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@@ -0,0 +1,16 @@ +package christmas.view; + +import christmas.constant.Menu; +import christmas.constant.OutputMessage; +import java.util.Map; + +public class OrderMenuView { + + public static String orderMenuOutputStatement(Map<Menu, Integer> orderMenu){ + StringBuilder sb = new StringBuilder(); + for(Menu menu : orderMenu.keySet()){ + sb.append(String.format(OutputMessage.ORDER_MENU.getMessage(), menu.getName(), orderMenu.get(menu))); + } + return sb.toString(); + } +}
Java
์ €๋Š” view๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ log๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ๋„๋ฉ”์ธ์—์„œ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋ณ„๋„์˜ ๊ฐ์ฒด๋ฅผ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•ด์„œ ๊ด€๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ญํ• ๊ณผ ์ฑ…์ž„์ด ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•ด์ง€๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”! ํ•œ ์ˆ˜ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,71 @@ +import { generateBasicToken } from '../utils/auth'; +import convertCartItem from '../utils/convertCartItem'; + +const API_URL = process.env.VITE_API_URL ?? 'undefined_URL'; +const USER_ID = process.env.VITE_API_USER_ID ?? 'undefined_USER_ID'; +const USER_PASSWORD = + process.env.VITE_API_USER_PASSWORD ?? 'undefined_USER_PASSWORD'; + +export const requestCartItemList = async () => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items`, { + method: 'GET', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to fetch products:'); + } + const data = await response.json(); + + return convertCartItem(data.content); +}; + +export const requestSetCartItemQuantity = async ( + cartItemId: number, + quantity: number, +) => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items/${cartItemId}`, { + method: 'PATCH', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + body: JSON.stringify({ + quantity, + }), + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to setCartItemQuantity'); + } +}; + +export const requestDeleteCartItem = async (cartItemId: number) => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items/${cartItemId}`, { + method: 'DELETE', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + body: JSON.stringify({ + id: cartItemId, + }), + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to deleteCartItem'); + } +}; + +// TEST๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ cartItem์ถ”๊ฐ€ API ์‹คํ–‰ +export const requestAddCartItemForTest = async (cartItemId: number) => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items`, { + method: 'POST', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + body: JSON.stringify({ + productId: cartItemId, + }), + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to addCartItem'); + } +};
TypeScript
์š”๊ณ ๋Š” ๊ฐ api๋งˆ๋‹ค ์„ ์–ธํ•ด์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฑธ๋กœ ํ™•์ธ๋๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ƒ์ˆ˜๋กœ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•ด๋„ ์ข‹์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”! ๐Ÿซ
@@ -0,0 +1,87 @@ +import * as S from './CartItem.style'; +import Text from '../common/Text/Text'; +import Button from '../common/Button/Button'; +import Divider from '../common/Divider/Divider'; +import Checkbox from '../common/Checkbox/Checkbox'; +import ImageBox from '../common/ImageBox/ImageBox'; +import useCartItemList from '../../hooks/cartItem/useCartItemList'; +import ChangeQuantity from '../common/ChangeQuantity/ChangeQuantity'; +import { useCartItemQuantity } from '../../hooks/cartItem/useCartItemQuantity'; +import { useSelectedCartItemId } from '../../hooks/cartItem/useSelectedCartItemId'; +import useApiErrorState from '../../hooks/error/useApiErrorState'; + +export type CartItemProps = { + type?: 'cart' | 'confirm'; + cartItem: CartItem; +}; + +const CartItem = ({ type = 'cart', cartItem }: CartItemProps) => { + const { id, name, price, imageUrl } = cartItem; + const { apiError } = useApiErrorState(); + const { cartItemQuantity, increaseQuantity, decreaseQuantity } = + useCartItemQuantity(); + const { isSelectedId, selectCartItem, unselectCartItem } = + useSelectedCartItemId(); + const { deleteCartItem } = useCartItemList(); + + if ( + apiError?.name === 'FailedDeleteCartItemError' || + apiError?.name === 'FailedSetCartItemQuantityError' + ) { + throw apiError; + } + + return ( + <S.CartItem> + <Divider /> + {type === 'cart' ? ( + <S.ItemHeader> + <Checkbox + state={isSelectedId(id)} + handleClick={ + isSelectedId(id) + ? () => unselectCartItem(id) + : () => selectCartItem(id) + } + /> + <Button size="s" radius="s" onClick={() => deleteCartItem(id)}> + ์‚ญ์ œ + </Button> + </S.ItemHeader> + ) : null} + <S.ItemBody> + <ImageBox + width={112} + height={112} + radius="m" + border="lightGray" + src={imageUrl} + alt="์ƒํ’ˆ ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€" + /> + <S.ItemDetail> + <S.ItemNameAndCost> + <Text size="s" weight="m"> + {name} + </Text> + <Text size="l" weight="l"> + {`${price.toLocaleString('ko-KR')}์›`} + </Text> + </S.ItemNameAndCost> + {type === 'cart' ? ( + <ChangeQuantity + quantity={cartItemQuantity(id)} + increaseQuantity={() => increaseQuantity(id)} + decreaseQuantity={() => decreaseQuantity(id)} + /> + ) : ( + <Text size="s" weight="m"> + {`${cartItemQuantity(id)}๊ฐœ`} + </Text> + )} + </S.ItemDetail> + </S.ItemBody> + </S.CartItem> + ); +}; + +export default CartItem;
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type์„ 2๊ฐœ๋กœ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•ด์„œ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”? ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๋А๋ผ๊ธฐ์—๋Š” ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ–ˆ์–ด๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์ง€ ์•Š๋‚˜ ์‹ถ์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋„ ๋“ค์–ด์„œ์š”!
@@ -1,10 +1,41 @@ -import "./App.css"; +import { Suspense } from 'react'; + +import styled from 'styled-components'; +import { ErrorBoundary } from 'react-error-boundary'; +import { BrowserRouter, Route, Routes } from 'react-router-dom'; + +import CartPage from './pages/CartPage'; +import ConfirmPurchasePage from './pages/ConfirmPurchasePage'; +import CompletePurchasePage from './pages/CompletePurchasePage'; +import ErrorFallback from './components/ErrorFallback/ErrorFallback'; +import LoadingFallback from './components/LoadingFallback/LoadingFallback'; + +const AppContainer = styled.div` + max-width: 768px; + width: 100%; +`; function App() { return ( - <> - <h1>react-shopping-cart</h1> - </> + <BrowserRouter> + <AppContainer> + <ErrorBoundary FallbackComponent={ErrorFallback}> + <Suspense fallback={<LoadingFallback />}> + <Routes> + <Route path="/" element={<CartPage />} /> + <Route + path="/confirm-purchase" + element={<ConfirmPurchasePage />} + /> + <Route + path="/complete-purchase" + element={<CompletePurchasePage />} + /> + </Routes> + </Suspense> + </ErrorBoundary> + </AppContainer> + </BrowserRouter> ); }
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์‚ฌ์†Œํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ RESTfulํ•˜๊ฒŒ path๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด์ฃผ์…จ๋„ค์š” ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
@@ -1,10 +1,41 @@ -import "./App.css"; +import { Suspense } from 'react'; + +import styled from 'styled-components'; +import { ErrorBoundary } from 'react-error-boundary'; +import { BrowserRouter, Route, Routes } from 'react-router-dom'; + +import CartPage from './pages/CartPage'; +import ConfirmPurchasePage from './pages/ConfirmPurchasePage'; +import CompletePurchasePage from './pages/CompletePurchasePage'; +import ErrorFallback from './components/ErrorFallback/ErrorFallback'; +import LoadingFallback from './components/LoadingFallback/LoadingFallback'; + +const AppContainer = styled.div` + max-width: 768px; + width: 100%; +`; function App() { return ( - <> - <h1>react-shopping-cart</h1> - </> + <BrowserRouter> + <AppContainer> + <ErrorBoundary FallbackComponent={ErrorFallback}> + <Suspense fallback={<LoadingFallback />}> + <Routes> + <Route path="/" element={<CartPage />} /> + <Route + path="/confirm-purchase" + element={<ConfirmPurchasePage />} + /> + <Route + path="/complete-purchase" + element={<CompletePurchasePage />} + /> + </Routes> + </Suspense> + </ErrorBoundary> + </AppContainer> + </BrowserRouter> ); }
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์‚ฌ์†Œํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ๋‹ค์Œ ๋ฏธ์…˜๋ถ€ํ„ฐ๋Š” [createBrowserRouter](https://reactrouter.com/en/main/routers/create-browser-router)๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด๋ด๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์„œ ๊ณต์œ ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! ๊ด€๋ จํ•ด์„œ ์ˆ˜์•ผ์™€๋„ ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ๋ฅผ ํ•œ ์ ์ด ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ์ฒจ๋ถ€ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! https://github.com/cys4585/react-shopping-cart/pull/1/files/0636ab3b3126ca9b8873cb7fec59c13b05c81985#r1603187152
@@ -0,0 +1,71 @@ +import { generateBasicToken } from '../utils/auth'; +import convertCartItem from '../utils/convertCartItem'; + +const API_URL = process.env.VITE_API_URL ?? 'undefined_URL'; +const USER_ID = process.env.VITE_API_USER_ID ?? 'undefined_USER_ID'; +const USER_PASSWORD = + process.env.VITE_API_USER_PASSWORD ?? 'undefined_USER_PASSWORD'; + +export const requestCartItemList = async () => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items`, { + method: 'GET', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to fetch products:'); + } + const data = await response.json(); + + return convertCartItem(data.content); +}; + +export const requestSetCartItemQuantity = async ( + cartItemId: number, + quantity: number, +) => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items/${cartItemId}`, { + method: 'PATCH', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + body: JSON.stringify({ + quantity, + }), + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to setCartItemQuantity'); + } +}; + +export const requestDeleteCartItem = async (cartItemId: number) => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items/${cartItemId}`, { + method: 'DELETE', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + body: JSON.stringify({ + id: cartItemId, + }), + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to deleteCartItem'); + } +}; + +// TEST๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ cartItem์ถ”๊ฐ€ API ์‹คํ–‰ +export const requestAddCartItemForTest = async (cartItemId: number) => { + const token = generateBasicToken(USER_ID, USER_PASSWORD); + const response = await fetch(`${API_URL}/cart-items`, { + method: 'POST', + headers: { Authorization: token, 'Content-Type': 'application/json' }, + body: JSON.stringify({ + productId: cartItemId, + }), + }); + + if (!response.ok) { + throw new Error('Failed to addCartItem'); + } +};
TypeScript
์ œ๊ฐ€ ์ง€๋‚œ ๋ฒˆ์— ๋‚จ๊ฒผ๋˜ ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜์˜ํ•ด์ฃผ์‹ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์„œ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„์ด ์กฐ์œผ๋„ค์š”..ใ…Žใ…Ž
@@ -0,0 +1,121 @@ +import { render, screen, fireEvent } from '@testing-library/react'; +import '@testing-library/jest-dom'; +import CartItem, { CartItemProps } from './CartItem'; +import { RecoilRoot } from 'recoil'; +import { useCartItemQuantity } from '../../recoil/cartItem/useCartItemQuantity'; +import { useCartItemSelectedIdList } from '../../recoil/cartItem/useCartItemSelectedIdList'; +import useCartItemList from '../../recoil/cartItemList/useCartItemList'; + +// Mock Recoil hooks +jest.mock('../../recoil/cartItem/useCartItemQuantity'); +jest.mock('../../recoil/cartItem/useCartItemSelectedIdList'); +jest.mock('../../recoil/cartItemList/useCartItemList'); + +const mockedUseCartItemQuantity = useCartItemQuantity as jest.Mock; +const mockedUseCartItemSelectedIdList = useCartItemSelectedIdList as jest.Mock; +const mockedUseCartItemList = useCartItemList as jest.Mock; + +// Sample product data +const product = { + productId: 3, + name: '์•„๋””๋‹ค์Šค', + price: 2000, + imageUrl: 'https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/74/25/04/item/1000373042574_i1_750.jpg', + category: 'fashion', +}; + +const mockCartItemProps: CartItemProps = { + product, + quantity: 5, + cartItemId: 1, +}; + +describe('CartItem ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ', () => { + beforeEach(() => { + mockedUseCartItemQuantity.mockReturnValue({ + quantity: 5, + updateQuantity: jest.fn(), + increaseQuantity: jest.fn(), + decreaseQuantity: jest.fn(), + }); + + mockedUseCartItemSelectedIdList.mockReturnValue({ + getIsSelected: jest.fn().mockReturnValue(false), + addSelectedId: jest.fn(), + removeSelectedId: jest.fn(), + }); + + mockedUseCartItemList.mockReturnValue({ + deleteCartItem: jest.fn(), + }); + }); + + afterEach(() => { + jest.clearAllMocks(); + }); + + test('์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๊ฐ€ ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ๋ Œ๋”๋ง๋œ๋‹ค', () => { + render( + <RecoilRoot> + <CartItem {...mockCartItemProps} /> + </RecoilRoot>, + ); + + expect(screen.getByText('์•„๋””๋‹ค์Šค')).toBeInTheDocument(); + expect(screen.getByText('2,000์›')).toBeInTheDocument(); + expect(screen.getByText('5')).toBeInTheDocument(); + }); + + test('์‚ญ์ œ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์„ ํด๋ฆญํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ deleteCartItem ํ•จ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ํ˜ธ์ถœ๋œ๋‹ค', () => { + const { deleteCartItem } = mockedUseCartItemList(); + + render( + <RecoilRoot> + <CartItem {...mockCartItemProps} /> + </RecoilRoot>, + ); + + fireEvent.click(screen.getByText('์‚ญ์ œ')); + expect(deleteCartItem).toHaveBeenCalledWith(mockCartItemProps.cartItemId); + }); + + test('์ฒดํฌ๋ฐ•์Šค๋ฅผ ํด๋ฆญํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ ์„ ํƒ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ๋œ๋‹ค', () => { + const { addSelectedId, removeSelectedId, getIsSelected } = mockedUseCartItemSelectedIdList(); + + render( + <RecoilRoot> + <CartItem {...mockCartItemProps} /> + </RecoilRoot>, + ); + + // Initially not selected + getIsSelected.mockReturnValue(false); + const checkbox = screen.getByAltText('Checkbox'); + fireEvent.click(checkbox); + expect(addSelectedId).toHaveBeenCalledWith(mockCartItemProps.cartItemId); + + // Now selected + getIsSelected.mockReturnValue(true); + fireEvent.click(checkbox); + expect(removeSelectedId).toHaveBeenCalledWith(mockCartItemProps.cartItemId); + }); + + test('์ˆ˜๋Ÿ‰ ์ฆ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ ๊ฐ์†Œ ๋ฒ„ํŠผ์ด ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ž‘๋™ํ•œ๋‹ค', () => { + const { increaseQuantity, decreaseQuantity } = mockedUseCartItemQuantity(); + + render( + <RecoilRoot> + <CartItem {...mockCartItemProps} /> + </RecoilRoot>, + ); + + const increaseButton = screen.getByLabelText('plus'); + const decreaseButton = screen.getByLabelText('minus'); + + fireEvent.click(increaseButton); + expect(increaseQuantity).toHaveBeenCalledTimes(1); + + fireEvent.click(decreaseButton); + expect(decreaseQuantity).toHaveBeenCalledTimes(1); + }); +});
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uiํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธ๋„ ์ž‘์„ฑ์„ ํ•ด์ฃผ์…จ๋„ค์š”...!! ๊ตฟ๊ตฟ~~!
@@ -0,0 +1,87 @@ +import * as S from './CartItem.style'; +import Text from '../common/Text/Text'; +import Button from '../common/Button/Button'; +import Divider from '../common/Divider/Divider'; +import Checkbox from '../common/Checkbox/Checkbox'; +import ImageBox from '../common/ImageBox/ImageBox'; +import useCartItemList from '../../hooks/cartItem/useCartItemList'; +import ChangeQuantity from '../common/ChangeQuantity/ChangeQuantity'; +import { useCartItemQuantity } from '../../hooks/cartItem/useCartItemQuantity'; +import { useSelectedCartItemId } from '../../hooks/cartItem/useSelectedCartItemId'; +import useApiErrorState from '../../hooks/error/useApiErrorState'; + +export type CartItemProps = { + type?: 'cart' | 'confirm'; + cartItem: CartItem; +}; + +const CartItem = ({ type = 'cart', cartItem }: CartItemProps) => { + const { id, name, price, imageUrl } = cartItem; + const { apiError } = useApiErrorState(); + const { cartItemQuantity, increaseQuantity, decreaseQuantity } = + useCartItemQuantity(); + const { isSelectedId, selectCartItem, unselectCartItem } = + useSelectedCartItemId(); + const { deleteCartItem } = useCartItemList(); + + if ( + apiError?.name === 'FailedDeleteCartItemError' || + apiError?.name === 'FailedSetCartItemQuantityError' + ) { + throw apiError; + } + + return ( + <S.CartItem> + <Divider /> + {type === 'cart' ? ( + <S.ItemHeader> + <Checkbox + state={isSelectedId(id)} + handleClick={ + isSelectedId(id) + ? () => unselectCartItem(id) + : () => selectCartItem(id) + } + /> + <Button size="s" radius="s" onClick={() => deleteCartItem(id)}> + ์‚ญ์ œ + </Button> + </S.ItemHeader> + ) : null} + <S.ItemBody> + <ImageBox + width={112} + height={112} + radius="m" + border="lightGray" + src={imageUrl} + alt="์ƒํ’ˆ ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€" + /> + <S.ItemDetail> + <S.ItemNameAndCost> + <Text size="s" weight="m"> + {name} + </Text> + <Text size="l" weight="l"> + {`${price.toLocaleString('ko-KR')}์›`} + </Text> + </S.ItemNameAndCost> + {type === 'cart' ? ( + <ChangeQuantity + quantity={cartItemQuantity(id)} + increaseQuantity={() => increaseQuantity(id)} + decreaseQuantity={() => decreaseQuantity(id)} + /> + ) : ( + <Text size="s" weight="m"> + {`${cartItemQuantity(id)}๊ฐœ`} + </Text> + )} + </S.ItemDetail> + </S.ItemBody> + </S.CartItem> + ); +}; + +export default CartItem;
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์ €๋„ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ์š”. ์ฒดํฌ, ์‚ญ์ œ๋ฒ„ํŠผ, ์ˆซ์ž ๋ฒ„ํŠผ ๋“ฑ ์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์˜ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ 2**3๊ฐœ ๋ฐ–์— ์—†์–ด์„œ ํƒ€์ž…์œผ๋กœ ์ผ์ผํžˆ ์ง€์ •ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ์š”๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ด ๋Š˜์–ด๋‚˜๋ฉด ํƒ€์ž…์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ๋ฒ„๊ฑฐ์šธ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์–ด์š”..!
@@ -0,0 +1,172 @@ +import type { Meta, StoryObj } from '@storybook/react'; +<<<<<<< HEAD +import CartItemList from './CartItemList'; +import { RecoilRoot } from 'recoil'; +import { cartItemListState } from '../../recoil/cartItem/atom'; + +const MOCK_DATA = [ + { + id: 586, + quantity: 4, + name: '๋‚˜์ดํ‚ค', + price: 1000, + imageUrl: + 'https://static.nike.com/a/images/c_limit,w_592,f_auto/t_product_v1/a28864e3-de02-48bb-b861-9c592bc9a68b/%EB%B6%81-1-ep-%EB%86%8D%EA%B5%AC%ED%99%94-UOp6QQvg.png', + }, + { + id: 587, + quantity: 3, + + name: '์•„๋””๋‹ค์Šค', + price: 2000, + imageUrl: 'https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/74/25/04/item/1000373042574_i1_750.jpg', + }, + { + id: 588, + quantity: 1, + name: 'ํ“จ๋งˆ', + price: 10000, + imageUrl: 'https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/47/78/22/item/1000031227847_i1_750.jpg', + }, + { + id: 589, + quantity: 4, + + name: '๋ฆฌ๋ณต', + price: 20000, + imageUrl: + 'https://image.msscdn.net/images/goods_img/20221031/2909092/2909092_6_500.jpg', + }, + { + id: 590, + quantity: 5, + + name: '์ปจ๋ฒ„์Šค', + price: 20000, + imageUrl: 'https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/65/73/69/item/1000163697365_i1_750.jpg', + }, +]; +======= +import CartItemList, { CartItemListProps } from './CartItemList'; +import { RecoilRoot } from 'recoil'; +>>>>>>> todari + +const meta = { + title: 'Components/CartItemList', + component: CartItemList, + tags: ['autodocs'], + argTypes: { +<<<<<<< HEAD + type: { + description: '', + control: { type: 'radio' }, + options: ['cart', 'confirm'], + }, + cartItemList: { + description: '', + control: { type: 'object' }, + }, + }, + args: { + type: 'cart', + cartItemList: MOCK_DATA, + }, +======= + itemList: { + description: '', + control: { type: 'object' }, + } + }, + args: { + itemList: [ + { + "cartItemId": 586, + "quantity": 4, + "product": { + "productId": 2, + "name": "๋‚˜์ดํ‚ค", + "price": 1000, + "imageUrl": "https://static.nike.com/a/images/c_limit,w_592,f_auto/t_product_v1/a28864e3-de02-48bb-b861-9c592bc9a68b/%EB%B6%81-1-ep-%EB%86%8D%EA%B5%AC%ED%99%94-UOp6QQvg.png", + "category": "fashion" + } + }, + { + "cartItemId": 587, + "quantity": 3, + "product": { + "productId": 3, + "name": "์•„๋””๋‹ค์Šค", + "price": 2000, + "imageUrl": "https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/74/25/04/item/1000373042574_i1_750.jpg", + "category": "fashion" + } + }, + { + "cartItemId": 588, + "quantity": 1, + "product": { + "productId": 10, + "name": "ํ“จ๋งˆ", + "price": 10000, + "imageUrl": "https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/47/78/22/item/1000031227847_i1_750.jpg", + "category": "fashion" + } + }, + { + "cartItemId": 589, + "quantity": 4, + "product": { + "productId": 11, + "name": "๋ฆฌ๋ณต", + "price": 20000, + "imageUrl": "https://image.msscdn.net/images/goods_img/20221031/2909092/2909092_6_500.jpg", + "category": "fashion" + } + }, + { + "cartItemId": 590, + "quantity": 5, + "product": { + "productId": 12, + "name": "์ปจ๋ฒ„์Šค", + "price": 20000, + "imageUrl": "https://sitem.ssgcdn.com/65/73/69/item/1000163697365_i1_750.jpg", + "category": "fashion" + } + } + ], + } +>>>>>>> todari +} satisfies Meta<typeof CartItemList>; + +export default meta; + +type Story = StoryObj<typeof meta>; + +<<<<<<< HEAD +export const Playground: Story = { + render: ({ type, cartItemList }) => { + return ( + <RecoilRoot + initializeState={({ set }) => set(cartItemListState, MOCK_DATA)} + > + <div style={{ width: '430px' }}> + <CartItemList type={type} cartItemList={cartItemList} /> + </div> + </RecoilRoot> + ); + }, +======= +// TODO : decorator ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์—ฌ ๋™์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก current: recoil๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ž‘๋™ x +export const Playground: Story = { + render: ({ ...args }: CartItemListProps) => { + return ( + <RecoilRoot> + <div style={{ width: '430px' }}> + <CartItemList {...args} /> + </div> + </RecoilRoot> + ) + } +>>>>>>> todari +};
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๋ฆฌ๋ฒ ์ด์Šค์˜ ํ”์ ์ดใ… 
@@ -0,0 +1,14 @@ +const homeDao = require('../models/homeDao') + +const getTop9ByRating = async () => { + return await homeDao.getProductsByRating(); +}; + +const getTop9BySales = async () => { + return await homeDao.getProductsBySales(); +}; + +module.exports ={ + getTop9ByRating, + getTop9BySales +} \ No newline at end of file
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top 9์œผ๋กœ ๊ณ ์ •๊ฐ’์„ ๋ณ€์ˆ˜๋ช…์— ์ •ํ•ด ๋†“๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ์œ ์—ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์™ธ๋ถ€ ์š”์ฒญ์— ๊ทธ๋•Œ ๊ทธ๋•Œ ๋Œ€์‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”!~ offset limit ๊ฐ’์„ ์ „๋‹ฌ ๋ฐ›์œผ๋ฉด ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฌธ์ œ ๊ฐ™์•„ ๋ณด์ด๋„ค์š”!~
@@ -1,69 +1,105 @@ import Image from "next/image"; import Label from "@/components/Common/Label"; import icon_like_red from "@public/assets/icon_like_red.png"; -import img_avatar1 from "@public/assets/img_avatar1.svg"; import icon_active_star from "@public/assets/icon_active_star.svg"; import link from "@public/assets/icon_link.svg"; import Link from "next/link"; +import { Plan } from "@/services/planService"; +import { formatToDetailedDate } from "@/utils/formatDate"; -export default function QuotationCardCompleted() { +interface MakerInfo { + nickName: string; + image: string; + gallery: string; + serviceTypes: string[]; + isFollowed: boolean; + averageRating: number; + totalReviews: number; + totalFollows: number; + totalConfirms: number; +} +interface QuotationDetail { + id: string; + createdAt: string; + updatedAt: string; + price: number; + content: string; + maker: MakerInfo; + isConfirmed: false; + isAssigned: false; +} + +interface QuotationCardProps { + planDetail: Plan; + quotationDetail: QuotationDetail; +} + +export default function QuotationCardCompleted({ + quotationDetail, + planDetail, +}: QuotationCardProps) { return ( <div className="mb-[32px] flex flex-col rounded-2xl bg-color-gray-50 px-6 py-7 shadow mobile-tablet:px-3 mobile-tablet:py-4"> <div className="justify-left flex items-center gap-[12px] mobile-tablet:mt-[6px]"> - <Label labelType="RELAXATION" customLabelContainerClass="rounded-lg" /> - <Label labelType="REQUEST" customLabelContainerClass="rounded-lg" /> + <Label labelType={planDetail.tripType} customLabelContainerClass="rounded-lg" /> </div> - <div className="border-color bg-body.bg-gray my-6 flex gap-6 rounded-md border-[1px] px-[18px] py-4 mobile-tablet:my-[14px] mobile-tablet:gap-3 mobile-tablet:px-[10px]"> - <div className="flex h-20 w-20 flex-shrink-0 items-center mobile-tablet:h-[46px] mobile-tablet:w-[46px]"> + <div className="my-6 flex gap-6 rounded-md border-[1px] px-[18px] py-4 mobile-tablet:my-[14px] mobile-tablet:gap-3 mobile-tablet:px-[10px]"> + <div className="md:w-24 md:h-24 flex h-20 w-20 content-center items-center mobile:h-12 mobile:w-12"> <Image - src={img_avatar1} + src={`/assets/img_avatar${quotationDetail.maker.image.split("_")[1]}.svg`} alt="ํ”„๋กœํ•„์‚ฌ์ง„" width={80} height={80} - className="rounded-full border-2 border-color-blue-400" + className="rounded-full border-2 border-color-blue-400 mobile-tablet:border-[1px]" /> </div> <div className="flex w-full"> - <div className="w-full flex-col items-center justify-between text-xs text-color-black-500"> - <p className="semibold text-xl mobile-tablet:text-lg">๊น€์ฝ”๋“œ Maker</p> - <div className="flex items-center gap-4 mobile-tablet:gap-1"> + <div className="w-full flex-col content-around items-center justify-between text-xs text-color-black-500"> + <p className="semibold text-xl mobile-tablet:text-lg"> + {quotationDetail.maker.nickName} + </p> + <div className="flex content-center items-center gap-4 mobile-tablet:gap-1"> <div className="medium flex flex-shrink-0 items-center gap-[6px] text-lg mobile-tablet:gap-[5px] mobile-tablet:text-sm"> <Image src={icon_active_star} alt="๋ณ„์ " className="color-red-200 h-6 w-6 mobile-tablet:h-[14px] mobile-tablet:w-[14px]" /> - <p>55</p> - <p className="text-color-gray-400">(178)</p> + <p>{quotationDetail.maker.averageRating}</p> + <p className="text-color-gray-400">({quotationDetail.maker.totalReviews})</p> </div> <p className="text-color-line-200">ใ…ฃ</p> - <div className="medium flex flex-shrink-0 gap-[6px] text-lg mobile-tablet:gap-[5px] mobile-tablet:text-sm"> + <div className="medium flex flex-shrink-0 items-center gap-[6px] object-center text-lg mobile-tablet:gap-[5px] mobile-tablet:text-sm"> <Link - href="https://www.instagram.com/codeit_kr/" + href={quotationDetail.maker.gallery} target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" - className="flex" + className="flex items-center" > - <Image src={link} alt="๋งํฌ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€" width={30} height={30} /> - <p className="text-color-gray-400">SNS</p> + <div className="flex mobile-tablet:h-[14px] mobile-tablet:w-[14px]"> + <Image src={link} alt="๋งํฌ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€" width={30} height={30} /> + </div> + <p className="content-center text-color-gray-400">SNS</p> </Link> </div> <p className="text-color-line-200">ใ…ฃ</p> <div className="medium flex flex-shrink-0 gap-[6px] text-lg mobile-tablet:gap-[5px] mobile-tablet:text-sm"> - <p>334๊ฑด</p> + <p>{quotationDetail.maker.totalConfirms}๊ฑด</p> <p className="text-color-gray-400">ํ™•์ •</p> </div> </div> </div> - <div className="medium flex text-2lg text-color-blue-400 mobile-tablet:text-sm"> - <Image - src={icon_like_red} - alt="์ข‹์•„์š”" - width={24} - height={24} - className="color-red-200 h-[24px] w-[24px]" - /> - 136 + <div className="medium flex-col text-2lg text-color-blue-400 mobile-tablet:mr-[10px] mobile-tablet:text-sm"> + <div className="flex items-center"> + <Image + src={icon_like_red} + alt="์ข‹์•„์š”" + width={24} + height={24} + className="color-red-200 h-[24px] w-[24px]" + /> + <p>{quotationDetail.maker.totalFollows}</p> + </div> </div> </div> </div> @@ -74,7 +110,7 @@ export default function QuotationCardCompleted() { ์—ฌํ–‰์ผ </p> <p className="medium text-2lg text-color-black-300 mobile-tablet:text-md"> - 2024.07.01(์›”) + {formatToDetailedDate(planDetail.tripDate)} </p> </div> <p className="text-color-line-200 mobile-tablet:hidden">ใ…ฃ</p> @@ -83,13 +119,15 @@ export default function QuotationCardCompleted() { ์—ฌํ–‰์ง€ </p> <p className="whitespace-nowrap text-2lg font-medium leading-[26px] text-color-black-300 mobile-tablet:text-md"> - ์„œ์šธ ๊ฐ•๋‚จ๊ตฌ + {planDetail.serviceArea} </p> </div> </div> <div className="flex items-center justify-end gap-4 py-6"> <p className="medium text-2lg mobile-tablet:text-md">๊ฒฌ์  ๊ธˆ์•ก</p> - <p className="bold text-2xl mobile-tablet:text-2lg"> 180,000์›</p> + <p className="bold text-2xl mobile-tablet:text-2lg"> + {quotationDetail.price.toLocaleString()}์› + </p> </div> </div> </div>
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์‚ญ์ œํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”!
@@ -1,16 +1,36 @@ -import MyPlanNav from "./MyPlanNav"; -import Layout from "../Common/Layout"; -import PlanCard from "./Cards/PlanCard"; -import QuotationCardList from "./QuotationCardList"; -import { Plan } from "@/services/planService"; +import { useRouter } from "next/router"; +import MyPlanNav from "@/components/MyPlans/MyPlanNav"; +import Layout from "@/components/Common/Layout"; +import PlanCard from "@/components/MyPlans/Cards/PlanCard"; +import QuotationCardList from "@/components/MyPlans/QuotationCardList"; +import planService, { Plan } from "@/services/planService"; +import Image from "next/image"; +import loading from "@public/assets/icon_loading.gif"; interface PlanData { planDetail: Plan; } export default function MyPlanDetail({ planDetail }: PlanData) { + const router = useRouter(); + + async function handleDeletePlan() { + try { + await planService.deletePlan(planDetail.id); + alert("ํ”Œ๋žœ์„ ์ทจ์†Œํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."); + } catch (error) { + alert(`ํ”Œ๋žœ ์ทจ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์‹คํŒจํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ${error}`); + } finally { + router.push("/mytrip-manage/ongoing-plan"); + } + } + if (!planDetail) { - return <div>Loading...</div>; + return ( + <div className="flex h-screen items-center justify-center"> + <Image src={loading} alt="๋กœ๋”ฉ ์ค‘" /> + </div> + ); } return ( @@ -19,11 +39,23 @@ export default function MyPlanDetail({ planDetail }: PlanData) { <Layout bodyClass="bg-gray"> <div className="my-10 flex-col"> <div className="my-10 rounded-2xl border-gray-300 bg-color-gray-50 p-5 shadow"> - <div className="semibold mb-3 text-2xl text-color-black-500">{planDetail.title}</div> + <div className="flex justify-between"> + <div className="semibold mb-3 content-center text-2xl text-color-black-500 mobile-tablet:text-xl"> + {planDetail.title} + </div> + {planDetail.status === "PENDING" && ( + <button + className="semibold mb-3 text-nowrap rounded-lg border-[1px] border-solid border-color-blue-300 bg-color-blue-100 px-[16px] py-[11px] text-lg text-color-blue-300 mobile:text-md tablet:text-lg" + onClick={handleDeletePlan} + > + ํ”Œ๋žœ ์ทจ์†Œ + </button> + )} + </div> <PlanCard planDetail={planDetail} /> </div> </div> - <QuotationCardList /> + <QuotationCardList planDetail={planDetail} /> </Layout> </> );
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๋’ค๋กœ๊ฐ€๊ธฐ ์ธ๊ฐ€์š”??
@@ -1,16 +1,36 @@ -import MyPlanNav from "./MyPlanNav"; -import Layout from "../Common/Layout"; -import PlanCard from "./Cards/PlanCard"; -import QuotationCardList from "./QuotationCardList"; -import { Plan } from "@/services/planService"; +import { useRouter } from "next/router"; +import MyPlanNav from "@/components/MyPlans/MyPlanNav"; +import Layout from "@/components/Common/Layout"; +import PlanCard from "@/components/MyPlans/Cards/PlanCard"; +import QuotationCardList from "@/components/MyPlans/QuotationCardList"; +import planService, { Plan } from "@/services/planService"; +import Image from "next/image"; +import loading from "@public/assets/icon_loading.gif"; interface PlanData { planDetail: Plan; } export default function MyPlanDetail({ planDetail }: PlanData) { + const router = useRouter(); + + async function handleDeletePlan() { + try { + await planService.deletePlan(planDetail.id); + alert("ํ”Œ๋žœ์„ ์ทจ์†Œํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค."); + } catch (error) { + alert(`ํ”Œ๋žœ ์ทจ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์‹คํŒจํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ${error}`); + } finally { + router.push("/mytrip-manage/ongoing-plan"); + } + } + if (!planDetail) { - return <div>Loading...</div>; + return ( + <div className="flex h-screen items-center justify-center"> + <Image src={loading} alt="๋กœ๋”ฉ ์ค‘" /> + </div> + ); } return ( @@ -19,11 +39,23 @@ export default function MyPlanDetail({ planDetail }: PlanData) { <Layout bodyClass="bg-gray"> <div className="my-10 flex-col"> <div className="my-10 rounded-2xl border-gray-300 bg-color-gray-50 p-5 shadow"> - <div className="semibold mb-3 text-2xl text-color-black-500">{planDetail.title}</div> + <div className="flex justify-between"> + <div className="semibold mb-3 content-center text-2xl text-color-black-500 mobile-tablet:text-xl"> + {planDetail.title} + </div> + {planDetail.status === "PENDING" && ( + <button + className="semibold mb-3 text-nowrap rounded-lg border-[1px] border-solid border-color-blue-300 bg-color-blue-100 px-[16px] py-[11px] text-lg text-color-blue-300 mobile:text-md tablet:text-lg" + onClick={handleDeletePlan} + > + ํ”Œ๋žœ ์ทจ์†Œ + </button> + )} + </div> <PlanCard planDetail={planDetail} /> </div> </div> - <QuotationCardList /> + <QuotationCardList planDetail={planDetail} /> </Layout> </> );
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์ ˆ๋Œ€ ๊ฒฝ๋กœ๋กœ ์จ์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ๋‚˜์ค‘์— ํŒŒ์ผ ์œ„์น˜๊ฐ€ ๋ณ€ํ•ด๋„ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ "dev": "next dev", "build": "next build", "start": "next start", - "lint": "next lint" + "lint": "next lint", + "check": "npm run lint && tsc --noEmit && npm run build" }, "eslintConfig": { "extends": [
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next๋กœ๋„ lint๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ตฐ์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,22 @@ +import * as yup from 'yup'; +import {ShippingFormData} from '@/features/cart/cartProcess/shoppingCheckOut/ShoppingCheckOut'; + +const phoneRegex = /^[0-9]{10,11}$/; +const zipcodeRegex = /^[0-9]{5}$/; +export const shippingSchema = yup.object().shape({ + name: yup + .string() + .required('์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”') + .min(2, '2์ž ์ด์ƒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + phone: yup + .string() + .required('์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”') + .matches(phoneRegex, '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + address: yup.string().required('์ฃผ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + city: yup.string().required('๋„/์‹œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + zipcode: yup + .string() + .required('์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”') + .matches(zipcodeRegex, '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + memo: yup.string(), +}) as yup.ObjectSchema<ShippingFormData>;
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๊ตฟ. ์ด๊ฑฐ ํ•ด๋‚ด์…จ๋„ค์š”
@@ -0,0 +1,22 @@ +import * as yup from 'yup'; +import {ShippingFormData} from '@/features/cart/cartProcess/shoppingCheckOut/ShoppingCheckOut'; + +const phoneRegex = /^[0-9]{10,11}$/; +const zipcodeRegex = /^[0-9]{5}$/; +export const shippingSchema = yup.object().shape({ + name: yup + .string() + .required('์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”') + .min(2, '2์ž ์ด์ƒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + phone: yup + .string() + .required('์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”') + .matches(phoneRegex, '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + address: yup.string().required('์ฃผ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + city: yup.string().required('๋„/์‹œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + zipcode: yup + .string() + .required('์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”') + .matches(zipcodeRegex, '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'), + memo: yup.string(), +}) as yup.ObjectSchema<ShippingFormData>;
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์ •๊ทœ์‹์„ ์ƒ์ˆ˜ํ™”ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ข€ ๋” ๋ณด๊ธฐ ํŽธํ•  ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š” ex) `const MOBILE_REGEX = /^[0-9]{10,11}$/;`
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@ import styled from 'styled-components'; import Image from 'next/image'; import confirmIcon from 'public/images/shop/confirm.svg'; -import {getRequest, getStoredToken} from '@/utils/apiClient'; -import {API_ENDPOINTS} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; -import {OrderResponse} from '@/types/order'; -import {useQuery} from '@tanstack/react-query'; - +import {useOrderDetail} from '@/hooks/useOrderDetail'; +import ShoppingConfirmItem from './ShoppingConfirmItem'; const Container = styled.div` display: flex; flex-direction: column; @@ -56,16 +53,6 @@ const OrderTitle = styled.span` margin: 0 25px; `; -const OrderItemContainer = styled.div` - display: flex; - flex-direction: column; - background-color: #fff; - border-radius: 15px; - padding: 25px 25px 15px; - margin-top: 15px; - gap: 15px; -`; - const OrderItemRow = styled.div` display: flex; flex-direction: row; @@ -118,30 +105,8 @@ interface ShoppingConfirmProps { orderId: string; } -const fetchOrderDetail = async (orderId: string): Promise<OrderResponse> => { - try { - const token = getStoredToken(); - const response = await getRequest<OrderResponse>( - `${API_ENDPOINTS.ORDERS}/${orderId}`, - {}, - token, - ); - return response.data; - } catch (error) { - throw new Error('์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ์˜ค๋Š”๋ฐ ์‹คํŒจํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.'); - } -}; - export default function ShoppingConfirm({orderId}: ShoppingConfirmProps) { - const { - data: orderDetail, - isLoading, - error, - } = useQuery({ - queryKey: ['fetchOrderDetail', orderId], - queryFn: () => fetchOrderDetail(orderId), - enabled: !!orderId, - }); + const {data: orderDetail, isLoading, error} = useOrderDetail(orderId); if (isLoading) return <div>๋กœ๋”ฉ ์ค‘...</div>; if (error) return <div>์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ์˜ค๋Š”๋ฐ ์‹คํŒจํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.</div>; @@ -163,28 +128,7 @@ export default function ShoppingConfirm({orderId}: ShoppingConfirmProps) { </ConfirmContainer> <OrderContainer> <OrderTitle>์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋‚ด์—ญ</OrderTitle> - <OrderItemContainer> - {orderDetail.items.map(item => ( - <OrderItemRow key={item.id}> - <OrderItemTitle>์ƒํ’ˆ๋ช…</OrderItemTitle> - <OrderItemValue>{item.product.name}</OrderItemValue> - </OrderItemRow> - ))} - <OrderItemRow> - <OrderItemTitle>์ด ์ƒํ’ˆ ๊ธˆ์•ก</OrderItemTitle> - <OrderItemValue> - {orderDetail.total_amount.toLocaleString()}์› - </OrderItemValue> - </OrderItemRow> - <OrderItemRow> - <OrderItemTitle>๊ฒฐ์ œ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ</OrderItemTitle> - <OrderItemValue> - {orderDetail.payment_method === 'BANK_TRANSFER' - ? 'ํ˜„๊ธˆ ๊ฒฐ์ œ' - : '์นด๋“œ ๊ฒฐ์ œ'} - </OrderItemValue> - </OrderItemRow> - </OrderItemContainer> + <ShoppingConfirmItem orderDetail={orderDetail} /> <NameAddressContainer> <OrderItemRow> <OrderItemTitle>์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์ผ์‹œ</OrderItemTitle>
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ํฌ์œผ ์ปค์Šคํ…€ํ›…์œผ๋กœ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•˜์…จ๊ตฐ์š”
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@ import styled from 'styled-components'; import Image from 'next/image'; import confirmIcon from 'public/images/shop/confirm.svg'; -import {getRequest, getStoredToken} from '@/utils/apiClient'; -import {API_ENDPOINTS} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; -import {OrderResponse} from '@/types/order'; -import {useQuery} from '@tanstack/react-query'; - +import {useOrderDetail} from '@/hooks/useOrderDetail'; +import ShoppingConfirmItem from './ShoppingConfirmItem'; const Container = styled.div` display: flex; flex-direction: column; @@ -56,16 +53,6 @@ const OrderTitle = styled.span` margin: 0 25px; `; -const OrderItemContainer = styled.div` - display: flex; - flex-direction: column; - background-color: #fff; - border-radius: 15px; - padding: 25px 25px 15px; - margin-top: 15px; - gap: 15px; -`; - const OrderItemRow = styled.div` display: flex; flex-direction: row; @@ -118,30 +105,8 @@ interface ShoppingConfirmProps { orderId: string; } -const fetchOrderDetail = async (orderId: string): Promise<OrderResponse> => { - try { - const token = getStoredToken(); - const response = await getRequest<OrderResponse>( - `${API_ENDPOINTS.ORDERS}/${orderId}`, - {}, - token, - ); - return response.data; - } catch (error) { - throw new Error('์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ์˜ค๋Š”๋ฐ ์‹คํŒจํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.'); - } -}; - export default function ShoppingConfirm({orderId}: ShoppingConfirmProps) { - const { - data: orderDetail, - isLoading, - error, - } = useQuery({ - queryKey: ['fetchOrderDetail', orderId], - queryFn: () => fetchOrderDetail(orderId), - enabled: !!orderId, - }); + const {data: orderDetail, isLoading, error} = useOrderDetail(orderId); if (isLoading) return <div>๋กœ๋”ฉ ์ค‘...</div>; if (error) return <div>์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋ถˆ๋Ÿฌ์˜ค๋Š”๋ฐ ์‹คํŒจํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.</div>; @@ -163,28 +128,7 @@ export default function ShoppingConfirm({orderId}: ShoppingConfirmProps) { </ConfirmContainer> <OrderContainer> <OrderTitle>์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋‚ด์—ญ</OrderTitle> - <OrderItemContainer> - {orderDetail.items.map(item => ( - <OrderItemRow key={item.id}> - <OrderItemTitle>์ƒํ’ˆ๋ช…</OrderItemTitle> - <OrderItemValue>{item.product.name}</OrderItemValue> - </OrderItemRow> - ))} - <OrderItemRow> - <OrderItemTitle>์ด ์ƒํ’ˆ ๊ธˆ์•ก</OrderItemTitle> - <OrderItemValue> - {orderDetail.total_amount.toLocaleString()}์› - </OrderItemValue> - </OrderItemRow> - <OrderItemRow> - <OrderItemTitle>๊ฒฐ์ œ ์ˆ˜๋‹จ</OrderItemTitle> - <OrderItemValue> - {orderDetail.payment_method === 'BANK_TRANSFER' - ? 'ํ˜„๊ธˆ ๊ฒฐ์ œ' - : '์นด๋“œ ๊ฒฐ์ œ'} - </OrderItemValue> - </OrderItemRow> - </OrderItemContainer> + <ShoppingConfirmItem orderDetail={orderDetail} /> <NameAddressContainer> <OrderItemRow> <OrderItemTitle>์ฃผ๋ฌธ ์ผ์‹œ</OrderItemTitle>
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์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ map ์„ ๋„๋Š” ๋Œ€์ƒ์ด ๊ธธ์–ด์งˆ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๋กœ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ฐ€๋…์„ฑ์ด ์•„์ฃผ ์ข‹์•„์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค(+๋ Œ๋”๋ง ๊ฒฉ๋ฆฌ)
@@ -1,11 +1,15 @@ -import {useForm} from 'react-hook-form'; +import {Resolver, useForm, FormProvider} from 'react-hook-form'; import styled from 'styled-components'; import {CartResponse} from '@/types/cart'; import {postRequest} from '@/utils/apiClient'; import {API_ENDPOINTS} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; +import * as yup from 'yup'; +import {yupResolver} from '@hookform/resolvers/yup'; import ShoppingCheckOutOrder from '../shoppingCheckOut/ShoppingCheckOutOrder'; import {useState} from 'react'; import ShoppingCheckOutInfo from '../shoppingCheckOut/ShoppingCheckOutInfo'; +import {shippingSchema} from '@/config/ValidationSchema'; + const Container = styled.div` display: flex; gap: 25px; @@ -49,14 +53,16 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ cart, setOrderId, }: ShoppingCheckOutProps) { + const methods = useForm<ShippingFormData>({ + resolver: yupResolver(shippingSchema) as Resolver<ShippingFormData>, + mode: 'onChange', + }); + const { - register, - handleSubmit, formState: {errors}, watch, - } = useForm<ShippingFormData>({ - mode: 'onChange', - }); + handleSubmit, + } = methods; const [isFormError, setIsFormError] = useState(false); @@ -67,7 +73,6 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ const zipCode = watch('zipcode'); const hasEmptyFields = !name || !phone || !address || !city || !zipCode; - const hasFormErrors = !!( errors.name || errors.phone || @@ -79,7 +84,10 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ const onSubmit = async (data: ShippingFormData) => { try { console.log(data); - await postRequest(API_ENDPOINTS.SHIPPING_ADDRESS, data); + await postRequest({ + url: API_ENDPOINTS.SHIPPING_ADDRESS, + data, + }); console.log('๋ฐฐ์†ก ์ •๋ณด ์ €์žฅ ์„ฑ๊ณต'); setIsFormError(false); @@ -90,22 +98,19 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ }; return ( - <Container> - <BillingContainer> - <BillingDetail>๋ฐฐ์†ก ์ •๋ณด</BillingDetail> - <ShoppingCheckOutInfo - onSubmit={onSubmit} - register={register} - errors={errors} - handleSubmit={handleSubmit} + <FormProvider {...methods}> + <Container> + <BillingContainer> + <BillingDetail>๋ฐฐ์†ก ์ •๋ณด</BillingDetail> + <ShoppingCheckOutInfo onSubmit={onSubmit} /> + </BillingContainer> + <ShoppingCheckOutOrder + onNextStep={onNextStep} + cart={cart} + isFormError={isFormError || hasEmptyFields || hasFormErrors} + setOrderId={setOrderId} /> - </BillingContainer> - <ShoppingCheckOutOrder - onNextStep={onNextStep} - cart={cart} - isFormError={isFormError || hasEmptyFields || hasFormErrors} - setOrderId={setOrderId} - /> - </Container> + </Container> + </FormProvider> ); }
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as๋กœ ํƒ€์ž…๋‹จ์–ธ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ฐ–์— ์—†๋‚˜์š”?
@@ -1,11 +1,15 @@ -import {useForm} from 'react-hook-form'; +import {Resolver, useForm, FormProvider} from 'react-hook-form'; import styled from 'styled-components'; import {CartResponse} from '@/types/cart'; import {postRequest} from '@/utils/apiClient'; import {API_ENDPOINTS} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; +import * as yup from 'yup'; +import {yupResolver} from '@hookform/resolvers/yup'; import ShoppingCheckOutOrder from '../shoppingCheckOut/ShoppingCheckOutOrder'; import {useState} from 'react'; import ShoppingCheckOutInfo from '../shoppingCheckOut/ShoppingCheckOutInfo'; +import {shippingSchema} from '@/config/ValidationSchema'; + const Container = styled.div` display: flex; gap: 25px; @@ -49,14 +53,16 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ cart, setOrderId, }: ShoppingCheckOutProps) { + const methods = useForm<ShippingFormData>({ + resolver: yupResolver(shippingSchema) as Resolver<ShippingFormData>, + mode: 'onChange', + }); + const { - register, - handleSubmit, formState: {errors}, watch, - } = useForm<ShippingFormData>({ - mode: 'onChange', - }); + handleSubmit, + } = methods; const [isFormError, setIsFormError] = useState(false); @@ -67,7 +73,6 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ const zipCode = watch('zipcode'); const hasEmptyFields = !name || !phone || !address || !city || !zipCode; - const hasFormErrors = !!( errors.name || errors.phone || @@ -79,7 +84,10 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ const onSubmit = async (data: ShippingFormData) => { try { console.log(data); - await postRequest(API_ENDPOINTS.SHIPPING_ADDRESS, data); + await postRequest({ + url: API_ENDPOINTS.SHIPPING_ADDRESS, + data, + }); console.log('๋ฐฐ์†ก ์ •๋ณด ์ €์žฅ ์„ฑ๊ณต'); setIsFormError(false); @@ -90,22 +98,19 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOut({ }; return ( - <Container> - <BillingContainer> - <BillingDetail>๋ฐฐ์†ก ์ •๋ณด</BillingDetail> - <ShoppingCheckOutInfo - onSubmit={onSubmit} - register={register} - errors={errors} - handleSubmit={handleSubmit} + <FormProvider {...methods}> + <Container> + <BillingContainer> + <BillingDetail>๋ฐฐ์†ก ์ •๋ณด</BillingDetail> + <ShoppingCheckOutInfo onSubmit={onSubmit} /> + </BillingContainer> + <ShoppingCheckOutOrder + onNextStep={onNextStep} + cart={cart} + isFormError={isFormError || hasEmptyFields || hasFormErrors} + setOrderId={setOrderId} /> - </BillingContainer> - <ShoppingCheckOutOrder - onNextStep={onNextStep} - cart={cart} - isFormError={isFormError || hasEmptyFields || hasFormErrors} - setOrderId={setOrderId} - /> - </Container> + </Container> + </FormProvider> ); }
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object๋กœ ํ•ด์ฃผ์…จ๊ตฐ์š”!
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@ import { + Control, FieldErrors, UseFormHandleSubmit, - UseFormRegister, + useController, + useFormContext, } from 'react-hook-form'; import styled from 'styled-components'; import {ShippingFormData} from './ShoppingCheckOut'; @@ -65,41 +67,64 @@ const ErrorMessage = styled.span` margin-left: 10px; `; +interface ShoppingCheckOutInfoProps { + onSubmit: (data: ShippingFormData) => void; +} + export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ - errors, - register, onSubmit, - handleSubmit, -}: { - errors: FieldErrors<ShippingFormData>; - register: UseFormRegister<ShippingFormData>; - onSubmit: (data: ShippingFormData) => void; - handleSubmit: UseFormHandleSubmit<ShippingFormData>; -}) { +}: ShoppingCheckOutInfoProps) { + const { + control, + handleSubmit, + formState: {errors}, + } = useFormContext<ShippingFormData>(); + + const {field: nameField} = useController({ + name: 'name', + control, + }); + + const {field: phoneField} = useController({ + name: 'phone', + control, + }); + + const {field: addressField} = useController({ + name: 'address', + control, + }); + + const {field: cityField} = useController({ + name: 'city', + control, + }); + + const {field: zipcodeField} = useController({ + name: 'zipcode', + control, + }); + + const {field: memoField} = useController({ + name: 'memo', + control, + }); + return ( <InputContainer onSubmit={handleSubmit(onSubmit)}> <InputRow> <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.name} - {...register('name', { - required: '์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - minLength: {value: 2, message: '2์ž ์ด์ƒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'}, - })} + {...nameField} placeholder="์ด๋ฆ„" /> {errors.name && <ErrorMessage>{errors.name.message}</ErrorMessage>} </InputBoxContainer> <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.phone} - {...register('phone', { - required: '์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - pattern: { - value: /^[0-9]{10,11}$/, - message: '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - }, - })} + {...phoneField} placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" /> {errors.phone && <ErrorMessage>{errors.phone.message}</ErrorMessage>} @@ -109,7 +134,7 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.address} - {...register('address', {required: '์ฃผ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'})} + {...addressField} placeholder="์ฃผ์†Œ" /> {errors.address && ( @@ -121,22 +146,15 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.city} - {...register('city', {required: '๋„/์‹œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'})} + {...cityField} placeholder="๋„/์‹œ" /> {errors.city && <ErrorMessage>{errors.city.message}</ErrorMessage>} </InputBoxContainer> - <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.zipcode} - {...register('zipcode', { - required: '์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - pattern: { - value: /^\d{5}$/, - message: '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - }, - })} + {...zipcodeField} placeholder="์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" /> {errors.zipcode && ( @@ -146,7 +164,7 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ </InputRow> <InputRow> - <InputBox {...register('memo')} placeholder="์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ" /> + <InputBox {...memoField} placeholder="์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ" /> </InputRow> <SaveButtonContainer> <SaveButton type="submit">์ €์žฅํ•˜๊ธฐ</SaveButton>
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๊ดœ์ฐฎ๊ธด ํ•œ๋ฐ, ์ด๋Ÿฐ์‹์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๋ฉด ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ(ํ˜„์žฌ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ)์—์„œ useํ›…์„ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ํ˜ธ์ถœํ•ด์„œ ๋ฆฌ๋ Œ๋”๋ง์„ ํ”ผํ• ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ์˜ˆ์‹œ) nameField๊ฐ’๋งŒ ์—…๋ฐ์ดํŠธ๋˜๊ณ , ๋‚˜๋จธ์ง€(phoneField ๋“ฑ) ๊ฐ’์€ ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ์—ฌ๋„ ShoppingCheckOutInfo ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ ์ „์ฒด๊ฐ€ ๋ฆฌ๋ Œ๋”๋ง๋˜๋ฉด์„œ ํ•˜์œ„ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๋“ค ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ฆฌ๋ Œ๋”๋ง์ด ์ผ์–ด๋‚จ ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ํ•„๋“œ๋ณ„๋กœ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ง์”€๋“œ๋ ธ๋˜ ๊ฑฐ์—์š”. ๊ฐ€๋…์„ฑ๋„ ์ข‹์•„์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌ์˜ ์žฅ์ ๋„ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๊ฑด ๋‹ค์Œ PR๋กœ ์ž‘์—…ํ•ด ๋ณด์‹œ์ฃ 
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@ import { + Control, FieldErrors, UseFormHandleSubmit, - UseFormRegister, + useController, + useFormContext, } from 'react-hook-form'; import styled from 'styled-components'; import {ShippingFormData} from './ShoppingCheckOut'; @@ -65,41 +67,64 @@ const ErrorMessage = styled.span` margin-left: 10px; `; +interface ShoppingCheckOutInfoProps { + onSubmit: (data: ShippingFormData) => void; +} + export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ - errors, - register, onSubmit, - handleSubmit, -}: { - errors: FieldErrors<ShippingFormData>; - register: UseFormRegister<ShippingFormData>; - onSubmit: (data: ShippingFormData) => void; - handleSubmit: UseFormHandleSubmit<ShippingFormData>; -}) { +}: ShoppingCheckOutInfoProps) { + const { + control, + handleSubmit, + formState: {errors}, + } = useFormContext<ShippingFormData>(); + + const {field: nameField} = useController({ + name: 'name', + control, + }); + + const {field: phoneField} = useController({ + name: 'phone', + control, + }); + + const {field: addressField} = useController({ + name: 'address', + control, + }); + + const {field: cityField} = useController({ + name: 'city', + control, + }); + + const {field: zipcodeField} = useController({ + name: 'zipcode', + control, + }); + + const {field: memoField} = useController({ + name: 'memo', + control, + }); + return ( <InputContainer onSubmit={handleSubmit(onSubmit)}> <InputRow> <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.name} - {...register('name', { - required: '์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - minLength: {value: 2, message: '2์ž ์ด์ƒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'}, - })} + {...nameField} placeholder="์ด๋ฆ„" /> {errors.name && <ErrorMessage>{errors.name.message}</ErrorMessage>} </InputBoxContainer> <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.phone} - {...register('phone', { - required: '์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - pattern: { - value: /^[0-9]{10,11}$/, - message: '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - }, - })} + {...phoneField} placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" /> {errors.phone && <ErrorMessage>{errors.phone.message}</ErrorMessage>} @@ -109,7 +134,7 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.address} - {...register('address', {required: '์ฃผ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'})} + {...addressField} placeholder="์ฃผ์†Œ" /> {errors.address && ( @@ -121,22 +146,15 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.city} - {...register('city', {required: '๋„/์‹œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'})} + {...cityField} placeholder="๋„/์‹œ" /> {errors.city && <ErrorMessage>{errors.city.message}</ErrorMessage>} </InputBoxContainer> - <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.zipcode} - {...register('zipcode', { - required: '์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - pattern: { - value: /^\d{5}$/, - message: '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - }, - })} + {...zipcodeField} placeholder="์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" /> {errors.zipcode && ( @@ -146,7 +164,7 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ </InputRow> <InputRow> - <InputBox {...register('memo')} placeholder="์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ" /> + <InputBox {...memoField} placeholder="์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ" /> </InputRow> <SaveButtonContainer> <SaveButton type="submit">์ €์žฅํ•˜๊ธฐ</SaveButton>
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@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -import axios, {AxiosResponse} from 'axios'; +import axios, {AxiosResponse, InternalAxiosRequestConfig} from 'axios'; import {API_BASE_URL} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; import Cookies from 'js-cookie'; @@ -9,15 +9,48 @@ const apiClient = axios.create({ }, }); +apiClient.interceptors.request.use( + (config: InternalAxiosRequestConfig) => { + const token = Cookies.get('jwt'); + if (token) { + config.headers.Authorization = `Bearer ${token}`; + } + return config; + }, + error => { + return Promise.reject(error); + }, +); + +apiClient.interceptors.response.use( + (response: AxiosResponse) => { + return response; + }, + error => { + if (error.response?.status === 401) { + // TODO: ํ† ํฐ ๋งŒ๋ฃŒ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ + } + return Promise.reject(error); + }, +); + export default apiClient; -export const postRequest = async (url: string, data: any) => { - const token = Cookies.get('jwt'); - const response = await apiClient.post(url, data, { - headers: { - Authorization: `Bearer ${token}`, - }, - }); +interface RequestConfig { + params?: Record<string, any>; + headers?: Record<string, any>; +} + +export const postRequest = async <T>({ + url, + data, + config = {}, +}: { + url: string; + data: any; + config?: RequestConfig; +}) => { + const response = await apiClient.post<T>(url, data, config); return response; }; @@ -27,17 +60,14 @@ export const formDataEntries = (event: React.FormEvent<HTMLFormElement>) => { return data; }; -export const getRequest = async <T>( - url: string, - params: Record<string, any> = {}, - token: string = '', -): Promise<AxiosResponse<T>> => { - const response = await apiClient.get<T>(url, { - headers: { - Authorization: token ? `Bearer ${token}` : '', - }, - params, - }); +export const getRequest = async <T>({ + url, + config = {}, +}: { + url: string; + config?: RequestConfig; +}): Promise<AxiosResponse<T>> => { + const response = await apiClient.get<T>(url, config); return response; };
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์•ž์œผ๋กœ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ธ์ฆ์€ ์ด์ชฝ์—์„œ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๊ฒ ๊ตฐ์š” ใ…Žใ…Ž
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -import axios, {AxiosResponse} from 'axios'; +import axios, {AxiosResponse, InternalAxiosRequestConfig} from 'axios'; import {API_BASE_URL} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; import Cookies from 'js-cookie'; @@ -9,15 +9,48 @@ const apiClient = axios.create({ }, }); +apiClient.interceptors.request.use( + (config: InternalAxiosRequestConfig) => { + const token = Cookies.get('jwt'); + if (token) { + config.headers.Authorization = `Bearer ${token}`; + } + return config; + }, + error => { + return Promise.reject(error); + }, +); + +apiClient.interceptors.response.use( + (response: AxiosResponse) => { + return response; + }, + error => { + if (error.response?.status === 401) { + // TODO: ํ† ํฐ ๋งŒ๋ฃŒ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ + } + return Promise.reject(error); + }, +); + export default apiClient; -export const postRequest = async (url: string, data: any) => { - const token = Cookies.get('jwt'); - const response = await apiClient.post(url, data, { - headers: { - Authorization: `Bearer ${token}`, - }, - }); +interface RequestConfig { + params?: Record<string, any>; + headers?: Record<string, any>; +} + +export const postRequest = async <T>({ + url, + data, + config = {}, +}: { + url: string; + data: any; + config?: RequestConfig; +}) => { + const response = await apiClient.post<T>(url, data, config); return response; }; @@ -27,17 +60,14 @@ export const formDataEntries = (event: React.FormEvent<HTMLFormElement>) => { return data; }; -export const getRequest = async <T>( - url: string, - params: Record<string, any> = {}, - token: string = '', -): Promise<AxiosResponse<T>> => { - const response = await apiClient.get<T>(url, { - headers: { - Authorization: token ? `Bearer ${token}` : '', - }, - params, - }); +export const getRequest = async <T>({ + url, + config = {}, +}: { + url: string; + config?: RequestConfig; +}): Promise<AxiosResponse<T>> => { + const response = await apiClient.get<T>(url, config); return response; };
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๋ชจ๋“  ์ธ์ฆ์„ ํ•œ๊ตฐ๋ฐ์„œ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์„œ๋ฒ„์—์„œ ์˜จ ์š”์ฒญ(SSR ๋“ฑ)๊ณผ ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ์—์„œ ์˜จ ์š”์ฒญ๋งˆ๋‹ค ์ฟ ํ‚ค ํŒŒ์‹ฑ์„ ๋‹ค๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค(๋ชปํ•œ๋‹ค๊ฑฐ๋‚˜) ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ `typeof window`๋กœ ์„œ๋ฒ„/ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ฒดํฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ(๋ธŒ๋ผ์šฐ์ €) ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์ธ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ `withCredentials: true`(https://inpa.tistory.com/entry/AXIOS-%F0%9F%93%9A-CORS-%EC%BF%A0%ED%82%A4-%EC%A0%84%EC%86%A1withCredentials-%EC%98%B5%EC%85%98) ์„ค์ •์œผ๋กœ ์ž๋™์œผ๋กœ ์ฟ ํ‚ค๋ฅผ ์‹ค์–ด์„œ ๋ณด๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•„์ฃผ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์†์„ฑ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ์•Œ์•„๋‘์„ธ์š”
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@ import { + Control, FieldErrors, UseFormHandleSubmit, - UseFormRegister, + useController, + useFormContext, } from 'react-hook-form'; import styled from 'styled-components'; import {ShippingFormData} from './ShoppingCheckOut'; @@ -65,41 +67,64 @@ const ErrorMessage = styled.span` margin-left: 10px; `; +interface ShoppingCheckOutInfoProps { + onSubmit: (data: ShippingFormData) => void; +} + export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ - errors, - register, onSubmit, - handleSubmit, -}: { - errors: FieldErrors<ShippingFormData>; - register: UseFormRegister<ShippingFormData>; - onSubmit: (data: ShippingFormData) => void; - handleSubmit: UseFormHandleSubmit<ShippingFormData>; -}) { +}: ShoppingCheckOutInfoProps) { + const { + control, + handleSubmit, + formState: {errors}, + } = useFormContext<ShippingFormData>(); + + const {field: nameField} = useController({ + name: 'name', + control, + }); + + const {field: phoneField} = useController({ + name: 'phone', + control, + }); + + const {field: addressField} = useController({ + name: 'address', + control, + }); + + const {field: cityField} = useController({ + name: 'city', + control, + }); + + const {field: zipcodeField} = useController({ + name: 'zipcode', + control, + }); + + const {field: memoField} = useController({ + name: 'memo', + control, + }); + return ( <InputContainer onSubmit={handleSubmit(onSubmit)}> <InputRow> <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.name} - {...register('name', { - required: '์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - minLength: {value: 2, message: '2์ž ์ด์ƒ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'}, - })} + {...nameField} placeholder="์ด๋ฆ„" /> {errors.name && <ErrorMessage>{errors.name.message}</ErrorMessage>} </InputBoxContainer> <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.phone} - {...register('phone', { - required: '์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - pattern: { - value: /^[0-9]{10,11}$/, - message: '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - }, - })} + {...phoneField} placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" /> {errors.phone && <ErrorMessage>{errors.phone.message}</ErrorMessage>} @@ -109,7 +134,7 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.address} - {...register('address', {required: '์ฃผ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'})} + {...addressField} placeholder="์ฃผ์†Œ" /> {errors.address && ( @@ -121,22 +146,15 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.city} - {...register('city', {required: '๋„/์‹œ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”'})} + {...cityField} placeholder="๋„/์‹œ" /> {errors.city && <ErrorMessage>{errors.city.message}</ErrorMessage>} </InputBoxContainer> - <InputBoxContainer> <InputBox hasError={!!errors.zipcode} - {...register('zipcode', { - required: '์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - pattern: { - value: /^\d{5}$/, - message: '์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์ž…๋ ฅํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”', - }, - })} + {...zipcodeField} placeholder="์šฐํŽธ๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" /> {errors.zipcode && ( @@ -146,7 +164,7 @@ export default function ShoppingCheckOutInfo({ </InputRow> <InputRow> - <InputBox {...register('memo')} placeholder="์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ" /> + <InputBox {...memoField} placeholder="์ฃผ๋ฌธ ๋ฉ”๋ชจ" /> </InputRow> <SaveButtonContainer> <SaveButton type="submit">์ €์žฅํ•˜๊ธฐ</SaveButton>
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๋„ค๋„ค, ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ์ดํ•ด๊ฐ€ ์•ˆ๋˜๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด์žˆ์–ด์„œ ๋‹ค์Œ pr ์ž‘์—…ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ฝ”๋ฉ˜ํŠธ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -import axios, {AxiosResponse} from 'axios'; +import axios, {AxiosResponse, InternalAxiosRequestConfig} from 'axios'; import {API_BASE_URL} from '@/config/ApiEndPoints'; import Cookies from 'js-cookie'; @@ -9,15 +9,48 @@ const apiClient = axios.create({ }, }); +apiClient.interceptors.request.use( + (config: InternalAxiosRequestConfig) => { + const token = Cookies.get('jwt'); + if (token) { + config.headers.Authorization = `Bearer ${token}`; + } + return config; + }, + error => { + return Promise.reject(error); + }, +); + +apiClient.interceptors.response.use( + (response: AxiosResponse) => { + return response; + }, + error => { + if (error.response?.status === 401) { + // TODO: ํ† ํฐ ๋งŒ๋ฃŒ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ + } + return Promise.reject(error); + }, +); + export default apiClient; -export const postRequest = async (url: string, data: any) => { - const token = Cookies.get('jwt'); - const response = await apiClient.post(url, data, { - headers: { - Authorization: `Bearer ${token}`, - }, - }); +interface RequestConfig { + params?: Record<string, any>; + headers?: Record<string, any>; +} + +export const postRequest = async <T>({ + url, + data, + config = {}, +}: { + url: string; + data: any; + config?: RequestConfig; +}) => { + const response = await apiClient.post<T>(url, data, config); return response; }; @@ -27,17 +60,14 @@ export const formDataEntries = (event: React.FormEvent<HTMLFormElement>) => { return data; }; -export const getRequest = async <T>( - url: string, - params: Record<string, any> = {}, - token: string = '', -): Promise<AxiosResponse<T>> => { - const response = await apiClient.get<T>(url, { - headers: { - Authorization: token ? `Bearer ${token}` : '', - }, - params, - }); +export const getRequest = async <T>({ + url, + config = {}, +}: { + url: string; + config?: RequestConfig; +}): Promise<AxiosResponse<T>> => { + const response = await apiClient.get<T>(url, config); return response; };
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๋„ต, https://github.com/wjdals0304/ecommerce-project/pull/47 ํ•ด๋‹น pr ์—์„œ ์ฝ”๋ฉ˜ํŠธํ• ๊ฒŒ์š”.
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ "dev": "next dev", "build": "next build", "start": "next start", - "lint": "next lint" + "lint": "next lint", + "check": "npm run lint && tsc --noEmit && npm run build" }, "eslintConfig": { "extends": [
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๊ถ๊ธˆํ•œ๊ฒŒ, ๊ณตํ†ต์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” apiClient.get ํŒŒ๋ผ๋ฏธํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•˜์˜€๋Š”๋ฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”๊ณณ์—์„œ ์ปดํŒŒ์ผ ๋ฒ„๊ทธ๊ฐ€ ์•ˆ ์žกํžˆ๋Š” ํ˜„์ƒ์ด ์žˆ์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒŒ์ผ ์ ‘๊ทผํ• ๋•Œ๋งŒ ๋นจ๊ฐ„์ƒ‰์ด ์ƒ๊ธฐ๋”๋ผ๊ตฌ์š”. @uu29 ์ž๋ฐ”์Šคํฌ๋ฆฝํŠธ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ปดํŒŒ์ผํ• ๋•Œ ๋ฒ„๊ทธ ์žก๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์—†๋‚˜์š”?
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ "dev": "next dev", "build": "next build", "start": "next start", - "lint": "next lint" + "lint": "next lint", + "check": "npm run lint && tsc --noEmit && npm run build" }, "eslintConfig": { "extends": [
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์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋ณดํ†ต ํƒ€์ž…์Šคํฌ๋ฆฝํŠธ ์ปดํŒŒ์ผ๋Ÿฌ์—์„œ ์ž๋™์œผ๋กœ ํ•ด์ฃผ๋Š”๋ฐ... ํƒ€์ž…์Šคํฌ๋ฆฝํŠธ ์žฌ์‹œ์ž‘(cursor์˜ restart typescript)ํ•ด๋„ ์•ˆ๋˜๋˜๊ฐ€์š”?
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ "dev": "next dev", "build": "next build", "start": "next start", - "lint": "next lint" + "lint": "next lint", + "check": "npm run lint && tsc --noEmit && npm run build" }, "eslintConfig": { "extends": [
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gpt ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด๋‹ˆ 1. TypeScript ๋„์ž… 2. ESLint & JSDoc ํ™œ์šฉ 3. APIClient์˜ ๋ฉ”์„œ๋“œ ์ธํ„ฐํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋ฅผ ๊ณ ์ • 4. ์ •์  ๋ถ„์„ ๋„๊ตฌ (TypeScript, ESLint) ๋„์ž… ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜๋„ค์š”. ํ  ๋ฆฌ์Šคํƒ€ํŠธํ•ด๋„ ์•ˆ๋˜๋Š”๋“ฏํ•˜๋„ค์š”?..
@@ -19,7 +19,8 @@ "dev": "next dev", "build": "next build", "start": "next start", - "lint": "next lint" + "lint": "next lint", + "check": "npm run lint && tsc --noEmit && npm run build" }, "eslintConfig": { "extends": [
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eslint๋ฅผ ์„ค์น˜ํ•ด๋ณด๋Š”๊ฑด ์–ด๋–จ๊นŒ์š”? ํ 
@@ -0,0 +1,51 @@ +package christmas; + +import camp.nextstep.edu.missionutils.Console; +import christmas.controller.EventController; +import christmas.model.domain.event.strategy.ChristmasEventStrategy; +import christmas.model.domain.event.EventRepository; +import christmas.model.domain.event.strategy.EventStrategy; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.totaldiscount.ChristmasTotalDiscount; +import christmas.model.service.ChristmasEventService; +import christmas.model.util.Converter; +import christmas.view.InputView; +import christmas.view.OutputView; + +public class AppConfig { + + public EventController getChristmasEventController() { + return new EventController(christmasEventService(), inputView(), outputView()); + } + + private InputView inputView() { + return new InputView(); + } + + private OutputView outputView() { + return new OutputView(); + } + + private ChristmasEventService christmasEventService() { + return new ChristmasEventService(converter(), eventRepository(), christmasEventStrategy()); + } + + private Converter converter() { + return new Converter(); + } + + private EventRepository eventRepository() { + return EventRepository.getEventRepository(); + } + + private EventStrategy christmasEventStrategy() { + return new ChristmasEventStrategy(christmasTotalDiscount()); + } + + private ChristmasTotalDiscount christmasTotalDiscount() { + return new ChristmasTotalDiscount(); + } + + public void endEvent() { + Console.close(); + } +}
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๊ฐ์ฒด ๋ณ„ ํ•„์š” ๊ฐ์ฒด๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์ž…ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ํด๋ž˜์Šค๋กœ ๋ณด์ด๋Š”๋ฐ ์–ด๋–ค ํด๋ž˜์Šค๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋””์— ์ฃผ์ž…๋˜๋Š”์ง€ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ข‹์€ ๊ฐ์ฒด ๊ตฌํ˜„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š”.. ๋ฉ‹์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.date; + +import static christmas.model.util.ErrorMessage.INVALID_DATE_MESSAGE; + +import christmas.model.util.MyIllegalArgumentException; + +public class Date { + private static final int CHRISTMAS_DATE = 25; + private static final int WEEK = 7; + private static final int FIRST_FRIDAY = 1; + private static final int FIRST_SATURDAY = 2; + private static final int FIRST_DAY = 1; + private static final int LAST_DAY = 31; + + private final int date; + + public Date(int date) { + validateDate(date); + this.date = date; + } + + private void validateDate(int date) { + if (FIRST_DAY > date || date > LAST_DAY) { + throw new MyIllegalArgumentException(INVALID_DATE_MESSAGE); + } + } + + public boolean isSpecialDate() { + return SpecialDate.checkSpecialDate(this); + } + + boolean isSameDate(int date) { + return this.date == date; + } + + public boolean isWeekEnd() { + return date % WEEK == FIRST_FRIDAY || date % WEEK == FIRST_SATURDAY; + } + + public int getDDayFromChristmas() { + return CHRISTMAS_DATE - date; + } + + public boolean isAfterChristmas() { + return date > CHRISTMAS_DATE; + } +}
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๊ณ„์† ์ฝ”๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๊ฐ์ฒด์—์„œ ๊ฒ€์ฆํ•œ ๊ฐ’์„ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•œ๋‹ค ๋ผ๋Š” ์˜๋ฏธ๊ฐ€ ์ž˜ ์™€๋‹ฟ์ง€ ์•Š์•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ํ•ด๋‹น ๋ฐฉ์‹์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ๋„ค์š”. ๊ณ„์† ๋“ค์—ˆ๋˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ฝ”๋“œ๋„ ๊น”๋”ํ•˜๊ณ  ํ™• ์™€๋‹ฟ๋„ค์š”. ์ •๋ง ์ž˜ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ฒŒ ๋ฌ๋„ค์š”! ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ฝ”๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋ทฐ ์•ˆํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉด ํฐ์ผ๋‚ ๋ป” ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ใ…‹ใ…‹..
@@ -0,0 +1,16 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.dto; + +import christmas.model.domain.date.Date; + +public class DateDto extends Date { + private final int date; + + public DateDto(int date) { + super(date); + this.date = date; + } + + public int getDate() { + return date; + } +}
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์ €๋Š” DTO ์—์„œ ๊ฐ’์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์˜ค๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์จ์•ผํ•˜์ง€ ์ •๋ง ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์จ์•ผ ํ–ˆ๋„ค์š”.. ๊ณ„์† ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
@@ -0,0 +1,32 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.dto; + +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.Badge; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.EventBenefits; + +public class EventResultsDto { + private final EventBenefits eventBenefits; + private final Badge badge; + + public EventResultsDto(EventBenefits eventBenefits, Badge badge) { + this.eventBenefits = eventBenefits; + this.badge = badge; + } + + public int getTotalDiscount() { + return eventBenefits.getDiscountBenefit(); + } + + public int getTotalBenefitAmount() { + return eventBenefits.getTotalBenefit(); + } + + public Badge getBadge() { + return badge; + } + + public String getGiftMessage() { return eventBenefits.getGiftMessage();} + + public String getBenefitMessage() { + return eventBenefits.makeBenefitMessage(); + } +}
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์ €๋Š” DTO ๊ฐ€ ๊ณ„์† ๋„๋ฉ”์ธ์˜ ๊ฐ’์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์•ˆ๋œ๋‹ค ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด์„œ String ์ด๋‚˜ int ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ํƒ€์ž…์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์‹œ Service๋กœ ๋ณด๋‚ผ๋•Œ ํ•ด๋‹น ๊ฐ’์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์ฐธ ์–ด๋ ค์› ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด ์ •๋„๋กœ ์ƒ์„ฑ๋œ ๊ฐ์ฒด๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์€ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์‹œ๋‚˜์š”..? ์˜๊ฒฌ์ด ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,36 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event; + +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.Badge; +import java.util.HashMap; +import java.util.Map; + +public class EventRepository { + private static EventRepository instance; + private final Map<Long, EventResults> eventRepository; + private final Map<Long, Badge> badgeRepository; + private long id; + + private EventRepository(Map<Long, EventResults> eventRepository, Map<Long, Badge> badgeRepository) { + this.eventRepository = eventRepository; + this.badgeRepository = badgeRepository; + id = 0L; + } + + public static EventRepository getEventRepository() { + if (instance == null) { + instance = new EventRepository(new HashMap<>(), new HashMap<>()); + } + return instance; + } + + public long save(EventResults eventResults) { + long currentId = id++; + eventRepository.put(currentId, eventResults); + badgeRepository.put(currentId, eventResults.getBadge()); + return id; + } + + public EventResults getEventResultsById(long id) { + return eventRepository.get(id); + } +}
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ํ•œ๋ฒˆ์˜ ๋กœ์ง๋งŒ ์‹คํ–‰ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ณด๋‹ˆ Repository ๊ตฌํ˜„์€ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋„ ์•ˆํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋งŽ์ด ๊น”๋”ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ข‹์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š”.. ์ข‹์€ ์ฝ”๋“œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
@@ -0,0 +1,29 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.benefit; + +import java.util.Arrays; +import java.util.Comparator; + +public enum Badge { + NONE(0, "์—†์Œ"), STAR(5000, "๋ณ„"), + TREE(10000, "ํŠธ๋ฆฌ"), SANTA(20000, "์‚ฐํƒ€"); + + private final int minimumBenefitAmount; + private final String name; + + Badge(int minimumBenefitAmount, String name) { + this.minimumBenefitAmount = minimumBenefitAmount; + this.name = name; + } + + public static Badge getBadge(int totalBenefitAmount) { + return Arrays.stream(values()) + .filter(badge -> badge.minimumBenefitAmount <= totalBenefitAmount) + .max(Comparator.comparingInt(b -> b.minimumBenefitAmount)) + .orElse(NONE); + } + + @Override + public String toString() { + return name; + } +}
Java
getName์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ toString์„ ์˜ค๋ฒ„๋ผ์ด๋”ฉ ํ•ด์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ๋‹ค๋ฅด๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”??
@@ -0,0 +1,27 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.benefit; + +import java.util.stream.Stream; + +public class DiscountBenefit { + + private final int discountBenefit; + private final Stream<String> discountMessageStream; + + public DiscountBenefit(int discountBenefit, Stream<String> discountMessageStream) { + this.discountBenefit = discountBenefit; + this.discountMessageStream = discountMessageStream; + } + + public static DiscountBenefit makeZeroDiscountBenefit() { + return new DiscountBenefit(0, Stream.empty()); + } + + public int getDiscountBenefit() { + return discountBenefit; + } + + public Stream<String> getDiscountMessage() { + return discountMessageStream; + } +} +
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ํ•ด๋‹น ๊ฐ์ฒด ์ƒ์„ฑ์„ static์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?? ์ €๋Š” ํด๋ž˜์Šค ์˜ค๋ฒ„๋กœ๋”ฉ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.gift; + +import christmas.model.domain.order.TotalOrderPrice; +import java.util.stream.Stream; + +public class ChristmasGift implements Gift { + private static final int MINIMUM_CHRISTMAS_GIFT_PRICE = 120000; + private static final int CHRISTMAS_GIFT_PRICE = -25000; + private static final String CHRISTMAS_GIFT_TRUE_MESSAGE = "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ 1๊ฐœ"; + private static final String CHRISTMAS_GIFT_FALSE_MESSAGE = "์—†์Œ"; + private static final String CHRISTMAS_GIFT_BENEFIT_MESSAGE = "์ฆ์ • ์ด๋ฒคํŠธ: %,d์›"; + + private final boolean giftAvailability; + + private ChristmasGift(int totalPrice) { + this.giftAvailability = totalPrice >= MINIMUM_CHRISTMAS_GIFT_PRICE; + } + + public static Gift makeNoneGift() { + return new ChristmasGift(0); + } + + public static Gift makeChristmasGift(TotalOrderPrice totalOrderPrice) { + return new ChristmasGift(totalOrderPrice.getTotalOrderPrice()); + } + + @Override + public int getGiftBenefit() { + if (giftAvailability) { + return CHRISTMAS_GIFT_PRICE; + } + return 0; + } + + @Override + public String makeGiftMessage() { + if (giftAvailability) { + return CHRISTMAS_GIFT_TRUE_MESSAGE; + } + return CHRISTMAS_GIFT_FALSE_MESSAGE; + } + + @Override + public Stream<String> makeGiftBenefitMessageStream() { + if (giftAvailability) { + return Stream.of(String.format(CHRISTMAS_GIFT_BENEFIT_MESSAGE, CHRISTMAS_GIFT_PRICE)); + } + return Stream.empty(); + } +}
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Gift ์ธํ„ฐํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋กœ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•ด์„œ ์ƒ์†๋ฐ›์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์ €๋„ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ถ„๋“ค์˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•œ ์ฝ”๋“œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•ด๋ณด๋ ค๋Š”๋ฐ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋ด๋„ ์ข‹์€ ์ฝ”๋“œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
@@ -0,0 +1,25 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.discount; + +import christmas.model.domain.event.discount.christmas.ChristmasDDayDiscount; +import christmas.model.domain.event.discount.christmas.ChristmasSpecialDiscount; +import christmas.model.domain.event.discount.christmas.ChristmasWeekDiscount; +import christmas.model.domain.event.discount.christmas.ChristmasWeekendDiscount; +import java.util.Arrays; +import java.util.List; + +public enum ChristmasDiscountStrategies { + DDAY(new ChristmasDDayDiscount()), WEEK(new ChristmasWeekDiscount()), WEEKEND(new ChristmasWeekendDiscount()), SPECIAL(new ChristmasSpecialDiscount()); + + private final Discount discount; + + ChristmasDiscountStrategies(Discount discount) { + this.discount = discount; + } + + public static List<Discount> getAllDiscountStrategy() { + return Arrays.stream(values()) + .map(discountStrategy -> discountStrategy.discount) + .peek(Discount::reset) + .toList(); + } +}
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ํ• ์ธ ์ธํ„ฐํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋ฅผ ์ƒ์†๋ฐ›์€ ๊ฐ์ฒด๋“ค์˜ ๊ฐ’์„ ์ดˆ๊ธฐํ™”ํ•˜์—ฌ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ๊ฒฝ์ด๋กญ๋„ค์š”. ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ•  ์ฝ”๋“œ์— ์ ์šฉํ•  ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋” ๋Š˜์€ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,30 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.discount; + +import christmas.model.domain.date.Date; +import christmas.model.domain.order.RequestOrders; + +public abstract class Discount { + private int discountAmount; + + public abstract void calculateDiscountAmount(RequestOrders requestOrders, Date date); + + public abstract String toString(); + + protected abstract void reset(); + + public boolean isNotZero() { + return discountAmount != 0; + } + + public void resetDiscount() { + discountAmount = 0; + } + + public int getDiscountAmount() { + return discountAmount; + } + + protected void updateDiscountAmount(int discountAmount) { + this.discountAmount -= discountAmount; + } +}
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ํ• ์ธ ๊ฐ์ฒด๋ฅผ ์ƒ์†๋ฐ›๋Š” ๊ฐ์ฒด์— reset ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์„ ๊ฐ•์ œํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด reset() ๋ฉ”์„œ๋“œ๋ฅผ resetDiscount() ๋ง๊ณ  ๋”ฐ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“œ์‹  ๊ฑด๊ฐ€์š”??
@@ -0,0 +1,59 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.menu; + +import static christmas.model.domain.menu.MenuCategory.DESSERT; +import static christmas.model.domain.menu.MenuCategory.MAIN; +import static christmas.model.domain.menu.MenuCategory.APPETIZER; +import static christmas.model.domain.menu.MenuCategory.BEVERAGE; +import static christmas.model.util.ErrorMessage.INVALID_ORDER_MESSAGE; + +import christmas.model.util.MyIllegalArgumentException; +import java.util.Arrays; +import java.util.Objects; + +public enum Menu { + MUSHROOM_SOUP("์–‘์†ก์ด์ˆ˜ํ”„", 6000, APPETIZER), + TAPAS("ํƒ€ํŒŒ์Šค", 5500, APPETIZER), + CAESAR_SALAD("์‹œ์ €์ƒ๋Ÿฌ๋“œ", 8000, APPETIZER), + T_BONE_STAKE("ํ‹ฐ๋ณธ์Šคํ…Œ์ดํฌ", 55000, MAIN), + BARBECUE_RIB("๋ฐ”๋น„ํ๋ฆฝ", 54000, MAIN), + SEE_FOOD_PASTA("ํ•ด์‚ฐ๋ฌผํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", 35000, MAIN), + CHRISTMAS_PASTA("ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์ŠคํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", 25000, MAIN), + CHOCO_CAKE("์ดˆ์ฝ”์ผ€์ดํฌ", 15000, DESSERT), + ICE_CREAM("์•„์ด์Šคํฌ๋ฆผ", 5000, DESSERT), + ZERO_COKE("์ œ๋กœ์ฝœ๋ผ", 3000, BEVERAGE), + RED_WINE("๋ ˆ๋“œ์™€์ธ", 60000, BEVERAGE), + CHAMPAGNE("์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ", 25000, BEVERAGE); + + private final String name; + private final int price; + private final MenuCategory category; + + Menu(String name, int price, MenuCategory category) { + this.name = name; + this.price = price; + this.category = category; + } + + public static Menu getMenuByName(String menuName) { + return Arrays.stream(values()) + .filter(menu -> menu.checkName(menuName)) + .findAny() + .orElseThrow(() -> new MyIllegalArgumentException(INVALID_ORDER_MESSAGE)); + } + + public boolean checkName(String name) { + return Objects.equals(this.name, name); + } + + public boolean checkCategory(MenuCategory category) { + return this.category.checkCategory(category); + } + + public int getPrice() { + return price; + } + + public String getName() { + return name; + } +}
Java
`HashMap์œผ๋กœ ์บ์‹ฑ` ํ•ด๋‘๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋„ ์ถ”์ฒœ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Enum์—์„  static ๋ธ”๋ก์„ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ์š”, ์š”๋Ÿฐ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ```java public enum Menu { // ์—ด๊ฑฐํ˜• ์ƒ์ˆ˜๋“ค ... private static final Map<String, Menu> cachedMenu; static { for (Menu menu : values()) { cachedMenu.put(menu.getName(), menu); } } } ``` ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ Map์œผ๋กœ ์บ์‹ฑํ•ด๋‘๋ฉด, ๋งค ๋ฒˆ ์—ด๊ฑฐํ˜• ์ƒ์ˆ˜๋“ค์„ ์ˆœํšŒํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•„๋„ ๋˜๋Š” ์žฅ์ ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :) ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ NPE๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•  ์œ„ํ—˜์ด ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์—, Optional์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•ด๋ณด์‹œ๋ฉด ์ข‹์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. !!
@@ -0,0 +1,41 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.strategy; + +import christmas.model.domain.date.Date; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.Badge; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.DiscountBenefit; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.gift.ChristmasGift; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.EventBenefits; +import christmas.model.domain.event.EventResults; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.gift.Gift; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.totaldiscount.ChristmasTotalDiscount; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.totaldiscount.TotalDiscount; +import christmas.model.domain.order.RequestOrders; +import christmas.model.domain.order.TotalOrderPrice; + +public class ChristmasEventStrategy implements EventStrategy { + private final int CHRISTMAS_EVENT_APPLY_MINIMUM_PRICE = 10000; + + private final TotalDiscount christmasTotalDiscount; + + public ChristmasEventStrategy(ChristmasTotalDiscount christmasTotalDiscount) { + this.christmasTotalDiscount = christmasTotalDiscount; + } + + @Override + public EventResults updateEventResult(RequestOrders requestOrders, Date date) { + christmasTotalDiscount.applyDiscount(requestOrders, date); + DiscountBenefit discountBenefit = christmasTotalDiscount.makeDiscountBenefit(); + TotalOrderPrice totalOrderPrice = requestOrders.getTotalOrderPrice(); + Gift gift = ChristmasGift.makeChristmasGift(totalOrderPrice); + + EventBenefits eventBenefits = new EventBenefits(discountBenefit, gift); + Badge badge = Badge.getBadge(Math.abs(eventBenefits.getTotalBenefit())); + return new EventResults(eventBenefits, badge); + } + + @Override + public int getMinimumOrderPrice() { + return CHRISTMAS_EVENT_APPLY_MINIMUM_PRICE; + } + +} \ No newline at end of file
Java
ํ• ์ธ ์ด๋ฒคํŠธ, ์ฆ์ • ์ด๋ฒคํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋ฌถ์–ด์„œ ๊ด€๋ฆฌํ•˜๋‹ˆ ๊ต‰์žฅํžˆ ์‘์ง‘๋„๋„ ๋†“๊ณ  ์ข‹์€ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..!! ๐Ÿ‘
@@ -0,0 +1,30 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.discount; + +import christmas.model.domain.date.Date; +import christmas.model.domain.order.RequestOrders; + +public abstract class Discount { + private int discountAmount; + + public abstract void calculateDiscountAmount(RequestOrders requestOrders, Date date); + + public abstract String toString(); + + protected abstract void reset(); + + public boolean isNotZero() { + return discountAmount != 0; + } + + public void resetDiscount() { + discountAmount = 0; + } + + public int getDiscountAmount() { + return discountAmount; + } + + protected void updateDiscountAmount(int discountAmount) { + this.discountAmount -= discountAmount; + } +}
Java
Discount์„ ์ถ”์ƒํด๋ž˜์Šค๋กœ ๋‘๊ณ  ์ƒ์† ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์—ฌ์ญ™๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด์š”!
@@ -0,0 +1,11 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.strategy; + +import christmas.model.domain.date.Date; +import christmas.model.domain.event.EventResults; +import christmas.model.domain.order.RequestOrders; + +public interface EventStrategy { + EventResults updateEventResult(RequestOrders requestOrders, Date date); + + int getMinimumOrderPrice(); +}
Java
EventStrategy ๋ฅผ ์ธํ„ฐํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋กœ ์ถ”์ƒํ™”ํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,51 @@ +package christmas; + +import camp.nextstep.edu.missionutils.Console; +import christmas.controller.EventController; +import christmas.model.domain.event.strategy.ChristmasEventStrategy; +import christmas.model.domain.event.EventRepository; +import christmas.model.domain.event.strategy.EventStrategy; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.totaldiscount.ChristmasTotalDiscount; +import christmas.model.service.ChristmasEventService; +import christmas.model.util.Converter; +import christmas.view.InputView; +import christmas.view.OutputView; + +public class AppConfig { + + public EventController getChristmasEventController() { + return new EventController(christmasEventService(), inputView(), outputView()); + } + + private InputView inputView() { + return new InputView(); + } + + private OutputView outputView() { + return new OutputView(); + } + + private ChristmasEventService christmasEventService() { + return new ChristmasEventService(converter(), eventRepository(), christmasEventStrategy()); + } + + private Converter converter() { + return new Converter(); + } + + private EventRepository eventRepository() { + return EventRepository.getEventRepository(); + } + + private EventStrategy christmasEventStrategy() { + return new ChristmasEventStrategy(christmasTotalDiscount()); + } + + private ChristmasTotalDiscount christmasTotalDiscount() { + return new ChristmasTotalDiscount(); + } + + public void endEvent() { + Console.close(); + } +}
Java
Spring์˜ AppConfig ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ฆฌ๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ์˜์กด๊ด€๊ณ„ ์ฃผ์ž… ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๊ตฐ์š”! ์ธ์ƒ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๐Ÿ‘
@@ -1,7 +1,12 @@ package christmas; +import christmas.controller.EventController; + public class Application { public static void main(String[] args) { - // TODO: ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ ๊ตฌํ˜„ + AppConfig appConfig = new AppConfig(); + EventController christmasEventController = appConfig.getChristmasEventController(); + christmasEventController.startEvent(); + appConfig.endEvent(); } }
Java
christmasEventController๊ฐ€ ๋‹จ์ผ ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๋กœ ๋ชจ๋“  ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋กœ์ง์„ ๋‹ด๋‹นํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์„ค๊ณ„ํ•˜๋ฉด Controller Layer ๋‹จ์œ„ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธ = ํ†ตํ•ฉ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธ๋กœ ์ดํ•ดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์€๋ฐ, ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ผ์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ด์š”
@@ -0,0 +1,30 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.dto; + +import christmas.model.domain.order.RequestOrder; +import java.util.Collections; +import java.util.List; + +public class RequestOrdersDto { + + private final List<RequestOrder> requestOrders; + private final String ordersMessage; + private final int totalOrderPrice; + + public RequestOrdersDto(List<RequestOrder> requestOrders, String ordersMessage, int totalOrderPrice) { + this.requestOrders = requestOrders; + this.ordersMessage = ordersMessage; + this.totalOrderPrice = totalOrderPrice; + } + + public List<RequestOrder> getRequestOrders() { + return Collections.unmodifiableList(requestOrders); + } + + public String getOrdersMessage() { + return ordersMessage; + } + + public int getTotalOrderPrice() { + return totalOrderPrice; + } +}
Java
DTO๊ฐ€ RequestOrder๋ผ๋Š” ๋ชจ๋ธ์„ ํ•„๋“œ๊ฐ’ ์ž์ฒด์— ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ๊ฐ–๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”! ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์„ค๊ณ„ํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,45 @@ +package christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.totaldiscount; + +import christmas.model.domain.date.Date; +import christmas.model.domain.event.benefit.DiscountBenefit; +import christmas.model.domain.event.discount.Discount; +import christmas.model.domain.event.discount.ChristmasDiscountStrategies; +import christmas.model.domain.order.RequestOrders; +import java.util.List; +import java.util.stream.Stream; + +public class ChristmasTotalDiscount implements TotalDiscount { + private final List<Discount> discounts; + + public ChristmasTotalDiscount() { + discounts = ChristmasDiscountStrategies.getAllDiscountStrategy(); + } + + public static ChristmasTotalDiscount makeZeroTotalDiscount() { + return new ChristmasTotalDiscount(); + } + + @Override + public void applyDiscount(RequestOrders requestOrders, Date date) { + discounts.forEach(discount -> discount.calculateDiscountAmount(requestOrders, date)); + } + + @Override + public int calculateDiscountBenefit() { + return discounts.stream() + .mapToInt(Discount::getDiscountAmount) + .sum(); + } + + @Override + public DiscountBenefit makeDiscountBenefit() { + return new DiscountBenefit(calculateDiscountBenefit(), makeDiscountBenefitMessageStream()); + } + + @Override + public Stream<String> makeDiscountBenefitMessageStream() { + return discounts.stream() + .filter(Discount::isNotZero) + .map(Discount::toString); + } +}
Java
์ „์ฒด์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ์†๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ํ™œ์šฉํ•ด, ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ ์˜ค๋ฒ„๋ผ์ด๋”ฉ๊นŒ์ง€ ์˜ˆ์˜๊ฒŒ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์‹  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ต‰์žฅํžˆ ์ธ์ƒ๊นŠ์—ˆ์–ด์š”! ์ €๋„ ์‘์ง‘๋„์™€ ๊ฒฐํ•ฉ๋„๋ฅผ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•˜๋ฉฐ, ์ƒ์† ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•ด ๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”! ์ž˜ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)
@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@ spring.application.name=delivery spring.jpa.hibernate.ddl-auto=update + spring.jpa.properties.hibernate.show_sql=true spring.jpa.properties.hibernate.format_sql=true spring.jpa.properties.hibernate.use_sql_comments=true
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์—ฌ๊ธฐ DB ๋ฏผ๊ฐ์ •๋ณด .env๋กœ ๋นผ์ฃผ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?? ๋””์Šค์ฝ”๋“œ์— ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•œ .env๋Š” ์˜ฌ๋ ค๋‘์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@ +export const THE_DATE = { + first: 1, + end: 31, + christmas: 25, +}; + +export const WEEK = { + sunday: 3, + monday: 4, + tuesday: 5, + wednesday: 6, + thursday: 0, + friday: 1, + saturday: 2, +}; + +export const MENU_NUMBER = { + minimum: 1, + maximum: 20, +}; + +export const ALL_MENU = [ + { name: "์–‘์†ก์ด์ˆ˜ํ”„", price: 6000 }, + { name: "ํƒ€ํŒŒ์Šค", price: 5500 }, + { name: "์‹œ์ €์ƒ๋Ÿฌ๋“œ", price: 8000 }, + + { name: "ํ‹ฐ๋ณธ์Šคํ…Œ์ดํฌ", price: 55000 }, + { name: "๋ฐ”๋น„ํ๋ฆฝ", price: 54000 }, + { name: "ํ•ด์‚ฐ๋ฌผํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", price: 35000 }, + { name: "ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์ŠคํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", price: 25000 }, + + { name: "์ดˆ์ฝ”์ผ€์ดํฌ", price: 15000 }, + { name: "์•„์ด์Šคํฌ๋ฆผ", price: 5000 }, + + { name: "์ œ๋กœ์ฝœ๋ผ", price: 3000 }, + { name: "๋ ˆ๋“œ์™€์ธ", price: 60000 }, + { name: "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ", price: 25000 }, +]; + +export const MAIN = ["ํ‹ฐ๋ณธ์Šคํ…Œ์ดํฌ", "๋ฐ”๋น„ํ๋ฆฝ", "ํ•ด์‚ฐ๋ฌผํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", "ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์ŠคํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€"]; + +export const DESSERT = ["์ดˆ์ฝ”์ผ€์ดํฌ", "์•„์ด์Šคํฌ๋ฆผ"]; + +export const BEVERAGE = ["์ œ๋กœ์ฝœ๋ผ", "๋ ˆ๋“œ์™€์ธ", "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ"]; + +export const LEAST_AMOUNT = 10000; + +export const CHAMPAGNE_PRICE = 25000; + +export const BADGE_PRICE = { star: 5000, tree: 10000, santa: 20000 };
JavaScript
์ƒ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋ถˆ๋ณ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฐ’์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด Object.freeze ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ๊ด€๋ฆฌํ•˜์…จ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์„๊นŒ์š”? ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹  ์ฝ”๋“œ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ƒ์ˆ˜์˜ ๊ฐ’์ด ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ๋  ์œ„ํ—˜์ด ์žˆ์–ด๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค !
@@ -0,0 +1,44 @@ +import MenuSlider from "../domain/MenuSlider.js"; +import MenuList from "../domain/MenuList.js"; +import Date from "../domain/Date.js"; +import OutputView from "../views/OutputView.js"; +import InputView from "../views/InputView.js"; + +class ChristmasPromotion { + #date; + #menuList; + + constructor() { + this.#date = 0; + this.#menuList = []; + } + async inputDate() { + while (true) { + try { + const inputDate = await InputView.readDate(); + return new Date(Number(inputDate)); + } catch (error) { + OutputView.printErrorMessage(error.message); + } + } + } + async inputMenus() { + while (true) { + try { + return new MenuList(await MenuSlider.getSlideMenu()); + } catch (error) { + OutputView.printErrorMessage(error.message); + } + } + } + + async play() { + OutputView.printHello(); + this.#date = await this.inputDate(); + this.#menuList = await this.inputMenus(); + OutputView.printPreviewText(this.#date); + OutputView.printAllBenefit(this.#date, this.#menuList); + } +} + +export default ChristmasPromotion;
JavaScript
ํ˜น์‹œ ์ƒ์„ฑ์ž์—์„œ ๊ฐ’์„ ๋”ฐ๋กœ ์ดˆ๊ธฐํ™” ํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋Š” ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”? ์ƒ์„ฑ์ž์—์„œ ๊ฐ’์„ ์ดˆ๊ธฐํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๊ฐ ์ธ์Šคํ„ด์Šค๊ฐ€ ์ƒ์„ฑ๋˜๋Š” ์‹œ์ ์— ์–ด๋– ํ•œ ๊ฐ’์„ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ๊ฐ’์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์•„ํ•  ๋•Œ์—๋งŒ ์ƒ์„ฑ์ž์—์„œ ๊ฐ’์„ ํ• ๋‹นํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜์‹  ์ฝ”๋“œ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ํด๋ž˜์Šค ํ•„๋“œ์— ์„ ์–ธํ•˜์‹ค ๋•Œ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ๊ฐ’์„ ์ง€์ •ํ•ด์ฃผ์…”๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,44 @@ +import MenuSlider from "../domain/MenuSlider.js"; +import MenuList from "../domain/MenuList.js"; +import Date from "../domain/Date.js"; +import OutputView from "../views/OutputView.js"; +import InputView from "../views/InputView.js"; + +class ChristmasPromotion { + #date; + #menuList; + + constructor() { + this.#date = 0; + this.#menuList = []; + } + async inputDate() { + while (true) { + try { + const inputDate = await InputView.readDate(); + return new Date(Number(inputDate)); + } catch (error) { + OutputView.printErrorMessage(error.message); + } + } + } + async inputMenus() { + while (true) { + try { + return new MenuList(await MenuSlider.getSlideMenu()); + } catch (error) { + OutputView.printErrorMessage(error.message); + } + } + } + + async play() { + OutputView.printHello(); + this.#date = await this.inputDate(); + this.#menuList = await this.inputMenus(); + OutputView.printPreviewText(this.#date); + OutputView.printAllBenefit(this.#date, this.#menuList); + } +} + +export default ChristmasPromotion;
JavaScript
while๋ฌธ์˜ ์ข…๋ฃŒ ์กฐ๊ฑด์ด ๋”ฐ๋กœ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„ ์งˆ๋ฌธ ๋‚จ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์˜ฌ๋ฐ”๋ฅธ ๊ฐ’์ด ์ž…๋ ฅ๋˜์—ˆ์„ ๋•Œ์—๋Š” while๋ฌธ์ด ์ข…๋ฃŒ๋˜๋Š”๊ฑด๊ฐ€์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,44 @@ +import MenuSlider from "../domain/MenuSlider.js"; +import MenuList from "../domain/MenuList.js"; +import Date from "../domain/Date.js"; +import OutputView from "../views/OutputView.js"; +import InputView from "../views/InputView.js"; + +class ChristmasPromotion { + #date; + #menuList; + + constructor() { + this.#date = 0; + this.#menuList = []; + } + async inputDate() { + while (true) { + try { + const inputDate = await InputView.readDate(); + return new Date(Number(inputDate)); + } catch (error) { + OutputView.printErrorMessage(error.message); + } + } + } + async inputMenus() { + while (true) { + try { + return new MenuList(await MenuSlider.getSlideMenu()); + } catch (error) { + OutputView.printErrorMessage(error.message); + } + } + } + + async play() { + OutputView.printHello(); + this.#date = await this.inputDate(); + this.#menuList = await this.inputMenus(); + OutputView.printPreviewText(this.#date); + OutputView.printAllBenefit(this.#date, this.#menuList); + } +} + +export default ChristmasPromotion;
JavaScript
play ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ์—์„œ 12์›” ํ• ์ธ ์ด๋ฒคํŠธ์˜ ํ”„๋กœ๊ทธ๋žจ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์„œ ์ข‹์€ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๐Ÿ‘
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import Discount from "./Discount.js"; +import { BADGE_PRICE, LEAST_AMOUNT } from "../constants/constant.js"; + +class Benefit { + static getGiftMenu(menuList) { + return menuList.getTotalAmount() >= 120000 ? "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ 1๊ฐœ" : "์—†์Œ"; + } + + static getBenefitsDetail(date, menuList) { + if (menuList.getTotalAmount() < LEAST_AMOUNT) return ["์—†์Œ"]; + const benefitsDetail = []; + Discount.addChristmasDiscount(benefitsDetail, date); + Discount.addWeekendDiscount(benefitsDetail, date, menuList); + Discount.addWeekdayDiscount(benefitsDetail, date, menuList); + Discount.addSpecialDiscount(benefitsDetail, date); + Discount.addEventGift(benefitsDetail, menuList); + + return benefitsDetail.length === 0 ? ["์—†์Œ"] : benefitsDetail; + } + + static getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList) { + if (menuList.getTotalAmount() < LEAST_AMOUNT) return 0; + let totalBenefitAmount = 0; + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getChristmasDiscountAmount(date); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getWeekendDiscountAmount(date, menuList); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getWeekdayDiscountAmount(date, menuList); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getSpecialDiscountAmount(date); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getEventGiftAmount(menuList); + + return totalBenefitAmount; + } + + static getPredictAmount(date, menuList) { + return this.getGiftMenu(menuList) === "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ 1๊ฐœ" + ? menuList.getTotalAmount() - this.getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList) + 25000 + : menuList.getTotalAmount() - this.getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList); + } + + static getEventBadge(date, menuList) { + const totalBenefitAmount = this.getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList); + if (totalBenefitAmount < BADGE_PRICE.star) return "์—†์Œ"; + if (totalBenefitAmount >= BADGE_PRICE.star && totalBenefitAmount < BADGE_PRICE.tree) return "๋ณ„"; + if (totalBenefitAmount >= BADGE_PRICE.tree && totalBenefitAmount < BADGE_PRICE.santa) return "ํŠธ๋ฆฌ"; + if (totalBenefitAmount >= BADGE_PRICE.santa) return "์‚ฐํƒ€"; + } +} +export default Benefit;
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๊ฐ์ฒด๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ฒฐํ•ฉ๋„๊ฐ€ ๋†’์€ ํ˜•ํƒœ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ! ํ˜œํƒ์ƒ์„ธ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฐฐ์—ด ์ž์ฒด๋ฅผ ์ธ์ž๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ฐฐ์—ด์—์„œ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„์„œ ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ์˜ ์ธ์ž๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๋” ์ข‹์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์„๊นŒ ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :) ๋˜ ์ฝ”๋“œ์—์„œ ๋ณด์•˜์„ ๋•Œ ์ธ์ž๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌ๋˜๋Š” ๋‚ ์งœ(date)๋งˆ๋‹ค ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํ˜œํƒ์ด ์ ์šฉ๋˜๋Š” ํ˜•ํƒœ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์— ํด๋ž˜์Šค์˜ ์ •์  ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๋กœ ์„ ์–ธํ•ด์„œ ์ธ์ž๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌ๋ฐ›์•„์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ์ธ์Šคํ„ด์Šค๋ฅผ ์ƒ์„ฑํ•˜๋Š” ์‹œ์ ์— ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ๊ฐ’์œผ๋กœ ์„ค์ •๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ์ƒ์„ฑ์ž์— date๋ฅผ ์ „๋‹ฌ๋ฐ›์•„ ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์ฝ”๋“œ๋ฅผ ์ž‘์„ฑํ–ˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import Discount from "./Discount.js"; +import { BADGE_PRICE, LEAST_AMOUNT } from "../constants/constant.js"; + +class Benefit { + static getGiftMenu(menuList) { + return menuList.getTotalAmount() >= 120000 ? "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ 1๊ฐœ" : "์—†์Œ"; + } + + static getBenefitsDetail(date, menuList) { + if (menuList.getTotalAmount() < LEAST_AMOUNT) return ["์—†์Œ"]; + const benefitsDetail = []; + Discount.addChristmasDiscount(benefitsDetail, date); + Discount.addWeekendDiscount(benefitsDetail, date, menuList); + Discount.addWeekdayDiscount(benefitsDetail, date, menuList); + Discount.addSpecialDiscount(benefitsDetail, date); + Discount.addEventGift(benefitsDetail, menuList); + + return benefitsDetail.length === 0 ? ["์—†์Œ"] : benefitsDetail; + } + + static getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList) { + if (menuList.getTotalAmount() < LEAST_AMOUNT) return 0; + let totalBenefitAmount = 0; + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getChristmasDiscountAmount(date); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getWeekendDiscountAmount(date, menuList); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getWeekdayDiscountAmount(date, menuList); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getSpecialDiscountAmount(date); + totalBenefitAmount += Discount.getEventGiftAmount(menuList); + + return totalBenefitAmount; + } + + static getPredictAmount(date, menuList) { + return this.getGiftMenu(menuList) === "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ 1๊ฐœ" + ? menuList.getTotalAmount() - this.getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList) + 25000 + : menuList.getTotalAmount() - this.getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList); + } + + static getEventBadge(date, menuList) { + const totalBenefitAmount = this.getTotalBenefitAmount(date, menuList); + if (totalBenefitAmount < BADGE_PRICE.star) return "์—†์Œ"; + if (totalBenefitAmount >= BADGE_PRICE.star && totalBenefitAmount < BADGE_PRICE.tree) return "๋ณ„"; + if (totalBenefitAmount >= BADGE_PRICE.tree && totalBenefitAmount < BADGE_PRICE.santa) return "ํŠธ๋ฆฌ"; + if (totalBenefitAmount >= BADGE_PRICE.santa) return "์‚ฐํƒ€"; + } +} +export default Benefit;
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ํด๋ž˜์Šค์˜ ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๋“ค์„ ์ •์  ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๋กœ ์„ ์–ธํ•ด์ฃผ์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,34 @@ +import { ERROR_MESSAGE } from "../constants/message.js"; +import { THE_DATE, WEEK } from "../constants/constant.js"; + +class Date { + #theDate; + + constructor(input) { + this.validDate(input); + this.#theDate = input; + } + validDate(input) { + const isNumber = /^[1-9]\d*$/; + if (!(isNumber.test(input) && input >= THE_DATE.first && input <= THE_DATE.end)) { + throw new Error(ERROR_MESSAGE.errorDate); + } + } + + getDate() { + return this.#theDate; + } + + getChristmasDiscount() { + return this.#theDate <= THE_DATE.christmas ? (this.#theDate - 1) * 100 + 1000 : 0; + } + + getSpecialDiscount() { + return this.#theDate % 7 === WEEK.sunday || this.#theDate === THE_DATE.christmas ? 1000 : 0; + } + + getDayOfWeek() { + return this.#theDate % 7; + } +} +export default Date;
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๊ฐ’์„ ๊ฒ€์ฆํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฉ”์„œ๋“œ์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” '#' prefix๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด private method๋กœ ์„ ์–ธํ•ด ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ์ฒด์˜ ์บก์Аํ™”์— ๋„์›€์ด ๋  ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)
@@ -0,0 +1,55 @@ +import { WEEK, CHAMPAGNE_PRICE } from "../constants/constant.js"; + +class Discount { + static addChristmasDiscount(benefitsDetail, date) { + if (date.getChristmasDiscount() !== 0) { + benefitsDetail.push(`ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์Šค ๋””๋ฐ์ด ํ• ์ธ: -${date.getChristmasDiscount().toLocaleString("ko-KR")}์›`); + } + } + + static addWeekendDiscount(benefitsDetail, date, menuList) { + if ((date.getDayOfWeek() === WEEK.friday || date.getDayOfWeek() === WEEK.saturday) && menuList.checkMainNumber() > 0) { + benefitsDetail.push(`์ฃผ๋ง ํ• ์ธ: -${(menuList.checkMainNumber() * 2023).toLocaleString("ko-KR")}์›`); + } + } + + static addWeekdayDiscount(benefitsDetail, date, menuList) { + if ((date.getDayOfWeek() >= WEEK.sunday || date.getDayOfWeek() === WEEK.thursday) && menuList.checkDessertNumber() > 0) { + benefitsDetail.push(`ํ‰์ผ ํ• ์ธ: -${(menuList.checkDessertNumber() * 2023).toLocaleString("ko-KR")}์›`); + } + } + + static addSpecialDiscount(benefitsDetail, date) { + if (date.getSpecialDiscount() === 1000) { + benefitsDetail.push(`ํŠน๋ณ„ ํ• ์ธ: -${date.getSpecialDiscount().toLocaleString("ko-KR")}์›`); + } + } + + static addEventGift(benefitsDetail, menuList) { + if (menuList.getTotalAmount() >= 120000) { + benefitsDetail.push(`์ฆ์ • ์ด๋ฒคํŠธ: -${CHAMPAGNE_PRICE.toLocaleString("ko-KR")}์›`); + } + } + + static getChristmasDiscountAmount(date) { + return date.getChristmasDiscount(); + } + + static getWeekendDiscountAmount(date, menuList) { + return date.getDayOfWeek() === WEEK.friday || date.getDayOfWeek() === WEEK.saturday ? menuList.checkMainNumber() * 2023 : 0; + } + + static getWeekdayDiscountAmount(date, menuList) { + return date.getDayOfWeek() >= WEEK.sunday || date.getDayOfWeek() === WEEK.thursday ? menuList.checkDessertNumber() * 2023 : 0; + } + + static getSpecialDiscountAmount(date) { + return date.getSpecialDiscount(); + } + + static getEventGiftAmount(menuList) { + return menuList.getTotalAmount() >= 120000 ? CHAMPAGNE_PRICE : 0; + } +} + +export default Discount;
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Discount ํด๋ž˜์Šค๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๊ฐœ์˜ ์ฑ…์ž„์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์œผ๋กœ Discount ํด๋ž˜์Šค๋Š” ํ• ์ธ ๊ธˆ์•ก๋งŒ์„ ๊ณ„์‚ฐํ•˜๊ณ  OutputView์—์„œ ๋ฌธ์ž์—ด๋กœ ํ• ์ธ ํ˜œํƒ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ๋‹ด์•„์„œ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ์–ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ด ํด๋ž˜์Šค์—์„œ ํ• ์ธ ํ˜œํƒ ์ •๋ณด ์ž์ฒด๋ฅผ ๋ฐ˜ํ™˜ํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์œผ์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”??
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import { MENU_NUMBER, ALL_MENU } from "../constants/constant.js"; +import { ERROR_MESSAGE } from "../constants/message.js"; + +class Menu { + #name; + #number; + #price; + + constructor(name, number) { + this.validMenuName(name); + this.validMenuNumber(number); + this.#name = name; + this.#number = number; + this.#price = this.setPrice(name); + } + validMenuName(name) { + const menuNames = ALL_MENU.map((menu) => menu.name); + if (!menuNames.includes(name)) { + throw new Error(ERROR_MESSAGE.errorMenu); + } + } + + validMenuNumber(number) { + const isNumber = /^[1-9]\d*$/; + if (!(isNumber.test(number) && number >= MENU_NUMBER.minimum)) { + throw new Error(ERROR_MESSAGE.errorMenu); + } + } + + setPrice(name) { + const foundMenu = ALL_MENU.find((menu) => menu.name === name); + return foundMenu.price; + } + + getName() { + return this.#name; + } + + getNumber() { + return this.#number; + } + + getPrice() { + return this.#price; + } +} +export default Menu;
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๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ์—์„œ map ๋ฉ”์„œ๋“œ์™€ include ๋ฉ”์„œ๋“œ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ „๋‹ฌ๋ฐ›์€ ๋ฉ”๋‰ด๊ฐ€ ์กด์žฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฉ”๋‰ด์ธ์ง€ ํ™•์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ! ์ด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” some ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๋ฅผ ํ™œ์šฉํ•ด์„œ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ```js if (!ALL_MENU.some((menu) => menu.name === name)) { throw new Error(ERROR_MESSAGE.errorMenu); } ```
@@ -0,0 +1,27 @@ +import InputView from "../views/InputView.js"; +import Menu from "./Menu.js"; +import { ERROR_MESSAGE } from "../constants/message.js"; + +class MenuSlider { + static async getSlideMenu() { + const menus = await InputView.readMenu(); + const splitMenus = menus.split(","); + const menuList = []; + + splitMenus.forEach((menu) => { + this.checkMenuFormat(menu); + let [name, number] = menu.split("-"); + menuList.push(new Menu(name.trim(), Number(number))); + }); + + return menuList; + } + + static checkMenuFormat(menu) { + let [name, number] = menu.split("-"); + if (!(name && number)) { + throw new Error(`${ERROR_MESSAGE.errorMenu}`); + } + } +} +export default MenuSlider;
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๋ฉ”๋‰ด ํ˜•์‹ ๊ฒ€์‚ฌํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฉ”์†Œ๋“œ๊ฐ€ ์ง๊ด€์ ์–ด์„œ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ํŽธํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค๐Ÿ‘
@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@ +export const THE_DATE = { + first: 1, + end: 31, + christmas: 25, +}; + +export const WEEK = { + sunday: 3, + monday: 4, + tuesday: 5, + wednesday: 6, + thursday: 0, + friday: 1, + saturday: 2, +}; + +export const MENU_NUMBER = { + minimum: 1, + maximum: 20, +}; + +export const ALL_MENU = [ + { name: "์–‘์†ก์ด์ˆ˜ํ”„", price: 6000 }, + { name: "ํƒ€ํŒŒ์Šค", price: 5500 }, + { name: "์‹œ์ €์ƒ๋Ÿฌ๋“œ", price: 8000 }, + + { name: "ํ‹ฐ๋ณธ์Šคํ…Œ์ดํฌ", price: 55000 }, + { name: "๋ฐ”๋น„ํ๋ฆฝ", price: 54000 }, + { name: "ํ•ด์‚ฐ๋ฌผํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", price: 35000 }, + { name: "ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์ŠคํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", price: 25000 }, + + { name: "์ดˆ์ฝ”์ผ€์ดํฌ", price: 15000 }, + { name: "์•„์ด์Šคํฌ๋ฆผ", price: 5000 }, + + { name: "์ œ๋กœ์ฝœ๋ผ", price: 3000 }, + { name: "๋ ˆ๋“œ์™€์ธ", price: 60000 }, + { name: "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ", price: 25000 }, +]; + +export const MAIN = ["ํ‹ฐ๋ณธ์Šคํ…Œ์ดํฌ", "๋ฐ”๋น„ํ๋ฆฝ", "ํ•ด์‚ฐ๋ฌผํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€", "ํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์ŠคํŒŒ์Šคํƒ€"]; + +export const DESSERT = ["์ดˆ์ฝ”์ผ€์ดํฌ", "์•„์ด์Šคํฌ๋ฆผ"]; + +export const BEVERAGE = ["์ œ๋กœ์ฝœ๋ผ", "๋ ˆ๋“œ์™€์ธ", "์ƒดํŽ˜์ธ"]; + +export const LEAST_AMOUNT = 10000; + +export const CHAMPAGNE_PRICE = 25000; + +export const BADGE_PRICE = { star: 5000, tree: 10000, santa: 20000 };
JavaScript
๊ณผ์ œ๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ object.freeze๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ง€ ๋ง์ง€ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์„ ํ•ด๋ดค๋Š”๋ฐ ์—ญ์‹œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์ข‹์•˜์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š”! ๋‹ค์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ๋Š” ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ ๊ด€๋ฆฌํ•ด ๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ์–ด์š”! ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์–ด๋–ค ์‹œ๋‚˜๋ฆฌ์˜ค๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์ด ์ž‘๋™ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋Š”์ง€ ๋จผ์ € ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€๋„ ์ฐพ์•„๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ์—ฌ์ญค๋ณด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๊ตฌ๊ธ€๋ง์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์š”์ฆ˜์—๋Š” ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ณ ๋‚˜์„œ ํ•ด๋‹น ์ฝ”๋“œ์˜ ํผํฌ๋จผ์Šค๋„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ์ €๋„ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ž˜ ๋ชฐ๋ผ์„œ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ž˜ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์œผ๋ฉด ์ฐพ์•„๋ณด๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์—ฌ์ญค๋ณด๋ฉด์„œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”..
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ €๋„ ํผํฌ๋จผ์Šค ์ ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋น„ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋กœ ๊ตฌ์„ฑ๋œ ํŒ€๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ฌด๊ณ„ํš์†์— ์ž„ํ•œ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚ฎ์•˜๋‹ค๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์˜์™ธ์˜€์–ด์š”
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์Œ.. ๋ณตํ•ฉ์ ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋Œ€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์œผ๋กœ์„œ์˜ ํ˜ธ๊ฐ๋„์ž‘(?)๊ณผ ์—…๋ฌด์ ์ธ ์ ‘์ , ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํผํฌ๋จผ์Šค๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ๋‚˜์™€์•ผ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•  ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ์šฐ์„  ํ˜ธ๊ฐ๋„์ž‘์ด ์ข€ ์ง„ํ–‰๋˜๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด๋‚˜ ํž˜๋“  ๋ถ€๋ถ„๋“ค์„ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ๋„ ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ๋˜ ํŒ์„ ์ฃผ๋Š” ๊ณผ์ •์—์„œ๋„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ €๋„ ์ž˜ ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”!!
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ €๋„ ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€ ๋ง์„ ํ•  ๋•Œ '์•„ ์ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ•ด๋„ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฑด๊ฐ€, ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ๋งž๋‚˜?' ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ์ €๋„ ์ € ๋”ฐ์œ„๊ฐ€ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ๋ ๊นŒ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์„ ๋งŽ์ด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์™„์ „ 0๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” ๊ธฐํš์„œ ์ „์ฒด ๋‚ด์šฉ์‘ ๋ณด๋ฉด์„œ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๋ฆฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ํ•„์š” ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๋ฆฌ์ŠคํŠธ๋“ค์„ ๊ธฐ์ค€์œผ๋กœ ์ „์ฒด ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฏธ ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์ง„ํ–‰ ๋œ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ์—์„œ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ๋Š” ํ•ด๋‹น ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ์„ ํ• ์ง€, ์–ด๋–ค ๋กœ์ง์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ์ง€ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๋ถ™์—ฌ๋ณด๋Š” ๋ฐฉ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ์ฒ ์ง์ธ๋ฐ์š”, ๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์ฝ”๋”ฉ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์œผ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋นˆ ์ข…์ด๋ฅผ ํ•œ์žฅ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์™€์„œ ๋จผ์ € ์š”๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•ญ์ด ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ์ง€๋ฅผ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์žฌ์ •์˜ ํ•ด๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ธฐํš์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ ๋‹จ์ˆœ ๋‚˜์—ด์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•  ๋•Œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋˜๋Š” ํ”„๋กœ์„ธ์Šค๋กœ ์š”๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•ญ์„ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•  ๋•Œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์š”๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•ญ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์ •๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋๋‚˜๋ฉด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ํด๋ž˜์Šค๋ฅผ ์ •์˜ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋•Œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฑธ ๋‹ค ์™„๋ฒฝํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋‹น์—ฐ ๋ถˆ๊ฐ€๋Šฅ์— ๊ฐ€๊น๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ผญ ํ•„์š”ํ•  ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์€ ํด๋ž˜์Šค ์†์„ฑ๊ณผ ๋ฉ”์„œ๋“œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ๋งŒ ์ •์˜๋ฅผ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„˜์–ด๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์š”๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์š”๊ตฌ์‚ฌํ•ญ ๋ถ„์„๊ณผ ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„ ๊ณผ์ •์„ ๋๋‚ธ ๋‹ค์Œ์— ๋ณธ๊ฒฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์„ ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ๋„˜์–ด๊ฐ€์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค๋ณด๋ฉด ๋‹น๊ทผ ๋‹น์ดˆ ์„ค๊ณ„์™€๋Š” ํ‹€์–ด์ง€๋Š” ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด๋Ÿด ๋•Œ๋Š” ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ธฐ์กด ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ตฌํ˜„๋ถ€์— ์ง‘์ค‘์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค๋งŒ ๊ตฌํ˜„๋ถ€์—์„œ ์ˆ˜์ •๋œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฌธ์„œ์—๋„ ๋ฐ˜์˜๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋˜๋„๋ก ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”!
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ผ๋‹จ ์—…๊ณ„์˜ "ํƒ‘๊ธ‰" ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋А๋‚Œ๊นŒ์ง„ ์•„๋‹ˆ์–ด๋„ ์–ด๋А ์ •๋„ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ณ  ์ธ์ •์„ ๋ฐ›๋Š” ํ–‰์œ„๊ฐ€ ํŒ€์›๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ์„ ์Œ“๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌผ๋ก  ์ ๋‹นํ•œ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ ์Šคํ‚ฌ๋„ ์žฅ์ฐฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๋งค์šฐ ์ข‹๊ณ ์š”, ํŒ€์›๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ์„ ์Œ“๊ณ  ์ฑ…์ž„๊ฐ ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ฃผ๋ฉด ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์ค€๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ €๋Š” ์ด ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋ฉด์„œ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ ์ง‘๋‹จ์˜ ์†์„ฑ(?)์„ ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ๊นจ๋‹ฌ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋˜์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์ •๋ง ์ž˜์งœ์—ฌ์ง„ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•ด ๋ณด์—ฌ์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ๊ธฐํš์„œ ์—†์ด ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•˜๋ผ๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ ๋А๋ผ๋Š” ์ ˆ๋ง๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์ผ๋‹จ ๋ณธ์ธ ์Šค์Šค๋กœ๊ฐ€ ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•ˆ์ •์ ์ธ ๊ฒŒ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ๋‚˜ ์ž์‹ ์ด ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ถˆ์•ˆ์ •ํ•˜๋ฉด ์‹ ๊ธฐํ•œ ํ˜„์ƒ์ด ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚˜๋Š”๋ฐ ๋‚ด ์ฃผ๋ณ€์— ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์˜ ์‚ฌ์†Œํ•œ ํ–‰๋™ ํ•˜๋‚˜์— ์‹ ๊ฒฝ์„ ์“ฐ๊ฒŒ ๋˜๊ณ  ๊ดœํžˆ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์ด ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ถˆ์•ˆํ•ด ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ๋“ฏํ•œ ์ฐฉ๊ฐ(?)์— ๋น ์ง€๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ์ข…์ข… ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค(์ •์ž‘ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์€ ๋ณ„ ๋ฌธ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์—†์Œ์—๋„ ๋ถˆ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ตฌ์š”). ๋”๋ถˆ์–ด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•ˆ์ •์ด ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ฃผ๋ณ€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ์˜ํ–ฅ์ด ๊ฐ„๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด์š”. ์Šค์Šค๋กœ๊ฐ€ ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•ˆ์ •๋˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ์—ด๋ ค๊ฐ€์ง€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ฒ ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์€ ์ž์กด๊ฐ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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@@ -0,0 +1,113 @@ +[ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์ž๋ผ๊ธฐ ์• ์ž์ผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ธธ] + +2. ํ•จ๊ป˜ + +2-6) ํ•˜ํ–ฅ์‹ ์ ‘๊ทผ์˜ ํ•จ์ • + +"๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์ด ๋งŒ๋“  ์• ์ดˆ์— ์„ธ์šด ๊ณ„ํš์— ์ง‘์ฐฉํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ํšŸ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์ €๋„ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ, ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ „๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ธ์„ธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์งœ๊ณ  ๊ณ„ํšํ•œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์งœ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ๋ง‰์ƒ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ฉด ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•  ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ๋ณด์ด๋”๊ตฐ์š” + +์ฒ˜์Œ ์งฐ๋˜ ๊ณ„ํš์—์„œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ˆ˜์ •๋ ์ˆ˜๋ก '๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ๋” ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์–ด์•ผํ–ˆ๋‚˜? ์•„์ง ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜๊ตฌ๋‚˜' ํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„์‰ฝ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋งŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ + +์ˆ˜์ •ํ•œ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์ด์ „ ๊ณ„ํš๋ณด๋‹ค ๋‚˜์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๊ณผ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์ •ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒ ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ค์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q1) ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋“ค์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ธฐํš์„œ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์‹์œผ๋กœ ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ ๊ตฌํ˜„์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ์„ค๊ณ„๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ• ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๊ณต์œ  ๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ ค์š”! + + + +2-7) ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€ํŒ€์ด ์‹คํŒจํ•˜๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +'ํ•จ๊ป˜' ๋ผ๋Š” ์†Œ์ œ๋ชฉ์— ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ํŒŒํŠธ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ํ™”์ž๋Š” ํ˜‘๋ ฅ ์—†์ด ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์œผ๋กœ๋งŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋ถ€์ง„ํ•œ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์—๋„ ์ •๋ณด์˜ ๊ณต์œ , ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์˜ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋” ๋‚˜์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ์—…๋ฌด์  ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ข‹๊ณ  ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด.. ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ผ์„ ํ•ด๋„ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์ž˜๋‚ผ ๊ฒƒ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋‹ค๋“ค ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ์–˜๊ธฐ์ด์ง€๋งŒ.. ๊ทธ ๋งŒํผ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ธธ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ๋˜๋„ค์š” + +ํ˜‘์—… ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์˜ ์ฐจ์ด๋กœ ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์ด ๋น„์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ๋ฐ€๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ ์ž–์ด ๋†€๋ผ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +2-8) ๊ตฌ๊ธ€์ด ๋ฐํžŒ ํƒ์›”ํ•œ ํŒ€์˜ ๋น„๋ฐ€ + +"๋‚ด ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜๊ฒฌ, ์งˆ๋ฌธ, ๊ฑฑ์ •, ํ˜น์€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ๋“œ๋Ÿฌ๋‚ฌ์„ ๋•Œ ์ฒ˜๋ฒŒ๋ฐ›๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ฆผ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฏฟ์Œ" + +์ด ํŒŒํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ์ค‘๊ฐ„์ค‘๊ฐ„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ–ˆ๋˜ '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€'์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์–ด๋А์ •๋„ ์žกํ˜€๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ฑ…์˜ ์•ž๋ถ€๋ถ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–˜๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” '์ข‹์€ ํŒ€' ์ด๋ž€ ๊ฑด ๊ฐ์ž ๊ฐœ์ธ์ด ์ง€๋‹Œ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์™ธ์— ์„œ๋กœ์˜ ํ˜‘์—…์„ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๋” ๋‚˜์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋‚ด๋Š” ํŒ€ ์ด์—ˆ๊ณ , + +๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ํŒ€์ด ๋˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ์ตœ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ ์—†์ด ๊ณต์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด์˜ค๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ' ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ํŒ€ ๋‚ด์— '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'์ด ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ๊ฐœ์ธ์˜ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊ฐ€๊ฐ์—†์ด ๋ฐํž ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ  ์ด๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ข‹์€ ํ˜‘์—…, ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ ๊ณต์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด ์ข‹์€ ํŒ€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +Q2) ํŒ€์›์ด ๋‚˜๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์†ํ•œ ํŒ€์— ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ์„ ์–ป๋„๋ก ๋„์™€์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”..? + + + +2-9) ์พŒ์† ํ•™์ŠตํŒ€ + +"ํŒจ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ค์ž„ ์ „ํ™˜, ์ฃฝ๋А๋ƒ ์‚ฌ๋А๋ƒ" + +์›ƒํ”„๊ฒŒ๋„.. ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ˜„์žฌ ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ตœ๊ทผ ์‚ฌ๋‚ด ํšŒ์˜์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์Šคํƒ์„ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–˜๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ์ฐธ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด.. ์ œ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ธ 'ํ˜„์‹ค์—์„œ ์‹ค์ฒœํ•˜๊ธฐ'์— ๋‚˜์™€์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์šฐ์„  ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ํ•™์Šต ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ + +๋“ ๋“ ํ•œ ํ•™์Šต ๋™๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ด์•ผ๊ฒ ๋„ค์š”.. ์ž˜๋ถ€ํƒ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.. :) + + + +2-10) ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ ํ™•๋ฅ ๋ก  + +๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ •๋ง ์ง๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ '์—์ด 7๋ฒˆ์ด๋ฉด ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์€ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ฒ ์ง€' ์‹ถ์–ด์„œ 1-1๊ณผ 2-2๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ž๋Š”๋ฐ ๊ธฐ๋ถ„ ์ข‹๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ™•๋ฅ  ์ƒ ๋‘˜ ๋‹ค ์œ ๋ฆฌํ•œ ๊ณณ์„ ๊ณจ๋ž๋„ค์š” + +์‚ฌ์‹ค ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚ด๊ธฐ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฑธ ํ•  ๋•Œ "์–ด์ฐจํ”ผ ๋‹น์ฒจ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ๋‚™์ฒจ ๋ฐ˜๋ฐ˜์ด๋‹ค" ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋ฉฐ ํ™•๋ฅ ์„ ์ž˜ ์•ˆ๋ฏฟ๋Š” ํŽธ์ด๊ธด ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค..ใ…Žใ…Žใ…Ž + + + +3. ์• ์ž์ผ + +3-1) ์• ์ž์ผ์˜ ์”จ์•— + +"์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์˜ ๋น„์šฉ์ด ๋‚ฎ์•„์ง€๊ณ  ์›ํ™œํ•ด์ง„๋‹ค๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค." + +์œผ์Œ.. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ์‹ ๋ขฐ๊ฐ€ ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ '์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋А๋‚Œ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ  ์‹ ๋ขฐ(์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์  ์•ˆ์ „๊ฐ)๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•˜์—ฌ ๊ณ ๊ฐ(์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ)์—๊ฒŒ ์ˆ˜์›”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์„ ์–ป์–ด๋‚ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋А๊ผˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-2) ์• ์ž์ผ ๋„์ž… ์„ฑ๊ณต ์š”์ธ ๋ถ„์„ + +"๋‘๋ ค์›Œ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋ฉด ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ด์•ผ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒ ๋Š”๊ฐ€." + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๋ ค๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ๋Š” ์ข€ ๋ฒ—์–ด๋‚œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์ผ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฒˆ ํŒŒํŠธ์—์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ธ์ƒ ๊นŠ๊ณ  ์ œ๊ฒŒ๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ํ˜‘๋ ฅ์ด๋‚˜ ๋„์›€์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ฌด์ง€, ์‹ค์ˆ˜์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋„๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด๋‚˜ ์ผ๊ฐœ ํŒ€์›์ด๋ผ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์˜์‚ฌํ‘œ์ถœ์„ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žฆ์•˜๋˜ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + +์ง€๊ธˆ ๋‹น์žฅ์— ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋จผ์ € ์‹œ๋„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฑด ์Šค์Šค๋กœ '์‹ค์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ์ธ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ'์ด๊ณ , ์ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด์„œ ๋งค์ผ๋งค์ผ ์•„์ฃผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์„ฑ์žฅ์„ ๊ฒฝํ—˜ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-3) ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์กฐ์ง์— ์ƒˆ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•๋ก ์ด ๋จนํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” ์ด์œ  + +"์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์•Œ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค" + +ํ™”์ž๊ฐ€ ์ด์ „์— ์–˜๊ธฐํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ฃผ์ œ ์ค‘ '๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜'์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ž์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ง€์‹์€ ๋งŽ์ด ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ, + +์ง€์‹์€ ์ „์ž์— ๋น„ํ•ด ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์•Œ๋ ค์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ค‘์— ์ฑ…์— ๋‚˜์˜จ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ •์‹ ๊ณผ ์˜์‚ฌ๋กœ ๋น„์œ ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด ์˜ํ•™ ์ง€์‹๋งŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ๋ณด๋‹ค ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒ˜๋ฐฉ์„ ํ•ด์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด + +์ข‹์€ ์˜์‚ฌ(๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚œ ์„ ์ƒ๋‹˜) ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ผ์ข…์˜ ์†Œํ”„ํŠธ์Šคํ‚ฌ์ด์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋“ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. + + + +3-4) ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + +๋ฌด์ž‘์ • ์• ์ž์ผ์„ ๊ถŒํ•˜๊ณ  ๋„์ž…ํ•˜๋ ค ํ•˜๋Š” ํ–‰๋™์€ ์ฑ… ์•„์ฃผ ๋„์ž…๋ถ€์— ๋‚˜์™”๋˜ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€์˜ ๊ธฐ์ค€์„ ๋“ค์ด๋ฐ€๋ฉฐ "์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ์šฐ์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด๋‹ค!" ๋ผ๊ณ  ์ฃผ์žฅํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š” + +์• ์ž์ผ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ์ •๋„๋กœ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ๋ณธ์ธ์ด ์†ํ•ด์žˆ๋Š” ํŒ€์—์„œ ์ตœ๊ณ ์˜ ํšจ์œจ์„ ๋‚ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์•ผ๋ง๋กœ ํ•ด๋‹น ํŒ€์—์„œ์˜ '์• ์ž์ผ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. \ No newline at end of file
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์• ์ž์ผ์„ ์• ์ž์ผ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๊นจ๋‹ซ๊ณ  ๋ฐฐ์šด ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค๐Ÿ‘
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ /> <Box sx={bookReviewTabStyles.sectionHeader}> <Typography variant="h6" fontWeight="bold"> - ํ•œ์ค„ํ‰ ({bookPostCount?.review_count}) + ํ•œ์ค„ํ‰ ({bookPostCount?.review_count || 0}) </Typography> <Button size="small" @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ ๋”๋ณด๊ธฐ </Button> </Box> - {latestReviews ? ( + {Array.isArray(latestReviews) && latestReviews.length > 0 ? ( <Grid container spacing={2}> {latestReviews.map((review, index) => ( <Grid @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ <Box> <Box sx={bookReviewTabStyles.sectionHeader}> <Typography variant="h6" fontWeight="bold"> - ํฌ์ŠคํŒ… ({bookPostCount?.posting_count}) + ํฌ์ŠคํŒ… ({bookPostCount?.posting_count || 0}) </Typography> <Button size="small" @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ ๋”๋ณด๊ธฐ </Button> </Box> - {latestPostings ? ( + {Array.isArray(latestPostings) && latestPostings.length > 0 ? ( <Grid container spacing={2}> {latestPostings.map((posting, index) => ( <Grid
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์ด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ์ง€์›Œ์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ์ข‹์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ /> <Box sx={bookReviewTabStyles.sectionHeader}> <Typography variant="h6" fontWeight="bold"> - ํ•œ์ค„ํ‰ ({bookPostCount?.review_count}) + ํ•œ์ค„ํ‰ ({bookPostCount?.review_count || 0}) </Typography> <Button size="small" @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ ๋”๋ณด๊ธฐ </Button> </Box> - {latestReviews ? ( + {Array.isArray(latestReviews) && latestReviews.length > 0 ? ( <Grid container spacing={2}> {latestReviews.map((review, index) => ( <Grid @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ <Box> <Box sx={bookReviewTabStyles.sectionHeader}> <Typography variant="h6" fontWeight="bold"> - ํฌ์ŠคํŒ… ({bookPostCount?.posting_count}) + ํฌ์ŠคํŒ… ({bookPostCount?.posting_count || 0}) </Typography> <Button size="small" @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ const BookFeedTab = ({ ๋”๋ณด๊ธฐ </Button> </Box> - {latestPostings ? ( + {Array.isArray(latestPostings) && latestPostings.length > 0 ? ( <Grid container spacing={2}> {latestPostings.map((posting, index) => ( <Grid
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์•—, ๋„ต!
@@ -0,0 +1,105 @@ +package com.study.domain; + +import com.study.enums.Rank; +import com.study.enums.RankMap; +import com.study.utils.InputValidation; + +import java.util.*; +import java.util.stream.Collectors; +import java.util.stream.IntStream; + +public class LottoMachine { + + private final int lottoTotalTicketCount; + private final int lottoAutoTicketCount; + private final int lottoManualTicketCount; + private final int money; + private static InputValidation inputValidation = new InputValidation(); + private final static LottoValication LOTTO_VALIDATION = new LottoValication(); + + public LottoMachine(String inputMoney) { + this.money = LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkGivenMoney(inputMoney); + this.lottoTotalTicketCount = this.money / LOTTO_VALIDATION.LOTTO_PRICE; + lottoManualTicketCount = lottoTotalTicketCount; + lottoAutoTicketCount = 0; + } + + public LottoMachine(String inputMoney, int manualTicketCount) { + this.money = LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkGivenMoney(inputMoney); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.canbyAllTickets(money, manualTicketCount); + this.lottoTotalTicketCount = this.money / LOTTO_VALIDATION.LOTTO_PRICE; + this.lottoManualTicketCount = manualTicketCount; + this.lottoAutoTicketCount = lottoTotalTicketCount - lottoManualTicketCount; + } + + public int getLottoTicketCount() { + return this.lottoTotalTicketCount; + } + + public int getLottoManualTicketCount() { + return lottoManualTicketCount; + } + + public List<Integer> createRandomNumber() { + List<Integer> balls = IntStream.range(1, 45) + .boxed() + .collect(Collectors.toList()); + Collections.shuffle(balls); + List<Integer> lottoNumbers = balls.subList(0, 6); + Collections.sort(lottoNumbers); + return lottoNumbers; + } + + public List<Lotto> getLottoTotalTickets(List<List<Integer>> manualLottos) { + List<Lotto> lottoTickets = new ArrayList<>(); + lottoTickets.addAll(getLottoManulTickets(manualLottos)); + lottoTickets.addAll(getAutoLottoTickets()); + return lottoTickets; + } + + public List<Lotto> getAutoLottoTickets() { + List<Lotto> lottoTicket = new ArrayList<>(); + for (int i = 0; i < lottoAutoTicketCount; i++) { + lottoTicket.add(new Lotto(createRandomNumber())); + } + return lottoTicket; + } + + public List<Lotto> getLottoManulTickets(List<List<Integer>> manualLottos) { + List<Lotto> lottoTicket = new ArrayList<>(); + for (int i = 0; i < lottoManualTicketCount; i++) { + lottoTicket.add(new Lotto(manualLottos.get(i))); + } + return lottoTicket; + } + + public int getBonusBall(String bonusInput, List<Integer> winningNumber) { + int bonusInputNumber = Integer.parseInt(bonusInput); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkBound(bonusInputNumber); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkBonusDuplicate(bonusInputNumber, winningNumber); + return bonusInputNumber; + } + + public RankMap getRankResult(Lottos lottos, List<Integer> winningNumber, int bonusNumber) { + RankMap rankMap = new RankMap(Rank.class); + for (Lotto lotto : lottos.getLottos()) { + rankMap.put(lotto.getRank(winningNumber, bonusNumber), rankMap.get(lotto.getRank(winningNumber, bonusNumber)) + 1); + } + return rankMap; + } + + public double getProfitRate(Map<Rank, Integer> rankResult) { + double totalPrize = rankResult.entrySet() + .stream() + .mapToDouble(rank -> rank.getKey().prize() * rank.getValue()) + .sum(); + return totalPrize / this.money; + } + + public List<Integer> getWinningNumber(String winningNumber) { + List<Integer> winningNumbers = inputValidation.toIntegers(inputValidation.splitByComma(winningNumber)); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.lottoNumberValidate(winningNumbers); + return winningNumbers; + } + +}
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Lottos ์ผ๊ธ‰์ปฌ๋ ‰์…˜์—์„œ ๋กœ๋˜๋ฅผ ๊บผ๋‚ด์„œ, ๊ฐ๊ฐ์˜ Lotto๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ Rank๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด RankMap์— ๋„ฃ๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ตฐ์š”. ์ผ๊ธ‰์ปฌ๋ ‰์…˜์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ์‹  ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๋” ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•ด๋ณด์‹œ๋ฉด ์ข‹์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. java Collection์„ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ๊ฐ์‹ธ๊ณ , ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ๋ถ™์—ฌ์ฃผ๊ธฐ๋งŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ผ๊ธ‰์ปฌ๋ ‰์…˜์œผ๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋„ ์ข‹์„๊นŒ์š”? java Collection์„ ๊ฐ์‹ธ๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? Lottos๋กœ ๊ฐ์‹ผ collection์„ ๋˜๋„๋ก ๋ฐ–์œผ๋กœ ๊บผ๋‚ด์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ์—†๋‚˜์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,18 @@ +package com.study.enums; + +import java.util.EnumMap; + +public class RankMap extends EnumMap<Rank, Integer> { + + { + put(Rank.FIRST_PLACE, 0); + put(Rank.SECOND_PLACE, 0); + put(Rank.THIRD_PLACE, 0); + put(Rank.FOURTH_PLACE, 0); + put(Rank.FIFTH_PLACE, 0); + put(Rank.ETC, 0); + } + public RankMap(Class<Rank> keyType) { + super(keyType); + } +}
Java
Java Collection์„ ์ƒ์†๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ตฐ์š”. RankMap์€ EnumMap๊ณผ ๋ฌด์Šจ ์ฐจ์ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”? ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์ƒ์† ๋ฐ›์€ ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,105 @@ +package com.study.domain; + +import com.study.enums.Rank; +import com.study.enums.RankMap; +import com.study.utils.InputValidation; + +import java.util.*; +import java.util.stream.Collectors; +import java.util.stream.IntStream; + +public class LottoMachine { + + private final int lottoTotalTicketCount; + private final int lottoAutoTicketCount; + private final int lottoManualTicketCount; + private final int money; + private static InputValidation inputValidation = new InputValidation(); + private final static LottoValication LOTTO_VALIDATION = new LottoValication(); + + public LottoMachine(String inputMoney) { + this.money = LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkGivenMoney(inputMoney); + this.lottoTotalTicketCount = this.money / LOTTO_VALIDATION.LOTTO_PRICE; + lottoManualTicketCount = lottoTotalTicketCount; + lottoAutoTicketCount = 0; + } + + public LottoMachine(String inputMoney, int manualTicketCount) { + this.money = LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkGivenMoney(inputMoney); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.canbyAllTickets(money, manualTicketCount); + this.lottoTotalTicketCount = this.money / LOTTO_VALIDATION.LOTTO_PRICE; + this.lottoManualTicketCount = manualTicketCount; + this.lottoAutoTicketCount = lottoTotalTicketCount - lottoManualTicketCount; + } + + public int getLottoTicketCount() { + return this.lottoTotalTicketCount; + } + + public int getLottoManualTicketCount() { + return lottoManualTicketCount; + } + + public List<Integer> createRandomNumber() { + List<Integer> balls = IntStream.range(1, 45) + .boxed() + .collect(Collectors.toList()); + Collections.shuffle(balls); + List<Integer> lottoNumbers = balls.subList(0, 6); + Collections.sort(lottoNumbers); + return lottoNumbers; + } + + public List<Lotto> getLottoTotalTickets(List<List<Integer>> manualLottos) { + List<Lotto> lottoTickets = new ArrayList<>(); + lottoTickets.addAll(getLottoManulTickets(manualLottos)); + lottoTickets.addAll(getAutoLottoTickets()); + return lottoTickets; + } + + public List<Lotto> getAutoLottoTickets() { + List<Lotto> lottoTicket = new ArrayList<>(); + for (int i = 0; i < lottoAutoTicketCount; i++) { + lottoTicket.add(new Lotto(createRandomNumber())); + } + return lottoTicket; + } + + public List<Lotto> getLottoManulTickets(List<List<Integer>> manualLottos) { + List<Lotto> lottoTicket = new ArrayList<>(); + for (int i = 0; i < lottoManualTicketCount; i++) { + lottoTicket.add(new Lotto(manualLottos.get(i))); + } + return lottoTicket; + } + + public int getBonusBall(String bonusInput, List<Integer> winningNumber) { + int bonusInputNumber = Integer.parseInt(bonusInput); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkBound(bonusInputNumber); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.checkBonusDuplicate(bonusInputNumber, winningNumber); + return bonusInputNumber; + } + + public RankMap getRankResult(Lottos lottos, List<Integer> winningNumber, int bonusNumber) { + RankMap rankMap = new RankMap(Rank.class); + for (Lotto lotto : lottos.getLottos()) { + rankMap.put(lotto.getRank(winningNumber, bonusNumber), rankMap.get(lotto.getRank(winningNumber, bonusNumber)) + 1); + } + return rankMap; + } + + public double getProfitRate(Map<Rank, Integer> rankResult) { + double totalPrize = rankResult.entrySet() + .stream() + .mapToDouble(rank -> rank.getKey().prize() * rank.getValue()) + .sum(); + return totalPrize / this.money; + } + + public List<Integer> getWinningNumber(String winningNumber) { + List<Integer> winningNumbers = inputValidation.toIntegers(inputValidation.splitByComma(winningNumber)); + LOTTO_VALIDATION.lottoNumberValidate(winningNumbers); + return winningNumbers; + } + +}
Java
LottoMachine์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์€ ์—ญํ• ์„ ๋‹ด๋‹นํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ๊ธฐ๋Šฅ๊ณผ ์—ญํ• ์— ๋งž๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ์ฒด๋ฅผ ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•ด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์–ด๋–ค๊ฐ€์š”?
@@ -61,7 +61,10 @@ class Nav extends React.Component { </a> <a href="/"> <div className="profile-image"> - <img src="images/profile/me.jpeg" alt="me" /> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark//images/user-icon.jpg" + alt="me" + /> </div> </a> </div>
JavaScript
a๋งํฌ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ ๊ฒŒ ๋งŽ์ด ๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! a ๋งํฌ๋Œ€์‹  Link๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์ข‹์•„๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,121 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import { withRouter } from 'react-router'; +import './Login.scss'; + +const REGEXP = { + emailRegExp: + /[a-zA-Z0-9.-_+!]+@[a-zA-Z0-9]+\.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,}(?:.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,3})?/, + passwordRegExp: /[a-zA-Z0-9]{5,100}/, +}; + +class Login extends React.Component { + constructor(props) { + super(props); + + this.state = { userId: '', userPw: '' }; + } + + validate = (value, regExp) => { + const reg = new RegExp(regExp); + return reg.test(value); + }; + + validateInputData = (id, pw) => { + return ( + this.validate(id, REGEXP.emailRegExp) && + this.validate(pw, REGEXP.passwordRegExp) + ); + }; + + handleInput = e => { + const { name, value } = e.target; + this.setState({ + [name]: value, + }); + }; + + handleSubmit = e => { + e.preventDefault(); + + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + if (!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)) return; + + this.props.history.push('/main'); + }; + + render() { + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + + return ( + <> + <section className="entire-container"> + <div className="entire"> + <div className="entire_top content"> + <div className="login_container"> + <h1>westagram</h1> + <div className="form_container"> + <form onSubmit={this.handleSubmit}> + <input + type="text" + name="userId" + placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ, ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ์ด๋ฆ„ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ" + value={userId} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <input + type="password" + name="userPw" + placeholder="๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" + value={userPw} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <Link to="/main"> + <button + className="login-button" + type="submit" + disabled={!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)} + onClick={this.handleSubmit} + > + ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ + </button> + </Link> + </form> + + <div className="line_container"> + <div className="line"></div> + <div className="line-word">๋˜๋Š”</div> + <div className="line"></div> + </div> + + <button className="social-login-button"> + <img + src="data:image/svg+xml;base64,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" + alt="facebook button" + /> + <span>Facebook์œผ๋กœ ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ</span> + </button> + </div> + + <Link to="/" className="search-password"> + ๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์žŠ์œผ์…จ๋‚˜์š”? + </Link> + </div> + </div> + + <div className="entire_bottom content"> + <p> + ๊ณ„์ •์ด ์—†์œผ์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?&nbsp; + <a href="https://www.instagram.com/accounts/emailsignup/"> + ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + </a> + </p> + </div> + </div> + </section> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default withRouter(Login);
JavaScript
์ •๊ทœ์‹ ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฐ์‹์œผ๋กœ ํ…Œ์ŠคํŠธ ๋Œ๋ฆด ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ตฐ์š” ์ฐธ๊ณ ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค !! ๐Ÿ‘
@@ -0,0 +1,92 @@ +[ + { + "id": 1, + "userName": "wecode", + "city": "KAYTRANADA", + "userImgSrc": "/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-mini.jpg", + "feedImgSrc": "https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1621419079793-73020baef9eb?ixid=MnwxMjA3fDB8MHxlZGl0b3JpYWwtZmVlZHw0fHx8ZW58MHx8fHw%3D&ixlib=rb-1.2.1&auto=format&fit=crop&w=500&q=60", + "feedLike": true, + "feedLikeCounts": "216,608", + "content": "Welcome to world best coding bootcamp!", + "comments": [ + { + "id": 1, + "userName": "wecode", + "content": "Welcome to world best coding bootcamp!", + "Likers": ["hyunchan", "aaa"] + }, + { + "id": 2, + "userName": "joonsikyang", + "content": "Hi there.", + "Likers": [] + }, + { + "id": 3, + "userName": "jayPark", + "content": "Hey.", + "Likers": ["hyunchan"] + } + ] + }, + { + "id": 2, + "userName": "instagram", + "city": "Norfolr, Uk", + "userImgSrc": "/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-mini.jpg", + "feedImgSrc": "/images/hyunchanpark/images/women.jpg", + "feedLike": false, + "feedLikeCounts": "100,000", + "content": "Hi there.", + "comments": [ + { + "id": 1, + "userName": "2", + "content": "22", + "Likers": ["hyunchan"] + }, + { + "id": 2, + "userName": "22", + "content": "222.", + "Likers": ["hyunchan"] + }, + { + "id": 3, + "userName": "222", + "content": "2222.", + "Likers": [] + } + ] + }, + { + "id": 3, + "userName": "IU", + "city": "seoul", + "userImgSrc": "/images/hyunchanpark/images/IU2.jpg", + "feedImgSrc": "/images/hyunchanpark/images/IU1.jpg", + "feedLike": true, + "feedLikeCounts": "1,111,111", + "content": "IU lovely", + "comments": [ + { + "id": 1, + "userName": "3", + "content": "33", + "Likers": [] + }, + { + "id": 2, + "userName": "333", + "content": "333.", + "Likers": [] + }, + { + "id": 3, + "userName": "3333", + "content": "3333.", + "Likers": ["hyunchan"] + } + ] + } +]
Unknown
json ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์…”์„œ ๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,121 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import { withRouter } from 'react-router'; +import './Login.scss'; + +const REGEXP = { + emailRegExp: + /[a-zA-Z0-9.-_+!]+@[a-zA-Z0-9]+\.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,}(?:.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,3})?/, + passwordRegExp: /[a-zA-Z0-9]{5,100}/, +}; + +class Login extends React.Component { + constructor(props) { + super(props); + + this.state = { userId: '', userPw: '' }; + } + + validate = (value, regExp) => { + const reg = new RegExp(regExp); + return reg.test(value); + }; + + validateInputData = (id, pw) => { + return ( + this.validate(id, REGEXP.emailRegExp) && + this.validate(pw, REGEXP.passwordRegExp) + ); + }; + + handleInput = e => { + const { name, value } = e.target; + this.setState({ + [name]: value, + }); + }; + + handleSubmit = e => { + e.preventDefault(); + + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + if (!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)) return; + + this.props.history.push('/main'); + }; + + render() { + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + + return ( + <> + <section className="entire-container"> + <div className="entire"> + <div className="entire_top content"> + <div className="login_container"> + <h1>westagram</h1> + <div className="form_container"> + <form onSubmit={this.handleSubmit}> + <input + type="text" + name="userId" + placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ, ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ์ด๋ฆ„ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ" + value={userId} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <input + type="password" + name="userPw" + placeholder="๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" + value={userPw} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <Link to="/main"> + <button + className="login-button" + type="submit" + disabled={!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)} + onClick={this.handleSubmit} + > + ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ + </button> + </Link> + </form> + + <div className="line_container"> + <div className="line"></div> + <div className="line-word">๋˜๋Š”</div> + <div className="line"></div> + </div> + + <button className="social-login-button"> + <img + src="data:image/svg+xml;base64,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" + alt="facebook button" + /> + <span>Facebook์œผ๋กœ ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ</span> + </button> + </div> + + <Link to="/" className="search-password"> + ๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์žŠ์œผ์…จ๋‚˜์š”? + </Link> + </div> + </div> + + <div className="entire_bottom content"> + <p> + ๊ณ„์ •์ด ์—†์œผ์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?&nbsp; + <a href="https://www.instagram.com/accounts/emailsignup/"> + ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + </a> + </p> + </div> + </div> + </section> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default withRouter(Login);
JavaScript
๋น„๊ตฌ์กฐํ™” ํ• ๋‹น์„ ๋”ฐ๋กœ ํ•ด์ฃผ์…จ๋Š”๋ฐ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์•ˆํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณ„์‹ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ํ•จ์ˆ˜๋„ ๋น„๊ตฌ์กฐํ™” ํ• ๋‹น ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ด๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค !
@@ -0,0 +1,43 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; + +class Comment extends React.Component { + render() { + const { feedId, comment, onRemoveComment, onToggleLike } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div className="comment" id={comment.id}> + <div className="comment-content"> + <Link to="/main" className="comment-id"> + {comment.userName} + </Link> + <span>{comment.content}</span> + </div> + <button> + {comment.userName === 'hyunchan' && ( + <i + className="far fa-trash-alt" + id={comment.id} + onClick={e => onRemoveComment(e, feedId)} + /> + )} + + <i + className={`${ + comment.Likers && + comment.Likers.find(liker => liker === 'hyunchan') + ? 'fas' + : 'far' + } fa-heart`} + data-commentid={comment.id} + onClick={e => onToggleLike(e, feedId)} + /> + </button> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default Comment;
JavaScript
๋น„๊ตฌ์กฐํ™” ํ• ๋‹น ๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๐Ÿ‘
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Comment from './Comment'; + +class CommentList extends Component { + render() { + const { feedId, commentList, onToggleLike, onRemoveComment } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div> + <div className="all-comments-show"> + <Link to="/main"> + ๋Œ“๊ธ€ <span>12,739</span>๊ฐœ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="other-comments"> + {commentList?.map((comment, i) => ( + <Comment + key={i} + feedId={feedId} + comment={comment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + /> + ))} + </div> + + <div className="time-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <time + className="" + dateTime="2021-05-17T18:16:28.000Z" + title="2021๋…„ 5์›” 18์ผ" + > + 2์ผ ์ „ + </time> + </Link> + </div> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default CommentList;
JavaScript
์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์•ˆํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ์ฝ”๋“œ๋ฉด ์‚ญ์ œ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์ฃผ์‹œ๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์ข‹์•„ ๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Comment from './Comment'; + +class CommentList extends Component { + render() { + const { feedId, commentList, onToggleLike, onRemoveComment } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div> + <div className="all-comments-show"> + <Link to="/main"> + ๋Œ“๊ธ€ <span>12,739</span>๊ฐœ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="other-comments"> + {commentList?.map((comment, i) => ( + <Comment + key={i} + feedId={feedId} + comment={comment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + /> + ))} + </div> + + <div className="time-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <time + className="" + dateTime="2021-05-17T18:16:28.000Z" + title="2021๋…„ 5์›” 18์ผ" + > + 2์ผ ์ „ + </time> + </Link> + </div> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default CommentList;
JavaScript
์ข‹์•„์š” ๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ•˜์‹ ๊ฑด๊ฐ€์š” ๐Ÿ”ฅ
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Comment from './Comment'; + +class CommentList extends Component { + render() { + const { feedId, commentList, onToggleLike, onRemoveComment } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div> + <div className="all-comments-show"> + <Link to="/main"> + ๋Œ“๊ธ€ <span>12,739</span>๊ฐœ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="other-comments"> + {commentList?.map((comment, i) => ( + <Comment + key={i} + feedId={feedId} + comment={comment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + /> + ))} + </div> + + <div className="time-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <time + className="" + dateTime="2021-05-17T18:16:28.000Z" + title="2021๋…„ 5์›” 18์ผ" + > + 2์ผ ์ „ + </time> + </Link> + </div> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default CommentList;
JavaScript
json๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋ณต์‚ฌํ•ด์„œ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ตฐ์š” ์ฐธ๊ณ ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค~
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Comment from './Comment'; + +class CommentList extends Component { + render() { + const { feedId, commentList, onToggleLike, onRemoveComment } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div> + <div className="all-comments-show"> + <Link to="/main"> + ๋Œ“๊ธ€ <span>12,739</span>๊ฐœ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="other-comments"> + {commentList?.map((comment, i) => ( + <Comment + key={i} + feedId={feedId} + comment={comment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + /> + ))} + </div> + + <div className="time-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <time + className="" + dateTime="2021-05-17T18:16:28.000Z" + title="2021๋…„ 5์›” 18์ผ" + > + 2์ผ ์ „ + </time> + </Link> + </div> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default CommentList;
JavaScript
key๋”ฐ๋กœ id๋”ฐ๋กœ ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•ด์ฃผ์‹ ๊ฑฐ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ข‹์€๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™๋„ค์š”! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป
@@ -0,0 +1,150 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import CommentInput from './CommentInput'; +import CommentList from './CommentList'; + +class Feed extends Component { + render() { + const { feed, onSubmitCommentForm, onRemoveComment, onToggleLike } = + this.props; + + return ( + <> + <article className="feed"> + <div className="header"> + <div className="header-contents-align"> + <div className="user-image-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <img + src={feed.userImgSrc} + className="user-image" + alt="๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ์ž‘์„ฑ์ž" + /> + </Link> + </div> + <div className="user-info-container"> + <div className="user-info"> + <Link to="/main"> + <span className="user-name">{feed.userName}</span> + </Link> + <span className="city">{feed.city}</span> + </div> + </div> + </div> + <button>โ€ขโ€ขโ€ข</button> + </div> + + <div className="feed-image"> + <img src={feed.feedImgSrc} alt="feedImage" /> + </div> + + <div className="comments"> + <div className="comments-icons"> + <div> + <button> + <div className="icon-heart"> + <svg + aria-label="์ข‹์•„์š”" + className="_8-yf5" + fill={feed.feedLike ? 'red' : '#262626'} + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path + d={ + feed.feedLike + ? 'M34.6 3.1c-4.5 0-7.9 1.8-10.6 5.6-2.7-3.7-6.1-5.5-10.6-5.5C6 3.1 0 9.6 0 17.6c0 7.3 5.4 12 10.6 16.5.6.5 1.3 1.1 1.9 1.7l2.3 2c4.4 3.9 6.6 5.9 7.6 6.5.5.3 1.1.5 1.6.5s1.1-.2 1.6-.5c1-.6 2.8-2.2 7.8-6.8l2-1.8c.7-.6 1.3-1.2 2-1.7C42.7 29.6 48 25 48 17.6c0-8-6-14.5-13.4-14.5z' + : 'M34.6 6.1c5.7 0 10.4 5.2 10.4 11.5 0 6.8-5.9 11-11.5 16S25 41.3 24 41.9c-1.1-.7-4.7-4-9.5-8.3-5.7-5-11.5-9.2-11.5-16C3 11.3 7.7 6.1 13.4 6.1c4.2 0 6.5 2 8.1 4.3 1.9 2.6 2.2 3.9 2.5 3.9.3 0 .6-1.3 2.5-3.9 1.6-2.3 3.9-4.3 8.1-4.3m0-3c-4.5 0-7.9 1.8-10.6 5.6-2.7-3.7-6.1-5.5-10.6-5.5C6 3.1 0 9.6 0 17.6c0 7.3 5.4 12 10.6 16.5.6.5 1.3 1.1 1.9 1.7l2.3 2c4.4 3.9 6.6 5.9 7.6 6.5.5.3 1.1.5 1.6.5.6 0 1.1-.2 1.6-.5 1-.6 2.8-2.2 7.8-6.8l2-1.8c.7-.6 1.3-1.2 2-1.7C42.7 29.6 48 25 48 17.6c0-8-6-14.5-13.4-14.5z' + } + ></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + + <button> + <div className="icon-reply"> + <svg + aria-label="๋Œ“๊ธ€ ๋‹ฌ๊ธฐ" + className="_8-yf5" + fill="#262626" + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path + clipRule="evenodd" + d="M47.5 46.1l-2.8-11c1.8-3.3 2.8-7.1 2.8-11.1C47.5 11 37 .5 24 .5S.5 11 .5 24 11 47.5 24 47.5c4 0 7.8-1 11.1-2.8l11 2.8c.8.2 1.6-.6 1.4-1.4zm-3-22.1c0 4-1 7-2.6 10-.2.4-.3.9-.2 1.4l2.1 8.4-8.3-2.1c-.5-.1-1-.1-1.4.2-1.8 1-5.2 2.6-10 2.6-11.4 0-20.6-9.2-20.6-20.5S12.7 3.5 24 3.5 44.5 12.7 44.5 24z" + fillRule="evenodd" + ></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + + <button> + <div className="icon-share"> + <svg + aria-label="๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ๊ณต์œ " + className="_8-yf5" + fill="#262626" + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path d="M47.8 3.8c-.3-.5-.8-.8-1.3-.8h-45C.9 3.1.3 3.5.1 4S0 5.2.4 5.7l15.9 15.6 5.5 22.6c.1.6.6 1 1.2 1.1h.2c.5 0 1-.3 1.3-.7l23.2-39c.4-.4.4-1 .1-1.5zM5.2 6.1h35.5L18 18.7 5.2 6.1zm18.7 33.6l-4.4-18.4L42.4 8.6 23.9 39.7z"></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + </div> + + <button className="button-bookmark"> + <div className="icon-bookmark"> + <svg + aria-label="์ €์žฅ" + className="_8-yf5" + fill="#262626" + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path d="M43.5 48c-.4 0-.8-.2-1.1-.4L24 29 5.6 47.6c-.4.4-1.1.6-1.6.3-.6-.2-1-.8-1-1.4v-45C3 .7 3.7 0 4.5 0h39c.8 0 1.5.7 1.5 1.5v45c0 .6-.4 1.2-.9 1.4-.2.1-.4.1-.6.1zM24 26c.8 0 1.6.3 2.2.9l15.8 16V3H6v39.9l15.8-16c.6-.6 1.4-.9 2.2-.9z"></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + </div> + + <div className="like-counts"> + <Link to="/main"> + ์ข‹์•„์š” + <span>{feed.feedLikeCounts}</span>๊ฐœ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="user-comment-container"> + <div className="user-comment"> + <Link to="/main" className="comment-id"> + {feed.userName} + </Link> + <span>{feed.content}</span> + </div> + + <CommentList + feedId={feed.id} + commentList={feed.comments} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + /> + + <CommentInput + feedId={feed.id} + onSubmitCommentForm={onSubmitCommentForm} + /> + </div> + </div> + </article> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default Feed;
JavaScript
์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋Š” console.log ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌ~ ๐Ÿ›ธ
@@ -0,0 +1,156 @@ +@import '../Styles/common.scss'; + +.entire-container { + @include flex-set(row, center, center); + width: 100%; + height: 100vh; + background-color: $background-default-color; + + .entire { + width: 350px; + background-color: $background-default-color; + + .entire_top { + height: 380px; + + &.content { + padding: 10px 0; + margin: 0 0 10px; + border: $border-default-set; + + .login_container { + @include flex-set(column, center, center); + + h1 { + width: 175px; + height: 51px; + line-height: 51px; + margin: 22px auto 12px; + font-family: 'Lobster', cursive; + @include font-set(40px, 100, null); + } + + .form_container { + @include flex-set(column); + margin: 20px 0 0; + + form { + @include flex-set(column); + + input { + width: 268px; + height: 38px; + padding: 9px 0 7px 8px; + margin: 0 0 7px 0; + border: $border-default-set; + + background: $background-default-color; + color: #8e8e8e; + + @include font-set($font-small-size, inherit, 36px); + overflow: hidden; + outline: 0; + text-overflow: ellipsis; + } + + a { + margin: 9px 0 18px; + + .login-button { + width: 268px; + height: 30px; + background-color: rgb(0, 149, 246); + border-radius: 4px; + color: #fff; + font-weight: $font-bold-weight; + opacity: 1; + + &:disabled { + cursor: default; + opacity: 0.3; + } + } + } + } + + .line_container { + display: flex; + width: 268px; + margin: 0 0 28px 0; + + .line { + position: relative; + top: 0.45em; + height: 1px; + flex-grow: 1; + background-color: #dbdbdb; + } + + .line-word { + color: #8e8e8e; + @include font-set($font-small-size, $font-bold-weight, 15px); + margin: 0 25px; + } + } + + .social-login-button { + display: inline; + margin-bottom: 20px; + border: none; + background-color: #fff; + + &:hover { + cursor: pointer; + } + + img { + position: relative; + top: 3px; + display: inline-block; + width: 16px; + height: 16px; + margin-right: 8px; + } + + span { + color: rgb(56, 81, 133); + @include font-set($font-default-size, $font-bold-weight); + } + } + } + + .search-password { + color: #00376b; + text-align: center; + } + } + } + } + + .entire_bottom { + @include flex-set(); + height: 63px; + color: $font-default-color; + + @include font-set($font-default-size, inherit, 63px); + text-align: center; + + &.content { + padding: 10px 0; + margin: 0 0 10px; + border: $border-default-set; + } + + p { + color: $font-default-color; + font-size: $font-default-size; + + a { + color: #0095f6; + font-weight: 600; + text-decoration: none; + } + } + } + } +}
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@@ -0,0 +1,150 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import CommentInput from './CommentInput'; +import CommentList from './CommentList'; + +class Feed extends Component { + render() { + const { feed, onSubmitCommentForm, onRemoveComment, onToggleLike } = + this.props; + + return ( + <> + <article className="feed"> + <div className="header"> + <div className="header-contents-align"> + <div className="user-image-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <img + src={feed.userImgSrc} + className="user-image" + alt="๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ์ž‘์„ฑ์ž" + /> + </Link> + </div> + <div className="user-info-container"> + <div className="user-info"> + <Link to="/main"> + <span className="user-name">{feed.userName}</span> + </Link> + <span className="city">{feed.city}</span> + </div> + </div> + </div> + <button>โ€ขโ€ขโ€ข</button> + </div> + + <div className="feed-image"> + <img src={feed.feedImgSrc} alt="feedImage" /> + </div> + + <div className="comments"> + <div className="comments-icons"> + <div> + <button> + <div className="icon-heart"> + <svg + aria-label="์ข‹์•„์š”" + className="_8-yf5" + fill={feed.feedLike ? 'red' : '#262626'} + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path + d={ + feed.feedLike + ? 'M34.6 3.1c-4.5 0-7.9 1.8-10.6 5.6-2.7-3.7-6.1-5.5-10.6-5.5C6 3.1 0 9.6 0 17.6c0 7.3 5.4 12 10.6 16.5.6.5 1.3 1.1 1.9 1.7l2.3 2c4.4 3.9 6.6 5.9 7.6 6.5.5.3 1.1.5 1.6.5s1.1-.2 1.6-.5c1-.6 2.8-2.2 7.8-6.8l2-1.8c.7-.6 1.3-1.2 2-1.7C42.7 29.6 48 25 48 17.6c0-8-6-14.5-13.4-14.5z' + : 'M34.6 6.1c5.7 0 10.4 5.2 10.4 11.5 0 6.8-5.9 11-11.5 16S25 41.3 24 41.9c-1.1-.7-4.7-4-9.5-8.3-5.7-5-11.5-9.2-11.5-16C3 11.3 7.7 6.1 13.4 6.1c4.2 0 6.5 2 8.1 4.3 1.9 2.6 2.2 3.9 2.5 3.9.3 0 .6-1.3 2.5-3.9 1.6-2.3 3.9-4.3 8.1-4.3m0-3c-4.5 0-7.9 1.8-10.6 5.6-2.7-3.7-6.1-5.5-10.6-5.5C6 3.1 0 9.6 0 17.6c0 7.3 5.4 12 10.6 16.5.6.5 1.3 1.1 1.9 1.7l2.3 2c4.4 3.9 6.6 5.9 7.6 6.5.5.3 1.1.5 1.6.5.6 0 1.1-.2 1.6-.5 1-.6 2.8-2.2 7.8-6.8l2-1.8c.7-.6 1.3-1.2 2-1.7C42.7 29.6 48 25 48 17.6c0-8-6-14.5-13.4-14.5z' + } + ></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + + <button> + <div className="icon-reply"> + <svg + aria-label="๋Œ“๊ธ€ ๋‹ฌ๊ธฐ" + className="_8-yf5" + fill="#262626" + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path + clipRule="evenodd" + d="M47.5 46.1l-2.8-11c1.8-3.3 2.8-7.1 2.8-11.1C47.5 11 37 .5 24 .5S.5 11 .5 24 11 47.5 24 47.5c4 0 7.8-1 11.1-2.8l11 2.8c.8.2 1.6-.6 1.4-1.4zm-3-22.1c0 4-1 7-2.6 10-.2.4-.3.9-.2 1.4l2.1 8.4-8.3-2.1c-.5-.1-1-.1-1.4.2-1.8 1-5.2 2.6-10 2.6-11.4 0-20.6-9.2-20.6-20.5S12.7 3.5 24 3.5 44.5 12.7 44.5 24z" + fillRule="evenodd" + ></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + + <button> + <div className="icon-share"> + <svg + aria-label="๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ ๊ณต์œ " + className="_8-yf5" + fill="#262626" + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path d="M47.8 3.8c-.3-.5-.8-.8-1.3-.8h-45C.9 3.1.3 3.5.1 4S0 5.2.4 5.7l15.9 15.6 5.5 22.6c.1.6.6 1 1.2 1.1h.2c.5 0 1-.3 1.3-.7l23.2-39c.4-.4.4-1 .1-1.5zM5.2 6.1h35.5L18 18.7 5.2 6.1zm18.7 33.6l-4.4-18.4L42.4 8.6 23.9 39.7z"></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + </div> + + <button className="button-bookmark"> + <div className="icon-bookmark"> + <svg + aria-label="์ €์žฅ" + className="_8-yf5" + fill="#262626" + height="24" + viewBox="0 0 48 48" + width="24" + > + <path d="M43.5 48c-.4 0-.8-.2-1.1-.4L24 29 5.6 47.6c-.4.4-1.1.6-1.6.3-.6-.2-1-.8-1-1.4v-45C3 .7 3.7 0 4.5 0h39c.8 0 1.5.7 1.5 1.5v45c0 .6-.4 1.2-.9 1.4-.2.1-.4.1-.6.1zM24 26c.8 0 1.6.3 2.2.9l15.8 16V3H6v39.9l15.8-16c.6-.6 1.4-.9 2.2-.9z"></path> + </svg> + </div> + </button> + </div> + + <div className="like-counts"> + <Link to="/main"> + ์ข‹์•„์š” + <span>{feed.feedLikeCounts}</span>๊ฐœ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="user-comment-container"> + <div className="user-comment"> + <Link to="/main" className="comment-id"> + {feed.userName} + </Link> + <span>{feed.content}</span> + </div> + + <CommentList + feedId={feed.id} + commentList={feed.comments} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + /> + + <CommentInput + feedId={feed.id} + onSubmitCommentForm={onSubmitCommentForm} + /> + </div> + </div> + </article> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default Feed;
JavaScript
Boolean ๋ฐ์ดํ„ฐ ํƒ€์ž…์˜ ํ™œ์šฉ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๊ผผ๊ผผํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ž์ฃผ ํ•˜์‹ ์  ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป ๋ฐ•์ˆ˜~~~
@@ -0,0 +1,212 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Nav from '../../../Components/Nav/Nav'; +import FeedList from './FeedList'; +import './Main.scss'; + +class Main extends React.Component { + render() { + return ( + <> + <Nav /> + <div className="main-container"> + <main className="section-container"> + <section className="main-section"> + <div className="left-contents"> + <div className="stories"> + <div className="story-container"> + <div className="story"> + <div className="story-link-container"> + <Link to="/main" className="story-link"> + <div className="link-background"> + <div className="image-container"> + <div className="image-link"></div> + </div> + </div> + </Link> + </div> + <span className="story-name">name</span> + </div> + + <div className="story"> + <div className="story-link-container"> + <Link to="/main" className="story-link"> + <div className="link-background"> + <div className="image-container"> + <div className="image-link"></div> + </div> + </div> + </Link> + </div> + <span className="story-name">name</span> + </div> + + <div className="story"> + <div className="story-link-container"> + <Link to="/main" className="story-link"> + <div className="link-background"> + <div className="image-container"> + <div className="image-link"></div> + </div> + </div> + </Link> + </div> + <span className="story-name">name</span> + </div> + </div> + </div> + + <FeedList /> + </div> + + <aside className="right-contents-container"> + <div className="right-contents"> + <div className="profile-container transparent"> + <div className="profile transparent"> + <Link to="/main" className="userid-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark//images/user-icon.jpg" + alt="user๋‹˜์˜ ํ”„๋กœํ•„ ์‚ฌ์ง„" + /> + </Link> + <div className="userinfo-text"> + <Link to="/main">userId</Link> + <span>username</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="transparent">์ „ํ™˜</button> + </div> + + <div className="recommend-container transparent"> + <div className="recommend transparent"> + <span>ํšŒ์›๋‹˜์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ถ”์ฒœ</span> + <Link to="/main" className="suggest"> + ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + <ul className="recommend-list"> + <li className="recommend-item"> + <div className="item"> + <Link to="/main" className="item-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-sprite.png" + alt="other user" + /> + </Link> + <div className="username"> + <Link to="/main">imsj208</Link> + <span>kingwoobinkim๋‹˜ ์™ธ 6๋ช…์ด ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="follow-button transparent"> + ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐ + </button> + </li> + <li className="recommend-item"> + <div className="item"> + <Link to="/main" className="item-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-sprite.png" + alt="other user" + /> + </Link> + <div className="username"> + <Link to="/main">jinhyung.lee.5832</Link> + <span>ycw12495๋‹˜ ์™ธ 1๋ช…์ด ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="follow-button transparent"> + ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐ + </button> + </li> + <li className="recommend-item"> + <div className="item"> + <Link to="/main" className="item-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-sprite.png" + alt="other user" + /> + </Link> + <div className="username"> + <Link to="/main">msc_940216</Link> + <span>ํšŒ์›๋‹˜์„ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="follow-button transparent"> + ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐ + </button> + </li> + </ul> + </div> + + <footer> + <ul> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์†Œ๊ฐœ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>๋„์›€๋ง</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>ํ™๋ณด์„ผํ„ฐ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>API</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์ฑ„์šฉ์ •๋ณด</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>๊ฐœ์ธ์ •๋ณด์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๋ฐฉ์นจ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์•ฝ๊ด€</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์œ„์น˜</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์ธ๊ธฐ๊ณ„์ •</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>ํ•ด์‹œํƒœ๊ทธ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์–ธ์–ด</span> + </Link> + </li> + </ul> + <span>ยฉ 2021 Instagram from Facebook</span> + </footer> + </div> + </aside> + </section> + </main> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default Main;
JavaScript
๋ฆฌ์•กํŠธ ์ธ๋ผ์ธ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ๋กœ ๊พธ๋ฏธ๋Š”๋ฒ• ๊นŒ๋จน๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ฐธ๊ณ  ํ•˜๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค~
@@ -0,0 +1,212 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Nav from '../../../Components/Nav/Nav'; +import FeedList from './FeedList'; +import './Main.scss'; + +class Main extends React.Component { + render() { + return ( + <> + <Nav /> + <div className="main-container"> + <main className="section-container"> + <section className="main-section"> + <div className="left-contents"> + <div className="stories"> + <div className="story-container"> + <div className="story"> + <div className="story-link-container"> + <Link to="/main" className="story-link"> + <div className="link-background"> + <div className="image-container"> + <div className="image-link"></div> + </div> + </div> + </Link> + </div> + <span className="story-name">name</span> + </div> + + <div className="story"> + <div className="story-link-container"> + <Link to="/main" className="story-link"> + <div className="link-background"> + <div className="image-container"> + <div className="image-link"></div> + </div> + </div> + </Link> + </div> + <span className="story-name">name</span> + </div> + + <div className="story"> + <div className="story-link-container"> + <Link to="/main" className="story-link"> + <div className="link-background"> + <div className="image-container"> + <div className="image-link"></div> + </div> + </div> + </Link> + </div> + <span className="story-name">name</span> + </div> + </div> + </div> + + <FeedList /> + </div> + + <aside className="right-contents-container"> + <div className="right-contents"> + <div className="profile-container transparent"> + <div className="profile transparent"> + <Link to="/main" className="userid-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark//images/user-icon.jpg" + alt="user๋‹˜์˜ ํ”„๋กœํ•„ ์‚ฌ์ง„" + /> + </Link> + <div className="userinfo-text"> + <Link to="/main">userId</Link> + <span>username</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="transparent">์ „ํ™˜</button> + </div> + + <div className="recommend-container transparent"> + <div className="recommend transparent"> + <span>ํšŒ์›๋‹˜์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ์ถ”์ฒœ</span> + <Link to="/main" className="suggest"> + ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + <ul className="recommend-list"> + <li className="recommend-item"> + <div className="item"> + <Link to="/main" className="item-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-sprite.png" + alt="other user" + /> + </Link> + <div className="username"> + <Link to="/main">imsj208</Link> + <span>kingwoobinkim๋‹˜ ์™ธ 6๋ช…์ด ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="follow-button transparent"> + ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐ + </button> + </li> + <li className="recommend-item"> + <div className="item"> + <Link to="/main" className="item-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-sprite.png" + alt="other user" + /> + </Link> + <div className="username"> + <Link to="/main">jinhyung.lee.5832</Link> + <span>ycw12495๋‹˜ ์™ธ 1๋ช…์ด ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="follow-button transparent"> + ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐ + </button> + </li> + <li className="recommend-item"> + <div className="item"> + <Link to="/main" className="item-link"> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark/images/insta-sprite.png" + alt="other user" + /> + </Link> + <div className="username"> + <Link to="/main">msc_940216</Link> + <span>ํšŒ์›๋‹˜์„ ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค</span> + </div> + </div> + <button className="follow-button transparent"> + ํŒ”๋กœ์šฐ + </button> + </li> + </ul> + </div> + + <footer> + <ul> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์†Œ๊ฐœ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>๋„์›€๋ง</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>ํ™๋ณด์„ผํ„ฐ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>API</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์ฑ„์šฉ์ •๋ณด</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>๊ฐœ์ธ์ •๋ณด์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๋ฐฉ์นจ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์•ฝ๊ด€</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์œ„์น˜</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์ธ๊ธฐ๊ณ„์ •</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>ํ•ด์‹œํƒœ๊ทธ</span> + </Link> + </li> + <li> + <Link to="/main"> + <span>์–ธ์–ด</span> + </Link> + </li> + </ul> + <span>ยฉ 2021 Instagram from Facebook</span> + </footer> + </div> + </aside> + </section> + </main> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default Main;
JavaScript
์š”๊ธฐ ์ฝ”๋“œ๋„ ์ „์ฒด๋กœ a๋งํฌ๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์…จ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค Link๋กœ ์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ์ข‹์„๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Comment from './Comment'; + +class CommentList extends Component { + render() { + const { feedId, commentList, onToggleLike, onRemoveComment } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div> + <div className="all-comments-show"> + <Link to="/main"> + ๋Œ“๊ธ€ <span>12,739</span>๊ฐœ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="other-comments"> + {commentList?.map((comment, i) => ( + <Comment + key={i} + feedId={feedId} + comment={comment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + /> + ))} + </div> + + <div className="time-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <time + className="" + dateTime="2021-05-17T18:16:28.000Z" + title="2021๋…„ 5์›” 18์ผ" + > + 2์ผ ์ „ + </time> + </Link> + </div> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default CommentList;
JavaScript
formํƒœ๊ทธ์˜ submit์„ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•˜์…”์„œ ์—”ํ„ฐํ‚ค๋ฅผ ์ณ๋„ ์ž…๋ ฅ์ด ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ•œ์  ๋ณด๊ธฐ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋”ฐ๋กœ ์—”ํ„ฐํ‚ค ํ•จ์ˆ˜๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“ค์ง€ ์•Š์•„๋„ ๋˜๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ์ข‹์€๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค !
@@ -0,0 +1,47 @@ +import React, { Component } from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import Comment from './Comment'; + +class CommentList extends Component { + render() { + const { feedId, commentList, onToggleLike, onRemoveComment } = this.props; + + return ( + <> + <div> + <div className="all-comments-show"> + <Link to="/main"> + ๋Œ“๊ธ€ <span>12,739</span>๊ฐœ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋ณด๊ธฐ + </Link> + </div> + + <div className="other-comments"> + {commentList?.map((comment, i) => ( + <Comment + key={i} + feedId={feedId} + comment={comment} + onToggleLike={onToggleLike} + onRemoveComment={onRemoveComment} + /> + ))} + </div> + + <div className="time-container"> + <Link to="/main"> + <time + className="" + dateTime="2021-05-17T18:16:28.000Z" + title="2021๋…„ 5์›” 18์ผ" + > + 2์ผ ์ „ + </time> + </Link> + </div> + </div> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default CommentList;
JavaScript
์•„๋‹ˆ์š”......์‚ญ์ œ๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ตฌํ˜„ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ใ… ใ… 
@@ -61,7 +61,10 @@ class Nav extends React.Component { </a> <a href="/"> <div className="profile-image"> - <img src="images/profile/me.jpeg" alt="me" /> + <img + src="/images/hyunchanpark//images/user-icon.jpg" + alt="me" + /> </div> </a> </div>
JavaScript
[์ฐธ๊ณ ](https://stackoverflow.com/questions/43087007/react-link-vs-a-tag-and-arrow-function) `<a>`๋Š” ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์ƒˆ๋กœ๊ณ ์นจ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ html์„ ์ƒˆ๋กœ ๋‹ค ๋ฐ›์•„ ์˜ค๋Š” ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด, `<Link>`๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๋งŒ ๋ฐ”๊ฟ”์ค๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ Œ๋”๋ง ์ตœ์ ํ™”๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ `<Link>` ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š”!
@@ -22,6 +22,7 @@ nav { .title { margin: 0; font-size: 30px; + font-weight: 400; font-family: 'Lobster', cursive; } @@ -44,5 +45,30 @@ nav { font-weight: 300; } } + + .path-icon { + display: flex; + + a { + margin-left: 24px; + background-color: transparent; + border: none; + + &:hover { + text-decoration: none; + } + + .profile-image { + width: 22px; + height: 22px; + + img { + width: 22px; + height: 22px; + border-radius: 50%; + } + } + } + } } }
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font-weight:400์ด ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์†์„ฑ์ธ๋ฐ ๋”ฐ๋กœ ๋ถ€์—ฌํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,121 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import { withRouter } from 'react-router'; +import './Login.scss'; + +const REGEXP = { + emailRegExp: + /[a-zA-Z0-9.-_+!]+@[a-zA-Z0-9]+\.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,}(?:.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,3})?/, + passwordRegExp: /[a-zA-Z0-9]{5,100}/, +}; + +class Login extends React.Component { + constructor(props) { + super(props); + + this.state = { userId: '', userPw: '' }; + } + + validate = (value, regExp) => { + const reg = new RegExp(regExp); + return reg.test(value); + }; + + validateInputData = (id, pw) => { + return ( + this.validate(id, REGEXP.emailRegExp) && + this.validate(pw, REGEXP.passwordRegExp) + ); + }; + + handleInput = e => { + const { name, value } = e.target; + this.setState({ + [name]: value, + }); + }; + + handleSubmit = e => { + e.preventDefault(); + + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + if (!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)) return; + + this.props.history.push('/main'); + }; + + render() { + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + + return ( + <> + <section className="entire-container"> + <div className="entire"> + <div className="entire_top content"> + <div className="login_container"> + <h1>westagram</h1> + <div className="form_container"> + <form onSubmit={this.handleSubmit}> + <input + type="text" + name="userId" + placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ, ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ์ด๋ฆ„ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ" + value={userId} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <input + type="password" + name="userPw" + placeholder="๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" + value={userPw} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <Link to="/main"> + <button + className="login-button" + type="submit" + disabled={!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)} + onClick={this.handleSubmit} + > + ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ + </button> + </Link> + </form> + + <div className="line_container"> + <div className="line"></div> + <div className="line-word">๋˜๋Š”</div> + <div className="line"></div> + </div> + + <button className="social-login-button"> + <img + src="data:image/svg+xml;base64,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" + alt="facebook button" + /> + <span>Facebook์œผ๋กœ ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ</span> + </button> + </div> + + <Link to="/" className="search-password"> + ๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์žŠ์œผ์…จ๋‚˜์š”? + </Link> + </div> + </div> + + <div className="entire_bottom content"> + <p> + ๊ณ„์ •์ด ์—†์œผ์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?&nbsp; + <a href="https://www.instagram.com/accounts/emailsignup/"> + ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + </a> + </p> + </div> + </div> + </section> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default withRouter(Login);
JavaScript
์ด ๊ฐ’์€ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ๋‚ด๋ถ€์— ๊ฐ’์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”๊ฒŒ ์ข‹์•„๋ณด์ด๋Š”๋ฐ ์ปดํฌ๋„ŒํŠธ ๋ฐ”๊นฅ์—์„œ ์„ ์–ธํ•˜์‹  ์ด์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?
@@ -0,0 +1,121 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import { withRouter } from 'react-router'; +import './Login.scss'; + +const REGEXP = { + emailRegExp: + /[a-zA-Z0-9.-_+!]+@[a-zA-Z0-9]+\.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,}(?:.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,3})?/, + passwordRegExp: /[a-zA-Z0-9]{5,100}/, +}; + +class Login extends React.Component { + constructor(props) { + super(props); + + this.state = { userId: '', userPw: '' }; + } + + validate = (value, regExp) => { + const reg = new RegExp(regExp); + return reg.test(value); + }; + + validateInputData = (id, pw) => { + return ( + this.validate(id, REGEXP.emailRegExp) && + this.validate(pw, REGEXP.passwordRegExp) + ); + }; + + handleInput = e => { + const { name, value } = e.target; + this.setState({ + [name]: value, + }); + }; + + handleSubmit = e => { + e.preventDefault(); + + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + if (!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)) return; + + this.props.history.push('/main'); + }; + + render() { + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + + return ( + <> + <section className="entire-container"> + <div className="entire"> + <div className="entire_top content"> + <div className="login_container"> + <h1>westagram</h1> + <div className="form_container"> + <form onSubmit={this.handleSubmit}> + <input + type="text" + name="userId" + placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ, ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ์ด๋ฆ„ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ" + value={userId} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <input + type="password" + name="userPw" + placeholder="๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" + value={userPw} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <Link to="/main"> + <button + className="login-button" + type="submit" + disabled={!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)} + onClick={this.handleSubmit} + > + ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ + </button> + </Link> + </form> + + <div className="line_container"> + <div className="line"></div> + <div className="line-word">๋˜๋Š”</div> + <div className="line"></div> + </div> + + <button className="social-login-button"> + <img + src="data:image/svg+xml;base64,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" + alt="facebook button" + /> + <span>Facebook์œผ๋กœ ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ</span> + </button> + </div> + + <Link to="/" className="search-password"> + ๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์žŠ์œผ์…จ๋‚˜์š”? + </Link> + </div> + </div> + + <div className="entire_bottom content"> + <p> + ๊ณ„์ •์ด ์—†์œผ์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?&nbsp; + <a href="https://www.instagram.com/accounts/emailsignup/"> + ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + </a> + </p> + </div> + </div> + </section> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default withRouter(Login);
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```suggestion return reg.test(value) ``` test method์˜ return๊ฐ’ ์ž์ฒด๊ฐ€ boolean์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์œ„์™€ ๊ฐ™์ด ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํ‘œํ˜„ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ด๋ณด์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
@@ -0,0 +1,121 @@ +import React from 'react'; +import { Link } from 'react-router-dom'; +import { withRouter } from 'react-router'; +import './Login.scss'; + +const REGEXP = { + emailRegExp: + /[a-zA-Z0-9.-_+!]+@[a-zA-Z0-9]+\.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,}(?:.[a-zA-Z0-9]{2,3})?/, + passwordRegExp: /[a-zA-Z0-9]{5,100}/, +}; + +class Login extends React.Component { + constructor(props) { + super(props); + + this.state = { userId: '', userPw: '' }; + } + + validate = (value, regExp) => { + const reg = new RegExp(regExp); + return reg.test(value); + }; + + validateInputData = (id, pw) => { + return ( + this.validate(id, REGEXP.emailRegExp) && + this.validate(pw, REGEXP.passwordRegExp) + ); + }; + + handleInput = e => { + const { name, value } = e.target; + this.setState({ + [name]: value, + }); + }; + + handleSubmit = e => { + e.preventDefault(); + + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + if (!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)) return; + + this.props.history.push('/main'); + }; + + render() { + const { userId, userPw } = this.state; + + return ( + <> + <section className="entire-container"> + <div className="entire"> + <div className="entire_top content"> + <div className="login_container"> + <h1>westagram</h1> + <div className="form_container"> + <form onSubmit={this.handleSubmit}> + <input + type="text" + name="userId" + placeholder="์ „ํ™”๋ฒˆํ˜ธ, ์‚ฌ์šฉ์ž ์ด๋ฆ„ ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ" + value={userId} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <input + type="password" + name="userPw" + placeholder="๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ" + value={userPw} + onChange={this.handleInput} + /> + <Link to="/main"> + <button + className="login-button" + type="submit" + disabled={!this.validateInputData(userId, userPw)} + onClick={this.handleSubmit} + > + ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ + </button> + </Link> + </form> + + <div className="line_container"> + <div className="line"></div> + <div className="line-word">๋˜๋Š”</div> + <div className="line"></div> + </div> + + <button className="social-login-button"> + <img + src="data:image/svg+xml;base64,PD94bWwgdmVyc2lvbj0iMS4wIiBlbmNvZGluZz0iaXNvLTg4NTktMSI/Pg0KPCEtLSBHZW5lcmF0b3I6IEFkb2JlIElsbHVzdHJhdG9yIDE4LjAuMCwgU1ZHIEV4cG9ydCBQbHVnLUluIC4gU1ZHIFZlcnNpb246IDYuMDAgQnVpbGQgMCkgIC0tPg0KPCFET0NUWVBFIHN2ZyBQVUJMSUMgIi0vL1czQy8vRFREIFNWRyAxLjEvL0VOIiAiaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvR3JhcGhpY3MvU1ZHLzEuMS9EVEQvc3ZnMTEuZHRkIj4NCjxzdmcgdmVyc2lvbj0iMS4xIiBpZD0iQ2FwYV8xIiB4bWxucz0iaHR0cDovL3d3dy53My5vcmcvMjAwMC9zdmciIHhtbG5zOnhsaW5rPSJodHRwOi8vd3d3LnczLm9yZy8xOTk5L3hsaW5rIiB4PSIwcHgiIHk9IjBweCINCgkgdmlld0JveD0iMCAwIDQ1NS43MyA0NTUuNzMiIHN0eWxlPSJlbmFibGUtYmFja2dyb3VuZDpuZXcgMCAwIDQ1NS43MyA0NTUuNzM7IiB4bWw6c3BhY2U9InByZXNlcnZlIj4NCjxwYXRoIHN0eWxlPSJmaWxsOiMzQTU1OUY7IiBkPSJNMCwwdjQ1NS43M2gyNDIuNzA0VjI3OS42OTFoLTU5LjMzdi03MS44NjRoNTkuMzN2LTYwLjM1M2MwLTQzLjg5MywzNS41ODItNzkuNDc1LDc5LjQ3NS03OS40NzUNCgloNjIuMDI1djY0LjYyMmgtNDQuMzgyYy0xMy45NDcsMC0yNS4yNTQsMTEuMzA3LTI1LjI1NCwyNS4yNTR2NDkuOTUzaDY4LjUyMWwtOS40Nyw3MS44NjRoLTU5LjA1MVY0NTUuNzNINDU1LjczVjBIMHoiLz4NCjxnPg0KPC9nPg0KPGc+DQo8L2c+DQo8Zz4NCjwvZz4NCjxnPg0KPC9nPg0KPGc+DQo8L2c+DQo8Zz4NCjwvZz4NCjxnPg0KPC9nPg0KPGc+DQo8L2c+DQo8Zz4NCjwvZz4NCjxnPg0KPC9nPg0KPGc+DQo8L2c+DQo8Zz4NCjwvZz4NCjxnPg0KPC9nPg0KPGc+DQo8L2c+DQo8Zz4NCjwvZz4NCjwvc3ZnPg0K" + alt="facebook button" + /> + <span>Facebook์œผ๋กœ ๋กœ๊ทธ์ธ</span> + </button> + </div> + + <Link to="/" className="search-password"> + ๋น„๋ฐ€๋ฒˆํ˜ธ๋ฅผ ์žŠ์œผ์…จ๋‚˜์š”? + </Link> + </div> + </div> + + <div className="entire_bottom content"> + <p> + ๊ณ„์ •์ด ์—†์œผ์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?&nbsp; + <a href="https://www.instagram.com/accounts/emailsignup/"> + ๊ฐ€์ž…ํ•˜๊ธฐ + </a> + </p> + </div> + </div> + </section> + </> + ); + } +} + +export default withRouter(Login);
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๊ธฐ๋Šฅ๋ณ„ ํ•จ์ˆ˜ ๋ถ„๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์ž˜ ์žฌํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์‹  ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!๐Ÿ‘