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579e88ae7f70 | 37A7110DB0C7 | The decision to devote ones time, money, and effort to such a consuming thing should be a personal and willing choice. | Claim | Effective |
2a0d8e40f985 | 37A7110DB0C7 | Forcing a student to become apart of the student counsel or to play a sport may seem like the healthy option and makes them involved in something, but sometimes this can be damaging to a student. If the child is unhappy with what they've been put into, and are forced to participate in this activity several times a week... | Evidence | Adequate |
f631e2dd6c9f | 37A7110DB0C7 | Becoming apart of an extracurricular activity should be a free willing, and personal choice that fits for both students and their families. This should revolve around the students wishes and not those of someone who does not know each child's personal situation. Forcing one into something they did not choose for themse... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
bf1f2cfae511 | 37D7B6975F21 | In this article the author thinks that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. And he has many reasons for thinking and suggesting it and here the way that he says that it would be worthy of pursuit is by putting facts that would be helpful in the article. | Position | Adequate |
9e62e1b1ab32 | 37D7B6975F21 | Some of the advantages that the article would have is that it is very well informed and it have a lot of evidence that we could use to say that it is a study that is worthy of pursuit. | Claim | Adequate |
576216b70b74 | 37D7B6975F21 | In the articleit says´Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionaly the closest in distance to´.This is saying that venus is closer to us and we have more adantage of knowing more about it because more people can go on it since it is closer. | Evidence | Ineffective |
517e80013db4 | 37D7B6975F21 | It also says that ´Numerous factors contribute to venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study despite its proximity to us. which also means | Evidence | Ineffective |
01b1aadbfc5e | 37D7B6975F21 | that it could also be difficult to pursuit worthy on venus because it could be difficult to study. | Claim | Ineffective |
660fd43aa032 | 37D7B6975F21 | Thats is why he says we should pursuit worthy to venus but there are also some disadantages I think that either way there are more facts about pursuing it but not all might think the same. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
93a0404f6c19 | 37FC9DB2D1DB | When assigned a project during summer break, don't you wish you could have control? | Lead | Ineffective |
7ad7f10f50af | 37FC9DB2D1DB | Students should be able to design their own projects | Position | Adequate |
d53fa254177c | 37FC9DB2D1DB | it's their summer | Claim | Adequate |
efa8b27936f3 | 37FC9DB2D1DB | improve learning, | Claim | Adequate |
627bdf186c4a | 37FC9DB2D1DB | students can be creative with it. | Claim | Adequate |
44066cff14cc | 37FC9DB2D1DB | When making a project these things are what you look forward too. Students need their minds to go wild and enjoy the project especially if it's over the summer. Their summer to be specific because no student would want to stay at home stuck doing a project if it's not fun for them. Especially if their friends are out h... | Evidence | Adequate |
6fb01a8a829a | 37FC9DB2D1DB | it's their summer. | Claim | Adequate |
bd107739df2e | 37FC9DB2D1DB | No student, in any grade, would want to be stuck with a project to do over their summer break or any break. Students dont even want homework over any type of brake. Therefor they should be able to design their projects. This should give them a little more freedom over break instead of being bored overall. It could help... | Evidence | Adequate |
4df60b8e1323 | 37FC9DB2D1DB | when doing a project it could help with bonding. | Claim | Adequate |
5b1e1d92579d | 37FC9DB2D1DB | This could work in one of two ways: The first being a family project and students get to do a family tree. And second being a group project and friends stay over each others houses and get to know each other more. In benefit of all this is making a new friend or friends. And a bonus is getting a good grade. Summer's ar... | Evidence | Adequate |
be2207e9aaf8 | 37FC9DB2D1DB | allowing students to design their projects will improve creativity. | Claim | Adequate |
385ea5a76edc | 37FC9DB2D1DB | What students look forward to in a project is how fun it could be or how much fun could they could get out of it. So allowing students to design their projects can help improve not only creativity but learning. Students want to go all out and when they get to see that opportunity it's amazing what students can do. It's... | Evidence | Adequate |
354b438465f9 | 37FC9DB2D1DB | The only bad side anyone can possibly see in this is the topic. Students, when let lose, can tend to get off topic and not realize it. They get to caught up in their mind that they lose what the requirements are. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d14a46bff33a | 37FC9DB2D1DB | This isn't a bad thing but it tends to happen. Overall students want to have fun with learning. It's already boring enough to do homework so cut the students some slack. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
fad33fed6369 | 37FC9DB2D1DB | students should be able to design their own projects. Its not only their summer but their time with family. It could help bonding with not only family but with some new friends, and it could make summer a lot more fun. And also improve creativity as all students want to let their minds free when making a project. They ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
d3eae8034498 | 384D9E9B4369 | Making Mona Lisa smile people are feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotions. The new software has developed that improves accury in the perceiving the emotins of others. This means that people are hiding their emotion so that people can't tell how they are feeling inside their hearts. Accoriding to some ... | Lead | Adequate |
5ef819e488d1 | 384D9E9B4369 | I agree with what they are making for new software that recognize emotions | Position | Adequate |
e01c0ff4c04a | 384D9E9B4369 | We can actully calcute emotions like math. | Claim | Adequate |
93a27d538a98 | 384D9E9B4369 | To recognize the subtle fical movement because we humans use to express how we feel. The mojor for the process is to know how you can track these facial movement. This can help you to understand that emotion is rate of how your feeling are. This mean That you can hide your feeling from your friends but how your phisica... | Evidence | Adequate |
ab3fb41f1071 | 384D9E9B4369 | Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatony to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. | Evidence | Adequate |
80f5bcded173 | 384D9E9B4369 | Thia means that da Vinci helped people to paint different look of emotion and feeling on the paint that they had made. The new software store simlar to rate the informations. | Claim | Ineffective |
b7fd51840c7f | 384D9E9B4369 | To bring smile to your fae, while it's show just how much this computer can do. This mean the image on computer can make you happy,sad,smile and anger. It appers on your screen a similar ad might follow. | Evidence | Ineffective |
056d0cf08ae4 | 384D9E9B4369 | Using new techonology it can help student in calss to undersstand how world is bringing new things that can help millinons of people to recognize their emotions. | Claim | Adequate |
d5f7cbd1217e | 384D9E9B4369 | It can make huge change for people who had problems of knowing their feelong or emotions. BY the way making a happy face in expriment also make you feel slightly happy. It may happen because we unconsiously imitate another person's ficial expressions. Making happy face caould reveal so much about the since of emotions.... | Evidence | Adequate |
f0dc17f79691 | 384D9E9B4369 | This explain how people can know how new software works. The software rate your feeling which can bring change in the real life from children and alduts. In fact these instructions for face that looks happy. It's all bout those muscular action. That can indicate the different between a genuine smile and force one. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
5ca45490fa74 | 3869028BB079 | Through the school year students are required complete many learning based projects that are designed and instructed by teachers, but as the school year ends many teachers fear that students may lose the knowledge gained over the year during summer break. To prevent this from happening many schools require summer proje... | Lead | Effective |
b0732090b707 | 3869028BB079 | Many people argue if a teacher or student designed projects are more effective to help retain knowledge, but student designed projects are believed to be more effective. | Position | Effective |
53badb80e093 | 3869028BB079 | When a summer project is designed by a student it gives students a chance not only learn while completing the project, but to learn while making it | Claim | Effective |
afccc765ae14 | 3869028BB079 | students receive a real world experience, | Claim | Adequate |
833d8a79068b | 3869028BB079 | students experience a sense of freedom | Claim | Adequate |
f8fe9840ff6e | 3869028BB079 | During summer many students have the desire to quickly complete the assignment a teacher has assigned, by doing the bare minimum, but if the project was designed by the student themselves it would give them the opportunity to learn while both making and completing the project. When you develop a project, a lot of resea... | Evidence | Effective |
3a06cf5353cb | 3869028BB079 | Designing a project also gives students knowledge in the topic their project is on, as well as skills on how to make projects and other important research based skills that are not focused on in school, but are necessary in higher level education.
| Claim | Effective |
c3b607fc3889 | 3869028BB079 | Not only do student designed projects give students an extra opportunity to learn, but it also provides students with a sense of real world experiences that enhance learning, and general skills. | Claim | Effective |
80a59defa723 | 3869028BB079 | After high school graduation many colleges and universities require that students conduct research projects designed by themselves, in order to receive a degree. This may be very difficult for students coming from an environment were teachers design everything, but a student developed projects in school would give kids... | Evidence | Effective |
60b37e0d4eda | 3869028BB079 | Another essential impact of allowing students to design their own projects during summer, is that this allows students to develop a senses of freedom that is locked up during the long school year | Claim | Effective |
f577329d33f6 | 3869028BB079 | Throughout the school year teachers provide projects that are essential for learning the content, but prevents students form using there creativity and expanding on their freedom to think in different ways. During the summer if students were allowed to develop their own projects they would feel more free, this would al... | Evidence | Effective |
9baa1a769622 | 3869028BB079 | Summer break projects are one of the essential tools in preventing students form losing the knowledge that they difficulty gained throughout the year, and student designed projects provide a more effective alternative to the rigid teacher designed projects | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0a701efe7ab5 | 3869028BB079 | Many people may argue that teacher designed projects are the most educational and effective way to help students retain their knowledge, because they are made by experts in the subject, and are designed by adults, or that allowing students to develop their own projects is a waste of time, | Counterclaim | Effective |
3156f08ee47a | 3869028BB079 | but teacher designed projects prevent students from acquiring real world experiences, freedom, and an extra learning experiences that a student designed project would provide. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
324fc41a3fc0 | 3869028BB079 | Summer break projects may be helpful in allowing students to learn but people will only receive the most out of this if they are designed by a student. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3ee096053480 | 387FEC6C2CB7 | The Facial Action Coding System is useful in many ways when telling us someones facial expressions. | Position | Adequate |
1a2eb97d1f7b | 387FEC6C2CB7 | The Facial Action Ciding System can help us indicate someones true fellings or emoions that they are felling or felling that they have torwds someone else. | Claim | Adequate |
f38ec7062e1f | 387FEC6C2CB7 | By looking at A computer it can indicate what your truely felling. When someone doesnt have A facial expression on thier face the Facial Action Coding System can identify what they are truely felling. | Evidence | Ineffective |
00ec265a4f77 | 387FEC6C2CB7 | Making A facial expression everyday can help you produce the expression more often. | Claim | Ineffective |
ca337dbf0e88 | 387FEC6C2CB7 | Most the time whatever emotion your felling the more this emotion will pop up in your life time. Most emotions can be detected based on your facial expression or the way you move or speak. If your around someone who is always smiling chances are you will be happy to. Based on someones else emotion you can sometimes fel... | Evidence | Ineffective |
421d704fd9b0 | 38EB926DE7F0 | The author supports this idea by giving the facts of how dangerous it is but why we should keep trying to study Venus | Position | Adequate |
6808c31d8fa4 | 38EB926DE7F0 | The author says a lot about the dangers because there are a lot. | Claim | Adequate |
f4cc7b815ca8 | 38EB926DE7F0 | we could find out more about these dangers and how to defeat them. They set out on a mission to simulate the chaos of Venus's surface and it was able to last three weeks. | Evidence | Adequate |
7b017dd46b24 | 38EB926DE7F0 | NASA is working on a lot of different approaches on how to last a while or have a good landing on Venus. | Claim | Ineffective |
b6f683577193 | 38EB926DE7F0 | The author tells about the things that we could find out if we could be there for a while. They stress a lot in the passage about it being the hottest planet around and it isn't even the closest to the sun. This is a huge thing holding them back the author says and would melt almost all metal. The author supports this ... | Evidence | Adequate |
d43ae55a3546 | 38EB926DE7F0 | If the author has told a fact they have had soemthing to support it. The author says a lot about the things we can't do with Venus and has something to explain why with it. The author had a lot of facts and examples to help him support his and NASA's facts and ideas. I really like that the author will also give statist... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
979be1d4bcbf | 38F506B031E1 | Facial Action Coding System I think is a good idea | Position | Adequate |
280cb078f9e1 | 38F506B031E1 | because if someone is trying to figure out how you are feeling and you don't tell them they can look on the computer and tell what your emotions are | Claim | Adequate |
4bb1674bb3e3 | 38F506B031E1 | . In the passage it tells that the computer is 3-D and has 44 major muscle. This tell us that if a friend is feeling a way you can tell and you would actually know itts true and not false. In paragraph one it explains to me that there are six basic emotions and they are happiness, surprise , anger ,and ect. For example... | Evidence | Adequate |
6cc385a3b9bd | 38F506B031E1 | When a student is looking at the computer they can pick up all emotions like if you have mixed emotions or just one. | Claim | Adequate |
fecd321a7589 | 38F506B031E1 | Someimes teachers want to know how they students are feeling but just don't want to walk up to the and just ask. This computer I think was a wonderful thing that someone can make. If I ever had this computer it would be very useful to me because want to know how others feel. | Evidence | Adequate |
17c78d2ac318 | 38F506B031E1 | Some people who try to just look at someone and tell how they are feelings is not always helpful they might think its one thing but its another. | Claim | Adequate |
360430e9b2b6 | 38F506B031E1 | Most people are not just good by going off someone's look but this computer can help out alot you don't need to try and guess what that person is feeling. Evan when some artist are trying to draw a ppersons emotion they don't always know either they would also need the computer . Dr. Huang says in te story that Da Vinc... | Evidence | Adequate |
627d56a525ad | 38F506B031E1 | If I was to get one of these computes i would like to use it on everyone around me because I love to see people happy and if they are not I would like to make there day. If I am taking a test and I get confused I know that the computers see that and the teacher would know and try to help me out a little. | Evidence | Adequate |
a9ffc370954c | 38F506B031E1 | Using these can help everyone out in so many differen ways. | Claim | Adequate |
16666c0dbb61 | 38F506B031E1 | Eveyone should have one of these or get an computer lie this one. If you really need to know about smeone you just would look on it to see what it is. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
41b5abbc3c7e | 38F506B031E1 | This would be good when a school have a play and the people that are watching them need or want to figure out how the characters feel. | Claim | Ineffective |
c9faafec8062 | 392CC0403D93 | Now a days in VAUBAN, Germany people living in these lovely suburbs are living without automobiles. This area specifically is now known as a car free zone, all except for a main tram that runs from Vauban to downtown Freiburg. Although there arent any cars running on the streets doesnt mean ownership isnt allowed, you ... | Evidence | Adequate |
cc1a910cec00 | 392CC0403D93 | Life for many people in Vauban is great because its the relief of no polution, the crashes and killings of pedestrians decreased greatly and just all in all less money wasted on gas.
| Claim | Effective |
47a85e95adc7 | 392CC0403D93 | Suburbs are used to great numbers of vehicles, just look at Chicago or Shanghai. A suburb is a place where many middle class families settle down and buy homes to live in. | Evidence | Adequate |
5fda565874fc | 392CC0403D93 | This being said cars help greatly reduce the gas fumes in greenhouses when they are banned and not being used | Claim | Effective |
fc3a7c5477cf | 392CC0403D93 | Just a slight percentage of 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe alone and greatly increased to 50 percent in the United States. | Evidence | Adequate |
06f50a3676a7 | 392CC0403D93 |
Vauban, home to 5,500 residents is very small due to the no car zone, what people dont know is within this city is closely compacted stores (walking distance for short travel) and other buildings. Most of the development since World War II is the basic structure of a car, focusing on a car was the biggest development ... | Evidence | Adequate |
cd91f604fdec | 392CC0403D93 | This banned vehicles and helped reduce smog. | Claim | Effective |
5d540f20d17b | 392CC0403D93 | Though the rain comes down constantly on Bogota it hasnt stopped them from participating in this event, the people of Bogota state "it helps relieve stress and lower air polution I like it."
Cali and Valledupar, two other columbian countries also decreased vehicle use. Many authorities from seperate countries took a b... | Evidence | Adequate |
dfb52f73adda | 392CC0403D93 | Studies in America state due to Obama's goal to lower greenhouse gas emissions is so fortuitous people of america are purchasing less vehicles, driving less and getting fewer licenses.
The United States being the worlds largest population of driving is coming to an end. The United States is so large in the driving ind... | Evidence | Adequate |
822f2b7223ea | 392CC0403D93 | Getting rid of the transportation which sociologists think will happen isnt going to get rid of all the gas emission due to power plants. | Claim | Adequate |
70a8ff0cd9d4 | 392CC0403D93 | New Yorks bike sharing policy and a Toll on bridges has greatly decreased driving in it. | Evidence | Adequate |
126ec8ba17ca | 392CC0403D93 | This all shows exact evidence of how the earth is trying to better themselves to get rid of pollution. Not because they are getting rid of cars, but because they are getting rid of cars and keeping people happy | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
96e12435da6f | 392CC0403D93 | Just remember, just because your forced to stop using a car doesnt mean you should give up and quit, just see it as a change in your life and a relief you are helping to make on earth. | Position | Ineffective |
5ca135166d84 | 392F93BC6499 | The "Evening Star" or otherwise known as Venus is a very dangerous planet. | Claim | Adequate |
290deee90061 | 392F93BC6499 | Despite the planet being close to us, we haven't sent any spacecrafts there in the past 30 years. The reason has alot to do with the fact that a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide covers Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venuss atmosphere.
On the planet... | Evidence | Adequate |
5892c135699c | 392F93BC6499 | With all that being said, why would we want to go back there. | Claim | Ineffective |
19c768b350fb | 392F93BC6499 | The reason is because Astronomers think that the Venus was once an earth like planet. They believe that Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Adding more into this is that today, Venus has some features such as mountains and valleys. | Evidence | Adequate |
086274e9b086 | 392F93BC6499 | NASA has come up with an idea on how they would live in
Venus safely and productive. | Claim | Adequate |
7afa81033d27 | 392F93BC6499 | The idea is to allow scientist to float above ground. About 30 miles to be exact. With them hovering 30 miles above ground they should be safe from the ground conditions. With that, NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus; such as an device that was used in World War 2 that calculates under high pressure of ... | Evidence | Adequate |
8810c8c8cf09 | 392F93BC6499 | I love the idea of going back to Venus and exploring because we are humans and we have an unlimited imagination. | Position | Ineffective |
6e4b18a5f824 | 392F93BC6499 | If we want to truly be a civilization, We should be at least a two planet species. Innovating and learning is how we got here. 100 years ago we made the first car. Imagine what life wil be like in 100 years. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
65fc26269012 | 396A37B6D921 | They say the facial expressions for each emotion are universal because even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression, the new emotion are facial movements for example the painted face from the Mona Lisa, we can identify a lot emotions as Vinci's masterpiece. Each expression is a neutral face. Of cour... | Evidence | Ineffective |
3d7f6561abd1 | 396A37B6D921 | imaginate if the computer know when your happy or sad, that well be so cool | Position | Adequate |
52649deccd9a | 396A37B6D921 | then you know if someone is sad and you can help him or you can know if this person is happy and he make you happy two | Claim | Adequate |
cd47f7c8370d | 396A37B6D921 | the can be great to create new stuff like videogame tv show and all kinda things | Evidence | Adequate |
f8231e1c0b5e | 396A37B6D921 | most human comunication is nonverbal, including emotionalcomunication, so that mean the computers have to understand that too, sometimes not only moving your facial muscles make make you express your emotion but that maybe make you feel them,making that can reveal sabout the science of the emotions. | Evidence | Ineffective |
2a2a4789aa50 | 399030918355 | Please come join the Seagoing Cowboys program! | Position | Adequate |
5a29969f7b45 | 399030918355 | You can tour the world while helping other countries! | Claim | Adequate |
85097d14a5b8 | 399030918355 | 'It is the most adventrous, exciting job you can possibly get, | Claim | Adequate |
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