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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: At the beginning of 21st century, we have to deal with a series of global issues, among them the aging population should be considered as a black spot.
###RESPONSE: | At the beginning of the 21st century, we have to deal with a series of global issues, among them, the aging population should be considered a black spot. | At the beginning of the 21st century, we have to deal with a series of global issues that are among them the aging population should be considered as a black spot. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: For these reasons, it should be better if the money pent on the aged is deliberately limited for investing on many critical factors of the national economy.
###RESPONSE: | For these reasons, it should be better if the money spent on the aged is deliberately limited to investing in many critical factors of the national economy. | For these reasons, it should be better if the moneypent on the aged is deliberately limited to invest in many critical factors of the national economy. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Besides, during their adolescence, probably time for studying and various kinds of indoor entertainment such as movies or PC games contrained them from joining in outdoor activities and unintentionally stole the essential fundamentals for their health afterward... | Besides, during their adolescence, probably time for studying and various kinds of indoor entertainment such as movies or PC games constrained them from joining in outdoor activities and unintentionally stole the essential fundamentals for their health afterward. | Besides, during their adolescent years, maybe time for studying and various kinds of indoor entertainment such as movies or PC games are constrained them from joining in outdoor activities and inadvertently stealing the essential fundamental skills for their health afterward | 37 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: However, once such taxes are applied, the poors unexpectedly become the first victims.
###RESPONSE: | However, once such taxes are applied, the poor unexpectedly become the first victims. | However, once such taxes have been applied to a particular group of people, the poors suddenly become the first victims. | 45 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Furthermore, due to high taxes, the reduced incomes of citizens could have negative impacts on their purchase and in the same way, the domestic market and the economy in general might be caused a lot of trouble.
###RESPONSE: | Furthermore, due to high taxes, the reduced incomes of citizens could have negative impacts on their purchases, and in the same way, the domestic market and the economy, in general, might be faced with a lot of trouble. | Furthermore, due to high taxes, the reduced income of citizens would have negative effects on their purchases and in the same way, the domestic market and the economy in general might be affected a lot of trouble. | 18 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Countries with extended programs serving for health care to the aged might find the escalation in the cost when the number of recipients rises.
###RESPONSE: | Countries with extended programs serving health care to the aged might find an escalation in the cost when the number of recipients rises. | Countries with extended programs serving for health care to the aged might find an increase in the cost if the number of recipients rises. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: If Singapore fails to maintain good relationship with these countries, our lives will be in jeopardy without water.
###RESPONSE: | If Singapore fails to maintain good relationships with these countries, our lives will be in jeopardy without water. | If Singapore fails to maintain a good relationship with these countries, our lives will be in danger without water. | 10 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: In conclusion, the government should limit public spending on the aged and focus more on the major future developments which can help Singapore tackle the main problems that the majority of the local population faces, and also the roots of the aging population.
###RESPONSE: | In conclusion, the government should limit public spending on the aged and focus more on the major future developments, which can help Singapore tackle the main problems that the majority of the local population faces and also the root of the aging population. | In conclusion, the government should limit public spending on the aged and focus more on the major future developments which can help Singapore to tackle the main problems that the majority of the local population face, and also the roots of the aging population. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: In the context of Singapore, given the socio-economic and political disparity between the possible usages of the fund, the funding for elderly issue remains controversial.
###RESPONSE: | In the context of Singapore, given the socio-economic and political disparity between the possible usages of the fund, the funding for the elderly issues remains controversial. | In the context of Singapore, given the socio-economic and political disparity between the possible usages of the funds, the funding for the elderly issue remains controversial. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: These expenditures require the Government to explore possible ways to further utilize national budget in order to continue to develop the nation.
###RESPONSE: | These expenditures require the Government to explore possible ways to further utilize the national budget in order to continue to develop the nation. | These expenditures require the government to explore potential ways to further utilize the national budget in order to continue to develop the nation. | 7 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: With the power of knowledge and advance technology, the nation can improve its economy and ensure the well-being of current and future generations of older people is taken care of.
###RESPONSE: | With the power of knowledge and advanced technology, the nation can improve its economy and ensure that the well-being of current and future generations of older people is taken care of. | With the power of knowledge and advanced technology, the nation can improve its economic and welfare state by taking care of the current and future generations of older people are taken care of. | 30 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Aging population becomes a ubiquitous trend in many developed countries such as Japan.
###RESPONSE: | An aging population has become a ubiquitous trend in many developed countries such as Japan. | The aging population is becoming a pervasive trend in many developed countries, such as Japan. | 19 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: For example, in a Singaporean middle class family, a young couple usually has two to four children and lives in a governmental or private house with mortgage.
###RESPONSE: | For example, in a Singaporean middle-class family, a young couple usually has two to four children and lives in a governmental or private house with a mortgage. | For example, in a Singaporean middle-class family, a young couple usually has two to four children and lives in a government or private house with a mortgage. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: When the young are exposed to both financial and emotional stresses, they cannot concentrate on work.
###RESPONSE: | When the young are exposed to both financial and emotional stresses, they cannot concentrate on their work. | When the young are exposed to both financial and emotional stress, they cannot concentrate on their work. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Some people think that the government has obligation to help the elderly by providing financial aid.
###RESPONSE: | Some people think that the government has an obligation to help the elderly by providing financial aid. | Some people think that the government has an obligation to help the elderly by providing financial aid. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: It seems that the young can shift the liability and solve the financial problem, but these excessive government subsidies will result in draining the public purse quickly.
###RESPONSE: | It seems that the young can shift the liability and solve the financial problem, but these excessive government subsidies will result in draining the public funds quickly. | It seems that the young can shift their liability and solve the financial problems, but these excessive government subsidies will result in draining the public purse quickly. | 7 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: On the contrary, the government should compel people to save a certain portion of their incomes into special retirement accounts before they reach retirement age and allow the owners to withdraw the money when they retire.
###RESPONSE: | On the contrary, the government should compel people to save a certain portion of their income into special retirement accounts before they reach retirement age and allow the owners to withdraw the money when they retire. | On the contrary, the government should compel people to save a certain portion of their income in special retirement accounts before they reach retirement age and allow the owners to withdraw the money when they retire. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: There are two reasons that the Singaporean government to do so.
###RESPONSE: | There are two reasons for the Singaporean government to do so. | There are two reasons that the Singaporean government has done so. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Aging population is a social problem as well as an individual problem.
###RESPONSE: | An aging population is a social problem as well as an individual problem. | The aging population is a social problem, and it also has the potential to be an individual problem. | 33 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The government has responsibility to help and guide the public to plan their retirement life.
###RESPONSE: | The government has a responsibility to help and guide the public to plan their retirement life. | The government has a responsibility to help and guide the public to plan their retirement lives. | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: In most countries, education is considered to be one of the fundamental sector that the country's government can develop and improve on.
###RESPONSE: | In most countries, education is considered to be one of the fundamental sectors that the country's government can develop and improve on. | In most countries, education is considered a fundamental sector that the government can develop and improve upon. | 29 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: In conclusion, public spending on the aged should be limited to the certain percentage that is adequate for the welfare of the aged.
###RESPONSE: | In conclusion, public spending on the aged should be limited to a certain percentage that is adequate for the welfare of the aged. | In conclusion, public spending on the aged should be limited to a certain percentage that is sufficient for the welfare of the aged. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: This is necessary to help ease aging process.
###RESPONSE: | This is necessary to help ease the aging process. | This is necessary for the aging process. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: These treatments will be helpful because people get increasingly susceptible to chronic illness.
###RESPONSE: | These treatments will be helpful because people get increasingly susceptible to chronic illnesses. | These treatments will help people become more susceptible to chronic illnesses. | 28 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: In context of Singapore, to address this issue, various financial health care schemes like Medisave and Medishield are implemented to help lessen the financial burden for the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | In the context of Singapore, to address this issue, various financial healthcare schemes like Medisave and Medishield are implemented to help lessen the financial burden for the elderly. | In context of Singapore, to address this issue, various financial health care schemes like Medisave and Medishield have been implemented to help minimize the financial burden on the elderly. | 22 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Technology and its advancements have given medical science the forefront to ease aging process.
###RESPONSE: | Technology and its advancements have given medical science the forefront to ease the aging process. | Technology and its advancement has given medical science the forefront to ease the aging process. | 3 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Such well-tested medical products have help to ease the aging process.
###RESPONSE: | Such well-tested medical products have helped to ease the aging process. | Such well-tested medical products have helped to ease the aging process. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: However, social policy can address such issue to make aging process less painful for the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | However, social policy can address such issues to make the aging process less painful for the elderly. | However, social policies can address such issues as making the aging process less painful for the elderly. | 8 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: By exercising, elderly improves their overall health and helps to prevent chronic diseases.
###RESPONSE: | By exercising, the elderly improve their overall health and helps to prevent chronic diseases. | By exercising, the elderly improve their overall health and help to prevent chronic diseases. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Social networking helps elderly battle against loneliness and makes new friends.
###RESPONSE: | Social networking helps the elderly battle loneliness and makes new friends. | Social networking helps the elderly fight against loneliness, and makes new friends. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However, social policy has to be revised timely to address the changing needs of the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | However, social policy has to be revised to address the changing needs of the elderly. | However, social policies have to be revised timely to address the changing needs of the elderly. | 12 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: However, the easing of aging process does not only depend on the above factors.
###RESPONSE: | However, the easing of the aging process does not only depend on the above factors. | However, the easing of the aging process does not depend solely on these factors. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: So what type of foods should elderly consume?
###RESPONSE: | So what type of foods should the elderly consume? | So what types of food should the elderly consume? | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Ageing population is currently a global phenomenon that occurs in many parts of the world.
###RESPONSE: | An aging population is currently a global phenomenon that occurs in many parts of the world. | The aging population is currently a global phenomenon that occurs in many parts of the world. | 3 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: This will indirectly help to solve some of the problems posed by ageing population, as it will help to reduce elderly dependency and changing Singapore into an independent society where elderly will be less reliant on the government.
###RESPONSE: | This will indirectly help to solve some of the problems posed by an aging population, as it will help to reduce elderly dependency and change Singapore into an independent society where the elderly will be less reliant on the government. | This will indirectly help to solve some of the problems posed by the aging population, as it will help to reduce the dependency of the elderly in a society where they are less reliant on the government. | 53 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: This is the time when the psychological practitioners and the government have to step in to help easing the aging process of the elderly.
###RESPONSE: | This is the time when psychological practitioners and the government have to step in to help ease the aging process of the elderly. | This is the time when the psychologists, the government, and the elderly have to step in to ease the aging process of the elderly. | 34 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: It is this kind of misconception they possess which causes their mental illness worsen.
###RESPONSE: | It is this kind of misconception they possess that causes their mental illness to worsen | It is this kind of misconception that causes their mental illnesses to worsen. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: The aging workforce will then decrease the work productivity and lower nation's economic development.
###RESPONSE: | The aging workforce will then decrease work productivity and lower the nation's economic development. | The aging workforce will eventually decrease the work productivity, and lower the nation's economic development. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Although it has become an arising issue that the aging population will bring a great impact to the society and also the economic growth of the country, more emphasis should be given to the older generation, as they are important assets to the nation.
###RESPONSE: | Although it has become an arising issue that the aging population will have a great impact on society and also the economic growth of the country, more emphasis should be given to the older generation, as they are an important asset to the nation. | Although it has become an emerging issue that the aging population will bring a great impact on society and also the economy, more attention should be paid to the older generation, as they are important assets to the nation. | 50 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: There are three broad aspects of problems associated with aging process, namely the physical, emotional and financial aspect.
###RESPONSE: | There are three broad aspects of problems associated with the aging process, namely the physical, emotional, and financial aspects. | There are three broad aspects of problems associated with the aging process, namely the physical, emotional, and financial aspects. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: First, elderly have weaker health and are more susceptible to chronic illnesses.
###RESPONSE: | First, the elderly have weaker health and are more susceptible to chronic illnesses. | First, the elderly have a lower risk of developing chronic illnesses than younger people. | 53 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Therefore, it is important for the government to develop policies like the Central Provident Fund Scheme that help the government to limit spending and assist the elderly to be self sufficient at the same time.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, it is important for the government to develop policies like the Central Provident Fund Scheme that help the government to limit spending and assist the elderly to be self-sufficient at the same time. | Therefore, it is important for the government to develop policies like the Central Provident Fund Scheme that help the government to limit spending and assist the elderly to be self-sufficient at the same time. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In order to become a world-class city, the government has to pump in funds to rejuvenate and upgrade existing areas for living and working, creating more recreational spaces and continue to develop the commercial and industrial sectors.
###RESPONSE: | In order to become a world-class city, the government has to pump in funds to rejuvenate and upgrade existing areas for living and working, creating more recreational space and continuing to develop the commercial and industrial sectors. | In order to become a world-class city, the government has to pump in funds to rejuvenate and upgrade existing areas for living and working, creating more recreational spaces and continuing to develop the commercial and industrial sectors | 2 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: With a demand of higher standard of living, the government may have to divert more public spending to look after the increasing needs of the aged.
###RESPONSE: | With a demand for a higher standard of living, the government may have to divert more public spending to look after the increasing needs of the aged. | With a demand for higher standards of living, the government may have to divert more public spending to look after the growing needs of the aged. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: With such high volume of tourists, more hotel rooms are required to accommodate them.
###RESPONSE: | With such a high volume of tourists, more hotel rooms are required to accommodate them. | With such a high number of tourists, more hotels will be needed to accommodate them. | 18 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: With no natural attractions and little resources, Singapore has no choice but to create man-made attractions such as resorts and casinos, or coming up with attractions that is only attractive to foreigners.
###RESPONSE: | With no natural attractions and few resources, Singapore has no choice but to create man-made attractions such as resorts and casinos or to come up with attractions that are only attractive to foreigners. | With no natural attractions and a limited number of resources, Singapore has no choice but to create man-made attractions such as resorts and casinos, or come up with attractions that are only attractive to foreigners | 23 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: If public spending is allocated on areas such as housing, education and tourism, the new generation will be more financially secure than their parents.
###RESPONSE: | If public spending is allocated to areas such as housing, education, and tourism, the new generation will be more financially secure than their parents. | If public spending is allocated to areas such as housing, education, and tourism, the new generation will be more financially secure than their parents. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Though public spending should be used fully on the aged, there are other areas of concern that the government money should divert to, such as the healthcare system.
###RESPONSE: | Though public spending should be used fully on the aged, there are other areas of concern that the government money should be diverted to, such as the healthcare system. | Though public spending should be used fully for the aged, there are other areas of concern that the government should divert its funds to, such as the healthcare system. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: This is because Singapore will be suffering from aging population by the time it reaches year 2030.
###RESPONSE: | This is because Singapore will be suffering from an aging population by the time it reaches the year 2030. | This is because Singapore will suffer from an aging population by the time it reaches the year 2030. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: This is because donations from publics are used to support the basic daily operations of these organizations, thus leaving little or nothing to help these old folks financially.
###RESPONSE: | This is because donations from the public are used to support the basic daily operations of these organizations, thus leaving little or nothing to help these old folks financially. | This is because donations from public sources are used to support the basic daily operations of these organizations, thus leaving little or nothing to help these old folks financially. | 12 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: If such scenarios are already occurring to those elderly with family, the situation would be worse for old folks who have no one to turn to except for the government.
###RESPONSE: | If such scenarios are already occurring to those elderly who have family, the situation would be worse for old folks who have no one to turn to except for the government. | If such scenarios are already happening in the elderly, the situation would be worse for older folks who have no one to turn to because of the government. | 36 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Consequently, the government has implemented several policies to lessen the burden of ageing process while researchers have come up with brilliant inventions to increase the convenience and comfort level for the majority.
###RESPONSE: | Consequently, the government has implemented several policies to lessen the burden of the aging process while researchers have come up with brilliant inventions to increase the convenience and comfort level for the majority. | Consequently, the government has implemented several policies to minimize the burden of the aging process while researchers have come up with brilliant inventions that will increase the convenience and comfort levels for the majority. | 17 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Thus, there will be no need for them to climb the staircase which they might have the tendency to fall when using it.
###RESPONSE: | Thus, there will be no need for them to climb the staircase where they might have the tendency to fall when using it. | Thus, there will be no need for them to climb the stairs that they might have the tendency to fall if used as a means of transportation. | 37 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: On the contrary, with the alteration made to the flats, the elders might rely too much on the lifts rather than using the staircase which could be the only form of exercises for them.
###RESPONSE: | On the contrary, with the alteration made to the flats, the elders might rely too much on the lifts rather than using the staircase, which could be the only form of exercise for them. | On the contrary, with the alteration made to the flats, the elders might rely too much on the stairs instead of using the elevator which could be the only form of exercise for them. | 24 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Numerous innovations have been revolving to ease the problems faced by everyone.
###RESPONSE: | Numerous innovations have been developed to ease the problems faced by everyone. | Numerous innovations have been revolving around easing the problems faced by everyone. | 14 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Thanks to modern research and development, the aging process has been made lesser painful not only to the elderly, but to the societies as well.
###RESPONSE: | Thanks to modern research and development, the aging process has been made less painful not only to the elderly but to societies as well. | Thanks to modern research and development, the aging process has been reduced less painful for the elderly than it was before. | 33 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Therefore, a prevention measure, in the form of upgrading public facilities is implemented to prevent this from happening.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, a prevention measure, in the form of upgrading public facilities, has been implemented to prevent this from happening. | Therefore, a preventive measure, in the form of upgrading public facilities, is implemented to prevent this from happening. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Furthermore, people, being a country's most valuable asset who has once contributed to the economy during their prime, should be entitled to all these inventions which will make their age transition less painful.
###RESPONSE: | Furthermore, people, being a country's most valuable asset who have once contributed to the economy during their prime, should be entitled to all these inventions, which will make their age transition less painful. | Furthermore, people, being a country's most valuable asset, who have once contributed to the economy during their prime, should be entitled to all these inventions that will make their aging process more comfortable. | 30 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Low self-esteem grew in the hearts of the elderly can cause psychological instability, especially when they were the head of the family in the past.
###RESPONSE: | Low self-esteem grows in the hearts of the elderly and can cause psychological instability, especially when they have been the head of the family in the past. | Low self-esteem grows in the hearts of the elderly can cause psychological instability, especially when they are the head of the family in the past. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: These unhappy events will involve the deterioration of the health as well as the occurrence of mental and physical disturbance.
###RESPONSE: | These unhappy events will involve the deterioration of health as well as the occurrence of mental and physical disturbance. | These unhappy events will involve the deterioration of the health, as well as the occurrence of mental and physical disturbances. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Thirdly, the search for foreign talents is often considered as higher priority compared to the employment of older generations when it comes to country development.
###RESPONSE: | Thirdly, the search for foreign talents is often considered a a higher priority compared to the employment of older generations when it comes to the country's development. | Thirdly, the search for foreign talent is often considered as a higher priority than the employment of older generations when it comes to country development. | 18 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: This results in the lack of employment by the older generation and thus they will have financial issues to support themselves.
###RESPONSE: | This results in the lack of employment by the older generation, and thus, they will have financial issues trying to support themselves. | This results in a lack of employment among the older generations, and thus they will have financial issues to support themselves. | 17 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Although incentives are given to companies who hire local older generation workers, the upgrading of skills of the older generation has been done as well in order for them to be more competitive in the job market.
###RESPONSE: | Although incentives are given to companies who hire local older generation workers, the upgrading of skills of the older generation has been done as well, in order for them to be more competitive in the job market. | Although incentives are given to companies who hire local older generation workers, the upgrading of skills of the older generation has been done as well in order for them to be more competitive in the job market. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: However, if the person maintains a positive attitude and live a healthy lifestyle, the aging process could be slowed down.
###RESPONSE: | However, if the person maintains a positive attitude and lives a healthy lifestyle, the aging process could be slowed down. | However, if the person maintains a positive attitude and lives a healthy lifestyle, the aging process may be slowed down. | 5 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Therefore, this shows that research and development and policies are not the only factors that reduce the aging process, the mindset and attitude of a person is also a contributing factor which delays the aging process.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, this shows that research and development and policies are not the only factors that reduce the aging process; the mindset and attitude of a person is also contributing factor. | Therefore, this shows that research and development and policies are not the only factors that reduce the aging process; the mindset and attitude of a person is also a contributing factor which delays the aging process. | 33 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However, it should be noted that the limitation should not be too much till the extent that the aged are neglected and are not being provided with the basic needs of living.
###RESPONSE: | However, it should be noted that the limitation should not be too much to the extent that the aged are neglected and are not being provided with the basic needs of living. | However, it should be noted that the limitation should not be too much until the extent that the aged are neglected and are not receiving the basic needs of living. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In Singapore, the government pumped in huge sums of money to build the two Integrated Resorts and host the Grand Prix Formula One night race to promote tourism and investments, leading to an increase in revenue.
###RESPONSE: | In Singapore, the government allocated huge sums of money to build the two Integrated Resorts and host the Grand Prix Formula One night race to promote tourism and investments, leading to an increase in revenue. | In Singapore, the government pumped in huge sums of money into building the two integrated resorts and host the Grand Prix Formula One night race to promote tourism and investments, leading to an increase in revenue. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: This is so as the wealth may not be distributed appropriately and furthermore, there is always uncertainty in investments and returns are not guaranteed.
###RESPONSE: | This is because the wealth may not be distributed appropriately, and furthermore, there is always uncertainty in investments, and returns are not guaranteed. | This is so because of the wealth may not be distributed appropriately and also, there is always uncertainty about investment returns. | 47 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: New cures of diseases may also be invented, like the Alzheimer's disease, which is a common illness among the elderly and it does not have an exact cure at present.
###RESPONSE: | New cures for diseases may also be invented, like Alzheimer's disease, which is a common illness among the elderly, and it does not have an exact cure at present. | New cures for diseases may also be invented, like the Alzheimer's disease, which is a common illness among the elderly and it does not have an exact cure yet. | 13 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: This would thus benefits the elderly who would require an increasing need for healthcare services.
###RESPONSE: | This would thus benefit the elderly, who would require an increasing need for healthcare services. | This would thus benefit the elderly, who are required to receive increased needs for healthcare services. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This is extremely helpful to the aging population and especially for women who are known to be more concern about their outward appearance.
###RESPONSE: | This is extremely helpful to the aging population and especially for women who are known to be more concerned about their outward appearance. | This is extremely useful to the aging population, and especially for women who are known to be more concerned with their outward appearance. | 10 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: The improvements in appearance may relief the emotional stress of aging and gain further access to many opportunities.
###RESPONSE: | The improvements in appearance may relieve the emotional stress of aging and gain further access to many opportunities. | The improvements in appearance may relieve the emotional stress of aging, and they can also gain more opportunities. | 23 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Nonetheless as time pass, new technologies are constantly being introduced and the prices of relatively older aesthetic procedures will eventually become more affordable to the majority of the aging population.
###RESPONSE: | Nonetheless, as time passes, new technologies are constantly being introduced, and the prices of relatively older aesthetic procedures will eventually become more affordable to the majority of the aging population. | Nonetheless, as time passes, new technologies are continually being introduced and the prices of relatively older aesthetic procedures will eventually become more affordable for the majority of the aging population. | 8 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: In Singapore, the government has reassessed the ElderShield policy in year 2007.
###RESPONSE: | In Singapore, the government reassessed the ElderShield policy in the year 2007. | In Singapore, the government has reassessed the ElderShield policy in year 2007. | 8 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: According to Singapore's Ministry of Health, the policy is an affordable severe disability insurance scheme which provides basic financial to those who require long-term care during old age.
###RESPONSE: | According to Singapore's Ministry of Health, the policy is an affordable severe disability insurance scheme that provides basic finances to those who require long-term care during old age. | According to the Singapore Ministry of Health, the policy is an affordable severe disability insurance scheme that provides a basic financial support for those who require long-term care during old age. | 20 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As the population age, it is more difficult for them to work as efficiently as before and their market value also falls.
###RESPONSE: | As the population ages, it is more difficult for them to work as efficiently as before, and their market value also falls. | As the population ages, it becomes more difficult for them to work as efficiently as before, and their market value also falls. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: Despite the introduction of these policies, there are still some elderly who are excluded in these schemes.
###RESPONSE: | Despite the introduction of these policies, there are still some elderly who are excluded from these schemes. | Despite the introduction of these policies, there are still some elderly who are excluded from these schemes. | 0 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Although the current social policies can help to build up the financial capability of the aging population and make their aging process easier, there remain a group unprotected.
###RESPONSE: | Although the current social policies can help to build up the financial capability of the aging population and make their aging process easier, there remains an unprotected group. | Although current social policies can help to build up the financial capability of the aging population and make their aging processes easier, there are still groups that have been unprotected. | 36 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Therefore, the different social policies are introduced to complement one another so as to ensure the entire aging population receives a form of financial support when they are in need.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, different social policies have been introduced to complement one another so as to ensure the entire aging population receives a form of financial support when they are in need. | Therefore, the different social policies are introduced to complement each other so that as to ensure the entire aging population receives a form of financial support when they are in need. | 22 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: The policies intends to cater to benefit as many aged as possible and thus it is possibly true to say that the technologies and the policies have helped the majority of aging population to cope with their problems more effectively today.
###RESPONSE: | The policies intend to benefit as many aged as possible, and thus, it is possibly true to say that the technologies and the policies have helped the majority of the aging population to cope with their problems more effectively today. | The policies intend to cater for the benefits as many as possible, and thus, it is probably true to say that the technologies and the policies have helped the majority of the aging population to cope with their problems more effectively today. | 24 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: All in all, the result of retirement saving scheme is acceptable in the society as a whole and it is an undeniably necessary step we need to make to cope up with the burden from speedily aging population.
###RESPONSE: | All in all, the result of the retirement saving scheme is acceptable in society as a whole, and it is an undeniably necessary step we need to take to cope with the burden of a speedily aging population. | All in all, the result of the retirement savings scheme is acceptable in the society as a whole; it is an undeniably necessary step that we need to take to cope up with the burden from the aging population. | 29 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Therefore, we emphasize that public spending on the elderly is not totally absent but limited.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, we emphasize that public spending on the elderly should not be totally absent but limited. | Therefore, we emphasize that public spending on the elderly is not completely absent; it only partially depends on their retirement age. | 52 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Also, this increased integration would also mean people are able to travel between countries more easily, bringing about tourism which is a highly profitable and marketable economy sector, therefore the need for public spending on hotels, recreational facilities,... | Also this increased integration would also mean people are able to travel between countries more easily, bringing about tourism which is a highly profitable and marketable economic sector, therefore, the need for public spending on hotels, recreational facilities, etc. | Also, this increase in integration would also mean that people are able to travel between countries more easily, bringing about tourism which is a highly profitable and marketable economic sector, thus the need for public spending on hotels, recreation facilities, and others. | 28 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: What is therefore needed is a wise planning for limited yet sufficient public spending on the aged so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development.
###RESPONSE: | What is therefore needed is a wise plan for limited yet sufficient public spending on the aged so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development. | What is thus needed is a wise planning for limited but sufficient public spending in the aged, so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development. | 15 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: On top of that, the government has implemented mandatory schemes like Central Provident Funds to ensure that all Singaporeans have sufficient amount of money for the later parts of their lives.
###RESPONSE: | On top of that, the government has implemented mandatory schemes like Central Provident Funds to ensure that all Singaporeans have a sufficient amount of money for the latter part of their lives. | On top of that, the government has implemented mandatory schemes like Central Provident Funds to ensure that all Singaporeans have enough funds for the later part of their lives. | 22 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Everyone will eventually grow old and experience the effect of the aging process.
###RESPONSE: | Everyone will eventually grow old and experience the effects of the aging process. | Everyone will eventually grow old, and they will experience the effects of the aging process. | 11 |
###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: Even though it is a natural process, which every individual know that he or she will have to undergo, many still fear the process of aging and dying.
###RESPONSE: | Even though it is a natural process, which every individual knows that he or she will have to undergo, many still fear the process of aging and dying. | Even though it is a natural process, which every individual knows that he or she will have to undergo, many still fear the process of aging and death. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Hence, only when they look physically good, they will feel good emotionally as well.
###RESPONSE: | Hence, only when they look physically good will they feel good emotionally as well. | Hence, only when they look physically good, they will feel good emotionally as well. | 9 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Therefore, they might turn to counterfeit product that may even cause more harm to their body.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, they might turn to counterfeit products that may cause even more harm to their body. | Therefore, they might turn to a counterfeit product that could also cause more harm to their body. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This will not pose as a threat as it can be overcome with strict regulation by the authorities on anti-aging medicines.
###RESPONSE: | This will not pose a threat as it can be overcome with strict regulation by the authorities on anti-aging medicines. | This will not pose as a threat to its ability as it can be overcome with strict regulations by the authorities on anti-aging medicines. | 19 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Besides the complexity amount of anti-aging medicine available in the market, the advanced technology has also helped to ease a generation into old age despite the fact that some elderly might not be able to accept these complex technologies.
###RESPONSE: | Besides the amount of anti-aging medicine available in the market, advanced technology has also helped to ease a generation into old age despite the fact that some elderly people might not be able to accept these complex technologies. | Besides the complexity of anti-aging medicine available in the market, the advanced technology has also helped to ease a generation into old age despite the fact that some elderly might not be able to accept these complex technologies. | 19 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: From simple gadgets to complex computer system, marketers are developing almost everything to ensure that elderly do not face any difficulties in the transiting process.
###RESPONSE: | From simple gadgets to complex computer systems, marketers are developing almost everything to ensure that the elderly do not face any difficulties in the transitioning process. | From simple gadgets to complex computer systems, marketers are developing almost everything to ensure that the elderly do not face any difficulty in the transiting process. | 6 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: For example, some luxury car company such as Lincoln offers night vision that projects an infrared image of the road within the car.
###RESPONSE: | For example, some luxury car companies, such as Lincoln, offer night vision that projects an infrared image of the road within the car. | For example, some luxury cars like the Lincoln offer night vision that project an infrared image of the road within the car. | 18 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: However, this is not always true because technology can overcome some obstacles that they faced during the aging process.
###RESPONSE: | However, this is not always true because technology can overcome some obstacles that they face during the aging process. | However, this is not always true because technology can overcome some obstacles that they faced during the aging process. | 1 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: As there are many other complications if an elderly were to fall down, such invention helps to prevent elderly from falling down.
###RESPONSE: | As there are many other complications if an elderly person were to fall down, such inventions help to prevent the elderly from falling down. | As there are many other complications if an elderly person is to fall down, such inventions help to prevent the elderly from falling down. | 4 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Therefore, policymakers need to implement new policies to ensure that elderly enjoy a happy yet productive life even when they age.
###RESPONSE: | Therefore, policymakers need to implement new policies to ensure that elderly people enjoy a happy yet productive life even when they age. | Therefore, policymakers should implement new policies to ensure that the elderly enjoy a happy yet productive life despite their aging process. | 37 |
###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Indeed, current research and development in areas like medicine and technology and the implementation of new social policies have helped to lessen the discomfort that the aging process will cause among the elderly to only a large extent.
###RESPONSE: | Indeed, current research and development in areas like medicine and technology and the implementation of new social policies have helped to lessen the discomfort that the aging process will cause among the elderly to a large extent. | Indeed, current research and development in areas such as medicine and technology and the implementation of new social policies have helped to minimize the discomfort that the aging process will cause among the elderly to only a relatively small extent. | 33 |
###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: As a result, the elderly, who depends on the fund, would have the mindset of not saving up for emergency or the thought of having longer working period.
###RESPONSE: | As a result, the elderly, who depend on the fund, would have the mindset of not saving up for an emergency or the thought of having longer working periods. | As a result, the elderly, who depend on the funds, would have the mindset of not saving enough to be able to afford an emergency or the thought of having a longer working period. | 26 |
###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Thus, those elderly who have subsequently used up their funds will then seek for financial help.
###RESPONSE: | Thus, those elderly who have subsequently used up their funds will then seek financial help. | Thus, the elderly who have subsequently used up their funds will then seek for financial assistance. | 16 |
###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: Hence, there are other various devices developed that have helped to relieve the accessibility of the aged as they move from one place to another in the building.
###RESPONSE: | Hence, there are other devices developed that have helped to relieve the accessibility of the aged as they move from one place to another in the building. | Hence, there are other different types of devices developed that have helped to alleviate the accessibility of the aged as they move from one place to another in a building. | 28 |
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