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[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals think that there is no benefit of having babies at the early span of the marriage. However, some couples don't follow the same plan after marriage. In further discussion, I will shed light on the advantage of having kids after a few or more years of marriage. Firstly, most people are graduated nowadays. That's why they think about future goals and aspirations. There are some steps they have to follow like they have to focus on career and financial condition more. They don't want to grow a child in their struggle period of life. It would affect the child's growth and future. Moreover, they are amateurs when it comes to having a kid. Mostly decide to have some proper information from the seniors. Then, they can easily decide based on knowledge. Furthermore, some persons want to enjoy their marriage life to understand each other's point of view truly. There are some examples I want to share on this topic. My close friend got married at the age of 21, but they decide to explore things first instead of having a child. It was only ten years later to decide to have a baby. On the other hand, my other friends choose to build a career and get stable financially. So, whenever they are having a baby, then they can easily raise their child. Nowadays, they have a professional job and balance in their life. In conclusion, I want to say that there are many benefits to flow proper plans for marriage and child. Otherwise, maybe partners can get problems if they get rush into having a child earlier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscusby Minfong Ho author decided end sentence when come back Saeng vowed silently spring When snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test show even though main character Saeng failed trying The geese coming back try new spring hibiscus budding new flowers like starting well Saeng says made tried well time succeed Also shows determination living things succeed main purpose The flower drivers rebud The geese drive coming back spring main character drives passing testThe author Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho put quote last line story inspirationTo inspire people continue path life fail task try againSo author gives inspiration help continue live life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since Venus is close to the Sun and Earth, mankind finds a way to discover the planet. Many missions to Venus were unmanned, which they send spacecrafts and didn't survived the harsh conditions. This is a reason Venus has a reputation for being challenging. If a person would been send to Venus, there's no chance for surviving. Will NASA try to find a solution to explore Earth's \"twin\"? Conditions in Venus are dangerous inside the planet. The atmosphere is thick and made of 97 percent carbon dioxide. The clouds have highly corrosive sulfuric acid, which can dissolve the spacecrafts sent here. Temperatures in Venus rise up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit, since Venus is close to the Sun. The atmospheric pressure is 90 greater than Earth's pressure and can crush a submarine that can dive to the deepest parts of Earth's oceans. It's impossible for NASA to send someone to Venus without being dissolved or crushed in a spacecraft. They tested electronics made out of silicon carbide in a chamber simulating the the conditions in the surface of Venus. They found out that old technology are more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. Mechanical computers are used in the 1800s to 1940s in World War II. These machines uses gears and levers without electronics to calculate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think there are aliens? Well I don't. This unmasking the face on mars is not a alien thing because strange things always happen on earth and different planets. This could just be are pollution is spreding not just in the air but even in space. Or Mars could just be doing what earth does every amount of years earth changes in like the land-scap mars land-scap could just be changing. On Earth we have weird stuff happen a lot like symbols in corn feilds, some people think they see flying space ships some people are just crazy aliens don't exist. We don't have any proof that aliens exist like just because some cows go missing or found dead doesn't mean they didn't just leave or a wild animal didn't kill them. I don't know how to explaine the corn feilds but the \"flying space ship\" is just a jet or plane nothing big and if people say other people have been kinapped by aliens or saw some aliens they would be lying because aliens don't exist. Earth today has so many pollution problems rigth now it's just not funny but are pollution could somehow start to spread to other planets because we have air pollution. Air pollution can spread pretty easy so when we like have rocket and go to a different planet we may bring different substances to that planet it's not use to. Or just how we went to the moon the pollution we brougth to the moon could have spreaded all over the galxay. So we all know how the Earth changes once every speacial year or years but were use to that cause we know it's going to happen. So now there is a new change but not to planet Earth but to Mars it's weird but it's just a planet. Like are it may have some new changes may not this doesn't mean it has to do with aliens. We have traveld or seen with are cameraas in space so many planets but never one trace of aliens or any life form so that means aliens aren't real. So in conclusion with all the evidence we got from prior knowleged and reading this article there are no other life form on anyother planet just Earth. Also aliens don't exist all the weird things that happen in the world or on different planets all happen because humans do something wrong to the earth. We sometimes get granted the most beautiful things ever or it hits us with earth quakes or hurricans and punishes us so do good to the earth not bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago a NASA Viking 1 aircraft was circling around Mars to find somewhere to land for its sister ship Viking 2. The aircraft was taking pictures and it captured something very unusual. It was a human face,it was enormous. It's head was two miles from each end to end. Once the word got out and NASA unveiled a picture it gave Mars lots of attention. Since it was on Mars lots of people thought that it was made by an alien. They is unbelieveable how can aliens make a human face. Aliens aren't even real so how can they make it. Plus, If they were real how would they be able to make a human face if they never seen one. I agree with the JPL website that it is indeed a natural landform. According to the passage it says that \" The image first appeared on a JPL website, revealling.... a natural landform\". There was no alien monument after all. Garvin says that \" That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars\". I know that the face on mars was just a natual lanform. I know this because there is no such thing as aliens and there isn't any evidence to completely prove this. Plus I believe if there was alien they want no how humans look or theirselves for that matter. Scientist say that it is indeed a landform. I mean just think about it have u ever ate some potato chips and seen a chip that resembled something or someone. Would you sit there and think an alien did that or is it just natural , the way it is. I strongly believe that The Face on Mars is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Snake heat hillsall biker deal certain settings He deal diamond back He going desert like degrees While biking go crippling hills He redicuiou", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "he here are the great value of using technology. there is sofeware that can recongize emotions better ways foe human and computer to commmunic. I know what you thing we can calculate human emotion. the process begins with thecomputer conster a 3-d mold of the face there are 44 mojor muscles in model that make a action untit. classfild as happyiness , suprise , anger , disgust , fear , and sadness when your frontails rise when suprise or you orbicular oris will tightens your lips to show anger . facial expression are univer observers . Can track exprees in the mona lisa as human everyday we perfrom samne imprees calculation every day tell if your freind is sad by looking at her or his face look at human art we can see what the painter or paniting was express . with this you could ue a mirror that look at your face express to see a differt of a genunie smile and a forec one new computer sofeware we cold maybe croack a new da vinvi vode thing tenconly is be come great use of our time see what engone the paint is desiceing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have contrasting views, about the occurrences of children, whether parents or their offsprings should be penalized. In my opinion, the youngster should get penalties to have the realization; however, both views will be discussed. Punishing for misconduct is highly required for the children to develop their interpersonal skill. In this stage, humans have higher possibilities of performing some crimes, such as physically hurting others, bullying, smoking, and lying. Hence, unless youngsters are not judged and receive punishments for mischiefs, it is highly likely that these activities will be inculcated in their characters. Consequently, they will exercise these repeatedly and go astray. But, penalties for crimes will create an ethical sense and fear in them, which will refrain them to perform these later in their life. For example, a survey driven by Wikipedia reveals that those kids are grown-up with good personalities who are forfeited for their bad offences. On the other hand, parents should be punished as their offsprings are mostly followers of them. They are the primary teacher of a newborn and naturally transcribed by their babies. As a result, many young individuals execute crimes because of having improper supervision of their family as well as by seeing that in their elders' nature. Therefore, ancestors should take responsibilities for their child's criminal activities and pays for that. Despite this, penalizing others instead of offenders will create almost no difference in young human's behaviour as they might not realize the effects; rather, sentencing young criminals will arouse their conscience and let them not to do so in future. For instance, introducing extra fees for delayed attendance in the class has reduced the number of late attendance in a school. In conclusion, although according to some people elders should be judged for their offsprings' crime, I think kids should be regulated because it will provide them with consciousness and promote them to become a good person.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world has been experiencing environmental issues including climate change. To solve these problems, some people argue that the prices of fuel should be higher while others suggest increasing the cost of fuel is not a solution. In this essay, I will discuss why raising the cost of fuel is not the most useful way. To begin with, when the oil becomes more expensive, nature would benefit. First of all, there will be reduced pollution. It is well-known that fossil fuels are the major contributors to environmental degradation. If the price of fuel gets higher, people would reduce the usage of fuel, thereby mitigating the harmful effects on the environment. Second of all, scientists would be encouraged to invent more sustainable technologies. For instance, governments would allocate more resources to research and technologies so that scientists could come up with environmental-friendly technologies. On the other hand, some issues can be caused by an increase in the cost of fuel. Firstly, living costs would also rise. There will be so many people struggling financially because they can not afford basic necessities such as grocery shopping as a result of spending most of their money on fuel. Secondly, societal progress would be delayed. Residents would try to cut down on traveling. Unless it is really necessary to travel, people would stay home and work at home, which will result in low productivity. To sum up, a rise in the cost of fuel would produce both beneficial and negative outcomes for people. However, given that detrimental implications take precedence over positive ramifications, I strongly believe that increasing the fuel cost would not be a good idea to limit the impacts of fuel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "cars all around the world are a big part of many peoples daily use. they are used so much that it is starting to become a big problem in major cities like paris, beijing, and new york. now these cities and governments are trying to stop the use of cars before it is too late. in europe, cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emisions. in the u. s, they are resposible for up to 50 percent in some big cities. if there were less cars on the road, the amount of greenhouse gass emisions would drasticaly change. in paris, due to the amounts of polution in the air, all cars with even number plates were banned from driving on monday. the next day the same rules aplied to odd numer plates for a 22 euro fine. air polution was down 60 percent after 5 days of intensifying smog. diesel fuels are blamed in france for causing so much polution. a tax policy there makes diesels more populat than gas cars. diesels make up 67 percent of all vehicles in france, while in western europe, 53 percent are diesel. paris usualy has more polution than other big cities in europe. at one point, paris had 147 micograms of particulate matter per cubic meter. brussels had 114 and londan had 79.9. recently, there has been a shift in how amercans are usin g there automobiles. as each year passes, americans are buying less cars and driving less. the miles driven in america peaked in 2005 and steadily declined ever since. in april of 2013, the amount of miles driven by a person on average was equal to where it was in january 1995. in bogota columbia, there acr car free day frequently. in the capital city of 7 million people, only busses and taxis were allowed. authorities from other counties came to bogota to see what i was like without cars and were hapy about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting described author challenging three reasons distance water heat All occurred multiply effects others As time went cyclist grew tired heat In one sentence effect heat clearly described cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to be a person who takes care of horses, mules and young horses, not only that but oversea? Then the Seagoing Cowboys program is just for you! Then this is a great job fo you! It is a nice job to have because you get to work with horses and who doesn't love animals? Not only that! Joining the program lets you be with them oversea. If you love animals, this program is perfect because there are some horses, young horses and mules that need to be taken care of. It is your duty to make sure they are ok. This might sound like a boring job but it's not, this allows you to be with animals. Not only that, but it's pretty fun! This program not only provides being with animals, but the good thing is that you don't have to drive! They take the horses oversea which means that you don't have to do any work but be with horses! Pretty awesome right? If I were you I would choose this job. Lastly, if you think about it, you are with animals all day and you don't have to drive for nothing! Sounds like a pretty simple jib to me. That's not all though, since some horses are shipped to other places, this means you have a chance to visit many unique places that you probably haven't been to before! It's like a 3 in 1 package! It's basically not a program anymore, it's more like a vacation! These are great reasons this program is the one just for you. It is quite the program for every one! I mean you are with animals all day, you don't have to drive them which is great, and you get the chance to visit unique places! Please join this program it is great.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this enviroment today are electronics are becoming very specail to us and the humans that are buliding or providing these are becoming very intelligente to us. They're the ones that are going to help us get transportation when it is needed or when we need help that can bulid robots that act just like humans and that can talk just like us to. But we have some postives and negavtives going on here for these cars today in this enviroment because we don't know foresure if its going to work properly when it needs to be used in the right matter of time. Im going to tell us the postive and negatives on the side of my story for examples. Positves sides of the driverless cars are that they are made with an computer and they're self-driving that's very smart or imortant to the project of cars because we have humans that will get off work or come home from a party and be very sleepy or to drunk to drive and not everyone is going to have someone in the car to drive with them to drive for them. So it's an good thing for this program to be put inside of cars so that it can take the drivers home and safely without the driver getting hurt or injured for the rest of their lives. Or the senors that can help someone while backing up will sense you to react with the road before hitting something. Negative sides of these driverless cars are that how do we know that this is an very safe car to buy and that the cars will actualy work on roads while driving it. We don't know if this car will be the safest thing to get if the program dosen't work like its suppose to. Because this can still be very dangerous to teens an adults cause we can take are attetion off the roads and the program could get confused of what its doing and can cause an fatal crash or could cause fatal death to us. Then it will have to be new laws like what the promt said \"Waiting on the Law\". If the program is working good the company or the manufacturer could be sued for a lot of money and if they are putting extra programs into this cars that's illegal they will be in trouble with the law enforcements. Because if the technology fails who fault would or could it be?That's why they need to make sure that this will be an reliably safe program for these cars cause this won't be an human driving it's an computer(program) running this car. Just like how are phones and laptops frezzes the car could to the same exact thing to us but it's worst because it's an car that's driving on roads that can kill teens or little baby's that haven't even begin there lives yet. Another reason is the pricing of these cars negative. Not everyone is going to be able to afford an Telsa or an Audi these or 90,0000 to 100,000 cars. I think they're goign to have to make some cars that are affortable to buy for everyone to have since they say its an safe car to have. Not everyone is going to have this car unless you ahve an good paying job or a good bank account with lots of money saved up for it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "what is your argrument on driverless cars? Do you think there safe or not? Do you think they will turn out a disater or some of the best cars in the world. I will give you some of my opions on driverless cars. One of the first bad thing that can come out of this car is more accisdents if not built correctly.another bad example of why this car should not be put on the road is because one of the important sensor can stop working at any time and cause health problems like a heart attack, it might not warn the person in time to take controll the car and they could end up getting really scared. Good things that can come out of this car is it can help elderly get around easier without them having to do alot of work and move around. another good thing that can come out of this car is gas perfencienty, less gas will be needed to go farther places because the driverless car uses it smartly.one last good thing that can come out of this type of vehical is it can save childrens life by stopping emmidietly if a kid runs out infront of the car because of senseors in front bumber. I think I would allow driverless cars on the raod because it can make transportation easier for the whole world. But I would make sure it passes all saftey test and crash proof test before letting the first person buy one. This is my feelings on driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everywhere we go we see everyone's face and facial expressions. They could either be good or bad. But what if you had a computer to tell what emotion they were going through if you did not know? Prof. Thomas Huang and his partner have created an algorithm to depict what emotion a person is having. This technology is very valuable because we have never seen something like this before, it can even read emotions on a persons face from a painting. It uses all 44 major muscles in your face and depending on what muscles a person is using, they can depict what emotion you are going through. For example the author states in paragraph 3 that, \"your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrow when you're surprised; your orbicularis ori (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger\". In conclusion, this technology could end up being the next big thing just because of the simple fact that it is very new and could be used later on as part of something bigger. This technology could even end up changing how we think as humans and the way the world works today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the widespread use of unhealthy foods has become common, and the number of people who suffer from obesity has increased. Consequently, several people are argued that this problem should be solved by raising the price of fattening foods. I strongly disagree with this idea for several reasons. First of all, it is not justly to increase the price of foodstuff in order to encounter obesity. People from all walks of life purchase fast food like hamburgers, pizza, and French fries. As a result, People who live in deprived areas are unable to buy them forever, but people who belong to the affluent of society can buy them without any problems. This solution is not good for vulnerable groups of society. For example, children who live in low-income families are the first victim of this issue. Secondly, one of the most important recreational activities and gatherings is eating junk food. And this gathering assists people to keep in touch and socialize. If the price of fast food increases, numerous people, especially young people, are unable to go out and hang out with their peers. This limitation leads to depressions. For example, students have low incomes, and they are not capable of paying for fast food products at a high price. In conclusion, this solution leads to discrimination among citizens of society, and some people face a problem in their lives because they cannot afford to buy it forever, and I think training people is the best way to tackle it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The last paragraph end story authors way showing Saeng wanted spring come early wants see hibiscus If spring doesnt come fast get see hibiscus snow wont melt When Saeng comes hopes take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people may believe that the Face on Mars was created by aliens, but research claims it's something not as exciting. NASA has been researching this \"face\" for many years. Their studies and pictures have concluded that the Face on Mars is a huge rock formation. Even though scientists have proved this theory, people still believe otherwise. It all started in 1976 when NASA unveiled the image for all to see. NASA found a huge landform made of rock on Mars in 1976. The landform was found on a region of Mars called Cydonia. This landform came as a surprise to everyone. Large rock formations were common in this region of Mars, but something stood out to NASA when they came across this rcok formation. This landform looked like a giant face. Scientists didn't know if it was an alien artifact or if the shadows and the way the rock formed just made it look like a face. There was no way to tell other than the photo's taken from space. NASA had to keep investigating this to come up with an explanation for this \"face\" on Mars. So in 1998 they took another picture of the rock formation that was better quality. They still couldn't tell what it was because it was very cloudy on Mars the day they took the picture. They had one more shot to get a good image of the landform. In 2001, NASA took one last picture and they found out what the rock formation really was. Just as they had predicted, it was a mesa. Which was common for the area on Mars where they found it. Even though scientists knew it was a mesa, conspiracy theorists still believed it could be an alien artifact. There are many signs that prove that this rock formation is not an alien artifact. First of all scientists have ruled it out as an alien artifact. They have done research on this \"face\" for over 20 years and they have proved it's a huge rock formation. People have always wondered how and why the face appears if it's a mesa. Well the face is created by shadows. These shadows give the illusions of the eyes, nose, and mouth. Scientists have also told us that things in a digital image are 3 times bigger than their actual pixel size. This tells us that if there were some type of pyramid, alien object, or airplanes on the ground we would be able to see them. The Face on Mars will always be a controversy to some people, but scientists have proof of what the face actually is, a mesa. The pictures you see are actually showing a Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa. These rock formations are commonly found on Mars and on Earth. So even if you still believe the Face of Mars is an alien artifact of some kind, you can at least know Earth and Mars have something in common, huge rock formations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many different ways The fact California desert heat affected limited water using energy riding bike The towns came across also made impact fact couldnt get water place rest I water depleating sometimes life feel cruel This shows hilly terrain dehydration heat affecting cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although builders Empire State Building managed obstacles allowing dirigibles dock many issues left unsolved When designing mast accommodate blimp architects realized pressure would put building s frame In order support weight dirigible needed make sixty thousand dollars worth modifications paragraph structure building Also builders develop way tether dirigible building allow passengers supplies unboard Therefore architects designed rocketshaped mast shiny aluminum also housed elevators stairs paragraph However builders forgot incorporate winds top building Once front dirigible docked back blimp would swivel around irradically Furthermore builders disregarded existing laws banned dirigibles flying low cities states paragraph This precaution due safety hazard dirigibles posed since highly flammable hydrogen used These imposing obstacles made use Empire State Building dock unrealistic", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Smog barely filled the air in VAUBAN, Germany. It's fortunate that 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57% sold their cars to move to America. More and more people are promoting \"car reduced\" communities. Only 12% of gas emissions in Europe are caused by passenger cars. People in France enforced a partial driving ban for a while just to clear the air of the city. People of that city where demanded to leave their cars at home if they had a license plate with even-numbers. If they disobeyed they had to pay a 31$ fine. Of course the following day it applied to people with odd-numbered license plate. The traffic went down 60% after 5 days of intense smog. Paris usually has more smog than othe European capitals. BOGOTA, Colombia is where the car-free day was held. Many citezens participated in this event to limit car usage to reduce city smog. Violators faced a 25$ fine. But it was a pretty successful day despite the fact that is was raining, it didn't really stop anyone from not using their cars. The campaign tin Bogota began in the mid-1990s. More than one colombian city has joined this event Cali and Valledupar. A s of april 2013, the number of car usage per person has gone down nearly 9% lower than the point almost close to where the country was in January 1995 in the United States. And the numbers keep dropping down steadily as a study last year found that driving done by young citizens has been decreasing by 23% between 2001 - 2009. The only advantes that come from not using cars is that your city won't be filled with smog, you wont have gas emissions, and there wont be traffic jams.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus author ends story Saeng s thoughts The thought trying test hibiscus starts budding ties story together The story mainly looks flower memories brings But wouldnt gone shop passed test This creates full understanding test hibiscus It also shows importance hibiscus Both Saeng flower must adapt survive place Saeng Vietnam flower shop moved belong new placeIn ways Saeng flower She must adapt home survive The flower outside cold must adapt surroundings order survive When knows flower survived harsh winter realize survive living This would make feel strong focused", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Never have the topics concerning technology failed to attract the public’s attention. However, when it comes to whether robots are beneficial or detrimental to human society, people hold divergent views. From my perspective, I believe that even though robots can be beneficial to human future development, they will undoubtedly exert some negative repercussions on society. On the one hand, robots have greatly revolutionized people’s lives in many aspects. To begin with, it is not rare to see a great many robots used for scientific research. Since they are equipped with a metal shell and advanced technology, they can be utilized to perform some dangerous and arduous tasks, which is conducive to ensuring the researchers’ security and promoting the research progress. A typical example is that many robots are occupied exploring the ocean trench. Also, robots are commonly used in some companies as they can enhance work efficiency to a large extent, thus generating more economic value. The efficiency of traditional labour is limited, while the introduction of robots can break through the limitation of manual labour. In factories, robots are qualified for some competitive tasks, which will not only reduce possible errors but speed up the production process. On the other hand, no matter how great convenience they have brought to people, the drawbacks of the usage of robots should not be underestimated. Humans' overreliance on robots will contribute to poor creativity, flexibility and self-motivation. As a growing number of people tend to make products with the help of robots, they will be loath to think independently and engage in making handicrafts by themselves. In that case, there will be a foreseeable decrease in humans’ originality and manual dexterity. Apart from this, robots are inclined to undermine social stability. They have taken the places of many average people who were formerly employed in basic positions, which will bring about unemployment issues. Under such circumstances, those individuals are likely to be underrated, underappreciated and underprivileged by the public, which can lead them to take revenge on the public community to express their resentment and dissatisfaction. In conclusion, the usage of robots will not merely bring some merits or demerits to society. For some aspects, it will be a blessing, but for others, it will be a nightmare.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie features setting affect cyclist many ways First sun making cyclist hot dehydrated He states The sun beginning beat sun big factor affect cyclist Also hills country roads Going hills take alot work use alot energy The cyclist says CAPS replaced short rolling hills snakes road make cyclist timid looking snakes would get bit Againg cyclist states dimond backblocked majority pavement front me old factory gave cyclist hope crushed hopes The factory even made thirsty many affects cyclist due setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there are several factors that affect the development of children. Many people feel that the home no longer plays the largest role in child development. In my opinion, through outside factors can affect on them. In this article, I want to express my views. And also, which idea can more correct. Families have a direct impact on children. First of all, children grow up at home with their parents at least 15 years old and they repeat the behaviour of their parents. And also, children’s personalities are formed at home. Children do not have much access to new technology in their early years. If parents make time for children and love them, kids run towards them. In my opinion, the kid who is friends with her or his parents and vice versa, they can be successful in the future and external factors can never affect. For example: there is a lot of scientific paper to can prove this idea. On the other hand, some people believe that children affect outside. Because, technology is advancing every day. For instance, kids are interested in the world of technology and they can do with smartphones, computer, internet and so on. Even, the watch cartoons on the YouTube instead TV. The result, this happen can be really dangerous for children. In conclusion, despite the technology, but families play an important role in the future of children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are split opinions about art subject. There are some communities who support discipline of art should countine to being essential subject while other indivuduals argues that it should not be. However,both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both views would be discussed. Examining the former opinion, Art encourages creativity and self-expression which are critical for children's development. To given an example, offsprings can express their feelings by using creativity with dicipline of art Moreover, Incorporating art in education enhances critical thinking and problem-solving skills. For instance, In these lessons, they can be encouraged to think to find creative solutions. On the contrary, the latter view suggests that craft is a waste of time because they feel that there are many other subjects which are essential for their bright future such as science, mathematics, and biology. By doing this, they will become a scientist, doctor and many others. In fact, they will earn very good money by studying these subjects not from a profession. To conclude and give my opinion, discipline of art is a fantastic and stress-free activity which is quiete important for learning. Doing crafts as a necessary subject at school is considered an appropriate idea for kids.The government should add art as a compulsory subject at schools. Hence, children will do some stress-free activities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Authors that present a well-developed, convincing argument can have a large influence on their reader's thoughts. In the passage, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author explains the different reasons as to why Earth, as a whole, should further study the planet of Venus, alotting all its difficulties. While the kinks of being able to go to Venus are still being worked out, this author gives insight as to why this barren planet is still important. The first idea the author had was related to the atmosphere of Venus. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the coulds of higly corrosive sufuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" In Paragraph 3, the author does not give a higly convincing argument. Humans need oxygen to live, so how is it expected for them to survive on a planet that has little to no oxygen? It is not possible to change the chemical makeup of an entire planet. The argument displayed by the author is not credible in any way and does not give any reason as to why one would want to continure research in this area. The next problem that Earth faces in studying Venus is that temperatures on this planet exceed 800 degrees Fahrenheit, a temperature found nowhere on Earth. This temperature is beyond the maximun limit that human can edure, which leaves behind the compelling factor of wanting to study more of this sister planet. The author also states, \". . . and the atmospheric pressure is 9 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme that anything humans encounter on Earth.\" If the conditions of Venus are so bad, why should we be expected to study more of this planet. Similar to the carbon dioxide in the air, there is no way to change the temperature and pressure of an entire planet. Once again, the argument given by this author is not convincing. The author uses an idea proposed by NASA for humans to study Venus. They say that they could use hovering vehcles such as a blimp to fly over the planet, somewhere around 30 miles high. While 30 miles is a long way abover the planet, the temperature would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, which is not ideal for reseachers. \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" If studying a planet is as difficult as the author is saying here, then Venus should be abandoned because even if NASA was able to study it, there is obviously no way that the planet will ever be suitable to live on. The author's arguments so far have all been a lost cause. The author does explain that Venus may have been previously similar to Earth-like conditions, including oceans to support forms of life. He states that it has similar features to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters. While this may be too, Venus has come a long way in that it is no longer able to sustain life. Even if it previously was similar to Earth, that means that it has gotten worse over time, which says that from here on, it will continue to grow worse. Proven by the author, Venus's conditions are far too extreme for the technology we have today. This planet is increasingly too dangerous to be explored, therefore the research toward it should be abandoned, and pushed more toward studying other plants, or even other solar systems in order to find another sutiable planet for humans to comfortably live on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I was a scientist at NASA discussing the Face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens, because in the story it's saids that '' Face on Mars'' has since became a pop icon. If I was a scientist in NASA I would found out how did the peron face came to another planet. They have to get out the earth to come to another planet to just put your face on it out of no were. But if a person did put there face inprint on a another planet, I think they will turn into a alien. I will tell you why I said that, because people say that aliens are real and they harm creatures. Also, if I'm the scientist this will tells that a FACE on a human body doing on a another planet they should be on earth. In the article it saids: twenty five years ago something funny happening around Mars, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping photos of possible landing sites for it's sister ship Viking 2. Also, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face, an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on the monitors. But now scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa common enough around Cydonia only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. But if I'm the scientist trying to figured out all this work,and see who's the human face or a alien face because humans on earth an aliens in Mars or more planets. But afterwards after that happening, it saids how some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile the defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acient civilization on Mars. Also, although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia became a prioprity for NASA when Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in September. 1997, eighteen long years ago after the Viking missions ended.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One problems huge dirigible held top building held single cable would stressed rest building order make tower half building stable would spend sixty thousand dollars modifications nature key issue winds unpredictable violent air currents even dirigibles tied mast back would swivel around large dirigibles dangling pedestrians safe Another reason dirigibles could docked top Empire State Building law allowing airships fly low urban areas This law would make illegal ever dock ships overall obstacles faced well building Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author has shown how Venus is a planet that is worthy of our exploration through a few different points in this essay. However the author also uses many different examples of why Venus is/has been too dangerous for humans to venture on. But the essay does lean towards how necessary it is for humans to be curious about this journey more so than not, and they author does this using a few examples. Overall the author uses a large amount of their evidence from NASA mainly to describe certain ways they are trying to solve the problems and how they have started to already. The author does introduce the con aspect of their essay first by explaining why humans have not been able to journey onto Venus' surface yet. They start by saying, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\"(paragraph 2). This is not the most reassuring few phrases when the goal is to get humans on the surface of Venus. But by adding this in the author is placing an understanding of what the dangers are. The dangers are plainly that if a spacecraft cannot survive the surface of our neighbor planet. . .then how can a human possibly do it. So by adding in that scare factor the author then switches the tone to describes the certain parts of Venus that scientists need to get close to. Because in order to study it they need to be close enough to see it clearly. The author tells us all of the different features that are similar to Earth and because of all of these similarities scientists can learn and discover so much about our planet from Venus. The author names all of these similarities which are: \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system . . . has a surface of rocky sedimet and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountians, and craters\"(paragraph 4). When the author says this they are leading the reader in to want to know more about what Venus is like. This is because when they say that Venus is \"the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" they are making the reader wonder what Venus must be like. Also making the readers curious as to what humans can learn from this planet as well. Which is a major benifit in a risk management scale. Next, the author also introduced a possible solution to the problem that is Venus' surface. They found out that NASA is doing their own research on how to land safely on Venus and to be able to withstand a longer duration of time there as well. The author said, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. . . Just as our jet airplanes travel at higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus woud avoid the unfriendly groung conditions by staying up and out of their way\"(paragraph 5). This is a major point because if NASA is already finding different ways that they can have ships on Venus, they are a step closer to having a ship survive on the surface as well. This is also very important because as they are discovering different materials that are lasting in Venus-like condition, and they are learning more about what could work for humans. Because if they were to create the ship that would float above the fray; then they would be able to have scientist there to observe and learn about Venus. The only problem with this is that the scientists wouldn't be able to collect samples from the surface yet. Furthermore, the author explained a few different points throughout the entire essay. Some of them consisting of cons to the situation, like how a spacecraft is unable to last longer than a few hours on the planet. But other parts of the essay were how important it is for people to go and search Earth's sister planet because of the very similar landscape that the two share. The author also added in some of the different solutions NASA is trying to decypher and perfect. For example the plan to have a ship floating over the fray so that scientists are close enough to make observations but they are just far away enough that they are unable to take samples. Over all, the author portrayed Venus as a highly worthy planet to explore and that there are many different factors as to why it is so important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How often do you ride in a car? Do you drive a one or any other motor vehicle to work? The store? To the mall? Have you ever thought about how many people in the world do that exact same thing- travel to every destination using a fuel powered motorvehicle. Not many people realize the intenisve damage that they're doing when they turn their key in the egnition. What if you didn't drive to work today? If you're like any regular car user, the thought \"What?! I could never survive without my car!\" may run through your mind. It is possible though, to live without your main mean of transport. Just look at cities like Vuban, Paris, and Bogota; each one has in some way restricted their people's usage of cars and they actually enjoy it! If you limit your car usage, it can inturn result in many advantages and benefits in yourself and in your community. A not so recognized benefit to giving up your car usge would be the positive consequences it has on your health. In source 1, Heidrun Walter states that \"When [he] had a car, [he] was always tense. [He's] much happier [without it].\" Think about it, imagine all the angry road rage you experience while driving. That surely does not have a positive effect on your mood or health. Driving takes a copious amount of focus and mental activity, such as, trying to navigate, dealing with bad drivers, etc., that after a short period of time, you're stressed out and tired. In cities like New York and Paris, the population is high. This leads to congestion in the streets and excessive amounts of pollution. Warm layers of air, according to Robert Duffer in \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" traps the car emissions. How is that healthy? He also states that Paris had to enforce a temporary driving ban after the pollution levels reached an all time record. After a few days of less driving the pollution went way down. Since people aren't driving, they have to find other means of transport. This could include walking, biking, or skating to destintions. Those are all physical excercises! Your body is getting to work out and you'll mentally feel fresher; more than you would sitting in a car. Taking a break from driving also can help with the overall look of your city. Pollution doesn't cause the flowers to grow. It certainly doesn't smell nice. It sets a filter over the town and gives off a \"dirty\" vibe. With less driving, there is less nasty pollution being emitted, therefore leading to a cleaner community. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's article, \"In German Suburb, Life goes on Without Cars,\" she gives the good point that since there is a restriction on car and motor vehicle transportation, there is going to be more walkers. If you have tons of people taking the sidewalks instead of the roads, you might need a few more pathways and closer stores that are in walking distance. Andrew Selsky states that \"Parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city; uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks... and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" As stated previously, pollution is not benefiting the environment. Organizations such as the Envronmental Protection Agency in the U.S., are promoting \"car reduced\" communities, says Rosenthal. These communities have far less pollution and are much cleaner. Cities are also promoting this idea and are having days devoted to \"no-car driving.\" In Bogota, Colombia, they hold an anual \"car-free\" day where only buses and taxis are permitted. Any other drivers would be fined. Although fining someone for using a posession they own might ruffle some feathers, it did have a successful turn out and significantly reduced the \"smog.\" In conclusion, although the idea of giving up our precious automobiles for walking to our destination might sound impossible, it's not. Reducing our driving can lead to many benefits and advantages in our daily lives. These include an increase in health, an improved look to our cities, and an improved environment all around us. So, instead of picking up the car keys next time you have to go to work, try dusting off the helmet and take a bike ride!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features environmental setting affecting cyclist A setting certain time place event taking place along setting features background description basically giving away additional information subject idea The features along setting intefering cyclist hot temperature Lodi California making cyclist biker hotter usualier heads wrong direction closer nearer hot blazen scroaching desert In addition running water beginning get exhausted heat plus starting lose consciousness along getting dehydrated This major problem character losing sense direction getting panickly supply water running extremely low A instance environmental setting affecting cyclist I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state The water bottle contained tantalizing sips Wide rings dried sweet circled skirt growing realization I could drop heartstroke gorgeous June Joe Kurmaskie example This sight troubling I hitting water bottles pretty regularly I travelling high deserts California June Joe Kurmaskie The hotness heat also increased characters confidence getting panickly A instance I began breaking ride distances I could see horizon telling I could make far Id fine Joe Kurmaskie In conclusion hot setting California affected cyclist number ways exhasted water supply caused become exhausted dehydrated making lose logically sense make decisions however loss sense direction also gave self confidence stirved roads serves town twenty miles away order get water survive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes and no yes because in the story it said the teacher should know when they don't get it or just bored. No because the computer should not tell when u sad happy or mad at someone we know when it happens. Yes because in my way kids should be at school do what they go to school to do because i want everyone to get out of school because i know it's boring but we have to make it. No because it's going to be alot of money coming out of people bags and checks and some people might not even buy it because we know how our emotions is if we sad, happy, mad, or just feeling like you want to cry sometimes. But no the computer should not tell you how you feel because what if the computer is wrong and they said the wrong emotion. Then it's just money going to buring becuse people going to tell other people it's don't work then everyone in the world will stop buying it. But yes i think it should be using in school so teacher can do something to help the student feel like he/she want to do it in pass. Today is technology works fine but a little slow and some arens but it's fne if we use that technology then we should only use it in schools not a home thing for people. The school should have them to sell what the students been doing all their years it will be a good and new update for the schools systems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, opinions have been divided as to whether employers should tell their staff how to dress or not since it does not directly influence work productivity. Although the dress code of employees is not vitally important, it exists for some positive purposes in various jobs. There is a whole host of reasons why employees should be allowed to wear relaxed dress code. The primary reasons for this trend is that since customers would judge an enterprises mostly by their products, it is unnecessary to have a uniform in particular job such as technology. In fact, some of the most successful technology giants, namely Facebook or Google, are prominent for the relaxed environment they try to create. Here, by galvanizing employees to dress casually, their work was of outstanding quality, thus, these corporations became undeniably prosperous. Therefore, strict dress codes are completely unnecessary in the technology sector. Having said that, however the rules regarding employees' clothing are still relevant in other work situations. For example, a nurse or a police need to wear uniforms for not only practical and safety reasons, but also a sense of recognition or identity. Additionally, lawyers or politicians also have to wear formal clothing in order to either gain more credibility from the dwellers or portray an image of authority, trustworthiness and diligence. Thereby most of us prefer to see these professionals in smart, formal attire, even if it is not strictly necessary. In conclusion, even though the trend relaxed dress codes for worker appears attractive, I believe that it is only compatible with certain occupation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the Face on Mars In May of 2001, NASA sent a spacecraft, Viking 1, to space to circle Mars and to take photos of this red plant to see if there were anywhere for its sister ship, Viking 2, to land. While Viking 1 was taking pictures of Mars, it captured an image of a face. Scientist thought it was just another Martian mesa, which is pretty common actually. But this one had unusal shadows that made it look like a face of an Egyptian Pharaoh. Few days after recieving the photo from Viking 1, NASA released the picture to the public for everyone to see. Along with the photo it captioned \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Many people refered to this as the \"Face on Mars\". Many civilians thought that this was created by ailens which is untrue. They also thought that the Face is bona fide, evidence of life on Mars, conspiracy theorists said this was evidence that NASA would rather hide. NASA captured as many good photos as they could of the \"Face\" over the 18 years Viking 1 was in space. In April of 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter camera team captured a photo ten times sharper that the photo Viking 1 had took. Many web surfers were anxiously waiting to see the photo. But many people were dissapointed when they read that the \"Face\" was just a natural landform, there was no alien monument what-so-ever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being convinced that completing a certain task is worth any strugles along the way, and you end up severely hurt because of it. That is exaclty what the author of this article is trying to do. In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author does a poor job of supporting the idea that studying a planet as dangerous as Venus is worth it. Studying Venus is a terrible idea because technology isn't advanced enough, it would take years to discover anything beneficial, and the costs' of this, both in money and lives, are outrageous. Technology throughout the world has improved since the 1900's,however, it has improved on Earth and in regards to Earthly tasks. When talking about something as dangerous as exploring another planet, it is easy to see that our Earth bound technology simply cannot do the job. in paragraph 5 of the article, the author describes an idea that was thought up by \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administartion\". This idea is to have humans 30 or so miles above Venus for exploration. The author claims how this would be beneficial in keeping humans safe from the Venusian landscape. However, The author does not support this idea well, as he goes on to say how not much exploration can be done from there, and the conditions would still be extremely dangerous but \"survivable\". Also in paragraph 7, the author explains how NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. He explains how they are working on some simplified electronics, made of silicon carbide, that have been testedd in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. This may sound like a good thing, but it is far from one. This is because the author finsihes by saying that the electronics lasted only three weeks. If a computer can't withstand Venus's conditions longer than three weeks, I am very doubtful that a human can. This proves my point that our technology is far too inadvanced for such a task like exploring another planet. Therefore supporting my claim that the author did a poor job in supporting this idea. Exploring unmarked territory isn't something that can be done over night. Unmarked territory is exactly what Venus is. Even if technology did evolve enough so that humans could visit this planet, it would takes years, decades, even centuries, to accomplish. In the article, the author continously offers alternatives for exploration. He does this is paragraphs' 5,6, and 7 where he gives examples of organizations that are working towards this exploration. However in all of the paragraphs, the author seems to only be giving \"what if\" scenarios or in some cases just simple ideas that have been thought about and are possibly being examined. He fails to provide any real data or statistics for these things, except when he mentions the simplified electronics in paragraph 7. Even then, those devices are only able to survive for 3 weeks, so it would still take many years to just improve those devices. Also, in paragraph 6 the author states, \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus\". This statement is very broad, and it does not key in on any form of information that should lead us to believe that to be true. These details from the passage prove my point on the amount of years it would take, as well as the fact that nobody has any idea how long. The question to be asked here is, \"Is it worth the wait?\". For these reaons I stand behind my claim that the author supported the idea of exploring venus very poorly. Assuming that the exploration of Venus does eventually happen one day, how much money would go into it, how many lives? These are all questions that need to be considered when brainstoming the idea of visitng another planet. The author of this article is avoiding all of these mainstream problems by simply saying it's worth the risks, when it actaully is not. In paragraph 3, the author explains all of the dangers of Venus and how they can affect humans. He explains, \" On the planet's surface, the temperature averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Considering that this is true, we can definitrly assume that condition on Venus are severly dangerous, and a lot of people may get hurt trying to explore it. The aurthor also states, \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oeans and would liquefy many metals. What the author is stating here is that not even our strongest materials and creations can withstand the conditions on Venus. This means that in order to explore Venus we have to design all new machinery, which would cost a lot of money, not to mention the human costs as we would need humans to test things out. He also makes it notable that venus has the hottest surface of any planet, despite not being the closest to the sun. All of these facts are serious concerns when regarding human safety as well as propr functioning of machines. Even if exploring Venus was a possibilty, would it be even be worth it after all of he human costs and money costs or paid. What we are discussing here is putting human lives at risk, and spending a ton of money on a project that is no where near being ready ready to present. These reasons as well as the provided facts assure me on my claim that the author did a terrible job of supporting this idea of exploration. In conclusion, since our technology isn't advanced enough, it would take far too many years to do, and the human and money costs wuold be outrageously high, we should not explore Venus. Exploring Venus proves to be very dangerous, and we have proved that we are no where near being ready for such a task. We would first need to advance our technology for the task. This would take years to due, it would also use up a ton of money, and put people in serious danger. The author did a terrible job of supporting the idea that exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dnagers it presents. For one, there were not enough facts presented in the article that were beneficiary to the idea. Also, of the pros that were present, the cons outweighed then tremendously. Exploring Venus proves to be a terrible idea, atleast until we are actually ready to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Professor Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois made a software called \"Facial Action Coding System\". The invention can calculate the exact percentage of what emotions you're showing. Just from a photograph or video the FACS can tell you how happy, sad, disgusted, fearful, angry, and surprised you are. I think the Facial Action Coding System should be used by students to read their emotions. Everyday students all over the world are learning. Teachers teach lessons in order for the students to get the concepts. Most teachers have different ways of getting their point across to their students. Now, what if during a lesson the Facial Action Coding System was used on students. From the trial you could see if the student was bored or excited during it. The teacher could see if what they're doing is interesting to the students or not. The more exciting a lesson is, the more intruiged a student will be and will be more focused on learing the concept. I know from my perspective that if a teacher is doing the same type of teaching everyday, I get bored. How would teachers know I'm bored though? The FACS will tell them if I'm interested in it. Dr. Huand stated that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"The teacher could then think, \"Okay what could I do to make the lessons more interesting so for one the kids would be more into the lesson and focused, and for two the students will care more and be more excited about them.\" The students should use them during lessons so teachers could get a better grasp on if how they're teaching is exciting and interesting to the students. Students see guidance counselors everyday. It could be because of bullying, problems at home, or just even to schedule classes for the next year. I know as a student that some people that need to see the guidance counselor don't go because they don't think their problem is serious. What if a guidance counselor was able to use a Facial Action Coding System on the students to see if they were sad or angry. He or She could then look at the data and see what students she needs to talk to. For example, what if a girl named Lydia took this FACS test and she was 60 percent sad, 10 percent happy, and 20 percent mad. The counselor could then say, \"Okay I really need to talk to Lydia to see what is bothering her.\" Guidance counselors and schools should test students to see their emotions. All over the world a new type of invention or technology is being invented, every single day. As the century moves on technology is getting more and more advanced. Eighteen years ago we barely even had cellphones, and now we have cell phones bigger than our hands. Phones with facial recognition. The Facial Action Coding System is just one of the technological advances in the past ten years. The students will need to get familiar with new technology. The more technology they use the more they can get used to it. Technology is changing our lives. The kids need to grow up using all different types of technology because who knows what they will be able to use when they're older. Students should use the FACS to get used to the new technological advances. I think the Facial Action Coding System should be used by students to read their emotions. Although, most people have different facial expressions and everyone reacts in different ways. As stated in the writing, \"For instance you could probably tell how a friend is feeling by just looking at their face.\" You wouldn't really know for sure because they could just be faking it. With the FACS it would tell you the exact percentage of their emotions. If a teacher used this software in their classroom they would be able to tell if what they're doing is exciting or interesting to their pupils. Guidance counselors and schools could use it to see their student's emotions and then they could communicate with them and help them. It would be great for the students to get a firm grasp on new and advancing technology. The Facial Action Coding System is a great invention that students should have access to use in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" Introduction: Venus, called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest, it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. However, this nickname is misleading since Vanus is actually planet. It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. A thick atmosphere of almosst 97 percetn carbondioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Vneus's atmosphere. have temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 timer greater than what we experience on our own plenet, so Venus is realy dangers for temperatures. Body: Venuz is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density andi size , and the closet in distance to. Simplified electronics made of silicon carbie have been tested in a chamber the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Conclusion: Vanus is actually a planet in our solar system, is second planet from our sun, is simple to see from the distant but dafe vantage point Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you honestly believe that aliens created the Face ? Twenty five years ago spacecraft was snapping photos of landsites and spotted a shadowy likeness of a humans face. A Mesa. First, they saw an enormous head which seemed to be staring back at the cameras from the Red Planet called Cydonia. When seen by Mission Controllers, they let off shockness. Shortly after the surprise the sensation was long gone. Few days later, the Nasa invielded the image. The caption said \" huge rock formation\". This resembled a human head formed by shadows with the illison of eyes, mouth, and a nose. Next, Authors reasoned these images would be a great way to engage Mars and the other people; it did. The \"face of mars' became a huge icon for twenty five years. Soon it dtarred in films, was seen in books and magizines and most favored in grocery store lines. Photographing Cydonia beame a priorty for Nasa when MGS, Mars Global Surveyor arrived agian in September of 1997 which was a long eighteen years after. Then, April 5, 1998, MGS traveled over Cydonia for the first time. They met Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camer team (MOC) snapped a picture ten times better the the original Viking picture tooking. There were thousands of anxios and very curious web surfers waiting to see tghe amazing phoyo revealing a natural landform , there was no alien monument. Aliens didn't create the image illison. As rule thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger the the origianl size so if there were other objects, you would be able to see them. In conclusion, what the pcture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or a messa which are landforms around the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use Facial Action Coding System or FACS could be extremely valuable in the classroom. The amount of time students are confused on a subject or do not understand what the teacher is saying because they are moving to fast could drop tremendously if teachers could read how the student's are feeling. The teacher could know that the whole class is bored with a lesson and modify that lesson later to make it much more interesting. Knowing how the student's feel could change the classroom for the better. Throughout any student's school career there is a moment when they are confused by a subject and was forced to retreive additional help in fear of a bad grade on their upcoming test. Some students would be too shy to stop the teacher to elaborate or could not visit the teacher after class due to time constraints and forced to look up youtubes videos hours on end in order get a grasp on a subject. If the teacher knew that multiple students felt this way in their class, they could change their lesson plan to make things much more understandable for the students just as Dr. Haung predicts. The Facial Action Coding System could bridge that disconnect between teacher and student. Not only could a teacher make a subject easier to comprehend, they can also make it much more enjoyable. This technology can help a teacher know if their students are bored or not. If the teacher knows this they can make a lesson much more interesting, getting the students engaged, which leaves less heads sleeping desks. This could lead to students having more of a passion towards subjects such as math or chemistry because they are having fun with those topics. Some time if someone doe not find a subject interesting they won't try hard in that class unlike someone who does like that subject. Knowing student's emotions through this technology could change the experience of school as a whole. If teachers were to follow the readings from FACS students would be able to comprehend and enjoy a variety of subject matters, there could be much less sleeping bodies in class, and the engagement level in classrooms could skyrocket.Just only if FACS and schools cooperated to make the education system better as a whole and makes things a better experience for the student.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story ends interesting paragraph This paragraph talks coming obstacles telling reader try It important never give keep trying sucede In story Saeng moved away Vietnam really missed top saeng failed drivers test She really upset She saw group geese flying said come back spring new plant starts grow I retake drivers test Geese overcome cold flying south winter The cold weather obstacle Also new plant ca nt grow warm Her plant come small bud spring People face obstacles time You keep trying inorder get around", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Car-free\", besides the main thoroughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs. Bascially everyone should or are riding bicycles because most of the streets is the sidewalk. Passenger cars are reponsilbe for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. Ani increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities. Many expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role. the previous bill, 80% of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20% percent to other transport. Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city, On monday even-numbered liscense plates were ordered to leave their cars at home. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined and not only that but 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. There was a warm layer of air to trap car emissions. Diesel fuel was to blamed, Paris had more smog than other European capitals. Public transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday. Smog cleared enough to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday. BOGOTA the city had a car-free day, for hiked, biked, skated or took the bus to work. The goal of this was to promote alternative transportaion and reduce smog. \"This is a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" says a businessman riding on a two-seat bicycle with his wife. Two other cities Cali and Valledupar joined the event. Parks and sports has bloomed throughout the city and districts have crop up. United states, President Obama ambitious goals to curb the U.S. Recent studies suggest that americans are buying few cars, driving less and getting fewer license as each year goes by. Many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downturn and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way, few years will be telling. Beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plant. Getting a driver's licence is not priority. Some people find their ways to getting where they need to go. Parntering with telecommunications industy to create cities in which \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety. All theses paragraph's abover show each and every detail advantages about limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think computers nt good people could spend time exercising hanging friends family reading The first reason I nt think computers good people could spend time exercising instead could ride bike even walk dog exercising hard work s better staring computer screen Just eat well dose nt mean healthy You need exercise stay healthy So run ing walk dog go gym instead sitting computer Another reason I think computers nt good time computer could hanging friends family Lets say family going beach stay home play games facebook Your family comes back talks fun even tho nt You could apart memories Now time compare friends Its movie night friends going But stay home webcam aunt You stayed home times computer You missed lot My final reason I think computers bad instead computer time reading time Looking computer screen reading lot different reading book Reading books increases vocabulary learn different types litature Over reading books makes smarter When reading online read people say basically rumors READ In conclusion I think people spend time exercising hanging family friends reading instead computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think computer positive I know teenagers computer lot really bother parents computers houses I tell reason They good sources information good way talk friends gives information places might know Primarily I would like say computer fantastic source information They tell anything This also helpful working project mom cant get books library go A computer simpler way look information Did know parents got family computer regret desicion Thats almost parents see would help kids whatever studying Secondly teenagers today use computers talk friends email I think alot better sending Why would wait letter cousin When talk seconds And paper buy I would like say like one time I work looking hotel stay went ended finding great hotel cheap You also go map guest someone people dont computers important would In conclusion I think computeer important thing reson good book source help us communicate friends every information imleaving opinion hopefully learn something better pick right", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some experts warned people spend much time computers Yet look advantages computer You develop better handeye coordination skills internet friendsfamily could live hundreds miles away learn cultures around world along people live countries without ever leaving home In oponion computers overall benefit society helping us learn every day First many skills develop computer For example playing interactive highpaced games kids get sense awareness timing handeye coordination Not mention new advances technology people go college without ever leaving home much lower price still getting great education Many people even work home thanks computers These still many skills learned computers Secondly buy ticket far away country s fairly expensive trade money money go hasslels baggage ect When could simply go online look computer You go online look countries recipes language pictures people without hassel going Not mention kids nt old enough report instead making countless textbooks newspapers libraries general go online country must info need right So getting information would ve learned first place thereby extending knowledge Finally internet helps people connect Leading experts Family security agency says since people started using programs like facebook many families live different countries able recoonect get know oneanother For example uncle lives could buy cameras computer install within minutes seeing othertalking face face I think better simply writing letters s quicker get connect Same goes friend move away want stay touch A quick facebook account ll still good friends So yes computers benefit society help teach people skills learn distant culturesfar away countries connect people might live different countries I nt see anything wrong beneficial factors society So yes computers positive effect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus should be studyied because there could be elements that have yet be discovered on Venus which could help humanitly. Venus has the hottest surface temperature in the solor system. Temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the astmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. However, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. But because a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. And even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. No space craft has survived landing on Venus for more than a few hours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper staff came attention considered libraries community removal censorship books libary I find accepable opinion attempt mislead perhaps hide previous evidence offenisve reading material futher generations For example personal favorite mine book labled A book describes childs heartships abuse takes daily basics Books sort imformitive also gives reader open mind things might Some topics include slavery abuse war discrimation These topics today still among things happen today s society Censoring removal book pointless simple reason least three four current issue strickly important generations aware heartships problems lessons topics araised Without imforming generations issues could result repeat history country trying prevent My opinion movies however little different I believe movies okay must contain obvious purpose acts discrimnation offesive material Most movies nowadays offesive relating way movie rated least rated allows certain age groups able watch material offesive perhaps discrimating They also need adult combinations preview movie So closing would like consider opinion wise outlook offensive discrimating issues I fully believe open content allowed certain ages depending content Plently observations must made parents guradians needed I appreatiate time understanding letter Thanks Sincerly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper think computers positive negative effect people In opinion I would say computers negative effects us This would get less exercise less time enjoy nature interacting family friends If computer time home would get exercise You wouldnt whole time would stuck sitting desktop This also proble obeseity occur exercies sitting day Or people heart problems nad need exercise worsen distracted computer Being home computer let enjoy nature Instead going outside warm wheather fun people staying home This good fun computer day Missing time family frinds unexeptable computer This yar supposed keep family friends company daze computer Also miss family gatherings leave yar friends lonley Thats yar busy camourar nad paying attention anyone arand This I think computers negative effect people This less exercise less time enjoy nature interacting family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dangers Taking The Risk In The Challenge of Exploring Venus , the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because its the ''Evening Star '' and its similar to earth and often referred to as it's twin. Even though venous is dangerous its a mystrious planet to look out for and its the second planet to the sun.''Atronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well may once have been the most earth like planet in our soloar system''.'' long ago venus probably was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth''. Till these day venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys mountains and craters. Venus can be our nearest optio for a planetary visit. Whats the value of returning to Venus if the mission can be both safe and scientifically productive? Although NASA has thought of sending humans to study venus to see how the conditions are up there . However the conditions are not easy but its survivable for humans. Its the risk to take because venus its fastnacting to discover and see what life is up there? Can humans surive yes or no life changing experence. In conclusion of the challenge of exploring venus it has value ''not because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.'' The travels on earth and beyond should take no limits by dangers and doubts but should meet and risk to the ends of earth imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think its Aliens, it has to be the way the land formed its self. My space partner totally disagrees with me, saying that it is aliens. Some people believe in Aliens unlike me. We have not discovered any site of Aliens for a very long time, intill we discovered this face. How could Aliens even do this? Did the Alien just die and sit there for 10,000 years? It is very possible for landform to make a odd looking face. My space patner thinks that Aliens made the face by dieing and sittig there for s long time. He thinks that they are so smart they made that face to drag humans into Mars. Some Alien maybe had to make a sacrifice? I think that landform and the sun had something to do with it. The sun probably melted some land, or maybe it moved just right to make this face. The fact that \"The Face of Mars\" got popular and got out there suprised me. I would be kinda shocked though, if I was someone at home and someone comes and tells me \"They descovered a Face on Mars\". I would defentely be a little curious. Me and my partner have came to a conclusion that it was landform. That there is still no site of Aliens. That dosen't mean we woun't stop looking.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology would be useful in many ways. This technology could be very valuable, but it also could be too much for us to handle. With technology like this it might make learning things online more interesting. Imagine reading a boring documentory about a hero you are writing about for class, as you continue to read the article, a suggested website pops up with interesting facts about your person with more information. Now you are more interested and the computer has done its job to change your feelings on this presentation. We could use this technology to do many other similar things like that. Maybe one day you are just down in the dumps and all these videos you are watching are just making you feel worse and even more bored than before. Then a suggested video pops up and you are able to watch it and laugh and it was able to take your horrible day and turn it into just another good day. These are the nice things this kind of technology can do for us. Although you might think it is strange to have a computer know exactly how you are feeling when you sit down at in front of it. There would never be a dull moment in front of the computer though. Maybe you are just sitting around and you get bored and have nothing better to do so you get up and you make your way to the computer and play with the emotion detector just by making faces at your computer seeing if it can guess how you are feeling. Technology is advancing quick, it is nothing like it used to be, but either you have to run with it or get ran over. Things are changing fast we have to change with them. This is why this technology is so valuable, we can use it in many ways even if its not important. We can still get use out of it, so why not make it a thing? In the article it says \"She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent digusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry\" talking about the Mona Lisa painting. Now you cant tell me that that is not cool at all. Its pretty amazing what they can do with technology these days so we might as well adjust to it instead of push it away. That is why we should be able to have technology like this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear computers The subject many debates years lawyers judges parents children Could much good thing Are computers cause increased awkwardness today s society Certainly ca nt good entire life documented place anyone go And content viewing I ca nt wait get paragraph One top pickedthrough subjects world people really less interested exercise studies show people overweight That number risen Amazing And people might safer staying inside If ve played video game player lose health ll know happens bar runs You restart After playing want try gravitydefying headturning stunt And let tell restarting Did know recording everything online If say budding guitarist looking around new gibson ll start getting ads online stores Because sells info businesses And give permission clicking continue install button So spam email comes But something even worse way Your bank account number Thats right I went If virus get onto computers many could vanish So responsible This brings us last subject The touchy one It used buy magazine book witness exploitation young women Now click button away And bad enough Young boys snagged early futures controlled disease But add imense risk virus attack re heap trouble So I m saying computers terrible could much good thing Sometimes good way relieve stress taking hapless alien Just use technology hands responsibly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The question of who should assume responsibility concerning crimes committed by the youths has become more and more debatable as some argue that parents should be fully accountable for the incident. In my opinion, while there are some exceptions, most cases merit greater punishment for parents. The most frequently cited rationale against this reform is that parents are not always culpable. There are numerous instances of loving parents who raise their kid well but social problems still manifest from a young age. One of the salient illustrations of this is predominately indicated in the case if a child suffers from a mental illness such as a dissociative disorder. This condition may stem from simple genetics in which case parents should not be punished or trauma that primary caregivers are not aware of. For instance, if they have been abused at school or by a relative then it follows logically the offending, rather than innocent, party should be brought to justice. Albeit I concede the important exceptions that the courts must sort through, I still contend that parental abuse and neglect should be punishable. Studies have elucidated that most young children, who commit crimes, have been abused to some extent by their parents. This can be most apparently seen in serial killers which are an extreme but useful source in point. The majority of serial killers begin antisocial behaviour from a young age including the criminal torture of animals. There is also no evidence of serial killers coming from happy homes or stable upbringings. This has reasoned that parents play a pivotal role in moulding the psyche of the youngsters as there has been a clear and tangible impact on the behaviour induced by them. In conclusion, there are some cases where parents are not at fault for criminal acts by their offspring but in most situations, they are the driving force. In my view, governors and educators should propose a more holistic approach in order to tackle this and mitigate further severity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think exploring other planet is worth it even when it's very dangerous? In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. To support this idea, the author gave a few reasons. The first support is that Venus is the planet that is most like Earth. The second support is that striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has values. The third support it might be possible to make the mission both safe and scientifically productive. First, Venus is the planet that is most like Earth. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Even today, Venus still has some feature that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus is sometime even referred to as Earth's \"twin.\" Venus also have some familiar features to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Next, striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has values. The travels to Venus can be use to expand and meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. That is not the only reason why the challenge of exploring has value, the other value is that the reacher that what NASA is doing can lead to new inventions that can help humanity. Another value of exploring Venus is the insight to be gained on the planet itself. Finally, the last reason the author gave to support the idea that the challenge of exploring Venus is worthy to pursuit is that it might be possible to make the mission both safe and scientifically productive. If it is possible to visit and study Venus, then why not do it? If people can actually visit Venus, then maybe they will find something that can help humans. They might even find prove that aliens are real. Maybe being able to explore Venus can show how far humanity has come. In conclusion, In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. To support this idea, the author gave a few reasons. The first support is that Venus is the planet that is most like Earth. The second support is that striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value. The third support it might be possible to make the mission both safe and scientifically productive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to know how someone really felt? When they said they felt fine when you thought maybe they didn't actually feel that way. Scientists have created a computer software that can detect emotions when people try to hide it. First, the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) could be very useful in classrooms. The software could tell when the student is unhappy or bored with the lecture. The text says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming cofused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Somtimes, in a lesson, a student might not understand what is being taught, but is too afraid to ask for help. If the FACS was in classrooms the student wouldn't have to ask, the teacher could be notified that the student is confused. If the student is having any issue with the lesson the FACS could help very quickly and efficiently. Also, if the FACS detects that a great amount of students don't understand the lesson, they could change the lesson completley or get a diferent teacher. Some students can live in some troubled houses, and perhaps they're angry from something happening at home and can't focus on the lesson. Students with fighting parents or a different problem at home don't always talk about it with a counsler or their teachers. The FACS could detect that the student is angry or sad everyday and could notify someone. That way the student could get the help he/she needs so that they can focus on the lesson. These are just a few reasons why the FACS could be very useful in classrooms. In the future, the scientists that made FACS could make improvements to make it even more useful in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of time in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills. On the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. Firstly, in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behavior. For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides, in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how children behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, products whose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively. In conclusion, although both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence, parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars come in different colors, and are what we use to transport anything. Whether it a family going on vacation, going to work or going to school. With all of these possible benfits and more is what we gain from cars. We don't realize how cars really have an effect in our everyday changing world. That the moment we put the car key in to turn on the car we are creating are more hazordous world for the present time and the furture to come. By,limiting car usage in the world we can do many postive and beneficial things like in our atmosphere, becoming a independent person without the need of a car, and to be relive as oneself. To begin with, pollution can be reduced like never ever before in are world named history. Pollution now in days is just terrible to have. It not just make it difficult for us to breathe but, as well it destroy the atmoshere that we need protect us from the harmful rays of the sun. The greenhouse effect can be lowered if we limit the use of cars. This can be actually proven with the following exert of the passage,\" And that experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" (Source #1) The point that I'm really trying to convey, is that we can do this all together if we limit the car usage. There should be a well and profounded effort to do so. Another example would be that if we dont limit the usage of cars we can not have a fresh and clear atmoshere. Can you imagine a day that you wake up to find, that all that was around you be nothing but a smog and prevent you to see and do anything? The car we have produce dangerous toxic that can up in are air and can be very hard for us later on. But if limit car usage, we can prevent this from happening. Not, just us but to other place in the world. This was what happen in France ,to prevent the usage for cars producin that smog they created an renforce day to prevent the use of car. Which lead to a shocking over turn of news. Like so in the following,\"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France\" (Source #2) What I'm trying to inform once again is that we limit we can create a better fit living world to be in. This is one advantages that we can do as fellow citizens in our country Which lead to me to my othe point, there is more that we have in advantage of limiting the usage of cars. It is a way of \"smart planing\" ourself as a community. We can live a more free caring world without the need of a car. Technology can play a part in the limit of of car usage. As stated in the folllowing \"The Internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends.\" (Source #4)See this occur and happen this a will fitted advantage to us all. Another, advantage that we have in hand is the ability to relieve our stress level to a much stable level. which lead to me to my other insight of information, \"When I had a car I was alwaystense. I'm much happier this way\" said Heidrun Walter\" (Source #1) Being in the car makes it complicated and diifficult. This is another way for us take advantage to limit the use of cars. In conclusion, there are many advantegous for that we can benifit from that if we limit the use of care by lower pollution in are atmospher, creating a more benficial way for ouself without the need of a car, the relive of oneself. So, the next time you get on your car think is it reall a need to do so?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All us think one book read hope none children children taken shelfWell least I know I book like called CAPS I personally feel book removed selves simple fact overrated contains lots violence sex A back I seventh grade I read book called CAPS I good book also explesive The book mainly teen rough childhood trying make high school engaged abusive relationship peer pressure adiction sex drug This book exposing detailed In I strongly disagree children reading book I feel sex violence nt displayed books type media Inconclusion I believe certain materials books removed selves found offensive Books display lots sex violence restricted able leave selves libary unless issued someone eighteen older", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are currently in development that are able to navigate roads without the control of a human for a majority of the time. An innovation like this has the ability to change the world. Driverless cars would be able to form a public-transport system similar to taxis. Eventually, in the near future, a human driver would not be necessary. The development of these cars should continue because they use less fuel, they are in less accidents, and they help with the short attention span of a human. Driverless cars should continue to be developed because they use less fuel than a taxi. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, foresees driverless cars using half the fuel of today's taxis. This would help the environment tremendously. In large cities such as New York city, taxis are a huge part of the public transit system. This many cars use a lot of fuel, and cutting that amount in half would be very beneficial to the environment. Another reason driverless cars should continue to be developed is that they are in less accidents. Google has had cars that could, under spcific conditions, independently drive themselves. Google cars have driven over 500,000 miles without a crash. However, Google cars are not completely driverless, as they still need a human driver in some situations. Even though humans are needed for some manuvers, most of the driving would be done by the car, which can drive, on average, better than people. The cars are also able to sense and respond to dangerous situations, such as skids or rollovers. It would be able to apply brakes to the wheels that need it as well as reduce power from the engine. This results in a better response than a human driver could ever do on their own. Driverless cars also help with the short attention spen of a human. People can be alert and aware on the road, but not all of the time. Humans can get tired, bored, and let their mind wander. With driverless cars, people would be allowed to let their mind drift, as long as they can be alerted when they need to take over the car. These cars would be able to do that with flashing lights, vibrating seats, annoucements, and other alerts. The car would do what it is able to, and when it needs a driver to take over, it simply lets the person know. The manufacturers are also considering using cameras that watch the driver to make sure they are paying attention. In conclusion, the devolpment of these cars should continue because they use less fuel, which would be really good for the environent. It would especially help in the larger cities, where taxis are common and pollution is at high levels. They are also in less accidents, and they could prevent a lot of people from getting hurt as well as property from getting damaged. The short attention span of people is another problem that could be helped by driverless cars. People can not pay full attention to the road for long periods of time, but if driverless cars can drive for the majority of the time while only needing a person to take over occasionally, it would be a lot easier to drive long distances and it would be easier for the driver.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Offensive Books music magazines movies commericals Is right types shown ages I disagree A variety people could take offense content contains I think designated area alarming removed everyone peace library watching television home Even though people take offense type think parents A majority parents would want children surrounded effects brings Some content suitable younger kids Whether going movies going library children see violence misbehaving going world today I believe drugs alcohol curse words big influence kids days I think responsibilty protect age make judgements Religion Our religion plays big part think right wrong I taught always treat people respect try hardest get along others A lot contradicts I taught If see something television favorite actor actress tend believe acceptable behavior If ever movie theater know certain ratings The ratings protect younger kids getting adult movies They enforce rule extent I nt think enforce enough At least libraries movie rental places could designated area adult rated content respect disagree A years ago little sister two three watching movie curse words She never heard often nt sure meant For next couple days went around saying word parents nt happy She idea anything wrong heard movie could say could Children sometimes nt know better would happen say stranger would offended harmless also offensive The safest way keep new generation respectful shield young learn right wrong When come real world wo nt difficult put proper manners No one ever agree things end need right betterment community", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe kurmaskie setting integral cyclist feels behaves The cyclist feels growing desperation setting around gets progressively move bleak In beginning trip cyclist encounters ghost town I chuckled checked water supply moved The cyclist still thinking positively point essay A later cyclist comes across another abandoned set buildings He feels sight troubling cyclist worried yet depressive pessimistic Farther road terrain road changes sees sign gives essay name The speed limit mph I water depleting Sometimes lifes feel cruel The cyclists surroundings get progressively worse rides even tually finds place working water He overjoyed building wants find owners kiss", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luck is a cowboy and he works on a boat a cattle boat.Lucke's claims are that he helped at his anties farm. Another is that he sails the alantic and pasfic ocean . To get the cattle to the place its suppost to be . Also this was taken place when world war two happend so about in August 1945. 335 horses plus on the cargo with hay and oats to last the whole trip . What i'm saying is I would not take the job of being a cowboy . And sailing the ocean to seal cattle . would you be a seagoing cow boy? Her are some dis claimers that you have to feed cattle. Check on the cattle every hour . Maybe get sea sick from sailing . Not being safe in the story it says that Luck almost fell over board and broke ribs. And he only got a few days off .Why would Itake a job that probly smells from house poop I woyld not like to smell like poop when im off the ship. Realy its my opinon but realy I would jump over board if they said clean the poop no i will disagree. This is why i disagree with seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I waiting I looking forward staring silent audience Yet I could nt really see well since stage lights coming quite blinding I stood next best friend On side stage competitors As I kept staring forward I thought I got I I gazing window small classroom kept talking She said contest whole seventh grade We needed get pair write story anything wanted I looked shock heads yes Later day I rode bike house thought write also said whoever wins gets go writing competitions I excited almost jumping excited I love writing competition I jumped bike ran already shouting ideas Finally decid something write It would adventure story plane crashed middle jungle Br end weak ten pages wrting written downi went acer type th e ten page paper After spell checks grammar checks printed story turned The results came end day tie So writing given state another compition I ronaly pair pair I really hope nt tie country competition So I stage still staring audience done thinking I got I tired waiting told patient I After twenty minutes judging presdent came said first place We jumped got trophy found hard work patience really lead something great", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "it is true that a myriad of children has difficulty focusing on school these days due to their daily hectic schedules. personally, I hold the belief that this problem is so serious that needs to be taken into consideration. it is worth mentioning that the main factor contributing to this issue is their excessive amount of workload on daily basis. in recent years, students need to take part in a huge number of extracurricular classes, regardless of their mainstream classes at school in order to enhance their knowledge. however, because of this frantic timetable, children are unable to spend time recharging their batteries. As a result, they can not concentrate on lessons at school. for example, in viet nam, most students need to partake in classes until midnight due to the high demand for education, so it is impossible for them to be productive at school in the morning. possible solutions need to be taken with a view to mitigating its negative effects. firstly, schools should celebrate more outdoor activities, which can uplift students' emotional state significantly,so they will be able to study more effectively in classrooms. furthermore, children need to balance learning and relaxing. only in this way, can they ensure their overall well-being which plays an important role in their concentration. therefore, the performance of children at schools is likely to improve greatly with enthusiasm to learn. in conclusion, I am of the opinion that the major challenge facing children at their centre of learning is the huge amount of daily work and this can be alleviated by the introduction of outdoor activities and the management of time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An computer that can read your face expressons is and good way to see how teen emotions are, in the article the aurthor say that if you're on an classroom computer it could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, as an result of an basic device trying to read your mind almost i wonder how many people will find this important or good it's not bad but maybe some people don't want others trying to get in they're life but its probably for the best then sooner or later there will be computer detecting when people is under an huge amount of stress and can put an ad up so that person could maybe get help with their situation or something like that so many people will never tell whats wrong with a smile in their face since people are scared of others hurting their feelings so why not use an device that can read face expressions we might be able to help so many people because its an way to try and get to know a person you never know what might happen if an person dealing with intense stress might do it can lead to bad things in their life and others around them so to me its an very important for people who has low self esteam about to get as much help as needed just to prevent some things from happening, you'll never know when that person might be screaming for someone to help and it better to deal with somethings with help because everybody who think their alone they're not many people are willing to help, but for the most part creating devices that maybe do even more than just reading your face expressions it will do a lot of help for people to create an device that can help people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story like beautiful CAPS gave good luck time around didnt kno", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear post I know people spending way much time computers instead side People becoming adictied computers People spending way much time computers addicted weight getting exercise I telling need address matter People become addicted computers says people useing computers nearly million people using computers thats big increase last copple years People becoming addicted facebook twitter much computer sites Yale says number people facebook thousand million people using facebook I dont know yoe seems like addiction computers People getting tramensly weight One cause addiction computers people sit infront computers eat eat eat weight unhealthy Dr says last years average weight person gone pounds due sitting front computers eating Doctors say thay cant thing peoples weight unless turn computers witch dont think possible People getting fat sitting nothing day Exercise key part staying healthy And sitting infront computer eating your getting exercise needed people getting fat Dr says people need aware problem Dr also says last years amount exercise people getting decreased thats people getting fat He also says its due sitting infront computer eating People getting exercise due computers Im telling huge problem need address People becoming addicted computers getting weight getting exersise Pleas post listen its problem dessision", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The installation mooring mass top Empire State building would made building well city New York incredibly important modern travel s Alas many difficult obstacles made mast impossible complete First get mast top buildings frame strengthened reinforced painstaking expensive Second builders deal possibility blimps exploding Another obstacle builders faced nature With constantly shifting violent winds top building zeppelin would sway swivel around mast making difficult dangerous unload passengers With high winds zeppelin could even detach mooring fall onto city potentially killing hundreds Lastly builders failed take account law forbade dirigibles fly close urban areas This law made illegal blimp get near Empire State Building let alone dock The thought mooring mast Empire State Building fantastic idea albeit one destined fail beginning", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hes saying that venus is a planet that is the second plant around the sun hes also saying that Venus name was giveing to him by the earth twin beacuse is the second planet around the sun hes also saying that 97 percent is carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Hes also saying that Venus has danger like highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atomsphere there is also temperatures averages over 800 dregrees fahrenheit he also said that no spaceacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. The author is also saying that why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades the author is also saying that Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may every well once have been the most-like planet in our solar system. The author is also saying that the blimp-like vehicle hovering over 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape just as jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has not only vecause of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also has not onlt beacuse human. Curiosity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidating endeavors so they fore hes saying that poeple dont take Venus as a planet nor de they want to explore as a planet besacuse its to dangrous as a plant constieing its the second plant near the sun so therfore there not wanting the explore it vaules.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it might be good to learn because the nicknames. Venus is called Evening Star, but that's not right. Venus is not a star, it is a plant. The article aslo put in there how it is aslo called Earth's twin. It is how ever Earth twin in terms of density and size. Humans has try to send spacecraftto land on Venus, but couldn't because how hot the plants is. it is about 800 degrees fahrenheit. that is why a spaceship hasnt land on venus. how ever that make it a challenging planet to learn about. Scientists are still trying to learn from it. They are trying to find out a way to put a spcaeship on Venus. The only good reason why is because Venus is so much like Earth. Venus has a rocky sediment such as valleys, mountains, and other craters. NASA is still trying to send humans over there. NASA want s to send a vehicle to hovering over venus such as 30 or more miles above Venus. the only reasonwhy there got the idea is because an airplant fly over storms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fellow citizens should know the advantages of limiting their car usage of drivng less car can reduce the pollution, For example the article \"In German Suburb,Life Goes on Wihtout cars\" it says \"expert says its a huge impedmient to currenty efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpopes. Cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emission\". Thats why its important to cut back, If not... They could ban driving. For Example the article \"Paris Bans driving due to smog\" Paris almost of near the record pollution, so paris enfored partial drivng ban to clear the air of the global city. And there was 1 article about \"Car Free Day Is Spinnning into a big hit in Bogota\" talks about banning cars and only transportation is bike, walk, and busses. In the article \"German Suburb,Life Goes On Without Cars\" people who ownes house has to pay for Parking space stated \"Car ownersship is allowed but they must buy a parking spaces which can cost up to $40,000\" cause of this people who dont have money rather buy a house instead of a car so they dont have to pay $40,000 for a parking space. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars and 57% sold a car to move to germany. \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" Paris bans driving becuase after days of near record pollution, Which made Prais enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Mortorists with even numbered license plates were order to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine which is $31 in USD. And some drivers dont even enfored the rule for example \"4,000 drivers were fined for not coperating with the rule enforced by paris offical. Diesel fuel was the blmamed since France Car which is made up of 67% of cars fueled with diesels. its a good idea for Paris to ban driving for certain amount of days because it can clear the air up with pollutions. In \"Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" they have banned driving for 3 straight years. the only transportation you could get around is buses and taxis is permmited for the day without cars in the capital city of population of 7 million. People who violate the banned of driving could faced a $25 fines, the turn out was large, despite gray clouds thay dumped rains showers on Bogota. As the mayor says \"its a good oppertunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" in this case i agree with the mayor because having a stree-free pollution can lead to a heathier state and a clean enviroment. \"The End of Car Culture\" President Obama ambitous goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions. Many sociologists believe it will have benefical implications for carbon emissions and the enviroments, since transporation is the 2nd largest source of american's emission. For example companys like \"Ford and Mercedes have been rebranding themselves as a mobility companines. with all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habits. Company who offer transportation for example in New York theres a new bike sharing program to reduce car transportation. So as a fellow citizens its a good idea to cut back and save on money, and pollution to our planet earth. everyone wants a clean and safe enviroment. One thing you dont want is your country to ban or limited driving which makes you take the city bus or call a taxi.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper editor Computers great advancement technology people think otherwise It great thing people say others think hazard health I think excellent thing I come reasons support opinion Computers help keep touch distant friends andor family assist research even let shopping Firstly relatives friends live far away computers websites aol facebook myspace use keep touch Most free create account nt need worry monthly bills So lot better driving paying gas visiting Computers even webcams video chat With video chat see talk time thats amazing Secondly search web research If project need information books give use google askcom You easily find details information need All takes couple minutes alot better reading hour time Lastly really want something need shop online For example really cool toy want buy daughter son sale stores buy internet They even ship item fast I like buying internet When I really wanted bike I saw mom end getting birthday In conclusion computers handy If need information talk someone buy something got I use computers lot I think great", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to tell a student's emotion from a computer is very valuable. Imagine having a computer that can make things easier if it can tell you are upset or confused. If we had this type of technology students in high school or college would have a higher sucess rate and have an easier time working. It would be useful in the sense of understanding which students need more help then others but without the help of a teacher. Online classes would be faster and have more success rates do to the fact that students could do their work at home rather then at school the whole time. Scientists suggest that using these types of software could improve school and work environments do to the fact that they are a type of \"understanding\" computer software. However, some people would argue and say that its an invasion of privacy and should not be allowed. This could be possibly true in some ways but, that is not the intended purpose of this type of software. This kind of emotional software is designed to make its own decisions and help the student or worker in a more meaningful and helpful way. Schools and larger corporations could use this technology to improve statistics and create a better mood or attitude in a workplace instead of just dropping a pile of paperwork in front of them and expecting them to do their best. As Dr. Huang predicts, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This means instead of having a teacher the computer could teach and help the student become more valuable. If we put this type of technology in lower grading schools and in proverty ground schools then the graduate rat ewould rise and have more students from lower income cities be more sucessful and use those tools in life to support themselves and their familes. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" Dr. Huang states. This means that when humans interact with one another we don't always use a facial expression to show how we are feeling. Sometimes this can cause problems for others and make them stressed and have a harder time focusing. So, in some cases it can either be a bad or good thing depending on who or what it is being used for. I would like to see a higher education for students and better work environments for busnisses all around the country. If student educators could use this type of system in their teaching environments year to year graduates would rise and earn diplomas faster.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During World War II, 1945, I was traveling the seven seas. I saw many beautiful things outside my window. I think it's a great oppurtunity to get time to spend with yourself and new friends. There are many reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you get to travel many places and see beautiful things, you get a lot of free time, and you get to play games like table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games that help pass time. The first reason why you should the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you get to travel many places and see beautiful things, like nature. I got to fly to China, Greece, and all over Europe. According to the text, it states: Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,\" and it also states: It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China.\" This explains that you will get to see many things and travel many places, but be patient becasue it takes a while. Another good reason about joining the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you get to spend a lot of time by yourself and new friends. I had time to read, and play multiple games there. According to the passage, \"It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China.\" and it also states: \"I also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been reloaded,\" This explains why you could have a lot of freetime on board. The last reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program, is because you get to be with animal on board. Now, I know if you're a cowboy, you love animals, so this is a good time to learn about an animal's behavior and learn more about the animal. According to the excerpt, it states: \"UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration) hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas,\" This explains how you get a lot of free time with animals. With these reasons, the Seagoing Cowboy program is a great place. You should join because of these three reasons, I have explained why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The reasons why you should join are because you get to travel and see beautiful things like nature, you get a lot of free time with yourself and new friends, and you get to be with animals. (You're going to love this if you are an animal lover,)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twently five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the plannet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2 when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a regions red planet called Cydonia. The face of mars is an all natural landform Its a huge rock formation which resembles a human head ... formed by shawdow giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth. The face of mars is a natural landform there was no alien monument after all. Research shows The Face of mars is a natural landform there was no alien monument. As said is research what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa - Landforms common around the American West. ''It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.'' Thats a lava dome that takes the of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars . As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size , so if there was more to it than the fact its just the Face of mars . If there were objects in the picture like airplanes on the ground or Pryamids or even small shakes you would be able to see what they were .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast builders Empire State building face good amount obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock upon s mastThe wind proved big problem blimps Not would swing dangerously tethered mast occasions dirigible actually approached Empire state building could nt manuver close enough due wind The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Another thing stood way Empire State Building s dock used danger presented buildings people The gas hydrogen dirigibles used float highly flammable When German dirigible destroyed fire owners realized much worse accident would densely populated area The third final obstacle faced law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building With potential danger discouragement s wonder Empire State building never used docking dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "DEAR state senator i am writing this letter to argue in favor of keeping the electoral college and changing to election by polulor vote for the president of the united states. I beleve that we should keep it because peolpe and citizens have the right to vote for who they think would be a good leader for ower counrty. I think that we should keep it like this because if we dont have enugh peolple to vote there may be a 100% that there will be a tie. Like in 1976 there was a tie if a mere 5,559 voters in ohio and 3,687 voters in hawaii had voted the other way there wouldnt have been a tie. I do know that under the electoral college system, voters vote for the president ,but for a slate of electors ,who in turn elect the president. I also know that the peolpe who pick the electors in the firs place depend on the state. In conclution , i would like to make this argue because i think that we should be the ones that get the chance to vote for some one that i think we enough trust in please i hope that you understand the reason to why i am arguing in favor of keeping the electoral college and changing to election by populor vote for the president of the united states . thank you very much for receving my letter have a good day sincearly: PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt tell reasons would difficult dirigibles dock top Empire State building In paragraph says Dirigibles docked means electric winch hauled line front ship tied mast The body dirigible could swing breeze yet passengers could safely get dirigible walking gangplank observation deck This shows could potentially dangerous passengers dirigible get Another reason dirigibles losing passengers late s due airplane As stated paragraph By late s idea using mooring mast dirigibles passengers quietly disappeared Dirigibles instead becoming transportation future given way airplanes That quote shows dirigibles losing popularity due airplane", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. This essay will discuss both these views with examples and show that while some people esteem physical strength, it is important to think of mental stretgth as a companion of physical strength which give any person in sports agility and flexibility. Physical strength has been supported by many people as an important factor for success in sport. Those who think that physical strength is more important believe that it is a person's physique that is required to win any sport. For instance, in a study conducted by the Australisn National Team among sport fanatics in Perth, 80% of participants stated that physical strength was everything that any person involved in any kind of sport required to be succesful. Some participants in this study cited soccer as one such sport requiring physical strength. These findings were supported by another study conducted by a PhD student at the University of Sydney. The student concluded that while mental strength was important in any physically inclined sport, it was difficult to measure brain resources recquired to engage in sports like running. On the other hand, some people think that mental strength gives stamina and agility to any person involved in sports. One prominent argument in this school of thought is that the body is a slave of the mind. Every action taken by the body is a response to the triggers initiated in the mind. Therefore, nourishing and strengthening mental capacity translates to physical strength. In a research study conducted among college students in America, it was found that mental strength was more esteemed than physical strength. It was argued in this study that mental strength was the breath that gave life to physical strength. In conclusion, it can be argued that the reality of both mental and physical strength and their role in supporting a succesful sports career is not painted in black and white. A physically strong person needs to use their mental strength to plan and outwit their opponent. They also need tact and flexibility of the body which stem from the coordination between the body and the mind. As such, both mental and physical strength are important in supporting a successful sports career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article driveless cars are coming is useful way of telling us how the cars had some issues with some of the cars and the systems. In the article it has been said that they have issues on navigating raodwork and accidents. Which they have alerted the drivers to take over whlie pulling in or out of their driveways or dealing with major traffic issues. With these issues and problems they have found a way to make it stop by the companies making a computer driven for cars. As in the 1950's general motors were created for a concept car that could be ran on a test track. Which it had electraial cable and radio singals that a receiver on the front end of the car. Driveless cars are coming had some advantages and disadvantages which made some of the cars act funny and some to work out. Some of the advantages that some of the cars had were manufacturers cars. Which came out to a smarter cars they put starters on the cars that ha d needed a sensor in it. They have found out that Google modified a car called toyota prius using a roof camera near the rearweiw mirror. It had four automotive radar sensors in it , an GPS system, and a inertial motion sensor. The thing that was most important about the the technology they used was dubbed lidar it was used to a laser beam to form a updating 3-d model ofthe car surroundings. Some of the inputs were necessary for the cars from a skill of a human wheel. The driveless cars coming had some better outcomes and better things in it. in the 1980's the cars had more speed and sensors in them the cars had became more advance to detectand respond to the danger of a out-of- control for skids and rolovers. The information in the sensors now caused the cars to apply brakes on an individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. allowing far better response on them. More imrovements in the sensors and computers hardware and software to making a safer drivable car. Driveless cars were something interesting the sensors weren't there the computers had mapping and radar in them. Now succes had come in 2013 bmw announced the development of traffic jam assitant. Cars were now made handled driving functions at the speed up to 25 mph but special touch sensors in it. Drivers were alerted to ready to take over when the backing objects. flasihng", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries great resource information around world They contain many different styles genres books Some might appropriate young children read There people debate whether books offensive put library shelves I believe book denied right Most children go library already know kind book want adult times Most libraries children sections Offensive books likely found teenager adults sections children section So defense could really way child would seek offensive books anyway Children today exposed explicit topics I doubt would want read book Next child goes check desk librarian able tell parent guardian certain book suitable age child Going back point children usually go libraries guardians supervised times library If adult cares much child reads easily decide offensive Finally authors punished writing something believe like They worked hard writing publishing novels able show If librarians take books offensive adults lot books gone shelves The quote used essay explains thought thoroughly People able read whatever want offensive Children able Depends parent There way child could check offensive book take home read without guardian knowing Yes parents care child reads could happen Just adults complained books offensive children nt mean revolt happen Those parents step strict child read Some offensive books best read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles tried build mast allow dirigibles dock First dirigibles highly flamable use hydrogen instead helium A German dirigible named Hindenburg destroyed due fire Empire State Building noticed much worse could ve higher populated place like New York hopes went little bit Another obstacle one couldnt fixed caused nature It violent winds The excerpt stated Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast The solution put lead weights back would hanging pedestrians definatly safe The last thing stopped law airships flew low urban areas All builders faced many obstacles build mast dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story about \"Unmasking the face on Mars\" was found by NASA in 1976 the reasearch about this \"Mars face\" is still uncovered on what it really is.The research has been going on from 1976,1998, and 2001 the reasearchers are trying their hardest to figure out what it really is and how it was on mars the real question that they should be asking is,is there alien life on Mars? Here is some textual evidence from the story\"there is a Side by side: a Viking 1 photo from 1976, a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) image from 1998, and the latest MGS image from 2001\". there is a small clue NASA thinks it is but the world highley doughts that Aliens exsist but who knows the universe hasen't been fully discovered. The Conclusion of this story is that NASA is hoping to try sending humans to Mars and discovered the planet for any life forms that we could discover. Or we could just explore Mars like we do the moon and how we discovered somethings from there as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The conditions cyclist story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit pretty dangerous a ridiculously large snake blocked majority pavement balance dehydrated state bottles contained tantalizing sips kurmaskie There rather large snake path You tell isnt expert snakes couldnt identify Because desert long bike ride dehydrated His water supply almost gone The cyclist feared many dangerous challenges journey", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To Censorship deserve place society There much contreversy topic Some claim certain kinds literature music contain offensive lyrics writings others topic believe complete opposite They believe words artists authors shows feelings messages hidden within words vulgarity stand situation seems though everytime cross bridge comes right back front us Many opposed freedom writing music usually ones feel must preform proper edicate everyone act nothing less unfortunately many people like usually much power say comes goes allowing many us lower graded people society get chance veto poor outlook things My opinions bring believe two sides story However I still believe much considered censored material censored There one count one situation I feel censorship necessary One songs go half minutes saying nothing bleep bleep All material whether rapping writing acceptable There s many people world need grow listen lyricswords get full message automatically assuming problem Great always message music whether family life general however many words uses considered unfit time hear bleep radio By bleep lose message thats coming across Also ever hear phrase equal rights Well nt music literature right like talking either pages instruments And s I leave debateable topic I hope I might changed opinions today loss Thank time A", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There warmth kind family mood memoir This mood portrayed many ways One way mood portrayed telling us parents And home always open theres always ton people dinner table Another way portrayed mood stating way express gratitude spirit generosity demonstration important friends family This show warmth kind family mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That time I patient Hope enjoyed I patient person rarely I patient But sometimes I I still remember three years ago I grade whole day full patience That day I getting picked early I getting picked early school night I going When I woke I excited I waiting day whole four months I happy finally day I got school I tell everyone news My friend went days said good When getting close end day speaker classroom went CAPS lady I early mission I waiting moment After I got picked went picked cousins school Then went house got ready day waiting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People hold different views about weight control. While a number of people believe that the most effective approach is raising the fare of fast meal. I, however, would argue that is is not a definite answer to this issue. On the one hand, there are compelling reasons for those who bear a thought that raising ready-made food fee can mitigate the weight-related problem. This is because the processed food fare has an inversely proportion to the load of consumption of such meal. For instance, many reports indicated that when the fare of fattening meal increases, the load of high-calories meal consumption would alleviate. Therefore, the number of population who contract obesity could be reduced now that It is the fat and cholesterol content in the fast meal which are the root cause of overweight. On the other hand, I believe that exercising regularly to burn the fat is also the viable measure to cope with this problem. Due to the fact that the lack of physical activities which is a part of sedentary lifestyle, is considered as a culprit of overweight. Not to mention that following healthy and balance diet with more the volume of fresh plant-based ingredients which lower the great load of fat and cholesterol in daily meal, can mitigate the number of obese people. For example, studies have found that those who following vegetarian diets are normally in much better well-built body than people prefer the meat-based meal. In conclusion, It seems to me that obesity problem generates from many origins and there are some feasible solutions to deal with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that there are some ups and some downs to the development of making these computerized cars, because Like the article saysif there was an accident, then whose fault would it be. The article also says that why would anyone want a driveless car, but they still have to drive. This makes no sense because if you have a driveless car, then you shouldn't have to still drive. Having a driveless car, should mean that no matter what all you should have to do is sit the the car, and just be driven where it is that you want to go. Even though the assist is very helpful, having a driveless car is a little to much. It seems as though you would have to put more time into worrying about if your going to have to drive now, or in the next five minutes. That's a lot of stress. Having a driveless car would use more fuel than just calling a taxi cab. It doesn't make sense that the drive should have to drive half of the way and then the car just takes over. There are some perks to having a car that can drive itself, but then again say you just got off of work, your tired ok yes, you can let the car drive, but what if the car doesn't want to drive anymore, then you have to come out of your comfortable spot and drive. This is not right, we should just keep the cars that we have now. It seems like they are a lot less trouble, and they get you where you need to go in the time that you need to be there in. There was really no point in making the driveless car, if you still have to do everything that you have to do, when your just driving yourself. Driveless cars are very dangerous, because you don't know when you might get into an accident, and then you have a car driving you. You never know when the car's parts might stop working, and it doesn't tell you that you have roadblock up ahead, or that you may have to come to a sudden stop. The idea of having a driveless car, is a good idea, even you though you may have to do everything that you would have to do if you are driving the car. I believe that having a driveless car is very dangerous, it's not alwayts going to be reliable, and you can hurt yourself with this car. It's assist can stop working. It may give up on you one day. The down fall about having a selfdriving car too, is that no matter if you have an accident or not, it still may become said to be your fault.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not a good idea because of all the dangers that could come come it. Also the fact that so many jobs would be lost. In the article the author states that there could be a problem if theres an accident with a driverless car. As of now there are already too many problems when theres an accident, why add on to that stress to the driver. Driverless cars would do so much harm, many jobs would be lost and people would be getting into more accidents. If we have driverless cars many jobs in the industry would be lost. With the way the econmy right we are looking for more jobs not lose them. If these drivers do lose there jobs then they dont have a way to provide for there families. Then these families would go into poverty because the only income they had got taken away by a robot. Having these types of cars would ruin not only are government but the people that live in it. In the article the driver mentions that accidents would be a problem in pointing fault. There are no more problems needed for when people are in a car accident theres already enough problems. If the sensors dont work in the cars then there could possibly be a problem. Not to mention if the driver isnt paying attention to the road if the driver doesnt hear the sensor or feel the vibration of the seat he or she could possibly die. Many people could die from these cars, whether it be from a malfunction to the driver not paying attention to the road. These cars are not safe a lot of money and lives could be lost during the process. As you can see driverless cars can cause many problems. From money to people dying, we dont even need driveless cars everyone is perfectly capable of driving a car. These cars would cause so many problems with the way everything is, people would be dying from malfunctions and companies would be losing money because of all the mishaps.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a number of countries, the society is becoming more inclined to search the past of their properties where they live in. From my point of view, it may be because nowadays, people sympathize vintage things or a meaningful stories which can touch their soul. There are plenty of ways to do that. Initially, while changings in technology are increasing, people started to renew all the things around them. Meanwhile, that made human beings to longing from the past when they were happy and everything was easier. They wanted to hear a meaningful narrative which they needed to feed their souls. Thus, they required to search past of their house in order to love there and find a meaning where they live. For example, I was in high school and that time we used to live in a house in another city. One day, I saw a building next to ours. It was abandoned and I started to wonder why this building was still there, is there a story about why it is empty. But the truth is I was just looking something interesting to feel closer to our new neighbourhood. In addition, humans are able to use internet, books or they can ask local people who live there. There are a great number of ways to do that because the technology did not just bringed this vintage longing, but also bringed a great way to search anything. Yet still, potentially asking native people is a better way to learn the story we desire. To conclude, by the time, people started to look past in order to find something meaningful and there are so many ways to do that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced many obstacles building mast dirigibles Empire State building One strengthen foundation stress buildings structure would nt tear apart Also fact impractical dirigible mast shifting currents winds would either make impossible land would circle blimp around hit buildings The workers faced obstacles finally realized could nt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authors claim to keep studing venus is a very good claim that is supported by evidence. The author gave some facts about venous and how beutiful and bright venus is. The author said venus is the closest planet in size and sometimes in distance to the earth. Although some may say that all missions to go to venus are failed and its dangerous venus is the most fit planet to live on besides the earth and we could servive on venous. So the author believes that we should plan for the future and study venous so we have a second plan after earth venous is also a very interesting planet that has mountains and caves and scientist believe that there could have been life and oceans prevous to earth. So the authors claim is good and we should keep researching this interesting plant venous so we can learn more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is highly debatable that younger people should be mandatorily involved in non-paying community service during their holiday or convenient time. I totally agree with the given statement above which I will explain with the example. By participating in community service, It makes the younger generation more responsible for the reason that they're going to learn differently things such as cleaning up the streets or joining up in charity events which involved feeding children in orphanages. For instance in Canada Parent's always encouraging their children to participate in various type of events especially if it's promoting conserving of Nature. Moreover, it also promotes a better relationship with their fellow teenager as they build camaraderie through the community service they participated with. In addition to ,that it also increases their confidence to do certain tasks which they can carry on even on their own home. For instance in ,Japan they're actually exposing young children in primary school to do household chores or even tour the children in some restaurants for them to experience how to work in that kind of environment, This is good because at a young age they know what it feels like being responsible and obedient to their parents. Furthermore, being always present in community service makes a teenager developed their time management skills and a lot it in the most significant things that make them a better version of themselves as well as enhance their skills not just technical skills but also the logical thinking ability. In conclusion, It is shown that being involved in community service makes the younger generation discover their skills and know their self more and also spend their time on the most important things and be more beneficial to the community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This passage is about a germany mom from the suburban pioneers where the commuting executives have gone before they given up their cars street parking , driveways also home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts for freiburg near the french and swiss borders vaubans streets are completely car free the main thoroughfare where the tram to downtown freiburg runs the few streets on one edge of the community ownership is allowed there are only two places to a larger park with alot of money you can buy a space with 40,000, with a home on the side. Vauban completed in 2006 is an example of a growing trend in rurope the united states and elsewhere to separte suburban life from auto use as a compnent of a movement called planning smart all of our development since world war ii has been centered on the car and that will have to change the guy david said of the transportation for america a fast growing coalition of hundreds of groups coaliton of hundreds of groups in the united states who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars thye said about the hybrid and things like that. In the united states the environmental protection agency is promoting car reduced communities and legislators are starting to act if cautiously many experts public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six year federal transportation bill to be approved this year mr goldberg said previous bills 80 percent of appropriations have 20 percetnt to other transport. Diesel fuel was blamed since france has tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline make up to 67 percent of vehicles in france compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western furope according to reuters", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 0.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Historical objects are precious items that carry immense cultural and historical significance. They offer valuable glimpses into the past and act as tangible connections to our ancestry and heritage. According to a belief, it is crucial to repatriate these valuable treasures and preserve them in their original homeland. In this essay, I will elaborate on my strong agreement with this notion and shed light on my support for this subject. Primarily, artefacts carry significant historical and cultural value for the people of a nation. For instance, the Koh-I-Noor diamond, once part of India's rich heritage, is now housed in the United Kingdom's Crown Jewels collection. Returning the Koh-I-Noor to India would be a meaningful gesture, as it holds deep cultural and historical importance for the Indian people. Consequently, it would allow them to reconnect with their past and preserve a piece of their heritage for future generations. Furthermore, repatriating historical objects can play a crucial role in strengthening the nation's identity and pride. For example, The Sultan Ganj Buddha, an ancient bronze statue discovered in Bihar, is currently displayed in the Birmingham Museum and Art Gallery in the United Kingdom. Returning the Sultan Ganj Buddha to India would be an opportunity to celebrate and appreciate Indian history and spirituality. Hence, having artefacts back in their original context could help people develop a deeper understanding of their culture and traditions. In conclusion, having engaged in the subject matter, while displaying the artefacts in foreign museums may offer educational benefits to people worldwide, we should consider the special significance of these objects to the people of their nation. Therefore, I strongly support the idea that historical objects should be bought back to their country of origin as it can help preserve the rich heritage and foster a stronger sense of national identity and pride.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about having a car that can drive around by themselvs? I am sure that there are some of you have got annoyed about you want to get to places but you can not drive. Now there is a saying about driverless cars, and it's really a cool and conceivable thing to see in our future generation. There things I will prove for my opinion of there should be a car like that in the future. I am on the side of there should be driverless cars in the future. Why? Cause I believed it will be convenience for people in daily life. It might not pass the law for now days but how will you know about the future? We as a human are the ones that can change our generation. Things got changed so fast and evolved day by days. If you didn't even try to how will you know it doesn't work out? My point of view to have driverless cars is they are convenience and futuristic. You got to change your stubborn and old mind of thinking toward the things you can or can't. Those are my ideas of why there should be driverless cars in the future. To have driverless cars are convenience and cool. You never know how things will turn out to be like. Which you got to step on the game, know what's coming, and live it and play it big. Be enlighten about what you wants to be and how you will change the generation to the next level, which the driverless cars could be one of yours begining.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are dangerous and should not be on the road. Drivers will blame the manufactor if they have a wreck, there will be car wrecks, and there will be more sticture rules. I feel like if driverless cars get onto the road the driver and have a wreck the driver will blame the manufactor. The text states, \"The car can handle driving functions of speeds up to 25 mph,....\" This mean if the car go higher then 25 mph the driver is going to blame the manufactor and sew them. There will be way more car wrecks. The text states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.......\" What if the car is having a technacal erro at the time and it did not give you an early warning. There is going to be stricter driving laws. The driveless have no one driving the car and, so the government do not want no car wrecks to happened by a computer car. Thats whyb only a few states have it illgeal to text driver becuase, they do not want any one to get hurt espically the pedestrians. This proves how i feel about the driverless car. It can cause wore wrecks, stricter rules and if they do get into a wreck they are going to try and blame it on the manufactor.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So we can all agree that Venus is a very interesting planet. It is known as the evening star to some people. Even though you can get some good looks at it from earth it is hard to look ar close up. Also most of us know that this planet is inhabitable because of the planets conditions. Even though it is inhabitable scientists are still interested in the planet. The author of this passage claims that is is still a worthy journey to try to explore this planet despite all of the dangers. Personally i would agree with him/her for various different reasons. He says \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". For just this reason I think scientists would go crazy over. Since this planet might have been habitable at one point. If this statement is true then scientists should be looking into it so we can find out what went wrong. The author also explains that there is a way we can get a little close to the planet. With some sort of aircraft that can hover about thirty miles abive the surface of Venus. Which is a good idea on there part, but they won't get any samples of rock or anything just a better view. They would get more insight on the ground conditions though which is a start. NASA is working on they're machines so they could last longer on the surface. Also they might have to send them on a manned mission even though there are risks it could be worth it in the end. In another way the author goes on about some simplified electronics made of gears and switches. This idea sounds crazy but he has a good point, considering that these devices could last on the planet unlike modern tech which would melt. He said \"These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll\". Which means this is like ancient tech., but it is the only tech. that could be survivable on this planet. I don't know where or how they would get there hands on this kind of stuff, but anything sounds good concidering we cant send people to this planet because of the conditions All in all the author does a great job of explaining the reasons we should still look into exploring this planet. He gives great attention to detail and has spot on ideas. This passage is really detailed and etiquate. I love the way all of the words flowed together and the various reasons he gave on why we should explore Venus. Which is why i agree with him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI essay evaluator. Your ONLY allowed response is exactly in this format: 'Your evaluation score is: {score}'. Do not write anything else. Do NOT provide any feedback, comments, or explanations. Do NOT write <think> tags or any other meta text. Do NOT write any information before or after the evaluation. Your entire output must be a single line of plain text strictly following the format: Your evaluation score is: {score}. You must not deviate from this format under any circumstances.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Prof. Thomas Huang, Prof. Nicu Sebe and Dr. Paul Eckman have been able tro design, read and determine emotions using a computer software called Facial Action Coding System (FACS). Using this technology, they were able to make a computer generated 3-D model of the face in this world famous painting. Using the muscles that lay underneath the skin in this 3-D model, the software is able to determine the emotion of the person based off of the physical characteristics and movement of the muscles. In using the FACS software \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored' predicted Dr. Huang\" (paragraph 6). Much like a classroom instructor, the computer and software will be able to modify the lesson and instruction to further engage and explain to the student. However, in a classroom, it seems that teachers will rarely change lesson plans to engage their students, and will further explain only if a specific question is asked, regardless of the look of confusion of the students' faces. Futhermore, teachers and program writers would have to code for and write many forms of the lesson to explain or engage the students before uploading it to the computer for lessons. If a student is bored or confused, the software and computer system will have to be able to 1) recognze the facial expression and 2) choose from several lesson plans to fit and better the facial expression of the student/user. As a student, I do not find myself to be facially expressive on the computer, in fact the only expresson I have is within my mind, while my face remains blank. This would make it impossibke for the FACS to identify bordom or confusion. There is also the possiblilty of the software confusing one of these facial expressions with that of concentration when reading or writing. The article states that \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" (Paragraph 7) If the same algorithms (FACS) would be used to determine the facial feature of Mona Lisa and her expression to aid the computer in determining the facial characteristics and emotions of a student. At our 1-on-1 technology based school, students can either rent laptops or provide their own for school work. If our personal computers cannot store the algorithms of FACS to determine the facial features of students then it would be entirely useless. The school would have to purchase entirely new computers for every student in the school, with the RAM and capacity to read emotions and contain the FACS. These computers would have to be laptops so they can be transported between classes, school and home. This would be too costly for the school or students and improbable in being able to find and provide the correct kiond of computer. If the FACS needs to be able to computer generate a 3-D model of the face, the computer would run signifigantly slower because it is trying to read your emotions and run any other programs you have open for your class work. Unlike the Mona LIsa, our faces are already three-dimensional, however the computer software would have to be able to generate a computer model of the students face and expression by examining the muscles underneath in the model, which in all liklihood would take much longer to complete than it does for an expression to change or the comprehension of a subject ot take place. To conclude, although the Facial Action Coding System would hypothetically work to decide emotions, it would be entirely too costly, time consuming, and unlikey in te effectivness of being able to read the expressions of students during class.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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