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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Today it is fact that there is a target group for mobile banking: people who are living in remote areas of the world. ###RESPONSE:
Today it is a fact that there is a target group for mobile banking: people who are living in remote areas of the world.
Today, it is fact that there is a target group for mobile banking: people who live in remote areas of the world.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: On the one hand there are hardly any banks in these regions, so they don't have access to bank services. ###RESPONSE:
On the one hand, there are hardly any banks in these regions, so they don't have access to bank services.
On the one hand, there are hardly any banks in these regions; so they don't have access to bank services.
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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: But on the other hand the number of mobile phones has risen. ###RESPONSE:
But on the other hand, the number of mobile phones has risen.
But, on the other hand, the number of mobile phones has increased.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: So now the most important factor is that mobile nets are reaching the remotest areas in the world. ###RESPONSE:
So now the most important factor is that mobile networks are reaching the remotest areas in the world.
So now, the most important factor is that mobile networks have reached the remotest areas on the planet.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Through this many people would have access to mobile banking and in addition to that it makes money available so it can be used in shops. ###RESPONSE:
Through this, many people would have access to mobile banking and, in addition to that, it makes money available so it can be used in shops.
Through this many people would have access to mobile banking, and in addition to that, it makes money available so it can be used in shops.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: According to Hannah Dideck the largest potential is that migrants con use mobile banking to send money home. ###RESPONSE:
According to Hannah Dideck, the largest potential is that migrants can use mobile banking to send money home.
According to Hannah Dineck, the largest potential for the largest possible amount of money is that migrants use mobile banking to send money home.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Therefore you don't have any time to relax, which is essential, even from your leisure duties. ###RESPONSE:
Therefore, you don't have any time to relax, which is essential, even from your leisure commitments.
Therefore, you don't have any time to relax, which is essential for your leisure activities.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: The same is valid for business life: if employees are available all the time, they take the worries of the daily business with them to their home which means a lot of stress. ###RESPONSE:
The same is valid for business life: if employees are available all the time, they take the worries of the daily business with them to their home, which means a lot of stress.
The same is valid for business life: if employees are available all the time, they take on the worries of the daily business with them to their home, which means a lot of stress.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: However, I personally think that it should not be regarded too critically but should only be handled responsably, according to one's personal needs. ###RESPONSE:
However, I personally think that it should not be regarded too critically but should only be handled responsibly, according to one's personal needs.
However, I personally think that it should not be considered too critically; but should only be handled responsibly, according to one's personal needs.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: The first 30 years all was going good, but suddenly something bad happened. ###RESPONSE:
The first 30 years, all was going well, but suddenly something bad happened.
The first 30 years were going well; but now something bad happened.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: It was such a hot summer that it was impossible to turn off the ventilator and I was a bored child with a laptop. I had signed in on the social network Tuenti and I liked passing all the time chatting. ###RESPONSE:
It was such a hot summer that it was impossible to turn off the ventilator, and I was a bored child with a laptop. I had signed in on the social network, Tuenti, and I liked spending all the time chatting.
It was so hot that it was impossible to turn off the ventilator, and I was a bored child with a laptop. I had signed in on the social network Tuenti, and I liked passing all the time chatting.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: He send an e-mail to the tour company explaining his situation and sudden interest in this project. ###RESPONSE:
He sent an e-mail to the tour company explaining his situation and sudden interest in this project.
He sent an e-mail to the tour company explaining his situation, and a sudden interest in this project.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: They told that it was alright if he was interested in other projects, but he still needed to give the same working performance. ###RESPONSE:
They said that it was alright if he was interested in other projects, but he still needed to give the same working performance.
They told that it was alright if he were interested in other projects, but he still needed to show the same working performance.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: The company told Louis that they didn't want to bother him, but that they were interested in investing in this kind of projects, because it was related to the purpose of the company: exploring. ###RESPONSE:
The company told Louis that they didn't want to bother him but that they were interested in investing in this kind of project because it was related to the purpose of the company: exploring.
The company told Louis that they didn't want to bother him; but that they were interested in investing in this kind of projects because it was related to the purpose of the company: exploring.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: The company told Louis that they wanted to compromise in this project and help Louis. ###RESPONSE:
The company told Louis that they wanted to invest in this project and help Louis.
The company told Louis that they wanted to compromise with Louis, and help him.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Later, that same day, Louis went cave diving in the mainland. ###RESPONSE:
Later that same day, Louis went cave diving on the mainland.
Later, that same day, Louis went to a cave diving on the mainland.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: He wanted to conquest as much territory down the sea level as he could. ###RESPONSE:
He wanted to conquer as much territory down the sea level as he could.
He wanted to conquer as much territory down the sea level as he could.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: What happens to the rubbish ###RESPONSE:
What happens to the rubbish?
What happens to the rubbish?
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Although citizens usually obey those rules, in some cases they are completely neglected. ###RESPONSE:
Although citizens usually obey those rules, in some cases, they are completely neglected.
Although citizens generally obey those rules, in some cases, they are completely neglected.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: However, people who have bigger houses tend to compost the organic waste and that makes up for the disobedient. ###RESPONSE:
However, people who have bigger houses tend to compost the organic waste, and that makes up for the disobedience.
However, people who have big homes tend to compost the organic waste and that makes up for the disobedient.
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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Authorities make sure that rubbish bins are placed in small distances since this is the most common reason why people throw litter on the ground. ###RESPONSE:
Authorities make sure that rubbish bins are placed at short distances apart since this is the most common reason why people throw litter on the ground.
The authorities have made it so that rubbish bins are placed at a smaller distance from each other, since this is the most common reason why people throw litter on the ground.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Firstly, a car could carry only 5 people at a time. ###RESPONSE:
Firstly, a car can carry only 5 people at a time.
Firstly, a car can carry only 5 people at a time.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: A bus or an underground wagon can carry from 30 to 100 people at a time. ###RESPONSE:
A bus or an underground train can carry from 30 to 100 people at a time.
A bus or an underground wagon can carry from 30 to 100 people at a time.
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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: If a person constantly uses his/her car, he/she shall need to pay for more petrol. ###RESPONSE:
If a person constantly uses his/her car, he/she will need to pay for more petrol.
If a person continuously uses his/her car, he/she will need to pay for more gasoline.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Finally, if every person drives his/her own car, pollution shall considerably increase affecting air conditions. ###RESPONSE:
Finally, if every person drives his/her own car, pollution will considerably increase, affecting air conditions.
Finally, if every person drives his or her own car, pollution will significantly increase affecting the air conditions.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: I had to stand because we were shifting our house and had just sold almost all of our furniture on OLX. ###RESPONSE:
I had to stand because we were moving house and had just sold almost all of our furniture on OLX.
I had to stand because we were shifting our house, and had just sold almost all of our furniture on OLX.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: My mother said that it would be rude to go at that time. ###RESPONSE:
My mother said that it would be rude to go out at that time.
My mother said that it would be a rude thing to do when you went there at that time.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: When I opened my eyes I saw a beautiful chair with orange and green stripes. ###RESPONSE:
When I opened my eyes, I saw a beautiful chair with orange and green stripes.
When I opened my eyes, I saw a beautiful chair with orange and green stripes.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Suddenly the chair jerked up and went straight out of the window while I was still sitting on it. ###RESPONSE:
Suddenly, the chair jerked up and went straight out of the window while I was still sitting on it.
Suddenly, the chair jerked up and went straight into the window while I was still sitting there.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: It swerved beautifully avoiding a tree and landed on the ground as softly as a butterfly. ###RESPONSE:
It swerved, beautifully avoiding a tree, and landed on the ground as softly as a butterfly.
It swerved perfectly, but it landed in the ground as softly as a butterfly.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: It would certainly be counterproductive and a waste of time if the time would be spent doing nothing and just passing the time like it were a long vacation, but if it is used to make new experiences, a year off can change the future of a person. ###RESPONSE:
It would certainly be counterproductive and a waste of time if the time is spent doing nothing and just passing the time as if it were a long vacation, but if it is used to have new experiences, a year off can change the future of a person.
It would certainly be counterproductive and a waste of time if the time was spent doing nothing and just passing the time like it was a long vacation, but if it is used to make new experiences, a year off could change the future of a person.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Or maybe during the year off somebody could also decide that they don't want to continue their studies, because they already found what they want to do or be. ###RESPONSE:
Or maybe, during the year off, somebody could also decide that they don't want to continue their studies because they have already found what they want to do or be.
Or maybe during the year off someone might also decide that they don't want to continue their studies because they already found what they wanted to do or be.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Sale promotion, which is the set of marketing activities undertaken to boost sales of the product or service, has become a vital tool for marketing and its importance has been increasing significantly over the years. ###RESPONSE:
Sales promotion, which is the set of marketing activities undertaken to boost sales of a product or service, has become a vital tool for marketing, and its importance has been increasing significantly over the years.
Sale promotion, which is the set of marketing activities undertaken to boost sales of the product or service, has become a vital tool for marketing and its importance has been increasing significantly over the years.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The aim of this presentation will be to analyse the aims and approaches of sales promotion as well as to evaluate both benefits and drawbacks sales promotions provide. ###RESPONSE:
The aim of this presentation will be to analyze the aims and approaches of sales promotion as well as to evaluate both the benefits and the drawbacks sales promotions provide.
The aim of this presentation is to analyze the aims and approaches of sales promotion as well as to evaluate both the benefits and drawbacks sales promotions provide.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Then the presentation will focus on a specific case study------the utilization of Flybuys loyal reward program. ###RESPONSE:
Then the presentation will focus on a specific case study------the utilization of Flybuys loyalty reward program.
Then, the presentation will focus on a specific case study----the utilization of the Flybuys loyalty reward program.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: I am writing in order to apply for the position of a volunteer in a summer camp in the USA as written in the advertisement. ###RESPONSE:
I am writing in order to apply for the position of volunteer in a summer camp in the USA as written in the advertisement.
I am writing in order to apply for the position of a volunteer at a summer camp in the USA as written in the advertisement.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: This summer I would like to come to one of your camps around the USA. ###RESPONSE:
This summer I would like to come to one of your camps in the USA.
This summer, I would like to go to one of your camps around the USA.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: All of this abilities make me think I'm the perfect man for your job. ###RESPONSE:
All of these abilities make me think I'm the perfect man for your job.
All of these abilities make me think I'm a perfect man for your job.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: With any new course, there are some certain expectations one will have. ###RESPONSE:
With any new course, there are certain expectations one will have.
With any new course, there are some certain expectations that one will have.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: By attending the first three lectures, I soon realized that my general concept about mechanical design is quite simple as my thoughts about mechanical design is purely just creating new products. ###RESPONSE:
By attending the first three lectures, I soon realized that my general concept of the mechanical design is quite simple, as my thoughts about mechanical design are purely just creating new products.
By attending the first three lectures, I soon realized that my general concept of mechanical design was quite simple as my thoughts about mechanical design are solely created by simply designing new products.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: This is because despite having experience in industrial design, I was never taking part in the design process from the initial stage. ###RESPONSE:
This is because, despite having experience in industrial design, I never took part in the design process from the initial stage.
This is because although I have been through an industrial design course, I had not taken part in the design process until the final stage.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Being placed in a project team working for Sydney Water about producing a maintenance excellent standard, I started to read the course outline and lecture notes more carefully to find out where to start and what I should do to deliver a good outcome. ###RESPONSE:...
Being placed in a project team working for Sydney Water on producing a excellent maintenance standard, I started to read the course outline and lecture notes more carefully to find out where to start and what I should do to deliver a good outcome.
Being placed in a project team working for Sydney Water about producing an excellent maintenance standard, I started to read the course outline and lecture notes more carefully to find out where to start and what I should do to deliver a good outcome.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This was demonstrated during the Project Introductions session as well as lecture notes, client interview task and client feedback (which is worth 25 points in the total mark). ###RESPONSE:
This was demonstrated during the project Introductions session as well as the lecture notes, client interview task, and client feedback (which is worth 25 points in the total mark).
This was demonstrated during the Project Introductions session as well as the Client Interview Task and Client Feedback (which is worth 25 points in the total mark),
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: As soon as I met my group, I discovered how far behind I am in terms of using English to demonstrate the ideas and lure the attention from other group members. ###RESPONSE:
As soon as I met my group, I discovered how far behind I was in terms of using English to demonstrate ideas and attract the attention of other group members.
As soon as I met my group, I discovered how far behind I am in terms of using English to demonstrate the ideas and attract attention from other group members.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The final consideration is the self-calibration, which also is the point that I have never considered before in a design process. ###RESPONSE:
The final consideration is self-calibration, which also is a point that I have never considered before in a design process.
The final consideration is the self-calibration, which also is the point that I have never considered before in a design process.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: To sum up, at the end of week three, my expectation for this course are to be able to apply my reflective thinking in any further design process, to be able to deliver a persuasive technical presentation, to be effective in verbal communication skills and presentation skill. ###R...
To sum up, at the end of week three, my expectations for this course are to be able to apply my reflective thinking in any further design process, to be able to deliver a persuasive technical presentation and to be effective in verbal communication skills and presentation skills.
To sum up, at the end of the week, my expectations for this course were to be able to apply my reflective thinking in any further design processes, to be able to deliver a persuasive technical presentation, to be effective in verbal communication skills and presentation skills.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Response: I've been in auditing and accounting since I finished my studies in college, more than 13 years. ###RESPONSE:
Response: I've been in auditing and accounting since I finished my studies in college more than 13 years ago.
Response: I have been in auditing and accounting since I graduated from college, more than 13 years.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Response: From all my experience, I have specifically more than 2 years of experience as consolidation controller in a Spanish multinational company and the rest of my experience as auditor shared between Venezuela and Spain. ###RESPONSE:
Response: From all my experience, I have specifically more than 2 years of experience as a consolidation controller in a Spanish multinational company, and the rest of my experience as an auditor is shared between Venezuela and Spain.
Response: From all my experiences, I have specifically more than 2 years of experience as a consolidation controller in a Spanish multinational company and the rest of my experience as an auditor has been shared with Venezuela and Spain.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Response: Yes, I have experience in international business and I have worked within international companies, both in Spain and Venezuela. ###RESPONSE:
Response: Yes, I have experience in international business, and I have worked for international companies in both Spain and Venezuela.
Response: Yes, I have experience in international business and I have worked within an international company, both in Spain and Venezuela.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Response: In a scale from 1 to 5, my English level is 4. ###RESPONSE:
Response: On a scale from 1 to 5, my English level is 4.
Response: In a scale from 1 to 5, my English level is 4.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Response: In a scale from 1 to 5, my Excel level is 4. ###RESPONSE:
Response: On a scale from 1 to 5, my Excel level is 4.
Response: In a scale from 1 to 5, my Excel level is 4.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Response: I've read about how this company's growth is on the rise and also how involved it is in the reduction cost of energy and how to harness the power of modern energy as the world moves further into the 21st century. ###RESPONSE:
Response: I've read about how this company's growth is on the rise and also how involved it is in the reduction of the cost of energy and how to harness the power of modern energy as the world moves further into the 21st century.
Response: I've read about how this company's growth is on the rise, and also how involved it is in reducing its costs of energy and how to harness the power of modern energy as the world moves further into the 21st century.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: I am interested in this job because I hope to apply my experience in a positive manner, which will undoubtedly prove my competence and enhance my abilities. I would be proud to work for a company with such a long history of leadership in the industry. ###RESPONSE:
I am interested in this job because I hope to apply my experience in a positive way, which will undoubtedly prove my competence and enhance my abilities. I would be proud to work for a company with such a long history of leadership in the industry.
I am interested in this job because I hope to apply my experience in a positive way, which will undoubtedly prove my competence and enhance my abilities. I would be proud to work for a company with such a long history of leadership in the industry.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In today's world, due to the fact the great comfort of cars, public transport is likely to disappear. ###RESPONSE:
In today's world, due to the great comfort of cars, public transport is likely to disappear.
In today's world, due to the fact that the great comfort of cars, public transportation is likely to disappear.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Firstly, is it true that cars are the faster way of transport. ###RESPONSE:
Firstly, is it true that cars are the faster mode of transport?
Firstly, cars are the fastest way to travel.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: From my point of view, many people use cars owe to the awful quality of some buses, trains... ###RESPONSE:
From my point of view, many people use cars owing to the awful quality of some buses, trains...
From my point of view, many people use cars for their own reasons because they are very expensive. Some buses and trains have terrible quality, so it is not fair to charge them a high price.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: We should also consider the fact that nowadays life is so busy that we can't waste our time taking public transport. ###RESPONSE:
We should also consider the fact that, nowadays, life is so busy that we can't waste our time taking public transport.
We should also consider the fact that nowadays, life has become such a busy that we cannot waste our time taking public transportation.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Recycling wastewater is an effective method to solve water scarcity problem. ###RESPONSE:
Recycling wastewater is an effective method to solve the water scarcity problem.
Recycling wastewater is an effective method to solve the water scarcity problem.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: However, the use of recycled water for daily routine is less common, because many people are repelled by the thought of water that comes from our toilets or drains. ###RESPONSE:
However, the use of recycled water for daily routines is less common because many people are repelled by the thought of water that comes from our toilets or drains.
However, the use of recycled water for daily routines is less common because many people are repelled by the thought of water that comes from our toilets or drains.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Although, governments are likely to face economic stress initially, which means they have to invest more money into upgrade technology instead of other field such as education, infrastructure and medical care, this strategy could affect dwellers' physical health and promote the...
Although governments are likely to face economic stress initially, which means they have to invest more money in upgrading technology instead of other fields such as education, infrastructure, and medical care, this strategy could affect inhabitants' physical health and promote their standard of living.
Although governments may face an economic stress initially, which means that they have to invest more money in upgrading technology instead of other fields like education, infrastructure, and medical care, this strategy could affect the lives of residents' physical health and promote their living standards.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In conclusion, water shortage has presented a challenge to individual life and global environment. ###RESPONSE:
In conclusion, the water shortage has presented a challenge to individual lives and the global environment.
In conclusion, the water shortage has presented a challenge to individuals' lives and the global environment.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: While these approaches are likely to solve the problem partially, they might have a positive impact on water shortage in a long term. ###RESPONSE:
While these approaches are likely to solve the problem partially, they might have a positive impact on water shortage in the long term.
While these approaches may be effective at solving the problem partially, they might have a positive impact on water scarcity over time.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: You may not have never thought about it but you///would///could///might///be able to jump from a plane if you wanted. ###RESPONSE:
You may not have ever thought about it, but you///would///could///might///be able to jump from a plane if you wanted.
You may not have ever thought about it, but you/// would/// could/// might/// be able to jump from a plane if you wanted.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: First of all, the best thing about skydiving is the excitement and the discharge of adrenalin. ###RESPONSE:
First of all, the best thing about skydiving is the excitement and the rush of adrenalin.
First of all, the best thing about skydiving is the excitement and the release of adrenaline.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: When you are sitting on the plane next to your instructor, with your legs hunging and your arms crossed... It makes an indescribable impression on you. ###RESPONSE:
When you are sitting in the plane next to your instructor, with your legs hanging and your arms crossed... It makes an indescribable impression on you.
When you are sitting on the plane next to your instructor, with your legs hanging down, and your arms crossing... It makes an indescribable impression on you.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: I'm sure you will agree that it can be one of your best experiences if you pay attention to your instructor all the time. ###RESPONSE:
I'm sure you will agree that it could be one of your best experiences if you pay attention to your instructor all the time.
I'm sure you will agree that it is possible for you to have one of your best experiences if you pay attention to your instructor all the time.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: And obviously, you shouldn't be afraid of hights to enjoy skydiving fully. ###RESPONSE:
And obviously, you shouldn't be afraid of heights to enjoy skydiving fully.
And obviously, you shouldn't be afraid of heights to enjoy skydiving completely.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Facial expression is said to be more important for the film actors, whereas body language and voice intonation are paid more attention to in the stage acting. ###RESPONSE:
Facial expression is said to be more important for film actors, whereas body language and voice intonation are paid more attention to in stage acting.
Facial expressions are said to be more important than body language and voice intonation, while body language and voice intonation are more considered as a part of stage acting.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Besides, camera work, props and special effects deserve to be called silver screen features, while staging implies actors to convey their play through body movements and energy. ###RESPONSE:
Besides, camera work, props, and special effects deserve to be called silver screen features, while stage acting requires actors to convey their play through body movements and energy.
Besides, the camera work, props, and special effects should be called silver screens, while stage performances imply actors to convey their plays through body movements and energy.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Regarding acting techniques, stage actors do use their body languages as much as film actors. ###RESPONSE:
Regarding acting techniques, stage actors do use their body language as much as film actors.
Regarding the acting techniques, stage actors do use their body language as much as film actors.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: The only thing that differs is that film actor has several takes opposed to stage actor who has to play perfectly at one dash. ###RESPONSE:
The only thing that differs is that the film actor has several takes as opposed to the stage actor, who has to play perfectly at one dash.
The only thing that differs is that film actors have several takes, and the stage actor plays perfectly on one dash.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The key point is that the whole range of techniques makes that acting pieces perfect. ###RESPONSE:
The key point is that the whole range of techniques makes these acting performances perfect.
The key point is that, the whole range of techniques make that acting pieces perfect.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Furthermore people actively use private transport such as cars, motorbikes, scooters and bicycles. ###RESPONSE:
Furthermore, people actively use private transport such as cars, motorbikes, scooters, and bicycles.
Furthermore, people actively use private transport such as cars, motorbikes, scooters, and bicycles.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Sometimes it is very difficult to come home in rush hour because of traffic jams. ###RESPONSE:
Sometimes it is very difficult to come home in the rush hour because of traffic jams.
Sometimes, it is quite difficult to come home in rush hour because of traffic jams.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: This idea also would be unpopular because it limits a freedom of choice. ###RESPONSE:
This idea also would be unpopular because it limits freedom of choice.
This idea also would be unpopular because it restricts the freedom of choice.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In addition, using this identification may assist parents, educators and clinicians to tackle the learning disorder. ###RESPONSE:
In addition, using this identification may help parents, educators, and clinicians to tackle the learning disorder.
In addition, using this identification may assist parents, educators, and clinicians to tackle the learning disorder.
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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Secondly, the article' 'Innovative' Intervention Helps Babies at High Risk of Autism 'is based on a video-therapy, which improves the interaction between parents and autism-related babies in a way that would help develop the children's communication abilities and social ...
Secondly, the article 'Innovative' Intervention Helps Babies at High Risk of Autism 'is based on video therapy, which improves the interaction between parents and autism-related babies in a way that would help develop the children's communication abilities and social engagement.
Secondly, the article" "Innovative" Intervention Helps Babies at High Risk of Autism " is based on a video therapy, which improves the interaction between parents and autism-related babies in a way that would help develop their communication abilities and social skills."
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: All in all, if you want to read about an effective research with very strong proposals, I recommend reading 'predicting dyslexia-even before children learn to read'. ###RESPONSE:
All in all, if you want to read about effective research with very strong proposals, I recommend reading 'predicting dyslexia-even before children learn to read.'
All in all, if you want to read about an effective research with very strong arguments, I recommend reading 'predicting dyslexia even before children learn to read.'
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Tom has joined a volunteering team at St. Michael's Hospital and this was his first day. ###RESPONSE:
Tom had joined a volunteering team at St. Michael's Hospital, and this was his first day.
Tom has joined a volunteer team at St. Michael's Hospital, and this is his first day.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: He then introduced himself and made a clear statement about the objective of the focus group and assured them that their identity will not be revealed. ###RESPONSE:
He then introduced himself and made a clear statement about the objective of the focus group, and assured them that their identity would not be revealed.
He then introduced himself, and made a clear statement about the objectives of the focus groups and assured them that their identity would not be revealed.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: As a result you can say it is not always justified that brand products are more expensive than comparable other ones. ###RESPONSE:
As a result, we can say it is not always justified that branded products are more expensive than other comparable ones.
As a result, you can say that brands are usually more expensive than similar other goods.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Only the brand and the good marketing makes it that expensive, not better quality or better taste. ###RESPONSE:
Only the brand and the good marketing make it that expensive, not better quality or better taste.
Only the brand and the good marketing make it that expensive, not better quality or better taste.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: The effect of media on people is clearly noticeable here. ###RESPONSE:
The effect of the media on people is clearly noticeable here.
The effect of the media on people is clearly visible here.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: We had won three free plane tickets to Rome in a competition, and we were looking forward to our trip for months. ###RESPONSE:
We had won three free plane tickets to Rome in a competition, and we had been looking forward to our trip for months.
We had won three free plane tickets to Rome in a competition, and we were looking forward to our trip for months.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: You don't have to worry about getting to my house, because it's really simple, and I'm helping you making it even more simple by picking you up at the train station of my town. ###RESPONSE:
You don't have to worry about getting to my house, because it's really simple, and I'm helping you make it even more simple by picking you up at the train station in my town.
You don't have to worry about getting to my house because it's really simple; and I'm helping you make it even more simple by picking you up at the train station of my town.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In this period it's mostly sunny and warm, but in the evening it gets a little cold and windy so bring some jumpers or sweaters... ###RESPONSE:
In this period it's mostly sunny and warm, but in the evening it gets a little cold and windy, so bring some jumpers or sweaters...
In this period, it's mainly sunny and warm, but in the evening, it gets a bit chilly and windy. So, bring some jumpers or sweaters!
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: That's why I think that waiting in queues is essential at any place. ###RESPONSE:
That's why I think that waiting in queues is essential in any place.
That's why I think that waiting for queues is essential at any place.
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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: I saw this advertisement on a web site and I instantly thought it would be a really great experience for me to improve my English, but also a great way to show how responsible and caring I am. ###RESPONSE:
I saw this advertisement on a website, and I instantly thought it would be a really great experience for me to improve my English, but also a great way to show how responsible and caring I am.
I saw this advertisement on a web site and I immediately thought it would be a really great experience for me to improve my English skills, but also a very good way to show how responsible and caring I am.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: I love children and it wouldn't be annoying for me to take care of a group of little monsters and organize sports and activities for them, actually I think I would really enjoy it and my day would end up with a tired smile, but a very bright smile. ###RESPONSE:
I love children, and it wouldn't be annoying for me to take care of a group of little monsters and organize sports and activities for them. Actually, I think I would really enjoy it, and my day would end with a tired smile, but a very bright smile.
I love children; they don't make me feel bored or sad about anything. It's nice to have a group of little monsters and organize sports and activities for them, actually, I think I would really enjoy it and my day would end up with a very bright smile.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: I'm constantly brainstorming to find everything that could be challenging for me and I usually try to follow what my mind brings out, so I think I could come up with nice ideas for those children. ###RESPONSE:
I'm constantly brainstorming to find everything that could be challenging for me, and I usually try to follow what my mind brings up, so I think I could come up with nice ideas for those children.
I'm always brainstorming to find anything that could be challenging for me and I usually try to follow what my mind brings out, so I think I can come up with nice ideas for those children.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Best regards. ###RESPONSE:
Best regards
Best regards.
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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: My colleauges are nice but the management are terrible and recently I just stopped talking to them. ###RESPONSE:
My colleagues are nice, but the management is terrible, and recently, I just stopped talking to them.
My collegues are nice, but the management is terrible; and lately, I just stopped talking with them.
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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Perhaps it is not their fault that this entire operation is so dysfuntional. ###RESPONSE:
Perhaps it is not their fault that this entire operation is so dysfunctional.
Perhaps, it is not their fault that this whole operation is so dysfunctional.
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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: I met some roleplayers at Wiscon and also some live roleplayers through Geek Network, of these the live roleplay looks promising. ###RESPONSE:
I met some roleplayers at Wiscon and also some live roleplayers through Geek Network. Of these, the live roleplay looks promising.
I met some roleplayers at Wiscon and also some live roleplayers through Geek Network, of these the live roleplays look promising.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: By a wide definition, teachers are the people who teach you. ###RESPONSE:
By a broad definition, teachers are the people who teach you.
By a broad definition, teachers are those people who teach you.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: If parents want to get these abilities, they need to spend extra time to learn. ###RESPONSE:
If parents want to get these abilities, they need to spend extra time learning them.
If parents want to get these abilities, they need to spend extra time learning them.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Because everyone has their own talents, values, and judgments, we learn more from those with whom we agree and appreciate and get significant influence from them. ###RESPONSE:
Because everyone has their own talents, values, and judgments, we learn more from those with whom we agree and who we appreciate and get significant influence.
Because everyone has their own talents, values, and judgments, we learn more from those who have agreed with us and appreciate and gain significant influence from them.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: These people can be deemed as the best teacher in our life, even if these people perhaps are not our parents. ###RESPONSE:
These people can be deemed as the best teachers in our lives, even if these people, perhaps, are not our parents.
These people can be considered as the best teachers in our lives, even though they may not have been our parents.
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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: It is difficult to think about Paris without its Eiffel tower (it was built several years after the revolution), but I'm sure it was a gorgeous city as it is nowadays. ###RESPONSE:
It is difficult to think about Paris without its Eiffel tower (it was built several years after the revolution), but I'm sure it was a gorgeous city, as it is nowadays.
It is difficult to think of Paris without its Eiffel tower, but I'm sure it was a beautiful city as it is now.
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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: They meet at midnight to listen to the speechs of the leaders. ###RESPONSE:
They meet at midnight to listen to the speeches of the leaders.
They meet at midnight to listen to the speeches of the leaders.
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