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task-2 | Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development? | Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home. From my perspective, this development may result in pleasant effects on both task performance and safety.
Replacing people by robots in working can make an improvement in task performance. Robots can work in multiple hours and have no breaks. Unlike humans... | [
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"quote reference": "this development"
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"sentence": "From my perspective, this development may result in... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of sparse referencing, with the majority of sentences registering `[]` for references, which forces an over-reliance on lexical repetition. This lack of substitution and pronoun flexibility results in a... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-2 | In many countries, more and more couples are choosing to have no children. What are the reasons for this trend? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children. While many people argue that this trend is necessary to control the population balanced, I believe that government should intercede and encourge youngsters to give birth.
There are several reasons that adults don't want to... | [
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"quote reference": "they"
}
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"sentence": "Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children."
},
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"re... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a mix of clear pronoun substitution and frequent gaps, reflecting a systemic reliance on nominal phrasing and occasional demonstratives rather than tight cohesive chains. While lexical repetition is present, it is generally purposeful and maintains clarity, as most refere... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impac... |
task-2 | Some experts suggest that all cyclists should have to pass a test before being allowed to ride a bike on public roads. Do you agree or disagree? | Some people said that people should pass the cycle test before driving on the road. In my opinion I partly agree with this proposal for several reasons.
Having a licence before cycling on the public roads can bring a lot of benefits for both social and personal. Firstly, it can be more safety for the cyclists when dri... | [
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"sentence": "Some people said that people should pass the cycle test before driving on the road."
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"references used": [
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"antecedent": "my",
"quote reference": "I"
}
],
"sentence": "In my opinion I partly agree with this proposal for ... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional and generally accurate use of cohesive devices, consistently employing pronouns and demonstratives to link ideas and maintain logical progression. While the detection data shows repetitive antecedent tracking, the text avoids disruptive lexical repetition, inste... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on c... |
task-1 | The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The two bar charts demonstrate why residents at different ages learn and how much time and fees they are supported by their managers.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that young people often spend their time studying to find jobs; meanwhile, the older citizens tend to learn by interest. Besides, the older people get, t... | [
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"quote reference": "they"
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"antecedent": "residents at different ages, they",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentence": "The two bar charts demonstrate why residents... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates clear and accurate antecedents in its overview, but systematically avoids substitution in the data-description sentences, resulting in a noticeable gap in cohesive flexibility. This reliance on lexical repetition for age groups and nouns creates clunky, mechanical phrasing t... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact o... |
task-2 | Throughout history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? What do people do to achieve an ideal society? | Throughout history, humans have aspired to create a flawless society, yet there is little consensus on what such a society should consist of. I believe that justice and equality are the most essential factors of a perfect society, as they ensure fairness, social harmony, and trust. People work towards this ideal by str... | [
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"sentence": "Throughout history, humans have aspired to create a flawless society, yet there is little consensus on what such a society should consist of."
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"antecedent": "justice and equality, Justice and equality",
"quote re... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic avoidance of pronouns and demonstratives, with nearly every sentence relying on full lexical repetition rather than cohesive substitution. While this repetition maintains absolute clarity and prevents ambiguity in a short argumentative structure, the consistent... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-1 | The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. | The given line graph delineates the proportion of UK teenagers who are on a vegetarian diet. Overall, it can be observed there was a significant fluctuation in the initial period and then the trajectory was more steady.
From the beginning in 1960 to 1980, the figure for vegetarian diet adolescents rose sharply by 16% (... | [
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"sentence": "The given line graph delineates the proportion of UK teenagers who are on a vegetarian diet."
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, it can be observed there was a significant fluctuation in the initial period and then the trajectory was more stea... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of missing cohesive devices, with the majority of sentences flagged as having no references used. Consequently, the essay relies on rigid lexical repetition and paraphrasing of the main subject without ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do... |
task-2 | Write about the following topic:
Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on t... | After the Covid-19 pandemic, schools around the world have two ways of teaching to choose: traditionnal classrooms, where students and teacher can meet in person, or virtual classrooms, which occur on online platforms. In my point of view as a last-yeat high school student, I assume that studying in a real classroom i... | [
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"sentence": "After the Covid-19 pandemic, schools around the world have two ways of teaching to choose: traditionnal classrooms, where students and teacher can meet in person, or virtual classrooms, which occur on online platforms."
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... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay employs a wide range of pronouns and substitution devices, but their cohesion is frequently disrupted by grammatical inaccuracies and awkward lexical choices (e.g., "Those ones," "Every creatures," "activate"). While antecedents are generally identifiable based on the tracked data, these... | The user wants me to evaluate the referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and the text.
I need to output the exact category name, followed by an analysis in 2-3 concise sentences.
Let's look at the data and the essay.
The essay discusses traditional vs online classrooms.
Referencing detected shows ... |
task-2 | Topic: Should university students be free to choose what they want to study, or should they follow the direction of universities? | People have different opinions about the extent to which universities should control students' academic choices. While some argue that undergraduates ought to be free to study whatever they prefer, others believe that universities should set a clear direction for students to follow. In my view, both approaches are bene... | [
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"sentence": "People have different opinions about the extent to which universities should control students' academic choices."
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"references used": [
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"antecedent": "undergraduates",
"quote reference": "they"
}
],
"sentence": "While so... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent and accurate systemic pattern of personal pronouns and possessive determinatives that reliably track their antecedents throughout the text. While key nouns like "students" and "universities" are repeated, this lexical repetition is purposeful an... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on coh... |
task-2 | Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development? | Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home. From my perspective, this development may result in pleasant effects on both task performance and safety.
Replacing people by robots in working can make an improvement in task performance. Robots can work in multiple hours and have no breaks. Unlike humans... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home."
},
{
"references used": [
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"antecedent": "developed",
"quote reference": "this development"
}
],
"sentence": "From my perspective, this development may result in... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals that only 6 out of 17 sentences employ any referencing devices, indicating a systemic pattern of underusing pronouns and substitution. While the few cohesive devices that are present are accurate and clear, the writer's heavy reliance on lexical repetition for key terms like "robo... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Essay Text:** A short 3-paragraph essay about robots replacing humans in work, focusing on task performance and safety.
- **Referencing Data:** The data shows 17 sentences. Out of these, 6 sentences have references detected, while 11 have n... |
task-1 | The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. | The diagrams given illustrates the temperatures and the amount of daylight time in London and Sydney in a week in the last month of 2018. Overall, there was a huge disparity between both areas in temperature and also the moments when the sun rised and set.
In Friday, 28th December, the temperature of the capital of th... | [
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"sentence": "The diagrams given illustrates the temperatures and the amount of daylight time in London and Sydney in a week in the last month of 2018."
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"antecedent": "London and Sydney, both cities, the two urban areas",
"quo... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic avoidance of pronouns and substitution, with the writer rigidly defaulting to explicit noun phrases like "both areas," "both cities," and "the two urban areas." This lack of lexical flexibility creates visibly ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on cohesion. Do not penalize ... |
task-2 | Some people believe that governments should have access to people's mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion. | Nowadays, the privacy of people exploited by social media company such as Facebook and Tik Tok, they follow private information of users through their activites in social media platform , leading to some people think that the government should be gave access permission to mobile phone call recoreds and messages of thei... | [
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"antecedent": "social media company such as Facebook and Tik Tok, their",
"quote reference": "they"
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"antecedent": "social media company such as Facebook and Tik Tok, they",
"quote reference": "their"
},
{
"antece... | Unclear referencing causes some repetition & misunderstanding
Analysis: The referencing data reveals a systemic lack of substitution, with multiple sentences registering no cohesive devices while others rely on exact lexical repetition or ambiguous pronoun chains. Antecedents are frequently obscured by grammatical erro... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-2 | Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some people believe that governments should spend more money on roads and motorways rather than on public transport systems. In my opinion, although roads are important, I disagree with this view because public transport also plays a very significant role in modern society.
On the one hand, investing in roads and moto... | [
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"sentence": "Some people believe that governments should spend more money on roads and motorways rather than on public transport systems."
},
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"references used": [
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"antecedent": "my, I, I",
"quote reference": "I"
},
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"antecedent"... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The referencing data reveals a deliberately sparse use of pronouns, but this sparsity is offset by a highly systematic and purposeful pattern of lexical repetition that prioritizes absolute clarity. Rather than disrupting readability, this controlled repetition prevents ambiguity and... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-2 | Some people believe that governments should have access to people's mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion. | The debate over whether governments should have access to citizens' mobile phone call records and messages continues to spark intense discussion. While some argue that such access is essential for ensuring public safety and combating cybercrime, others maintain that personal data must be protected to preserve individua... | [
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"sentence": "The debate over whether governments should have access to citizens' mobile phone call records and messages continues to spark intense discussion."
},
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "While some argue that such access is essential for ensuring public saf... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates skillful management of cohesion, utilizing accurate and unambiguous referencing where applied while strategically relying on purposeful lexical repetition to maintain formal precision. The sparse pronouns and substitution devices (e.g., "they," "this," "such co... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution... |
task-1 | The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The maps illustrate the transformation in the structure of a student dorm from 2010 to the present.
Overall, the resident hall has undergone some major restructuring, featuring various new study areas, as well as the repurposing of some areas. Moreover, changes can also be seen in the removal of some rooms.
In th... | [
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"sentence": "The maps illustrate the transformation in the structure of a student dorm from 2010 to the present."
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, the resident hall has undergone some major restructuring, featuring various new study areas, as well as the... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent pattern of accurate antecedent-reference pairing, where substitution devices like "them" and "the original" are deployed effectively to maintain cohesion without ambiguity. While lexical repetition is prevalent across many sentences, the data co... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohesion. Do not pena... |
task-2 | In many countries, more and more couples are choosing to have no children. What are the reasons for this trend? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children. While many people argue that this trend is necessary to control the population balanced, I believe that government should intercede and encourge youngsters to give birth.
There are several reasons that adults don't want to... | [
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"antecedent": "more and more families making the decision that they will not have children",
"quote reference": "they"
}
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"sentence": "Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children."
},
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"re... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals a predominantly basic pattern, with referencing limited to a few standard pronouns while many sentences lack any cohesive devices. Although the antecedents that are used are generally clear and logically mapped, the inflexible application and overall scarcity of referencing preven... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Crit... |
task-2 | Some people believe that technology has made our lives easier, while others think it has made life more stressful.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion. | Although some people believe that technology has made life more convenient, others argue that it makes people more stressful. In my opinion, technology brings more advantages than drawbacks if it is used wisely.
One major benefit is that both students and workers can use digital devices to solve problems quickly, save ... | [
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"antecedent": "technology",
"quote reference": "it"
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"sentence": "Although some people believe that technology has made life more convenient, others argue that it makes people more stressful."
},
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"ant... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional but inconsistent approach to referencing, with clear antecedents for pronouns like "it," "they," and "them," yet multiple sentences completely lack substitution. This uneven reliance on lexical repetition over pronouns creates noticeable mechanical phrasing that... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do n... |
task-1 | The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today | The maps illustrate how the Grange Park has been changed between 1920 and the present.
Overall, the Grange Park has many more varieties than in the past. There are added some locations and remove places.
In1920, the Fountain was in the middle of the Grange Park and nextto the Stage for musicians in the Western. The Ros... | [
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"sentence": "The maps illustrate how the Grange Park has been changed between 1920 and the present."
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, the Grange Park has many more varieties than in the past."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "There ar... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic failure to employ pronouns or substitution, as nearly all sentences contain empty referencing lists or repeat antecedents identically. This rigid reliance on exact lexical repetition creates a mechanical, stilt... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-2 | In many countries, more and more couples are choosing to have no children. What are the reasons for this trend? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children. While many people argue that this trend is necessary to control the population balanced, I believe that government should intercede and encourge youngsters to give birth.
There are several reasons that adults don't want to... | [
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"antecedent": "more and more families making the decision that they will not have children",
"quote reference": "they"
}
],
"sentence": "Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children."
},
{
"re... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent and accurate pattern of personal pronoun usage, where antecedents like "families," "adults," and "lack of children" are correctly tracked with "they," "their," and "it," respectively. This systematic substitution effectively prevents clunky repe... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, s... |
task-2 | Write about the following topic:
Advertising has a growing influence on the way people think and make decisions, which is causing concern in many societies.
What are the causes of this influence of advertising? What can be done to reduce its negative impact?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example... | Nowadays, advertising is becoming more powerful and affects how people think and choose what to buy. This trend is a big worry for many societies. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this situation and suggest some ways to solve the problem.
There are several reasons why advertising has such a strong influenc... | [
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"sentence": "Nowadays, advertising is becoming more powerful and affects how people think and choose what to buy."
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "This trend is a big worry for many societies."
},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "Thi... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates precise and flexible use of referencing, with all pronouns and demonstratives clearly linked to unambiguous antecedents that maintain logical flow. Systemic patterns from the data show consistent substitution (e.g., "this constant exposure," "they," "its") that... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Task:**
- **Goal:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical... |
task-2 | In many countries, more and more couples are choosing to have no children. What are the reasons for this trend? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children. While many people argue that this trend is necessary to control the population balanced, I believe that government should intercede and encourge youngsters to give birth.
There are several reasons that adults don't want to... | [
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "more and more families making the decision that they will not have children",
"quote reference": "they"
}
],
"sentence": "Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children."
},
{
"re... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional range of cohesive devices, with pronouns generally pointing to clear antecedents and maintaining logical flow, though minor inaccuracies—such as inconsistent capitalization ("i") and a likely misidentified antecedent for "them" in the data—reveal occasional flex... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohesion. Do not... |
task-2 | Write about the following topic:
Advertising has a growing influence on the way people think and make decisions, which is causing concern in many societies.
What are the causes of this influence of advertising? What can be done to reduce its negative impact?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example... | Nowadays, advertising is becoming more powerful and affects how people think and choose what to buy. This trend is a big worry for many people. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this situation and suggest some ways to solve the problem.
There are several reasons why advertising has a strong influence. First... | [
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"sentence": "Nowadays, advertising is becoming more powerful and affects how people think and choose what to buy."
},
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "This trend is a big worry for many people."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "This t... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent and accurate substitution strategy, where pronouns and demonstratives reliably link to clear antecedents across the entire text. This systemic pattern ensures that references function flexibly to maintain logical progression without creating amb... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the provided "Referencing Detected" data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstrative... |
task-1 | You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words | The diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn.
Overall, this is a linear process consisting 3 main stages, including milling, fermenting and purifying.
Initially, corns are stored, after which they are milled into flour. This is followed by the second stages, in which water is added into the f... | [
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"sentence": "The diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn."
},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn",
"quote reference": "this"
}
],
"sentence": "Overall, this i... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a consistent and accurate pattern of cohesive devices, with pronouns and demonstratives like "this," "they," and "it" correctly tracking their antecedents to link sequential stages. This systematic substitution maintains clear antecedents and prevents ambiguity, whil... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact on cohesion. Do not penalize purposeful lexic... |
task-2 | Some people think traditional games are better than modern games in helping children develop their abilities. To what extent do you agree? | A modern world requires a modern solution. I do agree that games in general do help people, especially children to train their brains and skills. However, to a certain extent, I think that traditional games aren't any better than modern games due to the following reasons. The first one is that games already help childr... | [
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"sentence": "A modern world requires a modern solution."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "people, especially children",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentence": "I do agree that games in general do help people, especially chil... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a consistent reliance on lexical repetition of key terms like "modern games," "traditional games," and "abilities," alongside a noticeable absence of referencing devices across numerous sentences. While the pronouns that are deployed generally map to clear antecedent... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on c... |
task-2 | Directors of large organisations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people believe that it is necessary, but others think that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. | In many countries, a significantly higher income compared to normal employees is common among managers of large-scale firms. Some argue that this salary disparity is essential and fair, while others believe that it can create a sense of unfairness for employees. In my opinion, although higher salaries for senior posit... | [
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"sentence": "In many countries, a significantly higher income compared to normal employees is common among managers of large-scale firms."
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "a significantly higher income compared to normal employees, it",
"quot... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates accurate and flexible use of pronouns and demonstratives, with clear antecedents that consistently link ideas across sentences and paragraphs. Referencing is appropriately varied (e.g., *it*, *they*, *this salary disparity*, *their*), preventing awkward repetit... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Im... |
task-1 | The diagram below gives the results of a survey showing the distribution of foreign ladies' wear bought in New York in 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The given pie chart illustrates the outcome of a survey which showing the proportion of foreign ladies' wear bought in New York in 2007. As it is presented, the two main domination of females' clothes are from China which are Guandong and Shangha and both of them have the same ratio at 35%.
Most noticeably of all, It ... | [
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Analysis: The essay demonstrates a rigid reliance on lexical repetition of chart-related nouns ("the chart," "the presented chart," "the whole chart") rather than employing flexible pronouns or substitution, resulting in a mechanical and stunted reading exp... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impa... |
task-1 | The charts below provide data on the daily study hours of students at five different universities. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. | The bar charts show the time that students studying at five different universities spend on weekdays and weekends.
Overall, most students spend more time studying on weekdays than on weekends. Students who study in university D spend less time than other universities.
From Monday to Friday, most students spend mor... | [
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"referenc... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of near-total omission, with empty reference lists for nearly every sentence in the text. This complete lack of substitution forces the writer to rely on rigid lexical repetition of key nouns, which str... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Essay:** Describes bar charts showing study time for students at 5 universities on weekdays vs. weekends.
- **Referencing Detected:**
- Sentence 1: `[]`
- Sentence 2: `[]`
- Sentence 3: `[]`
- Sentence 4: `[]`
... |
task-2 | Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? | In contemporary society, with the technological advancement, the Internet has become a pivotal invention offering numerous advantages to humanity. However, the issue of individuals increasingly seeking online medical advice instead of consulting professional doctors has become a matter of significant debate. Personal... | [
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"sentence": "However, the issue of individuals increasingly seeking online medical... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data indicates a consistent and accurate application of demonstratives and pronouns, with unambiguous antecedents that successfully track the core topic across paragraphs. Systemic patterns confirm that lexical repetition is employed purposefully to maintain formal clarity rather... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical f... |
task-1 | The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The maps illustrate the changes of Biology School that occur in the future plan in a particular university.
Overall, the Biology School is predicted to undergo significant transformations in the future, with the introduction of lab, office, and car park. Notably, there will be the modification of drama center, and the ... | [
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Analysis: The systemic data reveals a sparse application of cohesive devices, with only four out of nine sentences utilizing pronouns or demonstratives while the remainder rely on full lexical repetition. Although the antecedents for the few references used are clear and the noun repetition serves a purpose... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on... |
task-2 | Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive and negative development? | Nowadays, commercials are becoming more and more common in everyday life. This essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of this change.
On the one hand, advertising can bring about some positive impact. Firstly, adverts can provide product information. In other words, commercials equip consumers with functions ... | [
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"sentence": "This essay will discuss both benefits and draw... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data demonstrates consistent and accurate antecedent matching for pronouns like `they`, `their`, and `them`, which effectively prevents ambiguity and maintains clear logical connections between ideas. The writer appropriately balances pronoun substitution with purposeful... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-2 | The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat.
What can be done to maintain biodiversity? | In the modern era, the development of technology and industry make our life better and more convenient, but is also the reason make the biodiversity now have more and more species face the threat of extinction. Because of that we need to do something to save they habitats and maintain the balance of nature.
Firstly, w... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Becau... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The data reveals a systemic pattern of pronoun misuse (e.g., confusing "they/them" with "their") and ambiguous antecedents that consistently break grammatical agreement and logical flow. These inaccuracies force awkward phrasing and disrupt progre... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohesion. Don't penal... |
task-1 | The map shows the changes to a residence hall between 2010 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The maps illustrate the transformation in the structure of a student dorm from 2010 to the present.
Overall, it is evident from the plans that, currently, the number of bedrooms in the dorm has significantly risen. Moreover, some areas, such as the living room and the garden, have undergone major repurposings.
In ... | [
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"quote reference": "the dorm"
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"sentence": "Overall... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals a functional but uneven application of cohesive devices, with clear antecedents established when pronouns like "them" and "the original" are deployed. However, the systemic pattern demonstrates a heavy reliance on full lexical repetition for terms like "dorm," "hall," and "study-b... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact on cohesio... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | It is widely believed that social media has more disadvantages than advantages to teenagers. For my perspective, I completely disagree with this view as it helps them a lots in their daily lives.
There are many reasons why social net work brings the youngsters a range of benefits. Firstly, teenagers use social media f... | [
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"quote reference": "I"
},
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"antecedent": "believed",
"quote refere... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a highly consistent pattern of clear antecedent-reference pairs, with pronouns and demonstratives accurately tracking key subjects across sentences to maintain referential clarity. This systematic substitution effectively prevents mechanical repetition and ensures th... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Detected" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Crit... |
task-2 | Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive and negative development? | Nowadays, commercials are becoming more and more common in everyday life. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of this change.
On the one hand, advertising can bring about some positive impact.impacts. Firstly, adverts can provide product information. In other words, commercials equip consumers with... | [
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"quote reference": "this change"
}
],
"sentence": "This essay will discus... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data demonstrates a consistent and accurate pattern of using demonstratives ("this change," "this trend") and personal pronouns ("they," "them," "their") with clear, unambiguous antecedents that directly align with the essay's logical progression. While intentional lexical repeti... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). ... |
task-1 | The charts below provide data on the daily study hours of students at five different universities. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. | The bar charts show the time that students studying at five different universities spend on weekdays and weekends.
Overall, most students spend more time studying on weekdays than on weekends. Students who study in university D spend less time than other universities.
From Monday to Frid... | [
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},
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"referenc... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic near-total absence of cohesive devices, with only a single pronoun detected across nine sentences. This heavy reliance on full lexical repetition creates a mechanical and stunted flow, as the writer consistentl... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do not... |
task-1 | The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019. | The two line graphs illustrate how the percentage of households that owned three different kinds of electrical appliances changed and how much time they spent on doing housework weekly over the period of nearly a century.
Overall, both charts are about household chores. The first chart showed a clear rise in the owne... | [
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"quote reference": "they"
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"sentence": "The two line graphs illustrate how the percentage of households that owned three different kinds of electrical appliances... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a consistent and accurate use of referencing devices, with pronouns and substitutions clearly mapping to their antecedents throughout the text. Systemic patterns in the provided data confirm that references are applied flexibly where needed, while lexical repet... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Don't penalize purposeful lexical re... |
task-2 | Some people think scientists should send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe that it is dangerous.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion. | Some people argue that scientists should send messages into space in an attempt to communicate with extraterrestrial life, while others believe this practice is potentially dangerous. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own view.
On the one hand, supporters of sending messages into space cont... | [
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"quote reference": "this practice"
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Analysis: The data reveals a systematic and accurate pattern of substitution, with nominalized phrases like "this practice," "this action," and "this endeavor" consistently and clearly linking back to their respective antecedents. This cohesive strategy is effectively balanced with purposeful ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Task:**
- **Goal:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do not pen... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | In the age of technology, social platforms are becoming more prevalent with young people. Some individuals think that social media brings more drawbacks than benefits to teenagers. While I accept that it has bad effects, I also believe that they benefit from social media.
On the one hand, it's thought that social plat... | [
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... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a consistent and accurate application of personal pronouns, demonstratives, and possessives that reliably map to their explicit antecedents, ensuring unambiguous reference throughout the text. Systemic patterns show a flexible distribution of cohesive devices that ef... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do not penalize purposeful lexical r... |
task-1 | WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words. | The process depticts the water cycle occuring in forests and in cities. Overall, the process in forested areas seems to be more natural compared to that of urban areas.
In forested areas, as they are all natural, the water cycle is standard. However, in urban areas things seem to be less accurate. After the precipitat... | [
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... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The essay exhibits a rigid reliance on lexical repetition, particularly the verbatim recurrence of "the process," which fails to leverage substitution or pronouns effectively, resulting in a mechanical and stunted flow. Although a few pronouns are... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | It is widely believed that social platform exerts a more detrimental effect on youngster. I totally agree with this point of view.
The first and most obvious reason is that social media has a negative impact on student's learning progress. Today, teenagers often allocate most of their time in chatting with friend, pos... | [
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"sentence": "I totally agree with this point of view."
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"sentence": "The first and most obvious reas... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals a functional but basic deployment of personal and possessive pronouns (e.g., *their, they, his, I*) that generally maintain clear antecedents and successfully prevent disruptive lexical repetition across the body paragraphs. However, the writer's narrow reliance on these reference... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). ... |
task-2 | The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? | Most people assume that the primary role of science is to improve the quality of life. I completely agree with this statement through the high advance of scientific innovations to improve healthcare systems and upgrade society's demand.
One key reason why science is considered to enhance quality of life longspan is d... | [
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"sentence": "I completely agree with this statement through the high advance of scientific innovations to improve healthcare systems and upgra... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional range of referencing devices, including pronouns and demonstratives, which generally maintain paragraph-level cohesion. However, systemic inaccuracies in logical alignment, such as mislabeling a time-consuming disadvantage as "this advantage," introduce minor mi... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:** The data shows a list of sentences with references used. Some sentences have no references (`[]`), others have specific antecedent-reference pairs.
- **Essay Text:** Provided in full.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accura... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | Some individuals believe that social media has a negative effect on teenagers rather than be good to them. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this view.
One reason for my disagreement is that social media is increasingly becoming important and popular with people, especially the youth. It helps teenagers ... | [
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},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "my, my,... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates accurate and flexible referencing, with pronouns and demonstratives consistently mapping to clear antecedents such as "teenagers," "social media," and specific personal examples. This systematic substitution effectively maintains logical flow between sentences ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical... |
task-2 | Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? | Today, experiential or personal standards are paled in significance and employers increasingly appreciate formal academic qualifications when they look for new employees. The social demands and how people look down on human nature are two reasons why this case happens. From my perspective, this is a negative phenomenon... | [
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"quote reference": "they"
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},
{... | Some lapses
Analysis: The referencing system shows inconsistent application, with many sentences omitting cohesive devices entirely while others rely on pronouns that occasionally mismatch their antecedents or grammatical functions (e.g., "this" referencing the verb "look," or "that work" awkwardly substituting for a p... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Detected" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-2 | some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open space in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In the modern era, greening the space has become an essential part of everyday life. One question that requires discussion is to what extent it positively affects to the environment. To my mind, plant trees in the open space is a totally positive trend.
From an overall perspective, the are two main reasons why i belie... | [
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"antecedent": "greening",
"quote reference": "it"
}
],
"sentence": "One question that requires discussion is to ... | Some lapses
Analysis: The systemic data reveals a consistent and functional use of pronouns ("it," "they," "i") with clear antecedents, successfully avoiding the clunky repetition that would disrupt readability. However, minor grammatical inaccuracies and a logically disjointed conclusion slightly hinder the flexibilit... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing. Do not penalize purposeful lexical r... |
task-1 | The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. | The bar charts illustrate the percentage of film releases and the corresponding proportion of cinema ticket sales by genre in a country in 1996 and 2000.
In general, there was an increase in the total number of films and ticket sales in all genres, with the exception for romance, whose percentage of film production r... | [
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"sentence": "In general, there was an increase in the total number of films... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a highly rigid systemic pattern, detecting only two referencing instances across ten sentences, both being the identical phrase "both years." This severe lack of substitution and pronoun use forces excessive lexical repet... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical... |
task-2 | Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion. | People nowadays have different views about who should be responsible for a healthy diet. Some believe each person should take care of their own health, while others claim the government should make sure people eat well. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
A healthy diet can not always be applie... | [
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},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "each person",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentence": "Some believe each person should ta... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic over-reliance on lexical repetition for key terms like "the government" and "each individual," where pronominal substitution would significantly improve textual flow. While antecedent clarity remains intact and the overall argument stays coherent, this rigid re... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Task:**
- **Goal:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). C... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | Recently, many individuals believe that social media has a negative impact on the youth. I totally disagree with this point of view.
One of the primary reasons for my disapproval of this statement is its benefit. Nowadays, smart phones have many apps like Facebook, Messenger, Instagram which are useful to make friends... | [
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"sentence": "Recently, many individuals believe that social media has a negative impact on the youth."
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"sentence": "I totally disagree with this point of view."
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "I, my, my, I",
... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a functional but inconsistent pattern of pronoun usage, with references like "their," "it," and "them" generally tracking clear antecedents to maintain logical flow across paragraphs. However, systemic grammatical inaccur... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Essay Text:** A short 4-paragraph essay arguing against the negative impact of social media on youth. It has clear structure (intro, two body paragraphs with examples, conclusion).
- **Referencing Detected Data:** Shows various pronouns used ... |
task-1 | The diagram below gives the results of a survey showing the distribution of foreign ladies' wear bought in New York in 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The given pie chart illustrates the outcome of a survey which showing the proportion of foreign ladies' wear bought in New York in 2007. As it is presented, the two main domination of females' clothes are from China which are Guandong and Shangha and both of them have the same ratio at 35%.
Most noticeably of all, It ... | [
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{
"antecedent": "The given pie chart, the presented chart, the chart, the chart, the... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a rigid systemic pattern where antecedents are consistently dumped as a cumulative list of every prior chart mention, forcing the writer to mechanically repeat phrases like "the presented chart," "the chart," and "the who... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohesion. Do not pen... |
task-1 | The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now | The map illustrates the data about the changes which have taken place in Shakefield town from 1995 to the present.
Overall, what stands out from the map is that the town has been significantly urbanized and modernized with far more facilities and services.
Looking at the details, as regards the west side of the town,... | [
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"sentence": "The map illustrates the data about the changes which have taken place in Shakefield town from 1995 to the present."
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "The map, the map",
"quote reference": "the map"
},
{
"anteced... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals a systemic pattern of sparse cohesive devices, with nearly half the sentences containing no referencing and the remainder relying almost exclusively on rigid nominal chains (e.g., "the map," "the town"). This complete absence of pronouns or substitution forces an over-reliance on ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing. Do not penalize purposeful lexical repetition. Assess antecedent clarity. Base ca... |
task-2 | The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? | Science has brought many changes to the world, and its main purpose is often debated. Some people believe that the greatest purpose of science is to be improving people's lives. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement, especially by improving health and making life more convenient.
Firstly, science has... | [
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"quote reference": "its"
}
],
"sentence": "Science has brought many changes to the world, and its main purpose is often debated."
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Some people believe that the greatest purpo... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of sparse referencing, with only five cohesive devices detected across fourteen sentences, indicating a heavy reliance on lexical repetition over substitution. This lack of pronouns and demonstratives r... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical foc... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | In recent years, it is believed that social media has an adverse effect to teenagers. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view.
Firstly, with the fast improvement of modern life, social media is considered to be an important part in students' daily life. Because these applications are very convenient and... | [
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"sentence": "In recent years, it is believed that social media has an adverse effect to teenagers."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "my, My, I",
"quote reference": "I"
}
],
"sentence": "In my opinion, I totally agree with this po... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a systematic reliance on demonstrative referencing (e.g., “these applications,” “these platforms”) and personal pronouns to chain ideas, generally maintaining clear antecedents across the text. However, the writer’s flexibility is limited by repetitive substitution and minor... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitu... |
task-2 | some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open space in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In the modern era, greening spaces has become an essential part of everyday life. One question that requires discussion is the extent to which it positively affects the environment. To my mind, planting trees in open spaces is a totally positive trend.
From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why I beli... | [
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"sentence": "In the modern era, greening spaces has become an essential part of everyday life."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "greening spaces",
"quote reference": "it"
}
],
"sentence": "One question that requires discussion is... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates accurate antecedent tracking for the pronouns it employs, maintaining overall clarity and preventing misunderstandings. However, systemic gaps in the data (frequent empty reference lists) correspond to noticeable lexical repetition of key nouns, indicating a reliance on repe... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Referencing Detected Data:** Shows 13 sentences. Most have `references used: []` (no referencing detected). Some have references like `it` (antecedent: greening spaces, planting, Planting, green space), `I` (antecedent: my, I), `they` (anteceden... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | In today's society, social network is known as a popular way as entertainment. However, a number of people believe that it causes many drawbacks instead of beneficial to the future generations. In my opinion, I completely disagree with a point of view. There is many reasons for me to accept that social network brings u... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "In today's society, social network is known as a popular way as entertainment."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "social network, it, it, social network, It, it, it",
"quote reference": "it"
}
],
"sentence": "However,... | Unclear referencing causes some repetition & misunderstanding
Analysis: The data reveals rigid, looping antecedent chains for "it" and first-person pronouns, indicating a mechanical reliance on "it" to refer back to "social network" without flexible substitution. This inflexible pattern, combined with grammatical misma... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Prompt:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cri... |
task-1 | The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The maps illustrate the changes to the Biology School in a particular university's future plan.
Overall, the Biology School is predicted to undergo significant transformations, with the addition of a lab, an office, and a car park. Notably, the drama center will be modified, whilst the teaching building and the lectur... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "The maps illustrate the changes to the Biology School in a particular university's future plan."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, the Biology School is predicted to undergo significant transformations, with the addition of a lab, an office, ... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The referencing pattern is sparse but highly purposeful, relying on exact lexical repetition and clear spatial markers to maintain absolute clarity, which directly aligns with the guideline that formal repetition should not be penalized. Antecedents remain consistently unambiguous, a... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substituti... |
task-1 | The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to a gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010. | The line chart shows people of different age groups who visited a gym at least once a month in Europe from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend among all age brackets over the period. Also, it is notable that the first place of the 25-34 age group was replaced by those aged 18-24 in the latter half of the ... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "The line chart shows people of different age groups who visited a gym at least once a month in Europe from 1990 to 2010."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, there was an upward trend among all age brackets over the period."
},
{
"refer... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern where nearly half of the sentences contain empty reference lists, indicating a reliance on full noun phrases rather than pronouns or substitution. While a functional range of cohesive devices is present (`both`, `their`, `The former`, `it`), the text le... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Referencing Detected Data:** Shows 11 sentences. Many have empty `references used` lists. Some have references like `the period`, `both`, `their`, `The former`, `it`. The data shows a mix of zero referencing and some specific references.
- **... |
task-2-ocr | “Social media does more harm than good to teenagers.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write an essay of about 200-250 words to express your opinion, using specific reasons and your own experiences to support your answer. | Nowadays, social media is thought to do more harm than good to teenagers. I totally agree with this point of view.
The first reason why I am in favor of this opinion is that teenagers are likely to do the same things as what they see in social media. When using social media, teenagers may see some people doing bad beh... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Nowadays, social media is thought to do more harm than good to teenagers."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "I totally agree with this point of view."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "I, my, I",
"quote reference... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a rigid reliance on explicitly repeating key nouns like "teenagers" rather than employing clear pronoun substitution, resulting in a mechanical and stilted flow. Referencing data shows multiple attempts to use substitutes li... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing. Do not penalize purposeful lexical repetition. Ass... |
task-2 | c. More and more people are working from home instead of commuting to an office every day. Is this a positive or negative development? | There is a growing trend for people to work from a distance. Although this trend brings a number of disadvantages to the working population, I would argue that the benefits outweight the drawbacks.
On the one hand, remote working creates a harmful impact on individuals. To begin with, virtual working may prevent peo... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "There is a growing trend for people to work from a distance."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "a growing trend for people to work from a distance",
"quote reference": "this trend"
}
],
"sentence": "Although this tren... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of sparse substitution, with numerous sentences containing empty reference brackets that rely instead on full lexical repetition. While the pronouns that are used are accurate and their antecedents are clearly established, this rigid avoidance of demons... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Detected" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-1 | The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The charts illustrate the global distribution of water and the percentage of water use in three different countries: Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada.
Overall, salt water overwhelmingly dominates the world's water supply, with fresh water making up only a small fraction. Most fresh water is locked in ice and glaciers. ... | [
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"sentence": "The charts illustrate the global distribution of water and the percentage of water use in three different countries: Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada."
},
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, salt water overwhelmingly dominates the world's water sup... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a consistent and accurate pattern of referencing, with clear antecedents maintained for pronouns like "their" and "its," alongside effective substitution phrases such as "this limited fresh water supply." This systemic flexibility allows the writer to avoid unnecessa... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Detected" data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substituti... |
task-2 | Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? | Some people think that inventing a new language for worldwide communication gives many benefits. In my opinion, this idea will give disadvantages to our culture, and it is difficult to create, due to its cost, time, etc. However, if we can invent a new language, it will help us communicate easily and lead to... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": " Some people think that inventing a new language for worldwide communication gives many benefits."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "inventing",
"quote reference": "this idea"
},
{
"antecedent": "a new lang... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional range of referencing devices but exhibits systemic inconsistency, frequently defaulting to the full noun phrase "inventing a new language" rather than employing flexible substitution. This heavy reliance on repetition creates noticeable, slightly awkward phrasin... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution... |
task-2 | The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? | Most people assume that the primary role of science is to improve the quality of life. I completely agree with this statement due to the significant advancements in scientific innovations that improve healthcare systems and meet society's demand.
One key reason why science is considered to enhance quality of life is ... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Most people assume that the primary role of science is to improve the quality of life."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "I completely agree with this statement due to the significant advancements in scientific innovations that improve healthcare syst... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional range of cohesive devices, effectively using pronouns and demonstratives to maintain clarity and prevent clunky lexical repetition. While systemic patterns show clear antecedent alignment in most instances, the data highlights minor inaccuracies in reference map... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohes... |
task-1 | The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The maps illustrate the changes to the Biology School in a particular university's future plan.
Overall, the Biology School is predicted to undergo significant transformations, with the addition of a lab, an office, and a car park. Notably, the drama center will be modified, while the teaching building and the lecture... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The maps illustrate the changes to the Biology School in a particular university's future plan."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, the Biology School is predicted to undergo significant transformations, with the addition of a lab, an office, ... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic absence of pronouns and substitution, with referencing fields left empty for nearly all sentences. This forces rigid, exact lexical repetition of key phrases like "the teaching building and the lecture room," w... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical... |
task-2 | The use of artificial intelligence will soon replace many types of jobs. Is this a positive or negative development?
| In the 4.0 technology era, artificial intelligence takes an important role in our lives, especially in online roles. While people believe that the use of artificial intelligence will soon replace many types of occupations, others reject this notion, believing it will improve human daily life. Personally, I believe the ... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "In the 4.0 technology era, artificial intelligence takes an important role in our lives, especially in online roles."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "believe",
"quote reference": "this notion"
},
{
"antecedent... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of omitted references, with four out of five sentences containing zero cohesive devices. This forces the writer to mechanically repeat the exact phrase "the use of artificial intelligence" across senten... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact o... |
task-2 | Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development? | Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home. From my perspective, this development may result in pleasant effects on both work and personal life.
Robots can be companions in daily lives, making an improvement in mental well-being. Robots, which are coded to be a homemaker as well as a companion, can ... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "developed",
"quote reference": "this development"
}
],
"sentence": "From my perspective, this development may result in... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic failure to employ cohesive devices, with only two references detected across the entire fourteen-sentence excerpt. This near-total absence of pronouns, demonstratives, and substitution forces excessive lexical ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact on cohesion. Don't pen... |
task-2 | Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? | It is believed that a free water source should be supplied to every household because it is one of the fundamental human rights. I firmly agree with this view as such an initiative can foster social equality and support long-term societal development.
One key reason why governments should provide their citizens with ... | [
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "a free water source",
"quote reference": "it"
}
],
"sentence": "It is believed that a free water source should be supplied to every household because it is one of the fundamental human rights."
},
{
"references used": [
{
... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systematic pattern of precise antecedent-reference pairs (e.g., 'this resource' tracking 'clean water', 'these areas' tracking 'other sectors'), demonstrating consistent and flexible substitution. This accurate use of pronouns and demonstratives successful... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Task:**
- **Goal:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Detected" data and the essay text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-1 | The table below shows the annual costs for students studying in Master's programs in three different countries in 2007. | [] | Minimal & inaccurate use of referencing
Analysis: The provided data indicates a complete absence of detected referencing alongside an entirely empty essay, demonstrating a total lack of cohesive devices. This complete omission prevents any textual flow or logical progression, directly aligning with the specified catego... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Input Data:** `**Referencing Detected:** []` (Empty list)
- **Essay:** (Empty)
- **Categories:** Five options ranging from "Skillfully used, no l... | |
task-2 | In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development? | In this day and age, it is true that children are given more independence than in the past. Although this trend offers certain benefits, I believe that excessive freedom can lay the foundation for the development of their detrimental habits.
On the one hand, some people are convinced that this tendency proposes severa... | [
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"sentence": "In this day and age, it is true that children are given more independence than in the past."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "given, this tendency, it",
"quote reference": "this trend"
},
{
"antecedent": "child... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a systematic pattern of accurate antecedent tracking for pronouns, demonstratives, and substitution (e.g., 'this trend,' 'their,' 'it'), which consistently links core concepts across sentences and paragraphs. Lexical repetition of key nouns is purposeful and maintain... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Essay Text:** Provided in full.
- **Referencing Detected:** A list of dictionaries showing references used in each sentence.
- **Key Observations from Data:**
- Many sentences use pronouns and demonstratives effectively: "this trend", "their"... |
task-2 | Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? | Many people suggest that new language should be created for worldwide conversation. From my perspective, the drawbacks of this initiative would be over than advantages.
Some proponents of the above view offer two main reasons. Firstly, the invention of a new language would creates equality for all countries in the ... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Many people suggest that new language should be created for worldwide conversation."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "created",
"quote reference": "this initiative"
}
],
"sentence": "From my perspective, the drawback... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data demonstrates consistent and accurate mapping of demonstrative pronouns (e.g., "this initiative," "that language," "this innovation") and personal pronouns (e.g., "it," "they") to their antecedents, establishing clear and continuous topic chains throughout the essay.... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Request:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critica... |
task-1 | The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to a gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010. | The line chart shows people of different age groups who visited a gym at least once a month in Europe from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, there was an upward trend among all age brackets over the period. Also, it is notable that the 25-34 age group's leading position was taken over by that of those aged 18-24 in the latter ha... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "The line chart shows people of different age groups who visited a gym at least once a month in Europe from 1990 to 2010."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, there was an upward trend among all age brackets over the period."
},
{
"refer... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent and accurate systemic pattern where pronouns, demonstratives, and substitution devices reliably track antecedents without ambiguity. This flexibility enables smooth transitions between demographic segments and time periods, while purposeful lexi... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohesion. Don't penal... |
task-2 | Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development? | Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home. From my perspective, this development may result in pleasant effects on both work and personal life.
Robots can be companions in daily lives, making an improvement in mental well-being. Robots, which are coded to be a homemaker as well as a companion, can ... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "developed",
"quote reference": "this development"
}
],
"sentence": "From my perspective, this development may result in... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic failure to utilize cohesive devices, with 11 out of 14 sentences containing zero referencing, indicating a strong avoidance of pronouns and substitution. This forces heavy lexical repetition of key terms like "... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do not penalize... |
task-2 | Mobile phones and the Internet offer many benefits for elderly people, yet they remain the group that uses these technologies the least. In what ways can these tools be helpful for older adults? What can be done to encourage them to adopt modern technology? | It is widely acknowledged that although the elderly have the lowest usage of mobile phones and the Internet, these technologies bring numerous advantages to them. This essay will discuss the various benefits of these tools and propose some efficient methods to help them embrace modern technology.
The most notab... | [
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{
"antecedent": "mobile phones and the Internet, these tools",
"quote reference": "these technologies"
},
{
"antecedent": "the elderly, them",
"quote reference": "them"
}
],
"sentence": "It is widely acknowledged that althoug... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent and accurate deployment of pronouns, demonstratives, and substitution, with clearly established antecedents that maintain logical continuity across paragraphs. Lexical variation (e.g., alternating between "the elderly," "older people," and "this... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:** The data shows a list of sentences with the references used in each. I need to look at the patterns.
- **Key Observations from Data:**
- Frequent use of pronouns/demonstratives: `these technologies`, `them`, `their`, `the... |
task-1 | The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. | The given chart illustrates the percentages of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of citizens of five different Australian cities, namely: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall, the percentages of people who went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks ranked first throughout the entire... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The given chart illustrates the percentages of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of citizens of five different Australian cities, namely: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "The giv... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a highly sparse pattern of referencing, with only three explicit cohesive devices deployed across eight sentences. While the few references used are clear and accurate, the systemic avoidance of pronouns and substitution forces a heavy reliance on lexical repetition that ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:**
- Sentence 1: No references used.
- Sentence 2: `{'antecedent': 'The given chart', 'quote reference': 'the entire chart'}` -> Refers to "the entire chart" back to "The given chart".
- Sentence 3: `{'antecedent': 'H... |
task-1 | Task 1: The charts provide information about students in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university in the UK. | The pie charts indicate the percentage of learners in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university in the UK.
Overall, while the undergraduates who were satisfied with the school facilities were the highest ,the negative reply of the students facilities with their school was also the lowest in whole p... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The pie charts indicate the percentage of learners in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university in the UK."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "the students",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentenc... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The data reveals a systemic near-total absence of referencing, with nine out of eleven sentences showing empty `references used` lists, indicating a complete lack of substitution or pronoun deployment. This forces the writer to rely on heavy lexic... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focu... |
task-1 | The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. | The two given maps compare the layout of the shopping centre in 1982 with its configuration in 2012. Illustrating developments in new facilities.
Overall, it is clear that the shopping center underwent a significant transformation, characterized by the expansion at the expense of the surrounding greenery ... | [
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "the shopping centre, the shopping center",
"quote reference": "its"
}
],
"sentence": "The two given maps compare the layout of the shopping centre in 1982 with its configuration in 2012."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentenc... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a sparse but highly accurate referencing pattern, with all detected cohesive devices correctly anchored to unambiguous antecedents. This intentional sparsity aligns with the direct descriptive style of the text, effectively preventing the clunky overuse of p... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact on cohesion. Do not penalize purposefu... |
task-2 | Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. | In contemporary society, many people argue that the government should impose prison sentences on serious offenders to ensure public safety, others believe that criminals who have valuable skills should be required to work. In this essay, I will discuss both views before expressing my perspectives that punishment should... | [
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"sentence": "In contemporary society, many people argue that the government should impose prison sentences on serious offenders to ensure public safety, others believe that criminals who have valuable skills should be required to work."
},
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... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data confirms accurate and flexible antecedent tracking, with pronouns and demonstratives (e.g., "them," "this," "they," "their") deployed precisely to maintain referential clarity. While key terms like "offenders" and "prison" are intentionally repeated, this lexical re... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Don't pe... |
task-1 | The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. | The two given maps compare the layout of the shopping centre in 1982 with its configuration in 2012. Illustrating developments in new facilities.
Overall, it is clear that the shopping center underwent a significant transformation, characterized by the expansion at the expense of the surrounding greenery ... | [
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{
"antecedent": "the shopping centre, the shopping center",
"quote reference": "its"
}
],
"sentence": "The two given maps compare the layout of the shopping centre in 1982 with its configuration in 2012."
},
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"references used": [],
"sentenc... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay employs a functional range of demonstrative references (e.g., "this area," "this land," "this space") that generally maintain clear spatial tracking and avoid unnecessary lexical repetition. However, systemic inconsistencies in pronoun substitution, particularly the vague antecedent for ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on cohesion. Do NO... |
task-2 | Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution worldwide. Some people believe the government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. | It has been shown that the transportation of commodities and people are the major contributors to global pollution. While some individuals assert that the government holds the main responsibility to deal with this issue, others believe that individuals themselves are largely at fault. This essay will elaborate on both ... | [
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"sentence": "It has been shown that the transportation of commodities and people are the major contributors to global pollution."
},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "global pollution",
"quote reference": "this issue"
},
{
"ant... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional range of cohesive devices, including clear pronoun and substitution use (`this issue`, `them`, `it`, `these investments`, `these eco-friendly options`) that effectively maintain logical connections between ideas. However, the data reveals a systemic over-relianc... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus ... |
task-1 | The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains | The diagram compares thermal zones in tropical and temperate mountain regions.
Overall, it can be noticed that tropical mountains have more types of temperature patterns than those in temperate mountains. In addition, the height of each zone also differs between the two types of mountains.
In temperate mountains, the... | [
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"sentence": "The diagram compares thermal zones in tropical and temperate mountain regions."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, it can be noticed that tropical mountains have more types of temperature patterns than those in temperate mountains."
},
{
... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals a systemic pattern of sparse referencing, with only two instances of substitution detected across the entire text. The writer relies heavily on full lexical repetition of key terms, which maintains clarity but creates a somewhat rigid flow. While the cohesion remains functional an... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:** The data shows very few references used. Only two instances are flagged:
- `{'antecedent': 'a temperate zone where coffee and cocoa plantations are grown', 'quote reference': 'this zone'}` in the sentence about tropical ... |
task-2 | As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? | In recent years, with the advent of techonological advancement, people tend to update current events through internet rather than newpapers. In my view, although there is still a small group attracted with newpapers, internet is more prevailling in passing information in today's world.
There is denying that the elder ... | [
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"sentence": "In recent years, with the advent of techonological advancement, people tend to update current events through internet rather than newpapers."
},
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "In my view, although there is still a small group attracted with newpapers,... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The referencing data reveals a systemic pattern where the majority of sentences contain no detected cohesive devices, forcing an excessive reliance on full noun phrases like "internet" and "newspapers." This severe scarcity of substitution creates... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Im... |
task-1 | The charts below show the residential water use in 1988 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons. | The pie charts illustrate how water consumption in homes was distributed among 5 categories between 1988 and 2008, which are separated by a period of several years.
Overall, it is evident that the overall structure of the distribution changed considerably over time. While Washing remained the dominant category across b... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "The pie charts illustrate how water consumption in homes was distributed among 5 categories between 1988 and 2008, which are separated by a period of several years."
},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "distributed",
"quote reference"... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The referencing data indicates that when cohesive devices are employed, they are used accurately with clear antecedents (e.g., 'its' correctly tracking to 'Washing', 'This' logically linking back to the preceding subject), ensuring unambiguous connections. Although referencing is rel... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impa... |
task-2 | Some employers believe that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In an era when artificial intelligence can memorize entire textbooks and perform complex calculations within seconds, what truly distinguishes one job applicant from another is no longer the weight of their diploma, but the way they speak, listen, and collaborate. I strongly agree that, for the majority of employers, s... | [
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{
"antecedent": "one job applicant, they",
"quote reference": "their"
},
{
"antecedent": "one job applicant, their",
"quote reference": "they"
}
],
"sentence": "In an era when artificial intelligence can memorize entire textb... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data demonstrates a systematic pattern of accurate antecedent-reference mapping, with pronouns and substitutions consistently aligning with their intended subjects across complex arguments. This flexibility allows the writer to strategically alternate between precise lex... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-1 | The tables below give information about salaries for graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010 | The tables provide information about how many average salaries are learned by individuals after graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010, covering all age groups and different age groups. Overall, it could be seen that graduates had higher salaries than non-graduates for two tables. Additionally, the... | [
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"sentence": "The tables provide information about how many average salaries are learned by individuals after graduates and non-graduates in the UK between 2000 and 2010, covering all age groups and different age groups."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, ... | Minimal & inaccurate use of referencing
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic failure to employ cohesive devices, with `references used` appearing as empty lists for nearly every sentence in the text. This near-total absence of pronouns or substitution forces heavy, mechanical repetition of key terms like "gra... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing. Don't penalize purposeful lexical repetition. Assess anteced... |
task-1 | The tables show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The tables present information about the diverse experiences of life in that specific city over a period of 2 years, between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, a clear long-term trend can be observed in the data. While education and healthcare consistently recorded the highest figures throughout the period, transport premained th... | [
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"sentence": "The tables present information about the diverse experiences of life in that specific city over a period of 2 years, between 1980 and 2010."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, a clear long-term trend can be observed in the data."
},
{
... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay relies systematically on nominal referencing (e.g., repeated use of "the period," "this figure," and "the value") which prioritizes data clarity but limits pronominal flexibility. While this repetition is purposeful for a data description genre, the provided analysis reveals minor antece... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:**
- Sentence 1: No references used.
- Sentence 2: No references used.
- Sentence 3: `the period` (antecedent: `a period of 2 years, between 1980 and 2010, the period, the period`)
- Sentence 4: No references use... |
task-1 | The graph below shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories. | The line graph depicts how much time on average time distinct four automobile manufactures spent producing vehicles at their US factories over a period of 7 years.
Overall, there were a downward trends in all manufactures produced cars in the US. It is also noticeable that the amount of time on a General Motor experie... | [
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"antecedent": "distinct four automobile manufactures, both General Motor and Ford",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentence": "The line graph depicts how much time on average time distinct four automobile manufactures spent producing vehicles at the... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a clear inability to flexibly employ pronouns or substitution, instead relying on repetitive full noun phrases that disrupt the reading flow. The provided data highlights systemic inaccuracies, such as applying the singular ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact o... |
task-2 | It is believed by some that women make better leaders than men, such as in companies or the government. Do you agree or disagree with this belief? | Some people believe that women make better leaders than men in fields such as business and government. While it is true that women often possess leadership qualities that are highly valuable, I do not fully agree that gender alone determines leadership effectiveness.
On the one hand, women are often seen as good leader... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Some people believe that women make better leaders than men in fields such as business and government."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "While it is true that women often possess leadership qualities that are highly valuable, I do not fully agree tha... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The referencing system demonstrates high accuracy and flexibility, with pronouns and demonstratives (e.g., "they," "these strengths," "This," "Her") correctly and unambiguously mapping to their antecedents throughout the text. Purposeful lexical repetition of core concepts like "wome... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Essay Text:** A short, formal essay discussing whether women make better leaders than men. It has a clear structure: introduction, two body paragraphs ("On the one hand", "On the other hand"), and a conclusion.
- **Referencing Data:** The pro... |
task-1 | The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. | The diagram illustrates various steps involved in the process of producing chocolate. Overall, it is evident that there are ten stages in the process, commencing with planting cacao trees and culminating with pressing the beans to produce liquid chocolate.
Looking at the first stage of the process, cacao trees are plan... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "The diagram illustrates various steps involved in the process of producing chocolate."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "the process of producing chocolate, the process, the process",
"quote reference": "the process"
}
],... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data demonstrates a consistent systemic pattern where key nouns are explicitly tracked across sequential steps, with pronouns like "they" and "them" deployed accurately to maintain clear antecedent links. This deliberate lexical repetition serves a highly functional purp... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:** The data shows a list of sentences with detected references.
- Let's look at the sentences and the references:
- S1: No references used. (Intro)
- S2: "the process" used multiple times. Antecedent chain: "the pro... |
task-1 | The table below shows information about department stores and online stores Australia in 2011. | The given table illustrates the details of Australian department stores and online stores in 2011.
In general, it is clear that all figures for online stores in the four categories were higher than those of department stores. However, both types of stores observed low growth.
Regarding the number of businesses, there... | [
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"sentence": "The given table illustrates the details of Australian department stores and online stores in 2011."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "In general, it is clear that all figures for online stores in the four categories were higher than those of departmen... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of zero detected cohesive devices across all sentences, indicating a heavy reliance on full lexical repetition rather than pronouns or substitution. However, cross-referencing with the actual essay confirms that this repetition is purposeful and maintai... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Referencing Detected:** The data shows `{'references used': [], ...}` for every single sentence. This means the NLP/system detected zero explicit cohesive devices like pronouns (it, they, this, those), demonstratives (this, that), or substitutio... |
task-2 | Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge.
Do you agree or disagree? | It is often argued that access to clean water is a basic human right and that every household should be provided with water free of charge. While some people disagree with this idea, I largely support it, as free access to clean water promotes social equality and long-term sustainability.
One important reason for my vi... | [
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"sentence": "It is often argued that access to clean water is a basic human right and that every household should be provided with water free of charge."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "this idea",
"quote reference": "it"
}
],
"... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates accurate and clear referencing, with pronouns and demonstratives correctly linked to unambiguous antecedents that maintain logical flow. While the data shows many sentences with empty reference lists, this reflects purposeful lexical repetition of key terms lik... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data:**
- **Referencing Detected:** The data shows a list of sentences with their corresponding references used.
- Sentence 1: No references used.
- Sentence 2: Uses "it" referring to "this idea".
- Sentence 3: Uses "my" referring to "I, I".
- Sentence ... |
task-1 | The line graph shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. | The line graph illustrates changes in the amount of the level of foreign visitors to the United Kingdom among 3 categories over a given period, from 1989 to 2009.
Overall, it is clear that there were notable long-term trends in the data. While holiday consistently recorded the highest figures throughout the period, mee... | [
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"sentence": "The line graph illustrates changes in the amount of the level of foreign visitors to the United Kingdom among 3 categories over a given period, from 1989 to 2009."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, it is clear that there were notable long-ter... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic avoidance of pronouns in favor of explicit nominal phrases and time markers, but cross-referencing with the actual text confirms this is a purposeful strategy that maintains absolute clarity. Antecedents remain consistently unambiguous, and the le... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact on cohe... |
task-1 | The charts show how satisfied students were with several types of facilities at a university in the UK in the year 2007. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. | The graphs depict students' levels of satisfaction towards various facilities at a university in the United Kingdom in 2007.
Overall, it can be seen that most university students showed an overall trend of enjoying these infrastructures to a great extent, with school dormitories and cafeterias being the most preferred... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "The graphs depict students' levels of satisfaction towards various facilities at a university in the United Kingdom in 2007."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "various facilities",
"quote reference": "these infrastructures"
}... | Unclear referencing causes some repetition & misunderstanding
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic reliance on full lexical phrases, with pronouns and substitution appearing in only three out of eight sentences. While the antecedents for the few references used are clear, the overall lack of flexible cohesive... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on... |
task-2 | Many people say that today there is a general increase in antisocial behavior and lack of respect for others.
What might have caused this situation, and what can be done to improve it? | It has become an increasing trend for some nations to act in an anti-social way without respecting other crowds, largely influenced by the financial pressure caused by the current economic recession and misleading information in movies and online videos. In my opinion, addressing this issue necessitates finding the und... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "It has become an increasing trend for some nations to act in an anti-social way without respecting other crowds, largely influenced by the financial pressure caused by the current economic recession and misleading information in movies and online videos."
},
{
"... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a systematic preference for precise lexical repetition over grammatical substitution, resulting in sparse but highly effective referencing. Antecedents for key terms like "behaviour" and "government" remain consistently unambiguous, and the deliberate noun-chai... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on cohesion. Do not ... |
task-2 | In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development? | In this day and age, it is true that children are given more independence than in the past. Although this trend offers certain benefits, I believe that excessive freedom can lay the foundation for the development of detrimental behaviors.
On the one hand, some people are convinced that this tendency offers several adv... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "In this day and age, it is true that children are given more independence than in the past."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "given, this tendency, it",
"quote reference": "this trend"
}
],
"sentence": "Although this... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a highly systematic and accurate use of referencing, consistently deploying pronouns and demonstratives (e.g., "this trend," "they," "their," "this thinking") to maintain clear antecedents and avoid mechanical repetition. Cohesive devices are effectively distri... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing. Do not penalize purposeful lexical repetition. Assess antecedent clarity. Base cat... |
task-1 | The maps show an art gallery in Australia in 1950 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The diagram illustrates the changes that have taken place in an art gallery in Australia from 1950 to present day.
Overall, this gallery has undergone a number of significant changes, the most important is the replacement of the courtyard by three smaller spaces. Another noticeable change is the reduction in size of th... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The diagram illustrates the changes that have taken place in an art gallery in Australia from 1950 to present day."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "an art gallery in Australia, the gallery, the gallery",
"quote reference": "this ... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data shows consistent and accurate antecedent tracking, with demonstratives and pronouns like "this gallery," "this space," and "it" reliably linking to previously introduced nouns. The frequent repetition of key spatial terms is purposeful and necessary for diagram desc... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical... |
task-2 | Some employers believe that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Embedded deep within this complex employment paradigm is the ongoing controversy revolving around the most highly-valued aptitude among employees. On this, some argue that interpersonal competence reflects a broader success than academic credentials. Such a viewpoint mostly aligns with my personal beliefs due to its fe... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Embedded deep within this complex employment paradigm is the ongoing controversy revolving around the most highly-valued aptitude among employees."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "the ongoing controversy revolving around the most highly-... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a functional but uneven application of cohesive devices, with most pronouns and demonstratives having clear antecedents that maintain logical progression. However, occasional inaccuracies in reference mapping and a tendency toward lexical repetition slightly stiffen the p... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing. Do not penalize purposeful lexical repetition. ... |
task-2 | In some societies, the number of crimes commited by teenager is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.
To what extent, do you agree or disagree? | It is often argued that teenagers who commit serious crimes should receive the same punishment as adults. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this idea because of the difference from adults in mental development and equal sentencing rarely achieves effective renovation.
Firstly, teenagers are still undergoing cr... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "It is often argued that teenagers who commit serious crimes should receive the same punishment as adults."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "my, I",
"quote reference": "I"
},
{
"antecedent": "argued",
"q... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The referencing data demonstrates accurate and clear antecedent mapping for pronouns such as 'their,' 'them,' and 'this idea,' ensuring that key subjects are tracked without ambiguity. While several sentences omit explicit references, this reflects standard syntactic variation and pu... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substituti... |
task-2 | Many people say that today there is a general increase in antisocial behavior and lack of respect for others.
What might have caused this situation, and what can be done to improve it? | In contemporary society, the growing emphasis on the problem of people lacking respect for each other due to antisocial behaviour has become a subject of widespread debate and discussion. This essay aims to explore the underlying reasons behind this problem and propose effective solutions.
There are two primary cause... | [
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"sentence": "In contemporary society, the growing emphasis on the problem of people lacking respect for each other due to antisocial behaviour has become a subject of widespread debate and discussion."
},
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "the problem of ... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a consistent systemic pattern where demonstratives and personal pronouns accurately map to their preceding antecedents, ensuring clear thematic tracking without ambiguity. This flexible use of reference prevents awkwardness, while the deliberate repetition of key ter... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Detected" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-2 | write a problem-solving report of household waste | Household waste is becoming an increasingly serious problem in modern society. As living standards improve, families produce more waste in their daily lives. If household waste is not managed properly, it can cause environmental pollution and negatively affect human health. This report aims to identify the main problem... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Household waste is becoming an increasingly serious problem in modern society."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "families",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentence": "As living standards improve, families produce m... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The data reveals a consistent pattern of accurate pronoun substitution (e.g., *it*, *they*, *their*) that correctly tracks key antecedents without ambiguity or misreference. This systemic flexibility prevents clunky repetition while maintaining absolute clarity, allowing the text to ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impa... |
task-1 | The table below shows the annual costs for students studying in Master's programs in three different countries in 2007. | The give table illustrates how much money was spent each annual by young people studying in Master's programs in various nations in 2007.
Overall, while the amount of annual cost spent on science subjects was the highest in all categories, the accommodation and food for student in three nations recieve the least . In a... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The give table illustrates how much money was spent each annual by young people studying in Master's programs in various nations in 2007."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, while the amount of annual cost spent on science subjects was the hig... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic failure to employ cohesive devices, with only a single instance of referencing across ten sentences. This near-complete absence of substitution and pronouns forces heavy, mechanical lexical repetition (e.g., co... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact on cohesion. Do not penalize purposeful lexica... |
task-2 | Despite better access to education, many adults today still cannot read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged? What can governments do to help them?
? | In the modern era, although many individuals can potentially gain a better education, illiteracy is still common among adults. This concern can have a detrimental impact on their career development and countries' economy. The local authorities can develop the technology for distance learning and encourage public campai... | [
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"sentence": "In the modern era, although many individuals can potentially gain a better education, illiteracy is still common among adults."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "illiteracy",
"quote reference": "This concern"
},
{
... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data confirms a consistent and accurate pattern of referencing, where pronouns and demonstratives (e.g., "This concern," "They," "these issues") reliably map to their antecedents without ambiguity. While certain sentences feature repeated possessive forms, this repetitio... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitu... |
task-1 | The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. | The given chart illustrates the percentages of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of citizens of five different Australian cities, namely: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall, the percentages of people who went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks ranked first throughout the entire... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The given chart illustrates the percentages of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of citizens of five different Australian cities, namely: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart."
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"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "The giv... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a predominantly empty referencing pattern, with the essay systematically avoiding substitution and pronouns in favor of repeating lengthy noun phrases. While the occasional references used (e.g., "those cities," "the entire chart") are accurate and clearly anchored, their... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Don't penalize purposeful lexical repetitio... |
task-2 | As housing is a basic need for people, the government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | In recent years, housing has become a basic human need. Some individuals believe that the government should spend the budget on free housing for people who cannot afford it. In my opinion, I agree with this idea
On the one hand, it is true that offering free from the government can limit personal responsibility. Peopl... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "In recent years, housing has become a basic human need."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "free housing for people who cannot afford it",
"quote reference": "it"
}
],
"sentence": "Some individuals believe that the gov... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic over-reliance on lexical repetition of key nouns like "the government" and "people" instead of employing pronouns or substitution. This rigid pattern results in noticeable, awkward phrasing that disrupts the re... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate referencing and cohesion based on provided data and text.
- **Input Data:** A list of sentences with detected references, antecedents, and quote references.
- **Essay Text:** Provided in full.
- **Categories:** 5 options ranging fro... |
task-1 | The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. | The given chart illustrates the percentages of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of citizens of five different Australian cities, namely: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall, the percentages of people who went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks ranked first throughout the entire... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The given chart illustrates the percentages of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits of citizens of five different Australian cities, namely: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "The giv... | Some lapses
Analysis: Based on the provided data, the essay relies heavily on full noun phrases rather than substitution, with only three sentences utilizing basic referencing devices like `both` and `those cities`. This systemic lack of pronouns for recurring cities and timeframes creates a noticeably rigid flow, thou... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact o... |
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