Source: This is very time saving and efficient but it is causing people to forget basic ideas .

Target: This is very time - saving and efficient but it is causing people to forget basic ideas .

Response: This is very time {=>-} saving and efficient but it is causing people to forget basic ideas .


Source: For instance , spelling is no longer as important as it was you can simply use a " spellcheck " to correct your English , which is absurd .

Target: For instance , spelling is no longer as important as it was . You can simply use a " spellcheck " to correct your English , which is absurd .

Response: For instance , spelling is no longer as important as it was {you=>. You} can simply use a " spellcheck " to correct your English , which is absurd .


Source: For the youth of today computers offer links around the world and millions of facts and figures .

Target: For the youth of today , computers offer links around the world and millions of facts and figures .

Response: For the youth of today {=>,} computers offer links around the world and millions of facts and figures .


Source: This could be argued to be educational .

Target: This could be argued to be educational .

Response: This could be argued to be educational .


Source: However , this is killing the imagination of children and they spend hours sat at a keyboard tapping away in the doom and gloom of the house .

Target: However , this is killing the imagination of children and they spend hours sat at a keyboard tapping away in the doom and gloom of the house .

Response: However , this is killing the imagination of children and they spend hours sat at a keyboard tapping away in the {doom and gloom=>doom and gloom} of the house .


Source: They should be out enjoying themselves and gaining experiences for themselves instead of reading about them on a flat screen .

Target: They should be out enjoying themselves and gaining experiences for themselves instead of reading about them on a flat screen .

Response: They should be out enjoying themselves and gaining experiences for themselves instead of reading about them on a flat screen .


Source: It is said that you can meet people through computers and have ' relationships ' .

Target: It is said that you can meet people through computers and have ' relationships ' .

Response: It is said that you can meet people through computers and have ' relationships ' .


Source: I find this preposterous and people are losing the ability to communicate and form relationships .

Target: I find this preposterous and people are losing the ability to communicate and form relationships .

Response: I find this preposterous and people are losing the ability to communicate and form relationships .


Source: Computers can offer escape from the hum - drum routine of daily life by means of games but they are mind - numbing and un - inventive .

Target: Computers can offer escape from the humdrum routine of daily life by means of games , but they are mind - numbing and uninventive .

Response: Computers can offer escape from the {hum - drum=>humdrum} routine of daily life by means of games {=>,} but they are mind - numbing and {un - inventive=>uninventive} .


Source: There is however a more dangerous threat from computers , it is that they can do the work for man .

Target: There is , however , a more dangerous threat from computers . It is that they can do the work of men .

Response: There is {=>,} however {=>,} a more dangerous threat from computers {, it=>. It} is that they can do the work {for=>of} {man=>men} .


Source: This could lead to high unemployment .

Target: This could lead to high unemployment .

Response: This could lead to high unemployment .


Source: Those people who work with computers for long periods of time every day face problems .

Target: Those people who work with computers for long periods of time every day face problems .

Response: Those people who work with computers for long periods of time every day face problems .


Source: The repetion of tapping keys all day and staring at the screen can be harmful and not only that it is highly boring to do the same thing over and over again .

Target: The repetition of tapping keys all day and staring at the screen can be harmful and , not only that , it is highly boring to do the same thing over and over again .

Response: The {repetion=>repetition} of tapping keys all day and staring at the screen can be harmful and {=>,} not only that {=>,} it is highly boring to do the same thing over and over again .


Source: Computers may be the future but what part will man have in this future .

Target: Computers may be the future , but what part will man have in this future ?

Response: Computers may be the future {=>,} but what part will man have in this future {.=>?}


Source: There will be no need for people to go to school as they could be taught at home , people would hardly ever talk and the only career available would be for computer programmers .

Target: There will be no need for people to go to school , as they could be taught at home , people would hardly ever talk and the only career available would be for computer programmers .

Response: There will be no need for people to go to school {=>,} as they could be taught at home , people would hardly ever talk and the only career available would be for computer programmers .


Source: I agree that computers are helpful but people should not live through their computers and be so reliant on them .

Target: I agree that computers are helpful but people should not live through their computers and be so reliant on them .

Response: I agree that computers are helpful but people should not live through their computers and be so reliant on them .


Source: They should read books and live more in order to regain their lost imagination and sense of adventure .

Target: They should read books and live more in order to regain their lost imagination and sense of adventure .

Response: They should read books and live more in order to regain their lost imagination and sense of adventure .


Source: Also , in schools I feel that work should be done mainly by hand and calculators and computers should only be used minimally in mathematics in order to stop the production of computer addicts and again have normal people .

Target: Also , in schools , I feel that work should be done mainly by hand and calculators and computers should only be used minimally in mathematics in order to stop the production of computer addicts and have normal people again .

Response: Also , in schools {=>,} I feel that work should be done mainly by hand and calculators and computers should only be used minimally in mathematics in order to stop the production of computer addicts and {again have normal people=>have normal people again} .


Source: There are many beneficial aspects of genetic manipulation .

Target: There are many beneficial aspects of genetic manipulation .

Response: There are many beneficial aspects of genetic manipulation .


Source: These include : the erasion of identification of harmful hereditary genetic disorders and the development of hybrid high - yield crops .

Target: These include the erasion of identification of harmful hereditary genetic disorders and the development of hybrid high - yield crops .

Response: These include {:=>} the {erasion=>erasion} of identification of harmful hereditary genetic disorders and the development of hybrid high - yield crops .


Source: There can be no doubt that genetic manipulation and genetic engineering have had highly beneficial effects on many areas of society .

Target: There can be no doubt that genetic manipulation and genetic engineering have had highly beneficial effects on many areas of society .

Response: There can be no doubt that genetic manipulation and genetic engineering have had highly beneficial effects on many areas of society .


Source: However , many people dislike or are prejudiced against , genetic manipulation .

Target: However , many people dislike or are prejudiced against , genetic manipulation .

Response: However , many people dislike or are prejudiced against , genetic manipulation .


Source: Partly this is a ' Fear of the unknown ' ; something which tampers with the intrinsic components of plant and animal life is beyond comprehension for most people , and therefore provokes fear .

Target: Partly , this is a ' Fear of the unknown ' ; something which tampers with the intrinsic components of plant and animal life is beyond comprehension for most people , and therefore provokes fear .

Response: Partly {=>,} this is a ' Fear of the unknown ' ; something which tampers with the intrinsic components of plant and animal life is beyond comprehension for most people , and therefore provokes fear .


Source: What people have also become aware of , is the immense power which genetic manipulation can give to certain individuals .

Target: What people have also become aware of , is the immense power that genetic manipulation can give to certain individuals .

Response: What people have also become aware of , is the immense power {which=>that} genetic manipulation can give to certain individuals .


Source: This has been very good to feed popular culture ( the film ' Jurassic Park ' being an obvious reference point ) .

Target: This has been very good to feed popular culture ( the film ' Jurassic Park ' being an obvious reference point ) .

Response: This has been very good to feed popular culture ( the film ' Jurassic Park ' being an obvious reference point ) .


Source: There is also however , the very real possibility that the power of genetic manipulation could become the possession of uncontrolled unregulated individuals who could use it for ' evil ' purposes .

Target: There is also , however , the very real possibility that the power of genetic manipulation could become the possession of uncontrolled , unregulated individuals who could use it for ' evil ' purposes .

Response: There is also {=>,} however , the very real possibility that the power of genetic manipulation could become the possession of uncontrolled {=>,} unregulated individuals who could use it for ' evil ' purposes .


Source: This then , is an argument against scientists bearing moral responsibility for their work .

Target: This , then , is an argument against scientists bearing moral responsibility for their work .

Response: This {=>,} then , is an argument against scientists bearing moral responsibility for their work .


Source: Anything in life can be misused .

Target: Anything in life can be misused .

Response: Anything in life can be misused .


Source: Whether it be a kitchen - knife used to stab someone , a car used to run someone over , or something as harmeless as a pillow used to suffocate .

Target: Whether it be a kitchen knife used to stab someone , a car used to run someone over , or something as harmless as a pillow used to suffocate .

Response: Whether it be a kitchen {-=>} knife used to stab someone , a car used to run someone over , or something as {harmeless=>harmless} as a pillow used to suffocate .


Source: Everything in life , if misused , can have harmful effects and genetic engineering and genetic manipulation are no exception .

Target: Everything in life , if misused , can have harmful effects and genetic engineering and genetic manipulation are no exception .

Response: Everything in life , if misused , can have harmful effects and genetic engineering and genetic manipulation are no exception .


Source: Though the possible effects of genetic manipulation may be far larger than a kitchen - knife or car , this is purely a subjective view by present - day standards .

Target: Though the possible effects of genetic manipulation may be far greater than a kitchen - knife or car , this is purely a subjective view by present - day standards .

Response: Though the possible effects of genetic manipulation may be far {larger=>greater} than a kitchen - knife or car , this is purely a subjective view by present - day standards .


Source: Certainly we would not hold the makers of a car or kitchen - knife responsible for their misuse , and there is no reason why scientists should bear the major burden or responsibility if genetic manipulation is put to misuse .

Target: Certainly , we would not hold the makers of a car or kitchen knife responsible for their misuse , and there is no reason why scientists should bear the major burden or responsibility if genetic manipulation is put to misuse .

Response: Certainly {=>,} we would not hold the makers of a car or kitchen {-=>} knife responsible for their misuse , and there is no reason why scientists should bear the major burden or responsibility if genetic manipulation is put to misuse .


Source: The fundamental flaw in saying scientists must bear the major burden or moral responsibility for their work , is that if this had been applied universally for centuries , scientific research would never have taken place , and mankind would be without electricity , radios , quite simply , anything above the mud hut ' existence .

Target: The fundamental flaw in saying scientists must bear the major burden or moral responsibility for their work , is that if this had been applied universally for centuries , scientific research would never have taken place , and mankind would be without electricity , radios , quite simply , anything above the mud hut existence .

Response: The fundamental flaw in saying scientists must bear the major burden or moral responsibility for their work , is that if this had been applied universally for centuries , scientific research would never have taken place , and mankind would be without electricity , radios , quite simply , anything above the mud hut {'=>} existence .


Source: Scientific research is not a corrupt , but an essential and natural part of the human condition for bettering itself .

Target: Scientific research is not a corrupt , but an essential and natural , part of the human condition for bettering itself .

Response: Scientific research is not a corrupt , but an essential and natural {=>,} part of the human condition for bettering itself .


Source: The other fundamental flaw is assuming that individual scientists have responsibility , Science is a process of discovery rather than creation , ie .

Target: The other fundamental flaw is assuming that individual scientists have responsibility , Science is a process of discovery rather than creation , ie .

Response: The other fundamental flaw is assuming that individual scientists have responsibility , Science is a process of discovery rather than creation , ie .


Source: no - one created genetic manipulation , the power of it was there to be discovered .

Target: no - one created genetic manipulation , the power of it was there to be discovered .

Response: no - one created genetic manipulation , the power of it was there to be discovered .


Source: If one scientist does not make a discovery then another one will .

Target: If one scientist does not make a discovery , then another one will .

Response: If one scientist does not make a discovery {=>,} then another one will .


Source: It is unfair to hold responsible the scientist on the fore front of human knowledge , who discovers something when another scientist in another part of the world may make the discovery independently afterwards .

Target: It is unfair to hold responsible the scientist at the forefront of human knowledge , who discovers something when another scientist in another part of the world may make the discovery independently afterwards .

Response: It is unfair to hold responsible the scientist {on=>at} the {fore front=>forefront} of human knowledge , who discovers something when another scientist in another part of the world may make the discovery independently afterwards .


Source: The only argument for making scientists responsible for their work , is that quite often , and particularly in the case of genetic manipulation , it would need a scientist to misuse knowledge , and therefore they should be responsible .

Target: The only argument for making scientists responsible for their work , is that quite often , and particularly in the case of genetic manipulation , it would need a scientist to misuse knowledge , and therefore they should be responsible .

Response: The only argument for making scientists responsible for their work , is that quite often , and particularly in the case of genetic manipulation , it would need a scientist to misuse knowledge , and therefore they should be responsible .


Source: While genetic manipulation is relatively new , it takes a scientist to carry it out , and therefore an individual scientist could be held responsible .

Target: While genetic manipulation is relatively new , it takes a scientist to carry it out , and therefore an individual scientist could be held responsible .

Response: While genetic manipulation is relatively new , it takes a scientist to carry it out , and therefore an individual scientist could be held responsible .


Source: But , once genetic manipulation becomes common - place in the future , and it is not only the domain of scientists , the originals scientist who discovered genetic manipulation can not be held responsible for other 's misuse of it .

Target: But , once genetic manipulation becomes commonplace in the future , and it is not only the domain of scientists , the original scientist who discovered genetic manipulation can not be held responsible for other s ' misuse of it .

Response: But , once genetic manipulation becomes {common - place=>commonplace} in the future , and it is not only the domain of scientists , the {originals=>original} scientist who discovered genetic manipulation can not be held responsible for other {'s=>s '} misuse of it .


Source: There are many problems facing the Monarchy .

Target: There are many problems facing the monarchy .

Response: There are many problems facing the {Monarchy=>monarchy} .


Source: Some of them are listed below :

Target: Some of them are listed below :

Response: Some of them are listed below :


Source: The divisions in their family and the fight between prince and the princes of Wales and the possibility of the divorce .

Target: The divisions in their family and the fight between the Prince and the Princess of Wales and the possibility of divorce .

Response: The divisions in their family and the fight between {=>the} {prince=>Prince} and the {princes=>Princess} of Wales and the possibility of {the=>} divorce .


Source: The other problem is that people say ( or think ) that they do not do anything but they are rich and also they do not pay any taxes .

Target: The other problem is that people say ( or think ) that they do not do anything but they are rich and also they do not pay any taxes .

Response: The other problem is that people say ( or think ) that they do not do anything but they are rich and also they do not pay any taxes .


Source: Another problem is that people think that Monarchy is abolishing in many countries and many countries are republic so Monarchy should be abolished in this country too .

Target: Another problem is that people think that the monarchy is being abolished in many countries and many countries are republics , so the monarchy should be abolished in this country , too .

Response: Another problem is that people think that {=>the} {Monarchy=>monarchy} is {abolishing=>being abolished} in many countries and many countries are {republic=>republics ,} so {=>the} {Monarchy=>monarchy} should be abolished in this country {=>,} too .


Source: There are also arguments against abolishing the Monarchy too .

Target: There are also arguments against abolishing the monarchy .

Response: There are also arguments against abolishing the {Monarchy=>monarchy} {too=>} .


Source: For example many people like the royal family or they are honest people not like the politisions that always lay .

Target: For example , many people like the royal family because they are honest people , not like the politicians , who always lie .

Response: For example {=>,} many people like the royal family {or=>because} they are honest people {=>,} not like the {politisions=>politicians ,} {that=>who} always {lay=>lie} .


Source: I think the royal family and Monarchy is a a tradition in UK and anywhere in the world , UK is known by its royal family , so I do not think it should be abolished .

Target: I think the royal family and the monarchy is a tradition in the UK and anywhere in the world . The UK is known for its royal family , so I do not think it should be abolished .

Response: I think the royal family and {=>the} {Monarchy=>monarchy} is {a=>} a tradition in {=>the} UK and anywhere in the world {,=>.} {=>The} UK is known {by=>for} its royal family , so I do not think it should be abolished .


Source: In the end I think if many people want the Monarchy to be ablished a general election should be called and then see if Monarchy should be abolished .

Target: In the end , I think if many people want the monarchy to be abolished , a general election should be called and then we would see if the monarchy should be abolished .

Response: In the end {=>,} I think if many people want the {Monarchy=>monarchy} to be {ablished=>abolished ,} a general election should be called and then {=>we would} see if {=>the} {Monarchy=>monarchy} should be abolished .


Source: " In Vitro fertilisation " is the fertilisation of an egg in the laboratory ie . in a testube .

Target: " In Vitro fertilisation " is the fertilisation of an egg in the laboratory ie . in a test tube .

Response: " In Vitro fertilisation " is the fertilisation of an egg in the laboratory ie . in a {testube=>test tube} .


Source: The egg is taken from the mother and placed in an environment which will optimise the chances of fertilisation by the sperm from the father .

Target: The egg is taken from the mother and placed in an environment which will optimise the chances of fertilisation by the sperm from the father .

Response: The egg is taken from the mother and placed in an environment which will optimise the chances of fertilisation by the sperm from the father .


Source: Once fertilisation has occured the fertilised egg is implanted back into the mothers womb and from there on the pregnancy will be normal .

Target: Once fertilisation has occurred , the fertilised egg is implanted back into the mother 's womb and from there on the pregnancy will be normal .

Response: Once fertilisation has {occured=>occurred ,} the fertilised egg is implanted back into the {mothers=>mother 's} womb and from there on the pregnancy will be normal .


Source: Normally more than 1 egg is taken from the mother so that the eggs can be stored and used later if the pregnancy is unsuccesful or so that more than one can be fertilised at the same time to increase the chance of a succesful pregnancy .

Target: Normally , more than 1 egg is taken from the mother so that the eggs can be stored and used later if the pregnancy is unsuccessful or so that more than one can be fertilised at the same time to increase the chance of a successful pregnancy .

Response: Normally {=>,} more than 1 egg is taken from the mother so that the eggs can be stored and used later if the pregnancy is {unsuccesful=>unsuccessful} or so that more than one can be fertilised at the same time to increase the chance of a {succesful=>successful} pregnancy .


Source: This usually leads to multiple births ie .

Target: This usually leads to multiple births ie .

Response: This usually leads to multiple births ie .


Source: twins , triplets etc .

Target: twins , triplets etc .

Response: twins , triplets etc .


Source: There are people who are agains this , saying it is not natural and is it fair to the child having started life in a test tube , as they believe life starts from the moment of conception .

Target: There are people who are against this , saying it is not natural and asking is it fair to the child to have started life in a test tube , as they believe life starts from the moment of conception .

Response: There are people who are {agains=>against} this , saying it is not natural and {=>asking} is it fair to the child {having=>to have} started life in a test tube , as they believe life starts from the moment of conception .


Source: There are ethics involved whereby who is given the treatment and who is n't ?

Target: There are ethics involved relating to who is given the treatment and who is n't

Response: There are ethics involved {whereby=>relating to} who is given the treatment and who is n't {?=>}


Source: , at what age should the treatment not be given and is it justifiable to spend so much money on in vitro fertilisation for one person when the same amount of money could be used to saves hundereds of lives by vaccinating people against measles for example .

Target: , at what age should the treatment not be given and is it justifiable to spend so much money on in vitro fertilisation for one person when the same amount of money could be used to saves hundreds of lives by vaccinating people against measles , for example .

Response: , at what age should the treatment not be given and is it justifiable to spend so much money on in vitro fertilisation for one person when the same amount of money could be used to saves {hundereds=>hundreds} of lives by vaccinating people against measles {=>,} for example .


Source: The people who are for this can argue by saying that it is the right of every person to have their own child .

Target: The people who are for this can argue by saying that it is the right of every person to have their own child .

Response: The people who are for this can argue by saying that it is the right of every person to have their own child .


Source: Women who would not normally be able to have children can now do so with invitro fertilisation .

Target: Women who would not normally be able to have children can now do so with in vitro fertilisation .

Response: Women who would not normally be able to have children can now do so with {invitro=>in vitro} fertilisation .


Source: Through no fault of her own she could have a blocked fallopian tube causing her to be unable to allow eggs down to the womb and it is only fair in helping her to have children .

Target: Through no fault of her own , she could have a blocked fallopian tube causing her to be unable to allow eggs down to the womb and it is only fair to help her to have children .

Response: Through no fault of her own {=>,} she could have a blocked fallopian tube causing her to be unable to allow eggs down to the womb and it is only fair {in=>} {helping=>to help} her to have children .


Source: Technology has progressed quickly and in doing so ethics and practical guidelines have been left behind .

Target: Technology has progressed quickly and , in doing so , ethics and practical guidelines have been left behind .

Response: Technology has progressed quickly and {=>,} {in doing so=>in doing so} {=>,} ethics and practical guidelines have been left behind .


Source: I therefore think it is necessary to have certain regulations ie .

Target: I therefore think it is necessary to have certain regulations i.e .

Response: I therefore think it is necessary to have certain regulations {ie=>i.e} .


Source: 1 . Fertility treatment should not be given to post - menopausal women .

Target: 1 . Fertility treatment should not be given to post - menopausal women .

Response: 1 . Fertility treatment should not be given to post - menopausal women .


Source: The menopause is the body 's way of telling you that you are to old and your body is no long capable of bearing a baby .

Target: The menopause is the body 's way of telling you that you are too old and your body is no long capable of bearing a baby .

Response: The menopause is the body 's way of telling you that you are {to=>too} old and your body is no long capable of bearing a baby .


Source: Last year there was a case of a post menopausal woman who by lying about her age was given in vitro fertilisation ( IVF ) .

Target: Last year there was a case of a post- menopausal woman who , by lying about her age , was given in vitro fertilisation ( IVF ) .

Response: Last year there was a case of a {post=>post-} menopausal woman who {=>,} by lying about her age {=>,} was given in vitro fertilisation ( IVF ) .


Source: I do n't think this is fair or morally correct to the child since her mother would be claiming her pension when she was at primary school and her mother would probably die while the child was in her teens .... there should be a test that is given before ( IVF ) is carried out to check the mother is not past the menopause .

Target: I do n't think this is fair or morally correct to the child , since her mother would be claiming her pension when she was at primary school and her mother would probably die while the child was in her teens .... There should be a test that is given before ( IVF ) is carried out to check the mother is not past the menopause .

Response: I do n't think this is fair or morally correct to the child {=>,} since her mother would be claiming her pension when she was at primary school and her mother would probably die while the child was in her teens .... {there=>There} should be a test that is given before ( IVF ) is carried out to check the mother is not past the menopause .


Source: 2 .

Target: 2 .

Response: 2 .


Source: Eggs should not be taken from aborted foetuses .

Target: Eggs should not be taken from aborted foetuses .

Response: Eggs should not be taken from aborted foetuses .


Source: The foetuses will have been aborted for a reason for example : if it was the result of a rape or if it had congenital deformities .

Target: The foetuses will have been aborted for a reason for example : if it was the result of a rape or if it had congenital deformities .

Response: The foetuses will have been aborted for a reason for example : if it was the result of a rape or if it had congenital deformities .


Source: There should be a guideline or law stating that eggs should only be taken from the mother and not from dead , foetuses .

Target: There should be a guideline or law stating that eggs should only be taken from the mother and not from dead foetuses .

Response: There should be a guideline or law stating that eggs should only be taken from the mother and not from dead {,=>} foetuses .


Source: Science has moved on dramatically since the C19th .

Target: Science has moved on dramatically since the C19th .

Response: Science has moved on dramatically since the C19th .


Source: Many new things have been invented and many things medically have changed .

Target: Many new things have been invented and many things medically have changed .

Response: Many new things have been invented and many things medically have changed .


Source: People in our modern times are now able to have liver , heart and even lung transplants , there are many complications but many are succesful .

Target: People in our modern times are now able to have liver , heart and even lung transplants . There are many complications but many are successful .

Response: People in our modern times are now able to have liver , heart and even lung transplants {, there=>. There} are many complications but many are {succesful=>successful} .


Source: People are able to have a whole new blood supply if theirs lacks the sufficient requirements or , a bone marrow transplant if the blood lacks white cells .

Target: People are able to have a whole new blood supply if theirs lacks the sufficient requirements , or a bone marrow transplant if the blood lacks white cells .

Response: People are able to have a whole new blood supply if theirs lacks the sufficient requirements {=>,} or {,=>} a bone marrow transplant if the blood lacks white cells .


Source: All the above are carried out on living people , but nowadays biological operations can be carried out on humans which are not even born .

Target: All the above are carried out on living people , but nowadays biological operations can be carried out on humans which are not even born .

Response: All the above are carried out on living people , but nowadays biological operations can be carried out on humans which are not even born .


Source: Bodies can start their days in a test tubes .

Target: Bodies can start their days in a test tube .

Response: Bodies can start their days in a test {tubes=>tube} .


Source: This is called ' in vitro fertilisation ' .

Target: This is called ' in vitro fertilisation ' .

Response: This is called ' in vitro fertilisation ' .


Source: This is when an egg is removed from a woman placed in a test tube and then sperm is placed in to the test tube and the egg and sperm fuse together .

Target: This is when an egg is removed from a woman , placed in a test tube , and then sperm is placed into the test tube and the egg and sperm fuse together .

Response: This is when an egg is removed from a woman {=>,} placed in a test tube {=>,} and then sperm is placed {in to=>into} the test tube and the egg and sperm fuse together .


Source: The test tube is then incubated for a few weeks and when the fetous is formed , the baby is then inserted back in to the mother .

Target: The test tube is then incubated for a few weeks and when the foetus is formed , and the baby is then inserted back into the mother .

Response: The test tube is then incubated for a few weeks and when the {fetous=>foetus} is formed , {=>and} the baby is then inserted back {in to=>into} the mother .


Source: The fetous is left to grow and develop naturally .

Target: The foetus is left to grow and develop naturally .

Response: The {fetous=>foetus} is left to grow and develop naturally .


Source: This idea is extremely benificial to married couples who have been trying for a baby but have been unsuccesful are able to have children .

Target: This idea is extremely beneficial because married couples who have been trying for a baby but have been unsuccessful are able to have children .

Response: This idea is extremely {benificial=>beneficial} {to=>because} married couples who have been trying for a baby but have been {unsuccesful=>unsuccessful} are able to have children .


Source: An in vitro fertilisation allows the baby to grow inside , which allows the mother and baby to bond and it would feel apart of her , this would not happen if the couple adopted .

Target: In vitro fertilisation allows the baby to grow inside , which allows the mother and baby to bond and it would feel a part of her . This would not happen if the couple adopted .

Response: {An in=>In} vitro fertilisation allows the baby to grow inside , which allows the mother and baby to bond and it would feel {apart=>a part} of her {, this=>. This} would not happen if the couple adopted .


Source: What I do feel is ethically incorrect is when a woman who is post - menopausal decides she wants a baby .

Target: What I do feel is ethically incorrect is when a woman who is post - menopausal decides she wants a baby .

Response: What I do feel is ethically incorrect is when a woman who is post - menopausal decides she wants a baby .


Source: Nature has already taken its course to tell her she is too old to have any children so why should she have one implanted into her .

Target: Nature has already taken its course to tell her she is too old to have any children , so why should she have one implanted into her .

Response: Nature has already taken its course to tell her she is too old to have any children {=>,} so why should she have one implanted into her .


Source: It is not fair on the child because when it grows up and all its friends are playing with their 30 - 40 year old parents , its mother could be drawing her pension and I am sure she would not feel like playing with her child .

Target: It is not fair on the child , because when it grows up and all its friends are playing with their 30 - 40 - year - old parents , its mother could be drawing her pension and I am sure she would not feel like playing with her child .

Response: It is not fair on the child {=>,} because when it grows up and all its friends are playing with their 30 - 40 {=>-} year {=>-} old parents , its mother could be drawing her pension and I am sure she would not feel like playing with her child .


Source: Also the mother may die of old age before the child has led a full life and this would be unfair to the child .

Target: Also , the mother may die of old age before the child has led a full life and this would be unfair to the child .

Response: Also {=>,} the mother may die of old age before the child has led a full life and this would be unfair to the child .


Source: The child may also have to look after the mother in her old age .

Target: The child may also have to look after the mother in her old age .

Response: The child may also have to look after the mother in her old age .


Source: As the fetous begins its life in a test tube , and the sperm is selected , this means that the sex of the sperm could also be selected .

Target: As the foetus begins its life in a test tube , and the sperm is selected , this means that the sex of the sperm could also be selected .

Response: As the {fetous=>foetus} begins its life in a test tube , and the sperm is selected , this means that the sex of the sperm could also be selected .


Source: The way the sex can be chosen is by using genetics .

Target: The way the sex can be chosen is by using genetics .

Response: The way the sex can be chosen is by using genetics .


Source: The women has 2 X chromosomes and the man has one X and a Y - chromosomes .

Target: The woman has 2 X chromosomes and the man has one X and a Y - chromosome .

Response: The {women=>woman} has 2 X chromosomes and the man has one X and a Y - {chromosomes=>chromosome} .


Source: The way in which the sex can be selected is that the egg is always X and the sperms nucleus can either contain an X or a Y chromosome .

Target: The way in which the sex can be selected is that the egg is always X and the sperm 's nucleus can either contain an X or a Y chromosome .

Response: The way in which the sex can be selected is that the egg is always X and the {sperms=>sperm 's} nucleus can either contain an X or a Y chromosome .


Source: The X chromosome sperm is slightly heavier than the Y so they can be separated .

Target: The X chromosome sperm is slightly heavier than the Y , so they can be separated .

Response: The X chromosome sperm is slightly heavier than the Y {=>,} so they can be separated .


Source: If the mother wants a boy Y sperm is selected and if a girl X is selected .

Target: If the mother wants a boy , Y sperm is selected , and if a girl , X is selected .

Response: If the mother wants a boy {=>,} Y sperm is selected {=>,} and if a girl {=>,} X is selected .


Source: This may lead to an increase in one sex , and a decline in the other .

Target: This may lead to an increase in one sex , and a decline in the other .

Response: This may lead to an increase in one sex , and a decline in the other .


Source: As a result this would reduce the population as there would be less couples .

Target: As a result , this would reduce the population as there would be fewer couples .

Response: As a result {=>,} this would reduce the population as there would be {less=>fewer} couples .


Source: Also what happens if most people the year you are born are men and you are a woman , this would be the unpopular sex .

Target: Also , what happens if most people the year you are born are men and you are a woman ? This would be the unpopular sex .

Response: Also {=>,} what happens if most people the year you are born are men and you are a woman {,=>?} {this=>This} would be the unpopular sex .


Source: Science is progressing all the time , but is it for the best ?

Target: Science is progressing all the time , but is it for the best ?

Response: Science is progressing all the time , but is it for the best ?


Source: The main reason for the people of Britain to stop eating beef at the moment is the threat of BSB .

Target: The main reason for the people of Britain to stop eating beef at the moment is the threat of BSE .

Response: The main reason for the people of Britain to stop eating beef at the moment is the threat of {BSB=>BSE} .


Source: This is a viral disease that attacks the central nervous system which can be passed on through consumsuming the animal .

Target: This is a viral disease that attacks the central nervous system which can be passed on through consuming the animal .

Response: This is a viral disease that attacks the central nervous system which can be passed on through {consumsuming=>consuming} the animal .


Source: In cows it is commonly know as mad cow disease and by law any cow showing these signs must be destroyed and not sold for meat .

Target: In cows , it is commonly known as mad cow disease and , by law , any cow showing these signs must be destroyed and not sold for meat .

Response: In cows {=>,} it is commonly {know=>known} as mad cow disease and {=>,} by law {=>,} any cow showing these signs must be destroyed and not sold for meat .


Source: The problem is however the signs are not shown for a long time , this being a viral disease .

Target: The problem is , however , the signs are not shown for a long time , this being a viral disease .

Response: The problem is {=>,} however {=>,} the signs are not shown for a long time , this being a viral disease .


Source: It can be passed on to humans through eating parts of the animal such as the brain which is affected and these parts are usually sold and put into fast foods such as beef burgers .

Target: It can be passed on to humans through eating parts of the animal such as the brain which is affected and these parts are usually sold and put into fast foods such as beefburgers .

Response: It can be passed on to humans through eating parts of the animal such as the brain which is affected and these parts are usually sold and put into fast foods such as {beef burgers=>beefburgers} .


Source: The rest of the meat however is relatively safe and eating , e.g. a steak offers very little chance of the disease being passed on .

Target: The rest of the meat , however , is relatively safe and eating , e.g. , a steak offers very little chance of the disease being passed on .

Response: The rest of the meat {=>,} however {=>,} is relatively safe and eating , e.g. {=>,} a steak offers very little chance of the disease being passed on .


Source: However the British press has ignored this fact and blown the situation out of proportion considering only a very small number of people have died of the disease after a lifetime of eating beef .

Target: However , the British press has ignored this fact and blown the situation out of proportion considering only a very small number of people have died of the disease after a lifetime of eating beef .

Response: However {=>,} the British press has ignored this fact and blown the situation out of proportion considering only a very small number of people have died of the disease after a lifetime of eating beef .


Source: Another reason for the British people to stop eating beef is the push for vegetarianism , although this is a much smaller threat to the trade than the former point abut BSB .

Target: Another reason for the British people to stop eating beef is the push for vegetarianism , although this is a much smaller threat to the trade than the former point about BSE .

Response: Another reason for the British people to stop eating beef is the push for vegetarianism , although this is a much smaller threat to the trade than the former point {abut=>about} {BSB=>BSE} .


Source: These factors could have a considerable impact on the agricultural industry preventing the sale of British dairy livestock not only in Britain but for export aswell .

Target: These factors could have a considerable impact on the agricultural industry , preventing the sale of British dairy livestock not only in Britain but for export as well .

Response: These factors could have a considerable impact on the agricultural industry {=>,} preventing the sale of British dairy livestock not only in Britain but for export {aswell=>as well} .


Source: With global communications as good as they are now , it could send a scare across the world about British Beef - indeed France and Germany already have restricted and someplaces banned the sale or import of British beef for fear of it 's safety .

Target: With global communications as good as they are now , it could send a scare across the world about British Beef - indeed , France and Germany already have restricted and in some places banned the sale or import of British beef because of fears about it s safety .

Response: With global communications as good as they are now , it could send a scare across the world about British Beef - indeed {=>,} France and Germany already have restricted and {=>in} {someplaces=>some places} banned the sale or import of British beef {for=>because of} {fear=>fears} {of=>about} it {'s=>s} safety .


Source: Although British farmers have learned to diversits , Dairy farming and the sale of Beef products still forms the backbone of British agriculture and would completely change the face of farming in Britain .

Target: Although British farmers have learned to diversify , dairy farming and the sale of beef products still forms the backbone of British agriculture and would completely change the face of farming in Britain .

Response: Although British farmers have learned to {diversits=>diversify} , {Dairy=>dairy} farming and the sale of {Beef=>beef} products still forms the backbone of British agriculture and would completely change the face of farming in Britain .


Source: Wether they switch to sheep or vegetable crops were made , substantial changes would be needed to change the situation .

Target: Whether they switch to sheep or vegetable crops , substantial changes would be needed to change the situation .

Response: {Wether=>Whether} they switch to sheep or vegetable crops {were made=>} , substantial changes would be needed to change the situation .


Source: People throughout the United Kingdom were , doubtless shocked and perhaps upset by images in the national press and television news of cows who had contracted the disease bovine spungiform encephalapthy , or BSE .

Target: People throughout the United Kingdom were , doubtless shocked and perhaps upset by images in the national press and television news of cows who had contracted the disease bovine spungiform encephalopathy , or BSE .

Response: People throughout the United Kingdom were , doubtless shocked and perhaps upset by images in the national press and television news of cows who had contracted the disease bovine spungiform {encephalapthy=>encephalopathy} , or BSE .


Source: The so - called ' mad cow disease ' seemed to make the cows lose all sense of balance and direction , stumbling around drunkenly .

Target: The so - called ' mad cow disease ' seemed to make the cows lose all sense of balance and direction , stumbling around drunkenly .

Response: The so - called ' mad cow disease ' seemed to make the cows lose all sense of balance and direction , stumbling around drunkenly .


Source: Herds where this disease was found were put down before the symptoms progressed further .

Target: Herds where this disease was found were put down before the symptoms progressed further .

Response: Herds where this disease was found were put down before the symptoms progressed further .


Source: Those cows which had been put down were not used for food .

Target: Those cows which had been put down were not used for food .

Response: Those cows which had been put down were not used for food .


Source: The disease infects the cow , and is then present in the spinal fluid within the spine and the brain , and as the spinal fluid is usually spilt in the slaughter of cattle for meat , the risk of contamination of the meat was one the industry was not willing to take .

Target: The disease infects the cow , and is then present in the spinal fluid within the spine and the brain , and as the spinal fluid is usually spilt in the slaughter of cattle for meat , the risk of contamination of the meat was one the industry was not willing to take .

Response: The disease infects the cow , and is then present in the spinal fluid within the spine and the brain , and as the spinal fluid is usually spilt in the slaughter of cattle for meat , the risk of contamination of the meat was one the industry was not willing to take .


Source: The human disease , Crentzfeld - Jacob disease , or CJD , is believed to be a human form of BSE , although no clear link has yet been established between the two .

Target: The human disease , Crentzfeld - Jacob disease , or CJD , is believed to be a human form of BSE , although no clear link has yet been established between the two .

Response: The human disease , Crentzfeld - Jacob disease , or CJD , is believed to be a human form of BSE , although no clear link has yet been established between the two .


Source: It is unclear whether incidence of CJD is on the rise , or whether awareness of the condition is heightened , but more cases , from all ages have been diagnosed recently , and the disease is always fatal .

Target: It is unclear whether incidence of CJD is on the rise , or whether awareness of the condition is heightened , but more cases , from all ages , have been diagnosed recently , and the disease is always fatal .

Response: It is unclear whether incidence of CJD is on the rise , or whether awareness of the condition is heightened , but more cases , from all ages {=>,} have been diagnosed recently , and the disease is always fatal .


Source: The government insists , perhaps correctly , that British beef is perfectly safe to eat .

Target: The government insists , perhaps correctly , that British beef is perfectly safe to eat .

Response: The government insists , perhaps correctly , that British beef is perfectly safe to eat .


Source: However , people are genuinely scared of the presence of the disease in the U.K. , and many are abstaining from eating beef .

Target: However , people are genuinely scared of the presence of the disease in the U.K. , and many are abstaining from eating beef .

Response: However , people are genuinely scared of the presence of the disease in the U.K. , and many are abstaining from eating beef .


Source: Many schools have removed beef from their menus , substituting pork and chicken , and sales of beef have shown a decline .

Target: Many schools have removed beef from their menus , substituting pork and chicken , and sales of beef have shown a decline .

Response: Many schools have removed beef from their menus , substituting pork and chicken , and sales of beef have shown a decline .


Source: The implications for the beef industry could be rather serious , where everybody to boycott beef products .

Target: The implications for the beef industry could be rather serious , were everybody to boycott beef products .

Response: The implications for the beef industry could be rather serious , {where=>were} everybody to boycott beef products .


Source: To compensate , beef prices have dropped , in attempts to sell more meat , but the public remains sceptical .

Target: To compensate , beef prices have dropped in attempts to sell more meat , but the public remains sceptical .

Response: To compensate , beef prices have dropped {,=>} in attempts to sell more meat , but the public remains sceptical .


Source: If beef continues to fall from favour , then the beef industry 's future would be unclear .

Target: If beef continues to fall from favour , then the beef industry 's future would be unclear .

Response: If beef continues to fall from favour , then the beef industry 's future would be unclear .


Source: Beef products are present in many foodstuffs such as jellies , fruit gums , and of course stock cubes .

Target: Beef products are present in many foodstuffs such as jellies , fruit gums , and of course , stock cubes .

Response: Beef products are present in many foodstuffs such as jellies , fruit gums , and of course {=>,} stock cubes .


Source: Would all these products have to find synthetic or substitute ingredients ?

Target: Would all these products have to find synthetic or substitute ingredients ?

Response: Would all these products have to find synthetic or substitute ingredients ?


Source: Even if the entire beef industry were to grind to a halt , the numerous heads of beef cattle worldwide would no longer be needed , but , being bred as they are , for beef , they would be useless for milk products .

Target: Even if the entire beef industry were to grind to a halt , the numerous heads of beef cattle worldwide would no longer be needed , but , being bred as they are , for beef , they would be useless for milk products .

Response: Even if the entire beef industry were to grind to a halt , the numerous heads of beef cattle worldwide would no longer be needed , but , being bred as they are , for beef , they would be useless for milk products .


Source: Not all beef can be infected , though , and the situation has become a waiting game .

Target: Not all beef can be infected , though , and the situation has become a waiting game .

Response: Not all beef can be infected , though , and the situation has become a waiting game .


Source: For beef to be repreived or condemned , we are forced to turn to the scientists to establish whether or not BSE and CJD are linked , and , more importantly , whether the latter can be contracted by eating meat contaminated with the former .

Target: For beef to be reprieved or condemned , we are forced to turn to the scientists to establish whether or not BSE and CJD are linked , and , more importantly , whether the latter can be contracted by eating meat contaminated with the former .

Response: For beef to be {repreived=>reprieved} or condemned , we are forced to turn to the scientists to establish whether or not BSE and CJD are linked , and , more importantly , whether the latter can be contracted by eating meat contaminated with the former .


Source: The nation awaits the verdict on tenterhooks , and it is in the majority 's interests that there be no proven link .

Target: The nation awaits the verdict on tenterhooks , and it is in the majority 's interests that there be no proven link .

Response: The nation awaits the verdict on tenterhooks , and it is in the majority 's interests that there be no proven link .


Source: Watch this space .

Target: Watch this space .

Response: Watch this space .


Source: Personally , I believe that it is merely that man is better at diagnosing CJD now than ever before .

Target: Personally , I believe that it is merely that man is better at diagnosing CJD now than ever before .

Response: Personally , I believe that it is merely that man is better at diagnosing CJD now than ever before .


Source: Some reports say that it can take up to 20 years to develop , so we could all already have it .

Target: Some reports say that it can take up to 20 years to develop , so we could all already have it .

Response: Some reports say that it can take up to 20 years to develop , so we could all already have it .


Source: Whatever you believe , I shall continue to enjoy my roast beef and Yorkshire pudding , thankyou .

Target: Whatever you believe , I shall continue to enjoy my roast beef and Yorkshire pudding , thank you .

Response: Whatever you believe , I shall continue to enjoy my roast beef and Yorkshire pudding , {thankyou=>thank you} .


Source: There has been a big scare in Britain recently that some beef may contain BSE ( bovine spongiform encephalopathy ) which may lead to the human equivalent of CJD ( Creutzfeldts - Jacob disease ) .

Target: There has been a big scare in Britain recently that some beef may contain BSE ( bovine spongiform encephalopathy ) which may lead to the human equivalent of CJD ( Creutzfeldts - Jacob disease ) .

Response: There has been a big scare in Britain recently that some beef may contain BSE ( bovine spongiform encephalopathy ) which may lead to the human equivalent of CJD ( Creutzfeldts - Jacob disease ) .


Source: BSE is a disease in cows that effects their brain and spiral tissue ( or offal as it is sometimes known ) .

Target: BSE is a disease in cows that affects their brain and spinal tissue ( or offal as it is sometimes known ) .

Response: BSE is a disease in cows that {effects=>affects} their brain and {spiral=>spinal} tissue ( or offal as it is sometimes known ) .


Source: After a few reported cases of CJD , a similar form of the disease found in humans , it is know thought that ' mad - cow disease ' ( BSE ) is the cause .

Target: After a few reported cases of CJD , a similar form of the disease found in humans , it is now thought that ' mad - cow disease ' ( BSE ) is the cause .

Response: After a few reported cases of CJD , a similar form of the disease found in humans , it is {know=>now} thought that ' mad - cow disease ' ( BSE ) is the cause .


Source: Researchers believe that eating beef containing offal will transmit the fatal disease to humans .

Target: Researchers believe that eating beef containing offal will transmit the fatal disease to humans .

Response: Researchers believe that eating beef containing offal will transmit the fatal disease to humans .


Source: This claim has devestated the British beef industry as people are now too scared to eat beef in case they contract the illness .

Target: This claim has devastated the British beef industry as people are now too scared to eat beef in case they contract the illness .

Response: This claim has {devestated=>devastated} the British beef industry as people are now too scared to eat beef in case they contract the illness .


Source: Already the sales of beef in America have dropped by about 15 % and in Britain they have dropped about 6 % - 7 % .

Target: Already the sales of beef in America have dropped by about 15% and in Britain they have dropped about 6% - 7% .

Response: Already the sales of beef in America have dropped by about {15 %=>15%} and in Britain they have dropped about {6 %=>6%} - {7 %=>7%} .


Source: Although scientists say that to contract CJD part of the cows offal must be contained within the beef .

Target: Although scientists say that to contract CJD , part of the cow 's offal must be contained within the beef ,

Response: Although scientists say that to contract CJD {=>,} part of the {cows=>cow 's} offal must be contained within the beef {.=>,}


Source: customers are still reluctant to eat the meat incase it has come from some ' dodgy ' butcher trying to cut costs .

Target: customers are still reluctant to eat the meat in case it has come from some ' dodgy ' butcher trying to cut costs .

Response: customers are still reluctant to eat the meat {incase=>in case} it has come from some ' dodgy ' butcher trying to cut costs .


Source: As you can imagine this has had a tremendous inffluence on sales in places such as fast food restaurants where beefburgers are the main item on the menu .

Target: As you can imagine , this has had a tremendous influence on sales in places such as fast food restaurants , where beefburgers are the main item on the menu .

Response: As you can imagine {=>,} this has had a tremendous {inffluence=>influence} on sales in places such as fast food restaurants {=>,} where beefburgers are the main item on the menu .


Source: An example of one is MacDonalds where they have immediately brought out a notice stating that their beefburgers are made from 100% of the finest , pure beef and contain no offal .

Target: An example of one is MacDonalds , where they have immediately brought out a notice stating that their beefburgers are made from 100% of the finest , pure beef and contain no offal .

Response: An example of one is MacDonalds {=>,} where they have immediately brought out a notice stating that their beefburgers are made from 100% of the finest , pure beef and contain no offal .


Source: In my views no half decent restaurant with a good reputation would risk buying poor beef in case a customer caught CJD and they managed to trace it back to the restaurant .

Target: In my view , no half decent restaurant with a good reputation would risk buying poor beef in case a customer caught CJD and they managed to trace it back to the restaurant .

Response: In my {views=>view ,} no half decent restaurant with a good reputation would risk buying poor beef in case a customer caught CJD and they managed to trace it back to the restaurant .


Source: An outcome like this would mean they would be sued for several thousands of pounds and would probably have to sell up .

Target: An outcome like this would mean they would be sued for several thousands of pounds and would probably have to sell up .

Response: An outcome like this would mean they would be sued for several thousands of pounds and would probably have to sell up .


Source: As a result of a lower beef demand in places of food production there would be a lower need for beef cows .

Target: As a result of a lower beef demand in places of food production , there would be a lower need for beef cows .

Response: As a result of a lower beef demand in places of food production {=>,} there would be a lower need for beef cows .


Source: This means that there would be an excess of beef ( or a beef mountain ) that could not be sold .

Target: This means that there would be an excess of beef ( or a beef mountain ) that could not be sold .

Response: This means that there would be an excess of beef ( or a beef mountain ) that could not be sold .


Source: Because of this the prices of beef would have to decrease in order to attract more customers .

Target: Because of this , the prices of beef would have to decrease in order to attract more customers .

Response: Because of this {=>,} the prices of beef would have to decrease in order to attract more customers .


Source: So , as a result of the claim that beef containing contaminated offal may cause CJD in humans , farmers ( in particular beef farmers ) are losing out as they will have to sell their meat for a lower price due to the low demand .

Target: So , as a result of the claim that beef containing contaminated offal may cause CJD in humans , farmers ( in particular beef farmers ) are losing out , as they will have to sell their meat for a lower price due to the low demand .

Response: So , as a result of the claim that beef containing contaminated offal may cause CJD in humans , farmers ( in particular beef farmers ) are losing out {=>,} as they will have to sell their meat for a lower price due to the low demand .


Source: As a result they may have to diversify towards other areas such as crops , milking cows , etc . or even have to get a government subsidy .

Target: As a result , they may have to diversify into other areas such as crops , milking cows , etc . or even have to get a government subsidy .

Response: As a result {=>,} they may have to diversify {towards=>into} other areas such as crops , milking cows , etc . or even have to get a government subsidy .


Source: I feel that the evidence that BSE causes CJD was not strong enough before the claims were released .

Target: I feel that the evidence that BSE causes CJD was not strong enough before the claims were released .

Response: I feel that the evidence that BSE causes CJD was not strong enough before the claims were released .


Source: It has therefore caused an unnecessary , deleterious effect on the agricultural industry and beef market .

Target: It has therefore caused an unnecessary , deleterious effect on the agricultural industry and beef market .

Response: It has therefore caused an unnecessary , deleterious effect on the agricultural industry and beef market .


Source: The question of compensation for services rendered is never so simple as remitting a predetermined salary based on qualifications and a person 's dedication to the task at hand .

Target: The question of compensation for services rendered is never so simple as remitting a predetermined salary based on qualifications and a person 's dedication to the task at hand .

Response: The question of compensation for services rendered is never so simple as remitting a predetermined salary based on qualifications and a person 's dedication to the task at hand .


Source: If one has preconceived notions concerning one 's salary , one will certainly be disappointed since some employers are sure to value their skills and abilities less than others . "

Target: If one has preconceived notions concerning one 's salary , one will certainly be disappointed since some employers are sure to value their skills and abilities less than others . "

Response: If one has preconceived notions concerning one 's salary , one will certainly be disappointed since some employers are sure to value their skills and abilities less than others . "


Source: Contribution to society " is subjective and therefore impossible to compensate " equally ' .

Target: Contribution to society " is subjective and therefore impossible to compensate " equally ' .

Response: Contribution to society " is subjective and therefore impossible to compensate " equally ' .


Source: In the 1920s in American , it became very popular to disdain people who did not actually work for a living , but merely lived off the interest of their investments .

Target: In the 1920s in America , it became very popular to disdain people who did not actually work for a living , but merely lived off the interest on their investments .

Response: In the 1920s in {American=>America} , it became very popular to disdain people who did not actually work for a living , but merely lived off the interest {of=>on} their investments .


Source: The stock market was experiencing a boom , and several formerly working - class citizens became wealthy and relished the idea of retiring early .

Target: The stock market was experiencing a boom , and several formerly working - class citizens became wealthy and relished the idea of retiring early .

Response: The stock market was experiencing a boom , and several formerly working - class citizens became wealthy and relished the idea of retiring early .


Source: But several great authors of that period questioned the right of these investors to effectively live as parasites ; they received money , but they contributed nearly nothing to society .

Target: But several great authors of that period questioned the right of these investors to effectively live as parasites ; they received money , but they contributed nearly nothing to society .

Response: But several great authors of that period questioned the right of these investors to effectively live as parasites ; they received money , but they contributed nearly nothing to society .


Source: People who inherit money or live off the interest of investors often seem to spend their time in search of a new thrill , some sort of excitement that money can not buy .

Target: People who inherit money or live off the interest of investments often seem to spend their time in search of a new thrill , some sort of excitement that money can not buy .

Response: People who inherit money or live off the interest of {investors=>investments} often seem to spend their time in search of a new thrill , some sort of excitement that money can not buy .


Source: Having almost unlimited wealth changes people , both those who are born into wealth and those who earn their own money early on .

Target: Having almost unlimited wealth changes people , both those who are born into wealth and those who earn their own money early on .

Response: Having almost unlimited wealth changes people , both those who are born into wealth and those who earn their own money early on .


Source: But do they have the right to live this way ?

Target: But do they have the right to live this way ?

Response: But do they have the right to live this way ?


Source: What about people who work very hard yet they seem to be paid miserably .

Target: What about people who work very hard yet they seem to be paid miserably .

Response: What about people who work very hard yet they seem to be paid miserably .


Source: A migrant work may slave away in a field all day long and make less money in a day than a wealthy person spends on a tip at lunch .

Target: A migrant work may slave away in a field all day long and make less money in a day than a wealthy person spends on a tip at lunch .

Response: A migrant work may slave away in a field all day long and make less money in a day than a wealthy person spends on a tip at lunch .


Source: The answer this question lies in one 's feelings about Democracry .

Target: The answer to this question lies in one 's feelings about Democracy .

Response: The answer {=>to} this question lies in one 's feelings about {Democracry=>Democracy} .


Source: Some would argue that if a person is smart enough or lucky enough to earn money for an early retirement ( or for their children 's inheritance ) he or she is entitled to it .

Target: Some would argue that if a person is smart enough or lucky enough to earn money for an early retirement ( or for their children 's inheritance ) , he or she is entitled to it .

Response: Some would argue that if a person is smart enough or lucky enough to earn money for an early retirement ( or for their children 's inheritance ) {=>,} he or she is entitled to it .


Source: A rather hard view would be that if someone who works on a menial or physically taxing job does not make a fair or moderate salary then it is his or her own fault ( or bad luck ) .

Target: A rather hard view would be that if someone who works on a menial or physically taxing job does not make a fair or moderate salary , then it is his or her own fault ( or bad luck ) .

Response: A rather hard view would be that if someone who works on a menial or physically taxing job does not make a fair or moderate salary {=>,} then it is his or her own fault ( or bad luck ) .


Source: These opinions are based on a rather faulty American premise that all people are given an equal chance in life and what they make of it is their own responsibly .

Target: These opinions are based on a rather faulty American premise that all people are given an equal chance in life and what they make of it is their own responsibility .

Response: These opinions are based on a rather faulty American premise that all people are given an equal chance in life and what they make of it is their own {responsibly=>responsibility} .


Source: Apparently , most people believe that they are underpaid and that others are overpaid .

Target: Apparently , most people believe that they are underpaid and that others are overpaid .

Response: Apparently , most people believe that they are underpaid and that others are overpaid .


Source: For instance , everyone seems to think that doctors make much too money for the work they do , yet none of the doctors are lowering their fees ( they must think that it 's a fair price ) .

Target: For instance , everyone seems to think that doctors make too much money for the work they do , yet none of the doctors are lowering their fees ( they must think that it 's a fair price ) .

Response: For instance , everyone seems to think that doctors make {much too=>too much} money for the work they do , yet none of the doctors are lowering their fees ( they must think that it 's a fair price ) .


Source: So , unless we wish to impose on the personal lives of wealthy people by making them work harder , or give people who are not wealthy money that society does not believe they deserve , we can not give pay equal to contribution to society .

Target: So , unless we wish to impose on the personal lives of wealthy people by making them work harder , or give people who are not wealthy money that society does not believe they deserve , we can not give pay equal to contribution to society .

Response: So , unless we wish to impose on the personal lives of wealthy people by making them work harder , or give people who are not wealthy money that society does not believe they deserve , we can not give pay equal to contribution to society .


Source: I agree that in the past women have had problems with societies role of what they are expected to do in the work place and at home .

Target: I agree that in the past women have had problems with society 's idea of what they are expected to do in the workplace and at home .

Response: I agree that in the past women have had problems with {societies=>society 's} {role=>idea} of what they are expected to do in the {work place=>workplace} and at home .


Source: Women have been looked down on if they try to get ahead and pay has differed with the same job for a man verses a woman doing the same job .

Target: Women have been looked down on if they try to get ahead and pay has differed for a man versus a woman doing the same job .

Response: Women have been looked down on if they try to get ahead and pay has differed {with the same job=>} for a man {verses=>versus} a woman doing the same job .


Source: Gone is the age that the woman is required to stay home .

Target: Gone is the age when the woman was required to stay home .

Response: Gone is the age {that=>when} the woman {is=>was} required to stay home .


Source: Now a lot of women work and the ones that want to stay home do it because they want to .

Target: Now a lot of women work and the ones that want to stay home do it because they want to .

Response: Now a lot of women work and the ones that want to stay home do it because they want to .


Source: A lot of what has changed women 's roles is the feminists .

Target: A lot of what has changed women 's roles is the of feminists .

Response: A lot of what has changed women 's roles is the {=>of} feminists .


Source: These are groups of people that have defended women over the years .

Target: These are groups of people that have defended women over the years .

Response: These are groups of people that have defended women over the years .


Source: These people have shown the modern world what women in the work place can do .

Target: These people have shown the modern world what women in the workplace can do .

Response: These people have shown the modern world what women in the {work place=>workplace} can do .


Source: The problem is that these feminists have not looked at all women .

Target: The problem is that these feminists have not looked at all women .

Response: The problem is that these feminists have not looked at all women .


Source: Some women were happy with old traditions , some wanted a bit more in their lives , some wanted a lot more in their lives .

Target: Some women were happy with old traditions , some wanted a bit more in their lives , some wanted a lot more in their lives .

Response: Some women were happy with old traditions , some wanted a bit more in their lives , some wanted a lot more in their lives .


Source: What happens is that all women have to go along with these feminists rules .

Target: What happens is that all women have to go along with these feminists rules .

Response: What happens is that all women have to go along with these feminists rules .


Source: This makes it hard , because if they do n't , they are looked down upon by their piers .

Target: This makes it hard , because if they do n't , they are looked down upon by their peers .

Response: This makes it hard , because if they do n't , they are looked down upon by their {piers=>peers} .


Source: An example is military women wanting to serve in combat positions when at war .

Target: An example is military women wanting to serve in combat positions when at war .

Response: An example is military women wanting to serve in combat positions when at war .


Source: Feminists argued this a lot when the Iraq war was going on .

Target: Feminists argued this a lot when the Iraq war was going on .

Response: Feminists argued this a lot when the Iraq war was going on .


Source: They felt that women should have been given the chance to fight .

Target: They felt that women should have been given the chance to fight .

Response: They felt that women should have been given the chance to fight .


Source: I felt that these people were crazy .

Target: I felt that these people were crazy .

Response: I felt that these people were crazy .


Source: Women just ca n't fight in a war very well .

Target: Women just ca n't fight in a war very well .

Response: Women just ca n't fight in a war very well .


Source: The are not strong enough and if captured could be raped .

Target: They are not strong enough and if captured could be raped .

Response: {The=>They} are not strong enough and if captured could be raped .


Source: They feel that it is not fair that men are the only ones .

Target: They feel that it is not fair that men are the only ones .

Response: They feel that it is not fair that men are the only ones .


Source: Other women , though , are glad that the rule in the United States stands as it does .

Target: Other women , though , are glad that the rule in the United States stands as it does .

Response: Other women , though , are glad that the rule in the United States stands as it does .


Source: Feminists have talked about promotions in the work place as not being fair .

Target: Feminists have talked about promotions in the workplace as not being fair .

Response: Feminists have talked about promotions in the {work place=>workplace} as not being fair .


Source: Also sexual harassment is involved in a lot of suits .

Target: Also sexual harassment is involved in a lot of suits .

Response: Also sexual harassment is involved in a lot of {suits=>suits} .


Source: Many women believe that they are the victims .

Target: Many women believe that they are the victims .

Response: Many women believe that they are the victims .


Source: I agree that five to ten years ago this might have been true , but now many employers are the victims .

Target: I agree that five to ten years ago this might have been true , but now many employers are the victims .

Response: I agree that five to ten years ago this might have been true , but now many employers are the victims .


Source: They are scared of what a woman can do and sometimes women get looked at differently .

Target: They are scared of what a woman can do and sometimes women get looked at differently .

Response: They are scared of what a woman can do and sometimes women get looked at differently .


Source: There are some things that women can do better than men and there are some things that men can do better than women .

Target: There are some things that women can do better than men and there are some things that men can do better than women .

Response: There are some things that women can do better than men and there are some things that men can do better than women .


Source: God would have created us all the same if this was not true .

Target: God would have created us all the same if this was not true .

Response: God would have created us all the same if this was not true .


Source: Feminists are trying to make everyone equal and that is impossible to do because nature can not be changed .

Target: Feminists are trying to make everyone equal and that is impossible to do because nature can not be changed .

Response: Feminists are trying to make everyone equal and that is impossible to do because nature can not be changed .


Source: More and more office jobs are being filled by the woman but a lot of the physical jobs are still filled by men .

Target: More and more office jobs are being filled by women but a lot of the physical jobs are still filled by men .

Response: More and more office jobs are being filled by {the woman=>women} but a lot of the physical jobs are still filled by men .


Source: I think that the traditional roles were a good thing , but the modernization has changed everyone 's habits .

Target: I think that the traditional roles were a good thing , but the modernization has changed everyone 's habits .

Response: I think that the traditional roles were a good thing , but the modernization has changed everyone 's habits .


Source: Divorce is at fifty percent and rising , women are having more heart attacks , being more stressful , and kids are being more neglected .

Target: Divorce is at fifty percent and rising , women are having more heart attacks , being more stressed , and kids are being more neglected .

Response: Divorce is at fifty percent and rising , women are having more heart attacks , being more {stressful=>stressed} , and kids are being more neglected .


Source: Modernization is good , but I think that women should not be pressured into this if this is not for them .

Target: Modernization is good , but I think that women should not be pressured into this if this is not for them .

Response: Modernization is good , but I think that women should not be pressured into this if this is not for them .


Source: There will be a woman in the presidency , and running a lot more companies .

Target: There will be a woman in the presidency , and women running a lot more companies .

Response: There will be a woman in the presidency , and {=>women} running a lot more companies .


Source: Women should be created equal , but they can only do what nature intended they to do ...

Target: Women should be created equal , but they can only do what nature intended them to do ...

Response: Women should be created equal , but they can only do what nature intended {they=>them} to do ...


Source: Whenever a movement is began whether it be political , religious , or artistic , stereotypes are quick to form .

Target: Whenever a movement is begun , whether it be political , religious , or artistic , stereotypes are quick to form .

Response: Whenever a movement is {began=>begun ,} whether it be political , religious , or artistic , stereotypes are quick to form .


Source: People normally associated with politics , religion , or art are quickly lumped into categories regardless of individual differences .

Target: People normally associated with politics , religion , or art are quickly lumped into categories regardless of individual differences .

Response: People normally associated with politics , religion , or art are quickly lumped into categories regardless of individual differences .


Source: This tragedy is worsened by the tendency of those outside the movement to remember the radical and ignore the common or ordinary .

Target: This tragedy is worsened by the tendency of those outside the movement to remember the radical and ignore the common or ordinary .

Response: This tragedy is worsened by the tendency of those outside the movement to remember the radical and ignore the common or ordinary .


Source: This is especially true of the Women 's Liberation Movement in America .

Target: This is especially true of the Women 's Liberation Movement in America .

Response: This is especially true of the Women 's Liberation Movement in America .


Source: Since its beginnings in the late nineteenth century , Women 's Liberation has been met with adamant , and often obstinate oppostion .

Target: Since its beginnings in the late nineteenth century , Women 's Liberation has been met with adamant , and often obstinate opposition .

Response: Since its beginnings in the late nineteenth century , Women 's Liberation has been met with adamant , and often obstinate {oppostion=>opposition} .


Source: Some of the first radicals , Susan B. Anthony and George Sand ( although French ) were noticed and ridiculed , thus defeating their cause , because of their aggressive action .

Target: Some of the first radicals , Susan B. Anthony and George Sand ( although French ) were noticed and ridiculed , thus defeating their cause , because of their aggressive action .

Response: Some of the first radicals , Susan B. Anthony and George Sand ( although French ) were noticed and ridiculed , thus defeating their cause , because of their aggressive action .


Source: At the same time other feminists such as Emily Dickinson were virtually ignored during their lifetime and only acknowledged posthumously as being part of the movement .

Target: At the same time , other feminists such as Emily Dickinson were virtually ignored during their lifetime and only acknowledged posthumously as being part of the movement .

Response: At the same time {=>,} other feminists such as Emily Dickinson were virtually ignored during their lifetime and only acknowledged posthumously as being part of the movement .


Source: This ignorance of other less aggressive feminists , made it seem as though the feminist movement was headed only by wild , disgruntled zealots and was therfore , detrimental to the good of society .

Target: This ignorance of other less aggressive feminists , made it seem as though the feminist movement was headed only by wild , disgruntled zealots and was , therefore , detrimental to the good of society .

Response: This ignorance of other less aggressive feminists , made it seem as though the feminist movement was headed only by wild , disgruntled zealots and was {=>,} {therfore=>therefore} , detrimental to the good of society .


Source: Although " radicals " such as Sand and Anthony seem docile and backward in modern standards , the problem still exists .

Target: Although " radicals " such as Sand and Anthony seem docile and backward by modern standards , the problem still exists .

Response: Although " radicals " such as Sand and Anthony seem docile and backward {in=>by} modern standards , the problem still exists .


Source: From the very beginning the Women 's Movement in America has been fighting a losing battle .

Target: From the very beginning , the Women 's Movement in America has been fighting a losing battle .

Response: From the very beginning {=>,} the Women 's Movement in America has been fighting a losing battle .


Source: However , I contend that the fault does not lie with the radical members of the movement , but rather , in the perception of those observing the movement .

Target: However , I contend that the fault does not lie with the radical members of the movement , but rather , in the perception of those observing the movement .

Response: However , I contend that the fault does not lie with the radical members of the movement , but rather , in the perception of those observing the movement .


Source: When Women 's Lib really took off again in the late 1960s , it was again destined for failure .

Target: When Women 's Lib really took off again in the late 1960s , it was again destined for failure .

Response: When Women 's Lib really took off again in the late 1960s , it was again destined for failure .


Source: Immediately , the focus was on radicals like Stein , instead of the housewife who returned to college and made a career for herself .

Target: Immediately , the focus was on radicals like Stein , instead of the housewife who returned to college and made a career for herself .

Response: Immediately , the focus was on radicals like Stein , instead of the housewife who returned to college and made a career for herself .


Source: Those outside the movement could only see the differences between " normality " and Women 's Lib .

Target: Those outside the movement could only see the differences between " normality " and Women 's Lib .

Response: Those outside the movement could only see the differences between " normality " and Women 's Lib .


Source: This is still true twenty - five years later .

Target: This is still true twenty - five years later .

Response: This is still true twenty - five years later .


Source: Women supporting equal pay for women and and other " liberal " causes like affirmative action are only seen in the shadow of the bra - burning , anti - shaving leaders of the 1970s .

Target: Women supporting equal pay for women and other " liberal " causes like affirmative action are only seen in the shadow of the bra - burning , anti - shaving leaders of the 1970s .

Response: Women supporting equal pay for women {and=>} and other " liberal " causes like affirmative action are only seen in the shadow of the bra - burning , anti - shaving leaders of the 1970s .


Source: The good of their cause is undermined by the perception of the radicals .

Target: The good of their cause is undermined by the perception of the radicals .

Response: The good of their cause is undermined by the perception of the radicals .


Source: So what am I getting at ?

Target: So what am I getting at ?

Response: So what am I getting at ?


Source: Only that so - called feminists have not in and of themselves harmed the Women 's movement .

Target: Only that so - called feminists have not in and of themselves harmed the Women 's movement .

Response: Only that so - called feminists have not in and of themselves harmed the Women 's movement .


Source: However , the popular perception of them has .

Target: However , the popular perception of them has .

Response: However , the popular perception of them has .


Source: For so many years the good that feminists have promote for women has fallen by the wayside in lieu of other more interesting , i.e. radical ideas .

Target: For so many years , the good that feminists have promoted for women has fallen by the wayside in lieu of other more interesting , i.e. radical , ideas .

Response: For so many years {=>,} the good that feminists have {promote=>promoted} for women has fallen by the wayside in lieu of other more interesting , i.e. radical {=>,} ideas .


Source: Like many other aspects and movements in life , they would be more readiliy received if the public it was being aimed was not so jaded .

Target: Like many other aspects and movements in life , they would be more readily received if the public it was being aimed at was not so jaded .

Response: Like many other aspects and movements in life , they would be more {readiliy=>readily} received if the public it was being aimed {=>at} was not so jaded .


Source: Within this century there have been many technological advances which have resulted in a drastically different society than that of a hundred years ago .

Target: In this century there have been many technological advances which have resulted in a drastically different society than that of a hundred years ago .

Response: {Within=>In} this century there have been many technological advances which have resulted in a drastically different society than that of a hundred years ago .


Source: Clearly , of the inventions of this century , the one that has made the most impact on world views and lifestyle is the television .

Target: Clearly , of the inventions of this century , the one that has made the most impact on world views and lifestyle is the television .

Response: Clearly , of the inventions of this century , the one that has made the most impact on world views and lifestyle is the television .


Source: This instrument has brought other worlds right into the living room , making it possible to see life in other countries in a way that was never before possible .

Target: This instrument has brought other worlds right into the living room , making it possible to see life in other countries in a way that was never before possible .

Response: This instrument has brought other worlds right into the living room , making it possible to see life in other countries in a way that was never before possible .


Source: However , the invention of television also gave society an easy way to waste time ; one has only to turn it on to tune out reality .

Target: However , the invention of television also gave society an easy way to waste time ; one has only to turn it on to tune out reality .

Response: However , the invention of television also gave society an easy way to waste time ; one has only to turn it on to tune out reality .


Source: Television has potential to offer wonderful things to its viewers , such as educational programming for children , cultural programs about far away places , and a closer look at current events than can not be given by newspaper .

Target: Television has the potential to offer wonderful things to its viewers , such as educational programming for children , cultural programs about far away places , and a closer look at current events than can be given by newspapers .

Response: Television has {=>the} potential to offer wonderful things to its viewers , such as educational programming for children , cultural programs about far away places , and a closer look at current events than can {not=>} be given by {newspaper=>newspapers} .


Source: Television has the power to bring war into the home as well as artistic expressions of those involved in the program production , giving society the opportunity to understand their own culture more fully .

Target: Television has the power to bring war into the home as well as artistic expressions of those involved in the program production , giving society the opportunity to understand their own culture more fully .

Response: Television has the power to bring war into the home as well as artistic expressions of those involved in the program production , giving society the opportunity to understand their own culture more fully .


Source: However , this is not the way in which television has influenced society .

Target: However , this is not the way in which television has influenced society .

Response: However , this is not the way in which television has influenced society .


Source: On the contrary , television has become the escape route of the masses , a way for people to flee from the conflicts they experience in their culture , rather than confront them and try to understand them .

Target: On the contrary , television has become the escape route of the masses , a way for people to flee from the conflicts they experience in their culture , rather than confront them and try to understand them .

Response: On the contrary , television has become the escape route of the masses , a way for people to flee from the conflicts they experience in their culture , rather than confront them and try to understand them .


Source: In the minds of most Americans , television is regarded as a diversion rather than an educational tool , as free entertainment instead of easily accessible knowledge .

Target: In the minds of most Americans , television is regarded as a diversion rather than an educational tool , as free entertainment instead of easily accessible knowledge .

Response: In the minds of most Americans , television is regarded as a diversion rather than an educational tool , as free entertainment instead of easily accessible knowledge .


Source: Millions of Americans can be found to be staring at the T.V. at any one time , watching sit - coms , soap - operas , and cartoons .

Target: Millions of Americans can be found to be staring at the TV at any one time , watching sit - coms , soap - operas , and cartoons .

Response: Millions of Americans can be found to be staring at the {T.V.=>TV} at any one time , watching sit - coms , soap - operas , and cartoons .


Source: The T.V. has become the center of many households ; in many families , the only time that everyone is together is when they are watching television .

Target: The TV has become the center of many households ; in many families , the only time that everyone is together is when they are watching television .

Response: The {T.V.=>TV} has become the center of many households ; in many families , the only time that everyone is together is when they are watching television .


Source: T.V. is a major cause of lack of togetherness found in many American families , and has also resulted in an increase in laziness .

Target: TV is a major cause of lack of togetherness found in many American families , and has also resulted in an increase in laziness .

Response: {T.V.=>TV} is a major cause of lack of togetherness found in many American families , and has also resulted in an increase in laziness .


Source: The more time one spends watching TV , the less motivated he becomes ; there is no need to seek worthwhile activities when it is much easier to sit on the couch , pick up the remote control , and stare at a box .

Target: The more time one spends watching TV , the less motivated one becomes ; there is no need to seek worthwhile activities when it is much easier to sit on the couch , pick up the remote control , and stare at a box .

Response: The more time one spends watching TV , the less motivated {he=>one} becomes ; there is no need to seek worthwhile activities when it is much easier to sit on the couch , pick up the remote control , and stare at a box .


Source: Television , therefore , has changed society in ways that could hardly have been dreamed of 00 years ago .

Target: Television , therefore , has changed society in ways that could hardly have been dreamed of 00 years ago .

Response: Television , therefore , has changed society in ways that could hardly have been dreamed of 00 years ago .


Source: It has given society another creative vein , a look at worlds which could be seen in no other way , and an opportunity to better educate itself .

Target: It has given society another creative vein , a look at worlds which could be seen in no other way , and an opportunity to better educate itself .

Response: It has given society another creative vein , a look at worlds which could be seen in no other way , and an opportunity to better educate itself .


Source: However , throughout the years , television has lost much of its integrety ; the programs offered are usually cheap entertainment rather than education .

Target: However , throughout the years , television has lost much of its integrity ; the programs offered are usually cheap entertainment rather than education .

Response: However , throughout the years , television has lost much of its {integrety=>integrity} ; the programs offered are usually cheap entertainment rather than education .


Source: The entertainment aspect of television has offered society an easy escape from its problems and dificulties .

Target: The entertainment aspect of television has offered society an easy escape from its problems and difficulties .

Response: The entertainment aspect of television has offered society an easy escape from its problems and {dificulties=>difficulties} .


Source: Therefore , since the invention of television , society has becomed more informed but too lazy to think about this new information , and has distanced itself from family life .

Target: Therefore , since the invention of television , society has become more informed but too lazy to think about this new information , and has distanced itself from family life .

Response: Therefore , since the invention of television , society has {becomed=>become} more informed but too lazy to think about this new information , and has distanced itself from family life .