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**Just Put it in the Back** “You’re going to bust it wide open,” the woman grunted. “Be quiet so I can concentrate; stay still or we may both regret this.” With just enough force they managed to get it in. “Whose idea was it to buy and move a big screen like this?” She closed the trunk of the car.
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(Yes, I wrote another one. I like this prompt.) **TOAST** "Choose at random." The alien decided. "Spin the dial!" Another alien abided. They primed weapons whilest monitors spun, 'til settling upon Earth's chosen one. "SEE?!" The leader then shouted. "They sit and do nothing!" He loudly touted. A sad day for...
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We use these at school to teach kids about ambiguity and misleading. Love them. __________________________ The Spry Thief No one was home. It was now or never. He had waited for this moment, wanted this more than anything. The time was right. He climbed to the open window, and though the gap was small, squeezed in. ...
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“They’ll never know it was you, Marvin. Tell us where they are, and we’ll forget any allegiance you ever had to them." The man looked over the folder once more and asked, “But how do I know they really deserve to die?” Agent Miller simply stared at him and said indifferently, “Because we said so.”
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Billy Morrison stood beside the streetlamp, silhouetted in starlight and wrapped in his ignorance to the eyes that fell upon him. A squirrel perched briefly on a powerline, then fled, the crunch of a twig too nearby wrenching its focus from the acorn it had collected. Billy flinched, then tapped his phone. The town bur...
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Cried ET "They're here, honey!" Jeffrey danced and shook Deborah. "Who? What is that light?" "No one believed me!" "You're scaring me! What's going on? What is that noise?" Her hair rose. The covers slipped away. Shrieking, she sailed outside. Spittle flying, he gripped the windowsill. “Not her! Me! You’re sup...
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**Unrequited** “Do you love me?” she whispered as her breath got heavier and heavier. He stared straight into her eyes. He was at a loss for words. “Do you love me?” she repeated softly as a single tear streaked down her cheek. He opened his mouth to speak but was interrupted by the flat beep of the heart monitor...
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**Coffee Stop** "Black with some room?" "How are you feeling Mr. Taylor?" "Great as always Mike! See you tomorrow!" Mr. Taylor said as he wandered in a circle around the room, taking one pill on every lap, as was his ritual. The others, in all white gowns, watching him from the corners of their eyes.
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My last one. **Lord Knows** "I feel... vindicated!" The priest thumped his fist on the pulpit. The flock cheered for their shephard, a jubilant Sunday service! "The court saw innocence and now we move forward." Imagine the look on the churchgoers faces for at that very moment the Rapture happened. They slowly asce...
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**Life's Choices** "I left the water running for you," said Paul, drying his hair. "I'll be right up," said Amy, as she quickly closed the laptop. Surprised to see his inbox up he broke out in a cold sweat as the den's lights flickered. The new subject read, "I guess you made your choice."
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**The Classics** Winters are worse, since the fall of the race of man. I am the last, but I have my books to keep me company. All the libraries of the world are mine! I lovingly run my fingers across the bindings. History's greatest literature! I throw another classic on the pyre, to warm my weary bones.
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I really like this prompt. Creative juices are flowing. Here's another one. The Accident “Don’t drink and drive.” His mom’s words echoed in his head. She didn’t want to bury her son. He never listened, but was lucky to survive the accident. As he peered through the windshield to see what he hit he knew that she wou...
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**Tooth Pick** “Mr Greaves, I assure you I’m a professional dentist.” “Wagh uh oooww ruff” responded Greaves. “This will only hurt if you don’t keep still, Mr Greaves.” Greaves’ eyes bulged. “Argh preese ouu rug” “Amy, do you think he wants to talk?” “Too late” she said passing the ice pick. “He’s had his...
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The century old buildings clustered around the town square leaned upon each other like old friends who'd had too much to drink. They had weathered the onslaught of war and the continuous red tide of plague. It wasn't until a century after the tracks had been laid that the shiny steely derailment proved their undoing....
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Apocalypse Now. Looking through the pictures, he silently spoke to himself “She is a great woman”. “Was”, he quickly corrected himself, a tear falling down his cheek. “Is” came a voice from behind. Not 55 words. Does it need to be perfectly 55?
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**Psych Ward** “Not again” She said, the florescent was too familiar. “Oh good your awake,” Came a stern voice. Old scars visible beneath the white bandages of her wrists, she fingered the IV. Death would be a relief. “Please, let me go.” “When you learn to stop hurting yourself you can go home.” His white ...
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What if I take the prompt that was out there (write a story with less then 1,000 words and end it with certain sentences) and merge it with this one, to create this? Crunch Ducking into shelter and listening hard, I knew that I had lost them. Trying not to think about my actions, I bite into the sandwich, she tasted...
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I would have thought the world would end with a bang instead of the soft, fluff noise of billions falling into their beds. I don't know what started the sleep plague. Drinking blood seems to keep me awake though. Yesterday I filled up again but there's no one left in church and I'm so tired.
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“You don’t have to do this. It’s not too late.” She hesitated, the gun pointing towards the floor briefly before raising to level with his eyes. “It is. It has been for a long time.” He closed his eyes tightly, waiting for the inevitable. He heard a sharp intake of breath. Her fingers shook. *Bang.*
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**Put Out** The burnt teddy bear was still on the ground. The father held the animal in his hands. He walked to the bedroom. The mirrors fuel his hatred. Pictures turned to soot, leaving behind empty frames. A family burned to ashes. A cigarette starting a wildfire.
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**Don’t Play** She quickly turned to face the intruder. “You.” One word, echoing gently over a faint, atmospheric dripping noise. “Yes, me.” The intruder stepped lightly into the abandoned cabin, relishing the shocked look on the woman’s face. Amusement faded rather quickly into fear. “Just as I expected.” With a s...
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**Flifery** It was brighter than I'd ever seen, but I did not want to disturb its precious, immaculate nature. *Poof.* It popped out of existence; darkness enveloping me. When would my path regain its luminance? It reappeared double, triple, infinite! I was bathed in the warm glow of abdominal reactions, and resumed m...
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I haven't written in a while. This was a fun prompt though. **The Murderer?** He pulled the knife out, only to place it elsewhere. He was fading fast, with the ever-increasing wounds, the increased blood loss. The pain excruciating, spreading. He looked at his assailant. The killer looked back, too, mirroring his ...
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Word count: 55. The year was lost: for him it never mattered. As another star went out, he appreciated the irony that people were killing others over vegetables, themselves killed by colbolt, the color of his eyes. Turning them toward the sanguine moon, he wondered if it was fair. He laughed. "Sorry, brother, but lif...
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"Baby shoes for sale, never worn. Huh." He considered the six words briefly in his mind, as his wife's still-slender figure leaned crookedly against their bedroom's entrance. "It's clever, I guess. Why are you showing me this?" She gave a wordless moan of grief and sank to the floor. Silence crashed down around the...
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**The Last thing he never saw.** Jeremy was sprawled across the ground, too injured to move, too broken to speak. He knew his squad had left him to die. He knew his fate was sealed. Any trust he had in his life had been crushed by their move. From hundreds of yards away, the commander finished off his own, loving son. ...
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**Lonely.** I heard about the car crash, but I couldn’t cry. No funeral invitation for me, the secret. No condolences. Our last bitter kiss hangs on my lips. No one knows she was driving to my house, that I was going to propose. The ring sits cold in my pocket. We should’ve come out together.
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Exactly 55 words: Funny Guys... "5 more minutes" The message blinked on her screen as the others had done throughout the day. Cursing her friends for playing some childish joke on her, she texted the number back, "Funny guys..." There was a distinct beep from behind her and her phone vibrated once again. "Guess we'l...
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**Running Late** (55 words) I'm running late. I'll miss the train. I *can't believe* I am late! Today of all days. Four years of university and finally qualified, today is the first day of my dream job. I will *not* miss the train! Running, I trip on a loose tile. I missed my train, but it didn't miss me.
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Numb voice, numb heart, numb hand held by my husband. The smoking house overwhelmed the smoke of his cigarette. I’d arrived to see him standing with only the pack in his back pocket. He smoked when he was nervous. The pack was unopened as of this afternoon, but two were missing now.
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I summarized the first chapter of my yet-to-be-finished NaNoWriMo novel in exactly 55 words: **The Demonolgist** The ground cracked, revealing a river of lava below. A clawed hand reached up and clutched the crevasse, followed by a glowing-hot winged, horned demon. “Who dares summon Leviticus of the Abyss!” The dem...
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“What are you waiting for?” He asked. She considered the ring, trembling. The question. The life. The thing she used to dream about, when they were each promised to another. Now, free, they stumbled. Where does love deferred start? From lightening running through them, across them, consuming them... to…? ...
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**Back on the Wagon** He woke up choking. The smoke was so thick; the tendrils felt like fingers in his throat forcing him to purge after another night of heavy drinking. He stumbled from bed, tripping and sprawling to the floor, twisting his ankle on the remote control car, whose batteries he'd borrowed from the no...
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I'd like to try! This was fun. I used 55 words. Broken Love She collapsed to the floor feeling helpless, clutching the suicide note. -"You were the only one who understood me. I can't live without your love. Farewell." Sobbing, she howled "I never wanted this! I didn't love you that way!" She didn't hear her...
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"Head trauma" A familiar feeling of disorientation washed over him. "What was I just thinking of? What am I doing here? Hmm. Oh boy, I must be dreaming," he thought. A pert woman entered the room and he immediately started disrobing her, ignoring her protestations. "Oh Mr. Stevenson, I thought we were making pro...
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Haha, when I saw this it had 55 upvotes.
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**Coup d’etat** Finally, the moment he had been waiting for. All the work he and Adrian had done until now was about to pay off. All those lost for this chance to dethrone him. He rushed up the stairs to the coup de gras of their coup d’etat straight into the barrel of his pistol.
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"Forgotten victim" "Thirteen altars were erected to mourn the fallen students. Yes, thirteen, though many reports say twelve, that ignores the man who ended the spree he started. A solitary card on his altar simply states, 'I don't hate you, but I hate what you did. Love always, D.' I'm Jean Flowers, channel 4 new...
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This was actually more difficult than I had initially anticipated. Here's my attempt: **Just Orders** We left the city a smoking ruin. We were very careful to make sure we got every last man woman and child. Didn't even have any way to defend themselves. Now there's no one left to remember them, no one at all. Funny...
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I'm a bit late to the party, but this prompt got such a great response I feel obligated to submit one of my own. **Chase!** Gripping the wheel, Agent M careened around the bend. Sedans overflowing with henchmen loomed at both bumpers. She pulled hard right, and the car...continued left? Sabatoge! Timing would be ...
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**Comfort** “I don’t know what I did to get me locked up in here, but I’m sorry!” I choke out between sobs. He kneels, and as he embraces me he says, “Everything is gonna be fine.” I’m smothering, but when I try to move his hands, I discover he is gone, and I’m embracing myself.
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**Yes (to the Dress)** The first moment she put on the dress, she knew it was *the one*. Every curve hugged, every flaw hidden, neither gaudy, nor plain and completely her. She *glowed* in that dress. *‘Would it be a faux-pas to wear it a second time?’* She mused lightly, standing at the altar, alone.
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**The Princess and the Swan** One day, the princess went for a walk in the woods. Suddenly, she came across a small pond where a swan sat nesting amongst the reeds. The swan swam away and the princess went to its nest and found a golden egg. She kissed it and turned into a swan. *Not exactly high quality (took me 5 ...
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Ok, this is inspired by a certain worlds famous comic strip. Here goes... The Last Adventure He stands there, looking down at the small desk. Letters written but not sent, photographs, plastic dinosaurs, crude crayon drawings; a still life in memories. The labelled cardboard box sits in a corner, the stuffed toy pr...
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Fun Games “Where are you?” She stifled her breath. “Come out wherever you are.” She gasped as footsteps grew near. “Tag, your it.” The shot gun punched through the closet door. The women ran out from under the sink and ran out the back, leaving her son gun-wielding behind.
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**I remember everything.** I see flashes of destruction and devastation. Steel being crushed in my bare hands- Well, not MY hands, but that's up to debate. I fought the military yesterday in Nevada and I- The Hulk, was forced to retreat. I'm trapped in a hell in my own body. Please, God, spare me another day of thi...
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**UP THERE** “You from the American team?” “No,” said the gaunt man in the gray suit. “Not anywhere close to there.” Erik couldn't believe his eyes. “Well how the hell ‘d you get up here?” “It was no trouble.” “You hungry?” “Oh, so very hungry.” The man grinned. “I’m Erik. Welcome to Mars.” “Loneliness. The ple...
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Sharp The smell of fresh vomit was overwhelming. She felt sick. It’d been long, too long, since she’d last dosed. Her hand clasped the needle. Her heart was pounding. She knew her fate was sealed by the liquid in the sharp syringe. Plunging it into her skin, she cursed God for giving her Type I Diabetes.
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The saloon was empty but for two dark men. "Never expected I’d see you again." "Why. Think I was dead?" He stammered, then said "I don’t have the gold.” "I know. Hawkins took it. But I’ve got a plan. In fact, that’s why I’m talking to you.” “You need something from me?” “Yeah. A body.”
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**Day 3** She steadied her breathing. "Your unborn child is in God's hands," said the priest next to her. "Try to relax," said the police officer. "It'll be over soon," said the fireman. "Close your eyes, don't look," said the technition, steadying his snippers over a blue wire. All this fuss, she thought, over o...
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**Beer** After two nights, he decided it was time to stop drinking and return home to his wife. Tired and sorry, he embraced her. He heard a thump outside the window and saw the silhouette of a running, naked man through the gossamer curtains. He headed to the fridge for another beer. She still loved him.
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Took a crack at it **Family Bonding** “I fucking hate you,” he choked on the words. Smoke slowly rose from his lit cigarette. “I fucking hate you,” the words came out as sobs now. His father sat across from him, astonished at this revelation. “You destroyed my family! You ruined my life.” He stood and, with one...
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*For an outstanding prompt, I hereby award pardon_me_but one month of Reddit Gold. This is an amazingly popular challenge! I so enjoy anything with word limitations, and this was the ultimate in that respect! Thank you for submitting this great idea. It's really gotten people's creative juices flowing. Please keep subm...
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Alone Riding her bike. No cares just the wind in her hair as she steers through the woods. Sharp pain, falling toward the earth, surrounded by men. "Ready to play sweetheart" Used, and abused...She can never tell or they will kill her brother, a secret she will keep forever. Alone in her memories of being 11 with no c...
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**Dom perignon** It's high class stuff, at least that is what everyone says. I know I can treat him right with this. He makes me feel like I am great women, I want to make him feel like a man. I loose the ropes enough so he can drink, then return them before he screams. ~~~~ Okay, a little on the sub-dom side, so he...
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I'll never forgive myself. The car was making funny noises when I pulled in. I didn't care, it didn't belong to me. Whatever it was, it certainly wasn't my fault. Not that I know a thing about cars... But I still should have said something. I wish more than anything I could have told Mom.
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I know I'm late to the party, but this will be a lot of fun to build up writing techniques. Any criticism is welcome. **Salem** I saw the look into my Mom's eyes as the fire crackled in their reflection. It was the first time I had heard her cry. She had never done anything wrong in her life. She was a saint. “W...
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**Heads I Win, Tails You Lose** "Just flip the damn coin." "There's gotta be a better way." "We've been over this. One limb will help us survive. Yours or mine. We have to eat." He flips the coin. "Oh my God! I'm so glad I found you guys. I've been wandering for days." He picks up the coin. "Heads. Who won?"
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http://imgur.com/gallery/f759Q Just one hit, she told me. One hit and I'd have the experience of my life. I took ten. At first I felt tranquil and rejuvenated, but the idea kept creeping into my head. She had tried to poison me. I sat on the floor of my studio apartment and slowly began to feel terrified. My sense o...
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http://imgur.com/gallery/B9H9e "Boys, I cannot wait to dig into the blubber on that thing," Kilm said. "I told you boys that we aren't carrying the spices for nothing. A new, delicious meal every day!" He had the only pair of binoculars. Uruk had no idea what Kilm was looking at. Presumably, something edible. *He's ...
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This could also be used for the 55 word challenge. It was harder than I'd thought it be. This isn't a story as much as it is a thing-that-happened. Also, the picture Imgur chose for me was difficult to interpret. 55 words. --- http://imgur.com/gallery/7EjKI The auditorium lights dimmed, and an unprecedented gath...
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[Everyone hates me.](http://imgur.com/gallery/m13QN) As long as I can remember, no one has treated me with respect. From day one, my memories involve being beaten, manhandled, tossed around, walked over, punched, and veritably torn apart in every way imaginable. Every night, the sheer magnitude of my helplessness wei...
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My desk lamp is on, my cell phone off. My mind is open, my eyes closed. There are three cardboard boxes in a row ten feet behind my chair, one marked in bright red TRASH, the next DONATE, the final KEEP. The first two are overflowing, filled past the brim with the miscellaneous items that could only be found together h...
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The cart trudged along slowly with a creak that harmonized with his owner's heavy bones. It was long since the sun had dipped onto the end of the world, but the sky still held the pale orange of a light that half-whispers. A single apple sat on the side of the road, a man less cynical would've taken it as a gift, he ...
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I don't know if it's really a short story, but I like it and this is my first post on here. Been lurking too long. :) The clouds are perfect cotton balls suspended on a canvas. The grass, though prickly back home on the front lawn, cools and cushions me. The Earth cradles me. Deep sighs filter through the bottom of t...
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Stuck in traffic. Seems to be all the time now. But today feels different. I'm just stuck. I've been slowly adjusting my speed from 2 to 5 miles per hour, but I've been at zero more times I can count. Come to think of it. This road doesn't seem familiar. I must have taken a wrong turn. A car occasionally let's out a b...
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Blaring sun and no breeze, my lips are cracking and my whole body is covered in sweat. The wind hasn't caught my sails in days and I tease myself with the idea that land is just over the horizon. Pretending I'm only on a lake, when I am surrounded by hundreds of miles of ocean. The pacific ocean is boundless, but I ...
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It was dark. She hated the lack of light in her bedroom but the feeling it gave her was like nothing else. Once her eyes had adjusted, she felt she was part of the darkness in her room. It was already clear that it was going to be another sleepless night. Whenever her eyes closed she pictured gross and horrifying thing...
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It’s unusual to walk along road with no cars. Even more so at this time of night. But that’s how I like my walks. Empty. Silent. Devoid. The lights from the posts wash over me. One minute in the darkness, the next in the clear. There are no thoughts to think along this route. Just go with it. See what happens. I come ...
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The elevator ride was silent and lonely, his briefcase in hand The bus ride was full of kids talking and singing ready for the school day. He stepped out of the elevator to a busy floor of people doing their work. She jumped out of the bus with her friend into a sea of bustling middle-schoolers. He sat down at his ...
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The walls were quick to close on him. His breath was quick to leave him. How he wished the dark above held at least a light at the end of the tunnel, which, though unreachable, would let him die with hope. What a folly it had been to think he'd be better, to think he wouldn't be subject to the same laws as his kin. Wh...
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It was a flash and roar of steel and I was gone. I felt nothing but a warm, comforting existence wash over me and I realized, as I saw my lifeless body on the hood of the drunk driver's truck, that I was dead. And there was no seeing my beloved Sarah again. A flash of light. I feel a pull- And I'm yanked away from the...
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Control. Everyone says I have the power to control the situation, but I don't. They don't know... They don't know what can happen. I don't even know what can happen. Everyday is a struggle, a fight to just be able to breathe. And yet, I only get pushed farther and father down. An inescapable loop. Rinse. Repeat. Recycl...
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The 9mm handgun, held in his hands, pointed at his head. What was even worse was that John was doing both. Just one press of the trigger would end this hell. End this sadness. It would bring him out of this world that seemed to hate. Hate. Hate was the reason. No matter where he went, someone found a way to make John f...
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[WP] The escape.
**Pride** Trapped. Hah, I'm not trapped. I'm wandering around on the top of this hill amongst the trees and falling leaves and fading light...how could I be trapped if I'm outside? Sure, it's getting a little cold, and really, it's getting pretty dark by now, but I can't be trapped, the park just isn't big enough t...
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[WP] The escape.
The Escape It was cold, dark, and damp. I was trying to sleep but the dripping kept me awake. Each drip reminded me of the eternal hell I was in. It reminded me of the metal bars surrounding me, the concrete floor beneath my feet, and the pile of hay I called a bed. It didn’t matter; sleep was no respite from this t...
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[PI] August Contest: The Zinga Snare
Just wanted to say that I love the creature you've invented, and the story kept me reading the whole way through. That being said, I'm left with some questions. By your description of the Zingas, I imagined harpies while reading your story. I liked the little twist at the end, but I kind of saw it coming when the ol...
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[PI] August Contest: The Zinga Snare
Thanks for submitting this, I enjoyed reading it. I thought the dialogue was a little stilted (no one I know talks that way) but the story still had a nice rhythm overall.
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[PI] August Contest - Secret Slugs
Awesome. I haven't been subscribed to this subreddit very long, but this is the first one I've read with humor. Really enjoyed reading your work.
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[PI] An abandoned plane in a field
Maybe use some formatting to make it easier to read? >To display a line break in your post, put two spaces at the end of the line, or use a double line break to start a new paragraph.
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[WP] Dead Man's Hand
The soldier moved swiftly through the jungle of fall concrete. The gun in his hand felt heavy, the sweat on his brow stingng, his body weighed down from pressure. As he ran through the ruined streets, leaping over barriers and sliding through doorways, he looked down at the package in his free hand. A brief case, perfe...
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[WP] Dead Man's Hand
"It was always meant to be this way, detective. No jail can hold me. No force can stop what's coming." The man looked like just a regular street thug- But he was anything but. He'd been in jails from Kosovo to Shanghai, and I've been hunting him my entire life. He's been behind everything from kidnappings to gas attac...
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[WP] Dead Man's Hand
The dust began to settle as the gunslinger came out from behind his cover. He brightly smiled, showing grime and decay in his teeth. His eyes squinted in the desert's glare and gleamed at his new found prize. "All o' there's, all o' mine." was all he uttered as he moved past the dead men surrounding him. One, alive and...
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[WP] Dead Man's Hand
The last cruiser in the B'raal warfleet glowed faintly, directly before us. A million light-years away, their homeworld burned with a thousand nuclear flames. The bright sheen of the cruiser's energy shield soon dimmed. This was common, as their ships quickly ran out of energy without a nearby star for solar power. T...
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[WP] Dead Man's Hand
“Ms. Smith, you are under arrest for sedition, treason, and tresspassing, by order of the Hereditary President of the People's Republic of America. You are to come with us. Anything you say can and will be used against you. Resistance is futile.” The policemen had to tug me away, as I was somewhat unresponsive. T...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
**Thanks for the Great Selection, TV Tropes: A Not-a-Fanfiction Begrudgingly Written (Without the Backspace Key)** Newt Gingrinch awaked up. He was in a liquied qhich was water. He oppende his mouth and followed the budbbles up. Je opened his eyes and was staring at Rick Santorum. He was smiling at him, read in the fa...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/WizardsLiveLonger http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HiddenObjectGame (This is a videogame trope, gorram it. I'm gonna bin it) http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PickYourHumanHalf --- "You know, friend, you've never looked better than on your deathbed." ...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ManIFeelLikeAWoman http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MistakenForCheating http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OddlyVisibleEyebrows This is... Slightly absurd. Alright, well, here we go. :| ----- I woke up, startled. The pounding in my chest subsided. It was...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
My prompts: [Panty Thief](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PantyThief), [Heroic Host](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HeroicHost) (dropped), and [Traumatic Haircut](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TraumaticHaircut) ~~ ...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
Vivid nightmares wake me from my sleep, what little of it I can get. I honestly don't know how long I've been here, but I know for a fact that I'm not getting out. I've clawed at the walls, used all these primitive tools that seem to be trapped here with me as well. A new tool appears every so often, seemingly falling ...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
My three: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PhonyPsychic http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ChairReveal http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheStakeout Larry began to tremble the moment his last tarot card was revealed. It was a picture of a man jumping off a building into a pool of sharks w...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
The Red Pill There it was just like the Matrix. That red pill. There was no blue one. The guy in the leather jacket wasn’t giving me a choice and neither was the blade he held at my neck. So, I took it. Down the hatch like a handful of Swedish Fish. The leather jacket smiled and pushed me to my knees; he turned, leavi...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
My three; I think i'm going to go for all of them. First time trying something else like this. Haha http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FluffyDryCat http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/DivineIntervention http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GaveUpTooSoon "Hey Harley, It's really raining hard out t...
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[FF] The Game of Trope Roulette
My selection: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/YouDidTheRightThing http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MagicalAbortion http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EverybodyWasKungFuFighting I got really excited when I saw the last one. "What are we going to name the baby?" Jill asks, stroking her growi...
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[WP] My sweet revenge
What... just that? Three words? All right. --- Last week, he put me in my locker and closed the door; this week, I get him back. There he is drinking stupid fucking water from the stupid fucking water fountain with his stupid fucking head dropped low so that his stupid fucking bangs get a little bit wet. All I want i...
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