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Pirates Love
A Goodly Death
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
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1. Look Out Below!||||2. Landslide||||3. Crumbling To Her Death
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Pirates Love
Crumbling To Her Death
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>The very tree that saved her from getting ripped to shreds from the grenade shrapnel uprooted and fell on Catalina. The ground was so muddy, it provided enough yield to cushion the blow. She was not crushed, but mud slipped over her and covered both her nose and mouth, while s...
1. Drowning||||2. Death's Intrusion||||3. More Gunfire
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Pirates Love
Death's Intrusion
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Catalina choked on a mouthful of mud and then felt the tree shift enough for her to take a breath. It wiggled once, then she felt the weight shift and drag her by the foot toward the edge of the falls. She gave a panicked yank of her leg to pull free, but the roots were too ta...
1. Counterattack||||2. A Fighting Chance||||3. Last Words
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Pirates Love
Last Words
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Gravity caused her stomach to flip and the tree to tug at her ankle. An impact with her chest snapped her head back and forced the air from her lungs. An iron vice tightened around her wrist and would have caused her to call out — had she any oxygen with which to yell. The tr...
1. Up! Up!||||2. The Vine Snaps||||3. A Kiss By The Waterfall
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Pirates Love
Up! Up!
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Catalina's first cognitive thought was just about to brew in her head when a strange rumble vibrated through her chest and ears.<br>\n<br>\nShe screamed to Hugo, \"The rest of the dam's giving away!\"<br>\n<br>\nHe pulled her up to his waist. She grabbed his belt and scrambled ...
1. No Time To Rest||||2. Into The Fray||||3. At Knifepoint
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Pirates Love
Into The Fray
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Hugo grasped both her shoulders. \"You cannot go down there! The entire mountainside is currently slipping into the field below!\"<br>\n<br>\n\"It is Scaphiste. He survived the flood! I need to end him!\"<br>\n<br>\n\"Catalina! You almost died a minute ago! Why are you so ...
1. Confrontation||||2. Distracted||||3. Treasure?
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Pirates Love
Confrontation
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>She didn't slow on the path; there was no place for a man Scaphiste's size to hide amongst the trees. He was not waiting to ambush her. She made it to the camp — where there were plenty of places to hide for ambush. But that didn't feel right. Scaphiste wouldn't tarry, he wo...
1. Wordplay||||2. Trickery Is Afoot||||3. Engagement
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Pirates Love
Engagement
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Scaphiste moved quickly for a man his size; once his decision was made, it was executed immediately. Such was his first attack. A quick shuffle of his feet, and he was atop Catalina. His swing was strong and fluid and gave no time to defend. Catalina dodged to her right, awa...
1. Killshot||||2. Strategic Adjustment||||3. Fight Like A God
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Pirates Love
Strategic Adjustment
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Scaphiste huffed. His body could not hold out as long as his opponent; he knew that. The fight had to conclude quickly. She was quick, but he was stronger and outweighed her 2-1.<br>\n<br>\nHe charged again, his sword thrust out like his previous charge, but this time he expe...
1. Blow-For-Blow||||2. Intoxicated Rumble||||3. The End
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Pirates Love
The End
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Scaphiste was on the attack once again, but she was too weak to offer much of a defense. One blow after another, his attacks were mighty, and they knocked away her sword as easily as swatting a fly, backing her up with each swing.<br>\n<br>\nHe feigned a two-handed overhead cho...
1. The Drop||||2. A Swift Kick Ought To Do The Trick||||3. Of Littoral Origins
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Pirates Love
Of Littoral Origins
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Catalina collided with soft dirt — not cold, hard, lethal rocks — and skidded to a halt against the sapling Scaphiste had severed. She willed her lungs to work, but oxygen was slow to journey to her brain. The only thing of which she was really aware was the incessant coughing...
1. Of Myth And Might||||2. A Choir Of Mermaid Angels||||3. The Curse
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Pirates Love
Of Myth And Might
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>\"Yes,\" he whispered, his voice almost inaudible above the waves crashing nearby, \"a union of myth and might.\"<br>\n<br>\nGaining speed, gaining strength for one final blow, Catalina clenched her teeth. \"You are no god; you are The Chatterer.\"<br>\n<br>\nShe took two steps...
1. Last-Ditch Effort||||2. Evil Swims||||3. Mythical Savior
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Pirates Love
Mythical Savior
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>Catalina had many wounds which slowed her. Nevertheless, she hurried past the encampment and toward the jetty. At the very edge of town, she ran into Humaukke and Chepi , both fully dressed in summer leathers. In his arms, Chepi toted an 80-pound Striper, silver and thick at ...
1. Crack On!||||2. Yes, But...||||3. As The Night Closes In
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Pirates Love
Crack On!
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span>The Harlequin Tears moored off the eastern coastline, awaiting the return of their captain. Seeing the pirate ship's imposing form eventually turned the fishing boats' sights to other islands, leaving the crew of the Tears alone to ponder the purple overtones of nighttime that ...
1. END
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Pirates Love
END
Fraught-With-Safety
no2freakshow
{"html": "<div class=\"NULL00001\"><span style=\"font-size:1.25em;\"><span>The End...</span></div></span></div>"}
<b>The End</b>
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Pirates Love
Cannons
Madeleine goes to Brown
athena
{"html": "You run to Thomas. He was right and he should know it. You make it to the Captain's cabin and knock on the door. Thomas opened it. <br>\n<br>\n\"It is a pirate ship.\" You announce proudly. Unconciously you have placed your hands behind your back in the old school way. \"It's got that flag, the... oh, what's ...
1. Wait for help
05-02-2003
100322-123
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Pirates Love
Disgusting and Distressing Decisions
Madeleine goes to Brown
athena
{"html": "Help is not forthcoming. And, as you hang there, you realize that you will have to do something or you'll fall. You swing your legs delicately, determined not to look down at the rushing water. And a shoe catches... and slips. But there's hope. There must be a kind of shelf or ripped wood, some kind of ledge....
1. Grab the Captain's Corpse...||||2. Fall into the foaming water...
07-15-2003
100322-1231
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1231
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Pirates Love
swimming for life. or death
A Guest Visitor
katie
{"html": "A pirate ship you realize it definately is. And with not allowing Thomas to go for the captain immediately, you realize that you wasted precious time. The pirate ship will definately be capable of capturing your father's small, poorly armed, vessel. Your panic is increasing. \n<br>\n<br>You decide that y...
1. you give up- and wait for them to reach you, it's inevitable||||2. you decide to go down now rather than chance it with the pirates
09-09-2000
100322-124
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/124
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Pirates Love
first encounter
Athena107
katie
{"html": "<small>\n\tThe craft is approaching and it is filled with unkept men. In the front directing operations is swarthy dark pirate. \n<br/>\n<br/>The site of him fills you with fear and you turn and attempt to swim farther away. Never! You wouldn't want to chance it with the likes of them.\n<br/>\n<br/>With sud...
1. do you approach him to ask?||||2. do you keep to the back hoping he'll forget?
09-09-2000
100322-1241
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1241
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Pirates Love
boarding the new ship
katie
katie
{"html": "You stand there, shivering. You don't feel ready for another encounter with him. You aren't sure of how you'd react. Your arms are crossed holding your elbows. Your head is tilted slighly down, subdued, your eyes are watching, if not alertly, the activities aboard, the men moving back and forth in set pat...
1. do you talk to the captain, confronting him?||||2. do you leave without a word?
09-10-2000
100322-12412
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/12412
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Pirates Love
new quarters
Renee Pierce
katie
{"html": "You leave, following your captor, relieved to be out the presence of the captain and his helper. You wonde what he means by the far room, what sort of room it is and thankfull realize it's probably far from the captain's quarters.\n<br>\n\n<br>\nWithout a word he shows you to a room, opening the door for yo...
1. do you attempt to prepare yourself for you first visitor?||||2. do you remain facing the wall and pretend to still be asleep?
09-10-2000
100322-124122
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/124122
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Pirates Love
Conflicting feelings
Renee Pierce
Renee Pierce
{"html": "Hugo walked in the door. He exhaled at the sight of her figure on the small cot. Her body was perfectly curved. He recalled how it had felt to pull her out of the water into his arms. He closed his eyes remembering the intoxicating smell of her.<br>\n<br>\nHis skin tingled as he felt his need of her grow. To ...
<b>The End</b>
09-20-2003
100322-1241222
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1241222
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Pirates Love
The rescue
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anna_154
{"html": "You duck under the water and manage to swim a few minutes before you feel the need to come up for air. Your head feels blurry and you arn't thinking clearly. You panic as you take a breath of salty ocean water and it seeps quickly into your lungs. You give into the strong current of water that if forcing y...
1. You try to get away again||||2. You give in to the pirates and go with them
05-16-2001
100322-1242
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1242
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Pirates Love
Damn it's hot
Celestialsplendor
toodie4
{"html": "You race down into the hull. It's dark and you barely see an open crate in the dim darkness. You rush over and pull the top of it over you. It's small and the air gets really warm so you take off all the clothes you can (within deascency levels). Sweat is sarting to fall down your face.\n<br>Silently you ...
1. Do you go investigate||||2. Or stay and wait for some sign.
12-06-2000
100322-125
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/125
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Pirates Love
Do you go investigate
Iris
campwbook
{"html": "Slowly, she crept out of the crate that had become her savior. Drenched in sweat, she gulped in the sea air as soon as the lid was removed. She briefly considered putting her clothes back on, but decided that her undergarments would have to do, for it was difficult to be stealthy in a petticoat. <br>\nCrawlin...
1. Knee him in the Privates :)||||2. Pray that he'll show mercie||||3. Offer him something if he'll let her live
11-24-2011
100322-1251
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1251
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Pirates Love
Between a hard place and a rock
Celestialsplendor
Celestialsplendor
{"html": "Curled up in your crate you to stay where you are. Lord knows what could happen. If only you knew for sure that your father's men had one. YOu decided tho pray some more... Suddenly you hear someone coming down the stairs. You start to panic and you try to turn yourself to wards a tiny holl in the crate....
1. Do you let out a yell to get them to get you out of the crate||||2. Do you wait and pray they take you
12-06-2000
100322-1252
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1252
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Pirates Love
Don't take me now....
little lady
little lady
{"html": "As soon as Catalina hears the pirate, her life flashed before her eyes and she felt sick at the bottom of her stomache. She can hear them shuffling around, and cusing that there was nothing here and the only option was to burn the place. <br>\n<br>\n The attackers started up the stairs, and with every ste...
1. continue
07-25-2002
100322-12521
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/12521
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Pirates Love
continue
little lady
wish
{"html": "they see her and the main 1 starts feelin hot regarding her he taked her out and tries to do sex with her..she rufuses but she have to other wise he ll kill her.."}
1. she starts with it?||||2. she runs?
06-09-2004
100322-125211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/125211
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Pirates Love
here
wish
wish
{"html": "it was her dream?yes..she was dr4sming then she felt a bit better"}
1. she stays there?
06-11-2004
100322-1252111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1252111
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Pirates Love
con
wish
wish
{"html": "and she's awken by the noise and she founds out tht it was her dream she was still there...alla lone they have gone to the deck"}
1. she runs?
06-11-2004
100322-1252112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/100322/map/1252112
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Summer Gain
Intro
Surfer
surfer
{"html": "Jonathan ends highschool a star quarterback and in great shape and an ample appetite. He has a summer full of partying and time at the beach,but most of all sitting aorund doind nothing but all this fun takes its toll on his waistline whihc will lead into his freshmam year.<br/>\nHe is around 175lbs<br/>\n<br...
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08-21-2005
1003465-Intro
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465
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Jon finishes highschool a star QB but he finds it is hard to stay in shape over summer
Summer Gain
Beginning to gain
Surfer
surfer
{"html": "Jonathan is into his first week of summer and is lounging in his living room in his boxers drinking some soda and eating some chips while watching TV. His body is well scuplted from a 6 pack to his pecs. He was the quarterback of his highschool which required him to stay in shape but now it was summer and he ...
1. heads straight to his car||||2. grabs some pizza||||3. sits and watches TV then goes to the beach||||4. Forgets the beach
08-21-2005
1003465-1
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1
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Summer Gain
Beach BBQ
bradyc7
900649267
{"html": "He gets to his car, starts up the engine and blows out the most amazing tunes on his stereo, he was in such a good mood.<br>\n<br>\nJon cruises happily to the beach, topless in his car as it was so hot, with the small small lower-ab roll just showing to other drivers, some of which winked at him and he wasn't...
1. Act like he's in heaven with all the food and get eating||||2. Act as if he's just eaten so as not to raise suspision||||3. Eat a bit but his friend beats him to the rest||||4. Decide not to eat and go for a swim, to work up an appetite
08-31-2005
1003465-11
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/11
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Summer Gain
Jon eats the BBQ
woot
woot
{"html": "Jon is vain, and his vanity spurs on subtlety.<br>\n<br>\nHe sits on the bench, slightly hunched over, the elastic band of his boxers peeking out slightly over his bathing suit. No one has noticed the slight suggestion of a curve resting on his hip bone, the slight softness under his navel or the general ripe...
1. Jon gets a job||||2. Jon stays at home
09-01-2005
1003465-111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/111
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Summer Gain
Jon gets a job
Cre8r 1
creater1
{"html": "Jon gets a job as a taste tester at a Burger King. He starts to gain a weight over the past _ he's been on the job, already 20 lb."}
1. Month||||2. 2 weeks||||3. 5 days
02-06-2009
1003465-1111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1111
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Summer Gain
One month of taste testing later
Dale
szad92
{"html": "Jon looks at the clock & notices that he has to be at work in an hour. <br>\n<br>\n\"There is just no time shower & shave for work,\" he said. <br>\nHe gets up & walks to find his Blue Burger King uniform on the ground. Jon picks up his uniform & heads towards the bathroom. As he puts his pants on, he has tro...
1. At work||||2. After work
08-11-2011
1003465-11111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/11111
null
null
Summer Gain
Looking chubby
null
crkndofgy
{"html": "Despite constant complaints from his mom telling him hes making nothing of himself but being a lazy ass that only sleeps and eats all day, Jon decides to take the lazy route over the summer. His mom even went so far as to say to him, \"I think all the sitting around you do is really starting to show up. Loo...
1. Jon goes on a vaca to Mexico with friends||||2. Jon goes with his family to New York City for 4 days
09-01-2005
1003465-1112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1112
null
null
Summer Gain
The gang
null
crkndofgy
{"html": "In response that remark, Jon organized a little trip with his friends to Mexico. His buddy from football, Jake, and his former neighbor and friend Tim all were going together to Mexico. He was excited, because Jake was an awesome person to hang out with, plus the two of them could always guarantee a few chi...
1. In Mexico on the first day...
09-01-2005
1003465-11121
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/11121
null
null
Summer Gain
The first day in Mexico
null
crkndofgy
{"html": "On the plane, Jon was busy watching a movie on football of course. Jake was talking to the stewardess and hitting on her, and she was buying all of it, and Tim was out cold full of 2 beers from a pub they stopped at in the airport.<br>\n<br>\n When they arrived there, they could wait to get to the beach,...
1. Out to dinner or clubbing||||2. Stay in the room for the night
09-01-2005
1003465-111211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/111211
null
null
Summer Gain
Jon gets dressed
woot
woot
{"html": "Jon is geting dressed for dinner. He is used to wearig black button-down downs of clingy material that show the indentations on the leftand right sides of his abdomen.<br>\n<br>\nNow, however, his profile has changed. His stomach looks round and pooches about an inch over his boxer-briefs. His pecs have start...
1. Jon meets a girl who thinks he's too fat||||2. Jon meets a gril who thinks he's too thin
10-01-2005
1003465-1112111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1112111
null
null
Summer Gain
Jon meets Natalie
woot
Robertoe
{"html": "Everything was going well for Jon so far at supper. Tehy decided to go to a fancy restaurant because they seen a large group of very attactive women go in there. \"Wow look at them,\" said Jon as they sat down at their table to eat. \"I'm going right over to them now,\" said Jake. Jake went over and somehow g...
1. Natalie keeps putting food on Jon's plate
10-16-2005
1003465-11121112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/11121112
null
null
Summer Gain
Extra Helpings
Traveler45
hello123
{"html": "She continues to pile food on Jon's plate. He thinks she is still competing and doesn't even notice the extra food. This still goes on untill"}
1. Jon's pant button pops open||||2. Jon notices and tells her to stop or keep going
10-22-2005
1003465-111211121
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/111211121
null
null
Summer Gain
Restaurant embarrassment
grapermelon
grapermelon
{"html": "Jon was just finishing his eighth plate of food while Natalie watched him with full attention. He was feeling very very full, but continued to eat because he was lost in the moment and seemed to forget about everything but her. Just then his thoughts were interrupted by a loud *snap* sound. He looked down und...
1. Sucks in the gut and leaves the restuarant with Natalie||||2. Keeps eating
10-26-2005
1003465-1112111211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1112111211
null
null
Summer Gain
Got out!
TornadoKiss
TornadoKiss
{"html": "\"Oh my,\" Natalie giggled. But Jon found it less amusing. Before Jake and his date could notice, Jon grabbed Natalie's hand and slipped away from the table.<br>\n<br>\n \"Wha-\" Natalie started; Jon clamped a hand over her mouth and didn't let go until they were out of the restaraunt. She looked a bit ir...
1. Jon walks Natalie home.||||2. Jon tells her she should go home alone.
11-14-2005
1003465-11121112111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/11121112111
null
null
Summer Gain
Mexico Dessert
AndyMan
andyman0987
{"html": "Jon walked Natalie home, but on the way they stopped at three ice cream vendors, five hot dog vendors, and a fancy dessert restaurant. Jon ended up eating six ice cream cone and ten hot dogs by the time they had reached the dessert restaurant because Natalie kept giving hers to him. \"Oh, come on\" Natalie sa...
1. The next day Jon wakes up at Natalie's||||2. Natalie continues to feed Jon for the rest of his one month vacation
04-18-2006
1003465-111211121111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/111211121111
null
null
Summer Gain
months of "weighti"ng
Robertoe
Eriks
{"html": "for the next month jon and natalie become really good friends. she continues to feed jon everyday..his shirts would lift up, it would sit rite in beetween his bulging belly and his man boobs...his pants no longer fit becuase they wouldnt button, or even zip! natalie thought it was cute, every time they were t...
<b>The End</b>
01-15-2007
1003465-1112111211112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1112111211112
null
null
Summer Gain
Jon notices and tells her to stop or keep going
Eriks
overlord587
{"html": "Which one?"}
1. He tells her to stop||||2. He tells her to keep going
02-07-2010
1003465-1112111212
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1112111212
null
null
Summer Gain
Meeting up with Shawn
null
renboz
{"html": "Jon decides not to eat anything just to not look like a pig in front of everyone. <br>\n<br>\n\"Hey Jon\" a guy came over and it was Jon friend from high school Shawn.<br>\n<br>\n\"Shawn where did yah go\" a voice said behind Shawn and it was Susan, Shawn high school sweetheart and it looks like there still t...
1. Jon 's cell phone rings||||2. Jon eats all his and goes back for more.
02-24-2008
1003465-112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/112
null
null
Summer Gain
Kyle has gained
ByronB
900649267
{"html": "Jon is really hungry, and his stomach is signaling this to him loudly! He tells his friends that hes just drunk a liter of soda and it's settling so he doesn't raise suspicion. However this means he can't get to the buffet as they would know it was because he was hungry!<br>\n<br>\nJon decides to go for a swi...
1. Invite Kyle to the buffet to catch up with him?||||2. Confront Kyle on his weight, and he does the same to you
04-17-2006
1003465-113
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/113
null
null
Summer Gain
Catching up with Kyle
null
rememberingsun
{"html": "\"Hey, Kyle wanna go get some food?\" asks Jon<br>\n\"Totally! Dude, I haven't seen you in forever, how you been?\"<br>\n\"I've been great, and it looks like lifes been pretty good to you too!\" Jon says giving Kyle's soft belly a pat.<br>\n\"Yeah, I've put on a few\" Kyle says as he grasps hia flab with both...
1. go to the party?||||2. or not?
03-07-2010
1003465-1131
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1131
null
null
Summer Gain
Swimming
null
zoroaster
{"html": "Deciding it would be better to swim then eat to avoid cramps Jon waded into the water. Jon however had underestimated how much he had been eating lately. Only a few minutes went by before he started having hunger pangs. Jon kept to the water determined to stay away from the food for at least a little more tim...
1. left the beach embarassed||||2. put on a shirt to make it less visible||||3. went back into the water to hide it
04-08-2008
1003465-114
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/114
null
null
Summer Gain
PIzza before the beach
Surfer
surfer
{"html": "He grabs a towel and heads towards the door but he decides to grab the box of pizza in the fridge first for his friends. He gets in his car and and fastens his seat belt and pulls out of the drive way and heads to the beach."}
1. Eats the whole pizza on the way to the beach||||2. Eats half||||3. Doesn't touch the pizza||||4. Stops by Mcdonalds
08-21-2005
1003465-12
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12
null
null
Summer Gain
Arriving at the beach
null
crkndofgy
{"html": "Traffic going to the beach was totally backed up for at least 3 exits, and was at a slow crawl. Jonathan couldn't resist the intoxicating cheesy smell of the pizza anymore and grabbed his first slice, folded it, and positioned his knees to the steering wheel so he could use two hands. It took him 45 mintues...
1. Asked him to go and pick up the pizzas they ordered||||2. Wanted him to go swimming
08-31-2005
1003465-121
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121
null
null
Summer Gain
Pick up Order
darkmage
qbert
{"html": "\"Hey can you get the pizzas we ordered?\" ask your friends.<br>\n<br>\n\"Sure\" replies Jon.<br>\n<br>\nHe gets back into his car and drives to the pizza place. He hands the cashier the order number and he gets the pizzas. He hands you six pizza pies.<br>\n<br>\n\"I only orderd three pizzas\" says Jon.<br>...
1. Eats the free pizzas||||2. Gets a phone call
09-09-2005
1003465-1211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211
null
null
Summer Gain
Pizza and Traffic
Derck
Derck
{"html": "So Jon is now on his way to the beach, and on the way he gets stuck in horrible traffic. So he calls his friends and tells them whats up. So for 45 minutes he sits there. Moving a foot or two every 10 minutes. When Jon hears his stomach, he doesnt think its that bad of an idea to have some of the free piz...
1. He gets to the beach and trys to hide his gut.||||2. Calls his friends to tell them he's turning around.
09-09-2005
1003465-12111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111
null
null
Summer Gain
Sucking it in
grapermelon
grapermelon
{"html": "Jon arrived at the beach to find his friends eagerly welcoming the pizza. He put his shirt on over his now bulging belly and noticed it would not go all the way down, so he did his best to suck it in. He handed the pizza to his friends, when one of them mentions they are thirsty. They send Jon to the snack ba...
1. accepts lunch offer||||2. just grabs the drinks
10-22-2005
1003465-121111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111
null
null
Summer Gain
Ok! Lunch!
TornadoKiss
TornadoKiss
{"html": "'I must be dreaming. All this free food...' Jon though to himself. He accepted the lunch special which was two corndogs and cheese fries. He had difficulties carrying the three drinks and food back to where the BBQ was taking place and almost spilled them several times.<br>\n<br>\n \"Hey guys,\" Jon said ...
1. Jon digs into the food right away.||||2. Jon waits for his buds to eat some first.
11-17-2005
1003465-1211111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111
null
null
Summer Gain
Over Exposure
null
qbert
{"html": "Jon somehow still felt hungry and he immediatly began to eat the free lunch he was given. After finishing the corndogs and chesse fries he began to eat the pizza. As he finished the first pie he realized his shirt had rode above his gut exposing it. He stopped right away and allowed his friends to eat the ...
1. Agrees and goes to Matt's||||2. Disagrees and goes home
04-24-2006
1003465-12111111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111
null
null
Summer Gain
Pizza
darkmage
qbert
{"html": "The next day Jon headed over to Matt's house, when he arrived he saw that Matt was the only one home.<br>\n<br>\n\"Where are your parents?\" asked Jon.<br>\n<br>\n\"Away\" replied Matt.<br>\n<br>\nThen Jon followed Matt into the kitchen, on the table he saw a stack of ten pizza pies. Over on the counter he s...
1. Gives it his all||||2. Says he wants to see Matt eat them
04-24-2006
1003465-121111111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111
null
null
Summer Gain
Stuffed
null
qbert
{"html": "\"All right I'll do it,\" said Jon.<br>\n<br>\nJon began to eat the pizza, he was actually enjoying himself. After the third pie he felt his shirt getting a tight on him, he decided to keep eating. As he was starting on the sixth pie his shirt began to rip. As he finished off the eigth pie he stopped eatin...
1. Order more food||||2. Chug
04-24-2006
1003465-1211111111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111
null
null
Summer Gain
The bet is on
null
qbert
{"html": "The boys decide to order even more food.<br>\n<br>\n\"I've got a bet for you,\" says Matt.<br>\n<br>\n\"What is it?\" asks Jon.<br>\n<br>\n\"Here's the plan we'll come to each others houses every other day and see who can eat the most without stopping, winner at the end of two weeks gets one hundered dollar...
1. Two days later||||2. Four Days Later
07-01-2006
1003465-12111111111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111111
null
null
Summer Gain
Big Appetites
null
zoroaster
{"html": "Two days later Jon had just ordered a large amount of pizzas and waited for Matt to get to his house, it was almost three. Jon was worried about his weight but decided that 100 dollars was worth it. Besides he had been bloating up as much as possible to increase his appetite already to get ready for the compe...
1. next day, next contest||||2. at the end of the competition.(2 weeks)
03-23-2008
1003465-121111111111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111111
null
null
Summer Gain
We Have a Winner
Cre8r 1
creater1
{"html": "At the end of the contest they were so stuffed that they felt they had enough food to last a year. They had also gained a lot by then Matt was 160 lb. of pure blubber by the time he was done, & he wasn't planning on working it off. But Jonathan, he was huge, he was 230 lb. of fat with practically no muscle. H...
1. Cook||||2. Taste Tester
02-06-2009
1003465-1211111111112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111112
null
null
Summer Gain
Chug
null
qbert
{"html": "\"Let's Chug\" said Matt.<br>\n<br>\n\"Chug what?\" asked Jon intently.<br>\n<br>\n\"Well I've got loads of soda in the pantry,\" replied Matt.<br>\n<br>\n\"Let's Do It!\" excalimed Jon.<br>\n<br>\nMatt went into the pantry and returned with six two liter soda bottles. He put them down on the table, \"Let's ...
1. Yes||||2. No
04-28-2006
1003465-12111111112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111112
null
null
Summer Gain
Feeding time
null
qbert
{"html": "\"Sure,\" said Jon.<br>\n<br>\nMatt went over into the fridge and pulled out a cake three tubs of ice cream and a whole lot of brownies.<br>\n<br>\n\"Time for desert,\" said Matt.<br>\n<br>\nJon and Matt went into the kitchen and sat at the table that was buckling under all of the food. Jon started eating th...
1. "Go Home" says Matt||||2. "Stay Overnight" Says Matt
05-15-2006
1003465-121111111121
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111121
null
null
Summer Gain
A night at Matt's
AndyMan
andyman0987
{"html": "\"Hey why don't you stay over night?\" Matt says. \"Yeah that would be awesome!\" John replied. Both of them stripped down to their underwear and began to watch movies in the living room. John noticed that Matt's gut was considerably larger than his and he gave it a rub. \"Still hungry. Are you man?\" John sa...
1. Later at the buffet.||||2. Two weeks at Matt's.
05-24-2006
1003465-1211111111212
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212
null
null
Summer Gain
Two weeks as gorging friends...
fat_hiker
fat_hiker
{"html": "Jon rolled over and his elbow hit Matt's midriff, causing Matt to go \"Ouff!\" and roll over too. Jon looked around groggily, then spotted the pizza box beside the queen-size bed. His brain might be groggy, but his stomach was fully awake - and it was hungry! The remaining pizza in the box didn't stand a c...
1. 25 pounds each...||||2. a lot - 15 pounds for Matt, 20 pounds for Jon...
05-26-2006
1003465-12111111112122
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111112122
null
null
Summer Gain
25 each
null
qbert
{"html": "Matt and Jon had both gained 25 pounds, Jon was up to 215 and Matt was up to 245. But the both of them didn't pay attetion to that at all. It was around 11:00 when Matt woke up and went downstairs to the kitchen. He reached into the fridge and pulled out three pizza pies and put them into the oven. It was...
1. Watch TV||||2. Go out
06-21-2006
1003465-121111111121221
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111121221
null
null
Summer Gain
Staying In
Phoenix616
phoenix616
{"html": "\"You know, I haven't been able to button these jeans in a few days. We're gonna need to go out and get new clothes soon or I'm gonna stuck walkin' around in my undies.\" Jon was sprawled on the bed, propped up with pillows. An empty plate rested on his gut which, in turn, was flowing over his unfastened w...
1. A night out||||2. A night in
06-15-2010
1003465-1211111111212211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212211
null
null
Summer Gain
A night out
Phoenix616
phoenix616
{"html": "\"I think I'm gonna need a break for pizza and Chinese,\" Matt mumbled lazily. \"Let's hit up a McDonalds or somethin'.\"<br>\n<br>\n\"Dunno about you, but I haven't had a shower in a few days. Looks like we're gonna have to stick to the drive thru.\" Without either of them caring, or possibly even noticin...
1. Drive thru is closed||||2. Enjoying the meal
08-28-2010
1003465-12111111112122111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111112122111
null
null
Summer Gain
The boys head out
fat_hiker
fat_hiker
{"html": "Jon and Matt both ate their share of pizza and then decided to go out. <br>\n<br>\n\"Yeah, gotta get some new jeans,\" remarked Matt, looking across at Jon. Both boys could do up the buttons on their jeans, but that was due to their carry-over football strength mostly - they had clearly outgrown their jeans;...
1. "Hope Carry's on at the Levi's outlet - I like her style..."||||2. "Just six weeks until Mum and Dad are back - what a summer!"
07-10-2006
1003465-1211111111212212
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212212
null
null
Summer Gain
Only six weeks left!
Renard
anthroauthor
{"html": "\"My parents will back in a week, man, what a summer!\" Matt comments as they enter the mall, they easily find a Big&Tall; store, by some clothes, and then have lunch at the local Buffet. As they are going through their second course, which was a variety of baked goods, Matt comments, \"Shouldn't you be going...
1. Stay at Matt's||||2. Go home
02-13-2007
1003465-12111111112122122
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111112122122
null
null
Summer Gain
Pancakes
null
qbert
{"html": "Matt was up 15 pounds and Jon was up 20, this meant Jon weighed around 210 pounds and Matt 235 pounds but neither of them knew those exact numbers. It was around 10:00 when Matt woke up went downstairs in his boxers with his belly bouncing as he walked. He had secretly been wanting Jon to gain since day one...
1. Sleep||||2. Watch TV
06-12-2006
1003465-121111111121222
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111121222
null
null
Summer Gain
Snack Time
null
qbert
{"html": "\"I'm going to go back to bed,\" said Jon.<br>\n\"Okay\" said Matt.<br>\nJon climbed the stairs as they creaked under his weight. Matt stayed downstairs and watched some TV. At around 11:00 Matt began making a \"snack\" for the both of them. He went into the fridge and took out on of those rolls of cookie ...
1. The Next Day||||2. Dinner TIME!!
06-13-2006
1003465-1211111111212221
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212221
null
null
Summer Gain
Dinner Time
null
qbert
{"html": "Jon awoke that same day at around 8:00 to hear his stomach growling. Jon rooled over and awoke Matt who was sleeping next to him.<br>\n\"Ready to go get some dinner?\" asked Jon.<br>\n\"Sure,\" said Matt.<br>\nMatt walked across the room to the phone and dialed the number for the pizza place. He ordered 4 p...
1. Order More||||2. Raid the Fridge
06-15-2006
1003465-12111111112122212
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111112122212
null
null
Summer Gain
Extreme Ice Cream
null
qbert
{"html": "\"Man I'm still hungry,\" says Jon.<br>\n<br>\n\"Really?\" asks Matt.<br>\n<br>\n\"Yup I'm going to get something from the fridge,\" says Jon.<br>\n<br>\n\"Ok then, I don't want anything I'm done,\" replies Matt.<br>\n<br>\nJon heads over to the kitchen and opens up the fridge.<br>\n<br>\n\"I don't want anyth...
1. 1 week later||||2. The Final Week
07-01-2006
1003465-121111111121222122
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111121222122
null
null
Summer Gain
A short Monolouge and Discovery
darkmage
qbert
{"html": "It has been a week and of course the two have been gaining alot, especially Jon. Jon has continued his eating habits from last week and it's really showing. Jon has gained another 10 pounds since last week gaining 30 pounds in total. Matt had only gained 18 pounds in total. They both ate unbelieveable amo...
1. Shocked||||2. Content
07-08-2006
1003465-1211111111212221221
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212221221
null
null
Summer Gain
Matt...
Razeblaze
razeblaze
{"html": "225 That wasn't all bad thought Jon. He had started to form love handle and his gut hung over his sweat pants. He shaked his gut a little and laughed as it jiggled. He thought about how he has been living the past few weeks with Matt and thought is was great. Jon kept on putting his hands an his belly and sha...
1. Happy||||2. Grossed out.
02-19-2007
1003465-12111111112122212212
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/12111111112122212212
null
null
Summer Gain
A New Turn
black angel
angel777
{"html": "\"What?\" Matt says with a laugh, a little taken a back.<br>\n<br>\n\"I don't know man. That just kinda slipped out. Hey do you want more food?\" Jon said, obviously embarrassed, trying to act like that didn't happen.<br>\n<br>\n\"You said I'm hot,\" Matt ignoring Jon's attempts at dodging the conversation, \...
1. A week later||||2. The next day
03-29-2011
1003465-121111111121222122121
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121111111121222122121
null
null
Summer Gain
Out with a Bang
null
qbert
{"html": "It was the last day of the final week and both boys had been eating non stop, Jon was up to 245 pounds and Matt was up to 260 pounds. The two were still asleep and it was around 9:00 in the morning when Jon finnnaly awoke. He was in his boxers and he got up out of bed and looked in the mirror to find a guy ...
1. "Deal"||||2. "No way diet now"
07-21-2006
1003465-1211111111212221222
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212221222
null
null
Summer Gain
Care Free
null
qbert
{"html": "\"Let's go watch some TV,\" says Jon.<br>\n<br>\n\"Why not,\" says Matt.<br>\n<br>\nJon flicks on the TV and an ad for a new resturant flashes on the TV.<br>\n<br>\n\"I'm starting to get hungry again,\" says Jon.<br>\n<br>\n\"And it shows,\" says Matt with a snicker.<br>\n<br>\n\"Yeah right,\" says Jon and he...
1. Eat!!||||2. Go out
07-01-2006
1003465-1211111111212222
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1211111111212222
null
null
Summer Gain
tight sqeeze
null
fred101
{"html": "\"hey guys I've decided i'm going back i'm not in the mood for swimming ok\"<br>\n\"ok what ever cya\" Matt replied.<br>\n<br>\nWhen Jon got home he headed straight to the fridge he ate loads he ate 7 slice of pizza, 4 slices of cheese cake and 8 dounuts when he'd finished he decided to go to bed.<br>\n<br>\...
1. decides to buy small pair||||2. decides to buy large pair
04-29-2007
1003465-121112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/121112
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Summer Gain
Everyone Likes the New Me
Cre8r 1
creater1
{"html": "They asked for him to go swimming with them. Then Jonathan takes off his shirt & everyone is shocked. \"Dude, you got fat man. What happened to your abs? You used to look buff. I don't believe it.\" says his friend Brad. Then everyone else stares at him & they actually like it. They think its good for swimmin...
1. To fill him up||||2. To have a party to celebrate||||3. To have sex with all the girls
02-06-2009
1003465-1212
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1212
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Summer Gain
Stop at Mickey Ds
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crkndofgy
{"html": "The golden arches flash in front of Jons eyes and he thinks, \"I should eat some here so that I dont seem ravenous once I get there!\"<br>\n<br>\n He stopped in at the drive thru,"}
1. Sees a girl he knew from school||||2. Continues to beach
09-01-2005
1003465-124
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/124
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Summer Gain
Seeing Trina
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renboz
{"html": "Jon makes his order and then rolls up to the window to see a old friend of his from high school. Her name was Trina and she was one of the most beautiful girls in school and by the looks of her, she still is.<br>\n<br>\n\"Here you go sir.... oh Jon hi\" Trina said passing Jon his order.<br>\n<br>\n\"Hi Trina\...
1. a food eating contest was going on.||||2. a best body contest was going on.
12-07-2007
1003465-1241
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1241
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Summer Gain
Just one more donut . . .
ByronB
900649267
{"html": "Now that Jon's decided to go to the beach, he had to 'get up' which is easier than it sounds. He is so comfortable, with a 2 liter bottle of soda, and a 20 pack of donuts by his side, and with a football replay on TV.<br>\n<br>\n'I suppose I really should get up! OK one more donut then to the beach!'<br>\n<br...
1. He goes to get up, gets as far of the kitchen and gets a bad a chips||||2. Gets up, gets to his room and puts on his swim shorts - too small for him||||3. Gets down the beach when his mates notice a difference in his appearance||||4. Gets half way to the beach and gets diverted by the smell of an all you can eat||||...
02-16-2006
1003465-13
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/13
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Summer Gain
chips....yum
texan
texan
{"html": "\"Chips\"says jon as he walks into the kitchen. He grabs the chips and starts shovoling them into his mouth.His belly soon gets larger."}
1. eats more and more||||2. goes to the beach
07-09-2007
1003465-131
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/131
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null
Summer Gain
Cha-cha-Changes
B$fan
thewriter
{"html": "Jonathan gets to the beach and steps out crumbs on his chest, his gut hanging over his too tight bathing suit. All the time sitting around has turned his muscles into flab.<br>\n<br>\nJon walks over to his friends and..."}
1. The girls say something||||2. The guys say something
05-09-2006
1003465-133
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/133
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Summer Gain
The girls say something
HARDWORKINMANE
hardworkinmane
{"html": "\"You look terrible\"!!!!!! Susan say's to Jon. \"I have never seen you so out of shape\"!!!!!!<br>\nTracy, Pam, and Mindy began to laugh loudly.<br>\n\"It's nothin guys\", Jon say's to them. \"All it takes is one session in the gym. I can get back into shape very quickly\".<br>\n<br>\n\"O.k. then\", say's...
1. Jon becomes angry at the criticism||||2. Jon punches Tracy in the face over her remarks
10-01-2008
1003465-1331
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1331
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Summer Gain
The Girls Keep Laughing
B$fan
thewriter
{"html": "Jon began to become quite upset over the criticism.<br>\n<br>\n\"You really packed on the pounds Jon.\" Pam laughed.<br>\n<br>\n\"I can't believe you would let yourself go like this.\" Tracy went as far as to poke Jon in his bulging stomach.<br>\n<br>\nJust then the most popular girl in school walks over to J...
1. she really lets Jon have it.||||2. she's looking pretty chunky!
05-08-2009
1003465-13311
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/13311
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Summer Gain
The guys notice....
fat_hiker
fat_hiker
{"html": "Jon walks over to his friends and a voice rings out, \"That can't be Jon!\"<br>\n<br>\n\"Why, yes it is!\" says Jon, mugging for the camera and posing his perfect high school quarterback body,...except....<br>\n<br>\n\"Where'd this come from?\" reaches up another guy, and slaps the little roll of pudge reachi...
1. a lot of us have put on a few...."||||2. we're all getting fat round the middle, even coach!"
07-10-2006
1003465-1332
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1332
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null
Summer Gain
Fear Not
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qbert
{"html": "\"Alot of us have put on a few pounds lately, it just happens I guess,\" said one of Jon's friends.<br>\n<br>\n\"Yeah guess so,\" Jon said looking at his roll.<br>\n<br>\n\"Hey man it doesn't really matter, besides it'd be good for football, alot of the competition is bigger,\" his friend said reassuringly.<b...
1. Sure||||2. Nah
09-01-2006
1003465-13321
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/13321
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null
Summer Gain
Buffet Bet
darkmage
qbert
{"html": "\"Sure, what's the harm,\" Jon said as he went and got changed. He didn't care much anymore about his image as long as he wasn't being made fun of. He knew he'd need some extra weight, like the guys said. He left the lockers and met the guys outside.<br>\n<br>\n\"Where are we headed?\" Jon asked his friend...
1. Take It||||2. Leave It
09-04-2006
1003465-133211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/133211
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null
Summer Gain
4 plates later
ByronB
900649267
{"html": "Jon filled up his plate with as much food as he could and then returned to the table with his friends.<br>\n<br>\n\"You're never going to eat all that!\" said Jon's best friend.<br>\n<br>\n\"Wanna bet?\" said Jon.<br>\n<br>\nWith that Jon began ate his first plate with no difficulty whatsoever. His friends we...
1. Two weeks later||||2. Four weeks later at a pool party
05-13-2011
1003465-1332111
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1332111
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Summer Gain
Four weeks later at a pool party
Gowide
gowide
{"html": "\"Good to see you Jon.\"<br>\nStacy was having a pool party for her friends. She hadn't seen Jon all summer.<br>\n\"You too, Stacy.\"<br>\nJon was wearing a loose camp shirt over baggy cargo shorts, his usual casual outfit. Jon hadn't been socializing much, a couple of hour swimming each morning and then si...
1. two more hanburgers||||2. some cake?
04-20-2012
1003465-13321112
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/13321112
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Summer Gain
Off-Season
Sammael Sheol Baalberith
zoroaster
{"html": "\"Hey Jon it is alright, we've all been relaxing a bit.Even caoch has gained a few. It's the first time we've been able to relax, we deserve it.\"<br>\n\"Alright,\" Jon replied,\"but no more fat jokes.\"<br>\n\"Fine Jon, but hey what's a few pounds for a football player? We need the weight anyway.\"<br>\nComf...
1. Fled the beach and headed home||||2. Stays but changes into his normal clothes
04-06-2008
1003465-13322
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/13322
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Summer Gain
Stays but changes into his normal clothes
jgauthier
jgauthier
{"html": "\"Hey guys I dont think I am swim anymore today\" Jon says then grabing his cloths laying next to the icechest full of beverages. He gets dressed and gives a unnoticable sigh of relief to see his belly isnt as visible anymore. He rejoins the guys who are getting ready to go into the water agian. Jon stays on ...
1. Jon decides to go to the party||||2. Jon decides to stay home tonight
09-30-2008
1003465-133222
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/133222
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Summer Gain
Jon decides to go to the party
Sammael Sheol Baalberith
zoroaster
{"html": "\"Of course I'm going!\" Jon replied enthusiastically.<br>\n\"Great!\" Chris said,\"You know the place it starts at five, which would be in about three hours okay?\"<br>\n\"Alright I'll be there. But I'll need to head home to clean up first, maybe change into some cleaner clothes.\"<br>\n\"Good idea, you smel...
1. Go out to eat.||||2. find something at the house
09-30-2008
1003465-1332221
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/1332221
null
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Summer Gain
Go out to eat.
Gowide
gowide
{"html": "Jon heads out the door. \" I just need something to take the edge off my appetite. Then I won't get so carried away at the party. Maybe I'll just get something healthy like a Jamba Juice.\"<br>\nFive mintes later he stepped up to the counter. \"Give me a medium Lime Fantasy.\" <br>\nJon was proud of his se...
1. No way. No more to eat ujtil the party.||||2. Let me see what's in the fridge.
11-27-2009
1003465-13322211
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/13322211
null
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Summer Gain
Forget the beach
Surfer
surfer
{"html": "Jonathan forgets about the beach and grabs some food from the kitchen and begins eating away.<br>\nLater..."}
1. that day||||2. that week||||3. 2 weeks later
08-22-2005
1003465-14
https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1003465/map/14
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