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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that autonomous vehicles or self-driving vehicles are going to play a major role in the development of our future world.\n\nI believe that when these self-driving vehicles are fully developed they will be safer, more efficient, will drive as if a human is behind the wheel if not better, and just be a major improvement in our lives.\n\nIn order for these cars to be autonomous they have to be almost human in certain ways.\n\nThe first thought that comes to mind is how will these cars stay on the rode?\n\nWell, scientists have been developing solutions to this concept since the late 1950s.\n\nThe article states that the idea of a smart-road system has worked surprisingly well, such as, General Motors idea of embedded electrical cables under the street that sent radio signals to a reciever on the front of the car.\n\nBut it's too expensive to upgrade the roads of today so scientists decided to create smarter cars instead. Scientists have created scensors that help car sense its surroundings like a human driver would.\n\nThe article says that they put different sensors around the car so thay it could see its surroundings and make decisions off this information just like a human driver.\n\nI agree with the latter of these two decisions because smarter cars is a more cheaper solution and more reliable one too.\n\nThe idea of smarter cars have been circulating for many years but its only until recently that we have the technology to create them.\n\nI believe that now that we have the technology to create these cars that we can make improvements in our everyday lives.\n\nSergey Brin, Google cofounder, believes that these autonomous vehicles will change the future of public transport.\n\nHe says these smarter cars will use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\n\nThis is good because at the rate that we consume fuel we won't have much left to use in the future and if these cars can decrease that chance than I'm all for it.\n\nWe aren't at the stage of development where these smarter cars are completely autonomous though.\n\nSome like BMW's, \"Traffic Jam Assistant\", can only function at speeds of up to 25 mph and has special touch sensors that require the driver to keep his or her hands on the wheel in case of a situation that requires human skills.\n\nSome can steer, accelerate, and brake but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\n\nAnd this brings up the subject of exactly how safe these vehicles really are.\n\nAnd although I believe that these vehicles are safe some state governments don't feel the same.\n\nThe problem that people have with self-driving vehicles is the safety that comes with them.\n\nAre they safer and than a human driver behind the wheel or not?\n\nState governments key issue is the safey of other drivers, passengers, and pedestrians.\n\nThe articles states thatCalifornia, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have allowed limited use of these semi-autonomous cars but many states don't agree that these manufacturers have made these cars reliably safe yet.\n\nThe article also states current traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\n\nI disagree with this assumtion because the coined word \"human error\" was created for a reason.\n\nHuman's get into many accidents due to bad habits of drinking or taking any substance that might render their fast thinking skills useless and they also get distracted easily.\n\nSmarter cars won't get distracted, they will never drink alcohol or take substances that render their decision making skills useless and this is a big step forward when it comes to a life or death situation on the road.\n\nFor now I do agree that human drivers are safer than these vehicles but only because these vehicles are in their early stages of development.\n\nThe articles says that Tesla has projected that by 2016 they will have a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time and companies like Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themseleves by 2020.\n\nI believe that these cars can only imrove the safety issue that we have today.\n\nIn conclusion, smarter cars are the way to go.\n\nThey will become fully autonomous and they will make a huge impact in our future.\n\nThe roads will be safer due to the decrease in reckless driving, fuel usage and emissions, will also decrease, and hopefully the concept of human error will be eliminated behind the wheel.\n\nSmarter cars are the key to our future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if I said that there are computers that can identify students emotions during class, well if you thought that was fake its actually real! Recently we've made this new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that allows computers to show human enotions and even things like paintings. For an example we used this on a famous painting everyone has a least seen once in their ifetime, which is the Mona Lisa. It shows that she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Those are things that can be cool to find out but it can also can be really valuable in a classrom.\n\nFor a classroom it can valuable like after lunch every student must use it before starting class to check how they're feeing. It will very useful if a student is sad or angry percent is high. It can give the teacher a reasoning to go up to the student and ask, why are you sad or why your angry. It can be very valuable like if a student just went through a terrible situation and the teacher can try to help cheer them up. One downside is that it can give out a students business and if like a student is sad, it can become a joke to the other students and make that student even more sad. It also identify if your making a fake smile or not as it can tell by how you make your smile like, if you make a fake smile your mouth is stretched sideways, as in a real smile your zygomtic major(that begin at your cheek bonees) lift the corners of your mouth.\n\nThis technology might be seen as a joke, but it can be very valuable in a classroom. It would be helpful if classrooms to get a hold of it as it could benefit the students. Most students are not always happy in school and this technology can be the one to help that not be a case. Teachers can now help the students get even more smartier then they already are. Whoever thought a computer can be the one to help take your students to the top!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that the same punishments should be equally imposed on juvenile delinquency and adult crime. In my opinion, children should be responsible for their crimes, yet according to the severity of their actions, immature criminals should be punished the same as adults or not.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, in the case of petty crimes such as robbery or fighting, I argue that young children should be punished with more lenient sentences. This is because they are too young to be fully aware of what they have done or to control their aggressive emotions. Therefore, instead of being punished in the same way as adults by being sentenced to 1-year imprisonment, youth criminals should be punished with community service. By doing so, they can compensate for their wrong acts as well as be deterred from reoffending.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in some serious crimes such as murder, I strongly support the view that the same punishments should be imposed on juvenile killers. It is undeniable that this kind of offence is extremely serious and leaves long-term implications for the victims’ family members. Besides, killers pose a threat to the security of society, so they should be sentenced with heavy punishments regardless of their age. For instance, a Vietnamese teenager still received capital punishment due to the inhumane nature of his motives and the way he killed the whole family. In other words, with serious crimes, strict punishments can act as a deterrent against would-be culprits.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I hold a firm belief that the punishments that youth criminals should receive should be based on the severity of the crime. While juvenile offenders who commit some petty crimes should be punished to a lesser degree, serious crimes such as murder should not be reconsidered no matter what age killers are.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of new vehicles being drawn into the road every day is increasing exponentially, due to which, more damage is done to the environment in terms of pollution. Few are of the opinion that, these environmental issues can be overcome by increasing the cost of fuel by the government. I do not agree with the above statement completely and I shall examine different aspects of it in the following paragraphs.\nAlthough, there is a possibility of creating an awareness of renewable resources by increasing their price, I am of the opinion that it will not last long. Cost had always been rising for the decades, for example, ten years back, one litre of petrol costed 30 rupees and now it is 73; the number of vehicles did not come down at all. The Government instead must think of other ways of solving issues caused by commuting mediums.\nSince most of the transportation mediums use exhaustible resources, a strict legislature must be brought in, which mandates the vehicles which use renewable sources. This will not only brings down the impact on our planet, but also gives a possibility of restoration of exhaustible sources. Officials should make sure that these legislative changes are enforced at the grass root level.\nIn conclusion, I pin down my thought, saying that a control on the climatic problems cannot be brought in, unless the government decides to do so. Making these fossil fuels expensive does not fetch us good results as people will learn to afford them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been upset, but not wanted anyone to know? Well having this type of technology exploits personal feelings without consent. It can be a valuable peice if used correctly. Overall though, I think we should keep this technology away from classrooms.\n\nFor starters, a persons feelings and emotions is his or her buisness. Giving a computer the option to read us like a book and evaluate us is something that just wouldn't make much difference. We are human beings, we have feelings and if we wanted someone else to know we would tell them. We show emotions how we see fit, it's just what we do.\n\nA computer does not need to do that for us.\n\nSecondly, every single human on this earth is different. How could one machine read every emotion? I know for sure that my happy face is not the exact same to another. My surprised face could by their happy face, and the opposite aswell. No two are alike in this world, they're will always be a biased factor in this technology. Which is why we cannot rely on technology everyday, some things are better face to face.\n\nOn the other hand, having this added onto a online school, or even on some online learning website could help. As it could change the lesson if it senses boredom or confusion. In paragraph 6, it states that exact message, Dr. Huang says \"A classroom computer could regongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". Which in all ways could be a great addition, but if you take into consideration all the cons. That one pro just isn't enough. We have amazing teachers who have the same possibility to bring classroom joy, we don't need computers for that.\n\nIn Conclusion, this product is one that could potentially change the online world and maybe even schooling. If in the right environment though, we don't need it. We have an amazing staff in all schools working around the clock to make sure kids learn what they need to succeed in life. Students will express emotions, and when they feel they need help they'll l have all the counselors and friends needed. We don't need a computer for that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author talks about how in the future there is going to be cars that are operated by a computer. I am against the development of these cars. The reason I am against it because depending on a computer isn't the smartest thing to do.\n\nAs I said in the introduction depending on a comupter isn't the brightest thing to do because a computer can fail. The reason I said \"fail\" was because it can be hacked and the system can shutdown. One of the reasons it fails is by hacking because anymore that has the capacity and resorces to hack a computer can hack into it easily. An example is how people around the world try to hack our high secerity system to get secret files that only the government has use of. People can hack into the system a cause the car to go out of control of someone they dislike which cause an accident. The second reason the system of the computer can fail at any time. An example is if the car is in motion the car can stop while you are in the highways which can cause a serious accident. Driving a driverless car can cause a debate of whos fault the accident could be like in article it said \"If technonlogy fails and someone is injuried, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer\".\n\nI disagree with driverless cars. Since it can cause many problems such as accidents,debates to have them or not, and the technology can fail in many ways. An example is the system shutting down and hacking. When people buy this car in the future it s will cause so much damage which will hurt our society and people will start losing trust on the technology which effects the companies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir happy I think mood happy Narciso Rodriguez greatful mostley everything life In Narciso s neighborhood Came together great solidarity friendship All though diffrent cultures", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new hom\n\nwhould you send someone to explore venus with the technology that we haave\n\nright now? the author of the article\n\nthe challege of exploring venus made some\n\nvery import points about\n\nwhy\n\nwe sohould explore venus.\n\nthe author believes that even. that is worthy exploring venus using old tecnology and new tecnology for example. the mechamical computers, NASA's idea of the ships and the new materials that were being testes\n\nfirt of all the author explains the old technology that is used ti be use in\n\nduring\n\nthe 1940 word war two by making\n\ncalculations using\n\ngears and\n\nlevers. no electronic were needed for this computer. the only problem would be that the the computers are very delicated when is put to extreme conditions.\n\nsecondly the author mentions an idea that NASA\n\nhas that he explains could\n\nto very useful for exploring venus.\n\nthe author\n\nexplains that venus has a very high temperature but the vehicle would hover\n\n30 miles over\n\nfrom\n\nthe surface of venus where is would\n\navoid bad graounds. this idea that\n\nNASA\n\nhas come up\n\nto its\n\na good way\n\nfor humans\n\nto vivit\n\nand explore venus.\n\nlastly the author believes\n\nthea venus\n\nis not\n\nto\n\ndiferent from earth\n\nand\n\nin the right conditions\n\nhumans could\n\nbe living is venus. the author\n\nmentions how scients\n\nbelieved\n\nthat venus.\n\nis the\n\nis the planet\n\nwith the more like earth\n\nand how\n\nit could posibly at one\n\ntime had\n\noceans\n\nresearch on venus\n\ncould also explain\n\nthat venus\n\nat one\n\npoint\n\ncould\n\nhave and\n\nmaintain\n\nlife forms this is why it would be wortly for humanns\n\nto explore venus because it could posibly be the nex\n\nearth\n\nin conclutions\n\nthe author\n\nbrought many points of why\n\nwe sould keed on good\n\nundertanding about the exploration\n\nvenus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered about cars that can drive without a human driving it? Cars that can drive themselves will not be good for this world. Driverless cars will not be good for this world because they will not be as safe as humans driving cars, it would cost too much money for the driverless car to work at its full potential, and drivers will get bored sitting in the car. These are reasons why the development of driverless cars needs to stop.\n\nA driverless car will not be good for drivers because the cars would not be as safe as a human would be driving the car. If the car is driving itself and it sees an accident, how will it know how to drive around it. If there is road construction, the driverless car would not know what to do in that type of situation. In the article, the text says,\"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" The text also says,\"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" This shows that even driverless cars can get into car accidents. If the driverless car got in to a car accident-would it be the driver's fault or would it be the car's fault?\n\nAnother reason that a driverless car should not be introduced to the world is because it would cost too much money for the driverless car to work at its full potential. For the driverless cars to work correctly there would have to be huge upgrades to all present roads we have right now. If we tried to upgrade all the roads we have now, that would simply be too expensive. In the article, the text says,\"These smart-road systems worked suprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, somthing that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" This shows that for the driverless car to really work the builders had to upgrade the present roads we have now. If upgrading just a few roads was too expensive, how will we be able to upgrade all the roads for the driverless car?\n\nLastly, driverless cars would not be good for the world because the drivers would get bored sitting in the car. For the car to drive itself, the driver must keep their hands on the wheel at all times. The driver must also have to stay focused. Most drivers would rather driver than sit in the driver's seat doing absolutely nothing. In the article, the text says,\"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for theri turn to drive? 'The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge,' admits Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver.\" This shows that even if we did have driverless cars that someone would need to be at the wheel paying attetion to the road. This would bore drivers very quickly. Why would we want a driverless car if we have to keep hold of the wheel at all times?\n\nIn conclusion, we should not have driverless cars because they will not be as safe as humans driving cars, it would cost too much money for the driverless car to work at its full potential, and the drivers would get bored sitting in the car. Driverless cars will not help the world. The development of driverless cars needs to stop.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient My mom told getting fo I happy come I opening presents So I asked said would get taxes came I patient wait months couple days I mad cause I thought So I go school wait wait came It seemed like days got longer longer I getting mader mader longest months ever I didnt even know could feel long like I though year went Ater went finally I didnt get like end month crushed little heart bodly wait thing long I wanted bad When I got fuh play games apps conqurors amazingIf something happen I would destroyed A expensive get take care Thats keeping special place away little kids I dont even let play I feel hide might play supervision thats time play That thing cost much money get lost broken Specially time I wait My little sister getting thing like its kind educational one My little brother getting dsIm happy getting thing stop asking stuff My mom getting games birthday I one little brother sister lost I angry cant play That defenitly thing wait patient Thats play Im saved il getting lost broke If mom wont get another one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story affects cyclist negative way He intrusted men asked directions knew talking With directions mind traveled way destination Only find deserted towns disowned factorys hills With high deserts California June With aspects cycalrst worn dehydrated saying Id read sucking stones helps take mind thirst shaving deep name thirst After finding place get drink stated I overwhelming buy bait showing deep gratitude relief finding water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes i think that the technolody to read the emotinal expressions of students in a classroom is valuble. One reason why i feel like this is a good diea is because it lets you help the student out if they are deprssed or something. Because not alot of students may not say anything because they dont want their business out there in public. And iIf you use this technology then youll be able to come talk to that student 1on1 as a techer face to face to solve the problems they they are delaing\n\nwith.\n\nIts basically a 3-D computer model that scans your whole face. And all 44 major muscles in the model must must move the exact same just like human muscles should. It has 6 basic emotions which are happines,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness. So its like a software and you scan your face and it shows your emotions and you are basically having the human traits when\n\nit comes down to\n\nemotions.\n\nUs humans preform the same task when it comes to trying to paint sculptures of peope and paintings.\n\nFor example Mona LIsa she was a human that alot of people know about because of the well known Painter Da Vinci ended up making a famous painting of her. Her painting made alot of people smile when they seen her cause it showed different types of emotions when looking at her.\n\nBut now people are starting to benfit the future as technology is only going to improve as we live life. For example say that you smile when a web ad appears on your screen because it may be something that you are interrested in. But alos say that what if a different type of ad shows up and then you have a sad or different type of expressin or emotion. Then the screen will go to a different ad because it bascially scaneed your face. And it seen how you reacted so it made up some changes.\n\nBut if i was to judge i think this is a good use of technology. aAd i feel like we could use this not only in a psoitve way. But to help benefit the next geneartion of people in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. It helps make countries that are in ruins recover their food supplies, animals, and more. You can use this program as something less extreme than war for your service. The trips are fun expieriences.\n\nWhen you are on the trips, you have plenty of time for sightseeing. You benefit a lot from being a Seagoing Cowboy. If you get bored, you wont. Taking care of the animals will keep you busy.\n\nThe animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Sometimes it can be a dangeous job though. But, it is mostly fun. After the animals were unloaded, everyone played games like baseball and such.\n\nThe games also help pass time. Being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure. It opened up the world to me. It will make you more aware of other people's needs.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is a great opportunity. And, I hope you take it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author introduced a new technology. It is called the Facial Action Coding System. It enables computers to identify human emotions. Those emotions can be portrayed on a human or on a painting scuh as, The Mona Lisa. This new technology, Facial Action Coding System, is valuable. It is valuable because it can figure out exactly what someone was feeling and it could help schools.\n\nNow, figuring out exactly what someone was or is feeling may not be so important to you. It could be very important though. For example, in the passage \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", paragraph 1, the author tells us exactly how Mona Lisa was feeling. She was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. For the moste part she was happy right? But what about the 17% of her feelings that were filled with disgust, fear, and anger. Whatwas causing those feelings. Think about it. If we can figure out exact emotions of people from the past, we could dig in and find out a lot more about our world's history. Those 17% of emotions could be nothing at all, but what if it was a major. What if it was something we didn't know about her.\n\nThis new technology could also help out schools. In aragraph 6, the author talks about how the Facial Action Coding System could potentially improve classrooms. That would result in smarter people in this world which is great. The technology could read your facial expressions to see if you are bored. If you are bored, then the technology could improve the classroom to be more interesting to you. If you are more interested in the subject at hand, then you will understand it better. If you understand it better, you will have better grades and have more knowledge. This will ultimately result in smarter people in the world.\n\nSo the Facial Action Coding System is valuable. It can help us find exact emotions of a person. It could help us with with our schooling. We could find out so much more about our world and increase the IQs of others. This system could be so important for our world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can still be dagerous because it still needs to be more advance in technogly. It still needs more to be safe. Theres a lot more to be checked for the car to drive itself. Cars are not yet ready to perform to drive itself or you being in the car controlling it.\n\nThe cars should have more sensors to be safer in the roads. And lot more smarter, it has to have a lot of control when driving in the high speed roads. Driverless cars has to have immedantly brakes and if it doesnt it may cause some serious damage to the car. May cause an accident.\n\nWhy you have to be in the car if you are not driving. If your going away for a long trip you should be driving instead of the car itself driving. Driverless car can miss under stand signals or stop working. The sensors can cause problems to it. It can be risky for the car driving you where you want to go.\n\nIf your in the car by your self and going for a long trip it would be boring. You would fall asleep easily and when your not paying attention and the car driving itself can cause some serious problems. Think about you falling asleep and up ahead a sign says constructions workers up ahead and the car alerts you and you still asleep you may cause a accident.\n\nWaiting on the law should be another 5 to 10 years to check all driverless cars can do great in the roads.\n\nAnd all states should agree take more time. Driverless cars technogly is risky because you so use to driving youself and now they think that their company of their cars are ready. And when passengers and pedestrians get in an accident cause of the technogly who fault is it?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im cencorship good reasons Everyone censor ship well im different perspective ur old enough get movie book thats reason On another note shouldnt matter People choice If want go get rated movie watch kids thats choice Its defantly person makes movies choice censor cusswords stuff Thats make edited cds people instead People different beliefs whatever believe go somebody else differant beliefs dont like geuss neede ta write paragrapgh like im Also people want everthing cencored eventually theyre nt going nothing read watch listen So u people want everything cencored I hope ur happy world nothing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "25 years ago something hysterical happen around Mars.\n\nNASA'S spacecraft called Viking 1 was circumnavigating the planet, snapping photos of possible landning sites for the other spacecraft viking 2.\n\nWhen Viking 2 was found, it was a shadow likeness of a human face.\n\nIt was huge, its length was two miles from end to end. The caption noted it was huge rock formation, but it resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nThat does not mean it was an alien, it just means that thats the way the natural landform formed.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" has been everywhere from Hollywood films to grocery store checkout lines for 25 years.\n\nVery few scienists believe that he Face was an alien artifact, phtographing Cydonial became a priority for NASA and Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in Septemebr and the year of 1997, about eighteen long tirinig years after the Viking mission concluded.\n\nIt says in the story that the team which is called MOC snapped a picture ten times sharper that the original Vikings photograph.\n\nThousands of peoples anxiety were coming out when they searched the web waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site revealing the answer.\n\nThe answer is a Natural landform, there was no alien monument after all.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 a war summer day in Cydonia.\n\nMars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\n\n\"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\"\n\nsaid Garvin.\n\nMalin's crew captured and extraordinary image using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\n\nEach pixel in he 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.\n\nBut as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times better and bigger that pixel size.\n\nSo if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they where.\n\nThe picture actually reveals that there is a martian equivalent of butte or mesa landforms common around the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is irrefutable that the life expectancy of old generations is getting shorter ,However they are not physically fit and prefer to live alone. Although there are some researches that have been carried out, resulting some solutions and its causes. that will be articulated in upcoming paragraphs.\n\ninitiating with the causes. The predominant reason is an environment to elaborate, in this modern era. Although there are some technologies that have been introduced to us, by which health problems can be cured, it causes a massive amount of damage to the environment, which makes older people hard to survive it cause some critical illnesses to them. Moreover, their physical strength also becomes weak and resulting some people may suffer from serious problems like paralyse. Secondly, Families are getting more attentive towards their work, whereas Children are busy in their schooling, by that, they do not get enough time, which they can use to talk with their older parents. Resulting in them suffering from loneliness and they become introverts. For example, 40% of individuals live separate from older people, as they feel hard to take care of them and the remaining 60% of Individuals are favoring their work more rather than their elders. Thus, they feel alone and also become physically and mentally weak.\n\nDespite the aforementioned causes, there are some solutions to tackle them. Firstly, the government has constructed some parks away from polluted areas. by planting trees ,especially for old generations in which they can do some physical exercise in the arms of nature, resulting to enhance their immune system as well as increase their life expectancy. Another solution is those old people can find the same masses with whom they can talk or play. Moreover, working people and youngsters should give them time to talk about their past activities and supervise them. For instance, Recently, authorities have announced a law. Elders can register the file against people who try to torture them, resulting 10,000 dollars fine with 3 years of jail.\n\nTo sum ,up everything that has been stated so far, Although there are several reasons like poor environment and shortage of time. but there are some measures that can be followed to overcome the problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The illustration gives us the detailed step-by-step process on how to produce carbonated drinks. The entire process consists of 5 stages which starts from water cleaning down to the packaging stage.\nIn the initial phase, the raw water gets filtered, softened, and gets an additional chemicals before pumping to electrical heaters. Once the mixture is already in electrical heaters, it means that it is already at the second stage of the production. After going through in the electrical heaters, the water goes to the cooling pipe as it readies to get carbonated. After passing through the pipe, carbon dioxied is added on the liquid, making it carbonated water. The third stage is mixing the carbonated water with colouring, syrup, and flavour inside the mixing tank. After which, the mixture is filtered, and filled in the bottles which is the second to the last stage. Lastly, the bottles will be packaged and shipped to different supermarkets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I dont think certain books music movies maganzines taken sheflsIf stuff like gets taken nothing good read book day starting get good take good book one readMost people think rap music bad music people listen day mosy people dont like countryThere bad movies fun watch becaues ether funn gross sad bad movies groess funn If people made better magazines wouldnt much money buissness go buissness good thing person runns buissness money feed kidsSence alive nost good thing like books music magazines changed people dont like stuff long time ago If people stop going movies buying books wht think Now alot good movies music coming brought back stuff use people would moneyWhy people would money people would go se movies back old daysSo like movie like even would make lot mof monoey So think take stuff loseing hour moneyThe people useing would movies books stuff useing drugs stuff get sent jail stuff", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many different opinions about the whole \"Driverless Cars\" idea. They're good, they're bad, etc. Why are they so good or bad? Well in my opinion they are a very bad thing. \"Driverless Cars\" are a very bad thing for multiple reasons.\n\nFirst, there's the increased risk of an accident. Sure technology is highly advanced now a days, but that doesn't mean there are zero problems. \"If the technology fails\", there is always a chance that something could go wrong. For example, how many times has your phone crashed or shut down on you? That could very likely happen to your driverless car. I know I wouldn't want a malfunction in my car and not be able to get anywhere, let alone get in an accident because something went wrong in my car.\n\nSecondly, it's encouraging our already lazy society to be even lazier. Everywhere you look there's someone being lazy. For example, instead of going outside on a nice day kids will play their video games or they will find an easy way to get something done quickly (shoving stuff under the bed instead of putting it away). All people do now a days is sit on there high tech devices. \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" These cars will just be that much more of a reason for people not to do something. \"[T]he dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we desire, [. . .] has finally begun ot catch up\". As soon as there are \"official\" driverless cars people wont have to worry about \"drunk driving\", speeding, falling asleep, etc.\n\nFinally, the financial cost of all of this. Everytime something new comes out it's expencive and \"high class\", but everyone still wants it. If driverless cars become an actual thing then they're going to be high priced. Plus the production of them will be just that much more expensive. The United States already has enough debt to deal with why would we want to put ourselves in even more? Sure people would still buy them, but if the police can't ticket anyone for speeding then we loose money from that. Car accidents are one of the leading causes of injury. If the driverless cars happen to help with less accidents then hospitals would loose major profit from car accident pacients.\n\nOf course, if the technology was perfect, the cars could benefit in a lot of ways. As we all know, though, technology isn't perfect. Which is exactly why the \"Driverless Cars\" are a terrible idea for our society. There are too many flaws with the idea of driverless cars. That is why I would not feel safe or comfortable in one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people know the negative consequences of smoking. However, hey still continue this behavior. The main reason is that a cigarette has a chemical component which keeps people smoking and a vital solution to reduce smoking in public is to increase the cigarette price.\nWith regard to this issue, Nicotine is one of the chemicals that manufacturers use to produce a cigarette and its effect causes smokers to be addicted to the compound. As a result, even though these people understand the degree of this dangerous product, they are not likely to stop using it. Furthermore, many health organizations have announced research demonstrating that the factor that hugely affects smokers to not be able to resist smoking us not a cigarette, but Nicotine.\nIn order to counteract the situation, perhaps the most effective mitigation is for governments to set the minimum price of a cigarette on markets which is unaffordable for buyers. Consequently, this action possibly decreases the purchasing power of smokers and, subsequently, they tend to discontinue smoking. This is exemplified by the pilot project of Thai government which charge cigarette purchasers ten times higher than the market price in specific areas. After that the authorities conduct public surveys and find that more than 80% of people who used to smoke in the areas quit smoking.\nIn conclusion, people who smoke cannot change this habit due to Nicotine in a cigarette which can be addressed by governmental policy to raise the price of a cigarette with the view to promote citizens to cease smoking and take care of their health instead.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aliens couldn't have created this! If it is formed by some kind of rock that is placed on mars, how could a alien create this? This \"Face on Mars\" is a natural landform. Most of the pictures that were taken of this landform were compared to other landforms that are on Earth. The \"Face on Mars\" was compared to landforms such as, The Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Both landforms are about the same height.\n\nIn the photos, there is no signs of any alien artifact. There isn't any monuments, pyramids, or symbols found around this landform. Other than a shadow that looked like an Egyptian Pharoah, wasn't anything else found to suspect aliens made \"The face on Mars.\" If there was an ancient civilization on Mars, it would help us figure out how this was made.\n\nSo... Until you can give a good explanation or opinion that aliens have made this, it is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is an essential part of everyone's life. The importance of co-educational schools has become controversial in recent times. Some people harbour a belief that parents should enrol their children on co-education due to a plethora of reasons while other people are opposed to this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate on the positive aspect of these trends and thus lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are adequate reasons to obtainable with the substantial reasons. The top-notch concrete reason is children attending in the co-education school which enable them to performance better by compete with other genders in academic records as well as extra circular activities. Another infamy root is general equality. To probe more deeply, basically men are more arrogant and consider women in the low level. Therefore, studying in the co-educational schools, which help them to treat women with respect and protection.\r\n\r\nThe rearmost coherent factor cannot be neglected is that major of the job fields are co-education jobs. Therefore, fresher easily can colaborate with other gender people without shyness after graduation by attending the co-educational instututions.Another observation in this regard is that children attending the co-educational school, more chance decrease rate of rape and abuse cases.Needless to say that all the points stand in a good stead.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting that parents sending their children to a co-educational school, it's beneficial for individuals as well as for societies. Consequently, I firmly agree with the given statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Research has proven that lawbreaker receives a small degree of education. Many hold the opinion that the most suitable way to lower criminal offences is by teaching those in jail the skills they need to acquire employment after their release. I agree with this notion to a certain extent.\nFirstly, many people are sent to prison due to crimes such as theft and joining gangs that participate in illegal activities. This is because they did not graduate from school, let alone college, to obtain the tools that they need to make money in an honest way. For instance, 2019 Statistics obtained from prison research revealed that 80% of criminal offences are committed by uneducated individuals who have no other options to put food on their tables except by committing these acts. Therefore, educating these delinquent's during the time that they spent locked up, paves the way for them to receive income without breaking the law. Overall, this leads to a reduction in illegal activities.\n\nHowever, let us not ignore the fact that some lawbreaker is well educated. Which means that a lack of education does not drive the acts they commit, in fact, they are driven by hate. Although they have spent time in prison for their acts, their mentality remains the same, especially if they are part of a cult. In these situations, no amount of knowledge can prevent them from repeating their offences again. For example, people who are part of racist organizations like the KKK, will continue to kill black humans as they believe they are entitled to their cause. Undoubtedly, the application of teaching schemes in \nprisons will not uplift the burden of their crimes once their jail time is up.\nIn conclusion, despite the many wrongdoer's that would refrain from criminal acts, once they are released from captivity, if they were to be taught important working skills, some already posses these skills and continue to cause havoc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people in the world have always wondered if any other planet is able to sustain life, but no scientist really knows that for sure. The scientists and researchers in this article, are trying to evaluate and see if Venus has the ability to sustain life or any organism. The author of this article uses various descriptions and pieces of evidence that they know of, to try to find ways that Venus is a lot more than we think it is. The author included past attempts, the location of the planet and geographical features, and by simply adding information that most people did not know about Venus.\n\nTo begin, the author uses many examples of past experiements and attempts made by astronomers and NASA administators to convince the reader that Venus should still continue to be explored despite the past failed attempts. In the article, it states, \"each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours,\" and it also says, \"maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decaded...Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\" These two quotes show that the failed attempts and facts about past attempts, they still give the author hope that they will continue to keep trying to fully explore Venus, entirely. In addition to the past experiments, the author also includes things that they do know about Venus to convince that Venus is very worthy of studying. In this article, he includes, ''often referrred to as Earth's 'twin,' Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms density and size,\" while also saying, \"astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well one have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" The author most likely uses this quote to show how similar Venus is to Earth, and to hint that if Venus is so similar to Earth we should definitely continue to keep studying Venus and to hopefully make a discovery. The author includes, \"long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth... furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit.\" This quote shows that the author is comparing Venus to Earth because of the many similarities that they share.\n\nTo finallize, the author supports the idea of studying and/or traveling to Venus to learn more about it and to see what all the planet holds. He uses examples of past attempts of discovery, facts about Venus in general, and also features that this unexplored planet holds. He is very interested in what he feels could be a great discovery and an amazing experience to gain a lot of unknown information. Even though the discovery may be dangerous, the author still gives examples and evidence to show why he thinks this mysterious planet is a worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been in development from many years, from companies that specialize in technology, such as Google, as well as mainstream car companies such as Mercedes, BMW and Tesla. They are venturing into the realm of science fiction, utilizing many advancements in technology to bring a new level of safety to driving\n\n\"There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting. The sensors weren’t there, the computers weren’t there, and the mapping wasn’t there.\" (para 6). However, these cars have also been the source for much argument due to moral conundrums associated with accidents, and are by no means a complete solution as of now.\n\nIf one looks at the list of car manufacturers provided it is easy to conclude that the cars will not come cheap. A lot of the providers are luxury brands, and that added to the cost of additional equipment needed, as well as research and development, could shoot the price beyond the reach of the majority of the population, preventing them from experiencing the fullest extent of security suggested by this system. It is an issue in itself to prove that these cars are consistently safe, both for the safety of passengers but also because of the legal issue associated with these cars. \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\"(paragraph 9). Currently there are no laws to take action in the case of an accident and it will take a lot of time, money and setting of boundaries to establish a system to govern driverless cars.\n\nOn the other hand it seems like driverless cars could provide consistency in a way humans cannot. Their information and instructions are derived from sensors\n\nand algorithms \"Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car’s surroundings. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\"(paragraph 4). Essentially they get their information from mathematics, a consistent variable that is not prone to effects such as alcohol or tiredness. They can bring organization to busy cities through a driverless taxi system, save money in the long run and reduce the impact on the environment \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today’s taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\" (paragraph 1).\n\nAll in all these driverless cars seem to be a good thing, even in the early stages they are currently in. They can even help drivers focus on the roads, the best way to obtain safety \" Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road... lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" (paragraph 7,9). They can help urban infrastructure grow, and they can also push the boundaries of human innovation. Granted there are some legal and moral issues on the line too but on the whole it seems like driverless cars are the future, and that the future is coming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wonder if you car was safe? What if you were causing enviornmental damage? Would you chnage then?\n\nIn VAUBAN, Germany residents of this upscale community are suburbam pioneers, going where few soccer moms or comuting executiver have nere thought about going before. They have given up there cars. In this experimental new district they are generally forbidden to have street parking, driveways, and home garages. As a result to this , 70 percent of Vaun=ban's Families do not own cars, and 57 precent Sold thir cars to move there. Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tebd to make their homes. And that,experts say, is a hge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. . . . passrngers cars are responsible for 12 precent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe . . . and up to 50 percent in some car0intensive areas in the United states.(Elisabeth Rosenthal)\n\nHowever, in Paris after days of near-recored pollution they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of france , after just five-days of intensifying smog. They all Blamed Diesel fuel, since france has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 precent of vehicles in france, compared to 53.3 precent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe, According to Reuters.(Robert Duffer)\n\nIn BOGOTA, Colombia a program that's ste to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day. Leaving the streets of the capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. Municipal Authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event and were enthusiastis.\"These people re generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing border,\" said Enrique Riera, the mayor of Asuncion, Paraguay.(Andre Selsky)\n\nAtlast, in the United States, President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States'greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week. Fortuitious ssist from an incipien shift in Americans are buying fewer cars , drivingless and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The United staes , with its broad expansas and suburban ideals, had long been one of the world prime car cultures. its is the birthplace of Model T; the hopme of Detroit; the place where wilson pickett immortalized \"Mustange Sally\". . . But Americas love affair with vehicles are cooling.\n\nSo as you drive you high byrd cars down the highway, stop and think what your doing to the air and evironment around you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary era where people are busy with their chore activities, It has been seen that a section of society is keen to look at the root's of their place for instance it might be their building in which they stay or even can be about the house in which they live.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, Every country has many stories and a rich history to offer, but it all depends on an individual to what extend one is curious to know about it. When it comes to knowing about your own resident it gives a unknown pleasure, and its activity is usually carried by the family members who stay away from their mother land. These people are intrestented to know about the place the cultural area and the heritage about the house they reside in because it gives them a sense of acheivement as they come closer and get attached to their native land. One of my friend who stays abroad, when came to visit the village he made a documentary film on the house which they owned, as it was one of the ancient houses.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n However, one can conduct this activity by using many sources such as having conversation with elderly people of the locality, More over It is also possible to start with own family, like to go through the old photographs of any special occasions. To know about the locality and the house people can ask the neighbours, who might know about that place in much detail. Especially every village or house there are many workers as in, security guards who has served for a decade or so, or may be house maids they can also embark on many such incidents or some special moments what they still remember. Information from the Government servants is also a possible way such as a police man or a fire fighter can also contribute to collect some data of the place.\r\n\r\n To put it in a nutshell, It is always better to know about the place where my reside as well as , one should also have sufficient knowledge about the house or building they live in because it not only increases our knowledge but ,It also creates an unknown bond with the place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This Facial Action Coding System could be good in a couple ways but its unnecessary. Computers might know what your emotions and help in a couple ways to know if you're confused about something or do not like something you see on the internet. Just because you look at someones face, it doesn't mean that they feel some type of way. Someone could be smiling or laughing but that doesn't mean that they are truely happy. It's the same thing by having a serious face.\n\nA face expression doesn't always show someone's emotions. Other people do not care about other people's emotions. It's better to notice things with your own eyes than a computer or machine to tell you how somebody is \"feeling\". The article says you can tell how a friend is feeling by just looking at their face. That's true because you know that person very well.\n\nPeople do want to hide their emotions for their own specific reason. We all have that moment when we would want to keep our feelings to ourselves. We wouldn't like for systems to know our emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is it a good thing or a bad thing? It could help people find there problem or could it not? I find FACS a good thing a postive. This ivention could help people and doctors find issues. It could help people and doctors fix issues this ivention could help schools when a student is becoming confused or bored or kids that don´t like to talk open up about how they feel. When a friend, family member or co worker is having a bad day we could use FACS to fix they´er bad day. It could help out in law inforcement this invention could fix so many problems that we have today. FACS is a wonderful thing look when phones and computers where being ivented people douted and said its a terrible idea or it will never work, Now its one of the best iventions thats ever been created. FACS is and will be a great thing to many people, school and companys it could save lifes It will be the next big thing!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He author concludes paragraph story It sounds good show people writing matter happend life Just keep think best Just like flower keeps coming back going thats tuff", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "World War II has started in Europe and they need help. This is time that you can be a Seagoing Cowboy. You could go on a ship over the Atlantic and the Pacific Oceans. You can help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more. 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA, aka the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration and they have joined with us, the Seagoing Cowboys. We need help to save these countries, so come on down and sign up to become one.\n\nYou can get orders to go to places like New Orleans or Greece. You would have so much fun going there. And you would get free time after you finish. And you would need a partner to help you get the supplies out. At night, you'll need to be a watchman to keep on guard and also find the people you're trying to get to. So you need to be awake. You will need to your duty for these people. If you graduated from high school, you can join us like Luke and Don.\n\nYou can be a great person for those people in the countries. And for your free time, you can play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and game to help pass the time. Your friends could beat you in those games.\n\nYou could have an adventure with us. Luke said, \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs\" and that is true. And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. You could be Luke as well by helping many people become saved by you and your partner.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it explains that Venus is like a twin to Earth. Venus has a different atmosphere than Earth. As NASA is working on something to approach to study Venus. As the scientist continue to work on something to reach Venus, although the danger it presents.\n\nVenus is referred to as Earth's \"twin\" it's close to their size and density.Earth, Venus, and Mars orbit around the sun at different speed. So,these differences mean that we are getting closer to Mars and Venus, as scientists send spacecraft to survive the landing, none of them survive for more than a few hours. No spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decedes. It gets harder and harder as time goes by, since we don't know what challenge us later in the future.\n\nAll planets have different atmosphere, Venus has a think atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. The challenging part are the clouds since they have highly corrosive sulfuric acid. On the planet's surface, its above 800 degrees Fahrenheit and one could suffer if they don't have protection. It's greater than our own planet's atmosphere by 90 times. The conditions of are far too extreme to arrive on the planet and it's the hottest surface temperature of anh planet in our solar system.\n\nAs NASA is working on other things to be able to reach and study more of Venus. NASA has made a simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks. Scientists need to seek on how to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus. They need to be able to understand the resistant of pressure, heat and other forces. Having to meet these challenges by Venus has value, by humans curiosity and that wil lead into danger.\n\nIn conclusion, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" even though that studying Venus will have a dangerous path,it will present the future to seek it. Venus is like a twin to Earth. Venus has a different atmosphere than Earth. As NASA is working on something to approach to study Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the recent era, technological enhancement has led to an evolution of artificial robots and computers, which have replaced most of the jobs which was earlier done by humans. Using latest computer technology, there are many advantages which makes tedious manual work a lot easier. Though there are many positives, there are some drawbacks too. This essay will tell you why the benefits of this technological development overcomes the disadvantages.\n\n\nRobots and computers have many advantages which have simplified many human jobs due to various factors. Use of machinery not only saves time but also money. For example, in the olden days people used to manually write a business letter which needed to be sent through the post and it would take several days to get delivered. Invention of email in the late 90's has certainly solved this problem. Now it is much easier to send a business email with minimal cost which has enhanced business profits.Another example we can consider of Online shopping which is far more convenient than Traditional shopping. Varieties of options can be explored and chosen which includes free delivery too. Certainly improved machinery has lots of positives which are useful for the development of mankind.\n\n\nAlthough automation has helped humans in various fields, there are some negatives which also needs to be considered. With the introduction of computers in office, many unskilled labour lost their jobs and percentage of unemployment increased rapidly. Human health has also become a primary concern since people sit long hours in front of television with very little or no exercise at all. Even though computers and robots have improved human lives, it has also impacted them in a negative way.\n\n\nTo conclude, improved technology has certainly eased a lot of hardcore manual tasks with the introduction of automated household machines and technological gadgets. Though It has added many benefits to our life, it is also responsible for some the problems which we are suffering today. If we can improvise the limitations of these advancements, we can certainly unleash and attain greater heights for human development. As per my opinion, advantages of improved technology will certainly outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger's friend Don Reist invited him to go on a cattle ride to Europe and in 1945 world was II was in Europe and thats where Luke and Don signed up and was told to go to New Orleans.Before arriving in Greece Luke turned 18 so he was able to be drafted to the military.When he looked at the draft board he saw that he was going to be a cattle boat trip.In 1947 he was discharged and had 9 trips and the most out of a Seagoing Cowboy.On the ships adn boats there was hourses to take care of and that was Likes job so every one hour he had to check up on them and one time when he was going to tell the captain tot ell him there ok he slipped down a ladder and started rolling about to go off the ship then a metal piece stopped him his heart was racing.After that he wasn't able ot work for a while so he was able to go around the ship and walk around,after the animals was unloaded he\n\nwas watching his friends play table tennis,vollleyball,and a lot more so that the time would go by faster for him.When everything was domne he said that being a Seagoing Cowboy opened up a new world for him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "useing technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom to identify human emotions in class .\n\npersonal i think that would be a great idea and would help out a lot. it states that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored ,\" that could help in a lot of ways . if you computer could do that it would help many students to get more involved in the class work and not lose anybody with lack of understanding or any other reason .\n\nit can even tell the diffrence between a genuine smile and a forced one . it says that in a real smile a muscle called the zygomatic major lifts the corners of your mouth. when a smile is forced the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a diffrent muscle.\n\ni feel like this would help alot in some cases to keep everyone involed it would help teachers know when someone isnt on the same page or doesnt understand, and the teacher can adress that . so yea its a great idea", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The rain water is collected and goes through an underground water filtering system. The rain water is first collected at the side of the house and goes through a drain which connects with the underground water filter. After the water is filtered, they will be keep in the storage. Then they will be send for water treatment where chemicals are added. After that, the water is back to the house for drinking.\nThe water filter at the beginning briefly filtered the big particals such as dirt or some objects that can be seen with bare eyes. And the storage after that is to wait for sedimentation of other big particals. On the other hand, going through water treatment, which is the last step of making drinking water, mainly cleans minor particals or molecules in the rain water. And the chemicals are added to kill germs or bacterias that might harm human bodies. After all these cleaning, the dirty rain water can be safe for human to drink.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My thoughts on the google driverless car is simple. Once they are truly able to be autonomus and safe then you can put them out on the streets. So as of right now I think that they should not be on the streets. Stating my opinion and further explain I think that they will never get to a point full reliablity.\n\nBut once they are affordable for the average person. I know that people will but them like hot cakes. But what happens when an coustomer that has a self driving car hits a person without a self driving car; the car company and every one involved in the accident will go to court and fight. The car company will come out on top though; the big name car company will fight so hard that they will get a bill passed that bans all humans from driving!\n\nThis is also a reason that I am not for driverless cars. I dont want to be the person that is taken to the supreme court and goes against a big name car company, I dont wish that upon any one. I feel as If 90% is not enough for a car to be in charge. The car can not go through enough simulations to know how to travel through white out conditions, or even dangerous off road terrains. When you truly think about the cost and the time to get these on the road its not worth it. I would compare this to texting and driving how many teenagers had to die before we realised it was a problem?\n\nHow many will have to die for this inovation. We are not ready for this technology yet... Or maybe we are to prepared for this.\n\nIn this society hackers are becoming more and more dangerous. I know these autonomus cars will have to have google maps or be connceted to some kind of network. What happens when cars start getting hacked and maipulated what do we do about? What kind of insurance would be needed and how expensive would it be?\n\nEven though I am against this, I still reconginze that there could be positives to this. Every day driving tasks would be handled in a fluid and orgainzed manor. When you are in the car you could truly connect with the people inside. Long trips would turn into exiting family times. There would be no need for all seats of a car facing forward.\n\nNow refelecting on what I wrote I have realised that there is more that just safety in Inovative decisions. You have to consider what the majority of the people want. I know that many people will like this idea. My generation would be all over this, we are just a bunch of lazy tech heads. I think that self driving cars will connect with many people. Many people exept for me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I excited get first ipad But long line mom kept telling patient I stand quietly Then got closer I could wait Finally got beging line When I got dad said what kind want I told I want big one Therefore got put lot cool songs After went home I listened day Then said stop listing music I put hurs Then time eat dinner After went car ride daddys new car Finally went back home I put away stuff I bought store Then I watched tv ate popcorn Then time go bed That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives mood created author gratefull family Throughout memoir Narciso Rodriguez talks life growing Readers read things like My mother father come country courage Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative towards end author explains grateful parents I always grateful parents love sacrifice reality way express gratitude spirit generousity impressed upon early age demonstration important family friends Narciso Rodriguez greatly influenced family childhood memoir shows along grateful always", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars should not be allowed because they can be dangerous. Many things can happen with driverless cars such as, accidnets. There is not only the question of who's fault it is , but also the injuries that are involved.\n\nThere are sensors on the car, but with technology it can fail at any time. It may be a small scratch on the car in an accident to more serious things like the loss of a life. Teenagers will take driverless cars for granted. They won't realize that they still have to pay attention to the road. They may get distracted and text and play on their phones. This leads to accidents and injuries. When these accidents happen, would the \"driver\" or car company take the blame? This ultimately leads to law suits. The driverleass car also casues people to become more dependent. The people will not have to learn all of the traffic rules. They will just rely on the car to know everything. Except the car is not completely driverless, so what is the point of it. The car requires the passenger / \"driver\" to always keep an eye on the road since the car cannot do everything. Some people might not understand this becuase why is a driverless car requiring the person to do work.\n\nDriverless cars should not be legal. They are dangerous and might have a lot of liability issues. New laws will have to be made to cover the driverless cars. It is also illegal in some states, if the us government legalizes it, then the other states will be required to legalize it again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Bringing a computer that reads emotions? Would you want your emotons out there? Having a computer read your emotions could possibly be very helpful. With the experts Dr. Huang and his colleagues we could determain if it is a good idea. The computer could have both pros and cons but it could be a thing of the future and it would be best if we keep an opened mind to it.\n\nHaving this computer brought into to classroom can have both pros and con. The cons could be students not feeling so comftorable being around it. They may not wat their feelings to be put out there and be forced to talk about why they are feeling how they are. Pros would be the computer telling how you are feeling and friends or teachers could try to comfort the student. The computer would be able to tell if you are bored or confused and help things be a little easier. Bringing the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom would be valuable. It is something different that students would probably enjoy or think it is cool. With the computer being able to tell how you are feeling and maybe encorage a student to talk how she or he is feeling and it could possibly make them feel better. Some students may not want to talk about how they are feeling but at least if we know what kind of mood they are in, a friend or teacher can try to comfort them. One thing is mentioned in the article by Dr. Huang is the statement \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human insturctor.\" From the statement made by Dr. Huang he has a point. Many students get bored or confused during class but are too afraid to speak up. Being confused during a lesson is never easy, but with the technology of the computer it would see if one is puzzled and try to explain it better. If bored during class the computer could modify the lesson to make it not so boring or switch the subject for a matter of time until it reads or emotions again and sees that we are not bored any longer. Having this come out into the real world could be a good opportunity for those who are trying to get humans and computers to communicate, like stated in the article \" Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. With more studying it could be determained to be a thing of the future.\n\nAlthough some might not thing it is a great idea we should always keep an opened mind to it. If a student is feeling sad and needs a friend but is too scared to reach out, it could really help. With todays society it could be a big role change. Never say nevere to something that could be possibly turn out to be the best invention. It could possibly help save lives. Having a positive mind to new things is always a great thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In these career oriented world people are postponing their family planning to late stage of their life. Perhaps, the most important reason is goal oriented. In my opinion, benifits of having offsprings in later age offsets the drawbacks entailed by this trend, as one can focus on their career and enjoy their life.\nThe major disadvantage of this trend offers is related to health. Having childrens in later stage may pose a risk to the mother because they may not be healthy enough to give birth to child. These may result in birth of a child with abnormal syndrome. For example, a research published in gynegology has found that females giving birth after the age of 35 years are highly prone to give birth to a diseased child.\nFirstly, primary reason behind planning children in later stage is that these days people are becoming more career oriented. These means that they have to put their energy, time and money in acheving their dreams.\nThese may make them competent for upbring of their childrens in a well manner.\nMoreover, having childrens at later stage offers several advantages. The first obvious benifit is that people can acheive the heights in their careers as they can focus on theri career. They can devote all their resources and energy in to acheving their dreams. For instance, a growing body of research have found that 80% of people are successful in their career those who have planned their offspring in later stages of life.\nSecondly, people can enjoy their life because they donot have responsibility of nuturing their childrens. This further encourages them to explore the world in the way they want. For example, they can travel to the tourist places, explore the landscape and culture of other nations. Also they can develop their hobbies.\nIn conclusion, despite of having a disadvantage of helath, having childrens in later stge of life offers more advantages of acheving career and enjoying life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article titled The Challenge Of Exploring Venus, the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers of its enviorment by, letting the reader know how much we can accomplish by exploring a new planet similar to earth, and by letting the readers know that our travels as humans should not be limited by any dangers.\n\nin the article the author lets the readeer know how much we can accomplish by exploring a new planet similar to earth by first, explaining that we can discover things that we havent discovered before. In the article it states. \"NASA is workinf on other approaches to study Venus For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface.\" By reading this sentence from the article you can see that scientist are trying to create an object strong enough to resist Venus's enviorment. By doing this you can discover new life or objects that we do not have on Earth that might help.\n\nAnother way the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers is by\n\nletting the readers know that our travels as humans should not be limited by any dangers. The author talks about how us as humans should overcome our fears and challenegs to reach new discoverys. In the article it states. \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" aftere reading this sentence you can conclud that the author wants the readed to expand his mind beyond the horizan meaning, we as humans need to explore more of of where we live and not let our fears get the best of us.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers of its enviorment by, letting the reader know how much we can accomplish by exploring a new planet similar to earth, and by letting the readers know that our travels as humans should not be limited by any dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida Sentator,\n\nIt is in the interest of your state and your nation that you insist the keeping of the Electoral College system of voting. This is overwhelmingly clear because it allows the presidental canidates to focus on the country as a whole in their campaign trail instead of relying on a single region to win the presidency for them, it has been present in this nation  since out founding fathers, and the system also shows a clear winner in the end of the election.\n\nIn order for the presidental canidate to have a reasonable chance at winning the presidency, he or she has to appeal to the country as a whole instead of just focusing on a particular region. This is all due to the Electoral College. A canidate who is practically assured to win in a region, such as the Northeast, would not campaign as much in those states. The article\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College highlights that if that canidate were to becaome president of the United States, \"The residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised...that their votes do not count...that he really isn't their president.\" Just think about that. Imagine having a president who got elected just because he won over the South. It would be as if he or she had only that region's interests at heart and did not care for the rest of the nation. The Presidnet is suppose to be the leader for the whole nation, not just a section of it. If this were to happen,the nation would be fractured, all because we got rid of the Electoral College. Some might argue that that probabably would never happen, and it might not, but we always have to keep in mind the worse scenarios to ensure the best decisions for the United States.\n\nThe Electoral College is arguably an old method of voting. It was established by our founding fathers and has been quite realiable over the couple hundred years it has been in service. Admittably, there have been a few blips in the system, but what system doesnt have kinks that need to be rolled out once and a while? It was intended to be \"...a compromise between the election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" as explained in\n\nWhat is the Electoral College?\n\nWhy should this system be outed because of a fleeting feeling of anachronism? The intention of this system is meant to give equal votes to both the people and Congress.\n\nThe Electoral College system of voting has been under scrutiny lately. It has been a controversial issue. The system has had its share fo faults, but no more than a new system of voting would have. The Electoral College has served its country well and has given voices to the small states, given canidates a broader spectrum on their campaign trail, has been around for over 200 years, and shows a clear winner when all the votes are counted. Don't listen to the people telling you to stop the Electoral system Senator, because it is a valuable part of out nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that there are really no need for drivless cars. Who would want a car they can't even drive? I dont think much people would. Yes, a driveless car sounds very interesting and all but once people get tired of not being able to drive then it gets boring. Which means there would be a decrease in sells.\n\nThe Idea of not having to drive your casr sounds great. Omly when you're too lazy to drive. I feel that if people began to sell these cars. Then a lot of youth will be taken from teenagers. Most teenagres look forward to driving. If there are goin to be driveless cars i fell like lots of teenagres will miss out on a lot of experience. Yes, it was expressed that these cars can drive for a very long time without a diriver. But needs assistance when times are difficult like traffic. What if the driver is asleep will the car keep going as is. It was alreawdy stated in passage 9 that this is a huge concern! It states.. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with ALERT drivers. Presently, traffuc laws are written withthe assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control as all times.\"\n\nI'm looking out for the safety as well. If safety is a big concern i feel they should continue to just be cars that google has been working on since 2009. And not put them in harms way!\n\nDont get me wrong, just the sound of this sounds so cool. But you also have to look out for just more than the coolness of it. Think about what driveless cars will get us into. America is already a lazy country as is. Driveless cars is just giving people another excuse!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robots are likely to become as ubiquitous as the smartphone computers we all carry in our future society. While some people argue that robots might have negative impacts on the future society, I believe that the benefits of the robot are likely to outweigh the negative aspects of it.\n\nOn the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that robots might have adverse effects on society in the future. Firstly, some people believe that robots will harm the human workforce. The people will be replaced by machines and this will increase the unemployment rate. As a result, many other problems may emerge such as poverty and increased crimes. Secondly, people will become more dependent on robots in their daily life and this may harmfully affect their skills like cooking and driving. So people become less active and this may result in some health problems like obesity.\n\nOn the other hand, I would agree with those who argue that robots will play important positive roles in future society. The first role is that robots could operate in locations that humans cannot reach such as exploration of the outer space. They can act as extended eyes for humans enabling them to look beyond their visual boundaries. Moreover, robots will be used inside human bodies for monitoring their health and undertake surgery. The second role that will be played by robots is the helping of elderly and retired people with their daily life activities like cooking and cleaning. Finally, robots could do normal jobs quickly unlike human beings. Robots don not complain or get distracted or tired. They readily work twenty-four hours and require minimal maintenance.\n\nIn conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for in and against the role of robots in our future would, but I believe that robots will add many benefits to the future society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Expploring Venus\"\n\nThe author's is suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present. Maybe the author's is syaing that because the author's\n\nmight use to be a science teacher and that one of the most important one or maybe the author's might like Venus or like studyiing about it. Or maybe the author's just want people to study about Venus just for a fun fact. So I think that why the author's is suggests that people should study about Venus because is a worthy fact and also for \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\n\nSo the author's is saying that Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" because it's one of the brightest points oif the light in the night sky, and it's making a simple for even an amateur stargazer\n\nto spot, also the nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet the sun. Also while Venus is simple to see from the distant but it's also safe vantage point of Earth, and if it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. And that's one of fact in Venus paragraph.\n\nAnother suggestd that people should study that NASA was in it to, the author's says, \"That National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\", and the author's is saying it's to be important because NASA is also studying about Venus and the author suggests for studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nSo that why the author's is suggests to study Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present and it';s a worthy time to study about Venus because it got a lot facts about that you might know about and also exploring about Venus has a lot facts to learn about\n\nbecause that what author's want to do make them learn about, Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Facial Action Coding System is valuable . It is valuable because we ourselves sometimes need help when telling if someone is upset , mad, happy, sad, etc. I understand that the computer might not be so helpful at times when trying to figure an emotion displayed on someone, but overall I think the Facial Action Coding System is needed and therefore valuable.\n\nI understand that the computers might be helpful in classrooms . It can be helpful in classrooms because, if a teacher is teaching something and a student does not understand the lesson the computer can let the teacher know that the student does not understand what is going on or comprehend it . The computer can also let the teacher know if all of the students actually understand the lesson. I think by letting the teacher know that students are not comprehending it the teacher can address the problem and therefore help the student. By helping the student undersand the lesson it is also helping the student get better grades .\n\nThe computer also lets others know that something could be wrong with someone by telling someone else that , that person is sad,worried, or angry. It could possibly aslo detect if someone is depressed and needs help. But if the Facial Action Coding System did not exist that person might not be able to get the help they need . The computer is helping someone in need of help. And if it didn´t exist that person could be putting on a fake smile even though they are depressed and need help therefore they could also never get the help they need .\n\nI can understand why some people would not want to use these computers because they don´t think a computer should tell us how someone is feeling. I think that certain people can detect if something is wrong with someone or if that person is confused , or worried, or upset. But it also wouldn´t hurt to make sure and double check that , that person is telling the truth and is not hiding something important .\n\nOverall I think that the Facial Action Coding System is useful , helpful, and valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is a system that the United States has been using to elect its leaders for many years. A large number of people have come to believe that this method of voting is fraud because not everyone's vote is truely heard. The way the Electoral College works is every four years when people go to vote, people are not actually voting directly for their desired leader, but for a state elector. Although this sounds like it would work flawlessly in theory, in some cases the number of electoral votes have overridden the number of popular votes.\n\nIn the 2000 election between Bush and Gore, Bush ended up winning even though Gore received more popular votes. The nation did not know who the President was going to be until the next year becuase the election came down to only a couple of hundred votes. Although this is a rare occurance it shows how easily the Electoral College can wrongly choose a President. If the United States elected a President by taking a popular vote, this issue would not exist. All of the extra systems that are put in place are simply not needed.\n\nIf the Electoral College was removed and the United States voted in leaders based on the national popular vote, this means that there would also be more people voting. Many people, especially in one sided states such as Texas and California, believe that their vote does not count becuase they're state is guarenteed to favor one party every election. If the Electoral College did not exist then knowing that every individual vote counts and that it does not matter where you live, more people are actually going to listen to what candidates have to say and are going to go out and vote.\n\nIn Conclusion, although the Electoral College may sound good in theory, I believe that the United States voting system would be more legitimate if a national popular vote was taken so that everyone's voice is heard no matter where they live. Voters should be able to know that they're vote will count so that the right leader is chosen for the right reason.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The solar system has many interesting planets and those planets have many interesting landmarks. The Face on Mars just happens to be one of them. The face was found in a region of Mars called Cydonia. I feel as though it is a coincedence that a natural landmark on our neighborring planet looks like a human face. Many people say that The Face on Mars is just a legend, but we have scientifical proof of a face on Mars. The Face on Mars isn't an alien creation, but it is a natural landmark.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a natural landmark. It's a natural landmark because not only has it been there for a long time, but over the years we have found that it is a natural landform not an alien monument(JPL website). Many Hollywood movies have used the term \"that face on Mars,\" but many people think that the face is evidence of life on Mars. Some scientists have compared the face to landmarks in the USA called buttes or a mesa. Many people also say that the face resembles an Egyptian Pharoah.\n\nOn the other hand, some people specifically NASA has used The Face on Mars as a way to show that some things are important for taxpayers to see. Like I mentioned before Hollywood has made many big selling movies about The Face on Mars. Also, many books and magazines have used The Face as a headliner. Some NASA defenders has said that they wish there was some sort of an ancient civilization on Mars to use as a motive.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a cool natural landmark. It was located in Cydonia an area of Mars. The Face isn't a legend at all. There is real scientific proof of a face. The Face on Mars isn't a hoax either. Many people think that it is a legend and a hoax, but it is a real natural landmark. The Face on Mars is not an alien creation, but it is a natural landmark. It deserves some attention.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One beleives,that limiting car usage can have a positive effect and we can gain\n\nAdvantages to this. Source 1 \"In German Suburb, life goes on with out cars\" (Rosenthal) and source 2 \"Paris bans driving due to somg\" (Duffer) what both these sources have in common is the fact that both authors talk about the advantages of L\n\ni miting car usage. In Source 1 \"German suburb,life goes on with out cars. \"Vauban, Germany have given up their cars As a Result, 70\n\nPercent of vauban's Families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here\"\n\nIn this incident, Families do not own cars or have sold a car to move to Vauban Because most of the families and mothers dont feel as tense and feel happier it also help reduce air pollution.\n\n\"Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs where middle-class families from chicago to shanghai tend to make thier homes\" Here Cars are the linchpin of suburbs where experts say, It is a huge impediement to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas. In source 2 \"Paris Bans driving due to smog  \"After days of near-record pollution, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. In this incident, Paris enforced a Ban on cars so it can clear up the polluted air with somg in the city. \"On Monday motorists with even-numberd license plates were orderd to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine (31$) the same would go for odd numberd plates. Here, Cars owners would be fined If they were found driving and not leaving thier cars at home in effort to reduce the Air pollution smog of the city. In essence I feel that If we continue this in diffrent countries our Air pollution Rates can go down in percentage and we woulden't need to worry about It anymore don't you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders empire state building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigible dock One obstacle faced thousandfoot dirigible moored top building single cable tether would add stress building s frame Another obstacle faced dirigibles outside united states used hydrogen helium hydrogen highly flammable The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around mooring mast Those obstacles faced trying dock building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I see why you think that aliens could have formed it. In 1976 it looks like a face and we all were surprised about it, but we needed more evidence. The picture quality was not the best so we went back out there in April 5, 1998 and we snapped another picture of the so called \"face\".\n\nThe camera that we used was ten times sharper picture than the first picture that we took. We looked at the picture that we took and there was no alien monument after all, but the picture still wasn't that well of quality. Not everyone was satisfied.\n\nOn April 8, 2001,a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, we decided to take another picture but with better quality. We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face so we could clearly see it. We captured a photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Each pixle spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 photo. It was clear that it was just a land form and no signs of alien form.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will be writing an agrument from Lukes point of view convincing others to particapate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. 1 of all Luke graduated high school. After he graduatead high school he thought his life is going to change. 2 of all Luke was in the the Seagoing Cowboys program. During the strory Luke Bomberger crossed the Alantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help peoplea afected by world war 2. Luke had a friend named Don Riest. Don Riest invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no. 3 of all Luke Bomberger ,ade 9 trips this year. He was having fun untill one rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captain, he slid down a slippery ladder on his back side, he couldn't work fosr a co9uple of days, because of his back ribs. It was 1945, world war 2 was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To helpp these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations jouned together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). UNRRA hired \"Seagoung Cowbooys\" to take care of the horeses, young cow, and mules that were shipped over seas. Luke and Don signed up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you picture seeing driverless cars in the future? I personally can't imagine seeing anyone not driving their own car anymore. Google confounder Sergey Bin and tons of other companies do. They see a future with a public transportation system. That would mean there would be almost to no cars being used anymore. This may sound like a good idea, but their are also a lot of negatives in doing this.\n\nThere are many things that google still need to do to make this possible. They have to make a way that a car can drive on its own without having a human behind the wheel. Acomplishing that would have to take a lot of little steps to make it better and safer for our enviorment. They don't yet know if it will be possible to do, but they sure are trying. Some states dont trust having a car being driverless.\n\nThere are many negativites in having driverless cars. Many people depend on their car daily to get them places, It's convient to have one of your own for whenever needed. Our comunity is already so used to the way we live now, it would be such a huge change. Uless the manufacturer knows what they're doing and has everything right then it could be a positive change, but it's risky. It will take years to have a driverless car be succsessful.\n\nI think us humans are capible of opperating a car fine on our own. I don't know why companies would want to waste time and money on something that isnt needed. You also have to look at the things we will lose from having driverless cars. Many people would be losing their jobs if we didnt have cars anymore. Just think of all the car dealerships and car plants, none of that would be needed anymore.\n\nAs well as the negatives, there as some postivies also. If gone right traffic could run more smoothly with driverless cars. Thats my opinion on driverless cars. Why invent something so big that would cost so much when we already have what we need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enableing the computers to identify human emotions is'nt valuable at all. Especially not for students in a classrom. I say this because students moods in a classroom can change, in a matter of seconds because the teacher may give out extra work or it was a hard day for the student. Also kids don't always show their emotions.\n\nLet's get a little bit more into this. I'm not completly sure why this facial exspression system seem's like a good idea. Maybe because the people who thought about it thought it would be a smart and great idea to know peoples emotions. If you can already tell by \"facial\" exspressions why need this machine system? It would be a waste of money to make everywhere.\n\nPeople may show their mood by their facial exspressions but others might not. Some don't even show their emotions. Others may even have that natural \"mean/angry\", \"happy/funny\", or even the \"sad/depressed\" facial look.\n\nThis is why I think it would'nt be much of a good idea. It costs to much and might not even be worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If ever move home town country comforting something thats old country knew one The fact Saeng geese plants everything else comforted enough know next spring take test Throughout story seemed everything Saeng ever saw home country Vietnam way warmed comforted Early story illustrates feelings makes way green house Many times story could always hear sense love would call plant native languages name Throughout story could always sense love caring The author knows loves things would encourage Therefore thats concluded story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted many complications occurred plans construction attempted docking mast One obstacle dirigibles heavy metal frame building would modified After repairing framework Empire State Building two trial runs displayed dirigible Los Angeles Goodyear blimp Columbia The result expirament wind current physically nt allow blimp come close enough building dock Also existing law airships flying low urban cities obstacle could surpass Within years postponing efforts airplanes made way dirigibles transportation long forgotten", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Often people argue that watching television has an impact on their adolescent attitude , where as many think that influencing nature is due to the amount of time they use to spend on screen . However, in upcoming paragraphs both parameters are discussed in detail.\n\n\nTo begin with , Juvenile usually follow the advertisement trend being seen through the entertainment platforms. Because at this age of learning they are in habit of catching all good as well as bad manners. Therefore, it all depends upon their interest , moral values and surroundings what they are analysing as beneficial for them . For instance , youngsters prefer action , ferry tales and adventuresome videos which lead them to an imaginary world , hence , they are not able to understand the actual message behind particular video. \n\n\nOn the other hand, people believe that behaviour changes is just because of the significant time they watch TV or entertainment advertisements. Moreover , sticking to a specific type of resource creates a curiosity in their mind to watch that thing again and again . Ultimately they are addict to be in that situation . For example , infants like cartoons more than anything . In recent research by University of London , it has been observed that children are very much attracted by the audio visual ads and almost 80 percent of kids are influenced by watching the entertainment screen for long duration. \n\n\nTo recapitulate , I reckon that , irrespective of timing factor and the type of advertisement being watched, children's always attract toward that advert ,then they try to imitate them with their own way it leads to their attitude changes. Nonetheless , by telecasting informative as well as precise videos, younger ones will be entertained a lot. Apparently, there would not be any behavioural changes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting care usage is an advantage because some people were always tense when they had a car and now they're saying they're much happier without it. Vauban is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called \"smart planning\". Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions tailpipes.. Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\n\nIn the United States, the Envirornmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities and legislatores are starting to act, if cautiously. Congestion was down 60% in the capital of France, after 5 days of intensifying smog... Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67% of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3% average of diesel engines in the rest of Westen Europe. Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer licenses as each year goes by. When adjusted for population growth, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis by Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.\n\nPart of the explanation certainly lies in the recession, because cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway. But by many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downturn and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way. It will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the envirornment, since transportation is the second largest souce of America's emissions, just behind power plants. Companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves \"mobility\" companies with a broader product range beyond product range beyond the personal vehicle. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit..\n\nNew York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs across the nation. There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16-to 39 year olds getting a license, while older people are likely to retain their licenses as they age. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009... Bill Ford proposed partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which pedestiran, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportaion traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\n\nSo in the end with all this information i think that limiting car usage is an advantage. It makes you explore more, get your excercise, try new things instead of always relying on a vehicle to take you somewhere. This information persuaded me and it made me realize what the gas from the car does to the Earth. this is the reason why the Earth and the air we breathe is so polluted because of whats in our cars and we dont even realize it. im definitely going to use it to my advantage i dont know about you....", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future of safety while driving across the world. These cars have the technology to predict and protect against complex life-threatening issues that a human does not possess the power to handle themselves. Although the change to semi-driverless or driverless cars may be expensive; it is a change that can change the future of driving on roads for the better.\n\nAn issue that comes with having fully human controlled vehicles is not all cars have safety measures that the driver can control, such as sensors in the brakes. These sensors contain information that the human driving could not possess alone, showing that we need driverless cars to help make the upcoming generation of drivers more protected on the dangerous roads. In paragraph five the author states: \"antilock brakes can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone,\" which shows the true power of these sensors inside of driverless cars. Legalizing driverless cars can bring the power of antilock brakes to every car in the world which would drastically reduce the amount of accidents related to skidding on ice or flipping cars.\n\nOne of the reasons that these driverless cars are not legalized in all states is as of right now traffic laws are under the assumption that \"the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times,\" as the author states in paragraph nine. Although these cars are not driven by humans one hundred percent of the time, they can still be taken over by humans whenever a situation such as an accident in the middle of the road needs to be navigated around, this is proven in the seventh paragraph. In paragraph seven the author says: \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate whenever a vehicle is in danger of backing into an object,\" and \"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over,\" proving that when the driver is in danger, the driver can take over the controls. These innovations heighten the safety of the driver in one of these vehicles.\n\nDriverless cars and sensors aren't anything new to the roads, either. In paragraph three the author states that General Motors has been working on driverless cars since the late 1950s. As technology rapidly advances the sensors and computer needed to make driverless cars can become less expensive and more powerful. In only ten years advancements such as antilock brakes and the ability to drive seventy-five percent of the time have surfaced, and there are many more advancements to come. The first generation of driverless cars are expected throughout 2016-2020, with many more generations and advancements to improve upon the original models.\n\nIn 1980, the dream of having a fully autonomous vehicle would be something to see in a science-fiction magazine. Little did the people know that these cars would be available in only 36-40 years away and could dramatically increase safety on roads. Driverless cars provide heightened safety for the next generations of drivers and should not be taken as something small. Now that the technology is here to stay we need to be able to put it to proper use. Driverless cars have many generations to come and more safety to benefit the future generation of drivers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke worked two part time jobs. Ond day his friend asked him if he wanted to go to Europe. Luke went to Europe because he wanted to help people that didn't have food, supplies,and animals. So he joined the UNRRA(the United Nation Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).He got the job to take care of the horses,young cows,and mules that was shipped overseas. Also his friend don joined him. On August14 was the day that the pacific war has ended. By the time Luke turned 18 while arriving in Greece and he also could have been drafted to the military service. When the draft board learned that Luke was 18 they told him to just keep doing what your doing. Luke made nine trips most of any Seagoing Cowboy. Besides helping people Luke had a side benfitof seeing Europe and China. Caring for the animals kept Luke busy for two weeks. Also when he was a young boy who helped out his aunt on her farm which trained him for the work on the ship, but one night he got a job to be the night watchman. And while he was looking out he slipped and cracked his rib. Luke and some other people one the ship played games like baseball,volleyball,table-tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games, after the trips to places. And that is what happend on Luke's ship.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people say people laugh live longer I remember I ten years old I going learn ride bike Little I know going hard task My brother said I nt need training wheels Although I scared looking kids ride bikes made gather courage learn ride bike It big day perfect day learn ride bike As I walked stairs geared ready I began feel I went outside big brother waiting He helmet bike began go basic rules Slowly I started get bike I confident I could Next time gear put helmet My heart pounding I could feel blood going veins Giving first peddle I fell hit ground extremely hard All I wanted run home cry moms lap I looked brother asked I okay Up day I remember laughing instead crying crying nt going make pain go away teach ride bike Finally I got back bike peddled peddled I remember brother telling laughter best medicine around I laughing peddled sometimes I think maybe laughter made accomplish goal learn ride bike life laughing smiling fun big deal You ca nt always take laugh seriously", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After sometime trip mentioned I traveling high deserts California June I believe setting gotten determined keep pedaling could live But started think might die wasnt sad upset happy He sort chuckled fact might die listend old men In opinion I think time life peddeling setting California", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "time I patient going disocy w orkerd first time l excited We bad one week left wait go But I couldnt wait long l thought l waited long enough I wanted go moment Even thought I wait still bad fon time disrey word I juss patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever wondered how the world would be if driving a vehicle was banned? . It could clear the air pollution,decrease of lost revenue,rush hour traffic as well.\n\nTo begin with , many people in the U.S use automobiles to traffle along to their destanations. Source 1 states that from Chicago tio Shanghai is a huge impediment to reduce greenhouse gas emissions from taolpopes and that passengeers are 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and also much higher in different areas in the U.S.\n\nIn Paris,residents were enforced a partial driving ban to clear up the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60% in France due to The Smog in Beijing,China. Reuters say that diesel fuel is the cause since France has a tax policy with the diesel fuel , causing Paris to still overall have the most smog then in European capitals. With the affect of lost revenue companies made complaints because they couldn't maintain their business with out it .During the Car-free day in Bogota a businessman by the name of Carlos Arturo Plaza stated ''It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\".\n\nDue to the day without a car made many changes within the community causing parks and sports centers to grow within the city , not having a car caused rush hour to cut traffic down dramatically , and for new restaurants and shopping to increase. Many people with a family and kids would be getting out more to walk , bike ,ride their skateboards to get from one place to another at their own pace. The percentage of miles driving per person was 9 since driving was banned. The rate of house ownership came down and so did car ownership. As well as the percentage of young adults through 16 and older doesnt even own a license because mostly older people are likely to retain their licenses due to their prime age. With the study that driving by young people decreased 23%.\n\nNow, how would not having a car be helpful? It would have many advantages in the world nationwide by keeping the air polltion down , the percentage of gas fuel being used , the amount of time you would have't to sit at a red light due to the afternoon traffic , and even if you wanted to get to go to various resteraunts and stores you could go on foot. Even better , Bill Ford made a plan to create cities in which pedestrain,bicycles and public transportation are woven into a connected network to save time,improve saftey and conserve resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the( pargraph 5) it states that humans preform this same impressive \"calculation evey day. They think technology is very comeplacated. Da vinci likes how his software is simliar to the one he had. Mona really likes the technology it brings a smile to her face beause how the computer can do imagine a co,eputer knows when your happy or sad. It makes everyone happy in the story how fun and cool techonolgy is it makes them really happy.\n\nMona states that imagine being able to detect exactly how others people are feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotions. (line 1 ) Mona says shes 83% happpy about it,9% disgusted,6% fearful about how the technology works. Mona likes the technology but sometimes it gets to confusing it makes her mad when it doesnt work right for her. in (line 5) vinci computer is kinda similar to monas but moans makes her really mad when it doesnt really work. It all depends on how you update your computers put in sofware into it to keep it going and running fast. (line 1) The software is the latest innovation from prof.\n\nFor people not having computers and technology its hard for them to understand it and catch onto is really quick and as old as they are its very impressing they know to work on it. The computer reconginzes the subtle facical movments we humans use to express on how we feel. Experts always know how to work and do the big things with the compurts its hard for people that dont know how to work with them. Humans express on all the techonlogy and how it procseeds. Its always good to have a good working computer that is updated and has the good sofware.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the develpment of these cars because i feel like it would be safer and everyone would have a ride and wouldn't have to walk. It would also save a lot of gas and energy from all the cars that won't be used, and only the driverless cars would be using gas. The driverless cars offer far more flexibility than a bus as well. The article also mentions such cars would change the world.\n\nIf the cars crahsed or stopped working who's fault would it be? Will the human have to drive the car in and out of the driveway as well ? The cars are a great idea because like i said it would save a lot of gas and money, and everyone would have a ride somewhere and they wouldn't have to walk in the cold weather or rainy weather. These cars have postive and negitive things. If the car runs on google for transportation and the internet shuts down then what wil happen ?\n\nI feel that if they test out the cars mulitple times and they are successfull , then yes allow the cars . Would we be able to keep the cars we have now ? Or would we have to get rid of them and just use the driverless cars ? I also believe it would be a lot safer because it would save the cops a lot of trouble, if you decided to get drunk then you wouldn't have to drive home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "News is the top most medium in this world to convey the people how world is getting evolved and the happenings at the each part of the world. Since news is all about the people, I strongly disagree that it has no connection to people’s lives and it is a waste of time.\r\nThis acronym ‘news’ stands for North East West and South which symbolises the four primary directions meaning to bring us the happenings in the entire world. They stand to be the primary mode of education, educating the peoples of all age group using different medium to communicate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an unfortunate reality of today's world that majority adore and praise media personalities, not for their accomplishments, but merely for their charm and riches. I agree that this view certainly has an adverse impact on gullible youth, in particular, who believes such worldly possessions as the ace of human achievement. However, there are exceptions to it. This essay sheds some light on how young minds perceive success, idealizing celebrities while many amongst them lack the qualities to look up to.\n\nFirstly, youth forgets that there is no shortcut to fame and fortune, rather they are the outcomes of a strong determination, disciplined lifestyle and endless dedication. Celebrities’ real artistry should be inspirational to the young generations, whereas, youth only fantasizes their extravagant lifestyle and unrealistic beauty standards. Consequently, a person with wealth and beauty becomes an idol for many without having any righteous personality. For instance, disregarding social and charitable work of the superstars is definitely a wrong possession of their true personality which sets substandard inspiration for youngsters.\n\nOn the other hand, not all adolescents are credulous. They consider the blood, sweat and tears behind the wealth and glamour. For them a mega star is an epitome of struggle, perseverance and achievement. For example, Mary Kom, the renowned world champion boxer might lack glamour and wealth compared to other celebs, but she is an honourable inspiration to youngsters. \n\nIn conclusion, having analysed how worldly possessions, can affect minors’ perception towards success, it is proven that this does set a faulty example. Hence, minors should be encouraged to realise that, a man's worth should not be judged by his possessions, rather by the journey he goes through to achieve those.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why is important to people buy a driverless car? Just because the people want to be cool or try to be the same way that the television and the movies are, but in reality the people do not know the dangerous that can be those car if they don't know how to use them in the correct form.\n\nMany people likes to text and drieve at the same time thay thing that is going to be more easily to send a text or resive a call whlie they are driving it will be because the cars can accelerate and brake themself but also some times the cars need human skils. What if you are texting when the car needs you to drive because of zone work or another thing and you are not paying attention because you know that the car is driving for you. If you were in a position were you need to chose a car if the put two car and one is driveless and the other one is a braind new which one you chose? maybe you go for the easy one to drive or maybe you are think that the drivelesss is more expensive and the expensive things are better or you just like more the brain new some people have differnts expetations.\n\nMost of the laws focus on the safe of the driver, passenger and pedestrian, but some people don't think that. The driverless cars are dangerous in some point becuse maybe are not responding whene it is need it and can cause a big accident the people don't think that the consecuense that are going to happend on the future with the dose cars. The only safe cars has a human driver in control at all the time that is why is not important to have driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Parents are the most important factor in the upbringing of a child. Some advocates believe that stories should be read or told to children by their parents, while others are of the opinion that it is not necessary as children can watch tv or movies or read books by themselves. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and share my personal opinion in this regard.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, people say that reading or telling a book story can help children to understand values. This is because when parents read out these stories, they try to relate them with the practical aspect of society and teach a child how to behave by understanding the moral of the chapter. For instance, it is widely known that the story of rabbit and turtle, which is based on the laziness of rabbit, is a very good example to relate with a personal life that if we become lazy we can lose our success. Furthermore, if children are not given attention, they tend to play video games or watch TV for hours and hours; as a result, this may cause damage to the eyes and may also lead to a headache. Thus, few advocates support this notion.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the detractors do not agree with the aforementioned standpoint, because they think that adolescent should become independent by doing things themselves. The reason for this is if parents spoon-feed them all the time, then they will never do their things on their own such as reading a book or watching a movie. In other words, this can give them a sense of independence and can generate inner confidence. For example, when a child will read different books of different genres, they grasp the good thing about the story and try to copy the same in their life. Not only this can develop confidence but also they can learn different skills such as dancing, singing and craft, by watching art shows on TV. Hence, it becomes apparent that performing things by themselves may help adolescent.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some guardians may find the idea of reading or telling stories to their offspring a good way of raising children but others might feel that this could restrict the confidence level which can be built otherwise if they read a book or watch TV by themselves. I believe that guardians should tell stories to their youngsters so that they are always guided by the right personnel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society, there has been a major concern that many couples have delayed parenthood. In my opinion, I consider that parent’s decision to give birth in the later stage of life can bring about more advantages for the family when compared to minor drawbacks that it might bring.\nDespite the drawbacks mentioned below, I believe the benefits gained by the late childbirth are extremely useful for the whole family. The primary reason why a number of individual want have children later this choice allows them to have more time to find their passion and have fun when they are young. For instance, it is easier for a young couple to travel when they do not have baby to nurture. An additional reason is that people who are at an early stage of their career usually have lower income compare to when they are older. Therefore, many people decide to start raising a family after having accumulated enough money to ensure a better future for their children.\n\nAdmittedly, there are some issues involved when people want to have children in their middle age. One problem is that it has some detrimental effects on the society, this tendency might affect family life as having children later will cause a significant age gap between two generations and makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring. Another negative aspect is that if people give birth when they are too old, the babies being born might be physically less healthy. This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend.\n\nIn conclusion, although tourists can have certain negative effects, it has an extremely positive influence on the economy as parents prefer having children in later stage because they want to improve their career and enjoy their social life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Major international events are fascinating and a lot of people are excited to participate.some individuals opine that the Olympics has some great advantages while others oppose that it is a waste of resources .The international sport has brought people together but no doubt could also cause some problems.this essay will discuss further o this argument .\r\n\r\nfirstly,the major advantage of the Olympics is bringing nations together and making smaller countries gain recognition.When crowd from different cultures and traditional background gather together ,there is intercultural interaction where people learn about each other and their countries of origin.Furthermore this sports culture attracts attention to smaller countries participating which bring the spotlight to those countries.For instance,the world powers are the most popular countries but due to sport ,participation Jamaica has been known for its excellent performance in tracts and fields.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand , let's look at the negative aspect of the Olympics.The construction and preparation for these famous events cost a lot of resources ,both human and financial resources .These events only take place for a couple of weeks yet a huge sum of the money is spent to build facilities and accommodation for the participants.This will result in more waste being generated after the event because most of the facilities will not be in use .For example ,hostels are been built for thousands of Olympians and when they return to their various countries ,the spaces remain unoccupied or the host country will have to destroy the building.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,the Olympics have been a great event throughout history bringing folk from different parts of the world together thereby fostering more understanding of our uniqueness as people but at the same time the occasion causes the misuse ,the host or organizers can look into cheaper and less wasteful means of conducting the sports because we need more sustainability on resources rather than waste.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern society, it is encouraged that young people should develop the enterprenership mindset and building up their own enterprises. It is clear to me that the more money the bussiness makes the more responsibilities to the society it should contribute to. \r\n\r\nFirstly, it is absolutely no deny that businesses play a very important role in creating jobs for man. For example, Vinamilk is one of the largest food producers in Vietnam. They currently employ around 10 000 workers throughout Vietnam, according to their annual report. We can imagine that what might be happening if this giant company bankcrupt? Thousands of workers will be potentially loosing their job. This might impact markedly in the social balancing and the social sercurity as unemployment will rise up.\r\n\r\nSecondly, large organizations are capable to use their manpower to provide social facilities in a bigger scale. For instance, during the last two years of Covid, Vingroup,in accompanied with Chairman Mr. Vuong and his wife had been donated nearly 9000 billions VND to help our government and Vietnamese people to fight with the coronavirus. This unbelievable distribution help to save many people lives and children. Without this generous co-operation and these individuals, it is hard for our government to do such things fastly and precisely as they was shown to the public in the last period of time.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, universal is operated in a circle. As it is written in one of favourite quote that “the more you give out, the more you get back”. The more the bussiness contribute back to people, to the society, to help them to archive the desirable goals, the more successful the bussiness can get as it will be paid back by people who were helped by them. The companions between enterprise and society help to faciliate to create a better world for people to live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is beacaues you get to travel to places you never went before.Luke liked the job Don which is his friend, had told him about.Plus Luke like adventures,and like to go to fun places.Another reason is it's fun, I say it's fun because you get to be the look out like Luke,did and yell so the people can hear you,so no animal will come and eat the people. Luke also want to be a Seagoing Cowboy because he wanted to help these countries( it say that in paragarph 2, line 2).\n\nIf I was a Seagoing Cowboy I would be the lookout, because I would like to help and sever my contry just like Luke.\n\nLuke had made nine trips, the most trips any Seagoing Cowboy ever did.\n\nAlso I think Luke is a brave young man to be a Seagoing Cowboy.After Luke had craked his ribs he have not been doing work for a couple of days.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Evening Star\", which is considered one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. What may this be called? Venus is the name. But, this is actually a planet! In our current solar system, this is the second planet from the sun. Although, it has proven to be one of the most challenging places to explore. It is considered to be 97% carbon dioxide, which us humans, need Oxygen to survive. Despite all of the danger this planet has, there are still ways to pursuit this deathly planet.\n\nAstronomers have scientifcally proven that Venus was once considered the most Earth-like planet that has ever existed as a part of our solar system. Till this present day, the planet still has a surface of rocky sediments. Which includes valleys, mountains, and craters. According to The National Aeronautics and Space Administration, there are ways that we can explore Venus. On Earth, we have jet airplanes that allow humans to travel from one destination to the next without touching any grounds. If that can be done on planet Earth, then it is quite possible that it can be done on planet Venus considering the fact that it was once considered an Earth-like planet.\n\nThis can be done by taking a blimp-like vehicle and traveling 30 miles above ground, that is a much possible way to avoid unfriendly ground conditions on Venus. Of course it will still be around 170 degrees Farenheit even in the air, but, that air pressure would be extremely close to sea level on Earth. It is not in easy conditions, but quite possible for humans to have the ability to do. NASA is even considering using some type of technological electronic to explore Venus. Creating these gadgets, so it has the ability to pursuit this planet, despite all of the danger still involved.\n\nIn conclusion, The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has scientically been able to prove that these ways could give humans another chance to explore what Venus has to offer. Whether it is jet airplanes, technological electronics, or whatever else they may be able to come up with. All of our travels to Earth and even beyond Earth, should not be allowed due to dangers and doubts but to pursuit even the most dangerous places to see what other things are like except our home. Who knows what is out there, and what could be waiting to be found.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea\n\nvery well. Why? Well let's get into this shall we. The author has already suggested that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Yes it is dangerous to study Venus but it is a good planet to study their is so much information that is unknown to us until we have been knowledged by it.\n\nThe dangerous of studying Venus and exploring it is how close it is to the sun. How close it? It is the second closet plant to the sun yes venus is a planet in our solar system as we know part of a galaxy. Venus is like a twin to Earth. Why? Well in paragraph two it states that \" Often\n\nreferred to Earth's \" twin\". Venus is the closet planet to earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance. Venus is a interesting planet to study because it is one of the brightest point in the sky at night.\n\n\" Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds\". Sometimes we can end up being closer to one planet then another. What is crazy is that there is people that have been up to Venus and landed on it with spacecrafts. Exploring Venus like landing on it etc. On the other hand is not the best idea. Why? However it is good to observe and study from a telescope the not so good idea would be to try and land on it because of the dangerous it has actually brought to scientists. \" No space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". \" Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades!\"\n\nVenus is a worthy place of studying but on the other hand it comes with a small or large price. Venus is dangerous and should be kept at a distance to study. There is harsh chemicals in the atmosphere like sulfuric acid. Aswell as Venus is so hot that the tempatures average is just over 800 degrees Fahrenheit so think of when it's not on average. \" Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any plant in our solar system \". Scientist have been discussing further visits to the surface but is that a good idea? No! Well because how many space crafts have made it back not as many as there should've been all the spacecrafts should've returned but did not. So that ends up telling me why would you wanna risk it all to go see a planet that is highly dangerous, because I know I wouldn't put myself in that postion.\n\nAt the end of all this and my reasoning for why I think the author thinks that Venus is a worthy idea of studying is because it is as long as you keep your distance from it. The author still suggests that there are people wanting to go up there is wild because of the dangerous that it can cause. Venus is an extrordinary place to explore but isn't the safest no one can outstand being on something at 800 degress Fahrenheit but if you want to explore Venus then go for it because there is always hope and chance that you can make it back now there is new, faster, safer technology that can help you out for going on a trip to Venus. You could be able to study Venus at a distance like hovering over it or flying over it. \" A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendy ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. So at this point in time yes the author is right that \" studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should not try to develope these cars because they are not safe, drivers could get bord from not having to drive, and drivers would not have to pay attention to the road.\n\nDriverless cars are no safe because a driver could be texting behind the wheel and not even know what is going on ahead of them. For example if a driver gets a text and they are coming up on a construction zone they could not notice the signals and just keep doing what they do and that could result in someone getting hurt.\n\nDrivers could easily get bord just waiting in a car and watching the road waiting for their turn to drive. Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? safety is a huge concern for mant people who like to text while driving.\n\nFor example, if a driver gets a text and they are coming up on a construction zone they could not notice the signals and just keep doing wht they do and that could result in someone getting hurt and not even know it is going to happen or what is on the road ahead of them. doesnt that make you scared and make you ask why are these cars are being developed? shouldnt these cars be illigal in the United States?\n\nPeople should not try to develope theses cars because they are not safe, drivers could get bord from nor having to drive, and drivers would not have to pay attention to the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. It will will be a fun experience for newcomers. We have a lot of fun in this program. We helped a lot of people. We cared for a lot of animals most animals are back in their habitat. So please think about signing up.\n\nFirst,your proabably asking youself why should i sign up. You should sign up because you will be able to help other people. By sending resources to countries in peril. It will make you feel so happy because you know you supported a lot of people. If you wanted to learn more about the world. This is the perfect program for you.\n\nSecond,it can change your life you will have a good time. You will be able to meet new people,and you can study their languages. This program is a great experience. If you like enteracting with animals,and you will have fun caring for animals. Maybe you could make a lot of new friends. This is very interesting give it a try.\n\nNext,if you are a student still in college and your failing language if you join this program you will learn more. You will grow a bond with different people. You will be able to go sightseeing. You will see ancient statues,and artifacts. You will be able to get awesome photos of statues.\n\nLast,I hope you like the reasons why you should join Seagoing Cowboys. This program can changle your life in so many diffferent ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would nt nice walk library able find sort book possible I believe would useful helpful many libraries allow varied censorship books In opinion would beneficial students parents teachers get information different topics As well many students need write paper certain topic familier allowing types books would help anybody topic A library place anyone go find information something find interesting read relax If going get information topic know nothing would nice find book telling topic This would help students reports along person trying find extra information might know topic If person want certain type books library I think person try ignore books I think I dont think books taken beneficial others offensive someone could ignore Maybe books drugs sex violence still able teach many people nt already knowledgable innappropriate offensive topics In conclusion throwing books keeping library censored would mistake It mistake taking away many people wanting become knowledgable different topics It takes away people need learn topics things school even work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folk about the climate problems contrary to the past.There are copious inhabitants who argue that by expanding the prices of electricity, we can control them. I completely disagree with this view, the reasons for this statement will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, ammunition is not a significant danger to the environment but there are some other factors such as deforestation and global warming also if authorities would increase the cost of fuels, industrial and economic growth will stop.In the other words, this trend will a huge crise for a state.To cite an example, According to a recent survey, in Vietnam. the government of that country increased the petrol price in order to control air pollution but after a month of this order, the industrial growth was halted. As a result, governments should find other ways to solve environmental problems.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, another important pivotal related to the aforementioned proposition is that currently, this modern technology is unable to find a way to explore space like to launch missiles or rockets without petrol or diesel. So, if the cost of fuels would increase then the space projects will stop because these programs cost billions of dollars and the main thing for them to buy is petrol As a result, this situation would be alarming for scientists.\r\n\r\nIn the nutshell, according to the forenamed quarrels, I personally believe that controlling climatic crises by increasing the revenue of fossil fuels would have devastating impacts not only on the economy of a country but also collapsed the space programs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A driverless car? Really? Theres no way you can do that. We cant not all the way we would still need help from the person in the drivers seat but just think about it for a second. A driverless car has or will have way more senors improved to prevent accidents that happen because we dont have senors on regular cars to allert people in a situation. With a regular the driver must stay allkert at all times and must have there hands on the wheel at all time with the driverless car you wont have to be alerted unless we so happen to need you. A driverless car. Com on it will be the newest technology. More effisent. More fun. Less dangerouse than driving its self.\n\nSenors? All cars should have them and some actully do. They have the tiny cameras behind the car to help you park better but soes it really help. You never know how far away or close you are to a another car with those cameras. Sensors have been around since the 1980's and have very much improved since that time but has i really that much? They had antilock breaks, speed sensors. And now they have controle of rollovers. They have cameras every where so you can see around your car. With improved sensors that were needed because no human driver can manage controle of a car alone. In the text it says \"Information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response.\" The driverless cars will have more better sensors that are well needed and will help make sure the driver will rarely touch the steering wheel of the car.\n\nCars have drivijng functions at speed of 25 miles per hour. They also have special touch sensors to make sure that the person that is driving the car keeps there hands on the wheel at all times. Having a driverless car you will not need your hands on the wheel when you are not driving the c ar. The only time a human is needed is when they are trying to get around a trafic jam. Or in other cases there is an accident on the road and they need to make /find a detore. Driverless cars can steer, accelerate and brake them selves And rarely need any human skills", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a thing of the future.\n\nWith as many companies working towards driverless cars: Google, Toyota, BMW, GM, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan, I think we'll have streets full of the in no time.\n\nI think driverless cars are a fantastic idea.\n\nHumans have flaws, and machines do too, but if we could manufacture a car smart enough to know how to navigate in traffic on its own, and when and where to stop a humans flaws would not be an issue.\n\nWe have too many distractions in our lives, and needless to say we're thinking about those things while we're driving.\n\n\"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone. Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" -paragraph 5.\n\nThis indicates that driverless cars are safer than manual ones, and that they use less energy.\n\nWith cars as sensitive as these, there would be fewer accidents as well.\n\nThere are a few issues with the case: \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?\" -paragraph 9.\n\nOn the other hand, by the time driverless cars are on the streets we should have most legal issues worked out.\n\nAll in all, I think self-driving cars are safer than manual ones.\n\nWith as many distractions as we have in our lives, we really do not need another thing to be worrying about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you beleive that the face on Mars was was made by an alien? Well I disagree on the statement because in the picture it has been changing from 1976 through 2001. I beleive the face is formed by natrual landform because the text states that it was formed by a shadows.\n\nI beleive that the face is formed by natrual landform because in the text it said it was formed by shadows. These shadows formed the mouth, nose, and eyes to make it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh as the text states. Also the text states\n\nwith the camara that they where using on April 8, 2001 if the objects where there it would be able to capture all of it. Most importantly in paragraph 7 it says thats ob JPL web site\n\nrevealing there was no alien monument after all.\n\nIn conclusion\n\nI beleive the face is formed by natrual landform because the text states that it was formed by a shadows. Shadows are reflections of light. And lets be honest there are no aliens , they are not real.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many conspiracy theorist think that NASA is hiding something about the Face on Mars. Some of the scientist at NASA also though that the face was an alien artifact,so we had to make another voyage to the region of Cydonia.This time we snapped a picture ten times more sharper than the last revealing that it is nothing but a natural landform. there was not an alien monument at all. Some people still wasn't satisfied Conspiracy theorist said that wrispy clouds where hidden by haze.\n\nAs we prepared to look again. \"Cydonia is not a easy target\" said Garvin. Neverthe less, on April 8 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-- The team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. So if there was anything on the ground you could see what they where. What the picture actually showed is the Martian equivalent of a mesa found on Earth.\n\nSo therefore proving any Conspiracy theorist wrong the face on Mars is actually just a Martian landform shaped as a Egyptian Pharaoh formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of Exploring Venus has been in minds for decades because it is the closes to earth which is why they call it earths twin. Venus aslo has the same density and size in comparison to Earth which in terms occasionally the closets in distance too. \"Venus itself is right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spaccraft to land on this cloud draped word\". No human has never been to Venus in for good reason, which might be the issue that explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more then three decades. The thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Whats more challenging is the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's amtosphere. Venus's planet surface temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospher's pressure is 90 times than what people experience on Earth. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of the oceans and also liquefy many metals. Take note that Venus is has one of the most hottest surface temerature in the entire solar system, though Mercury is the closests planet to the sun. But if Venus is so inhospitable, then why are scientists even discussing to move further visit to its surface. That is because Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it most likely have been the most Earth like planet in the solar system. Venus has probably been the most largely coverd with oceans and possibly could have supported lots of various life forms, just like planet Earth. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes simular features such as mountains, valleys and craters. Venus can also sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, giving the long time frames of space travel. The value of returning to Venus seems \"indisputable, but what are the options for making a mission both safe and scientifically productive. (NASA) The Aeronautics and Space Administration has one compelling idea for sending humans to Venus. NASA's possible solution to the rough conditions on the surface of planet Venus, could initually allow scientists to float above the fray. Put it like this, a huge blimp like vehicle hovering over 30 or so miles above the Venusian landscape. Just like jetplanes traveling at higher altitudes to fly over many storms, just like a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the bad ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. Many researchers are working hard on innovations that would allow our advance machines to last a long enough to contribute to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is also working on other approaches to studying Venus. Example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbon have been tested in a chamber which simulate the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted for less then three weeks in such condition.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to live in a place where the air is polluted? Somewhere it is hard to breath. The earth would be a cleaner and more effitiant place to live if we limit the everyday usage of cars. Just think about it by limiting the usage of cars you are saving money and making the earth a cleaner place. It's like the old saying goes \"kill two birds with one stone.\n\nWho doesnt like having some extra money in there pockets to spend? I know I definetly do. By limiting the usage of cars people will no longer have to pay a car payment. Or even better have to pay these outrageous gas prices. \"In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have bt law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport.\" If we limit the usage of cars there wont be any reason to build new highways and the money can go to more important things.\n\nWouldnt you like to wake up in the morning, walk out side and get a wiff of fresh clean air? Limiting car usage will also cut the amount of green house gas emissions. \"Passenger cars are resposible for 12 percent of green house gas emmotions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united states.\" Cars are major contribution to the pollution we have in the air today. Having cleaner air makes the earth an all around better place. The people will be happier and the grass will be greener. \"Last week paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in london.\" I dont know of any person on this earth that wants to breath in particulate matter on a daily bassis. \"Its a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said business man Carlos Arturo. This man is in his right mind. Polution is a major stressor for everyone. Thats why I say by limiting car usage it will make people happier. People act like riding a bike is a bad thing. Its always good to get some exercise and be healthy.\n\nIf we aren't using cars thers no reason to have highways. And if we dont have highways then citys will be smaller.\"But its basic prcepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, with less space for parking. In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in mall along some distant highway.\" Where i grew up everything was close. There were resturants less than a mile away. The mall was a 5minute bike ride. And school was only 10 minutes away. Everythig was convienent. I didnt have to get in the car and hope that it started it up. There was no waiting in traffic. All I had to do was hop on my bike and ride off.\n\nIf we stay at the rate we are going now the earth is going to turn in to a place that no one wants to live. So if we limit the usage of cars the earth will be a overall better place to live. If we dont drive there is less polution. If we dont have cars we dont need highways and the our citys will be more compact. And no cars means more money in our pockets. If that doesnt sound like a perfect place to live then I dont want to know what your idea of perfect is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too!!!!\n\nIn paragraph 5 the arthor includes that NASA has particularay complelling idea for sending human to study venus.\n\nIn paragraphn 8 the arthor says striving to meet the challenege presented by venus has value, ot only beacuse if the insight to be gainied on the planet itself.\n\nIn paragraph 8 the arthor also says our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nAs the arthor metion earlier in paragaraph 2 about earth's previous misson was unmanned,and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, mabety this is the issue that explains why not a single spacweship has touched down to venus in more than 3 decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nEven more challening are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atomsphere. On the planet venus the surface, temeeratures average over 800 degress fahrenheit, and the atmosheric pressuire in 90 times greater than what we expreienec on our own planet.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanis, piowerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it would be valueable to use Facial Acion Coding Systems to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It could show the students mood and how their feeling that day, how they feel about the work that is assigned and help improve the grade point averages of the school and behavior as well. This can only bring a positive impact to a school.\n\nKnowing someones emotions and how they feel can tell you a lot about someone and how you should act around them. If we could use technology that shows how a student feels it would show what they are comfortable with in class and can dictate what a teacher could do for school work. As said in the article \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\" meaning that using technology to find out a kids emotions in school will also help them produce new emotions.\n\nIt will only help the classroom if the students and the teachers are on the same page. Knowng how the kids feel will help improve the productivity and the enjoyment of the classroom. This will all help make schools overall grade point averages and good behavior go up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position is that self-driving cars should be manufactured and eventually should be sold to the general public. The cars wouldn't fix all of the problems that come along with cas accidents and problems but it can help reduce them.\n\nThe reason why self-driving cars should be manufactured is because it can stop ,or help prevent less accidents from happening. If theres less people in the car, then there are less people to get hurt ,and if the car is driving it going to be safe to have the car drive its self because its programed to make the best decision to keep the passenger others safe. BMW is making a car with a in-car safety feature to reduce the use of cellphones being used while behind the wheel. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have all allowed limited use of semi-autonomous cars. Companies and people wouldn't want to make or buy the cars if they weren't proven to be as safe as possible. It also said in paragraph 5, that they have cars that auto lock the breaks to make it safer. Self driving cars could also reduce the percentage of DUI related car accidents, and deaths by having the car drive for you instead of anyone risking getting put in jail or getting pulled over. Paragraph 4 also says that the cars will have a lot of sensors on them to detect any obstacles and for the car to be aware of its surroundings at all times.\n\nIn conclusion I think that self-driving cars should be made because they can help better the world and the future ahead by reducing the percentage of accidents, and problems that human drivers put themselves at risk to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agreement young children exposed certain offensive books However I believe books removed censored libraries separate washig bad things bad idea", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has been vastly improving these past couple of years. With all these new technological improvements it can also play a major factor in classrooms. All teenagers these days are very \"tech-friendly\". Therefore it would only make sense that we should incorporate some of these technological adavances\n\ninto the classroom so students could be more engaged during class. It would greatly improve many homework scores, quiz scores, and even test scores\n\nthus overall having many improvements to their grades in all.\n\nThe new software \" Facial Action Coding System\" has been a huge technological improvement to this time.\n\nIn the passage it states \" Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements---in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotion.\" This can show how in a classroom if students are being active during a lesson and participating. Or if they are dozing off somewhere else with the help of this technology then the computer can change its algorithms to change how the lesson is being taught therefore making the student pay attention during class.\n\nIn a classroom filled with some kids that just can't focus and/or do not understand then this technology can come into great use. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" the passage states. This technology could help students that have trouble with some classes or just are not paying attention whatsoever, in the passages it also states,\n\n\"Then it can modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" With this technology it can highly improve on keeping the students attention at all times, this can help the students with making sure they know whats going on during class at all times instead of zoning out then missing something very cruical and overall messing alot of things up but instead keeping them highly engaged at all times.\n\nIn conclusion the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is greatly valuable. The use of this technological advancement would greatly improve students comprehension of some classes in school that they might've not understood before. It would be more personalized to that specific person, the more confused you look the more different ways it would look to make sure you understand the concept. Thus making the student very proactive and improving their overall grade.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a neat and fun idea but they are not as great as they seem. Driverless cars can be dangerous and are not more efficient then a normal car. These cars seem to have many good things about them but actually have plenty of negative effects. The diverless cars ahould not be developed.\n\nDriverless cars are not practical because the cars are not 100% driverless. The driverless cars can only be alone in 25 mph conditions. The car also can not be alone in traffic or near construction. As stated in paragraph 7 \"the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" The human in the car can not even relax while the car drives itself because he/she must still watch the road and be ready to drive when the car can not. Then the driver will be nervous waiting for their turn to drive when it is time. The driver will just feel much more stressed. Is it not better for the driver to just drive at all times and avoid stress about getting on the wheel on time?\n\nSome might say that the driverless cars are great because you are much safer in them. These cars have a lot of new and smart technology that helps in making a car trip much safer for the driver and its passengers. Also it alows the driver to multitask while the car drives. Drivers can be on their phones or finish up their hair and/or makeup. When the driver is in a tough situation they can just let their cars get through it and take back the wheel whenever he/she is ready..\n\nThe driverless cars are not as safe as they seem with all its technology. The number one reason people get into car crashes is because they were distracted ,usally by their phones and encouriging drivers to be on their phones in a \"driverless \" car is very dangerous. With these new cars it will be very hard to try and even multitask. Since they are not self-efficient the driver must pay attention to the road at all times ,therefore making it very hard to safetly turn around and do something else. Drivers when trying to do something ,in a hurry will have to leave what they are doing to attend to the wheel when the car can no longer drive. Since the car will only be able to drive in specific conditions the driver must attend to the wheel constantly.\n\nThe driverless cars are in fact not so \"driverless\" and beat their own and only purpose. These cars have many negative sides to them and should definitely not take the place of normal and safe cars. Driverless cars should not be developed by car manufacturers!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The The beautiful flames danced peacefully air The faint shimmer blaze light As I stared majestic destruction warm humid air I felt someone something watching behind The weight sixty pounds wood started get heavy I walked one side house Finally I reached trailer told best friends mom nt think would need much wood I thought going long weekend After two hours packing clothes food water sleeping bags pillows tents headed It would two hours driving felt like twenty minutes I worst group people put one car We yell fight punch fun Once arrived destination sprung car like hive angry bees I race second done unpacking belongings The first days spent basking one hundred degree heat swimming flirting random girls found around camp site We slept little possible could enjoy friendship pure fun During day two decided go mountain biking We bikes hours noticed sun going In moment turned saw extravagant view earth ever created There burst orange red The colors ricochet cloud cloud After hours riding bikes heat chose go swim As swam I felt something touching foot Then sudden hand foot When I looked see grabbing stick As I looked closer turned root system fallen tree It looked fake someone something put This though sparked conversation day come The sparks danced together The light brilliant glow fire playing gorgeous melody guitar As I listened enjoyed flawlessness nature I felt someone watching behind I nudged turned around hearts stopped There spinning green light almost twenty feet air I spoke word everyone dreading I slowly stood light started spinning faster I quickly grabbed machete next approached light As I grew closer I could make small figured shadows Then eruption children laughing came booming direction light A little boy emerged unable control laughter ran away After returning seat next camp fire I thought life What real watching us No real I laughed continued week long vacation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author is using this article to suggest the idea of exploring and studying Venus. Venus is a very dangerous planet to study because a thick atmosphere cover the planet and it is the hottest planet in our solar system. However, the author still believe that studying Venus is going to beneficial despite the dangers. In the article, the author is suggesting that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because we can use a vehicle that can hover over the ground and it's the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nOne reason why the author suggest the idea of studying Venus is because NASA has an idea for sending humans to go over Venus and observe it closely. Even tho Venus is the hottest planet, NASA can use their technology to make it survivable for humans. \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\"(Paragraph 5) That way, the scientists can study Venus up close without touching the ground. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth... Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\"(Paragraph 5) The temperature would still be very hot but it will be survivable for humans.\n\nAnother reason why the author think it's worth the risk despite the dangers is because Venus is our sister planet. It is the planet we should study because Venus has alot of stuff in common with us. \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\"(Paragraph 4) Venus has alot of features that are familiar with Earth. It is critical that we study Venus because it might just be the planet we have the option of visiting. \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\"(Paragraph 4) We can also learn alot from Venus that can be beneficial to us.\n\nIn conclusion, the author used this article to suggest the idea of studying Venus, our sister planet. We have enough technology to study Venus closely while not touching their unfriendly ground. We also have alot in common with Venus so it's worth the risk of studying that planet, Earth can benefit from studying Venus and learning what to avoid.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting really afeted cyclist alotThe sun hot weather dehidrated He also pretty much ran water In story says The bottles contained drops shows drank almost water Then says growing relization I could drop leaf stroke shows heat affecting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been through a major change? You probably have and so has Luke Bomberger, he went from being a rootin tootin cowboy to a seagoing cowboy. So, many people like change, some people hate it. In fact I feel that change is good for us, it helps us come 1,000,000,000,000 miles out of our comfort zone. So if I were you I would take as many chances as I could.\n\nFor one Bomberger had a blast traveling to many different places, it says in paragraph 5 he toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled the panama canal on his way to China .Crazy amazing, right? He was admiring one place on his way to another. What a lucky guy.\n\nAnother thing is Bomberger Got to go places that many people may never go. For example He had been to China, Eastern coast of the US, and Europe. Way farther out of North America then Ill ever be. He was probably millions of miles away from where his comfort zone (his house).\n\nAlso just the over-all experience you get when you do or try something new. Bomberger states in paragraph 9 that being a seagoing cowboy was much more fun of an adventure. Its all about the people you share the moment with also, they could make it adventerious, scary, fun, or sad.\n\nBut do you see getting pushed of of a 1,000,000,000,000 building (your comfort zone) can be fun, scary, or of course uncomfortable. So next time you want to say no to some thing, take chances and say YES.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]