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This summary could flow a little better and not be broken up into so many little sentences.
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Use complete sentences, not a string of fragments.
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The summary could be written better so it flows nicely.
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Neighbor was feeding it. Also "what do" makes no sense.
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The summary unnecessarily adds a second sentence in that basically just rephrases what the first sentence stated.
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The summary could be written so it flows a little better.
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The grammar could be better in this summary.
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This is a run-on sentence and could have been written better.
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This is all jumbled up and makes very little sense. e.g. "nice favored stepson"
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Remove "The text contains a situation in which". The comment is eating him up and is he overthinking it
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This is not very well written. It can be taken out of context easily.
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This is not coherent and makes very little sense. Confusing.
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The summary could be written more fluently and in a complete sentence.
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Second sentence isn't clear
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The summary could be reworded so it flows a little better.
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This is not a good summary. It is all over the place and it does not really tie anything together.
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This summary could be written so it flows a little better.
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The summary would have been perfect if it was well constructed in the right order if event happenings
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The switch from third person to first person between the two sentences is a bit confusing.
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This summary does well at condensing the post, but it doesn’t flow naturally.
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The first sentence in the summary should be reworded to make better sense. It reads like the other guy was cheating on his ex wife when really like it was the user’s ex wife.
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This is accurate, but I think it is oddly written
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The summary has repetitiveness and poor grammar so it should be rewritten to flow better.
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The summary is not written in the same style as the post. The summary is in third person.
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This summary is pretty concise about the topic, but I would word it in a better way to make it flow more naturally.
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This summary is made up of choppy sentence fragments.
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The summary is somewhat incoherent; the poster shared a story about how when they were little, they got bit by a dog and lied about it. They are asking other people what lies they have told their parents when they were young that their parents still believe to be true.
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The summary covers the main ideas in the post but could be written more fluently.
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This summary should just add the word “and” where the comma is so it flows better.
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The summary is very incoherent and mixes up the poster and the guy they punched.
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This description isn't coherent. It ends in the middle of a sentence, and gives no context as to what's really going on.
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The summary is somewhat incoherent; the poster wants to do something nice for their girlfriend on her birthday. She will be working on her birthday, so they have no idea what they can do and are asking for advice.
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The way this summary is written doesn’t flow that well, but it does capture the purpose of the post.
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The wording could be improved
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The second person sentence feels odd in the context of a summary of the post.
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There's room to use complete sentecnes.
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The summary is written in a confusing way with a lot of ideas crammed together in one sentence.
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This summary should use less commas and be broken up into two sentences so it flows a little better.
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The sentence is kind of run on with the the part after the comma not making much sense. Should be a spar ate sentence with more clarity.
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This is extremely confusing and it doesn't tell a story on its own.
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The summary could be phrased a bit better but that’s minor and doesn’t affect the understanding of it.
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This is hard to read and follow, it needs to be restructured and also include that she broke up with the guy.
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The summary is not very coherent; the poster is buying a new smartphone and is asking Reddit what they objectively think is the best smartphone on the market currently.
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Other than being a little clunky syntactically, it captures the author's sentiment well. However, I would mention that the author's discomfort stem from his worry as to why his fiancee is still talking to her ex.
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Remove "The text is a question from"
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Grammatically this summary could be a bit better about using capital letters.
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The summary sums up the situation well but the flow could use some work. The use of partner is repetitive.
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This is not written correctly. "Doesn't affect" should be "affects".
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The summary could be rewritten to flow better instead of commas separating main points.
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This summary covers the details pretty well but it’s written in an unnatural way.
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The sentence "Can you help?" feels odd and rather out of place in the context of a summary.
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The summary could grammatically flow better.
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This summary could be rewritten in a way that make it easier to understand the situation.
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The last sentence is unclear and hard to follow.
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This summary is written in a way that’s not easy to read.
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The beginning of the summary is phrased in a very confusing way.
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This is confusing the way that it was written, especially the first sentence.
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It needs more detail, better sentence structure and some things can be left out.
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The last two sentences seem weird since they seem redundant.
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This is an incomplete sentence, so cannot stand alone
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This summary is not well composed
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Thisn't isn't super coherent. Without the full context, saying 'boiling chick peas creates gas' doesn't make sense.
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Husband has given veto power is a confusing statement.
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The summary is a bit disjointed at the end.
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This is a very long, run-on sentence. This could have been written much better.
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This is a good summary that mentions all the key points, but "What do" is not a valid sentence.
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The summary covers the main points but should be written in better grammatical form to make it easy to read.
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The summary is written in the third person, while the original text is in the first person.
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The summary is too disjointed.
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Uses sentence fragments to fit everything in. Cover just the main points, but with complete sentences
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The main ideas are in the summary but it is broken up weirdly and doesn’t read properly.
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The summary is kind of disjointed.
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The summary could be written more fluently.
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The second sentence in the summary should be broken up into two separate sentences and the two ideas there do not make much sense when paired together.
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This is not grammatically correct and it could have been written without the profanity.
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This focuses on the wrong details ang gets things in the wrong order.
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The summary doesn't make it clear who he/his being referred to is.
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The first sentence in the summary could be phrased a bit better.
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The summary should be written to be more fluent and not so broken up by too many sentences.
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This summary does pretty well at getting the details of the post but the way it’s written doesn’t sound naturally.
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The summary could be rewritten so it flows a little better and is easier to comprehend.
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The summary could be written in a proper sentence to make it flow better.
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The first sentence does not match the style of the passage.
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This summary should be split into two sentences so that it reads easier.
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It's cut off
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"The text discusses" is a clunky beginning. Not so much too much time with the friends as not enough time with him.
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The summary is not very coherent.
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This summary contains most of the important information from the passage but is hard to follow.
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This is not written well since it implies the girlfriend flipped out.
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The wording in the summary’s sentence is confusing. It should be split up into a couple of sentences so it’s easier to understand.
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This could be more clearly written.
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This summary could be rewritten in better sentence format so it flows a little better.
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This summary could flow a little better. The comma is misplaced and should have been a period.
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The end part of this summary could be rephrased to just say that the relationship seems one-sided because she doesn’t reciprocate favors.
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The first part of the summary seems like its written in third person, while the second is in first.
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The sentence structure in the summary feels too simplistic.
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The use of "it" grammatically references the last instance, ex., etc. given. This makes the summary misleading as both instances are actually April Fools jokes. With the former a retaliation for the latter.
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Doesn't read right-I found out my significant other slept with a friend of his before he met me. I've met her and always had a feeling she didn't like me. This is getting to me. (this sounds better)
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The first sentence in the summary is a bit confusing so it could be rewritten for better understanding.
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The summary is a bit disjointed and incoherent by itself.
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