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 **Introducing SAXON: The AI Revolution for the UK**
 
-Founded by [Charlie](https://huggingface.co/chaphi) and the (yet-to-be properly established) [Canonist UK](https://x.com/CanonistUK) Organization, SAXON is an ambitious AI project designed to innovate and revolutionize the UK, propelling the country forward at an unprecedented pace. Conceptualized on the Great British PAC's Policy Platform, SAXON aims to create a uniquely British AI model that is well-versed in everything from politics and laws to farming and culture.
+Founded by [Charlie](https://huggingface.co/chaphi) and the (yet-to-be properly established) [Canonist UK](https://x.com/CanonistUK) Organization, SAXON is an ambitious AI project designed to innovate and revolutionize the UK, propelling the country forward at an unprecedented pace. Conceptualized on the [Great British PAC's Policy Platform](https://forum.policiesforpeople.uk/), SAXON aims to create a uniquely British AI model that is well-versed in everything from politics and laws to farming and culture.
 
 **Our Vision:**
-To establish SAXON as the backbone of all AI operations across the UK, transforming industries and enhancing quality of life through advanced AI solutions.
+To establish SAXON (or a successor thereof) as the backbone of most AI operations across the UK as the all-in-one assistant to the British People, transforming industries and enhancing quality of life through advanced AI solutions.
 
 **Our Mission:**
 To develop and implement AI systems that fill gaps in the workforce, automate essential services, and drive technological and economic progress in the UK.
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 - **Infrastructure**: Automated railways and street/road cleaning.
 - **Technology**: Automation of lower-level software development jobs and other repetitive tasks.
 
-**Who we would work with:**
-- **Deepseek** (with intense moderation due to geopolitical considerations)
+**Who we would work with as a Government project:**
+- **Deepseek** (with intense moderation due to geopolitical "considerations")
 - **NVIDIA**
-- **Potentially OpenAI** (subject to further evaluation)
+- **Potentially OpenAI** (subject to further evaluation, probably not)
 - **Xai/Tesla**
 
 **Governance and Oversight:**
 The SAXON project would (if it becomes an official Government-linked-project) be overseen by a UK-based tech/AI firm in collaboration with the UK Government and its various departments and services.
 
-**Next Steps:**
+**The Future:**
 This is just the beginning. Stay tuned for more exciting developments as we embark on this journey to revolutionize the UK with AI.