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192935d1de1d | 2AAE2550DDAD | What it really is, is a natural landform that our viking took a picture of on one side of mars. | Claim | Ineffective |
bfba2a7692f4 | 2AAE2550DDAD | The picture that you saw is nothing more than a picture taken at the right moment so that it makes it look like that mars has a face. The reason why it looks like it has a face is because the picture was taken at the moment on when the landform had a shadow at the certain places of the landform to make it look like it ... | Evidence | Adequate |
d2bdd9048b2a | 2AAE2550DDAD | So you won't have to worry about aliens giving out a message to us saying anything bad. It's nothing more than just a natural landform and a picture taken at the right moment. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e09d71f69419 | 2AD1E61D9F7E | It's very fun and educational to travel | Claim | Adequate |
bcea4cc10030 | 2AD1E61D9F7E | Luke was a solider in World War 1 and he was stationed in Europe,during this time war was going on and this wasn't the best time to visit there. But it's a more safe invorment and is known for it's history including the "World War 1". When you've had a lot going on at work, just want to do something nice for the kids,o... | Evidence | Ineffective |
f8185d517c41 | 2AD1E61D9F7E | its great to travel hopfully you'll concider it | Position | Adequate |
2cf887842519 | 2B015051803E | While student take a break from school there are teacher want student to continue to lean even their break from school. Some school require student to do summer projects to assure they continue learning even during break. Should these project be teacher or student designed? | Lead | Adequate |
fd5db5cfd0a8 | 2B015051803E | The Summer Project should be student designed during break. | Position | Adequate |
b91966fcdfb8 | 2B015051803E | Why should this summer project should be student designed not teacher designed? If student have a choice of who came up an idea to write about they would most likely choose them self. This summer project due til student go back to school telling that student have lot of time to come up with an idea to write about. Stud... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b667453b07cc | 2B015051803E | Since this is student designed student can start this project anytime they want | Claim | Adequate |
0d2d987377c9 | 2B015051803E | If the student start their summer project student can be creative with their work by putting effort into it. | Claim | Adequate |
60511dcd29fb | 2B015051803E | student can choose if they want to do it colorful and creative or plain student have a choice if they want their work all bright and pretty or simple and plain. If the student choose colorful and creative there work might include with picture, color, detail, and what they might do during break showing that whoever made... | Evidence | Adequate |
28817003bf5b | 2B015051803E | If student do this summer project and let the student to do their designed it will show that student put a lot of work into their project | Claim | Adequate |
7fc7cc64182f | 2B015051803E | The most difficult part of this project is come up with good idea to do. Coming up idea can be hard and stressful it show that student put a lot of thought into their work. While student work on their design something they think what would be great to put into their design like color if so what kind would be best, pict... | Evidence | Adequate |
1bc460b6ac4e | 2B015051803E | Some school require student to do summer projects to assure they continue learning even during break, should these project be teacher or student designed. During break the Summer Project should be student designed. student can start this project anytime they like, they can make their design exciting or boring, and show... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
414a22350b67 | 2B23459A3938 | Luke took a trip with a friend and he went to may uneque places as a part of the
UNRRA AKA the united Nations
Relif and Rehabitation Administration | Lead | Adequate |
08928f58eaa9 | 2B23459A3938 | Would'nt you love to be on a cattle boat and sail to unique places and help people in need? In the passage Luke does exactally that. | Position | Ineffective |
5d81327805e1 | 2B23459A3938 | He sailed across to many places providing food, cattle and shelter for the people and animals lost there food and homes in the war. Just imagine how much you would others that had just experianced alot of pain ina war and had lost there homes and had no food to eat of no place to sleep and may have even lost friends an... | Evidence | Adequate |
58c22416223b | 2B23459A3938 | In this passage Luke is also worryed about him having to go into the tmillitary because of his age and at the time you would often be shiped off to boot camps and millitary schools at the age of 18. | Evidence | Adequate |
f9bd1a639f25 | 2B23459A3938 | The main idea of this passage is a man and Luke going to sea to help others in need of food and shelter. One of the many places they went where New Orleans they arrived in New Orleans in 1945 where they where told to go to and take 335 horses and food items for the hoses so they didnt die on the way to New Orleans. ... | Evidence | Adequate |
4460a580b29b | 2B2696900DDF | Would you like if your emotions are being detected withouht your consetiment? Technology is every day beging more capable of new things, in terms of artificial intelligenece. The new software has been developled so that it can read or decode the emotions of others. Dr. Eckman has classified six bassic emotions - happin... | Lead | Adequate |
4ed33ad9cc2a | 2B2696900DDF | But at the point to that technology knows what are your emotions to then use them on "what you need" is not correct | Position | Adequate |
d90249b4cee4 | 2B2696900DDF | I am not saying that when we want to search about emotions through technology there should not be anything on it. | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
a621e55fed81 | 2B2696900DDF | But what if we are trying to hide emotions for our or others good and technology just cames and reads or decodes your emotions how would you feel? | Rebuttal | Adequate |
0c06f173cf24 | 2B2696900DDF | It is also important to know the basic of emotions, because that how you express yourself. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8b8d7d75dcad | 2B3601A69135 | A danger of ecploring Venus is that the temperature is very high that hummans might not handle, and has the hottest surface. "On the planets surface, temperatures verage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."
| Lead | Ineffective |
357fbf22e0af | 2B3601A69135 | I think that we should explore Venus because we should be able to know all of our solar system, but it will be challenging, because of the temperatures, and the pressure.
| Position | Adequate |
6274963c2980 | 2B3601A69135 | I like the idea of a havor craft to avoide the hot surface. | Claim | Ineffective |
6c900c058886 | 2B3601A69135 | "a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way."
The only bad thing would be is that what if the hover craft breaks down then they would crash, we dont even know if Venus has spitting lava of the ground | Evidence | Adequate |
20d3d38165f4 | 2B3601A69135 | Another example of why exploring Venus is a good idea, is that we can discover new speiceys or materials, mabye even find if there were ancient life on Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
d91675b6bc51 | 2B3601A69135 | I think that exploring Venus would become hisory, because I think that Venus is dangerus place like the temperature, the surface, and even more dangeruse things on that planet that we dont know of or visios speices. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3e049f8cdfbe | 2B48EAC02BF3 | Do you ever think that exploring a planet far from home is worth it? Astronauts take on the challenege to travel to Venus and to explore the mysteries of the planet | Lead | Effective |
5e53f0f2791e | 2B48EAC02BF3 | The author supports the idea of taking the challenge to Venus by stating that the planet is worth studying for regardless of what dangers pursue them | Position | Adequate |
c0628aa5f77f | 2B48EAC02BF3 | Most astronauts from NASA are fascinated about the idea of the exploration of Venus | Claim | Effective |
33715acceb73 | 2B48EAC02BF3 | In article it says," Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it way well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. | Evidence | Effective |
b23ed33d1982 | 2B48EAC02BF3 | In addition, it also says," Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. | Evidence | Adequate |
5ded217fd1f1 | 2B48EAC02BF3 | There are a lot of astronauts in NASA that are willing to take on the challenge to Venus and NASA has already been simulatiing prototypes to withstand the conditions similar to Venus | Claim | Effective |
b04d5996c3f9 | 2B48EAC02BF3 | The planet is not just fascinating. it's also really dangerous for astronauts to travel there.
Exploring Venus is really dangerous that no one will be able to survive with such harsh conditions the astronauts have to face | Claim | Effective |
433acbe54454 | 2B48EAC02BF3 | In the text it says, " Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." In addition, the article also state... | Evidence | Effective |
024634530ca5 | 2B48EAC02BF3 | For conclusion, there are a lot of dangers and obstacles that the astronauts need to prepare for if the astronauts want to accomplish the challeneg to explore Venus. The author supports the idea of taking the challenge to Venus by stating that the planet is worth studying for regardless of what dangerspursue them. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b7ae024edc07 | 2B4BE109A9D7 | Many cause of limited car usage tends to have less people on the streets. Near the French and Swiss borders ; streets and driveways and home garages were not allowed for free parking. It forced people to park in places where it was usually crowded. Most people did not like the parking rules. They either rode their bike... | Evidence | Ineffective |
a6b36f69acc7 | 2B4BE109A9D7 | I think the better way for the car problems, is to have all people discuss the problems and explain what is best for other people. | Position | Ineffective |
ff9f15b87c68 | 2B4BE109A9D7 | The solution near French and Swiss border is to let people park wherever they like and Columbia to clean up their pollution so they can live through fresh and safer enviroment. | Claim | Adequate |
671335812c51 | 2B5560516314 | The "Facial Action Conding System" would be a good technique for teachers to see if the students were paying attention during class, and if they were not how could they help him improve. | Position | Adequate |
470d36adcf48 | 2B5560516314 | Using this system would be beneficial for all in the class room because they will be aware of it and if something bad happens they can see the video tape.
The system of recognizion is based to describe your emotions on certain things like as, if someone is not feeling well or if they need help with their work. We as h... | Evidence | Adequate |
c3de93abd240 | 2B5560516314 | In conclusion, the facial action of recognition is some how bad, because students can act different if they know that there is a digital system recording them all the time, and can be good for them to pay more attention in class. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
ff63922fa661 | 2B573F9EF4B0 | Because Venus has all proprties that humans requied to inhabit.
Also, Venus had an extremely temperatures that humans can't survived.
As the author said "the temperature of Venus pass the 170 degress fahrentheid", this means that humans can't resist this temperatures.
Years ago scientist fund something interesting i... | Evidence | Ineffective |
9bdd2ecf7319 | 2B573F9EF4B0 | Venus is a planet that we can study, survived etc. But also it take a lot of time to do programs and prepare the people, also we are close to put the first step on Venus.
thank you.... | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
4cbd301cdeb4 | 2B682084579E | Summer break for students can be a very extensive time period, and during this time students tend to halt the learning process. Consequently, select schools require students to complete a summer project to ensure they do not stop learning over the long break. The projects can be assigned by the teacher or chosen by the... | Lead | Adequate |
e0465eb37bbb | 2B682084579E | If I were to have to complete a summer project, I would want it to be a teacher-designed project. | Position | Adequate |
183503946997 | 2B682084579E | executing a teacher-designed project would be less stressful than it would be opposed to it being student-designed. | Claim | Effective |
f9213f229f8f | 2B682084579E | When a teacher assigns you a project, it has more than likely been executed in the past. for that reason, it will undoubtedly make researching for the project go a lot smoother than it would if you are researching something that has never been done. During the summer break, students are busy playing video games, relaxi... | Evidence | Effective |
e197fbee4bd0 | 2B682084579E | one students self innovated project will be different from another, leaving no opportunity to get support from other classmates. | Claim | Effective |
d37c55df8246 | 2B682084579E | Conducting a teacher-designed project will give you the opportunity to share ideas with fellow classmates, for the reason that you will all be working on the same project. Teacher-designed projects also give light to the idea of having a partner. | Evidence | Effective |
88ecd1380ead | 2B682084579E | Organization is another viable issue, | Claim | Adequate |
804c5c70dff5 | 2B682084579E | with a student-designed project you may get confused about how to carry out the project leaving it potentially incomplete or sloppy. On the other hand, if you are doing a teacher-designed project instructions will likely be clearer and you have will likely get a grading rubric to follow. | Evidence | Adequate |
216b6c58184e | 2B682084579E | Some opposed to this may say, "I do not want to do a summer project anyways, therefore let me choose the topic". I agree that the topic of the project may be more interesting if it is student-designed, | Counterclaim | Effective |
63b38e1defcf | 2B682084579E | but if the project is teacher-designed you will learn more. Student designed-projects will not test the brain as much as a project that they know nothing about will. Moreover, students will be put to the test more if they have to research something that is beyond logic. Even though you will learn more doing a teacher-d... | Rebuttal | Effective |
175be662c1b6 | 2B682084579E | although student-designed projects are helpful the teacher should be the one innovating these summer projects. Teacher-designed projects accomplish both being the least stressful and being the least tedious. In that light, they should undoubtedly be the way summer break projects are conducted. This summer break if stud... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
b04af630947f | 2B7A8D15B50C | The face on mars was first found by the spacecraft called Viking one and was cirling mars when it found the face. alot of people belive it is a real artifact. | Lead | Adequate |
e2060d216b21 | 2B7A8D15B50C | NASA has took more pictures to prove that it is infact not an artifact. | Claim | Adequate |
33061f26611d | 2B7A8D15B50C | People belive there just covering it up so pople wont know about it. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
6f14716a136b | 2B7A8D15B50C | But that is not true it would benifit NASA if it were an true artifact. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
aeaf72767ccb | 2B7A8D15B50C | The face on mars is just a lndform | Position | Adequate |
00821551d0ca | 2B7A8D15B50C | because of the pictures we took we could not see and form of building structure. one thing that brings me to this conclusion is the rocks and shadows made it look and seem very real. The text states "...formed by shadows..." | Evidence | Adequate |
ebbd533531f6 | 2B7A8D15B50C | Tv and other things are what is drawing the attention to the matter andthey are whats broadcasting to the world that it is real. The text states " It starred in a hollywood film , appeared in books , magazines, radio talk shows..." | Evidence | Ineffective |
c17da9933400 | 2B7A8D15B50C | This brings me to the conclusion that infact it is not real but was made real by televison and other things. People just dontt wanna listen to the since behind it. If it where in fact real it would benifit NASA. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e3c2a5bd863f | 2BAB4CB3573E | Cell phones have become very popular over the past years when it comes to texting and driving. | Lead | Adequate |
60168b87b647 | 2BAB4CB3573E | The behavior is very dangerous and causes death do to not paying attention to the road | Position | Adequate |
b37a7c97797b | 2BAB4CB3573E | They cause more crashes day by day. | Claim | Adequate |
d5882fe83d25 | 2BAB4CB3573E | Then eventually this led to enforcement by the police of when you are caught texting and driving you will get a ticket | Claim | Adequate |
2aabe7c99794 | 2BAB4CB3573E | This hurts victim family members by your mistake of texting and driving and killing the innocent. | Claim | Adequate |
3fac70db9483 | 2BAB4CB3573E | The number one reason why people don't use a cellphone why driving, because its causes car crashes. | Claim | Adequate |
3c565edfdee3 | 2BAB4CB3573E | You have to keep your eyes on the road at all time or it will lead to jail time!!! Driving under the age of 18 is illegal in most states. Another way that its dangerous is if you are drinking and driving. Which means that more people or dying each and other day. Reports have that 1.6 million crashes are caused because ... | Evidence | Adequate |
832c55029831 | 2BAB4CB3573E | People sometimes might argue with the fact they can multi-task well | Counterclaim | Adequate |
4d0ffc425767 | 2BAB4CB3573E | but that doesn't change the fact that many of teens and adults are at risk when you're behind the wheel. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
3dbbd03a06fd | 2BAB4CB3573E | The number of deaths increase everyday do to drinking and driving as well. There is a specific time you can drive after drinking which is 5 hours to sure you're ok to drive without causing a crash. Which makes thousands of people dangerous drivers everyday fights the public!!!
| Evidence | Ineffective |
a64e8e75a1c7 | 2BAB4CB3573E | In conclusion texting and driving at the same time is putting yourself and others at risk because both yawl could lose your lives in a blink of an eye! 0ver the law that the police have created to save our lives which will make our environment or community safer. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8c5b6748fdf5 | 2BB14634D9FE | The "Face on Mars" was found during a search for a possible landing site for the sister ship of Viking 1,
Pictures were taken during the search, a showy likeness of a human face was spotted.
An enourmous head close to two miles from end to end, was looking back at the camera.
Scientists believed it was just another ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
59acf36594fa | 2BB14634D9FE | Few Scientists believe the Face was an alien artifact.
Photographing Cydonia and the Face became a priorty for NASA.
Eighteen years after the Viking missions ended, Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September, 1997.
On April 5, 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Mic... | Evidence | Ineffective |
2fab8fb6257f | 2BC448B88B54 | In the year 1976, when Viking 1 space craft was taking photographs of possiable landing spots for Viking 2 spacecraft, they found a formation in a rock that looked like a human face. The shadows made the rock look like it had a nose, mouth, and two eyes, like a human. This was found in a region of the Red Planet called... | Evidence | Ineffective |
ed286398b719 | 2BC448B88B54 | So weather or not theFace is an alien landform or a rock formation, NASA does wish it was an alien landform, just to bring pupiclatiy to the Red Planet. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4a314292d625 | 2BC448B88B54 | However, it is highly imposable for it to be an alien momument, as they would have to have oxygen to survive,and they would have to find plenty of food and water to also survive. | Position | Ineffective |
571d9de5c5a8 | 2BE74BE251FE | New technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Hold on! Can we actually "calculate" emoitons---like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel? Movement of one or more muscles is called an "action ... | Lead | Adequate |
82bef26f4a7f | 2BE74BE251FE | In fact, we humans perform this same impressive "calculation" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on his or her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, ect. His new computer software stores si... | Evidence | Adequate |
3d58a99e0758 | 2BE74BE251FE | I'm for the new technology Facial Action Coding System | Position | Adequate |
3584438a5d77 | 2BE74BE251FE | I think is a good idea for computers to know if there owner is happy, mad, sad, and ect | Claim | Adequate |
7df30e4b5734 | 2BE74BE251FE | Heres a qoute from the article " even thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression" (like not smiling as broadly). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). | Evidence | Ineffective |
d17beb6b3d79 | 2C0D4A3D4590 | I disagree, because some times there is nothing there that interest | Position | Adequate |
db0c982244ca | 2C0D4A3D4590 | Many schools dont have a program that people like. So if they force some one to do something that they dont like it could make them frustrated. | Evidence | Adequate |
2f39e24ef051 | 2C0D4A3D4590 | There is something good to it. It can make them try new stuff. | Counterclaim | Ineffective |
c9168850870b | 2C0D4A3D4590 | It can get them interested new jobs they can try. A new future they can try to achieve. it could also make them a more interesting person. More possible people talk to about the topic. But they could despise the topic. | Evidence | Ineffective |
cd5624338c72 | 2C0D4A3D4590 | Than forcing them in to it could make the hate it more. | Claim | Ineffective |
7810d8593db3 | 2C0D4A3D4590 | There could be some personal stuff that do's not let them join a club. some personal trauma that makes them less likely to join a club. it could also be that they just dont want to do it. Being part of a sports team is also very physically demanding. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d868caac10fc | 2C0D4A3D4590 | There is always chance they could not make it on the team | Claim | Ineffective |
2a0f1ee9938a | 2C0D4A3D4590 | Plus there is always a chance of being kicked out of the club or team. Plus if you try a sport out and figure out that you dont like it you can always quit. There is always a chance that the club could not even help you in the real world. There could be no real world implication | Evidence | Ineffective |
8570bcc2a365 | 2C0D4A3D4590 | some times people could like try new things out. People could also no like change in their schedule. Forcing stuff on people isnt the best option. There is always a chance they might like the club. You might make some new friends. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
c9b9047b0eb8 | 2C2C377C45D0 | The author gives good reasonings on why the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers | Position | Adequate |
b1c5046f53f8 | 2C2C377C45D0 | The first reasoning that the author has is that way back when, Venus might have had open oceans and could have supported various forms of life. | Claim | Adequate |
4908f685ae55 | 2C2C377C45D0 | Just like Earth does, the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feartures such as moutains, valleys, and craters. | Evidence | Adequate |
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