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dcf01e7f34b7 | 0D220BA8BA23 | In school can be used for give a lesson,because it will give examples of muscles on your face, | Claim | Ineffective |
8ef413ee3f02 | 0D220BA8BA23 | for example on of them can be orbiculris. It can teach the kids that good to show they emotions and how they show them and how they muscles act when they do them. Fothermore it can show the students that they muscles not only express emotions they can make them to. | Evidence | Ineffective |
741f06e649f1 | 0D220BA8BA23 | Also this can help with students that have problems in they houses and they try to hide they problems | Claim | Adequate |
1ed2e15cd4f6 | 0D220BA8BA23 | It can be also used for bullying to see why kids are quiet and scared. | Evidence | Adequate |
2c76406a236c | 0D220BA8BA23 | This experiment it can be help in differents part of the country no only in schools, it can help for example in hospitals | Claim | Ineffective |
eabb0cb543d2 | 0D220BA8BA23 | to see how the people that can't move they face or have a muscles problems can tell how they feeling | Evidence | Ineffective |
f3897da24ecb | 0D220BA8BA23 | It's always important to know how other person feel about, because if they sad or angry make them laugh so they can have a big smile in they faces. | Evidence | Adequate |
1b24924076f0 | 0D34A4F5331B | In that work we gonna explain, give ideas and talk a little bit about the problems at the study of Venus because that planet is very dangers to survival | Position | Adequate |
adde127a436e | 0D34A4F5331B | Though Venus is a "sister" of the Earth Planet is not the same, Venus is not safetly to people live in their | Claim | Adequate |
6cf0830530a1 | 0D34A4F5331B | because doesn't have the sufficient oxygen to survival. Thoughthe austronomers are fascined with Venus because is the most similar planet to the Earth. But this planet obviusly have a differents to Earth like, the surface on Venus temperatures average over 800 degrees that is crazy and impossible to survival and in ven... | Evidence | Adequate |
3a688cdcf413 | 0D34A4F5331B | A idea for the NASA from me to send people to study the planet, is implement a new jetplane more security for thr austronomers for they can survival and can study the planet. And a new uniform most special for the can have the capacity to survival that dangers problems at Venus. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d999c6b13523 | 0D34A4F5331B | With that work we can explain and understand better about the problems with that planet and have ideas to a better study. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
24a9efd1355d | 0D359BCEE452 | By the author of this topic is really persauding by true facts where it makes u think. | Position | Ineffective |
68f96e9f4780 | 0D359BCEE452 | During all this time all the best and expert sciencetist are working together to test a method nd see if we can live on that planet without dying or not producing food or water or even shelter. | Claim | Ineffective |
16b684a34bd9 | 0D359BCEE452 | While testing we figured out that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strike... | Evidence | Ineffective |
de25de69a05a | 0D359BCEE452 | So that is why I think during the proccess on living venus or in the future testing methods if we could live pn venus or see if we can grow crops or bring like equiment to test samples on we can evole on this planet near us. | Claim | Ineffective |
c6a4f7795d66 | 0D359BCEE452 | Even the thought of going to a new planet is a big turn of events because we dont know how its atmosphere works or gravity or air/oxygen or weather climate change or anything but we are learning about it really fast where we have to make a high expert group of people to risk their lives to see if we can produce our spe... | Evidence | Ineffective |
fec42e4977a1 | 0D359BCEE452 | in conculsion to make sure that we sure we dont make the smallest mistake to screw up the plans for us to live or visit venus in future but in mean time we have people training to become the best of the best for this secret peoject if it happens. So that is all i gotta say and i hope it does happen to make history on t... | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
0965b6fcca6f | 0D3AA8470CC4 | limting use of aoto-mobiles can help change the envierment | Position | Adequate |
059fe79384a4 | 0D3AA8470CC4 | just simply slow down the use of them | Claim | Adequate |
6dc198c1188b | 0D3AA8470CC4 | simply make green cars | Claim | Adequate |
f3a4e205bce4 | 0D3AA8470CC4 | which has great gass mileage and keeps the enviorment clean. Now some people are atill going to drive there big gas sputering cars around but only a few percent of people change how long you drive or what you drive it can really make a differnce on the world to day you could possiable be saving the next generation
So ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
ef1dc4d83f56 | 0D3AA8470CC4 | If you dont agree with me then why are you still reading go hop on your envirment killing machiens and ruin our lovely home called earth. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
3043c3d4bb98 | 0D45F6F0E185 | First of all, I feel like it's pretty reliable, | Position | Ineffective |
4d63277151ef | 0D45F6F0E185 | BUT one of the parts that threw me off was when Professer Nicu Sebe said that shes "83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry." | Evidence | Ineffective |
d4ffcca06f04 | 0D45F6F0E185 | Professer Nibu said the process begins when the computer construts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an "action unit. Then his friend Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists such as Dr. Paul Eckman, the creat... | Evidence | Ineffective |
e12660b040d3 | 0D45F6F0E185 | By using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks the facial movements in either or real face or painted picture of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions, each expression is compared against a neutral face. In fact, Dr. Huang said that we humans per... | Evidence | Ineffective |
511e2758dc5a | 0D45F6F0E185 | According to the machine if you frown at it, the next ad will be different. | Evidence | Ineffective |
80edf8211362 | 0D45F6F0E185 | I feel like a machine like this would be very useful for computers so they can track if a student is getting distracted, tired or bored, because I feel like it could give the student a warning or something to not fall asleep during a test. | Claim | Adequate |
c91ae1ac4e72 | 0D45F6F0E185 | And lastly, no, the expirement didn't really make me happy, I tried smiling and it felt awkward. | Evidence | Ineffective |
e5a06bcdc827 | 0D45F6F0E185 | According to the "Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion" moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but it may even help producethem in a way, | Claim | Adequate |
00248c5ce57a | 0D45F6F0E185 | which was very shocking to me because I never knew anything could work like that. Reading this article made me feel smarter in a way, learning something I've never heard or seen before | Evidence | Ineffective |
5da15662bc30 | 0D45F6F0E185 | But in conclusion I feel as if this article is helpful and should be seen to my peers. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
a565db498e4f | 0D6F9BEBACE4 | They caluclate Mona Lisa emotional they said that she has 83 percent of happyness, 9 percent of disgusted, 6 percent of fearful and 2 percent angry. The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles then Dr. Hung relies on the work of psychologists ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
652c5cf012cc | 0D7FAACC389B | I feel like that the use of the emotional expressions of students in a class room is not good. | Position | Adequate |
f2257406b14c | 0D7FAACC389B | First of all it is not 100% offical | Claim | Adequate |
700e99e89ff6 | 0D7FAACC389B | Second of all it could fill you computer with viruses. | Claim | Adequate |
6f294c4e5b7e | 0D7FAACC389B | last one is that it could be a lot of money to get in and most likly to fix it. It is a lot of work getting one of those and the thing is why buy it or even consider it, if it is not offical. | Claim | Adequate |
90deb85bcf3f | 0D7FAACC389B | The facial action coding system is not totaly offical. | Claim | Ineffective |
0f3ad1c8d4c4 | 0D7FAACC389B | In the story it says that it uses you face to tell what going on or something. They say that they can tell if it is a real smile or a fake one by your muscules. The muscles called orbicularis make croe's feet around your eyes, but then a fake smile, the mouth is streched sidesways using the zygomatic major and a differ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
2f783dfa9868 | 0D7FAACC389B | The fact that facial action coding system is basiclly thinking and telling you how to feel it doesn't really know what you really feel. | Claim | Adequate |
1813fe468ae8 | 0D7FAACC389B | I feel like sense the camera is always going to just be watching you to see what you are feeling that is creepy. Like it said it if thinks your happy when an ad pops up it's going to pull up more and more ads and you might even get a virus. It is going to end up making some damages to your computer. Most likely people ... | Evidence | Adequate |
951ec2c22e4c | 0D7FAACC389B | Sense it said that it will cost a lot of money to get it. I won't be fair if some schools have it and if some don't. | Claim | Adequate |
ee4f8da8e1fe | 0D7FAACC389B | The facial action coding system will be hard to get. Some school can just get enough for the basic's. If they can't even get enought to get one what if is stops working or something goes wrong. The people are going to have to find more moeny just ot fix it. Most likely, they are going to have to stop doing some clubs o... | Evidence | Adequate |
6c213c5ec564 | 0D89C8189022 | Computers can do many things for us. The idea that a computer can read your emotions is amazing | Lead | Adequate |
8cb9d52e5dd6 | 0D89C8189022 | I do not belive it is true. I will believe it when I see it. | Position | Ineffective |
92d390222e7b | 0D89C8189022 | In paragraph 8 it says " But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways ising the zygomatic major and different muscle, the risorius." however this may be true for most people; there has to be someone out there in our world of 7 billion that smiles there smiles with their zygomatic muscle or their risorius muscl... | Evidence | Adequate |
9cf5c25d26c7 | 0D89C8189022 | Everyone has diffrent emotions and everyone shows them diffrently | Claim | Adequate |
750d9f876e06 | 0D89C8189022 | The muscles in our face does say a lot about the emotions we are feeling. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d416222c15dc | 0D89C8189022 | I do belive to understand ones emotions it has to be very clear someone is sad, with tears, or you know the person well, In paragraph 5 the artical states " For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face." | Evidence | Adequate |
fe3cad0ebbb4 | 0D89C8189022 | In paragraph 3 it brings up "Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprised, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness" | Claim | Adequate |
12c7bd242708 | 0D89C8189022 | but there are way more than 6 emotions that can be reconized | Evidence | Adequate |
e0b67c3f7664 | 0D89C8189022 | This is why I believe computures can not read your emotions | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
edffcb0abddb | 0D91BAF9E8F6 | Luke wanted to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A cattle boat came up and gave him the opportunity to be in the Seagoing Cowboy program. Luke's friend inited him to go on the cattle boat because his friend knew he wanted to be on one. Luke's life changed right after graduation.
Luke did not know his life would change soon. It wa... | Evidence | Ineffective |
df4050e115ac | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | For students, summer projects can feel like a lot, summer break is supposed to be filled with fun times and vacations while projects are almost the exact opposite. Removing summer projects all together isnt an option, | Lead | Effective |
e6be044be148 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | so when it comes to the question "should summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed" teacher-designed projects reign supreme, as it benefits both the student and the teacher in multiple different ways.
| Position | Effective |
a7388b24b94f | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | As a teacher, your main job is proving students with a learning experience that will help them grow as people. Having a student design a summer project would not be nearly as powerful as the impact a teacher-designed project would. | Claim | Effective |
172974386dd1 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Teachers are well informed and know a lot more than most students and because of this it is their responsibility to provide a student with a project rather then have them create one themselves. This is especially reinforced in younger children, such as grades k-6, as they still need a lot of direction and having a stud... | Evidence | Adequate |
9e689c66b257 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Teachers have it difficult sometimes, as they are trying their best to provide students with a learning experience, but teachers also deserve to have their job be a little easier | Evidence | Adequate |
efee4263f461 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Creating a teacher-designed project as opposed to a student-designed one, would be far easier to grade and create a rubric for | Claim | Effective |
f0ab4586af84 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | . In student-designed projects you have a lot of variety and no one follows a central guideline, however in a teacher-designed project, you can maintain the variety but also contain a set of rules that benefits both the students and teachers, as the students have more clearly defined rules to guide and provide structur... | Evidence | Effective |
df0681b1771f | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Finally, teachers have everyone's best interest at heart when designing projects. Teachers will always design something challenging and beneficial to the students education. | Claim | Effective |
dd27b9c0336b | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Students, especially younger ones, cannot be trusted to design a project that would be as beneficial as a teacher-designed project. Students often take shortcuts or the easy way out and while sometimes this can be beneficial to the students and their education, it is more often harmful then doing it the right way and t... | Evidence | Effective |
ec0a648bf7c6 | 0D91FC8A9FE7 | Teachers play well informed, and important roles in a students life while they develop, and education is a very big part of student development so, projects should be designed with a teachers interests at heart. Because of that, when it comes down to it, teacher-designed projects are generally more helpful, easier, and... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
c011fa1feaf7 | 0DB48DDD9022 | I feel like I am for the value of this use of technology, because you can calculate other peoples facial emotions and your facial movements. | Position | Adequate |
8e6ac3f9c82b | 0DB48DDD9022 | I feel like if you can calculate emotions on a persons face you could understand that person better and what there feeling. | Claim | Adequate |
ec07e6ffe34e | 0DB48DDD9022 | You could do a 3-D model of the face and put in all of the muscles just like a human has on their face.
You could understand if their happy, suprised, or even sad. Your frontalis pars lateralis muscles ( above the eyes ) raises your eyebrows when your suprised or scared.
Your emotions could be all over the place.
Yo... | Evidence | Ineffective |
0d8a026f5b45 | 0DB48DDD9022 | This technology could observe how our face is formed in the future.
| Claim | Ineffective |
b8fc136de6aa | 0DB48DDD9022 | This new technologyis the same technology for making computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or surgery. " Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication " that Dr. Huang had. Computured need to understand that, too " said Dr. Huang.
Your personal computer can't handle the com... | Evidence | Ineffective |
0662a80017a8 | 0DB48DDD9022 | You sometimes has to ask yourself
" Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?" and " Can your lab partner recognize which one? " So I think that this technology is a good idea. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
f473bc4b6068 | 0DC3BDC76434 | In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit even with the dangers on the planet. | Lead | Adequate |
d9e071f47769 | 0DC3BDC76434 | Venus is the sister planet to Earth but the surface of Venus presents a challange to any living thing. Venus is also called the "Evening Star" despite it being a planet.
Venus is a planet that the most like Earth but we bearly studied it because we'll have to get on the planet to do so. Venus has around the same densi... | Evidence | Ineffective |
5939f4967636 | 0DC3BDC76434 | Venus is a worthy pursuit because the more we know about our sister planet the more things we get to do with it. | Position | Ineffective |
6c66de01c4d3 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | In the article it talks about a facon mars that has appeared on Viking 1 while looking for a place to land. | Lead | Adequate |
f9f421835316 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | The face is a natral land form | Position | Adequate |
76b01afb2bd0 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | because thats like saying our land forms were made by aliens and thats why we have mountains, valleys, and plains. | Evidence | Ineffective |
65d21b9d4f96 | 0DDCAFAEA487 | In the article it says "Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural land form. There was no alien monument after all.". | Evidence | Adequate |
b0b227b18b4e | 0DDCAFAEA487 | The article also states about the face on mars"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West." | Evidence | Adequate |
82a9c8075fde | 0DDCAFAEA487 | Another quote that proves this is a land form is "Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the Face on mars."The photo of mars is a land form because it says right there in the passage it is a lava dome and it is about the same hieght as the face on mars. | Evidence | Adequate |
9efad0507ecf | 0DDCAFAEA487 | In paragraph 6 it says "although few scientists belived the face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia bacame a priority fo NASA whe Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended." | Evidence | Ineffective |
1bccace3f49f | 0DEDD9E3222F | In this essay, I'm going to talk about the new softare, that is called the Facial Action Coding system, which can help the computer to knows if we are sad, happy or angry. Putting the example of the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's called Mona lisa. | Lead | Adequate |
7a7de1996f13 | 0DEDD9E3222F | this software is a very good idea, for the teachers and the students too. | Position | Adequate |
fa1e707f2eb9 | 0DEDD9E3222F | The software can calculate "emotions" like math homework. Just recognizing the subtle facial movemets that persons use to express how they feel. | Evidence | Adequate |
adb6388f044f | 0DEDD9E3222F | The new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application for a variety of industries | Claim | Adequate |
452001bee6fd | 0DEDD9E3222F | It's a new software that can recognize emotion, and it's the last innovation from prof. Thomas Huang and his colleague Are experts that are trying to do better ways for human an computers to communicate. This process begins when the computer does a 3-D model of the face; creating at least of 44 major muscles making it ... | Evidence | Adequate |
b81bcd8815a2 | 0DEDD9E3222F | A big example is The subject of Leonardo da Vinci's, Mona lisa. Da vinci studied anatomy to thelp them paint facial muscles for paint special emotions | Claim | Ineffective |
9353d4a72337 | 0DEDD9E3222F | This subject is really intented to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how this can computer can do. Your PC can't handle the use to decode Mona lisa smile. But this invent can write down simple instructions that "encode" differet emotions. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a si... | Evidence | Ineffective |
efdcd98a5652 | 0DEDD9E3222F | This software makes the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused, then it could modify the lessons, like an human | Claim | Adequate |
705fc0d85749 | 0DEDD9E3222F | It can indicate the difference between a genuinie smile and a forced one. To finish with some cientifics conclusions and understand better your boddy. According to the Facial
Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not ont only express emotions, but also may help produce them. A example is when a drama ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
95f0b7da38ab | 0DEDD9E3222F | In conclusion a think this is a good idea, because you can problably know when a friend is feeling just looking on his face, so imagic that a software in your computer can know that | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
2cdb5b6334a1 | 0E185FDC7CCE | May 19,1950 9:30 A.M.
"Wow, I Just had a dreamed about when I started to become a seagoing cowboy, man those were the doy days." "Well time for breakfast" I said. Then Like went downstairs and ate some bread. Then I went outside and went to the store and buy some food. Then he went to his family's house to talk to som... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b268a5cdbe72 | 0E424AAB5B39 | In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents | Position | Adequate |
2a0276ca69cb | 0E424AAB5B39 | because In the text it states that venus is actually a planet and venus is the second planet from the sun. The text also states that venus is simple to see from a far distant. Finally, it says that numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study in etc. If you look back in ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
916d7ff46b41 | 0E424AAB5B39 | In conclusion studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because if you just reread everything in this passage it's basically telling you alot of information about venus. If you look back in the passage in read paragraph 8 it's giving you information about venus it says that venus has value, not... | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
77e0ed938496 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | There are many dangers that come along with studying planets. Along with the dangers, there are also countless benefits to learning more about different planets. In the passage, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author addresses the point that Venus is worth taking a closer look at and focusing on, no matter the ... | Lead | Effective |
b00f58b5d941 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | Although many people believe that the author doesn't support this idea well, the author provides researched evidence and past experiences all throughout the passage to support this idea. | Position | Effective |
e24a1a6ee50f | 0E49EB72AAA4 | In, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author includes well researched evidence to support the idea that Venus is worthy of studying further. | Claim | Adequate |
2cd53d75a9e7 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | When explaining NASA's ideas on sending humans to Venus, the author states, "NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray." This provides evidence that shows what a solution is to avoiding some of the difficulties that occur when trying to exp... | Evidence | Effective |
7b369889decf | 0E49EB72AAA4 | The also supports his idea of studying Venus depsite the dangers because he includes past experiences that make this idea stronger. | Claim | Effective |
b526ae19cda4 | 0E49EB72AAA4 | When explaining past explorations to Venus, the author states, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." Facts that have been presented that occured in the past help the author support his idea that there is reasons why people should look... | Evidence | Effective |
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