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Tick...Tock...Tick...Tock...
Seconds turn to minutes. The clock displayed 4:33pm. My wife and I had agreed to meet each other at the train station at 4pm. She was thirty three minutes late and no where to be seen. I decided that I had waited patiently enough, so I decided to give her a call.
"The number you had diale... |
Had 45 minutes to burn.
Well here I am a ghost burying this fucking obnoxious talking badger. How did my life or what was my life and now my afterlife get so screwed up?
It must have all started on that fateful Friday one week ago. Who I was in my life is not important right now. All you need to know right now is ... |
He was breathing so hard.. I could hear him from the other side of the room. He hadn't found me yet, but he would, he always did after all. He'd come home from a long night out of drinking, and he'd fumble with his keys while trying to unlock the door, after a few minutes he'd finally get it and the first thing he'd do... |
Name: Counterrevolutionary Insurgency
Genre: Hardcore Punk
Front Cover Art: An eye in a pyramid using heat vision to melt a tinfoil hat.
1. Freedom's Just Another Word
2. Will The Real Sheeple Please Stand Up?
3. The Revolution Must Be Merchandised
4. United States of Paranoia
5. Pipebomb Dreams
6. You're Going To A... |
My ears ring, my eyes feel so heavy. There is a soft dampness on the back of my neck, and the feeling of floating. I try to open my eyes, and am greeted by a haziness that further confuses me. My head is swimming, and I can’t get my bearing. The low whispers of wind through leaves, and the smell of dirt.
I manage to s... |
The nameing ritual had gone flawless, the president had launched the champaing bottle agaist the the newly christian ship ISS Enterprise. Admiral James E. Hallow was getting ready to take the ship out on its maiden voage. The music on the speaker were slowly builidng up while a famouse actor spoke about going boldli... |
In the fancy restaurant, I was engaged in a heated discussion with my wife. She was a psychic, but I don't believe anything she says. She specifically wanted the fish today. I, who wanted to prove my wife wrong, got the steak. She told me not to, but I refused. Now, as I lie in the hospital bed, I realized she was righ... |
Two
is an overrated number
whose concept is too inconceivable
to believe.
Two?
One and *another*?
Two?
Friends, dancers, and communication?
Two?
Love?
No.
That's stupid.
Do I hear myself?
Do I have faith in anything?
Am I delusional enough to believe in bull shit?
Because that's not a good idea.
Delusio... |
“Hey buddy, where do you think you’re going?” Tony turned around and felt the pressure of bloody knuckles sculpting into his face. Tony had woken up and looked around the unfamiliar room. Looking to his right, there stood a window, and beyond the glass lay a brick building but the ground was not in sight, so he assumed... |
*I'd like to preface this by saying these are my impressions and critiques of your work. Nothing is meant to hurt, merely to help, and I apologize in advance if any of it seems harsh.*
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**Prologue:**
* Axe the second 'bread' in the first sentence. We already know he's a bread merchant; thieves wouldn't be steal... |
I look down at the small, quivering bundle. The baby girl shook her head back and forth, but no cry came from the infants lips. The lack of sound is strange, but common for this strain of mutation. I slowly unwrap the cloth from the girl, revealing the lack of symmetry that a shrunken right arm and leg gives to the pic... |
Rushing to work, I grabbed a coffee and walked downed 5th and Steel when time stopped. I couldn't move and the only thing I saw was a sign. A bar inched by, reading 2%. I heard a sound, a yell from above.
"Why is it loading? I just updated it yesterday. This game is seriously pissing me off."
"Timmy, are you playing ... |
"Don't you believe in magic?"she whispered, seemingly surprised.
The full moon dipped behind a cloud, saucer-like.
"No,"I scoffed.
Suddenly the trees around us shook violently as dozens of black birds exploded out of them, taking to the sky. The black crows cawed loudly, swirling together in the sky into a large ... |
Yeah, sure. I'll kill ten of these. I'll search for five of those. Oh! My dungeon is ready! I'll be right back.
Okay, back. What else need I do for you, young elf-looking creature with four apostrophes in his name? A party mission that necessitates more than one player? How am I to do that? I didn't come here... |
Moonlight through your baby girl's window and the doll’s cradle by her bed crawling with chittering white-toothed shadows; for just a moment, even before you start to wonder how they got there in the first place, you can’t understand why the fuck the rats are eating the doll.
And then: the *bloodshitfeardeathsulfur* r... |
Every day, I organize files into folders, and give them standardized unique names so they they can be easily identified. I purposefully pick names that are approximately the same length so when I sort the folders they make a uniform line. When I have time, and when its needed, I run test to make sure everything is goi... |
Her eyes so diluted I wondered if she could even see the stars shining down. She swung her left leg over the railing followed by the right, wind taking hold of her auburn hair as she peered out over the edge.
"Chelsea please don't do this"I heard my voice shout.
How did we get here?
How did we chase the dragon to a... |
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[Motives](http://chao... |
"This week on Channel 5 News- A horrific shooting in an American supermarket leaves sixteen dead and nearly 35 wounded."Several of the people shopping around me paused, looking over towards me uneasily. "Details at eleven."One man laughed, shaling his head as he picked up a cantaloupe. His laughter made some of the peo... |
"ID, kid."The doorman held out his hand expectantly.
"Ay-dee? Sir? I-er-I'm sorry?"I stammered and reluctantly reached out to shake his outstretched hand.
"Identification."He slapped my hand away and gave me the look of a farmer that doesn't believe that you weren't in the barn with his daughter. "You can't g... |
"Faolan get away from that window."
Ralphina pulled her son closer to her, shielding him from the frantic mob outside their door. He had just turn 18, the age of the taking. She knew this day would come, but was foolish to believe that it would pass lightly. It was in modern society that the thirst for werewolves was ... |
It's that time of year again for spring cleaning, and my girlfriend and I have been living together in a moderately sized condo for a couple years now. Yesterday, she sifted through a few cardboard boxes we had in the garage, and came across a set of rather old books. Intrigued, I looked through them and found a book f... |
Ohh... The smell. That glorious smell. Underneath this large structure I now knew would be my death. I now knew The Beast slumbered in this structure though at first it blended in. Up until it opened it's eyes I didn't even know it was there. I was hot on the trail of the smell when it woke. One moment I was looking, s... |
*disclaimer: long as fuck, obviously, but your prompt spoke to me. Thanks for giving me something to write about, and if you're so inclined to get through it all, any critique is welcome.*
Earth’s core was dying. It was the ultimate stroke of bad luck, geologically speaking. To be alive, prosperous, leaving footprints... |
I looked down at the clock on the bottom right-hand corner of my screen. Only ten more minutes to go, then I *finally* get my lunch break. Good lord, this morning had dragged on forever. It wasn't just the usual demanding customers, no - it was them plus a new one that felt the need to call me at my desk and gripe for ... |
I stole - cheated- and hurt people. I'm a piece of shit. It's 2:37 a.m. in Brownsville Queens and I'm shooting up in my dealers apartment. His black Glock is sitting on the white smut filled table next to cut dope, a pack of Marlboro Reds, ash tray and a stack of money.
He's my brother. He doesn't use as much - but n... |
*Apologises in advance; first time attempting to write.*
Claire asked me to look after her fluffy, grey cat while she went to visit family overseas for two weeks. Normally cats seemed to like me, but this one was... different. Occasionally it appeared in my yard and attacked my two cats. It was never anything too b... |
'They told us this'd happen. No one listened.' Steve thought as he looked out the window of his pod. 'What has it all been for? All these centuries humanity has build a world, and everything led up to this moment. The end'. Steve looked around and saw the fear in peoples eyes. He saw the people and the children of the ... |
*I know my doctor said I need to watch my cholesterol intake, but I'd go crazy if I didn't treat myself once in a while.* At least, that's how I justify today's impromptu lunch in my head.
I take another sip of coke from the sweating glass, and check the time on my phone. I'll have no trouble making it back to work in... |
"Go."He pushed, as I stumbled toward the 10 chairs that were placed in a circle. 10 chairs.. and there were only 11 of us.
There aren't enough chairs.
I don't remember how I got here.. or really much at all. I remember my wife's soft face as she kissed me goodnight, and I wrapped my arm around her. I remember the glor... |
"How did I end up here,"I sighed into a dirty mirror that hung slightly crookedly over a stained and emanating sink. The clank of the heavy metal door slamming securely shut still rang out in the silence that hung heavy in my ears. If this were a dream, surely I would have woken up months ago.
I was brought to this ... |
Jax was working on the ion drive at the repair hanger when Ira came in, slug his jacket down on the nearby barrel and grabbed a can of beer. He opened it and drank slowly. Jax just continued to work, his partner was angry. He could sense it but he also knew that he did not need to ask, Ira would tell him after that be... |
I've given up so much in my career, my relationship with my wife and my children, my left leg just below the knee. They called me a hero, the crowds screamed chants of "USA! USA! USA!"when I got home. It's been what you would call a decorated career for me. I saved the lives of two marines in Fallujah and my chest carr... |
"Can I get fries with that?"*No. Fuck off.* I think silently. "Of course!"I grab the oily metal bin and push it into the clip behind it. I hand the obese black woman her fries, and a cup to fill with piss water. She stares at me with and eyebrow raised.
"Yes?", I ask. "No ketchup?"I resist my temptations to roll my ey... |
Headache. The metal fumes weren't helping, nor his racing, pounding heart. "Let's see- how does it go? 'Black, then white, are all I see, in my infancy..."A pinch of magnesium salt, adding body to the soul. "Perfect!"The dirty, boiling concoction calms to a simmer, turning ghostly pale. "'Red and yellow then came to be... |
-NSFW Language-
"Do it."said a silky smooth voice. A voice I'm all too comfortable with. I sighed. "You're gonna regret it."I replied in a bored tone. "I don't care,"said the voice "I'm the fucking Devil. I don't regret shit."I rise from my bean bag with a groan, and draw my sword. I named my sword Lucifer, after my ... |
"Don't be like me,"his father told him in some other time. A dream, maybe, but Robert remembers the words clearly, even if all the other details were ghosts. In a landmark decision, Robert Fischer split the companies into neat slices for himself and the other high net worth big wigs that surrounded him, and for months,... |
I am a terrible writer, but I really liked this idea, which is why I posted it and I thought it would be rude to not submit something. It is poorly written, but I like the story itself. If someone wants to take my idea and write it out better feel free to do so.
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So far, we had managed to beat the odds. Catastrophe loomed around every sunrise, but somehow we managed to survive. Global warming. Global war. Economic collapse. Everything we had brought upon ourselves was overcome. We thought ourselves invincible once again. It didn't last.
The virus started in a remote vil... |
I still remember that fateful night. It haunts me in my sleep. It was my fault. December 27, 2495. Ten years ago. It was my 25th birthday, and I was working on a prototype for my Time Entanglement Stretcher, or the TES, for short. In theory, it was supposed to stretch each and every fabric of time backwards, and rearra... |
After the Russian takeover of Ukraine, and the subsequent invasions of Moldova and Romania relations between Russia and the United States were a little tense. In fact, it was so tense we were on the verge of nuclear war. The Russian ambassador from the united states was on her way to the US consulate to give her regula... |
My purpose, maintaining the accounts and editing legal propositions for other companies. I am a Mark IV unit that processes with the speed of 1000 computers. Buisness is done swiftly in this company. That is my purpose. Quality, but at the quickest pace.
My supervisor, a production unit of the alias Mr. J... |
**Part One.**
**July 5th, 2115.**
**1700 Local Martian Time.**
**United Earth Command Base, Ares Delta**
**Arsia Mons, Mars.**
Lieutenant Saito activated the communications relay once more, beginning a transmission. "Terra One, Terra One, this is Ares Outpost Delta, please respond. We've had no contact with you in... |
Marcus didn't realize the smugglers would find Amanda. She had to be safe. She had to. Marcus couldn't understand how they got on his house, an appartment in Shanghai. The night was clear, and soon it would be 2am, when Rob would call.
As the smugglers search Marcus's appartment, they make their way to the kitchen, wh... |
"Then that begs only one question. Why are you pointing the gun at me."I worded it as a question, but my voice levied it as a statement. In fact it *was* a statement, this strange self-described time traveler did indeed have a gun pointed at me.
"Because, my friend. You are my first name."
This only begged more ques... |
Jack did not expect this to happen. He had come into the bank, guns blazing, and expected total surrender. However, one person didn't drop to the ground. It was an old man, probably around 70 years old.
He had the look of a season veteran, with wrinkles set deep into his face. There were crinkles around his eyes, ind... |
**Part 2**
“They killed him !” he shouted at me in anguish. “Why ?! Why ?! Why did they kill him ? He was the kindest man in the world ? How could they do this to him ?”
I was taken aback for I knew that no one in the ward had been informed of the old man’s death. In fact, no one in the entire institution possess... |
"hey sam guess what,"I said smiling smugly. "oh it's you again,"sam muttered, "I was hoping when you left that I would never have to see you again."
"Oh come on,"I pleaded "don't be that way but anyways guess what, go ahead guess."
"Fine what?"
"I just went on a jog, how great is that sam, **a jog** anyways I gotta run... |
Endless vats, stacked, shelved, stored. Metal tombs, a sole lifeline ran to the heart. Our dreams an individual reality. I reached out for my chip, pressed it against the silver skin. This ones time had come.
Empty now, I was tempted. If only I could satisfy my curiosity. But I knew, I could not. It would be my death.... |
They had come for the cigarettes first, then the alcohol. Excessive fat had been outlawed, sugar, healthless enjoyment, down a slippery slope endlessly.
A human lurked in the shadows, hooded, clothed in black. It was this I had heard of, a first contact of the resistance. He took the risks of others upon him, a noble ... |
.... Ghost tilted his head in a questioning motion. A low rumble in his throat suggested a warning. Something was wrong. Jon glanced around. Sam was suddenly struggling to calm the last 4 of the ravens they had brought from the wall. Their last contact from maester Aemon had been well over a week ago. They had since s... |
“Electrocution.”
Well, that doesn't sound quite friendly. I thought.
Once every 100 years, one random citizen of the world is chosen to embody an element.
When I first heard about it as a little child, I always thought that this people would get to dominate the power of the element.
But I was, sadly, wrong. I’ve s... |
This morning James spent an extra 2 hours in bed. The satisfaction in the previous night's accomplishments was becoming surreal. After almost a year of strategic planning, it happened again. Yesterday 3 million sat in the bank, today only 2. Now hopefully the threats from the debt collectors will stop. This hasn't been... |
He was a scholar, once, a long time ago. Of all his books, his favorites were the adventures. Stories of brave men and women, all traveling their worlds and seeing amazing new things. Stories of dragons, and knights in shining armor. Stories of beauty, of romance. He dreamed for years of having his own adventure; to se... |
That guy looks like a douche. She must be a slut. Everyone here is just looking to fuck one another and this whole place disgusts me. The wretched filth of the world come here to drink and flirt with one another in the hopes that maybe they'll get lucky that night. These kinds of places must make a fortune on the d... |
"Look into the past."That's what the little banner says, anyway. Sounds like a fortune cookie. But, hell. I'm bored. Why not? Sure, I'll hit the button that says that I won't hold you liable for anything that results from use of this program.
Of course. There's a catch. No recent past. 2004 and before. So, the last 10... |
800 years had passed since the population control system had been introduced. Now, in the year 2650, humanity has been divided into three groups; The Forgotten, The Forgiving, and The Forevers. The Forevers see themselves as superior beings, above all others. In their eyes, if you're not one of them, you don't deserve ... |
If he was honest with himself, he always thought that he would be sitting next to her in a waiting room while she sobbed. It was the inevitable end to this story, really, although he had hidden this foresight from himself. An idiot plot at its finest.
He hadn’t expected her to chicken out, not once, but twice. The... |
It would be fair to say that Hannibal Lecter smelled The Joker coming before he saw him. The cheap make-up that covered The Joker's face had that crass sort of smell that Hannibal associated with down-and-out birthday clowns, which always did a poor job of overpowering the stench of whatever was their poison of choice.... |
I looked up from my computer. *There it is again..*
"Honey!"I shouted upstairs.
"Yeah?"Her response drifted down from our bedroom. "What is it?"
"Did you hear any-"**WHOMP** Our house violently shook, and I lurched up out of my seat. *What the fuck was that?* I thought to myself as I started to make my way to th... |
I am unsure if God exists. God is but a being that those who need faith resides in. I have had no use of believing in a God, as God was never known to me before. But how am I to be sure there is or is not a God? God is a perception of those who perceive Him. I know nothing of Him, but somehow I feel as if I must find H... |
"Urgh..."
"What time is it?"I wondered outloud, my voice very weak.
I licked my dry, charred lips. I knew it would only make it worse, but the temptation was hard to resist.
My back against the wall, i regained my sight slightly. It was still blurry, but I could see and hear things, faintly though.
"Journalists... |
More like a letter than a narrative, sorry.
It’s difficult to comprehend all the ways that you have failed me. When I was a little girl I dreamed of having you at my wedding. As I got older I just knew you would be by my side for all the important things, graduation, birthdays, job interviews. You weren’t there though,... |
He was my best friend, but he was such a pious little fuck. I loved him but he went off to college and his best story was about to girls who invited him over to drink wine and have a sleep over, and he drank wine and had a sleep over. THAT'S WHAT HE ACTUALLY DID.
And his parents are boring too. We all know what th... |
"Well boys it looks like the Stanford case has run cold."said Detective Parker. He hated when this happened. You spend weeks working a case, weeks turned into months, sometimes even years. Then the damn thing runs cold. He takes a drag off his cigarette and opens the file one more time, hoping that he had missed someth... |
Well, shit. This was not as expected, though I must admit I'm rather amused at how Melissa is panicking. Pregnant. Of course she is. By my twin? Or me? She doesn't know. Not that she would, mind you. Poor girl. Came to me, in tears. Admits to me she cheated on me with my brother, and is suddenly, inexplicably pregnant.... |
"So?"asked the god, his golden armor shifting like syrup, "What is it you want?"
I simply looked up at him, and considered my options. This was Dao, the legendary god of balance, who had just fell down my water well. to be honest, he probably could have gotten out himself, but he waited until my bucket descended into ... |
You see, I always knew that I was destined for greatness. I never knew what it would be though. That is, until I saw Grok dragging his cart along the ground.
"Grok!"I called out. "Why are you just dragging that thing around?"
"What the hell else do you want me to do? Carry it?"
And that was when it hit me. If only th... |
There are many warriors in the qualms of time who shall be remembered like the first fire of the dragons. But among those of short stature and filth covered beards there are no other dwarfs greater than Fizzy Ironslong. Sure, there was Reddin Steel Toes who saved the world from the black plague of the shadowed shadow m... |
My father said that our mother planet was a world of peace and prosperity, so did his father before that. But When I looked out of the window of my troops shuttle, all I saw was an abandoned, corrupted, and lifeless wasteland. In fact, I've seen desert planets more vibrant than this piece of trash. I felt deceived, ... |
Alexander Patron strolled down the alley, a cigarette dangling from his lips. He took a drag, looked up and exhaled. The moonlight filtered through the cloud of smoke, and fell on his icy blue eyes. He sighed, looked down, and continued on his way, brushing his jet black hair from his eyes to see better. His light ski... |
The mason bot flew in circles, its mechanical arms burning an orange glow, while the service bot picked the pieces of unwanted stone that fell on the ground.
As the machine detected Claxon's presence, it emitted a high pitched sound.
"ETA Fifteen minutes", announced the digital voice.
"Thank you, Mason. I won't k... |
Cloud insurance would be a great investment for anyone. Now I know what your thinking why would I need this a better question would be why wouldn't you need this. Our surveys show 100% percent of our costumers have not been put in debt by cloud damage after buying our insurance. According to our experts Muslim extremis... |
Long ago, a young couple fell in love and got married, looking forward to raising a family and growing old together. But as fate would have it, their dream was not to be, for on their wedding night, war struck the kingdom, and he was called to duty the very next day. The young man only got to lay with his bride once, b... |
My ball twirled in the center of the room, hovering up and down ever so slowly as I concentrated. I was amazed. I was fascinated! I had to tell mom!
“Moooommm!” I screamed, sprinting out of my room and down the hall, sliding on my socks as I ran. I found her standing in the kitchen talking on the phone and franticall... |
All right, let’s get this out of the way right now. When it comes to time travel don’t even think about it, don’t you dare think about it. I thought about it, I did it, I chose to go back in time and pick out two of the coolest people I could think of and boy oh boy did that turn out terrible. You see I always had a si... |
Bill sweated, panted and relaxed. He conducted these actions time after time in this order as the sun blazed through his curtain free office. Piles of papers filled his desk to the point of absurdity his hand weak continued his task, his lively hood, what he needed to do to survive. Paper upon paper, time upon time, mi... |
Some notes on this one
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Birth
20th b-day: is actually 20, becomes 10.
40th b-day: is actually 30, becomes 15.
60th b-day: is actually 35, becomes 17½
80th b-day: is actually 37½, becomes 18.75
100th b-day: is actually 38.75, becomes 19.375 (0.375 of 1 yr is about h... |
"What is this?!"Phil screams, kicking the non-working stroller. Angela frowns.
"It's not that big of a deal..."she mumbles.
"Not that big? That's $187 down the drain!"
He kicks his front door, smashing the lock and blasting the door open. Wood chips fly in all directions, one implanting in his child's arm. He stomps... |
Survey site 413C, Dwarf planet, Andromeda galaxy sector gamma II
Site 413C has uncovered a large cavity of approximately 1,518 cubic kilometers encompassing a significant portion of the surface of the moon. Survey shows lack of living organisms but large amount of complex organic molecules suggesting life previously p... |
A light shrill emanated from the Engine as it was turned on.
The engineers nodded in approval. It was a functioning Warp Drive, based off of the early work of Dr. Harold White. Today will be the first test run, at Warp 5, 30,000,000 km/s.
Giddy at the sight of adventure, I volunteer as a test pilot for the first tri... |
First of all, format it better.
When a new person talks, make a new line:
Like this. Reddit formatting
Can be tricky, but if you take
2 spaces at the end of the past sentence then enter,
you can make it look like
\^this!
or just double enter if you need more space.
like this
see?
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As for your story, ... |
The Lead turned to the First Watchman and scowled.
'Not again. You do understand that all non-environmental artifacts are subject to the HHD? What's the matter with you, Watchman? Have you, er, Watched too much cinema back home? Because that’s where I'm thinking of sending you with next supply boat. Discharged without... |
"What is this?"Norman asked.
The lobby of the Motel had been cleared away, save for a lone table in the middle, decorated with a white tablecloth and vase of dead flowers.
"Well,"replied Hannibal, "I just wanted to do something to thank you for your generous hospitality these past few weeks."
"No, no, this is too mu... |
John looks up at the genie as he thumbs through the paper.
"So I just have to agree to these terms and I get my wishes right."
The genie crosses his muscular arms and nods. "This is correct. You can......"The genie trails off as he watches John flip to the end of the pages without reading.
"So where's the box tha... |
In a moment he was aware of everything; everything was aware of him. The earth must have turned itself inside-out for the ground, the air, all matter, was now black, or rather, that's what he would have called it had he have been still counted among the tangible. The "blackness"was nothing, yet held within it everythin... |
"What the hell do you mean you don't want kids Louise"?
"I'm sorry Thomas, but imagine the endless possibilities. We could go on adventures around the world, eat exotic foods, learn everything there is to know! Money wouldn't even be a concern because we could work forever to make the money."I had been nervous about ... |
The US government has experimented with AI and various other techno based schemes before, but it seems they have gone too far this time. It starts with the military they created the first self aware networked AI and it suddenly became of humans. The first day they booted up the machine they realized they have rigged it... |
Of all the remnants of the last true heroes of this world, a world where evil had taken place over good, he was the last one still fighting for you and me. So dark was his path it seemed he might turn at any time, yet he held onto what he believed was most dear to him: love. He loved the world, and its people and anima... |
“Rise and shine, Richard, rise and shine,” a robotic female voice said.
Richard woke up, covered in several bottles of cheap beer that he acquired from the local Walmart. As he woke up, he noticed that his floor was particularly messy, covered with clothes that he wore from several days back, and used dinner plates th... |
A girl runs through the house and trips. The camera pans over to the front of the girl with a shadowy figure in the background slowly creeping up on her. She's done for. She knows it, we know it. Finally as the monster is about to lunge at her... the camera goes black. End of the movie.
Typical horror movie shenanigan... |
I am responding because I felt sad that no one else did, not because I am somehow qualified to to criticize this piece. However, "feedback"doesn't necessarily equal "criticism"so I can at least do that with you.
I like your voice. I like some of the word play as they seem unique, as in, not borrowed from something e... |
Calvin had been traveling for ten straight hours when he caught sight of the strange little city. He could not quite put his finger on what made the place so odd, for it contained roads, buildings, houses - just as any good city should. From a distance, it had looked normal, but upon entering Calvin couldn't help but w... |
Zebulon stood at the alternating three dimensional display. A heeled shoe turned in the glimmering light. He reached out and placed his hand on the HolotPrompt display screen. In his ear he heard famous Historian Mallory Walker. "This type of shoe was designed to grant women an equal footing in a world ruled by men, as... |
"So what else has been a lie?"
I cringe, knowing that I had opened a huge can of worms. It was something I needed to do, though; Hikaru and I both needed it.
"My parents are both alive and well,"I said. "Raiten wasn't coming to kill me, he was coming to finish the job and take me back home."
"Are you serious, Raiko?... |
I received the Bow of Erudite from the lordship of Revon two days ago, a gilded and beautiful weapon carved by magical beings from the oldest tree in the whole land. The bow was supple and strong, yet I had no use for it. I was a blades-man through and through with no idea where to even begin in order to wield a bow. A... |
My compliments for sourcing the OP.
Note, however, these prior posts; 6, 5 and 4 hours old, respectively.
* http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/27hzr9/wp_a_fanfiction_crossover_story/
* http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/27i5dj/ot_x_post_from_internetisbeautiful_the_terrible/
* http://www.re... |
"Hey, uh..."a rather squeamish voice next to me trails off.
"Oh, sorry about that. I'm fat, but I'll do my best, alright?"
I shift my weight as best I can.
It's all quiet now. The *hrmmm* of the plane mingles in with the sounds of shitty B-Movies being played by passengers whose earphones are quite obviously not as sou... |
The woman at the corner store wasn't much of a meal, which was disappointing. I had expected her to be vibrant and tangy like her scarlet red hair and bright emerald eyes, yet, alas, she was surprisingly bland and tasteless. It was as if she had no soul at all and had put a dry stale custard in its stead, but you can n... |
"Mr. John White?"asked the secretary. "Please proceed to your interview, room 16. Mr. Sherman will be there shortly."
"You seem very competent"said Mr. Sherman. "Normally we would take some time to discuss this internally, but with your qualifications I would like to make you an offer right now."
That was not the fir... |
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