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cf3a72ccb714 | A0448AC8783F | When you talk to more than one person, you know more the possible outcomes. | Claim | Adequate |
9fe43df88bd6 | A0448AC8783F | You always want to know the pros and cons of things, but it is normally hard to find them on your own. Talking to one person doesn't always help because they are also just one person | Evidence | Adequate |
495adb07657e | A0448AC8783F | Putting multiple minds together to think of pros and cons will give spectacular outcomes. | Claim | Effective |
3d85d38637bc | A0448AC8783F | Sometimes I need all the facts, pros, and cons. My mind and others needs help to come up with these pros and cons because we have a lot on our minds already about making the decision itself. We would be preparing to actually do it. I know I wouldn't be able to do it all on my own. I know I would need multiple people to... | Evidence | Effective |
87ab2c4ffc1b | A0448AC8783F | Everyone needs a support system, whether it's family or friends. When you ask for advice, you go to multiple people for help. You ask them for things to help you make your choice. I want people behind me to help me after I make my choice. If the choice knocks me down in any way, I want people to be there to support me.... | Evidence | Effective |
d96011785bb0 | A0448AC8783F | Talking to more than one person ensures that you have at least one person to fall back on after you made your choice. | Claim | Effective |
0435052c1740 | A0448AC8783F | No one knows if they're doing the right thing. Sometimes they don't trust them self, sometimes they're too anxious, and sometimes they just need more people to support them. Talking to more people helps you make the best choice. You know what you're doing is for the best. You know that you heard what might happen, you'... | Evidence | Adequate |
4f87e6b1e285 | A0448AC8783F | If you talk to more people, you trust them and yourself even more. You know what you're up against and you know what will come out of it. | Claim | Effective |
c3f08dc671db | A0448AC8783F | Asking more than one person for advice does wonders for you. | Evidence | Adequate |
48fcd9159064 | A0448AC8783F | After you talk to people you trust, you know what you're doing is the best you can do, and you know that your choice gives you the best outcome possible. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
f6697a3a0af9 | A2A749DEC4BE | As a consultant that helps other students with writing, I see many strange things from people with half finished essays. The one that grabs the trophy, however, was incredibly ridiculous. At the beggining of a students work, they talked about how Abraham Lincoln and George Washington had a conversation. Not only did it... | Lead | Effective |
2772da59a0c7 | A2A749DEC4BE | When you consult multiple people, however, the room for error decreases significantly. | Position | Effective |
a3a71f824ee6 | A2A749DEC4BE | For example, if you needed to write an unbiased paper on the pros and cons of making abortion legal, asking more than one person would limit the scope of the bias. If you only asked one individual, their statements could be tainted if they had a preexisting opinion on the topic | Evidence | Adequate |
bec14228ef1d | A2A749DEC4BE | . However, if you were to consult multiple people, the scope of the bias would be severely limited. | Claim | Effective |
92df141c713f | A2A749DEC4BE | The more people, the less bias you risk, so asking only one individual could end up ruining a supposedly unbiased report. Not only is bias a problem to consider when asking individuals, making sure their statements are accurate can be equally if not more important.
| Evidence | Adequate |
262e40d077cc | A2A749DEC4BE | When asking people for advice, you must always consider whether what they're saying is actually true. | Claim | Effective |
4dc0073f8985 | A2A749DEC4BE | Bias is incredibly important to weed out, but often fact checks can also help root out some bias too. Biased individuals are more likely to lie or include misleading statements in their advice. By discovering false or misleading statements, you can also discover hidden bias in the individual. None of us are always righ... | Evidence | Effective |
f9f5954942c5 | A2A749DEC4BE |
When attempting to rephrase a sentence that sounds strange or incorrect, or when trying to add more detail and glamour to an otherwise boring sentence, there is no right or wrong answer | Claim | Effective |
93e4c2c8120e | A2A749DEC4BE | Certain techniques may work better or worse, but there is never a fix all type solution. So when taking advice from someone who, for example, is helping you edit your paper, some things they say you cannot fact check with Google or a textbook. If you were to only consult this individual, they would have full control, a... | Evidence | Effective |
1b18d4ded5c0 | A2A749DEC4BE | Wednesdays, after school, I work as a consultant to the writing center. In the club, younger students, usually from seventh grade, come to get help with their writing from older, more experienced students. Many times, seventh graders come in with half finished essays that could barely be considered rough drafts, but as... | Evidence | Effective |
afbe770adc39 | A2A749DEC4BE | This is why we employ many talented consultants, so if one doesn't know what to do or accidentally makes a mistake, others can catch it and further assist them. | Claim | Effective |
38705533c079 | A2A749DEC4BE | Asking multiple people for advice, no mater the topic, is always an important and crucial step of the writing process. By asking multiple people, you assure the least bias possible, the highest form of fact checking, the best way to phrase sentences and other similar opinionated subjects, and you ensure none of those y... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
67f4437902bc | A5FBF588B2F4 | You should always seek out for new Idea's and opinions | Position | Adequate |
b6e6789c363b | A5FBF588B2F4 | Did you know that half of the top businesses in the world were not from the idea of the owner. It came from people with ideas and newly opened up opinions. | Evidence | Adequate |
af1c34ed3562 | A5FBF588B2F4 | When someone gives you an idea for a business there basically trying to help you | Claim | Adequate |
358ea2555e26 | A5FBF588B2F4 | invest in money or help you gain money for the better if the buisnes and the owner himself. Let's say a construction worker is about to go and build a house or another type of building you need someones opinion or idea to make sure your doing it right so therefore people can by your builing. People even need ideas or o... | Evidence | Adequate |
3495549b6ce2 | A5FBF588B2F4 | When people ask for advice the are asking for your opinion or how feel to feel about the subject the person is talking about. | Claim | Adequate |
ee3131c9b79d | A5FBF588B2F4 | When people bring up asubject about something you bring up more than one person because it was more then one persons Idea or opinion. Now that you cn see basically the whole world woudln't be what it is today if it weren't for idea's and opinions. | Evidence | Adequate |
89756fc21e89 | A5FBF588B2F4 | The are is never a bad Idea or opinion also every question that you ask is a good question | Evidence | Adequate |
672b9757ffbd | A5FBF588B2F4 | Things get built faster and even things get invented based off somobodys opinion | Claim | Adequate |
7698b7a80edd | A5FBF588B2F4 | Whenever you feel as if you need to ask a question go ahead and ask the question because there is never a bad question to ask because you might be on the verge of creating something new and just don't know it yet. | Evidence | Adequate |
d5af360d22a0 | A5FBF588B2F4 | Lots of eventers createed a lot things based on there opinion on something. Thomas Edison belived that he could make a ball of light and what did he do he mad the light bulb and every single house in the world that uses electricity uses the light bulb,I even got one at my house. Bengimin Franklin wanted to find out wha... | Evidence | Ineffective |
4224f5661433 | A5FBF588B2F4 | Now that you have seen all of the evidence, you know that opinions matter no matter hiw stupid you may think it is. You could be on the verge to something beyond great or even an inventer. Just know you opinion matters know matter what! | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
acd3ae1fd8ce | A66B5A9D1F00 | People ask for advice, because sometimes they can't make the choice on their own. It's also not a bad thing to do when you are stuck and need some advice from other people. When people make choices on their own and don't ask anyone for help, they tend to make a bad decision. Some people feel trapped when trying to ask ... | Lead | Effective |
03420028068c | A66B5A9D1F00 | Asking one person you trust for advice is something people do more often than asking multiple people. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c9dc703fb714 | A66B5A9D1F00 | But there is also a problem when asking only one person. If you truly trust that person, but they don't give you good advice who are you gonna ask then. The only person you told your problem to was that one person, so you don't have multiple choices like when you ask multiple people. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
bada6595713a | A66B5A9D1F00 | Plus, what would happen if that one person you trust doesn't what to help solve your problem, there is no one else you can ask for help if you don't ask them for advice. | Evidence | Adequate |
87486750c51a | A66B5A9D1F00 | if you ask multiple people you can see their advice from their perspective. | Claim | Adequate |
16cbce1a0435 | A66B5A9D1F00 | This would mean you would have a large variety of choices to pick from. | Claim | Adequate |
5fcf07e90506 | A66B5A9D1F00 | Advice from multiple people is better than asking advice from one person | Position | Adequate |
7a070925c879 | A66B5A9D1F00 | If you ask multiple people for help with your problem then they will give you multiple ways to solve it. | Claim | Adequate |
851c39766926 | A66B5A9D1F00 | if you ask one person for help they may or may not give you more than one way. For instance, if one of your friends give you a solution but you don't like that solution and is trying to do another solution, then you have those other friends you can ask. You aren't limited to how many people you can ask for advice. Some... | Evidence | Adequate |
b129f2f54d48 | A66B5A9D1F00 | The good thing about asking one person is you don't have to really worry about them going around telling that much people about your problem | Counterclaim | Adequate |
e8b6de8e7aff | A66B5A9D1F00 | . But with multiple people you have to remember who you told and tell them no to tell anyone. | Evidence | Adequate |
b14c70d7f213 | A66B5A9D1F00 | If you also ask one people and it gets to an adult, then you would have to explain your problem to them even if you didn't want to. Then word would get around that you snitched to a teacher and then thats how bulling starts | Rebuttal | Adequate |
0fe5f57bb4fa | A66B5A9D1F00 | So if your going to tell a teacher, say it anonymously so no one knows who said what. You also don't have to worry about getting bullied when you keep it to yourself. But sometimes, people can't do that | Evidence | Ineffective |
e74c8ebb2d89 | A66B5A9D1F00 | After you ask the people you wanted to ask for advice, your going to have to make a decision. Before you make a decision, you are going to have to think of the consequences. Consequences are the outcomes of your choices that you decided to make. There can be good consequences and then there can be bad ones. The bad con... | Evidence | Ineffective |
7c0d033b09b4 | A737705B81A4 | some people need help on choosing what car they hod get, | Claim | Ineffective |
7c4b581b638b | A737705B81A4 | like talk to other people on what places to go on vacation, | Claim | Ineffective |
405a0e3ab4a1 | A737705B81A4 | you can ask people about jobs | Claim | Ineffective |
9f91a16dcdaf | A737705B81A4 | it's good to ask more then one person for a opinion, for example seeking multiple opinions can help some make a better choice. | Position | Adequate |
859932287e64 | A737705B81A4 | Secant of all, some young adults need help on what to get like a car, or a truck. Other people need a opinion on if he or she hod get a house, or a apartment. But it is good to ask more then one person for a advise. | Evidence | Ineffective |
b76bde128462 | A737705B81A4 | Tear of all, talking to more then one person about a vacation is a good idea. Because more then one person has been that to the same places. | Evidence | Adequate |
61848019a0d4 | A737705B81A4 | Other thin is that you hod ask people opinions about work or jobs. And all so asking people for their advice is a good thin to do | Evidence | Adequate |
64a507e590cd | A737705B81A4 | some people may not gave you a good advice. But seeking for multiple opinions from more then one person can help you make a better choice | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2a4dcb70605b | A814BD710140 | "LET ME GO!" Generic_Name shouted. Generic_Name was struggling to escape the breath taking choke hold she was in. Her mind flooded with horrendous thoughts. Generic_Name's date was trying to kidnap her. While she was fighting for her life,all she could think about was how she regretted meeting up with this dangerous,st... | Lead | Effective |
77fc6c349463 | A814BD710140 | Seeking multiple opinions can help someone make a better choice | Position | Adequate |
e3d81fcab24d | A814BD710140 | by introducing their mind to different points of views | Claim | Effective |
ba37c1ebd28b | A814BD710140 | seeing how options weigh out, | Claim | Effective |
d64130a791d7 | A814BD710140 | gaining wisdom from others. | Claim | Effective |
53deb8a4ee09 | A814BD710140 | While making a decision, it is important to seek advice from others. Being introduced to how different people would handle a situation or make a choice, can help a person make a more beneficial choice. For example, if Generic_Name would have asked three of her friends how they felt about the dating app, the scary situa... | Evidence | Effective |
e72c94533f53 | A814BD710140 | To further explain,when you weigh out options you are determining how one decision or choice you make can be more beneficial than the other choice or decision. If Generic_Name would have went to a trusting adult or relative, they could have informed her about the pros and cons of dating apps. They could have informed h... | Evidence | Effective |
10c808e2e2cf | A814BD710140 | When someone shares their wisdom with you, it can alter the way you think or perceive things. All it takes is a wise individual to share their thoughts and advice with you, for you to make a better choice. Generic_Name could have possibly talked to her mother, or a wise person in her life and asked them for their intak... | Evidence | Effective |
ab7959348b4f | A814BD710140 | Sparkling lights filled the room while blush colored flowers made a trail down the isle. The room had a peachy aroma. People slowly entered the church and the murmurs of voices were filling the air. Generic_Name was in the back dressing room getting her large, white gown fitted on her body. She was getting married to t... | Evidence | Effective |
a3b6f6f9517f | A814BD710140 | Introducing someones mind to different points of views, seeing how options weigh out, and gaining wisdom from others are all ways seeking multiple opinions can help a person make a better choice. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
08d2889b3a0c | A9F45F81526E | Some people say the class for students in the home , online, or videoconference is benefic for students other people say this is the bad things for studednts because they no learn more expecific and they dont practice in the clasroom because in home some students not have apropiate thins for stade. | Position | Adequate |
c5c9c978be39 | A9F45F81526E | People say the classes from home is good | Claim | Adequate |
8acbb5636877 | A9F45F81526E | ecause some students they need work for something like some students they need pay rent , bills then if studen like that take a classes in the home they have time for work and they get the mone for you suport and they dont need go some school because the classes online is beter. but some students take classes in the ho... | Evidence | Adequate |
5c7d2787bb22 | A9F45F81526E | We can fine the reason for students take the classes online | Claim | Adequate |
0104bc297ba8 | A9F45F81526E | that reason are: some stundents not have the same posivilites like another students they can go school , other students work a full time they dont have time for go school everiday , and other student like caming in this countre the other countre some times theo have more the 21 years old then they cant stared school be... | Evidence | Adequate |
31f2493b1958 | A9F45F81526E | we have other reason the schools have this oportunities | Claim | Ineffective |
e083fb7d055c | A9F45F81526E | because some students they learning more the others, is like the leavel is hight then te school is ease then they chose take classes oline and this students is benefit they can work and they can hepl your family . | Evidence | Ineffective |
b4a808797f38 | A9F45F81526E | some people say the classes online, home , or video conference that not good | Counterclaim | Adequate |
4949fb0dde88 | A9F45F81526E | because some peolpe they dont take the classes and that is a one reason for people not have a good education but some boys when they have a classes oline they dont take and the time for the classes they doing other things and some times this thing not have a good ideas and some times people have problema or they intrev... | Evidence | Adequate |
e6566f556319 | A9F45F81526E | Other pepole saysome school not have this oportuniete take classes in the home or onlines | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0b21ee014eb8 | A9F45F81526E | but they have others choses like school in the night or after school. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
d5ab3362daa2 | A9F45F81526E | but when you in the group your work is more ease for you because you have other peoples and thye help you in thing a goods ideas and they can make a good work if you work only you need more time for doing you work and some times we can chese a good things and some times we need others opinions the other peoples. | Evidence | Ineffective |
653ae5b3150d | A9F45F81526E | i agree because some times the classes in oline make ease and is a good oportuinite for some students | Claim | Adequate |
f468627b6e89 | A9F45F81526E | for graduateand they can have a job, because some studen live alone and they need pay some bills then when take a classes online they have time for work and your life is more confortable,
| Evidence | Adequate |
7b453c44ab65 | A9F45F81526E | but this oportunities some times have a problems | Counterclaim | Adequate |
3f65282327ca | A9F45F81526E | because some people not have a the same beneficts and this people need other thins like others helps and i thing school need other things not onle classes online or classes in the home because they dont know how is the life te other peoples ans when school have a this thins like classes oline and classes in te home the... | Evidence | Ineffective |
1c4083c18aaf | A9F45F81526E | I have other opinion for the classes take in the home this classes not is for all students | Counterclaim | Adequate |
460864e83967 | A9F45F81526E | because some studen like your age is 12 in 15 they need take a classes in the school they dont need job because they can work for you age and this students they need go school for learning more specific thing and practice more in the class taht reason is because some times some guys not want to go school and they skip ... | Evidence | Adequate |
b2cdfb63524f | A9F45F81526E | All school have make a sure this oportunities is better for students for examples they know if students feeld good in home and the relation whit family is better some people when tehy have a problems they cant enfoques in you school and this is a problem when you need graduate if you take a classes in the school and yo... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
fd2c246223df | AB8EFBD82820 | When people ask for advice, they sometimes talk to more than one person. Since they might need help, and they might try to get the most advice possible | Lead | Adequate |
b77075daca9a | AB8EFBD82820 | I think taking advice from others is really helpful. | Position | Adequate |
c92b2252402c | AB8EFBD82820 | new ideas, | Claim | Ineffective |
50f21a2458bf | AB8EFBD82820 | different mindset | Claim | Ineffective |
bcdb6e47ede3 | AB8EFBD82820 | you can help others. | Claim | Ineffective |
199c53f48d58 | AB8EFBD82820 | One effect of taking advice is new ideas | Claim | Adequate |
347f023b6148 | AB8EFBD82820 | So, what i mean by this is you may have different look on things. math for an example you might be confused on how one person teaches it, but then go to a different person and they teach it a way you understand it. Also, it doesn't have to be about school it can be maybe your having a ruff time at home or something is ... | Evidence | Adequate |
3341ed062052 | AB8EFBD82820 | you can get a new mindset | Claim | Adequate |
8fa4cc7f8e96 | AB8EFBD82820 | Lets say if you were really negative and you went to go seek advice from from therapist. Then you can have a new mindset on how life is and possibly become more positive. Since now that the internet is a thing you can get advice on almost anything. I remember this one time in my life how i was really negative, and i we... | Evidence | Adequate |
98510222f9b8 | AB8EFBD82820 | you can help others. | Claim | Adequate |
50173395f418 | AB8EFBD82820 | I know what you might be thinking how does this have anything to do with taking advice from someone. Just let me explain. So, lets say if anyone of your friends is having a ruff time and you can give that said person advice. Also you can be a therapist yourself or a life coach. Thats the wonderful thing about the world... | Evidence | Adequate |
bff848f43029 | AB8EFBD82820 | Mots people usually ask for advice, and they will most likely go to more than one person. Sometimes a person might need help, and so they go to the most advice they can get. I think taking advice from others is helpful. The reason for this is you can get new ideas, a different mindset, and you might be able to help oth... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
e4fcd42de2f0 | ABBA50242CFA | Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. That might a good idea for some students but not all | Lead | Adequate |
b41fb6c752e4 | ABBA50242CFA | Today, many High Schoolers from the age of 15 to 18 have jobs. They work part time to help their parents pay for their phone bills, cars or something else. Sometimes they might want to work more, but school is 5 days a week, they have to do homework every night even on weekends. Going to work after school is very overw... | Evidence | Adequate |
79ad11f3d39a | ABBA50242CFA | So I think attending classes online or video conferencing help lots of students who have jobs. | Claim | Adequate |
2ce755cb5c43 | ABBA50242CFA | Staying at home and study is still better than waking up and getting ready early in the morning to go to school. | Claim | Adequate |
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