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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Vauban, Germany, the motorless city. Vauban is an upscale community, yet they have one difference than any other, they have given up cars. When you visit this motorless city, you don't see driveways, garages or any other home accessory that invloves parking, or storing your car. When you think of a city like this, you think that there is no way a town can survive without automobile transportation, well, you thought wrong. Unlike most towns, Vauban has located all the necessary stores and shops on a main street, where it is easily found and just a walk away.\n\nVauban is also a happier place, as suggested by Heidrun Walter, mother of two and media trainer. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" When she walks the street she sees young children playing and chatting and people riding their bicycles, but best of all, she doesn't hear that awful noise of a running motor.\n\nAutomobiles are a detriment to the ecosystem. \"Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gass emissions from tailpipes...\" Did you know that passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. And, up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\n\nBack to Vauban, the home of 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile. This town may be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban lifestyle. \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation for America. This group promotes new communities that are less dependent on cars.\n\nIn the United States, \"car-reduced\" communities are being promotedby thr Enviornmental Protection Agency, and legislators are beginning to act, if cautiously. \"Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new 6-year federal transportation bill to be approved this year,\" Mr. Goldberg has said.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther concludes story statement shows hibiscus symbolizes overcoming obstacles It symbolizes says geese return budding I take test again Ho This shows even though failed time hibiscus gets bigger retake test shows overcoming obstacles Also I believe symbolizes overcoming obstacles gives strength old country This shows symbolizes overcoming obstacles help overcome test It giving strength comforting From tell author ends story statement", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the secound planet from the sun and yet it is also the hottest. It is also the closest planet the resembile Earth. It orbits the sun just like Earth and it is decently close to Earth. Mars is also kind of like Earth but not like Venus is. I think that Venus is very worthly to pursuit but with all the dangers I don't think we should visit, but I do think that we should keep studing.\n\nAccording to the text \"Whille Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very callenging place to examine more closely.\" This shows that Venus is safe to study here from earth and that there is no dangeres with looking at it with a microscope. This shows that we can study Venus and still be safe here on Earth.\n\nI also think that we shouldn't have anyone on a ship go to Venus just yet until we study it more and figure out how to land the ship. According to the text \" Eah previous mission was unmmanned, and for good reason, since no pacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe the issue expalins why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" This shows that is is not safe to send people on spacecrafts to Venus woth out them dying in a few hours. I odnt think that someones life is worth a few hours on anouther plant, all though it would be very benfishal. If they owuld take samples of things that we need to look at and some how get it back to us so we can study and get to kow the planet more, but i don't think that it is safe or smart to send people there.\n\nLast but not leasat Venus has the hottest surface temperature than any other planet. According to the text \" These conditions are far more exterme than anyhting humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hotterst surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" This shows that Venus is not safe and that it is too dangrous to survive. It is too hot and it is too dangrous for any human being.\n\nWith all of this information we should jsust hang back and study, maybe even try to make a ship that can with stand the pressure or even a suit that can survive with all the heat. We just need to study maybe run some trials on gettings ships there but not with people on them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, Senator\n\nI think we should not keep the electoral college because we should have the right to choose who runs everything. We the people want to be free and vote on for what we want. Its not fair because the winner take all system in each state candidates they think they cant win.\n\nAlso if their is a tie the election will be thrown to the house of representitives. The senate would choose the vice president because each state gets one vote. That means the one representative from Wyoming representing 500,000 voters has as much say as 55 representatives from California with 35 million voters.\n\nIn the electoral college system voters vote for slate of electors not for presidents. They elect the president. It depends on the state who picks the electors. Voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could lose the presidency.\n\nBest argument against the electoral college is what people call the disaser factor. 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The system allowed much worse consider legislatures picking electors and those electors could lways defy will of the people.\n\nThe people should be the ones picking the people they want in charge of the government. Thats why there should be no electoral college and let us vote and choose who we want.\n\nSincerly, The People", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this passage it gives good examples to why the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom would be valuable by giving examples. The author talks about how it would work, what it would do if the students did not understand, and what else the system can do.\n\nWith the Facial Action Coding System it can tell peoples emotions just by seeing their faces. The system's \"Process begins when the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like humans muscles.\"\n\nThen Dr Huang sends it to pshchologists, then they classify what they are feelig.\n\nSo the system has to see your face to get a reading then it reads it and shows the emotions that person is feeling. \"Eckman has classified six baic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated each ith characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" Based on the person's face the system comes up with a reading by using you\n\nmuscles in your face.\n\nIf this Coding System was in schools it could tell a students emotion if they were using computers to learning something. And if the system was in the all computers at children's schools it could help them and it would be very valuable. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" If a student does not understand what they are trying to learn on the computer they will probably have weird facical expressions, and the computers would sences that can it would change it to a different way to learn their subject. \"Then it (the system) could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" If the system and the computer could do this together there would be less confusion in the classroom or at home.\n\nThe system can help in the classroom if people need it in the classroom but other people might need it for when they are trying to learn something through a video, when the kids play on their video games or it could help doctors during surgery. \"The same techonolgy can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery.\" Not only could it help doctors but most a days people don't know how to show their emotions because they do not talk face to face but this techonolgy could help. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, to.\" It would help people show their emotions while they were texting.\n\nIf the techonolgh called Facial Action Coding System were in classrooms full of students it would be super valuable. Not only can it read your facial expressions, but it can give you a new way to look at a lesson if it sees that you look confused. All it does is sees a face and based on their muscles at that moment reads to see their emotions. And it could help doctors out of the classroom. The Facial Action Coding System should be in the classrooms of today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The globalised world these days makes it simpler than ever before for people to relocate and start building a life in a new country. As everyone comes from their own cultural background, a question arises of whether or not people should be expected to follow the customs of their host country. I completely agree with the view that while learning about the local customs may require some time and effort, it is valuable and will aid the integration of the newcomers into society.In many cultures following the local customs means showing respect, which is an important moral value in nearly every culture. The opposite is also true: disregarding traditions is often seen as a sign of disrespect. In order to establish good neighbourly relationships and feel welcome in the new place, it is important to demonstrate the effort to become part of the community. By expressing an interest in learning traditions, new arrivals gain a chance to interact with their neighbours and colleagues, get to know them and build some connections in the new country.Another positive aspect is the enhanced feeling of belonging that people get from participating in activities others around them are doing. When a national festival is in full swing, standing on the sidelines might make people feel excluded and perhaps even homesick, whereas joining others opens up opportunities to attend special events together, go to parties, meet new people and feel part of the celebrations. In Australia, for example, Easter is a very special time of the year and some of the traditional activities include Easter egg decoration and gifting, and baking hot cross buns; sharing your designs and recipes with others is an excellent conversation starter.In conclusion, learning the customs and traditions of one’s new country doesn’t mean a loss of their own culture. On the contrary, it is an opportunity to gain a deeper understanding of cultural connections and should be embraced as a positive experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People say that the face figure on mars is made by aliens. That hypothosis is not true because aliens do not excist. This figure on mars can be made by a human or it can be made by natural causes on the planet. as you can see in the pictures the face in 1976 it is full and the one in the second picture is half way gone the third picture it is almost completetly gone. if this figure is made by humans it did not last very long. If this figure is mad eby natural causes on the planet it has faded away over the years. Most people around the world think this figure is made by aliens, This figure could have been made by the astronauts on the ships and they just made a figure and took a picture of it and made people think that it was made by aliens. This figure could have been made not even on the planet they could have took some clay or some other material and made a rock like face and said that they found it on the planet. This figure is probably a fake because how often do you go to a planet and just find a random rock that looks like a face. If this figure is real then they need to take another picture and put it up. If they do take another picture it has to have the shuttle to where you can see it so the people around the world can say it is in space. If there really is a face figure on that planet that might be a sign of life on the planet. Maybe the astronauts have found another planet with life it may not be human it may be im not saying that aliens are real but if there is life on that planet this whole world will be wanting to go up there and see for themselves. If there is life on that planet then people will pay big money to go up,also if theres life maybe we will go back up there and their might be another face figure. If you look at the first picturre and the second picture you can see that the eyes are in differnet spots so thses pictures might actually be fake.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limit car usage! While you may think having a car is a necessity, others completely disagree. According to the passage -''In\n\nGerman, life goes on without cars'', street parking, driveways, and home garages are forbidden in a new district on the outskirts of\n\nFrieburg. 70% Vauban families dont own cars and 57% sold there cars just to move. Many find it better this way. For example,Heidren Walter stated- '' When I had a car, I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.''\n\nIn Paris, France, there is more smog then any other European capital. According to the passage- ''Paris bans driving due to smog'', drivers were fined and motorists with even numbered license plates were forced to leave there cars at home. Diesal fuel is to blame for warmer layers of air traping car emissians. Delivery companies complained. However, exceptions were made for plug-in car, hybrids, and cars that can hold three or more people. When the smog cleared,the ruling French party rescinded the ban for odd numbered plates. According to the passage-''car- free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota''- this is the third year cars have been banned, this sets a goal to promote alternative transportation and to decrease smog. This program influenced two other\n\nColombian cities to join and participate in trying to end all smog. The reduce of cars impacted Colombia in a positive way.\n\nTherefore, causing the air to blossom and the air to blossom and new construction to occur. In the U.S.A, President Obama's goal is to curb the U.S green house gas emissions. According to the passage-'' The end of car culture'', the U.S has peaked its driving miles in 2005 and dropped there after. A recent study found that driving by young people decreased 23% between 2001 and 2009. However the Mobile congress in Barcelona, Spain, laid out a business plan inwhich bicycles, private cars, and public transportation traffic would save time, conserve resources and save energy.\n\nConcluding to all my information, many countries and states are still trying to reduce car usage. Therefore, reducing smog and pollution . This will not only improve the air , it also solves our time, resource, and safety issues. This will help to improve society aswell. Therefore, we can live without cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As student public school libraries I many students access censored extent With library censored I feel public library Why censorship conflict need discussion every book found shelf part history every author good enough get published able book shelf While school libraries already censored age group I feel public libraries censored plain reason gaurdian also library control find age appropriate If disliking book problem put back Find something common towards interest Some things considered inappropriate many things time person limits While someone dislike teen magazine effects youth another find inspiring If every person found way rate things according taste would nothing left shelves Katherine Paterson expressed quote When enter public library divided sections according interest age author ect When enter school library done according fiction nonfiction author Censorship amoung public libraries needed Adults students childeren go public library So case would censor library goes ages I feel yes school library contain content school library But public library public Hints name In conclusion even censorship done public libraries libraries would used less already Some content public libraries ca nt found school libraries also adults would nt able find content needed interests jobs even schooling So fact things seem innappropriate certain age groups help someone completely different age group", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author thinks that if NASA could get close enough to the planet to study it they will have gained insight on the planet and will lead to human curiosoty into many equally intimidating endeavors. The author believes it will be valueble even though there are challenges it presents which include high temperatures, the pressure, and a thick atmosphere.\n\nA challenge of studying venus presents include high temperatures of 800 degrees. There is also a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide which also contains clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. A big problem that NASA faces with landing on Venus is the pressure that the planet has. The pressure there is 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth.\n\nIf NASA found a way to solve those problems than they could learn valuable information about Venus.\n\nThe author believes that Venus has a lot of information that NASA could still learn about the planet. Information such as; what causes the erptions of volcanoes or why is it so Earth like? The author states that scientists are fasinated by the fact that its the closest planet to be like Earth in our solor system. The author also states that, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various life forms, just like earth.\" If this is true NASA could believe that there might be other planets that are just like ours.\n\nThe author supports the idea of Venus being worth studying even if there are risks. THe author believes that if NASA could get close enought to the planet they coul see if there were truely other life forms other than earths. The author supports the idea of it being valuble by saying, \"Not only would we gain insight of mars but also lead human curiosity into many equally intimidating endeavors. \"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is NO way the \"Face on Mars\"\n\nwas created by alieans. There is definte information that proves anyone wrong that thinks is was created by aliens. First it was proven is was just shadows. Second in 2001 we took a picture in extremely high reslution that shows that is just a mound. Finally if it were created by aliens we would have a man on Mars by now.\n\nThe article states in the end of paragraph 2 that is it fake. it says, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah\" This is coming from the leading scientists in the field of space, and that is a small field in witch only a select few get to be in. Just that alone is engouh to prove any conspiracy theory wrong!\n\nIn 2001 the Mars Global Surveyor took a picture in its highest resolution, each pixel was only 1.56 meters wide as opposed to the 43 meters of the Viking photos. what the picture actually showed was a Martian mesa, a landform similer to the ones found in the American southwest. The face as it turns out is only just a mesa, and that is nothing special.\n\nFinally if it were created by aliens don't you think we would be there. The funding that would poor in would be more than enough to put a man or woman on mars. Since it is just a rock formation not created by aliens we have ablsoutely no motive to go there, none at all.\n\nThere is NO way the \"Face on Mars\"\n\nwas created by alieans. First it was proven is was just shadows. Second in 2001 we took a picture in extremely high reslution that shows that is just a mound. Finally if it were created by aliens we would have a man on Mars by now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author thinks that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. And he has many reasons for thinking and suggesting it and here the way that he says that it would be worthy of pursuit is by putting facts that would be helpful in the article.\n\nSome of the advantages that the article would have is that it is very well informed and it have a lot of evidence that we could use to say that it is a study that is worthy of pursuit. In the articleit says´Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionaly the closest in distance to´.This is saying that venus is closer to us and we have more adantage of knowing more about it because more people can go on it since it is closer. It also says that ´Numerous factors contribute to venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study despite its proximity to us. which also means that it could also be difficult to pursuit worthy on venus because it could be difficult to study.\n\nThats is why he says we should pursuit worthy to venus but there are also some disadantages I think that either way there are more facts about pursuing it but not all might think the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that it is better to live with climate change than to fight aginst it. I also believe that it is necessary to adapt to the whims of nature.\n\nClimate change has been a concern of many countries for many years. Especially negative factors such as global warming and greenhouse effect in the next few years are worrying the people of the world and they are developing various measures to prevent it. Among others, we can take the Paris Convention adopted in 2015. About 200 countries are its members.\n\nOthers people think that it is better to find ways to adapt to climate change than to prevent it. Because the climate and nature have been changing for centuries, and people, animals and plants have been adapting to it. For example, as a result of global warming, there is a risk of flooding some countries. Therefore, countries should evacuate the population to higher areas and find ways to grow plants that grow in a watery environment. It is also possible to build a floating town on the water.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that it is more important to find ways to adapt to climate change than to spend a lot of money and time on preventing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I was in an argument with someone to convince someone that hte Face is just a natural landform\n\nI would make sure they knew if was an natural landform because I know that it's not an actural face from an alien.\n\nThe article exsplains all the details that tell you that it's not really an alien's face and that they think it's a natural landform. They give you a lot of details but you don't know if all of tem are true or not. I would go by what they say becauss their scientist and they know more then some people do.\n\nThe article tell you that their must have been a degree of suprise amoung mission controllers back at the Jet propulsion Lab when the face appered on their monitors. The sensatiobn was short lived, the scientist figured out that it was another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia.\n\nA few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a huge rock imformation whitch resembles a human head. Formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. Although few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia becamw a priority for NASA when Mars global surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in september.\n\nWhen the arument would be over I would asked them what they thought about it being a natural landform and why or why not they thing. After reading all the imformation I still believe it is a natural landform because aliens face arent that small and they wouldnt be that blurry like the first three pictures showed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an increasing concern about the effects of globalization. Some believe that globalization surely benefits most countries in different aspects such as economics, education and politics; others, however, argue that it has negative consequences on national identities. In my view, globalization not only boosts economic development but generally has positive effects on national identities.\nFirst, it is obvious that business contacts around the world contribute a lot to effective development. Entrepreneurs and business owners, from foreign countries, invest a substantial amount of money as well as technology into infrastructure and create many job opportunities for local residents, which consequently improve people's living standards. That is the reason why many countries make laws and policies to encourage international business and investment.\nMoreover, with multicultural communication, national identities are more expressed to the outside world and get respected and appreciated by people from different cultures and social background. For example, water puppet has been introduced and been known in many countries recently. Therefore, Vietnamese identity has been enhanced and has impressed many people through this kind of performance which uniquely belongs to Vietnam.\nThose who harbor the view that international collaboration between countries may threaten national identities may argue that youngsters start following western country trends without understanding their pros and cons. Millennials nowadays eat hamburgers, drink coffee, work in skyscrapers and even speak English often, fueling a lifestyle similar to that in New York. But I think that this just mirrors modern lifestyle and does not mean that we are losing our cultural heritage. To protect our national identities does mean that every Vietnamese people should drink tea every day and use chopsticks at every meal.\nIn sum, globalization do play an important role in a country's development. Meanwhile, a more prosperous economy facilitates the preservation and recognition of national cultures and identities worldwide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Historical buildings are always considered prestigious for most generations. A bunch of people shows their interest in the old buildings to find something exciting about, which they are staying, in several territories. In this essay, I will share the possible reasons and the way of finding such traces, and how they can do it.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the causes of such findings of the ancient property. Firstly, their focus of interest is to know more about the facilities of the specific residence which were availed by the past people. Moreover, they have the excitement to know the actual information related to amenities that property had given before so that they can have the same benefits. For instance, their agenda is to get similar comfort in their present time. Secondly, most people have the habit of collecting accurate information for the material used at the time of construction. Hence, they are willing to gather messages about the quality of construction items used.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, they are possible ways of executing the research about ancient properties. First and Foremost, the search should be in the direction for those humans who belongs to that particular period. Besides, they can provide numerous valuable data about the particular residence. For instance, neighbours always have this sort of news about the next-door family to pass on. Another way is, the original paper of land can give much info to their grandchildren. Therefore, by such documents, they acquire distinguish ideas relates to old structures.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, availabilities on the individual home might drag their interest of them to explore the past, and the research can be executed to get in contact with the right channels for such time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I going tell time I patient My cousin house needed help math homework Because one else home I help We sat couch I helped The reason I patient didnt know So I sit teuch explain I got answer And I mention three pages It almost two hours done And time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Google Cars: For Better or Worst?\n\nThe Google cars have started revolutionizing the way people drive in America. The development of these cars have been proven quite sastifying to the manufactuers who constructed the car, and the consumers who plan on buying them. However, everyone is not on the same page, and disagree about allowing these cars to be created. These Google Cars are beneficial to humanity because it comes from a reliable company, the advanced saftey features, it eases driving for those with disabilities.\n\nGoogle, as we all know, is one of the largets search engines in the world. It is used for research, and finding about general information. They make a lot of money just their uses and the number of people who use it. Now, they wish to invest that money into building cars that drive themselves and protect the people. We should just, at least, give them a chance.\n\nAccording to the portion of the article labled \"Sensnig the World\", the Google car have numerous advanced saftey features. In paragraph four, it says that Google modified the Prius with positon-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, four automotive radar senors, a GPS, and an inertial motion sensor. This makes the car more safer for the driver; it could detectout-of-control skids or rollovers. The information from the sensors could make the car apply the brakes, thus preventing an accident.\n\nPoeple with disability claims are probably the ones who can benifit from this the most. A deaf person won't be able to hear the warnig alarm that is set in the car. However, they can see the flashing lights on the windshield.\n\nThe same thing goes for a blind person but in the opposite way; he or she might not be able to see the incoming danger, but they do know where the brakes are. A blind person can be able to drive again with the car protecting him or her evry way it can.\n\nThe Google car shows great promise in the future. It has many quality features to keep one from injuring himself. People say that the car will have dilemas, but you won't know until you try, right? If Google wants to try and make a car that could benefit and change the way we drive them, I say we should let them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article I think that using computers to read students facial expressions is a great idea for students in a classroom. It could solve alot of problem that need to be adressed.\n\nIn chapter six it states Imagine a computers that know when you are sad or happy.\n\nThat right there is something that could help teachers out becuase it could bring up a problem in the classroom they might not see right awayor to help them.\n\nThe computer can also detect if a student is getting bored or confused, that is another thing that could help the staff go see what the problem is.\n\nThis type of technology could help so many problems going on during school hours, like helping kids if they dont get a subject or dont understand how to do a assignment.\n\nThis could also raise the understanding of facial expressions.\n\nIn chapter nine in claims that moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also helps produces them.\n\nThis ends my claim and this is a very productive way to help schools out and other place to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this recent years , most couples decide on the appropriate time for them to procreate. While people are advocating for having a child at an older age, in this, essay the benefits and demerits will be discussed.\r\n\r\nPresently in this metropolitan century ,most couples tend to build themselves well before procreating and there can be two reasons behind it. First, couples want to focus and maintain a good professional paying job in other to have financial stability and provide a better and happy living for their child this includes proper education , training and good healthcare as the case may be. Secondly in the US for instance, a recent research carried out on the IT couples between the age of 35-40 years shows that procreating at this point gives them the privilege to share their childhood memories with their child while growing up. \r\n\r\nOn the contrary, some couples find it quite interesting raising kids at a younger age because of some underlying health conditions which can affect their reproductive system or organs . Also , having a child at a younger age will give them the opportunity to interact and play with them because at some point in time they might not have much strength to do so. Again, most kids might end up not living with them at an older age .\r\n\r\nIn summary, providing a good and healthy life for your child is paramount. therefore, couples should be able to have a better and more stable finance for their child , this will also prevent loss of hurdles that might arise in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think driverless cars should be a \"thing of the future\". Many things could go wrong if you let technology take over your driving. Drivers and passengers could get injured, the technology could malfunction, and the cars are not completely driverless. The car would not be completely safe for the drivers or anyone else in the car.\n\nFirst, people in the car could be seriously injured. If there is no way of knowing\n\nwho's responsibilty it is that someone is injured there could be many problems. Someone could be injured in the car because they don't have as much control over the car as a regular car would. A person who is hurt in this car could end up with a lot of problems. People in the driverless car could be injured.\n\nSecond, the car could malfunction. Malfunctions of the car could lead to many problms.The driver could be driving down the road and something happens with the technolgoy and the driver loses control of the car. If the car is about to hit something and it doesnt let the driver know it needs to take over, the car could crash. The driverless car could malfunction and cause wrecks or injuries.\n\nThird, the car is not completely driverless. The driver still has to control the car if needed. The driver may not be paying attention when they need to take over. This could cause the driver to not be fully ready to stop the car. They may not stop fast enough and crash into another car or object. Not being a completely driverless could be a big issue for not only the owner, but the manufacturers as well.\n\nDriverless cars should not be used in the future. They could cause injuries, the car could malfunction, and the car is not completely driverless. It may not be completely safe for the driver or the passengers in the car. Many problems can occur from using the driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir Narciso appreciates parents done So better life also appereciates turned simple house home thinks wat courageous Marciso thanks parents For Sacrifice life Cuba To make life better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think alot books good read cause tell wat u didnt know thierfore u might pick book u like read andyou like doesnt meaning reading alot books read type character might talk another thing thats opposite charcter talking magazines show sometimes wat persons life style like books people read action felling pick read book always good pick reasonable book someone read books thats positive would mean something people read book read think best book one tells life need know suceed life run book true get learn sometimes read write essay paper magazine movie book shows alot action wat like people migh think boring read unaction book get book action might exsite regular book books pictures words take book shelf wat need know cause action books might help time action fun books read good wat another book taking place stor", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remeber through my childhood my mother would always tell me not to be lazy. i think we all grow up with our parent reminding us we have to be independent because when your an adult you have to do thing's for yourself without the help of others. Now think, if you grow up learning about this independence your going to have to have. What does it say to future generations to have such a simple task of driving removed from something they have to learn to be responsible for? Simply learning how to get yourself from point A to point B is being replaced with driveless cars. I am not for the development of driveless cars because they will make this generation and future generations lazier and hopelessly dependent on technology when we can easily figure it out on our own.\n\nIn the article it says that Sergey Brin \"believes such cars would fundamentally change the world\" . Its clear this guy is using his head to develop this product to put us all in driverless car .But developing this product would encourage us more than anything NOT to use our own head. In this century we have technology already being something that distracts us in our cars. Things like cellphones and tablets distracting us from the road cause accidents every year. Although in the article it says \"the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\". If a human already living in a technology based world is sitting in a driverless car you can imagine they'll find other ways to occupy their time while the car does all the work. Now if their is a time that a human needs to take over who says the person will actually notice ?They have all this extra time in the car you can imagine they'll be facebooking tweeting or instagraming .To distracted to pay attention...Thats the same problem that kills thousands every year. So what i this really solving?\n\nWe all look forward to the scary time we are hoping and praying to pass our driver's test. future generations will know nothing of this anxiety because of this driver less car being developed they're will virtually be no point of studying day and night for your driver test. Or working extremely hard to get your first car. you wont be driving it so whats the big deal? Teenages in future generations wont have a clue how to drive. A simple skill we all realize we will have to learn weather we are afraid to get behind the wheel or not will basically become a skill we dont need. to me driving is a privledge . But the privledge will dissapear and become pointless.\n\nFinally these cars will come at a price. In the articel it said to make smart roads was\"simply too expensive\". So how much do you think it would cost to replace billions of cars? These cars already need a boat load of sensors just to be able to park. something a human can do effortlessly by the way so i can only imagine why we would want to spend more money. I know i sure dont. and i sure others dont either when we can just drive oursleves instead of spending thousands of dollars.\n\nIn the end these drivles cars will make us lazy and clueless on something as simple as driving. i dont think that driverless cars are a good idea for anyone to pursue. Although it is tech savy it is not soething i would like to see change in favor of technologies progression. Driving is someting that has been around before me or anyone was born and it would be pointless to let a self driving car to do it for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show giving new home forget old one She shows isnt giving brings home flower plant That also shows forget old home Also says When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again That shows giving new home another shot isnt giving Another example says Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quiet repetition season upon season almost familiar now Here accepting changes giving new home another chance She giving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im against to what they are using to see kids if they are mad or sad about anything. That is not good to see what are kids emotional expressions the kids don't want any one to know why they are sad or mad about. Thats why Mona Lisa keeps a smile on her face because she doesn't want anyone to know she mad or sad about something that she doesn't want to tell anyone about what is happing. What if you are having a bad day at school or work or at home and you dont want anyone to know waht is happing so you keep a smile on your'e face. Its a computer software that can recognize emotions.\"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\". Imagine seeing your'e friend with a happy face but deep in side they are sad or mad about something that happend that day. Its valuable but at the same time no one wants anyone to know if they are having a bad day. What if someone used it on you too see if you were sad or mad or anything like that. You do not want anyone to know that you are having a bad day or anything that is happing in that day that you want no one to know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the era of the growing population and the need to improve the community, some people have an opinion that teenagers should work for society growth without being paid. This, in turn, would be advantageous for students as well as for society. I completely agree that the young generation should get involved in unpaid community work in their leisure time. This essay will elaborate on the benefits for youngsters being part of such activities.\r\n\r\nTeenagers would be benefitted in long run to work for community practices. Firstly, they will able to learn values to support the needy or poor. For illustration, being part of activities such as arranging food and shelter for rural area people, minors will understand the importance of helping others which in turn will help the community to grow. Thus, making improvement in society and individual growth.\r\n\r\nSecondly, using their leisure time for social tasks will keep the young ones occupied. This will break the chain of their sedentary lifestyle for which they are not getting paid. Indulging in social activities will keep them busy and away from crime or drug addiction. For instance, a survey held in India in regards to drug addiction, the majority involved were youngsters. Moreover, they spend a lot of money on buying drugs. For the betterment of self and future concerns, they should be part of unpaid public tasks.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, young people especially teens astray from their path at a tender age so to put their lives on track, they should voluntarily work for humanity regardless of earning money from it. I completely abide by people of the opinion that youth free time should be utilized in the improvement of society even if it is without pay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Poverty represents a worldwide crisis. It is the ugliest epidemic in a region, which could infect countries in the most debilitating ways. To tackle this issue, rich countries need to help those in need and give a hand when possible. I agree that there are several ways of aiding poor countries other than financial aid, like providing countries in need with engineers, workers, and soldiers who would build infrastructure. Building universities, hospitals, and roadways. By having a solid infrastructure, poor countries would be able to monetise their profits and build a stronger and more profitable economy which would help them in the long term. Once unprivilged countries find their niche, the major hurdle would be passed and would definitely pave the way for much brighter future. However, I do disagree that financial aid does not solve poverty, it does if used properly and efficiently. The most determining factor if financial aid would be the way to go, is by identifying what type of poor countries' representative are dealing with. Some countries will have a responsible leader and some will not, with that being said, implementing a strategy, to distinguish responsible leaders from others, would tailor the type of aid rich countries could use. An example, A clear report and constant observation would be applied to track the progress and how this type of aid is being monetized. In summary, types of aid varies from country to another, and tailoring the type of aid is of paramount importance to solve this problem that had huge toll on poor countries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new revolution of a new way for us to drive cars, which can be not at all. New technology has helped us to start creating a new way of driving, without actually driving. This would a driverless car where the car actually can drive for you. Of course you would still need to be some what incontrol for the safety for yourself and others. Many do not believe in this new \"driverless car\" for there could be dangers to people and cause more accidents. This is most likely going to cost a great deal of money for everyone to be in these new cars.\n\nI believe this could be a good idea for those who might have lost a leg or have some sort of impairment and would be a good experience for those to drive a car without actually driving it. These engineers are working on making these car safe so every day people can be driving them with no harm to others. So far in California, Nevada, Florida and the District of Columbia have let some of these cars go onto the streets for testing. Tesla has projected that the cars will be releases in 2016 and will be ninety percent autopilot. There will always a portion of the car for the person to drive to make sure no accidents will occur. These cars can be able to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but will notify when there is trouble ahead to make sure the human can take control again.\n\nThese cars will be of the future. This can revolutionize the world for possibly the better, and make the world more efficiant. These cars will not be fully\n\navaible for the world till the manufactures know they are safe for people and no one will be put into harms way with these cars. They have been testing them for some time now and has caused no accidents, already this will be a good sign for the next up coming years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI strongly suggest that you keep the Electoral college because of the different benefits it has to offer. It creates more of a certain outcome. Also, it is a way to avoid run-off elections. Even though there may be some negative outcomes to this way of voting, I feel that the advantages overlook them.\n\nThe Electoral college is a good method of our voting system in the United States because it helps to develop a more certain outcome. According to the passage titled\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College:Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner, it states that \"Because almost all states award electoral votes ona winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state.\" This tell that vote is plenty more certain using this method rather than to go by popular vote. With having a more percise and oranized plan of voting it garintees a more certain outcome and will prepare for problems that may occur such as ties in the election. The Electoral College is most definitley a an great voting method when used for certainty.\n\nAnother reason why The Electoral College is a great method of voting is because it is a way to avoid run-off elections. According to the same article titled\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College:Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner it tells that \"There is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which in variably produces a clear winner.\" An example of this stated in the article is \"Nixon in 19680and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College\". Avoiding these types of things is very important. If we didnt have this method we would still have to come up with some sort of method so that thing like run-offs don't happen. However, some people disagree with the electoral college because they feel that they aren't really voting for the candidate, it still needs to be used because to many thing can happen such as ties and run-offs that we would need to figure out in the long run.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is very important and needs to continue to be our voting method for the United States. Certainty of the votes outcome and avoiding run-off election are twp ways Electoral votes have helped us. Without this method we would have to be dealing with these issues in some other kind of way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports that going to Venus is a worthy pursuit by giving information as to why it is important. He describes the importance of it for humanity and the future for humanity. The author says the importance of going to Venus and the dangers that come with trying to get to it. Imagination is one thing the authors says to support the idea of going to Venus, as it is dangerous and even though it is dangerous people shouldnt let danger get in the way of their imagination and curiosity.\n\nThe author states many things that contribute to his idea of not being afraid of danger. In the text it says, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This states and supports the idea that the author has as to why people should travel to Venus. The author is saying to not let danger or doubt get in the way of imagination that we could accomplish\n\nimpossible tasks as getting to Venus.\n\nAnother reason the author explains is that information that could be gathered from Venus. It could give knowledge as to why it is the way it is or many other types of information. Much knowledge can be gathered from the planet. In the text it states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but talso because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This staes that it is important to gain insight on the planet and as a way to lead us to as equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nThe author states another reason as to why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers and the reason is that innovation in technology can be improved making technology that we dont have. Innovating technology can help in the future. The text states,\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" \"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" The text also states,\"Another project is looking back to an an old technology called mechanical technolgy.\" \"Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\"\n\nThis explains the reasoning for needing to go Venus. There can be innovation in technolgy that can be improved to make it better than before. To not let danger or doubt get in the way of challenges being accomplished to not let the danger in the impossible stop humanity from extending into more things. This is why the author supports the idea of traveling to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that the pressing issues of environment can be curbed by raising the price of automobiles and fuel. This essay agrees with this viewpoint as it can lead to less pollution and traffic on the roads. \r\n\r\nPrimarily, majority of the people are concerned about the heightened problem of environment, which has become so filthy due to manhandled practices. It is often seen that in every household people are having two or three cars, which not only lead to heavy traffic on roads but also put pressure on our surroundings as these motor vehicles emit poisonous gases. For example, in north America, on an average every young member of a family has a vehicle, which leads to increased level of carbon emission. Therefore, it has been decided by certain section of people to elevate the price of auto mobiles and petrol, to regulate the environmental conditions. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, the government could implement the theory of demand and supply inversely, by curbing the supply of vehicles and fuel, as the level of pollution has increased globally, which is responsible for global warming. Had the supply of these products controlled at an early stage, the demand would have been automatically reduced. This has become an alarming issue now, which needs to be regulated by the authorities. \r\n\r\nHowever, there are some people who are against this trend and do not want any increase in prices as they feel it would be an unnecessary financial burden on them. For instance, many people are already bearing the numerous monthly expenses and the rising prices will give an additional monetary load. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although, there are people who are against this idea of soaring prices, I agree that the authorities should elevate the prices to cut down the usage and demand, otherwise, the existence on the earth would be next to impossible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental pollution is a major threat that society is confronting now. Some are of the opinion that raising the price of fuel of cars and other vehicles will help. They believe that this move would prevent people from buying and using cars, which will minimize the hazardous effects on pollution. I think this idea is baseless. There are many other practical solutions to the problem. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain why this is not an effective move and outline the alternatives.\r\n\r\nPrimarily, increasing the cost of fuel has dangerous consequences. Transportation costs will increase, which means the prices of essential commodities will increase. The value of the rupee will start depreciating, which is of grave concern. There are several alternative measures that could be taken rather than increasing fuel costs. For instance, biodiesel, a renewable fuel made from vegetable oils and animal fats, could be advocated. Electric cars are another option. Fuel from hydrogen, natural gas, propane, or liquefied petroleum gas are also effective fuel alternatives. All these emit low levels of gases into the atmosphere.\r\n\r\nIncrease in fuel prices is a sign of a weak economy. Banks may increase lending rates. It is an indirect tax burden on the citizens of the country. It is an indirect hint of our situation to the global community, and we may be forced to yield to interests of superior powers. The cost of living will increase. As a result, businesses will cut down costs which will lead to an economic recession.\r\n\r\nEven though it is true that we have to reduce using cars that pollute the environment, resorting to alternative sources of energy is more of a win-win situation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, raising fuel costs will not solve environmental problems. Instead, awareness of alternate sources of petrol should be created, and people should be encouraged to use them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood many ways First mood happy immigrant Also sad Even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved another mood would brave For immigraters brave I would never want leave behind friends especially family Another mood greatful I always greatful parents love sacrifice In conclution many ways mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Prof. Thomas Huang, Prof. Nicu Sabe, and Dr. Paul Eckman have come up with a techonlogy that can know exaclty what and how many emotions a person has right now.\n\nThis technology is called the Facial Action Coding System, or FACS. Students would benefit from this technology because the FACS would know if they were bored or confused, modify the lesson like a real teacher, and help the student understand the lesson better and earn a good grade as a result.\n\nThe FACS would know if the student was bored or confused because it constructs a detailed 3D image of the face with all 44 major muscles.\n\nIt then compares the image to the image of a neutral face with no emotion and looks at certain muscles.\n\nThe computer looks at the \"zygomatic major,\" for example, to see if you are smiling genuinally becasue the corners of your mouth would be pulled back.\n\nIt would also look for your \"frontalis pars lateralis\" to tell if you are suprised by something because your eyebrows would be raised.\n\nThe FACS would also be able to measure exactly how many emotions you have because the technology \"weighs different units.\"\n\nIf a student was bored or confused the FACS would be able to modify the lesson; therefore, helping the student understand the lesson more.\n\nThe computer now would not know if the student was having trouble becasue it can not see what the student's face look like.\n\nBut with the help of the FACS, the computer knows what the student is feeliing and can change what the lesson is about to help the student.\n\nJust like a real teacher, the FACS would know what the student was thinking and be able to change how the lesson was worded to hopefully help the student understand what it was saying.\n\nThe Faical Action Coding System would be able to modify the lesson just like an experienced and effective teacher would.\n\nWith the Facial Action Coding System modifying the lesson, the student would earn a better grade as a result than if the lesson was not modified.\n\nThe student would most likely do better on both the homework and the test because the lesson was reworded in a much more impactful way than it was originally.\n\nIf the student does better on the homework and test, then the overall grade would increase, as well as the percentage of passing grades for the class.\n\nThe FACS would modify the lesson; thereby increasing the amount of passing students and helping the school earn a better grade from the Department of Education.\n\nThe FACS would be able to see if a student was confused or bored, and if he or she is bored or confused, modify the lesson accordingly; therefore, increasing the overall grade the student received.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be able to help the student if he or she was confused by rewording the lesson iin the way the student would understand better.\n\nThe FACS would be a great addition to a classroom because it would help the students understand what the lesson was saying.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The overall mood created author memoir happiness First Narciso s parents went struggle coming starting Narciso narrates My parents originally Cuba arrived United States His parents came Cuba United States happier future Narcisos family nice everyone everyone neighborhood nice He explains parents doings My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us Narciso s parents happy let anyone home Finally Narciso grateful towards parents Narciso explains I always grateful parents love sacrifice Narciso happy parents The mood memoir happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After cyclist spoke old timers hadnt left confines porches since Carter office confidence began ware He entered desert happy hopeful determined As water reservoir began disappear approached sight old shed canal couple water pump began feel touched He made attempt get water pumps hot tested like battery acid As rode confidence faded He travelled desert ridiculously large snake running low water Finally saw building distance ironically enlights abandoned juice factory sign featuring left sipping succulent icy liquid teased ruin began lose hope He didnt think would make destination anywhere else matter Although approaching old factory came across bait shop hope energy founded", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the prompt it talk about how Venus is just like the Earth and we might have been able to have life their beofre the Earth was discovered. The author talks about how Venus could have been a huge help is the past and that NASA should go and discover all of the abilities in can do that are just as equal to what Earth can do. The author suggests that we have some type of drone go there and find out what types of life it has or what it can hold. It is said that our curiosity will soon get the better of us and we will end up exploring it anyways.\n\nThe author supposts the idea of Venus being a place that we should explore by stating in the eight paragraph that we should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and inovation. The author also states the fact that we should strive to meet the challenge that Venus hold for us so that we are able to discover new things about our world in so many ways possible.\n\nIn conclusion i beleive that the author does beleive that we should explore the world and discover what new things we can do and how we should see what Venus and other planets can provide us with and how we can make new discoveries. Our solar system has so many different exciting things that we have not even discovered yet. We should be taking the chance that we have right now and explore what is out in the world and how it can help us with many issue we have already in the world today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates collection and treatment of rain water which is later used as driniking water in an Australian town.\nAs shown in diagram, the rain water is first collected with the help of drainage pipes which is connected to the roof of several house. The water collected through these pipes is later filtered using water filter and stored in the storage tank beneth house.\nThere is channel which connects storage and water treatment plant which is placed adjectant to the storage tank. Water flows to water treatment tank from the storage tank and is processed real time with the help of chemicals. The structure is mount on the top of the water treatment tank which dispose chemicals in the stored water which is later used as driniking water in the houses of australian town.\nTo conclude, rain water is collected utilized as drinking water but is filtered twice before that to remove impurities from it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a new and upcoming thing in our world today. Drivers having to constantly steer and brake is a thing of the past. Now, cars drive themselves and humans are no more required to be the drivers, but the passengers. But many people don't believe that this is the road we should go down. Could going completely driverless put humans in even more danger than we are today? After reading the article, development of driverless cars should be stopped because they cause more crashes, prove technology is unreliable, and show that who to put at blame is unknown and will cause problems.\n\nDevelopment of driverless cars need to be stopped. These cars not only seem to not need human drivers, but means that we're in trusting these cars with our lives. Today, car accidents are a variety of reckless driving, simple mistakes, etc. But what they have in common is they're all accidents that humans have committed. In the article, paragraph 7, it says humans will be notified by the car when a situation gets too complicated or diffcult for it to handle. But by the time the car notifies the passenger, won't it be too late for the human to react and take over? Driverless cars putting us humans in situations like this will only cause panic for us, when we aren't even suppose to be driving, but passengers,\n\nand cause even more crashes. Driverless cars don't need to be developed because they'll just put us in more danger than we're already in.\n\nTechnology is the main component these driverless cars utilize to actually be able to drive by themselves. In paragraph 5 it says, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on the individual wheels and reduce power from the engine...\" In our world today, technology and manufactured devices malfunction all the time. It's just what happens because humans don't know everything there is to know about everything. What if to say this happened to the sensors in the driverless cars. If the sensors just stop working, causing the car to stop, putting the passenger in a great amount of danger. Technology isn't reliable, so why should we have to rely on technology to drive our cars? It's just more danger being caused instead of being prevented if we develop these cars. We should rely on ourselves to drive our cars instead of technology because it can just malfunction at anytime, without a warning.\n\nDirectly in the article, in paragraph 9, it posed the question: \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" This is a very important question because it's basically asking who's taking the blame if someone is injured by these driverless cars? This could all be avoided if we stop the development of those cars. Forsay, if someone's injured, would the guilt lie on the passenger who's suppose to be watching the driverless car drive or the manufacturers who made the car in the first place? Chaos and problems will arise if this situation takes place. Both people should be at fault though because they're giving technology the wheel and the path to do what it want, even if it's programmed to do one thing. But like I said before, these accidents and questioning who's at fault can be avoided if we take away what causing this all: technology. Stopping production of these cars will take the blame away and make accidents more clearer as who's to blame.\n\nThe idea of having driverless cars in our world today isn't not going to go away anytime soon, but proving why it shouldn't be develop and not even being an idea anymore can keep them from being a thing in our world to come. Driverless cars not only take the control out of the driver, but take control of the fate of the passengers' lives too. Development of driverless cars should be stopped because they cause more accidents, prove technology is unreliable, and cause questions of who's at fault for crashes. Taking driverless cars out of our streets and sticking to man-driven cars will make the world a safer place not only now, but for our future too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that some people believe that cross-national cooperation is the only measure that can be tackled the majority of the emergent issues. While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that not all acute problems can be coped with international organizations.\n On the one hand, it is widely agreed that many issues have reached a global level and only through the cooperation of a wide range of countries can be addressed. Firstly, global warming is an increasing concern for human around the world. For example, the famous Kyoto Protocol is the result of international cooperation, which has been implemented for many years in an attempt to reduce the emission of greenhouse gas. Secondly, our world is facing lots of terrorism, there are many murders and bombing which need worldwide support and assistance. For instance, multi-national cooperation needs to tackled terrorist acts from the Islamic State (IS), which has taken the lives of many innocent people in the world.\n On the other hand, most alarming problems can solely be coped with the local authorities. First, education, health, and poverty can only be solved by their governments. In particular, the global support’s aid is temporary, therefore the governments have to implement the good policies to develop their countries, give poor people chances to improve their standard of living. Furthermore, corruption is the urgent issues that can only be dealing with the independent development and reform of individual countries. The international organization has no authority to inquiry a country’s government, which can only be prevented by the residents and officials.\n In conclusion, while the cross-national organization is an effective way in dealing with many of acute problems, it seems to me that there are also a large number of urgent issues that require the domestic resolution and action instead of global support.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the prompt, people believe that children should be encouraged to initiative work for the community in their free time as unpaid, which can be favorable for teenagers and society. From my perspective, I will agree with this statement by following two reasons that are given in below and support the thesis.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, the youngster should be involved in unpaid social work; this work will create positive attitudes towards society. During their spare time, they should utilize their time by supporting the community that can do anything, such as encouraging the child for their future goal and giving proper guidance according to their condition. For instance, in a country like INDIA, the population is in poverty and itinerates where they can't take an education from school; youngsters can contribute by giving tuition classes to poor kids who cannot afford the education in school.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, most youngsters have free time to play games and other bad habits. They can utilize time in a good way. They should give leisure time by participating in volunteer work such as blood donation camps, promoting education work, and other activities; they can gain knowledge from society and experience. This work would be helpful for the youngster for their future. \r\n\r\nTo summarize, unpaid community service will benefit young people not only for their experience, but also for their ability to participate equally to societal and communal improvement. As a result, I will support the community's belief that youngsters should be active in the organization and contribute for free.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what it is like in Venus and how we might be able to study more about it. Studying Venus closely is worth the risk for more information on Venus. With the information it could lead scientists into making better technology to explore mars or other planets. The exploration could also be our backup Earth if the current Earth in inhabitable. With all the risk it may not be possible to explore Venus but if you are determined to find the answers then it could be possible.\n\nThere would be all sorts of information if we studied Venus closely. There are a lot of problems but it is still possible. There are a lot of people that wants to know more about Venus. For example on paragraph 4 it states that, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This is stating that Astronomers know that one day Venus will change and humans will be soon able to land on it without much difficulties.\n\nThe information just from Venus could even help us explore other planets and solar systems far from our solar system. With the information we could possibly find another earth-like planet faster or easier. On paragraph 8 it states, \"...but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This quote is stating that our curiousty will soon take us over and eventually humans will do anything to findout more about Venus or anything in general. I believe that someday we will be able to find the truth about Venus and more information or data that can help us with exploring other planets.\n\nAll of us have thought of what will happen if the current Earth we live on is destroy or inhabitable. Well our 2 options are either Mars or Venus, if we knew more of the planet Venus and how it behaves. On paragraph 4 it says that, \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This is stating that Venus could return or we can make it return to how it was originally and possibly live on it. This is a good reason I think Venus will be able to accept humans and find more facts and informations.\n\nIn conclusion we have wondered how things are in Venus. We even wanted to know what would happen to humans if they went to Venus. There would be lots of information if we visited and came back perfectly. With all those information we got from visiting Venus it could help us with other difficulties from different planets. The Venus we know as of right now could be different as we learn more about it and find a way to change it closley to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes paragraph ending thats girl going following year going pass still mother helping garden Without friends let mom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Luke Bomberger and I want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. When you join you can help different countries and their people. And you can see marvolous sights such as, Europe, China, Italy, and Greece. Also, when going home you can play games like Table-tennis tournaments, boxing, and fencing.\n\nAnother reason you shouldjoin the Seagoing Cowboys are the animals. You can feed the animals, water them and, make sure they aren't hurt. You'd be helping people too, by bring people livestock and food to eat. And for all your hard work, on the return trip you can play games, read, or do some whittling. I know all of this because I'm part of the Seagoing Cowboys crew.\n\nIn conclusion, if you join, you help people, be with some animals, play some games, see Beautiful sights onboard, and you'd be helping the military. So, be part of the Seagoing Cowboys crew today!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming is that a good thing or a bad thing? Honestly there are good and bad things about driverless cars. Should we continue making the driverless cars are just stop? Honestly I would not driver a driverless car, let me explain to you why.\n\nJust think about in the world today most of the population is lazy. Making driverless cars is just making something else to be able to be lazy while doing it. Just think of how many people would fall sleep and stay asleep even with the car telling you and doing stuff to make you alert that you need to take over. This is just another excuss to let people be lazy. What wouold happen to driving and driving if the car can drive by its self and that person is not driving.\n\nLets not get ahead of ours selfs now but didnt they say that in almost all of the states its illegal to have a self driving car? What would happen if you were to go out of state and that is the only car that you have does it still make it illegal to drive it if you bought it in a different state? Just think of all the complications that come along with a self driving car. Most people think that there will be less car accidents. What if something were to go wrong and it malfunctioned and it drove into another car or just stopped for no reason right in the middle of the highway? That would cause a car accident plus they said that they need to do a lot more stuff before they say it is completly say but whos not to say something would not go wrong. No one can say that for sure.\n\nYes now i know everyone would love a self driving car but would you be okay with your kid drving a self driving car. I know that i would not be okay with it one single bit. I would not even drive one myself i would rather drive the car myself then a robot doing it for me. i would feel much safer that way and i can see what others are doing if one of there cars happened to malfunction. I wouldnt be the cool kid or anything but i would rather be safe then sorry.\n\nSo i told you about how i feel about self drving cars. you may not agree with me but that i fine everything is intidaled to there own opinion. You might agree with some of the stuff i said but hopefully if you are or were for this i hope that it has changed your mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter forms bond two people good laugh turn uncomfortable situation pleasant one A fantastic example power laughter would first time I met mother s boyfriend My father died I thirteen since I stubbornly resented new man mother attempted bring life This iron clad resolution ended two sisters sat dinner One mother announced invited new boyfriend meet children My sisters I forced scrub house top bottom order prepare guest mother cooked giant pan lasagna When house clean dinner cooked I dressed grievous occasion My obsessive compulsive mother made change clothes least thirty times deemed presentable enough meet man whose existence I beginning despise At precisely six thirty blue pulled driveway I shot mother steely eyed glare I opened door buffoon thus dreaded dinner began My determined hatred began soften soon I saw means expired tall tan years older mother judging wrinkle strewn skin silver streaked dark hair matching mustache He sort friendly pleasant appearance makes immediately likable My giddy mother sullen children sat eat cheerful stranger My younger sister warmed first She share love snakes lizards things I deem creepy crawly A common interest brought together I knew My older sister adored lively conversation football ensued sister discovered fans consequently formed bond team After winning siblings tried charm liking He attempted talk movies music sports animals even politics nut nothing said could melt icy disposition I determined hate start amount charisma would break persistent stubbornness Eventually gave focused entertaining people like Over dessert jumped standup comedy routine cleverly disguised story recent flight He went ridiculous security checks overly cheerful flight attendants really hate job corny safety videos I tears laughter eyes I remembered I made solemn vow loath I fought hard resume former demeanor stand chance sense humor The triumphant smile slick wink shot across table told Sure enough best friends night ended Eventually I conversed movies music found similar tastes common interests nothing friendship They simply fueled fire The power laughter brought us together like magnet washer Just shortest distance points straight line laughter straight line He mother still together ever since came lives laughter constant companion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly known that music has always played an important role in upbringing of children and a lot of parents wish their kids play a musical instrument. However, I disagree that this skill is essential to every pupil.\nFirst of all, not all people are born with a talent for music, which is essential if one wants to learn how to play it. Some people are natural musicians and succeed in this sphere with ease. On the other hand, there are children for whom learning to play is a hard work and, eventually, they might start hating music instead of enjoying it. Some people are bound to become excellent engineers or doctors and for them learning to read and play music is just a waste of time.\nAnother important factor is that all kids are different and for that reason each of them desires to have a different hobby. If all pupils spent time on music, those who are not interested in it would have less time on things that are really exciting for them. Undoubtedly, everybody has a right to spend their free time in the way they want.\nWhat is more, playing a musical instrument is not considered to be an essential skill for a successful career. More time should be devoted to more important subjects, such as Math, Science and Languages. These have more chance to be useful for people when they grow up and graduate from school.\nTo sum up, teaching all children to play an instrument wouldn't be a good idea. It should be taught only to those who really want it as not only would it ditract a child from subjects and hobbies which are more important in their opinion, but also it cannot be mastered by everybody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship around awhile lot people agree censorship lot things like telivision books magazines almost everything Some people going little bit far comes older teens There little kids nt things censored Like go see rated movie adult watch movie For little kids I think things censored young They dont need hearing bad language anything Parents also care child hears reads young Some parents nt even care see hear end getting trouble teachers say It seems like younger kids always learning bad language bad habits I think sad nt around They pick alot stuff young like role model I believe older teens like mature read book library might bad word Im sure hear time bus town They going hear anyways try stop going end hearing Books suppose help give real thing You ca nt throw books censor Everybody different opinion opinion When get certain age start mature realize bad things say I believe high school books magazines anything else nt censored", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To have enough to share; to know the joy of giving; to thrill with all the sweets of life - is living. Helping others is a very virtuous thing. Charities help in basically two ways. One is by offering support to people in their own country, and the second is by helping the needy irrespective of their country. In this ,essay I intend to delve into the benefits of both approaches.\r\n\r\nThere are many advantages to charities helping their own country‘s people. Firstly, these organisations remain directly in touch with the needy. They can see how the money or other other resources provided by them are being used. It has been well said that charity begins at home. What is more, domestic charities target problems specific to their home country, for instance Help Age India is an Indian charity providing help for the aged in India.\r\n\r\nThere are also many advantages if these organisations help the needy in any corner of the world. In such ,cases these organisations work on a larger platform and provide help for global issues. A larger platform is a must if one has a lot to offer in charity. Help activities can be better spread through a larger network. Help need not be always in the form of money. It can be in the form of services also. For example, these organisations can provide doctors and teachers who volunteer to provide medical aid and also teach in underdeveloped nations.\r\n\r\nHelp in any form is good. The condition of one‘s country could influence the way of helping. In a developed country, where even the poorest of the poor have the basic amenities of life, it would be better to help in any part of the world where people need help. But, in the case of a developing or underdeveloped ,country it would be better to help those around you.\r\n\r\nTo put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the purpose of charity organizations is to help people in need and it does not matter where this help goes. If people of the home country need help then it would certainly be advisable to help those around you first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, many countries use a huge amount of money on providing lessons related to pragmatic skills, such as video editing class and coding class, and the government insist that this will helpful for entire people. Personally, I strongly advocate this view. In this essay, I will discuss the reason why I think this trend would be helpful with some examples. \r\n\r\nPractical education should be more emphasized because whatever they learn through the practical way that knowledge will remain with them for a longer period. This ultimately increases the effectiveness of learning. For instance, When we are cramming a lesson for a test, our brain tends to remember it for a short while, which can be shorter than the duration of your test thus not serving the original purpose. While doing it practically, it can be in form of experiments, real-life projects, or educational trips, the knowledge and the whole learning experience stays in our mind for a long. So apart from bookish knowledge, practical education is very important for students. \r\n\r\nMoreover, practical education through vocational training boosts a student’s self-esteem, knowledge, and skills, and enhances their transition into working life. With the competition for jobs increasing, employers are now seeking to hire candidates who can demonstrate their skills rather than reeling off a list of theoretical qualifications. ‘Earn a university degree and get a job’, this formula has worked over many decades, but increasingly many fields today the formula is no longer working. For example, people who have maintained a good degree of computer literacy, especially coding a skill which cannot be obtained by conventional education, are very welcome in the job market. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is clear that the benefits of practical learning outweigh the disadvantages, by providing more employment to people and enhancing the effectiveness of learning. Thus, the government should support this learning system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Usally features setting major affect upon cyclist The features setting relates describes hassh eventually relief condition cyclist The setting relates person plays role cyclist observe One reason features setting affects cyclist shows various problems faced cyclist For example cool pines one sight I alone The way interepts clear meaning I cyclist needs help getting home eventually traveling needs water fill thirst Prior thisy features shows weakness cyclist For example believed last burst energy I consently maneuvered hill The features settings affect cyclist showing facing troubles thirst fear lead behind end These features settings develop clear understandmet cyclist expected", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some believe that humans should accept the climate change problem and should try to live with this situation, on the contrary, others think it would be better if we understand it and take action to prevent its impacts. While I accept finding a way to stay with it, I believe that it would be better if we can prevent it in advance by being aware of our lifestyles in order to provide a quality of life for us and the coming generations.\n\nFirst and foremost, climate change is the main problem that humans have faced recently for several decades and it does affect our life beings, while a growing number of research has confirmed that human activity is one of the main causes contributing to this change. Regarding the negative effects of this situation, it is essential for us to take action to avoid further devasting effects of climate change such as losing biodiversity and extinction of existed species. There are simple methods that we can apply to cope with this problem instead of neglecting it. For example, most countries nowadays try to promote clean energy by replacing fossil energy and also encourage domestic businesses to maintain their Carbon emission. These measures can help to secure the future for the younger generation to live in this world peacefully. Consequently, preventing climate change by changing our individual activities is a must and turns out to be the most effective way towards this significant situation.\n\nOn the other hand, some people tend to believe that humans should learn to live with climate change. This might be because they prefer to accept nature's outcomes as the best solution since it is hard to prevent the natural phenomenon. Thus, we should take risks on climate change and find other ways to survive. As a result, some technology has been invented to help humans in order to support the changing lifestyles. For instance, there are some innovations established to fight against those effects of climate change such as the system warning for tsunamis and earthquakes as well as drought climate detection for crop protection. With a help of advanced technology, we could possibly stabilize our long lives towards the severe weather condition.\n\nNonetheless, I partially disagree with the view that we should ignore those changes in weather, but instead, we should be aware of our lifestyles since it is one of the main causes driving an increase in temperature around the world. Trying to live with climate change should always be the value that we keep in mind, but it is not because we intend to do nothing to protect our nature, conversely, we as humans, need to awake and try to prevent it as much as we can to ensure a better place for the next generations.\n\nIn conclusion, I am convinced that climate change could be prevented by changing our lifestyles and raising awareness among us. However, in my opinion, it is a necessity to live and learn from the failures that we have made to nature in order to sustain this world effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is sometimes called the evening star because it is the most brightest points of light in the night sky. Humans have tryed for 3 decades to get a spacecraft to land on Venus but they never make it back. Venus is the most challenging planets for humans to study on. the clouds in Venus have corrosive sulfuric acid in them. in Venus the temperatures average to about 800 degrees fahrenheit and the Atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in our everyday lifes. Venus has rocky sediment parts and has mountains and valleys they sometimes recall the nearest option for planetary visits. the author supports the facts of how Venus was made and how it isnt easy getting to venus. he also mentions that people think its like a plantarim because Venus has valleys and rock sediments that feature a planetarim.\n\nthe evidence that supports my claims are that venus is a hard palnet to get to and that the pressure in venus, in way wrose there than here. It proves the reason why spacecrafts cant land there because of all the pressure and the way the clouds are made would make it hard because they are made of acid. nasa wants to send humans to study Venus.\n\nto conclude my essay is that it is challenging to get to a planet where it has so much value and because the insight of venus has gained us to human curiosity. Travels to any palnet should not haqve doubts or dangers bcause the edge of imagination is amazing. Even though Venus is hard to get to it is easy to never limit your dreams and hopes to get there one day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are lots of reasons to join the program. The opportunitys waiting for him were phanminal\n\nin so many ways. Luke knew if he went he would get to visit all these diffrent countries stated in paragraph 5. Luke did not want to pass up once in a life time opportunity says this in paragraph 1. In paragraph 3 with the order to got New Orleans they arrived on August 14.\n\nIN paragraph 3 they borded a new ship to go to to Greece, and they were also carring 335 horese to help at Greece.\n\nWhen Luke arrived at greece he was 18 years of age in paragraph 4. When they found out he was on the cattle boat they told him just to stay on it for his service in paragraph 4. Luke loved helping people and seing Europe and China he states this in paragrph 5.\n\nLuke got help people and visit people that he didn't know. He got to see all sorts of land marks in the story. When he fell down the latter and cracked a rib he was put out for a little while, but he did lern to hve fun on the ship.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The 21st century ushered in various forms of technological innovation, which has made life easier for people. Some persons believe this advanced gadgets contribute to the widening gap between the rich and the poor while others opined that the reverse is the case. this essay will look at both sides of the argument.\r\n\r\nAdvent of different types of technologies in various spheres of human lives has gone a long way in the betterment of living conditions for both the affluent and the less privileged. For instance, Computers do not discriminate between its users and does not classify individuals into social strata. It receives commands from both the wealthy and the poverty stricken as long as you know the right command to key in thus showing that the benefits of scientific innovations are available for use by both the rich and the poor.\r\n\r\nAlthough advanced equipment abound for utilization by the residents of every society, these technological inventions might not be readily accessible to certain members of the populace due to the expenses needed to procure them. For example, a man from the lower social class who cannot feed himself three times daily will not invest in a computerized wristwatch even when the advantages of the latter are numerous while a person at the top of the ladder of economic success can afford to have a garage full of sophisticated cars and motorcycles not minding the cost of buying them. A man walking down the street without a means of transportation and another who drove past in a Ferrari are definitely not on the same rung of the economic ladder. this is an aspect in which it can be noted that technology further widens the gap between the poor and the rich.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe the pros of technological advancement far outweighs the problems of widened space between the people of lesser and higher means. thus, I think its sustenance should be encouraged and the government can provide subsidies on the price of these advanced equipments making it easily accessible for the poor and this can help to close up this invisible gap between different social strata.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a class room situation it would be so amazing to be able to see how everyone is feeling and how they feel about a certain subject. So, As a example if you used this system in a math class you could give out equations and make the students solve them. Another way this could be used is if you put it in a musical classroom and let the students play music would the music have a effect on the students emotions? I think a amazing place to put this system would be in the cafe during lunch periods just to see what the effect of food does to the students. So, In a math situation where you give students equations to solve and see what their emotions are about the equations it would be great to know how well they feel about the problems.\n\nSo, If the students where sat down for a hour and a half with a math problem and where confused the system could alert the teacher and the teacher could provide extra help. While in a musical classroom we could see what the effects of a musical piece has on students to see if musical classes are worth keeping in school systems. In lunch periods where we get to talk to all our friends and relax seeing what kind of emotions that adds to a students day could be really helpful.\n\nI think overall adding a system like this into a classroom situation would be very helpful. As long as it was accurate it could help students out a lot more and provide better grades over all. Also, This system could be used a teachers asssistant and help the teacher know who needs help. These are some reasons I think adding a system like this into a school enviroment would be very helpful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus's Challenge\n\nShould we continue to try and explore the planet Venus or just give up?Venus tends to be a challenge for scientists to explore whats up there.Venus is known to be covered with a blanket of carbin dioxide and clouds of sulfuric acid.With all these chemicals and gases it makes inpossible to study.\n\nIf our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\n\nThere's been plenty of spacecraft sent to see Venus close up but they never return.Venus's surface can be 800 degrees Fahrenheit.The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nThis is why its more difficult to get a closer look.\n\nThe technology can withstand anything until faced with the subtances on Venus. (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.NASA’s possible solution to the conditions of Venus's surface would allow scientists to float above the fray.\n\nA blimp-like vehicle could hover 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.So that would help us trying to gett a closer look at Venus.\n\nAnother project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.These systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts.We can still continue to try and get a closer view of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "have you ever wondered whats lives beyond earth if we are able to explore beyond this planet we would know whats to come and could prepare for the moment this information gets broken to us.\n\nEven though it might be dangerous it might not be such a bad idea to study it more if we learn more about this planet and gather enough information we might be able to make or gather the equipment to even explore this planet and who know what we can find we might find new minerals,materials,or even a different species.\n\nIt might be a bad idea to explore these planets that we haven't explore yet, but there are probably stuff that are on these planets that can help worldwide problems like cure diseases make better material or better technology, they may be our key to advancing but if we don't try to advance we might be stuck here facing worlwide problems.\n\nLast,the author might not have a bad idea but it might be dangerous but its a risk we might have to take exploring these undiscovered planets that might be harmful but these planet might have the needs we are looking for to advance forward, to help us with our problems that are occuring today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir happy uplifting This memoir pick spirits person poverty like home live family The memoir shows even poor family friends happy In last sentence memoir says I never forget parents turned simple house home Which shows make best situation family friends Narciso family became successful good life positive attitude", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Narciso Rodriguez mood story willing greatful hopeful The faith struggle would lead children better times drove endure hard times quote represents family willing go good job like cuba segragtion make better life kids My parents always kept door open people considered family quote shows family greatful home still let people loved live My mother Father came country courage knowlage language culture That quote showed family hopeful enough even without knowing country still believed would bring better life In story Narciso Rodriguez family willing anything better life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, housing scarcity in metropolitan areas has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While some assert that only government has the power to solve this problem, I disagree with this view and I believe that this issue should also be addressed by the private sector.\n On the one hand, The authority’s role in balancing demand and supply in housing is indisputable.First, since the politics has the ultimate right in land management with the huge resources from the national budget from tax collection, the state can build social housing at low prices coupled with the financial package for people with low income to afford their apartments with mortgage loans. Consequently, these actions are able to reduce the lack of housing in the metropolis. Second, local authorities could encourage companies to move their business to rural areas so that suburban dwellers would no longer have to commute to city centre to work, which in turn reduces urban population density.\n On the other hand, private real estate corporations are also a necessary driving force behind the supply of more housing.First, in order to decline the lack of affordable housing, people may opt to live in other cities when the metropolis that they are working becomes crowded. For example, in recent years, a tremendously higher number of people from big cities such as Hanoi capital or Hochiminh city move to Danang city because they believe that they could get better chances to afford houses while still maintaining their living conditions. Second, if individuals only buy houses or lands for the purpose of living, asset bubbles would not happen and real estate companies would be forced to decrease property prices to survive in the market. This means that those cities would become more livable for everyone, not just the super-rich.\n In conclusion, the lack of housing is a complex problem which requires a combination of both the union and individuals provide for the diverse needs of people. By making these solutions, housing problems in major cities will reduce considerably.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When cyclist going trip riding desert All sees entire journey flat rode dirt He riding road hopelssly hoping form lif There one sight building car structure kind The author trying positive its hard scenery bringing hopes How would like riding bike water middle desert Now setting nice green forest wouldnt worried theres water shade He none desert This whole journey mental He always kept mind everything would ok That helped survive This ispiring story anyone needs push stey optionistic", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The date is May 24, 2001 and twenty-five years ago we found something that left both NASA and I speechless. They say that this face was created by Aliens however they are totally wrong. NASA says otherwise that it's just natural landform. The most logical reason is the natural landform, because we haven't had any evidence of aliens being real. Therefore I argue that its just a natural landform and not in any form made by an alien.\n\nFirst of all, we have no proof of aliens whatsoever. No one has proved that they exist, or that they are real. So why do they think its aliens, when it could've just been a natural landform. Things like these happen all the time, our Earth just happens to make things like these. People are actually beliveing that aliens are real, when really they don't have proof.\n\nSecond of all, how would the aliens know how to create it. If to say if they even are real. How would they create it, there aren't any tools on Mars. They wouldn't know what they were making, they would have no idea. The face just happened to be a natural landform, it was not created by aliens. Along with they have no proof \"aliens\" did this.\n\nThird of all, why would they even do this. If they did happen to do it , they didn't even mean too. Because they haven't seen a face so they wouldn't know how to make it. Aliens are not real, if they were it'd be everywhere all over the news. People would be so excited and although going to space is a risk many people would do it. Just to go see the \"aliens\", but no one has proved they are real. Therefore, NASA will stand correctly. The face is just a natural landform.\n\nIn conclusion, NASA is correct. There is no proof of aliens, and even if there was the slightest chance to having proof. Aliens wouldn't even have meant to do it. They have never seen a face, so why would they just do this. Natural landforms happen all the time. But this one just happened to be spotted by NASA. NASA always seems to be correct on their stats because they do so much research, unlike the other who just suggest that its an alien. I'd like to see you do as much research as NASA and give me proof of aliens, then we'll believe you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's world, Due to the Expansion of technology people can use it for their advantage, in that one the benefit is they can do work from home. Some people argue that this senior is only give advantages to the employees rather than employers. I completely disagree with the former statement because organization saves money by reducing workspace and they get more work from the employee.\r\n\r\nAs the reason state above, The first p employers get is they can reduce the price of construction of building or borrowing land for their workspace. Because nowadays value of the lands are extremely high, in addition creating new building is also costly. By expanding virtual work this charge could be reduced, moreover the maintenance, furniture, or other equipment cost decrease. For example, In India, there is a superb low rate in the company which provides remote work before pandemic situation, on the contrary after that, consequently, many companies have understood the importance and benefits of working remotely so they have started to promote work from home due to they found they can save money by reducing workplace maintenance costs by doing this. \r\n\r\nThe second Reason is workers don't need to do travelling from or to the office so they don't get stuck in any traffic problem that creates no reason for starting a job late. As per employees start their job on time they can complete the task on time without any excuss. This might help them to increase their efficiency related to work, even they don't waste much time in short-tea break or any pointless discussion with their colleagues. For instance, The company Tatvsoft which is an IT industry had surveyed work-time, and project completion period than they have compared it with the previous year timeline, and finally the result shows that not only worker's time log grown but also they are completing their project under the deadline, so they get enough time in test before delivering a product to the client. This helps a business to raise its profit market. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion ,It is not deniable that telecommuting has so many profits to employees as they can manage their work-life and social-life, At the same time it is also beneficial for employees as they save money as well as get efficient performance. If companies can create a balance between themselves and workers it will create profit for both of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author s conclusion story shows Saeng interpreted experience day She uses spring time setting show confidence reborn Seeing hibiscus bud spring giver newfound integrity go try driving test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time patient christmas came aroud At first wanted christmas get But mom told I wait come soon So I waited waited I really wanted wii consle sims So finally christmass came got wonna Usually patient reason I becaused mom told come soon I learned really want something really want something patient faster come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Offensive metaerial like definately removed shelf What child finds They think coolest thing ve every seen Children shouldnt able access kind material especially place like library Sombody could easily pick shelf knowing They start reading know re getting would fault picking shelves This kind material places welcome librarys public places like If material type book store meant people go yeah meant shelf children aer nt aloud building therefore see unless brought store household somthing Depending go meterial shelf say place public pick start reading watching blame researching book case material If people want get would risk There consumer takes shelf risk offended There blame place material", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way in which we dress has always been under a social relevance we cannot avoid. Since the antiquity clothes showed the difference social status of people and now they are a way in which person can show her personal attitudes. It is difficult to valuate the role of clothing in work places. On the one hand, there are organisations that strongly believe that the employees must dress in a peculiar, smart way. On the other hand, there are work places in which how people who worked there are dressed does not matter.\nAlthough I believe it is important to be dressed in the right way with respect with different social moments, I strongly insist that a person must not be judged because of her syle.\nOrganisations who require a particular dress code in the work place, are moved from the idea that the way in which you are dressed show your personality more than you can imagine. In particular, they believe that to ask people to be smartly dressed will present the organisation itself as serious and reliable. Moreover, in some work-place the heads insists in requiring a style that will not say a lot about the personal attitudes of the employees. Then, to have a particular skirt or to wear a fency pair of shoes will show up the particular attitudes of a person and this could be evaluated as a weakness by different managers. For instance, there are offices in which all the employees has to wear suit and tie if men and skirt and heel if they are women. However, sometimes this way of acting cause troubles and emotional deseases that can affect the employees who are not confidend in wearing clothes that respect that particular dress-code. One of the most famous case in Italy concered the flight company Alitalia who asked the woman empoyees to always wear the skirt. Just after several strikes they obtained the permit to wear also pants.\nOn the other hand, there are organisations in which how employees are dressed does not matter at all. They believe the skills possessed by the workers go beyond a particular pair of shoes. To take another example, the skills of an employee have nothing to do with the color of her hair. Places like this consider a point of streengh the emotional and personal attitudes of the workers as well as they strongly believe that to show personal attitudes in a work context can give a major value to the work itself. Then, they decide to leave free people to dress as they want without any restriction.\nIn conclusion, I believe that the tendency to rule the way in which people should be dressed in the work place must be operated with high awarness. the CEO of an agency can propose an office syle without compromise the particular attitudes and feelings of the employees.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several years ago, the National Aeronautics and Space Administration, or NASA was circling its Viking 1 spacecraft taking pictures to find a landing spot for its sister ship the Viking 2.\n\nThey noticed the likeness of a human head that was almost two miles from end to end.\n\nScientists were not concerned about the face on Mars, they asssumed that it was just another martian mesa, which were common around Cydonia. Cydonia is a region of Mars where the face was found and where the picture was taken.\n\nOnly a couple days after taking the picture, it was put out into the world for everyone to see.\n\nAfter the image of the \"Face on Mars\" went viral, many conspiracy theorists immeadiately reacted claiming that this was an obvious sign of life on Mars. The pictures that were released from the 1900s were not in the best quality, they were however still noted as a rock formation that resembles the face of a human head with shadows giving the illusion of the facial features such as the eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nThe Face was really sent out to attract the public eye towards Mars.\n\nWhich it did, very well in fact. It became a famous landmark used in magazines, T.V., books, etc.\n\nSkeptics say that the \"Face on Mars\" truly is an ancient civilization on Mars but NASA does not want the evidence to be publicized.\n\nNASA's defenders say that they wish there was an actual ancient civilization on Mars, but this is not it.\n\nUsing the advanced technology that NASA has in this day and age, they were able to discover that the face was nothing more than a mesa, or a natural landform.\n\nBecause of the high resolution images, scientists claim that even if there were objects such as pyramids, shelters, etc, they would be visible in the image.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been an enigmatic quandary as to whether education is the most effective way to renew criminals. However, considering that having a job is not a crucial factor when it comes to crime and education requires a lot of time, I state that legislating strong regulations would be prioritized over anything else.\r\n\r\n To begin with, the crimes of intelligent people lucidly demonstrate the matter pertaining to this theme. In our society, there are various types of crimes which was made by different types of people. It is common to witness financial fraud or adopting expedient made by ruling class people. Besides, those crimes committed by intelligent people are much more deteriorative to society than simple crimes. Such examples clearly prove that having a job or higher education does not guarantee to prevent or alleviate of crimes. That is why I think education for people in prison does not effectively shrink crimes.\r\n\r\n Furthermore, time-consuming clearly explains the issue at hand. The effectiveness of education requires a lot of time and patients to renew criminals. Besides, it also needs vast cost and effort to grab realistic performances. To save budgets and time, I believe that putting effort to build strong regulations and penalties is a much more powerful way than other methods. People will have an awareness and be careful of their behaviours if there are firm regulations. Consequently, people would not make vicious crimes and crime rates would be declined.\r\n\r\nAt first glance, it may seem like education is the best way to decrease crimes. However, the examples of fraud or expedient made by the upper class, and considering the time-consuming of education, I state that we should make much more powerful regulations than before to reduce vicious crimes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a new innovation to the realm of transportation that have proven their effectiveness by being fuel efficient, sensible, and protective of the driver and its surrounding environment. Although still in the progress of development, driverless cars seem to be a fundamental aspect to the future of our world.\n\nThis new innovation of driverless cars has been believed to much more fuel efficient than the cars today. In paragraph 1, it is stated that, \"...use half the fuel ot doay's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" In other ways, driverless cars are definitely beneficial to the environment, in the manner that it uses less fuel than cars and taxis today. The fuel used by cars today have been harmful to our ecosystem, which is why companies are developing other fuel efficient cars such as hybrids. The development of a car that is driverless is predicted to be much more fuel efficient. This is definitely an aspect that proves the positive effects of the creation of a driverless car.\n\nThe addition of several new sensors to protect the driver of the car have been extremely beneficial. These new sensors are the reasons why the development of a driverless car is possible. In paragraph 5, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine...\" demonstrating that the new sensors can perform activities that humans can, which is a positive aspect. It continues with, \"...allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This states that these new sensors have actually been proven to be more efficient than human drivers. As time passes, more improvements have been made to the sensors so that eventually, these manufacturers will reach their goal of a driverless car. Though relying on technological may not be a wise option, to rely on humans could possibly be worse in this case. Evidence from paragraph 5 such as, \"Further improvements in sensors and computer ... make driving safer and also leading cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" can be interpreted as that future innovations to these senors will lead to safer driving habits by the technology and will eventually reach a state that they can do most driving tasks that humans can do, but in a safer manner, which will be a positive aspect of a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars are protective of the driver and its surrounding by several different technological uses. Notifications to alert the driver to drive, cameras to supervise drivers, and the LIDAR teechnology are all methods that protect the driver of a driverless car and its surrounding environemnt. The LIDAR technology is defined as a technology that updates a 3-D model of the car's surrounding. This gives the innovation insight on whether it is safe or not of its surrounding. In paragraph 4, it is specifically mentioned that, \"Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" Notifications to alert the driver that their is danger or the driver is needed to actually drive has been proven quite useful. Supporting evidence such as in paragraph 7, \"...notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents...\" establish that these \"driverless cars\" aren't officially \"driverless\" but still rely on drivers in some dangerous cases. The use of human skills is not completely gone, which could be seen as a postiive factor. These cameras that have been mentioned in paragraph 7, \"Manufactureers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\" is a good idea to protect drivers. If drivers were dozing off and not focused while the car was driving, it would not be safe. So technically such as this is beneficial in the manner that it will mandate drivers to be focused and alert, even though the car is a \"driverless\" autombile.\n\nDriverless cars have been thorougly perceived as\n\na positive innovation by the public and has been proven so by its fuel efficient technology, protective and sensible instincts and equipment, and its ability to check its surroundings and driver. Driverless cars can only be beneficial, in no way can they be harmful to our environment and people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The pie charts illustrate the dealing with dangerous waste products in the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the United Kingdom. It can be clearly seen that the last country is the only one where people do not use the recycling method; instead, they prefer chemical treatment and dumping at sea.\nAccording to the data, the underground method (82%) coloured in red in the United Kingdom pie chart prevails, compared to Sweden (55%) and the Republic of Korea (22%), coloured in green. On the other hand, people in the Republic of Korea prefer to use the recycling method 69%) the most, while those who live in Sweden do not use it so often (25%).\nThe United Kingdom has identical points at 8% for chemical treatment and dumping at sea methods. However, the lowest point (2%) has the incineration method in this country, while people in the Republic of Korea and Sweden destroy waste by fire more often, 9% and 20%, respectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you remember science fiction movies as a child? Do you remember imagining what it would be like if the world was able to advance that far in technology? Well, the advancement of technology is continuously evolving. Cars may not be able to fly yet, however, scientists are growing closer to creating a car that does not require a driver. This driverless car will be a great milestone in the evolution of technology.\n\nWith driverless cars, a public-transport system could be created around the country, according to the vision of Google cofounder Sergey Brin. According to Brin, people would save money because they would not have to worry about buying a car or spending money on fuel. Since this system would be similar to a taxi system, the cars would only use half the amount of fuel as today's taxis, benefitting the environment. This system would also be more flexible than the bus system.\n\nIn order for these cars to \"see\" the road and its obstacles, it must have a lot of sensors. According to paragraph four, one of Google's modified cars uses position estimating sensors on several areas of the car, allowing it to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. Even today, many cars have antilock breaks. Paragraph five states, \"The information from these sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This supports the idea that these driverless cars will be \"smart\" enough to actually drive on their own, and possibly more efficiently than a human driver.\n\nFurthermore, the invention of driverless cars will be safer. For example, in the case of a drunk driver, the car will have the most control. There may also be instances in which the car encounters an obstacle that requires human control. Efforts are still being made to find a solution to this problem; paragraph seven states that some cars notify the human by announcing it to the driver, and other cars might have a vibration feature built into the driver's seat.\n\nSome might ask, if there is an accident, who is to blame? Well, this would depend on the case. If the accident was caused by a malfunction in the car, then the manufacturer is to blame. If accident is caused when the human is controlling the car, then the human is to blame. Now, if a car was compltely driverless, then that question is much easier to answer. Others may also ask, what will the human do while they wait for their \"turn\" to drive? According to Dr. Werner HUber, a BMW project manager, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Entertainment and information systems could be developed to keep the driver awake and entertained. This system may sound distracting, however, it is actually a safety feature because it can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take the wheel.\n\nIn conclusion, the evolution of the driverless car would make the roads safer, benefit the environment, and save money for many people. The threat of reckless and drunk drivers would decrease, the air would be cleaner, and car rides could potentially become more fun with the possible entertainment. Several companies, such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan, see the potential in these driverless cars, and have high hopes for the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chart illustrates six cities' underground railway systems. Two big differences between the metro in the different cities concern the length of the route and the yearly number of passengers. Although there are some underground railway systems that have been opened more recently, the oldest ones (London, Paris and Tokyo) are the most frequented and long.\nThere is a big difference concerning the length of km of underground railways systems. In London, that is the oldest metro system built in 1863, thereis the longest system, almost 400 km. Instead, Kyoto has the shortest metro system with just 11km of route. There is a huge discrepancy between the metro systems that have been built in Kyoto and Los Angeles. Although in these two cities the underground systems were built more recently, respectively in 1981 and 2001, they have the shortest systems. For instance in L.A. the route does not exceed 30km). There is at least a discrepancy of more than 100 km between the younger subways (Kyoto and Los Angeles) and the older ones. Indeed, Washington DC, that was built in 1927, is 126 km long.\nThe number of passenger per year is almost directly proportionate to the lenght of route. However there are some differences to be noted. Namely, the more frequented metro is that of Tokyo with 1927 million of passengers per year. Paris and London immediately follow the Japanaise capital (the numbers are respectively 1191 and 775 millions). Instead, Kyoto that is the metro with the shortest route is also the less used, with just 45 million of people who take it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think books taken shelfs Somethings might offisive people people might need books research projects etc People need read understand people think somethings offensive toward people Every book book shelf public library Everybody freedom choose thier self let decide offensive others Maybe author wrote book gansters kids Maybe author wrote book give inside look somebody s life We live diverse world going different outlooks world The author could writing book show child went throught point life killings violence That offensive somebody talking killings violence Reading book let see child grew The book could even change childs parents gangs minds It could let realize effect childs life later life I believe thing goes movies magazines Through reading magazines watching movies could help Say gang watch movies read would find happens gang could change thoughts These books movies magazines could show going happen Maybe directiors writers types ot thngs show happen continue path gangs harmful clubs Why certain people get choose book moive magazine etc offensive people others I think way fix leave every book public library shelfs Let peple come library read books decide right offensive read Even library s make decision somebody going get mad upset I think way solve issue like except letting people read decided themself If like book great read return bookNobody decide right wrong somebody self", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As far as I can judge, Presently, the majority of people ponder that, the government should be paying attention to decreasing environmental contamination and accommodation problems, Meanwhile, these endeavours can influence reducing and defence from sickness and infections. These factors suffer from human health. \r\n\r\nCurrently , the authority must prevent housing problems in view of the fact, many people live on the streets so this matter encourages infections especially contagious illnesses which cause human deaths. Certainly, the administration must resolve this trouble or provide the best acceptable solution. For instance, to build new apartments for homeless citizens , As a result of that, this convenience help to live in comfort. Admittedly, the council should decline environmental pollution such as car emissions containing damaging pollutant particles which can contaminate air and water . Either way , they must rectify this crucial and vital problem.\r\n\r\nIt is indisputable, that on the other hand , it is not only the government's shoulders , but also the people who live in this country should be responsible for everything , particularly , for the environment because, nature can exist or subsist without us , but , Unfortunately , we never live or coexist without nature and environment. Instead of, complaining about every negligible thing we should attempt to save and keep cleaner our environment.\r\n\r\nin my opinion, the authority should focus more on downsizing contaminations and constructing civilian houses by decreasing housing disadvantages these actions can cause the best solution . But we do not forget our responsibilities when it comes to saving and protecting nature and the earth . Finally , both sides of the attempts are significantly necessary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood described memoir mostly love unity culture In love shows parents immigrated mostly give children better future This described paragraph unity shows neighborhood immigrants always feasts really close This explained paragraph says In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship His parents taught cook food country also dance Cuban Music says paragraph These types mood described memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The presidential election is an enourmous event that almost all Americans over the age of eighteen participate in.  But there is one problem, the system we use for it is outdated, unfair, and just terrible!  The electoral college needs to be removed because voters need more power, and there are tons of problems that come with the electoral college.\n\nThere are some pretty solid defenses for the United States to keep the electoral college.  For example, as stated in in the article by Posner, even though some candidates can dominate regions, \"no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\"  But the thing is, even though it might not be enough to win the election, it extremely benefits the candidates race.  Another defense states in Posner's article is that the trust of the slate of electors that you are actually voting for is \"rarely betrayed.\"  This is a flawed defense because it shouldn't be rarely betrayed, instead, it shouldn't be betrayed at all!\n\nSince the trust of voters in the slate of electors can't be betrayed, why not put the power in the voters hands instead of people most of the voters have never even met?  The voters aren't even voting for the president in the electoral college system, they are voting for a slate of electors.  And in the text written by Plumer, that the voters can't even control who they're voting for!  Another claim in Plumer's article to back the last sentence up is:  \"The House's selection can hadly be expected to reflect the will of the people.\"  That is just ludicrous!  Also, voters quite frequently \"get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidates.\"\n\nThat just goes to show one of the extreme amount of problems that the electoral college system has.  As stated in Plumer's passage, one of the biggest problems the electoral college system has is that \"over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct electioin to the kind we have now.\"  But, no one can expect them to listen because, you can clearly tell from their system that they don't care about the common voters opinion, but the direct election system does.  In Plumer's article, he loosely states that another thing that can go wrong with the system we have now is the state can possibly cheat and send two slates of electors to Congress.  It has happened before so who says it can't happen again?  \"Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote.\"(John Plumer) Having a tie is just another terrible flaw in the awful electoral college system that the United States runs today.\n\nMost voters can't even have a say in the election if we don't stop running the electoral college system.  But, if the U.S. finally smartens up and changes, the presidential election would have much fewer problems and it would put more power in the hands of the people like a democracy should be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the biggest problems facing all over the world today is that too much food is wasted. Some reasons that account for this trend can be identified, but there are some steps to be taken to change the situation. \n\n Initially, there are various reasons why food is being wasted in manifold areas of the world. The first reason is that in developed countries people buy food items more than their needs. For instance, in each meal, they cook a lot so that they are unable to eat it all, which makes food be leftover. Beside that reason, another factor is that people do not have preservation methods due to a lack of technology development especially in undeveloped countries. For example, in India it is not affordable to buy a fridge or freezer or use preservatives for their food, which can lead food to be easily perishable. \n\n Despite some reasons mentioned above, there are several possible solutions that can be taken to mitigate this problem. Firstly, the government should raise awareness for citizens to buy and cook just enough to eat. They just have to buy and cook only for one meal to avoid wasting food and money. By contrast, in undeveloped countries, they should invest more money in farming, transportation and preservation methods. For example, they can receive sponsorship and investment from foreign countries to have modern technologies and improvements. As a consequence they can facilitate the traffic development to reduce the time to delivery, which might minimize the possibility of food spoiling. \n\n Given the points raised above, wasted food is indeed a prevalent problem, but there are solutions that are relatively doable. Being aware of this problem is not enough, people must also do their part to use food economically.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often considered that the masses' need to enroll in the university or college to fulfil their dreams by getting respectful job opportunities. Where, a few individual believed that after completing school learning students directly indulge them in working environment. In my, inclined well qualification is necessary for the better future and successful career. Thus, this essay will elaborate on both notions which further leads to a logical conclusion.\n\nCommencing, in modern times, the population size has highly surged which causes competition between individuals hence to fight around such competitive surroundings one must well educational degrees with them. However, the best route of better life is to have a higher education because organisation always seek knowledge and educational certificates. For example, in India, an enormous number of school passed aspirants admitted in colleges because it is believed that a better job can only be achieved when individual have a perfect amount of knowledge and bachelor's qualification. \n\nMoving further, some people think that they can directly indulge themselves in better jobs although in the contemporary ,era monetary harships is high which affect wealth of humans. Therefore, students after completing their school learnings they choose to work and to complete their needs in life. For instance, school passed out candidates wants to get an early exposure to working life and earn money which would be helpful to them in living successful life.\n\nIn a nutshell, higher educational knowledge is necessary because technogical advancement can only be handle by the technical person. Similarly, after school work not be useful to survive in the world. In other words, deep subject informations are crucial to eran better in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features settings affected cyclist dangers He took advice old people But even though started good almost nothing last forever Hes riding like middle summer little water desert He runs towns abandon next town miles litheraly going rough roads ahead But get town abandon found hope seeing man chair", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughing smirking giggling chuckling one subject laughing Laughter everywhere hear libraries parks home behind back great thing horrible thing even family friends Everyone past laughing welcomed helped cheered even make special friend stay forever It start brand new I moved I seventh grader start nt real big fan hanging people stayed weeks eating lunch guidance center trying figure books without talking anybody My schedule good I choir art drama know stuff I like Art drama blast came choir singing social level went I love sing never front people Then one day I walking choir I tripped fell papers falling My work hall math one end science But kids hallway one laughed She walked say I great job something triggered come back She helped pick math homework picked schedule saw choir period Her name told told name walked together We sat next sang voices harmony We talked periods lunch bus ride home We became great friends principal thought went ahead gave us classes together We friends still friends till day But sad thing moved near end eighth grade year But friend I little I always give call every Sometimes talk hours laughing talking going see She best friend least two years happened slip foot falling papers one little laugh amazing person Laughing got far life Every see someone alone wanting friend I go talk even laugh One little laugh trigger huge friendship waiting happen Even nt think Some say Laughter shortest distance two people I believe ever said happened", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "She says failed keep tropical plant liveShe disappointed said In spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take tes When failed mother said okay always try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I asked mom I get phone said yet She said I cant one till grade unless I get phone write cant till ninth grade get real phone I told okey But going get She said patient I told I said soon possible like I said Ill patient till bug Thats one time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most likely im in a car every day of my life and the odds are so are you. But What if cars were never invented how many lives would be saved? how much money could we save? And over all how much better and cleaner our world will be. These things are just some of the advanatges that pertains to limiting our car usage. Have you ever heard of the good out weighs the bad? well in this situation the good defiantly out weighs the bad.\n\nOur life source is breathing we need to breath air and at that fresh air, but we never are, not with fumes from millions of cars roaming around. Stated in (source3 par24) \"Its a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution\". That to me sounds like two gains already, whats better than fresh air and less stress. Things just as simple as car pooling makes the world better but what really would is not useing you'r car daily. No, i dont mean walk every where you could use bikes, eletric operated golf carts which are all fun but much better for the air. By useing these we have fewer fumes in the air which makes for better air. If we all began useing these instead of cars in just towns it would become normal to ride bikes and, golf carts rather than big bulky air killing machines. For an example in (source4 par29) \"Americans are buying fewer cars and driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\". It just starts with one to make something drastically change. Now i know were not gonna take family bike trips all the way from florida to georgia or drive a golf cart that only goes to 40mph,but thats when it would be decent to make a \"car trip\". Im not saying stop useing cars completely just only when its not neccassary. Just think about the world you live in the world that God has created is being pulluted every day, but we can all change that.\n\nMoney, money ,money Seems to be the big talk in America weather its the money were making, the money were loseing ,or the money we just dont have. But Wouldent you rather put your money towards the mouths of your family or the roof over your head, rather than in your gas tank ? Useing less cars would give us more money on more important things in life and, would cause more people to become happier . Just by useing things like bikes can make things more smoother in your every day life for an example(source3 par28) \"Rush hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic\". No one i know loves sitting or, nearly wrecking during traffic with this mehtod of less cars we could cut deaths and, stress in half . And i know you would say, but millions of people would lose jobs big money by car usage being reduced,but think of all the new things they could make their money from . People are always looking for the next big thing , well this is it. Dealerships that promote this could now turn into safer mobility shops and, make nearly as much. Stated in(source4 par32) \"Americans could not afford new cars and the unemployed wernt going to work anyway\". This goes to show that were already leaning towards the idea of less cars we just need to be pushed. All the new inventions that will arise weather its cute bicycle covers to built in tops to block the rain people will be gaining and saving just as much. But what were really gainig is the saftey of people. Kids fall off their bikes everyday and probably get hurt but, a scrape is better than taking your last breath. We all gain from this , and our human nature is to want whats best for yourself, well this is surely better for every one.\n\nAlmost every day im in a vehicle, but maybe that could soon change. We could gain so much from losing just a little bit of driving time. We would absolutley gain lives,money,and happiness from useing less car usage. Im a firm beliver in useing this method i couldent imagine a better world of things going just so smoothly all of the time. But It takes getting on that bike or walking to the corner store to strike a revolution like this. So get out of your cars and, go make a better place for you and for the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The program is sepcial and is appreciated because of the work it has done. It did a special\n\nthing to this world and is still appreciated to this day for the program's great efforts to help people and regions.\n\nThe UNRRA is amazing!!!\n\nYou should join because there is a lot of adventures, I went across the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War 2!!! More than anything we help people, We went to Europe when the war ended to help people because many of the cities were in ruins.You also get to meet many people, 44 nations came together to form UNRRA, which stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration.\n\nThis is why you should join me and the UNRRA because we care about people, you could make a lot of friends, and there is a lot of adventure. I know some people don't have in interest in those things, but it is really exciting for people that are interested in these things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Kurmaskie cyclist went hard times trying get Yosemite National Park A cyclist someone tried bike mostly time get somewhere First cyclist asked old men directions get Yosemite National Park The cyclist knew mistake first place hope maybe knew talking Seccondly trip came accrossed Ghost town nothing sight bike snake The cyclist became dehydrated running water water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot people patient wait dont want make someone mad messup something People always careful I ever patient sometimes hard patient pretty easy Everyone absouletly knows people know trust Theirs many different things thatve patient I dont know one I choose write cause alot CAPS someone bathroom wait patiently cant cant hold keep knocking door use one someone computer wait turn pass hour tell person get mean either need turn There way cant patient leat minutes Not hard Its pretty easy everyone knows know", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph presents the information about the proportion of people who visited several different kinds of tourist spots in 1999 in Britain.\nThe persentage of tourists who traveled to the theme parks was the highest at 38%. The figure for museums & galleries was lower at 37%. 16% of visitors chose the historic houses & monuments as the destination. While the wildlife parks &zoos were the most unpopular tourist attractions, only 9% of people chose it.\nAs the most popular place, theme parks have various types that provide for the public. The proportion of visitors who travel the blackpool pleasure beach was the highest at 47%. The figure for alton towers and pleasureland, southport remain the same level at about 16%. Chessington world of adventures and legoland, windsor show the same partten, both 10%.\nOverall, Most of people liked to vist theme parks including blackpool pleasure beach and those kind of things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what your life would be like if you did not have to drive as much. Maybe you didn't have a car at all. A small experimental suburb in Germany is tooling with the idea of a no car life style, along with many cities in the United States where a car is not a neccesity. Paris however has banned car usage all together, becuase of the amount of smog produced becuase of the automobiles. This could marke the end of car culture across many countries, exspecially the United States. There are many advantages to not owning or using a car, some of them may just cause you to get ride of your car.\n\nA small suburb in Germany on the France and Swiss border have given up on their cars. \"Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in the experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg.\" The streets of this small town are car free. The twon offers a tram that runs through the downtown, and a few small streets on one edge of the community. The town cannot bain cars altogether, but if you own a car the only place to store it is in large garages at the edge of the town. One space can cost $40,000, the cost of the space comes with the home. Only 70 percent of the population in Freiburg owns a car and 57 percent sold there vehicle before moving. Germany isn't the only country with this type of movement. The United States is promoting \"car reduced\" communities. This will cause increase demand of public transport to the suburbs surrounding big cities such as Chicago and New York.\n\nParis, however, is the first city to prohibit driving altogether. \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial drribing ban to clear the air of the global city. Drivers where asked to leave their cars at home or risk a fine of 22 -euro ($31). Almost 4,000 drivers where fined. Diesel fuel was blamed becuase France has a tax policy which promotes diesel fuel. Almost 70% of drives have diesel vehicles. Delivery companies complained of lost revenue, but exceptions where made for hybrids and electric vehicles. The public transit was free of charge during the bane.\n\n\"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emission, unveiled last week.\" American now is has fewer car sales, people driving less, and there are fewer and fewer liscences each year. Americas love of motor vehicles seems to be subsiding. People are driving about as much as they did in 1995 which is 9% lower then the peak in 2005. Some people may blame the lack of cars and driving on the reccession. On the other hand people were buying less cars two to three years befor the reccession even hit. If this pattern presists sociologist believe it will be eneficial for cabon emissions and the enviorment. This is becuase transpertation is the 2nd leading cause of carbon emission. This could have negitive effects on the automotive companies but they are already rebranding themselves as mobiltiy companies. This allows them to have a broder range of personal vehicles. Cities like New York have established a bike sharing program. This allows people access to bikes accross the city instead of taking a taxi. Many of the young people accross the country have not even bothered to get driver's liscenses. Driving decreased by 23% between years 2001 and 2009. They instead plan activites where they can walk or ride a bike.\n\nThe age of the car may be coming to an end. Communities have started promoting a car free life style. Made othe ways of transportation avaliable. The younger people in the community have quit driving all together. Wether becuase it is good for the enviorment or a choice they had to make becuase of the city they live in. Transpotation is evolving into a public affair, not a personal one. The automotive industry may take a hit but in the long run this could be beneficial for our planet. There will always be car buffs, but sooner rather then later, you may not own a car altogether.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I writing time someone I knew extremely patient He patient one thing When I young hotel pool I almost drowned Since I afraid swim So patient friend taught swim pool trailer park What patient though getting deep water pool He wanted go deep end pool I afraid I would drown So decided needed get deep end somehow We got pool walked deep end He told jump shouldve realized I wouldnt jump He eventually get water deep end I would hang onto edge let go swim anything So I got began get little frustrated He patient though kept working After seemed like hours pretended going give I told stayed Id go deep end So I jumped realized wasnt bad So I love swimming especially deep ends Thats friends hard work patience payed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus with even more challenging clouds that are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\". Venus is very dangerous for humans to step foot on and could not have spacecrafts to last more than a few hours due to the temperatures and atmospheric pressure. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author implies that exploring Venus is worth the risk by explaining the dangers and the motivation of human curiosity.\n\nTo understand Venus clearly, NASA wants to explore Venus on their own. They can either consider the exploration as a risk, or the exploration can be thought out as a challenge that people are willing to take despite the dangers. \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". Humans cannot undergo, let alone survive stepping foot on Venus with these extreme conditions. Earth's \"twin\" planet also has \"the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system\". Although there are many dangers to explore Venus, astronomers are fascinated by the idea that Venus has been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nHuman curiosity has motivated NASA to send other humans to study Venus. One way of doing so is by \"allowing scientists to float above the fray\". Floating above the fray would allow humans to avoid the harsh ground conditions. Miles away from the surface will still be \"170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth\". These conditions will not be easy, but will be survivable for humans. To contribute to the knowledge of Venus, researchers are are working on different task that will allow the machines to last long enough on Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus presents a great amount of reasons that can be dangerous for humans to explore. Since Venus is the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, Venus was probably covered with large oceans and could have supported many forms of life. Predictions like these cause people to want to meet the very end of imagination and innovation to finally see the true value of Venus to make the exploration a worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would agree with keeping the Electoral College because its a fair way to elect the president of the united states. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors the majority only 270 votes is required for the final dessision. Each candidate running for the president has his or her own group of electors but the state law varys how many are selected. The presidential election is held every four yearson the tuesday after the first monday of november.\n\nThe states are called districts for example the word state also refers to the disrict of Columbia. You can help choose your states electors when you vote forpresident. Even though your voting for your candidate your really voting for the candidates electors. Most states have a winner takes all system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.\n\nAfter the presidential election your govenor prepares a certificate of ascertainment listing all of your candidates who ran for president in your state. The Certificate of Ascertainment also declares the winning presidential candidate in your state at the meeting of the electors in December. Then the certificate is sent to the congress  and the national records of the presidential election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The introduction of driverless cars into society is coming in the near future. Technology has been holding us back in the creation of driverless cars, but now manufacturers are able to design practical, safe, and innovative cars that will lead us into the direction of driverless cars.\n\nThe improvement in technololgy allows for manufacturers to create and design things that were never possible before. For example, paragraph 5 states that \"In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensores at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to decect and respind to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" In just 10 years, the improvement of technology changed the uses of sensors in antilock breaks. This was in the 1980s. The further improvement of sensor technology and computer hardware would allow cars to drive themselves.\n\nManufacturers are making cars smarter than ever. Although the car designs are not totally diverless, they can drive themselves until they hit their limit, and need human assistance. In addition, paragraph 7 reads \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vechicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" The paragraph also discusses other ways GM is trying to implament ways to alert the driver when an object is close, or is no longer capable of driving itself and needs human assistance. These are just a few of the many ways that car manufacturers are creating safe, smart cars.\n\nTechnology has been holding us back in the creation of driverless cars, but now manufacturers are able to desgin practical, safe, and innovative cars that will lead us into the direction of driverless cars. The push for these driverless cars have led automakers to work in creating driverless cars, and were told we could see them as early as 2016-2020.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who are voters voting for? Whoever they are voting for, it certainly isn't the president. The Electoral College has the potential to cause a nationwide catastrophe, which is why changing the election to popular vote is the best way. The Electoral College should be abolished because of the \"disaster factor\", prospect of a tie, and the fact that more citizens vote in the presidential election compared to the electoral election.\n\nThe disaster factor is exactly what it sounds like: a disaster. This \"disaster\" is described as the event where electors defy the people they are representing. For example, this happened in the 2000 presidential vote when Al Gore won the public vote, but lost the electoral vote to George W. Bush. This means that the electors voted by the people of their state changed their minds about which president they were voting for. This resulted in the opposing vote turn-outs in the 2000 presidential election. As said in Source 2, \"In the same vein, 'faithless' electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.\" Although some people may argue that it is very rare for something like this to happen, the fact that there is a chance that it could is overwhelming. Clearly, against even the smallest odds, the Electoral College can cause a catastrophe.\n\nA tie would cause a real predicament in a presidential election. In the case of a tie, the choice is given to the House of Representatives. This means that there is an unequal amount of electoral voters. Source 2 says, \"Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for Congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people.\" Once again, the Electoral College has faulted; a simple tie could throw the whole election off. Why would the vote be passed on to the House if there is already a popular vote? If there is already another vote in place and the votes are counted, why not just put those votes to use? Obviously, if a tie could mess up a national vote, then it's time to change our ways.\n\nAlthough each state decides its electors, how many people are actually voting for the electors? According to Source 3, about one-half of the eligible American population voted in 2012's presidential election. If only half of the population is voting for a nationwide presidential election, how many people are going to vote for a small, in-state election? It isn't clear enough that although the presidential election is bigger, the electoral election is much more important. However, if we just had a popular vote instead of the Electoral College, everyone would vote in the presidential election because everyone already knows the importance of the presidential election. Yet, people aren't aware enough of the importance of the electoral vote and although the government has tried to stress the importance of voting it, nobody seems to catch on. It is evident that a large percentage of the population does not understand the need to vote in the electoral election. People simply do not understand that this election determines the outcome of the presidential election, which is why it shouldn't even exist.\n\nThe Electoral College is regarded as a non-democratic method of selecting a president. It is true hypocracy and should be replaced because of the \"disaster factor\", prospect of a tie, and the fact that more citizens vote in the presidential election compared to the electoral election. The presidential election isn't a nationwide election; it is an election that takes place in a little room where 538 electors decide the political fate for millions of people living in the United States of America.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars over the years has been changing the world. Most people want a car, but recent studies found out that car buying or car useage, has been decressing. Why are people doing this? Some cities have a \"no car day\" and some cities don't allow cars. Why?\n\nCars have changed peoples life in one way or another. In the little town of Vauban, Germany, it is a \"car free\" town. What it means is that there is no cars allowed in the town. They limited there car usage so that \"70[%] of [the towns] families do not own cars\" (Rosenthal). The town wants to create a \"car free\" town to decrease greenhouse gases in the air. You could get a garage but \"...a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000\"(Rosenthal). The little town of Vauban is helping the world decrese greenhouse gasses.\n\nIf Vauban can do it,who else can? Well as a matter of fact Paris, France is banning cars due to heavy smog. Smog is caused when there is warm days, and cool nights, causing gas exhaust to stay on the ground, thus causing smog. Paris banned cars usage to get rid of the smog. \"...ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine($31)\"(Duffer). Paris decided when the smog came to fine car users when they drove, they wanted to \"...clear the air of the global city\"(Duffer) from the smog. They had to decreses cars, thus the ban and fine. In fact congestion (car traffic) was down \"60[%] in the capital of France\"(Duffer).\n\nAnother way that car decrese has happened, or a way to stop greenhouse gas, is a car-free day. The city of Bogota, Colombia, has had a annual car-free day for years now. \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog\"(Selsky) Even during rain Bogato citizens still have a car-free day. In fact with this success other cities, such as Cali and Valledupar has begun to have a car-free day. In doing this Bogato has helped decresse car usage in some cities and hpoes to pass it on to more.\n\nAmerica, one of the leading in car production, and car users, has a decrease in cars bought and driven today. Ever since 2005, the peak of car drivers, has begun to decrease a lot over the years. \"As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9[%] below the peak equal to where the country was in January, 1995\"(Rosenthal). The leader in cars is decreasinng! How? Well, maost teens this time car-pool with friends until they drive and so on. Decreasing cars exahust in the air.\n\nMost people want to drive, but do they know about the countrys trying to decrease the car usage? Most countries that want a decrease in cars, get a decrease in cars and don't know how successful it'll get, but when it gets successful, it gets succesful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test ecause flower budding would make feel confident everything The reason I think flower reminds past time memories homeland Its basically like little peice home new home An example represents Not like kind explaining new hibiscus similar one home reminds home This reason I believe author ends story way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, online learning platforms have been well developed to replace traditional learning methods in many universities. Although campus-delivery programs still have some benefits, the development of internet-based courses gives more advantages to learners. \r\n\r\nFirstly, some argue that courses delivered on campus have more benefits for students because face-to-face interaction can help them to acquire knowledge more efficiently. Although that may be true for some people, it is not true for everyone. In fact, many students feel uncomfortable in crowded classes and cannot focus to fully understand the lessons. As a result, when they study in that environment, their academic achievements are often decreased. In contrast, online learning gives students flexibility. Which means that they can learn at their favourite spaces such as quiet libraries and concentrate on their studies, resulting in better learning outcomes. Therefore, studying online is not only a flexible learning method, but also an efficient one.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, internet-based courses offer many other benefits related to students’ ability and financial matters. With regards to the former, students can proactively set their study plan with customized schedules that help them learn at their own pace. For examples, many talents can complete their four-year university programs in just 3 years, which helps them to enhance their competitive positioning in the labour market and get jobs sooner than other colleagues. Budgeting is the other major benefit. Online learning offers students the opportunity to access world-class courses at an affordable cost. This means that students can get the formal qualifications of top universities from their hometown without paying for the costs of living aboard, which are often very high in these developed countries where the schools located in.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, online courses have more advantages than traditional classes in modern tertiary education in terms of effectiveness and finance. In my view, this is a positive development and could be a replacement for most campus-based programs in universities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about struggling countries in need of help? Many countries are in horrible conditions due to wars, conflicts, and natural disasters. Most people of these countries need their livestock to survive, but most of these troubling times, the animals are othen taken away or even killed during the harsh moments. This is why there is the Seagoing Cowboys program to help them.\n\n44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief Rehabilitation Administration). The UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" totake care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. There the Cowboys\n\nclean the animals and stalls, feed the animals, and pull up bales of hay and bags of oats from lower holds of the ship. The work is always to a great cause, the Cowboys know and so does the UNRRA.\n\nOne of these outgoing workers is Luke Bomberger. He was offered the opportunity from his friend, Don Reist. It was an opportunity that he couldn't say no to, and an opportunity that changed Luke's life. It was 1945, and World War 2\n\nwas over in Europe. Many countries were left in ruins. Luke and Don signed up to be one of the Seagoing Cowboys. World War 2 was a great reason why the UNRRA was formed. Luke set off to his great, big adventure on the open seas and taking care of animals to help countries in need.\n\nLuke went on many trips as a Seagoing Cowboy. He went to many countries in Europe. In fact, Luke made nine full trips- the most of anny Seagoing Cowboy. \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,\" he says. \"Besides helping peope, I had theside of benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis is Greece was special,\" he says.\"So was riding a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\" So, not only does a Seagoing Cowboy gets to save live by taking care of animals, you get tosee the world. Especially from Luke's perspective.\n\nSo, I hope that Luke's adventures has inspired you to become a Seagoing Cowboy yourself. Not only do you get to help people in need, but you also get to have a journey for yourself that you'll never forget. So sign up today, and you WON'T regret it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]