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a0998050cd75 | C48F269A6ED8 | Someone would argued that students should attend classes at home. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e0326ae83745 | C48F269A6ED8 | Students preffer to do their work at home because they can finish it more faster that in the school. therefore in the school there is a lot students who just go to the school for play and joke,whitch cause other to not do their work. it make other students get distration by other. futher in the school there is always c... | Evidence | Adequate |
6a494442ed6c | C48F269A6ED8 | For example, doing our work online at home. It is more beneficial becuase students don't have a limite time to stop. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
31715426aa48 | C48F269A6ED8 | In the school you have a limite time,but at home you don't have a limite time. Also, nobody is going to bother you when you are working at home. Moreover, students just focus on what they needs to do becuase it less distraction and oneone else around. | Evidence | Adequate |
cb60b2ffedff | C48F269A6ED8 | thus, it is beneficial take classes online becuase you don't have to pay money to the school for uniforms and, all the required things that they ask you to buy. When you can save the money,it can be use to pay the classes online. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
3c2878888c1c | C48F269A6ED8 | I think all students need to attend school to have better opportunities and better skills on learning. | Position | Adequate |
f7ae82fc9a0e | C492123F426E | Driverless cars, although dangerous in a multitude of ways, have uses that far excede any dangers. It is said that in order to progress in life you must first take steps back. Although these driverless cars are a step forward in technology, they can be seen as a being a step backward because of the dangers that persist... | Lead | Effective |
56a47a289026 | C492123F426E | These cars are very fesable | Position | Adequate |
2bb4f9f5f42e | C492123F426E | they are sought after, | Claim | Effective |
0cad76f8d199 | C492123F426E | the technology is available, | Claim | Effective |
443e518cf021 | C492123F426E | they are getting safer with time. | Claim | Effective |
c7323f8cc486 | C492123F426E | The human has drempt of the flying car for generations, and finaly the idea is fesable. The text referances Google cofounder Sergey Brin, and how he "envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system," (Paragraph 1). Although this is just the drea... | Evidence | Effective |
1c1442e70486 | C492123F426E | Driverless cars were always thought to be a thing of the past, but the reality is that they are a thing of the present and have been for many years. The writing points out that, " Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009." (Paragraph 2). While many people view driverless c... | Evidence | Effective |
cad714a062eb | C492123F426E | This safety is both for the environment, and most importantly for the drivers of these cars. Indeed, these cars are as safe as they ever will be. We are reminded of the safety of these cars when paragraph eight reminds us that, "In this way, the in-car system is actually a saftey feature, and saftey is a big concern," ... | Evidence | Effective |
1628d8ef863e | C492123F426E | The development of these driverless cars should be continued because they are sought after by many people, the technology is available and is being worked on, and these cars are safe and getting safer. By developing these tests, the companies are creating a technology that, to millions of people, is still only a dream.... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
3d8056d17634 | C4B52CBE6186 | The Face is an actual landform, it was not created by aliens. | Position | Adequate |
4572bd648055 | C4B52CBE6186 | In order for me to prove this to you I need facts, so that it is what the majority of this essay is going to be about. I will also be be telling you how I know that the Face on Mars is a landform. There are many facts as to why the Face on Mars is a landform and I will be sharing all of those that I can find with you.
... | Evidence | Adequate |
1ff16372072a | C4B52CBE6186 | One of my first claims that the Face on Mars is actually a landform and was not created by aliens is from paragraph three in "Unmasking the Face on Mars" and it states, "The caption noted a "huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth." | Evidence | Adequate |
77d0bd7da878 | C4B52CBE6186 | At the beginning of that sentence it says "a huge ROCK formation" which is telling us that it is actually rock and that it had devolped over time to form into the shape of a face. | Claim | Adequate |
6d919fb30348 | C4B52CBE6186 | And that it was not created by aliens because aliens can not create or make rocks.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
c728f4f41e88 | C4B52CBE6186 | Another claim that the face is actually a land form and was not created by aliens is that in paragraph twelve is it giving us a very clear and precise meaning that the Face is an landform by telling us that, " What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the Amer... | Evidence | Adequate |
c32cc78842f0 | C4B52CBE6186 | That is telling us that there are more places in the world that are like the Face on Mars. | Claim | Adequate |
49f1e5ebd0aa | C4B52CBE6186 | That also means that if there are more places, then aliens could not have made the Face on Mars because that means it would have had to make all of the other mesas and buttes in the entire universe. | Evidence | Adequate |
dc7e13f3f161 | C4B52CBE6186 | Lastly, my final claim that the face is actually a landform and was not created by aliens is in paragraph seven in the article "Unmasking the Face on Mars" and that it tells us that, "And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, | Evidence | Adequate |
c95c8f4f0bfa | C4B52CBE6186 | Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture tem times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. | Claim | Adequate |
b3a0c9bd565e | C4B52CBE6186 | In conclusion I know that the Face on Mars is actually a landform and was not created by aliens because of the facts the a have cited from the article, "Unmasking the Face on Mars". I have given you very good claims as to why and I really hope that you change your opinion on this topic of matter. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0ab9c0d8fdf2 | C4CE39433C61 | I think cars should still be famous in the future so we could make new cars. | Position | Ineffective |
f4c007903bd0 | C4CE39433C61 | cars floating in the air or cars that can drive on there own and drive us anywhere we want to go or cars that we could call in so we wouldn't to use our sell phones all the time. Or cars like the BMW could be upgraded for the future. And cars that have special sensers so the human driver can remain alert. And cars that... | Evidence | Adequate |
7d6a122f834b | C4CE39433C61 | Then one day they could come out with cars that can always givbe you a heads up | Claim | Adequate |
81c556cef08e | C4CE39433C61 | always tell you about the weather and hoiw nice it is outside. Then if one of the drivers ask about the nearest place they could go out to eat or a park they could go to to have reunion of just to chill. then they could have cars that could drive you to defferent states like Navada, California. Florida, or District of ... | Evidence | Adequate |
3195f552bbb1 | C4CE39433C61 | Next the car could have any station on it like country,rap, Hip Hop, or just any kind of music people like. Next they envent a new BMW that could speed up to 100 mph and then when you wake up in the morning the car could already have your coffee for you in the morning just in case you might forget. Then they could come... | Evidence | Adequate |
f6cbd0cd2a0f | C4CE39433C61 | Finelly when they make the car they could test out the cars by using laser beams to test drive the cars that drive on there own and then when the car is ready it could be solled. | Claim | Adequate |
cb671aab7584 | C513DCACFD01 | Electoral votes is what we need but some disagree | Position | Adequate |
64ef95088e6d | C513DCACFD01 | Choosing our president is more complicated than people think it is . One thing that voters do not know when electing presidents is that their vote might not matter as much as they think due to the electoral college . Who is to say electoral votes or better than popular votes ? | Evidence | Adequate |
ef7e4857f2d6 | C513DCACFD01 | To cemmence with , electoral votes usually doesn't change anything , if a candidate has the most popular votes it is more likely that electoral votes won't change anything | Claim | Adequate |
aef66b5e298a | C513DCACFD01 | Although electoral votes did change the race during the 2000 election . Gore had more popular votes against Bush , yet Bush had more electoral votes | Counterclaim | Adequate |
dd2c5c83b1e9 | C513DCACFD01 | That situation had not happened since the election of 1888 . In the past 200 years , only twice has electoral votes changed the peoples mind | Rebuttal | Adequate |
62cf30af424a | C513DCACFD01 | Some still disagree because this means that the people aren't voting for a president , thy are voting for a slate of electors . | Counterclaim | Adequate |
23fada85d7b8 | C513DCACFD01 | electoral votes are basically a summary of the states vote . People vote for a slate of electors to represent their state in the election . Voters will vote for a representative to choose who becomes president on electoral votes | Evidence | Ineffective |
a77f05228dec | C513DCACFD01 | Sometimes voters get confused and choose the wrong candidate which is one of the reasons why people think the electoral college should be terminated . | Claim | Adequate |
a9020c085463 | C513DCACFD01 | In conclusion , their have always been arguements about the electoral college , even past presidents were against it . Some say it's a good idea because it rarely affects the outcome but some argue that it doesn't let the people choose who they think should be president which violates one of the rights that citizens we... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
cb7c56054873 | C5162A975732 | Is distance learning through video and online conferencing a great and beneficial way for students to learn from home or does it hinder one's chances of actually learning and having a good learning experience? Video conferencing is widely used in today's society as technology has boosted and upgraded. People often use ... | Lead | Effective |
84a0cf280644 | C5162A975732 | Video Conferencing is not very advisable and great | Position | Adequate |
1d6d4c948e51 | C5162A975732 | because having a face to face teaching can really help students understand better, | Claim | Adequate |
7d3d5d6bfd49 | C5162A975732 | learning at home can bring unwanted distractions that keep students from staying focused | Claim | Adequate |
cdc9b3a9d216 | C5162A975732 | and distance learning also promotes laziness and affects health.
| Claim | Adequate |
fa721e8a8305 | C5162A975732 | Firstly, video conferencing with distance learning from home is not advisable and great because students may prefer that they have a face to face talk with a teacher. | Claim | Effective |
017df8e2ea3c | C5162A975732 | In cases where a student may not understand something, having to physically be there in a school building and ask a question, the teacher can demonstrate carefully and step by step till the student is able to get a grasp of what is being taught and questions are clarified. Some students just prefer having the need to b... | Evidence | Effective |
eef453575647 | C5162A975732 | Secondly, video conferencing with distance learning from home is not advisable and great because it brings distractions | Claim | Effective |
42b529c23c22 | C5162A975732 | Taking classes online and learning from home brings unwanted distractions such as having the need to sleep, watching TV, playing games and having to take care of kids while doing class at the same time. With these distractions, students are not able to get their classes and work done, they're not able to stay focused o... | Evidence | Effective |
57421cbbb845 | C5162A975732 | Thirdly, video conferencing with distance learning is not advisable and great because it promotes laziness and affects health. | Claim | Effective |
7696cc746e49 | C5162A975732 | some students that often take online courses may get bored because they're constantly staring at a screen, so taking online classes starts to get boring for them and they start to get lazy and refrain from doing their work, students do that because they're constantly staring at a screen which starts to give eye problem... | Evidence | Effective |
3b32ee2f83d8 | C5162A975732 | In conclusion, video conferencing and taking online classes with distance learning is not the best thing for students, because of the conflict and problems that come with it. It can greatly affect a student's education. With online classes, students may be faced with distractions which can cause them to stay off task a... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
0f2930b30e9d | C536086A1C31 | The face on mars have to be a alien | Position | Ineffective |
5b0c48467dea | C536086A1C31 | back in time they did not have spaceships | Claim | Ineffective |
5e971df7abd1 | C536086A1C31 | If they did have spaceships back in the past we would of already discover it by now. It's probably a alien because it was buried in the ground for so may years that face is actually popping out. They should unburied it to see if it's human or not. If it is they have alot of research to do if not they still have alot ha... | Evidence | Ineffective |
524b23a926ad | C536086A1C31 | At the end of the article they said " that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." | Claim | Adequate |
8ec94d2a9313 | C536086A1C31 | They can also look up any information about mars having a volcanoe. That no one knows about. but if we just know found this it is more likey to be a alien. Because we been going to mars for a long time and it's weird that they just know recover that face. | Evidence | Ineffective |
eac24dd6ab3d | C536086A1C31 | What happen if it's not a alien or human what if its just a rock that turned into a face. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0e6e8e5047ad | C5382404A84B | I think that u must have at least a B average to play a sport or activity is a bad rule | Position | Adequate |
f6cbedd82df2 | C5382404A84B | if someone is in a more challenging class then it is harder for them to get a higher grad. | Claim | Adequate |
092640c394ea | C5382404A84B | maybe people need exercise and cant get it at home because they cant. | Claim | Adequate |
a560dee4f698 | C5382404A84B | Or they cant do any sport or activity because they cant afford it these are some tough times | Claim | Adequate |
fe7a1f1aa8c3 | C5382404A84B | Say if someone is in a level 1 class and are struggling in that class because level 1 classes are more difficult than level 2 classes | Claim | Adequate |
e49719e4e063 | C5382404A84B | What if this person really wanted to try out but could not play because there grade is a C plus and need a B average to play on the sport team that they wanted to play on. And what if another kid had straight A' s but could not play on a team because they had one C then they couldn't play on that team. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b92ce1d07e6c | C5382404A84B | TEACHER_NAME what if there was a walking club at school and someone wanted to join the club because they needed to exercise | Claim | Adequate |
0e4d18edd070 | C5382404A84B | And that person really didn't want to get mad fun of anymore because they would get made fun of because they were big and lazy and they only had one bad grade and they couldn't do that just because they have one bad grade. So for my second reason that you have to have at least a B average. | Evidence | Adequate |
269b5f7811ee | C5382404A84B | say someone wasn't the richest person in town and could afford for their child to play on a recreational team so they wanted to play on a school team. But had one or two horrible grades and couldn't play who knows he could be really good. | Claim | Adequate |
9ca8bf50909a | C5382404A84B | Again i think that it is a terrible rule for a child to play on a team or activity and must maintain a B average. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
b896c63480f1 | C55E6125411D | If you are sane at all, you would not allow cell phones. | Position | Adequate |
e2fd3cf98860 | C55E6125411D | Distraction, kids could run into each other in the hall ways using them. | Claim | Adequate |
e6b60e5036ad | C55E6125411D | Then, they will take up all their time using them in the free periods. | Claim | Ineffective |
965345f945f3 | C55E6125411D | A mess of supplies on the floors every where. Do you want that responsibility of being the janitor at the end of the day? Think of the law suites for even thinking about allowing this in school. I shudder at that thought. People will regret it to a point were they won't even think about bringing cell phones to school. ... | Evidence | Adequate |
bd63fcc9ed09 | C55E6125411D | Think of all the homework assignments left undone because student are to busy talking to even care | Claim | Adequate |
d01cd4ed3211 | C55E6125411D | All of the failed tests because no one studied, not giving a hoot. The school shutting down, kids being moved to a different school. And who's fault was it? Yours. I like school, I know it is rare, but please... no cell phones! I want to see my teachers again. Day after day, have some pity on one child. Think of tomorr... | Evidence | Adequate |
9c966a1c87d6 | C55E6125411D | In a small conclusion, no cell phones in the school. Kids will make a mess with all that bumping into each other. Finally, the education going on with drop like a bomb. So, please don't make your own hectic sound-track from all the noise. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
456a37beecd3 | C579A4D6151E | Video-games, electronics, high functioning computers, wireless technology and so much more has become very popular in modern day society. Even schools have started to take a more technological approach to teaching. Many schools are offering new methods of teaching that include online courses such as video conferences | Lead | Effective |
a0b4e6c08025 | C579A4D6151E | Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home | Position | Adequate |
d04ad903171f | C579A4D6151E | there is a lack of guidance | Claim | Adequate |
a91c8206e90f | C579A4D6151E | personal connections with teachers | Claim | Effective |
80b3acb1d9d3 | C579A4D6151E | social skills. | Claim | Effective |
aed376c50a16 | C579A4D6151E | Attending school from home would not be beneficial because there would be a lack of guidance | Claim | Effective |
4bc1f55d0821 | C579A4D6151E | A well known student at Generic_School, with above average grades, had chosen to take Physical Education online. Due to the unfamiliar feeling of the absence of a teacher in her presence, she received a D in the course. This shows that without having a teacher in one's physical presence, it is very easy to get lost. Co... | Evidence | Effective |
af422dcef42f | C579A4D6151E | Another exaple of this is a student who had moved to Virginia all the way from India that had trouble transferring their Algebra 2 credits and was forced to retake the class online in order to graduate, although previously receiving an A in the class in India. He had phenomenal work habits, but the technology confused ... | Evidence | Effective |
9c54003f23d0 | C579A4D6151E | Another explanation of why attending school from home would not be beneficial is because there is no personal connections with teachers | Claim | Effective |
0d52a727338f | C579A4D6151E | In the book, "The Great Gatsby," Nick was able to find a new found trust for John upon receiving the information that they attended the same war together. This shows how John shifted from some mysterious guy to a possible trusted friend, all because of a personal connection. Schools offer this same opportunity with stu... | Evidence | Effective |
9fe958e76631 | C579A4D6151E | A popular story at Generic_School, is one of a student who had a below average GPA, but had a fantastic relationship with his Business teacher. He was accepted into a prestigious Ivy league school and after calling them, he found out he was accepted based off of his teacher recommendation. This story shows how having p... | Evidence | Effective |
0e9849e690b6 | C579A4D6151E | The final reason that attending school from home is not beneficial is that their would be a loss of social skills that a student learns while being in school. | Claim | Effective |
a33c626aa242 | C579A4D6151E | One example of this is "Impractical Jokers," which is a show of four life-long friends who met in high school, and compete to do extreme and comical activities in public. This show shows us that these four friends developed social skills in high school and became closer due through school. If any of those guys took onl... | Evidence | Effective |
170956a6c5e4 | C579A4D6151E | Another example of this is Clemson's star quarterback, Trevor Lawrence. Him and his girlfriend have been together for years since high school, and he is now one year from entering the NFL. If he had chosen to attend classes from home instead, he would most likely not be with, or even know his current girlfriend. This s... | Evidence | Effective |
5084d06373aa | C579A4D6151E | Overall, attending classes from home does not benefit students in the long run because there is an absence of guidance, personal connections with teachers, and social skills. All of these ideas are critical in a teenagers life and taking online classes prevents this. Schools should steer away from this new way of teach... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
a80178e85fb5 | C5A56B482FAA | There is no need to change the school's policy so that students with a B average or above may be the only ones aloud to participate in sports and other school activities. Granted, students must keep up with their school work, but level of book smarts does not effect the qualities for sports or other activities. | Position | Effective |
0cc6247a163e | C5A56B482FAA | Sports are based on levels of fitness, not brain activity. | Claim | Effective |
948cc22a3451 | C5A56B482FAA | If a student excels in a sport, he or she should not be limited to access of achieving their goals in this sport because they are not at a high academic level. Limiting their ability to participate in what they excel in can take away many opportunities. For example, one of your students has the skill to play on a profe... | Evidence | Effective |
0e90f620844f | C5A56B482FAA | Taking a student out of sports and other activities will not promise higher grades. | Claim | Effective |
bd8b67b2a140 | C5A56B482FAA | Some students have learning disabilities that prevent them from learning to the standard that reaches a B average or above. Sports and other activities can stimulate the mind and actually help with learning. By allowing the students to participate in both sports and class they have a more likely chance to improve in bo... | Evidence | Effective |
b58d93f2a831 | C5A56B482FAA | Many students have a C average in school. | Claim | Adequate |
e4ea4e4e4b60 | C5A56B482FAA | There is no statement that this is because sports or other activities are preventing a higher grade. It is possible that the students do not understand the topics as well because they are not being taught how they need to be taught. | Evidence | Adequate |
ef566dd635d5 | C5A56B482FAA | I understand that one believes that by not allowing students to participate in sports or other activities will limit their focus to school work, therefore allowing more time towards education | Counterclaim | Effective |
6b761fe01c79 | C5A56B482FAA | Still, to live a healthy and well-rounded life, one must have the options to participate in activities other than school work. | Rebuttal | Effective |
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