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coherence
Make the text clearer: Amanda just wanted to be treated like any other person. Amanda did not tell him who Amanda's parents were, and since he did not Amanda her at the debutante ball, he remained blissfully unaware.
Amanda just wanted to be treated like any other person, so she did not tell him who her parents were, and since he did not see her at the debutante ball, he remained blissfully unaware.
61302
coherence
Make the text more coherent: The Samoan-born North Melbourne star attended most of the games involving Samoa in person during the 2008 cup. Star was not allowed to represent Samoan under the AFL International Cup criteria.
The Samoan-born North Melbourne star attended most of the games involving Samoa in person during the 2008 cup, although he was not allowed to represent Samoa under the AFL International Cup criteria.
61303
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: The Senate confirmed Nelson's appointment on February 14, 1845, after just ten days. Nelson was the only Supreme Court Justice to be appointed by President Tyler.
The Senate confirmed Nelson's appointment on February 14, 1845, after just ten days. Samuel Nelson was the only Supreme Court Justice to be appointed by President Tyler.
61304
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The refuge, comprising 316 acres (1.28 km) of salt marsh and coastal uplands surrounded by urban development, is a critically important area for wildlife. Over 90 percent of the historic wetlands of San Diego Bay have been filled in.
The refuge, comprising 316 acres (1.28 km) of salt marsh and coastal uplands surrounded by urban development, is a critically important area for wildlife because over 90 percent of the historic wetlands of San Diego Bay have been filled in.
61305
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Athletic Facilities-Sandia Prep recently completed a $1 Million+ renovation of its track and soccer stadium. As well, the Sandia Prep has an additional soccer field, one baseball field, one softball field, and four tennis courts.
Athletic Facilities-Sandia Prep recently completed a $1 Million+ renovation of its track and soccer stadium. As well, the School has an additional soccer field, one baseball field, one softball field, and four tennis courts.
61306
coherence
Make the text more logical: Sari is a town and Village Development Committee in Pyuthan western Nepal. Village Development Committee in Pyuthan is a Middle Hills district of Rapti Zone.
Sari is a town and Village Development Committee in Pyuthan, a Middle Hills district of Rapti Zone, western Nepal.
61307
coherence
Make the text more consistent: In the Epigraphia Carnatica, two of the 41 cases of sati in the time period 1400 to 1600 CE are those of Jain women. The low numbers of Jain known to have committed sati suggests that the practice was uncommon within this community.
In the Epigraphia Carnatica, two of the 41 cases of sati in the time period 1400 to 1600 CE are those of Jain women. The low numbers of Jains known to have committed sati suggests that the practice was uncommon within this community.
61308
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Charles Napier clarified in 1843 that anyone involved in this custom would be executed and their property confiscated. According to an account of Charles Napier's administration, there were no more sati thereafter, in the Charles Napier Napier adm...
Charles Napier clarified in 1843 that anyone involved in this custom would be executed and their property confiscated. According to an account of his administration, there were no more sati thereafter, in the region Napier administered.
61309
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: The low numbers of Jains known to have committed sati suggests that the practice was uncommon within this community. In Jains, the alternate competing phenomenon of widows becoming nuns, after a husband's death, has been recorded.
The low numbers of Jains known to have committed sati suggests that the practice was uncommon within this community. In Jainism, the alternate competing phenomenon of widows becoming nuns, after a husband's death, has been recorded.
61310
coherence
Make the text coherent: In the Musala-parvan of the Mahabharata, the four wives of Vasudeva are said to commit sati. As news of Krishna's death reaches Hastinapur, five of his wives choose to burn themselves.
In the Musala-parvan of the Mahabharata, the four wives of Vasudeva are said to commit sati. Furthermore, as news of Krishna's death reaches Hastinapur, five of his wives choose to burn themselves.
61311
coherence
Fix coherence errors: From 1989 to his death in 2002, Ahmed bin Salman was the chairman of the company. Ahmed bin Salman's younger brother Faisal bin Salman became chairman chairman of company company.
From 1989 to his death in 2002, Ahmed bin Salman was the chairman of the company. Then, his younger brother Faisal bin Salman became the chairman of the company.
61312
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: A year later when Savitri sees Yama carrying Satyavan's soul she follows and discourses with him, while continuing her pursuit. Yama tells Savitri Savitri can ask three boons of Yama except for Satyavan's life.
A year later when Savitri sees Yama carrying Satyavan's soul she follows and discourses with him, while continuing her pursuit. Finally, Yama tells her she can ask three boons of him except for Satyavan's life.
61313
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Scorpion realizes that this is not the original Sub-Zero. Instead his younger brother, who was sent to complete the elder Sub-Zero failed mission of assassinating Shang Tsung.
Scorpion realizes that this is not the original Sub-Zero but instead his younger brother, who was sent to complete the elder Sub-Zero's failed mission of assassinating Shang Tsung.
61314
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Hanzo freed Quan Chi from imprisonment. Hanzo challenged Quan Chi to a final battle, with Hanzo emerging victorious.
Freeing Quan Chi from imprisonment, Hanzo challenged Quan Chi to a final battle, with Hanzo emerging victorious.
61315
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: As it is not part of the National Qualifications Framework of England, Wales and Northern Ireland, it is not available to state schools there. Students from other nations do study for the qualification.
As it is not part of the National Qualifications Framework of England, Wales and Northern Ireland, it is not available to state schools there, but students from other nations do study for the qualification.
61316
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: However, the equivalent (but lower in precedence) Air Force rank of air commodore is classified as an air officer and. Has two rows of golden oak leaves.
However, the equivalent (but lower in precedence) Air Force rank of air commodore is classified as an air officer and hence has two rows of golden oak leaves.
61317
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Critics would object to associating geology with the Bible as a repetition of the mistakes the church made at the time of Galileo. Bugg held that there was a significant difference.
Although critics would object to associating geology with the Bible as a repetition of the mistakes the church made at the time of Galileo, Bugg held that there was a significant difference.
61318
coherence
Make the text more logical: O'Connor argues that terminology in the 21st-century is a stumbling-block to modern analysis of geologic competence of the scriptural geologists. Science today is understood in the language of Lyell and Darwin rather than that of Penn and Fairholme.
O'Connor argues that terminology in the 21st-century is a stumbling-block to modern analysis of geologic competence of the scriptural geologists because science today is understood in the language of Lyell and Darwin rather than that of Penn and Fairholme.
61319
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Infantile scurvy emerged in the late 19th century. Children were being fed pasteurized cow's milk.
Infantile scurvy emerged in the late 19th century because children were being fed pasteurized cow's milk.
61320
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Scurvy was described as early as the time of ancient Egypt. Scurvy was a limiting Scurvy in long distance sea travel, often killing large numbers of people.
Scurvy was described as early as the time of ancient Egypt. It was a limiting factor in long distance sea travel, often killing large numbers of people.
61321
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: This occurred in the aftermath of the Andalusian independentist conspiracy, an effort by the House of Medina Sidonia to consolidate power at the expense of the Spanish crown. Much of their holdings were confiscated by the crown.
This occurred in the aftermath of the Andalusian independentist conspiracy, an effort by the House of Medina Sidonia to consolidate power at the expense of the Spanish crown. As a result, much of their holdings were confiscated by the crown.
61322
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The nature of the zone of weakness itself is surely a factor. Difficult to quantify.
The nature of the zone of weakness itself is surely a factor, although difficult to quantify.
61323
coherence
Make the text coherent: Vettel went on to lead most of the race. A spark-plug failure meant that Vettel's lap times slowed down, and as a result the two Ferraris and the McLaren of Lewis Hamilton Vettel him.
Vettel went on to lead most of the race but a spark-plug failure meant that his lap times slowed down, and as a result the two Ferraris and the McLaren of Lewis Hamilton passed him.
61324
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Vettel ended his long-term association with the team. Vettel activated a clause to end his contract with Red Bull early after the 2014 season.
Ending his long-term association with the team, Vettel activated a clause to end his contract with Red Bull early after the 2014 season.
61325
coherence
Fix coherence: Players before him played in defunct American leagues. Vorbe became just the second Haitian player ever (to Patrick Tardieu), to play for the MLS since its 1993 creation.
Although players before him played in defunct American leagues, Vorbe became just the second Haitian player ever (to Patrick Tardieu), to play for the MLS since its 1993 creation.
61326
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: Napoleon surveys the battlefield from high atop his mobile command post. Napoleon uses his powerful blunderbuss pistol to attack his foes.
Surveying the battlefield from high atop his mobile command post, Napoleon uses his powerful blunderbuss pistol to attack his foes.
61327
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: The importance of snakes in the diet has been exaggerated in the past. Snakes can be locally important and venomous snakes such as adders and cobras are regularly among the types of snake preyed upon.
The importance of snakes in the diet has been exaggerated in the past, although they can be locally important and venomous species such as adders and cobras are regularly among the types of snake preyed upon.
61328
coherence
Fix coherence: The students not only managed to disable the system but also were able to add votes, change votes, and manipulate the program. Once voters cast their ballots.
The students not only managed to disable the system but also were able to add votes, change votes, and manipulate the program so that once voters cast their ballots.
61329
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Every apartment today has air conditioning units, there are louvered doors. Which are screen-like, allowing ventilation to the halls and between apartments.
Although every apartment today has air conditioning units, there are louvered doors, which are screen-like, allowing ventilation to the halls and between apartments.
61330
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Seeta bint Abdulaziz was very active in charitable efforts. Seeta bint Abdulaziz was also active in forming women groups such as the Princesses' Council.
Seeta bint Abdulaziz was very active in charitable efforts. But, she was also active in forming women groups such as the Princesses' Council.
61331
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Seibu 101 series, 2000 series, and 3000 series EMUs are used on this line. These trains are painted in Seibu's distinctive yellow livery.
Seibu 101 series, 2000 series, and 3000 series EMUs are used on this line. These trains are painted in Seibu Railway's distinctive yellow livery.
61332
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Groupings may make prey more conspicuous to predators and may increase intraspecific competition. Individuals in the desired central positions may have lower feeding rates and may be less vigilant.
Groupings may make prey more conspicuous to predators and may increase intraspecific competition. Furthermore, individuals in the desired central positions may have lower feeding rates and may be less vigilant.
61333
coherence
Make the text more logical: The solutions of the Wannier equation can produces valuable insight to the basic properties of a semiconductor's optical response. One can solve the steady-state solutions of the SBEs to predict optical absorption spectrum analytically with the so-called Elliott formula.
The solutions of the Wannier equation can produces valuable insight to the basic properties of a semiconductor's optical response. In particular, one can solve the steady-state solutions of the SBEs to predict optical absorption spectrum analytically with the so-called Elliott formula.
61334
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: An equivalent set of equations can also be formulated in position space. Especially, the correlation computations are much simpler to be performed in the momentum space.
An equivalent set of equations can also be formulated in position space. However, especially, the correlation computations are much simpler to be performed in the momentum space.
61335
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Descriptions such as 'the President of the U.S. in 1970' do not designate the same in every possible world. Someone other than Richard Nixon, e.g. Hubert Humphrey, might have been the President in 1970.
Descriptions such as 'the President of the U.S. in 1970' do not designate the same in every possible world. For example, someone other than Richard Nixon, e.g. Hubert Humphrey, might have been the President in 1970.
61336
coherence
Make the text more coherent: When King Myeongjong died young without an heir, Prince Haseong was the next in the line of succession. By decision of the royal court, he was crowned king in 1567 at the age of 16.
When King Myeongjong died young without an heir, Prince Haseong was the next in the line of succession. Then, by decision of the royal court, he was crowned king in 1567 at the age of 16.
61337
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: He is known for encouraging Confucianism and renovating state affairs at the beginning of his reign. Political chaos and his incompetent leadership during the Japanese invasions of Korea marred his later years.
He is known for encouraging Confucianism and renovating state affairs at the beginning of his reign, although political chaos and his incompetent leadership during the Japanese invasions of Korea marred his later years.
61338
coherence
Make the text more consistent: The UK has an embassy and consulate in Belgrade and Serbia has an embassy in London. The Serbia ambassador to the UK is Dr Dejan Popovic and the UK ambassador to Serbia is Denis Keefe.
The UK has an embassy and consulate in Belgrade and Serbia has an embassy in London. The Serbian ambassador to the United Kingdom is Dr Dejan Popovic and the British ambassador to Serbia is Denis Keefe.
61339
coherence
Make the text more consistent: According to some opinions one is required to recite kiddush at this meal. Most say it is not necessary.
Although according to some opinions one is required to recite kiddush at this meal, most say it is not necessary.
61340
coherence
Make the text coherent: Delegates to a session are appointed by organizations at a lower level. Each local church appoints delegates to a conference session.
Delegates to a session are appointed by organizations at a lower level. For example, each local church appoints delegates to a conference session.
61341
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Even when cases are reported to police, they often can not be prosecuted. Victims decide not to go forward with a case.
Even when cases are reported to police, they often can not be prosecuted because victims decide not to go forward with a case.
61342
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Kirt's mission is to stop the demons once and for all. First Kirt will need to awaken Kirt's innate shapeshifting powers, which is where the obelisks come into play.
Kirt's mission is to stop the demons once and for all, but first he will need to awaken his innate shapeshifting powers, which is where the obelisks come into play.
61343
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Chainless bicycles were moderately popular in 1898 and 1899. Sales were still much smaller than regular bicycles.
Chainless bicycles were moderately popular in 1898 and 1899, although sales were still much smaller than regular bicycles.
61344
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Tam Lin, once seized by Janet, was transformed by the faeries to keep Janet from taking him. As Tam Lin had advised Janet, Janet did not let go, and so freed Tam Lin.
Tam Lin, once seized by Janet, was transformed by the faeries to keep Janet from taking him, but as he had advised her, she did not let go, and so freed him.
61345
coherence
Fix coherence: The Niburians are thought to be the secret mentors and protectors of humanity. Out of fear and distrust, Niburians have been hunted and killed by other alien races and are all but extinct.
The Niburians are thought to be the secret mentors and protectors of humanity. However, out of fear and distrust, they have been hunted and killed by other alien races and are all but extinct.
61346
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Contract workers are not guaranteed any benefits and pay can be below average. If Contract workers are Contract workers, Contract workers are granted access to benefits and pay is generally higher.
Contract workers are not guaranteed any benefits and pay can be below average. However, if they are employees, they are granted access to benefits and pay is generally higher.
61347
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Winnipeg-based CanWest Global purchased the naming rights to the ballpark when it opened in 1999. CanWest Global later became Canwest Park after the media company's name change in 2008.
Winnipeg-based CanWest Global purchased the naming rights to the ballpark when it opened in 1999. CanWest Global Park later became Canwest Park after the media company's name change in 2008.
61348
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Because of the military post Sheridan continued to flourish. Eventually the post was shut down, and it is now a mental health facility that borders Sheridan.
Because of the military post Sheridan continued to flourish. However, eventually the post was shut down, and it is now a mental health facility that borders Sheridan.
61349
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: The public did not speak outwardly about their suspicions. Police were already conducting an investigation.
The public did not speak outwardly about their suspicions, although police were already conducting an investigation.
61350
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Doctors Kazamatsuri and Onizuka are geneticists, researching cures for diseases such as AIDS and cancer by performing experiments to strengthen the human body. The test subject, Kazamatsuri, races motorcycles and is Kazamatsuri's son.
Doctors Kazamatsuri and Onizuka are geneticists, researching cures for diseases such as AIDS and cancer by performing experiments to strengthen the human body. The test subject, Shin Kazamatsuri, races motorcycles and is Doctor Kazamatsuri's son.
61351
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Like many other independent schools, Shipley has discontinued its Advanced Placement program to increase curricular latitude. Schools still offers Advanced Placement Studio Art.
Like many other independent schools, Shipley has discontinued its Advanced Placement program to increase curricular latitude, although it still offers AP Studio Art.
61352
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: as it is one of the best medical universities in Iran. Iran students are recruited to SUMS through National Entrance Exam (Konkur) and registered to the main campus of the university.
as it is one of the best medical universities in Iran. Iranian students are recruited to SUMS through National Entrance Exam (Konkur) and registered to the main campus of the university.
61353
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Jump up ^ Hitchens, Christopher. Hitchens, Christopher -- Free Speech Part 1.
Jump up ^ Hitchens, Christopher. Christopher Hitchens -- Free Speech Part 1.
61354
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Bukhari had done his Masters in Journalism from Ateneo de Manila University as a fellow of the Asian Centre for Journalism and was a recipient of the World Press Institute fellowship. Bukhari was also a Bukhari of the East -- West Center, Hawaii.
Bukhari had done his Masters in Journalism from Ateneo de Manila University as a fellow of the Asian Centre for Journalism and was a recipient of the World Press Institute fellowship. He was also a fellow of the East -- West Center, Hawaii.
61355
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: However, greater attention is paid to the ashiziri. Each different variation and translation of the Tale of the Heike remains consistent in that great detail is paid to Shunkan's ashiziri.
However, greater attention is paid to the ashiziri. In fact, each different variation and translation of the Tale of the Heike remains consistent in that great detail is paid to Shunkan's ashiziri.
61356
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The largest shareholder in SBU is the Russian billionaire Vladimir Gridin and his sons. Vladimir Gridin is also a Vladimir Gridin in the United Russia party.
The largest shareholder in SBU is the Russian billionaire Vladimir Gridin and his sons. Gridin is also a politician in the United Russia party.
61357
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Its trees blocked the North Wind. A stranger named Hand came.
Its trees blocked the North Wind. But, a stranger named Hand came.
61358
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Sidonie (Brumov-Bylnice) Czech Republic Sidonie (Brumov-Bylnice) is a district of Brumov-Bylnice.
Sidonie (Brumov-Bylnice), a district of Brumov-Bylnice, Czech Republic
61359
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: The source code of the game is available on Source Forge in the project's Concurrent Versions System repository. Nothing has been released up to now.
The source code of the game is available on Source Forge in the project's Concurrent Versions System repository but nothing has been released up to now.
61360
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Heavy artillery strikes continued on Khalidiya, Wadi al-Sayeh, Hamidiya, Bab Hud and Baba al-Turkman. Most civilians had fled Khalidiya, with only rebel fighters and their families remaining, according to an opposition activist.
Heavy artillery strikes continued on Khalidiya, Wadi al-Sayeh, Hamidiya, Bab Hud and Baba al-Turkman. Meanwhile, most civilians had fled Khalidiya, with only rebel fighters and their families remaining, according to an opposition activist.
61361
coherence
Make the text more consistent: They numbered at 1,600 soldiers and 600 non-combatant porters. They lacked the strength to seize the plateau.
Numbering at 1,600 soldiers and 600 non-combatant porters, they lacked the strength to seize the plateau.
61362
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Both Silver Strand and Widow's Tears are located on streams draining small, relatively low areas. They both dry up completely in a normal year by mid June since they are fed exclusively by melting snow.
Since both Silver Strand and Widow's Tears are located on streams draining small, relatively low areas, they both dry up completely in a normal year by mid June since they are fed exclusively by melting snow.
61363
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Reviewers cited outdated graphics and poor controls. Reviewers did however praise the game's story, humour and gameplay as being faithful to the series.
Citing outdated graphics and poor controls, reviewers did however praise the game's story, humour and gameplay as being faithful to the series.
61364
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: Some scholars view sincerity as a construct rather than a moral virtue --. Any virtue can be construed as a.
Some scholars view sincerity as a construct rather than a moral virtue -- although any virtue can be construed as a.
61365
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Consecutive kills with the primary weapon will increase the game's score multiplier. Use of the secondary weapon or time manipulation will reset the multiplier.
Consecutive kills with the primary weapon will increase the game's score multiplier, while use of the secondary weapon or time manipulation will reset the multiplier.
61366
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: When Red Lantern Guy Gardner attacked the children, Kryb attacked him. Guy Gardner ripped off Kryb's arm and shoved it Kryb's her throat.
When Red Lantern Guy Gardner attacked the children, Kryb attacked him, but he ripped off her arm and shoved it down her throat.
61367
coherence
Fix sentence transition: He also wrote songs for, and duetted with, other popular Cambodian singers in order to nurture their careers. Starting in the mid-1960s he recorded many popular duets with Pen Ran.
He also wrote songs for, and duetted with, other popular Cambodian singers in order to nurture their careers. For example, starting in the mid-1960s he recorded many popular duets with Pen Ran.
61368
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Sisamouth graduated from medical school around the time that Cambodia gained independence from France in 1953. Sisamouth initially worked in a Phnom Penh hospital as a nurse, but was soon hired by the Cambodia national radio station as a singer with its band.
Sisamouth graduated from medical school around the time that Cambodia gained independence from France in 1953. He initially worked in a Phnom Penh hospital as a nurse, but was soon hired by the Cambodian national radio station as a singer with its band.
61369
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Shirt Wearers were often young men from families with hereditary claims of leadership. Men with obscure parents who displayed outstanding leaderships skills and had earned the respect of the community might also be elected.
Shirt Wearers were often young men from families with hereditary claims of leadership. However, men with obscure parents who displayed outstanding leaderships skills and had earned the respect of the community might also be elected.
61370
coherence
Make the text clearer: Siphonaria cookiana is a species of small air-breathing sea snail or false limpet the false limpets. A species of small air-breathing sea snail or false limpet is a marine pulmonate gastropod mollusc in the family Siphonariidae.
Siphonaria cookiana is a species of small air-breathing sea snail or false limpet, a marine pulmonate gastropod mollusc in the family Siphonariidae, the false limpets.
61371
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: Little is known of his early life and even his name is variously spelled as Crisp or Crispe. Crispe was the Crisp of Crisp who was Crisp of London and died in 1625.
Little is known of his early life and even his name is variously spelled as Crisp or Crispe. He was the son of Ellis Crispe who was Sheriff of London and died in 1625.
61372
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: In 2013, Myanmar U-23 Coach chose Sithu Aung to play in the SEA Games. Sithu Aung was a first Sithu Aung for Myanmar U-23.
In 2013, Myanmar U-23 Coach chose Sithu Aung to play in the SEA Games and he was a first line-up player for Myanmar U-23 Team.
61373
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: All these numbers above are very small. They are all still real numbers greater than zero.
Although all these numbers above are very small, they are all still real numbers greater than zero.
61374
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Within a set of positive and negative numbers there is ambiguity. Being closer to zero does not correspond to being less.
Within a set of positive and negative numbers there is ambiguity, because being closer to zero does not correspond to being less.
61375
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: If the hospital were to replace $100 of Keflin with $50 of Kefzol, it would lose a 3 % rebate on $50. Under the Revised CSP, there was a reduced incentive to substitute Kefzol for Keflin.
If the hospital were to replace $100 of Keflin with $50 of Kefzol, it would lose a 3 % rebate on $50. Thus, under the Revised CSP, there was a reduced incentive to substitute Kefzol for Keflin.
61376
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: Instead of sodium carbonate, sodium hydroxide may be added, this gives nearly the same colours, except that lead and zinc hydroxides are soluble in excess alkali, and can. Be distinguished from calcium.
Instead of sodium carbonate, sodium hydroxide may be added, this gives nearly the same colours, except that lead and zinc hydroxides are soluble in excess alkali, and can hence be distinguished from calcium.
61377
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: There is a risk of fire and explosion in dry mixtures with other substances, especially organic materials, and other herbicides, sulfur, phosphorus, powdered metals, and strong acids. When mixed with sugar, it has explosive properties.
There is a risk of fire and explosion in dry mixtures with other substances, especially organic materials, and other herbicides, sulfur, phosphorus, powdered metals, and strong acids. In particular, when mixed with sugar, it has explosive properties.
61378
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: However the latter was not acceptable to the school officials. She was threatened with an exclusion from the Young Pioneer organization.
However the latter was not acceptable to the school officials. Hence, she was threatened with an exclusion from the Young Pioneer organization.
61379
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Rotaru does not support any particular political ideology. Rotaru's multicultural identity has both helped and harmed her.
Rotaru does not support any particular political ideology. Nevertheless, her multicultural identity has both helped and harmed her.
61380
coherence
Fix sentence flow: The An Lushan rebellion was supported by many Sogdians, and in its aftermath many of them were slain or changed their names to escape their Sogdian heritage. Little is known about the Sogdians presence in North China since that time.
The An Lushan rebellion was supported by many Sogdians, and in its aftermath many of them were slain or changed their names to escape their Sogdian heritage, so that little is known about the Sogdian presence in North China since that time.
61381
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: A soil with good soil structure typically has a mix of micro -, meso -, and macropores. With more aggregation, you would expect to have a higher total porosity compared to a poorly aggregated soil (Nimmo, 2004).
A soil with good soil structure typically has a mix of micro -, meso -, and macropores. Therefore, with more aggregation, you would expect to have a higher total porosity compared to a poorly aggregated soil (Nimmo, 2004).
61382
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: It also slows down the rate of dissolution of copper from the board. Part leads in the liquid solder.
It also slows down the rate of dissolution of copper from the board and part leads in the liquid solder.
61383
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: The show airs in the United Kingdom and Ireland under the title Mystery Investigator with Olly Steeds, which premiered on May 24, 2010 on Discovery Knowledge. The show is also a huge hit in Asian market, with Olly Steeds Olly Steeds making several invited promotional appearances.
The show airs in the United Kingdom and Ireland under the title Mystery Investigator with Olly Steeds, which premiered on May 24, 2010 on Discovery Knowledge. The show is also a huge hit in Asian market, with host Olly Steeds making several invited promotional appearances.
61384
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: The focus is on the individual experience: how we feel as opposed to how others perceive. How we think we are being perceived.
The focus is on the individual experience: how we feel as opposed to how others perceive or how we think we are being perceived.
61385
coherence
Make the text more logical: South Africa is now represented in Taipei by the Liaison Office of the Republic of South Africa. Taiwan is represented by the Taipei Liaison Office in the South Africa in Pretoria.
South Africa is now represented in Taipei by the Liaison Office of the Republic of South Africa. Similarly, Taiwan is represented by the Taipei Liaison Office in the Republic of South Africa in Pretoria.
61386
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Turnout was a non-presidential election and few contested races. Turnout was approximately half of that for the previous gubernatorial election.
Being a non-presidential election and few contested races, turnout was approximately half of that for the previous gubernatorial election.
61387
coherence
Make the text more logical: It broadcast entirely in English. It relayed popular U.S.-made shows like The Ed Sullivan Show and The Tonight Show Starring Johnny Carson, and various sports games like the World Series.
Broadcasting entirely in English, it relayed popular U.S.-made shows like The Ed Sullivan Show and The Tonight Show Starring Johnny Carson, and various sports games like the World Series.
61388
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Most of the new economies were weak and. Most of the currencies have undergone significant reforms since Most's introduction.
Most of the new economies were weak and hence most of the currencies have undergone significant reforms since their introduction.
61389
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Garagara drinks his Balban Extract. Garagara overpowers Gingaioh until the Koseijuu intervene with the Majin destroyed by Gingaioh, GigaRhinos, and GigaPhoenix's trademark attacks.
Drinking his Balban Extract, Garagara overpowers Gingaioh until the Koseijuu intervene with the Majin destroyed by Gingaioh, GigaRhinos, and GigaPhoenix's trademark attacks.
61390
coherence
Make the text coherent: Her new life means having to deal with being a single parent. At the same time, she comes to terms with her own parents' divorce and finds a common bond with her long-suffering mother.
Her new life means having to deal with being a single parent but at the same time, she comes to terms with her own parents' divorce and finds a common bond with her long-suffering mother.
61391
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: He or she then assesses the result of a voice vote. Any member may demand a division (a recorded vote).
He or she then assesses the result of a voice vote, but any member may demand a division (a recorded vote).
61392
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: However, due to the recent rain storm any other evidence has been washed away from the accident scene. Also the suspect has a high powered attorney who is also his brother protecting him.
However, due to the recent rain storm any other evidence has been washed away from the accident scene and also the suspect has a high powered attorney who is also his brother protecting him.
61393
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Peter wakes up in a cell. Peter meets this world's Nick Fury and explains his theory that he is from another universe, which Fury accepts as nobody would come up with something that ridiculous as a lie.
Waking up in a cell, Peter meets this world's Nick Fury and explains his theory that he is from another universe, which Fury accepts as nobody would come up with something that ridiculous as a lie.
61394
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Shinty or camanachd is the traditional game of the Scottish Highlands. Historically it has a wider range.
Shinty or camanachd is the traditional game of the Scottish Highlands, although historically it has a wider range.
61395
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Rangers, were the first British team to reach a European Final, the 1961 European Cup Winners Cup. Celtic are the only team to have won the European Cup Winners Cup (now known as the UEFA Champions League), Europe's premier European Cup Winners Cup.
Rangers, were the first British team to reach a European Final, the 1961 European Cup Winners Cup. However, Celtic are the only team to have won the European Cup (now known as the UEFA Champions League), Europe's premier competition.
61396
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: The base of the GAA in Scotland is at Cambuslang, and GAA sports tend to be most popular in Greater Glasgow. There is also a presence in various Scotland universities.
The base of the GAA in Scotland is at Cambuslang, and GAA sports tend to be most popular in Greater Glasgow, although there is also a presence in various Scottish universities.
61397
coherence
Fix sentence flow: Borders man Steve Hislop won the British Superbike Championship in 1995. Was better known for man's 's success in the Isle of Man TT races.
Borders man Steve Hislop won the British Superbike Championship in 1995 although was better known for his success in the Isle of Man TT races.
61398
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: The most common springform pan is the nine-inch round. Small circular pans are common along with squares, rectangles, and hearts.
The most common springform pan is the nine-inch round. However, small circular pans are common along with squares, rectangles, and hearts.
61399
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: This system is not widely used. Games were considered to last too long and the winner would usually be the fitter player.
This system is not widely used because games were considered to last too long and the winner would usually be the fitter player.
61400
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Instead of the usual Sanskrit incantations, they said their prayers in Thai, asking the Lord Buddha to protect them and lead them down the good and righteous path. Prayers would then be supplemented by stories of the life of the Lord.
Instead of the usual Sanskrit incantations, they said their prayers in Thai, asking the Lord Buddha to protect them and lead them down the good and righteous path. Prayers would then be supplemented by stories of the life of the Buddha.