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57601
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Contraband in coal mines means items which not allowed to be taken underground in a coal mine. If there is firedamp about they may start a fire or explosion.
Contraband in coal mines means items which not allowed to be taken underground in a coal mine because if there is firedamp about they may start a fire or explosion.
57602
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: In practice, many cities are hybrids of both. They may directly operate parks programs, but contract with the county for police and fire services.
In practice, many cities are hybrids of both. For instance, they may directly operate parks programs, but contract with the county for police and fire services.
57603
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Although the incidence of these types of discussions may be due to traders' psychology where it is hard to internalise a losing trade. Instead they try to find external source to blame.
Although the incidence of these types of discussions may be due to traders' psychology where it is hard to internalise a losing trade and instead they try to find external source to blame.
57604
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Despite the fact that the airplane was officially retired and had not flown since 1957, at least one F2Y was still in storage as of 1962. F2Y was redesignated F2Y under the 1962 United States Tri-Service aircraft designation system.
Despite the fact that the airplane was officially retired and had not flown since 1957, at least one F2Y was still in storage as of 1962. As a result, it was redesignated YF-7A under the 1962 United States Tri-Service aircraft designation system.
57605
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Lockheed proposed adding cesium to the jet fuel to create a cloud of ions that would help mask this effect. Since the entire idea relied on problems in the radar display systems, upgrades to these systems could render the entire concept moot.
Lockheed proposed adding cesium to the jet fuel to create a cloud of ions that would help mask this effect. Additionally, since the entire idea relied on problems in the radar display systems, upgrades to these systems could render the entire concept moot.
57606
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: A provisional defense can be made if the property converted has no value. It is well established that it is not necessary for property to have a commercial value in order to maintain an action in conversion.
A provisional defense can be made if the property converted has no value. Nevertheless, it is well established that it is not necessary for property to have a commercial value in order to maintain an action in conversion.
57607
coherence
Fix coherence errors: In general, relief through an action in conversion can proceed, even if other potential remedies have not been exhausted. Once the action in conversion is commenced, the plaintiff may be precluded from seeking concurrent remedies.
In general, relief through an action in conversion can proceed, even if other potential remedies have not been exhausted. However, once the action in conversion is commenced, the plaintiff may be precluded from seeking concurrent remedies.
57608
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The theory of trespass was that the plaintiff remained the owner of the chattel, with his possession only interrupted or interfered with. When it was tendered back to the plaintiff.
The theory of trespass was that the plaintiff remained the owner of the chattel, with his possession only interrupted or interfered with, so that when it was tendered back to the plaintiff.
57609
coherence
Make the text clearer: The fact that personal property is annexed to realty after its conversion usually does not prevent the maintenance of an action for the conversion. Opinion on this subject remains mixed.
The fact that personal property is annexed to realty after its conversion usually does not prevent the maintenance of an action for the conversion, although opinion on this subject remains mixed.
57610
coherence
Make the text more logical: The county borough was formed on 1 April 1996 by merging the districts of Aberconwy and Colwyn when it was originally named Aberconwy and Colwyn. Its council renamed the district a day later, on 2 April 1996 to Conwy.
The county borough was formed on 1 April 1996 by merging the districts of Aberconwy and Colwyn when it was originally named Aberconwy and Colwyn. However, its council renamed the district a day later, on 2 April 1996 to Conwy.
57611
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: It contains the major settlements of Llandudno, Llandudno Junction, Llanrwst, Betws-y-Coed, Conwy, Colwyn Bay, Abergele, Penmaenmawr and Llanfairfechan. It has a total population of 115,000, and borders the counties of Gwynedd and Denbighshire.
Containing the major settlements of Llandudno, Llandudno Junction, Llanrwst, Betws-y-Coed, Conwy, Colwyn Bay, Abergele, Penmaenmawr and Llanfairfechan, it has a total population of 115,000, and borders the counties of Gwynedd and Denbighshire.
57612
coherence
Make the text more logical: The name 'Superman S' comes from a belief that it was a symbol for Superman but that shape is quite different. Superman's costume features a stylised S in a diamond shape.
The name 'Superman S' comes from a belief that it was a symbol for Superman, whose costume features a stylised S in a diamond shape, but that shape is quite different.
57613
coherence
Make the text more logical: Cooper's is a bakery chain in Bangladesh. It was founded in 1984 by Cooper, a Dhaka-based British expat and World War II veteran, and Cooper's wife Sufia Cooper.
Cooper's is a bakery chain in Bangladesh. It was founded in 1984 by Douglas Cooper, a Dhaka-based British expat and World War II veteran, and his wife Sufia Cooper.
57614
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Little remains of the original rim. Remains' form can still be traced across the surface.
Little remains of the original rim, although its form can still be traced across the surface.
57615
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: Males plumage is green with more darker colors going down such as copper orange and grey. Females are brown with a green tinge.
Males plumage is green with more darker colors going down such as copper orange and grey whereas females are brown with a green tinge.
57616
coherence
Make the text more logical: After her abrupt initiation into heterosexual sex, she did not return to her grandmother's home. After her abrupt initiation into heterosexual sex, she did not go back to her mother, but rented a room for herself in Covent Garden.
After her abrupt initiation into heterosexual sex, she did not return to her grandmother's home, nor go back to her mother, but rented a room for herself in Covent Garden.
57617
coherence
Make the text more logical: After six years, she despaired of ever freeing herself from his all-encompassing influence. Fate stepped in, the procurer died of a heart attack, liberating Emma.
After six years, she despaired of ever freeing herself from his all-encompassing influence. However, fate stepped in, the procurer died of a heart attack, liberating Emma.
57618
coherence
Make the text clearer: Crouch escaped his creditors. Crouch was able to make his way to America in 1849.
Escaping his creditors, Crouch was able to make his way to America in 1849.
57619
coherence
Make the text clearer: Initially near death, he eventually recovered. The consequences of what had occurred proved disastrous for Cora Pearl's reputation.
Initially near death, he eventually recovered. Nevertheless, the consequences of what had occurred proved disastrous for Cora Pearl's reputation.
57620
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: The Core Knowledge UK curriculum facilitates pupils' sequenced learning from grade to grade. Teachers know what knowledge and skills their pupils bring to the class at the beginning of the year.
The Core Knowledge UK curriculum facilitates pupils' sequenced learning from grade to grade so that teachers know what knowledge and skills their pupils bring to the class at the beginning of the year.
57621
coherence
Fix coherence: One hypothesis explains such rapid reaction by the need to stem the possible infection from spreading into the cornea. Due to the limitations of ocular immune system the immune cells take up to several hours to arrive at the site of injury.
One hypothesis explains such rapid reaction by the need to stem the possible infection from spreading into the cornea, because due to the limitations of ocular immune system the immune cells take up to several hours to arrive at the site of injury.
57622
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: From 1964, he worked for CAN DO, an anti-poverty organization that trained teenage boys to do construction. He formed Poverty Organization of Rehabilitation (POOR) and Grass Rooters Interested in Poverty Elimination (GRIPE).
From 1964, he worked for CAN DO, an anti-poverty organization that trained teenage boys to do construction. Then, he formed Poverty Organization of Rehabilitation (POOR) and Grass Rooters Interested in Poverty Elimination (GRIPE).
57623
coherence
Make the text coherent: On August 6, 2008, Ingram seriously injured knee ligaments during fall practice. Ingram missed Ingram's entire senior season.
On August 6, 2008, Ingram seriously injured knee ligaments during fall practice. As a result, he missed his entire senior season.
57624
coherence
Fix sentence transition: These do in a humbler way. Perhaps as effectually.
These do in a humbler way, although perhaps as effectually.
57625
coherence
Fix coherence: Most of the CVR was sold to adjacent landowners. Portions of the roadbed remain as informal hiking and snowmobile trails.
Most of the CVR was sold to adjacent landowners, although portions of the roadbed remain as informal hiking and snowmobile trails.
57626
coherence
Make the text more consistent: C. violaceorubens has a dark purple-brown cap. That of C. boreicyanites is more bluish.
C. violaceorubens has a dark purple-brown cap, while that of C. boreicyanites is more bluish.
57627
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Idol judge, Ian Dickson, claimed that she would have won. Following medical advice, she withdrew from the competition and underwent speech therapy allowing fellow contestant Shannon Noll to join Guy Sebastian in the series grand final.
Idol judge, Ian Dickson, claimed that she would have won. However, following medical advice, she withdrew from the competition and underwent speech therapy allowing fellow contestant Shannon Noll to join Guy Sebastian in the series grand final.
57628
coherence
Make the text more consistent: It was produced by male and female DJ duo 'Tho $ e Deejayz'. On 1 December 2012 Cosima released a version of O Holy Night.
It was produced by male and female DJ duo 'Tho $ e Deejayz'. Additionally, on 1 December 2012 Cosima released a version of O Holy Night.
57629
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Early 2005 De Vito had been in the studio working on her second studio album. This Is Now.
Since early 2005 De Vito had been in the studio working on her second studio album, This Is Now.
57630
coherence
Fix sentence flow: If two random variables exhibit positive coskewness they will tend to undergo extreme positive deviations at the same time. If two random variables exhibit negative coskewness variables will tend to undergo extreme negative deviations at the same time.
If two random variables exhibit positive coskewness they will tend to undergo extreme positive deviations at the same time. Similarly, if two random variables exhibit negative coskewness they will tend to undergo extreme negative deviations at the same time.
57631
coherence
Make the text more coherent: The condition is treatable. There is an alarmingly high rate of suicide within BDD sufferers.
The condition is treatable although there is an alarmingly high rate of suicide within BDD sufferers.
57632
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Many of these treatments. Not life-threatening are seen to some as enhancing the animals quality of life.
Many of these treatments although not life-threatening are seen to some as enhancing the animals quality of life.
57633
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: This condition is not painful. Some suggest there are mental side effects of the condition.
This condition is not painful although some suggest there are mental side effects of the condition.
57634
coherence
Fix sentence flow: They praised the album's composition and sound, and also highlighted several songs from the album. Some noted that the material and commercial appeal of the songs were repetitive and predictable since their last albums.
They praised the album's composition and sound, and also highlighted several songs from the album. However, some noted that the material and commercial appeal of the songs were repetitive and predictable since their last albums.
57635
coherence
Make the text more consistent: In winter the nearby Abri Simond Hut is left unlocked. This has no cooking facilities.
In winter the nearby Abri Simond Hut is left unlocked, although this has no cooking facilities.
57636
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Costoanachis scutulata is a species of sea snail the dove snails. A species of sea snail is a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Columbellidae.
Costoanachis scutulata is a species of sea snail, a marine gastropod mollusk in the family Columbellidae, the dove snails.
57637
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Thereafter, the list has continuously expanded. During the 1992-98 period.
Thereafter, the list has continuously expanded so that during the 1992-98 period.
57638
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: The earliest warehouses were built around King Street. By 1850 warehouses had spread to Portland Street and later to Whitworth Street.
The earliest warehouses were built around King Street although by 1850 warehouses had spread to Portland Street and later to Whitworth Street.
57639
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Counter-Strike: Condition Zero was released in 2004. Condition Zero is a game using Counter-Strike's GoldSrc engine.
Counter-Strike: Condition Zero, a game using Counter-Strike's GoldSrc engine, was released in 2004.
57640
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: This can help with detecting some cheaters. Most paid for cheats are designed to bypass these alternative server-based anticheats.
This can help with detecting some cheaters, but most paid for cheats are designed to bypass these alternative server-based anticheats.
57641
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: The finances made available for transport was criticised by the associations as inadequate. No provision was made for the training of drivers in infantry battalions until 1910 when, after pressure from the associations, the War Office made funds available for this purpose.
The finances made available for transport was criticised by the associations as inadequate. In particular, no provision was made for the training of drivers in infantry battalions until 1910 when, after pressure from the associations, the War Office made funds available for this purpose.
57642
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Niemiec was signed by the Portland Thorns on April 9, 2014 as a free agent. On June 24, 2015, the Portland Thorns waived Niemiec Niemiec.
Niemiec was signed by the Portland Thorns on April 9, 2014 as a free agent. On June 24, 2015, the Portland Thorns FC waived defender Courtney Niemiec.
57643
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: There are situations whereby a single Lewis structure is insufficient to explain the electron configuration in a molecule,. A superposition of structures are needed.
There are situations whereby a single Lewis structure is insufficient to explain the electron configuration in a molecule, hence a superposition of structures are needed.
57644
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 2007, Crowe made his debut for Berkshire in the 2007 Minor Counties Championship against Wales Minor Counties. From 2007 to present, Crowe has represented the county in 19 Minor Counties Championship matches.
In 2007, Crowe made his debut for Berkshire in the 2007 Minor Counties Championship against Wales Minor Counties. From 2007 to present, he has represented the county in 19 Minor Counties Championships matches.
57645
coherence
Make the text coherent: Kelly graduated in 1992. Kelly played a minor speaking role in Titanic as Assistant Wireless Operator, Harold Bride and also as Russell Muir in the film When Saturday Comes.
Graduating in 1992, Kelly played a minor speaking role in Titanic as Assistant Wireless Operator, Harold Bride and also as Russell Muir in the film When Saturday Comes.
57646
coherence
Make the text more coherent: The Sell-In (2000) documents the rise of the Australia's alternative music scene. How that success attracted the interest of the music industry's major labels.
The Sell-In (2000) documents the rise of the Australia's alternative music scene and how that success attracted the interest of the music industry's major labels.
57647
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Morgan released his third album in 2004. His third album is my Kind of Livin '.
Morgan released his third album, My Kind of Livin ', in 2004.
57648
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Vetter wanted to run a team. Vetter procured the services of English-born AMA Superbike Championship winner Reg Pridmore for the 1978 season to ride a team Vetter Kawasaki Z1000 prepared by (the late) Pierre Des Roches.
Wanting to run a team, Vetter procured the services of English-born AMA Superbike Championship winner Reg Pridmore for the 1978 season to ride a team Vetter Kawasaki Z1000 prepared by (the late) Pierre Des Roches.
57649
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Originally Cranbrook and Kingswood schools were affiliated with the Episcopal Church, but they have since secularized. Special occasions are still celebrated at Christ Church Cranbrook.
Originally Cranbrook and Kingswood schools were affiliated with the Episcopal Church, but they have since secularized. However, special occasions are still celebrated at Christ Church Cranbrook.
57650
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: Sites in the Western Isles do not satisfy this criterion. Sites' inhabitants shared the common habit of living on water.
Sites in the Western Isles do not satisfy this criterion, although their inhabitants shared the common habit of living on water.
57651
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: Since E 1 (\\ displaystyle E_ (1) ) and E 2 (\\ displaystyle E_ (2) ) are mutually exclusive, the craps principle applies. If the original roll was a 4, then the probability of winning is
Since E 1 (\\ displaystyle E_ (1) ) and E 2 (\\ displaystyle E_ (2) ) are mutually exclusive, the craps principle applies. For example, if the original roll was a 4, then the probability of winning is
57652
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Deceased accident victims could not be employed. Any data that might be collected from such experimental subjects would be compromised by the cadaver's previous injuries.
Deceased accident victims could not be employed because any data that might be collected from such experimental subjects would be compromised by the cadaver's previous injuries.
57653
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: In addition, child cadavers were not only difficult to obtain, but both legal and public opinion made them effectively unusable. As crash testing became more routine, suitable cadavers became increasingly scarce.
In addition, child cadavers were not only difficult to obtain, but both legal and public opinion made them effectively unusable. Moreover, as crash testing became more routine, suitable cadavers became increasingly scarce.
57654
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: No two cadavers are the same, and since any specific part of a cadaver could only be used once. It was extremely difficult to achieve reliable comparison data.
Since no two cadavers are the same, and since any specific part of a cadaver could only be used once, it was extremely difficult to achieve reliable comparison data.
57655
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: General Motors, who had taken over the impetus in developing a reliable and durable dummy, found neither Sierra model satisfied its needs. General Motors engineers decided to combine the best features of the VIP series and Sierra Stan, and so in 1971 Hybrid I was born.
General Motors, who had taken over the impetus in developing a reliable and durable dummy, found neither Sierra model satisfied its needs. GM engineers decided to combine the best features of the VIP series and Sierra Stan, and so in 1971 Hybrid I was born.
57656
coherence
Fix coherence: In the late 1930s there was no reliable data on how the human body responds to the sudden, violent forces acting on it in an automobile accident. No effective tools existed to measure such responses.
In the late 1930s there was no reliable data on how the human body responds to the sudden, violent forces acting on it in an automobile accident. Furthermore, no effective tools existed to measure such responses.
57657
coherence
Make the text coherent: This seems to lessen ethical dilemmas in contrast to animal testing. There is no sufficient way to get consent to use an animal.
This seems to lessen ethical dilemmas in contrast to animal testing, because there is no sufficient way to get consent to use an animal.
57658
coherence
Fix sentence transition: It is,., difficult to use cadavers instead of animals because of human rights.
It is, although, difficult to use cadavers instead of animals because of human rights.
57659
coherence
Fix coherence errors: The child models are very recent additions to the crash test dummy family ;. So little hard data are available on the effects of accidents on children and such data are very difficult to obtain.
The child models are very recent additions to the crash test dummy family ; because so little hard data are available on the effects of accidents on children and such data are very difficult to obtain.
57660
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The mushroom is usually almost black, and it is hard to find. Mushroom's dark colour easily blends in with the leaf litter on the forest floor.
The mushroom is usually almost black, and it is hard to find because its dark colour easily blends in with the leaf litter on the forest floor.
57661
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Between 1915 and 1952, Kent appeared in 208 films. Frequently without screen credit.
Between 1915 and 1952, Kent appeared in 208 films, although frequently without screen credit.
57662
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Suddenly they spot a yacht sitting in the middle of the ocean and they go to investigate and to find shelter. In fact the yacht was a secret laboratory studying mutated fish results of radioactive plankton.
Suddenly they spot a yacht sitting in the middle of the ocean and they go to investigate and to find shelter. But in fact the yacht was a secret laboratory studying mutated fish results of radioactive plankton.
57663
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Dark rum is preferred. Since most of the alcohol is burned away.
Dark rum is preferred, although since most of the alcohol is burned away.
57664
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Patients treated with high-dose intravenous crenuzumab showed non-significant reductions in both cognitive decline and global function decline. Patients who received subcutaneous crenezumab did not improve on either measure.
Patients treated with high-dose intravenous crenuzumab showed non-significant reductions in both cognitive decline and global function decline, while patients who received subcutaneous crenezumab did not improve on either measure.
57665
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: It is a full member of the International Cricket Council and African Cricket Association, and operates the Zimbabwean cricket team, organising Test tours and One Day Internationals with other nations. Zimbabwean also organises domestic cricket in Zimbabwean.
It is a full member of the International Cricket Council and African Cricket Association, and operates the Zimbabwean cricket team, organising Test tours and One Day Internationals with other nations. It also organises domestic cricket in Zimbabwe.
57666
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: As official cricket clubs began to form, some black players were given the opportunity to play for white-majority clubs. Many cricket clubs remained exclusively white, forcing black players to establish their own clubs that would only allow other blacks to join.
As official cricket clubs began to form, some black players were given the opportunity to play for white-majority clubs. However, many cricket clubs remained exclusively white, forcing black players to establish their own clubs that would only allow other blacks to join.
57667
coherence
Make the text more logical: Jump up ^ Gore was also elected for Colchester and never sat for Cricklade Jump up ^ Gore was also elected for Colchester he chose to represent.
Jump up ^ Gore was also elected for Colchester, which he chose to represent, and never sat for Cricklade
57668
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The two lines joined south-east of Crieff and shared a station on the south side of the town. They each had their own engine shed.
The two lines joined south-east of Crieff and shared a station on the south side of the town. However they each had their own engine shed.
57669
coherence
Fix coherence: Although the hoped for tourist trade developed somewhat, changing social patterns limited the extent to which either of the Comrie lines benefitted. The connectional arrangements at Lochearnhead were never made convenient.
Although the hoped for tourist trade developed somewhat, changing social patterns limited the extent to which either of the Comrie lines benefitted. Moreover, the connectional arrangements at Lochearnhead were never made convenient.
57670
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: Accordingly, recorded crime statistics need to be treated with great caution and have sometimes been shown to show opposite trends to victim surveys or to violence as measured by hospital intake. Police figures are usually the only available way to gauge local crime.
Accordingly, recorded crime statistics need to be treated with great caution and have sometimes been shown to show opposite trends to victim surveys or to violence as measured by hospital intake. However, police figures are usually the only available way to gauge local crime.
57671
coherence
Make the text more logical: Further, using annual statistics for 2017, New York has a significantly higher homicide rate than London, with New York recording 3.4 homicides per 100,000 people. London recorded 1.2.
Further, using annual statistics for 2017, New York has a significantly higher homicide rate than London, with New York recording 3.4 homicides per 100,000 people whereas London recorded 1.2.
57672
coherence
Make the text more consistent: The CID was created by Michael Collins and many of its personnel were former Irish Republican Army fighters whom he had commanded during the Irish War of Independence. A number came from the Squad, a Dublin-based Irish Republican Army assassination unit.
The CID was created by Michael Collins and many of its personnel were former Irish Republican Army fighters whom he had commanded during the Irish War of Independence. In particular, a number came from the Squad, a Dublin-based IRA assassination unit.
57673
coherence
Make the text more logical: With Chicago under my control, the Industrial States will rally under the might of Die Spinne! I lead the great tide of fascism west to the People's Collective, and east to overrun the Empire State!
With Chicago under my control, the Industrial States will rally under the might of Die Spinne! Then, I lead the great tide of fascism west to the People's Collective, and east to overrun the Empire State!
57674
coherence
Make the text clearer: They repel the threat. They find that the attackers have still succeeded in killing the Doc.
Although they repel the threat, they find that the attackers have still succeeded in killing the Doc.
57675
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Nathan remembers how the whole ordeal started. Nathan declines, saying that he is going to stay away from the gambling tables for a while.
Remembering how the whole ordeal started, Nathan declines, saying that he is going to stay away from the gambling tables for a while.
57676
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Nonetheless, there are significant differences between the gameplay of High Road to Revenge and that of the original PC title. While the Xbox game has a more open-ended mission structure, it offers less plane customization than the PC game.
Nonetheless, there are significant differences between the gameplay of High Road to Revenge and that of the original PC title. For example, while the Xbox game has a more open-ended mission structure, it offers less plane customization than the PC game.
57677
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Doc suspects that Von Essen had been behind the break-in. Doc entrusts Nathan with the schematics for the turbine.
Suspecting that Von Essen had been behind the break-in, Doc entrusts Nathan with the schematics for the turbine.
57678
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: The game was originally announced in March 2002 for a release that fall. Developers postponed the release date to give them time to retool the game.
The game was originally announced in March 2002 for a release that fall. However, developers postponed the release date to give them time to retool the game.
57679
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Meanwhile, Jimmy, a new handicapped boy, comes to town and also joins Mountain Scouts. boy is a stand-up comedian and immediately becomes very popular.
Meanwhile, Jimmy, a new handicapped boy, comes to town and also joins Mountain Scouts. Jimmy is a stand-up comedian and immediately becomes very popular.
57680
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Hunter declares his intent for revenge. Hunter engages and loses to Squad 1.
Declaring his intent for revenge, Hunter engages and loses to Squad 1.
57681
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Cristal is produced by Embotelladora Azuaya S.A. and has been offered for 45 years. The tradition of making and bottling aguardiente in the valleys of the province of Azuay goes back much further.
Cristal is produced by Embotelladora Azuaya S.A. and has been offered for 45 years. however the tradition of making and bottling aguardiente in the valleys of the province of Azuay goes back much further.
57682
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: There was no Spain for Margaret that autumn ;. To the last Margaret hoped that some fortunate occasion would call Frederick to Paris.
There was no Spain for Margaret that autumn ; although to the last she hoped that some fortunate occasion would call Frederick to Paris.
57683
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Flanagan and Elkin both lodged their appeals to the findings in early 2014. Both were dismissed and their suspensions stood.
Flanagan and Elkin both lodged their appeals to the findings in early 2014, but both were dismissed and their suspensions stood.
57684
coherence
Make the text clearer: It was charted in 1930 by Discovery Investigations personnel on the Discovery II, and so named. Numerous crosscutting dikes have withstood weathering and produced this irregular formation.
It was charted in 1930 by Discovery Investigations personnel on the Discovery II, and so named because numerous crosscutting dikes have withstood weathering and produced this irregular formation.
57685
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: That box also previously controlled the now-closed line that connected the line from Hindley & Wigan northwards to the Bolton-Chorley & Preston main line south of Blackrod. That was formerly used by Wigan to Blackburn trains until January 1960.
That box also previously controlled the now-closed line that connected the line from Hindley & Wigan northwards to the Bolton-Chorley & Preston main line south of Blackrod and that was formerly used by Wigan to Blackburn trains until January 1960.
57686
coherence
Make the text more consistent: The British also became wary of Australian intention to control military administration of Sarawak. The British government would like to take control of Sarawak before the Australian did.
The British also became wary of Australian intention to control military administration of Sarawak. Thus, the British government would like to take control of Sarawak before the Australians did.
57687
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: She was a menacing student with black and white plaits, and was expelled for drinking ink. Student appears to be on friendlier terms with Mrs. Dearly when they encounter each other at the beginning of the novel, before student steals Dearly's puppies.
She was a menacing student with black and white plaits, and was expelled for drinking ink. However, she appears to be on friendlier terms with Mrs. Dearly when they encounter each other at the beginning of the novel, before Cruella steals Dearly's puppies.
57688
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: She realizes at the last second that the puppies are the Dalmatians in disguise. She pursues the van in her car as it leaves town.
Realizing at the last second that the puppies are the Dalmatians in disguise, she pursues the van in her car as it leaves town.
57689
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: However, as the days go by, the police still suspect her. She goes into hiding at her old mansion, Hell Hall at Suffolk, where Jasper and Horace and the puppies reside, proving that she was the mastermind behind the theft.
However, as the days go by, the police still suspect her, so she goes into hiding at her old mansion, Hell Hall at Suffolk, where Jasper and Horace and the puppies reside, proving that she was the mastermind behind the theft.
57690
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Cruella mistook David for James. Cruella made a move on him, then informed him of the hostility James held toward his brother.
Mistaking David for James, Cruella made a move on him, then informed him of the hostility James held toward his brother.
57691
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The diameter and area of the thallus exponentially increase, provided that organic substances are distributed uniformly in all parts of the lichens. As the thallus increases in size, the circumference also increases, which corresponds to a larger ...
The diameter and area of the thallus exponentially increase, provided that organic substances are distributed uniformly in all parts of the lichens. However, as the thallus increases in size, the circumference also increases, which corresponds to a larger increase in volume.
57692
coherence
Make the text more logical: Nick then cries with Juliette on his arms. Outside the house, cars begin to appear and agents begin to surround the house.
Nick then cries with Juliette on his arms. Meanwhile, outside the house, cars begin to appear and agents begin to surround the house.
57693
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: This protein is a good candidate for use as a molecular vaccine. Previous studies have shown that a monoclonal antibody to protein confers passive immunity to mice.
This protein is a good candidate for use as a molecular vaccine because previous studies have shown that a monoclonal antibody to CP15 confers passive immunity to mice.
57694
coherence
Make the text clearer: In order to prevent online leaking of the record, Last Gang did not issue any previews of it. An article published in Now in February 2008 reported of a fake version of the LP published around several file-sharing sites and garnering numerous downloads.
In order to prevent online leaking of the record, Last Gang did not issue any previews of it. However, an article published in Now in February 2008 reported of a fake version of the LP published around several file-sharing sites and garnering numerous downloads.
57695
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He was a favorite spot to James Irvine II. He allowed his friends and family as well as employees to build cottages on the area that we now refer to as Crystal Cove.
Being a favorite spot to James Irvine II, he allowed his friends and family as well as employees to build cottages on the area that we now refer to as Crystal Cove.
57696
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: None are accessible by car, only by hike. Are for up to 4 people per site.
None are accessible by car, only by hike, and are for up to 4 people per site.
57697
coherence
Fix coherence errors: The bands found common ground. Bands '2015 shows would typically end with Teri Gender Bender joining the Melvins onstage to perform covers of Pop-O-Pies' Fascists Eat Donuts and Bikini Kill's Rebel Girl.
The bands found common ground and their 2015 shows would typically end with Teri Gender Bender joining the Melvins onstage to perform covers of Pop-O-Pies' Fascists Eat Donuts and Bikini Kill's Rebel Girl.
57698
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In algebraic topology, cubical complexes are often useful for concrete calculations. There is a definition of homology for cubical complexes that coincides with the singular homology, but is computable.
In algebraic topology, cubical complexes are often useful for concrete calculations. In particular, there is a definition of homology for cubical complexes that coincides with the singular homology, but is computable.
57699
coherence
Make the text more logical: During the Corsican independence before the French annexation, Pasquale Paoli tried to enrich the diet of his countrymen encouraging the cultivation of the potato. Pasquale Paoli's political opponents Pasquale Paoli him, Pasquale Paoli him Il Generale delle patate.
During the Corsican independence before the French annexation, Pasquale Paoli tried to enrich the diet of his countrymen encouraging the cultivation of the potato, so his political opponents ridiculed him, calling him Il Generale delle patate.
57700
coherence
Fix sentence flow: A few during summer went to reap the corn in the malaria plain of Aleria. Often after that few lost few's health or life.
A few during summer went to reap the corn in the malaria plain of Aleria, but often after that they lost their health or life.