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In moments of significant disru... | The tornado came to shuffle a
deck of cards, and nowadays, instead of hiding in comfort, I pull out my lasso and throw. Additional information
More on Honors
Philanthropy. IE
Honor 1: Atlas Fellowship. I was named a fellow for demonstrating “agency,” a strong ambition for
creative ideas to solve global issues, such as ... | In moments of significant disruption, rather than seeking solace in established norms, I am compelled to proactively engage with challenges. My accomplishments include:
**Honors:**
* **Atlas Fellowship:** I was recognized as a fellow for demonstrating exceptional "agency" and a profound commitment to developing innovat... | {
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The academic record for Haoxi C... | REG A+ A+ N/A N/A N/A
COMPSCI Information REG A+ A+ N/A N/A N/A
Technology
HIST AP AP A- A+ N/A N/A N/A
Microeconomics
ENG Language Art C PREP A N/A N/A N/A
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Level 2
ENG Communication C PREP A N/A N/A N/A
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Grade 11
Second High S... | The academic record for Haoxi C. Duan, , " The transcript indicates enrollment at the Second High School Attached to Beijing Normal University, located at No. 18 Guan Ao Yuan, Bao Sheng Li Hai Dian District, Beijing, CHN ().
**Grade 10 Coursework:**
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Engagement with such poetic con... | To engage with such poetry is to recognize that meaning is never merely “said”; it is made,
felt, and simmers recalcitrantly beneath the act of speaking, touching not just the boundaries
of meaning but the pulse of human existence itself. 5
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Brooks, Cleanth. The Well Wrought... | Engagement with such poetic constructs reveals that meaning transcends mere explicit articulation; rather, it is actively forged, viscerally experienced, and persistently underlies the act of verbalization, thereby interfacing not solely with semantic boundaries but also with the quintessential essence of human existen... | {
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My academic trajectory has been... | 2024/11/30 22:03 My Colleges | Common App
Carnegie Mellon University writing
supplement
Carnegie Mellon University Writing
Most students choose their intended major or area of study based on a passion or
inspiration that’s developed over time – what passion or inspiration led you to choose
this area of study? (300 word... | My academic trajectory has been profoundly influenced by a convergence of deeply held passions, evolving from initial exposure to a sophisticated understanding of their inherent potential. Initially, my engagement with piano instruction was largely perfunctory, driven by parental directive rather than intrinsic motivat... | {
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A fundamental societal recalibr... | And most importantly, our whole society will readjust our perceptions on
impairments, from the micro-level, like grimaces and sympathetic look, to the macro-level, like
proper accommodations. Now, I skate between a place where I find meaning and a home I love daily. My twitches persist, so
do my efforts. When the newes... | A fundamental societal recalibration of perceptions regarding impairments is anticipated, encompassing both micro-level interactions, such as involuntary facial expressions and sympathetic gazes, and macro-level considerations, including the implementation of appropriate accommodations. Presently, my existence is chara... | {
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The experiential learning parad... | With its focus on experiential learning, Penn provides various opportunities for students to make a
real-world impact. As an advocate for healthy relationships, I can further my mission at Active
Minds, providing resources on mental health and well-being and building a non-judgmental
environment for people to open up. ... | The experiential learning paradigm at the University of Pennsylvania offers a myriad of avenues for students to effect tangible real-world change. As an impassioned advocate for healthy interpersonal dynamics, I envision augmenting my mission within Active Minds by furnishing essential resources pertaining to mental he... | {
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Applicant Haoxi Kan (, ) is see... | Details
details
University of Florida questions
General
Preferred start term Admission plan Early Action
Housing Option On campus
From the list below, Four-year traditional high school graduate
please select the option
that best described your
high school graduation
type:
While in high school
have your participated
in ... | Applicant Haoxi Kan (, ) is seeking admission to the University of Florida The applicant does not require financial aid and intends to reside on campus.
The intended academic major is Statistics, specifically pursuing a Bachelor of Arts degree in Statistics.
In terms of family information, the applicant indicates no si... | {
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Leveraging prior experiences ga... | Last year, leveraging my experience in China, I went on a trip to Vietnam, where I co-organized
workshops to build their national team and, more importantly, a debating environment that would
be more accessible to local children. Watching them express ideas without reservations, I was
glad I’d embarked on this path, bu... | Leveraging prior experiences garnered in China, the preceding year involved a facilitative excursion to Vietnam. During this engagement, collaborative efforts were directed towards the co-organization of workshops designed to cultivate a national team and, critically, to foster a more inclusive debating environment for... | {
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My foundational conviction posi... | In my opinion, nature is where this
power originated, and it is where I want to start to reconstruct this intimacy. At the dinner table with my host family in the US, I often hear my host mother talk about her college life at Cornell. The gleam in her eyes
and the undisguised pride she reveals while recounting her memo... | My foundational conviction posits that the genesis of profound connection resides within the natural world, and it is precisely within this domain that I endeavor to re-establish inter-human intimacy. Recollections shared by my host mother regarding her collegiate tenure at Cornell University frequently punctuate our d... | {
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The initial trepidation regardi... | What if I didn't end up winning? Why did I even sign up for this
info session in the first place? I was at least lucky to have friends who pulled me onto the stage
and put my name down on the sheet. My friends were more aware of my confidence in speaking whenever an Economics topic is
brought up. Various reactions were... | The initial trepidation regarding potential failure and the rationale behind my participation in the information session were swiftly overshadowed by the fortuitous intervention of my peers, who proactively facilitated my stage presence and registration. Their discernment regarding my adeptness in articulating economic... | {
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For the academic term, the inte... | country
Birthplace Shanghai, China 0 years US
Other citizenships China
Current US Visa B-2 Tourist, K9331174 Issued:
Intended US Visa F-1 Student
Common App fee waiver
Fee waiver requested No
Family
Household
Parents Married
Home Both Parents
Parent 1
Mother
Name Yumei Zhao
Email, Phone shzym1974@163.com, +86.13311917... | For the academic term, the intended U.S. visa classification is F-1 Student. No Common App fee waiver has been requested.
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Wei-Jen Lee's contributions enc... | Wei-Jen Lee
6 hr/wk, 30 wk/yr First author/presenter at IEEE IAS conference; optimized electric school
Continue bus charging schedule w/algorithms to reduce cost and emissions for
RRISD
Environmental
11, 12 Initiator, Independent Sustainability Initiative: Replacing Diesel School
Year Buses with Electric
4 hr/wk, 30 wk... | Wei-Jen Lee's contributions encompass a rigorous engagement with electrical engineering and environmental sustainability. As a primary author and presenter at an IEEE IAS conference, Lee dedicated 6 hours per week for 30 weeks per year to optimizing electric school bus charging schedules. This optimization involved the... | {
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My grandmother, a product of th... | My grandmother, born in the 1950s, is a firm believer in what is called “institutional marriage.”
She believed it was her “duty” to marry and have children for the country’s development. My
mother, born in the 1970s, thinks marriage is about seeking compassionate company and a sense
of security. Their marital attitudes... | My grandmother, a product of the 1950s, espouses a steadfast conviction in the concept of "institutional marriage," perceiving it as an inherent societal obligation for procreation and national advancement. Conversely, my mother, shaped by the 1970s, conceptualizes matrimony as a pursuit of empathetic companionship and... | {
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**Academic Engagement**
During ... | Academic
10 Student, Brown University Pre-College Program: Public Speaking &
Break Economic Policy
20 hr/wk, 2 wk/yr Delivered policy speech "The Triangular Circulation of Economics";
Continue analyzed economic systems through quantitative lens for equity-
focused solutions. Responsibilities and circumstances
• Managin... | **Academic Engagement**
During a two-week pre-college program at Brown University, I dedicated 20 hours per week to the study of Public Speaking and Economic Policy. My contributions included the delivery of a policy speech titled "The Triangular Circulation of Economics," wherein I applied a quantitative analytical fr... | {
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Our initiatives have encompasse... | We launched websites and online learning units for 3000+ teens in different
countries, cooperating with institutions such as UWC and Alibaba Foundation to teach the mindset
of Design Thinking and to facilitate ideate solutions for various issues. To help our campus
community and city become more sustainable, we propose... | Our initiatives have encompassed the development and deployment of online learning modules and digital platforms, reaching over 3,000 adolescents across multiple international jurisdictions. These endeavors were executed in collaborative partnership with esteemed institutions such as UWC and the Alibaba Foundation, wit... | {
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Upon initiating a discourse con... | As I started explaining my favorite idols and the
deep meaning behind their lyrics, she listened. EV
She then started telling me a story from her own youth. She shared with me the stories of her best
friends who had been obsessed with Dehua Liu, a famous singer from their generation. She told
me how her friend would co... | Upon initiating a discourse concerning the profound lyrical interpretations of my preferred cultural icons, I observed her attentive reception. Subsequently, she reciprocated with an anecdotal account from her formative years, detailing her companions' fervent admiration for Dehua Liu, a prominent vocalist of their epo... | {
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On December 10, 2018, for the M... | 2018/12/10 The
Middlebury College Questions
General
Student status Full-Time Degree Seeking
Preferred start term The 2019-20 academic year
Admission I prefer September admission. Preference
Admission plan Early Decision
Do you intend to use No, I do not qualify for a school specific fee waiver
one of these school-
spec... | On December 10, 2018, for the Middlebury College application, I am submitting my details as a full-time degree-seeking student, with a preference for the 2019-20 academic year as my start term and September as the ideal admission month. I have selected the Early Decision plan and confirm that I do not qualify for any s... | {
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This prompt invites reflection ... | Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a
new understanding of yourself or others. I have never mastered the art of farewells. I’ve called many places home—bathed in the coastal
breezes of Dalian, under the neon-lit nights of Shanghai, at the crossroads of cultures ... | This prompt invites reflection on a pivotal accomplishment, event, or realization that initiated a phase of profound personal development and a refined comprehension of oneself or others. My personal trajectory has been marked by a consistent difficulty in the art of parting. Despite having resided in diverse geographi... | {
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Consequently, upon each return ... | Thus, whenever I return to Huyi, I bring my camera to capture the
essence of communal experiences, from fireworks shows in the Chinese New Year to ancestor
worship events in the Qingming Festival. It might be inevitable that the collective traditional life in rural regions like Huyi gradually
disappears as urbanization... | Consequently, upon each return to Huyi, I invariably utilize my camera to encapsulate the quintessence of shared communal experiences, ranging from the pyrotechnic displays of the Chinese New Year to the veneration ceremonies of the Qingming Festival. It is conceivable that the collective traditional life prevalent in ... | {
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Our initiative was fundamentall... | We wanted to envision how
much more women could achieve without obstacles and prejudices, to think about how inspiring
stories could empower and inspire women who are under similar circumstances. That was the drive behind my interviewing project, where I invited some of the successful female
scientists to share they in... | Our initiative was fundamentally driven by a desire to conceptualize the augmented potential of women in the absence of societal impediments and biases, and to consider the profound impact that narratives of achievement could exert upon women navigating analogous circumstances. This foundational aspiration catalyzed my... | {
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For my application to New York ... | New York University Questions
General
Preferred start Fall
term
Primary Campus of New York: Primary campus of Preferred Early Decision
Admission
Notification Plan
School Specific None
Fee Waivers
New York Campus I would like to live on campus at NYU
Housing
Not sending
testing, applying to
Steinhardt or Tisch
No IE
Pre... | For my application to New York University, I specify the following preferences: a general start in the Fall term, with the primary campus in New York aligned to the Preferred Early Decision Admission Notification Plan. There are no school-specific fee waivers, and I express a desire to reside in on-campus housing at NY... | {
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Schopenhauer eloquently posits ... | Schopenhauer wittily analogizes our presumption of free will as a pond of
water blithely burbling to itself over how it can stir waves (that is, in the sea during a storm),
gush downhill (that is, in the river bed), foam, plunge, and roar (that is, in the waterfall),
rise as a stream into the air (that is, in the fount... | Schopenhauer eloquently posits an analogy where the human perception of free will is likened to a placid pond, contentedly contemplating its potential to generate waves within a tumultuous sea, cascade as a river, effervesce and surge within a waterfall, ascend skyward as a fountain, or dissipate through evaporation at... | {
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**Research Engagement Affirmati... | Have you completed Yes
research with a faculty
member or mentor in an
academic discipline
such as science,
engineering or other
academic (e.g., humanities, social
sciences or
languages)? Please complete the Hong Kong SAR, China
following questions
regarding your research
experience. Where was
the research
conducted? De... | **Research Engagement Affirmation:** Yes
**Geographic Context of Research:** The research endeavor was meticulously executed within the Special Administrative Region of Hong Kong, China.
**Temporal and Methodological Commitment:** My engagement with this research initiative necessitated an approximate weekly commitment... | {
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The musical composition "The Gr... | Lana del Rey’s The Greatest. In the style of classic rock, this song never fails in bringing me to a
fantasy land, where I become a mythical figure in ancient Greece, shouldering the mission of
saving sentient beings. When listening to this song, I’m driven to continue exploring the
impossible. Do you wish to submit a
... | The musical composition "The Greatest" by Lana Del Rey, characterized by its classic rock aesthetic, consistently transports me to an imagined realm. Within this fantastical setting, I embody a mythological entity in ancient Greece, tasked with the profound responsibility of safeguarding sentient life forms. This audit... | {
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**Carnegie Mellon **
As articul... | 2019/1/8 The
Carnegie Mellon “When we’re connected to others, we become better people,” said Carnegie Mellon University’s Randy Pausch, author of The
Last Lecture. At Carnegie Mellon you’ll have the opportunity to collaborate with a diverse community of scholars, artists and
innovators. Given the students, faculty, st... | **Carnegie Mellon **
As articulated by the esteemed Randy Pausch, author of *The Last Lecture* and a distinguished figure at Carnegie Mellon University, profound personal enhancement is intrinsically linked to interpersonal connection. At Carnegie Mellon, individuals are afforded the unique privilege of engaging in col... | {
"uid": "2018_1500_supp_c0_359",
"essay_id": "2018_1500_supp_c0",
"type": "supp",
"tier": "T20",
"year": 2018,
"gptzero_human_prob": 0.9998576010403716,
"input_words": 309,
"chosen_words": 308
} |
You are an expert essay editor. Rewrite the following AI-generated college application essay to sound authentically human. Preserve all specific details, facts, and the core message. Make the writing feel personal, natural, and genuine — like a real student wrote it.
AI-generated essay:
The individual had never antici... | He had never thought he would ever be
given the honor of meeting the king. "Your Majesty," his lips parted, his voice muffled but loud,
"Praise be to your mercy.”
The sword always reminded him of his country's kindness to him. The great country! When he was
in the barracks, the Sergeant used to demand that they be educ... | The individual had never anticipated the distinct privilege of an audience with the monarch. "Your Majesty," he articulated, his voice resonating with a muffled yet discernible clarity, "May your clemency be eternally lauded."
The sword served as a perpetual emblem of his nation's benevolence. This esteemed nation, in ... | {
"uid": "2023_2938_supp_c3_3079",
"essay_id": "2023_2938_supp_c3",
"type": "supp",
"tier": "T20",
"year": 2023,
"gptzero_human_prob": 0.999632740598447,
"input_words": 288,
"chosen_words": 307
} |
You are an expert essay editor. Rewrite the following AI-generated college application essay to sound authentically human. Preserve all specific details, facts, and the core message. Make the writing feel personal, natural, and genuine — like a real student wrote it.
AI-generated essay:
Describe a pursuit that ignites... | Duke Forest is irresistible. As a nature lover, I can't wait to volunteer on trail maintenance days. As someone who
seeks further understanding of human interactions with the environment, I hope to follow in the footsteps of
Clarence Korstian to continue the 85-year study of the childhood and adolescence of Duke Forest... | Describe a pursuit that ignites your intellectual curiosity, whether it be an idea, a book, a project, a cultural endeavor, a work of art, a startup, music, a film, research, an innovation, a question, or another avenue of exploration. Several years ago, I observed that the river near my home was blanketed in a slick, ... | {
"uid": "2018_1498_supp_c0_349_grok",
"essay_id": "2018_1498_supp_c0",
"type": "supp",
"tier": "T20",
"year": 2018,
"gptzero_human_prob": 0.9998459718812214,
"input_words": 280,
"chosen_words": 268
} |
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