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+  "text": "Hey guys, Erin here. We're going to be looking at the Flattering Forms assignment. This one's really fun. There's a lot of different kind of cool ways you can tackle this. Different perspectives, like abstracting stuff. I love the limited color palette. So yeah, and we're looking at Noreenas right now. Feels really nice at a first look. Everything feels really clean, love our edges. I think the color balance is working really nicely. We got green sprinkled around, our blue sprinkled around. If anything, maybe a little white or another color sprinkled into our two block items in the middle. Maybe even just little detail lines on each of them. Maybe the white just to get a little bit of something else in there because it is pretty heavily black right in the middle and maybe our kind of grays on the outside which I don't think is actually in the color palette turned to that black too just kind of tied that together just a little bit. But yeah, it's feeling nice. I think if anything maybe we could add a little bit more just to take up a little more real estate of the desk. Like that upper right corner especially feels like something could maybe get moved up there or added. It's okay to have things like poke off the edge of the desk a little. I think that looks nice, makes it a little more dynamic. Just little things like that, but it feels really strong and I love our really subtle texture that we have going on and it's used nicely and purposefully as kind of a highlight seal and edges of our Black items and the green items. It feels really nice little details like that are great Very John Marina And next up is Antonio Antonio's have been really fun to see because you are using illustrator which personally I don't use often especially for like more illustration stuff But everything's looking really nice and really clean. So it's been really great to see and this one especially feels really awesome. We just have so much happening. Every little detail is really clean, feels really nice. I love our perspectives. I'd love to add a little overlap happening somewhere. Just things kind of being in front of each other. It's nice places to use like shadows and it just really helps add that like depth and just some interaction between our items just really feels nice. And there's a lot of opportunity to do that, especially up on this right side. We have like these five items here. Some of those could just overlap a little bit, which would feel great. We have really nice texture here too, really subtle like on the white of the computer. Feels really great and have that throughout on some of our other items. Like the detailed lines and color balance is really great. Like the notebook especially. Really sticking out to me. Just that line work. Super smooth. Just feels really professional. Like our phone cord feels awesome. Yeah, just overall feels really fun. I like what you did with the keyboard. Just an interesting way to kind of tackle that. So yeah, it's a really nice job. Nice mix of pretty realistic, but like a very clear style. Nice job. Alright, lastly, Brandon. As you can tell, Arryn tends to be the most popular desk color, and that's for a reason. It really helps like the other colors pop pop and it's kind of the less least harsh of them. So it works pretty well. So it's feeling nice. This is Brandon's second version already and made a lot of great improvements here. Don't be afraid to kind of push like scaling of things. Like they don't need to be the exact size that they really are in your desk. Like Brandon made his speakers a lot bigger just to kind of help take up some space. It makes things more interesting, more dynamic. and I think we could push that even more. Maybe add like some papers like under the coffee. Just think little things like that, but feels really nice. I love our color balance. We have blue all over, greens everywhere. Maybe like if you're looking just right in the middle, pretty just black and white, maybe there's a little color like in our keyboard. Maybe like the shadow in the computers like the blue Just little things like that kind of look at each section and see what colors you're missing like maybe our speaker that circle is white Just to give a little more contrast there because it is pretty close to that darker color in the circle But yes feeling really strong the texture on the table I forget if I mentioned this to Brandon I think I did but it is nice having a texture It's just it might be a little bit too strong. It's a little distracting and in just some places that feel like it's competing with actual items on the desk. So maybe just turning that opacity down like the tiniest bit or getting rid of some of the lines. So we just have a little bit because there are a lot kind of going different directions here. But it's definitely a nice idea overall. And I just like the double layer we have going on and that really subtle shadow between them. The texture is really nice too. Cool. Great job Brandon. So that's all we're looking at for these. Keep them coming in if you guys haven't had a chance yet. We're going to have a catch up week soon. Don't stress if you feel like you're a little behind. You'll have some time to catch up. So great job guys.",
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