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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be a very beneficial invention. Driverless cars have many ways they can help us. They can help with fuel conservation, reduce accidents, and make driving not such a monotonous task.\n\nFirst, driverless cars would keep our fuel resource for a little bit longer. Fuel is a non-renewable resource, which means it will be depleted one day. Driverless cars would use half the fuel of some of the modern forms of transportation. As the text states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" This piece of the text shows how important these cars could be in saving us fuel.\n\nNext, driverless cars would also reduce the number of accidents, which is a major problem with driver-required cars. According to the text, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\". This piece of the text shows that Google's driverless cars have been very safe and have went half of a million miles without even one crash! This shows that driverless cars are safer than driver-required cars.\n\nFinally, driverless cars would also make the driving experience more fun, rather than a tedious, boring task. Manufacturers claim that they will make the experience fun and not let the driver get bored while not doing anything. The text states, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" This statement shows that the companies plan to bring some sort of entertainment to the cars, so that you will not become bored while sitting in the car.\n\nPeople that are against the driverless cars might argue that driverless cars are not safe because the people do not have control over them. That statement would not be true, because the driverless cars would be programmed to alert the driver when they are required to take over. People may also argue that there may be conflicts between individuals and car manufacturers. That is not true as well, because it depends on the situation. If the driver is driving while there is an accident, then it is the driver's fault. If there is an accident while the driver is not driving, then it is the manufacturer's fault.\n\nUltimately, driverless cars have more benefits than reprocussions. They help with fuel conservation, reduce the number of accidents, and keep people entertained. What is there not to love about these cars?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The I belive computers offer lot pros cons Computers offer another way learn things world Computers also act research tool If child anyone computer family member thinks unreasonable amount time sounds like issue person family Many people argue say look encyclipedea learn world computer faster easier time efficient use In fact people newest generation families probably nt encylipea set For example I want learn searching dictionary encyclipea I could go computer type whole slew liks opportunities found Some people like old ways personally I like freedom easiness computer Have ever research project report Many people either school work field likely need research something get better understanding Yes dictionary helpful Yes thesauris helpful separate things Compared computer classic research tools still usefull could hassle My point computer dictionary thesauris encyclipedea ect So next time research something try reaching keyboard bookshelf To problem someone computer much sounds like Family problem social problem Technology changed world Ever since computers invented downsized became useful The computer opened doors scociety without computers space travel example would normality seems generation All im trying say I nt think computers hurt society pretty much building blocks world While reading paper I hope noticed pros computers world A computer help learning tool king reaserch tools big part society todayIf could learn one thing reading paper I would want think CAPS would world without computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, there is a controversial heating a debate over the trading of countries with others without the limitations of the authority. While this statement is valid to some extent, I consider myself not a proponent of this idea.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, there is a steady stream of reasons to pin down that selling products among countries without governors’ constraints will bring favourable impacts on these nations, especially on their economies. Because when items can trade in the absence of the government, it will save a lot of time for not only the buyers but also the sellers in lieu of spending a wealth at the border gate. For example, there is a circumstance in Vietnam when they export watermelon to China, since the border proceedings take up to 1 month to go through, when they transport to users, all the products are not in a good condition and the sellers need to give back the money they receive. But for the intervention of the governors, they would have sold their merchandise on time. Therefore, it is irrefutable to note that, without the restrictions of the authority, it will stand the economy in good stead to grow.\r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of this action are widely acknowledged, it is better to validate some regulations to limit the trading among countries. If the governments do not bring any restrictions to imported products, the users can easily purchase poor quality goods. For instance, when Covid-19 happens in Vietnam, many shop assistants import unknown origin medicines from other countries to sell to users. Unfortunately, almost all these medicines do not have functions in treatment, so purchasers waste much money on buying them but still buy poor quality products. Consequently, it is necessary to bring legislation in selling to protect users from low-quality items.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, due to the limitation of the governments in trading goods, the users can avoid low-quality products, however, there areSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea very well providing reasons, information, and opinions. They all prove that it is a danger to study venus but its worth the danger. The scientists and NASA wants to figure out whats on that planet but they wanna do it safely. In paragraph five he/she gets alittle carried away and starts putting in some fictional thoughts and ways to think of travel to or above the planet.\n\nThe author has a very strong opinion towards this subject which makes me think that they are studying too ,but for their own use of knowledge ,and also to inform others that he/she is interested in this subject and to tell the readers what is going on.The author also has a questionable tone to the article as well but is mostly strongly informational and useful to many others. It makes others wonder if there will be a landing or some type of close up study or examination.\n\nI however believe that NASA and those sciensts will figure a way to land and study without the possibility of death. I also wonder what is on other planets and if there are life forces somewhere out there, such as aliens or other humans. I think that they need to figure a cooling system and a layering system so by the time they get there they would have only used up a few layers and when they are that close that dont have to feel the heat with the cooling system in place.\n\nSo yes I think it is possible that they can study insafe messure in a dangerous place.I think it is possible to study venus maybe in my lifetime or in the many to come.I also think that the author supported this article very well with the information and textual evidence from other websites and or other articles. If he/she used any.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi name I couple topics I would like talk I hearing alot people talking libraries taking alot stuff shelves well I think libraries around world alot information inside started taking information would point I think everything libraries important know everybody wants happen The one thing I dont really think libraries need movies like pretty much every movie book goes thing pretty much And lets get whole offensive thing I think everone mature negative stuff people say even hurtfull Though I think people read people saying less goin care goin used even goin know talking If one thing I could tel world would dont offened people saySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past years massive car usage has increased bringing multiple determents. Today fellow citzens should relize the harm to the world brought ,by upgrowing car usage. The advantages of limiting car usage is a benfit promoting communities that,are less dependent on cars,and can be a improvement in air pollution cosequences. The advantages to begin limiting car usage can have many benificial effects in the worldwide .\n\nInnitialy , the advantages of limiting car usage is a benifit due to the fact that communities will be less dependent on cars. In source 3 pargraph 28 the author explains an example of a benifit of limited car usage stating \"uneven, pitted side walks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush -hour restrictions have dramaticly cut traffic ; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have croped up.\" this shows how human beings are using cars less by walking increasing some health issues ,creating less traffic accidents and increasing the economy by shoping with the money they have saved from not using cars so constantly. There are many other bennifits such as in source 3 in paragraph 28 proving how \"parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city. \" This means by when the author says \" bloomed \" through out the city explains how individuals of all ages are starting to enjoy the outside activities especially in parks and sports centers making it over populated with people . This gives individuals the advantage to go out exploring new people and challenges decreasing issues in the world such as obesity, self confidence , and a healty status .Although car usage can be a neccesity while on the other hand as a fact that decreasing car usage can only bring bennifits as the ones in the world shown today .This solution could be the start to a numerous amount of oppurtunities that can benifit not only in one way but manny.\n\nmoreover, the advantages of limiting car usage can be a improvement in air pollution consequences. The issues of harmful gases from cars on the run has affected issues and consequences as global warming from excessive amounts of air pollution. In source 4 paragraph 29 the author explains an advantage of less car usage for global warming by stating \" president obama's ambitious goals to curb the united states 'greenhouse gas emissions , uneveiled last week ,will get a furtuitous assist from an incipient shift in america behavior ; recent studies suggest that americans are buying fewer cars , driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by .\" this explains how the decrease of car usage has protected the ozone layer from harmful gases from car gas, fuel, and chemicals making the issue of global warning to bennifical rates at some points . As a fact using cars may bennifit exucess for weariness and body pain although worldwide limiting car usage up to now with these improvements has only bennefit for a better place to breath air that is growing to being less harmful and a cleaner enviorment to live by decreasing newborn bacterias that can harm us. improving global warming is something we all bennifit from either now or later.\n\nto sum up over the past years massasive car usage has been a determent worlwide. today there are issues procceding to the awarness of individuals of upgrowing car usage. limiting car usage bring advantaes such as peaople that can become less depent on cars and decreasing air pollution .this issue is the matter to all of us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author support the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despiste the dangers it represents becuase NASA has a possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray, and solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed the Earth levels.\n\nNasa has a possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus and it would allow scientist to float abovethe fray land. The author states \"...a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground condition by staying up and out of their way.\"(p.5) This reveals that even though it is dangerous is worthy because it is the \"sister\" of Earth and it is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size..\n\nNasa has also talked about the condition, and how can they protect their astronaut, and their spacecrafts. The author states \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.Not easy conditions but survibable for humans.\"(p.5) This supports the idea of protecting astronauts, and be prepared when they send a spacecraft to Venus. It also supports the idea that it would be hard but it would not be impossible for NASA.\n\nThe author support the idea of studying venus is a worthy pursuit despiste the dangers it represents because NASA has a possible solution, also solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. With the idea of NASA it would be easier to go to Venus because of all the precautions they are taking.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that in this contemporary epoch a wide number of individuals use the internet to stay in contact with their near and dear ones and for keeping up to date with current issues and the merits of this trend are far more than demerits.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are numerous advantages of this development. Firstly, in the fast paces era internet has become a boon for human beings, especially for those who are workaholic and living out of their town because of work purposes. Consequently, with the aid of social media applications, they not only communicate with family but also get instant relief from the monotony of life, after watching videos on the internet. Another benefit of social media is to aware of surroundings as well as with current issues in order to broaden the horizons of their knowledge. To explain it, when they have a spare time they give preference reading or watching the news on news applications such as Google news, ABP news many more.\r\n\r\nTurning to other positives of social media platforms, with the advancement of technology individuals get a golden opportunity to earn bread and butter just by sitting at home in a convenient way. To elaborate on this, a numerous morals have become celebrities by posting videos on Instagram and youtube in this decade. They either have a hefty some of the money or great fan following on social media with a number of wishes of fans from all over the world. What could be a better example than Shaurav Joshi?, Who has started his youtube channel two years ago and at present time he has ten million subscribers along with this his one-month you tube income is nearly about 1 million crores. However social media also creates problems for people by distracting them from their goals , they start to waste crucial hours of the day scrolling the videos, and become addicted to social media. As a result, other activities looked them futile and they lost focus on study or work.\r\n\r\nIt is sensible to conclude that the internet put an adverse effects on the life of human beings in particular conditions but the pros of this development outstrip the cones.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are an amazing step forward in the technology field, but they are also a huge bump in the road for many drivers. Driverless cars are great, they make it easier for new drivers to drive, also cuts down on human activity so we can do something else instead of picking our spouse up from work. The problem with driverless cars is the fact that its driverless. The car is one huge computer but whatwould happen if the system glitxches while the cars in the middle of the road. would its brakes malfunction and stop working.? would the car just stop and cause a mass crash? Theyve installed systems in these cars to alert the driver when theyre needed, but that defeats the whole purpose of the car. Many things could happen with the absence of a driver.\n\nTo me a driverless car is pointless and could only be useful in very few circumstances. The point of a car is to make travel easier so you can get somewhere and do what it is you planned on doing. Why send your car to the grocery store if it cant get groceries.? A driverless car is a spectacular advancement but its one thats not needed. Hopefully next time theyll try installing conveyer belt sidewalks across the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the comfort provided by modern technologies, People all around the world, whether young or adults are suffering from obesity, which indeed is a serious concern. This essay will discuss some of the reasons behind such a growing unhealthy phenomenon and the ways it can be conquered over.\n\n Firstly, With the rise of machines and technological advancements around us, all manual work is now being replaced by machines more and more, so the tasks that earlier needed human physical effort, can now be done with just the push of a button, which is leading to a sedentary lifestyle and hence due to the loss of movements and physical exercises , it is turning them obese. People can get over it, by ensuring that they are involved in some form of body movements and workouts, every single day and it should be part of their daily routine. For example, they can make a daily habit to go out for jogging and also keep a watch on the number of calories consumed and lost per day. Unless an appropriate amount of workout is being done to burn out these accumulated fats, it will lead to over-weightedness, which is the root cause of diabetes, high blood pressure and many cardiovascular diseases. \n\n Secondly, People nowadays, are relying more on fast foods and due importance is just given to the taste of food, rather than a high amount of fats and calories that they are infusing in their body. To quote an example, Oily and deep-fried food like fries and burger, and beverages like Coke, sold by biggest fast-food chains like McDonald's and KFC are very unhealthy, and though many of us are aware of the same, yet still choose to dine on these. One should replace these fatty and unhealthy edibles with fruits, cereals, vegetables and other organic edibles. Home-made fresh food should be preferred over-packaged ones, sold in the market, with lots of chemical preservatives. \n\nTo recapitulate, the reasons for obesity are simple and well-known and can be attributed to the excess amount of fats consumption, without burning it out, enough. We can get rid of obesity by ensuring a healthy lifestyle, consuming a calorie-free or at least calorie-conscious diet, embracing organic fresh food in our daily meal and getting rid of junk food.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sunny day, the birds are singing, and everyone is smiling except for one. You all of a sudden jump to conslusion and you assume they aren't having fun. You walk over and ask what wrong (thinking that they aren't having fun). He tells you that he's having fun. but he's tired and the sleep is getting to him. Your assumtion was wrong, thinking that he wasn't having fun because of the face he made, but in reality he was just tired and he is having so much fun. Just by looking at peoples emotions doesn't mean they're feeling like they display on there face. Wheather with your eyes or a device you can't really know what peoples ture emotions are.\n\nEveryone is different. No person is the same. Paragraph five states that everyones way of being happy, worried, sad, ect. is different. Most people that are happy would make a differnet face. One person would display a smile to display happy, and another person would make a frowning face to display happiness. Just by going what the \"average\" person emotions display is not always valuable. Growing up I would show lots of emotions. When I was really happy I would sometimes cry, most people would think I would be sad, but in reallity I has crying tears of joy. People are differen't.\n\nThe average person smiles when they are happy. Yes, the \"average\" person does, but there are people that are above/below average. The technology looks at mucles\n\nto see if they are faking a smile or a frown. Yes, they are going by the aveage person. Everyone is different. One person might have larger mucles then another person and they could trick the device into making it think a person is simling or frowning.\n\nWith all the evidence, it is clear that the use of technology will not be valuable. Everyone is different. People have different defintions of there emotions. Just by going with the \"average person\" doesn't 100% mean there right.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Sea Going cowboy may interest many people.\n\nYou may wonder why.\n\nLots of people all around the world are suffering from world war 2.\n\nYou may want to help them.\n\nThis program will let you do that for many different counteries.\n\nIf you were to join this program you would sail on a ship.\n\nIt may contain animals,food,and other helpful items. Many things were destroyed in world war 2.\n\nIncluding homes,animals,and people.\n\nAll this stuff will change that.\n\nYou will save countless lives.\n\nChina,Europe,and many other places were destoryed because of world war 2.\n\nLuke is deffinetley a hero because of his bravery.\n\nHe even got his ribs hurt on the ship.\n\nMany people would quit after an accident like that,he didn't.\n\nHe kept doing his best to help those people that were suffering.\n\nIn conclusion,I think Luke is a hero.\n\nI know many people would say no to helping other people because of the danger.\n\nOthers may do it in a heartbeat.\n\nIf you don't,I understand.\n\nIf you do, then you will be a big hero just like Luke.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS or Facial Action Coding System, I believe is a good idea. Although to some people it might not be, because it sounds to go to be true or something else of this nature, they just need to see it for themselves and see if it works for them. If it were not to work then they have all the reasons to not believe in it but if it does then thats another person that believes in it. The essay states that this program will be able to tell if a student is confused or bored. I believe that could change alot and maybe even affect the future.\n\nAs I said above the essay states that the FACS will be able to tell if a student gets confused of bored during a lesson and will be able to turn the lesson into if a real human teacher were there. Now if this is to be true then this program can help alot and maybe even help students understand better and help them acheive getting better grades in school which is what some parents, schools, and teachers have always looked foward to, and now it could become true. Then the essay goes on to say that when an ad pops up on your screen and you smile at it that similar ads will continue to pop up but if you were to show agression or sadness towards the ad then different ads will show up. This is also a great idea and another way your future could be affected by this program.\n\nI believe this program has the potential to become a great software program used around the world in schools, in homes, in many other places to fix problems that have been going on. Although there are many other reasons why I believe this program is a good idea other then the two that are stated above, I can speak for most of us and say that this program may and possibly change the world one computer at a time with the right company desicions and people to promote this program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A number of nations search about the past years of the building in which they live in it and they want to know what happened in their house some years ago and how their house was built.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, people in some areas of the world like to know about their house’s history, and they search for different resources to find some information. Firstly, they can ask questions of old people who lived in their city about their building. Secondly, they can go to the municipality and search about the past of their house for example, in the municipality they can find who lived in their house also they can find the age of their houses and know who built their house. So they have different ways to reach their results.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people have different ideas about their research on the history of their building. Someone who lives in the house should know what happens in the history of their building . Also sometimes they are encouraged to know who lives there some years ago. Sometimes some buildings have different heritage stories that people want to know them. Though people like history especially the histories of their areas and their buildings.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, numbers of people search about the last years of the house that they live there. People have different reasons for their research .sometimes they won't find a story from their building’s history and also have different ways to reach resources and earn their information, for example old people .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez mood created Is happy loving In memoir says In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship people close family found nt blood relatives family Also says I always grateful parents love sacrifice happy parents moved grateful sacrifices make I never forget parents turned simple house home went Just living home appieriates parents done make life betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke enjoyed the life of being a seagoing cowboy but he thought it would be even better if more people had the opportunity to be a seagoing cowboy. Luke thought that the adventures and the different places were awesome so he convince people to become a seagoing cowboy. As soon as he got onto land he started telling everyone about all the fun and all of the adventure. Soon he ran into a man named Stuart and started telling him all about the mystery, excitement, and the fun that came with being a seagoing cowboy.\n\n\"Imagine it\" said Luke \"going places you've never gone before, doing thing you've never even heard of, and lastly seeing sights you've never seen before.\" Stuart thought about it for a moment and then he decided to become a seagoing cowboy. Soon enough Stuart, Luke, and many new members were looking for places to go and people who wanted to join them.\n\nSoon enough there were so many members that not only were there a couple groups but a lot and it was all because of Luke. All the seagoing Cowboys liked the excitement and everything about being a seagoing cowboy. For many years all the seagoing Cowboys sailed the seas happily.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Join the Seagoing Cowboys\n\nImagine the waves crashing against your boat while sailing to countries left in ruins by World War 2. They need people to join the seagoing cowboys so they can send supplies. You should join the seagoing cowboys because they help people, visit unique places, and it is a great opporyunity.\n\nFirst of all, the seagoing cowboys help people in different countries. Some people think they are just sending supplies over seas. However, the cowboys along with shipping supplies and food and animals go along with the shipment. Seagoing Cowboys also headed for Greece with a 335 horses in the cargoalong with food to feed all the horses. I think this would be an excellent job to participate in.\n\nSecondly, the cowboys visit unique places. Some people think on jobs like this you won't see anything. But, the seagoing cowboys have seen parts of Europe and China. A seacowboy named Luke has even toured a excuvated castle in Crete and marvled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. I infer that a lot of people see a lot of different places.\n\nLastly, it's a great opportunity. People may think it's just another job and a waste of time. But, it opens up the world to people who never seen the world before. It even makes people more aware of people in different countries. I beleive that becoming a seagoing cowboy would be great for people to see what is going on in the world.\n\nI really think you should becaome a seagoing cowboy because they help people, visit unique places, and it is agreat opportunity.The next time your wondering what you want to do, consider joining the seagoing Cowboys. This is an opportunity you don't want to miss.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and how he was saying different things about how Venus is and was shows that he really does have an interest in studying Venus and he defends his argument well because he goes into detail on what he wants to do and what he wants to know.\n\nAlthough the passage is having to do with exploring Venus theres nothing much said about them doing things because they failed multiple times and by the looks of it I don't think its going to happen because of how the author talks about Venus.\n\nThe author seems to be doing everything he could to actually try to explore Venus despite the difficulties they are having, that even if it is dangerous the author will still try to do something about it.\n\nIn my opinion I think what the author's doing is very dangerous because he doesn't know what the outcome is going to be, it could go both good and bad because there is a possibility that anything can happen, as said in the article though, they are only looking at sending technology to try to explore Venus not humans so it wouldn't be as dangerous and I think thats why the author is still open on exploring it and not giving up so he can try to find some answers to what hes been questioning.\n\nIn the last paragraph (8) the author states that the challenge presented by Venus has value because of human curiosity because it will lead them into many equally intimidating endeavors and just basically saying to think of it as an imagination but at the same time something you can do and want to achieve.\n\nIn conclusion if the author thinks that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit then that's what hes going to go for, some people are also curious on that and so the author trying to do that will be helpful to others and himself and if he does succeed others will be satisfied with what the author came up with besides the dangers the study presents I do think that it will all be worth it at the end of the day, because that's a goal they've been trying to accomplish for sometime now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, as we can see a lot of people are looking forward to finding historical details about their house or building that stay in that, this essay will discuss this matter.\r\n\r\nToday, there are different technologies that we can obtain much information about different issues that may it was not impossible in the past, one of them and the most important of them is a through of the internet, in addition, with the advancement of the technology people knew many devices for searching about different materials on of them is the internet, thus, we can see a wide range of materials on the internet and these materials will be updated every month, furthermore, people can use of them for knowing about their historical building or home, they can use of Google web site for their need also by many other websites, for instance, they should search their house name in the Google then Google brings them many results about their apartment and they can use of Google map, this ability wants to show them a map for related to their condo.\r\n\r\nWhy do they want to know about the history of the condo or building, this can be for different reasons, for example, buyers want to know about this topic because they want to know how old has this house or sometimes we can see that when a house is historical that have much value rather than other houses.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this data is different for anyone, but nowadays we can reach a lot of data really easy than before and we can get info about the situation or history of the building through GPS and the internet or even can find them by books there is not an obstacle in my way, we just should be patient and we can receive the help of someone that their work is relevant to house or building.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of the most intersting and eye cathhing planets known to Earth by scientist. It is considered the \"twin\" of planet Earth making it a very special planet in our solar system. Do not let that fool you though, even if it is called the \"twin\" of Earth it is still very different in many ways from our planet. In this essay I will be Discussing about the issues brought up by the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" Is Venus really worth studying even despite the dangers it presents?\n\nVenus is one of the closest planets to Earth. It is very simialr to Earth in both density and size too. Since Venus is so close compared to most planets around Earth humans have found alot of interest in the planet. Humans have sent many unmanned spacecrafts to Venus but none of the spacecrafts have survived the landing for more than a few hours. There are many reasons why is it challenging for us to make a succeful exploration for many reasons. Veus has a very thick atmosphere of aproxametly 97% carbon dioxide and with clourds of sulfuric acid. Another factor to consider is that it ha a temperature on the averages of 800 degress Fahrenheit and over with atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than which experinced here at Earth. The weather experienced in Venus is also very dangerous. There are many errupting volcanoes, very powerful earthquakes and lighting striking very frequent. These conditions make it almost impossible for Venus to sustane life and making explorations. With all of these very difficult situations to take in consideration the question is brought up agin. Many scientist have been thinking and discussing about more frequent visits but why? Well it is because as it says in paragrapgh 4 \"Astonomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". there are many theroies that Venus may have long ago been probably covered by large oceans and maybe could have ad a chance of supporting many various forms of life because Venus shows some features and characterisitcs alike those of Earth. Scientists from NASA have been brainstorming with ideas of how to make explorations to Venus possible and more likely to survive. Well an idea in paragrapgh 5 explains\"Imagine a blimp-like vehcile hovering 30 or so milea above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vechicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfreindly ground conditions by staing up and out their way.\" This may seem like a good idea but it has its flaws. hovering over the clouds would make it difficult for them to collecet any rocks or anything to sudy and it would also be hard to view the floor and write descriptions of what has been seen.\n\nEven though Venusis a very interesting planet and it shares alot of Earths characteristics I believe that there wasnt enough evidence to support the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. If there was actually ideas and details that would make it seem like it is possible for there to be a safe and sucessful exploration instead of ideas that have a slight chance of working I would have agreed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading this article I feel both supportive and non-supportive of these driverless cars. When reading I noticeed both postive and negative things regarding these new cars. I think that they will be a convinence, but at the same time a safety issue. The other thing that would make me think twice is who would be responsible if anything were to happen?\n\nThere are a few ways I think these cars have positive aspects on them. They can be convinient in many ways. If you need to help out a child, but cant because you are driving, that could be a big help. The new designs of the car also make it sound like the car is safe. It would need more than enough senors, so the car would alert you at all times when something is approching. It can tell you when there is an accident or traffic, and even road construction.\n\nWith that being said, that could also be a saftey issue. Yes, the car notifies you when there could be a possiple threat, but what if that person wasnt paying attention? It says that the manufacturers would put entertainment in the car so the driver could have something to do, but that can be very distracting. Even if the heads-up display works the driver could be totally focussed on something else. It could cause an accident or if bad enough it could cause lives to be taken.\n\nMy other concern is if you were to get into an accident who would be at fault. Would it be you because you werent paying attention or would it be the manufacturers fault? If someone were to get injured in a car that was supposed to be a driverless car, id imagine they would be mad. They may even blame the company who made the cars. If the injury or accident was bad enough there might even be lawsuits held from the people to the company. As of right now we wouldnt know who would be fully responsilbe if anything like that were to happen.\n\nAfter reading the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" article it made me think of lots of positive and negative outlooks. There is really no telling at this point how well exactly this whole idea could go.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "1.On January 22, 2024 Sei Rampah District Court opened the hearing by the attendance of plaintiff’s attorney, the defendant’s attorney (BSRE), co-defendant I (Ministry of Agrarian and Spatial Planning/National Land Agency), and co-defendant II (Indonesia National Land Office of North Sumatera). The agenda of the hearing today was about the reading of the complaintSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many things have happened that we thought was gonna change the world but this might really do it driverless cars.I think there are very good\n\nreasonings on why there should be less accidents,deaths,and people hit by cars are just to name a few.\n\nAlot of people that has been driving for years had still\n\nget in accidents we cant make sure everything goes right thats why they should have driverless cars one reportly drove more than half a million miles without crashing.You try\n\ndrivinging that long and crashing not once.Right now in thecars\n\nyou still have to take over for driving in and out of driveways or dealing with\n\ntraffic issues.\n\nIn this time of age technology has gotten very advanced Google's modified Toyota Prius uses many new technology like using position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel ,a rotating sensor on the roof,a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensors,a GPS reciver,and an inertial motion sensor.The most important bit of technology is on top the roof.Dubbed LIDAR, uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\n\nThere are cars that are some driverless but the driver has to do some and that's why they are trying to make advance in technogly and change the world. If they can start making driverless cars it will become a common thing but everything has to start out to something even if others dont have the same opinions.\n\nI think driverless cars is a very good idea and has been tested and shown that they have technology to do it so why don't we put it to the test and let technology move on and advance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As exciting as alien formations on Mars would be, claiming the Face is of extraterestrial origin is like stating Old Faithful was dug by cavemen.\n\nNature can take a plethora of exotic forms.\n\nWe know this from exploring the many natural wonders of our own world, Earth.\n\nThat is why we can't jump to an irrational conclusion when faced with an irregular occurance.\n\nYou see, from a non-subjective view point, there is no face at all.\n\nThere is an area in your brain dedicated to breaking down the world around you and associating it with familiar objects and patterns.\n\nThis is why you may see a rabbit amoungst the clouds or a butterfly in an ink-blot test.\n\nWhen it came to a low-resolution image of Martian rock formation with conveniently placed shadows, it only took a fraction of a second for our brains to automatically associate its appearance with something humans see everyday; a face.\n\nIn reality, there's no more of a face in the Face than there is an angel in an abstract painting.\n\nFurthermore, evidence from NASA's most recent expodition has highlighted the Martian formation for what it truly is.\n\nCompliments of rapidly evolving technology, Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) sent in 2001 captured a brilliant, high-quality image of the Face.\n\nWith the camera's 1.56 meter per pixel resolution, it greatly shed a more vivid light on the planet in comparison to the original 43 meters per pixel camera used by the Viking 1 in 1976.\n\nNow the formation could be identified as a natural butte or mesa on Mars.\n\nIt is very similiar to the rock formations one would find in western regions of the United States.\n\nSince we know such rock forms are created by natural processes such as erosion, the theories of aliens can be firmly put to rest.\n\nI will not completely disperse the possibility of foreign life forms outside of Earth; however, the Face is definitely not a product of an ancient civilization. As new data is gathered about the Red Planet, more anomilies will inevitably arise.\n\nCuriousity is the essance of human nature, so we will undoubtly explore each mystery and may yet come across new signs of life.\n\nDespite being just a rock, the Face had positive effects in sparking the public's interest in Mars. Perhaps one day very soon we'll have humans walking amoung the planet's rust-colored surface, trekking into the unknown.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives happy loving mood As says memoir I always grateful parents love sacrifice This means happy loves parents done It also says I ve often told admiration strength perseverance He loves parents happy done The last thing memoir says I never forget parents turned simple house home This ment thankful done Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our lives happy loving mood This happy loving mood exspressed throughout memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is coming so fast. The ideas about a driverless car isn't really new. People always had ideas for a car to drive itself.\n\nI feel like a car driving itself is an amazing idea. It can prevent accidents and its easier to get around. Everybody will be able to get to places without doing much. There will be few accidents & it will be a faster transportation. It can really help bad drivers get to places. It can help everyone like everyone go to a destination. The price of the driverless souldn't be expensive because the more people buying the car the less accidents will occur. We should think about people's safety first.\n\nIf we don't get a proper car that it can drive itself it's still a great thing that we do have cars with sensors. The sensors alert people about any problem they have with their car. The more sensors the more safe the car will be. There is so many new features to a car it's crazy.\n\nThe future is coming and everything is changing fast. We already have robots, halograms, machines making food etc. Later in the future, driverless cars will be the old thing while something else will be the new. Tomorrow is always something new.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Finding out your emotions with the help of a computer.\n\nThe theory that a computer is crazy, it is even crazier that it is actually possible.\n\nThey scanned Mona Lisa's face and sheis happy, disgusted, fearful and angry all at the same time.Most people only thought you could see only one emostion at a time in every facial expression.\n\nI bet if they scanned my face they would get derpression, anger, fearful, sad, happy, etc. I feel so many mixed emotions all the time, times can be tought whe you go through that.\n\ni could see where the facial scanning could become a problem. For example like students would start scanning their classmates and a lot of people like me don't want other people knowing what they are fellingon the inside. So that is one exaple of how it could cause conflict.\n\nSo just always have permission before using the facial software. So be careful that way no harm is done to you or your equipment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nI believe that there should not be such thing as an Electoral College. I feel it is not fair to our country. When people vote they vote for who they want to win and think is best for their country but in the end, it all does not matter because the Electoral College makes the final descision. If its our country, we should be able to vote for whoever we want and who ever gets the most popular vote, wins.\n\nI also agree with Bob Dole, \"Abolish the electoral college!\" It is unfair and irrational to our country. When you think about it, If 3 people: one for each member in the House Of Representatives and two for your senators, it could be unfair. What if those three people are going for Republicans? and the majority of their state that they represent votes for Democrats? it would not be fair to the rest of the state because they all wanted the opposite of what the Electoral College wanted, so the Electoral College basically gets to make the final decision of who they want in office.\n\nSincerely, the people of our country.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Interesting flyIt long crying lots goodbyes finally airport waiting plane airport many times I love s always exiting go vacation parents pretty frecuencyToday different nt vacation It going whole year parents nt going thereJust think away friends long time made stomach sick Expecialy going meeting host parents never saw wondering going normal people pair complitely weirdosOnce plane sat young girl studing arquitecture going back home winterwhen going away CAPS asked CAPS speak english said I try laught CAPS looked nice big smile CAPS pretty tooWe started talking felt nervious anxious CAPS asked ok told going foreing stage studient next year concerns like meeting people missing home CAPS told fne dont worry iti wish chance age CAPS changed subjectAfter long conversation started reading magazine put musicWhen get sudenly screamed hard made jump laugh long time could nt even talk explain scream everybody looking us made even funny kind embarazing could stopt laughingThen told guy picture magazine went highschool years ago together time since graduation didnt know anything otherHe working bank making good money really good money CAPS going craizy talking self asking word stoped talking himThat good time even nt seen made really happy time got plane confident almost forgot nervious beforeAfter months everything going perfect im sure even laughs really long time plane go back think think CAPS ll count moment first good expierenceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, it is true that traffic congestion is a concerning issue in cities and towns around the world. In this essay, I discuss about the possible reasons behind this ever-rising problem and how can be tackled in an effective way.\r\n\r\nDefinitely, the first and foremost for the traffic jam is the increasing number of vehicles on the road. Nowadays, most of the commuters relay on their own cars to reach their destinations. They think that it would save their precious time, unfortunately it makes congested roads. In order to resolve this matter, the government has to implement frequent public transport system at reasonable cost at anytime and anywhere. For example, the government introducesthe train which helps people to travel anywhere in the state . It's name is Vandhe Barath which saves time to travel long distances.\r\n\r\nThe second reason for the traffic congestion is the neverending road works which makes the queues of vehicles on the road. In Kochi, one of the busiest cities in India, construction of flyovers, pipe line installation etc do at peak hours, as a result, it leads to traffic jams. The best solution for this problem is that works on the road should be done at non-peak hours and travellers should be notify in advance. Such ways help to reduce the intensity of traffic block \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, traffic congestion is an ever-rising concern in major cities due to increasing number of vehicles and road works, it should be handle with possible solutions like introduction of more public transport and less busy hours road works.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of Exploring Venus was an interesting essay about Venus and it explained the challenges for studying Venus. Such as \"it's clouds being made of corrosive acid sufuric acid in Venus' atmosphere\" but the author hardly explains why its worth stuyding Venus despite the dangers. Although this essay was great for informations about Venus and it's conditions it Barely explained why its worth stuyding Venus despite the dangers, it also got off topic for some time and the majority of the essay described the rough conditions and possible solutions for those conditions\n\nFirst, the author barely talked about why its worth studying Venus. The one time the author even brings up why its worth studying is in paragraph 4 lines 2 through 4 \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Next it goes on describing what Venus could have looked a long time ago. After that though the author states \"The Value of returning to Venus seems indisputable\". After this statement the author never really comes close to explaining why Venus would be worth studying despide it's great dangers.\n\nNext, this piece was off the topic of Venus it self for a certain period of time. For instence, in paragraph 2 it talked about Earth and Mars and its distance due to the orbit of these planets in line 3,4 and 5 \"Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars\". In paragraph 2 lines 7.8 and 9 it states \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" now itis talking about the spacecrafts that has been sent to Venus instead of stating things like the dangers of Venus and why it's worth it despite it's dangers.\n\nThird, a good 2/3 of the essay is talking about the conditions and the solutions to those conditions that humans have came up with. the explanation of the condtions really start in paragrph 3 as it starts off by stating \"Athick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets\" that instantly lets the readers know how bad the conditions are in Venus and the of paragraph 3 continues to describe the harsh environment. After that about 1/3 or 1/2 of paragraph 4 is decribing why it's neccisary to study Venus dispite it's dangers. Then in paragraph 5, 6 and 7 it talkes about 2 different stratigies that NASA ( the National Aeronautics and Space Administration) has came up with. one was about a ballon that was 30 miles above the Venusain landscape to observe and the other was using computers that used greas and levers instead of the modern technology and both of those things are not talking about why Venus is worth studying what so ever.\n\nFinally, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" was quite informational it rarely\n\nspecified the reason why Venus was worth studying despite the fact that it's very dangerous. Maybe the author can change this essay into an informational piece about Venus instead of an argumentery Piece. The fact that it includeds lots of information was a great.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, the author tells about a new technology called the F.A.C.S. It stands for Facial Action Coding System. The system enables computers to identify human emotions. I think that the use of this technology, to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Yes, there are some aspects of the technology that cause some concerns to people, sure.\n\nThough it may be difficult to except this new technology for some, but in my opinion I would have to say that I think this is a valuable form of technology. They gave the example of how they used the famous known painting by Leonardo da Vinci,\n\nMona Lisa. This painting includes the portrait of Mona Lisa. She is smiling in the slightest with her hair down and her emotions appear to be happy. The Facial Action Coding System (F.A.C.S.) used the painting to see if it could recognize her emotions. The results appeared to be \"83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry\". Of course we cannot really know if that was her real feeling at the time but the system concluded that was what she was feeling at the time.\n\nThey make the point that we can tell if a friend of ours is happy, sad, angry, fearful, etc.. Though we can not tell for sure, and we definitely would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys all the possible emotions we have. The computer system would make it so we would be able to identify what emotions we were having if needed. The new computer software would store similar anatomical information as electronic code. The F.A.C.S. enables the computers to identify our emotions to an extent that we can not. The system would be helpful in many different situations.\n\nIf we had computers that could do such things as they said in office buildings, hospitals, etc..\n\nit would help out a ton. In office buildings they could be used by many people to determine if you're happy with your job or what you're doing at the time being. In hospitals it would be helpful to determine how the patient is feeling. You could put one computer in every room to help and see if a persons facial expressions could tell how they feel at the moment. It would benefit the nurses or the doctors so they would know how often to check up on the patient.\n\nThe most helpful place they could be would be in schools. Many teachers give out assingments on the computer most of the time now. If we had the F.A.C.S. in our schools it would help to tell the teachers if we are learning. Our facial expressions give off a lot more information then we would think. As the author said in the article in paragraph six, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" If we had the Facial Action Coding System, it could help the teachers by reporting to them if we seem like we either have the information learned or if we were having difficulties with the homework.\n\nOur face tells a lot, according the the article and Dr. Huang. With the F.A.C.S most of them can all be told. It is a valuable system that most schools should have to determine the emotional expressions each student has. It could raise grades if the teachers would know if we were struggling just by the facial expression we make while doing our homework, test and projects. It is a very advanced system that could cause some problems for sure but the benefits would be outstanding.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author makes a very valid point that caught me and kept me to his or her side. He or she stated that using the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) in a classroom could help improve the enviroment in the class. We've all had those lessons in school where we weren't quite getting it, or we had lost interest in the subject. The FACS could help us with this along with many other things that could turn valuable.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System works by using all of the 44 major muscles in the human face. It is programmed to understand how those muscles work and what it means when those muscles move. Meaning, if I were to smile, the system would recognize that I'm happy and could continue on with the lesson. If I were to frown and look angry, the system would know that I'm unhappy and could find another route for me to learn the lesson.\n\nWith this technology, students don't have to worry about the lessons that they struggle with. This technology allows the computer to know their emotions and base their learning off of how they feel. If I don't understand a math problem on the computer and I have a confused look on my face, the computer analyzes my look and knows that I need more help. The computer knowing that allows me to get more help and understand the topic.\n\nFACS doesn't just have to be in a learning facility. It could be at your work, someday your home, and even used for security purposes. When we place FACS in some sort of work place, like an office. An office can get a little tense and stressful. With the knowledge in FACS, the computers used can realize that the user is under a lot of stress and might need a break. We could also use it for facial recognition in security cameras, laptops, desktops, even phones. And with the possibility of one day putting such technology in a home, it's crazy! Not only could you work on house work, but any other school work with FACS!\n\nThe possibilities are pretty endless with FACS. The ideas go on and on with this type of technology, and I fully support this author and what he or she is trying to do.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "m-beleve or not belive e- some people tend to base things on opinions instead of real facts like how people might say ' well how can you be so sure that aliens didn't make the face ' my rebundal would be 'the image first apperared on jpl website revealing ... a natural landform there was no landform . there was no alien monument after all.\n\nl- i can connect this by simply looking at the picture and back couple years and to now how scientist reported no life for is on mars you will be boiled to death because it's also no oxygen so how can an alien create a face when no life form have been found yet.\n\ncon- in concluision i want to to say dont always go with assuptions they never always go the way you planned and also dont belive a tall tell ask the person if they have real science based facts if they check out then believe or not belive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida State Senator,\n\nI do not believe that we should keep the Electoral College. I think that we should vote for presidents and have them win by popular vote. My reasons for aboloshing the Electoral college is that the president should win by popular vote of the citizens of the U.S., we shouldn't let electors be the reason the president wins, and we should have a direct voting system than the Electoral College system.\n\nFirst, the president should win by popular votes from the citizens, not electors of the candidates. The people would vote directly so the president would win by popularity of people in the states. The presidential candidate has electors. So when one person votes it counts as the electors votes not theirs. I don't think that is fair.\n\nSecond, we should not let the electors be the reason our president wins. It states in the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" that the \"faithless\" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their own candidate. They decided to vote for whoever they please. Isn't their job supposed to be to vote for their parties candidate. How can we trust them?\n\nThirdly, I believe that we should have direct voting instead of the Electoral College. The reason why is because we can easily vote ourselves and actually realize that the president we chose was actually us, not the electors. It is nice to know that we made that decision and not remember that it was just the electors getting their votes from ours. It states in the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" that ove sixty percent of voters would prefer a direct election because some states know that the actual voting and winning comes from the states electors. The people would not even pay attention to the campaigns because they don't care anymore.\n\nIn conclusion, people would rather have direct voting than the Electoral College. Direct voting is easy and it makes us feel like we actually care. The Electoral College however, doesn't really pay attention to the campaigns either because they are basing their votes from ours. The Electoral College is unfair in many ways. I would rather have direct voting than the Electoral College. Sixty percent of the U.S. would agree with me.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless car would be a great idea for a future invention. It would be amazing to be able to sit back and relax while your car drives for you. I think it would be great because on family vacation and other long drives it would be like riding on a plane or bus your could lay back, relax, and rest with no worries. In the article it said that entertainment could be place into the car and i think that would be great, to maybe be able to watch all of your favorite shows or maybe even play your favorite games would be absolutley amazing, although it never what kind of entertainment i still think that would be amazing, to even be able to turn the seats around and maybe even play a board game with your family and friends would still be a break through in the history of cars and would be a amazing ride. In the end I personally think driverless cars would be an amazing idea and to think that maybe this year 2016 one of the car companies might be able to produce a functioning car that is completely driverless is absolutley mind blowing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless are something you think about in the futrue but no driverless cars are coming. Google's cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future wth driverless public transportation. The driverless car would use half the fuel of today's taxis use. They would have more flexibility then a bus. Sergey Brin believes driverless cars would change the world.\n\nGoogle has been working on these kinds of cars since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Google cars arent not driverless ; the car alerts the driver when dealling with complicated traffic. Different companies are making computer driven cars. In 1950s , General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable to a receiver on the car. The problem with smart-roads is that it would be to expensive to upgrade the roads. The problem with driverless car is that if the car got into an accedent who is at fault the operater of the car or the manufacture.\n\nDriverless cars are soon to be part of our world. The cars would be extremely use full in big communitys and replace taxis. The problem is the cars are not 100% driverless and if the car get in to trouble and the driver is not paying attention there will be an accident.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people opine that the historical artefacts should be returned to the country of origin which were captured during wars or colonialization while others argue that they should remain where it is right now. I agree with the former view and this essay will discuss the reasons in brief.\r\n\r\nFirstly, many people have sentiments and emotions attached to the objects which were taken away from their country in the past. Besides, this exhibits the nation's history and cultural values too. For instance, during British rule in India, the idol of Lord Vishnu was stolen from the temple and is now being displayed in a museum in London. Many people believe that the ideal place for the statue should be the temple from where it was stolen rather than a museum. Due to this many Indian citizens are putting pressure on the government to bring those items back.\r\n\r\nSecondly, these items can be used as a remedy for building and improving the relationship between the two countries. Also, it helps to bring peace and harmony between them. For example, when the ties between France and Egypt were not at their best, the Prime minister of France decided to return mummies which were captured during World War I to Egypt in order to normalise their relationship. Due to this gesture of goodwill, bilateral talks resumed between these two sovereign states after a decade. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, bringing back historical artefacts not only boost the relationship between states but also brings happiness to society as many sentiments and cultural values are attached to it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teens' attitude is merely based on the people around them. Some of them mimic what they normally see especially kids that want to feel validated. However, being with the wrong group could lead to bad behaviour. Some people argue that peer pressure is a disadvantage to young kids while others may say otherwise. I hold the same view as those that being influenced by friends is a good thing. \r\n\r\nTeenage life is when they often start to mature. This is where their life starts to find themselves and discover new friends. They often find friends that are a bad influence on them that could ruin their life. Furthermore, this is also the phase in life where they rebel against their parents. However, with the guidance of their family, bad behaviours can still be changed and good values are still taught at home. Peers should not be the ones moulding one's character hence family should understand and help them in any way. \r\n\r\nMoreover, young people that do not have a good relationship with their parents often find themselves valuable when they are with their peers. They are getting emotional support from their friends and families and are often misled by the idea that their character changed because of whom they hang out with that well, in fact, their personality is mostly caused by their environment at home. An emotional support system is important to young kids since they are still maturing at this age and having a good support system at an early age can help them grow into a better version of themselves.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are more pros than cons in influencing young folks' actions due to peer pressure. In my point of view, having good communication between families greatly affects children's behaviour. For that, it is important that parents should open their ears and be open-minded in their kid's situation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will start off by saying that driverless cars does have some down falls, but now a days our technology is so advanced that I'm sure that we can perfect the driverless cars and be able to keep people safe while in the car. I'm guessing you already know what kind of car i will be picking but to make it clear i think the driverless cars will be a perfect invention and will raise our technology skills by a lot.\n\nAcording to google, in paragragh 4, their modified Toyota Prius is able to drive around while noticing it's surroundings useing position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof,a video camera mounted on the rear view mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. I mean come on that sounds like a pretty cool/safe car, I would put my own trust in that car. Plus isn't computers a lot more smarter and can sense things faster than the driver or your everyday person?\n\nNow I do think that we need someone behind the wheel just in case something serious is gonna happen. They do mention multiple things about the driver being in the car just for saftey purposes, but they were talking about having entertainment while the driver waits to drive or do something, but wouldnt that defeat the purpose of having a driver to protect our passengers just in case? I mean I did say that there is down falls to having a driverless car such as cost, how much will it cost? will we have enough money to make millions of them for people? These are also big questions which should be up to mind while deciding.\n\nHonestly though i think we are ready to at least try to expand out technology with cars and try to make them drive around while keeping the passanger safe. If we can make a jet fly by itself and have codes sending signals to start or stop something then im sure there is way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the cost of homes is increasing at an alarming rate. The apartments are a basic necessity for individuals, the governments should give free accommodation for each and everyone who can not bear it. Personally, I completely agree with this standpoint because it benefits both individuals and society as a whole.\n\nAlthough if everyone owns a house, people have more money to spend on other things. Thus, they will buy new clothes, increase disposable income and they will spend on luxurious items but in fact, the population will change the product more often than in their life. The result of higher spending would lead to inflation in the economy.\n\nBut we must observe realistically that the government collects taxes from the citizens of the country. So the responsibility lies in officials to take care of the individuals who have been living and working in these countries and make sure nobody is left homeless. They should build new buildings to accommodate people who cannot afford such expensive properties. When they do that, there will be a lot of benefits. For example, this will help to reduce poverty in the country because instead of spending an enormous amount of money to buy a house , they can use this money for their life to get food. Furthermore, decreasing the crime rate since the poor will do anything to steal valuable things that they are not able to afford.\n\n In conclusion, with the aforementioned, I totally agree with the idea to build a free house for people who can not afford it is applicable because of the benefits it brings.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to limting car usuage. Many places such as Vauban,Germany, Italy and Bogota,Colombia have done things to reduce the usuage of vehicles to better things out such as air pollution. So I'll tell you about the advantages of not using a car and how these places in the world are handiling a problem such as is.\n\nTo begin with, in place like Vauben, Germany where the streets are completly \"car-free\" generally don't allow street parking, driveways, and home garages. 70% of the Vauben people do not own car. People who live here tend to be generally happy without having to ride a car everyday and constantly needing one where ever they go. There has been attempts in the past two decades to make cities dencer and better for walking and whatnot. A place like Vauben may have been like the most \"advanced\" eperiment in the usuage of cars in life.\n\nIn addition to Vauben being a \"car-free\" place. Paris a completly different place where there's a lot of car usuage from what I know. After a near record breaking record. Paris had created a small driving ban. So they can clear the air and freshing it. Motorists with even numbered licence plates were made to leave their vehicles at home and if not they would suffer a 22 euro fine. I'd imagine that there would be a lot of people fined that day and there was... Almost 4,000 dummys were fined. Thankfully at the end, the smog had cleared enough on Monday. Even in United States they are trying to make \"car reduced\" communities. Which is a very good idea to me.\n\nLastley, there is many of these places that are doing these bans and making care free places but we don't have to do that, we can always limit ourselves on wereSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of people who are becoming curious about the background of the house they live in or wanted to buy is increasing globally. There are various reasons for this attitude and I try to mention some of them. In addition, I will give some ways to find it out . \r\n\r\none of the obvious reasons is that people want to know if any unusual events have happened there before or not. For instance, whether a crime has occurred there or not. To realise how safe it is. Another purpose can be religious purposes. The next motive is, they want to know about the materials which are used in the building to find out the value of it or how strong the structure is. For example, some houses have a historical value and used to be an important places. \r\n\r\nThe households can search about their house in different ways. One of them is, searching online on the Internet. However, sometimes the information is not reliable. The other source is, asking from senior citizens in the neighbourhood or even from the previous owners. Whereas, having a deep conversation with the households who lived there before is a better choice. Furthermore, some valuable data can be found in local libraries or old documents and newspapers. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, knowing details about your properties always gives a feeling of safety. And finding out the stories behind where you live can fulfil this need.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nIt has come to my attention the many problems that the Electoral College has. I would like to ask that we change to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. You see, not only is the Electoral College unfair, but it also creates a lie that tricks everyone into believeing that our President was the one that the majority of America voted for, when that is not always the case.\n\nFirst off, the fact that the number of electors for each state relies on the number of members in it's Congressional delegation is just illogical...lets say Florida has twenty because of its size, and California has fifty. if both states want to vote for someone different, then California is going to win only because of the size and population difference. So really, you aren't voting for the president...you're voting for the electors who will choose the president. An argument can be made against this...that the electors that you give your vote to will be trustworthy and vote for the person that your party wants. How does that give us a say though? For example, as it says in the article, Al Gore was the president that the majority of America voted for in 2000...he was the one that everyone wanted. Yet he lost the presidency because of this form of voting. This is a free country, or so we're told, so we need to be given the right of popular vote.\n\nFurthermore, the Electoral College system is flawed...there are millions of people in America and yet only 538 votes are counted. There is no way to be assured that the person you voted for, or anyone else, was selected. We need to ask ourselves what the best thing is for our country... letting everybody be dissapointed in who was voted for, or seeing that they got what they spent time on going and voting on. This isn't just a captain for a football team, or a manager at work. This is the president of the United States, and he or she will be running our country for 4 years or even longer, so we need to question this method of voting. We are a unified country, and our unity shows what we want as a country..we shouldn't have one thing chosen and get something completely different in return. The election by popular voting would be a better overall choice for our country.\n\nAll in all, arguments can be made both ways...for the Electoral College process or against it. The citizens of America deserve the very best person to lead them, and that's exactly who we should get...the one that America votes for. I know that there are more efficient and fair ways to do this, all we need to do is use them. At the end of the day though, using the election by popular vote would ensure that everyone would be 100% sure that their vote went for who they wanted, and that's what counts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you picture this, looking thriugh the window of a classroom door, watching kids stare at the teacher with blank stares nodding along just to get through the class? This happenes everyday, its hard to tell one's emotions, easpecially when they are students and they pretend to know what they are doing so they do not get in trouble with the teacher. Computers can solve this problem by reading emotions and changing the way the information is given to students if the student is bored. Computers with this coding are valuable in the classroom, therefore schools should introduce this new programing to keep kids interested in the classroom.\n\nComouters with the power to read students' emotional expressions should be welcomed into into schools with open arms. With this technology the lesson in any class can be altered to best fit each student's personal need in order for students to retain the information that they are being taught. As stated in the article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, these computers react to the student's expressions to help them learn, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” Dr. Huang predicts. “Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"(D'Alto). This programing can change the way students react in the classroom. What matters is if students are retaining knowledge, not sitting there falling asleep, then googling the answers to ace the test. This programing is exactly what schools need in order to look out for the well-being of students learning.\n\nIn conclusion, Prof. Thomas Huang's invetion of software that is able to read emotions is very valuable in the classroom for students. This programming can keep students alive and interested in their lessons at school. It would beifit teachers as well to know that what theyre teaching is being understood and retained by students, not going in one ear and out the other. Different students learn in different ways, which is why this programing is so useful and needs to be introduced into classroms. If a student is falling behind by not being interested and falling asleep in class, it is our job to help him/her get the help they need; this program can provide that help to ensure that boredom is kicked out of the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The program called Seagoing Cowboys will allow you to experience adventure and vist many unique places. The reason I think this is because he gets to deal with horses every day, which I would love to do that, and when he stops he gets to travel around the cities.\n\nLuke says he gets to care for the animals while he´s crossing oceans. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Stalles had to be cleand too.\n\nHe says he got the benefit of seeing Europe and China. ¨But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,¨ he says. ¨So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.¨ Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nThis proves to me that the Seagoing Cowboys program trip would be fun. Please consiter this idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient doctors The doctor took long I patient I patient doctor come back room I mom I go doctors I apontment I got doctor call took room like mins later came back All time waiting mom talking things I like takeing long mom said I dont know wait Then doctor comes starts asking quatons like I eat I exersi say I dont know Then stepsesling quatons say sorry keeping patient give mom papers go stairs I go lab take blood Their lot people I patient call take blood time I patient mom doctorsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This new technology is going to be very valuable. As in paragraph 6 the auther tells of when kids are in a class that are not understanding or comperhending the material. The computer can tell the teacher if the student is having a difficult time understanding. The teacher inturn can give help to the student as its needed.\n\nAs this day and age of the technology countines the teachers are not going to be able to realie on the students to ask questions. This is where the program will come into play. For the students that keep trying the questons and dont ask questions or the students that just sit there and are mad about something and there not working. The teacher can look on there computer and realize etheir they dont know what there doing or if their getting mad from keep trying the problems and not getting them correct. So in this case they can hopefully stop the issue before it gets out of hand or give the student help when nessacary. When you look at your freind or teacher that you now there facial experestions. You can often tell if something is wrong. This new program will take this idea that we use and turn it into a way for teachers to help students in the class room setting. There is also no way to cheat this program as it takes a 3-D model of your facial muscles and with this said. There's a sertain type of look you give when you nervous so the teacher can ask whats wrong.\n\nThis is a great program for the teachers all around. For them to be able to tell if you need help without asking. And not have to worry about people not understanding and leaving the class not comperhanded anything. Your lab parter may understand alot but you understand a little so in this case the teacher can ask your lab partner to tell you what is happing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To considered patient must tolerant understanding complain I love babysitting little cousin especially still infants This I went cousins house watch daughter three hours I getting paid fifty dollars I couldnt waitWhen I got house sleeping I woke soon mom left As soon I I figured bad idea started screaming top lungs I picked rocked played games put swing even tried feed nothing worked I upset I fell like screaming The baby cried hour half wouldnt hush Tthen I said whats matter I spoke moment silence stopped crying At moment I realized I patient I stayed somewhat calm I didnt complain momSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the fact that university is a gate to a better occupation or an upskilling process for graduates that would like to continue their career path in the future. This requires a lot of documents and procedures. This essay will summarize and enmphasize the relevant procedure required for entering the university, starting from graduation in high school to enter the university.\nFirst of all, students need to obtain the degree of high school first then complete and submit their application form to university's administration, in which the application are downloadable through the university's websites.\nNext step is that, admin department will screen and check all the applications whether there are any additional documents required to submit, or the students are able to get the acceptance right away. Whereas, the rejection will be occured, if the enroller's characteristics were not met the criterias, then there are two options for them, which are as follows. First is that students can cancel their application. Second is to complete the application for an alternative courses and send to admin again.\nFurthermore, when the application is accepted, graduates should select the subjects and register them with dean of the university. After that they will successfully pass to the final stage or to enter the university.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think a driverless car is a cool idea. I can just sit and relax while the car does all the work. I like the idea of having someone doing the driving for me. The idea of it kinda scares me though. These cars can be dangerous.\n\nI could lose my life or get injured i don't want to take that risk.I want to make sure im safe while driving. Can you really trust a machine with no value of human life to take you safely to your destination? What if the car goes crazy or something and it drives me off a cliff. The thought of that happening scares me.\n\nThis car could be the end of the human race. Pretty soon machines are gonna do everything for us. They're gonna feed us , beathe us , brush our teeth and scratch our backs. We won't be able to do anything ours selves. We'll end up like the people on Wall-E. Over weight and useless. We can't allow our selves to become like that. This is why driverless cars shouldn't be a thing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\"\n\nWhat do you think the world will be if the cars were driverless? Will there be more danger? Or, will this benefit us? There are many things that you can say about having driverless cars, some main things would be having that type of money for it, the different dangers that can occur, and as well on how it will benefit us, humans, and our lifestyle.\n\nWith all this technology advancing anytime soon there will be cars like these that will be driving themselves without having an actual person driving them and this is coming very quick. As said in the article, \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\" That being said, anytime soon there will be vehicles that will be able to do all things imaginable things in a short amount of time. It is crazy how all of this technology is happening in this type of era, but it is exactly correct we grow closer to greatness every day and we sometimes do not even notice, until it happens.\n\nDriverless Cars coming, there is also danger and percaution that comes along with is as well. That is something very important that people need to still take into consideration when buying cars like these and all the different effects it has. As stated in the article, \" This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. This necessitates the car bing ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" Therefore, as for the human driver will always have to be precaution about the different things that can happen, and as well as not to fully trust these driverless cars and all the different things it can portray.\n\nTaking into deep considerarion, will these vehicles benefit us and the way we live now? Many people can say it will, and then there are people that will say no, it will not. Imagining how much money it will take to afford a driverless car is also something to think about as well. In the article it informs us about all the different things these vehicles can do, \"They can steer, acclerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" As much as it says in the article how they are \"driverless\" they still do need humans when it comes to certain occasions. So in the end it is your personal prefrence about being able to please yourself with a fance vehicle like these.\n\nFinally, what do you think the world will be like when these driverless cars come out? This world is growing in the world of technology there will always be different, exotic, marvalous, inventions that are coming and with all these crazy things so are the Driverless Cars Are Coming!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The best way that I would describe to people that the face on mars was simply just a natural landform is by explaining in details how things like this could naturally happen. As a scientist I would most likely have more research, data, and evidence to state my claim. The average person would only have enough evidence from what they have heard or been told. I would also state that most people will jump to conclusion that the face was made by aliens because thats what they want to believe.\n\nAs stated in the passage this face like object could be a formation of the natural rock forms on mars. It could also be an illusion of the eyes giving off the wrong effect that it has eyes, nose, and a mouth. There are many ways to tell that this could just be a natural landorm forming. Whatever took the picture could have been moving or not focused in well enough and the picture could have gotten mistaken for something alien like.\n\nThe passage states this when saying \"The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\" This means that the picture was most likely blurry at the time that this picture was taken of the so called face on mars. The picture is not certain to be an alien do to the research of scientists, so the only thing people have that is most likely accurate is the information the scientists give them. Things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel image size would be a more accurate and presice visual guidence to wether or not the deformation of mars is actually made by aliens or just the way the land on mars is deforming.\n\nThe photo actually resembles landforms common aroung the American West, therefore having nothing to do with the alien like concerns. The picture was snapped ten times sharper and still seemed to be given off as a natural landform. It was proven that there was no alien landform after all, but conspericies still came to their own conclusion of it being portrayed as something that has to do with aliens of some sort. At the end of the day people are going to believe what they want to believe.\n\nWether or not the scientists are giving of accurate information to the people, it has been stated that it is a natural landform caused by deformation of rocks on mars. People have nothing else to state their claim of it being a aliens face or structure. People will most likey have no choice but to take the information that is given. Whether or not they take the information scientists have proven it not to have anything to do with aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist dont ride much anymore dont know best routes take So take old routes thinking still better way use realize tiring badSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alien Landform?\n\nDo you think that the face on Mars is real or was created by an alien? As being a scientist, I dont think the face is real because Mars is not a living planet. Many of the planets in the solar system have different types of landforms in general. There is alot of evidence on how it could be many things and how it could have been made. Down below will be some evidence on how I think that the face on Mars is not real.\n\nFirst, in paragraph two it said that the \"Face\" looks like a human face. \"An enormous head nearly two miles away from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Carpet Planet called Cydonia.\" This could have meant that the camera was just put where the \"Face\" may have been looking at directly. there are many ways how this could just be a huge rock at a certain angle being a \"Face\".\n\nSecondly, in paragraph 7 it states another thing about the type of landform. \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . .a natural landform.\" This states that there was no alien monument after all. That was another thing about how the \"face\" could have been a natural landform like how any other planet has.\n\nNext, we all know how many people read magazines and watch movies. In paragraph 5 it states that the \"Face on Mars\" has become a pop icon. 'It has started in a Hollywood film, apperared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" The defenders of the NASA budget wsh there was an ancient civilization on Mars. People were saying that NASA was trying to cover something up. Maybe some people dont think that its true so and that they need more information to let people know after they have found alot of information.\n\nNow, their is a possibility that there is aliens on Mars. In paragraph 8 it claims, \"The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face but perhaps they were alien markings that werre hidden by haze. \"It could have just been the camera that was not capturing them right. it also states how they dont pass over the face very often as in they are thinking that the \"Face\" might move like aliens. But, there is not enough evidence that this is a natural landform or an alien face. It even states how it could even be a lava dome that took form on the isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars that was on another planet.\n\nIn conclusion, I don't think that the aliens are real. I won't think that until they have an extradanary amount of evidence stating that is is a face. NASA has made alot of mistakes in the past and maybe this is one of those mistakes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" people are creating a coding system such as the \"Facial Action Coding System which also them to see your emotions. The coding system can tell if your mad, angry, sad or happy. The dr's studying this project is starting to make technology smart and better yet reliabe. For example, as it states in paragraph 1 \"Dr. huang and his colleague hare experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\n\nI think that this coding system will help alot of people right now and to the near future. As it states, \" it can see all\n\n44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\" this is saying for it to work you have to have all muscles working for this techology to start. When they use the picture at the top of the story, they use it to compare to the new invention because she looks like she has all six emotions in her body right now.\n\nThe techology\n\nwill help you with all of your emotions also by telling yourself what you need to get better at in the near future. As it states in paragraph 6 \"a class room computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". The computer will eventually shut down go asleep when it isnt being used for a long time and comes back on when you move the mouse.\n\nThis machine that is in the process of making is going to be worldwide in the near future. Everyone is going to use it to make sure that their emotions arn't out of control and they are a happy person. The coding system can also save peoples lifes and seek the help they need. This Facial Action Coding System will be a very brillant thing to own.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that learning art is completely useless while others are convinced of its necessity for students. I firmly believe that it is essential to teach children a variety of disciplines and this essay will support my idea considering each side.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, art is might be not so valuable for pupils with a more developed tendency to maths or technical sciences. Art can seem to children as useless because they probably won't have a chance to use received skills in future in case if their career will be related to completely different professional areas. For instance, the doctor probably unlikely can implement his/her knowledge of painting into work as surgery or treatment.\r\n\r\nHowever, studying art can improve essential for every child skills like imagination, creativity and the ability to interpret the world around us. While some technical subjects let us some particular knowledge the art definitely helps in looking at them from another side. The recent survey showed that students that have had an improved art course eventually had 20% better marks in other subjects as biology, maths, physics. Moreover, scientists proved that learning drawing and building different construction might decrease the level of stress between learners which is apparently can be very beneficial in adulthood.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite some controversial opinions about whether art is an important subject or not, I don't have any doubts it is crucial to learn it at schools due to the high impact of such pieces of training on developing some key skills for the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "limiting car usage is no easy take considering that peoples jobs are more than a half an hour away in some cases. what we could do is replace gas cars with water or oil solarpowered cars. what we can do is replace the road with heat sensor pannels and replace the cars fuel line with eigther a solar based power syatem or used water for the fuel supply. the heat/friction sensor pannels will produce enough electrical energy to power builds, appartment complexs, houses, or even recharge a battery with in seconds.\n\nthe way we live now we can do all those things its just people dont know how to use there brain and come up a cleaner source of renewable energy. this entire project could be free and go world wide as long as everyone in the world can a agree this is perfect replacement to fossil fuels. if this document could get the th government somehow ican change the world for the better and probably save our poluted earth from destroying its self. i could fix the green house eeftect on the earth and you could clean up radio active polution by not useing gas powered cars. our erath could go back to a clean slat where there is no polution made by toxic fumes in the atmosphere and destroyed rivers and lakes. everything could be fixed by one simple thought of a childs mind. if only adults knew how to listen to there own words that they teach us with how to listen twice as muchas they speak. ifthis country has the right to freedom of speech then i think my idea isworth telling the world about. and not keeping my mouth shut. i should be speaking on air to the world not in my house being yeld at by my parents becuase what i want to nobody wants to hear. if anyone gets to read this please immediatly take to someone important that would love to here my idea. thank you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea well because they give alot infromation, and deatils about Venus, and how venus is the second planet from our sun. The author suggest to study Venus because is important to know about it and how it's bad or good. Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. The mission was unmanned, and for a good reason because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hour. This why venus could be dangerous because not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. I choose this evidence because expalins alot about venus, and how spacescraft don't want to go down their because no one survived the landing, and how Venus could be dangerous. First, it talks about how Venus,and Mars our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Then it talks about 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus even more challenging are the clous of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere and the planet surface, temparatures avarage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes, I believe that being able to read students emotional expressions is okay to do because you would be able to tell someones mood and be able to tell how their day is going and\n\nbe able to tell how to be able to treat them or if it would be a good descision to call on them or not. I think it would be a good idea because it would help if the class needed to be made happier if they were sad or be able to help when someone or multiple people are mad or just not in a good mood for some reason or to celebrate if everyone is happy. i think being able to tell someonesmood would be a very good thing in order to help them feel better.\n\nIn the reading it states that mona lisa is 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. being able to tell that in an everyday student or person would be incredible and be really good because you would know how to treat that person according to their mood.\n\nSo, in conclusion I think it is a good idea to be able to tell someones mood because it would help out greatly withn telling how\n\nperson is doing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist Rough road Ahead riding bike middle June California Both bad lost bike This June usually hot I know its usually always hot The cyclist bike means pedde everywhere goes This along going use energy also make hot And hot need keep hydrated But lost use water find safty major trouble Also In California theres like Hills mountains stoff peddling mountain isnt easy trickSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Paying attention to lessons at school or focusing on certain subjects can be challenging to students due to many factors nowadays. As a matter of fact, old fashioned teaching methods and the duration of the lessons are the most significant reasons for interest lost in subjects, even for the whole concept of a school. \r\n\r\nFirstly a group of teachers follow classical education formulas for their students. These approaches include taking notes on a notebook and solving lots of exercises which are related to subjects. However, those individuals already aware of technological opportunities and how these can implamented to their lectures by their lecturers. For instance, the teacher who uses technological advances such as smart boards or Powerpoint slides for their lessons takes more attentions by students than others. Therefore, the remaining educators should be aware of these techniques, and consider to use them in the long term. \r\n\r\nSecondly, those students generally complain about lecture durations which are more than a fifty-minute. Rarely do lecturers try to reduce the duration of lessons by using the pomodoro method which provides shorter durations for lessons and improves the interest in learning process. Moreover, this technique can be beneficial for both students and their lecturers by reducing lessons duration and inclining attentions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is hard to completely focus on schools and subjects for students due to the duration of lessons or obsolete educational methods. Nevertheless, some approaches can significantly increase the motivation of students, those are implamenting new technologies to subjects and reducing teaching hours.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, globalization has surged the interaction among the nations which result in better income in technology, medicine and education. In this regard, there is a highly controversial issue among people that international growth brings tremendous benefits to countries, whereas others reckon that it can lead to forgetting the culture. As far as I am concerned, all people around the world have the same rights and dignity so it is essential that governments provide interactions with other countries. Here, both views will be discussed.\r\n\r\nFrom one point of view, cultures are part of human beings' identity which require to be protected strictly. Unfortunately, by developing science and technology more and more people have forgotten some national cultures like celebrating the feasts, thanksgiving or even the importance of Christmas day. Also, some cultures, especially in developing countries, have been driven from developed countries. For example, Halloween was not popular in Islamic countries though ,by emerging social media, many youngsters celebrate this day by wearing different costumes. Therefore, parents and teachers play an important role by reminding the value of culture to children .\r\n\r\nFrom another point of view, globalization makes the world to be connected to each other. As a consequence, students can have a chance to communicate with other educators from all around the world. For instance, student exchange has become mainstream which can give an opportunity to students to go abroad for a year to continue their education and get known other nationalities. Plus, businesses have shown great financial advantages by expanding their branches to other companies. Also, the rate of employment is significantly increased by constructing the organizations in developing nations that contribute to a better economy.\r\n\r\nTo put it in a nutshell, by respecting to whole views mentioned above, it is not acceptable to ignore globalization to protect cultural identities. In this regard, governments should allocate huge amounts of money to raise public awareness regarding the value of cultural heritage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To look at the home entertainment aspect, the most important factor to consider is home entertainment aspect. If a person has his or her private applications or websites to relax against some pillows while watching the movies, it will be one of the best option for them to save an amount of huge money instead of uncomfortable going direct to the social cinema. Such a form of home entertainment, moreover, will create a private place for us to watch wonderful movies without irritating the others intensely. The more people are around, the more bad emotional feelings we will get. It is true that we always find confidence and truly happy whenever we can gather with friends or family members, which can be destroyed while watching in the social cinema with strangers. In order to avoid this situation, all we need to do is self-quarantine, find a great Tv show and relax.\n\nWith that being said, everything always has its defective sides and it is pretty true on home-movie watching. What really makes audience truly boring about the film is a distraction. Assuming a person is watching his favourite movie, he might be momentarily distracted by social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram or even the notification of messages which is pretty unpleasant. Watching movies at home can affect negatively on our routine, we might be immersed in blockbuster movies or Tv series and be lazy. Moreover, Blue light from computer screens will cause some contemporary symptoms such as eye strain, blur vision or headache.\n\nIn conclusion, watching movie is on the rise, and this home watching trend brings both advantages and disadvantages to our self and the others. Moderation is the key to remain the balance and solve these problems perfectively.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that being graduated from university and college is the right way for a career rose. However, another part claims that is superior to work after finishing a school. Both sides can be convenient due to people's preference. So bellow both statements will be discussed.\n\nOn the one hand, developing your professional skills and your knowledge can be helpful to build a career. Nowadays, employees respect high education diploma, and look for your CV. So if you have that paper it will be your map for a bright future. For example, if two people with a diploma and within it, will be a candidate for one place, of course the first person will be chosen. That is why studying at university can play a big role in your life.\n\nOn the other hand, a lot successful and rich people abandoned higher education. For example, Bill Gates and Steve Jobs founders of \"Microsoft\" and \"Apple\" respectively. They are the richest people in the modern world. So looking for their experience, we can conclude that not always success comes from a good education. If you work hard on your dream, a hobby can transform into the way of earning money.\n\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that not in all situations education can provide you a successful future. If you work and develop yourself constantly , you will achieve your goals. Getting high education diploma or working straight after the graduation from school, it is dissection that every person claims due to his or her wishes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The introduction of the Facial Action Coding System to the classroom is not an intelligent plan. The way the system would read a classroom to tell if a student is confused or happy would go well for some, but prove only to be a barrier for others, while also raising the issue of privacy.\n\nFirstly, classrooms are required to focus on more than one student. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" (Paragraph 6). However, a computerized teacher cannot change the lesson plan for the whole class based on the needs of one student. If one single student gets confused, it is no benefit to the whole class for the teacher to go over the whole lesson again, especially if the student is not paying attention or messing around. This leads into the second issue.\n\nHow would a computer handle a student that is not paying attention? \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(Paragraph 6) However, even the most effective human teachers struggle to deal with some students. There are always students that refuse to pay attention, no matter how much the lesson plan is modified to suit their needs. Modifying for the needs of the students would only be damaging to the class.\n\nSpeaking of damaging, there is the slight issue of the privacy of emotions. While there are no doubt many people that would be excited to bring this technology into the classroom, there are also many people who would probably take issue with a computer reading their emotions like a book. \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad.\", the article states in paragraph 6. While this is an exciting possibility, there are obviously many people who will say that this technology goes too far. A computer reading your emotions may open you to being taken advantage of, which is certainly not something anyone wants occuring to our students in the classroom. There will always be people who prefer to keep the privacy of their emotions, well, private. Especially from a computer.\n\nThese reasons are what I believe to be solid proof that you canno introduce a technology like the Facial Action Coding System into the classroom. There are just too many issues that will need to be sorted out before anything like that can be allowed to happen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I cetazine feel materials removed There many reason I feel way I hope people read agree THere three main points supporting opinion plan list First fact suposed land free home brave least thats national anthem tells So one removes book movie library becasue find offencive trying take away one right cetacine The right messing right freedom I free able walk library grab book wish I free go movie store find rent movie choose shelf If put movie book away make ca nt get messing freedom somthing ca nt stand I free read watch ever choose Which brings next point This point simple logical one My second point people choice read watch movie Just meen read watch If someone nt like book good nt read If someone nt like movie good nt watch It rather quit simple opinion someone nt like said book movie leave alone nt mess They nt right ruin everone else Just one two even twenty people find book offencive nt mean right remove There five million people love said book ruin everyone make people happy They right say read watch movie nt right say ca nt Finaly people say said book movie removed child might get apropreat children Well I say parents job make sure child readind watching something nt If child gets hold book said bad parents job tell put back People nt right completly remove said book movie kid might get So opinion little matter I nt feel libraries censored I feel right make decisions right read watch ever choose It fair get ride book people nt like Hundreds othes might love like I said someone nt like certain movie book nt read watch Do nt ruin everyone else thoughSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In making Empire Building builders faced problems All problems negative actually wanted Some problems balloon made Most balloons used hydrogen instead helium In excerpt say hydrogen highly flammable could cause many deaths Also another strong winds could carry balloon hard handle Last situation would law lowflying vehicles balloon flys low In conclusion problems could fixed plan ruinedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a newer technology that has greatly advanced in the twenty first centuary, but they are a long way away form seeing them on the road. It is evident driverless cars have a negative impact on society through safety harzards, lack of legal laws, and unreliable technology.\n\nIt is guaranteed driverless cars will be a safety threat to everyone on the road becasue they can not be trusted. Driverless cars would rely only on the car itslef to get you somewhere, and people who no longer have to drive themselves. In doing this people are no longer able to be held responsible for any crashes caused by these vehicles, because they would not be in controll of their own car. It is known that crashes would be much more likely, and this too means more death would occur. Many people will become turned away from driving on the road if they know others are not in controll of their own vehichle.\n\nIn todays society there are very few laws put in place about driverless cars, which would create many conflicts if these car were to exist on the roads. It is said in article about the intentions of traffic laws that \"the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" This means it will be very difficult for new laws to be passed which support driverless cars since a human would not be in controll of it. New laws would need to be put into place because it is evident when it comes to accidents with driverless cars people would need to be aware of whose fault it is.\n\nTechnology will always have issues where it fails to do its intention, and this is why we can not trust it with our lives. The human brain has the ability to think in a much different way than a machine would becasue they are just robots. If these machines which run off technology were more effictive than the human brain then everyone woudl have robots doing daily activites for them. As you can tell this does not occur in our socity today, because they are unrelliable. When driving a car you have to think and predict what could possibly happen. With the human brain we have this ability, but the technology driving the car has the ability to suddenly break and then the person in the vehicle would have there life potientally harmed. It will always be more reliable if you trust human knowledge over technology.\n\nThe safety hazards, lack of legal laws, and unreliable technology are all ways driverless cars will have a negative impact on the roads. Driveless cars may seem appealing becuase of the convience of everyone have a personal taxi driver (the car itself), but the negative impact outweights the prositive impact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think it would be worth the money to put in technology in a classroom to see what a student is feeling, because not everyone wants everyone knowing what they are feeling. What if that student just wants to be left alone? When I'm mad I don't want everyone knowing what's going on, I'd rather not talk to anyone unless I ask them for help about the situation. If they did put the technology in a classroom to tell what every child is feeling everyone would know each others business.\n\nIn the article it stated that it could help teachers know if the child is bored or confused, but does that child want the student to call him or her out on it? Probably not because if that student is struggling in class they don't want everyone knowing, if that student is struggling or confused then they need to ask the teacher at a seperate time if they don't want everyone to know how they struggle academically.\n\nNot everyone is a emotional person they don't know how to share their feelings but they probably don't want some machine telling them how they feel and how they are feeling by how they look. Because anyone can fake a smile or a happy moment, but if that student doesn't know how to express themselves without a machine telling them, then they most likley don't want everyone else knowing what they're going through.\n\nTechnology has advanced majorly in just the past few years, but we are humans and we need to be able to show our emotions without a computer telling us how were feeling by how we look on that day. We all have bad days and we all have good days but on the bad day if that computer tells me I'm depressed then I could believe that and my mental state not be stable anymore because that computer told me I was depressed based on how I looked and felt one day.\n\nWe as humans need to learn how to express ourselves without using an emoji on our keyboards. Technology has made our lifes easier but again has changed too many things in todays world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet to being like earth and its amazed scientists for years and now we will learn a little more about venus.\n\nNASA has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study venus.They want to send a vehicle up and orbit venus think of it as a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles give or take above venus yes it would still be very hot but the solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earths levels its gonna be rough conditions but it is survivable for humans.\"Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and inovation. He's saying that we should not stop because we fear death we should push through no matter what happens we shouldnt let our fears get into the way of the future for mankind for earth.\n\nNASA wants to launch it up there and they will so that is all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator...\n\nThe electoral college has recently been a very controversial topic in the world of politics. Many believe that it's a significant system, that's why the Founding Fathers created it, while others argue that it doesn't necessarily work as well. The Electoral College is a process in which there is an agreement between the president's election by a vote in Congress and the president's election by a popular vote made by the citizens. There should be a change in the system into changing election by a popular vote since the Electoral College is not only an outdated system, but it gives the citizens no control over who Congress will be picking.\n\nTo start off, the process of the Electoral College should be changed since it's an outdated system. As stated in \"In Defense of the Electoral College\" it says \"The Electoral College is widely regarded as anachroism, a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\" Even the article that seems to be favoring the electoral college introduced it as so. It can be seen that it is a process that has been around since America itself, but America has constantly been changing and innovating and it needs a more flexible system to cast the votes. In \"What is the Electoral College\"? it states that \"THE FOUNDING FATHERS ESTABLISHED IT IN THE CONSTITUTION AS QA COMPROMISE\" HENCE THIS IS STATING THAT THE SYSTEM WAS CREATED A LONG TIME AGO AND IT NEEDS SOME CHANGES.\n\nTO CONTINUE, THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE SYSTEM SHOULD BE ALTERED SINCE IT DOESN'T GIVE THE CITIZENS ALOT OF CONTROL AS TO WHO THE CONGRESS WILL BE PICKING. IN \"THE INDEFENSIBLE ELECTORAL COLLEGE, IT SAYS THAT 'THE SINGLE BEST ARGUMENT AGAINST THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS WHAT WE MIGHT CALL THE DISASTER FACTOR.\" WHAT THIS IS, IS THAT THE VOTERS HAVE NO CONTROL WHOM THE ELECTORS VOTE FOR. AS WELL, IN THE SAME ARTICLE, IT STATES THAT \"AT THE MOST BASIC LEVEL, THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS UNFAIR TO VOTERS. BECAUSE OF THE WINNER TAKE ALL SYSTEM IN EACH STATE, CANDIDATES DON'T SPEND TIME IN STATES THEY KNOW THEY HAVE NO CHNACE OF WINNING.'' WHAT ALL THIS SAYS IS THAT, THE VOTERS HAVE NO IDEA WHO THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS PICKING, AND IT SHOULD BE CHANGED TO ANOTHER SYSTEM.\n\nTO CONCLUDE, THE ELECTORAL SYSTEM SHOULD BE ALTERED TO A NEW SYSETM WHICH IS FAIR AND MORE TRUSTFUL TO THE VOTERS. NOT ONLY IS THE SYSTEM OUTDADE, BUT IT DOESN'T GIVE THE VOTERS ALOT OF CONTROL. A NEW SYSTEM SHOULD BE INTRODUCED. ALTHOUGH MANY AGREE THAT IT SHOULD BE CHANGED, ALSO SOME BELIEVE IT SHOULD STAY HOW IT IS. THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE SYSTEM SHOULD BE ALTERED, SO THIS WAY, THE PEOPLE HAVE THE VOICE, NOT ONLY THE GOVERNMENT.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is electoral college? The electoral college is a process, not a place. the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. But it is also a bad thing because you help choose your states electors when you vote for president because when you vote for president because when you vote for your canadate you are actually voting for your canadates electors. I think electoral collage is is a stupid process and is definitly outdated.\n\nIn the same light, I think the electoral collage is a stupid idea beacause and that they should of got rid of it a long time ago it is like were not even voteing annymore its like someone messed up the votes and said that romney got 538 votes and obama only got 438 votes. Like bob dole said,\"abolish the electoral college\".\n\nbut you have to remember, the electoral college is a good thing to most presendental elections. the only one election that it didnt help on was in 2000 al gore recived more indivisial votes than george bush nationwide, but bush won the election, reciveing 271 electoral votes to gore 266.\n\nin concclusion, electoral collage is good because it helps presedental elections but its bad because it is like the U.S. riging the votesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood show comftorble feeling To show family family would take care explain lifestyle makes someone feel great make feel safe live life wither away That mood I think author trying setSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I believe certain materials suck books movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive No I believe statement many reasons If anybody cold take books shelves libraries would longer use libraries students school harder time learning certian topics world would defeat purpus ability freedom speech could easily avoid problem needed One reason I believe taking books shelves right take books find offensive would longer books shelves This would limit us ability students learn many important topics world Just day I heard lady telling daughter going allow go school day the talk sex education students grade six thought young learn area education Yes true also means daughter going know many diseases get underage unpretected sex This lead daughter sex young age getting pregnate kind disease could easily prevented little education library books class school Another reason I believe right taking books shelves taking books shelves taking someones hard work throwing trash In opinion disrespectful authors anybody else involved writing books Just agree writing mean throw away This would defeating purpose haveing freedom speech Taking books shelves basically telling authors aloud write want publish It also telling allow state thier oppinion This problem could easily avoided needed For example books music pieces movies magizines etc could put seprate section library make availble adults certain age Have books writing pieces rated way movies This would simple effective way solve problem Like I mentioned earlier I strongly disagree giving citizens right take certain materials suck books movies music magazines ect shelves anyone else find offensive It could effect community many ways rude disrespectful autor piece writing simple solutions problemSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I home I getting ready go eat long line I phone talking test I said taking forever told patient its time order I said patient means said means understand tolerant complain I said I might try I knew I sitting table eating phone red hobster So I know whenever I go somewhere long lines I lot patient dont complaineSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders fact could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation The Steel Frame Empire state Building would modified Strengthened accommodate new situation The greatest reason safety dirigibles outside united states used Hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen highly flammable The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The back ship would swivel around around mooring mast existing law airships flying lowSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm going to talk about the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". By this unknown author who wrote this. My name is PROPER_NAME and this will be an essay so bare with me. It will be long and show how the author supports the idea. Without a further due, lets jump right into this essay.\n\nThe author talks how the idea of people can adpat to the conditions of Venus and settle there like our home planet Earth. There are some problems that he think are challenges. The planet is 90 times the amount of pressure we have on Earth. Most of the air is carbon dioxide blankets that covers 97 percent of the planet's thick atmosphere. The temperature is around about to 800 degrees on the planet.\n\nVenus that has the hottest surface temperature that would melt anything on contact including people. Also, it would crush you or anything else like a piece of paper. There is also bad weathering that cause problems. Like for example: erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nOn the postive side, we can make a vehicle that will let us float above the fray. Use solar energy to power the vehicle to float. We can avoid the unfriendly conditions on the ground. The degress will be around toasty at around 170 degrees. The pressure will be around sea level on Earth. The radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\n\nThis why I think the authors idea is good. It can help us show how humans are progressing through the years of tech advancements. This world will become someday extinct and we will somehow surivive. NASA will always find a way to expand. Thank you for reading this essay and I hope you enjoy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "hey I believe certain materials book music magazines etc nt removed shelves found offensive First I know people different views appon things magazines books music And I also know somethings offensive nt offensive perople Such music kinds music And I know people find rap music offensive doesnt Because A lot people nt find offensive relates Second I feel people find offensive would ignore would nt problem Because I know maybe type magazine book even type music listen offensive someone else might find offensive I bet someone else finds offensive So judge things would nt right Third I m pretty sure something library offensive library would nt But maybe would take time worry self instead worrying s offensive s world might better place And yes understand people different views nt let get us So see I believe certain materials books music magazines etc nt removed shelves found offensive Because billions people earth I doubt would give answer Because So many people different opinions beliefs appon thingsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that youngsters ought to do free social work in their leisure time which might benefit both teenagers and community. I am in complete favor of the above statement and I will give my stance with relative examples in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the first and foremost point to support my opinion is that it helps to built social relationships with strong base. In other words, children are encouraged by their parents and oldest to do social work for free which further help in the development of moral values in the individual and teaches them the lessons like caring and sharing for others. As an illustration, during recent pandemic, many different age groups came forward to help each other to cope with this problem, but the main centre of attraction were children who stole everyone's heart by serving to the communities with their small hands. Thus, help done by teenagers has positive effect on community as well as on children themselves which promote healthy social bonding.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the other reason is that it helps in the community development. To put it in another way, creative mind of young generation put many interesting ideas into actions which ultimately benefit the overall development of the society by various means. For instance, competitions could be held to paint the old walls of building or other vacant places which in turn, give a chance to teenagers to show the creativity and on the other hand it would enhance the beauty of the community. As a result, unpaid help by teenagers serve community to maintain its images. Furthermore, it enhances children to develop humanity in them by serving the needy people of community and make them responsible citizens of society in future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that encouraging teenagers for doing unpaid work will strengthen the social liabilities and additionally promote humanity among teenagers and helps in the beautification of the community.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper know computers people Well I People We need something computers They preventing people exercising going outside making stay house day One reason I think get rid computers people nt getting exercise computer next probably number one thing makes people fat Kids sometimes computer day eating snacks junkfood eating healthy fruits vegetables You could Almost anything computer everyday life s good technology The computer thing gets people addicted something The computer games internet ways talk people get attached A second reason computers keep taking money pocket When buy computer people buy expensive one salesman talks Most people nt know kind computer supposed buy buy expensive one think better Also buying computer nt When download softwares games moble things cost money Downloading one thing cost one hundred dollors plus people ca nt afford downloads buying pricy computer My third opinion computer complete waist time People spand hours computer stupid stuff like playing games talking outside enjoying fresh air Going outside important health Next time computer something nt need done go outside Think hour often go outside My guess much Now know computers people They making people fat getting exercise eating junk food play games day long stupid piece technology Instead computer day nt think going air need Also nt want waisting hardworked money stupid piece technology Plus nt want deal softwares viruses My advice computers terribleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientists believe that the earth will become uninhabitable by 2050 due to the extensive damage being done to the environment by humans. While many people believe that the fate of the earth is doomed, others are of the opinion that there are still chances of reviving it, if preventive measures are taken. In this essay, I will delve into both views and provide my support for the latter view.\n\nIt is undeniably true that humans have gone too far in exploiting earth’s natural resources and many believe that it is futile to even try to save it. I believe the main reason for this thought is our inherent selfish nature. Many people would rather live comfortably utilizing all resources rather than worry about the future generation. Therefore, it is quite evident that people are not ready to come out of their comfort-zone, despite knowing that they are destroying the earth.\n\nOn the other hand, it is never too late to take steps to protect our planet from further damage. This is because there are numerous initiatives and organizations already in place waiting to get the necessary support and funds from the government and common citizens. This could be achieved by taking small steps such as placing billboards on the busiest traffic intersections or posting relevant energy conservation tips on the social media. Since a majority of the population uses the subways for their daily commute, posters could be pasted on the subway walls as well. Obviously, we can do a lot if we stand united.\n\nIn conclusion, even though, it may seem like there is nothing we can do about the present state of our planet, it is never too late to take preventive measures. We have a collective responsibility to save this planet for our future generationsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger had just graduated high school. Soon after he graduated, his friend, Don Reist, had invited him to go on a cattle boat to Europe. Luke knew he had to say yes, because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nSome reasons to join the program are to help animals such as horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. You will also get to go to unique places. Some places you might get to go are New Orleans, Greece, Venice, China, and many more.\n\nLuke had turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. \"They got their seamans's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece-with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them . \"When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.\"By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made 9 trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\n\"The cattle-boatr trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,\" he says. Also \" Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,\" he says. These are some reasons you should join, and a boy named Luke Bomberger who signed up, and had no idea that this would change his life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"making Mona Lisa Smile\" the auther talks about the new technology called Facial Action Coding System. The new technology would be helpful in the classroom to identfy if students are bored or becoming bored. This passage states \"A classroom computer could recongnize when a strudent is becoming confused or bored,\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" people understand human facial expression, computers need to know the same,because many hours of our lives are spent behind a computer screen.\n\nIs facial expressions a science? Dr. Paul Eckman \"has classified six basic emotions happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness\" these are all emotions we can see in person and we all respond differently when we see these emotions. In paragraph five \"For instance, you can tell gow a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" This states the us as human beings notice and feel emotion linked to others in our lives.\"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for human and computers to communcate\" In the artical is states \"For ecample, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen,a similar ad mkght follow\" This shows that the computer notices the smile and links that with happness or enjoyment.\n\nIn conclusion the facial expressions read by humans everyday should be put into computers. In paragraph six it states \" \"Most humans communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang\" This is showing that people do not always talk about their feelings. \"so computers need to understand that,too\" said Dr. HuangSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever woderd why the president was selected a certain way? Well i bet you did not know that it is called the electoral college. I am Going To tell you about how our president is choosen and why some people dont like thre way they are choosen.\n\nDid you know that in the Electoral College there has to be a total of 538 Electors. Most of 270 votes are needed to elect a new president. Each canidate running for president has there own group of elector. The peresidential Election happens every four years on the tuesday after the first monday in november. then we all vote and they do all these tallying on how much electoral votes they got. Not all people agre with the voting system some say its not what we the people really want sometimes. Some People belive that it is the Electors who get to choose.\n\nSome people belive its not fair.\n\nWe belive its not far because the electoral are using us for our votes we dont get anything out of it. The state legislature is the one who picks the electors. They are chooseing people they knoe will not be our side. The electoral college is unfair to voters beause of the winner take all rule. The electoral college is unfair,outdated and irrational.\n\nElectoral college method of selecting the presidents messes with potentional voters alot .The Electors Has no hope for who they are eleted for they just do what they have to do to get there votes. Knowing there vote wll have no affect .\n\nAll electoral college voters vote for a slate of electors who elect the president .The Electors can be anyone not gholding public office.\n\nNow you see our big issue with the electoral college they are unfair and dont acre about our votes. the electoral college just throws our votes in the ditch somewhere we need to stop this nonsense they are not giving us what we want.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine you stuck on a math problem, you did not get a word the teacher just said. Dr. Huang has created new software that helps identify how you feeling. If you confused, your computer can read your emotions and try to break down the problem. It would be able to explain step by step on how to do it. This would be of great help for the students.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Amsterdam, was able to create a new computer software that can recognize emotions. This process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \" action unit.\" Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS ( Facial Action Coding System), has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. He was able to associated each characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Since facial expression for each emotion are universal, by weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. This would help a lot students in their classes because if you have a computer that can read emotions and is able to identify if you are confused it would be able to break the problem down step by step like that you would not have to wait on the teacher who is helping two other students. The classes would be able to go faster because the teacher would not have to stop every 10 minutes to re-explained the same the problem like 20 times. A computer would be able to recognized if you getting bored and be able to modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. Or maybe you just browsing on the web and an ad appears on your screen and you smile at it , a similir ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang lastest innovation could be of alot of help for student and teachers. Teachers would not have to stress about re-explaining the same chapter like 20 times. Student would not get behind during class because the computer would be able to identify their emotion. Be able to break it down step by step if they get confused. Or just make the subject more interesting if they bored. Dr. Huang and his colleagues are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicateSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine studying a planet that is the closest to Earth in terms of desnsity and size. According to the article, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could possibly have supported various forms of life. NASA has thought about sending humans to study Venus. NASA has worked on other approaches to study Venus but the silicon carbide that was tested for Venus's conditions did not last long. Knowing more about Venus would be a great opportunity for Astronomers and everyone else.\n\nEarth, Venus, and Mars are planetary neighbors, but they orbit the sun at different speeds. This means that sometimes we are closer to Mars or Venus. According to Paragraph 2, since Venus has been right around the corner at some times, there has numerous spacecrafts sent to land on this cloud-draped world. All the missions were unmanned when the spacecrafts were sent to study Venus. There has been many reason as to why Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nEven though NASA has thought of sending humans for a more up close and personal study. They would not be ready as to the spacecrafts cannot last very long in the conditions of Venus. NASA's solution to this was a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the Venusian landscape.This would allow them to truly study Venus up close and personal and learn more about the planet. The vehicle would need to be approximately thirty-plus miles above the surface and causing this is the temperature at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nNASA having worked on different approaches to study Venus has been a real challenge. The silicon carbide that they tested on lasted for three weeks in the conditions of Venus. According to Paragraph 7, the device first envisioned was an old technology called mechanical computers in the 1800s. Modern computers expose to acid or heat capable of melting them could be an enormous disadvantage to NASA. This being the situation, NASA tends on using the old technology because it is more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces which will be more of use.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus being a challenge to be thoroughly studied may be accomplished at some point with technology helping. Out of the other planets in our solar system, Venus was most likely to have supported life forms. Even though NASA's plan to send humans to study Venus is not yet possible, but it maybe in the later future. NASA had many ideas and ways to approach Venus. Now that they know the old technology called mechanical computers are more resistant, could highly help them out by a little or a lot.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is technology really capable in reading our facial expressions? Technology may be advanced in many ways but only the human may know there own feels by the facial expression that they provide. Knowing that some people may fake there looks, but we are also capable in seeing that expression. Technology cannot predict how we feel by the different ways of muscles that are moved of actaully expressed. If this new updated software is in every signal computer in a classroom, students may get even bored by seeing new things that won't even improve there facial expression anyways.\n\nLatest inventions by Prof. Thomas Huang, cannot calcute your facial expressions totally. This specific software concludes the facial emotions just by the human muscles. Movement in muscles are an everyday thing for a facial expression. Even if we move specific muscle it may not mean that we are actually in that mood. \" Your frontalis pars lateralis muscle(above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris(around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" That isn't a true statement made by the Prof. because us humans use many different facial expressions to express ourselves in many different ways. We may raise our eyebrow for a specific position of photo. Raising our eyebrows makes us feel more powerd and more sexy than usually. Most people don't even rise there eyebrows when surprised, just open there mouth. It's the most common facial movement made. And about the lips, we may tighten it too make our face look more skinny by sucking in our own cheeks inwards, keeping the fat in and squeezing our lips. Or just to pretend photoshop by using our lips, making them look smaller than the usual. Showing anger may be just by screaming or by having a serious facial look. Technology is capable of many things expect in predict the correct emotions.\n\nMoving on, students may get distracted by the different ads popping up or different programs updated to there computer. Students will still not pay attention even if there are different ways into teaching the same lesson. They won't change the facial emotions on there face. \"Then it modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'The same technonoly can make computer-animated faces more ecpressive-- for video games or video surgery.\" They'll take this program as a game and not a classroom lesson. A lesson should be teached by a step-by-step process becuase not every single students may understand it how the computer programs wants you to leran it, just to improve your facial expressions. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Computers may not understand by the process in which we are going through nor what we true feel inside to let out our facial expressions.\n\nExperiments come and go. Even a real life human can see if another person is either faking a smile or not. Facial movements are not even 100% accuerate. Muscles may be used for different facial feelings. This technology is just focing in the muscles and how they are expressed. \" It's all about those muscular action untis.\" No, everything it not about the muscular units in our face. No one even focuses in our facial movements. \" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politican or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" People every singal time fake smiles and to be honest wasting money in something that people don't even care about. What really matters is that we are who we are, without people asuming our true expressions(feeling). Muscle movements are really predictable completly.\n\nTherefore, I believe that this new software should not be provided in students classrooms becuase it's not valuable to have. It might be giving fake calculations, just to boost up your emotions. Technology cannot predict how we fell just but assuming our facial expressions by our muscles movements. Students will get more distracted than the usual. This new invention shouldn't even be close to students. It'll give them fake assumtions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We have all wondered about what other planets are like, but some of the closest planets to us we have never layed a foot on. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents to a strong extent. The author supports the idea in the fact that Venus may have been very similar to Earth at one point during time, and NASA is trying to come up with a way to make it possible to explore the mysterious planet.\n\nVenus is a planet that is very close to us, but we know almost nothing about due to its extreme conditions. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" supports the idea of attempting to study Venus because of how close it was to Earth's characteristics. The article states,\" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth,\"(4). The idea of another planet being alike to ours is very appealing to people, and the author seems to agree that there should be trips made to explore the planet. The article also says,\" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters,\"(4). The similarities could potentially have a connection to what Earth could possibly be after everything is gone. If so, then scientists need to be able to study this planet with a very open eye.\n\nThe planet Venus is very dangerous to anything that attempts to get close to it. The author provides information over what NASA is doing to try and further the studies of Venus. He says,\" NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions,\"(7). The author cares about what they are doing to try to make the pursuit of the planet more safe and attainable. The author also says,\" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation,\"(8). The author seems very supportive when it comes to broadening our minds, and horizons of the future of pursuiting the planet of Venus.\n\nTo end with the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" very well layed out his/her opinions on what the limits should be on the amount of discovery we do. From Earth posssibly being similar to Venus in the future to NASA coming up with ways to explore and take samples from the ground of Venus the author seems very on board with continuing with Venus even though there are many dangers at play.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern The ware beginning new age computers come mezmericing people intelet But people think its waste time I want think within lives see opinion take shape following reasons s information high lets artists expand craft engenirs able plan buildings bridges internet student s people knowledge day internet essenicial people writting essay fact super intendent schools stated students use internet help write essay We also nt go library research whole library information house computer another thing people able communicate world allow us learn staight source Artists able things new art form video games artists like express Music mixing became sometimes add additional lapse tracks nt use typing machine jump computer type keyboard You use spell check edit undo instead throw away idea nt like Artists computers And lastly able plan building bridge might look also video game making make house plan buildings bridges computer makes stronger even start building new soft ware available today certain structural natural disasters pick abillity becoming way I hope see using way eyes agree computers thely amazing lets got information also helpSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "INTRODUCTION:\n\nvenus is a big planet, sometimes is called \"evening star\", is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. In our solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun.\n\nBODY:\n\nVenus is a secons planet with more similarity in our solar system, in terms of density an size and occasionally in distance. venus is a big planet for to go investigate. The atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus.\n\non the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greather than waht we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus, for example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surfaces and have lasted for three weeks i such conditions. Another project is use old technology called mechanical computers. Just imagine exposing a cellphone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.\n\nESSAY:\n\nIf you think is good if the NASA want search information about Venus, and end venus is a planet with more silmilarity to the Earth, i think is good but with the genocide atmosphere is so hard if we try live on Venus. maybe just how are the atmosphere or search life in other planets but for live on venus is a big problem.\n\njust live one day or less, or the human body change or some people born different the others. these conditions are not for a human, the human be killed in seconds.\n\nis a big challenge live is this planet, the temperatures are not for humans the clouds are acid and we don't know if this planet has other lifes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir loving caring gratefulness Throughout memoir author continuosly mentions grateful parents much loves She says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The author means s thankful parents love enough give home jobs friends give better life She also says parents much courageous thing I could ever done Narciso stating takes lot carage go forward unknown futue s greatful parents The quote show loving caring gratefulness expressed memoir authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Coding Systemis a system that can tell your emotions by caculating the way you look and by one little look it could tell it all how your feeling it tells whether your mad, sad, depressed, happy, even mixed emotions.\n\nI think the use of the Facial Action Coding System is a well needed thing for schools because it could tell your teacher whats going on whether you need help or not or if your going through something and need to talk to someone. The Facial Action Coding System would be a great thing to have in school because some kids are shy an dont like to talk and raise there hands in class infront of everyone and if you dont ask questions when you dont understand something that could cause you to fail the class all because of your shyness.\n\nYes , the Facial Action Coding System is needed for schools and worth spending some money on for schools all over the world but them again we wouldnt need to invest in this if students spoke up about what they needed and whats going on but some students jus have a sad or mad face everyday for no reason so the Facial Action Coding Syestem may read their facial expressionand say that student is mad , when the student is just doing there normal face . The school board or government shoudnt have to invest in the Facial Action Coding System if teachers take the time and talk to their students some teachers are the reason the students become mad beause they make the students mad when they have to do too much homework or even class work , it also is a better way for humans to connect with the computers as it says that in paragraph 1.\n\nTo sum it all up this technology could come in handy in certain situations , the teachers might like it but the students might not , your boss may like it but you probably wouldnt . Its a win win situation for students it would tell others how your feeling and if you sad someone might talk to you to let you know your not alone , and for teachers its benificial because it could help you understand your students more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Striving for own career development is most of the people's lifetime target in the modern city. In some nations, employees spend long time at work becomes a phenomenon. This essay is going yo discuss the reasons behind and I reckon that this is a negative development for both the companies and employees.\nThere are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. Firstly, it could be the corporate culture of the company. The management members of the company may agree that workers spending a long period of time in the office equals to excellent performance. For instance, employees in Japanese company could get a greater annual bonus or better chance to promote if they are eager to work for a long hours. This forces the employees to to show up in the office just because of giving a good impression to the boss.\nSecondly, as the competition between different companies in the market is nervous, coporate sectors are willing to push their colleagues to enhance their sales or performance. It causes a great pressure to the employees whom need to work for long hours to fuifill the expectation from the managements. For example, product sales agents' performance depends on the sales number quarterly. If the agent cannot sale the products effectively, they will receive less revenues or even being sacked.\nAs per the reasons stated, I absolutely think that it is a negative development for both the employees and companies. It is because it gives the unnecessary pressure to the colleagues which will affect their mental health. Inversely, it downgrades the performance of the employee as well as the company. Work-life balance is important to everyone as suitable relaxing time can considerably enhance the performance of human.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper people throughout world use computers Although people think computers good others could say different While computer become socal talking friends family Also computer notice handeye coordination improving finally able search click button instead searching topic dozens books Computers benefits One chating talking online friends family You distant friend nt talked With computre able connect buddy If acount safe chat able make new friends That would good socally It always good friends stay touch family Some people find hard play piano look music hands something else On computre handeyecoordination improves time searching topic hands typing Also great memory excirsise fingers You eventually memorize keys located People without computres search books find information topic Others computers type topic information need right infront You able see pictures topic even video s Not books I know search topic show pictures videos one resource people debate fact computres good If ask computres great people It allows people socal talk old friends also improves handeye coordination finally gives option search topic without hastle searching dozens books So question computers good peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think offensive books selves people think allowed I believe certain materials books movies magazines If take evey book self would book read If start taking offensive books self every body coming would taking books self Then two days would books left If books eyes would bad We take books selves people like read If people like books library go library get books This people take offensice books selves This make peoples eyes bad would see goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist listen geogers starts get tired After seenery desert change starts get mad He criticizes accepting advice oldtimers havent leftSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local news paper computers good idea every developed country uses computers Also learning fertileze comunication comercialy implortant Computors also make life easier many people Computers learning let vast information available I personaly find many world events bringing yahoocom Computers alow learn new learning cultures world done computers The last way computers learning informing us everyday thing like get stain pronounce word make new dish much Computers also crucial communictaion We use computers talk freinds facebook You also meet new people useing pc Everyone uses computer basicly meet enyone The last reason computers important commercial stand point computer help alot small bussness letting known Domestic seller huge companies compette customer Furthermore internet generates alot money people becausethey use cyber billboard In conclusion computer usefull learning communication comercial Therefore computer supported looked uponSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Few people believe that environmental contamination and housing are the predominant issues that all the authorities should concentrate on diminishing in order to preempt sickness and other health problems. I completely agree with the fact that these two things contribute to the majority of the health issues that exist today and can be avoided by improving on these two aspects.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, different types of pollution like air, water and soil which are resulting from industrialisation, technology, automobiles, and extreme usage of plastic and electronic products have been evolving day by day leading to a potential environmental catastrophe in future. For instance, with every new vehicle on the road, the emission of gasses into the air increases causing an imbalance in the oxygen levels due to pollution with other dangerous gases. Consequently, whoever inhales it would suffer from lung and other organ diseases over a period of time. In addition, industrial and human waste into seawater induces the death of water habitat which ultimately leads to ecological imbalance. Similarly, e-wastes that are disposed into soil plunges nutrients and reduces the yield as well as the quality.\r\n\r\nSecondly, many people across the world who are below the poverty line couldn't accommodate rent or own a house for themselves, therefore, end up living in slums with poor hygienic conditions. As a consequence, they are easily prone to serious medical risks and also infect other human beings who are less immune in one or the other way. Nowadays, infections proliferate swiftly without human contact and covid-19 is one such example. Hence, the government must step in and ensure that every individual resides in a hygienic location.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is the responsibility of every individual to contribute their part in order to reduce pollution and housing problems however concerned authorities should enforce the regulations required to keep them under control. As a result, there would be a reduction in health problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advantages of limiting car usage:\n\nMany countries are limiting car usage for the poeple and the enivornment. The is a great way to start fresh for our enivornment and our lives. People can breath better, more plants can grow thanks to decreasing of cars and much more. Countries, for intsance Germany, France and the United states are planning to become \"car free\", and this movement is called for \"smart Planning\". Also a clear passage for people can ride thier bikes, taking a walk, etc. Another thing s less spending on gas and money to buy cars, and less stress and more safety for everyone. This may end our car culture, but this is for the better for us, and everyone else in this planet. People can spend moe times outdoors and get fit ( of course since banning cars, which means we have to walk or ride a bike to go a store) instead of sticking a car to drive. Limiting car usage is a great way for the people and the environment.\n\nFirst, In Vauban, Germany, Residents of their community are surbans pioneers, because they have given up their cars. Vaban's streets are completely \"car free\", expect the main thoruoghfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg and a few streets on one edge of the community. Vabuan's families don't own cars, and 57 percent sold their car to move there. Heidrun Walter, media trainer who is also a mother of two childern has said that when she had a car, she was always tense, now she happier this way, because she can walked to verdant streets where the swish of bikes and the chatter of wandering childern drown out the distant motor. Also this drastically reduce greenhouse gas. Passenger cars are responible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas in Europe and up to 50 percent in United States. United states are promoting \"car reduced\" communites as well to do the same to get better atmosphere.\n\nSecond, In paris, they have also enforced a partical driving ban to clear the air of the global city. In France, cold nights and warm days are caused by the warmer layers of air to trap car emissions. Diesel fuel are to blamed, because France has a tax policy that favor diesel over gasonline, which made up to 67 percent of the vehicles in France comparing to 53.3 percent avaerage of diesel enines in the rest of the Western Europe,Acoording to Reuters. The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to the ban for odd- numbered plates in Tuesday. By banning the car for the enivornment, this helps for fixing the climate changes and clear skies.\n\nThird, In Bogota Columbia, they are doing a program to spread the world to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took bues to work during a carefree day yesterday, leaving the streets of thier capital city to devoid of traffic jams. This been striaght third year cars have banned with only buses and taxis perimitted for the day without cars in the capital city of 7 million. Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks, rush hours restrictions have dramatically cut wonderfully, and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nLast, President obama's goals is to curl the United Staes' greenhouse gas emissions. Recent studies shows that Americans are buying fewer cars, drving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. If the pattern persists and many sociologists believe it will, it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportions is the secong largest source of America's emissions. They also believe to improve safety for others since hoew in the America, car accidents is a biggest issues for the people in United States. This can also help to fix tracffics and clearing up the air. Now, American's love affair with its vechicles seems cooling, so it the government can focus to improve the enivornment thet are living in.\n\nConclusion ,Limiting car is a great way for everyone and the enivorment. People can now get less sick for the gas, and plants can grow more. Clearer roads to make smooth sidewalks for people to ride their bikes , walking and much more. Lot moe safety for people, because of banning of cars. clear airs to breath and people can enjoy their lives, stress free since the don't have to pay gas, or car in general. People can be happy again, when cars usage are limiting.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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