Update README.md

README.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Wan Ju Kang, Eunki Kim, Na Min An, Sangryul Kim, Haemin Choi, Ki Hoon Kwak, Jame
 ## 📄 [Paper (coming soon)](URL)    
 
 Hello, we are a team of researchers based in KAIST AI working on accessible visualization.
-In specific, we compiled a diagram description dataset for the blind and low-vision individuals.
+In specific, we compiled a diagram description dataset for blind and low-vision (BLV) individuals.
 We worked in close cooperation with two schools for the blind, as well as over 30 sighted annotators, and we are grateful for their contribution.
 Check out our preprint [coming soon], and feel free to contact us at soarhigh@kaist.ac.kr.
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ demonstrate their fine-tuning potential in various downstream tasks.
 - SightationReasoning
 
 <img src="https://cdn-uploads.huggingface.co/production/uploads/67a86f66c6f66e2fa5888b41/cNshK4QAdiNMqk7x6J6j7.png" width="100%" height="100%" title="visual_abstract" alt="visual_abstract"></img>
-The key benefit of utilizing sighted user feedback lies in their assessments that are based on solid visual
+The key benefit of utilizing sighted user feedback lies in their assessments, which are based on solid visual
 grounding. The compiled assessments prove an effective training substance for steering VLMs towards more
 accessible descriptions.
 <img src="https://cdn-uploads.huggingface.co/production/uploads/67a86f66c6f66e2fa5888b41/8oYvtq7dtv_Ck-U6OlcAE.png" width="70%" height="70%" title="dimensions_assignment" alt="dimensions_assignment"></img>