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"content": "You have heard how scientists study to make the Earth better as well as other planets. Today, scientists study about Venus which \"is referred to as Earth's twin that is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occationally the closest in distance too.\" Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Therefore, studying Venus is not as easy as studying animals or plants. It takes more time and costs more. However, there are hidden beneits that we do not notice by studying Venus.\n\nAs your assumption, you might say studying Venus does not give any benefits for human. It only makes human risks. Yes, you are partially right. \"Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" However, scientists are trying to make new innovations in order to get to Venus safely. Therefore, \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" Not being able to take samples from the Venus gives scientists new ideas. The new ideas can benefit humans as well as the Venus. Scientists would get more ideas on what humans need in order to survive our lives safely by working on innovations for Venus.\n\nAs a research, \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\" If scientists want to get to the Venus, they need to resist the heat. They cannot make themselves cool unless they have something to cool them. Therefore, they try to invent new machine that can help them cool. Unlike centuries, the temperature gets higher day after day as trees are getting cut off. People also need some coolers in order to resist the high temperature. However, scientists already have gotten an idea to make machines that make people cool down by studying Venus. Therefore, studying Venus has made a new idea ahead which help people.\n\nAs we know, testing some types exploration or testing many unfimiliar things harm the Earth such as damage the soil, air pollution. Therefore, scientists need some space to test thier new inventors without harming the Earth. However, \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulationg the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" If scientists have been testing the innovations in other planet, the Earth has more possible way to have safety. It stops from harming the Earth as well as humans. Therefore, Venus saves the Earth from harm.\n\nAs a result, studying Venus might have disadvantages in some point of view. Although it has several disadvantages, it has many hidden benefits as well. Striving to meet Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Travelling Earth and beyond should not be limitted by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Therefore, some challenges should be accepted for goods.",
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"content": "With the effects of global warming rapidly transforming climate, environmental degradation has become a major cause of concern for the entire world. Easy and economic availability of a non-renewable source of energy such as fuel, is leading a way to environmental problems. In this essay, we will discuss, whether increasing the cost of fuels could solve improve the situation or we need to look for other ways to address this burning issue.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the argument of increasing the cost of fuels, it would certainly help in reducing the effects of global warming. With the hike in prices, it would not be economical anymore for every person to afford and would lead them to opt for other options. However, other options like electric cars must have the capability to be able to compete and replace the fuel ones. Also, with higher prices, people will switch to judicious use of fuel and will use their personal car whenever it is absolutely necessary. With public transport becoming more popular and affordable, it would reduce our dependency on fuel.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, when equivalent alternates are not available, it would be hard for people to switch. This would force people to buy expensive fuel for their vehicles, resulting in an increase in the price of services they offer, and simultaneously an increase in market inflation, which has its own bad effects. Therefore, in long run, we have to look for energy from renewable sources, such as sun, wind, hydro and nuclear.\r\n\r\nTo sum up the discussion, we find, that hike in prices, will partially serve our purpose in the short term. However, in the long term, we need to find other sources of energy to power our vehicles and system to address the issue of climate change",
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"content": "From Luke's point of view participating in a Seagoing Cowboys program would be lots of fun because it said in the article it said it was a once in a lifetime expirence. Also you would have to be careful because if you have a night job and it is raining you would have to make sure you dont break anything when you go up the stairs. Also in the boat you would travel to alot of countries. There are many things you could volunteer for the Seagoing Cowboys program. It might be fun i mean you would help animals. Also you would have to be paitent because it takes awhile to get place to place. It said in the article it took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean. You also help people with thier needs. It will maybe open your eyes alittle so you can see that you should be grateful for what you have. On board you can play baseball,volleyball,and table tennis and many more things so you won't be bored out of your misery.\n\nSo as you can see it will be a fun expierience unless you get hurt or something but other than that it surely will. Luke's claim was probalay to particapate and enjoy it. Also Luke should thank Don Reist because Don is the one who mentioned this opportunity. Also this program was for the helpfulness of World War 2 so the people could get thier food supplies and all that stuff.",
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"content": "Did the author support their idea well in this article? I do believe he did. I saw many reasons as to why we should at least try to go to venus. He gave many reasons as to how Venus is very simillar to Earth and could be inhabited one day. He also gave many reasons as to how it could be dangerous, and why people haven't really been able to do so yet. They mention things about what Venus has done to other space crafts in the past, and what it can do to others now even.\n\nThe author gives many reasons as to why Venus is reffered to as Earths \"twin.\" He says, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" In this he tells us that Venus is like Earth in the ways of how dense it is and how large it is. He also says that it is occasionally close to us, so that shows us that it could be just like Earth, but with some differences. The author also says in paragraph 4, \"it may have once been the most Eath-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported many forms of like, just like Earth.\" With this he is telling us that there could be fossils, or we could one day maybe inhabit Venus if needed, with adaptations of course.\n\nThe author also says that the journey would be dangerous. He mentions in paragraph 2 \"each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no space craft has survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" In this he is telling us just how dangerous it is, because tipically you would think of a machine being tougher than the human body, but as you think about it you can see just as fast as that machine was destroyed. If that machine was destoryed so quickly imagine how quickly the human body would be. He also says \"not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" This also lets us know how hard it would be to get there and how fast, if the right materials aren't used, something can be destroyed during the trip.\n\nThe author then gives us NASA's plan as to how somebody would be able to access Venus in paragraph 5. He tells us that \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would be to allow scientists to float above the fray.\" He gives us this idea so that we can think about it being a safer route and that maybe with this method somebody could be able to make it. With his evidence in the previous paragraphs we can conclude it would be very dangerous to land on Venus, but not to be above it. He also gives us a scenario of what it would be like for the scientists floating above. He tells us, \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up out of their way.. temperatures would still be toasy at arounf 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth... radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" By telling us this he is saying that it wouldn't be the most comfortable thing, but it would be liveable. He is showing us that it would be possible, and if they really wanted to, they could explore Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 8 he mentions that the \"scientist floating above would only give limited insignt,\" with this we can see that there still wouldn't be everythig solved, but we would still be closer than we've ever gotten. He also says in paragraph 8, \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Meaning that the scientists wouldn't be able to photograph anything on Venus to look at later. The scientists would only be able to look at things closet than anybody ever has, but not be able to document any of it. With this we can also see that we wouldn't be able to see what Venus looked like from Earth, making it hard to report back on findings and research.\n\nAll in all I beleive the author did support his idea well. He gave the pros and cons and was able to explain everything out. I myself don't know it it would be worth all the money in supplies, but I do think with NASA's idea we can get closer than we've ever gotten before. The conditions would be liveable, but maybe a little uncomfortable, and we could get some good information on Venus. If Venus is as closely related to Earth as the author makes it out to be, then maybe it could be worth a shot, but I am still debating on it. It's nothing the author did, because he did explain and support everything very well, but I've always had very strong opinions on everything.",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to just go out and explore? Being able to see diiferent life would be an amazaing thing to see. Many people want to explore many things, whether it comes with risk or not. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" believes we should study Venus despite the dangers, snd I feel like we should, even though you don't know what is going to happen I feel like you should still take risk and explore, but there could also be more problems that come along.\n\nIn the article the author believes we should still go and explore Venus despite the risk that we could encounter. In the article it says, \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" Astronomers know what the conditions are like on Venus but still continue to want to go and explore it. Also in the article it says, \"NASA's possible solution to hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\" They are making solutions to where scientists can go visit and explore Venus without having to deal with the extreme conditions.\n\nThe scientists are coming across more challenges than dealing with Venus' atmospere. In the article it says, \"However, peering at Venus for a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" With making up a solution to Venus' extreme conditions, there are now more problems that come across because of the solution that protects them from the major conditions.\n\nIn conclusion, scientist should go and study Venus disregaurding the major conditions. These scientist are very careful and aware of the risk of being on Venus, so they came up with a solution so they don't have to encounter the many harads. You should always go explore things you want to, but you should be aware of risk so you know what to do during the challenge of trying to explore somthing new.",
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"content": "To the Senator of Florida,\n\n\"The founding fathers established... the Constitution\" to make sure that there was a way to vote for one elector to portray the role of President of the United States of America. However, this action has resulted in electors to lose even though they won the popular vote, the age of the electoral college, and there are numerous possibilities of ties. In the United States there are hundreds of millions of people who want to keep the United States a democracy, but the United States may change their stand point.\n\nPopular votes are collected from the people of the United States. With stating this, \"over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" This is because voters will be able to have only their votes taken into consideration. For example, the President of the United States is the offical who sends people to places like Afghanistan, Iraq, and Iran to fight for our country. These people vote for the elector they want to send them over seas instead of the politicians in the electoral college system voting for who they want to be the president. There are only 538 electors to vote for the elector they desire and that is still more important than the millions of people that vote. \"We are endowed by our creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are: life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness\" is a part of the Declaration of Independence and the right of liberty involves our right as people to vote.\n\nThe electoral college has be are for hundreds of years, but with the age of the system comes problems. In modern times, we have to make slight changes to our government so the United States does not get held back from when the Constitution was first created. Things are meant to change and so is the electoral college because over time thins changes to better and more efficient things. \"The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century.\" This evidence exclaims that there was a problem with the electoral college 15 years ago, which means that it can happen again.\n\nFurthermore, the electoral college already has problems and there can be more with the possibilities of a tie. It states, \"perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote.,\" this is not a democratic thing because democracy has to do with the vote of people, not the vote of the legislature. Also, in source 2, it exclaims that \"the election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\" This is a dangerous situations because if a tie occurs the popular vote still won't be taken into consideration as much as the electoral votes.\n\nTo conclude, the electoral college system should be abolished because it does not benefit the citizens of the United States. The elecotral college takes away the popular vote of the people, is way too old to still be around, and there are possibilities of a tie. I don't want my President to be voted in based on the votes of the legislature. The electoral college should be abolished!\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\nA concerned citizen",
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"content": "Nowadays, every time we turn on television or flick through the pages of newspapers, we learn about global warming and climate change. Some people claim that the government should impose taxes on the cost of energy for every means of transportation in order to tackle the problems. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of this and draw some conclusions.\r\n\r\nOne of the most noticeable positives of escalating fuel prices is to limit the number of people driving on the road. In other words, if the travelling cost is over budget due to the policy from the government, instead of using personal vehicles, commuters would rather go with public transport such as the metro or buses. As a result, the fewer cars or motorbikes commuting on the streets, the less air pollutants are emitted from them. For example, in some Western countries, the authorities aim to increase VAT taxes for gasoline and diesel by up to 10 per cent to hinder air pollution. \r\n\r\nTurning to the other side of the argument, contraband is such a major problem. To be more specific, if petrol price is much out of reach for most consumers, they will end up not using authentic sources of energy anymore. As soon as some private companies join the market at an affordable price, they will be the top selection for many. Consequently, the country may not be burdened with economic damage but also a serious crime. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is obvious that reducing the cost of operating power is such a debated issue to solve the environmental problem. Although this action can help minimize toxic emissions from cars, it may lead to other types of criminals. In my opinion, I hold a strong belief that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.",
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"content": "Do feel computers effect possitive way well nt I feel computers neggative effect people I feel way wa nt getting enough excersize life ll high light bill ll begin interfear everyday life Now ve shown reasons defind detailed sentences To start essay feel people want begetting enough excersize I feel computer day nt go outside talk side bike went burning calarise You ll come couch potatoe line become fatal health As get oldes possibly became list items wrong diebites high cholesteal heart problems Also feel constantly sitting front computer possibly injure back add list problems health enough exersice Next feel constantly computer parents extremely high light bill Your parents possibly light company If always computer non stop knew bill high able pay ll hour high light bill possibly without light house My personal opinion dont feel computers worth family without light Finally feel computers day life I feel way always computers never outside friends like want bothered They ll feel like ignoring ll begin lose friends helped needed Also computers effect everyday life ruining social life You ll always inside missing opportunities meet new people build social skillz To conclude essay live brought ideas opinions computers I ve explained reasons wich want getting enough excersize ll high light bill ll interfear every day life I ve provided facts details consequences computers decide whether computers possitive negative efect people",
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"content": "The author of this excerpt has many good ideas/ reasons to keep the research on Venus, just like in this statement he said \" a thck atomosphear of almost 97% carbon dioxide\". which means is Venus had an thick atomostphear that they cannot send people out to keep researching it. But the author has a way wiht words his make good points and, he is stating facts. He wants to try and keep the research going because he said \" astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like plant in our solar system\". The only way now that they could get human life on the plant is to send them in a blimp like vehicle floating over then planet.\n\nPersonallly i think that it is a bad idea to keep sending human life or anything on to that plant because thier atophspher humans cant breath and any vehicle and or spaceship comes close to they will burn up.it is super hot there are lighting stricks on the ground with out rain or a storm. This is becuse it is super hot in the air.\n\nIn conclusion i dont really agree with his excerpt but he does have vaild points.",
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"content": "I believe that this new technology can be used in the classroom for the better. I think that it could help the classroom by, one helping kids from getting bored, two it could help kids learn, and three it could help take stress off of teachers.\n\nI believe that this new technology could help keep gets from getting bored by, one making the lesson it is trying to teach more fun for the student. The article states that the program could \"Modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor.\" I think that if the progam saw the kid getting bored it could possibly make it to where it could reward the student for a correct answer. It could make it to where you got to play a game every time you completed a question correct. It could even make a point system where if kids answered correctly then it would give extra points to the student. I think that this is how the program could help students from getting bored while still teaching the subject.\n\nI beleive that this new technology could help students learn as well. I think it could easily do this by caulating if a person is happy sad or bored. In the artivle it says \" Imagine a computer that could tell if you where sad or happy.\" By using this technology the program could make material to teach a lesson that a specific kid likes. If the students likes the way he or she is being taught then they will most likely learn more.\n\nThe new technology could take stress off of teachers in many ways. It could do this by one making its own lesson for each student. This would ensure that the student was learning the material the way they liked. THis would in turn take the stress off of the teacher who worry if their students are actually learnthe material. I could also two make sure all of the students where happy. This would take the stress off of a lot of teachers who worry if the students are happy in a class or not. It could even possibly give the current emotional state of students to the teacher in real time. Finally it could also serve as a substitute teacher. This could make it to where teachers won't have to make sub plans, and also the won't worry about getting a substitute teacher anymore. The nw technology could already know what the teacher was planning on teaching and then can make a lesson for that day.\n\nThese are all reasons why I believe that this technology should be in schools. I have talked about the three main reason why I think this could work , and those are that one it could help kids from getting bored, two it could help students learn, and three it could help relieve stress from teachers. All that I have stated is again why I believe this new technology could work.",
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"content": "ni my name is joe billy and i am goint to be talking abot the new technoogy that has been publisised. the new technology is called the prof, facial action coding system. people or scientest or whatever they are want to know if we need this in our svhools during todays society, that would not be a good ide because if teachers really kew what their studenta thiught of them or aboyt their class they would get all butt hurt. most of the teacherswould their are a select few that would not and those are true teachers they do not judge others for what they think of there class they are ust here for one reasn to take care of us and make sure that we learn a little simething on a daily basis. anyway this is not a good idea because no one wanta to know the truth now days and if we did have this type of equitment in our schools teachers would start to judge and start to pick favorits more than they already do with would no longer make tis a safe helthy enviroment that it is made out to be. there are some good benifits to this new technology, teachers would beable to see what studentsare not as involved, or intrested and they could focus on mking it more interesting fir those kids and than maybe students would like to pay attention more and get more involved and just all in all be a more sucessfull kid or young adult.",
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"content": "Countries like France, Columbia, Germany and USA have took part in reducing greenhouse gasses by reducing if not excluding vehicle transportation. Stats have shown less amounts of carbon in the air and less congestion in imense cities like Paris, France and Bogota, Columbia.\n\nSource two states that Paris typically has more smog then other cities in Europe like Brussels and London. They're taking action by allowing even-numbered license plates to drive one day and have the odd-numbered license plates leave their cars at home and the same would apply to even-numbered plates the following day. Anyone against that restriction would be given a 22-euro fine or 31 dollar fine. That method decreased smog and congestion by 60 percent.\n\nSource three talks about the country of Bogota, Columbia. This town or city has took a big step into reducing gas emisions where not only they participate but other local towns and cities as well. They contribute by leaving their cars home all day for one day to reduce the amount of carbon and smog in the air which helps the enviroment. People hiked, biked, skated or took the bus to work. violaters faced a 25 dollar fine. Not only does this benifit the environment but it helps people conversate more with each other. \" it's a good opportunity to take stress and lower air pollution,\" says businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza.\n\nAs it is said in source one, \" As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\" The small suburb town of Vauban, Germany is home to 5,500 residents were its perimeter is just a rectangular square mile. It is seperated away from all city life where people get around by walking to nearby stores. It may be the most advanced expirement in low-car suburban life. Developed countries or developing countries should think about all the gasses that go into the air and damage the surroundings and take part in to reduce the harmful greenhouse gasses.",
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"content": "To concern I believe computers benefit society Computers wonderful household object make life easier many ways Computers allow everyday family see new places photos online people internet Computers also provide social networking throught community state even country Lastly computer another resort go trying accomplish something always something internet help There s famous quote goes largest room world room improvement In opinion computers could make room little smaller While experts say computers making people spend much time indoors much time seeing wonders nature outside computer prove wrong The internet wide ocean pictures wordes sounds The computer item organizes entertainment There picture anything imaginaeable internet palm shaped islands frozen tundra You able see penguins southern ice cap ricefields bird s eye view simply moving fingers It s also possible see places see people distance Today people sending pictures via emails People actually sharing memories thanks computer I hope I explained helps make Computers make lives Imagine talking friends ever leaving room This would even impossibility fifty seventy People s social relationship greatly progressed half goes allowed people family friends I ll always positive thing using right way Having house tell individually friend time disney world hastle If put pictures social networking system like facebook twitter memories stored litterally clicks aborton Memories shared thanks social networking ability computer Planing vacation trough job job could take place sport An entire vacation planned confirmed paid thanks computer Jobs would normally take hours researching calling done minuets less using computer This allows people time go fun lives worry plannings Computers allow people compress hours work matter minutes Experts say computers taking away people s lives I would disagree people new places people social networking advanced time could spent planning living",
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"content": "In the graph that shows the data of the employment rates across 6 countries between the years of 1995 and 2005, the first nation of discussion is Australia.\nIn Australia, we can see that in the year of 1995, the rate of males getting employed was more than that of females getting employed with males standing at 55% employment, and females on the other hand at only about 25-27% employment. In fact, it can be seen that the rate of employment for males in both the years, 1995 and 2005 is more than that of the females!\nResonating with the point made above, despite the slight increase in the rate of females getting employed, the males still towered the 2005 comparison in the rate of employment, standing at 69%, leaving the females at an slightly increased 39%.\nIn Switzerland on the other hand, although the rate of employment went to the males in both years of 1995 and 2005, there is only a slight difference between the rates. In the year of 1995, the rate of swiss men getting employed stood at 65% with females only being 8% behind, standing at about 58%. Meanwhile, in the year of 2005, the rate of swiss males employed shot up at a whopping 79%, leaving the females only 10% behind, at about 69%.\nActually, it can be seen that the rate of males being employed is more than females in all of the 6 countries of comparison! Just that the difference of the rates are very minimum in Switzerland in both the years and in UK in only the year of 1995. Otherwise, there is a major major gap in the rates of the remaining 3 countries, that is- Iceland, Newzealand and USA, for both years of 1995 and 2005.",
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"content": "In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on human life. Although the idea of coexistence between climate change and humans appears reasonable, this cannot be viewed as the ultimate approach for humankind to combat climate change. There are a number of reasons why the coexistence can do more harm than good. First, climate change is largely shaped by human-caused geoengineering rather than nature itself. For example, in order to produce the energy that drives the world’s economy, most nations rely on carbonrich fuels like coal, oil and gas, which directly correlates with the intensification of global warming. Second, even if citizens agree to keep the environment the way it is, corporations, especially in the manufacturing and mining industries, would not as that would affect their profits. Therefore, it can be implied that if corporations were not held accountable for their contribution to global warming as in the case of coexistence, the issue of climate change would inevitably be exacerbated. It is more economically sound to actively prevent climate change than to ignore it. In fact, the costs, either financial or non-financial, of dealing with future consequences of climate change can be overwhelming. For instance, the increase in intensity and frequency of storms can cause massive destructions and deaths in many coastal areas, which would take decades to recover. In addition, rising temperatures have also contributed to the extinction of species worldwide. It should be noted that the extinction is irreversible and comes at great cost to the ecosystem and apparently humans living within it. In conclusion, actively combating global warming must be regarded as top priority given the high urgency. Governments and corporations worldwide should take steps to ensure that climate change remains at bay.",
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"content": "Dear Senator, I wish to ask you a favor of keeping the Electoral College or changeing to election by popular vote for the presdent of the United States. First of all, the reason that I want to ask you this is because Most states have a winner take all system that they give to the winning president.\n\nNext, after presidential election, the governor prepares a Certificate of Ascetainnent. listing all of the presidents who ran for president. after the presidental election is heild every four years on a tusedayafter the first monday in vovember. you help chose your states electors.\n\nFurthormore, People should vote for a state of several Democratic electors pledged . On the off chance that those electors won the statewide election. oh yea and senitor under the eletoral college system, voters vote not for the president but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president .\n\nFinally, Fromm my opinion the presidental party selects a state of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed. However, it is entirerly possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not winthe nactional popular vote.\n\nSo Mr. senator sir im only asking you this one thing if u coud just keep the Electoral college or changing to election vote for the president of the United States. pleez thats all im asking from you to do for me just one thing. quite sime thing to do right ..",
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"content": "With the rapidly progressing world,some traditions have become obsolete.Some still hold on to the old ways and traditions,while others do not.Nonetheless,I completely agree that many traditions today are not worth upholding such as owning weapons,underage marriages,and preventing females from getting their education.\r\n\r\nFirstly,having some weapons at home has been a tradition in many parts of the world,which is needed to let go.Previously,in order to protect oneself ,one had to have them at home for personal safety.But now, the world is a much safer place with highly trained police and sophisticated technology to protect its citizens.In addition to that,law and order situations may also deteriorate in the presence of weapons.To illustrate,the shooting at Christchurch mosque was a result of allowing citizens to own weapons.Thus,it is high time that we let this custom go.\r\n\r\nSecondly,underage marriage was also a thing of the past,that needed to be laid off.Due to poor financial conditions,it would be difficult for a young couple to survive.For instance,financial instability has been reported to be one of the major causes of higher divorce rates in the USA. Also,at a younger age,a person may not be mature enough to know his good and bad.Hence,a person should first reach the age of 18 at least,as constitutionalized by most of the states to be able to be old enough to make a wiser decision.\r\n\r\nLastly,not allowing females to get educated has been against the traditions in many parts of the world, and such customs should be abrogated.Education is a fundamental right of every human being,whether male or female.In addition to that,females make up more than half of the world's population,so it would be unwise to have half the number illiterate.For instance,Japan has progressed economically because it has educated and utilized most of its human resources including both genders.Therefore, the such a mindset was not even right for the old times,and ,certainly there is no point holding onto them today. \r\n\r\nTo conclude,some ways of the old were not right all along,such as disallowing the education of females and some were for older times such as keeping firearms.That is why most of the old ways must be left behind.",
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"content": "NASA discouvered a weard landform on Mars that lookes like a face. Some scientest, and people think that it is a sign of life or aliens. Most scientist think that it is a landform not aliens. I allso think that it is just a landform because Scientist have found simmilar landforms on Earth.\n\nJPL Web site revealed to the public that it was a natural landform. The landform had nothing to do with aliens or life. But not everyone was satisfied. The face was located 41 degreas north martain latitude where it was winter in April 98 a cloudy time of the year on the Red Planet.\n\nThe camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, aliean markings were hidden by haze. Mission controllers looked again, Mars Global Surveyor is a maping spacecraft That normaly looks straight down and scans the planet.\n\nLike a fax machine in narow 2.5 km wide strips They dont know if it pasced over the face very often. Sur veyors then got another pictuer using the cameras absolute maximum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\n\nThey discrern things in digital image 3 times bigger than pixel scize. So if ther were objects in this picture like airplans on the ground or shacks you could see what they were. What the picture actualy shows is the Martain equiveliant of a Buttel or mesa Landforms comon around the American West.",
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"content": "I think that they should develop these driverless cars. If they did, first of all, it would be cool to have cars that drive themsleves and second because if you needed to get somewhere and couldn't drive then you could. There are a few reasons why I think that they should be developed.\n\nThe first reason is because it would cost people a lot less to fill up their cars. They are also not fully driverless. They will alert you when you are pulling in or out of somewhere, or dealing with traffic issues such as construction or accidents. It feel that it could benefit a lot of people and would also make people more interested in driving.\n\nThey have been wanting to invent something like this one day. I knew that when they had the opportunity to create a vehicle or anything can can go on its own they would. This driverless car can apply brakes on individual wheels when needed too. It can also reduce power from the engine to help in the need of an emergency. This can help make driving safer because if someone isn't paying attention and a car or something is coming at you, your car can sense that and apply the brakes for you. It is nice that they are also considering using cameras in the cars to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. The car watches the driver and the driver watches the road.\n\nBecause of all the reasons I mentioned above, I think that they should develop the driverless car. It will be weird at first having these cars around because you wouldn't expect to see something like that but after a while it can benefit people in the long run that either can't drive like they used too and need to get somewhere, and also most will buy it just because it sounds super cool and to see what it can do.",
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"content": "The author supports his idea by adding tons of pro-Venus exploration details throughout the passage. Multiple reasons where given such as comparing Venus to Earth, looking back at the two planets history, and also shared natural events. All are things that push us to keep observing Venus even with difficult conditions.\n\nIn the fourth paragraph of the article, the author talks about how Venus may have once been covered in majestic oceans, and most likely able to support numerous forms of life. The author uses this to explain why astronomers are so intrigued by Venus. Even if Venus is inhospitable right now NASA would still like to explore the surface grab samples and bring them back to be tested.\n\nParagraph two elaborates mostly on comparing the planets Stating, \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" Venus is the closest planent to Earth in terms of density and size.\" Connections and inferences can be made from this statement on how Earth and Venus might be similar. While in the 8th paragraph the author claims, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Meaning technology should grow enough to keep us hungry for exploring Venus.\n\nIn conclusion The author wants us to keep trying to explore venus no matter the dangerous obstacle. He shows this by adding plenty of positive and interesting facts about the relationship between Earth and Venus.",
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"content": "I think author uses quote when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus buding I take test again symbolizes spring brings new life hope But home thought come The hibiscus hedge The way gentle grandmother BOAT RIDE night gone Vietnam one night much hope like abundance next foreign land nothing like old home The flowers bloom spring bringing new life There chance move hope There hope spring come flowers come birds come It chance let go The ending quote said bring hope like sort promises get better Hope makes every obstacle get easier everything bearable",
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"content": "Dear The Local Newspaper students promoted higher grade levels teachers require research papers In opinion computer helps complete research paper contents best What makes students parents happy see child s paper Advances technology advances technology teach handeye coordination gives ability learn far away places people even allows people talk online people To begin advances technology beacause teaches handeye coordination In recent poll seen TIME magazine showed people use computers large increase coordination people clumsy poorly coordinated professional tennis player CAPS I started using computer I always would play tennis living bad choice I poorly coordinated I always missed tennis ball matches So I decided stop Then I started use computer coordination improved Now I barely miss tennis balls advances technology improve teach handeye coordination Another reason advances technology gives people ability learn far away places people writer People like research place go vacation buisness trip would like know Not knowing anything vacation destination like knowing s dinner tonight clearly unreasonable Recent studies show person knows vacation destination enjoyable Thus vacations go one profitable airplane companies Also knowing different cultures people far away places gives people better perspective world live Thus advances technology give ability learn far away places people Furthermore advances technology allow people talk online people creator CAPS online chat programs help people communicate beneficial everybody For example helps people reconnect former friends It also beneficial students forget homework assignment log onto ask classmate A recent article found showed online chat programs helped people communicate advances technology allow people talk online people In conclusion advances technology improve handeye coordination teach people far away places people allows people talk online people When voting decision please take part support advances technology beneficial everybody Thank time",
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"content": "It goes without saying that in recent years there has been a proliferation of voluntary organizations which are set out to prompt individuals’ contributions to the society. With regard to this trend, an array of people propose that schools should integrate voluntary work into the graduation requirements. From my viewpoint,unpaid services are definitely in students’ interest, however, students should be encouraged instead of being compelled. \nTo commence with, it is indubitable that volunteerism helps students bolster their social skills and widen the scope of their knowledge, which will stand them in good stead when applying for a permanent job. Undertaking a period of unpaid work is a golden chance for students to collaborate with an assortment of people from all social backgrounds, together with whom they can share their experiences and understandings. For example, my aunt, who is a qualified nurse, attributes her success to the valuable experiences that she gained when working in the local hospital in the role of a candy striper. In her words, without those years of volunteering, her achievements would be far from what she accomplishes today.\nMoreover, it is worth bearing in mind that through volunteer service, students will be better cognizant of the meaningfulness of life and therefore, be more grateful for what they have. As a matter of fact, children nowadays tend to have whatever they want at their fingertips, which renders their demands even more unreasonable. A voluntary trip to the poverty-stricken areas, which give them a chance to meet destitute children, will make them realize that what they take for granted is what other people yearn for. For instance, one of my cousins, Linh, used to be an exigent child due to the indulging way of upbringing her parents use. However, once time she took part in a voluntary organization aiming at underprivileged children . After the time there, it dawned on her that she was blessed with nutritional meals and expensive clothes while many other children weren’t and since then, she has appreciated her life more. \nDespite the aforementioned benefits, mandatory services may also be counterproductive in the absence of students’ willingness. Out of disinclination, they may try to shirk their duties or do them unenthusiastically. Therefore, rather than compel students to join voluntary organizations, schools should induce them by showing the significance of their commitment to the local community. And if possible, students should be spoilt for choice so that they can choose the activities that are congruous with their abilities and hobbies. \nIn conclusion, voluntary work is indeed advantageous to both students themselves and the society. However, to obtain the optimal results, students’ willingness should be guaranteed.",
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"content": "In story winter Hibiscus author Minfong Ho ends when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test ended show determination good country show memories grandmother help strive best new country new home In beginning story Saeng flower shop sees flowers home country growing poto At sight flowers memories flood back memories bring joy sadness Then returns home tells mother failed test tell actions disappointed II failed test Saeng dare look mother eye nervously tore leab shredding bits After planted flower vegetable garden The buying planting vegetable shows Saeng wants remember grandmother home Thinking grandmother helps survive better helps want succeed new home Memories grandmother make sad away make happy",
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"content": "the technology to read peoples emotions could back fire as well as help people. Many times people want to keep their emotions a secret to keep from concequences, or maybe they just don't want to talk about a certain topic just yet or at all. These machines could be like the next lie detectors if perfected and approved with more facial detections in the muscles to where only the slightest huge twitch of anger or fear would set it off, meaning less inaccurate sentences and more of the right people in jail. Another positive thing would be early school use, to where if the children got in trouble it would begin to sulpt that lying is useless and should just tell the truth straight forwardly. Many times this machine could be used for good purposes rather it's on the youth or older people, this could help out with many situations of the cruelest things in todays world. And with that it would be amazing and usefull tool to use in the world.",
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"content": "If you like to join programs and to help out with people who need help then you should consider joining Seagoing cowboy. why you should join is because seagoing cowboys have helped many countries that have been left to ruin and if you join you could have the chance to help the ruined countries who need help through disaster. Also meeting the needs of other people and seeing the needs of other countries.\n\nUNRRA is a group of 44 nations joined together to form United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation. UNRRA has hired Seagoing cowboys to help with their program for example in 1945 World War 11 was over in Europe, and many were left to ruin. In that case UNRRA and seagoing cowboys helped by taking care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. So meaning that they helped even though it was a very long project. But it is worth a try to do something new if not tried before.\n\nPutting the idea of joining there are some benificial things of joining. For example you get to visit different places and meeting new people could be fun. By joining it could bring good oportunities like it could open up the world to some people. And it makes you aware of people of other countries and their needs not just yours. it would help people feel better knowing that you just helped animals or other people.",
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"content": "After reading this article I feel both supportive and non-supportive of these driverless cars. When reading I noticeed both postive and negative things regarding these new cars. I think that they will be a convinence, but at the same time a safety issue. The other thing that would make me think twice is who would be responsible if anything were to happen?\n\nThere are a few ways I think these cars have positive aspects on them. They can be convinient in many ways. If you need to help out a child, but cant because you are driving, that could be a big help. The new designs of the car also make it sound like the car is safe. It would need more than enough senors, so the car would alert you at all times when something is approching. It can tell you when there is an accident or traffic, and even road construction.\n\nWith that being said, that could also be a saftey issue. Yes, the car notifies you when there could be a possiple threat, but what if that person wasnt paying attention? It says that the manufacturers would put entertainment in the car so the driver could have something to do, but that can be very distracting. Even if the heads-up display works the driver could be totally focussed on something else. It could cause an accident or if bad enough it could cause lives to be taken.\n\nMy other concern is if you were to get into an accident who would be at fault. Would it be you because you werent paying attention or would it be the manufacturers fault? If someone were to get injured in a car that was supposed to be a driverless car, id imagine they would be mad. They may even blame the company who made the cars. If the injury or accident was bad enough there might even be lawsuits held from the people to the company. As of right now we wouldnt know who would be fully responsilbe if anything like that were to happen.\n\nAfter reading the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" article it made me think of lots of positive and negative outlooks. There is really no telling at this point how well exactly this whole idea could go.",
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"content": "Laughter frustrating ca nt manage get someone laugh Is really possible upset ca nt even crack little smile There s something laugh every situation sometimes takes thinking imagination figure I personally experience laughter I could look order feel like everything okay Last I babysitting nice sunny day craving chocolate frostys At time I could legally drive anybody outside family decided call sister She day work seemed perfect day frostys We waited seemed like forever get house finally hour pulled driveway The kids excited The four us loaded back car went When got started getting car s I noticed something wrong locked keys car keys still ignition car running I still getting kids car d think I would reach grab case I asked CAPS leave car running Are nt going get keys response CAPS I locked Do nt close door late I instinctively closed door done I nt really thought fact I could saved happening especially considering I one noticed first Apparently I nt listen people s responses I ask question kids practically rolling ground laughing hard I could nt figure funny Then hit I felt like idiot We stuck parking lot three kids locked outside car running nt really know Our first solution problem call mom bring spare nt really sure spare time My mom said nt would call dad ask We called first laughed us stupid said truck somebody would come get go meeting Obviously could nt go get called mom back agreed go get though point nt happy leave work fix stupidity She told us worry car nothing going happen locked go inside get frostys Through I trying keep kids entertained nt really need us They busy role playing closing door said They thought hilarious I humored although think pretty funny watch exaggerate whole thing Instead us making kids laugh making us laugh We sat almost two hours mom showed turned dad s truck like thought house hanging board spare keys That nt matter though mattered get kids back home mom showed us The car sitting using gas nobody car funny part day neither blaming everything making fill tank money I earned day babysitting The funny part kids Still today laugh little adventure makes realize kids bring laughter world encourage happiness everyone I believe everybody needs little laughter day even think worst day ever Laughter really",
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"content": "There have been numerous debatable arguments about whether high school learners should be spurred to make comments or even criticize their educators with the aim of improving educational quality or not. While there are some advocates of the latter idea because of educators’ loss of motivation, I believe that it is better for students to give their own points of view, and even judge their teachers because teachers’ strengths and weaknesses can be identified.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the option to prevent students from expressing opinions and evaluating their teachers is reasonable to some extent because it might create a sense of disrespect and discipline. Given the fact that high school students are generally immature, inexperienced and impulsive; thereby, they are more likely to give emotional feedback, which can trigger a breakdown in student-teacher relationships. As a consequence, the lessons are easily interrupted and cause chaos in the class, which will reduce the learning quality of the lectures.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that an acceptance for students to give their own viewpoints and evaluate their schoolteachers is beneficial because teachers’ strengths and weaknesses can be identified. When educators receive honest feedback from their students, they can easily realize whether their lectures and pedagogical skills go well or not; therefore, they can learn from that feedback to improve their teaching methodology to suit students’ needs. To illustrate, the PISA English Center has a weekly report form for students to give their notion on their teachers or other things related to their studies in order to find a suitable approach to help students achieve their targets. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while some maintain that a freely discussed learning environment should not be spurred owing to schoolteachers’ loss of motivation, I am more convinced that this kind of class model should be developed in the foreseeable future because educators can identify their own strengths and weaknesses, which help them have a better performance in later lectures.",
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"content": "The mood auther good He s proud lives The thing matters life family His family cares alot watch matter thankful",
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"content": "In memoir I think mood warm nice oneOne example warm discribes home For example says paragraph Within walls young parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen This warm mood think kitchen think warm room sweet eromahs delicious food ovenA reason nice mood cultures got along treated like family For example says paragraph All theus cultures came together great solidarity friendship It nice alot racism time cultures overcame togetherThe last reason warm nice mood apreciates parents done For example says paragraph I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever This saying greatfull parents left Cuba give better lifeThats I think mood memoir warm nice",
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"content": "It is the conundrum for the government that where to spend money, building new public facilities such as museum and town halls or to renovate existing ones. As per my view, preserving and maintaining ancient public places is more needful than availing new public building. Two primitive reasons for this are: Renovate existing places is cost-effective solution for many world’s governments, Old places often have it’s own historical values.\n\nTo begin with, redeveloping museums and town halls proved to be a cheaper solution than building new public places from scratch, for the developing countries’ government. Once these places renovated properly, they look like a new one and even within allocated budget. For instance, the Brazilian government has renovated all the monuments of the Rio city instead public demand for setting up new recreational facilities, because of steep financial resources. The government contemplated that the actual spending is only 3 percent compared to the plan of creating new public buildings. Additionally, republicans also admiring this step from the government afterward. This example clarifies that why spending on preservation of the existing places is so important, in terms of limited financial options.\n\nConsequently, old places have a strong connection with respective countries culture and history. Many world’s cities are known as heritage cities by it’s ancient buildings. In this way, people’s name and history attached with those places and thus emotions is also the key factor for the government to put more focus on reinventing existing places than creating new ones, even if the government is financially capable to build new places. For example, the Indian government believed in maintaining old building in Delhi as it depicts Indian culture and history of the popular personalities. Many of the city’s monuments named after famous national persons, kings of old time, and politicians. In fact, though, the Indian government is too financially healthy to build new places, the government prefers to renovate old ones.\n\nTo conclude, by describing both the points I can say that it is not only necessary for countries’ government to save their financial resources in order to preserve old places but also important for them to preserve historical values and culture of their own country.",
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"content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho explains obstacles Saeng went coming different country In story Saeng failed driving test reminded home tropical flowers Moreover author writes end story referring geese when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again This part story important examines growth hope change us geese come back hibiscus change buetiful blossed flower Furthermore explains give change environment th plant lives geese come back changed environment That part story important reader concludes Saeng thoughts hopes future wile adapting new enviorment",
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"content": "Do you think we should use technoloy to read emotions? Using technology to read students emotional expressions is a great idea!\n\nIf we used this futuristic technology we can recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored! Which Dr. Huang predicts \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Also the same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery! Most of the communication we human use is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\n\nAlso this cool technology can indicate the difference between a gunuine smile or a fake one that is forced. In a real smile the zygomatic major lifts the conrner of your mouth! The muscles called the orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus makes a crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\n\nLastly according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions, moving your facial muscles not only express emotions but, also may help produce them!\n\nBy all this information I just gave would be so much help for the students in class! It will be even more helpful for the teachers because teachers would easily understand when a student is bored, doesn't understand what is being taught or is very confused.\n\nDon't you think this technology is very radishing? The best part of this technology would be if they made glasses from the same technology! Yeah, it might come a bit expensive but I would buy it, won't you?",
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"content": "It is argued that studying at university or tertiary education is the best way to succeed in an occupation, while others disagree and think that it is far easier to have a career after school. This essay agrees that going to university or college should be the main option and will give a description of what opportunities the students will have.\n\nThere can be no doubt that going to tertiary education can help people gain opportunities in many ways. Indeed, leaving at university or college is making social life easier where you can make friends, therefore this will reduce stress and improve mental health. Additionally, the chance to get scholarships and go abroad will be higher, and this help a lot after school life. For example, interaction with other cultures can help people be more confident when dealing with the public.\n\nHowever, proponents of the former idea may say that real life needs no theories but know-how. Early exposure to life as those who work right after school is often argued to be a prelude to what awaits them in the future, which is beneficial for making irreversible decisions. Furthermore, setting foot in the real world without depending on their parents can a person mature and decisive since the man needs to live by his own abilities.\n\nIn conclusion, I think studying at university or college is more important than having a job right after school due to, mostly, mental health benefits and the chance to have a good reputation, therefore,therefore making people look up to.",
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"content": "I think driverless cars should be allowed as where a human could make a mistake the car will be hardwired to know how to drive and it will not forget how to do so. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" This is a sentence from the text, asks the question: if the car gets into an accendent who is to blame? Well by the time we are allowed to have driverless cars there should have also been improvements on cars in other areas as well like safty. If the safty of the car increases then all responsability would fall on the manufacturer as he didn't do his job correctly and the car had a problem he did not fix.\n\nNow that the blame has been covered lets talk about how the sensors of cars could help. Sensors are nothing new anyway, we have been testing cars with sensors sense the 1980s. And sense then the sensors have become more advanced to detect and respond to danger. If we use the sensors then we could make it where the car could easly avoide any problems on the road and could keep our people stay safe. As our population and techonolgy grows we expand our levels of changing and of difference, so why don't we use sensors to help the car prevent somebody from dying. Also another thing if the driver was to be drinking before getting in the car then the driver's judgement is already off, but if the car drove its self then that driver has a less chance of wrecking and killing himslef of killing somebody else.\n\nAs we move foward in the years to come we should think of the advancements we could make with technology. This would leave the human race with less room to make a misstake and hurt another humans or any living species on this planet. So where do I stand on driverless cars? I say we should use them because someday, somehow it might just save lives.",
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"content": "We drive places all the time. Everytime you turn your car on you pollute the atmosphere. There are many reasons for why we need to cut back on cars. Starting with how much the parking spots cost in cities,The pollution in our atmosphere, and the crowding of all the cars .There are way to many people on the roads.\n\nFirst, Vaubans streets are completely car free,(Author Elizabeth Rosental, paragraph 2). As a result of going car free,70 percent of Vaubans families do not have cars , and 57 percent have moved here and sold their cars because of it(Paragraph3). When i had a car i was always tense. Im way much happier this way, said (Heidrum walter,a media trainer and mother of two). Parking spots can cost up to 40,000 dollars a year. Why spend that!\n\nEven though some streets are completely car free some are not. The pollutin is going straight up in to our atmosphere. Paris enforced a driving ban to clear the air of the global city to help out(source 2,paragraph 10). People were getting tickets becuase they were using them way to much (paragraph 12). I cant beleive that just because of cutting out ussage of some cars people are experiencing nicer days all around in the atmosphere. Beijing,China is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world(source 2, paragraph 14).Wow, thats some shocking statistics!\n\nThe crowding of all the automobiles is out the roof! Whats most interesting is the amount of cars per family ,says Michael sivak,paragraph33).If this pattern persists it will be a huge affect on the world we live in(paragraph 34).They understand that some people need them for there jobs , they just want us to help and save when we can(paragraph43). This is going to help the generations to come.\n\nLast, the costs of the parking spots for cars in the city,the pollution going into our atmosphere , and the crowding of cars is going to hurt our kids in a stronger affect one day. We need to help out when we can and do what it takes. It takes some time but we need to stand together and win this battle. Start car pooling with other families to bring the kids to sports and school. We all need to work together!",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered the emotional expressions of students? Me too, which is why the Facial Action Coding System can help solve this problem. It compares everything to a \"neutral\" face, so you can see if you're one hundred percent happy, one hundred percent sad, etc. Each emotion will be distributed in the results of the test. Dr. Paul Eckman being the creator.\n\nIt can be used as an emotion indicator on students in a classroom. Dr. Paul Eckman has classified the tool to only six basic emotions, which he says,\"Happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadnessand then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" For example, he noticed that when people raised their eyebrows they became \"surprised.\" Or if you tighten your lips, you show \"anger.\" He sees signs of emotion with each expression the face makes.\n\nVideo imagery is even being used to spot emotions in pictures or paintings. The pictures being able to describe the faces of the children. Dr. Huang states that,\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" So even though many kids have different emotional faces, each student is making the same expression. The software can even see mixed emotions, just like in \"Mona Lisa.\"\n\nWe make the same calculations every day. For example, if you were a teacher looking at your students, you could most likely tell how someone was feeling by the look on their face. Dr. Huang says,\"Artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions.\" So da Vinci used an altered version of this way back when, but was mostly mental capabilities. The value of reading the students emotions, could become very helpful in seeing if a student is having trouble in class or with friends.\n\nMuscle differences can even indicate a false emotion! The author says,\"the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth, and in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" So if you catch one of your students smiling sideways at you, then you know they're treating you to a fake smile. Faces don't lie... if you notice a student false smiling then you may find that they are lying. Try not to use false smiles because you might get caught.\n\nThis technology is useful to sensing the emotions of the students in a classroom. If someone is having trouble with classwork, then this could help to determine the problem and find a fix. The video imagery is useful in finding emotion in old pictures from the past. Also, being able to check if someone is using a fake smile is quite handy in terms of the truth. All in all, the Facial Action Coding System is a handy tool that helps sense the students emotions.",
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"content": "In this article the author clearly shows that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author uses logical reasoning and facts that make his claim valid. In the passage there are many ways that suggest the advantages of exploring Venus despite the dangers of the mission.\n\nIn the passage provided the author states both sides to this arguement but shows how exploring Venus could benefit us. In the passage he states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becuse of the insight to be gain on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" With that being said, humans have been capable of accomplishing many things, if there is a problem we always find a way around it.\n\nAlthough there are dangers to exploring Venus, there are benefits that cannot be denied. Discovering new ways to go without harm is no doubt a work in process. But the author here portrays the ways it can be accomplished.",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper years computers nt exist many people internet homes But effect giving people negative However I believe computers positive effect people many ways Such internet allows people keep touch gives technology skills prepare hitech jobs allows find learn new things Dont think computers help society People live parts world lucky get meet lot people different places country But ca nt talk phone due longdistance calls computer people nt lose touch Its quite easy people talk others anywhere without actually see Computers easy way stay touch family Therefore people talk distant relatives nt even go visit Having computer helps people keep distant friends family close touch Lets face world relying technology computers But young people start using computers sooner life make easier get better job Lots jobs ask technological skills order hired computer younger automatically prepares young adults life Besides computer injust every work place uptodate restaurants hotels retail stores even construction business Nevertheless computer skills nt good skill necessary skill Last Computers faster easier way find new things learn different topics Instead looking various books encyclopedias researching search topic Although computer internet nt completely replace books valuable researching tool Someone never pyramids could easily research pyramids see amazing pictures ancient history learn much Computers help learn much world without leave house Now time make decision whether think computers giving positive effect people reasons keeping intouch giving",
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"content": "The mood story happy In answer I show created itFirstly author always good mood matter happened parents nt He great memories kitchen smelling good He also loved Cuban musicSecondly showed thankful towards family bringing world caring themThese two things show Narciso Rodriguez made happy passage read",
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"content": "Computers huge impact society make everything better People spend way much time computer Computers help brain make fat lot people cause drama People stop spending much time computers Computers help brain means possible Think sure alot work computers kids spend time gand online pointless stuff Instead could going outside even study internet open world anyone goes child computer exposed many vile things help future Its proven fact less time spend watching tv computer get better grades I remember mom always yelled computer getting bad grades took computer away much better grades So computer make smarter The computer make gain quit bit weight If computer lot sitting around lot people eat computer So sitting around computer eating That make gain weight I know experience active going outside exercising really makes feel good Once gain weight hard get rid Sitting around like couch healthy You become obese So could say happy weight one ever said healthy A lot people died frombeing beaky It puts huge tall life If dont want die heavy I advise get computer go outside live yor life The last thing makes computers bad drama cause Mose pople facebook aim ask anyone one likley say gotten fight one Also something new called formspring let anomous people go say horrible things One friends victim ruins Also many people facebook lie anyone easily find kill days people know hack peoples computers get info So computers unhealthy deadly Why would want things happen easy back computer time Remember computers dont help brain make fat cause lot drama So please dont use computer",
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"content": "Are you with or against the use of this technology to read students emotional expressions? I would have to say that I am with the use of this technology to read students emotional expressions. I agree with this claim because, today, technology is almost used for everything and it is still growing. The evidence to support my claim is\" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\", \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each epression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emtion).\", and \"His new computer software stores similar anamotical information as electronic code.\". This is why I agree with the claim \"the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.\"",
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"content": "The mood created It makes reader think About family And sacrificed And ot makes feel warm It makes think family friends And culture And It also makes thinking All family make And It Also makes happy It makes think About fun And family together All In All It s A great makes feel flood emotions It makes think best thing earth family And friends",
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"content": "Many today feel that countries should prioritise vocational training over higher education due to changes in the labour market. In my opinion, though there are strong economic reasons to support this idea, university education holds greater value.\r\n\r\nThose in favour of more practical skills training point out the financial benefits. Most university graduates are burdened with student debt and face uncertain job prospects. In contrast, training schools are cheap, fast, and ease students into steady employment immediately. The jobs they train for are also most likely recession-proof and durable, including positions as cooks, hotel managers, and skilled technicians. Someone who is firmly established in such a job in their early 20s does not have to deal with the pressure associated with university life and its incumbent debts. Instead, they can begin to set aside money for a house or start a family.\r\n\r\nNonetheless, lacking a university degree limit one's options. The jobs available will pay well initially and be secure, but offer narrow scope for advancement and virtually no opportunity to switch the career paths. An individual with a university degree, on the other hand, might begin from a lower position, but has a higher ceiling on future earnings. It is also possible for them to explore a variety of fields. Most good jobs require at least a bachelor’s degree even for simple internship vacancies. Lacking such a degree, means restricting oneself to manual labour or service industry jobs. The actual learning that takes place at university, particularly for those with multi skills majors or studying at liberal art schools, also encourages students to consider a wide range of possible career options.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing funding for vocational training is an attractive yet short sighted approach that curbs possibilities. Governments ought to continue to support higher education even in dark economic times in order to reap future rewards.",
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"content": "That \"Facial Action Coding System\" is a Joke\n\nWe all know that there are different emotions going are the school. The different types of emotions that are commonly at a school are happy, mad, sad, bored, or even nuetral. My question is, why do you care how the student is feeling? I know that the teacher himself or herself does not want to be here so, what makes them think that us students wants to be here.\n\nA student comes in the school the teacher says, \"Goodmorning!\" The student just walks past without saying anything. Let me take a guess, the student is not feeling school, sleepy, or even that student might not like the teacher. We do not need a \"Facial Action Coding System\" pulled out to just find out the students feeling.\n\nIn paragraph eight, it states, \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" A person lied, why can the investigator not do the job how it is suppose to be done taking everything step by step intead of getting a machine to do all of the job.\n\nBy the way, how are you feeling now that I am stating my opinion? I hope you are feeling great because I know I am.",
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"content": "Venus is a very dense planet, with all these giant storms and what not it's a miracle we could even get technology on the planet without it melting straight away due to the heat or exploding due to the lightning. Venus is also a very dangerous planet but could provide benefits to us if we were to fully land on it and explore it like new resources, new lifeforms, or history about the planets past.\n\nThe author thinks that it's a great idea to explore Venus because it's mysterious and unknown to us. What the planet contains as well as examining the huge storms that happen over there would provide very useful information about the planets past and the creatures that once inhabited and thrived at one point or another. Venus also has some striking similarites to earth like the rocky sediment that rests there, valleys, craters, and even entire mountains so at one point maybe people existed there as well.\n\nThe author also thinks that the planet deserves to be explored because it has been unexplored for as long as we can remember, the longest amount of time we could keep technology up there is about a few hours before it winds up being destroyed. Also the conditions up there are impossible for humans to step foot onto Venus, not just because of the weather but also the temperature is too hot as well. The planet also doesn't have any water or food that could sustain a human even if the planet had a lot of earth's weathers and tempertures, it would still end up as a desolate wasteland.\n\nNasa is still making advancements towards Venus exploration using electronics made out of Silicon Carbide. They stick these electrons in a simulation of Venus's temperature and weather and noted that they survived up until three weeks. So maybe full Venus exploration is indeed very likely in the future if we find the right resources that can survive Venus's harsh terrain and climate.",
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"content": "Nowadays it is a common problem for young men to find their first job. Society tries to help them and gives them some opportunities to get experience and, at the same time, keep studying. I disagree for the reason I think it is unfair for teenagers to work without a salary in their leisure time.\r\n\r\n ,Basically every work has to be paid tonot matter of worker’s skills and age. Some labour which is doing for helping people is unpaid but it is a volunteer and it comes from the heart. There are many social services which help people and all this workers have a salary. The main goal of society is to teach teenagers respect any labour and it is impossible without fair conditions for everyone, such as salary, insurance, and others.\r\n\r\nThe second reason for kids not doing unpaid work is focus for studying. If society wants to get educated workers for future it is necessary to let teenagers spend most of their time in school. Doubtless, if someone has a desire to help the community it is a great opportunity to get an experience and humane gesture. Although it always have to be when person sure that it would not distract from the education.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as teenagers have the same work conditions as adults and they are good at study it is very pleasant to help in community work as volunteers. The young generation is a future of the world and they have to respect any work.",
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"content": "\"Facial expressions for each emotion are universal even though individuals often show varying degrees of expresions\", as observed by Dr. Huang. A new software called Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The process starts when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the person's face. Each characteristic movement of our facial muscles is associated with six basic emotions which are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. The use of this technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it will help teachers know when their students are confused, awares the teacher if the students are going through something, and help the teachers make learning more enjoyable due to them knowing when the students are bored.\n\nThis new software can be useful in a classroom environment because it will help the teachers know when their students are having difficulites or are confused. There are times when students are too afraid to speak up about not knowing the material because others might find it more simple than them. The Facial Action Coding System will allow teachers to know when their students are confused about a topic, and it will help them give that student the assistance they need. Some students can have difficulties when it comes to learning new material and take longer than others to grasp it. This new software will be of great use in the classroom because teachers will be able to offer help to the students that need it or direct students who do understand the material to those who don't. The system could also be used to notify the teacher when their students do understand the material, so they don't continue to go over it and be able to move on. Overall, this system will benefit both the students and the teachers.\n\nAnother reason to why this new system will be valuable in a classroom is that it will allow the teachers to be aware of other emotions the students are having besides confusion. Some students could be dealing with issues at home, and when they come to school they aren't in the best mood. When students of any age are dealing with an event or issue, it can affect them when learning.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could be used to detect a students emotional expressions, and in doing that it will allow the teacher to give his/her students the attention they need. When students have the right mind set, they are more prepared to learn and give it their all. When students are filled with sadness or even anger, they will not make the best decisions both in and out of class. Making sure the students are an environment where they feel safe and comfortable is important, and this new software can be of great help with that.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could also be helpful of letting the teacher know when his/her students are bored, so they could find a way to make it more enjoyable. There are students who have more trouble learning when the material is presented to them in a lecture format. Many students learn easier with more hands on activities or discussions. When students become bored in class, they can tend to get distracted or stop paying attention. The Facial Action Coding System can be used to recognize when a student is becoming bored or unamused with the lesson. This will notify the teachers that they may want to try new ways of presenting the material, so that their students don't get bored and stop paying attention. The system could also let the teachers know when their students are actually entertained with the material or how they are teaching, so they can continue to do it the way they are. When it comes to younger children or teenagers, it becomes harder for teachers to keep them involved and listening, so it is important to keep a classroom and teaching simple and enjoyable for the students. The more they want to learn about the material, the more they will understand it.\n\nAlthough this new system is of great use, it is possible that it is not the most reliable. As humans we are a more complex system to understand at times. Emotions are difficult to control at times and even understand. As individuals, especially at a younger age, we can have trouble understanding our own feelings and how to deal with them. At the end of the day it is a machine that is telling you how you feel, and it cannot always be accurate. It can be helpful in many situations, but we should still be carefu with how credible the data is.\n\nThe use of this technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it will help teachers know when their students are confused, awares the teacher if the students are going through something, and help them make learning more enjoyable when the students are becoming bored. This new software can be of many uses in a classroom environment, and it can better prepare students for the world around them. Technology has changed and advanced over time to the point of being able to recognize emotional expressions on people. With new advancements being made in technology all the time, it will lead to more changed and hopefully help solve problems and better the world around us.",
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"content": "Nowadays all over the world more and more families immigrate from rural to urban areas and such a situation leads to a number of undesirable consequences for city residents and regions in general. In this essay I shall try to cover some reasons for this trend as well as provide a number of solutions.\nTo start with, we have to consider the logic behind this movement. Firstly, as a rule, the countryside does not have enough educational institutions, so after finishing high school most students are obliged to move to other parts of the country in order to obtain higher education and, eventually, apply for well-paid jobs that are available only in bigger cities. Secondly, despite being provided with basic services, people still feel the lack of entertainment facilities, such as cinemas, theaters and others. In other words, most of the rural population is bored and have nothing else to do, that is why they are bound to immigrate to urban areas.\nLuckily, there are a number of solutions, which could be implemented and, hopefully, they can solve or, at least, ease the situation. Initially, it is vitally important that the government allocates more funds to rural areas and use this money for construction of public amenities such as hospitals, schools, kindergartens, and others. If those facilities were introduced, then villagers would have fewer incentives to move. The second option that we have to consider is to promote living in the countryside by providing tax cuts, subsidies and other measures of economic stimulation, which could prove to be effective in the long run.\nAll things considered, it can be clearly seen that the lack of facilities and money are the two most important reasons as to why more villagers move to the cities. Unless the government provides a number of economic incentives along with public facilities, it might be difficult to overturn this trend.",
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"content": "Patience like waiting turn talk waiting something load patience helpful many ways waiting till get destination waiting person called answer phone talk Patience expreriences difficulties without complaining",
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"content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It can be very useful and impactful to know the emotions that some students might be having. The technology can point out emotions and moods teachers don't see or know for sure are happening. This can be a new step towards help students when they are down and need help with something.\n\nThe text says, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then assoicated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" This says that any face expression that is shows by a students the Facial Action Coding System can pick it up and compare it to the emotion the student is having. The FACS can help teachers recongize the emotions because the calculation of our emotions happens every day. Some people or friends might be able to pick up on how a students is feeling based on the way they look, but not all the time. Sometimes it is hard to pick up on how a person is feeling because their facial trait can convey different expression. Dr. Huang with his new computer software has similar anatomical information as electronic code to help and understand the emotions of people through different facial expression. FACS can be even more helpful to students in any classroom. The about 1 teacher for about 12 to 16 highschool students a class, the teacher might not be able to see you at a certain time. If the computer can pick up your emotion of confused it can better help you understand and modify the lesson for the students. The text says, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" This shows how FACS can also make class and school more enjoying and interesting. Not have to look at the same type of videos over and over, but being able to get different types of video. As humans it hard to try and understand each other because of how different we actually are. We don't really understand each other facial expression besides the ones we actually see. We don't know the difference between a real simile and a fake similie.\n\nThat why FACS would be good to use because it is programmed to know the difference between all facial expressions. It can help teachers understand students and can also help students inside the class room. If this is actually brought to schools and tested I feel it will have a be impact on students and teachers. You will probably see a change in students behaviors and grades with the helping of FACS.",
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"content": "Wow... a new techonology just to identify human emotions kinda sounds awesome, right? It really shows how much technology has improved these past several years. Having this technology to read students' emotional expresses could be beneficial, you could tell what a student may be going through, behind the mask of emotions they're hiding. Here are three examples why it would be a good cause to have a computer that identifies human emotions.\n\nFor an example, the \"Mona Lisa\" painting by \"Leonardo da Vinci.\" You've probably seen that painting once in your lifetime before. Mona Lisa seems to be happy right? Well, using the Facial Action Coding System, and according to Paragraph 1 in \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it states that she's actually 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Who would've known about that by JUST looking at a picture? No one would've really been able to deceifer what she's feeling.\n\nThe computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, there's 44 major muscles, and they must move just like human muscles. An \"action unit\" is movement of one or more muscles. Dr Huang observed, and stated, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression.\"\n\nThey compare the expression between a neutral face, and the painting or a real face. The software can identify the mixed emotions in both of the projects. Just imagine being on your computer, and your computer could read that you're devastated, or super ecstatic, JUST by a facial action coding system. That seems honestly amazing.\n\nIn conclusion, these are three examples why it would be a good cause to have a computer that identifies human emotions. It could scan, and basically read your mood. It's also a better way for computers, and humans to communicate.",
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"content": "Driving a car is not a necessity in life and countries are starting to realize that. A car is merely \"just a means of getting from [point] A to B\" (Source 4). The stress and pollution caused by these vehicles is not worth it for some countries. They would rather have less stressed people, less pollution and less traffic accidents and congestion in the streets.\n\nGermany believes that the lifestyle of driving a car is not neccessary. \"There are only two places to park - large garages [] where a car owner can buy a space\" (Source 1) These parking spaces cost $40,000, and the car owner buys this space along with a house. As a result of this phenomenon \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars\" (Source 1) and 57 percent of people sold their car and chose to move to Vauban, Germany. Cars are \"responsible for 12 percent of greehouse gas emissions in Europe\" (Source 1). Yet there have been efforts to lower the greenhouse gases, Vauban put a stop to cars to make the citites nice, and better for walking.\n\nParis is one of the most known tourist destinations in the world. People cluster in from around the world to see the Effiel Tower, which stands straight into the sky. Their main tourist attraction is a monument that goes into the sky. No wonder they want to cut down on cars' pollution. \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals\" (Source 2).\n\nA home to 7 million people, Bogota, Colombia is trying to spread their program globally and reduce the pollution from the once nessecary cars. \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog\" (Source 3). Violaters are faced with $25 fines. In a car free day, \"the turnout was large\" (Source 3). It is believed to be a great oppurtunity to relieve stress and lower air pollution. Bogota's program is \"generating a revolutionary change\" (Source 3) and the idea is spreading across borders.\n\n\"America's love affair with its vehicles seems to be cooling\" (Source 4). The United States is one of the top most prosperous countries in the world and the culture revolves around transportation. Americans depend on their cars to help them preform their daily lives. The explaination of the \"cooling of vehicles\" is a result of unemployment and the recession. Many Americans are \"cash-strapped\" (Source 4), and cannot afford new cars. If the pattern of car ownership continues to decrease, it will benefit the environment with less pollution and car emissions. But, a negative results for the car industry's.\n\nPedestrians, bicycles, cars, commerical and public transportation all play a crucial role in the lives of people across the globe. They are \"woven into a connected network\" (Source 4) to save time, resources, pollution and promote safety.",
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"content": "Patience waiting without complaining something want When I outdoor mail mom two older sisters younger brother niece dog I waited patiently go store try iPad When I I realized iPad awesome After ward went get ice cream My little brother got root beer flavored slushie niece dog I got vanilla ice cream After I finished ice cream I put container ground let dog lick rest bottom We spent hours What surprise Then went home",
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"content": "I feel u right chouse remove setian books movies music magazines apropreat people children Some people like thim others depends If I go library books I want restricted list library small fee arould depending typ book For instance wanted movie restrected wouls pay something like redbox rental fee That I think restrecting sertion items library PERSON",
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"content": "There are many reason why Electrol College should not be kept, but it is the right thing if we change it to election by popular vote. This Reason why I pick this is because us people want the right leader to leads us on a good path thats why we are citizens our job is to vote to them.\n\nThe electrol college is not the best option because the electrol college doesn't give everyone an oppurtunity to select who they want as there leader, In article three where it says \"Everyone's President\" the author states that \"No region (South,Northeast, etc.) has enough electrol votes to elect a president.\" This mean that most of the states in the south do not get the chance to vote for a presiden and this increases Romney chances of wining, and what if the candidate that wins with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president? The citizens of the United States will feel as if they aren't apart of this country, not giving the rights or freedom this country promised them. The citizens will feel like their votes do not count, when they have there opinion on something the new president will have no interest towards it, this means to us that he isn't really a president. In article last paragragh the author states \"people who think that a single vote may decide an elcetion.\"In the past plenty of ties had happened before they handled this by the election would be thrown to the House of Representative.\n\nElection by popular vote is fair in both ways they give the people a chances to pick who they want and who will make a difference to our country. Its not fair if we vote and if we don't have enough electrol college our votes don't count in our region, that takes away what we been living in this country for. In the past they agreed on abloshing the electrol college also the article states that \"over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" As citizens it's important to listen to what we have to say cause we are the people who make up this country. They don't want election by popular vote cause they are afraid that a tie will happen because an election usually stops around 538 but it is highly unlikey to happen, it only happened twice in history for election by popular vote in 1968 by Richard Nixon and 1992 by Bill Clinton.\n\nThere are many reason why Electrol College should not be kept, but it is the right thing if we change it to election by popular vote. This Reason why I pick this is because us people want the right leader to leads us on a good path thats why we are citizens our job is to vote for them.",
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"content": "The New piece of technology that can detcet your emotions is very smart .This detects every face muscle that describes whether your emotion. It can do so by using computers. The Use of it should Used for something useful. But the use of it can really be off putting to some. Which Could lead some student into not using the device.\n\nTo begin with this should be used by the government. If this device really detects Emotion by just a 3-D Model of the face, it should be used to solve murders. It could detect whether the suspect of the crime is worried about them finding out. It could also Detect whether the Suspect is sad and from that, and Lie detectors, could help solve government problems. Not just having to read the emotions of students.\n\nThe use on it on students could help detect whether some of the students are sad and might think on doing not so smart things. It could help detect depression and then the students coud help eachother with their problems.This could help more than oter people guessing whether their really happy or not. The FACS can help detect whether that smile that person has on is either fake or real.\n\nWhen using it on students it should be Voluntairily. Students who rarely express any emotions May not want to have a computer read there face. Its also an invasion of privacy which some people are really big about. But the students who dont want to do it can express the emotions freely. They can practice their amendmants.\n\nThis could also Help students succeed in their educaton. They could be given a couple of math problems in fornt of them and could be asked to solve. If the device detects that they arent confused then the student either pays more attention or just nows how to do it If the student gets confused it would detect that, then the teacher can decide on either having the kid studying more, drp the subject, or even giving that person/people the right amount of information they need.\n\nThe FACs device could help with many problems students are facign, wheter its Having trouble in school or just personally having problems. I think the use of it could be used to help students educationally and mentally. Not only could it sdetect wheter the kid was happy it could detect wheyther the kid is confused.",
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"content": "NASA received a photo from Viking 1, in 1976, and it appeared to be a face. In 1998, a higher resolution picture came in and in 2001 an even higher resolution picture came in. NASA scientist thought aliens created this. But they didn't it was just a Martian mesa. A few days after they figured out it was a Martian mesa, NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption on it noted a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth.\" Authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. And it certainly did! The\n\n\"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. It starred in a Hollywood film, appears in books, magazines, radio talkshows- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! The picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. The \"Face on Mars\" wasn't an actually face. It was only a Martian mesa. If scientist actually proved aliens are real I'm sure they won't tell the public.",
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"content": "By attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles One obstacles faced redesgning building A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame meant make modifications worth Another obstacle faced dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen highly flammable And greatest obstacle builders nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even Dirigible got parked winds would shake tail much wasnt safe",
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"content": "In story author says The sun beginning beat trying keep balance dehydrated state This gives idea heat getting steadily depleting water supply At ore point almost gives self despair dies dehydration It seems never reach good continue suffer grueling heat I could almost feel sweat heat cyclist feeling Also I could almost feel lump throat says with luck Id hit bump lodge pebble throat The heat definitely effects mans cycling bad way He exhausted could go without water",
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"content": "The face on Mars was not craeted by aliens, it is only a natural land form.\n\nIf it was creatied by aliens I think we would know it by now because we have done so much research on it and have found it is only a mesa.\n\nIf it was created by aliens then we would have relesed that information to the people by now and would be doing further research.\n\nWith the the advances in space exploration and the push to do more and go further, we cannot wast more money and time on something as simple as a mesa.\n\nWe have mesa's here on Earth that rememble the one on Mars and we know those are natural landforms.\n\nIf it can happen here then it can happen on Mars.\n\nIt is a total accident that the face on Mars looks like a face.\n\nThe eyes, nose, and mouth are all made with shadows created by the way the mesa naturaly formed.\n\nWe have taken many photos of the mesa and the clear photos reveal that it is nothing but a mesa.\n\nIn conclution that is why the face onMars is not something created by aliens but a natural land form.",
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"content": "The new Facial Action Coding System is an effective way to see how much of each emotion a person is feeling. It works by creatign a 3D model of your face and then calculating your emotions based on where your muscels are at. Using this technology in a classroom could possibly allow teachers to adjust their style or content they are teaching to better help a kid get engaged.\n\nIn paragraph 6 Dr. Huang states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\". He also states, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\". This would allow teachers to be able to best teach their classes. Say a teacher has been teaching the same way for their whole carrer, that teachers students learn but not as effectively as their colliegs. They could use this software to create and design a way of teaching to any type of person just based of their emotions. The teacher would also be able to help a quite student if the system reads that the students is highly frustrated. This could also be used to need of emergency or be able to tell if a student is lying. This Facial Action Coding System has many uses that theoretically would change the way schools would function and pr0gress.\n\nTo conclude, the Facial Action Coding System would be an effective way to design a curriculom that would increase results with students just based off how the student reacts/feels about how and what they are learning.",
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"content": "Using tecnology that can read students facial expressions in school to me would be very benificial and valuable to students and teachers. In school some students are scared to raise their hand to tell a teacher they dont understand what the teacher is teaching, so having the emotional expression reader could help the shy kids with their lesson anf help the teachers that are teaching the lesson have less stress on if the kids are understanding it or are bored and not paying attention. By modifing the lesson for certain students to learn better would make all younger students smater and better learners and if they are better leaners then they will carry that to the work force and that will help the economy if we have kids that are smarter in certain subjects and less poor people.\n\nThe tecnology behind the facail expression reader is probbly very advanced. There could be some issues with schols affording these scanners in computers. i mean some schools dont even have computers for all sudents to have their own and take it home, but it would stull be very benificial for students and teachers. The facial scanning device could help stidents with more advanced lessons in math, english, spanish, french, and many more classes that high schools offer. If schools aquire the facial expression scanner their could be some problems with students just making faceial expressions to their freinds and the computer repetidly changing the lesson and that could couse problems for the students. The idea of having it is still valuable and would serve many schools well in the ability of teaching.\n\nThe facial expression scanning device would serve many schools and individual teachers well. I personally think that it would help schools get their students smater and would better prepare them for the work force and college. I myself sometimes struggle with learning and i dont understand the lesson so if i had this device that would modify my lesson so that i understood it better then that would be vary helpful for me to get my grade up and keep it up. That being said i think that the facial expression scanning device would be very valuable to schools.",
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"content": "This essay will be about my opinion on whether there should or should not be driverless cars.\n\nIn my opinion there should not be driverless cars, why? Well it's simple, the reason there should not be driverless cars, is because there will be more car accidents than ever before. The crash rate will skyrocket, for the fact that if cars become driver less then drivers will think that they dont have to be in any control of the car. It may cause there to be more drunk driving accidents. The reason is people will want to drink and think that their car will drive them home. That is all but correct. They will not be completely autonomous they will have to have some type of alert and ready person in the car. They will have to be ready to take control when they need to. For example in work zones, or high traffic areas. In a work zone there may be pylons, or construction vehicles the you will have to go around. The car cant automatically know where there is construction and wont be able to avoid pylons, construction workers, or construction vehicles in time to avoid a collision.\n\nWell in conclusion i do not think there should be Driverless Cars. It would be extremely hazardous to people and the environment.",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle weight dirigible blimp lust wind pressure caused much stress building s frame The architects easily overcame obstacle They strengthened iron frame building could withstand added stress Unfortunately obstacles overcome led abandonment use mast docking dirigibles The biggest problem safety Many blimps used hydrogen rather helium keep afloat highly flammable There much risk blimp catching fire falling onto city Nature also enormous obstacle Wind would blow blimp surrounding buildings since floating air weights could nt keep Finally existing law stating aircraft could fly low around urban areas",
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"content": "\"A Cowboy Who Rode The Waves\" has a boy named Luke Bomberger in it and he is a Seacowboy. Seacowboys are people who travel over seas to help people after the affects of world war two, but Luke was on that helped with live stock while on the ship. So if you want to be like them and help join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You can help the affects of world war two with the live stock you take care of. in this matter I will give you more reasons to join.\n\nOne of the best and caring things about this job is that of helping the people so you know you are doing good to many. Also a nice benefit is that of sight seeing which in the habit of this job is common. For example what Luke says about the sights he has seen he also enjoys the benefit, \"I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\" those were some lines from paragraph 5, telling about the sights Luke saw on his travals.\n\nWhen being on the ship ride home that takes weeks or mounths it can be very fun to make the time go by from playing games,or activities with crew meabers. this part of the excerpt will show what and when the crew played games,\" The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\" I believe that the lines from paragraph 8 stood out the most to explaine my reasoning for the games on bord.\n\nTo conclude my reasoning for you joining the Seagoing Cowboys program I would like to tell you that it is a very fun and exciting program. Eventhough at times it can be dangerous at sea, but I believe that helping those in need is more important. So come and sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program it so you can help out to.",
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"content": "Honestly I'm against drivless cars, because people are just reckless drivers all together. So lets say a person decides to buy a driverless car and it says in the passage they still need their hands on the staring weel and they still need to pay attention but since it's called \"DRIVERLESS\" cars the buyer decide to go on a trip and it's night so the think \"oh it's a driverless car meaning i don't have to look at the road\" or \"I dont have to hold on to the steering weel\" or \"hey I can just sleep since it's driverless free thats must mean that mean i dont have to the road because it'll just do it thing by it's self\"\n\nBut lets get real here; never will there ever be a car that you will never have to pay attention to the road. But if that car comes out then all heck would break loose on the streets. There would be recks everywhere because some people are just so nieve that their just are careless reckless people. No car can ever manage to run by it's own.\n\nThe author even said in the artical you'll still need to keep your eyes on\n\nthe raod. and thats my oppinion to you",
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"content": "When students graduate from school, they face the dilemma of getting a work directly or going to a university continuously. While there are a variety of beneficial reasons to enter the job market, I would argue that it is better to go to university.\n \nIn terms of getting a work straight from after school, many adolescents prefer starting to earn money as soon as possible rather than continuing their education. It would mean that they want to afford their own house or start a family and also they can make themselves become more independent. Moreover, in their careers, they can gain real experience and learn practical skills that can help increase their professionalism and lead to promotion easily. Because of some cases, employers are more concerned about employees' abilities rather than their academic backgrounds.\n \nOn the other hand, tertiary education is seen as the ticket to entering certain unique aspects. For example, it is impossible to become a lawyer or a doctor without academic qualification. Furthermore, those specific fields are more competitive than ever. Sometimes there might be hundreds of applicants bidding for one position. If you do not have a qualification you cannot compete. In turns, university or college offers diverse methods of training their students, let them have enough a background knowledge or critical thinking to face the challenge in the workplace to acquisition higher salaries or access better job opportunities.\n \nIn conclusion, based on those reasons mentioned above, I believe that students could win a better career if the higher education level they had the more options they can choose.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist looks like highway desert riding motorcycle bike look like hes coming going vacation way hes riding seems hes going real fast fall",
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"content": "The technology called the Facial Action Coding System is valuable, because it could be a way of ineracting with the students a difffrent way, be a new subject in school to study in and make a career out of, and it coule be a learning tool for students.\n\nThis technology could be valuable in the class room by teachers interacting with students in a diffrent way then they usually do. Teachers could change thing up instead of doing the same things all time. As the author states in Paragraph 7, ''Raise your lips at the corner of you mouth, then squint you eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling at the corner of your eyes. Does your expression suggest an emotion, can your partner recognize which one.'' This peice of information suggests the interaction with people in the classroom along with your own emotios while being at school learning.\n\nFurthermore, this technology could be a new study in school or possibly something to be able to mager in in college and make it a career. As the author begings to explain, '' The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while also showing you how much the computer can actually do. Imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad.'' This quote from the passage shows what this technology can already do but also intends a possible future advancment, which is when a career, studies, and students come into play.\n\nFinally, this technology could be valuable in the classroom by the students learning more about it or using it as a learning tool. In paragraph 5 the author states that, ''We humans perform this impressive calculation everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a frind is feeling simply by the look on her face, but of course most of us would have trouble describing each facial trait that conveys happy,worried etc. This quote from the passage shows the possible fact of students using this technology as a learning tool for a class like physic while studding how the brain works with emotions.\n\nIn conclusion i belive that this Facial Action Coding System could be valuable in the classroom. It could be used as an interactive tool for students in the classroom so they teacher can change things up, it could become a career in the future or be improved, andd it could be a learning technique for students.",
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"content": "Imagine driving down the highway and looking in the side mirror to cross over. In the mirror you see a car with no one in the driver's seat. Once you turn around and face the road you miss your turn off to get to work. Driverless cars are dangerous because they draw attention away from the road, the computer in the car could shut down and crash, and they require massive expensives to work and run.\n\nOne reason they're dangerous is they distract other drivers. Going down the highway at 30 mph anyone near the driverless car could look over and stare at it and then get into a crash. 19% of drivers are teenagers and most teens don't pay attention to the road, so seeing a car driving itself would be a major distraction and\n\ncause car accidents.\n\nSecond reason is what if the computer programed to drive the car crashes and shuts itself down in the middle of a intersection. Lives of men,woman, and children would be at state. \"Further imporvements in sensors and computet hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own(papragraph 5).\"\n\nEven with these advancements doesn't mean that it's still safe driving down the road.\n\nFinal reason is the amount of money it takes to get this car going. It costs more to make the car than to fix the existing roads. If they want to waste that much money let them. It would make much more sense to fix roads instead of making a car that costs more to make then to repaive a road. 'Antilock brakes and driver assitance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us anywhere we desire...\"(paragraph 6).\n\nStating these reasons there really shoouldn't even be driverless cars if they cause all this trouble to raise money for, build, and see if it even works properly. Even if Google is a large company and has millions of dollars and can afford building these cars left and right, is there really even a point of doing it in the frist place. Including the human driver, this car doesn't even seem driverless anymore.",
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"content": "The Author Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right anyone else And books left shelf us I believe certain materials music books movies nt childrens shelf read rather adult shelf I believe every author right express ones self accepted We beliefs standards would like others respect even dont agree beliefs If every book found offensive taken shelf would soon books left The reason everyone finds certain thing offensive Many children intersted certain thing cant hold back unless inappropriate goes againts family morals valus religous beliefs It would good thing monater children reading wacthing listening On hand adult shelfs many diffrent things would offensive many diffrent people unlike childrens books Writing way show persons expressions stand although pleasing person But write book sombody like wouldnt like took shelf would show direpect person thought long hard work Learn stand proud believe Learn also respect others well let children around safe family type books music magazines",
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"content": "Patience something want friends someone This story young girl boy want friends one dont patience I walking room speech competition I sat next friends thought I would get first place When I went one friends said alittle bit much cologne really nervous didnt know one actually knew I friends After I went see number I I saw I first one speak My friend said I would good right I soon started speak lady loved speech After friend I done speeches sat next eachother talking lot Then friends asked us friends I said CAPS way would I friends laughed We looked eachother bad way After days wont talking since suspicious I patient able wait talk But ofcourse wasnt patient He eager tell friends couldnt tell anyone different truth were exactly since like soccer basket ball music talking like Haha Soon found gone told friends Turns one laughed us They actually happy patience finally told friends Now best friends best friends forever In conclusion patience good thing sometimes people cant patience want become friends",
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"content": "There are both benefits and disadvantages to turning public parks and open spaces into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. In my opinion, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.\r\n\r\nOne advantage of these shared gardening spaces is the opportunity for people to access fresh, locally grown produce. Many cities, especially those with low income or food desert areas, have limited access to affordable fresh fruits and vegetables. Allowing residents to grow their own food can help address this issue and improve overall health and nutrition. Furthermore, home-grown fruits and vegetables often taste better and can be more nutritious because they are picked at their peak ripeness. Additionally, growing your own food can provide a sense of accomplishment and pride, as well as a chance to learn about gardening and where our food comes from.\r\n\r\nAnother benefit is the sense of community and connection that can be fostered through shared gardening spaces. These gardens can bring people together and encourage social interaction and a sense of belonging. Gardening can also provide a sense of purpose and can be a therapeutic and enjoyable hobby for those who participate.\r\n\r\nThere are also some disadvantages to consider. One potential issue is the cost and resources needed to maintain and manage the gardens. Setting up and maintaining a garden can require time, effort, and financial resources, and there may be ongoing costs for things like water, seedlings, and tools. However, these costs could potentially be offset by the positive impact on public health and community cohesion. Additionally, many cities have programs in place to provide resources and support for community gardening initiatives, such as grants or donated materials.\r\n\r\nAnother potential disadvantage is the potential loss of open space for recreational activities. However, I believe that the benefits of shared gardening spaces outweigh this potential loss. These spaces can still be used for recreational activities, such as picnics or leisurely strolls, and the addition of gardens can even enhance the aesthetic and natural beauty of the space.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the benefits of turning public parks and open spaces into gardens for local food production outweigh any potential disadvantages. These shared gardening spaces can provide access to fresh produce, foster a sense of community, and offer therapeutic and recreational benefits for local residents.",
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"content": "I believe the Face is just an ordinary landform on Mars. I think it is ridiculous that NASA thinks that aliens\n\nexist anyway! \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"\n\nI chose this quote because, I believe that it's true because there is no way that any life form could exist on Mars. \"A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" I chose this quote because, that's pretty much what it is just some ordinary landform that just happens to look like a person.\n\nEven though the Face is just some oridinary rock formation people still think its an alien artifact and its not, because it wouldn't be possible to get your hands on even if you wanted to. \"And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nI chose this quote because, like I said before there isn't no such thing as a alien monument on Mars.\n\nThe only reason why people think that the face is an alien artifact because that's what's NASA telling them. \"Some people think the Face is bonde fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" I chose this quote because it shows how desprete NASA really is, because they know it's just an ordinary landform but NASA wants people to think that so that NASA can get attention and money, and that is why I think that the Face is not an alien artifact after all.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are indeed a thing of the future but are they really practical? We should stick with human operated vehicles instead of computer operated vehicles. If we switch to computer operated vehicles, soon we will no longer teach generations to drive, we will begin to rely on these computers to take us everywhere. This will turn into a problem when something happens to the computer in the car and we are left in a car that we dont know how to drive. Peoples lives could become endangered becasue they are clueless on how to drive. Also, if a person does get imjured would it be the manufacturers fault or the person driving the car manufacturer. Legal battles will erupt and new laws will have to be made. Convenience is also an issue, in order to get from one destination to another you will have to input it in the car, but what if you need to make a pit stop or you get hungry, you have to completely reroute the car and try to find the address of the nearest gas station or resturant. When your driving by yourself you can make those decisicions quickily and you can drive around and look instead putting in a specific location. Driverless cars are not a good idea they will cause confusion and can inconvienent at times.",
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"content": "Nowadays, a significant number of old people are becoming looner, they do not have physical activities as well. In this essay, I will describe the ongoing reasons for this issue and address the possible solutions. \n\nFirst, we cannot ignore the consequences of social media, the human being as a result of progress in technology becoming depressed and other mental health problems. Therefore, old generations do not want have any physical activities as they compare themselves to influencers on Instagram, They also suffer from loneliness as most children leave their parents and have their own life . For instance, sadly, old society in Iran has been suffering from being alone more than ever as most of the occasions their children went abroad. One solution for this matter is to participate in the majority of classes. Thus, they have less time for spending on social media and thinking of their children. \n\nSecond, one of the vital stuff which makes us who we are is our habits, things we are used to doing. Accordingly, many things we do when we are old are stuff we have done in the past in our youth time. As an illustration, young people rather than playing outdoor games prefer to play online and this seriously harms their bodies and minds. So, old generations should make physical exercise and socialise with other people their habits when they are young. This can be done by warning teenagers at schools to have these activities a part of their lives to not suffer in the future. \n\nIn conclusion, these days, a lot of old communities are becoming alone and they do not have physical activities as well. In this essay, I described the ongoing reasons for this issue and mentioned the possible solutions.",
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"content": "It is thought that one of the best solution in order to inhibit people gain too fat in their body is to enhance the cost of lardy foods in marketplaces. In my perspective, I compeletly agree with this settling and reckon that enlarging fatty diet cost will be a perfect completion.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the huge amount of fast-food restaurants that sell their product with affordable price so that people more interested to buy their dishes. In fact, this kind of food contain large amount of fat. Even though most of people know about this reality, it is not going to make them to stop buy lardy diets because of the fascinating deals in terms of the cost. In addition, most of their customers are from students with limited monthly allowance so this kind of food is preferable for them. So it is one of the reason why escalating its cost is reliable.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the consumers of fattening foods are those who not concern about healthy lifestyles and consider food based on its appearance. Nevertheless sweet foods that contain a lot of carbohydrates such as cakes, chocolate breads and high quality chocolates are not preferable by most of people, it is because of the high charge. So people will tend to buy the other meals that having good appearance but with more thrifty price like sweet potatoes.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I strongly believe that increasing the price of fattening foods can be affected in reducing the consumption of this kind of foods, particularly for those who have limited budget and not aware with their wellness.",
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"content": "As cars become more involved in the technology world, the roads will become a dependable environment to get from point A to B without risking danger. The develpment of the driverless car is a postive advance in technology because of its ability to create a safe, comfortable and smart environment. With roof and wheel sensors, GPS receivers and in-car entertainment centers, self driving cars will save lives and the death rates of driving will decrease.\n\nDriverlesscars will lower the driving death rates dramatically because of their sensors that detect sudden motion or objects near the veichle. The more the sensors advance, the more they are able to respond to danger in a way that is inhumanly possible. Once danger comes into play such as an out-of-control situation or a sudden skid, humans become less dependable to respond correctly in result of the stress they are put under in the rapid situation. The driverless car's ability to make motions based on its surroundings is a positive advance in the technology world because of how many lives it will save.\n\nDeaths caused by texting and driving will also be reduced because of the entertainment systems the driverless car's manufacturers are installing. The entertainment system's ability to shut down once a driver needs to drive will create a safer environment rather than those who have the abiltity to text and drive in their manual driving cars. The heads-up displays in the driverless cars are an effective way to safe lives because it takes away the purpose of needing a cellphone.\n\nAs self driving cars become the norm they will also create a better future for drivers. The driverless car's advances add a positive light to the technology world with its high chance of making roads and highways safer for drivers and decreasing the driving death rates. If all of the features to the driverless cars are safety features, then the environment created for the driver will be impeccable.",
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"content": "In my opinion, the use of the Facial Action Coding System on students in a classroom could be beneficial. This technology could be used to tell when a student is confused, bored, or enjoying the lesson at hand. While this does have some foreseeable practical application, I feel that most students wouldn't enjoy the thought of their computer watching their every facial expression.\n\nA situation in which the Facial Action Coding System could be useful is when students don't express their confusion. Some students, despite confusion and lack of understanding, won't ask the teacher for help. With the implementation of the Facial Action Coding System, the teacher would know if a student was confused and would be able to go and help them to better understand the subject: \"A cassroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" The Facial Action Coding System could also be used to determine whether or not the students are bored. If they are, the teacher could ask for feedback and change their lesson plan accordingly.\n\nDespite all of the good that the Facial Action Coding System could bring to the classroom, I feel that some parents and students wouldn't be comfortable with it. At our school, each student has a laptop with a built in camera. Some of them cover the camera on their laptop, and express their fear that they are being watched. This is a fear which I myself dismiss, but it might make me uncomfortable to know that I actually was being watched.\n\nWhile the Facial Action Coding System could have some practical application, I don't think students and parents alike wouldn't be comfortable with it for classroom use. If the students are bored or struggling with the lesson, they themselves should speak up.",
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"content": "The author chose end story way effectively ties different aspects principles story For example sentence includes geese hibiscus representing new home old together harmony It also states Saeng vowed silently I take test relates determination hibiscus flower struggles persistently winter A lot wisdom gathered symbolic messages hidden within final sentence It implies though past behind heart face new challenges determined challenges conquered",
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"content": "Having the election by popular vote has benifited our community in various ways such as, Being able to compare the presidents information and how He or She will help our society and represent us, It also can allow presidents to feel as if they have a equal chance of winning votes, Having election by popular votes for the presidents can make our community's can help people get together and talk about which president is better or which on they think has more potential helping out the society\n\nComparing the presidents is a good way to find out who's a better and choosing that person. The electoral college is a way to get votes from people that favor the president or has different belifes and different changes in the next president. Having popular vote for president is a cool way to discover how other people want their society. Most people dont think having popular vote as president is a good idea because they wanna see what will happen or who will become president without there vote being out.\n\nThe electoral college way of voting isnt fair it dosent allow presidents to feel equal. most presidents prefer voting elections because they feel equal and want to have same rights. If most people were in positions like the president they would want to have popular vote because they wouldnt want someine that isnt better then them winning election.\n\nI believe that popular vote has and will contine benifiting our community by equaling out our rights. Helping people get to know the presidents better, and helps the better president represent us.",
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"content": "In America, presidents are voted in by the electoral college. The electoral college is a process of electors from all the states that vote for the president and vice president. There are 538 electors, and you need 270 votes of that 538 to be elected. The electoral college is how we have been electing all of the presidents in America, but the president ought to be elected by a mjority vote of the people, not by some fascist in a room voting for us.\n\nFurthermore, the office of the federal register gladly explins the process of the electoral college and it has some holes. Bradsord Plumer explains in his article ''The Indefensible Electoral College: Why Even The best laid defenses are wrong'' says ''at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.'' He goes on and exemplifies the fact that the way the votes are cast and counted could be in fact more individually based. Maybe Mr. Plumer is wrong and the electoral college is the best thing for us, but, most people would agree that if we could all vote and have every individual vote counted, we would have a fair election and the true winner would be voted in.\n\nPerhaps in ''Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president'' by Richard A. Posner, an electoral college would be good to have because of run off and big states and so forth. But plainly put, if we could just count voters as people of one nation, not individual states, we could have an efficient running election. For example: say there is 300 million people in America and the president needed 150,000,001 votes to win, then the majority rules factor can be initiated and there will be no run off, no problems with big states, no problem with swing states, and the certainty of outcome of everyone's president will be decided by majority.\n\nLast but not least, all of the authors of the articles have great arguments and have concluded as so. ''what have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college!'' Bradford Plumer couldnt have summarized it better. If former presidents and other powerful organizations can can agree on abolishing the outdated electoral college then why cant we just get rid of it.\n\nFinally, the electoral college is an old and untrustworthy system of lection currently used in the united states. perhaps if we could try the majority rules and have every legal voter counted as an individual, the election process would be more faithful. All in all, with time comes changes, and with chnges comes broad new spectrums of possibilities. But for the time being we should all be proactive in staying in motion with modernization, and every little change counts. Abolishing the electoral college is an innocent and small step in the right direction.",
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"content": "Dear newspaper I heard creating article computers helpful non helpful society I find computers great addition society play big role jobs around country addition display accessible information Imagine computers helped shape want give blessing Computers proven big role job profiles world Just think sales person instance Sales people need computer store data like By way study put place find many jobs find neccessary computers results showed jobs need use computers Dr computer programmer go industries mentioned computers show sometime everyone s life whether like especially jobs If think people work computers less trouble calculatir storing data citizens without computers Just think computers way helping brain work hard Students love access information around world I bet people would agree nt think Students around world example need research information topic class A mentioned I prefer using internet research It s much fast looking books people around earth place opinions online instead book authors day library rest class assigned researching topic book He read five books got half page notes assignment The following day allowed work computer got three pages notes I releived log internet reported A survey set foundation see students prefer computers books said yes Do want students ages participate researching machine favor Well I dearly hope answer benefits children From young students adults computers become favorite machine modern day technology Computers magnificent part society I remind computers benefit many jobs addition aid students showing information everything know I sincerely hope share feelings matter What vision computers today",
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"content": "Cars can be great or bad, many places are banning days of driving to slow down the inevitable of car fumes in the enviroment. Advantages include a healthier way of life. Walking makes you healthier, and so will the cleaner air. Creating less polution in areas in good for the enviroment.\n\nThe ban on cars can seem a little crazy. But picture how much healthier people would be if they didnt relie on their car to get some where. Now, even though there are large cities that are spread out, like Jacksonville, it seems almost insane to give up cars. People would be more forced to leave their house to go to work, school, ect. But just picture how great it would be to save the enviroment and alos getting a good healthy workout to and from where ever, it doesnt always have to be walking, bikes are what people use as well.\n\nGlobal warming is real, and it is slowly happening. And cars are major factors for the cause. Some citires are taking action to this by banning driving in some way shape or form. This actually helps bring down smog. Paris saw the difference in only a few days!\n\nLess polution is happemning because of the new bans of cars in some places. And people are loving it! A more healthier lifestyle is now being used. Less polutiion more healthier for you and for Earth. It wont let me leave this page, im confused.",
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"content": "Cars should be able to drive on there own. There are so many people working on a safe and nice car to drive on it's own. There are many good reason a car that car drive on its own can help people; safer,less a hasle of driving , and it wont be agist the law,\n\nThere are many people who get in accidents everyday. With a car that car dive on its that can stop accidents and help keep people safe. It could tell when there is a accident ahead. The car would always be watching the road. The cars have driven great distance without crashing.\n\nThe cars would drive on there own so you would not have to worry about drivin as much. But if you like to drive the car will give you a signal when it's your turn to dive. The car could help a lot of people by doing this. There also would be a in-car entertainment and thing fror the driver.\n\nThe law wants to keep everybody safe. When having this car , it could make things even saver. The car wont have accidents as much. The car also makes sure the diver is paying attention to the road. The would be so much safe than a normal car.\n\nThe car that drive on its own will be here soon.I think car should be able to drive on there own. It would be safer, less a hasle, and wouldn't be legal to practice. The car would make are world a little better and safer.",
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"content": "\"The Challenge Of Exploring Venus\" Is an article talking about venus it talks about how is difficlut exploring venus is and no one has been to venus in decades. On averge the tempature is over 800 degres Fahrenheit these conditions are far more extreme then what a human has encounter. they are comparing to a submarine\n\nif it went down in the ocean the submarine would instantly be crushed by the metal and the pressure of the water. Venus is very fascinating, venus once may been like mostly earth plant long ago.\n\nVenus was probably covered largely with oceans so this means that is can be various formed of life just like earth but Venus still has some features that are analogous to those like Earth. The planet has a texture almost as if its pure moutains,valles and craters this means that there can be life in Venus.\n\nVenus forms a ship orbiting this means that it can provide only limted in sight on the ground beacuse most forms lights cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Researchers cannot take samples of rocks, gas or anything else from there. Therefore scientists are seeking to conduct there missin to undrestand more about venus and how its like in there. In conclusion venus does has a value the reson because of its value also beacuse the human curiosity will likely lead us into many equal oppertunites this can become a big inpact on us if we try to go to Venus and explore the plant are knowledge can be expanded to learn many things about Venus.",
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"content": "There many diffrent people world many diffrent oppions books music movies magazines etc one person dose perticualy like horor movies dose mean movies stores remove horor films shelves creepy sound many people world slasher film freeks live breath scarry movies I like eveything read book listen type music actualy widens taste certain materials feel like everyone try new things Say growing favorite books The would like shaire childhood stories children BUT books stores took The shelves tiger pig could never friends This nonsince many people like many diffrent thingsthere reason sell like otherwise busines fail",
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"content": "Paying attention to lessons at school or focusing on certain subjects can be challenging to students due to many factors nowadays. As a matter of fact, old fashioned teaching methods and the duration of the lessons are the most significant reasons for interest lost in subjects, even for the whole concept of a school. \r\n\r\nFirstly a group of teachers follow classical education formulas for their students. These approaches include taking notes on a notebook and solving lots of exercises which are related to subjects. However, those individuals already aware of technological opportunities and how these can implamented to their lectures by their lecturers. For instance, the teacher who uses technological advances such as smart boards or Powerpoint slides for their lessons takes more attentions by students than others. Therefore, the remaining educators should be aware of these techniques, and consider to use them in the long term. \r\n\r\nSecondly, those students generally complain about lecture durations which are more than a fifty-minute. Rarely do lecturers try to reduce the duration of lessons by using the pomodoro method which provides shorter durations for lessons and improves the interest in learning process. Moreover, this technique can be beneficial for both students and their lecturers by reducing lessons duration and inclining attentions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is hard to completely focus on schools and subjects for students due to the duration of lessons or obsolete educational methods. Nevertheless, some approaches can significantly increase the motivation of students, those are implamenting new technologies to subjects and reducing teaching hours.",
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"content": "Some today contend that high school students should have greater latitude to critique and question their teachers, despite the risks this presents for classroom management. I am strongly in agreement as this enables the ideal classroom environment.\r\n\r\nCritics of this shift in mentality point out that the teacher position requires respect. A teacher who is consistently being interrupted by students will not be able to lecture and assign and mark homework well. Many students might exploit a rule that encourages questions in order to intentionally derail lessons and undermine the teacher. There is also the possibility that the negative attitude of some students will create general unrest that is not conducive to learning. However, I would argue that the appearance of respect, when in reality most students question their teachers in private, holds little actual value beyond preserving unwarranted pride.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the free discussion of ideas is essential to the best learning. Students who are sitting quietly and feigning interest in class are likely to become less motivated. On the other hand, if a class is studying a work of literature or an event in history, students will engage more fully in lessons given the opportunity to ask questions. By asking questions, even if these queries are loosely defined as criticisms of what is being taught, they will suddenly have a reason to learn and the lesson will become more memorable for all students. The questions might also lead the class to novel insights as long as the teacher is confident enough to embark on collaborative explorations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although certain educational institutions fear that questions may undermine teachers, they in fact are the foundation of a positive learning environment. Schools should embrace academic rigour in all its forms.",
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"content": "Technology is deeply relative to the living of human beings in contemporary society. Regarding this, opinions are divided over whether or not technology increases the gap between the rich and the poor. There are certain reasons why they support either side. \r\n\r\n\r\n\r\n On the one hand, some people argue that only wealthy people can enjoy technology as electronic devices which facilitate using the Internet are extremely expensive. As the poor suffer from poverty, they have to buy food and medicine rather than electronic devices. For example, since a significant number of schools have decided to use electronic books for a class instead of physical textbooks, many poor students couldn’t see books due to the absence of devices such as a laptop, an iPad, and a smartphone. Therefore, because not everyone can gain the devices for using technology, the gap between the poor and the rich will increase. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n On the other hand, others assert that technology is a key factor in reducing the gap between rich people and poor people as information is justifiably provided to everyone. Not only can information be provided for free to all people regardless the financial condition, it may also bring about a chance to obtain money. For instance, a survey conducted by the Korea Financial Foundation has revealed that almost 30% of people who earned an excessive amount of money from a stock market studied with the Internet. As the example clearly illustrates, technology is an efficient means to reduce the gap between the rich and the poor.\r\n\r\n\r\n\r\n In conclusion, while I accept that electronic devices are expensive, I point out that people can borrow one at a library for free. There is no doubt that information with cutting-edge technology is the most significant factor to decrease the financial gap.",
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"content": "The use of technology is widely used today and is making our world diffrent and more easier everyday. Technoldgy could be used for good things but, also used for bad. But either way we made it and its ours to use. Technology helps us look into many things that are important to us. Technology tells us what the weather is, or whats happening in a city far away. Either way it helps us look deeper in what we wanna know. Would you want to know how someone felt really by one scan of a machine/computure?\n\nThere is a new software, latest innovation of Prof. Thomas Huang. He and his colleague are making ways where technology and humans could commuinicate better. They are trying to see how people really feel and are they okay. This technology could be vary valuable, since now a days we use it like crazy. if we had gotten software that could see how we feel maybe students could be better at many things and technology would know how to help us interact with them.\"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" paragraph 6, lines 5-8.\n\nWe as the users of technology should have our computers know what we want and what we don't want, if we use those and we use Dr. Huang's idea and we get what we want and many providers could be outreached and many providers will get the audience they wnat and what the users of technology will also get what they really want.\"so computers need to understand that, too.\"paragraph 6, line 11-12. Dr. Huang expresses that technology needs to understand us so we coukld let them knoiw what we want and what the consumer wants.\n\nThere is also many peopel who go undiagnosed for what they have. Many people show how they feel or what they are thinking by their expression. People could be depressed, have anxiety, have mnay diffrent conditions and they go undetected. We could use this technology to help out many diffrent people an dwe could use this to better our society and how the people in it really feel.\"His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" paragraph 5, lines7-8. This could help us break many barriers and help people who battle themselves every day. Technology helps us get closer to eachother everyday.\n\nIn conclusion technology is helping us and its our choice what to do with it and what we could make in the future to helps us more, and not make us more uneducated. Technology that could help us read emotional expression of many people, especially our upcoming youth in classrooms everywhere. It will help us get to know an dteach better than the old ways we use to have back in the day. We must become inventors to make our selves more accesible and more expressive.",
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"content": "The pie chart and table gives us an information about the various places that are visited by the tourists in Britain in the year of 1999. It can be be observed that tourists showed interested in four major attractions.\nOverall, the tourists are visited the theme parks the most, and their favourite place is Blackpool Pleasure Beach with a significant margin.\nTaking a closer look at the pie chart, it can be seen that theme parks and museums & galleries are the two major attractions for the visitors. 38% of the tourists prefered to visit the theme parks which makes it the highest attraction in Britain. The second on the chart is museums and galleries with 37% and it is followed by historic houses and monuments with 16%. The last place on the chart is wildlife parks and zoos which is only 9% of the visitors are traveled in 1999.\nMeanwhile, the theme parks are the favourite place for the tourists, one place is attracted nearly half of these visitors. 47% of the theme park visitors went to Blackpool Pleasure Beach which is the highest percentage. Next is Alton Towers with 17% and Pleasureland in Southport comes third with 16%. The same percentage of theme parks visitors traveled to Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor which is 10%.",
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"content": "The author memoir thankful parents rest family I know author thankful parents paragraph author says They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families freinds careers country loved reason I think thankful parents made liFes worse make authors life better I know paragraph says In united states start lives entirely taking whatever could find The last reason I know basicly says last sentence paragraph It says I never forget parents turned simple house home That authors mood memoir",
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"content": "Automation is certainly an idea of the future. Early on,inventors have wanted to make life easier for the average Joe. We have allready come so far with automobiles themselves. Making them safer, stronger, faster, more reliable. But now it seems like that just wasn't enough. Now, we are close to the \"next big step\" in the automoblie industry: driverless cars.\n\nWe have been striving to invent automated cars for awhile now. In the 1950's, General Motors had taken a crack at automated cars. The projetwas scraped becaus ethe modifications to the roads were too expensive. In the 1980's, cars had spped sensors installed for the antilock brakes. So really, i has been a progression of innovation to get to where we are. But smart cars have always been known to have some sort of flaw.\n\nTo me, the smart car is a bad idea. It's innovation but not in a good way. These new brands of cars will make drivers lazy and even more reckless on te road than they were allready.\n\nThe first issue with the smart car is that it still requires a drivers attention. They have tried to counter this problem by installing cameras to watch the driver. The report also mentioned installing entertainment systems into the vehicle. This is an invitation to disaster. If your purpose is to keep the drivers attention, why would you want to install a distraction? A driverless car would'nt be very driverless if a driver was needed in an emergency.\n\nAnother issue is how this new technology would hit the industy. Based on the report, this is mostly just a Google project now. So let's say Google wanted to monopolize on their new line of automobiles. How many other car manufacturers could potentially lose buisness. The auto buisness is allready hurting from foreign competion, so why do we have to take more jobs out by coming up with automated cars?\n\nAutomated cars are reliant on technology. So does any vehicle, but this one hangs heavy on it. What happens if your hardware shuts down? Would your average mechanic be able to fix a computer? No, they wouldn't. Anothernexample of where jobs would be lost. You couldn't go to your local repair shop anymoe, you'd have to have specialized workers look at your car for much more.\n\nIn short, smart cars are very expensive and uneccessary. If we still need a driver, your computer isn't a driverless car. If we do invest in smart cars, we will find even more jobs being taken over by specialists. Whats wrong with just taking a turn at the wheel?",
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"content": "Once upon time late rainy night friends I decided would fun go woods play One friend s sisters drove us woods idea game since four us two would go hide tow would stay car count two ready found Well us four pouring rain muddy outside Well two hide two stayed car count friend I Before went hide made signal let others know okay The danger signal little meeting got everything situated dealt got car went hid stayed car wait count After counted hear screaming shouting My first thought got chicken maybe wanted freak I I curious I cracked car door open I hear little better saying Sure enough came rite behind looked cry could nt ran fast enough get back car kept slipping sliding everywhere road finally made back crammed car us We sat crammed little car thinking running screaming brave one moment decided go take look things Of course wanting look feel like wimps followed close behind As I walking road I saw run jumps front says right I swear I saw something dart across road I walked pointed looked around thinking crazy seeing things But I walk grabs back screams I turn around look thinking heck wrong people grabs arm looks frightened expression face I turn toward ask whats wrong asks tree look white right middle big tan spot dark I could nt see well I looked I saw exactly freaking I go back car get flash light hoping came see tree little bit better soon I make way back tree lets blood curdling scream yells CAPS Its moving whatever moving I approach girls rips flash light hands turns points tree Sure enough big tan spot white tree As us girls sat waiting move finally I flashed flash light started laughing As soon get feet want hit nt know tree I laughing As approach I turn back ask CAPS want see monster freaked asking I told take look looked saw A large brown paper bag got swept wind As soon I see say I told I started cracking laughing hideous monster Once I got laughs went back car waiting left Ever since night I never forget night woods Every time think start laughing making fun afraid brown paper bag",
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"content": "Have you ever thought its time for change? Germany, New York , Columbia , and the United states are trying to reduce cars driven. Many benifits are coming from the downfall of cars being driven. Less stress, no smog from pollution, and less money spent on expensive cars.\n\nVauban's streets are completely car free. Heidrun Walter says she is less tense and much happier without a car. Walking, bycicling, and hyking are much more eco friendly. In 2006 a trend is growing in Europe. Vauban home to 5,500 residents may be the most expieriment in low car suburban life. Car ownership is allowed but there are few places to park large garages and the edge of development. 70 percent do not own cars and 57 percent sold cars to move to Vauban.\n\nCar pollution is at its all time high, in paris motorists were ordered to leave their cars at home due to smog. 67 percent of vehicles in France use diesel fuel. Only 53.3 percent make up the rest of western europe. passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gases, and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the united states. Chicago to Shanghai people tend to make their homes which is a huge reduce of green house gas emissions from tailpipes.\n\nAmericans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as the years pass. Americas love for vehicles seems to be coolig down. The number of miles driven dropped in 2005 and continued droppimg steadily. In 2013 the number of miles driven was nearly 9 percent below its peak. If this persists there will be beneficialimplications for carbon emissions and the enviroment. Last year a study was found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009.\n\nThis is why life today would be fantastic and more benifitcial with car free cities and more walking, bycicling and hyking. less stress, less pollution, and less money spent on cars. As days continue the percentage of cars and miles driven decreases drastically.",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper computers ever hurt anyone I believe effects computers people positive ones For one computers let people talk socialize even different sides planet Another effect letting people work faster businesses jobs require mathmatics Lastly computers allow people see far away places learn almost anything click button Because internet people across globe talk neighbors Lets say friend family move another country state They could apart months even years They would miss contantly But computers talk like still neighbors Computers also practical uses They make easier see stocks income even see sale trends Lets say needed make change price goods car broke incorrect price miles away You would halfway wait mechanic run miles get phone But computer would nt need Just log change price luxury home There also educational purposes computers Computers let travel world without taking step You could take trip safari go adventure raln forest You could take beauty great plains watch ever changing sands sahara desert You could learn greeks archemedes ancien egypt pacman computer world oyster That I see computers positively amazing thing Because let us things minds usually ca nt allow people traverse world seconds allow people oceans away talk together So think computers really harmful",
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