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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Furthermore, the most important thing here is that we can see everyone to age with ease, grace and happiness so that there will be lesser aging issues to be addressed.
###RESPONSE: | Furthermore, the most important thing here is that we can help everyone age with ease, grace, and happiness so that there will be fewer aging issues to be addressed. | Furthermore, the most important thing here is that we can see everyone at an age with ease, grace, and happiness, so that there will be less of them being affected by aging issues to be addressed. | 37 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Further emphasis by governments with regards to public architecture has also made aging easier.
###RESPONSE: | Further emphasis by governments with regard to public architecture has also made aging easier. | Further emphasis on the government's efforts toward public architecture has also made aging more easy. | 27 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: However, over the past decade, improvements in the electronic wheelchair have made it significantly lighter and the battery able to last longer.
###RESPONSE: | However, over the past decade, improvements in the electronic wheelchair have made it significantly lighter, and the battery is able to last longer. | However, over the past decade, improvements in the electronic wheelchair have made it significantly lighter and the battery can still be used for a long time. | 24 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: On the treatment front, improvements in the pin-hole surgery have greatly minimized the trauma to the patient, leading to shorted recovery time.
###RESPONSE: | On the treatment front, improvements in pin-hole surgery have greatly minimized the trauma to the patient, leading to short recovery time. | On the treatment front, improvements in the pin-hole surgery have greatly minimized the trauma to the patient, leading to a shorter recovery time. | 8 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: With such leaps in the field of medicine, health problems associated with aging no longer is such a big issue as before, allowing people to have greater quality of life in their twilight years.
###RESPONSE: | With such leaps in the field of medicine, health problems associated with aging are no longer such big issues as before, allowing people to have a greater quality of life in their twilight years. | With such leaps in the field of medicine, health problems associated with aging no longer are such a big issue as before; allowing people to have greater quality of life in their twilight years. | 14 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Social policies, especially with regards to the country's architecture, implemented by the government will have significant effects on the respective country's aging population.
###RESPONSE: | Social policies, especially with regard to the country's architecture, implemented by the government will have significant effects on the respective country's aging population. | Social policies, particularly with regard to the country's architecture, implemented by the government will have a significant effect on the respective country's aging population. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Rather, they taper the ends of the walkways into slopes with non-slip coating on them.
###RESPONSE: | Rather, they taper the ends of the walkways into slopes with a non-slip coating on them. | Rather, they taper the ends of the walkway into slopes with non-slip coatings on them. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This is an example of how social policies with regards to architecture can make life easier for the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | This is an example of how social policies with regard to architecture can make life easier for the elderly. | This is an example of how social policies with regard to architecture can make life easier for the elderly. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Today, government emphasizes more on the aged and spends a high sum of money to assist them.
###RESPONSE: | Today, the government emphasizes more on the aged and spends a large sum of money to assist them. | Today, the government emphasizes more on the aged and spends a high sum of money to assist them. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Besides that, professionals should be given more incentive to further their studies.
###RESPONSE: | Besides that, professionals should be given more incentives to further their studies. | Besides that, professionals should be given more incentives to continue their studies. | 7 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Government should raise the salary for professionals as a way to motivate them.
###RESPONSE: | The government should raise the salary for professionals as a way to motivate them. | Government should raise the salaries of professionals so that they can motivate themselves. | 27 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Furthermore, infrastructure development requires a higher percentage of spending compare to spending on aged because infrastructure plays an important role in ameliorating the standard of living of a country.
###RESPONSE: | Furthermore, infrastructure development requires a higher percentage of spending compared to spending on the aged because infrastructure plays an important role in ameliorating the standard of living of a country. | Furthermore, infrastructure development requires a higher percentage of spending compared to spending on the aged because infrastructure plays an important role in alleviating the standard of living of a country. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Government should spend more on transportation by providing more facilities for the disable and poor.
###RESPONSE: | The government should spend more on transportation by providing more facilities for the disabled and poor. | The government should spend more money to provide more facilities for the disabled and poor. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In addition, construction industry is momentous as it will determine how a country will be developed.
###RESPONSE: | In addition, the construction industry is momentous as it will determine how a country will be developed. | In addition to the construction industry, the construction sector is significant because it will determine how a country will develop. | 46 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Government should think wisely and choose the sector which has more privileges.
###RESPONSE: | The government should think wisely and choose the sector which has more privileges. | Government should think wisely, and choose the sectors that have more privileges. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Therefore, government should not focus too much of their spending on the aged.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, The government should not focus too much of its spending on the aged. | Therefore, the government should not focus too much of its spending on the aged. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Britain has introduced a compulsory pension scheme in 2006 where the employees have to contribute 4 percent of their monthly pay while their employers have to contribute 3 percent.
###RESPONSE: | Britain introduced a compulsory pension scheme in 2006 where the employees have to contribute 4 percent of their monthly payments while their employers have to contribute 3 percent. | Britain has introduced a compulsory pension scheme for all its employees, and the employers have to contribute 4 percent of their monthly pay while their employers have to contribute 3 percent. | 33 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Governments should therefore set apart more funds to support the aged and provide more facilities for them.
###RESPONSE: | Governments should therefore set aside more funds to support the aged and provide more facilities for them. | Governments should therefore set aside more funds to support the aged, and provide more facilities for them. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: This is however, only a short-term solution to the problem of ageing population.
###RESPONSE: | This is, however, only a short-term solution to the problem of an aging population. | This is an option for the aging population; it will be implemented in the near future. | 60 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Talking about the most striking features of ages we cannot forget the progress of science and its effects on almost every aspects of human life.
###RESPONSE: | When talking about the most striking features of aging, we cannot forget the progress of science and its effects on almost every aspect of human life. | Talking about the most striking features of ages, we cannot forget the progress of science and its effects on nearly every aspect of human life. | 15 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: In my opinion, the contribution of current researches and technology is very important in easing aging process.
###RESPONSE: | In my opinion, the contribution of current research and technology is very important in easing the aging process. | In my opinion, the contribution of current research and technology to the aging process is very important in easing the aging process. | 21 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Moreover, our machine civilization is also responsible for numerous accidents and serious injuries for many people which cause a lot of difficulties in their old age.
###RESPONSE: | Moreover, our machine civilization is also responsible for numerous accidents and serious injuries for many people, which cause a lot of difficulties in their old age. | Moreover, our machine civilization is also responsible for several accidents and serious injuries for many people who are older than us. | 44 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: With advancements in healthcare service and medicine, along with a better understanding of the aging process, life expectancy for humans keeps increasing.
###RESPONSE: | With advancements in healthcare services and medicine, along with a better understanding of the aging process, life expectancy for humans has kept increasing. | With advances in healthcare services and medicine, along with an improved understanding of the aging process, life expectancy for humans continues to increase. | 25 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: In the past, operations were performed on individual in a very crude manner.
###RESPONSE: | In the past, operations were performed on individuals in a very crude manner. | In the past, operations were performed on individuals in a very crude manner. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Today, however, many surgical operations could be done without any pain and small incision by application of endoscopic technology.
###RESPONSE: | Today, however, many surgical operations can be done with a small incision and without any pain by the application of endoscopic technology. | Today, however, most surgical operations can be done without any pain or a small incision with the aid of endoscopy. | 56 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: This is a good solution to cope with the increasing aging population, one of current difficult global problems.
###RESPONSE: | This is a good solution to cope with the increasing aging population, one of the current difficult global problems. | This is a good solution to cope with an increasing aging population, one of current difficult global problems. | 7 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The other areas of a country's development include investing in education, military, economic and infrastructure.
###RESPONSE: | The other areas of a country's development include investing in education, military, economy, and infrastructure. | The other areas of a country's development are investing in education, military, economic, and infrastructure. | 8 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Realizing this challenge, the government has encouraged companies which are willing to apply the new policy before 2012 by giving grants to companies and prepared the older worker to be more productive by giving workshops and courses.
###RESPONSE: | Realizing this challenge, the government has encouraged companies that are willing to apply the new policy before 2012 by giving grants to companies and preparing the older worker to be more productive by giving workshops and courses. | Realizing this challenge, the government has encouraged companies that are willing to apply for a new policy before 2012 by giving grants to companies and preparing the older workers to be more productive by giving workshops and courses. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: In social policy, the government has tried to improve the awareness of young generation to care more about the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | In social policy, the government has tried to improve the awareness among the young generation to care more about the elderly. | In social policies, the government has tried to improve the awareness of the younger generation to care more about the elderly. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Healthy body is important because when the eldery is healthy, they will not feel useless or abandoned.
###RESPONSE: | A healthy body is important because when the elderly are healthy, they will not feel useless or abandoned. | Healthy bodies are important because when an elderly person is healthy, they will not feel useless or abandoned. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: It will also stimulate young generation to create new products to ease the aging process.
###RESPONSE: | It will also stimulate the young generation to create new products to ease the aging process. | It will also stimulate the young generation to create new products to ease the aging process. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The existence of the new policies for helping the elderly in many fields, such as economy, social, and technology, shows that both the government and society cares about the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | The existence of new policies for helping the elderly in many fields, such as economy, society, and technology, shows that both the government and society care about the elderly. | The existence of new policies for helping the elderly in many fields, such as economics, social, and technology, shows that both the government and society care about the elderly. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: The respective governments must take into consideration that within the aged population there are people whom are childless, single or even deserted by their own children.
###RESPONSE: | The respective governments must take into consideration that within the aged population, there are people who are childless, single, or even deserted by their own children. | The respective governments must take into consideration that within the aged population there are people who are childless, single, or even deserted by their own children. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: In conclusion, public spending on the aged population should be limited but not to such a large extent that it will deprive those who are really in need of assistance from getting aids.
###RESPONSE: | In conclusion, public spending on the aged population should be limited but not to such a large extent that it deprives those who are really in need of assistance from getting aid. | In conclusion, public spending on the aged population should be limited but not so much as to deprive those who are really in need of aid from getting them assistance from getting aid. | 44 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Also, filial piety should be heavily emphasized by the government bodies in concurrent with the implementation of limiting the budget on aged population.
###RESPONSE: | Also, filial piety should be heavily emphasized by the government bodies concurrently with the implementation of limiting the budget on the aged population. | Also, filial piety should be heavily emphasized by the government bodies in conjunction with the implementation of limiting the budget on the aged population. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: This will in return bring back more funds for the aged in the future.
###RESPONSE: | This will, in turn, bring back more funds for the aged in the future. | This will in return, bring back more funds to the aged in the future. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: As mentioned above, country's development will determine its future financial capacity to solve various social problems including aging.
###RESPONSE: | As mentioned above, the country's development will determine its future financial capacity to solve various social problems, including aging. | As mentioned above, a country's development will determine its future financial capacity to solve various social problems, including aging. | 3 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Firstly, they failed to recognise the fact that the daily living expenses of the elderly would be less than an ordinary working person and established the retirement benefits system according to the average personal monthly spending of the working force.
###RESPONSE: | Firstly, they failed to recognize the fact that the daily living expenses of the elderly would be less than that of an ordinary working person and established the retirement benefits system according to the average personal monthly spending of the working force. | Firstly, they failed to recognize the fact that the daily living expenses of the elderly would be less than an ordinary working person and established the retirement benefit system according to the average personal monthly spending of the working force. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: We also need to note that it is important not just to cut the budget but come out with a detailed alternative plan to support the aged.
###RESPONSE: | We also need to note that it is important not just to cut the budget but also to come out with a detailed alternative plan to support the aged. | We also need to note that it is important not only to cut the budget but also, and especially, to come up with a detailed alternative plan for supporting the aged. | 28 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Careful management of current expenses along with expanding economy will be our only feasible cure to aging problems.
###RESPONSE: | Careful management of current expenses, along with an expanding economy, will be our only feasible cure for aging problems. | Carefully managing current expenses and the expansion of the economy will be our only feasible solution to aging problems. | 37 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Countries like Singapore, recognizing its potential, allowed stem cell research labs to be opened despite its controversy in moral values and religion.
###RESPONSE: | Countries like Singapore, recognizing its potential, allowed stem cell research laboratories to be opened despite its controversy in moral values and religion. | Countries like Singapore, recognizing their potential, allow stem cell research laboratories to be opened despite their controversy about morality and religion. | 24 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: However, there is a risk involved to limiting spending on the aged.
###RESPONSE: | However, there is a risk involved in limiting spending on the aged. | However, there is a risk involved in limiting spending on the aged. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Many citizens especially the elders of a country will feel that the country is not concerned for their current and future health, therefore losing confidence in the government.
###RESPONSE: | Many citizens, especially the elderly of a country, will feel that the country is not concerned for their current and future health, therefore losing confidence in the government. | Many citizens, especially those who are elderly, will feel that the country is not concerned with their current and future health, therefore losing confidence in the government. | 22 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Although, the democrats are still at its proposal stage, elders are already starting to express their concerns for their current needs, together with younger citizens worried over their future healthcare.
###RESPONSE: | Although the democrats are still at its proposal stage, the elderly are already starting to express their concerns for their current needs, together with younger citizens worried over their future healthcare. | Although the democrats have been at it's proposal stage, the elders are already beginning to express their concerns about their current needs, together with younger citizens worried over their future healthcare. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The current architecture improvement and research and development on technological products for the elderly have helped them to overcome the difficulty they faced when their physical health deteriorates.
###RESPONSE: | The current architecture improvement and research and development on technological products for the elderly have helped them to overcome the difficulty they face when their physical health deteriorates. | The current architecture improvement and research and development on technological products for the elderly has helped them to overcome the difficulty they face when their physical health deteriorates. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Currently, there have been many upgrading projects carried out in the older estate where the population there consists of mainly elderly.
###RESPONSE: | Currently, there have been many upgrading projects carried out in the older estates where the population consists mainly of the elderly. | Currently, there has been a lot of upgrading projects carried out on the older estate where the population consists mostly of elderly. | 19 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: This is because in the aging process of the elderly, physical health deterioration is one of the problems they faced.
###RESPONSE: | This is because in the aging process of the elderly, physical health deterioration is one of the problems they face. | This is because in the aging process of the elderly, physical health deterioration is one of the problems they face. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: As the aging population continues to grow, there are many business opporunity in the aging population market.
###RESPONSE: | As the aging population continues to grow, there are many business opportunities in the aging population market. | As the aging population continues to grow, there is an increasing number of business opportunities for the aging population market. | 24 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Thus, this eases their aging process through providing them a more comfortable and easier life compared to the past when there is no such research and development or policies available.
###RESPONSE: | Thus, this eases their aging process by providing them with a more comfortable and easier life compared to the past when there was no such research and development or policies available. | Thus, this easing of their aging process through providing them with more comfortable and easier lives compared to the past when there is no such research and development or policies available. | 19 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Even so, Medicare has been giving assistance to elderly who need wheelchairs as long as the elderly provides a written prescription from the doctor stating the need of having such wheelchair.
###RESPONSE: | Even so, Medicare has been giving assistance to the elderly who need wheelchairs as long as the elderly provide a written prescription from the doctor stating the need for having a such a wheelchair. | Even though Medicare has been providing assistance to the elderly who need wheelchairs as long as the elderly provide a written prescription for the need of having such a wheelchair. | 34 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Nowadays, balancing public spending is a big concern to most of governments since they need to carefully evaluate the most suitable spending areas for short and long-term plan.
###RESPONSE: | Nowadays, balancing public spending is a big concern to most the governments since they need to carefully evaluate the most suitable spending areas for short and long-term plans. | Nowadays, balancing public spending is a big concern to most governments since they need to carefully evaluate the most suitable spending areas for short and long-term plans. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: There are still activities carried out to help the elder such as providing free travel on public transportation in cities or subsidizing old people's homes, etc.
###RESPONSE: | There are still activities carried out to help the elderly such as providing free travel on public transportation in cities or subsidizing old people's homes, etc. | There are still activities carried out to help the elderly such as providing free travel on public transport in cities or subsidizing old people's homes, etc. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Opponents of this position argue that the elder should be paid attention with more and more subsidies because they are the predecessors with a lot of commitment to societies.
###RESPONSE: | Opponents of this position argue that the elderly should be paid attention to with more and more subsidies because they are the predecessors with a lot of commitment to society. | Opponents of this position argue that the elderly should be paid attention with more and more subsidies because they are the predecessors with a lot of commitment to society. | 3 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Nevertheless, it is a critical and ultimate path to their full developments.
###RESPONSE: | Nevertheless, it is a critical and ultimate path to their full development. | Nevertheless, it is a crucial and ultimate path for their full development. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: It is no doubt that future prosperity is likely to be negatively affected because the lack of investment in education, nutrition and other aspects for young generations.
###RESPONSE: | It is no doubt that future prosperity is likely to be negatively affected because of the lack of investment in education, nutrition, and other aspects for young generations. | It is no doubt that future prosperity will be negatively affected because a lack of investment in education, nutrition, and other aspects for young generations. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: As a result, national aggregate surplus is offset by the public expenditures on the elderly, which leads to the overall effect of reducing potential growth rate and burdening developments.
###RESPONSE: | As a result, the national aggregate surplus is offset by the public expenditures on the elderly, which leads to the overall effect of reducing potential growth rates and burdening developments. | As a result, the national aggregate surplus is offset by the public expenditure on the elderly, which leads to the overall effect of reducing potential growth rates and burdening development. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Thus, there is no denying the fact that the good performance in Singapore herself is a convincing illustration for limiting public expenses on the elderly and investing in other fields such as education and research.
###RESPONSE: | Thus, there is no denying the fact that the good performance in Singapore is a convincing illustration for limiting public expenses on the elderly and investing in other fields such as education and research. | Thus, there is no denying the fact that the good performance of Singapore itself is a convincing illustration for limiting public spending on the elderly and investing in other fields such as education and research. | 15 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: In other words, majority of old populations can live independently.
###RESPONSE: | In other words, the majority of old populations can live independently. | In other words, the majority of the old population can live alone. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: Moreover, they are capable of obtaining a healthy lifestyle via doing exercises and maintaining proper nutrition plan.
###RESPONSE: | Moreover, they are capable of obtaining a healthy lifestyle via doing exercises and maintaining proper nutrition plans. | Moreover, they are capable of achieving a healthy lifestyle through doing exercise and maintaining a proper diet plan. | 25 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: By doing that, the remaining public fund would be used more efficiently and effectively in other investment and reinforcement activities and the country would be benefited subsequently.
###RESPONSE: | By doing that, the remaining public fund would be used more efficiently and effectively in other investment and reinforcement activities, and the country would benefit subsequently. | By doing so, the remaining public funds would be used more efficiently and effectively in other investment and reinforcement activities and the country would be benefitted subsequently | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: This number has significantly increased from 24 years since 1980, and predicted to reach 54 years within the next 40 years, similar to that of Japan and Italy now.
###RESPONSE: | The median age has significantly increased from 24 years since 1980 and is predicted to reach 54 years within the next 40 years, similar to that of Japan and Italy now. | This number has significantly increased from 24 years ago, and is projected to reach 54 years within the next 40 years, similar to that of Japan and Italy now. | 24 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: However it also emphasizes a greater need to be financially independent and help create more elderly involvement in the society which contributes to the economy.
###RESPONSE: | However, it also emphasizes a greater need to be financially independent and helps create more elderly involvement in society, which contributes to the economy. | However, it also emphasizes a greater need for financial independence and helps create more elderly involvement in society which contributes to the economy. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Filial obligation and willingness of grown children to take care their aged parents are needed indeed.
###RESPONSE: | Filial obligation and willingness of grown children to take care of their aged parents are needed indeed. | Filial obligation and willingness of the grown-up children to take care of their aged parents is needed, indeed. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Since most of young will be old someday, today's children will in time receive the benefits granted to today's elderly, as long as current commitments remain in place.
###RESPONSE: | Since most of the young will be old someday, today's children will, in time, receive the benefits granted to today's elderly as long as current commitments remain in place. | Since most of young people will be old someday, today's children will in time receive the benefits granted to today's elderly, as long as current commitments remain in place. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: As the aging problems are getting seriously nowadays, it should not be invariably neglected by the society but to face the problem that the elderly may suffer financial hardships in their golden age after they retired.
###RESPONSE: | As the aging problems are getting serious nowadays, it should not be neglected by society but face the problem that the elderly may suffer financial hardships in their golden age after they have retired. | As the aging problems are becoming increasingly serious nowadays, it should not be ignored by society but to face the problem that the elderly may suffer financial hardships in their golden age after they have retired. | 25 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: In the other hand, a huge amount of stress which may cause high blood pressure, heart disease and cancer will affect both their emotional and physical health and reduces their ability to live to the full.
###RESPONSE: | On the other hand, a huge amount of stress which may cause high blood pressure, heart disease, and cancer, will affect both their emotional and physical health and reduces their ability to live to the full. | In the other hand, a huge amount of stress that may cause high blood pressure, heart disease, and cancer will affect both their emotional and physical health, and reduce their ability to live as fully as possible. | 25 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Burden of responsibilities of taking care of their aged parents, taking care of their children, rising cost of living and at the same time worrying about job security makes the future generations live so stressful every day in life in competitive society.
###RESPONSE: | The burden of responsibility of taking care of their aged parents, taking care of their children, rising cost of living, and at the same time worrying about job security makes the future generations' live so stressful every day in the life in a competitive society. | Burden of responsibilities for taking care of their aging parents, taking care of their children, raising costs of living, and at the same time worrying about job security make the future generations live so stressed out every day in a competitive society. | 34 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: These strategies prove that instead of spending much money on supporting the aged, government can seek for another alternatives to reduce the burden.
###RESPONSE: | These strategies prove that instead of spending much money on supporting the aged, the government can seek for another alternative to reduce the burden. | These strategies prove that instead of spending a lot of money on supporting the aged, governments can seek alternative means to reduce the burden | 32 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Moreover, by doing so, the elder can earn for their living, have a savings for future need on health care, and have less dependency on their younger generation.
###RESPONSE: | Moreover, by doing so, the elderly can earn a living, have savings for future needs for health care, and have less dependency on their younger generation. | Moreover, by doing so, the elderly can earn for their living, have savings for future needs in health care, and have less dependence on their younger generations. | 14 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Opponents may say current clinical R&D cause an increase in longevity, which substantially raises the average age of the population.
###RESPONSE: | Opponents may say current clinical R&D causes an increase in longevity, which substantially raises the average age of the population. | Opponents may say that current clinical R&D causes an increase in longevity, which significantly raises the average age of the population. | 15 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Clinical R&D continuously introduce people with healthier living styles, bring in more efficacious, safer and cheaper medical treatments, which allows people to look young and stay healthy so that they are still able to work actively in middle or even old age.
###RESPON... | Clinical R&D continuously introduce people to healthier living styles, and brings in more efficacious, safer, and cheaper medical treatments, which allows people to look young and stay healthy so that they are still able to work actively in the middle or even old age. | Clinical research continues to continually introduce people with healthier lifestyles, brings in more efficacious, safer, and cheaper medical treatments, which allow people to look younger and stay healthy so that they are still able to work actively in middle or even older ages. | 43 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: To cope with it, Chinese government has made and implemented several policies like building up colleges of continuing education for the aged.
###RESPONSE: | To cope with it, the government has made and implemented several policies like building colleges of continuing education for the aged. | To cope with it, China's government has made and implemented several policies like building up colleges of continuing education for the aged. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Shrinking workforce is another problem arising from an aging population.
###RESPONSE: | A shrinking workforce is another problem arising from an aging population. | Shrinking workforce is another problem that arises from an aging population. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: The manpower resources of many developed countries are predicted to shrink as a hefty portion of the workforce is edging towards retirement.
###RESPONSE: | The human resources of many developed countries are predicted to shrink as a hefty portion of the workforce is edging toward retirement. | The manpower resources of many developed countries have been predicted to shrink as a heavy portion of the workforce is headed toward retirement. | 22 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: The solution inevitably invited criticism as many found themselves being victims of ageism, a situation where younger workers are preferred over retaining or hiring the old.
###RESPONSE: | The solution inevitably invited criticism as many found themselves being victims of ageism, a situation where younger workers are preferred over retaining or hiring older ones. | The solution inevitably invited criticism as many found themselves being victim of ageism, a situation where younger workers are preferred over retaining or hiring older ones. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Another major issue caused by aging population is the increasing healthcare problem associated with elderly.
###RESPONSE: | Another major issue caused by the aging population is the increasing healthcare problem associated with the elderly. | Another major issue caused by an aging population is the increasing healthcare problems associated with the elderly. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In fact, leaders and policymakers particularly from the developed countries have proactively implemented a series of researches and policies in an effort to confront this unprecedented phenomenon.
###RESPONSE: | In fact, leaders and policymakers, particularly from developed countries, have proactively implemented a series of research and policies in an effort to confront this unprecedented phenomenon. | In fact, leaders and policymakers, especially those from developed countries, have proactively implemented research and policies aimed at confronting this unprecedented phenomenon. | 41 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Healthcare issue has to be taken into consideration because elderly are prone to suffer from several chronic diseases as they grow older.
###RESPONSE: | Healthcare issue has to be taken into consideration because the elderly are prone to suffer from chronic diseases as they grow older. | Healthcare issues have to be taken into consideration because the elderly are prone to suffer from various chronic diseases as they grow older. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Nonetheless, if the spending on healthcare is limited, the burden will increasingly fall on low-income individuals as well as their families.
###RESPONSE: | Nonetheless, if the spending on healthcare is limited, the burden will fall increasingly on low-income individuals as well as their families. | Nonetheless, if the spending on healthcare is limited, the burden will eventually fall on lower-income individuals as well as their families. | 18 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Elderly are encouraged to work longer and contribute to the growth of economy, thereby reducing elder dependency of fiscal cost.
###RESPONSE: | The elderly are encouraged to work longer and contribute to the growth of the economy, thereby reducing the elder dependency on fiscal costs. | Elderly are encouraged to work longer and contribute to the growth of the economy, thus reducing the elderly dependency of fiscal costs. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: However, older workers are usually less productive than imported foreign talents whereas employers may compromise on a small portion of existing aged employees.
###RESPONSE: | However, older workers are usually less productive than imported foreign talents, though employers may compromise on a small portion of existing aged employees. | However, older workers are usually more productive than imported foreign talent; whereas employers may compromise on a small portion of the existing aged employees. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Alternatively, the government should encourage employment of elderly by offering privileges and incentives to private sectors.
###RESPONSE: | Alternatively, the government should encourage the employment of the elderly by offering privileges and incentives to private sectors. | Alternatively, the government should encourage employment of the elderly through offering privileges and incentives to private sectors | 12 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: The future elderly will be more professional and better educated than current cohorts in many countries.
###RESPONSE: | The future elderly will be more professional and better educated than the current cohorts in many countries. | The future elderly will be more professional, and better educated than current cohorts in many countries. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Thus, decision-makers must carry on fashioning programs to further ease the aging process nowadays without getting them locked into policies and approaches that may not be suitable for the changing composition of tomorrow's elderly.
###RESPONSE: | Thus, decision-makers must carry on fashioning programs to further ease the aging process without getting them locked into policies and approaches that may not be suitable for the changing composition of tomorrow's elderly. | Thus, decision-makers must carry on fashioning programs to further ease the aging process today without getting them locked into policies and approaches that may not be suitable for the changing composition of tomorrow's elderly. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Nowadays almost every developed country is concerned about the issue of growing aging population because this issue is a barrier for a country's development.
###RESPONSE: | Nowadays, almost every developed country is concerned about the issue of a growing aging population because this issue is a barrier to a country's development. | Nowadays, most developed countries are concerned about the issue of an aging population because this issue is a barrier to their development. | 31 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: But this does not means that to overcome these challenges excessive spending should be done by the government.
###RESPONSE: | But this does not mean that to overcome these challenges, excessive spending should be done by the government. | But this does not mean that to overcome these challenges, excessive spending should be done by the government. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: As it takes years for the country to overcome with this problem so likewise spending on the aged should be limited.
###RESPONSE: | As it takes years for the country to overcome this problem, so likewise spending on the aged should be limited. | As it takes years for the country to overcome with this problem, so also spending on the aged should be limited. | 12 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: So there should be limited public spending on the aged group so that money can be diverted to other areas of the county which will give better returns in near future.
###RESPONSE: | So, there should be limited public spending on the aged group so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country, which will give better returns in the near future. | So, there should be limited public spending on the aged group so that money can be diverted to other areas of the county where it would give a better return in the near future. | 14 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: So for the country's development there should be more injections than the leakages.
###RESPONSE: | So for the country's development, there should be more injections than leakages. | So, for the country's development, there should be more injections than leaks. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Spending on the infrastructure and defense will enhance the country's economic growth rate, living standards and overall the image of a country.
###RESPONSE: | Spending on infrastructure and defense will enhance the country's economic growth, the living standards of the people, and the overall image of the country. | Spending on the infrastructure and defense will enhance the country's economic growth rate, living standards, and overall image of a country. | 30 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: It is less effective because benefits do not exceed the cost.
###RESPONSE: | It is less effective because the benefits do not exceed the cost. | It is less effective because benefits are not exceeded by the cost. | 12 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In the awareness of this demographic, countries like Japan and Singapore have been establishing ways to curb the aging population.
###RESPONSE: | In view of this demographic, countries like Japan and Singapore have been establishing ways to curb the aging population. | In the awareness of this demographic, countries like Japan and Singapore have been establishing ways to curb the aging population. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Majority of these elderly are the baby boomers who yearn to extend their duration in the workforce.
###RESPONSE: | The majority of these elderly are baby boomers who yearned to extend their duration in the workforce. | Majority of these elderly are the baby boomer generation, who yearned for an extended period in the workforce. | 36 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: More portion of national budget may later be allocated to the incentives for the old.
###RESPONSE: | A greater portion of the national budget may later be allocated to the incentives for the old. | More portions of the national budget may eventually be allocated to incentives for the old. | 21 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: However, the increase of public spending on the elderly may not effective as it can be diverted to other sectors that need it.
###RESPONSE: | However, the increase in public spending on the elderly may not be effective as it can be diverted to other sectors that need it. | However, the increase in public spending on the elderly may not be effective as it could be diverted to other sectors that need it. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: If the plan goes well, it may stabilize or even increase GDP which in turn will provide more funds to the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | If the plan goes well, it may stabilize or even increase GDP, which will, in turn, provide more funds for the elderly. | If the plan goes well, it may stabilize or even increase GDP, which in turn will provide more funds for the elderly. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: The institution which they work at will also provide a percentage of funds to the savings.
###RESPONSE: | The institution at which they work will also contribute a percentage of funds to the savings. | The institution that they work for will also provide a percentage of funds to the savings. | 18 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: The contribution rate from employee and employer reduces as the age of employee increases while the crediting to Medisave account increases.
###RESPONSE: | The contribution rate from employee and employer reduces as the age of the employee increases while the crediting to the Medisave account increases | The contribution rate from employees and employers is reduced as the age of the employee increases, while the crediting to Medisave accounts increases. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Since it is a complement to CPF contribution scheme, there is an obligation to contribute about 71 percent of the total workfare payout to CPF.
###RESPONSE: | Since it is a complement to the CPF contribution scheme, there is an obligation to contribute about 71 percent of the total workfare payout to CPF | Since it is a complement to the CPF contribution scheme, there is an obligation to contribute about 71 percent of the total workfare payouts to CPF. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Hence, the net payout is relatively helpless due to high living expenses in Singapore.
###RESPONSE: | Hence, the net payout is relatively useless due to the high living expenses in Singapore. | Hence, the net payout is relatively helpless due to high living expenses in Singapore. | 8 |
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