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task-2 | Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development? | Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home. From my perspective, this development may result in pleasant effects on both task performance and safety.
Replacing people by robots in working can make an improvement in task performance. Robots can work in multiple hours and have no breaks. Unlike humans... | [
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"references used": [],
"sentence": "Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "developed",
"quote reference": "this development"
}
],
"sentence": "From my perspective, this development may result in... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of sparse referencing, with the majority of sentences registering `[]` for references, which forces an over-reliance on lexical repetition. This lack of substitution and pronoun flexibility results in a... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-2 | In many countries, more and more couples are choosing to have no children. What are the reasons for this trend? Is this a positive or negative development? | Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children. While many people argue that this trend is necessary to control the population balanced, I believe that government should intercede and encourge youngsters to give birth.
There are several reasons that adults don't want to... | [
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "more and more families making the decision that they will not have children",
"quote reference": "they"
}
],
"sentence": "Nowadays, there are more and more families making the decision that they will not have children."
},
{
"re... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a mix of clear pronoun substitution and frequent gaps, reflecting a systemic reliance on nominal phrasing and occasional demonstratives rather than tight cohesive chains. While lexical repetition is present, it is generally purposeful and maintains clarity, as most refere... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and the text itself.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impac... |
task-2 | Some experts suggest that all cyclists should have to pass a test before being allowed to ride a bike on public roads. Do you agree or disagree? | Some people said that people should pass the cycle test before driving on the road. In my opinion I partly agree with this proposal for several reasons.
Having a licence before cycling on the public roads can bring a lot of benefits for both social and personal. Firstly, it can be more safety for the cyclists when dri... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Some people said that people should pass the cycle test before driving on the road."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "my",
"quote reference": "I"
}
],
"sentence": "In my opinion I partly agree with this proposal for ... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates a functional and generally accurate use of cohesive devices, consistently employing pronouns and demonstratives to link ideas and maintain logical progression. While the detection data shows repetitive antecedent tracking, the text avoids disruptive lexical repetition, inste... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on c... |
task-1 | The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The two bar charts demonstrate why residents at different ages learn and how much time and fees they are supported by their managers.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that young people often spend their time studying to find jobs; meanwhile, the older citizens tend to learn by interest. Besides, the older people get, t... | [
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "residents at different ages, their",
"quote reference": "they"
},
{
"antecedent": "residents at different ages, they",
"quote reference": "their"
}
],
"sentence": "The two bar charts demonstrate why residents... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay demonstrates clear and accurate antecedents in its overview, but systematically avoids substitution in the data-description sentences, resulting in a noticeable gap in cohesive flexibility. This reliance on lexical repetition for age groups and nouns creates clunky, mechanical phrasing t... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Impact o... |
task-2 | Throughout history, people dream to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? What do people do to achieve an ideal society? | Throughout history, humans have aspired to create a flawless society, yet there is little consensus on what such a society should consist of. I believe that justice and equality are the most essential factors of a perfect society, as they ensure fairness, social harmony, and trust. People work towards this ideal by str... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Throughout history, humans have aspired to create a flawless society, yet there is little consensus on what such a society should consist of."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "justice and equality, Justice and equality",
"quote re... | Some lapses
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic avoidance of pronouns and demonstratives, with nearly every sentence relying on full lexical repetition rather than cohesive substitution. While this repetition maintains absolute clarity and prevents ambiguity in a short argumentative structure, the consistent... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on the provided Referencing Analysis data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
task-1 | The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. | The given line graph delineates the proportion of UK teenagers who are on a vegetarian diet. Overall, it can be observed there was a significant fluctuation in the initial period and then the trajectory was more steady.
From the beginning in 1960 to 1980, the figure for vegetarian diet adolescents rose sharply by 16% (... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The given line graph delineates the proportion of UK teenagers who are on a vegetarian diet."
},
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Overall, it can be observed there was a significant fluctuation in the initial period and then the trajectory was more stea... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic pattern of missing cohesive devices, with the majority of sentences flagged as having no references used. Consequently, the essay relies on rigid lexical repetition and paraphrasing of the main subject without ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Do... |
task-2 | Write about the following topic:
Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on t... | After the Covid-19 pandemic, schools around the world have two ways of teaching to choose: traditionnal classrooms, where students and teacher can meet in person, or virtual classrooms, which occur on online platforms. In my point of view as a last-yeat high school student, I assume that studying in a real classroom i... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "After the Covid-19 pandemic, schools around the world have two ways of teaching to choose: traditionnal classrooms, where students and teacher can meet in person, or virtual classrooms, which occur on online platforms."
},
{
"references used": [
{
... | Some lapses
Analysis: The essay employs a wide range of pronouns and substitution devices, but their cohesion is frequently disrupted by grammatical inaccuracies and awkward lexical choices (e.g., "Those ones," "Every creatures," "activate"). While antecedents are generally identifiable based on the tracked data, these... | The user wants me to evaluate the referencing and cohesion of an essay based on provided data and the text.
I need to output the exact category name, followed by an analysis in 2-3 concise sentences.
Let's look at the data and the essay.
The essay discusses traditional vs online classrooms.
Referencing detected shows ... |
task-2 | Topic: Should university students be free to choose what they want to study, or should they follow the direction of universities? | People have different opinions about the extent to which universities should control students' academic choices. While some argue that undergraduates ought to be free to study whatever they prefer, others believe that universities should set a clear direction for students to follow. In my view, both approaches are bene... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "People have different opinions about the extent to which universities should control students' academic choices."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "undergraduates",
"quote reference": "they"
}
],
"sentence": "While so... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The provided data reveals a consistent and accurate systemic pattern of personal pronouns and possessive determinatives that reliably track their antecedents throughout the text. While key nouns like "students" and "universities" are repeated, this lexical repetition is purposeful an... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Evaluation Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on impact on coh... |
task-2 | Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home.
Is this a positive or negative development? | Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home. From my perspective, this development may result in pleasant effects on both task performance and safety.
Replacing people by robots in working can make an improvement in task performance. Robots can work in multiple hours and have no breaks. Unlike humans... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Many robots have been developed to work in plants and at home."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "developed",
"quote reference": "this development"
}
],
"sentence": "From my perspective, this development may result in... | Some lapses
Analysis: The data reveals that only 6 out of 17 sentences employ any referencing devices, indicating a systemic pattern of underusing pronouns and substitution. While the few cohesive devices that are present are accurate and clear, the writer's heavy reliance on lexical repetition for key terms like "robo... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the Input Data & Essay:**
- **Essay Text:** A short 3-paragraph essay about robots replacing humans in work, focusing on task performance and safety.
- **Referencing Data:** The data shows 17 sentences. Out of these, 6 sentences have references detected, while 11 have n... |
task-1 | The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. | The diagrams given illustrates the temperatures and the amount of daylight time in London and Sydney in a week in the last month of 2018. Overall, there was a huge disparity between both areas in temperature and also the moments when the sun rised and set.
In Friday, 28th December, the temperature of the capital of th... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "The diagrams given illustrates the temperatures and the amount of daylight time in London and Sydney in a week in the last month of 2018."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "London and Sydney, both cities, the two urban areas",
"quo... | Inadequate & inaccurate referencing causes frequent repetition
Analysis: The provided data reveals a systemic avoidance of pronouns and substitution, with the writer rigidly defaulting to explicit noun phrases like "both areas," "both cities," and "the two urban areas." This lack of lexical flexibility creates visibly ... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the essay based on provided data and text.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critical focus on cohesion. Do not penalize ... |
task-2 | Some people believe that governments should have access to people's mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion. | Nowadays, the privacy of people exploited by social media company such as Facebook and Tik Tok, they follow private information of users through their activites in social media platform , leading to some people think that the government should be gave access permission to mobile phone call recoreds and messages of thei... | [
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "social media company such as Facebook and Tik Tok, their",
"quote reference": "they"
},
{
"antecedent": "social media company such as Facebook and Tik Tok, they",
"quote reference": "their"
},
{
"antece... | Unclear referencing causes some repetition & misunderstanding
Analysis: The referencing data reveals a systemic lack of substitution, with multiple sentences registering no cohesive devices while others rely on exact lexical repetition or ambiguous pronoun chains. Antecedents are frequently obscured by grammatical erro... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze the User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Cr... |
task-2 | Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Some people believe that governments should spend more money on roads and motorways rather than on public transport systems. In my opinion, although roads are important, I disagree with this view because public transport also plays a very significant role in modern society.
On the one hand, investing in roads and moto... | [
{
"references used": [],
"sentence": "Some people believe that governments should spend more money on roads and motorways rather than on public transport systems."
},
{
"references used": [
{
"antecedent": "my, I, I",
"quote reference": "I"
},
{
"antecedent"... | Skillfully used, no lapse
Analysis: The referencing data reveals a deliberately sparse use of pronouns, but this sparsity is offset by a highly systematic and purposeful pattern of lexical repetition that prioritizes absolute clarity. Rather than disrupting readability, this controlled repetition prevents ambiguity and... | Here's a thinking process:
1. **Analyze User Input:**
- **Task:** Evaluate the overall referencing and cohesion of the provided essay based on the "Referencing Analysis" data and the text itself.
- **Rules:** Focus on accuracy, clarity, flexibility of referencing (pronouns, demonstratives, substitution). Critic... |
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Essay-Referencing-Analysis-Pre-Labeled
Made with ❤️ using 🦥 Unsloth StudioReferencing SFT contains 500 generated records.
🚀 Quick Start
from datasets import load_dataset
# Load the main dataset
dataset = load_dataset("bihungba1101/essay-referencing-analysis-pre-labeled", "data", split="train")
df = dataset.to_pandas()
📊 Dataset Summary
- 📈 Records: 500
- 📋 Columns: 6
📋 Schema & Statistics
| Column | Type | Column Type | Unique (%) | Null (%) | Details |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
llm_grm_range_feedback |
string |
llm-text | 500 (100.0%) | 0 (0.0%) | Tokens: 98 out / 1386 in |
⚙️ Generation Details
Generated with 12 column configuration(s):
llm-text: 1 column(s)
seed-dataset: 11 column(s)
📄 Full configuration available in builder_config.json and detailed metadata in metadata.json.
📚 Citation
If you use Data Designer in your work, please cite the project as follows:
@misc{nemo-data-designer,
author = {The NeMo Data Designer Team, NVIDIA},
title = {NeMo Data Designer: A framework for generating synthetic data from scratch or based on your own seed data},
howpublished = {\url{https://github.com/NVIDIA-NeMo/DataDesigner}},
year = 2026,
note = {GitHub Repository},
}
💡 About NeMo Data Designer
NeMo Data Designer is a general framework for generating high-quality synthetic data that goes beyond simple LLM prompting. It provides:
- Diverse data generation using statistical samplers, LLMs, or existing seed datasets
- Relationship control between fields with dependency-aware generation
- Quality validation with built-in Python, SQL, and custom local and remote validators
- LLM-as-a-judge scoring for quality assessment
- Fast iteration with preview mode before full-scale generation
For more information, visit: https://github.com/NVIDIA-NeMo/DataDesigner (pip install data-designer)
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