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a39fe685cd34 | E9363204BCEF | , extracurriculars give students a reason not to stay home and isolate themselves. | Claim | Effective |
29042b57199a | E9363204BCEF | A bunch of children just want to go home and binge shows or movies if they'v got nothing to go to. Especially, when they are bored. School can cause stress, so they'll want to wind down by getting sucked into their electronics. Instead, finding something as relaxing as watching a movie, like drawing, making music, read... | Evidence | Effective |
6335a3e75c26 | E9363204BCEF | if a student were to choose an outdoor activity it would include benefiting their mental health. | Claim | Adequate |
32aa44d2c912 | E9363204BCEF | Fresh air and natural light is good for everyone and wakes people up. Generally, unnatural light causes headaches, tiredness, and is known for making people lose concentration. Being indoors also can cause a trapped or caged feeling because it would be hard to get up and move without disrupting a working environment. I... | Evidence | Effective |
4c2267b1650a | E9363204BCEF | When students have a closer similarity (their extracurricular activity) it can give them something in common. | Claim | Effective |
4cc11e2363f6 | E9363204BCEF | Having something in common helps people socialize and discuss that topic. Then, children can make friends over things they both like to do and discuss, plus they'll be able to work together on the topic. If the topic they made friends over was a sport, they can become better friends because teammates have to rely on ea... | Evidence | Effective |
3ddf76450e20 | E9363204BCEF | extracurricular activities are good for students. They allow children to maintain their physical health and grow their social circle. Extracurriculars can also benefit their mental health and get kids excited to get done with the day at school. It also gets them out of the house, but still getting to relax or have fun!... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2b2a0d59a2ce | E97670F90297 | So in the storu it talks about going to diffrenet places in our solar system so in the story it talks about how some plants can actually hold humans in it cuase it has the same things this planet has but not all of them. So they where talking about a planet in particular venus a planet right next to us we can have a sp... | Lead | Ineffective |
cca996d004c0 | E97670F90297 | Can we go to a diffrenet planet thats what nasa is trying to figure out | Position | Ineffective |
bc8ed7568394 | E97670F90297 | can we go to a diffrenet planet like in mars venus jupitor all these planets so in this story it talks about how can we go figure out what can be suitable for a human so in this story it talks about how venus can be a good place they got some data in. They talk about some features that earth has like venus has valleys ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
bfc75792aa01 | E97670F90297 | so can we actually go in look around in a diffrenet planet in then call it our home well we dont know yet we first need all the information we need to actually start go to a different place but the future well tell the story. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
dccad432ca75 | E978E759F26B | I'm going to type an essay about an arugement for this technology to read students emotional expressions. The newest software update is called Facial Action Coding System. | Lead | Ineffective |
0891c336afa0 | E978E759F26B | I really feel like this type of technogoly would be really helpful. | Position | Adequate |
6d8f4c1aeb12 | E978E759F26B | There is a lot of prons and cons to this technogoly | Claim | Adequate |
30bed9669dc4 | E978E759F26B | because some students may not want you to know how they are feeling or what there emtions are, I feel as if some students need the help or may feel, let's say lonely but don't like saying they are so they fake a smile but those are the students who really need someone to know. | Evidence | Adequate |
5a7cbb4a0eef | E978E759F26B | The software update has promising applications for a variety of industries. | Claim | Adequate |
41fe713b2f2e | E978E759F26B | The computer constrcuts a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles. I feel that it will help a lot more with young teenagers in our generation.
A lot of people in our generation are going through depression and they don't like to telling people about it, so if you h... | Evidence | Adequate |
e218ef73de1f | E978E759F26B | Another reason why it woud be helpful is because you could use it on anyone not just students. | Claim | Adequate |
6c5f9683dc69 | E978E759F26B | My first reason why I think it would be a brillant idea would be an example such as this, if you went to class one day and seen your friend upset you would be able to look at her and know shes upset but if you asked her and she said no I'm fine, she would be lying. If you had this software update and you used it on you... | Evidence | Adequate |
2c2c579f8480 | E978E759F26B | My last reason I think it would be helpful is because you would know how everyones feeling. | Claim | Adequate |
fee8573650d7 | E978E759F26B | The Mona Lisa is to demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while showoing how much a computer can do. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a78426b8b3f9 | E978E759F26B | It also says in paragraph 6 that "
A classroom computer could recogonize when a student is becoming bored or confused". That could also help the teacher out a lot. Some students don't always let the teacher know if they are bored or confused because maybe they are scared or embarssed, but now your teacher would know i... | Evidence | Adequate |
97ebc886a351 | E978E759F26B | As I said in the introduction I think this would be a really good idea for this software update to be in classrooms for teacher and students. I think it would help with teenagers. I gave a couple reasons why I would want this software update or why it would help. I have seen a lot of students falling asleep in class an... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b14ac35fc3fb | E98407C4200B | Why should you join the Seagoing Cowboys? | Lead | Adequate |
25c29d9ab251 | E98407C4200B | You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you can have many adventures while you are doing the job. If you want to get out into the world this will be a great job for you!
| Position | Adequate |
e11e7f749aee | E98407C4200B | you can have many adventures. | Claim | Adequate |
90e7f1283b56 | E98407C4200B | When I was a Seagoing Cowboy, I took many trips. I went to New Orleans, Greece, China, and many more places.
| Evidence | Adequate |
db9712e1c671 | E98407C4200B | you can meet new animals and care for them. | Claim | Adequate |
b7a59554557c | E98407C4200B | You can also take care of other people too | Claim | Adequate |
7703143f8010 | E98407C4200B | What prepared me for working with the animals? The thing that prepared me was when I worked at Aunt Katie's farm when I was little. But somtimes it can be dangeruos. One night I was caring for the animals, and I slipped off of a latter. When I fell off the latter, I cracked a couple off my ribs. | Evidence | Adequate |
8597dbbabcde | E98407C4200B | you can meet new people from all around the world | Claim | Adequate |
9257937c6e09 | E98407C4200B | When I went on to be a Seagoing Cowboy, I had my friend Don Reist. He is the one that asked me if I wanted to going with him.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
2c2b608d1d2d | E98407C4200B | Why should you be a Seagoing Cowboy? I think you should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you can have many adventures, you can meet new animals, and you can also meet new people. Thats why I thing you should should be a Seagoing Cowboy. You will never get tired of be a Seagoing Cowboy. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
748cc522b380 | E9A2061A9A1D | Studying Venus has the good and the bad. You find out so much about your planet and others. Like whybdonthey call Venus an "Evening Star" when its actually a planet. With Venus being provern a very challenging place to examine, ist hard to find out more abiut it. | Lead | Adequate |
781423c5b73c | E9A2061A9A1D | Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite that dangers.
| Position | Adequate |
cece77b16aac | E9A2061A9A1D | One of the big dangers studying Venus is the temperature | Claim | Adequate |
819852aa1a7a | E9A2061A9A1D | Venus is the hottes planet in our solar system. The planets temperature averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than then on our planet. The conditions are way more extreme then what we've encounter on Earth. In addition to the heat there's erupting valcanoes, powerful earthqua... | Evidence | Adequate |
fee085c3d505 | E9A2061A9A1D | We could be living on Venus. | Claim | Ineffective |
bb2a333e3820 | E9A2061A9A1D | Venus has the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus used to be covered with oceans that could've supported various forms of life. Even today Venus has rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is an opttion for a planetary visit. | Evidence | Adequate |
05471efafc60 | E9A2061A9A1D | There are solutions for the temperature. | Claim | Adequate |
f06667b4f8fc | E9A2061A9A1D | NASA's solution is to let scientist float above the fray. A vehicle hovering 30 miles above the Venusian landscape. It would be like airplanes flying over storms, but in this case its a blimp-like vehicle flying over the 800 degree surface. The vehicle would be thirty-plus miles above the surface. Solar power would be ... | Evidence | Adequate |
8472e1319189 | E9A2061A9A1D | Trying to meet the challenge by Venus has value. Human curiosity will most likely lead us to many intimidating endeavors. With the dangers studing Venus, helps us incase we need to move to another planet. Studying Venus is dangerous but, it has its perks. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
55bdd1d6f648 | E9E9AEC9100C | Student should designed the summer project | Position | Adequate |
d3f750524b09 | E9E9AEC9100C | it gives them more freedom | Claim | Adequate |
471786f9e779 | E9E9AEC9100C | more experience | Claim | Adequate |
0d851f2753b8 | E9E9AEC9100C | it is life-changing. | Claim | Adequate |
a1f3e4d95d1f | E9E9AEC9100C | However, not everyone would agree with this position. Some people may argue that teacher should designed the summer project. For example it challenging and you will learn more. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
481c33c29586 | E9E9AEC9100C | it gives you more freedom | Claim | Adequate |
d659a65d1466 | E9E9AEC9100C | in India there was a kid named Generic_Name, sometime when the teacher was not in the class room. He always help his class mates, one day his teacher give them a project and he decide to do a toy little rocket, also he decide to test the rocket and it worked. And now he win the grand winner award by the President of In... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b5ff835b2249 | E9E9AEC9100C | it gives you more experience | Claim | Adequate |
70fa339df76d | E9E9AEC9100C | in schools teacher are the one who do all the work, and if a student did not do his work, it will be a waste of time for the student and the teacher. If we allow student to make their own work they will know how hard is also they gain experience by doing the project by them self. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a8f65693a00e | E9E9AEC9100C | it is life-changing. | Claim | Adequate |
151fee574af9 | E9E9AEC9100C | in Generic_City schools they have to take every class every year and some extra load on the top. But expert for one thing it was summer school project, because they want their student to relay on their self not on the others. Sometime when you do the work on your own, you known how hard is the work and you will more le... | Evidence | Adequate |
721c6c9b4036 | E9E9AEC9100C | If we allow the student to do their work on their self. They will know how hard is it and they will force their self to the limit to do better at ever thing they do, also it gain more experience to do it right and freedom to think of an idea they have and life-changing is the one put it to together in the end to make i... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d4aaac66342e | EA238A2AE63A | Why Mona never smile in her painting. The artis make Mona smile into art. The artis try to make her happy into art. Mona shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this co... | Evidence | Ineffective |
04c59f1752ad | EA238A2AE63A | That is kinda funny how can a computers know when your sad or happy. Computers don't have emotions only living things do have emotions. | Position | Ineffective |
3cb56436a1f2 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 | First off, the technology to read emotions of students in a classroom is valuable | Position | Adequate |
af184f1e3e01 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 | For good side of things, this technology created by Professor Thomas Huang can make a whole class smart and can speed up the progress while things go. | Claim | Adequate |
263bf75a8ee2 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 | Second, what the technology helps with the students is when the students are confused or bored | Claim | Adequate |
d14b5f2f83a8 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 | then that comupter is going to be able to recognize that face and really help the student out like a teacher would be able to do. This can save time and will have more students understand subject even more. The technology would be able to calculate almost any emotions
| Evidence | Adequate |
49c5f4a9e7b0 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 |
Lastly, these technology that Professor Thomas Huang owns is very helpful for the societyand for schools | Claim | Adequate |
72b499a5c636 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 | SInce now that Professor Thomas Huang's technology can calculate the tiniest emotions, it can support us dramatically. | Evidence | Ineffective |
bd88e55d1d05 | EA2BAEFCE4F2 | This will be very valuable to classrooms, students, and teachers around the world. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
bdfaa7af3203 | EA3B8E4F74DB | Venus is the closest planet to Earth and one of the brightest points in a dark sky.
Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus has proved it is very challenging to get data from the planet. The biggest question with Venus is it worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. | Lead | Adequate |
d5d48ab0d906 | EA3B8E4F74DB | Astronomers should try to get more data because it imbodys Earth more than any other planet. | Claim | Adequate |
7f0c3cde604e | EA3B8E4F74DB | Venus has features that are very simurlar to those on Earth. In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author says "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."
It shows that Venus is very a like to Earth. | Evidence | Adequate |
eb645868e6f5 | EA3B8E4F74DB | The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has had new and safe ideas so that we can still reserch Venus even with the dangers.
| Claim | Adequate |
d04e04c460ec | EA3B8E4F74DB | They want to floaut above the fray.
Wouldn't be easy conditions, but not hard enough to kill humans.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
73d6593db8bc | EA3B8E4F74DB | Now you know how dangers and worthy the explorion on Venus would be. But you sholudn't let a little fear get in the way of the fun and Knowlege on getting. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d92a8c2d1521 | EA3B8E4F74DB | Wanting to do the challege on Venus has value, has dangers, and doubts | Position | Adequate |
cc676e3ff729 | EA441360E42C | Can you believe that schools are now making students stay after-school to participate in an extracurricular activity. | Lead | Ineffective |
f8a8cbe1d670 | EA441360E42C | I disagree with schools having students participate in one extracurricular activity | Position | Adequate |
5167175567a8 | EA441360E42C | becasuse students need time for other activities outside of school, | Claim | Adequate |
2db0975bc5cd | EA441360E42C | students need time with their families | Claim | Adequate |
cfdb6afbc151 | EA441360E42C | and they need time to do their homework. | Claim | Adequate |
3df8d74eeb9d | EA441360E42C | Many students love coming home right when the school bell rings and having the rest of the day to do what they like. This is not the case at some schools. At my school our principal is having us participate in one extracurricular activity. I disagree with this because students need time to play and practice sports such... | Evidence | Adequate |
0ee8ff2f0a48 | EA441360E42C | There are a ton of students who do not get to see their family at all due to school. Students need time to be with their family and socialize with them like playing a board game or having a nice conversation. Extracurricular activities may interfere with the time that kids have to spend with their families. It is very ... | Evidence | Effective |
ef7d5be014f6 | EA441360E42C | Did you know that teachers assign kids with loads of homework? If you didn't then now you do. Here at my school I get home and it takes me a couple of hours to get my homework done. I was very disappointed when I was told that every student has to take part in one extracurricular activity. If this time is taken away fr... | Evidence | Effective |
4d186f0aaacc | EA441360E42C | I believe that students should not be forced to participate in one extracurricular activity at school because they need time for other activities outside of school, time to spend with their families, and time to do their homework. If time that students have for these activities gets taken away by school it may lead to ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1959c4656e05 | EA58637960FB | Luke Bomberger used to be an average teenager working two part-time jobs. Then his friend, Don Reist, came and asked him if he wanted to be a 'Seagoing Cowboy', or one who helps bring livestock to war victims in Europe. Luke then took this as an opportunity of a lifetime and couldn't resist.
The Seagoing Cowboys are a... | Evidence | Ineffective |
629bc471828f | EA9FCAE3C575 | A planet that is toasty at 170 degrees Fahrenheit, air pressure clos to sea level on Earth, Venus is the most interesting planet in the solar system | Lead | Adequate |
e6f54819b8b6 | EA9FCAE3C575 | thatthe author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. | Position | Adequate |
e81337446088 | EA9FCAE3C575 | It may well once have been the most earth-like planet that scientists discuss further visits to its surface but the problem is that no spacecraft survived th landingfor more than a few hours. | Claim | Adequate |
149efa5a4330 | EA9FCAE3C575 | No matter if the surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, 90 times greater than what people on earth can experience, but scientists are so fascinated by Venus and earth, how alike they were long ago | Claim | Adequate |
bb874b8fc4ce | EA9FCAE3C575 | On paragraph 4, "Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life" and
"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valley's, moutains, and craters." Venus could had living forms living in their surface if Venus has any type of familiar... | Evidence | Adequate |
4c535691c0df | EA9FCAE3C575 | Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors | Claim | Adequate |
11936b245d71 | EA9FCAE3C575 | Humans curiosity is amazing, in the text it explains how it will likely lead us into many equally, but it could also lead us to something unique that not even Earth has that no other human could think about. | Evidence | Adequate |
df6ea0766b25 | EA9FCAE3C575 | No matter if Venus dangers could be extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, it is the most talk about planet to study it's worthy pursuit, With sights that once was familiar like Earth and various forms of life that has the humans curiousity on Venus. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
4c0867d695b6 | EAE3A1E3B396 | Activities for Everyone!
Now everybody will have something to do!
The principal just decided that every student must take part in an activity, before school, after school or even during school! | Lead | Adequate |
6d894fdd7412 | EAE3A1E3B396 | This new, amazing and creative idea will be beneficial to everyone! Not only the students, but the entire school administration including the teachers! Even parents will profit from the outstanding new idea! | Position | Adequate |
f25f4336d0c7 | EAE3A1E3B396 | After this decision starts getting enforced, every student will be able to find something they like!
| Claim | Ineffective |
b8440d5888fc | EAE3A1E3B396 | Possibilities range from participating in sports to serving on the student council or helping to create the school yearbook! Students are very likely to find new friends while they participate in these activities and probably even run into some old ones! Having friends in their activity will surely motivate them to do ... | Evidence | Adequate |
19186264f5d4 | EAE3A1E3B396 | Meeting those new people and having that special diversity will bring lots of students together and form unimaginable new bonds, friendships and relationships. | Claim | Ineffective |
7314a37bf815 | EAE3A1E3B396 | Students struggling with their social life and stressing school days will finally have something to look forward to! The sport activities will also greatly improve ones understanding and overall skill in said sport. Joining sports teams will set a positive example for students and be a healthy and rewarding getaway fro... | Evidence | Adequate |
b3b94d2c59a7 | EAE3A1E3B396 | Overall these activities would be a great getaway for every student! Activities will include creative and challenging brain usage to athleticism. Students will be taken care of and supervised while they help out themselves and the school. Sports will be healthy and inspiring for the young kids and put a positive exampl... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
87dc72eaf189 | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | I found some information about why we can't text and drive. | Lead | Ineffective |
2a0d046153a1 | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | We can't text and drive | Position | Adequate |
0f339ffe5dcc | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | because it causes people to die and get into car accidents. | Claim | Adequate |
ab4e94e1bd17 | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | In one paragraph it said 90 percent of people died in car accidents from driving and texting.
My friends was in a accident because he was texting and driving. Its no joke he almost lost he life and his girlfriends too. Texting and driving is awful.
So if you love your life and who you where with you won't text and dr... | Evidence | Adequate |
10f1777cf917 | EAE4C1EE9FB9 | Did you know that texting and driving is more dangerous then drunk driving. | Claim | Adequate |
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