Source: The Kosciuszko Institute conducted a research which shows that Poland can benefit from extracting and developing the infrastructure of shale gas

Target: The Kosciuszko Institute conducted research which shows that Poland can benefit from extracting and developing the infrastructure of shale gas .

Response: The Kosciuszko Institute conducted {a=>} research which shows that Poland can benefit from extracting and developing the infrastructure of shale gas {=>.}


Source: Greece is an amazing country that a lot of people visit annually .

Target: Greece is an amazing country that a lot of people visit annually .

Response: Greece is an amazing country that a lot of people visit annually .


Source: When planning their vacation a lot of tourists are faced with the dilemma of which places to visit .

Target: When planning their vacation , a lot of tourists are faced with the dilemma of which places to visit .

Response: When planning their vacation {=>,} a lot of tourists are faced with the dilemma of which places to visit .


Source: Choosing where to go in Greece can be hard as there are so many choices .

Target: Choosing where to go in Greece can be hard , as there are so many choices .

Response: Choosing where to go in Greece can be hard {=>,} as there are so many choices .


Source: There are some travel destinations that definitely stand out , such as Santorini .

Target: There are some travel destinations that definitely stand out , such as Santorini .

Response: There are some travel destinations that definitely stand out , such as Santorini .


Source: Sandy beaches , crystal clear waters and the friendly locals are not the only things that set it apart from other islands .

Target: Sandy beaches , crystal - clear waters and the friendly locals are not the only things that set it apart from other islands .

Response: Sandy beaches , crystal {=>-} clear waters and the friendly locals are not the only things that set it apart from other islands .


Source: Santorini also has a volcano which is a spectacular sight , even though exploring it can be dangerous !

Target: Santorini also has a volcano which is a spectacular sight , even though exploring it can be dangerous !

Response: Santorini also has a volcano which is a spectacular sight , even though exploring it can be dangerous !


Source: Another place worth visiting in Greece is Athens .

Target: Another place worth visiting in Greece is Athens .

Response: Another place worth visiting in Greece is Athens .


Source: Believe it or not , Athens is one of the most beautiful cities in the world .

Target: Believe it or not , Athens is one of the most beautiful cities in the world .

Response: Believe it or not , Athens is one of the most beautiful cities in the world .


Source: The Parthenon , the Acropolis Museum and the district of Monastiraki are just a few of the things that people love about Athens .

Target: The Parthenon , the Acropolis Museum and the district of Monastiraki are just a few of the things that people love about Athens .

Response: The Parthenon , the Acropolis Museum and the district of Monastiraki are just a few of the things that people love about Athens .


Source: Last but not least , Crete is one of the most spectacular islands in Greece .

Target: Last but not least , Crete is one of the most spectacular islands in Greece .

Response: Last but not least , Crete is one of the most spectacular islands in Greece .


Source: Other than having beautiful sandy beaches and being the largest island in Greece , people can visit the water sports parks there , which are extremely fun !

Target: Besides having beautiful sandy beaches and being the largest island in Greece , people can visit the water sports parks there , which are extremely good fun !

Response: {Other than=>Besides} having beautiful sandy beaches and being the largest island in Greece , people can visit the water sports parks there , which are extremely {=>good} fun !


Source: Summing up , Greece is a beautiful country worth visiting , although choosing where to go can be hard .

Target: Summing up , Greece is a beautiful country worth visiting , although choosing where to go can be hard .

Response: Summing up , Greece is a beautiful country worth visiting , although choosing where to go can be hard .


Source: The question is whether it 's better to prepare for a long time before the exam or few days are going to be enough .

Target: The question is whether it 's better to prepare for a long time before the exam or whether a few days are going to be enough .

Response: The question is whether it 's better to prepare for a long time before the exam or {=>whether a} few days are going to be enough .


Source: In my personal experience , I believe that it 's much better to prepare for a long time before any exam you may face in your life .

Target: From my personal experience , I believe that it 's much better to prepare for a long time before any exam you may face in your life .

Response: {In=>From} my personal experience , I believe that it 's much better to prepare for a long time before any exam you may face in your life .


Source: It 's quite important to be organized to get the highest score you can get in your exam .

Target: It 's quite important to be organized to get the highest score you can get in your exam .

Response: It 's quite important to be organized to get the highest score you can get in your exam .


Source: For example , one year ago , I had my final surgery exam .

Target: For example , one year ago , I had my final surgery exam .

Response: For example , one year ago , I had my final surgery exam .


Source: I had set up a plan to study all the books we had to go through for the exam plus reviewing them twice .

Target: I had set up a plan to study all the books we had to go through for the exam plus reviewing them twice .

Response: I had set up a plan to study all the books we had to go through for the exam plus reviewing them twice .


Source: The plan required my commitment for around a 12 hours daily study for almost 3 months .

Target: The plan required my commitment for around 12 hours of daily study for almost 3 months .

Response: The plan required my commitment for around {a=>} 12 hours {=>of} daily study for almost 3 months .


Source: For the hard work and perfect discipline , I was able to get a very high score in my Surgery finals .

Target: Because of the hard work and perfect discipline , I was able to get a very high score in my Surgery finals .

Response: {For=>Because of} the hard work and perfect discipline , I was able to get a very high score in my Surgery finals .


Source: If I had n't had such an organized plan , I would never have got such a perfect score .

Target: If I had n't had such an organized plan , I would never have got such a perfect score .

Response: If I had n't had such an organized plan , I would never have got such a perfect score .


Source: Another thing to add is not being stressed before the exam night .

Target: Another thing to add is not being stressed the night before the exam .

Response: Another thing to add is not being stressed {before the exam night=>the night before the exam} .


Source: It 's quite normal to have this basic feeling of being stressed and nervous when exams are approaching .

Target: It 's quite normal to have this basic feeling of being stressed and nervous when exams are approaching .

Response: It 's quite normal to have this basic feeling of being stressed and nervous when exams are approaching .


Source: What is not normal at all is having anxiety due to the plethora of studies you haven't finished and are included in your exam .

Target: What is not normal at all is having anxiety due to the plethora of studies you haven't finished and that are included in your exam .

Response: What is not normal at all is having anxiety due to the plethora of studies you haven't finished and {=>that} are included in your exam .


Source: For example , I once had a chemistry exam in high school and I was ignorant enough to neglect my studies thinking that I still had enough time to ace my exam .

Target: For example , I once had a chemistry exam in high school and I was ignorant enough to neglect my studies , thinking that I still had enough time to ace my exam .

Response: For example , I once had a chemistry exam in high school and I was ignorant enough to neglect my studies {=>,} thinking that I still had enough time to ace my exam .


Source: Two days before my exam , I realized that I ran out of time .

Target: Two days before my exam , I realized that I had run out of time .

Response: Two days before my exam , I realized that I {ran=>had run} out of time .


Source: I had insomnia the night of my exam , it was n't enough that I was n't well prepared but also my nerves got torn out and that affected my scores tremendously .

Target: I had insomnia the night before my exam . It was n't enough that I was n't well prepared , but also my nerves got into tatters and that affected my scores tremendously .

Response: I had insomnia the night {of=>before} my exam {, it=>. It} was n't enough that I was n't well prepared {=>,} but also my nerves got {torn out=>into tatters} and that affected my scores tremendously .


Source: Ever since I do everything in its due time in order not to be overly stressed and get low scores .

Target: Ever since , I do everything in its due time in order not to be overly stressed and get low scores .

Response: Ever since {=>,} I do everything in its due time in order not to be overly stressed and get low scores .


Source: Moreover , if I aim at getting high scores , I assert that memorizing the details is important .

Target: Moreover , if I aim at getting high scores , I assert that memorizing the details is important .

Response: Moreover , if I aim at getting high scores , I assert that memorizing the details is important .


Source: If you do n't start studying before exam with an appropriate time , you will only have enough time to know the broad lines of the subject , but this will never help you soak the details and understand the concepts lying behind every single word .

Target: If you do n't start studying before the exam at an appropriate time , you will only have enough time to know the broad outlines of the subject , but this will never help you soak up the details and understand the concepts lying behind every single word .

Response: If you do n't start studying before {=>the} exam {with=>at} an appropriate time , you will only have enough time to know the broad {lines=>outlines} of the subject , but this will never help you soak {=>up} the details and understand the concepts lying behind every single word .


Source: That will help you a lot even if you do n't get the chance to revise everything before your exam .

Target: That will help you a lot even if you do n't get the chance to revise everything before your exam .

Response: That will help you a lot even if you do n't get the chance to revise everything before your exam .


Source: I can recall that time when I was quite ill before my Anatomy exam ; I could only go through the main titles of each branch without going through the details .

Target: I can recall a time when I was quite ill before my Anatomy exam ; I could only go through the main titles of each branch without going through the details .

Response: I can recall {that=>a} time when I was quite ill before my Anatomy exam ; I could only go through the main titles of each branch without going through the details .


Source: In the exam , I had that question where it required describing a concept ; amazingly , I was able to do it perfectly .

Target: In the exam , I had a question where it required describing a concept ; amazingly , I was able to do it perfectly .

Response: In the exam , I had {that=>a} question where it required describing a concept ; amazingly , I was able to do it perfectly .


Source: Since I had practiced a lot and memorized that concept before many times , I was able to remember it .

Target: Because I had practiced a lot and memorized that concept before many times , I was able to remember it .

Response: {Since=>Because} I had practiced a lot and memorized that concept before many times , I was able to remember it .


Source: It was just flooding without so much effort .

Target: It was just flooding back without so much effort .

Response: It was just flooding {=>back} without so much effort .


Source: So , for sure having enough time to memorize and practice what you learn is going to help you a lot in your exam .

Target: So , for sure , having enough time to memorize and practice what you learn is going to help you a lot in your exam .

Response: So , for sure {=>,} having enough time to memorize and practice what you learn is going to help you a lot in your exam .


Source: In sum , I believe that setting a schedule to have a long time preparation plan is much better than having only few days to get prepared . If you want to get high scores and perform greatly , you should start studying from day one if possible .

Target: In sum , I believe that setting a schedule to have a long - term preparation plan is much better than having only a few days to get prepared . If you want to get high scores and perform well , you should start studying from day one if possible .

Response: In sum , I believe that setting a schedule to have a long {time=>- term} preparation plan is much better than having only {=>a} few days to get prepared . If you want to get high scores and perform {greatly=>well} , you should start studying from day one if possible .


Source: Do n't you think you are worth getting the highest score one could aim at ?

Target: Do n't you think you are worth getting the highest score one could aim for ?

Response: Do n't you think you are worth getting the highest score one could aim {at=>for} ?


Source: In my opinion , nuclear energy has the best chance to replace fossil fuels .

Target: In my opinion , nuclear energy has the best chance to replace fossil fuels .

Response: In my opinion , nuclear energy has the best chance to replace fossil fuels .


Source: Firstly , nuclear energy is n't bad for the environment .

Target: Firstly , nuclear energy is n't bad for the environment .

Response: Firstly , nuclear energy is n't bad for the environment .


Source: The Carbon dioxide emissions is very small .

Target: The carbon dioxide emissions are very small .

Response: The {Carbon=>carbon} dioxide emissions {is=>are} very small .


Source: The biggest threat is the explosion .

Target: The biggest threat is explosion .

Response: The biggest threat is {the=>} explosion .


Source: However , the technology is evolving and nuclear power plants are getting safer .

Target: However , the technology is evolving and nuclear power plants are getting safer .

Response: However , the technology is evolving and nuclear power plants are getting safer .


Source: Secondly , nuclear power plants are already very popular and this type of energy is the closest to replace fossil fuels .

Target: Secondly , nuclear power plants are already very popular and this type of energy is the closest to replacing fossil fuels .

Response: Secondly , nuclear power plants are already very popular and this type of energy is the closest to {replace=>replacing} fossil fuels .


Source: Energy which we get from sun and wind is still are only a few percent of world energy production .

Target: Energy which we get from sun and wind is still only a few percent of world energy production .

Response: Energy which we get from sun and wind is still {are=>} only a few percent of world energy production .


Source: Thirdly , only the construction of a nuclear power plant is expensive .

Target: Thirdly , only the construction of a nuclear power plant is expensive .

Response: Thirdly , only the construction of a nuclear power plant is expensive .


Source: When we have a plant , making energy from that is very cheap .

Target: Once we have a plant , making energy from that is very cheap .

Response: {When=>Once} we have a plant , making energy from that is very cheap .


Source: The most expensive thing in nuclear plant is to hire qualified personnel .

Target: The most expensive thing in a nuclear power plant is hiring qualified personnel .

Response: The most expensive thing in {=>a} nuclear {=>power} plant is {to hire=>hiring} qualified personnel .


Source: Besides , we need something that can work all the time .

Target: In addition , we need something that can work all the time .

Response: {Besides=>In addition} , we need something that can work all the time .


Source: It ca n't stop making energy when the weather is bad , because people need a lot of electricity .

Target: It ca n't stop making energy when the weather is bad , because people need a lot of electricity .

Response: It ca n't stop making energy when the weather is bad , because people need a lot of electricity .


Source: If we run out of power entire cities could plunge the chaos , and this is unacceptable .

Target: If we run out of power , entire cities could be plunged into chaos , and that is unacceptable .

Response: If we run out of power {=>,} entire cities could {plunge=>be plunged into} {the=>} chaos , and {this=>that} is unacceptable .


Source: Lima is the only South American city which is a capital and it is located overlooking the Pacific Ocean .

Target: Lima is the only South American city which is a capital and it is located overlooking the Pacific Ocean .

Response: Lima is the only South American city which is a capital and it is located overlooking the Pacific Ocean .


Source: Lima was founded by Francisco Pizarro in 1535 , as " Ciudad de los Reyes " .

Target: Lima was founded by Francisco Pizarro in 1535 , as " Ciudad de los Reyes " .

Response: Lima was founded by Francisco Pizarro in 1535 , as " Ciudad de los Reyes " .


Source: Lima has a multicultural tradition , then in it coincide a complex mix of racial and ethnic groups like mestizos , European Peruvians which are the second largest group and the minority in Lima includes Aymara and Quechua and Afro - Peruvians .

Target: Lima has a multicultural tradition , as in it coincide a complex mix of racial and ethnic groups , like mestizos , European Peruvians , who are the second largest group , and the minority in Lima includes Aymara and Quechua and Afro - Peruvians .

Response: Lima has a multicultural tradition , {then=>as} in it coincide a complex mix of racial and ethnic groups {=>,} like mestizos , European Peruvians {=>,} {which=>who} are the second largest group {=>,} and the minority in Lima includes Aymara and Quechua and Afro - Peruvians .


Source: Lima is the best example of colonization , immigration , and indigenous influences such as the stay of Pre - Hispanic legacy with architectural monuments , called " Huacas " .

Target: Lima is the best example of colonization , immigration , and indigenous influences , such as the survival of the Pre - Hispanic legacy with architectural monuments , called " Huacas " .

Response: Lima is the best example of colonization , immigration , and indigenous influences {=>,} such as the {stay=>survival} of {=>the} Pre - Hispanic legacy with architectural monuments , called " Huacas " .


Source: The Historic Centre of Lima was declared World Heritage Site in 1988 .

Target: The Historic Centre of Lima was declared a World Heritage Site in 1988 .

Response: The Historic Centre of Lima was declared {=>a} World Heritage Site in 1988 .


Source: It is a city that keeps its history through an amazing architecture like balconies , churches like San Francisco Church which has mysterious subterranean catacombs ; el Real Felipe which is the last incredible Spanish fortress ; through their costumes as well as Carnival , this day you can enjoy this particular , interesting and colorful festival because you use water , paint or talc to wet your family and neighbor ; their typical dance called " La Marinera " ; also they keep their history through religion where you discover the religious enthusiasm which is represented by la Procesión del Señor de los Milagros ; their gastronomy is another extraordinary and wonderful example about their symbols , like Mazamorra Morada , el Pisco Sour ( wine ) , el Ceviche , los Picarones , etc .

Target: It is a city that keeps its history through : amazing architecture , like balconies , churches like San Francisco Church which has mysterious subterranean catacombs ; el Real Felipe , which is the last incredible Spanish fortress ; through their costumes as well as the Carnival . On this day you can enjoy this particular , interesting and colorful festival because you use water , paint or talc to wet your family and neighbors . Through their traditional dance , called " La Marinera " . They also keep their history through religion , where you discover the religious enthusiasm which is represented by la Procesión del Señor de los Milagros . Their gastronomy is another extraordinary and wonderful example of their symbols , like Mazamorra Morada , el Pisco Sour ( wine ) , el Ceviche , los Picarones , etc .

Response: It is a city that keeps its history through {an=>:} amazing architecture {=>,} like balconies , churches like San Francisco Church which has mysterious subterranean catacombs ; el Real Felipe {=>,} which is the last incredible Spanish fortress ; through their costumes as well as {=>the} Carnival {,=>. On} this day you can enjoy this particular , interesting and colorful festival because you use water , paint or talc to wet your family and {neighbor=>neighbors} {;=>. Through} their {typical=>traditional} dance {=>,} called " La Marinera " {; also=>.} {they=>They also} keep their history through religion {=>,} where you discover the religious enthusiasm which is represented by la Procesión del Señor de los Milagros {; their=>. Their} gastronomy is another extraordinary and wonderful example {about=>of} their symbols , like Mazamorra Morada , el Pisco Sour ( wine ) , el Ceviche , los Picarones , etc .


Source: Lima is a beautiful city of contrast , where you can find a diversity of historical , modern and business places .

Target: Lima is a beautiful city of contrast , where you can find a diversity of historical , modern and business places .

Response: Lima is a beautiful city of contrast , where you can find a diversity of historical , modern and business places .


Source: Archaeological sites , beaches , valleys , natural reserves and the exquisite cuisine give Peru 's capital an authentic personality and sightseeing in Lima is a unique and fantastic experience .

Target: Archaeological sites , beaches , valleys , nature reserves and the exquisite cuisine give Peru 's capital an authentic personality and sightseeing in Lima is a unique and fantastic experience .

Response: Archaeological sites , beaches , valleys , {natural=>nature} reserves and the exquisite cuisine give Peru 's capital an authentic personality and sightseeing in Lima is a unique and fantastic experience .


Source: Definitely , Lima is a spectacular and charming city to spend your perfect holidays .

Target: Definitely , Lima is a spectacular and charming city to spend your perfect holidays in .

Response: Definitely , Lima is a spectacular and charming city to spend your perfect holidays {=>in} .


Source: Hi Jane ,

Target: Hi Jane ,

Response: Hi Jane ,


Source: Last time you asked me for some information about opening a saving account in the UK . I 've done some research to find out the best savings account for you .

Target: Last time you asked me for some information about opening a savings account in the UK . I 've done some research to find the best savings account for you .

Response: Last time you asked me for some information about opening a {saving=>savings} account in the UK . I 've done some research to find {out=>} the best savings account for you .


Source: Below you can find a few suggestions of mine .

Target: Below you can find a few suggestions of mine .

Response: Below you can find a few suggestions of mine .


Source: The Phone Bank might give quite a good offer for you .

Target: The Phone Bank might have quite a good offer for you .

Response: The Phone Bank might {give=>have} quite a good offer for you .


Source: Firstly , the rate of interest is by 3.1% , which is quite good .

Target: Firstly , the rate of interest is by 3.1% , which is quite good .

Response: Firstly , the rate of interest is by 3.1% , which is quite good .


Source: Additionally , if you open a saving account in that bank , you will get a diary as a gift .

Target: Additionally , if you open a savings account with that bank , you will get a diary as a gift .

Response: Additionally , if you open a {saving=>savings} account {in=>with} that bank , you will get a diary as a gift .


Source: And you do not need to pay any annual charges for having a credit card .

Target: And you do not need to pay any annual charges for having a credit card .

Response: And you do not need to pay any annual charges for having a credit card .


Source: Unfortunately , the bank does n't have branches in Britain .

Target: Unfortunately , the bank does n't have branches in Britain .

Response: Unfortunately , the bank does n't have branches in Britain .


Source: And all banking operations must be done by phone .

Target: And all banking operations must be done by phone .

Response: And all banking operations must be done by phone .


Source: The second bank , Royal Savings Bank , has many branches in the UK ( over 650 ) , so you can make all bank operations on spot .

Target: The second bank , Royal Savings Bank , has many branches in the UK ( over 650 ) , so you can do all banking transactions on the spot .

Response: The second bank , Royal Savings Bank , has many branches in the UK ( over 650 ) , so you can {make=>do} all {bank=>banking} {operations=>transactions} on {=>the} spot .


Source: But there is a service charge for owning a credit card ( £ 12 per year ) .

Target: But there is a service charge for owning a credit card ( £ 12 per year ) .

Response: But there is a service charge for owning a credit card ( £ 12 per year ) .


Source: You do also get a gift as a new account holder , a full set of saucepans ( do you really need it ? ) .

Target: You do also get a gift as a new account holder ; a full set of saucepans ( do you really need that ? ) .

Response: You do also get a gift as a new account holder {,=>;} a full set of saucepans ( do you really need {it=>that} ? ) .


Source: All in all , I would recommend you to open your first serving account in the Phone Bank , since the rate of interest is higher and you do n't need to pay any annual charges .

Target: All in all , I would recommend you to open your first savings account with the Phone Bank , since the rate of interest is higher and you do n't need to pay any annual charges .

Response: All in all , I would recommend you to open your first {serving=>savings} account {in=>with} the Phone Bank , since the rate of interest is higher and you do n't need to pay any annual charges .


Source: And doing operations by phone are actually very easy and they always give you a great opportunity to improve your English .

Target: And doing transactions by phone is actually very easy and they always give you a great opportunity to improve your English .

Response: And doing {operations=>transactions} by phone {are=>is} actually very easy and they always give you a great opportunity to improve your English .


Source: The final decision is yours .

Target: The final decision is yours .

Response: The final decision is yours .


Source: Take care and see you very soon ,

Target: Take care and see you very soon ,

Response: Take care and see you very soon ,


Source: Yours Agnieszka

Target: Yours Agnieszka

Response: Yours Agnieszka


Source: To : gKL6@yahoo.com

Target: To : gKL6@yahoo.com

Response: To : gKL6@yahoo.com


Source: From : oS7jM@yahoo.com

Target: From : oS7jM@yahoo.com

Response: From : oS7jM@yahoo.com


Source: Subject : An important thing to do !

Target: Subject : An important thing to do !

Response: Subject : An important thing to do !


Source: My dear Paul ,

Target: My dear Paul ,

Response: My dear Paul ,


Source: I 'm writing to tell you how happy I am that I had the opportunity to be the chosen person to deal with the sound recording at Lady Gaga 's concert .

Target: I 'm writing to tell you how happy I am that I had the opportunity to be the chosen person to deal with the sound recording at Lady Gaga 's concert .

Response: I 'm writing to tell you how happy I am that I had the opportunity to be the chosen person to deal with the sound recording at Lady Gaga 's concert .


Source: It must have been my friend , Marius Boni , who recommended me for this service .

Target: It must have been my friend , Marius Boni , who recommended me for this service .

Response: It must have been my friend , Marius Boni , who recommended me for this service .


Source: I could n't believe my ears when the phone rang and I answered and they said they wanted me to get at the concert as soon as possible to see how good I was in sound recording .

Target: I could n't believe my ears when the phone rang and I answered and they said they wanted me to get to the concert as soon as possible to see how good I was at sound recording .

Response: I could n't believe my ears when the phone rang and I answered and they said they wanted me to get {at=>to} the concert as soon as possible to see how good I was {in=>at} sound recording .


Source: What can I say ?

Target: What can I say ?

Response: What can I say ?


Source: It 's been my dream since childhood and now I was overwhelmed when I realised they thought at me to do this for such a great , important person in the world music industry .

Target: It 's been my dream since childhood and I was overwhelmed when I realised they thought of me to do this for such a great , important person in the world music industry .

Response: It 's been my dream since childhood and {now=>} I was overwhelmed when I realised they thought {at=>of} me to do this for such a great , important person in the world music industry .


Source: I am glad that they were satisfied with my service .

Target: I am glad that they were satisfied with my services .

Response: I am glad that they were satisfied with my {service=>services} .


Source: I can hardly wait for you to see you and to share with my happiness and to tell you all the details of this unique experience ! ! !

Target: I can hardly wait to see you and to share my happiness and to tell you all the details of this unique experience ! ! !

Response: I can hardly wait {for you=>} to see you and to share {with=>} my happiness and to tell you all the details of this unique experience ! ! !


Source: Yours ,

Target: Yours ,

Response: Yours ,


Response: Ionut


Source: I have been skiing for most of life and I am very enthusiastic about it .

Target: I have been skiing for most of my life and I am very enthusiastic about it .

Response: I have been skiing for most of {=>my} life and I am very enthusiastic about it .


Source: I started when I was six with equipment that was very basic compared to what skiers use these days .

Target: I started when I was six with equipment that was very basic compared to what skiers use these days .

Response: I started when I was six with equipment that was very basic compared to what skiers use these days .


Source: Every day as soon as I woke up I looked forward to my morning on the slopes .

Target: Every day , as soon as I woke up , I looked forward to my morning on the slopes .

Response: Every day {=>,} as soon as I woke up {=>,} I looked forward to my morning on the slopes .


Source: My parents would take me to a gentle slope with my brother and leave us there for a couple of hours to try skiing on our own .

Target: My parents would take me to a gentle slope with my brother and leave us there for a couple of hours to try skiing on our own .

Response: My parents would take me to a gentle slope with my brother and leave us there for a couple of hours to try skiing on our own .


Source: The temperature was often several degrees below zero , and you would freeze if you did n't keep moving up and down the slope .

Target: The temperature was often several degrees below zero , and you would freeze if you did n't keep moving up and down the slope .

Response: The temperature was often several degrees below zero , and you would freeze if you did n't keep moving up and down the slope .


Source: My brother showed a natural talent for the sport , but I felt quite uncomfortable and scared .

Target: My brother showed a natural talent for the sport , but I felt quite uncomfortable and scared .

Response: My brother showed a natural talent for the sport , but I felt quite uncomfortable and scared .


Source: Little by little I improved my skiing skills and by the time I was a teenager I really started enjoying myself .

Target: Little by little , I improved my skiing skills and by the time I was a teenager I really started enjoying myself .

Response: Little by little {=>,} I improved my skiing skills and by the time I was a teenager I really started enjoying myself .


Source: Nowadays I have a lot of fun skiing because it gives me the opportunity to be in a wonderful natural environment .

Target: Nowadays , I have a lot of fun skiing because it gives me the opportunity to be in a wonderful natural environment .

Response: Nowadays {=>,} I have a lot of fun skiing because it gives me the opportunity to be in a wonderful natural environment .


Source: Skiing is a great sport , but I would recommend starting as a child , taking a few lessons with an experienced instructor and using the right equipment .

Target: Skiing is a great sport , but I would recommend starting as a child , taking a few lessons with an experienced instructor and using the right equipment .

Response: Skiing is a great sport , but I would recommend starting as a child , taking a few lessons with an experienced instructor and using the right equipment .


Source: After six years of rigorous high school subjects and past experiences , I have no doubt that the preferences I 've selected above are not accidental .

Target: After six years of rigorous high school study and past experiences , I have no doubt that the choices I 've selected above are not accidental .

Response: After six years of rigorous high school {subjects=>study} and past experiences , I have no doubt that the {preferences=>choices} I 've selected above are not accidental .


Source: I am extremely interested in gaining experience in the business field .

Target: I am extremely interested in gaining experience in the business field .

Response: I am extremely interested in gaining experience in the business field .


Source: The subjects I 've pursued at my high school level such as financial accounting , commerce and economics has given me the opportunity to utilize and put into perspective the knowledge of understanding business concepts and has given me a solid academic foundation .

Target: The subjects I 've pursued at high school level , such as financial accounting , commerce and economics , have given me the opportunity to utilize and put into perspective the knowledge of understanding business concepts and has given me a solid academic foundation .

Response: The subjects I 've pursued at {my=>} high school level {=>,} such as financial accounting , commerce and economics {=>,} {has=>have} given me the opportunity to utilize and put into perspective the knowledge of understanding business concepts and has given me a solid academic foundation .


Source: I 've also participated in various group works and class projects while in high school .

Target: I 've also participated in various group projects and class projects while in high school .

Response: I 've also participated in various group {works=>projects} and class projects while in high school .


Source: I am planning to gain admission into the university of my choice in order to obtain a bachelor 's degree .

Target: I am planning to gain admission at the university of my choice in order to obtain a bachelor 's degree .

Response: I am planning to gain admission {into=>at} the university of my choice in order to obtain a bachelor 's degree .


Source: I would love to associate with extremely talented students , lecturers and even professors in order to receive a well rounded introduction to the numerous aspects of any of the preferences I 've selected above .

Target: I would love to work with extremely talented students , lecturers and even professors in order to receive a well rounded introduction to the numerous aspects of any of the choices I 've selected above .

Response: I would love to {associate=>work} with extremely talented students , lecturers and even professors in order to receive a well rounded introduction to the numerous aspects of any of the {preferences=>choices} I 've selected above .


Source: Academically , I 've always been a very determined and studious individual and I would be more than willing to devote myself to the hardwork necessary in order to achieve a bachelor 's degree .

Target: Academically , I 've always been a very determined and studious individual and I would be more than willing to devote myself to the hard work necessary in order to achieve a bachelor 's degree .

Response: Academically , I 've always been a very determined and studious individual and I would be more than willing to devote myself to the {hardwork=>hard work} necessary in order to achieve a bachelor 's degree .


Source: I also have an indubitable passion for extra - curricular activities .

Target: I also have an indubitable passion for extra - curricular activities .

Response: I also have an indubitable passion for extra - curricular activities .


Source: I was the president of the Business Students Association ( BSA ) , Head Boy ( senior prefect boy ) and Captain of the soccer school team .

Target: I was the president of the Business Students Association ( BSA ) , Head Boy ( senior prefect ) and Captain of the school soccer team .

Response: I was the president of the Business Students Association ( BSA ) , Head Boy ( senior prefect {boy=>} ) and Captain of the {soccer school=>school soccer} team .


Source: I am a very good soccer player who plays a midfield role .

Target: I am a very good soccer player who plays midfield .

Response: I am a very good soccer player who plays {a=>} midfield {role=>} .


Source: Undertaking a scholarship and admission into one of the universities I have selected above will provide me with the opprtunity to apply the knowledge gained at high school into a business setting , as well as develop the communication , organisation and numeracy skills I have acquired at high school .

Target: Undertaking a scholarship and admission to one of the universities I have selected above will provide me with the opportunity to apply the knowledge gained at high school in a business setting , as well as develop the communication , organisation and numeracy skills I acquired at high school .

Response: Undertaking a scholarship and admission {into=>to} one of the universities I have selected above will provide me with the {opprtunity=>opportunity} to apply the knowledge gained at high school {into=>in} a business setting , as well as develop the communication , organisation and numeracy skills I {have=>} acquired at high school .


Source: After I heard about the Czech Government Scholarship , I decided to make some research on Czech Republic before taking any step in applying .

Target: After I heard about the Czech Government Scholarship , I decided to do some research on Czech Republic before taking any step towards applying .

Response: After I heard about the Czech Government Scholarship , I decided to {make=>do} some research on Czech Republic before taking any step {in=>towards} applying .


Source: I found out that Czech Republic is a country with rich possibilities for students planning to study abroad and is currently undergoing rapid social changes and transformation , making it a fascinating place for students of any discipline to study in .

Target: I found out that Czech Republic is a country with rich possibilities for students planning to study abroad and is currently undergoing rapid social changes and transformation , making it a fascinating place for students of any discipline to study in .

Response: I found out that Czech Republic is a country with rich possibilities for students planning to study abroad and is currently undergoing rapid social changes and transformation , making it a fascinating place for students of any discipline to study in .


Source: Czech universities provides high standards of education , internationally recognized degrees , modern campuses with outstanding facilities , safe and affordable education warm and friendly environment and cultural diversity .

Target: Czech universities provide high standards of education , internationally recognized degrees , modern campuses with outstanding facilities , a safe and affordable education , a warm and friendly environment and cultural diversity .

Response: Czech universities {provides=>provide} high standards of education , internationally recognized degrees , modern campuses with outstanding facilities , {=>a} safe and affordable education {=>,} {=>a} warm and friendly environment and cultural diversity .


Source: I believe that I will have the opportunity to experience both modernity and tradition in one if the safest and most stable countries in Europe .

Target: I believe that I will have the opportunity to experience both modernity and tradition in one if the safest and most stable countries in Europe .

Response: I believe that I will have the opportunity to experience both modernity and tradition in one if the safest and most stable countries in Europe .


Source: Above all , the high quality if education will make me ready for the future .

Target: Above all , the high quality of education will make me ready for the future .

Response: Above all , the high quality {if=>of} education will make me ready for the future .


Source: Another major reason why I am being motivated to study in Czech Republic is lack of finance .

Target: Another major reason why I am motivated to study in Czech Republic is lack of finance .

Response: Another major reason why I am {being=>} motivated to study in Czech Republic is lack of finance .


Source: Also , education in Nigeria is now a joke as teachers and lecturers go on strike frequently , and learning in some parts of Nigeria are not safe !

Target: Also , education in Nigeria is now a joke as teachers and lecturers go on strike frequently , and studying in some parts of Nigeria is not safe !

Response: Also , education in Nigeria is now a joke as teachers and lecturers go on strike frequently , and {learning=>studying} in some parts of Nigeria {are=>is} not safe !


Source: Right now , I am greatly looking forward to the challenges of a university life academically , socially and mentally , and I believe that my ambition to learn new business concepts coupled with my passion for extra - curricular activities and community service , would make me a competent addition to the any of my proposed university and the Czech Republic Scholarship team .

Target: Right now , I am greatly looking forward to the challenges of university life academically , socially and mentally , and I believe that my ambition to learn new business concepts coupled with my passion for extra - curricular activities and community service , would make me a competent addition to any of my chosen universities and the Czech Republic Scholarship team .

Response: Right now , I am greatly looking forward to the challenges of {a=>} university life academically , socially and mentally , and I believe that my ambition to learn new business concepts coupled with my passion for extra - curricular activities and community service , would make me a {competent=>competent} addition to {the=>} any of my {proposed=>chosen} {university=>universities} and the Czech Republic Scholarship team .


Source: I believe that I can make a positive contribution to my proposed university , as I will be actively involved in student events and activities that will help to promote a healthy learning environment for all .

Target: I believe that I can make a positive contribution to my chosen university , as I will be actively involved in student events and activities that will help to promote a healthy learning environment for all .

Response: I believe that I can make a positive contribution to my {proposed=>chosen} university , as I will be actively involved in student events and activities that will help to promote a healthy learning environment for all .


Source: In conclusion , I can assure you that I will be a capable and dedicated student who has the committment and dedication to work hard in order to be a graduate , whilst at the same time , contributing greatly to my proposed university in more ways than one .

Target: In conclusion , I can assure you that I will be a capable and dedicated student who has the commitment and dedication to work hard in order to be a graduate , whilst at the same time , contributing greatly to my chosen university in more ways than one .

Response: In conclusion , I can assure you that I will be a capable and dedicated student who has the {committment=>commitment} and dedication to work hard in order to be a graduate , whilst at the same time , contributing greatly to my {proposed=>chosen} university in more ways than one .


Source: A dog is man 's best friend

Target: A dog is man 's best friend

Response: A dog is man 's best friend


Source: It is a well - known fact that people need to have communication with other people .

Target: It is a well - known fact that people need to have communication with other people .

Response: It is a well - known fact that people need to have communication with other people .


Source: However , they are not always satisfied or taken into the society .

Target: However , they are not always satisfied or taken into the society .

Response: However , they are not always satisfied or taken into the society .


Source: They seek solace in someone who they would feel more comfortable with .

Target: They seek solace in someone who they feel more comfortable with .

Response: They seek solace in someone who they {would=>} feel more comfortable with .


Source: The best example is an animal with great qualities , a dog .

Target: The best example is an animal with great qualities , a dog .

Response: The best example is an animal with great qualities , a dog .


Source: Dog 's personality is one of their best qualities .

Target: A dog 's personality is one of its best qualities .

Response: {Dog=>A dog} 's personality is one of {their=>its} best qualities .


Source: Always friendly , bubbly and in a good mood , they are great to spend time with .

Target: Always friendly , bubbly and in a good mood , they are great to spend time with .

Response: Always friendly , bubbly and in a good mood , they are great to spend time with .


Source: They feel when their master is sad and react by cuddling up to them .

Target: They sense when their master is sad and react by cuddling up to them .

Response: They {feel=>sense} when their master is sad and react by cuddling up to them .


Source: It makes people forget all about their problems and concentrate on the things that really matter .

Target: It makes people forget all about their problems and concentrate on the things that really matter .

Response: It makes people forget all about their problems and concentrate on the things that really matter .


Source: Dog 's optimism is by far the best way to bring back a smile on people 's face .

Target: A dog 's optimism is by far the best way to bring back a smile to people 's faces .

Response: {Dog=>A dog} 's optimism is by far the best way to bring back a smile {on=>to} people 's {face=>faces} .


Source: And that is what they are there for , to make people happy .

Target: And that is what they are there for , to make people happy .

Response: And that is what they are there for , to make people happy .


Source: These hairy four - legged animals are also very protective .

Target: These hairy four - legged animals are also very protective .

Response: These hairy four - legged animals are also very protective .


Source: One of their jobs is to watch out their human family .

Target: One of their jobs is to watch over their human family .

Response: One of their jobs is to watch {out=>over} their human family .


Source: So if they sense that their owner might be in danger , they immediately react by barking at a person or a thing thing that might have caused it .

Target: So if they sense that their owner might be in danger , they immediately react by barking at a person or a thing that might have caused it .

Response: So if they sense that their owner might be in danger , they immediately react by barking at a person or a thing {thing=>} that might have caused it .


Source: The stronger the bond between the dog and their owner , the stronger the dog 's reaction will be .

Target: The stronger the bond between the dog and their owner , the stronger the dog 's reaction will be .

Response: The stronger the bond between the dog and their owner , the stronger the dog 's reaction will be .


Source: It is believed that dogs require a lot of attention , which is not true .

Target: It is believed that dogs require a lot of attention , which is not true .

Response: It is believed that dogs require a lot of attention , which is not true .


Source: Dogs are really not that hard to take care of , bathing and grooming do n't need to be done every day , they just need to be fed and walked regularly .

Target: Dogs are really not that hard to take care of . Bathing and grooming do n't need to be done every day , they just need to be fed and walked regularly .

Response: Dogs are really not that hard to take care of {, bathing=>. Bathing} and grooming do n't need to be done every day , they just need to be fed and walked regularly .


Source: These pets need a few walks a day , which could also be good for their owners who are spending all day at work or in school and need some physical activity .

Target: These pets need a few walks a day , which could also be good for their owners who spend all day at work or in school and need some physical activity .

Response: These pets need a few walks a day , which could also be good for their owners who {are spending=>spend} all day at work or in school and need some physical activity .


Source: So having a dog could also remind them to live a healthier life .

Target: So , having a dog could also remind them to live a healthier life .

Response: So {=>,} having a dog could also remind them to live a healthier life .


Source: In conclusion , dogs make really great pets .

Target: In conclusion , dogs make really great pets .

Response: In conclusion , dogs make really great pets .


Source: Not only do they protect you from anything that could do you any harm , but their amazing personality and the love they show to you makes you feel so warm and wonderful on the inside .

Target: Not only do they protect you from anything that could do you any harm , but their amazing personality and the love they show to you makes you feel so warm and wonderful on the inside .

Response: Not only do they protect you from anything that could do you any harm , but their amazing personality and the love they show to you makes you feel so warm and wonderful on the inside .


Source: So if someone really loves their pet , they would find time to pay lot of attention to them , because , they truly are man 's best friend .

Target: So , if someone really loves their pet , they will find time to pay a lot of attention to them , because , they truly are man 's best friend .

Response: So {=>,} if someone really loves their pet , they {would=>will} find time to pay {=>a} lot of attention to them , because , they truly are man 's best friend .


Source: Hi John !

Target: Hi John !

Response: Hi John !


Source: It 's great to hear from you again ! I will give you some details about my experience at " Zoe Kak adventure " , one of the most well - known centres in our country .

Target: It 's great to hear from you again ! I will give you some details about my experience at " Zoe Kak adventure " , one of the most well - known centres in our country .

Response: It 's great to hear from you again ! I will give you some details about my experience at " Zoe Kak adventure " , one of the most well - known centres in our country .


Source: First of all , we started with a tiring assault course , which consisted of climbing up pretty sharp walls and crawling through different obstacles .

Target: First of all , we started with a tiring assault course , which consisted of climbing up pretty sharp walls and crawling through different obstacles .

Response: First of all , we started with a tiring assault course , which consisted of climbing up pretty sharp walls and crawling through different obstacles .


Source: Although it made me feel exhausted , I found it extremely entertaining .

Target: Although it made me feel exhausted , I found it extremely entertaining .

Response: Although it made me feel exhausted , I found it extremely entertaining .


Source: Luckily , I was fit enough to finish the exercise without having any problem , however , you may need to train a little bit more before embarking on this activity .

Target: Luckily , I was fit enough to finish the exercise without having any problems , however , you may need to practise a little bit more before embarking on this activity .

Response: Luckily , I was fit enough to finish the exercise without having any {problem=>problems} , however , you may need to {train=>practise} a little bit more before embarking on this activity .


Source: Rock climbing was another of the challenges I had to face .

Target: Rock climbing was another of the challenges I had to face .

Response: Rock climbing was another of the challenges I had to face .


Source: Despite the fact that it turned out to be harder than I had expected , I managed to reach the summit .

Target: Despite the fact that it turned out to be harder than I had expected , I managed to reach the summit .

Response: Despite the fact that it turned out to be harder than I had expected , I managed to reach the summit .


Source: You ca n't imagine how rewarding is the feeling of being on the top of the mountain , after such a big effort!.

Target: You ca n't imagine how rewarding the feeling of being on the top of the mountain is after such a big effort!.

Response: You ca n't imagine how rewarding {is the feeling of being on the top of the mountain=>the feeling of being on the top of the mountain is} {,=>} after such a big effort!.


Source: Furthermore , you will be able to practise canoeing . You are likely to feel scared at first , but your confidence will be built up quickly , due to the constant support of your teachers .

Target: Furthermore , you will be able to do canoeing . You are likely to feel scared at first , but your confidence will be built up quickly , due to the constant support of your teachers .

Response: Furthermore , you will be able to {practise=>do} canoeing . You are likely to feel scared at first , but your confidence will be built up quickly , due to the constant support of your teachers .


Source: One of the last activities offered by the centre was diving .

Target: One of the last activities offered by the centre was diving .

Response: One of the last activities offered by the centre was diving .


Source: I felt so overwhelmed that I had to give it up , so if you do n't want to miss out this great opportunity too , trust your trainers , since they are highly qualified .

Target: I felt so overwhelmed that I had to give it up , so if you do n't want to miss out on this great opportunity too , trust your trainers , since they are highly qualified .

Response: I felt so overwhelmed that I had to give it up , so if you do n't want to miss out {=>on} this great opportunity too , trust your trainers , since they are highly qualified .


Source: To sum up , I strongly believe that you will have a great time there and I guarantee you that all the teachers meet with the safety rules , so you will enjoy a lot without getting yourself into trouble .

Target: To sum up , I firmly believe that you will have a great time there and I guarantee you that all the teachers meet with the safety rules , so you will enjoy yourself a lot without getting yourself into trouble .

Response: To sum up , I {strongly=>firmly} believe that you will have a great time there and I guarantee you that all the teachers meet with the safety rules , so you will enjoy {=>yourself} a lot without getting yourself into trouble .


Source: For all these reasons , this centre 's really worth a visit

Target: For all these reasons , this centre 's really worth a visit .

Response: For all these reasons , this centre 's really worth a visit {=>.}


Source: Write soon and let me know if you need to know anything else .

Target: Write soon and let me know if you need to know anything else .

Response: Write soon and let me know if you need to know anything else .


Source: With best wishes :

Target: With best wishes

Response: With best wishes {:=>}


Source: Sara .

Target: Sara .

Response: Sara .


Source: I felt so excited when I looked at the envelope on the desk of my room .

Target: I felt so excited when I looked at the envelope on the desk in my room .

Response: I felt so excited when I looked at the envelope on the desk {of=>in} my room .


Source: I checked the address as quickly as I could and I realized that I was right , it was from Paris ...

Target: I checked the address as quickly as I could and I realized that I was right , it was from Paris ...

Response: I checked the address as quickly as I could and I realized that I was right , it was from Paris ...


Source: My mother had written me after months !

Target: My mother had written to me after months !

Response: My mother had written {=>to} me after months !


Source: Since she left to Paris last year I had been living in the school residence , which was n't cheerful at all , what made me feel really depressed .

Target: Since she left for Paris last year , I had been living in the school residence , which was n't cheerful at all , which made me feel really depressed .

Response: Since she left {to=>for} Paris last year {=>,} I had been living in the school residence , which was n't {cheerful=>cheerful} at all , {what=>which} made me feel really depressed .


Source: But I had her letter at last , so I started to read it immediately .

Target: But I had her letter at last , so I started to read it immediately .

Response: But I had her letter at last , so I started to read it immediately .


Source: She told me that when I was on holidays I had to buy myself a plane ticket to Paris and go to visit her for at least two months because she was missing me a lot .

Target: She told me that when I was on holidays I had to buy myself a plane ticket to Paris and go to visit her for at least two months because she was missing me a lot .

Response: She told me that when I was on holidays I had to buy myself a plane ticket to Paris and go to visit her for at least two months because she was missing me a lot .


Source: It felt so good when I saw that my mother had n't forgotten me .

Target: It felt so good when I saw that my mother had n't forgotten me .

Response: It felt so good when I saw that my mother had n't forgotten me .


Source: I had never travelled to Europe yet so I was really nervous too , but it would be a great chance to improve my French and spend a lot of time with my beloved mother in the city of love .

Target: I had never travelled to Europe before , so I was really nervous , but it would be a great chance to improve my French and spend a lot of time with my beloved mother in the city of love .

Response: I had never travelled to Europe {yet=>before} {=>,} so I was really nervous {too=>} , but it would be a great chance to improve my French and spend a lot of time with my beloved mother in the city of love .


Source: Dear Sir / Madam ,

Target: Dear Sir / Madam ,

Response: Dear Sir / Madam ,


Source: Application for the Post of Chief Chinese Editor

Target: Application for the Post of Chief Chinese Editor

Response: Application for the Post of Chief Chinese Editor


Source: I am writing to apply for the post of Chief Chinese Editor listed at jobsDB on 26th January , 2015 .

Target: I am writing to apply for the post of Chief Chinese Editor listed at jobsDB on 26th January , 2015 .

Response: I am writing to apply for the post of Chief Chinese Editor listed at jobsDB on 26th January , 2015 .


Source: I am a graduate of the Chinese University of Hong Kong .

Target: I am a graduate of the Chinese University of Hong Kong .

Response: I am a graduate of the Chinese University of Hong Kong .


Source: I am proficient in Chinese languages ( Cantonese and Mandarin ) and have over ten years ' experience in publication industry .

Target: I am proficient in Chinese languages ( Cantonese and Mandarin ) and have over ten years ' experience in the publishing industry .

Response: I am proficient in Chinese languages ( Cantonese and Mandarin ) and have over ten years ' experience in {=>the} {publication=>publishing} industry .


Source: Currently I am working in a press as an editor .

Target: Currently I am working for a as an editor .

Response: Currently I am working {in=>for} a {press=>} {=>} as an editor .


Source: I am an aggressive , creative but careful person who can work independently .

Target: I am an aggressive , creative but careful person who can work independently .

Response: I am an {aggressive=>aggressive} , creative but careful person who can work independently .


Source: On the other hand , I am also a good team player that can work well with colleagues , presentable with a strong sense of responsibility .

Target: On the other hand , I am also a good team player that can work well with colleagues , presentable and with a strong sense of responsibility .

Response: On the other hand , I am also a good team player that can work well with colleagues , presentable {=>and} with a strong sense of responsibility .


Source: Attached please find my resume and portfolio for your reference .

Target: Attached please find my resume and portfolio for your reference .

Response: Attached please find my resume and portfolio for your reference .


Source: Please feel free to contact me by phone at 12345678 if you would like to discuss my qualifications further .

Target: Please feel free to contact me by phone at 12345678 if you would like to discuss my qualifications further .

Response: Please feel free to contact me by phone at 12345678 if you would like to discuss my qualifications further .


Source: I look forward to hearing from you soon .

Target: I look forward to hearing from you soon .

Response: I look forward to hearing from you soon .


Source: Yours faithfully ,

Target: Yours faithfully ,

Response: Yours faithfully ,


Source: Chen Ki Tsou

Target: Chen Ki Tsou

Response: Chen Ki Tsou


Source: Education is a milestone in our life and having a good education is the main door to the labor market .

Target: Education is a milestone in our life and having a good education is the main door to the labor market .

Response: Education is a milestone in our life and having a good education is the main door to the labor market .


Source: Aware parents disappointed with educational systems and institutionalized education try to spot in homeschooling a solution for their children 's education .

Target: Aware parents disappointed with educational systems and institutionalized education try to see in homeschooling a solution to their children 's education .

Response: {Aware=>Aware} parents disappointed with educational systems and institutionalized education try to {spot=>see} in homeschooling a solution {for=>to} their children 's education .


Source: Although homeschooling may seem , according to some of these parents ' opinions , " a paved road " , it

Target: Although homeschooling may seem , according to some of these parents ' opinions , " a paved road " , it

Response: Although homeschooling may seem , according to some of these parents ' opinions , " a paved road " , it


Source: is a path not suitable for everybody 's cars and that compels us to seek other routes .

Target: is a path not suitable for everybody 's cars , and that compels us to seek other routes .

Response: is a path not suitable for everybody 's cars {=>,} and that compels us to seek other routes .


Source: Homeschooling should not be considered a wold - wide phenomenon since only a few countries : the UK ,

Target: Homeschooling should not be considered a world - wide phenomenon , since only a few countries : the UK ,

Response: Homeschooling should not be considered a {wold=>world} - wide phenomenon {=>,} since only a few countries : the UK ,


Source: Canada , and especially the USA , can boast .

Target: Canada , and especially the USA , can boast of having it .

Response: Canada , and especially the USA , can boast {=>of having it} .


Source: There are lots of countries that do not

Target: There are lots of countries that have not

Response: There are lots of countries that {do=>have} not


Source: accept homeschooling as a legal alternative so far and others where it is just an isolated happening .

Target: accepted homeschooling as a legal alternative so far and others where it is just an isolated occurrence .

Response: {accept=>accepted} homeschooling as a legal alternative so far and others where it is just an isolated {happening=>occurrence} .


Source: The situation in Spain can be assessed as " legal vacuum " in light of our constitutional right to free

Target: The situation in Spain can be assessed as a " legal vacuum " in light of our constitutional right to free

Response: The situation in Spain can be assessed as {=>a} " legal vacuum " in light of our constitutional right to free


Source: education meanwhile attendance is compulsory in elementary and secondary education .

Target: education , while attendance is compulsory in elementary and secondary education .

Response: education {=>,} {meanwhile=>while} attendance is compulsory in elementary and secondary education .


Source: Educational and emotional freedom support this alternative way of learning .

Target: Educational and emotional freedom support this alternative way of learning .

Response: Educational and emotional freedom support this alternative way of learning .


Source: Homeschooling may also free up time for complementary activities such as music , sports , and even the family life .

Target: Homeschooling may also free up time for complementary activities such as music , sports , and even family life .

Response: Homeschooling may also free up time for complementary activities such as music , sports , and even {the=>} family life .


Source: Homeschooled students ' success has been backed up by the results on standardize test and the recognition of prestigious universities .

Target: Homeschooled students ' success has been backed up by the results on standardized tests and the recognition of prestigious universities .

Response: Homeschooled students ' success has been backed up by the results on {standardize=>standardized} {test=>tests} and the recognition of prestigious universities .


Source: Now though , before homeschooling your kids you also have to consider the same amount of roadblocks :

Target: Now though , before homeschooling your kids you also have to consider the same amount of roadblocks :

Response: Now though , before homeschooling your kids you also have to consider the same amount of roadblocks :


Source: the lack of facilities or expertise , not enough socialization for your children , ending up being a frustrated parent without enough money to make ends meet .

Target: the lack of facilities or expertise , not enough socialization for your children , ending up being a frustrated parent without enough money to make ends meet .

Response: the lack of facilities or expertise , not enough socialization for your children , ending up being a frustrated parent without enough money to make ends meet .


Source: As far as I am concerned I want to think about homeschooling as a wake up call for educational

Target: As far as I am concerned , I want to think about homeschooling as a wake - up call for educational

Response: As far as I am concerned {=>,} I want to think about homeschooling as a wake {=>-} up call for educational


Source: systems .

Target: systems .

Response: systems .


Source: However , homeschooling will never succeed if parents do not have the right skills .

Target: However , homeschooling will never succeed if parents do not have the right skills .

Response: However , homeschooling will never succeed if parents do not have the right skills .


Source: As traditional education seems to be exhausted , new technologies open up as " the

Target: As traditional education seems to be exhausted , new technologies open up as " the

Response: As traditional education seems to be exhausted , new technologies open up as " the


Source: solution " and blended learning is the future .

Target: solution " and blended learning is the future .

Response: solution " and blended learning is the future .


Source: Geographic and natural environment around the building space , as well as the neighbourhood , would be surely taken into consideration while designing houses of the future .

Target: The geography and natural environment around the building space , as well as the neighbourhood , will surely be taken into consideration while designing houses of the future .

Response: {Geographic=>The geography} and natural environment around the building space , as well as the neighbourhood , {would=>will} {be surely=>surely be} taken into consideration while designing houses of the future .


Source: Obviously , the future also indicates a home with more technology and very energy efficient systems .

Target: Obviously , the future also indicates a home with more technology and very energy - efficient systems .

Response: Obviously , the future also indicates a home with more technology and very energy {=>-} efficient systems .


Source: In areas exposed to cataclysms , such as earthquakes , hurricanes and floods , people should have their houses built of resistant materials .

Target: In areas exposed to natural disasters , such as earthquakes , hurricanes and floods , people should have their houses built of resistant materials .

Response: In areas exposed to {cataclysms=>natural disasters} , such as earthquakes , hurricanes and floods , people should have their houses built of resistant materials .


Source: Steel or concrete structures would give the desired effect in this particular matter .

Target: Steel or concrete structures would give the desired effect in this particular regard .

Response: Steel or concrete structures would give the desired effect in this particular {matter=>regard} .


Source: Environmentally friendly buildings will be definitely on the drawing board .

Target: Environmentally - friendly buildings will definitely be on the drawing board .

Response: Environmentally {=>-} friendly buildings will {be definitely=>definitely be} on the drawing board .


Source: Built with recyclable or recycled materials , the exterior surface of these houses should be ready to be lit by daylight on sunny days , not to mention skylights and solar panels on the roofs , which is more and more popular even these days .

Target: Built from recyclable or recycled materials , the exterior surface of these houses should be ready to be lit by daylight on sunny days , not to mention skylights and solar panels on the roofs , which are more and more popular , even these days .

Response: Built {with=>from} recyclable or recycled materials , the exterior surface of these houses should be ready to be lit by daylight on sunny days , not to mention skylights and solar panels on the roofs , which {is=>are} more and more popular {=>,} even these days .


Source: Moreover , solar energy collectors ought to be controlled by computers in order to maximise comfort and energy efficiency .

Target: Moreover , solar energy collectors ought to be controlled by computers in order to maximise comfort and energy efficiency .

Response: Moreover , solar energy collectors ought to be controlled by computers in order to maximise comfort and energy efficiency .


Source: Urban housing issues ( such as population growth ) will be solved by exploiting some new areas .

Target: Urban housing issues ( such as population growth ) will be solved by exploiting some new areas .

Response: Urban housing issues ( such as population growth ) will be solved by exploiting some new areas .


Source: Maybe it 's building castles in the air , but houseboats and apartments situated above city streets seem to be a perfect solution to use up space that would otherwise be wasted .

Target: Maybe it 's building castles in the air , but houseboats and apartments situated above city streets seem to be a perfect solution to use up space that would otherwise be wasted .

Response: Maybe it 's building castles in the air , but houseboats and apartments situated above city streets seem to be a perfect solution to use up space that would otherwise be wasted .


Source: Although people would keep mulling over how to modernize their fancy houses ( and bragging about it to neighbours ) , they will still need a warm , cosy bed and a nice cup of tea .

Target: Although people will keep mulling over how to modernize their fancy houses ( and bragging about it to neighbours ) , they will still need a warm , cosy bed and a nice cup of tea .

Response: Although people {would=>will} keep mulling over how to modernize their fancy houses ( and bragging about it to neighbours ) , they will still need a warm , cosy bed and a nice cup of tea .


Source: I suppose that will never change , even if they live in a concrete ivory tower .

Target: I suppose that will never change , even if they live in a concrete ivory tower .

Response: I suppose that will never change , even if they live in a concrete ivory tower .


Source: Catch it or lose it

Target: Catch it or lose it

Response: Catch it or lose it


Source: The alpha and the omega of a good team is trust .

Target: The alpha and the omega of a good team is trust .

Response: The alpha and the omega of a good team is trust .


Source: That 's the most important point if you want to play handball .

Target: That 's the most important point if you want to play handball .

Response: That 's the most important point if you want to play handball .


Source: You must be able to throw the ball blindly to your teammate and he has to catch it .

Target: You must be able to throw the ball blindly to your teammate and he has to catch it .

Response: You must be able to throw the ball blindly to your teammate and he has to catch it .


Source: Otherwise the opponent will have the chance to get a point .

Target: Otherwise the opponent will have the chance to get a point .

Response: Otherwise the opponent will have the chance to get a point .


Source: Are you a real team player ?

Target: Are you a real team player ?

Response: Are you a real team player ?


Source: Handball is one of the most dynamic sports in this world .

Target: Handball is one of the most dynamic sports in this world .

Response: Handball is one of the most dynamic sports in this world .


Source: Over eighty points can be made all together in sixty minutes , if not even more .

Target: Over eighty points can be made all together in sixty minutes , if not even more .

Response: Over eighty points can be made all together in sixty minutes , if not even more .


Source: This shows how rapidly the game can change .

Target: This shows how rapidly the game can change .

Response: This shows how rapidly the game can change .


Source: One lost ball can make your team the loser of the game .

Target: One lost ball can make your team the loser of the game .

Response: One lost ball can make your team the loser of the game .


Source: I started to play handball when I was 5 years old .

Target: I started to play handball when I was 5 years old .

Response: I started to play handball when I was 5 years old .


Source: At first , it was only a hobby but with the years it became passion .

Target: At first , it was only a hobby but with the years it became a passion .

Response: At first , it was only a hobby but with the years it became {=>a} passion .


Source: What I love most about this sport is , the speed and the unconditional team spirit .

Target: What I love most about this sport is the speed and the unconditional team spirit .

Response: What I love most about this sport is {,=>} the speed and the unconditional team spirit .


Source: If you want to practise handball , just be sure that you have a good team and do n't forget the fun !

Target: If you want to play handball , just be sure that you have a good team and do n't forget the fun !

Response: If you want to {practise=>play} handball , just be sure that you have a good team and do n't forget the fun !


Source: Triathlon : A famous sport throughout the world

Target: Triathlon : A famous sport throughout the world

Response: Triathlon : A famous sport throughout the world


Source: It seems as if , recently , society has become more conscious of the importance of practising a sport .

Target: It seems as if , recently , society has become more conscious of the importance of doing a sport .

Response: It seems as if , recently , society has become more conscious of the importance of {practising=>doing} a sport .


Source: Clearly , this is a consequence of the extra hours we have to work per day and as a way of relaxing , we find doing a sport as an effective way of taking the stress of our bodies .

Target: Clearly , this is a consequence of the extra hours we have to work per day and , as a way of relaxing , we find doing a sport an effective way of taking the stress out of our bodies .

Response: Clearly , this is a consequence of the extra hours we have to work per day and {=>,} as a way of relaxing , we find doing a sport {as=>} an effective way of taking the stress {=>out} of our bodies .


Source: In fact , we can see many people jogging and cycling these days whether it is in the morning before going to work or even after .

Target: In fact , we can see many people jogging and cycling these days , whether it be in the morning before going to work or even after .

Response: In fact , we can see many people jogging and cycling these days {=>,} whether it {is=>be} in the morning before going to work or even after .


Source: Despite these two being the most popular sports amongst atlets , many more are just as interesting and profitable .

Target: Despite these two being the most popular sports amongst athletes , many more are just as interesting and beneficial .

Response: Despite these two being the most popular sports amongst {atlets=>athletes} , many more are just as interesting and {profitable=>beneficial} .


Source: One of them is triathlon , which is my favourite sport .

Target: One of them is triathlon , which is my favourite sport .

Response: One of them is triathlon , which is my favourite sport .


Source: It consists of a mixture between three different sports , swimming , cycling and jogging and as a result it can be extremely demanding .

Target: It consists of a mixture of three different sports , swimming , cycling and jogging and , as a result , it can be extremely demanding .

Response: It consists of a mixture {between=>of} three different sports , swimming , cycling and jogging and {=>,} as a result {=>,} it can be extremely demanding .


Source: What I enjoy most about it is being able to practise it anywhere , which means I can do it near home instead of having to go to a sports center .

Target: What I enjoy most about it is being able to do it anywhere , which means I can do it near my home instead of having to go to a sports center .

Response: What I enjoy most about it is being able to {practise=>do} it anywhere , which means I can do it near {=>my} home instead of having to go to a sports center .


Source: It also means I can choose the location that most pleases me and therefore fully enjoy the time spent doing it .

Target: It also means I can choose the location that most pleases me and therefore fully enjoy the time spent doing it .

Response: It also means I can choose the location that most pleases me and therefore fully enjoy the time spent doing it .


Source: Triathlon has become more popular over the past few years and more and more people are eager to try it .

Target: Triathlon has become more popular over the past few years and more and more people are eager to try it .

Response: Triathlon has become more popular over the past few years and more and more people are eager to try it .


Source: Therefore , it is crucial to understand that improving in such a demanding sport requires time and is is important to establish some goals in order to keep motivated .

Target: Therefore , it is crucial to understand that improving in such a demanding sport requires time and it is important to establish some goals in order to keep motivated .

Response: Therefore , it is crucial to understand that improving in such a demanding sport requires time and {is=>it} is important to establish some goals in order to keep motivated .


Source: You must not push yourself too far .

Target: You must not push yourself too hard .

Response: You must not push yourself too {far=>hard} .


Source: A gap year between school and college sounds a great idea for those that have not decided what they want to study .

Target: A gap year between school and college sounds a great idea for those that have not decided what they want to study .

Response: A gap year between school and college sounds a great idea for those that have not decided what they want to study .


Source: However there are some questions whether it should be everyone or not .

Target: However , there are some questions as to whether it should be for everyone or not .

Response: However {=>,} there are some questions {=>as to} whether it should be {=>for} everyone or not .


Source: First , I would like to put the arguments in favour of the year off .

Target: First , I would like to put the arguments in favour of the year off .

Response: First , I would like to put the arguments in favour of the year off .


Source: Not everybody has the financial possibilities to pay for college , so taking a gap year to earn money to help with the bills it is time well spend .

Target: Not everybody has the financial possibilities to pay for college , so taking a gap year to earn money to help with the bills is time well spent .

Response: Not everybody has the financial possibilities to pay for college , so taking a gap year to earn money to help with the bills {it=>} is time well {spend=>spent} .


Source: But that it is not the only reason to take a year off .

Target: But that is not the only reason to take a year off .

Response: But that {it=>} is not the only reason to take a year off .


Source: Most of the people think that this year is to travel to other countries and spend all your time at parties , but this is not true , you can travel to develop your culture and do volunteer work , so you can become a better person .

Target: Most people think that this year is for travelling to other countries and spending all your time at parties , but this is not true , you can travel to develop your culture and do volunteer work , so you can become a better person .

Response: Most {of the=>} people think that this year is {to=>for} {travel=>travelling} to other countries and {spend=>spending} all your time at parties , but this is not true , you can travel to develop your culture and do volunteer work , so you can become a better person .


Source: On the other hand , many teens who take a year off end up to spend it in the wrong way .

Target: On the other hand , many teens who take a year off end up spending it in the wrong way .

Response: On the other hand , many teens who take a year off end up {to spend=>spending} it in the wrong way .


Source: For example , things might gone not as they had expected for multiple reasons such as not having enoff money or not getting a job .

Target: For example , things might not go as they had expected for multiple reasons , such as not having enough money or not getting a job .

Response: For example , things might {gone not=>not go} as they had expected for multiple reasons {=>,} such as not having {enoff=>enough} money or not getting a job .


Source: In conclusion , people should take a year off , but only when they have all planed and know for shore that they have the possibility to do something useful with their time .

Target: In conclusion , people should take a year off , but only when they have everything planned and know for sure that they have the possibility to do something useful with their time .

Response: In conclusion , people should take a year off , but only when they have {all=>everything} {planed=>planned} and know for {shore=>sure} that they have the possibility to do something useful with their time .


Source: Hello , my name is Lidia , I am 27 years old and I am going to take just a minute of your time to explain why hiring me will benefit your organization .

Target: Hello , my name is Lidia . I am 27 years old and I am going to take just a minute of your time to explain why hiring me will benefit your organization .

Response: Hello , my name is Lidia {,=>.} I am 27 years old and I am going to take just a minute of your time to explain why hiring me will benefit your organization .


Source: I am currently studying in my fourth and final year of a degree in tourism at the University of the World Heritage city of Caceres , which is located in Spain .

Target: I am currently studying in my fourth and final year of a degree in tourism at the University of the World Heritage city of Caceres , which is located in Spain .

Response: I am currently studying in my fourth and final year of a degree in tourism at the University of the World Heritage city of Caceres , which is located in Spain .


Source: In my third year , I did my internship as a receptionist in a four stars hotel during 2 months and a half in Badajoz .

Target: In my third year , I did my internship as a receptionist in a four - star hotel for 2 and a half months in Badajoz .

Response: In my third year , I did my internship as a receptionist in a four {stars=>- star} hotel {during=>for} 2 {months and a half=>and a half months} in Badajoz .


Source: I already have skills in listening closely to customers and avid understanding of front desk operations .

Target: I already have skills in listening closely to customers and in - depth understanding of front desk operations .

Response: I already have skills in listening closely to customers and {avid=>in - depth} understanding of front desk operations .


Source: My previous experience working abroad in a hotel would be useful to your company .

Target: My previous experience working abroad in a hotel would be useful to your company .

Response: My previous experience working abroad in a hotel would be useful to your company .


Source: I am flexible , a good team player , and capable to work under pressure .

Target: I am flexible , a good team player , and able to work under pressure .

Response: I am flexible , a good team player , and {capable=>able} to work under pressure .


Source: My mother tongue is Spanish , but I am able to speak English fluently and I have a pre - intermediate level of Italian as well .

Target: My mother tongue is Spanish , but I am able to speak English fluently and I have pre - intermediate level Italian as well .

Response: My mother tongue is Spanish , but I am able to speak English fluently and I have {a=>} pre - intermediate level {of=>} Italian as well .


Source: Talking about my interests , traveling is one of the most activities I enjoy , in order to discover new places and cultures .

Target: Talking about my interests , traveling is one of the activities I enjoy most , in order to discover new places and cultures .

Response: Talking about my interests , traveling is one of the {most activities I enjoy=>activities I enjoy most} , in order to discover new places and cultures .


Source: I also love meeting new people from another countries and exchange languages .

Target: I also love meeting new people from other countries and exchanging languages .

Response: I also love meeting new people from {another=>other} countries and {exchange=>exchanging} languages .


Source: You may contact me through f8HJ2suL@alumnos.abcd.es or just call me on 659 12 34 56 .

Target: You may contact me at f8HJ2suL@alumnos.abcd.es or just call me on 659 12 34 56 .

Response: You may contact me {through=>at} f8HJ2suL@alumnos.abcd.es or just call me on 659 12 34 56 .


Source: Thanks so much for taking the time to listen !

Target: Thanks so much for taking the time to listen !

Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to listen !


Source: " Farmer Giles of Ham " is a fantasy story written by J.R.R. Tolkien .

Target: " Farmer Giles of Ham " is a fantasy story written by J.R.R. Tolkien .

Response: " Farmer Giles of Ham " is a fantasy story written by J.R.R. Tolkien .


Source: Set in England in the first centuries of the Middle Ages , the story is about the adventures of Giles , a farmer of the village of Ham who becomes a hero against his wishes by defeating a giant .

Target: Set in England in the first centuries of the Middle Ages , the story is about the adventures of Giles , a farmer of the village of Ham , who becomes a hero against his wishes by defeating a giant .

Response: Set in England in the first centuries of the Middle Ages , the story is about the adventures of Giles , a farmer of the village of Ham {=>,} who becomes a hero against his wishes by defeating a giant .


Source: When the dragon Chrysophylax comes and devastates everything , he is sent twice against him , not only managing to defeat him thanks to the magic sword Tailbiter , but also obtaining a huge treasure .

Target: When the dragon Chrysophylax comes and devastates everything , he is sent twice against him , not only managing to defeat him thanks to the magic sword Tailbiter , but also obtaining a huge treasure .

Response: When the dragon Chrysophylax comes and devastates everything , he is sent twice against him , not only managing to defeat him thanks to the magic sword Tailbiter , but also obtaining a huge treasure .


Source: At the end of the story , Giles becomes an independent king .

Target: At the end of the story , Giles becomes an independent king .

Response: At the end of the story , Giles becomes an independent king .


Source: I liked a lot this story firstly because I love fantasy stories , especially Tolkien 's ones : they bring me to another universe , making me forget every day 's life .

Target: I liked this story a lot , firstly , because I love fantasy stories , especially Tolkien 's ones : they take me to another universe , making me forget everyday life .

Response: I liked {a lot this story=>this story a lot ,} firstly {=>,} because I love fantasy stories , especially Tolkien 's ones : they {bring=>take} me to another universe , making me forget {every day=>everyday} {'s=>} life .


Source: Secondly it is very original because it is a sort of parody of traditional legends : the hero is an ordinary person , knights reveal fearful and incompetent and clashes are won with words instead of weapons .

Target: Secondly , it is very original , because it is a sort of parody of traditional legends : the hero is an ordinary person , knights are shown to be fearful and incompetent and clashes are won with words instead of weapons .

Response: Secondly {=>,} it is very original {=>,} because it is a sort of parody of traditional legends : the hero is an ordinary person , knights {reveal=>are shown to be} fearful and incompetent and clashes are won with words instead of weapons .


Source: I would recommend this story to everybody because it is funny and adventurous and Tolkien 's ironic style , based also on the comical use of Latin words , makes it extremely pleasant to read .

Target: I would recommend this story to everybody , because it is funny and adventurous and Tolkien 's ironic style , based also on the comical use of Latin words , makes it extremely pleasant to read .

Response: I would recommend this story to everybody {=>,} because it is funny and adventurous and Tolkien 's ironic style , based also on the comical use of Latin words , makes it extremely pleasant to read .


Source: Dear Sir or Madam ,

Target: Dear Sir or Madam ,

Response: Dear Sir or Madam ,


Source: I am writing this letter to apply for the position in USA Summer Camp that I saw advertised in our local newspaper .

Target: I am writing this letter to apply for the position in the USA Summer Camps that I saw advertised in our local newspaper .

Response: I am writing this letter to apply for the position in {=>the} USA Summer {Camp=>Camps} that I saw advertised in our local newspaper .


Source: I am interested in working in the Educational Institutions , or in the Social Care .

Target: I am interested in working in educational institutions or in Social Care .

Response: I am interested in working in {the=>} {Educational=>educational} {Institutions=>institutions} {,=>} or in {the=>} Social Care .


Source: I have recently graduated from the Social Science University in Psychology and received high degrees in both my Teaching and Supervising Courses .

Target: I have recently graduated in Psychology from the Social Science University and received high grades in both my Teaching and Supervising courses .

Response: I have recently graduated {from the Social Science University in Psychology=>in Psychology from the Social Science University} and received high {degrees=>grades} in both my Teaching and Supervising {Courses=>courses} .


Source: In addition we had to have one year of volunteering in Youth Supervising environment in preparation for our finished assingment , so I am able to be a member of your well skilled staff .

Target: In addition , we had to have one year of volunteering in a Youth Supervision environment in preparation for our final assignment , so I am able to be a member of your highly - skilled staff .

Response: In addition {=>,} we had to have one year of volunteering in {=>a} Youth {Supervising=>Supervision} environment in preparation for our {finished=>final} {assingment=>assignment} , so I am able to be a member of your {well=>highly -} skilled staff .


Source: Since I was 13 years old , I have helped my parents with upbringing my four junger siblings .

Target: Since I was 13 years old , I have helped my parents with bringing up my four younger siblings .

Response: Since I was 13 years old , I have helped my parents with {upbringing=>bringing up} my four {junger=>younger} siblings .


Source: I have been involved in volunteering in a variety of youth organizations as supervisor and tutor .

Target: I have been involved in volunteering in a variety of youth organizations as supervisor and tutor .

Response: I have been involved in volunteering in a variety of youth organizations as supervisor and tutor .


Source: In the past two years I have worked in the Scout Organization , helping area manager to organize activities for children .

Target: In the past two years , I have worked in the Scout Organization , helping the area manager to organize activities for children .

Response: In the past two years {=>,} I have worked in the Scout Organization , helping {=>the} area manager to organize activities for children .


Source: This experience has given me the ability to cope with the needs of all types of children 's personalities .

Target: This experience has given me the ability to cope with the needs of all types of children 's personalities .

Response: This experience has given me the ability to cope with the needs of all types of children 's personalities .


Source: I have a friendly , happy personality and find that I enjoy the chalenges of working in youth environments .

Target: I have a friendly , happy personality and find that I enjoy the challenges of working in youth environments .

Response: I have a friendly , happy personality and find that I enjoy the {chalenges=>challenges} of working in youth environments .


Source: In addition , my studies and experience I have taught me to be accurate and efficient in organizing my work , so I would be a valuable addition to your team .

Target: In addition , my studies and experience have taught me to be precise and efficient in organizing my work , so I would be a valuable addition to your team .

Response: In addition , my studies and experience {I=>} have taught me to be {accurate=>precise} and efficient in organizing my work , so I would be a valuable addition to your team .


Source: I look forward to hearing from you .

Target: I look forward to hearing from you .

Response: I look forward to hearing from you .


Source: Yours faithfully

Target: Yours faithfully

Response: Yours faithfully


Source: Lubomir Sawicki

Target: Lubomir Sawicki

Response: Lubomir Sawicki


Source: Does traveling broaden your mind ?

Target: Does traveling broaden your mind ?

Response: Does traveling broaden your mind ?


Source: In my opinion , travelling does broaden your mind .

Target: In my opinion , travelling does broaden your mind .

Response: In my opinion , travelling does broaden your mind .


Source: When visit different places , you get to see different environments , cultures , people and even different languages .

Target: When you visit different places , you get to see different environments , cultures , people and even different languages .

Response: When {=>you} visit different places , you get to see different environments , cultures , people and even different languages .


Source: Travelling helps you to develop as a person in many ways .

Target: Travelling helps you to develop as a person in many ways .

Response: Travelling helps you to develop as a person in many ways .