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86c3689a1d60 | 9263362F551D | NASA has been working on technology that could survivle the harsh conditions of Venus. | Claim | Adequate |
b1075bbc70b2 | 9263362F551D | They have been testing silicon carbide electronices. NASA been trying to make a blimp-like vehicle that could protecet the astronots that are in it. Scientists have also been working on mechanical computers. | Evidence | Adequate |
e45533c36723 | 9263362F551D | The blimp-like vehicle can be used as a research area as well as a living area for the astronots. It can go higher in the air meaning it can avoid the storm, earthquakes, and erupting volcanoes. NASA has not found a way to use the vehicle to help reasearchers get samples from Venus. Scine they are in the air above the ... | Evidence | Adequate |
16e27871e7fa | 9263362F551D | They have been fooling around with silicon carbide electronics.
| Claim | Adequate |
407eaa65212a | 9263362F551D | NASA and its scientists has been useing silicon carbide electronic in a testing chamber that is set like Venus. This new technology could be used on Venus when NASA figurs out a way to increase the survability time of silicon carbide electronic. They have not figuer it out yet and could be decades before they figer it ... | Evidence | Adequate |
5386c05c8fac | 9263362F551D | They also have one more item they have been test that is mechanical computers. | Claim | Adequate |
51600171c45e | 9263362F551D | We used mechanical computer in 1940s dring World War II. Scientest think that we can make the parts immune to Venus's harsh conditions. They could be made to resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. This is one of the of projects that will hopefuly beat Venus's challenges. | Evidence | Adequate |
0f72d11d6d97 | 9263362F551D | There are three ways NASA has been try to beat Venus challenges. We have yet to try them on Venus. If one of this ways works we have the satitfation of completing the challenge Venus gave us. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8e25c9872665 | 928548A07586 | What if I said that there are computers that can identify students emotions during class, well if you thought that was fake its actually real! Recently we've made this new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that allows computers to show human enotions and even things like paintings. For an example we use... | Lead | Adequate |
0bccde1c5fcc | 928548A07586 | Those are things that can be cool to find out but it can also can be really valuable in a classrom. | Position | Adequate |
ba3d046f90ca | 928548A07586 | For a classroom it can valuable like after lunch every student must use it before starting class to check how they're feeing. | Claim | Adequate |
5163378d908e | 928548A07586 | It will very useful if a student is sad or angry percent is high. It can give the teacher a reasoning to go up to the student and ask, why are you sad or why your angry. It can be very valuable like if a student just went through a terrible situation and the teacher can try to help cheer them up. | Evidence | Adequate |
9e0c52183e69 | 928548A07586 | One downside is that it can give out a students business and if like a student is sad, it can become a joke to the other students and make that student even more sad. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
ec8ee59d5b1a | 928548A07586 | It also identify if your making a fake smile or not as it can tell by how you make your smile like, if you make a fake smile your mouth is stretched sideways, as in a real smile your zygomtic major(that begin at your cheek bonees) lift the corners of your mouth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9e295c335f2a | 928548A07586 | This technology might be seen as a joke, but it can be very valuable in a classroom. It would be helpful if classrooms to get a hold of it as it could benefit the students. Most students are not always happy in school and this technology can be the one to help that not be a case. Teachers can now help the students get ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
9f30f5b90b18 | 92909B8C3BF4 | Im going to tell about how the author of the article ''The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is trying to convince people to explore and stuying one of our 8 plants called "Venus". | Position | Adequate |
702115cbf83a | 92909B8C3BF4 | He starts off by geeting in detail with describing how vevus is by stating " Venus sometimes caleed the Evening Star,is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,and saying venus is the second plant fro our sun. Earth in terms of density and size,and occasionally the closet in distance too. He also discribe... | Evidence | Adequate |
24d38cc40251 | 92909B8C3BF4 | The author also gets into some math into this by breaking down some percentages that venus has compared to other plants by saying. "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus ". he also says that one the plants surface , temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and theatmosphere pres... | Evidence | Adequate |
671813568a89 | 92909B8C3BF4 | Venus has the hottest surface tempertature of many plants in our solar system, even with mercury being closer to the sun. He basically telling us about the percentages and the deepest amont of venus and other plants we didnt reaserch about. | Claim | Adequate |
c650d319a0a3 | 92909B8C3BF4 | In more of the storyhe tells you the things yo are exprcted to see on venus. Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth. The planet has a surfae of rocky sediment and includes familiar features suck as valleys, mountains, and craters. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4b7297d28019 | 92909B8C3BF4 | He changes the subject and goesminto the NASA and how they have ideas on sending humas to study venus | Claim | Adequate |
48da06d63b49 | 92909B8C3BF4 | he describes how going out there would be like by saying imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above theroiling venusian landscape. Also at thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but tha air pressure would be close to that of sea level on ea... | Evidence | Adequate |
b8abd32853ee | 929CEA8DDB32 | Cars can be great or bad, many places are banning days of driving to slow down the inevitable of car fumes in the enviroment. | Lead | Adequate |
599ff23d6cad | 929CEA8DDB32 | Advantages include | Position | Ineffective |
c2f0a18a42db | 929CEA8DDB32 | a healthier way of life. | Claim | Adequate |
5a076144e572 | 929CEA8DDB32 | Walking makes you healthier, and so will the cleaner air. | Evidence | Adequate |
83ada2774225 | 929CEA8DDB32 | Creating less polution in areas in good for the enviroment. | Claim | Adequate |
8e2d8e304495 | 929CEA8DDB32 | Global warming is real, and it is slowly happening. And cars are major factors for the cause. Some citires are taking action to this by banning driving in some way shape or form. This actually helps bring down smog. Paris saw the difference in only a few days! | Evidence | Adequate |
21646cb11101 | 929CEA8DDB32 | Less polution is happemning because of the new bans of cars in some places. And people are loving it! A more healthier lifestyle is now being used. Less polutiion more healthier for you and for Earth. It wont let me leave this page, im confused. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
dd35a0f6272e | 93203D30E46D | Would it be cool if you a computer can tell if you are actully smiling in a picture or if you are faking it? Will now therei is it`s called,"Facial Acton Coding System" as transfered too FACS. In the aticle Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D`Alto this commputer likewise tells us your emotions. And you muscules on your fa... | Lead | Adequate |
e67b6bf638e6 | 93203D30E46D | In the article This computer FACS can tell us how your muscles can helps the omputer with the emotion you are feeling. In the article on paragraph 3 it says "Eckamn has classified ix basic emotionsa-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movement of the facia... | Evidence | Adequate |
dff865659d1a | 93203D30E46D | FACS loooks your face muscles to indecate what your emotion and true emotion in front of the video you are showing. It can tell if you are happy, sad or desgusted. | Claim | Adequate |
598e9501cc1e | 93203D30E46D | FACS can also tell emotions just like on your face musles. | Claim | Ineffective |
492cad373651 | 93203D30E46D | In the article in paragrph 4 it says," the new emotion-recogniton software tracks these facial movement- in a real face or painted face of Mona Lisa"(4).This new computer can even exam you emotions on your face like it did on ona Lisa. Also, FACS even works on painted faces. It can tell if the painting of the persons f... | Evidence | Adequate |
13065e243768 | 93203D30E46D | Another thing FACS can recongise what your face is doing face. In the article in paragraph 6 it says,"if you smile when a wed ad appears on you screen, a similar ad might floow. But if you fron, the ad willl be different. "A classrom computer could recongize when a students is becoimg confused or bored"(6). | Evidence | Adequate |
994c8828d93d | 93203D30E46D | FACS is a really cool computer that tells us what on your face how it reacts and recongise the face expression you can give in a classrom. | Claim | Adequate |
75dcb5aa5ba2 | 93203D30E46D | Inconclusion, FACS is a computer to set a facial action coding sytem to know if your expression. Also, it`ll know if you are faking it by your face muscles. It recongize your expressions you can give druning a class. FACS also works on paintings. | Evidence | Adequate |
b72c70ff77dd | 93203D30E46D | This new FACS computer is a really cool new technology system used in Advancd Science at the University of Illinois. | Position | Adequate |
b50c843b00a9 | 939718B6780D | in germany people dont have cars like they do in america. in germans people have to have a big place to park there car like a large garage. but i it costs 40,000 dollars to buy the garage. so 70 percent of germany doesnt have a car.
on monday motorists are told to leave there car at home or there is a 31 dollar fine. ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
521c797ca2b2 | 9399DBE21A35 | Why would you want to limit car usage. | Position | Ineffective |
314a916b09fb | 9399DBE21A35 | When you use your car people are making money. People need a car to far away places fast. cars are expensive, thats because people keep adding on to it and making it more fancy and of corse its going to be more expencive.
If you limit cars most gas stations would be going out of bussniess and car places. gas stations ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
70407739def3 | 939C163906D1 | In the booming world today, transportaion is essential. Trying to imagine life without cars for some people is like trying to imagine life without food or water, but cars arent ass essential as we think. | Lead | Effective |
bee2d02e7422 | 939C163906D1 | But even if you drive a smart car or hybrid, emissions from these cars still affect the world around us. Lowered car use would help this improve. | Claim | Effective |
76520f950f6c | 939C163906D1 | Using less cars would also have more benefits for all of us. | Position | Adequate |
faa6f4d7843c | 939C163906D1 | People in a samll town of VAUBAN, Germany have already stopped use of cars. People report to be "Happier without them." | Claim | Effective |
ee9c3684a249 | 939C163906D1 | In Paris, France, the warm days and cold night would trap the smog in the air. in order to reduce the amount of smog in the air, on monday drivers with even-numbered liscense plates had to leave their cars at home or face a $31 fine. Then on tuesday, motorists with odd numbered lisence plates had to do the same. This l... | Evidence | Adequate |
b2c2f2262d60 | 939C163906D1 | Less cars mean less greenhouse gas emissions, which inturn help our environment. It also leads to less stress and deaths among the people in the city. Less cars are the future of our world, and its not too late to start to help our environment and to help better ourselves. | Concluding Statement | Effective |
e73e04923cfa | 939E66CC3A0C | Do you love drive? Well some poeple do and they just don't like to drive every day to work. | Lead | Adequate |
90d3fd32757a | 939E66CC3A0C | first thing if people don't want drive they could just ride bike to work that help them with exerics. | Claim | Adequate |
d3ae7b1dffa9 | 939E66CC3A0C | Also they don't know that the gas is ever high and they can't affored it and that why they walk or ride the bike.
Another reason is that 27 people had there can impounded or on side of the road becuase they ran out of gas. when you drive and you see your gas meter and it on the E and your car just stop and you about ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
68617b658bbb | 939E66CC3A0C | they should make sidewalk for people that want to walk to school,home,work,or freinds house. | Claim | Adequate |
74ad762263fe | 939E66CC3A0C | Well if they family want to go on a trip to see there grandma then they can take there car and go see her. And what ever car you got please look for the limit becuase some car drink gas and then you have to fill it back up again. If it was just less driveing they approach stores,and other thing that they can walk to. I... | Evidence | Ineffective |
1032ddd06455 | 939E66CC3A0C | I think people should stop drive becuase you really don't need to drive every day | Claim | Adequate |
0438cddf0186 | 939E66CC3A0C | about 4,000 people don't have there license and the drive. if you drive and it cold you should trun a on the heat to low becuase heat will messup your emission. and that why i should think that people should walk stead of drive all the time. | Evidence | Ineffective |
d2cfa7ec85aa | 939E66CC3A0C | We all the people should just say that Monday,Tuesday,Wensday we all should drive to school,work or where ever and Thursday,Friday,Saturday they should walk to work or take the bus. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
07cbd87bf1f2 | 939E66CC3A0C | the people should drive less. | Position | Adequate |
484a18ec1b6e | 93E10E079796 | The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by saying ,"Venus is Earth's twin and closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size". | Position | Adequate |
7bda35e7d0e0 | 93E10E079796 | In the article it says that Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus is the second planet closest to the sun and because of that the tempetures in Venus are way different than Earth's tempetures. | Evidence | Ineffective |
a6d89ec00934 | 93E10E079796 | But some people or scientist actually belived theres life in venus just like earth but alot different because in the article it says," Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varios forms of life, just like Earth | Claim | Adequate |
8a3966db5f63 | 93E10E079796 | Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth for example theres surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. | Evidence | Adequate |
55207172e5c0 | 93E10E079796 | Even people think that Venus is probably our nearest option for a planetary visit just like in the article it says," The National Aeronautics (NASA) has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus" | Claim | Adequate |
3207ece73e26 | 93E10E079796 | NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. | Evidence | Adequate |
bef6af7dd655 | 93E10E079796 | Since Venus is the second closest planet to the sun the tempetures are really hot, compared to Earth's tempetures. Its so hot the tempetures in Venus are like 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0d8bcfeaead6 | 93E10E079796 | But Earth and Venus are two planets that probably had same features along time ago and that we all know theres alot to discovered in our solar system and thats what i think the author was trying to support. And mybe it might happen in the near feuture and discovered more about Venus but for right now only time will tel... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b2e55e4a3632 | 946C874A9CCD | The science of emotion recognition is complex and is becoming exponentially more complex the further a topic is being disscused. In the realm of arguing weather the use of emotional recognition technology should be used in a classroom can be a very difficult tquestion. On one side, you can say it may invade privacy, bu... | Lead | Effective |
1bc721ff070f | 946C874A9CCD | In my opinion, this technology should be implemented into classrooms internationally | Position | Effective |
491f978bf6d4 | 946C874A9CCD | because it will help students learn more effectivley, | Claim | Effective |
82e82e53b689 | 946C874A9CCD | also it will enhance the teachers teaching ability when they know where they're students are going array. | Claim | Effective |
11d6eb110587 | 946C874A9CCD | This technology could be very benificial for students across the globe. The ability for a piece of technology to understand your emotions could come in handy. There are many outgoing students, but there are also many introverted students. Some students may not feel confident enough to ask for something to be repeated, ... | Evidence | Effective |
fc0af8816e6e | 946C874A9CCD | Becuase of this ability for teachers to understand their emotions, the quick turn around of revisiting the topic and teaching it a little differently could help the students absorb all the information, especially the information that they mau have not conprehended initally. | Claim | Effective |
371776aacec9 | 946C874A9CCD | This technology will be very valuable for the students for both their enjoyment throughout school becuase of the reduced stress, and their improvents in acedemic grades. | Evidence | Effective |
16d62f95611f | 946C874A9CCD | This technology is not only bennifical to the students, but to the teacher as well. For the teacher they will automatically know if a student is struggling and in what topic. | Claim | Effective |
ffc1db7d12a6 | 946C874A9CCD | Thius could be very valuable to create a strong teacher studnent realtionship where the teacher is able to understant the smallest change in emotion to when they're confused or if they understamd it. This relationship could improving the learning environment and how comfortable a student with their students and peers. ... | Evidence | Effective |
7dcb626786b6 | 946C874A9CCD | Initally one may think that this technology is redundant and that a teacher could just help the student, and that it may be invading the students privacy. | Counterclaim | Effective |
75c1715083e6 | 946C874A9CCD | In reality, this technology continues to prove its many values, and it's evergrowing amount of benifits that completly overpower all the ideas that some may think its unnimportant. | Rebuttal | Effective |
7518e863c188 | 946C874A9CCD | This technology is valuable to both teachers and students equally. The teachers are able to improve their teaching techniques and the students understand more in school. This technology, however, is nowhere near done. This technology can be further improved in many aspects. I could keep improving and always creating a ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
3ba9ba531a14 | 9483857CAA80 | Have you ever wonder if someone is lieing?! Well their is a new technology software that can decode how other people are feeling. | Lead | Adequate |
5098562be10d | 9483857CAA80 | Using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable | Position | Adequate |
cb1a7ddd75ed | 9483857CAA80 | Since it can let you know when someone is lieing | Claim | Adequate |
dde687fbe9b4 | 9483857CAA80 | or needs help from the teacher when its afraid to ask | Claim | Adequate |
2d527d86e10d | 9483857CAA80 | also when someone has worries about something. | Claim | Adequate |
b9771f1f24e0 | 9483857CAA80 | "The Facial Action Coding System enables comuters to identify human emotions." | Evidence | Adequate |
6a48a517d86d | 9483857CAA80 | This system can be very useful for school class rooms since it can detect when someone is lieing. | Claim | Adequate |
88abc480395d | 9483857CAA80 | Because the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; with all 44 major mucles in the model move like human mucles. | Evidence | Ineffective |
eadc336ac4c4 | 9483857CAA80 | That "classify the six basic emotions like happiness, surprise, anger, fear, and sadness, which then assosiats with each characteristic movement of the facial muscles."
| Evidence | Ineffective |
cfb771662888 | 9483857CAA80 | Or it can let you know when it needs help and he/she is a afraid to ask. | Claim | Adequate |
35852d101bea | 9483857CAA80 | Its like when you look at someone and see that they are sad or happy. It can detect an espression like that. "Now imagine a computer that knows when your having trouble." | Evidence | Adequate |
eddc91ca8b23 | 9483857CAA80 | The most important thing is letting your teacher how you are feeling, she can help you out when you are worrying. | Claim | Adequate |
74a245cc0e9d | 9483857CAA80 | "The facial expression for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show a varying degrees of expression." In a why in which you can help express them. | Evidence | Adequate |
d5932945bcd6 | 9483857CAA80 | That's why Facial Action Coding Systems sould be used to read emotional expressions in classrooms. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
aa824b0ad72b | 94A8B4DE1712 | If you dont have a car you will reduce greenhouse gas | Claim | Adequate |
3ff39076e0d6 | 94A8B4DE1712 | it will rudeuce accitents | Claim | Adequate |
c58dd2c584b6 | 94A8B4DE1712 | less people willl be fined so tht means more money for you. | Claim | Adequate |
6939b05ca083 | 94A8B4DE1712 | congestion was down 60 percent so thats good in the capital of france after five days of intensifying smog. cold nights and warms days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. the united states has a program called the environmental protoction agency is promting car reduced communities and, ligislators are... | Evidence | Ineffective |
44c37eec0044 | 94E1D46A0544 | The principle wants all students to take at least one extracurricular activity I agree with the principle | Position | Adequate |
ce04c8d99535 | 94E1D46A0544 | having one will help you real under stand to manage your time wisely,and it can help you under stand how you spend your time. | Claim | Adequate |
3a1f5fd20578 | 94E1D46A0544 | My opinion is if he makes this a requirement for students will have a better chance to succeed in the real world with what they learned for example managing,and learning the value of time will help you make the right chooses. | Evidence | Adequate |
117f2f26c5d7 | 94E1D46A0544 | One reason I agree with the principle is that studies have shown that have done a extracurricular are the most likely to succeed in life cause they have learned the too most important things in life to me is what you should use your. Time on or what is worth your time not much people know this | Evidence | Adequate |
820b182dba6a | 94E1D46A0544 | Second reason I agree is that time is priceless it is not infinite people dont know how much time they really have therefor its better to make the best of it before its all gone therefor the people who have chosen to use there time. Wisely they have much more time cause they have done what they had to do getting more t... | Evidence | Ineffective |
e0a65575ce28 | 94E1D46A0544 | Final reason is managing time is what you need for jobs therefor if you are learning it early own the essayer it is,and to lost of people this is a great skill to have therefor this quality will get you many jobs since you know how to. Work your schedule therefor there work on time team projects have time on your sched... | Evidence | Adequate |
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