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[IP] "How long is forever?" "Sometimes, just one second"
-024 *How long is forever?* Not as long as you think. Eternity for me began with a blinker being switched on. It was foggy and Christmas Eve. The mist was freezing, turning green and yellow lawns white. It wasn't snow, but it'd work for the time being. No wind or sleigh stirred the fog. It hung like a curtain, hiding...
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[IP] "How long is forever?" "Sometimes, just one second"
I watched her until morning. The tears on her face had long since dried, leaving nothing but the sound of air undulating slowly, raggedly, through her congested airway. She was beautiful like this, I thought. Sleep had stolen her anguish and left only a peaceful mask. I prayed she wouldn't wake soon; she deserved t...
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[IP] "How long is forever?" "Sometimes, just one second"
The moonlight clashed with the skin on her face in such a brilliant way, and his shaking hands had relaxed as he truly took in what she had asked him, what she implied. "Is there..." he started to repeat "...is, is there anything here? Like, with us?" He knew damn well it was. "Y-yeah. I mean, we just...The way you ...
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[IP] "How long is forever?" "Sometimes, just one second"
Please help me. I know you're looking for proof, some kind of evidence that my fate is what I say it is. I don't have the means to provide pictures or video. You're going to have to rely on my personal account of what is happening. I'm influencing electrons in your computer's memory, collapsing them to states that sho...
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[IP] "How long is forever?" "Sometimes, just one second"
Interestingly enough, I had a really hard time with this prompt until I wrote about three seconds. I'm not sure if I can use a post I've already used, but I would like feedback anyways! “Are you sure you want to see the results?” The doctor asked. 3… Nick idly sat waiting for Sarah, just as he’d always done. He’d be...
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[WP] Using modern technology, an army of 100 from the present wipes out an army of 10,000 from ancient times. They are then wiped out by an army of 10 from the future
Mallory feels the legion marching in step. He grew up in a town with fewer people than what’s advancing on their hill from all sides in a series of perfect squares. Red shields with gold trim, each wider than a man’s torso, hide much of the men carrying them. Spears in some hands, swords in others, and metal and leathe...
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[WP] Using modern technology, an army of 100 from the present wipes out an army of 10,000 from ancient times. They are then wiped out by an army of 10 from the future
The Immortals were ordered forward. The Green Berets waited. "Listen up!" Shouted the commanding officer of the crack troops. "That arsehole Xerxes decided he couldn't let us stay in his empire, and since the machine's broken, we can't leave. That's why we have to stand our ground!" Neat rows of gleaming bronze spear...
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[WP] You walk into a room. Describe what you are in the presence of using all 5 senses.
My nostrils inhale and I do not smell air but fumes. Breathing, I listen for once to everything. Hearing, my mouth tastes the humid obnoxious noxiousness; the particles fall on my tongue and the buds recoil. *Don't lick*. Eyes closed, I touch the wall as I stumble over objects, some organic which absorb the step and s...
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[WP] You walk into a room. Describe what you are in the presence of using all 5 senses.
I feel the burn of heat on my face but can see only darkness. The happy smell of wet dog assaults the nostrils after only a couple steps into the dark. At first there is no noise but as I feel the boards of a stair give way and hear a creak of weakness it is followed by the tingling sound of a dogs collar. Brunt force ...
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[WP] a character in a book who has suffered all his life edits the plot in it
The eraser moved rapidly across the page. As it skipped from line to line it behaved like an extension of his arm missing nothing that was in it's path. The silence that covered the room was broken only by the occasional squeak of rubber on weathered paper. As the sun broke over the horizon the silence was complete. Wi...
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[WP] In the future (almost) all minds are connected to a singular AI that monitors their thoughts, and in some cases influences them to do certain actions.
I know it's against the rules, buttt Memory of Earth, by Orson Scott Card is this prompt.
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[EU] You are a Vault Dweller (The Fallout Series)
I don't understand prompts like this. Why not just go read some fanfics? You know they're out there and if you can be bothered to search I'm sure you can find some good ones.
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[EU] You are a Vault Dweller (The Fallout Series)
We had been told that it was a safe place. An armory full of guns, a large recreation area, we even had a damn pool! But nothing could stop the threat of overpopulation. Our overseer locked the doors to the armory, and restricted our access to it via a terminal in his office. I remember that day. I was relaxing in th...
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[EU] You are a Vault Dweller (The Fallout Series)
Here's one I posted on a /r/fallout thread a while ago, on my old account. My writing's improved since, so I might edit this to improve it, but it's a pretty good story. ............................................................................................. You're a member of a vault full of blind people. 800 c...
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[WP] "I made her love me."
Or rather I made her, and she loved me. She originally didn't exist, except in my mind. It was in my sleep that I first saw her and immediately my heart was enthralled. She was prefect in all ways I could ever imagine. She would dance with me in my dreams every night. Under the moon and all stars, we would dance, sta...
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[WP] "I made her love me."
I made her love me so I could take it away. So she could feel that absence of warmth, that aching for something you never knew you needed until it was ripped from you. From the moment she had opened her door, I knew I couldn't forgive her. Her eyes had gone wide when I introduced myself and she had invited me in, of...
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[WP] A man who can speak only in haikus meets a man who can only speak in puns.
"*What a life we lead,* *that we cannot enter a* *building we need to.*" said Harry in his usual southern drawl. "It's a post office, Harry," said Patrick, wryly, "and it's the middle of the day on a Tuesday. Everyone knows they're only open during post-office hours." Harry stared at the sign hanging on the door, a...
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[WP] A man who can speak only in haikus meets a man who can only speak in puns.
Matt had been sitting in a dungeon cell for a week now watching the psychopath cut up corpses before cooking and devouring them. The psycho stood at his chopping block with his back to Matt. "Excuse me dear sir, I would like some water soon, or surely, I'll die." The cannibal turned around and glared. He marched up...
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[WP] A man who can speak only in haikus meets a man who can only speak in puns.
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[WP] A man who can speak only in haikus meets a man who can only speak in puns.
“*Can you not do that? Seriously, Bob, stop please It burns my face skin*” said Sylvia, as Bob blew another smoke ring directly between her eyeballs and nose. She spent fifty-five minutes doing her makeup that morning and three and a half weeks recovering from a full facelift and chemical peel last month, so she had li...
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[WP] A man who can speak only in haikus meets a man who can only speak in puns.
"Huh. That was pretty *Haikool*."
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[WP] A man who can speak only in haikus meets a man who can only speak in puns.
Come on reddit, show me how clever you are.
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[WP] A woman discovers another universe. Nobody believes her.
"I'm telling you, Thomas, this is the real deal! See, if you would just *look* at these fluctuations in the dark matter calculations right at the edge of the UDFj-39546284 galaxy, you would see that we've partially impaled another universe! Now, I haven't run the data on what is actually affected as the universes colli...
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[WP] A woman discovers another universe. Nobody believes her.
Read The Lion the With and the Wardrobe. Poor Lucy.
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[WP] A woman discovers another universe. Nobody believes her.
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
“Mommy, what’s that?” asked the little boy looking out the window. “Probably just a cow”, she responded in a way that hinted that she was already annoyed by the parade of questions brought on by the boredom of the long trip. She was stuck driving while her husband got the privilege of napping in the passenger’s seat. ...
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
You fucking son of a bitch! Jane spat. She was getting so close to Alexander's face. Pointing her finger and swearing and putting her big shouting mouth into his ear. Alexander needed to pull over. He calmly stated "I'm going to get gas". Jane was still spouting off. "How could you even say something like that!" ...
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
"Well. Would you look at that." "Yeah. Definitely not something you see every day." Seeming to have exhausted their conversational quota, the two men fell silent, listening to the ever present hum of the motor as they drove along the empty country road and the quiet snore of the woman in the back seat. "Should we do...
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
"Karen, have you been reading an ancient books lately?" "No, Philip, I told you, after that debacle in the South Pacific I gave that up. Besides, Nyarlathotep took the mad Arabs book with him through the gate. Why do you ask?" "Look off to my right in that field, do those tentacles look familiar to you? Whoever it is...
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[IP] A family taking a drive into the countryside looks out the car window to see this.
I'm not going to lie, when I saw the prompt I thought the "this" was what the family saw (that is, we were to come up with what they saw.) I instantly started writing an aristocrats joke and I'm not even a little sorry.
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[PM] Free stories! Free stories! Offer valid for the next hour only.
Your new girlfriend takes down your tacky "Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas" poster, uncovering a gigantic hole in the wall. Explain to her what happened.
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[PM] Free stories! Free stories! Offer valid for the next hour only.
A teenager is being stalked by his teacher who has fallen in love with her. Write the story from the teacher's point of view.
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[PM] Free stories! Free stories! Offer valid for the next hour only.
The primordial soup recipe received a one star review.
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[PM] Free stories! Free stories! Offer valid for the next hour only.
A little boy/girl dying of leukemia in the hospital convinces a long-time drug addict to quit his/her addiction.
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[PM] Free stories! Free stories! Offer valid for the next hour only.
You've been at your favorite bookstore browsing when you find a hallowed out book with a gun and a note inside. Against your better judgement, you take it home. What does the note say, and what are you going to do now?
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[PM] Free stories! Free stories! Offer valid for the next hour only.
A girl is tasked with writing the last book of the Bible -- the Book of Armageddon. She witnesses the end times as long as she can hold onto her sanity.
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[WP] A man decides to join his brother for coffee, only to realize that the man he meets is an impostor.
Me and Lenny, grab a drink, take some time to talk and think. Togetherness, a cup of coffee, that was, until I heard him coughing. It wasn't him, I knew for fact, It couldn't be, not sounding like that. Was I scared? Of course I was. The man right here could be the fuzz. His voice was good, prosthetic...
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[WP] A man decides to join his brother for coffee, only to realize that the man he meets is an impostor.
Eric emailed me two weeks after the accident. Wanted to sort out the inheritance. He's always been like that, worrying about money over everything else. And even with our parents barely cold in their graves, it was the first thing on his mind. We arranged to meet at the Starbucks by my place. And, as usual, he was lat...
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[WP] A man decides to join his brother for coffee, only to realize that the man he meets is an impostor.
When Dave reached the restaurant, he noticed that the man sitting by the table where John was supposed to be waiting for him was not his brother. "Excuse me," Dave said "I was supposed to meet someone here" "You were supposed to meet me," the man said. "But you are not my brother." "You have been rused." "Damn," ...
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[WP] A man decides to join his brother for coffee, only to realize that the man he meets is an impostor.
"Hey prick," I spat out as he almost walked right past me. My head looked up from the paper as I started folding it. "Little Tommy, I was wondering if they let you in these kindsa' places," he quickly shot back, moving to sit on the opposite end of the table from me. I glanced down at the steam rising from my coffee b...
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[WP] There's something in the water.
Something swimming, sunlight dimming, something frightening, fast as lightening. It isn't swimming in a lake, or a pool, but it lives in the place which creates all that's cool. What is "it", you ask? Well, just have a listen. "It" is doubt, and it destroys all that ever glistens, it lives in the mind, ...
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[WP] There's something in the water.
“There’s something in the water,” she told me from the kitchen. I couldn’t even get myself to think of anything to say back, but part of my brain in charge of basic communication must have been running on autopilot. I heard a “Huh, really?” come out of my mouth, but I shouldn’t have. I shouldn’t have engaged at all. N...
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[WP] There's something in the water.
There is something in the water. Something special, something indefinable. Not something undefined, like a number divided by zero. No, something that is different depending on how you look at it, where you are, who you are, what day it is. What day is it? When I stare at the ocean, it doesn't matter. The question and ...
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[WP] There's something in the water.
The power has been out for a week now. Our house is blocked in by snow and ice, and I don't think we can get out any time soon. We filled a tub up with water before the taps went out. With 4 roommates, all bottled water ran out and we had to use the reserve tub of water. "Hey Jack, fill up the bottles, it's your turn...
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[WP] An explosion ripped open the ceiling of the church. When the dust had settled and the surviving church-goers had dragged themselves out from under the rubble, a heavenly light shone down from a gap in the clouds and Snoop Dogg descended.
*What the hell was that* he wondered as he struggled to his feet. Leaning on the remnants of one of the old pews for support, a scene of devastation greeted his eyes. Pangs of despair wracked his body as he saw the remnants of the Church that he had grown up in. The Choir bleachers he had sung in so many times were in ...
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[CW] Let's play a word game. Thirteen sentences, thirteen words each.
It all starts with a fun little word game to work your mind. Counting words and checking for meanings to throw in behind all of them. Too much focus on making the audience focus on the anticipated word play. That will lead you into the same hole that you started off in. But this would be an accident, only a third o...
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[CW] Let's play a word game. Thirteen sentences, thirteen words each.
As a matter of fact, despite the bad rap, it's simpler than that. It would be an apocalyptic silence to parallel life and death through light. It's said to travel a constant 671 million miles in a single bound. We're not talking about superman; we're talking about the waves your existence creates. The echo of silence i...
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[CW] Let's play a word game. Thirteen sentences, thirteen words each.
Is it bad to feel inexplicably sorry for something wrong happening to you? Maybe because I'm hormonal -- or maybe its the freakin' moon -- but I do. I didn't mean to walk in on them, sweaty and ravishing each other. I saw everything I loved about him entangled in her. . . hair, arms, hips. Everythin...
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Write about a very intelligent teenager's descent into madness after he/she gets rejected from one of the top Universities in the nation.
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[CW] Without using the letter "E", describe a friendship that's falling apart.
"How could you?" was all I could think at six this morning. It's 2 a.m. now, and I still think that. Your hollow words did nothing to fix things today. I know that girl was good-looking and smart, but I am (was?) your companion... through it all. Ugh.
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[CW] Without using the letter "E", describe a friendship that's falling apart.
As a child I thought that it would last. It was magic, goofing off, playing with him. It was too fun, and I thought I would never grow up. I did. Jon didn't. As an adult, I know I am with maturity that Jon won't accept. Alcoholism, can't hold a job, partying with school girls, it's hard to find any common ground no...
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[CW] Without using the letter "E", describe a friendship that's falling apart.
Mary got a boob job on Thursday. Now that Mary has rocking tits, Mary's BFF Jill is butt hurt. Mary's gigantic boobs draw looks from boys around town. "What a slut!" Call out old haggish widows, with saggy boobs flapping against gusts of wind. "Such a bitch!" Jill said inwardly, growing angry at Mary. "Why do boys go...
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[CW] Without using the letter "E", describe a friendship that's falling apart.
Abhor. I abhor that particular ring Linda snuck into my Droid so many autums ago. It signals a sad song sung in an aloof pitch. It rings high with acrimony and low with guilty admission. I sob, I submit. Linda solicits a last rally, I comply, against my own wish.
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[CW] Without using the letter "E", describe a friendship that's falling apart.
You forgot my birthday (again).
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[CW] Without using the letter "E", describe a friendship that's falling apart.
A foundation cracks. My companion packs. Sally on, my buddy. My family, my mummy. No, stop, this isn't funny.
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Girl works at call center. Calls God. What are her questions and his answers?
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[WP] They had already found what they were looking for long ago. They were simply looking too hard and too far away to realize they'd found it.
When they first looked up at the stars it was with a marveling sense of distance, an awing shift in perspective that left them speechless with wonder as befits the unknown. That wonder soon dried them up, instilled in them a thirst so powerful that it ground their bones to dust as again and again they reached their fee...
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A scene with an inspiring speech
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A scene with an inspiring speech
Our bodies filled the room with steam while we sat. Nobody dared raise their head, let alone speak. In fact, the only sounds we could hear were of the crowd noisily milling about, and the distinct whoop of a t-shirt cannon firing rolled up tops into the stands. Then, there was another. It was somewhere between a tap an...
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[WP] The media discovers Tupac Shakur never died.
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A man is returning an engagement ring to a jeweller. He eventually begins recalling his entire relationship and what went wrong.
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
Where did we go wrong? Did we dump too much refuse in our oceans? Spew too many toxins into the atmosphere? Did we cut the EPA five times too many? Is this the dastardly plot of an unknown super villain? Was this an accident? Is this even our fault? Did we play God too much? Has God had too much of us? All we know is t...
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
We stumble forward into the Future, unseeing, unfeeling, Unafraid. Our World spins and goes in circles around a Power which itself is crashing through the Cosmos, indifferent to God and Man. We tip the cap to our Mothers and Fathers as we drag our knives across the throats of our Siblings. Our hands are no longer Tools...
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
The end came in disguise. Piece by piece the little threads came apart and the mask of uncaring existence broke into pieces from the inertia of a planet that was going too fast too soon. Convenience became more than a goal it was our way of life. Nothing was the same after the world saw the broadcast and the f...
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
The missile silos were the first target. They were never designed to take a direct strike anyway. Launchpads were second; refineries and chemical facilities third. The strike took all of 5 minutes. In some hundreds of falling swoops, not only was the economy of the planet crippled, but so was the capacity to fight ...
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
The liquid rushes down your throat as you gulp another mouthful. The familiar feeling of alcohol fills you senses, warming you from within. You smile and look up from the flask, into the not-so-dark nightsky. The familiar shape of the comet is still there, its edges turning to a crimson red as it enters atmosphere. S...
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
It had been months, maybe even years, since we left. Dozens of people had traveled with us, crossing rivers, seas, plains, deserts: Each with another destination than we had. Almost every time, they laughed as we told them where we were heading: The end. The end of the world. They told us we'd never reach it, or that t...
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[WP] "it's not the end of the world, but you can see it from here.."
It had been months, maybe even years, since we left. Dozens of people had traveled with us, crossing rivers, seas, plains, deserts: Each with another destination than we had. Almost every time, they laughed as we told them where we were heading: The end. The end of the world. They told us we'd never reach it, or that t...
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There you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
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[WP] A villain is about to do some cruel, dastardly deed to the world. Justify his backstory, reasoning, and/or purpose to the point where we support the act.
Televisions in the store front window blared at the passerby's. "Doomsday clock moves to 5 from Midnight! Where is Atlas?". Television personalities blabbered have truths and whole lies at each other on the evening news. "What kind of hero just stops doing his job like this? especially when we could be on the brink ...
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Write a story somehow combining the subjects of the last 3 WP's you've submitted.
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Write a story somehow combining the subjects of the last 3 WP's you've submitted.
Alright I'm too drunk to do this right this moment. But I like the sound of this prompt so I need to comment on it to remember in the morning.
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Write a story somehow combining the subjects of the last 3 WP's you've submitted.
If you want to you can read the journal I've been writing. Mostly every day is written by a different prompt, unless it's just a filler. http://www.reddit.com/r/DayZ_Journal/comments/1vjbyg/day_z_journal_days_128/
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Write a story somehow combining the subjects of the last 3 WP's you've submitted.
[Prompt 1](http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/1vxjhn/wp_a_superhero_has_a_moment_of_doubt_but_regains/cewrge0) [Prompt 2](http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/1vtwb2/ffwpgive_each_tool_in_the_average_swiss_army/cevvaiu) [Prompt 3](http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/1vu63f/ff...
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[WP] A hyper-intelligent wild squirrel finds the house their tree is next to homes a child with a terminal disease who only wants to be a hero with a unique animal sidekick.
The Misadventures of Jimmy the Squirrel and cancerous-ridden Billy- Part 1 Billy was your ordinary kid. He liked sports, drank grape juice and had a penchant for drinking milk out of the carton. "Fuck off, Billy, that's disgusting", he was often scolded by his caring, but strict mother. But that was all in the past. ...
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[WP] A man is returning an engagement ring to a jeweller. He eventually begins recalling his entire relationship and what went wrong.
(Altered the prompt to instead have the guy find out that his ex-fiancee hawked the ring after they broke up, because that actually happened to me and it was pretty funny.) $50. You got fifty fucking dollars for that ring. That ring cost me a month of my life. It cost me a month of my life, working in manual labour,...
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[WP] A man is returning an engagement ring to a jeweller. He eventually begins recalling his entire relationship and what went wrong.
"Yeah, I just want to return this if I can," Mark mumbled, trying to avoid making too much eye contact with the jeweler. "Was it not satisfactory, sir?" the jeweler asked kindly. Mark quickly looked over his face to find only genuine caring and sincerity. "No, I just don't need it," Mark responded sharply. The je...
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[WP] A man is returning an engagement ring to a jeweller. He eventually begins recalling his entire relationship and what went wrong.
She wasn't real. In the end that was the problem, she didn't even exist. I fell in love with a girl from another time, another place, and mistook her for someone else. I fell in love with a dreamer, a poet, an artist, a dancer; I fell for a girl who lived and breathed creativity and flow. She moved like silk water. ...
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[WP] A man is returning an engagement ring to a jeweller. He eventually begins recalling his entire relationship and what went wrong.
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[WP] here you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
I take a swig from my bottle of scotch, only to be greeted by air. Figures. Even my alcohol's abandoned me. I set the empty glass bottle on a nearby table and replace it with a 9mm pistol. I've already decided, this will be where and when I die. I've nothing else to live for. That was taken from me three months ago. M...
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[WP] here you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
I'm sitting on the edge of my bed. I look at the bottle of pills in my hand. Small and orange and prescribed for something I didn't have to someone I'm not. They'd be my cure now. I've done the research. Four or five will put me out. I'll fade. Slow. I've decided I'm taking the whole bottle. I don't want slow. My fa...
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[WP] here you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
The trigger of the gun felt cold against my finger. I knew it was time. Nobody was out there for me. Not even *I* was out there for me. I took a look around my old room, taking it all in one last time. Then I saw it. *That was 3 years ago. She doesn't care about you now* my mind reminded me. *But what if she do...
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[WP] here you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
Breathing out the last drops from the bottom of the bottle, I was seized with anger. I hurled the damned thing against the wall, where it shattered like the lies and lives I once believed in. That sad, sappy man living in the cramped one bedroom, if you could call it living, had given up a long time ago, turning reso...
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[WP] here you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
"Fuck" Nobody said it would be this cold. I never believed for a second that as you died, your whole life flashed before your eyes. I never believed that you would go to Heaven - Or Hell. Or anywhere. You just stop being. You become a cadaver; meat. But that wind just makes me almost deaf and I begin to think of him....
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[WP] here you stand, alone again, about to take your own life. Nothing is holding you back now. You decide to look around your room one more time until something catches your eye, and the impact it has on you stops you in your tracks and makes you realize why you can't do this to yourself.
I don’t really know how I came to this point. From the outside my life probably looks pretty great, a loving wife, a good car, a nice house and a high earning job. I take vacations to Europe twice a year for two weeks at a time. Work a maximum of 30 hours a week and yet still earn six figures. The majority of the popul...
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[WP] An alien visits earth and is greeted by a robot.
Mission log, Expander Waeeerng. Sol system. Third planet from the star. Continent "Australia" Mission begins. 1299.9237/qfr Mission ends 1299.9300/qfr We landed in the small patch of vegetation behind the dwelling. We had learned the horrifying bipeds that inhabited it had a strange routine that was based on the plane...
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[WP] A dystopian/neutropian/utopian future society where everyone is screened for biological/genetic indicators of criminal tendencies
It started off so well. People welcomed the idea, hailing a new utopia. There would be no more disease, no more disabilities, no more suffering. We couldn’t understand why there was outcry from even a small minority; who didn’t want to live in Utopia? But they understood. It started off innocently enough, a standard sc...
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[WP] A Superhero who runs out of villians or crime in any fashion to fight.
It’s been 6 months now and the city is almost complete, I can’t help but wonder what they will decide to call it. Things are looking up here with many of the gardens really taking shape. I’m glad I took the time to get the Baobab trees from Africa, and all those moss covered boulders form Iceland, the dichotomy really...
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[WP] A Superhero who runs out of villians or crime in any fashion to fight.
Flying Freedom landed with practiced flair next to an elderly women and a young man. He barely cracked the sidewalk. "Is this man bothering you, Ma'am?" His voice was as deep as the Marianas Trench and as soothing as aloe on sunburn. Women in a three hundred meter radius quivered and men felt inexplicably emasculated....
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[WP] A Superhero who runs out of villians or crime in any fashion to fight.
"2 years, 9 months and 12 days. I keep a calendar in my kitchen. Have you seen my kitchen? I just had it renovated, third time this year." Tony Hark; billionaire, playboy, philanthropist, and former CEO of Hark Industries sat across from Billy Woodel; 5th grader from Sundale Elementary School. Billy tried furiously to...
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[CC] Another short story I wrote based on a prompt I saw from here. Tell me what you think.
I love this, it took me longer than I care to admit before I realised it was being narrated by a fire! I don't see anything you could improve but then again I have little writing experience. Good job!
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[CC] Another short story I wrote based on a prompt I saw from here. Tell me what you think.
hey, can you link to the original prompt please?
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[CC] Another short story I wrote based on a prompt I saw from here. Tell me what you think.
Excellent story. Well done! There are a couple of things I'd like to say about, which hopefully you'll find useful: - The only part of the story I had a real problem with was the dialogue at the end. Having just worked out what had happened, I felt "... the fire originated ..." was just shoving the narrator's identity...
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[WP] A man gains telekinetic powers and uses it to rack up money... however possible.
The roar of the crowd was deafening, he hadn't though this type of event or the people who attended them got so loud. He couldn't hear a thing the woman sat beside him was saying, not that he cared anyway, he'd only invited her along to dissuade other women from hitting on him; he was rich, and therefore unsurprisin...
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[WP] A man gains telekinetic powers and uses it to rack up money... however possible.
"Eight, black!" called the croupier, and Steve smiled again as another stack of chips was deposited next to his in the "1st 12" box on the roulette board. He'd won twice in a row now, for the seventh time that night, so his theory and execution were sound. He could put the ball wherever he wanted, just by concentrati...
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[WP]A young man living in a world where if you kill someone, their age is added onto your life.
"You disgust me." Andy paces across the dark room. Blinds cover the dilapidated windows, the only source of light. Across him sits an elderly man, staring into the abyss. He did not seem to notice Andy. "Why don't you listen to me, you fucking piece of shit!" He walks up and grab the old man from the collars. "How. D...
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[WP]A young man living in a world where if you kill someone, their age is added onto your life.
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[WP]A young man living in a world where if you kill someone, their age is added onto your life.
**Re-reading the prompt I think I may have misinterpreted it. I now read it as killing someone extends your life by their age. I wrote the below with the reading as: killing someone adds their age to yours.** He was an old man now. And he was suffering. Each breath he drew bubbled and squeaked like a kettle that near...
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