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nes-00002-d6b7b77c | Your friend in another town has recently adopted an unhealthy lifestyle involving excessive screen time and late-night snacking. Write a letter to him or her explaining at least three causes of such habits and the negative effects they could have on their physical and mental health. | 14 Commercial Avenue,
Sabo, Yaba,
Lagos State.
18th October, 2023.
Dear Tobi,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits and that life in Ibadan is treating you well. It has been quite a while since we last caught up properly, but our recent phone conversations left me genuinely worried about you. You mentioned sta... | {
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nes-00006-53dd52eb | You are the lead speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: 'Developing recreational facilities in our local communities is more urgent than building modern markets.' Write your speech arguing either for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, Ladies and Gentlemen, good day. My name is Emmanuel Okafor, the lead speaker for Government Secondary School. I stand firmly before you today to argue against the motion which states that developing recreational facilities in our local communities is more ... | {
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nes-00009-12803870 | As the President of the Young Farmers' Club in your school, write a speech to be delivered at the annual Agriculture Day celebration, convincing your fellow students of the modern opportunities available in youth-driven agribusiness. | The Principal, Vice Principals, respected teachers, and my fellow students, good day to you all. As the President of the Young Farmers' Club of our great school, I am very happy to stand before you today on this occasion of our annual Agriculture Day celebration to speak on modern opportunities in youth agribusiness. ... | {
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nes-00010-86bb1dd0 | You are the Chief Speaker in a school debate on the topic: 'Vocational skill acquisition is more beneficial to school leavers than pursuing an immediate university degree.' Write your speech arguing either for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and distinguished Ladies and Gentlemen. Good day to you all. My name is Emmanuel Okafor, the Chief Speaker standing before you today to passionately support the motion which states that vocational skill acquisition is more beneficial to school leavers than... | {
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nes-00014-d357b679 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national newspaper examining both the benefits and the dangers of generative artificial intelligence in Nigerian education. | THE PROMISE AND PERILS OF GENERATIVE ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE IN NIGERIAN EDUCATION
By Chinedu Okafor
Enugu, Nigeria
In recent times, technology has been developing at a very fast rate across the whole world, and Nigeria is not left behind. One of the modern technological innovation making wave today is generative art... | {
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nes-00018-da40b7b8 | The only public library in your local government area has fallen into a state of severe disrepair, discouraging residents and students from using it. As the representative of the local youth association, write a speech to be delivered at a town hall meeting with community leaders and council officials, highlighting the... | Good day to the Chairman of our local government, our respected traditional rulers, council officials, and all elders and youths present here today in this important town hall meeting. My name is representative of the youth association, and I am standing before you all to talk about a very serious issue which is affect... | {
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nes-00019-13ec1a1f | Severe soil erosion and unchecked deforestation are threatening farmlands and livelihoods in your community. Write a letter to the Commissioner for Agriculture and Natural Resources, explaining the negative impacts of these environmental problems and suggesting at least two sustainable measures the state government sho... | Community Youth Association,
Umuagwu Village,
Ihiala Local Government Area,
Anambra State.
14th May, 2024.
The Honourable Commissioner,
Ministry of Agriculture and Natural Resources,
State Secretariat Complex,
Awka, Anambra State.
Dear Sir,
AN APPEAL FOR URGENT INTERVENTION ON SEVERE SOIL EROSION AND UNCHECKED DEFO... | {
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nes-00020-a8d97a35 | Write a story illustrating how two individuals responded differently when provoked in a crowded public place, and show how their contrasting actions affected the final outcome. | The intense heat inside the banking hall of First City Bank on a Friday afternoon was enough to test anyone’s sanity. Added to the malfunctioning air conditioners was the fact that the automated queue machine had broken down, forcing dozens of exhausted customers to form an irregular, winding queue. Everyone was anxiou... | {
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nes-00023-85305e7b | You are the principal speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Modern agricultural practices have done more harm than good to our natural environment. Write your speech for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and distinguished ladies and gentlemen. My name is Emmanuel Okon, the principal speaker standing here today to support the motion which states that modern agricultural practices have done more harm than good to our natural environment.
First and foremost,... | {
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nes-00027-c2836b87 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing the causes of the declining interest in vocational and technical education among secondary school students, and highlight the effects of this trend on national development. | THE DECLINE OF VOCATIONAL AND TECHNICAL EDUCATION: CAUSES AND CONSEQUENCES
By Chinedu Okafor
In recent times, education has been recognized as the backbone of any developing society. However, one vital area that is suffering great neglect among secondary school students today is vocational and technical education. Go... | {
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nes-00035-85c8ca72 | Write a story that ends with the statement: I never knew how deeply my parents loved me until that stormy evening. | THE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE OF MY PARENTS
Growing up as the only son among four children, I always thought my parents were too hard on me. My father was a strict retired teacher who always insist on discipline, while my mother was a petty trader who never allowed me to attend social parties with my age mates. Because of th... | {
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nes-00037-3290170f | Write a story involving a dispute between two neighbouring settlements over the location of a newly proposed public amenity, showing the differing claims of both communities and how the conflict was ultimately resolved. | THE BOUNDARY OF HEALING
For generations, the sister villages of Ilupeju and Orile-Koko lived in harmonious proximity, separated only by the shallow, winding waters of the Osun Stream. Their tranquil coexistence was, however, severely threatened when the state government announced the allocation of a modern comprehensi... | {
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nes-00041-d04e2164 | Write a story illustrating a situation where the failure of a vital public amenity plunged your neighbourhood into a serious crisis, and how the residents rallied to resolve the problem. | THE DRIED TAP
For as long as anyone in Unity Estate could remember, the colossal community borehole nestled beside the central square had been the lifeblood of our neighbourhood. Powered by a dedicated solar-generator hybrid system, it provided crystal-clear water to over two hundred households. However, in the bliste... | {
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nes-00044-16a790ac | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing three effective measures that should be adopted to curb the problem of soil erosion in rural farming communities. | EFFECTIVE MEASURES TO CURB SOIL EROSION IN OUR RURAL COMMUNITIES
Soil erosion is one of the most serious problem affecting our rural farming communities in Nigeria today. Every year when heavy rain falls, top soil that contain good nutrients for crops is washed away by running water. This makes our farmers to suffer p... | {
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nes-00049-b24f7e5a | A major public facility in your community has fallen into a state of serious disrepair and neglect. Describe the present condition of this facility, highlighting its adverse effects on the residents, and suggest practical measures that could be taken to restore it. | THE DEPLORABLE STATE OF OUR COMMUNITY HEALTH CENTRE
In our community of Umunne, the public health centre which was built many years ago by the government have now fallen into a state of serious neglect. This facility was once the pride of every residents because it was where people go to receive treatment for sickness... | {
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nes-00053-ca162b96 | Two neighboring communities chose different ways to use a development grant: one constructed a modern healthcare clinic while the other built an expansive civic events hall. Write a story about the contrasting fortunes of both towns, illustrating how their respective choices shaped the daily lives and well-being of the... | Separated only by the winding Osun Stream, the twin communities of Ilutitun and Orile-Ode shared almost everything, from cultural heritage to fertile farmlands. However, a major turning point occurred two years ago when the state government awarded each town a substantial development grant of twenty million naira. The ... | {
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nes-00056-6620d486 | Self-medication has become increasingly common among many residents in your country. Write an expository essay explaining why people resort to self-medication and highlighting its adverse consequences on public health. | THE CAUSES AND DANGERS OF SELF-MEDICATION IN NIGERIA
In recent years, the practice of self-medication has grown at an alarming rate among many residents across our country. Self-medication simply refers to the selection and use of medicines by individuals to treat self-recognized illnesses or symptoms without obtainin... | {
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nes-00059-940e02ce | Your school recently organized a vocational skills acquisition workshop and a digital entrepreneurship seminar for senior students. As the Senior Prefect, write an official report to the Principal comparing the merits and challenges of both programmes and recommending which one should be prioritized in the next academi... | AN OFFICIAL REPORT ON THE VOCATIONAL SKILLS ACQUISITION WORKSHOP AND DIGITAL ENTREPRENEURSHIP SEMINAR
TO: The Principal, Government Secondary School
FROM: Emmanuel Okafor, Senior Prefect
DATE: 24th October, 2023
1. INTRODUCTION
Following the directive of the school management, this report is submitted to evaluate two... | {
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nes-00061-e10dcb04 | As the outgoing president of your school's Environmental Club, write a speech you will deliver at the annual Green Week celebration, highlighting at least three major initiatives your team successfully carried out to promote cleanliness and sustainability in the school compound. | The Principal, Vice Principals, dedicated teachers, invited guests and my fellow students of Community High School. Good morning to you all. It is a great priviledge for me to stand before this respected audience today as the outgoing president of our great Environmental Club during this our annual Green Week celebrati... | {
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nes-00065-6b2b412c | As the president of your school's Young Entrepreneurs Club, you have been invited to deliver a speech during the annual Career Day on the topic: 'Pursuing Paid Employment Versus Starting an Independent Enterprise: Weighing the Prospects and Challenges.' Write your speech, highlighting the merits and drawbacks of both c... | Good day to the principal, the respected teachers, our invited guest and my fellow graduating student. As the president of Young Entrepreneurs Club, I am very happy to stand in your front today to deliver this speech on our Career Day on the topic: Pursuing Paid Employment Versus Starting an Independent Enterprise: Wei... | {
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nes-00066-e810d17e | The gradual breakdown of traditional family values has been linked to the rising rate of social vices among young people. Write an article suitable for publication in a national newspaper discussing the causes of this decline, its impact on the youth, and suggesting measures parents and the community can take to restor... | RESTORING TRADITIONAL FAMILY VALUES TO CURB SOCIAL VICES AMONG YOUTH
By Chinedu Okafor, Lagos
In the past, our traditional society was known for strong family values where good moral, respect for elders, and hard work were taught to every child. But today, the story is changing rapidly because these important values h... | {
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nes-00069-4f12d9da | Write a story about a young person who started a small business, clearly showing: the initial struggle to find startup capital or resources, an unexpected challenge that nearly ruined the business, and the clever strategy used to achieve success. | Tunde was a young boy living in our area who always wanted to be self employed after finishing secondary school. He did not want to stay idle at home waiting for admission that was not coming quickly. He decided that he will start a small business of making and selling fresh fruit juice to people in the neighbourhood. ... | {
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nes-00070-76570116 | The annual cultural festival in your community, which usually brings people together and promotes local enterprise, was marred by poor planning and indiscipline this year. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Community Development Association pointing out the major causes of the disruption and discussing the negative ... | Comprehensive High School,
P.O. Box 45,
Amurie Omanze,
Imo State.
14th October, 2023.
The Chairman,
Community Development Association,
Amurie Omanze Community,
Imo State.
Dear Sir,
AN APPEAL CONCERNING THE DISRUPTION OF THE RECENT ANNUAL CULTURAL FESTIVAL
I am writing to express my deep concern regarding the unfor... | {
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nes-00072-a0ed9d5d | Describe the annual cultural day celebration recently held in your community or school, detailing the atmosphere, activities, and what made the occasion memorable. | THE ANNUAL CULTURAL DAY CELEBRATION IN MY SCHOOL
Cultural day is an important event that take place in my school every year to remember our tradition and culture. Last two weeks Friday, our school compound was decorated with colourful ribbons, palm fronds and traditional cloth. The atmosphere was very lively and noisy... | {
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nes-00075-0b537653 | Your school's Young Farmers' Club recently embarked on a project to establish a modern community vegetable garden. Write a letter to your pen pal living in another state, giving at least three reasons why this project was initiated and describing how it has benefited both the students and the local community. | Government Secondary School,
P.M.B. 1042,
Minna,
Niger State.
14th May, 2024.
Dear Chinedu,
How are you doing over there in Enugu? I hope your family and your studies are going on well. It has been quite a long time since we last wrote to each other, so I decided to write and tell you about our new activity in school... | {
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nes-00078-cf9bf598 | Write an expository essay for your school's annual literary magazine explaining the meaning, significance, and contemporary relevance of the adage 'Character is like pregnancy; it cannot be hidden for long.' Your essay must end with the exact words: '...truly, what is concealed in darkness will eventually find its way ... | CHARACTER IS LIKE PREGNANCY: IT CANNOT BE HIDDEN FOR LONG
There is a popular adage among our people which says that character is like pregnancy, it cannot be hidden for long. This wise saying has a very deep meaning that speaks to human nature and how we behave everyday. When a woman is pregnant, at first nobody may k... | {
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nes-00079-8f99ce49 | Your school recently won a major national competition, and a grand reception is organised to celebrate the achievement. As the leader of the victorious team, write the speech you would deliver at the gathering, ending with the words: '...this victory is not just ours, but a challenge to achieve even greater heights.' | The Chairman of the occasion, our respected Principal, dedicated teachers, invited parents, and my fellow students, good afternoon to you all.
I am standing before you today with great joy in my heart as the leader of the victorious team that went to Abuja to represent our great school in the National Science Quiz Com... | {
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nes-00081-b1e5a758 | The annual cultural festival recently organised in your community was marred by poor planning, insecurity, and rowdy behaviour. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Community Development Association pointing out the major lapses observed during the event and suggesting at least three practical measures to ensure futur... | Youth Representative Council,
Amadi Community Hall,
P.O. Box 45,
Amadi Town,
Enugu State.
18th October, 2023.
The Chairman,
Amadi Community Development Association,
Central Secretariat Road,
Amadi Town,
Enugu State.
Dear Sir,
APPRAISAL OF THE RECENT ANNUAL CULTURAL FESTIVAL: LAPSES OBSERVED AND PRACTICAL RECOMMENDA... | {
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nes-00082-8d87e635 | You were recently appointed as the Secretary of a committee set up by your local youth association to investigate the rising rate of youth unemployment in your community. Write a comprehensive report on your findings, highlighting the major causes of this problem and recommending practical measures to foster self-relia... | A REPORT ON THE CAUSES OF YOUTH UNEMPLOYMENT IN IKORODU COMMUNITY AND RECOMMENDATIONS TO FOSTER ENTERPRISE AND SELF-RELIANCE
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Following the rising rate of youth unemployment in our community, the executive of the Ikorodu Youth Association set up a five-man committee on the 12th of January 2024. As the ... | {
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nes-00084-dbe596bf | Your school's Young Farmers' Club recently undertook an educational excursion to an agricultural research institute. As the president of the club, write a detailed report for the school management highlighting the primary objectives of the visit, the modern farming techniques observed, and specific recommendations on h... | A REPORT ON THE EDUCATIONAL EXCURSION TO THE NATIONAL AGRICULTURAL RESEARCH INSTITUTE BY THE YOUNG FARMERS' CLUB
INTRODUCTION
On Thursday, 15th of May, 2024, the members of the Young Farmers' Club of our school went on an educational excursion to the National Agricultural Research Institute. The trip was organized for... | {
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nes-00085-e112f250 | A recent outbreak of a waterborne disease has affected many residents in your community due to poor sanitation and contaminated water sources. Write a letter to the Local Government Chairman highlighting at least three major causes of the outbreak and explaining the adverse effects it has had on the people. | Community Youth Association,
Angwan Rukuba Community,
Jos North Local Government Area,
Plateau State.
14th October, 2023.
The Executive Chairman,
Jos North Local Government Secretariat,
Plateau State.
Dear Sir,
AN APPEAL FOR URGENT INTERVENTION ON CHOLERA OUTBREAK IN OUR COMMUNITY
I am writing this letter on behal... | {
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nes-00087-814c4fec | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily comparing the merits and demerits of incorporating technical and vocational education into the senior secondary school curriculum. | THE MERITS AND DEMERITS OF VOCATIONAL EDUCATION IN SECONDARY SCHOOLS
By Ibrahim Musa, Lagos State.
Education is the bedrock of any nation and it is very important for the development of the youth. In Nigeria today, there is a serious debate among education stakeholders about incorporating technical and vocational edu... | {
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nes-00088-a567e527 | Your school's literary and debating society has invited you, as the outgoing head of the academic committee, to deliver an address on the theme: 'Traditional Classroom Learning Versus Digital Distance Learning: Striking the Right Balance.' Write your speech, highlighting the merits and demerits of both modes of educati... | Mr Chairman, the Principal, respected teachers, fellow executives of the Literary and Debating Society, and my fellow students, good day to you all. As the outgoing head of the academic committee, I stand before you today to deliver this important address on the theme: 'Traditional Classroom Learning Versus Digital Dis... | {
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nes-00091-f4376e88 | You are a participant in an inter-school literary competition debating the motion: Traditional cultural festivals do more to foster unity among Nigerian youths than inter-school sports competitions. Write your speech for or against the motion, evaluating the merits of both platforms. | Good day Mr Chairman, distinguished Panel of Judges, accurate Timekeeper, my fellow co-debaters and the wonderful audience present here today. My name is Emmanuel Okafor and I am standing before you this afternoon to vehemently oppose the motion which says that traditional cultural festivals do more to foster unity amo... | {
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nes-00092-7ed5bcc2 | You are representing your school in an inter-school debate on the motion: Modern agricultural technology does more harm than good to the natural environment. Write your speech for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and distinguished Ladies and Gentlemen, my name is Samuel Adeyemi, and I am here today to represent Great Heights College. I stand vigorously before you to support the motion which states: Modern agricultural technology does more harm than good to the natu... | {
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nes-00093-85a6b909 | The rising rate of juvenile delinquency in your community is causing serious concern among parents and community leaders. As the youth representative on the Community Development Committee, write a letter to the Divisional Police Officer proposing at least three collaborative strategies between the police and local you... | Community Development Committee,
Irepodun Community Hall,
Offa, Kwara State.
14th October, 2024.
The Divisional Police Officer,
Nigeria Police Force,
Offa Divisional Headquarters,
Offa, Kwara State.
Dear Sir,
PROPOSAL OF COLLABORATIVE STRATEGIES TO CURB JUVENILE DELINQUENCY IN OUR COMMUNITY
I write to you today in... | {
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nes-00094-c1a33fcf | You are the Chief Speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Developing technical skills is more beneficial to school leavers than acquiring a university degree. Write your speech for or against the motion, presenting at least three convincing arguments. | Good day, Mr Chairman, distinguished Panel of Judges, accurate Timekeeper, my worthy co-debaters, and ladies and gentlemen in the audience. My name is Ibrahim Musa, the Chief Speaker representing Government Secondary School, and I am here today to vehemently support the motion which states that: Developing technical sk... | {
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nes-00096-476977d8 | Write a descriptive composition about a chaotic morning in a busy community health centre during an unexpected medical outreach, ending with the sentence: "As the afternoon sun began to dip, a quiet calm finally descended upon the weary healthcare workers and relieved patients." | A Day of Turmoil at the Clinic
The morning mist had barely evaporated from the rusted iron roofs of our neighbourhood when the gates of the community health centre were besieged by an immense sea of anxious citizens. Word had travelled swiftly across the local wards that an impromptu medical outreach, sponsored by a c... | {
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nes-00099-08f4758d | Describe the state of infrastructural decay and overcrowding in a poorly funded public school you recently visited, and suggest practical measures that can be taken to restore the school to a conducive learning environment. | Last week Friday, I had the oppurtunity to visit Community Grammar School in my local government area, and what I saw there was very disheartning. The state of infrastructural decay and overcrowding in the school made me feel very sad because the environment is not good for learning at all.
Immediately I entered throu... | {
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nes-00101-443ef135 | Describe a day you spent at a busy public health centre in your locality, highlighting the atmosphere, the activities of the health workers, and the conditions of the patients. | A Busy Day in the Health Centre
Last month I go to our public health centre in my village because my younger sister is having serious fever. When we reach the place early morning the whole place was full of plenty people. The atmosphere was very bad and noise every where. The building is small and dirty some chairs wa... | {
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nes-00105-1f957103 | Write an article for publication in a national daily discussing the growing menace of queue jumping and disorderly conduct in public spaces, and suggesting ways to foster civility among citizens. Your article must end with the sentence: 'Until each citizen chooses patience over haste, orderly society will remain an elu... | CURBING THE MENACE OF QUEUE JUMPING AND DISORDER IN OUR SOCIETY
By Chinedu Okafor, Lagos State
In our country today, it is very sad to see how people behave in public spaces. Everywhere you go, you will see that people are always in a rush and they do not want to follow simple rules. Disorderly conduct and queue jump... | {
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nes-00107-20546ad7 | Your childhood friend has written asking for your advice on whether to learn a vocational trade or pursue a university degree immediately after secondary school. Write a reply advising your friend on the best path to take, giving at least three convincing reasons, and ending with the words: "...whatever path you choose... | 15 Adebayo Street, Ikeja, Lagos State. 12th October, 2023. Dear Emeka, How are you doing over there in Enugu? I hope this letter meets you in good health and high spirit. I was very happy when I recieved your letter last week asking for my candid advice concerning what to do now that we have finished our secondary scho... | {
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nes-00109-a6f800f4 | As the youth leader in your locality, you were part of a committee set up to inspect two newly constructed community centres in your local government area. Write a report to the Local Government Chairman comparing the strengths and weaknesses of both facilities, and recommending which one should receive additional fund... | REPORT ON THE TWO COMMUNITY CENTRES IN OUR LOCAL GOVERMENT
To the Local Goverment Chairman, sir I am writting this report to you as the youth leader because me and my committee members we go and inspect the two newly constructed community centre in our area last week monday. The reason why we inspect this place is to ... | {
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nes-00111-65d51877 | The lack of practical vocational skills among school leavers has contributed significantly to youth unemployment in your country. Write an article for publication in a national newspaper discussing the causes of this problem and suggesting at least three ways the government and private sector can promote skill acquisit... | Tackling Youth Unemployment Through Vocational Skills Acquisition
Youth unemployment has become one of the most serious challenges facing our country today. Every year, thousands of young people graduate from secondary schools and higher institutions without finding jobs. A major reason for this problem is the lack of... | {
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nes-00113-af863026 | You are the lead speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: 'The rising rate of youth unemployment in Nigeria is caused by lack of entrepreneurial mindset rather than government failure.' Write your speech for or against the motion, outlining the underlying problems and proposing viable solutions. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and distinguished audience, good day. My name is Chinedu Okafor, the lead speaker for the opposing side. I stand firmly before you today to argue against the motion which states that the rising rate of youth unemployment in Nigeria is caused by lack of ent... | {
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nes-00114-d934fb7f | You are the principal speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Stricter legal penalties alone can eliminate indiscipline in public places. Write your speech for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and Distinguished Audience, good day. My name is Adebayo Emmanuel, the principal speaker representing Government College. I stand firmly against the motion which asserts that stricter legal penalties alone can eliminate indiscipline in public places.
Whil... | {
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nes-00119-aaa80fcb | Write a story involving two friends who adopted completely opposite approaches to using social media, clearly illustrating how each choice affected their lives. | THE TWO FRIENDS AND THE INTERNET
In my secondary school days, there was two boys named Segun and Chidi who were very close friends. They do everything together and they are always seen in the classroom discussing about many things. But when their parents buy them smart phones after finishing junior secondary school ex... | {
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"mechanical_accuracy": 3
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nes-00120-5229f4d2 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily on the topic: The Importance of Integrating Digital Literacy into Secondary School Curricula in Nigeria. | THE IMPORTANCE OF INTEGRATING DIGITAL LITERACY INTO SECONDARY SCHOOL CURRICULA IN NIGERIA
By Chinedu Okafor
In our world of today, technology is moving very fast and everything is now done with computer. In Nigeria, education is the key to national development but many of our secondary schools are still using the old... | {
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"expression": 13,
"mechanical_accuracy": 5.5
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nes-00123-c82bfe97 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing at least three negative effects of excessive screen time on young people and proposing practical measures to address the problem. | THE DANGERS OF EXCESSIVE SCREEN TIME AMONG YOUTHS AND THE WAY FORWARD
By Chinedu Okafor
In recent times, the rapid advancement in technology has made digital devices such as smartphones, tablets, and laptops readily available to young people across our nation. While these gadgets are meant to make communication and l... | {
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nes-00128-3ed333c0 | As the newly elected Head Prefect, deliver a speech during the annual School Inter-House Sports Festival highlighting the main factors responsible for the recent decline in student participation in co-curricular activities and explaining the negative impacts this trend has had on school life. | REVITALISING THE SPIRIT OF ACTIVE PARTICIPATION IN CO-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
The Principal, Vice-Principals, distinguished guests, dedicated members of staff, proud parents, and my fellow students.
It is a rare privilege to stand before you all today on this momentous occasion of our annual Inter-House Sports Festival... | {
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nes-00133-d136cfd6 | Your school recently hosted a major cultural diversity festival that brought together students from various ethnic backgrounds. Write a letter to your cousin in another town describing the most exciting highlights of the event and explaining how the festival has improved relationships among students in your school. | Government Secondary School,
P.M.B 1022,
Keffi, Nasarawa State.
14th October, 2023.
Dear cousin Emeka,
How are you doing today over there in your place with your family members? I hope you are all fine by the grace of God. I am writing this letter to you because I want to tell you about our school cultural festival w... | {
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nes-00137-85d5f16e | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily on the growing menace of vandalism of public infrastructure in Nigeria, discussing its consequences on the society and suggesting practical measures to check the trend. Your article must end with the sentence: 'Only a collective sense of civic ownership can ... | CURBING THE MENACE OF INFRASTRUCTURE VANDALISM IN NIGERIA
By Chinedu Okafor
Federal Government College, Enugu
In recent times, the destruction of public property has become a serious headache in our country. Public facilities that are provided by the government to make life easy for everyone are being attacked everyd... | {
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nes-00139-82287c41 | A dispute recently broke out among student leaders in your school over whether severe punishment or restorative dialogue is more effective in correcting student indiscipline, reflecting the saying 'spare the rod and spoil the child'. As the Head Prefect, write a report to the School Disciplinary Committee evaluating th... | A REPORT ON THE EFFECTIVENESS OF SEVERE PUNISHMENT VERSUS RESTORATIVE DIALOGUE IN CURBING STUDENT INDISCIPLINE IN GOVERNMENT COLLEGE
TO: The Chairman, School Disciplinary Committee
FROM: Ibrahim Musa, Head Prefect
DATE: 14th October, 2024
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Following a recent disagreement that arose among the prefects ... | {
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nes-00141-8675e66b | You are the Chief Speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Commercial recreational centres are a better investment for community development than public libraries. Write your speech for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, Ladies and Gentlemen, good day. My name is Emmanuel Okafor, the Chief Speaker representing Government College. I stand firmly before you today to oppose the motion which states that commercial recreational centres are a better investment for community deve... | {
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nes-00143-0b9716ba | You have just completed your tenure as the President of the Student Union in your secondary school. Write the valedictory speech you will deliver at the end-of-year assembly, reviewing the key educational milestones achieved by the student body during your term and suggesting major areas the administration should focus... | AN VALEDICTORY SPEECH PRESENT BY THE OUTGOING PRESIDENT OF STUDENT UNION AT THE ASSEMBLY HALL.
The principal, vice principal, all teachers and my fellow students good morning to you all. I stand before you today as the student union president which my time has finish now. It is a great priviledge to talk on this end o... | {
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nes-00145-d625e025 | The National Information Technology Development Agency is organising an essay competition for senior secondary schools on the topic: The Proliferation of Misinformation on Social Media: Causes and Effects on National Cohesion. Write your entry. | THE PROLIFERATION OF MISINFORMATION ON SOCIAL MEDIA: CAUSES AND EFFECTS ON NATIONAL COHESION
In recent years, the rapid growth of the internet has transformed how people communicate and share informations across the world. In Nigeria today, social media platforms like WhatsApp, Facebook, X, and TikTok have become majo... | {
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nes-00150-c1509eeb | Write an article suitable for publication in a national newspaper on the challenges faced by young entrepreneurs in your country, suggesting at least three practical solutions to foster thriving small businesses. | CHALLENGES FACED BY YOUNG ENTREPRENEURS IN NIGERIA AND THE WAY FORWARD
By Ibrahim Musa, Youth Advocate, Lagos State
In Nigeria today, many youths are trying their best to establish thier own businesses instead of waiting for white collar jobs that are not available. Entrepreneurship is very important for the economic... | {
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nes-00151-8bc683cf | Young people in your country are increasingly turning to digital enterprises and vocational skills rather than waiting for white-collar jobs. Write an article for publication in a national daily discussing at least three factors responsible for this shift and highlighting its benefits to the national economy. Your arti... | EMBRACING THE FUTURE: THE RISE OF DIGITAL ENTERPRISES AND VOCATIONAL SKILLS AMONG NIGERIAN YOUTHS
By Chinedu Okafor, Lagos State.
In Nigeria today, the mentality of the youths are changing very fast concerning the issue of employment. In the past years, almost every graduate from the university will be waiting patien... | {
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nes-00154-7e4dd798 | Write a story that clearly illustrates the saying: Diligence and honest enterprise lead to enduring success. | The Fruit of Honest Labour
When I completed my secondary education three years ago, gaining admission into the university was delayed due to financial constraints. Rather than remaining idle at home, I resolved to establish a modest venture in our busy neighbourhood in Ibadan. With the little savings my mother gave me... | {
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nes-00164-ae7df308 | Write a story illustrating the saying: 'Health is wealth, but greed ruins both.' In your story, contrast the choices and eventual outcomes of two individuals who took opposing approaches to their physical well-being and ambition. | Health is Wealth, but Greed Ruins Both
In the busy town of Ore, there lived two childhood friends named Emeka and Babatunde. After completing their secondary school education, both of them decided to venture into business so that they could become rich and take care of their families. They started by opening electroni... | {
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nes-00167-dcea9a2e | Your school recently organised an inter-house cultural festival that disrupted normal academic activities and generated mixed feelings among students. Write a letter to your friend in another school discussing at least two causes of the disruption and explaining two positive or negative effects the event had on the stu... | Comprehensive High School,
P.M.B. 1024,
Akure, Ondo State.
14th November, 2023.
Dear Tunde,
I hope this letter meets you in good health and high spirits. How are your preparations for the upcoming mock examinations going? Things have been quite hectic on my end, mainly because our school recently organised an inter-h... | {
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nes-00169-79e5c7ee | Write an article suitable for publication in a national newspaper on the rising influence of artificial intelligence on youth employment in your country, discussing its effects and suggesting at least three ways the youth can prepare for the future workplace. | NAVIGATING THE FUTURE: ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE AND YOUTH EMPLOYMENT IN NIGERIA
By Chinedu Okafor
In recent years, the world has witnessed a rapid transformation driven by technological innovation. Among these breakthroughs, artificial intelligence stands out as the most powerful force reshaping industries globally. I... | {
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nes-00171-8f7d6dd3 | Public facilities and open spaces in many communities are frequently vandalised or left littered after major social and sports gatherings. Write an article for publication in a national newspaper highlighting the negative effects of this behaviour on the community and suggesting practical ways the problem can be checke... | CURBING THE MENACE OF VANDALISM AND LITTERING IN OUR COMMUNITIES
By Chinedu Okafor
Enugu, Nigeria
It has become a common habit that whenever a major social or sport gathering takes place in our communities, the public facilities and open spaces are left in a very terrible state. After events like football matches, st... | {
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nes-00174-588e0e85 | As the outgoing Head Boy or Head Girl, you have been invited to address newly admitted students at their orientation ceremony on the proverb: 'A stitch in time saves nine.' Write your speech, explaining the meaning of the proverb and presenting three distinct areas of school life where applying this principle ensures a... | The Principal, Vice Principals, respected teachers, and my fellow students, especially our newly admitted junior students. Good morning to you all. As the outgoing Head Boy of our great school, it is a great priviledge and honour for me to stand before you today on this orientation ceremony to welcome you to our midst.... | {
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nes-00178-87150f30 | Write an essay explaining the saying, 'Dishonesty may offer a quick path to wealth, but integrity builds a lasting legacy.' Discuss the factors that drive people toward deceit and the long-term consequences of such actions on both the individual and the wider community. | Dishonesty May Offer a Quick Path to Wealth, but Integrity Builds a Lasting Legacy
The saying that dishonesty may offer a quick path to wealth but integrity builds a lasting legacy is a very true statement in our modern society. This proverb means that doing bad things or cheating can make a person to become rich quic... | {
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nes-00182-2ca28153 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing the challenges faced by young entrepreneurs in your country and suggesting practical ways the government and private sector can support them. | EMPOWERING THE NEXT GENERATION: OVERCOMING THE HURDLES OF YOUTH ENTREPRENEURSHIP IN NIGERIA
By Chukwuemeka Okonkwo
Victoria Island, Lagos
In recent years, the vibrant spirit of entrepreneurship among Nigerian youth has become one of the most promising drivers of economic dynamism. Faced with an increasingly saturated... | {
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nes-00184-b1a8b8e9 | As the Health Prefect of your school, write a speech to be delivered at the annual Health Week assembly on the topic: Combating Poor Sanitation in Our School: Causes, Effects, and Practical Solutions. | The Principal, Vice-Principals, distinguished teachers, and my fellow students, good morning to you all. As the Health Prefect of our noble school, I stand before you today on this special occasion of our annual Health Week assembly to address a critical issue that affects our daily lives and well-being. The topic of m... | {
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nes-00186-35a4b5f6 | As the youth leader in your community, you have been invited to address parents and guardians at an annual town hall meeting. Write your speech on the topic: The Breakdown of Parental Guidance and Its Consequences on the Youth. | The Chairman of this great occasion, our respected traditional chiefs, elders of our community, dear parents and guardians, fellow youths, ladies and gentlemen. Good afternoon to you all.
I stand before you today not only as the youth leader of our community, but also as a concerned child who sees the daily struggles ... | {
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nes-00187-b0351f64 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing the growing reliance of secondary school students on digital learning tools and its impact on their academic performance. | THE DIGITAL SHIFT: EXAMINING THE IMPACT OF ELECTRONIC LEARNING AIDS ON SECONDARY SCHOOL STUDENTS
By Chinedu Okafor
In recent years, the landscape of secondary education across the country has undergone a profound transformation. Gone are the days when students depended solely on dog-eared textbooks, chalkboard illust... | {
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nes-00190-5193aacb | The unchecked consumption of ultra-processed foods and sugary beverages is increasingly threatening the health of young people in your country. Write an article for publication in a national daily discussing the causes of this dietary habit and suggesting effective measures to promote healthier eating choices among the... | THE PROBLEM OF JUNK FOODS AND SOFT DRINKS AMONG OUR YOUTHS
By Chinedu Okeke, Lagos State.
Nowaday in our country Nigeria, many young people are taking bad foods that is destroying their body. Ultra-process foods and sugary drink is become too much in our socity today. Everywhere you go you will see youths drinking min... | {
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nes-00191-bce52a0a | You are the youth representative in your community. At a town hall meeting convened to discuss local development, deliver a speech convincing the elders and residents of the urgent need to establish a modern public library and ICT resource centre. | The Chairman of this great meeting, our respected chiefs and elders, women leaders, and my fellow youths of our community. I greet you all warmly this afternoon. As the youth representative, I am standing before you today to talk about something that is very important for our future and development. It is high time we ... | {
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nes-00193-26172973 | As the outgoing senior prefect of your school, you have been invited to deliver a valedictory address to junior students on the occasion of their annual Character and Ethics Day. Write your speech, highlighting the importance of honesty and hard work, and concluding with the sentence: 'Indeed, a good name is far more v... | The Principal, Vice Principals, respected teachers, and my dear junior students, good morning to you all. It is a great honour for me to stand before you today as the outgoing Senior Prefect on this important occasion of our annual Character and Ethics Day. Looking at your bright and eager faces, I remember sitting whe... | {
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nes-00195-939c329a | The proliferation of unregulated patent medicine stores and the sale of counterfeit pharmaceuticals have posed severe health risks in your community. Write a letter to the Minister of Health highlighting the dangers of this situation and suggesting at least three practical measures to curb the menace. | Comprehensive Community High School,
P.O. Box 412,
Ikeja, Lagos State.
14th November, 2023.
The Honourable Minister of Health,
Federal Ministry of Health,
Federal Secretariat Complex, Shehu Shagari Way,
Abuja, Nigeria.
Dear Honourable Minister,
THE MENACE OF UNREGULATED PATENT MEDICINE STORES AND COUNTERFEIT DRUGS
... | {
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nes-00196-edf1ccc2 | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily on the state of public libraries in your community, highlighting the benefits they offer to residents and suggesting realistic measures to revive them. | REVIVING OUR PUBLIC LIBRARIES FOR COMMUNITY DEVELOPMENT
By Chinedu Okafor
Enugu, Enugu State.
Public libraries have always been known as the centre of knowledge and learning in every progressive society. In time past, they served as a quiet place where students, researchers and ordinary citizens go to read, borrow bo... | {
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nes-00197-cec12315 | The rampant disruption of community sports competitions and cultural festivals by unruly youths has become a major concern in many localities. Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing the causes of this menace and suggesting at least three ways the community and local authorities can res... | CURBING THE MENACE OF YOUTH UNRULINESS IN OUR COMMUNITY EVENTS
By Chinedu Okeke
Community sports competitions and cultural festivals are supposed to bring people together in peace and unity. In the past years, these events showcase our rich culture and bring joy to both young and old. However, it is very sad that now... | {
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nes-00198-4d59d51b | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily on the rising trend of online misinformation among young people, highlighting its dangers and suggesting effective ways to curb the practice. | THE RISING TREND OF ONLINE MISINFORMATION AMONG YOUNG PEOPLE
Nowadays, the internet has become very important in our daily lives especially for the youths. Young people use their smartphones every day to enter social media like Facebook, TikTok, WhatsApp and Twitter. However, there is a serious problem that is spreadi... | {
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nes-00199-91561f73 | Write a story that clearly illustrates the importance of preserving the natural ecosystem or adopting sustainable farming practices, ending with the exact words: "Looking at the barren land, I wished we had listened to the warnings of the elders." | In my village of Umuike, farming was the main work of all the people. The land was very fertile and green, and every family had a big farm where they planted yam, cassava and maize. In those days, our fathers used to practice shifting cultivation. They would farm on one land this year, and leave it to rest for some yea... | {
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nes-00201-c4102ea5 | You were recently part of a student delegation that represented your school at a local community sanitation rally where notable incidents of public disorder and unruly behavior occurred. As the Senior Prefect, write a comprehensive report to the Principal detailing the events and proposing measures to improve student a... | A REPORT ON THE COMMUNITY SANITATION RALLY HELD AT APATA MARKET SQUARE ON SATURDAY, 14TH OCTOBER, 2023
TO: The Principal, Government Secondary School, Apata
FROM: Master Emmanuel Adeleke, Senior Prefect
DATE: 17th October, 2023
INTRODUCTION
As directed by the school authority, I hereby submit this report on the commu... | {
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nes-00204-e25bb6f0 | A newly established modern primary healthcare centre was recently commissioned in your community. Describe the facility, detailing its appearance, atmosphere, and the activities taking place within it on a busy day. | THE NEW HEALTH CENTRE IN MY COMMUNITY
Our community have a new hospital that government build for us last month. The place is very big and fine it have many room and painting with blue and white colour which make it to shine under the sun. Many people is going there everyday because we dont have good hospital before n... | {
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"organisation": 5,
"expression": 8,
"mechanical_accuracy": 0
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"total": 19,
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"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
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nes-00205-da79b0d1 | As the President of the Health Club in your school, write a speech you will deliver to your fellow students during the annual Health Awareness Week, highlighting three major lifestyle habits that promote good mental and physical well-being. | The Principal, Vice-Principals, distinguished teachers, and my fellow students, good morning to you all. It gives me immense pleasure to stand before you today as the President of our school Health Club to mark this year's annual Health Awareness Week. The theme of our gathering is very timely because as secondary scho... | {
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"content": 10,
"organisation": 10,
"expression": 19,
"mechanical_accuracy": 10
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"total": 49,
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"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00211-0e4bde16 | Write an article suitable for publication in your school magazine illustrating the truth of the saying, 'Honesty is the best policy', ending with the sentence: 'Indeed, integrity remains the only foundation upon which lasting success can be built.' | HONESTY IS THE BEST POLICY
By Samuel Okon (SS3 Science)
In our society today, many people believe that shortcut is the best way to make it in life. Both young and old people are doing everything possible to get money and success without working hard. But there is an old saying that honesty is the best policy which man... | {
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"organisation": 8,
"expression": 13,
"mechanical_accuracy": 5.5
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"total": 35.5,
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} |
nes-00212-6304c6fa | You are the principal speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Modern agricultural methods pose a greater threat to our environment than traditional farming practices. Write your speech for or against the motion, highlighting the challenges involved and proposing sustainable solutions. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and distinguished ladies and gentlemen. Good day to you all. My name is Emmanuel Okafor, and I stand before you today as the principal speaker to strongly support the motion which states that: Modern agricultural methods pose a greater threat to our enviro... | {
"scores": {
"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 12,
"mechanical_accuracy": 5.5
},
"total": 33.5,
"feedback": "Your debate speech accurately addresses the prompt with clear arguments and viable solutions. The structure and formal register are commendable. However, widespread subject-... | {
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"theme": "environment_and_agriculture",
"word_count": 488,
"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00214-d11809ef | A once-thriving agricultural community in your area has recently suffered severe devastation due to a natural disaster or human activity. Describe the present state of the community, detailing the causes of the devastation and the effects it has had on the lives of the residents. | The Devastation of Obada Community
Obada was once a very peaceful and thriving agricultural community in my local government area. In those good days, green vegetation covered the whole landscape, and farmers could be seen returning home happily every evening with baskets full of fresh vegetables, yams, and cassava. H... | {
"scores": {
"content": 9,
"organisation": 9,
"expression": 16,
"mechanical_accuracy": 10
},
"total": 44,
"feedback": "This is an exceptionally well-written descriptive essay. You effectively addressed all prompt requirements with vivid sensory details, clear logical progression, and fluent, ev... | {
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"theme": "environment_and_agriculture",
"word_count": 504,
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"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00217-c7ea3ec0 | Public libraries and recreation centres in many neighbourhoods across the country have fallen into disrepair. Write an article for publication in a national daily highlighting at least three major ways revitalising these community facilities would benefit the youth and reduce social vices. | REVITALISING COMMUNITY FACILITIES FOR YOUTH DEVELOPMENT AND CRIME REDUCTION
By Chinedu Okafor
It is a sad reality that public libraries and recreation centres in many neighbourhoods across our country have fallen into total disrepair. In the past, these places served as lively centres where young people gathered to r... | {
"scores": {
"content": 10,
"organisation": 10,
"expression": 18,
"mechanical_accuracy": 9
},
"total": 47,
"feedback": "This is an exceptionally well-written article. You thoroughly address the prompt by providing three distinct, well-developed arguments linking facility revitalisation to youth... | {
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"genre": "article",
"theme": "community_facilities",
"word_count": 488,
"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00218-4903d822 | As the president of your school's Road Safety and Civic Club, you have been invited to address fellow students at a general assembly on the theme of public conduct. Write your speech, highlighting common acts of misconduct among youths in public spaces and suggesting practical ways they can foster discipline and civili... | PUBLIC CONDUCT AMONG YOUTHS
Good morning to the principal, the teachers and my fellow student. I am standing here today as the president of Road Safety and Civic Club to tell you about public conduct. It is very important for all of us because many youths does not behave well in the society nowadays.
Firstly, there i... | {
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"content": 7,
"organisation": 6,
"expression": 10,
"mechanical_accuracy": 0
},
"total": 23,
"feedback": "The speech adequately addresses public misconduct and provides practical civic remedies. The structure suits a school assembly, but numerous grammatical errors—especially in sub... | {
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"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00219-807de568 | As the Senior Prefect, write a letter to the Chairman of your school's Parent-Teacher Association (PTA) highlighting at least three major challenges students face in the school laboratories and suggesting practical ways the association can assist in solving them. | Government Secondary School,
P.M.B. 1042,
Owerri,
Imo State.
14th November, 2023.
The Chairman,
Parent-Teacher Association,
Government Secondary School,
Owerri,
Imo State.
Dear Sir,
AN APPEAL TO ADDRESS MAJOR CHALLENGES FACING OUR SCHOOL LABORATORIES
I write this letter to you today on behalf of all the students i... | {
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"content": 9,
"organisation": 9,
"expression": 15,
"mechanical_accuracy": 8.5
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"total": 41.5,
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"word_count": 475,
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"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00223-c2fabb8a | The National Directorate of Employment is organising an essay competition for secondary school students on the topic: The growing trend of digital freelancing among youths: causes and effects. Write your entry explaining why many young people are turning to online self-employment and how this development is impacting t... | THE GROWING TREND OF DIGITAL FREELANCING AMONG YOUTHS: CAUSES AND EFFECTS
In recent times, digital freelancing has become very popular among young people in Nigeria. Digital freelancing is a situation where youths use the internet and their computers or smart phones to do different jobs for clients all over the world ... | {
"scores": {
"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 14,
"mechanical_accuracy": 7
},
"total": 37,
"feedback": "Your essay effectively explains the shift to digital freelancing and evaluates its economic impacts. The points are clear and structured well. To improve further, ensure strong ... | {
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"theme": "employment_and_enterprise",
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"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00224-ecbd015b | As the youth leader of your community, write a speech you will deliver at a town hall meeting on the urgent need to establish a modern public library and resource centre in your area. | AN ADDRESS DELIVERED BY THE YOUTH LEADER ON THE URGENT NEED TO ESTABLISH A MODERN PUBLIC LIBRARY AND RESOURCE CENTRE AT THE COMMUNITY TOWN HALL MEETING
Our Respected Traditional Ruler, Members of the Traditional Council, Distinguished Community Leaders, Elders, Fellow Youths, Ladies and Gentlemen.
It is an immense ho... | {
"scores": {
"content": 10,
"organisation": 10,
"expression": 19,
"mechanical_accuracy": 10
},
"total": 49,
"feedback": "An exceptional speech that perfectly satisfies all prompt requirements. It features persuasive rhetoric, clear organisation, and an impressive command of vocabulary.",
"pri... | {
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"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00226-cb1bc0d6 | Most public secondary schools in your local government area lack functional science laboratories and qualified technical instructors. Write a letter to the Commissioner for Education highlighting the consequences of this neglect on students' learning and proposing practical measures to resolve the situation. | Community Secondary School,
P.O. Box 45, Ikotun,
Lagos State.
14th November, 2023.
The Commissioner for Education,
Ministry of Education,
State Secretariat, Alausa,
Ikeja, Lagos State.
Dear Sir,
AN APPEAL TO RESCUE OUR SCIENCE LABORATORIES AND TECHNICAL INSTRUCTORS IN OUR SCHOOLS
I am writing this letter to you sir... | {
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"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 11,
"mechanical_accuracy": 2.5
},
"total": 29.5,
"feedback": "This is a well-structured formal letter that thoroughly addresses the prompt with solid consequences and solutions. The organisation is excellent. However, frequent mechanic... | {
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} |
nes-00232-29d65ab9 | Your close friend has recently been experiencing frequent fatigue and poor academic performance due to an unhealthy lifestyle involving late-night screen use and poor eating habits. Write a letter to your friend pointing out the negative effects of these habits on their well-being and suggesting practical ways they can... | Government Secondary School,
P.M.B. 1024,
Akure, Ondo State.
14th May, 2024.
Dear Tunde,
How are you doing today? I hope you and your family are doing fine. I am writing this letter to you because I am really worried about your health and how things are going with you in school recently. You know that we have been fr... | {
"scores": {
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"organisation": 10,
"expression": 18,
"mechanical_accuracy": 9.5
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"total": 47.5,
"feedback": "An excellent informal letter. You addressed all parts of the prompt with warmth, clarity, and persuasive empathy. The structure, tone, and advice are exceptionally well-or... | {
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} |
nes-00233-ef9a6639 | You are the Chief Speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Commercial chemical farming has caused more environmental damage than traditional agricultural practices. Write your speech for or against the motion. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, accurate Timekeeper, co-debaters and distinguished audience, good day to you all. My name is Emmanuel Okon, the Chief Speaker representing Community Secondary School. I stand firmly here today to support the motion which states that commercial chemical farming has caused more environmental... | {
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"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 14,
"mechanical_accuracy": 5
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"total": 35,
"feedback": "Your debate speech is excellent, with a clear stance and well-developed arguments comparing chemical and traditional farming. However, multiple subject-verb agreement errors aff... | {
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"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00238-6363acf6 | As the Senior Prefect of your school, write an official report to the Principal on the recent community outreach project organized by the students' union under the motto 'Honesty and Service to Humanity', detailing the activities undertaken and their impact on the local community. | REPORT ON THE COMMUNITY OUTREACH PROJECT ORGANIZED BY THE STUDENTS' UNION
To: The Principal, Government Secondary School, Ikotun
From: Master David Adeleke, Senior Prefect
Date: 24th October, 2023
1.0 INTRODUCTION
In line with our school's commitment to moral leadership and social responsibility, the Students' Repres... | {
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"organisation": 10,
"expression": 18,
"mechanical_accuracy": 9.5
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"total": 47.5,
"feedback": "This excellent report addresses all prompt requirements thoroughly with an appropriately formal tone and effective layout.",
"priority_improvements": [
"Ensure corre... | {
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"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00240-91ea7769 | You are the President of the Health and Sanitation Club in your school. During the annual World Health Day assembly, deliver a speech to the student body and staff explaining the common causes of poor hygiene practices among teenagers and the serious health consequences these habits bring about. | THE CAUSES AND CONSEQUENCES OF POOR HYGIENE PRACTICES AMONG TEENAGERS
The Principal, Vice-Principals, Respected Teachers, and my fellow Students. Good morning to you all.
I stand before you today on this memorable occasion of the World Health Day as the President of the Health and Sanitation Club. As we all know, hea... | {
"scores": {
"content": 10,
"organisation": 10,
"expression": 18,
"mechanical_accuracy": 9.5
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"total": 47.5,
"feedback": "This is an exceptionally well-crafted, persuasive speech that thoroughly fulfills all task requirements. The register is perfectly suited to the audience, featuring clear ... | {
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"word_count": 488,
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"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00243-52dfaf8b | You are a principal speaker in an inter-school debate on the motion: Modern agricultural practices do more harm than good to our environment. Write your speech for or against the motion, highlighting the key ecological problems and proposing viable remedies. | Mr Chairman, Panel of Judges, Accurate Timekeeper, Co-debaters, and Distinguished Ladies and Gentlemen. My name is Emmanuel Okafor, the principal speaker representing Government College, and I am standing before you today to strongly support the motion which states that modern agricultural practices do more harm than g... | {
"scores": {
"content": 9,
"organisation": 9,
"expression": 17,
"mechanical_accuracy": 9.5
},
"total": 44.5,
"feedback": "An exceptional, articulate debate speech that satisfies all format requirements, develops persuasive points logically, and proposes clear remedies. Register and rhetorical f... | {
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"theme": "environment_and_agriculture",
"word_count": 474,
"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00247-74c4497c | A close friend of yours in another school has written complaining about persistent exhaustion, poor eating habits, and declining academic performance due to unhealthy lifestyle choices. Write a reply to your friend identifying at least two causes of these health problems and suggesting practical remedies they can adopt... | Comprehensive High School,
P.M.B. 1024,
Akure, Ondo State.
14th May, 2024.
Dear Tunde,
I was very happy to receive your letter yesterday, although reading about what you are currently passing through gave me serious concern. I felt so bad to hear that you are suffering from persistent exhaustion, poor feeding, and th... | {
"scores": {
"content": 9,
"organisation": 9,
"expression": 17,
"mechanical_accuracy": 9.5
},
"total": 44.5,
"feedback": "Outstanding essay. Acknowledgement of letter, causes, and remedies handled excellently. Pluralizing uncountable nouns needs work.",
"priority_improvements": [
"Treat u... | {
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"word_count": 473,
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} |
nes-00250-8eefa255 | You have been invited as the president of your school's Information Technology Club to deliver a speech during an inter-school youth summit on the topic: 'Maximising Artificial Intelligence for Academic Excellence.' Write your speech, highlighting the benefits of artificial intelligence to secondary school students and... | A SPEECH ON MAXIMISING ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE FOR ACADEMIC EXCELLENCE BY THE IT CLUB PRESIDENT
The Chairman, Panel of Judges, Distinguished Guests, Teachers and my fellow Students, Good day to you all. I am standing before you today as the president of my school Information Technology club to deliver this speech on h... | {
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"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 12,
"mechanical_accuracy": 5.5
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"total": 33.5,
"feedback": "The speech is well-structured and properly addresses the prompt's requirements with clear benefits and remedies regarding AI. Expression is hindered by fundamental mechanica... | {
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"word_count": 628,
"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00254-533f46ef | Write an article suitable for publication in a national daily discussing the deplorable condition of public recreation centres in your community and suggesting practical measures to revive them. | THE DEPLORABLE CONDITION OF PUBLIC RECREATION CENTRES IN OUR COMMUNITY AND WAYS TO REVIVE THEM
By Ibrahim Musa
Kaduna State
It is very sad that public recreation centres which are suppose to be places where people go to rest and play are now in total ruin in our community. In the past years, these places use to be ve... | {
"scores": {
"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 11,
"mechanical_accuracy": 3.5
},
"total": 30.5,
"feedback": "The article is well-focused, clearly addressing both the dilapidated state of recreation centres and practical solutions. Paragraphing is logical, and the required format is... | {
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"genre": "article",
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"word_count": 452,
"split": "train",
"rubric_version": "0.1.0",
"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00262-84ea47d7 | The widespread circulation of unverified news and digital fraud on social media platforms has become a major concern in your community. Write a letter to the Minister of Communications and Digital Economy, highlighting three negative effects of this trend on the youth and suggesting two practical measures the governmen... | Government Secondary School,
P.M.B. 1042,
Kubwa, Abuja.
15th May, 2024.
The Honourable Minister,
Ministry of Communications and Digital Economy,
Federal Secretariat Complex, Shehu Shagari Way,
Abuja.
Dear Sir,
THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS OF UNVERIFIED NEWS AND DIGITAL FRAUD ON YOUTH AND SUGGESTED SOLUTIONS
I am writing th... | {
"scores": {
"content": 9,
"organisation": 9,
"expression": 15,
"mechanical_accuracy": 7.5
},
"total": 40.5,
"feedback": "Initial logic and parameters are validated. Task requirements fully met with excellent formal features.",
"priority_improvements": [
"Distinguish homophones (e.g., 'lo... | {
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"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
"review_reasons": []
} |
nes-00264-98594dc7 | Your school recently hosted a Community Health and Sanitation Outreach organised by the Red Cross Society. As the Health Prefect, write a report on the event for the School Management, highlighting the key activities undertaken and making recommendations for future programmes. | A REPORT ON THE COMMUNITY HEALTH AND SANITATION OUTREACH HOSTED BY THE RED CROSS SOCIETY IN OUR SCHOOL
I am writing this report to inform the school management about the health outreach that took place in our school compound on the 14th of March 2024. The programme was organize by the Red Cross Society to help both st... | {
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"content": 8,
"organisation": 8,
"expression": 11,
"mechanical_accuracy": 2
},
"total": 29,
"feedback": "The report provides a factual, well-organised account of the health outreach, covering key activities and constructive recommendations. However, mechanical accuracy is severely ... | {
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"source_status": "accepted_candidate",
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} |
nes-00266-da888dc5 | Your school recently transitioned from traditional paper textbooks to digital tablets in the classroom. Describe a typical learning session under both systems, highlighting the sensory details, atmosphere, and interactions that distinguish the two experiences. | A Tale of Two Classrooms: From Paper Books to Digital Tablets
Our school recently change from using traditional paper textbooks to digital tablets in our daily classes. This new system brought many changes in our classroom life, and looking back at the two systems, one can easily notice how the atmosphere, sounds and ... | {
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"organisation": 8,
"expression": 15,
"mechanical_accuracy": 8.5
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