbal or physical fight, which (hopefully) nobody wants. Another issue too much computer time can cause, @CAPS1, are even more health issues. Staying inside all day will keep people from getting the neccessary amount of vitamin @CAPS3 they need which is a vital nutricious vitamin that comes from the sun itself. Not getting enough vitamin @CAPS3 throughout a person's childhood can result in getting an illness called @CAPS5 later in life, which never truly goes away and hinders people from doing the things they love. Too much computer time also means people aren't getting enough exercise, and with the way we eat now, those two things can add up to making a person obeie. Others who do not want to get the proper amount of exercise or eat right and at the same time do not want to become obeisce, @MONTH1 to anorexia. Neither or these weight problems are very good for you, proving my point about the health issues of too much computer time. The issue I will have you read @CAPS1, is how people will become even less caring of the environment. Some of the big technology companies side-step around environmental protection laws to find cheaper ways to make their products and the thing is, no one cares! No one cares so long as they get their newer and better piece of technology. Everyone will just keep protecting these companies to get what they want to satisfy the craving for more computers. Now, I'm not saying that having any computer time is bad. I'm just trying to prove that too much is bad for you. That with too much computer time, people can become more aggresive, have health issues, and become even less caring of the environment. Therefore I urge you @CAPS1 to write an article in the newspaper about the effects of too much computer time, to make it known to everyone in the city. It might help us make a better future.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
187,1,"Dear,newspaper I think that people should have computers I think that because kids play game to help them learn like math game or read and grown ups can go on websites and watch work out videos and they could pay there bills on the computer to and they dont have it in the store of kids need to do there homework computers are good for that buy thet also have bad stuff like kids say they are doing there homework but they are on youtube myspace or facebook. or other stuff but computers have more good stuff about them they bad things so that? Why I think we should have computers.",3,2,,5,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18337,7,"This is the story about the time I was patient. It was a warm day and I was sitting on the grass with the radio on. As my favorite song went off I reached to change the program. But when I heard the man say usher tickets on sell that and then I frozzes to listen, the tickets were going on sell down town. I told my mom and she rushed in the car and got dozen there so fast you wouldn’t even see us leave. When I got to the line it was so long it seem like it go on forever. I waited and waited it felt like it only moved on an inch. Ti waited and still waited I beagin to get mad but I stood in line. Which my long wait was over I begain to jump for joy. As I walked to the concer she said “sorry we are all sold out. I couldn’t believe it I begain to scream my head out. I did all that waiting for nothing it was so unfair. And that’s the time I was patient for noting.",11,10,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7189,3,The fatures of the setting affects the cyclist because in the story the character makes it seem like horrible weather for example when he said “wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt” this is one way the setting affects the cyclist because it almost like your in the story and you can imagton what the character Is going through because everything is written in details.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7396,3,"In ‘Rough Road Ahead” by Joe Kurmaskie the main character faces a lot of trouble. First people give him the wrong directions. But, worst of all he has to travel a lot of mile on a bike through extreme temperatures. Going up and down hills and pedaling really hard. He doesn’t even have any cool water. As the character says, “…followed by brackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees (kurmaskie @NUM1). That kind of water didn’t help him either. It didn’t quench his thirst because it was so hot, he said it tasted like battery acid. But, finally he worked up his confidence and kept pedalig till he found a fish camp that had a bathroom with a sink that had cool water. Then he headed off to Yosemite and didn’t take anyone’s advice.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15656,6,"The builders of the empire state building faced alot of trouble and confusion in the attempt to let allow dirigibles to dock there. This had never been done before @CAPS1 they didnt know what to expect, except for a mooring mast. At first Al smith and his builders thought this was an amazing idea, technology of the future, but things werent that easy. They faced complications with the @ORGANIZATION1 with there research on dirigibles. It was a complicated process because it was @CAPS1 high up in the air, and there was alot of practicing involved. Next was the alterations made to the building, the building wasnt strong enough to hold the dirigible @CAPS1 they make @MONEY1 worth of changes. They finally realized this was an unsafe idea, and it wouldnt be good with the highly flamable hielium, @CAPS1 they were back to square 1. Then the government gave them a law that said no airships flying to low at or over urban areas, wich would make it illegal for the dirigibles to tie up to the empire state building. And the top floors were turned into soda fountain.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4108,2,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1,     @CAPS1 I was growing up in my small little neighborhood, life could not have been more simple.  For children, life is eating, sleeping, playing, and laughing.  Their innocent minds do not ponder the meanings of life or of love, but curiosity does grab every child now and then.  With a stubborn persistance, a child would probably go to the ends of the earth to understand what confidential information they overheard their parents talking about.  But @CAPS1 does harmless curiosity mean the destruction of a child's innocence?  By viewing adult-oriented material, such as books at a library, children can gain premature knowledge that can be harmful to their development.  However, libraries should not fear stocking their shelves with books that are appropriate for adults because an author spend countless hours writing that book,  that book represents a portion of history for the human race, and not everyone @MONTH1 find the contents inappropriate.     Authors have the freedom to write about whatever interests them, and taking away their right to display their thoughts and opinions is unjust.  A censored author must feel like a basketball player that did not make the cut despite hours of practice.  Thus, an author that has practiced and perfected his writing skill does so in hopes of publishing his work.  Not agreeing with someone's interest in a subject is no reason to exclude his valuable thoughts from society.  Books that are appropriate for adults deserve to be displayed for adults as the author intended.     Every piece of literature that has ever been written documents a portion of history of the human race.  Even fictional novels serve as monuments to the depths of man's imagination.  Therefore, no book should be censored, no matter how inappropriate the material is.  Just as remembering the @CAPS2 has influenced mankind not to repeat past mistakes, keeping books of the most horrible content @MONTH1 save authors from repeating such dishonorable content.  In other words, if censorship removes the 'mistakes' of literature from library shelves, who is to say that an oblivious author will not repeat that 'mistake'.  By remembering these mistakes, mankind will be able to move forward in literature.  @CAPS1 books are not 'mistakes', they serve as reminders of the high-points in literature.  All literature, appropriate and inappropriate, is a piece of mankind's history that should not be kept a secret.     Finally, who is to judge what is a 'mistake' in literature?  A book on @CAPS3 @MONTH1 be inappropriate in the eyes of a @CAPS4, but that book @MONTH1 be sacred to a @CAPS5.  Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.  Furthermore, for any given book there is at least one person who disagrees with its message.  A library is built for the education of the public, not for the interests of one person.  If one is offended by a literary work, perhaps he should just move on and find a book more suited to his interests.  The decision on the appropriateness of a novel is up to the reader, not the government or library or activist group.     Censorship of material in libraries would strip authors of their chance to let their works be seen by others, keep records of the human race secret, and take away the privelage of the reader to decide what is appropriate.  Authors endure long hours of practice and writing in order to have their thoughts read, and such a motive should not be taken away from them.  Every book represents some aspect of human life and records it for future generations to avoid previous mistakes.  And these 'mistakes' are decided by the reader, a decision that censorship takes upon itself.  Instead of choosing what books are seen by the public, perhaps libraries should just create an adult-only section to house the 'controversial' books; as a result, mankind would stay educated and free, and children would remain innocent.                                   -@ORGANIZATION2",6,6,,6,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16504,6,"from the excerpt The mooring mast there where many obstacles the builders of the Empire state building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first thing was safety. And that states used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The greatest obstacle the @CAPS1 use of the mooring mast was nature itself. the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. They would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither practical nor safe.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6494,3,"Many things caneffect a cyclist and how they ride, in this essay many things effected him such as the setting of the story. One of the problems of the setting was there were no stores or even people, another and most important thing was the lack of water around him, so many things can effect a cyclist while They are riding inculding there suriondings.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12396,5,The mood created by the auther sounds like he's happy But sad at the same time. He is happy to move to america. But sad cause his friends aren't gunna be there with him. Another thing is he sounds sad cause he is thinking About memories. Those are things dat describe the mood that the author created.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7613,3,"The features of the setting make the cyclist feel hopeless after realizing he is not on a short cut. The cyclist has the ""growing realization that [he] could drop from heatstroke"" as he rides along. Also, the only building he sees for miles ""had been @NUM1 Welch's Grape Juice Factory."" The cyclist is driven deeper into despair and feels that all hope is lost when he sees this building. As he rides on, the song ""'@ORGANIZATION2' rattled aroung in the dry honeycombs of (his) deteriorating brain."" At this point, the cyclist believes his own death to be inevitable. He saysown death to be inevitable. He says “with any luck I’d hit a bump and lodge one in my throat” when talking about pebbles he placed in his mouth. Finally, the cyclist reaches a small bait shop, and all hope is returned as he “drank deeply from the sink.” The desert setting, with its lack of water, shelter, and people was the cause of this mans concern and later panic about his own life. The hopelessness of this cyclist is much like the hopelessness of those in the @ORGANIZATION1, who trapped in a blizzard far from civilization, resorted to eating their dead just to survive. While the @PERSON1 @ORGANIZATION1 went to extremes for their survival, their setting caused them to feel the same hopelessness as the cyclist.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13343,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" he expresses his gratitude toward his family. He describes why he is so thankful to have a neighborhood that is united together.Narciso Rodriguez includes a happy mood. He points out all of the positivities of his life. ""I will always be thankful to my parents for their love and sacrafice."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) this is a quote showing that he'll do as much as he can to prove how lucky he is. Narciso thinks of his whole town as a family. They are united together and he knows that he is always welcome in their arms.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
5989,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist very much so! The cyclist is riding through the hot desert. Meaning he needs lots of cold water to keep him hydrated. The longer he rides in the hot sun, the more he sweats, the more likely he will get dehydrated. If he was riding in the rain or snow it could possibly slow him down also, because he would be cold and his muscles might get stiff and not be able to move as fast. This is why the setting affects the cyclist very much so. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6591,3,"When your with your family in ocean city biking down the board walk your only obstacle is people. When your in a race on whinedy roads you could have lots of obstacles. The wheather could be your greatest obstacle. You could pass out by lack of water and scorcing heat. You could fall over by slippery roads from the rain. Along with that nature could lay its toll apon you. “a ridiculously large snake…blocked the majority of the pavement in front of @NUM1, Kurmaskie) @CAPS1 like a snake you don’t know what you could come across.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6600,3,"In this story, the cyclist was trying to make it to Yosemite, California. In the begining, the cyclist was sure of himself he decided to ask some old men that looked like they haven't been off their porch since Carter was in office for directions. The old men ended up leading him into the middle of the desert. In the desert, the sun was beating down on him and he had a limited supply of water. There was no sign of civilization what so ever. These hot conditions made the cyclist very hot, tired, and very thirsty. But that didn't stop him, he kept going and eventually he came apon a little town where he could drink cool water and take a well needed rest. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16241,6,"In the beginning the use of dirigibles seemed like a good idea. They could be the new form of transportation and appeared to have no flaws. As the development of dirigibles progressed it showed signs of problems. The engineers planned on mooring the dirigible to the mast of the Empire State Building, but that would have added a lot of stress to the building's frame. They next found that safety was an issue. Most dirigibles used hydrogen instead of helium which was flamable. Also they would have to use lead weights to hold down the dirigible when it was being moored. It would be very dangerous to have lead weights dangling over pedestrians on the street. With out the lead weights the dirigible would simply swivel in the air with a possibility of puncturing its shell. Finally there was a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This made it illegal for the ship to even approach the building. There was high hopes for the use of dirigibles, but in the end they had more cons then pros.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12907,5,"I think the mood the author set is loving. The story says how there was a love for cooking and a passion for Cuban music. Just how endless celebrations brought life in there warm home. Narciso Rodriguez also had a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. ""In our neighborhood despite customs elsewhere, although these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" How there parents always had their arms and door open to many people knowing they would do the same for them. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" ""I will never forget how my parents turned a simple house into a home."" The mood @PERSON2 set for this story is loving.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18064,7,"When I was patient. I was @NUM1 yrs old when I got a as. I ordered it online and waited. @NUM2 days went by and still nothing, a week went by and a ups truck stopped at our house dropped off the package and left. I was so happy that I didn’t even noticed that it was for ma mom. I opened it to find pampered chef stuff in it. I was really angry! @NUM3 weeks went by and… nothing I was upset that I didn’t really didn’t know it I was gonna get about it. But a ups truck came and didn’t see it and guess what in the package was my as! I didn’t even realize it till @DATE1 I was so happy that I got it. That I forgot to order a game with it. And that was the time I was patient see ya.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
462,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Technology has been advancing at a rapid rate for many years now making life much easier for everyday people. It helps out in many ways for example, to keep in touch with relatives, to learn new information and to keep you safe and updated. Computers are vital to everyday life and we need them. A huge purpose of computers is to keep in touch. With new programs like ""@CAPS2"" and ""@CAPS3"" and ""@CAPS4"", it leaves you with all sorts of new opportunities to keep in touch and have fun with your friends that were not previously available. Email as well, is a great taol to keep in touch with family that are far away opposed to the good'ol letter which @MONTH1 take a web in the mail. Another huge reason why we need computers today is to be able to reaserch foreign places and learn facts that without a computer you would never even heard of. With computers, it makes it possible to go online, look up the @ORGANIZATION1, research it and plan a flight there a week later. It is also a great tool to learn new things that he did not know previusly. It is a huge step up in the education process. Computers also provide us with extreme saftey and security as well as breaking news. Imagine how much simpler it would be to be able to be at home and go on the computer to check the best rout home opposed not and consequently sitting intinse. With modern day technology all that is possible. They add great saftey and protection to average people like you and me. In conclusions, hopefully your mind has been changed on the topic of computers, or if you already were in support, that as well is great. Now you are being asked to spread the word about how great computers are and how vital they are to ensuring a better future. I understand that some people do not enjoy electronics but it is up to you to set them straight! Computer save great tools for moving ahead and we should cheer, as them, not trash them.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15622,6,"When designing the mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building to dock dirigibles, the builders came across a few obstacles. A dirigible is a blimp filled with hydrogen and/or helium to keep it lightly in the air. What the builders did not realize ahead of time was that hydrogen is a highly flammable gas. If it is docked on top of a building around movement it could easily catch on fire creating the whole building itself to blow up. Another obstacle that the builders noticed would occurred was the forceful winds. With a dirigible dock so high up in the air, it creates an unstable way for people to get off of it. The vicious winds would make the back of the dirigible to swivel around the mooring mast because only the front would be weighed down. The last obstacle that was found with docking a dirigible, was that it would be too low to an urban area. The dirigible would be too close to walking pedestrians, creating an un-safe enviroment if something was too go wrong. Without taking that chance, it was agreed that there were too many obstacles; therefore, the idea of docking a dirigible on top of the Empire State Building was cancelled.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21008,8," We all have had times when some thing happened and you just thought of it as a nuisance. But looking back on the same occurrence you just have to laugh at how silly it was. I recall one of these experiences when I went on a motorcycle camping trip this @DATE1. It was a bright and sunny day when my dad dropped me off at the beginning of the main logging road of the area. I decided to keep my pace slow and steady and just enjoy the beautiful scenery. Later that day I found a picturesque place to camp for a few nights on the river. In the @TIME1, I remembered some spurs off the main road from when I have driven with my brother in these woods and decided to go explore some of them near my camp. I decided to go check out one across the river that looked like a fun ride. As I was crossing the it my front tire hit some lose rocks causing me to fall into the water! Thankfully I fell away from my motorcycle, if I hadn't it could very well have fallen on me which, out in the woods by myself, would have put me in quite the predicament. After getting my @ORGANIZATION1 up and out of the water I headed back to camp to dry my clothes off, seeing as how I only brought one set with me. While reading a book and waiting for my clothes to dry I fell into a deep sleep. When I woke up I realized that the sun had been up for some time now so I decided that I had better get going on another ride before the day's out. This time I stayed on my side of the water and went up a steep road that lead up to the top of the ridge. As I climbed it became increasingly warm then I broke through the woods and witnessed a glorious sight. The sun was just cresting the ridge in front of me and I had to stop and bask in the sun shine. After a while of just sitting I got going again. The road I was on started to taper down into a valley. At the bottom of it, flood waters had washed large quantity's of silt over the road and it was still muddy. As I crossed it my wheels started spinning out and flinging mud at me as a result I ended up very dirty. Once again I headed back to camp to wash my clothes in the river. This time I didn't fall a sleep for quite some time and when I did it was a fit full one.upon waking I packed up my meager supply's and headed out to complete my journey. Most of a day got me only half way to my destination so I was forced to stop and rest for the night. Just setting out my tent and getting out some food for dinner and breakfast in the @TIME1 didn't take me very long. Having little to occupy my time I just sat by my fire and pondered my trip and life in general. When I fell asleep I slept soundly until @TIME1. Waking to the sound of birds chirping and the river rushing by me was delightful and invigorating. It only took me a few hours to reach where my dad was going to meet me and take me home.This trip helped me think and gater my thoughts. It also helped me enjoy the little things in life that we so often take for granted. Looking back at it always makes me laugh and realize that my errors could have been much worse but as it turned out they were just minor set backs. All in all it was a very good time to gather my thoughts and renew my soul.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19497,7,I was patient when my mom when to the doctors and she was having a baby and I had to wait in the waiting room for @NUM1 hour for ???.,5,4,,9,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15572,6,"The builders of the empire state building face a lot of problems on trying to make a dock for dirigibles.  The builders could not just simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof.  They had to think about how the dirigible @LOCATION2 fair, they had to strengten the foundation of the building and a landing area for the dirigible.  Dirigibles were able to dock him by means of an electric winch The problem with this is they were in Downtown New York and New York city was a densely populated area.  A dirigible floating in the middle of a largely populated area would be very unsafe.  Also a dirigible is made of hydrogen and helium and hydrogen is very flammable.  So if an accident happens and a dirigible was destroyed, people below would be dead.  Another obstacle was the law, Airships cannot fly too low over urban areas.  The greatest obsticle of them all though was nature itself The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents.  This idea sounded great at first, but too many things could go wrong.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9073,4,"I belive that the author included this paragraph to show that you she didn't give up, to show that she kept trying after she failed. Saeng said to her mother ""I failed the test"". Also to make her sound proud and happy to try the test over again. Also I have failed test. I also said that I would take them over but I didn't. So the author put that in their to show how determin she was going to sound.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4685,2,"Most modern day book, movies, music, etc. do a fairly good job of placing warning in the form of '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' sticks on their covers. But books from before this practice began to happen @MONTH1 be found more offensive then books today. Why? Well, that's because many books of the past use words that today are found offensive. But those books, movies, and music are not at fault like parents try to make it seem. There are examples of how each catagory is in today's society.     Take the book 'The @CAPS3 of @ORGANIZATION1', written by @PERSON1, for example. In that story, there are words that are used to describe people of that time.. Back when @PERSON1 wrote the book, it was perfectly fine to use those words on those people, but in today's modern world, that is a book that has been on the list for being banned. It is offensive to use that word on people today, so parent groups and others are trying to get that book pulled off of shelves in hopes of erasing what was done in the past. I don't believe that a book should be banned for it's content, but rather how well it teaches its reader through its words. If it can teach a student in a high school or college class about the history and the culture of that time, then it shouldn't be banned at all. It should be read.     Movies have a rating system for a reason. There are some movies that are just not meant for a younger audience. People must be of a certain age to rent, buy, or view these kind of movies 'leagally'. Not too many people listen to that system, even though it has exsisted for years. A horror film is not suitable for a @CAPS15 of a young age who believes everything he or she sees on @CAPS4. Movies shouldn't be banned just because it gives a @CAPS15 nightmares or makes them not as emotionally aware of what is right or wrong. That is the fault of the parents. They were the ones who let their @CAPS15 watch that movie in the first place. So the movie shouldn't be held responsible for the @CAPS15. If the movie was intended for a more mature audience, that's the way it should stay.     And that brings us to music. There is a lot of music in today's age that can be considered very offensive. There are only a few 'pure' genres, free of the cursing that is used in many of the others today. But children, teen, and adults all find their favorite kind, and you can't change their minds then. The governement has issued that all music containing harsh words, horrid images to the mind, gruesome scenes, and other elements that are offensive to people, must carry a sticker on it. The black and white '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' sticker. When parents see this sticker on the @CAPS7, @NUM1 download, or whatever their @CAPS15 is using, then they know that it is more than likely not right for their @CAPS15 to listen to. Doesn't mean that the parent is actually going to listen all the time, but it means that there is a slight chance that their minds will not be tainted by 'garbage'.     So, in conclusion, I believe that movies, books, and music that contain 'offensive' material should not be removed from shelves. Just because it is offensive to one person doesn't neccessarily mean that it is the same to another person. There are ratings on things for a reason, to keep children from seeing them and to help with the level of harshness that is given to today's society. People will still argue that books such as 'The @CAPS3 of @ORGANIZATION1', 'The @CAPS3 of @PERSON2', '@CAPS10 in the @CAPS11', and many, many more books like them should be banned. They will always fight that movies such as 'A @CAPS12 on @CAPS13 @CAPS14,' '@DATE1 the @NUM2', or '@CAPS15's @CAPS16' should be removed from store shelves because it gave them nightmares as a @CAPS19 or it gives their @CAPS15 nightmares because they saw it. And they will always try to fight and say that artist like @CAPS17' @CAPS18, @LOCATION1, and @CAPS19 @CAPS20 are not suited for their @CAPS15. Well, this pattern has been going on for years. Those books were made many years before, those movies are intended for a adult audience, not for a @CAPS15 of a young age, and those artists are just trying to make money like everyone else. So when parents try to argue about what should be on shelves and what should not, remember that it might be that parent's fault for letting their @CAPS15 view it in the first place.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1773,1,"Dear @CAPS1 newspaper, I have resently read that ther are some people do not agree with computers. They belive that people use them all the time. I dissagre with them. One of my examples of why I disagree is because they give a person the ability to talk to someone. This is a great idea! What if your friend moved a few states over wouldn't you still want to communicate? Well, with high long-distance rates, many cna't afford this and how would you see your friend anymore? Well, if you send her pics, or video chat over the web, you can! Also, its a great idea if you want to send a small mesage like ""see you at @NUM1"", instead of saying it on the phone, and paying more, when its free on the computer. The computer also teachs hand-eye coordiantion that is important to use in the world. You can play games, take quiza and tests, go to school on the internet, even listin to music, that is important for us to express. Also there are sites that allow you to learn how to use a keyboard, and work electronics like a computer! And lastly, the computer gives you the ability to see far away places without even beiong there. This helps you do a project on a place you have never been, plan a family reunion or vacation, or find a place where you can have that fun in the shining sun, many people think that too many people are staying in front of their computer than exercising and being outside. To prevent that, they should just limit themselfs to the amount of computer and electronic time they have per day and then go exercise go to a faraway place. So, the computer teachs hand-eye coordiantion, allows you to talk to others,and allows you to see far away places. Don't you think that is great? Think about it. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15720,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, alot of problems were faced in allowing the dirigibles to dock there. The obstacles that were faced would put peoples safety at risk. One of the problems was the tail of the dirigibles would swirvle because of how high up it was the wind would be violent. Another problem that was stated in paragraph @NUM1 was forgeign dirigibles were made with hydrogen instead of helium so they were flamable.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18191,7,"When I was very patient was the, time I had to get my teeth pulled it had took two hours they would take a break for about @NUM1 minutes every half an hour I had gotten  many shots in my mouth. And they had ripped my gum open and took at two teeth. Then my two bottom teeth. I was patentance then. They even said I was one of there best kids cause of every thing I had went thorugh in my mouth and the long time panke. This was the time I got @NUM2 teeth pulled and was very patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
800,1,"Dear Newspaper, People use computers in their everyday lifes, & having computers has become customary to many people throughout the @LOCATION1. We go on computers for research, writing papers, or just for pure entertainment, in all these ways computers are very helpful. But, like all good things, too much computer time can be harmful. Sure they provide our lives with knowledge, info on the outside world, & connections with people from just about anywhere, but some of us become too attached with this virtual life instead of living our own real lifes. This happens to many people, some don't even notice what computers are doing to them. For most people, life @MONTH1 be challenging & the real world to stressing, so they retire to the computer for awhile, & to me this is fine, but when someone were to keep doing this it would become an addiction. Instead of relaxing by taking a walk or reading a book, they go to the computer, this would not be good for their social life or their minds. In my opinion, minds need to think, they need excerise by puzzling over something or figuring out a problem. Sure you think your brain is thinking by playing a challenging computer game, & sure, in some ways, it is. But it could reach its full potential by doing something else thats not straining your eyes so much. Computers can be good, but not for everything in your life. Now what about your social life Computers can be a helpful resource in many ways, but not if you let them become a destruction. This @MONTH1 happen by letting the computer be your constant companion. Now a days people have come up with online games where you can interact with other people. This isn't neccessarily bad unless your whole social life is only with these online people that you really don't know, instead of with real people that you see at school or meet on the everyday streets so what I'm saying is that a talking with people online isn't bad as long as you put them as secondary friends & have real people come first. Like I said in the beginning computers are part of our everyday life, and its not a bad thing, they can be very helpful. But you must control what you do on them and how much you use them. If you do that you will most likely have a much more balanced lifestyle. Making you, your friends, & family a whole lot happier.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15439,6,When building the Empire State Building the @CAPS1 wanted to keep it the tallest in New York. They modified the buildings that it would not be succeeded by the chrystler building. It's original property was not to be a mooring mast. The empire state building had to be refraimed then the government banned aircraft too low then commercial airliners took over the avaiting industry. It was too dangerious for dirigibles to dock because the strong currents can blow them out of place causing accidents similar to the hindinburg.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18032,7,"One time when I was little we were going to the dentist in ann- @CAPS1  and the was a lot of traffic and me my sister and my brother were in the car (we ended up waiting for @NUM1 hours) I was really unhappy so my mom told me to be patient. I didn't know what it meant at the time, but now I know. It means to wait and be calm. When I got to the dentist and sat down. I found out I was late so we had to go back home and do it again tomorrow.",7,8,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6840,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist by making him hot and thristy most of his way. As he rode he started to get tired slowly and he got work and more thirsty. He drank his water at first with out thinking to much or it, but as he went on he slowly found himselfs trying to conseve it. By the time he got to the second wild town the will he was so thirsty and tired thathe thought it might of been a ""death"" So he wiped the sweat from his eyes."" to make sure it wasn't a mirage. The only time people see mirages is when the are hot,tired, and about to kill for some water. This is what the cyclist was like after his long jouney to Yosemite National Park with the directions given by old men.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18138,7,"A time when I was patient. Two weeks ago @CAPS4 @CAPS2 said her @CAPS1 was coming. @CAPS4 grandma was happy so she bought her sister a bus ticket. Bus tickets cost a lot of money. It is @NUM1 dollar. That was a lot of money. She @CAPS11't miss this bus because I really want to see her. I could not wait. So she was suppose to be coming on @DATE1. She didn't come. I was sick so I called @CAPS4 @CAPS2 at her job. I said, ""@CAPS2 why didn't @CAPS3 come."" @CAPS4 @CAPS2 said,"" @CAPS5 she is coming you just have to be patient."" @CAPS6, I said. Next day was @DATE2. ""@CAPS2 is she here yet"" I said. ""@CAPS8, @CAPS5 be patient she will be here tomorrow."" ""@CAPS6, I understand.""I gave up I thought that she was not coming. So @CAPS4 mom called @CAPS4 godmom. She said it was @CAPS6. So she told me she was going to @ORGANIZATION1. I love @ORGANIZATION1. I so good. I asked @CAPS4 @CAPS2. ""@CAPS11 I have a @CAPS12. @ORGANIZATION2 cheese burger. I said @CAPS13 to @CAPS4 uncle and @CAPS4 mom said she was not coming. I told @CAPS4 mom I was not giving up she was coming. So I said I am hanging up. So I air hustled. @CAPS4 mom said to @CAPS4 uncle @CAPS14 ""should I get her something to eat. I thought she ment @CAPS4 grandmother. So I thought for a while her who is her. So I called back @CAPS4 mom said ohh I get food for uncle @CAPS14 dog. I said, @PERSON1's?  For a dog? She said know dog food. So @CAPS4 mom got me from @CAPS4 god mothers house I could not walk because @CAPS4 legs, back, arm and every part that I @CAPS11 move on @CAPS4 body hurt. So @CAPS4 grandmother came to her house because we have a keys. So she said where @CAPS16? @CAPS4 uncle whispered something and I said she here! Ran in @CAPS4 uncle room and hug her I said how are you because when I went for @CAPS4 grandmother birthday. She live in south caroline so yeah. The is @CAPS4 writing. That is when I was patient. So I could wait for @CAPS4 mom's @CAPS1.",7,5,,12,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16577,6,"In the process of building the Empire State Building, there were many obstacles for the builders. Al Smith, who was the one who designed the building, wanted to make the building taller. He did this by attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on a mooring mast at the top of the building, reaching 1,250 feet high. There was obstacles in the way of attaining this goal. Safety was the greatest reason why it was never used as a docking station. Hydrogen was used in the dirigibles, which was highly flammable. An accident had already occurred having to do with a dirigible, called Hindenburg, in New Jersey. As popular as New York is they couldn't take the risk of putting harmful, dangerous gases in a densely populated area. Another problem that occurred to stop this building from being used as a mooring mast was the powerful wind currents that constantly shifted. The dirigible would be dangling high over pedestrians swivelling around because of the wind, this made it very unsafe and not even practical. One last reason the Empire State Building would not be able to have a mooring mast in which dirigibles could land was because there was a law which stated airships were not allowed too low over urban areas. These were some of the obstacles the builders of the @ORGANIZATION1.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6610,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because he get tiring. The character, in the story is ridding his bike for a long period of time and he gets tired. He rides alone with nothing or none around his accept the tries and wild animals.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16587,6,"The ability to dock dirigibles atop the Empire State Building, while initially lucrative, had major obstacles. The problems facing the development of the mooring mast would be cost, flammability of dirigibles, and weather over @NUM1 feet in the air. The structural and cost problems facing Al Smith was that ""The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."" In order to overcome this obstacle, ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and... over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications would have to be made."" This is problematic because Al Smith now must spend more time and money than originally planned. Furthermore, another problem is that ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States use hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" This is a huge obstacle because a fire or explosion ""above a densely populated areas such as downtown New York"", would be catastrophic and could put thousands of people in harms way. Finally the weather at the top of the Empire State building is unsuitable for docking dirigibles: ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting... the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" This is dangerous to the structure of the building, surrounding buildings, and people close by. Due to these problems, Al Smith and the engineers could not complete the Mooring Mast.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3432,2,"'@CAPS1 Should be Taken off the @CAPS2'     @CAPS1 should be taken off the shelves? Nothing. At least thats @CAPS1 I think. For ant book you can find some bad thing about it. People can not keep bad things away from kids it doesnt work @CAPS4 that. Wether it is cusing, sex, gore, racsisem teens will find them and I think it would be better if they were foung in a book instead of real life.     Most young adult books have cusing. There is no way around it. Teens hear cusing every day. At home, school, or even at work and yes it is offensive and no there is nothing you can do to stop it. It is there and part of our life.     Most adults think thats if they don't shelter teens then they will find all this bad stuff in music. @CAPS1 adults don't understand is that teens doo @CAPS1 ever they want to be happy. The music of today's is very offensive, but the @CAPS4 it!!!!! THat is @CAPS1 is 'hot' in the music world right now.     Ok say a kid was from a run down home and all he had was a radio, and that radio only got one station and the station was pop music, which most parents don't @CAPS4. That pop music would make the kid happy. Would you really take that away from him just because it is offensive???     Sex a lot of really good books have sex in there, but if a kid is at home reading about sex the he or she is not out doing it. Plus sex makes books better. I read books that contain rape, and other sexual acts but I've never done it only read about it.      Race is anouther big deal. 'To @CAPS5 a @CAPS6' is an amazing book and every kid should read it so they can learn. That is the whole point in reading is so you can learn. We need to learn about those kind of thing.      Keep us sheltered is not going to protect us it only makes us want @CAPS1 ever we can't have even more. Music, books, magazines, and other stuff help us learn dont take that away from us. If we don't @CAPS4 it we will not read it or leason to it. Don't chose for us let us learn on our own. It is our life. Let us make our own mistakes....",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4307,2,"Do you believe that certain materials; books, music, movies, and magazines should be removes from the shelf if it is offensive to some people? Accordingly, I do not believe this way. If we were to take books off a shelf for everyone who thought it was offensive, we wouldn't have any books left on the shelf.     According to my prior knowledge, I know certain materials will affect different people in different ways.  I have had my own experience when in svhool. Some people do not want to say the pledge due to saying 'one nation, under @CAPS1.' We all have various opinions on subjects; so we all will react differntly.  However, that doesn't mean we should take away something he or she finds offensive; others find it appropriate.     Observing others when in offensive situations @MONTH1 help find a solution to these problems. The solution is certainly not to remove what some find offensive for many people will disagree until eternity.  Censorship in libraries should be based on seperation. Materials that fit under one catagory should be put in one section. Often times, this seperation helps people find what they need and not be offended.     In our own constitution it states that all @CAPS2 are free; freedom of speech in particular. All materials are written by someone with an opinion so by taking their books off the shelf, we are taking their freedom of speech away.  It is how they express themselves. If someone finds it offensive then they should quite simply not read it. Removing the material might frustrate and offend the author or other readers.     It is plain and simple: We shouldn't remove certain materials due to someone finding it offensive. Censorship in libraries should be based on seperation, not people getting offended easily. It's based on choices. People should get to choice what they want to read or watch without others taking it away from them. So now what do you believe; Should certain materials be removed",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9972,4,"Saeng thinks that she has failed because she misses her grandmother. The hiscubus plant that she buys reminds her of grandmother’s scent. Saeng spent over @MONEY1 on the hibiscus plant. She needed it to feel a little bit more at home. Saeng feels she had very little time to leave her country, in “a blink.” Her grandmother would want her to be strong and not cry at the thought of being away from her. Saeng needs to think of the good and smile when she is reminded of her past. Saeng wants to pass the test. next time the hibiscus are budding she must not cry.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3828,2,"To begin with, a woman might read a book about wifes and find it offense. But it was her choice to pick up the book and read it. Should it be taken off the shelf? No why should it. Different people have different perpectives on what they're reading. Not all people feel the same way. Samething goes for music, movies, magazines, etc. They might see a naked picture of someone in a magazine and not like it. It was there choice to pick it up and read it. No one held a gun to there head and said 'read the book etc.'      @CAPS1, why should a book, etc., be taken off the shelf if one person doesn't like it? You still have the rest of the population who might love it, some might just like it, and the ones who don't. You can't just think about that one person you have to consider everybody esle. If that person finds that book, etc., offensive then they should have chosen wisely the first time and/or never should have chose what they did. It's there own fault.     For my conclusion, nothing should be taken off  the shelf if its offensive just don't read the book and etc. Another person might read it and like it. Some people who finds things offensive are maybe looking at it in the wrong way. Keep the book etc., on the shelf if they take it off then sooner or later they will take everything off the shelf for being offensive. Then what we will be able to read or listen too",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12996,5,"In this memoir, the mood is very light hearted and kind. It gives you a feeling of peace and community.Several times the author tries to show appreciation. Not for any one thing in particular, just gratitude. For example, in paragraph @NUM1, he puts phrases in parentheses for no reason other than to show gratitude for his life as a child. As a result of this, while reading you get a feeling of peace and kindness.Because of his repeated display of gratitude, the mood is light hearted and unserious.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3338,2,"First off, I do like censorship laws to an extent.  However, the government cannot ban everything that they deem innapropriate.  I think it depends more on what the family deems innapropiate.     I do not think they should have any completely inaccessible areas in libraries for children of younger ages.  I believe that the viewer should have a family member's consent to view said content.  I also believe that if the content is not relative to the viewers interests, then they should just not look at it.  They are not required to look at it so if they do not like it, then they do not look at it.     However, if the library does not consent to holding the books, music, movies, magaines, etc., then they do not have to and the viewer can go somewhere else.  And if they do have the books, music, etc., then they can put limits and ratings on them.  But I do not think that an adult could go in and complain about innapropriate material.  As I said before, if they do not like it, then they are not required to look at it.     I actually think that the government should not tolerate parents whining and complaining about the content of different materials.  One parent should not have the ability to take away others' privilages to books, because they deem it innapropriate.  Just because they do not like the content, does not exclude all others from enjoying it.     Also, if a library does have an age restriction on certain materials, then appropriate acts of discipline should be taken for the viewer of said materials.  However, if the viewer has an adult family member with them and has their consent, then I think they should be able to view the material, regardless of ratings.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10083,4,"In the short story, “Winter Hibiscus,” by Minfong Ho, the author includes a paragraph at the end, stating that the main character, Saeng, will take her driving test again. Ho, includes this paragraph to show that Saeng is determined to adapt. Saeng is new to the United States, her and her mother had moved here from Vietnam. Throughout the story she is reminising about her home life in Vietnam. About her grandmother, and the flowers there. “Where was me...hibiscus hedge?.. Her gentle grandmother?” When at the flower shop, Saeng finds an hibiscus, flower they also had in Vietnam. She sees how it has adapted to survive in the winter here. As she is planting the flower in her backyard, she makes a promise to herself to pass the driving test next spring. She too, wants to become adapted to the @LOCATION3 and beable to live here without missing home too much. This vow she made is included in the last paragraph. The author included it to show Saeng too, wants to adapt to her surrounding and pass the driving test,",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21141,8,"Laughter, an important part of life, just the feeling of laughing is comforting because at that time everything is okay.Laughing brings people together and makes them laugh together, its like a way of communication. Once you laugh about something other people start laughing and it connects everybody together to be happy. Its like telling everybody to be happy but without even talking to them.That's when people laugh with you, but when they laugh at you, well that's a different story.I remember one day when I was home washing the dishes and everyone in my family was frustrated, even me.I hate being mad and I hate it when people get mad, so I said something, I don't remember what but then everyone started laughing,it put everyone in a good mood.I think of laughing like fire,one candle can light @NUM1 candles.When you hear people laugh, the first thing that comes to your mind is,""something must be funny"".And you want to go and see what it is so you can laugh too. that's very common for most people who like laughing. personally I love laughing because its a good weird feeling.",15,16,,31,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3405,2,"We see them. We read them. We gossip about them. Books that are found with inapropriate language, pages with the word 'sex' on them, disturbing thoughts and ideas, cuss words, its all there, but yet they are still in our libraries. My views on censorship is that, yes, our libraries should be more modest and not have books on the shelves with these things in them. The  books in libraries across the @LOCATION1 that have found and profane ideas in them, is one of the direct faults in our teenagers today.     In my personal experience with this, i have come across books that have had inapropriate language in them. I have also read books assigned to me at school that have had descriptions of sex and bad language in them as a third grader. As a young boy, I would go home to my parents and show them the content of the book and how despiteful it was. I've always been raised in a @CAPS1 home and seeing these things not only in schools, but on the bookshelves in libraries I believe is un-called for. I know that there are so many things that could offend people. Rascism, sex, cussing, rules, religion, but you need to eliminate the main things. It is impossible to please everyone. These ideas in magazines, books, in movies, and even in music has changed the world upside down. Even when I was young, we were taught no cussing aloud, and yet you see this all the time in books.     In @LOCATION2, of course we have the freedom to do what we want. Authors have the right to put profane language in their books, and even dirty ideas. However, libraries are not forced to keep this content in their libraries across the globe. I believe that we should keep the future of @LOCATION2 in the back of our minds, that if we teach them this material, they are going to grow up in the world with no morals at all, and the world will become worse than it already is.      In the quote by Katherine Paterson, I believe that she has made a strong point. If we take the books off of shelves, then our students, children, grandchildren won't be taught properly, and then there would be no education at all. However, I believe that from this quote even she agrees we in @LOCATION2 fear what our children read. So yet, why do we keep these books in our libraries? I believe that if we take these certain books, magazines, movies, songs, and internet sites off the computers, and out of libraries and schools, teenagers wouldn't be traveling down the road they are.     Today, the world has turned to a disaster. The kids we saw @NUM1 years ago were on the right path. Now those same kids are smoking pot, having sex, getting girls pregnant, abortions, miscarriages, things that are not appropriate. And I truly believe that this content students read in schools and libraries across @LOCATION2 has something to do with it all. It is now in the hands of the @LOCATION3, whether our kids grow up to be the future of @LOCATION2, or the joke of @LOCATION2. We need this fixed",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1107,1,Computer are good and bad because computers are good because that is a way we can comunicate with other people in different states. Another reason computers are good because they can keep you out of trouble and can keep you entertained. Computers are bad because they can become a computer. Freak and become highper when it comes to computers. Computers are good because it can do alot of things that other objects cannot do.,2,2,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4036,2,"We all have that favorite book, mine is ' OF @CAPS1 and @CAPS2.' @CAPS3 is a book I would recomend to anybody, but there are libraries that have some books that are so bad I would be scared if my mom even picked it up and looked at the cover. My name is @PERSON1, and during @CAPS3 essay I am going to show you what I am talking about.      I love to read during the day. I like to go out and just pick a book right off the shelf and start then and there reading, but when I see a book or a magazine that holds sexual acts in them I become very anger. I have seen many of my friends get lost in these books and magazines right in front of a adult like there mothers. They can go to a public library where they're children (as young as the age of five) and read and look at these terriable things. I don'@CAPS4 know why these books are even needed in a library. Now people can get on the @CAPS4.V's and but or rent them.     I have a best friend who lost is father to these sexual acts and pictures. My friends mother had enough and had to kick him out. Now my friend is becoming the same person. He can go out and buy these magazines from friends that steals or rents them from our local library. He doesn'@CAPS4 even reconizes that his father did the same thing. He still never wants to see is father, but what he is doing is the same thing that his father also did. I have had varies talks with @CAPS3 friend, but he said it isn'@CAPS4 hurting anybody, but what he doesn'@CAPS4 see is that he is hurting me.     Back in the late @NUM1's early @NUM2's parents saw some of the books that their children were reading. That tried to put a stop to it, but the plan never worked. Since then @CAPS3 problem has grown to a point that we will never be able to control. The libraries do @CAPS3 all for money they make. More people go to a library now not to study or to read in peace, but to get a sex high. @CAPS3 is where about  half of the libraries money is being made. The goverment tries to stay out of @CAPS3, because the money they get through taxes is coming of these people. When will it stop? No one really knows, but we will try to stop it all we can.     The reason for @CAPS3 essay was to show why the process needs to be stop. If you go to your local library and really look at what they sell or rent out, you will then know what I am saying. I will try to stop it, but probably will not suceed. That will not stop me with helping my friends in the future. Just be glad that you know about it now",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15864,6,"The workers' constructing the Empire State Building faced many problems while building a dockable mooring mast for dirigibles, two of which were that the winds at that height were unpredictable and foriegn dirigibles using hydrogen instead of helium. ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to Violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) This quote shows how unsafe it could be for dirigibles to dock up that high. The high winds could cause loosening of the dirigible which could cause it to go flying off, which is unsafe to the pedestrians. Also, ""Most dirigibles from out side of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" (@CAPS1 @NUM2) This shows yet another safety hazard the workers ran into. If something were to go wrong the dirigible could catch ablaze and come plummeting down to a large amount of pedestrians. These two are reasons or problem workers ran in to when deciding whether to not it would be safe or easy for dirigibles to dock at the mooring mast uptop the Empire State Building.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7318,3,"The features in the setting affect cyclist in many ways. One of which is bring only to carry so much equipment which @MONTH1 be needed. For example, you can only take so much water with you and once you run out of there are no buildings or anything around that you are out of luck. Also, you can only take so much food. Finally, when you are ready to go to sleep you can’t just pull over you have to ride until you find a hotel or get home. I know that I would not make it. So those are just a few reasons on why the setting affects cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16180,6,"Acording to the excerpt from The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced obsticles in attempting to attache a dirigible mooring unit to the top of the building. In paragraph @NUM1, @CAPS1 says ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself."" and Then describes how harsh winds could render the mast unstable. Another obsticle in the making of the mast was a law stating derigibles could not fly under a certain altitude, The set altitude was higher then the building was tall. The last obsticle was safety, in paragraph @NUM2 @CAPS1 talks about how some blimps are filled with hydrogen, which is highly flammable. The effect of a blimp fire over a vastly populated area would be devistating. The mooring mast on the Empire State building was an ingeniose idea, but had to many obsticles to make it work.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4498,2,"Have you ever read or listened to somthing that is so disturbing that you wonder how it even got the right to be published? Well, music, books, and magazines these days are full of garbage and innapropriete thoughts that children listen to and base there life off of. All of these resources that kids can find that has this kinda of material in it can be found in libraries. We have to put an end to it or find some source of censorship for these library resources.     A library has the tendency to be known as boring or a very plain place. If a kid in school comes through the hallway saying he found a really good book, other kids become interested in it; they find out it has drugs in it and they assume that this is not a boring book like all the others that you would find in a library. Then, more and more people get that book and other books that have this style of materials are being discovered and checked out. Now, all these children with these popular books consider themselves 'cool'. So, these children start making actions and start behaving the same way the characters are in the book. This leads to disaster.     Music can be the same way. Music that has been recorded in the past ten years pick up sexual references, drug usage, and innopropriete behavior in its lyrics. Why would anyone want to put this kind of material in there masterpiece? Well singers and writers have found out that pieces containing these topics have sold the most copies. So, every artist of any kind of work is puting these references in there books or songs. Now, singers are starting to make music videos which not along sings these lyrics but shows them as well. Children see these artist in these videos with attactive mates, lots of money, and living the 'perfect life'. So, this person try doing the same thing this artist did to make there life more like theres.      Movies come along then, movies have seen the ratings go up on these kind of styles, so they start puting them in there film. Now, all these pieces have this garbage in it and has had it in it for quite some time. How do we get it out? How do we get our children to stop getting these resources? No parents want to walk around and hear there children saying these things or doing these actions. So libraries have to have some censorship on there work; there work should be removed so minors wont get the wrong message.      What ever happened to the good old days when music, movies, and art was a special talent and was not looked up to as somthing that would get our children into some trouble? We need to get these censorships in libraries and get back to the good old days before things get more out of hand than they already are",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7399,3,"The cyclist was motivated to get the job done. When they   said only “    eighteen miles down the road.” He thought it was going to be forever but he made it because he “conserved his water ...” and last kept on going, when the road   turned into a rocky gravel road, he still kept on going, but it was harder on his legs and water supply.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9757,4,The author concludes the story of the end because I think the author concludes the end of the story because he wants to kind of say I will be ready next year to sprout again he will be ready to test him to not cry and break down when he sees the plant to think of childhood memories he will be ready o,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9044,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho. The author expresses how the girl believes with her memories and once she changes and adapts to the culture that’s when she will have the courage to re take the test she failed that day. Saeng misses her home so much and she can’t grasp that their are similarities between her new home to her old home. “She realized that many of the things that she had thought of as strange before had become, through the quiet repetition of season upon season, almost familar to her now”. Saeng didn’t want to expect the move but noticeing that she won’t forget any memories she starts to take on new memories. At first everything was so different now she is starting to remember things about her new home which is a sign of comfort to her. “She found that she was still too shaky to say the words at home, lest she burst into tears again."" With Saeng’s feelings of the change the ending paragraph lets the reader know that there is hope for moving on her knew home. She is gradually starting to gain confidence and she knows when she does she can take her test an succeed at it. The author shows how good change can be if your willing to adapt. Everything might not always be as perfect as you know it to be but your courage will make a happy home with new and old memories, As Saeng starts to relize during the last paragraph.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18513,7,"I chose write a story about a time when I was patient. It was my first time hunting, I was only hunting squirls but still. What I had to was walk in the woods and sit down once you sit down you cant move. So I was sitting very still for @NUM1 minutes and finally I seen a squirl. So I took my shotgun and shot her in the chest. I was patient so I got a squirl. So that’s my story on patients.",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4146,2,"These days there are many kinds of merdia in the liberaries beside books. There are musics, movies, magazines and many more. There are all kind of things and resources that you can find from liberaries. Do you think that certain materials should be removed from the shelves it they are found offensive? What do you think? I think it shouldn't remove. Even it is stuff that you don't want children to know, they will know someday. Once we remove it from the shelves then more things, the informations are going to removed. After all, nothings is going to be leaft.     There are a lot of imfornation in this world. Growing children learn all kind of stuff from parents, book and from other medias. Parent want to let their children to learn much as possible. However there are sutten things that parent doesn't want the children to learn. You need to think this way. That children will grow up and become adult, then they will know any way. Why would you move from the shelves, if they are going to know about it some how? What is a point about it? Doesn't removing from the shelves helps children to not know about it? I don't think there is a point to do that.     Katherine Paterson, the Author, said 'All of us can think of a books that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books on the shelf for any of us'. I agree with Katherine. Once, the books or other mediea get removed because of some reason, other things are going to removed because of other reasons. I don't think it should be remove, like Katherine said there are nothing gonna leaft for the children. If nothing gonna leaft for the children what is main point of having libaries?     I believe the certain materials, such as books, music, magazines and many more, should be removed from the shelves it they are found offensive, because children will know and need to know to be adualt. Also there is nothing gonna leaft for the children in the libareries",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12692,5,"The mood of this memoir is grateful and content. The author @CAPS2 this mood with his quotes that @CAPS1 puts in. ""I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family, blond-brick building in the ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey."" That @CAPS2 that the author did not care that much about house looks, price or its location. ""It was here where I learned the real definition of family... [that it] had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1 is grateful for all the people that @CAPS1 now considers his ""family"". Also, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice... they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life"". That @CAPS2 right in the quote that @CAPS1 is feeling grateful! The author also puts some phrases in parentheses, just to add a bit more, ""(after which I eternally grateful)"", ""(which I adore to this day)"". Those show @CAPS1 is happy and grateful with his life, and last this next quote @CAPS2 that his ""family"" members were all grateful for each other. ""It was a close-knit community of honest, hardworking immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necissarily their own kind, were clearly in need"".",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4327,2,"I think that @CAPS4 is fine if you take them out. Your should be @NUM1 or older to take them out of the libraries or stores if they are really that bad. If they are that bad they should have something on them like movies that are rated @CAPS1.     I have read some books that are really good,but kids shouldn't read them. I read this book @CAPS3 'A @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4' and @CAPS4 is really sad.@CAPS4's about this @CAPS2 and he tells us what his mom makes him do when he was little. I liked the book but @CAPS4 was sad,but I read @CAPS4 because people were talking about @CAPS4.     Some parents won't let their children watch certain things on the t.v. because they think that they are bad. I was watching this t.v. show at my grandma's house and she said that I shouldn't watch @CAPS4 but I do. I'm @NUM1 years old so I think I should be able to pick what I watch. I don't think she likes @CAPS4 because they yell a lot on the show and she says that is why I yell.     Some movies are better if they have bad things in them, @CAPS4 makes them funny sometimes and that is what everyone likes. I would rather watch a funny movie then a kid movie. I watched them before though",2,2,,2,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21,1,"Dear @CAPS1 of the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 daily, I am writing you to address the issue of computers in our society today. Each day new discoverys are made from the people that use computers in our society, however many people say that computers are harmful to are communtiy. Today I am going to convince you and society that computers are not as much as on issue as some people say they are. To begin with discoverys in our nation have been advancing rapidly. Each day new discoverys are benefiting our society however they are only being made possible by the help of computers. Without computers some for dieseases would have never been discovered and more people. Would have died. Secondly, computers have also increased medical care and have been the cave between life or death. Finnaly, computers help speed up production rates of cars household neccessitys, and many more objects. Have you ever been bored at home and looking for something to do on that dark, rainy, chilly night? Yes, exactly what I thought well the new technology advances in social-networking can even help the most bored and lonelyest people and give them something to do. Even if your just looking to talk to someone you can easily do that on the internet. So you people out there looking for that special someone will always be able to look somewhere. With all the social networks like twitter, myspace, facebook, and youtube you will always have something to do. During this economic recestion it seems that finding a job is so hard, however the internet comes to the rescue yet again. The internet can help you find a job twice if not three times as fast. Many people also speed up their word by using the computer. With microsoft things are lot easier to do work that you need to make up I hope that everyone can understand how much the computer help you, rather then hurt you. @CAPS1 of the newspaper, I hope you and the rest of the community can see that computer help you more that they hurt you. Thank you very much for your time and effort that you put in to listen to me.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
201,1,"Computers and modern technology are advancing quickly, and more and more people are beginning to use them. Some people say that computers are a bad influence on @LOCATION1. I think other wise. I think computers are an amazing breakthrough in modern science. I believe computers are ideal for school work and comunicating with others, as long as they are used in moderation. Computers make school projects so simple I don't know if we could do without. Our social studies teacher @PERSON1 says that @PERCENT1 of his projects involve something on the computer. The internet is a great place to research for big papers and projects. With over thirty-million educational and informational websites, its easy to locate what you need quickly and easily. Once you have finished researching it is easy to type your report. If it isn't a written report, then there are many other programs for fancy presentations. Take microsoft @CAPS1 for example: you can make exotic background and texts, as well as unique animations to emphasize or to make it pop right off the page. Computers are also an ideal way to communicate with friends and family. Emailing is quick and easy to tell others what you want to say. If you want to chat, then you can use @CAPS2 or instant messaging. This allows you to type and sent emails faster. Both of these programs are an inivative way to talk with a family member that isn't home. Like lets say my dad goes on business to @LOCATION2. We can email back and forth every day. And now with @ORGANIZATION1 (a video chat) you can see the person and actually talk to them like they're back at home. Computers have their advantages but they also have disadvantages. Computers are great for communicating and school work, but when used in excess can be unhealthy. Here is one example: my older brother @PERSON2 is a senior in high school. He is in school from @NUM1 to @NUM2:pm and as he gets home he heads straight for his computer. He is on there for at least five hours a night and that leaves time for dinner and not much of anything else including sleep. I think that computers are a great invation in modern technology as long as people limit themselves. Computers are coming out with new features everyday and who know theyll be like...",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15154,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced several problems in attempting to allow dirig ibles to dock there. One problem was strengthening the building's frame. This was necessary because the added pressure of the dirigible's load and wind  needed to be transmitted all the way down to the foundation. The existing skeleton of the building had to be edited. In fact, these edits cost over sixty thousand dollars. Another problem builders faced was constructing the mast itself. To give it a unique look, architects made the tower out of glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel. They had to place the machinery at the base of this tower. The builders also had to make sure it was accessible to passengers; they made sure luggage and people could go to and from the aircraft. These are two of the challenges builders faced is constructing the Empire State Building. Despite the mast being unused in the present day, the design makes this building one of the most well-known buildings in the world.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13326,5,The mood of the memoir was a happy and graceful mood because they live in a good neighborhood in america and they are surouded by their family members who have dinner with them.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12737,5,In this memoir the author creates a feeling of gratefulness. @PERSON1 is grateful of his parents unselfishness and his heritage. He loves his home country of Cuba. @PERSON1 is also thankful for his grandparents. He loves his home in @LOCATION1 and is grateful for growing up in @LOCATION1. He is also grateful that his grand parents came to @LOCATION1.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18776,7,"A time when someone else I knew was patient was when I was trying to have sleepover with my friend @CAPS1. My parents ordered pizza for me and my two brothers because they went out for their anniversery dinner. It was around @NUM1 pm when they left, and we just started digging into the deep dish @CAPS2’s pizza. Halfway through dinner I got a text from my next door neighbor, ??? my best friend, asking if I wanted to have a sleepover. I replied saying that my parent are out, they’ll be back in a few hours, I’ll ask later. @CAPS6 finally around @NUM2 pm my parents came home and I asked about the sleepover. She said, “I don’t know.” And walked away. About a hour later I got my answer. It was a yes! I texted @CAPS1 and said that I could. She replied “finally!” @CAPS4 I had to go pack. @CAPS6 I went to my room and got everything I would need for a sleepover. I was just about to walk out the door when my mom shouted from upstairs, “@CAPS5! I need you to take the dogs out before you leave!” @CAPS6 I dropped everything, put the leashes on the dogs and stood outside in the pouring rain waiting for them to finish up. When they were done I grabbed my stuff and ran out the door before she made me do something else. When I got to @CAPS7 house she opened the door and let me in. I said, “@CAPS8 it took @CAPS6 long. Thanks for being @CAPS6 patient!”",11,12,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7222,3,"In the adventures of the cyclist the setting is not only what developes the character but, that what affects how he pushes himself to not give up, even when he feels helpless. This is one example of how the cyclist is affected, ""I had been hitting my water bottles pretty reguarly and I was traveling through the high desert of California in June,"" With that information you can observe how this harsh setting creates problems for him physicaly because his body needs water. Which he is extremely limited and doesn't savor it very well. These issues create the problem of dehydration, and when mentally you think your going to die without water. You start to panic and lose control over yourself.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15752,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had obstacles in their way. There were Dirigibles that were one thousand feet long and they had an obstacle which was that they did not have much space in New York to land. Al Smith decided that was a good idea to let dirigibles anchor on top of his building for some hours for ""refueling or service, and to let passengers off and on."" But the dirigibles were docked by an electric winch that tied the ship to the mast. The dirigibles would swing and people would still get on and off safely. Architects and engineers of the Empire State Building worked/talked with experts and got equipment ""and mooring operations oat the U.S. Naval Air Station"". which the navy was the leader in the development of dirigibles in the U.S. and knew everything. The Navy offered its dirigibles to be used for testing the mast. Also the architect met with president of an airship transport company that offered a dirigibles service across the Pacific ocean. so the builders had many obstacles and attempts to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12400,5,"The mood the author created was a peaceful mood. She was bringing up good memories of her past life in her home. She was saying how she was eternally greatful for everything her parents gave her and taught her. Her parents tought her much about her heritage when she was young and kind, she lived in a very diverse area growing up there were Spanish, @CAPS1, and @CAPS2. There were times of racism and violence. The overall mood she created in this memoir was sad, happy and peaceful.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16144,6,"Based on the excerpt, the obstacles the builders of the empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were mostly due to the dangers of violent winds at such an altitude that may cause the aircraft to crash either into the building or down to the ground. For example two blimps attempted the docking and one of them could not come close to the building because of winds. The other was able to deliver a bundle of newspapers hoisted down by a rope. In conclusion, the main problem was the unstability of the aircraft being docked.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12808,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir was the mood that you don't have to have lots of money or a big house you just have to have your family to support each other.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18900,7,"A time I was patient was when my grandparent and I were driving to florida. It took about one and a half days to arrive. Then it took us six hours to get to @LOCATION2. My uncle @PERSON1, his wife and his four boy went also. They had rented a house for us to stay with them. On @DATE1 which was the after we got their we went to @LOCATION1 to see my grandpa’s sister @PERSON2. That took us about an hour and thirty minutes because we got lost. The last time we went to florida was to see my cousin @CAPS1 get @CAPS2. No, his little sister was getting @CAPS2 , I couldn’t wait to see them. The wedding was @CAPS3 I couldn’t understand it.So I waited for it to get over. After the wedding we went back to my aunt’s house. On @DATE2 we went to the flea market and it was huge. It took us an hour to look at the whole thing. I wanted to leave at stand fifty-five but I had to by something for my mom and dad. So again I waited patiently for us to leave. On @DATE3 we left to go home. We got here around @NUM1 in the @TIME1. I was so tired I almost fell asleep on the floor. So the whole ride their and back I waited patiently.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7348,3,The cyclist does most really like the setting of the road. It’s messing up big time,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6732,3,"The environment affected the cyclist violently in the story “do not exceed posted speed limit” It seems that all of the harsh conditions of cycling in California all worn down this kid who took some faulty directions from older people at one stop. The heat and lack of water supply made the boy dehydrated. It says in the essay “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips. Wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt, and the growing realization that I could drop from heat stroke on a georgus day in June simply because I listend to some gentlemen.” this explains on how simply exhausted he had become due to the miles of cycling, and the beating down sun and total lack of water due to absence of all towns. He came to the point of almost dying from heat exhausgen because of the faulty directions of the old people. Next time, he better make sure to keep extra water and stick to the map for directions.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12249,5,He is very greatfull to live in @LOCATION1 and even with all the racism he still found ways to have fun and enjoy life.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16173,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had hopes of making this building a dock for dirigibles but were faced with several obstacles. Starting in paragraph @NUM1 the aspiration of the mast on the Empire State Building made the plan seem well put together and it would soon become a reality. As the project progressed many details went looked over and when the dirigibles were ready to take action the plan was not something forageable. Stated in paragraph @NUM2, safety was a huge issue for the dirigibles made outside of the United States, because they contained the flamable gas hydrogen. This is a problem because of the fear of an accident occuring in a  highly populated area. Another obsticle dirigibles faced while trying to have a dock on the Empire State Building was nature itself as presented in paragraph @NUM3. The winds on the top of the building had violent currents that were constantly shifting. The problem with the air would have the dirigibles constantly spinning around the building by its back end. This made it unsafe for passengers to get on and of and also the cargo. The greatest obstacle for dirigibles trying to dock on the Empire State Building is the existing law against flying too low over urban areas, which is found in paragraph @NUM4. By a dirigible docking it would be directly breaking the law.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15391,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building had to overcome many obstacles in order for dirigibles to dock there. The builders had to figure out a way for the dirigibles to attach to the Empire State Building, in order for ""refueling or service, and to let passengers on and off"" (¶ 6). The builders also had to figure out a way to securly attach the mooring mast to the top of the building. According to the text, with a dirigible attached by only a single wire to the building, more stress would be added to the building's frame so they could not simply drop the mooring mast on top of the building Also because of this, the builders had to edit the foundation, so it would not collapes if a durigible was attached. Finally the builders needed to overcome the simple nature they did not the winds on top of the building were shifting constantly and they are in a densely populated city so if things went wrong, many people could be harmed",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7278,3,"In the short story “Do not exeed the speed limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting has great impact on the cyclist. In the begining of the story he describes the scenery as ""@CAPS1"". As he continued following the old mens out dated advice. It lead  him through more barren lands. When he came to the first ""town"" he described it as a ghost town. The second setting he arrived at was “One romshackle shed, several rusty pumps, and a corral that couldnt hold in the lamest muic” he continued moving to the next town, which was @NUM1 away, he came to what he thought was a Welch's Grape juice factory and bootling plant. This tools a toll on his confidence because he said ""I hung my head"" he moved on and had finally arrived at un abandoned buiding called ""@PERSON2 and wilbers’s fish camp. ""This is where he drunk water and became repleshed. The setting had a great effect on the cyclist. Because depending on the location, decided weather he would live or die in the hot deserts of California.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7053,3,"The hot, dry, desert setting affects the cyclist in many different ways, “I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June” (@NUM1). The cyclist is very hot. He was thirsty but, “A tarlike substance ooted out, followed by brakish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of zoo (@NUM2). The water was barely even water, so he didn’t have much to drink until the next town. “Flat road was replaced by short, rolling  hills” (@NUM3). Flat road is much easier to bike on then hills. He was thirstier and more tired after biking on hills “A sandblasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice in his mouth could still be seen” (@NUM4) on an old welchs grape fruit factory. This makes the cyclist envicus of the young boy. It also discourages him. In conclusion, the water being bad, the terrain change. the picture of the young boy, and the fact that the cyclist drinks a lot makes him tired, hot, envious, and generally exausted.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12951,5,"The mood that was created by the author was respect. For example it told the boy that you don't have to be a blood realative. For instance, the author states ""@CAPS1 up in this environment in stilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative"". Another reason, was that you should always help your family s during bad times. For example the book reads ""Countless extended family members came and went-and there was often someone staying with us temporilily until they were able to get back on their feet"". Thirdly, the boy will always be grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifice. For instance the auother quotes ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3747,2,"I believe that books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from the library shelves. If the materials propose things like racism, I would like those items taken off the shelves. Sometimes politics have a say in this. This is my say on this topic.     First off, people have an option of looking at those things on the shelves or on the internet. All of us have our own opinion about what is offensive and what is not offensive. Lots of people have families and kids and they don't want their kids to have to see that kind of stuff. The parents have the knowlegde of where most of the materials in libraries are. Also if the parents want to get books, why not go to a different library and get books. Or go to a store that sells books and is a little more censored. I only have one execption though, if the materials in the book, music, movie, magazine is racist in anyway, I would want that removed from the shelf.     Many people have the choice of wheather or not to go to a place that has offensive materials. Sometimes the local, state or even the federal government have a say in wheather or not this kind of material gets put on the shelves of libraries or on the internet. Who knows, maybe someone likes these kinds of books, music, magazines, movies etc., and they don't want them takin off the the shelves or off the internet. Even going on the computer and 'surfing the web' for stuff like that is a little bit crazy, but thats their choice. So thats my view on the censorship in libraries.",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12543,5,"The mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is by in paragraph @NUM1 it say's ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense The ""family"" had Nothing to do with being a blood relative."" and in paragraph @NUM2 it say's ""it was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast (albeit a frugal Cuban feast) always filled the air with Not just scent and music but life and love It was here where I Learned The real definition of ""family."" These are the mood created by The @CAPS1 in the memoir. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15295,6,"There were many obstacles that builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One of the obstacles were that architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. This is because as it says on paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" Another obstacles were making the mooring mast of the Empire State Building to fulfill its purpose. It was very hard to make the mooring mast fulfill its purpose because the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. In paragraph @NUM2 it states that, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" These are the reasons why the builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on top of the building.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
818,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 you think computers are bad for society. It came to my attention that many people are concerned that computers are not very good in my opinion I think computers are They help typeing skills. Computers are also very helpful with and crofing pictures, and they make it to find information. First of all, computer are very helpful with typing skills. Other people doesn't use computers takes six years to @CAPS3 younger people like young skills use very quickly. Actuly @PERCENT1 of teens can type in a minutes Who takes @NUM1 minutes. Computers have a great effect on many people with their typeing skills. Computers makes it so copier with so many pictures editing and many more, editing pictures from a expensive digital @CAPS2 it for free on your computer? A computers makes it and it through a lack of information to just computer and find it faster. The computer you can look for information make faster. For example you have to @CAPS2 a project on @CAPS4. Instead of going to the library and spending more on a book about @CAPS4 you can go on google.com and type in @CAPS4. So much information and so much faster. Get with the program computers are in. In conclusion, I think computers is a great invention. They make it easier to find information and typing skills. Also they make it so much easier to crop and edit photos, please take my suggestions sereusly.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18723,7,"A time I was patient was when I got my braces. I was so nervous, so it was hard to be patient.  I waited in the waiting  soon for about fifteen minutes, then the assistant called  me in. first  she told me what she going to do,  second she  took a x-ray of my teeth , third she put metal bonds with a really strong glue on the back of my teeth, fourth @PERSON1 put the brackets on with really strong glue. Then the assistant put the wire between the brackets and metal hands, finally, she asked me what color I wanted then she put them on and I was free to go. The whole process took two hours, and I had to sit in a dental chair for that long. I had a lot of patience it was hard but I did it. That is the time I had patience.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9074,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it lets the reader know that there is still a chance for Saeng; she is not giving up on herself or the test. While reading you will find that Saeng is comforted by memories of her homeland, and obviously this move to another country was hard on her. In the story the author writes, “It felt smooth and cool, with a hint of velvet toward the center- just as she had known it would feel.” The feeling and scent of the hibiscus flower comforted her. She then proceeded to purchase the plant, because she failed the test she needed something to lift her spirits back up once again. The author decided to end the story with Saeng stating that once “this hibiscus plant is budding,then l will take that test again” because as the reader should have learned by now, the hibiscus plant has been the only positive aspect in her life since the move. It is giving her motivation to once again take the driver’s test, and it is also letting the reader know that Saeng is not giving up.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9713,4,"The author concluded this because she thinks this is the right time to re take the test. She adds this because the snow is melted, the hibiscus is budding, and the geese return is a perfect time because everything is back and warm. She says ""when they come back...then I will take the test again.” means she will have all confidence to take the test. Saeng voweds to take it again and she will and she thinks this time she will pass. That's what theauthor concludes this to the story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3664,2,"To @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @MONTH1 @CAPS3:     I am writing to you today concerning cencorship in libraries.  I have had a select few instances throughout my life where I have read a book or magazine that to some @MONTH1 seem offensive and to others not at all.  However, I do have my own view point on the situation and I feel that @CAPS2 is my duty to inform you that I feel offensive books, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves.     Everyone has grown up and been taught different values and morals that are important to them. They stand for these values, but at the same time respect that other people have the right to believe differently than they do.  With the world the way @CAPS2 is now, violence can errupt from the simplest of things.  Putting books on public shelves for the public to read, can very easily cause outbursts and debates between people who have opposite opinions.  Offensive books and magazines put out for the public is asking for something bad to be a result.     My suggestion to you is to remove these offensive books.  This will create a safe and happy envioronment for all who visit public libraries,and other public places.  @CAPS2 will create fewer arguments between adults and set an example for younger children who are observing their parents behaviors.  Children follow in their parents' footsteps.  Observing bad behaviors from the parents due to offensive books does not teach the child how to act in a responsible way if they were put in this postion.  When our children grow up, we want them to beahve in a responsible way.  Offensive books not being put on shelves will hopefully create a healthful environment for appropriate behavior.     As a student, I want to grow up in a world that has people who are resepectful, happy, and responsible. I want people to get along with each other.  I feel that taking offensive books off shelves will help with this somewhat peaceful world I would like to live in.  Violence can be created through anything, and I feel that offensive books should be the last thing added to that.  Without offensive books for the public to read, will create a better environment for the people living today.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3494,2,"NO, I think books and ect. should be tooking down off selves if they are offensive! It's a free country and they have they will to freedom of speech. No one can think for nobody so everybody's going to have their opioin. As long as it's  apporiate for the enviroment and its surronds ,there should'nt be any  problems.                                                                                                   If we took down the books people said offened them we would'nt have any books left. Everyone has their own opioin about things and diffrent views. It's most likely that someones goin to get offened. In some cases it makes a person better at wat their doing to be offened. Some offensive things are part of @CAPS1 and shows how things progressed from back then to now. What's a child without it's @CAPS1?             Out of all the people who should be mad or think they should be offened is the @CAPS2 @CAPS3 ,but their not complaining about the books and etc. then no one should. You know jus as well as I know that most of the movies are about how we got whipped and sold back in slavery.Books about how only a couple of us made it. Magazines about how we sex and kill each other. Papper telling how are black communties are failing.                So in my opioin, no books should be tooken of the shelfs if there found offenisve. It was going on before we got here and when we leave it's still going to be going on. It's apart of @CAPS1 and there's no better way to find out about things if you don't see it yourself. People always saying kids should read more. What's to read if you take all the books down thats offensive?",2,3,,2,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12604,5,"I think the mood created by the author was to show everyone that Narciso is grateful to live where he does. He loves his home, his parents everyone gets along. even know he's an imarant he wants to succedy and get along with everyone.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1491,1,"Dear @CAPS1 and readers @ORGANIZATION1 the @ORGANIZATION3 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, @CAPS4 a modern world sent back in time to the @NUM1 quickly drive your car to get groceries but must ride damage for hours to simply buy some milk. Entertainment is dull, and it is hard to receive books for learning. Ending the usage @ORGANIZATION1 such @ORGANIZATION1 technology as computers would surely be the first step to sending us back to such a barbaric time! Computers present job opportunities, educational opportunities, and a way to communicate with others! Furge you to continue using computers, for without computers our modern civiliz would be lost! Firstly, it is important to note, during our economic crisis, that the development and manufacturing @ORGANIZATION1 computers creates thousands @ORGANIZATION1 jobs! In fact, each year @NUM2 @ORGANIZATION3 jobs are created in the @CAPS5.S alone in accordance with the development @ORGANIZATION1 computers! @CAPS14 the customers who buy these products were to stop losing them, these jobs would be lost and any progress we've made in the economic crisis would surely fall! Do you, the fair people @ORGANIZATION1 our nation, wish to be responsible for such a catastrophe! Recently, the @ORGANIZATION3 stated, in the cover page article, that, ""without the development @ORGANIZATION1 computers in technology in @DATE2, @DATE3 more people would be without jobs in the @LOCATION4A! "" @CAPS6, undoubtedly many educational opportunities woulf be lost for your childred @CAPS14 you were to stop using computers! Computers present the easiet way to research and gather information. ""@CAPS7 @PERSON1, top nothe educational provider in the history @ORGANIZATION1. A group @ORGANIZATION1 young brilliant teachhers headed by @PERSON3 have implemented a program at the @ORGANIZATION1 using computers. This program lets students view the interesting way @ORGANIZATION1 world cultures in videos! For your keen visual children, this is a much better way @ORGANIZATION1 learning than using books! In fact, @PERSON2, superintendent @CAPS14 schools in @LOCATION1, recently stated in this newpaper, the @ORGANIZATION3 @CAPS2  @CAPS3, that he planed to implement the program into all @LOCATION1 schools during the @NUM3 year! He needs the town""s your support to have this idea come through he recently sent out fliers to local citizens bearing the impressionable heading, ""@CAPS10. Goy @PERSON2 @CAPS11 youto expand learning by using computers!"" @CAPS12, communication is a vital part @ORGANIZATION1 using computers. In fact, the internet, which can only be acessed through a computer, offers the fastest way @ORGANIZATION1 communication other than telephones! ""@CAPS13, @CAPS7 computer expert for @ORGANIZATION2, ""computers offer ever more than the telephones! Not only can one converse through the internet, they can also webchat, exchange files and important data, and market and sell items to customers! ""@CAPS14 you stop using computers, you deny yourself this magnificent way @ORGANIZATION1 communicating! My sister lives in @LOCATION3, and as a result I barely get to see her or even talk to her. Then, when my mon bought me a laptop, we were able to speak to each other again. Sge helps ne through all @ORGANIZATION1 mt personal problems, and without this way @ORGANIZATION1 talking with her worl be lost. Now, @CAPS4 a modern, civilized world. You, the parents, are heading to work while your child goes to @ORGANIZATION1 and enters into the wonderful learning center @ORGANIZATION1 computers. In @LOCATION2, your favorite sister's currently writing you an email. This fantasy is possible @CAPS14 you continue to use computers! They presnt jobs, educational opportunities and a way @ORGANIZATION1 communication! You do not have to use them all the tim, still enjoy nature and fun with friends dear readers, but do not forget computers! Computer usage will keep you in the @DATE1!",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13185,5,"Home is where the heart is. In this case, his ""Family"" is his heart, and his house is his home. He's cubain but never been to cuba to see his real family.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10527,4,The author uses this as an ending paragraph in the story because the next year at the same time she will take the test of life over again.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15300,6,"Throughout the designing and construction stages of the Empire State building's mooring mast, builders and engineers confronted many issues including, the distribution of building stress, fire hazards and the constant shifting caused by winds. During the planning stages of engineers, they confronted an issue, how to alliviate stress on the Empire State Building's frame. According to engineers making the ""thousand foot dirigible moored at at the top of the building held by a single cable tether would add stress to the building's frame..."" @CAPS1, the building would require ""over sixty thousand dollars"" in redesigning and modifying the current building's foundation and framework. Secondly, engineers and builders never considered the fire hazards, which they were confronted with after the completion of the mooring mast. The American dirigibles were filled with hydrogen rather than helium, making that gaseous-filled transportation highly flammable."" An example of this safety violation occurred with the burning of a dirigible in Lakehurst, New Jersey, causing builders to reflect on the possible severity of this possible accident in the heavily populated area of New York. Thirdly, New York had ""violent air currents"" which could cause the rear of the dirigibles to swivel and shift. The only possible solution was to way down the back with lead blocks, but this would be ""neither practical nor safe."" Engineers and builders of the Empire State Building were confronted with many problems and concerns sometimes only addressed by irrational solutions.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10584,4,"Saeng concluded the story with that paragraph because it shows what she has just been through and feels she could go through it again. If she fails the driving test again, then she use the plants to overcome her problems. She @MONTH1 actually pass the test this time. The unique plants show that she is stronger than she thinks and believes now that she feels comfortable with the plants that bring back memories of her childhood.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12718,5,The author creates a @CAPS1 but happy mood and shows @CAPS1 parts and happy parts in the @CAPS2 about a boy whos parents immigrated. his house was what he grew up in and his parents put a Cuban twist to it.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12902,5,He was happy to be educated like he is and he was happy to be Cuban and even though his parents didn't have much he was still proud of his family because is not where you live or in what conditions is. If you are from an honest family and if they're with you in the hard moments.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15522,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacle while building it, some of those obstacles being saftey, the technology they had, and, the planning that they put into building the mooring mast. There problems with the safety of the mooring mast was that, dirigibles that were from countries other than the @LOCATION1 use hydrogen instead of helium. Hidrogen is very flammable so the risk of a fire in the dirigible was very great. Also another problem the builders faced with safety was that the winds on top of the building would be much too great to succesfully land a dirigible. The problems that the builders faced with technology was that they didn't have the technology to succesfully land a @DATE1 ft dirigible at the top of a tower using a single cable because it would add stress to the buildings frame, and the stress from the wind pressure would be hazardous to the buildings frame. The obstacles that the builders faced with the planning of the mooring mast was that they didn't plan well enough and that they should have seen that the mast would be a failure from the start.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18653,7,"One hot @DATE1 day my family and I went to @ORGANIZATION1. There was a new ride open called shoot the rapids. It was a brown tall water ride with a tunnel and two hills. As we walked over to see how long the wait was it said @NUM1 hour wait. We all really wanted to go on it so we decided to wait. When we got in the line it was about @NUM2 outside, we were all sweating. And to make things worse there was this annoying little boy talking to me about some food or something. It was really annoying. We were about half way threw the line when my nerves kicked in I was really scared but I knew I had to be brave and suck it up. About @NUM3. Later we were @NUM4 people away from the ride. My heart was pounding, my knees were shaking. I thought I was going to die. Then all of a sudden it broke down. We had to wait another @NUM5. As time past we finally got on the water ride. I regret it. I screamed and cried but I’m glad.  I didn’t chicken out. That was a time I had patience and regret it.",12,11,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6863,3,"How the features of the setting affects the cyclist is the condition of the roads, rolling hill, and the?? heat. The conditions of the road in the settings affect the cyclist because the roads are rough. An example firm the texted is “ I noticed that terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short ralling hills. These condition make is hard for the cycled it gives him a challenge.  The rolling hills challange him a regret to stay on the road it is easly tricky and challenges so was The heat & sun was also played an affection on the cyclist. An Examples from the @CAPS1 is.” I chuckled, checked my water supply and moved on. The sun was beginning to heat doing but I barely not ???. the sun was not starting to get him  ?? sharply ??  It will start to get ????? when is ?? is high deserts. I conclude that these features in the setting affected the cyclist in many ways but he keep pushing himself to more on.  ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15683,6,"In the article 'The Mooring Mast' by @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS1 describes of several problems the builders of the Empire State Building faced in trying to allow dirigibles dock there.For example, most blimps (dirigibles) out side of the United states used hydrogen, rather than helium. Since hydrogen is highly flammable, and since downtown New York is so populated, if anything were to go wrong it could impact the people of New York, resulting in injuries as well as deaths.Another reason is an existing law against flying airships too low over urban areas. This law making it illegal for ship to even approach the area. Overall, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles that could have been noticed before building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11916,5,"In the story ""Narciso Rodriguez"", the mood in the story is willing, greatful, and hopeful. ""The faith that this struggle would lead them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times"" that quote represents that the family was willing to go through not having a good job like in cuba and segragtion to make a better life for their kids. ""My parents always kept there door open for the people we considered family"" this quote shows the family was was greatful to have a home and still let the people they loved live there with them. ""My mother and Father came to this country with such courage, with out knowlage of the language and culture. That quote showed that the family was hopeful enough that even without knowing about the country they still believed it would bring a better life. In the story ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the family was willing to do anything for a better life.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17993,7,"My brothers checkup was today, why did I come? All I did was sit patiently for @NUM1, there was nothing I could do @CAPS1 I kept my cool. Waiting there in a dark room was hard, I picked up a near car magazine and started flipping through it, @CAPS1 the interesting thing was a article about a new @CAPS2 coming out. I read that in @NUM2 I went to the bathroom, and really soon was back in the wasteland of darkness. I whipped out my phone and texted a couple people. Five minutes passed and answer no I close my eyes and layed my head back so I waited and waited. Right when I was about bash my head on a brick wall my brother enters the room and says “ That’s it “.And then I got a text by two people, it would have been better while I was board out of my mind!",9,8,,17,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15937,6,"Based on the excerpt, ""The Mooring Mast"" by @ORGANIZATION3 the builders of the Empire State Building faced several obstacles in an attempt to allow dirigibles, or blimps, to dock there. One reason that it was difficult to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State building was safety issues. According to Marcia Amidon Lüsted, ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable."" With New York City and its dense population that is a risk that cannot be taken. Another obstacle faced by the architects of the Empire State Building was nature itself. The start of paragraph @NUM1 states, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" With high winds the dirigible, even tethered to the mast, would swivel around the mooring mast. Another difficulty in docking the dirigibles was according to the excerpt in paragraph @NUM2, ""an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" Due to this law it would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. A final obstacle the builders faced was the advancement with airplanes and that made it difficult for dirigibles to be the prime source of aeronautical transportation. Even though the builders spent a lot of time and effort in making the Empire State Building a national @CAPS1, which it is, they neglected many potential problems with the mooring mast which led to it never accomplish its full potential.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18390,7,"In this story I am wating a hut the time when the video game @CAPS1 @CAPS2 was coming at for @CAPS3 @NUM1. The game will be the last game for the comcay bunsie. I’ve already have it and he caming. I pretty good, but I don’t understand why your mom character stays on a plant called @CAPS2 and is the only comsnap there, and of the entire gone character gets bum-rushed by coughly @NUM2 aliens with swords and they chep up your character it to bue size pieces with there little toy plastic swords. And the first time I went to buy the ones at @CAPS5 @CAPS6 at @NUM3 there parking lot was filled with probally all @NUM4 year olds who live in their mom’s basement. So we waited and got it about @NUM5 week after its me let cetense. We bought it then we get morecor and it wasn’t the fight gave it was some week @PERSON1 game so catemed it in like two minutes so that is no stay on being patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
687,1,"Computers are a good benefit to society they you to talk to people give different for you the the latest updates. First they allow you to chat with friends they allow you to message anytime you want. You can talk to people the faraway you lose. For example your friend live the other side of the globe you an your computer and message so you can still talk to them all the time. Also when your bored it will give you something to do. You could see if anyone wants to make plans to hangout. And if you just want to stay home all day you can still interact with people. Secondly it gives you new ideas on things. It shares oppions. Maybe someone bought same they and it did not work you could see the comments and review. Would you want to spend you money on some thing that did network? I woudn't. You can also see majority of people like what they got. Also they make you think of something you would not think about before say you had are mark about how this horrible maybe if you read the page it online it shows what you did wrong what you did not do. It gives you the to try something you @MONTH1 enjoy what you get. Lastly it gives you the latest updates it can share if the sched is closed, delayed, or open. You wouldn't have to wait for the news to show it. It can tell you about crimes that are happening. Also it tells you about your town. Who dont want to know whats going on your own? It tells you new things that are in your town or what their going to make or it tells you what it is getting rid of. Computers are they lot us chat with friends and family. It gives us thoughts we @MONTH1 have never thought about before and they tell us the newest updates.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9884,4,"The author leaves the story with those words, because it shows the reader a large metaphor in the story, although unfinished, it is self-explantory that the “metaphor” compares Saeng and her test to the perenial nature of the winter hibiscus. They both have something in common, which is that they both come back, Saeng comes back to complete her test, while the winter hibiscus comes back, buds, and lives again. I can relate to this, because I remember I entered in a triathalon, and my goal was to place first, I place @NUM1 overall, then next year came, and I trained until the triathalon came again, and I placed @NUM2, so like the winter hibiscus, I came back and completed my goal.    ",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10381,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows that the narrator is ready. The narrator tried the test once and failed. She bought herself a flower to cheer herself up. Her mother talked to her and then she felt better. She felt determined to pass the driving test just like the flower was determined to survive.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18459,7,"My mom woke me up early in the morning and said I need to get up and get ready fast. I asked what was the matter and she said were going to potter park zoo. I @CAPS5’t know why mabe just a sudden idea. I got all dressed and we hit the road. I wasn’t felling well that morning. We got subway breakfast. I didn’t eat my sandwitch tho cause my stumic hurt to bad. It seemed like @NUM1 hours befor we finily got there. I was felling better now. We paid a got a map and stanted  looking at all the awsome animals. I got to see @NUM1 giant wolfs, snakes, monkeys, lions, pekos, camels, and a @CAPS1 of other animals. It was so fun! We got to this bind cage that you can go in the birds are just flying around lose! There was a little boy in there and a bind landed right on the top of his head! @CAPS6 my mom’s phone rang. It was my brother. He said home because he didn’t wanna get up. I could barlley hear my mom over the birds. She walked out and stood outside I followed her she was saying “@CAPS2 @CAPS3, because I said so you @CAPS5’t need to go any where.” @CAPS4 thing I know she was hanging up. We walked toward the fish building when her phone rang. “@CAPS5’t ever hang up on me agian! @CAPS3, I @CAPS5’t need to fight with you! Its going to storm I want you home!” @CAPS6 it starts poring rain and my moms still on the phone. I was getting very wet and board I really wanted to see the fish. About @NUM3 minutes later my mom hung up her phone. We walk in soken wet! My mom smiled at me and said “@CAPS7 for being so patient!”",10,8,,18,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8987,4,The author choose to end the story with that paragraph for emotional meanings. The last paragraph is saying she will re-take the test when the hibiscus is blooming in the spring. She hopes that the blooming hibiscus will give her strength to pass the test. The hibiscus reminds her of her homeland and gives her comfort. Saeng hopes the sight of the blooming hibiscus will remind her of her home and give her strength to pass the test.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7095,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist. One way is that the “rolling hills” @MONTH1 let the rider get more tired. Another way is that of water from severe heat. And finally the path you take along the way and how many stops you make along the way. The heat, lack of water, rolling hills, and the advice you get can result badly by affecting the outcome. A rider should make a plan and use determination to get to where they need to go.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12110,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"", the author created a happy tone throughout the whole story. Narcisco talked about how when he moved to @LOCATION1 he moved into a three-bedroom apartment. He brought with him the love of cooking. ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love for cooking that is still with me today. Narciso was very grateful that his parents came to @LOCATION1 to help him make his home seem more like a traditional Cuban home. ""It was a simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country and where I celebrated my first birthdays. It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love. It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family"", and for that I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
512,1,Dear People Computers are not a really good thing because @CAPS1 you think about it you never want to get off allways chating or social networking you can allways find something to do but you are wasting your time on the computer you can do anything you want but I think to much is a waste of time. @CAPS1 you have kids you would not spend time with them you can help your kids with there homework eat with them watch t.v spend time relax but some people like laydys with kids go online and never get off you have to have time with your kids so they dont have bad habbits so they dont stay out to late. You have to have time for your self clean the house cook food for your husband go out shopping take your kids out to the mall just enjoy your life computer gives nothing to us just gets us layzy. @CAPS1 you work you have to think about your work maybe hang out with your friends dont be on the computer for @NUM1 you can do other stuff call your friends over or go shoping do cleaning in your house computer does not give us anything its just waste of time @CAPS1 you social network.... There is good thing about computers you can find anything you need look at stuff talk to family from far away. @CAPS1 you use it in good ways its a good thing but @CAPS1 you never log off faccebook or other stuff its not good to stay on. You can just go to the beach or go to the gym you have lots of stuff to do other then going online and sitting for hours. Just try not to go online and just go out and go somewhere insted...,4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13102,5,The mood created by the author was a happy and exciting mood. This is because the family was so excited about moving to a new place with better oppertunities and educational purposes. It also changed a regular house into a special home for them because they had people over and over and over which finally became family. The neighbors also helped create the mood by not creating any negative action or violence in the author put the family's location in a non-american neighborhood.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10014,4,The arhuror concludes this story with this paragraph to show people that the story or people in the story have a thing for nature or like writing about nature like whats in nature the change or maybe this story is about nature at its best.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4335,2,"Did you know that libraries contain books, movies, music, magazines, etc.? Yes ! They have it all, if you ever need something for research or a project just go there. But if there is something that you do not like, just keep going.           I do not think that the books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. I think that if it is something that offends you then you should just keep going. That 'something' that might offend you, could be helpful to others.          So, now you know if you ever see something that you don't like in the library just walk away. It could be helpful to you and others. If things offend you, how would the next person learn? They won't. Don't only think about your self, think about others in the situation also.",2,3,,2,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
880,1,"Dear, Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 @PERCENT2 of the people would agree that computers are useful and by having them they help ability to learn about faw away place. They also, allow people to talk to other people online. Lastly, computers are importat @CAPS2 people that work with them. there are many reasons why I believe that computers benefit our society. Do you know that computers give people the ability to learn about faw away places. Sometimes people, dont know when they want to leave the country. With a computer you can organize it all. Somoe people like my family, like to go visit their familys in other places, @CAPS2 example, once my mom told me we were going on a trip to @LOCATION1 to go visit our family she told me she already got the tickets on the computer. I was very happy when we went and I saw how beautiful @LOCATION1 is. Some people like to see new and beautiful places. Such as , @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2 and even @LOCATION4. Let me tell you about how computers allow people to talk to other people online. Most people have myspace and that allows kids my age to keep in touch. Also, facebook that you can and people that you probly havent seen in a long time. @CAPS2 exsample, one time I was looking aroung facebook and found my old bestfriend @PERSON1. I was so happy cause when she moved I thought i would never talk to her again. I am @PERCENT1 positive that everyone in this world has a yahoo you could find people really quikck and talk to them. Would you belive that there is so many jobs and responsibilities that require you to have a computer. Such as scientists they all have to have computers or else they wouldnt be able to invient all the great things they make. Also, secretaries they have asign dates @CAPS2 their bosses. @CAPS2 exsample, a secretary @CAPS2 doctor has to be able to give and to change appointments. Lastly, students that go to school and most importantly collage with no computers, they wont be able to do their homework. Most people would agree that computers have a positive affect on people. @CAPS2 the reasons that they give the ability to learn about faw away places, allow people to talk to other people online. Computers are very important to people who work with them.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6941,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist because he had limited water, he had to peddle harder to get up over the hills and he was getting dehydrated from the heat. For example, he had limited water because he had taken the directions from the old men and probably didn’t bring as much as he would have if he would have taken a longer way. Furthermore, to get up the rolling hills he had to peddle faster and harder. That affected him because he would have been more exhausted from peddling. Moreover, it was a June day and in June the days are hot with the lack of a good amount of water the cyclist would have started to get dehydrated. This is how the setting affected the cyclist",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18698,7,"There haven’t been many times were I was patient but I’m going to tell you about when I was patient. One time when I was patient was when I was riding home on the bus. My bus driver @PERSON1 mede me sit in the back because she said I talked too much and that I wasn’t aloud to talk the whole ride home. It was hard at first but then I did my homework. Which gave me something to do. That was one time I was patient but not the only time. Another time when I was patient was standing in line for a rollercoaster at cedar paint. The beginning of the line said that it was a @NUM1 hour wait but we didn’t care because it was my friend’s and my favorite ride, it wasn’t so bad because it’s all worth it when you ride the ride. Those were times I were patient but I’ve had to wait patiently even longer than that!",6,7,,13,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9567,4,"The author ended the story with that specific quote because it shows the grasp in understanding the beauty & marvels of nature. Saeng spent a lot of money to buy a distinct flower called dok faeng-nol. Saeng was taking a driver's test a liscence but was failing it, and during her test she found that plant. Ashamed that she failed the test, she still showed her mother the flower she found, which was not like the one at home. Her mother is pleased with the flowers and understands that Saeng failed her test. Her mother said about the flower, “Its flowers aren’t as pretty, but it’s strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus. That what matters that was a figurative speech that there's hope for Saeng to pass her test again when she her learned more refined and is ready to try again. And with the geese flying away for the winter and coming back in the spring signifies a fresh new start at success.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10475,4,"In the story , “Winter Hibiscus”, Saeng is new to @LOCATION1. She is missing home when she sees a hibiscus in a flower shop. After she takes the flower home and plants it in her backyard, she decides the next time she’ll take the drivers test is when the Hibiscus is budding in the spring. The author concludes the story this way because it relates Saeng to the flower. Saeng feels out of place in @LOCATION1 because the hibiscus is a connection to her old home in Vietnam, the ending symbolizes that if the flower can make it through the cold winter, she can too. She will take her drivers test as a sign of surviving and overcoming obstacles. In this story it has a overall theme that everything will get better with time. Saeng will adapt to the differences of @LOCATION1, the hibiscus will bloom; and Saeng will pass her drivers test.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7004,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist in many ways. First, the heat made the cyclist overheated. For instance, the weather was sunny in June. Also, the hills made the cyclist very tired. For example, the cyclist was losing energy and had to keep pushing. Lastly, the setting had no places that could have helped the cyclist. For instance, the cyclist had trouble finding a place with water to drink. In conclusion, the setting affected the biker in a very negative way.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8881,4,"the author concludes the story this way because Saeng failed the test, the hibiscus comforts her, and she feels she is similar to the geese. For example, Saeng says “I-I failed the test.” She has admitted to failing the test and is upset about it and wants to “take that test again."" @CAPS1, Saeng says,"" And that rich sweet scent- that was familiar, too, “while describing the hibiscus. The familiarity of the plant comforts her and will allow her to build up the courage to “take the test again.” Finally, at one point Saeng thinks to herself, ""the quiet repetition of season opon season, almost familiar to her now. Like the geese.” Saeng feels similar to the geese in this way and this allows her to decide to take the test “ when the snow melts and the geese return.” The author concludes the story strongly, describing how Saeng failed the test, how the hibiscus comforts her and she feels similar to the geese.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19450,7,I was patient when I was at the @CAPS1.R whe I broke my finger A week ago almost.,4,0,,4,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,0.0,0.0,0.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14974,6,"There are a few obstacles the builders faced when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. One was the violently changing wind currents at the height the docking to place. This would move the blimp and possibly send it into another building, puncturing the side of the balloon. Dirigible after dirigible being docked would put a lot of stress on the building itself. It would disrupt the frame and possibly effect the building as a whole. Also most dirigibles outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flamable as seen in the Hindenburg disaster. Due to all these reasons the mooring mast never saw a docked blimp.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
151,1,"Dear local newspaper I don’t agree with the people who say people spend to much time on their computers. Because people can lean mostly anything they want all of a computer also there are lots of resomes why people should use advances technology they can teach kids how to find out answers to there homework the fastway instead of reading a book or taken a class and still get the full understeading. The people that say others spend's to much time on there computers are also right about that but they still can interact with friends and family they can play games, speak to each other, even learn new things together, all through a computer. One thing they were right about was to go out and enjoy the nature you cant do that on a computer but you can help the nature on a computer like try to put up a blog. Something that people make so others can see and spred the word and on that blog it can stay stop cuting down trees for stores or stop killing animales for there far or anythin you wont to write. So the people that do read this you should agree with me because you can do lots of things on a computer and learn lot more then you ever thought you could. So go out and find you a computer and find somethine you need to do or learn or just to have some fun.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20895,8," Just @CAPS1 walking through @ORGANIZATION2 in a banana costume with one of your best friends. We were trying to find the best costumes for a @CAPS2 party. When having so much fun by taking many pictures and videos we lost track of time. I can't even remember which one of us was laughing the hardest. @CAPS3 is just one example of the crazy things my friend @PERSON1 and I have done together. One thing is for certain, whenever we are together we are always laughing. Laughter reduces stress for both @PERSON1 and I. We were team members for the past six years. Both of us competed as gymnasts at @ORGANIZATION1. We worked out at the gym @DATE1 for four hours each day. That gave us no time to hang out with friends and just enough time to do homework. At @ORGANIZATION1, @PERSON1 and I needed to be focused so we wouldn't get hurt. @CAPS3 meant off the floor we needed laughter to reduce stress, as well as fear. In order to do that we would hang out a lot on the weekends and in the @DATE2 sun.  Our friendship was strong because of all the laughing and fun times together. When either of us became stressed we would make the other cheer up by remembering the times when we laughed our heads off. Even when we are not together we often think of the memories we have shared together. As mentioned earlier laughter also helps to reduce fear. It helps because if you were not having fun and laughing you would think about all of the bad things at could happen to you; then would you do have laughter involved it makes you want to do whatever it would be with your friend.  The laughter @PERSON1 and I shared always attached others to us. Whenever we were together others always wanted to join is because we were having such a great time together. For example, @DATE2 we were at @LOCATION1's house and we were playing outside on a warm, sunny day. We were laughing and all of a sudden one of her neighbors shows up. After one came, more and more kids and her friends came, after awhile it seemed like we had the whole neighborhood there with us. When we had a big group of people, @PERSON1 and I would choose a different game that would be better for a lot of people. It usually was a hide and go seek tagging game. Even though it wasn't just the two of us we were always laughing because we would trick everyone that was playing. It created a good and positive bond for the two of us even though there were more people. ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people."" @CAPS3 is how @PERSON1 and I became such amazing friends today. Without laughter, I do not think we would have been as close of friends if we didn't have laughter in our friendship. Our laughter brings us closer together every single time we see each other. Laughter really connects the bond between friends and its helps both of you get through hard times.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12928,5,"In the memoir the mood created by the author I think was more of a serious, informative, and uplifting mood. The reason for why I think this is that the way his lifestyle is described as a happy and enjoyable life of also being able to talk about some serious topics like his culture and the diversity of the cultures of the poeple that live on the street. Also by how he feels so confortable with all the people that are in his apartment building and all the people that come to his house for dinner to call them family.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20814,8," Laughter is a mystery. Happens @CAPS2 ever it pleases. It puts smiles on faces. Laughter just happens in many ways it can. Although, mine just happened to end up in a crazy situation with a huge mess to follow it. Things got extream, unforgettable. Things you could never forget.  Around two months ago, in the cold @DATE1. It was my @NUM1 birthday. I threw a little party for myself at my house. Though, I was in for a little treat. @CAPS2 everyone arrived they all had a smirk on their faces. Nobody would tell me whats going on. I started to become distraught about it all. Until my buddie @PERSON3 and my boyfriend @PERSON1 walked into the kitchen with a @NUM1 pound bucket full of spaghetti, with a ten pound gallon can of tomato sauce. Next thing I knew my mouth was agape. I couldn't believe my eyes, not understanding why so much of it. Also, why did they have it. My mother walked out and exclaimed ""@CAPS1 up the cars, and let's go!"" @CAPS2 we approached the @ORGANIZATION1, I had a funny feeling in the pit of my gut. I looked around and noticed my sister in law was holding a video camera. Right then and there I knew something was going to happen. Something big, extraordinary, out of the extream and I was right. Spaghetti was flying everywhere, getting in peoples hair, faces. Clothes were getting stained and messy. Not to mention it was cold,wet and rainy outside. The fog made it hard to see who u were hitting and who was throwing it at you. By the end of the noodle war, I looked the worse. Even now the shoes i was wearing are stained. @CAPS2 we got back to my house we had to wash down with the hose. I swore i was going to get sick from the cold water running down my face. I could feel noodles falling outta my hair and clothing, the sauce steaming down my face. Laughing here and laughing there. Everyone was laughing at others for how badly they were covered with noodles and sauce. Eventually, we all got hungry. We decided on nachos. So, my mom poured two family size nacho chips on the table followed by two ten gallon cans of nacho cheese with jalapenos, olvis. You @MONTH1 think the noodle and sauce was messy, well that's where I went wrong. My friend @CAPS3 dropped nachos on my couch. @PERSON3 threw nacho cheese at @LOCATION1, she threw chips at @ORGANIZATION2. @PERSON3 tossed cheese at me and ended up on my dog. Let's just say my living room was a cheese fest. I couldn't believe that nacho cheese got stuck in my dogs fer and in all the girls hair. Chip crumbs were in the couch and cheese was on the floor and @CAPS4 tree. So @PERSON3 finally said""@CAPS5 more nachos!""  @CAPS6 on it was cake time. Ginger thought that there wasn't going to be another mess. Well once again she was wrong. They all started singing the happy birthday song, cameras were flashing, my mother in the background crying. She cries on our birthdays because she says its just a year closer to her kids moving out. I figured she would be use to it knowing that she already had two kids move out. All of a sudden there was frosting on my face! I rubbed the frosting off and smeared it on @PERSON1 face. Though he just rubbed it back onto mine. My mom grabbed a plate and threw it at @LOCATION2, she tossed it at @CAPS3 then @ORGANIZATION2 and @PERSON3 then @PERSON2. Chocolate frosting was everywhere along with nacho cheese. Soon after that we played video games. Of course me being me I played @CAPS8 @CAPS9 @NUM3 live on @CAPS10 @CAPS11. I got irritated with someone on the game and ended up throwing the controller at my television and broke it. Mother wasn't to pleased with me after that. Oh well, we still got to watch movies in the other room. Eventually people started leaving. Saying our goodbyes, ill see you @CAPS6, peace out dude. We said it all. I looked back in the living room and say nothing but huge mess of chips, nacho cheese, and cake. Not to mention my broken t.v. I got stuck cleaning the mess for over three hours. Though, we were laughing the entire time it happened. Having the greatest time ever with each other. If I could I would go back and do it all over again just for the fun and laughs. Laughter is everywhere. You @MONTH1 not see it right away. Though you will @CAPS2 you started laughing your brains out. Laughing puts everyone in good moods and smiles on there faces. It @MONTH1 also make a mess and put things in a crazy situation. You can't deny after them crazy situations that you would go back and do it again. Laughter is the greatest thing in this world we call @LOCATION3.",17,15,,32,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7227,3,There are many ways that a cyclist will be affected and one of these are the setting. The setting affects them because if it is short smooth setting the ride will be easy. But if it is long bumpy rough roads it will be harder to control the bike which means that the cyclist’s job will be harden this is how a cyclist is affected by his or her settings.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20869,8,"                                        A day with the family  One day my cousin, her husband, my mom, my dad and i had gone out to eat at @ORGANIZATION2 for breakfast. They had all grown up together, and telling stories about the old days made them all want to hangout more often. They always had @CAPS2 much fun together. I grew up with my cousins around a lot of the time. We would always hangout. We started talking about all the crazy times we have had, and it was nice to hear abut the old days. We were just laughing up a storm. All a sudden out of @CAPS1 where my cousin @PERSON1 farts. All of us start busting up laughing. @PERSON1 continues to fart while she is uncontrollably laughing. @CAPS2 many people were looking at us in the restaurant. Here was a group of people all laughing, and one of them cannot stop farting. The laughing got louder as well as the farting. my mother could not take it anymore. She took one of the salt shakers and started pounding it on the table. She wanted to drowned out the sound of @LOCATION1's farts. @PERSON1 was beat red. We were all laughing @CAPS2 hard we started crying. We were almost to the point were we were going to pee ourselves. @PERSON1 could not hold it any longer. She finally stopped farting, but now she had to pee @CAPS2 bad she could not even walk. When she got up to go to the bathroom she had to walked there cross legged, and very slowing. All the way there she was still laughing, and we were also laughing. We had fun watching her have to stop every @CAPS2 often @CAPS2 she would not pee on herself. One time that she had stop it was right on these two guys chairs. She just stood there laughing cross legged over these two guys trying her best not to pee. The guys did not really do anything they just sat there waiting for her to go away. We could tell they were very uncomfortable though. I told my mom ""I would be uncomfortable to if i had some random girl bent over me laughing, and trying not to pee. I'm surprised they did not move. i would have"".  Finally @PERSON1 got to the bathroom. Those two guys had left, and when she came out she was glad to see them gone. When we saw her we could not help but laugh. She laughed with us @CAPS2 we did not feel bad about laughing. People were still looking at us, and @PERSON1 was still blushing. She wanted to go @CAPS2 we left and talked about it the whole way home. They were coming over to our house to play bored games. When we got home my brother joined us in a game of gestures. this game is kinda like sherades. We got into teams. I was on @ORGANIZATION1 and my brothers team. My brother went first. He started melting to the ground. I shout out ""wicked witch of the west""! He frowns at me and says, ""@CAPS1, watch before you shout things out."" @CAPS2 i sat there and watched. He did his whole melting thing again,but when he got to the floor he started rolling and jerking around. I was @CAPS2 confused. My cousins shouts out ""poop""! My brother yells ""@CAPS3, why would anyone want to be poop""! We all start laughing,and he just tells us what he is. He was a waterfall.  It was my turn to go, and i got horse. I did not want to be a horse. I did not even know how to be a horse without making sound. I went up there and started hoping around like and idiot. I felt @CAPS2 dumb. My team mates made me feel even worse because they could not guess what i was for the life of them. The buzzer rang and we lost the game by two points. My brother hates to lose. He got really mad, and ran up the stairs. On his way up there he trips on his face, and falls down the stairs. We all started laughing, and that made my brother even more mad. He went up the stairs again without falling this time, and stayed in his room the rest of the @TIME1.  The rest of us stayed downstairs, and played more games. It was a really fun day. I got to hangout with the family, and get a great laugh. hanging out with the family is something everyone should love. It is one of those things that just make you feel good. ",20,16,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12694,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was loving and caringness. Repeatedly throughout the memoir, the speaker Narciso Rodriguez which show what his family did after migrating from their native country, Cuba to their love. As said his parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people they considered family, knowing that they would do the same for them. They cared for their children's future, by leaving their families, friends, and careers in the country they loved. All though ""they struggled both personally and financially, braving the harsh northern winters while yearning for their native tropics and facing cultural hardships."" they had to do what they thought was best for their children. Their simple house was the best place for them to be together as a family. ""The warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love"". This memoir made me connect this family to mines how similar it is. Without love it isn't a family, thats why at the end of the word ""family"" the i, l, y stand for ""i love you.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12279,5,the mood of this is gratful becaause @CAPS1 is gratful of what her parents did to help her have a better life in america. @CAPS1 was gratful of how her parents left their friend and career just so @CAPS1 can have a better life. @CAPS1 is gratful they gave up alot for her,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18703,7,‘’@CAPS1’’ my name is @CAPS2 ?? and this is a story about the time I was patient. Once when I was eight years old my mom said that she would take me to the fair that day. so after lunch we went to the rain I wanted to ride the biggest ride there so we had to wait in line for it ?? line was very long so I had to be patient to get on the ride. I did not want to wait in line so half of the time in line I was complaining but ??the line was not that long and l have to be patient. I am glad I was patient because the ride was?? Of fun. That day l walked that was good to be patient. I told my ?? I will never be unpatient again. That was the story?? The time l had to be patient at their??,6,8,,14,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4496,2,"There are many different kinds of books in the library. Not all of them are for the eyes of every person out there. I think that libraries should censor the books, movies, and magazines so that either they are in a certain room where only adults can see or get them, or they are not in the library at all. The books in the libraries can have some very obseen items in them that young children should not be able to see.     I have been to the library many times, whether it be by myself or with others. I know what is out there and some of the books or movies are not always kid rated. I would like to someday beable to take my own child into the library knowing that what they are going to see is okay for their eyes.      Magazines are always talking about new relationships or this person is having a baby or anything along those lines, and I don't want my child seeing that. The library I usually go to has the magazines out where everyone can view them and I don't want this for my son or daughter who is of a young age. I think a parent should be able to take their children into a library knowing that when their child runs up to them with a book, it will be something that they are aloud to read or get and not something that an adult would read.      Libraries could always make a seperate room for books and movies that are not always for children. Such as the rated @CAPS1 movies or books that are inappropriate for young children. That way when a little kid is running around looking for a new book to read, they can't see or pick up these books or movies. I don't know about the other adults or parents out there, but I sure don't want my little kid walking around talking about an inappropriate book or movie they saw at the library.     Since libraries have many different kinds of magazines, books, and movies, it is not always a safe place to just let your child roam around. Libraries could always make a seperate room for items like this. For the books that are for older @ORGANIZATION1, movies that are rated @CAPS1, or magazines such as @ORGANIZATION1. I think that if libraries did this, parents would be much more at ease to taking their children and letting them run around and look for new and interesting books to read or movies to watch",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6375,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist grate deal. For example, it was not and hill goet dehydrated. He went down this rusty-bumpy road, which didnt help his dehygration And another example would be he found a plane was he could set a change and find the best way to get where he was going. That the features on the setting affection the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1299,1,"Dear @PERSON2, Have you ever noticed how different our society is today, even from just ten years ago? That's because of computers. Yes, it is true that computer give us advantages like messaging and information, but they also take away from some of the greater aspects of life: staying fit, enjoying nature, and spending time with family and friends. Without those, life would be horribly unbeneficial. While surfing the web @MONTH1 be fun, it has been proven unhealthy. ""if a person was to spend more than two and a half hours on the computer every @TIME1 for about a month they would see a sudden increase in their gain. And if they kept the behavior up, they could gain up to one third their initial body weight until medical help was provided,"" say @PERSON3, a specialist in obesity at @ORGANIZATION1. Also, @PERCENT1 of all computer users snack while online, which only increases weight gain even more. Unfortunately those that spend alot of time on the computer are not usually okay with exercising either. Instead of outing down just a half an hour out of their computer time to play with the dog, take a jog, or try some aerobics, computer lovers usually just stay in front of the screen. That's too bad, because it causes health problems for them and maybe even the generations after them. Nature, is being ignored @CAPS1, more than ever. @PERSON1 can recall the time when the trails @CAPS2 runs were overrun with people. ""@CAPS1"" @CAPS2 says ""They're being overrun with woods and. Those are harder to act rid of that people."" But it's live, the trails and that to be fuller nature lovers are numbers. Because of today's new technologies, especially computers, the beauty of nature is being almost completely passed by. Some worry if it will fade entirely and instead of trying to maintain what's left, well just let it do so. Hopefully though, the next generation of people will reconize this horrible mistakes. Doctors, @CAPS3, all people alike are seeing more and more how computers affect family life. How often do you eat dinner with the whole family. When you don't, where are you most of the time? At the computer? That's what I thought. When computers and other technologies are available there is much less of a chance that you will actually interact with family and friends. mrs @PERSON4, an @NUM1 grade teacher in @LOCATION1, noticed that her family spent less time together than ever before when each family member got a laptop. @CAPS2 believes this is pulling her family apart. Do you? As you can conclude, computers have an awful influence, on society: people do not take, the time to stay fit, nature is being completely ignored, and Family interaction rates are poor. Whaat can we do to fix this problem? Just set a little time aside daily to observe these aspects of life. This way, life with computers will be beneficial after all.",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19371,7,In my own words patience is when you have to just be com and quiet. And not all hyper and annoying. Patience is just controling yourself. And not being all rude and disrespectful to others.,3,4,,7,,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18026,7,A time that someone has been patient with me is when I was younger and my sister taught me now to braid. It took a long time and my small hands didn’t always correct things. But my sister always helped me when she had time. I thought I would never do it right. And thats when she told me these words “practice makes perfect” she let me choose from her best string selection. And she slowly went over how to do it. And before I knew it I was braiding just as well as her. I am so happy that she encouraged me to keep trying and that she was patient with me the whole time. And that is an example of one time someone was patient with me.,8,11,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20884,8," Laughter brings the world together in a way that cannot be put into words. When two people laugh together over the same thing, a special bond is made that is like no other. There is no way to describe the connection and how it can build a relationship. Every person on this @LOCATION2 will hopefully experience the bond that laughter brings. Last @DATE2, I was a member of a select lacrosse team and I didn't know any of the girls there. The team had five practices before the tournament and by the third practice, I still hadn't talked to many girls there. I was too shy to talk to these girls who all seemed to have a friend with them on the team. At the fourth practice, we were all stretching in a circle and I made a comment to one of the girls and she laughed. We began talking and throughout the rest of that practice, we talked and became friends. By making her laugh I had made a friend on the team and was even more excited for the upcoming tournament. The final practice was cut short so that the team could create tie-dye t-shirts to wear at the tournament. I sat down with @PERSON2, the girl I had become friends with at the previous practice, and her friend @PERSON1 came over to sit with us on the concrete. We all began talking and laughing with each other. Our shirts were tied with rubber bands and we were ready to put the dye onto them. We were laughing and making a mess of the multiple colors, having a good time and enjoying the warm night. As we finished our shirts and put the sopping wet clothing into plastic bags, we walked to the parking lot and said our goodbyes. I now had two friends on the team and could not wait to leave for the tournament that @DATE1. On a @DATE1 @TIME1, I woke up at @NUM1 am to meet the team at a park in @LOCATION1, OR. We were all meeting there to load our things into the three large white vans and to drive up as a team. I crawled into the van wearing my tie-dye t-shirt to see some of the girls looking tired and also sporting the tie-dyed shirts. @PERSON1 and @PERSON2 were in the back with another girl in between them so I sat in the row ahead of them. Some more girls from the team crammed into the van and we were on our way. During the @NUM2 @NUM3 hour car ride we slept, laughed and told stories. After being stuck in the car together for so long, we all bonded with each other over laughter and story telling. We each came from different cities, schools and backgrounds which made for a very entertaining car ride.  At the tournament, @PERSON1, @PERSON2 and I all stuck together. We walked around the fields, ate meals and laughed together almost the whole time. The only time we were apart was when roomates were assigned and we were not put in a room together. We all worked together as a team towards a common goal, winning games and making it to the championship. All of the girls on that team bonded in some way and even now, most of us are still in contact with each other.  Laughter is what brought @PERSON2 and me together and the rest of the team followed. The entire team bonded over laughter and we all became more comfortable with each other through laughing and having a good time. Putting @NUM4 girls together from entirely different cities could have been a major disaster, but we connected with each other by making other laugh, making it a positive experience for all involved. Laughter truly is the shortest distance between two people. Connecting with another human through laughter is an experience that everyone should have, it is so unique and powerful that friendships built on laughter can last a lifetime. Laughter makes the world a little better, a little brighter, and united together as one.",20,23,,43,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18659,7,"I am writing about a time when I was patient. The time I was patient is when it wast the first week of football. We went town to subway before the game and got a cub. I was the first one in line but then I was folowed by other people olny one cut me at first but then others followed and I became the last one in line, it felt like an hour in line! Finally I was up next I got my sub. It had turkey, lettuce, pickles, banana, pepper, cucumbers and great frech spinach.   It rearned something in that line being patient realy pays off and by the time in at back. It had over been @NUM1 minutes. I sighed in relief. We were pumped for our first games we played starta we tied it though but that was still a great day!",6,8,,14,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
638,1,"Dear @CAPS1 times, I am writing in regards to the article recently writen in your newspaper on computors. I believe that they are a vital part of the world today because; you can find information for protect or article in far less time then searching through books, you can get important news updates and entertainment is only a click away. My first reason was at the information on the internet. Say you were writing a paper on acient egyptians, and you need to know how to spell hiroglipics in a dictionary that would take a few minutes, online it would take about @NUM1 seconds. Or if you wanted to know when @ORGANIZATION1 died. It would take hours scouring textbooks untill you finally found it. on time it might take your just over a minute. The second reason I like computors is for news updates. You can figure out what happened in recent natural disasters, or how your stock is doing. Also computers helped us in the recent election, and will continue do so for a long time. The weather can always be found on time web for any in the world. This is a bad thing if you're planning a trip somewhere, wich you can also do with a computor. My third and final reason is that its hard to get bored on a computor. Every where on the web are cool gamesor funny videos. On the web there are about @NUM2 gaming sites and @NUM3 sites with funny/weird/cool videos and pictures. Many other places like facebook let you share picures with your friends, family, and relatives. Or you can chat with complete strangers from around the world. So next time you need information, news, or you are just bored go on your computor, and have fun.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15638,6,They faced challanges such as how to get the dirigibles to anchor on the building. There was really no safe way to do it. They also sayed the gas that keeps it floating is highly flamable. So it was like one big safty concern.In reality they ended up realizing its too dangerouse for them to do. If they took the chance and something went wrong innocent people could die.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1397,1,"My is people should go only on the computer if they really have to do something such as type a reports, check your e-mail etc. Whats the point of going on the computers if all your going to do is play games that gets boring to me. I go on the computer to to my friends and check email and stuff and then i go outside to play. You should only be on the computer for @NUM1 minutes a day then go get some exercise. If you stay on the computer all day you will smell, get fat, get lazy, and no one wents these things. These are the things you should have. You can play basketball, go on a bike ride, with some friends, go swimming, I do this type of stuff every day and I am in good shape because of it. I stay healthy and fit I dont sit on the computer all day on a sunny day. You become more if you go more it gives you a chance to hang out with some neighborhood kids. When I get home every day I do my homework then I go outside and play, then later I go on the computer for @NUM1 minutes then @CAPS1 done and I go to bed and the same thing the next day. So everyone agree with me because you knew I am right.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13265,5,"The mood in this paragraph is pride, and hope, and love. Narciso clearly feels very strongly about his family. He states ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" That sentence alone @CAPS1 the pride and @CAPS2 in Narciso's words. The mood is happy and loving.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12780,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was greatful. The memoir was all about how Narciso Rodriguez admired his parents courage, selfishness, culture, heritage, strength, and perseverance.  Narciso said, ""I will always be greatful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" @CAPS1 also said, ""But, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are."" Not once did the authors say anything negative about his experiences growing up. The memoir focused on how @CAPS1 is so greatful for everything his parents did and sacrificed for him. In conclusion, the mood created by the author of the memoir was happy and greatful.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4673,2,"Do you think we should have censorship in our libraries?     I say no because if we had censorship then there would be very few good books, magazines, and movies because in this world today everyone gets ofended by something.      For example in action, horror, and comedy films there could be blood, violains,and cursing. which some times make a moive good.Even in some book there is cureing and violains. Some @MONTH1 even seem provocative.       For example in @ORGANIZATION1 the book repedaly use the n word.Even same magazines like fasion, sports,and same car magazine are seen aas provocative. An if I walked in to my local libray and seen all my favorite movies,books,and magazine not on the self i would never go back again.     Im not trying to say put adult books in the elementry school libray. but in the public libray its ok ot have book like that.     Could you amagine a libray with cenrsorship? It would empty.",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19359,7,"There were many times when I was patience. Maybe like waiting for a doctor appointment or waiting for your teacher to stop instructing so you could finish your home work. Maybe waiting days for your teacher to stop instructing so you could finish your homework. @MONTH1 be waiting days for your teachers to come and give your tests back. But today I am going to talk about when I had to be patience to get my first dog. @CAPS1 was last year when we went looking for a dog to adopt. We couldn’t find the right one. @CAPS1 took @NUM1 weeks til we saw the cutest chichuacua. He was only one year old. We were rushing through the papers scared some one else was planning to adopt him. When we turned @CAPS1 in the lady said we had a back side too. After the paper work we had to wait another week because they had  to fix him. My mom went shopping for dog store they told us we could pick him up on @DATE2. We were so excited. Instead of @DATE2 we thought we could pick him up on @DATE1. On that @DATE1 we picked him up @CAPS1 took @NUM2 years of patience for my sister and only @NUM3 years for me. A year later we went back to adopt or just look for another dog.We didn’t find one, but we waited and if your patient you will get something for that. We are still patient to maybe get another dog if our parents allow @CAPS1.",9,12,,21,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3638,2,"Removing certain materials from the shelves of libraries is not the way to go. No matter how offensive they might be, there are many other ways to solve this problem. I believe that certain materials such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from libraries for being too offensive.      First off, many people have different opinions about what is offensive and what is not. For example, many people have different intrests than others. Some people @MONTH1 like certain kinds of books and movies while others @MONTH1 not. For instance, one of my favorite types of movies to watch is a comedy. On the other hand, there are many friends of mine that love to watch horror movies. This is something you can not change. Everyone is going to have their own preference on what they want to read, listen to, or watch. Why would you take things away that people actually enjoy? There are other ways to solve this problem.      I believe that we can solve this problem by just seperating certain materials from others in the library. For example, if something is thought to be offensive, then it can be placed with others like it. These materials do not have to be removed completely. Mothers are often worried about their children picking up things in the library that they think are offensive. If these materials are seperated from others, there will not be a problem. Certain materials do not have to be removed completly from a library.      All in all, there is no need to remove materials from a library because many people have different interests. In conclusion, I believe that materials should not be removed from libraries for being to offensive",4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1085,1,"Computers have helped people tramendisly over the past years. Thanks to computer scientest have found cours for deseses, jobs have become easier and communication with friends or family have become afordable. I believe that computers have a positive effect on people because they educate people on places in the world, help people with their jobs, and give people a chance to talk to phone without having to pay for anything. Is someone a trip to a country that they might go on the computer to learn more about that country and their culture. Another thing they might do is go to a website that could have them find afordable flights or a hotel to stay at. If a child is doing a report about a country in @LOCATION1 they can go on the computer to find out facts on that country. Computers educate people about places all over the world. You can go on a website that has videos and short clips about what has been going on and learn about current events. any costs. If you want to see a friend for her birthday but don't have the money to fly halfway around the world to see her you can vidieo chat with her. Computers help people save money by talking on the computers with friends, family and even co-workers. Computers have been very helpful ever since they were invented. They help people learn about places all over the world and about anything you want to learn about. They also make jobs and work easier, and also help people save a lot of money by talking to people on the computers insted of on the phone. Computers have improved demastrecly over the years, the screens use to be so small and you would have to press all these buttons just to boot it up and now computers can be as big as a flat screen @CAPS1 and you can turn them on with just a push of a button. Who knows what computers will be like @NUM1 years from now?",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4561,2,"I believe if i worked at a library , if I found multiple idems that  has profanity, rasicm, slang.I agree with taking Magazines, @CAPS1, Music books, @CAPS2 books ,etc., I wouldnt want my own children going to the library and finding books with racism, etc.I would like to inspire more people to check out library books but you could'nt if there were inappropriate books .     If i worked at a library and I had to scan all the books to make sure the books were okay for young adults, young children to check out. How would it make you feel if I didnt do a book scan to check the books and one of your children brought home a inappropriate book how would you respond to it?    I would do a observation on all the books that we had in our library. I also think that all libraries should have more inspireing books and cartooon , and baby books for little children. I think if majority of us all went to the library and we found a bad book I think we should have the right to remove it from the shelf, not only I would'nt want my children to see i woul'nt want someone elses children to see. This is how i feel if my child picked up a bad vulnerable book.I would'nt let he/or she go back to the library until they organized there library.     Lastly I think librarys should have a big room full of little kids books. Also i think they should have different age groups like one room for baby books another room for @NUM1 to @NUM2 year olds and on up. I hope this inspires you .Always read the back of a book before checking it out of the library because you never know what the books going to be about",3,2,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
636,1,"Dear local newspaper, I feel that computers are very useful to society. For example, millions of people and companies and small buisnesses require the use of computers in order to optimally run their buisness. Everyone who uses computers on a daily basis can confirm that they are very useful. In fact, computers are so useful, some schools are starting to notice. I hightly reccomend that you get aquanted with such a useful and very recognized plece of technology. Did you know that many billion-dollar companies and small buisnesses require the uses that a computer has to offer? For example, my mother is s former-district manager of the fast-food company, @ORGANIZATION1. When she worked at the company, they gave her a laptop that she could use only for her work. This proves my point that companies and small buisnesses require the features of a computer to smoothly run the buisness of which they run or one employed at. The technology of computers has brought education to new. Some teachers (including my own, @PERSON1) have taken the initiative to incorporate the modern technology of computers into their teachings. Classes have even been created in schools because of the popularity of computers. For example, at my school, a computer education (or, comp, for short) class has been created for kids to understand the knowledge and skills using a computer can give to them in the real-world. In my opinion, I it is great that computers are incorporated in so many places. Computers are used by millions of people every day. Such buisnesses are corporate like @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 are starting to see the brilliance in using computers in their company. In fact, computers are so useful and helpful, teachers have taken up using computers in their classrooms. I hope it is not just me that sees the good that a computers brings, but anyone else that @MONTH1 have taken a glare at this letter.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6092,3,"The cyclist was affected by the heat. The fact was June , hes in the desert and has low on water were what almost lead to his own down fall. This hot desert setting sounds hostile and am I’m surprised he lived and that he was that lucky.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1125,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 recently has been brought to my attention that computers have been affecting peoples daily lives. i do agree with this because with our countries of obesity. More people need to exercise more, interact with freinds, and to just enjoy things that don't involve technology. Some people are just super glue to computers, but let's see if @CAPS3 doesn't start wearing down after this paper. Many individuals are spending too much on their computer and less time working out or exercising. People need to start spending more time on exercising and less time on their computer due to the facts that more and more states obese percents just keep rising. Yes, you @MONTH1 say I will just go on a diet ino! Diets don't always work and many people have tned them. Even a simple one hour walk with your dog is better than lazily browsing the web. And if you wanted, you could even join the local gym for @MONEY1 a month. Buttle only way this is going to happen is by you wanting to do so. Now you know how to fix your problem, get going! More people need to interact with friends instead of going on their computer. Interacting with friends or family will help themm be better with their social hucs in all. Yes, maybe your friends and family out and hungry with your friends most likely you will have more fun exercising then you have on the computers. By interacting with friends and family will help youn later in life by being more social and ready any job interview to meet you less nervous. F inally, enjoying things that don't involve technology is good to know because many people don't have as much fun out in the real world. You have to mete @CAPS3 fun. This can be schevered by asting a frend to go on a compy trip with ypu or spending a little diugh to enjoy yourself. The ourdoors and nature consists of many beautiful and awesome things; but the only way to realize this id to have fun outside or explore whats the great tourst. In conclusion, many people's lives are being manipulated by computers and destroying their daily live. but maybe due to these essy tips; excrsing more, by soul.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21394,8,"  I believe that laughter is a healthy way to get a along with someone, and have fun! I think that the more you laugh the more fun you're having with someone or a group of people. One time me and my friend @PERSON1 were hanging out at my house and we literally couldn't stop laughing, every little thing was hilarious to us for some reason! It makes us have so much more fun together, when we can just laugh together instead of fighting. I love to laugh; all my friends call me obnoxious because I laugh all the time. I feel like if you're laughing and laughing with someone it makes you closer and it's way more healthier and better if you just laugh! For example I always want to hang out with @PERSON1 because we always laugh together and have a good time. It's like when you have a group of friends and some of them you always disagree on something or fighting, its never fun. If you have a boyfriend/girlfriend and you always laugh with her/him it just makes you want to be around them so much more, because your having a good time. Fighting just does the opposite!   I've recently realized who my good friends and who are my bad friends. Laughing is the biggest quality to have in someone. The girls I fight with are usually the ones who have no personality and are very negative and are just mad people. My friends that I do get along with we always laugh and have a good time, the only time I've got in a fight with one of my good friends is because the downers always say random stuff that's not true and hurtful so that person will be right there down with you! I have realized the more you laugh the more fun you will have and the more people want to be around you! I've also noticed that my mom and dad are completely different people. My mom is a sweetheart who always laughs and I can always have fun with. My dad on the other hand never laughs. I honestly can not remember the last time I heard him laugh. He is such a downer and no one ever wants to be around him. That's probably why my parents are divorced! You can just tell that my mom has more fun and my dad doesn't. In life you really just have to have fun do what your supposed to do and laugh. So really what I'm trying to say is laughing is a important part of any relationship; whether its with friends family dating, just anything! It's definitely a good quality to have.    If a person is always happy and always wanting to have a good time, I think its how they're raised. If you think about it I get my mom @PERCENT1 of the time and my dad @PERCENT1 of the time. Whenever I'm with my dad I'm always in a worse mood, I never want to do what he's asking. I basically want to rebel. When I'm with my mom I literally do the opposite I'm always happier and will do what she wants, and we always laugh and have a way better relationship then me and my dad do. I think laughing and being happier has a lot to do with who you look up to and how they act, and what they do. I can definitely tell my mood change from parent to parent. It has a lot to do with how the parents are raising their kids. I think as a adult you need to be a positive influence on your kid/teenager. I think its good to have a healthy laughing relationship with your kid. Life is to short to spend it hating someone, I believe you should spend your life having a good time and fulfilling your dreams, and mostly laughing. ",16,15,,31,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20735,8, one time when i was skateboarding with my friend i got relay mad and i wanted to stop skating. His mom tried to convince me to keep skateboarding.Laughed and seed i will never be good enough to skate and she seed that i have improved than some of the people that she knows.That made me feel better than before and then i started skate boarding every day from then. When i think about that day i still laugh.skating can be fun in many ways.People can skate for fun and for compaction.There are different ways of skating people have there ways of skating.There are many different kinds of skateboards the people who skate them ride them different. Some of the people that ride skateboards i laugh at because the way they skate.   ,10,10,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18637,7,"This is the time when I was patient. One @DATE1 day I was playing with my @CAPS1 @NUM1 game, I told my mum I wanted a new game, because my games were kinda old. My mum said ""@CAPS3 sweetie just be patient"" I was patient for a month. My brother asked my mom for a new game and he got it the next day. My sister wanted a curling machine she got that to. So I just keep waiting and I was also patient. My dad came back from @LOCATION1, and I asked him. I said, ""dad can you get me a new @CAPS1 @NUM1 game?"" ""@CAPS3 honey but I can't get it now. You just have to be patient."" ""ugh okay!"" I hollered to the next day my dad had already gotten what my brothe and sister wanted, and I was the only one who my dad and mom that never gotten my game yet. So I still waited, and waited until my dad took me to the video store. I was so happy even though my sister and brother gotten what they wanted. I still got my game. Waiting is not that hard just takes patience. Thats how patience helps you ecomplish what you want.",10,11,,21,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21318,8," Laughter is a good part of any relationship. In some relationship with out laughter do not end well but some do but other don't. I had a relationship were that we did not laugh that much and it end shortly but I found a girl that we laugh when we need make other person happy. The relationship I'm in now with the most amzaing girl. We have a relationship with a lot of laughter. We can laugh at each other sometimes and we try to keep each of happy by making them laugh and feel good.That enough about my girlfriend and me . Now my friends and I can laugh at each when we do dumb thing in front of each other . We try to push each other on to try dumb thing so we can get some laughter in our life when we don't have girlfriends and when we are bored . when all get together that inquired are my friends and there girlfriends, and my girlfriend and me. Sometime some dumb get said and we start laughing as hard as when and sometime we don't know why we do it but it fun when we do it. Laughter is one the best thing in any relationship because it bring happiness in our lifes. So try to get some laughter in your life. Thank you for reading this.",14,15,,29,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6309,3,In the story the features of the setting effect him because he was running out of water. He also had to manuver around a snake. It made him tired and dehydratied. His muscles got sore from the rough terrain. He got dehydratied from the sun.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15617,6,"Based on the excerpt, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle being the safety of the people below on the streets. In the excerpt in paragraph @NUM1 it clearly states that it was dangerous because of the dirigible caught fire it would be ""Much worse if it had taken place above a densely populated area."" Another obstacle would be that there is a law that is stated in paragraph @NUM2 that says that there is ""An existing law against air ships flying too low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. The greatest obstacle though was nature itself as stated in paragraph @NUM3. ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" @CAPS1 the wind would make the dirigible swivel around and around the mooring mast. An idea came into plan that said ""Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down in the back with lead weights,"" @CAPS1 why not at the Empire State Building? Safety is the reason because the weight on the building would be dangling above people on the street which would be unsafe. Then flyers who approached the building would fear that the wind would blow the dirigible on to the sharp spires of other buildings in the area which would be unsafe.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
983,1,"The computer is a good way to contact family and friend. People send messages all over the world or just to fon. People like playing video games or be on websites that they like. People all over the world by laptops to travel to one place to another. Everybody don't be on computer because they think its not go to have but some people do like to have one to be sending messages to hang out with one another or be talking about how was your day. Many people want computer because they do have enough money to @CAPS2 one. Some computers cost a lot @MONEY1 money like, @MONEY3, or @MONEY2 and even more than @MONEY3, or @MONEY2 it depend witch one they get. Around the world many people sell their computers to get money to @CAPS2 different stuff like, shoes, clothes or games. They always sell stuff on ebay to get less or more money, instead they can't take the computer back to get your money or to get a new computer. People want the classic computers, but now they come out with new ones like, touch screen ones. Many people been buying them at @CAPS1 @CAPS2 or @ORGANIZATION1. Every seens the new computers came out people been buying a lot the company been making a lot @MONEY1 money from making the touch screen computers. Every new year the company make new computers so they can get thousands or @MONEY1. Company all over world make different computers to bring out new styles so people can like them and @CAPS2 them. New styles they make more money they make. Some people make their own companies to get money like the other companys get theirs, but some @MONEY1 the money you make some goes to the government. The money the give to the government is to take care @MONEY1 the homeless people. Computers are used from leaning or for fun. People share computers with other people they can't not share it because it wouldn't be fair. Some people take turne using it. Some people don't like taking turn with one another. Everybody share or have they own and they use it or not they can't force their server to it if somebody wants to net on it. Some people lie and say they were geting on it. People like joking around with others. Parents always say a computer is not a tag to play with computers cost a lot to repair and get it fixed all the people spill water on them a the computer mess up and the people be mad and maybe he/she just got a new computer. When computer first came out people bought them to see what they will be like. Many people liked them and it got all over the world and people were talking about them and the company made more and more until it got in stores all over the world. The computer got famase and the company made newer styles for everyone else. People bought a lot @MONEY1 computers everytime they come out with a new style. Many people had @NUM1, or @NUM2 at home as they @CAPS2 them. Companys made other company mad because the other companys were making better styles. People were ordering online to get new computers. And company how make them is making a lot @MONEY1 money. Company stopped making them until they came up with a new computer that is the @CAPS1 one ever. When they came up with one the company was mad that they mad a better one. Some company joined to make one together.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15744,6,"Dirigible docking would have been a great addition to the Empire State Building. There were many obsticles the architects had to go through to complete this goal. The building wasn't strong enough. If they had tied a dirigible to the top of the original Empire state bilding, it would have pulled the building untill it feel over. The architects had to upgrade the frame so it was safe. Now that the frame was safe they had to worry about the dirigible itself. If only one end of the dirigible was tied to the mast the other end would blow in the wind. This would make unloding cargo and people very hard. Also dirigibles could catch fire, which wasn't safe. for the people on the ground. In the and it just wasn't safe to dock a dirigible at the Empire State Building.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
499,1,"A lot of people use computers in present day. It allows family and friends to interact with eachother, research places and ideas, and lets you type a document to look neat. On the other hand, computer technology, prevents people from being active, exploring nature, and talking to family and friends in person. I want to explain to you how I feel about computers personally. I can honestly tell you that I love computers. I spend a lot of time on @CAPS3, because it lets me talk to friends I sometimes don't get to see. I can even see how my cousin in @LOCATION1 is doing. Computers also help me out with homework. For projects on a subject that I don't totally understand, I can just hop on my laptop, search what I need, and @CAPS1!, I have my information. Then after that I can type up my report and even pick out a couple of pictures to print out, see? Computer are bangin! But I can understand the other side of the issue. Computers can be time consuming. I can admit that I've spent hours at a time on the computer. This has become a problem. Experts say that people are starting to spend to much time on the computer and less time in the real world. A perfect example is my brother. He loves the @CAPS2. My mom will call him down for dinner and he'll be too engrossed in what he's doing that he will skip the meal. His friends will call him and he'll blow them off until he finishes his game. I agree that people should not spend so much time on computer. You have probably read this and thought to yourself. Well? How does she feel about it? I can honestly say, I was supposed to choose one. But here's the thing. I like my laptop. I'm addicted to @CAPS3, But, I still play sports, I talk to my family, and I even like to take walks through the words or on the beach. I neutral, like @CAPS4 from @CAPS5. Scientist say computers have positive effect on people. Some experts say they're concerned computers have a negative effect on people. @PERSON1 says they are both right. Computers are wonderful. They are one of the most growing technologies in our world. But we don't need to spend @CAPS6 of our time on them. I hope you understand my point on this issue.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6681,3,"The cyclit of “Do not exceed posted speed limit”, was greatly affected by the setting of his bike ride, which caused him pain and displeasure. He travels in the high deserts of California in June, which he exaggerates that water there was “@NUM1 degers”. The great heat caused him to drink lots of water, depleting it much quicker than he would’ve wished. It also sopped the energy out of him, further complicating his ride. Along the way there is literally nothing there and he has nowhea  to replenish his water supply. The hilly, rough terrain also calls for hard, tough peddling, sopping even more energy. The heat, terrain, and lack of places to stop combined for an awful ride for the cyclist of this story.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4398,2,"Do you believe that certain books, movies, or magazines should be taken off the shelf in a library due to censorship? There are many times when you hear a parent tell their child not to look at that magazine because they don't want them to see the vulgar things on the inside. I've heard parents tell their children not to ever watch that movie because it'll show things that they don't need to be seeing. Almost every day we're put in situations like these, not knowing whether we should pick up the magazine or just leave it on the shelf. In my opinion, I believe that libraries should remove anything vulgar from the shelves. Kids are encouraged to go to the library as much as possible, but not if there is vulgar things on the shelves.     Kids are told many times a week by their parents, teachers, and other adults to go the library. They can work on their homework, read a book, or do some studying for school. When they get distracted from finding the book they want with a book that has vulgar things in it, they're going to be curious. The main reason I disagree with having vulgar things on the shelves is because of young children. The last thing they need to be looking at is something that isn't appropriate for their age. It's hard for a child to turn down a movie or magazine they've never seen or looked at before.     In most libraries the adult section is seperated from the childrens section. This doesn't mean that a child can't over hear something that the adults are listening to or watching. The childrens section is made for fairytale stories and kid movies, but when the adult section has things going on over there that aren't the most appropriate then kids can over hear. If children and adults are going to be in the same library then I think they should make it completely impossible for children to veer over there and see what's new on that side of the library.     Another reason I think libraries should censor themselves more is because of teenages in the community. After school hours, a lot of teenagers in our community enjoy going to the library. If this is such a good environment for teenagers to be then why are they able to download bad music off of the internet?      Some teenagers listen to bad music with cursing, vulgar language, and much more. Libraries should make it impossible for teenagers to do this. If they want to download bad music then they need to do it somewhere else where youngers can't get ahold of any of it.      My last argument for this is a heads up for the parents. Parents should check out what stuff their kids are looking at when they go to the library. You might not think your child would look at something with vulgar things, but sometimes, they're curious. All children are and it's human nature to be curious. I, myself, would go with my child a few times just to see what's in the library and tell them not to take things off the shelves that look bad.      Some libraries can't completely fix everything. They can't take every bad or vulgar thing off of the shelves. In the quote it says, 'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.', I can think of books and magazines that I  would never want any child to look at, especially at a young age. Libraries need to be more interested in taking vulgar things off the shelves so that younger children cannot get ahold of. It's one thing for a child to see a book or magazine that isn't necessarily appropriate, but in a library it's a completely different story",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21016,8," Laughter is such a great joy in my life. If people never laughed life would be dull and boring, most of my favorite experiences involve @CAPS9 while having a good time. One of my best experiences with laughter was going camping with my friends last @DATE2. I will never forget that experience last @DATE2.  During the middle of @DATE2 on a beautiful sunny @DATE1 @TIME1 my @CAPS4 @CAPS1 calls me and @CAPS2 me were getting a bunch of guys to go camping and I should come. Immediately I @CAPS3 my parents to let me go with the only exception of turning in my job application to @ORGANIZATION1 before I left for camping. After turning in my application I got in the car picked up my @CAPS4 @PERSON3 and makings for peanut butter and jelly sandwiches and left for the adventure.  After I got to my destination after driving @NUM1 miles up river I didn't see anyone just two huge tents where my friends were supposed to be. Looking @CAPS5 the camp site had been attacked by bears with trash laying all around and camp fire still going i started searching for my friends. I found @CAPS1 passed out in one of the tents and tried to wake him but he was dead asleep. @PERSON3 and me not knowing what to do so we sat in the shade of the large trees surrounding us, it was a good @NUM2 degrees outside. After about five minuets we herd a splash and went to investigate. We walked towards the river and found all of out friends jumping off a @NUM3 ft rock into the river and we went to join the fun. After jumping off about @NUM4 times each we headed back to camp. @CAPS1 was awake and @PERSON1, @PERSON2, @CAPS7, @PERSON3 and myself all huddled around the camp fire @CAPS8 we returned to camp and told jokes all night.  All of us really bonded that three day camping trip @CAPS9 and joking and just being boys. I wouldn't get rid of those memory's for anything. After camping i returned to home and worked a lot of the rest of @DATE2 but ever since then have had really good friendships with all of my camping buddies.",16,15,,31,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4527,2,"Today it seems as if anything you could imagine is out in the world somewhere, somehow. Whether it is found in a magazine, a book, music, or movies is irrelevant. The fact of the matter is, if good stuff is out there, then you can generally make the assumption that bad stuff is out there too. This bad stuff is sitting around on the shelves of our libraries nationwide waiting for someone to open it up and induldge in their naughty, intense, or graphic ways.      As an @CAPS1, every man has the right to do or read what he wants. But what happens if it is not a man at all but in fact it is a child? This child is not choosing to read such bad things but just so happens to stumble upon it. Should they be punished for accidentally coming across this material and reading it? Which raises the question; who is to blame, and, what is the solution? It is a good and respectable idea to censor certain things in libraries but if someone wants to read something, they should be able to right? It is a very sticky situation and determining the answer should be a long and thought out process examining the issue from all angles, and different perspectives.      The people that have brought this issue to the surface more than likely have personal experiences that make them feel so strongly on thier views of censorship in libraries, as have I. On a dry, blistering @DATE1 day I wanted to find something to do indoors. So instead of staying home all day I walked down to the library. I had been there a lot that @DATE1 and I was pretty familiar with their selection so I was looking for something new. So I strayed out of the kid section and browsed other areas of the library. There were so many choices and options right at the tip of my fingers. I got tired of reading all the titles so I did what generally any other kid would do, and something parents have been telling their kids for centuries not to do; I judged the books by their covers. I found one that looked interesting, and long story short I just so happened to stumble upon a love story. But not the kind I was used to. It was an adult book and want into vivid detail about the relationship of a sexually active older couple. Needless to say I was speechless. Reading that stuff as a child, scared mevery much so.     Nevertheless it leads me to believe that it would be smart for censorship to be put into place in libraries. Of course, not every kid is going to have the same experience I did. In fact hardly any will. But I know that I was traumatized. So I can easily imagine how other people felt when the same thing or a realitively similar thing happened to them. But for all the other people that have not had things happen to them or that have not stumbled upon such material would probably think that it is unfair that things should be taken away from them just because other people could not handle it. But if you were like me, or any other innocent child that happened to find and experience certain things they just were not ready for would you not agree that censoring libraries is a beneficial thing to everyone? If you want things that are more intense or out there, then you can go to a bookstore, instead of a public library.     I am a teenager and I do not have children but I can only imagine how you mothers and fathers out there would feel if it was their kids who were emotionally scarred from experiences they could have been shielded from in the first place. Kids should be kids and not have to be worried about the bad things in this world, and the most effiecient way to keep that the way it is, is to censor books, music, magazines and movies from the shelves of public libraries.",4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12438,5,"In the excerpt by Narciso Rodriguez, the mood of his home is created. The mood in his home is always happy, and thankful. Narciso was always talking posetive, never about what is bad in his life. He talks about how his parents had to start over again with their lives to come to @LOCATION1. ""meant leaving behind their familles, friends, and careers..."". This quote meants that his parents gave up everything to come to @LOCATION1. Narciso and his family have lots of friends like them because they keep there arms open to people. Narciso's mood is set in the excerpt from his memoirs.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12504,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives a certain mood was created. The type of mood that was created by the author is a warm and @CAPS1 mood. It was because of the different things that were happening in this community, and more importantly the house. This house had become a home to Narciso because of all the different that would happen there. like the Cuban music, the constant in and out of extended family members, and the fact that this all happened because his parents selflessly came to this country to give him a better life, even though they had to leave behind their families, careers, in the country they loved. This is the mood created by the author in this memoir.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1430,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1 you think computers have a positive or negative effect on people? In my opinion, I would say that computers have negative effects on us. This is because we would get less exercise, less time to enjoy nature, and interacting with family and friends. If your on the computer most of the time at home, how would you get your exercise? You wouldnt because the whole time you would be stuck sitting down at the desktop. This is also a proble because this is how obeseity can occur from no exercies, and just sitting all day. Or people who have heart problems nad need exercise can worsen by being distracted by the computer. Being home on the computer does not let you enjoy nature. Instead of going outside in the warm wheather, having fun people are staying home. This is not good because they should be out having fun, not on the computer all day. Missing time with family and frinds is unexeptable when your on the computer. This is because yar supposed to keep your family and friends company and not daze off on what your doing on the computer. Also you miss family gatherings or leave yar friends lonley. Thats because yar to busy on the camourar nad not paying attention to anyone arand you. This is why I think computers have a negative effect on people. This is because of less exercise, less time to enjoy nature, and interacting with family and friends.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15259,6,"the builders of the Empire State Building faced various obstacles and challenges in allowing dirigibles to dock there, including how to attach the mast and how to move people between the dirigible and the building. In order to attach the mast where the dirigibles would land, the builders could not simply fasten it with the cable teather to the top of the building. This would ""add stress to the building's frame"" with the combined pressure of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure. Therefore, the builders had to get the pressure down into the ground by strengthening and altering the building's steel frame.Another obstacle the builder's faced was the challenge of transporting people and luggage from the building to a dirigible floating in the air. The dirigibles would only be tethered by their front ends, but gondola, where the passengers rode, was located underneath the dirigible. this meant the construction of ""a gangplank to an open observation platform"" from which the people and luggage had to be moved @NUM1 floor by a special elevator. Although the builders of the Empire State Building faced various obstacles in building the mast, the one they really should have considered was the dager and impracticalness of docking dirigibles @NUM2 stories over New York City.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18986,7,"This story a story about when I broke my ankle. It happened about @NUM1 years ago. I was at swim practice and was about to dive off of lane @NUM2. When I lost my balance getting on the block, I realized I was about to fall and tried to catch myself, but, I ended up falling in to the water and twisted my and backwards from the swim black. I was really hard to get out of the water. My mom called the doctor and found out that I couldn’t got an ??? for nearly ??? days. So she came to the pool to get me and brought her old ??? those @NUM3 days passed of laying in my bed @NUM4 when I come to find out that my ankle was broken. So I ended up spending @NUM5 weeks not going to swim practice, I was so bored. That was the time when I had to be patient for four days until I got an x-ray.",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3591,2,"Offensive or @CAPS1?     Who can truely say a book, movie, music, or magazine is truely offensive. There are some of the obvious movies that completely make fun of or taunt someone's personal views as a religion or lifestyle but is a book about a wizarding world really that offensive?     While growing up I had a friend who was very religious. Her parents would never let her read the @ORGANIZATION1 books by @PERSON1. At the time I didn't understand why she wasn't able to read such fantastic books. Now that I'm older I understand that her parents believe what is in 'The @CAPS2' and nothing more. Make believe and imagination was @CAPS1 a suitable thing fpr their child to read. For many families, though the @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 series is nothing but a different world in which they can set themselves free from the real world. Should a book that many people love and adore be taken off shelves because some families are offended? I personally don't think they should.      While my family loves the books and movies some families don't. That is their lifestyle and their opinion. Everyone has an opinion, and if we took out everything in this world that could offend someone we would be left with nothing. Movies would be boring, stories would @CAPS1 be interesting, and there would be no music.      If our world was based off of the opinions of others and making everyone happy we would @CAPS1 have music. Music is a way for someone to release their soul. The different sounds of music are based off generations. My mother's generation was based on @CAPS3 @CAPS4' @CAPS5 and mine is of @CAPS6, @CAPS7&@CAPS8, @CAPS9. So what would really happen if all the offensive materials were taken off the shelves of a public library or say a @ORGANIZATION2. The shelves would be blank. Empty shelves would be a horrible look.      Everyone is offended by something. I'm offended by the rape scences in movies but some people believe in some situations it makes a movie better. My friend's family is offended by the make believe world of @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1, and I believe that some where out in our world there is another world, a wizarding world as a matter of fact.      People believe in many different things and like many different things. I've never met one person who is exactly like me, because there is @CAPS1 one. I'm an individual like everyone else and if the things I liked were taken off a shelf because someone was offended then my life would be boring because I wouldn't have the things I enjoy. In some cases some offensive things should be taken off shelves but who am I to say it should be, because there is someone out there who believes it should be on the shelves of @LOCATION1",3,4,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4265,2,"In libraries, there are of course books. There are mysteries, romances, comics, biographies and anything else that you @MONTH1 be able to think of. There are also magazines, movies, and even cd's that are at the libraries now. Then at libraries there are also those books and magazines. Those books being the ones I would never pick up off of the shelf myself let alone allow my future children to pick up. This is because those books contain material that is not at all conducive to the young person's brain. That is why I would like those books to be cencored so my child would never even know that the books are there.     These books have in them people having sex and smoking drugs and their language in theses books are horrifying! These seem to be the kinds of books that young children have become interested in. They read them at school and get them somehow from their friends. They also find them in libraries and the more they read the more they want to do because they are influenced very easily. They are influenced by books characters that dont even exist some of the time.       There are many reasons of why I feel that the books should be cencored but one of the biggest reasons are that because young people read these kind of books they go out and do what they read in the books. Thinking its okay because somebody that is not even real, most of the time, is doing it. I feel that these books are the reason that babies are raising babies children that are ten are going out having sex and getting pregnant and becoming eleven year old mothers. Where is that even heard of, but it happens and by the time those same children become freshmen in high school, if they even get there, they are carrying the responsibility of the baby they had when they were eleven. Those same children go through life wondering how different their stiuations could have been! So I feel like before these books go and mess up a whole other generation of children why don't we stop it here? Why does another child have to get pregnant at the age of ten for someone else to realize it's time to change things?     Ten year old children are still just babies! The human brain isnt even fully developed until you are in around the age of twenty-five. So these children dont know if what they are reading is wrong beucase they haven't been taught that it is very wrong this is because at that age no parent expects that they will have to teach their not to have sex. Why you @MONTH1 ask, because at the age of ten what child should know about sex? At that age they still like to color and play with baby dolls or they like @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 they should even be thinking about sex let alone know what it is.      These materials should be taken off the shelves because children reading or looking at these kinds of books and magazines in libraries should not be happening. To stop yet another generation from messing up their lives taking the materials off is the best solution. After all shouldn't a parent get the chance to make sure their child isn't killing their chances to live a happy life in the future?",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10629,4,"The reason the author chose this paragraph is because the paragraph means that when the snow melt and all the geese returned, the flowers @CAPS1. That one flower she had to @CAPS2 tests on.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1261,1,"Have you ever had someone move away and you wanted to keep in touch? Well having a computer allows this to happen. @CAPS4, it gives students the to learn different places. People and much more. But why do some people not hire them? First computers allow you to talk online with friends and family. For example using email, @CAPS1 and video chat for example I have a friend who moved away and now we email back and forth to keep in touch. @CAPS1 allows people to chat instintly and upload pictures and videos. For examples my @CAPS2 @CAPS3 pictures of my baby cousins so people can see how their growing up. Lastly, some buessnesses use a webcam to talk to other people. Say the boss on a the but to see how he employees were doing withness him he could hook up a web cam and have a conversation with them. That is how computers allow people to the @CAPS4, computers @CAPS4 people to learn about things, for example if a student rod to make a topic they could type the topic a website like bring or google and they could find all the answers they needed to help them with their project. @CAPS4 if a family wanted to go on to see they could search for it and find a hotell and sites they might want to see that is how computer allows people so that the reader can read their hand writing. @CAPS4 they help pay taxes. For example, turbo tax is an online program that allows people to pay taxes online and it remembers every tax you have paid. So if some company sends you a notice saying you havent payed a bill you can go on turbo tax and check. So reader these are some ways why people should enjoy computers. They allow people to talk to friends and family by email, @CAPS1, and @CAPS4 by webcam. They @CAPS4 give people the ability to learn information faraway places and people. Lastly what is so bad about having a computer? They allow people to pay taxes online and @CAPS4 type papers. Computers are needed in this day and age or else some people would not be able to survive without them. So reader these are some reasons why people should easily computers.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3641,2,"I believe that if you are at a library or movie store, or where ever and there are books,movies, magazines, or cd's that you think are offensive that they should most likley be taken off of the shelf.     Have you ever walked into a store and seen something not approprite for little kids, and you get a little embarassed yourself?I know I have at least one point and time in my life. Which is why I believe that it should be removed from the store, or at least the shelves.     I always try to think of how my grandparents would feel if they new what kind of music most teen's are listening to today. There is so much terrible language and talking about violence and bad things that really just isnt appropriate for anyone to hear, or even talk about.      Some people feel differant about this, and some people take it a little to serious, but you have to remember everyone has their own opinion",2,3,,2,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7298,3,"The hot sun and the desert features in the setting are affect the cyclist in ways that could potentially stop him from making it to his destination. The sun is beating down on him and is making it harder for him to reach his destination. “The sun was begining to beat down...wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt.” By him being so hot and tired fromthe sun, he thought that he would die from dehydration. This would very likely stop him from making it to his destination, Yosemite. His lack of water supply didn’t help the situation either because he could only go @NUM1, was “water depleting @NUM2.”",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12022,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was happy. It made me feel happy because it was good to know that ""'family' had nothing to do with being a blood relative. This meant that all the people around you that care about you are your ""family"". Another reason why the mood of the memoir is happy is because I think if my parents were in the same situation that Narciso's parents were in, my parents would have done the same thing. My parents would have also wanted, ""to give their children a better life."" @CAPS1 this memoir makes me feel happy because of how caring Narciso's parent's were.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
974,1,"What compters stop you from doing is your homework in school. But when you do something on the computer your not soposes to do, you get stuck on a website you can't get off your screen. So what I'm trying to say is to don't stay on the computer than just @NUM1 min.",1,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7115,3,"The features of the setting greatly affected the cyclist in the story “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit”. In the story it says, ""I was traveling through the high desert of California in June."" This is telling the reader that the weather was hot and you need a lot of water here to survive, especially if you are riding a bike or working. Later on in the story it says, ""I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state."" This quote gives the reader information and tells us that the cyclist is having a hard time surviving through the harsh features of the setting through the harsh features of the setting. In California deserts I know from prior knowledge it is hot and dry, exspecially in the summer. If you are working outside, like the cyclist in this story is, and you do not have water to drink, you will get dehydrated which eventually leads to death. The author does a good job showing the readers how the setting affects the cyclist.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16284,6,"Allowing the dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building took some obstacles. First, there was a lack of suitable landing area in New York City. To solve this, Al Smith added a mooring mast to the top of the Empire State Building. This would allow the dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling, service, and to let passengers off and on.Another obstacle for allowing dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building was the stress being added to the building's frame because of a one thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of a building held by a single cable tether. To accommodate the situation, the steel frame of the Empire State building would have to be strengthened and modified. Over Sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework. The final and greatest obstacle for successful use of the mooring mast was nature. The winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Lead weights would be used to weight down dirigibles landed in open fields. But losing the lead weights at the Empire State building where they would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street was not very safe at all.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4203,2,"Have you ever felt that books are offensive? Maybe, but @CAPS2 all depends on who you are and @CAPS1 angers you. Somepeople think that books, music, movies, and etc. can be offensive in some way. I know they can, but @CAPS2 can only effect an amount of people if they together understand the problem. I think there are several ways why and why not to take books out of our libraries.     From @CAPS1 I hear, people do go angry over things but the question is '@CAPS1 gets them so angry?' @CAPS2 is different for somepeople than others. For example, a @ORGANIZATION1 fan reads a book about them and the author makes fun of them or teases them. That is a way to make someone offended and angry at a book. others can get mad at a movie because @CAPS2 discriminates races of other kinds. Like how in the @NUM1's, some movies characterized @CAPS3 @CAPS4 as stubborn, ignorant, human beings. In my view, actually being @CAPS3 @CAPS6 myself, sort of aggrivates me too, but none the less, shouldnt argue because of one major amendment, freedom of speech.     @CAPS2 depends on how @CAPS2 angers them also, like how back in world war @NUM2, the @CAPS7 people were characterized as short, fat people with big noses taking all the money away from the @CAPS8. That can be offensive, and is used usually to talk people over to their side. I think that if something offends you lightly, most of the time you shouldnt worry about @CAPS2, but if you get offended very heavily and none of the stuff they say about that topic is true, maybe you should get someone else to read @CAPS2 with the same dislikes and likes as you. That could help determine if @CAPS2 is truly offrnsive to people in general, not just you.      Then after that the main question we would ask would be '@CAPS1 should we do next?' If I were someone and the book I'm reading offends me massively, I would contact the library @CAPS2 came from and ask them to read @CAPS2, and if they think @CAPS2 is offensive, then they would more than likely take @CAPS2 off the shelfs. Now just because of someone that likes a sports team reads a book about them and the book talks trash about the team, dont tell the library, thats just a waste of time. Just simply pick up another book and read @CAPS2. I can understand how people will get mad over racism and disrimination, but not over a sports team.     So I hope that people can someday understand the limit to were something can actually be offending. Or maybe its just in our common nature for us to be offended when something we like gets made fun of. That is why I think that books should only be taken off shelfs for only very good reasons, not silly one",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18356,7,"Just be patient lucie said to @CAPS1. I will be done soon. How soon is soon? Awile. I will be done fileing papers in about an hour then I will take you to the park an hour? that is such a long time. Just go watch tv. but I dont want to leave me alone or when I get done I wont take you to the park ok. So @CAPS1 whent and placed vidow games with his little sister @PERSON1 for awhile, and made some pizza, and then his friend from school come over and asked if he and his sister wanted to go to the park with him and his and his mom. So he asked lucie if he could go to the park with ryan and she said yes just be back by five o’clock. and he and @PERSON1 had a great time. and ryans mom got them all ice cream. and he learned that being patient is very very important.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6300,3,"In “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the features of the setting affect the cyclist by gradually wearing him out and pushing his limits of hope and survival skills. At first, the cyclist enters a deserted town but he remains calm and amused by this in the sentence, “I chuckled, check my water supply, and moved @NUM1). Soon after, the cyclist is troubled by a “ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps, through the high deserts of California in June” (@NUM2). He is agitated by this, makes a significant dent in his water supply, and unfortunately continues. At the point where he is still isolated and lost beyond repair, the cyclist tries to stay hopeful but soon breaksdown. He reflects, “Telling myself that of I could make it that far, I’d be @NUM3). The features of the setting become more and more disappointed at each leg of the journey for the cyclist.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18363,7,"There are @NUM1 different languages in the world and different??? of these languages, in all that is  more than @NUM2 different languages. But in each language patient means the same thing, understanding and tolerant. Everyone had to be patient at one point or another, let me tell you??? one time were I was patient. It was just about one week ago when I got into a fight with my best friend in the world. And later that day I realized that we were both. I sent her e-mails, text messages, and I called her cell phone and home phone at least @NUM3 times @CAPS1 didn’t answer or reply. I got even more frustraited the more @CAPS1 ignored me, then I talked to my cousin about it. “You have to be patient with her, this is your first fight.”@CAPS1 told me in a calm voice. so, I waited by the phone to see if @CAPS1 meassaged me back without using  swear words, and I left her alone at school. Finally, one day @CAPS1 talked to me. @CAPS1 said “I’m sorry too, thanks for being patient with me. I’ve missed hanging out with you, how about we sit together at band?” “I’d life that.” replayed and finally made up after five days of fighting. After experience I learned that being patient   pay off. So wait your turn @NUM3 speak, and understand why people say what they say and mean what they mean. Patience is always the hey.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1048,1,"Dear readers, @CAPS1 if I told you that every time you sit in front of a computer, you are that much closer to death? @CAPS1 if I said that computers are destroying your lives? This @MONTH1 not be that serrws, but its shocking. You can not disagree. I feel that humans should not use computers, or at least use them very scarcely. Computers make people get less exercise, they kill brain cells, and they can ruin your lifestyle. You @MONTH1 believe computers have impared your life, but consequences remain. Many @CAPS2 today are obese and lazy. They don't get any exercise. There are many reasons for this, but one big reason is because they sit in front of computers all day! Computers @MONTH1 improve reflexes and such but you can do that by exercising, also! When you sit in front of a computer, it reels you in. Ten minutes becomes one hour in a snap! That is one less hour of exercise. Virtual sports @MONTH1 be fun, but they keep you from the real ones. Without exercise, one @MONTH1 become obese, develop diabetes or heart problems or even have muscle troubles. These can be hazardous, and even deadly. Computers dont exercise your body, or your mind! Now, that fact bring me to my next point. Computers @MONTH1 have information to teach you, but that type of learning has its consequences. When you sit in front of a computer, your eyes are on the screen. Now, scientists from the @ORGANIZATION1 foundation have found they staring at the screen kills brain cells. Basically, these cells do not reporoduce as easily as other cells, and they sometimes don't reproduce at all. You are just one step closer to death. I'm sure you don't want an death. Try opening a book! They are cheaper, more accurate, and don't kill your cells! Don't stare at the computer screen, because your slowly destroying your body, and knowledge can be gained elsewhere. For a final point, I would like to say that computers simply destroy your lifestyle. Virtual people are not your real friends and family. Computers cause you to turn away from them. Online interaction is not like just talking to someone in person or on the phone. You can lose your real friends. Plus, computers run your lifestyle because half the things you think you are learning arent real. You can't trust certain sites or certain people. Being with ones you know and love is much more beneficial, because computers drag you in you are taken away from the real world. I feel that we should all take a stand against computers. They take away exercise, cause brain cells to die and other problems occur, and they can ruin your lifestyle. No one wants to be a lonely joke! Read a book, get outside and day; but stay away from die screen. There are better alternatives. Take a stand, and do @CAPS1 is best. Be the healthy, happy person, and lay off that computers, so that you can get the best of life!",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13050,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, several moods such as comfort, sympathy and a sense of family are created by the author. Immediately as I began to read I felt comforted by the author writing about the home and family. I felt especially warm inside when he talked of his fond memories with friends. As the author continues, you cannot help developing a sense of security. However, once you continue reading and get into @CAPS1 @NUM1, the mood darkens. The author talks about the hardship his parents had to endure to give him a better life. I solemnly read on and was filled with a sense of family. ""I'll always be grateful to my parents,"" the author writes. ""for their love and sacrifice."" (@CAPS1 @NUM2). He explains how much he appreciates the love and care given to him by his family. While reading this memoir, I have felt comforted, sympathetic, and a strong sense of family, as I'm sure the author had too.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6471,3,The setting affects the cyclist because it’s very hot outside and he is starting to loose energy. The setting affects how fast he rides when he stops or when he drinks or eats. all of these depend on the type of weather he is riding in. like in the story it was so hot out when he saw a building he wiped the sweat from his face to make sure it wasn’t a mirage.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8874,4,I think he concluded the story with paragraph cause then do thing in the story and the report it so when the geese left they will come back and leave again so that what I think I take the test again means.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13003,5,A mood for the memoir would be redeaming. It would be a redeaming mood because it talks about strugles like being an immagrent and being poor. It also talks about how a community that is going through the same strugles can come together and help each other out. The author also mentions how her parents sacrificed a lot to help her acomplish what she has become today. Since there are tradteties that help the author lead to success it would be a redeaming mood.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3552,2,"Take it @CAPS1?          How do you take it when people come out with magazines, movies, or music that is extremely offensive to you? How can you stop your children or the younger generation from watching these things? The truth is we can not stop them, their is so much of the pornography and bad music out in this world that your can get it anywhere. It is all over the internet and you can't control that.     If I find something very offensive in a store or online I should have the right to voice my opinion, and that opinion should be taken seriously. They shouldn't have inappropiate things in public stores or places children can go. That is not right and it is setting a terrible example for the kids. Some people should just know better and take it @CAPS1.     Almost every day that i go online, i see something on the side of the website advertising some kinda of pornograghy site. Its unbelievible how that is allowed on public websites for everyone to see. If they're going to continue to do this, @CAPS2 needs to be some law saying they can not on public sites. I see things of half naked ladies on the side of the website and i know thats not okay for young kids to be seeing at those ages.     I understand a lot of things in this world is about money and people make money by selling things to others. Selling movies, magazines, and music saying or doing things that are rebelious is easy money for opper teens and older people. They can still make good money if they were to make funny stuff instead of pornography things, everyone loves to watch, read, or listening to something funny.     So basicly we aren't going to stop this completely and you all should know that. the best thing we can do is protest it and hope that it will start fading from the public some day. It should die down eventually. We can only hope for the best",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19176,7,"One time my volleyball team went to @ORGANIZATION1. I was one of the last people off our bus which means I was one of the last to order. I stayed there very patiently as everyone ordered. I talked to my friends as they waited too. Next I figured out, what I was going to eat, (@CAPS1 cheese, burger, @CAPS2 fry, and a large drink). “@CAPS3 @CAPS4, @CAPS3 @CAPS4” as I watched the clock my eyes got droppy “@CAPS7, @NUM1” the lady said. “@CAPS8 @MONTH1 I take your order,” she said. I told her what I wanted and she put it on her register and I began to wait. A couple minutes later I got my order. Finally after being patient I got my food. That was the time I was patient at @ORGANIZATION1’s???",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10624,4,The author concludes the story with that paragraph because Saeng is going to start over and do better the second time around because she doesn’t want to disappoint herself. That is why the author concludes the story with this paragraph.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15223,6,"In The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, it describes many ways the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. It was hard enough for the builders to build the Empire State Building but on top of that they must make a mooring mast at the top. Four term governor of New York Al Smith said it best, ""One set of engineers here in New York is trying to dope out a practical, workable arrangement and the Government people in Washington are figuring out some safe way of mooring airships to this mast."" Another obstacle builders faced was having a thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, only held by a single cable tether, was simply not safe. With this being said, the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened, costing over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications. No matter how the builders built the Empire State Building they still face nature as an obstacle. These are examples builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19151,7,"I was patinent when we were on the bus, we had just arrived at school the kids were loud and nociy in the day. Were a lot to get off the bus when someone jumped in front of ??? then I fell back into my seat, the was about @NUM1 - @DATE1 kids getting off the bus. So I waited for all the kids to pass me then I got up and walked down the  alie to the door, then the bus driver said"" thanks for waiting"". Then I left",5,7,,12,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
155,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION2, @CAPS1 there has been a lot of talk about how computers effect society. Some ""experts"" say computers are good for society and some think the opposite computers are bad for society because they make children obese, decrease a person social skills, and even make children less educated. Computers are just plain bad. In recent years studies show that children that use the computer often are less likely and less willing to get active. Dr. @PERSON1 says, ""The more children use computers is the more time they waste @CAPS3 not being active at all."" A study conducted @CAPS3 the @ORGANIZATION1 shows that children that use the computer @NUM1 hours a day are more obese then children who use it one hour or less a day. Computers keep children inside all day. A child on the computer is wasting time not being active. The main reason children become fat on the computer is because it is easier to just go on the computer than to walk and exert energy. Computer are a direct cause to child obesity, and they are a threat to society. Some of you @MONTH1 think a computer can increase social skills, and you are dead wrong! On a computer you can ""talk"" to friends, but it is not like you are actually talking to them. On a computer you can talk in privite and say what ever the heck you want. In public if you say something bad you will get in a lot of trouble. A computer offers no face to face interaction. So when a person who uses a computer often is at a social gathering they are usually very awkward. My cousin spends all of his time on the computer and when I went to his on christmas he never took his eyes off the screen! Computers is destroying the social life millions of people. Did you know that people who use the computer often are usually less smart than kids who don't? ""Experts"" on computers say that computers can be used for infenite nolege. The key word in that fraise is ""can"". just because kids have knoledge at their finger tips doesn't mean the will use it. On many projects and homework assignments I have record kids say ""@CAPS2 I just copied and printed an article on google."" @CAPS3 copying and printing students don't learn anything. Computers are slowly making people less educated. Ever since the invention of the computer people have seen promise for society. Now computers are destroying society @CAPS3 making people fat, socialy weird, and less educated. So how can people still think computers are good?",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12549,5,"The author creats a mood in the memoir that is a fantastic to feel and it is called happness. In the memoir she creats the mood of happness by tell us about all her happy, loving, memores. One is how her younger parents pasted @CAPS1 the cuban cultur, music, food, and more. Another one is how her parent cared about others so they help family and friends into they got back on their feet and how she does the same. Also she was happy about the non selfleness her parents had she said they allways put her and others ahead of them they did ever thing for her.Happness is one of the best moods to be In No matter where you are because @CAPS2 you are happy others are happy too it also making you and others feeel good.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3971,2,"Censorship in libraries should not be allowed. I believe that even if books, music, movies or magazines on the bookshelves are offense, they should still be left there. They are apart of our history and the history we're creating.     If anyone wants to read a certain book or magazine, there's a big chance they will end up reading it. There are so many ways to get to those things with the technology we have today. You could just look them up online and read them or listen to them off the computer.     Also, censoring in libraries, where everyone feels tranquil and comfortable, can make people rebel and even put the library out of business.     From what i've observed, most people look up inappropriate or offensive things on the internet already. Especially if they know that it's something that could be debated about being censored.     A lot of books and movies, great ones even, contain some offensive content but they are classics. Generations, one after the other, have enjoyed them.     Now tell me, who would want to be the unreasonable person and take that away from anyone who is interested? Everyone should have the right to these books, magazines, movies, and music. Libraries should not censor them.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21477,8,"It was a cold @DATE1 @TIME1 when I decided to go to @CAPS1 @CAPS2 with my friends @CAPS3, @CAPS4, @PERSON1, @CAPS5 and @CAPS6. We had a ride to @LOCATION1 and back so we rode along with @CAPS4's dad, on the way we listened to some A @CAPS8 @CAPS9 and @CAPS10 @CAPS11 (which i recommend to any @CAPS12 fans) once we got there i told a joke and we all laughed so hard they all pooped themselves and died. The @CAPS13",14,9,28.0,28,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18013,7,One time I went to cetar point and I was rideing in the car. And we were about @NUM1 hour away from the cetar point park. And I was talking with my sister @DATE1 and @ORGANIZATION1 and I fell asleep. And the we were there I was so excited and that I couldn’t wait to go on the @CAPS1. And I was walking in the park with sisters mom& dad into the park and all I could hear was people scream on the rollercoaster and the we were in line for the @CAPS1 and I was in the back of the line and I was to unpatience and I was like in my mind com’on com’on and I was in like feeling like I didn’t want to on it anymore and I was time to ride the @CAPS1 and I went on it and I was off the ride in matters of @NUM2 sec. and that was my story of patiences.,6,7,,13,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16087,6,"There were many obstacles builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle they faced was that some dirigibles were @NUM1 feet long which was four blocks in New York City. This was an obstacle because it would add stress to the buildings' frame when it was attached by single tether. In order for this to happen the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be strengthened and modified. The next obstacle they faced was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. For example, in the excerpt it said that the U.S. navy dirigible Los @CAPS1 approached the mooring mast but could not get close enough to tie up because of the forceful winds. Also the captain could not even take his hands off the lever. The next obstacle they faced was the safety issue. The builders of said the dirigibles are weighted down by lead but if they did that it would be a safety issue. It would be a safety issue since the dirigible would be dangling high above pedestrians on the street. The last obstacle they faced was the law against flying to low over urban areas. It would make it illegal for a ship to tie up to the building or even approach the area.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4383,2,I think that the cencorship in libraries should defenetly be relevant.  Such as i think that if someone wants to check out an adult book they should be required to show id at desk.  Many children take advantage of this they rent books and games they know parents would never allow.  A cencory system should be a quit simple arrangment fot the public library systems. Private libraries can do as they choose they are not under any state law.  On the other hand public libraries are under state and city law they should not be able to show adult things to children.  For example in many libraries around the @CAPS1.S there all books called manga or anime books alot of them show partial nudity and other graphic things not suitable for younger children but are only rated @NUM1+.  I think there could be many changes in the library systems it is your choice if  you want to change them or not,3,2,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9052,4,"I believe the author of “winter Hibiscus” used this for the last paragraph because it is saying when she sees that hibiscus it will give her memories of home again which will bring encouragement for the test. “The geese symbolize Saeng's determination to pass the test and try like the new country. Saeng explains, “she lifted her head and watched as their distinctive I was etched against the evening sky, slowly fading into the @NUM1) this quote creates a vivid image in my mind that lets me know Saeng will really go and take that test when she has encouragement from not only the geese but the hibiscus also.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4260,2,"Let's say you walk into a public library and you look upon a book that is racist or is offensive to you.  You believe that the book shouldn't be on the shelf so you take it off.  I believe that you have the right to take that book off the shelf.  It isn't just books either; it can be music, movies, magazine, or many others.  The authors have the right of freedom of speech but it can go the other way around too.  There are many reasons why and I will explain this to you.     The first reason why is that the person might not come back to that place.  I mean if somebody walks into a library and trys to find a book to read, do you think they will ever come back if they are offended by one?  A little while back, I was in the library and I noticed a book that was offending.  It was talking jokes about black people.  I believe that isn't right because all people are equal no matter how they look or what they believe.       The next reason is that it could cause rate of the materials to go down.  If somebody gets offensive about a censored material, they are going to report it and cause the rate to drop low.  No library wants to hold books, music, movies, or magazines that have been reported by their community and nobody wants it.  How would the author feel about their material getting reported because of somebody getting offensive by it?  If the author wants to offend anybody, then they shouldn't even bother to publish it.     The last reason is to get rid of the materials.  Nobody wants to look at something that offends them.  How would you feel that you took a movie home to watch the family and it had bad stuff in it and you didnt like it.  You get offended and complain.  Complaining is bad for business especially if its a government building.  If we just get rid of the things that offend people, then we wouldn't have any problems.     I do believe that certain materials should be removed from the shelf if sombody if offended by it.  There are really three main reasons.  One is the the person might never come back to that place. Next, is that it could cause rate success drop down low.  The last is to just get rid of the materials so they are no complains.  Now, what do you believe",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18133,7,I forget to grab my helmet and ??? pads out of my mom’s car cause she works until @NUM1 and at @NUM2 that ??? ??? ???. Then my patience showed up.,8,5,,13,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18228,7,"Patience is very important, it can help you be successful in many things. In school patience is very important because some things just have to wait. Being patience in the game of chess or checkers is important because while the other persons makes his or her move  you can be thinking of what move you will make to counter attack it. Patience is very important when playing games or doing schoolwork. Patience is also about waiting. For example, everyone is excited on @CAPS1 eve and can’t wait till morning but they have to be patient and wait till morning. Also on your birthday you don’t know what you’ll get but instead of peeking you have to be patient you can open the presents up. Patience is a very helpful skill to have",7,5,,12,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9177,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph in hope. The conclusion the author made was to say in over that amount of time, Saeng will have overcome that failure and will be more prepared for the test for a second time. In the text, it says how Saeng realized that many of the things she thought of as strange before have become almost familiar which is an improvement.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9033,4,"In this story theauther deicides to end the story with this paragraphe, ""when they come back, saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is buding, then I willtake that test agien."" because she wants to take the test when every thing is isanters, de forexample she wants everything she likes in her nuforment such as the flowers, the geese and the whether. Another reason why I say the author ends the story with that paragragh because she wants to be, ua eviorment like the one that she was in her home country forexemple there was no snow it was like sping time all ver around. This is why I say that the auther ended the story with that paragraph.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7142,3,"In the cyclists journey to Yosemite, several factors hinder him from reaching it. The first is obviously the false information given to him by the elders. The second is that because the information wasn’t true, the cyclist had an insufficient amount of water. This made him dehydrated. The last is the fact that the route given to him included obstacles such as snakes, rocky roads, and old ghost towns and abandoned buildings which made the cyclist less confident. Those are the features of the setting which affected the cyclist",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3278,2,"Everyone is different and unique in the world and they have their own unique opinions. Which brings us to the arguement of censorship on anything, because what some people find offensive others @MONTH1 not. The censorship that I am discussing  is specifically about censorship in libraries. There are three main reasons why libraries should not be censored. The first reason is the books were written so they could be viewed by the public. The next reason is people have the right to make their own decisions. The final reason is parents can limit what their own children read. The censorship of libraries is an absurd idea, because a few people shouldn't make the choice for everyone.     The first reason that libraries shouldn't be censored is the books were written so they would be read by the public. A library is a public place where people are supposed to get whatever books they choose. If a few people start censoring books then it will set off a chain reaction. After so many different books are censored there will be less books for peole to enjoy. All of the books that were censored were meant to be enjoyed. If books are censored some people @MONTH1 never even get a chance to see those books and they wont be able to learn from them. Books deserve the chance to be enjoyed like they were meant to be enjoyed and if they are censored that chance is gone.     The next reason is people have the right to make their own decisions. If someone doesn't like a book then they don't have to read it. They don't have the right to go censor that book, because they don't like it. Another person @MONTH1 enjoy that book and many others @MONTH1 like it as well. People should be able to choose what books they want and they shouldn't be told by others what they can and can't read. They need to let others make the decision when it comes to getting their books. People can't go around preventing other people from reading a book that they enjoyed. They need to let others think for themselves and let them read what they want to.     The last reason is parents can limit what their children read.If the parents don't want their children reading something then they can tell their children that they aren't allowed to read it. Other people shouldn't be able to censor a book, because it is innapropiate for children. The child's parents can protect them if they find the book offensive for their children. Everyone needs to worry about what they like and let the other people enjoy what they want to. Let the parents set the limit for their children and it makes life simpler. Also it allows everyone else to enjoy the books if they aren't censored just for children. Parents will worry about their children and adults can worry about themselves.     The censorship of libraries is absolutely wrong and it is also unjust. Somone shouldn't be able to say, 'I don't like this book so censor it.' I will remind you of the three reason why this is true. First the books were written so they would be enjoyed by the public.  Also people people have the right to choose what they want. Finally parents can set limits on what their own children read. Books should be left uncensored so they can be enjoyed by whoever wants to read them. Everyone needs to let books be enjoyed by all and they shouldn't take away a books cahnce to be loved by censoring it.",4,5,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12225,5,"@ORGANIZATION1 tells the story of his childhood and the feel good-times of his family"" in a small house in Newark. Rodriguez shares a unique happy feeling with this excerpt; the feeling of great memories that have been strengthened with each day. The phrases he uses to help describe the house like ""passionate Cuban music filled the air"" and ""the congregation of family"" established this vibrant and happy feeling of the welcoming household he grew up in. The excerpt furthers these feelings when the author tells about how much his parents gave when they themselves had little of their own. The description of these selfless attitudes and ways helps paint a beautiful portrait of a family, with ""extended family"" also, forgetting their troubles and enjoying every second they spend together in a lively kitchen. As the author goes on to tell how grateful he is for his parents and wonderful, warm childhood, it provides a serene and a down-to-earth honesty from the author. The excerpt recreates a feel good time of a carefree life and worryless days that provide a wonderful atmosphere for the reader.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4372,2,Some books are offensive but not all of them. Some libraries have begun to censor their book collection by removing ones they thought could be offensive. I believe there should not be any censorship in libraries.     One reason I do not believe that there should be censorship in libraries is that tons of good books are lost because of it. Some libraries do not carry @PERSON1 books because he uses curse words. They should not remove the books completely they should just warn people of the language.     A second reason why I do not believe in censorship is that some books on different religions get removed. I once saw a librarian throw a book away simply because it was about the @CAPS1 religion. This was a horrible action because the @CAPS1 religion is an extremely interesting one and now many people will never know anything about it.     A third reason is that they @MONTH1 end up offending some people by removing a book. I once heard of an @CAPS3 family complaining about a library because they removed a book about the @CAPS3 religion. I found this upsetting because everyone deserves to have access to the books that they want.     I propose that instead of censorship the libraries seperate the books by different subjects and genres then put up signs warning anyone that goes into that section. This way everyone can get the books that they want to get. The libraries also would not have to worry about people being offended.     I believe there should not be any censorship in libraries. Some libraries have begun to censor their book selection by removing ones they thought could be offensive.Some books are offensive but not all of them.,4,3,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9574,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus"", the auther finishes the story with this last paragraph, “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is building, then I will take that test again. The auther finishes the story with that paragraph because in the beginning, Saeng had purchased hibiscus plant because it had reminded her of her hometown. (“Plants that she had not realized that she had known but had forgotten drew her back into her childhood world”) So she purchased it, but since there was bad weather at the time, Saeng had to get the plant back in time and plant it in the graden. But she failed setting if there on time. That is why it says “I will take that test again"". And she will take it again during the spring when the hibiscus blooms once again. That is why the auther finished the story with that paragraph.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10035,4,"The author chose this paragraph because it fit right like a good conclusion showed for example the word again it means that you did something already and it's over but you miss so you retry what you miss, but in the paragraph it's talking about the nature and how they want to test it!(""again"")!.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15002,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigible to dock there were many and at the end the dock could not happen. One of the obstacle was that buildings foundation had to be modified. In the story it says, ""The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation which was nearly eleven hundred feet below."". Being so high the dock would be moved around because of the winds. Also the blimp itself could not even attached itself to the dock because the winds wouldn't let it. In the end the dock wasnt meant to happen it came with a lot of problem for the builders and even the artitechs.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1198,1,"Dear to whom this @MONTH1 concern I know everybody that dont uses computers are why are people effect by the computers. Well i think computer is better then newspaper, on news papers you could find the news, well of course but wheather, houses for sale, tv casting, jobs and others just the same way as @CAPS1 but instead it like virtual. It benefits society for certain reasons it depends. some times computerscan be a negative effects on people but it also teach people how to read, write, type, learn and other. What I about we can talk to others we can see pictures of people whom we no we can google into about things we need to no, it helps when they need to find they way around the mapquest. A negative issue with having computers with internet, certain websites that are not age able. Kids be on website thier parents dont bout, looking up with boys they meet over the @CAPS1, People dying making plans with someone the next day the person is gone missing. I think if experts take away computers must kids well be mad and upset and there will be nothing more to do but play video games and go outside and these are my opinions.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13021,5,"The mood created by the author in this memoir is love, happiness, and self lessness. The of the memoir that emphasized the mood of love was when the author mentioned that, ""It was here where I learned the true defonition of family. I will never forget that house or its gracious neighbor hood or the many things I learned there about how to love."" The mood for that exerpt was love because it explains how much he cared for his family and neighbors. There were many exerpts in this memoir that gave the mood selfless ness, As such, ""They came self lessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers, in the country they love."" This indacates selflessness by explaining how they left behind their jobs, family, and friends, all to give their children what was best for them. The overall mood of the story was happy because it explained their happiness, struggle, courage, good outcome, and beloved memories.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
104,1,"Dear The @CAPS1, @CAPS2 has been an argument wheter computers do or do not have a positive effect on people. Some believe, that computers have negative effets on people for example spending too much time, not exercising, and not interacting with family and friends. However, I believe computers have a positive effect on people because it teaches hand-eye coordination, lets people know about faraway places, and allows people to talk online. To conclude, computers have a positive effect on people. Did you know hand-eye coordination can be helpful at times? Well, it true because if you are in distress and the phone is broken and you don't have a cellphone then send an emergency e-mail to one of your friends informing them to call all and since you have hand-eye coordination you can type without having to look down. Also if your in college and have an important essay due tomorrow then hand-eye coordination can really help you write down notes without having to look back at the writing paper. Finally, with hand-eye coordination it can help you can join the army because if you spot a threat you can aim and shoot quickly without having to take out the gun after threat attacks. To conclude, computers teaches hand-eye coordination. Have you ever wanted to go to a forgein places? Well with computers you can do that you can just search the place and see what the place has. Fethermore, if you want to learn to speak a forgein language you can all you have to do is type in the language with a question and search its so easy a baby can do it. Finally, if you want to learn how to cook like forgein places do then type in the type of food or its name and search. To summarize, computers lets people know about forgein places. Have you ever have the feeling that you want to talk to somebody? I know I have this is why computers can help you talk to people online just tree the person's e-mail adresses and type the message. Also you don't have to waste money on paper and envelopes. Finally, having an e-mail is free so you can talk all you want. To conclude, computers help people talk online. In summarization, computers have a positive effect on people. It helps them have hand-eye coordination, learn about new places, and lets them talk.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4173,2,"Can you believe that some people think that books should be banned for having bad things in them? Well I can, Children today are learning nothing but violence and cursing these days. Banned books could be the way we set them stait and make them recognise that stuff is bad.      Only a handfull of kids these days are choosing to read books, a majority of them are playing video games and watching tv. Chilren shouldn't be alloud to swear, or think that violence is alright. Chilren will read these bad books and think it is ok to shoot someone if they are doing something they don't like, but it's not alright. Banned books are exaclty what children need when they are in their younger years.     Banned books might have foul language and violence, but I believe that it is ok to let your teen or young adault read them if they are mature enough to handle it. Teenagers should be mature enough to be able to read a book with a few swear words in it, or someone killing another person. Some banned books don't even have swear words in them; '@CAPS1 @CAPS2' doesn't have one swear word in any of the books but still it remains on the banned books list to this day.      Some books, movies, magazines, etc. should be removed for profanity and drugs. I do believe that someone is trying to make a difference with the banned books list. Censorship should only be used if a person is too young to understand why or what is happening when they say a bad word or do something confusing.      In conclusion I think censorship is a great thing that should be used moderatly. The children today dont need to be learning about sex, drugs, swearing, violence, etc. I do believe if they put an age limit on what you can watch/read that it will be a more controlled topic to talk about.",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18002,7,"Once, I was @NUM1 old and I was so eager about getting a new bike I didn't have no patience at all, so that day I asked my dad can I get a new bike ""he said not now"" ""I said pleaseee"" he said later then, after that day my dad was getting dressed  I said yes!! That's for my bike so. I went to my dad and I told him I'm ready ""he said what"" were are you going I said with you then he said no not now, I got so angry and went and sat down. After an hour has been gone my dad showed up, so I ran so fast and said can we go now he said ali be patient, I said why you said we are going to go, so my dad parked the car and went downstairs and ate lunch. So I started to get angry I went to the couch and sat their and watched @CAPS1 while my dad was eating. After he was done he said ali lets go!! I said where, to? buy you a bike I ran so fast and hugged my dad and went and got dressed. After I got my new bike and I was patient.",5,7,,12,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21483,8," My grandfather always used to say, ""life is like a kaleidoscope, you can keep turning and turning and it @MONTH1 seem like it is changing, @CAPS1 really it's just repeating itself."" @CAPS1 i have always wondered if the statement really applies to life, and if it does why would we want life to continue in the same pattern, if it isn't going like we had planned.  When i was twelve me and my two little sisters were split up and three thousand miles were crammed in between us. i was put here in @LOCATION2 while they remained in @LOCATION1, where i was born. At first the pain of those three thousand miles was devastating. it was like i had two of my essential organs removed from my body. Eventually though time passed and the agony lessened @CAPS2 grip on our lives. It @MONTH1 seem cruel @CAPS1 most of the time now the thought of them doesn't cross my mind. maybe @CAPS2 true what they say, ""out of sight, out of mind.""  @CAPS2 sad to think of how close my sisters and I were before the change. we did everything together. we are very close in age, the youngest and I are only @NUM1 years apart. i remember all the times we would spend outside on humid @DATE1 days. We would look as white as ghosts because of all the sunscreen my mother would generously apply to our skin. Times were different then, they were happy, i was happy. If i think really hard I can see us sitting on the shag carpet in my room, playing with dolls until the sunlight melted slowly into darkness. If only i could have that moment again even for a second, then maybe i could feel that happy content feeling once again.   Although much time has passed since our separation i still have those days when i feel that my world is caving in around me because they are so far away. I'll give them a call and the questions are always uncomfortable at first, like between strangers meeting for the first time. i can feel the three thousand mile scab on my heart reopen and it bleeds as though i am leaving all over again. I ask myself why do i bother to call if it hurts this bad? And then i hear it, like the beautiful sound of classical music to my ears, I hear them laugh. I have that feeling i needed all of a sudden, i am happy. With every small giggle my smile grows because i know i have made them feel whole again and for a second i have let them forget about for far i really am. Their laughter makes those three thousand miles evaporate into the air. In those moments of laughter i know that we are close again that we are sisters, not strangers. It's true what my grandfather says, because no matter how my life changes i will always have that feeling of total bliss when i hear the sweet laughs of my little sisters.",20,21,,41,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
866,1,"Dear, Local Newspaper, In my opinion computers are everything, They provide with so many things for you to do like chess, listening to music, and even downloading you favorite movies. First of all, computers are a great source of communication because if you have a long distance relative that lives in @LOCATION1 then you can talk to them online. You can do this through via email. Instant message, and @CAPS1. Secondly, Computers let you search the web. So if you need to findout some directions to your destination or want to get informaion on some far awat places like @LOCATION3, @LOCATION2, @LOCATION4, or my favorite @CAPS2 @CAPS3 you can because the web lets you do that. Thirdly, they are a great source of entertainment. Well because you can watch episodes of your favorite @CAPS4.V. show or you can watch music videos. Also you @MONTH1 enjoy listening to music from your computer as you personal entertainment. I think that computers are great. I use them myself as an example I love to download music into my ipod from my computer. Then I get to enjoy the music from my ipod. Last, but not least, @CAPS5 computers have a great effect on a majority of people. I believe that if we didn'@CAPS4 have computers then our world wouldn'@CAPS4 be the same. So I say keep computers here to stay. They complete us all.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18985,7,A story of being patient A kid wakes up. He goes upstairs to get a drink. He goes back down and watches cartoons. He becomes very excited. When he remembers he gets to go to a football game today. The @CAPS2 are playing @CAPS1. His dad comes downstairs and tells him to get ready for the game.  They drive about @NUM1 miles to the @CAPS2 stadium. They get there find their seats. The game starts. The @CAPS2 kickoff. The @CAPS2 stop them and by the end of the first half the @CAPS2 are down. ??? the score was @DATE1 to @NUM2. You can already see people leaving. Then comes the @DATE1. Now at the end of the @NUM3. the @CAPS2 are down??? More and more people leave. The @CAPS2 are coming back. We are still here. Now down by @NUM4 the @CAPS2 get another touch?? They are only down by three. @NUM5 seconds??? to give @PERSON1 culler throws a ??? pass to @LOCATION1 ??she. the crowd goes wild. We were patient enough to stay till the end of the game.,11,9,,20,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8952,4,"The author concludes the story with this pharagraph because he figures after all that has happened like she failed the test he wanted to end to be remembered is a happy thing. Also wanted the end to show how something bad happened but  next she was going to do it again. The author wanted to show that she wouldn’t give up, she goes after what she wants. And he wanted that to be the last pharagraph.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19447,7,"A time I was patient was waiting @NUM1 to @NUM2 whole months for my baby brother, @PERSON1 who is @NUM3 now. @CAPS1 felt like @NUM2,000 years’ @CAPS1 was ??? long I couldn’t wait but I had to use patience to wait. He was due on @DATE2, but instead he was out on @DATE1. When I came to the ????. Finally at @NUM5 am on @DATE1 my brother @PERSON1 was finally born ??? @NUM2 long months. The ??? a time I used ???",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19063,7,"I woke up at around @NUM1 am not feeling very good. I was at my friend @CAPS1 house. I tried to wait it out until he woke up, but I just couldn’t wait so I woke her up. I told her I wanted to go home so I my mom, and in about @NUM2 my mom had come to pick me up. I told her that I thought I was ground  ????????? I had to wait and wait until finally we got home it took about two hours until  ??? threw up I was horrible  ?????????? illegible",11,9,,20,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18405,7,My mom was patient when she was in line for her drivers licence it took three hours to get her drivers licence. She was angry but she was patient. And the lady that would give the drivers licence took a break when she came back my mom waited another three hours an she still was patient I was there too and I was patient but I wanted to yell at the lady for taking a break and making us wait for her for one extra hour. And another time my mom waited in line under the rum it was burning the only thing she did to cool down was drink for about two hours under eithy one degrees an she was still patient.,8,6,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11881,5,"The mood in this memoir is heartwarming.This memoir is heartwarming because it's about her parents came from Cuba to the @CAPS1. S. It's nice how the blonde-brick house was better but still the same as the house their parents lived in. The Cuban music filled the air of the house like it was a house in Cuba. A house isn't a house untill you call it a home. That family has made that their home forever. Even though their family can't come down till 1970 they too will have a place to call home like Narciso Rodriguez did. Like he said in the memoir ""I will never forget how my parents turn this simple house into a home"".",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1102,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think that the computer is not a bad thing becase of three resons one reson is that we can learn a bought a faraway place. Another reson is they teach hand-eye coordination. The last reson is we can talk to frteinds and meet new people. From the computer we can learn a bought a faraway place if we were doing a report on it or just our of curiosity. We can learn wat kind of plantation grow there for food for example tropical places grow bananas and cocanuts. We can learn wat they eat like in @LOCATION1 they eat many beans a lot of there food have beans even there salads. We can find out there language as well maybe they talk spanish like in @LOCATION2. You can also teach hand-eye coordination becase it involves using your fingers and eyes to see what you are typing. You use ur hands on evry thing while typing wether you are typing or you are using the mouse. But it is not just for learning things it is also for freinds becase of al these sites like myspace, facebook, aim, webchat. The posibilities are endless u can even play games. If you dont know someone on face, book, or myspace thats okay it is a great way to meet new people and new freinds. And another thing if u are having trouble findin freind you can just see if they are online. It is good for getting together somwhere or something. And for those pepole who think it is taking away family time you can always just say okay thats enough and talk to them. So that is it they are good because u can learn of places, hand-eye coordination, and talk to new and old freinds. so they are good",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16312,6,Some of the obstacles the builders of the empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there- are The Steel frame of the empire State building would have to be modified and strengthened to accommodate this new situation. over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings frame work. Another obstacle that they faced is that dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State Building was an existing law against airships flying to low over suburban areas. The greatest obstacle is the violent air currents would make the back of the Ship swivel around the mooring mast.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18517,7,"As  I get older my tolerance for patience has grown bigger. I was six and foretaken when my mother had told me to wait to get my gifts on christmas. After she said that I was angry at her and stomped to my room. I flopped hard on my bed and then eventually fell asleep. My mother had come in my room and told me I was allowed to open my presents, but before she did she said I need to have patience. Now as I’m older, I know most right from attitudes, so when christmas comes I don’t care about the gifts I remember when she had told me to be patient to receive because you might not be able to get everything you want and when your patient and listen to what your mother tells you to do so she can explain that I might not get alot or what I want. so now my patience is great for most things but since then I dont wanna rush and miss the details of what people have to say or I might get dissapointed. Patience is a thing where if you dont have it, then things wont be understood sometimes and things could not turn out the way you wanted them too. Enthusiasum is different from patience. Patience means when you wait and don’t want to. Enthusiasum is when you exited. People get those confused, so when a child is excited look for details and don’t say be paitent say calm down because they could take it the wrong way if you dont tell them why. In conclusion these are ways I was taughht to act, so please take my words into consideration, they could help.",8,6,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9864,4,The auther concluded the story with this paragraph because this shows that Saeng is willing to change and she wants to do so by the time spring comes. By change Saeng wants to feel comfertable in @LOCATION1 and be able to remember things from where she used to live and not have to break down and cry. Also the author use the geese because they need to leave home earely year and they deal with it so Saeng can deal with it as well.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1253,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think that computers are bad because you will be wonign to do no homework because people are playing to much computers and they are getting aditivf to the computers and it is dayise because you mit be talking to people that you don't now on thr computer and it is the vary dagis because it is the sam thing as haveing a myspace on teh computer it is vaery dangish because ther are dad people that be going on the computer and people be pating bad stuf on the computer.",2,2,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1152,1,"Dear local newspaper, I am writing to you today about how more and more people are using computers. I think that this is great. The reasons why I think so is because it teaches hand-eye coordination, it gives people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and it also allows people to talk online with other people. Keep reading to find out more. The first reason why I think that more and more people are using computers is because it teaches people better hand-eye coordination, for example, there could be a program for the computer that teaches you to type with your hands and not just your index fingers. You then can learn how to do all this without even looking at the keyboard. Keep reading for more information. The second reason why I think that more and more people are using computers is because it gives people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. For example, if you have a project for school and you are doing research on another country, you could use your computer to get more information about their religions or just the whole country in general. You can also use the computer to look up different kinds of people. You can look up people like @PERSON1 from @DATE1's to @PERSON2 who is our presiden now. Keep reading for more information. The last reason why I think that more and more people are using computers is because it allows people to talk online with other people. For example, you could set up and account on facebook, myspace, @CAPS1, or @CAPS2 and start talking to people. You could get to know some kids who live in you neighborhood that you never even knew. Keep reading to find out more. Lastly, I think that more and more people are using computers is agreat thing. They can learn hand-eye coordination, have the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and have the opportunity to talk to other people online. I talked to the people who have just started to use computers and @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people said that they had liked what they had seen. So, I want you to go out there and get a computer and see what you think about it. Thank you.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9480,4,I think that the concluding paragraph means after everything   else   important and what is meant to happen happens then she will take the test because its  basically the last  thing has to happen and I think she will pass it because it meant to happen.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6137,3,"The features of the setting affects the cyclist because the worst the features get the more he wants water. For example, in the essay it said at some point, tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridiculous large snake blocked the majority of the pavement in front of me when I think of tumbleweeds I think of dryness because it is like dry grass and when I think of snakes I think of heat because that is the time for snakes to come out when ot gets hot. So the cyclist was thinking about dryness of his throat and the dryness of his sorrounding making him want water. Another feature is when he seen a sandblasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth probably making the cyclist wishing he could have that cold refreshing drink.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3888,2,"Should offenive material be censored? No, censoring books, music, movies, magazines, etc. takes away from our freedom as an american citizen.  If you think books should be censored, then think about this.  Would they take 'hell' or 'damned' out of the bible because those words are considered offensive?  I do not think so, those words give power to the book.  @CAPS1 books, considered offensive, are an insigh to history and culture.  Taking away these books will limit education.  Books should not be censored.         I very resent and much talked about case of censorship is the popular book '@ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1.'  The book tells the story of a young white boy running off with an older black man.  In the story, the word 'nigger' is used frequently.  A lot of people were offended by the using of this word, so they republished a new version of the book, replacing 'nigger' with 'slave.'  @CAPS1 people were happy with the word change, but others felt that by censoring the word they were taking away a very vital part of the story.  I agree with the latter statement.  The story's setting was back when black people were slaves and known as niggers.  I agree that the word nigger carries a heavy connotaion, but that is the purpose of using the word.  The author used it so that the reader could get a feel for what life was like back then.  When thinking about the coming generations, who will not know about slavery or black oppression, the book gives a raw insight into how life was for a black man. The word itself is a symbolism of slavery, without it, the book is not as powerful.       Censorship is a fine line, and everybody has a different place where they draw that line. The story of @ORGANIZATION1 is just one example of censorship.  On television, nudity and language is censored when dubbed inappropriate.  It should be up to the parent to decide which books there child should read, which magazines they should buy, and which television programs they should watch.  If the parent sees the book as offensive or think that there child should not read it, then they should be the ones who makes sure their child does not read it.  The books should not be taken of the shelf because they will entertain and educate other children or parents.  Books should not be censored, if a person does not think the book is appropriate, then they do not have to read it.",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18626,7,"“Patience is a virtue.” You might hear that phrase a lot if you dislike waiting on things for a long period of time. Here’s a question for my audience what is patience? Do you know? Well in my essay, I’m going to discuss patience and how it affects our lives. In this day and age, it’s very hard to come across someone with a decent amount of patience. Due to all the ``@CAPS1” services and goods such as pizza delivery @NUM1 minute wash & dty acts people have begun to lose patience. What our generation has yet to realize is that we need that patience to get good jobs and get nice amounts of money. Another reason people need patience is their family. If you lack patience you wont be able to deal with your young and immature family members. For example I have no patience whatsoever so I can’t deal with anyone younger than @NUM1 years old. That will affect me in very negative way. Those are the pro’s and con’s of having patience thank you for reading my essay.",7,7,,14,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14917,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in an attempt to allow dirigibles to dock this included not being able to put a mooring mast at the top of the building in fear that because the dirigible was being held by a ""single cable"" it ""would add stress to the buildings frame."" @CAPS1 with the amount the dirigible @PERSON1 and the wind the buildings frame would not be strong enough and would have to be ""modified and strengthened."" Another obstacle in attempting to get the dirigibles to dock was the wind. The building was high up @CAPS1 the wind currents were volatile and ""constantly shifting"" in result the back of the dirigibles ""would swivel around and around the mooring mast."" @CAPS2 obstacle faced by the builders was that they were trying to build the mooring mast in an urban area with other buildings, close by the dirigible could be pierced and would also be dangerous for the pedestrians in the city.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9326,4,"I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph because she fells to live the geese and her memories relate to the times she sees the geese. I think that her test is in school but she has believe that she’ll pass it by remembering her memories she fells conected to the outside ness. For example, she loves flowers. Thats why I think the author concludes the story with that paragraph.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7261,3,"The setting affect the cyclist in many gruding and harsh was. First, the lack of civilization contributes to an uneasy feeling and an inability to refill his water bottle. Second, the heat and uphill bottles are taking their tollon both aplists physical and mental strength. Third, his water bottle is emptying at an alarming late due to his third and relentless heat. In paragraph four die exospodent cyclist reaches the first ''town.'' This place @MONTH1 have been a striving spell but on that morning it fit the traditional definition of ghost down.” @CAPS1 he came to house with a rusty water pump, which sped out brackish, near boiling water, which did not support the porched cyclist, physically, on mentally.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20958,8," People say laughter is the shortest distance between two people. A @ORGANIZATION1 I saw @CAPS6 to be true was when I met a girl named @PERSON1. Three years ago I was at a city @CAPS10 swinging, wondering if it would hurt if I jumped. I took @CAPS15 chances and let go of the swing chains, flying through the air , noticing the unbalanced feeling of falling in @CAPS15 chest, everything slowing down, the temptation of what will happen when I hit the ground was vast. Sticking the landing was a fail and getting up from it wasn't much of a success either, until I felt hands upon @CAPS15 shoulder and arm. I looked up at @CAPS15 helper and saw a girl. Not @CAPS5 a girl but a gorgeous girl. A girl with green dazzling eyes that can stop an angry rhino charging toward her, hair the flowed with the wind, soft, gentle skin that would make you think that @CAPS11 could be hurt for how soft it was.""@CAPS1."" Was all I could squeeze out.""@CAPS1, are you okay?"" @CAPS3 asked with a very concerned tone.""@CAPS4 I'm fine, @CAPS5 forgot to stick the landing. Thanks for helping me, um whats your name?"" I returned with a @NUM1, and your welcome. whats your name?"" @CAPS6 @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS3 giggled before @CAPS3 said her name.""@CAPS7, do you want to walk around with me?"" I struggled to vocalize.""@CAPS8, but I have to @CAPS9 at the @CAPS10 because @CAPS15 mom will be here soon."" @PERSON1 stated. during the walk around the @CAPS10 we stopped at a monkey dome and started asking each other random question's that the other person had to answer. I figured out that @CAPS3 was @NUM2 years old, her favorite color was baby blue and @CAPS3 always wanted to be a doctor. we walked around the playground some more @CAPS5 talking about past memories or something that happened to each other in the past. I asked her if @CAPS3 had a brother and sister. her response was that @CAPS3 does have a brother, and two sisters. While I was listening to her I noticed @CAPS3 was very deep into thought and asked what @CAPS3 was thinking about and @CAPS3 quickly replied. ""@CAPS11, @CAPS5 wondering why I'm so happy with you.""""well it could be that I'm making you feel good by laughter. Or it could be @CAPS15 charms working on you."" I replied with a @CAPS12 accent.""@CAPS13 @CAPS4 its definitely that."" @CAPS3 barely got out the words cause of laughter. Suddenly there was a car horn honking and we said our goodbye's and @CAPS3 left. I sat there watching the car go down the road and was hoping that we @MONTH1 see each other again, but in a way I knew we wouldnt because @CAPS15 mom, and I were moving from the city to a small town half way across the country. Turning around and walking back toward @CAPS15 house for the last night in the city all I could think about was her and how a little bit of laughter became the @CAPS16 to friendship.",17,18,,35,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13420,5,I think this is the @CAPS1 Childhood. This memoir is about A young girl that tells about her life and. her parents life. is saying when did her parents @CAPS2 from Cuba to the United @ORGANIZATION1 in 1956. It says wen she was born in 1961 & she saying she was born in a simple house. This @CAPS1 is saying about The little girl's family wen did they @CAPS2 & were did they lived.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18094,7,"@NUM1 years ago our immigration limit had ran out. We needed green cards to become @CAPS1 @CAPS2. So we went to an immigration center in deproit. We walked up to the front desk and told the lady we were here. She told us to go sit it in the waiting erea. There was about @NUM2 people there! I knew we were going to be here a while that point forward. We went to the waiting erea. I had no way of amusing myself. It stricktley said in the front, no gaming devices, no musical devices. All phones must be switched off. It was tourcher. After about an hour and a half they called our name. I was so pleased. After we got our finger prints and everything completed and we walked out to the car, my mom said she was very pleased of the way I behaved in that office.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
603,1,"Dear @LOCATION1 @CAPS1, @CAPS2 are high tech devises that allow us to connect with friends and family in other places like france or @LOCATION2, allow us to research new information, perhaps for a school project in school project in school and even play addicting games, Computers have moderized our life, and it's affect on human being is dispicable. We have taken these simple devices to far and haven't used them in moderation. Did you know that at least an hour @MONEY1 exercise is needed everyday? Well @CAPS3 from all over the world are not getting enough exercise because @MONEY1 computers. Parents hard earned money is being wasted away on these extremely expensive computers, they can pay anywhere from @NUM1! What a waist @MONEY1 money! @PERCENT1 @MONEY1 kidnappings are caused because @MONEY1 to much information on the internet, do you want that for your child. Computers were once helpful devices that have now turned in to @CAPS4 worping machines. @PERCENT2 @MONEY1 the world's @CAPS3 are obese today. Why are they abese you ask? @CAPS3 are growing fast they are meant in be active and playful and without any active sport like dancing nor basketball they are going to grow big. Kid's spend as much a @NUM2 hours a day on a @CAPS2, and not keeping active, @CAPS2 pull kid's in like a magnet. This obsessive @CAPS2 time leaves no time to keep healthy active and fit. I remember one time when one @MONEY1 my friends, @PERSON1 got a new computerShe wouldn't come out and play basketball with us anymore she just stayed inside. Eventually saly became obese and got diabetes. Parents is this what you want for your @CAPS3? Do you want to pay for a machine that makes your @CAPS3 extremley whealthy? Times are tough, money is tight and electronics are expensive. A @CAPS2 can cost anywhere from @MONEY4 TO EVEN @MONEY3 that is a ton @MONEY1 money. Parents work hard hours, for exampe @NUM3 that is a long day and probably dont make enough money to be waisting it on a @CAPS2. An average houshold spends @MONEY2 on computers in a lifetime. Do you really want to be buying your @CAPS3 a machine that costs an outragous amount @MONEY1 money that will only make your @CAPS3 unhealthy and pull them away from their sports? I remember when my mom bught me a new @CAPS2 for @NUM4 dolllars and the next day it broke. What a waist @MONEY1 money. Help your @CAPS3, don't buy a @NUM2,000 dollar @CAPS2, keep your @CAPS3 active and healthy. Make sure your green stays in your wallet. Hey, a small window pops up you screen. Who are you, you respond in an voice, @CAPS7, your freind @CAPS8's friend says the little window. You respond with an @CAPS7 hi, hey you want to come over, it's the cook thing, @CAPS9 ok you respond. What's wrong with this situation? Well a lot @MONEY1 things are but this happens to @PERCENT3 @MONEY1 online chatters. Just remember online you can be whoever you wont to be you could be only ten, but say your @NUM6. So many @CAPS3 are kidnapped because @MONEY1 online chatting. You can talk to your @CAPS3 all. you want but it doesn't mean thy won't be in that situation. The less time your child spends on the @CAPS2 the less chance will have @MONEY1 being kidnapped, The @CAPS2 is so dangerous, would you ever put your child in danger. Computers used to be helpful devices full @MONEY1 information, enjoyment and talks with aunt's uncles, and even your friend @PERSON2. Now these computers have transformed into pursuading boxes full @MONEY1 hamful side affects. Do you want your child feeling the wind in their ears the sound @MONEY1 their heart pumping vigurously and the smell @MONEY1 grass on do you want them to experience the bright screen in their eyes and the thrill @MONEY1 just beating level @NUM7? Do you want to spend @MONEY1 on unhealthy contraptions? and lastly do you want your @CAPS3 put in danger by simply just using a @CAPS2 at home. Computers are @CAPS4 morphing devices that take away @CAPS3's points in life. Do you want thet for them.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
99,1,"Dear @CAPS1: Have you been sent a photo of a @NUM1 year old child with no clothes on? Well, if you have this is called sexting. It can be put on the computer or any type of device. People should stop using Computers more because it can lead to bad things like sexting from teens, bad for the younger kids, and teens could be, talking to someone they don't know. Lexi @NUM1, says that ""she has goting facebook texts to her cell phone of other teenage kids that are excuset"". @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 population teenagers have @CAPS2, @CAPS3 and @CAPS4 chat. Any of these websites can ford photos to their mobile device. This has goting out of the hand and what ever is on the computer now will be on forever. More childern under the age of @NUM3 years old are on the computer know. Where there are chat rooms were they can interact with others. For example, @PERSON1 is a childerns game that has a chating interaction, were you can talk to who ever. But, we you create this @PERSON1 you child has to give a parents email address were they have to read the following terms to chose for their child. But, most parents don't even read it . @PERCENT2 of these parents just agree to these terms and don't even read them. @PERSON2, was followed home from soccer practice when a man about @NUM4"" and around the age of @NUM5 said ""@PERSON2 come get some candy"" @PERSON2 said ""how do you know my name""? ""@CAPS5 said cause I play with you all the time"" @PERSON2 quickly ran home and @CAPS5 told his parents. @PERSON2 plays on @CAPS6 another intraction game and told this stranger @CAPS5 lives in @LOCATION2 field and @CAPS5 goes to @LOCATION2 @CAPS7. Giving strangers you information they can trace you down and find the street you live on. We need to keep our children safe and off of the computers more so sexting, and young children stay off, so kidnapping stops. Help @LOCATION1, @CAPS8 to become a safe place for our childern.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16627,6,"The builders of the Empire State building had numerous obstacles in their way if they planned on allowing dirigibles to dock there. The first and most serious problem was the safety of the passengers as well as pedestrians on the street below. Dirigibles are filled with hydrogen which is highly flammable. In 1937 in New Jersey the dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by a fire. This catastrophe would have been worse if it were take place over the heads of people in New York city.Nature also posed a huge threat to the completion of the docking mast. Due to the air currents on the top of the building the blimp (dirigible) would constantly be shifting. The only way to control the swaying of the blimp would be to use weights to hold the blimp down, which would again put the public at risk.Along with natural hazards it would have been illegal for the blimps to dock at the Empire State building because of an existing law. The idea to allow dirigibles to dock at a mooring mast atop the Empire State Building is completely impractical.",4,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1442,1,"I think @CAPS1's should use computer's so they can help their self's by using a computer? First @CAPS1's should use computers because if they wanted to take notes on what their doing they can just go on the computer and write it. The Computers are faster than just writing. On a computer all you have to do is type. You can use a computer to look up what ever you want to look for example: the teacher ask to look up a giraffe. The only place you can find a giraffe is if you go on the computer and search a giraffe. That's a reason how to look up things it is easier to look up things instead of looking it up the most way. Lastely, if you have a project you have to and it involves pictures and you dont know how to find it all you just to do is go on the computer find what you searching for and then we are done after you found everything that you see @CAPS2 to let students use computers insde classroom/schools for the they can get easy help.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20852,8," Laughter is a very important part of life, for many different reasons. Some @MONTH1 say that its vital to survive, one needs laughter to have a full and rich life. Sometimes laughter can hurt more than it helps. This is a statement I myself believe, and have concluded from the actions and outcomes in my life. Laughter can show emotions towards a statement, or lack of emotions. Laughter can make someone either depressed or happy. It is true when someone says there is a difference when someone is laughing at you, as opposed to someone laughing with you. When a friend or a group of friends laugh with me, its an amazing, self esteem raising emotion. This laughter brings friends closer, and causes us to trust each other more. One time I thought laughing was appropriate at the time but then later felt awful. One scorching @DATE1 day my friends and I decided to venture to the mall, being we lived in apartments and lacked the money for an air conditioner. We all agreed it was a splendid idea. When we reached the mall we were relieved by the cool breeze as the doors swung open, as if to greet us. All of us are very introverted so shopping around in an over crowded mall wasn't our cup of tea. Not knowing what to @CAPS1 we sat on a bench and did what we call people watching. Their was this girl, I will always remember her; @CAPS4 was one of those girls you peer at just for a minute and you know @CAPS4 was rich. A sort of stuck up girl, a walk where @CAPS4 means to exaggerate her hips and bounce her perfect bleach blond hair.  The girl passed by us and stuck her nose in the air as if we were not even remotely good enough to be in her presence. Quite a bit angry I stood up after @CAPS4 strolled past and mocked her strut. My friends found this hysterical. Roars of laughter leaped from their mouths. The pressy girl stopped proceeding forward and then started approaching us. @CAPS4 grimaces at us all snobby-like and says, ""@CAPS1 you guys like have a problem or something?"" @CAPS2 covered my face, I didn't know what to say. Fortunately my best friend stepped in and said, ""@CAPS3, we think your dress is very pretty."" @CAPS4 believed us, then walked off, in a rather less snobby sort of way.  Through this weird and interesting experience my friends and I learned a lot. One, people can hear you talking crap about them from a mile away. Two, laughter can bring friends together, but can also have some consequences. I @CAPS1 not know for sure if @CAPS4 did hear or see us mocking her. But I knew inside I felt a little bad. Sure laughing at her in the time felt right, amusing. Looking back on it, I feel awful. I have been in that same situation but on the receiving end. It is not pleasant having people talking crap about you behind your back and laughing uncontrollably. Laughing is very vital to life but needs to be appropriate.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18767,7,"Patient day. I remember the time when I was patient for a toy car. Four @CAPS1 I hate to waent for @NUM1 whole days. Each day it felt like I was in jail. So I was getting mad each day slaping people in the face it was so funny so my @CAPS2 @CAPS3 was mad at me. then my mom put me on punishment. Then couple days later I was dooing good in school. So my mom was so proud of me. Then she bout me a lot of stuff. Later that chirstmas day we had turkey ranch dressing. Then I open my presents. I got the toy car, @NUM2, monster truck cars shoes and @ORGANIZATION1’s blue, red, @CAPS4 any collars you can think of. So that is why I was patient that toy I was so happy and my @CAPS5 stop by and gave me @NUM3 dallers. Then he took me ice @CAPS6 shade to were these skinny tites. But it all worked out for me at the end. I got every thing I wanted and I want a load touch with the @NUM3 @CAPS7. It felt like I was rich for chirstmas day.",6,7,,13,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18923,7,"It  was a cold @DATE1 @TIME1 and the @NUM1  and @NUM2 grade football teams were playing at  different  times one at @NUM3 and one at @NUM4 and of course there was @CAPS1 leaders, and I just happened  to be one of them. The game starts at about @NUM3 o’clock and we started cheering. After about @NUM3:15 we were getting very cold we were wareing our warm-ups but we were still cold. So now that we were cold we were  getting kind of cranky. As half time came it was even colder. We all took a brake and went and got some hot chocolate. Well of corse  we were in a hurry to get back to the  bleachers to sit down, well I started to walk faster and faster then I dropped my hot cholate  down the front of me. Well I was mad but I’m a @CAPS1 leader so I have to be happy. Then we started cheering again and it was colder than when we started but we just kept cheering but then some of the @CAPS1 leaders decided they wanted to take off there warm-ups and if more pepole want to take them off well all have  to take them off so we did. And we froze  but we held in there until the @NUM7 game was over. Then we all went home and probubly went to bed.",11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
684,1,"Dear Newspaper, @CAPS1 has come to my attention that there is an ongoing debate about the issue stating that not everyone agrees that computers benefit society. I can't understand why. Computers present many oppurtunities for people. They allow for people to communicate with each other, they allow people to research topics in a simpler way, and they teach hand-eye coordination. This is why I agree that computers do benefit society. In the modern world, nearly all businesses rely on communication. Many people in those businesses use not only phones to communicate, but computers as well. Online communication is a fast, simple, and effective way for people to communicate whether @CAPS1 is at home or at work. This is one way computers benefit all of society. Nobody knows everything, we are always trying to find out about new things that we neven knew. Sometimes we @MONTH1 use books, but the way most people use is online researching. This is because not only is @CAPS1 quicker, but simpler as well. When you research online, the information literally comes to you. All you do is type a subject to @CAPS1. @CAPS1 is another reason why computers do benefit society. The final reason is that computers teach hand-eye coordination. This shows because as time progresses while you are on the computer you realize that typing becomes easier. @CAPS1 might take a while, but over time people get the hang. @CAPS1's as @CAPS1 the computer is letting you teach yourself. Some people would say that people spend too much time on computers. This isn't a problem though because people have to spend long periods of time on computers in order to do the beneficial things that computers have to offer. In conclusion, you can see that I have clearly stated the benefits of computers. They allow us to communicate, research, and improve our hand-eye coordination. This is why computers do benefit society.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20826,8," Bell rings.  Shuffle, shuffle. @CAPS1. Snap. EEEE. Crack. Slam. Click, stomp, @CAPS1. Tap tap tap. SLAM. Creak. Shoof, shoof.  Sigh. Seventh class of the day. Here we go. ""@CAPS2! Tu va ou pas? On a +¬tude cette class-l+á. Tu peux aller au bibliotheque si tu veux...."" @CAPS3 all blinked at me, @PERSON1, @NUM1le and @ORGANIZATION1, chocolate-haired and mocha skinned, impatiently awaiting my answer. The truth was, I knew @CAPS3 didn't really care if I came or not. It made no difference to them if I trailed a few feet behind like some pathetic puppy. I was silent but adorable, loved only because I was an @CAPS4. Because I spoke fidgety @CAPS5. Because I was the exchange student, because my translator and colorful clothes were so shocking for ten seconds, and were then forgotten about.  I was a flock of seagulls haircut. So why are you here? I thought. Why did you go on exchange at all? You are the complete opposite of everyone here. No one wants you. Just go home.  But my ego had a ready answer. You begged for this remember? For months and months, it was all you wanted, all you thought about, all you dreamt about. So I went with the girls. As expected, @CAPS3 walked down the three-person wide staircase side-by-side, and I shuffled awkwardly behind them. Finally arriving at @NUM2scalier, we sat at a table, the three girls talking. I glazed my eyes over, attempting to look lost in thought, as if I didn't care I wasn't included. Selfish thoughts buzzed in my head; if @CAPS3 weren't talking to me, why should I make the effort to talk to them?   I really had no idea how @CAPS3 felt about me. How does someone feel about their shadow? @CAPS3 notice it, sure, but it never offers up insight, it never makes you laugh. It's all in the confidence, said my mother's voice, all how you carry yourself. But I knew it wasn't that simple. I was just too alien. These girls would never understand me, as I would never understand them. In frustration, I started to flick peas across the room with my spoon. Pat, flick, sproing.  This caught the interest of @PERSON1, as @NUM1le and @ORGANIZATION1 were discussing something very emotional. Tears began to pour out of @ORGANIZATION1's eyes. Sniffling, she and @NUM1le went to the bathroom, leaving me all alone with @PERSON1. Only @PERSON2 could have felt my felt my same emotion as he stared up at @CAPS6. Silently, I continued shooting peas. @PERSON1 just stared at them as @CAPS3 darted around the room. Suddenly, with a horrible miscalculation, a pea hit a boy in the face. And then, he turned around and swore. And then, @PERSON1 and I looked at each other from across the table.  And then, we laughed.  We laughed so hard I cried. So hard that huge, alien tears flooded from my eyes. People around us were laughing too, even though @CAPS3 had no idea what was so funny. I didn't even know what was so funny. But it didn't matter, because we were dripping tears and snot, reaching for each other, reenacting the pea hitting the boy's face. It was as if we had been friends for years, and laughing happened all the time. It was saturated with all the angst and lonliness and despair I had felt the past four weeks. The connection we felt was instantaneous, like lightening, the kind of connection I felt with my best friends back home. I felt that huge swelling sensation in my chest, like a balloon was stuck inside. My stomach was aching and my cheeks were so sore I felt them seizing up. My heart felt whole even for that second. My soul was open. It was the best laugh of my life.  Sniffle sniffle. GASP. Laughter. GASP. Swipe of tears. Sniffle sniffle. Laughter. GASP. This is why. I thought. This is why you came.  Bell rings.",30,30,,60,,,,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9394,4,The author concludes with with paragraph because Saeng has to take the test all over. She @MONTH1 think theres a better chance when it blooms and the snow melts. So that is when Saeng is going to try and take the test after the snow melts and the hibiscus blooms,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18688,7,"This is a story about patience, pateince is when someone gives you a older or specific job to do. Then you do the job or order with no @CAPS1 askd even if you dont wont to do it last week my mom told me to cleam the living room even know it was hard I still did not it. Even know I did not want to do it was unfair",4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15903,6,"In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building, the builders went through many obstacles. Dirigibles are steel frames balloons, with envelopes or cotton fabric filled with hydrogen and helium to make them lighter than air. Dirigibles could be maneuvered by the use of propellers and rodders and passengers could ride in the gondola, under the balloon.A dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the buildings frame. The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below. over @MONEY1 worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings framework. Also the law against airships flying to low over urban areas. This law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the building.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4378,2,"Whever you go these days you see viloence in evry store around the world. Children growing up in the world is our future and they see that negative output. Alot of the kids and young adults thrive off of the offensive materials the world puts out there.               I think that the offensive thing's should be taken off the shelves. And sold in stores for adults that are twenty one and older. If people sell offensive things in stores were it allows young teenagers to buy those products , then we are just puting ourselfs at harm. I was just in a book store the other day and i seen magazines that were not apporiate. I thought to myself how could they sell these types of magazines. Music , movies, and magazines shouldn't even be sold in a book store , that's why its called a book store.                It's not called a movie, music , or magazine store they call it a book store for a reason. If students read books or listen to music that is offensive they are going to grow up thinking it's ok. Too be that way or treat somebody different because of who they are or what they represent. I'm not saying take all the books out of the store just take the offensive one's and have a twenty one or older sign. So the kids dont end up getting a hold of the book and learning something they shouldn't.               When i was young i went to the book store all the time with my mom. I would just pick up any book there was and start trying to read. Alot of the time my mom would take the book from me. Because it was offensive, i didn't know that at the time i was just a little kid. In today's society kids are growing up quicker than they really have to and thats not a good thing. Kids should be able to be kids and read kid's books.               I guess it does'nt really matter for middle school and high school kids. Because those kids really dont like to read at all. The kids that we have to look out for is the one's in elementary. Because those kid's actually want to learn how to read. And if we put a book about drugs on the shelve those kids will read it. And those kids will learn about it and be curious to what that drug has a effect on you.               In the end it does'nt really matter what i say because people are going to keep making books. Anytime type of book it is all based on how much money they can make. It does'nt matter if it is negative or a possitive book. the company wants to make money and so does the author.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6837,3,"The cyclist in the story is running into a lot of problems in this story. For example, the cyclist is out in the summer heat in California riding a bike. After several minutes of this, you will become thirsty. The cyclist brought water but after constant sweating the water supply has nearly ran out. Not having enough water can cause a person to become deyhdrated which then can cause them to pass-out and possibly die. So as you can see, the cyclist is affected by the setting in the story. He has been affected negatively by the heat and by the lack of water.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15534,6,"In the short story of ""The Mooring Mast."" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted describes three obstacles of the builders of the Empire State Building faced for the attemption to allow dirigibles to dock there. Two resons were safty. The first ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable"". A flammable ship above a ""densely populated area such as dowtown New York could result in desistiar. The second safty reson was due to ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifing due to Violent air currents."" Dirigibles ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street, was neither Practical nor safe."" The final obstacl the Empire State Building faced was Law. ""An existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" ""This Law would make it illegal for a ship to ever tie up to the buildings or even approach the area."" The Law and to safty obstacles the builders of the Empire' State Building faced would not allow any attempts for dirigibles to dock there.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18008,7,When I was in fourth grade and I was going to a concert and I had to be very patient. I was waiting in a long line to get in. While I was in line I started talking to my friends we played games and walked a few steps up every a minutes. I sat there and walked up with my mom and sat down again and it was just seemed like the line wasn’t moving at all! Finally we got up to the front and me and my friends were so excited. Being patient payed off because if I would have bothered my mom too much she might have gotten mat at me. I had a lot of fun after I got into then concert. That was a time that I was patient.,8,7,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15401,6,"The builders didn't have a suitable landing area for the Dirigible, and if the Dirigible were to land on the Empire State Building's flat roof would add stress to the building. Money was one of the big issues the builders faced. In paragraph @NUM1 its saying that the greatest obstact was nature, The heavy winds on top of the building were shifting due to the violent air current. for the Dirigible itself would be swivel around the mooring mast, and for the safety of the people as well. Another obsticle was the law, that flying too low over urban areas were not allowed.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12245,5,"In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez from Home: The Blueprints of our loves the author creates a mood in the memoir. The mood that he creates is a relaxed and laid-back mood.The way the author writes is very smooth for example ""in 1961 I was born into this simple house, situated in a two-family, blond brick building in the Ironbound section of Newark, New Jersey."" That is a very relaxed sentence.He then goes on about his life. He tells about his neighborhood, family, religion and much more. Towards the end he tells what he is grateful for.The author told this story as if he was being interviewed and he was very relaxed and layed back.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13318,5,"In the memoir, @PERSON1, the author creates a mood that inspires us to try our hardest and that mood is perseverence. The mood perseverence is expressed in the memoir in many ways. One way it is a stress is when @ORGANIZATION1 and @PERSON1 moved to the United States and lived in a one bedroom apartment. They finally saved up enough money to be able to move into a @NUM1 bedroom apartment. In this neighborhood the family raise as much money as possible to buy food for themselves and to help the people that were in need of anything from, water, shelter, and clothing. The reason they move from Cuba was to begin a better life in the United States which they never gave up until the day that they finally had enough money to live here.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3771,2,"Libaries everywhere might have a book or two that @MONTH1 be offensive to a reader. I haven't found a book offensive to my readings just yet. Some people might think that some music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves of the library. But some people are against it, like me. Its going to take more than one person to remove the music, magazines,etc., from the library.     Music in the library is good because you can't find old music like in the @DATE1's in a music store. If someone finds music offensive in the libary it might be because they don't know the history from where the music came from or what the artist has been through. Say for instance the person is offended by hip hop music. I'm sure there's a book for that and the person can look up where the music came from. Maybe then they wouldn't be so offeneded.     Magaizines in the library are really for people who love the media. There are so many magaizines that have interesting facts about what happen or what's going to happen. For example @ORGANIZATION1 has all the newest event or something big that happend, just in that one @ORGANIZATION1. Then there's advertisments, how would people get money if they didn't put there adverstisment in a @ORGANIZATION1 so people could buy there product. If not nobody would buy the products.     Movies in the library are for teachers to show students. Half the stuff in the libary, you can find at blockbuster or walmart. It's because the library has old movies and current events that happened years ago. They might even have a movie to go with the book the reader has read, but some people are more visual with the movie. So they read books.     Overall I hope the music, magazines, and movies stay on the shelves of the libraries and don't change they way the library is doing things. Some books might already be off the shelves that people have complained about or got offeneded by already. So its already too late for that. But its going to take more than one person to be aganist it. So that's my view on taking out music, magazines, and movies out of the library",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1413,1,"Computors have definitely had an impact on society that changed the world. People and life are now smarter quicker, faster, and easier. People who live on opposite sides of the world can communicate in an instant, for free. But what effect does this have on people? Something this big and having such a long history can't be good for some people. I don't think for some people it is. To start with basic, some people get too obsessed with computers. If they have life problems then they @MONTH1 seek the solitude and privacy of unfiltered and limitless internet. Even if you use a computer to chat with people, it still is no replacement for the real thing. In fact, studies show that due to non posonal ways of communicating such as text messaging, email, or chat rooms, can severely restrict a pasons way of connecting with other people. Don't get me wrong here. I do use sites such as facebook to talk to people. So, I'm not going to state that online talk is bad. I think it's a very good way of keeping in touch with people you can't talk to in real life. And, it's a good way to help friends and be there for them. It's done in moderation though. Getting information from the computer is very debatable. Some could say that the people being informed is a good thing, which I agree. Some others could say that knowing too much will make our egos so big that we will be ignorant. I also agree with that. I would also say knowing some things are good, but be careful of knowing too much. One once I find computers to be great in is originallity. In a world where we are raised to kill creativity, I find computers to be part artistic. In a way. It's personally helped me to discover what kind of music, drawings, creations, etc. that I like. I can also share what I've made so everyone can see it. Or listen to it. Or try it for themselves. In conclusion, I think computers are a great tool for use in moderation. Some people who are obsessed, it can be problematic. I think they are a great addition to society though.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10482,4,"I am guessing the author adds this paragraph to tell the reader that when all of the beauty returns, she will try to get used to new thing again.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13576,5,The mood is @CAPS1. The story talks about Cuban culture. He talks about all the @CAPS1 times. All the time he spent with his family celebrating cuban herritage. They would all come over for dinner. Thats how he set the mood.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18455,7,One time my friend was began patients waithing for the teacher wall he was talking to a teacher. Afocer that he was duen talking with a teacher. Then she will get her question that she need. That is a time when my friend that was patients.,4,3,,7,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,0.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
779,1,"Dear local newspaper, Too much technology! Computers have a negative effect on people. First, our country needs to exercise more, and not just sit around, second, we aren't spending enough time caring for our environment. And third, we are losing the ability to communicate with the people around us. Our country has problems with being overweight. Most people blame it on fast food, but it's also because people sit around using computers, and dont think about staying in proper shape. Before computers were made, people were much more fit, and healthy, we need to help our country get back in shape, and take our attention away from the computer, for even just a short while, and we need to exercise! The next reason is that computers don't just have a bay effect on people, but our enveironment too. We spend too much time indoors with technology, and we don't even care about the world around us. Before much technology, people used to plant gardens, and trees, but now that thought hardly crosses our minds. All the electronics these days are making people forget about nature, and that needs to change. The last reason computers have a negative effect is that people dont communicate as well anymore with the people around them. If we communicate so much with people through technology, we are losing the ability to speak and communicate in person, and it ruins relationships and connections between people, like family and friends, so we need to start caring about the people around us, and not always rely on technology. In conclusion, you can see the negative effect computers have on people. We need to excercise more. Also, we need to help our environment. And lastly, we need to communcate better with friends and family. We shouldn't get rid of computers, but just step away and care about the world around you.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15725,6,"The obstacles that builders faced while building the Empire State Building was, first the buildings structure was not strong enough, the winds were too strong, and the law. The buildings structure could not hold a @NUM1 foot dirigible. The winds would make the dirigible move, which could also ruin the frame of the building. Also the law said that the airships could not fly too low over a city. That was some of the obstacles that the workers faced while building the Empire State Building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18724,7,"“so @CAPS1 do you want for your @DATE1?” “A @NUM1” “@CAPS1 else do you want?” A @NUM1” I have been wanting a play station @NUM3 for so long. It’s my thirteenth @DATE1 and I never wanted something more. All my friends had it. Whenever I went over to their house we played night and day. I wanted one… I wanted one really dad. The only exception was that it cost @MONEY1 and I already had a @MONEY2 @DATE1 party, all together it would be a @MONEY3 @DATE1. So my mom and I decided on an agreement @CAPS3 I pay @MONEY4 then she will pay the other half. From that day on I asked everyone for money as a gift for my @DATE1. I don’t want any other presents, I had my eye on the prize. So normally you have a family party where all the relatives come over give you your present and celebrate. I knew thats where I would get my @MONEY4. Everything seemed perfect I had it all planed out. Have the family party couple days after @DATE1 then go buy my @NUM1! I didnt mind waiting two or three days. I figured I would live. “hey mom when are we having the family party?” “@DATE2.” @CAPS2 that moment there was steam coming out of my ears, I could feel my face burning up like I was putting my head in a fire. You @MONTH1 not realize it out @DATE2 is a whole month away from my @DATE1. @CAPS3 waiting @NUM5 days isn’t patient then I dont know @CAPS1. From this day on I still havent gotten my @NUM1 but two days from now I’ll be holding a stack of  cash in my hands and heading to gamertop: @CAPS3 I had to wait any longer I probably wouldn’t have made it. Im not very patient.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4278,2,"Certain books should be removed from, the library because of the materials an  the stuff they show to younger children. One reason they should thake those books of is because some of the are racist against some cultures. Another reason is that some of the books or movies etc., would have things in them that young children shouldnt be looking at or reading. A final reason is that some books just shouldnt be in the librayies at all.     The first reason was that the books should be taken out of the library is because their racist. They should take them off because they can teach young children the wrong things. Also they can teach the children how to treat people different because their reading those books from hte library. They would also get  he wrong idea about peopple  and different cultures.     Second reason why they should get rid of that bad stuff in the libraries is because they would have things in their that young children should not be wacthing or reading. Like they shouldnt have movies with killing and drug dealing or about drinking or anything a child shouldnt be looking at. It gives the children the wrong idea and they will think its okay becasue they seen it in the movies or read it in a book.     Final reason is that they shouldnt just have those things in a library at all or should just have place for where the young kids cant use them. Or they would need a parent or sombody thats eightteen so they wouldnt be able to just get these bad books or movies.     In conclusion libraries shouldnt have books or music or magazines or movies in them at all. They give kids wrong ideas an make them think that its cool or the right thing to do cause they saw it in a movie or read it in a book. That doesnt make it the right thing to do thats why they should get rid of that stuff.",4,3,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4648,2,"Some people believe that certain materials, such as books, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. However, I do not believe they should be removed. People are mature enough to be able to handle offensive material. Most people check out books or movies that they have heard about, so for the most part they know what they are reading @MONTH1 be offensive. Instead of removing the ofensive material, there should just be a warning to let readers know that what they are checking out is considered offensive.           These days, people are mature enough to read offensive material. We see many types of offensive material every day. Examples of this inlcude when we watch the news, we @MONTH1 see numerous offensive pictures or videos. There are also many news stories that many people consider offensive. When a person checks out an offensive book, they are doing so because they want to. Libraries should not revoke a reader's right to read what he/she wants.           Before a person checks out a book or movie, they should look into it to make sure they are okay with what they are getting. This can prevent many problems. For example, say a young reader sees a book that they think looks interesting. If they don't read into it a little bit and just take it home, they @MONTH1 later find that it contains offensive material. However, if they read a little bit about it before they check it out, they will find out it contains offensive material, and can then make the decision on whether or not they still want to read it.           There are many ways libraries can prevent children or other people not mature enough to view the offensive material from seeing it. They can put a warning label on the book or movie to inform people that that particular item is considered offensive. Libraries could even put an age limit on checking out offensive material. Either of these ideas could be an efffective way to ensure that only mature people are checking out anything that is considered to be ofensive.     Libraries should not have to remove books, music, movies, magazines, etc. that contain offensive material from the shelves. If a person wants to check out a book that is offensive, they should be allowed to check it out and read it. Also, people should be intelligent enough to look into whatever item they are checking out before hand so they can be aware of the offensive material. However, to make things even easier, libraries could just put a warning label on offensive material to prevent some people from reading it.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4776,2,"I do believe that  book, magazines, music, movies and etc., should be taken off a shelf if a person wants to read the book or magazine. If another person wants to read the book or magazine they would just have to wait until the book or magazine is returned to the shelf.  If another person wants to listen to music or watch a movie they should also do the same. Sometimes you just have to sit and think what is books, magazines, movies, music and etc., for and why are they on the shelves for if you can't read, listen or watch them. Book and magazine should be read and not just sit and be displayed. Music should be listen to and movies should be watched.     The reason why I agree with the fact magazines and book should be taking off the shelf  is  because they were made to enterain you. A book or magazine is also made to catch the reader attention. Another reason why I  think books or magazines should be removed from a shelf is to learn new thing. An example of learning new things is when you go to school you pick up the classrooom book you  learn different thing like math, you learn about the history, or you learn about different  thing in english class.  Magazines and books were made so that  different people can  take it off a shelf  and look though it even if they only want to look a pictures if it has picture.     The reason why I think music should be taking off the shelf is to listen to different music such as rap, @CAPS1&@CAPS2, gospel,or @CAPS1&@CAPS2 and soul. Also, I think music should be removed from the shelf is because it was meant to heard. Some music can teach you what goes on in a person life or what goes on in their heads.Music can inspire people in different ways.Music is apart of life and most people in the world like to listen it different people that inspir them.     The reason why I think movies should be taking off the shelf is because it is meant to be watched not just sit and let in movie cover entertain the people. Movies can also inspire different people to do different thing, such as become an actor also. Movies tell different stories such as life stories. Movies also give people something to do when they are bored.     To conclude this all up, take movies, magazines, books and music off the but put them back so that other people can enjoy they thing you read, watched, or listened to. Watching movies and listening to music nad reading magazines and books can help people in life and @MONTH1 also inspire people. They were made for very good reasons so don't put them up just to be displayed. Take them and use them for good you want regret it in the long run. Ya'll be suprised what different things you can learn by reading, listening and watching.",3,4,,3,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6932,3,"In the short story, ""Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting plays an extremely important role. The story takes place in sunny California, where the cyclist was pedaling around 12 mph. the heat made his dehydration situation much worse.  “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean.” The cyclist was losing hope, yet he was still determined to find water. This setting was very important to the story, for if it had taken place at @LOCATION1, @LOCATION3, it would not have made sence. The setting contributes to the story by raising the intensity of the situation.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
270,1,"Dear @CAPS1 sun, I find that computers are very useful. They help people in many ways. They let people learn about what is going on in the world, teach hand eye cordination, and let you meet people online. First, people can learn about what is going on around the world. I can find out what is happening where I live by looking up your newspaper. Other people can find out about places they might go. They can find out what the weather is like so they know how to puck when going places. Also, if one of your employees is going camping they can look up a good place to camp and they can look up what kind of dangers there is when you camp so they can avoid them, because if they get sick they can't work. As you can see computers are important. Next, computers teach hand eye ncordination. Many jobs need you to be able to work well with your hands. Lets say one of your printers break down so you call someone to come fix it. They must be able to work well with their hands to fix it. Now lets say the wiring in your lights get messed up. So you call an electrician has to be good with his hands to be able to work with small wires. Both of these people are good with their hands and they could of become that way by using computers. As you can see, computers are important in today's life. Lastly, computers let you meet new people online. Lets say you are all alone after a hard day of making newpapers. You could go online and meet new people in chat rooms and online games. Now lets say that one of your employess just broke up with his girlfriend and he is sad and lonely, so she isn't working as well. He could go on an online dating site and meet the perfect girl. Now when he comes to work he is happier and making more papers and if he makes more papers you make more money. As you can see computers are very important. In conclusion, computers are wonderful machines. They can let people learn about what is going on in the world, teach people good hand eye cordination and let people neet new people online.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6639,3,The features of the setting that affect cyclist depends where they are located. In this story the feeling on “nothing and the desert around him and the heat gave him no hope”. It all depends on where you are cycling. “It didn’t really matter I was going to die.” This quote states his feelings on what was going on through his head while he was dieing of thirst. He felt nothing he was sure he was going to die until he found a sign of civilization that was near and he became better and his hope was raised.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16150,6,"Trying to construct the Empire State Building in a way to allow dirigibles to dock on top of the building, brought up many challenges for the builders. There was a huge saftey issue having the blimps so close to the city. In paragraph @NUM1, the fear of winds that could blow the blimp into other buildings, wrecking them, scared people. The second concern was the fact that the blimp is full of highly flamable gas and if they blimp was ever to burst into flames above a city, much damage would be done to the blimp and New York City. The last major concern is located in paragraph nine. The problem would be the amount of stress the building would take on by having a blimp tied to the top of it. The whole building would have to be reconstructed to help the Empire State Building not take on that stress; In fact, basically every part of the building and blimp would have to be remodeled in order to keep New York City, and the passengers of the dirigible safe.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19265,7,"When I was about seven And my mom was pregnant with my @NUM1 sister. It was the night before she had her. We were all asleep. When my mom started to scream we all went into her room my dad asked her what was going on she said “she coming” my dad raced to the car put it in to gear and left without us and my mom who was about to have a baby. Then when my dad relized he forgot us. So when he got home to pick us up. It was already morning they took us to a room. They prepared my mom up. Me amd my little sister were waiting in the seats next to her. Then when they took her to get an ultrasound we had to wait. It was finally time to deliver her. Me and my sister and grandma had to wait outside the deveiring room we were so paitient it took over an hour to get her out. when they were stiching my mom up the brought my little sister to get all cleand up. When we could see her through the window. I had to see her get her first bath, shots And when the put those patches on her I had thought she was an @CAPS1. But when they brought her to our room my mom looked dead and my @CAPS2 baby sister was so beautiful. My mom said she was so proud of us being so patient waiting for our little sister. My mom said she would name her @PERSON1. And we all liked that name. I was so @CAPS3 that day.",7,12,,19,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3894,2,"You are not elgible to check out this book', says the libranian. You are just too young for this book.      To me censorship laws in libraries are not needed. The common people should have the liberty to check out what ever they please. The people who make the censorship laws should be pleased that young people actually want to read.     Books, music, movies, magazines, etc., are all under censorship. Everyonee takes things in differently, being said some are mature than others. If they want to play that game, or read that book they should be allowed. The person who picks up the product should know how they are and should know if they can handle the material. Therefore they are held accountable for their actions. Isnt that how legal laws are carried out?     If any sort of content is found offensive it still shouldnt be removed from the shelves. Something @MONTH1 seem offensive to one person but someone else @MONTH1 find that interesting. For example, when the newspaper talks about a specific athlete they @MONTH1 say things tha offends his?her fans. They people who are not fans of him/her @MONTH1 find it ammusing; so they should remove the post because some people dont like it. Someone @MONTH1 like that book, music, movie, or magazine dont inconvience them because of a few people.           Interest @MONTH1 vary, but a teen @MONTH1 like the same type of books as an adult. Censorship laws wont  let the teen read the book they likes because of his/her age, and to me that is unfair. It is a new day and age; things have changed from what they once were. Cencorship laws should be wiped out completly. If you @MONTH1 find a book offensive in any way, shape, or form just dont read it. Nobody is forcing to read that specific book; libraries are filled up with a numerous amount of books. There is a book out there that you will enjoy.     In conclusion, certain material shouldnt be removed from shelves if found offensive. Some other peoople @MONTH1 like that same aterial. There shouldnt be censorship laws in libraries at all. That is just unfair, and unjust to some people. Its a new time and age and things are different. People of any age should be able to check out any book they please",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
2996,2,"If the people that are publishing and writing these articles in these magazines then yes, they can feel offensive about the @CAPS7 things inside the magazine or books. These people are going to always find something or some rumor to start a big fight about these @CAPS1 things, those people are called '@CAPS2'. They can find A eazy way to get something started just like that, That's why before i buy A magazine, I take A look inside of first And see If @CAPS3 interested in buying that specific certain book, or magazine. If I don't like the things that I see inside of @CAPS5, then I @CAPS4 not buy @CAPS5, @CAPS5's @CAPS1 As that. If they are @CAPS7, they should immediately be removed from the news stands on the streets of @LOCATION1, @LOCATION6, @LOCATION12, @LOCATION4, @LOCATION2, @LOCATION5, @LOCATION8, @LOCATION9, @LOCATION3, @LOCATION10, @ORGANIZATION1, @ORGANIZATION2, Or @CAPS8 @LOCATION11, @LOCATION7.",1,1,,1,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3595,2,"Libraries are for children, and adults of all ages. Because all people have different views on life, different beliefs, and different feelings, @CAPS4 makes @CAPS4 hard for libraries to please everyone. There are also different genres that people enjoy reading. Some @MONTH1 enjoy romance and comedy, while others like to read action books or mysteries.     Today, libraries have sections dedicated to different genres of materials. They have kids, fiction, informational, and many more. They also have different areas where you can find movies or magazines. But, if there are magazines, books, or movies, that should be viewed only by certain ages, the library should put a warning sign in the areas where those materials are located.      On the back of movies there is a rateing on @CAPS1 bad the movie is. Why not put a rateing on the back of books and magazines? This way people can know what to expect if they read @CAPS4. @CAPS4 would also help them decide if they even want to read @CAPS4. Rateings on the back of magazines and books would help destinguish what age is appropriate for @CAPS4.      Once, when i was visiting the library, there was a man in the check out line, right before me. @CAPS3 was returning the book that @CAPS3 had just read and checking out the new one @CAPS3 had already picked out. When @CAPS4 was finally his turn in line @CAPS3 stepped up to the counter and explained to the sweet, old, lady at the front desk, what @CAPS3 had wanted to do with his books. She simply understood that @CAPS3 wanted to check out and return one. As she was checking him out she was making small talk and asked, '@CAPS1 did you like your book, @CAPS2?' @CAPS3 replied ' @CAPS4 wasn't what i expected. @CAPS4 was completly inappropriate. ' As they disscussed a little more @CAPS4 turned out that there were tons of curse words throughout the entire book. This is one example of @CAPS1 people don't know what to expect when they read a book.      I don't think that libraries should remove materials off the shelves that people have complained about. They should simply do something to let people know what to expect when they read the books, magazines, or movies. Some people @MONTH1 not mind reading a book with a few curse words here and there, but others @MONTH1 find @CAPS4 outragous. Libraries spend their money to buy these books for the communities. Why take a book off if only a few people find @CAPS4 offensive? No one makes those people read those books, its by their choice. Libraries need to figure out some way to reasure people that they will enjoy what they are reading and not be offended by @CAPS4",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4325,2,"My name is @CAPS1 and my views on censorship in libraries are that if any material that are found offensive should be take off the shelves. I have never came across a material that was offensive to me, but maybe someone else has and it really offended them. I'm not the type of person who would start an argument but i am a type of person who will speak whats on my mind and tell you what i believe in.      People are concerned about if libraries take off certain kinds of books that their will not be books left on the shelves for anyone else. I have to say there are other places you can buy books at beside the libraries such as stores as in @ORGANIZATION1, @ORGANIZATION2, and etc. Like i said i have never came across a book that i think should be pulled off the shelf, but of course i don't read a whole lot either but the books i have read i have never came a crossed any that were terrible.     Books that have like how people can kill themselves, or how people get pregnant, and so on, them can be pulled off the shelves, but if you have a child in the library they shouldnt even be in the adult book section anyways, they should be in the kids book section. I have never heard of a kid book that is terrible and that should be pulled off the shelf. Most authors are smarter then that, or at least i would hope so.      Music is a whole story its self. In my opinon if you don't want your kids to listen to adult music then don't let them. I know a lot of music that is bad and that i would never let my children listen to it but i know well enough if i don't want them to listen to it them i'm not going to play it while their around. I grew up around rap music so thats all i listen to, but when i have kids i know what they will be able to listen to and what they wont be able to listen to.      Movies is the one that i have a problem with the most because in libraries, and other places such as, @ORGANIZATION1, and book stores they just put out movies for EVERYONE to see and it doesn't matter what's on the cover or what it's called. Now movies with bad covers and bad titles could be pulled off the shelves such as all the '@CAPS2 @CAPS3' movies. The name of the movies aren't bad but the movie its self is not for a child to see so why even have it out on shelves for kids to see and want to watch it?      Magazines and etc i don't have a big problem with because libraries don't have bad ones, but book stores do such as 'playboy and play girl' but they are usually put back in the very back behind all other magazines so children can't see them only adults can. The only way a child would see them is only if you point them out.      I think i've said all i can say about my opinions and my experiences about books, music, movies, and magazines in libraries that should or shouldn't be pulled off the shelves. I havn't had a lot of experience but maybe that's because i don't have kids yet, i guess i will find out when i do have kids. I happy to explain my experiences and opinions to people who really care and want to know",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19048,7,"I was patient in a plane ride going to @LOCATION1. All I did was stare at towers and buildings as I possed exit them. I was also patient when my little brother. Much got a fly shot and I had to wait in the lobby. The biggets time I’ve ever been patient was with my brother and him going through my patient, breaking all my stuff, biting me with his toys and his constant whining or crying over stuff that he wants.",5,4,,9,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9253,4,The reason that the author concludes the story with this paragraph is because Saeng wants to do some thing good for herself. The reason I said this is cause in the last paragraph it says “Saeng vowed silently to herself “which means she wants what is best for herself.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15104,6,"While attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the mooring mast, Empire State Building building faced many obstacles. One problem they encountered was the use of hydrogen in dirigibles rather than the use of helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable and actually caused a dirigible to be destroyed by fire. Also, the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents, making it difficult for a dirigible to stop swiveling around-a safety hazard for pedestrians below. Lastly, it was illegal for aircraft of any sort to fly so low over urban areas. At first, the idea of the mooring mast was well-liked but in the end it had too many problems and proved to be impractical.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12836,5,"The mood of the author in the memoir is that the author was there and lived there so, the mood was really so, the author was happy. Happy that the authors parents gave him a @CAPS1 and also gave them freedom to start over for there son.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21030,8," I moved to the @LOCATION4from @LOCATION5 with my family when I was just a child. We moved the small town of @CAPS1, @ORGANIZATION2, where we have lived for @NUM1 years. Over the years there have been many difficult times, but we always managed to get through them by laughing together as a family.This past year has been especially trying, and I don't think we would have survived if we hadn't been able to celebrate the tragic time with laughter. My @CAPS2 stayed in @LOCATION5 when we moved to the @LOCATION1 because he was sick and didn't think he could survive the trip. Last year we finally convinced him to @CAPS3 up here with the rest of the family. He moved in with my family and shared my bedroom. It was hard because he snored and made strange noises in his sleep, but I was glad he was with us. When I would wake up tired from lack of sleep, I would just think about the funny noises and laugh.  Then, six months ago, my @CAPS2 was dianosed with a tumor in his brain. There was nothing the doctors could do for him, and they told us he only had a few weeks to live. We were devastated and I couldn't stop crying. We asked @CAPS2 what he wanted to do. He said, ""I want all of you to stop looking like I'm already dead and let's go have some fun!"" That was just like @CAPS2. He said we were going on a trip to @LOCATION2 so he could go to @LOCATION3 before he left this world. I couldn't help laughing at how crazy he could be. Sure enough, when I arrived home from school the next @DATE1, @CAPS2 told us we had ten minutes to grab what we needed and get in the van. He had gone out and rented a @NUM2 passenger van for the trip so everyone in the family could go. We just stared at him. He started laughing and told said, ""@CAPS3 it or you're staying behind!"" I started laughing too, and hurried inside to pack. It was the best trip of my life. @CAPS2 told us all kinds of crazy stories about when he was a boy. Mom wrote some of them down so we could always remember them.  When we got to @LOCATION3 we went on every ride in the park. @CAPS2's favorite was @ORGANIZATION1. He wasn't supposed to ride it because of his condition, but he just laughed and said, ""I""m sure it won't kill me."" @CAPS4 though it made me sad when he said it, I still laughed because he was so happy. Two months after we went home, @CAPS2 died. @CAPS4 though it has been hard and I have cried about it often, I can't help but laugh when I think about that trip and how much fun we had. @CAPS2 taught me that laughter can make all the difference in turning any situation around.",20,24,,44,,,,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12993,5,"The mood the author created in the memoir was happiness. He/she wasn't sad at all because all his/her memories were happy. His/her memories taught him/her what family was. The tone the author gave out was joy. ""Endless celebrations"" ""all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship"". Not one of his/her memories he/she talked about showed any sadness for he made a lifetimes of friends. The author showed us a calm and grateful mood for everything that have happened. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. The author wanted to express a lot of gratitude for what his/her parents have done for him/her. Through his/her parents Narciso Rodriguez have so much happy memories. Narciso Rodriguez's memoir was anything but sad and his/her memories taught him/her family.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8945,4,"The author ended with this paragraph because it is an example of how everything gets a fresh start in the spring. an example of this is that the geese will return home after the winter to start a new family and also in the winter the hibiscus leaves will die and then in the spring they will have a new start, I think the author uses this paragraph last because it’s a metaphor of how everything will get a fresh start and also Saeng will get a new chance to take her driving test just like the plant and geese will get a new chance at life.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
514,1,"Dear @CAPS1, People are using too much @ORGANIZATION1 their time on the computer. Instead @ORGANIZATION1 seeing the @ORGANIZATION1 through their own eyes they are seeing it on videos or in @CAPS2 on the internet. It isn't natural for people to be internet fanatics. Earth is a beautiful planet, it has trees, mountain, seas, and humas. We creators the internet and people love it more man the rock they're standing on. The planet should be explored not surfed in the web. People should see the @ORGANIZATION1 before all natural hand is coverd by cities and factories. People use the internet way to much for plans, for business, for entertainment, for a social life! all @ORGANIZATION1 this has been done with ease before we could even on a light bulb. Life is a gift and people spend it on artifitial life. For example a game, @ORGANIZATION1 is one @ORGANIZATION1 the most popular addictive games ever made. In this game you make a character in a miderth planet while you battle m onster with other players. Some people think that game is funner than life (personaly I think it is) but is not their life. His just a fantasy for people to escape thier meaningless lives. I write this for suport that some day people will understand that this is life. So, live it.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18515,7,"@PERSON1 and his dad were planning on going fishing on that @DATE1 @TIME1. They got everything they needed fishing pots. Tackle box, fishing nets, bait, and lunch. They drove down to the lake, got into their small rowboat and were off. @PERSON1's dad was the first to catch something. He caught a ten inch small mouth bass. It was too small so he threw it back and continued fishing. The lake was quiet today. There was a small breeze in the @DATE2 air. The sun was up but it was still a little cold. The sat there quietly, patiently. @PERSON1's dad got another pull on his line. He quickly reeled it in. this time he caught a twenty inch pike. Another one too small so he threw it back. ''The fish are really biting today hu?'' said his dad. But the truth was they had been out there for an hour and @PERSON1 hadn't gotten a bite. They fished for another hour or so before taking a break to eat lunch. They just brought sand wiches, chips, and a few waters. When they were done eating they went back to fishing. @PERSON1 casted his line as far as he could get it to go. He sat and waited for about twenty minutes when he finally got a tug on his line. ''I got one. I got one,'' he told his dad trying to reel his line in as fast as could. When he got it in the boat, they measured it. @PERSON1 caught a fourteen inch largemouth bass. ''@CAPS1 like you caught dinner for tonight ''. Said his dad. They stayed out about twenty more minutes then went in with a fish dinner @PERSON1's patients caught him a good fish.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6763,3,The features of the setting affected the cyclist. When she was riding it was very hot this caused the cyclist to lose energy and dehydrate. Also when the cyclist went through a terrain change. The road changed into rolling hills. This caused the cyclist to become tired because after riding up and down your body gets tired. Also being as the weather was so hot this caused the cyclist to drink a lot of water. Eventually she ran out and then got dehydrated. This whole situation implied to stick to your original plan. If the cyclist would have done that she wouldn’t have had to go through the hardships.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21036,8," My best friend @CAPS1 and I have known each other since we were two years old. We've helped each other through good times and bad, and are there for each other like chocolate on a bad day. @CAPS1's best quality is the fact that she can make me laugh no matter what mood I'm in. This year @CAPS1 decided to go to @ORGANIZATION4's, an all girls @CAPS3 @ORGANIZATION2 in @LOCATION1, instead of continuing on to @ORGANIZATION1 like me. The first day of @ORGANIZATION2, I could feel that something was missing. @CAPS1. Without her cackling laugh ringing down the hallways, it felt oddly quiet. It reminded me of a place where we made most of our hilarious memories, and where we were told to ""shush"" a fair amount too. Our little brick @CAPS3 church!  Most @DATE1's, I stood up on the alter with the priest and helped him prepare the bread and such. And most @DATE1's, my best friend @CAPS1 was in the pews. One particular @DATE1 I will never forget, @CAPS1 thought it would be funny to sit in the front row with my family and make faces at me all throughout the mass. See @CAPS1, she has the power to make you laugh just by smiling at you. When she makes faces, I usually and up with tears in my eyes. I was standing up in front of the whole congregation and was using every ounce of self control I had not to bust out laughing. The congregation must have thought I was really being changed by the @CAPS8 because I had the biggest smile on my face.  I'm sure you've been in one of those situations where it feels like it is physically impossible to stop laughing. You have to bite you lip, think about something sad, or try breathing excercises. Every time I glanced in her direction a new wave of giggles washed over me, and every time I glanced in my mom's direction, her evil eye burned brighter. After what felt like eternity, the choir sang the closing hymn and once we left the building, I couldn't stop laughing for at least ten minutes. I had bitten my lip so hard that there were ridges indented on the inside of my mouth. Usually after church, we walk over to the @ORGANIZATION3 for coffee and doughnuts. We catch up on @ORGANIZATION2, and each others lives now that we don't see each other as often. She tells me about her new friends and I tell her about our old ones. I always look forward to hearing the hilariously stupid stories of her days, and I always inform her of the latest and greatest gossip from her hometown. But the thing that we always count on is a good laugh with a good friend.  Laughter keeps @CAPS1 and I close. If laughter really does add years to your life, we are probably going to be the two old ladies that live on the hill with twenty cats, and nobody really knows how old they are because they've been around forever. I can be myself around her and know that she accepts me because if I do something stupid I know she'll laugh and then we'll go play with her cat, @LOCATION2, or make popcorn and watch @ORGANIZATION2 three. My family must be tired of our never-ending inside jokes. When I laugh, it feels like liquid gold is bubbling in my stomach and everything is at peace in the world. It is one of the most comforting feelings in the world. That's what I feel when I'm laughing with my best friend @CAPS1.    ",21,20,,41,,,,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9125,4,"The reason why I believe the author concluded the story with this paragraph is because she wants to test the hibiscus again when it returns. FOR evidence in the last paragraph it says, “when they come back saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return And this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” That’s why I believe the author concluded the story with this paragraph.    ",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1376,1,"Dear @PERSON1, I am writing a letter to discuss the fact that computers have a negitive effect on the average american, here are my reasons people are not spending much time outside, lack of exersize, do not interact with their family as much. Not spending much time can have a big effect on mother nature. Such as they will begin to care less about our wonderful earth and not care to pollute because if they took the time to go outside instead of running the air conditioner they can save the money and go be with their friends. Lack of exersize can be very bad for your health. Sitting down all day on the computer is not exersize its lazyness. When you exersize you feel good about yourself, your adreniline starts going, you can stay fit and you wan't have to worry about being unhealthy if you take yourself away from the computer. When you do not interact with your family and instead of eating dinner together one persons on the computer and the others are waching @CAPS1. You might argue with your family a lot and don't you want to have a healthy relationship. So why don't you encourage your family to sit down at the table and discuss how your day went. I stated my reasons why I think computers have a negative effect on people. I hope that you agree with my reasons so we can find a way to get everyone their computers and get active.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9527,4,"Memory,promise,life-all are ideas that explain why the author concludes the  story with this paragraph.Memories is one  idea that helps explain why the author concludes this story  with  this paragraph because saeng misses her old life and country.Promise is another idea because saeng makes a vow that once spring comes again she will take the test again.Life is another idea because saeng brought the flower and planted soit can live once spring has come and she said  the n she will  retake the test. Memories, promise, and life help explain why the author conclude the story with this paragraph. Memories will come back in the spring along with the promises she has made and the that wants to start and saeng is doing this by pla nting the hibiscus which brings back a lot of her memories from her life",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16280,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Since the German dirigible the Hindenburg was destroyed in New Jersey it would have been more dangerous over a densey populated area like New York where the Empire State building was. the greatest obstacle to the success of the use of the mooring mast was nature itself. The winds on top of the building were shifting due to air currents. Dirigibles would not be safe dangling high above pedestrians on the street. The major problem architect faced was that dirigibles could not moor at the Empire State building because it has a law against airships flying to low over urban areas. Even though it seemed like a good idea at the time, it was not practical or safe.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3668,2,"Libraries are great for multiple reasons. A library is the place to go if you need to do research, meet with a tudor, find an interesting book to read, find that one song you've been looking for, or pick out a new movie to rent for tonight. However within a library there are limits toward what they offer and what you can get. Censorship in libraries is a topic that comes up every now and then, and people will debate over whether they think censorship is a good or bad thing to have.      Personally, I think that censorship can just be more unconvienient for some. For example, when I was in the ninth grade I was assigned to do a research paper over @ORGANIZATION1's. However this topic turned out to be a challenge to research because the libraries I went to did not offer many books or resources over @ORGANIZATION1's because it is seen as an 'inapropriate' or 'offensive' topic. Also, the librarians wouldn'@CAPS1 let me check out some of the books because of my age. Since they thought that I was too young to be reading that information, they weren'@CAPS1 going to let me proceed with my research.      I think that if it's something going on in the world we live in, then it might as well be available for the public to access. If there are people who wish to not see or hear about certain topics, then they can take it upon themsleves to avoid it. Rather than just getting rid of it all together.      The same goes for any form of media. If there is a @CAPS1.V. show that you don'@CAPS1 like, don'@CAPS1 watch it. If there is a song that you dislike, then don'@CAPS1 listen to it. It is that easy. I know I do it all the time. People need to take it upon themselves and understand what they can and cannot handle, and then apply that to their daily lives. When it comes to children, and censoring certain topics from them, I think that it is up to the guardians of the child to determine what is @CAPS2.K. and not @CAPS2.K. for them to see or hear. Then it is the responsibility of the guardians to make sure that their rules, or guidlines, are set and the child understands what they are.      In conclusion, I think the purpose of a library is to offer information. Any information. Then people go to that library to find the information that they are looking for, with the wide selection the library has to offer. I think that libraries should'nt have to feel responsible for censoring items that @MONTH1 be offensive. It is their job to just offer information",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13043,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is proud This is the mood because he is showing thanks to all of the things that he learned in his childhood that he is proud of. One example of this is when the author talks about his Cuban heritage and how he still loves Cuban music. He is also proud for his parents immagrating to the @LOCATION1 to start a better life for him. He is also proud because even though the other people that lived in the neighborhood with him were of different backgrounds everyone accepted eachother. Another reason he is proud is because his parents would help give so many people home to stay in. The author is most proud of his parents because of tier love and sacrifice. They were loving to all and they sacrificed a lot to get to where they were. The mood of the author in the memoir is that he is very proud in what his parents have done. ,3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3219,2,"I believe that libraries should provide any kind of book, magazine, music, and movies to the public, despite if they are found offensive.  First, to support my position, we need to take into consideration that every person is different, and therefore reads and prefers different types of books and magazines.  The same thing applies for watching movies and listening to music.  Second, what @MONTH1 seem 'offensive' to one person @MONTH1 be perfectly fine for another, so the term 'offensive' is ambiguous in this case.  There is no need for an angry public or strikes.  Finally, I believe that the people have a free choice when choosing the types of books and magazines to be read, the types of movies to be watched, and the types of music to be listened to.  After all, it is for their own benefit, entertainment, and learning.  So, libraries should not have anything offensive removed from thier shelves that are found offensive.     First, we need to take into consideration that every person is different, and therefore prefers different types of materials provided by a library.  For example, one person @MONTH1 like to read philosophical books, and the other @MONTH1 like to read romance comedy books.  If the philosophical books were to be taken off the shelves by the library officials, then the person who likes philosophy will not have anything to read.  Yes, there are magazines available and movies to watch about philosophy, but they are experienced and learned differently than reading  @ORGANIZATION2's book, or @ORGANIZATION3's @CAPS1.  I had an experience similar to this with my friend.  She preferred horror movies, and I historical.  The horror movie she was looking for was not in the library, and later it turned out that the library did not have any kind of horror movie because they weren't popular in that city.  My friend was not happy.  The library had historical movies, but I ended up watching that by myself. So, libraries should not have to take away any sort of material that might be offensive to the public.     Second, the term 'offensive' in this case is ambiguous, meaning that it has multiple meanings.  What @MONTH1 seem 'offensive' to one person @MONTH1 not seem offensive to another.  An example:  a @CAPS2 @CAPS3 magazine cover @MONTH1 be offensive to a child because of the picture and 'adult' words for the child.  However, that same cover @MONTH1 be interesting to a young adult because he @MONTH1 be into surfing, suntanning, or @CAPS2.  Offensive is only used in the first part, but not in the second, and the same material was used.  So, should that magazine be removed? I don't think so.  The solution is for the child to look at @CAPS4 Magazines, @ORGANIZATION1, or @CAPS5 magazines.  The library should provide a section for @ORGANIZATION1 so that they can read appropriate material.     Finally, I believe that the peole have a free choice when choosing the books to read, the type of movies to watch, and the types of music to listen to.  They should be allowed to do this because of their differences and their definition of 'offensive'. People should not be forced to read the same type of book, to watch the same type of movies, or to listen to the same type of music.  They should have a choice of choosing the materials provided by the library which corresponds to their personalities.  After all, the materials they see, read, or listen to is for their own benefit, their own learning, and for their own entertainment.  The main goal is for them to be happy with what the library has to offer.     In conclusion, I belive that libraries should not take off any material from their shelves that are found offensive.  This is due to the different people, the ambiguous term for 'offensive', the for the sake of human flourishment.  Libraries are for studying, learning, and entertainment in a quiet, peaceful place.  They should not discourage people to discontinue learning about the world because that would lead to a bigger and more serious worldwide problem: the lack of education.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16236,6,"The obstacles that the Empire State Building faced were alot. So that the dirigibles; blimps could dock there.One obstacle was building more floors. They had to build more floors so that the people on the dirigibles could have somewere to load and unload on the ship.Another obstacle was building steel frames from the 85th floor to the 102nd floor. This costed them over @MONEY1 worth of modifications, that had to be done to the buildings framework",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9703,4,She means that when she return she is going to do the same thing again and see if she will do better or not.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18971,7,"Patience is??? our or waiting???Patience is dealing with teachers at school and trying to understand their point of view. Without patience you and your younger sitting or young??? teacher would  constantly be  fighting. That’s why patience is as important. Patience should be constantly exconsiled. In sports it helps??? you need to basic the rer whether its a good or bad call. Patience also???because you’re not going  to be ??? of it the first ???.Patience makes perfect. School is a great place to use patience, whether learning something new of dealing will an??? teacher. You need to use it while dealing with???children because they are always trying to ??reactions?? of you whether they’re ??? bad. In the end it’s a ?? to call you ??. its very important to have that ??? whether its small things ??? Learning or big things like testing. Its rather to have patience than not.",7,7,,14,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19558,7,One time I was getting a cool @CAPS1 game it was sooo awsome. And my mom said we will get it on fri. It was @DATE1 and was soo part for her to get of work. And she got home and said we well go on stater day. I was a little mad. Bat how cares.But yea we got the game on the next startday I could’t believe  i was patient,6,6,,12,,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18614,7,"This story is how I have been patient waiting for my birthday in three days. I have been patient by wanting to see what I get for my birthday even though it bugs me really bad! Also I’ve been patient because I’m having a sleepover with all my close friends. It seems like it is taking for ever. At my sleepover there is going to be cake and ice cream! “@CAPS1!” I’ve also been patient because im turning twelve which means I will be patient. Then the day after my sleepover my mom, me and my brother are going to the mall and then to the movies and I get a hundred dollars to speand. At the mall! It is very hard being patient to do fun things. Finally I’ve been patient by not asking everyone if they are coming. Some girls forget to ask their parents and it buss me because there is only two days left. This story showed how I have been patient waiting for my birthday in three days! But you have to be patient to do fun things I have learned just recently.",10,8,,18,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1681,1,"Dear, @CAPS1 town. As you know it computers are a part of our lives, but is it positive or negitive? Computers can be a great thing it can show you different parts of the world and breaking news, it can deside your next vacation. It could help you talk to famile and friend. What would are lives be without them? Well are lives without computers can be bad. Computers do have negitive sides to like spending lots of maney for one all the times. It needs to be fixed. People can use the computer to much and they want exercise. That can lead to fatness. Also you can waist lots of energy to. A bad part about the internet is chat rooms, if you talk to the wrong people then you can be in trouble. Overall computers are a key part of our and they can help deside with our next @DATE1 breack trip and they can use by making us fat. ",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12745,5,"The mood would be loving and carring. When @CAPS1 was a child growing up in @LOCATION2, his parents treasrd familey and friends. They taught him to always lend a helping and and to alway keep his door open. ""Quite the contrary, our neighborhood was maid up of mostly spanish, cuban, and italian immigrants at a time when racism was the norm and segregation prevailed in the United States."" It was a close knit comunity and everybody knew everybody. Nobody was a stranger. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, knowing they would do the same for us"". His parent's instilled How important familey is and friends.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6387,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. For example he feels dehydrated and tired because he is riding through the desert and has a lack of water. I often feel this way when jogging for extended periods of time. The men in the story “who haven’t left the confines of their porches since Carter was in office” also add to the story. Due to their role, the cyclist takes an unmarked shortcut that turns out to be horrible. The Welch’s factory affects the cyclist because it increases his thirst and causes him to once more think about it. The sign showing grape juice looks irrisistable to him and drives him to keep forward in search of anything to drink. The terrain charge also affects the cyclist because it causes him to have to work ever harder to get up hills now rather than just ride flat terrain.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1687,1,"Dear @CAPS1, Computers have really made an impact on society. Some people, think they have made a good impact while others think the opposite. I believe that they are a good thing in our lives and have made a drastic, but great impact. Some reasons that support my opinion are that computers are basically what helps us keep in touch with people, they make it very easy to find needed information and they make our school lives faster and much simpler. First of all, computers are pretty much how people keep in touch. There are many ways you can keep in touch over computers. Tere is video-chatting, e-mail and chat websites such as @CAPS2, @CAPS3, @CAPS4 etc. There are many people that really enjoy having the ability to keep in touch this way. It is a step up from talking on the phone. On the computer if you are web-chatting, you can not only talk to them, but you can see them! When it comes to chatting websites such as @CAPS2, there are millions of people who belong to this incredible website and love it. Kids and adults really enjoy having access to something like this. For me, since I moved to @STATE1 and had to leave all my friends behind, the computers has saved some of my relationships that I thought I would lose but didn't want to. I can e-mail my friends, and even see what they look like and how much they have changed on @CAPS2. Computers are a very helpful piece of technology that have helped me, and so many other people keep in touch. Another important reason computers are a wonderful technology item is because they make it so easy to find needed information. From what a word means, to the directions to get to @LOCATION1, the computer can help with all of this. I talked to my mom and she said. ""Computers just make @CAPS6 all of the information I need to knew about your brother's diabetes so easy."" @CAPS6 information in books can take so long. You have to go to the library or a bookstore, find the book you need with the correct information, and then you have to read through the whole book to find the information needed. On a computer, you can just google what you need to find, and read the article or map, etc. Computers have made @CAPS6 information a breeze and everyone loves how simple it is! The last reason that supports my opinion is that computers make our school lives faster and much simpler to deal with. In school, there are times when we need to write a very lengthy composition, and it will take forever to write. With a computer, typing up the composition would probably take around half the time of writing the composition. I took a survey of three kids that typed a composition and three kids that wrote it. I asked each of the kids how long it took them. The kids that wrote the paper said it took them around two hours. The kids that typed the composition said it took them around an hour. Also, when things are typed, they are usually easier to read which makes it easier for teachers to grade, and won't take as long. Computers make school easier for students and teachers. The opinion that computers are not a benefit to society just doesn't make sense. Yes, I know that there can be some disadvantages. But think of all the advantages compared to the disadvantages. There are a lot more good than bad things. Without computers, people would be incredibly stressed, and have a hard time making life easier. Computers are an amazing benefit to society. Everyone should agree with this because people stayin touch because of computers, computers make it very easy to find information that needed, and they make our school lives aint easier and faster for students and teachers. Computers have made an extremely large impact and changed our ways of life for the better!",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9447,4,They had to come back so they did and they were walking into an then world over there in the corner and the childhood world to just as she had known it would feel.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18604,7,"I must admit there are times when I’m not very patient. But I can still remember the day I learned what patience was.I was @NUM1 years old and I was going to my annual checkup at the doctors office. It was around @NUM2 am on a @DATE1 @TIME1. I was with my mother in the waiting room, when a elderly man came in. He seemed extremely sick and I remember being really scared. The women at the front desk came up to us and said it would be a wait, @CAPS1 explained that the man was very ill and could be dying. My told me to be patient but I didn’t know what that meant so @CAPS1 explained it to me. @CAPS1 said, “You have to wart quietly and not complain no matter how long it takes. I told her. I could do it and sure enough I could. Patience is a very important thing to me. I feel it is not only for yourself but for the consideration of others. When you complain about having to wait it is disrespectful to others. And I know other people are patient for me so I should be for them also.",9,12,,21,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6311,3,"The features of the setting effect the cyclist because it is a dessert. The dessert is very hot. I know this because in the story, he states that it feels around @NUM1 degrees. He struggled for water but couldn’t find any that was cool. He found a water pump that had ""a tar like substance oozed out, followed by blackish water feeling somewhere in the neighborhood of two hundred degrees.” This means it was hot and couldn’t find water.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7235,3,"The temperature of the place that the cyclist was riding through affected him very much. The temperature caused the cyclist to sweat. This affected him because he would get thirsty and eventually he ran out of water. For example in the text he says “the water bottle contained only a few tantalizing sips” and then it goes on to say, “I could drop from from a heat stroke.” This showed how it affected him because he thought he is going to drop from the heat.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13255,5,"In this memoir, the author creates the mood as gratitude. Narciso Rodriguez says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 expresses his gratitude for his parents selflessness. His parent's ""started their lives over entirely"" (paragraph @NUM1) just so their children could have a better life. ""The faith that this trouble would lead them and their children to better times drove them to endure these hard times."" (paragraph @NUM1) It also describes how friendly their family was. It says, ""There was often someone staying with us temporarily until they were able to get back on their feet."" (paragraph @NUM3) They were honest, hardworking immigrants who helped others and worked hard in persue of a better life.@CAPS1 describes the mood using many details. @CAPS1 describes Rodriguez's home by saying in paragraph @NUM4, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, form the backdrop to life in our warm home."" The author uses details to describe the mood in ""Narciso Rodriguez"" memoir.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
898,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I think computers have affect on people because firstly, it gives people the ability to learn from faraway places. Secondly, it allows people to talk online with friends. Thirdly, gives online games to little kids. Lastly you can wacth video's that can teach you all sorts of exotic things. My first reason I think computers have affect on people is it gives people the ability to learn from faraway places. For example if I want to go to @LOCATION4 for the @DATE1 and I know nothing about the place I can go online and look up I can look up their foods, their culture, their villages, and even there landscapes. Also the computer is good for book reports if your teacher told you to do a book report on @LOCATION5 instead of going in your text books, goion line you can look up their culture, there food, there location, how is there economy like, what kinds of school the kids go to what kinds of festivals they have etc. My second reason computers have affect on people is because it allows people to talk online with other people whenever they want. For example there are @NUM1 things that let you talk on the computer and that is @CAPS1, and @CAPS2 these two allows you to talk to friends that live faraway from you, my friend lives in @LOCATION1 and I live in @LOCATION2 we don't have cellphones so we go online to eiether @CAPS1, or @CAPS2 ""isn't that great""!!. The computer also allows you to talk from faraway places like if you live in @LOCATION3 you can talk to somebody else in @LOCATION6. My third reason I think computers have affect on people is it gives online games to little kids. For example when I say games I mean educational games like reading games, math games, writing games, etc. Statistic say the @PERCENT2 to @PERCENT1 of kids learn more things on the computer than they learn in school that a huge percentage even for kids. Also when kids play computer games it more fun to them then sitting in class all day like my litt ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15279,6,"In the excerpt there were obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock their. Al Smith saw an opportunity by adding a mooring mast to the top of the building allowing dirigibles to ancher there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers on and off. With this idea the architects and engineers of the Empire State Building had to consult with experts, by taking tours of the equipment and mooring operations at the U.S. Naval Air Station. The architects also met with the president of a recently formed airship transport company that planned to offer dirigible service across the pacific Ocean. Now as you can see the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock there.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15219,6,"Based on the excerpt to the dirigibles were not ever able to dock atop the Empire State building because @CAPS1 it was a question of safty. The passage reads that most dirigibles from outside the United States are fulled with hydrogen which is flamible. This caused the Hindenburg a German made vessel to burst into flames in New Jersey, and when this happened the owners of the empire state building realized how much worse the accident could have been if it had happend in the densly populated New York City. Also this was a question of safty because the winds on the top of the building would blow the dirigible all around. Lastly there is a law prohibiting the flight of airships in low urban aeras so the ships could not fly in New York City",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4429,2,"Do you find books you read offensive?  How about music, or magazines?  I sure don't.  I can't think of why someone would be offended about a book they chose to read.  If you sit back and think about it, there should be a low amout of reasons that someone should be offended by a book that is written for the general public.       I believe that it is possible for there to be books that have offensive words or actions in them, but unless they are directed towards the reader, or intentionally being used to offend someone then it is just a book.  A lot of books, especially ones on history, use language and actions that were used during that time.  They use them to show you and inform you on how things used to be and what it was like during the time.  Not very often, or that I have ever seen, do the authors make a book to just to put someone down.  I tend to see books just explaining things and using offensive words just to show how things were and to set a tone of the book.     Music on the other hand could be thought of as different.  Many people could take music in the wrong way.  A majority of offensive problems spawning from music come from the genre of rap.  Rappers tend to express themselves throughly, and in doing that often times use very offensive language.  I personally don't get botherd by the music, because they are usually refering to their own life and how things went with them.  Music can also be on the good side too.  When you get the calm and collective music, it tends to help people and can be used to help people relax.  Therefore music can be either way, but it mostly goes about who the person is and how they react to what they listen to.     Then you have magazines.  Personally I think they are the worst of all.  Magazines tend to go one way or the other.  They either put a person down and be completely negative towards them, or they are positive and say nothing but good about them.  One big problem with magazines is that they write down what they hear and what they want to hear, not always knowing the full story.  In that case they have a very high chance of being very offensive towards the person or group they are talking about.  Magazines always have a positive, but where there is a positive they have a harsh negative thing to put in with it.       In these regaurds, I believe that there is nothing wrong with a library.  There are always going to be negatives and positives, but libraries tend to stick with the positive side.  Plus if a book looks like it might end up being offensive towards you, then there is no one that can tell you that you can't just put it down and stop reading it.  With music, only get stuff that you like and if you are easily offended don't listen to that music.  Libraries just give you the opportunity to possibly get something you could enjoy.  There is no reason someone would not be able to refrain from going in and getting an offensive book. In saying this, it can go either way.  I don't believe there is anything worng with libraries censorship as long as you can use your own good judgement.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7633,3,If it’s a good day the cyclist will want to rid. If it is a bad day then they will not want to but probably will.,3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6368,3,"A cyclist is a bike rider. They can be in groups of diffrent people or they can be a solo cyclist. Some cyclist go for a few miles riding there bikes some can go for more like @NUM1 miles, some go over hills, go trow water they do alot with what they do. They have alot of time on there hards to ride a bike that far.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19140,7,"Patience, something you have to have when you want to be friends with someone. This story is about a young girl and boy who want to be friends, but one of them just don’t have patience. I was walking into the room where the speech competition was. I sat next to all my friends and the all thought I would get first place. When I went up with one of my friends he said that he had just alittle bit to much cologne on because he was really nervous and he didn’t know what he was doing. @CAPS2 one actually knew that he and I were friends. After I went up to see what number I was I saw that I was the first one to speak. My friend said that I would do good, and he was right after me. I soon started to speak about lady @PERSON1 @CAPS1 loved my speech! After we my friend, @ORGANIZATION1 and I were done with our speeches we both sat next to eachother and were talking a lot. Then after all our friends asked us if we were friends? I said, “@CAPS2 way why would I be friends with him?” then @CAPS1 laughed. We both looked at eachother, in a bad way. After a few days we won’t talking to each other since @CAPS1 was so suspicious. I was very patient and was able to wait to talk to him. But ofcourse, @ORGANIZATION1 wasn’t patient at all. He was eager to tell @CAPS1 that me and him were friends but we couldn’t tell anyone because to them were both different, but the truth is that we’re both exactly the same since we both like soccer, basket ball, music and talking like @NUM1. Haha! Soon @CAPS1 found out. @ORGANIZATION1 had gone and told @CAPS1 that we were friends. Turns out @CAPS2 one laughed at us. They were actually happy that @ORGANIZATION1 had @CAPS2 patience and finally told them that we were friends. Now me and @ORGANIZATION1 are best friends and will be best friends forever! In conclusion, @CAPS3 having patience is a good thing but sometimes people can’t have patience when they want to become friends.",8,12,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13173,5,The mood of the author i think is caring; but then I also think it's calm. I think it is caring because of the way he talks about the neighbor-hood. I also think it's caring because he understood what was going on. But I think it is calm because the way the way that he speaks it's in a calm tone.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1525,1,"Dear local Newspaper, I was reading this article about computers. I agree with kids and adults not having time enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. But, also, kids and adults should be having some fun time outside and enjoying it. But when it comes to usage of computers is helpful for searching information. I think kids and adults need to get active and get healthy, because now kids don't want to play outside, so they can play outside, so they can play video games. When I was a little kid I would always play hide and seek but now my mother doesnt like to play anymore because of technology she rather be on the computer or on the phone. Kids all over the world now know how to use computers because they don't want to be outside. Computers are only helful when your doing a report or something, important. For example, people that have businesses they are going to need computers. Also when a teacher a sighs a project on someone your going to need a computer to search up information for that person. Finally alot of kids aren't taking responsibilty of school. They don't that school serious. Kids think that the computers will teach you everything well there wrong because things on the computer can be made up. But its also making there life very in healthy. So thats why computers are good usage and bad at time because kids don't play outside anymore and computer are helpfull for searching information so with. What I've sadi don't you agree with me?",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15353,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building planned to use the building to make New York the leader in modern travel. They built a mooring mast which they planned to use to dock dirigibles. Unfortunately, there were some unexpected difficulties and this goal was never accomplished.When the architects first decided to add the mast to the Empire State Building, they realized that they would have to redesign the entire building's support structure because of the pressure that a docked dirigible would put on the building. Even after this problem was solved, there were numerous obsticles keeping the goal from being reached.The architects had failed to see many of the potential problems with the mast. Not until after the mast was built did they realized that most dirigibles from outside the U.S. used hydrogen rather than helium to stay afloat. Hydrogen, being highly flammable was not a risk that the builders wanted to take over the densely populated city. The architects also realized that the unpredictable high winds at the top of the mast would be too dangerous to dock a dirigible.Once these obsticles appeared, it became evident that the Empire State Building would never dock a dirigible.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7349,3,"The setting is a desert in California in June, this affects the cyclist because it is very hot and he only has a couple drinks of water. There is no place for the cyclist stop and get more water. He says, “there is no one in sight, not a building,car, or structure of any kind.” As you can see that kind of setting would definetly affect the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7034,3,"The features of the setting only drain the cyclist's willpower. The things he sees discourage him, for example one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps and a corral that couldn’t hold the larnest, mule greeted me. This sight was troubling .” The desolation begins to wear away his hope of finding a building or town sometimes the things are psychologically damaging,” In an ironic twist that should please all sadists reading this, the building abandoned years earlier, by the looks of it – had been a Welch’s Grape Juice factory and bottling plant. A sand blasted picture of a young boy pouring a refreshing glass of juice into his mouth could still be seen.” For someone who is quickly running out of water, this this irony could make one lose their resolve to continue. The snake and rolling hills slow him down, and make him use more energy. The heat dehydrates the cyclist even faster. The environment is a hostile one for a cyclist.    ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7218,3,"The features of the setting made the cyclist’s journey even longer and more strenuous. The reason it being in such a remote area did not help. For example the people who still lived in that remote area were probably as old as the cyclist grandparents and the directions were horrible. Also, the fact that their were no new shops or areas or rest for the cyclist to go to; the water pump he found was old and nasty and the only building he saw was abandoned. Also ther factor was the rough terrain. It  being froit the cyclist was already very fatigued by lack of water and tiredness the terrain was long, bumpy and just horrible all together. Finally, the last factor was where he was bicycling in California on a @CAPS1 summer day and he being on a which had no n.c(but which bike does) did not help at all. These are how the features affect the cyclist journey.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6801,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. For example the lack of water begins to take a toll of how fast he can get to the next town. Another example would be the terrain only slows him down more.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1469,1,"Dear @LOCATION1, @CAPS1 you believe people spend way to much that on computers? In a survey @PERCENT1 out of @NUM1 of people rather go on the computer then take a walk in as parts. People who spend a lot of time on computers are lacking important things. For istance, they spend so much time on computer they have lose time to exerise, enjoy natue, and interact with friends and family. Computers have a negative effect on people. Many people don't excerise for only @NUM2 min. But when you are distracted on your computer aming or facebooking you forget to excrise or just go it for @NUM3 min. Because you want to get back to the computer. Computers on your desk starring at you and you sampled to go on. While, the yoga mat or weights sit on ground sterring at you too. However, the computers is mak fun and less woris. Therefore, your more willing to go on computer then excrise. Computers make it hand to excrise because your less into thinking how to this right and take you the because your thinking about a computer game, you played facebook, email and bunch more things on computer. So computers are unhealthy for people to have. Nature is beatiful, how the trees sway in the and butterflies fly in the air then there are all type of seasons with beatiful senery and. However there re stuffy room with sholves a desk and some picture that's the serey the people got when @MONTH1 are on the computer all the time. People are missing out on enjoying nature little and big beatities. People comuter aren't walking on beach on taking a nice long hike in woods dad not taking a stroll in a ark these are missing out on getting some fresh air and seeing the senery nature has to offer us. Instead they are sitting chair starring at a computer screen. However, pretty could that be compared to enjoying nature beatity? Computers are testing away people enjoying nature. Hanging-out with friends are family is a fun thing to @CAPS1 but how are you suppose to long out with them if your to the computer? They aren't going to internet with their friends or family. This could affect their future they could grow up sad and lonely aren't know how to act around people they get job their works around people. The people who are addicted to computer are missing out an doing something fun with some they lose or enjoy to be around. Computers could be people far away friends but how about instead call that friend on. They probably rather hear wire then. See a message so computers interesting with friends and family. Now, that you know how had the computers affect people you can understand why I'm computers. They cut in the peoples the excrise, and have people not enjoying nature. people want hang out with friends and famlies. So hopefully you can see what a bad affect computers have.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
916,1,"Dear @LOCATION2, @CAPS1's the dillemant @CAPS2 that people are supporting computer technology and others are not. I firmly believe that having computers generally has a positive effect. This is because many jobs are using them everyday and it is very efficiant for them. Also, having computers allows people to connect with other people, edit things that other technology cannot, and play fun games, @CAPS3 effect that computers have is educational websites; games, and articals. This helps many kids find a good education and adults find a comfortable and happy job. Primarily. computers have a positive effect on people because jobs are using them frequently. Jobs such as @ORGANIZATION1 and any type of police work provide sarely for people all around the united states and other parts of the world. My father always told me, ""Computers save people everyday"". Even schools use computers! They provide educational information about the students in schools, and my school, @LOCATION1 school, uses them quite often. For example, I see my teacherm. Mr, @CAPS4 his computer every single movning in homeroom. Nearly @PERCENT1 of all jobs involve a computer by storing information or any other purposed fealuired. Would you want all those people to lose ther job because of their skills and techniques towards computer technology? I know I wouldn't, @CAPS5 keep in mind computers provide a safe and healthy life for many people. In addition, computers have a positive effect on people because they can do many things that nothing else can do. This is things like staying in town with someone far away, or editing photos. Even playing a game on the computer could ne relaxing to almost anyone. @CAPS6 is an example of keeping in town with someone else. For me, @CAPS6 is a life-saver. It allowed me to talk to my brother white he was at his chaotic college. In fact, nearly @PERCENT2 of people have an account on a computer of a public website live @CAPS7, @CAPS6, or @CAPS9. Computers keep photos saved that can be edited and even just saved to be admired. I don't want my pictures and my @CAPS6 deleted because nothing else competes with the mighty computer since it me have an enjoyable time and entertains me well. Thirdly, computers have a positive effect on people because they give aduts and kids tree access to education. I remenber my old elementery school used to play many amusing math games. These were @CAPS5 my education grew greatly dae to this game. Games as these are used frecquently thoughout the world. In addition jobs have been lost from this had economy. However, jobs we hering found more and more everyday from adults trying to find a decent job online. Computer saved people from losing their house because of the money they made with the help of computers, computers are a good idea To conclude. I imploor you that computer technology has a strong positive effect on people. Computers are like a pencil to a student. for they are very important. Jobs use them everyday, connections are made by people, and education grows because of them. That's why the technology or computers effects people in a good way.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10339,4,"I think that the author concludes the story she fails the driving test, so they added she was going to take it over. And maybe the plant is or would be good luck to her after the snow melts and the geese return it would be a fresh Start. Also it would be nice after she descovered the plant.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20965,8,"                                Outdoor @CAPS1 In sixth grade I went to outdoor @CAPS1 I got up really early and went to @CAPS1 where the bus is taking students to outdoor @CAPS1. First, of all I board on the way to outdoor @CAPS1. Then they told us in which cabin we were suppose to be I had seven cabin members including myself. I brought my electronic device but the teachers told us that we couldn't bring no devices to the trip. The next day we did some activities first we ate lunch before doing any activities. The foods that we ate were pizza, pizza pockets, and hot dogs then the activities that we did were catch some fishes and put them back to the water we were just examine them the other activities that we did was hike the mountains on the way we saw deers they were eating grass I got really tired then when we came back we were getting ready to go home. Finally I would want to help out and I really enjoyed my field trip.",15,13,,28,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
188,1,"Dear local Newspaper, Some people say computers have negative affects on family and friend others say computers are an important aspect of society. I would have to agree with the second group of people. Computers help students research information that they @MONTH1 need for school. People can talk to there friends on things like facebook or @CAPS1 and you can write a rough draft on the computer save it then go back to it and make the final changes from a draft to a final. I will elaborate in the following three paragraphs. Computers are a quick and easy way to look up information for a school project or paper. I can understand people thinking that computers take away from family time but so would a book. A book would probably take up more time and you @MONTH1 get less information. For example the book could be about multiple people and you read the entire thing only to get two sentences of information. Another reason computer reasearch is quicker is that you can go from one page get some information and then once you have gotten all the information from that page but you still need more you can just click another link. If people didn't have computers they would have to go to the library and spend time looking them. Is it worth it to use all that time. People can talk to there friends on facebook or @CAPS1. Some people say computers distract you from friends when really they help you talk to your friends more. What if your on vacation and your so tired of seeing and talking to your family because you've been with them non stop for a week and you miss your friends. All you have to do id turn on the computer and then you have an intent link to them. Chat rooms also help you meet other people your age from the next town over on enywhere in the country. They @MONTH1 even became your new best friend. When you write a paper do you want to have to write it once then go back and write it @NUM1 more times? Theres a much simpler way it's called a computer. You can write your first draft then all you have to do inordre to get a final copy is reread it and make changes when they are nessecary. Computers also help kids spell better. All they have to do is hit a button.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9505,4,The author of this story concludes it with this paragraph to show Saeng’s  determination .  I  say this hibiscus in  the  story the sees  the  plant and it joyed to see it and is so happy but the reminders doing her grandmother ‘s  hair she  tries.  She snow this as a test for herself . She  want to see if she could be on and try not will on the past . When she  isn’t  home she said “ I failed the test .” This snows melt she want is to move on but it hasn’t  as  easy as she hope it to be. So when the as this hibiscus the shows life this paragraph it shows that Saeng is trying  to move on and she is different  to  a English her seal.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13436,5,The mood of this memoir is loving. It's @CAPS1 you how you should look back at your home and your family. They all love you and how you love all of them. How every one was always there fore everyone.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13218,5,"The author creates a mood in this memoir. The author starts off with a mood that is kind of sad. He explains how his parents lived in a one-room apartment when they moved from Cuba to the United States and that there was a lot of segregation going on in the United States. The memoir gets happier as the author describes in paragraph @NUM1 how friendly and close the people living around him were. The hardships of the author's parents are listed in paragraph @NUM2. The fact that they had to start all over again is sadening. The author finishes of in paragraph @NUM3 and @NUM4 with a happy ending. He describes what he has learned from his parents and everything he is grateful for. For example, he learned the true meaning of ""family"". The mood that the author creates is very important to the memoir.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3325,2,"I think that a cencorship in libraries isn't needed. The grounds that are basing the cencorship are very opinionated and biased ones. Two readers of one book could view the material compleately differently.      The reader has chosen to read that book, and thus more than likely know what the general plot is before they read the first page because of the summary on the back. People can make their own decisions, and can therefor choose wether or not to read the book to begin with. The books that would be found innapropriate or offensive would most likely be in teen novels or adult literature. If this is the case, they should be mature enough to handle stumbling across the material, and or making the decision to put the book back and to not continue reading.      Saying that the material is unsuitable for a younger age group is correct, but at that age the children should be with @CAPS1 adult when checking out books anyway. The material that people find unacceptable would almost certainly be in a novel that is intended for a mature audience, so if it is being read by a younger age group that would be the problem in and of it's self. The teens and or adults whom would be reading such material is surely old enough to handle reading a few foul words and scattered inuendos thoughout the plot.      The material that @MONTH1 be found innapropriate or offensive @MONTH1 be viewed differently given two different audiences. A teen in high school has probably heard worse in the halls durring passing; @CAPS1 adult that is worring about what their children read has certainly been exposed to enough thoughout their lifetime to either look past the text or to put it away. The material being called offensive just because of one person's views in not rite. The tough situations and our surroundings are what prepair us for our futures. A person seeing the bad in life would be more likely to do all in their power to make good of their futures and be more willing to help make shure it could be prevented.      Should the foul things in life be ignored? Should the child that is being beaten at home have to suffer in silence because it seems too graphic to tell? The man who became homeless, only to turn his life around because he learned from his past, should that story not be told only because the troubles he had to face seem too disturbing?      I believe that these are the stories that need told the most, in @CAPS1 attempt to teach those around us how to prevent, and how to move past the troubles in life. There will always be things that we wish not to see in life. But is it not our actions that follow seeing such misfortunes that determine who we are. The libraries should not be put on a cencorship, but open to the public that wish to dive in to these stories. Books are written for a purpose, and that purpose @MONTH1 just be to let people know that these things are happening, and if one thinks  they are alone in these strifes that they are not",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15985,6,"Obstacles the builders haded to face with the empire state building was that they did not had the enough technology to land a dirigible on the mooring mast. February 1931 @CAPS1 clavan of the building's architectural office said ""The as yet unsolved problems of mooring airships to a fixed mast at such a heigh made it desirable to postpone to a later date the final installation of the landing gear""     After @CAPS1 clavan said that the using of the dirigibles had dissappeared. by the late 1930s, the dirigibles had been given away to Airplanes. Also builder haded to construct electric winch and gang plank the electric winch is hauled in a line from the front of the ship and then tied to the mast, and gang plank to a open observation plataform.     ",1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6409,3,"There were many different conditions that effected the cyclist. He did not have the proper ammount of water for the journey witch made it difficult. He states in the story, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sips.” @CAPS1 the terrain and hills made it difficult. He ran into snakes and very deserted country. But his determination led to success and arrived into a town",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9503,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because Saeng is given a small glimmer of hope by the winter hibiscus. The hibiscus reminds her of her homeland, Vietnam, which pleases her. Also, the fact that the hibiscus she purchases can survive winter, unlike the hibiscus of her homeland, symbolizes Saeng’s determination to adapt to her new country. The future of the hibiscus symbolizes Saeng’s survival and adaptation to her new country, which will include her retaking her driving test.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3433,2,"Libraries, not many people like them, but most people do. Libraries are almost in every town. People like to go there to read book, get on the computers, and do activities with their families. But there are some things that people would really want to do things there but they cannot because of their age or so, or it just might be prohibited at all times. Do you think the advantages and disadvantages at the library are fair enough for everyone?    Most people really do not think that you must always go to the library for things because if you are a irresponsible person with all the damage that you have done to the item that you have checked out or how late you turn it could be the same ammount of money on buying that item. If you are a responsible person then you are fine. But some do not think that the libraries should be putting stuff there if they are not going to let any one touch it or check it out.    So if they are not going to let one person get an item from the library then it should be removed from there, because there will be at least one person who will want to get that item and it would be rude if the librarian tells you no you cannot have that.     Libraries should just stick to the same old same old a section for kids with kid books. A section for the middle schoolers and the teenagers. A section for the high schoolers and the adults and mostly everything will work out fine. Just want to make it fair for everyone since it is the public library of your town.     Now that some facts and opinions have been stated hopefullly the libraries and librariens do think about what they are going to put and what they are not going to put on the shelves of a public library to make it fair for everyone. So do you think the advantages and disadvantages at the library are fair enough for everyone",3,2,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3764,2,"In this article I am going to talk about the way libraries sensor their books. I am going to hit points on what I think about the subject. But also give what point of view I feel about the books that are on these shelves. Also on the way libraries should handle this matter by pre-sensoring the books on the shelves. I will try to give details on why it does not or if it has to be taken off the shelf.     I think that certain materials should not be a problem if the librarians can keep a closer eye on what their reading. But it can be stopped by just looking at the review and seeing if this is a good enough book for your child to read. This can be a problem in some ways if kids are exposed to this material that they are reading. But some children can take some of this stuff the wrong way when they are reading a mature type book. But you just can not for get about those books, you have to watch what they are reading.     Some ways that they handle this problem can get a little extreme. If you take a book off the shelf what is the older person going to read. You just can't do this because what if another persons wants that book and they can not have it. But what you can do is make a special section for those types of books young children will not get those books. This I think can help with the problem.     I feel that they could also pre-sensor these books. This will help explain things in a way they can understand it. Plus it can improve the way people feel about them books. But also they print two copies one for a more mature audiance and one for a younger one. If they do this it would make an improvement so younger kids can take this information lke a mature person does and say this is not real life.     In @CAPS1 conclusion I feel like I am nuatral about the subject. I think it is a bad thing to have them on the shelf in a library. But I feell it can be prevented in the way libraries run it. Just keep a closer eye the younger audiance. Also to try and pre-sensor them to make them more friendly to the younger audiance",3,4,,3,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4727,2,"This is along the lines of personal thought. Some people can be happy with things ,while others disagree. Unless its racist or sexist no one has any right at all to say something can't belong. If someone doesn't like a book than walk away from it don't ponder at why its there, someone else @MONTH1 want it.     So I dont like this topic personally but i am ok with writing about it. Its not a choice just like it really shouldn't even be a choice for people to say what belongs where, unless it is rightfully owned by the individual. I know there are many things I dont like but I dont try and get things moved and banned. Its there people want to read it. Plus the person who wrote or made the object would be shot down (@CAPS1 of sadness or rejection).      Along the lines of insulting a race and/or being sexist, If that is being done in the book it should be stopped and disposed of. People have the right to say they are not happy with that but if they just dont like the topic but others do than they need to move on and not make a big deal out of it. Now if the title @CAPS2 says what the book is about than walk away don't pay attention to it. People @MONTH1 use it for research or something in the future. Now people @MONTH1 be self-centered and just want what they need so they cause a huge, @CAPS3 or fight over stupid little things. Thats the people that always got things handed to them which I imagine is why this topic came up.      So that is my thoughts and believes about the topic of Censorship. It doesn't matter where, in school or at a library it is there because someone is/was interested in the item. I know this is my thoughts and believes, people @MONTH1 completely think what i wrote it stupid, some @MONTH1 think its smart. Its just the culture you grew up in and @CAPS1 of mind you are in that current time and place.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15037,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State building faced law against airships flying to low over urban areas This law made it illegal for ship to ever tie up to the building, fearing That The Wind would blow the dirigible onto the sharp spires of other buildings in that area. That would harm the dirigible's shall Then another dirigible attempted a Publicity stunt, when it would tie up and deliver a bundle of newspaper to the Empire state building. The Idea of The mooring was shelved. They yet unsolved Problems of mooring air ships to a fixed Mast at Such a height made it desirable. The highest open observatory dock, intended for disembarking Passengers, has never been open to The Public.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3886,2,"When ever has a few bad things being said ever effected how or what people read @CAPS2 a days. That's what is hot in this present lifetime. No one wants to read a boring article, not unless it's meant to be. I'm going to share with you my opinions on certain materials, such as books, music, magazines, ect.,should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. I have observations, experience, and reading some of my the articles that were called offensive to prove my opinions.     In my opinion, no ones work should be taken off of a shelf due to any thing, because I'm sure they worked on it an awful lot for it to be placed on a shelf. So there is no reason for it to be taken off. If that was my stuff that had got took off the shelves I would be shocked and upset. So that is one reason why you shouldn't do that. It could hurt people emotionly.     Following that statement, but there can be times where you just don't want them to be seen because they are to embarrassing. Such as an athlete interviewed in an @CAPS1 article, that got suspended from their sport due to violations, and this athlete is just cursing and being out of control. I would put that article away also, just so the public won't see it and no one is put on blast.     Finally, @CAPS2 everyone knows that some types of movies, and music can't be put on display in public. So you would have to ask for the movie or @CAPS3 and someone will go get it from the back for you, due to explicit content or explicit lyrics. G-@CAPS4 @NUM1, should be the only movies allowed on shelves, rated @CAPS5 and up should be behind counter, and the same with music. I am pretty sure that is clear with this audience.     @CAPS2 that I have shared with you my opinions on different views on censorship in libbraries what is you thoughts on this topic as you read this persuasive essay. You have read my thoughts on experience, observations, and just common sense on this topice. If you had to write an essay on censorship in libraries, how would you come about this.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12370,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, from Home: The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 of our Lives, the author creates a mood of the story. First, the mood is very @CAPS3. This is because the author uses his family members, and his struggles to find the definition of ""family."" Also, the author shares specific information about what his family was like. Also, the, mood seems to be very thankful. The author continueously thanks his parents, and he recalls on his past time about how wonderful his family and friends are. The author also makes the mood thankful by Narciso Rodriguez saying, ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" Narciso will never forget when his parents turned the simple old house they had, into a home. In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, the author creates a mood of the story.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10488,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph is about how the snow melts and the greenery returns, like a rebirth. This similizes his renew motivation to take the test again. This really shows how close he is to nature and the affect that his exposure to it has had on him over the years.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1351,1,"Dear local @CAPS1, @CAPS2 people have been using computers for years. But @CAPS3 it good for there health. Were not thinking about what power teens have with the internet. If you need info. We have lots of great books. If we need communication we have phones. We need to go outside and exercise. @CAPS3 the computer another reason why america @CAPS3 becoming obese? First, teens can do harmful stuff on the internet to themselves or others. People have invented facebook and myspace. Almost every teen in america has a facebook. Did you know that theres cyberbullying now. People have humiliated others on the internet. How do we know that the person were talking to @CAPS3 who he/she say's he/she @CAPS3? Teens give away to much info of themselves, some have gone missing from such an action. The internet @CAPS3 a powerful weapon, but can teens handle this kind of power? Next, although the computer @CAPS3 a convient device. @CAPS3 it not true that we have something called books. We cant believe everything that @CAPS3 said on the computer . We can get all that we need and more off of books. People lived in the middle ages without computers, but with books. Why can we. Have we grown lazy to do such a thing as to get up and look through a book. Finaly, if communication we seek, then why not a simple text or call. we go through all the trouble of turning on and opening pages just to chat online. We have become lazy because of device's that have all we need in our homes. sure its a good thing but dont forget a bad one to. It seems like the computer @CAPS3 another reason for america growing obese. We need to get up walk, hang out with friends, do sports. But how can we when were adicted to computers. It's like a powerful drug. To conclude I think computers are not good for us. Teens with the power of facebook. Fake and dangerous info when we have book. Lastly, our own health. At this point I ask you, @CAPS3 the computer worth everything we think it @CAPS3? No, it @CAPS3 not.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19232,7,"One day when I was patient is when I was waiting was waiting @CAPS1 @NUM1 to come out of game stop. One day til  @CAPS1 @NUM1 come out I kept looking at the signs of the game and I said “@CAPS2 must be a good game”. So instead of waiting at game stop I went home and played @ORGANIZATION1 football @NUM3 on my xbox @NUM4 then I got tired , tired and more tired so I fell aslteep on my pep game chair  till the morning. My older brother woke up and said “lets go to gamestop to get @CAPS1”. So we went to game stop and waited in a long line for like an hour and thirty minutes til in was  are turn to buy @CAPS1 it  cost like @MONEY2. I had @MONEY3 my brother had @MONEY1 he did’nt wanna put no money in for the game and I said “I’ll pay @MONEY3 and you will @MONEY1. So we brought the game and played it tell we beat it.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4164,2,I go to the libbrary every @DATE1 of every week. Although I don't really read that much. I usualy get movies or music. If I do get a book to read its usualy a magazine or something for school.     I don't think that books should be removed. If you don't read them it doesent mean that other people don't. If you don't like the book just ignore it and go on its simple as that. For instens if I found a book about @CAPS1 or about the @CAPS2 fathe I would not read it for my self but I would not take it down off of the shelf. Other people might want to read it. It's there choice to read it not mine.     It's like the radio know. The radio plays songs and cuts out the curis words. I don't think that they should do that because it messies up the songs lyrics and it is going aginst the artists words. The artist sings the song but people chang his or her words. To me I don't think thats right. It's also like telivtion now. You see the movie in theaters or on @CAPS3 and they have bad language or bad seens in them. When you watch that same movie on telivtion they take out about @NUM1 minuts of the movie because of th bad seen or they cut out the languge.     To me I think every thing should stay. I think if you don't want your kids to see it just block it but don't cut out parts from the movie it's not fair to the other people. If people don't like some music then just swich the radio station to another area on the radio. Theres no need to take the words out. Kids are going to pick the words up in school or off the streets any way. I also think seence we are having to pay so much taxes I think we should get the privilage to come home and watch movies on telivtion and relax,3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4342,2,"Moving @CAPS1 The @CAPS2 @CAPS3 In @CAPS4!     When you enter a library or a book store of course you will find @CAPS3 that you like and dislike. You're opinion @MONTH1 not be the same as someone else. Sometime you can feel a little bit uncomfortable with the situation and the way thing are going. People have diffrernt looks about different @CAPS3 in this way of @CAPS4. You are going to come across good @CAPS3, bad thing, happy @CAPS3, sad @CAPS3, @CAPS3 you agree about, and @CAPS3 you disagree about.      I believe that books, music, movies, magazines, or anything else should not be removed if they are found offensive to anybody. The reason I state that is because if any of those items offened one person they might not be offensive to another. Different people have different intrest in many different @CAPS3. So therefore it should not be any reason that the materials should be removed from the shelves. Especially if they are not hurting anything or anyone physically.     Speaking from personal experience there were many times i felt offened about certain @CAPS3. I feel that abortions can come off a bit harmful to a @CAPS4 that has not been born yet. Killing a child that has not experince the thing you have is not right. But some sometime the way i can feel can be alot different to other people. So who am I to tell another person what they can and can not do. That comes with voicing your own opinion.     You can not change the way another person is thinking or feeling. If you find a book or anything like that hard to deal with it is crazy. Think about the @CAPS2 situation that you might come across and can be offensive to you. It will be alot of times you will disagree or have an opinion but can not change or do anything about it. @CAPS3 will be much easier and less @CAPS2 if we sometimes deal with the difficullt @CAPS3 in @CAPS4",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3839,2,"I am writing to the newspaper, about removing certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, and more. I dont think this should be allowed. I dont think it would be far to others.     I'm going to give you three reasons why you shouldn't let people just remove stuff like that off of shelves. @CAPS1 first reason is that, what if you had a child and wanted he or she to see the same movie or book you did when you were little? But they took it off the shelves. That would be sad and you would want them to see the movie or book you did but they cant. Like what Katherine Paterson said 'All of us think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf.'     @CAPS1 seceond reason is, what if you and a wife or husband had a favorite song, but they took it off the shelves? That would be devistating, it would just break your heart. Well I know it would me if it was are wedding song.      The last reason and @CAPS1 favorite reason is, you just have your own opion. Everyone has thier own opion, if you dont want to see them or look at them just dont do it. It's as easy as that, just try to ignor it. It's really not your problem to worry about.     Those are just three reasons why you should not let people remove anything off of any shelves. Like what Katherine Paterson said 'But if i have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' @CAPS2 if we let this happen everyone will take avanege of it. That is why I am @CAPS2 no to letting people remove anything off of any shelves",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15448,6,"The mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose. In the short excerpt of ""The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, many obstacles were clearly stated to why the mast was not a good idea. The building of the mast was rushed. Al Smith had realized that he was close to losing the title of the worlds tallest building and quickly put the mast to mind. Problems quickly arose The first problem that had arose was the lack of a suitable landing area. Al Smith stated that passengers could safely swing in the breeze. This problem was ignored and soon other problems arose as the building of the mast continued. The greatest problem that should have been thought about before building the mast was nature itself The winds were horrible at the height of the building and architects soon realized that landing would be a major issue. The mast was still questioned and architects and engineers were doing all they could to make it work until something was brought upon them, a law. It is illegal for airships to fly too low over an urban area. The law that was realized marked the end of Al Smith's idea and by the late 1930's, the idea of using the mooring mast for dirigibles and their passengers have quietly disappeared.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3909,2,"Would you let someone ban your favorite movie, just because it has mildly offensive materials in it? I know I would not.  If everyone had the right to ban books then we would have no books, because something would offend someone. You should not ban books because it desecrates our individuality , we have the freedom of press, and because it would ruin the future.      If you ban a book then you are giving up your indiviuality. If you let someone decide what is offesive to you, then how can you express yourself. Therefore, by letting someone else decide what is appropriate for you to read, you are giving up your freedom. By banning books, you are not being yourself you are conforming to what other people want. Therefore, you should not ban books because, it demolishes your individuality, and it makes you conform to what other people want.      There should not be any banning of books. You should not be able to ban books because we have the freedom of press. The freedom of press means that we can write whatever we want. However, you should not ban books because we have the freedom to choose what we read. This means that we as individuals should be able to decide what we want to read and what we do not. You should not ban books because we have the freedom of press, and because we have the freedom as individuals to read what we want.     If you ban books then you will ruin the future. There are hundreds of really phenomenal books out there that would be banned, and future people would not be able to enjoy them.  There are books that can change your life, and teach you how to deal with things, and  if we ban them then we are ruining the chance to help future people with their problems. People turn to books for knowledge, and help, and for ideas, and if we take away their books then how can we say that we are paving the way for the future if we are destroying it along the way. Books should not be banned because if they were then, we would be ruining the future for others, and we would be destroying our own future.     In conclusion, books should not be banned because, it limits our individuality, we have the freedom of press, and because it destroys our future. If you ban books , more likely than not, your favorite book would get banned. Also, if everyone could ban books, then there would be nothing to read because all of the books would be banned. By banning books you are destroying the future, limiting our freedoms, and abolishing our indivuality.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16282,6,The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature itself. Because The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Also because the Empire State Building have's an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7673,3,He is going on a journey on his bike. He has to go down hills and deal with the factt that has has no water. That’s basically what the setting is about.,3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21178,8," @CAPS1 is laughter important? In my opinion, laughter is very important! How could laughter affect someones life? If there was any, or not? Also, @CAPS1 is laughter important to me? Laughter is important for so many reasons. In a relationship, every day life, and with the ones you have in your life. How would the world be if there wasn't any laughter in this world? It would be very dry and dull. It helps connect people together, if they have the same sense of humor. Having a good sense of humor is very important these days. A lot of people use sarcasm which isn't ""laughter"" but to some people it could be or some could feel hurt by it. However, most people that feel hurt by it,don't have a sense of humor in any way, shape or form. Most people have heard the saying, ""it takes more muscles to frown then smile,"" that is a very true and factual fact! Having a glorious relationship is the best thing with my significant other. The affectionate that he can be by sharing our laughter together, brings us closer to a point where we couldn't be at all if there wasn't for laughter and communication. Having a a sense of humor is a important thing in a relationship, to most people. @CAPS1 would you want to be with someone who bores you? Who @CAPS2't make you laugh when your sad? I sure wouldn't want that. Laughter brings out great communication skills, by laughing with someone it shows your type of opinion on the subject you are talking about. In a relationship, could you imagine if there wasn't no laughter in it? Would you feel the same about the person your with if there isn't any laughter? How would you feel knowing the person you love isn't very ""humorous"" and @CAPS2't like to laugh often? I couldn't handle that. I would want to love someone who is very funny with a great sense of humor.  Laughter is important to me for so many reasons. I would rather be around very ecstatic people then someone who brings me down! I consider, laughter to be one of the most important things in my life, and in my relationship with my significant other. It brings us closer. People ask, "" @CAPS2't it ever get old being happy all the time?"" ""Of course not!"" I would say in defense. @CAPS1 would someone think that way? Being in a phenomenal mood all the time, would be the most amazing place I would want to be in my life and with my partner.  In my opinion, I would think that almost everyone would feel close to what I'm saying. However, people have their own opinions about laughter and how and @CAPS1 it's important, there are titled to their opinion. I know a few people, that don't like to be in a very cheery mood, that would prefer to be sad all the time and not care. Laughter could raise you up from that!",15,16,,31,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16057,6,"There were a lot of obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. For instance, they wanted to add more hight to the Empire State Building so it can be, ""equipped for an age of transportation that was then only the dream of aviation dream"" @PERSON1 said. Next, Al Smith wanted to add a mooring mast at the top of the Empire State Building so it can allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers off and on. ""Over sixty thousand dollar's worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" Then they, ""designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from inside, with a stepped-back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself."" Also, ""the rocket-shaped mast would have four wings at it's corners, of shiny aluminum, and would rise to a conical roof that would house the mooring arms"". The roof had to be completed before the mask can take place. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of mooring mast was nature itself. In conclusion, those were the obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9324,4,I think the author used that response because she was showing that she had to go through another @DATE1 or hard work in planting flowers.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1222,1,"Computers. First of all. I strongly beleave that people should not use computers all the time. Staying up to late, like on a school day and your tired. Your eyes look at black & white words that can make your tired, forcing to stay up, and drinking red bull monster, or any other energy drink when your not suppose to. Second of all, almost the hole school use's the labtops, and the computers like @PERCENT1 use's them. The othe <@PERCENT2@NUM1> is students and adults write on paper, and that has good hand and combination. the @PERCENT1 is like all people go online, facebook, youtube, games, and google. The @PERCENT2 is all people use to write on their paper, and doodle on the back round. Third of all. In other state's people don't have enternet service, or they can't use computer. People have to write their work on a piece of paper. Some kids, youngadults, adults, and students sometimes have bad hand writing. I think all people should not have a computer.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13260,5,"In the memoir the author creates a mood. Narciso Rodriguez tells about their childhood, and their home. This creates a mood in the reader of being home and warmth of family and love.@CAPS1 this memoir gave a feeling of home, or being in the home of a Cuban family. Almost as if who ever was @CAPS1 it knew them. It gave a feeling of hospitality and love. For example in paragraph to the author talks about the home, food, music, etc. In the end of of the paragraph it said all those things formed the backdrop to life in our warm home.Throughout the memoir it speaks about family, friends, and neighbors. This gives a feel of hospitality, for example ""My parents always kept their arms and door open to the many people we considered family.""@CAPS1 this memoir creates a mood in the reader. Mostly of hospitality, but also of love, warmth, and friendship. As if you know the Rodriguez family, and you're entering their home.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9911,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” the author concludes the story with the lines “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The reason that the author concludes the test with these lines is because she is re-establing the symbolism of the plant. In the text it said that the plant budds in the spring, once it has time to grow and adapt to the new enviroment. Just as the plant needed that time so did the main character Saeng. She just moved from Vietnam and failed her drivers test. Saeng is very unsure of her new culture. For example she likes bitter melon it says. “But she had grown up eating it and, she admitted to herself much prefered it to a Big Mac.” She appears to think she is misunderstood an no one likes her, but just as the plant will adapt to this new life so will she.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18706,7,"Patience is truly the hardest thing and body really ? that a ?.I hard to because im on punishment for not doing what I was suporse to do. So I have to be patient it and what it out until it was being patient it is what for a perfect of team to did. From my pop it of how. So while im on punishment I just waiting it out so my time will come because I can’t speed up there and just make it ??? quicker but it  I could  I would but  for now I have to want. Im a permanent for quite a while so I can just be patient .I know before taking it hard but most people have to do it because rushing is most likely not the way to do it patience also helps the maker  and cam saved you time. Patience is also a good thing to have because you can want for certainly things like; money, clothes, shoes, homes, food, animals (pets), jobs, education, car (transportation, and things of the sudn because at you post rush every thing you want get it the way you were surpose to but waiting and being patient can get you exactly what you want and exactly how you want it to be!",4,4,,8,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12798,5,"The mood in this memoir is very moving and heart-felt. By the way the author writes about his family @CAPS1 can just feel the warmth and love that his family provided for him ""... my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today."" @CAPS1 can just tell by this quote how much of an impact Narciso Rodriguez's parents had on his life. It also explains how crafted his parents were and how intelligent they were. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @PERSON2 most deffinatly loved his family. ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9068,4,The author concludes the story like this because the seasons are changing and there finising there cycle and starting a new one. Thus I think this is a good way to end a story like this because I kinda sets a mood and a feel at the end of the story.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21599,8," I sat at the table, speechless, as they told me their story. The @CAPS1 had been through a lot in the past seven years. @PERSON1's youngest son was born three weeks early and the doctor told her he would only live for three days at the most. As she told me, she stared off into the distance as if she were reliving the moment. She told me that her baby, @PERSON2, had a rare disease. Half of his brain was smooth, instead of the the normal rigid. She told me about those first days and how scared she was. Seeing @PERSON2 next her was the only thing that kept me from bursting into tears. He had lived longer. @PERSON1 told me about how as @PERSON2 grew older he couldn't walk. His pediatrician told her that @PERSON2 would never be able to take his first steps and would have to live life confined in a wheel chair. @PERSON2 was given another miracle. He walked. With the aide of a camouflage cane he beat the odds once again. @PERSON1 told me about how @PERSON2 couldn't talk. He only speaks through sign language. She also taught me how to take care of him. He was a normal kid who liked to play with cars and @CAPS2. He wasn't any different then the rest of the kids. This was going to be a roller coaster of a week.  I had only met the @CAPS1 early that @TIME1 when they had arrived to @CAPS4 @CAPS5, a @DATE1 @CAPS4 for disabled kids. I had only known them for a few hours and they were telling me their life story. I got the next week to become best friends with @PERSON2. We went swimming in the river, played with sticks, went on nature walks, even rode a horse. The smile on @ORGANIZATION1's face lit up my day every time I saw it. @PERSON2 got to experience things that a child of his kind would never be able to in a lifetime. We got to go tubing, ride on jet skis, and fish in a stock pond where we were sure to catch something. Having the best time of our lives we parted each night to bed, him in his cabin, and I in my tent. Each night as I left I could hear the family laughing and talking about how great the day was and how much fun we were having. To be a part of making a child happy was the cherry on top of my @CAPS4 experience. One event in particular from @CAPS4 that week will always stay close to my heart. @PERSON2 had been experimenting around on a tricycle made specifically for children with disabilities. He tried for hours to make it go. No matter how hard her tried he couldn't move. My heart broke when I saw him start to cry. He was so frustrated. @PERSON2 gave up and moved on to the swings instead. The rest of the day was filled with the look of sorrow and frustration on his face. I wanted to fix it. I had to fix it. He needed to be happy. That night I went to our @CAPS4 directer, @PERSON3, and I told him about what had happened and he brought me to the garage. The garage was so chaotic and unorganized. I didn't quite understand what he was doing until he emerged with a brand new shiny bike. One with foot straps and supportive seat complete with dragons, and a bell. It was the perfect thing. I was so excited to let @PERSON2 try it out in the @TIME1. The next @TIME1, after a delicious blueberry pancake breakfast, we set off to try out the new toy. This moment was big for @PERSON2 and his parents. He was told he'd never walk, or ever be able to ride a bike, or talk. He had lived through miracles before. He could do it again. @PERSON3 strapped @PERSON2 on the bike, put a helmet on him and started him off. The anticipation was almost too much. After a few seconds passed, the wheels began to turn. @PERSON2 was riding a bike. Tears streamed down our faces, this was the greatest moment of @ORGANIZATION1's life. The way he smiled and laughed at his new found capability was a great sight. To be part of something so special was an honor. @PERSON2 rode his bike all around @CAPS4 that day. He even rode it into his cabin, and continued to ride in circles around his bunk. I left the family to enjoy their night and went off to bed myself.  The rest of the week was filled with a great deal of fun, but when the end came the goodbyes were hard. We didn't want to leave each other. I had become part of @LOCATION1's family, they trusted me and I felt at home with them. @PERSON2 and I were new best friends and couldn't wait until the next @DATE1 when we would meet again at @CAPS4 @CAPS5 where we could do it all over, and make new memories.",25,22,,47,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1187,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever used a computer? More than @PERCENT1 of the population Computers benefit society and have gotten people all over the world smarter and advanced. Computers help people learn things keep in touch with family and friends! They @MONTH1 also tad addicting but people know when to stop. Computers have brought us a long way! Computers are a magnificent tool for new things. The great websites for example search engines, dictionary even @CAPS1 all virtually encourage us to learn about the ""riches"" the tropical @LOCATION1. By computers letting people easily access tools that help us gain knowledge can become more advanced in many of our lives. For example by on the computer, scientist can develop new theories did uncover things! Computers also have websites and programs that can help you cannot will family and friends! ""I have last touch with many of my friends from high school,"" @PERSON1 explains ""the computer through email and facebook, is a great way to stay in touch with them!"" Computers of websites including facebook, and myspace that can help people stay in touch/find family and friends. It has came to my realization to find that many people would live long, lives if they could not internet will friend. But with the help people are lively and happy including with friend! Although computer are good for this they @MONTH1 be addiction. I have people that @MONTH1 be able to have computer addiction. But on the other feel that the if he can make their decisions in what is right. If people want to spend countless hours sitting in front of the glowing technology then be it. Not one person. Computers anyone it is simply unconstituional. Most people including understand that computers are a benefitful and fantistic source of technology. @NUM1 out of @NUM1,000 people in the world are addicted to computers. There from the small we are able that computers are for from addicting. In conclusion, Computers have a positive effect on people. They teach help stay in touch and are not addicting. Therefore they very beneficial to the world, its people and technology.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12194,5,"The @CAPS1 created by the auther is that in paragraph @NUM1 it States that ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home. It was verry heart of which was the kitchen. My parents both shared cooking duties and unwitting pakd onto me their rich culinary Skills and a love a cooking that is still with me today."" I think this relats to the @CAPS1 of the memoir because living in @LOCATION1 you could Still have a house and life stile like you were Still living back where you live, in this case in Cuba.""",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1316,1,"Dear local newspaper, Those who do support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. I, for one agree with them. Computers are wonderful devices that allow people of all ages to learn about the world and it's people. It allows people to talk to family members that live far away, freinds, or sometimes buisness associates. Technology.. also provides education. Don't you think socializing, and learning are two very important aspects of everyday people? Learning new things can only be interesting if you can actually see them. Books can be helpful defending on when it was made. Internet websites can gives you pictures uploads almost every week. Therefore you know where you want to book your next visit. Yes books can give you tons of information, but not as much as the thousands of websites there are out there right this minute. Want to learn how to speak spanish look it up, fast and easy on the internet. No need to look and look a hundreds of books just to get one little fact. Throughout everything you do in a day chatting with friends is a good way to relax and have fun. Whether it's a close friend or a co-worker. There are now several ways to talk to friends, phones, texting, instant messaging, and even video chat! Yes it @MONTH1 cause time away from family, but you can easily say goodbye to the friend and talk to them later. Finally learning is a huge deal with people today. Well with this, advanced technology we have found ways to educate students in a fun way. Websites that are colorful and fun can teach kids how to multiply and read. About @PERCENT1 of children are more attached to colorful objects than books with words in them. So to all parents and guardians computers arent all that bad, they're actually very good. ",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9958,4,"The last paragraph of the story displays the theme of determination. The Hibiscus reminded her that her ""home"" was her old life, but misses @CAPS1 in her new life. She gains determination through the reminder of this. She soon realizes that she is home, for things have come familiar to her, such as the V formation of the geese. She loved her old home, but she realized it was time to move on. The last paragraph does not only mean retaking a driving test, it symbolizes the determination to embrace her new home and life.  ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9244,4,"In the story a young girl named saeng takes a test but she had falled. She is going to retake it next spring, thats why the last paragraph say; when then come Back, Saeng vowed  silently to herself, in the spring mum the snow melts and geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then l will take the test again the author concludes the story with this ending @CAPS1 in the story it talks about the hibiscus flowers so, since she failed the test instand  of saying she will retake it next spring they say when the hibiscus flowers bud @CAPS1 at that time it will be spring.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6090,3,"There are many ways that the setting affected the cyclist. One way is in the story when it says that it was very hot, he could become dehydrated and could possibly have a heat stroke, also the rodes were windy. This could be a problem because hes tired so he might not be able to go around the turns, he might just keep going straight and then get lost even more. That is all about how the features of the setting affect the cyclist in the story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
372,1,"Dear newspaper, I think computers have a good effect on people. Computers are very helpful to many it gives them an education, and they can interact with many people. Computers can be very helpful to many people. Working with computers can give people extremly well hand-eye coordination. Dr. @PERSON4 said, ""In recent surveys and tests, I have noticed a major increase with hand-eye coordination of @PERCENT1 all thanks to computers. ""Computers is also a way that people can learn to type in a recent survey at @ORGANIZATION1, @NUM1-more students know to type, thanks to computers. Computers can be very helpful to business people with creating power points. Instead of making a really big poster board for @CAPS2 @CAPS1 project, I made a power point instead that was so much easier. Computers can be very helpful to many people. Computers are used in many schools to help teach students about new things. For example, students can learn about interesting places that they never knew about. ""@CAPS2 friends is moving to @LOCATION1 and she has no idea what it's like, or where it is. So, we looked it up on the internet and found out so much cool stuff about it, "" says @PERSON5 computers can also teach students about new cultures. At @CAPS3 @ORGANIZATION2, @ORGANIZATION2, @PERCENT2 of the students learned about @NUM2 new cultures in one year, thanks to computers. Not only can computers tell people about interesting places, but interesting people. I never knew that president @PERSON2 had @NUM3 brothers, and gre up in @LOCATION2, did you? Computers can be used in schools to help teach students about new things. Computers are used by many people to interact with another. using computers is an easy way to talk with friends. Using instant messenger is free! Now parents don't have to pay annoying phone bills anymore! In a recent survey done in the town of @CAPS4 @CAPS5, @PERCENT3 of the people there thought that using computers to talk to friends was alot easier. Computers can help people meet new people online. Habe you ever heard of the dating sites? Well, this is what @PERSON1 has to say about it, ""@CAPS6 wonderful! @CAPS2 husband and I met online and we have been together for @NUM4 years."" @CAPS7 you have a faw away cousin and if you call or write them a letter it's too expensive? Well now you don's have to worry about that anymore because talking to distant relatives online is free! ""@CAPS6 so much easier talking to people online."" says @PERSON3. Computers can be used to interact with another. Computers have a very good effect on people. They are helpful, can be used to give education, and they can be used to interact with another.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7649,3,"In the essay by Joe Kurmaskie many obstacles are caused from the diffrent settings. For example, the hot temperature caused the character to get dehydrated. He recalled “ I eased past, trying to keep my balance in my dehydrated state. ” This caused the loss of determination, which led to him lossing his consciousness. The hills he had to cycle also effected him. They caused him to become tired and weak and to lose his determination, as well. Just like the temperature problem, the loss of determination could eventually  make him lose consciousness. He said “ if it looked like i was going to lose consciousness for the last time.”  ",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21484,8," I rested my back on the cool steel of the lockers trying to ease my nerves. ""@CAPS1 game is everything we have worked for- every excruciating practice, every tedious drill, and every game film we have studied down to the minutia. It was all to prepare us for tonight. @CAPS7 we lose tonight, everything we have worked was for nothing."" I listened attentively as @PERSON1, our team captain, spoke. The words she chose for our pre-game speech were straight to the point, and anything but sugar coated. As I glanced around the locker room it was easy to observe that everyone one of my teammates was anxious. Emilie was vigorously chewing what was left of her nails, while @LOCATION1 preferred to show her uneasiness by the constant tapping of her foot. @PERSON1 finished her speech, and with the break of our huddle we entered the gymnasium. The stands were packed with familiar faces of our small town. In a small section of the stands there was a group of people wearing colors not native to our school. @CAPS1 brutal reminder brought my attention back to warm ups.  The twenty minutes we had for warm ups seemed to last no longer than two minutes. The announcer began to state our starting line up, but it was no use. The roar of the crowd overpowered the speaker system. It seemed as @CAPS7 everyone from our town of five thousand was attending the game. Not an empty space was left in the bleachers. The bench vibrated from the stomping and clapping of the crowd, threatening with every shake to collapse. The starting five for each team walked out to the center of the court for tip off. With the loss of the tip off our team was quickly put under pressure. From the first possession of the game we were chasing our opponent.  The first two quarters ended with a dead even score. Feeling discouraged my team regrouped in the locker room for @DATE2 time. We entered the locker room a moment before my @CAPS3. I took @CAPS1 opportunity to @CAPS2 around at the expressions' of my teammates. Nothing, but disappointment and fear crossed their face's. My @CAPS3 opened the door, and I instinctively braced myself for the throwing of keys against the wall, or the smash of the clip board. My team had witnessed these acts of rage countless times before. To my surprise, my @CAPS3 entered with complete poise and composure, as @CAPS7 our first @DATE2 of treacherous play didn't phase him. We were not yelled at, or criticized. Instead, he rubbed his eyes, face down and shoulders hunched over. His belly began to shake, shortly followed by his shoulders. My first hypothesis was that he was crying, but then to my amazement, I heard the soft chuckle of our @CAPS3. Soon that soft chuckle metamorphosised into a stomach thrusting, loud cackle. My team exchanged confused glances, and waited for my @CAPS3's explanation in anticipation.  ""@CAPS2 at yourself!"" @CAPS3 @CAPS4 ordered. ""@CAPS5 are all more tentative than when I asked @PERSON2 out to my first dance!"" We could always rely on @CAPS3 for an unrelated metaphor. Even @CAPS7 it wasn't related to basketball, the point was clear. ""@CAPS7 @CAPS5 guys would just believe in yourself the way I believe in @CAPS5, @CAPS1 game would be a blow out! Instead, @CAPS5 are playing like a bunch of bunny foo-foos!"" We all laughed with the thought of playing like the nursery rhyme we had hear so frequently when we were children. The speech @CAPS3 @CAPS4 gave eased us all. The confident team we should have been from the start of the match was now prepared to win the @DATE2. To think that @CAPS1 confidence came from just one comforting laugh seemed almost improbable.  The whistle blew to start the @DATE2. We played with such assertiveness and confidence that @CAPS7 @CAPS5 were to compare one @DATE2 with the other, it would @CAPS2 like two different teams. We grasped the lead early in the @DATE1, and sustained it for the rest of the game. The victory of that night's game lead us one round deeper into the state tournament. As I walked back to the locker room I glanced around the massive gym. I looked at: the crowd, score board, opponents, referees and news reporters. I realized how easy it is to get caught up everything that shouldn't effect @CAPS5. All the distractions easily make @CAPS5 forget the main purpose of why @CAPS5 play the game. Occasionally we need reminders, like the calming laugh of @CAPS3 @CAPS4. Without that reassuring laugh, my team never would have united, and defeated our opponent.",25,25,,50,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
27,1,"Computers a good because you can get infermation, you can play games, you can get pictures, But when you on the computer you might find something or someone that is bad or is viris. If ther is a vris you might want shut off the computers so it does not get worse. The are websites for kids, like games, there are teen games, there are adult games. Also pictures are bad for kids because most of the time they lead to inapropreit pictures. You should only look up infermation that you need not things like wepons or knifes. Also there are differnt kinds of companies like @CAPS1&t @CAPS2. @CAPS2 is a good place to get computers @CAPS1 so is @CAPS1&t.",2,2,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10383,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again.” The author shows that Saeng will take the test again and that she will be ready and she will pass the test. Also, the author concludes the story with that paragraph because it shows that it ends the story knowing that she will take the test over again, so she knows she has faith to take the test again and make her mother proud that she passed. This is why the author concludes the story with this paragraph",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15789,6,"The worker faced many obsticals while building the Empire State Building. Sence Al Smith was trying to compete with the Chrysler Building for the tallest building he kept adding on to the Empire State Building. To make his building the tallest in the world he added the mooring mast. This mast would make the Empire State building 1,250 feet tall. The builders had to redesine the entier buildings sceleton. They had to make sure the Empire State Building could hold up the mast. The mast was made so that Dirigibles could land thire and people could get on and off it. ""The steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened."" The builders fixed the steel fram of the building with in two months. The building went on as planned. After awhile the people begin to see that the mas couldn't be used for dirigibles because of the violent wind currents at the top of the building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13418,5,"The mood created by the author was grateful. The mood is grateful because he gives thanks to his parents For ""... their love and sacrifice"" (¶@NUM1). This memoir is based on the definition of family. Rodriguez explains that Family means many things. It means helping others, accepting everyone, and for his parents giving up your life so your children could have a better one. He recalls the many people his mother and father help. The people in his neighborhood that were not related by blood but were still his family. The courage and selflessness of his parents leaving their country to start over. He tells them of his ""...admiration of their strength and perseverance"" (¶@NUM1). There is still ""no way to express my gratitude"" (¶@NUM1), he also states. He will be forever grateful to his parents for these lessons that have formed his life.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6558,3,"The character in this short story has a most that changes with his surroundings. Towards the beginning when he was enjoying his ride no said ‘’ The cool pines and rushing rivers of  Yosemite had my name all over them,’’ As time goes on and he begins to realize nobody inhabits the path he is on he becomes continues and the terrain become rougher.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10325,4,"In the Story the @CAPS1 concluds the story with the sentance ""When they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snow melts and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again."" I think he ends it this way because she has accepted that she failed or lost but is willing to try again to accomplish her goal and ""take that test again"". Also she is making a promise, or a vow to her self and to not give up on her goal.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12835,5,"The mood of the author is happy. The mood is happy because they doesn't really mention any negative thoughts or feelings at all. He mentions throughout the story, how he is so grateful for his family, like his mom and dad. He talks about himself being cuban, and how proud he is to be Cuban. The narrator has a bunch of good thoughts, about his mother and father. He mentioned in the story ""I will alway be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. He always tells his parents of how proud he is of them, and mentions how their basically an @CAPS1.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13071,5,"In the memoir @PERSON1 from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives there is a thankful and gracious mood. Talking about his parents immigrating, @PERSON1 says, ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life,"" This quote shows thanks because @PERSON1 is glad his parents immigrated to give him a better life. Another example of a gracious mood is in paragraph @NUM1, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @PERSON1 shows his is gracious for what his parents did and how much they care about him. A final example of thanks is, ""It was here where I learned the real definition of ""family."" And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood."" @PERSON1 is thankful that he got the opportunity to grow up in such a great house and community. As you can see from these examples, the memoir had a very thankful and gracious mood to it.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19536,7,"I was patient one time, really patient but kinda went like this. It was @CAPS1 and my mom a I went shoping for presents. So my mom and I went to the mall and walked into target, and I already knew what I was going  to get my brother, the new game @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @NUM1 it was perfect. But my mom wouldn’t let me buy  so I just bought him a target gift card for @MONEY1 i had to hide it for almost a month, but i really wanted to know what my mom got for my brother and I, but she wouldn’t tell me so I  had to be patient. And when @CAPS1 came I was so suprised because my mom bought @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @NUM1 for me and my brother.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1416,1,"The advancements of technology has developed so much that it has become comenly known to us as a normal house hold such as we use it every day at work, home, schools, bussneses it has become a comen used item in the everyday life. Emails, researching, questions on the world around us. It is required at almost every job application and at school and every thing in between. It's the - @DATE1 - complete age. Computers are and every day thing such as email how thats something that I dont worry about that and also there used to file a tax return. Also it is used to make reports up for people. Computers have also become a comen used thing such as school that we use them for reports, studies, and some home work. Also buiseness use it to comunicate with corprat @LOCATION1 uses a wide stance of technoligy they rec got a whole bunch of apples. Last. Computers are required at most jobs, and @CAPS1 going to list a few state, schools, military defence, jobs for on missles A and thier satlelite communication shut dwn on all comunications cell phones one those plaines that if it the twin towers nitro in atrack, tracking the truck where it gose and the rest I know about computers is classifieded. And this is why computers are needed in this society to use every day and thier comenly used and that are requirded.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20924,8,"Laughter Laughter can make a situation less uncomfortable, bring two people together or just show your having a good time. In my experiences laughter comes at the best of times. On a typical @ORGANIZATION1 day at @ORGANIZATION1 I was sitting with my friends at lunch time just hanging out talking about whats going on in our lives, when I notice a girl sitting all alone. I don't recognize her, she must be a new student. I ask around to see if anyone knows anything about her; no one knows. Looking back at the girl she looks very lonely and in need of a friend. Curious to meet someone new I walk over to her and make conversation after a little while we relax and start to talk about our interests. I remember her saying something funny and I started to laugh, she begins to laugh at my laugh being as its almost hysterical sounding and everyone thinks it sounds ridiculous. At that moment as were sitting there laughing together I realize, its bringing us together making us closer despite the fact we had just met but ten minutes ago.  Laughter makes life more enjoyable and happy knowing that you can share that with someone you have just met or someone you have known your whole life is magical. Its a universal language that everyone should speak. Laughing is healthy and good for the heart.",15,14,,29,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15773,6,"In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION2, there were obstacles that the builders of the Empire state Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The majestic spire of the Empire State Building is familiar to many people throughout the world, but not many know that the original purpose of the mast was to serve as a landing spot For dirigibles also known as blimps. The builders of the Empire State building faced a myriad of obstacles. It is proven when it says ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building Flat Roof... A Thousand foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable Tether, would add stress to the Buildings frame"". They took a risk in having the dirigibles tied to the Empire State building, which can cause pressure to the building which soon might clasp. Another @CAPS1 that proves that the builders Empire State faced, ""The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature its self"" The winds on top of the building made it dangerous. clearly there were obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13101,5,"They were sad through some of this memoir. The first reason why they were sad was that they left there familys. They also had to leave the country of Cuba. And left their friends to. They were also happy too. The reason why is because it is a Spanish, Cuban, and @CAPS1 comunity. So they feel like they are at home.    They were made because they would half to start there life over. They would have to find new jobs and transportation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21256,8," Boy says too @CAPS2:@CAPS1 weigh?, @CAPS2: what? Boy:@CAPS3 i just wanted too say something to break the ice!Laughter is the greatest thing too have in any kind of relationship, such as family, friends, and a romantic type relationship. It bring each other great bondage and makes the relationship playful.It was @DATE1 and i was on my way too pick up a long time no see friend too go to a warped tour concert. We haven't been in the greatest terms because of an issue that was upon us a few months ago. I figure to take my friend @CAPS4 to a concert shes been wanting to go too all year long. When we finally picked her up there was all sorts of tension of unleft said words to each other, but i wasn't gonna wait any longer too see what was about too happen.Before we headed too the concert my parents decided too get a car wash, @CAPS5 then i automatically thought of a few funny things i could do to make her laugh. The car moved as slow as a turtle into the car wash machine. I had left the window crack open to were enough water would crawl in. We were kinda talking about the concert and i had looked very unaware that my window was open, i actually had too no idea that a lot more of water then i expect had came in. She looked across at me and was like laughing so hard see couldn't even speck of what was happening. I looked at her and was like what? She was your windows open and i had turned and came too find water was rushing its way down and sorta frightened me and i jumped into the air and rushed too close the window. She was laughing like there was no tomorrow and so was i. From that moment on it was such an ice breaker for all the tension that was happening. the elephant had left or side and we had a great rest of the day. See, it true""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people"". When laughter is happening no one is truly sad, mad or anything else. Laughter can bring too people who just meet good greetings, too couples closer together, friend and family joy and happiness. Laughter is truly the key to happiness. ",18,15,,33,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18761,7,"Once there was a girl. She was very impatient until she was taught how to be patient. One day @PERSON1 was going to get her drivers licence. She was to and was so excited to be able to drive. When @PERSON1 got to the licence place she saw that there were a lot of  people waiting. She estimated about @NUM1 people were there, “@CAPS1 did there have to be so many people here,”she thought to herself. After about @NUM2 minutes of waiting she got @CAPS6 mad, because only one person got his licence in the time period. She thragh a big fit  right there. “ugghh! I was supposed to get my licence today not wait around for a bunch of experienced adults to get their licence renewed!” she started blabbering and said. “@CAPS1 do you guys take so long! You are so slow!” she went home and started talking to her faend @CAPS3 on the cell phone. “@CAPS2 there were many people I am never going to get my licence @CAPS3!”   “@PERSON1 just calm down. Stop being so impatient.”  “@CAPS4 the line was so long and . ’ @PERSON2 cut @PERSON1 off. “@CAPS5 you keep running home crying, you will never got your license. The line for a driver licence is always that long. I had to wait @NUM2 hours to get mine.“@CAPS6 five hours!”“@CAPS7, @CAPS4 I took @NUM4 hours with me so I wouldn’t be bored. Take your phone with you. “@CAPS8, ’’ @PERSON1 replied.The next day she went back to the licence place, she took her phone and a book with her. While she waited, she texted her friend, went online and read her book for her book project. She kept moving in the line @CAPS4 she didn’t even realize @CAPS11. @PERSON1 waited for @NUM5 hours that day @CAPS4 she only thought @CAPS11 was @NUM4 because she was preoccupied. @PERSON1 felt great when she finally got her licence, she was the second one in school in got her licence (after @PERSON2).“@CAPS9 @PERSON2, you taught me how to be patient and calm down.”“@CAPS10 problem, @CAPS11’s the least I could do for my best friend.”",12,8,,20,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7106,3,"He was affected by lack of water, the hills, snake in the way and the condition of the road.” The water bottles contained only a  few tantalizing sips. ” This quote explains how the lack of water was a problem. The hills affected him by they were “crippling"". The snake it was long ways on the road and he didn’t know how to get passed it . Finally the   roads were rough and you should go  over the speed limit of 55 mph. So he was affect in a lot of different ways not just one.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19428,7,One day I was watching @CAPS1. I was bored there was nothing good on. So my mom was on the computer. I told her if I can get on she was like ok. In @NUM1 mins. I waited for her to be done. Ok now you can go on. Thanks mom. You welcome. I was very patience. That’s the time I was patience to go on the computer,5,5,,10,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18837,7,One time when @PERSON1 was patient was when @CAPS1 & I taught him how to pitch. @PERSON1 easly devoloped a nice windup and delivery but the arin angle was off. But this didn’t stop him. @CAPS1 asked him if he wanted to stop but @PERSON1 said “no!” @CAPS2 time went on @PERSON1 started to get better and better. He now enjoys throwing @NUM1 mph fasiball at a cetcher. On day’s that he’s unaccurate he doesn’t gave he keeps trying and doesn’t wine. @PERSON1 is now the number two starter in the rotation. Thanks to some seltons patience.,11,8,,19,,,,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4230,2,"Offensive @CAPS1     @CAPS1. Books, music, magazines, movies, commericals. Is it right to have all types of @CAPS1 shown to all ages? I disagree. A variety of people could take offense to the content this @CAPS1 contains. I think that there should be a designated area, or all the alarming @CAPS1 should be removed so everyone can be at peace when they are at the library, or just watching television in their own home.      Even though some people @MONTH1 not take offense to any type of @CAPS1, you have to think about the parents. A majority of parents would not want their children to be surrounded by all the effects that this @CAPS1 brings. Some content @MONTH1 not be suitable to younger kids. Whether it be going to the movies or just going to the library, children can see all the violence and misbehaving going on in the world today. I believe that drugs, alcohol, and curse words have a big influence on kids these days. I think it is our responsibilty to protect them until they are at an age they can make their own judgements.      Religion. Our religion plays a big part on what we think is right or wrong. I was taught to always treat people with respect and to try my hardest to get along with others. A lot of the @CAPS1 contradicts what I have been taught. If you see something on television with your favorite actor or actress on it, we tend to believe it is acceptable behavior. If you have ever been to a movie theater, you know they have certain ratings. The ratings are there to protect younger kids from getting into adult movies. They enforce this rule to an extent, but I don't think they enforce it enough. At the least, libraries and movie rental places could have a designated area for adult rated content to respect those who disagree.      A few years ago when my little sister was about two or three, she was watching a movie with me and it had a few curse words in it. She had never heard them that often and wasn't sure what they meant. For the next couple of days, she went around saying the word and my parents weren't very happy. She had no idea she was doing anything wrong because she heard it on a movie and if they could say it, then she could too. Children sometimes don't know any better and if they would happen to say it to a stranger, they would be offended.      @CAPS1 can be harmless, but it can also be offensive. The safest way to keep the new generation respectful, is to shield them when they are young so that they can learn what is right and what is wrong. When they come out into the real world, they won't be difficult to put up with and will have proper manners. No one will ever agree on the same things, but in the end, we need to do what is right for the betterment of our community.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3760,2,"There are so many resaons why taking a book, movie, or anything else off the shelves is wrong. If it is violent or sexual i can see why it shouldn't be on the shelves but if the reader doesn't like the book or movie, then don't read it or watch it find something else.     If everyone took a book of the shelf that they didn't like then what would we have to read because everyone has a book or two that they don't like or think is offensive. Every book can't be perfect for that person. Everyone has there own veiws on books wether they like it or dislike it. If that book isn't what your looking for then put it back and stop reading it.     There have been many of people say 'If you don't like it then don't listen to it'. They are excaclly right because if there is something that you can't stand to listen to or read and you do it anyway thats going to make you mad. Then your going to complain that it is on the shelfs and say it is bad and it shouldn't be on the shelves anymore. That is what starts all these things of people saying it is offensive. People know what they like and don't like, so if there is something that you don't like then don't listen to it or read it.      It all comes down to common sence. We all have it we just need to start using it. That means if you like country music then don't listen to hard rock or rap because that isn't what you like so don't listen to it. Because if you listen to it then your like why is that stuff on the shevles for people to listen to it's bad for you it is puting bad thought into those teenager's heads. If eveyone sticks to doing what they like and don't worry about the other stuff then eveyone will be fine.",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12080,5,"I believe that the mood created by the author is happy and loving. In paragraph @NUM1 it states ""Growing up in the enviorment instilled in me a great sense that family had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" @CAPS1 not only the people blood related to your is your family but also friends and anyone close to you. The excerpt also states ""It was in this simple house that my parents welcome other refugees to celebrate their arival to this country and where I celebrated my first birthdays."" This shows the love that everyone has for one another. Lastly the excerpt states ""It was in the warmth of the kitchen in this humble house where a Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love. It was here where I learned the real definition of family."" This part makes you feel warm and happy about family.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9169,4,"I think the author concludes the Story with that statement becauses, the snow doesn’t melt in the spring geese don’t return in the winter and the hibiscus is not budding til spring either. The hibiscus is a beautiful plants Saeng loved this plant.    ",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15286,6,"When the Empire State Building was created it was supposed to be a ""pit stop"" for dirigibles, known today as blimps. It was meant to be the modern way of travel, but many problems surfaced changing the plans. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. This was a major safety hazard! Another problem presented itself ""[A] law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" If anything were to go wrong with the ship many people would be put in danger. The harsh wind nature would provide the risk of puncturing the blimp against buildings; also endangering the people below it.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3697,2,"I belive that certain materials should not be removed from the shelves if they are found to be  offensive.  The main reason I say that is becuase there are not just postive things in this world ,but there are alot of negitves also.  It is very important for children to learn and understand the things that are going on in the world they live in reguardless if they are good or bad.  Everyone is going to have to learn about the things going on around them sooner or later ,so it is better to find it out as a child rather then later on in life when you might not have someone there to explain it all to you.       I understand, there are some age limits that should be inforced becuase of some of the fowl nature of them. Though at some point and time before a child becomes an adult they should know most of the basics of life no matter how positive or negitive. Children should not be shelter at a young age to just young adult things because they need to know what else is out there in the world.  For example, children should be taught that there really are bad people in the world.  If they dont understand that something bad could happen to them beucase they did not know the dangers around them because they never learned it.       When I was younger it was required to know other people out side of your race or religion beucase not just your race or religon is in this world.  Also we learned the diffrence between good and bad choices.  If us children did not learn that at an early age many of them would be in some very rough situations today.     On the other hand there is an extent the children need to learn also.  For example, say you buy a video game for your child ,but make sure you inforce to them that killing and shooting is not something that they should be doing out in the real world.  Make sure you teach them the diffrence between really and fakeness.  That is a main reason why kids today do not have self control becuase of the things they learn off of video games.     Now a days on @CAPS1 there are people being preasured by the media to act out of there charater just to get attation.  They are publicsizing sexual and inapproprate things for child to be learning about at a young age ,but they need to be aware that its out there and it is bad.  In magazines they will destorte famous peoples bodies to make them look like something they are not to make people feel like they are not good enough.  Children sould be taught that not eveything they see, hear ,and read are not always right or true.  With todays media and materials it is easy to know the diffrence between right and wrong ,but they put it out there as if one person is doing it it is ok for everyone to be doing it.  In most cases it is not until that person understand all of the facts about it and can make rashanal dessicions on there own and on there own time.     Children now a days will get  presured by media, magazines ,and sometimes by peers.  The media is telling them to do something that is not neccessarliy right ,but is popular.  You should not teach you children off of things like that it will make them want to do things without thinking or considering what is really going on.  With todays magazines, the writers will make people look like something they really are not just to make them look good.  That is not fair to readers, the person that is being expoused, or the author themself.   Finally, with peer pressure today kids will see something off of television and try it then try and get there friends to do it even though they know it is not the right thing to do.  I belive that children, when they are faced with delimia's like these, should know right from wrong with the trouble they are faceing.  If they know nothing about it they need to walk away or learn how to say no reguardless of how hard it might be.      In conclusion, I believe that the children now a days that are exposed to any type of offensive things should know the meaning behind it.  Also they should know the right ways to haddle it when they are put in certain situations.  Lastly, I believe kids should know what is going on around them so when they grow up they know how to fend for themselves ,and not be counting on someone else to tell them baisc things that are going on in the world around them.",4,3,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16188,6,"In the excerpt from ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. ""The stress of the dirigibles load into the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation, which was nearly eleven hundred feet below"" is understood in paragraph nine. This was the biggest obstacle the builders had to face. The builders developed a plan of ""Rather than building a utilitarian mast without any ornamentation, the architects designed a shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that would be illuminated from the inside, with a stepped-back design that imitated the overall shape of the building itself. Although the mast was finished due to @CAPS1 Nature a new law no dirigibles has ever docked at the Empire State Building.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15780,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced obstacles such as weather, chemistry, and construction issues in their attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. For example, the height of the building meant that, ""the winds at the top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". Due to the violent wind currents, the backs of the dirigibles would constantly orbit around the mast. Another problem that the builders of the Empire State Building faced was the gases that most dirigibles were made of. Most of the dirigibles from outside the country were made out of the gas hydrogen: an incredibly flammable gas. This problem was exhibited by the German dirigible Hindenburg that was destroyed by a fire. With this misfortune, the owners of the Empire State building noticed ""how much worse that accident could have been if it had taken place above a densely populated area such as a downtown New York"". With this realization, the builders of the Empire State Building finally came to realize that a dirigible dangling high above the street was not safe or a practical idea. Lastly, the construction of the building itself posed a problem the obstacles of the attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there. The stress of the dirigibles load and the wind pressure would put stress upon the frame of the building and would be incredibly expensive to modify. However, the builders fixed this problem at the cost of sixty thousand dollars. Unfortunately, the other problems with the construction were too great.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4708,2,"Censorship      @CAPS1 you are trying to find the right book, music, movie, magizine, you @MONTH1 come across some interesting ones. Should libraries ban certain books just because of some contend on one page? The person has that ability to read that book or not.      Banning books has been a huge problem in today's society and needs to be stopped. People should be old enough to choose a book that they enjoy and not have to worry about, does this libary have the book that I want. They should not have to think that way @CAPS1 going to a library. @CAPS1 you think of some of the worst books out there, who would want to read those anyway. Many books that people think are bad just have a terrible word on one page. They do not think that they are banning a perfectly good book for others. @PERSON2's '@CAPS2 @CAPS3' was a big upror wheather or not to put the book on the shelfs. The book intailed the @CAPS4 word, and some people were not pleased in this sequence. The book was very well written and just had a few bad words. Should a few bad words keep a book from being a prize winner. The book was such a great story and should be read by many people and should not be kept in a storage room in boxes.      There are many ways to keep a certain age from gettting a certain book. The library could put those certain books in @CAPS5 own part of the library. Keeping the books in a different part of the library might be a better suited way instead of banning the books altogether. The book still will be censored to be in that section or not, but we still will have those wonderful books that we all love so much. What if there was a great informative book about how to do a certain task and no one knew how to do it. That book contained bad language, should the health and knowledge of the world go down because of some bad material in a book, that could help us in the near future.      Authors have just the same right as we do. They should get a say in wheather @CAPS5 own book is liable to be on the shelfs. The government should not get all the say in this series matter in hand. The community and the author that writes it should get more of the say then anyone else. @CAPS1 an author writes a novel they think of the great content they are putting into this great piece of art not thinking of, is this suitable for children to read. The author just loves to write and should not have to think of all the concerns that they should just not worry about.      There is this book we read this year called '@CAPS5 @CAPS6 Are @CAPS7 @CAPS8'. This book had language that I do not think would be suitable for others in some content that was in the novel. Now do I think the the novel should be banned from a library? No, because it used the words in a very nonviolent way. @CAPS1 reading it I felt that I was not harmed by the content and neither were any of my fellow classmates. @PERSON1 was the author of this book and I thought she did an excellent job of writing this piece of literature. So the next time you think of banning a book think of all the warm hearts you could be crushing",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7282,3,"In the book ‘Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie the setting was in codi, California. The author went on a journey",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9720,4,The author conclude the story with this paragraph because the author wants to remind the reader and summarize the story. The way she wants to summarize is how the story started with Saeng failing the test to how the story endend with saeng planting the hibiscus in the winter. The author wants to remind the reader about the whole story.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9,1,"Dear reader, @ORGANIZATION1 has had a dramatic effect on human life. It has changed the way we do almost everything today. The most well know, is the computer. This device has allowed people do buy things online, talk to people online, and also provides entertainment for some people. All good qualities that make everyones lives easier. Imagine you look into your refrigerator and you notice it's almost empty. Someone is using the car and you need to go grocery shopping and the store is too far. What do you do? Well you could go on a computer and look for food online. Ther are many great deals and some companies even deliver for free! The amazing and easy way to buy food without leaving your house. But food isn't all you can purchase. Many products are sold through the computer. Need new toys for kids? Or how about a new hat for your friend? Maybe even more curtains for your room? Well at the easy access of internet on a computer, you can buy all those items and more. The computer has also the way of communication. Let's say someone wants to talk to a friend or relative that lives far away in another country. @CAPS1 someone dosen't own a phone or @CAPS1 they can't make the call, all these is to be in you on the computer. You can communicate with anyone just by using your email adress. Now friends and families can talk to each other over the ease of the computer. Just type to want to say and ""boom,"" instant, on the chat. Let's face it. No matter what a child or even teenager . But now with a computer all that can change. With just one click you could actually be watching a movie from the comfort of your own home. But what @CAPS1 you don't want a movie? No entertainment like listing to musics, watching fun, and probable the most popular playing games. Everyone loves to play a game every once in a while, and with the selection of thousands of online games, these isn't or person who can't fled atleast our game enjoyable. There are even games for educational fun that many kids love. With all the entertainment a computer can produce; who could hate it? All in all the computer is a revolutinizing device that has changes the way we shop, communicate, and find exciting entertainment. To be able to do so much with just a couple clicks; new that I find extravagant. It blows my mind to see and think, ""@CAPS1 we can do this now, I wonder what we can accomplish in the future.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3585,2,"Should we take off books that are offensive? I think that we should not take them out if they are offensive. If we do take off the offensive stuff off the self then there are not any more on the self. If all of us could take off the book, movie, or music that in fensive to us then there will be no books, movies, or music on the self.     First off all, there will be no war books, movies, or music on the self. All the hippys will take the war stuff off because they dont like war. They will say that it infensive on them on take them off. I think that we should read about war and witch them because it is a good way to learn our mistake. If we don't learn the mistake of war we will lose and we wont learn how we loss and we will go into war over and over again we will win some and lose alot because we wont learn how we lost.     Secondly, all the music that are good and bad will be taken off the self. All the mothers that are to protactive they will take them done. It have bad language in it and a bad theme to it. If they take them down how can the football players, solders, and fighters can be ready for the fight if they don't have the songs that they like to listen to and get pump for the fight.     Finally, they will take out all thethe books of star wars and forgetten ralms. Some people don't like them because they think that it wont come true and they will take them out and say that it infensives them on there thinking wise. Star wars is a good book and movie and forgetten ralms is a good book maker company.     All of this is why i don't want this to happen. All the good music, books, and movies well go away and the people who like them well get mad.",3,3,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16370,6,"some of the obstacles the builders went throw was that they had to make many changes, such as they could not just drop a mast on top of the Buildings flat roof. The blimp would give the building stress held by a single cable. the blimps load and pressure from the wind would have to be transmitted all the way to the buildings foundation. The @CAPS1 could have to be strengthened to accommodate this new situation. over sixty thousands of dollars for the new frame work.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17846,7,"One nice sunny day I was traped in a doctors office with no air conditioning. this doctor’s office had @NUM1 chairs in the dirty waiting room. I was already cramed in the room with about @NUM2 people for @NUM3 minutes. I was trying to be patient but the patience was wearing off. Sweat dripped of of my face on to my black @PERSON1 short-@CAPS1 shirt. I was starting to get hot and mad, but I kept my patience. I know if I was going to get mad even more, it wouldnt help or make the time faster. Then all of a sudden, “creeeeeck,” the door opened. A tall white woman with green schrubs on said, “@CAPS2.”",9,10,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1122,1,"I believe that computers have a strong negative effect on society but a stronger positive one. Computers these days are very advanced and allow you to talk to your friends, allow you to acess information more efficiently, and have increased our man power in scientific research. Almost every teen has a screen name that allows you to chat online with your friends. This function keeps kids in touch and active. Eventhough instant messaging can distract kids from their daily life it can also be amazingly helpful. Just last week a friend of mine had forgotten to write down their homework and easly contacted online. I was able to let them know @NUM1 a matter of seconds. Like wise, with this online communication you can also talk and and video chat as if you right there with your friends not everyday do you get to go hang out with your friends so this is an easy alternative. Not only is quick and easy it's free. Computers keep kids off their phones and from jucking up the bill and causing those loud annoying phone bill conversations how to limit your texting. The most important effect computers have on society is the gathering of information. The internet allows people to acess millions of websites and light speed. Every second of the day their is someone on the internet searching for date that they would have to go to the library to get. Computers are a key part in society and we depend on them without them we would all be lost. They provide an easier way to life that us lazy @CAPS1 need to survive. The internet keeps us updated and informed on whats going on all around the world without even going there. We need the internet and we couldn't acess it without computers. One of the largest aspects of life computers have helped us with is research. Computers have multiplied our man power giving us more organized way to store date. Recently I was watching a show where they had a computer testing items for @CAPS2 a process that would take a human weeks. They also help us be different and more creative people. With the computer came smaller more compact computers till they were able to fit in the palm of our hand. They have lead us to think we can do greater things in life and keep our earth safe and to stop damaging it as much. They're lead us to research the unknown areas of the world where @NUM2 years ago a scientist with a pad of paper didn't have dare to even think about. Computers have linked the world through communication and information and have exelled us to greater heights in understanding how we came to be. Overall society needs computers and they have and overwhelming positive affect on society.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6161,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because the climate could be hot, the road could be bumpy, and the town could be deserted. For example, ""Rough Road Ahead. Do not exceed posted speed limit.” This would be hard for a cyclist who is thirsty. And if he is not and with no water he probably could  barely make it up the hills. And with no town for water he would be thirsty.""First ""town"" This place might have been a thriving little spot at one point but anthor warning it fit the outsides of ghost town"" No waters",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6250,3,"The cyclist surrounds did have an affect. In paragraph two the cyclist describes how “I enjoyed the serenity of an early-summer evening the."" To have a wonderful day to begin with was parably assurance even thing would be fine. Confidence was a factory for the beautiful weather as well as he knew a short cut. In paragraph @NUM1 the cyclist mentions how old men looked at his map and pointed out “this breezy jaunt.” The cyclist just thought his life got a little easier. Then in paragraph @NUM2 the cyclist comes upon the ""traditional definition of a ghost town."" This setting was nothing like the old men were talking about. ""Twenty miles up the road, i came to a fork of sorts."" In paragraph @NUM3, this caused confusion and worry. ""This sight was troubling."" ""I was traveling through the high deserts of California in June."" The cyclist was ""hitting my water bottles pretty regularly."" This setting made the cyclist uncomfortable as well as the ""two hundred degrees."" The cyclist then began puzzled and distraught. ""I notices the terrain changing"" in this quote the cyclist's settings @MONTH1 have caused confusion. But in the end the cyclist suceeded. ",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21463,8,"@NUM1)I heard one true story about one normal @CAPS1 businessman. he wasn't that high levelin his company. @CAPS2 he always say hello to everyone in company with his big laugh.One day, the boss of company came to his company and asked everyone  who doingwork hardest?"" @CAPS2 nobody didn't answer that question. then the boss said ""or recommendsomeone for promote level"" and then everyone recommended that business man. Becausehe always say hello to everyone with big laugh. and he goes to highest level in his company except the boss. what I'm trying to say is the laugh make people happier. and when i was with my friends,laugh was make us more friendly. also laugh is good for health too. If you laugh a lotyour life is getting way more longer than before. of course it is good for mind too.that business man wasn't very good worker. He just made everyone happier to his laugh.that's why he could be a highest level of the company.I think laugh is really good for everything. and I also laugh a lot. I want people make happier.""",13,12,,25,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1675,1,"One evening, @CAPS1 I got home from school, I didn't know what I had for homework. I decided to call my friends cell phone, but instead I got her voicemail. I left her a voicemail and called her house phone instead, the same thing bad happened. Luckily, I had my other friends numbers I could use. The next day, I asked her why she didn't pick her cell and house phone. She told me ""I'm sorry, I guess I was to busy on the computer e-mailing other people."" @CAPS1 I think of people being on the computer too much, I think they don't get enought exercise, don't enjoy nature, and spend less time with family and friends. First @CAPS1 people spend too much time on the computer, they spend less time excersising. About @PERCENT1 of people do this and it's not healthy. @CAPS2 people do this too often, then they will not get enough excercise and without excersise then they won't be healthy @CAPS1 they get older. @CAPS3 @PERSON1 said ""@CAPS2 adults spend too much time on the computer, maybe @NUM1 hours a day or more while eating junk food like chips and soda, they are not setting a good example for their kids. @CAPS2 adults get into this bad habit, so will their kids and it's to early for kids to be unhealthy."" I also agree with @CAPS3 @PERSON1, she is right about how people spend too much time on the computer. Second, @CAPS1 people are on their computer, its like their face is glued to the screen and they don't care about nature, @CAPS1 people do this, I can't stand it. Its like they don't care about anything else. What I don't get is why can't they go outside and do something for at least a half hour, then go back to the computer and waste their time then? Going outside and enjoying nature is peaceful on a nice sunny clay. You could have a picnic, take a hike, or even hang out with friends instead of playing on the computer. I understand @CAPS2 its a bad day like @CAPS2 its snowing or a thunderstorm and you can't do anything outside, then you go on the computer. I think that at least @PERCENT2 of people would try this. Third, @CAPS2 people are too busy on the computer then they won't be able to hung out with friends or family. @CAPS2 your friends want to hang out with you and they want to go to the mall. But you can't because your on the computer, she would be furious at you. You picked the computer over your friends to go to the mall. There's probably a @PERCENT1 chance she won't ever talk to ou again. and I don't blame her. People who spend to much time on the computer, would barely understand whats going on. @CAPS2 someone tells you something, it goes in one ear and out the other. @CAPS1 people do this, its really dissappointing because you dont hang out as much as with your friends and family. As you can see, people are spending too much time on the computer than excersing, enjoying nature, and spending time with family and friends. @CAPS2 you ask me, I don't play on the computer as much which is a good thing.",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12441,5,"The mood created by the author in memior was his home, His home was, His house was never perfect but he mad it how he need to be and his parent did too and that's what change it into a home for him and the neighborhood made him learn how to learn how to love and how much sacrifice his parents made him have a loving memior for his home town.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
36,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Have you ever wondered what effect computers have on people? It is a very negative effect. Computers are one of the main reasons of why kids do not exercise and become obese, it can effect students' grades, and by being on the @CAPS6, you are isolating yourself from your loved ones. First of all, more and more kids are using computers way more often than they should. The result of this, you @MONTH1 ask? Since computers are used daily, especially by young adolescents, it is likely for that child to become obese. Researches from well-known colleges, such as @ORGANIZATION2 and @LOCATION2, discovered that @PERCENT1 of kids who spend more than two hours on the @CAPS6 are obese or will become heavier when they are older. After speaking with @PERSON1, graduate from @LOCATION1, he told me that when children spend more time on the @CAPS6, they are doing nothing but staring at a bright screen that can damage their eyes, and not spending their time outside enjoying the beautiful weather. As a consequence, kids start to gain body fat from sitting on a coach staring at the @CAPS6 all day instead of exercising! My second reason of why computers are a negative effects on kids is that it can harm your grades! After I spoke with a current student at @ORGANIZATION1, she told me that the reason why her grades drop is because she is too busy on @CAPS3, @CAPS4, @CAPS5, etc. She does not focus on her @ORGANIZATION1 work like she should and because she doesn't, her grades go from @NUM1's to low @NUM2's. This shows that even ""A"" students are getting bad grades from being on the @CAPS6. Additionally, from being on the @CAPS6 so much and not paying attention at @ORGANIZATION1 work, it can effect your best grades on the @ORGANIZATION3's! This shows that by always going on the @CAPS6 you hurt your academic skills. My last and final reason of why computers have a negative effect on children is because it harms your social skills of being on outgoing, talkative individual! Everytime you log into that death trap device, your selfesteem becomes lower because you never talk to friends or call them. You just sit on a hard chair, looking at an electronics device that is going to take you no where in life. Also, you are pushing your loved ones away by being on @CAPS6 @NUM3. You will end up never spend time with them and you will never call your friends to see what they are up to if you keep on going on the @CAPS6. Furthermore, if your mom or dad tells you to get off your @CAPS6, you become cranky and rude to your family just becuase you want to go back on your favorite electronic device. Do you really want to act that way to your family? So, in summing up, computers are a negative effect on many young individuals, and the reasons for this are that you have less time to exercise, it harms your grades, and you are not able to be as interactive with people by being on the @CAPS6. The real question is, though, is do you think computers have a negative or positive effect on people?",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16251,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles and allowing dirigibles to dock there like safety, nature, and existing law.  In the excerpt the author tells how many dirigibles use hydrogen which is very flammable.  That makes it very dangerous to dock them on the Empire State Building because they could get in an accident, and since New York is so densely populated it would probably harm many people.  People's lives shouldn't be risked just to land a dirigible.  Another problem builders face was nature.  In paragraph @NUM1 the excerpt states ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents.""  This would mean the dirigible would just be dangling way above New York and winds could get dangerous very fast because it was so unpredictable.  According to the excerpt this was neither practical nor safe.  To add to all of these obstacles builders didn't consider an already existing law that is against airships flying too low over urban areas.  So that meant it would be illegal to dock a dirigible on the Empire State Building.  Builders faced so many obstacles about allowing derigibles to dock on the Empire State Building it just wasn't meant to be.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
23,1,"Dear local newspaper, @CAPS1 you ever see a child on the computer for hours and nothing could get them off? Well I believe that this is very harmful for the child since it doesn't allow them to exersice, interact face to face with people or use their minds to the best of their @NUM1. The more and more we advance in society we get laziar and forget to about these essential things. I think taking a step back from using computers could benefit society more than using them. Obesity in the @LOCATION2 is at its highest @PERCENT1 of kids in the @LOCATION3 agree that they only exersice once a week and would rather spend time on the computer. Think of this, @PERCENT1 of kids. Thats more than @NUM2 of @CAPS2 children. I took the and compared it in @CAPS3 children who don't the benefit of this technology. I learned that @PERCENT1 of children there exersice only once a week. That's for less what these computers are doing to @LOCATION3 @PERCENT2 of children are overweight and @PERCENT3 of them develope heart of blood problems as adults. I by exercise in to go and play with friends or bike, or go for a jog. It doesn't sound hard does it? If we make a to spend this than on computers I think we can reduce this obesity amount and I believe @CAPS2 ran as on overall country. On the computer we have popular websites like @CAPS5, @CAPS6, and @CAPS7. More websites allow you interact with people over the island. This could be in more ways than one. These computer websites are allowing anyone to talk in people who could have the interest in mind. More than @NUM3 out of @NUM4 people in my school say they have one of these accounts and have personal posted on them. With this personal info, could and with these websites the crime rate has gone up @PERCENT4. Also, these websites cause people to their social skills. People spend hours on these websites talking to people and forget how to talk face to face. @PERCENT2 of @LOCATION1 students say they would say something online that they wouldn't say to someone's face. This creates more problems in schools and could possibly make someone hurt someone else or themselves. I've heard all over the news about suicides and because of computers and I believe with less of them people would spend more time with their family and or nation would be closer and safer. Computers dont allow you to explore nature and use your mind to the best of its ability. Computers make it easy and I myself, think it makes me laziar because it allow me to read a book there or read about other people, instead of going to a library and getting a book. Computers take away time to actually use your mind and problem solve in real life solution. There's years and I've learned I can be on the computer for hours playing them and not realize it at all. Without them, would make a difference. Kids are living through computers and we can change them.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4488,2,"I think that movies, and magazines should be censured to kids at the library. There are many reasons these things should be censured and in this paper I am going to explain why they should be censured. I am also going to give a few examples of some stuff that shouldn't be possible for kids to get.      The main reason movies should be censured is because movies that are rated @CAPS1 are not only supposed to be rented by children but it wrong to rent these movies to them. I mean if there is a sex scene or something and your only like eight years old this would be awkward for the parents to explain what the actors are doing. I mean if you were a parent would you want to explain to your eight year what sex is.      The next thing that I think should be censured at the library is magazines. I know three in perticular off the top of my head, and they are @CAPS2, @CAPS3, and @ORGANIZATION1. These three magazines talk about how to be better in bed. I really don't any kid, teenagers included should need to know how to be better in bed. They also have several unhealthy diets that teenagers might try. This could cause them to get very sick and if they're already skinny, they could possibly die.      Well this pretty much sums up what I think about library contents being censured. I don't really think there are many books that are that bad for kids ears and eyes. I mean there are romances but I don't think any kid is going to last thru a whole romance, because they are pretty boring. Well I hope this will prevent libraries from letting kids get ahold of this kind of content",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16625,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were faced with many obstacles. Allowing dirigibles to dock on the mast would be too complex, which the builders did not realize at first. The most complex obstacle was how the builders were going to securely tie the blimp down without it not only spinning around, but from ripping the building out of its foundation. The constructors also had to worry about if it was safe or not and if it was permitted. Another major obstacle was that not only were the dirigibles too low to the ground to dock, but they were mostly made up of hydrogen instead of helium, which was very flammable. After all the hard work to be successful. Al Smith and his peers had to look out for the best interests of the people of New York.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10490,4,Then author put the last sentence the way it did. It mean't by that next spring they want to see how they react different of the same. They know what it is like but they know how to react to the season.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17914,7,"Patience, what do you think when you hear that word? When I was little I always thought it would be simply impossible to have a thing like that, but after I badly hurt my ankle and was pat in a cast and on crutches for four months, I really got the hang of it. My mom would always say “patience is vertue,” have you ever wondered what it takes to have patience? Well its really just the ability to control your self, you have to be able to get through tough situations and still be controlling yourself, and you really have to control yourself when people annoy you of things take awhile",6,6,,12,,,,0.0,1.0,3.0,2.0,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4021,2,"If someone is offended by a book or a movie from a library, should they be able to get it removed? In the following I want to explain my opinion towards censorship in libraries.     If some parents see a book they are offended by, and they don't think their children should be able to get it from the library, they could just forbid them to read it. I don't think they should be able to remove it, even though they might think other children shouldn't be able to get it either, but that's not their decision. Every parent has to decide on their own, if they want their children to get certain books, but one parent shouldn't be able to decide for everyone else by removing a book.     Some people might be offended by certain books in libraries, but just because one person is offended by a book, doesn't mean that everyone else is going to be offended by it. Does this one person have the right to say that a book should be removed? It is their personal opinion that they don't like it, but by removing it they would also keep other people from reading it, and that is not fair. Different people like different books, and are offended by different books, so if everyone would remove a book they don't like from the library, there wouldn't be any books left. I think if someone is offended by a book, they just shouldn't read it. They could tell their friends and family not to read it, because they thought it was offensive, but in the end everyone should decide for themselves.     I don't think people should be able to remove books from the libraries, but if the library itself thinks a book is offensive, then they shouldn't have it. It is their library, so it's their decision what books they want to have there. i also think that when the library doesn't have certain books, because they really pay attention to the books they take in their library, that that should be good enough for other people.     So all in all I don't think people should be able able to remove certain books, because everyone has their own opinion towards what is offensive, and what isn't. We all should be able to read or see, what we want to, and not what others think we should.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7675,3,"The features of the setting exhuberate the cyclist. The June weather added to the water depletion, being the beginning of summer, when the cyclist “arrived at the first ‘town’"" it was deserted, and the water had disgusting water. The author uses verbal irony when calling it a town “town” having it not really be a town anymore. The large snake presented an air of danger and another abandoned Grape Juice Factory added to the hopeless lost tone. ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14868,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Although the builders thought it to be a brilliant idea, they did not carefully consider the safety hazards they may have encountered, and how unrealistic the idea truly was. One of the greatest reasons the mooring mast was destined to be unable to fulfill its purpose was because of safety concerns. In paragraph @NUM1 it states ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen... and hydrogen is highly flammable."" When a dirigible was destroyed by fire in New Jersey, the owners of the Empire State building realized how much worse an accident like that would be if it occurred over a place as densely populated as downtown New York. Another very practical reason why dirigibles could not moor at the top of the building was, as stated in paragraph @NUM2, ""there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" That would make it impossible for a dirigible to even approach the area, let alone be able to tie up to the building. It is very apparent that the builders of the Empire State Building faced many issues in the attempt.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10070,4,The author concludes the story with this paragraph because he wanted the readers to know that Saeng was going to take the test over again.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10091,4,"The author ends the story with this paragraph because it relates the idea of the hibiscus to Saeng and her situation in a new country. It shows that Saeng is using the hibiscus and its ability to adapt for inspiration. During the story, Saeng describes how she had always seen the hibiscus at home in her old country. Her mom describes to her that the hibiscus she bought is a bit different from the one back home. But she says it’s because it’s strong and was able to adapt to the cold winter environment of the United States. This is what Saeng was able to use as inspiration. She might have failed her lisence test, but she used the hibiscus actions to set a goal for herself. The plant will go through a cold, and snowy winter but it will grow and blossom in the spring. Saeng would use that time to study and get ready, and she’ll be confident for the test. The paragraph that the author finishes on shows the connection Saeng made with her situation and the plant’s situation.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4194,2,"Censorship in libraries is a topic that is argued back and forth in todays society. It is something that we all should think about and voice our opinions about. I believe that items in a library should not be censored based on constitutional @CAPS5, the creation of gray areas, and the depletion of classic literature.     The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 to the @CAPS3 of the @ORGANIZATION1, clearly @LOCATION1 the idea of freedom of the press. Not only does this give publishers the right to print whatever they please, but it also gives people a right to choose for themselves what they can and want to read. Censoring books in a library would be denying this right that is clearly spelled out in the @CAPS4 of @CAPS5. I refuse to support any idea that directly opposes the @CAPS3 and the people of the @LOCATION1 should be appalled that this sort of thing is even in discussion.      When it comes to censoring something based on how offensive something is, one always has to consider the gray areas that will be formed. For instance, what is offensive in one book @MONTH1 not be offensive to someone else who would benefit from reading it. The term 'offensive' is a reletive one, in that the definition varies from person to person. No one thing can be deemed offensive by one hundred percent of the population and therefore no one thing can be removed without opposition. This creates areas of gray where there is no right answer. This would be extremely problamatic for those trying to censor items within  a library. Secondly, the decision on who would get to decide what is and is not offensive would cause as much contreversy as the books themselves. Knowing that every person carries a different opinion the people deciding would have to equally represent every persons' opinion when making a decision, talk about problamatic.      Finally, censoring books would eliminate classic literature and would deplete an understanding of the world through the eyes of great writers. For example, in @PERSON1's '@CAPS7 @PERSON2' the 'n' word appears over one hundred times. Many @CAPS8 @CAPS9 take great offense at the use of this word. However, this book is seen as one of the centuries greatest works and cannot be removed from the education of young people because of an offensive term. If people want to censor books, then censor them from their own children and not the children of others and inevitably an entire population.     In conclusion, the censorship of literature and other items in a library is not only impossible, but utterly unconstituional. The idea of censoring items from children based on offense is not something that should be pursued",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10329,4,"She is  saying that ryt now, is not the right time to table the tst, she is saying that she is going to wait to care back until spring, when the flowrs we blooming to take the test, @CAPS1 she is so acentric abought the exotic flowers, She can’t stand to do it now, when the time isn’t right. So she is saying that she is going to wait until the time is right to take the test.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1484,1,"Over @PERCENT1 of the @ORGANIZATION1 owns at least one computer in their house. Computers benefit society because they help the earth, and are a fast way to spread important information. Also you can talk with friends and family on computers. We have been told that some people think were spending too much time on the computer. Yes, but we need these machines to survive. News @CAPS1 took a pull and said ""more than half of @LOCATION1 schools are now using computers to put homework on to save paper"". @CAPS3 we start useing computers to do things that we ushelly use paper for we would be saving millions of trees. For example you can send an email insted of snail mail, the mail would go faster and save paper! People who care about the earth make websites on the computer to inform people how to @CAPS2 just to see each otherthey could mail and talk all they want. Also @CAPS3 you like to use cellphone alot the waves kill apoximately @NUM1 bees a year. @CAPS3 you chatted with your freinds it would save bees lives. The first snow day we my parents forgot to check the schools website and I was out in snow @CAPS3 we didn't computers this would happen to every little students an snow @NUM2 @CAPS3 there was a storm and you. I'v went out the is another place you can check' to get the weather and keep your family safe. @CAPS3 there was a hurricane and the power like birthdays and weddings your computer has a calendar on it that tells you wherever you write something on it. @ORGANIZATION1 citizens spend over @MONEY1 a year on phone bills. You can talk to freinds and family on the computer and save thousands. When parents don't have phones they rely on computers to comunicate with people. Have your kinds ever had a freind who for away and your kinds spend hours to them? Well they can talk and see each other while on video chat and it will feel like still here. Its now or never citizens of newtown! You know computers, help the earth there a fast way to spend information, and they let you talk and see your freinds online. So get up and write our local news paper telling them why computers benefit our society.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12084,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives has a happy mood. The author talks about ""passionate Cuban music filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the kitchen"" In paragraph @NUM1 which makes the house seem very happy and joyful. In paragraph @NUM1 the author also says ""within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home the very heart of our kitchen"" this makes the author seem very happy since they like to cook. Narciso Rodriguez talks about ""it was in this simple house that my parents welcomed other refugees to celebrate their arrival to this country and @CAPS1 celebrated my first birthdays"" the mood here seems that everybody liked to come to this house. This whole memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" makes the mood seem very happy and warm.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7295,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist’s mood towards the journey. At first, he is confident that the old men’s knowledge of the land is accurate and he is excited about what lies ahead for him. However, his excitement soon turned into dismay and slight doubt as his journey drags on. The heat of the weather and lack of water makes the cyclist develop an uncaring matter. “I’d read once that sucking on stones helps…with any luck I’d hit a bump and lodge one in my throat.” The verbal irony in this passage delivers a negative feeling to the reader and it is here that it is clear that the cyclist doesn’t care what happens to him. When he finally reaches a sign of civilization, the cyclist becomes himself again and decides that his knowledge is best.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3214,2,"Censorship in the world we live in today is a very interesting concept. With the advent of social media, we now have thriving communities of people that want their voice to be heard, and people are listening. We now are able to tap into the huge ammount of knowledge from people all around the world, allowing us to see what is really happening in the countries like @LOCATION2, where media is considered treason. What do we do now that governments are starting to censor the internet? Lets start by looking an arguement that has been long talked about: library censorship.     Today, it is almost a requirement for cities to have public libraries to be considered as real cities. Public libaries, and the funding they require, are not anywhere within the @ORGANIZATION1. Even so, they have taken a place in our neighborhoods that has made them indefinate sources of knowledge and culture. One public library @MONTH1 be a source of; historical town records, children's books, novels, research papers, non-fiction books, fiction books, magazines, and many other types of entertainment and knowledge. Public libraries are, even with the widespread usage of the internet, important places for us, as residents of a city, to socialize and learn.     Libraries today @MONTH1 carry books that were in the past on the 'banned books' list, but that does not mean books are not being banned from libraries. Libaries are generally family institutions, and as being funded by the public, required to adhear by the moral and ethical standards of those who live in the area. This means that there is not one, 'national banned books list', but there many discrepencies througout @LOCATION1 in banning books. As culture moves more and more into more and more questionable materials, libaries are faced with a tough decision; keep up with the times and have more questionable and controversial reading material, or get lost in the past and try to kling onto the senior generation to stay alive.     Bringing new literary materials into the library that is fresh and new means that more people will return to the library again, be it young-adults or older adults trying to get in touch with the current world. One major controversy of books in public libaries are the inclusion of sexual intimacy. As a new generation sprouts, fed with music lyrics by such names as; '@ORGANIZATION2', or '@ORGANIZATION3', we enter a new age where younger and younger kids are learning about sex. The authors of today have recognised this and have started to include references to sexual intimacy, but not detailed encoutners. I believe this is fine, because as we move on in generations we are going to find out that education about sex; safe sex, birth control, @CAPS1 prevention and testing, is much more important than trying to keep children ignorant. Keeping these young adults involved in books and trying to continue their learning outside of school is a much larger issue we should be trying to tackle instead of trying to create silly arguments against new reading material in a public libary.     Public libaries are the centerpiece for learning outside of school in many communities, small and large. Knowing this, how could anyone truly believe that it would be smart to stop including new books that would entice new patrons? Even as a commercial buisness, this would make no sense, simply turning people away because you have a single view of what the future is and you refuse to listen to anyone else's opinion of the future. So why is there a question on including new knowledge? Isn't it obivous that we, as a nation, should show the world that we aren't living in the past. That we are indeed the future of the world, and that our young-adults will recieve the best education in the world by not only learning in schools, but by being the most active readers, and by extension, learners in the world.",4,5,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4600,2,"Censorship is method of limiting certain contant that has been deemed inapropriate. This method is widely used today in the modern world. Censorship is used most commonly with our movies, video games, and television. If other forms of entertainent like television and internet utilize such methods shouldn't our libraries.Also if these methods are not made manditory should there be a block on certain tittles that our children could get there hands on.       This limiting agent called censorship can be very usefull in our everyday lives. Censorship could allow us to keep track of what our children and teens view. This agent can currently be installed on such products as our televisions, computers, and phones. So if the procautionary measuers are being taken on the following products wouldn't it be appropriate for the actions to also be in our libraries. Shouldn't our libraries be a place for children to waunder through the shelves picking up and reading books at random without the thought of picking up an inaproiate book for their age group. Personally that is what a library should be like to me.         Discussing the topic that was touched on before .A block should be manditory for libraries. This block would not abolish the books completly but rather would limit their viewing audience. The books should be cateragized by age group. And with the block certain children, based on age ,would not be able to enter the section and would prevent certain materals from reaching children that are not mature enough.     Certain materials should not be view by younger children. That is not only a statement based on opinion but also of fact. The factual experiance comes into play when young children are reading and looking at pictures that were intended for maturer audiences. These tittles heavily influence a childs thoughts and actions. Just the other day a cousin of mine no older than @NUM1 years old was watching two individuals of the opposite sex and began asking questions such as: when are they going to kiss? or why is he not touching her? These questions do not come naturally but only through her viewing of material that she was not ready to view. The origin of these question will probably never be known but there are ways to prevent such topics from being brought up and that is censoring what children read, view or listen to in our libraries",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
154,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I believe that computers are an extremely useful tool in society. It helps people learn new things about different cultures. Also, it lets you communicate with friends and family through the internet, for example, using facebook or @CAPS1. Finally, it provides an accurate research tool for school projects, or interviews. First, learning about different cultures helps the world stay together. For example, here, we learn @CAPS2 and @CAPS3. Each class teaches us to respect more and more of this culture. However, some people don't have the chance to get this land of education, so they turn to the internet. If the computer didn't exist, we might not know about the lifestyle @NUM1 mi away from us. We wouldn't know if their lifestyles are extremely difficult or luxurious. Also, we wouldn't know if we could help them or not. For example, the earthquake in @LOCATION1 which. It's one step closer to world peace no more war or conflicts. Secondly, the computer helps you communicate to friends and family for in the world. I remember one time I was mailing my family friends who was in @LOCATION2, risking his life. I knew he couldn't come back to town, so I started to email him, and video chat with him. Whenever I saw his face, I knew that everything was okay. I don't know how I would have without the internet. Other ways lived you could as. Also, just communicating with friends! internet sites, like extremely useful. Finally, you use the computer for educational use. For example, research projects, study tools and essays. Whenever that a research is the internet. This extremely reliable and accurate. However that some of the websites are fake, which is easy to great research to use for school projects. Also, I know many teachers in my school have a blog or page where they put their @CAPS4 on, study links, and handouts, just in case we lose them. Whenever there is a test coming up, my @CAPS2 teacher, @CAPS5 would have links on her go to help use study. Also, is another website that helps us study for vocab. It also has many games that and learn our vocab words. As you can see, the computer helps us in our daily use and makes a positive impact on our society. From educational purposes, to learning cultures and socializing with friends it helps us get through life. As very successful newspaper and people, I assume you will understand how much the computer has made a positive effect in society.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9893,4,"By ending the story in the way the author has in the short story “winter Hibiscus,“ the author provides a sympathetic understanding for the reader of seang at her struggle to live in another country & her sadness of wishing to be back home. I think the author was attempting to end the story with a strong feeling for a strong note of Saeng's personality to draw the reader back into what they had just read. For example, by repeating statement on the test saying “ I will take that test again,” the author gives us that understanding that Saeng has not given up & lets the reader know she will stand & live strong.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11851,5,"Based on this memoir, the mood created by the author it's a great mood unexplainable. in this article talks about a young man named @PERSON1 and how his life was from then and now. for example, on paragraph @NUM1, says he will always be grateful to his parents for their love and sacrifices. and how he had always told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing that I could have ever done. Also, how Cuban music was so passionate, adored so much, and how his parents turned a simple house into a home. therefore, this is the mood created by the author.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9121,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” the author end the story saying “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself in the spring, when the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” The author concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph is saying no matter what Saeng failed the drive test the first time she is not gaving up till she pass and get her driving. The author also concludes the story with this paragraph because the paragraph is saying that Saeng can wait till winter end so she see the hibiscus is budding.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12108,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir can be described in many ways. Here are some points to consider. First of the mood of the author is I think greatfulness. For example ""(and for which I am each currently grateful). ... (Which I adore to this day). second of all the mood of the author is appreciation. For example ""I will never forget how my parents turned the simple house into a home."" @CAPS1 I think another mood of the author is definitely love. I kno this because he talks about love and his family and friends alot. For example ""I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighbor hood or the many things I learned there about how to love. In conclusion the authors moods can be described in many different ways.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3027,2,"The libraries can contain book that are offensive to humans and animals. The book the are very offensive can contain megative coments just to entertain the readers.      I believe that all book, music, magazines, and etc should be removed from the shelves if they are found to contain offensive and negative thing about any human. For example, in political cartoon inside of newspapers, @PERSON1 is sometimes compared with a @CAPS1. We as @CAPS2 @CAPS3 take it very offensive when they are called someone in our own race a @CAPS1. I take that very offensive because, back during the time when black were not able to do certain thing, the whites would refer to blacks as monkeys.      I being offened is not a good thing, and they last place they need offensive stuff is in the libraries. Libraries are suppose to hold positive material on the shevles. Book that give knowledge to people in need, not thing contain negative depictions of human life. Also children should be able to pick up a book, and not feel offened by it.      One night my little brother came home with a book that he got for the library. It was about a white dog and a dark colored dog together trying to find food and a place to sleep. But one day the dark colored dog was lefted out in the cold while a loving family toke in the white dog , into their warm home. My brother feel so uncomfortable with that book, he decided to take it back that same night.     Libraries can contain very offensive things that can make a person sick to their stomachs. Offensive thing can hurt a persons feelings, and libraries should be the last place where a person should feel uncomfortable reading a book. Eventhough my brother found a book that he disliked, he still continues to go to the library to find excellent books to read. Libraries are fun to go to, but they can contain very offensive thing that can hurt a person's feelings.",3,4,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4684,2,"People in this common era have different appproaches to the idea of libraries.  Some view the library as a place to go and learn and to express yourself and be free.  Others believe it to be a place where there is danger for minors and can be very innapropriate.  These two opinions can cause an intriguing argument.     People go to the library because they want to either get away, or just to be free and grab a nice book.  There are many books to choose from, but you need to be careful while browsing.  some books, although good, can be innapropriate to some ages, and that's when controversy spills.  Parents think the library is encouraging the check-out of innapropriate books, but this isn't all that true.  It's all about the placement of books, and that's what most librarians will tell you.  They didn't encourage the kid to check it out, but they have every right to.  It is also unknown that what is offensive to one person, might bring joy to another person maybe of a different race or ethnic background.     I think that these so-called offensive books or magazines that parents complain about, should not be removed from libraries.  There is a reason those books are there and they are not put up there to be offensive; so why take them down?  I think a way we can monitor these kids to stay away from books their parents believe can be harmful to them is by making a rule stating that a child must be present with an adult in certain sections.  This will not only stop the fact that kids checkout books much innapropriate for them, but it might also make the parents stop complaining and the controversy will end.          People need to stop looking at the library as a place that brings negativity, but as a place for giving children joy.  Remember, it was built for those who enjoy reading and so people can have a place to do so.  Why complain? Find the positives in what it brings instead of looking down on it.  Bring back the feelings of what the library brought to you when you were a child.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18908,7,Once when me my dad were supposed to go to the races. But I had to wait until my dad and he said he was getting of work at @NUM1 oclock and that’s the time the races starts. It takes a hour to get there so I knew we were going to be late and not be able to meet me drivers and sit in their cars. So I was patient playing in my room with all my toys. I was worried that I wasn’t going to go at all. @CAPS1 I decided to take a nap. Later I felt something tapping me I opend my eyes and saw my dad he said get up were going to the races. I was so happy. We got there and we found out we had the wrong time we were an hour early. So I got to meet the drivers and sit in there cars. And that weekend they were having a three hundred lap race. It was the end of the race seson of the year. First they did the three hundred lap race. @CAPS1 they did figure eight boat race. After that they did the school bus derby race. I was so happy you be there and to se the school buses race. A little kid said “no w how am I going to get to school there crashing all the school buses.” @CAPS1 the race were finished I than ked my dad for taking me to the races and not being late to meet the drivers and sit in their cars. We went home and I went to @CAPS2.,8,10,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7559,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist by old people changing the definition of adon’t talk to strangers. The main character,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15280,6,"The @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there was a lot of work. They had to spend a whole lot of money and it wasn't a easy job. They spended over sixty thousand dollars on just modifications. I know this because in paragraph @NUM1 it said ""over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the building frame work. @CAPS2 you can see they spended a lot of money on the mooring mast.Also it wasn't a easy job to make everything work there was a lot of things they had to worrie about like safety issues. I know it wasn't a easy job because in paragraph @NUM1 it also said ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on the top of the Empire State buildings flat roof."" @CAPS2 you can see they struggled to make the mooring mast accomplish.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12571,5,"In the memoir, the author doesn't just describe the journey to @LOCATION1 and the house he lived in. He gives a in depth and warm description of his life in @LOCATION1 and the relationships he made. He also spends some time talking about the selflessness of his parents and what they do to make the new immigrants feel welcome in this new place.The author sets the mood that makes people wanna read this if they are feeling sad and they just want to get a warm, cozy feeling from it. I think the mood in this gives off a sence of being selfless, but also coming together when all are segregated and form unity. When you turn segregation into unity then good things are bound to happen. The authors says this in his memoir: ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" The mood of this story really shows you that the world doesn't have to be a cold, heartless place.If we do as they do, we can all live in unity.",3,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4148,2,"The thought that Katherine Paterson had in her quote is quite understandable. If we were to censor books then there would be nothing to read in libraries. If you really tried, in every book you could find something offensive. I somewhat agree with her; however, I do believe there should be rules on where books are located.     Books are ment to be read and taking them away would be horrible for every book loving person in this world. There are some things about where the books are to be found in the library that is up to dabate. Personally, I believe the childrens books should be on the opposite side of the building from the adult books and other reading material. In doing this you, for the most part, prevent the children from entering an area that is not age appropriate.     Teenage reading material should be seperate from both childrens books and adult reading material. In this way they are not around the material that is 'above their heads', so to speak. If this were done parents' minds could be put at rest for the time being. They would not have to worry about their child or teenager finding reading material that is inappropriate or offensive.     Books that some people find offensive should be catigorized, such as '@CAPS1 @CAPS2'. They should also be catigorized as '@CAPS3', '@CAPS4', or 'Other'. In doing this most times where someone would have been offended are prevented from happening. Although there will be times where people will still find those books, and @MONTH1 be offended, @CAPS5 is manditory that we do our best to limit those times. All necissary precautions should be taken.      At the same time we should not remove any books from the shelves that are offensive to some. In removing a book from a shelf we would be eliminating a piece @CAPS2 or even life long lessons that are difficult to teach without experiencing them yourself. Books offer us as humans so much, from @CAPS2 to entertainment to even a form of comfort. Books are important to everyone whether they realize @CAPS5 or not. We have much to learn from books and we have much to offer our future members of the human race though books.     I do support Katherine Paterson's belief in that removing books from libraries would destroy the purpose of having them around. At the same time I believe there are ways to limit the times where people would be offended by something. Removing books would destroy countless years of @CAPS2, past thoughts, and past expeiences. Books should never be removed from libraries just because they @MONTH1 be found inappropriate.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1685,1,"Dear Newspaper, I strongly believe that computers do not benefit society. I believe this beacause when the computer you spend less time exercising. Secondly computers make time enjoying nature. Finally interacting with family and friends is important when on the computer you don't do much of that. Plese read on to find out what i have to say about computers. Using a computer has a of down falls but @CAPS1 of which is the lack of exerizing while on the computer. As you @MONTH1 know that many countrys are becoming obese because the lack of exersize. Computers are no help to this problem. The only exersize computer contribute is the hand and fingers but even that is bad because if you are typing and on computer for too long you will get carpeltunlye in the fingers and hands. @PERSON1, an expert on health, said ""@CAPS1 in three people go on the computer for more than @CAPS1 hour a day, which could lead to obesinty. This leads to my next paragraph. When on the computer there is no enjoying the outdoors. Enjoying nature is important to every man or women's scegule. On a computer its imposible to enjoy nature because all the computer is is a time consuming brain washing thing to do. Nature helps save the brain. Without that then you'll be very exausted all the time. Did you know @PERCENT1 of kids go outside every day that means @PERCENT2 of kids are in side on the computer. This leads to my finally topic. The computer @MONTH1 have sites where you can talk to friends but that is no where as good as seeing them in person. Your family is important so you need to spend time with them. My family always does stuff together like board games and what not. With computers there would not be any time with your family because everybody will be on the computer playing games insted of spending time with you family. In my conlusion computer have extraordinary bad affect on society because it exausts time for exersicing, also limits time to enjoy nature and finally people spent too time on computers and too little time interacting with family and friends, thank you for reading my paragraph on the many affects of computers",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16097,6,"Based on the excerpt ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon @CAPS1 the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. These obstacles include the weather, safety, previous dirigible tragety, and the law.The wind at the top of the Empire State building was a huge safty hazard because even if the dirigible was secured the back would swing a cause a potential hazzard due to the unpredictable winds. To fly a dirigible they are filled with hydrogen instead of helium, this is also dangerous because hydrogen is very flammable. On May, 6, 1937 the hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, @LOCATION3, so the owners took into consideration this could have been much worse if the accident had taken place above a densely populated area such as New York. Dirigibles are very unsafe so this created many obsticles for the builders of the Empire State Building to allow dirigible to dock there.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21198,8,"  On the year of @DATE1, my brother had the worst birthday headache ever. We lived in a nice big brown house. with great to loving parents. we had a nice big back yard, my brother and I loved that the most. @CAPS1 was down stars making my brother and i school lunches for school. It was my brothers first day of school and he was so happy. I mean its his birthday and he also starts school on the same day, thats awsome. @CAPS1 let my brother walk to school with me, it was only down the road. The school my brother and i went to is called @LOCATION1. When we got to the school, I could tell my brother was worried. School to me didn't seem that bad but I wasn't the one who was caught eating glue ether. Yeah my brother was caught eating glue during arts and crafts before lunch. When I was on my way to the office I say him through the window. He turned his head and smilled, I could see all the glue still wet and it's everywhere.  My brother and me always had a good relationship, we both mad each other laugh all the time. If my brother and I didn't laugh at each other, we probable wouldn't talk to each other. Laughter to me is a very importent part to any kind of relationship. It alows poth people to share their emotions in a positive way. It also helps people see what kind of sence of humor you have.  As we approched the house, we saw @CAPS1 sitting on the porch waitting for us. After we got home my brother went straight to his room to get cleaned up for his birthday. @CAPS1 had my brother do the dishes, and I do the vacuming in the living room. She always wanted the house cleaned even if people dont come over. @CAPS1 said the whole family was coming over. My brother and i were so happy, we both new grandma was coming. When everyone got here we both were very happy. Grandma showed up alittle after dad did. @CAPS1 was in such a hurry, she wanted to see my brothers face when he saw his birthday cake. When grandma comes she always brings gifts for both of us on are birthdays. When my brother was at the table @CAPS1 brang in the cake. I always see my brother happy, but not like this. I could tell that nothing could make his day any happier.  When the birthday cake was over and the presients, my brother and i went out to the back yard to play kickball. My brother wouldnt use his new soccer ball, we were stuck with a basketball to play with. @CAPS1 and grandma were watching us play, we both were having fun. We laught every time I kicked the ball wrong, or if he missed when he tried to kick the ball. As we were kicking the ball I got an idea. I wound my leg back and as the ball came close i kicked it. I kicked the ball so hard and so fast, insted of the ball going to his feet it went to his head. When the ball conected to his head he did a back flip off the ground. @CAPS1 and grandma were in aw, i was frozen still. When he got up he looked straight at me and laught. @CAPS1 started to laugh so did grandma, i was still frozen. I finaily went with it and by the time I started i couldnt stop. it was so funny, he got pickup off the ground and hit in the head with a ball and still laughs.   When it was time for everyone to go, @CAPS1 said her good byes and then it was grandmas turn. Grandma gave my brother the first kiss on the forhead than me. As grandma was leaving my brother and i sat on moms lap and gave her a big hug and said ""I love you @CAPS1"". @CAPS1 was tcking us in bed and was about to leave when my brother said "" @CAPS1 my head hurts"". I love my family and even today we look back on this and laugh. This has been a joy to write i hope you think so to.  Short story by   @ORGANIZATION1 @NUM1",17,17,,34,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
41,1,I think computers are good because you can talk to your friends and family on the computers. People needs computers to look for a job. Some people spend to much time on the computers then on homework people need to stop.,1,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19234,7,"Tick, tock, tick, tock. Every mustle in my body urged me to run and look for my dad. Tick, tock, tick, tock. But I stayed put, my eyes scanning the crows. Tick, tock, tick, tock. And than I saw him. Tick, tock, tick, tock. I ran forward and gave him a giant hug. The clock in my head stoped ticking. Hi @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and @CAPS1 gonna tell you about a time I was patient. I think that I was really patient when I got back from a trip, with my friend to @LOCATION1. I was waiting on the airport for my dad to come and pick me up and I was so exited!you see I had been gone for two weeks and I was really homesick. It took everything I had to not go looking for him, but I knew I couldn’t just go running off I had to be very patient. In the end it was worth it because it would have been harder to find him if I had went looking for him. As you can see, I think I was very patient when waiting for my dad in the airport. Thank you for listening.",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13116,5,"The mood created in the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by Narciso Rodriguez is comforting. ""Passionate Cuban music (which I adore to this day) filled the air, mixing with the aromas of the Kitchen."" @CAPS1 a sense of home, spending time with the ones you love. Is it not comforting?",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18821,7,"“@CAPS1,when @CAPS5 we open presents?” I asked. “@CAPS2 we get back from church” she replied. It was our typical @DATE1 schedual, make @CAPS3 eve dinner all day, go to the @CAPS3 eve service , have grand parents for dinner than all the kids get to open one present than go to bed for about one hour get up , and open more presents.  Amen,” our pastor concluded the service “@CAPS5 we go now, @CAPS1?” I blubbered “@CAPS6” she said.@CAPS8 we ate dinner I felt like I had ants in my pants, I was so excited. time seemed to go by so slow I was @NUM1 years old before my grand parents left. Finally we were all gathered around the @CAPS3 tree @CAPS8 I was about to open my present. All it was was a sleeping bag than my dad said,” you @CAPS5 all sleep on the floor in @LOCATION1 room, but be sure you go to bed.” @CAPS8 I was laying on the floor, while my sister was sound asleep, I was thinking, I wonder what I‘ll get for @CAPS3. I eventually fell asleep. The next morning at @NUM2. I jumped out of bed woke my sister up and ran into my parents room to wake them up. I was thinking finally we get to open presents. That was a time where I had to be very patient. But it was all paid off in the end.",11,12,,23,,,,3.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1679,1,"Dear society, @CAPS1't you all have some kind of computer at home? Work? What if we took you computer away? How would you work? These are all esential questions. The computers of our time help us with what we do everyday. First of all they teach hand-eye coordination. Secondly they give us the ability to learn and communicate with the far away places. Lastly, They allow people to communicate quickly by an email or an @CAPS2. If those experts took our computers, @CAPS6 about what would happen. @PERCENT1 of americans have a computer or a cellphone with internet. These people have hane-eye coordination, therefore they use technology alot. People who use computers at work can multi-task. Secondly the modern computer lis a huge necessity. Thirdly, The people who are still in school have to write papers, do reports, but with-out computers. How will they accomplish that? @CAPS6 about what society would be like. Picture it. Facebook, @CAPS3, @CAPS4. These are all websites that have chats where people can communicate. Take it away. See what happens. We only have the telephone what if we @CAPS1't know some ones cellphone number? can't go on a computer that isn't there. Take all of that into consideration. Maybe the computer prevents us from face-to-face communication, but it's a common necessity. We need to be able to ask someone a quick question. Cellphones and calling aren't as quick as on @CAPS2. Do you really want to be the one to take it away? @CAPS6, @CAPS6 about what your to do. Take this letter into consideration. what are you to do? These computers, help with everyday life. From school to work to just fun. Computers help teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about people and far away places. thirdly they allow people to communicate, so go ahead, take it away, but see what happens when you do.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14921,6,"In The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Al Smith wanted to add a ""top"" or a ""hat"" to the Empire State Building that would function as a docking station for dirigibles. The dream was not ment to be.The first of many problems was getting the mooring mast, docking station, on top of the building. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof."" A dirigible would only be held by one cable.The dirigible's load and the wind presure would have to be transmitted all the way down the building. There were also safety problems. A lot of dirigibles used hydrogen. Hydrogen is highly flammable. It is also very windy around the Empire State Building. The dirigibles would have to hang sandbags by ropes. These would hang above the people below. The mooring mast was a good idea, but the builders faced to many problems. The project was never completed.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18801,7,"It was patient waiting to go to @CAPS1. It went through @NUM1 appointments. It was so excited and had the ladies to wait patiently and do many achievements and other activities respectively. On i.e. could offer everything, make especially new??? rave nily parents yells “at me and ??? you go against systems. I will have to be patient. I’l dish all night work, in the process ??? grade you a @CAPS2. It walked ??? days and dish everything else in @LOCATION1’s meat. Sitting it because such vast  will then tis with @NUM2th, ???",8,9,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6594,3,"Many things in the setting of the essay ""Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” affected the cyclist throughout his journey. One very important part that affected the cyclist greatly is the fact that he was in a deserts without a good supply of water. Another part of the setting that challenged the cyclist was the length of his journey. Those two factors of his journey to Yosemite combined are probably the worst and most challenging things that affected the cyclist.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13111,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir is a very happy mood. The author's parents gave up everything to come to @LOCATION1 for their soon to be child. They did that so that he could have a better education and for that he is verry greatful. The author loved his home and had great times in their. It is his most favorite place in the whole world and that is why he talks about his home in great detail. The author had great family memories in the kitchen with Cuban music and the scent of Cuban food. The author's mood is gratefull. It is because for what his parents did for him by moving to Cuba. It also is happy because of all the great times he had there. The author would probably want to relive those times as I want to relive  times of my childhood.,3,3,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16048,6,"The Empire State Building was always very famous and well-known, but did want more attention. Governor of New York, Al Smith, tried to allow dirigibles to dock on the building for transportation. He was encouraged it would work and actually went through with building it. The builders went through many obstacles trying to make it possible.To make this dream possible the builders would have to modify and strengthen the building. This would not be cheap, ""over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications had to be made to the building's framework."" It would be very expensive. The builders designed a ""shiny glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower."" Also the mast would have four wings of all all corners. The builders designed observation areas and even elevators and baggage areas. They had it all planned out and raised an American flag at the top. Unfortunately, nobody considered all the dangers of docking dirigibles. All the builders work never went through. They tried to dock two but it did not work out. The building turned into the world's highest soda fountain and tea garden for sightseers.",1,2,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4425,2,"Katherine Paterson made a valid point in stating that some books are to offensive for some people to read, but that does not mean they they should not be read. Time and time throughout someone's life we hear things that we do not like nor want to be bothered with, but it is good that we do. Libraries should have to right to open all types of books to their shelves and not have them be censored by the public, this is why.      We, as people of the @CAPS1 have battled through hard times. @CAPS2, racistism, and extreme poverty or depression are just a few to recall. Having delt with those issues we alwaying tend to repeat them out of lack of knowledge. Slavery and @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3 were some of the @CAPS1's lowest moments and they were also very gruesome. Recalling those memeries is difficult but something that needs to be done; if books were to be cencored then many young adults would not be educated and could repeat such horrible actions.      Pertaning to movies, music and magzines the same laws applies. Though not in the same way, many times these publications are written about current news or social aspects of life. Music is a form a expression and everyone has their own taste. Not having to opition to chose froma variety of styles is wrong and unfair.  Music can not only be an expression feeling about love or angry but it can also teach life lesson's. Some artist like to sing or rap on their life journey. This can educate others in to knowing that if you do this then this is the result, good or bad. In a magzine they tend to lean towards more current topics such a politics, jobs, or young adults lifestyles. Movies apply to the same rights and topics. Each on is egualily as important and if a group of citizens feel that it is not then who are they to make that call.      What gives a group of people the right to say this is inapporicate and that you should not read it? They do not have it. In the constitution is states that you have freedom of speech and that means you can express it anyway you choose. By censoring what people read that is in a way taking away that author right to speak. Now, that is unfair.      Though Katherine Paterson made a vaild point in saying that some books are to offensive to read, she just simiply is not right. A library is supposed to be a place where people can find a book, music, movie, magazine of any genre  and read it. If matericals were cencored then that is unfair to someone else who does want to read it. Bottom line is that you have free will and you have to power to choose weather or not you want to read something",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11953,5,the mood of the ather is happy becus he loves his hom and it is where he rely wonts to be. He also luves his culture and where he came from he lovses his parents and the skills' tey gave him during his childhood. that Is why I think his mood is very happy.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19001,7,"atime when I was patient was at my grandma’s house in @LOCATION1 my cousins and I had to wait for my grandma to get home @CAPS1 we can go to beach. After about an hour of waiting my cousin and; started to play video games to entertain ourselves @CAPS1 the time went faster my grandma had  probably worked for @NUM1 hours @CAPS1 at three- pm I decided to watch a movie I had been patient for the whole movie, at the middle of the movie my grandma got home @CAPS1 we all waited patiently till she was ready to  the beach.This was a time when I had been patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19224,7,A time I was patient was when I really wanted a game called x-men @CAPS3 wolver in and my mom said I had to what until @CAPS1 came strolling down the road. I can understand why she said that because we were a lttle shorf on cash at that time so we had to make the rest of what we had last a little longer. After a few week had past I forgot all about the game then on @CAPS1 day my sister and I got down stairs so fast then when we were oozning gifts I noticed a gift with my name on it. I go grab it and I opened it and it was it x-men @CAPS3 @CAPS4 and tow other games that I wanted offer that I go up to my room grab my @CAPS5 and headphones pop in x-me @CAPS3 and played it all day long,5,8,,13,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18392,7,"A time I was patient was @DATE1, @NUM1, @NUM2. I was sitting doing my meap test when my stomach started to hurt. For about @NUM3 minutes I sat there moving around. Then I raised my hand to ask call my mom. When I called on me I asked her and @CAPS3 said “ @CAPS1.S @PERSON1 can you take ??? to the office.” And @PERSON1 said ok. Then me and @PERSON1 went to the office and I called my house phone my sister picked up the phone I said to her “@CAPS2 me speak to mama.” @CAPS3 said “hold up. Then my mom said “it do.” I said mama can you please come pick me up my stomach hurts reel bad.” @CAPS3 said “ok” and hung up I waited about @NUM3 minutes sitting the patient, tosing and turning from my stomach hurting so bad. Then finally called agian “I said moma is you coming“ @CAPS3 said “@CAPS4 on my way”. I said “ok” and hung up. I was sitting there patient and in pain till finaly my mom walked through the school doors and signed me out the @CAPS3 said “come on” my sister and ??? were sitting out in the truck waiting to go to the family health center. I sat in the front seat. I was sleep the whole way home then I woken up when we got there I went in the house layed on the couch and fell asleep.",7,8,,15,,,,2.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12646,5,"In the memoir by Narciso Rodriguez, he develops a very warm, comforting, and happy mood of where he grew up. Narciso Rodriguez tells us of how his parents came to the states and after living in a small, one room apartment for a while were able to move in to a three room apartment where he was born. He speaks of how is home was decorated in the traditional style, about the Cuban music always playing and of how his parents taught him to cook. Rodriguez also tells us of his diverse neighbor hood but of how they all came together in unity. Everyone cared for one other and they helped whoever was a need. If someone needed help they received it and people would sacrifice for others. The memoir depicts that Narciso Rodriguez grew up in the love of his family.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8916,4,"The author concludes the story like that because she wants every body to know how she feels about the hibiscus. She felt like the hibiscus was a wondeful plant. She described it as ""smooth and cool toward the end of the first page. When she first the plant back in Vietnam she thought that is just grew wildly. Then when she saw it in the United States she was suprised that it grew in a pot. For example she desribed the the smell of the hibiscus as a ""sweet scent.” @CAPS1, this why she is concluded the story like this; because of how felt about the plant.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3290,2,"Books mean a lot to people that love to read. Books have pictures, or they @MONTH1 even be poem books. Some books should not be on the shelves in libraries. They have offesive language and not so well of pictures. They @MONTH1 be learning books but the little kids do not need to see that. I think books should be removed from the shevles if found offensive.      Libraries need to up their standards of what should be in the library and what should not. The books, movies, music, ect. needs to be in a certain section of the library to where the little kids can not go or reach. A library is a family place not a fun zone for adults.     On @DATE1, I went to the library with my brother to pick out a book for him. @CAPS2 is only six about to be seven. He had told me he wanted to get a book about dinosuars, but I told him to get one on space and aliens. @CAPS2 was very into reading. He  read to our mom everynight before he would go to bed. We were walking down @CAPS1 street when a bolt of lighting struck through the trees. 'ekkkk!' said @CAPS2 as he ran around me. We walk into the library and the old lady at the front desk says, 'there is a huge storm coming.' We sorta ignore her and go on about our bussiness picking our books for @CAPS2. @CAPS2 and I walk up stairs to the childrens section. @CAPS2 is looking around and he says 'hey kayla, what is this and he picks up a naughty magaizine. i rush over to snach it out of his hands and he gets scared. He ask 'but sissy what is that?' I do not respond. I tell him to pick a book and come on. He grabs one and we are on our way to get it checked out and the lights go off. It was completely dark. '@CAPS3 stay calm.' a man says. The back up lights come on and we all go to the lobby area. We sit there for twenty mins and the lights are back on. Everything is normal again and we go to check out. We get up to the front and i turn in the bad magazine that @CAPS2 had found. The lady askd why I was bringing it to her and i had to tell her the bad news, that it was up in the childrens section. She said 'oh my!' @CAPS2 laid his books up on the counter and we checked out. We walked out the front doors and we were on our way home.",4,3,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16220,6,"The Empire State Building face a lot of obstacles like in paragraph @NUM1, ""A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building, held by a single cable tether, would add stress to the building's frame."" This was one of the many trouble there was for dirigibles to land on the Empire State building. In paragraph @NUM2, They @CAPS1 to realize that the mooring mast of the @ORGANIZATION1n't of been build, because it wouldn't work."" The Mooring mast of the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfil it's purpose, for reason that should have been apperent before it was ever constructed. The reason that mooring mast was because of nature. As you will see on paragraph @NUM3, ""the Wind were shifting due to violent air currents."" The mooring mast had a lot of problems scinc the beginning when Al Smith put a top to the building making it 1,250. It was unsafe for planes. When they wanted to make the Dirigibles land on top of the building. Dirigibles that came from another countries had hydrogen, which is highly flammable. The problem that worked anginst the mooring mast being buit was wind on top of the building @CAPS2. Because of the air currents. These are the reasons why the mooring mast was unsuccessful on the Empire State Building",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1255,1,"Dear Newspaper, I read an article in the paper @DATE1 debating whether or not computers have a positive or negative effect on people. Even though, I love my computer, I know that computers can have a bad effect on people. Computers can cause people to have a lack of exercise, lack of family and friend time, and lack of enjoying nature. Although, computers can help people in so many ways, they can also make things worse for people. In @LOCATION1 the obesity rate has reached an all time high of @PERCENT1. A computer is a non active activity, so if you do use it you get no exersise. One time I played on the computer for two whole hours and gained two pounds. Your health is also very important. When you become overweight you get the risk of diabettes, high colestral, heart failure, liver failure, and more. My uncle is overweight and was just diagnosed with diabettes and now he regrets all the time he gave to his computer. Lastly, people @MONTH1 say that computers create great hand-eye coordination. Computers might do that but is the hand-eye coordination ever used? No, because that person is too busy playing on the computer can you see how computers can effect your health? Eighty eight percent of @CAPS1 voted that the most important thing in their life was their family and friends. The other twelve percent said that their computer or cell phone is their most important thing in life because they cannot live without it. Not spending time with your Family and friends is an awful thing to do. When my mom lost contact with one of new friends, @CAPS2 regretted not spending so much time with them. Also, if you do not spend time with people it could lead to socializing problems. If the only thing you do is talk to people on the computer you develope speech problems. My neibor, who I have never talked too never really came out of his house he always seemed to be on his computer, and no one over. One day someone came over and they started talking outside. When I overheard a little of their conversation I could the words he had trouble saying and he did not have a good vocabulary. Lastly, you can also develope relationship problems. Not being able to see a real relationship. That is why computers can have a negative effect on not only you, but your family and friends too. In our daily lives we observe nature, and it's beauty. Spending time on the computer instead of enjoying nature is awful. For example, if I was to not go outside for a whole day, and I got to spend my time on the computer I would be miserable. Nature is a gift that should be given to everybody. Also the @CAPS3 air is good for your body. Without @CAPS3 air you would be taking in chemically changed air, which is not good for your body. Lastly, everyone reads on the internet about @CAPS4 warming but why do we not take action! If you spend your time on the computer you would not be able to help nature. I remember when I read about @CAPS4 warming on the computer. So I took action and cleaned our lakes. That is why computers have a negative effect on people. Computers can be great in so many ways but it is how much time you give to your computer that is bad.That is why computers have a negative effect on our society.",6,5,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13370,5,The mood created by the author in the memoir. The character Narciso's parent moved from cuba to the united states to have better oppertunitys in life. When @PERSON1 came to america he had became friends with a girl name  Alegria.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12647,5,"The mood created by the author is loving because it talks about how generous and caring his family is. ""... @LOCATION1 graced our kitchen table for meals..."" That quote gives you an idea of how close everybody is ""...family had nothing to do with being a blood relative.""  @CAPS1 around Narciso treats him like family. He learned what family really ment by living in this house during his childhood. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" In the memoir you can see how Narciso loves his family and friends. Overall the main mood of this memoir is loving.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9057,4,The author concludes with this paragraph mostly because she wants to emphasize her memoreies of her homeland by saying that she would take the test again driving the next spring. This is due to that fact that she knows as soon as spring comes back there will be a lot of memories coming back to her since during spring animals come out and trees blossom making it all beautifu for her to take the test again with support from her memories of her country.,1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3402,2,"In the world, there are just some things that our children should not be exposed to. I believe that the media such as music, magazines, and movies set a high bar for the individuals in our society. I highly disagree with what the media feeds to our minds as to the way our looks and lifestyle should be.     The library is a place where most children go to feed their imaginations with colorful books with morals; but the library is also where adults go to free their minds of work and to escape many of life's responsibilities. Most children from ages @NUM1 to @NUM2 draw a curious mind to the very adult world and seek to find answers. Now the library is not a place where a child can recieve adult information right? Wrong! the library shelves are open to any and everyones advantage. A child can just as easily come across the wrong track to take ones innocence. Some parents in sociey believe that their neighborhood is a perfect harm free enviornment to raise children. Little do parents know, it is a very uncensored world and at anytime a child can learn of it's exsistance.     The media draws it's attention to captivate our children. We have to watch what we let our kids watch, listen to, and read. For example, the girl in the magazine who just recently got a nose job because her nose was too big is feeding the idea to your eight year old daughter. She believes that she can recieve surgery to fix her big nose that the kids at school tease her about. Maybe your son listens to rap or rock music that condones the use of violence, drug, and alcohol use. He will think its ok to pick fights at school with other children or curse the teacher. Or the movie with the sex scene in it could give your child the idea to go out and practice what was taught.     In our society, there should not be an image that our children should try and sustain. We should teach our children that life is better explored through @PERSON1's '@ORGANIZATION1' or through the wonderful adventures of 'The @CAPS1 of @ORGANIZATION2'. Parents should feed kids 'imagination' and not feed their 'image'. Life for our children should be about fun, knowledge, and life experience; but not everything that is on the shelves of our local library.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4118,2,"@CAPS6 are many books out @CAPS6 that, if looked into, have something obsene or vulgar in it. Despite the fact that children of certain ages probably shouldn't be reading these types of things, the book itself should not be banned from the shelves of libraries.      Authors write or type every word for a reason, whether happy or sad or vulgar. @CAPS6 is a reason the author wants the reader to read these 'offensive' things. Everything you read in a book is @CAPS6 because the author wanted you to read it, not to just put it @CAPS6 to fill in or to be nasty. I agree that children shouldn't read these books with that kind of material in them but that doesn't mean take the books down. The library where I live has sections for children, teens, and adults so that @CAPS6 is no confusion or concern of the content of the book. You have to be of age in order to take some of the readings home. I personally think that this is a great idea and will comprimise both sides that don't want their kids reading these books and those who want to read the book without getting rid of anything. If the latter was taken in to effect though, some of the classic and prize winning books would be taken off the shelves, such as To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2, The @PERSON1, @CAPS3 @CAPS4's @CAPS5, and much more. Such harsh actions aren't neccasary when a much simpler and more effective way to be accomplished.     Although offesive material is a concern for children @CAPS6 are much better ways to have it so they can't read them until ready. No book should be taken off a shelf for its content.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15546,6,"The builders faced many problems attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the empire state building.  First of all, tying a dirigible with one cable would add tremendous weight to the frame of the building.  In order for this to be possible, the steel frame of the Empire state building would have to be strengthened which would add an additional cost of @MONEY1.  After the mast was built, the Empire state building faced new problems as well.  Most dirigibles used hydrogen which was highly flammable.  After what happened to the Hindenburg, the architects knew that the results would have been much worse in a densely populated area such as New York City.  Another problem was that it was too risky to have a big dirigible hanging above pedestrians a few thousand feet in the air.  The law also hindered Al Smith's idea.  The law stated that airships were prohibited from flying too low over urban areas.  When the dirigible Los Angeles attempted a trial, builders found that the wind blew too high for the dirigible and they feared it would fly into nearby buildings.  The idea of dirigibles was soon forgotten and gave way to airplanes.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7578,3,"According to the essay features of the setting affect the cyclist. If the cyclist is in the middle of a hot desert in June with no water, the cyclist will become excessively thirsty the longer they go. For example; the author states “I had been hitting my bottles pritty regularly, and I was traveling through the high desert of California in June”. The terrain changes to short, rolling hills from flat land causing the cyclist to push herself to get the next town to get water. For instance; she states “over one long, crippling hill, a building came into view”. This cause the cyclist to use what they thought of as their last burst of energy to get down there, but the building was abandoned, thus making the cyclist feel let down. As the cyclist continued on a setting of a bait store came and the cyclist felt relief because now she could get water. These examples show the change of setting on the cyclist’s trip and how it affected her.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16072,6,"Architects and builders working on building a docking platform on top of the Empire State Building for dirigibles faced many obstacles. The first problem builders came across was the possibility that the building's framework was not potentially strong enough to support a dirigible's weight. It was said in paragraph nine that ""the stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way down to the building's foundation, and that was too risky. Another obstacle that builder's came across ""was nature itself."" @CAPS1 some dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, it was feared that the winds on top of the building would be too intensely violent and be destroyed by flammable gas. The next obstacle builders faced was public safety. There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" @CAPS2 dirigibles could not approach the dock over the area for sake of the citizens of New York. All of these problems eventually led to ""the idea of using the mooring mast [to be] shelved.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
54,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, @CAPS1! I am an @NUM1 grade student at @PERSON1. I was reading your paper and I notice you had an article on how people are spending too much time on the computer and not enough time going outside, getting exercise, enjoying nature, and that it doesn't benifit society. i completly disagree with these comments. let me explain... Having computers definatly benifits for all students. Sometimes kids forget their text books at school. But if they have a computer, they can just google the information. That way they get there homework done, and don't have to take a zero. Another thing is, I am sure you have heard of a website called, study island. If you havn't, i'ts a website for all the students in the @LOCATION1 to take online courses for math, reading, and science. They are time consuming, but they count for a huge chunk of our grade. So, if we get an @CAPS2 on study island we get an @CAPS2 in one of our classes.. Not only does the computer help students but it helps me in a kind of personal way. I love the piano. But, there are no instructions in my area. However, there is a program on the computer called synewnisia. It helps you learn all kinds of songs on your keyboard or piano. The piano helps my hand-eye coordination as well as it teaches discipline and dedication. Now, synewnesia isn't the only free instrument learning program. There are many others! This helps people who can't afford lessons, and learning an instrument can help you acheive things later in life. Now, one thing you said in your article is that people aren't getting enough exercise because of sitting in front of a computer all day. This is not completly true. In fact, most people go on the computer researching diet plans or local gyms. How do I know this? Well one day when I went on google the top search of the day was, ""weight watchers diet plan"". Also, my mom uses an online video workout website, for her bad back. So not only does the computer help for diets, they can help physical therapy also. So with this letter I hope you realize that the computer does benifite our society, yes, we should not spend too much time on it. But, online learning sessions can be time consuming. It helps many people figure out the right deit and workouts so they can stay happy and healthy.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19007,7,One day there was a little boy named @CAPS1. He was really hungry and his mom was a slow cooker. She would take forever to get done cooking. @CAPS1 was starving and he was getting real unpatient with his mother @CAPS4 @CAPS1 went outside to play with has friends. He came back home and was wishing dinner was ready. He went in the kitchen and said “mom is dinner ready”. “@CAPS3 right now” said mom. It won’t be ready until another hour. @CAPS1 was thinking what can he do until dinner is ready @CAPS4 he went to go to play his video game. It was a space ship game. The space ship was shooting other space ships to survive. @CAPS1 got bored @CAPS4 he went in the kitchen to see was dinner ready. His mom wasn’t finish @CAPS4 @CAPS1 was patient and his mom was finish less than five minutes.,9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13529,5,"The authors mood of the memoir is that @CAPS1 is grateful because @CAPS1 tells us how much @CAPS1 appreciates of what his parents have done. @CAPS1 appreciates that his parents ""immigrated"" to the United States so @CAPS1 can have a ""better life"". @CAPS1 said that ""they came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country the loved."" @CAPS1 is grateful that his parents did that for him. @CAPS1 is happy that his parents made their house like if they were in Cuba where they originally came from. @CAPS1 said that the ""Cuban feast always filled the air with not just scent and music but life and love."" @CAPS1 is thankful of the ""sacrifice"" that his parents needed to make. @CAPS1 is so grateful that @CAPS1 can't ""express his gratitude"". The author thanks his parents of what they've done to make him happy. That is how grateful the author is towards what his parents did to make them have a better life and @CAPS1 has learned what the word ""family"" truly means.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1710,1,"Wouldn't you agree that computers have a great affect on people. The three reason why they have a good affect on people is because, it gives you good typing skills, its educational, and it helps you out with alot of things. The first reason why computers have a good affect on people is because computers help your typing skills. If you have a computer you will soon learn that your typing skills get very good. Each time you use the computer your hands ajust to the keys on the computer. Say if there is someone that wants to work with computers when they get older, well if they practice their typing on their computers at home they will be eligible for the job working with computers. Also computers could be good for the hearing impared. If the hearing impared use to the computers then they can get a @CAPS1 or @CAPS2 and chat with people online. This would be useful to them because since they could not hear what people say they can read what people say through the internet. Another reason why computers have a good affect on people is because they are very educational. In my opinion, computers are very educational because there are alot of websites that teach you facts about different places. For example, what food people eat in different countrys, or where that country is. A website that is the best for finding out accurate facts is www.Ask.com. Ask.com is the best website because it tells you what ever you want to know in a matter of seconds. Computers are also educational when it comes to school projects because of these amazing websites. The last reason why computers have a affect on people is because they help you with alot of things. They help you with alot of things because if you want to know how far @LOCATION2 is from @LOCATION1 then you can go on your pc and find out, or say that you lost the directions to your friends house and your on your way to their house if you brought your labtop you can go on the labtap and find where her house is from your labtop. I know your probably thinking there is such thing as a gps, well if you think about it gps's can be confusing, but your computer reads it out to you. Know your probably saying in your heads why don't you text/call @CAPS3/@CAPS4 if you think about it what if your friend does not talk clearly. In conclusion, wouldn't you agree that computers do have good effects on people. My three arguments are, they help your typing skill educational. They help you with things. please take my ideas into consideration.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9791,4,"The author concludes the story this way to show how the main character, Saeng has changed from the beginning of the story to the end. It show a small amount of newfound confidence Saeng now has. This ending also shows how much of an effect the “Winter hibiscus” had on her. with bringing back memories of her old country. If Saeng wouldn’t have found the hibiscus, she would have never started to reminisce about her old home. This reminiscing not only reminded her of her past, but it also helped her compare her new home to her old home. Through this she realized that life in @LOCATION1 is not so bad, and that she still has a little bit of her old home with her everyday. This realization gave her just enough hope and confidence to want to try the driving test again This ending shows the change of heart Saeng feels for @LOCATION1 and her small gain of hope and confidence.  ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18662,7,"A time that I was patient was when I took my first @CAPS1 test this year. The test was not too hard, but not easy. I finished it with about one and a half hours left. For an hour and a half I had nothing to do but just sit perfectly still and silent. Sitting still and quiet for even five minutes is hard for a @NUM1 year old, imagine @NUM2 minutes! At first I was fidgeting, then my neck started to hurt, so I layed my head down. I closed my eyes and just layed there perfectly quiet and still. Soon enough the time flew by and the @CAPS2.E.A.P was over (done for the day). I was very proud of myself for being patient and calm during those @NUM2 minutes.",9,9,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18832,7,"Have you ever been patient before? Well l have l was sitting there in a nice warm and cozy seat exhausted dozing off waiting for them to say the came @PERSON1. It kept going throught my mind @PERSON1, @PERSON1, @PERSON1, but nothing ever happened so l just sat there waiting patiently. My mom was sitting next to me reading an avon magazine that she had picked up from the small, round wooden table centered right in the middle of the silence orthodonist office. I kept asking myself things like I wonder what their gonna do today, I wonder if I'll get my expander off or what about my top braces. Then l starting to stare at the office ladies typing away on their computers. The sound of metal tools was ringing in my ear, coming from the back room. A girl walked out ""@CAPS1"" l was excited and nervous at the same time but l was proud because l had sat there the whole time patiently.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11894,5,"In the memoir from: Home The Blueprints of Our Lives by Narciso Rodriguez. The mood Narciso creates In his memoir is a sort of loving mood. This mood is described by The @CAPS1 ""I learned there how to love. I will never forget, and parents turned this simple house into a home"". this shows how he loved his home. Also The @CAPS1 ""passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today and to that I am externaly grateful. This shows he loved That his parents passed on to him a love of cooking and cooking skills",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19539,7,When I had to go get my check up with my asma or and a familiar way like that when I had been waiting in the waiting room wich had tons of stuff to do if the doctor didn’t call your name yet. So I had gotton myself busy with crossword puzzles and looking at the fishes wich were awesome cause they had different kinds of fish. And then mostly I had read my book cause I am a reader at the same time a writer but I mostly I had read my book when the doctor came in finally to call my name but I was still busy doing activities then he had said he was sorry a bout  the wait which took a while and just said it had been fine and he seen all of the stuff I had been doing while I was waiting. And he said I was a very patient nice girl and after that I always wanted to be more patient while waiting for others so I can get good compliment which makes me fell really good with a smile on the face. And ever since I see that exact doctor who I had do appointment with he always give me a treat or sitters. But to me it doesn’t matter as long as I am treating other people fair usually great. Because people would love to be like you one day for having patience.,8,6,,14,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6697,3,"The features of the setting affected the cyclist greatly. It was so hot where he was that he kept drinking his water without realizing it until he only had a couple of sips left. The terrain also made him thirsty because the more he had to go up and down hills, the more he would drink. The fact that he did not see any town except on ghost town for miles affected him because he did not think he was going to make it to the next town. The setting played a major role on the cyclist because it affected him that much.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1605,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think the effects of computers are good. Some reasons I think this is that we get a lot of knowledge from it, contact people you don’t live near and haven't seen in a while. My first reason why I think the effects of computers are good because you can get a lot of knowledge from it. One example would be if you want to make a @CAPS1 meal, you wouldn't find it in an ordinary @CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4 you would have to look up on the internet for the recipe. Another example is if you wanted to travel to @LOCATION1 by car and you didn't have a map how would you get the directions? You would go on the computer, look up directions to @LOCATION1 and print it out. You would have never been able to go to @LOCATION1 if you didn't have a map or a computer. My second reason why I think the effects of computers is good is because you can contact friends or family that you have not seen in a while. One example would be if your sister just graduated from college and you wanted to congratulate her but you were @NUM1 feet in the air by a airplane and all you had was your laptop and your luggage, you would e-mail her saying good job. These are just a few reasons why I think the effects of computers is good, and I hope the local newspaper agrees too.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1733,1,"I think that computer are a good benefit for people because those who support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. For example, they teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places, people and even allow people to talk with other people. My first reason, is that important people around the world used computers to have a better future on life. The people that use computers have important jobs. For example, a judge, an enginere, a lawyer, an archytecht, a scientist, an archeologist etc... This is why I think that computer are helpfull for people. My second reason, is that computer could be helpful with kids because computers could help kids get better grades at school. It could help develop a smarter brain in many ways. The first way that it could help develop a smarter brain is reading a lot on the compute. It helps by knowing the meaning of new words. I helps you speak correctly and clear. That is why I think that computers help develop a smarter brain. My third reason is that it help adult connect to different places at the world. That could be a hobby for adults that does not have something to do could have a good time. My conclusion is that with computer you could have a better life. Computers could help you get a better future.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9026,4,The reason why I feel the authour ended the story with this paragraph is because she is showing how the charater has matured and how the charater grew in her circumstance. This shows that because you failed once doesn’t mean your going to fail again. Also it’s okay to feel out of place there is alway going to be a time in life where a new beginning is going to start so it is your choice to take that chance or be stuck in your own ways but the decision is always up to you.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6260,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in @CAPS1 ways. The cyclist was in California in June weather. If it wasn’t so hot, he wouldn’t have needed water as badly. He wouldn’t have been sweating as much. Also, there weren’t any buildings or cars around, so there wasn’t anyone to help him. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structures of any kind.” @CAPS1 features of the setting could affect the cyclist.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18905,7,"A lime when I was patient was last year every day I had to be patient, because of my aunt. last year my aunt would pick me up in the back of the school someday I didn’t know if she was picking me up, like this one time it was the first day of school and I didn’t know what was happening. I didn’t know who was going to pick me up. I didn’t have a phone so I couldn’t call mane. There I was waiting being patience at the school. As I was waiting I with my friend to his house, then I went back to the school and waited. For about @NUM1 or @NUM2 minutes or what felt about an hour my aunt came and picked me up.",8,6,,14,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16295,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow drigibles to dock at the building. Drigibles are enormous steel framed balloons filled with hydrogen and helium maneuvered by the use of propellers and rudders. Al Smith wanted to add a mooring mast to the top of the building would let drigibles to anchor for several hours for refueling or service. But, the stress of the drigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be sent all the way to the buildings Foundation. This cost over @MONEY1 worth of modifications to be made to the framework. In May 6, 1937 when the Hindenburg was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey the builders realized how catastrofick it would have been taken place above the densely populated area of downtown New York. The winds at the top of the building would constantly shift due to harsh and violent air currents and the back of the ship would constantly swing around. Also, the existing law against airships flying too low over cities and urban areas would make drigibles not allowed to moor at the Empire State Building. All in all, the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow drigibles to dock at the building.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3301,2,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2,      @CAPS3, my name is @PERSON1 and I think that everyone has a right to there own opinion. People @MONTH1 not want there kids to look at certain things but, they need to keep them were there kids cant find them. Kids in the world hear bad language, see fighting, and even see people get shot. There is a lot more bad things in life than a movies, books, and music that childreen listen to, watch, or read.     I think that the world is more harmfull sometime than anything. Adults @MONTH1 want kids to grow up differently than others so they need to tell them not to be listening and watching the bad things on tv. But, if there kids wanna learn about things that happen thats not the greatest, then people should let them.     It wouldn't be right if people or movies or things had to change just because other people dont like it. Why should other people have to change just for the ones who dont like it. There are some materials that are bad but can be only purchesed at the age of eight-teen. Thats why people should be ok with things that dont envolve minors. Having things censored ruins a lot of things, the fact that its was made that way it should be kept that way.     I'm sure many people @MONTH1 not agree with my report but, it's something to look and think about. People wouldn't make the things they do if it was supposed to be censored. That takes the whole meaning out of a lot of things. So my answer is NO about taking things away that are not censored. Keep them so people can understand life the easy way and the hard way.     Sincerely,      @PERSON1",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21149,8," Laughter is important in all relationships of any kind. If you have a friendship where you never laugh and nothing is ever funny, what is the point? I have four friends that mean the world to me. @PERSON2, @PERSON3, @ORGANIZATION2, and @CAPS1. @CAPS1's real name is @PERSON1 but we all call her @CAPS1 because how she acts. @PERSON2 and I use to do almost everything together. We were inseperable, we went to school together, we even ate our meals talking to eachother. @PERSON2 and I can make eachother laugh no matter what the situation @MONTH1 be. I remember when @PERSON2 and I hadn't been getting along like we usually do. One day at around nine p.m. my phone rings, it was @PERSON2 I didn't know whether or not to pick up or to just pretend to be busy so the two of us didn't argue. Well I decided to pick up because it was the friendly thing to do and I knew that she would have been there for me. There was obviously a reason she called me, right? As I was about to say hello I could hear @LOCATION1 crying. I panicked, @PERSON2 was not one to just cry because of something little. I asked her what was wrong and told her to tell me all about it even though we were fighting I wanted to be there for her no matter what because she was always there for me. The @TIME1 before it had been @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1, our whole posse or whatever you wanted to call it went together and everything had seemed fine except the usual pointless arguements that always ended in a laugh. Little did we know that the past two weeks @PERSON2's @CAPS3 had been ""house sitting"" he hadn't planned on returning home to his family. As i listen to @PERSON2 tell me the news and how hurt she was, my heart sank. While she cried I cried. Her @CAPS3, broke the news to her @DATE1 @TIME1 after we left for @ORGANIZATION1. He will not be returning home because he hasn't been happy there for awhile and he wanted a divorce. I knew exactly how @PERSON2 felt, my parents got divorced when I was very young. Although it didn't tear me apart like it did her it still effected me. Not having a real family with one home and two parents who were married and inlove was never easy on anyone. @PERSON2 had not the slightest idea that her @CAPS3 would later get married and start a family with a woman he had been seeing for over a year while coming home to his family. She just kept telling me that she had to bring him home, that she couldn't do this. @PERSON2 and her @CAPS3 were really close, she was daddy's girl one hundred percent. I remember her telling me that she just wanted to disappear it was all her fault. All I could do as her friend was listen and tell her it would be okay. @PERSON2 began to calm down and grasp the fact that things happen and she couldn't change her @CAPS3's mind. I invited @PERSON2 over for the @TIME1 to just hangout and maybe get thigns off her mind for awhile. It couldn't be easy sitting in her home with her @CAPS3 gone knowing he wasn't coming back. So @PERSON2 came over, we played guitar hero and everytime I messed up she would laugh. Hearing @PERSON2 laugh again made me feel better about things because I knew that she had figured out it was not her fault for her @CAPS3 leaving. Without the laughter in that room I'm not sure me and @PERSON2 would have been able to ever be good friends again. Afterall laughing at me messing up on guitar hero brought me and her back to being good friends again. So it's very important to have laughter in a relationship because once the laughter is gone then the friendship or whatever you know is going dowhill. Now @PERSON2 and I talk for endless hours or text about anythign and everything and when we aren't laughing we know to ask one another what is wrong.",16,20,,36,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1089,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I have same questions for you and I was hoping you could answer them. I was wandering. Do you have any computers in your house, if so how many? Also, do you like using the computer? I am trying to figure out how many people don't use computers because. I want to ask them how do they survive without one!? Computers are essential to our present day lives. Everything in the world is in one computer. You can talk, email, even see people through a computer because now adays everyone has a videcam hooked onto their computer. I want to tell you all of the great things computers do not make our lives so much easier. People are always looking for a way to get in touch with someone like if your phone is dead, how are you going to tell your friend what time your going to meet at that place? You can easily just text her from the computer. You can either use your screen-name to text someone or just go on verizon, at&t, sprine... etc.com and text people from there. It would save you from standing your friend up and feeling guilty about it. Has there ever been a time where you needed number, but you couldn't find your telephone book? It sure has happened to me, but you know what I do? I go on the computer and go on yellow pages.com and just look up the restraunt/place on the website. It's as simple as that. You can look up almost anything on the computer, prices, places, facts, anything! Most of the time the true facts will always be there. Computers help you a lot if you need help on histicoral, scientific, and @CAPS2 facts. Computers help us everyday. People need them for communication, telephone numbers, or facts about anything. Most of someones life can be saved to the computer. If you have bad handwriting, then you could just type up your paper and hand it in all nice and neat. Like I said before computers are esstential to our present day lives @CAPS3 reading this, I bet you'll agree.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21054,8,"Laughter is the @CAPS1 @CAPS2't @CAPS6 frustrating when you can't manage to get someone to laugh? Is @CAPS6 really possible to be so upset that you can't even crack a little smile? There's something to laugh at in every situation, sometimes @CAPS6 just takes some thinking and imagination to figure out what @CAPS6 is. I personally had an experience where laughter was all I could look to in order for me to feel like everything was okay. Last @DATE1, I was babysitting, @CAPS6 was a nice and sunny day and we were all craving chocolate frostys from @ORGANIZATION1. At the time I could not legally drive anybody outside of my family, so we decided to call my sister, @LOCATION1. She had the day off work, so @CAPS6 seemed to be a perfect day for frostys. We waited for what seemed like forever for @PERSON2 to get to the house and finally, after about an hour, she pulled in the driveway. The kids were so excited. The four of us loaded into the back of @CAPS4 car and off we went to @ORGANIZATION1. When we got there, we started getting out of the car and that's when I noticed something was wrong. @PERSON2 had just locked the keys in the car, with the keys still in the ignition and the car running! I was still getting the kids out of the car so you'd think that I would just reach in and grab them, but no, that was not the case here. I asked @PERSON2 ""@CAPS3 did you leave your car running? Aren't you going to get your keys?"" @CAPS4 response was, ""@CAPS5, no! I locked @CAPS6 too! Don't close your door!"" @CAPS6 was too late. I instinctively closed the door after i was done. I hadn't really thought about the fact that I could have saved all of this from happening, especially considering that I was the one that noticed @CAPS6 first. Apparently I don't listen to people's responses after I ask them a question because the kids were all practically rolling on the ground because they were laughing so hard and I couldn't figure out what was so funny. Then @CAPS6 hit me, I felt like an idiot. We were stuck in the @LOCATION2's parking lot with three kids, locked outside of a car that was running and we didn't really know what to do from there. Our first solution to the problem was to call my mom and have @CAPS4 bring the spare @CAPS1, but we weren't really sure where the spare @CAPS1 was at the time. My mom said that she didn't have @CAPS6 so we would have to call my dad and ask him where @CAPS6 was. We called him and first he laughed at us for being so stupid, but then said the @CAPS1 was in his truck and somebody would have to come get @CAPS6 from him because he was about to go into a meeting. Obviously we couldn't go get @CAPS6 from him, so we called my mom back and she agreed to go get @CAPS6, though at this point she wasn't very happy about having to leave work to fix our stupidity. She told us to not worry about the car, nothing was going to happen to @CAPS6 with @CAPS6 locked, and just go inside @PERSON1's and get our frostys. Through all of this @PERSON2 and I were just trying to keep the kids entertained, but they didn't really need us for that. They were too busy role playing me closing the door while @PERSON2 said not to. They thought @CAPS6 was hilarious. @PERSON2 and I were not so humored by @CAPS6, although we did think @CAPS6 was pretty funny to watch them exaggerate the whole thing over and over again. Instead of us making the kids laugh, they were making us laugh. We sat at @LOCATION2's for almost two hours before my mom showed up with the @CAPS1. @CAPS6 turned out that the @CAPS1 was not in my dad's truck like we thought, @CAPS6 was at our house, hanging on the board with all of the other spare keys. That didn't matter though, all that mattered was that we get the kids back home before their mom showed up with us not there. The car sitting there using up the gas with nobody in the car was not the funny part of the day, neither was @PERSON2 blaming me for everything and making me fill @CAPS4 tank with all the money I had earned that day from babysitting. The funny part was the kids. Still today, they laugh about our little @PERSON1's adventure. @CAPS6 just makes me realize that @CAPS6's all kids that bring laughter to the world and encourage happiness in everyone. I believe everybody needs a little laughter in their day, even if they think @CAPS6's the worst day ever. Laughter really is the @CAPS1.",20,23,,43,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6285,3,"The features of the setting affets the cyclist in afew ways. For example, the features of the “Rough Road” didnt allow him to arive as fast so was drive @NUM1 on a @NUM2 speed limit. Second the fact that he was drivuing through a desert a large snake made its way on the Road, causing the man to have to ""ease past, trying to keep my balance in my dehidrated state.” @CAPS1 again because he was driving through the desert,hegot so hot & started to get dehydrated of lack of water. Lastly the features that there werent any buildings far miles so he was left lost and didnt have anywhere to stop & ask for directions. These few features defenitly affected the cyclist.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
964,1,"Dear @CAPS1 Have you ever wondered how much the world wide web has to offer? I would definetly agree that computers have a benificial effect on people. They teach hand eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about far away places and they give people the chance to recconnect or new people. The internet has so much to offer and is absolutley benifical. Studies done by @PERSON1, doctor at @ORGANIZATION1 stated that @PERCENT1 of people who are on the computer typing have better hand eye coordination than those who do not. You could be improving your coordination and not even know it! Intelligent people would agree that being on the computer is very helpful to you. There are many computer games are there that you have to react quickly to and call for fast reflex and hand eye coordination. I know personally that it has help us. Since @CAPS2 been on the computer more I have noticed that my reaction time off this block for has shockly improved! Yes, I know that some people should get outside and exercise, but you can excersize and improve your hand eye coordination, either way you can go wrong. As the massive sits in space like high take fascinating worlds it the computers. The technology of computers to learn about the far away places. Kevin, scientist that @PERCENT2 of our knowing about space come from computers! For example think about google earth; it allows the human eye to see clear pictures of anywhere in the world! I think you would agree that without computers we would a lot of knowledge about the wonderful world around us. Would you rather us not have computers and not know half the stuff about we live in? By these high tech computers we can learn about life outside like space, and other galaxies. Did you know that @NUM1 of the population use the computer to talk, and reconnect to friends and family. I know I do! I know that people shouldn't be to computer, talking to people. But its a great way to stay in touch with people. They have awesome websites like skype and oovo that allows you to chat with other people over. Friendly, educated people agree that this is a good way to catch up with old friends from highschool or even way back to grade school. Another great aspect of online communicating is long friendships can be created. Newly explain, now they not online and got so close they ! Personally I know that I go to @DATE1 camp every year and make new friends. Internet websites like facebook helped me keep in touch with her. Clearly this is a great source to use! The time has come to decide the choice of using computers would deffinetly be a wise one. Without a doubt it will certainly help you; hand eye coordination and keep you talk or recconect with people. Most importantly it gives people the ability to learn about the wonders of far away places. So dont make the wrong choice, and appreciate and use all this computers have to offer.",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3096,2,"I belive that they need to keep every thing and gain more. Their is so much to luearn about. The more information you have the better. I for one think that they need to put more magazines on the stands so you can have more information. Thow you can not trust every thing in one, You can still find many facts about what your wanting to learn about. On the other hand, Children should not be able to reach or see some of this. I could teach our children stuff that they are not yet ready to learn about. The fact is they need to have people watching the stuff so kids wont get in it and we can still lurean and find out new things. Not everything should be hidden. The more you know could just save the world.",1,1,,1,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4167,2,"There are alot of things that people think do do we really think that things that are found offensive in the libraries should be tooken down. I think that if there is somthimg foumd offincive in a library, it should be tooken down immediatley.     Libraries should be a place of comfort, a place to relax, a place to read and enjoy our books not a place were if we find somthing disturbing or offensive we shouldnt come there any more. Some people might not care about the things they see and some do. Therefore if i see somthing that offends me and is disturbing to me i will ask nicely if it could be removed from the list and book files.     Now to sum it all up if a book or whatever it @MONTH1 be offends you in the library, then i believe it should be removed from that library. If people find things less attracctive and offensive it will soon go around and less people will come to that library. This is how i put it, make the library suitable for others, make them feel at home when they are reading there book, magazine, etc., not for you. It is how others think about what is out there in these libraries not what you think",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9777,4,"Several reasons, first, in spring she will have had more time to adjust to her new life. Also when the hibiscus starts budding she will feel conforted, as though it auomaticaly brings back her childhood memories. It also is a link to her past home in Vietnam. When the hibiscus adjusts to its new life in ground soil, she will adjust and be ready to take the test again. Its as if, when the plant is ready to start budding, she will also be ready.     ",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3964,2,"Is it offensive?          Should people have the right to take down other people ideas? What do you think; I think so ? for centuries people have been writing,making video,and, all types of music. Some consider it a freedom of speech. Others might think of it as being rebellious or conspiracy.     I believe @CAPS1 are exceptional writers and promising producers  and artists. But not all medias are good. Over a vast amount of time young children have been influenced by medias such as:books,movies,music,etc...Its perfectly normal for many adults who have children to discriminate against certain media .But thats not all @CAPS1 are more cases than just children that are suffering theres also religon, race, gender, sexuality, and social groups.          @CAPS1 should be a certain rules and certains laws that are against such wrong doings.But everyone is entiltled to @CAPS1 opinion.Hundreds of people are discreminated because of what they here and see in the medias.A life changing expierience for me was the movie The @CAPS2 @CAPS3. This could be considered offensive to lots of peolpe such as those of the african american decent or any other race that has suffered similar abuse.          This is just a few issues with freedom of speech ,but @CAPS1 will always be disagreements and differennt views of oppinion.But I for one believe that theres just certain stuff that shoukdnt be allowed to be put out in to public media",3,3,,3,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4302,2,"The offensive things found in a library. In many libraries now a days there are all kinds of vilent and bad books talking about vilenst. Should libraries take these books, movies, or music off the shelfes find out.     The library should not have to take these tipes of things out of the library. If they have bad related books they should just make a different section in the library for them. For rated @CAPS1 movies they can have them in the library. You have to be over @NUM1 years of age. For music if it has an @CAPS2 sticker you have to be over @NUM2 to rent it. If the parents dont like it then dont get it.     They should make different sections in the library for the offensive books that they have. Kids under a surtain age should not be allowed to read the books. If they still want the book they have to get parents permissition to rent it.      Rated @CAPS1 movies they should be allowed in the library. You just have to be over @NUM1 to go in that area and with an adult. If you want to rent a movie you need to have parents permissition. You also have to watch this movie with an adult.     Music if it has an @CAPS2 sticker you have to be over @NUM2 to rent it. You can still rent it if your parents say its ok. They should make the @CAPS5 behind the counter. So that little kids can not see the front of the cases. If the parents dont like the libraries rules then dont rent anything from the library.     So dont take off the offensive books, movie, or @CAPS5. If you were head of the library what would you do. Take out the offensive things, or just put them in different sections",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4264,2,i fell that this test is stupid i hate reading and writing. i think that you all should only make sure that we can read on level and write on level bc alot of kids arn't even going to really try on this test till like their @NUM1 or @NUM2 grade year and also alot of teachers dont even teach this material till the end of the year           so i think that some of the stuff that u all test on should be changed like the stuff you test on and how long the test is and should be more focest on reading and writing levels     however i do agree that the test should still be here because it helps felter people who passed the class by cheating and who passed it by hard work     i think there should be an alternative test that is taken on paper to because some kids test better on paper then on a computer     this is the way i feel about the test. i know i was supose to write about offensive material but i couldnt think how i felt about it and this is the stuff that was on my mid so i thought i would enform u think you very much,2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7378,3,"The cyclist was exhausted as he was going up hill. The setting of story affects the cyclist alot. This is because in California it is really good to be cycling. The weather is warm and perfect for a town. It had one ramshackle shed, several rusty pumps and a coral that could not hold in the lamest mule greeted him.Besides that, after riding twenty miles ahead, there was a terrain changing. Flat road was replaced by short rolling hills. After he crested the first few of these, a large highway sign jumped out at him. The rough road was the time where he had to be really careful and not to exceed the speed limit.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1041,1,"I think that people shouldnt use the computer's that much because it make's you want to be on it and on it day. Like yea you can play games on it and talk to people like other people you use of lec see I can understand that but the other people around you like that live's with you people that on the computer all day can spend time with there family and friends and to other places then going to look at them on the computer's I mean like to see other people that you see on the computer like chat or like webcam on the computer, you can maybe go see in a other state and go visited them. then being on the computer people that always on the computer should get out because there never going to do things is they are always on the computer, like when @CAPS1 on the computer @CAPS1 on it for a hour are so the I do things with family and friends, but not all the time that @CAPS1 on it, like i understand if you work on the computer at work and then finishing things at home for your work, but once in a you get to spend some time with family and friends, not @CAPS4 be on it all the time. Some people @CAPS4 come home and @CAPS4 go on the computer and that how people get lazy the start getting fat because they @CAPS4 go on the it and maybe stop to eat and back on the computer, then when they get off of it they will eb all tierd and stuff not feeling like going anywere @CAPS4 to sleep or like if they had sometimes to do after they would be all lazy an not wanted to do anything at all, that why people should get out more and do thing withe there family and friends to have fun withe there like.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20813,8," As people have bonded over the years, those bonds have been streanthend by laughter, joy, and trust. All of these are imporntant but they all work together to build these bonds. For normal people to enjoy one another they must have fun and fun begins with laughter. Laughter comes from the brain and if two people think in the same thing as being funny, it brings them together with their similar intrests.  By telling a funny joke or being a person who always ends up with a smile on his or her face, brings people around more easily. Since I was young I've always been a real happy kid and one who is easy to be around. I believe I am like this because my parents have always told me, ""People that are happy are the ones people want to be."" @CAPS1 by being a seemingly happy person it has given me the friends I have. Although I have never really understood what it ment because it could mean many differant things.  When ever I'm with my friends, looking back on it now, we are always laughing or joking about something. We could be laughing about ourselfs, or we could be laughing at a random person on the street. We could be doing absloutley nothing and be laughing at something stupid, but still be having good times. It @MONTH1 be starting an argument that is funny to us. If someone starts saying stupid stuff, then one of us will jump on the chance to make him sound as stupid as possiable. Most of the time we wont get butt hurt about it, but alot of the time we will take it to far. With all the laughter we have shared before it keeps us friends. Stupidity and pain are probly the top two reasons why we laugh. Stupidity would be if some one says something that doesn't make sence or came in at the wrong time. I have never under stood why we laugh at pain, maybe it is because we are glad that it is not us in pain,although sometimes it is, but maybe it is because we know that they will get over it. When someone is hurt badly, and another person is laughing about it alot of the time I will see them get angry because they are being made fun of for their pain. They need to just realize that it is funny for people to get hurt and know that they laugh at it too. Laughter will always bring people to relationships. It show common intreasts and what people can tolerate from others. Laughter is the main component to bringing happiness into peoples life, with out happieness and laughter this world would be supper boring.",18,18,,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13552,5,"In the memoir from ""Home: Blueprints of our lives"" by Narciso Rodriguez, the author stretches the importance of family. The mood that Narciso Rodriguez creates is a comfortable, loving, homey feeling. He states that he grows up learning that ""family has nothing to do with being a blood relative"". He says that his family welcomed everybody. Strangers that needed help, neighbors, and extended family. He creates a loving mood when he said he lived in a ""close-knit community"". He also says ""These cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS1, when @PERSON2 says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home,"" you can sense his appreciation and feel the comforting atmosphere. Those were the moods I felt while reading this memoir by, Narciso Rodriguez.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3561,2,"Im writing to reflect my views on censorship in libraries.     I do not believe that certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. I don't believe they should be removed because everyone has their own personal opinion on what's acceptable or not. Just because one person doesn't like something or feel that it's offensive doesn't mean that everyone is going to feel that way. What one person might not like the next person might love. They only way that I feel a certain material should be removed from the shelf is that if there are many complaints about the same material. Then maybe the library should consider removing the item. Thats why they have ratings and different sections in the library so that a person can know what kind of book they're going to read or what kind of movie they're going to watch. It makes no sense to go get a book or movie about something that you don't like or that you think is offensive, its many things to choose from. How would someone feel if one of their favorite books or movies were being removed from the shelves of libraries because of another person didn't like it? They would be upset and disappointed about situation.     In conclusion, I disagree with the fact that certain materials should get removed off shelves if felt to be offense. I hope that you will understand my point of view and take consideration of my thoughts",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12505,5,"In the memoir, ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the author does a great job creating the mood. One example of how the author creates the mood is, when the author says ""my parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was the kitchen."" That creates a mood of happiness and love. That's because the author shows it by saying created our traditional Cuban home. Making the family feel back at home made them feel happy. Also the author makes the mood of the passage ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and love of cooking that is still with me today. The author creates the mood as happy and gratefulness. The author shows it by saying love of cooking. Also by saying which is still with me today and I am grateful. Also in this memoir the mood is shown by gratefulness by the line, I will always be grateful to my parents. Lastly, the author creates a mood bravery and caring. It says ""my mother and father had come to this country with such courage."" That line shows they were brave and willing to try something new, they cared for their child. That is how the mood is created by the author.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6543,3,"The cyclist in the essay, “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” is about a great adventure gone bad. He has every thing he needs but some how it turns out bad. He get low on water & the setting is horrible. He is on his way from a camp ground in @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1 to the Yosemite river. He gets bad directions from old guys at the camps ground. On his way he ran into two abandon towns & was running out of water then he came to a sign that said, “Rough Road Ahead: Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit.” He was pedeling over hills & becoming dehydrated when he tought he was going to die he came to a bait shop & got waiter & met an old guy who was going to give him direction & he decided he better stick to the map. Even though the setting got worse through the story & stuck it out & made it to the end.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4595,2,"I believe that they should leave leave them on the shelves. I think people take stuff like that to serious, if they dont like it I think they should just leave it alone.What some people might find offensive others will find interesting. There is alot of stuff out there that might be a little offensive to some people, but if they dont like it all they have to do is put it up and go on with there life like its no big deal.     In the past there has been some movies that make fun of people for the way they act or just something they did in the past. Stuff like that I can understand because that can be personal reasons. There has also been times when I have seen people make a big deal over nothing.Sometimes people say stuff and the person reading it can take it a whole different way.There is still alot of people taking books off the shelf because of someone complains about the language in it or maybe making fun of another race.     I think the worst thing today is magazines because they are always judging people about who they are with, what they did @TIME1, or even who has the best body and who has the worse body.I think people should just stop worrying about everybody else so much and just worry about theirself and we wouldnt have so many problems.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11965,5,"The mood created by the memoir is thankful and proud. In paragraph @NUM1 it shows that he is thankful. ""... still with me today (and for which I am eternally grateful.) It also shows that Narciso Rodriguez is proud to be Cuban.In paragraph @NUM2, it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" This also shows that Narciso is thankful for everything his parents did for him. Narciso also said that he often told them of his admiration for their strength and perseverance,In the last paragraph, it says that he will never forget how his parents turned this simple house into a home. This shows that he is thankful for his parents.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21346,8," A @CAPS1 time ago when I was about @NUM1 years old. I had moved to @LOCATION1, after @NUM2 weeks went by @CAPS2 parents started going to church, while we was at church I meet some other kid who was about @CAPS2 age. I didn't know but I saw in his hand. @CAPS6 hasa deck of card. I noticed it right away that @CAPS6 liked to play yu-gi-oh which is a card game, which is very fun to play when I was @NUM1..., I wanted to ask him if @CAPS6 wanted to play the card game yu-gi-oh but I was too nervous to ask him, after church ended and @CAPS2 parents and I went home the day passed by. The next morning I had to get ready for @CAPS2 first day in school in @LOCATION1, it was kinda hard since I am going to be in that new school with no friends but once I got their I notice something right away i saw that same kid from yesterday I was kinda surprise since @CAPS6'd go to the same church as me. After @CAPS2 teacher told me to sit down I took a seat, @CAPS2 teacher begin roll call saying each students in are class name, each students replied and said ""here!"" when it came to that other kids turn his name was @PERSON1,once class started it went by kinda fast when you are busy doing class work so once lunch started I went to have lunch and surprisingly a lot of students in @CAPS2 class are nice to me they asked if I wanted to be their friends. I was happy since they asked but that one kid @PERSON1 didn't ask. So I thought @CAPS6 was mad at me later on after school before I gotten on the bus to go home I saw that @PERSON1 kid again so I ran to him and asked if @CAPS6 liked playing yu-gi-oh? @CAPS6 ""replied yea what bout you?"" I ""told em yea we should play yu-gi-oh sometimes"" @CAPS6 said we could play this @DATE1 at church. I told em @CAPS3. later on that day I told @CAPS2 older brother @CAPS4, I made some friends at are school, and this @DATE1 I'm going to play yu-gi-oh card with one of them named @PERSON1 who goes to are church, @CAPS2 brother @CAPS4 told me oh... @PERSON1 goes to are school? I said yea and @CAPS6 said I played yu-gi-oh card game with him last time at church. I was shock since @CAPS2 older brother knew @CAPS6 was and i didn't that time. I asked him why @CAPS6 didn't tell me @CAPS6 knew someone that play yu-gi-oh card, @CAPS6 said "" cause you didn't ask"" I was like... Oh..... Me and @CAPS2 brother started to laugh cause i didn't know @PERSON1 was @CAPS2 older brother friend and @CAPS6 laughed at me cause I never asked him if @CAPS6 knew anyone that played yu-gi-oh card game.",15,16,,31,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3606,2,"Curse words, alcohol, drugs, pornigraphic pictures. These are all things you would not like your children to use, see, or do. They are out in the world and and there is nothing that you can do to stop it. People do drugs and drink everyday, but just because someone sees you doing it doesnt mean they will too.     People should not be shielded from the real aspects of life. When shielded as a child they would not know what do to if the chances came to them to do drugs or drink. They @MONTH1 not even know what the right or wrong thing to do is. Kids to a certain age deserve to know whats going to happen in the real world when they grow up and start a life. It won't happen to everyone but they need to know these things.     It is important for parents to let their children know what is right or what is wrong. As an adolesent, they are very vulnerable to all the bad stuff that life can bring. Seeing these things in books, movies, magazines and etc. will effect their life in some way. It is their job to show them the right path.     A thing that helps these parents are restrictions on the stuff that you are able to get your hands on. On movies there are age restrictions that inable people at a certian age to be able to watch and people that are within those guidelines to have access. With other materials like books, music, and magazines, there is no way to deny access to people to see or read them. Parents just need to be observent to their children and see what they do.      Censorship is normally a bad thing, but in others it could help. For people that are more vulnerable to those situations or seeing those things, it could greatly help with some people and show them that it is not right. As much as people should be open and be able have access to this information, it is also important that other people did not see it. It is still an open debate, but, in opinion, censorship should not be done. Everyone had their own right to get and see the things they want",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6612,3,The features of the setting affect the cyclist in several ways. The features of the setting affect the cyclist through the posted speed. Due to how the setting is the cyclist have a rough hill with wish.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4371,2,"Many people have different views on different types of things. There is not much that can be helped with that. No one can never make everybody happy. That is a major part of life. I do not think they should remove materials from libraries just because some people find them offensive. You cannot make everyone happy, some people enjoy those materials, and everyone is entitiled to their own opinion.     The first reason they should not remove offensive materials from the library is because you will not make everybody happy by doing that. Just because some people take offense to certain things, does not mean that everyone does. If they do not like it, they do not have to read it or listen to it. They have libraries so you can pick out books (and other materials) that you like. You have a choice there. There are lots of books that are at libraries around the world. People are going to be mad whether they are there or not. Have you ever heard the saying '@CAPS1't judge a book by its cover?' @CAPS2, well that could also be a reason people want materials removed. They might see a 'suggestive' cover or something, and they might take total offense to that. Just because a cover of a book might make people take offense to it doesn't mean they should remove it.      The second reason offensive materials should not be removed is because it is enjoyable for some people. There is a reason it is in the library, and that reason is because some people enjoy it. If there was a book or magazine that never got checked out, do you think they would keep it? Nope. I am pretty sure if it never got checked out, they would get rid of it. Obviously someone has to read, listen, or watch it. People get offended by things everyday. Removing 'offensive' materials from libraries will not be much help to the problem. It @MONTH1 help a little, but there are still going to be people who get offended so easily.      The third reason they should keep materials is because everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Just because some people think that there are offensive materials in the library does not mean other people do. For some people, taking away things like that would be like making kids at school wear uniforms. It takes away freedom. We are living in @LOCATION1. @LOCATION1 is supposed to be a free country. It is really not a free country when you have people taking away books and movies because they are offensive to people. I got news for you. If you @CAPS1't like it, @CAPS1't read it. There is no harm at all by keeping materials on shelves.      No matter what, someone is always going to take offense to something. The world is not perfect, and it is never going to be perfect. Taking materials off the shelves because it is offensive to some people isn't going to make the world a better place. People are going to be mad or angry no matter what happens",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13360,5,"I think the mood that the author created was a happy mood and a mood that makes you appreciate what you have. And to always remember where you came from, and to always love family. At some points in the memoir the mood become more about @CAPS1, for example in ""paragraph @NUM1"" he tells how his neighborhood growing up was made up of many races including Spanish, Cuban, and Italian, and he tells how they all came together in solidarity and friendship. He also says how his family was always helping each other.In conclusion, I believe the main mood in this memoir would be @CAPS1 and coming together wether it be as a family, or as people.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19488,7,A time when I patient was during last @DATE1. My friends and I were waiting in line to get an autograph of the detrnit tigers @NUM1 baseman @CAPS1 @CAPS2. It was going to be exiting to meet the players???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????then left. This was a day when I was patient.,8,11,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10454,4,"The author Concludes the story with that sentence, because She is excited for spring to come back So she can plant more things and watch them bloom, and come alive.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7023,3,In the poem “Do not exceed speed limit” the setting is described as very rough and dry. The man on the bike says he was running low on water. At one point he says “At some point tumbleweeds crossed my path and a ridi culously large shake” This makes the setting sound dry and empty with a harmful snake around. this  man also said about a sign which read “Rough road ahead: Do not exceed posted speed limit” this also made it hard for the man to ride. These are the settings that affected the biker in the story.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7271,3,"In the short story “Do not exceed posted speed limit” the settings of the story affect the cyclist. They make him think he will die and overall make him worried. In the story the cyclist takes two old men’s advice on the best way to get to Yosemite mountin and gets himself in the middle of nowhere. He finds himself in the California desert without water, he lets this go to his head. “I was going to die and the birds would pick me clean.” That line was from the last page of the story. The biker was taking an unfamiliar route and he let himself believe he would die. He knew he was in the desert without water the setting makes him nervous because he was in a desert. He wouldn’t have been nearly as nervous if he was in a forest where there are streams. He lets the desert and the heat convince that he is going to die. By coming across ghost towns he believes he will never see anothe person again, he gets oledrar because of where he is. He thinks the heat will kill him. The setting affects him and tricks him into believing he is going to die.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15677,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. They consulted with experts, taking tours equipment and mooring operations in New Jersey.The architects couldn't just drop the mooring mast on top of the building, if it did it would add stress to the building's frame. The Stress of the load and would have been transmitted all the way to the building's foundation. The steel frame would have to be modified and strengthened.The greatest obstacle  was nature. The winds on top of the building were constantly Shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would around and around the mooring mast. You could weigh it down but that would be dangling high above pedestrians on the Street, which was neither practical or safe.There was also a law against airships flying too low over urban areas. And When they tried delivering newspapers they noticed it wasn't going to work",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6524,3,"The features of the setting greatly impacted the cyclist. First the setting at the middle of the story was empty and no place to get water. This filled the cyclist with doubt and despair, he/she thought they would die. The setting also made the cyclist thirsty because of the extreme heat. Finally the cyclist was filled with regret because they regretted listening to the old men because the cyclist didn’t make it where he/she wanted to go.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3729,2,"Dear Newspaper;     In libraries I do not feel it is neccasry to take stuff away that poeple could find offensive, because honestly if it offends you than don't look at it. You are your own person and can make your own decisions, if this so called offensive material is not veiwed offensive by someone. Then why should that person be  punished by someone who has to make a big deal out of something. Just because you don't like it doesn't mean I don't like it.          If someone finds a book offensive then don't read it, if there is a magazine that you find offensive, don't read it. It is as simple as that, people are wise enough to know what is good and what is bad for them. There is no reason why someone can't choose what they want to get, where they want it. From observations of my own I have seen numerous times when someone has found someones music offensive, but they don't say anything. They just ignore it, the world needs more people like that. More people who will stand up for what they believe in and won't judge others for what they belief in.     It seems as if the world is becoming filled with a bunch of people who care way to much about what other people are doing. That is not a bad thing nessaccarily but everyone will be offended by something but it is your choice to whether or not let it bug you for the rest of your life. Listen to what ever music, read what ever books or magazines that you want. If someone finds them offensive, so be it. You are your own person and that won't ever change. Do what makes you happy and nothing else.",3,2,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4352,2,"There are many books out there that parents would not want there children reading. Some books have violence and crimes, others have love and romance. But it is not the best idea to use censorship in libraries. There are many books out there that might not be good for children to read, but it might help them make better choices in real life. Also, we can not forget about freedom of the press.     With freedom of the press anyone can write about anything they want. They can write about the good, the bad, violence, crimes, love, and romance. Everyone has there own way of writing and there own imagination. Without imagination what fiction would there be for children to read. There would be nothing to write about without imagination. With censorship, there would not be any books on the library shelves for children to read.     If the libraries were to censor the books on the shelves there would not be any books to read because every book has something to censor. Wethear it is swearing, guns, killing, romance, or love. There is something in every book that in innapproperate for children to read. If the libraries were to censor the books on the shelves there would nothing left to read, and the intelligence of children would drop dramatically.     Children read for many reasons, like to expand there minds and to enter a world where the book takes place. But what children might not know is that reading also strengthens there vocabulary. When children read they learn many new words that are in that book. While they are reading the book opens there mind to much more then what they are used to and normally around everyday. When they are reading the children expand the minds and also helps them with everyday situations. This is why I do not believe that censorship in libraries is not a great idea.     If libraries censorship books and everything else on the shelves there would be nothing left for children at the libraries. They would be stuck reading books where they do not learn anything. They would read the same books over and over, they wouldnt learn anything new. There wouldnt be anything the could expand there minds with. That is something we certinly do not want for our community or anywhere for that matter",4,4,,4,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9146,4,"In the story “Winter Hibiscus” it has an unusual ending. There are many reason why the author decided to end the story this way. First, the girl failed the test which made her go into silien, when he agreed to take the test over it is a sigh of the will to suvive, and it shows that she is trying at he goal until she got it. Finnaly the ending could represent a new beging like when the snow melts away and changes winter into spring. This is what the ending of “Winter Hibiscus” means and this is why the author concluded it this way.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15189,6,"In the article, The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION1 was determined to make the Empire State Building the tallest building. To make the Empire State Building taller than the Chrysler building, Smith decided to create a ""mooring mast"" where dirigibles could land and become ""transportation of the future."" However, the dirigibles never landed, because there were many obstacles in landing a dirigible on the Empire State Building. Many Dirigibles that are from outside the United States use hydrogen rather than helium. Hydrogen is highly flammable, and because the Empire State Building is in New York City, it would be hazardous for a hydrogen filled dirigible to land, in a densely populated area, like New York City. Another obstacle faced is the weather at the top of the Empire State Building. The winds are much stronger than down the streets. If the dirigible were able to land, the winds would be blowing the dirigible all around and out of control. Finally, it is illegal to have a airships flying too low to the ground and near people. By having a dirigible land on the mast, it would break the law. There were too many obstacles for Al Smith's idea to become reality.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
388,1,"Almost everyone is effected by computers in some sort of way. Some people think computers are bad because some people spend too much time on their computers. The thing is computers help us with our everyday life. If we want to comunicate with people from around the world to send donations to places in need like @LOCATION1 or @CAPS1, we can use computers to do that. We can chang people's lifes in third world countries with the help of computers. Computers can also help us in school. When a student has to write a report and he has bad handwriting he can just type it up and print it. Or if a student has to do research for an essay she can find the information easily on the computer. Maybe a kid forgot his homework, he can go to his school website and find it. My last point would be that computers are a huge help for buisnesses. When files are lost or misplaced, the worker(s) can use the computer and bring up the back-up file. When they need to order supplies, most times they will go to a web site and order online. Or when updates are posted about up coming events in that company, an e-mail is sent out and is found using a computer. Many people think that people overuse their computers, but that the users fault not ours. We should choose how long were using one computers. Many jobs would be impossible with out computers. It's not about overusing them its about. So over all I say computers are good and very useful when used in the right hands.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15465,6,"The main obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there stemmed from the bad location. The dirigibles would be docking 1,250 feet above one of the busiest cities in the world. This would create three problems for the docking of the dirigibles. The first problem is hydrogen is what was used in dirigibles and it is extremely flammable. If a dirigible were to explode above downtown New York many people would be killed. This means not many people are going to want the dirigibles docking there. If the Empire State Building had not been above such a densely populated area they may have not had this problem. The next difficulty would be the fact that at that altitude in New York City there are violent wind currents that are always changing. This makes it hard for the conductors to dock the dirigible and it also could possibly cause the dirigible to hit something and pop. So again the dirigible is falling into downtown New York and killing many people. This is another reason it was a bad location. It needed to be in a place where there were more stable wind currents. The final obstacle was there was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas. This meant that even if the other to factor disappear there was a law the builders should have known about that forbade their plans. Like the author said the Empire State Building was destined to never fulfill its purpose.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1527,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, @CAPS4 many people think comptuers are bad there are many reasons as to why they are good. Computers are very environmental friendly and so are @PERCENT1 @DATE1 people today. They also allow us to type assignments and other important papers. People also don't know that they are not the worst @ORGANIZATION1 on the market today. Computers @MONTH1 take away time from people that they should be spending on excersice, but computers arent the only thing that do that more people spend time watching @CAPS5 then they do on any other activity, @PERSON2 head @DATE1 @ORGANIZATION1 conducted a survey in @DATE1. His survey showed that out @DATE1 the @NUM1 people questioned @PERCENT2 spent @NUM2 hours a day watching @CAPS5, @PERCENT3 spent @NUM3 hours on the computer, @PERCENT4 spent @NUM4 hours reading and @PERCENT5 spent @NUM4 hours excersising. So clearly computers are not our biggest problem. Many people today are ""@CAPS7"" or ""@CAPS8-environment"". So instead @DATE1 buying newspapers or magazines most people go online to research current events. @PERSON1, @CAPS9 @DATE1 the @ORGANIZATION2. Says if we use comptuers instead @DATE1 newspapers @PERCENT6 @DATE1 the trees we cut down each year will be save. So obviously computers are environment friendly. Todays youth is messier than it ever was. @CAPS10 are having a hard time grading papers and tests because @DATE1 kids hand writting. So instead @DATE1 handwritting papers, kids make it easier on @CAPS10 by typing their work. Rescent studies show that @PERCENT7 @DATE1 @CAPS10 find it easier + better for kids to type papers. This shows kids are better off typing papers, and assignments. I hope you now understand my position on computers. The help us in many other ways too. In conclusion, they are not as time-consuming as every one @MONTH1 think. They also help us with research, are enviromental-friendly, and help the youth @DATE1 our world become neater one click at a time.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7337,3,"The terrain the cyclist faces don’t help very mach considering he is almost out of water, he came across hills that ticed himout a lot & made him even more thirsty. Also, when we came across the juice factory he used a lot of energy to get there because he was excited and that made him even more thirsty. Therefore if he didn’t have any energy left after all of that he wouldn’t have been able to get to the baits shop.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4513,2,"In our great country we have many freedoms, one of these is the freedom to read, hear, and see what we want. We all have different views that go with this freedom such as what we watch on televison, what we read in our spare time, and what music we like to listen to. However, if we had the right to remove things we do not like we will ruin the enjoyment for others. This would eventually remove our freedom. Many authors, musicians, and directors have stated that this freedom is important for having an enjoyable and creative life.     We as individuals have different views on many things. Luckily our freedoms allow us to have these views without intefering with the views or ideas of others. If we removed the books, movies, magazines, etc., there would not be anything for anyone. Our libraries would be emptied, the classrooms would not have books, and the stores would not have anything. We should not have the right to remove what we think is innapropriate or does not follow our values or interests.     Even though the right of removing things sounds like a good idea, we should consider the thoughts and ideas of others. Consider a public library, it has books for children, teens and adults with individual preferences, and a school library with books for children and teens with their own preferences on what they like to read. If we allow this right then these libraries which allow individuality would not be able to exist. People would be unable to live up to their freedoms of individualty. Everyone should be allowed to be themselves.     Imagine what it would be like if we expanded this right to the foods that we buy. We all have different tastes of food that appal and satisfy us. The foods that we choose are a lot like the books we read, there are kinds we favor and others that we would just try to avoid. No one would have any food to eat at a restaurant, at school, or any where else not even at home. It would turn out to be a disaster.     We should not have this right because it would not be fair to any one. Our views @MONTH1 be different but we have similar needs. The freedom we have is a freedom of choice. If we do not find a certain book, movie, or magazine to be appropriate we should choose to allow others to have the chance to pick it up and see if it fits their values and interests. Other people will  allow this chance too. After all, aren't individuality and choice what made the freedoms we have @DATE1",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15975,6,"Although the builders of the Empire State Building managed some of the obstacles with allowing dirigibles to dock there, many of the issues were left unsolved. When designing the mast to accommodate the blimp, the architects realized the pressure this would put on the building's frame. In order to support the weight of the dirigible they needed to make ""over sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications"" (paragraph @NUM1) to the structure of the building. Also, the builders had to develop a way to tether the dirigible to the building to allow passengers and supplies to unboard. Therefore, the architects designed a ""rocket-shaped mast... of shiny aluminum... which also housed elevators and stairs"" (paragraph @NUM2). However, the builders forgot to incorporate the winds at the top of the building. Once the front of the dirigible was docked, the back of the blimp would swivel around irradically. Furthermore, the builders disregarded existing laws that banned dirigibles from flying low over cities, as it states in paragraph @NUM3. This precaution was due to the safety hazard that these dirigibles posed since they were highly flammable from the hydrogen used. These imposing obstacles made the use of the Empire State Building is a dock unrealistic.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8888,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus”, the author ends with the last specified paragraph, “When they came back…then I will take that test again.” because it leaves many un-answered questions the reader might have. The reader then might want to read her next piece of work. Basically, the last paragraph drows attention to the reader. many of the unanswered questions revolve around, “I failed the test.”. We also do not know “her gentle grandmother”, “mrs.Lambert”, and “home”. Another reason the author might end the story with that paragraph is to have a effect on the reader. The reader is left to only assume and imagine what things are to come. Will she pass the test? Will she go home? What will happen? All we know is, ”when the snow melts, and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take the test again.” most likely the author ended the story with the paragraph for dramatic effect for the reader. This is why, I believe the author of “Winter Hibiscus” ended with the specified paragraph.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11911,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, the mood created Is happy and loving. In the memoir it says, ""In our neighborhood despite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship."" @CAPS1 of people were very close to his family and @CAPS2 found out you don't have to be blood relatives to be family. Also it says, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS2 is happy his parents moved to @LOCATION1 and is grateful of the sacrifices they had to make do do it. ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. @CAPS2 went from Just living there to it being his home. @CAPS2 appieriates all his parents have done to make his life better.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13324,5,"In the memoir, @PERSON1, from Home: The blueprints of our lives, there was a very solidary mood. The @PERSON1 family was so happy to be in @LOCATION1 and be free, and no longer in Cuba. It was a very loved environment with friends and family always coming to their table. They were a very caring family. They always had the arms and door wide open to other refugees until They got back on their feet. They were a happy, loving, and caring @CAPS1 family.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
644,1,"Dear @CAPS1, I believe that computers can be a very good thing to implement in society. First of all, if people never used computers they would miss out on an immense opportunity to learn about the world around them. Also, with computers, people can communicate with people from across the world. If people use computers more often they'll probably develop the skills to pursue job opportunities on a much wider market. Because of this computers can greatly help any community. Computers can give many chances for exploring education. People can pursue a large amount of information with a relatively small space as opposed to using a large area of books. People can find alsmot anything they want to know about on the internet relatively easily. If not for solely learning but for reference. If someone is making a project at a school. Computers can expand on many peoples opportunities for education. Secondly, the internet can be used as a widespread communication tool. Any document or piece of information can be transmitted from say, @LOCATION2 to @LOCATION1 @CAPS2.C in a matter of seconds. Simialarly if two people are seperated by a large distance, they can easily communicate since the invention of social networking, people that @MONTH1 have lost touch can easily meet again and discuss things. With computers communication is becoming faster and faster. Finally, because of an over-expanding job market, use of computers is becoming a common requirement of many professions. Most jobs that pertain to engineering require use of different programs for modeling and drafting. Also now most governments are networked with files on computers. Also, most any job that has to do with any sort of business has a requirement for the person needed to be able to type quickly. Because many jobs require experience with computers they shouls be a part of any community. In conclusion experience with computers can benefit any one person and entire society all together.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
381,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, more and more people are getting hooked on computers. I am here to say that computers are not the best way to benefit our society. First off, most @CAPS1 are spending less time with friends/family and more time looking through a screen. Also, it would be so much better for our bodies and minds to go out and enjoy nature instead. Lastly, you can get addicted to the computer. So here are my reasons why computers do not benifit our society. My first reason includes friends and family. more and more people are neglecting to spend time with their loved ones to get to the next level on '@CAPS2 wars.' @CAPS3 this really how we want our future generations growing up, looking blankly at computer screens? I know I don't want that. I lknow this from personal experience. When I was young, I visited my cousin @PERSON1. All I would get to see of him was a quick '@CAPS4', but then held escape to his room to continue clicking angry on the computer. The point @CAPS3 you can't replace family and friends with a computer screen. It's not right. My next argument against computers @CAPS3 about our bodies and minds. The best way to take care of those things @CAPS3 nature. Unfortunately most @CAPS1 aren't getting outside for a wack of exercise due to computers. In fact almost @NUM1 @CAPS1 say they spend more time on the computer than anywhere else. This @CAPS3 not a good way to spend time. We need to solve this issue before more @CAPS1 make the switch from nature to computers. Fresh air, trees and birds are much better than a screen, a couple clicks, and the hum of a machine. My third and final reason @CAPS3 about addiction. So many people are getting adicted to the things they are finding on their computers. Addiction @CAPS3 a very sericuse matter that we need to fix. All of this @CAPS3 pointing to lazyness too from lack of intrest to anything else. I know this from personal experience. When my brother first got his computer he literally locked himself in his room for days. All he did for almost a week was socialize and beat his personal best score on a game. This @CAPS3 not the way to be treating a device. So, as I know you can all see computers don't have a positive impact on our society. First of all computer @CAPS3 over ruling family and friends. Also, nature @CAPS3 becoming less and less of a priority with the computer in mind. Lastly it's becoming a worldwide addiction. Thank you for deeply considering all the arguments that I have to offer. I know it majorly helps people keep in touch globaly, but there are other ways to do it, such as mail.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18054,7,"Today I am talking about patents. Patents mean’s to take something easy or to handle something with comaness. Like for example I went to an @CAPS1 machean and I wanted to get money, @CAPS2 I put the card and the pen, then I wanted @NUM1 dolors @CAPS2 @CAPS3 gave me only the receipt @CAPS4 cash @CAPS4 cards @CAPS2 I dident brack @CAPS3 I just called the company and I got the mony and the card. New this is the main story I vent to the mall to get a shoe @CAPS3 vas one hundred and ten @CAPS3 was on sale one hundred dollors, @CAPS2 I wanted to buyit the casher man sad “one hundred and ten dollars please” @CAPS2 I told “him @CAPS3 was on sale, he sad “get out of my store @CAPS2 I told him I came to buy a shoe. @CAPS2 I returnd @CAPS3 and vent out. Theats atime when I was patient.",8,4,,12,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18520,7,"@CAPS1's cold @CAPS1's raining, I'm wet @CAPS1's been @NUM1 hour and still no activity. All I have to do is wait. I'm hunting deer hitting with my new @CAPS2 @CAPS3 bow. I'm a decent shot but not that good. I know patients is the key to deer hunting so I will just have to wait. I now see a deer about @NUM2 yard away and shoot @CAPS1 so my patience pays off",9,10,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1372,1,"Dear @CAPS1 Local newspaper, I heard that you were concerd about people and how they use the computer to much. I think that computers are a good thing to have because many people use computers for school, work ect. I think that computers are good use, many people use it for research and resources. It is easier to use them, when you are going on vaction because you can check out how much hotels are, where resteraunts are, and what interesting places are there, instead of calling/driving around. Computers are good for school because I think books are harder/longer to use than computers. Also for questions you can go to one of the websites an you ask the question and many other people might answer the question your looking for. There also useful for work most people use computers for work. They can put there taxes/documents on there computers. Computers can be used just for fun too. There are chat; facebook games. I think that computers are useful for many things, but I also think that some people spend too much time on them too. Computers are great, but you should also use other things too like maps, book, ect. Many can spend @NUM1 hours on the computer facebooking and gaming. I think that it's important for people to go outside and hang out with friends. Alot of people spend there time on the computer during @DATE1 because its cold and sometimes snowing. I don't think that they should spend there whole time on the computer though because you dont just want to depend on electrictronics everytime. I think that computers should be used not alot in the @DATE2 because I think hanging out with friends and family are important and also the weather nice. I think that computers can be very useful with directions, work, school work but you shouldn't spend alot of time on them. Electronics arent everything in life. Thank you for taking your time reading this and I hope you do agree with me.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16341,6,"Although the mooring mast due to hoist at the top of the Empire State Building was a well thought out plan, it provided some obstacles for builders. The biggest problem was safety. Most dirigibles used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is a highly flammable product. If an accident, such as fire, occurred at the Empire State mooring mast it wouldn't be safe to take place around millions of people such as New York City. Another factor affecting building was nature. The winds above were constantly shifting due to currents. The only way to tie down the dirigibles would be to use weights, but that would also be extremely unsafe to be hanging above a city of people. The last issue was an existing law that prevented airships from flying to low in urban areas. This law makes it illegal for ships to even attempt to tie to the building, therefore it made it nearly impossible for builders to work.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10432,4, The author concludes the story with this paragraphto show that saeng is determined. She says that she is going to take the test again which shows that she is determined. Even though saeng failed her driverd test she is not going to give up.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4207,2,"Banned books.'All of us can think of a book that we hope none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf - that work that I abhor- then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.'                                                         Katherine Paterson                                                          Author     I believe and will stand by katherine's statement above. Who @CAPS5 to say if a book @CAPS5 offinsive? People have a right to their oppinion, but i do not think any one has the right to take books away from a @CAPS1 library.      @CAPS1 library, the facts are in the name. It @CAPS5 a @CAPS1 library, where people can go and find a book to pass time, a book to use on an @CAPS2 assignment, or a book to read to their child. Taking a book off the shelves just because it offendid someone does not makes sense to me. A person can pick up a book, be offended and complian about it, that @CAPS5 freedom of speech. I do not see fault in that. But when a person picks up a book, @CAPS5 offendid,and demand that the book per se @CAPS5 taken off the shelves of a @CAPS1 library. That @CAPS5 when i have issues seeing where they think they have the right.     Katherine Paterson said in her text that 'If i have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work i abhor- then you aslo have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelve for any of us.' @CAPS3't that a scary thought? If a person was offended by a book they could take it off the shelve at his or her own will? I fear the out come of that. I am sure that a person could figure out something offensive about any book.      Taking books off the shelve @CAPS5 taking knowledge away from the people. We as @CAPS4 have the right to read at our pleasure, any book that we have the slighest whim to read, and be able to read that book with out prosecution from a people that find the book in question 'offensive.'     The day we let people take books off the shelves because they offend them, @CAPS5 the day our first admendment fails. As a nation we need to stand stron againts banning books from @CAPS1 libraries. For our generation and for the many generations to follow.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17938,7,"Patience is important in life. Something when you don’t have patience things tend to go wrong and that’s not always a good thing so here are somethings when you do not have patience. If you don’t have patience you can get into trouble. For example if you were in a long line for something and you couldn’t talk because if you did talk you would get in trouble. So if you didn’t have any patience you would probably say @CAPS1 my gosh this is taking forever. Then you would get in trouble for talking. Here is another reason why you should have patience. You should have patience for an example if you didn’t you would need patience if you were sick and you went to the doctors office and there was a really long line you would probably say for get it and then go home. So if you went home you would get even more sick and that would get even more sick and that would be bad. Finally, another reason on if you didn’t have patience. For example say you wanted to go the mall and bye a new pair of shoes. You went into the store and you found a pair that you liked and they fit just right. But when you went to go check out the cash regaster didn’t work so they had to call maitnence, to come and fix it and they told you that it would be an hour. So you sat and waited for twenty minutes but you did not have any patience so you said for get it and you left and didn’t get the shoes. Those were some people who didn’t have patience. But if they did that wouldn’t of happened to them because they would of waited or needed. Having patience is a good thing but not having it is not.",5,4,,9,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18563,7,"This year mom maryed my new step dad. I guess he wanted ous to “bond so we took up trap shooting. It pretty much the same thing as skeet shoot, well actually is the same. Anyway he used to be a cop and had a shotgun so we went out and tried it. It didn’t work out. I missed every single bird I clay targets jet actped one. I only got one bb through the thing. But I was cool with it I new I was bad because it was the first time. So we tried the hit the thing died center. I feelt shown up. We left that day with only ten hits and a uncountable amout of missis. I was feteling pretty low. Within the next week we tried again. He lanched the bird and it almost like in slow motion I whated it ark. I followed it with the ball at the end of the gun an pulled the triserand I watched the bird explode. Haha, I fanily did it? We lanched another and I hit it I went @NUM1 in arrow! Amazing for someone who missed all about a few be for And that’s how I was patient.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9148,4,The author ended the story with that paragraph because he was trying to tell us that hibiscus represents a comfort in a time of disappointment for Saeng. She saw the plant when she just fell her driving test. ,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10597,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph for several reasons. First, when the hibiscus buds in the spring that means that the plant is about to bloom. That also means that Saeng will be ready in the spring to take the test again. Also the last paragraph is at the end because if the plant can make it, then the girl can pass her drivers test and be happy both ways.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
728,1,"Dear local newspaper did you know that the average person spends @NUM1 hours and @NUM2 minutes a day on the computer? This is why I think that people are spending ton much time on computers. If people spent less time on computers they would exersice more, be outdoors more and spend more time with their family and freind. If people were to spend less time out computers than they would exersize more. With the growingproblem of obesity in @ORGANIZATION2 less time on computers would help this. Tests show that the less time spent on computers the more time spent exersizing. And with @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 obese this world help that problem alot. I once had a freind who would allways be outside exersie and playing. Then he got a @CAPS1 acount and he started to be home on the computer all day and would never be exersizing. Less time on computers would also time outdoors. Result from a I took at my school say tahat @PERCENT2 people would go outside if they couldn't use their computer. And it more people are outside will notice how nature is and @PERSON1 says that use of the electricity in a house. So if everyone of it have a effect on if to turn off their computers they would spent more time with friend and family. that there are to freinds and family on programs like @CAPS2, @CAPS1 and it is talking face to. And you could also do like to the and you see people. use @ORGANIZATION1 but you would need and it. I would be alot easyer and less it you would get of the computer and talk to them face to face. This is why I think that people are spending to much time on their computer and it is having a effect on their life. If they were off the computer they would spend more time exersizing, more time helping the environment and more time socializing with their family and friends. So please @LOCATION1 stop using the computer all the time.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3753,2,"In libraries there are a bunch of books, music, movies, magazines, and etc. to let the general public check out. This topic about censorship in libraries is a diffitcult one because everyone has different views on things in life. Certain materials in libraries should not be remove from the shevles if they are found offensive by someone.           Being in a library there are lots of choices to see and check out. In a library, someone comes arcoss a book or a movie that seems offensive to them. That someone should just look at the other way because a library is for the general public. It seems to be harse about this, but it is not up to that person if the material in the library should or should not be in that library. The materials that are offensive to people could be in a special place in the library to comitdate everyone.      Libraries have the right to censor any type of material that seems or is offensive to the community. This is right if the community strongly agrees with their local libraries. If the whole community disagree with a library about a certain material then the community have a say in it.      Yes, there are books out in libraries that are offensive to a group of people, but that does not mean take that material out of the library. Our country, @LOCATION1, say that everyone has the right to free speech. @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1 has banned books thats are offensive to @CAPS1, but other countries around the @LOCATION2 might have those books in their libraries.      There is a thick line if a certain type of material in a library is offensive or not. Someone should not have the right if a  book seems offensive to that person, but if the whole community says that the book is offensive then yes.      The libraries and the community have choices to not have a offensive book on the self. If it is offensive to everyone then it should be off the shelf. Censorship is a diffitcult topic to agured on",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10471,4,The author is very creative. He concludes the story saying how the hibiscus is building and that she will take the test agian. She believes that she will do better when the snow is gone. The author ended the story with that because Saeng was very upset failing a test but with the comfort of the hibiscus she’ll be able to do better. He also concludes the story with that paragraph because the climax was when she failed her test and somehow the author had to conclude what was going to happen to Saeng  with the test,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16154,6,"Builders faced multiple obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building. One obstacle was that the dirigible would add too much stress to the frame of the building if it landed there. The building would have to be modified costing over sixty thousand dollars more.Another obstacle faced was the gas inside the dirigible. Some used hydrogen which is extremely flammable. Since New York is highly populated, if something were to go wrong, it would be unsafe. Also, the winds at the top of the building were very strong. The back of the dirigible would be ""swivelling around the mooring mast.""The last obstacle would be that it is ""illegal for a ship to ever tie up or approach of building."" The attempt to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building failed. There were too many obstacles.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18072,7,"My family and I were going to @LOCATION1 for @DATE1 break one year I was really excited to get there, but we had to take two long flights untill we finally arrived. My family and I got up super early to drive to the airport. It was about @NUM1 hours untill we got there. Then we checked are bags went throug securely, and went to go and find our plane. Then we found out our plane had gotten delayed. We sat in the airport for a few hours untill the plane came. Then we got off that plane we went to go find the next one. That plane was delayed to! So we had to wait a few hours again untill the plane came. Then we had to sit through another plane ride untill we finally got to @LOCATION1. This trip took a lot of patience because I was so anxious to get there.",7,8,,15,,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6909,3,"In my opinion the features of the selling affect the cyclist in many ways. For example, when he was talking abut the terair changing from long strat roads to shard winday one and the speed limit changing he said.he was doing a waterdepleting @NUM1 fuier sands like he is having a hard time, or doesn'twnt to go on.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12372,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" there are different moods. Three different moods are happiness, enjoyable and, grateful.Throught this memoir he seems very happy. He's happy about where he lives and happy that he has a caring and nice family, ""In our neighborhood, dispite customs elsewhere, all of these cultures came together in great solidarity and friendship.""@CAPS1 mood in this memoir is enjoyable. He is enjoying every family moment. He is also enjoying having his family always at their home. ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we considered family, Knowing that they would do the same for us.""The @CAPS2 mood in this memoir is being grateful. He is grateful that he has wonderful parents that teach him different things, (such as cooking) ""I will always be grateful to my parents or their love and sacrifice.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4365,2,"Katherine stated that if everyone had the right to take a book off the shelf then there wouldn't be any books left. I think what she is saying is that many people think of a book that is innappropriate, but in another persons eye the book could also be appropriate. Censorship is a big deal no-a-days. Nobody wants there young children to read about drugs and/or violence. I have many opinions upon this issue.     First I will state why I think the books, or movies, or whatever should be taken off the shelf. The books, movies, magazines, ect. should be taken off the shelf for being to innappropriate. The books and movies are innappropriate by having drugs, sex, violence, and many other things in them that young children shouldn't be subject to watching or reading. I know if I was a parent I would not want my young child reading of a violent murder, or gangs.      The other thing about censorship that it is the peoples choice to read an innappropriate book, or watch an innappropriate movie. As a kid myself that is growing up, I didn't really care for reading anyways, but the books that were the best sometimes were the ones with violence in them. Also even thought the book @MONTH1 be innappropriate, the child still should have a say in what they are reading. This is where my next thought comes in. You have to think about the kids that are mature too. The kids that are mature, and it is just a hobby to read, @MONTH1 not have any books of their style left to read if they were all 'taken of the shelf'. This goes for parents too. If they have a book at their house, the child could easily pick it up and read it there.     What the book stores, libraries, and movie stores should do, is put an age limit on the books and movies. I know that for @CAPS1 rated movies there is an age limit, but for explicit books i do not think there is an age limit. They could also maybe even get a letter or a note with parent concent on it, so the children could get the book or magazine. Maybe the parent should even just come in and get the book or movie for the child. The libraries, or book stores, or movie stores could also easily put a warning on the side of the cover to show that the book @MONTH1 be innappropriate to some. What the children read is only up to two people: the child and the parent. If the parent doesn't care that the child is reading or watching an innappropriate movie then it should be no problem.     Therefore, I think in order to withhold the buying and selling of books, there has to be the option to obtain the innappropriate ones. I feel that even though the material @MONTH1 be explicit, the kids, with their parent's concent, should have the option to check out or buy mostly anything. Afterall, the book @MONTH1 be about violence, drugs, or sex, but the children are still reading which is always good",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
479,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, Some people are debating whether advances in technology, such as computers, are benefitial to our daily life. I think that computers are a good addition to life for a few reasons. For one, information and knowledge are at your fingertips. It takes merely seconds to know anything you want or need to. Email, @CAPS2, @CAPS1, etc. can be labeled as wasteful or dangerous. New friends can be made everyday. Lastly, there can be limits set so no more worrying about to much time spent on the computers. One of the reasons computers can be benefitial to our daily life is what it can give us. Knowledge is just seconds away. Anything you might be interested in learning is all on the web. Homework, school projects, and even work need information that isn't found anywhere else. The library is a great place to find what you're looking for, but if you're in a hurry and need what you're looking for quick, there is the online encyclopedia, world book, etc.Technology is becoming a huge part of our life today, many opinions are up in the air about it. If, there's one thing everyone can agree on, it's fast and can make daily tasks easier. Ordering clothes, books, movies, tickets for trips and more all can be done online. That's not all the computer has to offer. Friends/family are a necessary part of life, but they're not always living right around the corner. They @MONTH1 live on the other side of the state, country, even world! @CAPS2, @CAPS1, email, etc. can allow you to connect with anybody around the world at anytime. E-mail has been around longer than other websites like @CAPS2 and myspce which allow you to keep daily tabs on them. @CAPS1 or ichat allows you to instantely talk to anybody that you want. These websites can't replace being together in person, but it can help keep in touch for the meanwhile. Some are worried about spending too much time face to face with the screen, there is even something to prevent that. Time spent inside on the computer is becoming a problem. Not enough exersise or time spent outside can be unhealthy. Time limits can fix this problem. A certain amount of time can be plugged in. When there's @NUM1 minutes left, it gives you a warning. That way more time can be spent outside in the open, and less inside staring at the screen all day. Many different opinions about whether computers belong in our life have been shared. I believe they're a beneficial part of our life. They allow you information at the touch of your fingers, access to friends/family, plus there's time limits. In this day/age, the computer is something we can't live without.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9139,4,"The author concludes the story with this paragraph because it shows she's not going to just give up easily after failing once. This paragraph also shows that she's trying to like this country as much as she can and she is looking forward until spring time when the hibiscus is blooming, that will remind her of home, but also of her new life in @LOCATION1.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3672,2,"There are so many things these days that people find offending, in so many different places in magazins, books, movies, cell phones, on the internet,even some words in songs. Some people find it so offending that they think they should be able to remove these offending materials off the self.      A big thing for parents in this situation is what if my child gets ahold of this? I dont want them reading this! What if it messes up their childhood? Honestly parents if you dont want your young child to read these things or see these pictures then why take them too these places where it is at? On the occasion that they do get ahold of it, then sit down with them and talk to them about it so they understand that its something they should not be ossiated with.     Also if  evryone took things off the self what they found unoppropiate then we wouldent have anything left to read, listen to, or watch. Alot of times one thing that someone finds funny could offend another person to no end. For example @PERSON1 could find something very enjoyable, but @PERSON2 could find the very same the extreamly offending. It would lead to many arguments amoung or communites.     Yet there is still another reason that this would not work out well, and would not be a good idea. If this were to happen then kids would grow up thinking that this is a esay world. This world is harsh and not easy at all times. Kids learn alot of this through the media. As long as we have postive role modles to exsplain to kids that what they see in some of the media is wrong, and they should not take part in it, then why would it need to be removed?      If people were able to do this then the communities would have alot more crime from anger, we would have nothing left to read watch or see, and kids would live a very confused life not knowing what to exspect from the media. So now i ask you, what do you think",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20718,8," Some people like making people laugh, I love it. I will do most anything to get a good laugh. I will make fun of my self, do insanely stupid things, and sometimes hurt myself (not in any serious way). When I was little I didn't really understand laughter. For some odd reason I could never tell the difference if people were laughing at something or laughing with it. I was kind of ""special"" in some areas as a kid (I still am today). Still at the tender age of five I loved making people laugh, and being special I would do even crazier things for a laugh. Mind you I was kind of a spaz, and a really big spaz. I was the most hyperactive five year old you will ever meet. For example one time I hit myself in the head with a hammer, another time I was dancing around in class with a pencil in my hand, stabbed myself in the head with it, and needed stitches. One of the craziest times though was a couple days before I had to take pictures and I wanted to go play outside, my mom knowing how ""special"" I was (I got it from her) wouldn't allow me to. The expert persuasive kid I was back then convinced her to let me go outside. Before I could even reach the street I fell head first on to the corner of the sidewalk leaving a huge mark and completely ruining the pictures. Although that might make some people laugh, this is a story about laughter not me being a spaz.  Now that you know that I love making people laugh, I'm ""special"", and that I'm a complete spaz I can get on with the story. Well I was in kindergarten and I loved school because I got to hang out with my friends and play with blocks, that might sound stupid but I was in kindergarten. The only thing I didn't like about kindergarten was bully's. Surprisingly I have never had a bully except kindergarten, but this was a bad bully. He would give me wedgies at story time and the whole deal (which was the best time to do so because the teacher could couldn't see). I still know the bully too, but he's no bully anymore, he's a goody two shoes now which I think is odd. Anyways, kindergarten was a very good year for me except one day (and every day I got a wedgies). That day is what this whole story is about, it's why I told you I love making people laugh, why I told you I'm ""special"", and a spaz, everything in the story circles around this one day, *dramatic pause* in kindergarten. It started out like any other day in kindergarten. I woke up, did my daily routine, hopped in the car, and headed to school. When I got to school I grabbed my daily binder and patted the education sign like a mall cop would pat the observe and report sign. I did all my work and colored (which was basically all my work). It came around break so we ran around the play ground and got are little snack. When we finished getting the last few drops out of our juice boxes we headed over to story time. We were all in the little circle (which was more like a deformed oval) listening to the story, right when I would get into the story and lose my guard I would receive an excruciatingly painful (for a five year old) wedgie. The story was almost finished and our five year old attention spans were wearing thin and we were getting all excited. The story finally finished and we were standing up, and this is where my memory starts to fade. I cracked a really funny joke and the whole kindergarten class erupted into laughter, me being a ""special"" spaz that can't tell if people are laughing at me or with me burst into tears. I remember balling my eyes out at the drinking fountain trying to hide my tears. One of the teachers tried to help me by telling me that they were laughing at my joke. It took me a couple minutes to stop crying but a little longer to realize the were not laughing at me.  To this day I still get reminded by classmates about that day, of course I can laugh about it now but that was in kindergarten, I'm in ninth grade now and for people to remember that is kind of crazy to me. It was a negative experience then, but it turned into a blessing in disguise. It made me grow into a better person, I can tell the difference of laughter and also be okay when people do laugh at me (doing dumb things to make people laugh at me is actually my forte). So remember, being ""special"" could sometimes be the best thing about you, what makes you who you are, what makes you great, what makes you grow, what makes people laugh.",15,20,40.0,40,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15809,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that most dirigibles outside the U.S. used hydrogen, which is highly flammable. With downtown New York being a densely populated area, that wouldn't be such a great idea.Another obstacle they had to face was the weather itself. The Empire State Building was very high so it got really windy. The winds on the top of the building were constantly changing due to violent air currents.They also weren't thinking about the government when they were building the mooring mast. There was a law stateing that airships couldn't fly to low to urban areas. It would be illegal if a ship even tried using the mooring mast.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
277,1,"Dear @LOCATION2 press, I wonder if you know that @PERCENT1 of people out of @NUM1 surveyed by the university out @LOCATION1 agreed that using lap tops and computers had a very good benefit on their life? I agree that computers benefit society and every day lifes. With a computer, you can interact with people all around the world, they can help with school work, and make every day life eaiser. Five years ago I had to move from @LOCATION4 to @LOCATION3. We had to leave all of our family and friends behind. However, with this great tecnology, we could e-mail them. Instant message them, and video chat with them, instead on having to face out money to make long distance calls. Theres many people out their like me. Who have friends and family far away, weather its family in different countries, old school mates and camp friends using a computer is a great way to keep in touch with one another. Using a computer can also more life easier. Moms taking care of their kids might not be able to go to @CAPS1 & @CAPS2 with one kid not wanting to get off his video games, the other watching their favorite @CAPS3 show. Thankfully that man and go online, pick the food that she and the quantity and she can get someone to deliver it. That mother also might not be able to get out and go shopping. So with her computer she can go to her favorite stores website and pick the clothes she wants. And then when @CAPS4 comes, a computer can be great not to worry about not having enough time to go and. A computers just have life that much simpiler!. Statistics how or people help online instant or going in. ""Computers are great, I can homework and know that if they to write planner than they we to and out. If, they can and more of information on the computer from @CAPS5.com, then they could find in their local library. You can find almost anything with search engins on your computer! Some people do disagree with the use of computers, or some also believe that some people abuse the benefit of computers and spend to much time on it and not exercising and enjoying nature enough. This is true, not as long as you stay reasonable with usage or your computer, it benefits you in many ways. Like I said, its great for keeping connections between people, simpling everyday life, and research for school.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8975,4,She will try gardning again after the geese and flowers return. She wants to have the best garden around. She wants to keep the tradition going.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6987,3,The cyclist was affected by long hours of riding the bike into the areas where he never been.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10086,4,"The author includes the story with this paragraph because since Saeng failed her drivers test for the first time when the hibiscus starts to bud it will represent a change in her life. Also, Saeng use to have hibiscus flowers at her old home in Vietnam so when the flower buds it could show that she has a new home. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13221,5,"In this memoir the author tried to create a mood, so the reader could understand this memoir better. The mood the author created was very caring. The author talks about her ""Traditional Cuban Home"" he talks about the things that went on in her household, @CAPS1 For @CAPS2 the Passionate Cuban Music that was played, the armonos of the Kitchen, the innocence of childhood, and her life in her ""warm home."" This shows that her family really loved and cared for one another. Also, Narciso Rodriguez said ""Growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative."" This also shows the mood was love, and caring for each other. Lastly, Narciso Rodriguez talks about how grateful she is for what her parents did and sacrificed for her. She said she will never forget her graceful Neighborhood, she learned the real definition of family, and she was @CAPS3 her parents/family for turning her house into a home. The mood for this story was very loving, and caring.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10017,4,"The author concludes the story with that paragraph because it’s saying that she can’t work in the garden in winter, but “when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding,“ are all signs of spring. In the spring, she will take the test again; which implys that she will work in the garden.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15406,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock. Is that when the Empire State Building was conceived, it was Planned as the world's. Then the new Chrysler Building that was being constructed at forty-second Street. and @CAPS1 Avenue in new york. Before the Empire State began construction, and Al Smith was determined to outstrip. this dirigibles or zeppelin and the @ORGANIZATION2 was going to have a mooring mast at its top for docking.",0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13608,5,The mood in this memoir is very relaxed and proud. The author showed that he was so proud of his parents and his culture. He talked with a relaxed feeling and loving everything about his home and culture. Also the mood is so grateful. He is so grateful of his neighbors and how they all came together. Also he was grateful to have his family and friends in his apartment. The author was just so proud of his life and parents.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
131,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1 @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Computers are beginning to be a problem in many households. I feel that too many people are becoming addicted to computers. People like this are more likely to gain weight, have little social time, and spend too much time inside. In @CAPS6 article I have recently read in the @ORGANIZATION1, it was about @CAPS6 experiment on computer use. Dr. @PERSON1, a @CAPS3 professor stated that his findings showed that people who are addicted to computers only leave their homes to run errands. When this happens, it interferes with their lives as well as their bodies, because our bodies need sunlight. Furthermore, his study also showed that people who go outside more and not on the computer as much tend to be happier. @PERCENT1 of the study's patients started to be more joyful once they stopped going on the computer as often. I like when the people around me are happy, not grouchy, don't you? I have been noticing some kids in my school that are gaining weight. These are kids who have recently started going on the computer for a couple hours at a time everyday. This is very bad for your health and body. If someone sits at their computer all day eating the food is not being worked off, so it all turn to fat. Moreover, statistics show that @PERCENT2 of all obese people in a weight loss class had gained their extra weight from sitting at the computer all day. If people treat their bodies this way, they could end up with some type of condition. Last week, @CAPS4 @CAPS5 @NUM1 intervied @NUM2 year old @PERSON2. @PERSON2's best friend has been ignoring @PERSON2 because he got a @ORGANIZATION1 computer. Now, @PERSON2's friend doesn't want to hang out with @PERSON2, or any of his other friends. In addition, when people become addicted to computers, they become less social with friends and other people like parents, teachers, and more. When people push aside their social time for computer games, chat rooms, or movie websites, they lose a large portion of their life. This can be stopped if parents put their foot down, set limits, and make kids spend more time outside. As you can clearly see, computers @MONTH1 have some benefits, but they have many disadvantages. Addicted compuer users become less social, they don't go outside and start to ""pack on the pounds."" @CAPS6 effect of this is a world full of people who sit on the computer all day eating food and gaining weight.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10586,4,"The author concluded the story in such a way that the reader’s eyes are opened. It shows the reader that dispite what @MONTH1 happen, how bad things seem, and how hopeless you feel, there’s always a way to make it better. Saeng failed her test, was in a new land, and had lost her grandmother, but still planned to try again. like the waves on the shore, they will always try to wash away the sand by coming back again. just like these waves, Saeng is willing to try again, as should we all.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13057,5,"Nacisco was happy of what she had, even though she was poor. She loved her heritage which she still adore today. She is proud of being an cuban. She had good relations in her house. She had great neighbors. Her parents were hardworking and supported her. Her family had a good relationship with family and friends. She appreciated what her parents had done for her. They gave up their career and beloved country to move to @LOCATION1 for her to have a better life. Her friends and family, refugees came to her house all the time. Her baby sitter became her first friend. In @LOCATION1, they celebrated her first birthdays. These event would stay in her memory. She would never forget how her parents turned her house into a home, where she belongs. Her life will always be filled with music and love. So even though she had hard times, she still apreciated of what she had.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21174,8,"                   Laughter is the Shortest Distance Between Two People A thing we have done since birth is laugh. Laughter is something incredible in the world of human existence, it is something that relieves awkward situations, brings people together, and makes life a little bit easier. Laughter is something that everyone shares in common. Some people find laughter in different things than others but still we can all laugh together. Many times in my life has laughter helped me through tough situations, brought me close to someone, and just made life more enjoyable.   I remember once I was trying out for a volleyball team. It was the first day of tryouts and I was really nervous because I didn't know anyone. I had never even heard of these people and now I was going to be competing against them. There was one thing I knew about them though. It was that we all shared a common goal of making the team and being successful. Tryouts began and I felt like they were wondering why I was even there, but I ignored them and just kept working hard. Tryouts went okay for the rest of the week but still something just didn't feel right. I still felt like I didn't belong there. It was the last day of tryouts and the girls had warmed up a little, but I still felt a little uncomfortable. After the last practice it was time to announce the teams. I was really nervous cause what if I didn't make it? Or what if I did, but everyone hated me on the team? He announced the names and I was beginning to give up hope when he said my name. I was so excited, but the girls seemed to be annoyed by my name getting called. When I got home I told my parents and they were excited for me. I then told them how I didn't really know anybody and kind of felt like an outsider. They asked me if I had tried talking to anyone, and I said no not really they didn't try talking to me so I thought why should I? My mom then told me that I could only get to know them if put myself out there. I thought about it and realized I really hadn't. I ignored them as much as they ignored me. I also wasn't myself, because I really am a cool person and I am fun to be around, I just for some reason I crawled into a shell this time. I decided the next day at practice I would put myself out there. The next practice I showed up and was partnered up with a girl named @PERSON1. It was so awkward and at first we were just quiet passing the ball back an forth. Then I started talking to her and making jokes she laughed and I laughed and we had a great time. The rest of the practice went great. The awkward moments faded away into laughter. We all worked hard and joked around with each other, laughed, and I really felt like we were bonding. They laughter had brought us together. All this time it felt like we were so far away and different and really it wasn't like that at all. Having fun and laughing together showed us how much we had in common and that we were all the same. I believe that day that laughter brought our team together.  I will never forget that day. It was the day I learned how important laughter was in a relationship, getting to know someone, and how well it brings people together. That season of volleyball I made many new friends. I also learned a valuable lesson that and awkward situation can always be turned around by laughter. Today I still talk to those girls on the team and still today we all laugh together, just because you known someone for a while doesn't mean the fun and laughter has to fade away, because I believe it should get stronger. Whenever I am meeting new people I always try to break the ice and lighten up the mood with something funny, because I think that a big point in our lives is to be happy, have fun, and all laugh togther. That is exactly what I plan to do.",20,22,,42,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6064,3,"In the passage,the cyclist had about @NUM1 different settings. One of these settings were the rough terrains he had to pass through where he lacked on the amount of water.Another setting the cyclist had to go through was the hill like terrains.Where he was laughing at himself for taking the old men advice in the first place.Both of these features had a great a tall on the cyclist body strength and his spirit. But with confidence, determination, and the relief of the success he was able to overcome the obstacles.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3553,2,"Libraries have always had interesting materials, such as, books, music, movies, and magazines, and there always will be. Libraries are one of the best places to find those materials.          I do not believe that libraries should have to remove those materials from their shelves because maybe some people find them interesting? Thats all that libraries like are people interested in reading their books. If some people find different books offensive then they shouldn't go near those books. If they have a complaint then they should just keep it to themselves and not ruin the chance for others to check them out.     Libraries shouldn't have to take certain material out of there shelves because some people don't like them, its your choice to read that book, nobody is making you read something that makes you feel uncomfortable. Now say if there were a numerous amount of people that take offense to the materials in the library, then the library could decide whether they want to or not, but they still dont need to be told what to do. Its their business and they decide what materials stay and which ones go.     If I was one of those who took offense to a book in the library then i would just keep it to myself. I wouldn't like to go through all of that trouble of arguing and complaining just becouse of one book. Think of others before you think of yourself sometimes and what their interests are. Thats less trouble you will have to go through later on in life.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18343,7,"Yester day I went to the orthodontist and waited for my check-up. @CAPS1 took a little while but @CAPS1 was my turn next. When I got home I felt like I was starving. I waited for dinner to be ready, but even though @CAPS1 was only an hour until @CAPS1 would be ready @CAPS1 seemed like @CAPS1 was a life time. The delicoas aroma coming from the kitchen only made my hunger worse, but I sat pationtly and read my book until @CAPS1 was done. After words I was watching ghost hunters when my little brothers came in and started to clean up the mess they made with thier toys. So I had to pause the show because they cant do anything when the @CAPS2 is on. So patiently, I waited for a excruciaing @NUM1 minutes until they were done. So over all I think I was very patient yesterday.",7,6,,13,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18355,7,Patience is a hard but good thing to have because patience can help you progress in your life such as getting a job. One way you would have to be patient when trying to get a job is when the boss is ??? your ressence aterring his sweet time. You don’t want to get impatient and yell at him and tell him to hurry up because that would make you not get the job. So in conclusion patience is a good like skill to have because it can help our progress in life.,4,3,,7,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,1.0,,,0.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4122,2,"Should certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., be removed from shelves if they are found offensive?     I do not think that certain materials should be removed for many reasons. Many different people have many different thoughts on whats offensive and what isn't like some people will find something funny that some people @MONTH1 think is nasty or inapropiate. If you was to take things off the shelves that someone found offensive there probably wouldn't be much left on the shelves because everybody has they're own oppenion. I agree that certain things shouldn't be seen by young eyes but thats the parents decision, not everyone has the same view on the material.     Certian materials should not be removed from shelves because of one persons oppenion on it. Everyone has they're own oppenion, some people like what other people don't everyone is different in they're own way",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15363,6,The obstacles that the builders of the empire State building was really difficult. The worker had to make sure that the building was'nt so tall that it would so tilt. The workers also faced competition They needed there building to be the biggest and they didn't give up until there building was in fooy the tallest building in @CAPS1.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15015,6,"The obstacles the builders fact was that they could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. The stress of the dirigible's load and the wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation. The Steel Frame of the Empire state Building would have to be modified and Strengthened to accommodate this new situation. The greatest reason was safety: most dirigibles from outside of the united states used Hydrogen rather than helium, and Hydrogen is highly flammable. The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. The back of the ship would swivel around and around the mooring mast. existing law against airships flying too low.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1729,1,"Computers have gotten more advanced over time. They have even gotten smaller and smaller, and yet people still don't understand the dangers that computers have on society and their personal life such as; stress, addiction, and cyberbulling. I am here to write about how computers are a nuisense in our lives. First and for most, computers are one of the laeding causes of stress in daily life. About four out of every ten people that are stressed are stressed out because of their computers. For example, if you were writing an important document or sending an email to your boss about work and your computer suddenly crashes, would you be upset? Would you feel like you want to rip your hair out and throw that computer out the window? I'm pretty sure that you would because your data is lost, you will have to restart your computer and, worst case senerio, take your computer to the electronic store to get it fixed. Another cause of stress is if someone hacks your computer by uploading a virus. Hacking was @CAPS1 become a world wide sport. There are books and instructions on how to hack a computer and the government can't do much about that since the first amendment gives you the write to publish what you (freedom of speech and press). Just look what happened in @LOCATION1. A computer hacker hacks a computer and shut of power to an entire city for about @NUM1 days. Also if someone upload a virus into your they can take all of your personal information, like your social security number. These two factors will cause major stress in you daily life. Secondly, people spend too much time on the computer at home. A recent survey shows that six out of every ten teenagers spend more that two hours on the computer. This make them less social meaning they won't spend time with friends, family, or even try out for sports. They won't get the recommended one hour of exercise a day.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15520,6,"There were numerous obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One big problem they faced was the wind. The way the mooring station was built meant that the wind could catch the tail of the dirigible, causing it to spin around the building. Also, when the mooring station was completed, the wind made it unsafe for dirigibles to get close to the building. Another problem they faced was the stability and support of the building. ""Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the building's Framework."" (@CAPS1 @NUM1) This was so a blimp wouldn't pull the mooring station off the building. One final problem they faced was the safety of the people. It is said that most @CAPS2 dirigibles use flamible gasses to fly. If there was an accident like the Hindenburg over the busy New York streets it would be terrible. There were many problems faced by the building crew of the Empire state building, wind, stability, and safety are just a few.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1623,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 people these days rely too much on technology. Everywhere you go you usually see somebody on a phone, texting, on a computer or plugged into an ipod. These people are not necisarily bad, but they are under the control of technology. Computers for example, are in the eyes of most people, fast, easy and fun, but they also pose as a problem. Even though it seems like everybody has a computer, not everybody does. Also people become way to dependent on such matchines that they can become addicted to them. Computers @MONTH1 also seem like they work @PERCENT1 of the time, but they can also be very unrelyable. Just off the top of your head, how @CAPS3 people do you know that use @CAPS4 or @CAPS5? A lot I'm sure. Now multiply that number by itself for all the people they know and multiply it again and so forth. That number shows that, @CAPS6, over @NUM1 million people use these. Now what are the chances that if you sent a friend a message one of these programs (with the @NUM1 million + people on is) that the server will be @PERCENT1 relaible and your pal recieves the information he needs? My point is that, what if somthing important came up that required your friends help, and you could not reach him because of a fault in the system? What would happen You could be at a hospital for a ride home for an hour longer than it should have taken. Another problem is what if you needed a computer, and you specially needed him/her? If they did have one then You have you did it in @NUM3 minutes but how else could you contact them? You could try to call, but what if they are outside and are playing with his/her dog? Also these days if you are really grateful for somthing you go on google and type in virtual thank you cards. If the person gets it then they will be happy, but probly much more so if in the mail they got a handmade real thank you card. My final reason that computers hurt us more than they help is addiction. Like I said in my first paragraph, everywhere you go you see somebody wired into an electronic device. People no longer go outside and play cowboys and @CAPS7 because now all they have to do is hit paly. I will admit I too use my computer quite a bit but at least I budget my time so I can also go outside and play a while. Obeisity also branches from overuse of electronics along with @CAPS3 other products.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1166,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, Computers are helpful once in a while but @NUM1 out of @NUM2 people believe that they are a waste of electricity. Computers aren't beneficial to everyday life overall. When people are on the computer they spend multiple hours on it. This means that they aren't getting enough exercise and that they are harming them bodies. Not only this but people have a tendency to use this machine obsessivly. They spend more attention on the computer and not enough time with your family. Every one knows exercise is important. However, what happens when we don't get enough? Heart disease is the number one cause of death in the @LOCATION1. Heart disease is caused by obesity. That's what happens when you don't exercise. When you are on the computer you are sitting down rather than moving around. This means that your motabolism isn't going and you burn less calories. That is not healthy for anyone. Even people in perfect condition. Gaining weight isn't the only way you can potentially harm your body. When using the computer you have to look at the screen which is with very bright @CAPS3 lights. After looking at the screen for so long your eyes will begin to feel the affects of the lights. Many people say its like staring into a flashlight for an extended amount of time. About @PERCENT1 of the kids at our school wear glasses because of using the computer for to long. That @PERCENT1 is @PERCENT2 more than we had before. We used to have about @NUM3. Like I said before, when you use the computer you use it for an extended amount of time. What about family? They deserve more attention than a machine. To spend more time on the computer than your own flesh and blood isn't right. In a survey an average of @NUM4 out of @NUM5 people said that the spent about eight hours on the computer between work and home, and about an hour with family. The results were more than shocking with all of this in mind, ask your self how useful the computer really is. Sure it's good at researching things quickly but its also good at making people gain weight, making people spend money on glassses and tearing them away from their family members. At the end of the day, the computer isn't very helpful at all.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6654,3,"In the essay “Rough road ahead do not exceed posted speed limit,” the cyclist is affect both positivly and negativly by the setting. Setting is the sounding in which the story tacks place. In the story a cyclist loses his way and band is put in to dangous because of it. The setting of the story can be dicrided as mountainous with many rolling hills. The author discride the setting by say “@CAPS1 two miles in to the next section of the ride, I noticed the terrain changing.” The change in terrain made it more difical for the cyclist. However he also used the land to give him hope that he was almost their. He told him self that he’d make it if he make it over the next hill. The setting of the story gave the cyclist hope and problems in his journy to sarive.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15190,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced several challenges in building a dock for dirigibles They would not be able to simply place of mooring mast on the flat roof of the Empire State Building. The thousand-foot dirigible held by a single cable would make the frame very unsturdy. With the weight of the dirigible and the wind pressure it would have to get transmitted to eleven hundred feet, where the foundation is. The would need to make the frame stronger to with stand the stress which would cost over sixty thousand dollars. In the end the mooring mast never was made because of safety, unpredictable nature and of the law itself. It was unsafe due to the highly flammable dirigibles putting the high populated region in danger. The winds would shift to constantly and violently and be to very difficult to control the dirigible. Also, the law that airships flying too low over urban areas would have made it illegal. Ships would not be able to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. Overall, there were too many obstacles that made it impossible for the engineers to build a mooring mast.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4295,2,"Do you ever feel like books, music, movie, magazines and etc., are offensive sometimes? To my experience of lising to music and watching movies it can be offensive somtimes with out even knowing it. I have lisn to rap before and all the cuss words they use, and watching movies with only white people or black people. So I think some music, moives and etc., could be taking off.     If I think somthing is a offensive I pretty much blow it off like its nothing. I do that beacuse I have watch @CAPS1 The @CAPS2 the white and black people didnt get a long, and they had to play football to geather. Then they finally got along and won the champion game. To me I think thats awesome beacause people were offensive, and got over it and now there friends. So  dont take @CAPS3 offensive. I say that beacuse how do you know that the actor or the writer was or is talking about you. I look at this like its a little deal. I like @CAPS3 like that I find it entertanment. It can also help you learn, about whats happening to our world, and what we have acomplished. So I really dont take this @CAPS3 a offensive. But, other people can take it offensive and thats there problem. There is nothing that can be done its over with. If something is a offensive then dont lisn to it or dont watch or read it. So dont think its right to pull it of the shelf and abhor it. They can have a really good meaning behind it. There are many movies, songs and books in the world that are good. So dont abominate it and go on in life dont let @CAPS3 get to you.     Thats why I dont think its right to pull it off the shelf and take it offenisive. Thats why I think it not bad to take @CAPS3 offensive.",3,2,,3,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1753,1,"To whom it @MONTH1 concern, @CAPS1 many hours a day do you spend on the computer? Too many is my geuss! They are warping the minds of people all over, and in my opinion things should go back to the way they used to be. Some people @MONTH1 disagree, and say that computers help children who are in school. That @MONTH1 be true, but honestly only a couple decades ago the average student didnt even own a computer, and school were teaching the same materials without the usage of them. Also, some children use computers to cheat on homework assignments and essays, and I'm sure many people would agree that that is not helping education for schools. Another reason computers @MONTH1 not benefit society is because of the dangers of them. Sexual predators sworm the internet, and many people talk to strangers over the internet that @MONTH1 be harmful, without even realizing it. A third reason computers @MONTH1 not be help society @CAPS2 you can see, I feel very strongly about the negative effects that computers have on society, for many reason. I hope you can agree with me ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12529,5,"I think that the main mood created by the author in the memoir was love. But love branched out into gratitude and hospitality. Love is shown a lot through family in this memoir. The love of the authors parents is shown in paragraph @NUM1, when it says ""They came selflessly, as many immigrants do, to give their children a better life..."" Love from the author's parents is shown again in paragraph @NUM1 when it says ""The faith that this struggle would leave them and their children to better living drove them to endure these hard times."" These two quotes show the love that the author's parents showed towards their children. A mood of hospitality was also shown in this memoir a lot. In paragraph @NUM3, it shows hospitality by saying ""it was a close-knit community of... immigrants who extended a hand to people who, while not necessarily their own kind, were clearly in need."" This shows the hospitality of the neighborhood and how caring it was. The other mood that the author created in the memoir was gratitude in paragraph @NUM4, this is shown. ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told him that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could have ever done. I've often told them of my admiration for their strength and perseverance, and I've thanked them repeatedly."" This quote shows how massively grateful the author is toward her parents. These are the ways that the author shows the mood in the memoir. ",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9696,4,I believe he used this as the ending to ensure that she was strong and she would do whatever it took to perservere.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6538,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist because when you have hills to climb and little water, you will get dehydrated. Also the heat from the desert is so hot that it also can make you dehydrated. If you don’t  pace yourself and dont drink too much water you will be able to reach your goal. Your rest is a big thing for if you dont have energy, you will not get far.",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
661,1,"In present day, most people live on the computer. Whether if for work or pleasure, everyone uses a computer. In a recent study, researchers determined that an average person spends @NUM1 years of his or her life on the comptuer. Thats a total of @NUM1 years of life waste. Most kids spend all day on the computer on @CAPS1, facebook, @CAPS2, and youtube. They could be using that time to be around family and friends making memories. Kids dont realize how short life is, they should be hiking, camping, spending time with friends and family. I think years from now when kids grow into adults, they will be looking back and regretting not spending more time with there family, or not taking opportunities to explore the world we live in. Instead, they will be looking back and thinking about the halarious video on youtube that got over one million hits. Also, as you @MONTH1 know child obesety is on the rise, they are more overweight kids then there are then and healthy. If a you look back to the times before computers, you will notice that you will rarely see an overweight child. The computer is to blame for this new pamedemic. Kids should be outdoors playing sports and getting fresh air. I bet that if computers were taken away for @NUM3 year, then the changes in health would be drastic. Kids would be alot healtheir and have lost the weight I hope that everyone can see the harms of the computer by reading this, and they will get rid of this poisiness object. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15373,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were numerous, but the main obstacles consisted of the danger that dirigibles posed, nature, and an existing law against letting airships fly too low over the suburban areas. According to the reading, the danger that dirigibles posed was that ""most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is considered highly flammable"". This danger was emphasized by the German dirigible Hindenburg when it was destroyed by fire in Lakehurst, New Jersey. Nature was also a great obstacle because of the ""winds on top of the building"" that ""were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"". Because of these winds, it was almost impossible to dock a dirigible on the mooring mast without it moving around crazily. The last obstacle, the law, ""would make it illegal for ship to ever tie up to the building or even approach the area. Unless the law was revoked, the mooring mast would never be able to work. However, the obstacle that the builders faced when designing the actual mast itself were that ""the steel frame of the Empire State Building would have to be modified and strengthened"" because ""the stress of the dirigible's load and wind pressure would have to be transmitted all the way to building's foundation"" which turned out to be ""over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications.""",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21160,8,"It was another warm muggy @DATE1 @TIME1, when @LOCATION1 my best friend and i decided to go to our friend @PERSON1's house. As soon as we we walked the three mile walk to get to @PERSON1's house @LOCATION1 realizes that he forgot his phone charger at my house. We didn't want to walk all the way back to my house and we had no ride either because none of us have our license yet and and @PERSON1's parents aren't home. So @PERSON1 and i start brainstorm on how to get back to my house to retrieve @LOCATION1's cell phone charger, when suddenly...We heard a loud bang come from the backyard from the old rugged y shed in the back dark corner of the yard; @LOCATION1 and I go to check it out to see what the noise was. we open the shed and one of @PERSON1's dirt bikes had fallen over. @PERSON1 and I pull the dirt bike out of the old spider-web infested shed. @PERSON1 and i both got a light-bulb above our heads and suddenly looked up at each other with the same idea. not being so smart we figure @LOCATION1 can just ride the dirt bike the three mils back to my house on main roads and he will be fine. @PERSON1 tells @PERSON1 about are idea and @PERSON1 says its a bad idea because he mom is not home and he doesn't want us getting in trouble for a phone charger. @PERSON1 repeatedly tells us to put the dirt bikes back, but next thing you know @LOCATION1 has the bike out front testing it out around the neighbor hood. I tell @LOCATION1 ""since there is only one dirt bike you take it and ill follow on the @CAPS1 bike!"" next thing you know me and @PERSON1 are side by side riding a dirt bike and a @CAPS1 bike down the busiest road in town and its pitch black outside. ""@PERSON1 you go and ill meet you there!"" i yell. @PERSON1 takes off down the road at about @NUM1 mph and im about @NUM1 yards behind him. suddenly I see a white figure start to creep out from a driveway, i cant quite make out what it is... When suddenly i see flashing red and blue lights! i try to warn @LOCATION1 and shout ""@PERSON1 @NUM3!!!"" yet he is to far away to hear me but since its pitch black outside the lights light up the whole street, @LOCATION1 tries to loose him by going down a side road but its no match for a charger cop car. It's out of my hands now so I bike back to jeremys house and get him and we run the the scene of the crime to see whats happening. we keep are distance and act like we don't know him. the cop has @PERSON1 in cuffs standing behind the cop car and the cop goes back to his car to write @PERSON1 a ticket and I see @LOCATION1 shadows under the street light throw something into the bush's.. Since it wasn't his dirt bike and he couldn't ride it him the cop calls a tow truck and has him take the bike and the cop gives @LOCATION1 a ride home with @MONEY1 in tickets.. As soon as they leave the scene I go check to see what @LOCATION1 threw in the bush's and it was a can of chew because he is a minor.. so i grab it. the next day @LOCATION1 is home and his parents are at work so I bring him his chew, and he starts to tel us what his mom punished him with when suddenly we heard the garage door start to open; his mom was home from work so i hand him his chew and I run out the backyard and over the fence. he tells me to not tell to many people because he doesn't want everyone knowing but its already the talk of the town...",16,18,,34,,,,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15271,6,"The obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were two practical obstacles. Nature itself. Even if the dirigible was tethered up to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around the mooring mast. Another thing was that it was illegal for airships to fly over too low over urban areas. Although two dirigibles attempted but failed, by the late 1930s, the idea of using the mooring mast for dirigibles and their passengers had quietly disappeared.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4691,2,"What race are you? What religion are you? What have you been taught? Almost anything like these could be considered offensive. So should these types of things be taken out of libraries?     No, these types of things are everywhere. You just can't get away from them. Today you can find so many offensive television shows and commercials. For example the commercials for @CAPS1 gum with that @CAPS2 woman, some people might consider that offensive. You might ask, '@CAPS3', well there might be a person who has a diesease who can't get that 'clean feeling' and always has bad breath. That person might take offense to these commercials. Another example might be television shows, like @ORGANIZATION1. Some @CAPS4 and just other races get offended by these types of things. Does that really mean we should get rid of them though?     People everywhere are somehow offended by something, the world isn't perfect. Even if we did take out these types of offensive material in libraries, it could still be seen. So whats the point?          If you tried to take it all out, like everywhere in the world everything would be crazy. There is no such thing as a perfect world, I believe if there was people would go crazy. For example in the movie '@CAPS5 @CAPS6,' the main character finds a town that is suppose to resemble 'The @CAPS7 @CAPS8' or a perfect society. In the town at first everything is nice, but then everyone is so perfect that he can't stand it and leaves.      The best thing to do is let these materials stick around because there is nothing you can do to get them gone from everywhere else. Also they help kids learn, if you keep them locked up and not knowing anything, then how far are they going to get in life?     So should these things go away or not? What do you think?",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12262,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" by @PERSON1 he writes mainly about how grateful he is for everything he grew up with and is truly the mood created by the author. Narciso is grateful for his cuban culture and how it was incorperated into his life growing up even though he was in New Jersey. He is also grateful for his parents and the sacrafices they made for him in order to grow up in @LOCATION2. His parents also taught him to be kind to everyone, and treat everyone like family. He is grateful for that.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7203,3,The setting affects the rider because it is very hot wich makes him thirsty. how long the road witch affect his mind state and last the fact that ??? is in sight and that affect is coral,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16565,6,"The @CAPS1 of the empire state building had to cross many obstacles in order to have a dirigible dock on the Empire State Building. They needed to build a mooring mast for the dirigible to dock on the Building. This presented another problem however because if dirigible docked on the building its weight would be to much for the building. They overcame this obstacle by rienforcing the building's supports. The largest obstacle and the one that defeated this idea of docking a dirigible on the Empire State Building was simply the elements. The violent air currents and high winds made it impossible for a dirigible to safely tether itself to the top of the empire building. For example when the @ORGANIZATION2 dirigible Los @CAPS2 tried to get in range of the mooring mast but was unable to, do to the fiercely forceful winds. In the end the @CAPS1 of the Empire State Building could not overcome the obstacles.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16183,6,"In the excerpt ""The mooring mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the builders of the Empire State building faced many obstacles. Their goal was to build a moor on top of the building in order for dirigibles, or blimps, to dock. In the end they were not successful. One obstacle was ""lack of a suitable landing area."" Without this, the dock would not work. Another main obstacle is the safety reason. ""Most dirigibles from outside of the United States used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly fammable."" They could easily catch on fire and harm many innocent people. Which leads to two other reasons. ""Nature itself."" That could easily start a fire with the wind. ""Existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" The dirigibles could harm innocent people. Many other obstacles were found so this plan failed.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1170,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION3, @CAPS1 has come to @CAPS2 attention that certain members of our society believe that computers are not beneficial. This position comes from lack judgement and a closed mind. Computers are lifelines to buisness workers who use them to complete all of their work, these tools also enable news of disaster or weather to spread efficiently and effectively. These technological devices also create and sustain communication between family members and friends. In todays society computers are vital and getting rid of them would be like stopping oxygen from making its way to the body, being accompanied by multiple severe consequences. First and foremost, about @PERCENT1 of all modern companies require their employees to work on computers. These works of art aren't just handy-dandy toys , rather @CAPS5 essential to the working class @CAPS5 a # @NUM1 pencil to a student taking a cut. @PERSON3, an owner of a small buisness, agrees. ""@CAPS2 company designs software and uses computers @NUM2. Many of @CAPS2 employees work from home and have to own computers."" The growth of computers is not something to be frowned upon, rather an achievement in technology enhancing the lives of others. By ripping our computers from lives of workers chaos would be created with many unappealing consequences. Adults aren't the only ones whose jobs consists of computers. Nowadays students' homework is mostly online, computers decrease the amout of time needed to write an essay and are glare to students of all ages, @PERSON4, an eighth grades at @ORGANIZATION1, is an example of this dilema. Every night she has at least three hours of homework and usually one hour be @CAPS1 requires a computer, however, this isn't a problem because @CAPS1 cuts back the time @CAPS1 takes for @PERSON4 to do her homework. She can quickly type up an @CAPS3 essay or research a science topic instead of doing @CAPS1 painstakingly slow using an old fashion method. Moreover, computers are doors into the real world, especially for residents of @LOCATION1. Whether some people like to believe @CAPS1 or not, @LOCATION1 is a bit of a sicludded area where people aren't aware of what is going on outside of their closed off town. Computers cause news to spread like electricity and open @LOCATION1 residents eyes to national and global problems @PERSON2, another student at @ORGANIZATION5, states, "" @CAPS4 the earthquake took place in @LOCATION3 @CAPS2 friends and I were all at lunch, @CAPS5 we came back to class @CAPS2 teacher was projecting the news via her computer onto the white board"" @CAPS6 computers were taken away a stream of knowledge would be cut off from adults and children. Most importantly, computers create communication between friends and family calling up to talk to someone isn't always an option, so computers are the better choice. Families can connect with each other no matter @CAPS6 they have cell phone reception or what area of the world they are in, @PERSON1 is a senior at @LOCATION1 @CAPS7 @ORGANIZATION1 who agrees. ""@CAPS4 I go to college next year I am going all the way to @LOCATION2 and want to be able to talk to @CAPS2 family, via email and instant message I can contact them even @CAPS6 its inconvenient because they don't have to respond right away."" @PERSON1 brings up a good point computers serve the luxury of communication, which is vital to keep @PERCENT2 of healthy relationships, @CAPS5 shows a study at @ORGANIZATION4. In conclusion, computers are an incredible piece of equipment that should be valued and not taken away. The are vital to workers and students and bring news to residents of any corner of the world. Computers also are how friends and family are able to stay connected and communicate. Therefore, I urge you, readers of the @ORGANIZATION2, to raise your voice about the benefits of computers, so they aren't taken away from our society.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12111,5,The mood of the story is like a sad story then it leads to a happy ending. It starts sad because the family moves from cuba to the @ORGANIZATION1. They tell on nothing about the language or the traditions. It gets happier when they moved into the apartment and they find a job to work at. Thats what the mood of the story is.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3044,2,"I don't Believe in censorship of libraries. Were @CAPS1 we live in a free country, and have the right to have access to the matrial we want from libraries. It doesnt matter if its age aproprite or not. If you dont want your kids listening to that bad rap artist, or watching that @CAPS2 rated movie, then its your responsibility as a parent to keep it from them.     Part of what makes @LOCATION1 so great is the freedom that come with living here. If we allowed anyone to censor a library then we would have no books to read, movies to watch, or music to listen to. Katherine paterson said 'All of us can think of a book that we hompe none of our children or any other children have taken off the shelf. But if I have the right to remove that book from the shelf- that work I abhor-then you also have exactly the same right and so does everyone else. And then we have no books left on the shelf for any of us.' this quote shows that if anyone had the right to pull a book from the shelf we wouldnt have any books left.     Censorship would just be the start.It could lead to the government censoring information from the public that they don't want us to know. which would take away the greatness of @LOCATION1, we wouldn't be free.     Censorship of libraries would take away our rights. witch is why i apose it",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12925,5,"The mood created by the @PERSON1 in the memoir was to show how happy it was for Narciso Rodriguez growing up. ""here, The innocence of childhood, The congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the back drop to life in our warm home"" and when the @PERSON1 says ""growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relitive."" as you can see the mood of the story is warm and tells us about how he had a good Childhood",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
803,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, I think that computers do not benefit society. They do more bad than good in my opinion. People aren't on the computer to research people. They are on to check @CAPS3, @CAPS4, @CAPS5. They need to get outside and see the outside world, people should interact with family and friends. Humans that have to much on time on their hands. So their bored maybe they will make a @CAPS3 account or if they already have on then they will maybe one of the games on their and eventually you get addicted to @CAPS3 and you never go off of it. Our society needs to encourage people to get outside and only use your computer to check your email, add something to your ipod, and maybe check if you have any notification on @CAPS3. If you want to really have a great life sitting in front of the computer your entire life isn't going to let you have that kind of fun. Ya need to live your life like your going to die tommorow. Get outside, watch the big game with all your buddies. Go on a vacation get away with your family. Travel the world and rember every part of it. Wouldn't you rather be doing that then to be sitting in front of your computer? We need to inform our state about this problem. There is a reason why we are becoming one of the fastest countries! People are not leaving their house and not getting active. If people avoid their computers then we could be one of the fittest countries.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16191,6,"The Empire state building is one of the greatest symbols of the United States. With the world trade center destroyed, it stands as the city's highest building. Many are familiar with its famous spire at its summit, but few actually know why it's there. The truth is that it was meant to be a mooring dock for dirigibles, or zeppelins, balloons lined with steel that were equipped with propellers for steering.          The sad truth is that it never happened. According to the article ""The Mooring Mast"", the environmental conditions as well as safety condition, were too poor to accommodate. Apprently, the wind currents at such a high altitude are fears, and if a blimp were to be tethered to the top, quite a great deal of strain would be placed on the building frame. This is time-consuming and costly to fix. Also, there would be no practical way to weigh down the baloon without the risk of the falling on civilians. Not only that, but having air ships that low over urban areas was illegal. In short, the whole idea was wishful thinking, because it couldn't have happened.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12276,5,"In the memoir, the mood created by the author is their feelings.In paragraph @NUM1, lines @NUM2, it says, ""Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, and endless celebrations that encompassed both, forms the backdrop to life in our warm home.""For that quote, the authors mood is sometimes sad and sometimes happy. The author's mood about being sometimes sad is because of how they live. The author's mood about feeling sometimes happy is because no matter what happens they still have their friends and family, or each other.In paragraph @NUM3, lines @NUM3 and @NUM5, it says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""For that quote, the authors mood is srprised and thankful. The author's feeling is suprised because she would never think her parent would do that for her. The author's feeling is thanksful because thats what her parents did for her made her life better.All and all, that was the mood created by the author.",4,1,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12742,5,"In the memoir Narciso rodriguez by Home, the mood created by the @CAPS1 in the memoir is that growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. They showed me with their lives, and these teachings have been the basis of my life. but, in reality, there is no way to express my gratitude for the spirit of generosity impressed upon me at such an early age and the demonstration of how important family and friends are.  I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9827,4,"The story “Winter Hibiscus” is about a young girl who cares for gardening over schoolwork. The given conclusion is explaining, when spring comes, and the winter hibiscus is gone, she will pass the school test she failed before. Saeng only cares for the winter Hibiscus right now, for example, the line “I paid over nineteen dollars for it.” Explains she used all her money on this plant rather than any other food. Also the quote “I failed the test” with Saeng crying shows she failed it only because she was worrying about the hibiscus. In conclusion over the spring, when the winter hibiscus is gone, Saeng will focus on school more rather than gardening. Maybe now she will pass her test and go back to her hobby of gardening.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9700,4,"The author ends the story with Saeng vowing to herself the relationship between passing and driving test and the significance of the hibiscus flower. The flower is linked to the way things used to be for her in Vietnam. For example, hibiscus in @LOCATION3 was “Madagascar periwinkle” in Vietnam. It also symbolizes how the flower adapts to its surrounding when taken from a different country in accordance to Saeng adjusting to life in @LOCATION3. The reason she said when spring comes she will take the test again symbolizes that connection of the flower to the way she lives now. For instance, her ability and determination that when that flower buds she will overcome obsticles. Another is a connection of her past experiences. And it was a sense of comforting to her after she failed her driving test. The author linked the flower’s significance to the ending of the story showing the hope and dedication to Saeng and the obstacles she passes to get where she is today.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19277,7,"The time I was patient was whene I went to the @CAPS1.B.I @CAPS2. My dad went there and he did a bunch of training, he was there for like @NUM1 months. At the end if they made  it through they got a award. So there was kind of a lot of  people. We had to dress really nice. We had to sit through all the people getting awards that we didnt even know. The worst part was they gave speeches. Then after what seemed like hours my dad got up! I was so happy he got his award! Then we got to leave. That was the time I had to be patient.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6599,3,"First, by accepting the old mens’ advice, the cyclist was setting himself up for some hardships that he would, easily have avoided by using his map. He first encounters a “ghost town”, lifeless and most importantly, waterless. Then, he encounters a pump that gives out water tasting like “battery acid”. Next he rides past a “Rough Road Ahead” sign; not the most encouraging thing on his journey. To add to the despair, he has to manever his way past a tempting yet empty juice factory. Finally, the parched cyclist arrives at “Gary and Wilber’s Fish Camp. “To him, this simple bait shop was like  beacon of hope from food himself.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3091,2,"The way that the books, musics ,ect. are made for people basicly for that age group. Like if that particular book contains profanity that some find offensive, then they should ignore that book and move on to the other book that is more fitting for that person rather than starting a controversy over that just of one book. Some stuff will have lables on them like parental guidence to show that only particular age person can have. From my experience is that it's ok, but if it gets out of hand then I just leave it and go to the next thing. Although rmoving the books from most people might not help alot because some people would like to have that book that they won't find anywhere else. The librarians can put that particular book in the older age section of the library and have the kids book in the younger section of the library. So hopefully this might help the problem that you might have for people to enjoy that books, music, magazine, ect.",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1640,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 people owner either computers or laptops. They both do the same things. These electronics are famminal. They can help you do a lot of things that others @MONTH1 not. These @MONTH1 help you find long lost sibling or whom ever you @MONTH1 want to find. Computers @MONTH1 also get you hurt or @CAPS4 if you buy on be careful. I went to find my brother I left when I do it my mother's house"" cried the woman. That is a job for a computer. @CAPS3 websites accessable threw a computer @MONTH1 help you do this, such as facebook, myspace and This can effect yours and @CAPS3 mores. This can turn your life around inna heartbeat. It can make what any seam a hard time into a good just by finding your loved one. Computers with @CAPS3 risk. You can try to pay your bills online and send your money to the wrong websites. That can get you identity stolen. You can also put all your information online and you @MONTH1 not think a lot of when they really do. You can put your fone number, address and manymore and people @MONTH1 contact you act like someone else and @MONTH1 you or even kill you. @CAPS3 people thinks it very but it isn't, @CAPS4 watch out what yo do. The computer a big problem on why the is @CAPS4 @CAPS3 people don't like to go out to buy stuff anymore, they rather just go on the computer and shop. That is one reason why you begun to be way to You @MONTH1 go @MONTH1 just stay home and just play games online. @CAPS4 @CAPS3 more american on you do both just be lazy. At the everyhting it's your computers a useful @CAPS4 do pros not the",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
296,1,"Dear local newspaper, my name is @PERSON1, & I think that computers are very usefull and that people learn a lot from them. The computer is very smart and is probably the best technology invented. Computers help when you need to know something about a certian person. @CAPS3 example is it helps students with homework. Last reason of why I think computers are useful is that they help you get a hold of family and friends. First example of why I think computers are usefull is they help you if you need facts about a person. One example is you want to go to your a policeman and your leader tells you to meet him at @ORGANIZATION1, so you go there and he tells you the person they are going after but you dont know anything about him and you need a computer to see what he is convicted for and see his criminal record. @CAPS3 example is if your teacher wants you to do a report about"" @PERSON3 lopez,"" but you don't know anything about him so you would use the computer and read about his life. Last example is if you want to learn about your countries history and the leaders behind it then you would use the computer. Second example is students and their homework. One example is when your teacher says ""I want a essay on @PERSON2 and I want it to be neat."" But you have very handwriting and you cant do it on paper you will have to use word or a writing program on @CAPS3 computer. @CAPS3 example is if you forgot to write down your homework in your agenda or something then you can go on the school website and see what your homework is. Last example is if your teacher says find the book about the @CAPS1 and you go to the library but everyone is taken but you have one by tomorrow. So you can go on the computer and find a place that is closest to you that has the book. Last reason of why I think computers are helpfull in this society is because they help you get a hold of your friends & family. One example is if it takes to long to write letters to each other so you run use online messengers for example like ""@CAPS2"" or even ""facebook and myspace."" @CAPS3 example is if you don't send the letter to the write addrees so what you do is go online and ask a friend or family member. Last example is if want to see the person and talk to them so you can go webcam with them and even talk. I hope you agree with my opinion and think computers are usefull an also good for people. It helps people to learn about others and information about them. Second it helps students with school and homework, and lastly because they help you get a hold of family and friends. Therefore, I hope you like my letter and enjoy my opinion.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21132,8," Laughter is what connects me @PERSON1 my friends. It's a very important aspect in any kind of relatioship. I know that almost all the memories I have are of my friends making me laugh, @PERSON1 we have been friends for a very long time. One of my favorite funny memories is the time me @PERSON1 two of my friends went to @LOCATION1 @PERSON1 stopped at @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2... We sort of had a hard time getting out. Me @PERSON1 my friends, @PERSON1, went to @LOCATION1 to do a cultural performance at @ORGANIZATION1. When we were done we started heading back home. @PERSON1 kept complaining about needing to use a restroom. Her dad told her to wait until we got to @LOCATION2 so we could stop somewhere. @PERSON1 @PERSON1 I suggested @ORGANIZATION2. By the time we got to @ORGANIZATION2 was doint the potty dance. @PERSON1 @PERSON1 I got in line to order ice cream cones dipped in chocolate. While we were waiting @PERSON1 was searching for the restroom. After approximately four minutes of searching, @PERSON1 finally asked the lady working behind the counter where the bathroom was. She handed @PERSON1 a key with a large bulky wreath attached to it @PERSON1 told her it was outside behind the building. @PERSON1 took the key @PERSON1 sprinted to what appeared to be double dorrs. Little did @PERSON1 know that only the left door opens. She ran straight into the right door @PERSON1 fell over. we all started cracking up laughing... Especially @PERSON1. She laughed so hard that she didn't quite make it to the restroom. Instead she had an ""accident"" on the floor in @ORGANIZATION2 @ORGANIZATION2. When you can laugh with your friends about things that might not seem funny to other people, such as, wetting yourself in public, it only makes your friendship stronger. Laughing is a huge important benefit in any kind of relationship. It strengthens the relationships you already have @PERSON1 it helps build new ones also.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4775,2,"Yes we should keep the books,music,movies,an magazines.     The magazines an music might not be a good thing for some us for must people use music to consutrate on doing work an magazines help us on getting topics for class work. why would some one take books or any thing that help us in life, so the person who wants to take book away should live the books or anything eles alone. So to this yes we should keep the books,music,movies, an magazines on the shelfs. We need to start fighting for what we want an how we want it should not be know ones eles chioc to deside what is good for us.",2,2,,2,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1023,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I'm writeing to you today to show how I feel on how computers have an effect on people. Computers have a very strong effect on people. Computers can cost people to gain weight, cost problem to there eyes and you couldn't pay bills. We all know that we all gain weight at some point in our life, and we can lose that weight. But if you on a computer for six hours a day you dont have time to cook a real meal. So what do you do, you eat alot of junk food. Do you really want to be the reason why someone is over weight? Picture yourself looking at bright computer sreen for six hour non-stop. Do you think that your eyes are going to be fine I disagree. When I really tried I cant even keep my eyes open and I'm pretty sure you cant say that your eyes are going to be fine when you just got looking at a bright sreen in the dark. Can you see yourself quiting you just because you say your going to work at home. But you dont do your work, and get fried, now how are you going to pay your bill with no money? Once your power goes out you have noting to do because you got fired all because of you computer. Now what are you going to do with your life? Well that all. I would like to thank you for your time. And I hope you agree with me for my three reasons you can gain weight, eye problem and how are you going to pay your bill?",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
764,1,"Dear local Newspaper, To my understanding computers have been putting a bad effect on people of all ages. In my opinion staying on the computer all day can cause you to miss out on outdoor activities. Also if you sit on a chair all day, honestly what will happen to you? You will become less active. In past experiences I have learned that if you get interested in computer game it will come very addicting. Computer put negative affects on people of all and I think we should stop and think about what we are doing. Most likely if you stay on the computer all day you will indeed on activities such as sports. @CAPS2 example @PERCENT1 of americans play soccer. In the beatiful fall when the leaves are beatifully changing you will miss out on playing soccer and the beaty of the leaves because of the computer you can't get your eyes off of. Another breathtaking adventure that you @MONTH1 miss out on is hiking. Hiking can be amazing when you get to the top and you see on the houses that have people like you (cach potatoes) sitting inside on the computer. Simple activities can be lost because of an addicting game you call fun. The computer is like a cause and effect. You @MONTH1 think you just playing farm town or chating on facebook, but in feture you will be missing out on the beauty of nature and sports. To connect @CAPS1's with missing out on sports because of the computer that will cause you to become over weight. A recent study showed that @PERCENT2 of children are obeased because of computer games. You @MONTH1 be thinking how, but I have a friend named named, @PERSON1 and he used to love to play out side and play sports until came out @CAPS2 the computer. Now he way @NUM1 pounds and he is only @NUM2. Honestly sitting in a chair all day will cause you to not be active and gain weight. Do you want this to happen to you? Help me tell others how computers cause a negative effect on others. Lastly playing on the compter or chatting with friends on @ORGANIZATION1 can cause you to @CAPS2 example if your talking to your girlfriend in spain who is there @CAPS2 callage I garentee your going to put off school work, @CAPS3 and other @CAPS4 that need to be done. In the end it will end up being time @CAPS2 bed and you got nothing done weather it was because you were trying to get to level @NUM3 or talking with your girlfriend you will have nothing accomplished. If your not yet a resent scientific study reported that six hours on the computer per day @CAPS2 one week can @CAPS5 your vision from a @NUM4 @NUM4 to @NUM6 @NUM6. If you keep it up now it @MONTH1 not seem bad but @NUM8 hours looking at the computer can kill your eyes. Would you rather be blind or not use the computer because or what could happen? All in all the computer is a bad thing such as useful piece of technology can cause you to miss out on events such as sports. Also it leads to being overweight sense your not getting active. Finally the computer is bad @CAPS2 your eyes and can cause you to procastonate. Help me help yourself avoid all of these bad effects caused from the computer.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16395,6,"There were many obstacles the builders of the Empire State Building faced such as the high winds, and how they could dock the dirigibles when it is against the law to fly an aircraft to low near urban areas. one obstacle the builders faced was the safety of the dirigibles anchoring above busy streets filled with people and high winds. Most dirigibles out of the United States used hydrogen rather then helium, and hydrogen is highly flamable, so any foreign dirigible that was anchored at the Empire State building would cause a safety issue because the high winds at the top of the building could cause an accident to occur causing the dirigible to blow up and potentially endanger pedestrians. Another obstacle the builders faced is the law that made it illegal for dirigibles to ever dock at building because it was illegal for aircrafts to fly to low near urban areas and it would have been a long process to ever get the government to let them.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7186,3,"The setting of the area where the cyclist was biking effects him because it makes him weaker. Since the cyclist takes the long route, He is in the desert for a longer period of time. Being in extreme heat can cause a person to suffer from major dehydration. We know this was the case for the cyclist because he says, “…but not before I gathered up a few pebbles and stuck them in my mouth. I’d read once that sucking on stones helps take your mind off thirst…” This @CAPS1 is saying that the cyclist put stones in his mouth to get his mind off of how thirsty he was. I think this @CAPS1 is explaining exactly how dehydrated the cyclist actually was. If he was willing to put filthy stones in his mouth to help him get through his dehydration, he was pretty thirsty. Another thing that effected how thirsty the cyclist got was how hard he worked which was also a feature of the setting since during the end of his trip, he met rough terrain, he exerted more energy which made him sweat even more than he was. This made him @NUM1 more dehydrated. This story is explaining how the features of your environment can either make or break you.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18396,7,"There was a kid named @PERSON2 who was always very patient. He always waited for every else and he never complained. That morning @PERSON2 just woke up and so did his five brothers and sisters. They all were trying to get ready for school within an hour. All of the bath rooms were taken up but @PERSON2 didn't complain he actually used up that time to clean his room and make his bed. @PERSON2 was a little bit late to school. The @CAPS1 teacher @PERSON1 said come here and the class said ooooo!!! Ha! Ha! @PERSON2 is in trouble. @PERSON1 said come here and @PERSON2 put his head down and walked as if he was pulling a ton. During lunch @PERSON2 was at the end of the line. Once @PERSON2 had gotten up there, there was no more food it was all gone. The lunch lady saw how upset he was and she gave him a special lunch. Once @PERSON2 got home his family threw a patient party. @PERSON2 was honered and also happy. That night was the best for @PERSON2",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15654,6,"In the excerpt The Mooring Mast by @ORGANIZATION1 building faced obstacles in attempts to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was that it would add stress to the building's frame. To accommodate the stress sixty thousand dollars worth of modifications, and strengthening would have to be done. Another obstacle was that dirigibles from outside the United States used hydrogen rather than helium and hydrogen is flammable. if something like the German Hindenburg being destroyed by fire was to happened in New York the consequences would be much worse. Also, the wind would be an obstacle as well. It would cause the back of the ship to swivel all around the mooring mast. One of the most overlooked obstacles was that of the law against airships flying too low over urban areas, and it was illegal for the ship to even tie up to the building. Clearly many obstacles to place in the attempts to allow dirigible to dock on the Empire State Building.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
511,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think a computer is not something bad for you. A computer can help you do many things @CAPS1 could help you learn, chat with friends, and @CAPS1 can entertain you. A computer can get you sucessful in life @CAPS1 helps you learn a lot of things such as computer engineering. Computer engineering is a job that pays you good money to fix computers. @CAPS1 is very challenging at first, but when you look @CAPS1 up on search websites you'll find all your answers. Chatting is the number one thing kids, adults , and teenagers do. @CAPS1 is good and bad in a way, @CAPS1 is good because because your phone bill wont be that high up so you save minutes. @CAPS1 is bad because @CAPS1 can also ruin your eyes just remeber dont get to close to the screen. The computer is all about fun, you have millions of websites you can go on. To have fun for example @CAPS2.com, @LOCATION1, and @CAPS3.com those are the three main ones I go on they are so fun. They have tons of games for kids and for adults too. I Have proven my point that computers are not bad for you because they can help you learn, they lower your phone bill, and its also very fun. Yes I know they might take exercise time away, or hurt your eyes but who cares just make up a time limit so you have time to exercise. Do not get to close to the screen because @CAPS1 can hurt your eyes.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9805,4,"The author ended the story this way because the plant represents new beginnings in which Saeng needs. Seang failed her test & needed some comfort. She went to the greenhouse & spent @MONEY1 on a hibiscus plant that reminded her of her home. It the same time the hibiscus plant reminded her that her new home is another new beginning. The hibiscus plant gives Saeng better hopes that starting over can be a good thing & that the next time she takes the test, she'll pass.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16043,6,"Based on the excerpt it is evident that the builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there.One of the reasons for the ideas failure was the fact that there was already a law in place making it illegal for a dirigible to even approach the area, as it states in paragraph @NUM1. Also, it could've of been an extreme fire hazard if a blimp had ever reached the Empire State Building. This is proved in paragraph @NUM2, where it states, ""the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by fire..."" which caused the owners to realize, ""how much worse that accident could have been in New York."" On top of all this, weather proposed an even bigger problem. Violent air currents made the idea of a mooring mast was ""neither practical nor safe."" I believe the most important reason that the idea failed was because technology was simply advancing beyond predictions. In paragraph @NUM3, it says, ""Dirigibles instead of becoming the transportation of the future, had given way to airplanes.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
874,1,"Almost every family has access to a computer. They have become a part of life and a way to be a part of life outside of your house, even if you have to stay at home. Computers are a source of vast knowledge from millions of sources. They have already caused exponential advancement. Overall, computers have a positive effect. on a rainy day, @NUM1 students will spend time on their computers. out of those students, @PERCENT1 will be on sites such as A.I.M.(@CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3), @CAPS4, @CAPS5, or @ORGANIZATION2. Even if they can't use their phone or get out of the house, they can communicate with friends, old and new. Teens and adults use the @CAPS6 to talk in friends they haven't seen for up to @NUM2 years. People will talk to eachother more, building more relationships and better conversational skills. Over @NUM3 of the sites used by teens are based on @CAPS8 networking. To be able to easily have a conversation with someone miles away is a sign of tremendous advancement. @ORGANIZATION1 is a multi-million dollar company. @PERSON1, a for @ORGANIZATION1, says that sites like @ORGANIZATION1 have skyrocketed in popularity over the @DATE1. More and more people are putting down their @PERSON2 dictionary to type the word into @LOCATION1, where it is accompanied by a pronunciation and found more easily. Students use computers for information on school reports in @CAPS7, @CAPS8 @CAPS9, @CAPS10, or @CAPS11. Information can be found in any subject. There was a survey taken to see which is used more often, books with a specific subject or computers for information or various subjects. Computers are used overwhelmingly more often. They're quicker than books and it's easier to search for a of resource an the @CAPS6. And say sight of particular interest or exceptionally usefull can be added to your favorites. Computers are more practical than books. Pictures of scientific laboratories where space shuttles are sent to the moon have @NUM4 main component computers. Adds from @ORGANIZATION3 show that they're computers are getting smaller and smaller. There's a laptop that will fit in an envelope and a handheld touch screen computer that can almost fit in your pocket. You can type papers and assignments so they're more ledgible. Computers can even score tests. Advancement is centered around computers. Before computers, so many things we do now would seem impossible. But computers open up a realm of possibilities. Typing is faster then hand-writing in some cases and papers can be saved electronically. If our country keeps advancing at the rate, than it is possible to have computers that do maindain chores such as taking out the trash or washing the dishes. There can be computers that talk bark to you like a real conversation. People can learn more and more information and personally advance in intelligence. I look at a computer and think of progress. There are points of computers that are not ideal, but overall, computers are benefitial to society. In a computer, you have access to friends old and new and information from millions of sources. Most of all, computers represent progress and advancement I see no direct harm from computers.",6,6,,12,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21549,8," In the story i am going to tell you, it involves one of my friends and myself. After school one day meself and a buddy of mine went to my house for the night. It was alot of fun, we started off playing video games and laugh really hard when one of us would die in the game. Then after awhile of that it was dinner time and my mom told us to get off and come eat. it was really fun at dinner, we throw stuff at each other when my parents weren't looking. It was a blasted, until dinner was over and we didn't have anything to throw at each other anymore. But now it was time to start playing games again. Now at this time it was about teen o'clock and we were getting really tried so we put in the movie step brother and watched it. It was the best time we had all day we were laughing non stop at everything that was said in the movie and it was great. We both loved it and really wanted to watch it the next morning. But before we could my friends dad was there to pick him up so that was the end of the best time with my friend and the funnyest time ever too. It was great we laught non stop the whole night. Now that just shows that laughter is the shortest distance between two people.",15,15,,30,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3596,2,"Should They or Should They @CAPS1?     What do you think? Music, books, movies and many others have been questioned either about there apperence or what they say. Most people bring up the fact that young children should @CAPS1 be hearing this or haveing to read about it at such a young age, but the children have ideas of their own. In my personal opinion i do @CAPS1 think that they should have to be taken off the shelf or from being sold. What does everyone else think though? Is it a bad idea to keep them up and let the kids learn about it at such a young age or does it help teach them @CAPS1 to be like that?     One of the main reasons why I think it should be left alone as is so that the children can read it. They must learn the good from the bad sometime. Its better that children learn at a young age and just trying to keep things from them will make them want it more. Lets use music for example, some music is nothing but screaming and cursing. In real life though alot of kids have to listen to there parents fight and yell. So, why dont they get the choice to listen to it whenever they want to?     There are also the bad things to keeping them out on the shelvs. As a mother and also a teenager I feel like as if  I should have the choice to do as I please but at the same time there is no way I would ever let my daughter hear or read some of the things I do. That get me to my next point. If you really have a problem with some of the things out there why would you let your childern get it. As being a teegager I would go out and buy a lot of music I shouldnt be listening to, but even if my daughter was @NUM1 there is no way I would let her get it. After all I am the parent right? I have every say in what my daughter can and can't do. So do you over your own child. If other parents have no say in what there child gets just because they don't care, well thats @CAPS1 your problem.      There should,however, be age limits on what some are allowed to get parent permission or @CAPS1. Books with sex scenes and murder should @CAPS1 be allowed into they @NUM2 year old books. Sure, teenagers think they know it all but they still shouldnt be allowed to read something that adults do. Most @NUM1 year olds don't hear about all the drugs, sex, or teen prganacy. As much as they should get information on it, have there parents pick out what book they should read to find out about that kind of thing. I think that in every library that has sexual books and alot of curse words should be put in a specific location that only adults can get to. Video games have to put an age limit on things so why shouldn't books have to have the same exact thing? The only reason they have'nt done anything so far is beacuse @CAPS1 enought parents care.This is your chance to get up and show them that you want to make a change, that you won't let your kids hear about things without your knowing.     This brings me to my conclusion. Where are the parents out there? Why arn't you stepping in and showing people the right way to live? Make your nearest library have age limits on what the little young ones can read. See if the books you are letting your son/daughter check out are age worthy or @CAPS1. Last but @CAPS1 least try to talk your libraien into makeing groups of books. Some for the youngre kids some for the older. Woulnt kill for you to put your say in and try to get this kind of thing under control and @CAPS1 just removed. Why remove other people's interests when you can just put an age limit on it and @CAPS1 let your child get a hold of it. Today is the day!!Make a say!!",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21432,8," Laughter forms a bond between two people; a good laugh can turn an uncomfortable situation into a pleasant one. A fantastic example of the power of laughter would be the first time I met my mother's boyfriend. My father died when I was thirteen and since then I had stubbornly resented each new man my mother attempted to bring into my life. This iron clad resolution ended when my two sisters and myself sat down to dinner with @ORGANIZATION1. One @DATE1 @TIME1, my mother announced that she had invited her new boyfriend over meet her children. My sisters and I were forced to scrub the house from top to bottom in order to prepare for our guest, while my mother cooked a giant pan of lasagna. When the house was clean and the dinner was cooked, I dressed for this most grievous occasion. My obsessive compulsive mother made me change clothes at least thirty times before she deemed me presentable enough to meet the man whose existence I was beginning to despise. At precisely six thirty in the @TIME2, @PERSON1's blue @ORGANIZATION2 pulled into our driveway. I shot my mother a steely eyed glare as I opened the door for the buffoon; thus, a most dreaded dinner began.  My determined hatred began to soften as soon as I saw @PERSON1, but it was by no means expired. @PERSON1 was tall and tan, a few years older than my mother judging by his wrinkle strewn skin and the silver streaked through his dark hair and matching mustache. He had the sort friendly, pleasant appearance that makes him immediately likable. My now giddy mother and her sullen children sat down to eat with the cheerful stranger. My younger sister warmed up to him first. She and @PERSON1 share a love of snakes, lizards and all things I deem ""creepy crawly."" A common interest brought them together before I knew it. My older sister adored @PERSON1 after a lively conversation about football ensued. @PERSON1 and my sister discovered they were both @CAPS1 fans, and consequently formed a bond over their team.  After winning my siblings over, @PERSON1 tried to charm me into liking him to. He attempted to talk of movies, music, sports, animals, even politics, but nut nothing he said could melt my icy disposition. I was determined to hate him from the start of the @TIME2, and no amount of charisma would break my persistent stubbornness. Eventually he gave up on me, and focused on entertaining the people who did like him. Over dessert he jumped into a stand-up comedy routine cleverly disguised as a story about his recent flight to @LOCATION1. He went on about the ridiculous security checks, the overly cheerful flight attendants who really hate their job, and the corny safety videos. I had tears of laughter in my eyes before I remembered that I had made a solemn vow to loath @PERSON1. I fought hard to resume my former demeanor, but my will did not stand a chance against @ORGANIZATION1's sense of humor. The triumphant smile and slick wink he shot me from across the table told me that he had won. Sure enough, we were the best of friends before the night ended.   Eventually @PERSON1 and I conversed about movies and music and found we had similar tastes in both, but our common interests had nothing to do with our friendship. They simply fueled the fire. The power of laughter brought us together like a magnet and a washer. Just as the shortest distance between to points is a straight line, laughter was the straight line between myself and @PERSON1. He and my mother are still together, and ever since he came into our lives, laughter has been our constant companion.",27,20,50.0,50,,,,6.0,5.0,6.0,6.0,6.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3565,2,"'@ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1'          @CAPS1  people have @CAPS1 types of genres of books, music, movies, etc., that they like as well as @CAPS1 they don't like. Meaning that its up to you what you like and you are @ORGANIZATION1 forces to read or listen to anything you don't want to. Books, music, and other entertaining things are here as an @ORGANIZATION1 so if you dont like it then you don't have to deal with it.     I feel that it is @ORGANIZATION1 neccessary that books should be removed from the shelves  just because someone has gotten offended @ORGANIZATION1 it. You were @ORGANIZATION1 told that it is a must to read that book and it wasn't the company nor the author's fault that you rented the book and you felt insulted. Most likely there were @ORGANIZATION1 directing the story towards you so why get all worked up over something that has happen to you and take it out on the media?  You chose it @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1 @ORGANIZATION1. Why make the company lose investment over something that could be easily taken care of @ORGANIZATION1 simply taking it back where you got it from?      I have read @CAPS1 books, listened to @CAPS1 songs, and seen lots of movies that weren't in my best interest but I didn't make them stop saling them because i'm pretty sure someone out there likes it. Why stop someone elses enjoyment because of my uninterest? It's really @ORGANIZATION1 that neccesary. And that's the problem in the world today, people take little situations into a big catastraphy for no reason. If you don't like it then don't get it. People need to put their feet in the company's shoes and realize that if it was them, they would understand.      Books, magazines, music, movies, etc., are made for everyone in the world to make entertainment for those who are interested. Taking them off the shelves would be more than unnessecary just because some person doesn't like it. People have different opinions about life and that's what makes every indiviual different from one another. So why ruin other people's fun just to get what you want?     As I stated before for it is @ORGANIZATION1 neccessary to remove an item from the shelves because someone has taken offense to something. It's @ORGANIZATION1 the company's fault so just simply don't buy it or take it back. Things would be so much better. Get the items that best fits you and leave the others that don't on the shelves.",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1533,1,"Dear local Newspaper, Have you ever wondered why people spend so much time on the computer. The effect of people a computer is good and had because the good parts you can communicate with people in far away places, like you can talk to someone you went to @LOCATION1 with in @LOCATION1 and / or @CAPS1 @LOCATION1 with. The bad part is that if your on the computer all the time then you are neglecting time with family and friends. When you are spending all of you time on the computer you are becoming a couch potatoe and its very unhealty of also a good reason is a family member moved and you had to communicate by webcam so if you like live in @LOCATION2 and you have all you family here in @STATE1 other by sending letter and by sending pictures but they cant see how you act and by phone you can only hear voices you can see anything. A lot people disagree because alot people think computers are a big waste so thats all i have to say on the subject.",3,3,,6,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10136,4,"The author concludes the story with ""when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself...,"" because it offers the reader a conclusion. That passage means that Saeng will try talking her drivers test again once she has adjusted to her new life in a new country. Once she can find familiarity in her surroundings she will feel more at home. Throughout the story, her detatchment from Vietnam makes her feel alone. The hibiscus plant is what first offers her a sense of comfort, ""It felt smooth and cool... just as she had known it would feel."" The ending paragraph shows that Saeng will find more comfort in @LOCATION2 than just a plant and a couple of geese.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1074,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 have been complates about computer in are society. They say they are keeping children inside doing nothing, but really they are helping us so much! The internet is where you can resurch anything and tones of helpful ideas come up. @CAPS3, @CAPS5 helps us with hand-eye cordination. Lastly, computers alowe us to stay in touch with people who are far away. Like last year my friend went to poland and we were able to talk threw are computers! So lastly join me and help the world know that computers are good! First off I would like to say the computer is a good source of information. How would you like @CAPS5 if you still had to read scrolls from grene when you could look at on online? Not to manchin not any you need to know some thing really fast like now your stalk is befor a big meeting. Then all you have to do is simple type in what you want to know then bam! Just like that you know, and off to you meeting. Secondly, using the mouse and keys on a computer can incless your hand-eye cordination. Like my parents aways say when i'm typeing on esay, @NUM1 words per minute is a good minute. @CAPS3, out of @NUM2 kids get better hand-eye cordination after geting good on the computer. Alot of times kids have a ten of cordination, but I have a that if kids on the thing will change. Most importantly the computers and faraway like I menchind befor I stayed intouch with my polish buddy @CAPS3, a lot of people don't have cell phones so they have an @CAPS4, gmail, facebook, my space, or a twitter. All of this alows us to stay in touch and keep us up in are friends lives. This is very important because if we are social the we will get out with are friends and do stuff, wich is very important for are. In conclusion, @CAPS5 is good for are society to have computers in are lives. @CAPS5 will help us in the future, we will get good grades on project because of are sources. We will be heathy with hand eye cordination, from the mouse and keybord. Lastly we will have many friends. thes are all very important in. So keep computers!",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
11938,5,"In the memoir ""Home: The Blueprints Of Our Lives"" the author, Narciso Rodriguez, creates a very loving mood.When Narciso Rodriguez is talking about his home he writes, ""Within it's walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home, the very heart of which was my kitchen."" This shows his love for his kitchen. @PERSON2 shows his love for cooking when he writes, ""My parents both shared cooking duties and un wittingly passed on to me their rich culinory skills and a love for cooking that is still with me today."" @PERSON2 provides us the love that he has for his parents when he states, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1 @PERSON2 tells us that his parents were very loving when he writes, ""My parents always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we consider family, knowing that they would do the same for us.""",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
302,1,"Dear @CAPS1 times, @CAPS2 you think computers benefit society? Well I think so! There are countless reasons why computers are both resourceful and helpful. Many citizens in our own community of watertown think computers are a great resource for many things while others disagree with this completely. Computers can benefit society because you can learn many new things on the internet, also you can interact with your friends and family, and lastly there are many applications used for business. On both a computer and the internet there are more than @NUM1 million things you can learn. When you are struggling with homework a computer is a great resource. You can quickly open @CAPS3.com and search any topic at any time. For example, if you did not know a conversion it is easily found on the internet. Another thing you can be taught or informed about is news. There are websites such as nytimes.com and cnn.com that give you daily news. I personally use these websites weekly. On the computer you can find vacation sports you want to learn about and go to. When my family was planning our trip to @ORGANIZATION1 in @LOCATION1 we used the computer constantly. In the end, computers can teach you many things. Secondly you can interact with people on the internet in many ways. These include social networking websites, webchat and email. Social networking websites are a great way to connect to family members and friends from the past. Websites that were created for this include: facebook, myspace, and twitter. These free websites let you add friends, send messages, and post pictures. Web chatting is a way to video people. You can personally see someone from acroos the @ORGANIZATION1 from your webcam. Lastly, emailing is a great way to inform people. You can write a visual letter to one of your friends. In conclusion, the computer is one excellent way to interact. Lastly, the computer is used for business. An application called microsoft office is used in countless bussinesses, microsoft office word, powerpoint, excel and @CAPS4. Each of these are used to plan, sell, present, manage, and write about products. Microsoft is something you should download in the near future. Business also use webchatting, as I previously state, for conference calls. A production company can be face to face with a company from china without being in the room with them. This makes it much easier than to fly half way across the @ORGANIZATION1. Finally, computers are used when manufacturing a product in or at a business. Work sites such as @CAPS5 companies use computers to control their machines. I know that the @ORGANIZATION2 factory uses computers in their factory due to the fact that I watche the show unwrapped about them on @CAPS5 @CAPS6. In the end computers are a necessary item in a business. In conslusion, computers have a great affect on people. The can teach people many new and exciting things they did not know. Also, connect humans with each from half way across the @ORGANIZATION1. Lastly, businesses would not run well without a computer. Computers can benefit society because you can learn many new things on the internet. Also you can interact with your friends and family, and there are many applications used for business. If I were an expert I would have nothing to worry about concerning computers. They are a magnificent thing. @CAPS2 you have the same belief and understanding as me?",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7221,3,"The setting sffects the cyclist by the need and comfort of riding down with no infrastructure around or people that most be the best mood nice and colun no cars and just him and the beautiful sky to ride with, like if there is infrastructure he must have to watch for people, cars and just have to day to streetsigns and act. So thats outing  the feature of the setting would affect the cyclsit.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19086,7,"It was @DATE1 and I could see the snow pouring down as I drank hot chocolate. I saw our @DATE1 tree is was full of presents, I couldn’t wait till I could open them. I’ve been wanting a wii since @DATE1 but I never got one. But that didn’t stop me from hoping. So I wish I got one this year. After a while my parents said @CAPS2 can open our gifts. “@CAPS1” I screamed, I quickly tore the paper off the presents and saw that I got a makeup set, a digital camera, and many more. But not a wii. I was frustrated. So I asked my mom if @CAPS2 could buy the wii tomorrow. But she replied “@CAPS2 can’t afford it. @CAPS2 will buy it when @CAPS2 get enough money. Well I was very patient so I guess I could wait. As @CAPS2 all enjoyed our @DATE1 @CAPS2 watched tv. Then after a week or so my parents got their paycheck, so my mom said @CAPS2 could go out and buy the wii. “@CAPS3” thank you “mom” I screamed. When @CAPS2 arrived at the?? I got the wii and it ??, which was @MONEY1. I couldn’t believe it, my patient finally paid off. Now I got my new wii, and @CAPS4 enjoying every second of it.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3877,2,"Censorship has become a major topic when it comes to books, music, and movies.  These are being censored because people don't want young kids to read, listen, or watch these materials.  What about the adults?  Books, music, and movies being taken off of the shelfs in libraries because of censorship, is not fair to the adults.     Books now are being rewriten so they won't have offevsive language in them.  To @CAPS1 A @CAPS2 is a classic example of this.  Changing the offensive language in this book would totally ruin it.  This book is mainly about the racism that whites had towards the african americans, and if that was altered the readers wouldn't get a sense of that racism.  If libraries have books that are censored they should put them on a shelf just for censored books so adults could still be able to read them.     Music is another peice of material that censorship has gotten a hold of.  Offensive language is being taken out  of songs and uncensored cd's are not being sold in some stores because of censorship.  Some adults like the original songs with the original words.  Libraries should carry both the explicit and the clean verions of cd's to they some them that are suitable for kids and the ones that adults can listen to.     Movies are another peice of material that censorship has taken over.  They are being rated @CAPS3, suitable for all ages, @NUM1, suitable for children @NUM2 and older, and rated @CAPS4, suitable for people @NUM3 and older.  These rating are good guidelines, but parents should be the ones to make the final decision on whether or not their child should be able to watch a certain movie.  Libraries should have all kind of movies on their shelfs.  If a twelve year old kid wants to watch a @NUM1 or rated @CAPS4 movie, he or she should be able to with the consint of a parent or guardian.     Censoship is a good thing but it doesn't need to be taken to the extreme.  If an adult wants to read a censored book, he or she should still be able to read it at their local libary and if a young kid wants to watch a rated @CAPS4 movie, he or she should be able to with the consint of a parent or guardian.",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4027,2,"I think certain books such as offensive books shouldn't be remove. I dont think so because that's how some kids learn better and read better. Kid's dont like reading boring books. Things like music, movies, and magazines are interesting to us.      If this world didn't have movies kids wouldn't read books. Most of these kids now a days read books because they watch the movie to the story. Some kids like listening to music while reading. I'm glade people invited these thing's. I feel like if people didn't invited these things this world would be boring.     Magazines are also great because they help people start to read books and so on. Magazines are entataining to people. I say they are because they have pictures, glossip, and much more. Magazines are good to read it help alot of people to read better.     It's also bad because kids read it and start doing what they say in the magazine. Some books are good some are bad. I say that because some books get out of control with cursin and the cover of the books well pictures. Some arthurs write good things and some write bad things.     Hope you get something out of what i wrote. This is how i feel about books, magazines, music, and movies. I love to read and listen to all of them. I enjoy books alot.                             P.S  @ORGANIZATION1",4,3,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3761,2,"History is bond to repeat itself right? Well, we must make sure that this is a great opportunity to ensure our future @LOCATION2. By censuring items on certain shelves is like when your mother makes you leave the kitchen so you don't get burned. This is just a way to protect the minds of young ones, which are like little sponges soaking everything they see or hear up.      The effects of what @MONTH1 come are far worst than making it so an adult must reach a little high for the book they want to read. Making it so only certain material is available to young children and teenagers is a way to prevent the same racism, poverty, assinations, and religions protests of the past. The @ORGANIZATION1 prides itself on that children are the future, well, why not put in the effort to prevent the from seeing what the see or read?      I wish that when I was younger many people were trying to stop causes of such things as teen pregancy, drugs, alcohol, and abuse. But, there wasn't, there was a thirteen year old girl in my class who got pregant. She thought it was cool, because she read it in a book. This book she read wasn't hers it was her mothers and she left it on the table to take back to the library. Her mother forgot and @PERSON2 read that book. She told a bunch of friends and me about it. @PERSON2 said the book explained what guys wanted. She did that because of a made up story her mother checked out at a library.     This story makes me think about why they should put books on a different shelf or higher up. I have two younger sisters who already have to worry about being picked on; because of their clothes, their religion, the fact that they only listen to certain music. They should be able to go to school, and not worry about the book that they @MONTH1 grab at the library. My sisters are the inspiration for me to make the world in which we live a better place,well, my brother is too. But, my point is they should have to live up to the expectations of others, or the what's cool.      By censuring what children are reading or listening to is a way to make them be children. When they look at magazines or listen to music, they make discissions that could effect the rest of their lives. Just like how @ORGANIZATION2 has a new song out. The lyrics are inapporiate of many young children, but you can look it up on youtube. The lyrics of many songs or singles that have just been released are astounding. These songs show us why children are having children, or doing drugs. It is all caused by what they see or hear around them.      Our country has hit an economical low, and this is caused by the youth not taking life seriously. I think that if we could focus on the factors in hand, such as censuring we @MONTH1 accomplish something no one else has. To show the world @LOCATION2's youth is the future, and it is looking pretty bright. We each should take proud it making the children learn better, act better, and above all make their dreams come true.      If we have more students reading stuff such as, ' @LOCATION1, or To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2,' and enjoy them it would show that their dreams can come true fiction or non-fiction. It doesn't aways matter as long as your reading something that isn't stopping your mind to grow and develop fully.      Many of the young women in my sophmore class have read, ' the @CAPS3 series,' and they loved it which made them read other vamiper books. It shows we can read stuff that is stimulating and not just to make us act like celebrates who party all the time or go to jail. By looking at those magazines or reading books about those people teenagers think that everyone is doing it. To tell you the truth more people aren't doing it and have found other ways to stay occupied. We have say in whether or not the future is good or bad why not make the choice easier by elimating the ones we would choose for ourselves at the age of children picking up the books or reading the magazines; about @PERSON1 who just drove around with her baby on her lap. What choice are you choosing for you life?     In my personal oppion I believe children and adults should have separate televisions shows, magazines, and books. We want children to mature without the lies that everyone lives this way. These are the reasons as well as more to why censuring in libraries would help the impact of lies to children lessen. To add one final thing, would you tell everything you know to a five year old if you knew they would retain every word? I don't think I would want them to mature that fast, otherwise what is the point of life, or school. To go and learn what you already know",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
20929,8," A couple of months ago i was hanging out with my freind @CAPS1. It was a @DATE1 and i came to her to spend the @TIME1.At first we were extreamly bored so we went on a walk to go find something to do.We found our friend dylan at the skatepark and we stopped to talk to him for a while. After we had hung out there for about two hours we headed back up to her house.When we opened the door her sister started freaking out because we left so she got stucked with there younger brother @PERSON1. @CAPS1 didn't yell back, she didn't want the drama. Her sister got even more mad because jesssika was not showing a reaction to what her sister was doing. By ten minutes she exploded and started throwing herself around and freaking out. Me and @CAPS1 looked at each other and stated laughing really reallyhard because how funny her sister looked. @TIME1 after her mom had calmed the sistuation down, @CAPS1 and I made a @CAPS3 bed on her bedroom floor and when we were falling asleep we bothbursted out in laughter it was the funnest @TIME1 i have had in a long time. (:",13,16,,29,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19271,7,"When my @CAPS2 and I got into the checkout line at @CAPS1, @CAPS6 heard impatient groans and signs around us. Almost every line was extremely long and the whole store was packed. I groaned along with everybody else, annoyed at the long wait. My @CAPS2 continued her cheerful whistling, and didn’t seem to notice. “@CAPS2 this is going to take forever!” I whined. “@CAPS3’t be so negative. It’s not that long.” @CAPS4 replied. @CAPS4 saw my responding glare and chuckled. “@CAPS5 about @CAPS6 play a game?” @CAPS6 continued a game of eye spy for @NUM1 minutes or so as the line slowly progressed. After @CAPS6 finished our game, @CAPS4 continued to make small talk, and then checked her list to make sure @CAPS6 had everything while I played a game on her phone. Soon @CAPS6 were up next and I smiled in relief, and thought to myself it was a good thing @CAPS2 kept us occupied! As @CAPS6 walked out of the store my @CAPS2 said, “@CAPS7, when you’re patient, you get food!” @CAPS6 both laughed and drove home.",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15014,6,"When the Empire State Building was conceived, it was planned as the world's tallest building, taller even than the new Chrysler Building that was being constructed at forty-second  Street. and lexington Avenue in New York. The top of the Empire State Building be more than ornamental, more than a spire or dome or a pyramid. The age of dirigibles. The navy was the leader in the research and development of dirigibles in the United States. the architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. Once the archietects had designed the mooring Mast and made changes to the existing plans for the building's skeleton.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19196,7,"A time that I had to be patient was at cedar point in @LOCATION1. My @CAPS1, my sister, and a friend were spending the night at cedar point. My @CAPS1’s stayed at the motorhome while my @CAPS1, my sister and I were spending the evening going on roller coasters. After about six hours, my sister and I went on all but @NUM1 or @NUM2 of the roller coasters, my @CAPS1 by the way, am not really like roller coasters, being old and all, so it really was just my sister and I. So after all the fun my sister and my @CAPS1 were going to back to the moterhome, but I wanted to go on just on??? before heading back, so I asked if could ask she said yes. I told my @CAPS1 that I would be back in hopefully a half hour. The roller coaster was the second biggest roller coaster by the park. As I waited in line, I felt like it would take forever. I have @CAPS2, so as you could imagine, I could hardly stand still, I had to try very hard but eventraully I got on the ride, and then it was good again. The ride by the way was extremely amazing.",11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3247,2,"Do you believe that certain materials in the library should be removed off the shelf if found offensive?     I believe certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should not be removed from the shelves if they are found offensive. Some of my reasoning is very logical and if you were a reader I'm sure you want to read something thats true and very interesting. Libraries all consist of books from everything you can think of. Libraries are really for learning and not to offense anybody in any manner.     The reason why I believe they should not be removed because everybody is equal and not everybody likes to read the same books. There should be offensive books because I think that theres just to many kids that would not like to grab a book and it be orginal and not offensive about them in some way. Books are created to read and have interest, laughter, enjoying. From some of the students at my school I spoke with said that when they are really having a bad day they turn on their music and it helps them because it makes them feel alot better and the day gets easier for them. They say they dont have to be depressed or thinking about something that made them mad that day.     Well as in from my experience with books I can tell you somethings and sometimes that when I was feeling down how I grabed a book. The first time I realized books are really helpful and I'm also talkling about magazines, music and movies. Well to be honest I'm not a big reader. I enjoy listening to music because sometimes songs can relate to you and make you fell  that your not alone. Also it helps you learn how to cope with some things that you could of never coped with before because it makes you feel relaxed. Just how some of my friends said that they feel relaxed when they read a book.     So my point is that you know and I know that their are music out there that is very offensive and some books that are.  Does it drive us crazy that they do? No it does not because it actually helps us. It helps us by showing us away out from our daily streesful lifes and sometimes you learn in books and songs of how other people deal with their stress. So you learn alot of things than feel offensive about books or music. As you can tell I'm a huge music fan and there has been lots of songs that were offensive but it did not bug me much.         I hope I gave you some kind of shock that music and books should'nt be removed if offensive. It's just music is amazing as well for books we all need our space sometimes and those two things are just there for us which is either to help us learn or feel relaxed and calm. Thank you for reading this and I hope I persuaded you enough with my reasoning. Remember music and books are alot alot of fun and if you never gave it a chance, you should try it sometime. That's the end of my conclusion",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9235,4,"The author ended that story like that because that’s  how she started the story.The little girl was looking at the flowers and plants in the the beginning ,so the author thought that it would be a good thing to end the story like it was started.Also because the friendship that Saeng has with the plants and flowers will come back again in the spring when everything is blooming and looking very beautiful.It shows that the plants give a sense of comfort when she is going through hard times.That is why the author concludes with Saeng and the plants.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18634,7,"Patience is like waiting for something and not froaring out. Imagine if no one had patience everything would suck. Picture this your at the store there is a line at the register, no patience and people are fighting to get to it. Knowing that most people have patience that would not happen. Since the people have patience the world has order so if you think about it it's a good thing.",5,4,,9,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19051,7,"One beautiful day in she I by I up I, my sister and I were outsid  @CAPS1. My mom said that shed be wide  back. Shes going to the store a couple hours  late she is no bake with a hot. She said @CAPS2 was per  my sister but she said could  don't open @CAPS2 till her birthday. Her birthday was in a couple of weeks. She said she couldn't wait that long and stroed  off. After a couple of days she decided to be patient. She thought days would go by radius. They did to her stick, but not fast enough. My mom to I her body to be waited of just target about the boy. @CAPS2 is hard for her to go that her house she is no ??? I was going to ???. I had decided ?? ? We got come the cream and said one way home. Finally @CAPS2 was her birth day and she was screed lad. She had opened all of her girls excepted one. The hot was sitting want I her. She dosed over to and ripped @CAPS2. One When she opened @CAPS2 .She just stared. In the break of silence she said."" @CAPS2's just clothes"". I could tell she didn't like @CAPS2."" I can't have that I was patient for so long for clothes."" I bursted out in laughter. I thought @CAPS2 was bananas. After I stoped laughing for told me don't get used to the being patient house you might never be again.",11,8,,19,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4242,2,"We as @CAPS1 have the right to say what we want, and do as long as it is within the laws. If they take away some books because they are racey or because some people find them wrong, then they are saying we shouldn't learn the history of our civilization. A great man once said '@CAPS2 who do not learn from the past are condemed to repeat it.' @CAPS3 is saying that if we take away the books that are even obscured we are taking that history away from our children and they will do the same mistakes that we have done in our lifes.     Taking away the content that is obsene will make our children unknowledgable to the fact that it happened or how the past really was. '@CAPS4 @CAPS5's @CAPS6' is under critism because it uses the '@CAPS7-word' alot in the text. There is no reason to change the book because that is how the people talked, back in the day, and how things were done. If they change the book they change history and they take away knowledge from the children of tomorrow that slavery was a harsh, harsh thing.     When I think of censorship in the library, I think of how the @ORGANIZATION1 is trying to change the past and how it is trying to nurf the childrens history of what really happened. Censorshiop should be on tv, movies, and music so the little kids dont see the wrong things to earl, but when it comes to lititure in the library they shouldn't do it at all because only the liturate people will know what it means and what the text is actually saying. There should not be a censhorship in the lititure of the past, the present, and the future.",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7265,3,"While trying to reach Yosemite by a shortcut, the cyclist faced many challenges and emotions. The cyclist started out his journey cheerfully with thoughts of the cool pines of Yosemite. “The sun was beginning to beat down, but I barely noticed it.” The cyclist continued on his spirits as well as her water supply going down. The cyclist encouraged himself to keep going, just to find an open building. “…telling myself that if I could make it that far, I’d be fine.” @CAPS1 many abandoned factories, the cyclist tried many methods to decrease his thirst including sucking on stones. “…slowly gaining elevation while losing hope.” @CAPS2 the cyclist found a deserted building, he lost more and more hope. When the cyclist found open store with modern bathrooms, he had “an overwhelming urge to seek out @PERSON1, kiss them, and buy some bait.” At the end the cyclist promised himself to always use his map.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4078,2,"I do not believe that censorship in libraries is a good thing. For many reasons but to save sometime here are just a few of the reasons why I believe this, there would be no books left for anyone to read, if certain books where taken off the shelf we would not have the knowledge from them, and our kids would not know what other people can think of. At the end of this essay one might understand the advandages and disadvantages to censorship in libraries. @CAPS6 many books would be gone?     If we all took off one book that we found offensive then our children and other children would not be able to read. Taking off one offensive book per person leaves no books left in a library. What one person @MONTH1 find offensive another person could find rather enjoyable. Some of my friends think that '@CAPS1' is an offensive novel but I found the book to be rather enjoyable. On the other hand we also have to understand that there are somethings that just shouldn't be put out in public. @CAPS6 would we get as much knowledge as we have?     Without all the books that are in our libraries @CAPS6 would people get the knowledge to make great discoveries in science, history, and electronics? People would be lost if we didn't have our books. The books give people great knowledge and a great place to learn @CAPS6 to do things. I myself have learned @CAPS6 to become a successful @CAPS2 novel @CAPS3 from the @CAPS4 I took out of 'A @CAPS2 @CAPS3's @CAPS4 for @CAPS5.' @CAPS6 would the ideas of other people be heard around the world without books in our libraries?     Those books that are offensive can also be of great use when doing a research paper or just trying to find something to talk about with friends at school or work. Without the books that we have in the library people would not be able to understand what other people thought about certain ideas on politics and other issues in daily life. The books help people come up with ideas to create things and be createative in everything they do. The ideas that one person expresses in their writing is a great place to find a spark of imagination when a person needs something to keep their mind off of personal issues. Life without books?     Censorship is a good and bad thing in libraries, I myself on one hand do not find it appropraite but on the other hand it can be taken to a whole different perspective. People who want to use it don't understand that other people could take the books off the shelf that they, themselves like to read in their spare time, nor do they understand all the knowledge that we gain from books even if they are fiction, and lastly without the books that we have no one would know what someone in a different park of the world was thinking. Foremost people who want cenorship in libraries don't understand what would happen if we had the power to all take one book off the shelf. One could understand both sides of the coin here but we need to step back and think about what life would be like without our books.",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3503,2,"Censorship is a contraversal topic. Some believe that it is necessary others would disagree. My personal opinion would be that censorship is not necessary. Everyone is entitles to what they believe, and others have to have the maturity to accept that.     Censorship is not necessary because if you are offended by some material then don't read or listen to it. It is as simple as that. Everyone can be offended by something, so if everything was removed that was found to be offensive to someone there would be nothing left. If things were organized into sections that stated how offensive the material was then it is likely that almost everything would be in the offensive section.     Because censorship is contraversal there are many different thoughts on the subject. It ranges from no censorship to complete censorship, my view be just one of many. Censorship is truely just a matter of maturity and how a person goes about dealing with the material. The only person who can let you be offened is yourself, therefore censorship is not necessary in the library people just need to be mature about it.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12235,5,"In this memoir the mood that was created was security and warmth. I say this because throughout his story he talks about how grateful he is to have parents who cared about him so much they moved to the United States to give him a better life than what he would have had in Cuba. Narciso constantly talks about the food that his mom used to make and has taught him. The unity that the neighborhood has formed. When he was young there was still a lot of racism and segragation from whites to other races and because of that his neighborhood was the only place to feel at home and feel like they didn't have to prove anything. Their house was permanently open to whoever needed it, and his parents would feed and be overall kind to them. This memoir is about Narciso Rodriguez's kind and loving family, and that comes off strongly in his story.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15460,6,"When constructing a mooring mast, @CAPS1 ran into many problems. Safety was the main problem/concern they ran into. Since most blimps outside of the @LOCATION1 were hydrogen not helium, they were very flammable. After Hindenburg blimp was destroyed by a fire, people in @CAPS1 feared that would happen by the empire state building. Another problem they ran into was the law. At that time, it was the law that you couldn't fly an airship that low over urban areas. When tested, some blimps couldnt get close enough because of the heavy winds. This made it impossible to tie blimps up and let people off It also made people fear that the wind would blow the blimp onto sharp parts of other building which would put a hole in the blimp It was a good idea, but there were just to many obstacles they had to go around to make the blimp docking station and mooring mast successful.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13146,5,"I think the memoir is a thankful and grateful mood. The author is grateful that she has parents that moved to @LOCATION1 for her. Also she is grateful that the simple place she lives in feels like a home. This says so in the last sentence ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" Also Narciso is thankful in paragraph @NUM1 ""my mother and father had come to this country with such courage, without any knowledge of the language or the culture. They came selflessly as many imagrants do, to give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their families, friends and careers in the country they loved."" @CAPS1 how thankfull Narciso seems to her parents who sacrificed their whole life for her. If that was me writing that story I would make the mood very grateful towards my parents.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18798,7,"The @CAPS1 @CAPS2 a few days after @CAPS18 began to run, @CAPS3, a small, anxious, chestnut room @CAPS1 saw her @CAPS5 plowing a large oval and covering it with @CAPS4 looked like dust. ""@CAPS4's @CAPS5 doing, @CAPS6? "" @CAPS7 a very curious @CAPS3. ""@CAPS9's plowing."" @CAPS10 @CAPS11, the young horses' @CAPS17. ""@CAPS12's going to be in a race called the @ORGANIZATION1  next year and that's how @CAPS18 will practice."" I want to race! ""hollered @CAPS3 excitedly ""Patience my darling, you're not even a filly! ""@CAPS10 @CAPS11, conclusively. And so @CAPS3 waited patiently for weeks. When @CAPS18 could @CAPS18 ran the track at night. @CAPS18 counted her times and @CAPS18 got faster and stronger. Two years later @CAPS3 was the champion reached for @NUM1 years in a raw. ""@CAPS17 was right! ""@CAPS18 claimed ""Patience is the key!",10,9,,19,,,,2.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12594,5,"The @CAPS1 of the poem is very warm and loving The warm memories of his home, filled with passionate Cuban music and the love for culinary arts leave the reader with the warmth and love of the house. The words he uses, like ""adore,"" ""warm home,""  ""innocence of childhood,"" ""passionate,"" ""congregation,"" ""love of cooking"" and ""celebrations"" lets The reader go away from the excerpt of a  loving and heartfelt @CAPS1 His discussion of the real definitions of family, which aren't only blood relatives leave the reader warm as the paragraph talks about his extended family like Alegria. Sergio and @CAPS2: and his real relatives like aunts Bertha and Juanita and his cousins ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" is so loving that the @CAPS1 is struck in a strong, final chord of warmth, which leaves the reader satisfied. The @CAPS1 of @PERSON1 is undoubtedly loving",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9317,4,"All throughout the story “Winter Hibiscus”, the author gives the feeling as hope and comfort that is obtaned by Saeng when she thinks about the past. And to continue this feeling as hope, the last sentence gives the feeling that Saeng will be better off than she had been at the beginning of the story. For example, at the beginning of the story, Saeng was feeling alrenated, alone, and misplaced in her new country. But as the story progresses, she starts to develop peace of mind and certainly that her future will be brighter with the passing of the and her growing confidence. In conclusion, the author uses the last sentence to give a feeling of hope for Saeng’s future and growing confidence.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15812,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the empire state building aced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there were, structural problems, breaking laws, and keeping the dirigible safe in the air.  The structural problems this would have caused was the pressure on the buildings foundation from being pulled by the dirigibles.  The builders were also breaking The Law because there is a law saying how low an airship can fly over an urban area, the dirigibles would be way too low.  The final obstacle for the builders was to keep the dirigible safe in the air.  This is due to the high winds the airship would be swinging around and could break off.  Another issue would be if it blew up the pieces would fall onto downtown New York City.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15057,6,"During the @DATE1's technology and engineering wasn't quite as advanced. So it's safe to say builders of the Empire State Building had so obstacles. One of them were, how were they going to dock the dirigible safely and keep them stable, they had know idea. They did have the knowledge or technology to do such a thing back then.",1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
476,1,"I think the computer dire a postive effect on people all over the world. You can do lots of things on the computer like an acidemic work, talk on the enernet, or even find out facts' about fam'us people you love, people computer. I think computer can benfit socity becuse computers can help you with your acidimic work, and can also talk to you friends online. One way i can benfit from using the computer by, typing my school work. But when in not doing my school work talking to my friends online. But the best thing of all is finding out information about famuse people like @PERSON1. I rember when is was doing a project on the computer and got a @NUM1 on it becuse i used the computer. That should prove that computers are very help full. Have you ever wondered how a computer can help you in your ever day life. If you said no i can tell you how. You can learn about diffrent places and food. Lets say i was going to make pizza and i did not know how i would have to look on the computer how to. A professor from virgin new york tech school said that with out computers the world is nothing. @PERCENT1 of people at new york tech school agreed but @PERCENT2 did not could you immagin a world with out computers. I if the world did not have computers we would not have cell phones or even t.v. Not ever on know the cell phones or computers lets face it with out computers the world would be lost like the proffser from new york tech said. Also teenagrs would be bored becuse most teenangers do not like to go out side and if we do not have computers how will adults do there work or they will have to handwrite it. Lets be honsest some adults and kids hand writing is like chicken scrach so to say. I think computer are very helpful for everyone around the world. In closing i think the hole world should keep computers becus with out computers the world is lost, to the past paper.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9008,4,"The author concludes this story with the promise Saeng made to herself to take the test again, come springtime, because Saeng is having trouble adapting to her new home, and she won’t give up on fitting in after only one failure. Remembering her home and that she will never be able to return are painful thoughts to Saeng and memories of it help her cope with her loss. The hibiscus and other familiar flowers she found comforted her, because they reminded her of home. At springtime when the geese return and the hibiscus starts blooming, Saeng will feel ready again to take the test, the spring represents the chance for another try, and a new beginning.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1080,1,"People are asking me, ""@CAPS1 you think we should spend more or less time on computers""? I say we should spend less time on the computer because children spend to much time on online games. Second kids and adults spend to much time on myspace, facebook, msm, and even aim. My third reason is children should be outside playing and exercising. These are my three reasons why we should spend less time on computers. My first reason we should all spend less time on computer is children play so many online games, such as @CAPS2 of warcraft, @CAPS3, soilder front, ect. A problem with kids playing these games become addicted to them, and will play for hours. Children should be outside getting bigger muscle, getting strong bones. Kids keep playing these games and are ruining their lifes. This is my first reason why we should spend less time on the computer. My second reason why we should spend less time on computers is children and adults spend to much time on the following: myspace, facebook, twitter, aim, msm, ect. These online pages causes people to go on one to connect to their friends. Also with these online pages they cause to much and could lead to fight or rumors. About @PERCENT1 of kids and adults go on these online pages every day its time they stayed going on their computer more time on outside or hangout with their friends. My last but not the least reason is kids should be outside playing instead of being on the computer. Children should go outside with their friend and play sport or games, something that doesn't involve with the computer. This is my third reason why children should not we spending more time on computers. As I said before people should spend less time on computer. Kids spend to much time on online games. Adults and kids spend to much time on online pages. And last children should be playing outside. Its time we put a timer on our computer and spend more time outside.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9706,4,Thes basically say that he will be around again just like the geese always come back.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13223,5,"The mood that the author was portraying in the memoir was a very loving, caring and emotional mood. In paragraph @NUM1 she states ""It was here were I learned the real definition of ""family"". And for this, I will never forget that house or its gracious neighborhood or the many things I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home.""",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16618,6,"In the @CAPS1, the docking of dirigibles had many issues. One, boarding passengers would be very difficult as the dirigible will @CAPS2 from a gust of wind. Second, the gases used to make afloat are highly flammable, and explode quite easily.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
458,1,"Dear editor, I understand that some children and adults love going on the computer, but they don’t know what the bad effects are. When your at a young age, anything can happen, while your on the computer, even worse things can happen. You could do bad things over the internet, won't exercise, or have time for your family. First of all, what I mean by bad things I mean, your child can go on bad websites, talk to strangers, or get harassed. When a child first gets, for example, a facebook account, most of the times the people who request them as a friend are unregistered child molesters and or sex offenders. They would probably act friendly to get the kid comfortable then they would end up kidnapping them. Also you could harass people or get harrassed yourself. And you can go on inapropriate websites. Secondly, you act enough generation child I go outside basically, it all kids. Lastly, your child won't have family time. Now with more technology coming out like cellphones, and laptops; kids would rather hang out with their friends and not with the families. I could understand the whole cellphone thing but you need to make more time for your family. The reason I think going on the computers all the times not good because you can do bad things by talking to strangers, harrassment, and you can go on inappropriate websites. you won't get enough exercise and you can suffer from diabetes, high and childhood obesity. Lastly, you won't have enough family times mainly because of all of the new technology that has come out such as cellphones and laptops.",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16330,6,"In the article ""The Mooring Mast"" by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, obstacles builders faced building a mast for dirigibles to dock there are detailed One obstacle builders faced was how to go about attaching it. ""The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof. A thousand-foot dirigible moored at the top of the building held by a single cable tether would add stress to the buildings frame."" Another obstacle would be the accumulated cost of the renevisions due to the first problem. ""Over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications had to be made to the buildings frame work."" These obstacles prevented the mast for ever being used its intended purpose.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19032,7,"The time I was patient I had trouble with football. I needed help doing everything. But my dad helped me. He taught me how to throw kick, run and kaney. I was patient because I watch them I did it. I saw one help my dad playing we went out to join them. The stuff he tate me was hard but it helped.",4,8,,12,,,,1.0,1.0,1.0,1.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18106,7,"Don't you ever whis ever one in the world would be patience, @CAPS4 if you don't I do. Lucky   for me one time I was a not so good girl and I did something I was not suppos to do, but since I have such grate parent they were trying there best to be patience with me, like all parent they had to give me a lecksore about what I did, but they did not let me got out of the hock that easy. ""@CAPS1 @CAPS2 please come down to the office"" I herd on the anoament, @CAPS6 I was walking down one hallway I was really??? ""what have I done"" I ask myself, I was thinking really hard. By no time I was at the office ""yes"" I said to the person that was there ""Do you now why your hear"" @CAPS3 said ""no"" I replayed. ""@CAPS4 I been having some complain from these  girl"" @CAPS3 had told me ""@CAPS4 oo ya"" I said ""@CAPS4 ya what"" @CAPS3 said ""was the only reason why I was bing mean was because they were bing mean and they were bing so suck up they would tell my friends that the only reason I hanged out with them was because they had money wich was not true"" I said ""ok I get were your comeing from, let me call them down"" @CAPS3 said."" @CAPS5 and alesay come down to the office please."" @CAPS6 they came down the hallway I could hear there foot step. I really did not want to talk to them to be contined.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8971,4,"I think the author concludes the story with that parography because they want you to understand Saeng's strength. One reason I think they also end the story like that because she know inside that when her plant is strong and not covered in snow that she will be strong so that's when she wont`s to take her driving test. For example when she said, ”When the snow melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again. That is why the author concludes the story with that paragraph. ",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3951,2,"Imagine walking into a library where the shelves are empty. A library where there are no books to lose one's self in the pages. A library where we are not allowed to read controversial classics that fill and open our minds to new views. A library where works of literature such as @ORGANIZATION1, To @CAPS1 a @CAPS2, and @PERSON1 are not on the shelves awaiting students to dive into their pages. Some of the greatest books ever written are respected for their controversy and mind blowing ideas. Censorship in libraries should not be applied because every person has the personal right to read whatever they like, has the right to broaden their minds, and has the right to enjoy a practice which is being taken over by modern technology.     A number of children in the @LOCATION1 are unable to read at their appropriate grade level. This number is greatly increasing due to poor education opportunities, lack of interest in education, and lack of resources in the @LOCATION1. Reading is the fundamental basis for each and every school subject. It is proven that children who are successful readers are five times more likely to be overall more successful students. However, by censoring what books are allowed in a classroom and library we are taking away a child's chance to broaden their minds. We are also taking away books that @MONTH1 interest a child. Children are @PERCENT1 more likely to read a book that they are interested in. Allowing a child not to read a book, such as '@CAPS3 @CAPS4' is unpractical and harmful to the child. By taking away a book that students greatly enjoy it discourages them from reading altogether. A person not only has the right to the best education one can receive, they also have the right to read whatever they want.     Books open up a child's mind to new places and adventures that they @MONTH1 not ever be able to experience in their lifetime. Books have the ability to broaden people's minds. Some of the most interesting and controversial books that challenge an individuals beliefs and thoughts are being taken off the shelves and no longer readily available to people. @LOCATION2 was founded on the basis of freedoms; freedom of speech, freedom of thought.  Why should this freedom not apply to books? Why should any person be allowed to tell another person what you can and can not read? And why should these books be available to everyone through public libraries? This freedom should apply to books. No one should be allowed to tell another person what they can and can not read. And these books should not be censored in public and school libraries. No one should be denied the chance to learn.  By censoring books in libraries throughout @LOCATION2, millions of children are being denied the chance to learn.     We live in a world where televisions, computers, iPods, and cell phones can be found in most homes and in everyone's hands. Books are thought of as 'a thing of the past' and not up to speed with today's technology.  However, books are an important part of one's education. Censoring libraries discourage kids to read even more than they already are discouraged to reading. Kids do not want to be told what they can and can not read and by taking away the books they want we are supressing their minds. Censoring will only make them want to read less, and play on the computer more. Censoring in libraries is also a pointless and non effective method. Kids with internet access can look up almost anything on their home computers. The things they find on the internet will be more controversial then the majority of books that are being censored. A favorite book of many kids is the @CAPS3 @CAPS4 series. These books have been taken out of many libraries for their use of witchcraft. However a child could go home and watch the movies or search the internet for something more controversial. Censoring is pointless because children have other ways of viewing things that would be censored in a library.    Censorship in libraries should not be applied because every person has the personal right to read whatever they like, has the right to broaden their minds, and has the right to enjoy a practice that is being taken over by modern technology. Today's youth is exposed to wars, terrorist attacks, gangs, domestic violence and drive bys everyday. The world of books can be an escape from the world they live in. Books can help a child overcome poverty, mental challenges, and violence everyday. The pages of books fill them with hope and give them courage to create a better future for themselves. The inspirational stories in books have inspired millions to achieve more then they thought possible. Censoring would take away the chances for our future generations to become inspired by these books. Censoring would only hurt our youth and the greatness that they can accomplish.",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16403,6,"In building the Empire State Building, builders had to deal with numerous obstacles to allow dirigibles to dock there. The first obstacle was what the dirigibles would attach to. Builders thought that by adding a mooring mast it would make docking easy, although they disregarded the building's foundation. The builders realized that the foundation was not nearly strong enough to accommodate dirigibles, so over an additional sixty thousand dollars was spent to make it stronger. Builders then had to brainstorm how passengers would board, along with a place for baggage and ticketing. To resolve this, a glassed-in observation area and open observation platform were constructed. Another obstacle was the existing airship law for how low they could fly. The dirigibles clearly went against this law and the idea for using the mast for docking. After failed attempts at docking the idea went away, and builders realized the plan would never work.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6482,3,The trees were in the landscape and it was making the colors red and the volcanoes and the tall pine trees covered were in the landscape and milker years ago it make the swampland became the desert,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
263,1,"Dear @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS1 minute of the day - millions of computer users around the world hop onto their laptops or desktops, but is it always a good thing? The question has been raised if people spending alot of time on computers is a bad thing. Computers are a bad thing because people spend too much time on them and lose quility time with friends and family. The dangers of online interaction, and the risk of having your information stolen. Countless people around the world face these problems everyday and computer usage should be lessened. Whether teens, kids, or adults are gaming, on websites or typing essays people around the world spend way too much time on their computers. For example, of the @PERCENT1 of people who have computers with online access @PERCENT2 of them spend @NUM1 hours a day on them. This is about @NUM2 billion hours of computer usage around the world. Children and adults alike have lost face time or interraction with other human beings face to face. Before computers kids played outside running and playing around. While in present day less than @PERCENT3 of all children get at least one hour of time outside. Computers are not a bad thing, but its is when they are over used they become hurtful to kids health. These facts have not just contributed, but they are almost the cause of obesity in the world. Computer usage needs to be cut down to size if we are to solve these problems. The additon of online chat to computers has not only increased computer usage but doubled it. The invention of @CAPS2, and instant messaging was never meant to be a bad thing, but it sure did turn into one. Online chat allows people to send hatefull and vulgar messages to their enemys without showing their face. In some cases some teens were harrased online so bad they committed suicide. Another bad thing about @CAPS2, or @CAPS3 is that dangerous criminals can hide behind their computers and lure children or teens to a meeting place where they can be kidnapped. @NUM3 out of @NUM4 users of online chat was lured by a criminal to a "" meeting place"" and was kidnapped and never seen against last year. Most of these victims do not return or are found. Although the invention of chat online was meant as quick easy communication it became a horror crime in most cases. Millions even billions of dollars have been stolen by internet hackers. These hackers break the security codes and buy things online using other peoples money. Four out five people admit to having multiple sites with personal information on them and @NUM5 out of those four people have had at least one account hacked. This problem continues to grow and hackers feed off of weak sites. If this problem continues to grow the whole world will be bankrupt. These hackers know who you are, your family, your personal information, and where you live. Internet usage needs to be cut down to sites. If we do not then usage will increase, there will be no chat problems and peoples money will get stolen.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4013,2,"I believe that there should be censorship in public libraries. Libraries have families and young children going to them that do not need to see, hear, and read certain things. If people would like to buy inapporpriate reading material, movies, or music they can do that elsewhere. Certain things are acceptable in public libraries and other things are not.     Certain material such at rated @CAPS1 movies and romance novels are not inappropriate or unacceptable. They are meant for adults but they are not showing extremely racy pictures on their covers. Other material, however, most people are not interested in having to see and our young children should not be subjected to that.     People that wish to view, listen to, or read inappropriate material that is not meant for all ages or covers shouldn't even be viewed by young children can and will purchase or find them elsewhere. People that wish to possess these items will find another place to get them besides a public place with families and children. I believe these people reserve the right to view and listen to what they would like but they should be censored in a public library.     Most people don't read inappropriate material in public and most extremely racy movies aren't even shown in theatres so why should you be able to check them out in a public place? Besides that many people do not even want other people to know that they are viewing these objects in the first place so many wouldn't even check them out at a public library.     I also believe that not only should children not be subjected to these things but parents should not be subjected to their children wanting to know what certain things are that they are far to young to know about.     The youth of @LOCATION1 is getting into new things younger and younger daily whether that be drugs or inappropriate magazines so I believe that we should not begin subjecting our children to that at an even younger age than they will already find out about it.",3,3,,3,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1065,1,"Dear @CAPS1, @CAPS2 my name is @CAPS3 and I do not no where to start this letter. Im writing you this letter to let you know that I think that not everyone should use a computer. My first reason not everyone should use a computer is because they get so distracted in the computer they forget about school. My second reason not everyone should use a computer is because they @CAPS4 dont spent time with there parent. My third reason they shouldn't have people use the computer often is because they would get sick. My firs reason computer shouldnt be used often is because they forget about school. They forget about it in the way that there so distracted writing or chating or playing @CAPS4 that they forget about school. @CAPS5 reason is because their grades get low. They dont do homework either. My second reason is because they dont parents. Are more could be there so the computer they dont. My third reason is because their get computer there get @CAPS4 they dont and not @CAPS5 could that they dont get no education for being in the computer. That is why is bad to use a computer a lot I hope u understand.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21280,8,"                                    Laughter @CAPS1 @CAPS2 For the @ORGANIZATION1 is a very important thing in life , I personally could not live without laughter in my life I honestly could not do it. I would not be me if I didn't have laughter in my life . All relationships should have laughter involved in some way ,what would a relationship be without laughter! Laughter is a beautiful thing , when I am laughing I am enjoying life in in my own way and my worries instantly go away and some how I feel like I am ""carefree "" . Laughter makes us healthy both physically and mentally . Through out my life there have been many times where laughter has been involved in many relationships . But let me tell you about a time where laughter really stood out and was and still is a big part of my relationship with my dad.   I have always been very close to my dad , you might even say I am a daddy's little girl .Laughter has played a very important role in my relationship with my dad. It somehow always found its way into our relationship. The @CAPS1 times of laughter are what I valued and treasured so much that whenever I think about it I cant help but smile . I remember when I was little if I ever needed a @CAPS1 laugh my dad was the person to call . The laughter grew stronger through out the years , I cannot recall a time where my dad and I had a moment where laughter was not involved . We always used to watch these @CAPS3 shows together that we would almost always laugh so hard it was impossible to get through the show without making noise or miss something because we were both laughing so hard .We would laugh so hard we would wake up the whole family ,sometimes we didn't even know why we were laughing it would just happen . I can just hear those sweet sounds of laughter between my dad and I oh how I miss those @CAPS1 @NUM1 nights were what I looked forward to, I knew that I would soon be laughing along with my dad and tears of joy would be running down our faces . I looked forward to that sweet sound of laughter it was almost impossible to go through the entire show without laughing ,oh what @CAPS1 times those were . Since my dad moved to @LOCATION1 ,we haven't had those beautiful times of laughter that I miss so much, but I can always treasure them in my heart. Those moments of laughter were the best moments I have ever had with my dad,since I was little girl till now almost an adult . I don't know if my dad and I would be as close today if we hadn't had all that laughter throughout our lives. Whenever I am sad or miss my dad , I go back to those times we had filled with laughter, and listen to his laugh playing in my head. I never knew how important laughter would be to me. I am glad laughter played such an important part in my life. Laughter is such an important part of life/relationships because it brings joy and happiness. Laughter is the type of thing that no matter what , should always be a part of any relationship. I think laughter is healthy for our bodies, for example if you're sad ,depressed ,or just not having a @CAPS1 day a @CAPS1 laugh will change that and make you feel a lot better ,like it did for my dad and I. Laughter also makes relationships last longer , the reason why I am so close to my dad , best friend, mom, boy friend , sisters etc is because of laughter itself . If laughter was not involved in my relationships , I could not handle being sad all the time everyone needs a little laughter sometime in their life. My dad is the reason why I laugh so much , he showed me how laughter is such a powerful thing but yet so simple. I never thought laughter would be such an important part of my life until my dad showed me just how valuable it really is.  Where I would be today without laughter I truly have no idea. My dad taught me how laughter can change your attitude on things and how important it is to have laughter in your relationship. If laughter was not involved in any relationship , the world would be very boring no laughter or smiles,can you imagine having no laughter at all! I certainly cant imagine life without laughter. If my relationship with my dad had no laughter we would not be the same people we are today in fact , we would be completely different people and we would not be as close as we are today. What do you think about laughter? Has laughter ever played an important part in any of your relationships?  ",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4176,2,"Good? Bad? Offensive or not? These are just a few of the questions asked when referring to content in any given book, magazine, or even a song. Who are we to judge what's good, what's offensive, or even what is appropriate for any being?     From things such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc. the author(s) @MONTH1 express what they feel on a given topic. Though their opinion might not please others, there's nothing that can be done about it. In society people are going to talk, to write, to sing, to listen. Whether everyone agrees with that is a different story.      In society, no matter what the topic is, there will always be at least one person that has a problem with it. The world will never be perfect! The only thing that can be done to assuage the chaos is for people to self censor what they @MONTH1 ingest from reading or listening to these different books and lyrics. If one shows so much emnity towards a given topic, then they are able to do as they please, and choose not to listen/read.      At the bottom of numerous cd's, both explicit and non, there is a label, an advisory that warns a person. It will briefly tell you that there is some content they @MONTH1 not be appropriate, that @MONTH1 hurt feelings, and simply offend. It is then that one can choose to listen to the cd or not.      Every human is entitled to freedom of speech. This doesn't necessarily mean that everything said by a being is okay; but everyone is entitled to his own opinion. There are words spoken that will offend many! From @PERSON1 using racial slurs in speeches, to @LOCATION1 calling females derrogatory words, all the way back to a white male calling his colored friend a nigger.      People will always be offended. There are many different ways of looking at life, and many different opinions. Not everyone agrees with one another, because everyone is unique in his own way. From ethnicity to personalites, from talented athletes to intelligent students, and even from ancestors to religion. Everyone has something that defines them and makes them who they are. We are all special; and we all think differently. We find certain slurs and lyrics offensive, while others @MONTH1 not.      @NUM1 years ago when i was in @NUM2 grade, my @CAPS1 class was reading a story about the '@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4'. There were @CAPS4 young black children striving to get a respected education in a white school. Times were tough then, and there was still alot of racism in @LOCATION2. As my teacher read us this book everyday, we all sat and listened taciturnly. After the third day of reading this book, we all sat down like usual ready to finish the book. Five minutes into class as the teacher was reading the book, she read and enunciated every word in the book. In the middle of the sentence, it read 'nigger-lover', and the teacher didn't hesitate a bit as she said it. In less than @MONEY1, @NUM3 blacks children walked out of the room yelling curse words at the top of their lungs. This teacher didn't realize that she had offended these children by what she took as simply reading to her class.      The book '@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4' wasn't censored in any way. Though many children looked at it and felt some of the terms were harsh, no one ever thought there would ever be a riot caused at school. Because the teacher was white, and the children didn't want her to say that word, everyone attacked her vocally.      I've began to realize that everyone cannot be pleased. There will always be at least @NUM4 person that stands up and retaliates against something they dislike. In '@CAPS2 @CAPS3 @CAPS4', the book wasn't censored, but I still believe that it should stay on library shelves. That book allowed children to better understand how hard life was in the past. By keeping the harsh language, I feel as if people realize how much harder times were.      Books, music, movies, and magazines will always contain a statement that someone doesn't agree with, and by removing that I feel like one can not fully understand the message the author is trying to get across. For all of these reasons, I proudly say that I believe that these different books, movies, lyrics, and magazines should be kept on the shelves",5,5,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21325,8," The night was a cool, @DATE1 night, not too cold but definetly not the muggy temperatures @DATE2 brought you. This was the type of @NUM1 degree weather that would allow you to wear jeans and a t-shirt and still be comfortable. The air hugged my skin as I walked up the path that led to my friends front door. Overhead I knew the stars hung in the sky but they were paid no attention by me. Inside the house I knew both of my bestfriends were awaiting my arrival. I also knew that there was a potential of them being angry with me. For what, I did not know. I did know that when I left school that day there was a feeling in my gut that told me something wasn't right. Walking home, as I increased the distance between them and me, there was a churning in my stomach that prodded me to look back. When I did, they were both staring at me with looks I couldn't (or didn't want to) place on their faces.  All of that made my heart give occasional, hard, thumps on my chest from the nervousness. Yet, I pretended that everything was okay. ""For all I know"", I told myself, ""it might as well be, and I'm overreacting."" I knocked on the white-painted wooden door and stared at the maroon side-paneling, waiting for an answer. My friend @LOCATION1 answered the door. From somewhere inside I could hear my other friend @PERSON1 laughing. I knew that I had missed out on something, the laughter explained that to me as I stepped inside. There was a hollow feeling in my chest. I wanted to know what I had missed out on. I hated not knowing. A mix of emotions jumped around inside my body, causing my head to be a jumbled mess that I couldn't make sense of.  I gently pushed open @LOCATION1's bedroom door with my fingertips. Like always, the turquoise walls and the sound of radio station music jumped out to greet me. @PERSON1 was laughing and dancing to the music, but when she saw me, she stopped and stared. The moment seemed to stretch and expand in time. I felt my guard go up. If she was mad, fine. I didn't do anything wrong and I would maintain my innocence. The moment was stretching and stretching to the point I thought it might break, then @CAPS1 hugged me, completely catching me off gaurd, but filling me with a sense of right, because I'd known I hadn't done anything wrong. Everything seemed normal for what felt like a second and then @PERSON1 explained the gut feeling I had when I was walking home from school that day. I was being accused of not putting in any work into a reading project. The accusation appalled me and deflated my pride. Instead, a mild anger boiled up and I simply walked out the door and into the cool night. I heard my friends calling my name and following me down the street but I kept walking. I told myself this was out of anger, but @DATE3 I know it was for the sake of making a scene.  The footsteps I listened for behind me suddenly came at a faster pace. I glanced over my shoulder and saw @PERSON1 running at me. Against my will, I let out a high-pitched scream and started running, digging my feet into the concrete sidewalk. I felt determination flow through my veins. I would walk all the way home in the dark to make my point. @PERSON1 caught up to me and tried to pull me back to the house but I resisted with all my might. I knew I couldn't get out of her grip, out of sheer stubborness, I planted my butt on the curb and refused to budge. I realized I had only passed two houses. My friends exchanged glances and picked me up by my arms and legs and started carrying me towards the direction of the house. I grasped for the anger that was slipping from my hands. I wanted to stay mad but I couldn't. I started laughing and any tension I still felt swarming around me lifted up and flew away. A grin decorated my face from one ear to the other and my good sense came back to me gracefully. They set me down in the middle of the road. I looked up and admired the stars, that I had missed before, winking at me from above. The last ribbons of laughter still danced around in the air and whispered to me that everything was going to be okay.",25,20,,45,,,,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6184,3,"In the story “Rough road ahead” the setting affect’s the cyclist. The cyclist is affected by lack of water, the distance he has to travel, and the hilly terrain. “The water bottles contain only a few tantalizing sips. wide rings of dried sweat circled my shirt,” this statement shows how he was out of water and was tired and hot. The setting affected the cyclist a lot in the story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
960,1,"Dear Newspaper, Computers are not a benfit for us because we spent to much time on them not every one has a computer and they cost of a computer. Every one dosen't know how to use it. If we timed many hours we spend on the computer people would be amazed at what they sound. People spend looking up random things when they could be outside rideing biks or going sur awalk. And you cant do that with a computer. Not everyone hase a computer because that cost so much @MONEY1 a bacik computer can cost upwards of @NUM1 and more and thats @MONEY1 sur ther computer. Then you have to pay sur the internet witch can so sur @NUM2 a month. And you have to pay for surton aps like (windos, microsoft ect.) The bill on a computer up outer a while and people dont relize that when they are payings for the internet they arnt getting allot what the cable com sars they on giving you. Not every are knows how to use a computer lik older adults dont know how to really know use the full ptonole of a computer. Because they never learnd how to use computer. In this is the computer arnt a hose help for our society.Coose of the time and the cost and the knolage on computers.",4,3,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4608,2,"Librarys are filled with hundreds of materials that many @CAPS4 like and dislike. Books on @PERSON1 and @CAPS1, @CAPS2. Those books are @CAPS3 there to offend you they're there to educate you on the subject.           Censorship should be only for the youth as an adult you are open to everything. You make your own desicons and live by them. If you feel like a book, a song, a movie, is offensive, then stop reading, listening, or watching. @CAPS3 everyone gets offended.          I believe that no citizen has the right to remove anything from a library because of the @NUM1- @CAPS3 every one is @NUM2- @CAPS4 have diffrent @CAPS2 and outlooks on @NUM3- @CAPS5 the @CAPS6.     I conclude this by saying that censorship is enforced, but shouldnt be to a great extent, @CAPS7 us do what we do, and learn what we learn. In school were forsed to learn what we learn, i believe @CAPS5 right to have out side knowledge, but only way that is that we get it from data bases such as computers, books, music, art, etc",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18424,7,"“@CAPS1 on hurry up,” my friend said. “I know, be patient,” I said. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experiences without complaining. One day, we had a basketball game away at a different school. My team and I all went to the bathroom. I was the last one to go into a stall. They all left and one girl stayed. Being patient is all ways a good thing have you ever heard something like “Patience is a virtue? Well if you don’t get used to it.",7,10,,17,,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12643,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is joyfull. The author tells us how he loves his cuban culture. They listen to the music, the cook food and it's just very house warming. The author also loves his family. He doesn't argue with them and they enjoy the time they have together. I think the author is joyfull with all the happiness that surrounds him at his house.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3110,2,"Do I think that certain materials such asd books, music, movies,magazines,etc., should be removed froom libraries, no, because people might need to know a certain information, certain lessons are taught in different sources, all sources are liabilities.     Now, you just @MONTH1 need certain information, and in those sources there are an unnumbered amount of lessons to learn. For example if were to go in a library an need a book on religion I would need a book or movie to teech me on that particular subject, or even sex I would need a magazine or move to watch to know new information.     There are different lessons taght in different aspects. For example some people learn by example, movies, music, and magzines. I it were to be me lokking for a source on music theory I might need one of those things to get what i need.     Finally, those things are liabillities. Don't get me wrong like we need them on a daily bases, but in a sense we sort of do. We use search engines for everything, everyday. so what do you think.     In conclusion i believe we need those sources because, someone @MONTH1 need certain information, there are diffferent lessons learned and taught in different things, a lastly ALL sources are liabillities",3,4,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12052,5,"In the memoir ""@PERSON1"" by @PERSON1 he describes the mood. The first thing is that the mood is love. For starters he says ""growing up in this envionment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative. Over here, he is saying that your friends can be your family or the people that you love. Secondly he says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. Right here, he is saying that he thanks his parents for the life they had given him. Finally, he says ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. Here he is saying that ""he will never forget when he was living in a home with family, In conclusion @PERSON1 rodriguez describes the mood but also his childhood When he learned about family.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1564,1,"I disagree what people say about computers. Likewise of corse they teach hand eye coordination. But they are not good enough for people. Lets find out what I have to say to these people who think that computers have a positive effect on people. People are so fat! Wounder why. Because they spend to much time on computers and less time exercising. Anyways @PERCENT1 of @LOCATION1 is obese. Concluding that some people die each year of being over weight. Think of it this way baseball players and so on can get about @NUM1 to @MONEY1 a year, isn't that what you want to be millionaires? Isn't nature so great when you exsperiance it? Well I think so because people don't think before choping down trees. Think about the animals don't you think they get enough torrocher evey year. Computers are such a bad influiance to people agian because people need to experiance life an not sit behind a desk or a home being lazy. Myspace, facebook and all the other crazy site s on the web are not good. There are sexturall preteters all over the world that like to rape kids and teenagers like us at batchelder. You should not interacted with friends on the internet for that reason. You should get some exersise at the park with your firends and family. Aslo its better to talk to new friends in person because you can get to now them better as you grow up. There are many reasons why computers are bad and sometimes even worse. Don't use computers for stupid reasons. Or might get yourself killed. It makes you so felt that you won't be able to walk. Just keep that in mind people.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9247,4,"Minfong who concludes "" Winter Hibiscus"" with this paragraph because it show @CAPS1's determination to succed in her new country despite the obstacles she faces. The winter hibiscus reminds Saeng to be strong like the hibiscus in is to endure winter or in Saeng's case to pass the driving test the text states ""....but it's strong enough to make it through the cold months here, this winter hibiscus ....""(Ho @NUM1). Saeng realizes she must also be ""strong"" lkie the ""winter hibiscus"" Saeng also realizes that she is beginning to adopt to the new country he wrote ""Almost reluctantly, she realized that many of the things she had though strange before had become almost familiar...""(Ho @NUM1).Saeng knows that she is able to adopt and is determined to succeed. Tthe author conclude.""..in the spring, the geese return and this hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again"" (Ho @NUM1) The ""spring "" will be Saeng's",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13162,5,the mood is that the author is very good.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
158,1,"Dear newspaper, @CAPS1 some beleive computers do not benefil society, I do. Computers help buisnesses thrive, keep people people aware of what is going on in the world, and allow people to stay in touch with each other. Computers greatly benefit small and large buisnesses across the world. Imagine all the jobs at each buisnesses without a computer. Buisnesses would be unreliable because no instant contact would mean it might take a long time for products to be assembled and shipped. Any buisness owner would cringe at the idea of running of buisness without a computer. When surveyed, @NUM1 out of @NUM2 buisness owners and workers would prefer a computers assistance at work. Almost every modern day buisness relies on at least one computer. For example, companies that mass - produce their products often rely on computers to do jobs more precisely than a worker. Sometimes computer operated robots do dangerous jobs so workers are not at risk. Buisness also need computers to quickly recieve and send information to other buisnesses and people. Buisnesses are not the only need for computers. People use computers as much if not more, than buisnesses. People like you and me use computers to keep in touch with friend and people we know. Thanks to websites like @CAPS2 and e-mail people can easily stay in touch. Families use computers to plan get-togethers. Friends use computers to keep contact after grade school or if they do not live nearby. With computers, anyone that is anywhere can be in constant contact with anyone else. People also like to know news imediately. Without computers it would be alot harder to contact the rest of the world. Imagine a natural disaster accuring and not knowing about it right away. In that case we could not send aid to the area. With the recent earthquakes in @LOCATION1 and @LOCATION2. Knowledge about the rest of the world is even more important. Newspapers provide news and information but a day or two late and they often use computers to aquire that information. Eighty-seven percent of scientists agree that recieving information would be a lot harder.",5,4,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13048,5,"The mood that the author was trying to create was a sense of hope, family and happiness. Hope was @CAPS1 because his family helped others by letting them temporarily stay with them until they got back on there feet which provided hope for the extended family. Family was @CAPS1 be cause in the last paragraph he is explaining how in this tiny apartment you learned the definition of ""family"" through welcoming refugees and celebrating his first birthdays and having a loving, careing enviroment. Finally I think happiness was @CAPS1 because he was explaining how grateful he was for his parents coming to america to give him a better life and also in paragraph two he was explaining how his home environment was filled with cooking and music which can be factors of happiness. These are some moods that the author was trying to show.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7686,3,"In the story “Do not exceed posted speed Limit”, the cyclist is trying to get to Yosemite with directions that some codgers, or eccentric old men, gave him. The cyclist, said the old men looked as though they, “haven’t left the confines of their poaches since carter was in office. “  Well, he takes their advice, and he gets lost about @NUM1 along on his journey. While looking forward to the “Cool pines and rushing rivers of Yosemite”’ he was traveling through a barren desert. “There was no one in sight, not a building, car, or structure of any kind.” This type of setting could really bring down a cultist’s mood while thinking of Yosemite. It could make him lose all hope of ever finding Yosemite at this rate. If you have a nice setting, it makes the trip worthwhile, and your ending point even better.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18962,7,"One day just before football practice, my lock on my locker got stuck. All @NUM1 of the coaches tryed to get it off. All of them except for one, coach @PERSON1. He stayed in the locker room with me trying to get it off. When we realized it wasent coming off we had to find the @CAPS1. When we found him we asked for bolt cutters. We had o walk all the way across the school to get them. Once we had them we had to walk back to the locker room. When we got there he tryed to cut the lock. He tryed for @NUM2 min. They wouldent work. So we had to walk back across the school to the tool room and get another pair. This one finally cut the lock after @NUM3 min. I think this took a lot of patients from coach @PERSON1.",9,11,,20,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6675,3,"In “Do not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” by Joe Kurmaskie, the setting affects the cyclist by making him doubtfull. The cyclist is doubtfull that he won’t make it to Yosemite National Park. ""It didn't really matter. I was going to die and the bivas would pick me clean, leaving only some expenses outdoor gear and a diary with the last entry in praise of old men, their wisdom and their keen senses of direction.” This shows how he is doubtful. Finally in the story the cyclist doesn’t think that they will make it.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16003,6,"The builders faced many obstacles when attempting to allow the dirigibles to dock. The first was that they couldn't just put the mast on top of the building, it would have put too much stress on the buildings frame. They had to transmite the stress all the way down to the foundation of the building. They did over @MONEY1 worth of framework to the building.Their next obstacle was to find a safe way to dock and unload the ships, which was impossible. First off the ship couldn't even reach the building because the violent ever-changing winds were too much to control the ship in. But even if they did dock the back of the ship would have been pushed around and around the mast.Another obstacle was a law that prevented airships from flying that low over urban areas. So now the ships couldn't ever approach the building to tie off to the mast.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19535,7,"I was patient once when my dad had said he was going to give me a letter every @DATE1 because he was to far away for me to visite he lives all the way in @LOCATION1. He told me I had to be patient because I’m not really the patient tipe.I guess being patient is not all that hard. For me to be patient I have to being doing something so I get myself to rest by writing stars and drawing, reading, going to any around mother house to help with our animals. And when he finally comes I didn’t even get it. Milk @DATE2 so I had to wait even longer within I guess on sit that was to do you just have to have mind on the thing you have to be patient about it.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12544,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" the mood created by the author is very loving and grateful. He talks about how great it was growing up in his home. He also says how gracious his parents were. In the memoir he said, ""I will always be grate ful to my parents for their love and sacrifice. I've often told them that what they did was a much more courageous thing than I could ever have done."" This shows that he sounds very grate ful to his parents for everything that they have done. The mood also sounds very loving because he loves his parents for moving to @LOCATION1. His parents also sound loving to him because they were brave and sacrificed a lot for him. these things are why the mood of the memoir is loving and grateful.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18383,7,A time that I was patient was when I was fighting my little brother in @LOCATION1 and then he kicked me in the chin and I promised him that I would not tell on him even when I busted my chin open the second time he kicked me and I fell to the ground right in front of everybody else and then I was being swarmed like a bunch of bees around a hive full of honey. That was when I was being patient.,5,6,,11,,,,1.0,2.0,1.0,1.0,,,1.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13096,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir was mellow because he's talking about his life and his greatfuless to have been raised in @LOCATION1. Also the mood was happy, because he said ""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home"" which is him talking about how his parents made @LOCATION1 feel like home. Those with the moods of the story",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15248,6,"The obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building faced in attempting to allow dirt dribbles to dock there was, if they dropped the mooring mast on the top of the building they would have strengthened the frame because of the wind pressure, and pressure from the single cable. Also most dirigibles from out of state were highly flammable because they used hydrogen rather than helium. Another problem was that New York is a highly populated city and they did not want to take the risk of having something fall from the top of the building on to citizens down below. The greatest obstacle to the successful use of the mooring mast was nature. The violent winds were constantly shifting due to the violent currents. Even if that could get the dirigibles tied down the back would be flying around. They also suggest using lead weights to hold it down, but if they fell the pedestrians on the street would be in great danger. The last obstacle faced with the fact that there was a law about airships flying to low over urban areas.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21310,8," I believe that laughter and joy are key elements that bring families and friends together. Being able to be in the company of those who make you laugh, is a greatly valued thing. Sometimes just sitting around and telling old stories, or playing board games can leave you with a sore gut because you have been laughing so hard. Many people these days have become so caught up in their lives and sometimes forget to take a moment and just laugh. I feel sorry for these people because they are missing out on the joy and enlightenment they could be sharing with the people around them. Family vacations are always chaotic, at least in my family, but they always turn out to be a memorable experience one way or another. Every winter our family gets together and goes to @ORGANIZATION1 to stay in our cabin there. A long weekend full of good food, trips to the mountain, snowball fights and family games, is a great environment to spark some laughter. Every year we bring big family games such as @LOCATION2, @CAPS1 and @LOCATION1. My family members and I tend to be very competitive people and the volume of the room in which the game is being played, tends to escalate almost through the roof. The whole house is filled with laughter and funny arguments over things like ""how in the world is that a picture of a sock!"" or ""That's not fair, you know the actual definition!"" I enjoy these times because they are memories that you can hold onto forever. Laughter is a part of happiness, and happiness needs to be a part of life. Spending time with those who make you laugh, are those that are worthy of your time. Wiser people than myself say that ""life is short."" I'm starting to realize that this statement is true. If life is short, then that time should be spent in the best way it can be; moments filled with laughter. ",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1520,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2, @CAPS3 have many debated on whether computers are good or bad. @CAPS6, I believe that computers aren't as good as many people think. Ever since computers were invented people haven't been exercising. Also less kids are reading. Lastly computers are taking away family time. When was the last time you saw a kid outside doing something active such as running or playing a sport? If you haven't it's probably because they are inside with their eyes glued to a computer screen. Exercise is a big part in staying healthy and fit. More kids are becoming over weight everyday. Computer are just another reason why. I had a friend who used to spend all her time on the computer. She became very lazy. She never wanted to exercise or doing anything active. Little by little she started gaining weight. This is happening all around the world and it need to @CAPS4! What's your reading level? @CAPS3 are students in @NUM1 grade with a @NUM2 grade reading level. Part of the reason is because they rather use their free time on the computer instead of picking up a book. Schools now do program called @CAPS5 @NUM3. This program is designed to help students improve their reading levels. I believe that if students would turn off the computers long enough and @CAPS5 we wouldn't need this program. My mom makes sure I @CAPS5 for at least @NUM4 mins everyday. Every student do the same. I remember a saying ""family time is golden time"" @CAPS6, now a days no one spends time with their family. Once again computers have played a part in this too. It's not just kids who have droped family time for computer time. It's adults too. I think the last time I spent some time with my family was about @NUM5 weeks ago when my grandparents came to visit. After that everyone went right back to staring at computer screens. In conclusion, the computers",4,5,,9,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
645,1,"The computer effects peoplelife by taking them away from their family and have is @NUM1 reasons why the computer effect the people lives. @NUM2) They do not know what is happening outside. @NUM3) Their family @NUM1). Their job. Please listen to my reason why the computer effect people lives! My first reason their they don't know what happening out ide because they are to much busy on the computer. Their friends could of won something important and they wanted you to be their but no they are just so busy on the computer. They are going to miss out of nature or hanging out with friends. Like if they are meeting one at a place and they said they if just means they were on the computer all day long. My second reason is theie family. I said their family because they could miss out on a lot of things. Such as a family reunion, a family vacation and many more. It like if one of their family members hurt and they are trying to call you but you dont picking up the phone because you to busy on the computer to pick it up. You can lose your wife cause the computer because you forgot her birthday, her and her because you are on the stupid computer. About their kids, what happens if they want to playing they have nothing also to do card their? Say no cause you computer. They family will get rewing. My third and last reason is their job. They can lose their job cause your missed work cause your on the computer for doing nothing work cause computer. If they lose their jobs they can pay for they can't use their computer. They are going to be in their house with no light and no computer cause they have on it to much and did not pay attention was happening. They akk to feel like they are going to cause they dont have their computer. Or the computer shot doen and he cant enough money to get a electriction. Those were all ny reasons. @NUM2) they don't know what is happening outside. @NUM3) their family @NUM1) Their job. Thank you for listening to my reasons.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18148,7,"Patience is basicly waiting and tolerating it. Every year on @MONTH1 @NUM1 my family become seasonal at a camp ground. There @CAPS1 play and have fan and make many life long friends. Every weekend @CAPS1 go out there and @CAPS1 take are speed boat, ""the glass from. ""@CAPS1 pat it into the the lake and dock it at a dock. Then @CAPS1 go fishing on every part of the lake and sit there for six hours. This is were patience comes in @CAPS1 have to sit and watch oar bobbers float on the smooth glass like lake. @CAPS1 sit there and watch and talk and bake in the sunlight. It is quite peaceful thowe that I'm off school and I @CAPS2 to spend time with my parents. Then in school I have to wait threw out the year and patient so the year can be over. So @CAPS1 sit there until the sudden noise of on of our bobbers sinking into the water. After that theres some yelling and ""@CAPS2 the net ""sayings. The funny. Part is that it is that it is ethier a large bass or a small nor there. And all this takes patience.",10,8,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15360,6,"The Mooring Mast by Marcia Amidon Lüsted describes the building of the mast of the Empire State Building. The mast was originally added to add height to the thousand foot building. However Al Smith, one of the builders, wanted the mast to ""serve the higher calling"" of providing a docking station for dirigibles. This idea proved to be very challenging. First, the builders had to change the structure of the tower to make it strong enough to support the weight of the dirigible swaying in the wind. Lüsted writes, ""The stress of the dirigible's load... Would have to be transmitted all the way to the building's foundation..."" When the mast was finally built, the builders faced the problem of having the dirigibles ""dangling high above pedestrians on the street."" If one ever fell, hundreds of people will be killed. Finally, there was a law that prevented ""airships flying too low over urban areas."" By docking at the Empire State Building, the dirigibles would be breaking that law. Although it was a good idea, ""The Mooring Mast"" shows that it would not be possible for dirigibles to dock atop the Empire State Building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
492,1,"Dear Local Newspaper, I heard what you were saying about if computers are a good or bad thing. I personally think that compueters are a bad thing. Three reason for this are, kids don't get any exercise people are doing innapropirate things on them, and they could lead to giving out too much info, which could lead to injury or death. The first reason is that for the amount of time that someone uses a computer, they could be outside enjoying the nice weather well, if it is a nice day of course! I mean you have to agree with me on this one, the main reasons why people are becoming obese because of some kind of technology computers. The second reason why computers are a bad thing is because some people are doing innapropriate thing on them. If people are doing such innapropriate things on them why don't the makers of the computers block them? I don't know, I mean what kind of sicko would put those sites up even? From what I have learned in computer class, they can be used for more innapropriate things than I ever even knew of! The @CAPS1 and final reason why computer technology could be a bad thing is because some people have given too much info away on them and have gotten injured by internet world @MONTH1 look like fun and games untill someone gets hurts, well thats what my mom says! In conclusion, as you can probally see I am really not a fan of the computer. The reasons why I don't like it are kids don't get enough exercise, kids are doing innapropriate things in it, and it has been used for injury and sometimes death. These are the reasons why the computers is a bad thing, so remember these tips, take this article into consideration.",3,4,,7,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9661,4,"She said this too show the determination it takes to make it no matter how many times you fail you need to get back up and try again. She displays her courage in this way also, it takes alot for someone to fail something and to get back up and try again on it. She isnt willing to accept failure, and she's trying to redeem her failure so she says she'll try again. That is why she ended the story that way.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13583,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is a happy thankful mood. The why it is a happy thankful mood is for the reason why he talk's about his family and how they sacraficed so much just for him. For example; ""They came selflessly, as many immigrant's do, to give their children a better life, even though it ment leaving behind their families, friends, and careers in the country the loved. They struggled both personally and financially, braving the harsh northern winters while yearning for their native tropics and facing cultural hardship."" @CAPS1 thing is that he also learned what family really means. For example; ""I learned the real definition of ""family"". And for this, I will never forget that house or it's gracious neighborhood or the many thing's I learned there about how to love. I will never forget how my parent's turned this simple house into a home.""",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
3383,2,"For many students it is hard to compose essay's in a public school's library. Aquiring the neccisary information is comparable to finding a needle in a haystack. This is not due to the lack of funding or even the quality of teachers and staff. No neither of these problems is the cause behind many student's inabiltiy to compose thought provoking essay and analysis over a myrad of topics. This is due to the extremes in censorship that are being placed on libraries and schools in general. Many of the relevent topics and materials need to truely understand our constantly changing world is being removed from the grasp of those who will go on to lead this new world.Some prime examples of this tyrany on knowledge is the removal of books suck as @PERSON1, @PERSON2, the @CAPS1, and many other classical works. Each of these according to many parents has good reason to be removed from our libraries. @PERSON1 @PERSON1 promotes discrimination and racial supremacy along with being written by what @CAPS3 has pegged as one of the humanity's most vile of creatures. @PERSON2 uses racial surrs that are not appropriate to be in the hands of our young children. The @CAPS1 violates the separation of church and state. Many other classical works refference racism, drugs, murder, sex and use rampant profanity. All of these are valid reasons as to why a parent @MONTH1 advocate for there to be censorship of our libraries.These reasons, as well meaning as they @MONTH1 be, are no longer good enough to be valid in todays changing environment. Many of the books that have been recomneded to be removed show us an unfiltered view of a time period from a point of view that did not belong to the 'victor' of the social battle. As we know, '@CAPS3 is written by the victors.' @CAPS4 it is good that the @CAPS5 won the @CAPS6 @CAPS7 and helped abolish slavery it is still important to realize that we still cannot remove the view point from our centers of knowledge. To forget is to remember at another time. That time is when we repeat the same mistakes again.For the parents who also want to save the innocence of their children by forbidding these books from libraries need to realize that the media has been pumping these forbiden images to their children more than books have. To censor our libraries is to cripple our children from the knowledge they need to fully understand our shadowed and fragmented world. Just because we try and close our eyes to the realities of the world does not mean that they don't exist. It is better to see and understand than to enter the world blind and dumb",5,4,,5,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15828,6,"well, since this one obstacle in their expanded use in New York City was the lack of landing area For the dirigibles. So, Al Smith decided to add a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building to allow these dirigibles to anchor there to get gas for several hours and also service. And to let the passengers on and off there also. The Dirigibles were docked by an electric winch, which hauled in a line From the front of ship then tied to the Mast. But, then yet the electric winch cable would cause stress to the building frame. The stress of these Dirigibles load and the wind pressure would transmitte all the way to the building's Foundation. The steel Frame of the building should be strengthened or modified to accommodate this new situation.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1269,1,"Dear @CAPS1 of the @ORGANIZATION1, @CAPS2 has come to my attention that several people are concerned with the technology boom and computer overuse. I can assure you that technocal upgrades only harm our people. Email and @CAPS3 @CAPS4 have only given us a decrease in our already terrible communication skills. Furthermore, we spend less and less time exercising outside because we are trapped in a technology revolution filled with inaccurate information. Why are we hurting ourselves instead of helping? @CAPS2 is very clear that our teens are growing up with no communication skills. I remember reading a persuasive essay and realizing that they used @CAPS3 @CAPS4 based language. @CAPS2 is ridiculous that we are forgetting how to use the proper grammar of the @CAPS7 language. Furthermore, I have also observed that when my friends talk they use slang terms like ""@CAPS8"" and ""@CAPS9"". I understant that computers after a faster and much easier way to communicate but we definetley can't forget the work of @CAPS10 . With the , people who should hope that they don't become a biggest loser contestant say @CAPS2, but, if they continue to mind on their then they will join the millions of obese. Americans I think that when people at their computer they tend to bring junk food with them and for! contrast to this from spending these hours with @ORGANIZATION2 instead of Exercising and let you creative wild would citizen rather pay for a computer or the vast, free, and gorgeous? Furthermore, people are wasting their important attention. A fact that over three of the information in isnt reliable therefore. Also, statistics show that nearly @PERCENT1 of students use to. These statistics also display that when students use these sites they clearly will score lower than a student who did the seemingly ""daunting"" task of looking for the reasearch in a textbook. What is so daunting about @CAPS2? Obviously, nothing is overwhelming. @CAPS2 is only pleasure when the student will get a phenomenal grade and their surronding classmates won't. Furthermore, I ask you why are people flooding their brains with unrealiable information? In conclusion, the effects computers have on people are very negative. Due to this, many people have no communication skills. They are also more likely to become less obese and if that's not enough they are hurting themselves because they are obsessed with inaccurate information. I urge people to dump @PERSON1 and @CAPS11. PC and start seeing @ORGANIZATION2 Nature! She's beautiful!",5,6,,11,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21473,8,"  When we all get together on my dad side, we just all sit, laugh, and talk loud. I all ways say that we are one big fake @CAPS1 family. All the aunts, uncles, and cousin come around my grandma's small kitchen table and talk. There is so many conversation going on and people talking loud and laughing, that to me it make feel like a home away from home. This was the case when some of us got together for a late birthday party for me, when I was in @LOCATION1 @DATE2.   It was @DATE1, my grandma, uncle, aunt, dad, my two cousin, and I; were sitting around the kitchen table eating cake and talking. We were talking about a problem that I was having. Some how my dad deiced to pretend like we were in court. My aunt said to @PERSON2 to go and get a wig for the judge, which was my uncle. @PERSON2 brought back this blond wig and she puts it on my dad's head, he looked so funny. Aunt @PERSON3 was fixing the front of the wig for him. I grab his phone and start taking a bunch of pictures of him in the wig. I send one to my mom saying, ""@CAPS2 mom dad is pretty."" We were all laughing so hard. Then my grandma deices to put on the wig. Grandma keep saying that it was itchy and tickling her. After she took off the wig, she stared to tell us a story about the time when my grandpa pocked her in the left side of her rump with a compass. She first set up the story for us, by telling us who the teacher was. It was a funny @DATE2 name that I don't remember. Uncle @CAPS3 was doing an impression of what he thought the teacher would be like. His impression was like the old bank owner on @PERSON1. We all stared to laugh really hard. When my grandma finally got to the main part of the story, he was so mad at her, because she wrote his name down for talking in class and he also liked her. So he took a compass and poked her in the rump. For some reason my dad and uncle thought it was so funny that they made her say it over and over again in a rime. She couldn't say rump with out laughing. We all stared to laugh really hard because she couldn't say rump. Grandma was laughing so hard she would fall back into her chair and I though she was going to die of over laughter. The laughing got so bad we were starting to cry of laughing so much.  As you can see, my dad side really like to laugh and be funny.We are a great big fake @CAPS1 family. I believe that laughter is a very important part in any relationship you have with any one you meet. One of my favorite things to do is laugh and I will most likely laugh at anything some one says. When my dad and his younger brother get together prepare to laugh really, really hard.",17,22,,39,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4411,2,"The content in todays materials are not always subtible for young children. Information now distributed in the media and other networks can be harmful for some young children to read or be surrounded by, including video games. By growing up in a violent enviornment, children observe and have the greater chance at becoming violent. The continuence of censorship in todays materials are a necessity to the well being of the children in todays society.     In video games there are ratings that help explain wat is subtible for each age throughout childhood and adolesence. Movies are also the same, making it harder for younger children to see certain movies. Books and magazines are not as well protected although they should be. Age and maturity plays a huge role in whether or not a child should be aloud to read and be introduced to specific material. Violence is a major trend in video games in todays world, and some of the influence it brings on children is unecessary and eventually detrimental to their well being.     The reason ratings should be changed is because children obsorb their enviornment and become what they see, so if they are introduced to violent behavior they have a greater chance in becoming violent children. In libraries there are sections for every age group, specific genre of books, fiction, and non fiction. But some of the explicit material in books and magazines should also be censored before they are distributed on shelves and allowed available for young teenagers and children. As a part of the community libraries should take apart in the well being of the children and not expose them to information earlier than necessary.     Throughout my own experience, I have seen children grow up too fast when exposed to certain knowledge. Especially in todays music, radios do a good job in editing content in songs, by puting parental advisory on certain cd's, but this still does not stop them from buying the material. In games including, @CAPS1 of @CAPS2, @NUM1, etc. teens are now becoming accostumed to this type of behavior, that is not safe nor condusive for children.     By censoring certain material it disallows the continuence of bad behavior amongst our youth today",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10049,4,The writes this this conclusion to the end of the story because he wants people to know that the season's are changing and the flowers are going to be dying. He also wants you you to know that when the season changes back the flower will try and fit again with the other flowers. that’s what the author means when he talks about taking the test again.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6519,3,"First the bike encounters flat roads in the desert which are very easy to navigate through; when he gets to his first town he still goes on trying to get to Yosemite, then after is going low so he looks for some more water to help him go. Then he kept going and he experienced a fork in the road. After the fork he kept going and he then faced another problem. That problem was an old person told him to go @NUM1 miles to the town and he didn’t trust the guy. Then the biker listened and he went on down the road. He then faced his next problem. The flat road started to get very wary with short high and low hills. These hills reduced his stamina greatly. Then he had to deal with a rocky and bumpy desteart road. He then had to face a snake and he had to avoid it so it didn’t attack him. Finally the biker faced his  las long hill and he finally found a bait and tackle shop with lots of water.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21010,8," One day I decided to go over to my friend @PERSON1's house. When I went over there we cleaned the pool and i ran from her dad because he was chasing me around with a booger on his finger. This was one of the days that me and @PERSON1 laughed more then ever!  We started the day just laying in her bad and watching a movie on her tiny @CAPS1. I can't really remember what movie is was but it doesn't really matter since we were too busy talking about totally random things.  After the movie was over we went out into the living room to watch @CAPS2 bob because @PERSON1 doesn't have cable in her room. At the time, I had a knee injury so it took me a minute to get comfortable. I got myself situated on the couch and @PERSON1 sat next to me. Her dad came in about @NUM1 minutes later with a booger on his index finger. He threatened to give me booger lip, which is where he puts the booger on your lip, and I got up and tried to run away. I knew if I didn't get away he would really put in on my lip because he had done it before. it hurt really bad putting that much pressure on my knee so I hoped as fast as I could on one leg. I hid in @PERSON1's closet and all I could hear in the background was @PERSON1's laughter and her dads footsteps. I waited in her closet for like @NUM2 minutes and the got out because I could tell the coast was clear. I went back out in the living room and @PERSON1 and I laughed about the whole thing.  After we stopped laughing we decided to go outside and clean the pool. we were in the mood for swimming and the pool had been out all winter so it was really nasty in there. there were tat poles, dirt, some slimy green stuff, parasites and who knows what else. I wouldn't be surprised if there were fish in there. We got in and started scooping all of the water out with buckets. We didn't notice the tad poles until then. We didn't want to throw them out in the yard with all of the rest of the water because we knew that there would dry up and die. So every time we scooped a bucket full of water, we would go through it and get all of them out and put them in a little can that we had saved the tad poles and scooping all of the water out took about @NUM3 and a half hours. after that we went in the house and looked for some pool cleaner and soap. We couldn't find and so we went and got the shampoo. We poured the shampoo all over the bottom of the pool and started scrubbing. That was taking too long and it wasn't very fun so we got the brilliant idea to put shampoo all over our clothes and slide around. I slipped about a dozen times and so did she. It was hard to stay on our feet. We laughed so hard I almost peed myself but I couldn't go inside because I was soaked and I had soap all over my body. After the pool was all spick and span we had to scoop all out the soap and water out again. All of this took about @NUM4 hours but it was really and we laughed a lot. @PERSON1's mom came home from work and was so happy that we cleaned it because it meant she doesn't have to do it.  After my grandpa came to get me, me and @PERSON1 said our goodbyes. I went home and thought about how that was one of the funnest days of my life. Over all, I think on this day I laughed more then ever before.",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
562,1,"Dear @CAPS1 @CAPS2 @CAPS3, @CAPS4 you know @PERCENT1 of people today use the computer for necessary reasons? @CAPS5's true! @CAPS5's a fact the computer can help you with keeping in touch with friends, getting the latest news, and even gives you map access. Let me tell you some important facts about the computer. Of course, we all have friends in different cities and/or states! Instead of over charging a phone bill, many people keep in touch via email. Email is high tech, and super easY! All you need is your friends email adress and you can send them anything from a friendly hello, to @CAPS1 pictures of the family. Teens love to chat with friends and they're able to get to know each other better through the computer. Sites such as facebook are certainly popular with this generation of teens. The fun messages are what makes everything so great. Keep in mind all the avaiible ways to get in touch with friends and see why the computer is so great. Everytime I log onto the computer I'm able to see the latest news updates! I remember going on and seeing something pop up about my favorite band breaking up. Thanks to the computer I got to read all about @CAPS5 and I was extremely glad I'd seen that because if I hadn't I wouldn't of got to see their last concert. While I do understand, the computer @MONTH1 not be the healthiest activity, @CAPS5 definaltly is a great news source and everyone reads the news whether @CAPS5 be political, or about celeberties. Knowledge about what's currently happening in our country, and exercise is equally as important therefore, I'd be the first to support the computer as a possitive effect on people today. Have you ever been lost? Maybe you didn't write down the correct directions, or couldn't remember. Next time bok up directions on the computer! @CAPS5's so helpful and could really save you a hastle. There're so many websites that have maps you can print out, such as map quest. @CAPS5's a much easier, clearer way to understand where exactly you need to go. In my opinion @CAPS5 can help so much and @CAPS5 would be the right idea to go cheer @CAPS5 out today. Imagine all the places you could go just by getting a map online! Keep this in mind as one of the many great things about the computer. Now that you know some posotives about the computer, remember how they could benefit you! Being able to chat with friends is one of the best! Don't forget about hearing the latest news, and finally, never get lost again, just print out a map. There's no doubt in my mind the computer has a very possative effect on every one! The time is now to get out there and pick up a computer for yourself!",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15430,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building were challenged the obstacles of construction, safety, and nature that did not allow dirigibles to dock there. These dirigibles or blimps were large balloons that were capable of carrying passengers but needed a great landing area. In order for dirigibles to be used as transportation, architects needed to design a suitable mooring mast. However, the weight and pressure of a blimp on a mast would cause a large amount of stress to the building's frame. The builders of the Empire State building were faced with producing ""over sixty thousand dollars' worth of modifications"" to the building's framework. Not only was attempting blimps to dock there a lot of work and very costly, builders were challenge with safety issues. As experienced to the German blimp ""Hindenburg,"" dirigibles that use hydrogen are ""highly flammable."" If any incident occurred over the Empire State building in New York, involving a dirigible, it would affect the enormous population in the area by killing so many lives. Flying too low over the city was another challenge to safety that a law would make illegal and unsuccessful for blimps to be used. Lastly, nature was an obstacle the builders faced in docking dirigibles. At mast times, the ""forceful winds"" would cause the back of the ship swivel which could lead to it hitting the sharp spires and be punctured. Lead weights were also not safe when dangling over pedestrians. These obstacles made it difficult to create gear that would allow dirigibles to dock on the building.",4,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4746,2,"Do you think libraries should have the right to take books and movies off the shelves if they find it offensive? In my opinon I do not agree and I think they should not be able to take them off the shelves. Many people have different thoughts and opinons and I am going to state mine in the next few paragraphs.      To begin with, not everybody likes to read or watch the same types of books or movies.Some like romantic,scary,myserious and there are many more selections.For instincts if one person reads something that they do not agree with, that does not mean the next person to read it is not going to like it either. Sometimes I enjoy reading books where people get hurt and sometimes killed but @CAPS1 someone else reads it,they might think that it is horrible and very offensive.    Another reason is, @CAPS1 I go to the library I expect to get the book that I want to read not what others like. One time I went to the library and I was looking for a romantic book to read and I could not find it. So I went up and asked the lady at the counter and she said they do not have it anymore,and I asked why and she told me a lady found it wrong for children to be reading. In my opinon, maybe that lady did not even like romantic books.They should not just off of what one person believes. The next reason is, the library put the movie or book on the shelf in the first place because they thought people would enjoy it. The writer or producer would not be very happy if he found out that his/her movie or book got taken out of the library because they found it offensive. Just give the book a chance and see how everybody likes it. I understand if everybody thought it was really offensive to take it off but not just one person.    To end with, my belief is that if they had the book in their library at one time it should just stay in there till it gets old and falls apart. The library is open to any and every type of books,not just boring ones.So I believe the books should not get taken off the sheleves they should just stay right were their suppose to be.If they do not like the book or movie then suggest to other peoples family not to read it or have them read it and see their reaction",4,4,,4,4.0,3.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9179,4,Will you no in the spring the snows melt and the grass is not pretty and it’s a muddy grass for the pigs who love to now in mud how about a mud  hath ford see what winter can do to you have about the tree now weight leave to live etc good life,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19126,7,"One day I was going hunting and I was patiently waiting for my dad to get his clothes on. When he finally did we headed out to the woods. After that we got in a blind, as we patiently waited for fiftyen minutes. Just then a deer came in. It was a perfect doe. Finally the deer gets in front of the blind about @NUM1 or @CAPS1 and my dad quietly says ""wait for it to turn broadside."" @CAPS1 I waited until it turn and shoot the doe. Finally we get out and find my arrow but never found the deer and I had to have patient for next years hunt.",8,8,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7632,3,"The cyclist was affected majorly by a few dreadful parts of the setting. In the beginning, when it was not as hot and he had plenty of water, the cyclist was absolutely fine. As the day went on, he felt the heat bearing down on him. He drank all his water, and now he felt desperate. His mood changed with the setting, and he was extremely happy once he reached Gary and @ORGANIZATION1. Also, this cyclist decided to blame the old men for giving him bad directions when he was in trouble, but he thanked them once he realized they were correct.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6746,3,"The feature of the setting is making the cyclist frustrated, thirsty, and confused. The features are making him frustrated by he thought he was going the right way where he really was going out.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21416,8,"Many people believe that laughter is a key part of any relationship. There are many times when even the slightest laugh is needed to break the tension, or even just relieve some stress every once in a while. It is often said that laughter is the best medicine, and also the cheapest. Laughter is easily found and common to come by. In my case, laughter comes naturally to my sister and I and for no particular reason at all; it not only saved, but it built our relationship to what it is today.   When we were younger, my older sister and I did not get along very well at all. She would always tease me, then laugh about it; and I too would laugh at things that she did not find humorous in any way, shape, or form. This constantly caused conflict and many arguments between the two of us; therefore we hated each other and, in a sense, wanted nothing to do with each other.  As my sister and I grew older and wiser, we started to become much more alike. We still made fun of, teased, antagonized, and pulled childish pranks on each other; but instead of getting angry, we would just laugh about it instead. As we continued to make each other laugh, we found ourselves getting along so much better. Soon after that, we began hanging out more and more and just for the fun of it, not because our parents told us too. Before we knew it, my sister and I were best friends.  It is rare to hear about siblings being best friends. I am lucky to be able to say that my older sister is my best friend. Personally, I feel that laughter has played a huge roll in the relationship between my older sister and I. Now we depend on each other because we both know that no matter what, we can always make one another laugh and virtually cheer each other up. We hang out when we need to get away or when we have something that we need to get off our chests. We know we have each other for that because we know we can always laugh about it in the end.",20,19,40.0,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8891,4,"By ending the story with the idea of retaking a test in the spring, the author sets a feeling of starting fresh and perservering . for example , when the author says” when the snow melts and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding ,”she show the idea of starting a fresh new life in the spring by returning to their home and the hibiscus is starting fresh by  budding again. This is why spring is when saeng wants to start fresh and retake the test. The paragraph also shows that saeng, like the hibiscus, is perservering. The hibiscus is perservering by making it through the winter and blooming again while saeng   is perservering by retaking the test. The author ends with this paragraph to show that saeng is not going to give up. ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9368,4,"The reason why the author concluded the story with that paragraph was because at basically explained everything You needed to know for the ending. It basically explains that she is willing to take the time to study for the test she had previously taken and did not pass and wants to take it again once spring arrives. For example, the geese had left for the winter. and once they return in the spring, she will take the test over again, in conclusion, the author concludes the story with this paragraph because it best explains the ending of the story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
17983,7,"Have you ever learn spritarnt just one turns in your life. I have let ??? you about it. One day I was at home watching too .all of a sudden I had to use the bathroom really bad. Unfortunately they my momma and my sisters had to go. My momma went first and my sister was going next. My momma didn’t take very long but my sister was in there while and I was getting mad but l still was waiting patiently. It was holding it in but I knew eventually I new that it was going to come out eventually, but just waiting. I was doing all I can to get in  the bathroom. I was banging on the door trying to just the back and I wait in the bathroom and handled my business. In conclusion, this is a time that I was patient.",8,10,,18,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15177,6,"The builders of the empire state building attempt to allow dirigibles to dock there was a fuetle effort. The tried a numerous amount of different ways to approach this idea. There were a few different theorie's on what would be best, and how to develope the Mooring Mast by Al Smith and John Tauranac. Each man had a different thought on how the whole structure would turn out. The architects designed a new glass and chrome-nickel stainless steel tower that ranged from the bottom to the top of the empire state Building. This structure helped support the mooring are, where the dirigibles were docked. But the fate of the Mast was not to bright. ""The Mooring Mast of the Empire state building was Never destined to fulfill its purpose, for reasons that should have been apparent before it was ever constructed."" This statement is utterly true. And shows the work of the architects was never fully planned and over looked for the Mast to be durable.",1,0,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7239,3,"The cyclist’s condition was greatly influenced by his setting because he was lost in the high deserts of California in June. The heat crippiled him or he traveled in search of Yosemite. He became lost and ran out of water making his situation worse. Being lost in seemingly the middle of nowhere in the hot heat he became exausted, dehydrated and fearing heat stroke and loss of consicencess. This is shown in the essay by, ""the growing realization that could drop from heatstroke"" And, ""It looked like i was going to lose concisness for the last time.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6603,3,"The setting affected the cyclist in many ways, for example, the heat was unberable beating down on him during this long ride. The fact that he had no where around him to fill up his water bottle. So he was deing of thirst and he didn’t know where he was going or how far he had to go. The setting was crushal in this story.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18284,7,"Patience is a lot of things. Patience is used every day. You can be waiting for a check, you could wait for a letter. Sometimes paitents can be fast or be slow. @CAPS2 can be used in school or even a job. If you wait in patience on standing things could happen to you. For a test you can use patience by waiting for an answer to a question by waiting a little longer to get the answer instead of going fast and not getting @CAPS2 right. Patience can be used in @CAPS1 in experiments  @CAPS2 could also be used in math to find an answer. When you are building a model you have to use patients so @CAPS2 is right not having patients @CAPS2 will be wrong. That is what patients means to me and everyone has to use @CAPS2 and @CAPS2 is part of your daily life.",5,6,,11,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14939,6,Al Smith was a very competitive person: one of @CAPS1 Al had to go through is competing with another building and he had to make his building taller Than the Chrysler building. Wich in @DATE1 if he didn't make his building taller he would of lost the tittel of The tallest building in new york,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18583,7,"I was patient when my dad said he would get me some @CAPS1. They were @CAPS2 and @CAPS3 the shoes caust @MONEY1. I asked a few times. He didn`t answer, so I knew what to do. I decided the dishes, clean my room. I waited the shoes so bad; I cleaned stuff that was already clean. After a month of the cleaning, I still didn`t get the shoes. That’s how something went wrong. SCHOOL!!!!!!! I haven`t ben acting right in school. I got my stuff together. Then I got the @CAPS4.",9,8,,17,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12690,5,"The mood created by the author is a loveing and careing mood. in the second paragraph he describes the the house as having the rich culinary cooking of his paroents the passionate cuban music filled in the air the aromas of the kitchen in there warm home. he tells that in there house they have feast also the many immigrants they invite into there house until they can leave by them self or fine a place to live. he describes family has nothing to do with blood relatives every body in there neiborhood is family and they care for each other and care for any of the people who need help at the end he says ""I will never foget how my parents turned this simple house into a home."" he tells how they taught him love and real defination of family he describes there house as being a Warm house. ",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1655,1,"Dear local newspaper, I think computers have a positive effect on people. Some adults and mostly kids are not getting enough exercise, or even spending time with family. Some parents are less active with their kids. Kids are failing to do their homework because they are always on the computer when they get home. Adults and kids are getting less excersize. Sitting down reading or what ever they do on the computer is not excersizeing. They are going to get fat because they eat and sit down and than they get hungery again than eat and sit down. Some people say that your getting finger and arm exsersize by and moveing the mouse, thats not really true. Looking at the computer screen all day can cause masive hand People are also not spending time with family. They are sitting infront or a computer and ignoring everyone and everything around them. Kids could be enjoying other things besides computers. Parents could be outside. Playing catch with their kids or even playing a board game with them. People are not less active. They are not going out and haveing fun jumping around with their friends. Instead they aim them on computers or message them on facebook or even myspace. Kids are failing in school because they fail to do their home work after school. They would rather go on the computer. This is why i think computers have an positive effect on kids and adults.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
8906,4,"The author uses this concluding paragraph to draw the whole story together. She speaks of the driving test, geese, and the hibiscus plant three subjects found in the story. when she says ""when the snow melts and the geese return"", she is referring to the geese mentioned when she says ""She lifted her head and watched as their distinctive V was etched against the evening sky"". She went through a change, much like the geese do every winter. She realizes ""that many of the things that she had thought of as strange befere had become...familiar to her now"". We all have to go through changes, Saeng just had a bigger one. ",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10289,4,"The author concludes the story this way because in the winter time she wai’t be able to see the hibiscus .she is used to  going outside in the garden and seeing her beautiful plant In conclusion the author concludes the story that way, because in the winter time she wai’t see  her plant.  ",0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21384,8," It was the @DATE1 and my friend @PERSON1 was going to come home with @CAPS2. We talked about our plans for the week all @DATE1 at @DATE1. Some of our ideas that we had thought up included going to a movie, hanging out at my house and doing our nails while telling stories, or going on an adventure around my neighborhood. At lunch that @DATE1 we decided on trying to do all of the ideas because we had @DATE1 days to hang out. After lunch we went to our next two classes and the classes seemed to go by really slow. Finally the @DATE1 bell of the @DATE1 rang and @PERSON1 and I ran to our locker to meet up and get all of our stuff to go home.  We went outside the front doors of the @DATE1 and waited on the front steps for my mom. We waited for twenty minutes @DATE1 we remembered that my mom told @CAPS2 that we would have to walk home after @DATE1 because she had to work late. @PERSON1 and I looked over at each other and started laughing, because we had totally forgotten about having to walk home. Finally we stopped laughing and got up to walk home. On our way home we had my i-pod out and the volume turned to max so we could listen to music and dance around. We finally made it home and dropped all of our stuff off and got something to drink.  On our way to my moms work, we stopped at the local gas station to get something to eat . We left the gas station and continued to my moms work. On the way to the bank where my mom works we came across a dog chasing a squirrel. The dog was running so fast that the fur on its face was pushed back and it looked like it was going to rip off. The squirrel ran up a tree that was nearby, but the dog didn't realize that he couldn't climb the trunk and ended up running head first into the tree. @PERSON1 and I started laughing at the dog because it stumbled around for a few minutes and then decided to sit down and just bark at he tree. We left the dog and squirrel and continued to the bank. We arrived at the bank twenty minutes later and talked to my mom. She gave us money to go buy a coffee and then she told us to go back home. On our way home we stopped at @ORGANIZATION2 and got coffee.   On our way back to my house from @ORGANIZATION2 we watched the people drive by and laughed at all the people singing in their cars while stopped at the light. We arrived back at my house and decided to put a movie in. We watched @CAPS1 @CAPS2 and ate popcorn. Any time the little yellow people came into the movie we laughed because we both thought they were cute. After the movie my parents got home, and we had pizza and @CAPS3. Pepper for dinner. After dinner we played the wii and then fell asleep. The next @DATE1 when we woke up my dad made us pancakes and eggs for breakfast. After breakfast we got ready to go and my mom took us to the mall. At the mall my mom told @PERSON1 and I to meet her back at food court around two. We left my mom and headed to the first store. While we were walking to one of the store we saw a guy with a mowhak and a green beard. We looked at each other and started laughing because his beard looked like a @CAPS4 tree tipped over. At @NUM1-o'clock we left to go back to food court to meet up with my mom. She bought us @ORGANIZATION1 and told us that if we left now we could go see a movie. We decided to stay for one more hour and then we left to go home. On our way home we danced around in the backseat and sang to all of the songs that we knew.  When we arrived home we played the wii until my dad got there. After my dad got home we ate dinner and then played the wii again. This time when we played the wii we got my parents to play too. Whenever it was my moms turn we would laugh because of how she would set herself up to bowl. After we finished playing the wii @PERSON1 and I went into my room and talked about all of the guys that we liked. We laughed at some of our choices because of the reasons that we liked them. We talked for about two hours and then fell asleep. The next @DATE1 we woke up and had eggs and toast for breakfast. After breakfast @PERSON1 got dressed to go home. After she left we talked over text about all the fun we had, and how we couldn't wait for tomorrow.",19,20,38.0,38,,,,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15551,6,"The empire State Building builders faced  different obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The builders first had to learn about the mooring lines. They ""consulted with experts, taking tours of the equipment and mooring operations ""to learn more about them first hand. The builders also had to worry about the frame of the Empire State Building. The frame ""would have to be modified and strengthened to accomodate this new situation."" This meant the builders would have to go back and work on the frame again. Attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building caused the builders to face different obstacles.",3,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9189,4,I think the author includes this paragraph  in  the  story  because  it  makes  sence  the  geese  come  back  home  after  the  snow  melts  and  saeng  try’s  to  take  her  test  again  around  that  time.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16486,6,The builders had to go through many obstacles to @CAPS1 to allow the dirigible to dock on the @ORGANIZATION2. The first thing that was a problem with geting it to the top of the Empire State Building. They said the wind made it really hard to get the dirigible up there with out it poping. There was also the safty of it being up there. There was already a fire from another dirigible catching on fire. The gases inside are really flamable and that would make a really big problem. The last thing that they had to conider was if Airships were to Low. The dirigible would pop. for all those reason they had to concider them to @CAPS1 to allow the dirigible on the Empire State Building.,2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4251,2,"Devin @NUM1 @NUM2                                   @CAPS1 @CAPS2    Do you like the libary? There is always an argument about how books, music, movies, magazines, ete., should be removed from the shelves if people find them offensive. Which brings me to @CAPS1 @CAPS2; there is always the choice of a different libary to choose from. You also don't have to look at the book or watch the movie. Being an @CAPS3 author you have the freedom of speech, you can write whatever you feel like writing.      First, is your choice of libary. There is sevral different libraries in one town. Some have childern sections, where all the books are appropriate for young childern to read. Also the parents of the childern need to keep an eye on what their child will be reading, or looking at. There has to be at least twenty to thirty libaries in @LOCATION1, so you always have a different option.     Second, you don't have to read the book, or watch the movie. If you see something you don't like about the book, why complain about it? Just put the book down, someone else might be interested in the book. You have the freedom to pick out the book.       Last, is the freedom of speech of the author of the book. Being an @CAPS3 citizen you have the right to write down whatever you want to write down. So people do not have the right to blame the author for what he or she writes down. Many people have been inspired by certain books that throughout history have been controversial.  Where would we be without those books and authors?     I have given you three reasons on @CAPS1 view of censorship in libraries. You have the choice of libraries, you don't have to read the book, and the author has the freedom to write what they choose",4,4,,4,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19433,7,"When I hurt my hand on the same day of meaping, I was patient, I was patient. I fell in the hall and I went to the office, I waited patietly for them to call my mom. to pick me up. When my mom she said she was going to take me to the @CAPS1 room. It took a wile to find a parking spot when we got there, I was patient even though hand hurting. The we finally found one and then went inside. My mom went to the font desk to tell them I was there. We waited to a little while and then a nurse came out and use go in a room and talk, she said I would have to wait for a bed to open up for x-rays. I saw a lady through the window I knew it was for me, she opened the doors and asked for @PERSON1. She had us follow her to a room where we waited about forty five minutes for a doctor to come in and take us to the x-ray room. When they finished we went back to the room and waited a wile. Antill the doctor come in and said I didn't broke anything, he gave me a brace and I went home, @CAPS2 all of that I was patient.",8,11,,19,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12033,5,"The mood of the excerpt is very bright. The author describes her risk taking, loving parents. The author describes the many things her parents have given to her. ""Within its walls, my young parents created our traditional Cuban home... Both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their rich culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today... Here the innocence of childhood, the congregation of family and friends, the endless celebrations that encompassed both, formed the backdrop to life in our warm house.""     As you can see, the author. Narciso Rodriguez, describes her young life and home with happiness and greatfullness. This is all generously spoken within the depths of the excerpt. Many authors enjoy using these tones to express their own personal feelings and opinions about the matter. In this case, the author wanted to express joy in her writing.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12719,5,"The mood created by the author in the memoir is happiness because in mostly all of the paragraphs he talks about how much he loves his parents and his cuban culture. Narciso talks about how his parents made his everyday house into a home. That is why I think Narciso is happy in this memior. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""Within the walls, my young parents created our traditional cuban home, the very heart of which was my kitchen.""",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6443,3,"The features of the setting affect the cyclist in many ways. For instance, If you were cycling in a very cold climate you wouldn’t sweat as much and wouldn’t need to drink as much water, but in the story the cyclist is in a very hot climate and he runs out of water, “The water bottles contained only a few tantalizing sps,wide cings of sweat circled my shirt and the growing realizating that I could drop from heat stroke on a gorgeous day in June…” This quote explains that the setting of the cycling plays a huge role in the cyclist. Also, the terrain can affect biker. If one was to ride on a flat terrain is gonna put much wear…and tear on the cyclists body therefore the flat terrain would be easier. All of those reasons explains that the settings affect the cyclist in many  ways.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12032,5,"the @CAPS1 that the author created in the memoir was an uplifting one. His memoir talked about growing up in the gattr of Newark, New Jersey (which became more of a ghetto), during the time of immigration. His neighborhood was full of Spanish, @PERSON1, and Italian immigrants. His family would come over and they would have dinner together, and they would have people stay in their house until they got back on their feet. He had a childhood full of family and friendship. which is great to have.",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16400,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The author stated, ""The greatest reason was one of safety."" Dirigibles used hydrogen more often than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. If a dirigible were to catch fire or crash, it would be very dangerous over a populated area.Another obstacle was nature. The author wrote, ""the winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents."" The wind would be too much for a dirigible to handle.A final reason stating why they couldnt dock was because it was against the law. The story stated, ""... was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas."" This law made it illegal to dock.The dirigibles faced many obstacles that didnt allow them to dock at the Empire State Building.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19339,7,"It’s about three @CAPS1 clock the clock tells me, but I can’t go to sleep because my @CAPS2 @CAPS3 and I are going fishing. So  it’s eight @CAPS1’clock now my @CAPS2 was suppose to be here at seven, but my grandma kept say he’ll be here, so I believe her but I was a little worried.Now it’s ten @CAPS1’clock in by know. I’m just furious I am about to cry, but my grandma said he’ll be here, in I said, “@CAPS4 he won’t in went in my room then I realize he well be here he will be here.Then I heard the door open I ran in it was him I ran in said you finnaly came in we ate then I look outside in seen the boat. That’s a time I should patience.",8,7,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18720,7,Patience is a thing that you develop when you are calm and relaxed. I have been patient everyday in school. Being patient with my teachers. I have been patient with kids at school that like to pic on people and tease them. I have patients some days and others that means something is going wrong and that means I don’t have any more. I like having patients because it makes you get relaxed and everything. Patients is a good thing that you can have. I think patents increases your life span. Many people in the world don’t have that many patients and I think that decreases your life span. I don’t think if I didn’t have any patients I wouldn’t be in school right now cause some kids just have problems and they and don’t have and they get bad grades and everything.,5,5,,10,,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,0.0,1.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4632,2,"@CAPS1 happened to using books and films as simple entertainment? Why are we now cautious of @CAPS1 our children pick off the shelf? Society today has changed the way we once viewed our sources of entertainment. Books are now viewed with skepticism and once harmless movies and magazines are full of material no one should be reading or watching. Music used to be a beautiful form of art, but now when you turn on your radio, @CAPS1 do you hear? Mindless spewing of words linked together with curses and other garbage. Should libraries use caution when renting something to someone who shouldn't be using that material for harmless entertainment.     There once was a young girl, fourteen or fifteen, who loved to read and listen to music. She was bright but shy, and used books as her friends. Each day she walked to the library for a new story to dive in. One day she came across a book on the top shelf of the fiction section. The book looked used, for its spine was badly split and several of the pages were nearly detached. She reached for the book, intrigued, and flipped through the pages. Her innocent and naive mind caught a hold of a world she didn't know. After reading the book, she was filled with guilt. It wasn't a good book, but a book that was laced with a harmful message. This young girl, once pure and simple, now knew things no one at that age should know. So, why wasn't there a warning of some sort?     The difference between writing something offensive and being offensive is that the writer usually doesn't intend to be hurtful or rude. The author most likely intended for the peice of literature to be enjoyed with a clear and playful attitude. However the comparison between writing something offensive and being offensive is far different. When you read something in a book or magazine that disturbs you, put it down, or throw it away. No one is forcing you to read the material. Yet, the real question is; @CAPS1 about our children? How do we keep them safe from offensive literature? And @CAPS1 about music? Or movies?     Remember the old black and white films? How, no matter @CAPS1 the plot or storyline is, the two leading roles somehow fall in love in the end? The ending title fills the screen just before the two actors share a kiss and then the screen goes black. Mind, there are still movies with happy endings and a positive message. @CAPS1 about the other films? Some of the biggest blockbusters are those which have either violence, some form or racism, and/or sexual content. Personally going to the movies to see a new action movie that looks thrilling and entertaining should be fun, but where does the fun stop? After the guy in the first scene has just been brutally murdered? Or after the two lovers share a special bond that should be kept private? And @CAPS1 happens when this movie is released and checked out from the library by a young boy who just wants a fun sleepover with his friends? How do we keep these sorts of material away from them?     Libraries should use major caution when priting labels to place on their books, movies, magazines, etc. Librarians should make sure that the book a child hands to them is safe to read for that age level. Also, they should check the ratings on movies or make them not available to certain age group. Parents should also use caution when letting your child go to the movies with friends. Make sure they see something fun, but with a positive message.     Should libraries take certain material off their shelves? I don't think so. However, be careful @CAPS1 you read or watch, for it might not please you. Use the internet as a source to find reviews on books and magazines, so see how well it was rated and then decide whether it is an intriguing read or an amazing film. Have fun, but be careful",6,6,,6,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4120,2,"I believe that there are many books in a library that should not be avalible to everybody that goes into a public library. Yes there are some very offincive items in a library, such as a book about racism to african americans. No, that person who takes offince in those itmes does not have to be around them or even go into the library at all. The library is open to any and or everybody.      Lets suppose you have a young child, and you take him/her to the public library with you. As your looking for a book the child reaches to the highest book that he/she can reach, pulls it off the shelf and it lands on the floor open. You look down to see what had happened and you see the book lying there with an inappropriate picture right infront of your child. Thats your own fault, not the librarys.     Although many times its not the librarys fault where certain books are at, you should be more responsible and check out the area in which you are looking.      I think there should be a select area for which the 'inappropriate material' should be kept. And for a person to get into the select area they must show a membership type of identification, and sign a waver saying the material they have checked out will cause no trouble nor take offince to anybody in which the customer is around.     And that is my view on this subject.",2,3,,2,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
10618,4,"The author concludes her story with that last paragraph because it shows the relasonship between saeng and the habiscas, and how much just seeing it feels. It also shows that the habiscus  motivates her because it reminds her of her home land that she loves so much and that its like have a pysical memorie of her home land",1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12940,5,"In the memoir, Narciso Rodriguez, from Home: the Blueprints of Our Lives, The mood of the author created is Grateful, ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrifice"" Narciso says in paragraph @NUM1 first sentence.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
7433,3,"In the story, these are many elements that affected the cyclist in his journey.The first features of the setting that affects him is the old water pump, which did not work, and when it did the water from it lasted horrible. The next obstacles on his journey was rough terrain. ""Flat road  was replaced by short rolling hills,"" was how he described it. When the narrator finally finds a building, it turns out to be  abandoned. Eventually he finds a  town and rest after his long journey, and learns his lesson from before not to take advice from people he doesn’t know.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15297,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building obstacles can be described in the following ways. First of all, the main obstacle was the nature of the mast. They described it as, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents"" (paragraph @NUM1). Secondly, the dirigibles would dangle on top of the building, which wasn't safe for pedestrians. Lastly, there was a law for airships that couldn't fly too low or too high. The above explains the obstacles of the Empire State Building for dirigibles.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13355,5,"The whole memoir gives off a very positive attitude. The author explains a feeling of unity and Friendship. This quote shows this, ""… all of these cultures came together in great solidarity in Friendship."" The author is saying that despite the fact that they were living in times of racism, all different cultures and their neighborhood lived in peace. Paragraph @NUM1 has a feeling of caring. For others and love. The author explains how his mother and Father moved out of Cuba for better lives for generations to come."" ""They came selflessly,… To give their children a better life, even though it meant leaving behind their Families, Friends, and careers in the country they loved,"" shows the feelings perfectly. The final part of the memoir presents great thanks to the authors parents. He states, ""I will always be grateful to my parents For their love and sacrifice."" @CAPS1, in the last line of the memoir, the author describes the true mood of his house growing up. The memoir reads, ""I will never forget how my parents turned a simple house into a home."" The author is saying that his house was and just living space, it was full of love, caring, and great relationships. The whole memoir has a loving mood.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15062,6,"Builders of the Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. Safety was a prominent issue; if human lives are at risk, an idea is not likely to be successful. Most foreign dirigibles contain hydrogen, an element that is ""highly flammable"" (paragraph @NUM1) and posed a threat to not only the passengers, but the people at the docking station as well. Another potential obstacle was the violent winds at the top of the building. These winds would cause the back of the dirigible to blow around freely with the wind. Even the proposed solution of weighing down the rear of the dirigible with lead weights was dangerous; lead weights would be left ""dangling high above pedestrians"" (paragraph @NUM2). A final and very obvious obstacle for the builders of the Empire State Building was the pre-existing law prohibiting airships that fly ""too low over urban areas"" (paragraph @NUM3). Even with a safe docking station, landing would be illegal. Although it may have seemed like a feasible plan at the time, the idea of dirigibles docking on the top of the Empire State building was not a safe or practical one.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19145,7,"Have you ever babysitted little kids? If you have, then you know how much patience it requires. It was my little cousin’s third birthday party, and as the oldest child, it was my responsibility to watch the younger kids. At first, everything was going fine. The kids were quietly playing with the plastic kitchen, offering me fake food. Then one of them started to play with the ball popper. Of course, if one child has a new toy, the rest of them immediately stop what they’re doing and go play with the toy, too. So all of the little kids gathered around the ball pepper, giggling with delight as the machine spot plastic balls out into the air. Suddenly, a little girl reached out and snatched a ball from the air, causing the other kids to fight over the balls and scream. I yelled at them to stop, but when they ignored me and kept fighting, I realized that this would require a lot of patience. I calmly took the ball popper away and waited for them to settle down. Thankfully, my little cousins stopped fighting and were able to play with the ball pepper quietly. I learned an important lesson from my cousin’s birthday party – babysitting requires a lot of patience!",12,12,,24,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19120,7,@CAPS4  @CAPS1 lives in ohio. He goes to @CAPS2 middle school and day after school he was walking home when @CAPS3 his friend asked him to wait in the parking lot for him so that he could call his mother and ask if  @CAPS4 could stay at his house for the weekend. @CAPS4 had to wait an entire half hour while @CAPS3 talked and argued with his mother. But after @CAPS3 finished talking thanked @CAPS4 for being patient and they all spent the weekend at @CAPS8 house.,9,7,,16,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21559,8," Though my sister and I have very different personalities, and much of the time do not find humor in the same things we have still shared some humorous moments. It's the times you decide to just go with the flow and enjoy someones company instead of letting it bug you.  One sunny day in @LOCATION1 I had some how convinced my sister to go rollerblading with me. My dad drove us to a park that had a huge pond in the middle of it. The pond was nice in the fact that there was a smooth side walk that circulated all the way around the pond for my sister and I to @CAPS1 on. The pond was not so nice in the fact that it was very littered with ducks ans geese and of course their droppings as well. We always thought of the ponds water as one of the most disgusting things on earth. We got our roller-blades on and carefully stood up. Our dad was going to take a nap in the car wile we made our laps around the lake. As we skated we noticed a man and a woman sharing a date together in a very small boat. They were totally unaware that their boat was tipping strongly to one side. My sister and I thought it would be hilarious if all of a sudden the boat tipped over.We let that thought pass and continued in our rout. On our next lap around we heard a woman yelling. we looked up and saw that it was the woman who had been in the boat. The woman was now standing on the shore yelling at the man to get all her belongings that had fallen out of the boat and were now floating in the gross pond water. The man was waiting in the water up to his chest collecting their items and trying to deal with his upside down boat. ""That date was defiantly unsuccessful"", I thought. We could hardly contain our selves from bursting out with laughter. We roller bladed back to the car as fast as we could. My sister was in front of me and when she tried to stop she couldn't. She basically body slammed the car, fell back, and rolled right underneath it. My dad rapidly opened the door to find me crying with laughter. We pulled my sister out from under the car and drove home.      ",15,16,,31,,,,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21548,8," Laughter, one of the wonderful things that we humans can enjoy. Laughter with friends, family, and with people we do not even know. We all can enjoy and share laughter, it is one of the amazing things that can bring us together no matter what ethnicity, age, gender, or disability. We all can enjoy it together, and no one can take it away from us. Laughter is simple, but yet complex in many ways. It is like falling into a pool of @CAPS1. Laughter, just the word ""laughter"" brings me joy! When our days go sour laughter is there to sweeten it up. Where would we be without the wonders of laughter? Laughter, it is like a tool. It is the thing that has helped me make new friends. Also, laughter has helped me get out of conflicts from both friends and enemies. It has also aided me into achieving the things I want. Laughter is @CAPS2 my middle school years. My family and I moved a lot, and every time I moved I had to make new friends. It got very difficult for me to make new friends every time I transferred to a new school. After I have settled down and got used to the surroundings of the new school I then started to make friends. I noticed that laughter was a key element on making people like you, and then later consider you to be what is known as a friend. After I have made new friends, and became very comfortable with my school the time to move came again. It gets difficult to make new friends, but its even harder when you have to leave the new friends you just made behind. After moving so much I just got used to making new friends, and later on laughter slowly became more like a tool than something that I should enjoy. A tool for just making friends. After I got into high school I just stopped trying to make new friends, because I felt that I knew I was going to make new friends, and then transfer to another school, and then start all over and make new friends again. I gave up trying and decided to get more involved in school and achieve good grades. Later in the year I felt like a kid with no friends, because I stopped trying. I decided to go and make new friends, but somehow it became a lot harder to make friends in high school than middle school. I tried to be the funny guy like I was in middle school, but I just didn't have it in me anymore. Also, when people get older the type of humor people enjoy changes. As time went by I realized that you don't have to make everyone laugh, so they can be your friend. It was about getting to now the person, and to be able to relate and to be a there when they needed you the most. Making friends at a new school is not easy, but it also is not very hard. All you got to do is be open to people and let them know who you are. This is what I learned about making friends. You can't make everyone laugh, because everyone has a different taste in humor. Humor and laughter are different from each other. Everyone has a different taste in humor, but we can all come together and have a good laugh. Laughter is wonderful. It is what puts people in a good mood. We as people @MONTH1 have our differences, but we can still all laugh together. It feels very good when you get a good laugh, but its even better when you know that the person who made you laugh did it so you can be happy. We should not take laughter for granted for it is something that puts a smile on our faces.  ",15,20,,35,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13451,5,The mood by Narciso Rodriguez in the memoir is happy. When the author talk about his or her memoirs it seemed like they felt happy having those memoirs to talk about. Like when the author talked about their parents and the house they live in and how it always made them remember like if they were still there. So if I was in the author's shoe's I would fell good about how I was raised by my parents to live in a better place even if that means giving up a lot of thing that mean a lot to you. That is what I think the author's mood is.,2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18429,7,"Patience. Patience is something I have absolutly nothing of! I take after my mom in this area. My mom is probably a little bit worse than me but we are both pretty bad. Sometimes we record t.v. shows and watch them later just because we don’t want to have to wait through the @CAPS1. Some of the other things I hate to wait through are lines, people being late and just plain old waiting around. The longest amount of time I can stay patient for is about five minutes any  longer than that puts me over the edge. On by the way another thing is long car rides when I have nothing to do. I just wish we could have a @NUM1 hour drive turn into a @NUM1 minute drive but still end up at the same place. I really wish icould have more patience but I don’t know how to get it. I really hope that you have enough patience to get through my story.",7,8,,15,,,,0.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,1.0,1.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9928,4,"The author includes the paragraph, ""when they come back...then I will take that test again,"" to show that hibiscus is a symbol of time. Saeng uses the hibiscus to measure the amount of time there will be until she takes her test again.  The hibiscus also symbolizes the power to get through struggling (stay strong). Saeng had trouble with her test, but the hibiscus is there to help push her through it to prepare her for the next test. The hibiscus also helps Saeng's mother push through her hard time of seeing her daughter sad from not succeeding on the test. The plant helps the mother try and stay positive and it also helps the mother by trying to do the right thing for her daughter. In the story. the mother decides to plant the hibiscus in the garden to make her daughter happy. The hibiscus shows strong symbolism and it helps Saeng and her mother stay strong through out their struggles. ",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16586,6,"The builders of the Empire State building faced several obstacles throughout the building procedure. First, many of the dirigibles were filled with hydrogen gas rather than helium and ""hydrogen is highly flammable."" @CAPS1 following the German dirigle Hindenburg, Empire State Building owners ""realize how much worse the accident could have been,"" and this resulted in the decision not to utilize the mast as a docking area. Also, when Al Smith decided to build the additional mooring mast onto the top of the building, due to the weight of the docking blimps, the architects had to invest ""over @MONEY1"" to modify the building's framework and enable it to support the weight of a dangling blimp @CAPS2, due to violent winds, the docking dirigibles could not properly land and ""were constantly shifting."" Lead weights couldn't be used because of the dangers and impracticalities the idea could set on the @LOCATION1 below. Finally, it seems that the overall safety and practicality of the mooring mast weren't easily attainable. Al Smith states himself that the engineers are ""trying to dope out a practical, workable arrangement. Hence, the builders of the Empire State experienced many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the building.",4,3,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
16594,6,Technology was not caught up to the dirigibles. they could not dock because neither the building nor the dirigible had the righ equipment and that was one of the obstacle that the builders of the Empire State building faced. For @CAPS1: when they have to delivery the newspaper.,0,0,,0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21257,8," Laughter is one of the most impotent things in life to have around. even if from a simple joke to something that was unbelievable that hap-end to make a grate event in time to share on in history of family members. This helps you threw hard times or just makes somebody day better for them and puts a smile on there face, or gives them a joke to say to somebody else to continue a chain of laughter thew people. Sometimes it can be the most embarrassing thing that people remember about u but in the end the other person that laughs at you for your indecent probably did something like that a long time a go so in the end there laughing at them selves to and don't even realize it. I remember on my fifteenth birthday my grandma toke the hole family out to dinner at a chines restaurant. It was quiet except for the adults discussing what they should order form the family meals. I was siting by me sister looking at a menu just to see what they had to drink, well her mined was on other things because out of no were all u heard was ""they have no fricken chicken"". Every one busted up laughing at her even the waitresses son that was standing behind the both and his mother. It made every ones day because it wasn't the best of days at the time. But u could tell she was embarrassed but laughed at her self to her comment to the table was ""i thought i said it in my head"", i looked at here and said ""no u didn't"" so she just shrugged about it.  To this day when ever we go to a chines restaurant my mom looks at here and ""says they got your fricken chicken""so she looks at here and ""says will that ever die""we all looked at here and said"" no its going to be passed down to your children they'll here about there mothers fricken chicken day"".It was that bad of a indecent that she gets up set that it wont go away but it still gives every one else a laugh. even though it was so long ago that it happened are parents joke that its going to be her wedding toast it went kinda like this"" as long as you give her, her fricken chicken you @CAPS1 will last forever"" it was not the nicest of comments to be said about that day but it was still funny to the rest of us. this is something that will last in the family for years to come ,and hopefully will be passed down in the generations to come.Even if she doesn't want it to be just think in time ens-ted of us telling every one about the incident she will tell them her self and just laugh about it because it was just that much of an out off nowhere thing to happen. We still pick on her about it and many other things she says out loud with out noticing she says them. But those are story's for another time and day you never know what could happen. just remember to laugh its true what they say its healthy for you so make the best of some of the worst days possible.  So if your having a not so good of a day,u never know what could happen to give u a smile and a laugh even if your the one that makes every one laugh. So just think of something that makes u laugh and tell the people that are special in your life about it to give them a laugh and make there day a little better then most.Even if its one of the most embarrassing events to happen to you in your life time. When we all were little and crying that was always the cure for some of the worst things even though u grow up it docent mean u cant laugh or that it means different things then it used to, when your down u need to laugh to feel better about your self don't let people put you down.",13,17,,30,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,2.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13507,5,"In the memoir by Narciso Rodriguez the author was feeling grateful and homesick. Narciso explains that he is grateful for his parents and what they did for him. ""My parents both shared cooking duties and unwittingly passed on to me their own culinary skills and a love of cooking that is still with me today""",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12967,5,"In the memoir this is how the author created the mood, he tells of how his parents lived in a house where it was very poor at that time. His parents immigrated to @LOCATION1 where Narciso was born. he was raised in the ghetto. When he was living here it was during the time of racism and segregation. Narciso didnt know his real grandparents until 1970 when they were allowed to leave cuba. This was how the author created the mood.",0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18596,7,"A time when iwas patient was a last @DATE1. My friend, @CAPS1, took me to cedar point in @LOCATION1. The place was so packed, it took five minuites to get from the car to the entrance. As we got in, the place looked amazing! It was almost like a dream. They even had a ride to take you from one part of the park to another. The first ride we went on  was the @ORGANIZATION1. We waited, and waited for about ten minuites and then things got boring. It had been almost fifteen minuites and we weren’t even close to the ride! So we waited , and waited about ten more minuites, and things got a little faster. At this part, the line was moving a little faster. Finally, it was our turn to ride. We had a yellow car, and you could feel the adrenallen already. After we were strapped in, the person who locks people’s seats said “go!” and we took off like a bird. In the end, it was worth being patient",11,12,,23,,,,3.0,3.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21207,8," My knees were weak and my hands were slightly shaking as my rapid heartbeat was causing my breathing to increase speed and time. I wanted to get this over with, but at the same time, I hadn't the intentions to ever start a conversation, yet alone, @CAPS3 him. It had been a whole @DATE1 since I had seen my dad and I wasn't sure whether to expect a relaxed, laid back man, or an uptight, cranky one. So, I closed my eyes, took deep breaths, and decided to put this in the hands of @CAPS1. It was obvious that once I saw my dad, it would be a natural thing to talk to him, but I suspicious of his mood and if it would affect mine at all! If for any reason this did happen for the worse, we probably wouldn't be the best of friends for a matter of weeks. He'd then continue to pull the, ""@CAPS2 think now that @CAPS2're a teenager, @CAPS2 can do and act however @CAPS2 want?"" Or the, ""I'm your father, I deserve more respect!"" @CAPS3, the funny thing is, I never start any of these things. He chooses to start them when he's bored, I guess. Then, he continues to make me feel bad for his wrongdoings.  When my mother, sister and I arrived at the airport, (I'm not going to lie) I wanted to go home. My sister would crack a few jokes here and there and my mother would let her wittiness shine on me; even in the mist of all of this, they could only get a small giggle out of me because I let my nerves get the best of me. I didn't want my past three months of @DATE1 to be ruined by his coming home. But once I looked back at all I had done: two weeks in @LOCATION1, rafting, etc., I realized that I did miss him and did want him back. Don't get me wrong, my dad is a super nice, funny, and hardworking guy, it's just hard to work with him sometimes.  My dad's flight had landed, and after a solid hour of waiting for him, he came out of the airplane. We could @CAPS3 his eyes frantically scouring the airport for us, and when he found us, he gave the warmest, friendliest smile I had ever seen upon his face. Tears welded up in his eyes as my sister raced for him and my mom quickly walked behind. My legs carried me toward him and I soon found that my sister and I were competing to be the first to hug him! One hundred feet never felt so close yet so far away. Panting, we reached him with heavy legs and full hearts, now that we were with him.  The good thing is, an awkward moment never appeared. It knocked, but we didn't let it come through the door ; instead laughter came in its place. All of my troubles and worries were gone when he opened his mouth, and those soothing waves of laughter came out and were welcomed into our ears. My heart was lifted and my smile brightened. I knew that my father could not have been gone any longer. I love him! Laughter soothes the soul and brings joy to any situation. It is kind and has no regrets. The only mistake is not taking the chance to laugh in the first place. Laughter is one of the many things that holds me so close to my father today. Our sense of humor when we're together is never dull and is unforgettable. I trust him with my life and ever since I was born, he has found a way to make the best out of every situation by laughter. @CAPS2 can count on his laugh to make anyone smile and it is without a doubt, the most contagious thing @CAPS2'll ever hear.  ""Laughter is the shortest distance between two people,"" including me and my father.",21,23,,44,,,,5.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,5.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18458,7,"I remember the time I got my new puppy we had to be patient. We had to be patient because, he wasn’t fully paddy trained yet and he was crazy. My dog is @CAPS1 and they are known for herding cows .So whenever we used to go outside he would bite our shoes. I don’t know  why it would try to move us but it did .We had to be very patient when we trained him, it took until he was @NUM1 and a half years out to figure out that he wasn’t supposed to do that  but on (my dog) is still growing into new hobbies. We just have to stay calm and patient and then we are able to train him. It takes a long time for @CAPS2 dop to brave his hobbies, so we must stay patient. This is the time when I was patient.",9,12,,21,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15584,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles in their attempts to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was installing the mooring mast, the architects couldn't simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State Building's flat roof because the weight of the blimp moored at the top held by a single cable tether would add stress to the frame. The stress of the dirigibles load and wind pressure would transmit all the way to the building's foundation. The builders would have to modify and strengthen to build to accommodate the new situation. Another obstacle they faced was the cost, because it would take over sixty thousand dollar's to make the proper modifications to the building's framework. Also safety was another major obstacle, they would have to make people were going to be safe, because Most dirigible from other countrie's used hydrogen rather than helium, and hydrogen is highly flammable. The area's were densely populated an accident over the city would be much worse. The greatest obstacle was nature itself, but winds on the building were constantly shifting due to the violent air currents even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast the back would swivel around. Dirigibles moored in open landing fields could be weighted down by weights, but using these would be dangerous dangling that high above pedestrians. Many obstacles were practical reasons why they couldn't moor at the Empire State Building. There was an existing law against airships flying too low over urban areas and make it illegal for ships to tie up to the building. So long these obstacles were faced in attempting to allow docking.",3,4,,4,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15852,6,"The builders of the Empire State Building had many obstacles in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The number one obstacle was safety. The builders thought to themselves, How are we going to safetly land a dirigible thousands of feet above the ground, while its freely floating in midair? Plus when you attempt this you are above crowded New York streets. If there was ever a malfunction or error while docking then thousands of people may lose their lives. Its much easier lending dirigibles in an open field than in mid-air because you have much more room, your planting the dirigible on secure ground, and you can weigh it down so it doesnt move around. Yet landing in open fields is dangerous because on @DATE1 in @LOCATION2, New Jersey the German dirigible Hindenburg was destroyed by a fire. This example shows how that if that were to happen in mid-air over a crowded New York City street or block then many more casualties would have been recorded. These obstacles were real and these are some of the reasons why the idea of landing a dirigible in mid-air slowly went away, because it wasnt the most logical idea.",1,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
15220,6,"In the article, The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, the author talks about the many obstacles builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State building. The first obstacle they faced involved dropping the mast onto the buildings flat roof. This task would be easy because using a single cable to lower the mast would add a great deal of stress to the buildings frame. Another problem they faced was nature. The violent winds would cause the dirigible to swivel around the mast. The greatest obstacle involved safety. Lots of blimps outside of the @LOCATION2 use highly flammable helium, rather than hydrogen. Helium makes the dirigibles more likely to cause an explosion, and risk many lives of the people of New York. Lastly, existing laws in New York @CAPS1 the balloons to dock. Airships were flying dangerously close over urban areas. Many obstacles were faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock at the Empire State Building that were mentioned in the article, The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted.",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4350,2,"Taking 'offensive' books from the shelves of libraries is like taking away the right of speech.  There is not a point to it. People in this country have the right of speech. Along with that comes the right to have your voice be heard.  An author's opinions @MONTH1 be offensive to some but does that mean he or she should not have a voice?  Writers get their ideas from somewhere society plays a huge role in what ideas these authors conjer up, taking these books away will not change the way people think and feel, and most importantly citizens of the @LOCATION1 have the right to make their own choices; that being if you don't like a book don't check it out.     Writers @MONTH1 state things that to some degree @MONTH1 offend one in a million people.  Others see it as freedom of speech and writing.  An author who writes a story that involves sex is not trying to extend their writing and thoughts to second graders.  But if a person has a problem with the way the author sees the world walking out their front door will show that same thing.  Some books @MONTH1 be fictional but that does not mean they don't get ideas from somewhere else.  Society plays a big part in the ideas and thoughts of most writers.  So when they write a book that has 'inappropriate' actions in it they got it from the way people truly are in the world.       Banning a book from the library that has a sex scene or provacitive language does not --by any means-- make the world stop having sex and saying curse words. Kids are learning this through hearing their parents swear or their peers in class talking about sex.  Reading a book about it will not change the fact that they are still learning about it in many other ways.  If the books that swear were no longer on library shelves society still will not change.  There is no perfect society.     Setting a book on a shelf with offensive language does not cause harm to anyone.  If an idividual doesn't like the way an author expresses themselves through their writing that person should not check that author's books out from the library.  No single person is forced to read a book they are offended by.  Getting rid of a book because of an unhappy parent does nothing but waste paper and intelligence. The library is not liable for the feelings of the readers.  If the reader does not like the book they are able to close it.  No one has glued their fingers to it.       Many people in today's world would agree that banning books from our public libraries will not have as much of an effect as some would like it to.  Banning books is an unknowledgeable thing to do to keep your kids from learning bad things.  Society shows that the writers are getting their ideas from somewhere, taking these books away will not take away the way people think and behave, and if some one does not like a book they should not read it",4,4,,4,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21347,8," It was @DATE1. The day was beautiful and full of happy faces. A perfect day to be at the fair. I was sitting on a bench next to @PERSON1 this guy I really liked, but I doubted @CAPS6 liked me of course. I had caught him staring at me a couple of times and I just thought I had something on my face that really cached his attention, like a piece of food since we had just at a couple minutes before or something. I looked at him and asked ""@CAPS1?""""@CAPS2"" @CAPS6 said with a huge smile on his face.""@CAPS3 tell me @CAPS1 @CAPS14 funny"" I demanded throwing a smile back at him.""@CAPS2 is funny, but.."" @CAPS6 paused for a moment.""@CAPS5 can i ask @CAPS13 out?"" @PERSON1 asked. I felt my face turn red, my body temperature raised and my leg began to move without control. ""@CAPS6 cant know I have strong feelings for him"" I thought to my self. ""@CAPS7 just play it off like @CAPS10 hes joking..because @CAPS6 is joking right?""""@CAPS8 @PERSON2? are @CAPS13 okay?"" @CAPS6 asked as @CAPS6 put his hand on my lap.""@CAPS9 I'm fine, its just.."" I paused for a long time.""@CAPS10 @CAPS13 say @CAPS3 I @CAPS17 understand"" @CAPS6 said as his head slowly faced the ground. I didn't know @CAPS1 to say, I felt stuck. I wanted to say @CAPS14 much but the words wouldn't come out.""@CAPS11 don't mess with me like that, I know your joking @PERSON1"" I laughed nervously. @PERSON1 looked at me with a confused face like @CAPS10 @CAPS6 was saying ""Was I not clear enough"" or ""@CAPS12 I just walk away?"".  His smile turned into a serious expression and the glow of his eyes had disappeared. I felt something on my throat, words were stuck and they needed to come out!.""@CAPS13 can ask me out any time and my answer @CAPS17 always be @CAPS9"" I said feeling relived.""@CAPS14 does that make @CAPS13 my girlfriend @PERSON2?""""I don't know @PERSON1..@CAPS13 have not asked me out yet"" I said with a grin on my face. We looked at each other for a second and busted out laughing, like @CAPS10 it was the funniest thing in the world. I didn't fully understand why we were laughing and @CAPS6 probably didn't either, but that didn't stop us. I started feeling a cramp in my stomach from all the force I was putting on my it which maid me to stop laughing. @PERSON1 took my hand and we walked towards the roller coaster ride. In my head I imagined him kneeling down on one knee and asking me to be his girlfriend, and at that moment the noises in the background would disappear, and the camera would only be focused on us. Although that probably only happens in the end of a romantic movie were everyone lives ""happily ever after"". I looked over at @PERSON1 realizing I wasn't in a movie, I was in this place called reality. @CAPS6 was looking at me like @CAPS10 I had something on my face again, but it didn't really bother me any more. We got on the roller coaster and a few other rides, which totally made me feel like I needed to throw up. I was standing in the ticket line wen for some reason I felt this joy inside of me, like @CAPS10 I was the happiest person on this world. @CAPS2 bothered me that day not even wen something was supposed to bother me, I just ignored it because I felt like @CAPS10 it really didn't matter. I had the biggest smile on my face like @CAPS10 I had just got bot-ox and couldn't make any other expression except for that one. The sun hid behind the clouds, and the day darkened right before my eyes. I had felt like the day hadn't been long enough because of all the fun I had been having. I was starting to believe that time really does fly, even though i knew better than that. The time to go home had come and the people heading out of the fair had exhausted looks that didn't even let them smile because they were @CAPS14 worn out. @PERSON1 and I walked towards the car. As we walked @CAPS6 seemed kind of worried. ""@CAPS15 wrong @PERSON1"" I asked noticing his not @CAPS14 happy expression. ""I haven't officially asked @CAPS13 out"" @PERSON1 said. ""@CAPS16 ask me I'm ready"" I repliedJorge hurried in front of me and stopped me from walking. ""@CAPS17 @CAPS13 be my girlfriend @PERSON2..Again?"" @CAPS6 grindButterflies ran down and up my stomach, and my feet weakened. ""uhhhh..I mean @CAPS9 of course @CAPS7 be your girlfriend"" I stuttered. I guess the expression on my face was hilarious or something because @CAPS6 began to giggle. @CAPS14 i decided to laugh too even though I didn't know @CAPS1 was funny but oh well. We got in the car and drove home. On the way it was kind of quiet but it was somehow worth it. ",19,15,32.0,32,,,,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1262,1,"Dear local newspaper, Have you ever noticed how a lot of people are always on their laptop or their computer? Well, when they're on the web they don't get exercise at all. I have three seasons why people should spend less time on their computers. People could get sick, probably forget a lot of stuff, and never have the future that they have always wanted. My first reason why people should spend less time on their computer is people could get sick. For example, their are a lot of people who just eat and eat and only use their computers. Some people get obese by doing this. When they do they go on the internet to find out how to lose weight, but they never do it. Some people go on the internet so they can have a surgery because they're so fat. They think their is a cure for obese on the internet, but the truth is that the only cure their is by doing. Some exercise because that is the only cure they will get if their not on their computer. When people are surfing the web they forget a lot of stuff. Some people almost spend their whole day or even life on their computer that they don't know what else to do, but surf the web. What I have seen happen is that some people forget where they're at or who the even are. They also forget who their family is and never contact each other at all. This isn't good people. My third and final reason is no future. Sure some people apply for jobs at home from the computer, but the only problem their is that they don't get enough exercise and paid as well as the people who work outside their house. Some people wanted to do something about their life's and how they can't because they are addicted to their computers. Some people have to go to thearapy so they can stop going on the internet. Do you want that? Getting sick, loss of memory, and no good future are three reasons why people should stop using computers and start getting some exercise. If I were addicted to my pc I wouldn't get on education and I wouldn't be writing this letter right now. Get some exercise. Together we can make a change or find a cure.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13605,5,"In the memoir ""Narciso Rodriguez"" from ""Home: The Blueprints of our lives"" the mood created by the author is that his parents were loving and caring. His parents were loving and caring because they made their house into a home. His parents were selfless and caring when they come to the United States. In paragraph @NUM1 it says ""I will always be grateful to my parents for their love and sacrafice"". This shows his parents were loving and made sacrafices for their children to have a good life. In paragraph @NUM2 it says ""they struggled both personally and financially"". This shows they cared about their family because they sacraficed things to struggle & make their family happy. In conclusion, the mood is being caring and loving.",3,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13478,5,The author Created the memoir because he remember other people the family that don't live with us.The author remember us about the culture and other stuff.The author created the memoir of Narciso because he talking about family.,0,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
198,1,"Dear Local Newspaper @CAPS1, @CAPS2 show that @PERCENT1 of humans in the @LOCATION2 alone spend most of their time on a computer or laptop. I believe that the effect of computers has a negative effect on humans because it creates people to have a lack in exercise and it limits the physical interaction with others. As a nation, we can lower the statistic above and create a better environment altogether. The amount of people that lack a sufficient quantity of exercise has risen in the past decade. Doctor @PERSON1, who is expert in the connections between health and computers, surveyed @NUM1 people. Out of those people, @PERCENT2 said they rarely go outside because theu are trapped in the cyber world. This shocking percent proves that only one in twenty people actually get some tyoe of exercise. @PERSON2 stated, ""this shocking @CAPS2 means that most -if not all- all people are unhealthy physically, which is a problem that must be solved."" @CAPS3 goes on to say that being on a computer for most of the day and not exercising is what contributes ti unhealthiness. In addition to lacking exercise, many humans are losing the physical interaction that they should have. As humans have become, modernized with technology, most humans lose the physical interaction that they world normally have encountered if they we not on the computer. @PERSON3 agreed with this statement and said, "" I am a college greaduate; I have a degree and all, but I wasn't always like this. When I was younger, I owned a computer. As soon as I got home from school, I would always go on the computer. I wouldn't talk to anyone-not even my family! If I could go back and change that, I would."" This statement proves that the lack of physical interaction with human is a crucial subject to touch on. @PERSON3 regreted it all and changed his ways once @CAPS3 got to high school. No one wants to live with regrets, so physical human interactions are necessary to live a non-regretful life. the lack of human interaction and lack of exercise are problems that need to be solved as soon as possible. In conclusion, using computers has started a growing epidemin in the @LOCATION1. The most important reasons as to why computers have anegative effect on humans are it limits the amount of exercise, and it almost destroys the physical interactions between humans. Thank you for your attention, and remeber one thing: Computers can always have a negative effect on many humans lives.",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9463,4,The author concluded the story with that message is because If you think about it. if not that seems all the whole story and leavs a opening for a requal. It's ovious that whole point of the story is to make you think.,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4315,2,"Personally in my opinion I have no problem with anything found in libraries today. Yes, there will always be something you disagree with, but it's not hurting you so just ignore it. Kids don't walk around in the adult section of the library they go to the kid section so there is no need to worry about them. Kids are maturing at a much younger age these days. I believe there is no harm in libraries, it is a place where you go to get all the information you can. So why would you remove valuable information. The library is a place for all people no matter who you are, how old or ugly. Everyone can use the library for any reason, many times invloving school. Personally I do not much use public libraries, but I often come to the school library to get stuff done or find a specific book. For example you might find @CAPS1 to be a horrible person that you don't want your kid knowing about. For me I am @CAPS2 I want to learn more about my own culture no matter of how bad it is. So why take that information away from me. Taking away a learning experience just becuase a group of people don't like the book does not mean everyone dosn't like it. I want to learn knowledge about myself and where I come from. Everyone is going to have their own views and beliefs. Overall think the library is not a place to take things away when any one is welcome. It is a place to get away from it all, I think they should leave them just how they are.",3,3,,3,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
14878,6,"From the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, the architechs building the Empire state building faced many obstacles. in attempting to allow drigibles to dock there. An obstacle they faced in attempting to let the drigbles to dock there we're the winds. As it says in the excerpt, ""The winds on top of the building were constantly shifting due to violent air currents. Even if the dirigible were tethered to the mooring mast, the back of the ship would swivel around..."" The dirigible would not be stable. Another obstacle they faced was to weigh it down, they'd have to use lead weight but it wouldnt be ""practical nor safe"" dangling high above people in @LOCATION1 on the Street. Overall The architecs faced a lot of obstacles for docking the dirigibles, Most being either practical or not safe.",2,2,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_6/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
6665,3,"In the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit,” the cyclist is affected by the setting in many different ways. He was biking in the middle of the summer in a very hot state of California. This affects him because he is sweating and he is running out of water and he could possibly become dehydrated. The roads are very hilly so, he has to use alot more energy to get up the hills. That’s why I think the cyclist is extremely affected by the setting in the story “Rough Road Ahead: Do Not Exceed Posted Speed.”   ",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_3/prompt_rubric_with_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9781,4,"In the story, “Winter Hibiscus,"" Saeng makes a vow to herself. “In the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and the hibiscus is budding, then I will take that test again,” this vow means that she will start fresh, make changes, and adapt to her new life. She want disappoint her mother and she wont be broken down by her memories. She concluded the story like this to show in the future how her life will change and how she would learn to like where she is now.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21475,8," Do you remember the first day of @NUM1 grade? Everyone is awkwardly and excitedly standing there waiting for their seating arrangement. You have the middle school jidders and everything is just happening to fast, I remember all that. I went to school at @CAPS1 for my middle school years, my teacher was @PERSON3. She was the type of teacher that was strict when it came to where you sat in class. If you didn't like someone, she would probably sit you by them thinking that you two would magically become friends. I was standing there in the corner with my best friend @CAPS2, we were of course hoping that we would be seated next to each other. After we finally got our seating arrangements, we were not seated together. I was sat next to @PERSON4-- a girl that I didn't know at all-- @PERSON5, @PERSON1 and @PERSON2. I was friends with everyone except @PERSON4, who I have never saw before in my life. As class went on @PERSON6 talked about middle school and how it is so important to get good grades and be prepared for high school, we all sat there and as to what it looked liked day dreamed. No one really talked to anyone, there was still that awkward first day thing going on. @PERSON4 looked like a girl that would rip your head off if you said anything to her, so I kept my mouth shut.  @PERSON6 went on with her ""first day lecture"" and all of a sudden she cracked a joke in the middle of her speech, to get our attention. We all started laughing. I would have to say that it was a very good ice breaker. After everyone after everyone laughed for a while, it seemed like everyone loosened up a bit. @PERSON4 and I started talking about how that joke was only funny because it was so dang stupid. From then on we kept talking and she seemed like a cool person. @PERSON4 and I became partners for every project that we did and we were always together, she became my best friend after @NUM2 days; all because of laughter. I would have to say that the reason @PERSON4 and I became friends is because of laughter. I probably never would have talked to her in the first place; even though I am glad I did because now I have an awesome best friend! Middle school can be scary, excpecially on the first day of school. That's why I think laughter is such an important part in someones relationship, you can't get by without it! ",20,20,,40,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
4418,2,"Library books offensive? The right to remove a book or not isn't up to us ,people, per our opinions. If someone has an issue with the book; next time don't get it. I know that we shouldn't have the right to remove books from the librarys. It's not up to us to make that choice.     I know people sometimes find somethings wrong or inappropriate in a book at the librarys', but if it wasn't to your liking don't read the rest of it or refer it to a friend. I have had problems with this before. I went to check out a book and my mom said that she didn't like the topic that it was about: honestly its her opinion. A person should have a right to his/her opinions but it shouldn't affect someone elses. One person @MONTH1 really like the book and someone else @MONTH1 hate it, obviously their are people out there who enjoy that type of book so there isn't a really good reason to get rid of it. The only person who should have a say in getting rid of a book would have to be the librarian. That person knows what is acceptable and what isn't for the library. If it includes something graphic or racist, you can talk to them about it in a clam conversation, because they maybe a librarian but they dont read every single book that is in the library.      Some items can be offensive to some but not others. The library is there for knowledge and entertainment. We can have opinions on matters and discuss them appropriately without causing a big ordeal  because their could be reasons why things are where they are. You need to leave the choice up to the person who is educated on the matter/ who is in charge of the library",3,3,,3,3.0,4.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_2/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
18873,7,"Ah patients I know a lot of people have trouble being patient let me tell you a story about me being patient.I rember when last year when I was @NUM1 @CAPS1 went on a trip up @CAPS2 to go fishing for a week it was a two hour drive staright thaught I was really exited @CAPS1 left at exactaly six that morning I was happer than a lack to go on this trip @CAPS1 hit the night way. I was ready to get out I was to dasn excited my dad said “don’t worry bud, @CAPS1 will get there soon lets calm down okay buddy” I was quit rest the way. There just waiting to see what our camp site looked like waiting patiently @CAPS1 finaly got there that was when I @CAPS4 to be patient.",8,7,,15,,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,2.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,1.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21323,8," Most people believe that laughter is an essential need for your heath, not only physically, but socially as well. In a socially tense environment it is hard to achieve what is expected of you, but if someone will introduce laughter into the environment, it quickly changes into one that becomes more simplistic, and you are able to get done what is expected of you. With this mindset I proceeded into the conference room for the first time since @PERSON1 had left. @PERSON1 was the adviser for the @ORGANIZATION1, or what we call @ORGANIZATION2. @PERSON1 was the reason that a student from each school in @LOCATION1 had any say in what the @ORGANIZATION1 did or received school wise. She helped us voice our opinions and that made her a hero in the eyes of many high school students! Soon, @PERSON1's time as adviser had expired and she announced her departure from her position. After a few weeks had gone by she had found a new adviser to take her place, @PERSON2. I'm a person who is excepting of change, but the other members are not. This particular change was much to hefty for them; they just wanted things to go back to normal. When I sat down in my usual chair, the room seemed much less homely and I soon felt a sick feeling building up inside. I did not know who this woman was or what she was going to do; all I knew was that she was not @PERSON1, and she did not make the @ORGANIZATION2 members very happy.  @PERSON2 glided into the room with a welcoming spirit about her. She stood at the head of the room and smiled. The rest of the members sunk a little further into their chairs, as if they were protesting her arrival. I thought to myself, she doesn't stand a chance, as I sat a little taller and began to listen to what she had to say. She spoke in a cheerful tone and seemed to giggle after every sentence. Although her posture provoked confidence, her giggle struck nervousness. There was only one way we, as a @ORGANIZATION2, were going to get done what was needed. We had to see @PERSON2 as a friend not a foe. Immediately I decided to lighten the dank feeling in the room by starting a name game. This is a fun activity to learn a little more about people and to help @PERSON2 to remember our names. @PERSON2 seemed much more relaxed after the game so we continued with the meeting. With every second getting more serious I proposed that the meeting be done for the week and we spend the rest of the time talking and laughing about what had gone on that week. This made everyone smile. Time went on and with every passing moment the stress in the room became lighter and lighter, until the whole room was filled with laughter. It was as if @PERSON1 had never left! Soon the gathering came to a close and we all went home. On my way out @PERSON2 stopped me and told of her nervousness before the meeting because she wasn't sure how well everything was going to go. She was thankful that I jumped right in and helped brighten the spirits of the members. This eventually lead to the acceptance of the change and the effectiveness of @ORGANIZATION2. By the next meeting the members were all anxious to go back and learn a little more about @PERSON2, and were able to more fully concentrate on the matters at hand. Laughter helped the members of the @ORGANIZATION2 accept what they could not control and ultimately lead to our success today. Laughter is primarily the key to all success in the social society we live in today; with laughter anything is possible! Although the laughter was only for that one meeting, it allowed the members to be more welcoming to the idea of @PERSON2, and made for a life long friendship between our adviser, and the members of our @ORGANIZATION2. My relationship with @PERSON2 would not be as strong as it is today, if I did not share the opportunity to laugh at @PERSON2's first @ORGANIZATION2 meeting.",23,20,,43,,,,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,5.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12382,5,"The mood created by the author in a memoir. Is happy and greatful in line @NUM1 It's say's growing up in this environment instilled in me a great sense that ""family"" had nothing to do with being a blood relative so she like saying where she grew they all are alike that they dont have to be related that her people and she greatfull for havin them.",2,1,,2,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1207,1,"Dear editor, Have you ever used a computer? Odds are you have, which means you know how convienient and positive computers are. Did you know @PERCENT1 of all @CAPS1 use computers regularly? These technological marvels provide many ways to communicate and learn, showing computers have an extremely positive effect on people. Who hasn't ever played a game on a computer? Computers provide many forms of entertianment, such as games, music, and videos. I once has to drive @NUM1 hours to see my grandma in @LOCATION1. The only thing that kept me away from the grasp of boredom during the trip was my portable computer, that I played games and watched movies on. Critics of computers argue that people who use computers do not ever participate in physical activities. Of course, try exercising when you are crammed in a car traveling @NUM2 @CAPS2, which is computers positively affect me. It was @NUM3 on a @DATE1 @TIME1, and my mother was just about to have a baby. Unfortunately, none of my relatives were there to witness this baby coming into the world because the all live on the other side of the @LOCATION2 @CAPS3, this minor set back did not prevent them from seeing the @LOCATION1 baby, and thanks to computers, they didn't even have to leave their homes. This is because computers offer many ways to be social, such as social networking sites. Within @NUM4 hours after the baby was born. there were many pictures and videos up on these social networking sites that let everyone enjoy my @LOCATION1 baby sister. Computers make life convienient for all. Last but not least, computers are not only a fine tool for school, but are necessary to succeed with your education. One snows day in @DATE2, I was assigned a research paper on @PERSON1. Too bad I didn't know one thing about @PERSON1, so I asked my mom to drive me to the library to take out some books for my report but due to the snow, the library's power went out and therefore they were closed. This was not an issue, though, beacuse I only had to spend @NUM5 minutes on a computer searching for information, instead of spending hours browsing through countless pages in a book. Thanks to computers, I received an A on my report. Overall, computers serve many helpful purposes for people. These marvelous machines can provide entertainment, socialize with people around the world, and even provide information on any topic you would like. @ORGANIZATION1 readers, now you understand why computers are positive for your lives and everyone elses. I encourage all of you to spread this message to everyone, so they know all the benefits to using computers.",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
19104,7,"My brother matt has never been the patient type of guy. He always gets very frustrated whenever something or someone takes too long.   We always have to have patience with matt but that all changed one day. Me, my mom, my nephew, matt and his girlfriend decided to go get something to eat. While we were there and waiting in line, I made a bet with matt’s girlfriend. The bet was however many impatient comments he said, she would owe me two dollars for each one. If he did not say any impatient comments I would owe her two dollars. After the waitress took our orders and left we all started talking. The adults talked about work and other things, while me and @PERSON1, my nephew talked about school and other things as well. That took up atleast a couple of minutes. The lost couple of minutes we watched the football game that was going on. During those  couple of minutes, including the couple minutes when we were talking I did not hear matt have one impatient comment. I was really impressed. I was upset that I owed matt’s girlfriend two dollars.",12,9,,21,,,,3.0,3.0,3.0,3.0,,,2.0,2.0,2.0,3.0,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_7/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
9668,4,when they come back Saeng vowed silently to herself In the spring when the snows melts and the geese return and this hibicus budding then I will take that test again,1,1,,1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_4/prompt_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
13523,5,"In the memoir, the mood, or how the article made me feel, was grateful.Narciso Rodriguez wrote this memoir almost as a thank you letter.""I will never forget how my parents turned this simple house into a home. -paragraph @NUM1 uses words that portait the mood of thankfullness, like ""eternaly grateful"" in paragraph @NUM2, or ""I will always be gratefull"" in paragraph @NUM3.Narciso Rodriguez describes all of the sacrifices that were made and all the hardships lived through by his parents. He describes their coming to @LOCATION1 selflessly and beginning anew all so that their children could life -paragraph @NUM4.When I read this memoir, it reminded me of all of the things my parents have done so that I @MONTH1 be happy- so that I can have a home.",3,2,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
12930,5,"@PERSON1's parents came (or emmigrated) from Cuba into @LOCATION1, where they were not wealthy and many racial barriers stop them from getting good jobs. However, @PERSON1, who is writing the memoir, explain how they sacrificed it all so that @CAPS1 could have a better life and how much they help their neighbors and their family.Rodriguez writes a lot about how they always kept their arms and their door open to the many people we (they) considered family."" @CAPS1 emphasizes this mood, a mood of ""good @CAPS2"" and a neighborly love, how they treated everyone as family. The mood @CAPS1 creates is that where you find the good in a life where there might not be too much good.""",2,3,,3,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_5/promp_rubric_and_source_text.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
1284,1,"I think that the advances of technology to the computer are great and more beneficial than bad. Say you struggle at school and need serious help, you can turn to a computer for help, say you have a dear friends that a week ago moved to florida, you can use the computer to contact them. And finally if you want to learn about the world, great! Google search places to learn about. These are just a few reasons why the computer is helpful as opposed to bad! School one of many students least favorite activities, yet you can use the internet to help you out, @CAPS1! say you are in geometry and it is kicking you're butt, got to @PERSON1 academy for informational videos. Maybe you are a third grade teacher and the little kids are driving you nuts, go to @LOCATION1, and educational and fun website. Maybe you just want to relax and learn, plug in earphones and listen to math help. These are merely a few ways that the internet helps with schooling. What if it is a really rainy rainy day and you are tired and want to learn about faraway places in a logical person's head, the internet pops into their head. Think of the computer as a big easy to acess library, type something into a search engine and it pops up. What if you are in germany and you are hungry, oh no! Everything is in @CAPS2! open your laptop for easy translation. All of these things support that the internet makes learning about foreign places easy. And finally, communication is really easy, with the internet because, there use emails, skypes, chatrooms etc. internet's middle name is communication. What if your phone is gone and there is an emergency, you can get the email! What if a burgalor cuts the phone lines and sneaking your house e-mail @NUM1. And finally internet can be used to call @PERSON2 and tell him, ""don't forget the red bull"" as he leaves. Those are some of the reasons the internet is good for communication. Go let's recap on this paper. Internet is great for communication. Also help with learning about far away places. And finally help with schooling. These are the reasons I think internet is valuable in this day in age. ",4,4,,8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
203,1,"Dear Newspaper, I think people need computers. It helps them see the world if they can't. It can be used to send important messages to people that are farther away from you. Also if someone has a parent or loved one far away they can see each other through the computer. So here is examples of these three things. Some people can't physically or mentally and can't afford to travel. Its sad how some people are so sick with a disease or illness that they can't go places. But if they go on the internet they can look up pictures and information of places they've never been to which can help them see the world better. But there are people who can help them see the world better. But there are people who have fears which prevent them from travelling to different places. So thet could go to the internet and find ways to help them get over their fears. Which in turn will allow them to get over their fears and let them travel to places. Then there are people who can't afford it. So the internet can help find a good job that pays good money which they can use to afford to travel the world and see it for what it is. What if you need to send a really important message to someone to prevent them doing something or help them live or even stop a war. So take into reconsideration if there is a war going on for a miss understanding. So if the government figures out what happened and they know how to straightin out the situation then they could send a message to the attackers. What happened and that it wasn't what they thought we did then they would stop fighting and the war would be over. What if a bomb is in the white house you would want to get out of the building or find it and disarm it. So then a guy finds out about it and send a message to the white house and that would save all the people in the white houses lives. Sometimes loved ones go away to some where far away and you can't talk or see them. Someones in the military and he/she has a kid so the computer allows them to see and talk to them through a webcam which would keep the child and parent together and not seperate them. Also you see a friend in facebook who you haven't seen in years so you friend him and you guys get back in touch with each other and you can be friends with them again. So in conclusion the computer can do many helpful things. It can fix relationships, save lives, help you get over fears and see the world. Which isn't bad sure we sometimes go over board with it but it is very useful. It isn't horrible but it is sometimes bad but also sometimes good but",5,5,,10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_1/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html
21262,8," It all started one @DATE1 after school, when my girlfriend and I decided to make a plan to go to my house. We were not planning to walk home, we missed the bus. @CAPS6 we began to walk down the ramp from the high school. While we were walking we got hungry. @CAPS6 we went to the @ORGANIZATION1. We ordered a @CAPS1 and some drinks. @PERSON1 decided to shake up my soda @CAPS13 hand it to me. Me not knowing what's up @CAPS6 I asked, ""@CAPS2 you shake up my soda?"" @CAPS3 said, ""@CAPS4 I @CAPS2 here's mine, let's trade."" I @CAPS2 and ended up opening the one @CAPS3 shook for real. "" That was a lil devious!"" I said. @CAPS6 when I stood up to chase her and poor soda on her, I tripped and fell on some goat heads. While I was in pain, @PERSON1 was cracking up with laughter @CAPS13 said, ""@CAPS5 @CAPS6 stupid, who falls over a stump!"" @CAPS6 I got up from the ground and pulled all of the thorns out, @CAPS13 continued to walk home. We were already more than half way to my house, when @PERSON1 decided to hit me in the shin and run. Of course not learning my lesson the first time, I chased her. I chased her for about a block and a half. Basically to my yard before I slid on mud, and @CAPS13 fell in a puddle of water. I thought I was going to loose it when @PERSON1 was laughing too dramaticly. Out of @CAPS14 were, I jumped up and was going to put her face in it. @CAPS3 ended up running inside my house, and locking the door. The reason I knew @CAPS3 @CAPS2 lock it, was because I ran @CAPS6 fast to bust in. before I @CAPS2 I turned the knob, but it didn't open though. Instead the impact forced me to fly back, and land on poop. The bad part was that it was fresh, why, well because my back was warm in a certain spot. I quickly took off my shirt and threw it away, @CAPS13 headed inside to shower. @PERSON1 asked me why I was going to shower, but I decided to lie to her. @CAPS12 I told her what really happen, @CAPS13 @CAPS3 will laugh and make fun of me. After I was done showering I asked @PERSON1, ""@CAPS7 you want to go shoot some glass bottles in the back?"" @CAPS3 replied, ""@CAPS9 I'm down let's go!"" @CAPS6 I set up six bottles and was ready to shoot. First @PERSON1 tried and hit four out of six. That's pretty good for being a girl. @CAPS6 I went to replace the four bottle @CAPS3 shot. As I was doing @CAPS6 @CAPS3 shot me in the butt.""@CAPS11!"" I yelled and wanted to cry, but I didn't. The only thing I @CAPS2 was swore like @CAPS14 other, and aimed my gun to @PERSON1 to get her back. @CAPS3 was quick to run upstairs and grab my @NUM1. @CAPS3 said with a freaked out voice, ""@CAPS12 you come any closer I'll throw this out the window!"" @CAPS13 I said to her, ""@CAPS14 you won't, you know how much I paid for that!"" @CAPS15 my luck shot her in the leg. Well turns out @CAPS3 wasn't lieing bout throwing it out the window. It was ok though, because I could get another one. That @DATE1 with @PERSON1 was great, but @CAPS3 laughed at me most of the time. I didn't care, whatever makes her happy. I really @CAPS7 like making her smile. I delt with a lot of pain that day, and lost a shirt with poop. It's all good though, it's going to be a great memory when we look back on this day. ",18,20,36.0,36,,,,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,4.0,3.0,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_8/prompt_and_rubric.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/essay_set_descriptions.html,https://huggingface.co/datasets/nlpatunt/dataset_rubrics/raw/main/ASAP_AES/Guidelines%20for%20Transcribing%20Student%20essay.html