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7780fafecac8 | A7D201133DAD | limiting your car usage benifits you and the environment. As quoted in the essay people express how they feel less stressed from not using their cars. Countries and communities around the world are taking part in less car usage and feeling great from it. So i advise you do the same and help yourself and the environment... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
205eca5ce254 | A831BFD2DCBE | In this article or passage the author idea was to explore venues more find out what are it values. because if earth would suffer a damage of nature venues would be the only safe place for humans | Position | Ineffective |
71bd7e0438e8 | A831BFD2DCBE | but first of all water got to be in venues in other for human to stay a live why because us the human ca not live without whater why because we need it to drink it also we need it for our crops to grow an give us fruits and vestables for our food. scientist think that onces there was water in venues if fresh air could ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
0d533b922879 | A8A25F94F5B6 | i think we should use the facial action because you can go anywhere and see how pepole are today to see if they are mad or angery sad and etc | Lead | Adequate |
c99f472853b9 | A8A25F94F5B6 | The facial action coding system should be use in class room | Position | Adequate |
de7dfe99709d | A8A25F94F5B6 | we can see how student are feeling and to see if they are having a good day or a bad day | Claim | Ineffective |
3688b96a110d | A8A25F94F5B6 | we can use the facial action coding system to see there facial expersion to every student in class | Evidence | Adequate |
9a8d4979f3f7 | A8A25F94F5B6 | in a way did making a happy face make you slightly happy in the artical it tells us by making a happy face your muscles not only expresses emtions but they will also may even help produce them | Evidence | Ineffective |
a4324d4876a9 | A8A25F94F5B6 | Yes we should use the facial action coding system in schools or anywhere in stores,work,airports so we can see how peoples facial expresions are | Claim | Adequate |
2f8fc0a649c5 | A8A25F94F5B6 | so we can see if can help them or talk to them so they can have a smile on there faces | Evidence | Adequate |
1a78b0489850 | A8BBE9026DC2 | I would like to talk to you about car-free cities it is about 70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars and another thing about this article is tat 57 percent sold a car to move to german and that in 2006, the united states was to seperate suburban life from the auto as a componenet of traveling and another word f... | Evidence | Ineffective |
de970ad3347b | A8C8456C352B | My claim for this story is people are trying see how are people feeling in a picture and trying to hdie thir emotions | Claim | Ineffective |
0e19484df565 | A8C8456C352B | My quote from the story is "Imagine being able to dectect exactly how other people are feelings, even when they are trying to hide their emotions.
Mona Lisa is in the picture, she 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. At some schools there are some computers sofware that can re... | Evidence | Ineffective |
3363d78e8320 | A8C8456C352B | My conclusion is to find someone feelsing is look ing at their face and their hai and how their face looks. Just like actors be doing reproduce smilling and frowning. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about... | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
95e350f58b01 | A8D21847EA6D | The author explains to us how worthy it is to study Venus | Position | Adequate |
bceaa92d9ddf | A8D21847EA6D | for example in the articel he claimes that Venus has so many features like earth | Claim | Adequate |
8a4ee6f480e8 | A8D21847EA6D | for example like an ocean or a mountain he alos said there could even be some type of life form that could live there. | Evidence | Adequate |
7c7746ca4f8f | A8D21847EA6D | There has been more and more people wanting to study this because of the fact that this one day might become another earth that we can live on and form some type of life on there but people have to test it out to see if we are able to live there for example to see if any animal life form can live there or even start br... | Evidence | Ineffective |
333b0c18295e | A8D21847EA6D | The big issue though is that the tempture gets really high like around 800 degrees for example it siads that "Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volecanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightn skrikes to probes seeking to land on its surface." | Counterclaim | Adequate |
c99e4c532238 | A8D21847EA6D | For example in paragraph 5 it saids " The National Aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA's possible solutions to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle ... | Evidence | Adequate |
0888cbb38c3e | A8D9AE4B4259 | Imagine this routine. Wake up, go to school, come home, do homework, go to bed, repeat. Sounds boring right? But somewhere between those steps, imagine doing an activity that you love. Makes it a lot more fun doesn't it? | Lead | Effective |
1dd150545579 | A8D9AE4B4259 | I believe that all students should participate in an extracurricular activity | Position | Adequate |
617f902b896d | A8D9AE4B4259 | it helps them try new things, | Claim | Effective |
e01b0b58dfab | A8D9AE4B4259 | I am also in an extracurricular activity, | Claim | Ineffective |
d7dd7ac8f201 | A8D9AE4B4259 | it allows people to focus on something besides schoolwork. | Claim | Effective |
89a46f8bbf62 | A8D9AE4B4259 | It's hard to try a new thing because it's scary to get out of your comfort zone. But very soon, it can become enjoyable and fun. Meeting new people is always a great thing to do in an activity. The students will get new friends and it will let them have someone to do the activity with. In activities, a lot of people co... | Evidence | Adequate |
d7f10fc31cc5 | A8D9AE4B4259 | I am involved in dance and it has really helped me become a more diverse person. | Claim | Adequate |
d82e2f2ef1d8 | A8D9AE4B4259 | I have been dancing since I was three years old and I only did ballet back then but as I got older I started more styles such as tap, jazz, lyrical, musical theatre, contemporary, and I still do ballet. Doing all of those styles has made me a versatile dancer. On average I dance about 14 hours a week and it's incredibl... | Evidence | Effective |
f2b0f995f036 | A8D9AE4B4259 | A lot of people just go to school, come home, do homework, and then just sit around doing nothing. It's get boring but activities let students do something fun. Schoolwork can become stressful if that's all that someone does. Sometimes focusing on something else can help take their mind off of it. Extracurricular activ... | Evidence | Adequate |
ea8675ccdb7a | A8D9AE4B4259 | it's clear that out of school activities are great for students because it helps them try new things, I am in an activity and I love it, and it allows kids to do something besides schoolwork. I think that all students should do an extracurricular activity that they love. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
96a38b6b6b7f | A8FD11F16108 | This painting is was made a long time ago. Many people found this painting weird because, back then there wasn't a lot of people happy, also poor. So when you see this picture this girl is happy and looks like she has nice cloths on. People took this picutre into inspiration. And brought a lot to the picture. | Lead | Ineffective |
a6734981cd68 | A8FD11F16108 | In my perceptative I like this idea but then I don't | Position | Ineffective |
80ad55198ef5 | A8FD11F16108 | It is pretty nice that we have a software that can be able to do something like this. it is pretty cool to tell people that we need a picture of you or someone and we will see how happy you are, how mad you are, etc. But I'm really not for it that much. There can be more things we can do instead of doing this. But doin... | Evidence | Ineffective |
337c01b0b038 | A8FD11F16108 | In paragrpah 5 it states that people can tell how your friend is feeling simply by the look on their face. I totally agree with it | Claim | Ineffective |
40a1719f82d2 | A8FD11F16108 | If this is your best friend and they are the same to you when you see each other you should smile. But when they don't and still look down then you know there is a problem. Friends are there for each other. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1f7b6bfaa00f | A8FD11F16108 | One thing that I argue about this is on paragrpah 6. When you are happy then when a ad pops up then it should be happy. Same way if you were mad then a mad or something down ad will pop up. I don't really agree to this because when people see ads they dont really pay attention to ads. When they see an ad they look at t... | Evidence | Adequate |
03aaeb48cac5 | A8FD11F16108 | I don't like the idea that computers should have computer appresions on what we do.
| Claim | Adequate |
b803e205c10d | A8FD11F16108 | This article is very good. I like this but of coarse there are some down falls to everything. I like how they did this software on "Making Mona Lisa Smile" becuase this picture inspired other people. But the computer expressions isn't a good idea. They aren't doing this for a good cause. When people have a chance to sk... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a6089cd3d385 | A90D70556372 | Do you think that a new technology called Facial Action Coding System an enables computer to identifyhuman emotions can tell your emotion.? I think that its true because you can look at someone and tell how they're feeling. | Lead | Adequate |
0aa50ff78411 | A90D70556372 | In my mind i think i can tell how a person is feeling. | Claim | Ineffective |
4e27518bb124 | A90D70556372 | If it happy, sad man depressed, or even just trying to hid it. Even your friends and family . For example in the article it says " In fact, we humans perform this same impressive " calculation" every da. for instance, you can oribably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of cours, most of us wou... | Evidence | Adequate |
28cf681399ae | A90D70556372 | So yes i think that this technology can tell emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. | Position | Adequate |
5ffa3174b1d4 | A90D70556372 | some students get bored easy and with technology like this it could helo that from happening. | Claim | Adequate |
51231f2cf2f4 | A92899103F3B | How can a facial action coding system can identify a persons initial facial exspretion? Well what it does and how it can be helpful, useful and then it can solv a lot of mystreys in some cases | Lead | Adequate |
1b0cb0140c50 | A92899103F3B | If somebody can tell what feelings there exspressing can be helpful in a way by telling somebody like a doctors that studys people when there just angry, sad or happy. | Claim | Adequate |
3a97f49cdc23 | A92899103F3B | that tecnology can help when others are in a certain state of depresion and that certain somebody doesent want to be noticed that machine can help with a person they may commit suicide. When no one knows it but the machiene can tell if there just trying to put on a good face over a really bad time. So then how can it b... | Evidence | Adequate |
3f1644083158 | A92899103F3B | If this invention coms out permanatly that it can show a poll of how kids view homework and then show how some people view work places | Claim | Adequate |
1c2800226088 | A92899103F3B | If they are dicustuing or just p a place you dont want to goto. Then it also solves the basic stuff like make face detecting how people fell about some presidents andit can solve cases if a person was happy or he was mad to tell if a person was a killer or not | Evidence | Ineffective |
65015f4c08ed | A92899103F3B | in conclusion I think it is very useful in my opinon and I hope they make more of these inventions | Position | Adequate |
eb86df0d1283 | A93C6DA5B026 | The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by explaining and reasoning about Venus. Venus is a simple to see from the distant. Each previous mission was unmanned. Venus is a challenging planet and no spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. | Lead | Adequate |
7347d687f57b | A93C6DA5B026 | I believe that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of dangers | Position | Adequate |
d702136f9c56 | A93C6DA5B026 | because it's a challenging place to examine more closely | Claim | Adequate |
73cc29785747 | A93C6DA5B026 | has different speeds | Claim | Ineffective |
36e655f2dee7 | A93C6DA5B026 | and the atmosphere and heat | Claim | Adequate |
fbd1b19bc333 | A93C6DA5B026 | Venus is sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one of the brightest points of the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. Venus is the second planet from our sun. The nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. | Evidence | Adequate |
fd05399b59af | A93C6DA5B026 | According to Paragraph 1 it says that, "While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely." | Claim | Adequate |
8af57d74b046 | A93C6DA5B026 | This quote states that Venus is danger and challenging to observe. | Evidence | Adequate |
3c40b1414288 | A93C6DA5B026 | Venus is oftened referred to as Earth's "twin". Earth and Venus orbit different speeds. | Claim | Ineffective |
f057d93cd864 | A93C6DA5B026 | These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world. Each previous missions was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived ... | Evidence | Adequate |
f759f2da52db | A93C6DA5B026 | A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on our own planet | Claim | Adequate |
a4d851197ce6 | A93C6DA5B026 | These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Venus does not have any easy conditions since it's dangerous but survivable for humans. Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. | Evidence | Ineffective |
54f2bc2867f1 | A93C6DA5B026 | Strivinng to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insi... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b07e9e674227 | A954E3B54194 | Brock was walking in the woods along the creek. At the edge of the water, he saw something that made a body type figure. Brock went down to see if it was a body, but when he got down there, it was really hard to see if it was a body because of the running water. He went back up to where he saw the body, and he coud see... | Lead | Ineffective |
9e2272ac1207 | A954E3B54194 | I believe that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform | Position | Adequate |
01d540bf3e1d | A954E3B54194 | because it isn't an alien formation, | Claim | Adequate |
a15ac899493d | A954E3B54194 | you can see what it is made of, | Claim | Adequate |
24d67c572682 | A954E3B54194 | there are other landforms that may look real, but it isn't real.
| Claim | Adequate |
a02c58f1263c | A954E3B54194 | One example that proves my claim is that the author explains in the excerpt that it isn't an alien formation | Claim | Adequate |
055b9501bfaa | A954E3B54194 | The author states that Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. This photo revealed that it was just a natural landform, not an alien monument. The author also states that it has unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. | Evidence | Adequate |
98720b9308e9 | A954E3B54194 | Another example that demonstrates my claim is that according to the author, you can see what it is made of | Claim | Adequate |
abd746024340 | A954E3B54194 | The author shows that the huge rock formation, which resembles a human head, is formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. The author also states that Garvin said, "as a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size, so if there were objects in this p... | Evidence | Effective |
ac015a8babf1 | A954E3B54194 | A final example that proves my claim is that the author demonstrates that there are other landforms that may look real, but it isn't real | Claim | Adequate |
e5fbc44ca2e8 | A954E3B54194 | The author states that scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa when the face appeared. This shows that they have seen things like this before and they knew that it wasn't real, or alien like. Another example that the author proves is that Garvin said it reminded him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain ... | Evidence | Effective |
0914d32c02c9 | A954E3B54194 | Now I hoped I gave you enough information to convince you that the Face is just a natural landform, and not created by aliens. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
8fc6076391ef | A969E6903C17 | In the article ''Unmasking the Face on Mars''
NASA talks about how a spacecraft was circling the planet mars snapping possible landing sites for another spacecraft. When it suddenly spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face it seemed to be smiling back at the cameras. | Lead | Adequate |
7a77954db9ce | A969E6903C17 | The likeness face of a human most of been a rock formation as said in the article or a landing of an spacecrft or even from a take off but there so no such thing as aliens that would do that or they don't even exists. | Position | Ineffective |
16e230cfeeb3 | A969E6903C17 | They even mentioned in the artilce how the cameras on board of MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face clearly | Evidence | Ineffective |
92e1f57c2fa7 | A969E6903C17 | but skeptics a different thing. That pobably aliens makings were being hidden by the haze. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
a859274af260 | A969E6903C17 | Which were not likely it could of been the air,because the human like face was located in the north martian latitude where it was already winter. It could of been the breeze from the snow. | Rebuttal | Ineffective |
e7c492a08e2e | A969E6903C17 | Who would think that aliens would do that if they knew we were going to spot it evenutly. | Claim | Adequate |
0ed5776ee8f4 | A969E6903C17 | The picture that was taken in 2001 was more bigger and more proseize on what we would of been looking at then it was in 1976. The picture that was taken in 2001 made people see that there was nothing to worry about and that it was just a rock looking like a face. People even made it famous without knowing what it was a... | Evidence | Ineffective |
eb31e2996064 | A96CC7C93B2A | Having th advantage of source the population with no more cars is what i would have done. | Position | Ineffective |
c2fc62a7c3b5 | A96CC7C93B2A | With more people driveing behind the wheel what would happen next if you step on that road to get across while a person is driving behind th wheel over 90 miles an hour. | Evidence | Ineffective |
975a172c6a53 | A96CC7C93B2A | In the U.S. there are people dying of accidents | Claim | Adequate |
b8a4a0453d34 | A96CC7C93B2A | drunk driveing traffic and so much more that you dont know of. How much more will suffer if a love one is dead lying there on the ground in front of your eyes in tears beacuse that person was killed by a non licesend driver. | Evidence | Adequate |
dcca3a36006c | A96CC7C93B2A | Its rough trying too get scool in the morning know what will happen when that person is behind the wheel. A deer might jump in the way while it just got done eating its meal. Scary is what i will say it really is when you are in a situation like that once in your life. | Evidence | Ineffective |
6591634b714f | A96CC7C93B2A | People need tranportation in this world to get to places all around. | Claim | Adequate |
fb4b9f9ab967 | A96CC7C93B2A | From here to there traveling in AC while in the heat on a hot day or keeping warm with the heater on a icy but cold day. If i have a job i need a car to get there to work while I make a living to put food on the table for you and our family. Hard it is with and without a vehicle but people still made it through with or... | Evidence | Adequate |
8d939a881a3e | A96CC7C93B2A | To others its a dumb but a smart or nosmart thing to do but my opion is in between its a hard thing to agree on. | Claim | Adequate |
431c62808587 | A96CC7C93B2A | Cars a effecting our population with death of people and gas and fuel that is blowing out of the rough with expenses. Prices that is excending to others minds is that is becomeing higher thatn i can ever imagine it comes and goes like in a blink of an eye you would even think it was gone until somebody told you it was.... | Evidence | Ineffective |
99b268b2155b | A9B0314D6914 | I go against this technology to read students emotional expressions. This is totaly BS | Position | Adequate |
489da59c6c22 | A9B0314D6914 | Dr. Huang and Pro. Nicu made this really cool software called the Facial Action Coding System. Calculating emotions is diferent from coding your face with a 3-D mode of your face that could barely even look like you. Plus there are more than the basic six emotion everbody has. It is still a very cool idea but not for u... | Evidence | Adequate |
3f6cdbf7a5ae | A9B0314D6914 | Dr. Huang said that every facial emotion is universaly the same in paragraph 4, but some people can feel emotions without making that facial emotion on thier face. | Claim | Adequate |
5903bcc27ffc | A9B0314D6914 | This software can be an evasion of privacy for students who would not like to be disterb by this software showing it to your teacher and then the teacher would call or give you a private lesson in school. Mixed emotions are even more complecated for the software to know. There are 44 major muscles in our faces are real... | Evidence | Adequate |
307ad65fc9c4 | A9B0314D6914 | How can this "Facial Action Coding System" even tell the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy. The technology is not advance enough to say what emotions we have. | Claim | Adequate |
b42ee2fe15a9 | A9B0314D6914 | How can this software even know the emotions we have on a picture. The Mona Lisa is a painting not a picture, so that cannot be corect. Da Vinci Code is something different from Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms. Communication doesn't have to do anything with the software, but maybe us the students. | Evidence | Adequate |
a6b0b7ab9411 | A9B0314D6914 | And finaly this stuff can't be used in public, who is going to use this sofware than the school. | Claim | Adequate |
aeb36a0fa781 | A9B0314D6914 | Video games are mostly the freedom of choice for most people . And emotional communication will still need to wait for technology to advance. Who is even gona use this. People do not caare what think about us the students. Making privat lessons based on our faces isn't a good idea. Many bad culd use this software to in... | Evidence | Ineffective |
df6322091c5a | A9B0314D6914 | And this is my reasons why I think this software sucks and should never be used | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
ed2d1fd19d51 | A9D670ADCE41 | So "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is a great little short story that includes very interesting facts a | Lead | Ineffective |
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