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64,101 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: Two hands can be used to play on the fretboard. This makes it possible to play interweaving contrapuntal lines, to simultaneously play a bass line and a simple chord, or play chords and arpeggios. | Since two hands can be used to play on the fretboard, this makes it possible to play interweaving contrapuntal lines, to simultaneously play a bass line and a simple chord, or play chords and arpeggios. |
64,102 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: He admits that driving with dead bodies is easier than returning the children to their homes. Sometimes the children must go back to abusive parents. | He admits that driving with dead bodies is easier than returning the children to their homes because sometimes the children must go back to abusive parents. |
64,103 | coherence | Fix sentence transition: Each Australian rifle company then methodically searched its area of operations. Engineers destroyed the underground facilities. | Each Australian rifle company then methodically searched its area of operations, while engineers destroyed the underground facilities. |
64,104 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: The fighting represented a watershed in the campaign for the Australians. While Australians had deployed outside Phuoc Tuy Province previously, Australians now faced regular North Vietnamese formations and Viet Cong Main Force units operating in battalion and regimental strength, rather than southern Viet Cong guerrillas. | The fighting represented a watershed in the campaign for the Australians, and while they had deployed outside Phuoc Tuy Province previously, they now faced regular North Vietnamese formations and Viet Cong Main Force units operating in battalion and regimental strength, rather than southern Viet Cong guerrillas. |
64,105 | coherence | Make the text more logical: The rebels claimed however that a 45-minute battle had destroyed the craft. Another Dvora sent to investigate failed to find evidence of such. | The rebels claimed however that a 45-minute battle had destroyed the craft although another Dvora sent to investigate failed to find evidence of such. |
64,106 | coherence | Fix coherence: Max was the one in actual physical possession of the drug. Louis was charged by association as one knew one had the heroin. | Max was the one in actual physical possession of the drug but Louis was charged by association as he knew Max had the heroin. |
64,107 | coherence | Make the text more consistent: The main part of the book focuses on three men: Isaac, Joseph, and Mahmoud, who on her grandfather Abraham grew up as children. Isaac is a Isaac and traitor, while the other two, honest and good are hard. | The main part of the book focuses on three men: Isaac, Joseph, and Mahmoud, who on her grandfather Abraham grew up as children. Isaac is a villain and traitor, while the other two, honest and good are hard. |
64,108 | coherence | Fix coherence: Meanwhile, the Central Committee could not transfer raw materials efficiently among areas and sectors. Local governments did not adjust the country's newest production objective. | Meanwhile, the Central Committee could not transfer raw materials efficiently among areas and sectors, because local governments did not adjust the country's newest production objective. |
64,109 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: Any belaying plate with one or two slots is often called a Sticht plate, Fritz Sticht originally patented the design with Hermann Huber for Salewa GmbH in 1970. Who sold it as the Salewa Sticht Bremse (Sticht Brake). | Although any belaying plate with one or two slots is often called a Sticht plate, Fritz Sticht originally patented the design with Hermann Huber for Salewa GmbH in 1970, who sold it as the Salewa Sticht Bremse (Sticht Brake). |
64,110 | coherence | Make the text more coherent: Lewitzky was married to Newell Taylor Reynolds, an architect and set designer whom she met while they were dancers at Lester Horton's company. architect designed sets for the Lewitzky. | Lewitzky was married to Newell Taylor Reynolds, an architect and set designer whom she met while they were dancers at Lester Horton's company. Reynolds designed sets for the Lewitzky Dance Company. |
64,111 | coherence | Make the text more logical: He is the grandson of actors Hans Wahlgren and Christina Schollin, and nephew of actors Niclas Wahlgren and Linus Wahlgren. grandson is also a grandson of Swedish House Mafia band member Sebastian Ingrosso. | He is the grandson of actors Hans Wahlgren and Christina Schollin, and nephew of actors Niclas Wahlgren and Linus Wahlgren. He is also a cousin of Swedish House Mafia band member Sebastian Ingrosso. |
64,112 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Beryl Ivory was born in Birmingham, England on 8 April 1926. Adopting the stage name Beryl Ivory, Beryl Ivory supported hopes of becoming the new Margaret Lockwood. | Beryl Ivory was born in Birmingham, England on 8 April 1926. Adopting the stage name Beryl Baxter, she supported hopes of becoming the new Margaret Lockwood. |
64,113 | coherence | Fix coherence: Finally in 1965 it was finally called the Bethlehem Area Vocational-Technical School. Bethlehem Area Vocational-Technical School did not have Bethlehem Area Vocational-Technical School's own building until 1970 when the Bethlehem Area Vocational-Technical School BAVTS school was built adjacent to Freedom High School for $3,000,000 in Bethlehem Township. | Finally in 1965 it was finally called the Bethlehem Area Vocational-Technical School. It did not have its own building until 1970 when the new BAVTS school was built adjacent to Freedom High School for $3,000,000 in Bethlehem Township. |
64,114 | coherence | Fix sentence transition: The Betsimisaraka speak several dialects of the Malagasy language spoken in southern Borneo. The Malagasy language is a branch of the Malayo-Polynesian language group derived from the Barito languages. | The Betsimisaraka speak several dialects of the Malagasy language, which is a branch of the Malayo-Polynesian language group derived from the Barito languages, spoken in southern Borneo. |
64,115 | coherence | Improve the coherence of the text: While speaking about Mary the Quran also calls her as the sister of Aaron. Mary is the mother of Jesus. | While speaking about Mary, the mother of Jesus, the Quran also calls her as the sister of Aaron. |
64,116 | coherence | Fix coherence in the text: Autofluorescence is usually not a problem since the BiFC signal will be a lot higher than the background. Certain organismes, especially apicomplexa, have a higher autofluorescence that make it harder to apply BiFC in them. | Autofluorescence is usually not a problem since the BiFC signal will be a lot higher than the background. However certain organismes, especially apicomplexa, have a higher autofluorescence that make it harder to apply BiFC in them. |
64,117 | coherence | Make the text more coherent: The daytime sky on Earth is blue. Light from the Sun strikes molecules in Earth's atmosphere scattering light in all directions. | The daytime sky on Earth is blue because light from the Sun strikes molecules in Earth's atmosphere scattering light in all directions. |
64,118 | coherence | Fix coherence of the sentence: It is often used symbolically or figuratively to represent darkness. White represents light. | It is often used symbolically or figuratively to represent darkness, while white represents light. |
64,119 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: At Metacritic the album received an average score of 64 based on 5 reviews. Metacritic assigns a normalized rating out of 100 to reviews from mainstream publications. | At Metacritic, which assigns a normalized rating out of 100 to reviews from mainstream publications, the album received an average score of 64 based on 5 reviews. |
64,120 | coherence | Fix sentence transition: Johan, who now has the red eye, returns because he was not fatally wounded by Dag's knife due to a phone, and shoots Erkki. Outside the cellar Hanne kills Johan when Johan attempts to kill Jostein. | Johan, who now has the red eye, returns because he was not fatally wounded by Dag's knife due to a phone, and shoots Erkki. However, outside the cellar Hanne kills Johan when he attempts to kill Jostein. |
64,121 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: In July 2015, Skjellerup married his boyfriend, lifestyle blogger Saul Carrasco, in Hawaii. Based on Skjellerup's Snapchat posts the couples has separated or divorced. | In July 2015, Skjellerup married his boyfriend, lifestyle blogger Saul Carrasco, in Hawaii. However, based on Skjellerup's Snapchat posts the couples has separated or divorced. |
64,122 | coherence | Fix coherence errors in this sentence: On the Bulgarian left, the Greek 7th Division had captured Serres and the 1st and 6th divisions Lachanas. The defeat of the 2nd Army by the Greeks was the most serious military disaster suffered by the Bulgarian in the Second Balkan War. | On the Bulgarian left, the Greek 7th Division had captured Serres and the 1st and 6th divisions Lachanas. The defeat of the 2nd Army by the Greeks was the most serious military disaster suffered by the Bulgarians in the Second Balkan War. |
64,123 | coherence | Fix coherence: Officially, around 200 people died --. Others have given much larger estimates. | Officially, around 200 people died -- although others have given much larger estimates. |
64,124 | coherence | Fix sentence flow: The battle remained closely fought and, at one point, it seemed that Hannibal was on the verge of victory. Scipio was able to rally Hannibal's men, and his cavalry returned from chasing the Carthaginian cavalry and Hannibal Hannibal's rear. | The battle remained closely fought and, at one point, it seemed that Hannibal was on the verge of victory. However, Scipio was able to rally his men, and his cavalry returned from chasing the Carthaginian cavalry and attacked Hannibal's rear. |
64,125 | coherence | Make the text clearer: Community Partnerships were secured. Specific programs could be launched and delivered. | Community Partnerships were secured so that specific programs could be launched and delivered. |
64,126 | coherence | Fix coherence in the sentence: The concept for EMAGINE by Select-TV is that it is VAS enabled to allow Value added services such as eCommerce. To telcos it is not just a media player but allowing interactivity between the service provider and consumers. | The concept for EMAGINE by Select-TV is that it is VAS enabled to allow Value added services such as eCommerce. Hence, to telcos it is not just a media player but allowing interactivity between the service provider and consumers. |
64,127 | coherence | Make the text more coherent: EMAGINE transforms the TV screen into a platform for content delivery and interactive services. EMAGINE allows operators to create new businesses or leverage on existing market base to increase revenue per user (ARPU). | Transforming the TV screen into a platform for content delivery and interactive services, EMAGINE allows operators to create new businesses or leverage on existing market base to increase revenue per user (ARPU). |
64,128 | coherence | Fix coherence: It is probable, however, that many supposed tenures by serjeanty were not really such. So described in returns. | It is probable, however, that many supposed tenures by serjeanty were not really such, although so described in returns. |
64,129 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: In type I (1) is closely aligned with the Chola copper coins of the 13th century. Slightly larger in size. | In type I (1) is closely aligned with the Chola copper coins of the 13th century although slightly larger in size. |
64,130 | coherence | Improve the cohesiveness of the text: All 50 states and the District of Columbia maintain sex offender registries that are open to the public via websites. Information on some offenders is visible to law enforcement only. | All 50 states and the District of Columbia maintain sex offender registries that are open to the public via websites, although information on some offenders is visible to law enforcement only. |
64,131 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: On the contrary, men do not gather because their physical dominance allows them to scrounge cooked foods from women. Women's foraging and food preparation efforts allow men to participate in the high-risk, high-reward activities of hunting. | On the contrary, men do not gather because their physical dominance allows them to scrounge cooked foods from women. Thus, women's foraging and food preparation efforts allow men to participate in the high-risk, high-reward activities of hunting. |
64,132 | coherence | Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: She is also known as Urvasi Sharada. Earlier the National Film Award for Best Actress was officially designated the Urvasi Award. | She is also known as Urvasi Sharada because earlier the National Film Award for Best Actress was officially designated the Urvasi Award. |
64,133 | coherence | Fix coherence in the sentence: Decades later on, Shelby County was crossed by Interstate Highway 65. An important ingredient in the eventual growth of Shelby County has been Shelby County's ready access to modern systems of transportation. | Decades later on, Shelby County was crossed by Interstate Highway 65. Hence, an important ingredient in the eventual growth of Shelby County has been its ready access to modern systems of transportation. |
64,134 | coherence | Make the text more logical: According to National Geographic, he had a 120-year-old wife whom he had married 102 years earlier. According to his obituary, published by Time magazine, he was survived by his 107-year-old third wife. | According to National Geographic, he had a 120-year-old wife whom he had married 102 years earlier. However according to his obituary, published by Time magazine, he was survived by his 107-year-old third wife. |
64,135 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: On July 8, 2010, following the verdict, protests began peacefully. Officials commended both the protesters and the police for their demonstrated restraint. | On July 8, 2010, following the verdict, protests began peacefully, and officials commended both the protesters and the police for their demonstrated restraint. |
64,136 | coherence | Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The IAF were assisted by agents with transmitters on the ground. Though a number of apartment houses were destroyed with hundreds of Palestinians and Lebanese killed or wounded, the leaders managed to evade bombings. | The IAF were assisted by agents with transmitters on the ground. But though a number of apartment houses were destroyed with hundreds of Palestinians and Lebanese killed or wounded, the leaders managed to evade bombings. |
64,137 | coherence | Fix coherence of the sentence: At the head of the remaining force he left Karl Muzaka Thopia since Berat was formerly a possession of Muzaka's family. Karl Muzaka Thopia is his brother-in-law. | At the head of the remaining force he left Karl Muzaka Thopia, his brother-in-law, since Berat was formerly a possession of Muzaka's family. |
64,138 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: The discovery of a 1980's era instant camera and the unusual photographs it contains, send our team on a wild ride across Colorado using the pictures as a guide. Both couples face troubles trying to communicate with their respective partners. | The discovery of a 1980's era instant camera and the unusual photographs it contains, send our team on a wild ride across Colorado using the pictures as a guide. Meanwhile, both couples face troubles trying to communicate with their respective partners. |
64,139 | coherence | Make the text more logical: Such frameworks reduced cost and time to delivery, while still allowing a high degree of differentiation. Few institutions now choose a custom-build strategy. | Such frameworks reduced cost and time to delivery, while still allowing a high degree of differentiation. As a result, few institutions now choose a custom-build strategy. |
64,140 | coherence | Make the text more consistent: It backed the United National Party from 1946. It left the UNP with Bandaranaike in 1951 to form the Sri Lanka Freedom Party. | Backing the United National Party from 1946, it left the UNP with Bandaranaike in 1951 to form the Sri Lanka Freedom Party. |
64,141 | coherence | Make the text coherent: In the 1820s, the area was surveyed in order to determine the international border between the United States and British North America. Further development was limited since the Ojibway restricted European travelers only to the regular trade routes. | In the 1820s, the area was surveyed in order to determine the international border between the United States and British North America. But further development was limited since the Ojibway restricted European travelers only to the regular trade routes. |
64,142 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: Vishwa resigns his job due to his promotion with transfer to Australia so that he can be with Lavanya. Having spent all Vishwa's money to settle his debts, Vishwa Lavanya Lavanya for money. | Vishwa resigns his job due to his promotion with transfer to Australia so that he can be with Lavanya. But having spent all his money to settle his debts, he begs Lavanya for money. |
64,143 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: There are twelve niches shown on the Siston font. Six are filled with acanthus scroll-work. | There are twelve niches shown on the Siston font, but six are filled with acanthus scroll-work. |
64,144 | coherence | Make the text more coherent: Upon completion of the new church, Bishop Frederik Nannestad consecrated the building on 4 September 1755. That church was too small for the parish, so a new church was built just next to the old church in 1880. | Upon completion of the new church, Bishop Frederik Nannestad consecrated the building on 4 September 1755. Eventually, that church was too small for the parish, so a new church was built just next to the old church in 1880. |
64,145 | coherence | Make the text clearer: According to such authors as Walzer, Alessandrini, Newtown, Stolle and Rochon, Foley and Edwards, and Walters, it is through civil society. More accurately, the third sector, that individuals are able to establish and maintain relational networks. | According to such authors as Walzer, Alessandrini, Newtown, Stolle and Rochon, Foley and Edwards, and Walters, it is through civil society, or more accurately, the third sector, that individuals are able to establish and maintain relational networks. |
64,146 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: One researcher says this lack of information may be. Adults are not put in as many socially interactive situations that would guide them through the situation. | One researcher says this lack of information may be because adults are not put in as many socially interactive situations that would guide them through the situation. |
64,147 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Social inhibition may be a predictor of social and school adjustment problems in children. Chen argues that the effect of social inhibition on school adjustment differs between Western cultures and Chinese culture. | Although social inhibition may be a predictor of social and school adjustment problems in children, Chen argues that the effect of social inhibition on school adjustment differs between Western cultures and Chinese culture. |
64,148 | coherence | Fix coherence in the sentence: Then as age increases we are socialized into not expressing strong facial emotions. Leaving the face with a reduced expression hinders communication. | Then as age increases we are socialized into not expressing strong facial emotions. However, leaving the face with a reduced expression hinders communication. |
64,149 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: As Harrington observes, there are several methods of regarding art from a sociological perspective, and considering the sociological element is essential. Art is inevitably full of references and commentaries on the present day society. | As Harrington observes, there are several methods of regarding art from a sociological perspective, and considering the sociological element is essential because art is inevitably full of references and commentaries on the present day society. |
64,150 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: Mirman felt her customers would prefer to buy stylish hosiery without hunting through department stores dominated the British hosiery market. Department stores at the time. | Mirman felt her customers would prefer to buy stylish hosiery without hunting through department stores, which at the time, dominated the British hosiery market. |
64,151 | coherence | Fix sentence flow: The killer is quickly identified but finding him proves tricky for Soda and the owners of Harley-Davidson motorbikes. Why all the interest in a common hundred dollar bill which quickly passes through from the lowest to the highest members of New York society? | The killer is quickly identified but finding him proves tricky for Soda and the owners of Harley-Davidson motorbikes. And why all the interest in a common hundred dollar bill which quickly passes through from the lowest to the highest members of New York society? |
64,152 | coherence | Make the text more logical: Sona Mohapatra came to mainstream prominence with the trendbreaking talk show with Aamir Khan (Satyamev Jayate) in which she frequently appeared as a lead singer and performer. Sona Mohapatra was also the Sona Mohapatra of the musical project on the same show. | Sona Mohapatra came to mainstream prominence with the trendbreaking talk show with Aamir Khan (Satyamev Jayate) in which she frequently appeared as a lead singer and performer. She was also the executive producer of the musical project on the same show. |
64,153 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A reserve machine was employed, but it left the ice surface too rough and pitted to permit safe racing by the athletes. One of the original two machines was repaired sufficiently to fix the track. | A reserve machine was employed, but it left the ice surface too rough and pitted to permit safe racing by the athletes. Finally, one of the original two machines was repaired sufficiently to fix the track. |
64,154 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: The Syrian Air Force has conducted air strikes on targets in Lebanon. Rebels have launched rockets on Hezbollah targets. | The Syrian Air Force has conducted air strikes on targets in Lebanon, while rebels have launched rockets on Hezbollah targets. |
64,155 | coherence | Improve the coherence of the text: In October 2012 Hassan Nasrallah denied Hezbollah members were fighting alongside the Syrian army. That Lebanese in Syrian were only protecting Lebanese inhabited villages from the Free Syrian Army. | In October 2012 Hassan Nasrallah denied Hezbollah members were fighting alongside the Syrian army, but that Lebanese in Syria were only protecting Lebanese inhabited villages from the Free Syrian Army. |
64,156 | coherence | Improve the consistency of the text: They were represented in the defunct Australian Rugby Championship by Sydney Fleet, Western Sydney Rams and Central Coast Rays. The National Rugby Championship has four NSW Sydney Fleet: Sydney Fleet, Western Sydney Rams, Central Coast Rays and NSW Country Eagles. | They were represented in the defunct Australian Rugby Championship by Sydney Fleet, Western Sydney Rams and Central Coast Rays. The National Rugby Championship has four NSW teams: Sydney Stars, Greater Sydney Rams, North Harbour Rays and NSW Country Eagles. |
64,157 | coherence | Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The response to a new stress is to first respond poorly and the response drops off. When the body is first exposed to sun a sunburn might develop. | The response to a new stress is to first respond poorly and the response drops off. For example when the body is first exposed to sun a sunburn might develop. |
64,158 | coherence | Fix coherence in the sentence: As a result, most civilians in the North have now returned to their former villages. Too many people had died during the forceful encampments. | As a result, most civilians in the North have now returned to their former villages. However, too many people had died during the forceful encampments. |
64,159 | coherence | Improve the consistency of the text: Architect H. Overnell designed the church hall in 1935. The church hall stands to the south. | Architect H. Overnell designed the church hall, which stands to the south, in 1935. |
64,160 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: St lwanga Catholic School is a school in Malakal, South Sudan. St lwanga Catholic School was formed by the Malakal, emirtus Vincent Mojwok Nyiker in 1985. | St lwanga Catholic School is a school in Malakal, South Sudan. It was formed by the Bishop of Malakal, emirtus Vincent Mojwok Nyiker in 1985. |
64,161 | coherence | Make the text more coherent: Then the mountain began to look like it was moving up and down, left and right and tilting (the mountain itself was actually not moving). Once again a number of cubes appeared, moving in all directions. | Then the mountain began to look like it was moving up and down, left and right and tilting (the mountain itself was actually not moving). Then, once again a number of cubes appeared, moving in all directions. |
64,162 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: Stella Tjazuko! Naruses is a popular Namibian musician. Stella Tjazuko! Naruses was born in Omaruru, Namibian and raised in the township of Mondesa, Swakopmund. STELLA is one of the many impressionable artists of the Namibian music breeds, but an individual in Stella Tjazuko! Naruses' own right. | Stella Tjazuko! Naruses is a popular Namibian musician. She was born in Omaruru, Namibia and raised in the township of Mondesa, Swakopmund. STELLA is one of the many impressionable artists of the Namibian music breeds, but an individual in her own right. |
64,163 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: Born in Riverhead, New York, Ms. Barber currently resides in Baltimore, Maryland. Barber is the Ms. of iconic American tuba player Bill Barber. | Born in Riverhead, New York, Ms. Barber currently resides in Baltimore, Maryland. She is the granddaughter of iconic American tuba player Bill Barber. |
64,164 | coherence | Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Archaeologists beginned in the 19th century. Archaeologists discovered a large number of more or less fragmentary Greek scrolls in Egypt. | Beginning in the 19th century, archaeologists discovered a large number of more or less fragmentary Greek scrolls in Egypt. |
64,165 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: In the extreme north, the caves of Ankarana have yielded 19 species. Only nine remain in the surrounding forests. | In the extreme north, the caves of Ankarana have yielded 19 species, yet only nine remain in the surrounding forests. |
64,166 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Large animals are more attractive as prey, fungal spores associated with their dung declined rapidly with the arrival of humans, and butchery marks have been found on giant subfossil lemur remains. Hunting appears to be a plausible explanation for the initial decline of the megafauna. | Since large animals are more attractive as prey, fungal spores associated with their dung declined rapidly with the arrival of humans, and butchery marks have been found on giant subfossil lemur remains, hunting appears to be a plausible explanation for the initial decline of the megafauna. |
64,167 | coherence | Make the text more logical: Succinea guamensis is a species of air-breathing land snail the amber snails. Air-breathing land snail is a terrestrial gastropod mollusk in the family Succineidae. | Succinea guamensis is a species of air-breathing land snail, a terrestrial gastropod mollusk in the family Succineidae, the amber snails. |
64,168 | coherence | Fix sentence transition: Sumbawa people eat mostly plant based foods. Consumption of meat takes place during festivals and other celebrations. | Sumbawa people eat mostly plant based foods, while consumption of meat takes place during festivals and other celebrations. |
64,169 | coherence | Fix coherence in this text: Scott's house is the oldest surviving home in the community. Scott's house is listed on the National Register of Historic Places. | Scott's house, which is listed on the National Register of Historic Places, is the oldest surviving home in the community. |
64,170 | coherence | Fix coherence in the text: The term has now fallen into disuse. References can still be found in literature of the time. | The term has now fallen into disuse, although references can still be found in literature of the time. |
64,171 | coherence | Fix sentence flow: Brett Ratner was hired to direct in September 2002, originally expressing an interest in casting an unknown for the lead role. Filming was to start sometime in late 2003. | Brett Ratner was hired to direct in September 2002, originally expressing an interest in casting an unknown for the lead role, while filming was to start sometime in late 2003. |
64,172 | coherence | Improve the consistency of the text: Garrett becomes upset when Dina acts like she won't protect him from the tornado any more than she would a total stranger. Tensions rise between Sandra and Carol because Sandra kissed Carol's boyfriend at Cheyenne's wedding. | Garrett becomes upset when Dina acts like she won't protect him from the tornado any more than she would a total stranger. Meanwhile, tensions rise between Sandra and Carol because Sandra kissed Carol's boyfriend at Cheyenne's wedding. |
64,173 | coherence | Make the text more logical: Construction surveying is not regulated at the state level in New Zealand. Matters relating to surveying may require certification by a registered professional surveyor under contract law or local authority regulations. | Construction surveying is not regulated at the state level in New Zealand. However, matters relating to surveying may require certification by a registered professional surveyor under contract law or local authority regulations. |
64,174 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: As a result, at In Your House 4, Michaels forfeited the title to Douglas. Douglas was forced to defend Douglas' newly won title against Ramon, who Douglas Douglas for the title. | As a result, at In Your House 4, Michaels forfeited the title to Douglas. However, Douglas was forced to defend his newly won title against Ramon, who defeated Douglas for the title. |
64,175 | coherence | Make the text clearer: The line would exclude from consideration all the other individuals in the biological tree. Every time a relationship was established between two individuals of different generations, a new line would be drawn for the sake of convenience. | The line would exclude from consideration all the other individuals in the biological tree. But every time a relationship was established between two individuals of different generations, a new line would be drawn for the sake of convenience. |
64,176 | coherence | Make the text more logical: One's status is also determined by the status of one's family. All Hausa men are caught up in a network of patron-client ties that permeates the society. | One's status is also determined by the status of one's family. Finally, all Hausa men are caught up in a network of patron-client ties that permeates the society. |
64,177 | coherence | Fix sentence transition: This is a significant point. Society is not composed of two conflicting classes. | This is a significant point because society is not composed of two conflicting classes. |
64,178 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Boas challenged the modern hegemony of culture. Boas introduced the idea of cultural relativism (understanding culture in its context). | Challenging the modern hegemony of culture, Boas introduced the idea of cultural relativism (understanding culture in its context). |
64,179 | coherence | Make the text clearer: He ordered the rest of his brigade to break out in small groups to Naogong, where one of his units was still fighting on. En route, his jeep was ambushed, severely injuring him and his orderly. | He ordered the rest of his brigade to break out in small groups to Naogong, where one of his units was still fighting on. However, en route, his jeep was ambushed, severely injuring him and his orderly. |
64,180 | coherence | Improve the consistency of the text: He published his autobiography in 1991. His autobiography is the Story Of My Struggle. | He published his autobiography, The Story Of My Struggle, in 1991. |
64,181 | coherence | Fix coherence in the text: The Tecpatl knife was traditionally used for human sacrifice by the Aztecs. Knife also was the short-range knife of the jaguar warriors. | The Tecpatl knife was traditionally used for human sacrifice by the Aztecs, but it also was the short-range weapon of the jaguar warriors. |
64,182 | coherence | Fix coherence in the text: The player with the highest pinfall at the end of ten frames wins. If there is a time limit and if time runs out before the end of ten frames bowling stops, and the person with the highest pinfall wins the game. | The player with the highest pinfall at the end of ten frames wins. Although, if there is a time limit and if time runs out before the end of ten frames bowling stops, and the person with the highest pinfall wins the game. |
64,183 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: Henry VIII also famously banned bowling for all but the upper classes. So many working men and soldiers were neglecting their trades. | Henry VIII also famously banned bowling for all but the upper classes, because so many working men and soldiers were neglecting their trades. |
64,184 | coherence | Fix coherence in the text: Jump up ^ NCAA.com starts in 1982. NCAA.com is women's Division I Outdoor Track & Field. | Jump up ^ NCAA.com, Women's Division I Outdoor Track & Field, starts in 1982. |
64,185 | coherence | Fix coherence: The Hill is another highly memorable aspect about UT. Since the 19th century. | The Hill is another highly memorable aspect about UT because since the 19th century. |
64,186 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: The Best American Poetry 1997 was edited by David Lehman and by guest editor James Tate. The Best American Poetry 1997 is a volume in The Best American Poetry series. | The Best American Poetry 1997, a volume in The Best American Poetry series, was edited by David Lehman and by guest editor James Tate. |
64,187 | coherence | Fix coherence in this text: The Best American Short Stories 2005 was edited by Katrina Kenison and by guest editor Michael Chabon. The Best American Short Stories 2005 are a volume in The Best American Short Stories series. | The Best American Short Stories 2005, a volume in The Best American Short Stories series, was edited by Katrina Kenison and by guest editor Michael Chabon. |
64,188 | coherence | Fix coherence in this text: Scott: Todd Haller is occasionally referred to as 'Scott' when he messes up the name of someone calling into the show. Todd Haller is the show's producer. | Scott: Todd Haller, the show's producer, is occasionally referred to as 'Scott' when he messes up the name of someone calling into the show. |
64,189 | coherence | Make the text more consistent: These occasionally confuse new callers. Regular listeners are familiar with these : | These occasionally confuse new callers, but regular listeners are familiar with these : |
64,190 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: Stefan panics and hoping to save face for both himself and for Israel. Stefan convinces Rachel and David to go along with the fiction that Vogel was killed. | Panicking and hoping to save face for both himself and for Israel, Stefan convinces Rachel and David to go along with the fiction that Vogel was killed. |
64,191 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: To Jennifer this is treachery and she begins to hate Ridgeon. He hopes that he might marry Jennifer as soon as Jennifer is a Jennifer. | To Jennifer this is treachery and she begins to hate Ridgeon, while he hopes that he might marry her as soon as she is a widow. |
64,192 | coherence | Fix coherence of the sentence: During the meal, Augustus confesses his love for Hazel. The following afternoon, they go to Van Houten's house, but are shocked to find Augustus is a mean-spirited Augustus. | During the meal, Augustus confesses his love for Hazel. The following afternoon, they go to Van Houten's house, but are shocked to find he is a mean-spirited alcoholic. |
64,193 | coherence | Make the text more logical: The Russian edition was sold to RAJI (Russian American Jews for Israel) in 2004. Initially edition kept the name. | The Russian edition was sold to RAJI (Russian American Jews for Israel) in 2004, although initially it kept the name. |
64,194 | coherence | Fix coherence errors: However, Stevenson also points out that while Delphi is beautiful she does not have an identity without the connection to P. Burke. So Delphi are both dependent on each other in order to function in society. | However, Stevenson also points out that while Delphi is beautiful she does not have an identity without the connection to P. Burke, and so they are both dependent on each other in order to function in society. |
64,195 | coherence | Fix sentence transition: Peter Maxwell: A professor at the University who has traveled by teleportation to a distant planet and back. On Peter Maxwell's return Peter Maxwell finds that he is a duplicate of the professor Maxwell, who has been murdered. | Peter Maxwell: A professor at the University who has traveled by teleportation to a distant planet and back. On his return he finds that he is a duplicate of the original Maxwell, who has been murdered. |
64,196 | coherence | Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Angry at her mother. Diane advises Maia to forgive her, since she is obviously lonely with Henry in jail. | Although angry at her mother, Diane advises Maia to forgive her, since she is obviously lonely with Henry in jail. |
64,197 | coherence | Make the text more cohesive: We gave them 10 days, so you can decide as to whether you feel that's enough time. On the complaint from Carl Wunsch, he complained that we hadn't made it significantly clear he would be appearing on a polemic climate change programme. | We gave them 10 days, so you can decide as to whether you feel that's enough time. And on the complaint from Carl Wunsch, he complained that we hadn't made it significantly clear he would be appearing on a polemic climate change programme. |
64,198 | coherence | Improve the coherence of the text: Tom is thus Squire Allworthy's nephew. After finding out about the intrigues of Blifil, who is nephew's half-brother, Squire Allworthy decides to bestow most of Tom's inheritance nephew Tom. | Tom is thus Squire Allworthy's nephew. After finding out about the intrigues of Blifil, who is Tom's half-brother, Allworthy decides to bestow most of his inheritance on Tom. |
64,199 | coherence | Fix coherence in the text: In this book, the authors sought to partially sidestep these objections by considering the effect of the alignment on the Sun, and. On the solar wind. | In this book, the authors sought to partially sidestep these objections by considering the effect of the alignment on the Sun, and hence on the solar wind. |
64,200 | coherence | Fix coherence in this sentence: Normally bands wouldn't travel two hours north of the major cities in order to perform. After bands played in Toronto bands often liked visiting relaxing venues to play for smaller crowds. | Normally bands wouldn't travel two hours north of the major cities in order to perform, but after they played in Toronto they often liked visiting relaxing venues to play for smaller crowds. |
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