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coherence
Make the text coherent: He has been an outspoken critic of numerous environmental advocacy groups. From July 2005 to late 2008, critic was the critic of the Australian Environment Foundation, a group that has links to the politically conservative Institute of Public Affairs.
He has been an outspoken critic of numerous environmental advocacy groups. From July 2005 to late 2008, Burke was the Chair of the Australian Environment Foundation, a group that has links to the politically conservative Institute of Public Affairs.
80001
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: Like all districts of NSW Swimming, its own ACT Championships ;. Unlike many other districts in NSW these are open to teams and competitors from outside the district.
Like all districts of NSW Swimming, its own ACT Championships ; but unlike many other districts in NSW these are open to teams and competitors from outside the district.
80002
coherence
Make the text clearer: This allows patients to self-monitor their health conditions and to not rely as much on health care professionals. Patients are more willing to stay on their treatment plans as they are more invested and included in the process, decision-making is shared.
This allows patients to self-monitor their health conditions and to not rely as much on health care professionals. Furthermore, patients are more willing to stay on their treatment plans as they are more invested and included in the process, decision-making is shared.
80003
coherence
Fix coherence: Roosevelt increased profits and spending during this period. Roosevelt hoped, would help bring the country out of the Depression.
Increasing profits and spending during this period, Roosevelt hoped, would help bring the country out of the Depression.
80004
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Failing to defeating CZW Tag Team Champions brother Russ and Charlie Haas at CZW Xspelled on March 18, 2000. They would however defeat V.D.
Although failing to defeating CZW Tag Team Champions brother Russ and Charlie Haas at CZW Xspelled on March 18, 2000, they would however defeat V.D.
80005
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Despite its plethora of would-be shocking moments, the film provides little in the way of genuine scares. Director Zarantonello does provide a visually effective climax.
Despite its plethora of would-be shocking moments, the film provides little in the way of genuine scares, although director Zarantonello does provide a visually effective climax.
80006
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Neal ends up drunk, and Harry convinces him to call Mary (Gretchen Mol), his teenaged ex-girlfriend. When Mary sneaks out of Mary's house, Gretchen Mol's mother calls the police, who Neal Neal just as he is about to leave.
Neal ends up drunk, and Harry convinces him to call Mary (Gretchen Mol), his teenaged ex-girlfriend. When Mary sneaks out of her house, her mother calls the police, who arrest Neal just as he is about to leave.
80007
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: She ponders the inscrutable drawing. She realizes that the black maid, whose name she has forgotten, and whose face she has trouble calling to mind, had hated her.
Pondering the inscrutable drawing, she realizes that the black maid, whose name she has forgotten, and whose face she has trouble calling to mind, had hated her.
80008
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Crosland was a member of the Mechanics' Institute, and a patron of the Yorkshire Penny Bank. Crosland was also a member of Huddersfield College, and patron of the Naturalist Society.
Crosland was a member of the Mechanics' Institute, and a patron of the Yorkshire Penny Bank. He was also a proprietor of Huddersfield College, and patron of the Naturalist Society.
80009
coherence
Make the text more logical: He eventually, focused more on the art of escapology. Does still perform magic today.
He eventually, focused more on the art of escapology although does still perform magic today.
80010
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Tibet: Cry of the Snow Lion is a 2002 documentary film about the Chinese occupation of Tibet. Tibet is narrated by Martin Sheen and Tibet voiceovers are provided by Edward Edwards, Tim Robbins, Susan Sarandon and Shirley Winters.
Tibet: Cry of the Snow Lion is a 2002 documentary film about the Chinese occupation of Tibet. It is narrated by Martin Sheen and Tibetan voiceovers are provided by Edward Edwards, Tim Robbins, Susan Sarandon and Shirley Winters.
80011
coherence
Make the text clearer: 16 December: Serious offensive by ISIS forces, with 300 fighters attacking several Kurdish positions north and east of Mosul. Reports on the number of ISIS casualties varied, from 42 dead to hundreds.
16 December: Serious offensive by ISIS forces, with 300 fighters attacking several Kurdish positions north and east of Mosul. Reports on the number of ISIL casualties varied, from 42 dead to hundreds.
80012
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: It is typically carried out by the girl's mother, with the aim of making the girl less sexually attractive to men and boys. Girl's virginity is preserved girl she can girl's her education.
It is typically carried out by the girl's mother, with the aim of making the girl less sexually attractive to men and boys, so that her virginity is preserved and she can continue her education.
80013
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Consummation is defined as full sexual penetration even without any emission or conception. Because of the fact that transgender women do have the ability to have sex, the Court found this argument irrelevant to this case.
Consummation is defined as full sexual penetration even without any emission or conception. And because of the fact that transgender women do have the ability to have sex, the Court found this argument irrelevant to this case.
80014
coherence
Make the text more consistent: She deemed her possessions in the east undefendable. She set up headquarters at Hennebont in western Brittany but was driven into Brest and besieged, the siege being broken by the arrival of an English army under the Earl of Northampton at the naval battle of Brest.
Deeming her possessions in the east undefendable, she set up headquarters at Hennebont in western Brittany but was driven into Brest and besieged, the siege being broken by the arrival of an English army under the Earl of Northampton at the naval battle of Brest.
80015
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Obj files support higher-order surfaces using several different kinds of interpolation, such as Taylor and B-splines. Support for those features in third party file readers is far from universal.
Obj files support higher-order surfaces using several different kinds of interpolation, such as Taylor and B-splines, although support for those features in third party file readers is far from universal.
80016
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: This can come about. Future offspring will be equally related to the mother as the current infant.
This can come about because future offspring will be equally related to the mother as the current infant.
80017
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: This loophole was exploited by Harold Osborn, among others. High jump equipment was changed to ensure that the bar could be dislodged both backwards and forwards.
This loophole was exploited by Harold Osborn, among others. As a result, high jump equipment was changed to ensure that the bar could be dislodged both backwards and forwards.
80018
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: According to Victor Feske, there is too much readiness to accept Butterfield's classic formulation from 1931 as definitive. A study by Keith Sewell, Butterfield and the Interpretation of History, was published in 2005.
According to Victor Feske, there is too much readiness to accept Butterfield's classic formulation from 1931 as definitive. A study by Keith Sewell, Herbert Butterfield and the Interpretation of History, was published in 2005.
80019
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Hawken estimated the total number of non-profit organizations around the world to be well over a million. Hawken launched Wiser.org, which stands for the World Index for Social and Environmental Responsibility, as an online directory to help map out the work done by these organizations.
Estimating the total number of non-profit organizations around the world to be well over a million, Hawken launched Wiser.org, which stands for the World Index for Social and Environmental Responsibility, as an online directory to help map out the work done by these organizations.
80020
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Queen attendants take care of the queen by feeding and grooming her. Even more important is attendants' incidental role in spreading Queen Mandibular Pheromone (QMP) throughout the hive.
Queen attendants take care of the queen by feeding and grooming her. Yet, even more important is their incidental role in spreading Queen Mandibular Pheromone (QMP) throughout the hive.
80021
coherence
Make the text coherent: Although this was an entirely German initiative -- Quisling himself was left unaware of it. Government assistance was provided.
Although this was an entirely German initiative -- Quisling himself was left unaware of it, although government assistance was provided.
80022
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Sales of production version was planned in North America in 2008. It did not start until 2009.
Although sales of production version was planned in North America in 2008, it did not start until 2009.
80023
coherence
Fix sentence transition: The beam pattern changes its direction continually. Vehicles in front are not being illuminated.
The beam pattern changes its direction continually so that vehicles in front are not being illuminated.
80024
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The rear seats have wooden backs. When seats are folded down the trunk looks like the deck of a yacht.
The rear seats have wooden backs, so when they are folded down the trunk looks like the deck of a yacht.
80025
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: Ath the time the Danish king was involved in several wars, particularly against Sweden and Norwegians were conscripted. Norwegians were Danish Norwegians at the time.
Ath the time the Danish king was involved in several wars, particularly against Sweden and Norwegians were conscripted because they were Danish citizens at the time.
80026
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Du Bois Clubs of America 1964. Du Bois Clubs of America are a Conference of Socialist Youth was held in San Francisco over the weekend of March 21 -- 22.
Du Bois Clubs of America, a Conference of Socialist Youth was held in San Francisco over the weekend of March 21 -- 22, 1964.
80027
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: She erected markers and monuments along old trails and at historic sites, in Waycross and Ware County. Local history would not be forgotten.
She erected markers and monuments along old trails and at historic sites, in Waycross and Ware County so that local history would not be forgotten.
80028
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Overall, access to improved water supply in Jamaica stands at 93 %. Access to improved sanitation is currently at 80 %.
Overall, access to improved water supply in Jamaica stands at 93 % and access to improved sanitation is currently at 80 %.
80029
coherence
Make the text clearer: While it is true that cats and dogs eat grass, it has nothing to do with the weather and is. Cats and dogs are not exclusively carnivorous.
While it is true that cats and dogs eat grass, it has nothing to do with the weather and is because cats and dogs are not exclusively carnivorous.
80030
coherence
Make the text more coherent: This was the first homeopathic hospital for the insane established in New England ;. Such hospitals existed in New York, Michigan, and perhaps other states.
This was the first homeopathic hospital for the insane established in New England ; but such hospitals existed in New York, Michigan, and perhaps other states.
80031
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: Victoria was a colony in Australia when Western Province was created. From Federation in 1901, Victoria was a state in the Australia.
Victoria was a colony in Australia when Western Province was created. From Federation in 1901, Victoria was a state in the Commonwealth of Australia.
80032
coherence
Make the text more logical: The K'iche' tended to place their newly installed ruling elite in a mountain-top fortress securing the population in the valleys below. Substantial portions of the original Mam population remained in place in the plateau area.
The K'iche' tended to place their newly installed ruling elite in a mountain-top fortress securing the population in the valleys below. However, substantial portions of the original Mam population remained in place in the plateau area.
80033
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: The foreigners dominated Indian Ocean,. As the Mappilas dominated the coastal trade and the trade to Pegu.
The foreigners dominated Indian Ocean, whereas as the Mappilas dominated the coastal trade and the trade to Pegu.
80034
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: ^ The dark secrets of Queensland's lesbian vampire killer 11 November 2015. Queensland's lesbian vampire killer is the Courier-Mail.
^ The dark secrets of Queensland's lesbian vampire killer, The Courier-Mail, 11 November 2015.
80035
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Robin spies a bishop and his company. Robin fears being captured and hung.
Spying a bishop and his company, Robin fears being captured and hung.
80036
coherence
Make the text coherent: The daughter accuses the beggar of being a nobleman, and when he assures her he is not, she turns him out. We find he is a lord with 24 knights.
The daughter accuses the beggar of being a nobleman, and when he assures her he is not, she turns him out. In the end, we find he is a lord with 24 knights.
80037
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The Lorraine Hansberry Theatre of San Francisco is named in her honor. San Francisco specializes in original stagings and revivals of African-American theatre.
The Lorraine Hansberry Theatre of San Francisco, which specializes in original stagings and revivals of African-American theatre, is named in her honor.
80038
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Newcomer Matthew King offered financial advice and helped organise a mortgage-but wanted more than Louise's business. After pursuing Louise for weeks, Louise and Newcomer began a passionate affair.
Newcomer Matthew King offered financial advice and helped organise a mortgage-but wanted more than Louise's business. After pursuing her for weeks, Louise and Matthew began a passionate affair.
80039
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Maine bordered the county of Anjou to the south and the Duchy of Normandy to the north. Maine became a bone of contention between the rulers of these more powerful principalities.
Bordering the county of Anjou to the south and the Duchy of Normandy to the north, Maine became a bone of contention between the rulers of these more powerful principalities.
80040
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: Females weigh from 295 to 600 g. Males can range from 320 to 715 g.
Females weigh from 295 to 600 g, and males can range from 320 to 715 g.
80041
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: He fuses Art Nouveau and elements of New Objectivity. He develops a style referred to as expressive realism in respective literature.
Fusing Art Nouveau and elements of New Objectivity, he develops a style referred to as expressive realism in respective literature.
80042
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Tilly's big brother Jack has been away on tour with his water polo team. Now Jack is back and Tilly is cooking Jack's favourite food for a slap-up, welcome-home lunch.
Tilly's big brother Jack has been away on tour with his water polo team, but now he is back and Tilly is cooking his favourite food for a slap-up, welcome-home lunch.
80043
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: They were named by the Advisory Committee on Antarctic Names for John W. McDonough 1962. John W. McDonough is a United States Antarctic Research Program ionospheric physicist at the South Pole Station.
They were named by the Advisory Committee on Antarctic Names for John W. McDonough, a United States Antarctic Research Program ionospheric physicist at the South Pole Station, 1962.
80044
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The steel bascule span was purchased by Disney. Is in Orlando at the Disney theme park.
The steel bascule span was purchased by Disney and is in Orlando at the Walt Disney World theme park.
80045
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: If Aldridge joined the cast of a show, it invariably meant the injection of an extra dimension of dramatic interest, however modest his role in it. In everything Aldridge did, if never a big name, Aldridge was a Aldridge to Aldridge's fingertips.
If Aldridge joined the cast of a show, it invariably meant the injection of an extra dimension of dramatic interest, however modest his role in it. In everything he did, if never a big name, he was a professional to his fingertips.
80046
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: The previous coach for the Huskies was Krista Mikesch, who was a former player at Tech. Krista Mikesch was an outstanding player and was an All-American setter from 1993-1996.
The previous coach for the Huskies was Krista Mikesch, who was a former player at Tech. She was an outstanding athlete and was an All-American setter from 1993-1996.
80047
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Bates signed professional forms in 1964. Bates made 187 appearances for Leeds scoring nine goals, including one against Juventus in the 2 -- 2 first leg of the Fairs Cup Final of 1971 away in Turin.
Signing professional forms in 1964, Bates made 187 appearances for Leeds scoring nine goals, including one against Juventus in the 2 -- 2 first leg of the Fairs Cup Final of 1971 away in Turin.
80048
coherence
Fix coherence errors: The short distance is important because the capillary diffusion rate decreases when the diffusion distance increases. Because of its large number (10-14 million capillaries), there is an incredible amount of surface area for exchange.
The short distance is important because the capillary diffusion rate decreases when the diffusion distance increases. Then, because of its large number (10-14 million capillaries), there is an incredible amount of surface area for exchange.
80049
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Benmergui left the show in May 1992 to become host of Friday Night! with Benmergui, and was succeeded by Kevin Newman in the fall.
Benmergui left the show in May 1992 to become host of Friday Night! with Ralph Benmergui, and was succeeded by Kevin Newman in the fall.
80050
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: On April 14, 2009, Farris released SHOUT! Live, as Farris, featuring the McCrary Sisters.
On April 14, 2009, Farris released SHOUT! Live, as Mike Farris & the Roseland Rhythm Revue, featuring the McCrary Sisters.
80051
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: The Patriots proclaimed the short-lived Batavian Republic. Government was soon returned to stabler and more experienced hands.
The Patriots proclaimed the short-lived Batavian Republic, but government was soon returned to stabler and more experienced hands.
80052
coherence
Make the text coherent: He contemplated a return to Romania as a soldier or a monk. He was on a continuous search for effective antidepressants, medicating himself with passion flower extract, and, eventually, with methamphetamine.
Contemplating a return to Romania as a soldier or a monk, he was on a continuous search for effective antidepressants, medicating himself with passion flower extract, and, eventually, with methamphetamine.
80053
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Writing in the 12th century, Abraham ibn Ezra observed that there were over a thousand divine commandments in the Bible. Fewer than 300 applied to Abraham ibn Ezra's time.
Writing in the 12th century, Abraham ibn Ezra observed that there were over a thousand divine commandments in the Bible, but fewer than 300 applied to his time.
80054
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: What is distinct from conventional single-mode chromatography is that the secondary interactions in MMC can not be too weak. Thus interactions also contribute to the retention of the solutes.
What is distinct from conventional single-mode chromatography is that the secondary interactions in MMC can not be too weak, and thus they also contribute to the retention of the solutes.
80055
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: He subsequently proceeded to Baptist Academy for his high school education and left Baptist Academic in 1956 as the best graduating student,. Earning the honour of his name been listed on the school's DUX BOARD.
He subsequently proceeded to Baptist Academy for his high school education and left Baptist Academic in 1956 as the best graduating student, hence earning the honour of his name been listed on the school's DUX BOARD.
80056
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: The system can also process the data upon ingestion, if the data format requires it. Even very large file repositories can be efficiently analyzed, as only the required data is processed in the database.
The system can also process the data upon ingestion, if the data format requires it. As a result, even very large file repositories can be efficiently analyzed, as only the required data is processed in the database.
80057
coherence
Fix sentence flow: In 2002, a law was passed that enabled Mongolian Army and police forces to conduct UN-backed and other international peacekeeping missions abroad. In August 2003, Mongolian contributed troops to the Iraq War as part of the Multi-National Force -- Iraq.
In 2002, a law was passed that enabled Mongolian Army and police forces to conduct UN-backed and other international peacekeeping missions abroad. In August 2003, Mongolia contributed troops to the Iraq War as part of the Multi-National Force -- Iraq.
80058
coherence
Make the text more logical: I was not convinced to change my name. Finally, I have changed my name to M.G.
I was not convinced to change my name but finally, I have changed my name to M.G.
80059
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Delighted Sergeant McGing (Alun Armstrong) has dreamed of a good murder for years. Someone's ahead of him.
Delighted Sergeant McGing (Alun Armstrong) has dreamed of a good murder for years. But someone's ahead of him.
80060
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: She had keen interest in music and began singing for Radio Pakistan in the early 1950s. Insufficient money from the radio took her to the film director, Anwar Kamal Pasha in 1955.
She had keen interest in music and began singing for Radio Pakistan in the early 1950s. However, insufficient money from the radio took her to the film director, Anwar Kamal Pasha in 1955.
80061
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: My childhood I have always preferred to be alone and independent. That is how I always lived.
Since my childhood I have always preferred to be alone and independent, that is how I always lived.
80062
coherence
Make the text more coherent: The excess produce is sold to private buyers at usually lower prices as compared to FRA floor prices. Prices generally are determined by the market forces of supply and demand.
The excess produce is sold to private buyers at usually lower prices as compared to FRA floor prices. However, prices generally are determined by the market forces of supply and demand.
80063
coherence
Make the text clearer: Taylor showcased the film-making talents he refined while working in post-production. Taylor started directing short works in 2003, including viral web videos, spec commercials, indie music videos, and a short film.
Showcasing the film-making talents he refined while working in post-production, Taylor started directing short works in 2003, including viral web videos, spec commercials, indie music videos, and a short film.
80064
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: The nonlinearity is due to convective acceleration, which is an acceleration associated with the change in velocity over position. Any convective flow, whether turbulent or not, will involve nonlinearity.
The nonlinearity is due to convective acceleration, which is an acceleration associated with the change in velocity over position. Hence, any convective flow, whether turbulent or not, will involve nonlinearity.
80065
coherence
Make the text more consistent: It was also the first collaboration between Rundgren and Michele Gray, a singer and ex-model who helped organize the sessions. singer sang background vocals, both on the record and on subsequent tours, and the pair later married.
It was also the first collaboration between Rundgren and Michele Gray, a singer and ex-model who helped organize the sessions. Gray sang background vocals, both on the record and on subsequent tours, and the pair later married.
80066
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Brown was not elevated to elective office post-war. His was an influential voice.
Although Brown was not elevated to elective office post-war, his was an influential voice.
80067
coherence
Fix sentence flow: - He says he's losing business. Customers are afraid to come downtown.
- He says he's losing business because customers are afraid to come downtown.
80068
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Another route is also available. Another route is a trail leading to the platform on the side of the ski jump.
Another route, a trail leading to the platform on the side of the ski jump, is also available.
80069
coherence
Fix sentence flow: He served in this capacity as Speaker of the house 1983. Speaker of the house is a tenure that ended on October 5.
He served in this capacity as Speaker of the house, a tenure that ended on October 5, 1983.
80070
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Starting with OpenGEU 8.10 Luna Serena as well. OpenGEU 8.10 Luna Serena is a port of Compiz called Ecomorph has been available for 3D effects.
Starting with OpenGEU 8.10 Luna Serena, a port of Compiz called Ecomorph has been available for 3D effects, as well.
80071
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Ozhukarai is a legislative assembly constituency in the Union territory of Puducherry in India. assembly constituency assembly constituency was part of Puducherry (Lok Sabha Puducherry).
Ozhukarai is a legislative assembly constituency in the Union territory of Puducherry in India. Ozhukarai assembly constituency was part of Puducherry (Lok Sabha constituency).
80072
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Suhrawardy was elected leader of the opposition in the second Constituent Assembly and in 1956 was appointed prime minister, a further loss for the Muslim League. Suhrawardy was the first Muslim League Suhrawardy to hold this position.
Suhrawardy was elected leader of the opposition in the second Constituent Assembly and in 1956 was appointed prime minister, a further loss for the Muslim League because he was the first non-Muslim League politician to hold this position.
80073
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Palmerston Park was first opened in 1919, when Queen of the South were formed. Football had been played on the site since the 1870s.
Palmerston Park was first opened in 1919, when Queen of the South were formed, although football had been played on the site since the 1870s.
80074
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In Bremen, candidates of the Social Democratic Party (Sozialdemokratische Partei Deutschlands, SPD) and The Left (Die Linke) launched a boycott against the project. Right-wing candidates had not been excluded.
In Bremen, candidates of the Social Democratic Party (Sozialdemokratische Partei Deutschlands, SPD) and The Left (Die Linke) launched a boycott against the project because right-wing candidates had not been excluded.
80075
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: The cast was announced on April 4, 2007. Filming started in May 2007.
The cast was announced on April 4, 2007 and filming started in May 2007.
80076
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Their head capsules show great similarities to millipedes: both have three pairs of mouthparts and the genital openings occur in the anterior part of the body. Both groups have a pupoid phase at the end of the embryonic development.
Their head capsules show great similarities to millipedes: both have three pairs of mouthparts and the genital openings occur in the anterior part of the body. Moreover, both groups have a pupoid phase at the end of the embryonic development.
80077
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: In 1635, he applied for and got from the Viceroy of New Spain marquis de Cerralvo a license to explore California, a territory that. Located within the borders of the Spanish Empire was unknown whether it was an island or peninsula.
In 1635, he applied for and got from the Viceroy of New Spain marquis de Cerralvo a license to explore California, a territory that although located within the borders of the Spanish Empire was unknown whether it was an island or peninsula.
80078
coherence
Make the text more logical: At least 1985, with the Compuserve Books & Writer's Forum. Writers have formed writing spaces online where they can discuss writing, share resources, and critique work.
Since at least 1985, with the Compuserve Books & Writer's Forum, writers have formed writing spaces online where they can discuss writing, share resources, and critique work.
80079
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The islands were sparsely inhabited by fishermen for centuries. Tourism now accounts for most economic activity.
The islands were sparsely inhabited by fishermen for centuries, although tourism now accounts for most economic activity.
80080
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: I like Joan of Arc best of all my books ;. Joan of Arc is the Joan of Arc ; I know Joan of Arc perfectly well.
I like Joan of Arc best of all my books ; and it is the best ; I know it perfectly well.
80081
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: In this way humans are able to feel as if they have control over situations that they can not control. Rather than treating the object as an object.
In this way humans are able to feel as if they have control over situations that they can not control because rather than treating the object as an object.
80082
coherence
Make the text coherent: The locality's name is an Aboriginal word. Place of land and water where the tortoise goes.
The locality's name is an Aboriginal word meaning place of land and water where the tortoise goes.
80083
coherence
Fix sentence transition: A mysterious stranger bequeaths to Calderon a magic lantern that transforms him into the dashing contender Calano. Questions about Calderon's identity put Calderon's possible victory and the love of the beautiful princess in jeopardy.
A mysterious stranger bequeaths to Calderon a magic lantern that transforms him into the dashing contender Calano, but questions about his identity put Calderon's possible victory and the love of the beautiful princess in jeopardy.
80084
coherence
Make the text more logical: Dawson revisited the site on several occasions. Dawson found further fragments of the skull and took them to Arthur Smith Woodward, keeper of the geological department at the British Museum.
Revisiting the site on several occasions, Dawson found further fragments of the skull and took them to Arthur Smith Woodward, keeper of the geological department at the British Museum.
80085
coherence
Make the text more coherent: The ratios for third gear and fourth gear were set. Third was used for most of the circuit.
The ratios for third gear and fourth gear were set so that third was used for most of the circuit.
80086
coherence
Make the text more consistent: After the armistice, paratrooper units were officially disbanded. Training jumps were performed from time to time in North Africa.
After the armistice, paratrooper units were officially disbanded, although training jumps were performed from time to time in North Africa.
80087
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Power Pill Fist (Ken Fec) is an Atari noise rock artist from Pittsburgh, PA. Power Pill Fist was the Ken Fec for the experimental band Black Moth Super Rainbow from its beginnings in 1999 to 2009.
Power Pill Fist (Ken Fec) is an Atari noise rock artist from Pittsburgh, PA. He was the bassist for the experimental band Black Moth Super Rainbow from its beginnings in 1999 to 2009.
80088
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: Whilst their advice is used in the decision making process by other government bodies, the majority do not actually have any executive power to make such decisions themselves. When they have more authority their value is seen to be higher.
Whilst their advice is used in the decision making process by other government bodies, the majority do not actually have any executive power to make such decisions themselves. Hence, when they have more authority their value is seen to be higher.
80089
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: The onset of the financial crisis in 2008. Estimates suggest that the number of PPP deals closed has fallen more than 40 percent.
Since the onset of the financial crisis in 2008, estimates suggest that the number of PPP deals closed has fallen more than 40 percent.
80090
coherence
Fix coherence errors: In Boston, a court ruled the schedule and convenience of other passengers meant that efforts to minimize station dwell time were justified. Physically packing passengers on trains was not mentioned.
In Boston, a court ruled the schedule and convenience of other passengers meant that efforts to minimize station dwell time were justified, although physically packing passengers on trains was not mentioned.
80091
coherence
Make the text more logical: Observation of cone bending is used to determine when a kiln has reached a desired state. Small cones or bars can be arranged to mechanically trigger kiln controls when the temperature rises enough for them to deform.
Observation of cone bending is used to determine when a kiln has reached a desired state. Additionally, small cones or bars can be arranged to mechanically trigger kiln controls when the temperature rises enough for them to deform.
80092
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: In 1931 the Rigi -- Scheidegg Railway was closed. Scheidegg Railway had never been electrified.
In 1931 the Rigi -- Scheidegg Railway, which had never been electrified, was closed.
80093
coherence
Fix coherence errors: In his early work on animal subjects, Sperry made many noteworthy discoveries. The results of these studies over the next thirty years later led to Sperry being awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 1981.
In his early work on animal subjects, Sperry made many noteworthy discoveries. The results of these studies over the next thirty years later led to Roger Sperry being awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 1981.
80094
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Secondly even Kiesling's own players did not like him so asking the Eagles players to like him was too much to ask. Neale took advantage when Kiesling was delayed en route to camp, which was held at St. Joseph's College in Eagles.
Secondly even Kiesling's own players did not like him so asking the Eagles players to like him was too much to ask. However Neale took advantage when Kiesling was delayed en route to camp, which was held at St. Joseph's College in Philadelphia.
80095
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: The state of the terrain is classified as satisfactory. Parts of it are used for forestry
The state of the terrain is classified as satisfactory, because parts of it are used for forestry
80096
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: I'm world champion. World champion'm going to be the same person, world champion'll be playing in all the tournaments and hopefully world champion'll be a good role model as world champion.
I'm world champion but I'm going to be the same person, I'll be playing in all the tournaments and hopefully I'll be a good role model as world champion.
80097
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Claims that Sweeney Todd was a historical person are strongly disputed by scholars. Possible legendary prototypes exist.
Claims that Sweeney Todd was a historical person are strongly disputed by scholars, although possible legendary prototypes exist.
80098
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: In two books, Peter Haining argued that Sweeney Todd was a historical figure who committed his crimes around 1800. Other researchers who have tried to verify Sweeney Todd's citations find nothing in these sources to Peter Haining Haining's claims.
In two books, Peter Haining argued that Sweeney Todd was a historical figure who committed his crimes around 1800. Nevertheless, other researchers who have tried to verify his citations find nothing in these sources to back Haining's claims.
80099
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Water in natural pools has many desirable characteristics. Red eyes, dried-out skin and hair, and bleached bathing suits associated with overly chlorinated water are naturally absent in natural pools.
Water in natural pools has many desirable characteristics. For example, red eyes, dried-out skin and hair, and bleached bathing suits associated with overly chlorinated water are naturally absent in natural pools.