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06ef29f573a7 | B5D9F34D2CAC | Studying Venus closely is worth the risk for more information on Venus. | Position | Adequate |
314dcf9f5975 | B5D9F34D2CAC | With the information it could lead scientists into making better technology to explore mars or other planets. | Claim | Adequate |
571c2c4f1617 | B5D9F34D2CAC | The exploration could also be our backup Earth if the current Earth in inhabitable | Claim | Adequate |
5a2e69548276 | B5D9F34D2CAC | With all the risk it may not be possible to explore Venus but if you are determined to find the answers then it could be possible. | Evidence | Adequate |
fa11817e74b5 | B5D9F34D2CAC | There would be all sorts of information if we studied Venus closely. There are a lot of problems but it is still possible. | Claim | Adequate |
7a29e88607fc | B5D9F34D2CAC | There are a lot of people that wants to know more about Venus. For example on paragraph 4 it states that, "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system." This is stating that Astronomers know that one day Venus will change and humans will be soon ... | Evidence | Adequate |
256ed50b9c3f | B5D9F34D2CAC | The information just from Venus could even help us explore other planets and solar systems far from our solar system | Claim | Adequate |
a94cbb6921d9 | B5D9F34D2CAC | With the information we could possibly find another earth-like planet faster or easier. On paragraph 8 it states, "...but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." This quote is stating that our curiousty will soon take us over and eventually humans will do anything to ... | Evidence | Adequate |
d3d39e5dcdde | B5D9F34D2CAC | All of us have thought of what will happen if the current Earth we live on is destroy or inhabitable. | Claim | Adequate |
cf4f97605998 | B5D9F34D2CAC | Well our 2 options are either Mars or Venus, if we knew more of the planet Venus and how it behaves. On paragraph 4 it says that, " Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." | Evidence | Adequate |
489e54f42c1e | B5D9F34D2CAC | This is stating that Venus could return or we can make it return to how it was originally and possibly live on it. This is a good reason I think Venus will be able to accept humans and find more facts and informations. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2b52a6ae683e | B5D9F34D2CAC | In conclusion we have wondered how things are in Venus. We even wanted to know what would happen to humans if they went to Venus. There would be lots of information if we visited and came back perfectly. With all those information we got from visiting Venus it could help us with other difficulties from different planet... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
345b842f7608 | B5DBDEBA4B23 | no matter how hard we try we will never change, this world is dieing and we are the once doing it. no the animals not the earth not the cars, us the human rase is killing the plant, we are the biggest pradusers of polution, we drive the cars we burn fosal fuals we are the ones killing our world. when th time comes the ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
3fcac79bc468 | B5DBDEBA4B23 | if everyone has a new car if every one one the planet has a new car and is always driving, we have better get to bying gas masks | Position | Adequate |
bd39061b2869 | B5DBDEBA4B23 | the air will be so poluted so toxic that it will be imposibul to breath | Claim | Adequate |
a999ec987d37 | B5DBDEBA4B23 | we are kiling ourselfs and we are ignoring that fact if we dont change then we are all done for.
at the end of the day if we as a speesies dont change we are never going too help this world survive. we need to open ou eyes to what we are doing and not to sound like the preacher, see the arre of our ways. if we dont do... | Evidence | Ineffective |
626831759d94 | B60AC5648815 | I think it will be boring becuase you would be to that same place many times. Plus you would see nothing but water. Most likley the boat will smell like a barn full of anamils. Then you would also have to lift all that straw and bags of oat around the boat. You would have to clean up after them. I have 2 cats and I hav... | Evidence | Ineffective |
f5a040e880c9 | B60AC5648815 | I sure wouldnt Want a job like that!!!!!!!!! | Position | Ineffective |
fd9a1004409a | B64326635AB6 | Scientists wants to keep on exploring venus even tho it is dangerous. | Lead | Adequate |
83bc29ba551f | B64326635AB6 | One reason I think they should is because they should get information about things they brealy know about. | Claim | Adequate |
3c7f6b7364e8 | B64326635AB6 | My second reason is because they might find someuseful things if they keep on studing it. | Claim | Adequate |
f8c4345fa977 | B64326635AB6 | My last reason is because it might not be as dangerous as people make it out to be. | Claim | Adequate |
15097781621c | B64326635AB6 | scientist should keep studing venus. | Position | Ineffective |
200f69a1ea72 | B64326635AB6 | In conclusion I do think its a good idea for people to keep studing venus. My first reason was because it could give the scientist more information on the plant. My second reason was they might find some useful information that coild help them. My last reason was venus might not be a dangerous place as people make it o... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ae3aeb62f384 | B6B2D2FC8F3D | Many schools offer a variety of extracurricular activities that students can participate in. Although many students are recognized for all of the activities they do, some of their fellow students do not participate in any. There are many excuses children and teens come up with as to why they can't participate, but ther... | Lead | Adequate |
68bceaa8ed9e | B6B2D2FC8F3D | If a principal made every student engage in an extracurricular activity, I would disagree. I do not think students should be forced to do certain activities | Position | Effective |
7e0fc7d64e05 | B6B2D2FC8F3D | they may not have the money to participate, | Claim | Effective |
f998f2bb3338 | B6B2D2FC8F3D | they may be shy and performing in a sport or club is out of their comfort zone, | Claim | Effective |
0011183ca5fd | B6B2D2FC8F3D | they may not have enough time. | Claim | Effective |
cb435ab0cc8f | B6B2D2FC8F3D | If you are involved in sports there are many expenses that come with the honor. You have to buy the right shoes and clothes to practice in, but that's not all. Getting training lessons for the activity can be very expensive and a hard task to achieve. Also, their parents might want to use the money for other things tha... | Evidence | Effective |
63fe09001680 | B6B2D2FC8F3D | if it is your first time doing so, it can be very nerve-racking. Many teens know what they would have to experience if they participated, and after thinking about the hardships, they might decide to nothing at all. They may have an older sibling or friend to help them, but many students do not. Having a friend particip... | Evidence | Adequate |
05771e16977b | B6B2D2FC8F3D | Some parents work late so finding a ride home or getting everything prepared for the activity can be hard. Also, a lot of students work on homework after school, if they played a sport or participated in a club, they may not have enough time to accomplish their studies, which in my opinion is the most important task of... | Evidence | Effective |
0c3b19be47db | B6B2D2FC8F3D | although I would respect the principal's ultimate decision, I disagree with her statement. Students should not have to be involved in an extracurricular activity. They should be able to choose if they want to participate in an activity. Ultimately, the students choice should be prioritized, because they know their own ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
01f9064f1d2b | B6B7196E454E | Is Venus worthy pursuiting despite the dangers it presents | Lead | Adequate |
5f1fcc779a2c | B6B7196E454E | I am going to show you both sides why it would be good to go and why it wouldn't be good to go | Position | Ineffective |
1bdb00d90221 | B6B7196E454E | Venus is a planet and it is neighbor to earth and is the close planet to earth. | Claim | Adequate |
b4bb1a5106bb | B6B7196E454E | It is like eath twin | Claim | Adequate |
7871e5190405 | B6B7196E454E | Have you ever wanted to go to other planet to see what it is like? Why don't you go to venus. It is close to earth. | Claim | Ineffective |
82b63ec271e3 | B6B7196E454E | In the text it says that "NASA possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray." It also says that " not a single spaceship has toched down on venus in more then three decases. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and no one had e... | Evidence | Ineffective |
28e628d58dbf | B6B7196E454E | Would it really be worth seeing Venus because it had a lot of danger. | Claim | Adequate |
560180bade83 | B6B7196E454E | It says in the text that "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere." It also states that " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahernheit, and the atmospheric pressure is... | Evidence | Adequate |
927dd089981a | B6B7196E454E | Is venus worth going to despite that dangers that it holds. No it is not worth going to. The planet is 800 degrees Fahernheit. You will not survie that long on that planet but it would be cool to go to a planet no one has ever been to though. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
afcb123bfc74 | B6F03D0CEABE | Students know their capabilities. During the summer some schools decide to make teacher give students summer projects, to help keep their mental capabilities up. While students may not like this whole process there has been discussion on whether or not they should be student or teacher designed.
| Lead | Adequate |
26cfca72d4ea | B6F03D0CEABE | Teacher may want to have them design them because they think students would make it extremely easy which is fair. | Counterclaim | Effective |
ca642c684ce9 | B6F03D0CEABE | I still believe that students should be the ones to design it. | Position | Effective |
1fb6788e2ad1 | B6F03D0CEABE | they were already given tons by teachers, | Claim | Adequate |
d7148e906a52 | B6F03D0CEABE | they need to be independent | Claim | Effective |
d5a2ab44d2d1 | B6F03D0CEABE | People have to know when to take a break. Students throughout the school year have been taught many things by teachers which we are very grateful for. | Evidence | Effective |
3cc5fdddcc16 | B6F03D0CEABE | we have been given hundreds of assignments and projects all made by different teachers. So instead of stressing during the long break they can finish the project at their own pace and even have fun with what they designed. | Claim | Effective |
6097449f6081 | B6F03D0CEABE | Let them grow up. | Evidence | Effective |
c9089b1a6744 | B6F03D0CEABE | After each year of school is over they go onto the next, and during the summer they should be challenged with a self designed project to help them be more independent. | Claim | Effective |
ddb4dcdca005 | B6F03D0CEABE | Teachers are more experienced. With people that think that teachers are the best option for designing the project I do understand why. Students are young and may just want to take the easy route by not putting much effort into it. | Counterclaim | Effective |
6742e99b33e7 | B6F03D0CEABE | While teachers have experience making projects and understand just how hard each component will make it. So using a middle ground will help teachers let their kids be independent. By letting the teachers give students a guideline on what exactly the project should or should not have, will let them feel secure about the... | Rebuttal | Effective |
aeba4c0bf94f | B6F03D0CEABE | The guideline would explain the things needed for it and how it should be graded, and letting students know how it will be graded will help immensely when design it.
It will also help the students to figure out ideas for their design instead of them just being completely out in the open. So making a guild line will ma... | Evidence | Effective |
2b4bc0ec5f62 | B6F03D0CEABE | Schools have to understand students better. With summer based projects being designed by the students they are able to have some fun doing it while also learning skills that are needed for both in school and out. Doing so helps them learn how to be independent and makes it so teachers will let them as well. So I do thi... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
3881605de519 | B709F976724E | Emotion is somthing that show life the feeling that we have | Lead | Adequate |
acb41bca500e | B709F976724E | Some computer can recognize about the emotion. | Claim | Adequate |
04290f271c35 | B709F976724E | He let his student calculating like math about facial movements human used to express their feeling. This is the 3D computer's face 44 major mucles in this model . Mr Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of Facial Action Coding
System. He has six emotional like happiness, suprise... | Evidence | Adequate |
952f0a0c523a | B709F976724E | This computer can know is you happy or sad. If they play video game you fell happy so thee computer know that too | Claim | Adequate |
27caa1be508a | B709F976724E | In my opion show the emotion is very important bacuse it will show the tacher if you understand the lesson or not. | Position | Adequate |
f57f4ea55ca3 | B709F976724E | If you show the teacher with the exicting face you show the teacher that you don't understandnd but you show he teacher a couple smile you can make sure that you understand the lesson. | Claim | Adequate |
be6a62bc7843 | B709F976724E | Use the technology to read student emotion that you can know the student if you don't understand the student or you are new teacher here. Some of student now they have a lot of trouble or sad story they try to hind . They try to be happy in froent of evryone. But at nigh or when they come back home hey will feel sad th... | Evidence | Adequate |
5afaca1d01b4 | B709F976724E | Some of student is they feel very bored or very sad they will have some disease happen about the neron in their hed make them crazy and bring that sad whole life. | Claim | Adequate |
6984dcd7f6c6 | B709F976724E | But we are glad if the people always think everything in the possitive way and they feel happy and love this life but if they are happy a lot maybe the most of peple that they can not feel their heart or who they love. They will be the person don't have any feeloing that not good to. I mean here you should balance you ... | Evidence | Adequate |
696e6271f8b9 | B709F976724E | And the teacher should have that technology to help student | Claim | Adequate |
d34ffb4abd72 | B709F976724E | The student look at the mirror and try to smile so they can see the changing of the smile. Because when to stand in front of the mirror an smile that show every part of that smile so you can see that. However,, simile is come from our emotion if we feel happy or comfortable your smile will come very natural. If you not... | Evidence | Ineffective |
633a277367d7 | B709F976724E | Nowaday, it's kind of hard to find that technology so i hope that the scientist can make one for the teacher. | Claim | Adequate |
cd98d56fbff3 | B709F976724E | You should open and share your feeling to the other person so they can understand or they can undeersttand you well. If it's hard to share with friends or teacher you can shared with your parent . They have more year to face with a lot of problem more than you maybe thay will have some good solution that can help you f... | Evidence | Adequate |
c49d394c6934 | B709F976724E | Finally, the scientist should produce that machine for the teacher to undersand the student or they can share with the teacher or family beacause our feeling is very important , it will make people make good thing and focus more on work. The school should are more about their feeling or if they sad the teacher should o... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3691efc174f9 | B7819FA33B21 | Summer assignments should be student-designed | Position | Adequate |
e38467776962 | B7819FA33B21 | students will understand the project better, | Claim | Effective |
fab64ddffb4a | B7819FA33B21 | they will actually want to do it, | Claim | Effective |
bf273ff363ae | B7819FA33B21 | it will be a more fun and creative way for the students to learn. | Claim | Effective |
d43158c04c01 | B7819FA33B21 | Since it was designed by the students, they will have a better understanding of what needs to be done for the assignment. If it was designed by a teacher, then the students may be confused about the assignment and will ask many questions. Students will also actually want to get it done. Since it was designed by the stu... | Evidence | Effective |
ff1d58e50977 | B7819FA33B21 | If the assignment is designed by the students, it will appeal to them and they would take interest in it. If it was designed by a teacher, students will feel as if they have no choice in the matter, and must do as the teacher asks, thus removing the students interest from the assignment. Students will not feel as if th... | Evidence | Effective |
f4a05e351b9d | B7819FA33B21 | They will enjoy doing the project because it appeals to them. Since it was designed by the students, they will find joy in doing it because it was created by them in the first place and wont feel as if they are being forced to do it by the teacher. Students will also understand that its not just another project designe... | Evidence | Effective |
9e8c1ac188a7 | B7819FA33B21 | I strongly believe that summer assignments should be student-designed. This is true because students will understand the assignment better since it was created by them, students will also feel the need to get it done,and lastly, it will be a more fun and creative way for the students the learn. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
ea93e0b9a692 | B78889CD7103 | In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile," by Nick D'Alto, describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. There is a paragraph where it can detect students facial action, | Lead | Adequate |
a17dc7ebbe19 | B78889CD7103 | the value of using this technology to read students' emotional experessions is something I can agree with. | Position | Adequate |
28233bdcdfc6 | B78889CD7103 | In the passage, the article states that a classroom computer could recognize a stuudent becoming confused or bored (Dr. Huang). After that, it could modify the lesson similar to what an effective human instructor could do | Evidence | Effective |
a73134dd3606 | B78889CD7103 | My response is that a classroom computer that has FACS(Facial Action Coding System) can help the students lessons and making them understand easier. | Claim | Adequate |
41aebbe7c35b | B78889CD7103 | Advertisments can help students feel interested on what's on the ad. I'm a student and ads appear in my laptop. Most ads I'm not interested in and I intend to skip the ad. There are new ads appearing everyday on a students phone or on their laptop. The passage states that if you smile when a web ad appears, a similar a... | Evidence | Adequate |
150c2d21490f | B78889CD7103 | If a student is depressed and is watching a video, the FACS will detect his emotions | Claim | Adequate |
fd32551b6630 | B78889CD7103 | There is an amount of students who play video games at home afterschool. Most are on their laptops or PC's instead of console. I believe that games can cause violence | Evidence | Adequate |
c3a59801e804 | B78889CD7103 | Students can have fun with a game on their pc, but later on that emotion can change into something else. It could change into anger. The FACS can help that. | Claim | Adequate |
bc1f3a2b7e59 | B78889CD7103 | If they read a student having a different attitude that's unecessary, it could make the laptop shutdown for the student to take time calming down. In the passage, the FACS could work for video games or video surgery. | Evidence | Adequate |
fc5911b40de4 | B78889CD7103 | Another thing, the FACS can remind the student to do their work first before playing on their laptop, just like what the mother would to their child. | Claim | Ineffective |
89085fa6526d | B78889CD7103 | Finally, I believe the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions can help help them be more educated by helping on their lessons, emotions, and control. Computers need to understand that, too (Dr. Huang). | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
17988e97580f | B79ABAFC71D1 | The author thinks, that exploring venus could be a dangerous thing to do | Position | Adequate |
e3f3eb7820b3 | B79ABAFC71D1 | because what he says about how other spacecraft landed there and how they didnt live for a few hour that | Claim | Adequate |
318ef3f44f85 | B79ABAFC71D1 | that is why spacecraft now have not gone to venus in over more than three decades. In paragraph two in the last sentence, it shows how he talked about spacecrafts. | Evidence | Ineffective |
07d473c65589 | B79ABAFC71D1 | The author also states how the tempeture is in venus in the third paragph, third sentence ,he talks about how hot it is in venus | Claim | Adequate |
b5f03d65dde1 | B79ABAFC71D1 | he said it is about over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and it also say¨beyond high pressure and heat,venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquaks,and frequen lighting.....¨ | Evidence | Adequate |
c3fca4829c92 | B79ABAFC71D1 | nasa is putting other lives at risk to go study venus, | Claim | Adequate |
68afdd1bac82 | B79ABAFC71D1 | in paragraph five, frst two sentence it tell how nasa might have people go and discover more about venus.
My opinion on all of this that the author was talking about. It feels like a movie like,maybe in the future who knows when, we might have to go to venus because of something that happen in earth. we are going to l... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b9eb29706886 | B79ABAFC71D1 | Back to what i was talking about, yea it would be cool to live in another planet, but those people that nasa is going to send out ton explore venus, have to explore it really carefully. I find it really interesting how there is a similar planet to earth. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c061b8a6ff07 | B7AE34990F95 | as the author said " studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents". | Position | Adequate |
5c2fb6404392 | B7AE34990F95 | its also called the " evening star" is one of the brightest points of light in the noght sky, and its also the esecound planet from ourr sun, its simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point ofpoint of Earth, it has proved a very challnenging place to examine more closely. | Evidence | Ineffective |
cac151e876b2 | B7AE34990F95 | And its also called the Earth's twin, becues the closest plant to shape like earth in tearms of density and size, and its the closeset plant to earth, somtimes its vence that closest to earth and somtimes its Mars, humans tried sending space crafts to land on venus, but none of them manged to servive the landing for mo... | Evidence | Ineffective |
c98366eaf41d | B7AE34990F95 | and thats why human need to study it more more. | Claim | Ineffective |
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