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17,834 | 7 | Patience is when your waiting .I was patience when in line waiting for lunch .I didnt c ut any one to eat .I was standing and waiting for my turn .Patience ,some people dont have it .Lots of people just cut or yell at you because they dont have any patience. Sometimes people will push you out of their way .They onl... | 8 | 7 | 15 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,684 |
17,836 | 7 | I am not a patience person, like I cant sit in a sit for more than five minutes, but there was one time I was patience and i bet very alse was to that right riding a bike where out training wheels. When I was five learned how to ride a bike I just keeped falling of at one piont my bike flip and I allmost broke my jaw... | 6 | 7 | 13 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,685 |
17,837 | 7 | One day I was at basketball practice and I was running has with my team when I was getting really really thirsty do after we did are suicides (a running exercise)I asked coach if we could go get some drinks coach said after are double drible down and back exercise @CAPS1 I did the exercise and we all rushed to th... | 7 | 8 | 15 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,686 |
17,838 | 7 | I going to write about a time when I went to the @ORGANIZATION1 fair, we had fun, we saw a ride we wanted to get on, so we got in line. Suddenly, we noticed that we were at the end of the line. So my mother said. @CAPS1 get on another ride then. We already tried the other rides, my father said. So we stayed at the e... | 8 | 9 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,687 |
17,839 | 7 | It can be very hard for somebody to be patient. If you are patient, then you are understanding and tolerant. You have to be patient sometimes. When you go to the dentist or doctors office, you need to be very patient. There was a girl who had to go to the dentist. She hated the dentist. It was always so boring. First,... | 7 | 6 | 13 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,688 |
17,840 | 7 | There was a girl name @PERSON1. She loved spending time with her mom. Every weekend they would either @CAPS3 the movies, amusement or water park, or just stay home. This time was different though. @PERSON1 was even a little scared about @CAPS1 was about @CAPS3 happen. Today was a @DATE1 and @PERSON1 and her mom was wat... | 11 | 12 | 23 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,689 |
17,841 | 7 | Un Patience @CAPS1. My name is @CAPS2 and I have a very hipper non patience horse named @CAPS1. @CAPS1 is a chestnut quarter horse with a white star on his forehead who is very un patient. He is always hipper and ready to go. For example when we are getting ready to go on a horse ride in our back trains he dose not s... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,690 |
17,842 | 7 | A time when I was patient was when I preordered a videogame called @CAPS1 @CAPS2 I preordered it a month before it came out and I couldnt wait for it to come out. I mostly wanted it because @ORGANIZATION1 is the company that makes it and this is the last game @ORGANIZATION1 was making because some other company bought... | 9 | 9 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,691 |
17,843 | 7 | One time I was patience it was when I wanted a phone I didnt get a phone I knew I was gonna get one someday .The day finally came to get my phone @DATE1 it was my @NUM1 birthday .I was opening presents and I didnt know what I was getting but the last and find big present was a cell phone .So I called my friend on it ... | 8 | 4 | 12 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,692 |
17,844 | 7 | I think patience is a time when you have to be calm. It is also a time of wateing. For some people being patient is extremely hard. But for me its easy. At times I can be inpatient, but everyone can be. Being patient is kinda new racking, but I manage. A lot of times I get mad if I have to be too patient. I think @PER... | 4 | 6 | 10 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,693 |
17,845 | 7 | You know that life is so much harder when you dont have the patients. If you dont then Im going to tell you why. There was a time that found out I was going to @LOCATION1 now thats the good part but when I ask how are we getting there? we had to fly and right then and there I knew I was going to have to be very p... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,694 |
17,846 | 7 | One nice sunny day I was traped in a doctors office with no air conditioning. this doctors office had @NUM1 chairs in the dirty waiting room. I was already cramed in the room with about @NUM2 people for @NUM3 minutes. I was trying to be patient but the patience was wearing off. Sweat dripped of of my face on to my bla... | 9 | 10 | 19 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,695 |
17,847 | 7 | A time I was patient was @DATE1, when I was in line to ride the dragster in @CAPS1 point. I was super hot day, I was at @CAPS1 point with my best friend and we were geting ready to get on the dragster. The line is about an hour long and the sun is beating down on you so to me it felt like forever. Just as we were about... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,696 |
17,849 | 7 | One day, my soccer team was in the chamionchip game in we facing the lions. At the start of the game I was on the bench I was the worst on my team. After the @DATE1 we were up @NUM1 but my coach still put me on the bench and I just sat there and cheered for my. The next to quarters went by and it was tie game @NUM2. Ha... | 6 | 8 | 14 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,697 |
17,850 | 7 | This is about a story I was patient I was on an @LOCATION1 @LOCATION1, so this is what happen on the @LOCATION1. I was standing in line on ordered some sausages, eggs, pancakes atia syrup, has browns and orange jucie and take my cool derille sitting a man with a steak for his head and order something and sits down, an... | 5 | 7 | 12 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,698 |
17,851 | 7 | Tick, tock, tick, tock. Being patient is hard for some people but easy for others. Im not a very patient person. Ill tell about a time when I was patient. (the only time) One time me my mom and my sister we went to the docter because my sister had a docters appointment. I asked my mom how long it was gonna be and she... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,699 |
17,852 | 7 | One day @CAPS1 went to school pretty earlie in the @TIME1. He went is just ?? if it were a normal day, and goes to his star class in the @NUM1 grade. He chated with his friends all star and then class was over. Then he goes to @NUM2 hour science and there is a lab with partners. @CAPS3 him and @PERSON2 decide to be par... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,700 |
17,853 | 7 | I recall once a famous madican named @PERSON1 was prefering a stunt that took enourmous amounts of pateints and courage it was named @CAPS1 In Time. The madichian had to stay in a block of ice for @NUM1 days or @NUM2 hours! The great madichian had only a sweater. He had the consiled ice open to public as the magnif... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,701 |
17,854 | 7 | One day, a few years ago, I woke up and my mom said we were going to my grandmas house. So started to get ready. After I was done getting dressed I looked on. My dresser and grabbed my @MONEY2 @MONEY3 that I was saving up to buy something just incase we went to the store When we got there I saw my cousins dad @CAPS... | 10 | 11 | 21 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,702 |
17,856 | 7 | The time that I was patient was not long ago. It was a day of boredom and waiting. I went to a candy store to buy some candy, I wanted a lorry pop. The man told me to hold on when he was getting my candy. It was @NUM1 minutes until he brought me my candy. I was patient enough to wait for my candy. There was another day... | 6 | 8 | 14 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,703 |
17,857 | 7 | One day I was patient was when I tried out for volleyball. I had to be patient because the two coaches had to pick who was going to be on a team and if so which team. My friends and I waited patiently in the gum as the coaches told kids privately in the hallway. They had to do it privately because there are two teams t... | 9 | 9 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,704 |
17,858 | 7 | A time that I was patient was last year at cheer competition. In the beginning of the day I was patient getting in line to get ready to perform. Once we were ready we were waiting to go to perform. After, we perfomed we went to watch the rest of the teams. The other teams were really good. Then are team went and had lu... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,705 |
17,859 | 7 | Im writing about the time I was patient at a @ORGANIZATION1 game. It was my birthday and my dad took me, to go to watch the @LOCATION1 vs. the @LOCATION2 huggets in @LOCATION1. We were in a huge traffic jam. The jam was caused by a wreck a couple miles ahead and everyone was trying to get to the game before it started.... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,706 |
17,860 | 7 | Being patient? Being patient is very hard for me because I am bipolar and I have savere anger issues. My experience with being patient is when I lived with my foster family!!! They had grandkids that really annoyed me!!! My foster family had a different religion than me I am atheist. They are @CAPS1 and they would cons... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,707 |
17,861 | 7 | One when I was patient was when we were going of north. We had to pack but I was already done because I had packed the work before my family was packing still & I went to sit in the car because I was already ready I had nothing else to do when I went back inside the house they were almost done packing so I went to the ... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,862 | 7 | Patients is verey important. But I m not verey good with my patients. And when I am and I wait my turn I end up forgetting what I going to say. I guess I m not verey patient because my family is not verey patient. My family is not verey patient because we just want to say what were gona say before we forget it. Are fam... | 5 | 4 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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17,863 | 7 | Patience is when you can take your time at something. When your able to wait, not in a hurry pushing shuvinig an rushing like some thing bad happen. Being patient also means that you are understanding when it come to tolerents and it when you are calm, cool, peace an love!!! | 3 | 3 | 6 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,864 | 7 | When I was patient. Was when I go down the river with my dad and my two sisters (@CAPS1 @MONEY1).The only way I'm patient is when my dad says we are going from north to @LOCATION1. So I have no chose to be patient because it is a two houre trip. But there is a train track brige that my dad least use @CAPS2 off of and t... | 6 | 4 | 10 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,711 |
17,865 | 7 | Patience? I am not a patient type of person. I am a @PERSON1 @CAPS1. He played in a @CAPS11 called @CAPS2 which l really wanted to @CAPS10. Which came out @DATE1. That l havent even seen yet until One day l was sitting in my porch where l asked my mom to @CAPS19 to @CAPS9 and @CAPS10 @CAPS2 that @DATE2 when she said "w... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,867 | 7 | I am not a patient person at all. But sometimes I have to be like my birthday for instance, I would love it if my birthday came at least every month. But of course, I only have @NUM1 birthday a year, so I have to wait. I would like to be a patient person. Its just not in the cards for me. My father on the other hand i... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
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17,868 | 7 | Patience is when you are waiting for something to happen and you experience difficulties but you do not complain. My friend @PERSON2 is a patient person. Her and her brother are both very patient. Their dad has been gone for most of their lives fighting for our country. This is the story of the time @PERSON2 and her br... | 8 | 7 | 15 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,714 |
17,869 | 7 | Patience is an important thing. Patience is when you are understanding and tolerant. I have been patient many times. For instance when my mom uses the phone late till she gets of to talk to her. Before events like plays or movies you have to be patient until the movie are play begins. I am most patient during tests. Li... | 6 | 5 | 11 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,715 |
17,870 | 7 | Long ago in the land of @LOCATION1 their was a young boy named @CAPS1.@CAPS1 wanted to become a ninja like the rest of the older boys but he was to young, he was only six the years old.One day @CAPS1 came running home,he wasnt just running he was fliping, twirling @CAPS1 was acting like fire work, @CAPS1 came bursting... | 12 | 7 | 19 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,716 |
17,871 | 7 | One in a land called @CAPS1 bokane there was a young named @PERSON2. In the land of @CAPS2, all the people lived off the land. They believed that everything had a spirit, and when you died the spirit of judging decides what you will be in the next life. To the people of @CAPS2 honor was everythbing, and no person valu... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,717 |
17,872 | 7 | One time when I was patient was when me and my family, went on a fishing trip to @LOCATION1, @CAPS1. Once we got on the boat it took @NUM1 minutes to go through the river. Then at @NUM2 we just waited, trolling through the water. Rocking side to side like a baby in its crib. Setting up all the poles and tures. Then ar... | 10 | 8 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,718 |
17,873 | 7 | A long time ago me and my family were going to a cottage we owned. It was about a four hour drive. It is the funniest place to go to. I was so happy I couldnt wait until we got there. I new I had to be patient. But I wanted to get there so bad. But if I would complain a lot I knew I would get in trouble. I know that b... | 9 | 7 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,719 |
17,874 | 7 | One time I went in the @CAPS1 and I had to sit in the visiting room/ area for about @NUM1 min- @NUM2 mins. I really didnt care, because I had to go to school after I was done you could tell any me in was not very happy because your only sapose to be waiting for @NUM3 minutes. I finally got in and went to sit in the ch... | 11 | 9 | 20 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,720 |
17,875 | 7 | Their was a time when I was patient when I went to the barber shop and my family and I was going on a trip and I had to get my haircut the day before we left. I went to the barber shop was packed so the guy that cut my hair told me I was next in the chair. So then more and more people started coming in and he let those... | 7 | 5 | 12 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,721 |
17,876 | 7 | One @DATE1 week a couple of years ago my grandparents were over. We went to my @ORGANIZATION1s sisters house and my @ORGANIZATION1 and aunt (my @ORGANIZATION1s sister) were going to teach me hoe to tie my shoes because I was going into kindergarten and the teacher wouldnt do it for you. They said if I learned to tie... | 8 | 11 | 19 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,722 |
17,878 | 7 | Patience. Being patient means that you needs to make and dor one' thing constantly to make one????understand. That is patience. My mom is patient. When I dart understand a problem, she will explain @CAPS1 to me, never in rush. She don't yell a t me when I don't understand, unlike my dad, who is very impatient. He would... | 4 | 6 | 10 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,723 |
17,879 | 7 | I am patient every year @CAPS1 one specil day to come. My birthday ??? ??? @NUM1 was a specil day @CAPS1 my mom and dad, @NUM2 boy my mom ever had @NUM3 boy my dad had. I am still wating @CAPS1 my brithday to come again. | 4 | 3 | 7 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 1 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,724 |
17,880 | 7 | Swimming is a lot of fun. I enjoy feeling the cool water all around me. Patience is an important part of the swimming you have to be patient when waiting to start practice, stretching, waiting for instruction when learning a new stroke learning a new way to turn at the wall, ect. On the first day of swim team this year... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,725 |
17,881 | 7 | Patience what is it really? Do any of us have it? I think if we think about it we could all be patient. One time when I was in @LOCATION1 we went to @ORGANIZATION1 and we rod no wait for any of the rides. The next time we went there we had to be patient because the lines were really long. I could wait but it seemed lik... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,726 |
17,882 | 7 | d time I was patient was when we where going to disocy w orkerd for the first time and l was very excited ! We only bad one week left to wait to go .But I couldnt wait that long l thought l waited long enough to, and I wanted to go at moment. Even thought I had to wait still bad a fon time a disrey word I juss had to... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,727 |
17,883 | 7 | I will be writing about patience in my own mix up way even thow you are adults. Once their was a littel silck warm getting ready to change in to a butter fly month. But this silck worm had a problem he was still to skiny to change he had to be nice & fat like a fat pratle stick cut in half. He crold going bush to bush ... | 8 | 12 | 20 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,728 |
17,884 | 7 | I have lived in a lot of different. Places through out my life. They are @ORGANIZATION1, @PERSON1, @CAPS1, @LOCATION2, @LOCATION1 and @CAPS2. That's @CAPS3 different place. @CAPS6 was and still is land to about to @CAPS6 @CAPS4 somewhere along that long road in @LOCATION2 my parents got devased. My dad moved to @CAPS5 ... | 12 | 12 | 24 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,729 |
17,885 | 7 | I was patient on the trip to @LOCATION1 it took two days to get down there I got hungery and had to go to the bathroom when ever I was hungery I had to what until next stop when we got gas so when it was on full I had to be patient with out complaining. So, I had to be patient until the gas tank was empty thats when w... | 4 | 5 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 0 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,730 |
17,886 | 7 | When I was patient. I was patient once or twice. One time was when I had to use the phone but my mom was on it. So I waited an hour and a half to use the phone. Another time was when I wanted to go to @ORGANIZATION1 to get some pop. So I was patient while my mom got everybody ready to go to @ORGANIZATION1. | 4 | 5 | 9 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,731 |
17,887 | 7 | It was my first camping trip! Well, we went camping when I was one but I dont remenber a lot. I was super excited! So, Im sorry if I couldnt help but wonder @CAPS1 the ? are we going! My patience was not very good. While I was waiting for my dad to hook the camper up to his truck I sat there very bored. I kept sayin... | 10 | 10 | 20 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,732 |
17,888 | 7 | A time of when I was patient was when me & my siblings were waiting to see if they were going to alow us to get our first puppy. We waited & waited for about an hour while my parent were discussing if we should or shouldnt. When finally they called us down to the basement. At first they said no & we were devastated. M... | 8 | 8 | 16 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,733 |
17,889 | 7 | You have to be paceint when you are cooking some cookies. It takes a long time to cook cookies. You have to be pacient when you are waiting to play a game. And you have to be pacint in the watting room until they call your name. You have to be pacint when you get out in a game you have to be pacint to get @CAPS1 in. ... | 4 | 4 | 8 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,734 |
17,890 | 7 | My sister is very patient unlik my brothers and me. Well my sibling and me had are proggress reports coming and I was so excited to see what I got, and my brothers were anxious and we work always both a mom saying when are they coming did you them. But my sister was always calm and patient. Then the day they arrived we... | 7 | 8 | 15 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,735 |
17,891 | 7 | It had been about one??? after I got my ipod touch and I really wanted to get this certain??? no it was a movie. The movie was I @CAPS1 @CAPS2. I had already seen it once from my cousins ipod but it was so cool, I had to watch it again. It had so much action in it. And zombies??? attack. Multiple words @CAPS3 | 12 | 8 | 20 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
0: ideas are not focused on the task and/or are undeveloped.
1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,736 |
17,892 | 7 | I know I can I said to myself as I was getting ready to do a back walkover for the first time by myself. I bent backwards tried kicking over and feel! Errg! I stood back up and asked @PERSON1 my coach, @CAPS1 my shoulders right? @CAPS2 @CAPS1 your shoulder the kick over. @CAPS3 got it I said. As I bent backwards ag... | 9 | 8 | 17 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
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17,893 | 7 | @NUM1 years ago on my birthday the only thing I wanted was an I-pad touch. Well everybody got to the party we ate cake and ice cream then I opend presants. I got @NUM2 but none was the @CAPS1 toach. I was sad then I opend birthday cards and I got @MONEY1 I told mom since I didnât get the @CAPS1 I can go buy it. But I... | 8 | 10 | 18 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
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17,894 | 7 | A time I was patient is when my little brother kept messing with me. He kept doing dump stuff like pulling the curtins down or playing with the stove. I wanted to hit him. I didnt hit him because he was just being bad. | 7 | 6 | 13 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
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17,896 | 7 | I have been patient lots of time at the @ORGANIZATION1. @CAPS3 @CAPS1, @CAPS3 sister, @CAPS3 brother, and @CAPS3 mom and dad we all had to wait on the @ORGANIZATION1 to get all of the shots ready for @CAPS3 brethe, sister, and me. @CAPS4 took forever at about two hours for the @ORGANIZATION1 to get the shots ready to b... | 6 | 6 | 12 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | Ideas (points doubled):
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1: Tells a story with ideas that are minimally focused on the topic and developed with limited and/or general details.
2: Tells a story with ideas that are somewhat focused on the topic and are developed with a mix of specific and/o... | Write about patience. Being patient means that you are understanding and tolerant. A patient person experience difficulties without complaining.
Do only one of the following: write a story about a time when you were patient OR write a story about a time when someone you know was patient OR write a story in your own way... | 10,740 |
17,897 | 7 | I was patient when my mom was giving birth to my baby brother. We had to sit in the waiting room. My sister and I for @NUM1 hours I slept @NUM2 times and a lot because my dad was hungry so he got @CAPS1 food also.The first hour I was excited and couldnt wait. The second hour I was coloring with the crayons and paper ... | 10 | 10 | 20 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | Ideas (points doubled):
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