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db0df62a2c15 | ACE3E472041C | I think kids do home classes and it does benefits them and yes they learn from it . | Position | Adequate |
0c62387d9d29 | ACE3E472041C | Parents are famous and they cant send their kids to a regular school, | Claim | Ineffective |
dc6de0e33465 | ACE3E472041C | kids might be in danger and they can attend school because of tha | Claim | Adequate |
5b1f6760f243 | ACE3E472041C | it might be because they have any medical condition. | Claim | Adequate |
45950fb68733 | ACE3E472041C | First reason why students take classes from home is probably because their parents are famous people and they know that, if they send their kid to any school, people will be chasing them,asking for pictures all the time or may be telling them bad stuff. | Claim | Ineffective |
45b21e18e88e | ACE3E472041C | Parents know that in that situation kids are going to be frustrated about it, sad, angry and defently they will not be able to concentrated at school. It will be hard for them to be free and enjoy school. For example on of my friends he is very famous in my country and also in here wherever he goes people is always cha... | Evidence | Adequate |
d5fdb8858602 | ACE3E472041C | Second reason it could be because the life of any kid can be in danger and the parent of the kid and also any school will know it. | Claim | Adequate |
671edd73a7fa | ACE3E472041C | They know that if any kid, that is been treated lets said by any organization, attends to school people will try to harm him or it can become a bigger problem. Because the school will defently knows that if they received that kid at school they will be putting the life of many other kids at school in risk and they will... | Evidence | Adequate |
a25693c5e751 | ACE3E472041C | Last reason why students get benefits from taking classes at home is probably because they have any medical condition and it's hard for them to attend any school. | Claim | Adequate |
1e4b48b5d9f6 | ACE3E472041C | They will feel shame,afraid,scared and they will be thinking that everyone at school is going to make fun of He/She, that they will bully Him/Her and of course as I have said before parents will never for any reason are going to let their kids to be unhappy to feel bad to feel frustrated and feel that no body love them... | Evidence | Adequate |
d1c761ae6327 | ACE3E472041C | in conclusion,parents who made the decision to let their kids stay at home and take classes from home they make one of the biggest and hardest decisions in life. Because they know that kids will be safe nobody will hurt them, be hunting them , no body will hurt them, tell them mean stuff. They will not feel embarrassed... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cc01307709b6 | AD005493F9BF | To the state and the state's country, the election of our president must be seen carefully and wisely. As the citizens of the state, people must realize that choosing someone to take control of orders and regulations and the way the country evolves, is a process that needs to be thought of and taken fairly. The preside... | Lead | Effective |
9b5781be5689 | AD005493F9BF | It must be changed to meet the needs of giving a responisble president, a more trustworthy election and the votes cast must be directly towards him rather than the electors. In other words, the Electoral College must be changed to become more fair towards the citizens. | Position | Effective |
0c845b40e210 | AD005493F9BF | The United States Of America, is of course a massive country with large variations of different needs. All over, there are people who vary in opinions, beliefs and lifestyle which can cause the Election of the president to become an important subject matter. To meet the needs of so many people, instead the Electoral co... | Evidence | Adequate |
12e74d6b4290 | AD005493F9BF | Things like creating rules to attend the needs of all citizens and create equality amongst them, to keeping harm from out of reach, the Electoral College should become much more wiser in choosing the right ruler to take control. | Claim | Adequate |
b1e293664d07 | AD005493F9BF | In the article
What Is The Electoral College by the office of the Federal Register, it states that the election process is held every four years along with the after election prepared by the govenor titled "Certificate Of Ascertainment" which sums the canadidates and electors as well as the winning canadidate. It is o... | Evidence | Effective |
2bc6c1704369 | AD005493F9BF | There is very little equality when it comes to elections especially, when the states are giving an unreliable system to choose for them. | Claim | Effective |
292b6db04f40 | AD005493F9BF | States that are considered "Toss Ups" are selfishly awarded the system named "Winner-Takes-All" due to how they apparently pay closer attention to the campaign. In the article
What Is The Electotal College by the office of the Federal Register, the method is first introduced in paragraph 7. Stating that the purpose of... | Evidence | Effective |
c946804bfc84 | AD005493F9BF | There are many more other factors in which the Electorial College must be changed to meet the appropriate dilemas and needs of the voters and their intentions towards the campaign. | Claim | Effective |
9fc5e37dcbe1 | AD005493F9BF | On the other hand, it has not changed at all only to stay unfair towards the entire country and possibly cause a catasrophe. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
f75cccebe930 | AD005493F9BF | Let us say, there have been many incidents where elections have been on the edge of a major dilema. Wondering why a straight up orderly process can go to the point of a catasrophe, can all be easily explained as unfair.
All can be simplified in the article
Why Even The Best-Laid Defesnes of the system are wrong by Br... | Evidence | Effective |
fdcca4acf665 | AD005493F9BF | This sums up that the process is unfair to many of the states voters and must be changed to become more open and share the equality with those who are losing thier trust. | Rebuttal | Effective |
cb7fe6607fbd | AD005493F9BF | In conclusion, the Electorial College mut be changed to meet the need of those who agree that is it irresponisble when givng a repsonisble president, a more trustworhty election and an unfair process. Yet this can all be fixed simply by changing the ways it is run and to give more freedom for the people | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
9f76d590ee25 | AD1914496798 | The elector college is a controversial subject today in america, based on many questionable policies that leave many americans confused and cheated. | Lead | Effective |
46d03ccd8c3d | AD1914496798 | This is why I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. | Position | Effective |
9df75cb9913e | AD1914496798 | With the electoral college way of electing a president voters arent actually voting for the president, they are voting for a slate of electors who will then vote for the candidate. There are so many things that can go wrong when electing like this | Claim | Effective |
abd4c6fc0163 | AD1914496798 | Voters can't neccessarily control who their electors vote for, you may vote for a certain slate of electors but they may still go ahead and vote for someone else. Sometimes voters get confused and may vote for a slate of electors who are for the wrong candidate. For example, in 1960 segragationists in the Louisiana Leg... | Evidence | Effective |
962bb29c09dd | AD1914496798 | In an election their really is a process of voting and voting again. Instead of couting the number of people who want a certain president and so on. We are viewed as a state and some states having more say than other even if the votes are in the same margin. This is the reason why some states are focused on more by the... | Evidence | Effective |
2916b2eaac60 | AD1914496798 | Why not just cut out all of the extra processes and focuses on the decision of the people directly | Claim | Adequate |
e4f3ea210ba6 | AD1914496798 | Although there are many arguments against the electoral college there still are people who argue in favor of it. There is a certainty of outcome with this process. There will less likely be a run off election with this process | Counterclaim | Effective |
83d7ef9191e6 | AD1914496798 | All in all the major arguments agaisnt this process outweigh the pros of it, which are few. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
97935cb3f636 | AD1914496798 | With all of the reasons to go against this process I think it is necessary to change the election to popular vote for the president. We need to give the voice directly back to the people of our country so we know that we really do choose our fate in these elections. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4382006d8a07 | AD3C6F02167E | I believe that community service is extremely important and that all students should be required to perform some community service. | Position | Effective |
17c53c628843 | AD3C6F02167E | Community service helps out the community a lot, so the students will be making their homes a better place to live and learn. | Claim | Effective |
c2c47a305f4c | AD3C6F02167E | Another thing that community service does is that it helps build character in a child, because they are constantly helping people out and doing the right thing. | Claim | Adequate |
4b6d09fdcbff | AD3C6F02167E | Next, community service will help with your education, because kids who do community service are more likely to get into a good college. | Claim | Effective |
8f652034110f | AD3C6F02167E | First of all, community service makes the place you live a better place, by creating a better environment to work, learn and live, as well as make everyone happier. The community benefits a lot from kids or adults actively participating in community service. | Claim | Effective |
bc294c605af8 | AD3C6F02167E | Research shows, that the cleaner and more beautiful the town or city is, the happier the people are. Who is happy when they are living in a trash can? Community service helps clean up the town, by simple things like picking up trash, or larger projects like planting trees. Education also benefits from community service... | Evidence | Effective |
8eb80a887440 | AD3C6F02167E | Secondly, students and adults who perform community service build a lot of character. | Claim | Adequate |
6c005b340a2c | AD3C6F02167E | This is because they are constantly helping people out, and doing the right thing. This way they will feel good about themselves, and will be a better person overall. I am a boy scout, and i always participate in activities such as, help cleaning up a state park, and help cleaning up the Connecticut River. After i do t... | Evidence | Effective |
7e19a722b7fe | AD3C6F02167E | Another reason that community service is very important, is because many ivy league colleges, and other colleges in general, are always looking for people who regularly participate in community service and also volunteer. | Claim | Effective |
454895f65f4c | AD3C6F02167E | I personally knew a person, who didn't have all A's in school, and didn't get a great score on the SAT's, but she was an volunteer at a hospital and part of a organization that helps homeless people. She got accepted into Harvard University because she did all that community service. Community service helps out a lot i... | Evidence | Effective |
92f786cb9a7f | AD3C6F02167E | In conclusion, I believe that community service helps out a lot with our growth and development, either by education, or building character. Both of those are super important in our life. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e50f4d72fac3 | AD3C6F02167E | Studies show that people who do community service are 3 times more likely to succeed than people who don't. And the community benefits from these acts too, because you are making your town a happier and better place to live. | Evidence | Adequate |
43117f97ea58 | ADB68BCD2874 | This face is not because of aliens it was just a landform. | Position | Adequate |
743de40e08fc | ADB68BCD2874 | "Nevertheless on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Sureyor drew close enough for a second look. "We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to center the Face in the field of view," said Garvin. "Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution." Each p... | Evidence | Ineffective |
83645376434f | ADB68BCD2874 | "as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than pixel size," | Evidence | Adequate |
2212fad86a41 | ADB68BCD2874 | if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptain-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!" | Claim | Adequate |
66fe178688a1 | ADB68BCD2874 | What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. | Claim | Adequate |
ca31293ee103 | ADB68BCD2874 | "It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho," says Garvin | Evidence | Adequate |
d628a6adda3a | ADB68BCD2874 | "That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." | Evidence | Adequate |
1a2ee1d7ba5f | ADB68BCD2874 | These are all reasons that this is no because of aliens but it is a landform. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
02e5b0f37696 | ADD7CE85B73C | Students should be able to have cell phones at school | Position | Adequate |
a1f93176b400 | ADD7CE85B73C | what harm is it doing to the child if they text during a passing period or during lunch? | Claim | Adequate |
13fe87a6a8d9 | ADD7CE85B73C | Its not hurting anybody as long as the phone is turned off and doesn't cause a distraction during class time then why would it be a problem? | Evidence | Adequate |
2f0463961ae2 | ADD7CE85B73C | I know that some teenagers will still try to text during class but the number of people who do will go down | Claim | Adequate |
e44f0f48f7f5 | ADD7CE85B73C | The school should treat students and teachers fairly. If there trying to be fair then the teachers shouldn't be aloud to use there cell phones during class either. | Evidence | Ineffective |
991c8096c7e9 | ADD7CE85B73C | Cell phones aren't even that bad in the first place. | Claim | Adequate |
fdbc4d8561a0 | ADD7CE85B73C | Yes, most of Americans use them to much, and they are a huge distraction most of the time | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d80d452cc950 | ADD7CE85B73C | but they still haven't done any harm to the American society. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
476304ae8a01 | ADD7CE85B73C | Actually cell phones have actually brought a lot of people closer together. They also serve the purpose to help people out. | Evidence | Adequate |
ae9a8e36784c | ADD7CE85B73C | I understand there's not that great of a purpose to having a cell phone at school, but it would make the student body a whole lot happier than it is today. | Claim | Adequate |
9e81422c3671 | ADD7CE85B73C | Just the short time we have during class would just be so much better for everybody in the entire school. I still don't even understand why we aren't aloud to use them during class. Why do the teachers care, there getting paid? If a student doesn't want to listen then they shouldn't be forced too. Kids go to school to ... | Evidence | Adequate |
28f036fc6597 | ADD7CE85B73C | Letting kids use cell phones during class would be a huge deal to everybody at SCHOOL_NAME it will make the three years we have at this school go by as fast as possiable. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
dbed156df07f | ADDA081EE98A | I would like to in favor of keeping the Electoral College for many purposes | Position | Adequate |
1a456088d4ec | ADDA081EE98A | The Electoral College know the process of becoming a president and some of the people voting dont really know how the process works. | Claim | Adequate |
35fdc69f6577 | ADDA081EE98A | The eletors are the one to elect the president and not the people,people's vote will not have any affect of the election of the president. | Claim | Ineffective |
f11b2e020800 | ADDA081EE98A | what if we the people just vote and we dont know if our vote counts. The excerpt states"when you vote for a presidential candiate you're actually voting for a slate of electors". This indicates that we think our vote if for the election of the president but its not. Therefore,we should pay attention of who we elect and... | Evidence | Adequate |
51de3fd69091 | ADDA081EE98A | "270 electoral votes is requierd to elect the president",this indicates that we dont really have control of picking the president. "it's possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote", but does'nt often happen. | Evidence | Ineffective |
474749be4296 | ADDA081EE98A | It all comes down to one point,we should let the Electoral College choose who they want to elect the president. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0279ba5d32a0 | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Yes i think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
6a3f9a62f4cd | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | in the way that they can be more ready to start the class, and they will focus. | Evidence | Ineffective |
001d99b4f21b | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | The reason why i though that is because sometimes at school the students they have shame to show to other the best of them, | Claim | Ineffective |
8bbdd59974fe | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | " the intelligent student told me that i can't do anything or i can't speak very well English" still if we want make our goals we can do it. Without go to the school.
-For example:
If a student is on his house alone with no one told him what or how he need to do the correct things, but he has a lot of question about ... | Evidence | Adequate |
19f4ec788307 | ADFE2CDB6FF1 |
Also if i was in my home find new imformation and i work to much during the day then i would be hungry then i can go to the kitchen for cook something very fast and go back to my room continue with my homework. And if i have a question i will ask for help to some teacher by texting. | Claim | Ineffective |
080bfca90a5d | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Eventually, attend classes at home with no pressure could made different and confortable for the students who are shy or maybe need a teacher only for one student for explain the class that the student is taking. | Claim | Adequate |
1f646887a73f | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Below for those students that don't like to wake up too early in the morningt they have the choose to study more later since at night without necesary be ready for school. | Claim | Ineffective |
493e27a0b73b | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Many cases when girls are pregnant they can still going at school, but it was diffult for them had to continue study and also after that they giving birth too. | Claim | Adequate |
07747812be5b | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | i know that because a friend told me and another girls too, she told us the process that she has to pass during her pregnancy and after when she has her baby with her I don't know how hard it is, but i can imagine in this position. So what my friend do? during her pregnancy she still coming to the school i saw her many... | Evidence | Adequate |
207b5f73bb0f | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | I think the students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home that's great idea. but there are many problems; | Counterclaim | Adequate |
a1622e278a08 | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | what happen if the student do not have money to pay the online classes? either their families do not have the recourses for help them another reason that's why we have to work and make money for us and we missing many days in the school for stay at home because we want sleep more hours or we coming to the school and we... | Evidence | Adequate |
0e2b23791b2e | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Attend classes from home by way online help this type of case the students go to work few hours and then coming home for the rest of the day to study or another option is one day work and the next day don't and stay at home taking the online classes | Rebuttal | Adequate |
48173a428b6f | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | in summary "NEVER GIVE UP" when we want something that we can't get it in nowhere only in our effort we can make that possible. Also with some help ask when we do not understand something and put the best of us all including: try to solve the problems, research good imformation, and the most importat thing that we have... | Evidence | Adequate |
1ac5424c12fd | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | During school year is possible learning for online or video conferencing,in the videos explain clearly what or how to solve math ejercise or another kind of materials. | Claim | Adequate |
3d32e360e6d2 | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | Examples of benefit to attend classes at home are:
- Spend more time in the computer
- More focus in the homework
- Use the iphone for imformation whenever we want
- Study all the day
- No talk with your friends during your class
- Finish more fast with no distraction | Evidence | Adequate |
3bb1952fbda9 | ADFE2CDB6FF1 | All that things are benfit if the students being to attend classes in their home in the winter they don't have to worry about how cold is outside in the morning or what clothes is appropriate for school, and have to coming in the school in a good mood for study and see somebody that we do not want to see and prevent be... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5bca4b9d2c20 | AE3C9DE4FA94 | I'm in favor of kipping the Electoral college | Position | Adequate |
8d8e4f99f5a7 | AE3C9DE4FA94 | keep out problems and its fare to evry one. | Claim | Adequate |
43b70e8ab521 | AE3C9DE4FA94 | In the text state that ''The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the president.'' that shows that the popular vote is the one who wins. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9c6191ac4a29 | AE3C9DE4FA94 | ''The college avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recives a majority of the votes cast;'' | Claim | Adequate |
32ebefc2324f | AE3C9DE4FA94 | is tre because without the electoral college it will have a lot of candidates that they will not get a majority of vote nether one. | Evidence | Ineffective |
29d724099354 | AE3C9DE4FA94 | by the way, a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote is possible and it hat happend before | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c197e862ed9f | AE3C9DE4FA94 | but it's less likely than a dispute over the populat vote. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
b592daf021be | AE3C9DE4FA94 | Voters in presidential elections are people who wants to express a political preference eather than people who thinks that a single vote may decide an elections | Evidence | Ineffective |
436a45ee8e0f | AE3CD422AAF4 | The President should be chosen by popular vote. | Position | Adequate |
fcd48b7e2724 | AE3CD422AAF4 | By letting the people choose who sould be their President they are able to get what they want, not what Congress thinks they want. | Claim | Adequate |
3650285cf0eb | AE3CD422AAF4 | The Electoral College system is old news and now that we are in 2015 there are all sorts of new things going on. The Electoral College system is just too much and seems like a hassle that can be made easier by having qualified citizens vote for their President. | Claim | Ineffective |
79c754ed89ea | AE3CD422AAF4 | Under The Electoral College system voters are voting for electors who choose the President for them. | Evidence | Adequate |
44e9781cfde0 | AE3CD422AAF4 | I feel that the people should be able to put in their votes and the man (or woman) who has the majority of the votes should be the President. I am aware that choosing the President is a big deal but by doing this, things are much easier and more efficent. | Claim | Adequate |
49327dff2e2e | AE3CD422AAF4 | What I am trying to say is that the Electoral College system is way too flawed and complicated to be good for us. I feel as though the Electoral College system is unfair, and irrational. | Claim | Adequate |
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