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"script_id": "S01",
"region": "Mumbai Gen Z",
"platform": "Reels",
"niche": "personal finance",
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"claim_text": "The hook promises a life-changing trick but takes 0:22 seconds to reveal, by which time viewers might have lost interest",
"timestamp_range": "0:00-0:03",
"evidence": "I've been broke my whole life. Like actually broke. Not the aesthetic broke, the can't-pay-rent broke. And then one day I found this one trick that changed everything.",
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"claim_text": "The script switches abruptly from the personal story to a promotional message at 0:45, disrupting the narrative flow",
"timestamp_range": "0:45-0:55",
"evidence": "The secret? Mutual funds. Just SIPs. I'm serious.",
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},
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"claim_text": "The call-to-action to follow the creator for the list of funds is buried at the end of the script and might be missed by viewers",
"timestamp_range": "1:10-1:15",
"evidence": "If you want to know which funds I use, follow me and I'll post the list tomorrow.",
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"timestamp_range": "1:10-1:15",
"evidence": "If you want to know which funds I use, follow me and I'll post the list tomorrow.",
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},
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"claim_id": "C5",
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"timestamp_range": "1:15-1:20",
"evidence": "Like and save this video before Instagram hides it.",
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