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-Welcome to the SNOW Team at Nanyang Technological University's LILY Research Centre. The name SNOW stands for "Science NOurishing Wellness," reflecting our commitment to advancing scientific knowledge for better healthcare and well-being. Our team was established in 2023 and is led by [Dr. Xuejiao Zhao](https://zxjwudi.github.io/xuejiaozhao/). Funded by the prestigious Knut and Alice Wallenberg Foundation, Dr. Zhao spearheads a vibrant team of researchers dedicated to AI in Healthcare, Large Language Models, Knowledge Graphs, and Human-Computer Interaction.
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-At SNOW Team, we strive to innovate and create intelligent solutions that bridge the gap between computational models and real-world healthcare applications. Join us as we explore the frontiers of technology to improve lives and foster wellness through science.
+Welcome to the SNOW Team at Nanyang Technological University's LILY Research Centre. Our team was established in 2023 and funded by the prestigious Knut and Alice Wallenberg Foundation. The name SNOW stands for "Science NOurishing Well-being," reflecting our mission to advance scientific knowledge to improve health care and well-being.
 
+At SNOW Team, [Dr. Xuejiao Zhao](https://zxjwudi.github.io/xuejiaozhao/) spearheads a group of vibrant researchers dedicated to innovating and creating intelligent solutions that bridge the gap between computational models and real-world well-being, including aspects of mental, physical, and social welfare. Join us in exploring innovative science and technology to enhance life quality and promote well-being.
 Contact: 2023snowteam@gmail.com