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cc5f748b6da3 | F456754DA472 | The reason why I am convinced that it is a natural ladform is because the Viking 2 saw a shadowy likeness of a human face | Claim | Adequate |
8b8784ddcc5e | F456754DA472 | They saw an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end that seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. | Evidence | Adequate |
6c5886d0899a | F456754DA472 | Another reason why you should believe that the face on Mars is real is because the Jet Propulsion Lab saw the face on their motor | Claim | Ineffective |
530cf15ef957 | F456754DA472 | The said it looked like an Egyptian Pharoah.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
0e6de7894310 | F456754DA472 | NASA unveiled the image for people to see. The people were fascinated | Evidence | Adequate |
e6f93ae6a672 | F456754DA472 | That's when they really thought it was a natural landform. | Claim | Adequate |
a6e8d569b72b | F456754DA472 | The "Face on Mars" has become popular. | Claim | Ineffective |
55428026dc0e | F456754DA472 | It is now in films, magazines, books, talk shows, and haunted grocery stores. The face on Mars is a natural landform. Many people have experienced the face that appears on the planet of Mars. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f67483589006 | F456754DA472 | In conclusion, the story about the face on Mars being a natural landform is true. The face was created on it's own. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
fc6306a621fc | F486B5722EEB | Relaxing and warm, the summer approaches after a year of trecherous hard work and learning. But that needed break is interupted by a project that is due at the end of the summer. | Lead | Adequate |
73f17ea5cd92 | F486B5722EEB | Over the summer projects should be student designed | Position | Adequate |
e48c69e01003 | F486B5722EEB | to allow creativity, | Claim | Adequate |
5be8a060c413 | F486B5722EEB | inclusivity | Claim | Ineffective |
eef693644e38 | F486B5722EEB | and give students opportunity to learn about a topic they are passionate about. | Claim | Adequate |
028097e26900 | F486B5722EEB | During the school year all projects have rubrics, exact instructions and little time to add personal creative touches, but with elongated time and less strict boundries students will be able to tap into their inner creativity and manifest a project that is new and interesting for anyone that views it | Evidence | Adequate |
9802492b2f0d | F486B5722EEB | Over the summer students are at home and do not have the resources avaliable that are typically exposed to in a school. Without these resources students might not be able to create a project that is teacher designed | Evidence | Adequate |
61786f7df524 | F486B5722EEB | A student designed project, however, would allow students to use their surronding to create a project unique to them. | Claim | Adequate |
834a519869a1 | F486B5722EEB | It may seem like a student designed project could be less neat and careless but if the student is passionate about their topic then they will be interested in designing. | Claim | Adequate |
025f5c0f027e | F486B5722EEB | It will also be important to them, so they will work hard to make it the best they can. My favorite class is psychology and whenever I have a project in that class I want to spend extra time on it and make sure it is good because the topic is important to me. A student designed project is also benefical because student... | Evidence | Adequate |
766180dde6d8 | F486B5722EEB | If they are passionate about the topic the project will seem less like a burden and more like an opportuntity to make learning fun. If the project is student designed and they are really passionate about it they may decide to continue the project even after it is done. This could end up benefitting the community by sup... | Evidence | Adequate |
d73bd5e589b2 | F486B5722EEB | Allowing over the summer projects to be student designed will allow students to be creative, inclusive to all student environments and strengths and provide an opportuity for students to explore on of their passions in depth. All of these things are benefical to the student and should be encouraged, so that students ca... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
055f23260509 | F494E7D49939 | Earth is the only plant that humans can stand ,talk,walk and breath on by your self with no help . haves 800 degree farenheit when lading from space while the perssure will be 90 times greater with the atmopheric | Lead | Ineffective |
3adc0bf940dd | F494E7D49939 | some peoole want to know is other plants save to vist . | Position | Ineffective |
0b473840c4cb | F494E7D49939 | Mars ,Venus are the close to earth neigboor from speed of time mars be closer to earth then others venues closer to earth . Veuns has the hottest landing point temperture in the solar system .veunes try living there your car woul be floating 30 20 feet above the floor .venus do have features as like earth rocky mountai... | Evidence | Ineffective |
913194a9fe5d | F494E7D49939 | some say we may can vist that plant soon.
| Claim | Ineffective |
a78a427d9ae8 | F494E7D49939 | The NASA has only one particularly compeliing to study whats beyond what people dont see or dont know for hummans can travel to other plants | Claim | Ineffective |
de8938c9e804 | F494E7D49939 | earth the best to keep all living goods in things, poeple ,and creachers alive | Evidence | Ineffective |
6584855b23b8 | F494E7D49939 | Thats why its good for people to studdy about thinks an just do so they would know what they getting into .earth right now never sound back to me but earing an learing about differnt plants that maybe we might be able to vist in years is aswome to learn an hear about that its not just one plant we could live on. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
96e1ac512bd8 | F4A3A95F16D8 | There are many advantages to limiting car usage. | Position | Adequate |
564c593920e2 | F4A3A95F16D8 | it is better for the environment because it reduces greenhouse gasses and causes less polution and smog. | Claim | Adequate |
330e273e2504 | F4A3A95F16D8 | Another advantage is car traveling is becoming less nessasary because of citys like New York and new and improved telecommuting methods. | Claim | Ineffective |
0a8bf42ef0e1 | F4A3A95F16D8 | car usage is becoming less popular, this is because of "no car days" and people just not bothering to get a car or a license. | Claim | Ineffective |
c345975cc196 | F4A3A95F16D8 | when you limit car usage, it is better for the environment because off all the greenhouse gas reduction caused by not using as many cars and other gas producing vehicles as much | Claim | Effective |
82dde8f571b2 | F4A3A95F16D8 | For example, in source 1, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, it states that " And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes....passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intens... | Evidence | Adequate |
64ed6e02964f | F4A3A95F16D8 | For example, as stated in source 4, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, New York, is starting several programs to use cars less, including car-sharing, skyrocket bridge, tunnel tolls, and bike sharing programs. In that source, it also says that when someone stops using a car, for whatever reason, they find it unnesasary to contin... | Evidence | Adequate |
146ee22a0186 | F4A3A95F16D8 | In cities like Bogota, Cali, and Valledupar, all in Columbia, they have "Day without cars" this is one example of cars becoming less popular because, even though it was raining, tons of people still participated. Another example is in source 4, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, she says that her children, both of age to get a l... | Evidence | Adequate |
ee44651323c7 | F4A3A95F16D8 | there are many advantages to limiting car usage including it is better for the environment, it is becoming less nessasary, and it is also becoming less popular. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
38e261443ae0 | F4A3B4B14952 | The summer months are a key time for both students and teachers to regroup from the school year that just occurred, and to prepare for the school year that is to come at the end of their short break. This time is important to both groups because it is a more care free period where they are not under the constant pressu... | Lead | Effective |
09864027148a | F4A3B4B14952 | The most ideal project is teacher-designed because a student will most likely not plan an assignment that is actually helpful or one that prepares them for the upcoming year. | Position | Effective |
9ab7a12bc91c | F4A3B4B14952 | A teacher will be able to design one that prepares the students well for the upcoming curriculum | Claim | Effective |
53ff64ff8838 | F4A3B4B14952 | helps them manage their time well over the summer months | Claim | Effective |
14b82ca1585c | F4A3B4B14952 | A summer assignment is one that will not be necessarily a very difficult one but it will require time management and if done well, can be very beneficial for the students. | Claim | Effective |
d58f52626046 | F4A3B4B14952 | After the long school year the last thing a student wants to do is more work. If a student was to design their own project it probably would not be helpful. A teacher is able to access what is necessary to learn before the class starts and they will be able to create a project that is nothing but beneficial. In my own ... | Evidence | Adequate |
d5dc1ddc0c82 | F4A3B4B14952 | Managing time is one of the most important, yet difficult portion of a summer project but it is also something that is very difficult. Not only is it important for that summer project but those time management skills carry over into the coming school year. A project that is designed by a student may not properly prepar... | Evidence | Adequate |
50e2a9a8df61 | F4A3B4B14952 | The classes over the years have only gotten more difficult in my personal experience and before y freshman year none of my teachers assigned any work for me to complete during the summer. I did not know anything about them on the first day or what the courses would be like. It was frightening and looking back I wish at... | Evidence | Adequate |
790bf7ab5e13 | F4A3B4B14952 | When I was younger the idea of summer was much different then it is today, just like the school years have changed. When I was younger my parents were involved in most aspects of my life and knew what summer work I had to do. I was taught that in order to succeed, I would have to do the work and do it well. I would nev... | Evidence | Adequate |
43f76cf3ce76 | F4A3B4B14952 | Honestly I do not trust myself enough to create a well thought out project for myself without cutting myself some slack. I would much rather have a teacher give me the assignment and complete it to the best of my abilities. | Claim | Effective |
33c95e408437 | F4A3B4B14952 | In conclusion, I believe that all the assignments that I am given during the summer months are well done and should be designed by the teachers instead of the students doing it for themselves. In the past the summer assignments that I have been given have not been too difficult and I never really minded doing them. The... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
dc03d28ef055 | F4A576AD01D8 | Despite how many set backs people have had with trying to land rovers and other machines on Venus, people are still trying to find a way to gain further knowledge about the planet. With the temperature being set at 800 degrees Fahrenheit, that could be enough alone for human do die. That would be like going into a fire... | Lead | Adequate |
596f9e1e44c0 | F4A576AD01D8 | The author of this article is obviously drawn to exploring Venus to get a better understanding of it. | Claim | Adequate |
04aaae1c02ab | F4A576AD01D8 | In the last paragraph it is said that "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." | Evidence | Adequate |
e2120d4a15fb | F4A576AD01D8 | The authoer is just saying that no matter how big the danger is, even if it is risky, we shouldn't be set back by it. | Position | Adequate |
388cf42d343a | F4A576AD01D8 | Sometimes, somethings are better left unexplored because it could have risks that people don't even know of. | Claim | Ineffective |
f36171acf588 | F4A576AD01D8 | If they are somehow able to make a machine that is able to withstand the harsh climate of Venus, they will want to send a person up there one day won't they? But I human most likely will never be able to withstand those conditions even if they were in a machine that protected them. Heat causes things to expand which ca... | Evidence | Adequate |
214d039a122f | F4A576AD01D8 | In conclusion, despite how many times people have tried to land rovers and machines on Venus, they will one day find a way to perfect those machines and may be able to send a person up there to gather further research on the planet. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
d93285f4e0b5 | F4DB6C7A51BA | In this article it talks about the face of Mon Lisa. Many of people have wondered and thought what Mona was feeling or was trying to express. Will now they came out with a new software were it recgonizes and tell the experssions of ones face. | Lead | Adequate |
22bcbe2578e3 | F4DB6C7A51BA | To me I don't like the idea of the software, it can be subatage to someones art. | Position | Adequate |
e27dc6e2898a | F4DB6C7A51BA | In parapgraph one in the beginning of the sentnce it gives you bunch of facial expressions that Mona is giving. The software indicates several expressions that she is making. In paragraph 3 says when the process begins, the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. They recognize the the muscles and what th... | Evidence | Ineffective |
7b0570d511ef | F4DB6C7A51BA | To me this software of a cheat cheat to art | Claim | Adequate |
ca07d3521adc | F4DB6C7A51BA | Art is meant to be looked at, to be studied and to make you more intrested in the art. You can have a millions of questions about an art piece the cool thing about the Mona Lisa is that it is a very famous painting, why because it was unique, people wondering for many years to see if she is smiling or no or what she's ... | Evidence | Adequate |
4c01e248ddc7 | F4DB6C7A51BA | A software shouldn't be able to tell what they're expressing it just makes you not observe the photo anymore as much, because now that they may know what she's expressing she won't have the much popular attention to it like it did before. | Claim | Adequate |
0475904ddff3 | F4DB6C7A51BA | Says in paragraph 6,"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows how much this computer can do." Really it even says imagine a computer knowing when your happy or sad, to me thats just invasion to a person, you can always tell you how you are feeling and many just decide... | Evidence | Ineffective |
1232109ab356 | F4DB6C7A51BA | Many people have their way of expressing themselves and sometimes you can be curious of how they're feeling. Which is good because the more you look at something you study it and you put piece and piece together until you solve it. Look at pragraph 7, it gives you something to do while your looking in the mirror, to ma... | Evidence | Ineffective |
c2628db7c728 | F4DB6C7A51BA | Just as long as you know what your feeling, and thats what I think the artist that did this painting was trying to achieve. | Claim | Ineffective |
a91a58d0dae0 | F4DB6C7A51BA | This is my opinion on the software. I think that it is useless. It really is something that is happening now in this world is that technology is taking over us and what we do. We barley use our brains to study or read over something because we use the internet for that. We don't play outside or even try to look at new ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
31cad2310398 | F50D3D001E67 | Students should or should or should not do at least one extracrrcular activity | Lead | Ineffective |
92ee039ebf96 | F50D3D001E67 | Students should, | Position | Adequate |
ea76fd33828d | F50D3D001E67 | sports help with physical strength | Claim | Adequate |
b150664f3fd6 | F50D3D001E67 | help you stay in shape | Claim | Adequate |
6c36f2381e06 | F50D3D001E67 | If you are doing community services your helping do better thing for your communtiy before its too late. | Claim | Adequate |
8dfd3d8dbda0 | F50D3D001E67 | in most sports you have to run such as volleyball, football, track, basketball, etc. With running you have to gain muscule so when you run your legs wont be tired or worn out. Also its not just running and using your legs if you are a lineman in football you have to use most of your uper body to push people away. | Evidence | Adequate |
a349a14a8639 | F50D3D001E67 | with all running and and jummping and moving around, you become more in shape and cordinated. The population is getting more unfit as we know it. People are going on there phones and that's all they do they dont excursice. Some children are overweight, by doing a sport they could because more in shape. | Evidence | Adequate |
84ce089030a9 | F50D3D001E67 | Were they embetter the earth, by cleaning up beaches, getting trash out of the ocean, and by coming up with ways to make the world a better place for humans and animals. Earth we know is over pollutated with evrbody's trash students should try to help the earth get better.
| Evidence | Adequate |
09dcf8f62834 | F50D3D001E67 | With the sports also helps kids get more in shape and gets ther pysical stregth up. Also as we know our population is getting more obeis with sports we can provent that.
Altogether with everything thats going on we should help the earth get back into its healthy state by do community services too. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1093ab269a91 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | I think yes, it can help students with their feeing | Position | Adequate |
7bc4468ddcdf | F55EF5BB5CB9 | becuase my first reason is becuase emotions matter alot. | Claim | Adequate |
e00252ec87b1 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | My seconed reason is becuase reason a article can halp people feel better if they pay good attions to what the story says. | Claim | Ineffective |
969e2611a8c9 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | my last reason is becuase showing feelings they the way we look.
| Claim | Ineffective |
13c7cac20df2 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | My first reason it can help students becuase by the way people read the story and look at the foto there is a lot of ways to look and read it. | Claim | Ineffective |
28f933294e90 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | If there is a person who really is feeling sad they can read a story that has a lil og exititing moments on the story and with happy pictues that shows the feelings of the story. It can help alot beuase by looking at the pictuce and really paying attintion to the story it can grab the readers attintion. Once th author ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
2b34421586df | F55EF5BB5CB9 | My seconed reason by reading the article it can change feelings. | Claim | Ineffective |
24d873c6855a | F55EF5BB5CB9 | It can make then get into the feeling they want to get into eather it can be mad, sad, happy scared, exited, ect. There is a lot of feeling people can get into if they into what the author want to tell them by reading. | Evidence | Ineffective |
f5f219f23072 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | My last reason is by the way they look | Claim | Ineffective |
9485e7e503b5 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | Not alot of the people show they way they feel. If people dont show how they feel it becuase most of the idea is becuase hey are holding there feelings down deep in them. If they not showing it most people say they dont show it because they dont want to make people worry becuase they are in a bad mood and just dont wan... | Evidence | Ineffective |
a6145bc88db3 | F55EF5BB5CB9 | Inconcluion that is my three reasons why it think it can help people when they are in the mood they dont want to be in. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
ce5efab5c397 | F5D927221FB8 | The point of these sources are to tell you to stop pollution and stop driving cars so much. | Position | Adequate |
0acb2f865428 | F5D927221FB8 | Us as humans drive around town or wherever so much to the point where there is so much gas in the air to kill someone. In the first source it says, " When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way." Some people don't have enough to afford a car or even pay the monthly payments on them a couple months af... | Evidence | Adequate |
eaae4fdea812 | F5D927221FB8 | There is a small amount of people who would not like to own cars only because they didn't have the money for one or just didn't want to deal with the hassal of payments each month. | Claim | Adequate |
39d7c1c7ec30 | F5D927221FB8 | In source two it says, "On Monday motorists with even-numbered liscense plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31)." It's kinda sad when you have to tell people to stay home and not drive their cars. Maybe some people need to leave their house a certain day and that isn't the day tha... | Evidence | Adequate |
0244c3968907 | F5D927221FB8 | The world/ it's people shouldn't have to be controled by the government or whatever to be told when they can leave their house in a car, it's so stupid. | Claim | Adequate |
75c0f2399747 | F5D927221FB8 | I understand that they want to find a way to stop having so much smog in the area. But I mean, what's the point? You can't catch everyone that is out on a certain day that isn't in the right vehicle or has the right numbers on their lisence plate. I think it's so ridicoulus that people should even have to assign days w... | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
7172a3b717c4 | F5EFE72B5E63 | This history is about Venus | Lead | Ineffective |
e39cdb2cba9a | F5EFE72B5E63 | NASA is trying to go to the planet call Venus because is the planet that look just like Earth. | Position | Ineffective |
c59437b639f4 | F5EFE72B5E63 | They want to go because they want to show how Venus look like. So people can go live in Venus, but NASA don't want to send people because is so danger.
In the solar system Venus is the second plane from the sun.
Venus is call the "Evening Star" because it is the brightest point of light in the night sky.
It is the t... | Evidence | Ineffective |
ee31705fdd2e | F5EFE72B5E63 | In conclution that is a good idea because human need more space to live and some people like the idea to explor what is outside the Earth.
"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation". | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
9b6f081e522b | F634BC92DC39 | Phone use and driving are two activities that should never be intertwined. Using a phone while driving is not acceptable. The level of distraction that comes from using a phone takes a driver's attention away from the road. A driver's attention should be focused on the roadway, not a phone screen. Cell phone use while ... | Lead | Effective |
23a1d6b25100 | F634BC92DC39 | Cell phone use while driving needs to be banned nationwide. It will not cease to occur unless people see and hear the damage it can inflict. | Position | Effective |
9139e07ef4ba | F634BC92DC39 | When someone is using their phone while operating a motor vehicle, it takes a significant amount of attention away from the road, and onto the phone instead. | Claim | Effective |
cd5fe2726353 | F634BC92DC39 | Looking down at a cell phone for 5 sec while going just 55 mph means that you have just crossed the length of an entire football field without looking up at the road. The AAA Foundation For Traffic Safety ranked using a hands-free mobile device as a level 2 distraction and texting while operating a vehicle as a level 3... | Evidence | Effective |
314ef2fa8cff | F634BC92DC39 | Using a phone while driving, be it calling, texting, or anything else, can lead to horrible and heartbreaking injuries and even deaths. | Claim | Effective |
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