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Students should not be able to graduate early. Some students already get stressed by the amount of work they get in regular classes. Which gives them less time to do their work and study.. They might also have a job they have to get to save money for their college supplies like textbooks. They also won't have as much homework and classwork to do at a time.
The students will have more career choices to choose from. For example there is a nursing class, carpentry class, electricity class, welding class, and many more that can help them get started. They can get stressed by all the homework and classwork they get from all their classes. The classes will be easier because they will be learning at their grade level, not a grade level above. If they have more time they will be able to have electives that can help them choose their career. Students might be stressed out too much. They can take more classes than those who would graduate early. The fourth year of high school gives them more time to learn. If students stay in school the extra year they have more opportunities. If they can't take electives then they won't have experiences that may help them.
Lots of work on a students can cause them to be stressed out. It also gives them more time to explore different careers they might want to do. Imagine all the stress they get when they are taking more classes at a time. It is better to take your time then to rush your career.
Students who go the last year of high school have more time to learn more
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My dad helps me understand all of the tips and tricks through sports when I can't get anything right he's there to teach me some ways to move past that.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my sister. My mom shares wisdom with me all the time like for instance when i'm feeling down my mom would tell me when people been through worst to make me fell like what i'm going through isn't as bad.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my dad. Ways my sister shares her wisdom with me is by teaching me about teenage life and how to be a better person each minute. A lot of people shared wisdom with me but the most important people who shared wisdom with me are, my mom, dad, and sister.
A lot of people shared wisdom with me but one of the most important people who shared wisdom with me is my mom. Ways my dad shard wisdom with my is through sports. She helps me when I need help or when i'm curious about how to be more lady like.
In the end when people share wisdom with you it can come in handy when your ever lost stuck or just need advice just remember when people shared there wisdom with you and what they said.
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Dear principal,
You are changing school policy so student that have a C average can not participate in sports or other activities unless the students have at least a B average .I think that students that have a C average should at least have an extra class that they need help in so they can pull up their grades up so the students can participate in sports or activities. the students that don't recognized that what their doing is wrong and they don't get privileges like other students do.
sincerely, STUDENT_NAME
1-27-11. If the teachers of the student think that they are working hard to bring their grades up at least the principal should give the students 30 minutes of free time on the activities or sports they want to participate in.
The school should make a contract saying that students that have a C average cant participate in sports or activities. The parents ,teacher ,principal ,and the student should sign the contract .The students that don't even try to work hard to get a B average should stay an hour after school to catch up the work they have been missing
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In that case if the students feels good their work will be better. Giving students praise always makes students feel good. Therefore, the work being produced was very productive.
Praising a student builds their self esteem by making them feel good about the work that has been done. Which means if they feel very good and proud of the work thats been done the work that will be produce will be very creative and outstanding.
Praising students who produce deficient work encourages them to produce better the next time work is been given to them. Praising students who fail always has a different outcome the second time they do the task been giving.
Giving the students praise always comes out to be better than what they were expecting;for example,a student who was doing bad before you praised them realized what the purpose of the work was and put all their effort into the work. Therefore,the student knows that someone is always there to encourage them when needed.
In conclusion,praising students always tend to make them do better. . Students believe in praising them builds their self esttem,even when the work is not at its full potential. But others say giveb praise for deficient work undermines the learning by lowering standards
Although student get to proud and tend to over do the work, giving the student praise always comes out to be better than what they actually expected to achieve
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It just helps me to stay more focus in my work by just hearing from someone Like my Dad. Learning from someone like my Dad.
Hearing wisdom from my Dad will definitely make me a better and smarter person. It makes me want to try harder than other people and be better than them. Because my Dad would push me to work as hard to be the best.
Learning new things from someone that has an experience like my Dad can help me have more better ideas about what I'm doing . It will also make me work and study harder so I can get to where his telling me to. And it's really important for me for him to shared that. But I think by just hearing from someone that has an experienced before will definitely help you to be better person. And not only I could be like my Dad one day I could probably be a better person and smarter person than him. It also helps me create new ways how to do stuff. And it gives me an open mind about new ideas that I didn't even know about. Everyone is not perfect in this world and everyone definitely needs helps on something it doesn't have to a big thing it can be a very small things. . Because it will make me motivated to think like him and be like him . Because by just hearing from them will teach you new ways new ideas and even stuff you didn't even know existed. And will also gives me better techniques and more ideas. So in the future I can try to change and try different things from what I have learned from my Dad.
It's also really important for my Dad to give me his wisdom, Because I can't imagine doing stuff without someone helping me on things that I don't even know about. My Dad is someone who has shared wisdom and experience with me. Because helps me get better at things ,it teaches me new things that I didn't even know about, and also helps me grow smarter and as a better person. And lastly it will make me think smarter and push my self to be the best I could be.
So I think it's kinda obvious that every person or even smart people needs help sometimes from someone thats has an experienced before
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Because people. All the people with A, or B can play because the C is the baldest grade on the school. Dear TEACHER_NAME,
I WRITE THIS LETTER TO SAID THAT IS NOT FAIR THAT Only the people that have good grades can play in one of the sport
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My position about technology is this brings many effect positive for us huminity life. For example, many years ago we had to go the store and we watched the stuffed we need. For example on market every people want to down the price of production, the new technology helps on this.
In conclution, technology shows to good change on human's life,
in the economy, in the konwlege and many areas technology helps.. we can bay only.
Second reason, tecnology gives support to the knowledge with the creation of new tools and more precision.
For example, before we used the telescopes for treated to understand the universo, now the technology us helps with the creation of new satellite .
Thrid reason, that support the tnechnology have good effects in our economy. now with the new technology, we do not need to move. I take this opinion for the chaning on our life and the support positive in the knowledge.
First reason, for saying the the tecnology have good effects on the human's life is it helps to do many activity fast and easy
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This is one of the most enjoyable educational things to do.
Doing a science project gives knowledge specially if is about nature. A science project is also fun because you get to work with chemicals and see the reaction of each chemical. Working on a project with friends is always gonna be fun specially on a science one because you have to repeat the project three times to make sure it gives the same result every time and its super educational to do.
The chemicals you use during a project could be dangers but at the same time they could be fun to use. This is one of the most enjoyable educational stuff you can do and its fun.
This is an enjoyable thing to do you have so much fun doing a project,and Helping out friends by giving them ideas for the project working as a team to make it perfect and learning. Also getting help form your friends is better everyone gets to give ideas and help with the fun project. . For me this is the most fun thing to do when i have a project, and theres so many more activities but a science project is enjoyable to do and is also the most fun thing to do. The most fun part of a project is that you get to repeat things more then once in order to get the correct results is the most fun thing during a project testing out stuff. Also working as a team with you'r friends is helpful because you get to hear different parts,and it would help you learn more about the project you are doing.
Working as a team to see the different points of view of everyone is fun,and it helps for the project. This type of projects give you a lot of knowledge, and this projects give you an idea on how nature works is easy to do and is fun. Learning is boring but the science projects make learning more fun and it gives ideas for future projects. This is an educational fun project because you get to see how the reaction of different chemicals. This is fun because you get to help friends out, and do experiments with chemicals. If the project is about nature the things you'r gonna learn are fun and easy for example what causes wind,solar system,and how does the moon help us this projects are gonna make you learn about how earth works. Presenting the the project would make you nervous if your by your self if you did it in a group its gonna be fun and also more easy. One educational activity I like to do is doing a science project is the most fun thing to do with your friends
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So he gives me a schedual on what i should be doing to get fit. A good example would be the book persude of happynes. Failing tests you on how patiot you are at what you are doing and are you willing to fail again and again to be succesful. By failing people are learning on how not to make the same mistakes again. I played for the best clubs, i was named the best player in the team, and i have never been cut from a team. failure is the key to your success.. One day my coche tells me that there is a professional soccer try out next week and he want me to get ready. Failure playes a huge part of becoming successful. I did all of those things somedays i did not want to train and just start eating unhealthy but i fought through it. But nobody would buy it. at the end of the day they gathered every body up and called all the people that made it. we started out with warm ups and went to drills. I was not one of them. The person that bought it told some people on how good the machen was and they started to buy it to. Everyday i have to eat right and train hard. I have failed to become a pro soccer player. He became successful because he did not give up on his dream even though he was geting regected every time he tryed to sell it. Finaly after his ups and downs somenoe bought his muchean. Still nobody was willing to buy it off of him. I can eather stop playing soccer and choes a diffrent routh or i can pick my head im and try again. So he was homeless for a cuple of weeks. i was like the best player at the fiald. He was also a dad with one kid and lived in a motal. In this book the main person makes a muchen and he wants to sell in. For example lets say that i was trying to become a professional soccer. he got kicked out of the motal because he was not able to pay his bills. Even though he was homeless that did not stop him from trying to sell his machean. I was amazing. Try out day comes and i was ready as i will ever be. Now this is the part where enthisiasm playes a role
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A week later Generic_Name waking up up early and telling them to eat breakfast and get. Soon turn to sad because he comepletly forgot his camera because he was in a rush getting ready. On the way home Generic_Name started getting a bit excited because in a week everyone gonna. Way tho Generic_Name was telling everyone "Guys next week finally time for the nation park"
Four days later everyone went to go buy 2 cameras because. As he is finally done he ran saying "are we all ready" with joy everyone shouted "YES". Generic_Name just a bit mad but also trying to have a good time. Who have a bit of trouble deciding where to visit. To eat and take breaks,"alright so eat or start walking" said Generic_Name. Everyone want to go in a diffrent direction but they only had one camera so. To go to a park,Generic_Name and Generic_Name wanted to go. Generic_Name said "well i guess its time to eat then lets play a quick game of ball then we go home. She replied "gotta be out their when ur friends need help". so he went to everyone rooms to go wake them up but they were. Few hours later park announced "the park is closed please exit have a good night" not noticing the time. Everyone felt bad,Generic_Name came up to him and said "dont work remember Generic_Name always has the extra". Three days later Generic_Name waking up late but he thought he was early. Generic_Name and Generic_Name were not Generic_Name said "why not the national park its huge and beautiful". Then have a good time at all. We'll go to the most voted park first to the least since. Community park wasen't really that far its about 20 minutes over there.
When they arrived wasent really alot activites like the state park but was a good place for a walk and another spot. Gone in shock he ran to the living room to see everyone saying "good moring sleepy head". One day the 5 good friends or known as Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name were planning. Generic_Name then was conviced at the state park but. Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name,Generic_Name and Generic_Name all ran to the car then headed home. Generic_Name quickly went to get his clothes ran to his closet to change and get ready. Then they drove of to the final park of their month and "hopefully" said Generic_Name last one of the year.
When they arrived Generic_Name with almost anything thats a positive feeling. Instead played for thirty minutes they all went back. At a community park but Generic_Name and Generic_Name suggested a state park. After some talking and arguments everyone decided. During the walk they came back to the spot where they can eat. As ten minutes go by they forget about the time and. Ready to go, 2 hours later everyone all ready for the. State park had the most votes that was their first destination.
When they arrived mostly everyone was happy except Generic_Name. Once again they had to vote where to go.. Welcome to the story about 5 good firends. They hugged as they entered they were amazed to see how huge and beautiful this place is. Have to go to the park she voted for the community park. Everyone said walk first to see whats around and maybe play ball at a good spot. Generic_Name didn't really care where we went he just want to hurry this up so we all can soon go to the national park. If they loose 1 they Generic_Name will be holding the other one. Generic_Name said to Generic_Name "Thank you i nearly ruied our whole trip". To the car and on their way home on the. They finished then decided to play a quick ten minutes of ball. Generic_Name will be holding the extra was expensive but they had to go with it
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like when I came America with zero English that was the biggest straggle in my counsel. Nothing can make me stay a way from what make me successful.
And the end, as human our enthusiasm can make us stronger then failure. As human we can learn anyn things that we thought that is hard to learn it. But that never stop me from what I want to do. I could not focus with what I was doing like school and work and other thing because of people around me. Former British Prime Mrimister Winston Churchill once said that ''success consists of going failure to failure loss of enthusiasm. They were making fun of me when I spook English. So way where was applying for jobs the company require have whether Spinsh or English so I can not speak any of other, for tow year I was just home, job no money to help my family back home because of language
But I did not stop after two years fund a job so I was dishwasher, it was too tough to communicate with my Mangers and employees too. ''she said be yourself and if you are important to yourself that will makes it different''. That word change my life to think positive. "Do you agree with of Churchil's statment about the important role that failure plays in the pursuit of success ? Take a position on this question. All my families were worry about me. From experince , I'm saying yes that the failure makes my life better. No back round of school like knowledge or education because I never been in the school in my childhood so that made it for me so difficult to understand what the teachers were saying. So another attack of failure in my way, I did not no how to study because there was no one to help me what should I do in that time so fall at school. We have to look what other people did in the life because of enthusiasm. there were a lot of pressure no me . And one day I asked one of my friend what you did to be successful in your life. Now I'm a superior in the pace I work for it. So over and over I fall of everything. I did not let the language or anythings else to stop me back from what would me my life best.
School and Study .
Second , as student that was the hardest than that I though . Because I do not what let other people make decision of what should I do or not.
Self development
Third was to wake to believe of myself and to make nay decision. . I could not eat well for two years and I got sick. As emyplee , student and self developing.
Emyplee.
First, as emyplee it was not easy to find job because of English language. Use reasons and specific examples to support your ideas.
Yes I agree.
The Failure in My life.
The failure in the life is just the first step of counsel to success. Because of what other people were saying about me like that impossible that you can go further than that you are now which is can not get high school diploma there were a lot of failure in my life .From failure to a big surprise that I making this year, I will be my graduation form high school and the nest will be collage
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Although some students will don't want graduate early because they are not ready to being a university life or alone life, nevertheless for others students is a good choice being her life or overtake her life, for example they have more opportunities for study a long profession like Doctor, students will have more time to doing think they like as to travel, and if they want can make a family.
Students make a complied because they want to study a long profession and they don't have some many time to doing all thing they want. So many adolescences think in money since so young , they need money, money for buy some material thing like a car, an apartment, so many clothes so expensive. The students said normally the people finish high school between the 17 or 18 and they know are young, but some time they need a break before to enter the college and if one student want to study a long profession he or she don't have so many time to take a break and study a profession like a doctor than is during like
5 or 6 years. Additionally in the future may be they need another break after the finish college I opportunity the young people like travel too much and know others countries, they own country, they want watch new things, they know different s people, different language, different accent or pass free time with her family, friend, or play any sports. Maybe if they finish high school when they have 16 have more time to graduate the college early and doing so many thing they like to do.
Another students want finish early high school to do others things so different like make a family and find a good job they like so much. This significant than student need more time to doing one thing fun before to enter the college. This is important because although they have time when they graduate at 18 or 19. So many students need to finish the school more early than others, it's a good think the student finish high school in three years, they have more opportunities for study wherever they like. . This is important because the adolescences think finish most early high school is like they said " if I graduate the high school a the 16 then a began to work like than i will have 21 i have all the thing I need for begin an alone life, then will want to married get a big family.
In conclusion, the this a good program of some schools than students can graduate in three years, sometime students need more time in her life for doing thing they like an the opportunities for choice a some long profession and have time to do thing they like or job for a better life
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It was not easy but I did it.
I remenber some days that I had to walk for hours to be in some place close the border, and also some days that i didn't eat nothing because I didn't have food, and in some ocassions I feel that I can't no more, but on my mind I had a objective and a dream. Keep dreaming and get foccus on your objectives.
Don't be afraid in a world that is constantly trying to ,ake you something else, just be you and don't worry be happy, enjoy the little big things that the world give it to you like friends and family, enjoy with people that you love, and always be thankful with everyhing, if doesn't matter if it is good or bad, everything happen for a reason.. You change the world, and you have to be sure what you want and what you do not want, you have to be yourself, you can be different, the different it is not bad, because sometimes "Be like others is do not be no one".
For those reasons is why you have to be yourself, you have to follow your dreams and you have to fight for them, don't let the people throw you, and if you felt, you have to get up and keep fighting for your dreams. My objective and my dream were stay in this country and to provide help to my family.
But in my mind I am keeping have some objectives and dreams, and one of my objectives is makes to my parents proud of me and one of another objective for me is be a example to my brothers, I wanna give it to them the best of the world.
My brothers and my parents are the reason why I work hard everyday, and I try to do the best on school, I try to be a really good students but sometimes it is hard for me, because the languages are different, so I try everyday to learn English, so everything can be easier and that can help me a lot.
You always have to be yourself because a more than a person goes to like you, so just be you and don't let the world change you. Remenber if you felt 99 times, you have to get up 100 times, and never let that people and the world convert you in something that you don't want it, in something that you don't love it, in something that you don't wish or something that you don't enjoy.
Also in my life some people tried to change myself, but I always try the way to carry on and keep fighting for my drams, and one of my dreams was traveled to this country, and some people told me that I can not do it, even some people told me that I will die on the long way from El Salvador to United States.
That was a long and a hard way, a diifficult trajectory, but I did my objective. I am agree with Emerson's statement about individuality because in this world you have to be yourself and if doesn't mater how you are, you have to be yourself even if the world is against, because the world doesn't change you. It was not easy, because sometimes I had to sleep in the desert or in some mountains, so the polices can not found me.
Also sometimes I had to move the one place to another placer and some pelaple and me did it acrros the cars, but we had to hide on the trunk of the cars, and I remenber we was like 12 persons on a trunk car
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If students get this opportunity to take their classes online, ''I'' think it will be a good idea and they will benefit from being able to attend classes from home, Because Many students can't be at for many reasons,they can be sick or injured. In some cases the student can have family ''(kids and wife)'' and online classes can help the student to spread more time with his/her family.
In conclusion,
schools offering distance leaning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. And it can prevent people from getting sick too.
Online classes are easier because, students can take the class at anytime they want and do what every they want do after the class. Two, online classes help to students to take class at anytime they want . . And they can take the class after work or before work on online. So the student getting the opportunity for taking or getting his/her work done on online classes will make it easier for the student, instead of students going to school when they're sick or Injured. The students can do whatever they want to after taking the class on online ( spreading time with family and having fun).
THE END....... Also online classes makes it easier for students who have jobs and the same time going/attending school.
Moreover, online classes can save students some money and time. This opportunity will help students in so many ways. For example Students get a job and make some money to pay for school fees and bills and also they can support their family with the money. Students can save that money for gas and do something else with, for example they can pay bills with that money or even they can support they're family with money. Because driving to school everyday is a waste of gas, money and time. So a sick student can stay at home and get his/her work done so they wouldn't be to spread the sickness or the disease around the school. Some schools offer distance leaning as an option for student to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. Three, online classes save students more time and money.
Many students can't be at school for many reasons, for example the student can be sick or injured. Students will get more time to get they're work done on time and also save money for them self. Generic_Name
ONLINE CLASSES ARE BETTER THAN GOIING TO SCHOOL.
Talking online classes are way easier and better then attending/going to school
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Here is another example, my Math and History have good grades, but my English and Science don't have good grades, so not everyone is gonna have good grades, people have strengths and weaknesses, they just got to study and work because not everyone is perfect.
In addition, some others may say that going from failure to success is a waste of time. For example, my friends told someone that playing basketball is not a good sport for him, but overtime he has gotten better at basketball. They also say that they have to work hard to pay for their house, their bills, health insurance, car insurance, and even for their family. Not everyone is gonna succeed in life, we all make mistakes. . Going from failure to success in life is not easy, but they just got to have the potential to reach that goal.
First, some people may tell others that going from failure to success is a good thing. Also, it is a good idea if they study and learn the materials they could accomplish. People just got to try harder even if it takes years to achieve. The people in the world that say that it is a waste of time are the people that can be homeless or the people that just have no life at all.
Lastly, the reason why that everyone should always go from failure to success is because it's gonna make people feel good about there selves. Things aren't gonna be easy, people just got to understand that it is life, we just got to work harder.
On the other hand, most people in the world experience this. Even in school, it is very unlikely to find someone that is not having a hard time with there classes. There is not one person in the world that didn't have any issues throughout their whole life. Most people in the world are gonna say "practice makes perfect." Another example is that my sister wanted to go to UVA, and she studied hard to get into that college, my family thought they wouldn't accept it, but a few weeks later, they accepted her in UVA. What Minister Churchill is trying to say is that going from failure to success is not gonna be easy in life. What could they do to reach their career and have success? People will agree with this statement. Failure is not the end of the world, people just got to find what is best for them. People think that there is a lot of information in school, college, and even a job that they have to go through just to have success in life. Even if people don't succeed in life it is fine because they still have a chance, all they got to do is to study hard and work hard for it because in the future they will not regret it. Another reason why you should be successful is if people finish everything they need for their career, then they don't have to deal with it in the future than having to deal with it later. Others say that it won't help their career in the future. Everyone was not smart when they were born, people got to work for it to get smarter
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Students should have to commit career at a young age bacuse they can trust what their are doing. Studrents can reach their goals.
Students who commit to a career at a young age always doing better things in them life, and when students get a old age he or her always know what they have to do because they trust their work when they was young.
Ex: Generic_Name said, when she was a young, she was trust her things and it was always teaching her many thing and shows her what to do and how to be, and many people was care about her, they was not doing them things without her, when they want to do their things, they was waiting her because she was help them and teaching their, and she get an achievement in her life, and reach her goal.
Students having to commit to a career at a young age to get an achiever in future, they doing what their trust, and they always doing what they know because they believe that whatever they trust puting them in a good way to reach them goals.
Ex: Generic_Name said,When she was young, to commit to a career was the best thing that put her in the best way, and believe her thing, when she belive her things, always she was in a good way and it always protect her life, and many people get to respect her, because there are people who was not having an respect to her, and it's shows her what kind of something she have to do that can give her the way to reach her goal.
Coulcaim:Many people said, Students should not having to commit to a career at a young age because it's not important in their life,it cannot help them anything at all.
Therefore: to commit to a career can teaching students nothing in their life, they cannot trust or believe them work or what they are doing.
Coclusion: To commit to a career in life makes students to understand many things, and if students trust them things they can get good safe in their life, they can teach others and protect their life, and students having to trust them things in lives, students cannot lives without trust what they are doing and reach their goals.
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and some parntants don't have the money to pay for a teacher, so if we can work togather to make a club that helps out students that would be great for the students, and the parntents would not have to pay alot of money to make they child good at school.
a other example would be that students can stay afterschool with there teachers, but for a little bit of time, so if were going to have a homework club lets make it more than 47 minumies. More time equlas a lot of work getting compled.
in conclusion we need a homework club it can help out a lot of students and save a lot of pernts money, and also make stundents pass more tests and help tham on schoolwork, and make students feel like difficult work is easy since they got all the help they need from the afterschool club, also if some teachers don't feel like staying for another they could just let the students help each other and let the teacher rest.
overall I think this idea is very good, and well help out a lot of students with there work. . I argree with haveing a afterschool homework club, because It well help out alot of students improve in school, and do better overall.
also don't you want extral help when you need it? students are the same they want help on schoolwork and homework cause it could be difficult.
students don't really like difficult homework, so they give up and do something else, but with a homework club they can go afterschool and do the work there teachers can help students out.
for example I sometimes need help, so I have a teacher that helps me at home with my work and my parntents has to pay that teacher
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If you compare this jobs with like a being a doctor, dentists, or technician; this jobs requires you to have a college degree, and you have to go to college for either 2,3,4 or 5 years so you can get the degree of any of this careers, and they pay you a lot and it is not heavy and you don't expose yourself to hot or cold temperatures, and that is a benefit for you if you want to have a really sotf or calm job.
Basically if you know what career you want to take, and you prepare yourself like taking all your classes, and what you need, you should be good for the most part. For example, you can be a singer, and if your music is loved by most of the people you can success and make money out of it by selling albums or promoting your songs to different platform in internet. For example, when you know what career you want to take since the beginning of high school and you are focus on that career, and you take the classes that will help you be prepare for that career, when you go to college you have an idea, and you are not going to be as stress as other students who didn't want to take advantage of that.
I would personally take the chance so I can be prepared for college, I think if I take classes that will help me be prepared it would obviously be good for me. Playing sports like soccer, basketball, tennis, or baseball can give you a chance to make money, for example, you can have a career out of that, but you most good for big teams to pick you up and pay you which payment is a lot if you make it to the big teams.
This doesn't always work for everyone only for the talented ones that were meant to be good at each of the careers. Not all the time going to college to get a degree so you can get a job is the only way to get money or make a living out of it. In fact, not going prepare to college it can be complicated to students and probably stressful since they have no idea what so ever of what they are going to see or learn. My parents also recommend me to commit to my career at young age so I can learn and practice my skills. Some students finish high school and then they decide to do this type of careers which sometimes work for few of them, they reached their goals and sometimes they don't even finish high school, but if they can't accomplish this, then they have all they need which is their diploma or they can continue with their studies to get the job they would like to have.
In conclusion, is a good thing that students commit to a career early so they can be prepared for the future this will also help them develop their capacity when they go to college where things will get a little bit hard for them. Some students don't have the support of their parents like I do and they just decide to finish high school and be done which is not really good if they want to get a job that will give them a lot of money, and most of the jobs requires you to have a degree of some sort or specific for that job.
There are jobs that don't ask for anything just the high school diploma, but those jobs don't really pay that much, and they are kind of heavy, not all of them but most of them. Some jobs like construction, and plumber don't require that you need to have a college degree just the high school diploma, and this jobs also pay really good, but they are really tiring and heavy, mostly construction that you have to be outside in that hot temperature or cold. In most cases student are committed to a career at a young age by school or their parents to guide them early. For example, I like to play soccer, but I am not good enough to make a career out of it, so I decided to finish my studies, follow my career, and get the job that I would like. Most of the students do this and they success in their careers, I would to the same because I know high school will help me get prepare for college, and I don't have to feel the pressure of not knowing anything all, I already have a little bit of understanding and knowledge.. This could be a benefit for them, since they are young and have the capacity to learn faster, also if they are in high school it would be good for them to be guided at a young age to help them on a career they would like to take, and when they go to college,they don't find the stuff they are going to see complicated, and they are somewhat prepare and have an idea of what they are going to learn if they choose to go to college.
I think it is a good idea for students to commit to a career at a young age because it helps students prepare their mentality, knowledge, and give them an idea of what they are going to see, and focus on the career they want to choose. I already know what career I want to take and the classes that are recommended for that specific career, and it is actually good because I can learn more about that career, I know that I am capable for the career I want and that it will not be hard for me since I always liked what I want to do which is about computers, and technology related. Most of the time students do not want to commit to a career at a young age because they are either so stressed out from school and they feel like they cannot decide what career they want to take or because they feel like it is not really going to help them much on what they choose. Some students don't know or can't decide what career they want to take, and that is not okay because they most know by the time they are at least in 11th grade, so school can give them the appropriate classes to prepare them for that career, and those classes to help them when they go to college
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Unluckily purposes don't come by itself as a miracle. Among the time the girl started to eat healthier and started to walk everyday she was adding one more lap ,then she started to jug and after run . Each human person in the world have a purpose , goal to get in a future and is something that we really want to have in our life. We are trying we aren't being like the rest and that make us unique ans specials, show to whoever said we could't do it or make it how wrong they were and they judge us before knowing our capacities. A lot of girls bother her, and others saw her crying and hurt and they didn't stop them. There is a lot of people doing a lot of activities everyday and some others doing nothing than just watch TV. We won't feel good after that and we'll feel embarrass of ourselves , we wouldn't be capable of going out with our mind thinking in what other people is thinking . After everything we'll feel great and proud of what we've done.
It is hard to try without being scared , without doubt .Believe in our capacities is something that we stopped doing , and say I can't became more common and we hear that everyday. Show others trust and appreciation for everything they get , be happy for them and give them more motivation.
Generic_Name an English teacher said "People just see the defect in other person's life without seeing in their person's first" . It won't be perfect at the first try , it may not be the same thing that we were expecting, but the effort you put is what it counts. Demonstrate the people that was supporting us what we did to make them proud and we know how good we are going to feel that day. It is so much emotions going on and we can't describe the feeling after we went through all that and we finally did it,we got our purpose we make it and the feeling of victory is inexplicable,we need more positivism in us.. This is a experience that taught me to see different the things , to see how we can do it
, if we want , if we put a lot of effort and we are patient to see the changes. No one is perfect we might see people getting their purposes easily and we can't understand how , what we don't know is the reality of how the live by the way we don't need to be comparing our live with others life .
A girl from school had extra weight and she didn't played any sports , she was lazy to walk and all her friends were skinny and she felt bad about herself and very ashamed of her body she tried to lose weight but slowly she was quitting ,she was crying a lot and feeling weird and unwanted by everyone , some students started to judge her and no one wanted be her friend and they were bullying her . A lot of people accomplish more if they are always doing something and others ask if inactivity also serve as a purpose. What we can really do is confront the reality , understand our mistakes try to solve them ,try to get better by the time . Her bones and body develop she got skinnier and after she got back to school everyone got impressed .Now she was more confident and it wasn't easy , it took time , tears , sacrifices but she did it . Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle..It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing".
Some person's give up easily, they think is impossible, hard, complicated, but basically what they are doing is waste their capacity to make something and improve themselves, just because someone doesn't trust in our capacity means we have to stop doing what we like and quit . At the beginning of every subject we want to experience by doing it ,is hard , we got anxiety, nervous,sad,happy. Always is better to try than just watch .Everyone has their daily things to do , some people work , others study , others do both or more things and they don't have time for them. We don't do things we want to do because of our insecurities and our laziness when there is a lot of people dying to have an opportunity. It is necessary to take our time to make this things possible, it is necessary to have clearly our mind and see what are we capable to do and how far we can go . We don't need to take care of what others say, they might give us advises but we are the only ones deciding our actions.
What the quote means is how we make bad decisions an sometimes we just do what others do,or we just quit to something we were trying to do and it was hard so we drop off that and now we don't do anything else than watch others happy for getting their purpose. If we fall down we need to stand up again , dropping some tears and being in bed all day won't help , think in what other people might think about us won't do anything than just make us feel even more weak. Every person has a different purpose,some purposes are complicated to reach,and there's also some less complicated but doesn't make any difference because every person decides and picks what are their purposes and whether if they give up or they do anything to reach them. We can't limit ourselves with good stuff we need to spend time and learn new things , experience , teach other people and share our experiences and recommend and help others to never quit. This is so truth , we don't see in ourselves first , we spend more time critizating and wishing bad luck to those making their purposes , feeling jealous of them because they could do it and we could't because we didn't want to put effort and time so we'd rather give up and do nothing than just complain about it and make excuses .That is not a reason , choosing a goal or purpose is something we need take it seriously because if you take it like a game then we are wasting your time , and the time of those person's helping us and going through all our steps , in our mentality has to be all positive .Being more strong than our bad thoughts feel proud of us,because we are doing something that others can't do. Quit is the easy way to give up , and that is they way to demonstrate weakness the people that didn't trust in us would laugh and spread the rumors of our fail
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Also, I think that the students know better to turn off their phones, if they don't want their phones to be taken away. Students need their phones for any emergencies. Students still bring their phones to school whether you teachers and principal don't allowed them to. However, students are to understand that teachers don't want them to be disturbing the class. Dear, Principal
In my opinion, I think that you should allow students to bring their phones to school, but with the condition, to use them outside their classes. So, I absolutely agree with the policy of letting students bring their phones
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TOMAS JEFFERSON
Thomas Jefferson wrote, important article for benefit the our society."His determine to be idle in his life.
It's wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing like Tomas Jefferson doing in the his life.
Do we accomplish more if we are always doing something, or does inactivity also serve a purpose to the our community. Like Tomas Jefferson was in the his life wrote important stuff.
Thomas Jefferson is a person that our society need because he was and still important, I learn from hin different thing .
Example; He was a wonderful man so we can learn from him and do many different thing to benefit my community.
In comclution
Thomas Jefferson was and still a wonderful person for our society. I learn a lot from hin how can be a good person in my community also in my life.
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Now that I showed you how hard could it be for students that would take a three year high school program, now it clarifies that theres no need to rush with education and that students should take normal high school program because it wouldn't be so hard as taking the other program that I just talk about, in conclusion students have more changes to graduate with a four-year-program, as long as they keep themselves in track with what they are suppose to do it won't be no problem, and there will be less stress for them, more freedom to take a break when they need to, and enough time to study.. Not because of the time but for those students that would decide that they would not only risk to fell some classes but also not to take elective classes during summer because that's what this prompt says.
It will be more stressful:
As we all know school sometimes can be stressful but imagine how stressful if for students that graduate in four years as every other normal programs that high schools offer, now imagine how it would it be for students that take programs allowing them to graduate in three years. I'll say they have to work even harder, during the summer they have to take courses in order to be upgraded to the grade the are going to, also a lot of SOL's test will be taking in less time, I'm not saying that those people won't have enough time to study, but what I'm saying is they would have a really busy schedule with all their classes plus all of those tests coming up it wont be easy for them.
The reason that why I used those examples to explain the main idea like this, it was for you to understand that such as that program it can be very difficult for students, not just that but for students that might not be quick to understand new subjects or new units, it can get them stuck in there with no option but to get into a point when they would just give it up and quit because it will get really hard for them. My position about this prompt is that students should not take the program that allow students to graduate them in three years, because is not like taking normal classes, for example what would happen if students get to take the program that will allow them to graduate in 3 years?
They would have to take more classes in less time:
Because as I read in the prompt there was one part that says "for students in order to graduate must take summer courses", and this means that they would not have a break in this time
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Do students that attand classes from home, ever cheet?! we'll never know if they do. all I can think of is what I provided. You get your work done and you move on. Other students that gets in trouble all the time are just better off learning from home. We all are doing the same work, depanding on our grades. What If It was so bad that I couldn't go to school?! Some students are just not good at school, and just prefer learning from home online or by video conferencing. Anyways, It's not like people at home are doing less work than people at school. Yes, I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. It is hard as a kid or a young teens to go to school and have to deal with other kids, and I get it, because it is hard for me to deal with other kids too. I would like an answer for my question, but I bet there will never have a proper answer.
There is a lot of resons why it is good for students to be able to take classes from home, and I will never be able to tell you all that resons. They aren't in a classroom. their will be no more trouble.
Most of the times our parents say that going to school and socialism is good for us. But this is what my attantion goes to. The only differance between people that are taking online or video conferencing from people at school is that they are not going to school. We all need to turn in our work on time or it will be counted late, same test, same quiez everything. There, at home, there is no one to to fit with. Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attand classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. We all have to studie for our test, quiez... Less take me as an example; I had personal problems before, and It was auwefull. Is that true?! Is that the case?! Well I am not sure about that, but what I do know is that I think we students should have the options to decide what we really are confortable with, and our parents should help us with that. Online or video conferencing are not so bad themself, I will have done if I have the opportunity to.. But not all of those kids are hard to deal with
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Should my school follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business to extend the school day to two hours for a four-day week? This idea has an advantage and on the other hand a disadvantage because student will be stress out, some will not get enough time to rest before going to work,and they wont get time to learn.
First,students will be stress out. When this happens,the student will end up failing the class which is not suppose to happen.
Again,most of the student will not get enough time to rest after school before going to work. There are different kind of people in a school,some may be fine when it comes to sitting for a longtime,others may have problems. Example;if a teacher is teaching and the students are sleeping,the student will end up not hearing what the teacher said about the topic. some students may be sleeping while the teacher is teaching. Teachers always rush when they are teaching just to catch up the syllabus and students will not understand the concept they are teaching but when two hours is added to the time,the teacher will take her time to explain for the students to understand the concept very well.
I will conclude by saying,adding two hours for a four-day week school has a lot of disadvantages,therefore,my school should not follow the route of a conserve energy and resource business or else it will affect the academics of the students,and also weak the body since they dont have enough sleep. Example;some people do not close early when they go to work,those student get a little time to rest before going to work.
This idea is important because,it will help teachers to complete their syllabus in time and also rest on the fifth day,and get time to be with their kids. Sitting down for more than three hours can cause waist and back pain. . some subjects involves a lot and needs much time to complete. Majority work after school,therefore,they have enough time to rest before going to work. There are a lot of students in high school who work and cater for their living. If the school hours is extended by two hours,they will not have enough time to rest and will be sleeping later in the day in class
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Human behavior mostly influences in their achievements and failures throughout life. I strongly agree with the Churchill's statement regardless to the critical role failure plays in life. It influences in many adolescences, gives the hope of being able to achieved their expected accomplishments and it provides higher knowledge from their mistakes. A successful person is the one who have seem to dedicated their time to be able to greatly achieved their dreams. If we keep encouraging people to practice resilience, they would most likely be able to manage every hard situation in life and would have the courage to keep trying even if they are aware they might fail, in other words, they would be practicing negative reinforcement that is based on failing but being aware they could have rewards at the end.
Overall, Failure plays an essential role in the pursuit of success since it gives individuals the challenge of becoming better human being and achieving their goals regardless to the situation. We, as humans tend to follow other's behavior to feel accepted by society. . Society has been exacerbating this concept by creating irrational fear in those who are not willing to take risks to become better persons once they seemed to have failed, which leads to the mediocrity of the world.
Furthermore, there are many people who were born in a extremely poor region, yet they became successful persons due to the hard work they constantly showed and the multiple failures they have experienced, that helped them work harder on specific goals, and that have made an enormous impact in many young minds since it exposes how someone could be able to achieved anything they are expecting, if you keep trying. It gives the enthusiasm every individuals need in order to be successful in life, it motivates young minds to follow their expectations, and provides more knowledge in many cases since we learn from our mistakes.
Accordingly to many researches, individuals tend to give up when they are facing an obstacle in a complicated occasion, that prevented most of society to stop achieving their accomplishments due to the constant fear of experiencing failure. It exposes how human behavior react with the idea that success is not only one extraordinary idea. What is success without failure?
I can infer that the mentioned statement Prime Minister Winston had provided has an strong point of view from many perspectives. If individuals were to give up in the first try, we would be a world with ignorant in it.
Moreover, It is psychological proven that a brain can effectively works in better conditions, if they seem to be in a place where failure could be the main issue. Success means being able to manage the situation with resilience and perseverance even if they seem to have made multiple mistakes. To be able to achieved your expected goals without loosing enthusiasm, and demonstrating resilience is the greatest accomplishment
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If students study a lot they can do better. work hard and believe in your self. Smart. To change the way to you study. Students develop their studying skill and more knowledge.
Although, taking class in school isn't that much bad but student can't concentrate at class. When I take class in school i can not focus that much because to many students yelling at class. Students become thoughtful.
In conclusion, Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. I am seeking to do more than I do on class. Students being thoughtful and work Harding. When he study at home, the place is quit that can he focus in studying, then he will be smart and good thinker. I have online class thins year. They will get good job.
This provide that, Being though full. ,Nevertheless, Being taking online class at home important to develop knowledge. Student should have opportunity to take online class and Done with their work and have time to rest. Because, Students being focus only on online class. When they take online class they start thinking much. They don't want to studying at home. . So taking online class is better. That is better way to improve skills. being work harder. Being taking online class at home important to develop your skills of studying. Being Good thinker. That is make students proud. they start seeking to understand about that class. They being prefect and smart. Then you will graduate. If I start taking online class I will save my time on the other hand I develop my knowledge. However, Students have time to study. When you do by yourself you will have much confidence. Students will get better grade. If you study on online you will get better and you will believe in yourself. Also you could do any test. Fixing The way of i'm studying before. Gain perfect. Students become work hard and study hard. Improve the way of studying. And Students will have confidence on their self. Being developing skill of studying and developing knowledge.
This for that, Taking online class help you get more knowledge and skills. So they will take care of about the subject. Nobody can bother you when you take online class at home. Being smart.
For example, When students before taking online class they pay for it. Online class helps you study more and also, help to having experience.
Obviously, Online class can provide your problems. Instead of playing game study online class. genius. Gain perfect. Being confidence by yourself. They will finish early and they start doing another stuff. Being gain smart. Gain smart. When they take in class they start taking with friends they stop focusing on class. To be a good thinker. To avoid bored of study. That is the way of improve knowledge. Being work harder. Students get more free time to do online class at home. If you study a lot on online class you will do a lot. Students know what to do so, If they want to take their time, online class is one of the best way to take their time. Students can get more opportunity to do better job. They start thinking to do more. Most students are hated studying at home. Seeking to know more. I can do by myself.
To began, Taking Online class at home is help to take students time. you won't afraid any tests. That is student can get benefit.
Clearly, The way of taking class at home can save your time. But, If they have online class they starting study and they will fix their problem. They starting believe in their self. Some people thinking taking online class is bored but isn't bored if you try to know something about what you are studying you will be loved it. Students can get benefit from being able to attend class from home. That's makes me have confidence in myself. Being happy. I prefer to take online class because it's much easier than taking school. Online class can save your time. gain smart. Instead of studying they prefer to play games. Instead of wasting time taking online class at home. you will better than that you did on class. Being develop skill. When you take online class you will save your time. They will be focus on that and getting good grade. Nobody yell at him he can concentrate and also he can think very well. Also, online class can help you to fix your problems. If you senor you want to graduate this year but you didn't finish your credits, So the best way is that you can take online class which is you have to take to graduate this year
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What i'm trying to say is takeing a risk is not always bat every thing happens for a reson at lest that is what my parants said. I evan told my frinds about it and they where like "can I chick it out" if i sed no i would sound disrspactful so I said sure ill bring it tomorrow in lunch.
Taking more then one oppenion might be time consuming but trust me it will help you make a 90% better choose then if you would just run in blind and start makeing bad chooses. Its always fun learning about other peoples storys and what they did to get to where they are. That is what all of the succesful peaple do inclouding the prastent, besniss men, loyers becoase if the make the wrong call they could posibly face some vary big concaconses and if you want to be succeful you will have to be vary careful and take as many oppenions as posoble.
Taking peoples oppeinons could be risky at times but a good tip is to take that risk. Taking more then one persons oppenion is a good way to make your final call for example, ther was one time where I wanted two differant books but I only had eangh for one. if you do lesson to every thing I said in this your oppenions to others would change a lot and what i mean by that is you will look at many thing in a differant precpactive, your disagon makeing would change lats say you take six peaples oppenions three of them said there favert coler was blue and the other three said green now this is when a risk comes in now you are going to chose a coler lats say you chose blue now the numbers have changed 4 blue and 3 green so blue won. . and let me tell you I had a lot of fun reading that book. I had to make a good disagon becouse if I did not then it would have been a wast of $15. one of the book was called Nialarmstrong it talked about the life of Nialarmstrong and the other was called Dog Man it talked about a dog that some how got transformed in to a human offecer cinda like capton americ exapet hes not a super solder. taking big riskes is a part of our lives every human being took a risk at lest ones in there lives sometimes you would not evan know that you took that risk but in realty you did for example im take a risk typing this ovesly the conscances are not that big but they still mater in life.
My oppenion is to watch out, becareful, and take the risk like I sad riskes dont alway tearn out bad. these thing is are in you every day life so you have to becarful,take risks,and take other oppenions. My conclogon is paople should take more then one oppeinon.
I dicided to take my frends Generic_Name oppenion he told me to " take Dog man it is so cool " but i feelt like there was something about the Nailarmstrong book. I did not stop there I wanted anther oppenion so then I want and asked the libarn oppenion she told me " the nailarmstrong book sounds better to me but your choose to pick out the book that standes out the most to you" so then i took her edvide and the book that stoude out the most to me was Nailarmstrong
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However, if you show them by how you act like for an example: you don't bother anyone, you show where a location is or try to, being polite, patience, showing manners, etc.
they will find you setting a good example or showing good behavior. Not only setting a good example can make people say you're a good person , it can also lead to "good karma".
Lets say you have a younger sibling, and they want to be like you , you can be smart , responsible,and a good behaving person, show them a good example so they can be as successful as you. . In my opinion setting a good example is the only way to influence people you're a good person. same goes to people dont show them a bad behavior or example, thats not gonna get you anywhere, that'll only make people not like you and assume different things. Another thing is always set good example when you're out in public with a family member, because if you dont people will not like that and have your family at fault.
in conclusion to all this if you show good behavior or set a good example by showing it , It will not only make people assume you're a good person it will also influence young ones to do the same. many people wont believe you're a good person just because you say you are
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Make them regret what they said and go accomplish more.. So what if they dislike your achievements? so what if they start doubting? prove them wrong with all your accomplishments that are coming your way. I agree that praising a students work is an outstanding idea to jump start a students path to success,but praise is not the way to increase their self-esteem. By accomplishing something could make you learn new things in life too. Students will also have a harder time dealing with constructive criticism. I say this because people don't usually thank you or give you any comments they usually mean. You don't need people telling you about your work or whatever you are doing because at the end of the day you're the only one who knows what you're accomplishing in life. Teachers should let students achieve their goals and not worry about what the other person has to do or say. If you achieve something and you keep on achieving things in life you will get many blessings. You would never know what could come out someone's mouth.
They wouldn't want to agree with this but, that's because we all think different and most of us know the real meaning behind something similar to this. People don't usually know the difference between praising and achieving your goal without it. However, if a student works really hard to achieve something,then that feeling of completion can motivate them to continue to their path of success. By overpraising a student his or her confidence has to be on a different level. Getting your business done without any praising and knowing you put your all into it could make you feel way better about yourself and it would just not motivate you but the people around you. People get confused and don't get the message, we need more people to believe in their selves and not about what other people have to say.
Although I think it's nice of people complimenting and saying positive things about your work but, I still have to go with achieving it on your own
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Since the majority of people want the success, but the successful does not come over night. Obviously, having a positive attitude will help you success. Even if you always are failing in your life, but if you still have a positive attitude you can achieve your goals and be successful.
First, with a positive attitude the people are going to recognize you as a person that always like to fight with positive attitude an achieve your goals. To demonstrate this positive attitude you can achieve your goals no matter what obstacle that life put in front of you.
Secondly, to be successful you need to have a positive attitude. In other words you just have to find your talent and prove in a different way that you can be successful. you should use your talent and so you can change the direction of your goals. Some persons are always trying to make you negative but you have to keep going and fight for your future. . Clearly not everyone needs to have a positive attitude to have an accomplishment.
Surely having a positive attitude is beneficial to accomplish effectively what your proposes of life should be.
If you are not successful in something, it is because you are not trying something that is a passions of yours. So you have to get out of your comfortable place and take control of your life without fear. Something the success does not come as fast you would like. Many people believe that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. The most important thing to success is to know what you really want in life and grab it with an attitude.
Sometimes it is not important to have a positive attitude to obtain success
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Because she's older than me. They think, we don't need anyone to guidance us.
But I think in every moment of life, we need someone, who had a lot of experts to guidance us.
Father and mother are the best persons, to share our everything in our life.
They have a lot of experience and important matters in life. In the first he was so happy, but after a few months he become sad.
When he saw his all friends going to school and he works he felt sad.
He was so regretful, because of what he did. Because we don't have any experiences of the thing.
My uncle, he was 17 years old. Sometime before i say anything she know, I'm thinking about what and what I want to tell her. Everyday we meet a new thing in our life. That we don't know what is it? and where is it come from? Our parent are older than us, they know everything. thats means, they understand better about us and about our situation.
My mom she always feel me. She was in my age before me.
We are like a person that don't know about anything, because everything is new for us. "My son always share whatever you have in your mind with the person that you can trust and believe, and listen to them, they will always guide you".
Finally he understood, what he did was wrong, but he also like to work too.
That time he came to his father and share that he wants to study and work.
His father was so happy that his son come and asked him for showing the good way.
His father guide him and show him that what should he do.
He went to school and also continued his work too.
Right now he's a businessman, he always says" to us to share anything with your family or friends".
He said that to us" the way that I am success and a good businessman was my dad experience, my dad guidance".
I learn from my uncle that if your mom and dad teach you how to speak and how to eat and.... We should learn something from the experiences.
Life is full of thing, actually new thing. They can feel us In every situation.
We always should ask from our mother or father, about our life decisions.
we should have someone to hear us and support us.
Our parent experience can be a lesson for us.
Experiences make our life. LIFE DECISIONS
In every part of our life, we need someone to share something with them.
Maybe they are our family or friends.
In these days, people are more self-reliance. Having the experience are good, you know better how to solve a problem and guide someone who trust you.
If I have a plan for future I will share it with my mom, she support me and guide me.
Experience of the life are best lessons to us, everyone should guidance from experts of their parent or friends.. If i am sad even if i didn't tell her she know that I am sad. He always just listen to himself.
He didn't share anything with anyone until he did the work, than he comes and tell us that what I did.
Everyone was sad about him because he was younger and he don't know about anything.
His mother and father told him to finish school first then open a fast food, but he didn't listened to them.
He leaved the school and started his work. He wanted to open a small fast food in our country. He didn't listen to his parent and he just did what he wants.
Than he came to his parent and said sorry, because of not sharing his idea with his parents.
My grandfather said to him" I was in your age, I did the same mistake that you did, but in different way. They were in our age and now they're older than us. I told you to school is the first important thing in our life, you can't leave an important thing in life"."I had the experience that why i was trying to tell you that. they also can teach us how to life good.
I always ask from my mom and share my day happens with her.
She hear me and feel me
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Avoiding classes online will reduce the percent of students to become wird and shy and to have a better relationship with people.
In conclusion, many schools of the United States should stop offering students online classes becuase it requires a lot of work for the students. They believe that students will have flexible schudeles during the day. Also, students are afraid to interact with other people face to face because they spend most of time in their computers. Although some say that offering online classes by the school would be more beneficial, actually it won't be beneficial for students who wants to attend online classes offered by the school because it will require more work for students and students will have less interaction with people face to face.
Those who believe schools should offer online classes have reasons. If students want to take other classes they won't have time to do it. Essays and reading books counts as a big percent of his grade. He says that he doesn't have too much time to practice a hobby or do something else because he needs to do a lot of assignments for his online class. They also think that students will become more responsable attending classes from home. Schools should privide students a diferent method to help students to attend their classes becuase online classes keep students from the real world and their interaction with people. And it doesn't include the warm-ups and classworks during the class. Also his class online requires to write a lot, such as essays or read books. One day her school offered her some online classes to take. Students don't see benefits of attending online classes, instead it just make their life difficult in many ways.. It will help students to relieve strees and to work if they have a part-time job. Sometimes he has to do two homeworks each day just for one class. Some schools of the United States are looking forward to the day that students will attend classes from home by way of online. For instance, my counsin Generic_Name she used to be a girl that really liked to interact with people. These classes just make students's life busier than what they expected. Like my friend Generic_Name his life has become very busy since he stated taking this online class offered by his school.
In fact, students become very wird because they have less interaction with people face to face. Doing their work in their own will develop a self- decipline.
One of the main reasons why schools of the United States shouldn't offered students to attend classes online from their is because it requires more work from the students. Making students to attend classes online happens will change many students lives. Requiring this ammount of work schools shouln't offered these classes online because too much work is assigned just for one class. For example, my friend Generic_Name. He is attending one class online from his home. The real world need students who like to interact with people not shy students. Later, her parents found out that her online clases made her become a wird child because of the less interaction she had with people. Well in a short period of time her parents starting to notice that she was becoming a very shy and wird person when time was passing and continuing taking clases online. Dispite this exciment it can be not beneficial for some students in the way of learning. She said yes
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Self-reliance allows one to follow their own path and makes their own decisions. Like when we shop, you choose between two or more pieces of clothing. The process of thinking about your ideas.
Our stance on the matter of self-reliance in humans stans to show people need to be self reliant because it is good to not distinctly require independence on any other. The prices are in the same range, a worker comes up to you asks if you need assistance. In our minds we think about different things in a situation, the good and the bad. People who are self-reliance are capable of doing the same tasks they are in. People are capable of making their own decisions. Others can conduse issues more than solve them, at times. With guidance it can be helpful, it can also be misleading and people aren't completely following their instincts. The thought of, what am I going to do, to make my essay satisfied so I can succeed? You feel like you need to find information yourself, managing your stress and time. These types of situations is what most people struggle with, but this helps people benefit from themselves.
We all value self-reliance to the fact that if someone makes their own decisions they have to solve the problem. Guidance is helpful if there are no choices that the person sees that needs it. An over-sized black hoodie and a regular sized white hoodie. Although guidance makes you sound weak, but we want to be satisfied with our decisions. In nature, most animals get to be self-reliance in order to stay alive, for example, as bear gets older, their parents have to let them go alone in the wild.
We have voices in our minds that we talk to, and get really indecisive. With self-reliance, one is more keen on their own inabillities and strives to problem solve with a more in-depth and notable understanding.. Then you feel like you're being held back by people who offer advice.
When I read my prompt for this essay, I struggled coming up with ideas and examples
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And I have more fun around my friends.
finally, In sixth grade I was in band and I was in strings class. Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself. In the eight grade i made ice cream and it was fun but it was so cold.
furthermore, and the sports that I play are fun to because I play tennis and wrestling. I played the drums in math class and I played the viola in strings class I was very good at the instrument but I stopped in seventh grade. They are very fun and i like tennis more because I got hurt more in wrestling then tennis. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I
played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.
first of all, I like to do science experiments and one time in seventh grade I dissected a frog and it was fun. And sometimes I play tennis witch is pretty fun and wrestling. Once I was in the fifth grade and I put a gummy bear in a cup of water and it got bigger. And most of my friends do tennis and I like that. When i was in the sixth grade I was in band and strings class and I
played the drums and the viola that was my favorite until i got to the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it.. But in the eight grade I started to play the trumpet and I liked it I think I can play that instrument better than the viola and the drums.
in the conclusion, Do you think educational activity's can be enjoyable? I think they are because I like science experiments and I love when I do them myself
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Allthuo life is hared and learening is hared but som times whan you learen a lote you get a lote .
whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. "Unles you try to do somthing beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow".
Yes you will never grow becuase you will never have now experience, that will need in the feater I agree with author Ralpn Emerson for three reasons. First, whan you try a now things you are going to have different naleg about a laset of different thing . Than ,whan i staret to learen more about the language i start to go beyond my noleg. First , people wode love to talk to you and now you. Thired, Knowing a lot healp your famliy tow . Sconed, whan you in school you will have a lots of ideas about what class to take . finely that why haveing a lot of ideas healp you.
Whan you try to see how other people and how they act and how thiar coolter is you now how to talk with thim othout disrspact thim. and, that whay i agreed with the auther Ralph Waldo Emerson becuase going beyond what you have already mastered is laring .. Sconed , you can choos the prson that you are going to love from larning about how the siseaty work . Thired , whan you try to see other people and how they act and thiar coolter you will now how to talk with thim without disrspact thim . Sconed , whan you have different ideas you have different way of thinking. Lastly, that why we sholed alwase laren.
Whan I try a now things i alwas laren some thing now .
For exampe, whaen i came to the U.S i did not have enafe naleg about what is in the U.S so that was a issue ror me learening the language i shragl becuase did not go beyond what i have already mastred. first, whan you you lisone to people and how the talk you going to larn e what cined of pirson he is and how to talk with thim . Third, bieing nice to every one mens you are goning out and seeing other people
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Doing something all the time can make you physically fit. My thought on the prompt are that I think it's better to be active. For example, if you are watching a movie at the movie theater. It can be frustrating to other people if everybody is working but you and they need your assistance. If I'am inactive for a long period of time i can get sick or really anybody if you have been laying around doing nothing for days. In some people's life activity play's a major role in there life's. Your body needs movement or some type of exercise. I can'not stay inactive for a long period of time like many people in this world. You can be moving all the time and a lot it can be good exercise.
I like working out or helping people out especially my family. Many people enjoy or like to be active and it makes them feel good including myself. Like a personal trainer or a coach.
Inactivity is sometimes bad especially if you do it for a long time. You can'not be jumping and running all over the place you are going to get kicked out. In some situations when something bad is happening out side your home is better to stay as far away as you can and do'not intervene is better to stay idle.
Finally,I some occasions is inactivity serves a purpose. That's why it's better to be active.
Therefore, inactivity can sometimes be good or necessary. Being active or doing something all the time is good. You can be very helpful by helping people out or doing chores. You do accomplish more if you stay active and you can meat your goals in life if you put hard work and not staying idle.
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Without failure you won't succeed in life. . They are both a team. i mean is good that your sucessing in life but just wait until the unexpected comes thats whe all the boom lets lose. Failure is something you didn't succeed or accomplish yet failure does help you succeed in life. Also knowing you have fail you'll know what is expected in order the success.
I disagree with Ralph Waldo statement because you won't accomplish as much goals. i fact success isn't as bad is actually good.
In my opinion i would say success isn't as better as failure. For example if you only succeed in life you won't know what to do if you fail or how to fix them. There for you'll achieve and have more success by failing. For example you won't know what to do if you ever do fail. While i agree this is why i pick Ralph statement is cause the un expected always comes in lfe. As a matter of fact, this could actually help you accomplish your goals.
I agree with Ralph Waldo statement because, you won't realize your mistakes. This helps because you'll actaully know the struggle people would put themself to accomplish their goal
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. Using cellphones in class will also disturb other from learning, because they are so in to their cellphone. The cellphones will ring and stop everyone from learning, because they will pay attention on whose phone is ringing. Overtime your cellphone vibrate you always going to want to see what it is and that will have your attention. You should not be ignoring what your teacher has to has to you and your classmates. The students with not pay attention to what the teacher, because they are so busy in their cellphones. Using your cellphone in class may get you off task and u would not know what u learn today in class. These are the reasons why using a cellphone in class should not be allowed in the classroom. Some days u would be mad and take it out on other, because of what you heard on your cellphone. You will not be able to know how to do the work if do not know what to do. The effects of allowing students to have and use cellphones in the classroom is not listening to what the teacher has to say, not using it property for your educational purposes, and disturbing the class from learning. These are the reasons how using cellphones in class can effect them from learning.
First, you will not be able to learn if you are using your cellphone in the class. They should not have it out unless the teacher say you can for your assignment. Last but not least, do not make your classmates fell just because you do not want to successful does not mean your classmates do. This is why people should not use cellphones in school for these purposes.
Thirdly, people will disturb other people from trying to learn with there devices that can cause a disruption. You should not disturb your classmates from being successful in life.
As you can see, the effect of having a cellphone in class while you are trying to learn to be successful. Some students decide not to use it for educational purposes and uses it for other purposes. you are disturbing your classmates that are trying to learn the material they need so they can do something with there lives. You will not be able to focus like you use to with our education and be on your cellphone at the same time.
Second, using your cellphone for other purposes can not help you learn what you need to learn. The use of the cellular device can only be use for education and not other purposes. If you do not use your cellphone for educational purposes you would not know noting from school to know about. You can get in some problem for not using it for education
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Although this be valid there are several important idea to be considered such as positivism maintain good mental health. everybody can be a person with a good attitude in your life for that life be easy.
Make that life be comfortable with yourself. . also the people will tire to not became mad for simple thing that happen
In conclusion believe that help that be comfortable in life. For example that people that are around you will see your positive personality at the point that you can became the people mood to a positivism. and have a character strong that show a person different that make that the people see a thought positive. In totality is agree with that should have a positive attitude in the life . For example a person with a character positive have more opportunities in your life because help that not have preoccupation, In your life and can explore thing that never see also a person that feel a positive actittude not have problem with other people because have calm when other people can be heat thing for your self.
While some people believe that should have a positive attitude in the life.
other argue that should dont have a positive attitude in the life because being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life. For example, Held take best decision en your life because this help to have clarity thought, that maintain out of every conflict with the other person. Which be the characteristic that show a person positive always time? A person with a positive attitude be kindness with other people show that in life have that be change. Is a form that maintain in your head that make for help to have a mental strong, and that other people can see your positive personality in your life have chose a reason that will be change and mark the different for world. For example being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life, make that life be comfortable with yourself, and positivism maintain good mental health.
In addition being positive can help you to appeal better people in your life
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The dog need to take a shower at least 2-3 times at week, when the dog get out from the bathroom and she/he wet you should put planket on them to not get cold and sick, and you need to brush them hair and dry it with a hot air to not get cold, the important thing that you need to clean his/her eyes everyday in the morning because they will have something in them eyes because they sleeping like humans when they wake up they wash them face because it's not cleand and brush them teath. Sometimes people leave them dogs in the car because they not alawed to go in resturant so they leave them in the car, dogs feels that they lonly and they waiting for you to come back really bad. Dogs like to live with a family not one person because they like to set with them and if they have a childern they really like to play with a baby or children because the childern have a lot of power to run, play, to anything and the dogs have a lot of power, enrgy to run, to play, and etc.... The dogs do not like to get wet a lot so do not get him/her out when it's raining outside. . The vet for your dog gonna tell you what you suppost to feed him/her and what you not soppust to give him/her. .
The dog only thinking about you and the food and how he/she can save you from anything dangerous like, when someone come and stell something from your house and you sleeping, the dog will pits him/her in them legs, and the dog try to wake you up with his/her "wror" the the dog make, sometimes the dog need to have a comfy space so he/she come and set behind your legs and sleep, but when your dog wake up he/she get bored so they trying to wake you up by liking your face or your toes, a lot of people love dogs so they buy it for a lot of money because some dogs are no really avalable in some places so it's hard to find theis dogs, and they still cost a lot of money, dogs can alive like 11 years to 15-20 maybe if your dog not that long with you you not gonna be sad at him/her if they but if they at least 2-3 yeas with you you really gonna miss them and if you died your dog will cry on you because I tried that before when my grandma died my dog was not even eating or drinking water or palying she was just seting and crying, and I was having two dogs they was brother and sister, so they was playing together everyday but one day the her brother was died i was really sad and crying and she was not even eating or drinking like when my grandma die, she was really sad for a long time and then I give it to my uncle house he was have a dog and a cat, she started to play with them and having fun so she happy right now bwcause she forget her brother and found a dog and a cat to play with them.
The dogs like to live in a big house and a big backyard to play in, and they need to live in an organize place. And what time you should go to the doctor to see or check at your dog. You need to a vet to check your dog every month at least, maybe they have alergece for something or they need to take a shock for something in them body. How you can have a good relation ship with your dog?
You need to have a good relationship with your dog because, when you get a new dog and your dog need to take him/her out and you do not know that you soppust to do that the dog will do not like you at all, like here's I am gonna give you some exampls for what you should do for your dog to not hate you, the dog need to feed him/her a food every day, cold water in the summer to not be hot, a normal water in the winter need him/her to go out to walk or poop out side,the dog need to have you be with them all the time, he/she need to feel that you like them, give them food, water, play with them every day, take them outside when you hang out with you family, friends, etc..... . but you an put him/her in your car and go shoping with them
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Whereas many people argue that the break should be year-round schools, and it should be a 3-4 week break in summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall. . Summer break is what educators and students are looking forward for. Students need break but a short break is unnecessary.
To begin with, students are waiting for a long summer break where they can spend all their time at the place that they wish to be at. Furthermore, some teacher put onerous on students, which they giving out homework and big project for a test grade just because they don't want the student to forget the information that they have learn. Imagine an aboard student come from different country that is far away from United State, so she need a long summer break to return to her country for visit her family. For instance, teachers love give homework during the break for no reason. The long break is much better than a short and unnecessary break. For example, an exchange student from Vietnam came to United State with her parents for emergrates, but her siblings still live in Vietnam because they were married before sign up. Students didn't expect teachers to finish grading their work during the break, but teachers expect them to finish the big project, it is unfair for students.
As a final point, the summer break should be longer because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home. For instance, a break in the middle of the school year easy to get students forget what they have learn. For long summer break teacher don't give homework, and students feel free to plan out their vacation for entire summer. Further more, students will not want to go back to school after few days off. Furthermore, some students are working full time in summer to have a provision for their consumption in the future such as buying a car, college,etc. The summer break should be longer and less short break because students need more time for their vacation, and they will not have to worry the homework that they left at home.
While many people believe that the summer break should be shorten, a longer winter break and a week off in the spring and fall because the educators feels that if the break too long and that students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall, this is a week argument. Going out with friends but still have to bring paper and pencil to do homework is very humor. Summer break is the only time that allows the student to go back to her country for visiting. The part time work that students make during school year does help but not much for preparing or satisfy the claim inside teenager.
In addition, people want to have a relax time on a long vacation, none of the students want to be thinking that they still have work waiting for them at home and the deadline is coming
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The communication is important and many cases because with communication you can do many things, like if you don't understand something you can tell somebody for help and all the persons on the groups can practice all days to do a great work,and also some student's need a lot of help so students that know more can join to the groups to help the others,but sometimes is not because some students don't know how to do the work sometimes it because they don't understand sometimes is because the language is a problems for some student's so there is good to make groups to help them,Third it can be an experience to work in groups because some students that don't know each others later on they can be friends and work in groups it can be helpful to students,but also to school because work on groups students can understand more and they can get betters grades also work in groups and a a good relationship it can be helpful not only at the school it can be helpful like in your home with the family and not to get in trouble with their, but also it can help you on your job to work well and not to have problems with the people that you work with,is like on soccer that why it call a soccer team because they help each others they share new or more strategies that it can help others to do a great job because work in groups students have more and betters benefits to do a great job,Finally is good to have a good communication in groups because with a great communication all the the group can understand each others and is important to have a good relationship in the group so like that they can do a better job and some students help others and that is great to be generous with others because if you help to someone that need help other people is going to help you on what you need and is a lot much better to work in group than alone sometimes when you are working alone and you got stuck in something no body is going to help you,but if you are working with more people in group they going to help you on what you need but most of the teachers want's to students work alone sometimes is good that students work alone because sometimes students got distracted for the people on the group and the teachers don't wants students to copy each others sometimes is good to work alone maybe better concentration,but sometimes is not that good to work alone because sometimes you got stuck in somethig, but if you are working with a group they are going to help you i would like to see more teachers that put more student's to work in group i don't think student's would like to work alone than with a group is better an sometimes is more easy and faster
In conclusion, is a great idea for me thats teachers make students to work in groups on my opinion is much helpful to they work in groups instead to work alone,because when people work in groups they have betters ideas and they can do a better work with more interesting and more opinions is better to do a great job and also have a great relationship and a great communication is so important to work in a group and some students know more than others so the students thats know more is good that they help the others on what they need and is good to work in group so like that you can know others people i hope teachers continuing making groups to students can learn more than what they know and work in group it can help you on your life because if you got a job and many people work there too but you don't like to work with others people as a group the boss is going to kick you out only because you don't know how to work as a group and if you only like to work alone it can be a problem if you don't understand work with others people is better always more ideas,opinions like that you can do a better work and it can help your future job and the rest of your life sometimes some student's don't like to work in group's sometimes it because they don't know others people,but i thing if teachers would like to student's work more in groups i thing they would like it and they can have more communication student's would like to work with a group, I like to work with a group because sometimes i don't know what to do so others students help me to do a great work and we all share other.. The greats benefits to work with a group
To work on groups is better for many reasons,everybody can help each others,in groups student's can do a better work,and it can help all the people on the group to learn more skills,it can help students to know each others and be friends, more communications, more ideas and sometimes it can be helpful to work in groups because some students don't know what to do,i thing teachers should let student's to work more on groups so like that they would help each other and work better,and is good to work with a group because that can help you for the rest of your life like on your job also with your family and you con do better and a great job if you work in group
It can be helpful for students to work in group,First, because with more people helping are more and betters ideas and more helpful for every students,and sometimes student's don't know what to do,but if somebody on the group help so he would understand and know how to do a great job and work with a group is much helpful than work alone on many ways like to understand better with communication with your group and it can be helpful so you can do a good work and pass the class and not failed,and work in group it can help you to know others people that are in the same classroom but you never have the oportunity to talk wich their so in the teacher make a group and you can joing to one there is going to be new people and you can know others people
,Second,it is good for student's to work in groups because they can learn more skills such like the communication and they can help each others with the written,and also they can help each others how the way they talk
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But also you will come back knowing against what you are figthig with, next time you will be back with a diferent set of mind, with a diferent plan, even with a diferent actittude, and all that because one thing wich all the people says is bad.''Fail''.
but lets be honest, why would somebody fail if you have the chace to be successfull ?, because if you are not going to win and get what you want and are looking for, do not even struggle, stay at home laying donw and watching some series. Its a fact that possitive actitude is the key of succses. That is the key of success.. Not only because you will learn from the mistakes that led you to the failing box. There is a real hungry world with real hungry people out there and if you are just giving the 75 percent it of your capacity it would be just not enougth.
Thats were positive actittude comes up, if you know your value and you are wheling to give the one hundred percent you dont have to worry.
If you are confident and positive you will go for what you are looking fof do not matter who is agaist you, do not matter what the people would say and specially it do not matter the cost of it. In every single thinsg that you made, or every single act that you take, even a small ane like blink if you are not confident in what you are doing, on that i will make it fealling, you will be failing.
That does not mean that fealing is a bad thing because fealing is a important aspec of successes
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That is mean if we don't work or study for a vetter life them we are not going to have nothing for .Exaplem if you are
18 or more you have to look for a jod becase you are respomsible for your self because your parents there are not going to give you anything what you want you have to work and buy your own stuff. for exaple I have a lot stuff to do for gratuade from hight school i have to pass my esol and have a good great grade if i don't graduate from hight school that choise i have is to work out side. In my position do work it's some i like to do every day because that's how i learn more stuff. I agree with this prompt becasause it's something posible and if we always doing something.
In my opinion we acomplish more if we are always doing something because some times we have stuff to do for example going to work after school or study after school. This is something posible we can do in us life.
Some may said that to do nothing is better life. Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle" that is mean like some time we are busy. they said that becsause they never think about thre future or maybe they don't want to do nothing in the life and that is not going to work. However, if a want the opportituti to do something in the future the best choie is to study effort my self and go to the college to have a better jod.
people Sometimes they're bussy in keys that is something posible in us life becuse we want to become a good person and resposible in the future that's that way we learn it is easy to do something never give up.. IF we have a park time after school that is something good because you are reciving money for your self and maybe you can help your parent with bills.
Some peoples think that if we don't do something in this life we ca have a vetter remposible. But some time people they don't like to do school work for the reason they think there are not smart
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Those were all of my reason on why the principal shouldn't make students join a other activity espcially if they don't want too.
Overall,I disagree with the principal making students do a other actvity because of homework,losing sleep faster and last but not least is stress. I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because kids have other things to do like homework,they might be already doing a activity and they'll get tired faster if the principal make them do a other activity, and it can contain stress if you don't get it right the first time.
For and foremost, I disagree with the principal saying that all kids should at least join one extracurricum activity because the student have homework to do and I know that i get a lot of homework maybe you do too i also know teachers give kids projects and if the principal makes them do a extra activity then they wont be able to have anytime to do their own things. This is why I say principals shoudn't make students join activies
Secondly, I disagree with the principal because the students will get way more tired faster and did you know that someone in Washington DC, fainted due to the principal making the student do a other activity and thats why the principals shouldn't make students join a other activity because it'll most likely make them get tired faster and what we want is to keep our kids healthy but we can't keep them healthy if the principal makes them join a activity.
Lastly,my last reason is stress, stress can come from a lot of things like work,school,friends,parents,children as you see stress comes from a lot and school stress is a big oe because we all know sometimes our grades go down and when we try to bring them up it gets really stressful and espcially if your pricipal is making you do a other activity that'll make even more stress and multiple studies have shown that a lot of the stress that kids get is from school and other activies. Also studies have shown that making kids do a extra activity can contain a lot of stress and who wants to be stressing I know I don't, and it can also contain kids losing sleep do to the activities if they have homework and a activity to do it'll make the students lose sleep due to the activity and the brain needs a good hours of sleep for it to function well. Those were all of my reasons on why the principal shouldn't mame students do a other activity
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I know she would be so happy if I become an actress.
Also, the Art and Performance Center has been the place of one of my favorites presentations,"The Rose", the feelings that the esterpians transmit during the hold act are powerful; they make you feel that you are part o the show, or even better, they make you feel that is not a show. When I was littler, I use to participate on local shows every summer, her proud smile and happy tears make me feel that I was on the right place, doing the right thing. . From the backstage to the actual scenario, everything would be a delaitful experience for me.
For all this reasons, I would like to go to the Art and Performance Center, seeing all the components and experiences that brings you the fantastic world of the theater. Imagine myself on that scenario with the lights, music, the public, while I am realizing a magnificent performances is something that makes my feel really grate. Kids play to have different jobs, but I know, since I was a baby, what I want to do. Some students aren't really interested on the place they go, playing around, acting boring, but not me, I am really interesting in this opportunity, in all the special details of the world of preforming arts. The world of the entertainment, in special the theater, is something that always catch my attention, thats why I would like to visit the Art and Performance Center.
The principal reason why I want to go is for my family influences, my grandma has been dreaming about me been an actress. I want to inspire people in the same way that actors inspires me.
My love for the performant arts isn't the unique reason why a should go, I am a respectful and courteous person; a hardworker which goal is to learn everything about arts. I remember going to the theater with her, telling me that her biggest dream is, one day, see me on one of those performances or shows
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They will say say it's a good idea because they will consume healthy foods that will make students grow stronger, will have a healthy diet, and be more energized within there life.
That may be true but that's not the case because student are comfortable on what they eat and what suits them will suit there future lifestyle. Students favorite food being replaced by healthy food will be a nightmare to them. They will feel hungry, sick, or possibly pass out. No more pizza, burgers, spaghetti, etc, will be all gone and will cause a problem. He will lose focus and will start begging for food. He never ate salad before but sees a lot of vegetables including lettuce, tomatos, onions, etc. For example, Generic_Name came back to class from lunch and he didn't eat anything because of the food that was serve. While doing class work, Generic_Name doesn't feel well and his stomach starts to growl because he didn't eat anything. Imagine going to school everyday to learn and experience new things, when it comes to lunch, students are ready to eat and enjoy there favorite food with others but the principal made an announcement about changing the lunch system by getting rid of junk foods to healthy foods. For example, Generic_Name goes to lunch and sees the only food aviliable is a salad. The principal should not make these changes and keep the system of lunch the same because there body will be in good shape and will gain energy through out the day.
Some people will disagree my reasoning and opinion on changing the school food system to healthier ones is a bad idea. He feels disgusted by the food he was serve and rather starve. What I mean by that is students in class will feel hungry and there stomach will soon to growl and will lose focus on class instructions. Removing students favorite food to healtheir ones will be a bad idea. Thus, changing students favorite food to healthy ones in lunch is a bad idea.. What I mean is that students being served to vegetables which they won't take a bite of, won't make them eat because they don't enjoy eating vegetables that was served to them and might get student to not eat but starve which will be bad to there body.
Additionally, the students will be in bad shape during class time. Students will dislike eating healthy food, and students will feel hunger and lose concentration in class.
Firstly, Some students will dislike some healthy food that they don't enjoy
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How can you have the biggest expectations in life when you are so dull and negative. Feelings are always temporary and you need to always make sure that the positive things impact you the most. There are so many other thing you could and should be thinking about, the little this matter in this life. If you stay in the mindset of " i cant do this," "this is too hard." You will never see yourself prosper and grow. . Those are the little things that matter.
Lastly , in your " time of need" you should always be more optimistic. I agree, I think its nessasary to have a positive attitude in your everyday life , in your work place, in your "time of need." those are the most important times you will need to show your best.
First , I think its important to have a positive attitude in your everyday life because, of the stress that goes on. Think about the little things in life , you have a roof over your head, your family is safe, you are safe. To advance you need to be aware that everything is going to be okay, be reminded of that.
Secondly, your work place always has to stay positive. You can do the impossible it will just be up to you to change your circle.
Although, there are many people who live in doubt and build this wall of negativity in there life. No one will understand how you feel other than you. Its been said that a positive attitude is key to success in life. If you set your self as the person who puts too much on themselves, you will never see growth. Whenever you are feeling down and feel like your world is falling apart be aware that your surroundings should never bring you negativity. This is the place you go to work in , this is a place you try to distract yourself from the rest of the world. You never go a day without eating. You cannot be that person. Greater things are to come in everyone life.
In conclusion, being positive in many ways will always change your mindset . If you set your self to a person who feels as if they cant do anything then you will never reach that promotion youve been waiting for. Positive attitudes are key to a better future and for the best success in your life
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They're some family who love traveling with they're kids.
Most of the students want to take a elective courses but not in summer. I believe that schools should allow the students to graduate in traitional four years,
instead of three years because If some of the student faill the class or the SOL, they should a time to retake those classess they faill. I think it's head for some of the student to work and graduate in three years instead of four years. Most of the students dont what to take a courses during the summers. Some students want to take a elective courses in schools not in summers chas as a art, muise, and language they want.
I personily believe students graduate in four years because they will have time to retake a class or SOL if they need to do. Couses whay want to take is art, muise, and language they want. . They don't want to work for schools on summers. Some of the elective courese that students take can help them find out what they like or dislike.
Overall my position on this issue is that schools should offer a four years hight schools, instead of three years because it's can hlpe students to get ready for college and work. Some students work and save some money for college. Some of the classes that students take as a elective courese can help them in college or in work force. The most immopat think is that if the students faill a class they can't graduate the hight schools befor they pass the class they faill.
Most of the student's don't want to take a courses during the summer because they want to have free time , they don't want to work on summers
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I think that work in groups is more benefit. And the last one can make the presentation and make the work creative.
Second, In groups can take less time to work on it that working alone. The other two can be checking that the writing is good and that the information is good. First, work in group can be a good for class because they can know each other. Second, In a group decide what to do it can be hard. Here are some reason why
I think that work in groups is benefit.
First, They can divide the work in same parts. therefore, work in groups is benefit for students and teacher. If a class is works more successfully that makes the topic easy and knowing each other makes the class more understanding. also, the students can know each other and they can meet new people. Second, They have more opportunity to have a better work. Also, they can search for information more faster then alone because they can divide the work but they can also help each other. For example, if one student can't understand the topic he can ask for help to the teacher and he can ask to people around hem for help.
In conclusion, work as a group is funny and make the class better. Because work is groups make the class successful. If the class work in group they can do much better in the work that working alone because they can do the work more easily by working as a team. While someone is working in searching information the other one can think in how to make the work more creative. The group can check if the work is good or not and decide either to keep the information o to make some changes. Also, it makes the students to do better workers and meet people. therefore, I think that work will be better in groups because the class can meet and know each other and they can be better person and better students. For example, If the class works in groups of 4 they can do a good work by dividing the work in same parts like one can be searching for information the other one can be looking for imagines. If the class meet each other the class can be more successful. And, It will make the class more fun because everyone can help each other in thing that are hard for people. Also, if they divide the work is more fair for the group so they can have more opportunity to work successfully. Because there will not fight or enmity so the class can work more successfully. If a group meet in one place and they start working they can easily finish the work on time. So, the group can have more opportunity to have a better grade.
Third, Work as a group can also be fun because you are working with your friends or you can met new people. But when the group decide what to do and they finish the work fast. This are some reasons why a think that work in groups is better.
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Younger students who want to pick sports is fine as well, Older students can support or encourage younger students to do what they want. Older students can review things in the year for younger students to remember the key things or notes for the SOL's. . Older and younger students can play board games or read a book to help them get better with their English and writing skills.
Play outside basketball, soccer, football, etc just to have fun and waste that energy. Then younger students won't have to fail the SOL because they have the knowledge to surpass the test. Younger students won't have to deal with their assignments being due because they already turned it in. This program is helpful for younger students because it would get work accomplished with the presence of the older student. This program will help younger students study with assistance by the older students to get a high grade in tests or quiz. Younger students with knowledge can get past Elementary, Middle, and High school and get that degree to College leading them to jobs they need or want in the future. Older students that volunteer helping younger students would make younger students feel more at ease
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And i thing is a good ideas for students because the students has to possibility, about a caeer in the life about he , and in the school help the students about that he want to a caeer in the life for put happy on the family and he.
Paragrap: That is very good for the students, because he want to do it that is your responsability in all your job because is a agreer, waht you take for you life in the caeer is good because your family help on you and all family help for you caeer.
Conclucion: If you want to do it a caeer, in your life is fine for you and help in the caeer about you job.. If you should be want to do it a profesional, in your life is fine for you.
My ideas however about this career.
More tecnology, is good because in your life to help, for your family, if i am agree.
The ideas some time are bad. because you not undesrtan, if you already for the not is good.
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.is important that, because help in your life are a career and the family put happynes about your caeer but you pay attention if you not pay attention you can not power, the something you has to possebilty in your life for learning to much something about your caeer.
.That is good, because you help on the family in the life the students, has to responssibility about that because is your responssibility because is your caeer.
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Instead of being hard head i stayed positive learn English really fast and started to start feeling more comfortable in America. Is important to not loose our cool and have the type of attitude that everything is going to turn out great at the end of the day.
Having a positive attitude when it come to school can be a way to cope with all your assignments, teachers and schoolmates. For example, when it comes to school, significant others and obstacles that life may throw at us. I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life. . We all have them phase that we go through and we feel like we cant keep moving forward but why stand in the same place with that same negative attitude is going to prevent you from wanting or doing more. I believe that having a positive attitude is the key to being successful in life because you viewing life on a whole other level all you see is good things coming your way and the nothing can get in between of your dreams and if you was to fall you going to pick yourself right back up and start again.
In conclusion being able to wake up every morning and thank God for another day and pray that things are going to turn out better than yesterday is an important skill to have in this world we call life. We all go through so much and the only way to get through is having a positive attitude that things well turn out better than yesterday.
Others would say that you dont have to have a positive attitude in life to be successful because they probably dont have self confidence, someone around to give them hope or have giving up on their self to many times. Especially being a teenager people thing is not difficult to wake up every morning 6 or 7 AM and deal with people's attitude and also having to worry about the amount of work the teachers give out to students and then going home to do chorus is something that teenager are capable of doing, but adults don't take that time to think that they was teens back in the 60s where life isn't easy but when it comes to school rules have change. Now we must pass SOLs to graduate but, a person who stays positive believes in there self makes it easy for their self to get through what's stop you from being happy.
Everyone in life have to deal with different types of obstacles physically and mentally. I believe is important to have a positive attitude because having a positive attitude can open doors to different phase in life. I also was thinking of families back home and how i cant let them down, because they would love an opportunity like this to have a free education and being able to make it to the 12 grade. For example when i came to America I thought my life was over learning a whole different language and also trying to adapt to whole new country a whole different environment would be hard for me
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Being successful is not a easy thing for anyone; there is a journey that you have to get through with many obstacles that you may fail at the first time. When you continue to fail, your learn a lot from this mistakes or problems. Look examples about people who don't lose hope and keep trying until they did it, and see that these people are representation of success. Failure is the most important element in the pursuit of success. Success it is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice and most of all love of what you are doing or learning to do.. The most important message to take from these quote is that after you have acknowledge both why failed and how it made you feel, you must attack the obstacle again with enthusiasm. The better thing are never easy to secure; we always make mistakes, but never too late to start again. Also, no matter how many times you fail, you shouldn't give up on you want to do. Failure is an unavoidable obstacle, so you must be ready to affront and learn about it. I agree with Prime Winston Churchill; in he saying there is a lot of true and motivation. Everyone who is successful has been through things that has caused them to fail in something the admired dearly, but remember you should never lose hope; mistakes allow you to view your challenge from a different perspective. If everyone was to successes in their first try, we would not feel accomplished in the presence of success. Failure is only an opportunity to begin again, only this time with a better plan and more understanding. Failure can bring us to better ourselves and begin our plans once more, this time more wisely. As Winston once said "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm'' This statement is most certainly true if we are welling go put in the effort to past though feature and attain real success.
If you really want something you going struggle for that and effort the most you can. See the mountain they've claimed and look to it for inspiration and all they sacrifice.
In conclusion, we come to learn more from our failures and difficulties than from our successes
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Technology is all around everywhere you go theres going to be technology.. My reasons are that we use technology a lot,we use it for to shop online for our phones. My two other reasons are we use them for work. Are lives have changed a lot when technology was invented. We use technology for tests and to print some papers out. We use technology for learning things like in history we are learning stuff from the past. We use our phones for lots of thing like looking at the news, or to see what time is it. So if we needed to contact someone it would be threw our phones. So if we did not have technology we could not do anything that what we are doing today.
We use technology for our school like now Im taking test on my computer. We use technology for school and to learn things from back then from now.
We use technology for online and for our phones. If your boss calls you in for something hes using technology. If we needed something to wear we go online buy something. We use projectors for class if we need to see something. We use technology for our safety like cameras.
So without technology we could not do anything like call or text or shop online or learn. If we needed look something up for work we do it threw our technology. Our phones has a lot of knowledge so if we need something new we use our technology
We use technology for work like if we needed finish something we know how to do it. If we needed go some where the in our phones theres GPS will guide us. I think it would be impossible with out technology. I think it took a positive affect on humans lives
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you can probably can get the answer faster by telling more then one person. All really because everybody thinks different. you should other people for help.
you can help you pick the right choices. so you can pick the better choices.
You can get more info on the topic you are doing. And last of all ask more then one person can probably get you the right answer. Last of all it's better to ask more people because like I said you can get more knoallige on the topic and will help you one making the better choices as will. Thats how you can get some more info. Imagine you are going to buy some new shoes but you don't know if you should get them. So then you ask for more advice. It's all ways good to get more info on your topic because you don't ever want to do something with out any knoallige.
People can help you answer stuff faster. But all so all the opinion you got can help you a long way. And maybe get mad and not finish your work. I think u should ask for more help and advice. Then at last you all ready know what to do. . You can ask some friends or family for some help then it can help you go the right way. Because you have gotten so much fact and options you can finish faster.
All Am saying is ask for some help and you can get the right answers and you can probably make some friends too. Then you will have no clue how to being aging. like for example you are doing some hard work at school and you want the right answer you are not just going to ask one person you are probably going to ask more then one person. It helps more by asking more people because while you have your info they have there info as will. But if you do ask a lot of people you can probably can get confused. So then you ask for some advice from family and friends. Like for one person can tell you one thing and a other person can tell you something else. But you still don't know what to do. So then you can have more knoallige about whatever you doing. So you can more
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On the other hand we have as example my home country, El Salvador's new president,Nayib Bukele. For example, when I was little, my biggest dream was to be with my parents one more time as a family, we were separated at that time; I was in my home country, El Salvador and they here in the United States. We can make plans for every goal in life, but it doesn't matter if we just have a plan because we have to work in that plan to get that goal done, we accomplish a lot things more when we are doing something, when we have that determination to get things done to feel proud of ourselves.
First of all we have to feel, we need purpose and strength to accomplish every goal in our life to feel proud in a future. Then he became a mayor because people chooses him as their mayor because of all his honest job, he started running for president in 2015, he had a hard time trying to find a political party that supports him with his new ideas and purposes for the country but the parties rejected him because they said he was to young,also they knew he was honest and that he will not admit any corrupt job that affect the country, and they were always looking for reasons to reject him, but he did not give up.
Finally he made his own political party and he get the support of all the people that get tired of live in niggardliness during the goverce of other parties, he fought against the two most powerful parties in our country, as a result he won the elections in 2019 and he became the new president of the nation.
Many people think that it doesn't matters if you have goals and make plans for your future if you don't have some resources as money or a good social status, they can also see life as a random game which means that if you accomplish something they will say that is just luck, however; what they call luck, other people call it, late nights of doing something for what you want for your life.
In other words if you want your life to be successful, you don't have to spend your time just dreaming about what you want, because things may be done only if you are always doing something which means; work for what you want, stop thinking about your life goals and start working on them, determine yourself never to be an idler.. He was just a citizen like others but he was tired, tired of the political corruption that my country was going through, so here is what he did; he made his plan, he worked on his plan, he worked and made things for the country. Then in my head I said "if I don't get that courage to make the journey I will never going to see my parents again" because I knew that they can't go back to my country, at the end I made that decision and I made it, I am with my parents again and as a gift I learned a new language, now I know i'll be more helpful for this country because I am bilingual now.
Furthermore, we can see in every aspect of life how persons that one day were a common citizen, now are really important in the society because they were always doing something, they were working on their goals. why? Because I was afraid of the journey to be with them again, they used to tell me "If you don't do anything you will never know how different your life could be here with us, so throw that fear away and let's do something". I had that dream, but yes, it was just a dream. My grandmother used to say "Your goals are not going to be done if you don't even move a finger".
I am totally agree with what Thomas Jefferson wrote about how wonderful is how much we might done if we are always doing something
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And after all of that you will get a traning of two other restorants. Then he meet me at the work and said to me to get the position you have to do a lot of things before I gave you the position I said a lot of things like what, I am always dowing every thing at work. Moreover, after two month the manager taking to me about why I am not working hard same like before, and you telling him about the superviser position and you did not ask me for it you just give it to someone ealse. Forexample, when I know the position of superviser is avilble at my work and traying to work harder and harder to get this position,but after three years of working hard they gaive this position to someone ealse at this time i feel failure and I keep asking my self why they did not give me the position. Moreover, I am working with the campany since the open the restorant I am the seniorest preson in the restorant because the campany changed the manigment three times until now.
Then, when my manager saw me morking extrimly hard and when the city manager taked me again I am finaly get the suprviser position
Firs of all, when you going to failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm it is very great to have your enthusiasm and you have to belive in it, because this is the only way to seccess in your life.. First of all, I agree with Minister winston churchill once he said success consists of going from failure to failure because when you failure somethig you have to see the important role the faiure plays in the pursuit success. FOrth, I accept my manager ofer, and i worked all the positions in the restorant accept the bartnder.
Fivth, the superviser position is good I will get good money and indepence on the location of the restorant our location in Washington Dalles International Airport. Socend, the city manager called me to ask me if I am still interstiing about the postion or not I said yes I am intersting for it. In addition, you have to think about your ideas. Third, he said I have to work all the positions in the reastorant the positions are the following:Foodrunner, Host,Selver,and
Ketchen. Thats mean the restorant always busy specialy Saterday and Sunday. In addition to that, I have to disid if I still need the superviser position or not, if I said yes I still need it thats mean I heve to do all the thigs what the manager said it to me to gt the position
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The reason we have cars books and computers is not because knowledge but because of imagination. Thats why imagination is vary inportant is many ways.. If imagination was never a thing their never have been numbers, books, or even a language.
Imagination is how we have things like google, computers, cars, books, and with out imagination we cant think of new ways it make the world a better place.
Imagination is why we as people are advancing and getting smarter every day. How a about google, snapchat or even, books it all started with a imagination. Imagination is very important because with out it our lives will be more difficult for example with out cars we wont be able to go to work or go places and without phones it will be harder to communicate. Thats why I think imagination is more important than knowledge.
We all know knowledge is very important but with out imagination we cant think or read because imagination is the key to knowledge. Do you think imagination is more important than knowledge? Well have you ever wonder how the first computer was made or how the first lightbulb was made? It all started with a imagination, if the person who made a lightbulb never had a imagination of building a lightbulb we will be using candles for a source of light. Thats why Imagination is the key to knowledge.
Imagination is very important, why you may ask, well with out imagination we cant think of new ways to solve problems or read. Imagination is the key to making new things like cars, phones, computers, books, with out imagination we wont have things like cars, or phones. Knowledge did not just exist like that is was made how? By imagination thats why why learn and do things.
You can be the smartest person in the world but if you dont have a imagination you cant help the solve world problems like how to poverty. Anything is possible if you can believe and think. Lets say imagination was never a thing we wont know how to read or count to 10 because imagination is the key to knowlege Without imagination we will be having a lot of problems like how to comunicate, read, think, or even count to 10 thats why imagination is important.
With out imagination we as people cant make new things like books, art, or even better things thats why imagination is very important in may ways. Without imagination we cant think and when we cant think we cant learn or solve every day problems. It takes alot of thinking to make new and helpful things
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and when they get age when they have take classes for the career they getting more ideas about the career.
By the time of the classes they meet someone who knows the about careers and they ask what they need for take classes, and visit the college or make a field trip and meet with the company of the career,
before they get to high school, they trying to be better in every classes they have and have good grades and take important classes that work for the career and trying to take everything what they need for the career and important thinks learning everything.
Most students from young age are thinking in career, when they start middle school are think what kinda of career they can take when they get to high school, and when they get to high school they are looking for the classes about their career, and see what can they do to learn more about what they think in their career and see how can they do to take it, and do the best with their classes to complete the career for their job and take about what they need for the college.
I think that's a good idea to be thinking from young age, so when they get to high school they already know what career they gonna take and what kinda classes they work for their career and be prepared for collage, and from younger age they are learning more about what they wanna be when they get older, When they get to their college they would have more experience with their career, because they start thinking from young and they take course that help for their dreams with the career. . In some Societies, students are expecting to identify a career by the time they enter to high school,Their courses of study in high school are selected to guide them toward a specific careers and take the classes they need for the career to practices more and be more specific in the career and have more thinks to know how it work for them, in some career they need a lot of think to try it and they need practice to be in high level of the career and at young age they are expecting what career they want to take when they get older and get to high school.
I think that's good idea for students to commit to a career at young age, because some career are really hard to take it and if they start talking about what career they can take from young age, they would know more about how the career work, and before they get to high school some of them would know what kinda of classes they can take and how it work to get better practice in the career because some career are really hard to take it, but some are not that hard to take it, but in high school they are many classes about careers and they talk about it and it work.
When they get to high school, they can ask what are better courses for this career and what is better for this career and get information. When they are younger they are thinking in many career and they talk to the teacher whats better in this career and what kinda classes they can help and bring up better in the career, When they get to high school the thinking in many more career and getting more ideas about careers and see which one is better and talk about it
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Next, advice from others can make you more wiser when you make your own choices, if
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Lincoln never saw how African Americans were treated for there skin color he would have never signed the documents for slavery to be band. Multiple opinions really is a foundation to a job like a mayor of a city, it is vital to take advice from the community in order to address problems and concerns. . Which eventually make you more wiser and resistant to challenges and in life. If it wasnt for him, it would still be here today thanks to out 16th President, which boils down to good thinking and advice. At some point in our lives I know we got advice from someone we look up too,also what ever the advice they gave you, is an add on to bigger things, for example if a parent or guardian gives you some advice to never quit on things or problems that are hard and difficult for you, with just that you will Carey that for the rest of your life. Only instead its intellects make the right choice to help you.
In Conclusion, advice is there to help you, opinions are there to guide you to something that gives you smarts to making the right choices in the world we live in live, sure not all opinions hear might not be in your favor. When people ask for advice
, they sometimes talk to more than one person. You will have a mindset that will help you be more successful and a hard worker. if he never got advice he mostly likely would have never Andres the problems with having that toxic racism. Have you ever wounder why that is the case?, if you are a person who does not take advice from another individual , then you could use this skill, taking advice from another person can help you make better life choices, it will make you understand things more clearly and faster, and learn from them. If it was just a city with no voice in the community then the city would fall into a bad place which no one wants to be in and the key advice is to receive it.
In the world we live in, we make a lot of important choices in life, some are big and some are small, but they effect our future and success. When you are at that point you will know what is right and wrong, from advice from your remodel, father, and mother. Multiple opinions is like trying different types of food from different chefs and if you just try it, you will see something you might like, if you never try something you will never see a different possibility taking advice is just like that. But just hear them out and be the best you that you want to be shaped in, advice will make yo wiser and more aware of scenarios
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People who does not have patient cannot make an experience without helping from someone else, and a project is not hard to make, but you have to think about what you are going to say in the project.
There are a lot of way you should find to do something, and even if you would not undertand what you are doing. Don't give up, because one day you will realize your dream. For this subject I do not agree with it, because if you're making mistake often that doesn't mean you will never grow up. You could have done something that you had to do. If you have an experience to do something, and prove it you need to think about it first, before you try your best in what you were trying to do. Sometime you have to force yourselfe to work, and in life you need to keep moving on, in what you're doing, you have to make sure that you never go back in the past, because you would like to realize your dream that you promised yourself in the future.
For this position you may say that if you are trying to do something, and you already know that it is not going to be right, just leave it until you find the right way to do it. Now you will be growing up, and people will appreciate you everywhere you go to. In life, you suppose to have done the right things to continue with the others.. If you already have a plan to do something you need to think about it, before you start doing it. For example you have already done some stuff that you are not supposed to do, life is going on that does not mean you will never grow. You have to check it, so to make sure it is good or not good, so that is the way you can learn from your mistakes.
Most of the time, you feel like you cannot do anything all you can do is just sleeping that does not mean you will never grow. You will grow in a good situation, if you are always doing good things and you never do something wrong
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A second example of a character trait is rudeness, these types of people are generally rude to everyone that comes their way. My third and final character trait is helpfulness, someone who is always looking to help others. It should be said that people are not born kind, they choose their own traits that fits them best. I say this is false, we are supposed to choose our character traits, and they are what makes us who we are.
We choose our own character traits. Helpfulness is when someone who is always looking to help someone in need, and also make sure they get the help they deserve. One character trait is kindness, someone who is very kind and friendly to everyone. I chose all of these character traits, as i felt these are all traits that people choose themselves.
The act of kindness is someone who is very kind and friendly, its one of many character traits. This character trait is a very common character trait, and i hope more people is it in the future.
Rudeness is a somewhat uncommon character trait used by a small number of people. A lot of people choose to have this as their character traits, and most have it for a good reason. Not everyone is going to be a good person, some are rude all of the time for no apparent reason. One example of a character trait is the act of kindness, a person who is friendly to all the people that comes their way. We choose our own character traits. I have chosen these character traits as they are the most commonly used character traits.. My final thoughts on rudeness is that not everyone is rude, but theres always gonna be that small amount of rude people in the world.
The helpfulness trait is of my most favorite traits. The world is a much better place with helpful people, i hope they don't go anywhere.
My counter claim is that our character is actually formed by influences beyond our control, and that we learn from these influences what our trait really is. A person who is helpful is like that as they have always been like that, and just want to help anyone in need. my second character trait is rudeness, this is someone is usually not nice to others. Some choose to be kind after seeing how some people can act so different towards other people, or their parents just simply raised them to be kind. I am a helpful person myself, i try to help people with their problems if i can. I know a lot of rude people, teachers and students, most are rude just because thats the trait they decided to choose. A lot of people are rude because they are most likely going through something, or thats just the trait they had growing up. A third example of a character trait is helpfulness, a person who wants to help others in any way
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MRS Generic_Name HUMAN RESOURCES,
No, i don't represent the character traits ,i would like the British naturalist and politician to choose the character traits ,i also know that we must allow the British naturalist ,and politician to choose the character of the government to help raise the to help the US institutions and American individual who pass through the management that also cannot gain experience.
Therefore,American government should help the people to give or allow bass positions and cannot gain experience, i also give the opportunity by those who are one and highly options to develop the habits of passing out freedom for all African
Americans,and American .that will help avoid racism to people in America and also the make the politician allow Americans to vote"i can do to achieve it "and i will also brainstorm my idea to help me do the right thing to do to help the British and they a saying that"I CAN DO ALL THINGS THROUGH CHRIST WHO STRENGHTEN ME"this proverbs drawn me to help my fellow ones and also to achieve the little things thats letting me become a great person in the future some people achieve the smaller things that help them succeed
Another significant attitude is that these These Americans, is counted to give the logical manners of American that have the right to have the need to whatever pleads them ,like food,clothing,and all other resources i would love to help the government provide, but in all honesty, i also think we can manage stuff beyond our control by letting the president know what the government stuff in American will need to in other to help the homeless shelter and also providing whatever they request for like money,food and other kind in other to help them shine and happy .and helps me gets close to my family closely by going home to do my assignment ,eat .but when i also get home, i rest and do my laundry i try keeping my clothes clean everyday .
finally,my conclusion of other feelings and emotions is also what make me a great,if not the best candidate for the position which i was providing since i was younger ,i have always been an active and responsible person ,who can help others and i also know its vital in others workplace in my power to work on anything i could be responsible for in other to help the state department help to provides all the goods that needed for all Americans and also do what its allowed to do by paying out your tax to help builds school,help people when they in need and also help the government pay off stuff to support.
respectfully,
Manager Generic_Name
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So when you fail and fail again you will away lose enthusiasm because you just can't get it.
So if I had to pick a side I would disagree because you cant just fail and fail and then have success and not lose enthusiasm. From the first time you fail to the next will will learn something and later on when it happens again that's will you will get it. Then there's failure and thats how you have success in anything from learning from your failure But there is time where when you fail and your enthusiasm is gone because of that.
The one reason I agree is because there's time that you just cant have success. Once when I was playing soccer we had won all the games and then came to the day where we were playing for first place and we lost and that day all my enthusiasm was gone. If I had to take a side I think I would disagree. I was so mad and just had no energy. I learned that there times that I wont win and times I will it's part of life but along the way I learn new things. One reason is that you cant always have success ,there's times where somethings don't work out. When you do fail and fail you lose enthusiasm but gain it back when you have success. You feel sad and mad and just not excited no more when you keep failing again and again. Then there school there you do go from failure from failure to success because once you make a mistake and you learn from it and do better next time because your already know now but it does bring your enthusiasm down.
The next reason is that failure does does make you have success but also it make not encourage to keep going. I have had that in my life in many situations. And I disagree from experience because in my life I fail and never still had enthusiasm after failing maybe some people do but I speak from my point of view.
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Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. However, Students won't lose focus on what they are doing if they are only focus on their teacher and if they have questions, they can ask from their teachers so they would help them more. It would be more helpful if students come to school.
Some students says that Online schools have more highly motivated. . online schools have more distractions on what you are doing and get more free time.
In conclusion, students should offer to attend classes because attending to classes are less stressful. Students get more help from teachers. Students should offer public classes, however, Distance schools will make students careless by doing online or video conferencing. For example, one of my friend, she used to come to school, but Furthermore, she stop coming to school, because her teachers won't helped her, she cannot understand well, she got bad grade, and she fail all semesters then she plan to start online school. I think public schools are more helpful for everyone because you meet new people, learn different experience, you get new ideas from others, and it wouldn't make you stressful. there would be less social interactions, because they won't be distracted by any technology and would be focus on studies. Therefore, Learning from public school it won't have distractions that a online has. Distance learning is not good because it would make cheat easier, there would be less social interaction, and they would need to be highly motivated.
Firstly, students would cheat easier. For instance, when you are taking a test or taking notes at online school there are many distraction that can make students lose focus on what they are doing. However, Online school are have much more opportunities than the public schools. For example, If students allowed to use their technology system, It would be easy for them to do their work but It would be easy for them to go online to and copy the answers Some students have trouble working at school because they don't want to work.
some of teens says that they cannot understand to work at school.
Secondly, there would be less social interaction. she got the answers the error words which she didn't know. Some students are more interests in online schooling because they get more free time and get more rests than the public schools
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I have friends who like to do homework and be successful, but the problem is that they don't understand the assignments and if someone don't understand something why should they do it because either way they going to get the assignment wrong the school must provide more support for students.
In addition the club could not be just of getting help or finish assignments early, the club could be a place were students can find support and motivation in order to be a better person on life many students don't care about school because they don't find the good thing about it maybe because they need a motivation to be at school the after school club could be a place where people can meet and share ideas or meet each other and make a friendship helping each other to understand better the thing that they don't understand.
In conclusion the school must make the after school club in order to get more successful students and to also help and motivate students to do their assignments and turning them on time. One way to improve student achievement is to start a after school homework club.
Teachers and students should start meeting after school this idea would benefit students by getting extra support, turning assignments on time get a better understanding of the things that the teacher teach on class, establishing the club would help those students who don't turn in assignments on time or those who like to do things early.
In order to students to be successful they need extra support a better explanation of the things they learn, many students struggle with the assignments and most of them don't ask for support through the school year I have seen many students raping the assignments because they don't understand them, but if the school make the the idea of starting a club there would be no excuse for students to not be successful in their homework, tests, and class assignments.
Students should start turning assignments on time specially those who don't turn in on time, the club would help many students like instead of going home and forgot that they have assignments to do they could come and join the after school homework club. extra support is a better way to understand the things you don't understand, turning assignments make a student seem responsible and also get a good admiration of others making friends and share, discuss thing together is a better way to solve a problem that they had.
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The students need time to rest as well. They need to work to pay their responsibilities and if they come to school for ten hours they won't have enough time to make more hours in their job.
If the students assist to school for more hours they got the chance to learn more and improve their skills. Leaving late from school and working a lot going to make them tired of that routine. To keep the resources of the world, Can be necessarily to implement the idea " four-day school week". The students need to rest and do whatever they want in their free time. In school can happen the same thing as well with bad grades and not paying enough attention.
In conclusion having this idea can be a bad choice . " The four day school week" consist of ten hours per day. If they leave late from school they will work less hours and at the end they won't have enough money . Not all the students like to go to the school and for them will be even more stressful. They can have a lot of time to understand more their classes and be more prepare for them. In those 10 hours they can even get an extra class , a class that they want. Coming for ten hours can make them to stress easily .Student with stress won't do their best and at the end they going to have bad grades. A lot of students pay their own rent and they need to leave early from school and work more hours to effort enough . If they spend the whole evening in the school they can learn more and be more prepare for school.
It's a good idea to implement this but at the same time it has some disadvantages . A lot of students have things to do beside school like working or helping their families . Be in a place for a lot of our can be really stressful If the students are stressful of school they won't do their best because they are tired of it. The don't have to rush in class anymore , now they got the time to prepare more in class.
To implement this can be a bad idea because if the students come to school for ten hours they will end it up with stress. One of them can be that the students will be stressful. If the students have homework will be even more difficult to get a good rest. A lot of hours in just one place can make the students to got bored an tired of it. Having that time will be easy to communicate with more people and teachers . Adopting this idea it is going to conserve energy and resources. . It's not just that a lot of students have responsibilities as paying rent and bills. They won't have enough rest for them.
Some students got responsibilities at home like help their families at home or some of them have to work to pay their bills. If that happens they will have a lot of problems because if they don't do their job property the will got fired and without money to pay their bills. If they don't get enough rest to do what they want to do at the end they will end it up stressful and not doing their best at school and at work
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For example, my best friend, Generic_Name, took English 11 over the last summer, so she could graduate early from high school and soon become a nurse. . In the summer of 2015, my family and I had a great time in Generic_City. Luckily, with three months of summer break, she became better.
Second, some students don't want to spend four years in high school when they have an opportunity to graduate early. Summer break would be an awesome opportunity for both teachers and students to go on vacations with their loved ones. For instance, my cousin once took six college classes in her junior year of high school. Do you think a three month break is too long ? Some professors feel that summer break is too long and students are most likely to forget everything they have learned when they return to school. However, both professors and students deserve a nice, long break because ten months of high school can cause tons of stress, people get to spend more time with their families, and last but not least, students can take classes during the summer if they want to graduate early.
First, most students want to attend to good colleges, therefore, they take advanced classes in high school in order to receive more credits. Though, not all courses are available during the school year, however, students can take it in the summer. On the other hand, when their mind is relax they will achieve successful things in life. Most people agree that school is very stressful, therefore, a three month break is not too long. They said that she had stress issue and it may take a long time for her to recover. Teachers give more assignments in advanced classes and the work is much harder than course classes. My family had to take her to the doctors for a checkup. Students often have to stay up late to finish school work. She learned everything she needed for the tests within two months of summer school,
Third, many people love to spend time with their families. They can travel to different states or even countries if they like. In addition, with little amount of sleep can cause students serious stress. She never had much time to eat nor sleep, to the point where she passed out. Though, the most wonderful time of the year is summer, however, some argue that there should be year round schools and only three to four weeks of break in the summer.
In conclusion, all students and teachers, including staff members deserve a nice, long summer break. I got to experience many amazing things, it was the best summer I have ever had. In order to do so, they must take all of the requirement courses. Some says that when one is stress out, they can't think nor do things well
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we should vist many place because we can learn somthing new. Also many people say it's beutiful because of the ocean. The best thing about poposa when they're over fill when the cheese and beans are dripping.
These are my reason where would i go to vist. the reason i would spend time with him is because he's a very special kid and he's very sick i would do many things for him. The way you they make it,is they start with corn masa, then they make a mini bowl , then you can put cheese and beans whatever you want, then you close it you put it in the pan and let it cook. Then i would love to eat their food that they have
My one reason i want to go to el salvador ,i want to go vist my famliy because i have not seen them in 6 years and i really want to spend time with them. Also i would want to spend with my baby cousin. Also we should try are best to go somewhere at least the cheaps trip you can find. Where would i want to go vist? i would want to go to vist el salvador because i want to go vist my famliy. Then after swiming i want to buy a neckless for everyone in my famliy.
My third reason is i would want to try their food that they have because people say it's amizing. I want to try their poposa because it's better then the stores. Also i would want to go the beach . maybe i would be able to go to el salvador.. After i spend time with him i would take my famliy for dinner and they would be happy that i took them out to eat.
My second reason is i would want to go to the beach because i want to see how beutiful it is over there. Then i would want to go to swim! Many people say that the water is very warm because it's closer to the equitor, it's not like the US the water is cold
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Also students would be happy that they got there homework done now they can do whatever they want afterschool becaus ewhat was taking up most of there afternoon is now done .. We might think that homework isnt important but it is homework is worth 10 percent of your grade and sure that might not be a lot but it could really help your grade. Other students that are cabelble of doing this work on there own but have a hard time turning the homework in on time and if the school had a afterschool club this it homework wouldnt be a problem .
In conclusion this club would be really good to have because homework is a big issue in alot of these schools and most students dont care or dont understand how much homework matters it matters so much you probly wonder. It will not only help the students but the school to because if these student are getting there homework done then that will make the school look better . Also some students dont understand the work the teachers give like when you dont understand that class work you were doing in that class how do the teachers expect that the student bring in there homework .
I hard for students to learn middle school student have a lot to do for example students have to worry about getting homework done for all 7 of these classes it isnt easy . Why you didnt pass this test or why couldnt pass this quiz you took maybe if you did that homework you could have past the test , quiz also home plays a big role in school teachers give studnets homework so we can get better at that subject it easier for students not to care about homework ''BECAUSE IT DOESNT MATTER'' but it does and. I think that there should be a after school homework club because its hard to understand homework sometimes and you dont know what you are doing exactly but if we were to have these clubs think about how many students would get there work done . Teacher will also know that students are getting there work done and not just getting the anwser like some students do now when it comes to homework . No matter how many time you try to tell yourself it doesnt matter it does and that is not going to change so do your homework and if this afterschool club happend then homework will be one less thing to worry about . I think that if the school had this club it would really help studnets in school and help really understand the work and homework and help them be less stress because it it alot of work for you to get done and espcially if you dont get the work you need to do . Also help them undestand not just give that student the answer to the question they would actually learn and that . And it could really help you like when it comes to test you could know the matrial you need for this test if you did that one piece of homework that one piece of homework could have helped you past that test you probly failed or quiz . Most teachers might give more than one piece of homework some might give 2 some might give 3
pieces of homework .
Students could also ask about what they dont understand they will help students in what they dont understand or what they didnt understand in that lesson that they had .The teacher will explain what you didnt understand , some students just dont have time so maybe that one day that can stay afterschool could help them get all that students homework done . This also will get students grades up and might take a B to and A
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Like they want to take gym or something like this but i know that some boy's would not like this idea . students have the rights to take the classes they want to take . I think students should not be required to take a arts class . If they like arts classes they are free to take that class . they want be in another class that they really want to be
. If some kids do enjoy painting or acting . some kids may not like the idea of taking art classes and some may like the idea .
Kds may want to have space to take the class they want and they can't because they are required to take arts class . this is for all schools please let your kids to pick their classes . It might be the same in some schools or it might be different it others schools. like i said at first i really don't like this argument thats happening . that's another thing that teachers have to go though dealing with rude kids .
This concludes my argument about students having to take arts classes . but some kids do not like acting or painting . . Because look at it like this if kids that don't like drama and they don't let the teachers teach because they do not wanna be there . or at least give them one class that they like . That's why im saying that arts classes should not be required to take .
I think the best thing to do is to allow kids to pick their classes that they want to take as an elective class .
it's really the best thing to do in my thinking . They might think that it's boring for them to be in that class .
I know that some kids like to act cool and be rude to teachers that they don't like the class or something like this . but students that don't like art class do not have to take the class .
For example i really don't like arts classes but i'll still take the class because at my school they do this thing that if we need to retake a curse class then we well have 25% of taking that class or if we don't need a curse class we had the 50% of taking that
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I'm agree with Emerson's restatement, in my point of view or personality I can say that I want to be a different person with another qualities, create other ways to think how big or how much I can do to show to the world my authentic and proper knowledge, when I have to make a decision I don't have to think too much about it, I believe in what I'm doing. When you have a purpose that everyday make changes in your personal life or something like motivation to do anything that that have a great value to demonstrate to you family that they are the base to all of your goals have worth. . When you think to be a real person and someone different to the rest, you need to have a plan that consist step by step and develop that plan in the course of your life to make goals to short time and large period of time, be patient with each little detail that you want to do.
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If yo want to do something that you think that is impossible for any reason, you don't have to leave that idea or goal that you have in mind, remember that all you need is work hard, be simple and don't complain for any problem or reason that tomorrow will have a lot of consequences.
At this time, the people and no one wants to see another person having their own goals or their dreams that they had when they were children. A big percentage of people want to be rich, and my way to think about it, is that all thing that's material it doesn't have a real value for a great and humble person, the value is something that makes you having a great family, a simple life, because the world need to be protected by several and carefully people that are interesting in show another face to represent a different type of humanity.
Be an individual person is how you you can to do to confront the reality and give another perspective to make a great research in your your period of life to change or keep using that type of life and really cares about what are you doing with an specific and central idea.
I have a positive and big action to say that Emerson is right because nobody wants to be the shadow of any person or leave an opportunity that will make the life of one or more person to decide to experiment a new way to see the society and doing the correct process to be an excellent human with integrity and feeling of better life.
My conclusion for this restatement is that I want to be myself with great intentions to form an integrity in this society and have the best recognition to prove that it's possible to make and develop a proper identity with a new perspective to imagine and be the next person in the world that makes you a connection with your interior and have peace to concentrate in own goals that will converting on a genuine person to be autonomous of your acts, be someone responsible, charismatic and all of these characteristics define your personality it doesn't matter where yo come from or where you at, just be an example that if I can do this, you can do it better than me and better as you want. Every single person will try to impress to your attention to turn down your attitude and your positive life, I have too many experiences that I never want to pass that process again, in this world exist all type of people that want to help, to destroy your intention or the ways to see the real things, you're a guide and an example to change the format in this age
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A city council is debating adoption of a 10P.M. Dear city council I find it amazing that you are doing this but I also do disagree mainly because. For example, thats when people that are under the influence are mainly on the road and depending on where you are there could be deer. There are many that have responsibility in the world that we have to do and with those responsibility there will be many challenges that we as humans have to overcome to theses things in one way or another. weekday curfew and a midnight curfew for teenagers. There are a lot of bad things on the road at night and you as the driver could of course from your long drive an turn tired and maybe crash. There are lots of dangerous things in the night that no one can see or even some dangerous people that might harm us in the night. In conclusion I see why you dont want us to go driving at 10PM or even past midnight because of there being dangerous things in the night but I do also hope that you know that we dont stay up because of random things but we're actually staying up important things like our jobs or after school activities and that we will be very careful in the night because we know of the dangers of the night.. For example, we teenagers have to some activities after school or we have jobs and if its not because of those things its because were stuck in traffic. I do understand the reasoning of why we shouldnt be driving at these hours of the night It's mainly because we're exhausted at that point we can't focus that much. To say something we teenagers we can stay awake much more longer than you adults why do you think we stay up for so long its not because we're bored no its because we want you to see that we can hold our own wait and we stay up for our jobs and dont sleep until we go home when we get home because in truth we can hold ourselves now.
Dear to the city council I actually do think we should have teenagers off the road before 12AM
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Also the school lunch is potentially some of the amazing healthy American foods.
Again,Most American foods are junky and cause students to gain weight chronically and gradually. American's have this quote that " if you have lemons make lemonades" meaning we should make the best out of what we have by embracing it not changing it.
In additon, the current school's lunch menu is technically healthy, I have this extraordinary thoughts in my mind because I haven't seen any student that has protested against the school's lunch, this means that the current school lunch is unique on it's own way. Dear principal,
I have heard of the school cafeteria's plan to change to a new healthier school lunch. I have been eating our school's green salad for a while and l have seen some fantastic changes in my body and it is very impressive. And as a junior in this school,I take the position that this new dynamic idea to change the school's lunch menu is a bad idea. So principal, dont you think that changing our school's cafeteria's lunch menu is a bad idea?
For instance, our school cafeteria's lunch has got protein,Vitamin D and my weight is intact, as far as our health is concerned, so take all of these reasons into consideration and figure out your final answer,I hope that you make the right choice for the school and l know that the school's improvement is your priority.
Thank you respectively,
Generic_Name 11th grade( junior) . I know that my opponents would argue with me regardlessly,because they would probably assume that our students have been eating the same food for too long and would definetely want to have a different versions of food,and get to explore their school lunch like other schools usually do. But when they detect my reasons,they would know for sure that the school's lunch is way better than they think it is.
My initial reason for not agreeing to this change is that it would eradicate some student's favorite cafeteria foods, especially me,There are a lots of food currently in the cafeteria that are so good, clean and healthy.
they are also enough food for everyone to eat, so changing the menu wouldn't be necessary, it would be a waste of time and money. the school has got a bunch of stuff to focuse on. I believe that keeping our school's lunch menu is a good idea. But our current food consists of fruits,vegetables and also green salad which prevents the body from gaining too much weight and sustain the normal body weight. So I have decided to share my thoughts for the development of this school and with our health
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There are some some school's that offer 3 years to graduate but then there are some school's that are still doing Traditional way's of the 4 year's of high school and in my opinion is that it is good to graduate early and go to college or the work force but it also depends on the person thats doing all this work to graduate high school or the evenings or night school but people still do it and its good. The people that are doing all this work are hard working people who want to follow through with there ideas and dreams in life and they are paying good for it by studying and working hard throughout high school and they keep on working hard to reach for there goal outside of high school. Some people like to chose the route of hard work but its truly good to head to a college or university after school is over fo0r this person.. In my opinion It's a great idea to finish all of high school within 3 years because that's hard work paid off but some people believe that if you stay in school for an extra year that makes you smarter but in some sense that could be true but sometimes people stay the extra year because for 1 they sometime's stay because they fell behind and sometimes it's because they need one type of class for college but in reality the people who did the 3 year's of high school are the truly advanced one's because they did everything within 3 years and its good for them.
if these people go into the work place they have a higher chance of getting the job that they want because they have a high school diploma and the fact that they graduated school early so they that as an advantage for them when they find a job and most jobs are only looking for people that are either in high school or have a diploma because some job's just want people with brains so they could work smarter and not harder but the truth is these people are doing everything to make a living because they worked really hard in high school now they're working really hard at a job and now they are succeeding in life because they were smart and graduated earlier then everyone else
In the case that going to college after graduating the three year's are also good because they want to get into a field of a type of job that they wanted and now they're working even harder for it but in reality its working smarter not harder because they are studying for a career that will give them more money no matter what because they are studying for 4 more years to achieve there dream of becoming something in this world and they are smarter by doing that because a dream job is one of the thing's everyone want's and its good to have a goal in mind.
In my conclusion is that going to college is the better one because It's working smarter not harder and that's the better idea instead of working hard and not being able to get paid enough like the people at the college do so in my state of fact that college if the better choice to go with out of high school no matter if you did 3 years or traditional 4 years of high school the best choice is after high school to go to a college or a university that makes life better in the end for everyone
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He will be able to graduate this year. School have to see what their students need to make them capable and sucessful. Sometimes taking a lot of classes is not a good idea for students bacuse it is to hard for them to concentrate.
To conclude, I believe that class in arts should be alectives becuase students will be more confident in doing what they love to do. For those reasons I think class in arts should not be required. Having electives classes can be a great opportunity to let students choose what they love to do and be lesss stressful. One day she had to study for her History
ESOL. If Generic_Name did not have to make the draw for her art class. Students choose to study in schools that are less complicate for them. And she will have more time to study. But, Generic_Name did not have more space during that day,
and the other day of school Generic_Name had to work to help his mother.
If Generic_Name did not have to take the class in arts. Schools, which do not have electives classes had become less popular. Although some say students should be required to take class in the arts actually, students classes should be electives because students can use the free time more helpful for their benifit and they will have less worries.
Those who believe students should be required to take class in the arts have their reasons. They also think students can learn how to be good in arts.
One reason, why class in atrs should be electives is because students can use the free time more helpful for their benifit. They believe students have to be more responsible and pass all their classes. She will study for the ESOL, and she will get enough sleep. Also respecting students opinions can be a great opportunity to demostrate them that school cares about what they feel. One is that students will use the free time more helpful for their benifit.
Another one is that students will have less worries. When she was working, so his mother did not have to work less hours.
Another reason, why classes in school shoud be electives is because students will have less worries. For instance, my friend Generic_Name. . In addition, he will not waste his time in one class that maybe will not be interesting for him. However, he had to take one class in the arts that was required to graduete. For example, my friend Generic_Name he only had to take Algebra 2, English 12, U.S Goverment, and Chemistry to graduate this year. As well as, she had to make a big and beautiful draw for her class in art. Also, he will be able to help his mother about taking care of his litter bother. Generic_Name will be able to think and pass her test. Generic_Name took almost all the night making the draw ,so she did not have time to study and she fall the
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