Source: On the other hand , we are studying architecture maybe we should choose a special restaurant , I like a charming and comfortable restaurant with a lot of windows , with a white chair , table and wall , more or less a relaxing environment but the atmosphere is very important for dinner and I think that we must vote this , because we will have a good night or not depending the type of atmosphere we choose .

Target: On the other hand , we are studying architecture . Maybe we should choose a special restaurant , like a charming and comfortable restaurant with a lot of windows , with a white chair , table and wall , a more or less relaxing environment . But the atmosphere is very important for dinner , and I think that we should vote on this , because we will have a good night or not depending on the type of atmosphere we choose .

Response: On the other hand , we are studying architecture {maybe=>. Maybe} we should choose a special restaurant , {I=>} like a charming and comfortable restaurant with a lot of windows , with a white chair , table and wall , {more or less a=>a more or less} relaxing environment {but=>. But} the atmosphere is very important for dinner {=>,} and I think that we {must=>should} vote {=>on} this , because we will have a good night or not depending {=>on} the type of atmosphere we choose .


Source: In conclusion , I think that this type of food and atmosphere is very for us , because normally we had spoken about book , work and studies , while with this type of environment we can speak about us , our family , our hobbies and all people get to know new something about other mates .

Target: In conclusion , I think that this type of food and atmosphere is very good for us , because normally we speak about books , work and studies , whereas with this type of environment , we can speak about ourselves , our family , our hobbies , and everyone will get to know something new about other classmates .

Response: In conclusion , I think that this type of food and atmosphere is very {=>good} for us , because normally we {had spoken=>speak} about {book=>books} , work and studies , {while=>whereas} with this type of environment {=>,} we can speak about {us=>ourselves} , our family , our hobbies {=>,} and {all people=>everyone} {=>will} get to know {new something=>something new} about other {mates=>classmates} .


Source: I would like to go to Foster 's Hollywood .

Target: I would like to go to Foster 's Hollywood .

Response: I would like to go to Foster 's Hollywood .


Source: I love the food here and I think my classmates too .

Target: I love the food there and I think my classmates will too .

Response: I love the food {here=>there} and I think my classmates {=>will} too .


Source: You can it the best burgers you have ever eaten .

Target: You can eat the best burgers you have ever eaten .

Response: You can {it=>eat} the best burgers you have ever eaten .


Source: They are incredibily delicious .

Target: They are incredibly delicious .

Response: They are {incredibily=>incredibly} delicious .


Source: I do not know how do they make and cook them .

Target: I do not know how they make and cook them .

Response: I do not know how {do=>} they make and cook them .


Source: These burgers are my favourite food because they are amazing .

Target: These burgers are my favourite food because they are amazing .

Response: These burgers are my favourite food because they are amazing .


Source: I can not say how they are because you have to taste them .

Target: I can not say what they are like because you have to taste them .

Response: I can not say {how=>what} they are {=>like} because you have to taste them .


Source: It is a flavour similar to stay in the heaven or in the paradise .

Target: It is a flavour similar to being in heaven or in paradise .

Response: It is a flavour similar to {stay=>being} in {the=>} heaven or in {the=>} paradise .


Source: I recommend you to go to this restaurant and you definitely leave with a very good flavour in your mouth and a huge smile in your face .

Target: I recommend you to go to this restaurant and you will definitely leave with a very good flavour in your mouth and a huge smile on your face .

Response: I recommend you to go to this restaurant and you {=>will} definitely leave with a very good flavour in your mouth and a huge smile {in=>on} your face .


Source: You will want to come another time .

Target: You will want to go back another time .

Response: You will want to {come=>go back} another time .


Source: However , if you do not like burgers you can eat whatever you want of American food and you will get the same fantastic opinion as a person who has eaten another meal .

Target: However , if you do not like burgers , you can eat whatever American food you want and you will get the same fantastic experience as a person who has eaten another meal .

Response: However , if you do not like burgers {=>,} you can eat whatever {you want of American food=>American food you want} and you will get the same fantastic {opinion=>experience} as a person who has eaten another meal .


Source: Public transport plays an important role in our modern day lives .

Target: Public transport plays an important role in our modern - day lives .

Response: Public transport plays an important role in our modern {=>-} day lives .


Source: More than a billion people use buses , taxi 's and trains etc as tourists , for work , meeting relatives , going to school etc .

Target: More than a billion people use buses , taxis and trains etc , as tourists , for work , for meeting relatives , going to school etc .

Response: More than a billion people use buses , {taxi 's=>taxis} and trains etc {=>,} as tourists , for work , {=>for} meeting relatives , going to school etc .


Source: Many even use cars .

Target: Many even use cars .

Response: Many even use cars .


Source: Though travelling by car is more convenient but it is expensive .

Target: Though travelling by car is more convenient , it is expensive .

Response: Though travelling by car is more convenient {=>,} {but=>} it is expensive .


Source: That is why because the cost of petrol , diesel and gas is quite high in most of the countries of the world .

Target: That is because the cost of petrol , diesel and gas is quite high in most of the countries of the world .

Response: That is {why=>} because the cost of petrol , diesel and gas is quite high in most of the countries of the world .


Source: While travelling by public transport can save a lot of money in following ways :

Target: While travelling by public transport can save a lot of money in the following ways :

Response: While travelling by public transport can save a lot of money in {=>the} following ways :


Source: 1 . People can save the money they spend on petrol .

Target: 1 . People can save the money they spend on petrol .

Response: 1 . People can save the money they spend on petrol .


Source: 2 .

Target: 2 .

Response: 2 .


Source: As they have specific routes across the country , town , city and villages , it helps people to spend less in shops or restaurants on highways or even inside the city etc .

Target: As they have specific routes across the country , town , city and villages , it helps people to spend less in shops or restaurants on highways or even inside the city etc .

Response: As they have specific routes across the country , town , city and villages , it helps people to spend less in shops or restaurants on highways or even inside the city etc .


Source: I disagree with the statement stated above because in future we are likely to have only two classes in society , the rich and the poor .

Target: I disagree with the statement above because , in the future , we are likely to have only two classes in society : the rich and the poor .

Response: I disagree with the statement {stated=>} above because {=>,} in {=>the} future {=>,} we are likely to have only two classes in society {,=>:} the rich and the poor .


Source: Middle class is disappearing and becoming scarce day by day .

Target: The middle class is disappearing and becoming scarce day by day .

Response: {Middle=>The middle} class is disappearing and becoming scarce day by day .


Source: It is because of high taxes on goods .

Target: It is because of high taxes on goods .

Response: It is because of high taxes on goods .


Source: So , I believe either we will have public transport or people are going to be as they were in the stone age .

Target: So , I believe we will either have public transport or people will be as they were in the stone age .

Response: So , I believe {either we will=>we will either} have public transport or people {are going to=>will} be as they were in the stone age .


Source: Public transport is even good for our environment rather than cars .

Target: Public transport is even good for our environment compared to cars .

Response: Public transport is even good for our environment {rather=>compared} {than=>to} cars .


Source: Nowadays people have different views about reading books and watching movies .

Target: Nowadays , people have different views about reading books and watching movies .

Response: Nowadays {=>,} people have different views about reading books and watching movies .


Source: Some of them think that books are more interesting than them film versions .

Target: Some of them think that books are more interesting than their film versions .

Response: Some of them think that books are more interesting than {them=>their} film versions .


Source: I agree with this point of view .

Target: I agree with this point of view .

Response: I agree with this point of view .


Source: I tend to think that there is nothing better than reading a book .

Target: I tend to think that there is nothing better than reading a book .

Response: I tend to think that there is nothing better than reading a book .


Source: Firstly , reading helps to become a well Educated Person and give a chance to develop knowledge .

Target: Firstly , reading helps you to become a well educated person and gives you a chance to develop your knowledge .

Response: Firstly , reading helps {=>you} to become a well {Educated=>educated} {Person=>person} and {give=>gives} {=>you} a chance to develop {=>your} knowledge .


Source: That 's why while you are reading you are getting a piece of information .

Target: That 's because while you are reading you are getting a piece of information .

Response: That 's {why=>because} while you are reading you are getting a piece of information .


Source: Furthermore , books develops imagination of reader .

Target: Furthermore , books develop the imagination of the reader .

Response: Furthermore , books {develops=>develop} {=>the} imagination of {=>the} reader .


Source: When you are reading a picture of what is happening appears in your mind .

Target: When you are reading , a picture of what is happening appears in your mind .

Response: When you are reading {=>,} a picture of what is happening appears in your mind .


Source: You can imagine how heroes look Like , you can imagine different views , where the action takes place .

Target: You can imagine what heroes look like , you can imagine different scenes where the action takes place .

Response: You can imagine {how=>what} heroes look {Like=>like} , you can imagine different {views=>scenes} {,=>} where the action takes place .


Source: And finally , I think it 's very important that you can easily take your book with you and start reading anytime you want .

Target: And finally , I think it 's very important that you can easily take your book with you and start reading anytime you want .

Response: And finally , I think it 's very important that you can easily take your book with you and start reading anytime you want .


Source: On the other hand , if you like being in company the best way for you is movies .

Target: On the other hand , if you like being in company , the best thing for you is movies .

Response: On the other hand , if you like being in company {=>,} the best {way=>thing} for you is movies .


Source: Because you can watch it with your friends .

Target: Because you can watch them with your friends .

Response: Because you can watch {it=>them} with your friends .


Source: Also many people choose movies because they like soundtracks and special effects .

Target: Also , many people choose movies because they like soundtracks and special effects .

Response: Also {=>,} many people choose movies because they like soundtracks and special effects .


Source: It 's so exciting .

Target: It 's so exciting .

Response: It 's so exciting .


Source: but all these factors are not important for me .

Target: But all these factors are not important to me .

Response: {but=>But} all these factors are not important {for=>to} me .


Source: I suppose that books are better than them film version .

Target: I think that books are better than their film versions .

Response: I {suppose=>think} that books are better than {them=>their} film {version=>versions} .


Source: To sum up , I 'd like to say reading is really great thing .

Target: To sum up , I 'd like to say that reading is a really great thing .

Response: To sum up , I 'd like to say {=>that} reading is {=>a} really great thing .


Source: A girl was walking home one day .

Target: A girl was walking home one day .

Response: A girl was walking home one day .


Source: She was with her mum ..

Target: She was with her mum . .

Response: She was with her mum {..=>. .}


Source: She was just a young beautiful girl !

Target: She was just a young beautiful girl !

Response: She was just a young beautiful girl !


Source: So , they were going home when the girl noticed a cute doll in a shop .

Target: So , they were going home when the girl noticed a cute doll in a shop .

Response: So , they were going home when the girl noticed a cute doll in a shop .


Source: She had blond hair and she was wearing a blue dress , white gloves and black shoes .

Target: She had blond hair and she was wearing a blue dress , white gloves and black shoes .

Response: She had blond hair and she was wearing a blue dress , white gloves and black shoes .


Source: Just like her ... ''Mum I love this doll!Could you bye it for me ? '' she said .

Target: Just like her ... ''Mum I love this doll ! Could you buy it for me ? '' she said .

Response: Just like her ... ''Mum I love this {doll!Could=>doll ! Could} you {bye=>buy} it for me ? '' she said .


Source: Her mum could n't deny to her , so she bought it .

Target: Her mum could n't refuse her , so she bought it .

Response: Her mum could n't {deny=>refuse} {to=>} her , so she bought it .


Source: Oh!The girl had so many special moments with her doll!!They looked so adorable together!They were like twins !

Target: Oh!The girl had so many special moments with her doll ! ! They looked so adorable together ! They were like twins !

Response: Oh!The girl had so many special moments with her {doll!!They=>doll ! ! They} looked so adorable {together!They=>together ! They} were like twins !


Source: After some years the girl decided that she had to move .

Target: After some years , the girl decided that she had to move .

Response: After some years {=>,} the girl decided that she had to move .


Source: She was eighteen years old , she had to be indepedent .

Target: She was eighteen years old , she had to be independent .

Response: She was eighteen years old , she had to be {indepedent=>independent} .


Source: So she took a deep breath and put her doll in the attic just like her childhood memories .

Target: So she took a deep breath and put her doll in the attic , just like her childhood memories .

Response: So she took a deep breath and put her doll in the attic {=>,} just like her childhood memories .


Source: At night she heard some creepy noises from there ...

Target: At night she heard some creepy noises from there ...

Response: At night she heard some creepy noises from there ...


Source: She went there and thera was the doll with a knife in her hand.''Bell , why you do n't play with me anymore?Are you boring of me?Just because I have only one eye?But you removed me the other one .

Target: She went there and there was the doll with a knife in her hand . ' ' Bell , why do n't you play with me anymore ? Are you bored of me ? Just because I have only one eye ? But you removed the other one .

Response: She went there and {thera=>there} was the doll with a knife in her {hand.''Bell=>hand . ' ' Bell} , why {you do n't=>do n't you} play with me {anymore?Are=>anymore ? Are} you {boring=>bored} of {me?Just=>me ? Just} because I have only one {eye?But=>eye ? But} you removed {me=>} the other one .


Source: Just because I do n't have one if my gloves?But you did it again!''she screamed .

Target: Just because I do n't have one of my gloves ? But you did it again ! '' she screamed .

Response: Just because I do n't have one {if=>of} my {gloves?But=>gloves ? But} you did it {again!''she=>again ! '' she} screamed .


Source: And then ...

Target: And then ...

Response: And then ...


Source: Next day , going at her home her mum wanted to find her daughter .

Target: Next day , going home , her mum wanted to find her daughter .

Response: Next day , going {at her=>} home {=>,} her mum wanted to find her daughter .


Source: So , she went upstairs ...

Target: So , she went upstairs ...

Response: So , she went upstairs ...


Source: The girl had a knife in her kneck and on the wall there was a sentence,''Why did you leave me that way ? ''

Target: The girl had a knife in her neck and on the wall there was a sentence , ' ' Why did you leave me that way ? ''

Response: The girl had a knife in her {kneck=>neck} and on the wall there was a {sentence,''Why=>sentence , ' ' Why} did you leave me that way ? ''


Source: Tennis is an individual sport .

Target: Tennis is an individual sport .

Response: Tennis is an individual sport .


Source: Just you have to deal with the game .

Target: You just have to deal with the game .

Response: {Just you=>You just} have to deal with the game .


Source: You can choose lots of places to play .

Target: You can choose lots of places to play .

Response: You can choose lots of places to play .


Source: You need a good pair of shoes , a tennis racket and some balls and person who play with .

Target: You need a good pair of shoes , a tennis racket and some balls and a person to play with .

Response: You need a good pair of shoes , a tennis racket and some balls and {=>a} person {who=>to} play with .


Source: Although you should be good at playing backhand or forehand , you can lose finally .

Target: Although you might be good at playing backhand or forehand , you can lose in the end .

Response: Although you {should=>might} be good at playing backhand or forehand , you can lose {finally=>in the end} .


Source: This sport is not just about a physical power .

Target: This sport is not just about physical power .

Response: This sport is not just about {a=>} physical power .


Source: You supposed to use your brain as well .

Target: You are supposed to use your brain as well .

Response: You {=>are} supposed to use your brain as well .


Source: It is combination of a physical power , a technique and a mental power .

Target: It is a combination of physical power , technique and mental power .

Response: It is {=>a} combination of {a=>} physical power , {a=>} technique and {a=>} mental power .


Source: As the other sports , tennis is getting more modern , fast and commercial .

Target: Like other sports , tennis is getting more modern , faster and more commercial .

Response: {As=>Like} {the=>} other sports , tennis is getting more modern , {fast=>faster} and {=>more} commercial .


Source: I mean professional tennis .

Target: I mean professional tennis .

Response: I mean professional tennis .


Source: Some children wanted to play tennis because of money or glory .

Target: Some children want to play tennis because of money or glory .

Response: Some children {wanted=>want} to play tennis because of money or glory .


Source: Some of them practise tennis because of their parents .

Target: Some of them play tennis because of their parents .

Response: Some of them {practise=>play} tennis because of their parents .


Source: It is not fair enough .

Target: It is not fair .

Response: It is not fair {enough=>} .


Source: Children should play games , not just tennis , because it is fun , it develops their skills , helps to physical health and so on .

Target: Children should play games , not just tennis , because it is fun , it develops their skills , helps physical health and so on .

Response: Children should play games , not just tennis , because it is fun , it develops their skills , helps {to=>} physical health and so on .


Source: You can start if you are grown up anyway .

Target: You can start if you are grown up anyway .

Response: You can start if you are grown up anyway .


Source: It is never too late .

Target: It is never too late .

Response: It is never too late .


Source: Either you can find a professional coach or just join your friends .

Target: You can either find a professional coach or just join your friends .

Response: {Either you can=>You can either} find a professional coach or just join your friends .


Source: Enjoy !

Target: Enjoy !

Response: Enjoy !


Source: Dear Mrs Kate Ashby ,

Target: Dear Mrs Kate Ashby ,

Response: Dear Mrs Kate Ashby ,


Source: My name is Andrea Cocci , I 'm sixteen , and I saw the advertisement of the weekend work in your cafe , and I 'm interested to work with you .

Target: My name is Andrea Cocci , I 'm sixteen , and I saw the advertisement for the weekend work in your cafe , and I 'm interested in working with you .

Response: My name is Andrea Cocci , I 'm sixteen , and I saw the advertisement {of=>for} the weekend work in your cafe , and I 'm interested {to=>in} {work=>working} with you .


Source: I ' m the perfect choice for this work , in fact , I 'm interested in different kinds of food because I am Italian , and for us food is everything .

Target: I ' m the perfect choice for this work . In fact , I 'm interested in different kinds of food because I am Italian , and for us food is everything .

Response: I ' m the perfect choice for this work {, in=>. In} fact , I 'm interested in different kinds of food because I am Italian , and for us food is everything .


Source: In Italy , I attend school for waiter and cook , and sometimes I cook lasagna , pasta , pizza and many other specialties of my country , and I was assumed in many famous restaurant .

Target: In Italy , I attend a school for waiters and cooks , and sometimes I cook lasagna , pasta , pizza and many other specialties of my country , and I have been employed in many famous restaurants .

Response: In Italy , I attend {=>a} school for {waiter=>waiters} and {cook=>cooks} , and sometimes I cook lasagna , pasta , pizza and many other specialties of my country , and I {was=>have been} {assumed=>employed} in many famous {restaurant=>restaurants} .


Source: I"m also good at dealing with people , in fact since when I was younger , I have done the animator at the summer camp of Alpignano , the city where I lived , and I spent a lot of time with children and adults .

Target: I 'm also good at dealing with people . In fact , since when I was younger , I was the animator at the summer camp of Alpignano , the city where I lived , and I spent a lot of time with children and adults .

Response: {I"m=>I 'm} also good at dealing with people {, in=>. In} fact {=>,} since when I was younger , I {have done=>was} the {animator=>animator} at the summer camp of Alpignano , the city where I lived , and I spent a lot of time with children and adults .


Source: I also worked for many theater companies and I am so good and kind when I talk with other people , also if I do n't know them .

Target: I also worked for many theater companies and I am so good and kind when I talk with other people , including if I do n't know them .

Response: I also worked for many theater companies and I am so good and kind when I talk with other people , {also=>including} if I do n't know them .


Source: At the end , I 'm also prepared to work long hours , when I worked with my aunt in his cafe , I worked from eight a.m. and I lasted at 9 p.m. , it was difficult but I did it all days .

Target: Finally , I 'm also prepared to work long hours . When I worked with my aunt in her cafe , I worked from eight a.m. and I finished at 9 p.m. . It was difficult but I did it every day .

Response: {At the end=>Finally} , I 'm also prepared to work long hours {, when=>. When} I worked with my aunt in {his=>her} cafe , I worked from eight a.m. and I {lasted=>finished} at 9 p.m. {, it=>. It} was difficult but I did it {all=>every} {days=>day} .


Source: I look forward to hearing from you soon ,

Target: I look forward to hearing from you soon ,

Response: I look forward to hearing from you soon ,


Source: Andrea Cocci

Target: Andrea Cocci

Response: Andrea Cocci


Response: Essay


Source: In today 's essay I am going to focus on the pros and cons of studying English abroad .

Target: In today 's essay I am going to focus on the pros and cons of studying English abroad .

Response: In today 's essay I am going to focus on the pros and cons of studying English abroad .


Source: Is it really worth leaving your own country for a period of time to study English ?

Target: Is it really worth leaving your own country for a period of time to study English ?

Response: Is it really worth leaving your own country for a period of time to study English ?


Source: It is true that going abroad can open new point of views about your own learning process .

Target: It is true that going abroad can open new point of views about your own learning process .

Response: It is true that going abroad can {open=>open} new point of views about your own learning process .


Source: Talking with English native speakers is always a good thing because you will be able to judge how well or badly you are doing .

Target: Talking with English native speakers is always a good thing , because you will be able to judge how well or badly you are doing .

Response: Talking with English native speakers is always a good thing {=>,} because you will be able to judge how well or badly you are doing .


Source: Besides , it can be funny and enjoyable if you plan it properly .

Target: Besides , it can be fun and enjoyable if you plan it properly .

Response: Besides , it can be {funny=>fun} and enjoyable if you plan it properly .


Source: However , you will have to spend a considerable amount of money in it and you will not be assured to achieve your goals at all so it would be able to become a real nightmare if you are not focus on your learning tasks .

Target: However , you will have to spend a considerable amount of money on it and you will not be guaranteed to achieve your goals at all , so it could become a real nightmare if you do not focus on your learning tasks .

Response: However , you will have to spend a considerable amount of money {in=>on} it and you will not be {assured=>guaranteed} to achieve your goals at all {=>,} so it {would be able to=>could} become a real nightmare if you {are=>do} not focus on your learning tasks .


Source: From my point of view I think the advantages overcome the disadvantages especially if you have some money saved for it .

Target: From my point of view , I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages , especially if you have some money saved for it .

Response: From my point of view {=>,} I think the advantages {overcome=>outweigh} the disadvantages {=>,} especially if you have some money saved for it .


Source: But if you do not , there is always a solution which is using the Internet to learn everything you need .

Target: But if you do not , there is always another solution , which is using the Internet to learn everything you need .

Response: But if you do not , there is always {a=>another} solution {=>,} which is using the Internet to learn everything you need .


Source: You can even talk with native speakers by using some Chat Rooms online such as Skipe and others .

Target: You can even talk with native speakers by using some Chat Rooms online such as Skype and others .

Response: You can even talk with native speakers by using some Chat Rooms online such as {Skipe=>Skype} and others .


Source: Football , a passion

Target: Football , a passion

Response: Football , a passion


Source: When I was little I had tried a lot of sports , Handball , Swimming , Tennis , but my favourite sport is not one of those , it is a sport that I have never imagine : Football .

Target: When I was little , I tried a lot of sports ; handball , swimming , tennis , but my favourite sport is not one of those , it is a sport that I could never imagine : football .

Response: When I was little {=>,} I {had=>} tried a lot of sports {,=>;} {Handball=>handball} , {Swimming=>swimming} , {Tennis=>tennis} , but my favourite sport is not one of those , it is a sport that I {have=>could} never imagine : {Football=>football} .


Source: All my life I thought that football was a sport which was for men , not for girls , but once I tried it , I loved it .

Target: All my life I thought that football was a sport which was for men , not for girls . But once I tried it , I loved it .

Response: All my life I thought that football was a sport which was for men , not for girls {, but=>. But} once I tried it , I loved it .


Source: Have you ever think about playing football ?

Target: Have you ever thought about playing football ?

Response: Have you ever {think=>thought} about playing football ?


Source: At first , when I started to play football I did it with my classmates , who where all boys , so I used to feel a little bit uncomfortable , however , some years ago , they started to intergrate me when they play , and nowadays , I love playing football with them .

Target: At first , when I started to play football , I did it with my classmates , who were all boys , so I used to feel a little bit uncomfortable . However , some years ago , they started to include me when they played , and nowadays , I love playing football with them .

Response: At first , when I started to play football {=>,} I did it with my classmates , who {where=>were} all boys , so I used to feel a little bit uncomfortable {, however=>. However} , some years ago , they started to {intergrate=>include} me when they {play=>played} , and nowadays , I love playing football with them .


Source: Now , some women and I started to organize female matches , so I am more used to play with girls . I never imagine that I was going to be so keen on football , but now it takes part of my life .

Target: Now some other women and I have started to organize female matches , so I am more used to playing with girls . I never imagined that I was going to be so keen on football , but now it is part of my life .

Response: Now {,=>} some {=>other} women and I {=>have} started to organize female matches , so I am more used to {play=>playing} with girls . I never {imagine=>imagined} that I was going to be so keen on football , but now it {takes=>is} part of my life .


Source: I think football is a very exciting sport , and that everybody in the world should try it at least once in his or her life .

Target: I think football is a very exciting sport , and that everybody in the world should try it at least once in his or her life .

Response: I think football is a very exciting sport , and that everybody in the world should try it at least once in his or her life .


Source: One thing you should keep in mind if you want to play football is that you have to be ready to reacive some punches .

Target: One thing you should keep in mind if you want to play football , is that you have to be ready to receive some punches .

Response: One thing you should keep in mind if you want to play football {=>,} is that you have to be ready to {reacive=>receive} some punches .


Source: I recommend you a great restaurant which is in the shopping center .

Target: I recommend a great restaurant which is in the shopping center .

Response: I recommend {you=>} a great restaurant which is in the shopping center .


Source: I have been there twice , and I like it .

Target: I have been there twice , and I like it .

Response: I have been there twice , and I like it .


Source: Its name is " The English oven " , and it 's a fantastic traditional and modern restaurant with British food .

Target: Its name is " The English oven " , and it 's a fantastic , traditional and modern restaurant with British food .

Response: Its name is " The English oven " , and it 's a fantastic {=>,} traditional and modern restaurant with British food .


Source: The service is excellent and the waiters are so pleasant and gentle .

Target: The service is excellent and the waiters are so pleasant and kind .

Response: The service is excellent and the waiters are so pleasant and {gentle=>kind} .


Source: The interior is big , so all the class could stay inside without problems .

Target: The interior is big , so all the class could be inside without problems .

Response: The interior is big , so all the class could {stay=>be} inside without problems .


Source: The decoration is modern and cozy , and it 's got some great traditional British objects .

Target: The decoration is modern and cozy , and it 's got some great traditional British objects .

Response: The decoration is modern and cozy , and it 's got some great traditional British objects .


Source: The food is one of the best things in the restaurant that is always tasty and fresh .

Target: The food is one of the best things in the restaurant and is always tasty and fresh .

Response: The food is one of the best things in the restaurant {that=>and} is always tasty and fresh .


Source: The've got a lot of different dishes , traditional and modern .

Target: The've got a lot of different dishes , traditional and modern .

Response: The've got a lot of different dishes , traditional and modern .


Source: They have also got a lot of different types of salads , pasta and pizzas .

Target: They have also got a lot of different types of salads , pasta and pizzas .

Response: They have also got a lot of different types of salads , pasta and pizzas .


Source: The desserts are very good too .

Target: The desserts are very good too .

Response: The desserts are very good too .


Source: They 've got original ones , like sweet pizza , and traditional .

Target: They 've got original ones , like sweet pizza , and traditional desserts .

Response: They 've got original ones , like sweet pizza , and traditional {=>desserts} .


Source: There is a big variety of ice creams .

Target: There is a big variety of ice creams .

Response: There is a big variety of ice creams .


Source: This restaurant is not too expensive , which is perfect for us , because we do n't want to spend too much money .

Target: This restaurant is not too expensive , which is perfect for us , because we do n't want to spend too much money .

Response: This restaurant is not too expensive , which is perfect for us , because we do n't want to spend too much money .


Source: The restaurant is in the shopping center , so we can get there by bus or by train .

Target: The restaurant is in the shopping center , so we can get there by bus or by train .

Response: The restaurant is in the shopping center , so we can get there by bus or by train .


Source: I think this is the best restaurant to go on the end of the course , so we could book some tables as soon as possible because a lot of people usually goes there .

Target: I think this is the best restaurant to go to at the end of the course , so we could book some tables as soon as possible because a lot of people usually go there .

Response: I think this is the best restaurant to go {=>to} {on=>at} the end of the course , so we could book some tables as soon as possible because a lot of people usually {goes=>go} there .


Source: During whole life , famous people , such as politicians and film stars , media are accompanying them .

Target: The media accompany famous people , such as politicians and film stars throughout their whole lives .

Response: {During whole life , famous people , such as politicians and film stars , media are accompanying them=>The media accompany famous people , such as politicians and film stars throughout their whole lives} .


Source: In my view , public person deserve to have their own life , without photographing .

Target: In my view , public figures deserve to have their own life , without being photographed .

Response: In my view , public {person=>figures} deserve to have their own life , without {photographing=>being photographed} .


Source: In one hand , becoming a public person associate with jornalist , mass - media , flashes .

Target: On one hand , becoming a public figure is associated with journalists , mass - media , flashes .

Response: {In=>On} one hand , becoming a public {person=>figure} {associate=>is associated} with {jornalist=>journalists} , mass - media , flashes .


Source: Famous people are obligated to provide their life in exemplary way .

Target: Famous people are obligated to live their lives in an exemplary way .

Response: Famous people are obligated to {provide=>live} their {life=>lives} in {=>an} exemplary way .


Source: However , they still being ordinary people , they make mistakes .

Target: However , they are still ordinary people , and they make mistakes .

Response: However , they {still being=>are still} ordinary people , {=>and} they make mistakes .


Source: People are thought being jealous .

Target: People are thought to be jealous .

Response: People are thought {being=>to be} jealous .


Source: Notice any kind of failures .

Target: They notice any kind of failure .

Response: {Notice=>They notice} any kind of {failures=>failure} .


Source: It seems to me that journalist might be absolutely toxic and they have defective infulence on society which assess celebrites through the prism of journalistic documentary .

Target: It seems to me that journalists might be absolutely toxic and they have a bad influence on society , which assesses celebrities through the prism of journalistic documentary .

Response: It seems to me that {journalist=>journalists} might be absolutely toxic and they have {=>a} {defective=>bad} {infulence=>influence} on society {=>,} which {assess=>assesses} {celebrites=>celebrities} through the prism of journalistic documentary .


Source: In the other hand many of stars sold their privacy to earn more and more money .

Target: On the other hand , many stars sell their privacy to earn more and more money .

Response: {In=>On} the other hand {=>,} many {of=>} stars {sold=>sell} their privacy to earn more and more money .


Source: The value of their talent , abilities are counted in amonut of tabloids scandals .

Target: The value of their talent and abilities is measured in the amount of tabloids scandals .

Response: The value of their talent {,=>and} abilities {are=>is} {counted=>measured} in {=>the} {amonut=>amount} of tabloids scandals .


Source: Summing up , all over the world , are living famous people who do n't bring into the limelight their life .

Target: Summing up , all over the world , there are famous people who do n't bring their life into the limelight .

Response: Summing up , all over the world {,=>,} {are living=>there are} famous people who do n't bring {into the limelight their life=>their life into the limelight} .


Source: It has ever been very useful for a long time ago , nevertheless nowadays , there are some people who ask if the public transport was suppressed , and society would save a lot of money .

Target: It has always been very useful since a long time ago . Nevertheless , nowadays , there are some people who ask whether if public transport was suppressed , society would save a lot of money .

Response: It has {ever=>always} been very useful {for=>since} a long time ago {, nevertheless=>. Nevertheless} {=>,} nowadays , there are some people who ask {=>whether} if {the=>} public transport was suppressed , {and=>} society would save a lot of money .


Source: However , people should think about the large advantages , such as : people save money ; it is very comfortable and good for the environment .

Target: However , people should think about the great advantages , such as : people save money ; it is very convenient and good for the environment .

Response: However , people should think about the {large=>great} advantages , such as : people save money ; it is very {comfortable=>convenient} and good for the environment .


Source: Firstly , the main reason is the cost because the people who do not have a car they need to travel or commute to another place and a car is very expensive .

Target: Firstly , the main reason is the cost , because people who do not have a car need to travel or commute to another place and a car is very expensive .

Response: Firstly , the main reason is the cost {=>,} because {the=>} people who do not have a car {they=>} need to travel or commute to another place and a car is very expensive .


Source: The cars need to be repaired ; besides , if you have a car , you have to pay some taxes .

Target: Cars need to be repaired . Besides , if you have a car , you have to pay some taxes .

Response: {The cars=>Cars} need to be repaired {; besides=>. Besides} , if you have a car , you have to pay some taxes .


Source: In addition , these people need to have public transport for travelling around the country and city .

Target: In addition , these people need to have public transport for travelling around the country and city .

Response: In addition , these people need to have public transport for travelling around the country and city .


Source: Secondly , another reason is the global warming because the atmosphere is much polluted .

Target: Secondly , another reason is global warming , because the atmosphere is very polluted .

Response: Secondly , another reason is {the=>} global warming {=>,} because the atmosphere is {much=>very} polluted .


Source: If you use the public transport , you can be less contaminating than before because there are a lot of people who travel together in only one transport .

Target: If you use public transport , you can cause less pollution than before , because there are a lot of people who travel together in only one vehicle .

Response: If you use {the=>} public transport , you can {be=>cause} less {contaminating=>pollution} than before {=>,} because there are a lot of people who travel together in only one {transport=>vehicle} .


Source: Finally , the last reason is the comfort because you have a car ; it is so difficult to find a car park in the centre of the city .

Target: Finally , the last reason is convenience , because if you have a car , it is so difficult to find a parking space in the centre of the city .

Response: Finally , the last reason is {the=>} {comfort=>convenience} {=>,} because {=>if} you have a car {;=>,} it is so difficult to find a {car park=>parking space} in the centre of the city .


Source: Besides in some cities , car can not be parked in some places , such as : the old city and the city centre .

Target: Besides , in some cities , cars can not be parked in some places , such as the old city and the city centre .

Response: Besides {=>,} in some cities , {car=>cars} can not be parked in some places , such as {:=>} the old city and the city centre .


Source: Summing up , people are aware of global warming and think about the high cost of having a car .

Target: Summing up , people are aware of global warming and think about the high cost of having a car .

Response: Summing up , people are aware of global warming and think about the high cost of having a car .


Source: From my point of view , I get used to walking around my city and my car is just used if I travel around the country .

Target: Personally , I have got used to walking around my city and my car is only used if I travel around the country .

Response: {From my point of view=>Personally} , I {get=>have got} used to walking around my city and my car is {just=>only} used if I travel around the country .


Source: We are living in a ever changing world .

Target: We are living in an ever changing world .

Response: We are living in {a=>an} ever changing world .


Source: Today 's new things become things of past in few months .

Target: Today 's new things become things of the past in a few months .

Response: Today 's new things become things of {=>the} past in {=>a} few months .


Source: Take an example of mobile technology , your latest handset , with latest configurations becomes outdated within few months after buying it .

Target: Take the example of mobile technology . Your latest handset , with the latest configurations becomes outdated within a few months of buying it .

Response: Take {an=>the} example of mobile technology {, your=>. Your} latest handset , with {=>the} latest configurations becomes outdated within {=>a} few months {after=>of} buying it .


Source: 50 years is a very long time and people lives will definitely change in such a long period .

Target: 50 years is a very long time and people 's lives will definitely change in such a long period .

Response: 50 years is a very long time and people {=>'s} lives will definitely change in such a long period .


Source: However , the important point to discuss would be whether it would be a positive change or negative one .

Target: However , the important point to discuss is whether it will be a positive change or a negative one .

Response: However , the important point to discuss {would be=>is} whether it {would=>will} be a positive change or {=>a} negative one .


Source: Last 50 years science and technology took great leaps , internet , mobiles made us more connected .

Target: In the last 50 years , science and technology took great leaps ; the internet and mobiles made us more connected .

Response: {Last=>In the last} 50 years {=>,} science and technology took great leaps {,=>; the} internet {,=>and} mobiles made us more connected .


Source: Today , we have all the information at finger - tips .

Target: Today , we have all the information at our fingertips .

Response: Today , we have all the information at {=>our} {finger - tips=>fingertips} .


Source: Today , we do n't need to worry about getting lost at new place , Google maps are always there to help .

Target: Today , we do n't need to worry about getting lost in a new place . Google maps is always there to help .

Response: Today , we do n't need to worry about getting lost {at=>in a} new place {,=>.} Google maps {are=>is} always there to help .


Source: We need not to cram English words today , as we can quickly find meaning of any word on our mobiles .

Target: We do n't need to memorise English words today , as we can quickly find the meaning of any word on our mobiles .

Response: We {need not=>do n't need} to {cram=>memorise} English words today , as we can quickly find {=>the} meaning of any word on our mobiles .


Source: Meeting new people or selling your products , you do nt need to face anyone , everything can be managed through a virtual platforms .

Target: Meeting new people or selling your products , you do n't need to be in front of anyone , everything can be managed through virtual platforms .

Response: Meeting new people or selling your products , you do {nt=>n't} need to {face=>be in front of} anyone , everything can be managed through {a=>} virtual platforms .


Source: Today our lives have become much more comfortable than past , thanks to progress mankind has made in technology .

Target: Today our lives have become much more comfortable than in the past , thanks to the progress mankind has made through technology .

Response: Today our lives have become much more comfortable than {=>in the} past , thanks to {=>the} progress mankind has made {in=>through} technology .


Source: On the other hand a number of terrorism , global warming and greed became top challenges of today 's world .

Target: On the other hand , terrorism , global warming and greed have become the top challenges of today 's world .

Response: On the other hand {=>,} {a number of=>} terrorism , global warming and greed {became=>have become the} top challenges of today 's world .


Source: Climate changes due to global warming causing natural disasters now and then .

Target: Climate change due to global warming causing natural disasters now and then .

Response: Climate {changes=>change} due to global warming causing natural disasters now and then .


Source: Terrorist activities causing havoc in public live .

Target: Terrorist activities causing havoc in public life .

Response: Terrorist activities causing havoc in public {live=>life} .


Source: Corruption and greed of people in power making it difficult to trust people leaders .

Target: The corruption and greed of people in power making it difficult to trust people 's leaders .

Response: {Corruption=>The corruption} and greed of people in power making it difficult to trust people {=>'s} leaders .


Source: If these challenges are not addressed in coming years , imagining better lives for people in 50 years hence is rather difficult .

Target: If these challenges are not addressed in the coming years , imagining better lives for people 50 years hence is rather difficult .

Response: If these challenges are not addressed in {=>the} coming years , imagining better lives for people {in=>} 50 years hence is rather difficult .


Source: We need to remember technology is just a tool , in right hand it would be boon for us , in wrong hands it has power to destroy the world as we see it today .

Target: We need to remember technology is just a tool . In the right hands it will be a boon for us , but in the wrong hands it has the power to destroy the world as we know it today .

Response: We need to remember technology is just a tool {, in=>. In the} right {hand=>hands} it {would=>will} be {=>a} boon for us , {=>but} in {=>the} wrong hands it has {=>the} power to destroy the world as we {see=>know} it today .


Source: to who may concern ,

Target: To whom it may concern ,

Response: {to=>To} {who=>whom} {=>it} may concern ,


Source: I 'm an Italian girl who 's studying to improve her English . I 've got a positive and energetic personality .

Target: I 'm an Italian girl who 's studying to improve her English . I 've got a positive and energetic personality .

Response: I 'm an Italian girl who 's studying to improve her English . I 've got a positive and energetic personality .


Source: I read your advertisement on your website and I immediately thought " That 's for me , I 'm the right person for this kind of job ! " .

Target: I read your advertisement on your website and I immediately thought " That 's for me , I 'm the right person for this kind of job ! " .

Response: I read your advertisement on your website and I immediately thought " That 's for me , I 'm the right person for this kind of job ! " .


Source: Perhaps , you 're wondering why I should be the right person .

Target: Perhaps you 're wondering why I should be the right person .

Response: Perhaps {,=>} you 're wondering why I should be the right person .


Source: That 's soon said .

Target: That 's easy .

Response: That 's {soon said=>easy} .


Source: I 'm motivated , flexible and openminded person and I had a lot of experience in this field as well .

Target: I 'm a motivated , flexible and open - minded person and I have had a lot of experience in this field , as well .

Response: I 'm {=>a} motivated , flexible and {openminded=>open - minded} person and I {=>have} had a lot of experience in this field {=>,} as well .


Source: I 've worked as social trainer and as educators since I was 16 .

Target: I 've worked as a social trainer and as an educator since I was 16 .

Response: I 've worked as {=>a} social trainer and as {=>an} {educators=>educator} since I was 16 .


Source: I love doing social activities and planning events .

Target: I love doing social activities and planning events .

Response: I love doing social activities and planning events .


Source: When I worked as educator , I used to plan and manage some sports and outdoor acitivities .

Target: When I worked as an educator , I used to plan and manage some sports and outdoor activities .

Response: When I worked as {=>an} educator , I used to plan and manage some sports and outdoor {acitivities=>activities} .


Source: I had a very great memories of these experiences and I would really like to live them again .

Target: I have really great memories of these experiences and I would really like to relive them .

Response: I {had=>have} {a=>} {very=>really} great memories of these experiences and I would really like to {live them again=>relive them} .


Source: If you are interested , please have a look at my CV .

Target: If you are interested , please have a look at my CV .

Response: If you are interested , please have a look at my CV .


Source: As you requested , I attach it in this mail .

Target: As you requested , I attach it to this letter .

Response: As you requested , I attach it {in=>to} this {mail=>letter} .


Source: Best regards .

Target: Best regards .

Response: Best regards .


Source: Personally , mobile phones are very important in my life .

Target: Personally , mobile phones are very important in my life .

Response: Personally , mobile phones are very important in my life .


Source: I need that device near me because I have three children and I want to know how and where they are .

Target: I need that device near me because I have three children and I want to know how and where they are .

Response: I need that device near me because I have three children and I want to know how and where they are .


Source: The same about my parents ; they are old and sometimes they call me for talk about their healht .

Target: The same with my parents ; they are old and sometimes they call me to talk about their health .

Response: The same {about=>with} my parents ; they are old and sometimes they call me {for=>to} talk about their {healht=>health} .


Source: Concerning video - games , I agree with scientits that they thought its help children 's brain to develop , but is important controller them because there are a lot violent games .

Target: Concerning video - games , I agree with scientists that think it helps children 's brains to develop , but it is important to supervise them , because there are a lot of violent games .

Response: Concerning video - games , I agree with {scientits=>scientists} that {they=>} {thought=>think} {its=>it} {help=>helps} children 's {brain=>brains} to develop , but {=>it} is important {controller=>to supervise} them {=>,} because there are a lot {=>of} violent games .


Source: However there are brilliant games for children .

Target: However , there are brilliant games for children .

Response: However {=>,} there are brilliant games for children .


Source: In my opinion , the Internet is absolutely a revolution in current society .

Target: In my opinion , the Internet is absolutely a revolution in current society .

Response: In my opinion , the Internet is absolutely a revolution in current society .


Source: It is very common to use the Internet in my work for research or google information and also connect whit other teachers , speak about courses and change information .

Target: It is very common to use the Internet in my work , for research , or google information and also connect with other teachers , speak about courses and exchange information .

Response: It is very common to use the Internet in my work {=>,} for research {=>,} or google information and also connect {whit=>with} other teachers , speak about courses and {change=>exchange} information .


Source: Finally , I think technological developments make us improve to the future .

Target: Finally , I think technological developments make us improve for the future .

Response: Finally , I think technological developments make us improve {to=>for} the future .


Source: Friends should be like a shadow always beside you .

Target: Friends should be like a shadow always beside you .

Response: Friends should be like a shadow always beside you .


Source: In the time of joy and sorrow .

Target: In times of joy and sorrow .

Response: In {the=>} {time=>times} of joy and sorrow .


Source: Nothing is impossible in life but not doubt it is not easy to find sincere friends .

Target: Nothing is impossible in life , but it is not easy to find sincere friends .

Response: Nothing is impossible in life {=>,} but {not doubt=>} it is not easy to find sincere friends .


Source: It does not mean you will never find one .

Target: That does not mean you will never find one .

Response: {It=>That} does not mean you will never find one .


Source: It is very important to interact and socialise with people to make a friend .

Target: It is very important to interact and socialise with people to make a friend .

Response: It is very important to interact and socialise with people to make a friend .


Source: The more people you will meet the more easy it will become for you to find a friend .

Target: The more people you meet , the easier it will become for you to find a friend .

Response: The more people you {will=>} meet {=>,} the {more easy=>easier} it will become for you to find a friend .


Source: When you find one spend time with them , share views , ideas and go out with them .

Target: When you find one , spend time with them , share views , ideas and go out with them .

Response: When you find one {=>,} spend time with them , share views , ideas and go out with them .


Source: Friends do not have to agree on everything you say but they should share their views about it .

Target: Friends do not have to agree with everything you say , but they should share their views about it .

Response: Friends do not have to agree {on=>with} everything you say {=>,} but they should share their views about it .


Source: The Guardian is a British daily newspaper which includes national and international news .

Target: The Guardian is a British daily newspaper which includes national and international news .

Response: The Guardian is a British daily newspaper which includes national and international news .


Source: You could find a variety of articles such as politics , Business and Money , sports , culture , education , Life and style , Travels , the weather and the Environment .

Target: You can find a variety of articles , such as politics , Business and Money , sports , culture , education , Life and style , Travel , the weather and the environment .

Response: You {could=>can} find a variety of articles {=>,} such as politics , Business and Money , sports , culture , education , Life and style , {Travels=>Travel} , the weather and the {Environment=>environment} .


Source: there are plenty of advertisements for jobs and donations to help individuals .

Target: There are plenty of advertisements for jobs and donations to help individuals .

Response: {there=>There} are plenty of advertisements for jobs and donations to help individuals .


Source: readers are able to express their opinion freely .

Target: Readers are able to express their opinion freely .

Response: {readers=>Readers} are able to express their opinion freely .


Source: they use a quality English language which avoids slang language .

Target: they use good quality English which avoids slang .

Response: they use {a=>} {=>good} quality English {language=>} which avoids slang {language=>} .


Source: As result , it is suitable for students who learn English Language to improve their English .

Target: As a result , it is suitable for students who learn English Language to improve their English .

Response: As {=>a} result , it is suitable for students who learn English Language to improve their English .


Source: On the other hand , I realised there were two disadvantages .

Target: On the other hand , I realised there were two disadvantages .

Response: On the other hand , I realised there were two disadvantages .


Source: For example , it is not suitable for children due to official Language . there were also a huge number of commercials advertisements which make the readers bored .

Target: For example , it is not suitable for children due to official language . There were also a huge number of commercials advertisements which make the readers bored .

Response: For example , it is not suitable for children due to {official=>official} {Language=>language} . {there=>There} were also a huge number of commercials advertisements which make the readers bored .


Source: Overall , The Guardian is considered one of the best newspapers in the world .

Target: Overall , The Guardian is considered one of the best newspapers in the world .

Response: Overall , The Guardian is considered one of the best newspapers in the world .


Source: Nowadays , in the modern and progressive world where people are smart and economy very highly developed .

Target: Nowadays , in the modern and progressive world where people are smart and the economy very highly developed .

Response: Nowadays , in the modern and progressive world where people are smart and {=>the} economy very highly developed .


Source: Some people think that we need in tablet computers instead books

Target: Some people think that we need tablet computers instead of books

Response: Some people think that we need {in=>} tablet computers instead {=>of} books


Source: In my opinion , the problem is very interesting .

Target: In my opinion , the problem is very interesting .

Response: In my opinion , the problem is very interesting .


Source: Sometimes then I am watching TV or I am reading newspaper I notice that gadgets become very useful for our life .It seems to me good opportunities to make our life more easily .

Target: Sometimes , when I am watching TV or I am reading the newspaper , I notice that gadgets have become very useful in our life . It seem to me to be good opportunities to make our life easier .

Response: Sometimes {=>,} {then=>when} I am watching TV or I am reading {=>the} newspaper {=>,} I notice that gadgets {=>have} become very useful {for=>in} our life {.It=>. It} {seems=>seem} to me {=>to be} good opportunities to make our life {more easily=>easier} .


Source: Also it makes us more clever .

Target: Also , they make us cleverer .

Response: Also {=>,} {it=>they} {makes=>make} us {more clever=>cleverer} .


Source: I am convinced that using tablet computers in our everyday life is rather good .

Target: I am convinced that using tablet computers in our everyday life is good .

Response: I am convinced that using tablet computers in our everyday life is {rather=>} good .


Source: People do not need to carry a lot of books in a bag .Pupil could not say that he left a book because he has all books in his tablet computers

Target: People do not need to carry a lot of books in a bag . Pupil can not say that he forgot a book because he has all his books on his tablet computer .

Response: People do not need to carry a lot of books in a bag {.Pupil=>. Pupil} {could=>can} not say that he {left=>forgot} a book because he has all {=>his} books {in=>on} his tablet {computers=>computer} {=>.}


Source: Some people think that it is a bed idea .

Target: Some people think that it is a bad idea .

Response: Some people think that it is a {bed=>bad} idea .


Source: They believe that it is useless thing for our generation .

Target: They believe that it is a useless thing for our generation .

Response: They believe that it is {=>a} useless thing for our generation .


Source: Such people are sure that electronic things make us stupid .

Target: Such people are sure that electronic things make us stupid .

Response: Such people are sure that electronic things make us stupid .


Source: They insist on not using tablets at school .

Target: They insist on not using tablets at school .

Response: They insist on not using tablets at school .


Source: Personally for me , I like books very much .when I at home I use books because I like to smell and to touch the paper of books .

Target: Personally , for me , I like books very much . When I am at home , I use books because I like to smell and to touch the paper of books .

Response: Personally {=>,} for me , I like books very much {.when=>. When} I {=>am} at home {=>,} I use books because I like to smell and to touch the paper of books .


Source: I do not agree with the people who think that tablets are useless .

Target: I do not agree with the people who think that tablets are useless .

Response: I do not agree with the people who think that tablets are useless .


Source: We should use it but we are must not forget about books .

Target: We should use them but we must not forget about books .

Response: We should use {it=>them} but we {are=>} must not forget about books .


Source: In conclusion , I want to say that that we should keep abreast of new technologies and try to make our lives easier

Target: In conclusion , I want to say that we should keep abreast of new technologies and try to make our lives easier .

Response: In conclusion , I want to say that {that=>} we should keep abreast of new technologies and try to make our lives easier {=>.}


Source: The Big Mistake

Target: The Big Mistake

Response: The Big Mistake


Source: This day was full of joy and happiness , but something went wrong after when she told him that she is pregnant .

Target: This day was full of joy and happiness , but something went wrong when she told him that she was pregnant .

Response: This day was full of joy and happiness , but something went wrong {after=>} when she told him that she {is=>was} pregnant .


Source: She was so happy about this news and she thought that he will be happy as well , but ...

Target: She was so happy about this news and she thought that he would be happy as well , but ...

Response: She was so happy about this news and she thought that he {will=>would} be happy as well , but ...


Source: At the moment when she told him that she is pregnant , he just frozen .

Target: At the moment when she told him that she was pregnant , he just frozen .

Response: At the moment when she told him that she {is=>was} pregnant , he just frozen .


Source: It was too much for him .

Target: It was too much for him .

Response: It was too much for him .


Source: He thought it 's easier to walk away and avoid this conversation with her .

Target: He thought it was easier to walk away and avoid this conversation with her .

Response: He thought it {'s=>was} easier to walk away and avoid this conversation with her .


Source: He tried to understand what 's going on with him .

Target: He tried to understand what was going on with him .

Response: He tried to understand what {'s=>was} going on with him .


Source: It was weird how many questions and doubts came up on his head .

Target: It was weird how many questions and doubts came into his head .

Response: It was weird how many questions and doubts came {up on=>into} his head .


Source: One part of him was really happy , because to be a father is his one of the biggest dream , but on the other hand he could n't handle this news .

Target: One part of him was really happy , because to be a father was one of his biggest dreams , but on the other hand , he could n't handle this news .

Response: One part of him was really happy , because to be a father {is=>was} {his one of=>one of his} {the=>} biggest {dream=>dreams} , but on the other hand {=>,} he could n't handle this news .


Source: This woman , who stands next to him , is his girlfriend , his future wife .

Target: This woman , who was standing next to him , was his girlfriend , his future wife .

Response: This woman , who {stands=>was standing} next to him , {is=>was} his girlfriend , his future wife .


Source: He should be happy and hug her and celebrate this good news .

Target: He should be happy and hug her and celebrate this good news .

Response: He should be happy and hug her and celebrate this good news .


Source: But somehow he did n't feel anything .

Target: But somehow he did n't feel anything .

Response: But somehow he did n't feel anything .


Source: All that he felt was anxiety .

Target: All that he felt was anxiety .

Response: All that he felt was anxiety .


Source: He could n't handle the feeling , when she tried to touch him , to kiss and hug him .

Target: He could n't handle the feeling , when she tried to touch him , to kiss and hug him .

Response: He could n't handle the feeling , when she tried to touch him , to kiss and hug him .


Source: He knew that she loves him as much as he loves her , but everything was just too wrong on this moment .

Target: He knew that she loved him as much as he loved her , but everything was just all wrong at this moment .

Response: He knew that she {loves=>loved} him as much as he {loves=>loved} her , but everything was just {too=>all} wrong {on=>at} this moment .


Source: Her voice , her smile and even her body was to wrong on this moment .

Target: Her voice , her smile and even her body was wrong on this moment .

Response: Her voice , her smile and even her body was {to=>} wrong on this moment .


Source: She could n't understand what 's going on , because it was just three weeks ago when they had a conversation about kids and family and he said that he would like to have kids with her .

Target: She could n't understand what was going on , because it was just three weeks ago that they had a conversation about kids and family and he said that he would like to have kids with her .

Response: She could n't understand what {'s=>was} going on , because it was just three weeks ago {when=>that} they had a conversation about kids and family and he said that he would like to have kids with her .


Source: And now , he just avoids her and he is not happy about the news .

Target: And now , he was just avoiding her and he was not happy about the news .

Response: And now , he {just avoids=>was just avoiding} her and he {is=>was} not happy about the news .


Source: It was a big mess .

Target: It was a big mess .

Response: It was a big mess .


Source: She was more than happy and he could n't handle this news .

Target: She was more than happy and he could n't handle this news .

Response: She was more than happy and he could n't handle this news .


Source: They both knew that they love each other and they care about each other , but it was too much for him .

Target: They both knew that they loved each other and they cared about each other , but it was too much for him .

Response: They both knew that they {love=>loved} each other and they {care=>cared} about each other , but it was too much for him .


Source: He stood up and said to her girlfriend that he needs a break and he have to be alone .

Target: He stood up and said to his girlfriend that he needed a break and he had to be alone .

Response: He stood up and said to {her=>his} girlfriend that he {needs=>needed} a break and he {have=>had} to be alone .


Source: Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake .

Target: Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake .

Response: Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake .


Source: To the beginning I am going to take about what is my lovely sports and why I will enjoy the sport .

Target: To begin , I am going to talk about what is my favourite sport and why I enjoy the sport .

Response: To {the=>} {beginning=>begin} {=>,} I am going to {take=>talk} about what is my {lovely=>favourite} {sports=>sport} and why I {will=>} enjoy the sport .


Source: In fact , I do not like to do some sports during the anytime , but if I really need do some exercises that I like to go to swim in the swimming pool .

Target: In fact , I do not like to do sports all the time , but if I really need do some exercise , I like to go swimming in the swimming pool .

Response: In fact , I do not like to do {some=>} sports {during the anytime=>all the time} , but if I really need do some {exercises=>exercise} {=>,} {that=>} I like to go {to swim=>swimming} in the swimming pool .


Source: Firstly , I think , swimming pool is clearing .

Target: Firstly , I think the swimming pool is clearing .

Response: Firstly , I think {,=>} {=>the} swimming pool is {clearing=>clearing} .


Source: Such as after swimming that I have a safe and a bathroom to take shower .

Target: For example , after swimming , I have a safe and a bathroom to take a shower .

Response: {Such as=>For example} {=>,} after swimming {=>,} {that=>} I have a safe and a bathroom to take {=>a} shower .


Source: Secondly , I do not like to go to beach , this is because I do not like big sun and sand .

Target: Secondly , I do not like to go to the beach . This is because I do not like bright sunshine and sand .

Response: Secondly , I do not like to go to {=>the} beach {, this=>. This} is because I do not like {big=>bright} {sun=>sunshine} and sand .


Source: Third , swimming in the ocean is most dangerous .

Target: Third , swimming in the ocean is more dangerous .

Response: Third , swimming in the ocean is {most=>more} dangerous .


Source: However , I like to stay in the swimming pool during the summer .

Target: However , I like to stay in the swimming pool during the summer .

Response: However , I like to stay in the swimming pool during the summer .


Source: Actually , I do not know how to swim but it is my favorite sport in my whole life .

Target: Actually , I do not know how to swim , but it is my favorite sport .

Response: Actually , I do not know how to swim {=>,} but it is my favorite sport {in my whole life=>} .


Source: Moreover , I think before any kind of sports that we should do some exercises that is because we need to relax our bodies first . If we do not do it that we will get dangerous while we are doing any sports .

Target: Moreover , I think before doing any kind of sports we should do some exercises . That is because we need to relax our bodies first . If we do not do that we will get dangerous while we are doing any sports .

Response: Moreover , I think before {=>doing} any kind of sports {that=>} we should do some exercises {that=>. That} is because we need to relax our bodies first . If we do not do {it=>that} {that=>} we will {get dangerous=>get dangerous} while we are doing any sports .


Source: In conclusion , my opinion is I do not like to do any sports but we need to choose one kind of sport in our life and almost all people need to do it , as we could not stay at home or working all the time .

Target: In conclusion , I do not like to do any sports , but we need to choose one kind of sport in our life and almost all people need to do it , as we should not stay at home or work all the time .

Response: In conclusion , {my opinion is=>} I do not like to do any sports {=>,} but we need to choose one kind of sport in our life and almost all people need to do it , as we {could=>should} not stay at home or {working=>work} all the time .


Source: Even you really do not like to do exercise that you can go to shop .

Target: Even if you really do not like to do exercise , you can go shopping .

Response: Even {=>if} you really do not like to do exercise {=>,} {that=>} you can go {to shop=>shopping} .


Source: The purpose of this report is to outline the most important actions which have been taken in our town to protect the environment as the main issue to improve our quality of life .

Target: The purpose of this report is to outline the most important actions which have been taken in our town to protect the environment as the main issue to improve our quality of life .

Response: The purpose of this report is to outline the most important actions which have been taken in our town to protect the environment as the main issue to improve our quality of life .


Source: In the first place , we need to pay attention to the fact that Caceres is located in a pasture area where local farmers have been breeding sheep , cows and pigs for centuries in spite of the hard weather conditions such as high temperatures and terrible drought in summer .

Target: In the first place , we need to pay attention to the fact that Caceres is located in a pasture area where local farmers have been breeding sheep , cows and pigs for centuries in spite of the hard weather conditions such as high temperatures and terrible drought in summer .

Response: In the first place , we need to pay attention to the fact that Caceres is located in a pasture area where local farmers have been breeding sheep , cows and pigs for centuries in spite of the hard weather conditions such as high temperatures and terrible drought in summer .


Source: As a result , our water resources are difficult to be preserved and it is clearly necessary to maintain active campaigns to raise people 's awareness about the importance of a rational use of it .

Target: As a result , our water resources are difficult to preserve and it is clearly necessary to maintain active campaigns to raise people 's awareness of the importance of reasonable use of it .

Response: As a result , our water resources are difficult to {be preserved=>preserve} and it is clearly necessary to maintain active campaigns to raise people 's awareness {about=>of} the importance of {a=>} {rational=>reasonable} use of it .


Source: The local government is also taking strong action on creating green areas in different places in or around the town where citizens can spend their free time or even do sports .

Target: The local government is also taking serious action aimed at creating green areas in different places in or around the town where citizens can spend their free time or even do sports .

Response: The local government is also taking {strong=>serious} action {on=>aimed at} creating green areas in different places in or around the town where citizens can spend their free time or even do sports .


Source: That 's the reason why it has been working on the recovery of some areas which are now parks or recreational areas .

Target: That 's the reason why it has been working on the recovery of some areas which are now parks or recreational areas .

Response: That 's the reason why it has been working on the recovery of some areas which are now parks or recreational areas .


Source: Finally , the town has also improved the management and treatment of waste system with the active cooperation of most of the citizenship who is really concerned about the recycling of waste need .

Target: Finally , the town has also improved the management and treatment of waste with the active cooperation of most of the citizens , who are really concerned about the recycling of waste .

Response: Finally , the town has also improved the management and treatment of waste {system=>} with the active cooperation of most of the {citizenship=>citizens} {=>,} who {is=>are} really concerned about the recycling of waste {need=>} .


Source: In fact , around 90% of Caceres inhabitants are said to sort and recycle their rubbish taking it out to the yellow , green and blue containers in every street .

Target: In fact , around 90% of Caceres inhabitants are said to sort and recycle their rubbish , taking it out to the yellow , green and blue containers in every street .

Response: In fact , around 90% of Caceres inhabitants are said to sort and recycle their rubbish {=>,} taking it out to the yellow , green and blue containers in every street .


Source: And that is the negative point , these dumpsters are too visible in town and it would be advisable to change the ones we have for underground ones .

Target: And that is a negative point . These dumpsters are too visible in town and it would be advisable to exchange the ones we have for underground ones .

Response: And that is {the=>a} negative point {, these=>. These} dumpsters are too visible in town and it would be advisable to {change=>exchange} the ones we have for underground ones .


Source: I woke up today and I just remember that I was doing a presentation about landscapes , and the ones that do it will reward a bonus point but anyways this is n't important information .

Target: I woke up today and I suddenly remembered that I was doing a presentation about landscapes , and the ones that did it would be rewarded with a bonus point , but anyways , this is n't important information .

Response: I woke up today and I {just=>suddenly} {remember=>remembered} that I was doing a presentation about landscapes , and the ones that {do=>did} it {will=>would} {reward=>be rewarded with} a bonus point {=>,} but anyways {=>,} this is n't important information .


Source: I searched my family in the house and there was no one in the home , just me .

Target: I searched for my family in the house and there was no one at home , just me .

Response: I searched {=>for} my family in the house and there was no one {in=>at} {the=>} home , just me .


Source: I get a bit scared so I search them outside in the streets .

Target: I got a bit scared , so I searched for them outside in the streets .

Response: I {get=>got} a bit scared {=>,} so I {search=>searched} {=>for} them outside in the streets .


Source: I did n't knew that a bomb hit on the city and killed almost everyone , now I have to find my parents .

Target: I did n't know that a bomb had hit the city and killed almost everyone . Now I had to find my parents .

Response: I did n't {knew=>know} that a bomb {=>had} hit {on=>} the city and killed almost everyone {, now=>. Now} I {have=>had} to find my parents .


Source: I think the reason why I did n't know about the explosion is because this part where I live is a very poor area and it 's not that beautiful so you ca n't distinguish were does the explosion hit .

Target: I think the reason why I did n't know about the explosion is because this part where I live is a very poor area and it 's not that beautiful , so you ca n't distinguish where the explosion hit .

Response: I think the reason why I did n't know about the explosion is because this part where I live is a very poor area and it 's not that beautiful {=>,} so you ca n't distinguish {were=>where} {does=>} the explosion hit .


Source: Finally in some days I found some neighbors with some food , I was starving to death so I ate a lot .

Target: Finally , after some days , I found some neighbors with some food . I was starving to death , so I ate a lot .

Response: Finally {=>,} {in=>after} some days {=>,} I found some neighbors with some food {,=>.} I was starving to death {=>,} so I ate a lot .


Source: We made some incentives about laws , but it was a total conflict , because the group noticed that some food was missing somehow .

Target: We made some decisions about laws , but there was total conflict , because the group noticed that some food was missing somehow .

Response: We made some {incentives=>decisions} about laws , but {it=>there} was {a=>} total conflict , because the group noticed that some food was missing somehow .


Source: I think that someone drags some of the food on the night while everybody is sleeping .

Target: I think that someone was stealing some of the food in the night while everybody was sleeping .

Response: I think that someone {drags=>was stealing} some of the food {on=>in} the night while everybody {is=>was} sleeping .


Source: So everybody is gon na try to enforce the laws .

Target: So everybody is going to try to enforce the laws .

Response: So everybody is {gon na=>going to} try to enforce the laws .


Source: In the next morning I ate a piece of steak and the group was talking about some creatures that were walking around to kill and eat us .

Target: The next morning , I ate a piece of steak and the group was talking about some creatures that were walking around seeking to kill and eat us .

Response: {In the=>The} next morning {=>,} I ate a piece of steak and the group was talking about some creatures that were walking around {=>seeking} to kill and eat us .


Source: In the night I was thinking about many things just when I heard some noises .

Target: In the night , I was thinking about many things when I heard some noises .

Response: In the night {=>,} I was thinking about many things {just=>} when I heard some noises .


Source: I stalked him and it seemed that this guy has a hump .

Target: I stalked him and it seemed that this guy had a hump .

Response: I stalked him and it seemed that this guy {has=>had} a hump .


Source: I stomp him and when he turned around it was a woman from the group .

Target: I stopped him and when he turned around it was a woman from the group .

Response: I {stomp=>stopped} him and when he turned around it was a woman from the group .


Source: We were talking about this when a dog just came near ; it was adorable just when he converted into a big weird creature .

Target: We were talking about this when a dog came near ; it was adorable , but suddenly he changed into a big weird creature .

Response: We were talking about this when a dog {just=>} came near ; it was adorable {=>, but} {just when=>suddenly} he {converted=>changed} into a big weird creature .


Source: He bit my leg and it hurt a lot , we tried to alert the others but it was too late , it was the group or us .

Target: He bit my leg and it hurt a lot . We tried to alert the others but it was too late ; it was the group or us .

Response: He bit my leg and it hurt a lot {, we=>. We} tried to alert the others but it was too late {,=>;} it was the group or us .


Source: We saw that beast eating our friends and the food .

Target: We saw that beast eating our friends and the food .

Response: We saw that beast eating our friends and the food .


Source: In some ways that she robbed the food in the night and I wake up it was good for my survival .

Target: In some ways , the fact that she stole the food in the night and I woke up was good for my survival .

Response: In some ways {=>,} {=>the fact} that she {robbed=>stole} the food in the night and I {wake=>woke} up {it=>} was good for my survival .


Source: But if I had the opportunity to reverse the trend of how am I going I would not do it because I have to face all of this .

Target: But if I had the opportunity to reverse the trend of how I am going I would not do it , because I have to face all of this .

Response: But if I had the opportunity to reverse the trend of how {am I=>I am} going I would not do it {=>,} because I have to face all of this .


Source: DOING EXCERCISE IS GOOD FOR YOURE HEALTH

Target: DOING EXERCISE IS GOOD FOR YOUR HEALTH

Response: DOING {EXCERCISE=>EXERCISE} IS GOOD FOR {YOURE=>YOUR} HEALTH


Source: Why do you have to exercise ?

Target: Why do you have to exercise ?

Response: Why do you have to exercise ?


Source: What benefits do you obtain while exercising ?

Target: What benefits do you obtain while exercising ?

Response: What benefits do you obtain while exercising ?


Source: Do you know that 75% of people in Mexico , does n't practice any type of exercise , this is a big problem to our society and is the problem number 1 of why Mexico is the country with more obese in the world .

Target: Do you know that 75% of people in Mexico do n't do any type of exercise ? This is a big problem for our society and is the number 1 problem of why Mexico is the country with the most obese people in the world .

Response: Do you know that 75% of people in Mexico {,=>} {does=>do} n't {practice=>do} any type of exercise {, this=>? This} is a big problem {to=>for} our society and is the {problem number 1=>number 1 problem} of why Mexico is the country with {more=>the most} obese {=>people} in the world .


Source: Doing excercise it 's an important thing to do in a healthy and happy life , while you excercise you feel well with you re self an you re body .

Target: Doing exercise is an important thing to do in a healthy and happy life . While you exercise you feel well in yourself and in your body .

Response: Doing {excercise=>exercise} {it 's=>is} an important thing to do in a healthy and happy life {, while=>. While} you {excercise=>exercise} you feel well {with=>in} {you re self=>yourself} {an=>and in} {you re=>your} body .


Source: There 's a lot of benefits that come in hand with doing excercise like reducing or take control of you re weight , it helps you with heart disease , problems with you re body , and also you can make a lot of friends while doing any exercise .

Target: There are a lot of benefits that go hand in hand with doing exercise , like reducing or taking control of your weight , it helps you with heart disease , problems with your body , and also you can make a lot of friends while doing exercise .

Response: There {'s=>are} a lot of benefits that {come=>go hand} in hand with doing {excercise=>exercise ,} like reducing or {take=>taking} control of {you re=>your} weight , it helps you with heart disease , problems with {you re=>your} body , and also you can make a lot of friends while doing {any=>} exercise .


Source: Now days there 's a lot of different types of exercising , you can practice any sport , like soccer , basketball , baseball , or you can simply go to the GYM or practise Crossfit or something like that .

Target: Nowadays , there are a lot of different types of exercise . You can practice any sport , like soccer , basketball , baseball , or you can simply go to the gym or practise Crossfit or something like that .

Response: {Now days=>Nowadays ,} there {'s=>are} a lot of different types of {exercising=>exercise} {, you=>. You} can practice any sport , like soccer , basketball , baseball , or you can simply go to the {GYM=>gym} or practise {Crossfit=>Crossfit} or something like that .


Source: Soccer it 's a great sport where you can make a lot of friends , you can stay fit , but you also need some skills because it 's not easy to controll the ball and dribble you 're rivals on the field .

Target: Soccer is a great sport where you can make a lot of friends , you can stay fit , but you also need some skills because it 's not easy to control the ball and dribble your rivals on the field .

Response: Soccer {it 's=>is} a great sport where you can make a lot of friends , you can stay fit , but you also need some skills because it 's not easy to {controll=>control} the ball and {dribble=>dribble} {you 're=>your} rivals on the field .


Source: I recommend you to practise any sport you like and enjoy every second you spend exercising .

Target: I recommend you practise any sport you like and enjoy every second you spend exercising .

Response: I recommend you {to=>} practise any sport you like and enjoy every second you spend exercising .


Source: Thanks and start now , you wo n't regret it .

Target: Thanks and start now . You wo n't regret it .

Response: Thanks and start now {, you=>. You} wo n't regret it .


Source: Is there any future to public transport , for travelling by car is much more convenient ?

Target: Is there no future for public transport because travelling by car is much more convenient ?

Response: Is there {any=>no} future {to=>for} public transport {,=>} {for=>because} travelling by car is much more convenient ?


Source: Many disagree about the public transport whom are to be disappearing , though we still have to deal with different opinions about increasing in travelling .

Target: Many disagree about whether public transport will disappear , though we still have to deal with different opinions about the increase in travel .

Response: Many disagree about {=>whether} {the=>} public transport {whom=>} {are to be disappearing=>will disappear} , though we still have to deal with different opinions about {=>the} {increasing=>increase} in {travelling=>travel} .


Source: This composition will explain the two different opinions .

Target: This composition will explain the two different opinions .

Response: This composition will explain the two different opinions .


Source: Firstly , the car is more convenient because there is privacy .

Target: Firstly , the car is more convenient because there is privacy .

Response: Firstly , the car is more convenient because there is privacy .


Source: Also , unlike public transport such as buses and underground , you have much more comfort and speed .

Target: Also , unlike public transport such as buses and the underground , you have much more comfort and speed .

Response: Also , unlike public transport such as buses and {=>the} underground , you have much more comfort and speed .


Source: There is a perception that a car can give you the freedom of choice .

Target: There is a perception that a car can give you freedom of choice .

Response: There is a perception that a car can give you {the=>} freedom of choice .


Source: On the website of The Scottish Government ( publication " Young people and transport " ) , a 12 - 14 years old boy explain « - I prefer going in the car , it 's quicker ...

Target: On the website of The Scottish Government ( publication " Young people and transport " ) , a 12 - 14-year - old boy explains " I prefer going in the car , it 's quicker ...

Response: On the website of The Scottish Government ( publication " Young people and transport " ) , a 12 - {14 years=>14-year -} old boy {explain=>explains} {« -=>"} I prefer going in the car , it 's quicker ...


Source: There 's not as many people around you ... I prefer the car because you can listen to music as well . »

Target: There 's not as many people around you ... I prefer the car because you can listen to music as well . "

Response: There 's not as many people around you ... I prefer the car because you can listen to music as well . {»=>"}


Source: Although they are many positive points about private cars , they are also negative ones .

Target: Although there are many positive points about private cars , there are also negative ones .

Response: Although {they=>there} are many positive points about private cars , {they=>there} are also negative ones .


Source: Indeed , cars increases the pollution , you have traffic congestion , and it is very expensive . « - On my wage , even the driving lessons are expensive .

Target: Indeed , cars increase pollution , you have traffic congestion , and it is very expensive . " On my wage , even the driving lessons are expensive .

Response: Indeed , cars {increases=>increase} {the=>} pollution , you have traffic congestion , and it is very expensive . {« -=>"} On my wage , even the driving lessons are expensive .


Source: Then just owning a car and looking after your car , insurance , tax , etc .

Target: Then just owning a car and looking after your car , insurance , tax , etc .

Response: Then just owning a car and looking after your car , insurance , tax , etc .


Source: Obviously it would benefit me if I worked in Edinburgh , but I do n't work in Edinburgh .

Target: Obviously , it would benefit me if I worked in Edinburgh , but I do n't work in Edinburgh .

Response: Obviously {=>,} it would benefit me if I worked in Edinburgh , but I do n't work in Edinburgh .


Source: » says a 17 - 22 years old boy .

Target: " says a 17 - 22-year - old boy .

Response: {»=>"} says a 17 - {22 years=>22-year -} old boy .


Source: Now , secondly , travelling by public transport is cheaper ( we do n't pay any fees on public transport , but also , it is safer ,

Target: Now , secondly , travelling by public transport is cheaper ( we do n't pay any fares on public transport ) , but also , it is safer .

Response: Now , secondly , travelling by public transport is cheaper ( we do n't pay any {fees=>fares} on public transport {=>)} , but also , it is safer {,=>.}


Source: According to The Saigon Times , there are a lot of traffic accidents which occurred to private cars .

Target: According to The Saigon Times , there are a lot of traffic accidents which involve private cars .

Response: According to The Saigon Times , there are a lot of traffic accidents which {occurred to=>involve} private cars .


Source: The main reason is that the cars ' owners are drunk when driving .

Target: The main reason is that the cars ' owners are drunk when driving .

Response: The main reason is that the cars ' owners are drunk when driving .


Source: It is clear that if they took a bus or a taxi when they were drank , it would not have as much accidents .

Target: It is clear that if drivers took a bus or a taxi when they were drunk , there would not be as many accidents .

Response: It is clear that if {they=>drivers} took a bus or a taxi when they were {drank=>drunk} , {it=>there} would not {have=>be} as {much=>many} accidents .


Source: Finally , many developed countries on the world , such as England , America , Canada , Japan and so on , have built a public transport system , so the traffic jam have been decreased .

Target: Finally , many developed countries in the world , such as England , America , Canada , Japan and so on , have built a public transport system , so the traffic jams have decreased .

Response: Finally , many developed countries {on=>in} the world , such as England , America , Canada , Japan and so on , have built a public transport system , so the traffic {jam=>jams} have {been=>} decreased .


Source: As a result , the economy has been increasing .

Target: As a result , the economy has been increasing .

Response: As a result , the economy has been increasing .


Source: From this analysis , it isobvious that travelling by public transport is very important .

Target: From this analysis , it is obvious that travelling by public transport is very important .

Response: From this analysis , it {isobvious=>is obvious} that travelling by public transport is very important .


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Source: Do you agree or disagree " Always telling the truth is considered the most important thing in a relationship " ?

Target: Do you agree or disagree ? " Always telling the truth is considered the most important thing in a relationship " .

Response: Do you agree or disagree {=>?} " Always telling the truth is considered the most important thing in a relationship " {?=>.}


Source: Disagreement on always telling the truth be the most important point in a relationship will be my opinion .

Target: Disagreement on always telling the truth being the most important thing in a relationship will be my opinion .

Response: {Disagreement on=>Disagreement on} always telling the truth {be=>being} the most important {point=>thing} in a relationship {will be my opinion=>will be my opinion} .