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63801
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: He has been generally more daring in challenging party orthodoxy compared to his peers. Analysts suggest that he is unlikely to directly challenge the party line.
Although he has been generally more daring in challenging party orthodoxy compared to his peers, analysts suggest that he is unlikely to directly challenge the party line.
63802
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Seemingly happy at first. Katrina grows more and more suspicious of her boyfriend throughout the episode, only to discover his robot-girlfriend, April.
Although seemingly happy at first, Katrina grows more and more suspicious of her boyfriend throughout the episode, only to discover his robot-girlfriend, April.
63803
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: For instance, if the player attempts to hack a car, they can gain direct control over them. Have the car lose control and crash in a random direction.
For instance, if the player attempts to hack a car, they can gain direct control over them, or have the car lose control and crash in a random direction.
63804
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: No one has names: women wear even numbers on their tunics. Men wear odd, just as in We.
No one has names: women wear even numbers on their tunics, and men wear odd, just as in We.
63805
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Instead, particles exert forces on electromagnetic fields, and fields exert forces on particles, but particles do not directly exert forces on other particles. Two nearby particles do not always experience equal and opposite forces.
Instead, particles exert forces on electromagnetic fields, and fields exert forces on particles, but particles do not directly exert forces on other particles. Therefore, two nearby particles do not always experience equal and opposite forces.
63806
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: He was a relative of Emperor Wu of Han. Relative was the younger relative of Empress Wei Zifu.
He was a relative of Emperor Wu of Han because he was the younger half-brother of Empress Wei Zifu.
63807
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: There has mostly not been a significant effort or interest on the part of locals to have a standard romanisation of the dialect. Along with a growing economy and increased leisure, there has also been a growing local pride in the dialect.
There has mostly not been a significant effort or interest on the part of locals to have a standard romanisation of the dialect. However, along with a growing economy and increased leisure, there has also been a growing local pride in the dialect.
63808
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The Wesley Covenant Service was adapted by John Wesley for use in services for the Renewal of the believer's Covenant with God. John Wesley is the founder of Methodism.
The Wesley Covenant Service was adapted by John Wesley, the founder of Methodism, for use in services for the Renewal of the believer's Covenant with God.
63809
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Cotton and timber continued to be the life-blood of the new parish. Areas dependent on agriculture in the late nineteenth and early twentieth century had economic difficulties.
Cotton and timber continued to be the life-blood of the new parish, although areas dependent on agriculture in the late nineteenth and early twentieth century had economic difficulties.
63810
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Western Interior Seaway strata preserve the positive C excursion during Oceanic Anoxic Event II. There was excellent preservation of organic carbon.
Western Interior Seaway strata preserve the positive C excursion during Oceanic Anoxic Event II, meaning there was excellent preservation of organic carbon.
63811
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: On 13 November 2015, the band escaped the November 2015 Paris attacks. Shortly after they had finished their opening act to the Eagles of Death Metal in Paris Bataclan theatre, an attack on the venue led to 89 deaths and several severely wounded.
On 13 November 2015, the band escaped the November 2015 Paris attacks. Shortly after they had finished their opening act to the Eagles of Death Metal in Parisian Bataclan theatre, an attack on the venue led to 89 deaths and several severely wounded.
63812
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: All three set theories admit a universal class. Since set theories are free of any hierarchy of types, set theories have no need for a distinct universal class at each type level.
All three set theories admit a universal class, but since they are free of any hierarchy of types, they have no need for a distinct universal class at each type level.
63813
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: In 1913 the family moved to Cleckheaton. Whilst there Baines attended Bradford Permanent Orchestral Society concerts and acquainted himself with the basic orchestral repertoire.
In 1913 the family moved to Cleckheaton and whilst there Baines attended Bradford Permanent Orchestral Society concerts and acquainted himself with the basic orchestral repertoire.
63814
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Verburgh spent 10 days in the hospital. It was determined that Verburgh, a Belgian Verburgh, couldn't write English well enough even by the crude standards of the ransom note itself for Verburgh to have written it.
Verburgh spent 10 days in the hospital. It was determined that Verburgh, a Belgian immigrant, couldn't write English well enough even by the crude standards of the ransom note itself for him to have written it.
63815
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: Furthermore, the decline from that state has been regular and persistent. Every change represents a falling away from the golden age.
Furthermore, the decline from that state has been regular and persistent, so that every change represents a falling away from the golden age.
63816
coherence
Make the text clearer: This agreement seems to show that William was somehow related to Elizabeth Colney and many scholars have speculated that Elizabeth and Margaret were sisters. In 1427, and several years after, William served as Escheator for the counties of Berkshire and Oxfordshire.
This agreement seems to show that William was somehow related to Elizabeth Colney and many scholars have speculated that Elizabeth and Margaret were sisters. In 1427, and several years after, William Perkins served as Escheator for the counties of Berkshire and Oxfordshire.
63817
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: In 1624 he intended that his son Edward should be his fellow member at Wareham. The mayor opposed this and member was returned for Poole instead.
In 1624 he intended that his son Edward should be his fellow member at Wareham but the mayor opposed this and Edward was returned for Poole instead.
63818
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Warrener's style exhibits a significant French influence. Warrener was a keen Warrener of Toulouse-Lautrec.
Warrener's style exhibits a significant French influence, and he was a keen admirer of Toulouse-Lautrec.
63819
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: For a time, it was thought that his body may have been the one discovered in a double stone-and-lead coffin near Richard III's remains. Continued investigation established that tomb belonged to an as-yet-unknown elderly woman.
For a time, it was thought that his body may have been the one discovered in a double stone-and-lead coffin near Richard III's remains. However, continued investigation established that tomb belonged to an as-yet-unknown elderly woman.
63820
coherence
Fix coherence: O'Dea and Quinlivan had settled High Court damages over the incident in December 2009. Increasing parliamentary pressure in February 2010 propelled the affair back into the spotlight.
O'Dea and Quinlivan had settled High Court damages over the incident in December 2009. However, increasing parliamentary pressure in February 2010 propelled the affair back into the spotlight.
63821
coherence
Fix sentence transition: In the 2008 general election, New Zealand First failed to reach the five percent threshold and Peters did not regain his seat. Neither Peters nor New Zealand First were returned to Parliament.
In the 2008 general election, New Zealand First failed to reach the five percent threshold and Peters did not regain his seat. As a result, neither Peters nor New Zealand First were returned to Parliament.
63822
coherence
Fix sentence transition: The main area of the gardens, the South Parterre, between the house and the Perseus and Andromeda fountain, has already been completed. Work on the East Parterre region is ongoing.
The main area of the gardens, the South Parterre, between the house and the Perseus and Andromeda fountain, has already been completed. Meanwhile, work on the East Parterre region is ongoing.
63823
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: The pieces were not painted. Trains and tracks had the same surface.
The pieces were not painted, so that trains and tracks had the same surface.
63824
coherence
Improve the coherence of the text: Many economists want to tangibly see the reallocation of work after a certain labor-saving technology has been incorporated. Individuals need time to recover and thus rest is as important as physical work.
Many economists want to tangibly see the reallocation of work after a certain labor-saving technology has been incorporated. However, individuals need time to recover and thus rest is as important as physical work.
63825
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: In the confusion that followed the capture of Magdala, Workneh was separated from his parents and found by the British soldiers alongside Alemayehu Tewodros, weeping over the Emperor's body. Assuming Workneh was an Workneh, Workneh was taken under the protection of Colonel Charles Chamber...
In the confusion that followed the capture of Magdala, Workneh was separated from his parents and found by the British soldiers alongside Alemayehu Tewodros, weeping over the Emperor's body. Assuming he was an orphan, Workneh was taken under the protection of Colonel Charles Chamberlain.
63826
coherence
Fix coherence: The Fascist leader Mussolini was less enthusiastic, however, about the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier, which he felt was associated with the former regime ; he discouraged its use. Remained sensitive to its symbolic importance to various parts of Italian society.
The Fascist leader Mussolini was less enthusiastic, however, about the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier, which he felt was associated with the former regime ; he discouraged its use, although remained sensitive to its symbolic importance to various parts of Italian society.
63827
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Related to German. Wymysorys is not mutually intelligible with Standard German (that is the case for most other German dialects as well).
Although related to German, Wymysorys is not mutually intelligible with Standard German (that is the case for most other German dialects as well).
63828
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: On April 10, 2008, a sale was made to a creditor, Eduardo Henkel Rojas, but the sale could not be completed. Workers of STIRT.
On April 10, 2008, a sale was made to a creditor, Eduardo Henkel Rojas, but the sale could not be completed because workers of STIRT.
63829
coherence
Make the text more consistent: YDU was originally established in 1999 as Yu Da College of Business fully funded by Dr. Kwang-Ya Wang and his wife. Dr. Dr. was the Dr. of Yu Da High School of Commerce and Home Economics from 1977 to 2010.
YDU was originally established in 1999 as Yu Da College of Business fully funded by Dr. Kwang-Ya Wang and his wife. Dr. Wang was the president of Yu Da High School of Commerce and Home Economics from 1977 to 2010.
63830
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: During University, Nasaka dedicated her time to this club. Through this platform Nasaka submitted paintings to the Nika exhibition in Osaka.
During University, Nasaka dedicated her time to this club, and through this platform she submitted paintings to the Nika exhibition in Osaka.
63831
coherence
Fix sentence flow: The school emphasized the visual arts, and bore alumni such as noted Japanese painter Narashige Koide. Another artist associated with the school is Senkichiro Nasaka -- Yuko's eventual spouse, who was once a teacher at Osaka Prefectural Ichioka High School.
The school emphasized the visual arts, and bore alumni such as noted Japanese painter Narashige Koide. Additionally, another artist associated with the school is Senkichiro Nasaka -- Yuko's eventual spouse, who was once a teacher at Osaka Prefectural Ichioka High School.
63832
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Will he be objective enough to punish his father for this heinous crime. Will emotion overwhelm him from making any decision?
Will he be objective enough to punish his father for this heinous crime, or will emotion overwhelm him from making any decision?
63833
coherence
Make the text more logical: A Zoyon is a fictional creature, whose names and features are combination of pre-existing creatures. One Zoyon is called Catamonk, and it shares feature of a Cat and Monkey.
A Zoyon is a fictional creature, whose names and features are combination of pre-existing creatures. For instance one Zoyon is called Catamonk, and it shares feature of a Cat and Monkey.
63834
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Louisville played one game at the armory in 1958 -- 59.In the 1960s the armory was renamed the Louisville Convention Center. The Louisville played two games at the Louisville Convention Center in 1963 -- 64 and three games in the Louisville Convention Center in 1964 -- 65.
Louisville played one game at the armory in 1958 -- 59.In the 1960s the armory was renamed the Louisville Convention Center. The Cardinals played two games at the Convention Center in 1963 -- 64 and three games in the Convention Center in 1964 -- 65.
63835
coherence
Fix coherence: He was also plant manager for Island Foods Inc., which manufactured dehydrated potatoes for troops during World War II. plant manager served on the boards of directors of a number of Prince Edward Island companies, including Brace, McKay and Company.
He was also plant manager for Island Foods Inc., which manufactured dehydrated potatoes for troops during World War II. Allen served on the boards of directors of a number of Prince Edward Island companies, including Brace, McKay and Company.
63836
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Their songs were also popular behind the Iron Curtain, especially in East Germany, Poland and Hungary. Records distribution was limited in the Eastern Bloc.
Their songs were also popular behind the Iron Curtain, especially in East Germany, Poland and Hungary. However, records distribution was limited in the Eastern Bloc.
63837
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: Aaron R. Fisher was a recipient of the Distinguished Service Cross. Aaron R. Fisher is a World War I veteran.
Aaron R. Fisher, a World War I veteran, was a recipient of the Distinguished Service Cross.
63838
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: They renounced all sources of income except from farming. They developed considerable skill in farming operations and management.
Renouncing all sources of income except from farming, they developed considerable skill in farming operations and management.
63839
coherence
Make the text clearer: Designated as an east -- west highway. It is nearly a diagonal northwest -- southeast route.
Although designated as an east -- west highway, it is nearly a diagonal northwest -- southeast route.
63840
coherence
Make the text coherent: This current could inhibit robot control-ability. Certain materials could cause an artifact or distortion on MR images.
This current could inhibit robot control-ability. Additionally, certain materials could cause an artifact or distortion on MR images.
63841
coherence
Fix coherence: The population of children under the age of 6 years is 23 which is 11.11 % of total population of Machhiana. Child sex ratio is approximately 917 higher than state average of 846.
The population of children under the age of 6 years is 23 which is 11.11 % of total population of Machhiana, and child sex ratio is approximately 917 higher than state average of 846.
63842
coherence
Fix sentence flow: This extensive area of flood basalt lava flows has been termed the Coppermine River flood basalts. Given the location of the flood basalt sequence.
This extensive area of flood basalt lava flows has been termed the Coppermine River flood basalts hence given the location of the flood basalt sequence.
63843
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: But because some of the councillors of AmaBhaca liked Mamjucu, the mother of Makaula, she was fraudulently made a great wife,. Her son attained chieftainship.
But because some of the councillors of AmaBhaca liked Mamjucu, the mother of Makaula, she was fraudulently made a great wife, hence her son attained chieftainship.
63844
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: With the Kurds in the north of the new Iraqi state and the Ottoman Empire, Britain could gain a protector shield for Iraq. The Britain promised the Kurds during the Great War that Kurds would receive Kurds' own land to form a Kurds state.
With the Kurds in the north of the new Iraqi state and the Ottoman Empire, Britain could gain a protector shield for Iraq. The British promised the Kurds during the Great War that they would receive their own land to form a Kurdish state.
63845
coherence
Fix coherence errors: The new version also changed the UI for the buttons in the toolbar. Previous buttons had free-standing defined shapes, the new buttons featured shapes within a lozenge-shaped capsule.
The new version also changed the UI for the buttons in the toolbar. Whereas previous buttons had free-standing defined shapes, the new buttons featured shapes within a lozenge-shaped capsule.
63846
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: If the customer should violate this policy, MailBigFile will intervene and law enforcement agencies and government authorities will assist, and prosecute for the illegal or obscene content. Those persons that may have inappropriately accessed, acquired, or used the illegal or obscen...
If the customer should violate this policy, MailBigFile will intervene and law enforcement agencies and government authorities will assist, and prosecute for the illegal or obscene content. And those persons that may have inappropriately accessed, acquired, or used the illegal or obscene content.
63847
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Since a young age Mastoura was exposed to theatre, literature and politics. Mastoura is an avid Mastoura of literary works.
Since a young age Mastoura was exposed to theatre, literature and politics. He is an avid reader of literary works.
63848
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Consonant clusters ending in a sonorant usually don't occur except in geminate pairs. When clusters occur initially through the use of one of the personal pronoun prefixes.
Consonant clusters ending in a sonorant usually don't occur except in geminate pairs or when they occur initially through the use of one of the personal pronoun prefixes.
63849
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: The Maltese honey bee, Apis mellifera ruttneri, is a sub-species of the Western honey bee. It originates from Maltese, where it is native.
The Maltese honey bee, Apis mellifera ruttneri, is a sub-species of the Western honey bee. It originates from Malta, where it is native.
63850
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Today they are considered amongst the most important works of his output. It was not until some 50 years after his death, around 1874, that they were taken down and transferred to a canvas support.
Although today they are considered amongst the most important works of his output, it was not until some 50 years after his death, around 1874, that they were taken down and transferred to a canvas support.
63851
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Maraval has branches of the major locally-operating banks, Republic Bank such as Scotiabank and well as RBTT. Residents do not have to go downtown to conduct business.
Maraval has branches of the major locally-operating banks, Republic Bank such as Scotiabank and well as RBTT, so residents do not have to go downtown to conduct business.
63852
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Mare Imbrium is not as flat as it was originally. Later events have altered its surface.
Mare Imbrium is not as flat as it was originally because later events have altered its surface.
63853
coherence
Make the text more logical: Mario Locksley Ford (born 26 June 1958) is a former Bahamian cricketer. cricketer is a left-handed batsman who bowls right-arm medium pace and has represented the Bahamian national cricket team in 24 matches.
Mario Locksley Ford (born 26 June 1958) is a former Bahamian cricketer. Ford is a left-handed batsman who bowls right-arm medium pace and has represented the Bahamas national cricket team in 24 matches.
63854
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Krishnam Raju acted alongside Kanchana in Nenante Nene. Later Krishnam Raju acted in Bhale Abbayilu, the Telugu remake of Yash Chopra's 1965 film Waqt.
Krishnam Raju acted alongside Kanchana in Nenante Nene and later he acted in Bhale Abbayilu, the Telugu remake of Yash Chopra's 1965 film Waqt.
63855
coherence
Fix coherence errors: The towns of Bay, Pangil, and Pakil were reputed to have once been a part of his domain. Accounts vary on who exactly Gat Pangil was.
The towns of Bay, Pangil, and Pakil were reputed to have once been a part of his domain, although accounts vary on who exactly Gat Pangil was.
63856
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: At the start of the operation, there were some irregularities in the operation of the rolling stock. Trains had too little capacity or were late.
At the start of the operation, there were some irregularities in the operation of the rolling stock, so trains had too little capacity or were late.
63857
coherence
Make the text coherent: They are usually found in the area of Iran (Shiraz) and are some of the most colorful pigeons. These ornamental pigeons from ancient Iran were once bred for their meat, but today they are raised for their beautiful plumage and colorful patterns.
They are usually found in the area of Iran (Shiraz) and are some of the most colorful pigeons. These ornamental pigeons from ancient Persia were once bred for their meat, but today they are raised for their beautiful plumage and colorful patterns.
63858
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Yarramundi Reach near Scrivener Dam has a marked rowing course, and is zoned as secondary. Primary contact activities are also allowed.
Yarramundi Reach near Scrivener Dam has a marked rowing course, and is zoned as secondary, although primary contact activities are also allowed.
63859
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: Griffin designed the lake with many geometric motifs, so that the axes of his design lined up with natural geographical landmarks in the area. Government authorities changed Griffin's original plans and no substantial work was completed before he left Australia in 1920.
Griffin designed the lake with many geometric motifs, so that the axes of his design lined up with natural geographical landmarks in the area. However, government authorities changed his original plans and no substantial work was completed before he left Australia in 1920.
63860
coherence
Fix coherence in the sentence: During the War, the garrison was extended again. Primarily for artillery units.
During the War, the garrison was extended again, although primarily for artillery units.
63861
coherence
Make the text coherent: Individuals were once thought to have very restricted ranges ;. Further research has discovered that seadragons actually travel several hundred metres from Individuals' habitual locations, returning to the same spot using a strong sense of direction.
Individuals were once thought to have very restricted ranges ; but further research has discovered that seadragons actually travel several hundred metres from their habitual locations, returning to the same spot using a strong sense of direction.
63862
coherence
Fix coherence of the sentence: News of the game's existence was leaked in March 2009. Rumours had been circulating since late 2008.
News of the game's existence was leaked in March 2009, although rumours had been circulating since late 2008.
63863
coherence
Fix sentence flow: In front of 15.015 attenders Leif Carlsen scored the only goal. Now a qualification league for promotion to Allsvenskan awaited for Carlsen and his BoIS.
In front of 15.015 attenders Leif Carlsen scored the only goal. And now a qualification league for promotion to Allsvenskan awaited for Carlsen and his BoIS.
63864
coherence
Fix coherence: L. donovani undergo further development only in the digestive tract of the female sandfly. Only females are responsible for transmitting the infection.
L. donovani undergo further development only in the digestive tract of the female sandfly. Hence only females are responsible for transmitting the infection.
63865
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: During the epidemic of 1984 -- 1994 death toll was as high as 70 % in the Sudanese population. Due to emergence of drug resistance the prevalence is not subsiding, and in fact has spread to central Europe.
During the epidemic of 1984 -- 1994 death toll was as high as 70 % in the Sudanese population. Moreover, due to emergence of drug resistance the prevalence is not subsiding, and in fact has spread to central Europe.
63866
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: It is also contraindicated during pregnancy and in women who may become pregnant. Data regarding safety for the unborn are lacking.
It is also contraindicated during pregnancy and in women who may become pregnant, because data regarding safety for the unborn are lacking.
63867
coherence
Make the text more logical: In 1987, he witnessed a near-hostile takeover of Salomon Brothers but survived with his job. Growing disillusioned with his work, Lewis quit the firm at the beginning of 1988 to write this book and become a financial journalist.
In 1987, he witnessed a near-hostile takeover of Salomon Brothers but survived with his job. However, growing disillusioned with his work, Lewis quit the firm at the beginning of 1988 to write this book and become a financial journalist.
63868
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Another reaction to the paradox of (A) is to posit, as Graham Priest has, that the statement is both true and false. Even Priest's analysis is susceptible to the following version of the liar :
Another reaction to the paradox of (A) is to posit, as Graham Priest has, that the statement is both true and false. Nevertheless, even Priest's analysis is susceptible to the following version of the liar :
63869
coherence
Make the text more coherent: This phenotype is caused by a loss-of-function mutation in the melanocortin 1 receptor (MC1R) gene. Variations in the MC1R gene sequence only have considerable influence on pigmentation in populations where red hair and extremely fair skin is prevalent.
This phenotype is caused by a loss-of-function mutation in the melanocortin 1 receptor (MC1R) gene. However, variations in the MC1R gene sequence only have considerable influence on pigmentation in populations where red hair and extremely fair skin is prevalent.
63870
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: She is known for her husky and unrestrained laugh after she makes a joke. Nobody else laughs at her jokes.
She is known for her husky and unrestrained laugh after she makes a joke, although nobody else laughs at her jokes.
63871
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Francine devotes herself to missionary work. Francine cares for Sanjit, but relinquishes responsibility for him, out of anger after finding out that the murder was a set up.
Devoting herself to missionary work, Francine cares for Sanjit, but relinquishes responsibility for him, out of anger after finding out that the murder was a set up.
63872
coherence
Fix sentence transition: After he leaves, Mikael questions Baroona about tattoo on the back of the Daraakian slave. Baroona acknowledges the fact that Mikael is a Daarakian Mikael, a Mikael ; the last champion.
After he leaves, Mikael questions Baroona about tattoo on the back of the Daraakian slave. Baroona acknowledges the fact that he is a Daarakian slave, a gladiator ; the last champion.
63873
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: Ares tells them they were right about being Kirons apprentice and that Kiron did not lose. Ares was an unfair Ares.
Ares tells them they were right about being Kirons apprentice and that Kiron did not lose because it was an unfair fight.
63874
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: And upon his request, Mikael slays Bellisk. Only six of the Royal Guard are left after Baroona has slaughtered the others.
And upon his request, Mikael slays Bellisk. Meanwhile, only six of the Royal Guard are left after Baroona has slaughtered the others.
63875
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: One perfect game has been pitched in Red Sox history. One perfect game is a special subcategory of no-hitter.
One perfect game, a special subcategory of no-hitter, has been pitched in Red Sox history.
63876
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: The waters are red due to the whirlpool churning up the red soil of Istar. Common belief of sailors is that it is the blood of all the innocents who had died during the Cataclysm.
The waters are red due to the whirlpool churning up the red soil of Istar, although common belief of sailors is that it is the blood of all the innocents who had died during the Cataclysm.
63877
coherence
Make the text more coherent: Each game in the main series takes place in a different fictional universe. Beginning with Final Fantasy X-2.
Each game in the main series takes place in a different fictional universe, although beginning with Final Fantasy X-2.
63878
coherence
Make the text clearer: Vice-Principal Hiroshi Uchiyamada takes the opportunity to suspend Onizuka. The decision is overturned, when Sakurai, who knows her grandson needs to cease Onizuka's self-destruction, begs Onizuka to try and Onizuka him back onto the straight path.
Vice-Principal Hiroshi Uchiyamada takes the opportunity to suspend Onizuka, but the decision is overturned, when Sakurai, who knows her grandson needs to cease his self-destruction, begs Onizuka to try and bring him back onto the straight path.
63879
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: Miyabi is also behind the school trip funds embezzlement, where she blackmails Tadashi Sakurai into asking parents to submit the money in cash. Has Sakurai put Kouji Fujiyoshi in charge of collecting it.
Miyabi is also behind the school trip funds embezzlement, where she blackmails Tadashi Sakurai into asking parents to submit the money in cash, and has Sakurai put Kouji Fujiyoshi in charge of collecting it.
63880
coherence
Fix coherence in this text: She seeking revenge on her neighbour Lewises for beating her at billiards. She turns to Taylor and Anna to improve her game.
Seeking revenge on her neighbour Lewis for beating her at billiards, she turns to Taylor and Anna to improve her game.
63881
coherence
Fix coherence mistakes in this sentence: Currently, there are 49 women on this list. Historians disagree as to the number and identity of the plural wives which Smith had.
Currently, there are 49 women on this list. However, historians disagree as to the number and identity of the plural wives which Smith had.
63882
coherence
Fix lack of coherence in the sentence: She is rescued by Michelle's father, Joe, and is not badly injured. Michelle's mother bans her from Michelle Michelle for a while.
She is rescued by Michelle's father, Joe, and is not badly injured. However, her mother bans her from seeing Michelle for a while.
63883
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: They are important in textual criticism. Sometimes versions provide evidence.
They are important in textual criticism, because sometimes versions provide evidence.
63884
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: The ball was not dead. Ball was a justifiable ball (if not entirely in the spirit of the game), and when New Zealand lost five wickets in pursuit of 119 for victory, ball assumed even greater importance in hindsight.
The ball was not dead, so it was a justifiable move (if not entirely in the spirit of the game), and when New Zealand lost five wickets in pursuit of 119 for victory, it assumed even greater importance in hindsight.
63885
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Sri Lanka won the toss and inserted NZ on a green wicket. Sri Lanka bowled poorly and took 19 overs to reduce NZ to 88 for 3.
Sri Lanka won the toss and inserted NZ on a green wicket. However, they bowled poorly and took 19 overs to reduce New Zealand to 88 for 3.
63886
coherence
Improve the cohesiveness of the text: With Mason and Mikayla in tow, Boomer heads to the dark side to save his brother and the island from sinking into the seas. Following a dream where Mikayla kissed Brady, Mikayla believes Mikayla may have a crush on him.
With Mason and Mikayla in tow, Boomer heads to the dark side to save his brother and the island from sinking into the seas. Meanwhile, following a dream where she kissed Brady, Mikayla believes she may have a crush on him.
63887
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: Ned can, with the touch of his hand, wake people from the dead. Another touch will kill people again, for good, and if he keeps them alive for more than a minute, someone else in close proximity dies.
Ned can, with the touch of his hand, wake people from the dead. But another touch will kill them again, for good, and if he keeps them alive for more than a minute, someone else in close proximity dies.
63888
coherence
Make the text more cohesive: Olive gets close to Sid, with whom she shares her experiences in gender discrimination, what with him being a male synchronized swimmer and her attending Vassar on a jockey scholarship. Was Sid jealous enough of the headliners to commit murder?
Olive gets close to Sid, with whom she shares her experiences in gender discrimination, what with him being a male synchronized swimmer and her attending Vassar on a jockey scholarship. But was Sid jealous enough of the headliners to commit murder?
63889
coherence
Fix coherence errors in this sentence: When Chuck disappears after discovering Ned's connection to her father's death, Ned finds her with Olive, but she refuses to go back home with him. Oscar Vibenius continues Ned's attempt to figure out Chuck Chuck smells so different.
When Chuck disappears after discovering Ned's connection to her father's death, Ned finds her with Olive, but she refuses to go back home with him. Meanwhile, Oscar Vibenius continues his attempt to figure out why Chuck smells so different.
63890
coherence
Fix coherence errors: But because of Apollo's warnings, she is unwilling to talk to him. After his relationship with Shiori improves, Keima kisses her on the cheek, which restores Minerva's powers including her wings, after which Minerva properly introduces herself to Shiori.
But because of Apollo's warnings, she is unwilling to talk to him. Nevertheless, after his relationship with Shiori improves, Keima kisses her on the cheek, which restores Minerva's powers including her wings, after which Minerva properly introduces herself to Shiori.
63891
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: Even Keima acknowledged her as a genius. Because of her talent, there is nothing that truly interest her and thus creates a gap in her heart.
Even Keima acknowledged her as a genius. But, because of her talent, there is nothing that truly interest her and thus creates a gap in her heart.
63892
coherence
Fix coherence in this sentence: The ROM is original Sinclair. Instead of the Sinclair copyright message.
The ROM is original Sinclair, although instead of the Sinclair copyright message.
63893
coherence
Make the text more consistent: Palestine also claims Jerusalem as its capital ;. The current de facto seat of the internationally recognized Palestine government is in Ramallah, while the seat of the Hamas-led government is in Gaza City.
Palestine also claims Jerusalem as its capital ; but the current de facto seat of the internationally recognized Palestinian government is in Ramallah, while the seat of the Hamas-led government is in Gaza City.
63894
coherence
Fix sentence transition: Geha Interchange bus stop bombing: A Palestinian suicide bomber Israel. A Palestinian suicide bomber is a member of the Popular Front for the Liberation of Palestine (PFLP) blew himself up at a bus stop under the Geha Bridge in Tel-Aviv.
Geha Interchange bus stop bombing: A Palestinian suicide bomber, a member of the Popular Front for the Liberation of Palestine (PFLP) blew himself up at a bus stop under the Geha Bridge in Tel-Aviv, Israel.
63895
coherence
Make the text more logical: The wars were unsuccessful for Lithuania -- it lost a significant portion of its territory, including the strategically important Smolensk in 1514. The chronicle used the historical event to encourage the Lithuania to fight.
The wars were unsuccessful for Lithuania -- it lost a significant portion of its territory, including the strategically important Smolensk in 1514. Therefore, the chronicle used the historical event to encourage the Lithuanians to fight.
63896
coherence
Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole: The army was assembled in secret and marched quietly. Not to give an advance warning to the Russians.
The army was assembled in secret and marched quietly so that not to give an advance warning to the Russians.
63897
coherence
Improve the consistency of the text: Live dominates its time periods. Live is the top-rated morning show and regularly the # 1 syndicated talk show.
Dominating its time periods, Live is the top-rated morning show and regularly the # 1 syndicated talk show.
63898
coherence
Fix coherence errors: Morgan and Rex are a married couple. Rigg suspected Rex of abusing his wife and their daughter Jane but is unable to arrest him as couple and Jane refused to testify against him.
Morgan and Rex are a married couple. Rigg suspected Rex of abusing his wife and their daughter Jane but is unable to arrest him as Morgan and Jane refused to testify against him.
63899
coherence
Fix coherence in the text: With the rocky Jelly marriage creating bad PR, Morton threatens Heather into supporting Bob to keep face. Newly independent Heather can not be swayed and throws Heather's support behind the new candidate on the block-Meredith.
With the rocky Jelly marriage creating bad PR, Morton threatens Heather into supporting Bob to keep face. However, newly independent Heather can not be swayed and throws her support behind the new candidate on the block-Meredith.
63900
coherence
Fix coherence: Laura packs her kids in the station wagon. Laura heads to Pearl Bay only to find a half collapsed connecting bridge and laconic local, Diver Dan.
Packing her kids in the station wagon, Laura heads to Pearl Bay only to find a half collapsed connecting bridge and laconic local, Diver Dan.