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17,834 | 7 | Patience is when your waiting .I was patience when in line waiting for lunch .I didnt c ut any one to eat .I was standing and waiting for my turn .Patience ,some people dont have it .Lots of people just cut or yell at you because they dont have any patience. Sometimes people will push you out of their way .They onl... | 8 | 7 | 15 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,684 |
17,836 | 7 | I am not a patience person, like I cant sit in a sit for more than five minutes, but there was one time I was patience and i bet very alse was to that right riding a bike where out training wheels. When I was five learned how to ride a bike I just keeped falling of at one piont my bike flip and I allmost broke my jaw... | 6 | 7 | 13 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,685 |
17,837 | 7 | One day I was at basketball practice and I was running has with my team when I was getting really really thirsty do after we did are suicides (a running exercise)I asked coach if we could go get some drinks coach said after are double drible down and back exercise @CAPS1 I did the exercise and we all rushed to th... | 7 | 8 | 15 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,686 |
17,838 | 7 | I going to write about a time when I went to the @ORGANIZATION1 fair, we had fun, we saw a ride we wanted to get on, so we got in line. Suddenly, we noticed that we were at the end of the line. So my mother said. @CAPS1 get on another ride then. We already tried the other rides, my father said. So we stayed at the e... | 8 | 9 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,687 |
17,839 | 7 | It can be very hard for somebody to be patient. If you are patient, then you are understanding and tolerant. You have to be patient sometimes. When you go to the dentist or doctors office, you need to be very patient. There was a girl who had to go to the dentist. She hated the dentist. It was always so boring. First,... | 7 | 6 | 13 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,688 |
17,840 | 7 | There was a girl name @PERSON1. She loved spending time with her mom. Every weekend they would either @CAPS3 the movies, amusement or water park, or just stay home. This time was different though. @PERSON1 was even a little scared about @CAPS1 was about @CAPS3 happen. Today was a @DATE1 and @PERSON1 and her mom was wat... | 11 | 12 | 23 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,689 |
17,841 | 7 | Un Patience @CAPS1. My name is @CAPS2 and I have a very hipper non patience horse named @CAPS1. @CAPS1 is a chestnut quarter horse with a white star on his forehead who is very un patient. He is always hipper and ready to go. For example when we are getting ready to go on a horse ride in our back trains he dose not s... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,690 |
17,842 | 7 | A time when I was patient was when I preordered a videogame called @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I preordered it a month before it came out and I couldnt wait for it to come out. I mostly wanted it because @ORGANIZATION1 is the company that makes it and this is the last game @ORGANIZATION1 was making because some other company bought... | 9 | 9 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,691 |
17,843 | 7 | One time I was patience it was when I wanted a phone I didnt get a phone I knew I was gonna get one someday .The day finally came to get my phone @DATE1 it was my @NUM1 birthday .I was opening presents and I didnt know what I was getting but the last and find big present was a cell phone .So I called my friend on it ... | 8 | 4 | 12 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,692 |
17,844 | 7 | I think patience is a time when you have to be calm. It is also a time of wateing. For some people being patient is extremely hard. But for me its easy. At times I can be inpatient, but everyone can be. Being patient is kinda new racking, but I manage. A lot of times I get mad if I have to be too patient. I think @PER... | 4 | 6 | 10 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,693 |
17,845 | 7 | You know that life is so much harder when you dont have the patients. If you dont then Im going to tell you why. There was a time that found out I was going to @LOCATION1 now thats the good part but when I ask how are we getting there? we had to fly and right then and there I knew I was going to have to be very p... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,694 |
17,846 | 7 | One nice sunny day I was traped in a doctors office with no air conditioning. this doctors office had @NUM1 chairs in the dirty waiting room. I was already cramed in the room with about @NUM2 people for @NUM3 minutes. I was trying to be patient but the patience was wearing off. Sweat dripped of of my face on to my bla... | 9 | 10 | 19 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,695 |
17,847 | 7 | A time I was patient was @DATE1, when I was in line to ride the dragster in @CAPS1 point. I was super hot day, I was at @CAPS1 point with my best friend and we were geting ready to get on the dragster. The line is about an hour long and the sun is beating down on you so to me it felt like forever. Just as we were about... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,696 |
17,849 | 7 | One day, my soccer team was in the chamionchip game in we facing the lions. At the start of the game I was on the bench I was the worst on my team. After the @DATE1 we were up @NUM1 but my coach still put me on the bench and I just sat there and cheered for my. The next to quarters went by and it was tie game @NUM2. Ha... | 6 | 8 | 14 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,697 |
17,850 | 7 | This is about a story I was patient I was on an @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1, so this is what happen on the @LOCATION1. I was standing in line on ordered some sausages, eggs, pancakes atia syrup, has browns and orange jucie and take my cool derille sitting a man with a steak for his head and order something and sits down, an... | 5 | 7 | 12 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,698 |
17,851 | 7 | Tick, tock, tick, tock. Being patient is hard for some people but easy for others. Im not a very patient person. Ill tell about a time when I was patient. (the only time) One time me my mom and my sister we went to the docter because my sister had a docters appointment. I asked my mom how long it was gonna be and she... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,699 |
17,852 | 7 | One day @CAPS1 went to school pretty earlie in the @TIME1. He went is just ?? if it were a normal day, and goes to his star class in the @NUM1 grade. He chated with his friends all star and then class was over. Then he goes to @NUM2 hour science and there is a lab with partners. @CAPS3 him and @PERSON2 decide to be par... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,700 |
17,853 | 7 | I recall once a famous madican named @PERSON1 was prefering a stunt that took enourmous amounts of pateints and courage it was named @CAPS1 In Time. The madichian had to stay in a block of ice for @NUM1 days or @NUM2 hours! The great madichian had only a sweater. He had the consiled ice open to public as the magnif... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,701 |
17,854 | 7 | One day, a few years ago, I woke up and my mom said we were going to my grandmas house. So started to get ready. After I was done getting dressed I looked on. My dresser and grabbed my @MONEY2 @MONEY3 that I was saving up to buy something just incase we went to the store When we got there I saw my cousins dad @CAPS... | 10 | 11 | 21 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,702 |
17,856 | 7 | The time that I was patient was not long ago. It was a day of boredom and waiting. I went to a candy store to buy some candy, I wanted a lorry pop. The man told me to hold on when he was getting my candy. It was @NUM1 minutes until he brought me my candy. I was patient enough to wait for my candy. There was another day... | 6 | 8 | 14 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,703 |
17,857 | 7 | One day I was patient was when I tried out for volleyball. I had to be patient because the two coaches had to pick who was going to be on a team and if so which team. My friends and I waited patiently in the gum as the coaches told kids privately in the hallway. They had to do it privately because there are two teams t... | 9 | 9 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,704 |
17,858 | 7 | A time that I was patient was last year at cheer competition. In the beginning of the day I was patient getting in line to get ready to perform. Once we were ready we were waiting to go to perform. After, we perfomed we went to watch the rest of the teams. The other teams were really good. Then are team went and had lu... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,705 |
17,859 | 7 | Im writing about the time I was patient at a @ORGANIZATION1 game. It was my birthday and my dad took me, to go to watch the @LOCATION1 vs. the @LOCATION2 huggets in @LOCATION1. We were in a huge traffic jam. The jam was caused by a wreck a couple miles ahead and everyone was trying to get to the game before it started.... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,706 |
17,860 | 7 | Being patient? Being patient is very hard for me because I am bipolar and I have savere anger issues. My experience with being patient is when I lived with my foster family!!! They had grandkids that really annoyed me!!! My foster family had a different religion than me I am atheist. They are @CAPS1 and they would cons... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,707 |
17,861 | 7 | One when I was patient was when we were going of north. We had to pack but I was already done because I had packed the work before my family was packing still & I went to sit in the car because I was already ready I had nothing else to do when I went back inside the house they were almost done packing so I went to the ... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,862 | 7 | Patients is verey important. But I m not verey good with my patients. And when I am and I wait my turn I end up forgetting what I going to say. I guess I m not verey patient because my family is not verey patient. My family is not verey patient because we just want to say what were gona say before we forget it. Are fam... | 5 | 4 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,863 | 7 | Patience is when you can take your time at something. When your able to wait, not in a hurry pushing shuvinig an rushing like some thing bad happen. Being patient also means that you are understanding when it come to tolerents and it when you are calm, cool, peace an love!!! | 3 | 3 | 6 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,864 | 7 | When I was patient. Was when I go down the river with my dad and my two sisters (@CAPS1 @MONEY1).The only way I'm patient is when my dad says we are going from north to @LOCATION1. So I have no chose to be patient because it is a two houre trip. But there is a train track brige that my dad least use @CAPS2 off of and t... | 6 | 4 | 10 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,711 |
17,865 | 7 | Patience? I am not a patient type of person. I am a @PERSON1 @CAPS1. He played in a @CAPS11 called @CAPS2 which l really wanted to @CAPS10. Which came out @DATE1. That l havent even seen yet until One day l was sitting in my porch where l asked my mom to @CAPS19 to @CAPS9 and @CAPS10 @CAPS2 that @DATE2 when she said "w... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,867 | 7 | I am not a patient person at all. But sometimes I have to be like my birthday for instance, I would love it if my birthday came at least every month. But of course, I only have @NUM1 birthday a year, so I have to wait. I would like to be a patient person. Its just not in the cards for me. My father on the other hand i... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,868 | 7 | Patience is when you are waiting for something to happen and you experience difficulties but you do not complain. My friend @PERSON2 is a patient person. Her and her brother are both very patient. Their dad has been gone for most of their lives fighting for our country. This is the story of the time @PERSON2 and her br... | 8 | 7 | 15 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
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17,869 | 7 | Patience is an important thing. Patience is when you are understanding and tolerant. I have been patient many times. For instance when my mom uses the phone late till she gets of to talk to her. Before events like plays or movies you have to be patient until the movie are play begins. I am most patient during tests. Li... | 6 | 5 | 11 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,870 | 7 | Long ago in the land of @LOCATION1 their was a young boy named @CAPS1.@CAPS1 wanted to become a ninja like the rest of the older boys but he was to young, he was only six the years old.One day @CAPS1 came running home,he wasnt just running he was fliping, twirling @CAPS1 was acting like fire work, @CAPS1 came bursting... | 12 | 7 | 19 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
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17,871 | 7 | One in a land called @CAPS1 bokane there was a young named @PERSON2. In the land of @CAPS2, all the people lived off the land. They believed that everything had a spirit, and when you died the spirit of judging decides what you will be in the next life. To the people of @CAPS2 honor was everythbing, and no person valu... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,872 | 7 | One time when I was patient was when me and my family, went on a fishing trip to @LOCATION1, @CAPS1. Once we got on the boat it took @NUM1 minutes to go through the river. Then at @NUM2 we just waited, trolling through the water. Rocking side to side like a baby in its crib. Setting up all the poles and tures. Then ar... | 10 | 8 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,873 | 7 | A long time ago me and my family were going to a cottage we owned. It was about a four hour drive. It is the funniest place to go to. I was so happy I couldnt wait until we got there. I new I had to be patient. But I wanted to get there so bad. But if I would complain a lot I knew I would get in trouble. I know that b... | 9 | 7 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,874 | 7 | One time I went in the @CAPS1 and I had to sit in the visiting room/ area for about @NUM1 min- @NUM2 mins. I really didnt care, because I had to go to school after I was done you could tell any me in was not very happy because your only sapose to be waiting for @NUM3 minutes. I finally got in and went to sit in the ch... | 11 | 9 | 20 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,875 | 7 | Their was a time when I was patient when I went to the barber shop and my family and I was going on a trip and I had to get my haircut the day before we left. I went to the barber shop was packed so the guy that cut my hair told me I was next in the chair. So then more and more people started coming in and he let those... | 7 | 5 | 12 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,876 | 7 | One @DATE1 week a couple of years ago my grandparents were over. We went to my @ORGANIZATION1s sisters house and my @ORGANIZATION1 and aunt (my @ORGANIZATION1s sister) were going to teach me hoe to tie my shoes because I was going into kindergarten and the teacher wouldnt do it for you. They said if I learned to tie... | 8 | 11 | 19 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,878 | 7 | Patience. Being patient means that you needs to make and dor one' thing constantly to make one????understand. That is patience. My mom is patient. When I dart understand a problem, she will explain @CAPS1 to me, never in rush. She don't yell a t me when I don't understand, unlike my dad, who is very impatient. He would... | 4 | 6 | 10 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,879 | 7 | I am patient every year @CAPS1 one specil day to come. My birthday ??? ??? @NUM1 was a specil day @CAPS1 my mom and dad, @NUM2 boy my mom ever had @NUM3 boy my dad had. I am still wating @CAPS1 my brithday to come again. | 4 | 3 | 7 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,880 | 7 | Swimming is a lot of fun. I enjoy feeling the cool water all around me. Patience is an important part of the swimming you have to be patient when waiting to start practice, stretching, waiting for instruction when learning a new stroke learning a new way to turn at the wall, ect. On the first day of swim team this year... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,881 | 7 | Patience what is it really? Do any of us have it? I think if we think about it we could all be patient. One time when I was in @LOCATION1 we went to @ORGANIZATION1 and we rod no wait for any of the rides. The next time we went there we had to be patient because the lines were really long. I could wait but it seemed lik... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,882 | 7 | d time I was patient was when we where going to disocy w orkerd for the first time and l was very excited ! We only bad one week left to wait to go .But I couldnt wait that long l thought l waited long enough to, and I wanted to go at moment. Even thought I had to wait still bad a fon time a disrey word I juss had to... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,883 | 7 | I will be writing about patience in my own mix up way even thow you are adults. Once their was a littel silck warm getting ready to change in to a butter fly month. But this silck worm had a problem he was still to skiny to change he had to be nice & fat like a fat pratle stick cut in half. He crold going bush to bush ... | 8 | 12 | 20 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,884 | 7 | I have lived in a lot of different. Places through out my life. They are @ORGANIZATION1, @PERSON1, @CAPS1, @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1 and @CAPS2. That's @CAPS3 different place. @CAPS6 was and still is land to about to @CAPS6 @CAPS4 somewhere along that long road in @LOCATION2 my parents got devased. My dad moved to @CAPS5 ... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,885 | 7 | I was patient on the trip to @LOCATION1 it took two days to get down there I got hungery and had to go to the bathroom when ever I was hungery I had to what until next stop when we got gas so when it was on full I had to be patient with out complaining. So, I had to be patient until the gas tank was empty thats when w... | 4 | 5 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 0 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,886 | 7 | When I was patient. I was patient once or twice. One time was when I had to use the phone but my mom was on it. So I waited an hour and a half to use the phone. Another time was when I wanted to go to @ORGANIZATION1 to get some pop. So I was patient while my mom got everybody ready to go to @ORGANIZATION1. | 4 | 5 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,887 | 7 | It was my first camping trip! Well, we went camping when I was one but I dont remenber a lot. I was super excited! So, Im sorry if I couldnt help but wonder @CAPS1 the ? are we going! My patience was not very good. While I was waiting for my dad to hook the camper up to his truck I sat there very bored. I kept sayin... | 10 | 10 | 20 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,888 | 7 | A time of when I was patient was when me & my siblings were waiting to see if they were going to alow us to get our first puppy. We waited & waited for about an hour while my parent were discussing if we should or shouldnt. When finally they called us down to the basement. At first they said no & we were devastated. M... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,889 | 7 | You have to be paceint when you are cooking some cookies. It takes a long time to cook cookies. You have to be pacient when you are waiting to play a game. And you have to be pacint in the watting room until they call your name. You have to be pacint when you get out in a game you have to be pacint to get @CAPS1 in. ... | 4 | 4 | 8 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,890 | 7 | My sister is very patient unlik my brothers and me. Well my sibling and me had are proggress reports coming and I was so excited to see what I got, and my brothers were anxious and we work always both a mom saying when are they coming did you them. But my sister was always calm and patient. Then the day they arrived we... | 7 | 8 | 15 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,891 | 7 | It had been about one??? after I got my ipod touch and I really wanted to get this certain??? no it was a movie. The movie was I @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I had already seen it once from my cousins ipod but it was so cool, I had to watch it again. It had so much action in it. And zombies??? attack. Multiple words @CAPS3 | 12 | 8 | 20 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,892 | 7 | I know I can I said to myself as I was getting ready to do a back walkover for the first time by myself. I bent backwards tried kicking over and feel! Errg! I stood back up and asked @PERSON1 my coach, @CAPS1 my shoulders right? @CAPS2 @CAPS1 your shoulder the kick over. @CAPS3 got it I said. As I bent backwards ag... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,893 | 7 | @NUM1 years ago on my birthday the only thing I wanted was an I-pad touch. Well everybody got to the party we ate cake and ice cream then I opend presants. I got @NUM2 but none was the @CAPS1 toach. I was sad then I opend birthday cards and I got @MONEY1 I told mom since I didnât get the @CAPS1 I can go buy it. But I... | 8 | 10 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,894 | 7 | A time I was patient is when my little brother kept messing with me. He kept doing dump stuff like pulling the curtins down or playing with the stove. I wanted to hit him. I didnt hit him because he was just being bad. | 7 | 6 | 13 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,896 | 7 | I have been patient lots of time at the @ORGANIZATION1. @CAPS3 @CAPS1, @CAPS3 sister, @CAPS3 brother, and @CAPS3 mom and dad we all had to wait on the @ORGANIZATION1 to get all of the shots ready for @CAPS3 brethe, sister, and me. @CAPS4 took forever at about two hours for the @ORGANIZATION1 to get the shots ready to b... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,897 | 7 | I was patient when my mom was giving birth to my baby brother. We had to sit in the waiting room. My sister and I for @NUM1 hours I slept @NUM2 times and a lot because my dad was hungry so he got @CAPS1 food also.The first hour I was excited and couldnt wait. The second hour I was coloring with the crayons and paper ... | 10 | 10 | 20 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,898 | 7 | If you could ask for one thing, would you ask for patients or motivation? In this situation I would ask for patients. I remember when I was about four or five years old. My two sister and I boreded @CAPS1 to florda. It seemed like we were sitting on the @CAPS1 for hours befor it actually took off. After about ten minut... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,899 | 7 | @CAPS1! Look out! @CAPS2 squealed. The sound of crunching metal was deaffening. There was no way out. My eyes seemed sealed shut, but they were as wide as could be. T he eery silence frightened me. I felt arms grab me, pulling me to @CAPS9 they concidered safety. In no way, was this to be concidered safety, for this ... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,900 | 7 | There was one time I was patient when my little brothers play station wasnt working so it took a while to get use to it. It was an @TIME1 and my little brother had jus finished eating and he wanted to play his @CAPS1 but he was having a hard time turning it on but the problem was that some of his games were scratched ... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,901 | 7 | Patience. I was patience when I had to baby sit. I rock him and play with him. I fed him, and walk him. He fell to sleep. My mom still is not home from work. I am going to be late to the movise with my cuzins. I play the game for @CAPS1. I look out the window walk out side and sat on the steps.mom still not there. My c... | 6 | 4 | 10 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,745 |
17,902 | 7 | There are many times when lve been patient but here are just a few. It was a late afternoon my family & I were supposed to go to a big function that day. Like always I didnt know what I was going to wear, about an hour later I found what I was going to wear. I went down stairs to the soon no one was ready & we only h... | 8 | 9 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,746 |
17,903 | 7 | The time I was patient was when I was wait on my mom to have her @CAPS2. The reason why is becaus she was being a pain to me. She was mean and every thing. So I was lik oh my @CAPS1 she need to have this @CAPS2 so all this can be over and done with. This was when she was oly @NUM1 months so I know that I had to be so p... | 5 | 7 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,747 |
17,904 | 7 | One day @CAPS1 ??? baseball ??? , when she signed up ??? speech on ??? trophy baseball correctly, spark ??? and other things. Her friend @CAPS2 walked out of the room because he didnt have patience, so when he came into the room again the sign-up already went around, so after the conference @CAPS2 had to talk to some ... | 8 | 9 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,748 |
17,905 | 7 | I was patience wen I wanted my thot @NUM1 and I hod to wait to my b-day to get it I was patience to get my new fone but I had to be good and school and that was hard for me because I use to all ways be bad and staff like that I use to want everything but I use to have to be patience and I use to always be good to get i... | 4 | 4 | 8 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,749 |
17,906 | 7 | @CAPS1 Patient! @CAPS2 @CAPS10 yelled as I was almost bouncing of the walls waiting for @CAPS2 friend to get to @CAPS2 house. I get @CAPS3 I just cant wait! @CAPS10 its @CAPS2 first time what do you expect! I told @CAPS2 @CAPS10. DING @CAPS4! The door bell rang and I sprinted to the door. @CAPS5! @CAPS6! @CAPS5... | 10 | 12 | 22 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,750 |
17,908 | 7 | One of the greatest ways for a person to have patience is when you are being hunted down in a game of paintball. I have had experience once, and I hope it never happens again. I was playing paintball with a lot of my friends, and if I was not patient, I would have ended up getting shot in the head with paint. I was in... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,751 |
17,909 | 7 | I was patient a few years ago with my brother @PERSON1. It was almost his birthday, and he was very excited. He was excited because he wanted a flying toy helicopter he had seen while watching television, the helicopter was very expensive, and I did not know if he was getting it for his birth day or not .He wanted me t... | 10 | 11 | 21 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,752 |
17,910 | 7 | One night when I got home from cheer I was starving, and the dinner wasnt even on the grill. We were having steak, brown rice, and mack and chees. To past time I went upstairs to take a shower I took ten minutes to take a shower and it still wasnt ready. So I did some homework. I did math, reading, and I study for a ... | 8 | 11 | 19 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,753 |
17,911 | 7 | One time I was very patient. We were on a train going to @LOCATION1. I didn't have my game or music player. It fit live it would never spend, @CAPS2 I didn't complane.I sat in the seat for what felt like forever. Then when we got off the train I said "@CAPS1. I'm done."@CAPS2 then there was the bus ride to the musem of... | 8 | 11 | 19 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,754 |
17,912 | 7 | I want to say I found her, tex right away but I didnt. I learned something though yeah it took @ORGANIZATION1 and all the other @CAPS1 (@CAPS2 intelligence) for me to piece it together. But love is, love is patient if you rtun to it it probably wont stay with you but if wait and are patient maybe, just maybe itll co... | 4 | 8 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,755 |
17,913 | 7 | One time my friend @PERSON1 was at my house and we were playing halo. We were having a very good time. We ate popcorn, drank alot of pop and ate alot of candy. Then @PERSON1 had to go to the bathroom. He was there for a wile and suddenly I had to go the bathroom. Iwaited and waited and had to go very bad. I was very p... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,756 |
17,914 | 7 | Patience, what do you think when you hear that word? When I was little I always thought it would be simply impossible to have a thing like that, but after I badly hurt my ankle and was pat in a cast and on crutches for four months, I really got the hang of it. My mom would always say patience is vertue, have you ever... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 0 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 0 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,757 |
17,915 | 7 | At the doctor their were a lot of people se we decided to stay and wait. Also my mom and my dad went with me and my sister to the doctor. Furthermore my sister and I wanted to go outside and play but my parents said no so we watch tv my mom was reading magazine and my dad is reading newspaper. Finally their were a litt... | 8 | 7 | 15 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,758 |
17,916 | 7 | One day I had to wait in a line for @NUM1 hours just to get on a roler coaster @CAPS1 hot very paicent so I just fell asleep while standing with my eyes open. My mom had to have paicents so i just fell asleep while standing with my eyes open. My mom had to have patient when we were in traffic to get to the camping gr... | 5 | 4 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,759 |
17,917 | 7 | One time his years is seem a lay that was at the front of the lunch line and he was just about to go in but he had to go to the in because he wasn't all the way in the line. As he got sent to the in he had got mad but he went to the in but he was patient she didn't advice and next thing the new he was at the front of t... | 3 | 5 | 8 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,760 |
17,918 | 7 | Patience is about waiting for something for a long time. If you have patience that is good for you here is a time where i had patience. Last year in @DATE1 after school my dad and I went hunting for deer in @CAPS1. He went to this homeguards blind that we found sat in chair waiting for a deer to come along. You have t... | 8 | 6 | 14 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,761 |
17,919 | 7 | A time that I was patient is when I broke my foot. It was a @DATE1 when I was at the park. I was climbing a pole to ring the bell when I slide. My little brother came running over their and I told him to go and get help. He had no idea where to go so I lied on the ground with a broken foot for over @NUM1. when my broth... | 12 | 11 | 23 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,762 |
17,920 | 7 | One time I was patient when I was in @LOCATION1 getting on a ride called "@CAPS1 @CAPS2 parents @CAPS3." @CAPS4 was a @CAPS5 long line and I'm usually saying "@CAPS6 on!" Or sometimes "@CAPS7's go!" @CAPS8, I was being @CAPS5 patient in the line. I was proud of my self and so was my mom. That was the time I was being p... | 6 | 8 | 14 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,763 |
17,921 | 7 | Tic tak times tiking I was patient one time it was in the doctors office my oppment was at two and I had to wait and wait and wait and wait I sat there until it was @NUM1 and they finnly called me in. Once again I had to wait and wait again. So I was trying so hard to be patient and trust me it is not easy for me at l... | 5 | 5 | 10 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,764 |
17,922 | 7 | One time when I was patient was when there was a twenty two hour corride to florida. It was me, my cousin, my two sisters, and my parents. It was very boring. I was sitting in the back with my sister, and we kept fighting for foot space. Around five hours in, I was feeling cramped. We stopped off for dinner, then were ... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,765 |
17,923 | 7 | Some people say that if somebodys trying to annoy you and you are patient then they will stop, but thats not always true. One day my brother was down loading new ringtones, which I thought was no big dig deal until he downloaded the mosquito tone. The mosquito tone is a loud highpitched noise that only people under a... | 12 | 9 | 21 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,766 |
17,924 | 7 | I was patient for a whole @DATE1. Although, that was only because @CAPS2 mother had promised to purchase me a brand new video game system. This new video game system was the wii. For @CAPS5 had just come and had me interested the first time I saw @CAPS5. @CAPS5 was comoletely doctor and had advanced graphics. I had in... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,767 |
17,926 | 7 | Patience is hard for me because I have almost no patients for anything! So you can imagine how hard it was for me and anyone else who has no patience waiting in lines at disneyland. First of all the drive- it was horrible and long. We were in the car for what seemed like forever before we finally got there. I tried my ... | 10 | 11 | 21 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,927 | 7 | Tick and tock went the second of my watch and I went on, the fifet te oct far and it was wait people come in a out of the nir or with presnt and box give tree candy. Cote qinges dont fill up lot and lot of people. On a bolt the airpant I weat to the wid no and list to the ride like a hout latebile celove. And the most... | 3 | 3 | 6 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,769 |
17,928 | 7 | One day I went to a concert at @ORGANIZATION1 and there was a very long line. While I was in the line there was this girl who had no patient cause we had to wait in line for @NUM1 1/@NUM1 hours when that time past we all went to get our spots and before we had did that there was this long line again but even longer but... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,770 |
17,930 | 7 | I remember the time I was patient with my parents. It started when I saw this game I wanted at the store. Kindly I asked my dad to get it for so he said he would get it for on the following weekend. So I had to be patient and wait for the weekend to come. I was so excited about getting the new game that I mentioned it ... | 9 | 12 | 21 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,931 | 7 | Being patient as a kid is never really easy. I know lur lne being patient is like taking a baby's lollipop away from mom il just not pretty. But one time l really had to use my patience. Now it wasn't easy at all waiting in line at kings' island @NUM1 hours just to go on illegible. Socio. We waited about another @NUM2 ... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,772 |
17,932 | 7 | @PERSON1, this is boring! I want to try my backflip! I whined. @CAPS1, you're not ready yet, just wait. If you wait and practice more, it will be easier," said @PERSON1, as she spotted one of the other gymnasts in their back-hard-spring. We had been working on our back-hard-springs for weeks and I was the best at them,... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,933 | 7 | @CAPS1 story of patient One time I was patient was when I went to the @CAPS2 for a check-up. Me and @CAPS1 dad have wait in the lobby for ?? time, after every ?? went in for the appointments. I couldnt take it no more, but he made me stay. So I kept quiet. Well, most of the time really I wanted to say something real... | 7 | 8 | 15 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,774 |
17,935 | 7 | A time when I was patient was when my mom took my sisters shoping. My dad was at work and my mom took me and my older sisters shoping it was boring but it was kind of full because some of clothes in the store had boys on one side and girls on the other. One store only had girl clothes which I hated. But I didn't ... | 8 | 6 | 14 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,775 |
17,936 | 7 | I am patent i always have to wait for somthing or earn it. I go to my grouping with my parents but I have to wat. I have to wait to go to my aunts. The worst time to wat is going to @CAPS1/a up @LOCATION1 and camping. | 3 | 6 | 9 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,776 |
17,937 | 7 | One time I was patient for the doctors and I had a great time. Another time I was patient, I was at the dentest. My therd time I was patient when I was going to @ORGANIZATION1 and it was boring waiting but I was patient. Last but not least I was patient to go on the tower of terror. It was the funest ride there. | 5 | 4 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,777 |
17,938 | 7 | Patience is important in life. Something when you dont have patience things tend to go wrong and thats not always a good thing so here are somethings when you do not have patience. If you dont have patience you can get into trouble. For example if you were in a long line for something and you couldnt talk because i... | 5 | 4 | 9 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,778 |
17,939 | 7 | I sat there, staring off into the distance waiting for something to happen. I casually leaned back to my chair and propped my head toward the ceiling. I tried my best to clear my head and be paitient. But when I opened them, I was sitting on some bars in line for celar paints @ORGANIZATION1. The voices of many people ... | 10 | 12 | 22 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,779 |
17,940 | 7 | I am all way patient wen I hunt and fish. I always go hunting I find a spot and setor clmeit in a tree. I waet for along time for deer and trukey and @CAPS1. Some times you dont see anything at all. The key is get out early and be patient. The most of the time I usely see @NUM1 deer wen its deer sesson wen I go out . ... | 4 | 4 | 8 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,780 |
17,941 | 7 | One time when I was patient was when I was waiting for my fitted, mirror, league hats to come in the mail. They so, dit would only take @NUM1 ??? days so, I said ok thats not to so days flew by and hats were supposed to come in the mail that day so when us truck came by I was so exited but there was a box for my mom.... | 7 | 8 | 15 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,781 |
17,942 | 7 | A time when I was patient was when my favorit @ORGANIZATION1 of the year comes, the @ORGANIZATION1. I had waited patiently all year counting down the days till @DATE1 reading books and homework where almost done with for another year. You could smell the tension in the air as everyone watched the clock spin on the last... | 9 | 11 | 20 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,782 |
17,943 | 7 | Ok, ink to start o yeah this is the good one once mom no no one day no ok some years some time back I had to be patient for my phone and it was my first phone I how to be good. It was band new phone it just came out and I had to have if I nid a lot around the house and school to my mom said I can get it next week and I... | 4 | 6 | 10 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,783 |
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