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02d69134b7ad | 6D7E6399624E | I know from those four words in the begining of the quote that this passage tells me everything that i need to know about this technology. It also leaves me without worries and question but the need to use it. | Claim | Ineffective |
4893236b8bbc | 6D7E6399624E | Fourth, another evidence that i can use that supports why i am for this the quote "The software is the latest innovtion from " just from this quote i can support why i am foe the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions | Evidence | Ineffective |
32f5d089309c | 6D7E6399624E | because i no that what ever company or what so ever this project will definently be graet and will as much as it is expected to do great | Claim | Ineffective |
4ac892e2a3b7 | 6D7E6399624E | Another reason why i am for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions is the text states "While looking at the mirror :......1....2...3...... does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?
Can your lab partner recognize which one........accordig to facial feedback.....". | Evidence | Ineffective |
19554e873e1d | 6D7E6399624E | Also this quote " Who ever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotion! | Evidence | Adequate |
35cd74b9a57a | 6D7E6399624E | from this quote i can say that people can't just understand your emotions and how you feel because of your face expression so that is wy their is a need for a technology that is thrustfull and has been developed with so much knowlege to help with all that and the curiusity of how someone feels from their facial express... | Claim | Ineffective |
97f73f7191ca | 6D7E6399624E | To conclued i would definently say that i am for the valueof using this technoogy to read sudents emotonal expressions. This technogy is the latest technology so i can count on its new developments. This techology has been created by many developers many universities, many proffesors so am for sure that they made it th... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
50890d23ce7e | 6DAE6E1E7492 | venus is one of the brightest points of the light in the night sky making it simple for an amaterur stargazer to spot. venus is a planet that you can float on and its the second planet from are sun it has proved a very challenging place to examinr more closely. People call venus the earth twin because venus is th close... | Evidence | Adequate |
813b281e4d4f | 6DAE6E1E7492 | venus would be a nice planet to study because i feel like is has alot of interesting things to know about like whats in it i would study a planet like venus and the size of venus is simular to the earth so it would be nice to know a place close to the sun | Position | Adequate |
06d6f1233745 | 6DAE6E1E7492 | The part about being in venus it is 97 percent carbin dixode its more. challenging then are clouds and it live closer to the sum the. the earths does. Venus has the hottest temperature of any planet in the sloar system its hotter than mercury amd mercury is closer to the sum them venus is beyond hight temparture venus ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
4700f88252d9 | 6DAE6E1E7492 | Venus is a very challenging place to go in visit Venus because the human ceriosity. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
a38808220eed | 6DEFC88D4E0B | Imagine its a new school year and your principal his gone on the annulment to say that he his decided that all students must participate in one extracurricular activity like sports baseball,football, work on the year book, or do a book club. Some people might be mad look upset because they donôt feel like choosing o... | Lead | Adequate |
f6452aab2720 | 6DEFC88D4E0B | I agree about must participate in one extracurricular activity | Position | Adequate |
c348cd0f3e70 | 6DEFC88D4E0B | I can make newer friends or the new comer can make new friends easier | Claim | Adequate |
1910fcdd2186 | 6DEFC88D4E0B | it give us some thing to do while we wait until our parents comes home. | Claim | Adequate |
6814f92ba8e4 | 6DEFC88D4E0B | Your parents or teacher might say say hi and you might mike a new friend that half a lie to me it easier said then done. Now you donôt know how people will react to a samples hi,hello,or sup they might give you a a sink face or a nasty face but having some activity you can make some that like to do the same activity... | Evidence | Ineffective |
0c57d605d7c0 | 6DEFC88D4E0B | Having these activity give them time to go home and do what they got to do I know most of those activity ends at five or six and sports ends at seven sometimes. That give to time to make dinner or whatever go home eat do homework go to sleep or chill easy as that. | Evidence | Ineffective |
bae4d569b96e | 6DEFC88D4E0B | having these activity help our parents and it help us that why I have agree with the resins that every student must participate in one extracurricular activity because it help us make new friends i believe it will make it easier and give our parents enough time to get off of work and do what they got to do. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6d30671f6bc3 | 6DF04169C765 | The " Unmasking the Face on Mars" was NOT created by Aliens. The Face on Mars is just a natural landform. | Position | Adequate |
3ed2cbf38eec | 6DF04169C765 | because the Face on Mars looks just like a natural face | Claim | Ineffective |
67aa4e625c70 | 6DF04169C765 | there is no eveidence that Aliens have been on the planet Mars, | Claim | Adequate |
6f55e01c2133 | 6DF04169C765 | and some Scientist from
NASA is only saying its an alien artifact because it'll benefit NASA in the long run | Claim | Adequate |
2bf18e173313 | 6DF04169C765 | The Face on Mars looks just like a natural face. | Claim | Ineffective |
1359bc6cfd8b | 6DF04169C765 | Also, its just a natural landform. In paragraph 3, it restates, "huge rock formaton . . . which resembles a human head . . .." The illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth, which was created by shadows. So, the Face on Mars has human characteristics. | Evidence | Adequate |
4c22d2e5ab57 | 6DF04169C765 | NASA is only saying its life, and also saying the face was created by Aliens because itll benefit them in the long run. | Claim | Adequate |
21d5122e4171 | 6DF04169C765 | In paragraph 3 it even says, " The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars." Then in paragraph 4 it restates, "It certainly did!" Meaning, the engagemnet to the public and on Mars worked. Now, that NASA discovered the Face on Mars, it has become a pop icon, starred in ... | Evidence | Adequate |
ad6d17a40467 | 6DF04169C765 | There is no evidence that Aliens have been on the Planet Mars. | Claim | Adequate |
14442d050972 | 6DF04169C765 | It says the Face on Mars resembles a rock formation. Then. the shadows gave it eyes, nose, and a mouth. It says nothing about
Aliens creating the Face . Although few scientist believe the Face was an alien artifact, many still believed it was a real Human Face. | Evidence | Adequate |
7bd3c5557cfd | 6DF04169C765 | When, the MOC team snapped a picture . . . thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a website called JPL. The JPL website revealed a natural landform. Finally, there was no alien monument after all.
| Evidence | Adequate |
c2dc5eb097cc | 6DF04169C765 | In conclusion, The Face on Mars is a just a natural landform. First, The Face on Mars looks just like a natural face, there is no evidence that aliens have been on the Planet Mars, and NASA is only saying the face was created by aliens beacuse it'll benefit them in the long run. So. there is no way Aliens could have po... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
6e97df00a1f9 | 6DFB980B835D | Have you ever wondered what it's like having to complete school assignment's over summer break? Chances are, probably not. Many schools are now requiring for summer assignment's to be completed, but the real question is should those assignment's be teacher-assigned or student-assigned? | Lead | Adequate |
c32d4dfa532e | 6DFB980B835D | These assignment's should very well be student-assigned. | Position | Adequate |
ea3425661a31 | 6DFB980B835D | Letting the student choose their own assignment is a wonderful idea because what they choose is likely something they won't have a hard time completing and they're also still getting some sort of education. | Claim | Effective |
b9deb25228ac | 6DFB980B835D | Student's can still have fun over the summer while learning and preparing for the upcoming year. | Claim | Effective |
84eeffb2d82a | 6DFB980B835D | A student-designed project could also let the student work on their own time and pace because during the summer most people are out on vacation and don't have time to complete schoolwork. | Claim | Effective |
ba9b5c3664d9 | 6DFB980B835D | Student-designed summer assignment's would result in a relaxed, but still productive and educational summer that will help better prepare student's in the upcoming school year. | Claim | Effective |
56bbde45b686 | 6DFB980B835D | Summer project's should be assigned by teacher's and not student's because of the lack effort the student's will put forth. | Counterclaim | Effective |
bbdb585137fb | 6DFB980B835D | Having to do schoolwork over the summer is one thing, but making the work student-assigned is whole different ballgame. If the student chose what assignment's they would have to complete over the summer they most likely wouldn't finish it or not even look at it let alone take it out of their book bags. Teacher-assigned... | Evidence | Effective |
cae482dbfea2 | 6DFB980B835D | Put yourself in a young students' shoes, you're in school for nine months and you finally can relax, go home, and just enjoy your time off because you did great during the school year and you deserve it. Then your teacher mentions summer assignment's that will be designed by him or her. The assignment's will likely be ... | Rebuttal | Effective |
7ff56d6d1568 | 6DFB980B835D | Allowing the student to choose their own assignment's over the summer is great because they have no excuse to not get it done. | Claim | Effective |
f9584bfc3282 | 6DFB980B835D | The student would be working on their own time and not on any teachers'. During the summer when people are on vacation and need time off its a great idea to allow student's to get work done, but also have time to do what they desire over break. There's nothing better than working on your own time, having fun, and still... | Evidence | Adequate |
aecce3e7d871 | 6DFB980B835D | The effort given in a teacher-designed assignment versus a student-designed assignment would be completely different. You're likely thinking a student won't do their work if it was up to them and not the teacher, | Counterclaim | Effective |
cda4fc7ebb04 | 6DFB980B835D | but that's false.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
8bfc8c8e3c63 | 6DFB980B835D | A teacher-assigned-assignment forces their student's to do schoolwork that they're just doing to get done or because they have to, not because they want to learn. In a system like that you dont learn anything and you especially don't have much fun either. Student's should learn to have fun but also want to be eager to ... | Evidence | Adequate |
1d06fb0bfe48 | 6DFB980B835D | A student-designed project would not only get them more prepared for the year ahead but would also give the kid's time to enjoy their summer and also learn at the same time. | Claim | Effective |
718cbe91c2db | 6DFB980B835D | Lastly, student-designed summer assignments would result in a relaxed, but still productive and educational summer that will help better prepare student's in the upcoming school year. | Claim | Effective |
dea1cd804f8e | 6DFB980B835D | Over the summer student's need time to just be kids and hang out, instead of stressing over a teacher-assigned project that is a overwhelming load of schoolwork. Working on your own time and choosing your own assignment is genius because you don't have to worry about anything or anyone else but yourself which would res... | Evidence | Adequate |
eefcc87a0cbc | 6E154A9B7943 | Today, the majority of adults own and operate cell phones on a daily basis, such as, texting, calling, and being on social media communicating to one another. But while using a cell phone while driving in the other hand is utterly dangerous | Lead | Adequate |
3d7a26391ddf | 6E154A9B7943 | First of all, you're not supposed to have your cell phone out when driving in the first place! | Position | Adequate |
497a2f849127 | 6E154A9B7943 | This increases the risks of an accident, and worst case scenario, death. Anything can happen if you look away even just for one second off the road. | Claim | Adequate |
34a13466bda5 | 6E154A9B7943 | To begin with, let's talk about our senses really quick. We use our eyes to see, ears to hear, hands to touch, tongue to taste, and nose to smell. When we are driving we mainly use our eyes, ears, hands, and feet. We use our eyes to see the road, as well as other cars. For our hands we use the steering wheel to maneuve... | Evidence | Adequate |
34b047227c32 | 6E154A9B7943 | For example, if we were going to make a call/text on the cell phone, you will lose all of those abilities, because you are distracted doing two or more things at once. | Claim | Adequate |
2fd99ffb2c8d | 6E154A9B7943 | In addition, the Hands Free Georgia Law states, "all drivers operating a motor vehicle on any highway of this state are prohibited from: Holding or supporting, with any part of the body, a wireless telecommunications device or stand-alone electronic device." | Claim | Adequate |
54ba12b1a3c9 | 6E154A9B7943 | This emphasizes that the driver is not allowed to write, send or read any text-based communication, including a text message, instant message, e-mail or internet data, according to the Georgia Department of Driver Services. | Evidence | Adequate |
4f79ba12254a | 6E154A9B7943 | Lastly, this goes for the same as drinking and driving. Any alcohol consumed inside your body will greatly be affected in your driving ability. The Alcohol Rehab Guide claimed that, you'll have a "slow reaction time, lack of coordination, reduce concentration, decrease vision, and inhibit judgment." These are ways alco... | Evidence | Ineffective |
5f66a0497694 | 6E154A9B7943 | On to the dangers of using cellphones while driving. The General Cell Phone Statistics reports, "that cell phone use while driving leads to 1.6 million crashes each year. | Claim | Adequate |
dae9f383e745 | 6E154A9B7943 | Nearly 390,000 injuries occur each year from accidents caused by texting while driving. 1 out of every 4 car accidents in the United States is caused by texting and driving." These are numbers people need to start realizing that your life is more important than being on your phone communicating to someone else when dri... | Evidence | Adequate |
28dc36fa32f2 | 6E154A9B7943 | In conclusion, using your phones while driving is prohibited. Based from these reports, there were evident factors to the point that cell phone use while driving does cause accidents. Therefore, that's why we have laws to prevent these irresponsible acts. Together we can end these numbers if we just take more control i... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
30b769bdc4a4 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | The use of this technology to reaf the emotioanl expressions of students in a classroom is valuble. | Position | Adequate |
c7987d1f403c | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | BecauseEckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger,disgust, fear, and sadness and then assocaited wach with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. In a real face or in printed face. | Evidence | Ineffective |
da9eadb5f6b7 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | Using a software can read someones emotional expression of a student in a classroom | Claim | Adequate |
422bf598473e | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | You could also look at someone and maybe guess how they are feeling | Counterclaim | Adequate |
52a3a43a7c97 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | You dont always need a software to figure out how someone is feeling. And you can tell how someone is feeling by the feedback that they give you | Evidence | Adequate |
c854f46bca11 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | At least according to some new computer software you can recognize emotions. The software is the least innovation. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
7da62b412335 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | The process begins when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. In fact, we humans perfoorm this same impressive ''calculation'' everyday. It could be hard to figure out someones facil expression but using thast software could help you figu... | Evidence | Adequate |
0bd97cafe4d5 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | A classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored. | Claim | Adequate |
aafdc7271b28 | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | There are a lot of examples in the text like there is one that talks about your frontalis pars lateralis nuscle which is above your eyes. This is technology is valuable it gives lots of good way you could read or figure out someones expression or feeling. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
daefb7cf749b | 6E1B4AF3CDC3 | You could argue that the use of the technoloy is valuable cause maybe they used that to make Mona Lisa Smile thats the name the article. So they could've used that as a advantage. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
c4c7ab479906 | 6E3219126915 | Having children partake in extra curricular activities can help your children, become more sociable, and become more involved in their schools. After school programs are also very good at helping new students become more integrated into the school system. By partaking in extracurricular activities you can meet new peop... | Lead | Effective |
0d50fb7a1c03 | 6E3219126915 | Children all over the world participate in extracurricular group activities. For example young children in Switzerland have little after school groups called "Horts" where they eat together, clean together, finish homework together, and play together. Those "Horts" can form life-long friendships and form even closer bo... | Evidence | Effective |
130bf89328f3 | 6E3219126915 | by partaking in extracurricular activities, your child can form stronger bonds, stronger friendships, and even new friends as well.
| Claim | Effective |
4ebd5c690b13 | 6E3219126915 | extracurricular activities can help children relax, and in some circumstances, they could potentially help children improve their grades. | Claim | Effective |
d59ba87bc889 | 6E3219126915 | one of the best stress relieving thing you can do is to exercise, but most people don't like to exercise because they don't think its fun. But if you exercise with friends, then it can be really fun, because generally everything you do with friends is more fun than doing anything alone. So by joining a sports team you ... | Evidence | Effective |
70e3a54f4571 | 6E3219126915 | Now some people may ask, "What if my child doesn't like sports?" | Counterclaim | Effective |
134b104867e9 | 6E3219126915 | You can tell them that not all after school activities are sports related, and so instead of making your kids play sports try letting them pick what they want to do. There are so many good clubs and organizations to join in school so why not take advantage of it? For example you could join the yearbook committee or joi... | Rebuttal | Effective |
651a8601f8b2 | 6E3219126915 | by having your children participate in extra curricular activities, the experiences that were gained, would be so rewarding in the end for growing children. In my opinion extracurricular activities are great places for children to discover who they are, what they like, what they want to be when they grow up and so much... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
63a68ea3bf82 | 6E3219126915 | I believe that all students should participate in extracurricular activities because they can help children like me discover who they are. | Position | Effective |
e849a9f06a99 | 6E534D6E2282 | Some people like to drive while otherss don't | Lead | Ineffective |
14306141e5bf | 6E534D6E2282 | some countries are making bans or just limiting the usage of cars. This can have more advantages than disadvantages. | Position | Adequate |
febd2031d823 | 6E534D6E2282 | When people drive cars they let out pollution into the air which harms the atmosphere. | Claim | Adequate |
bee9c44f1819 | 6E534D6E2282 | The advantages to this is that if people don't drive that much anymore the pollution can be stopped at a certain point and cause no harm anymore of course the air might still be polluted but with a less perentage. People would definitely use money on something else thtne to try and get the new car or just use it on gas... | Evidence | Adequate |
4929b97c5e99 | 6E534D6E2282 | the peoplw in the community could stop spending more money due to cuts in the job. | Claim | Adequate |
f90fbf3b8ae8 | 6E534D6E2282 | They waste money on gas on new cars, etc. When really you could be doing something bttter with taht money. | Evidence | Adequate |
8fa6c88fe942 | 6E534D6E2282 | Most poeple dont even really need cars they use them for the heck of it. Teenagers use it just to go around with friends or go to work but really they could limit that use and find another way of transportation. This isn't saying to just stop using your car but just findfing a way to say that if you dont really need yo... | Evidence | Adequate |
a54b2f761390 | 6E534D6E2282 | I say that there are alot of advantages to limiting the use of cars and we could most definitely make more. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8f970885529d | 6EA56718315A | In paragraph 2 the author states that all the trips to the planet have been unmaned for a good reason the spacecraft didnt last longer than 3 hours thats why it dangerous and hard for us to study the planet. The planet woud be fun to study but almost imposible the temperatures are over 800 degrees fahrenheit that would... | Evidence | Ineffective |
660b73b64a05 | 6EA56718315A | The planet is so attracting to NASA because the planet is related in shape in form they belive it could have had oceans and could have supported some form of life. The earth is are closes planet and it know as earths twin. | Claim | Adequate |
01d096bfb3fb | 6EA56718315A | NASA claims that a trip to venus would be possible, hard but survivable. | Position | Adequate |
b7cb8bbbfe23 | 6EA56718315A | The problem is with the plantes surface being so hot that they would not be able to take samples of rock or gases so what would be the point. They are working on something that would make the spacecraftes last longer in these conditions so they could retrive samples. They have some projects in the works that have laste... | Evidence | Adequate |
60fa97e793c4 | 6EA56718315A | It could be possible but we will have to wait to find out. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
17b9a1615e2c | 6ED32B9136F8 | Have you ever thought of being a Seagoing Cowboy. | Lead | Ineffective |
f29c3c5fe363 | 6ED32B9136F8 | When being a Seagiong Cowboy "It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs." (from paragraph 9) | Evidence | Ineffective |
bc7585967b78 | 6ED32B9136F8 | You didn't just see the world you go and help it. | Claim | Adequate |
4687757fb8bb | 6ED32B9136F8 | It is a dangerous job though. "One rainy night, after making my hourly report to the captain, I slid down a slippery ladder on my backside. My heart raced as I shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped my slide, keeping me from flying overboard into the dar... | Counterclaim | Adequate |
cc4466a21f46 | 6ED32B9136F8 | In the process we do have a little fun when we aren't doing much. | Claim | Adequate |
56a8310c507c | 6ED32B9136F8 | "I found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys and I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed." paragraph 8. That was some fun on board we do to pass time. Since we were around the world we could go cite seeing... | Evidence | Adequate |
f87d093c12fc | 6ED32B9136F8 | you should join | Position | Adequate |
35ed42219a4d | 6ED32B9136F8 | When you do this it's adventurous, scary, fun, and amazing. Those words explain it all. So join the Seagoing Cowboys. If you don't you would be missing on a great oppurtinity. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
73118bddf1bf | 6F8200CADE90 | The Facial Action Coding System technology that let you reads emotional expressions of students. | Lead | Adequate |
b7be39d653ff | 6F8200CADE90 | I strongly disagree with this statement | Position | Adequate |
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