id string | uuid string | question string | essay_type string | essay_content string | grammar_accuracy_score list | grammar_accuracy_feedback string | grammar_suggestions_cot dict | grammar_suggestions_cot_xml list | grammar_suggestions_feedback dict |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
263799 | 05dd52c0-94c8-42e0-b0e0-0f170cf9ee89 | In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? | task-2 | In the development world, the growth of society not only is the sinificnant problem affecting the newspapers or book needs but also replaced many aspects of media industries lead to the readers will no longer buy traditional prints because of sophisticated images and variety contents from online, particularly available... | [
"Frequent errors & SOMETIMES impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài làm mắc rất nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp xuyên suốt, bao gồm sai chính tả, thiếu mạo từ, sai dạng động từ (gerund/infinitive) và cấu trúc câu thiếu liên kết, dẫn đến việc làm sai lệch hoặc che khuất ý nghĩa gốc.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Kiểm tra kỹ chính tả và sử dụng đúng mạo từ (a/an/the) trước danh từ đếm đư... | {
"essay": {
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264497 | 2ac89d8b-e85e-401c-9a4f-9996df0083e4 | The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | task-1 | The three charts illustrate the utility and kinds of members of a public library in 2016.
In general, the adults comprised approximately half of the total members. Meanwhile, the most attractive type of books compared with the others was fiction for both children and adults, whereas the number of books that were borro... | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài viết kiểm soát ngữ pháp khá tốt với các lỗi ít và không cản trở việc hiểu nghĩa, tuy nhiên vẫn tồn tại lỗi cấu trúc câu nghiêm trọng (comma splice) và một số sai sót nhỏ về vị trí trạng từ cũng như cách dùng mạo từ.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Sử dụng liên từ (and, but, so) hoặc dấu câu thích hợp (dấu ch... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
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"The three charts illustrate the utility and kinds of members of a public library in 2016.",
"In general, <del>the</del> adults comprised approximately half of the total members.",
"In 2016, the number of adults evidently accounted for half of all members, at <error>51% approximately.</error><correction>approxi... | {
"essay": {
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"suggested_sentence": "The three charts illustrate the utility and kinds of members of a public library in 2016."
},
... |
264313 | c3657fca-cbcb-488d-bdb0-d8687f2ccd1c | Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. | task-2 | It is argued by some individuals that it is imperative to introduce stricter regulations for vehicle users in order to prevent traffic accidents. In my opinion, however, other effective solutions are the answer to this problem.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people believe that more severe pun... | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài viết duy trì mức độ chính xác ngữ pháp cao với các lỗi sai rất ít và không mang tính hệ thống, chủ yếu là thiếu dấu phẩy trước mệnh đề phân từ và việc chọn lựa động từ khuyết thiếu (could/can) chưa tối ưu về mặt ngữ nghĩa.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Sử dụng dấu phẩy để tách mệnh đề chính khỏi các cụm ph... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
{
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"It is argued by some individuals that it is imperative to introduce stricter regulations for vehicle users in order to prevent traffic accidents.",
"In my opinion, however, other effective solutions are the answer to this problem.",
"On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people believe that m... | {
"essay": {
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"suggested_sentence": "It is argued by some individuals that it is imp... |
264860 | c6c5b0b3-0a80-40e6-9b75-a45013c42728 | You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below gives information about the process generate electricity from waves
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words. | task-1 | The diagrams illustrate how a wave generates electricity and transmit powers to homes and businesses.
Overall, the machine uses the movement of waves to produce hydraulic pressure, which drives the turbine connected to a generator. The electricity is transmitted to homes and businesses through an undersea cable.
Ocean ... | [
"Few errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài viết duy trì mức độ chính xác ngữ pháp khá tốt với ý nghĩa rõ ràng, tuy nhiên vẫn còn mắc các lỗi hệ thống về sự hòa hợp giữa chủ ngữ và động từ (subject-verb agreement) như "transmit" và "spin", cùng với một số sai sót về từ vựng và cấu trúc câu gây thiếu tự nhiên.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Kiểm tra k... | {
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"original_sentence": "The diagrams illustrate how a wave generates electricity and transmit powers to homes and businesses.",
"c... | [
"The diagrams illustrate how a wave generates electricity and <error>transmit powers</error><correction>transmits power</correction> to homes and businesses.",
"Overall, the machine uses the movement of waves to produce hydraulic pressure, which drives the turbine connected to a generator.",
"The electricity is... | {
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264427 | e9813b6a-a823-4956-b90c-6a944a5e5e70 | Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend? | task-2 | In contemporary society, competition between others has a positive effect on people. This trend has both benefits and negatives, and this essay will extend my own perspectives on both viewpoints.
On the one hand, competition raises awareness and helps people to improve themselves and also become more mature. Because w... | [
"Some errors, RARELY impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài viết kiểm soát ngữ pháp ở mức độ trung bình, thường mắc các lỗi về cấu trúc câu (syntax), từ loại (word form) và dấu câu (punctuation), đặc biệt là việc sử dụng sai danh từ thay vì tính từ sau động từ trạng thái và thiếu mạo từ xác định.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Kiểm tra kỹ từ loại (danh từ/tính từ) k... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
{
"suggested_sentence": "In contemporary society, competition between people has a positive effect on individuals.",
"original_sentence": "In contemporary society, competition between others has a positive effect on people.",
"changes": [
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... | [
"In contemporary society, competition between <error>others</error><correction>people</correction> has a positive effect on <error>people.</error><correction>individuals.</correction>",
"This trend has both benefits and <error>negatives,</error><correction>drawbacks,</correction> and this essay will <error>extend... | {
"essay": {
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263901 | 4c350d69-51ce-4890-8056-998e42308297 | Some people think there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | task-2 | In the era of rapid technological advancement, advertising has permeated nearly every aspect of our lives. While some advocate for a complete prohibition of all advertising, I firmly believe this viewpoint is misguided and disagree with it entirely.
Foremost, advertising plays a crucial role in informing consumers and ... | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài viết thể hiện mức độ kiểm soát ngữ pháp xuất sắc với cấu trúc câu phức tạp và từ vựng học thuật chính xác, chỉ mắc một lỗi nhỏ là thiếu dấu chấm câu ở cuối đoạn.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Kiểm tra kỹ lưỡng dấu câu kết thúc (dấu chấm, dấu phẩy) trước khi hoàn thiện bài viết.
* Duy trì thói quen kiểm t... | {
"essay": {
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"original_sentence": "In the era of rapid technological advancement, advertising has permeated nearly every aspect of our lives.",
... | [
"In the era of rapid technological advancement, advertising has permeated nearly every aspect of our lives.",
"While some advocate for a complete prohibition of all advertising, I firmly believe this viewpoint is misguided and disagree with it entirely.",
"Foremost, advertising plays a crucial role in informing... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
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"suggested_sentence": "In the era of rapid technological advancement, advertising has permeated nearly every ... |
264328 | e147d713-93a0-4aec-804d-3ab9a1bf1740 | Social media addiction is becoming a serious issue among teenagers. What problems does it cause, and how can it be solved? | task-2 | With the rapid development of technology, social media has become increasingly popular among teenagers. The expansion of social platforms has raised concerns about social media addiction among youth, leading to serious mental health problems and social challenges, but it can be addressed through teaching media literacy... | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài viết thể hiện mức độ kiểm soát ngữ pháp rất cao với hầu như không có lỗi sai, ngoại trừ một lỗi cấu trúc nghiêm trọng là câu bị cụt (sentence fragment) bắt đầu bằng giới từ "By" nhưng thiếu mệnh đề chính.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Khử lỗi câu cụt bằng cách chuyển cụm giới từ "By establishing..." thành ... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
{
"suggested_sentence": "With the rapid development of technology, social media has become increasingly popular among teenagers.",
"original_sentence": "With the rapid development of technology, social media has become increasingly popular among teenagers.",
... | [
"With the rapid development of technology, social media has become increasingly popular among teenagers.",
"The expansion of social platforms has raised concerns about social media addiction among youth, leading to serious mental health problems and social challenges, but it can be addressed through teaching medi... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
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"changes": [],
"original_sentence": "With the rapid development of technology, social media has become increasingly popular among teenagers.",
"suggested_sentence": "With the rapid development of technology, social media has become increasingly popular am... |
264308 | d1be918a-aec2-42ec-8a0a-b2f50b4f58ef | Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? | task-2 | In contemporary society, social media have been a beneficial tool to foster connectivity among global citizens and enhance information dissemination. While acknowledging the substantial advantages that social media offer, I contend that these online platforms also come at the expense of meaningful face-to-face relation... | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | **Nhận xét**
Bài làm kiểm soát ngữ pháp ở mức độ cao, chỉ mắc các lỗi cấu trúc câu nghiêm trọng như mệnh đề fragment (thiếu chủ ngữ/động từ chính) và sai quy tắc dùng V-ing sau giới từ, cùng một số lỗi chọn từ và mạo từ mang tính chất trau chuốt văn phong.
**Cách cải thiện**
* Kiểm tra kỹ cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh, ... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
{
"suggested_sentence": "In contemporary society, social media have been a beneficial tool to foster connectivity among global citizens and enhance information dissemination.",
"original_sentence": "In contemporary society, social media have been a beneficial tool ... | [
"In contemporary society, social media have been a beneficial tool to foster connectivity among global citizens and enhance information dissemination.",
"While acknowledging the substantial advantages that social media offer, I contend that these online platforms also come at the expense of meaningful face-to-fac... | {
"essay": {
"sentence": [
{
"changes": [],
"original_sentence": "In contemporary society, social media have been a beneficial tool to foster connectivity among global citizens and enhance information dissemination.",
"suggested_sentence": "In contemporary society, social media have ... |
264561 | 9a5d55f1-da90-4bd1-a43b-eb4453f40f08 | "The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) fro(...TRUNCATED) | task-1 | "The given line graph illustrates the amount of fruit production in France, Spain, Germany and Turke(...TRUNCATED) | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | "**Nhận xét**\n\nBài viết duy trì khả năng kiểm soát ngữ pháp ở mức độ cao v(...TRUNCATED) | {"essay":{"sentence":[{"suggested_sentence":"The given line graph illustrates the amount of fruit pr(...TRUNCATED) | ["The given line graph illustrates the amount of fruit production in France, Spain, <error>Germany</(...TRUNCATED) | {"essay":{"sentence":[{"changes":[{"old":"The given line graph illustrates the amount of fruit produ(...TRUNCATED) |
264772 | 026a6fce-611d-4adf-b057-4e9c4ccf1709 | "As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical a(...TRUNCATED) | task-2 | "One school of thought holds that electronic inventions can have detrimental impacts on the health o(...TRUNCATED) | [
"Rare, non-systematic errors, NEVER impede meaning"
] | "**Nhận xét**\n\nBài viết duy trì kiểm soát tốt cấu trúc câu phức, chỉ mắc cá(...TRUNCATED) | {"essay":{"sentence":[{"suggested_sentence":"One school of thought holds that electronic inventions (...TRUNCATED) | ["One school of thought holds that electronic inventions can have detrimental impacts on the health (...TRUNCATED) | {"essay":{"sentence":[{"changes":[{"old":"One school of thought holds that electronic inventions can(...TRUNCATED) |
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